Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)

[Mikaela]

It was love at first sight for young Jack
in his shirt sky-blue and his hat so black

[Lumière]

It was love at first sight for young Jack
in his shirt sky-blue and his hat so black.
He fell hard as a rock,

[Mikaela]

It was love at first sight for young Jack
in his shirt sky-blue and his hat so black.
He fell hard as a rock,
the right key found his lock

[Lumière]

I'll go with the first...


It was love at first sight for young Jack
in his shirt sky-blue and his hat so black.
He fell hard as a rock,
the right key found his lock..
there were no words, no turning back.


Another: 

As Jack lay dying by the roadside

[ifyoucantfixit]

       As Jack lay dying by the roadside
       No one to stem the flowing blood tide

[Delmardeb]

As Jack lay dying by the roadside
No one to stem the flowing blood tide
Jack's love Ennis didn't know

[ifyoucantfixit]

As Jack lay dying by the roadside
No one to stem the flowing blood tide
Jack's love Ennis didn't know
Their old passions would never glow

possible line?

as day became night at eventide

[Lumière]

New one .. 


Jack watched him drive away that day

[ifyoucantfixit]

Jack watched him drive away that day
His spirit broken, he gazed away.

[Mikaela]

Jack watched him drive away that day
His spirit broken, he gazed away.
"Let be," he thought with a sigh. "Let be."