Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 1050537 times)

Offline Pipedream

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #320 on: June 02, 2006, 03:55:48 pm »
Jack called out and into the tent Ennis staggered,
where Jack lay in his underwear (checkered)


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #321 on: June 02, 2006, 04:44:17 pm »
Jack called out and into the tent Ennis staggered,
where Jack lay in his underwear (checkered)
Up close to Jack he snuggled,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #322 on: June 02, 2006, 04:50:04 pm »
Jack called out and into the tent Ennis staggered,
where Jack lay in his underwear (checkered)
Up close to Jack he snuggled,
And bodily parts they juggled
Now bring me that horizon.♥We have our heading.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #323 on: June 02, 2006, 04:53:32 pm »
Jack called out and into the tent Ennis staggered,
where Jack lay in his underwear (checkered)
Up close to Jack he snuggled,
And bodily parts they juggled,
"Tis nobody's business but ours", Jack stuttered!


(I opted for a more polite ending.. :P).


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #324 on: June 02, 2006, 04:56:12 pm »
Lol. What would have been the other ending??  ;D


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #325 on: June 02, 2006, 05:17:17 pm »
Lol. What would have been the other ending??  ;D

Jack called out and into the tent Ennis staggered,
where Jack lay in his underwear (checkered)
Up close to Jack he snuggled,
And bodily parts they juggled,
Jack moaned and groaned as he was blissfully buggered!


(I said it was rude didn't I?  :-X ::) ;D)


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #326 on: June 02, 2006, 05:22:14 pm »
(I said it was rude didn't I?  :-X ::) ;D)

Rude?? Well I could live with that, but you got the rhyme wrong! Lol.
Not that I could have come up with a better word, myself...  ;D


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #327 on: June 02, 2006, 05:24:55 pm »
Rude?? Well I could live with that, but you got the rhyme wrong! Lol.
Not that I could have come up with a better word, myself...  ;D

I did?? How?  :P


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #328 on: June 02, 2006, 05:29:37 pm »
I did?? How?  :P

Ooops. Forgive me! I didn't know that "staggered" and "buggered" rhyme in Canada...  :laugh:

Anyway. New round:

When Ennis and Alma got married


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #329 on: June 02, 2006, 05:33:06 pm »
When Ennis and Alma got married,
He thought his past with Jack was buried,