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Offline Daniel

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YOUNG JACK:

((nods to Ennis, grinning))

Yeah, once in a while, I hear you there. I mean it's not like I got a trigger-happy finger or nothin' but I like to shoot off a few rounds sometimes, just to make sure I got what it takes.... in case there's a bear or somethin'.

((shakes his head))

But to be honest, I can't shoot worth a darn. I needed someone to teach me a long time ago.

((grabs up the rifle, goes a good distance from the whisky bottle, aims, shoots, and misses))

Shit! ((looks over at Ennis)) Did ya see what I was doin' wrong?
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YOUNG ENNIS:

Yeah, I think yer holdin' it wrong. Here, lemme show ya.

((Stands behind Jack, grabs his hands to place them on the rifle correctly.))

You wanna bring the gun up under your arm like this, then look through there to aim.

%% Shit, is this how most guys teach another guy to shoot? %%

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JACK'S LOWER LIP:

%%Just a little nip at my corner as he closes one eye, intently concentrating...sure is hard to keep a thought with those long arms around me, steadying the 20/20.%%
"Laß sein. Laß sein."

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YOUNG JACK:

((allows Ennis to hold his hands over the rifle correctly, feeling his heat advancing from behind him.))

%% I'm a bad boy, but this just feels too good! %%

Oh gawd... I mean, oh god, yeah, I see what you mean.

((his lips are suddenly dry, he licks them.))
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Blue heeler arrives and says WOOF!
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JACK'S LOWER LIP:

%%Considerin' the altitude, it sure is hot on this mountainside.  I ain't got no spit left.  I needed that.%%
"Laß sein. Laß sein."

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YOUNG ENNIS:

((Watches as blue heeler curls up next to Jack's foot.))

%% Where did that dog come from? %%

Why don't you try it again Jack? I'll help this time.

%% Am I supposed to move away now? %%

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Blue heeler arrives and says WOOF!

((suddenly concerned by the appearance of the blue heeler))

Hold on, Ennis.

((looks down at the dog, trying to see if anything's wrong up with the herd. Early morning predators weren't unheard of. He's pretty good at picking up signals from the dogs.))

Something wrong, bud? ((ruffles the dog's head, not sensing any warning signs))

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« Last Edit: June 25, 2006, 09:30:35 pm by Daniel »
Why do we consume what we consume?
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Something wrong, bud? ((ruffles the dog's head, not sensing any warning signs))

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((notices ruffling of head, likes it, licks Ennis in a loving way and once again says))

WOOF!
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