Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 1073089 times)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #330 on: June 02, 2006, 05:35:40 pm »
When Ennis and Alma got married,
He thought his past with Jack was buried,
and he tried not to show


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #331 on: June 02, 2006, 05:38:07 pm »
Ooops. Forgive me! I didn't know that "staggered" and "buggered" rhyme in Canada...  :laugh:
:P :P Hehe...

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When Ennis and Alma got married,
He thought his past with Jack was buried,
and he tried not to show
that he wrang it for Jack twice in a row,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #332 on: June 03, 2006, 01:00:55 am »
When Ennis and Alma got married,
He thought his past with Jack was buried,
and he tried not to show
that he wrang it for Jack twice in a row,
and what big pair of apples he carried!


Hmmm... does that make any sense??  ??? 


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #333 on: June 03, 2006, 01:26:07 am »
When Ennis and Alma got married,
He thought his past with Jack was buried,
and he tried not to show
that he wrang it for Jack twice in a row,
and what big pair of apples he carried!


Hmmm... does that make any sense??  ??? 

Not really.. :laugh:

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Another round:

Ennis' divorce gave Jack such a thrill,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #334 on: June 03, 2006, 01:40:20 am »
Ennis' divorce gave Jack such a thrill,
He jumped into his car, dressed up to kill


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #335 on: June 03, 2006, 01:45:54 am »
Ennis' divorce gave Jack such a thrill,
He jumped into his car, dressed up to kill.
He redlined it straight to Riverton,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #336 on: June 03, 2006, 04:16:58 am »
Ennis' divorce gave Jack such a thrill,
He jumped into his car, dressed up to kill.
He redlined it straight to Riverton,
'Cause without his love he was hurtin',
« Last Edit: June 03, 2006, 04:19:33 am by Fran-E »

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #337 on: June 03, 2006, 05:35:18 am »
Ennis' divorce gave Jack such a thrill,
He jumped into his car, dressed up to kill.
He redlined it straight to Riverton,
'Cause without his love he was hurtin',
But instead a Mexican he had to drill!
« Last Edit: June 03, 2006, 05:38:22 am by Ray »
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #338 on: June 03, 2006, 05:37:38 am »
He plotted his herding with pie,
~A good general knows when to retreat~

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #339 on: June 03, 2006, 09:22:20 am »
He plotted his herding with pie,
and when he saw Cassie with Karl, he didn't even vie,