Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3352898 times)

Offline Katie77

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3340 on: December 07, 2007, 03:26:22 am »
Down from the mountain, they said good-bye
Ennis thought everything ended cockeyed.
Neither wanted this moment to end
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3341 on: December 07, 2007, 05:07:17 am »


Down from the mountain, they said good-bye
Ennis thought everything ended cockeyed.
Neither wanted this moment to end
The hope was broken on the descend




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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3342 on: December 07, 2007, 05:18:41 am »
Down from the mountain, they said good-bye
Ennis thought everything ended cockeyed.
Neither wanted this moment to end
The hope was broken on the descend
Back to the real world living a lie.


Four years went by, without a word

Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3343 on: December 07, 2007, 05:50:44 am »



Four years went by, without a word
From Ennis, Jack had never heard.







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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3344 on: December 07, 2007, 05:54:02 am »
Four years went by, without a word
From Ennis, Jack had never heard.
A postcard said "Im coming thru"

Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3345 on: December 07, 2007, 12:48:31 pm »
Four years went by, without a word
From Ennis, Jack had never heard.
A postcard said "Im coming thru,
Looking forward to seeing U"


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3346 on: December 07, 2007, 03:54:52 pm »



Four years went by, without a word
From Ennis, Jack had never heard.
A postcard said "Im coming thru,
Looking forward to seeing U"
To Ennis's door he then proffered

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        Aguirre asked Jack about "stemmin the rose"



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3347 on: December 07, 2007, 05:52:10 pm »
        Aguirre asked Jack about "stemmin the rose"
        And Jack was stunned, that someone knows,
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3348 on: December 07, 2007, 07:09:06 pm »


 Aguirre asked Jack about "stemmin the rose
 And Jack was stunned, that someone knows,
 He drove to Texas to try the Rodeo.



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3349 on: December 07, 2007, 10:15:25 pm »
Aguirre asked Jack about "stemmin the rose"
And Jack was stunned, that someone knows,
He drove to Texas to try the Rodeo.
Where he met Lureen, a cowgirl in the show


For how long? As long as we can ride it; ain't no reins on this one.