Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3722958 times)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3480 on: February 06, 2008, 03:56:19 am »



Jack was dead down in Texas, now its  Ennis, out East.
As the postmarked was stamped, the words DECEASED
We ponder the future of our dear boy Jake.



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3481 on: February 06, 2008, 04:17:23 am »
Jack was dead down in Texas, now its  Ennis, out East.
As the postmarked was stamped, the words DECEASED
We ponder the future of our dear boy Jake.
How much his heart must sadly ache
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3482 on: February 23, 2008, 10:01:21 am »
Jack was dead down in Texas, now its  Ennis, out East.
As the postmarked was stamped, the words DECEASED
We ponder the future of our dear boy Jake.
How much his heart must sadly ache
And their souls together are now released.
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3483 on: August 26, 2008, 11:58:47 am »
each day, Jack watched over the sheep


Tell him when l come up to him and ask to play the record, l'm gonna say: ''Voulez-vous jouer ce disque?''
'Voulez-vous, will you kiss my dick?'
Will you play my record? One-track mind!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3484 on: August 26, 2008, 07:11:01 pm »
Gee Chucky, you have been going back over some old posts.....good on ya....and glad to see this one revived......

For anyone who wants to join in this one.....the way it works, is to write ONE line of the limerick, and wait for someone else to add another line, you can then add another line to the same limerick, Or once it is finished.....FIVE LINES.....start another one....its good fun.....cut and past the previous lines, dont quote them, as its much easier to read the limerick.


Each day, Jack watched over the sheep
And nightime didnt allow him much sleep




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It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3485 on: August 26, 2008, 08:33:24 pm »


Each day, Jack watched over the sheep
And nightime didnt allow him much sleep
met Ennis when the sun rose


Tell him when l come up to him and ask to play the record, l'm gonna say: ''Voulez-vous jouer ce disque?''
'Voulez-vous, will you kiss my dick?'
Will you play my record? One-track mind!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3486 on: August 26, 2008, 09:10:45 pm »
Each day, Jack watched over the sheep
And nightime didnt allow him much sleep
met Ennis when the sun rose
and together they had a quick doze
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3487 on: August 26, 2008, 09:38:14 pm »

Each day, Jack watched over the sheep
And nightime didnt allow him much sleep
met Ennis when the sun rose
and together they had a quick doze
and upon them Aguirre did creep!


Tell him when l come up to him and ask to play the record, l'm gonna say: ''Voulez-vous jouer ce disque?''
'Voulez-vous, will you kiss my dick?'
Will you play my record? One-track mind!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3488 on: August 26, 2008, 09:47:20 pm »
Not a care in the world, they wrestled and played
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3489 on: August 26, 2008, 10:06:33 pm »
I hope I'm doing this right ....  :)



Not a care in the world, they wrestled and played
Up high on the mountain they were unafraid



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The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain