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Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3237688 times)

Offline Sason

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #6700 on: April 01, 2011, 10:12:23 am »
Quote from: Andrew on March 31, 2011, 09:03:25 pm
Now this is uncanny.  There is such a thing as writing a first line and envisioning that a poem could go in a certain direction.  And I have to admit that I feel mean if I do a first line with a word I am personally unable to think of a reasonable rhyme for, and I usually don't like to feel mean.   I put in 'tilted back' both because it sounded like a distinctive part of the experience for the participants, and because darn it, there is at least one excellent rhyme for 'back' !

But what is uncanny is that nothing in the first line was pointing to 'above' and 'love', yet those are the very words I imagined for 3 and 4.



Wow, Andrew! That is uncanny!
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #6701 on: April 01, 2011, 10:13:06 am »
Andrew knows how to predict our rhymes,
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #6702 on: April 16, 2011, 08:48:50 pm »
Andrew knows how to predict our rhymes,
He's even done it several times,
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #6703 on: April 17, 2011, 08:38:00 am »
Andrew knows how to predict our rhymes,
He's even done it several times,
Predict some more!
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #6704 on: April 17, 2011, 08:33:33 pm »
Andrew knows how to predict our rhymes,
He's even done it several times,
Predict some more!
And be right again, or
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #6705 on: April 19, 2011, 01:26:43 pm »
Andrew knows how to predict our rhymes,
He's even done it several times,
Predict some more!
And be right again, or
Suffer unknown and unspeakable crimes. ;)
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #6706 on: April 19, 2011, 03:59:54 pm »
Quote from: SuperDistortion on April 19, 2011, 01:26:43 pm
Andrew knows how to predict our rhymes,
He's even done it several times,
Predict some more!
And be right again, or
Suffer unknown and unspeakable crimes. ;)


 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:


What a responsibility you've taken upon yourself, Andrew!   ;D
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #6707 on: April 19, 2011, 04:02:34 pm »
Rhyming is one of the very finest arts
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #6708 on: April 20, 2011, 12:25:18 am »
There once was a cowboy called Jack,
Who felt at home with his horse and his pack.
With Ennis at his side,
He would take many long rides,
Where both would feel very laid-back.


Sorry, folks but it's been a long time since I posted on this site.
Tony-Ranger told me about this game. I hope you all don't mind
that I posted a complete limerick.
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #6709 on: April 20, 2011, 06:52:27 am »
Quote from: ProwlAmongUs on April 20, 2011, 12:25:18 am
There once was a cowboy called Jack,
Who felt at home with his horse and his pack.
With Ennis at his side,
He would take many long rides,
Where both would feel very laid-back.


Sorry, folks but it's been a long time since I posted on this site.
Tony-Ranger told me about this game. I hope you all don't mind
that I posted a complete limerick.

Hey, Tim!  Nice limerick and great to see you around here!
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