Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3722973 times)

Offline Katie77

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3270 on: November 25, 2007, 11:18:36 pm »
The time had come, to say good-bye
Their time was over way up high
He watched him walk along the road
Not knowin' that Ennis too carried a heavy load
He kept on asking...."why oh why"....
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It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3271 on: November 25, 2007, 11:20:14 pm »
She read the card, said "coming through"
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It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3272 on: November 25, 2007, 11:49:36 pm »


She read the card, said "coming through"
She wondered oh what can we do?



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3273 on: November 25, 2007, 11:52:37 pm »
She read the card, said "coming through"
She wondered oh what can we do?
"Wonder who this Jack could be"
 
 
 
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It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3274 on: November 26, 2007, 12:01:48 am »


She read the card, said "coming through"
She wondered oh what can we do?
"Wonder who this Jack could be"
A cowboy friend he used to see.?
 



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3275 on: November 26, 2007, 12:10:07 am »
She read the card, said "coming through"
She wondered oh what can we do?
"Wonder who this Jack could be"
A cowboy friend he used to see.?
"I do hope he'll be my friend too"
 
 
 
 
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It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3276 on: November 26, 2007, 03:10:47 am »


              Jack caught forty winks in the afternoon.



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3277 on: November 26, 2007, 01:13:59 pm »
Jack caught forty winks in the afternoon.
He hoped that Ennis would be back soon.


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3278 on: November 27, 2007, 04:24:54 pm »
Jack caught forty winks in the afternoon.
He hoped that Ennis would be back soon.
Rested, he was all set

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3279 on: November 27, 2007, 05:34:16 pm »
Jack caught forty winks in the afternoon.
He hoped that Ennis would be back soon.
Rested, he was all set
For some lovin'...you bet
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection