Author Topic: THE PERFORMANCE THREAD aside ((action)) %%thought%% (Read 1694521 times)

Daniel · « **Reply #690 on:** June 25, 2006, 08:59:48 pm »

YOUNG JACK:

((nods to Ennis, grinning))

Yeah, once in a while, I hear you there. I mean it's not like I got a trigger-happy finger or nothin' but I like to shoot off a few rounds sometimes, just to make sure I got what it takes.... in case there's a bear or somethin'.

((shakes his head))

But to be honest, I can't shoot worth a darn. I needed someone to teach me a long time ago.

((grabs up the rifle, goes a good distance from the whisky bottle, aims, shoots, and misses))

Shit! ((looks over at Ennis)) Did ya see what I was doin' wrong?

cmr107 · « **Reply #691 on:** June 25, 2006, 09:09:38 pm »

YOUNG ENNIS:

Yeah, I think yer holdin' it wrong. Here, lemme show ya.

((Stands behind Jack, grabs his hands to place them on the rifle correctly.))

You wanna bring the gun up under your arm like this, then look through there to aim.

%% Shit, is this how most guys teach another guy to shoot? %%

Lynne · « **Reply #692 on:** June 25, 2006, 09:14:00 pm »

JACK'S LOWER LIP:

%%Just a little nip at my corner as he closes one eye, intently concentrating...sure is hard to keep a thought with those long arms around me, steadying the 20/20.%%

Daniel · « **Reply #693 on:** June 25, 2006, 09:15:25 pm »

YOUNG JACK:

((allows Ennis to hold his hands over the rifle correctly, feeling his heat advancing from behind him.))

%% I'm a bad boy, but this just feels too good! %%

Oh gawd... I mean, oh god, yeah, I see what you mean.

((his lips are suddenly dry, he licks them.))

MaineWriter · « **Reply #694 on:** June 25, 2006, 09:17:19 pm »

Blue heeler arrives and says WOOF!

Lynne · « **Reply #695 on:** June 25, 2006, 09:20:57 pm »

JACK'S LOWER LIP:

%%Considerin' the altitude, it sure is hot on this mountainside. I ain't got no spit left. I needed that.%%

cmr107 · « **Reply #696 on:** June 25, 2006, 09:21:31 pm »

YOUNG ENNIS:

((Watches as blue heeler curls up next to Jack's foot.))

%% Where did that dog come from? %%

Why don't you try it again Jack? I'll help this time.

%% Am I supposed to move away now? %%

Daniel · « **Reply #697 on:** June 25, 2006, 09:24:23 pm »

Quote from: MaineWriter on June 25, 2006, 09:17:19 pm

Blue heeler arrives and says WOOF!

((suddenly concerned by the appearance of the blue heeler))

Hold on, Ennis.

((looks down at the dog, trying to see if anything's wrong up with the herd. Early morning predators weren't unheard of. He's pretty good at picking up signals from the dogs.))

Something wrong, bud? ((ruffles the dog's head, not sensing any warning signs))

**What's that? Timmy's in the well.? ... Who the hell is Timmy? **

Lumière · « **Reply #698 on:** June 25, 2006, 09:39:28 pm »

Quote from: Daniel on June 25, 2006, 09:24:23 pm

Something wrong, bud? ((ruffles the dog's head, not sensing any warning signs))

**What's that? Timmy's in the well.? ... Who the hell is Timmy? **

MaineWriter · « **Reply #699 on:** June 25, 2006, 09:41:19 pm »

((notices ruffling of head, likes it, licks Ennis in a loving way and once again says))

WOOF!

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