Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3290911 times)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3510 on: August 28, 2008, 07:43:41 pm »

Hidden by the stairs, not pausing for breath
Kissing each other a matter of life and death
Alma opened a door


Tell him when l come up to him and ask to play the record, l'm gonna say: ''Voulez-vous jouer ce disque?''
'Voulez-vous, will you kiss my dick?'
Will you play my record? One-track mind!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3511 on: August 28, 2008, 09:34:44 pm »
Hidden by the stairs, not pausing for breath
Kissing each other a matter of life and death
Alma opened a door
And she was shaken to the core

The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3512 on: August 28, 2008, 09:43:59 pm »

Hidden by the stairs, not pausing for breath
Kissing each other a matter of life and death
Alma opened a door
And she was shaken to the core
a tragic turn of events, like MacBeth


Tell him when l come up to him and ask to play the record, l'm gonna say: ''Voulez-vous jouer ce disque?''
'Voulez-vous, will you kiss my dick?'
Will you play my record? One-track mind!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3513 on: August 30, 2008, 12:37:04 am »
Oh, that MacBeth line is terrific! 


They came from opposite corners of the state
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3514 on: August 30, 2008, 08:51:46 am »


They came from opposite corners of the state

On Brokeback Mountain they met their fate
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3515 on: August 30, 2008, 02:10:19 pm »
They came from opposite corners of the state
On Brokeback Mountain they met their fate
Dizzy drunk late one night



The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3516 on: August 30, 2008, 05:48:24 pm »
They came from opposite corners of the state
On Brokeback Mountain they met their fate
Dizzy drunk late one night
The cuddled up together tight
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3517 on: August 31, 2008, 01:14:52 pm »

They came from opposite corners of the state
On Brokeback Mountain they met their fate
Dizzy drunk late one night
The cuddled up together tight
not realizing they found their life mate


Tell him when l come up to him and ask to play the record, l'm gonna say: ''Voulez-vous jouer ce disque?''
'Voulez-vous, will you kiss my dick?'
Will you play my record? One-track mind!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3518 on: August 31, 2008, 04:58:46 pm »
"I aint queer" he said to Jack
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It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3519 on: September 01, 2008, 10:10:52 am »

"I aint queer" he said to Jack
"Me neither," Jack answered straight back
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