Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 4134960 times)

Offline Katie77

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3410 on: December 21, 2007, 06:42:35 am »
His father said, the ashes stay
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3411 on: December 21, 2007, 02:31:40 pm »
His father said, the ashes stay.
Poor Ennis was in utter dismay


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3412 on: December 21, 2007, 06:05:05 pm »
His father said, the ashes stay.
Poor Ennis was in utter dismay
They'll be buried in the family plot
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3413 on: December 21, 2007, 07:08:58 pm »
His father said, the ashes stay.
Poor Ennis was in utter dismay
They'll be buried in the family plot,
Ol' bastard, Ennis must've thought


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3414 on: December 21, 2007, 08:11:47 pm »
His father said, the ashes stay.
Poor Ennis was in utter dismay
They'll be buried in the family plot,
Ol' bastard, Ennis must've thought
He knew he had to make his way.
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3415 on: December 21, 2007, 08:13:51 pm »
The shirts, he knew, were his to keep
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It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3416 on: December 21, 2007, 08:51:40 pm »
The shirts, he knew, were his to keep;
he saw that Jack's love was deep


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3417 on: December 21, 2007, 09:04:22 pm »

He drove to the house in Lightening Flat
Near the grieving plain the house sat
He drank the coffee, but no cake
Took the shirts for loves sake.
Said good-bye and grabbed his hat

I like this one- you all did good ;)


For how long? As long as we can ride it; ain't no reins on this one.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3418 on: December 21, 2007, 09:09:43 pm »
The shirts, he knew, were his to keep;
he saw that Jack's love was deep
Jack hid those shirts in a manmade tomb


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3419 on: December 21, 2007, 09:42:02 pm »
The shirts, he knew, were his to keep;
he saw that Jack's love was deep
Jack hid those shirts in a manmade tomb
Tucked in a closet in his childhood room
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection