Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3671183 times)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3010 on: August 17, 2007, 12:18:25 am »
Jack said, "Pleased to meet you, ma'am,"

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3011 on: August 17, 2007, 04:02:54 am »

Jack said, "Pleased to meet you, ma'am,"
Quivering like a leaf, needed out of this jam





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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3012 on: August 18, 2007, 10:42:38 am »
Jack said, "Pleased to meet you, ma'am,"
Quivering like a leaf, needed out of this jam
They left and red-lined it to the Siesta


For how long? As long as we can ride it; ain't no reins on this one.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3013 on: August 18, 2007, 04:09:27 pm »




Jack said, "Pleased to meet you, ma'am,"
Quivering like a leaf, needed out of this jam
They left and red-lined it to the Siesta
they had a party, a sexual fiesta



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3014 on: August 18, 2007, 04:32:42 pm »

Jack said, "Pleased to meet you, ma'am,"
Quivering like a leaf, needed out of this jam
They left and red-lined it to the Siesta
they had a party, a sexual fiesta
and flesh to flesh, thier bodies did slam


Tell him when l come up to him and ask to play the record, l'm gonna say: ''Voulez-vous jouer ce disque?''
'Voulez-vous, will you kiss my dick?'
Will you play my record? One-track mind!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3015 on: August 18, 2007, 10:15:41 pm »
Jack yearned for the sweet life with his love


For how long? As long as we can ride it; ain't no reins on this one.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3016 on: August 19, 2007, 12:04:28 am »

Jack yearned for the sweet life with his love
a happier life, he couldn't think of


Tell him when l come up to him and ask to play the record, l'm gonna say: ''Voulez-vous jouer ce disque?''
'Voulez-vous, will you kiss my dick?'
Will you play my record? One-track mind!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3017 on: August 19, 2007, 06:30:35 pm »




Jack yearned for the sweet life with his love
a happier life, he couldn't think of
He plotted and planned then he proposed



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3018 on: August 19, 2007, 10:48:34 pm »
Jack yearned for the sweet life with his love
a happier life, he couldn't think of
He plotted and planned then he proposed:
Some sweet life, yet Ennis was opposed


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3019 on: August 19, 2007, 11:21:56 pm »
Jack yearned for the sweet life with his love
a happier life, he couldn't think of
He plotted and planned then he proposed:
Some sweet life, yet Ennis was opposed
thus his prayer was unanswered from above.
Six-word Stories:  ~Jack: Lightning Flat, lightning love, flat denied   ~Ennis: Open space: flat tire, tire iron?