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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1450 on: July 26, 2006, 02:20:49 pm »
"Ennis?" said Alma in her misery voice,
Will you stop playing with that radio of yours, I'm trying to get to sleep!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1451 on: July 26, 2006, 02:25:12 pm »
"Ennis?" said Alma in her misery voice,
"You been messin' around with boys?"

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1452 on: July 26, 2006, 02:41:37 pm »
"Ennis?" said Alma in her misery voice,
"You been messin' around with boys?"
"Jack Twist? Jack Nasty!" she said,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1453 on: July 26, 2006, 03:00:17 pm »
"Ennis?" said Alma in her misery voice,
"You been messin' around with boys?"
"Jack Twist? Jack Nasty!" she said,
His face burned with shame as he hung his head.


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1454 on: July 26, 2006, 03:23:28 pm »
"Ennis?" said Alma in her misery voice,
"You been messin' around with boys?"
"Jack Twist? Jack Nasty!" she said,
His face burned with shame as he hung his head.
The secret revealed despite all careful ploys!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1455 on: July 26, 2006, 04:32:18 pm »
Marvelous! 8)

Ennis thought "I want to marry that Jack"
Those who are tardy do not get fruit cup.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1456 on: July 26, 2006, 05:18:01 pm »
Ennis thought "I want to marry that Jack
And take a ride on his strong back
Captain Jack is back!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1457 on: July 26, 2006, 05:27:00 pm »
Ennis thought "I want to marry that Jack
And take a ride on his strong back.
That blue-eyed boy has stolen my heart,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1458 on: July 26, 2006, 05:36:05 pm »

Ennis thought "I want to marry that Jack
And take a ride on his strong back.
That blue-eyed boy has stolen my heart,
And I don't think we should live apart

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1459 on: July 26, 2006, 05:40:44 pm »
Ennis thought "I want to marry that Jack
And take a ride on his strong back.
That blue-eyed boy has stolen my heart,
And I don't think we should live apart
Without him, this life I could not hack.


Anuvver??

Jack looked at Ennis as he was sleeping,
Will you stop playing with that radio of yours, I'm trying to get to sleep!