Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 1163752 times)

Offline Lumière

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #730 on: June 16, 2006, 04:37:38 pm »
Jack could feel Ennis' breath on his neck,
His heart was beating wildly beneath his pecs.
With his eyes open wide,
He felt Ennis' rough hands on his side.


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #731 on: June 16, 2006, 04:40:32 pm »
Jack could feel Ennis' breath on his neck,
His heart was beating wildly beneath his pecs.
With his eyes open wide,
He felt Ennis' rough hands on his side,
and he knew he was in for spectacular sex!    :P



*blush* But seriously, what else rhymes with pecs?  ::)


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #732 on: June 16, 2006, 04:46:06 pm »

*blush* But seriously, what else rhymes with pecs?  ::)

Becks!   ;D

This one:


Or this one:



Ya just had to say 'sex', didn't cha Mikaela?   :laugh:   :P
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #733 on: June 16, 2006, 04:47:42 pm »
Ok, another round:   :D


Lureen hid Jack's blue parka,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #734 on: June 16, 2006, 05:15:38 pm »
Lureen hid Jack's blue parka,
So he'd buy her a Marka
Now bring me that horizon.♥We have our heading.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #735 on: June 16, 2006, 05:30:36 pm »
Lureen hid Jack's blue parka,
So he'd buy her a Marka.
She was peeved 'cause he was goin' fishing,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #736 on: June 16, 2006, 05:41:19 pm »
Lureen hid Jack's blue parka,
So he'd buy her a Marka.
She was peeved 'cause he was goin' fishing,
And she was truly wishing
I just want to celebrate another day of living.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #737 on: June 16, 2006, 05:45:01 pm »
Lureen hid Jack's blue parka,
So he'd buy her a Marka.
She was peeved 'cause he was goin' fishing,
And she was truly wishing
That he'd stay home and ---k her!


 ::)


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #738 on: June 16, 2006, 05:50:08 pm »
Love it, good work!   :laugh:

The minister was aching to kiss the bride
Now bring me that horizon.♥We have our heading.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #739 on: June 16, 2006, 06:01:21 pm »
The minister was aching to kiss the bride,
Heck, could be his last chance for such a ride.