Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 4059075 times)

Offline Katie77

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3860 on: October 25, 2008, 05:00:37 pm »
He hung the shirts on his closet door
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3861 on: October 25, 2008, 09:40:15 pm »

He hung the shirts on his closet door
next to the postcard he bought at the store


Tell him when l come up to him and ask to play the record, l'm gonna say: ''Voulez-vous jouer ce disque?''
'Voulez-vous, will you kiss my dick?'
Will you play my record? One-track mind!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3862 on: October 26, 2008, 12:28:33 am »
He hung the shirts on his closet door
next to the postcard he bought at the store
One shirt inside the other
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3863 on: October 26, 2008, 12:53:53 am »
He hung the shirts on his closet door
next to the postcard he bought at the store
One shirt inside the other
Too little, too late to protect his lover
"Laß sein. Laß sein."

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3864 on: October 26, 2008, 01:14:58 am »

He hung the shirts on his closet door
next to the postcard he bought at the store
One shirt inside the other
Too little, too late to protect his lover
Ennis realized he should've done more.


Tell him when l come up to him and ask to play the record, l'm gonna say: ''Voulez-vous jouer ce disque?''
'Voulez-vous, will you kiss my dick?'
Will you play my record? One-track mind!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3865 on: October 26, 2008, 03:40:22 am »
He hung the shirts on his closet door
next to the postcard he bought at the store
One shirt inside the other
Too little, too late to protect his lover
Ennis realized he should've done more.

I like em all, but that one was really really good...

Heres another one...

Alma Jnr was gonna marry Kurt
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3866 on: October 26, 2008, 08:08:40 am »
Alma Jnr was gonna marry Kurt
Her father's main concern that she not be hurt
"Laß sein. Laß sein."

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3867 on: October 26, 2008, 08:39:41 am »
Alma Jnr was gonna marry Kurt
Her father's main concern that she not be hurt
He'd learned some lessons in the hardest of ways
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3868 on: October 26, 2008, 05:11:24 pm »
Alma Jnr was gonna marry Kurt
Her father's main concern that she not be hurt
He'd learned some lessons in the hardest of ways
As he sat remembering long ago days
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3869 on: October 27, 2008, 04:33:21 am »
Alma Jnr was gonna marry Kurt
Her father's main concern that she not be hurt
He'd learned some lessons in the hardest of ways
As he sat remembering long ago days
The wind struck his trailer like a load of dirt
"Laß sein. Laß sein."