Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 4114713 times)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4330 on: May 07, 2009, 03:25:42 pm »
He passed the swingset on his way back in,
out of anger, he kicked an empty bin


Tell him when l come up to him and ask to play the record, l'm gonna say: ''Voulez-vous jouer ce disque?''
'Voulez-vous, will you kiss my dick?'
Will you play my record? One-track mind!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4331 on: May 07, 2009, 04:19:54 pm »
He passed the swingset on his way back in,
out of anger, he kicked an empty bin,
One glance at the stairwell,
A companion where none had been expected...

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4332 on: May 08, 2009, 01:54:17 pm »
He passed the swingset on his way back in,
out of anger, he kicked an empty bin,
One glance at the stairwell,
Made him think of the motel
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4333 on: May 09, 2009, 02:41:50 am »
He passed the swingset on his way back in,
out of anger, he kicked an empty bin,
One glance at the stairwell,
Made him think of the motel
And memories of just Jack and him.
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4334 on: May 09, 2009, 02:43:40 am »
He was stuck in this life of despair
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4335 on: May 09, 2009, 01:52:33 pm »
He was stuck in this life of despair
Where feeling happy was very rare
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4336 on: May 09, 2009, 06:39:52 pm »
He was stuck in this life of despair
Where feeling happy was very rare
He did have a choice
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4337 on: May 09, 2009, 06:58:52 pm »

He was stuck in this life of despair
Where feeling happy was very rare
He did have a choice
Trips with Jack a rejoice.



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4338 on: May 09, 2009, 07:09:31 pm »
He was stuck in this life of despair
Where feeling happy was very rare
He did have a choice
Trips with Jack a rejoice.
In a nice world things would be fair.
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4339 on: May 09, 2009, 07:47:49 pm »
"Life ain't fair," his father had often said
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain