Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3368326 times)

Offline gwyllion

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #6080 on: May 15, 2010, 10:49:21 pm »
To Brokeback they never returned,
Like Ennis said to Alma, "Once burned,"
A companion where none had been expected...

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #6081 on: May 17, 2010, 01:30:17 am »



To Brokeback they never returned,
Like Ennis said to Alma, "Once burned,"
The odds were never in their favor.



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #6082 on: May 17, 2010, 03:10:25 am »
To Brokeback they never returned,
Like Ennis said to Alma, "Once burned,"
Odds weren't in their favor.
If Ennis were braver,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #6083 on: May 18, 2010, 09:14:03 am »
To Brokeback they never returned,
Like Ennis said to Alma, "Once burned,"
Odds weren't in their favor.
If Ennis were braver,
or if Jack could a told him what he'd learned

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #6084 on: May 18, 2010, 11:19:41 am »
Ennis flew out the door to see Jack.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #6085 on: May 18, 2010, 11:24:50 am »
Ennis flew out the door to see Jack,
Couldn't wait to give his nice lips a smack,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #6086 on: May 18, 2010, 11:28:04 am »
Ennis flew out the door to see Jack,
Couldn't wait to give his nice lips a smack,
Took the steps at top speed

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #6087 on: May 18, 2010, 11:36:39 am »
Ennis flew out the door to see Jack,
Couldn't wait to give his nice lips a smack,
Took the steps at top speed,
Let his heart take the lead,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #6088 on: May 18, 2010, 11:52:01 am »
Ennis flew out the door to see Jack,
Couldn't wait to give his nice lips a smack,
Took the steps at top speed,
Let his heart take the lead,
In a flash Jack was kissing him back.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #6089 on: May 18, 2010, 12:56:32 pm »


  Ennis flew out the door to see Jack,
  Couldn't wait to give his nice lips a smack,
  Took the steps at top speed,
  Let his heart take the lead,
  In a flash Jack was kissing him back.
   

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