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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #4040 on: December 15, 2008, 01:47:31 pm »


 He rode the horse hard to the campsite.
not wanting to be alone that night
The commute was long and tiring



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #4041 on: December 15, 2008, 04:45:37 pm »
He rode the horse hard to the campsite.
not wanting to be alone that night
The commute was long and tiring
but his need for once deciding

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #4042 on: December 15, 2008, 04:52:21 pm »

He rode the horse hard to the campsite.
not wanting to be alone that night
The commute was long and tiring
but his need for once deciding
In his beloved's arms, strong and tight.
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #4043 on: December 15, 2008, 08:56:38 pm »


     Love on the mountaintop, was strong.



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #4044 on: December 15, 2008, 10:06:55 pm »


Love on the mountaintop, was strong.
They owned the world and nothing seemed wrong
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #4045 on: December 15, 2008, 11:28:06 pm »




Love on the mountaintop, was strong.
They owned the world and nothing seemed wrong
A new kind of love, they found together there.



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #4046 on: December 16, 2008, 01:46:19 pm »
Love on the mountaintop, was strong.
They owned the world and nothing seemed wrong
A new kind of love, they found together there.
And the stories of their lives they did share
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #4047 on: December 16, 2008, 01:56:23 pm »
Love on the mountaintop, was strong.
They owned the world and nothing seemed wrong
A new kind of love, they found together there.
And the stories of their lives they did share
Up here, on Brokeback, they will always belong

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #4048 on: December 16, 2008, 08:56:42 pm »



     (that was one of our best efforts Imo)


                  Lets try


             Jack drove for many a mile.



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #4049 on: December 16, 2008, 09:36:12 pm »

Jack drove for many a mile
Wearing his blue parka, in high style
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