Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3394275 times)

Offline underdown

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3840 on: October 21, 2008, 09:36:17 pm »
LD would pay for Jack to leave
And ensure that Lureen could be free
What a spell LD could weave

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3841 on: October 21, 2008, 09:44:48 pm »
Ok Ok ok....we have two running now.........

LD would pay for Jack to leave
And ensure that Lureen could be free
What a spell LD could weave


Lymeric.......first two lines rhyme.....2nd two lines rhyme......fifth line rhymes with first line.....

You got me all confused now Rob.......finish it off...... ::) ::)

Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3842 on: October 22, 2008, 02:34:45 pm »
Let me try this..  :)


LD would pay for Jack to leave;
What a spell he could weave
for his dear little gal's sake


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3843 on: October 22, 2008, 08:22:18 pm »
LD would pay for Jack to leave;
What a spell he could weave
for his dear little gal's sake
money at Jack he did shake


Tell him when l come up to him and ask to play the record, l'm gonna say: ''Voulez-vous jouer ce disque?''
'Voulez-vous, will you kiss my dick?'
Will you play my record? One-track mind!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3844 on: October 22, 2008, 08:49:57 pm »
LD would pay for Jack to leave;
What a spell he could weave
for his dear little gal's sake
money at Jack he did shake
He wouldn't hesitate to deceive
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3845 on: October 22, 2008, 08:50:51 pm »
Next:

Lureen was an only child
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3846 on: October 22, 2008, 09:12:42 pm »
Lureen was an only child
And in her teens she was pretty wild
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3847 on: October 22, 2008, 09:27:02 pm »
Lureen was an only child
And in her teens she was pretty wild
She was accustomed to getting her way
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3848 on: October 22, 2008, 11:05:12 pm »
Lureen was an only child
And in her teens she was pretty wild
She was accustomed to getting her way
Even who and when she wanted to lay
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3849 on: October 23, 2008, 07:18:57 pm »
Lureen was an only child
And in her teens she was pretty wild
She was accustomed to getting her way
Even who and when she wanted to lay
In her Daddy's car she got Jack all riled
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain