Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3343925 times)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3120 on: October 15, 2007, 09:26:31 pm »

Both Cassie and Jack loved Ennis Del Mar
His heart and his soul was admired near and far;
Plus, he had a great smile
And could be ver-sa-tile
Puttin blocks to Cassie, just didn't compare






         



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3121 on: October 16, 2007, 01:48:15 am »
Another:

Once upon a time in sixty-three,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3122 on: October 16, 2007, 02:17:22 am »




Once upon a time in sixty-three,
Two young cowboys were high mountain free.
   



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3123 on: October 16, 2007, 05:59:25 pm »
Once upon a time in sixty-three,
Two young cowboys were high mountain free.
They used the tent well

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3124 on: October 16, 2007, 08:20:24 pm »
Once upon a time in sixty-three,
Two young cowboys were high mountain free.
They used the tent well
Causing some parts to swell 

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3125 on: October 17, 2007, 02:34:29 am »
Once upon a time in sixty-three,
Two young cowboys were high mountain free.
They used the tent well
Causing some parts to swell
And then we all shouted "whoo-EEE!"






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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3126 on: October 17, 2007, 03:46:59 am »



            The mountain was beautiful and fierce.



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3127 on: October 17, 2007, 02:24:47 pm »
The mountain was beautiful and fierce
and seemed really far from Alma Beers

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3128 on: October 17, 2007, 06:46:19 pm »
The mountain was beautiful and fierce
and seemed really far from Alma Beers.
Up there he was free,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3129 on: October 17, 2007, 07:43:08 pm »

  The mountain was beautiful and fierce
   and seemed really far from Alma Beers.
   Up there he was free,
   Invisable as the trees

       



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