Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 1144009 times)

Offline Daniel

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #790 on: June 20, 2006, 04:30:01 pm »
The best part of Ennis? Jack grinned,
Is that he finally sinned!
Within a dark tent,
Why do we consume what we consume?
Why do we believe what we believe?
Why do we accept what we accept?
You have a body, a mind, and a soul.... You have a responsibility.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #791 on: June 20, 2006, 04:31:08 pm »
The best part of Ennis? Jack grinned,
Is that he finally sinned!
Within a dark tent,
He pounded Jack till he was spent,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #792 on: June 20, 2006, 04:33:40 pm »
The best part of Ennis? Jack grinned,
Is that he finally sinned!
Within a dark tent,
He pounded Jack till he was spent.
They were sad when it came to an end.

Sorry, not the most limericky.
Better than:
Both lost so much weight they had thinned.
« Last Edit: June 20, 2006, 04:36:56 pm by Daniel »
Why do we consume what we consume?
Why do we believe what we believe?
Why do we accept what we accept?
You have a body, a mind, and a soul.... You have a responsibility.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #793 on: June 20, 2006, 05:10:37 pm »
Another Limerick Interlude!!   ;D




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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #794 on: June 20, 2006, 05:26:18 pm »
No wonder Jack didn't like beans. Fleeing the cat piss smelling pup tent, only to end up sharing a tent smelling strongly of .......something explosively else, but equally bad.    ;D

So.... another limerick first line:


I can't smell no roses, said Jack

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #795 on: June 20, 2006, 05:48:20 pm »
I can't smell no roses, said Jack
'Quit talking boy!' growled Ennis, 'On yer back!'



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #796 on: June 21, 2006, 01:06:34 pm »
I can't smell no roses, said Jack
'Quit talking boy!' growled Ennis, 'On yer back!'
Jack's breathing quickened as he obeyed,



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #797 on: June 21, 2006, 01:54:24 pm »
I can't smell no roses, said Jack
'Quit talking boy!' growled Ennis, 'On yer back!'
Jack's breathing quickened as he obeyed,
And in that position he stayed
Now bring me that horizon.♥We have our heading.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #798 on: June 21, 2006, 02:01:01 pm »
I can't smell no roses, said Jack
'Quit talking boy!' growled Ennis, 'On yer back!'
Jack's breathing quickened as he obeyed,
And in that position he stayed
He was blown away by Ennis' prowess in the sack!




That was hawt!   8)


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #799 on: June 21, 2006, 02:28:35 pm »
Yes, hawt, birthday girl!

The boys reunited in the stairwell
Now bring me that horizon.♥We have our heading.