Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 1093769 times)

Offline Lumière

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #340 on: June 03, 2006, 10:46:21 am »
He plotted his herding with pie,
and when he saw Cassie with Karl, he didn't even vie,
His mind replayed that fight by the lake,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #341 on: June 03, 2006, 11:29:52 am »
He plotted his herding with pie,
and when he saw Cassie with Karl, he didn't even vie,
His mind replayed that fight by the lake,
It was time to act, there was too much at stake,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #342 on: June 03, 2006, 11:36:12 am »
He plotted his herding with pie,
and when he saw Cassie with Karl, he didn't even vie,
His mind replayed that fight by the lake,
It was time to act, there was too much at stake,
Little did Del Mar know, that his love was going to die.

 :'(


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Another round:

Ennis walked slowly into the tent, his hat in hand


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #343 on: June 03, 2006, 10:39:27 pm »
Ennis walked slowly into the tent, his hat in hand
He felt like Alice in Wonderland 
 
 



S'alright, s'alright!

Offline ThePirateBride

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #344 on: June 03, 2006, 10:46:22 pm »
Ennis walked slowly into the tent, his hat in hand
He felt like Alice in Wonderland 
No time was wasted
Now bring me that horizon.♥We have our heading.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #345 on: June 03, 2006, 10:47:52 pm »
Ennis walked slowly into the tent, his hat in hand
He felt like Alice in Wonderland 
No time was wasted
The forbidden fruit tasted


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #346 on: June 03, 2006, 10:48:08 pm »
Ennis walked slowly into the tent, his hat in hand
He felt like Alice in Wonderland  
No time was wasted
The Forbidden fruit tasted
And love's juice covered his gland!
« Last Edit: June 03, 2006, 10:49:50 pm by Ray »
~A good general knows when to retreat~

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #347 on: June 03, 2006, 10:50:58 pm »
As his cheek brushed the nipple of Jack,
~A good general knows when to retreat~

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #348 on: June 03, 2006, 10:53:11 pm »
As his cheek brushed the nipple of Jack,
Ennis thought by himself, what the heck


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #349 on: June 03, 2006, 10:54:33 pm »

As his cheek brushed the nipple of Jack,
Ennis thought by himself, what the heck
The smell of his skin
~A good general knows when to retreat~