Author Topic: Zero at the Bone by MadLori  (Read 92150 times)

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Re: Zero at the Bone by MadLori
« Reply #200 on: November 27, 2007, 06:39:08 am »
Hot off the presses - Chapter 26!

http://community.livejournal.com/humaninterest/91742.html?view=2177886#t2177886


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OH.MY.GOD.


I agree. Oh. My. God.

I startled my boyfriend by yelling NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 :'( :'( :'(

God, this was the most intense chapter in any story in the entire fandom!  :o









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Re: Zero at the Bone by MadLori
« Reply #201 on: November 27, 2007, 01:45:19 pm »


          What Marie, and Mel said..it was very intense.. Boy oh boy.     LORI ROCKS
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Re: Zero at the Bone by MadLori
« Reply #202 on: November 28, 2007, 10:24:54 pm »
This story is just so awesome!  I waited to read this update until I was sure I could handle the intensity of it (given the warning about violence at the beginning).   The action in this was definitely intense and it wasn't predictable, which definitely kept me at the edge of my seat.  Can't wait for the conclusion.
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Re: Zero at the Bone by MadLori
« Reply #203 on: November 30, 2007, 01:17:35 am »
I was 3 hours late for work because I made the mistake of starting to read it at 8 in the morning!

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Re: Zero at the Bone by MadLori
« Reply #204 on: November 30, 2007, 08:01:56 am »

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Re: Zero at the Bone by MadLori
« Reply #205 on: November 30, 2007, 08:22:20 am »


            Very emotional .  Wonderful chapter.  I really love this story...



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Re: Zero at the Bone by MadLori
« Reply #206 on: November 30, 2007, 09:55:39 am »
SPOILER....








A grim little smile creased his lips as morning broke over Maryland…a smile that meant only one thing: that someone was going to be very, very sorry.



YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEHAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!  8)




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Re: Zero at the Bone by MadLori
« Reply #207 on: November 30, 2007, 11:54:09 am »
Chapter 27!!
http://community.livejournal.com/humaninterest/92354.html


Yeehaw!  Some more good reading to look forward to for the weekend!
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Re: Zero at the Bone by MadLori
« Reply #208 on: November 30, 2007, 03:55:08 pm »
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I really liked the rhythm of this chapter.  Yeah, we can take a quick breath, but there's still so much to be resolved. 

OMG, poor Megan.  She and D really are kindred spirits and I have to believe they'll always have a special place in each other's hearts. 

As much as it's a relief to see Jack in relative safety, it hurts to thnk of him as generic, ordinary, everyday Jack "Thompson" because he's none of those things.  But I know he won't give up on D.

And this made me feel so good:

“Hate ta think a him without that doctor bag.”

Yes!  D still has his plan (whatever it is) to make sure that Jack can return to his profession.  As he said to Megan:  “What I want is ta give him what he wants.”  

As always, can't wait for the next chapter!  I know he as to deal with the Brothers.  But how? 

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Re: Zero at the Bone by MadLori
« Reply #209 on: December 02, 2007, 03:34:52 am »


**Spoilers, etc.**

I loved this chapter (as usual with this story :) ).  Poor D crying his eyes out with Megen.  I totally love Megen she's just such an awesome character.  And, it's very reassuring to know that D has someone so loyal and so *good* at dealing with all of these situations to help him navigate all of this.  And, of course, it's also good that they're actually real, supportive friends for one another now (not anonymous text messages between X and D anymore).

The last line was awesome.  I agree Mel. 8)  I'm guessing we're all in for some more excitement soon to come.

I can't really figure out what D has in mind for the ultimate resolution to (1) getting back to being with Jack and (2) getting Jack his life back.  I really like that this story is so unpredictable.

Very smart.
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