Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 1093764 times)

Offline Lumière

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #50 on: May 29, 2006, 11:25:55 pm »
I'll take you up to Don Wroe's cabin ...
Where we'll do a bit more than just gabbin'
With you, there ain't no need to wring out,
With our guns goin' off we will shout:
Sweet Jesus H!  I am comin'!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #51 on: May 29, 2006, 11:49:17 pm »
That fateful day outside Aguirre's trailer ...


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #52 on: May 29, 2006, 11:59:43 pm »
That fateful day outside Aguirre's trailer ...
Ennis wore his best shirt from the tailor,


S'alright, s'alright!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #53 on: May 30, 2006, 12:05:29 am »
That fateful day outside Aguirre's trailer ...
Ennis wore his best shirt from the tailor,
Jack gazed upon him, a throb in his heart,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #54 on: May 30, 2006, 03:07:47 am »
Incidental remark:   ::)

This limerick business is straining.
Just as Ray, I quite feel like complaining!
With no rhythm and rhyme
This ain’t worth not a dime.
Yet, one has to say, it’s entertaining!


Hey saucycobblers! Thanks for starting this thread overhere! Loved that on IMDB! :D
« Last Edit: May 30, 2006, 03:24:45 am by Pipedream »


S'alright, s'alright!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #55 on: May 30, 2006, 07:54:41 am »
Oh my, you lot HAVE been busy while I was asleep  ;D

As Ennis would say... "Very good" *drums BBQ spit with rusty piece of metal*.

I have been LMAO at these  :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

My favourite line so far...

Alma was rolled on her belly,
There'd been nothing interesting on the telly,

HAHAHAHAHA!!!! Nice one Lucise  :laugh:
Will you stop playing with that radio of yours, I'm trying to get to sleep!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #56 on: May 30, 2006, 07:56:57 am »
Here goes... *ding ding*... round two...

Jack thought as he looked at LaShawn,
Will you stop playing with that radio of yours, I'm trying to get to sleep!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #57 on: May 30, 2006, 08:38:12 am »
Here goes... *ding ding*... round two...

Jack thought as he looked at LaShawn,

You are in a hurry! We have yet to finish this one...:  :D

That fateful day outside Aguirre's trailer ...
Ennis wore his best shirt from the tailor,
Jack gazed upon him, a throb in his heart,


S'alright, s'alright!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #58 on: May 30, 2006, 08:39:05 am »
Jack thought as he looked at LaShawn,
He wish she'd shut up and be gone,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #59 on: May 30, 2006, 08:40:51 am »
That fateful day outside Aguirre's trailer ...
Ennis wore his best shirt from the tailor,
Jack gazed upon him, a throb in his heart,
Ennis's eyes shot thru him like a dart,
and soon Jack was as horny as a Sailor!