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YOUNG ENNIS:

(( Looks around for some assistance, and sees a shiny tube fall from Jacks pant, which are now around his ankles, coincidentally next to his warshrag.))


TERRY CLOTH:

**  Um, Ennis, not that I want to interrupt any flows or anything, but you are farsighted enough to dislike reading anything except Hamley's saddle catalog, so you should be able to see that down here, I am no longer a warshrag ... this here hunk-a hunk-a burnin' lotion has turned me into a bath towel.  Please, dude, a little respect.  **
"... he is suffused with a sense of pleasure because Jack Twist was in his dream."

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YOUNG JACK:

((a little surprised by Ennis's sudden and active response, now finds himself on all fours, penetrated by Ennis. The rhythm of Ennis's body meeting his, the feeling of delirious pleasure overcomes his senses, which are still clouded by the whiskey.))

((He grunts in time with Ennis's movements, now arching back into the violent thrusts, his laughing voice subdued by a more primitive calling.))

Oh, F*ck, Ennis!
Why do we consume what we consume?
Why do we believe what we believe?
Why do we accept what we accept?
You have a body, a mind, and a soul.... You have a responsibility.

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YOUNG ENNIS:
(( Looks around for some assistance, and sees a shiny tube fall from Jacks pant,

((JBB feels a hand grab him, lift his cap and squeeze some lotion out of him))

** Ooooo... woa... bye Terry... ouch!... ooooooh, that's good**

((JBB feels some relief from the tension of potential premature ejaculotion))
Will you stop playing with that radio of yours, I'm trying to get to sleep!

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((
Audience gasps in anticipation and excitement at the sights they have just seen
 :o  :o  :o  :o  :o
One audience member fainted from all the pounding ..
Another screamed out inadvertently ..."Take me now Ennis ...!!" ..(security took care of him!)










 :o  :o

))
« Last Edit: July 07, 2006, 10:52:51 pm by Lucise »


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((JBB feels a hand grab him, lift his cap and squeeze some lotion out of him))

** Ooooo... woa... bye Terry... ouch!... ooooooh, that's good**

((JBB feels some relief from the tension of potential premature ejaculotion))

((  TERRY CLOTH just about passes out from the 110 degree heat in the tent.  All of sudden, ever'thing is lookin' right.  JBB runs on full-bottle whether cloth-up-ending or lotion-spending, and he wanted all of it when TERRY CLOTH seized his cap and brought it to his fuzzy parts.  ))

"... he is suffused with a sense of pleasure because Jack Twist was in his dream."

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YOUNG ENNIS:

**The only sounds in the tent are moans of pleasure from the boys**

(( Ennis is in a euphoria he never dreamed possible, and with no more than a few gasps, his world explodes beneath him.))



In America sex is an obsession.  In other parts of the world it is a fact.

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(( On behalf of Owllivia ...

Olivia and her hubby Oscar gave up mice-hunting for the night to witness some tent action..their little baby owl will not be awake for another lil while ...

Olivia is beside herself with excitement ...




..Oscar seems to be in some kind of a trance. ...  :-\




))
« Last Edit: July 07, 2006, 11:11:23 pm by Lucise »


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(( AUDIENCE Continues to watch in amazement as the boys enjoy the ride of their lives ......heading for a place where few are destined ...





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YOUNG JACK:

((In a moment of instant euphoria feels a sudden rush and tingling feeling as Ennis collapses on top of him.))

Jesus, Ennis!

%% How the hell am I supposed to compete with that fireworks display. %%
Why do we consume what we consume?
Why do we believe what we believe?
Why do we accept what we accept?
You have a body, a mind, and a soul.... You have a responsibility.