Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 4065087 times)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3370 on: December 15, 2007, 02:00:31 am »



Jack missed Ennis and could hardly stand it
He told him, its you, I wish I could quit
Face it Jack, it ain't gonna be that way.



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3371 on: December 15, 2007, 02:22:19 am »
Jack missed Ennis and could hardly stand it
He told him, its you, I wish I could quit
Face it Jack, it ain't gonna be that way.
Not with the child support I gotta pay
 
 
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It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3372 on: December 15, 2007, 03:33:25 am »
Jack missed Ennis and could hardly stand it
He told him, its you, I wish I could quit
Face it Jack, it ain't gonna be that way.
Not with the child support I gotta pay
He loved him more than he could admit.



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3373 on: December 15, 2007, 03:34:36 am »


  The postcard came back with big red letters.



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3374 on: December 15, 2007, 10:50:10 pm »
The postcard came back with big red letters.
Made Ennis's face drip wet with sweaters            (sorry, what else rhymes with letters)
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3375 on: December 15, 2007, 11:00:46 pm »


 check the rhyming dictionary,com
but to me that is the fun of this game finding a line that fits and rhymes too.
you did well.      :-*



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3376 on: December 15, 2007, 11:03:27 pm »



The postcard came back with big red letters.
Made Ennis's face drip wet with sweaters 
She had left something behind.



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3377 on: December 15, 2007, 11:27:36 pm »
The postcard came back with big red letters.
Made Ennis's face drip wet with sweaters 
She had left something behind.
Or was she just being kind
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3378 on: December 16, 2007, 10:50:47 am »
The postcard came back with big red letters.
Made Ennis's face drip wet with sweaters 
She had left something behind.
Or was she just being kind
He  and she and his shirts had no answers
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3379 on: December 16, 2007, 11:21:20 am »
He pitched the tent, but it didnt look right
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It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection