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Author Topic: The "ABCs of BBM": Round 965! (Rules in first post)  (Read 5616987 times)

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"R" is revisions
« Reply #13630 on: June 17, 2007, 04:55:24 pm »


BROKEBACK MOUNTAIN
A Screenplay
By Larry McMurtry and Diana Ossana
Based on a Short Story By Annie Proulx

Current Revisions By James Schamus

31 March 2004 Draft
Revisions 7 April 2004


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"S" is straightens
« Reply #13631 on: June 17, 2007, 05:02:23 pm »
In profile, WE SEE the passenger take an old mashed-up Stetson off the dashboard.

This is ENNIS DEL MAR: about twenty, but nonetheless compelling, not light or frivolous in disposition, appearance or manner, uncommonly quick reflexes -- a high-school dropout country boy with no prospects, brought up to hard work and privation, rough-mannered, rough-spoken, inured to the stoic life.  Has outgrown his faded denim cowboy shirt, his wrists stick well out of the sleeves, the buttons gap.

                    ENNIS
              (straightens the creases of the hat, sets it on his head)
          That's Signal, ain't it?

                    TRUCKER
              (no conversationalist)
          Was the last time I come this way.

[2004 screenplay]
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"T" is threesome
« Reply #13632 on: June 17, 2007, 05:11:40 pm »
When Hippie Girl 1 says: "You sure? (seductive) We love to share", it sounds like she is hinting at a threesome.
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"U" is ubiquitously
« Reply #13633 on: June 17, 2007, 05:14:59 pm »
The hippies, man and girls, have crept ubiquitously into the ABCs of Brokeback Mountain.

=aside= Players
At least three more hippie dippie letters!
Groovy!!
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"V" is Volkswagen's
« Reply #13634 on: June 17, 2007, 05:17:42 pm »
Poor Jack lost his hat while attempting to pull a rope around the Volkswagen's bumper.
« Last Edit: June 17, 2007, 05:24:04 pm by Fran »
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"W" is worshipping
« Reply #13635 on: June 17, 2007, 05:19:27 pm »
The hippies seemed to be worshipping Jack and Ennis as heroes, saying: "Hey, break bread with us, western heroes."
« Last Edit: June 17, 2007, 05:25:00 pm by Memento »
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"X" is xcises
« Reply #13636 on: June 17, 2007, 05:23:50 pm »
The deletion of the hippie scene xcises a clip where we could see Jack Twist lose his hat into the creek.
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Round 518 !!!!!!!!
« Reply #13637 on: June 17, 2007, 05:49:16 pm »
Round Five One Eight
Ang is Great

He knew what to cut.
Schamus did not.

Oops!
« Last Edit: June 17, 2007, 06:21:48 pm by Toast »
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« Reply #13638 on: June 17, 2007, 06:11:19 pm »
EXT:  CHILDRESS, TEXAS:  RODEO ARENA:  NIGHT (EVEN LATER STILL):  1966:
LUREEN, perfectly coiffed, the only female among a lot of ragged cowboys, happens to stand next to JACK.
Sideways look.  Likes him.

               PHOTOGRAPHER
     Say cheese.

JACK and LUREEN smile.  Flash goes off.

               LUREEN
     Mr. Twist, it was real nice of you to pick up my hat.  (smiles at him)

               JACK
          (genuinely abashed)
     No big deal... it just fell off practically in my lap.

LUREEN, direct, smiles again.

[2004 screenplay]
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"B" is blared
« Reply #13639 on: June 17, 2007, 09:42:10 pm »
That bearded, beaded hippie dippie blared rock music from his soggy VW van.
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