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Brokeback Mountain: Our Community's Common Bond => Brokeback Mountain Fan Fiction & Poetry => Topic started by: Toycoon on June 07, 2007, 11:22:02 pm

Title: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on June 07, 2007, 11:22:02 pm
Howdy Cowboys and Cowgirls! Welcome to the exciting board game, Jack With Ennis in it's new home, BetterMost, Wyoming!

The rules to play are easy: Compose a steamy fanfic about Jack with Ennis in three sentences. The sentences can be as long or as short as you like but they should be grammatically correct. Now is your chance to reveal your innermost, personal desires for our favorite cowpokes. Make it hot and sexy!

Don't be shy and please put the title of your creation in the subject line so we can find the new story among the comments and assorted postings.
Title: Dancing with Jack
Post by: Toycoon on June 07, 2007, 11:25:23 pm
He never was much for dancing, not much rhythm, but Ennis sure did like to watch Jack, shaking his butt and woopin' around while drinkin', listening to the transistor and sitting on the porch at Don Rowe's cabin under the full moon.

When Sam Cook came on over the radio, it was as though Jack had been electrocuted because he sprung up, yanked Ennis out of his chair and yelled, " This is my favorite song! "

Ennis was thankful it was a slow number because it gave him a chance to rub his smooth chest against Jack's hairy chest and find the rhythm that a full moon can coax out of a man.
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: THE WINGS on June 07, 2007, 11:32:22 pm
Toycoon:  Simply beautiful!  I can just see the both of them, under the moon, enjoying some moments of complete bliss. 

Thanks for this!

THE WINGS  (Doug)
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 08, 2007, 03:13:51 am
Toycoon, WHAT A START!

Thanks for that beautiful scene...I love Jack shaking his butt, and the image of our beloved boys embracing in a slow dance...meltingly beautiful!

Hi Gary, did you get my PM? How good to see you!

SUSIE where are you? Don´t tell me you missed the start! I´m yearning for your stories!

Dagi
Title: Re: Two Hearts
Post by: Toycoon on June 08, 2007, 09:09:14 am
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Ennis gathered him up into his arms, “Jack Fu ckin Twist! Never figured you for a romantic fool!”

It's funny that we think of Jack as the romantic in the relationship, he saved the shirts and all, but I often think it's Ennis that is the more sentimental of the two. Ennis is the one that has the breakdown when Jack declares "Brokeback Mountain" as something in the past that they once had. Ennis, can't stop thinking about it.

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Jack Twist was right, no matter where they were, in this life or the next, they would always be together.

Gorgeous writing and so original, Susiebell, you Devil Doll! Very sweet of you to dedicate your first story to our boy, Gary.


Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: loneleeb3 on June 08, 2007, 09:21:36 am
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Love you Jack. If I could hold you in my arms right now, you'd know that.”,

Oh Susie, thats a beautiful story!
Got tears of my own now.
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: mariez on June 08, 2007, 12:29:35 pm
Oh, wow - these are just great.  I can see that this thread is going to be addictive! 

Thanks for sharing - I'm looking foward to more.  :)

Marie
Title: Never Really Apart
Post by: malina on June 08, 2007, 01:52:32 pm
This is thanks to Daphne and Susie. I was nostalgically reading over old threads on IMDB following our mass exodus. And I came upon Daphne's beautiful “Private Moments” thread, and Susie's response,  the last before a string of 'deletes'. The idea of 'Private Moments' is... what do we wish they had each been able to see the other do, and what do we wish could have happened. Susie said: “I wish Ennis had swiveled around and held Jack face to face”.

And... I feel out of practice and rusty...


It always tugged at Jack's heart when Ennis left. He knew it was just for the night, and that they couldn't leave them damn sheep alone on the mountain with the coyotes, more greedy than ever now that fall was approaching. Still, every time Jack watched Ennis ride off in the dusk on Cigar Butt, that little edge of fear twisted inside him... thinkin', what if this is the night Ennis changes his mind? What if somethin' happens to him up there and he don't come back down at all? Foolish thoughts, and Jack tried to keep on top a them ... still, always hard ta see Ennis leavin', even just for the night.

This night in August was different. Tired from a full day of wrasslin' those woolies around, not to mention wrasslin' with his man, Jack felt every muscle in his body relax as he stared dreaming at the fire. He breathed in smoke an' mountain air and felt his eyes close to the sounds of Ennis gatherin' up stuff preparin' to go. This night, didn't even feel bad that Ennis was goin. He'd be on the same mountain, after all. Brokeback joined them, Jack thought, half dozing. Never really apart, both a them on Brokeback. Jack stood, sleepin' on his feet like a horse, feeling that whole mountain as part of his body and his heart. Ennis wasn't really leavin', even when he rode off.

Eyes still closed, Jack felt strong arms come around him from behind, like to confirm his thoughts. He felt Ennis's breath on his shoulder and humming his ear. He felt Ennis rock him and whisper a bit, leaned against the steady heartbeat, felt the lonely place inside him filled for good. Never really apart, he thought again, thinkin' he'd say the words out loud but next second forgetting to. Felt like Ennis heard him in any case.

Ennis mumbled 'gotta go', his hand clutching Jack's coat one final time as if not wantin' to pull away. He turned slightly, looked at  Jack's face in the dozy firelight, and all his resolve was gone. Facing Jack, seeing Jack's blue eyes open sleepily and search his face, Ennis pulled him close again, face to face this time, feeling Jack's arms close around him, too, and next second, Jack's slightly parted lips warm against his own. Never really apart, Ennis thought, feelin' like the mountain could stretch out into all of time and space an' keep on being home.
Title: Re: Two Hearts
Post by: malina on June 08, 2007, 02:00:20 pm

“Love you Jack. If I could hold you in my arms right now, you'd know that.”, he ran his thumb over the old carving, hearing Jack's voice, hardly a whisper, drifting into his mind, the words “S’alright, s’alright”, comforting him; “I Gotta go”, he said quietly, wiping away a few stray tears and climbing back into the saddle; Jack Twist was right, no matter where they were, in this life or the next, they would always be together. 


Susie... so beautiful...  :'(
Title: Re: Dancing with Jack
Post by: malina on June 08, 2007, 02:03:20 pm
He never was much for dancing, not much rhythm, but Ennis sure did like to watch Jack, shaking his butt and woopin' around while drinkin', listening to the transistor and sitting on the porch at Don Rowe's cabin under the full moon.

When Sam Cook came on over the radio, it was as though Jack had been electrocuted because he sprung up, yanked Ennis out of his chair and yelled, " This is my favorite song! "

Ennis was thankful it was a slow number because it gave him a chance to rub his smooth chest against Jack's hairy chest and find the rhythm that a full moon can coax out of a man.

Toycoon... perfect. I remember a version of this from long ago, I think.. I don't know if you've changed it or not, but the way it is right now is... perfect like a full moon is perfect!
Title: The Ad
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 08, 2007, 03:44:18 pm
I found this story on my hard drive and thought I would post it here.  It is one of my favorites!

Ennis Del Mar walked into his too hot trailer after a long day at the ranch. He was feeling a bit more human these days, especially after having completed a full day of back-breaking labor. Ennis was a man who felt pride at doing an honest day's work to feed himself and his children.

Ennis dropped his thermos and gloves onto his battered couch. He would look around his fridge for something to eat later. That is, unless Cassie came over uninvited with a tuna casserole in both hands. He wasn't that hungry, anyway. A full day of work usually took his appetite clean away.

Perhaps a bit of TV was in order. Ennis reached over to his little coffee table and turned on his black and white 19in television. The reception out there at the park was poor, and he had to adjust the rabbit ears to get the channels in clear. He turned the dial in an attempt to find something good to watch. Nothing on. Until...could it be? Ennis saw a man that looked a lot like Jack, and he was standing outside what seemed to be a car dealership. Ennis shook his head in disbelief as he realized that the man in the commercial was indeed Jack Twist! Jack stood next to a monstrous combine and gave his spiel about Newsome motors being the best in town, blah, blah, blah. Ennis watched transfixed at the sight! Jack Twist was looking mighty fine in a grey looking resistol, dark suit coat, jeans. He had on snakeskin boots and his mustache looked newly waxed. Ennis wondered how much Mr. Newsome spent to have the ad placed in so many markets. And he was amazed that Jack's father- in- law would allow him to represent the company. But those thoughts flew from Ennis' mind when his gaze moved down to Jack's tight jeans. He couldn't remember a word of what Jack said, but he would never forget the beauty of his lover, or the rise of desire he felt down below.
Title: Let's Go Away
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 08, 2007, 03:47:51 pm
This is a fragment of  tale that I posted as a continuation of one of Toycoon's fics.  I guess it makes sense on its own?


Jack felt a slight tremor wash over him as he heard Ennis' admission: "And I missed you!" Jack never thought in a million years that Ennis would say such a thing! Jack snuggled Ennis closer, careful not to irritate his already bruised lips.

"You think we can get away for a bit, friend?" Jack whispered, his eyes twinkling at the prospect of a few days alone with his lover. "Call Alma now. Make up something.. anything. Let's go away for a spell. We can hunt, fish, make love, do whatever you want! Just be with me!"

Ennis was silent as he considered Jack's proposal. He couldn't just up and leave his family on such short notice, could he? And what about work? When Jack reached down and tenderly palmed his manhood, licked the shaft with an eager tongue, he almost hated Jack for using his sex to persuade him! However, once Jack encircled him with his mouth, Ennis reached for the phone...
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: ifyoucantfixit on June 08, 2007, 03:48:05 pm


        I love this thread!!  Thanks for bringing it to us at Bettermost.  Its like a cousin to our Drabblefest.
We will all love it and try and participate when the mood strikes...Maybe another day..I will give it a whirl..
Love all the talent and enery you are all bringing here...sure enough.                      janice
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 08, 2007, 03:49:28 pm
Malina, thank you for this perfect moment.Reading it I completely forgot about everything around me. It is always worth to wait for your stories, you know?

Dagi  :-*
Title: Sweet Tooth
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 08, 2007, 03:51:33 pm
Yet another fragment that I found saved to my hard drive.  I hope this one makes sense on it's own?

Ennis released Jack and felt a stirring, a gust rising to a whirlwind of desire. He had an idea. "Hey Jack, still got that sweet tooth?" To say that Jack Twist was surprised..well..he never knew Ennis to take the initiative, be creative, or even suggest that they "do it." Jack knew what Ennis meant and croaked, "Oh hell yeah, Cowboy! What you got?"

Their bedroom was all rustic splendor with a bed sturdy enough to support the wrestling of two well built young men. Ennis spread the sheets and patted Jack's side of the bed. "Come, lie here, Bud. Trust me." Jack climbed onto his side of the bed and when prone closed his eyes in anticipation. "I trust you, Cowboy!"

Ennis gently spread Jack's thighs and very tenderly anointed his love with chocolate syrup. When the slurping and smacking began, Jack gripped and tore the sheets, barely able to preserve his sanity. "What has gotten into you, Ennis Del Mar?" Ennis didn't answer as Jack convulsed and then relaxed....
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 08, 2007, 03:53:49 pm
However, once Jack encircled him with his mouth, Ennis reached for the phone...

Poor Alma, imagine Ennis talking to her while Jack...have mercy on her!

Dagi
Title: Reflexology
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 08, 2007, 03:54:53 pm
Toycoon, sorry this one exceeds the 3 paragraph rule, but you don't mind if I repost, do you?


Gary, Clyde-B, I am dedicating this story to the 2 of you. I hope you both enjoy it!

Jack drove 14 hours to meet up with Ennis at Don Wroe's cabin. And as usual, he didn't give it a second thought. He was reminded of a poem that Lureen loved: a sweeping, epic rhyme that he believed was titled, "The Highwayman." Jack pondered his 14 hour treks whenever Lureen was in a poetic mood and read aloud:

Look for me by moonlight,
Watch for me by moonlight!
I'll come to thee by moonlight,
Though hell should bar the way!

Jack vowed that as long as he was breathing, he would find his way to Ennis, even if the gates of hell itself stood in his way. Jack felt guilty when he thought of Lureen. She had no way of knowing that a poem she loved so much held such a secret, special meaning for him. Poor Lureen!

He had a surprise for his lover: a certain something that he knew Ennis would like, but he was fearful, almost embarassed, not sure how Ennis would react to the treat that he had in store for him! Jack climbed the steps to the threshold of Don Wroe's cabin, fettered with a travel duffle, extra food (Ennis promised to bring the bulk of the vittles) and an additional bag that housed the surprise.

Jack found Ennis sprawled asleep on the overstuffed couch. His legs were spread wide, his fair hair plastered across his high forehead. Jack felt the old, familiar stirrings just gazing at his beloved, but he cast the feelings aside. After all, they had all week to be together. Jack decided to let Ennis sleep while he put his things away. Once his gear was safely in one of the bedrooms, Jack reached into his extra bag and fetched a mat: a yoga mat, to be exact, and placed it on the floor in front of the couch were Ennis was still sound asleep. He arranged his tools in a neat row in front of the mat and sat very still, closed his eyes.

Ennis woke with a start when Jack, growing impatient, rubbed the soles of his feet with a delicate hand.

"Hey Bud, Ennis began, as he wiped the sleep from his beautiful eyes. "When did you get in?" Ennis looked down at Jack's feet and noticed the mat, a small book, a bottle that contained an oily looking liquid. Jack was sitting in a strange position with one leg crossed over the other.

"Jack, what is going on?" Ennis asked, incredulous. "What's with all that stuff? How long have you been here?"

"So many questions, Cowyboy!" Jack began as he palmed Ennis' right ankle. "I just got in about 15 minutes ago. I thought I would put my stuff away and let you sleep for a few more minutes. You have a good rest?"

"Yes, thanks. But what is all this?" Ennis asked, as he pointed to Jack's gear.

"Listen, Bud, I want to do something for you. Don't be creeped out. This is very natural and healing. You'll like it, and I'm sure you'll benefit from it. Just stay where you are and be still." Jack uncrossed his legs and reached for the oil. "I wanted to have the technique memorized, but I haven't had the time. I'm going to give you a foot massage. It's called reflexology."

"Reflex what?" Ennis laughed as he shook his head. "Is that supposed to do something?"

"Yeah, it's supposed to do something, you ass!" Jack, testy now. "Look, just hold on and let me begin. You won't want me to stop when I get goin'" Ennis shrugged and let Jack begin his minsitrations. He oiled Ennis' left foot with a liberal dose of the lotion. "Now I'm going to work on your liver," Jack began as he massaged circles on Ennis' sole.

"Ahhhhhhhh Budddd...that is so good!" Ennis almost passed out from the pleasure of Jack's massage. He had never been touched on his feet by anyone, ever. Jack's gift for nuturing never ceased to amaze Ennis. he allowed himself to be pampered. Jack continued the massage on the other foot. By the time he had finished, Ennis was sound asleep. Jack chuckled and put his tools away. He would have Ennis return the favor - that was for sure! As he folded his mat and placed the gear back into his bag, Jack thought about the hippies who stopped by his office one December evening. They were a married couple who were passing through Childress, but had car trouble and were lost, cold and hungry. Jack fed them, provided a few hours of warmth and had his mechanics fix their Volkwagon Bus. And in return, the couple left him with the yoga mat, the oil and a book on how to perform reflexology. What better way to put the gear to use than to treat Ennis Del Mar? Jack changed his clothes, got cleaned up and started supper. They would eat good that night. And after the main course, the dessert...

Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 08, 2007, 03:56:02 pm
However, once Jack encircled him with his mouth, Ennis reached for the phone...

Poor Alma, imagine Ennis talking to her while Jack...have mercy on her!

Dagi

I will, Sweetie!  :)
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 08, 2007, 03:56:52 pm
Ennis gently spread Jack's thighs and very tenderly anointed his love with chocolate syrup

If I had been Ennis, I would have anointed myself with chocolate syrup  :laugh: !
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 08, 2007, 03:59:45 pm
Hey littlewing, I´m still waiting for my sequel  ;D!
Title: The Rain
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 08, 2007, 04:02:04 pm
Under willows encircled with ivy
We take cover in blustery weather
My arms are wreathed about you,
In my rain cape we huddle together

I was wrong, my love, not ivy
But hops encircle this willow.
Well then, let’s spread in its shelter
My cape for a rug and a pillow.
                        -Boris Pasternak


Ennis enjoyed the rain.  He remembers listening to the soft whisper of rain drops when he was a boy, and craving the dewy feel of rain on his forehead.  On Brokeback the rains came often -  Rain as heavy as beaded curtains, flowing, dancing in the wind.

Jack Twist hated the rain, cursed the wind, the wet!  He loathed herding sheep in the rain.  Ennis knew this and thought he should carve a little something for his friend, perhaps a small dog?  Jack Twist always loved a small dog.

The tent was warm enough, and the view out of the tent flap of all that glorious rain!  The small dog was coming along fine, but Ennis missed Jack.  When the wind calmed down a bit, he would perhaps surprise his mate with a bottle of whiskey, a small dog and a cape big enough for two.
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 08, 2007, 04:03:39 pm
Littlewing, could you please repost My hand in hisPLEASE?
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 08, 2007, 04:10:06 pm
Littlewing, could you please repost My hand in hisPLEASE?

I don't have it, Dagi!  I 'll look through some of the reposted J&E threads over at the other Board.  I'm kicking myself that I didn't save everything! :'(

By the way, Dagi - is that a pic of you?  You're very lovely!  :)
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 08, 2007, 04:22:16 pm
Littlewing, I can comfort you: I have it on paper. I can type it anew if you don´t have it! Not today, but I will post it in your name if that´s allright.

And yes, of course it´s me. Thank you! I sure would like to see a pic of yours! You have my email, if you feel like letting me know...

Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 08, 2007, 04:25:23 pm
Littlewing, I can comfort you: I have it on paper. I can type it anew if you don´t have it! Not today, but I will post it in your name if that´s allright.

And yes, of course it´s me. Thank you! I sure would like to see a pic of yours! You have my email, if you feel like letting me know...



Thanks, Dagi!  Yes, please repost whenever you get to it.  No rush!  I'm going to post my pics when I can download them to my computer.  I'll also send you some!  :)
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 08, 2007, 04:55:20 pm
Just a quickie to Dagi and Littlewing,

I have all the stories on Word, so I'll dig out "My hand in His" and pm it to you littlewing.
Looks like I have a lot of reading to do!


I'll be back later



Susie xox (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

That's right!  Susie, you're my girl!  May I send you requests for reposts?  :)
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on June 08, 2007, 05:18:33 pm
Susiebell---Looks like friends with chocolate are on the thread with ya now!! LOL.   ;)

Whooo-Wheee!!! Thanks for starting up a new thread for Jack and Ennis on Bettermost, Toycoon!!! I always read; just don't post much. I'll try to now and then when I can think of sump'n.  


The Strawberry Roan


"..............He's about the worst bucker I've seen on the range
He'll turn on a Nickel and give you some change
He hits on all fours and goes up on high
Leaves me a spinnin' up there in the sky
I turns over twice and I comes back to earth
I lights in a cussin' the day of his birth
I know there are ponies that I cannot ride
There's some of them left, they haven't all died.

I'll bet all my money, the man ain't alive
That'll stay with Old Strawberry
When he makes his high diiiiiiiiiiiiive."

Ennis sat back as he finished the song, his gravelly voice holding the last note a little longer than Marty Robbins would have.

"Ennis," drawled Jack, "that's a pretty fair rendition of that particular lyric."

Ennis, watching intently as Jack tossed another chunk of wood on the campfire,  emitted a noncommittal grunt at what he hoped was a compliment from his new buddy.
Title: Silent Confessions
Post by: Lumière on June 08, 2007, 05:47:25 pm
What a great idea for a thread.  :)



Silent Confessions...


Ennis looked lovingly at Jack’s resting form – his breathing was steady and soft, and his face was as peaceful as that of a sleeping child.

“My little darlin’,” he whispered, snuggling closer into Jack before draping a protective arm around him...how easy it was to let go of the words when he was certain that Jack was asleep.

Soon, Ennis fell into sweet slumber; Jack opened his eyes slowly and kissed his lover’s lips lightly, “I love you too,” he said softly, drawing the sleeping man into his arms.
Title: The Night After
Post by: Cameron on June 08, 2007, 06:49:22 pm
Hey there all of you!!!!  So glad you are all here!!!!   It's been a long, long time since I tried this game, mind if I join in?

Here'a a real short one to get started....

The Night After


Ennis looked up at the stars.  The night was clear, the moon were bright.  The sheep were crying and singing all around him.  The night was warm just like the last night had been.

Ennis closed his eyes.  He was back in the tent, back in Jack’s warm arms.  He could feel it all again, Jack’s warm lips on his trembling lips , Jack’s hands traveling all over him, sending sparks of fire all through him.  He had been so nervous, but it all became so sweet.

Ennis opened his eyes.  He looked back up at the stars.  He could feel their distant fire and warmth.  He looked down the mountain, he could see Jack’s campfire.  A wave of desire swept over him.
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Lumière on June 08, 2007, 06:54:09 pm

Great short story, Marl! 

Fancy seeing you here!  8)


Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Cameron on June 08, 2007, 07:01:33 pm
Thank you so much, Susie!!!  :)

Thank you M, fancy seeing you over here too. ;)

Marl
Title: My Hand in His
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 08, 2007, 08:25:24 pm
Littlewing, I can comfort you: I have it on paper. I can type it anew if you don´t have it! Not today, but I will post it in your name if that´s allright.

And yes, of course it´s me. Thank you! I sure would like to see a pic of yours! You have my email, if you feel like letting me know...



This is for you, Dagi!  Oh, and you, as well, Susie!  Susie, thanks so much for saving this and sending it on to me.  You're the best!

He held my hand. He didn’t want to let go. Did he sense that our time together on Brokeback was coming to an end? Jack Twist took my hand one day, led me over streams and through fields, my hand in his, his hand in mine. We washed our bodies and our clothes holding hands, cooked with hands intertwined, ate with our hands clasped. One time Jack Twist even brought my palm to his mouth, kissed it tenderly, but didn’t let go. There we stood, face to face, Jack kissing the front and the back of my hand. My hand in his, his hand in mine. These days I am always drawn back to that time, see the two us standing watching the sunset, standing there with clasped hands. My hand in his, his hand in mine.

Title: Re: The Old Spark
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 08, 2007, 08:29:07 pm
This is one of my favourites from Jack with Ennis, hope you like it too



The Old Spark

“Gonna snow t’night for sure” Jack was looking up at the sky, thick black clouds looming overhead, air so cold it was sending out streams of mist with every breath.  The two elderly men sat rocking on the porch swing, Jack’s hair white as snow, belly popping out over his jeans,  Ennis bald but for a few fine wisps, still lean, although a little softer round the edges.  They passed the Old Rose back and forth between them, enjoying the peace and quiet of the evening.

“Now this is what I call a sweet life, old friend” Jack commented, his voice a little deeper and huskier these days.  “Less of the ‘old’ there bud!  I may be 73 but I could still pin you down on this porch if I wanted to” Ennis chuckled, not sure his knees would survive the hard wooden boards.  “I’d like to see you try” Jack retorted, starting a mock tussle, laughing and wheezing and giving up after five minutes.

“Maybe not” admitted Ennis.  “Tell you what, Ennis Del Mar, you can pin me down any time you want!” Jack flashed him a sly grin, settling back down on the swing and taking another swig from the bottle.  “Jack, I swear…” Ennis smiled, taking Jack’s hand and weaving their fingers together, bringing it up to his lips, kissing it softly and placing it onto his lap.




Susie xox 8)


Ah, Susie, you've posted another of my favorites!  I really thank the good people here for allowing us to share our fic!  Susie, this reads even better the 2nd, 3rd time around.  Lovely, lovely, lovely, as always!  :)
Title: Re: Sweet Tooth
Post by: Toycoon on June 08, 2007, 08:33:51 pm
Yay! Littlewing1957, I love the chocolate syrup story! Hot, sweet and sticky!
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 08, 2007, 08:35:44 pm
Ennis gently spread Jack's thighs and very tenderly anointed his love with chocolate syrup

If I had been Ennis, I would have anointed myself with chocolate syrup  :laugh: !

Same here, Dagi!  :laugh:
Title: Re: Reflexology
Post by: Toycoon on June 08, 2007, 08:37:14 pm
Toycoon, sorry this one exceeds the 3 paragraph rule, but you don't mind if I repost, do you?

When Jack encircles Ennis with his mouth, you know I can get talked into just about anything!
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 08, 2007, 08:37:43 pm

Abso -flippin-lutely my dear littlewing!!


Susie xox  8)

Ah, thanks, baby!  :D
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 08, 2007, 08:40:09 pm
Susiebell---Looks like friends with chocolate are on the thread with ya now!! LOL.   ;)

Whooo-Wheee!!! Thanks for starting up a new thread for Jack and Ennis on Bettermost, Toycoon!!! I always read; just don't post much. I'll try to now and then when I can think of sump'n.  


The Strawberry Roan


"..............He's about the worst bucker I've seen on the range
He'll turn on a Nickel and give you some change
He hits on all fours and goes up on high
Leaves me a spinnin' up there in the sky
I turns over twice and I comes back to earth
I lights in a cussin' the day of his birth
I know there are ponies that I cannot ride
There's some of them left, they haven't all died.

I'll bet all my money, the man ain't alive
That'll stay with Old Strawberry
When he makes his high diiiiiiiiiiiiive."

Ennis sat back as he finished the song, his gravelly voice holding the last note a little longer than Marty Robbins would have.

"Ennis," drawled Jack, "that's a pretty fair rendition of that particular lyric."

Ennis, watching intently as Jack tossed another chunk of wood on the campfire,  emitted a noncommittal grunt at what he hoped was a compliment from his new buddy.


Superb, Shasta!  I so enjoyed reading this!  I'd almost forgotten how good you are at this!  Please do it again!   :)
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on June 08, 2007, 08:41:42 pm
Holy Crap!  This thread just got started and it's already four pages, I'm falling behind!
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 08, 2007, 08:44:17 pm
Hi there littlewing,

Thanks so much for reposting some of your stories from IMDb.  Gosh, now it's really starting to feel like home.  And your stories read just as good over here as over there.   :D  I recall all of them fondly, except one.  I don't recall ever reading the one about the chocolate syrup.  I must have missed that one.  But it's very sweet to find it here.  MMMM  I love chocolate.

I got all nervous when toycoon was stressing his three line rule.  So I reposted one of my stories, Cleanliness Is Next To Godliness, in it's own thread.  And now that I see that everyone is going ahead and posting their longer stuff here I feel all pretentious and snobbish starting my own thread.   :(

Gary


P.S.  I think I'm starting to get used to this place.

Hey, Gary, Baby!  Thanks for your kind words.  I'm kind of afraid of violating Toycoon's 3 paragraph rules, as well.  But I never thought about posting long stories as a thread.  I'm sure its alright with everyone here!  Don't feel snobbish starting your own thread.  I'm sure others are enjoying it, as well!  I'm glad you're feeling more at home.   :)
Title: The Strawberry Roan
Post by: Toycoon on June 08, 2007, 08:45:42 pm
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Whooo-Wheee!!! Thanks for starting up a new thread for Jack and Ennis on Bettermost, Toycoon!!! I always read; just don't post much. I'll try to now and then when I can think of sump'n.


Shasta254, my sugar plum! I'm delighted to start this new thread on BetterMost and I'm thrilled that you've written a brand, spanking new story. I hope the BetterMost regulars are enjoying our gift of prose as much as we like sharing it with them. C'mon, ya shy wallflowers, jump right in. We won't bite (hard)!

Title: Re: Silent Confessions
Post by: Toycoon on June 08, 2007, 08:50:41 pm
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“My little darlin’,” he whispered, snuggling closer into Jack before draping a protective arm around him...how easy it was to let go of the words when he was certain that Jack was asleep.

Splendid, and quite elegant.

Ennis, oh Ennis, if you only knew....
Title: Re: The Night After
Post by: Toycoon on June 08, 2007, 09:34:28 pm
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  He could feel it all again, Jack’s warm lips on his trembling lips , Jack’s hands traveling all over him, sending sparks of fire all through him.  He had been so nervous, but it all became so sweet.

Sexy and sweet, Cameron. It sounds like you got the hang of it to me!
Title: Re: My Hand in His
Post by: Toycoon on June 08, 2007, 09:39:42 pm
Littlewing1957, that is so wonderful! I don't remember that one the first time around. Thank goodness, Dagi saved it for us.

You are the mistress of the tough and tender. Salute!
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Cameron on June 08, 2007, 09:44:24 pm
Thank you so much, Toycoon!!!!!  :)
Title: Re: Reflexology
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 09, 2007, 12:06:58 am
When Jack encircles Ennis with his mouth, you know I can get talked into just about anything!

That's what I'm talkin' about, Toycoon!  :D
Title: Re: Silent Confessions
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 09, 2007, 12:08:22 am
What a great idea for a thread.  :)



Silent Confessions...


Ennis looked lovingly at Jack’s resting form – his breathing was steady and soft, and his face was as peaceful as that of a sleeping child.

“My little darlin’,” he whispered, snuggling closer into Jack before draping a protective arm around him...how easy it was to let go of the words when he was certain that Jack was asleep.

Soon, Ennis fell into sweet slumber; Jack opened his eyes slowly and kissed his lover’s lips lightly, “I love you too,” he said softly, drawing the sleeping man into his arms.


Gorgeous writing!  Thanks for posting!  :)
Title: Re: The Ad
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 09, 2007, 12:09:53 am
Littlewing my dear,

I want to comment on all your stories seperately, but I don't want to clag up the thread.  I love all of them you know that.

"The Ad" is so wonderfully original, I can just picture the surprise and delight at seeing Jack on TV looking mighty fine!! 

I love "Lets Go Away" with Jack using his manly wiles on Ennis (I have no problem with that ... I've done it myself in one of my stories ... don't like it when Alma does it though!!)

The "Sweet Tooth" ... OMG what I wouldn't do to swap places with Ennis .... Jack/Jake AND chocolate ... my favourite combination!

The "Reflexology" ... I'm unbearably ticklish on my feet but I'd be willing to let Jack give it a go!  Very sexy story!

"The Rain" is just so tender and romantic.


Love em all, littlewing, you have such a talent for this.


Love Susie xox (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Thanks Susie, Baby!  You are so sweet!  :D
Title: Re: My Hand in His
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 09, 2007, 12:13:06 am
Littlewing1957, that is so wonderful! I don't remember that one the first time around. Thank goodness, Dagi saved it for us.

You are the mistress of the tough and tender. Salute!

Why thanks, Sweets!  :)
Title: Last One In...
Post by: Toycoon on June 09, 2007, 01:06:27 am
The smell of sweat, whiskey, shame and cigarettes permeated the air; adultery and sound of silence in the cab of Ennis' pick up truck was nearly deafening until they pulled up to the edge of the cliff above the lake.

They threw open the doors then cowboy hats, boots, pants and inhibitions went flying in every direction; Jack jumped first and yelled, "Last one in is a rotten..." SPLASH!

Their lips and their naked bodies came together with a hard, wet slap.
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 09, 2007, 02:03:47 am
OMFG this thread is the best!!

And the fastest, I´m already falling behind!

Littlewing, you know I love all of your stories, the tough ones and the tender ones!!

Yes, Shasta, do it again!

Lucise, that was so sweet and so much JackandEnnis, just beautiful! Looking forward to reading more!

Gary, please post Turnabout here! And don´t you dare cut it into pieces to fit the rule!

Cameron, beautiful writing, go on, we want more!

Susie, The Old spark - I don´t know what to say...so beautiful, so much our "boys"  ;D even when they are 73! You are brilliant.

Toycoon, you are also the master of surprise!

Now I really have to take a Kugelschreiber and a paper and ignore my children and husband and think of something.
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on June 09, 2007, 08:30:35 am
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OMFG this thread is the best!!

And the fastest, I´m already falling behind!

Littlewing, you know I love all of your stories, the tough ones and the tender ones!!

Yes, Shasta, do it again!

Lucise, that was so sweet and so much JackandEnnis, just beautiful! Looking forward to reading more!

Gary, please post Turnabout here! And don´t you dare cut it into pieces to fit the rule!

Cameron, beautiful writing, go on, we want more!

Susie, The Old spark - I don´t know what to say...so beautiful, so much our "boys"   even when they are 73! You are brilliant.

Toycoon, you are also the master of surprise!

Now I really have to take a Kugelschreiber and a paper and ignore my children and husband and think of something.

 :) Sweet, Dagi!! I think you should be the official reviewer!! Oh, and what is a Kugelschreiber? A bubble bath?  ???
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Lumière on June 09, 2007, 10:48:24 am

This is quite the fun-filled thread!!
Thanks for the wonderful comments, everyone!   ;)
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 09, 2007, 02:55:01 pm
I thank you, Gary. I love this story. As I told you before, it strikes me as so honest. I read it twice and will add it to my little private collection, if you don´t mind, my friend.  Merr once said to me "when I read your mails, I can feel you". Gary, when I read your stories, I can feel you.
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 09, 2007, 03:10:28 pm
 :P

Title: Re: Missed You Part 2
Post by: Dagi on June 09, 2007, 03:33:54 pm
“I’m not finished with you yet, Jack Twist.... I'm just getting warmed up!”
Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Susie, I love this line. Don´t know why  :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

Sorry ´bout makin you cry, I don´t know what´s going on with me that I always write those "Ennis is sad and lonely"-Stories. In both the shortstory and the movie I relate so much more to Jack, but Ennis´ loneliness doesn´t go out of my head.
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 09, 2007, 03:38:44 pm
  :) Sweet, Dagi!! I think you should be the official reviewer!!

Shasta, that would be an honor! And reviewing is so much easier than writing.... :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: David In Indy on June 09, 2007, 03:46:09 pm
This is very good everyone! I really enjoy reading it.  :D

You all are very good writers!
Title: Re: The Sun
Post by: Toycoon on June 09, 2007, 04:23:35 pm
Dagi,
That was a beautiful story. So very sad but still beautiful all the same.
You've really got a talent for making me cry (and Ennis, too).
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on June 09, 2007, 04:28:18 pm
This is very good everyone! I really enjoy reading it.  :D

You all are very good writers!

Thanks, David-Indiana.
I gave your ABC game a shot but Ellemeno kept trumping me! She's already got more sheep than God!
Say, are you gonna write us a sexy fanfic here or what!? I know you've got something hot and steamy brewing up there! Let's have a look at it...
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 09, 2007, 04:30:16 pm
thank you, Toycoon! I finally found my courage again - it was hidin´ under the sofa  ;D ! I love this thread, it is my second home actually, so I will go on bothering you with my crap.
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 09, 2007, 04:32:26 pm
Say, are you gonna write us a sexy fanfic here or what!?

YES, David, PLEASE!! :o
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: ifyoucantfixit on June 09, 2007, 04:34:29 pm



            I agree with David.. welcome to Bettermost.  you have truly given this old forum a new spark of
energy.  We are so happy to have the IMBD groupi become part of us.........
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: David In Indy on June 09, 2007, 04:35:09 pm
Thanks, David-Indiana.
I gave your ABC game a shot but Ellemeno kept trumping me! She's already got more sheep than God!
Say, are you gonna write us a sexy fanfic here or what!? I know you've got something hot and steamy brewing up there! Let's have a look at it...

Well maybe Toycoon!

I'll try to get my creative imagination cranking, and maybe I'll come up with something!  :)

You all are doing a great job! This is a fun thread. Thanks for starting it.  :D
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: MaineWriter on June 09, 2007, 07:17:25 pm

P.S.  But I still can't eat no cheery cake. 



Maybe not cheery cake, but how about cherry cake? LOL   ;)
Title: Asking For It
Post by: Toycoon on June 09, 2007, 09:49:31 pm
The passion and animal lust was extremely intense and building by the second between the two men.

 Jack removes his jacket and Ennis felt conflicted but obviously extremely sexually aroused.

 Jack undid his jeans then Ennis exploded into action. He pushed Jack into position but if Jack had not wanted what was about to happen, he would have stopped it right then and there. He didn't.
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 10, 2007, 05:00:35 am
Good morning everybody! What a way to start the (Sun)day!

Gary, thank you for your kind words. I don´t mean to make everybody here sad, but that song posted at "BBM radio" really got to me...the next one will be fun, I promise!

Susie, just re-read missed you part 1 -  whoa, so so steamy, hot, juicy, - love it! give us your NC-17 - stories, please!

Toycoon, at least one person here follows the rule, and it is always amazing what you can express in three sentences! Jack had not wanted what was about to happen, he would have stopped it right then and there. He didn't. And I´m so grateful for that. Just because of Ennis, of course  ;D!

Ifyoucantfixit and David, how nice to see you here! Feel free to join in at any time, it´s fun! But be warned: It was not until ends of chapter eight that I posted my first one, and I´m allready addicted.

Merrily, you are a true friend, I love you. I´ll send you a PM on IMDb!
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 10, 2007, 07:38:25 am
Too Early In The Summer

< Beans.  Beans beans beans. I´m sick of ´em.>

< Hmm...>

< Taste ain´t that bad, but ...mbmummbfrt....>

< Huh? Mumbling used to be my part. What´d ya say?>

< Said ´they make me fart.´>

< Um...well...> Ennis grins.

< I´ll run them sheep off if I go on like that. Maybe that´s why I ain´t shot me no coyote yet, ´cause they don´t come close enough with all that...gas around. Expect that goddamn puptent to take off like a  balloon some night!>

Ennis laughes out loud, jerking his head back, eyes sparkling.

´This boy is f*uckin´too cute when he laughs...´

< Your guts don´t react like this, or what? >

< Hm, no, think they are used to beans. >

The cowboys go on eating in silence.

Ennis, sniffing : <Uh! What´s that? Was that you? >

< NO, MAN! Bud, I´d never fart as long as you´re around! Don´t want to run you off, friend! It wasn´t me! >

< Naw, me neither, told you I don´t fart, beans or no beans, it must´ve been you!>

Jack laughs, jumps up and over to Ennis, grabs his shirt, and tuzzling and laughing they fall on the ground -

curtains fall discretely...
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on June 10, 2007, 09:59:20 am
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Beans beans beans.

Dagi, you are too funny! I knew one of these days, someone would address the beans/flatulence issue.
It stands to reason though, that's the main reason I don't 'eat no beans'! Very cute, German girl.
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on June 10, 2007, 11:43:14 am
Dagi, this it too funny, it SHOULD be in the script! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_15_8.gif), you're just getting better and better!


I might post that NC17 rated one on it's own .... not sure, people might not like me anymore!!


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)
 


Remember the "Spoiler!" warning we used at IMDb? 

Maybe we need a "Feelthy!" warning for some stories on this thread.

 ;D
Title: Re: Asking For It
Post by: Toycoon on June 10, 2007, 01:48:59 pm
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Toycoon, I swear you're the master of three sentence juiciness!

Thank you, sugar pie. That means a lot coming from the daughter of the devil, himself!

Quote
Nice to see someone obeying the rules ... not me that's for sure!

Well, somebodies gotta stick to the rules. None'a you hellions are gonna conform, I can see that.

Quote
Susie (the master of quantity over quality)

Boy, that's for damn sure! ;D
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 10, 2007, 02:11:02 pm
Thanks, Toycoon and Susie. I know I ain´t never no good at joke-telling, but I wanted to do something different...

And Susie: To me you are the master of quantity going hand in hand with quality! And don´t be afraid, honey: did I stop loving you after reading your NC-17 Stories? NOT AT ALL  :-* :-* :-*!!!

Title: Asking For It (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 10, 2007, 06:16:37 pm
Jack wanted it.  He wanted Ennis to fill him to bursting, to love him, use him.  But he also wanted more!  Jack wanted the moment, the feeling, the closeness.  Jack wanted a kiss.

But the kiss could wait until later.  Days later, if need be.  For now Jack Twist was content to be taken.  Taken violently, if that is what Ennis wanted.  He needed to see that Ennis had it all!

One forceful push and Ennis was in.  Jack fell into an uneasy rhythm - back and forth, while Ennis pushed in an out!  What a sweet, delicious pain.....

Title: Re: Asking For It (2)
Post by: Clyde-B on June 10, 2007, 06:37:14 pm
Jack wanted it.  He wanted Ennis to fill him to bursting, to love him, use him.  But he also wanted more!  Jack wanted the moment, the feeling, the closeness.  Jack wanted a kiss.

But the kiss could wait until later.  Days later, if need be.  For now Jack Twist was content to be taken.  Taken violently, if that is what Ennis wanted.  He needed to see that Ennis had it all!

One forceful push and Ennis was in.  Jack fell into an uneasy rhythm - back and forth, while Ennis pushed in an out!  What a sweet, delicious pain.....



Pass me another one of them church fans will, ya?  The heat and humidity's just all wilted mine.
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on June 10, 2007, 09:29:15 pm
:laugh:  Maybe you're right Clyde.  Do I need to put that warning at the top of Turnabout?

Gary

You bet!

Although it was sweet and hot.  I don't know if "feelthy" is ever sweet.  (I personally prefer sweet and hot but that's another issue altogether!)

All these complicated literary distinctions!!!   ;D
Title: Re: Asking For It (2)
Post by: Toycoon on June 10, 2007, 09:38:05 pm
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One forceful push and Ennis was in.  Jack fell into an uneasy rhythm - back and forth, while Ennis pushed in and out!  What a sweet, delicious pain.....

Oh my, littlewing1957, you got me blushing! And my startle point is pretty high! You've earned the name, DirtyMama.
Title: Re: Asking For It (2)
Post by: Clyde-B on June 10, 2007, 11:05:55 pm
LOL  Clyde, I wonder how many of these young ones know what you're talking about.  I sure do.  I remember those.  All the ladies in church had them when I was a kid.  You are talking about the fans made of a piece of heavy cardboard with a picture of Jesus attached to a wooden stick used as a handle, right?  Around here they were sometimes called funeral home fans because an advert for a funeral home was often on the side opposite Jesus.

Gary


Yep!  With prayers and Bible verses on the back, and it'd be about a hundred an one and everybody sweatin like a pig and the reverend would just drone on and on and on... And everybody would be fannin and the harder you fanned, the hotter it got...
 
Thanks for remembering Gary!
Title: Re: Asking For It (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 10, 2007, 11:09:08 pm
Delicious writing littlewing! .... that was hot hot hot! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_3_1v.gif)


Susie   (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Thanks so much, Susie!  :)
Title: Re: Asking For It (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 10, 2007, 11:12:01 pm
Pass me another one of them church fans will, ya?  The heat and humidity's just all wilted mine.


 :laugh:  Thanks so much, Sweets!  I was thinking of J&E in church this morning!  I'm so ashamed of myself!  :laugh:
Title: Re: Asking For It (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 10, 2007, 11:13:04 pm
MMMM  Sexy stuff, littlewing.  And I know just how Jack feels.  Ennis is such an animal.  Who wouldn't want to give in to that kind of lust?   ;D

Gary

Ah, Gary, you are so right about Ennis!  I have an image of him as a passionate, lusty man!  No wonder our poor Jack was so smitten!
Title: Re: Asking For It (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 10, 2007, 11:14:27 pm
LOL  Clyde, I wonder how many of these young ones know what you're talking about.  I sure do.  I remember those.  All the ladies in church had them when I was a kid.  You are talking about the fans made of a piece of heavy cardboard with a picture of Jesus attached to a wooden stick used as a handle, right?  Around here they were sometimes called funeral home fans because an advert for a funeral home was often on the side opposite Jesus.

Gary

Yep, you're right, Gary!  I saw them being used just this morning!
Title: Re: Asking For It (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 10, 2007, 11:15:11 pm
Oh my, littlewing1957, you got me blushing! And my startle point is pretty high! You've earned the name, DirtyMama.

 :D  Thanks, Toycoon, baby!
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 10, 2007, 11:19:56 pm
Gary, this one is for you. The spelling and grammar correction was made by....me this time  :laugh:....

The Sun

„... a few tears now and then and just let them out
I'm not afraid to cry every once in a while
even though goin on with you gone still upsets me
There are days every now and again
I pretend I'm okay but that's not what gets me ...“

Ennis jerked up from the bed and over to the radio, and turned it off.

He leaned heavily against the closet, eyes closed,  breathing deep while he tried to hold back the tears.

<Goddamn, Ennis, after so many years...F*ck. Pull yourself together...right so. Better.>

Another deep breath.

He turned around and opened the closet door, run his fingers over the blue shirt of his one and only

love, and up welled the tears again, forcing their way out, nothing he could do against it...

Jack Twist, his love, his soul, all that had made his poor life worth living, would never come back,

would never again caress his face, never again embrace and hold him in his strong comforting arms.

He turned the radio on again.

„...what hurts the most, was being so close
And having so much to say
And watchin you walk away
Never knowing, what could have been
And not seein that lovin you
Is what I was tryin to do ....“

Ennis crawled onto the bed, wrapped himself up in the shirts and buried his wet face in the

pillow, crying hard now, sobbing and shaking  until he felt all empty .

The pain seemed to ease a little, a relief only tears could bring.

The afternoon sun came out from behind the heavy clouds and  shone golden through the dirty

window of his trailor, stroking his cheek tenderly with warm fingers.






Wow, Dagi!  Is this new?  I don't remember it!  Anyway, your writing is getting so very lovely!  And I love the song!  The Sun is so sad and sweet at the same time.  I love it!  :)
Title: Re: Asking For It (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 10, 2007, 11:23:39 pm
Why thank you Merr! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_7_104v.gif)

My daughter took about 20 of me this afternoon in an attempt to get a couple of decent ones ..... so it's about 6 hours old ... can't get much more recent than that!

I'll pm you some time about the emoticons ... a bit faffy but so cute!!


Love Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Susie, I would like to know about the emoticons, as well.  Such fun!
Title: Re: Craving
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 10, 2007, 11:28:26 pm

“Here, let me do that for you lil’ darlin’… is that sore, right there?” Jack winced, Jesus, it hurt like hell! Ennis dabbed the clean towel carefully over Jack’s lip, split open, blood everywhere. The skin around his right eye was in pretty bad shape too, turning three shades of purple, the eye itself, closing up with the swelling.

“You sure that’s how it happened, Jack?”

“Like I said, I climbed out of the truck, stumbled on the curb and smashed my face on the sidewalk.” Jack was shaken up badly, but what else could he say? That he got jumped, walking out of a grocery store? Ennis would surely turn tail and run if he found out that two fellas had taken a disliking to him, calling him "fag got" and kicking the sh it out of him just for fun.

Ennis guided him over to the bed, laying him down gently, sliding in behind him and pulling the sheet over them. He knew Jack was lying, his story would explain some of the bruises on his face, but what about the twisted arm and busted ribs? Nothing to be done about it right now though.

“Come here baby, I need you t’night”, Jack reached back and took a hold of Ennis’ hand, bringing it forward and down. Ennis laughed, “Are you kidding me? You’re in no fit state to even move, Dumbass”.

“Just tell me then, tell me what you’re doin’ to me Ennis, I need to hear you”.

“I dunno Jack, I ain’t no good with words, you know that.”

“I don’t care, only you and me here, I ain’t telling no-one.”

Ennis closed his eyes, laying his head close to Jack’s, stroking the skin on his belly, this wasn’t gonna be easy, but he would do it, do it for Jack.

His voice was soft and deep in Jack’s ear, “You’re lying under me Jack, looking up at me with those eyes, I’m fallin’ into those baby blue eyes.” Jack sighed, snuggling up against him, guiding Ennis’ hand down over his groin, wrapping it softly round him, Ennis relaxing a little, voice slowing down some.

“Sweat’s tricklin’ down your chest, I’m lickin’ it with my tongue, you taste so good Jack, never tasted anythin’ so good.” Ennis was moving his hand back and forth slowly, Jack still holding onto him.

“I’m lifting your legs up on my shoulders, I’m inside you, deep inside. I’m going crazy Jack, wanna pound you so hard, but I stay in control, moving real slow, all the way in…. and all the way out. You feel so tight and hot round me, suckin’ me in.” Jack was rocking next to him, forwards and backwards into his hand, breath coming in ragged.

“You’re nearly there, I can tell, I can see it in your face, eye’s scrunchin’ up, biting down on your tongue. I can hear it too Jack, coming from the back of your throat, like you’re cryin’ and gaspin’ for air…. Yeah, just like that” Ennis tightening his grip, moving faster, his voice barely a whisper.

“You’re so close now I can hardly stand it, I’m steadying you with my hands, slowing you down, taking my time.” Jack’s back was arching against him, holding onto Ennis’s hand, pushing hard into it, whimpering, Ennis’ voice trailing off to more of a breath than a whisper, “You’re comin’ now lil’ darlin’… comin’ for me…”




Susie   (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)





Susie, I'm going to have to order a supply of fans!  This is another favorite of mine.  So sentimental and sexy!  When Jack calls Ennis baby and wants to be close, I feel like I'm going to swoon!  Just beautiful, Susie!
Title: Re: Asking For It (2)
Post by: Clyde-B on June 10, 2007, 11:33:13 pm
:laugh:  Thanks so much, Sweets!  I was thinking of J&E in church this morning!  I'm so ashamed of myself!  :laugh:

I'll bet it made for an interesting sermon!  ;D
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 11, 2007, 12:29:12 am
Wow, Dagi!  Is this new?  I don't remember it!  Anyway, your writing is getting so very lovely!  And I love the song!  The Sun is so sad and sweet at the same time.  I love it!  :)

Aha, the second time that  someone says I´m getting better. So my first attempts were really crappy, hunh  ??? ? Understood. Anyway, to me writing is  fun.

As to your story,  littlewing, I may sit here half asleep, but I know ONE part of me that is fully awake now!

Gary, thank you for your comment, glad that you had a good laugh!

Susie,
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“You’re so close now I can hardly stand it, I’m steadying you with my hands, slowing you down, taking my time.” Jack’s back was arching against him, holding onto Ennis’s hand, pushing hard into it, whimpering, Ennis’ voice trailing off to more of a breath than a whisper, “You’re comin’ now lil’ darlin’… comin’ for me…”
, soooo sweet and hot, hot, hot!!! This was one of my favorites on IMDb, I love it.
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 11, 2007, 12:37:35 am


And Susie: To me you are the master of quantity going hand in hand with quality! And don´t be afraid, honey: did I stop loving you after reading your NC-17 Stories? NOT AT ALL  :-* :-* :-*!!!



quoting myself now to make sure you read it . With a new story from littlewing just underneath both eyes and mind are too easily distracted....
Title: Carving a Horse
Post by: Toycoon on June 11, 2007, 01:36:55 am
Ennis started whittling faster and faster with the anticipation of completing his well observed and skillfully carved horse sculpture.

"I wonder if Jack will recognize his mare without a rider or would he just think it was queer for a man to give another fella a present," thought Ennis, "and damn, is it ever gonna quit raining?"

He took out another piece of pine from his satchel, closed his eyes and began imaging the cowboy hat, the strong back, the thick arms and the tight thigh muscles of a man before putting the block of wood aside.
Title: Re: Carving a Horse
Post by: Dagi on June 11, 2007, 03:13:59 am

He took out another piece of pine from his satchel, closed his eyes and began imaging the cowboy hat, the strong back, the thick arms and the tight thigh muscles of a man before putting the block of wood aside.

So, this was part one - now I need part two, please ;D!
Title: A Surprise Gift
Post by: Toycoon on June 12, 2007, 12:14:20 am
When Jack rode up on his horse, weary from the long commute, Ennis already had supper ready to serve so he handed Jack a plate and the two men sat down to eat in relative silence until Ennis pulled something from his satchel; he had carved a wooden replica of Jack's mare as a gift for Jack.

"Wowee Ennis! You whittle that all yerself?" exclaimed Jack, turning the little horse over in his hands, inspecting the detail and craftsmanship. Jack had never been given such a thoughtful gift from anyone, let alone other man and the kind gesture rendered him speechless.

Suddenly, impulsively Jack threw his arms around Ennis and hugged him firmly, their cheeks pressing together; Jack's lips brushed against Ennis' face and he felt a strange tingle at his groin.
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 12, 2007, 03:11:32 am
Toycoon, this is lovely! I can imagine Jack´s surprise and joy, and figuring his face makes me feel all warm and dizzy...!
Title: Sleeping
Post by: Dagi on June 12, 2007, 03:13:09 am
„I´m sleepin“ murmured Jack when he felt Ennis´s hot hands on his butt and his swollen member pressed against his back.

„Ya sure?“ whispered Ennis in a husky voice, hungry with desire.

Growing hard in no time Jack gave in with a little sigh, wondering if he would ever, ever in his life learn to resist, but considering the fact that they were about to turn seventyfour he doubted that....
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: mariez on June 12, 2007, 12:16:24 pm
Wow - I can't keep up with you guys - what great short stories!  Keep 'em coming! 

Thanks,
Marie
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 12, 2007, 05:07:56 pm
Wow - I can't keep up with you guys - what great short stories!  Keep 'em coming! 

Thanks,
Marie

Thank YOU, Marie! Glad you enjoy it!
Title: Re: Marriage Vows
Post by: Dagi on June 12, 2007, 05:12:26 pm


“…. to be my husband” Ennis frowned, “Can’t I be your “Best Friend” or your “Partner” or somethin’?”

“Just say the goddamn words Ennis Del Mar!” and so they continued, with only the occasional protest from Ennis; “I’ll cherish you but I ain’t obeyin’ you, no way!”
 


I love Ennis´s not obeying!  :laugh:
Very sweet, Susie, and the image of them holding each other in a tight embrace...aaaww...lovely.
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 13, 2007, 01:04:55 am
Aha, the second time that  someone says I´m getting better. So my first attempts were really crappy, hunh  ??? ? Understood. Anyway, to me writing is  fun.

As to your story,  littlewing, I may sit here half asleep, but I know ONE part of me that is fully awake now!

Gary, thank you for your comment, glad that you had a good laugh!

Susie, , soooo sweet and hot, hot, hot!!! This was one of my favorites on IMDb, I love it.


Dagi, I didn't mean your writing was crappy!  Quite the contrary!  I just mean, the more we write, the better we become.   ;)
Title: Re: Asking For It (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 13, 2007, 01:07:16 am
I'll bet it made for an interesting sermon!  ;D

 :laugh:  You bet!
Title: Re: Marriage Vows
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 13, 2007, 01:10:11 am
I promise I'll come up with something new soon. In the meantime, this is another one of my favourites



“Come on Ennis, you know you wanna! Let’s do it now!”

“No Jack! Sounds kinda dumb to me.”

“It ain’t dumb! Just do it for me then Ennis. Please?”

“Oh alright then, as long as I don’t have to hold no posy!”

Jack sat cross legged on the picnic rug, opposite his lover, their faces bathed in the golden light of the setting sun. Taking both hands in his, he began, “Repeat after me… I Ennis Del Mar, take you Jack Twist…” Ennis muttered the words, then on seeing the disappointment in Jack’s eyes, smiled a little and said them again more clearly.

“…. to be my husband” Ennis frowned, “Can’t I be your “Best Friend” or your “Partner” or somethin’?”

“Just say the goddamn words Ennis Del Mar!” and so they continued, with only the occasional protest from Ennis; “I’ll cherish you but I ain’t obeyin’ you, no way!”

“Right... now it’s your turn”, Ennis took on the role of Minister and began reciting the wedding vows, Jack smiling and eagerly repeating every word.

Finally, Jack sprang to his feet, dragging Ennis with him, eyes fixed upon him, squeezing his hands, “Ennis Del Mar and Jack Twist…. I now pronounce you husband and husband!” Beaming and bursting with happiness, he embraced Ennis mightily, and although Ennis had been a reluctant participant in the ceremony, he too was bubbling over with joy, and returned the embrace, holding Jack tightly in his arms.

No matter what happened in the future, Jack and Ennis were now bound, before God, by the sacred vow of marriage.



Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)
 


This is one of my favorites, as well!  Thanks for reposting, Susiebell!  :)
Title: The Gift
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 13, 2007, 01:14:20 am
This is another of my favorite series.  I'll post part 2 in a bit.  I'll also have a few new stories I'm working on.


Jack walked out of Rudolph-Tracy’s jewelry store in downtown Dallas carrying a gaudy, two handled shopping bag. He always wanted to do something like this: purchase a gift for Ennis that symbolized his love for him, or perhaps mark his territory? Jack was understandably apprehensive, as he knew there was a good chance that Ennis would refuse the gift. Save for his thin wedding band, Ennis never wore jewelry!

But Jack saved for a year by putting away spare change, saving a dollar a day, that sort of thing, hiding the money in a place where Lureen would never find it. He kept a coffee can full of loose change and bills in the trunk of his Cadillac. Risky, sure, but it worked. In a year’s time Jack was able to save a sizeable sum and spent an indecent amount of money on 14K gold men’s ID bracelets. Jack had the bracelets ordered special as one spelled out Ennis’ name in pave diamonds, while the other matched perfectly, displaying Jack’s name in sparkling pave diamonds!

Jack chuckled as he climbed into his late model Cadillac. He wondered how he would ever find the courage to give Ennis a bracelet. He winced as he eyed the shopping bag on the passenger seat next to him. The bracelets couldn’t be returned as they were personalized. Ennis spelled out in diamonds? What was he thinking? Ah well, the deed was done. Now it was time to head home and get packed. He had a one Mr. Ennis Del Mar to meet and 1400 miles of road to travel....



Title: The Gift Part 2
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 13, 2007, 01:49:29 am
I'm posting the sequel to my fic, "The Gift"


Jack placed his things on the bed nearest the window (all of the bedroom’s in Don Wroe’s cabin had two full sized beds) and removed the bracelet that he saved for a year to purchase.  Jack fully planned to give Ennis his gift after dinner, but he was losing his nerve.

Jack walked into the kitchen just as Ennis finished grilling two monster sized burgers.  Jack’s mouth watered at the sight of the meaty patties, and he removed cheese, grated lettuce and tomatoes from the well stocked fridge.  The meal of burgers, fries, Caesar salad and a strawberry torte for dessert was ready to be served.  Jack helped Ennis place the feast on the dining room table.

Ennis and Jack ate in companionable silence, and with gusto.  When the meal was devoured, Jack and Ennis decided to move to the living room to smoke a few cigs, and enjoy a bottle of whiskey on shares.  Ennis sat wide-legged on the couch, and invited Jack to sit next to him.  Ennis draped an arm around Jack’s shoulders, and played with the soft curls at the nape of his neck.

 “You okay, Rodeo?”  Ennis began.  “You look like you got somethin’ on yer mind.”

Jack thought he had better make a move or he would lose his resolve forever.

“En, I had this idea, a sort of wish I’ve been having’ for a long time.  We have never shared a gift between the two of us, and I want to make up for that.”

 Ennis listened intently, but remained silent, allowed Jack to continue.  Jack removed a long, velvet box from under the couch where he had placed it earlier.

 “Ennis, I had this made up special for you….I..I hope you like it, Bud.”

Ennis accepted the box with a trembling hand, and opened the lid.  He almost dropped the box when he saw the heavy 14K cable link chain separated by a plague on which the name JACK was spelled out in diamonds.

“Look, En,” Jack said as he raised a tentative wrist.  “I had one made up for me, too.”

Ennis looked at the identical bracelet sparking on Jack’s wrist and wondered how he missed it during supper.  Jack’s bracelet spelled out ENNIS in twinkling pave diamonds.  Ennis was speechless.  He accepted the gift with a quiet grace, and fastened it on his still trembling wrist.  Ennis was excited, amazed, and grateful, in spite of himself.  He never wore jewelry; thought it was prissy and girly, but he had to appreciate the effort, the love Jack must have put into this.  The bracelet was showy, surely cost a fortune, but Ennis thought he could pull it off. 

“Look, Cowboy, you don’t have to wear it all the time, but just bring it with you when we meet up.  I would appreciate it if you could do that for me.  But if you ever find you need money, I won’t mind if you pawn it.”
Ennis chuckled and rubbed Jack’s cheek.

“I could never pawn or sell this, Jack!”  Ennis Began.  He reached into his shirt pocket and pulled out a small, bundle.  “Here, Bud, I know you had a birthday last month.  We couldn’t be together then, so I save up a bit and got you this.  I hope you like it.”

Jack ripped open the package and removed a cheap, gold plated lighter engraved with the initials, JMT. 

“Ennis, it’s beautiful!”  Jack croaked, as he tried to regain his composure.  He was so moved by the gesture that he had to turn away.  “You didn’t have to get me anything, Cowboy.  You really should have saved the money for the girls.”

“Ah, its okay, Ennis began as he ruffled Jack’s hair.  “I didn’t spend too much!  You really like it?” 

“I love it, En.  I’ll treasure it always.  Jack embraced his lover and stroked his back.

“Hey, you could have bought me a gorilla suit and not only would I have loved it, I would wear it!  I’ll be the combine saleman showing tractors to fat old farmers dressed as a gorilla!”

Ennis nearly fell off the couch laughing.  “Listen Bud, let’s go to bed.  We can show our gratitude in a lot of interestin’ ways…
 


Title: Re: The Gift Part 2
Post by: Dagi on June 13, 2007, 07:31:11 am
I'm posting the sequel to my fic, "The Gift"


Jack placed his things on the bed nearest the window (all of the bedroom’s in Don Wroe’s cabin had two full sized beds) and removed the bracelet that he saved for a year to purchase.  Jack fully planned to give Ennis his gift after dinner, but he was losing his nerve.

Jack walked into the kitchen just as Ennis finished grilling two monster sized burgers.  Jack’s mouth watered at the sight of the meaty patties, and he removed cheese, grated lettuce and tomatoes from the well stocked fridge.  The meal of burgers, fries, Caesar salad and a strawberry torte for dessert was ready to be served.  Jack helped Ennis place the feast on the dining room table.

Ennis and Jack ate in companionable silence, and with gusto.  When the meal was devoured, Jack and Ennis decided to move to the living room to smoke a few cigs, and enjoy a bottle of whiskey on shares.  Ennis sat wide-legged on the couch, and invited Jack to sit next to him.  Ennis draped an arm around Jack’s shoulders, and played with the soft curls at the nape of his neck.

 “You okay, Rodeo?”  Ennis began.  “You look like you got somethin’ on yer mind.”

Jack thought he had better make a move or he would lose his resolve forever.

“En, I had this idea, a sort of wish I’ve been having’ for a long time.  We have never shared a gift between the two of us, and I want to make up for that.”

 Ennis listened intently, but remained silent, allowed Jack to continue.  Jack removed a long, velvet box from under the couch where he had placed it earlier.

 “Ennis, I had this made up special for you….I..I hope you like it, Bud.”

Ennis accepted the box with a trembling hand, and opened the lid.  He almost dropped the box when he saw the heavy 14K cable link chain separated by a plague on which the name JACK was spelled out in diamonds.

“Look, En,” Jack said as he raised a tentative wrist.  “I had one made up for me, too.”

Ennis looked at the identical bracelet sparking on Jack’s wrist and wondered how he missed it during supper.  Jack’s bracelet spelled out ENNIS in twinkling pave diamonds.  Ennis was speechless.  He accepted the gift with a quiet grace, and fastened it on his still trembling wrist.  Ennis was excited, amazed, and grateful, in spite of himself.  He never wore jewelry; thought it was prissy and girly, but he had to appreciate the effort, the love Jack must have put into this.  The bracelet was showy, surely cost a fortune, but Ennis thought he could pull it off. 

“Look, Cowboy, you don’t have to wear it all the time, but just bring it with you when we meet up.  I would appreciate it if you could do that for me.  But if you ever find you need money, I won’t mind if you pawn it.”
Ennis chuckled and rubbed Jack’s cheek.

“I could never pawn or sell this, Jack!”  Ennis Began.  He reached into his shirt pocket and pulled out a small, bundle.  “Here, Bud, I know you had a birthday last month.  We couldn’t be together then, so I save up a bit and got you this.  I hope you like it.”

Jack ripped open the package and removed a cheap, gold plated lighter engraved with the initials, JMT. 

“Ennis, it’s beautiful!”  Jack croaked, as he tried to regain his composure.  He was so moved by the gesture that he had to turn away.  “You didn’t have to get me anything, Cowboy.  You really should have saved the money for the girls.”

“Ah, its okay, Ennis began as he ruffled Jack’s hair.  “I didn’t spend too much!  You really like it?” 

“I love it, En.  I’ll treasure it always.  Jack embraced his lover and stroked his back.

“Hey, you could have bought me a gorilla suit and not only would I have loved it, I would wear it!  I’ll be the combine saleman showing tractors to fat old farmers dressed as a gorilla!”

Ennis nearly fell off the couch laughing.  “Listen Bud, let’s go to bed.  We can show our gratitude in a lot of interestin’ ways…
 




So sweet, littlewing! Your stories are always special! And Jack wearing that gorilla suit - bwaaahaahaa, funny, but I doubt there is anything that could spoil the divine beauty of this man!!!
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 13, 2007, 07:33:28 am
No one meant that, you great banana, Dagi!  People have said that to me too, and I'm sure they didn't mean it as an insult!! 

Or maybe they did??? ... now you've got me worried too!!! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_3_6.gif)


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif) 

I had a bad day. Sometimes I´m just too vulnerable. Thank you Susie, and littlewing.
Title: Re: Breakfast in Dubois
Post by: Toycoon on June 13, 2007, 09:38:54 am
Nice and nasty breakfast, Susiebell, you vixen!

I'm sorry I missed so much here on BetterMost. I went to Disneyland for the day.
Title: Re: Breakfast in Dubois
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 13, 2007, 10:56:37 am

They stopped briefly in Dubois for a bite to eat before heading on to Signal and back to the real world.  The two men sat in a quiet corner at the back of the diner, feasting on a hearty breakfast of eggs, bacon, sausages and a side order of pancakes; a welcome change from beans and taters.

Jack’s head was still spinning after that punch, had it all figured out before, but now he didn’t know what the hell was gonna happen.  He yearned to communicate in some way with his lover, who was sitting stony faced, in silence, eyes fixed firmly on his plate.

Ennis felt a tingling pressure on his leg, a foot moving slowly up the inside towards his knee, and looking up from his breakfast, he saw a weak, hopeful smile on Jack’s face.  For a moment, he forgot where he was and returned the smile, then suddenly aware of the folks around him, jumped up in horror, shot a murderous look at Jack, muttered “Gotta pee” and marched off in the direction of the bathroom. 

Jack followed after him, looking around cautiously before closing the bathroom door behind him.  Ennis threw him against the wall, in a furious temper, one hand around his neck, “Do that again and I’ll knock yer fuckin’ head off!” 

“Fuck you, Ennis!” Jack glared at him defiantly, shocked at his violent reaction, and disappeared into one of the stalls.  Ennis shoved the door open roughly, “This ain’t over yet, Jack!”   Jack was on him in an instant, a mixture of hurt, anger, and lust burning right through him, pushing him up against the door, grinding his hips into Ennis’ and forcing his tongue into Ennis’ mouth.  “This ain’t over by a long ways, Ennis!” he breathed, tearing at Ennis’ jeans and dropping to his knees.



Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


My dear Susie, is this new?  I don't think I remember this one!  Anyway, brilliant tale, Sweets!  Superb!  You really remain true to the characters here!  The self-conscious Ennis, unwilling to accept who he is, unable to own his love for Jack.  And Jack, more accepting of his sexuality and not really afraid to show affection.  He is also unwilling to back down or be intimidated, and I love this about him!  Sublime, Susie!  Beautifully written!
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 13, 2007, 05:50:06 pm
Susie, this is brilliant, and I can´t add anything to what Gary and littlewing wrote. Sexy and sad. You are the master of the sexy and sad stories. I´ve spent some time crying about the boys again recently. I mean sex in a toilet is hot as long as you can show your affection outside the toilet, too. So, to mee it is mostly sad.
Title: Another Reunion (Part 1)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 13, 2007, 09:44:59 pm
Ennis Del Mar was never inclined to notice the body of another man, but when he saw Jack Twist walking – no –running toward him, his head turned at the sight.  “Jack, you are so beautiful!”  Ennis mouthed, under his breath, as Jack flung his arms wide, welcomed Ennis into a warm embrace. 

Jack folded Ennis close.  He touched his pave diamond bracelet to Ennis’ wrist, heard the tiny click of metal on metal, and was at once delighted that Ennis saw fit to wear his bracelet to their reunion.  “Let me look at you, Ennis Del Mar!”  Jack started as he broke the embrace and stepped just a few inches from his man.  “Just look at you, friend!  You look like a million bucks!”  Ennis was silent, but the wide flush that crept onto his full cheeks spoke volumes. 

“C'mere!”  It was Ennis.  He beckoned for Jack, pulled him close once again.   Ennis held Jack’s head as he kissed him deep.  He was held captive by Jack’s eyes - unable to look away.  If he had to do without Jack’s kiss for another day?  Well, Ennis didn’t think he could survive it.  He reached between Jack’s thighs and cupped his swelling member.  Ennis rubbed and kneaded until Jack moaned into his mouth, felt his knees begin to buckle!  “Easy, Jack!”  Ennis whispered as he pulled Jack once more to a standing position.   “C’mon, Bud, I think we're ready!  Let’s go inside…”
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 13, 2007, 10:23:11 pm
Thank you Dagi honey, for you kind words! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_7_105v.gif)  I don't quite understand how two fictional characters can have such a huge impact on us ... I find myself crying about them too!!  It makes me feel like I'm going insane!!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



Oh, I know the feeling, Susie Baby!
Title: Re: Another Reunion (Part 1)
Post by: Toycoon on June 13, 2007, 11:30:10 pm
Quote
“Jack, you are so beautiful!”  Ennis mouthed, under his breath, as Jack flung his arms wide, welcomed Ennis into a warm embrace.
 

I think you are just beautiful, littlewing1957!
Title: Re: Another Reunion (Part 1)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 13, 2007, 11:53:34 pm
Whoo Wee littlewing.  That is sweet, sexy and hot!  I like it!  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/23/23_1_10.gif)

 :D  Thanks, Merr!
Title: Re: Another Reunion (Part 1)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 13, 2007, 11:55:42 pm
 

I think you are just beautiful, littlewing1957!

Ah, You're such a sweetie.  I happen to know for a fact  that you're beautiful inside and out!
Title: Unexpected Feelings
Post by: Toycoon on June 14, 2007, 12:05:12 am
With his arms in a friendly embrace around his sheepherding partner, Jack felt an unexpected excitement deep in his loins causing his penis to stir; nothing he'd ever felt before was at once, exciting and terrifying.

Jack sunk to his knees, still clinging to the waistband of Ennis' jeans and ripping the fly open, held Ennis' manhood in his palm, quickly suckling it into his mouth.

Ennis closed his eyes tight, moaning and quivering in ecstasy; when he opened his eyes, it was dark and he was in the sheep herder's tent, alone, except for the carved wooden horse laying in the corner.
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 14, 2007, 12:17:47 am
With his arms in a friendly embrace around his sheepherding partner, Jack felt an unexpected excitement deep in his loins causing his penis to stir; nothing he'd ever felt before was at once, exciting and terrifying.

Jack sunk to his knees, still clinging to the waistband of Ennis' jeans and ripping the fly open, held Ennis' manhood in his palm, quickly suckling it into his mouth.

Ennis closed his eyes tight, moaning and quivering in ecstasy; when he opened his eyes, it was dark and he was in the sheep herder's herder's tent, alone, except for the carved wooden horse laying in the corner.

Toycoon, this is so sweet and sexy!  I love it.  And I'm gonna continue it! 
Title: Unexpected feelings (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 14, 2007, 12:28:52 am
Ennis was alone in the tent, but he was not lonely.  Reaching down to pull off his soiled jeans, Ennis allowed his mind to escape to the time when Jack Twist relieved him of his pants in one quick, skillful motion. 

After his pants were in a puddle around his boots, Jack positioned himself between Ennis’ thighs and slobbed his knob for what seemed hours.  Ennis grimaced as he remembered the times he filled Jack’s mouth with his pleasure.

But now, he had to wash out his jeans before sundown.  It wouldn’t do to have Jack lean in and pull him out, and lick him down and….Ahhh..too late!  Not again?

Title: Re: Another Reunion (Part 1)
Post by: Dagi on June 14, 2007, 12:31:53 am
Ennis Del Mar was never inclined to notice the body of another man, but when he saw Jack Twist walking – no –running toward him, his head turned at the sight.  “Jack, you are so beautiful!”  Ennis mouthed, under his breath, as Jack flung his arms wide, welcomed Ennis into a warm embrace. 

Jack folded Ennis close.  He touched his pave diamond bracelet to Ennis’ wrist, heard the tiny click of metal on metal, and was at once delighted that Ennis saw fit to wear his bracelet to their reunion.  “Let me look at you, Ennis Del Mar!”  Jack started as he broke the embrace and stepped just a few inches from his man.  “Just look at you, friend!  You look like a million bucks!”  Ennis was silent, but the wide flush that crept onto his full cheeks spoke volumes. 

“C'mere!”  It was Ennis.  He beckoned for Jack, pulled him close once again.   Ennis held Jack’s head as he kissed him deep.  He was held captive by Jack’s eyes - unable to look away.  If he had to do without Jack’s kiss for another day?  Well, Ennis didn’t think he could survive it.  He reached between Jack’s thighs and cupped his swelling member.  Ennis rubbed and kneaded until Jack moaned into his mouth, felt his knees begin to buckle!  “Easy, Jack!”  Ennis whispered as he pulled Jack once more to a standing position.   “C’mon, Bud, I think we're ready!  Let’s go inside…”


When the boys begin to moan my knees buckle, too! So sexy, littlewing! He was held captive by Jack’s eyes - unable to look away -  I know what Ennis is talking about...





Title: Re: Another Reunion (Part 1)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 14, 2007, 12:34:09 am
When the boys begin to moan my knees buckle, too! So sexy, littlewing! He was held captive by Jack’s eyes - unable to look away -  I know what Ennis is talking about...







Ah, Dagi, you're so sweet!  Thanks so much!  :)
Title: Re: Unexpected Feelings
Post by: Dagi on June 14, 2007, 12:40:43 am
With his arms in a friendly embrace around his sheepherding partner, Jack felt an unexpected excitement deep in his loins causing his penis to stir; nothing he'd ever felt before was at once, exciting and terrifying.

Jack sunk to his knees, still clinging to the waistband of Ennis' jeans and ripping the fly open, held Ennis' manhood in his palm, quickly suckling it into his mouth.

Ennis closed his eyes tight, moaning and quivering in ecstasy; when he opened his eyes, it was dark and he was in the sheep herder's herder's tent, alone, except for the carved wooden horse laying in the corner.

Aaahhh, toycoon, this is the part 2 I had hoped for...as I said before, when the boys begin to moan.... :o
Title: Re: Another Reunion (Part 1)
Post by: Dagi on June 14, 2007, 12:42:16 am
Ah, You're such a sweetie.  I happen to know for a fact  that you're beautiful inside and out!
Toycoon there must be a "so what do we all look like?"- thread...hint hint! Come on, bud!
Title: Re: Unexpected feelings (2)
Post by: Dagi on June 14, 2007, 12:45:26 am
Ennis was alone in the tent, but he was not lonely.  Reaching down to pull off his soiled jeans, Ennis allowed his mind to escape to the time when Jack Twist relieved him of his pants in one quick, skillful motion. 

After his pants were in a puddle around his boots, Jack positioned himself between Ennis’ thighs and slobbed his knob for what seemed hours.  Ennis grimaced as he remembered the times he filled Jack’s mouth with his pleasure.

But now, he had to wash out his jeans before sundown.  It wouldn’t do to have Jack lean in and pull him out, and lick him down and….Ahhh..too late!  Not again?



Yeehaawww, Ennis the animal, never satisfied, hunh? Jack Twist can call himself one lucky man  :laugh:  :o!
Title: Re: Unexpected feelings (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 14, 2007, 12:48:42 am
Yeehaawww, Ennis the animal, never satisfied, hunh? Jack Twist can call himself one lucky man  :laugh:  :o!

Yes, indeed!  ::)
Title: Re: Unexpected feelings (2)
Post by: Toycoon on June 14, 2007, 12:50:03 am
Ennis was alone in the tent, but he was not lonely.  Reaching down to pull off his soiled jeans, Ennis allowed his mind to escape to the time when Jack Twist relieved him of his pants in one quick, skillful motion. 

After his pants were in a puddle around his boots, Jack positioned himself between Ennis’ thighs and slobbed his knob for what seemed hours.  Ennis grimaced as he remembered the times he filled Jack’s mouth with his pleasure.

But now, he had to wash out his jeans before sundown.  It wouldn’t do to have Jack lean in and pull him out, and lick him down and….Ahhh..too late!  Not again?

Littlewing1957, we are having way, more fun than anyone in the world aren't we? I love how fast you match and complete my stories.
Title: Re: Another Reunion (Part 1)
Post by: Toycoon on June 14, 2007, 12:52:54 am
Toycoon there must be a "so what do we all look like?"- thread...hint hint! Come on, bud!

Dagi, there are several pictures of my boyfriend and I on the Brokeback B-B-Q thread.
LauraGigs posted a few pictures of her, our buddy, Mike and the two of us.
Title: Re: Unexpected feelings (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 14, 2007, 12:53:48 am
Littlewing1957, we are having way, more fun than anyone in the world aren't we? I love how fast you match and complete my stories.

Toycoon, ain't it the truth!  I'm having the time of my life, and I'm so grateful that I'm able to get this out!  I don't have to worry about upsetting the mods (I hope not, anyway) or being deleted!  This is wonderful!  I'm very happy!  :)
Title: Re: Another Reunion (Part 1)
Post by: Dagi on June 14, 2007, 12:57:40 am
Dagi, there are several pictures of my boyfriend and I on the Brokeback B-B-Q thread.
LauraGigs posted a few pictures of her, our buddy, Mike and the two of us.
Thank you, honey, hope I find them.
Title: Bathin' with Ennis
Post by: Toycoon on June 14, 2007, 09:57:49 pm
After setting his boots side by side at the tangled roots, his pants on a low branch and his shirt above, Ennis hung his cowboy hat on the top the bramble bush, crowning the effigy of himself then a gentle breeze gave it life; he gingerly waded into the glassy lake and upon reaching waist height, stopped, turned and motioned for Jack to join him.

Jack, already naked, scampered to the edge then dove in, emerging from the water just behind Ennis a few seconds later; Jack's eyes languished over every element of Ennis' strong back, his elegant neck, sinewy muscles, the tiny birth marks, his lean waist, finally arriving at a patch of curly hair growing at the base of Ennis' spine, between the shallow dimples and above his crack.

Strangely, a song came to front of Jack's mind. I know shall meet you on that final day, Jack reached for Ennis' slim hips, Water walking Jesus, take me away and he softly kissed the curly patch of hair on Ennis' buttocks.
Title: Re: A Surprise Gift
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 14, 2007, 10:54:50 pm
When Jack rode up on his horse, weary from the long commute, Ennis already had supper ready to serve so he handed Jack a plate and the two men sat down to eat in relative silence until Ennis pulled something from his satchel; he had carved a wooden replica of Jack's mare as a gift for Jack.

"Wowee Ennis! You whittle that all yerself?" exclaimed Jack, turning the little horse over in his hands, inspecting the detail and craftsmanship. Jack had never been given such a thoughtful gift from anyone, let alone other man and the kind gesture rendered him speechless.

Suddenly, impulsively Jack threw his arms around Ennis and hugged him firmly, their cheeks pressing together; Jack's lips brushed against Ennis' face and he felt a strange tingle at his groin.

I missed this one.  I gather I've missed a few stories.  I had better start from page 5 and read onwards from there.  Anyway, beautiful tale, Toycoon!  Very sweet and uplifting. 
Title: Re: A Surprise Gift
Post by: Toycoon on June 14, 2007, 11:32:42 pm
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I missed this one.  I gather I've missed a few stories.  Anyway, beautiful tale, Toycoon!  Very sweet and uplifting.

Thanks, littlewing1957! "A Surprise Gift" is the second part to "Carving a Horse". "Unexpected Feelings" is part three and your story is part four.

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I had better start from page 5 and read onwards from there.

Stick around, sugar bun, it gets better. Woohoo!
Title: The Sale
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 14, 2007, 11:41:27 pm
Tammy Wroe wiped her brow, unable to believe the progress she was making in getting the cabin ready for sale.  Her grandpa, Don Wroe, left the cabin to her when he died in 1994.  Tammy didn’t know what to think or what to do when she learned that the cabin was hers.  Tammy loved her grandfather, but she never spent much time with him.  Her mom worked in the movie business, and moved Tammy to California when she was only 3 years old.   

Tammy’s life in L.A. was good, but when she found herself short on cash, she decided to visit Wyoming for the second time in her life.  Selling the good sized cabin may ease the financial burden of raising 2 children all alone.  The year 2025 was proving to be very hard for Tammy, and she needed the money.  Tammy’s once lucrative fortune telling business was beginning to suffer, even though her psychic gifts were genuine, and she helped a lot of people.  But times were hard and people could no longer afford to spend good money on fortune tellers.  Yes, selling Don Wroe's cabin was the only way.  Cleaning the cabin was backbreaking work, but it had to be done.  It took her 2 days to prepare the living room and kitchen.  Nothing left to do but clean the bathroom and the 3 bedrooms.  But as Tammy stepped into the master bedroom for the first time, she felt it!

Tammy braced herself against the sensation.  As she touched the quilt on the well preserved bed, Tammy thought she would fall in a swoon.  The energy was overpowering!  A male energy: passionate, forceful, very loving.  And suddenly from the corner of her eye, she saw it.  Tammy fell to the dusty carpet as she saw 2 shadowy images – vague, flowing, and twirling together in a dance of love.  Tammy never knew the history of Don Wroe’s cabin or what went on there.  But she knew the feeling of love, and this room was thick with it.  Tammy remembered entering rooms in homes, schools, restaurants and was amazed by the level of energy trapped there.  Some of it was so vile and brutal that she became ill.  But the energy that was trapped here, in Don Wroe’s master bedroom?  Tammy couldn’t believe it.  She wanted to know the names of the men whose loving energy is trapped in her granddad’s cabin.  When she was able to compose herself, Tammy pulled herself off the floor.  In a moment she knew that she could never sell the place…


Title: Re: Sleeping
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 14, 2007, 11:45:45 pm
„I´m sleepin“ murmured Jack when he felt Ennis´s hot hands on his butt and his swollen member pressed against his back.

„Ya sure?“ whispered Ennis in a husky voice, hungry with desire.

Growing hard in no time Jack gave in with a little sigh, wondering if he would ever, ever in his life learn to resist, but considering the fact that they were about to turn seventyfour he doubted that....

Dagi, I don't know how I missed this.  Beautiful story, Sweetie!  I just love how Jack and Ennis still have the hots for each other well into their seventies.  I would like nothing more than to have our boys grow old and happy together.  And such sexy senior citizens!  Lovely work, Dagi!  Read on, Babe.  I've added a part 2.
Title: Re: The Sale
Post by: Toycoon on June 14, 2007, 11:49:20 pm
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The year 2025 was proving to be very hard for Tammy, and she needed the money.  Tammy’s once lucrative fortune telling business was beginning to suffer, even though her psychic gifts were genuine, and she helped a lot of people. 

Outrageous Sargent Littlewing1957! This tale is so "X Files" I can almost see it on the show.
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 14, 2007, 11:50:39 pm
Too Early In The Summer

< Beans.  Beans beans beans. I´m sick of ´em.>

< Hmm...>

< Taste ain´t that bad, but ...mbmummbfrt....>

< Huh? Mumbling used to be my part. What´d ya say?>

< Said ´they make me fart.´>

< Um...well...> Ennis grins.

< I´ll run them sheep off if I go on like that. Maybe that´s why I ain´t shot me no coyote yet, ´cause they don´t come close enough with all that...gas around. Expect that goddamn puptent to take off like a  balloon some night!>

Ennis laughes out loud, jerking his head back, eyes sparkling.

´This boy is f*uckin´too cute when he laughs...´

< Your guts don´t react like this, or what? >

< Hm, no, think they are used to beans. >

The cowboys go on eating in silence.

Ennis, sniffing : <Uh! What´s that? Was that you? >

< NO, MAN! Bud, I´d never fart as long as you´re around! Don´t want to run you off, friend! It wasn´t me! >

< Naw, me neither, told you I don´t fart, beans or no beans, it must´ve been you!>

Jack laughs, jumps up and over to Ennis, grabs his shirt, and tuzzling and laughing they fall on the ground -

curtains fall discretely...

Dagi, this is so fun and playful.  Thanks for showing us the level of comfort the boys had.  I can image a lot of bodily functions that the 2 observed of the other, and how natural it felt.  I really enjoyed reading this.  Beautiful!
Title: Re: The Sale
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 14, 2007, 11:54:12 pm
Outrageous Sargent Littlewing1957! This tale is so "X Files" I can almost see it on the show.

 :laugh:  Thanks Toycoon, Baby!  I may continue this, I don't know yet!
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 15, 2007, 12:33:01 am
Why thanks, Merr!  :D
Title: Re: A Surprise Gift
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 15, 2007, 01:25:24 am
Thanks, littlewing1957! "A Surprise Gift" is the second part to "Carving a Horse". "Unexpected Feelings" is part three and your story is part four.


Oh, Got ya!  Thanks, Toycoon!
Title: Sleepin (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 15, 2007, 01:38:51 am
“I hope you can finish what you’re startin!”  It was Jack, trying to turn his arthritis ridden bones toward his love.  “You still think you can satisfy me, old man?”  Jack was only teasing as he placed a tender kiss on Ennis’ still luscious mouth.

“Just turn over, Rodeo, that is… if ya can!”  Ennis laughed as he returned Jack’s kiss.  He gently moved behind Jack’s still firm buttocks, but something was wrong!  Jack pushed up against him, but Ennis couldn’t do it.  He hung his head and silently cursed his aged body.  Jack noticed his lover’s change in mood and turned to face him straight on.

“It’s alright, it’s alright!”  Jack soothed as he cradled Ennis head in his leathery, age spotted hands.  “Here, just lay on my chest, just like the old days."  Jack soothed and rocked as Ennis settled in.  "Listen, you don’t have to do anything, Cowboy.  Just be with me!”  Jack whispered.  Ennis cuddled into his lover’s arms and wiped at the tears falling in a puddle on Jack’s chest.  Jack rocked them both to a satisfied slumber.
Title: Re: Bathin' with Ennis
Post by: Dagi on June 15, 2007, 03:07:36 am
After setting his boots side by side at the tangled roots, his pants on a low branch and his shirt above, Ennis hung his cowboy hat on the top the bramble bush, crowning the effigy of himself then a gentle breeze gave it life; he gingerly waded into the glassy lake and upon reaching waist height, stopped, turned and motioned for Jack to join him.

Jack, already naked, scampered to the edge then dove in, emerging from the water just behind Ennis a few seconds later; Jack's eyes languished over every element of Ennis' strong back, his elegant neck, sinewy muscles, the tiny birth marks, his lean waist, finally arriving at a patch of curly hair growing at the base of Ennis' spine, between the shallow dimples and above his crack.

Strangely, a song came to front of Jack's mind. I know shall meet you on that final day, Jack reached for Ennis' slim hips, Water walking Jesus, take me away and he softly kissed the curly patch of hair on Ennis' buttocks.

Oh Toycoon, you write so beautifully! I can figure Jack´s eyes when he is overwhelmed by the beauty of his man.

Dagi
Title: Re: The Sale
Post by: Dagi on June 15, 2007, 03:13:44 am
Tammy Wroe wiped her brow, unable to believe the progress she was making in getting the cabin ready for sale.  Her grandpa, Don Wroe, left the cabin to her when he died in 1994.  Tammy didn’t know what to think or what to do when she learned that the cabin was hers.  Tammy loved her grandfather, but she never spent much time with him.  Her mom worked in the movie business, and moved Tammy to California when she was only 3 years old.   

Tammy’s life in L.A. was good, but when she found herself short on cash, she decided to visit Wyoming for the second time in her life.  Selling the good sized cabin may ease the financial burden of raising 2 children all alone.  The year 2025 was proving to be very hard for Tammy, and she needed the money.  Tammy’s once lucrative fortune telling business was beginning to suffer, even though her psychic gifts were genuine, and she helped a lot of people.  But times were hard and people could no longer afford to spend good money on fortune tellers.  Yes, selling Don Wroe's cabin was the only way.  Cleaning the cabin was backbreaking work, but it had to be done.  It took her 2 days to prepare the living room and kitchen.  Nothing left to do but clean the bathroom and the 3 bedrooms.  But as Tammy stepped into the master bedroom for the first time, she felt it!

Tammy braced herself against the sensation.  As she touched the quilt on the well preserved bed, Tammy thought she would fall in a swoon.  The energy was overpowering!  A male energy: passionate, forceful, very loving.  And suddenly from the corner of her eye, she saw it.  Tammy fell to the dusty carpet as she saw 2 shadowy images – vague, flowing, and twirling together in a dance of love.  Tammy never knew the history of Don Wroe’s cabin or what went on there.  But she knew the feeling of love, and this room was thick with it.  Tammy remembered entering rooms in homes, schools, restaurants and was amazed by the level of energy trapped there.  Some of it was so vile and brutal that she became ill.  But the energy that was trapped here, in Don Wroe’s master bedroom?  Tammy couldn’t believe it.  She wanted to know the names of the men whose loving energy is trapped in her granddad’s cabin.  When she was able to compose herself, Tammy pulled herself off the floor.  In a moment she knew that she could never sell the place…




Littlewing, you are brilliant. Your ideas for stories are always special, and your detailed telling brings it all to life! And I can feel the energy of those loving men wherever I go...they are always present.

Thank you for your lovely comments on my stories. I´ll send you a PM.

love, dagi
Title: Re: Sleepin (2)
Post by: Dagi on June 15, 2007, 03:17:52 am
“I hope you can finish what you’re startin!”  It was Jack, trying to turn his arthritis ridden bones toward his love.  “You still think you can satisfy me, old man?”  Jack was only teasing as he placed a tender kiss on Ennis’ still luscious mouth.

“Just turn over, Rodeo, that is… if ya can!”  Ennis laughed as he returned Jack’s kiss.  He gently moved behind Jack’s still firm buttocks, but something was wrong!  Jack pushed up against him, but Ennis couldn’t do it.  He hung his head and silently cursed his aged body.  Jack noticed his lover’s change in mood and turned to face him straight on.

“It’s alright, it’s alright!”  Jack soothed as he cradled Ennis head in his leathery, age spotted hands.  “Here, just lay on my chest, just like the old days."  Jack soothed and rocked as Ennis settled in.  "Listen, you don’t have to do anything, Cowboy.  Just be with me!”  Jack whispered.  Ennis cuddled into his lover’s arms and wiped at the tears falling in a puddle on Jack’s chest.  Jack rocked them both to a satisfied slumber.


Littlewing, I love you. You wrote the sequel just the way it was in my mind. Sweet and sad. I´m just tearing up again... thank you for that one. It is so amazing how much we all love our boys.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 15, 2007, 03:20:20 am
Will you still need me, will you still feed me when I'm sixty-four.

If only it had worked out that way, Dagi.   :)

Gary

Yes, Gary, that is what  I think all of us would have hoped for them.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: louisev on June 15, 2007, 05:50:12 am

When Ennis woke, his fingers were still buried in Jack's hair, and he leaned close,  sifting through it, holding it to his lips, and then kissing the averted neck, once and then again, a surge of pleasure welling up, and he engulfed Jack in a bear hug that caused the sleeper to stir, startle, and then moan softly as he woke, captive in Ennis's arms.

"Huh, whuh?" Jack  mumbled, still groggy, lifting his head, and Ennis put his lips to that spot once more, fragrant with the salt of his sweat.

"C'mere boy, got somethin fer you."
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 15, 2007, 07:55:03 am
When Ennis woke, his fingers were still buried in Jack's hair, and he leaned close,  sifting through it, holding it to his lips, and then kissing the averted neck, once and then again, a surge of pleasure welling up, and he engulfed Jack in a bear hug that caused the sleeper to stir, startle, and then moan softly as he woke, captive in Ennis's arms.

"Huh, whuh?" Jack  mumbled, still groggy, lifting his head, and Ennis put his lips to that spot once more, fragrant with the salt of his sweat.

"C'mere boy, got somethin fer you."

Hey Louise, what a  beautiful surprise! And you put us all to a shame (exept Toycoon, of course) sticking to the  3-sentence rule... sexy and sweet! Go on, Louise, the first thing to learn here is that we are never satisfied, we always want MOOORE!
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on June 15, 2007, 08:06:42 am
The boys got out of Toycoon's water and into Louise's bed!! MMmmmmm.....what a beautiful progression. Thanks Toycoon and Louise. <3
Title: Re: The Sale
Post by: Clyde-B on June 15, 2007, 09:32:05 am
Tammy Wroe wiped her brow, unable to believe the progress she was making in getting the cabin ready for sale.  Her grandpa, Don Wroe, left the cabin to her when he died in 1994.  Tammy didn’t know what to think or what to do when she learned that the cabin was hers.  Tammy loved her grandfather, but she never spent much time with him.  Her mom worked in the movie business, and moved Tammy to California when she was only 3 years old.   

Tammy’s life in L.A. was good, but when she found herself short on cash, she decided to visit Wyoming for the second time in her life.  Selling the good sized cabin may ease the financial burden of raising 2 children all alone.  The year 2025 was proving to be very hard for Tammy, and she needed the money.  Tammy’s once lucrative fortune telling business was beginning to suffer, even though her psychic gifts were genuine, and she helped a lot of people.  But times were hard and people could no longer afford to spend good money on fortune tellers.  Yes, selling Don Wroe's cabin was the only way.  Cleaning the cabin was backbreaking work, but it had to be done.  It took her 2 days to prepare the living room and kitchen.  Nothing left to do but clean the bathroom and the 3 bedrooms.  But as Tammy stepped into the master bedroom for the first time, she felt it!

Tammy braced herself against the sensation.  As she touched the quilt on the well preserved bed, Tammy thought she would fall in a swoon.  The energy was overpowering!  A male energy: passionate, forceful, very loving.  And suddenly from the corner of her eye, she saw it.  Tammy fell to the dusty carpet as she saw 2 shadowy images – vague, flowing, and twirling together in a dance of love.  Tammy never knew the history of Don Wroe’s cabin or what went on there.  But she knew the feeling of love, and this room was thick with it.  Tammy remembered entering rooms in homes, schools, restaurants and was amazed by the level of energy trapped there.  Some of it was so vile and brutal that she became ill.  But the energy that was trapped here, in Don Wroe’s master bedroom?  Tammy couldn’t believe it.  She wanted to know the names of the men whose loving energy is trapped in her granddad’s cabin.  When she was able to compose herself, Tammy pulled herself off the floor.  In a moment she knew that she could never sell the place…




You ought to write "Ghost Whisperer" and sell them your idea! 
Title: Something fer you
Post by: Toycoon on June 15, 2007, 09:34:06 am
When Ennis woke, his fingers were still buried in Jack's hair, and he leaned close,  sifting through it, holding it to his lips, and then kissing the averted neck, once and then again, a surge of pleasure welling up, and he engulfed Jack in a bear hug that caused the sleeper to stir, startle, and then moan softly as he woke, captive in Ennis' arms.

"Huh, whuh?" Jack mumbled, still groggy, lifting his head, and Ennis put his lips to that spot once more, fragrant with the salt of his sweat.

"C'mere boy, got somethin fer you."

Sexy and salty stuff, Louise. I love the stories where the boys wake up together. And your adherence to the 3 sentence rule... well, you're a woman after my own heart. None'a these other rebel rousers ever listen ta me!
Title: Re: The Sale
Post by: Toycoon on June 15, 2007, 09:36:17 am
Hey there Clyde-B,
Ain't ya gonna write something hot fer us? Don't be a wallflower, let's see yer stuff!
Title: Re: The Sale
Post by: Clyde-B on June 15, 2007, 01:56:06 pm
Hey there Clyde-B,
Ain't ya gonna write something hot fer us? Don't be a wallflower, let's see yer stuff!
Now you know I don't talk often, and when I do I don't usually say much (My motto: if you ain't got nothin to say - then don't say it!)

But for you and littlewing, who's been after me to do this, I'll sure make an attempt.

BannerHill's story about Ennis and Jack winding up together got me to wondering how it mght happen.  This isn't a sexy story, but it's kinda timely.


   Robert Twist hadn’t been to Childress in twenty-five years; he’d never forgotten or forgiven things said when his dad died, but he was determined to visit his father’s grave on his way to Dallas to see his mother and her third husband.  Sunday would be Father’s Day.

   He was glad the road to the cemetery was deserted, the only traffic an old blue and white pickup kicking dust in the opposite direction.
 
   The headstone was where he remembered it, toward the back, in the shade of an old oak where the hot breeze carried with it the scent of memorial wreaths and dying blossoms.  A single grave in a double plot overgrown with weeds, unkempt, untrimmed; the granite weathered but intact; graffiti on the front had been hard washed, faded, no longer legible.  Not as good as he’d hoped; not as bad as he’d feared.  He knelt wanting to speak, but the words wouldn’t come, all those questions, all those things left unsaid, how could we have just abandoned you here?  That was when he noticed... lovingly placed at its base... a small bunch of wilting mountain wildflowers.


Title: Re: The Sale
Post by: Dagi on June 15, 2007, 03:21:42 pm
Now you know I don't talk often, and when I do I don't usually say much (My motto: if you ain't got nothin to say - then don't say it!)

But for you and littlewing, who's been after me to do this, I'll sure make an attempt.

BannerHill's story about Ennis and Jack winding up together got me to wondering how it mght happen.  This isn't a sexy story, but it's kinda timely.


   Robert Twist hadn’t been to Childress in twenty-five years; he’d never forgotten or forgiven things said when his dad died, but he was determined to visit his father’s grave on his way to Dallas to see his mother and her third husband.  Sunday would be Father’s Day.

   He was glad the road to the cemetery was deserted, the only traffic an old blue and white pickup kicking dust in the opposite direction.
 
   The headstone was where he remembered it, toward the back, in the shade of an old oak where the hot breeze carried with it the scent of memorial wreaths and dying blossoms.  A single grave in a double plot overgrown with weeds, unkempt, untrimmed; the granite weathered but intact; graffiti on the front had been hard washed, faded, no longer legible.  Not as good as he’d hoped; not as bad as he’d feared.  He knelt wanting to speak, but the words wouldn’t come, all those questions, all those things left unsaid, how could we have just abandoned you here?  That was when he noticed... lovingly placed at its base... a small bunch of wilting mountain wildflowers.




Clyde-B, that was beautiful and touching! Thank you! May I ask you a favor? Write us some more stories!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 15, 2007, 03:23:15 pm
I love our boys so much...and I LOVE this thread! Thanks to all of you!

(http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb38/dagi_photos/070615_sommer3037klein.jpg)
Title: Re: The Sale
Post by: Clyde-B on June 15, 2007, 07:51:21 pm
Clyde-B, that was beautiful and touching! Thank you! May I ask you a favor? Write us some more stories!

Dagi

Thank you Dagi,

I will if you will!!!  But sometimes it takes me a while to figure out what I'm trying to say.

(I like your "tatoo!")
Title: Father's Day
Post by: Toycoon on June 15, 2007, 08:23:39 pm
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Sunday would be Father’ Day.
Timely, indeed Clyde-B!

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That was when he noticed... lovingly placed at its base... a small bunch of wilting mountain wildflowers.
Aww, that is a touching tale, Clyde-B. See now, that didn't hurt did it?

Next time you'll write a nasty one for us, huh?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on June 15, 2007, 08:28:23 pm
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I love our boys so much...and I LOVE this thread! Thanks to all of you!

Dagi, you are so cute! Are you going to get a real tattoo? I wish I'd become a tattoo artist like I wanted to be back in the 1980's.
I'd happily give you a "J w/ E" so you could declare your love publically.
Title: babyblue eyes
Post by: Dagi on June 16, 2007, 12:05:51 am
babyblue eyes


Ennis was about to ride away when Jack caught hold of the reigns and looked up to him.

Yet it was not the yearning expression in his babyblue eyes but this bewitching, seductive tip of his tongue, visible for only a moment licking those perfect lips  that made Ennis dismount in a quick, deft movement and, one hand around Jack´s neck, the other one with a firm grip on his victim´s butt pushing his groin merciless against his own, he pressed his lips hungrily on his lover´s mouth his desirous tongue entering it in un uncontrollable urge, making Jack´s knees give way under him.

Hot waves flowing through their bodies and one rough lustful groan later they both knew: sheep be damned.
Title: Re: The Sale
Post by: Dagi on June 16, 2007, 12:08:23 am
I will if you will!!!  But sometimes it takes me a while to figure out what I'm trying to say.

Ask the German girl how many "whiles" it takes her...!!!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 16, 2007, 12:13:38 am
Dagi, you are so cute! Are you going to get a real tattoo? I wish I'd become a tattoo artist like I wanted to be back in the 1980's.
I'd happily give you a "J w/ E" so you could declare your love publically.

Thank you, Toycoon, for the compliment as well as for the offer! But, tell you what, the truth is....I´m a damn coward!!! :(

Toycoon, pleeeeeaaase link me to that photo of yours, I can´t find it!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 16, 2007, 12:16:11 am
Susie, we are missing you already! Get this f*ckin computer fixed, and QUICK! No way to stand your absence!
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 16, 2007, 12:23:34 am
When Ennis woke, his fingers were still buried in Jack's hair, and he leaned close,  sifting through it, holding it to his lips, and then kissing the averted neck, once and then again, a surge of pleasure welling up, and he engulfed Jack in a bear hug that caused the sleeper to stir, startle, and then moan softly as he woke, captive in Ennis's arms.

"Huh, whuh?" Jack  mumbled, still groggy, lifting his head, and Ennis put his lips to that spot once more, fragrant with the salt of his sweat.

"C'mere boy, got somethin fer you."

This is so sweet!  I hope you'll continue it for us.  I'm dying to see what happens next!  Thanks so much for posting this charming tale!
Title: Re: The Sale
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 16, 2007, 12:25:12 am
You ought to write "Ghost Whisperer" and sell them your idea! 

Hi, Clyde-B!  Thanks for your kind words.  The Ghost Whisperer?  I really like that show.  I may consider selling them my idea!  :)
Title: Re: The Sale
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 16, 2007, 12:32:42 am
Now you know I don't talk often, and when I do I don't usually say much (My motto: if you ain't got nothin to say - then don't say it!)

But for you and littlewing, who's been after me to do this, I'll sure make an attempt.

BannerHill's story about Ennis and Jack winding up together got me to wondering how it mght happen.  This isn't a sexy story, but it's kinda timely.


   Robert Twist hadn’t been to Childress in twenty-five years; he’d never forgotten or forgiven things said when his dad died, but he was determined to visit his father’s grave on his way to Dallas to see his mother and her third husband.  Sunday would be Father’s Day.

   He was glad the road to the cemetery was deserted, the only traffic an old blue and white pickup kicking dust in the opposite direction.
 
   The headstone was where he remembered it, toward the back, in the shade of an old oak where the hot breeze carried with it the scent of memorial wreaths and dying blossoms.  A single grave in a double plot overgrown with weeds, unkempt, untrimmed; the granite weathered but intact; graffiti on the front had been hard washed, faded, no longer legible.  Not as good as he’d hoped; not as bad as he’d feared.  He knelt wanting to speak, but the words wouldn’t come, all those questions, all those things left unsaid, how could we have just abandoned you here?  That was when he noticed... lovingly placed at its base... a small bunch of wilting mountain wildflowers.




Clyde-B, you're such a natural at this!  What a beautiful story!  I am so glad you wrote this for us.  And it was well worth the wait!  I want more of your writing.  Please favoring us with another fic.  Wonderful!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 16, 2007, 12:34:12 am
I love our boys so much...and I LOVE this thread! Thanks to all of you!

(http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb38/dagi_photos/070615_sommer3037klein.jpg)

Hey there you cutie, you!  What an awesome tatoo!
Title: Re: babyblue eyes
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 16, 2007, 12:36:27 am
Ennis was about to ride away when Jack caught hold of the reigns and looked up to him.

Yet it was not the yearning expression in his babyblue eyes but this bewitching, seductive tip of his tongue, visible for only a moment licking those perfect lips  that made Ennis dismount in a quick, deft movement and, one hand around Jack´s neck, the other one with a firm grip on his victim´s butt pushing his groin merciless against his own, he pressed his lips hungrily on his lover´s mouth his desirous tongue entering it in un uncontrollable urge, making Jack´s knees give way under him.

Hot waves flowing through their bodies and one rough lustful groan later they both knew: sheep be damned.

Awesome, Dagi!  So spontaneous and passionate!  Just like our boys!  ::)
Title: Re: babyblue eyes
Post by: Dagi on June 16, 2007, 12:40:04 am
Awesome, Dagi!  So spontaneous and passionate!  Just like our boys!  ::)

thank you, littlewing!  :-*
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on June 16, 2007, 12:43:31 am
http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,5791.msg198672.html#msg198672 (http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,5791.msg198672.html#msg198672)

Dagi,
It took forever to find the picture so here's the link to our picture. That's me on the right of LauraGigs.
Title: Only One for Me
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 16, 2007, 01:21:30 am
“You’re late!”  Jack Twist yelled as Ennis climbed from his truck.  Jack arrived at camp hours before - redlined it all the way!  He  pitched the tent,  even started supper.   Jack was not necessarily the worrying type, but he couldn’t help but think that Ennis wouldn’t show; or worse, had an accident navigating the terrain.  But Ennis made it, and Jack Twist could finally relax.  Jack studied his lover as he neared.  He couldn’t hide his awe, his excitement as his lover approached.

“Look what I brought..beans!”  Ennis laughed as he shoved a can of bettermost beans into Jack’s hands.  “Very funny, Cowboy!”  Jack laughed as he put the can aside.  “C’mon – I got some steaks on for supper.  I’m also heatin’ up a few ears of corn.”  Jack’s excitement was absolutely palpable, and Ennis couldn’t help but be affected!  Ennis cleared a spot on the chilly earth and took a seat.  He watched as Jack flipped the savory looking T-Bone steaks.  He was hungry, but once he caught a look at Jack’s booty as he bent over the small grill, Ennis developed an appetite for more than just food.

Ennis liked his meat cooked medium well, a fact that Jack learned and stored away for future reference.  Jack grilled the T-Bone to perfection and gently handed Ennis a plate piled high with steak, a couple of ears of corn and asparagus.  He took a seat right alongside Ennis and placed a warm hand on his knee.  “Eat up, Cowboy!”  It was Jack, mouthing the command between bites of corn-on-the-cob.  “After supper we can take a hike, or ride the horses out across the stream.  I found a clearing flush with wildflowers just like the ones that grew up on Brokeback.”  Ennis was silent as he enjoyed his food.  Jack was a little more talkative than usual, but Ennis was fine with that.  “You’re the only one for me, Jack Twist!”  Ennis thought as he beheld his animated and jubilant lover.  When dinner was eaten and the dishes cleared away, Ennis and Jack mounted the horses and rode east…
Title: Father's Day
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 16, 2007, 01:59:13 am
Extreme AU, but I just had to do it!

Jack Twist bounced the beautiful baby girl on his knee while watching Ennis Del Mar set the dining room table.  Baby Indigo was only a year old, and she was the apple of Jack’s eye.  Ennis was rather fond of her, as well.  Indigo laughed and shrieked as Jack ticked her double chin.  “Jack, bring our child!”  Ennis called from the dining room. 

Indigo was an extreme blessing: a gift of love to such sincere lovers.  Ennis cuddled his daughter as Jack handed her over.  He thought back to the time when he handed a cup of his semen over to a nurse at the clinic in town.  The surrogate was chosen carefully, and some nine months later, Jack strapped Indigo into a car seat and brought her home.  Ennis never stopped smiling from the time he laid eyes on her!

Dinner was ready and the table was set.  Ennis kissed the top of his child’s head and handed her back to daddy Jack.  He needed to get ready to entertain his other daughters, who should be along any time now.  Jack was already looking mighty fine, and couldn’t wait to see Bobby again.   He placed his daughter in her playpen and embraced his lover.  “Happy Father’s Day, friend!” Jack whispered as he held his lover tight.”  “Same to you, Jack!”  Ennis kissed him.  “Now let me go.  I gotta get ready to greet our other babies!”
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 16, 2007, 06:17:00 am
Now that I have posted my tenth fanfic in English (imagening you guys rolling on the floor laughing) I think it is high time you let me have some fun!

I want EACH AND EVERY ONE OF YOU  to write me a fanfic in three sentences in a foreign language! (German, French, Italian or Spanish are allowed,otherwise translate it back to English, please). And I mean WRITE, not have it translated by someone else !

Try it, it is fun!

Dagi
Title: Re: babyblue eyes
Post by: Dagi on June 16, 2007, 06:36:10 am
Dagi!  That was so smoking hot, girly!  I love Jack/Jake's eyes but it's the tip of his tongue that really does it for me too!  I'd have jumped off that horse and pounced on him too!  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_207.gif)

I love love love it!


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Thank you, Susie! Finally I got the "hot"-label, yeeehaaawww!
Title: Re: For Dagi
Post by: Clyde-B on June 16, 2007, 07:50:21 am
"Ich liebe dich Jack"

"Ich liebe dich Ennis"

Sie Kuessten.

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_1_72.gif)

Pathetic!!!! But at least I didn't use that swear word!!


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Hi Susie, glad you got the best of your nasty vermin!

I like the direction you're going in here!

Und dann bumsen sie.   ;D
Title: Re: Father's Day
Post by: Clyde-B on June 16, 2007, 07:58:12 am
Extreme AU, but I just had to do it!

Jack Twist bounced the beautiful baby girl on his knee while watching Ennis Del Mar set the dining room table.  Baby Indigo was only a year old, and she was the apple of Jack’s eye.  Ennis was rather fond of her, as well.  Indigo laughed and shrieked as Jack ticked her double chin.  “Jack, bring our child!”  Ennis called from the dining room. 

Indigo was an extreme blessing: a gift of love to such sincere lovers.  Ennis cuddled his daughter as Jack handed her over.  He thought back to the time when he handed a cup of his semen over to a nurse at the clinic in town.  The surrogate was chosen carefully, and some nine months later, Jack strapped Indigo into a car seat and brought her home.  Ennis never stopped smiling from the time he laid eyes on her!

Dinner was ready and the table was set.  Ennis kissed the top of his child’s head and handed her back to daddy Jack.  He needed to get ready to entertain his other daughters, who should be along any time now.  Jack was already looking mighty fine, and couldn’t wait to see Bobby again.   He placed his daughter in her playpen and embraced his lover.  “Happy Father’s Day, friend!” Jack whispered as he held his lover tight.”  “Same to you, Jack!”  Ennis kissed him.  “Now let me go.  I gotta get ready to greet our other babies!”


This sweet story makes me a little sad.  It would have been nice if this was really available.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: MaineWriter on June 16, 2007, 08:22:33 am
My first entry in this game. I like the foreign language twist. Thanks to Natali who helped with the translation!

Jack miró a Ennis y dijo. “Te amo vaquero.”
”Yo te amo a ti,” respondió Ennis, acariciando con sus dedos la barbilla de Jack.
Jack, rió entre dientes. “Lo dije yo primero.”
“Pero yo lo digo mejor”, contestó Ennis inclinándose para besarlo.

L








Title: Re: babyblue eyes
Post by: Toycoon on June 16, 2007, 09:54:16 am
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Dagi!  That was so smoking hot, girly!  I love Jack/Jake's eyes but it's the tip of his tongue that really does it for me too!  I'd have jumped off that horse and pounced on him too!

You know it, Lady Susiebell! Dagi, you're getting quite skilled at your English writing.
Your friends will be very impressed and your husband will be floored by what you've learned!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on June 16, 2007, 10:00:47 am
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Jack miró a Ennis y dijo. “Te amo vaquero.”
”Yo te amo a ti,” respondió Ennis, acariciando con sus dedos la barbilla de Jack.
Jack, rió entre dientes. “Lo dije yo primero.”
“Pero yo lo digo mejor”, contestó Ennis inclinándose para besarlo.

That was fantastic, MaineWriter. And very funny I might add. I'll have to try one in Spanish, too. Perhaps my mother will help me with the translation...not!
Title: Re: For Dagi
Post by: Dagi on June 16, 2007, 01:00:30 pm
"Ich liebe dich Jack"

"Ich liebe dich Ennis"

Sie Kuessten.

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_1_72.gif)

Pathetic!!!! But at least I didn't use that swear word!!


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

That was lovely, Susie! If they had only been able to tell each other....!
Title: Re: For Dagi
Post by: Dagi on June 16, 2007, 01:02:31 pm
Hi Susie, glad you got the best of your nasty vermin!

I like the direction you're going in here!

Und dann bumsen sie.   ;D

Clyde!!!  :o :o :o :o That was only one sentence. I´m not satisfied yet  ;D

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 16, 2007, 01:07:45 pm
My first entry in this game. I like the foreign language twist. Thanks to Natali who helped with the translation!

Jack miró a Ennis y dijo. “Te amo vaquero.”
”Yo te amo a ti,” respondió Ennis, acariciando con sus dedos la barbilla de Jack.
Jack, rió entre dientes. “Lo dije yo primero.”
“Pero yo lo digo mejor”, contestó Ennis inclinándose para besarlo.


Muy bonita historia, Mainwriter! Sobretodo me gusta la respuesta de Ennis, y puedo imaginarme su cara... ;D

Gracias!

Dagi
Title: Re: babyblue eyes
Post by: Dagi on June 16, 2007, 01:09:16 pm
You know it, Lady Susiebell! Dagi, you're getting quite skilled at your English writing.
Your friends will be very impressed and your husband will be floored by what you've learned!

Thank you, Toycoon, you good-looking fella!! :-* And thank you for the link! :-* :-* :-*

Dagi
Title: Re: Only One for Me
Post by: Dagi on June 16, 2007, 01:17:35 pm
He was hungry, but once he caught a look at Jack’s booty as he bent over the small grill, Ennis developed an appetite for more than just food.

You should be a screenwriter, Marie. So beautiful.

Btw, are you planning a sequel... ::)? Oh, and I´m still waiting for another sequel ;D! (I can mail you the first part.)

Dagi
Title: Re: Father's Day
Post by: Dagi on June 16, 2007, 01:22:39 pm
Extreme AU, but I just had to do it!

Jack Twist bounced the beautiful baby girl on his knee while watching Ennis Del Mar set the dining room table.  Baby Indigo was only a year old, and she was the apple of Jack’s eye.  Ennis was rather fond of her, as well.  Indigo laughed and shrieked as Jack ticked her double chin.  “Jack, bring our child!”  Ennis called from the dining room. 

Indigo was an extreme blessing: a gift of love to such sincere lovers.  Ennis cuddled his daughter as Jack handed her over.  He thought back to the time when he handed a cup of his semen over to a nurse at the clinic in town.  The surrogate was chosen carefully, and some nine months later, Jack strapped Indigo into a car seat and brought her home.  Ennis never stopped smiling from the time he laid eyes on her!

Dinner was ready and the table was set.  Ennis kissed the top of his child’s head and handed her back to daddy Jack.  He needed to get ready to entertain his other daughters, who should be along any time now.  Jack was already looking mighty fine, and couldn’t wait to see Bobby again.   He placed his daughter in her playpen and embraced his lover.  “Happy Father’s Day, friend!” Jack whispered as he held his lover tight.”  “Same to you, Jack!”  Ennis kissed him.  “Now let me go.  I gotta get ready to greet our other babies!”


Lovely, Marie. I´m sure they would be the most loving dads. And what a beautiful name the baby got!

Dagi
Title: El Vaquero y el Campesino
Post by: Toycoon on June 16, 2007, 01:56:09 pm
Jamas me olvidare de su sonrisa, tan triste y humlide con tanta candela que enciendiera el bosque.

Labios como fruta madura, dulse y prohibido; me duele, como los quireo.

Que alegria me da verte, Jack-jodido-Twist!
Title: Re: The Sale
Post by: Toycoon on June 16, 2007, 02:01:04 pm
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 If you recall, I wrote a story about a boy, who may have been a ghost, coming to visit Jack at the cabin.  Lots of strange stuff happens there apparently.   :D
Gary

Yes, I do recall. Apparently, Don Wroe's cabin is haunted (by homosexuals)!
Title: Re: El Vaquero y el Campesino
Post by: Clyde-B on June 16, 2007, 02:33:24 pm
Jack-jodido-Twist!


¡Joder!  Toycoon, te juro...   ;D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on June 16, 2007, 02:44:20 pm
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Ain't you sexy, Toycoon.
Golly, thanks garycottle.
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And Damn!  Just how tall are you?
 
I'm 6', 2".
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I think I'd about come up to your belly button.   :-\
Gary
Well then, you won't have to bend over as far! Heehee!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 16, 2007, 03:06:26 pm
Phew!  It was just the mouse (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/16/16_3_105.gif)

So I ripped it out of the computer, threw it out of the window, stamped on it and backed the toyota over it!

..... I think that was fair!   (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_17_201.gif)

Anyway, I'm back up and running and I see I've got some catching up do do .... I'm so happy!



Love Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_1_12v.gif)

PS DAGI! You sexy lady!!! .... love the tattoo!! Thanks for missing me honey (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_9_2.gif)
 

Well Susie, I'm glad you're back up and running!  I've missed you!  :-*
Title: Re: Only One for Me
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 16, 2007, 03:08:43 pm
Beautiful story littlewing! .... I love it when we expand on a moment in the film .... it could have happened just like this! 

You lot are having a bad influence on me because when I read that Ennis liked his meat medium well ... my mind went to a place it shouldn't have gone!!!!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Thanks, Susie.  About the meat?  Well, it was deliberate.  I guess I'm the one with the dirty mind!  :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 16, 2007, 03:10:13 pm
Now that I have posted my tenth fanfic in English (imagening you guys rolling on the floor laughing) I think it is high time you let me have some fun!

I want EACH AND EVERY ONE OF YOU  to write me a fanfic in three sentences in a foreign language! (German, French, Italian or Spanish are allowed,otherwise translate it back to English, please). And I mean WRITE, not have it translated by someone else !

Try it, it is fun!

Dagi


Dagi, I can't do it!  Well, maybe I can get my daughter to help me write a fic in French!  Wow, Dagi, I'm having trouble writing in English!  :laugh:
Title: Re: El Vaquero y el Campesino
Post by: Dagi on June 16, 2007, 05:59:29 pm
Jamas me olvidare de su sonrisa, tan triste y humlide con tanta candela que enciendiera el bosque.

Labios como fruta madura, dulse y prohibido; me duele, como los quireo.

Que alegria me da verte, Jack-jodido-Twist!

Eres un verdadero poeta, Toy-jodiendo-coon!!! I love it, it is romantic and sad and sweet and ....poetic! Thank you so much!

Besos!

Dagi

PS, I like your Jack-jodido-Twist, it fits better. I mean, he probably got f*cked more often than... sorry ;D.
Title: Re: babyblue eyes
Post by: Dagi on June 16, 2007, 06:06:13 pm
Sheep?  There were sheep up on that mountain with them?   ;D  I think it was chowhound who once posted something over at IMDb about how those scenes of Jack and Ennis taking the sheep up demonstrated how caring they were because they were shown carrying some across a streem and holding a couple more in their laps.  My response was those are some lucky damn sheep.   :P

Sexy story, Dagi.  MMM MM  Love it when the boys get crazy.  Thanks for sharing it with us.

Gary 

Thank you, Gary! And YES, if someone asked me whether I´d play sheep in Jack´s lap, I would not object  :laugh:!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 16, 2007, 06:27:40 pm
Dagi, I can't do it!  Well, maybe I can get my daughter to help me write a fic in French!  Wow, Dagi, I'm having trouble writing in English!  :laugh:

"Don´t be shy, give it a try..." :D

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 16, 2007, 06:49:45 pm
Um, does Pig Latin count?

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_6_2v.gif)

Gary

WTF is that? somethin´dirty, huh? if it is so, the dirtier the better ;D ;D ;D!

D.
Title: Re: The Sale
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 16, 2007, 10:47:00 pm
WOW Littlewing!  What a powerful ghost story! .... the 2 shadowy images twirling together in a dance of love makes me swoon! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_3_1v.gif)

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

 :laugh:  Thanks, SusieBell!
Title: Re: Father's Day
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 16, 2007, 10:48:31 pm
This sweet story makes me a little sad.  It would have been nice if this was really available.

Thanks, Clyde-B!  Perhaps someday this sort of thing will be available to everyone who dreams of raising a child!  :)
Title: Re: Sleepin (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 16, 2007, 10:49:42 pm
Ah littlewing .. you have been busy!  This is a beautiful follow up to Dagi's 'Sleepin', which follows on so nicely from 'The Old Spark'.  And I LOVE LOVE LOVE Jack's "It's alright", mirroring the second night in the tent.  It brought a tear to my eye but I'm just so happy they've made it this far in our Alternate Universe ... I prefer this universe to the "real" one!! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/15/15_2_137.gif)


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Susie, you're so sweet!  And I know what you mean!  AU is the bomb!
Title: Re: Father's Day
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 16, 2007, 10:52:53 pm
Oh Littlewing ... I'm sat here crying like a baby ... really I am!  It must be the mother in me that thinks EVERYONE should experience the overwhelming intensity of the love you feel for a child!  I can't believe they have a child together .... I'm going to have to blow my nose ... excuse me a moment!!!


Susie   (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_9_9.gif)

Ah honey, I think together Jack and Ennis would make awsome parents!  I just had to give them a child of their own.  You know, I thought you guys would hate this story, but I'm pleasantly surprised.  I may have to revisit J and E and little Indigo!  :)
Title: Re: The Sale
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 16, 2007, 10:55:35 pm
Wow, littlewing, I loved this!  And I'd love to have that cabin myself.  If you recall, I wrote a story about a boy, who may have been a ghost, coming to visit Jack at the cabin.  Lots of strange stuff happens there apparently.   :D

Gary

Hey Gary Baby!  Where you been?  I was just about to track you down, as I've been missing you!  :)  Anyway, thanks for your kind words, and I do remember your story about the ghost visiting Don Wroe's cabin.  Do you think you can repost it here?  It is a favorite of mine!  :)
Title: Re: Sleepin (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 16, 2007, 10:56:33 pm
So tender and heartbreaking, littlewing.  It's great to think of Jack and Ennis growing old together, but sad that Ennis can no longer...  Well, you know.

Gary

P.S.  Isn't there a pill Ennis can take?   :P

 :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:
Title: Re: Only One for Me
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 16, 2007, 10:58:08 pm
You should be a screenwriter, Marie. So beautiful.

Btw, are you planning a sequel... ::)? Oh, and I´m still waiting for another sequel ;D! (I can mail you the first part.)

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi!  I don't know if I'll continue this or not, but there is a good chance that I will.  Oh , and please send me the first part of your fic and I'll be happy to write a sequel!  ;)
Title: Re: Father's Day
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 16, 2007, 11:01:19 pm
Great idea for a story, littlewing.  And any kid would be lucky to have Jack and Ennis as Daddy and Poppy.  This is the way it should have been for Jack and Ennis.  Thanks for giving us a peek at this alternative universe.

Gary

I think you're right, Gary!  I've always thought of Jack and Ennis as being good fathers.  They would be amazing parents to a little girl or boy of their own.
Title: His Touch
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 16, 2007, 11:36:20 pm
Jack Twist settled in, sat down between Ennis Del Mar’s open thighs.  He had just driven 1400 miles to be with his lover, and though Jack never complained, Ennis noticed a stiffening of Jack’s shoulders.  It worried him.

Ennis pulled Jack closer and ran his fingers through Jack’s thick, dark hair.  “Hey what you doin’ En?”  Jack laughed as he looked up at his love.  “Shhh,, just sit up still.  I know what I’m doin.”  It was Ennis, as he massaged Jack’s scalp with firm, circular motions.  Ennis kneaded and rubbed, kissed his man’s hair until Jack purred like a kitten.

Jack became almost limp as Ennis moved to the shoulders.  He used his thumbs to work out the kinks in Jack’s stiff neck.  “Oh God, Ennis, where you learn how to do that?”  Jack whispered as he laid his head sideways in Ennis' lap.  He felt Ennis’ growing manhood, but he needed more of his man's practiced touch.  Jack moved his head back and forth, guiding Ennis, leading his hands where he needed them most.  It was good.  And after a good half hour, Jack Twist felt mighty fine, completely refreshed.  He turned around suddenly and freed a tumescent Ennis from his jeans…
Title: Re: Father's Day
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 16, 2007, 11:38:18 pm
Hi Littlewing. I wrote you before but evidently you didn't see it.  What the heck does AU mean?  I am stumped.

Merrily

Oh, merr I did see your question.  Forgive me for taking so long to answer.  AU means alternate universe.  It is a departure from canon.  :)
Title: Moment
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 17, 2007, 12:18:09 am
It was well after midnight and Ennis was ready for bed.  He was ready for love.  Jack was warming himself by the fire, rubbing his hands together, blowing into his palms, trying to keep warm.  “If you’re cold, let’s go in the tent, Bud.”  Ennis said as he moved closer to Jack.  I’ll do more than keep you warm, that’s fer sure!”  Ennis winked at his lover.

“Well, I think I’ll sit up a bit longer, if it’s all the same to you.”  Jack placed his cold hands under his armpits.  “Come sit by me, friend.  Let’s just enjoy this crisp, cold night for a bit longer.”  Ennis moved close to Jack, and draped an arm around his shoulder.  He leaned in and placed a sloppy kiss on Jack’s cheek.  Jack Twist sighed with pleasure and took Ennis’ hand.  He kissed his open palm, traced Ennis’ lifeline with his tongue.  “You keep that up, Rodeo and I’m gonna have to take you right here!”  Jack chuckled and placed the back of Ennis’ hand to his mouth. 

Ennis watched, transfixed, as Jack kissed his hand.   As the fire died down, Jack was just a shadow, a ruddy image.  Ennis was fascinated by the glow of his love in the firelight.  He reached out for Jack, pulled him to his feet.  And just as the last embers of the fire sputtered and popped, Jack allowed himself to be led into the tent.


Title: Re: His Touch
Post by: Dagi on June 17, 2007, 03:00:34 am
Jack Twist settled in, sat down between Ennis Del Mar’s open thighs.  He had just driven 1400 miles to be with his lover, and though Jack never complained, Ennis noticed a stiffening of Jack’s shoulders.  It worried him.

Ennis pulled Jack closer and ran his fingers through Jack’s thick, dark hair.  “Hey what you doin’ En?”  Jack laughed as he looked up at his love.  “Shhh,, just sit up still.  I know what I’m doin.”  It was Ennis, as he massaged Jack’s scalp with firm, circular motions.  Ennis kneaded and rubbed, kissed his man’s hair until Jack purred like a kitten.

Jack became almost limp as Ennis moved to the shoulders.  He used his thumbs to work out the kinks in Jack’s stiff neck.  “Oh God, Ennis, where you learn how to do that?”  Jack whispered as he laid his head sideways in Ennis' lap.  He felt Ennis’ growing manhood, but he needed more of his man's practiced touch.  Jack moved his head back and forth, guiding Ennis, leading his hands where he needed them most.  It was good.  And after a good half hour, Jack Twist felt mighty fine, completely refreshed.  He turned around suddenly and freed a tumescent Ennis from his jeans…


Marie, thank you for so tender a moment! You describe so beautifully how they discover different ways to give to each other what they need most - caring love and tenderness.

Dagi
Title: Re: Moment
Post by: Dagi on June 17, 2007, 03:05:31 am
It was well after midnight and Ennis was ready for bed.  He was ready for love.  Jack was warming himself by the fire, rubbing his hands together, blowing into his palms, trying to keep warm.  “If you’re cold, let’s go in the tent, Bud.”  Ennis said as he moved closer to Jack.  I’ll do more than keep you warm, that’s fer sure!”  Ennis winked at his lover.

“Well, I think I’ll sit up a bit longer, if it’s all the same to you.”  Jack placed his cold hands under his armpits.  “Come sit by me, friend.  Let’s just enjoy this crisp, cold night for a bit longer.”  Ennis moved close to Jack, and draped an arm around his shoulder.  He leaned in and placed a sloppy kiss on Jack’s cheek.  Jack Twist sighed with pleasure and took Ennis’ hand.  He kissed his open palm, traced Ennis’ lifeline with his tongue.  “You keep that up, Rodeo and I’m gonna have to take you right here!”  Jack chuckled and placed the back of Ennis’ hand to his mouth. 

Ennis watched, transfixed, as Jack kissed his hand.   As the fire died down, Jack was just a shadow, a ruddy image.  Ennis was fascinated by the glow of his love in the firelight.  He reached out for Jack, pulled him to his feet.  And just as the last embers of the fire sputtered and popped, Jack allowed himself to be led into the tent.




Ohh Marie, your stories really floor me. You MUST write and publish, honey, your writing is so extraordinary, the way you capture those tender moments that reveal the strongest love that ever existed in this universe. *sigh* *tears welling up*. Thank you.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: louisev on June 17, 2007, 07:05:34 am
MMM  Louise, sexy as hell.  Is this your first fanfic?  Don't think I remember seeing a story from you before.  In any event, it's great to see you here now. 

Keep up the good work.

Gary

P.S.  Wonder what Ennis had for Jack.   ???

oh no, not my first fan fic... I've written a few things.
Title: Re: El Vaquero y el Campesino
Post by: Toycoon on June 17, 2007, 11:18:33 am

¡Joder!  Toycoon, te juro...   ;D

Gracias, Clyde-B. Lo ago todo para ustedes, mis amigos. Y tu, hablas Espanol tambien?

Dagi, que bien sabes tu lejer el Espanol? Donde lo apprendistes?
Title: Re: El Vaquero y el Campesino
Post by: opinionista on June 17, 2007, 12:14:12 pm
Gracias, Clyde-B. Lo ago todo para ustedes, mis amigos. Y tu, hablas Espanol tambien?

Dagi, que bien sabes tu lejer el Espanol? Donde lo apprendistes?

Yo hablo español  :D
Title: La carta
Post by: opinionista on June 17, 2007, 12:44:52 pm
"Ennis: Te amo y te extraño, y estoy loco por volver a sentir tus besos y tu cuerpo sobre el mío", escribió Jack sobre el papel. Antes de proseguir, volvió a leer lo que había escrito, pero el miedo a la reacción de Ennis hizo que volviera a romper la carta, como ya había hecho con otras diez. Sacó otro folio del cajón y volvió a empezar.


Title: Re: His Touch
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 17, 2007, 02:52:06 pm
MMM MM  That feels nice, littlewing.  Think if I give a neck rub to a nice guy like Jack he'll...   :P

Gary

Ah, Gary, you're such a beautiful, lusty man!  I'm sure Jack wouldn't be able to resist you.
Title: Re: Moment
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 17, 2007, 02:53:17 pm
Hi Littlewing.  Lovely story - seductive and sweet.  I like the way Jack knew just where to touch Ennis. (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_2_2v.gif)

Thanks, Merr.  It is the quiet, tender moments between J&E that I think about the most!
Title: Re: His Touch
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 17, 2007, 02:55:19 pm
Marie, thank you for so tender a moment! You describe so beautifully how they discover different ways to give to each other what they need most - caring love and tenderness.

Dagi

Yes, thanks, Dagi.  And I like to image Ennis doing the nuturing.  Jack was the minsitering(sp?) angel, but I truly feel that Ennis would do anything in his power to make Jack happy; give him what he needs!
Title: Re: Moment
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 17, 2007, 02:57:46 pm
Ohh Marie, your stories really floor me. You MUST write and publish, honey, your writing is so extraordinary, the way you capture those tender moments that reveal the strongest love that ever existed in this universe. *sigh* *tears welling up*. Thank you.

Dagi

Dagi, my love, you are just too sweet.  I don't know what came over me last night!  I was going to post another story, one almost sentimental, but I got very sleepy and decided to turn in.  If I can get to it, I'll post another sweet tale tonight.  I'm in a warm and fuzzy mood!  :laugh:
Title: Re: His Touch
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 17, 2007, 02:58:57 pm
So sweet and tender, with just a hint of nasty! .... I swear you and toycoon are moulding into one!!!

Love Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Thanks so much, Susie!  Hey, we're waiting for a steamy, sexy tale from you!  But no pressure!  I know anything you post will be worth the wait!  :)
Title: Re: Moment
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 17, 2007, 03:00:00 pm
Ooh I love that sloppy kiss!!  And the open palm kiss ..... (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_3_1v.gif) ..... Beautiful touching moment littlewing

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

I was going to post one last night but I was a bit tipsy!  I tend to get a bit rude, or very soppy ... hey Gary, didn't I tell you I loved you about 4 times last night? .... hehehe ..... I do, you know I do .... but sorry!! ... I'll go and read it now ... see if it makes any sense!! 

Why you little vixen, you!  :laugh:  :-*  ::)
Title: Re: Moment
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 17, 2007, 03:00:38 pm
Aw, littlewing.  You know I love it when Ennis takes what he wants.  Sexy!

Gary

Yes, yes, yes!
Title: Re: Cabin Fever
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 17, 2007, 03:02:10 pm
Cabin Fever

Ennis had stormed out two hours before, so now Jack was alone.  The preceding argument had left him feeling tense and bitter, and therefore he was thankful for the stillness of this place out in the wilderness.  There wasn’t a soul around, and this gave Jack an opportunity to lick his wounded pride in private.  He hadn’t meant to tick Ennis off, but sometimes it was hard not to think out loud, or dream out loud when you felt so comfortable and relaxed with someone.  Maybe asking Don Wroe if he’d be willing to sell the cabin was a dumb idea, but it wasn’t like Jack was determined to follow through.  Saying something like that was akin to trying on a new pair of boots.  You might buy them and take them home if they fit, but most likely you’d leave them in the store.  Why couldn’t Ennis see that?

Jack needed something to do just to pass the time so he got the broom from the corner and started sweeping the dust that he and Ennis had tracked in during their stay.  He looked the place over as he went, at the wide-planked floor boards, the rough barn board walls, the propane stove and refrigerator, the bed with its iron frame, the fireplace made of river rock, and the wing chair beside it.  The night before Ennis had been sitting in that chair naked, and so Jack took his own clothes off, climbed into Ennis’s lap facing him, wrapped his arms around Ennis’s neck, and his legs around the arms of the chair, and he rode Ennis’s hardness like he would ride a bull.  This was a nice place, and he really would like to call it his own.

When he opened the door to sweep out the dirt he found a young man standing on the porch getting ready to knock.  “Fuck!” Jack said with a start.  But then he apologized and asked, “Is there somethin’ I can help you with?”

The kid was about eighteen, with shaggy dark hair, short sideburns, fair skin, and bright blue eyes.  Judging from his ragged jeans, and army jacket adorned with peace signs and an upside down American flag, he was yet another war protester.  Jack looked the boy up and down and felt a stir in his groin.

“My name’s Danny, sir, and I’m looking for Aaron Wroe,” the kid said with a slow southern draw that would melt butter like warm toast.

“Don’t know an Aaron Wroe,” Jack confessed.  “Is he related to Don?”

“Don’s his daddy.”

Jack had to tell the young man that Aaron wasn’t around, but since it appeared he had hiked the seventeen miles up from the main road on foot Jack didn’t have the heart to simply turn him away on a dime.  So he invited the kid to share a beer with him.  Danny accepted and Jack got a couple of bottles from the fridge, and then they sat on the rockers on the front porch and talked.

Danny explained that his parents had moved to Riverton from Alabama when he was fourteen, and he and Aaron had become good friends.  They even planed to be roommates at the University of Wyoming in the fall.  The kid had an easy and open way about him.  Within a half hour Danny had revealed that “Five Easy Pieces” was his all time favorite film, and that his favorite book was “The Catcher in the Rye.”  He also spoke of joining the Peace Core after college.  Jack liked the boy’s company, but he was glad when he said he had to go.  Ennis turned stony cold toward these kids who gave the finger to tradition, so Jack was glad they wouldn’t cross paths.

Not more than five minutes after the kid left Ennis returned.  He walked slowly up to the cabin, stopped before coming up on the porch, and stood there with his head hanging.  “Jack, why can’t you take what I can give ya, and stop askin’ for more?”

“Sorry, Ennis.”  And he was sorry.  Right then all Jack wanted was to enjoy what little time they had together and not fight.

Suddenly Ennis bounded up the steps and charged toward him.  Jack got to his feet thinking Ennis was about to hit him, but instead Ennis grabbed him, pushed him up against the wall, and said, “You mess with my mind, Jack fuckin’ Twist.”  And then he forcefully shoved his lips against Jack’s and pushed his tongue in.

They kissed like that for a long time, and then Ennis did something he had never done before.  He picked Jack up into his arms, and carried him inside the cabin.  Then he threw him down on the iron bed and started undoing his shirt.  As they made love Jack secretly imagined that Danny was standing outside the window looking in.  He wanted the boy to see.  Wanted him to know that Ennis loved him.  And somehow he thought Danny would appreciate that.

Afterwards Ennis sat up in bed, and Jack leaned against him.  “Do you know Aaron Wroe?” Jack asked.

“That’s Don’s son.  How’d you hear about him?”

“Someone came by looking for him while you were out.”

Ennis said in a flat tone that indicated he was holding too much back, “Well, he won’t be findin’ him anytime soon.  Aaron got himself shot over there in Vietnam.  They sent him back in a body bag last week.”

Jack was overcome with a sudden wave of sadness, and not just for Aaron, but for the young man he had met earlier.  “Was he good friends with some kid named Danny?”

“Danny Phillips?  Guess so.  Don was tellin’ me when I asked him if I could borrow the place how last year around this time Aaron was supposed to come up here with Danny.  But Don wouldn’t let him.”

“Why not?” asked Jack.

“Don didn’t like him.  Not many in Riverton liked Danny after he pulled that stunt to stay out of the army.  He told the draft board that he was queer.  Wanted Aaron to do the same.”

Jack, sensing something wasn’t right, sat up and looked at Ennis.  “What happened to Danny after that?”

Ennis’s expression turned to confusion and he said, “Did that guy that came by say somethin’ about Danny?”

“Just answer me.”

“One night when he was coming out of a bar on Main the kid got jumped, pulled into an alley, and got his head kicked in.  Danny Phillips is as dead as Aaron Wroe.”

Marvelous, simply marvelous.  One of my absolute favorites!  Thanks so much for reposting Cabin Fever for us, Gary!   :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: opinionista on June 17, 2007, 03:04:41 pm
Since you are all into writing stories about Ennis and Jack you might want to check out the drabble fest if you haven't. It's fun too. Just a suggestion.

http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,7810.msg207570.html#new (http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,7810.msg207570.html#new)
Title: Re: El Vaquero y el Campesino
Post by: Dagi on June 17, 2007, 03:24:54 pm
Gracias, Clyde-B. Lo ago todo para ustedes, mis amigos. Y tu, hablas Espanol tambien?

Dagi, que bien sabes tu lejer el Espanol? Donde lo apprendistes?

Hace unos 12 anos sabía hablarlo bastante bién, pero me lo perdí casi todo. hablar todavía me cae más facil que escribir. Lo aprendí hablando con amigos latinos y viajando por latinomaerica por 5 meses. Es un idioma bonito y facil, pero ya no acostumbro escribir. Tu me ensenaste que es un idioma muy poetico! "labios como fruta madura..." mmmmm, love it!

Y TU ?
Title: Re: El Vaquero y el Campesino
Post by: opinionista on June 17, 2007, 03:29:16 pm
Hace unos 12 anos sabía hablarlo bastante bién, pero me lo perdí casi todo. hablar todavía me cae más facil que escribir. Lo aprendí hablando con amigos latinos y viajando por latinomaerica por 5 meses. Es un idioma bonito y facil, pero ya no acostumbro escribir. Tu me ensenaste que es un idioma muy poetico! "labios como fruta madura..." mmmmm, love it!

Y TU ?

I think your Spanish is perfect. Really. (I am a native speaker).
Title: Re: La carta
Post by: Dagi on June 17, 2007, 03:30:14 pm
"Ennis: Te amo y te extraño, y estoy loco por volver a sentir tus besos y tu cuerpo sobre el mío", escribió Jack sobre el papel. Antes de proseguir, volvió a leer lo que había escrito, pero el miedo a la reacción de Ennis hizo que volviera a romper la carta, como ya había hecho con otras diez. Sacó otro folio del cajón y volvió a empezar.




It would have been a secure way to write it in spanish, Alma would never have been able to read it....but Ennis neither :(!

I hope he wrote anything similarly steamy when he made the next attempt ;D!

Lovely idea, Opinionista !
Title: Re: El Vaquero y el Campesino
Post by: Dagi on June 17, 2007, 03:39:03 pm
I think your Spanish is perfect. Really. (I am a native speaker).

Oh, thank you! *blush*

Dagi
Title: Re: Cabin Fever
Post by: Dagi on June 17, 2007, 03:42:16 pm
Cabin Fever

Ennis had stormed out two hours before, so now Jack was alone....

“One night when he was coming out of a bar on Main the kid got jumped, pulled into an alley, and got his head kicked in.  Danny Phillips is as dead as Aaron Wroe.”

Gary, I already liked this when I read it on IMDb, and now I love it even more! ( and every time I see a wing chair now it makes me think of bull riding :laugh:!)

Dagi
Title: Re: El Vaquero y el Campesino
Post by: David In Indy on June 17, 2007, 03:44:06 pm
Hace unos 12 anos sabía hablarlo bastante bién, pero me lo perdí casi todo. hablar todavía me cae más facil que escribir. Lo aprendí hablando con amigos latinos y viajando por latinomaerica por 5 meses. Es un idioma bonito y facil, pero ya no acostumbro escribir. Tu me ensenaste que es un idioma muy poetico! "labios como fruta madura..." mmmmm, love it!

Y TU ?

I wish I could read this. I took Spanish in high school but I failed it. I failed French too.  :(

I'd run this through a translator, but it would only confuse me more probably!

I love that picture in your avatar Dagi! Is that a picture of you?? :)
Title: Re: Moment
Post by: Dagi on June 17, 2007, 03:44:53 pm
  I was going to post another story, one almost sentimental, but I got very sleepy and decided to turn in.  If I can get to it, I'll post another sweet tale tonight.  I'm in a warm and fuzzy mood!  :laugh:

Hey Marie, could you just pass me over that story-writing-machine of yours, and how much is the rent?
Title: Re: El Vaquero y el Campesino
Post by: Dagi on June 17, 2007, 03:52:44 pm
I wish I could read this. I took Spanish in high school but I failed it. I failed French too.  :(

I'd run this through a translator, but it would only confuse me more probably!

I love that picture in your avatar Dagi! Is that a picture of you?? :)

Hi David, nice to see you here!

I just wrote that Spanish is a lovely and easy language ;D ;D ;D (and where I learned it etc.). I failed french, too! I don´t like it that much, maybe that´s why.

Any fanfics in the jar over the fire, David?

And as for the photo: its my granny  ::), what did you think?

Dagi ;)
Title: Re: El Vaquero y el Campesino
Post by: Toycoon on June 17, 2007, 09:11:31 pm
Quote
I'd run this through a translator, but it would only confuse me more probably!

Ooowee! I'll translate it for ya, David-Indiana. I'm fluent in Spanish (my parents are Cuban). Spanish is my native tongue.
Title: You know I ain't queer
Post by: Toycoon on June 17, 2007, 09:16:05 pm
Queer

The word rattled around the four corners of Jack's mind like a rock inside an old tin can rolling downhill; a word often whispered in hushed tones by older ladies or screamed angrily by Jack's father when he was mad at the world.

Jack drifted into thoughts of Ennis' mystifying brown eyes, his curly hair and his soft pillowy lips before answering weakly, "Me neither."
Title: Re: El Vaquero y el Campesino
Post by: David In Indy on June 17, 2007, 09:20:51 pm
Ooowee! I'll translate it for ya, David-Indiana. I'm fluent in Spanish (my parents are Cuban). Spanish is my native tongue.

<David sits and waits patiently for Toycoon to give him the translation. David is in no hurry though. He lives in Indiana, and things move slower there>  ;)  ;)

I'm just joking!  :)


I didn't know you were flueint in Spanish! Several of our members speak Spanish.  :D
Title: Re: Just ask me
Post by: Toycoon on June 17, 2007, 10:08:11 pm
Quote
Here's a toned-down version of the story....

You are one, nasty lady, Susiebell (and I use the term very loosely)!

That husband of your's had better get on the ball! What did you give him for Father's Day, anyway?


Title: Re: El Vaquero y el Campesino
Post by: Toycoon on June 17, 2007, 10:23:01 pm
Jamas me olvidare de su sonrisa, tan triste y humlide con tanta candela que enciendiera el bosque.

Labios como fruta madura, dulse y prohibido; me duele, como los quireo.

Que alegria me da verte, Jack-jodido-Twist!

For David-Indiana, the English translation:

The Cowboy and the Ranch Hand

I'll never forget his smile, so sad and humble, so hot it could light the forest on fire.

Lips like ripe fruit, sweet and forbidden; I want them so much it aches.

How happy I am to see you, Jack-fucken'-Twist!

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: David In Indy on June 17, 2007, 10:38:57 pm
For David-Indiana, the English translation:

The Cowboy and the Ranch Hand

I'll never forget his smile, so sad and humble, so hot it could light the forest on fire.

Lips like ripe fruit, sweet and forbidden; I want them so much it aches.

How happy I am to see you, Jack-fucken'-Twist!



I really like that!  :D

Thanks for translating it for me! I appreciate it!  :)
Title: Dum Sheep (Part 1)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 17, 2007, 11:01:33 pm
Dumb Sheep is a charming little tale written by our lovely Dagi.  I am posting it here with her permission.  I am also posting my continuance of the tale right below.

They were sitting on the meadow in the golden afternoon sun, Ennis between his friend’s thighs, looking at the sheep they had finally untangled after a few days work. Jack loved to feel Ennis’ warm back leaning with his full weight against his breast and belly!  He loved to inhale the scent of his lover’s hair, and to hear his voice as Ennis murmured:

"Look at them dumb sheep, sometimes I wish I could live their life: not worrying about things like other people’s opinion, or how to make a living.  They just let the day pass by and enjoy whatever they find right before their mouths..."

Jack smiled, put both arms around his love, then let one hand slip into Ennis jeans and muttered:  "Bud, how about playing sheep today...? “
Title: Dumb Sheep (part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 17, 2007, 11:05:02 pm
Jack gently caressed Ennis’ manhood with a slow, steady movement.  Nothing fast or deep, just languid strokes as soft as a butterfly’s wing.  Ennis craved Jack’s tenderness, and he reached down and pulled himself free.  Ennis lifted himself slightly, and placed his swollen member in Jack’s palm.  Jack held Ennis’ cock as though it were his most treasured and valued possession.  He held him silent and still; his eyes never leaving the long shaft of love.

Ennis watched Jack as he looked down at his member.   The look on Jack’s handsome face was one of lust, wonder, unwavering love.  Ennis couldn’t take any more.  “Make me happy, Jack….please?”  Ennis asked, huskily, breathlessly.  Jack Twist chuckled and caressed him harder now.  “Like this, baby?”  He whispered, as he increased the pressure.

Afterwards, Ennis lay in Jack’s arms, the sheep be damned.  Jack held him tight for awhile, just until the last tremor subsided.  “You okay, friend?”  Jack whispered in Ennis’ ear as he cuddled him.  “Yes, thanks.”  Ennis answered as he pulled away slowly from the embrace.   Jack rose up, laid a sleeping Ennis down among the sheep and walked over to camp.  He thought twice about washing Ennis’ release from his hands.  It was a sweet, sticky reminder of their love.  But there was work to be done…
Title: Re: El Vaquero y el Campesino
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 17, 2007, 11:05:56 pm
For David-Indiana, the English translation:

The Cowboy and the Ranch Hand

I'll never forget his smile, so sad and humble, so hot it could light the forest on fire.

Lips like ripe fruit, sweet and forbidden; I want them so much it aches.

How happy I am to see you, Jack-fucken'-Twist!



So beautiful!  I wish I can read and write in another language  :'(
Title: Re: Dumb Sheep (part 2)
Post by: Toycoon on June 18, 2007, 12:31:39 am
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He held him silent and still; his eyes never leaving the long shaft of love.

Littlewing1957 and Dagi, you pair of Dirty Mamas. What is going on here? :o
Title: Queer (Part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 18, 2007, 12:36:16 am
But Jack couldn’t even convince himself.  What else was there to do but deny being queer?  All Jack knew was that he wanted his friend.  He wanted to again feel Ennis’ hardness in his most secret, tender place. 

“Have it your way, friend.” Jack thought as he looked toward Ennis: a vision standing tall against the sky.  “You’ll want me again….you’ll come to me.  Then we’ll see just who is queer.”

Ennis retreated toward his work, leaving a hurt and confused Jack Twist with his tortured thoughts…

Title: Re: Dumb Sheep (part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 18, 2007, 12:37:14 am
Littlewing1957 and Dagi, you pair of Dirty Mamas. What is going on here? :o

 :laugh:  I don't know, Baby!

 Read on!  I've posted a past 2 to "Queer."  I hope you don't mind?
Title: Perhaps in Heaven
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 18, 2007, 01:44:04 am
“Is the anything interestin’ up there in heaven?”  Jack asked, as an unusually stoic Ennis Del Mar stared up at the star bright, inky black sky.  “I’m just sendin’ up a prayer of thanks!”  Ennis answered.  “Fer what?”  Jack had to hear this one! “For you forgettin’ to bring that damn harmonica!  I’m thankful for the peace and quiet!”  Jack laughed in spite of himself.  He reached over for Ennis and rubbed his thigh.

Jack thought about Alma and the moment he first laid eyes on her.  She was certainly a gorgeous woman, but not quite as lovely as Lureen.  “I’m gonna get him!”  Jack thought as he eyed Mrs. Del Mar.  He was instantly ashamed of himself, but he couldn’t help his feelings.  Jack wanted Ennis Del Mar more than anything else in this world.

If only Ennis felt the same way.  Jack allowed his lover to stare up at the sky in peace, while his thoughts drifted to Alma and the so-called life Ennis had with her.  He cringed as he imaged Ennis making love to his sexy wife.  The mental picture of Ennis with someone else, even his legal wife, was more than Jack could stand.  “Is she better than me?”  Jack blurted out, before he could even control himself.  Ennis couldn't have heard correctly.  “What did you say, Jack fing Twist.....??”
Title: Re: El Vaquero y el Campesino
Post by: Dagi on June 18, 2007, 02:46:27 am
Your granny is one hot chick.   ;D

I will tell her, thanks! ;D
Title: Re: You know I ain't queer
Post by: Dagi on June 18, 2007, 02:50:14 am
Ennis' mystifying brown eyes, his curly hair and his soft pillowy lips before answering weakly, "Me neither."

This description really can make one´s knees weak. You are a "word-wizard". And have I mentioned before that you are the master of..well yes, I probably have :D...
Title: Re: Just ask me
Post by: Dagi on June 18, 2007, 02:56:53 am
WOW!, I'm so glad I didn't post this last night .... I get very rude when I'm drunk.... I'd have been booted off the Bettermost site for sure!!!  Here's a toned-down version of the story....

“I wanna fuck you, Jack…. ”

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

* still trying to regain composure*  I won´t have to tell you that this was more than hot, girl!
And if that was the toned-down version....then I´d love to read the original one :o!!!

Dagi
Title: Re: Dumb Sheep (part 2)
Post by: Dagi on June 18, 2007, 03:02:13 am
Jack held Ennis’ cock as though it were his most treasured and valued possession.  He held him silent and still; his eyes never leaving the long shaft of love.

Ennis watched Jack as he looked down at his member.   The look on Jack’s handsome face was one of lust, wonder, unwavering love.  Ennis couldn’t take any more.  “Make me happy, Jack….please?” 


Littlewing, I don´t know what to say, really! That was so sexy and so sweet and tender and loving - what a way to have my very first fanfic continued. I feel very honored! Thank you so much!

Dagi
Title: Re: Perhaps in Heaven
Post by: Dagi on June 18, 2007, 03:09:01 am
“Is the anything interestin’ up there in heaven?”  ..........  “Is she better than me?”


So sad that Jack is jealous, but it shows how much he wanted Ennis. I´m sure it hurt him as well when he heard him talk about Cassie.

Thank you for this touching insight, Marie!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 18, 2007, 03:14:15 am
Would anyone of you authors mind if I took all the stories and opened a Jack with Ennis READ ONLY - thread?

Think it over and let me know, please.

Dagi
Title: Re: Queer (Part 2)
Post by: Toycoon on June 18, 2007, 09:23:40 am
But Jack couldn’t even convince himself.  What else was there to do but deny being queer?  All Jack knew was that he wanted his friend.  He wanted to again feel Ennis’ hardness in his most secret, tender place. 

“Have it your way, friend.” Jack thought as he looked toward Ennis: a vision standing tall against the sky.  “You’ll want me again….you’ll come to me.  Then we’ll see just who is queer.”

Ennis retreated toward his work, leaving a hurt and confused Jack Twist with his tortured thoughts…

He wanted to again feel Ennis’ hardness in his most secret, tender place. Mmmmmm! Love them "tortured thoughts", yessir! Hot, littlewing1957.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on June 18, 2007, 09:34:29 am
Would anyone of you authors mind if I took all the stories and opened a Jack with Ennis READ ONLY - thread?

Think it over and let me know, please.

Dagi


Why? Are the pages getting difficult to load up? I almost miss the limited 'chapters' structure of Jack with Ennis on IMDb. I suppose we could start a 'read only' thread.

Ellemeno, Ineedcrayons, TrueOracle what do you mods suggest?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: MaineWriter on June 18, 2007, 10:16:20 am
Why? Are the pages getting difficult to load up? I almost miss the limited 'chapters' structure of Jack with Ennis on IMDb. I suppose we could start a 'read only' thread.

Ellemeno, Ineedcrayons, TrueOracle what do you mods suggest?

Actually, I am the mod here for Fanfiction.

Personally, I like the stories and the comments mixed in together...it keeps the thread lively, IMO. But I can also see how it might be distracting to a reader.  Two things that have been done that you might want to consider:

1) Start a thread just for the stories and start a different thread for the "critics corner." If you look over on Chez Tremblay, that is what they did with the "Performance Thread." We did a similar thing here on Fanfic with the former "Ennis and Ellery" thread and the gallery where we archived all the pictures. "E&E" is no more (it has morphed into the Taking Chances thread over on the creative writers corner) but when the thread was very lively, it was fun to have all the pictures in one place so we could look at them.

2) For the Drabblefest, one of our regular readers/authors volunteered to start a drabblefest community on LiveJournal. She has been archiving all the drabbles there (with the prompts) so people can easily search through all the stories. This undertaking is a fair amount of work ...just so you know in advance.

Or you could just leave it as it is.

Hope these suggestions help. Let me know if you need more info or ideas. Feel free to PM me at any time.

Leslie
MaineWriter
Moderator, Fanfiction and the Creative Writer's Corner


 
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on June 18, 2007, 01:40:14 pm
Hey there Mod Leslie,
Thanks for the quick response. I like the comments and the stories together, too. Like you said, it keeps the thread lively and in my opinion, gives it a 'folks-y' feel that I really enjoy. Maybe we could start new chapters to keep the threads managable. Thoughts?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: MaineWriter on June 18, 2007, 01:52:54 pm
Hey there Mod Louise,
Thanks for the quick response. I like the comments and the stories together, too. Like you said, it keeps the thread lively and in my opinion, gives it a 'folks-y' feel that I really enjoy. Maybe we could start new chapters to keep the threads managable. Thoughts?

Hey again,

I am mod Leslie. Mod Louise is en route right now to her new job in England!

I'd rather keep all the stories together in one thread, as we have done with the drabblefest. People have complained in the past about the board getting cluttered with too many little short threads. That's the reason I consolidate groups of one shots by the same author together in one thread (see Loneleebee's poetry and one shots for an example of that).

As you all have discovered, you can change the subject line within the thread, which makes it easy to point to the different stories and comments for those stories.

Does this help?

Leslie
Moderator, Fanfic

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on June 18, 2007, 03:47:17 pm
Hey again,

I am mod Leslie. Mod Louise is en route right now to her new job in England!

I'd rather keep all the stories together in one thread, as we have done with the drabblefest. People have complained in the past about the board getting cluttered with too many little short threads. That's the reason I consolidate groups of one shots by the same author together in one thread (see Loneleebee's poetry and one shots for an example of that).

As you all have discovered, you can change the subject line within the thread, which makes it easy to point to the different stories and comments for those stories.

Does this help?

Leslie
Moderator, Fanfic

Sorry Mod Leslie,
I actually had your name correct in the first place but I changed it for whatever, weird reason!
I like the thread just the way it is but someone (Dagi) suggested having a 'read only' format.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: MaineWriter on June 18, 2007, 04:02:34 pm
Sorry Mod Leslie,
I actually had your name correct in the first place but I changed it for whatever, weird reason!
I like the thread just the way it is but someone (Dagi) suggested having a 'read only' format.

There is actually not a "read only" capability here at Bettermost (as far as I know). It would be more up to individual users to post their comments somewhere else (as they do in the "critics gallery" for the Performance Thread). My inclination would be to leave this thread the way it is...I am enjoying the liveliness of it and the comments, some very funny. However, I try to moderate with a light touch and I wanted folks to feel like they had the chance to discuss the topic!

Leslie
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 18, 2007, 04:46:40 pm
There is actually not a "read only" capability here at Bettermost (as far as I know). It would be more up to individual users to post their comments somewhere else (as they do in the "critics gallery" for the Performance Thread). My inclination would be to leave this thread the way it is...I am enjoying the liveliness of it and the comments, some very funny. However, I try to moderate with a light touch and I wanted folks to feel like they had the chance to discuss the topic!

Leslie

Sorry, obviousely I didn´t explain well enough what my idea was .

TOYCOON, I love this tread exactly the way it is. I love the mixture. I would never want to change that, believe me.

What I meant to say was that we/I could open a new thread that goes parallel to the original one (which would stay just the way it is), collecting the stories every 2-3 days and posting  them with the request to not comment there but in the original thread. Maybe it is a stupid idea, but it would make reading easier for those who read only without ever commenting. Ok, I see it is a stupid idea and I will simply save a copy of each story on my computer so I can read them one after the other whenever I want. Forget it, lets pretend I never said anything :-X...

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: MaineWriter on June 18, 2007, 04:54:08 pm
Dagi,

It's not a stupid suggestion at all! Now I understand better what you are asking...

This is similar to what we did with "the Gallery" for the Ennis and Ellery thread, although in that case, we were reposting pictures, not stories. But the idea is the same. If someone wants to take on the job of creating an archive for the stories posted here, and include just the stories, it is fine with me. Call it something like "Jack with Ennis Fanfic Game Archive" so folks will know what it is about.

Alternatively, you could ask each person who posts a story to also post it in the archive.

Leslie
Moderator, Fanfic
Title: Re: His Touch
Post by: Clyde-B on June 18, 2007, 08:17:51 pm
Jack Twist settled in, sat down between Ennis Del Mar’s open thighs.  He had just driven 1400 miles to be with his lover, and though Jack never complained, Ennis noticed a stiffening of Jack’s shoulders.  It worried him.

Ennis pulled Jack closer and ran his fingers through Jack’s thick, dark hair.  “Hey what you doin’ En?”  Jack laughed as he looked up at his love.  “Shhh,, just sit up still.  I know what I’m doin.”  It was Ennis, as he massaged Jack’s scalp with firm, circular motions.  Ennis kneaded and rubbed, kissed his man’s hair until Jack purred like a kitten.

Jack became almost limp as Ennis moved to the shoulders.  He used his thumbs to work out the kinks in Jack’s stiff neck.  “Oh God, Ennis, where you learn how to do that?”  Jack whispered as he laid his head sideways in Ennis' lap.  He felt Ennis’ growing manhood, but he needed more of his man's practiced touch.  Jack moved his head back and forth, guiding Ennis, leading his hands where he needed them most.  It was good.  And after a good half hour, Jack Twist felt mighty fine, completely refreshed.  He turned around suddenly and freed a tumescent Ennis from his jeans…


Boy, you don't read this thread for a couple of days you wind up pages behind!

I liked the way this one ended.  With Jack sitting between Ennis's thighs I was beginning to wonder why the only "stiffness" was in Jack's shoulders.   ;D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: David In Indy on June 18, 2007, 08:33:32 pm
CONGRATULATIONS  SUSIE!!!


:D  :D  :D  :D  :D



We'll be welcoming you over at the 1000 Posts Club before long!!!!  :)
Title: Congratulations, Brokeback Got You Good!
Post by: Toycoon on June 18, 2007, 08:38:30 pm
Susiebell, you are a Rodeo Champion! A thoroughbred fillie, even.  ;D
Title: Re: El Vaquero y el Campesino
Post by: Clyde-B on June 18, 2007, 08:45:59 pm
Gracias, Clyde-B. Lo ago todo para ustedes, mis amigos. Y tu, hablas Espanol tambien?

Dagi, que bien sabes tu lejer el Espanol? Donde lo apprendistes?

Toycoon,

Sí, castellano, un poquito.     ¿Y tú, cantas Babaloo?   
Title: Re: Cabin Fever
Post by: Clyde-B on June 18, 2007, 08:54:09 pm
Cabin Fever

Ennis had stormed out two hours before, so now Jack was alone.  The preceding argument had left him feeling tense and bitter, and therefore he was thankful for the stillness of this place out in the wilderness.  There wasn’t a soul around, and this gave Jack an opportunity to lick his wounded pride in private.  He hadn’t meant to tick Ennis off, but sometimes it was hard not to think out loud, or dream out loud when you felt so comfortable and relaxed with someone.  Maybe asking Don Wroe if he’d be willing to sell the cabin was a dumb idea, but it wasn’t like Jack was determined to follow through.  Saying something like that was akin to trying on a new pair of boots.  You might buy them and take them home if they fit, but most likely you’d leave them in the store.  Why couldn’t Ennis see that?

Jack needed something to do just to pass the time so he got the broom from the corner and started sweeping the dust that he and Ennis had tracked in during their stay.  He looked the place over as he went, at the wide-planked floor boards, the rough barn board walls, the propane stove and refrigerator, the bed with its iron frame, the fireplace made of river rock, and the wing chair beside it.  The night before Ennis had been sitting in that chair naked, and so Jack took his own clothes off, climbed into Ennis’s lap facing him, wrapped his arms around Ennis’s neck, and his legs around the arms of the chair, and he rode Ennis’s hardness like he would ride a bull.  This was a nice place, and he really would like to call it his own.

When he opened the door to sweep out the dirt he found a young man standing on the porch getting ready to knock.  “Fuck!” Jack said with a start.  But then he apologized and asked, “Is there somethin’ I can help you with?”

The kid was about eighteen, with shaggy dark hair, short sideburns, fair skin, and bright blue eyes.  Judging from his ragged jeans, and army jacket adorned with peace signs and an upside down American flag, he was yet another war protester.  Jack looked the boy up and down and felt a stir in his groin.

“My name’s Danny, sir, and I’m looking for Aaron Wroe,” the kid said with a slow southern draw that would melt butter like warm toast.

“Don’t know an Aaron Wroe,” Jack confessed.  “Is he related to Don?”

“Don’s his daddy.”

Jack had to tell the young man that Aaron wasn’t around, but since it appeared he had hiked the seventeen miles up from the main road on foot Jack didn’t have the heart to simply turn him away on a dime.  So he invited the kid to share a beer with him.  Danny accepted and Jack got a couple of bottles from the fridge, and then they sat on the rockers on the front porch and talked.

Danny explained that his parents had moved to Riverton from Alabama when he was fourteen, and he and Aaron had become good friends.  They even planed to be roommates at the University of Wyoming in the fall.  The kid had an easy and open way about him.  Within a half hour Danny had revealed that “Five Easy Pieces” was his all time favorite film, and that his favorite book was “The Catcher in the Rye.”  He also spoke of joining the Peace Core after college.  Jack liked the boy’s company, but he was glad when he said he had to go.  Ennis turned stony cold toward these kids who gave the finger to tradition, so Jack was glad they wouldn’t cross paths.

Not more than five minutes after the kid left Ennis returned.  He walked slowly up to the cabin, stopped before coming up on the porch, and stood there with his head hanging.  “Jack, why can’t you take what I can give ya, and stop askin’ for more?”

“Sorry, Ennis.”  And he was sorry.  Right then all Jack wanted was to enjoy what little time they had together and not fight.

Suddenly Ennis bounded up the steps and charged toward him.  Jack got to his feet thinking Ennis was about to hit him, but instead Ennis grabbed him, pushed him up against the wall, and said, “You mess with my mind, Jack fuckin’ Twist.”  And then he forcefully shoved his lips against Jack’s and pushed his tongue in.

They kissed like that for a long time, and then Ennis did something he had never done before.  He picked Jack up into his arms, and carried him inside the cabin.  Then he threw him down on the iron bed and started undoing his shirt.  As they made love Jack secretly imagined that Danny was standing outside the window looking in.  He wanted the boy to see.  Wanted him to know that Ennis loved him.  And somehow he thought Danny would appreciate that.

Afterwards Ennis sat up in bed, and Jack leaned against him.  “Do you know Aaron Wroe?” Jack asked.

“That’s Don’s son.  How’d you hear about him?”

“Someone came by looking for him while you were out.”

Ennis said in a flat tone that indicated he was holding too much back, “Well, he won’t be findin’ him anytime soon.  Aaron got himself shot over there in Vietnam.  They sent him back in a body bag last week.”

Jack was overcome with a sudden wave of sadness, and not just for Aaron, but for the young man he had met earlier.  “Was he good friends with some kid named Danny?”

“Danny Phillips?  Guess so.  Don was tellin’ me when I asked him if I could borrow the place how last year around this time Aaron was supposed to come up here with Danny.  But Don wouldn’t let him.”

“Why not?” asked Jack.

“Don didn’t like him.  Not many in Riverton liked Danny after he pulled that stunt to stay out of the army.  He told the draft board that he was queer.  Wanted Aaron to do the same.”

Jack, sensing something wasn’t right, sat up and looked at Ennis.  “What happened to Danny after that?”

Ennis’s expression turned to confusion and he said, “Did that guy that came by say somethin’ about Danny?”

“Just answer me.”

“One night when he was coming out of a bar on Main the kid got jumped, pulled into an alley, and got his head kicked in.  Danny Phillips is as dead as Aaron Wroe.”

This is very sweet.  I'll  even forgive you for killing them off, it's that sweet.

Don Wroe's cabin is beginning to sound like a haunted Siesta Motel.

I wonder if anybody ever went there to hunt or fish?
Title: Re: Cabin Fever
Post by: Clyde-B on June 18, 2007, 11:04:26 pm
I'm so glad you liked it, Clyde. 

I grew up in West Virginia, so I love the woods, and I'd love to own a cabin in the woods.  And as a boy I used to experiment with a couple of buddies in the woods near my house, so the woods also have an erotic appeal for me.  That's one of the reasons BBM has such a strong hold on me.  J&E sneaking off to the wilderness to do the wild thing seems so natural.  Hunting, fishing, hiking, camping, screwing, they all seem to go together in my mind.   ;D

Gary

Gary, you won't get any argument out of me about that.  I always thought first light was kind of romantic.

I grew up warshin my clothes and rinchin em.  A couple of houses I was very fond of now reside at the bottom of reservoirs, including one old trailer on cinder block.  I moved away because I knew I'd probably wind up dead if I didn't.  I got kidded mercilessly about the way I talked so I learned how to speak with only a hint of a twang, but you get me not too far out of the city and it comes right back like it was never gone.
CB
Title: Re: El Vaquero y el Campesino
Post by: Toycoon on June 18, 2007, 11:15:12 pm
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Toycoon,  ¿Y tú, cantas Babaloo?   

Solo al punto del orgasmo, nino sucio!
Title: Re: Dumb Sheep (part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 18, 2007, 11:18:08 pm
Littlewing, I don´t know what to say, really! That was so sexy and so sweet and tender and loving - what a way to have my very first fanfic continued. I feel very honored! Thank you so much!

Dagi

You're very welcome, sweetheart.  I'm glad you like it.  I was worried there for a moment...
Title: Re: Queer (Part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 18, 2007, 11:18:54 pm
He wanted to again feel Ennis’ hardness in his most secret, tender place. Mmmmmm! Love them "tortured thoughts", yessir! Hot, littlewing1957.

 :laugh:  Thanks, Toycoon, honey!  :-*
Title: Re: Cabin Fever
Post by: Toycoon on June 18, 2007, 11:20:44 pm
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So true Gary.  I think all of my dead relatives are around me and maybe some I don't know.  I call them my guardian angels.  I believe in an afterlife and I believe in past lives as well.  I think in some way we are shaped by them.  Interesting, huh?  By the way, hope you are doing well and love to see you writing stories again.

Merrily

Merr, Garycottle, I believe in the afterlife, as well. I also tend to think of my deceased friends as my guardian angels. It makes the concept of death easier to deal with if you think there are loved ones there to guide you when it's your time to depart.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 18, 2007, 11:23:26 pm
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My 250th post!

I feel like celebrating!
Boy, DO I talk a lot!
(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_6_7.gif).... my lovely brokie friends! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_7_102.gif)


(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_7_104v.gif) Love Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif) 

Congrats, Susie, honey!  You rock!  I love you!   :-*
Title: Re: His Touch
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 18, 2007, 11:25:38 pm
Boy, you don't read this thread for a couple of days you wind up pages behind!

I liked the way this one ended.  With Jack sitting between Ennis's thighs I was beginning to wonder why the only "stiffness" was in Jack's shoulders.   ;D

Clyde, my love, you are so funny.  Thanks so much for your kind words!  :laugh:  :-*
Title: Blue Eyes
Post by: Toycoon on June 18, 2007, 11:26:02 pm
Jack spotted Ennis from across the grassy field sitting alone, with his head hung low and obviously in deep thought; "Boy, that Ennis Del Mar sure is a complicated fella, wonder what he thinkin' 'bout?"  

"Blue eyes... Momma would'a liked Jack's blue eyes, she liked purty things," Ennis thought, smiling wistfully as he recollected the way his mother would sometimes gaze into his father's steely eyes; "Daddy would'a wondered why I was hanging 'round rodeo fuck ups, " That boy looks like a queer ta me." Ennis' hands tightened into fists.

Ennis' concentration broke when he felt the rope from Jack's lasso fall down around his shoulders.


Title: Re: Perhaps in Heaven
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 18, 2007, 11:27:44 pm
Beautiful, romantic, insecure Jack .... I imagine he'd be aching with jealousy.  Lovely littlewing, just lovely!

I can't keep up with all your stories .... I remember you going through a quiet patch .... you must have been storing them all up ... keep em coming girly!!

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Thanks, Susie, honey!  I don't know where I'm getting all these stories.  They seem to be stored somewhere in my soul.  I was at a Windows Server 2003 class today, and all I could think about was J with E!  I'm hopeless!
Title: Re: Dumb Sheep (part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 18, 2007, 11:30:37 pm
Hi there littewing,

I remember Dagi's story.  It was one of her fist ones, right?  Great story, and what a great followup.  Both of them are truly sexy.

After being exposed to fanfic posted by the ladies who frequent this thread I'm starting to think women are as smutty as men.   ;)

Gary

 :laugh:  Thanks, Gary Baby!  As slutty and men? We're sluttier!  :laugh:  :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 18, 2007, 11:31:53 pm
Why thank you toycoon and David ..... now I'm making it sound like you two are a couple .... and what a cute couple you'd make .... yeehaw!

Only another 749 posts to go ... should manage that by the weekend!

Love Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

You go girl!   :o
Title: Re: Cabin Fever
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 18, 2007, 11:32:54 pm
This is very sweet.  I'll  even forgive you for killing them off, it's that sweet.

Don Wroe's cabin is beginning to sound like a haunted Siesta Motel.

I wonder if anybody ever went there to hunt or fish?

 :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:

Clyde, I'm having more fun than I ever thought possible!  :)
Title: Re: Queer (Part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 18, 2007, 11:34:04 pm
It's so sad that the boys couldn't be honest with each other, or even themselves.

Gary

So bitterly true, Gary!  :'(
Title: Re: Perhaps in Heaven
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 18, 2007, 11:38:09 pm
Is she better than me?  Wow!  That's a bitting slip of the tongue.  And what an unexpected twist for the reader.  This story starts off so soft and tender, and then bam!  We are taken right into the heart of Jack's understandable resentments.

littlewing, how do you keep churning them out so quick?

Gary

Wow, Gary, thanks for your sweet comments.  I don't where the stories are coming from.  Last night was rather special, as I caught the last hour of BBM on cable.  It started a flood of emotions in me that had to come out!
Title: Re: His Touch
Post by: Clyde-B on June 18, 2007, 11:38:44 pm
Clyde, my love, you are so funny.  Thanks so much for your kind words!  :laugh:  :-*

littlewing,
It's amazing you can write so well so fast!
Title: Re: His Touch
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 18, 2007, 11:41:34 pm
littlewing,
It's amazing you can write so well so fast!

Thanks, Sweets!  :)
Title: Re: El Vaquero y el Campesino
Post by: Clyde-B on June 18, 2007, 11:47:27 pm
Solo al punto del orgasmo, nino sucio!

¡AyAyAy!  ¿Vendes boletos?
Title: Blue Eyes (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 18, 2007, 11:56:00 pm
Toycoon, I hope I'm describing the right scene?

"For a queer, that Jack Twist is mighty good with a rope!”  Ennis thought as he continued to hang his head.  He didn’t want to look into Jack’s blue eyes.  Ennis was growing comfortable with his gloomy thoughts, and if he looked into those blue eyes? 

“Time to get goin’, Coyboy!”  Jack spoke softly as he pulled at the rope.  Ennis allowed himself to be raised to his feet.  Jack giggled as Ennis walked away from him, avoiding his eyes.  Ennis tucked his shirt into his jeans, never looking back.  Jack Twist raised his rope, and very expertly, skillfully, caught Ennis around the ankles.  He pulled his lover to him, but Ennis wasn’t having it.

“This ain’t no goddamn Rodeo!”  Ennis growled as he wrestled Jack to the ground.  It was serious now.  Jack and Ennis rolled down the hills in a tangle of flailing limbs.  After Jack accidentally kneed Ennis in the nose, Ennis sucker punched him.  “Owwww!!” Jack rolled and held his smarting head.  His blue eyes filled with salty tears.  “Why did you hit me Ennis?”  Jack thought, almost aloud.  “I only wanted to hold you in my arms one more time….”

Title: Re: Blue Eyes
Post by: Toycoon on June 19, 2007, 12:17:24 am
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Jack spotted Ennis from across the grassy field sitting alone, with his head hung low and obviously in deep thought; "Boy, that Ennis Del Mar sure is a complicated fella, wonder what he thinkin' 'bout?"  

"Blue eyes... Momma would'a liked Jack's blue eyes, she liked purty things," Ennis thought, smiling wistfully as he recollected the way his mother would sometimes gaze into his father's steely eyes; "Daddy would'a wondered why I was hanging 'round rodeo fuck ups, " That boy looks like a queer ta me." Ennis' hands tightened into fists.

Ennis' concentration broke when he felt the rope from Jack's lasso fall down around his shoulders.
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"For a queer, that Jack Twist is mighty good with a rope!”  Ennis thought as he continued to hang his head.  He didn’t want to look into Jack’s blue eyes.  Ennis was growing comfortable with his gloomy thoughts, and if he looked into those blue eyes? 

“Time to get goin’, Coyboy!”  Jack spoke softly as he pulled at the rope.  Ennis allowed himself to be raised to his feet.  Jack giggled as Ennis walked away from him, avoiding his eyes.  Ennis tucked his shirt into his jeans, never looking back.  Jack Twist raised his rope, and very expertly, skillfully, caught Ennis around the ankles.  He pulled his lover to him, but Ennis wasn’t having it.

“This ain’t no goddamn Rodeo!”  Ennis growled as he wrestled Jack to the ground.  It was serious now.  Jack and Ennis rolled down the hills in a tangle of flailing limbs.  After Jack accidentally kneed Ennis in the nose, Ennis sucker punched him.  “Owwww!!” Jack rolled and held his smarting head.  His blue eyes filled with salty tears.  “Why did you hit me Ennis?”  Jack thought, almost aloud.  “I only wanted to hold you in my arms one more time….”

I needed to put these side by side, Littlewing. This (among many others) is one of my favorite scenes. It starts off so sweet (for Jack anyway) and playful then it spins out of control. Jack looks so damn cute, too. I can see why Ennis can't look that fella in the eye; he's devastatingly handsome.
Title: Re: Cabin Fever
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 19, 2007, 12:30:56 am
Gary, so many of us post on these boards every day and I get the feeling I know you all.  You don't have your picture on liine, but I have an idea of what you look like.  Just from the way you talk, I know you are a beautiful person.  You are so gentle.  Take care of yourself, Bud.  I'm thinking of you. 

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_1_67.gif)

Merrily

He is a doll, isn't he, Merr?
Title: Re: Blue Eyes
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 19, 2007, 12:31:42 am
I needed to put these side by side, Littlewing. This (among many others) is one of my favorite scenes. It starts off so sweet (for Jack anyway) and playful then it spins out of control. Jack looks so damn cute, too. I can see why Ennis can't look that fella in the eye; he's devastatingly handsome.


He is amazingly handsome, isn't he?
Title: Re: Cabin Fever
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 19, 2007, 01:53:10 am
So true, Marie.  And he can write some good fanfic too.   (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/3/3_3_102.gif)  I loved the Cabin Fever story.

Merrily

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_210.gif)

Oh Gary is an amazing writer!  Awesome!
Title: Re: Just ask me
Post by: Dagi on June 19, 2007, 06:39:40 am
* still trying to regain composure*  I won´t have to tell you that this was more than hot, girl!
And if that was the toned-down version....then I´d love to read the original one :o!!!

Dagi

Again quoting myself to make sure you read it!

And CONGRATULATIONS, btw! I have crossed the 100posts line after all.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 19, 2007, 06:45:38 am
Dagi,

It's not a stupid suggestion at all! Now I understand better what you are asking...

This is similar to what we did with "the Gallery" for the Ennis and Ellery thread, although in that case, we were reposting pictures, not stories. But the idea is the same. If someone wants to take on the job of creating an archive for the stories posted here, and include just the stories, it is fine with me. Call it something like "Jack with Ennis Fanfic Game Archive" so folks will know what it is about.

Alternatively, you could ask each person who posts a story to also post it in the archive.

Leslie
Moderator, Fanfic

So girls and guys, please tell me what you think about it. Do I get the permission to post your stories in such an "archive thread"? I offer to do the work, of course, so the existence of this thread would not affect you in any way if you don´t want it to do.

Dagi
Title: Re: Dumb Sheep (part 2)
Post by: Dagi on June 19, 2007, 07:09:55 am
Hi there littewing,

I remember Dagi's story.  It was one of her fist ones, right?  Great story, and what a great followup.  Both of them are truly sexy.

After being exposed to fanfic posted by the ladies who frequent this thread I'm starting to think women are as smutty as men.   ;)

Gary

Thank you Gary! You really made me laugh when you wrote  After being exposed to fanfic posted by the ladies.....

but honestly (and I don´t want to be a kill-joy (?) ), what is smutty about any of those wonderful, sexy, erotic, hot, tender stories about two men who

 are in love with each other??? I don´t want to think about sex as anything dirty/smutty/nasty/what the hell else. Don´t misunderstand me, please, I

know that you (as many others) say that with a  ;), but sometimes I get the impression that using those negative words reveal how we really think

about it, even though we appreciate sex as a very precious part of our daily life. Just a thought, I hope you don´t feel offended, Gary. You know how

much I like you.

Dagi
Title: Re: Dumb Sheep (part 2)
Post by: Dagi on June 19, 2007, 07:17:54 am
You're very welcome, sweetheart.  I'm glad you like it.  I was worried there for a moment...

Why the hell were you worried? I asked you to make it sweet, and you not only made it sweet but sexy and beautiful!

You are one hell of a writer, Marie, you leave all of us here breath- and speachless.

Dagis
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 19, 2007, 07:24:20 am
Toycoon and Marie,

the rope scene is one of my favorites, too, allthough it is so heartbreaking I sometimes can hardly stand it. The thought  of Ennis avoiding to look Jack in the eye for fear of losing control is sweet and sad. Sweet and sad, OMG how many times have we all used these words speaking about Ennis and Jack?

Dagi
Title: Re: The BetterMost "Jack with Ennis" Love-In
Post by: Toycoon on June 19, 2007, 09:21:25 am
I (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_207.gif) GARY, .... and
I (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_207.gif) Susiebell, I (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_207.gif) Littlewing1957, I (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_207.gif) Dagi, I (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_207.gif)Merrily and I(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_207.gif)Clyde-B!

I'm starting to become very fond of David-Indiana, too.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: MaineWriter on June 19, 2007, 11:13:46 am
This is a drabble that I wrote...thought you all might enjoy it!



Brokeback Mountain
July, 1963

At last, it was hot.

Summer had finally come to the mountain and the heat of the day lingered into the evening. Jack pulled the blankets out of the tent and spread them by the campfire. “C’mere, cowboy,” he said, pulling Ennis by the hand. “I want ta love ya under the stars,” turning to look at the inky darkness overhead.

“Wha….?” said Ennis, his voice slurred.

Jack bit his tongue. The love word had slipped out. He hadn’t meant to say it, but he knew now that he was desperately, hopelessly in love with this man. Tall, lean, with bony wrists and long legs, he realized he adored everything about him from the way he smiled at him over a can of beans to the way he said “Huh?” when he was confused.

“C’mon,” said Jack softly, pushing Ennis back to the blanket, unbuttoning his shirt and sliding it off his shoulders. He ran his tongue down Ennis’s chest, stopping at the twirl of hair around his navel, unbuckling his belt.

“I think I’m drunk…” said Ennis, his head lolling back on the blanket.

How drunk, Ennis? thought Jack. Drunk enough that if I say ‘I love you,’ you won’t remember it in the morning? Drunk enough that if I say I want to be with you forever, you’ll say yes?

“Ennis, I…”

“Shhh, Jack, stop talkin’,” said Ennis, turning onto his side and pulling Jack in for a rough kiss. “Let’s get ta the lovin’.”

Jack froze, the word hanging in the air between them.

“Under the stars…”
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: MaineWriter on June 19, 2007, 12:01:22 pm
So romantic and tender, MaineWriter.  Also just a little sad that Jack is afraid of revealing too much.  Thanks so much for sharing it with us.

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.

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So the drabblefest thread is another place to post fanfic?

Yes. We post three prompts a day and people write drabbles (100 to 300 words) in response to the prompts. There is some really terrific writing going it...the "fest" started on January 31st and we just passed 100 pages.

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BTW, are you from Maine?  I ask because I went up there with my sister a few years ago.  We visited Freeport, Bar Harbor, and Acadia National Park.  I loved it!  If the winters weren't so harsh I'd consider moving there.

Yes, I work in Portland and live just down the road in Westbrook. We've been here since 1980. And the harsh winters...well, that's a story we've cooked up to keep people away.  ;) The weather is really not that bad. I lived in Chicago for 2 years and that was alot worse!

Leslie
Title: Re: Dumb Sheep (part 2)
Post by: Dagi on June 19, 2007, 02:13:09 pm
Hi there Dagi,

I know what you're saying, and no I wasn't offended.  I too think that sex is a beautiful expression, and we're damn lucky that we have it.  And it's true that it has often been maligned in our culture.  Also, people who do the maligning often do so by insinuating that sex is dirty, etc.

But they say it's dirty as if that's a bad thing.  I'm a country boy, and I'm an avid amateur gardener.  I've planted plants and flowers all around my house, and I put in a vegetable garden in my back yard.  Dirt is not something that's bad in my view.  I love dirt.   :D  And when I suggest that sex is dirty, I ean it in the best possible way.  There's something so basic about sex, like planting a seed in the ground.  It's very earthy, and you might have to wash your hands after--along with other things--but that doesn't make it bad, and whoever thinks it does has been cooped up in a sanitized apartment in the city way too long.

I hope that helps you understand what I mean when I say I love it when the boys do nasty shit to each other.   :P  I'm speaking as the guy from rural West Virginia who just put humus laced with dung on his tomato plants.

Gary


Now I really KNOW that I love you, Gary.

I´ve been thinking and worrying about my post all day long, and I am so relieved now.

You know, thank goddess I have not been cooped up in a sanitized apartment in the city for too long, and earth under my fingernails is something I am

really used to, thanks to my garden. I too love the earthy, natural aspect of sex. So I´m glad to hear that you don´t use the word subconsciousely in a

bad sense. Really, I should have known that before you told me, honey, I can tell by the way you write about our boys. I was in an odd mood, and I´m

a very spontaneous girl, that´s why I sometimes say/write things without thinking it over.

A big hug !

Dagi
Title: Re: Cabin Fever
Post by: Dagi on June 19, 2007, 02:14:42 pm
 
Hey .... don't leave me out .... (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_9_2.gif) ....

.... I want to be a member of the I (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_207.gif) GARY fan club too ....

you're a darling Gary .... (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_7_102.gif)


Love Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Where can I subscribe? ;D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: MaineWriter on June 19, 2007, 02:17:13 pm
P.S.  100-300 words, huh?  Seems I'm always over the limit.   :-\

A "true" drabble is 100 words exactly. We have a bit more leeway and yes, people do go over, but we try to stay to the limit, as much as possible.

L
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 19, 2007, 02:21:46 pm

How drunk, Ennis? thought Jack. Drunk enough that if I say ‘I love you,’ you won’t remember it in the morning? Drunk enough that if I say I want to be with you forever, you’ll say yes?


MaineWriter, I can´t begin to tell you.... you moved me to tears. Don´t have no words at the moment. Give us more, please!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: MaineWriter on June 19, 2007, 02:34:58 pm

MaineWriter, I can´t begin to tell you.... you moved me to tears. Don´t have no words at the moment. Give us more, please!

Dagi

I'll see what I can do.... ;)  Thanks for the kind words!

Leslie
MaineWriter

PS, Dagi, where are you located?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 19, 2007, 03:38:36 pm
I live in Bavaria, about 30 km south of Munic, next to the beautiful Alpes!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: MaineWriter on June 19, 2007, 06:55:55 pm
I live in Bavaria, about 30 km south of Munic, next to the beautiful Alpes!

Ah, I was in Germany for the first time back in March...visiting a fellow Brokie!

L
Title: Re: Cabin Fever
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 19, 2007, 10:22:28 pm
Marie, you are no "slouch" yourself.  Your stories are quite different from each other but they're all good.  I still haven't thought of anything to write.  I think I'm much better with "reality" than fiction. 

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_210.gif)

Merrily

Ah Merr, you're such a sweetie!  Thanks so much!  :)
Title: Bobby (Part 1 of 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 19, 2007, 10:45:24 pm
Another Extreme AU.  This is what happens when I try to write while listening to the jazz stylings of Jeff Kashiwa!  :laugh:

Bobby Twist was turning out to be quite a musician.  Who knew?   He started playing sax at the tender age of 6 and never looked back.  Jack and Lureen encouraged him to take lessons, and Bobby found that the once a week sax lessons really helped him.  After all, he'll be a featured performer, with a solo in the school recital Saturday night.  Bobby belonged to the Childress High School jazz band; one of only 3 sax players.

Jack and Lureen were divorced when Bobby turned 14, and even though his dad lived in Wyoming with one Ennis Del Mar, he managed to make it to Childress to attend every one of Bobby’s performances.  Bobby was certainly expecting Jack to show up Saturday.  Lureen and her new husband couldn’t make it.  They were on an Alaskan cruise, leaving Bobby in the care of his maternal grandmother.

Saturday night and the auditorium was filled to capacity.  Bobby had his place among the other saxophone players, and as he scanned the crowd, he couldn’t find his dad.  The boy didn’t panic.  Jack had more than a half hour before the performance began to show up.  Ten more minutes and still no Jack..but wait!  Jack Twist walked through the auditorium door in haste.  He had a man with him: a fair haired, well built, almost absurdly handsome fellow.  Bobby realized that this person had to be Ennis Del Mar.  What a looker!  For a Rodeo fuckup, Bobby’s dad certainly had something on the ball to score a king like that!  Bobby never laid eyes on Ennis before, only knew what his mom and dad told him about Ennis Del Mar.  But Bobby would worry about that later……
Title: Re: Bobby (Part 1 of 2)
Post by: Clyde-B on June 20, 2007, 12:06:01 am
[ Jack Twist walked through the auditorium door in haste.  He had a man with him: a fair haired, well built, almost absurdly handsome fellow.  Bobby realized that this person had to be Ennis Del Mar.  What a looker!  For a Rodeo fuckup, Bobby’s dad certainly had something on the ball to score a king like that!  Bobby never laid eyes on Ennis before, only knew what his mom and dad told him about Ennis Del Mar.  But Bobby would worry about that later……


Oh sure, littlewing, just go to bed and leave us hanging!!!!

I've heard about girls like you!    :laugh:
Title: Re: Bobby (Part 1 of 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 20, 2007, 12:12:38 am
Oh sure, littlewing, just go to bed and leave us hanging!!!!

I've heard about girls like you!    :laugh:

 :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:

Sorry, my loves!  I'll have the conclusion up tomorrow.  :laugh:
Title: Re: Dumb Sheep (part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 20, 2007, 12:13:51 am
Why the hell were you worried? I asked you to make it sweet, and you not only made it sweet but sexy and beautiful!

You are one hell of a writer, Marie, you leave all of us here breath- and speachless.

Dagis

Thanks so much, Dagi.  Perhaps we can do a tag team writing assignment.  Just name the time, the place, the fic!!  ;)
Title: Re: Dumb Sheep (part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 20, 2007, 12:15:58 am
Hi there Dagi,

I know what you're saying, and no I wasn't offended.  I too think that sex is a beautiful expression, and we're damn lucky that we have it.  And it's true that it has often been maligned in our culture.  Also, people who do the maligning often do so by insinuating that sex is dirty, etc.

But they say it's dirty as if that's a bad thing.  I'm a country boy, and I'm an avid amateur gardener.  I've planted plants and flowers all around my house, and I put in a vegetable garden in my back yard.  Dirt is not something that's bad in my view.  I love dirt.   :D  And when I suggest that sex is dirty, I mean it in the best possible way.  There's something so basic about sex, like planting a seed in the ground.  It's very earthy, and you might have to wash your hands after--along with other things--but that doesn't make it bad, and whoever thinks it does has been cooped up in a sanitized apartment in the city way too long.

I hope that helps you understand what I mean when I say I love it when the boys do nasty shit to each other.   :P  I'm speaking as the guy from rural West Virginia who just put humus laced with dung on his tomato plants.

Gary

Ah, Gary, good post!  I am just floored!  I love the planting the seed/gardening reference!  I started crying when I read this, Gary!  As I said before, you're a rare and beautiful man!
Title: Re: Blue Eyes (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 20, 2007, 12:17:46 am

..... and the perfect continuation of this wonderful scene.

“I only wanted to hold you in my arms one more time….”  This makes me cry, Jack is left feeling so hurt and confused.


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

I know, Susie!  This is one of my all-time favorite scenes.  When Jack ropes Ennis with such skillful dexterity and tried to pull him close, I lose it! :'(
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 20, 2007, 12:19:46 am
Toycoon and Marie,

the rope scene is one of my favorites, too, allthough it is so heartbreaking I sometimes can hardly stand it. The thought  of Ennis avoiding to look Jack in the eye for fear of losing control is sweet and sad. Sweet and sad, OMG how many times have we all used these words speaking about Ennis and Jack?

Dagi

 :'(  :'(  :'( It is the saddest thing I've ever seen committed to film!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 20, 2007, 12:20:52 am
So girls and guys, please tell me what you think about it. Do I get the permission to post your stories in such an "archive thread"? I offer to do the work, of course, so the existence of this thread would not affect you in any way if you don´t want it to do.

Dagi

You have my permission, certainly, Dagi!  :)
Title: Re: Blue Eyes (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 20, 2007, 12:23:36 am
Hi there Toycoon and littlewing,

Thanks for expounding on the rope scene.  I think out of the whole store it's that scene that's always troubled me the most.  That's because I think everything might have been different if the boys had it in them to say something directly to each other in those last few minutes they had up there on Brokeback.  Ennis obviously did not want to go down the mountain, but for whatever reason, Jack, who normally was the one who took the most risks, decided to play it cool.  He acted like their parting wasn't a big deal.  I think Ennis, who looked to Jack to lead them in this strange "queer" territory, felt betrayed when Jack insinuated that it wasn't sad that their time together was coming to an end.  I think maybe this is why Ennis was never able to buy into Jack's offer of a "sweet life" after that.

I can more fully appreciate why Jack decided to be playful there at the end thanks to your fanfics, but obviously throwing a rope around Ennis just then was the wrong thing to do.  Ennis wasn't in a playful mood.  He was hurting, and although he didn't know how to express his emotions in words, he gave every clue that he needed Jack to take charge just as he had done during the second tent scene.  But I guess Jack himself was too scared to reveal too much to pick up on those clues.

Jack did offer to meet Ennis at Brokeback the next summer, but Ennis didn't really hear it.  After the way Jack pretended he didn't care that they were being sent down early, and after the incident with the rope, Ennis no longer took him seriously.  He couldn't be sure that if he gave Jack his heart he would treasure it.

Gary

Gary, great post!  And you have said something here that I've never considered: Ennis didn't take Jack seriously because of his cavalier attitude when it was time to leave Brokeback!  This is very deep, Gary!  I'm forever in awe when it comes to BBM!  Thanks so much for this, Sweets!  ;)
Title: Re: Cabin Fever
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 20, 2007, 12:25:43 am
Marie, you are no "slouch" yourself.  Your stories are quite different from each other but they're all good.  I still haven't thought of anything to write.  I think I'm much better with "reality" than fiction. 

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_210.gif)

Merrily

Why thanks, Merr.  But give fanfic a try.  You may be plesantly surprised.  Just write what's in you heart.  I do!  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 20, 2007, 12:29:25 am
This is a drabble that I wrote...thought you all might enjoy it!



Brokeback Mountain
July, 1963

At last, it was hot.

Summer had finally come to the mountain and the heat of the day lingered into the evening. Jack pulled the blankets out of the tent and spread them by the campfire. “C’mere, cowboy,” he said, pulling Ennis by the hand. “I want ta love ya under the stars,” turning to look at the inky darkness overhead.

“Wha….?” said Ennis, his voice slurred.

Jack bit his tongue. The love word had slipped out. He hadn’t meant to say it, but he knew now that he was desperately, hopelessly in love with this man. Tall, lean, with bony wrists and long legs, he realized he adored everything about him from the way he smiled at him over a can of beans to the way he said “Huh?” when he was confused.

“C’mon,” said Jack softly, pushing Ennis back to the blanket, unbuttoning his shirt and sliding it off his shoulders. He ran his tongue down Ennis’s chest, stopping at the twirl of hair around his navel, unbuckling his belt.

“I think I’m drunk…” said Ennis, his head lolling back on the blanket.

How drunk, Ennis? thought Jack. Drunk enough that if I say ‘I love you,’ you won’t remember it in the morning? Drunk enough that if I say I want to be with you forever, you’ll say yes?

“Ennis, I…”

“Shhh, Jack, stop talkin’,” said Ennis, turning onto his side and pulling Jack in for a rough kiss. “Let’s get ta the lovin’.”

Jack froze, the word hanging in the air between them.

“Under the stars…”

Sublime, Mainewriter!  Thanks so much for writing this for us!  I can't even put into words how this sweet tale makes me feel.  Warm starry nights, loving under the stars?  It is just too perfect!  I'm trembling, really.  So romantic, so typical of our boys.  Gorgeous, gorgeous writing.  If you have a chance, please post something else for us.  I'm excited!  :)
Title: Under the Stars
Post by: Toycoon on June 20, 2007, 12:39:54 am

“Ennis, I…”

“Shhh, Jack, stop talkin’,” said Ennis, turning onto his side and pulling Jack in for a rough kiss. “Let’s get ta the lovin’.”

Jack froze, the word hanging in the air between them.

“Under the stars…”

Very nice, Leslie. Great story to read. Love it!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on June 20, 2007, 12:42:56 am
You have my permission, certainly, Dagi!  :)

You can post my stories, too, Dagi baby. I only ask that you post the stories in proper order, if possible. Such as "Blue Eyes", parts one and two.
Title: Re: Bobby (Part 1 of 2)
Post by: Toycoon on June 20, 2007, 12:46:18 am
:laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:

Sorry, my loves!  I'll have the conclusion up tomorrow.  :laugh:

I don't know that I can wait that long, littlewing1957. I'm an old dude, remember!
Title: Wrestlin'
Post by: Toycoon on June 20, 2007, 12:49:43 am
 There they were, shirtless, their backs smeared with dirt and sweat, muscles glistening in the warm sun, face to face, circling each other like mountain lions in a territorial stand off when Ennis barked, "C'mon rodeo, let's see what ya got! Lemme have it!"

With that, Jack rushed towards Ennis, stumbling on a gouge in the dirt and plowing straight into Ennis, who grabbed Jack in a headlock and shouting, "Say it ! Say it ! " forced him to the ground; the pressure of Ennis sprawled on top of him was at once enjoyable but excruciating to Jack, who bucked like a bull and managed to flip Ennis on his back.

Pinning down Ennis' arms above his head, Jack sitting squarely on Ennis' crotch, crawled up Ennis' body, planting sloppy, wet, 'puppy kisses' trailing up his shiny chest, neck and face finally boxing Ennis' ears with his knees; " I' ll show you what I got, cowboy! " he growled, unbuckling his trousers then Ennis hollered, " Uncle! "
Title: Exploring
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 20, 2007, 01:07:45 am
Brokeback days and nights were often slow and boring for two young men who were not yet twenty.  Herding sheep all day, bedding them down at night was not only back breaking work, but it was also repetitive, dull, only worthy of those who lack education or marketable skills.  But it was work, and the pay seemed decent.

To ease the mind numbing monotony, Jack and Ennis vowed to take a few hours off weekends to explore the enchanting Brokeback Mountain.  They discovered meadows where exotic looking flowers grew; streams and creeks that were unspoiled and undisturbed!  For almost 2 months Jack and Ennis wandered the mountain, hand-in-hand, to see what they could see.

One Saturday Jack led Ennis to a clearing that he discovered while commuting back up to the mountain.  Ennis almost lost his senses as he beheld the beauty.  He touched the fragrant flowers, inhaled the heady aromas.  The clearing looked like a fine place to set up a tent, spend the night.  Spending the night together was forbidden, certainly, but who was to know?  Ennis found that he loved this game of exploring.  And suddenly his mind was drawn to a time when he explored something very private, very tight and sweet.  As he prepared the tent, Ennis thought that if he played his cards right, he may be allowed to once again explore where no other man had gone before...
Title: Re: Wrestlin'
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 20, 2007, 01:09:13 am
There they were, shirtless, their backs smeared with dirt and sweat, muscles glistening in the warm sun, face to face, circling each other like mountain lions in a territorial stand off when Ennis barked, "C'mon rodeo, let's see what ya got! Lemme have it!"

With that, Jack rushed towards Ennis, stumbling on a gouge in the dirt and plowing straight into Ennis, who grabbed Jack in a headlock and shouting, "Say it ! Say it ! " forced him to the ground; the pressure of Ennis sprawled on top of him was at once enjoyable but excruciating to Jack, who bucked like a bull and managed to flip Ennis on his back.

Pinning down Ennis' arms above his head, Jack sitting squarely on Ennis' crotch, crawled up Ennis' body, planting sloppy, wet, 'puppy kisses' trailing up his shiny chest, neck and face finally boxing Ennis' ears with his knees; " I' ll show you what I got, cowboy! " he growled, unbuckling his trousers then Ennis hollered, " Uncle! "

Toycoon, great playful tale.  Is this new?
Title: Re: Wrestlin'
Post by: Toycoon on June 20, 2007, 01:29:25 am
Toycoon, great playful tale.  Is this new?

New to BetterMost. Actually, it's one of my earlier attempts at fanfic. It's Daphne's favorite story. She has a "wrasslin" fetish, I think!
Title: Re: Wrestlin'
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 20, 2007, 01:51:17 am
New to BetterMost. Actually, it's one of my earlier attempts at fanfic. It's Daphne's favorite story. She has a "wrasslin" fetish, I think!

Ah, yes, I thought so!  Thanks for letting me know, Sweets!  :)
Title: Re: Exploring
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 20, 2007, 01:51:52 am
Whoo Wee littlewing.  Very sweet with just that smigen of sexxxxxxyyyyy.  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/23/23_32_10.gif)

Thanks, Merr!  You're a doll!  :D
Title: Re: Bobby (Part 1 of 2)
Post by: Dagi on June 20, 2007, 05:59:13 am
Another Extreme AU.  This is what happens when I try to write while listening to the jazz stylings of Jeff Kashiwa!  :laugh:

Bobby Twist was turning out to be quite a musician.  Who knew?   He started playing sax at the tender age of 6 and never looked back.  Jack and Lureen encouraged him to take lessons, and Bobby found that the once a week sax lessons really helped him.  After all, he'll be a featured performer, with a solo in the school recital Saturday night.  Bobby belonged to the Childress High School jazz band; one of only 3 sax players.

Jack and Lureen were divorced when Bobby turned 14, and even though his dad lived in Wyoming with one Ennis Del Mar, he managed to make it to Childress to attend every one of Bobby’s performances.  Bobby was certainly expecting Jack to show up Saturday.  Lureen and her new husband couldn’t make it.  They were on an Alaskan cruise, leaving Bobby in the care of his maternal grandmother.

Saturday night and the auditorium was filled to capacity.  Bobby had his place among the other saxophone players, and as he scanned the crowd, he couldn’t find his dad.  The boy didn’t panic.  Jack had more than a half hour before the performance began to show up.  Ten more minutes and still no Jack..but wait!  Jack Twist walked through the auditorium door in haste.  He had a man with him: a fair haired, well built, almost absurdly handsome fellow.  Bobby realized that this person had to be Ennis Del Mar.  What a looker!  For a Rodeo fuckup, Bobby’s dad certainly had something on the ball to score a king like that!  Bobby never laid eyes on Ennis before, only knew what his mom and dad told him about Ennis Del Mar.  But Bobby would worry about that later……


Absurdly handsome, huh?? Well, your stories are absurdly good, then!!!!!  Can´t wait for it to be continued!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 20, 2007, 06:04:32 am
You can post my stories, too, Dagi baby. I only ask that you post the stories in proper order, if possible. Such as "Blue Eyes", parts one and two.

Sure, darlin´, that is one of the main reasons why I started all the trouble... thank you for the permission!
Title: Re: Wrestlin'
Post by: Dagi on June 20, 2007, 06:11:04 am
There they were, shirtless, their backs smeared with dirt and sweat, muscles glistening in the warm sun, face to face, circling each other like mountain lions in a territorial stand off when Ennis barked, "C'mon rodeo, let's see what ya got! Lemme have it!"

With that, Jack rushed towards Ennis, stumbling on a gouge in the dirt and plowing straight into Ennis, who grabbed Jack in a headlock and shouting, "Say it ! Say it ! " forced him to the ground; the pressure of Ennis sprawled on top of him was at once enjoyable but excruciating to Jack, who bucked like a bull and managed to flip Ennis on his back.

Pinning down Ennis' arms above his head, Jack sitting squarely on Ennis' crotch, crawled up Ennis' body, planting sloppy, wet, 'puppy kisses' trailing up his shiny chest, neck and face finally boxing Ennis' ears with his knees; " I' ll show you what I got, cowboy! " he growled, unbuckling his trousers then Ennis hollered, " Uncle! "

Aaahhh Toycoon, this is something only a man can discribe propperly, the sparkling eroticism of a fight ! And I can think of worse situations than  having the winner sitting on my chest unbuckling his belt :laugh:!!
Title: Re: Exploring
Post by: Dagi on June 20, 2007, 06:14:16 am
Brokeback days and nights were often slow and boring for two young men who were not yet twenty.  Herding sheep all day, bedding them down at night was not only back breaking work, but it was also repetitive, dull, only worthy of those who lack education or marketable skills.  But it was work, and the pay seemed decent.

To ease the mind numbing monotony, Jack and Ennis vowed to take a few hours off weekends to explore the enchanting Brokeback Mountain.  They discovered meadows where exotic looking flowers grew; streams and creeks that were unspoiled and undisturbed!  For almost 2 months Jack and Ennis wandered the mountain, hand-in-hand, to see what they could see.

One Saturday Jack led Ennis to a clearing that he discovered while commuting back up to the mountain.  Ennis almost lost his senses as he beheld the beauty.  He touched the fragrant flowers, inhaled the heady aromas.  The clearing looked like a fine place to set up a tent, spend the night.  Spending the night together was forbidden, certainly, but who was to know?  Ennis found that he loved this game of exploring.  And suddenly his mind was drawn to a time when he explored something very private, very tight and sweet.  As he prepared the tent, Ennis thought that if he played his cards right, he may be allowed to once again explore where no other man had gone before...


So sweet, I love to imagine them holding hands. And I love Ennis´ not being able to stop thinking of Jack´s body ;D!
Lovely, Marie!
Title: Re: Bobby (Part 1 of 2)
Post by: Dagi on June 20, 2007, 06:18:39 am
We're not giving up on you just yet Merr .... I have absolutely no talent with the english language ... there's nothing poetic about what I write .... I simply describe word for word what's going on in my head (there's some dirty stuff goin on in there I can tell you) (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_5_3.gif)

I'm going to keep on nagging you, you know that, you may as well just give in now!!!

Love Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Hey, Susie, I´ve been nagging on her for a while now, so thanks for your support!! I KNOW that she can do it, I mean, even I can write something down!

"can´t be worse than me, then..."... :D

Susie, btw, these Jack-pics under your posts are killing me. I can´t stop watching them, and they break my heart.

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: MaineWriter on June 20, 2007, 08:18:09 am
Morning all,

Here's a little something to start your day...



Don Wroe's Cabin
November, 1970


Ennis was shoving another log in the woodstove as Jack came into the cabin, his breath frosty. “Goddamn, Ennis, it must be 100 degrees in here! What the hell are ya doin’?” He shoved his mittens into his pocket as he took off his coat.

“That’s my plan,” said Ennis with a smile.

“What plan?”

“I got me a cabin with a bed, and a woodstove. The only thing missin’ in this picture is naked Jack. I get it hot enough in here and I’ll get that too.”

Jack laughed. “Naked Jack? What if I’m shy, don’t want ta be sittin’ here naked?”

“Ain’t gonna be sittin’, Jack,” said Ennis with a wink.

“Well, I think I know the cure for me bein’ shy.”

“What’s that?”

“Naked Ennis. C’mere, cowboy,” said Jack, with a crook of his finger.
Title: Re: Wrestlin'
Post by: Clyde-B on June 20, 2007, 08:51:23 am


  " I' ll show you what I got, cowboy! " he growled, unbuckling his trousers then Ennis hollered, " Uncle! "

Have a feelin he didn't holler it too loud.   ;D
Title: Re: Exploring
Post by: Clyde-B on June 20, 2007, 08:56:49 am
As he prepared the tent, Ennis thought that if he played his cards right, he may be allowed to once again explore where no other man had gone before...


Cue the Star Trek theme!  (I'm sorry, I just couldn't resist!)   ;D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on June 20, 2007, 09:04:55 am
Morning all,

Here's a little something to start your day...
 

A very pleasant way to start a day indeed!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on June 20, 2007, 09:11:13 am

I hope everyone's well, and enjoying the new forum.  Sorry for the worry, Susie.  I'm fine.

 

Did you see the "Spiceylife, where are you?" thread at IMDb?

I think Toycoon was ready to have your picture put on milk cartons.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on June 20, 2007, 09:19:56 am
  ... we all need a good spanking!!

 

Why do I have the feeling you'd like that?    ;D

P.S. I love your new sig with all the Jack pics!
Title: Re: Exploring
Post by: Toycoon on June 20, 2007, 09:30:46 am
Quote
Ennis thought that if he played his cards right, he may be allowed to once again explore where no other man had gone before...

That's a little nasty one, Miss Littlewing1957! What goin' on over there?
Title: Hot love
Post by: spiceylife on June 20, 2007, 09:34:20 am

Jack bent down, adjusting the blade heights on the lawn mower.  He poured in the gasoline and primed the engine twice, and then once more for good measure.  Even though the sun was still high in the sky, Jack always liked to mow his lawn in the blazing heat of the day, building up a raging thirst to quench later with that ice-cold beer, gulped down in one hit.  Working up a good sweat in the afternoon sun helped him stay in shape, kept his body toned and the dreaded paunch away.  He figured the single beer only undid a little of his hard work.

As he stood again, Jack suddenly felt eyes upon him, like he was being watched.  He glanced quickly at the sprawling log cabin, scanned the windows and saw nothing.  He waited a moment, checking the tall trees lining the driveway, and then the barn over to the far side of the house.  Nothing out of the ordinary caught his eye.  Jack shrugged slightly and tried to dismiss the feeling.

He bent again to give the starter cord a decent pull but the feeling came over him again, stronger this time.  He paused, uncertain.  Was someone watching him?  Jack felt it in his bones.  He squinted through the sun-glare reflecting sharply off the windows, but still saw no movement in the cabin.  And so Jack pulled the cord and the motor roared to life, the obtrusive sound startling a flock of disgruntled blackbirds out of the trees nearby.  He started forward, pushing the mower in front, up and down in as straight a line as Jack cared to make it.  Still he couldn’t shake off that strange feeling, but then, Jack being Jack, his mischievous, curious streak soon overcame any vague sense of uneasiness.

Well, if that’s the way they wanna play it, and they won’t show themselves, guess I’ll play right along then.  If I’m wrong and no-one’s around, no harm done.  But if I’m right… hell, I’ll give ‘em somethin’ worth lookin’ at, cos me mowing the friggin’ lawns sure ain’t very interesting to watch… and with that, Jack began to swing his hips, almost sashaying up and down his lawn, laughing at himself inside but managing to keep his game face on.  He swung his ass from side to side seductively as he followed the line, having some fun, foolin’ around, enjoying goofing off a little. 

As Jack moved to empty the overflowing catcher spilling grass out the side, he bent from his waist, legs wide apart, giving whoever might be out there a great view of his firm ass, and possibly his other wondrous assets, for the longest time.  He bent the same way to empty the grass into the compost, and then he bent the same way again, ass high and on display in the air, to replace the catcher.  And then he did it one more time, pretending to check the level of the gasoline, which he knew very well was still near full.

Jack grinned, thought he was hilarious and continued to mow up and down, refusing to look around again to catch whomever it was, wanting them to think he didn’t know they were there.  As trickles of sweat ran down his back and chest, Jack stripped off his tight black t-shirt, using it to wipe the moisture from his muscular, deeply tanned torso.  Jack did it slow and so, so sexy, for a better, hotter effect.  He soaked up the sweat from his back and neck, wanting whoever was watching to absorb some of the heat he was feeling right now, in more ways than one. 

Jack kept up with the mowing, but when the heat began to fry his head, even through a battered, black Resistol, he stopped the mower, sauntered over to the garden hose, turned it on and hosed himself down.  He flicked off his hat and tilted his head back, closing his eyes and savoring the cool water running through his hair, over his face, across his chest, down his taut stomach, soaking through tight jeans.  A trickle of water made its way down the crack of his buttocks, visible above his pants.  He shook the water out of his hair.  Jack felt sexy as hell.

He turned to face the house, licked his lips and smoothed a hand casually, deliberately over wet, dark nipples and hairy stomach, the hose hanging idly from his other hand.  Reaching down he brazenly palmed his dick through his jeans, rubbing the rapidly hardening flesh through blue denim.  Then Jack unzipped, sliding a wanton, snaking hand slowly down the front of his pants to free himself from black briefs, his dick out and hard against his flat stomach.  He looked down at it, sensually stroking its long, thick length, twisting his wrist a little over the head, moist with clear slick…the exhibitionist in him was enjoying this immensely.

damn, I’m so hot I even turn myself on

He tried not to laugh out loud at that, but a smile tugged at the corners of his mouth, working its way up to his eyes.  Jack couldn’t help himself.  For the finishing touch, he turned his back on the house and continued stroking himself in a slightly exaggerated, over-the-top fashion, legs set wide apart, making sure that his watcher knew exactly what they were missing out on, taunting them, laying down the challenge… 

Come out, come out, wherever you are...

Jack always loved a good tease.

Now this…this outta bring ‘em out of hiding…any minute n- 

Two strong arms grabbed Jack suddenly from behind, sliding their way around his waist, holding him firmly in place.  Jack was so engrossed in what he was doing he nearly jumped out of his skin.

“Shit!  You scared me…!”

A warm, naked chest pressed up against Jack’s slick back, pushing on him in all the right places.  Jack felt the hardness against his buttock, through two layers of denim.  Despite himself, he pushed back a little, grinding his ass gently into the other man’s groin.  Jack heard a soft, hot moan in his ear, so he pushed back a little more, keeping the slight, circular rhythm going.  He shifted slightly to capture the man’s hardness between his ass cheeks.

“You enjoy puttin’ on that show, Twist?”

The honeyed, sensual voice sent a shiver through Jack, goosebumps breaking out in spite of the boiling sun.

“What show?  I was just mowin’ the lawns, mister.  What’d you think I was doin’?”

A deep laugh rumbled in Jack’s ear, and he felt the vibration move through his chest and travel quickly to his dick, making it twitch in response.  A strong hand slid down Jack’s stomach, pulling Jack’s hand away from himself and taking its place.  Jack clenched his jaw, then groaned lustily under the firm stroking and the familiar heat building in his groin.  His head fell back to rest on the man’s shoulder and he dropped the garden hose, forgotten on the grass.

“I’m gonna have you, Jack.  You want me to take you here, or inside?”

Jack spun around and kissed Ennis hard and wet, their teeth colliding painfully but neither man really seeming to care.  Finally Jack pulled back, took Ennis’s face in both hands and gazed longingly into his eyes.

“Take me right here, Ennis.  Now.  I want you to…”

But even as Jack held Ennis’s face, he saw troubled brown eyes slide away from him to scan the horizon, the mountains, the road, searching for any sign of danger, real or imagined.  Jack was used to this, used to the fear after knowing Ennis for 24 years.  That low startle point was never going away for good.  He knew Ennis couldn’t help it, couldn’t control it completely, but Jack had learned ways to soothe this ancient fear, at least for a while.  He spoke gently, sincerely, to his old friend, still cradling Ennis’s face in loving hands. 

“Ennis.  Listen to me now.  The ranch hands have all gone for the weekend, right?  You sent ‘em on their way last night.  Won’t be back ‘til Monday.  We’re on our own spread here, way out in the middle a nowhere.  Anyone comes within five miles of us, we’ll hear their truck comin’, well before they see us.  And you know our dogs go crazy if anybody comes within ten miles a this place, Ennis.  And that’s plenty a time for you an’ me to finish what we’re doin’and pull our pants up, cowboy, and nobody’s none the wiser!”  He smiled big, reassuring, brushing Ennis’s hair back and hugging him close.  Ennis melted into Jack’s broad chest and they held each other tight.  Jack just whispered it’s alright, Ennis, it’s alright…we’re safe here and then Ennis must’ve remembered what Jack had started with that shameless, saucy display on the lawn, and the fire burned fierce in his eyes again.

Ennis lay down with Jack and took him right there, just like their first night up on Brokeback.  And still they held hands when they made love like this.  Jack thought they always would.  The passion was powerful and intense, the eternal love between them breathtaking…undying and strong.  And then Jack took Ennis, face to face, slow and sweet, just like the second night they had spent together in the little tent on the mountain, so long ago.  And then they lay in each other’s arms, under the oak tree, on the freshly mown grass, right by the sign on the gate…




One Shot Ranch
J. Twist and E. del Mar, proprietors


Title: Spiceylife- You returned!
Post by: Toycoon on June 20, 2007, 09:39:14 am
We were so worried, ya nut! Where ya' been huh? I left word with yer boss; left all them notes...

Well, I'm glad you're back, baby and you can post a four sentence fan-fic if you want to. You've been granted special permission!

I'll declare today as Spiceylife Freeform FanFic Day!
Title: Re: Hot love
Post by: Toycoon on June 20, 2007, 09:54:23 am
Whew! Whata was to start off the morning! Spiceylife, you are "nastiness in a bottle".
And you thought you wouldn't be able to navigate around these parts...sounds like yer doin' pretty good to me! Great to read your notoriously, IMDb banned, Christian spurned 'Spiceylife' dirty stories again. Yaahoo!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 20, 2007, 02:47:16 pm
Morning all,

Here's a little something to start your day...



"Ain’t gonna be sittin’, Jack,” said Ennis with a wink.


Leslie, you are one gorgeous writer! Stay with us, please, and write us a sequel!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 20, 2007, 03:13:09 pm
… damn, I’m so hot I even turn myself on…

He tried not to laugh out loud at that, but a smile tugged at the corners of his mouth, working its way up to his eyes.



Spiceylife, what a comeback! We always knew it would be worth waiting! I´m still breathless. This story is just PERFECT, contains everything we are craving.

OMG I´ll never again dare to post anything... :laugh:

Holy shit, what a story. Pheewww. (whiping the sweat off my forehead)

Dagi

Our life is goin´ta get waaaayyy more spicey! Our life is goin´ta get waaaayyy more spicey! Our life is goin´ta get waaaayyy more spicey! Our life is goin´ta get waaaayyy more spicey! Our life is goin´ta get waaaayyy more spicey! OurlLife is goin´ta get waaaayyy more spicey! Our life is goin´ta get waaaayyy more spicey! Our Life is goin´ta get waaaayyy more spicey! Our Life is goin´ta get waaaayyy more spicey! Our Life is goin´ta get waaaayyy more spicey!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: MaineWriter on June 20, 2007, 03:37:10 pm
Leslie, you are one gorgeous writer! Stay with us, please, and write us a sequel!

How about the very, very famous peanut butter blow job? Ha ha, does this bring back memories! From "A Love Born From Steel," chapter 2.


They ended up staying at the cabin for an extra day. The “celebratory fuck” turned into an ongoing event, and Ennis finally achieved his dream of “fuckin’ Jack’s brains out.” To be honest, at the end of it, Ennis wasn’t quite sure where his brains were either. Like a pair of horny teenagers, they lunged at each other with a ferocity born of passion, and a hunger born of years of repressed emotion. “I think we let the genie out of the bottle,” said Jack.

“I told you that lover fucks was gonna be diffr’nt,” replied Ennis. They screwed on the bed, on the floor, in the worn easy chair, and even on the porch, which happened when Ennis grabbed Jack from behind when Jack had gone out to piss. When they got hungry, Ennis made more peanut butter and jelly sandwiches. Ennis took a big bite of one and suddenly, Jack pulled him in for a kiss, and with his tongue, fished the bite of sandwich out of Ennis’s mouth. “What am I, the mama bird?” Ennis drawled.

“Yup, feedin’ her little baby chick,” said Jack, as he broke off another bite of sandwich and put it in Ennis’s mouth.

Jack found other uses for the peanut butter, too, slathering it on Ennis’s erect cock and then slowly, slowly, licking it off. Ennis groaned in pleasure, “Jack, please…”

“Hold on, cowboy, I gotta get it nice and clean,” said Jack, “I ain’t letting you shove no peanut butter up my ass.”

But even with the games, the playing, and the rough and tumble sex, they both knew that there was a difference—no longer just fucking, it was truly making love, and they felt as if they were trying to merge their bodies and souls into one as they pressed ever closer. Jack looked deep into Ennis’s eyes and saw an intensity and ardor he had never seen before. “Is that what love looks like?” he asked and Ennis pulled him close.

“I don’t know what it looks like, but I can sure as hell tell you what it feels like, and shit, it feels good. Rodeo, I love you,” he said.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 20, 2007, 03:44:25 pm
How about the very, very famous peanut butter blow job? Ha ha, does this bring back memories! From "A Love Born From Steel," chapter 2.



“I don’t know what it looks like, but I can sure as hell tell you what it feels like, and shit, it feels good. Rodeo, I love you,” he said.


Aaahhh you are killing me. And making me feel all ashamed of my miserable poor attempts to write fanfic :(

But, go on killing me please ;D

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: loneleeb3 on June 20, 2007, 06:05:39 pm
Quote
I love you,” he said.
That made my day!
I wish we could have heard that in the movie!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on June 20, 2007, 11:27:01 pm
Enough talk about dirty diapers! I can't take it anymore. I gotta change the subject quick! Uggh! :o
Title: Love or no love
Post by: Toycoon on June 20, 2007, 11:30:46 pm
Straddling Jack with his full weight, overpowering the first person he'd ever made love to only hours before, Ennis' hands tightened around Jack's throat; intensely confused aggression blinded Ennis so much, he could hardly see through his tears.

Jack struggled and kicked madly, kneeing Ennis squarely on the nose; Ennis wiped his bloodied nose with the sleeve of his shirt, stared at the smear and stood there gasping confounded.

Jack, startled by the sight of Ennis' blood, rushed over to comfort his lover; Ennis, who was taught to be nobody's fool under any circumstance, sucker punched Jack in the eye so hard, the sound echoed through the glen.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on June 21, 2007, 12:00:45 am
Dear God!  I've really opened up a can of worms.   :D

Can of worms?  No, more like a crock of shi....    :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 21, 2007, 12:27:31 am
Good Grief!  I'm so unsavvy on a proper forum, it's embarrassing!  I feel like a baby bird that's fallen out of the nest, flapping around all helpless.  This is very different to IMDb!

:D :D :D
 

Hey, this is fun!   :D  Okay, enough playing.  Hello, everyone!  I'm so happy to 'see' you all again.  I've been away too long this time. 

Toycoon, I'm so sorry if you were worried.  Hey, I always come back!  I always will.  Just real life issues come up sometimes and can't be put off any longer.  I'll explain more later in a PM, if I ever work out how to send one.  But I knew where you all were, and I'd always find you.  Man, I sound like Daniel Day Lewis/Hawkeye in The Last of the Mohicans.  "Stay alive.  I will find you!"

But if I'm ever away for so long again, I'll make sure I let you all know beforehand.  I am sorry.

Anyway, I want to post a story but I think there's a mighty big chance it's more than 3 sentences, Toycoon!  I'd say at least......4?  :D     

Spiceylife, my girl!  I am so glad to see you here, Little Darlin!  I knew you would come, and you didn't disappoint.  Welcome back, sweetie.  I hope everything is alright!  :)
Title: Re: Exploring
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 21, 2007, 12:29:41 am
Cue the Star Trek theme!  (I'm sorry, I just couldn't resist!)   ;D

I know Clyde!  I couldn't resist!  I've been a Star Trek fan since I was 10!
Title: Indigo Twist-Del Mar
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 21, 2007, 01:29:21 am
Susie, Merr, Dagi, Spiceylife, Malina, Daphne and MaineWriter, this one is for you.  I'm still working on Bobby part 2

Jack and Ennis were seated, side-by-side, on their beige leather couch.  Jack was reading a novel and Ennis watched the news on their wide screen TV.  Little Indigo was playing with a set of oversized blocks at their feet.  “Hear anything interestin’ at the new parent’s group meeting tonight?”  Ennis asked Jack as he watched Dan Rather.  “Yeah, as a matter of fact, I did!” Jack responded as he looked up from his book.  “Ms. Blankenship suggested we try a little something with Indigo.  She said it would help her immune system function properly, and would also promote bonding.”  Ennis had to smile at Jack’s terminology.  That man was a fast learner.  “Okay, what is this thing we should do?”  It was Ennis.  He turned off the TV and faced his lover.  Jack placed his book on the coffee table and reached for his daughter.  Little Indigo was dressed all in silk and bows, and she smelled like talcum powder and baby shampoo.  She looked fondly at Jack as he placed her on his knee.  “Hi there, little one!”  Jack cooed as he cuddled his child.  Indigo giggled and placed a small hand on Jack’s chin.  Ennis ticked her dimpled knee.  “Well,” Jack said, “Ms. Blankenship said to kiss Indigo on the cheek, give her a big wet one.  The enzymes in our saliva will deliver disease fighting substances to her system.  It’ll also convey affection, which is where the bonding part comes in.” 

Ennis smiled tenderly while he shook his head.  “But we already kiss her on the cheek. How is this somethin’ new?”  "Well, I was told that we should kiss her as often as we can....and don’t forget the sloppy part.”  Jack placed a wet kiss on Indigo’s cheek.  “See, like that!”  Indigo laughed and returned Jack’s kiss.  Ennis and Jack were amazed at Indigo’s rather precocious display of affection.  “Will you look at that?”  Ennis laughed as he took his child from Jack’s arms.  “Here, let me try.”  Ennis puckered and placed a tender kiss on his daughter’s cheek.  She squealed with pleasure.  “It seems Ms. Blankenship is onto somethin’ there!”  Ennis said as he rose to his feet.  He gently placed Indigo on Jack’s lap and left to start dinner.

While in the kitchen, Ennis listened to the sounds of Jack and Indigo playing on the living room floor.  Jack was making animal sounds and rolling on the carpet while Indigo laughed and whooped.  Ennis looked in on his family and felt a sudden pang.  He watched as Jack lifted a laughing Indigo into the air, only to lower her and plant another wet kiss on her cheek.  To think that he almost missed out on this!  After supper Jack and Ennis put their daughter to bed.  She was well fed, dry and content.  With his little baby taken care of, Ennis decided it was time to tend to his big baby..
Title: Re: Exploring
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 21, 2007, 01:40:37 am
I'll be thinking of this one the next time I go walking in the woods, littlewing.  And I just loved that little hint at the erotic.  So Jack is tight and sweet, huh?  I'll just bet he is.   ;)

Gary

 :laugh: :laugh:  Thanks, Gary!
Title: Re: Indigo Twist-Del Mar
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 21, 2007, 01:55:52 am
Aww  What a sweet and loving scene, littlewing.  And the sloppy, wet kisses reminded me of something my father used to do back when I was a toddler.  He'd come home for lunch, and since I hadn't started school yet, I was there, too.  And when he'd get ready to go back to work he'd put his face against mine and rub his whiskers against my cheek and then give me a raspberry.  He'd laugh at my annoyed expression as I wiped the spit off my face.

Thanks so much for the AU.  I might write my own fanfic from there one of these days.

Gary

P.S.  Is it true that sloppy, wet kisses are good for babies?

Ah, Gary!  Thanks so much for posting your sweet story.  I'm glad you have such fond memories of your dad.  I read in "First" magazine that kisses to a baby's cheek is good for them.  The sloppy part I made up!!  :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 21, 2007, 05:18:39 am
They were lying on the meadow, enjoying the warm sunset light.
Gary was stroking tenderly Dagi´s hair, her head resting in his lap. When she looked up, she could see Toycoon smiling, massaging Gary´s stiff shoulders, leaning with his back gainst Clyde´s back .
Dagi run her fingers through Susie´s wild brown hair since she was resting her head in Dagi´s lap, chatting without fullstops or commas about all the naughty things she would like to do once left alone with Jake, her words wrapping us up in a comforting sweet fog.
Marie was giving Susie a professional footrub, but every now and then she turned around to her laptop when she was overwhelmed by the inner urge to writewritewrite.
Merrily hugged us all with looong arms in a tight warm embrace.
Spiceylife kept running around us in circles, flattering like a babybird, singing <I feel like a virgin...posting for the very first time...!>

This was one odd dream, yet when I woke up, it felt  so real.

Dagi
Title: Re: Indigo Twist-Del Mar
Post by: Dagi on June 21, 2007, 05:22:21 am
Susie, Merr, Dagi, Spiceylife, Malina, Daphne and MaineWriter, this one is for you.  I'm still working on Bobby part 2

Jack and Ennis were seated, side-by-side, on their beige leather couch.  Jack was reading a novel and Ennis watched the news on their wide screen TV.  Little Indigo was playing with a set of oversized blocks at their feet.  “Hear anything interestin’ at the new parent’s group meeting tonight?”  Ennis asked Jack as he watched Dan Rather.  “Yeah, as a matter of fact, I did!” Jack responded as he looked up from his book.  “Ms. Blankenship suggested we try a little something with Indigo.  She said it would help her immune system function properly, and would also promote bonding.”  Ennis had to smile at Jack’s terminology.  That man was a fast learner.  “Okay, what is this thing we should do?”  It was Ennis.  He turned off the TV and faced his lover.  Jack placed his book on the coffee table and reached for his daughter.  Little Indigo was dressed all in silk and bows, and she smelled like talcum powder and baby shampoo.  She looked fondly at Jack as he placed her on his knee.  “Hi there, little one!”  Jack cooed as he cuddled his child.  Indigo giggled and placed a small hand on Jack’s chin.  Ennis ticked her dimpled knee.  “Well,” Jack said, “Ms. Blankenship said to kiss Indigo on the cheek, give her a big wet one.  The enzymes in our saliva will deliver disease fighting substances to her system.  It’ll also convey affection, which is where the bonding part comes in.” 

Ennis smiled tenderly while he shook his head.  “But we already kiss her on the cheek. How is this somethin’ new?”  "Well, I was told that we should kiss her as often as we can....and don’t forget the sloppy part.”  Jack placed a wet kiss on Indigo’s cheek.  “See, like that!”  Indigo laughed and returned Jack’s kiss.  Ennis and Jack were amazed at Indigo’s rather precocious display of affection.  “Will you look at that?”  Ennis laughed as he took his child from Jack’s arms.  “Here, let me try.”  Ennis puckered and placed a tender kiss on his daughter’s cheek.  She squealed with pleasure.  “It seems Ms. Blankenship is onto somethin’ there!”  Ennis said as he rose to his feet.  He gently placed Indigo on Jack’s lap and left to start dinner.

While in the kitchen, Ennis listened to the sounds of Jack and Indigo playing on the living room floor.  Jack was making animal sounds and rolling on the carpet while Indigo laughed and whooped.  Ennis looked in on his family and felt a sudden pang.  He watched as Jack lifted a laughing Indigo into the air, only to lower her and plant another wet kiss on her cheek.  To think that he almost missed out on this!  After supper Jack and Ennis put their daughter to bed.  She was well fed, dry and content.  With his little baby taken care of, Ennis decided it was time to tend to his big baby..



Oh Marie, that was sooo sweet! I can hear Indigo´s laughter! She sure has the best parents in the whole Alternate Universe! And how lovely to dedicate it to the mamies!
Title: Peeling Potatoes
Post by: Dagi on June 21, 2007, 05:27:26 am
Jack put the knife and the half peeled potatoe aside and went over to Ennis.
„Hey, cowboy, you must be tired after a whole day with the sheep, come on, let me do this for you.“
He kneeled down in front of his friend, took the soap out of his hand and let it slip through his
palms until they were covered with thick, creamy foam.
Ennis swallowed hard, stared transfixed at Jack´s hands, his half erect member speaking volumes.
Jack leaned in to plant a soft innocent kiss on those seductively parted lips, trying to distract his love for a moment.
„Jack, ohhgoodlord that feels...aaahhh..“ moaned Ennis, surprised and exited by the sensation of Jack´s hands the creamy foam making them slide softly over his shaft and the sensitive tip of his instantly hard member.
Ennis grabbed hold of Jack´s shoulder with one hand, burying his nails in the flesh, kissed him hungrily  groaning into his mouth while he stroked firmly over Jack´s manhood that filled his jeans threatening to burst the seams.
The all day pent-up lust had made him all too  ready for this.

   Up on the high pasture  the memory of Jack´s mouth sucking him hard, the
   thought of the    unmistakable moan he evoked when his  dick hit that sweet
   spot of lust inside Jack had more than once threatened to overwhelm him
   almost making him come without even touching himself; he had been
   lying there  on the meadow, eyes closed, breathing hard, biting his lips trying
   to somehow get a grip on himself for he did not want to waste his seed but
   spare it all for Jack as the most precious gift he could offer to the person
   that meant the world to him...

Now he felt a little ashamed that he was about to come after only a few determined strokes, but when he looked at Jack´s face he saw his own rapture reflected in his man´s half closed eyes filled with pure love and drunk with lust. The sight of those pink swollen lips wet with Ennis´ own saliva were more than he could stand.
„Let go, cowboy, let go, no need to hold back, ya won´t soil yer jeans this time...“ Jack whispered raucously. Once more he let his wet, slippery palm glide over Ennis´ tip, one more stroke to the base, and he felt Ennis´ cock  pumping when he came, his hips buckling, crying out loud, shooting his hot semen all over Jack´s lap.
Ennis leaned his forehead against his lover´s, both breathing fiercely, and after a glance at Jack´s jeans he mumbled shamefully: „I´ll wash them out for ya, sorry bud, couldn´t control myself...“
„Don´t worry, Ennis“, Jack answered with a broad grin, „perhaps you were too busy to notice, but I soiled them all by myself...!“
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: louisev on June 21, 2007, 05:48:28 am
Hey Louise, what a  beautiful surprise! And you put us all to a shame (exept Toycoon, of course) sticking to the  3-sentence rule... sexy and sweet! Go on, Louise, the first thing to learn here is that we are never satisfied, we always want MOOORE!

it's a discipline I suppose, I have had plenty of opportunity to write in long form,and I tend to go on and on, so it is refreshing to write short things!

and if anyone wants to know what I write the rest of the time take a peek in the Creative Writing forum here on Bettermost where some of my completed (and not yet completed) books are.  I don't advert them as Brokeback fics any longer, however...!
Title: Re: peeling potatoes
Post by: Dagi on June 21, 2007, 06:32:51 am
Thank you, Susie. You are really sweet. How nice to hear that I could surprise you!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: MaineWriter on June 21, 2007, 07:20:22 am
Another one for your enjoyment...



“Well, I guess we’ll pack up in the mornin’, I’ll head ta Lightning Flat,” said Jack, poking at the embers of the campfire with a stick. “My daddy says a bunch a shingles blew off the roof in that last big storm we had. I’ll be spendin’ a few days helpin’ him fix that.”

“Wish I could go with ya,” said Ennis, softly. “We’d get the job done in no time.”

Jack looked at him, a myriad of answers running through his mind.

"Yeah, I’d love ta have ya help me…and have ya meet my folks. Mebbe then we could make this relationship real.”

“When ya say things like that, ya twist the knife, Ennis. You don’t know how much it hurts.”

“Bet yer better with a hammer n nails than I am, Ennis. You could do the whole job by yerself in half the time it’ll take me.”

“What’s stopping you? Get in the truck, let’s go.”

But all Jack said was, “Ya got yer girls, Ennis, and yer job. I know ya can’t take anymore time off.”

Ennis nodded. “Yeah. That’s it.”
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on June 21, 2007, 10:01:19 am
I'm sorry Clyde and everyone else who I have offended.  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_13_12v.gif)

Merrily


Who's offended?????

That's what babies do!

I just though it was funny that "a can of worms" was really " a crock of sh.."

Hmmmm  It's not funny if you have to explain it, is it?    :-\
Title: Re: Exploring
Post by: Clyde-B on June 21, 2007, 10:06:32 am
I know Clyde!  I couldn't resist!  I've been a Star Trek fan since I was 10!

Well, Marie, Your story had me hummin it!  Ummhmm.   ;D
Title: Re: Love or no love
Post by: Clyde-B on June 21, 2007, 11:05:52 am
Ouch!  That made my own eye hurt!  That is such a sad moment in their relationship.  Everything could have been different if they knew how to open up, and trusted one another with the truth.

Like I said yesterday, I think Ennis always held something back because of what happened in this scene.  I know that Ennis could have said something just as well as Jack, but even though Ennis didn't put his feelings into words, he did seem to make it clear that he was upset about going down the mountain early.  And I think Jack broke Ennis's heart that day when he pretended like he didn't care one way or the other.

Gary

I have always thought that when Jack saw Ennis in a funk sitting on that grassy knoll, he thought Ennis was upset about the money, after all that's what he'd said, and he'd already told Jack that this was "a one-shot thing we got goin here."  Even if it wasn't, nothin could be done about it Ennis was all set to get married. So he grabbed his rope because he knew that his lame attempts at being macho always made Ennis laugh.   And it worked for a while until their wrasslin and tumbling brought them into such intimate contact that Ennis had to push Jack away, push from his mind the loss, the hurt, the truth.

I still do the same thing.  There are times when I watch other people and it's almost like I can read their minds, tell exactly what they're thinking, but if I'm staring into the eyes of someone I love the words all disappear, the mind turns to mush, and I haven't a clue what to say.  If I say anything, it  comes out as  what seems to me this boring stream of inane drivel, so more often than not I say nothing.  I think Ennis may have had the same problem.
Title: Re: Asking For It (2)
Post by: loneleeb3 on June 21, 2007, 11:12:43 am

Yep!  With prayers and Bible verses on the back, and it'd be about a hundred an one and everybody sweatin like a pig and the reverend would just drone on and on and on... And everybody would be fannin and the harder you fanned, the hotter it got...
 
Thanks for remembering Gary!
I remeber those too!!!
Wouldn't be a tent revival or Camp Meetin without 'em! ;D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: loneleeb3 on June 21, 2007, 12:12:35 pm
Shit gary!
I don't even know who John is. I need to catch up.
But sure enough, I'm bawlin my eyes out like a girl!  ;D
Lord I can't wait to go back and read how we got to this point.

Ok, I read Susies story and know who John is.
Lord, this thread is killin me.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 21, 2007, 01:35:12 pm
What a loving scene, Dagi.  You make us sound like a family, and that gives me the warm fuzzies.   :)

To tell you the truth I've been having powerful waves of loneliness sweep over me this past month.  I'm an extremely shy person, and I've been living here in this little town in WV.  There hasn't been much opportunity for me to make friends.  I came back here to be with my parents, and now that their gone I feel like a fish out of water. 

I also feel kind of panicky sometimes, espeically at night.  I'm worried about all kinds of things.  I'm worried about finding an apartment.  I'm worried about passing the application process once I do find an apartment.  I'm worried about getting all my stuff from point A to point B.  I'm worried about running out of money.  I'm worried about making new friends once I'm resettled.  Will I find a way of doing that?  I'm worried about getting sick and having no one to call on.  I'm simply worried.

So thanks for the image of all of us together, accepting each other, supporting each other, expressing affection, and enjoying one another's company.

Gary

Gary I´d like to have your head resting  in my lap, and I would stroke your hair and whisper some comforting words into your ear and rock you softly until you are sound asleep and stop worrying for at least this night.
I wish I could do something else for you. Feel hugged, my dear.
Dagi
Title: Re: Peeling Potatoes
Post by: Dagi on June 21, 2007, 01:38:32 pm
...for he did not want to waste his seed but spare it all for Jack...

That Ennis is a conscientious fella, ain't he?  And it sure was nice of Jack to wash his buddy's sweaty privates after he'd been workin' hard all day.  Don't blame Ennis for not being able to hold back.  Good God, if Jack had done that to me I would have squirted him in the eye the first stroke.   :P

Supper sexy, Dagi.  Thanks for sharing it with us.

Gary

Thank you, Gary dearest!
Title: Re: Coming Down
Post by: Dagi on June 21, 2007, 01:45:23 pm
Coming Down

Getting back to the truck was taking less time than Ennis thought it would.....


“I’m so sorry, John.  Please don’t think that just ‘cause I remember Jack that I think any less of you.”

In a hushed tone John said with his lips close to Ennis’s ear, “You dumbass.  I love Jack, too.  I know he’s a part of you, so lovin’ you means lovin’ him.”

And loving Jack and Ennis means loving John :D!

That was very touching, Gary. No need to say that being happy with another man is what I wish for Ennis.

thank you!

Dagi
Title: Re: Love or no love
Post by: Dagi on June 21, 2007, 01:52:46 pm
  And it worked for a while until their wrasslin and tumbling brought them into such intimate contact that Ennis had to push Jack away, push from his mind the loss, the hurt, the truth.

At this moment I feel his loss, his hurt physically. It gives me gutcramps watching his helpless and violent attempt to ged rid of all this energy. And I sit there and sometimes I shout at the screen < tell him, say it that you don´t want to lose him, say it say it say it!>

 >:( >:( >:( :'( :'( :'(
Title: Re: New Friends - Part 3
Post by: Dagi on June 21, 2007, 02:07:27 pm


No more words were necessary; John held Ennis close, rocking him gently and humming a soft tune, it was time for Ennis to mourn.   




oh Susie I just read all four stories one after the other, and I loved them all! Your writing is so lovely, you capture Ennis so perfectly and moved me to tears when he was finally allowed to tell someone about his love for Jack. Imagine you have loved so much and are grieving so hard and are not allowed to tell anybody....impossible to imagine.
Thank you for reposting them!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 21, 2007, 02:09:53 pm
Another one for your enjoyment...



But all Jack said was, “Ya got yer girls, Ennis, and yer job. I know ya can’t take anymore time off.”

Ennis nodded. “Yeah. That’s it.”


So sad. And I bet Jack was biting his tongue after saying that.

Thank you, Leslie!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 21, 2007, 02:11:10 pm

Lord, this thread is killin me.


 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on June 21, 2007, 11:50:38 pm
They were lying on the meadow, enjoying the warm sunset light.
Gary was stroking tenderly Dagi´s hair, her head resting in his lap. When she looked up, she could see Toycoon smiling, massaging Gary´s stiff shoulders, leaning with his back gainst Clyde´s back .
Dagi run her fingers through Susie´s wild brown hair since she was resting her head in Dagi´s lap, chatting without fullstops or commas about all the naughty things she would like to do once left alone with Jake, her words wrapping us up in a comforting sweet fog.
Marie was giving Susie a professional footrub, but every now and then she turned around to her laptop when she was overwhelmed by the inner urge to writewritewrite.
Merrily hugged us all with looong arms in a tight warm embrace.
Spiceylife kept running around us in circles, flattering like a babybird, singing <I feel like a virgin...posting for the very first time...!>

This was one odd dream, yet when I woke up, it felt  so real.

Dagi

Crazy dream, Dagi! I love that image of all of us, so cozy and interlocked. I felt so at home here.

I read some thing on another thread that made me a little sad, though.
I don't want to get into it because I don't want to make any assumptions. But it doesn't seem right to me.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: MaineWriter on June 22, 2007, 08:06:47 am
Here's another little tidbit from the Lazy L universe...



Lazy L Farm
Quanah, TX
August 31, 1976

Ennis leaned against the wall of the bathroom, watching Jack as he rubbed shaving cream across his face, then picked up his razor. “I like watchin’ ya shave,” he commented.

“Ya do?”

Ennis nodded.

“What, ya think it’s sexy or somethin’?”

Ennis shrugged. “Mebbe sexy, I dunno, mebbe just a guy thing.”

Jack smiled at him as he continued to scrape the razor across his cheek. “A guy thing, huh?” he said, with a small wink. “Yer gay, En, y’know that.”

“Yeah, I know,” replied Ennis, looking down at his feet.

“Ever get a shave from a barber?”

Ennis shook his head no. “Ain’t got the money for that kind a stuff,” he said. “Besides, I ain’t sure I’d like some guy rubbin’ his hands all over my face.”

“Ya like me rubbin’ my hands on your face…”

“Yer diff’rent.”

“True.” Jack finished his shave, washing the remnants of cream off his face and rinsing his razor in the running water. “Who cut yer hair?”

Ennis looked puzzled. “What d’ya mean?”

“I mean, did ya go ta the barber for that?”

“Oh, no. My mama cut my hair, then my sister, then Alma.”

“But ya ain’t been with Alma for a while. Who’s been cuttin’ it now?”

“I tried ta do it myself,” said Ennis, his voice soft.

Jack stepped close to his lover and ran his fingers through his hair. “I could probably cut yer hair,” he said. “Not too hard ta learn ta do…”

Ennis didn’t say anything, just felt Jack’s touch and gentle caress at the base of his skull.

“Ain’t cuttin’ off the curls, though,” he said, leaning in for a kiss.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on June 22, 2007, 10:09:31 am
What a loving scene, Dagi.  You make us sound like a family, and that gives me the warm fuzzies.   :)

To tell you the truth I've been having powerful waves of loneliness sweep over me this past month.  I'm an extremely shy person, and I've been living here in this little town in WV.  There hasn't been much opportunity for me to make friends.  I came back here to be with my parents, and now that their gone I feel like a fish out of water. 

I also feel kind of panicky sometimes, espeically at night.  I'm worried about all kinds of things.  I'm worried about finding an apartment.  I'm worried about passing the application process once I do find an apartment.  I'm worried about getting all my stuff from point A to point B.  I'm worried about running out of money.  I'm worried about making new friends once I'm resettled.  Will I find a way of doing that?  I'm worried about getting sick and having no one to call on.  I'm simply worried.

So thanks for the image of all of us together, accepting each other, supporting each other, expressing affection, and enjoying one another's company.

Gary

Gary,

I had a rough week, myself, last Friday was the anniversary of my mom's death and Sunday was, of course, Father's day.  I'm just catching up on my reading now.

Listen bud, you may have trouble saying hi, but I think all of us here would be surprised if you had trouble making friends.  All you have to do is show them what you've showed us.  They'll be hooked.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 22, 2007, 01:55:55 pm
Crazy dream, Dagi! I love that image of all of us, so cozy and interlocked. I felt so at home here.

I read some thing on another thread that made me a little sad, though.
I don't want to get into it because I don't want to make any assumptions. But it doesn't seem right to me.

Hi Toycoon.
The dream stayed with me the whole day, and made me feel all fuzzy and warm. I do consider you part of my family.

Could you just explain to me what you meant with that last sentence?

Dagi
Title: Re: Coming Down
Post by: Dagi on June 22, 2007, 02:00:31 pm
Yeppers, that's me.   ;D  But don't ask Dagi.  She'll tell you it's her grandmother.   :P

Gary

Hey you good-looking fella, I want to see a bigger photo! Äh, please! How old did you say you are? You look like about 30. :D

So nice to see your face finally! I like it!
Title: Re: Love or no love
Post by: Dagi on June 22, 2007, 02:12:16 pm
intensely confused aggression blinded Ennis so much, he could hardly see through his tears.


oh Toycoon, you know Ennis so well. I feel this aggression, too, I want to punch Jack so hard...
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 22, 2007, 02:16:47 pm

Dagi, that was great - could visualize all of it.  I read Susie's comments too.  You had one heck of a dream there.  You got me right too - as I read everyone's stories, I just want to hug every one of you and hold you tight because you are extending my enjoyment of this wonderful movie - that the mainstream has obviously yet to honor.  6th Sense?  Lord of the Rings?  Saving Private Ryan?  None of those movies has the "content" or "relevence" that BBM has.  But since they are still honoring such movies as Gone with the Wind and Wizard of Oz, guess people would just rather live in the past or in a dream world.  Hurrumph.  I love you all though!

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/8/8_8_19.gif)

Merrily




Hi Merrily,

I didn´t have to think much about that, just wrote it down the way I could see it before my "inner eye". And I do not only see you hugging us, I can feel you hugging us.

Love, Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 22, 2007, 02:48:43 pm
Here's another little tidbit from the Lazy L universe...




“What, ya think it’s sexy or somethin’?”

Ennis shrugged. “Mebbe sexy, I dunno, mebbe just a guy thing.”

Jack smiled at him as he continued to scrape the razor across his cheek. “A guy thing, huh?” he said, with a small wink. “Yer gay, En, y’know that.”

“Yeah, I know,”  replied Ennis, looking down at his feet.



I just love it when you let the guys speak out loud all those things we never heard them say. I think I may have to write some "Love you" story by myself, just for me, ´cause I need so hard to hear it in my mind..
Title: Re: Coming Down
Post by: Dagi on June 22, 2007, 06:01:43 pm
Oh Dagi, sweetheart.  You tryin' to butter me up or somethin'?  Gosh, if I was there in Germany with ya, I'd clean your house and mow your lawn for that last statement.
(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_3_15.gif)

Gary

You are very welcome to my house at any time, sweetheart, but I´d expect you to stay a little after cleaning it and mowing the lawn (what makes me think of spiceylife´s story, btw ::) )for a chat and a beer or two. Geez, I really would LOVE to meet all of you guys in personal... And of course I was trying to butter you up ;D. It worked, huh?

Dagi
Title: Re: Indigo Twist-Del Mar
Post by: Clyde-B on June 22, 2007, 08:38:58 pm


  He watched as Jack lifted a laughing Indigo into the air, only to lower her and plant another wet kiss on her cheek.   

What a sweet idea Marie, thanks for this.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on June 22, 2007, 08:45:37 pm
They were lying on the meadow, enjoying the warm sunset light.
Gary was stroking tenderly Dagi´s hair, her head resting in his lap. When she looked up, she could see Toycoon smiling, massaging Gary´s stiff shoulders, leaning with his back gainst Clyde´s back .
Dagi run her fingers through Susie´s wild brown hair since she was resting her head in Dagi´s lap, chatting without fullstops or commas about all the naughty things she would like to do once left alone with Jake, her words wrapping us up in a comforting sweet fog.
Marie was giving Susie a professional footrub, but every now and then she turned around to her laptop when she was overwhelmed by the inner urge to writewritewrite.
Merrily hugged us all with looong arms in a tight warm embrace.
Spiceylife kept running around us in circles, flattering like a babybird, singing <I feel like a virgin...posting for the very first time...!>

This was one odd dream, yet when I woke up, it felt  so real.

Dagi

Was this meadow just outside Paris in the '20's?

Thanks for getting us all together Dagi.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 22, 2007, 10:07:27 pm
Morning all,

Here's a little something to start your day...



Don Wroe's Cabin
November, 1970


Ennis was shoving another log in the woodstove as Jack came into the cabin, his breath frosty. “Goddamn, Ennis, it must be 100 degrees in here! What the hell are ya doin’?” He shoved his mittens into his pocket as he took off his coat.

“That’s my plan,” said Ennis with a smile.

“What plan?”

“I got me a cabin with a bed, and a woodstove. The only thing missin’ in this picture is naked Jack. I get it hot enough in here and I’ll get that too.”

Jack laughed. “Naked Jack? What if I’m shy, don’t want ta be sittin’ here naked?”

“Ain’t gonna be sittin’, Jack,” said Ennis with a wink.

“Well, I think I know the cure for me bein’ shy.”

“What’s that?”

“Naked Ennis. C’mere, cowboy,” said Jack, with a crook of his finger.

Beautiful!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 22, 2007, 10:10:57 pm
They were lying on the meadow, enjoying the warm sunset light.
Gary was stroking tenderly Dagi´s hair, her head resting in his lap. When she looked up, she could see Toycoon smiling, massaging Gary´s stiff shoulders, leaning with his back gainst Clyde´s back .
Dagi run her fingers through Susie´s wild brown hair since she was resting her head in Dagi´s lap, chatting without fullstops or commas about all the naughty things she would like to do once left alone with Jake, her words wrapping us up in a comforting sweet fog.
Marie was giving Susie a professional footrub, but every now and then she turned around to her laptop when she was overwhelmed by the inner urge to writewritewrite.
Merrily hugged us all with looong arms in a tight warm embrace.
Spiceylife kept running around us in circles, flattering like a babybird, singing <I feel like a virgin...posting for the very first time...!>

This was one odd dream, yet when I woke up, it felt  so real.

Dagi

Dagi, this is so beautiful!  For once, I'm at a loss for words!  Thanks so much for this!  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 22, 2007, 10:14:09 pm

 and a soothing foot massage from littlewing .... heaven!!! 

Anytime, Susie my love!  I'm told I give the best foot massages in town!
Title: Re: New Friends - Part 2
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 22, 2007, 10:18:09 pm
They sat a while chewing the cud, enjoying the cool summers evening.  The guy’s name was John, never gotten married, worked as a ranch hand most of his life.  He was good company, laughing and chattering on, felt comfortable, somehow familiar.

 “My folks are still alive and kickin’.  ‘Course they haven’t spoke a word to me since they found out some twenty years ago”.

“What d’ya mean?  You got a disease or somethin’?”

John laughed, “Yeah that’s what my folks would call it.  No, nothin’ wrong with me friend, just queer is all, like you.”

Ennis was startled by this statement; on the one hand, how in the hell did this fella know? On the other, it was kinda nice being called “Friend” again.

John, seeing the look of shock on Ennis’ face continued quickly, “Oh, they swore I was the spawn of the devil and was goin’ straight to hell, tried to beat it out of me with prayer and a yard stick.”

Ennis looked sympathetically towards him.

“Come on bud, why d’you think I’m always smiling at ya, always sitting out here on the porch just in case ya come by? “

“I just thought that….” he cut himself short, what did it matter what he thought, he’d been wrong about everything else so far.

“Look Ennis, there’s a bar round here, a little ways out of town.  Just men like you and me, getting’ together, drinkin’ beer and shooting some pool.  We don’t get no bother; folk stay away, I don’t know… maybe they think they’ll catch it or somethin’.  Anyway, I’m drivin’ up there this weekend if you wanna go.”

“I dunno…” Ennis stood up, heading back to his trailer, wanted to turn tail and run, but something was holding him there; it was Jack, all he could think was What would Jack want me to do?.  He turned his head back and smiled, “Just getting’ us some more whiskey bud….. yeah, think I’ll come along for the ride.”




Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


This is a great AU piece, Susie!  I can certainly imagine Ennis developing a relationship with someone else - it was just a matter of time.  But I can't really imagine Ennis without Jack!  Lovely work, Sweets!  I really enjoyed reading through this!  ;)
Title: Re: Coming Down
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 22, 2007, 10:24:02 pm
Coming Down

Getting back to the truck was taking less time than Ennis thought it would.  He had deliberately slowed his pace in order to have a good look at everything.  Lord only knew when he’d get back to these parts, so he wanted to take it all in.  But that’s not the only reason he was lolling.  John was waiting down with the pickup and Ennis felt shy about meeting up with him.  But his reluctance dissolved when he got close enough to see John standing outside the cab smoking.

There was something in his stance that spoke of patience and forbearance, so Ennis quickened his step.  At a hundred feet they caught one another’s eye.  John threw his cigarette down and smiled warmly, and Ennis broke out in a trot trying to close the gap between them as fast as his bum knees would allow.  He did not stop to take one last look at the mountain behind him, but instead kept his gaze on the man he had loved for nearly 20 years now.  John’s balding head was covered by a straw Resistol, his handlebar mustache was in need of a trim, his paunch was covered by a warn, plaid shirt missing a button, and his Wranglers were getting too tight.  All of these details were familiar to Ennis, but still he never grew tired of looking at John.

The man kept his place.  He was allowing Ennis all the time he needed.  Two hours before Ennis had gotten out and said he was going the rest of the way alone, and John merely nodded his head.  Now Ennis was so anxious for their reunion that he squeezed the man into a bear hug as soon as his arms could reach.  John gently enfolded him and guided his face into the crook of his neck.

Once Ennis felt the embrace of his longtime friend and lover he began to sob.  He had made the rash decision to go on to the campsite he had shared with Jack Twist forty summers before because he was sure he would break down when he saw it.  But he had remained dry-eyed throughout, and it was only now that he could let go.

“I’m so sorry, John.  Please don’t think that just ‘cause I remember Jack that I think any less of you.”

In a hushed tone John said with his lips close to Ennis’s ear, “You dumbass.  I love Jack, too.  I know he’s a part of you, so lovin’ you means lovin’ him.”

Ennis with someone else?  Well, I guess it had to happen eventually.  And Gary, you described it beautifully!  At first I thought John would actually turn out to be Jack (some people say Jack's official name is John) but I could hope, couldn't I?  It is great to see another story by you, Gary!  This is a very well written tale, as usual. 

Oh, and Gary, you're beautiful!  ::)  You look exactly the way I pictured you.

I gotta post my pic here.  ;)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 22, 2007, 10:28:32 pm
What a loving scene, Dagi.  You make us sound like a family, and that gives me the warm fuzzies.   :)

To tell you the truth I've been having powerful waves of loneliness sweep over me this past month.  I'm an extremely shy person, and I've been living here in this little town in WV.  There hasn't been much opportunity for me to make friends.  I came back here to be with my parents, and now that their gone I feel like a fish out of water. 

I also feel kind of panicky sometimes, espeically at night.  I'm worried about all kinds of things.  I'm worried about finding an apartment.  I'm worried about passing the application process once I do find an apartment.  I'm worried about getting all my stuff from point A to point B.  I'm worried about running out of money.  I'm worried about making new friends once I'm resettled.  Will I find a way of doing that?  I'm worried about getting sick and having no one to call on.  I'm simply worried.

So thanks for the image of all of us together, accepting each other, supporting each other, expressing affection, and enjoying one another's company.

Gary

Gary, honey, don't worry.  I'm so sorry you're feeling this way!  A man like you will not have to worry about making new friends!  You'll find a lot of people who will care about you, and will take care OF you!  I'm certain of this.  If you need to talk, please send me a PM.  I'm here for you, Baby!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 22, 2007, 10:33:16 pm
Here's another little tidbit from the Lazy L universe...



Lazy L Farm
Quanah, TX
August 31, 1976

Ennis leaned against the wall of the bathroom, watching Jack as he rubbed shaving cream across his face, then picked up his razor. “I like watchin’ ya shave,” he commented.

“Ya do?”

Ennis nodded.

“What, ya think it’s sexy or somethin’?”

Ennis shrugged. “Mebbe sexy, I dunno, mebbe just a guy thing.”

Jack smiled at him as he continued to scrape the razor across his cheek. “A guy thing, huh?” he said, with a small wink. “Yer gay, En, y’know that.”

“Yeah, I know,” replied Ennis, looking down at his feet.

“Ever get a shave from a barber?”

Ennis shook his head no. “Ain’t got the money for that kind a stuff,” he said. “Besides, I ain’t sure I’d like some guy rubbin’ his hands all over my face.”

“Ya like me rubbin’ my hands on your face…”

“Yer diff’rent.”

“True.” Jack finished his shave, washing the remnants of cream off his face and rinsing his razor in the running water. “Who cut yer hair?”

Ennis looked puzzled. “What d’ya mean?”

“I mean, did ya go ta the barber for that?”

“Oh, no. My mama cut my hair, then my sister, then Alma.”

“But ya ain’t been with Alma for a while. Who’s been cuttin’ it now?”

“I tried ta do it myself,” said Ennis, his voice soft.

Jack stepped close to his lover and ran his fingers through his hair. “I could probably cut yer hair,” he said. “Not too hard ta learn ta do…”

Ennis didn’t say anything, just felt Jack’s touch and gentle caress at the base of his skull.

“Ain’t cuttin’ off the curls, though,” he said, leaning in for a kiss.


MaineWriter, this is very playful, sweet and romantic!  Just the way I like my fic, and just like Ennis and Jack!  Thanks so much for this!  :)
Title: Re: Indigo Twist-Del Mar
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 22, 2007, 10:35:13 pm
What a sweet idea Marie, thanks for this.

Thank you, Clyde!  I laughed, I cried as I wrote this!
Title: Hot and Cold
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 22, 2007, 11:03:05 pm
Ennis Del Mar carried Jack Twist in his arms all the way back to camp.  Camp was a good 2 miles from the hiking trail, but Ennis never considered dropping Jack on his feet.  Never.  Jack was just fine an hour ago, but he became lethargic and weak as he climbed the small hill that led to..well..Ennis and Jack were exploring again, just like the old days up on Brokeback.

Jack collapsed in Ennis’ arms, and Ennis cried out in terror!  He scooped Jack up, carried him like he was a child to a log by the side of the trail.  Ennis placed his cheek against Jack’s forehead.  He was burning up!  “It looks like you’ve come down with a bug, Rodeo!”  Ennis whispered against Jack’s hair.  Jack wavered and leaned up against his lover.  “I’m sorry, friend.”  Jack's breathing was labored.  “I was fine until just a few minutes ago.  Can we head back to camp?  I’m sure I’ll be back to my old self in the mornin’.”  Ennis nodded and picked Jack up as though we were light as a feather. 

“Let me down, Friend, I can walk!”  But Ennis ignored his lover’s protestations and continued walking with Jack in his arms.  Jack knew better than to continue objecting.  When Ennis had a mind to do something, he could be right stubborn!  Jack laid his head against Ennis' neck and passed out.  When they reached camp, Ennis gently lowered Jack to the ground and climbed into the tent.  He prepared the bedroll, and climbed back out to collect his lover.  When Jack was safely inside their small “bed” Ennis considered what to do.  He rubbed Jack’s forehead, played with the hair lying there.  He decided to give Jack a few aspirin, and if he wasn’t better in a few hours, he would go down to town for help.  Ennis decided to turn in for the night, without a fire, without supper.  He wanted to be near Jack, be there for him!  It was cold outside, the bedroll was hot, but Ennis cuddled Jack into his arms and held him.  He rocked him gently, placing soft kisses on top of his head.  He would stay there with Jack until the end of time, if need be…
Title: Re: Love or no love
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 22, 2007, 11:19:40 pm
Straddling Jack with his full weight, overpowering the first person he'd ever made love to only hours before, Ennis' hands tightened around Jack's throat; intensely confused aggression blinded Ennis so much, he could hardly see through his tears.

Jack struggled and kicked madly, kneeing Ennis squarely on the nose; Ennis wiped his bloodied nose with the sleeve of his shirt, stared at the smear and stood there gasping confounded.

Jack, startled by the sight of Ennis' blood, rushed over to comfort his lover; Ennis, who was taught to be nobody's fool under any circumstance, sucker punched Jack in the eye so hard, the sound echoed through the glen.

So sad, and exciting all at once.  Very nice, Toycoon!
Title: Cooking Stew
Post by: Toycoon on June 22, 2007, 11:35:36 pm
Unaccustomed to much kindness, Ennis was slightly taken aback by Jack's offer to cook them elk an' taters stew; Ennis, sitting on the ground, watched as Jack peeled potato after potato, carefully balancing the peeled spuds in a tin plate on a rock next to him, beside his feet.

"Dang, what is it 'bout that feller?" thought Ennis dreamily searching Jack's handsome profile for answers; Ennis stared at Jack's lips noting the way the corners turned up mischievously, curling around the cigarette he was smoking, next his eyes traveled over the surface of Jacks' angular jaw with the bristly hair growing on it, finally he poured over Jack's long delicate eyelashes sweeping over his ruddy cheeks.

Ennis could not restrain himself any longer and grabbed Jack by the shoulders smothering Jack's face with brutal kisses; Jack dropped the potato and it slammed on the edge of the tin plate sending the peeled potatoes flying. The knife flipped up in the air and landed on it's point, sticking straight up in the ground.
Title: Cooking Stew (part2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 23, 2007, 12:13:05 am
“What has gotten into you, Ennis Del Mar?”  Jack asked as he pulled away from Ennis’ attacks.  He wiped at his wet mouth, laughing all the while.  “You keep that up, this meal will never get finished.  The stew won’t cook itself!”  But Ennis reached for him all over again.  He pulled Jack into a strong embrace, kissed him on the mouth, his cheeks.

Jack was trying to control his breathing.  He had never seen Ennis is such a state.  It was at once exciting and frightening.  Jack allowed himself to be hugged and kissed.  After all, he loved Ennis Del Mar and always craved the feel of his lips. 

“Okay, Cowboy?”  Jack asked as Ennis came up for air.  Ennis chuckled softly as he released his lover.  “Look En, I got all the ingredients ready for a good meal.  Elk, potatoes!  And the fire is ready.  This elk stew will be real good."  Ennis winked at reached for Jack's zipper.  “You got anything else good for me to eat, Rodeo?”
Title: Re: Cooking Stew (Part 1 and Part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 23, 2007, 01:40:49 am
Toycoon and littlewing, 

What a tag team you guys are getting to be.  You are two people thinking with the same brain!

Great story, I love it.

Merrily

I love our tag team moments.  I find it so much fun to add to Toycoon's stories!  He is such a good writer!
Title: Re: Cooking Stew (Part 1 and Part 2)
Post by: Toycoon on June 23, 2007, 03:02:55 am
I love our tag team moments.  I find it so much fun to add to Toycoon's stories!  He is such a good writer!

Gosh, thanks cowgirls! You make me feel so good. You all do.
I was having a mopey spell for a while there. I don't like to feel that way, not even for a short time.
I have too much to be thankful for to be unhappy for long.

I love the tag team moments, too, littlewing1957. It really is fun!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 23, 2007, 06:52:52 am
Dagi, this is so beautiful!  For once, I'm at a loss for words!  Thanks so much for this!  :)

thanks, littlewing and Clyde, it came from my heart.
Title: Re: Peeling Potatoes
Post by: Clyde-B on June 23, 2007, 09:30:29 am
Dagi,

Usually don't feel I need a cigarette after either peeling potatoes or reading a story!   :o

(and I quit quite some time ago!)

Now where did I put that church fan?
Title: Re: New Friends - Part 4
Post by: Clyde-B on June 23, 2007, 09:53:07 am
Susie,

Thanks for giving Ennis somebody new.
I think Jack would have approved too.
Title: Re: Peeling Potatoes
Post by: Dagi on June 23, 2007, 10:09:26 am
Dagi,

Usually don't feel I need a cigarette after either peeling potatoes or reading a story!   :o

(and I quit quite some time ago!)

Now where did I put that church fan?

 :laugh: "Glad you got a kick out a it!" But don´t you dare blame me for starting to smoke again :o
Title: Re: Coming Down
Post by: Clyde-B on June 23, 2007, 10:13:51 am

In a hushed tone John said with his lips close to Ennis’s ear, “You dumbass.  I love Jack, too.  I know he’s a part of you, so lovin’ you means lovin’ him.”

Gary,

I really like tthe way you included the idea that "it was all those that came before that finally brought you to me."
Title: Re: New Friends - Part 3
Post by: Clyde-B on June 23, 2007, 12:10:41 pm
Thank you Dagi honey.  I remember reading a thread over at IMDb about life after Jack, and someone said that they would like Ennis to scatter Jack's ashes and die along side him up on Brokeback Mountain.  And I just thought "NOOOOOOOOOO", that's the worst possible way for the story to end.  Jack would have wanted Ennis to find someone who truly loves him and to be happy.

This isn't my alternate universe, this is how I think the story continues ... and I'm sticking to it!!! (and I love Gary's final chapter ... it's the perfect ending!)


Love Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif) 

I agree Susie,

The theme of the sequel could be how to carry on after your true love dies and how to face your own personal truth under extreme conditions.

Do you realize we've never had a successful mainstream story with a gay hero?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Front-Ranger on June 23, 2007, 12:25:13 pm
What about "Little Miss Sunshine?"
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on June 23, 2007, 12:27:20 pm
Thanks so much for the encouragement, Clyde.  It helps a lot, believe me.

Sorry to hear you had a rough week last week.  It must have been hard having the anniversary of your mother's death come on the heels of Father's day.  Parents can drive us crazy when they're alive, but it sure feels strange when they're no longer with us.

Gary

I'm glad to see you survived it, too.
Title: Re: Hot and Cold
Post by: Clyde-B on June 23, 2007, 12:36:33 pm
Ennis Del Mar carried Jack Twist in his arms all the way back to camp.  Camp was a good 2 miles from the hiking trail, but Ennis never considered dropping Jack on his feet.  Never.  Jack was just fine an hour ago, but he became lethargic and weak as he climbed the small hill that led to..well..Ennis and Jack were exploring again, just like the old days up on Brokeback.

Jack collapsed in Ennis’ arms, and Ennis cried out in terror!  He scooped Jack up, carried him like he was a child to a log by the side of the trail.  Ennis placed his cheek against Jack’s forehead.  He was burning up!  “It looks like you’ve come down with a bug, Rodeo!”  Ennis whispered against Jack’s hair.  Jack wavered and leaned up against his lover.  “I’m sorry, friend.”  Jack's breathing was labored.  “I was fine until just a few minutes ago.  Can we head back to camp?  I’m sure I’ll be back to my old self in the mornin’.”  Ennis nodded and picked Jack up as though we were light as a feather. 

“Let me down, Friend, I can walk!”  But Ennis ignored his lover’s protestations and continued walking with Jack in his arms.  Jack knew better than to continue objecting.  When Ennis had a mind to do something, he could be right stubborn!  Jack laid his head against Ennis' neck and passed out.  When they reached camp, Ennis gently lowered Jack to the ground and climbed into the tent.  He prepared the bedroll, and climbed back out to collect his lover.  When Jack was safely inside their small “bed” Ennis considered what to do.  He rubbed Jack’s forehead, played with the hair lying there.  He decided to give Jack a few aspirin, and if he wasn’t better in a few hours, he would go down to town for help.  Ennis decided to turn in for the night, without a fire, without supper.  He wanted to be near Jack, be there for him!  It was cold outside, the bedroll was hot, but Ennis cuddled Jack into his arms and held him.  He rocked him gently, placing soft kisses on top of his head.  He would stay there with Jack until the end of time, if need be…


Don't you dare go killing him off again!  Once was bad enough.  I couldn't take it twice.
Title: Re: Cooking Stew (part2)
Post by: Clyde-B on June 23, 2007, 12:44:20 pm
“What has gotten into you, Ennis Del Mar?”  Jack asked as he pulled away from Ennis’ attacks.  He wiped at his wet mouth, laughing all the while.  “You keep that up, this meal will never get finished.  The stew won’t cook itself!”  But Ennis reached for him all over again.  He pulled Jack into a strong embrace, kissed him on the mouth, his cheeks.

Jack was trying to control his breathing.  He had never seen Ennis is such a state.  It was at once exciting and frightening.  Jack allowed himself to be hugged and kissed.  After all, he loved Ennis Del Mar and always craved the feel of his lips. 

“Okay, Cowboy?”  Jack asked as Ennis came up for air.  Ennis chuckled softly as he released his lover.  “Look En, I got all the ingredients ready for a good meal.  Elk, potatoes!  And the fire is ready.  This elk stew will be real good."  Ennis winked at reached for Jack's zipper.  “You got anything else good for me to eat, Rodeo?”


Why, whatever could he be suggesting?   :o   *fan fan fan*  My, but it's hot in here.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on June 23, 2007, 01:17:03 pm
Hey kids-
Here's a little bit of shameless, self-promotion. I just started a new thread I hope y'all like, Brokeback Mountain Craft Corner.

Here's the link: http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,10857.0/topicseen.html (http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,10857.0/topicseen.html)

Let me know what you think, huh?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on June 23, 2007, 01:23:51 pm
Thanks so much for the encouragement, littlewing.  I appreciate it.  I vacillate between being afraid I'm about to homeless and completely alone, to anticipating the biggist adventure of my life. I'm sure I'll start to feel much better once I find a suitable place and move in. it's just going to take some time and effort is all.  

Gary

Hello Gary, boy-
You're not really on the verge of homelessness are you? What is goin' on there? You can't stay at your daddy's place?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on June 23, 2007, 01:47:49 pm
Hi there Toycoon,

This house belongs to my uncle, and he's going to sell it.  It's time for me to move on anyway.  There's nothing keeping me in WV anymore.  I want to go someplace more liberal, so I'm thinking about California.  Merced in particular because it's a small town and the rent isn't too high, and it's right beside Yosemite.  I love hiking and camping, so that's a big plus.  And Merced isn't far from San Francisco, so that's another mark in its favor.  It also has a Mediterranean climate with cool, wet winters, and hot dry summers.  Because of my head surgeries I have trouble keeping my balance on ice and snow, so escaping winters here in the mountain state would be wonderful.

Gary

California!? That's where I live. It would be great to have another quality Brokie on this side of the country. Merr lives in Southern Cali, too, ya'know. Hey, we could have our own reunion!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on June 23, 2007, 02:14:53 pm
That would be great, Toycoon.  Maybe we could all go on a picnic together in Yosemite Valley in the shade of El Capitan.

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_1_71.gif)

Gary

Take lots of pictures!!!!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 23, 2007, 03:13:09 pm
That would be great, Toycoon.  Maybe we could all go on a picnic together in Yosemite Valley in the shade of El Capitan.

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_1_71.gif)

Gary

That sounds so great, you have to move there, so that we can visit you! Hiking in Yosemite, yeehaaaw! My next holiday will bring me in the US, that´s for sure.
Title: Re: Coming Down
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 23, 2007, 03:42:03 pm
I'm so glad you liked it, littlewing.  As for John, I have to give Susie credit for creating him and his name.  I borrowed the John from her story and imagined what life must be like for him and Ennis 20 years later.

So you like my picture, huh?  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_1_12.gif)

Is this where we start talking about IMing and webcams?  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_6_213.gif)

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_11_6.gif)

Thanks so much, littlewing.

Gary

P.S.  And yes, you have to post your pic.  I'd love to see ya!

Thanks, Gary.  I hope to have my pic up by tonight, tomorrow latest!
Title: Re: Hot and Cold
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 23, 2007, 03:43:10 pm
Don't you dare go killing him off again!  Once was bad enough.  I couldn't take it twice.

Never!  Oh, I couldn't!!
Title: Re: Hot and Cold
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 23, 2007, 06:39:23 pm
OMG!  Littewing, the Ennis in your story is just the kind of guy I need to have around to make me feel safe and secure.   :)  What a loving story this is.  Thanks for sharing it!

Gary

Thank you, Gary Honey!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 23, 2007, 06:41:25 pm
Thanks so much for the encouragement, littlewing.  I appreciate it.  I vacillate between being afraid I'm about to homeless and completely alone, to anticipating the biggist adventure of my life.  I'm sure I'll start to feel much better once I find a suitable place and move in.  It's just going to take some time and effort is all.  

Gary

Oh yeah, you'll be just fine.  A man like you will find everything he wants and needs out of life.  You just wait!  :)
Title: Re: Cooking Stew (part2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 23, 2007, 06:44:33 pm
Oh, littewing, I'm with Ennis.  Forget about the stew.  There are other things cookin'.   ;)

Gary

 :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:
Title: Re: Hot and Cold
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 23, 2007, 06:46:02 pm
Oh my dear lord!  For one horrifying moment I thought you were going to kill Jack off ... again!  I just couldn't take that!
I hope he's going to be OK ... you'll have to write a follow up to comfort me!!

Lovely but sad .... and worrying.

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)   

Oh no, I would never kill Jack off.  I'll work on a second installment!  Thanks, Susie!  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 23, 2007, 06:47:59 pm
Oooooh littlewing .... nice photo .... you are one sexy lady!!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif) 


yeeehaaaww, finally! You are beautiful, littlewing! now almost everybody here on this thread has added a photo to the name. So nice.

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 23, 2007, 06:49:03 pm
That would be great, Toycoon.  Maybe we could all go on a picnic together in Yosemite Valley in the shade of El Capitan.

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_1_71.gif)

Gary

I'm in!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 23, 2007, 06:50:59 pm
Oooooh littlewing .... nice photo .... you are one sexy lady!!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif) 

Oh!  Why thank you, Susie!  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 23, 2007, 06:53:29 pm

yeeehaaaww, finally! You are beautiful, littlewing! now almost everybody here on this thread has added a photo to the name. So nice.



Thanks, Dagi.  It is so good to put a face to the name, isn't it?  Now if we can just get a pic of Clyde.  And I want to see TOoP.  We already know what that hottie Toycoon looks like.  Oh, and Malina and Daphne.  I hope they see fit to post a pic, as well.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on June 23, 2007, 07:24:13 pm
Littlewing1957, you are a sexy, dirty mama!

I forgot that you were on the West Coast, too. I smell a Brokeback West Coast picnic cookin' soon!
Well, Gary, it's all settled. You'll have to move to California now.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 24, 2007, 12:13:26 am
Wow!  Great picture, littlewing!   :D  You look like a movie star.  It's so nice to be able to put a face to the name.  Thanks for posting the pic.

Gary

Thanks, Sugar!  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 24, 2007, 12:14:59 am
Hi littlewing, nice to see that you put your picture here.  Very pretty and sexy girl.  Send me a PM and tell me what's been going on with you and your daughter. (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/173.gif)

Merrily

Thanks, Merr!  I'll try to send you a PM tomorrow.  I've been meaning to do just that.  By the way, didn't you have your lovely picture here as well?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 24, 2007, 12:16:15 am
Littlewing1957, you are a sexy, dirty mama!

I forgot that you were on the West Coast, too. I smell a Brokeback West Coast picnic cookin' soon!
Well, Gary, it's all settled. You'll have to move to California now.

Oh Toycoon, you are too sweet!  You know we should have a Cali BBQ!  I've been expecting Gary's arrival!  I can't wait to meet him in person!  He's such a Sweetie!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on June 24, 2007, 02:29:50 am
If ya'll are going--I'm going. Who's gonna put me up? I can sleep on the couch.  LOL.

Littlewing---what a beautiful picture!!!


Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on June 24, 2007, 10:40:18 am
OMG  That is a wonderful idea littlewing.  Is Gary really planning to come out here? Toycoon is kind of in between us!? 

In between us?
Sounds cozy, like a Toycoon sandwich!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on June 24, 2007, 10:57:12 am
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Since you're so tall, Toycoon, you could be like one of those extra long wieners that stick outside the bun.

Oh Gary, you say the sweetest things!

By the way, Shasta, that is a lovely picture of you. You're a fine specimen of womanhood.
Title: Fast
Post by: Toycoon on June 24, 2007, 11:01:41 am
1967. Jack's fast of one thousand, four hundred and sixty days was almost over.

17 Miles-Riverton, WY. Jack floored the gas pedal. He couldn't get there fast enough.

Jack's heart was beating so fast as he climbed out of the old pick-up truck; Jack's heart stopped when he saw Ennis Del Mar appear at the top of the staircase landing and call his name.
Title: Re: Cooking Stew (part2)
Post by: Clyde-B on June 24, 2007, 11:23:50 am
You're so funny, Clyde.   ;D 

And I'm so glad you liked Coming Down.  Thanks for commenting on it.  And I think you're right about loving, or at least accepting the people in your lover's past.  If you fall for someone who has been around a while, of course they're going to have a past, so you may as well accept it because your lover can't do away with his past, at least not without a lobotomy.   :-\  (And speaking as someone who has had head surgery, I wouldn't reccomend that.   :P  )

Gary

Just tryin to put a smile on your avatar!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on June 24, 2007, 11:29:33 am
Clyde, you can come with us!   :)  What state are you from?

Gary

Confusion mostly!!!

I'm in the northern Midwest, but my accent is from southern Indiana/Kentucky.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on June 24, 2007, 11:38:41 am
Thanks, Dagi.  It is so good to put a face to the name, isn't it?  Now if we can just get a pic of Clyde.  And I want to see TOoP.  We already know what that hottie Toycoon looks like.  Oh, and Malina and Daphne.  I hope they see fit to post a pic, as well.

You don't believe I'm in my avatar picture?  I'm the one with the blue eyes.

Title: Re: Fast
Post by: Dagi on June 24, 2007, 02:03:14 pm
1967. Jack's fast of one thousand, four hundred and sixty days was almost over.

17 Miles-Riverton, WY. Jack floored the gas pedal. He couldn't get there fast enough.

Jack's heart was beating so fast as he climbed out of the old pick-up truck; Jack's heart stopped when he saw Ennis Del Mar appear at the top of the staircase landing and call his name.

No matter how often I´m confronted with this scene, my heart always starts to race. How was he able to survive 1460 days without his love, I wonder.

And I wonder how long will we have to wait for your avatar picture? ;)

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 24, 2007, 02:05:41 pm

Ah Gary .... do you hate me now??  The problem is with my own insecurities, nothing anyone else says!  <img



Susie, you are so pretty, why the hell are you insecure??
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 24, 2007, 02:53:48 pm
The archive is up-to-date! pheeewww :P
Title: The "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Archive
Post by: Toycoon on June 24, 2007, 05:32:51 pm
The archive is up-to-date! pheeewww :P

Thank you, Dagi. The archive makes it easy for folks to read the threads without our usual banter.  ;)

Personally, I love our banter! And of course, I love you too, sweetheart.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on June 24, 2007, 06:31:34 pm
   The problem is with my own insecurities, nothing anyone else says!  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_7_104v.gif)

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)
 

Well let's see, you have two gorgeous daughters.  The older one looks like she could break hearts if she wanted to and the younger  one  grins like she may be planning on it when she gets older.  You have a son and a husband that, according to another post won't leave you alone.
You have all those curls, a beautiful sunny smile and write like an angel.

Uh... What was it you were insecure about again?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on June 24, 2007, 07:15:44 pm
Well, I think my age might eliminate me from that adventure, but very interesting idea.  Let me know when the details are set.  Unfortunately, my idea of "roughing it" is a Holiday Inn Express. (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/29/29_4_22.gif)(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/7/7_2_106.gif)  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/29/29_4_22.gif)

 :laugh: ;D :laugh: (Same here, Merr.) :P
The picnic sounds fun!!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 24, 2007, 09:14:47 pm
If ya'll are going--I'm going. Who's gonna put me up? I can sleep on the couch.  LOL.

Littlewing---what a beautiful picture!!!




Don't worry, Shasta, we'll find a place for you.  And thanks for your kind words about my pic. 
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 24, 2007, 09:19:36 pm
:laugh: ;D :laugh: (Same here, Merr.) :P
The picnic sounds fun!!

Ah, there you are, Shasta!  You look amazing, honey!  Thanks for posting! :)
Title: Riverton is Such a Lonely, Lonely Town
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 24, 2007, 10:08:29 pm
Ennis Del Mar walked home from the bus depot loaded down with his personal belongings.  He just finished 4 weeks up near the Tetons for the round-up, and caught the first bus he could catch back to Riverton.  He was walking a bit slower than usual, realizing that his small trailer would not be very welcoming.  There was no one to welcome him home.   Ennis passed by the grocers and debated whether or not he should go in and buy a few groceries.  He was out of most things before he even left for the long job, but he shrugged and decided against it.  He could always go shopping tomorrow.

Ennis flinched as he walked the last block or so to his trailer park.  The streets were dry, rather dusty, devoid of any signs of life, save a small white dog running across the road with its tail between its legs.  The loneliness was even more profound than last night at the ranch when he woke up in a sweat muttering, “I want my man!  I want my man!”  Ennis cringed at the memory.  He hoped no one heard him!

Safely inside his small home, Ennis placed his gear in the proper places and sat at his small table.  He reached for the postcard that Jack Twist sent him only last month, accepting his invitation to meet up at Don Wroe’s cabin.  The trip was only 3 weeks away, and just the thought of being with Jack seemed to chase away the lonely feelings.  He prepared himself a simple dinner of franks and beans, all the while holding the postcard like a treasure.  He ate with a light heart and began to smile as he thought of his trip and the laughter, the love, and the tenderness that awaited him.


Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 24, 2007, 10:09:08 pm
The archive is up-to-date! pheeewww :P

Wonderful, Dagi!  I gotta check it out!  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 24, 2007, 10:10:52 pm
Thanks Gary.  Wow, that hotel looks wonderful, but probably cost prohibitive, hunh.  Maybe they gave tours like the Hotel Del Coronaro in San Diego?  Just not in winter though as I have NO winter clothes anymore and don't want to buy any either. 

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_7_17.gif)

Merrily

Merr, perhaps we can go in together on a suite or something.  Although I enjoy camping, I can't do a lot of hiking, as I have deformed feet.  TMI?  :laugh:
Title: Re: Riverton is Such a Lonely, Lonely Town
Post by: Toycoon on June 24, 2007, 10:28:30 pm
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Safely inside his small home, Ennis placed his gear in the proper places and sat at his small table.  He reached for the postcard that Jack Twist sent him only last month, accepting his invitation to meet up at Don Wroe’s cabin.  The trip was only 3 weeks away, and just the thought of being with Jack seemed to chase away the lonely feelings.  He prepared himself a simple dinner of franks and beans, all the while holding the postcard like a treasure.  He ate with a light heart and began to smile as he thought of his trip and the laughter, the love, and the tenderness that awaited him.

Ya know, Littlewing1957, I haven't been teary eyed over our film in months. I especially like the detail of Ennis holding the postcard 'like a treasure' through his simple dinner. This little story is painfully lonely and rather sad. Brilliant!
Title: He Held Me!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 24, 2007, 11:07:21 pm
Ennis didn’t mind being alone when he had such fond memories of Jack Twist to sustain him.  He was awake, in bed, when he had an urge to touch himself, down there.  In his mind and his heart he remembered Jack, and how Jack liked to hold him.  Jack held him even when they didn’t necessarily feel like having sex.  Jack loved Ennis’ sacks of sugar, often palming them, gently rubbing, feeling them relax and expand in his large hands.

Ennis remembered sitting by the fire, or on the couch, side by side, as Jack held him.  He often became very forward – freeing Ennis from his jeans, palming his sacks, holding them like they were balls of gold.  Ennis didn’t mind this one bit!  Didn’t mind that the very act of holding him, caressing him, was becoming Jack’s favorite past-time. 

And suddenly Ennis saw the image of Jack bending down, taking one ball into his mouth, releasing it and gulping the other.  Ennis could see Jack gently mouthed the small treasures, tasting, licking, moaning until the vibrations almost forced Ennis to lose his senses.  Ennis couldn’t wait to be with Jack again.  Couldn’t wait to be held.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on June 25, 2007, 01:46:08 am
Q: What state are you from?  A: Confusion mostly!

Now that's funny, Clyde.   ;D

So you spent some of your formative years in Kentucky?  You do realize that West Virginia is just on the other side of Kentucky, right?  We're almost neighbors.  Sort of like the Hatfields and the McCoys.  ...oh wait, that might be a bad analogy.   :P

Gary

I hope we're not like the Hatfields and the McCoys!

Actually it was southern Indiana (Madison to be exact)  My people had already moved from Kentucky.  But it was right across the Ohio river from Louisville.  Boat races, Hanging Rock, Clifty Falls State Park, climbing the Devil's Backbone.  I still have a lot of cousins down there.
Title: Re: Riverton is Such a Lonely, Lonely Town
Post by: Clyde-B on June 25, 2007, 01:52:58 am
Ennis Del Mar walked home from the bus depot loaded down with his personal belongings.  He just finished 4 weeks up near the Tetons for the round-up, and caught the first bus he could catch back to Riverton.  He was walking a bit slower than usual, realizing that his small trailer would not be very welcoming.  There was no one to welcome him home.   Ennis passed by the grocers and debated whether or not he should go in and buy a few groceries.  He was out of most things before he even left for the long job, but he shrugged and decided against it.  He could always go shopping tomorrow.

Ennis flinched as he walked the last block or so to his trailer park.  The streets were dry, rather dusty, devoid of any signs of life, save a small white dog running across the road with its tail between its legs.  The loneliness was even more profound than last night at the ranch when he woke up in a sweat muttering, “I want my man!  I want my man!”  Ennis cringed at the memory.  He hoped no one heard him!

Safely inside his small home, Ennis placed his gear in the proper places and sat at his small table.  He reached for the postcard that Jack Twist sent him only last month, accepting his invitation to meet up at Don Wroe’s cabin.  The trip was only 3 weeks away, and just the thought of being with Jack seemed to chase away the lonely feelings.  He prepared himself a simple dinner of franks and beans, all the while holding the postcard like a treasure.  He ate with a light heart and began to smile as he thought of his trip and the laughter, the love, and the tenderness that awaited him.




Marie,

Ya got me again. I'm a sucker for sweet stories.

And look at that picture of yours!  Sexy and seductive, that deep deep red is sure your color!
Title: Re: The "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Archive
Post by: Dagi on June 25, 2007, 05:37:10 am
Thank you, Dagi. The archive makes it easy for folks to read the threads without our usual banter.  ;)

Personally, I love our banter! And of course, I love you too, sweetheart.

I love our "banter", too. And you, honey! (Could we possibly make a really big sandwich?)
Title: Re: Riverton is Such a Lonely, Lonely Town
Post by: Dagi on June 25, 2007, 05:40:52 am
Ennis Del Mar walked home from the bus depot loaded down with his personal belongings.  He just finished 4 weeks up near the Tetons for the round-up, and caught the first bus he could catch back to Riverton.  He was walking a bit slower than usual, realizing that his small trailer would not be very welcoming.  There was no one to welcome him home.   Ennis passed by the grocers and debated whether or not he should go in and buy a few groceries.  He was out of most things before he even left for the long job, but he shrugged and decided against it.  He could always go shopping tomorrow.

Ennis flinched as he walked the last block or so to his trailer park.  The streets were dry, rather dusty, devoid of any signs of life, save a small white dog running across the road with its tail between its legs.  The loneliness was even more profound than last night at the ranch when he woke up in a sweat muttering, “I want my man!  I want my man!”  Ennis cringed at the memory.  He hoped no one heard him!

Safely inside his small home, Ennis placed his gear in the proper places and sat at his small table.  He reached for the postcard that Jack Twist sent him only last month, accepting his invitation to meet up at Don Wroe’s cabin.  The trip was only 3 weeks away, and just the thought of being with Jack seemed to chase away the lonely feelings.  He prepared himself a simple dinner of franks and beans, all the while holding the postcard like a treasure.  He ate with a light heart and began to smile as he thought of his trip and the laughter, the love, and the tenderness that awaited him.





How can a story be so sad and so beautiful at the same time? “I want my man!  I want my man!”  Ennis cringed at the memory. :'( :'(

Thank you, honey.
Title: Re: He Held Me!
Post by: Dagi on June 25, 2007, 05:45:15 am
......  Jack held him even when they didn’t necessarily feel like having sex.  Jack loved Ennis’ sacks of sugar, often palming them, gently rubbing, feeling them relax and expand in his large hands.

..... Ennis couldn’t wait to be with Jack again.  Couldn’t wait to be held.


Marie, that was so sweet and tender and hot. I personally can´t imagine how he could do one day without his love.

Thank you for writing and sharing, you are nurturing our hearts.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 25, 2007, 05:51:03 am
Hey Clyde and Dagi and Gary,

I read this yesterday Clyde, but I was a bit too overwhelmed to reply, you made me cry ... honest to God!!.  You're all so sweet and supportive ... and that's why I love being here so much and why I love you guys!  Sometimes when I'm feeling a bit down, it's very comforting to get a "big hug" from  you all ....  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_2_104.gif) .... or a much needed kick up the bum! .... (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_1_102v.gif)

Love Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

ps. So I write like an angel hunh???  You'd better not read my next one then ....  or you'll see why that guy over on IMDb called me the Spawn of Satan!!!

Susie, we all need a kick up the bum every once in a while...but really, there is no reason at all to be insecure in your case. But I know that this is not a question of reasons or no reasons, it´s illogical (?), that´s what makes it so difficult.

Just say a word if you need a hug, love!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 25, 2007, 05:54:28 am
You're doing a brilliant job Dagi....  it's amazing to see just how many stories we've written!  If you need any help, just let me know ... I could do a page or two for you honey.


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

It´s okay, thanks for the offer, wasn´t that much work, I did it in two evenings, and now the up-dating is going to be easy...as littlewing and Toycoon are the only ones who are writing lately ;).
Title: Re: Fourteen Years Uncensored (NC-17)
Post by: Dagi on June 25, 2007, 06:06:50 am
NC-17

I originally posted this story on it's own thread, but it made me feel a little vulnerable as it's so personal to me .... and it's pretty graphic!  So I'm posting it here on our lovely J+E thread where I feel safe...... Please don't read on if you're easily shocked!  Sorry toycoon ... I've gone ever so slightly over the three sentence rule!


Fourteen Years Uncensored 


Just blows me away. Susie, YOU are hot. Your husband is one lucky guy ;D :o ;D :o ;D :o ;D

You can feel save here, we love it graphic   :laugh:

Thank you for being courageous!

Dagi
Title: Re: Fourteen Years Uncensored (NC-17)
Post by: Toycoon on June 25, 2007, 09:34:36 am
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He removed Ennis’s jeans slowly and deliberately, then stood up and stepped out of his own. Both men were shaking, dicks hard and throbbing, almost painful.

Susiebell, I believe this is the story that officially crowned you," The Devil's Daughter". Well done, Lucy-fur!
Title: A Letter
Post by: Dagi on June 25, 2007, 01:19:50 pm
A Letter

After coming back from Lightning Flat Ennis opened his closet and took out an envelope he had been hiding there, " To Jack Twist, Childress, Texas, in case of my death".

He took out the letter: " My dearest Jack. Maybe I´ll never say it out loud, but I want you to know that I love you. I´ve been loving you since the night you let me inside of you and I will love you till the day I die, with body and soul, with all my heart. Yours, Ennis"

He crumpled the letter and burnt it.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on June 25, 2007, 01:25:32 pm
Very nice, Dagi. So sad, too.   :'(
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 25, 2007, 01:32:40 pm
Very nice, Dagi. So sad, too.   :'(

Thank you, Shasta. Yes, it is sad, and I didn´t want to write a sad one again, but I was just lying in bed with my sick little cowboy and these three sentences popped up in my mind and wanted to be written down that same moment. Maybe I shouldn´t have watched BBM again. :'(
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on June 25, 2007, 01:36:57 pm
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Maybe I shouldn´t have watched BBM again.

Nope--you did good! You should always watch BBM again and again.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 25, 2007, 01:46:59 pm
Nope--you did good! You should always watch BBM again and again.

i know I will. Can´t do a week without it. :(
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on June 25, 2007, 03:25:59 pm
  that'll learn ya.   

Gary

Geez, I miss hearin stuff like that...
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on June 25, 2007, 03:31:05 pm
  that guy over on IMDb called me the Spawn of Satan!!!

Bring it on!!!    :laugh:
Title: Re: A Letter
Post by: Dagi on June 25, 2007, 03:45:43 pm
Oh Dagi.  That is so sad, but at least he knew he loved Jack.  I think Jack knew it too.  You don't have to always say it for it to be known, but it is nice to here.(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_9_16.gif)

Hope you had a great day.  I'll see you soon I hope.

Merrily


(You mean it is nice to hear ;)) (finally I can correct somebody :laugh:)) I´m mean, I know.

Sent you a PM, honey!
Title: Re: A Letter
Post by: Dagi on June 25, 2007, 03:50:29 pm
It is so very sad that Ennis couldn't own what he felt.  And your little story illustrates that beautifully. 

Gary

P.S.  Laying in bed with your sick little cowboy?  Whatever could you mean?

My son has fever and I put him to bed. I was lying in bed with him. He is actually a Taurus, not a cowboy. But he speaks about as much as Ennis, so he´s my little cowboy.

Thank you, Gary.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 25, 2007, 03:52:49 pm
But now I look like the bad guy.  Everybody is wondering what I could have said that brought on this bend of insecurity.    :'(

I didn't say nothin' bad, damn it!   >:(


Yeah, hell, what did you say, you meeeaaaan guy ,........HUH?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 25, 2007, 03:57:36 pm
I have only one request concerning the archive: Could you please write the title of your stories right on top of them, not only in the subject line, that would help me a lot. Oh, and if you want to help me even more, you can write "by" and your name behind the title.

Thank you!
Dagi
Title: Re: Fourteen Years Uncensored (NC-17) by Susie
Post by: Dagi on June 25, 2007, 03:59:52 pm
Wow Susie!

You allowed me to read this a while back, but it's only gotten better with age.  I think the first time I read it I was simply shocked by your awareness of what men can get up to together, but this time I picked up on the subtleties.  Jack is hopeful, as he always is, and Ennis, true to his character, is withdrawn and slightly paranoid.  And since they can't simply talk using words the other will understand, they communicate through their sex and passion.

I loved that Jack was on top this time.  And boy was that sexy and dirty when he put his tongue...   :P  Well, I won't go into it.   :-X  Let's just say the thoughts of Jack doing that to Ennis, and then climbing up and driving the point home so to speak, sends me into a tailspin.  (No pun intended.   ;D ) 

I don't think I realized the first time I read this, but I picked up clues reading it just now that this was the night before they had their big fight by the lake.  And if I'm right, that means this was the last time they made love.  That is just devastating, Susie.

This is a beautiful story of love and lust, of lost opportunities and time slipping away.

Gary

Gary, you are one amazing guy.
Title: Re: Riverton is Such a Lonely, Lonely Town
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 25, 2007, 04:03:03 pm
Ya know, Littlewing1957, I haven't been teary eyed over our film in months. I especially like the detail of Ennis holding the postcard 'like a treasure' through his simple dinner. This little story is painfully lonely and rather sad. Brilliant!

Thanks, Toycoon!
Title: Re: A Letter
Post by: Dagi on June 25, 2007, 04:31:24 pm
Awww  Hope the little guy is okay now.

Gary

P.S.  I didn't know you were a mother.

I have two sons: Moritz (4y/o) and Till (2y/o). Yeah, I´m one a the dirty mamas. He is sleeping now, with high fever.
I´ll go to bed now, too, who knows what the night may bring, not too much sleep probably.

Good night, have a nice party here, girls and guys! I envy you. Fuck that damn time differece. Fuck it. Sorry.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on June 25, 2007, 06:48:46 pm
That was delightful, Susie!!! I love a little dog, ya know.    ;D
Title: Re: Fourteen Years Uncensored (NC-17)
Post by: Clyde-B on June 25, 2007, 08:15:55 pm
 Oh Susie, I really like stories that combine sex with real emotion.  Makes it all the hotter   *fan fan fan*

I particularly like it sweet and hot.  (Just like I like my men!  ;D)

Sure glad they didn't notice that Boyscout troop in the bushes with their fieldglasses working on their Wilderness Survival merit badges.
Would a kind a spoiled it.
Title: Re: A Letter
Post by: Clyde-B on June 25, 2007, 08:20:30 pm
A Letter

After coming back from Lightning Flat Ennis opened his closet and took out an envelope he had been hiding there, " To Jack Twist, Childress, Texas, in case of my death".

He took out the letter: " My dearest Jack. Maybe I´ll never say it out loud, but I want you to know that I love you. I´ve been loving you since the night you let me inside of you and I will love you till the day I die, with body and soul, with all my heart. Yours, Ennis"

He crumpled the letter and burnt it.

Oh Dagi, So sad!
Title: Re: Let's go for a walk
Post by: Clyde-B on June 25, 2007, 08:27:00 pm

Let’s go for a walk by Susie


“Jack, come over here!”  Jack didn’t need to be told twice, bounding into the kitchen and throwing himself into Ennis’ open arms, affectionately licking a sloppy wet line from the base of his neck, all the way up the side of his cheek.

Alma walked in, stony faced, “Get out of my kitchen!” she ordered, collecting the dirty dishes and dropping them, with a clatter, into the sink.

“Come on Jack, time to go!” Jack followed Ennis into the living room and snuggled up with him on the couch.

“You make me so happy, little darlin’, d’ya know that?” Ennis smiled.  Jack responded by nuzzling his neck, breathing softly in his ear, and eagerly wagging his tail.

“Get that damn dog off my couch, Ennis Del Mar!” came an angry voice from the other room.

“Let’s go for a walk, bud” Ennis lead the way into the hall, grabbed the lead from it’s hook, and with Jack close at his heel, headed out of the apartment.





I was going to call this one “Puppy Love” but I thought that would give it away …. Hehehe!


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)   


Ya got me!  I thought our boys were being really rude there for a minute.
Title: Re: Field Trip
Post by: Clyde-B on June 25, 2007, 08:35:41 pm



 “Miss Parker, what’re they doin’?”

“Nothing Billy”, she searched frantically for some kind of explanation, “ I expect they’re just practicing bull ridin’…. now hurry along…. scoot!”

 

 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
Title: Re: A Letter
Post by: Toycoon on June 25, 2007, 08:48:07 pm
A Letter

After coming back from Lightning Flat Ennis opened his closet and took out an envelope he had been hiding there, " To Jack Twist, Childress, Texas, in case of my death".

He took out the letter: " My dearest Jack. Maybe I´ll never say it out loud, but I want you to know that I love you. I´ve been loving you since the night you let me inside of you and I will love you till the day I die, with body and soul, with all my heart. Yours, Ennis"

He crumpled the letter and burnt it.

Dearest Dagi,
I missed this story earlier. It is strikingly beautiful and very heartfelt. I don't know how we continue to pull these gut wrenching tales every day.

Yours,
Toycoon
Title: Re: Let's go for a walk
Post by: Toycoon on June 25, 2007, 11:22:30 pm
Quote
  Jack responded by nuzzling his neck, breathing softly in his ear, and eagerly wagging his tail.

You are so damn silly, Susiebell! Down girl, down!
Title: Never
Post by: Toycoon on June 25, 2007, 11:37:06 pm
There was a look in Jack's eyes that Ennis never saw a man give another man before; it made Ennis' entire body throb with lust.

Cigarettes, whiskey and desire; it was a taste in his mouth he'd never had before.

Ennis tore at Jack's clothes, felt his hairy body, held his face, stroked his firm flesh, never denying this was what he'd always wanted and secretly craved.
Title: Re: He Held Me!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 26, 2007, 12:25:44 am
Hi littlewing.  Guess Toycoon and I saw your last story from much different viewpoints.  This one is really a HOT one but also lonely too. I really identify with Ennis.

Merrily

Thanks, Merr.  I, too, identify with Ennis.  I know this man!
Title: Re: Riverton is Such a Lonely, Lonely Town
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 26, 2007, 12:27:22 am
Marie,

Ya got me again. I'm a sucker for sweet stories.

And look at that picture of yours!  Sexy and seductive, that deep deep red is sure your color!

Why thank you, Clyde.  I just love red.  And when can we see a picture of you?  I'm dying to see what you look like.  No pressure, though  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 26, 2007, 12:29:11 am
Hey Clyde and Dagi and Gary,

I read this yesterday Clyde, but I was a bit too overwhelmed to reply, you made me cry ... honest to God!!.  You're all so sweet and supportive ... and that's why I love being here so much and why I love you guys!  Sometimes when I'm feeling a bit down, it's very comforting to get a "big hug" from  you all ....  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_2_104.gif) .... or a much needed kick up the bum! .... (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_1_102v.gif)

Love Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

ps. So I write like an angel hunh???  You'd better not read my next one then ....  or you'll see why that guy over on IMDb called me the Spawn of Satan!!!

Ah my sweet SusieBell!  I don't know what I would do without you!  I love being here with you and for you!  :-*
Title: Re: Riverton is Such a Lonely, Lonely Town
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 26, 2007, 12:29:58 am
Oh littlewing ... now look what you've gone and done ..  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_9_9.gif)... so sad, with just a glimmer of hope ... lovely!

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Thanks, Susie!  :)
Title: Re: Fourteen Years Uncensored (NC-17)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 26, 2007, 12:34:51 am
NC-17

I originally posted this story on it's own thread, but it made me feel a little vulnerable as it's so personal to me .... and it's pretty graphic!  So I'm posting it here on our lovely J+E thread where I feel safe...... Please don't read on if you're easily shocked!  Sorry toycoon ... I've gone ever so slightly over the three sentence rule!



Fourteen Years Uncensored




Susie, this is just as brilliant as I remember.  I have a copy saved to my hard drive, but I'm so glad to see it here, as well.  Amazing story, my Love!  I can't even find the words to describe how I feel about "Fourteen Years!"  Sublime, Susie!  Sublime!
Title: Re: Riverton is Such a Lonely, Lonely Town
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 26, 2007, 12:36:01 am

How can a story be so sad and so beautiful at the same time? “I want my man!  I want my man!”  Ennis cringed at the memory. :'( :'(

Thank you, honey.

You're very welcome, Sweets!  This one took a lot out of me! 
Title: Re: He Held Me!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 26, 2007, 12:37:05 am
There you go about them sacks of sugar again!!!   (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_3_1v.gif).  Super sexy littlewing .... but still makes me feel a little sad.

Susie   (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

 :laugh:  :laugh:  Susie, I don't know what else to call...them!  Thanks for your kind words!
Title: Re: Riverton is Such a Lonely, Lonely Town
Post by: Clyde-B on June 26, 2007, 12:38:44 am
Why thank you, Clyde.  I just love red.  And when can we see a picture of you?  I'm dying to see what you look like.  No pressure, though  :)

I'll have to dig one up.  The only one's I have handy are driver's license and passport photos    SCARY!!! :o

When you look like your passport photo it's time to go home!
Title: Re: A Letter
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 26, 2007, 12:39:31 am
A Letter

After coming back from Lightning Flat Ennis opened his closet and took out an envelope he had been hiding there, " To Jack Twist, Childress, Texas, in case of my death".

He took out the letter: " My dearest Jack. Maybe I´ll never say it out loud, but I want you to know that I love you. I´ve been loving you since the night you let me inside of you and I will love you till the day I die, with body and soul, with all my heart. Yours, Ennis"

He crumpled the letter and burnt it.

Dagi, this is a very original story!  I love it.  I'm trying to find a way to continue it.  I just may post a part 2 if you don't mind?
Title: Re: Riverton is Such a Lonely, Lonely Town
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 26, 2007, 12:40:33 am
This is a beautifully realized scene, littlewing.  So sad, and the way Ennis calls out in his sleep and holds the postcard is so indicative of his love for Jack.  Great writing as always.

Gary

Why thank you, Gary Sweetheart!
Title: Re: He Held Me!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 26, 2007, 12:41:13 am
MMM MM  That Jack is a talented boy.   ;)  BTW, "sacks of sugar" made me blush a little for some reason.

Gary

 :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:
Title: Re: A Letter
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 26, 2007, 12:44:13 am
My son has fever and I put him to bed. I was lying in bed with him. He is actually a Taurus, not a cowboy. But he speaks about as much as Ennis, so he´s my little cowboy.

Thank you, Gary.

Dagi

I hope your son is better, Dagi!  I'm a Taurus as well!
Title: Re: A Letter
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 26, 2007, 12:45:52 am

Good night, have a nice party here, girls and guys! I envy you. Fuck that damn time differece. Fuck it. Sorry.

Dagi

Oh, Dagi!  ::)
Title: Re: Let's go for a walk
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 26, 2007, 12:48:43 am

Let’s go for a walk by Susie


“Jack, come over here!”  Jack didn’t need to be told twice, bounding into the kitchen and throwing himself into Ennis’ open arms, affectionately licking a sloppy wet line from the base of his neck, all the way up the side of his cheek.

Alma walked in, stony faced, “Get out of my kitchen!” she ordered, collecting the dirty dishes and dropping them, with a clatter, into the sink.

“Come on Jack, time to go!” Jack followed Ennis into the living room and snuggled up with him on the couch.

“You make me so happy, little darlin’, d’ya know that?” Ennis smiled.  Jack responded by nuzzling his neck, breathing softly in his ear, and eagerly wagging his tail.

“Get that damn dog off my couch, Ennis Del Mar!” came an angry voice from the other room.

“Let’s go for a walk, bud” Ennis lead the way into the hall, grabbed the lead from it’s hook, and with Jack close at his heel, headed out of the apartment.





I was going to call this one “Puppy Love” but I thought that would give it away …. Hehehe!


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)   


Wonderful, Susie!  So playful and sweet!  I always thought that Jack or Ennis (perhaps both) would have a pet.  Your stories are always so original and fresh.  Lovely work, as always!
Title: Never (part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 26, 2007, 01:10:34 am
Jack was beyond denying anything. He removed what was left of his shirt and
Stretched his arms wide, welcoming Ennis into a fevered embrace. 

Ennis kissed at the short, curly hairs on Jack’s firm chest.  Jack moaned with pleasure as he allowed his lover to lick and suck.  Ennis grabbed a few chest hairs with his teeth, pulled gently, raising Jack’s sweaty skin bit-by-bit.  The sensation was unlike anything Jack ever experienced in his lifetime!

“Take off your clothes, Cowboy!”  Jack ordered.  “I need you, now!”  Ennis was taken aback.  He was not used to Jack ordering him around, and he wasn’t sure if he liked it.  But when Jack pounced as though Ennis wasn’t moving fast enough, Ennis decided that he liked being told what to do.  He liked it very much…


Title: Never (part 3)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 26, 2007, 01:46:11 am
“I’ll do anything you say!”  Ennis grunted as he practically tore the buttons from his good shirt.  He flung his boots aside, followed by his jeans.  Jack had Ennis in his mouth before he could completely discard his briefs!

And just before he found his release, Ennis pulled himself free of Jack’s voracious mouth.  Jack didn’t like it, wanted more, but Ennis found his member lubricated just enough, courtesy of Jack’s saliva.

“Turn around, Rodeo!  I got something nice fer ya!”  It was Ennis’ turn to do the ordering!  Jack obeyed.  He pushed his backside toward his lover, braced himself…
Title: Re: Let's go for a walk
Post by: Dagi on June 26, 2007, 02:49:09 am

Hehehe .... I was hoping you wouldn't guess until the tail wagging part ... although the real Jack COULD wag his "Tail" if he wanted to!!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Hehe, Susie, thanks for that good laugh! I was really puzzled reading that they are kissing in Alma´s kitchen! I´m quite sure Jack would wag his "tail" in that case :laugh:. And Alma is stony faced because she knows, huh?

My little Till is a bit better, but the night was ....let´s not talk about it. I could have been here as well, as far as the amouint of sleep is concerned. Just gave him that kiss you sent. He liked it ;D.

Dagi
Title: Re: A Letter
Post by: Dagi on June 26, 2007, 02:53:46 am
Dearest Dagi,
I missed this story earlier. It is strikingly beautiful and very heartfelt. I don't know how we continue to pull these gut wrenching tales every day.

Yours,
Toycoon

Thank you, Toycoon. Most of my stories are sad, I´m afraid. I´ll try to do a lighter one next time, promise!
Dagi
Title: Re: Never (part 3)
Post by: Dagi on June 26, 2007, 03:13:59 am
“I’ll do anything you say!”  Ennis grunted as he practically tore the buttons from his good shirt.  He flung his boots aside, followed by his jeans.  Jack had Ennis in his mouth before he could completely discard his briefs!

And just before he found his release, Ennis pulled himself free of Jack’s voracious mouth.  Jack didn’t like it, wanted more, but Ennis found his member lubricated just enough, courtesy of Jack’s saliva.

“Turn around, Rodeo!  I got something nice fer ya!”  It was Ennis’ turn to do the ordering!  Jack obeyed.  He pushed his backside toward his lover, braced himself…


Oh Marie, that was really sexy, but where the hell is part one? I couldn´t find it! I´m losing control, this thread is about to explode! Can you tell me the page? I didn´t put it in the archive yet, either!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 26, 2007, 03:16:36 am
If anyone feels like crying, go to page 6. I posted a YT video with the song "What hurts the most" along with my story "The Sun". That song really gets me every time.
Title: Re: Never
Post by: Dagi on June 26, 2007, 05:05:37 am
There was a look in Jack's eyes that Ennis never saw a man give another man before; it made Ennis' entire body throb with lust.

Cigarettes, whiskey and desire; it was a taste in his mouth he'd never had before.

Ennis tore at Jack's clothes, felt his hairy body, held his face, stroked his firm flesh, never denying this was what he'd always wanted and secretly craved.

Ahh I found it! Toycoon, three sentences filled with love and lust. Just beautiful! Just like Jack and Ennis, few words containing a world.

Dagi

Title: Re: Field Trip
Post by: Dagi on June 26, 2007, 05:18:26 am

 “Miss Parker, what’re they doin’?”

“Nothing Billy”, she searched frantically for some kind of explanation, “ I expect they’re just practicing bull ridin’…. now hurry along…. scoot!”
 


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif) 



Susie, I just read Fourteen Years again, and was crying - until I found Field Trip, which brought back a wide smile on my face! This sexy and funny story is a good example for your exellent writing!

Dagi
Title: Re: Never (part 2)
Post by: Toycoon on June 26, 2007, 09:07:06 am
Quote
“Take off your clothes, Cowboy!”  Jack ordered.  “I need you, now!”  Ennis was taken aback.  He was not used to Jack ordering him around, and he wasn’t sure if he liked it.  But when Jack pounced as though Ennis wasn’t moving fast enough, Ennis decided that he liked being told what to do.  He liked it very much…

Ooohoowee! Littlewing1957, you're so nasty, hot and... sexy!
Title: Re: Never
Post by: Toycoon on June 26, 2007, 09:14:27 am
There was a look in Jack's eyes that Ennis never saw a man give another man before; it made Ennis' entire body throb with lust.

Cigarettes, whiskey and desire; it was a taste in his mouth he'd never had before.

Ennis tore at Jack's clothes, felt his hairy body, held his face, stroked his firm flesh, never denying this was what he'd always wanted and secretly craved.

Hola Dagi,
Here is 'Never' part 1 from page 54. Thank you so much for archiving.
Eventually, we will have to self-publish our home made folks tales.
I told Malina-5 she has a publishing deal ready to go if she wants one!
Title: Re: Let's go for a walk
Post by: Toycoon on June 26, 2007, 09:17:00 am
Yeah I know ... but did I fool you ... just for a second??

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

You did until Alma came into the picture! I figgered out it was a pooch right then. Arf! Arf!
Title: Re: A Letter
Post by: Dagi on June 26, 2007, 04:01:10 pm
Oh Dagi, talk dirty to me.  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_1_12.gif)

Gary

Just give me your number, honey ;D!
Title: Re: Field Trip
Post by: Dagi on June 26, 2007, 04:03:25 pm

Hehehe ... toycoon guessed that Miss Parker is really Susiebell!!  So that makes me a bit pervy too .... (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/8/8_4_100.gif).... yeah baby!!!!


Who wouldn´t wish to be Miss Parker.... :o??

Dagi
Title: Re: Crossing the Line (NC-17)
Post by: Clyde-B on June 26, 2007, 07:32:16 pm
This story is intended for adults only.

 

Looks like the "Nasty" clan has a new member.

Er...  uh... perhaps I should rephrase that.

Oh, what the hell!   :laugh:
Title: Re: Crossing the Line (NC-17)
Post by: Toycoon on June 26, 2007, 11:29:50 pm
"Crossing the line" ? Boy, you ain't kidding. Congratulations on your return, Gary, you nasty boy!
Title: Re: Never (part 3)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 26, 2007, 11:57:19 pm
Oh Marie, that was really sexy, but where the hell is part one? I couldn´t find it! I´m losing control, this thread is about to explode! Can you tell me the page? I didn´t put it in the archive yet, either!

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi!  I almost missed "Never" myself.  I'm glad I noticed it!
Title: Re: Never (part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 26, 2007, 11:58:12 pm
Phew! My heart's racing a bit now ...  and as for Ennis pulling Jack's chest hairs with his teeth ..  OMG! .... (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_1_131.gif)

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

 :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:
Title: Re: Never (part 3)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 26, 2007, 11:59:08 pm
(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_3_1v.gif).... Aaaaah .. you're killin' me now ....  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_3_1v.gif)

Superb Littlewing!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Thanks, Susie!  I don't know what got into me last night!  ::)
Title: Re: Never (part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 27, 2007, 12:01:10 am
Ooohoowee! Littlewing1957, you're so nasty, hot and... sexy!

You inspired me!  I love continuing your steamy tales!
Title: Re: Never (part 3)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 27, 2007, 12:01:45 am
MMM MM  I'm lovin' it, littlewing.  Hot!

Gary

Thanks so much, Sweetheart!  :-*
Title: Re: Never (part 3)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 27, 2007, 12:02:34 am
NEVER Parts 1, 2 and 3  Toycoon and littlewing

Whoa littlewing and Toycoon.  I'll tell you what.....I'm sweating after that - you and Toycoon again.  Whew.  Lusteeeeeeeeee.  Thanks, I think.....  It's only 11am and I'm really distracted.

Merrily



 :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh: I couldn't help it, Merr!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 27, 2007, 12:09:27 am
This story is intended for adults only.

Crossing the Line by garycottle


“Oh, come on, now,” Jack cajoled.

The confusion was all over Ennis’s face, but so was his desire, and Jack knew he had won when Ennis finally walked forward and took his place in front of him.  Jack smiled up at his friend as he reached for his belt.


My wings fail me and I have fallen to the ground!  So hot, Gary!  I imagine Ennis taking his pleasure with a rather stoic nature, but being in love with Jack, couldn't take him totally for granted.  Thus the riding back to give him a kiss.  That Jack is a lucky man, indeed!  Oh, and Ennis didn't have it so bad, either!   ::)  Beautiful writing, Gary!  Brilliant!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 27, 2007, 12:14:15 am
If anyone feels like crying, go to page 6. I posted a YT video with the song "What hurts the most" along with my story "The Sun". That song really gets me every time.

Wow, Dagi, that's amazing!  You posted one of my favorites!  And along with your lovely tale, well, I am crying.  I'll be okay in a minute!!  :'(
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on June 27, 2007, 12:50:17 am
You kids!!  ;D  Haven't ya'll settled down yet?!  :P

Hey--what about capitol and capital/principle and principal?? Is English the hardest language to learn?
 
Title: Alma Jr's Gifts
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 27, 2007, 01:03:37 am
Extreme AU.  I took a few liberties here with sequence of events, characters, etc.  I’m even over the 3 paragraph rule.  It won’t happen again.  Well, at least I hope it won't!

Jack studied a tiny dress that was covered with bows and ribbons.  He loved it, and wasn’t put off by the price.  $100.00 for a tiny dress was steep, but to Jack, it was a pittance.  He loved Ennis Del Mar and Ennis deserved only the best.

“What do you think about this dress, Lureen?”   Jack asked his wife as he held the dress high enough for her to see it.  Lureen was shopping in the diaper section at the other side of the floor.  She looked at the tiny garment and wrinkled her nose.  Jack looked at the dress once more, shook his head and returned it to the rack.
 
I’ll be over there in a minute honey.  I’m just getting a supply of diapers for your friends.  They’ll need a lot of those!”

Jack looked at his wife in awe.  He loved her more at that moment than he ever thought possible.  What a giving soul she turned out to be!  Just yesterday he got word from Riverton that Alma Del Mar gave birth to a baby girl.  Ennis called her Alma Jr. after her mom.  Jack also heard that the Del Mar’s were having severe financial problems.  That was all Jack needed to hear to goad him to action.  He explained the situation to Lureen: he had a friend who just had a kid and couldn't really afford to get everything he needed for the child.  Lureen didn’t even blink.  She fetched their coats and drove straight to Neiman Marcus and the children’s department.  Jack was floored.  He would never forget Lureen’s kindness.  Ennis Del Mar was a good friend, and he wanted to help his buddy.  And the child!  Jack wouldn’t bear the thought of Ennis’ daughter doing without!
 
Lureen walked over to Jack carrying a case of disposable diapers, while on top she placed packages of sleepers, receiving blankets, bibs.   Jack took the items from her and allowed her to pick out a few baby clothes.  Lureen selected 3 stylish and expensive dresses, 2 pant outfits and a tiny coat.  It was all Jack could do to keep from crying.  He hadn’t laid eyes on Ennis Del Mar in years, but he still cared about him, would do anything for him.  The presents would be sent to Riverton anonymously, and at great cost.  The shipping fees alone would be murder, but Jack had to do it.  He knew that Ennis would never accept these things if he brought them in person.  If Ennis didn’t know who sent them, he couldn’t refuse them?  Right?  After the baby things were bought, Jack arranged with the store to have them shipped to the Del Mar residence a week from Saturday.  He also found out the date of Alma’s baby shower.  Jack wanted the surprise to arrive in time for the festivities.

Ennis didn’t have anywhere to go, and decided to hang around the kitchen as the womenfolk played shower games, ate finger foods and played with his new baby.  Just as he was about to fix himself a small plate of food, there was a knock at the door.  Alma answered and was astounded to see 2 deliverymen carrying a large box up to the house.

“What is this?”  Alma asked the men as they set the box down in the living room.

“I don’t know ma’am!”   “I just do the deliveries.  I don’t know what’s in the boxes.”

The man passed Alma a receipt to sign and was on his way.  Ennis rushed into the room and studied the box.  No return address, no way to even tell what state it came from.

“I don’t know if we should open this!” Ennis said as their guests crowded around the box.

“Oh come on, honey!”  Alma, excited now!  “Maybe it’s something for the baby.  It’s not tickin!  Let’s open it!”

Ennis shrugged and fetched a box cutter to cut through the tape.  Once the box was opened, there was a hushed silence in the room!  No one moved.  At first.  Alma picked up the tiny dresses, the other finery and squealed!

“Look at all of this!  Where did this come from?”  Ennis looked through the gear and scratched his head.  The merchandise was good quality.  Someone was being very generous and Ennis couldn’t image who would send these things.  Alma’s sister admired a tiny pant outfit. 

“Hey Alma, this ain’t no junk!  Alma’s sister observed.  “Whoever bought this is rollin in dough!”

Ennis couldn’t argue with that.  As his guests admired the presents, he searched his mind for clues.  Then it hit him.  He couldn’t say why he knew, but he knew.  It was just a hunch he had.... Jack fuckin’ Twist…

Title: Re: Crossing the Line (NC-17)
Post by: Dagi on June 27, 2007, 05:45:30 am
This story is intended for adults only.

Crossing the Line by garycottle
.......

When they separated Ennis ran toward his horse, and this time he didn’t look back.  Jack watched him go.  His wet, mischievous mouth curled into a self-satisfied smile, and he reached for his own belt while the memory of the evening’s events were still fresh in his mind.

I´m still gulping hard. Had to read it twice before being able to reply. What a way to go, Gary, you HOT boy! I have to change my undies now before my siesta...or better after my siesta ;D?

Dagi
Title: Re: A Letter
Post by: Dagi on June 27, 2007, 06:24:50 am
They're called homophones.  Isn't that funny!  Sounds like some gay guy's cell phone, huh? 


 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

So next time you meet a guy you can ask him to give you his homophone number :laugh:!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 27, 2007, 06:25:50 am
You kids!!  ;D  Haven't ya'll settled down yet?!  :P

 
 

Shast, is it just me or do you look somehow different? ;D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 27, 2007, 06:32:37 am
 

Yes, English must be the hardest language to learn.  Dagi is from Germany and she is correcting me - and feeling pretty good about herself I might add.  She's gettin' sick of my dumbass typos.

Merrily

Merrily, it´s your first typo I ever found and you´ve been writing me some expanded mails! That´s why I said "finally". But homophone-errors are quite common here  ;D.

Dagi

I expect to be corrected, too. But nobody bothers. So you will have to read my dumbass errors as long as you don´t tell me!
Title: Re: Crossing the Line (NC-17)
Post by: Dagi on June 27, 2007, 06:37:06 am
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Me  too! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/28/28_4_10.gif)

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Your emoticons are killing me. I wish my computer didn´t refuse to install the program...
Title: Re: Alma Jr's Gifts
Post by: Dagi on June 27, 2007, 06:39:02 am
Extreme AU.  I took a few liberties here with sequence of events, characters, etc.  I’m even over the 3 paragraph rule.  It won’t happen again.  Well, at least I hope it won't!

 Littlewing, the image of a loving and caring Jack and a lovely, generous Lureen is wonderful! And please let it happen again...

Dagi
Title: Words unspoken
Post by: Toycoon on June 27, 2007, 09:52:42 am
Jack contemplated for a long time about how he felt then thought about what he would say to Ennis but the words never seem to come as easily as the feelings did; he found himself expressing his heart in other ways.

Jack pulled Ennis' arm around him placing Ennis' hand on his erection, guiding it up and down and gyrating in rhythm because often, words are further from the deed.

"Ennis, all of them things you never said, I believed you meant every word."
Title: Re: Words unspoken
Post by: Dagi on June 27, 2007, 01:04:10 pm

"Ennis, all of them things you never said, I believed you meant every word."

Oh yes, a great, great line, Toycoon. Love it.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 27, 2007, 01:06:22 pm
I have only one request concerning the archive: Could you please write the title of your stories right on top of them, not only in the subject line, that would help me a lot. Oh, and if you want to help me even more, you can write "by" and your name behind the title.

Thank you!
Dagi

Thank you, Susie and Gary! :-* :-*
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 27, 2007, 02:00:14 pm
Wet Skin by Dagi  - NC17 ???

The early morning sun made their wet skin glimmer after the bath in the river. They were both lying on their stomachs, eyes locked.

„You´re a witch, Ennis DelMar. You´re bewitching me. Merely looking you in the eye makes me need you so badly, makes me want my dick in that sweet hot mouth a  yours and your dick all the way up my ass at the same time, fuckin the hell out a me...“ His voice had become husky and rough, his eyes dreary.

„Ya mean ´a´ dick.  Can´t fuck and suck you at the same time, ......hunh? And not now, you have to be down at the bridge by noon, you know that, ........................but if one man is not enough for you why don´t you bring that basque guy....tie him onto one a the mules....?“

„Whoaaa, Ennis, don´t be disgusting“ Jack chuckled, but became serious again the moment he looked at this tall lean naked man standing now in front of him. Even Ennis´  talking about the basque failed to cool down the heat in his manhood.

Ennis leaned down to plant a wet, soft kiss on Jack´s lips. „Have to go up to them sheep now...“ he whispered and left his friend alone, knowing that he would take good care of himself.

tbc
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on June 27, 2007, 02:24:50 pm
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..but if one man is not enough for you why don't you bring that Basque guy....tie him onto one a the mules....?“

Whoa Dagi! I don't know about this!  I don't know about Jack but that Basque fella is definitely not my type! Is he your type?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 27, 2007, 04:51:39 pm
Oh, now Toycoon, we can't all look like movie stars, you know.  Mister 6'4" and slender.  The Basque may not look all that great, but he might have other assets.   :-X  And he could be very talented.  I mean really talented.  You'd never know unless you gave him a chance.

Gary

P.S.  I mean he could be like super duper talented.   ;)

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didn´t you notice that tbc at the end! Be a little patient, guys! I still don´t have any idea how to go on with what I begun :laugh:.

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on June 27, 2007, 06:01:05 pm
Oh, now Toycoon, we can't all look like movie stars, you know.  Mister 6'4" and slender.  The Basque may not look all that great, but he might have other assets.   :-X  And he could be very talented.  I mean really talented.  You'd never know unless you gave him a chance.

Gary

P.S.  I mean he could be like super duper talented.   ;)

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/7/7_9_7.gif) 

Sure, you can't tell.  He may have a really big... er... uh... personality.
Title: Re: Alma Jr's Gifts
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 28, 2007, 01:35:00 am
Littlewing, the image of a loving and caring Jack and a lovely, generous Lureen is wonderful! And please let it happen again...

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi!  I'll write another AU  piece again, definitely!
Title: Re: Alma Jr's Gifts
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 28, 2007, 01:36:17 am
Ah littlewing, what a charming tale ... I could imagine Jack doing that for his love ... and I love you for not painting Lureen as the villain this time.

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Thanks, Susie.   I've always thought that Lureen had a compassionate soul.  No one in BBM is all bad, or all good, for that matter.  I guess this is the reason we care so much!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 28, 2007, 01:38:31 am
Wet Skin by Dagi  - NC17 ???

The early morning sun made their wet skin glimmer after the bath in the river. They were both lying on their stomachs, eyes locked.

„You´re a witch, Ennis DelMar. You´re bewitching me. Merely looking you in the eye makes me need you so hard, makes me want my dick in that sweet hot mouth a  yours and your dick all the way up my ass at the same time, fuckin the hell out a me...“ His voice had become husky and rough, his eyes dreary.

„Ya mean ´a´ dick.  Can´t fuck and suck you at the same time, ......hunh? And not now, you have to be down at the bridge by noon, you know that, ........................but if one man is not enough for you why don´t you bring that basque guy....tie him onto one a the mules....?“

„Whoaaa, Ennis, don´t be disgusting“ Jack chuckled, but became serious again the moment he looked at this tall lean naked man standing now in front of him. Even Ennis´  talking about the basque failed to cool down the heat in his manhood.

Ennis leaned down to plant a wet, soft kiss on Jack´s lips. „Have to go up to them sheep now...“ he whispered and left his friend alone, knowing that he would take good care of himself.

tbc

Wow, Dagi!  This is a brilliant tale.  And thanks for bring the Basque into it.  I don't think anyone has mentioned him after all this time.  Very original, powerful, sexy tale!
Title: Re: Alma Jr's Gifts
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 28, 2007, 01:39:48 am
Hi littlewing,

What an endearing piece.  It would have been so nice if Jack could have done that for Ennis and his newborn.  If only...

Gary

So true, Gary!  So true.  I know in my heart of hearts that Jack would have helped Ennis with the girls, if he allowed it!
Title: Re: Words unspoken
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 28, 2007, 01:41:01 am
Jack contemplated for a long time about how he felt then thought about what he would say to Ennis but the words never seem to come as easily as the feelings did; he found himself expressing his heart in other ways.

Jack pulled Ennis' arm around him placing Ennis' hand on his erection, guiding it up and down and gyrating in rhythm because often, words are further from the deed.

"Ennis, all of them things you never said, I believed you meant every word."

Beautiful story, Toycoon!  And the last line is particularly profound!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 28, 2007, 06:42:55 am
Wow, Dagi!  This is a brilliant tale.  And thanks for bring the Basque into it.  I don't think anyone has mentioned him after all this time.  Very original, powerful, sexy tale!
Thank you, Marie! But I still don´t know if the Basque has any future. I mean, you heard Jack´s reaction, and he would be the one to bring him... :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 28, 2007, 06:44:32 am
MMM  Love that title, Dagi.  And I for one would feel lucky to Basque in the glow of Jack's and Ennis's love making.   ;D

BTW, what Jack was proposing can be done.  Ennis should have given it a go.   :P

Gary

 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: So glad you liked at least the title !

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 28, 2007, 06:47:25 am
Whoa Dagi! I don't know about this!  I don't know about Jack but that Basque fella is definitely not my type! Is he your type?

insert non-existent vomiting emoticon

Dagi ;D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on June 28, 2007, 01:10:11 pm
LOL and Ewwwww!!     :P
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 28, 2007, 02:13:18 pm
You mean something like this:

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Or this:

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Or maybe this:

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Just thought I'd help out a little.   ;D

Gary
Thank you Gary, that was exactly what I meant. Haaaahhh, you always know so well what we need ;D!

dagi

any ideas for part two of my wierd story, Gary?  :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 28, 2007, 04:05:00 pm
Hmmm  How about when Jack goes down to get that week's supplies he discovers that the Basque is feeling under the weather and so his hunky brother has come in his stead.   ;)

Hehe, you don´t like the Basque neither, do you? Sending his hunky brother instead  :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

We could start a new game: everyone writes one sentence, would be funny to see what comes out in the end ;)

Dagi (pronounced with a hard ´g´ like in gun btw, for all those who are not familiar with German)
Title: Re: Words unspoken
Post by: Toycoon on June 28, 2007, 06:25:35 pm
Thanks for the compliment, Susiebell. I don't know where that line came from but I do like it. It's perfectly ambiguous.

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I love the image of them lying naked on their stomachs, what a view!!!

I'll bet you do. Maybe we should give 'em a couple of wet T-shirts and really throw you over the edge!
Title: Re: Words unspoken
Post by: Toycoon on June 28, 2007, 07:58:34 pm
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And don't come over all innocent with me Mister ... you'd be panting at the sight of those two perfectly formed firm white bottoms too!!

You know it, sister! Those firm globes are two of my favorite parts! Yahooo!
Title: Re: Alma Jr's Gifts
Post by: Toycoon on June 28, 2007, 11:19:34 pm
Great AU story, littlewing1957. You really know how to tell those far fetched tall tales.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 29, 2007, 12:06:27 am
insert non-existent vomiting emoticon

Dagi ;D

 :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:
Title: Re: Alma Jr's Gifts
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 29, 2007, 12:10:39 am
Littlewing, how sweet.  I can just see that smile on Ennis' face when he thinks...Jack fuckin' Twist - I love it.

Merrily

Thanks so much, Merr! 
Title: Re: Alma Jr's Gifts
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 29, 2007, 12:11:44 am
Great AU story, littlewing1957. You really know how to tell those far fetched tall tales.

Toycoon, you are so funny!  Stay tuned.  I have a million of em!  ;)
Title: Sweet Talk
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 29, 2007, 12:13:21 am
Ennis was lying on his back, a tangle of soft pillows under his head and torso.  Jack Twist was talking a blue streak, but his tone was hushed and romantic.  Jack stroked Ennis’ cheek, spoke soft words to him.

Ennis listened to Jack’s words and tried to hide a blush.   He would never admit it, but Ennis always wanted to hear something sweet come out of Jack’s mouth.  It was a real comfort to hear words of love after such spirited relations.

Jack fluffed Ennis’ pillows and continued to soothe.  He placed a gentle kiss on Ennis’ cheek and laid his head on Ennis’ breast.  Jack often hurt Ennis in bed.  It was a sweet, delicious pain, but it was pain, nonetheless.  Ennis shifted his sore bum and fell asleep while Jack spoke of love in the dark.
Title: Re: Sweet Talk
Post by: Dagi on June 29, 2007, 12:28:53 am
Ennis was lying on his back, a tangle of soft pillows under his head and torso.  Jack Twist was talking a blue streak, but his tone was hushed and romantic.  Jack stroked Ennis’ cheek, spoke soft words to him.

Ennis listened to Jack’s words and tried to hide a blush.   He would never admit it, but Ennis always wanted to hear something sweet come out of Jack’s mouth.  It was a real comfort to hear words of love after such spirited relations.

Jack fluffed Ennis’ pillows and continued to soothe.  He placed a gentle kiss on Ennis’ cheek and laid his head on Ennis’ breast.  Jack often hurt Ennis in bed.  It was a sweet, delicious pain, but it was pain, nonetheless.  Ennis shifted his sore bum and fell asleep while Jack spoke of love in the dark.


what a way to start the day, littlewing. So tender and sexy, love it.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 29, 2007, 12:32:00 am
WOW Dagi!

You're just getting raunchier and raunchier girly .... my computer's going to explode in a minute!!  Very sexy story honey, and I love it when they talk dirty!  I hope Ennis was kidding Jack on about the Basque guy .... if they're going to have a three-way, let's hope Jon Bon Jovi's passing by in his tight leather pants....  whooo wheeeee! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_5_13.gif)

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

ps. I love the image of them lying naked on their stomachs, what a view!!! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_3_1v.gif)

Yes, Ennis was kidding. If I ever write a story containing a threesome, I´ll engage Arguirre, of course (he saw them first !). Now, Gary, how´s that?

Susie, thank you for your compliment!

Dagi
Title: After the Dance
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 29, 2007, 12:33:44 am
“Let me take it off!”  Ennis yelled as Jack danced.  Jack moved seductively to Ennis, placed his gyrating hips right before Ennis’ red face.  “Shake it baby!”  Ennis cried as he pulled at Jack’s briefs.

“You got it, Cowboy!”  Jack laughed as he moved in tandem to the motion of Ennis’ fingers.  “I should call you “The tentacle!”  Jack chided as he stepped away from his lover and discarded his underwear.  Jack stood naked as a jaybird, but he continued his weird mating dance!  He moved his narrow hips in and out, flung his arms, moved his head from side to side.  And all without music!  Ennis watched transfixed as Jack danced.

Ennis rose to his feet and faced a heart achingly beautiful Jack Twist.  He made no move to hide his probing eyes, as he looked his lover up and down, from head to foot.  “You’re so fuckin’ beautiful, Rodeo!  Ennis began.  “I can’t believe you’re really mine."  C’mon, Friend!”   Jack beckoned an eager Ennis Del Mar.  “Let me show you what happens after the dance…"




Title: Re: Sweet Talk
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 29, 2007, 12:35:29 am
what a way to start the day, littlewing. So tender and sexy, love it.

Dagi

Thanks for your kind words, Dagi.  Good to see you!  :)
Title: Re: After the Dance
Post by: Dagi on June 29, 2007, 12:40:20 am
“Let me take it off!”  Ennis yelled as Jack danced.  Jack moved seductively to Ennis, placed his gyrating hips right before Ennis’ red face.  “Shake it baby!”  Ennis cried as he pulled at Jack’s briefs.

“You got it, Cowboy!”  Jack laughed as he moved in tandem to the motion of Ennis’ fingers.  “I should call you “The tentacle!”  Jack chided as he stepped away from his lover and discarded his underwear.  Jack stood naked as a jaybird, but he continued his weird mating dance!  He moved his narrow hips in and out, flung his arms, moved his head from side to side.  And all without music!  Ennis watched transfixed as Jack danced.

Ennis rose to his feet and faced a heart achingly beautiful Jack Twist.  He made no move to hide his probing eyes, as he looked his lover up and down, from head to foot.  “You’re so fuckin’ beautiful, Rodeo!  Ennis began.  “I can’t believe you’re really mine.  C’mon, Friend!”   Jack beckoned an eager Ennis Del mar.  “Let me show you what happens after the dance…







Oh Marie, that´s almost too much so early in the morning...this picture of a naked, seductively dancing JakeJack and Ennis watching him with probing eyes will haunt me the whole day, I know it.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 29, 2007, 12:44:35 am
Wow, 15 guests are viewing this topic. Wow.
Title: Re: Sweet Talk
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 29, 2007, 12:45:41 am
littlewing, I think that's just what Ennis needed.  He needed someone to make over him as they say around here.  What I mean by that is Ennis could have benefited from some gentle and adoring attention.  Your little story here reminds me of how Jack treated Ennis in the second tent scene, and how Ennis responded to being taken care of.  I think Ennis is a scared little boy under that gloomy, and sometimes prickly facade.  We sometimes forget that he lost his parents at a very tender age, and I doubt his siblings did a very good job in stepping in.  Ennis suffered from a cuddle and comfort deficit.

Gary

Gary, I agree with everything you just said here!  I certainly think Ennis was touch deprived, but he couldn't articulate his need.  Jack gentling Ennis is a "theme" I return to time and again. 
Title: Sweet Talk (2)
Post by: Toycoon on June 29, 2007, 12:48:09 am
Jack continued to stroke Ennis' hair, smoothing it and petting him like the family cat;
a sudden, transient rise of energy gripped Ennis changing his demeanor and startling Jack.

Ennis became an insatiable sexual animal, groaning, surprising even himself demanding, "Do me, Jack fucken' Twist, do me!"

Jack shook Ennis awake and held him close, feeling his heart racing through his chest; "You were having a hellava dream, Cowboy. Shame I had to wake you up before you got done! Does that offer still stand?"
Title: Re: After the Dance
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 29, 2007, 12:50:14 am

Oh Marie, that´s almost too much so early in the morning...this picture of a naked, seductively dancing JakeJack and Ennis watching him with probing eyes will haunt me the whole day, I know it.

Dagi

I know, Dagi.  I'm just ready to turn in for the night, and I wouldn't be surprised if I see a dancing Jack Twist in my dreams.  Such a spectacle will be very welcome, indeed!
Title: Re: Sweet Talk (2)
Post by: Dagi on June 29, 2007, 12:53:01 am
Jack continued to stroke Ennis' hair, smoothing it and petting him like a family cat;
a sudden, transient rise of energy gripped Ennis changing his demeanor and startling Jack.

Ennis became an insatiable sexual animal, groaning, surprising even himself demanding, "Do me, Jack fucken' Twist, do me!"

Jack shook Ennis awake and held him close, feeling his heart racing through his chest; "You were having a hellava dream, Cowboy. Shame I had to wake you up before you got done! Does that offer still stand?"



you are too much for me *faints because of lack of sleep and blood rushing downwards*

What a surprise - Toycoon follows littlewing. Great, just great. Sequel, please, whoever writes it!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 29, 2007, 12:58:49 am
Wow, 15 guests are viewing this topic. Wow.

Yes, I saw that!   :)  I don't think I've ever seen so many guests on this thread before!  It is good to see!
Title: Re: Sweet Talk (2)
Post by: Toycoon on June 29, 2007, 01:04:26 am
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Now if this had been a really naughty story Jack would have slipped it in while the family cat was still asleep.
Are you suggesting 'date rape' Garycottle, you perv!

You can always write the final chapter, ya know or ain't ya' man enough? ;D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on June 29, 2007, 01:13:00 am
Geez---calling each other "pervs"---issuing challenges---etc. I need to stop in more often and distribute a little discipline among all you kids!!! Ya'll are out of control!  :P
Title: Sweet Talk Part 3
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 29, 2007, 01:18:38 am
This is for you, Dagi!

Ennis chuckled softly, and held Jack closer to his breast.  He kissed Jack’s hair, and didn’t mind one bit that Jack shook him out of a very pleasurable dream.

“Maybe in a little bit, Rodeo!”  Ennis whispered.  “I don’t think I’m up to it right now.  You okay with that?”  Jack hid a knowing smile from his lover.  “Listen Friend, if you’re sore back there, I brought a salve.  We can have you up and presentin' in no time!”

Ennis had to grin at Jack’s suggestion.  Where did Jack find the energy?  Ennis pushed his lover up a bit and crawled onto his stomach.  He raised his buttocks to Jack.  “Lube me up and we’ll see what happens..”
Title: Re: Sweet Talk Part 3
Post by: Toycoon on June 29, 2007, 01:25:49 am
Quote
“Listen Friend, if you’re sore back there, I brought a salve.  We can have you up and presentin' in no time!”

You absolutely slay me, littlewing1957! Thank Heaven for old fashioned salve!
Title: Re: Sweet Talk Part 3
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 29, 2007, 01:33:01 am
You absolutely slay me, littlewing1957! Thank Heaven for old fashioned salve!

Hey, Toycoon!  Somebody actually said that to me once!   :laugh:
Title: Re: Sweet Talk Part 3
Post by: SFEnnisSF on June 29, 2007, 01:46:50 am
. “Lube me up and we’ll see what happens..”


I need to visit these threads more often.  :D
Title: Re: Sweet Talk Part 3
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 29, 2007, 01:52:55 am
I need to visit these threads more often.  :D

You gotta, Eric!  We're having a lot of fun!  ;)  ;D  ::)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on June 29, 2007, 05:05:12 am

Catching up on my reading! It's getting hot in here!!

(http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x221/Shasta542/camp_fire.gif)

Good writing Brokie pals---Thanks for the high class entertainment!!

Title: Re: Sweet Talk Part 3
Post by: Dagi on June 29, 2007, 08:04:56 am
This is for you, Dagi!

 Ennis pushed his lover up a bit and crawled onto his stomach.  He raised his buttocks to Jack.  “Lube me up and we’ll see what happens..”


That was something for me, yeeehaaawww!

You nnnaaaaassssty girl ("Littlewing" really is toooo innocent a name for you!!!)!

Give us mooore! part 4 please! For Eric!



Title: Re: Sweet Talk (2)
Post by: Dagi on June 29, 2007, 08:11:40 am
Now if this had been a really naughty story Jack would have slipped it in while the family cat was still asleep.   ;)


Now you are warned, guys! Never fall asleep with Gary around. Means, if you are not up to something ;D
Title: Re: Rack em up!
Post by: Dagi on June 29, 2007, 02:27:33 pm
Rack em up! by Susie



Ennis watched admiringly as Jack leaned over the pool table to take his shot.  The white ball was near the far end and in order to pot the black into the corner pocket and claim yet another victory, Jack had to lie, stretched half way across the table. 

Ennis’ thoughts drifted as he observed Jack’s rear end…. peeling off Jack’s clothing, one item at a time, leaving his jeans until last, savoring each moment as he slowly slid them down to his ankles, revealing pale pink flesh, soft downy hair, and the perfectly toned, muscular roundness of his buttocks.

Moving in behind him, one hand caressing each cheek, massaging, circling, spreading them wide apart, ready to plunge in deep ….. “Whoo whee! That’s three games to one, bud!  You sure you wanna take me on again? Hey, you OK Ennis?”  Ennis reached for his pool cue, smiling to himself, “Rack em up!” he ordered…. Later.... he thought.



(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/7/7_8_6v.gif)

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Girl, that was HOT HOT HOT!!!

If I had been Ennis, I surely would not have been able to keep my hands off!

With all those "hot buttered b...." you had been watching lately I knew that a bum storie would come ;D

Dagi
Title: Re: Jack's Turn (NC-17)
Post by: Toycoon on June 29, 2007, 05:25:38 pm
Quote
“Just shut up and enjoy it, will you?”

Garycottle, you are a hellion!

Quote
“Jack, can’t I roll over so I can put my legs over your shoulders?”

This seems like a reasonable request...what are you gonna do with me?

Quote
“Only if you call me daddy.”

Yer too much for me, boy! You win the rauchy award for the day, I tell you! Susiebell, you gonna let Gary take yer 'Nasty' trophy away like that?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on June 29, 2007, 06:21:39 pm
You mean something like this:

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_2_10.gif)

Or this:

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_2_6.gif)

Or maybe this:

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_19_7.gif)

Just thought I'd help out a little.   ;D

Gary

LOL!!!!   :laugh:
Title: Re: Sweet Talk
Post by: Clyde-B on June 29, 2007, 06:33:01 pm
  It was a sweet, delicious pain, but it was pain, nonetheless.  Ennis shifted his sore bum and fell asleep while Jack spoke of love in the dark.


Turabout time huh, Marie!

How about giving Jack a little more experience so he can develop better technique!   ;D
Title: Re: After the Dance
Post by: Clyde-B on June 29, 2007, 06:40:10 pm
“Let me take it off!”  Ennis yelled as Jack danced.  Jack moved seductively to Ennis, placed his gyrating hips right before Ennis’ red face.  “Shake it baby!”  Ennis cried as he pulled at Jack’s briefs.

“You got it, Cowboy!”  Jack laughed as he moved in tandem to the motion of Ennis’ fingers.  “I should call you “The tentacle!”  Jack chided as he stepped away from his lover and discarded his underwear.  Jack stood naked as a jaybird, but he continued his weird mating dance!  He moved his narrow hips in and out, flung his arms, moved his head from side to side.  And all without music!  Ennis watched transfixed as Jack danced.

Ennis rose to his feet and faced a heart achingly beautiful Jack Twist.  He made no move to hide his probing eyes, as he looked his lover up and down, from head to foot.  “You’re so fuckin’ beautiful, Rodeo!  Ennis began.  “I can’t believe you’re really mine."  C’mon, Friend!”   Jack beckoned an eager Ennis Del Mar.  “Let me show you what happens after the dance…"





OOOOOO!   Could Jack make it rotate in one direction and then the other?

I really love that 'Rodeo' nickname, I'm gonna steal it.
Title: Re: Sweet Talk (2)
Post by: Clyde-B on June 29, 2007, 06:43:31 pm
Jack continued to stroke Ennis' hair, smoothing it and petting him like the family cat;
a sudden, transient rise of energy gripped Ennis changing his demeanor and startling Jack.

Ennis became an insatiable sexual animal, groaning, surprising even himself demanding, "Do me, Jack fucken' Twist, do me!"

Jack shook Ennis awake and held him close, feeling his heart racing through his chest; "You were having a hellava dream, Cowboy. Shame I had to wake you up before you got done! Does that offer still stand?"


Well?????  ;D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on June 29, 2007, 06:48:21 pm
Geez---calling each other "pervs"---issuing challenges---etc. I need to stop in more often and distribute a little discipline among all you kids!!! Ya'll are out of control!  :P

Bring your whip Mistress Shasta!   :laugh:
Title: Re: Rack em up!
Post by: Clyde-B on June 29, 2007, 06:54:28 pm
Rack em up! by Susie



Ennis watched admiringly as Jack leaned over the pool table to take his shot.  The white ball was near the far end and in order to pot the black into the corner pocket and claim yet another victory, Jack had to lie, stretched half way across the table. 

Ennis’ thoughts drifted as he observed Jack’s rear end…. peeling off Jack’s clothing, one item at a time, leaving his jeans until last, savoring each moment as he slowly slid them down to his ankles, revealing pale pink flesh, soft downy hair, and the perfectly toned, muscular roundness of his buttocks.

Moving in behind him, one hand caressing each cheek, massaging, circling, spreading them wide apart, ready to plunge in deep ….. “Whoo whee! That’s three games to one, bud!  You sure you wanna take me on again? Hey, you OK Ennis?”  Ennis reached for his pool cue, smiling to himself, “Rack em up!” he ordered…. Later.... he thought.



(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/7/7_8_6v.gif)

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



Foul!!!!  Jack's using unfair tactics!    :laugh:
Title: Re: Jack's Turn (NC-17)
Post by: Clyde-B on June 29, 2007, 07:01:53 pm


“Jack, can’t I roll over so I can put my legs over your shoulders?”

 

Whoa!  That was a surprise!   ;D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on June 29, 2007, 07:35:13 pm
Bring your whip Mistress Shasta!   :laugh:

Ok--you know who you are!! Form a line and wait your turn.   >:(
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on June 29, 2007, 07:46:14 pm
That's tellin' um....Shasta - you go girl.  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/1/1_4_126.gif)

That's cute, Merr! I looked for a whip pic and my computer started going crazy sending me "questionable" websites.  LOL. So I'm glad you found an appropriate one.
Title: Re: Jack's Turn (NC-17)
Post by: Dagi on June 30, 2007, 01:03:38 am
This story is intended for adults only.

Jack’s Turn by garycottle

.........

“What the hell you doin’, Jack?” asked Ennis, sleepy and confused.

Jack answered in a hushed tone, “I woke up and needed a fuck, so would you just lay still.”

“But...”

“Just shut up and enjoy it, will you?”

“Jack, can’t I roll over so I can put my legs over your shoulders?”

There was something in the way Ennis asked this, like a small boy pleading for a glass of water to stave off bedtime, that brought an impish smile to Jack’s face.  He put his lips up against Ennis’s ear and whispered in a wicked voice, “Only if you call me daddy.”

*shakes her head in disbelieve*

Gary, Gary, Gary, wow, I´m ........don´t know what to say (me!). That sure was hot. Wow. *Gulp*. And your descriptive writing blows me away.

And than that sweet ending, wow. Now I wrote three "wow"s in one stupid comment. You can easily see that you just blew me away. Perhaps it´s too

early in the morning for an intelligent comment....

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on June 30, 2007, 01:25:41 am
Quote
“Jack, can’t I roll over so I can put my legs over your shoulders?”

I've tried and I can't even see it in my mind's eye!! Would they "disengage" before the rollover? I could see it then. Well---I could if I uncover my eyes. LOL
Title: Re: Sweet Talk
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 30, 2007, 01:29:09 am
Ah, what a lovely tender moment littlewing.

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

ps. I thought the word "bum" was very British, don't you Americans use the word "Butt"?

We usually use the word butt, but I like bum!
Title: Re: After the Dance
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 30, 2007, 01:30:14 am
Ah littlewing, what a sexy strip tease performed especially for Ennis ... I bet you put yourself in Ennis' place didn't you? .. I know I did .... whoooo wheeeee!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

You know I did, Susie!
Title: Re: Sweet Talk Part 3
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 30, 2007, 01:31:20 am
Good heavens littlewing, you are out of control!! That last line just kills me ... you wouldn't catch me being so rude !!! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/1/1_4_103.gif)


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Opps!!  :laugh:
Title: Re: Sweet Talk Part 3
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 30, 2007, 01:32:45 am
Wow littlewing!  Ennis as a submissive bottom boy?  You know that's not how I see him, but that's damn sexy.

Gary

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/1/1_4_57.gif) (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/1/1_4_59.gif) (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/470.gif)

 :laugh: :laugh: Thanks, Gary!
Title: Re: Sweet Talk Part 3
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 30, 2007, 01:33:57 am
That was something for me, yeeehaaawww!

You nnnaaaaassssty girl ("Littlewing" really is toooo innocent a name for you!!!)!

Give us mooore! part 4 please! For Eric!





Sure!  For Eric!  Tomorrow, okay?  I planned something a little different for tonight!  :)
Title: Re: Rack em up!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 30, 2007, 01:35:31 am
Rack em up! by Susie



Ennis watched admiringly as Jack leaned over the pool table to take his shot.  The white ball was near the far end and in order to pot the black into the corner pocket and claim yet another victory, Jack had to lie, stretched half way across the table. 

Ennis’ thoughts drifted as he observed Jack’s rear end…. peeling off Jack’s clothing, one item at a time, leaving his jeans until last, savoring each moment as he slowly slid them down to his ankles, revealing pale pink flesh, soft downy hair, and the perfectly toned, muscular roundness of his buttocks.

Moving in behind him, one hand caressing each cheek, massaging, circling, spreading them wide apart, ready to plunge in deep ….. “Whoo whee! That’s three games to one, bud!  You sure you wanna take me on again? Hey, you OK Ennis?”  Ennis reached for his pool cue, smiling to himself, “Rack em up!” he ordered…. Later.... he thought.



(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/7/7_8_6v.gif)

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Susie, this is brilliant!  Very well written and original.  I can't get enough of your writing.  You truly are a master!
Title: Re: Sweet Talk
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 30, 2007, 01:36:51 am
Turabout time huh, Marie!

How about giving Jack a little more experience so he can develop better technique!   ;D

Hey, Clyde!  I've missed you here!

Thanks for your suggestion!  I'll get to work on it!  :)
Title: Re: Jack's Turn (NC-17)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 30, 2007, 01:43:27 am
This story is intended for adults only.


There was something in the way Ennis asked this, like a small boy pleading for a glass of water to stave off bedtime, that brought an impish smile to Jack’s face.  He put his lips up against Ennis’s ear and whispered in a wicked voice, “Only if you call me daddy.”

Superb, Gary!  I truly enjoyed reading every word of this.  You are fearless in describing Jack and Ennis' peivate moments, and I really appreciate that!  This fic is extremely well written, hot and sexy as hell!  Wonderful!
Title: The Secretary
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 30, 2007, 01:51:28 am
Trisha walked into Aguirre’s trailer carrying a thermos of coffee and a dozen donuts.  Joe Aguirre hired Trisha Smith as his secretary a few months after Ennis and Jack left Brokeback.  Paperwork was piling up, and he needed someone to help with the phones, typing, hiring.  Jack Twist just left, looking for work, moments before Trisha arrived.

“Who was that, Mr. Aguirre?"  Trisha asked with a twinkle in her eye as she handed Joe his coffee and donuts.

“Was he looking for work?”

 Aguirre sipped at his coffee and took a bite of a French cruller.  “Yeah, that pissant had the nerve to return here looking for a job.”  Aguirre began.  “But after the way he behaved last year, ain’t no way in hell I’m gonna rehire Jack Twist!”  Trisha took a seat behind her desk.

 “Well, he sure is a handsome man!”  Trisha began as she poured herself a cup of warm coffee from the thermos.  “I sure would like to be friends with someone like him!”

Aguirre studied Trisha and wondered if he made a mistake in hiring someone.  But there was work to be done, and he couldn’t do it all by himself.  Trisha came highly recommended, finished at the top of her class in secretarial school.  But she was young, lovely, single, and somewhat desperate.  Aguirre supposed it was natural for Trisha to be attracted to the handsome Jack Twist.

“You’re wastin’ your time there, my girl!”  Aguirre told Trisha with a smirk.  And he remembered several months back when he made a trip to camp to see his hands, Jack Twist and Ennis Del Mar.  Aguirre couldn’t recall why he went up there to see them, but he’ll never forget what he saw!

“Now enough of this idle chit chat!”  Aguirre admonished Trisha with a point of his finger.  “Back to work!”

“What a mean ole fart!”  Trisha thought as she turned to her typewriter.  But she was never one to be discouraged from pursuing something she wanted.  When Aguirre left the trailer to inspect the herd, Tricia grabbed his rolodex and looked for the name and number of one Jack Twist…
Title: Re: The Secretary
Post by: Toycoon on June 30, 2007, 02:00:53 am
Quote
When Aguirre left the trailer to inspect the herd, Tricia grabbed his rolodex and looked for the name and number of one Jack Twist…

This is great little story, littlewing1957. You really are good at this. I'm hiring you when I start my own toy company! You never run out of ideas!

Merr, IMDb sucks now! I'm sorry but I can't deal with the homophobic baloney any more.

Hey you guys, check out my latest project on the Brokeback Mountain Craft Corner. It's really fun (and easy to make)!
Title: Re: Sweet Talk
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 30, 2007, 02:03:03 am
Marie, I can't wait to read that one.  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_6_2.gif)

Did you decide to leave IMDb alone.  I went on there today for about 10 minutes and there was so much hate.

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_1_21.gif)
Merrily

No, I'm still there.  I can't stand back and see that Board slip to the darkside.  I know who you mean, though.  That guy is trolling on a lot of Boards, not just BBM!
Title: Re: The Secretary
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 30, 2007, 02:07:52 am
This is great little story, littlewing1957. You really are good at this. I'm hiring you when I start my own toy company! You never run out of ideas!

Merr, IMDb sucks now! I'm sorry but I can't deal with the homophobic baloney any more.

Hey you guys, check out my latest project on the Brokeback Mountain Craft Corner. It's really fun (and easy to make)!

Thanks for your kind words, Toycoon.  And I know how you feel about IMDB.  I gotta get over to the craft corner.  I knew there was something I've been meaning to do!   :)
Title: Re: The Secretary
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 30, 2007, 02:18:42 am
littlewing, I hope the ... means that we are going to have a Part 2?  Kind of a mystery you got going on there.  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/82.gif)

M

I don't know Merr, I'll see!
Title: Re: Sweet Talk
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 30, 2007, 02:21:16 am
There's more than one.  Every topic I look at is like that.  And, I went on another movie board yesterday and the same thing was going on.  To think I put up with that for so long.  I am so glad to be here and that our "gang" is here too.  There is such a positive atmosphere here.

I felt like you for so long - couldn't bear to leave, but going back is a real wakeup call.

M

I'm only there for one reason, and I can't leave until I'm satisfied..oh, I'll tell you later.  :)
Title: Re: The Secretary
Post by: Dagi on June 30, 2007, 08:04:18 am
Trisha walked into Aguirre’s trailer carrying a thermos of coffee and a dozen donuts.  Joe Aguirre hired Trisha Smith as his secretary a few months after Ennis and Jack left Brokeback.  Paperwork was piling up, and he needed someone to help with the phones, typing, hiring.  Jack Twist just left, looking for work, moments before Trisha arrived.

“Who was that, Mr. Aguirre?"  Trisha asked with a twinkle in her eye as she handed Joe his coffee and donuts.

“Was he looking for work?”

 Aguirre sipped at his coffee and took a bite of a French cruller.  “Yeah, that pissant had the nerve to return here looking for a job.”  Aguirre began.  “But after the way he behaved last year, ain’t no way in hell I’m gonna rehire Jack Twist!”  Trisha took a seat behind her desk.


 “Well, he sure is a handsome man!”  Trisha began as she poured herself a cup of warm coffee from the thermos.  “I sure would like to be friends with someone like him!”

Aguirre studied Trisha and wondered if he made a mistake in hiring someone.  But there was work to be done, and he couldn’t do it all by himself.  Trisha came highly recommended, finished at the top of her class in secretarial school.  But she was young, lovely, single, and somewhat desperate.  Aguirre supposed it was natural for Trisha to be attracted to the handsome Jack Twist.

“You’re wastin’ your time there, my girl!”  Aguirre told Trisha with a smirk.  And he remembered several months back when he made a trip to camp to see his hands, Jack Twist and Ennis Del Mar.  Aguirre couldn’t recall why he went up there to see them, but he’ll never forget what he saw!

“Now enough of this idle chit chat!”  Aguirre admonished Trisha with a point of his finger.  “Back to work!”

“What a mean ole fart!”  Trisha thought as she turned to her typewriter.  But she was never one to be discouraged from pursuing something she wanted.  When Aguirre left the trailer to inspect the herd, Tricia grabbed his rolodex and looked for the name and number of one Jack Twist…



Hi Littlewing, what are you up to now?

I liked that Arguirre didn´t remember why he had come up to Jack but remembered well what he had seen :laugh:. I bet our boys left some impression

here... (makes me think of Miss Parker...! )

Dagi
Title: Re: The Secretary
Post by: Clyde-B on June 30, 2007, 11:56:04 am
  Tricia grabbed his rolodex and looked for the name and number of one Jack Twist…


Marie,

When you were writing this you didn't happen to get a look at the number did you?   ;D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on June 30, 2007, 12:38:13 pm
(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_11_6.gif)

Hi Shasta darlin'.  I think maybe you're over thinking it a bit.   ;D

Gary

LOL, Gary! What can I say? I'm a "visual" learner.
Title: Re: The Secretary
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 30, 2007, 08:50:28 pm
Marie,

When you were writing this you didn't happen to get a look at the number did you?   ;D

Clyde, I love you!  :) 
Title: Re: The Secretary
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 30, 2007, 08:51:54 pm

Hi Littlewing, what are you up to now?

I liked that Arguirre didn´t remember why he had come up to Jack but remembered well what he had seen :laugh:. I bet our boys left some impression

here... (makes me think of Miss Parker...! )

Dagi

 :laugh:  :laugh:  Hi, Dagi!  This strange little tale has been at the back of my mind for awhile now.  I don't know if I'll continue it, though!  :)
Title: Re: Jack's Turn (NC-17)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 30, 2007, 08:53:13 pm
Thanks so much littlewing.  Your kind words mean a lot to me.   :)

Gary

You're more than welcome, Sweets!
Title: Re: The Secretary
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 30, 2007, 08:58:29 pm
Great story telling, littlewing.  You kept me wonding what was going to happen next.  And now I'm wondering if this will be the last we see of young Trisha.

Interesting what you did with Aguirre, too.  You kept his attitude toward Jack ambiguous.  I happen to be of the school that thinks Aguirre really didn't mind Jack and Ennis fooling around.  I think he's one of those honest day's work type people, and he was upset that some of the sheep had been lost, and some where mixed up with that other herd.  He referred to what he saw Jack and Ennis doing as stemming the rose which sounds kind of nutreal to me.  He implied they were goofing off and not doing their jobs, and he most pointed did not call them queers when obviously he could have.

I remember reading AP's comments were she said she had talked to an old guy who had been in Aguirre's position, and according to her, he told her that he sent boys up in the high meadows in pairs specifically so they could take care of each other if they got lonely.   ;)  I think Aguirre is practical in this way.  If stemming the rose had resulted in a higher survival rate for the sheep he would not have cared, would not have said anything about it, and would have hired Jack on for another summer.  That's just my take on the man, but I know the door is open for other views.

Gary

I totally agree with your views on Aguirre's attitude, Gary!  I think Aguirre was shocked, but okay with E&J's relationship.  I, too, read about livestock owners sending guys up in pairs in case they got lonely.  Aguirre probably felt the boys could take care of one another, and leave the sheep alone, if you know what I mean! ;)

Gary, I believe others expressed an interest in hearing more.  If you would like me to add to the story, I'll consider it!
Title: Close Call
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 30, 2007, 09:52:45 pm
An 80 year old Ennis Del Mar returned to his home after a 2 month stay in the County Hospital.  He suffered a moderate heart attack, and the doctors released him reluctantly, and only under the condition that he had someone home at all times to look after him.  As it turned out, Alma Jr. was available to move in with her dad, as her husband passed away several years ago, and her 2 children left home even before Kurt died.  Ennis considered himself a very lucky man to not only survive an attack that could have killed him, but to have a loving daughter – well – 2 loving daughters!  Jenny bought him the house shortly before she moved overseas to pursue a singing career. 

Alma practically carried a still weak Ennis into the living room, and lowered him to the couch.  She made him as comfortable as she could before heading to the kitchen to put away the few groceries purchased earlier.  Ennis found himself alone in his living room and allowed his thoughts to drift back to his first night in the ICU.  He was groggy from the medicines, but he was certain he heard a familiar voice.  It was muffled and vague at first, but became clearer, louder.  Ennis was sure he heard the words, “Come to me, Baby!”  The voice was sad, hesitant.  Ennis knew who called him, but he wasn’t ready to go just yet. 

The hospital sent over a social worker to check on Ennis’ progress, and to make sure that someone was at the house to care for him.  Alma offered the young man a cup of coffee and left them alone to have a talk.  The young man asked Ennis if he was experiencing any depression, loneliness, fear, regret.  Ennis shook his head no, but thought he had better tell the worker about the voice he heard.  The young man listened to Ennis recount the words, “Come to me, Baby” with particular interest. 

“And you say you know who was calling you?”  The young man asked as he took notes.  “Why don’t you tell me who that person is?”

“Was!”  Ennis began.  “Was!”  He pulled his hand-made blanket up to his chin and fought back tears.

“His name was Jack Twist and we was herding sheep almost 60 years ago up on Brokeback Mountain….”
Title: Re: Close Call
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 30, 2007, 11:45:01 pm
Oh, Marie.  I read this story 20 minutes ago and it just threw me for a loop.  It hit me really hard - 60 years and he is still loving Jack.  So, so so so sad.  Maybe they will meet again in the hereafter. I hope so.  I'm glad Ennis has Junior though.  What about Junior's mom? 

I loved it Marie.  You sure know how to get my emotions raging.  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_9_7.gif)
Love,

Merrily

Hi, Merr!  I'm so glad you liked the story.  I wasn't sure how it would be received.  I'll write a more upbeat story next time!
Title: Re: Close Call
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 30, 2007, 11:47:37 pm
Heartbreaking, littlewing.  I like the idea of Ennis living to be an old man, and it's wonderful that Jenny bought him a house, and Jr. is looking after him, but it's hard to think of Ennis falling apart.  And Alma Jr. carrying him...  Poor Ennis.

Good story!

Gary

Gary, I had a hard time imagining Ennis living to 80, with the smoking, the divorce, the heartbreak of Jack's passing, and all.  But it is possible to have someone in Ennis' condition live to be 80, I guess.  Or is this anouther AU piece?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 01, 2007, 01:13:57 am
Great to see you Spicey!! Sorry that your folks aren't well. That's very stressful. Come on the board whenever you get a chance---it's good stress relief!! Missed ya---take care mate!!
Title: Re: Close Call
Post by: Dagi on July 01, 2007, 05:42:34 am
An 80 year old Ennis Del Mar returned to his home after a 2 month stay in the County Hospital.  He suffered a moderate heart attack, and the doctors released him reluctantly, and only under the condition that he had someone home at all times to look after him.  As it turned out, Alma Jr. was available to move in with her dad, as her husband passed away several years ago, and her 2 children left home even before Kurt died.  Ennis considered himself a very lucky man to not only survive an attack that could have killed him, but to have a loving daughter – well – 2 loving daughters!  Jenny bought him the house shortly before she moved overseas to pursue a singing career. 

Alma practically carried a still weak Ennis into the living room, and lowered him to the couch.  She made him as comfortable as she could before heading to the kitchen to put away the few groceries purchased earlier.  Ennis found himself alone in his living room and allowed his thoughts to drift back to his first night in the ICU.  He was groggy from the medicines, but he was certain he heard a familiar voice.  It was muffled and vague at first, but became clearer, louder.  Ennis was sure he heard the words, “Come to me, Baby!”  The voice was sad, hesitant.  Ennis knew who called him, but he wasn’t ready to go just yet. 

The hospital sent over a social worker to check on Ennis’ progress, and to make sure that someone was at the house to care for him.  Alma offered the young man a cup of coffee and left them alone to have a talk.  The young man asked Ennis if he was experiencing any depression, loneliness, fear, regret.  Ennis shook his head no, but thought he had better tell the worker about the voice he heard.  The young man listened to Ennis recount the words, “Come to me, Baby” with particular interest. 

“And you say you know who was calling you?”  The young man asked as he took notes.  “Why don’t you tell me who that person is?”

“Was!”  Ennis began.  “Was!”  He pulled his hand-made blanket up to his chin and fought back tears.

“His name was Jack Twist and we was herding sheep almost 60 years ago up on Brokeback Mountain….”


What a touching story, Marie. And so good to know that he will have someone to lead him across the line and welcome him home when it´s time for him to go.

Thank you !

Dagi
Title: Re: Pete's Saloon
Post by: Dagi on July 01, 2007, 05:47:29 am
Gary, I love the image of ours boys dancing in a tight embrace, so tight that one of them even can fall asleep and is still held by the other one. They probably didn´t speak it out, but they sure knew how to show love. I especially loved that line:

.... but they allowed the passion to fade.  After two nights of lovemaking the old urgency was replaced by a different yearning.


Thank you for posting it again.

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 01, 2007, 06:30:51 am
Our dearest Spiceylife,

come here whenever you need some distraction, it´s okay that you "don´t leave no sign", we know that you are there and we are with you in our

thoughts. I wish you strength. And don´t worry about being a ´downer´. We all want to be there for each other. This is not a place to come only with a

smile on your face, but a family that sticks together in hard times as well. Take what you need, and give only what you can give.

Take care, honey, I´m sending you all my love.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on July 01, 2007, 12:11:53 pm
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Hi, guys.
I really want you to know that I haven’t been deliberately away from you by choice, but rather by necessity, unfortunately.  I really miss you all.

Dear Spiceylife,
I am so sorry to hear of your situation. I hope you have some loving support to take care of your feelings and at least to take of your household. There's no question, you must take care of your parents; nothing else is as important. Your parents need you, especially your daddy. We love you, too but believe me, we'll keep. You know where to find us. Come back when you can, when you need a little diversion and a pinch of 'nasty'.
Warmest regards,
Toycoon
Title: Re: Pete's Saloon
Post by: Toycoon on July 01, 2007, 12:42:07 pm
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Also, after being crowned the most nasty person here, at least for a day, I wanted to show my softer, more romantic side.

Aww gee whiz, garycottle! We would love to see your soft, romantic side. Now drop them drawers and lets have a look!
Title: Re: Pete's Saloon
Post by: Dagi on July 01, 2007, 12:46:30 pm
Thanks so much, Dagi.  This was my little homage to the dozy embrace.

And that reminds me, I have been looking at monuments because I'm going to buy one for my parent's graves soon, and an idea popped into my head.  Wouldn't it be great if someone made a life-sized bronze statue of Jack and Ennis in their classic dozy embrace so it could be placed at the head of the graves of a gay couple?   :)

Gary

This is a wunderful, lovely idea, Gary. You are a romantic person, that´s for sure.
Title: Red and Sweet
Post by: Dagi on July 01, 2007, 12:49:26 pm
Red and Sweet by Dagi

„Look what I found on the way back!“ Ennis dismounted quickly, took one of the tiny red fruits out of his Resistol and put it without asking right between Jack´s lips.

„Mmmmm, wild raspberries, love them...“ mumbled Jack, savouring the sweetness mixed with the taste of Ennis´ hands.

Ennis kept feeding Jack, smiling happily, enjoying  the sense of the warm moist soft lips when out of a sudden Jack caught hold of his hand, and started to lick the juice off his thumb, then sucked each single finger deep into his hot mouth, wrapping his tongue around it, closing his lips tightly, and unzipped Ennis´ jeans...
Title: Re: Red and Sweet
Post by: Toycoon on July 01, 2007, 12:55:40 pm
Red and Sweet by Dagi

„Look what I found on the way back!“ Ennis dismounted quickly, took one of the tiny red fruits out of his Resistol and put it without asking right between Jack´s lips.

„Mmmmm, wild raspberries, love them...“ mumbled Jack, savouring the sweetness mixed with the taste of Ennis´ hands.

Ennis kept feeding Jack, smiling happily, enjoying the sense of the warm moist soft lip's when out of a sudden Jack caught hold of his hand, and started to lick the juice off his thumb, then sucked each single finger deep into his hot mouth, wrapping his tongue around it, closing his lips tightly, and unzipped Ennis' jeans...

Very nice, Miss Dagi. Very erotic and visual. And only three sentences, I might add. See, I told you, it can be done.
Title: Re: Red and Sweet
Post by: Dagi on July 01, 2007, 01:02:08 pm
Very nice, Miss Dagi. Very erotic and visual. And only three sentences, I might add. See, I told you, it can be done.

Thank you so much, MOT3SF! I´ve done a few 3S meanwhile, I think! Have to count them...
Title: Re: Red and Sweet
Post by: Dagi on July 01, 2007, 03:01:45 pm
MMM MM  This one truly is sweet and sexy, Dagi.

Gary

thank you, my sweet and sexy boy.

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Damn seeds.

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Title: A Summer Morning 1957
Post by: Dagi on July 01, 2007, 03:09:31 pm
I dedicate this one to Merrily.

A Summer Morning 1957 by Dagi

Jack woke up in the hay with his still sound asleep cousin Eric in his arms. He didn´t remember how they had gotten into that position, spooned up closely, maybe this - despite his age - always frightful boy had been searching for comfort in the night.
Jack enjoyed the warmth of Eric´s body, felt his hard dick against the boy´s butt. Following a sudden impulse he put his palm on Eric´s otherwise tiny, but now that it was erect, rather impressive penis and, overwhelmed by what he sensed, a low moan escaped from his throat.
Much to his surprise his cousin placed his own hand upon Jack´s, pressing it even more onto his little hard cock. The sound of his own groan finally woke him up completely, and he jumped up and out and would avoid  looking Jack in the eye for the rest of the summer.


Jack pulled the blanket aside, searched for Ennis big, strong hand and pressed it onto his hot, throbbing member, moaning huskily into the bedroll....
Title: Re: A Summer Morning 1957
Post by: Dagi on July 01, 2007, 03:53:40 pm
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Wow Dagi!  A lot of pubescent boys fool around with each other.  (OMG!  The memories your story brought back.   ;D )  But Jack feeling up his own cousin...  I didn't even know the Twists were from West Virginia.   :P

Thanks so much for the deliciously naughty story.

Gary

Thank you, Gary, I´m glad you enjoyed it !!

Dagi
Title: Re: A Summer Morning 1957
Post by: Toycoon on July 01, 2007, 08:33:08 pm
I missed this story earlier. Dagi, you dirty girl! Shame on you. Keep 'em coming! :D
Title: Jack with Ennis Fan Fic on BetterMost
Post by: Toycoon on July 01, 2007, 08:37:09 pm
This next story is for my dear Susiebell and all the other lovers of men's golden globes.
Title: Come and get it!
Post by: Toycoon on July 01, 2007, 08:38:12 pm
Jack sat on an old tree stump, shirtless in the noonday sun, gazing off into the distance past the sheep, rubbing his forehead and thinking about all of the events of the night previous.

Like an Indian brave, Ennis silently snuck up behind Jack, yanked off his black cowboy hat and took off running down the hillside shouting, "Come an' get it!" with Jack, very close behind him.

Jack made a flying leap grabbing the sides of Ennis' trousers, exposing his butt and sending them both to the ground rolling and laughing hysterically then, Jack took a tender bite of Ennis' ass.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 01, 2007, 09:28:42 pm
Hi, guys.

I really want you to know that I haven’t been deliberately away from you by choice, but rather by necessity, unfortunately.  I really miss you all.

My father has Parkinson’s Disease.  He’s had it for 15 years now, but over the past few months, his daily medications have begun to lose their effectiveness.  This happens with Parkinson’s.  Over time, the tablets don’t work as well and the situation deteriorates.  That’s where we are now, and it’s a mighty struggle for him.  My mother isn’t getting any younger and she’s struggling, too.  She’s been trying to care for my father at home, which is proving more difficult with each passing week.

I’ve been trying to work, study, run back and forth between two households, visit my grandmother and care for the folks as best I can.  It ain’t easy!  And just when it looked as though things may settle down a little, and I might find the time to come back here, like last week, it somehow all goes to pieces overnight and I need to be there again.  *sigh*

So that’s why I haven’t been here recently.  Dad is going back to hospital today for reassessment, so that will give us a chance to get back on our feet again. 

Sorry to be such a ‘downer’, everyone, and sorry to anybody I haven’t replied to yet.  It’s been a difficult few months.  Anyway, this thread is giving me a great laugh & a great read.  I’ll be back for more this afternoon, after the hospital.  Thanks, lovely friends, and thank you for letting me get that off my chest.


Hi, Spiceylife!  Thanks for the post, and for telling us what's been going on with you.  I am so sorry to hear about the troubles you're having.  All my best to you and your family.  We really miss you here, and will be happy when you can return to us.  It is good to know that you've never really left.  Be well, my sweet!  I'm sending a lot of positive energy your way!  :)
Title: Re: The Secretary
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 01, 2007, 09:29:37 pm
Hi there littlewing.  I'm happy to let your heart take you where ever it wants to take you.  But with that said, I would be interesting in hearing more about the secretery, and Aguirre too for that matter.

Gary

Thanks, Gary!  I'll work on it.
Title: Re: Pete's Saloon
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 01, 2007, 09:31:50 pm
Pete’s Saloon by garycottle

Thank God it was warm this time.  It was June, the beginning of summer, and Jack and Ennis had managed to get up to the cabin.  For three days running they had hunted elk–unsuccessfully as it turns out–and they had spent the first two nights joined in easy passion with the lights out.  After dinner on the third night they sat out on the porch in their shirtsleeves, rocking in twin rockers.  They didn’t say much.  Instead they listened to the night music of the wilderness.  It was after nine, and Ennis considered going on to bed.  But Jack had another notion.  He wanted to drive down the mountain and get a drink.

“We got beer here.”

“Come on, Ennis.  There’s a place right at the turnoff.”

“It’ll take us over an hour to get down there, and that means an hour gettin’ back,” said Ennis, sounding bullheaded, but somehow communicating that he had in fact given in.

It was close to eleven by the time they got to the bar, which was a plane cinder block building that had once served as a Texaco station.  The pumps had been removed, the windows had been painted over, and a neon sign over the door read Pete’s Place.  The sign went dark just as the boys pulled up. 

On finding out they had missed last call Ennis’s first instinct was to turn around and go back.  But Jack jumped out of the truck when he saw a stooped, weathered man with grey hair in need of a cut come out and head toward the only other pickup in the lot. 

“You Pete?” Jack asked, open and friendly.

The man didn’t look up and continued toward his truck.  “We’re closed.  Slow night, so I’m going home.  Come back tomorrow.”

Ennis got out, stood there at the fender, and watched Jack put the charm to the old guy.

“Come one, man,” Jack said sounding like a kid asking for one more ice cream cone.  “My friend and I are camping up in the mountains, and we drove near two hours to get here.”

That cinched the deal.  Old Pete hesitated a moment, and then looked up at Jack.  “Tell you what, you boys go on in, drink what you want, and put the money on the counter.”  He then threw his key ring over.  Jack came close to missing it.  “Lock up when you’re finished, and put that on the ledge over the door.”

After two beers Jack got up, plugged in the jukebox, and made a selection.  The quiet, ghostlike hush of the room was suddenly replaced with Patsy Cline singing Crazy.

When Jack indicated that they should dance, Ennis looked at him like a frightened child.

“Come on, friend.  Nobody’s here.  Nobody’s goin’ a see.”

The two met on the worn linoleum and embraced.  Their dicks quickly hardened as they pressed against each other, but they allowed the passion to fade.  After two nights of lovemaking the old urgency was replaced by a different yearning.  They danced for a long time, until the gentle sways slowed and stopped altogether.  Then Ennis noticed he held a sleeping boy.

“Come on, Jack,” he whispered.  “Time to go home.”

Another one of my favorites, Gary!  Thanks for posting!
Title: Re: Pete's Saloon
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 01, 2007, 09:38:55 pm
Thanks so much, Dagi.  This was my little homage to the dozy embrace.

And that reminds me, I have been looking at monuments because I'm going to buy one for my parent's graves soon, and an idea popped into my head.  Wouldn't it be great if someone made a life-sized bronze statue of Jack and Ennis in their classic dozy embrace so it could be placed at the head of the graves of a gay couple?   :)

Gary

Beautiful sentiment, Gary!  Very lovely!
Title: Re: Close Call
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 01, 2007, 09:39:37 pm
What a touching story, Marie. And so good to know that he will have someone to lead him across the line and welcome him home when it´s time for him to go.

Thank you !

Dagi

Thanks Dagi, Honey!
Title: Re: Red and Sweet
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 01, 2007, 09:42:54 pm
Red and Sweet by Dagi

„Look what I found on the way back!“ Ennis dismounted quickly, took one of the tiny red fruits out of his Resistol and put it without asking right between Jack´s lips.

„Mmmmm, wild raspberries, love them...“ mumbled Jack, savouring the sweetness mixed with the taste of Ennis´ hands.

Ennis kept feeding Jack, smiling happily, enjoying  the sense of the warm moist soft lips when out of a sudden Jack caught hold of his hand, and started to lick the juice off his thumb, then sucked each single finger deep into his hot mouth, wrapping his tongue around it, closing his lips tightly, and unzipped Ennis´ jeans...

Dagi, this is certainly hot, but it is also romantic, as well.  I love hoe the sensuous act of eating leads to other things!  Lovely work, Sweetheart!
Title: Re: A Summer Morning 1957
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 01, 2007, 09:44:32 pm
I dedicate this one to Merrily.

A Summer Morning 1957 by Dagi

Jack woke up in the hay with his still sound asleep cousin Eric in his arms. He didn´t remember how they had gotten into that position, spooned up closely, maybe this - despite his age - always frightful boy had been searching for comfort in the night.
Jack enjoyed the warmth of Eric´s body, felt his hard dick against the boy´s butt. Following a sudden impulse he put his palm on Eric´s otherwise tiny, but now that it was erect, rather impressive penis and, overwhelmed by what he sensed, a low moan escaped from his throat.
Much to his surprise his cousin placed his own hand upon Jack´s, pressing it even more onto his little hard cock. The sound of his own groan finally woke him up completely, and he jumped up and out and would avoid  looking Jack in the eye for the rest of the summer.


Jack pulled the blanket aside, searched for Ennis big, strong hand and pressed it onto his hot, throbbing member, moaning huskily into the bedroll....

Brilliant!  I can't even find the words, Dagi! 
Title: Re: A Summer Morning 1957
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 01, 2007, 09:46:01 pm
Getting jiggy with his cousin is just so naughty, and very sexy ... not that I would do it with my one and only cousin ... eeuw!



Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Oh, Susie, I know what you mean!!!
Title: Re: Close Call
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 01, 2007, 09:46:38 pm
Marie, it wasn't just sad, but hopeful too.  Ennis knows that Jack is waiting for him.  How many of us have that luxury?  Beautiful.  I am so awed by your writing.

Merr

Thank you so much, Merr!  :D
Title: Come and Get It (part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 01, 2007, 10:09:58 pm
Susie, I want to dedicate Part 2 to you, as well!


“Owwww!”  Ennis teased, as Jack placed tiny, soft bites along his bum cheeks!  "Bite me a little more, Rodeo, I kinda like it,”  Ennis exclaimed. Jack giggled as he licked as well as bit, first along the swell of Ennis’ buttocks, and then along his deep and narrow slit.  Ennis pulled his bum away as Jack poised to place his tongue where the sun don’t shine!

Jack faced Ennis with a puzzled look.  “Let me do it, Ennis... I wanna!”  But Ennis pulled Jack’s face to his, gently forced his tongue down Jack’s throat.  "Look, I wanna taste more of you too, but how are we gonna do this?  Who does what to who first?" 

Jack had an idea.  “Look, just follow my lead, Cowboy.  This is gonna be real good.  That is, if you’re game.”  Ennis nodded vigorously, and Jack took his position, flat out on the ground.  “Now face my feet!”  Jack ordered huskily.  Ennis understood, and buried his head between Jack’s thighs.  He positioned his bum right over Jack’s eager mouth.  “Come and get it, Rodeo,”  Ennis yelled as Jack grabbed his hips and pulled him down…
Title: Re: Come and Get It (part 2)
Post by: Toycoon on July 01, 2007, 10:43:14 pm
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Ennis pulled his bum away as Jack poised to place his tongue where the sun don’t shine!

Littlewing1957, you are a wild woman! I'm certain this can be attributed to the dangerous influence of the notorious bum biter, Susiebell. She has us all under her nasty spell! Even the shy, unassuming Garycottle.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on July 02, 2007, 12:24:06 am
Hey folks,
I just wanted to wish everyone a Happy Independence Day. I'm "goin' 'round the coffee pot to find the handle" so to speak. I'm going on vacation to sunny (and hopefully, not rainy) Florida for a week. I'll miss you guys!
Title: Re: Come and get it!
Post by: Toycoon on July 02, 2007, 12:31:48 am
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Littlewing will have the boys doing some 69 rump munching.

Shaaa! Garycottle, don't pretend you don't like you dirty birdie, you!

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We went from light, romantic comedy to something you'd pick up at that shop with the booths in back that smell like Clorox.

What are you on about now?!


Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 02, 2007, 12:32:24 am
We will miss you too, friend! (http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x221/Shasta542/6_24_6Hugs-vi.gif)

Have fun in Florida!! (http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x221/Shasta542/DogwithFlagHappy4th-vi.gif)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 02, 2007, 12:51:09 am
OMG so many new sites and stories. I have to come back at midday, when my kids sleep...

23 guests are viewing this topic!!!!
Title: Re: Come and get it!
Post by: Dagi on July 02, 2007, 12:53:56 am
Toycoon, I would call you and Marie a tag team, but given the kind of stories you write I'm bowled over by the implication. 

Gary

:laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
Title: Re: Red and Sweet
Post by: Dagi on July 02, 2007, 04:19:57 am
Ooh Dagi, so delicious and juicy!  I've got some raspberries in the fridge ... now where is that hubby of mine??

Lovely story honey!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Thank you sweetheart. Hope you had some fun with your raspberries!

Dagi
Title: Re: A Summer Morning 1957
Post by: Dagi on July 02, 2007, 04:22:36 am
Dagi, you're on a roll tonight! Getting jiggy with his cousin is just so naughty, and very sexy ... not that I would do it with my one and only cousin ... eeuw!

Very sexy story honey!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Me neither. And that´s a real meneither, not a jackmeneither

Thanks for your nice words!

Dagi
Title: Re: A Summer Morning 1957
Post by: Dagi on July 02, 2007, 04:25:49 am
Thank you Dagi, you really woke me up too.  Very hot - I love the way your mind thinks.  "Guns going off"  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/403.gif)

Merr

Thank you, Merrily! My mind does all them things by itself, you know that I´m as innocent as the rest of them girls here ;D

Dagi

my grammar sure goes to hell here.
Title: Re: A Summer Morning 1957
Post by: Dagi on July 02, 2007, 04:27:42 am
I missed this story earlier. Dagi, you dirty girl! Shame on you. Keep 'em coming! :D

Thank you toycoon! I still have that Basque thing in the oven ( ;D ). I´ll write it especially for you.

Dagi
Title: Re: Red and Sweet
Post by: Dagi on July 02, 2007, 04:33:14 am
Dagi, this is certainly hot, but it is also romantic, as well.  I love how the sensuous act of eating leads to other things!  Lovely work, Sweetheart!

Me too!! Thanks, Marie, honey!
Title: Re: Come and Get It (part 2)
Post by: Dagi on July 02, 2007, 04:37:50 am
Susie, I want to dedicate Part 2 to you, as well!


“Owwww!”  Ennis teased, as Jack placed tiny, soft bites along his bum cheeks!  "Bite me a little more, Rodeo, I kinda like it,”  Ennis exclaimed. Jack giggled as he licked as well as bit, first along the swell of Ennis’ buttocks, and then along his deep and narrow slit.  Ennis pulled his bum away as Jack poised to place his tongue where the sun don’t shine!

Jack faced Ennis with a puzzled look.  “Let me do it, Ennis... I wanna!”  But Ennis pulled Jack’s face to his, gently forced his tongue down Jack’s throat.  "Look, I wanna taste more of you too, but how are we gonna do this?  Who does what to who first?" 

Jack had an idea.  “Look, just follow my lead, Cowboy.  This is gonna be real good.  That is, if you’re game.”  Ennis nodded vigorously, and Jack took his position, flat out on the ground.  “Now face my feet!”  Jack ordered huskily.  Ennis understood, and buried his head between Jack’s thighs.  He positioned his bum right over Jack’s eager mouth.  “Come and get it, Rodeo,”  Ennis yelled as Jack grabbed his hips and pulled him down…


Toycoon and Marie, you did it again! You are too much for me. So, so sexy. Love it!

Dagi
Title: Re: Come and Get It (part 2)
Post by: Dagi on July 02, 2007, 04:40:05 am
Littlewing1957, you are a wild woman! I'm certain this can be attributed to the dangerous influence of the notorious bum biter, Susiebell. She has us all under her nasty spell! Even the shy, unassuming Garycottle.

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Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 02, 2007, 05:10:01 am
I was in Main street USA, Disney, Florida on Independence Day 1989 .... I even made it on the telly in the evening news for about a 10th of a second!

We'll miss you honey!!  Have a brilliant time toycoon!! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/12/12_1_126.gif)


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

ps. I'm going away for a fortnight soon ... I don't know what I'm going to do without you all ... if I could just get my hands on £700, I could get me a real nice laptop with wireless broadband!

We will miss you Toycoon, and we expect you to come back with some hot stuff!

Oh Susie, and what are we gonna do without you? Two weeks! OMG!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 02, 2007, 05:13:38 am
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I was as pure as the driven snow before I met you lot!!

So was I! I´d say Toycoon is to be blamed (in absence, hehe). ;D I mean he started this thread.....hun?
Title: Re: Beans
Post by: Dagi on July 02, 2007, 06:46:24 am
Beans by Susie


“I’m sicka beans!” Jack moaned, pulling faces and stirring his fork idly around the can.

“They’re just fine … now quit yer hammerin’, dumbass!”

Jack smiled to himself, lifted out a fully loaded fork, pulled it back a little with his finger, took aim, and let go.  Splat! …. the beans landed on Ennis’ cheek and slowly dribbled down his neck.

Jack giggled, kneeling in front of a dumbfounded Ennis, and licked them clean off his face, “Hmmm … tastes better that way!”  He unbuttoned his lover’s shirt, smeared more beans over his chest, the tomato sauce forming a pool in his naval, and proceeded to lick and bite at them hungrily.

Ennis jumped up, laughing, wrestling Jack to the ground, pulling at his belt and emptying the entire contents of the can down the back of his jeans.

“Ah Sheeit, Ennis!”  Jack cried, unbuckling his jeans and sliding them off, his firm white bottom, coated with beans, the sauce oozing between his buttocks and down the inside of his thighs.

Ennis pulled him down onto all fours and playfully licked his cheek, “Hmmmm … you’re right, tastes much better this way!”

Jack sighed and glanced behind him, watching Ennis greedily tuck in, and with a sly smile, announced “Dinner’s served!”


   
Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Yeeehaaaw, it´s butt-time on Jack&Ennis !!!

Susie,  ;D ;D ;D ;D I love it!

Dagi

Raspberries, beans, hmmm what else could we make them lick off each other??
Title: Re: Beans
Post by: Toycoon on July 02, 2007, 09:48:29 am
Quote
Yeeehaaaw, it´s butt-time on Jack&Ennis !!!

Oh great! Butt-Time and I'm going on vacation. I gonna miss this stuff!

Hmmmm, I wonder if the have butt-time in Florida?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Penthesilea on July 02, 2007, 11:15:49 am
Hi Dagi and all contributors,

this posting is long over due  ;D.

Thank you to everyone who contributes his writings to this thread. I'm enjoying it.

And special thanks to Dagi for collecting the stories on the other thread. Makes it so much easier to keep track of 'em.  :)

 :-*
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 02, 2007, 04:55:48 pm
There are a lot of things I'd like to lick off Jack or Ennis (mostly dessert-type edibles), but it makes me a little woozy to think about eating crack beans--no matter who it's offa. I'd probably have to "just say no".

 :laugh:  :laugh:   (http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x221/Shasta542/DANCERS.gif)   :laugh:  :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 02, 2007, 06:12:13 pm
Susie said "bum note".   :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh: That's funny!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 02, 2007, 06:17:06 pm
Hi Dagi and all contributors,

this posting is long over due  ;D.

Thank you to everyone who contributes his writings to this thread. I'm enjoying it.

And special thanks to Dagi for collecting the stories on the other thread. Makes it so much easier to keep track of 'em.  :)

 :-*

You are very welcome, Penthesilea!!
Title: Re: Beans
Post by: Dagi on July 02, 2007, 06:19:59 pm
  Very funny and I can picture it! 

Merr

Well, I can even taste it  ;D

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 02, 2007, 06:20:27 pm
(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_11_6.gif)

Hi Shasta,

I can understand your reaction.  I can remember being totally shocked when I learned that people did thatBoulevard by Jim Grimsley is about a gay young man who leaves his small southern town and goes to New Orleans in the hopes of finding more guys like himself.  He gets a job in an adult book store, and he befriends an older, chatty, queeny gay man.  The older man tells him about rimming, and the boy is just amazed.  And he even accuses his older friend of lying.  "You're making that up.  Nobody would do that."  The older man is surprised that his veracity has been challenged and in a stunned and hurt tone he says, "Honey, I'm not making anything up."   ;D  That really cracked me up, if you'll pardon the pun.

Gary

LOL.  "cracked me up". You and Susie are punsters! (http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x221/Shasta542/smile008.gif)

That sounds like a good book, Gary.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 02, 2007, 06:27:00 pm
(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_11_6.gif)

Hi Shasta,

I can understand your reaction.  I can remember being totally shocked when I learned that people did thatBoulevard by Jim Grimsley is about a gay young man who leaves his small southern town and goes to New Orleans in the hopes of finding more guys like himself.  He gets a job in an adult book store, and he befriends an older, chatty, queeny gay man.  The older man tells him about rimming, and the boy is just amazed.  And he even accuses his older friend of lying.  "You're making that up.  Nobody would do that."  The older man is surprised that his veracity has been challenged and in a stunned and hurt tone he says, "Honey, I'm not making anything up."   ;D  That really cracked me up, if you'll pardon the pun.

Gary

Rimming. My vocabulary keeps expanding. I think I still lack the necessary words for talking about things like...politics or so, but I sure could talk eloquently about to boys making out. Now that´s what I call a baaaad, baaad influence.

Dagi ::)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 02, 2007, 06:29:59 pm
Rimming. My vocabulary keeps expanding. I think I still lack the necessary words for talking about things like...politics or so, but I sure could talk eloquently about to boys making out. Now that´s what I call a baaaad, baaad influence.

Dagi ::)

It's school every day here, Dagi! (http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x221/Shasta542/smileys.gif)
Title: Re: Beans
Post by: Dagi on July 02, 2007, 06:37:48 pm
Yup, now that you mention it, I can too Dagi.  Isn't it kinda late for you?

Merrily

Yup. Just came back from a party and felt like joining another party. But you are right, it´s time to refuel myself!

Good night everyone! And Shasta and Merrily: When will you write us some bum-stories? If you don´t, Ill have to repost my first bum-story that got notoriously deleted on IMDb. It would fit in here, I think.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 02, 2007, 06:40:52 pm
FUCK that damn time difference. FUCK it again. That was for you, Gary. My husband is waiting ;D.

Good night!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 02, 2007, 06:46:48 pm
Yup Shasta, I've heard of rimming but never knew exactly what it was.  Love your emoticons - very cute.  Did you finally find a program you can download?

Merr

Thanks, Merr. I didn't download a whole thing---I just put some on "Photobucket".  

LOL. It's not the butt that got me woozy---it's the beans. I think I have a vegetable aversion. Anyone ever see "A Christmas Story"? I have to look away when the little boy eats mashed potatoes like a baby piggy---that makes me woozy too. Just thinking about it---I'm light-headed.   :-X
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 02, 2007, 07:50:18 pm
Hey folks,
I just wanted to wish everyone a Happy Independence Day. I'm "goin' 'round the coffee pot to find the handle" so to speak. I'm going on vacation to sunny (and hopefully, not rainy) Florida for a week. I'll miss you guys!

Ah, Toycoon, we'll miss you!  I know I will!  Have a good time, and a happy, safe 4th of July!
Title: Re: Come and get it!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 02, 2007, 07:51:54 pm
Toycoon, this is such a playful, erotic little scene.  Wonder what happens next.  Oh wait, I think I know.  Littlewing will have the boys doing some 69 rump munching.  We went from light, romantic comedy to something you'd pick up at that shop with the booths in back that smell like Clorox.   ;D

I'm lovin' it, Toycoon and Marie.

Gary

AWWW  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 02, 2007, 09:05:41 pm
Definitely all his fault!   (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_1_124.gif)

I KNOW!! It's going to kill me!

 .... even if I am lying on Morgan Porth beach in Cornwall eating proper Cornish ice cream and reading my book...  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/28/28_1_16.gif)

 .... and running for cover as the heavens open!!! ...  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/28/28_2_4v.gif) .... Just your average British Summer Holiday!


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Enjoy your holiday, Sweets!  You know we'll be here when you get back.  Is this to be a romantic getaway with just the hubby, or will you bring the kids along?  Either way, I'm sure you'll love every moment!
Title: Re: Beans
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 02, 2007, 09:08:36 pm
Beans by Susie


“I’m sicka beans!” Jack moaned, pulling faces and stirring his fork idly around the can.

“They’re just fine … now quit yer hammerin’, dumbass!”

Jack smiled to himself, lifted out a fully loaded fork, pulled it back a little with his finger, took aim, and let go.  Splat! …. the beans landed on Ennis’ cheek and slowly dribbled down his neck.

Jack giggled, kneeling in front of a dumbfounded Ennis, and licked them clean off his face, “Hmmm … tastes better that way!”  He unbuttoned his lover’s shirt, smeared more beans over his chest, the tomato sauce forming a pool in his naval, and proceeded to lick and bite at them hungrily.

Ennis jumped up, laughing, wrestling Jack to the ground, pulling at his belt and emptying the entire contents of the can down the back of his jeans.

“Ah Sheeit, Ennis!”  Jack cried, unbuckling his jeans and sliding them off, his firm white bottom, coated with beans, the sauce oozing between his buttocks and down the inside of his thighs.

Ennis pulled him down onto all fours and playfully licked his cheek, “Hmmmm … you’re right, tastes much better this way!”

Jack sighed and glanced behind him, watching Ennis greedily tuck in, and with a sly smile, announced “Dinner’s served!”


   
Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Sweet, playful story, Susie!  I love "Dinner's Served!"  Very, very nice!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 02, 2007, 09:10:18 pm
There are a lot of things I'd like to lick off Jack or Ennis (mostly dessert-type edibles), but it makes me a little woozy to think about eating crack beans--no matter who it's offa. I'd probably have to "just say no".

 :laugh:  :laugh:   (http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x221/Shasta542/DANCERS.gif)   :laugh:  :laugh:

 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 02, 2007, 09:15:07 pm
(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/29/29_3_10.gif)

Hey, if you guys got a kick out of the word rimming it might interest you to know what feltching means.   ;D  That's when I guy goes down there after he's deposited his wad. 

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/23/23_3_6.gif)

Gary

P.S.  Susie now has an idea for her next story.

Now Gary, I didn't know about this one!  Thanks for telling us!  We really can learn something new everyday. 
Title: Re: Beans
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 02, 2007, 09:16:03 pm
Yup. Just came back from a party and felt like joining another party. But you are right, it´s time to refuel myself!

Good night everyone! And Shasta and Merrily: When will you write us some a bum-stories? If you don´t, Ill have to repost my first bum-story that got notoriously deleted on IMDb. It would fit in here, I think.

Dagi

Please post it here, Dagi!  I love that story!  So earthy and raw!!  ::)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 02, 2007, 09:55:09 pm
I'm not going until 28th July!  Everyone's coming, me, Graham, the kids, the dog and the in-laws ... it's going to be very cosy in our 8 birth caravan!! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/7/7_6_1.gif)   

Romantic getaway??  I can't remember what one of those is!  I know my kiddies aren't babies anymore but I still can't bear to go away without them ... pathetic I know!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif) 

Kids make vacations more fun!! In-laws? Meh. (Just kidding---I loved my in-laws; still do.)
Title: Pray for Him!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 02, 2007, 10:14:18 pm
Jim Bennett carried a barely conscious Jack Twist up to his front door.  “Poor soul!”  Jim thought as he propped an arm around Jack’s shoulder.  He was asked by the Pastor of Ephesians A.M.E. Church to see that Mr. Twist got home in one piece.  Jim knew Jack well, worked with him at Newsome’s for years.

Jack was pulled into Ephesians after a sister saw him on the sidewalk outside of the church, dancing and clapping, swaying in time to the music of the praise service: music so resonant that it could be heard from blocks away.  Jack was unbelievably drunk and incoherent, muttering something about Mexico and Ennis..or was it Dennis?  Rev. Macklin and the entire congregation prayed for Jack, and made him as comfortable as possible.  Jim Bennett was the only person in church who knew Jack’s identity. He also knew what haunted him, made Jack drink like a fish.  That Randall Malone couldn’t keep a secret.

Jim knocked forcefully on Jack’s front door.  Lureen came rushing out, as she hadn’t set eyes on Jack for days, and was worried.

“Where did you find him, Jim?”  Lureen asked, a note of irritation mixed with relief in her voice.  She shook her husband until he stood up straighter, but his fierce blue eyes were unfocused.

“He was in church, ma’am,”  Jim answered as he pulled Jack into the house.  Lureen didn’t seem surprised.  Nothing Jack did surprised her.

“Here, Jim, set him down on the couch over there.”  Lureen guided.  She stood away from them both.  She didn’t even want to be near her husband, as he smelled like a brewery and something else she couldn’t put her finger on.  Jim deposited Jack on the couch and pulled a throw over him.  He looked down at the sad, sad man and shook his head.

“Well, I’ll be going now, ma’am!”  Jim said as he tipped his hat.

“Thanks for bringin’ him home Jim,”  Lureen began. 

"And because you were so kind to my husband, take tomorrow off.”  Jim smiled and exited the Twist home.

“Thank you Jim..” Jack managed from the couch.  He looked up at Lureen with a fearful expression.  Lureen saw in her husband’s eyes a sadness so sublime that her heart almost broke.

“Well, at least he’s home!”  Lureen thought as she walked, alone, to her bedroom.   



Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 02, 2007, 10:15:31 pm
I'm not going until 28th July!  Everyone's coming, me, Graham, the kids, the dog and the in-laws ... it's going to be very cosy in our 8 birth caravan!! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/7/7_6_1.gif)   

Romantic getaway??  I can't remember what one of those is!  I know my kiddies aren't babies anymore but I still can't bear to go away without them ... pathetic I know!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif) 

Sounds good!  Have a good time.  The 28th will be here before you know it!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 03, 2007, 12:15:42 am
Susie, it will be all too soon when they will finally refuse to come along.  Just enjoy them while you have them. 

Merrily

I know that's right, Merr!  No truer words were ever spoken!
Title: Re: Pray for Him!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 03, 2007, 12:16:52 am
Oh littlewing, you really did it this time - that was so lovely and sad at the same time.  Poor Jack.  He's a mess.  Beautiful story and I can see it so well.

Merrily

Thanks, Merr!  I was ordered to church yesterday by my own Pastor, and this strange little tale is the result of that..I guess!!  :)
Title: Re: Pray for Him!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 03, 2007, 12:18:12 am
littlewing, this is very well written.  So vivid and detailed.  And what you're saying here is so sad.  Poor Jack.  He tried so hard but everything he wanted always seemed just beyond his grasp.

Gary

Thanks so much, Gary!  I identify much more with Ennis, but my heart breaks for Jack!  What a sweetheart!
Title: Many States Away
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 03, 2007, 12:56:40 am
August nights are hot and humid in Childress.  Jack Twist liked to sit alone in his den, his air conditioned den, drinking a bit of whiskey, thinking about nothing in particular.  His days were hard and bleak without one Ennis Del Mar to hold him.

Ennis didn’t mind Riverton’s hot August nights.  After a long day at the ranch he sat on the stoop of his trailer, shirtless, sipping a bit of whiskey from a paper cup.  His days were empty and depressing without Jack Twist’s arms around his torso.

It happened a lot!  Like a cry in the night, Jack “heard” the longing of his lover, felt his loneliness.  Like a transmittal of thought, Ennis felt Jack’s sadness and confusion.  But it was okay.  It seemed so natural to communicate this way: a cosmic relay, many states away.
Title: Re: Many States Away
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 03, 2007, 01:08:56 am
Great littlewing.  I believe in that and it has been proven in my case.  Especially with people who are very close to you in spirit.  I love this story.  Beautiful.

Merrily

Thanks, Merr!  I also believe that 2 people who love as much as J&E can communicate across space and time.  I truly believe it!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 03, 2007, 03:27:27 am
(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/29/29_3_10.gif)

Hey, if you guys got a kick out of the word rimming it might interest you to know what feltching means.   ;D  That's when I guy goes down there after he's deposited his wad. 

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/23/23_3_6.gif)

Gary

P.S.  Susie now has an idea for her next story.

Hey Gary, you could start a new thread, "the gay sex dictionary". I think we could get a few new ideas out of that! :D :D :D

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 03, 2007, 03:32:13 am
(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/29/29_3_10.gif)
.... it might interest you to know what feltching means.   ;D  That's when I guy goes down there after he's deposited his wad. 

Gary

Now that´s an interesting typo. ;D
Title: Re: Pray for Him!
Post by: Dagi on July 03, 2007, 03:41:45 am
Jim Bennett carried a barely conscious Jack Twist up to his front door.  “Poor soul!”  Jim thought as he propped an arm around Jack’s shoulder.  He was asked by the Pastor of Ephesians A.M.E. Church to see that Mr. Twist got home in one piece.  Jim knew Jack well, worked with him at Newsome’s for years.

Jack was pulled into Ephesians after a sister saw him on the sidewalk outside of the church, dancing and clapping, swaying in time to the music of the praise service: music so resonant that it could be heard from blocks away.  Jack was unbelievably drunk and incoherent, muttering something about Mexico and Ennis..or was it Dennis?  Rev. Macklin and the entire congregation prayed for Jack, and made him as comfortable as possible.  Jim Bennett was the only person in church who knew Jack’s identity. He also knew what haunted him, made Jack drink like a fish.  That Randall Malone couldn’t keep a secret.

Jim knocked forcefully on Jack’s front door.  Lureen came rushing out, as she hadn’t set eyes on Jack for days, and was worried.

“Where did you find him, Jim?”  Lureen asked, a note of irritation mixed with relief in her voice.  She shook her husband until he stood up straighter, but his fierce blue eyes were unfocused.

“He was in church, ma’am,”  Jim answered as he pulled Jack into the house.  Lureen didn’t seem surprised.  Nothing Jack did surprised her.

“Here, Jim, set him down on the couch over there.”  Lureen guided.  She stood away from them both.  She didn’t even want to be near her husband, as he smelled like a brewery and something else she couldn’t put her finger on.  Jim deposited Jack on the couch and pulled a throw over him.  He looked down at the sad, sad man and shook his head.

“Well, I’ll be going now, ma’am!”  Jim said as he tipped his hat.

“Thanks for bringin’ him home Jim,”  Lureen began. 

"And because you were so kind to my husband, take tomorrow off.”  Jim smiled and exited the Twist home.

“Thank you Jim..” Jack managed from the couch.  He looked up at Lureen with a fearful expression.  Lureen saw in her husband’s eyes a sadness so sublime that her heart almost broke.

“Well, at least he’s home!”  Lureen thought as she walked, alone, to her bedroom.   





Littlewing, that was terribly sad. To think of their loneliness always breaks my heart. You write so, so beautifully.  :'( :'( :'(

Dagi
Title: Re: Many States Away
Post by: Dagi on July 03, 2007, 03:48:57 am
August nights are hot and humid in Childress.  Jack Twist liked to sit alone in his den, his air conditioned den, drinking a bit of whiskey, thinking about nothing in particular.  His days were hard and bleak without one Ennis Del Mar to hold him.

Ennis didn’t mind Riverton’s hot August nights.  After a long day at the ranch he sat on the stoop of his trailer, shirtless, sipping a bit of whiskey from a paper cup.  His days were empty and depressing without Jack Twist’s arms around his torso.

It happened a lot!  Like a cry in the night, Jack “heard” the longing of his lover, felt his loneliness.  Like a transmittal of thought, Ennis felt Jack’s sadness and confusion.  But it was okay.  It seemed so natural to communicate this way: a cosmic relay, many states away.


Thanks for comforting me a little after that sad story. Two hearts like theirs surely are able to get together like this. There, you did it. I´m crying. Darn.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 03, 2007, 03:55:56 am
For you, Marie. All those who are already fed up with bums - skip it!

End or Beginning by Dagi

Ennis felt slightly uncomfortable in this unusual position on all four, not because of his knees on the hard soil, but due to the lack of control. But in the end Jack had always proved to be trustworthy.

The wet line his lover was licking from his neck way down his spine was getting cold in the night air, but all that Ennis could think of was the direction his newfound friend´s wet mouth was going.
When he reached the beginning of the crack Jack hesitated for a moment. He had never done that before, but having always been curious he wanted to try as many things as possible before their time up on Brokeback would come to an end.

Would it be an end, or rather the beginning of something completely different from anything he had ever been able to figure?

A deep, yearning groan from Ennis brought him back; he put both hands on those unbelievably firm white cheeks, opened them a little, his cock meanwhile hard as rock and dripping, and took a look at that beautiful rose, before he lowered his mouth to taste Ennis´ flesh, inhaled this manly scent he had come to love, and his moist soft tongue incircled the butthole in small probing movements, evoking moans Jack had never heard from Ennis  before.

No matter how long this summer would last, he was determined to enjoy every single moment to the full...
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 03, 2007, 11:27:08 am
"(Well, except for poor Shasta.  She probably has written all of us off as sickos.   ;D  )"  

Haha. Ya'll can't shock me. Actually, you've left out some really good stuff. LOL.
I lived through my ultra wild era and I'm back to boring.  :P


(http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x221/Shasta542/smile004.gif) Love ya!!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 03, 2007, 01:08:29 pm
 :-X  ::)  ;D

Listen--Someday, I'd like to meet you Brokies face to face. I'd like to be able to look you in the eyes.  :P
Title: Re: Pray for Him!
Post by: Dagi on July 03, 2007, 02:11:29 pm
Good heavens littlewing ... they didn't find you drunk in the gutter, mumbling Ennis's name too, did they? (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_7_6.gif) 

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)   

You know, as much as I´m thinking about our boys all day long I better avoid getting really drunk, for something similar definitely could happen to me!!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 03, 2007, 02:15:26 pm
PHEW! Dagi ....  I think I need to lie down for a minute!  That was   hot hot hot..... and that tight white bum    Hmmmmmmmmmmmmm! .... And you described it so beautifully ... just perfect Dagi!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)   

Thank you Susie! You are always so encouraging! I was a bit afraid that anyone would say "oh no, not another butt story, please"....

Dagi
Title: Re: Peelin Spuds
Post by: Dagi on July 03, 2007, 02:20:15 pm
This one always made me smile




Peeling Spuds by Susie



How in the hell am I s’posed to finish up here now?  Ennis was crouched less than ten feet away from him, butt naked and dripping with hot water.  Jack’s hands were unsteady, gaze fixed on the knife, catching a glimpse of Ennis through the corner of his eye. Damn he’s so fu ckin’ beautiful, never seen nothin’ like him before!.

Twenty years may have passed, but not much had changed; hair perhaps a little thinner, waistlines a little thicker.  However the fire was still ablaze and Ennis, still naked as the day he was born; the charge between them always high, but tempered with the familiarity of years living together.   

Jack chuckled to himself, tossed the potato up in the air, marched on over to Ennis and crouched down behind him.  He wrapped his arms around Ennis’s wet belly, Ennis turning his head and smiling, relaxing back into Jack’s warm chest.  Jack’s hands headed south, tickling the skin in their path, he playfully licked Ennis’s earlobe and with a voice soft as silk, whispered “Need some help there, friend?”


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



Have you posted this before?  On IMDb? Oh, I probably missed a lot of stories, so many got deleted before I had a chance to read them >:(.

the charge between them always high, but tempered with the familiarity of years living together.

Aaahhh, Susie, so sweet. If only....

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 03, 2007, 02:26:32 pm
This story is sexy has hell, Dagi.  Smokin' hot!  And that title...End or Beginning.  I'm thinking it's an end and a beginning.   :P

Gary

Thank you honey, I was really afraid you would find it rather boring after all those hot things our boys have discovered lately... ::)

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P.S.  You girls just amaze me.  You do know that even a lot of gay guys find going there too much.  But you all just embrace it without batting an eye.   

I think that is only a question of one´s relationship to one´s own body, not a question of gay or not gay.

Dagi


Title: Re: Peelin Spuds
Post by: Dagi on July 03, 2007, 02:30:19 pm
Thank you Dagi honey!  Yes it was one of my earlier ones!  I love going through them ... some of them make me cringe a little and there was this one I showed to Gary where  they did it on horseback ... it was hilarious .. and I think, physically impossible .. but it was so much fun to write!!  At the time I thought I was being so naughty ... and yet it's tame  in comparison to what we write these days!

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif) 

I´d love to read it! Please post it!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 03, 2007, 02:47:43 pm
What would you all think about a chat-date every once in a while? What would be a good time? For me 8-10 pm would be great, I´m 6 hours plus to Bettermost time, 9 hours plus to Californian time. What time is it where you live, Gary?

Dagi
Title: Re: Come Take a Ride
Post by: Dagi on July 03, 2007, 02:54:49 pm
Now this is for you Dagi ... it was only the third or fourth one I'd ever written, so be kind!  I'm giggling just reading it through now!!



Come Take a Ride by Susie



"Come take a ride with me Ennis."

"Nah, my horse ain't saddled up."

"Don't matter, plenty a room up here for two."

Ennis climbed into the saddle behind Jack, butted right up against him. Little click of the tongue, a light tap of the heels and the horse trotted off down into the valley.

Rubbing up against Jack sure felt good, the smell and taste of that soft skin right behind his ear, so inviting. Ennis could feel the aching in the pit of his stomach, the pressure building in his groin, could feel Jack stiffening at his touch.

He quickly unfastened his pants, freeing himself, reached round in front of Jack, unbuckling him and pulling his jeans down far as he could, just enough room to guide himself in a little way. Jack let out a low moan, pressing his thighs against the horse, causing it to suddenly break into a canter, pushing Ennis in all the way.

"Holy shit!" Ennis choked, kicking his heels into the side of the horse, sending it into a flat-out gallop, every stride pounding him in deeper, harder. Both men cried out, coming hot and fast, wild and euphoric, mountains and forests speeding past in a blur.





Hehehe
Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


hehehe, now I know that you have been a naughty girl before you got spoiled by Toycoon :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

Thank you for a hot ....laugh!!

Dagi

What a pitty that my hubby is afraid of horses.  ::)
Title: Re: Many States Away
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 04, 2007, 12:38:12 am
Thanks for comforting me a little after that sad story. Two hearts like theirs surely are able to get together like this. There, you did it. I´m crying. Darn.

Awww, thanks, Dagi!
Title: Re: Pray for Him!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 04, 2007, 12:39:21 am
Littlewing, that was terribly sad. To think of their loneliness always breaks my heart. You write so, so beautifully.  :'( :'( :'(

Dagi

Dagi, you're very sweet.  I'm addicted to this!  I can't get enough!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 04, 2007, 12:40:17 am
NO! .... NEVER! .... we'll be going away together forever!  And when they have their own families ... we'll be tagging along as the annoying Grandparents!


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)   

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Title: Re: Pray for Him!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 04, 2007, 12:50:35 am
You know, as much as I´m thinking about our boys all day long I better avoid getting really drunk, for something similar definitely could happen to me!!

I do know what you mean!!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 04, 2007, 12:54:11 am
Sorry Gary, I just told Dagi that you were in Central time zone.  What was I thinking?  I know the feeling of having a slow computer.  I also know the feeling of not having a computer at all.  At least you do have one. 

Happy 4th sweetie.

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Wow, Merr, this is beautiful!  Have a very happy, safe 4th!  I can't believe I have to work the days after!!!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 04, 2007, 12:55:20 am
Hi Merrily,

I don't think the slowness of my computer is the problem.  My computer isn't generally slow.  I think I need some kind of update for that particular chat program.  When I say it won't load, I mean not at all, no matter how long I wait.

But even though I run into little problems like this from time to time, I am very happy to have a computer.   :)

Gary

P.S. You have a great 4th as well. 

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I'm sure Susie is just thrilled that it's the 4th of July.   :P

I'm glad you have a computer as well, Gary!  I don't know what I would do without you...without all of you!  :-*
Title: Happy 4th of July, Jack Twist!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 04, 2007, 01:21:55 am
I hope this little tale doesn't sound cheesy, but I had to do it!  Happy 4th, everyone!

Ennis looked at his wife with an expression that said, “Don’t you dare say anything else!”  He just kicked the crap out of a slop mouthed biker, one of 2 jerks who disrespected his family, and Alma looked at him like he lost his mind?  Ennis didn't understand her attitude!

“C’mon, let’s get out of here.”  Ennis said as he moved toward his wife and babies.  “I’m not in the mood for this anymore.”  Ennis picked up his daughters and placed one in each arm.  Alma collected the girls’ handmade blankets, along with the rest of their things and followed Ennis to the truck.

The apartment over the Laundromat was quiet, but the sky was alive with rockets red glare, bombs bursting in air.  Ennis was amazed that the girls were able to sleep through the racket.  Rowdies ran through the streets setting off firecrackers.  Teenagers shouted and threw bottles.  Dogs howled and ran for cover.  Alma was straightening the apartment, the ruckus with the bikers long forgotten.  She glanced at her husband and winked.  Ennis picked up on the signals, and thought, why the hell not?  He didn’t like hurting her, but the memory of Jack Twist!  The need was just too strong.  After he did what she hated, Alma curled up into a fetal position and fell asleep.  Ennis lay on his back and mouthed the words: “Happy 4th of July, Jack Fuckin' Twist!”
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 04, 2007, 03:20:45 am
Nice one for the holiday, Littlewing!!

Sad tho. (Missin' Jack)  :'(
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 04, 2007, 06:02:38 am
Hi Dagi,

I'd love to chat, but I can't get the chat room at this site to load.  I think I must need a software update or something.  I'm in West Virginia which is in the USA's Eastern time zone.  And right now we're on daylight savings time, which means you add an hour to the standard time.  (Do people in Europe have daylight savings time?  Or is that just a strange thing we American's do?)  In a few weeks I'll be moving to California, and that's three hours earlier.

Gary

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Hi Gary,

you´ll have to go get yourself this software-update, ´cause what would a chat be like without you?

So what would be a good time for you (related to standard time)?

Dagi

 

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 04, 2007, 06:05:45 am
British Summer Time, huh?  I like that.  BTW, I used to get mixed up on the time difference, too.  I'm dyslexic and things like that give me a headache.  But then someone told me something that helps me remember.  Fall back, and Spring forward.  That says it all, doesn't it?

Gary

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Thought you might be getting sick of the 4th of July, so here's the Union Jack.   :D  (The U.K.'s flag is named after Jack?)


 Great! Now I´ll be able to remember it! Finally! Thank you Gary!
Title: Re: Happy 4th of July, Jack Twist!
Post by: Dagi on July 04, 2007, 06:10:23 am
I hope this little tale doesn't sound cheesy, but I had to do it!  Happy 4th, everyone!

Ennis looked at his wife with an expression that said, “Don’t you dare say anything else!”  He just kicked the crap out of a slop mouthed biker, one of 2 jerks who disrespected his family, and Alma looked at him like he lost his mind?  Ennis didn't understand her attitude!

“C’mon, let’s get out of here.”  Ennis said as he moved toward his wife and babies.  “I’m not in the mood for this anymore.”  Ennis picked up his daughters and placed one in each arm.  Alma collected the girls’ handmade blankets, along with the rest of their things and followed Ennis to the truck.

The apartment over the Laundromat was quiet, but the sky was alive with rockets red glare, bombs bursting in air.  Ennis was amazed that the girls were able to sleep through the racket.  Rowdies ran through the streets setting off firecrackers.  Teenagers shouted and threw bottles.  Dogs howled and ran for cover.  Alma was straightening the apartment, the ruckus with the bikers long forgotten.  She glanced at her husband and winked.  Ennis picked up on the signals, and thought, why the hell not?  He didn’t like hurting her, but the memory of Jack Twist!  The need was just too strong.  After he did what she hated, Alma curled up into a fetal position and fell asleep.  Ennis lay on his back and mouthed the words: “Happy 4th of July, Jack Fuckin' Twist!”



 :'( :'( :'(  Ennis lonely again.  :'( :'( :'( :'

I love your stories. The details always bring them to life. You should be a screen writer. I´d love to see your movies.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 04, 2007, 01:48:46 pm
Since I'd be chatting with you, Dagi dear, anytime would be a good time.  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/29/29_2_10.gif)


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Title: Re: Happy 4th of July, Ennis Del Mar!
Post by: Dagi on July 04, 2007, 01:52:05 pm
Happy 4th of July Ennis Del Mar by Susie


Jack leaned against the log, gazing sleepily up at the night sky, inky black above him, alight in the far distance, with a million sparkling colors.  Glowing embers flew up from the campfire, dancing in the breeze and gently settling near his feet, his own personal firework display.

He’d not been around these parts for a couple of years now, but today, drawn by some invisible force to this peaceful spot, he'd packed up his meagre belongings into his old pick up truck and made the fourteen hour trip, followed by a four hour hike, through the mountain to the place where they'd talked and laughed, and made love.

Wonder what he’s doin’ right now.  Wonder if he’s thinkin’ ‘bout me....  A twinge of sadness flowed through him as he raised his whiskey bottle to the sky and smiled hopefully, “Happy 4th of July, Ennis Del Mar...."



Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



Aw, Susie, why do you all have to make me so sad? I don´t want to think about their loneliness any more!! I don´t want to imagine Jack alone up on Brokeback! :'( :'( :'(

Beautiful story, nevertheless. As always!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 04, 2007, 02:16:52 pm
Why thank ya, sweet stuff Marie.  Don't know what I'd do without you, either.

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Gary


I´d read more books, do more sports, eat more, tidy up and clean my house, iron my laundry,..... :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

I´m so happy I found you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dagi
Title: Re: Happy 4th of July, Ennis Del Mar!
Post by: Shasta542 on July 04, 2007, 02:20:19 pm
Happy 4th of July Ennis Del Mar by Susie


Jack leaned against the log, gazing sleepily up at the night sky, inky black above him, alight in the far distance, with a million sparkling colors.  Glowing embers flew up from the campfire, dancing in the breeze and gently settling near his feet, his own personal firework display.

He’d not been around these parts for a couple of years now, but today, drawn by some invisible force to this peaceful spot, he'd packed up his meagre belongings into his old pick up truck and made the fourteen hour trip, followed by a four hour hike, through the mountain to the place where they'd talked and laughed, and made love.

Wonder what he’s doin’ right now.  Wonder if he’s thinkin’ ‘bout me....  A twinge of sadness flowed through him as he raised his whiskey bottle to the sky and smiled hopefully, “Happy 4th of July, Ennis Del Mar...."



Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)




Glowing embers flew up from the campfire, dancing in the breeze and gently settling near his feet, his own personal firework display.


I love that visual. Sweet, sad story, Susie.  
Title: Re: Happy 4th of July, Jack Twist!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 04, 2007, 03:23:23 pm
Very sweet, rather sad story littlewing!  Happy 4th July to you all!

Susie
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Thanks Susie!
Title: Re: Happy 4th of July, Jack Twist!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 04, 2007, 03:24:42 pm

 :'( :'( :'(  Ennis lonely again.  :'( :'( :'( :'

I love your stories. The details always bring them to life. You should be a screen writer. I´d love to see your movies.

Dagi

Thanks, Sweetheart!  You always make me feel so good about myself!
Title: Re: Happy 4th of July, Ennis Del Mar!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 04, 2007, 03:27:20 pm
Happy 4th of July Ennis Del Mar by Susie


Jack leaned against the log, gazing sleepily up at the night sky, inky black above him, alight in the far distance, with a million sparkling colors.  Glowing embers flew up from the campfire, dancing in the breeze and gently settling near his feet, his own personal firework display.

He’d not been around these parts for a couple of years now, but today, drawn by some invisible force to this peaceful spot, he'd packed up his meagre belongings into his old pick up truck and made the fourteen hour trip, followed by a four hour hike, through the mountain to the place where they'd talked and laughed, and made love.

Wonder what he’s doin’ right now.  Wonder if he’s thinkin’ ‘bout me....  A twinge of sadness flowed through him as he raised his whiskey bottle to the sky and smiled hopefully, “Happy 4th of July, Ennis Del Mar...."



Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



I love this tale, Susie.  Especially the ending when Ennis wonders if Jack is thing about him.  This is how it must have been...their thoughts were on each other during the holidays, even the quiet, special hours.  Lovely work, Susie!
Title: Re: Happy 4th of July, Jack Twist!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 04, 2007, 03:28:04 pm
Littlewing, the story was not the least bit cheesy.  I loved the way you embellished the scene in the film.  Very nice writing sweetie and how appropriate for the 4th of July.  You do have a way with words.  Poor Ennis missing Jack.  Poor Jack still getting beat up rodeoing. 

You rock honey.  Loved it.  Happy 4th of July!!!

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Merrily

Thanks so much, Merr!  Happy 4th to you!
Title: Re: Happy 4th of July, Jack Twist!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 04, 2007, 03:29:41 pm
So very sad, littlewing.  But I think it's right on the money.  Even if the boys didn't know enough to call what they felt for each other love up on Brokeback, they experienced it.  And to go those four years without it, and without knowing if they'd ever have it again, must have been awful for both of them.

Gary

Thanks, Gary.  I think it is good that we never saw the boys calling each other.  If they managed to stay in touch, we wouldn't get the sense of loneliness, longing that the movie conveyed.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 04, 2007, 03:30:37 pm
Why thank ya, sweet stuff Marie.  Don't know what I'd do without you, either.

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Gary


You're very welcome, Baby! 
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 04, 2007, 03:31:29 pm
I´d read more books, do more sports, eat more, tidy up and clean my house, iron my laundry,..... :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

I´m so happy I found you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dagi

Dagi, that is so sweet!  Same here, Baby!  Same here!
Title: Re: Happy 4th of July, Ennis Del Mar!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 05, 2007, 01:17:08 am
Hi Susie, Dagi helped me with my photo.  I tried but couldn't get it to be large enough.  So, you can tell what I look like now?  I guess that's good, huh? (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_13_12v.gif)

In response to Gary, I don't think anyone ever bemoaned the fact that they didn''t WORK enough.  Note:  WORK is a 4-letter word!  My nights and days are do confused - don't ever know what time it is.  Never enough sleep, never enough. 

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Merrily

Wow, Merr!  Thanks for posting another pic.  You look lovely!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 05, 2007, 01:18:26 am
I love all your emoticons too Merrily!  I think, between us, we're doing a fine job of animating this board!  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/13/13_1_213.gif)


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif) 



I've got to get my emoticons!  I'm feeling plain and left out!!!!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 05, 2007, 03:10:01 am
I seriously doubt any of us are going to reach the end of our life and lay there on our death bed and wish we had spend more time doing housework.   :P

Gary

Ah, Gary, that´s exactly what I´m always thinking. And I know that I won´t regret a single second that I spent here with all of you.
Title: Re: Happy 4th of July, Ennis Del Mar!
Post by: Dagi on July 05, 2007, 03:10:44 am
Great!  That Dagi is talented.  Wonder if she can make me look like Ryan Phillippe.

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Gary

If I knew what he looks like? But why? You look so lovely, honey! :-*
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 05, 2007, 03:13:05 am
I've got to get my emoticons!  I'm feeling plain and left out!!!!

Me too! I always come here thinking "this time I have to check out some webpages to get me some emoticons", and then there are always so many other things to do and time just slips away. I´ll do it today.
Title: Re: Happy 4th of July, Ennis Del Mar!
Post by: Shasta542 on July 05, 2007, 03:29:10 am
Oh it is good Merrily ... and you look just how I pictured you ... lovely!

 Now we just need toycoon's mugshot and we'll have the whole family!  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/12/12_1_129.gif)


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

There's a great picture of Toycoon on the BBQ thread. He's a tall, lean, good-lookin' son of a gun, too!!

MERR--I think you've been lying about your age, girl. You look much younger!!! Cute, cute, cute!!

PLUS---I wanna be part of the family!!!!! WAHHHHHHHHHH!!!! I feel absolutely orphaned!!!!!
Title: Re: Happy 4th of July, Ennis Del Mar!
Post by: Shasta542 on July 05, 2007, 04:13:32 am
Oh Shasta honey, of course you're part of the family, you're like our big sister keeping us all in check and geeing us along.  We're like the Waltons!!

 
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Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

ps. I found toycoon's pic a while ago ... he's got a lovely friendly smile!! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_1_107v.gif)

LOL--I think I have failed at keeping ya'll wild childs in line. I'd need the MARINES(http://www.anchoredbygrace.com/smileys/tank.gif) to help me with that job!!!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 05, 2007, 04:41:20 am
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Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 05, 2007, 05:03:33 am
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(http://www.anchoredbygrace.com/smileys/icon_grouphug.gif)   Thanks, sis!!  (http://www.anchoredbygrace.com/smileys/icon_grouphug.gif)

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Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 05, 2007, 07:26:38 am
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Spiceylife, enjoy yourself on J&E! Hope you´re okay so far!

We love you!

Dagi
Title: Re: Happy 4th of July, Ennis Del Mar!
Post by: Shasta542 on July 05, 2007, 12:44:17 pm
Marines?  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_9_16.gif)  Oh Shasta, that's just what we need, a few good men.

Gary

(http://www.anchoredbygrace.com/smileys/1034522319.gif)I love a patriot! (http://www.anchoredbygrace.com/smileys/usa.gif)



Title: Re: Happy 4th of July, Ennis Del Mar!
Post by: Dagi on July 05, 2007, 12:44:43 pm
Marines?  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_9_16.gif)  Oh Shasta, that's just what we need, a few good men.

Gary

So we nasty girls are not good enough for you any more?? But okay, I give in, there can never be too many men ;D.

Dagi
Title: Re: Happy 4th of July, Ennis Del Mar!
Post by: Shasta542 on July 05, 2007, 12:53:26 pm
So we nasty girls are not good enough for you any more?? But okay, I give in, there can never be too many men ;D.

Dagi

(http://www.anchoredbygrace.com/smileys/OLA.gif) Truer words were never spoken, Dagi!! Ya always need a different one to mow the yard, grill the steaks, move the furniture, fix the car...... (http://www.anchoredbygrace.com/smileys/biglaugha.gif)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 05, 2007, 12:56:31 pm
Absofukinlutely girl!  You are da bomb! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_5_132.gif)

Your Sis,

Merrily

Ditto, friend girl!! (http://www.anchoredbygrace.com/smileys/mgcheerful.gif)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 05, 2007, 01:07:20 pm
Hello to all the gorgeous looking people on this thread!! *wolf whistle*

Thank you so much for your loving support and kind-hearted words.  It helps a lot, and means the world to me.  And so do all of you.  You're such a wonderful bunch.  I do love you guys.

(http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/yourockmyworld.jpg)

(http://www.anchoredbygrace.com/smileys/fl02.gif) Thanks, Spicey. I hope things are looking up. When you need a smile, just come on in---these wild broncs in here are always coming up with something to make ya laugh!! And you can always get a lift out of the funny illustrations, too!! Take care and we hope to see you lots!!
 



 
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 05, 2007, 04:15:08 pm
Just came here after my Yoga lesson, with a pancake with selfmade marmalade and a delicious yogurt, sat down to chat a little....and nobody´s here (http://www.smileygarden.de/smilie/Traurig/49.gif).

Spiceylife, we can´t wait for your story! I still remember the line "I´m so hot, I even turn myself on...".

And, you belong to the family whether your avatar shows an alien, or Heath, or your lovely face.....but of course we would love to see your face!

Dagi

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 05, 2007, 06:27:09 pm
Hi there Dagi dear,

When I read your first sentence, Just came here after my yoga lesson, I thought this was going to be the story were Jack and Ennis do that...um...thing we were talking about.  I can't imagine either Jake or Ennis taking a yoga lesson, but I'm sure if one or both of them did they could pull off that little stunt.   :-X

You make your own marmalade?  Wow!  I'm impressed.  What kind?  You must be a country girl at heart.   :)

Gary

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/995v.gif)


Gary, shut the fuck up! ;D ;D ;D ;D sh! sh sh sh!

Yep, my own marmalade. Raspberries, cherries, and rhubarb mixed. I am a country girl at heart, yes. are you gonna have a garden in California?

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 05, 2007, 08:52:25 pm
Me too! I always come here thinking "this time I have to check out some webpages to get me some emoticons", and then there are always so many other things to do and time just slips away. I´ll do it today.

I know what you mean, Dagi!  Never enough time, never enough!
Title: Re: Happy 4th of July, Ennis Del Mar!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 05, 2007, 08:54:22 pm
There's a great picture of Toycoon on the BBQ thread. He's a tall, lean, good-lookin' son of a gun, too!!

MERR--I think you've been lying about your age, girl. You look much younger!!! Cute, cute, cute!!

PLUS---I wanna be part of the family!!!!! WAHHHHHHHHHH!!!! I feel absolutely orphaned!!!!!


Girl, you couldn'r be more of the family if you tried!!!  Love your new pic, by the way!  Your hair, everything about you is gorgeous!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 05, 2007, 08:57:27 pm
Hello to all the gorgeous looking people on this thread!! *wolf whistle*

Thank you so much for your loving support and kind-hearted words.  It helps a lot, and means the world to me.  And so do all of you.  You're such a wonderful bunch.  I do love you guys.

(http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/yourockmyworld.jpg)

 



 

Hi, Spicey, Baby!  Thanks for coming by to see us!  We really miss you, Love!  But just take care of you and yours.  We'll be here when you return!  :)


Title: To Remember Happier Days
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 05, 2007, 09:07:58 pm
Jack Twist watched Ennis walk away with a sadness he couldn't find the center of.  He sighed as he returned to the tent to continue packing his gear, get ready to return to the real world.  Ennis was already at camp, and must have discarded his bloody shirt to wash later, and changed into the only other shirt he owned.  Jack sat still, as every movement split his head, hurt his heart.

He had an idea: just a spur of the moment thought.  Looking both ways, Jack swiped Ennis’ bloody shirt, and stored it with his own meager belongings.  He didn’t know exactly what he would do with Ennis’ shirt, but he knew why he took it.

“I’m not mad at you, Ennis.”  Jack thought as he continued to pack his things.  He imagined himself in his bedroom up at Lightning Flats; Ennis’ shirt draped over a chair.  Jack saw himself caressing the shirt, outlining the collar soil with a finger.  He’ll drape the sleeves around his neck, imagine being held by his love – remember happier days.  But he will never wash Ennis’ shirt.  The blood is a reminder of the hurt he experienced as they parted ways that magical summer.  Jack learned a bitter lesson that summer: with every laugh, there is a tear.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 05, 2007, 10:13:52 pm
Now that wasn't so hard, was it, Merr?  This is beautiful, my dear!  I thoroughly enjoyed reading every word.  I love how you fleshed out this amazing scene.  The ending I found the most entralling:

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Meantime, OMT had been waiting to get his last jab in and said "Tell ya what, we got a family plot and he's goin in it" and all the time Mrs. Twist looking at him with a plea for Ennis not to say anything.  Ennis just said "yes sir" relieved that it was finally over as Jack's ashes no longer were a priority to him.  Ennis had something much more special of Jack's to take with him -- the memory of their first summer together when they had fallen in love.  He would always regret not being able to love Jack openly and take him up on his suggestion of a "Sweet Life," but he now realized how much Jack really loved him and he could carry that knowledge with him forever, not as a secret sorrow, but as a reminder that their love was beautiful and that he, Ennis, was loveable.  He must now have the courage to open himself up to new possibilities.

I want more of your writing!  I know the process can take a lot out of you, but if you find it within you, please continue to write.  You'll find that writing about our boys is very rewarding, and can be downright fun.  Lovely work, Merr!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: ifyoucantfixit on July 05, 2007, 10:59:45 pm



           I am so gratified, that I have the chance to see your first story.  You may
well fulfill my prediction.  You may become the best of all.  That was wonderful
                                                                                janice
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 06, 2007, 12:29:04 am
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read, laugh, smile, fan my face, tear up... I'm starting to feel like my old self again.  I must be!  I feel like posting a steamy story.

Great to hear, Spicey!!


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He would always regret not being able to love Jack openly and take him up on his suggestion of a "Sweet Life," but he now realized how much Jack really loved him and he could carry that knowledge with him forever, not as a secret sorrow, but as a reminder that their love was beautiful and that he, Ennis, was loveable.  He must now have the courage to open himself up to new possibilities.

Merr--very nice fanfic! This segment kinda sums up one of the themes of Brokeback Mountain to me. Sometimes hope springs out of regret if we let it. That's a life lesson, huh?

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with every laugh, there is a tear.

So true, Littlewing. Beautiful story.



Title: Re: Lost Boys
Post by: Shasta542 on July 06, 2007, 12:42:04 am
Lost Boys by garycottle

Ennis awoke with a start, and at first he didn’t know where he was, but when he looked up and saw the familiar pattern of the cracked plaster on the ceiling overhead he realized that he was in the apartment he shared with Alma and his daughters.  It was summer and the washing machines and dryers downstairs had been going all day, thus making the small, confined space steamy.  The nubby material of the worn couch he laid on was clammy and damp.  His hair was dripping with sweat also, and when he touched his bare chest he found that it was slick.

He thought about sitting upright, but just then he remembered that he had the strangest dream while he slept.  Jack and he had decided to go off to be together, and they ended up someplace back east where the woods were thick and green and the air was so humid that it was like walking through a wet, warm cloud.  They found a big old house just outside of a small village that rented cheap, but the only catch was the lease stipulated that only one person could live there.  So Ennis ended up sleeping in a room down in the basement, and Jack was the only one who ever went into town. 

The townsfolk must have found out that they had broken the rules, and that the two of them had been living in the old house together, because one day Jack didn’t come home, and then Ennis looked out the basement window and saw a group of unfriendly men being led by the local sheriff come up the road.

As Ennis sat up and rubbed the sleep from his eyes, Alma Jr., who was sitting in the floor in front of the TV with her baby sister, said, “Great, now he’s awake.”  The end credits of the program they had been watching were rolling.

When Ennis looked directly at his eldest he saw her annoyed expression was mixed with love and acceptance.  “Did I snore or somethin’?”

“No, but you did make it kind of hard to follow the story,” Jenny said without looking back.

For a week the girls had been talking about their plans to watch Salem’s Lot, and it saddened Ennis to know that he may have spoiled it for them.

“Well, what did I do?” he said with a note of contrition.

Alma, who was sitting in the corner chair reading one of those Harlequin romance novels, piped up and said in an edgy voice, “You kept saying, ‘No, Jack!  No!’”

“Isn’t your fishin’ buddy named Jack, Daddy?” asked Alma Jr.

“Go to bed, girls,” Alma said sharply.

Ennis buried his face in his hands and mumbled, “I’m sorry.”

Nice writing! Great sensory images, Gary. Very easily visualized/felt!! That hot sweaty feeling upon waking up on that kind of material--the steamy air  from the laundry--the cracked plaster. Ennis's dream stemming from his fear of other's finding out about him and Jack.  Masterfully written setting.  You rock!  
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 06, 2007, 12:56:37 am
Thank you so much Marie.  It took so much prodding and you're right, it does take a lot out of you when you write about our boys.  I was making myself sad during the whole birthing process. 

I really appreciate your comments sweetie. 

Love,

Merrily

You're very welcome, Merr!  Your story made me feel all warm and snuggly inside.  I'm getting a glow just thinking about it!  Your story is just that good!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 06, 2007, 02:00:36 am
Now that wasn't so hard, was it, Merr?  This is beautiful, my dear!  I thoroughly enjoyed reading every word.  I love how you fleshed out this amazing scene.  The ending I found the most entralling:

I want more of your writing!  I know the process can take a lot out of you, but if you find it within you, please continue to write.  You'll find that writing about our boys is very rewarding, and can be downright fun.  Lovely work, Merr!

So true what Marie sad! You did it! We feel very honored that you shared your first attempt with us! Lovely writing, as I already told you. One can tell that it comes from your very heart! Yes, we want more!  :-*

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 06, 2007, 02:37:13 am
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Merrily, don't worry about that.  I can't either.  I don't think I've ever written even one fanfic that adheres to Toycoon's three sentence rule.  Just keep writing

(http://www.anchoredbygrace.com/smileys/heartpump.gif) Toycoon is a sweet, sugary, mush-daddy -- he lets us (ya'll) get away with EVERYTHING!!

(http://www.anchoredbygrace.com/smileys/grinser039.gif) He's at the beach right now, so ya'll don't have to tell him I said that!! (http://www.anchoredbygrace.com/smileys/loki16.gif)

From(http://www.anchoredbygrace.com/smileys/littleangel.gif)


(http://www.anchoredbygrace.com/smileys/tongue.gif)(http://www.anchoredbygrace.com/smileys/wink.gif)(http://www.anchoredbygrace.com/smileys/crazya.gif)(http://www.anchoredbygrace.com/smileys/laugh2.gif)
Title: Re: To Remember Happier Days
Post by: Dagi on July 06, 2007, 05:55:03 am
Jack Twist watched Ennis walk away with a sadness he couldn't find the center of.  He sighed as he returned to the tent to continue packing his gear, get ready to return to the real world.  Ennis was already at camp, and must have discarded his bloody shirt to wash later, and changed into the only other shirt he owned.  Jack sat still, as every movement split his head, hurt his heart.

He had an idea: just a spur of the moment thought.  Looking both ways, Jack swiped Ennis’ bloody shirt, and stored it with his own meager belongings.  He didn’t know exactly what he would do with Ennis’ shirt, but he knew why he took it.

“I’m not mad at you, Ennis.”  Jack thought as he continued to pack his things.  He imagined himself in his bedroom up at Lightning Flats; Ennis’ shirt draped over a chair.  Jack saw himself caressing the shirt, outlining the collar soil with a finger.  He’ll drape the sleeves around his neck, imagine being held by his love – remember happier days.  But he will never wash Ennis’ shirt.  The blood is a reminder of the hurt he experienced as they parted ways that magical summer.  Jack learned a bitter lesson that summer: with every laugh, there is a tear.


Littlewing, I love the way you make me feel sad....the image of Jack embraced by the shirts instead of his lover makes me tear up. I just love Jack so much i want to hold him and comfort him  :'(. Thank you, honey!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 06, 2007, 03:29:54 pm
Ah thank you Gary honey .... perhaps I should write a part 3 to give Jack a turn!




Oh Susie, that was so funny and lovely! I love them fooling around, love to imagine Ennis smiling, even laughing, that brings a broad, foolish grin on my face!

Thank you so much for reposting this! I´m just writing a sad one again, I needed a good laugh.

Dagi
Title: Re: Happy 4th of July, Ennis Del Mar!
Post by: Dagi on July 06, 2007, 03:33:11 pm
(http://www.anchoredbygrace.com/smileys/OLA.gif) Truer words were never spoken, Dagi!! Ya always need a different one to mow the yard, grill the steaks, move the furniture, fix the car...... (http://www.anchoredbygrace.com/smileys/biglaugha.gif)

And there are some other things I can think of  :D ::)!

Dagi
Title: Re: Lost Boys
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 06, 2007, 03:56:52 pm
Lost Boys by garycottle

Ennis awoke with a start, and at first he didn’t know where he was, but when he looked up and saw the familiar pattern of the cracked plaster on the ceiling overhead he realized that he was in the apartment he shared with Alma and his daughters.  It was summer and the washing machines and dryers downstairs had been going all day, thus making the small, confined space steamy.  The nubby material of the worn couch he laid on was clammy and damp.  His hair was dripping with sweat also, and when he touched his bare chest he found that it was slick.

He thought about sitting upright, but just then he remembered that he had the strangest dream while he slept.  Jack and he had decided to go off to be together, and they ended up someplace back east where the woods were thick and green and the air was so humid that it was like walking through a wet, warm cloud.  They found a big old house just outside of a small village that rented cheap, but the only catch was the lease stipulated that only one person could live there.  So Ennis ended up sleeping in a room down in the basement, and Jack was the only one who ever went into town. 

The townsfolk must have found out that they had broken the rules, and that the two of them had been living in the old house together, because one day Jack didn’t come home, and then Ennis looked out the basement window and saw a group of unfriendly men being led by the local sheriff come up the road.

As Ennis sat up and rubbed the sleep from his eyes, Alma Jr., who was sitting in the floor in front of the TV with her baby sister, said, “Great, now he’s awake.”  The end credits of the program they had been watching were rolling.

When Ennis looked directly at his eldest he saw her annoyed expression was mixed with love and acceptance.  “Did I snore or somethin’?”

“No, but you did make it kind of hard to follow the story,” Jenny said without looking back.

For a week the girls had been talking about their plans to watch Salem’s Lot, and it saddened Ennis to know that he may have spoiled it for them.

“Well, what did I do?” he said with a note of contrition.

Alma, who was sitting in the corner chair reading one of those Harlequin romance novels, piped up and said in an edgy voice, “You kept saying, ‘No, Jack!  No!’”

“Isn’t your fishin’ buddy named Jack, Daddy?” asked Alma Jr.

“Go to bed, girls,” Alma said sharply.

Ennis buried his face in his hands and mumbled, “I’m sorry.”

Amazing story, Gary!  Awesome!  Very vivid and honest!  I was caught up in the scene, and I felt like I was there!  I'm sure Ennis had a lot of dreams about poor Jack, good and bad  So very sad it had to be like that!
Title: Re: To Remember Happier Days
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 06, 2007, 03:59:10 pm
OMG!  Marie, did you and Merrily just bookend each other, or what?  That's amazing that Merrily would write her very first fanfic about Ennis finding the shirts in Jack's room, and you would write a fanfic about Jack taking Ennis's shirt.  And both of you would post within minutes of each other. 

You're story was so very sad.  It's so sweet that Jack needed to hold onto something that belonged to Ennis, but how awful that he couldn't simply hold on to Ennis himself.  And what a shame that if they did have to part for a while after that summer, Jack couldn't come right out and ask for the shirt.  So many secrets.  So many things left unsaid.

Gary

This is so strange, Gary!  I wrote this story months ago and made a few changes to it last night.  I don't know why I waited to post it.  I had no idea Merr would write a story about the shirts.  I guess we were on the same wavelength last night!
Title: Re: To Remember Happier Days
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 06, 2007, 04:00:24 pm
Wow littlewing, our thoughts were in the same arena today.  Imagine that.  (http://emoticons4u.com/happy/1074.gif)

Merrily


I know!  I think its awesome!
Title: Re: To Remember Happier Days
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 06, 2007, 04:02:03 pm
Ah littlewing, thank you for recreating this touching moment so beautifully .. I simply love reading your stories ... your writing can be so soft and gentle, just lovely. (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_6_202.gif)

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Thanks Susie, Baby!   :)  :-*
Title: Re: To Remember Happier Days
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 06, 2007, 04:02:54 pm
Littlewing, I love the way you make me feel sad....the image of Jack embraced by the shirts instead of his lover makes me tear up. I just love Jack so much i want to hold him and comfort him  :'(. Thank you, honey!

Dagi

Thanks for your kind words, Dagi.  I've been holding this story for months now.  I almost forgot about it!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 06, 2007, 04:05:20 pm
Ah thank you Gary honey .... perhaps I should write a part 3 to give Jack a turn!


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

I would love to read a part 3, 4, 5!!!  :)  The first 2 are just perfect! 
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 06, 2007, 05:07:22 pm
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As I was driving home from my interview this afternoon, I was getting ideas for another story.  Hmmm...is that how it happens?  I never did before.  Maybe it becomes addictive.

Yeah, that is how it happens. And it definitely becomes addictive. And you´ll love it. And we too!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 06, 2007, 05:45:59 pm
Thank you Dagi Sweetheart!  The image of Ennis laughing makes me smile too.  Oh, a sad one's coming up. ... better get my hankies ready ... can't wait!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


You´ll have to wait till sunday!  :-* :-* :-*
Title: Re: Draw
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 06, 2007, 09:19:31 pm
Now are you sure you want to know this?  Once you hear this you can never claim to be innocent again.  But here it goes...

You mentioned that Jack and Ennis were in leather, and that they were all oiled up.  Well, men who are into leather often use Crisco to perform a rather delicate act on one another.  Crisco, here in the U.S., is a common brand of shortening such as butter or lard but made from vegetable oil, and it stays semi solid at room temperature.  It's primarily used for baking of course, but these leather men like to grease up their hands and arms with it and...  I hope I don't have to say any more because just thinking about it hurts.   >:(

The things people get up to, huh?

Gary

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/7/7_9_1.gif)

Gary, I knew none of this!  Well, of course I know what Crisco is.  I buy it by the tub for baking pies.  I swear I'm learnin' something new everyday!
Title: Re: Draw
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 06, 2007, 09:21:12 pm
I always thought of this as a sort of part 3 to The Intruder



Draw by Susie

“I’m not so sure ‘bout this Jack …. I look like an idiot!”  Ennis complained, applying baby oil over his muscular shoulders and naked torso.  He heard Jack calling from the living room, “Look, we played yer game last night, now it’s my turn!  So quit yer hammerin’ and get in here!”

Ennis, feeling like a fool, swung open the living room door and swaggered into the room, dressed in boots, tighter than tight leather pants, a Resistol, and nothing else.  The sight of Jack in the same attire took his breath away, turning him three shades of red.  He thought that Jack was gonna look stupid… boy was he ever wrong!  Jack looked mighty fine all oiled up, with a very impressive package clearly visible through his leather pants.   

Jack blushed too, seemingly just as taken with the sight of Ennis.  “We stand back to back, like this…. take three steps, then turn and draw!  Got that?”  “Yep!” Ennis would have agreed to anything at that moment, impatient to get into those tight pants.  They stepped away from each other, both trying not to giggle, both secretly unfastening their flys.  On the count of three, they turned, revealing two fully cocked and loaded weapons.  They laughed heartily, grabbed each other and wrestled to the ground, both slippin’ and slidin’ against the other’s skin.  The game was soon forgotten as they got down to some serious, lubricious, lovemaking. 


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Beautiful story, SusieBaby!  So very original..inspired!  I love it! 
Title: I Remember Jack
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 07, 2007, 01:59:09 am
Ennis was not an educated man, but he had a very good memory.  He remembered every word spoken to him, every good deed ever done on his behalf.  Ennis hated this, but he was also able to recall the bad things:  the cruelty he was forced to witness, the angry words, and the lives taken from his world much too soon. 

And of course Ennis remembered Jack and the brief time they shared up on Brokeback Mountain.  He liked to concentrate on the good things about that time!  He saw Jack everywhere he looked; heard Jack’s voice at all times of the day and night.  And it was fine!  Actually, it was better than fine!  Jack Twist never spoke a harsh word to him…ever!  At least, not that he could remember!

Walking home in the cool of the evening, Ennis was enveloped by a gentle wind.  The breeze caressed his body for a short time, and in that time, he almost convulsed.  The caress of the wind brought back the memory of a gentle voice, and tenderness unlike anything he’d ever experienced in his difficult life.  The words, “Its alright, it’s alright" carried with the gentle force of the wind....

Title: Re: I Remember Jack
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 07, 2007, 07:14:48 pm
Littlewing, that is such a sweet story.  Poor Ennis is haunted by Jack, isn't he.  He's always there right with Ennis.

Merrily

Thanks, Merr!  The gentle breezes that are blowing here inspired this tale!
Title: Re: I Remember Jack
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 07, 2007, 07:15:28 pm
Oh littlewing .... poor suffering Ennis, forever haunted by his love. Beautiful, beautiful, sad moment my dear. (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_9_2.gif)     

SusieBaby (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)     


Yes!  Thanks so much, Baby!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 07, 2007, 07:17:03 pm
Thanks, Dagi!  Lol.  That line cracks me up.  I can't believe I put it in a story!  I think my 'imaginary' Jack was gettin' too sexy for my own good.

You're very (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/beautiful.gif) Dagi, I hope you know!  You have such a lovely smile.  It's amazing how beautiful everybody is here.  I'm checking my computer now for a photo to put up.  Well, for a little while anyway.  Hmm.  I'm the last one to show my face! (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/characters-118.png)

Anyway, I'm very happy to be part of our little 'Jack with Ennis' family. 

I (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/jonstewartlove.gif) this little family.

Oh, and I'm very impressed that you make your own marmalade, too. Good job!   I mow lawns, grill steaks, move heavy furniture and work a power drill better than anything I can do in the kitchen! (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/cowboy.gif)



Hi, Spicey!  It is so good to see you here!  I can't wait to see a picture of you!  It will be so nice to see your face!   :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 07, 2007, 07:20:17 pm
Hello, littlewing!  I've missed you a lot.  Thank you for all your kind words, and your neverending support, my dear friend.  (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/colouredhearts.gif)  I read here that you're a Taurus.  Me, too!  Now I know why I understand you so well!  Both sole parents, our daughters are the same age, both liked 'Green Eyes' (lol) and naughty fanfics and we're both Taureans...(is that even a word?)  When is your birthday, littlewing?  If you say April 29, I'm freaking out! (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/expressions-513.jpg)(http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/faint.gif)

(http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/HeyFlashy3.gif) I always had a feeling that you would look like Halle Berry, and I was right.  You do!  You're a beautiful lady, littlewing, inside and out.

Ah, Spicey, you're so sweet.  We do understand one another, don't we?  I had no idea that you are a Taurus, though.  We have so much in common, which is one reason I miss you so much when you're not here!  By the way, my birthday is April 21st!!!  Thanks so much for your kind, sweet words.  I hope things are better?  I'm sending a lot of positive energy your way, my Sweet!
Title: Re: I Remember Jack
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 07, 2007, 07:22:21 pm
Beautiful, Marie.  I guess being haunted by Jack's memory is both comforting and sad.  Ennis still feels Jack's presence, but at the same time he is forever mindful of his regrets.

Gary

Yes, Gary, so true.  I was moving in a different direction with this tale, but I ended up going in a different direction.  I'll have something new to post by tonight, if I get home in time.  It's good to see you, Sugar!  :)  :-*
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 07, 2007, 07:24:41 pm
(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_11_6.gif)

OMG!  Spicey, I don't think I've laughed so hard in months.  Your post here gave me such a great time.  Thanks so much.

And for the record, snowballing is when one guy has a mouth full of...um...shall we say squirt? either by way of direct deposit or feltching, and he proceeds to "share" his prize with his partner (or partners) with a kiss.  Sort of like throwing a snowball back and forth, huh?

I know some might think it's gross.  But as Dagi and I were saying about a week ago, sex is dirty, and nasty, and earthy, if done right.   ;D  Wouldn't you agree?

Gary 

Oh, is that what it is called?  Snowballing?  I wrote a nasty little fic awhile back about this very thing.  I just didn't know what it is called.  Thanks, Gary!  I'm learning so much!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 07, 2007, 11:46:03 pm
Gary you are so cute.  Little boy - nooooo...I do take you seriously.  And you know what I've said before - I love your potty mouth LOL. 

My computer is overheating and could fry my Mother Board.  The manufacturer is sending packing equipment to return it to them.  They are sending 2 day Fed Ex and it will be a 2 day return as well.  Hopefully it will be an easy fix (perhaps a weak fan system) and then 2 day Fed Ex back to me.  I say maybe 10 days or so with the turn around time and counting weekends.  I'll be here off and on all weekend, but have to shut down every so often to let it cool down. 

I love you all and know I'll be "champing at the bit" to get here and catch up when I get back. 

Love,

Merrily

Aw, merrily, I hate to hear this!  Please try to check in as much as possible!  I'll miss you being here!   :'(
Title: Re: Lost Boys
Post by: Dagi on July 08, 2007, 01:11:03 pm
Lost Boys by garycottle


Gary, the way you create scenes that become as clearly visible in my mind as if I were watching a movie is fatastic. I thought I even smellt that steamy air and saw Alma´s miserable face ...So sad, that so many persons are suffering. But most of all I felt for Ennis. Hope it was a nice dream despite his words.

Awesome writing, sweetheart!

Dagi
Title: Re: Draw
Post by: Dagi on July 08, 2007, 01:13:24 pm
I always thought of this as a sort of part 3 to The Intruder



Draw by Susie


 ......The game was soon forgotten as they got down to some serious, lubricious, lovemaking. 


Love it, Susiebell! Wow, these tighttighttight pants, *gasp*. I´d love to see their weapons ;).

Dagi
Title: Re: Draw
Post by: Dagi on July 08, 2007, 01:15:26 pm
I hope I don't have to say any more because just thinking about it hurts.   >:(

The things people get up to, huh?

Gary

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/7/7_9_1.gif)

AAAUA. Please, no Crisco story ever about our boys!!
Title: Re: I Remember Jack
Post by: Dagi on July 08, 2007, 01:20:56 pm
Ennis was not an educated man, but he had a very good memory.  He remembered every word spoken to him, every good deed ever done on his behalf.  Ennis hated this, but he was also able to recall the bad things:  the cruelty he was forced to witness, the angry words, and the lives taken from his world much too soon. 

And of course Ennis remembered Jack and the brief time they shared up on Brokeback Mountain.  He liked to concentrate on the good things about that time!  He saw Jack everywhere he looked; heard Jack’s voice at all times of the day and night.  And it was fine!  Actually, it was better than fine!  Jack Twist never spoke a harsh word to him…ever!  At least, not that he could remember!

Walking home in the cool of the evening, Ennis was enveloped by a gentle wind.  The breeze caressed his body for a short time, and in that time, he almost convulsed.  The caress of the wind brought back the memory of a gentle voice, and tenderness unlike anything he’d ever experienced in his difficult life.  The words, “Its alright, it’s alright" carried with the gentle force of the wind....



Oh Marie, that was sweet and sad. But mostly sweet. You know, I too remember almost every single word of Jack´s , and the way he looked at Ennis, and even the way he says "Ennis " with that husky, soft voice....how could Ennis not remember?

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 08, 2007, 01:26:42 pm


You're very (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/beautiful.gif) Dagi, I hope you know!  You have such a lovely smile.



Spiceylife, you´re a sweetheart. If you had said  Dagi, you´re sexy as hell   I sure would have agreed, but beautiful? Never! Thank god I control which pics you get to see :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

But it´s always nice to get a compliment! Thank you!

Dagi

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 08, 2007, 01:31:44 pm
What?  No feltching?  Damn it!  I want feltching.   ;D

I'm looking forward to it, Spicey, not matter what you include.

Gary

Looks like you´ll have to provide that sort of story, Gary, Our Master Of Queer Sex  (http://www.smileygarden.de/smilie/Sonstige/Hail.sml.gif)  !
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 08, 2007, 01:41:32 pm

Ah Spicey, my new best friend!  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_6_102.gif)

And thanks for the compliment ... Of course I don't believe a word you've said but thank you anyway sweetheart!!
(just ask Gary ... he tried to pay me a compliment and got a right ear bashing!)  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_1_104v.gif)

Isn't it odd... I've always envied lovely straight MANAGEABLE hair ... mine just misbehaves all the time .. looks exactly the same when I get out of bed .... or when I've combed it ... makes no difference!!!  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/15/15_4_121v.gif)

The girls had to take about 20 photos just to get a couple of decent ones .... oh well ... in for a penny, in for a pound ... here's a full size version of some of them: 

(http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s31/Susiebell_album/Family%20Photos/Susan3.jpg)

(http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s31/Susiebell_album/Family%20Photos/Susan4.jpg)

(http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s31/Susiebell_album/Family%20Photos/Susan2.jpg)


I do miss you honey ... I so miss our Jakefests with Daphne and Shasta .... (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_15_2.gif) .... drooling .... admiring .... squabbling over who likes him the best!  I've been posting all the Jake photos from IMDb onto the "Jake Jake Jake" thread ... just in case it gets wiped out ... and I'm having loads of fun oogling over him with Dagi, but we both need you to join us over there!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)




Oh Susie, you look soooo lovely!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 08, 2007, 01:43:45 pm
 

BTW, I am going to have to send my computer in for repair in a few days so will be without it for no telling how long.  I'll have to go to the library to do my sending of resumes etc. but will try and at least check in from time to time. 

Merrily ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D

Merrily, please come here as often as possible! We would miss you!

DAgi
Title: Re: Lost Boys
Post by: Dagi on July 08, 2007, 03:04:22 pm
Thank you so much, Dagi.  I really appreciate it. 

In my story, the girls are watching Salem's Lot, which is a mini series based on the vampire story by Stephen King.  The character of Alma Jr. is about my age, and I can remember how excited all the kids were when that first came on TV back in '79.  In the mini series a stranger moves to the sleepy New England village of Salem's Lot.  He rents a spooky old house just outside of town, and opens up an antique shop on Main Street.  He has a "partner" that no one ever sees.  It's implied that the backward townsfolk think that they're a gay couple, but what's really going on is that the unseen partner is actually a vampire, and the other one is his daytime protector.

Gary

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/8/8_1_220.gif)

thanks for explaining this to me. I thought it was a strange dream about a "sweet life" dreamt by paranoid Ennis. I do wonder why Alma didn´t wake him up, seems she was somehow curious what else Ennis might probably say...??

Hey, I can´t believe it, we are on the board at the same time! Admit it, you couldn´t wait for my comment ;D!

Dagi
Title: Re: Draw
Post by: Dagi on July 08, 2007, 03:07:09 pm
(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_11_6.gif)

Guess I've pushed the envelope enough when Dagi starts to object.   :P

Gary

Please send me the address of that smiley!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 08, 2007, 03:09:36 pm
Master of Queer Sex?  Dear God!  I'd better get busy if I'm going to live up to that title.  Gee!  No pressure there.

Good thing I'm moving to California soon, huh?

Gary

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/1/1_4_85.gif)

YEEEHAAAW! Someone should warn the Californian gays, it´s goin´ta get HOT there in a few weeks!
Title: Re: Lost Boys
Post by: Dagi on July 08, 2007, 03:18:53 pm
Oh Dagi, I was just heartbroken when I didn't see a comment from you about my story.  I knew you were on the board, and I kept waiting for you to say something.  And after a while I was think, gosh, she really hates it.  I'm thrilled to know that I was wrong.   ;D

Gary

How could I ever hate one of YOUR stories ? ? ? You kept waiting for my comment....aaahhh, don´t know what to say, I´m really touched.

 :-* Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 08, 2007, 03:35:03 pm


Isn't it odd... I've always envied lovely straight MANAGEABLE hair ... mine just misbehaves all the time .. looks exactly the same when I get out of bed .... or when I've combed it ... makes no difference!!! 



Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)





Means you look lovely when you get out of bed...I envy you!  :laugh:

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 08, 2007, 11:26:58 pm

Ah Spicey, my new best friend!  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_6_102.gif)

And thanks for the compliment ... Of course I don't believe a word you've said but thank you anyway sweetheart!!
(just ask Gary ... he tried to pay me a compliment and got a right ear bashing!)  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_1_104v.gif)

Isn't it odd... I've always envied lovely straight MANAGEABLE hair ... mine just misbehaves all the time .. looks exactly the same when I get out of bed .... or when I've combed it ... makes no difference!!!  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/15/15_4_121v.gif)

The girls had to take about 20 photos just to get a couple of decent ones .... oh well ... in for a penny, in for a pound ... here's a full size version of some of them: 

(http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s31/Susiebell_album/Family%20Photos/Susan3.jpg)

(http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s31/Susiebell_album/Family%20Photos/Susan4.jpg)

(http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s31/Susiebell_album/Family%20Photos/Susan2.jpg)




I do miss you honey ... I so miss our Jakefests with Daphne and Shasta .... (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_15_2.gif) .... drooling .... admiring .... squabbling over who likes him the best!  I've been posting all the Jake photos from IMDb onto the "Jake Jake Jake" thread ... just in case it gets wiped out ... and I'm having loads of fun oogling over him with Dagi, but we both need you to join us over there!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)




Lovely pics, SusieBaby.  Just beautiful!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 08, 2007, 11:27:50 pm
Hi Marie.  I will miss you too.  You are the soft, sweet, sensitive one who writes such beautiful stories.  No Crisco!  I'll be back, don't worry. 

Merrily

Thanks, Merr!  I can't imagine this place without you!
Title: Re: I Remember Jack
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 08, 2007, 11:29:01 pm
Oh Marie, that was sweet and sad. But mostly sweet. You know, I too remember almost every single word of Jack´s , and the way he looked at Ennis, and even the way he says "Ennis " with that husky, soft voice....how could Ennis not remember?

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi, Sweets!  Thanks for your kind words.  It is so good to see you!  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 08, 2007, 11:31:35 pm
They're all just on smileycentral Merrily... you have to type in "sex" in the search box and it comes up with all sorts of rude ones .... well I imagine it does anyway!! 

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_22_25.gif)

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

My, My, My!!!!  ::)  :o
Title: Sitting Pretty
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 08, 2007, 11:42:24 pm
Merrily, Honey, this one is for you!  I hope you're around to see it.

Midnight, and Ennis and Jack were just turning in after a day of hiking, talking, playing cards and eating.  Both were very tired and very content to be together.  They laughed as the last embers of the fire crackled and performed an eerie dance among the shadows of the night.

Ennis was the first to enter the tent.  He undressed in haste as Jack poured a bucket of water on the fire.  The night promised to be cold, but the tent was warm and Ennis was suddenly on fire.  He brought a few small fold-away chairs this time to ease the burden of sitting on the stiff, unforgiving ground.  Completely undressed, Ennis sat down on a small chair, his manhood standing straight up, at attention!

Jack pushed his way into the tent, almost falling backwards as he noticed a nude Ennis sitting erect and tall in the chair.  Something else was standing straight up: ramrod hard and twitching!  Jack chucked softly as he noticed Ennis’ cock head resembled a big, savory mushroom. 

“That looks like a nice place to sit!”  Jack laughed as he pointed to Ennis’ member.

“What…the chair?”  Ennis joked as he ran his cold hand along the sides of the chair.  “You want to sit down, Rodeo?”

Jack wasted no time!  He disrobed faster than he ever had!  Ennis reached out for his lover and Jack moved closer.  He turned his back to Ennis and eased down…..




Title: Re: Meadowlark
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 09, 2007, 12:57:39 am
Meadowlark by garycottle

It was near suppertime and Ennis hadn’t returned to camp, so Jack decided to go looking for him.  He found him in the meadow just upstream.  Jack scanned the open expanse and saw Ennis’s bare feet perched on a log.  When Jack drew closer he discovered the man was prostate and his hat laid over his face.

Jack bent down and plucked a weed and then proceeded to lightly graze Ennis’s dirty soles, causing the toes to twitch a couple of times.  But then Ennis suddenly sprang to life and wrestled Jack to the ground.  He had been playing possum.

“Boy, I’ll show you who’s goin’ to get tickled around here,” Ennis said. 

He playfully bit his friend on the nose and then rolled over and laid beside him.  The unexpected rush of activity was followed by an easy lull.  They were silent a moment, and then Ennis said, “It’d be real nice if we lived out here all the time, Jack.”

“Maybe we could buy us a piece of land out this way,” Jack said.

“I don’t mean it like that.  I don’t want no deed.  I’m talkin’ about just takin’ off and leavin’ the world behind.”

Jack raised up on his elbow and looked at Ennis.  He said, “You’re talkin’ like somebody who’s been drinkin’ dandelion wine.  How would we get by?”

With a tinge of bitterness Ennis said, “We could live off the land.  That’s how they did it a hundred fuckin’ years ago.”  He then turned over onto his belly, collected his hat, looked down at the rim, and said in a defeated tone, “Never mind.  It was a dumbass thing to say.  No matter how you work it there’s no way out.”

“Ennis...”  Jack wanted to say he was sorry, but he held his tongue.  And he almost mentioned something about the two of them going to live on has daddy’s place, but he thought better of that, too.  Finally he laid his hand on the small of Ennis’s back and merely said, “Let’s go get us somethin’ to eat.”

Beautiful tale, Gary!  Very moving and a bit sad.  I'm glad to see Ennis wishing out loud that they could be together, no matter how casually!  But then real life rears it's ugly head and shatters our boys' dream of being together!  Very well written, Gary!  You're a master!
Title: Re: Sitting Pretty
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 09, 2007, 01:00:23 am
Wow!  littlewing, that's really sexy.  I can just picture Ennis sitting in that chair with his mushroom head pointing toward the tent's ceiling.  I don't blame Jack for going for it.   :D

Gary

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_13_17.gif)

Ah Gary, thanks for that.  You're such a sweet, sexy man!  ;)
Title: Re: Sitting Pretty
Post by: Dagi on July 09, 2007, 06:40:24 am
Merrily, Honey, this one is for you!  I hope you're around to see it.

Midnight, and Ennis and Jack were just turning in after a day of hiking, talking, playing cards and eating.  Both were very tired and very content to be together.  They laughed as the last embers of the fire crackled and performed an eerie dance among the shadows of the night.

Ennis was the first to enter the tent.  He undressed in haste as Jack poured a bucket of water on the fire.  The night promised to be cold, but the tent was warm and Ennis was suddenly on fire.  He brought a few small fold-away chairs this time to ease the burden of sitting on the stiff, unforgiving ground.  Completely undressed, Ennis sat down on a small chair, his manhood standing straight up, at attention!

Jack pushed his way into the tent, almost falling backwards as he noticed a nude Ennis sitting erect and tall in the chair.  Something else was standing straight up: ramrod hard and twitching!  Jack chucked softly as he noticed Ennis’ cock head resembled a big, savory mushroom. 

“That looks like a nice place to sit!”  Jack laughed as he pointed to Ennis’ member.

“What…the chair?”  Ennis joked as he ran his cold hand along the sides of the chair.  “You want to sit down, Rodeo?”

Jack wasted no time!  He disrobed faster than he ever had!  Ennis reached out for his lover and Jack moved closer.  He turned his back to Ennis and eased down…..






Love that big, savory mushroom! Sexy, sexy Littlewing!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 09, 2007, 06:45:47 am
Hi Dagi and Susie, that sentiment Dagi I can speak for first hand.  You guys have been there for me so many times when I've been feeling sorry for myself but you never judge me, just send me all kinds of love.  Spicey - you will be in good hands honey.  These people here are First Rate generous and caring people.

Merrily

I got so much support on this board and via PM, I really love each and everyone of you. You feel so real. Hm, that´s because you ARE real, I suppose :D.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 09, 2007, 06:48:43 am
Oh Merrily, don't you be fooled by Susie's angelic pose.  Who do you think told me to type in sex in the smiley search engine?

Gary

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/7/7_2_101.gif)

Did you try to type in "rimming" / "feltching" / "snowballing" ? Those are really good  ::)!

Dagi
Title: Re: Meadowlark
Post by: Dagi on July 09, 2007, 06:55:29 am
Meadowlark by garycottle

It was near suppertime and Ennis hadn’t returned to camp, so Jack decided to go looking for him.  He found him in the meadow just upstream.  Jack scanned the open expanse and saw Ennis’s bare feet perched on a log.  When Jack drew closer he discovered the man was prostrate and his hat laid over his face.

Jack bent down and plucked a weed and then proceeded to lightly graze Ennis’s dirty soles, causing the toes to twitch a couple of times.  But then Ennis suddenly sprang to life and wrestled Jack to the ground.  He had been playing possum.

“Boy, I’ll show you who’s goin’ to get tickled around here,” Ennis said. 

He playfully bit his friend on the nose and then rolled over and laid beside him.  The unexpected rush of activity was followed by an easy lull.  They were silent a moment, and then Ennis said, “It’d be real nice if we lived out here all the time, Jack.”

“Maybe we could buy us a piece of land out this way,” Jack said.

“I don’t mean it like that.  I don’t want no deed.  I’m talkin’ about just takin’ off and leavin’ the world behind.”

Jack raised up on his elbow and looked at Ennis.  He said, “You’re talkin’ like somebody who’s been drinkin’ dandelion wine.  How would we get by?”

With a tinge of bitterness Ennis said, “We could live off the land.  That’s how they did it a hundred fuckin’ years ago.”  He then turned over onto his belly, collected his hat, looked down at the rim, and said in a defeated tone, “Never mind.  It was a dumbass thing to say.  No matter how you work it there’s no way out.”

“Ennis...”  Jack wanted to say he was sorry, but he held his tongue.  And he almost mentioned something about the two of them going to live on has daddy’s place, but he thought better of that, too.  Finally he laid his hand on the small of Ennis’s back and merely said, “Let’s go get us somethin’ to eat.”

I had to wait about five minutes to calm down and stop sobbing before I can comment on it now. They both want the same thing - to be together. Ennis on a lonesome island so that he doesn´t have to deal with his fears. But the fact that Jack is already about to give up hope is what really breaks my heart. A person like Jack, giving up hope, trying to be content with what he can get, but craving a live with his love - oh no, damn it, I won´t start crying again. :'(  Darn...

Gary, I love your writing. Thank you for making me cry.

Dagi :(
Title: Re: Meadowlark
Post by: Dagi on July 09, 2007, 06:56:50 am

P.S. You see, I can be serious when I want to be.  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_12_6.gif)

Um...okay, that's enough.
(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_1_73.gif)


 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

I love you, Gary! Thank you for cheering me up!! D.
Title: Re: Meadowlark
Post by: Dagi on July 09, 2007, 12:24:06 pm
Hi there Dagi sweetheart,  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_1_202.gif)

Aw, did I make you go and cry again?  Well anyway, thanks so much for the kind words and the encouragement.  Someday soon I'll try to think of a happy one, or a sexy one.  Maybe I'll write something about Jack and Ennis meeting a boy serving hotdogs in the park on the 4th of July.   :-X
:laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

Gary

 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: As I said, I love that special sort of hotdogs.... ;)

You know how to cheer me up. But I love to cry about them every once in a while. I´ll love your stories whether they are sad or funny or happy...and of course I love the sexy ones! The hot ones! The dirty and nasty and naughty and earthy ones! I admit I´m one of the sexaholics here  ::) .

D.

Title: Re: Admiration
Post by: Dagi on July 09, 2007, 05:24:51 pm
Admiration by garycottle

Jack was all set to lunge but then he caught sight of Ennis, and suddenly he wanted to enjoy the view.  You can see something a thousand times without really looking at it, but every now and then you stop and realize just how handsome a certain tree is, or a mountain, or a person, or a specific part of a person.  Jack had been down on his knees in front of Ennis a hundred times at least.  Maybe more.  But this was one of those occasions when he wanted to pay extra close attention.

Ennis was thick and meaty down there, and he had a couple of ropy, purplish veins that ran along his shaft.  His big, spongy, slightly darker head flared out like a storm trooper’s helmet.  Ennis had a real man’s cock.  And if that wasn’t enough, his firm, pink, fuzzy balls hanging low reminded Jack of fresh, ripe peaches.  Ennis was turgid and oozing, and in this state he listed to the left a little three quarters of the way up, and then he turned in the same direction a bit more sharply.  Jack knew that the irregular shape and the girth was what made Ennis feel so good inside of him.

Jack took Ennis’s balls into his hand and smiled up at his friend.  “You’re so beautiful, Ennis.  The way you’re made...”

“Quit your yammerin’, Jack.  I can’t stand it much longer.”

Jack leaned in and tickled Ennis's piss slit with the tip of his tongue, causing the man to shutter.  He could literally see the hairs on Ennis’s arms stand up, and he took pride in knowing that he was making that happen.

What a lovely idea! Now could you please describe JakeJacks precious parts in the same detailed and admiring way?

You caused me to shutter with that last part :D :o.

Dagi
Title: Re: Admiration
Post by: Dagi on July 09, 2007, 06:26:50 pm
Hmmm  I'm thinking Jack would be more slender, but longer, and his would stick straight up when excited.  He'd have one of those that would flop back and slap his tummy if you bent it down and let go.   :P

Gary

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/18/18_3_3.gif)

P.S. I thought I saw a fanfic from you, and I was looking forward to reading it.  Where did it go?  Have I lost my mind?


Thank you, Gary. Merrily will complain again that we are going off topic....and I thought we are here to have fun ? ? ?
Title: Son Of A Bitch
Post by: Dagi on July 09, 2007, 06:54:12 pm
Here it is again, this time corrected by poor Susie. Its a long one, and not a light one, I´m sorry. Thank you Susiebell!

Son Of A Bitch by Dagi

They pressed their bodies together in a tight embrace, neither of them willing to let go, each trying to not let out a moan that would reveal how they felt every time they had to part, each trying to be strong for the other´s sake.
After what seemed an eternity, Ennis tried to pull back since he knew it was time for Jack to go, a long ride home waiting for him. But Jack didn´t let him, pulled him even closer.
„Son of a bitch, Ennis, why ya do this to me, hurts so much to have to let you go....can´t let you go...damn it...“, his words merely a choked whisper.
Ennis´ eyes filled with tears, he felt the same way but would rather bite off his tongue than admit it, for he knew it was because of him that they had to part again and again, so many times he had already lost count.
Jack didn´t dare think of that goddamn emptiness he would fall into again in Childress, an emptiness so empty he sometimes had to get drunk, not in order to not feel anything anymore, but to feel anything at all.
 „Why did ya do this to me, Jack?“ Ennis murmured hardly audible.
„Do what?“ „ Why d'ya make me love ya so much?“ he thought, looking at Jack, not bothering any more about hiding the tears in his dark eyes.
Jack ran his fingers through those beloved curls, took this beloved face in both his hands and kissed Ennis so tenderly, their lips scarcely touching, breathing and moaning into each other´s mouths, tongues meeting  sweet and wet and soft. The moans became louder, the desire stronger until Ennis whispered raucously „ Take me, Jack, please, do me once more, I want ta take ya home with me...“
Jack stared at him, surprised, but a second later he turned Ennis around, pressed him against the truck and with trembling hands he shoved down both their jeans. He hesitated a moment, almost unable to hold back once his erect member touched firm flesh, but Ennis thrusted back against him, moaning loud, his head lolling back, answer enough.
The urge overwhelmed Jack, and with an animal grunt he pushed in all the way in one, knowing he was causing pain without any lube at all, wishing it almost, anger and grief and rage running through him now in hot waves, oddly mixed up with desire, and he pushed in and pulled back and pushed in hard again, Ennis becoming silent, only breathing heavily, knowing he was getting punished in a way for doing this to Jack, for leaving him again and again, for refusing to give him what he was craving so much.
Despite the pain,  the feel of Jack inside of him, filling him up, taking him mercilessly, submitting him to his own will, excited him more that he would ever have dared to admit, and he felt that he was about to come without even touching himself, needing both hands to hold on to the truck for his legs threatened to give way under him.
Jack´s grip around Ennis´ hips became even stronger, he buried his nails in his victims flesh crying out loud when they came only seconds apart in wave after wave, Jack holding Ennis so close they became like one body.
There they stood shaking, faces wet with sweat and tears, aware that something inside of them had broken.
„Did I hurt you?“ Jack whispered when they had calmed down a little. “I´m sorry, didn´t mean to....well, maybe I did...“.
Ennis finally turned around, folded his love in his arms and stroke his face in a tender gesture.
„S´alright, Jack....s´alright“.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 09, 2007, 06:57:12 pm
This time it was me waiting for a comment from you, Gary, and I even got paranoid enough to delete it again. But now I think like it or not, what the heck.

Posting stories really kills my nerves. I go to bed right now.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on July 09, 2007, 11:11:15 pm
Yahoo!
Just came back from vacation to find you guys are up to page 150! The last time I posted was waaaaay back on page 65. I have 85 pages to read! I gotta make a new project for BetterMost Craft Corners, too. Bravo, folks!
Ahh sweet demand, the price of success. I'm so proud! Trouble is, now I'll never get caught up.
Title: Re: Meadowlark
Post by: Clyde-B on July 09, 2007, 11:24:05 pm
Meadowlark by garycottle

It was near suppertime and Ennis hadn’t returned to camp, so Jack decided to go looking for him.  He found him in the meadow just upstream.  Jack scanned the open expanse and saw Ennis’s bare feet perched on a log.  When Jack drew closer he discovered the man was prostrate and his hat laid over his face.

Jack bent down and plucked a weed and then proceeded to lightly graze Ennis’s dirty soles, causing the toes to twitch a couple of times.  But then Ennis suddenly sprang to life and wrestled Jack to the ground.  He had been playing possum.

“Boy, I’ll show you who’s goin’ to get tickled around here,” Ennis said. 

He playfully bit his friend on the nose and then rolled over and laid beside him.  The unexpected rush of activity was followed by an easy lull.  They were silent a moment, and then Ennis said, “It’d be real nice if we lived out here all the time, Jack.”

“Maybe we could buy us a piece of land out this way,” Jack said.

“I don’t mean it like that.  I don’t want no deed.  I’m talkin’ about just takin’ off and leavin’ the world behind.”

Jack raised up on his elbow and looked at Ennis.  He said, “You’re talkin’ like somebody who’s been drinkin’ dandelion wine.  How would we get by?”

With a tinge of bitterness Ennis said, “We could live off the land.  That’s how they did it a hundred fuckin’ years ago.”  He then turned over onto his belly, collected his hat, looked down at the rim, and said in a defeated tone, “Never mind.  It was a dumbass thing to say.  No matter how you work it there’s no way out.”

“Ennis...”  Jack wanted to say he was sorry, but he held his tongue.  And he almost mentioned something about the two of them going to live on has daddy’s place, but he thought better of that, too.  Finally he laid his hand on the small of Ennis’s back and merely said, “Let’s go get us somethin’ to eat.”

Sweet!

Haven't thought about dandelion wine in years.  You make it, Gary?
Title: Re: Admiration
Post by: Clyde-B on July 09, 2007, 11:33:38 pm
Admiration by garycottle

Jack was all set to lunge but then he caught sight of Ennis, and suddenly he wanted to enjoy the view.  You can see something a thousand times without really looking at it, but every now and then you stop and realize just how handsome a certain tree is, or a mountain, or a person, or a specific part of a person.  Jack had been down on his knees in front of Ennis a hundred times at least.  Maybe more.  But this was one of those occasions when he wanted to pay extra close attention.

Ennis was thick and meaty down there, and he had a couple of ropy, purplish veins that ran along his shaft.  His big, spongy, slightly darker head flared out like a storm trooper’s helmet.  Ennis had a real man’s cock.  And if that wasn’t enough, his firm, pink, fuzzy balls hanging low reminded Jack of fresh, ripe peaches.  Ennis was turgid and oozing, and in this state he listed to the left a little three quarters of the way up, and then he turned in the same direction a bit more sharply.  Jack knew that the irregular shape and the girth was what made Ennis feel so good inside of him.

Jack took Ennis’s balls into his hand and smiled up at his friend.  “You’re so beautiful, Ennis.  The way you’re made...”

“Quit your yammerin’, Jack.  I can’t stand it much longer.”

Jack leaned in and tickled Ennis's piss slit with the tip of his tongue, causing the man to shutter.  He could literally see the hairs on Ennis’s arms stand up, and he took pride in knowing that he was making that happen.

Oh my!  I think I saw Darth Vader spit.   *fan fan fan*
Title: Re: Sitting Pretty
Post by: Clyde-B on July 09, 2007, 11:47:58 pm

“That looks like a nice place to sit!”  Jack laughed as he pointed to Ennis’ member.

“What…the chair?”  Ennis joked as he ran his cold hand along the sides of the chair.  “You want to sit down, Rodeo?”

Jack wasted no time!  He disrobed faster than he ever had!  Ennis reached out for his lover and Jack moved closer.  He turned his back to Ennis and eased down…..






So, they just talk about the first thing that pops up?

Marie, you guys are like bunny rabbits.  Miss one day and you're five pages behind!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on July 09, 2007, 11:58:17 pm

There they stood shaking, faces wet with sweat and tears, aware that something inside of them had broken.
„Did I hurt you?“ Jack whispered when they had calmed down a little.“I´m sorry, didn´t mean to....well, maybe I did...“.
Ennis finally turned around, folded his love in his arms and stroke his face in a tender gesture.
„S´alright, Jack....s´alright“.

Whoa Dagi,

Raw and hot and sad.
Title: Re: Dagi's unnamed story part 2
Post by: Clyde-B on July 10, 2007, 12:03:45 am
Sorry Dagi, your story made me so sad and this just spilled out of me!



Part 2 by Susie



Jack stared into his rear view mirror, the reflection of Ennis’ truck pulling out of the parking lot and heading off down the dirt track was an all too familiar sight.  His heart sank slowly into his stomach at the prospect of yet another fourteen hour drive, each moment taking him a step further away from his love, a step closer to nothing.  How much more of this could he take?  Every departure ripped tiny pieces of his heart clean out of his chest, and now, only shattered fragments remained. 

He switched on the radio, set the truck in reverse and backed out onto the road.  Tears filled his eyes, brimming over and spilling down his cheeks, “Damn you, Ennis Del Mar!”   He replayed their final moments together over and over in his mind, he’d needed to hurt Ennis, to make Ennis feel some of his pain.  But now that his anger had subsided, it left behind a deepening sadness at so many words once again left unspoken.

The radio helped to wile away some of the hours, providing a little distraction, until the words “Crazy” began to echo around him, taking him back to Pete’s Saloon, empty but for the two of them, back to the worn lanolium dance floor and into the arms of his man, “I love you, Ennis Del Mar.”  He pulled the truck over suddenly, stumbled out and fell, wretching, to his knees.


Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Love the way you used this to connect Gary's story and Dagi's
Title: Re: Meadowlark
Post by: Clyde-B on July 10, 2007, 12:20:20 am
I never made it myself, but my father used to work with a woman who made it and gave jars of it away for Christmas.  I wasn't allowed to try any.   >:(

Gary

It's potent stuff!   :laugh:
Title: Re: Sitting Pretty
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 10, 2007, 01:49:13 am
Oh my dear Lord, Littlewing!!!  So hot and sexy!!  And what a lovely image of Ennis to start my day! Lovely littlewing!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

ps.  Oh yeah, I forgot we're supposed to be writing stories .... you see .... the boss is away, and we all come out to play!!  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/3/3_7_6.gif) 

I see the boss is back?  :o
Title: Re: Sitting Pretty
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 10, 2007, 01:49:58 am
Love that big, savory mushroom! Sexy, sexy Littlewing!

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi, honey!
Title: Re: Admiration
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 10, 2007, 01:54:42 am
Admiration by garycottle

Jack was all set to lunge but then he caught sight of Ennis, and suddenly he wanted to enjoy the view.  You can see something a thousand times without really looking at it, but every now and then you stop and realize just how handsome a certain tree is, or a mountain, or a person, or a specific part of a person.  Jack had been down on his knees in front of Ennis a hundred times at least.  Maybe more.  But this was one of those occasions when he wanted to pay extra close attention.

Ennis was thick and meaty down there, and he had a couple of ropy, purplish veins that ran along his shaft.  His big, spongy, slightly darker head flared out like a storm trooper’s helmet.  Ennis had a real man’s cock.  And if that wasn’t enough, his firm, pink, fuzzy balls hanging low reminded Jack of fresh, ripe peaches.  Ennis was turgid and oozing, and in this state he listed to the left a little three quarters of the way up, and then he turned in the same direction a bit more sharply.  Jack knew that the irregular shape and the girth was what made Ennis feel so good inside of him.

Jack took Ennis’s balls into his hand and smiled up at his friend.  “You’re so beautiful, Ennis.  The way you’re made...”

“Quit your yammerin’, Jack.  I can’t stand it much longer.”

Jack leaned in and tickled Ennis's piss slit with the tip of his tongue, causing the man to shutter.  He could literally see the hairs on Ennis’s arms stand up, and he took pride in knowing that he was making that happen.

The sound you all hear is big, dirty mama falling flat on the floor!!! ::)  Gary, this is so sexy and so descriptive!  I love the way you talk about Ennis' manhood!  I can picture it in my mind's eye.  Brilliant, Gary!  Such a sweet, sexy, moving, intimate moment!  I loved reading every word!
Title: Re: Admiration
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 10, 2007, 01:56:13 am
Hmmm  I'm thinking Jack would be more slender, but longer, and his would stick straight up when excited.  He'd have one of those that would flop back and slap his tummy if you bent it down and let go.   :P

Gary

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/18/18_3_3.gif)

P.S. I thought I saw a fanfic from you, and I was looking forward to reading it.  Where did it go?  Have I lost my mind?


Oh, my!!!  ::)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 10, 2007, 03:10:36 am
Aww Dagi, sweetheart.  Now you stop being paranoid.  I had read it, but when I was about to comment on it, it was gone again.  Leaving me with that Twilight Zone feeling.  (Gary trembles as he contemplates how he could have read a story that doesn't exist.)

Dagi, you need not worry, at all.  This is remarkable work.  So emotionally raw and true.  And it just so happens to be very close to my view of Jack's and Ennis's sex life.  Except with me it's Ennis that tends to take out his frustrations on Jack.  When you have sex you let go, and if you're feeling tender and loving that's what comes out, but if you're conflicted then that's what's going to come out.  And I think the boys are conflicted most of the time.  You did a wonderful job demonstrating that.

Beatiful, powerful, sad stuff.

Gary 

Thank you Gary, you are a sweetheart.

I know that I will never stop being paranoid. You just don´t know what it means to write a story and share it with native speakers, knowing it is clumsily written and that I should just shut up and stop doing things I am unable do the way I want to. But that story has been in my mind for a long time and wanted to be written, so I did it in order to get ridd of it. Needless to say that I spent another hour in bed wondering whether I should delete it again, before more people can read it. Okay, I know by now that I don´t have to fear the judgement of my family here, but what about everybody else who visits that site?

I tried to let the story end in a different way, but it didn´t work. It´s painful, but I can feel Jack´s frustration and anger, and I thought it was his turn to let it out, although I agree that it´s normally Ennis who does that.

Thanks for your comment, Gary!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 10, 2007, 03:16:22 am
Oh Dagi, this is such a beautiful, sad story!  Why can't they ever just talk to each other, really tell each other how they feel.  Sex seems to be their only way of communicating sometimes.  For Jack to deliberately hurt Ennis just chokes me up terribly .... I can really feel his anger and frustration.   

And for Ennis to whisper "s'alright" to Jack .... accepting the blame  .... well that just kills me!

Beautiful Dagi honey.

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

thank you Susie! And thank you again for your help. Sorry that  you even had to correct my dumbass typos. 
Title: Re: Dagi's unnamed story part 2
Post by: Dagi on July 10, 2007, 03:21:44 am
Sorry Dagi, your story made me so sad and this just spilled out of me!



Part 2 by Susie



Jack stared into his rear view mirror, the reflection of Ennis’ truck pulling out of the parking lot and heading off down the dirt track was an all too familiar sight.  His heart sank slowly into his stomach at the prospect of yet another fourteen hour drive, each moment taking him a step further away from his love, a step closer to nothing.  How much more of this could he take?  Every departure ripped tiny pieces of his heart clean out of his chest, and now, only shattered fragments remained. 

He switched on the radio, set the truck in reverse and backed out onto the road.  Tears filled his eyes, brimming over and spilling down his cheeks, “Damn you, Ennis Del Mar!”   He replayed their final moments together over and over in his mind, he’d needed to hurt Ennis, to make Ennis feel some of his pain.  But now that his anger had subsided, it left behind a deepening sadness at so many words once again left unspoken.

The radio helped to wile away some of the hours, providing a little distraction, until the words “Crazy” began to echo around him, taking him back to Pete’s Saloon, empty but for the two of them, back to the worn lanolium dance floor and into the arms of his man, “I love you, Ennis Del Mar.”  He pulled the truck over suddenly, stumbled out and fell, wretching, to his knees.


Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



Susie, don´t know what to say, I´m typing with tears in my eyes, your story really choked me up. What a beautifully written and sad sequel. So many things said in so few lines. You are a great writer. :-*

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 10, 2007, 03:27:54 am
Whoa Dagi,

Raw and hot and sad.

Thank you for your comment, I thought you have already forgotten about us. I LOVE your drabbles!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 10, 2007, 05:02:29 am
Hi Susie  ;D.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 10, 2007, 05:14:42 am
I just noticed that they changed the number of posts per page from 15 to ten. Now everything I wrote in the archive about the pages where the stories can be found in the original thread is obsolete  ???  :(    >:(.

I couldn´t believe myself that it was on page sixtysomething that Toycoon left us....that explains it.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 10, 2007, 05:18:44 am
Ah Dagi sweetheart .. you're daft as a brush!  Your story was perfect, really it was!  Your English is better than mine girl, and your writing has a wonderful sensitivity to it!  So quit yer hammerin' and write me another one!!

.... ooh that sounded mean .. me sorry! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_2_109v.gif)  I love you and I love your stories!!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

I don´t believe a word of it, but thank you anyway, Susiebell, I DO love you!

And Gary, yes girls ARE difficult, girls suck sometimes ( ;D), we know that , you had better get used to it.
Title: Re: Admiration
Post by: Dagi on July 10, 2007, 05:31:30 am
Thought this might be easier to swallow, so to speak.   ;)


The way you described it I do not really think so   :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: !

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 10, 2007, 05:42:15 am


ps .. what a shame about the messages per page ... if you want any help sorting through them, I'll be happy to help.

I won´t sort them out, I go on posting them per date, but thanks for the offer, honey!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 10, 2007, 06:13:40 am
Quick guys .... it's the boss .... back to your desks!!


   Clyde      Littlewing     Shasta      Dagi        Gary         Merrily          Susie      Toycoon
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Lovely to see you back again sweetheart! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_2_106.gif)

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

You are incredible, Susie. Incredible.

Dagi
Title: Re: Smoking Pot
Post by: Dagi on July 10, 2007, 08:02:25 am
Smoking Pot by Susie


The two middle aged men sat quietly staring out over the lake to the mountains beyond, silhouetted against the night sky. The sombre mood gradually lifted as they passed the joint back and forth between them.  Silence turned to chatter, chatter turned to raucous laughter. Jack leaned over suddenly, kissing his startled lover, deep and hard, “Sorry bud, just couldn’t resist those beautiful lips.” Ennis smiled, pulling him back, kissing him harder, seemed Ennis couldn’t resist either.

“Come on, let’s do it like we did first time!” Jack was a horny teenager, pulling at his jeans, giggling, and getting down on all fours. Ennis, thinking it was a fine idea, lowered his fly. He fumbled around in the dark, muttering to himself, and finally gave up, “Can’t find where to put it...”  Laughter erupted between them, bouncing off the peaks and echoing all around, they both collapsed on the ground.

“And you call me a Dumbass… Dumbass!” Jack, undeterred, climbed on top of Ennis, eyes hazy with a mixture of pot and lust, “You just lie there lil’ darlin’, I’ll show you where to put it!”



Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



Susie, you are soooooo great. I´m laughing so hard, you should hear me. Thank god smoking pot only affects their brains, not their......

Dagi
Title: Re: Smoking Pot
Post by: Dagi on July 10, 2007, 08:45:58 am
Ah thank you sweetie!  Are we EVER going to get our housework done??

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Hm.....I´ve been here for 3 hours now. Gotta go, Till just woke up. see you later!
Title: Re: Admiration
Post by: Toycoon on July 10, 2007, 10:20:09 am
The sound you all hear is big, dirty mama falling flat on the floor!!! ::)  Gary, this is so sexy and so descriptive!  I love the way you talk about Ennis' manhood!  I can picture it in my mind's eye.  Brilliant, Gary!  Such a sweet, sexy, moving, intimate moment!  I loved reading every word!

Garycottle, you crazy bastard! Now, you've gone and given Littlewing, the vapors!
Great writing, little bud. I can always count on you for something raunchy and depraved. Thanks!
Title: Ennis' Masculinity
Post by: Toycoon on July 10, 2007, 10:28:30 am
Where did the secrets to masculinity lay; Ennis surely did not know.

Not terribly experienced, Ennis had kissed Alma deeply, fondled her tiny body but never transcended with her to a level where he knew he had no restraint; Ennis was a man and there was supposedly, his match.

Ennis desperately clutched Jack's bristly face with his rough hands; Jack's soft lips, the stubble on his handsome jaw and Jack's musky scent was an irresistible force that Ennis could not control.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 10, 2007, 02:08:04 pm
(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_12_6.gif)

This is so funny!  And I notice I'm not just goofing off, but I'm mooning everybody.   :P

Now if I had a nice bum, I'd be mooning everybody in real life all the time.   :o

(You may worry about your picture, and Dagi may have doubts about her English skills, but I feel like a nothing because God didn't give me a better butt.   :-\  -- Girls aren't the only ones with hangups.)

Gary

Now that´s the Gary I know and love. Always there when we need someone to cheer us up. Unfortunately I never got to see your bum, but if you are as wrong about it as Susie is about her face I´d love to see it some day  ;D

Dagi
Title: Re: Ennis' Masculinity
Post by: Dagi on July 10, 2007, 02:14:03 pm
Where did the secrets to masculinity lay; Ennis surely did not know.

Not terribly experienced, Ennis had kissed Alma deeply, fondled her tiny body but never transcended with her to a level where he knew he had no restraint; Ennis was a man and there was supposedly, his match.

Ennis desperately clutched Jack's bristly face with his rough hands; Jack's soft lips, the stubble on his handsome jaw and Jack's musky scent was a irresistible force that Ennis could not control.

Here you are again, and putting us all to shame with one of your awesome 3 S Fanfics. And I´m so happy Ennis can´t control this force   :D ::).

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on July 10, 2007, 02:30:12 pm
Hi Spiceylife-
I'm lovin' your sexy Supernatural Sam and Dean gif. Where did you find that?
I could write erotic several fanfics based on that gif alone! Woohoo!



Title: Re: Ennis' Masculinity
Post by: Dagi on July 10, 2007, 02:39:40 pm

P.S.  This is a little off topic, but ......

I wonder anyway, what IS the topic of this board ?  ?  ?  :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 10, 2007, 02:43:03 pm
Oh Dagi, it's a train wreck. You're just going to have to trust me on this one.

Gary

Could you please explain to the German gal what a train wreck is? D.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 10, 2007, 06:06:42 pm
Quick guys .... it's the boss .... back to your desks!!


   Clyde      Littlewing     Shasta      Dagi        Gary         Merrily          Susie      Toycoon
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Lovely to see you back again sweetheart! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_2_106.gif)

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

How cute is this?  I LOVE it, Susie.

Toycoon---I tried, but -- OMG, they were wild as bucks while you were gone. The reason I'm alseep is because they were so ROWDY and LOUD that I never got any sleep at night. It was nonstop PARTY time!! Whew!! I am glad you are back to watch over them. They need an authority figure!!

By the way---WELCOME HOME!!!   We missed you!

P.S. Gary needs to go to detention hall. (Susie, too, but don't put them in there together!!)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on July 10, 2007, 06:46:50 pm
I bet you're not as bad as you think .. let's have a butchers!!  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_6_103.gif)   A few sessions down at the gym'll soon sort that out!

Susie   (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Yeah Gary,

If you haven't got a scanner, you could xerox it at Kinko's.

(That'd be appropriate!   ;D)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on July 11, 2007, 12:08:26 am
Clyde, I just saw your picture!  You were a total hottie!  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_1_9.gif)

Gary

Thanks Gary!

Didn't expect that!

Bet I could have shown you a good time!   ;D
Title: Re: Sitting Pretty
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 11, 2007, 12:31:21 am
So, they just talk about the first thing that pops up?

Marie, you guys are like bunny rabbits.  Miss one day and you're five pages behind!

 :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:
Title: Re: Son Of A Bitch
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 11, 2007, 12:38:11 am
Here it is again, this time corrected by poor Susie. Its a long one, and not a light one, I´m sorry. Thank you Susiebell!

Son Of A Bitch by Dagi

They pressed their bodies together in a tight embrace, neither of them willing to let go, each trying to not let out a moan that would reveal how they felt every time they had to part, each trying to be strong for the other´s sake.
After what seemed an eternity, Ennis tried to pull back since he knew it was time for Jack to go, a long ride home waiting for him. But Jack didn´t let him, pulled him even closer.
„Son of a bitch, Ennis, why ya do this to me, hurts so much to have to let you go....can´t let you go...damn it...“, his words merely a choked whisper.
Ennis´ eyes filled with tears, he felt the same way but would rather bite off his tongue than admit it, for he knew it was because of him that they had to part again and again, so many times he had already lost count.
Jack didn´t dare think of that goddamn emptiness he would fall into again in Childress, an emptiness so empty he sometimes had to get drunk, not in order to not feel anything anymore, but to feel anything at all.
 „Why did ya do this to me, Jack?“ Ennis murmured hardly audible.
„Do what?“ „ Why d'ya make me love ya so much?“ he thought, looking at Jack, not bothering any more about hiding the tears in his dark eyes.
Jack ran his fingers through those beloved curls, took this beloved face in both his hands and kissed Ennis so tenderly, their lips scarcely touching, breathing and moaning into each other´s mouths, tongues meeting  sweet and wet and soft. The moans became louder, the desire stronger until Ennis whispered raucously „ Take me, Jack, please, do me once more, I want ta take ya home with me...“
Jack stared at him, surprised, but a second later he turned Ennis around, pressed him against the truck and with trembling hands he shoved down both their jeans. He hesitated a moment, almost unable to hold back once his erect member touched firm flesh, but Ennis thrusted back against him, moaning loud, his head lolling back, answer enough.
The urge overwhelmed Jack, and with an animal grunt he pushed in all the way in one, knowing he was causing pain without any lube at all, wishing it almost, anger and grief and rage running through him now in hot waves, oddly mixed up with desire, and he pushed in and pulled back and pushed in hard again, Ennis becoming silent, only breathing heavily, knowing he was getting punished in a way for doing this to Jack, for leaving him again and again, for refusing to give him what he was craving so much.
Despite the pain,  the feel of Jack inside of him, filling him up, taking him mercilessly, submitting him to his own will, excited him more that he would ever have dared to admit, and he felt that he was about to come without even touching himself, needing both hands to hold on to the truck for his legs threatened to give way under him.
Jack´s grip around Ennis´ hips became even stronger, he buried his nails in his victims flesh crying out loud when they came only seconds apart in wave after wave, Jack holding Ennis so close they became like one body.
There they stood shaking, faces wet with sweat and tears, aware that something inside of them had broken.
„Did I hurt you?“ Jack whispered when they had calmed down a little. “I´m sorry, didn´t mean to....well, maybe I did...“.
Ennis finally turned around, folded his love in his arms and stroke his face in a tender gesture.
„S´alright, Jack....s´alright“.

Dagi, I had to really search to find this one!  I'm not used to the new page count yet!  Anyway, this fic is so brilliant!  Very moving, tender and raw all at once.  You have woven a sort of psychological (sp?) drama here, Dagi.  You understand Ennis and Jack so well.  I can certainly imagine a parting like this!  Wonderful!  Beautiful writing!
Title: Re: Dagi's unnamed story part 2
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 11, 2007, 12:40:37 am
Well I AM very clever! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_14_4.gif)   You're the clever one for picking up on most of them.  ... I was also trying to bring in a little of the final lake scene with Jack watching Ennis' truck disappear off down the road.

You're right Gary, it's so hard to write about the difficult moments .... I felt completely drained after I'd finished this one .... it's more fun to write about them with oiled up chests and tight leather pants!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

I'm trying to muster the courage to tackle this scene, myself.  Perhaps someday I'll feel confident enough to write about the final lake scene - do it justice!
Title: Re: Smoking Pot
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 11, 2007, 12:43:25 am
Smoking Pot by Susie


The two middle aged men sat quietly staring out over the lake to the mountains beyond, silhouetted against the night sky. The sombre mood gradually lifted as they passed the joint back and forth between them.  Silence turned to chatter, chatter turned to raucous laughter. Jack leaned over suddenly, kissing his startled lover, deep and hard, “Sorry bud, just couldn’t resist those beautiful lips.” Ennis smiled, pulling him back, kissing him harder, seemed Ennis couldn’t resist either.

“Come on, let’s do it like we did first time!” Jack was a horny teenager, pulling at his jeans, giggling, and getting down on all fours. Ennis, thinking it was a fine idea, lowered his fly. He fumbled around in the dark, muttering to himself, and finally gave up, “Can’t find where to put it...”  Laughter erupted between them, bouncing off the peaks and echoing all around, they both collapsed on the ground.

“And you call me a Dumbass… Dumbass!” Jack, undeterred, climbed on top of Ennis, eyes hazy with a mixture of pot and lust, “You just lie there lil’ darlin’, I’ll show you where to put it!”



Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Brilliant, Susie!  I can't even find the words!  You really captured a very difficult scene and brought it to life.  You fleshed it out to the point that I'm almost sure it happened the way you describe!  Thanks for this, Susie!  I'm speechless!  :)
Title: Re: Admiration
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 11, 2007, 12:45:48 am
What?  You'd think that no one ever described what a a willie looked like before.  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/7/7_9_7.gif)

I'd describe mine, but it'd be a short conversation.   >:(

Gary

 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: Clever man!
Title: Re: Ennis' Masculinity
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 11, 2007, 12:47:46 am
Where did the secrets to masculinity lay; Ennis surely did not know.

Not terribly experienced, Ennis had kissed Alma deeply, fondled her tiny body but never transcended with her to a level where he knew he had no restraint; Ennis was a man and there was supposedly, his match.

Ennis desperately clutched Jack's bristly face with his rough hands; Jack's soft lips, the stubble on his handsome jaw and Jack's musky scent was a irresistible force that Ennis could not control.

Lovely, Toycoon!  Truly exciting!  If I had time tonight I would add to it.  Perhaps tomorrow?  I have a date in a few hours with Harry Potter!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 11, 2007, 12:52:06 am
Yeah Gary,

If you haven't got a scanner, you could xerox it at Kinko's.

(That'd be appropriate!   ;D)

My God, Clyde is that you?  I had to take a closer look..I thought it was a picture of Jake!  My God, but you're a hottie!  Thanks for posting your pic, Clyde!  You're such a beauty!!!  vavavoommmmm!
Title: Re: Son Of A Bitch
Post by: Dagi on July 11, 2007, 05:53:26 am
Dagi, I had to really search to find this one!  I'm not used to the new page count yet!  Anyway, this fic is so brilliant!  Very moving, tender and raw all at once.  You have woven a sort of psychological (sp?) drama here, Dagi.  You understand Ennis and Jack so well.  I can certainly imagine a parting like this!  Wonderful!  Beautiful writing!

Thank you so much for your kind words. As you maybe read I felt more than unsure about that story. All these lovely comments keep me writing, although I think every time "this was my last one, it kills my nerves."

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 11, 2007, 05:57:31 am
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Train

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Wreck

When someone here in the states describes something as a train wreck -- assuming he/she isn't referring to an actual train wreck -- he/she means that the thing in question is a bloody mess.  Something you wouldn't want to see.  Someone's house can be a train wreck.  A person's check book could be a train wreck.  Even a couple's marriage could be a train wreck.  And my ass just happens to be a train wreck.   ;D

Gary

Gary honey I can´t stand to hear you dragging yourself down like this. But if you are right about your ass, then you can easily make up for it showing your lovely front side more often  :D.

Dagi
Title: Clay
Post by: Dagi on July 11, 2007, 07:11:28 am
This one is for Susie!

Clay by Dagi


„What are ya giggling about?“ Ennis´ voice sleepy behind Jack.

Jack smiled. „Just thinking about.........that second night up on Brokeback. What it felt like when you................ slid into me slowly, so slowly...“

Fuck, even after some pot it was still so damn hard to actually talk about these things – but Ennis had asked.

„Felt so damn good, felt as if I was.......touching your cock with my fingertips..........could have made a model out of clay afterwards.....“

„Uh.------------and what are ya giggling about then?“

„Just pictured that model standing on the mantelpiece in my livingroom.“
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 11, 2007, 07:48:30 am
Did you see the post about the Smarten up - chat next saturday (14/july)?  At noon N.Y. time, that is:

Apia   Samoa   Sat 5:00 AM WST
San Francisco   U.S.A. - California   Sat 9:00 AM PDT *
Calgary   Canada - Alberta   Sat 10:00 AM MDT *
Denver   U.S.A. - Colorado   Sat 10:00 AM MDT *
Dallas   U.S.A. - Texas   Sat 11:00 AM CDT *
Chicago   U.S.A. - Illinois   Sat 11:00 AM CDT *
Toronto   Canada - Ontario   Sat 12:00 Noon EDT *
Rochester   U.S.A. - New York   Sat 12:00 Noon EDT *
New York   U.S.A. - New York   Sat 12:00 Noon EDT *
St. John's   Canada - Newfoundland and Labrador   Sat 1:30 PM NDT *
Dublin   Ireland   Sat 5:00 PM IST *
Glasgow   U.K. - Scotland   Sat 5:00 PM BST *
London   U.K. - England   Sat 5:00 PM BST *
Madrid   Spain   Sat 6:00 PM CEST *
Paris   France   Sat 6:00 PM CEST *
Brussels   Belgium   Sat 6:00 PM CEST *
Amsterdam   Netherlands   Sat 6:00 PM CEST *
Oslo   Norway   Sat 6:00 PM CEST *
Copenhagen   Denmark   Sat 6:00 PM CEST *
Rome   Italy   Sat 6:00 PM CEST *
Berlin   Germany - Berlin   Sat 6:00 PM CEST *
Stockholm   Sweden   Sat 6:00 PM CEST *
Seoul   South Korea   Sun 1:00 AM KST
Melbourne   Australia - Victoria   Sun 2:00 AM EST
Auckland   New Zealand   Sun 4:00 AM NZST


Gary, get that damn set-up, and quick!

Dagi
Title: Re: Clay
Post by: Dagi on July 11, 2007, 08:17:05 am
Ah, for me?? Can I have Jack too??  Lovely steamy stuff Dagi! So Playful and sexy, just the way I like it!  And as for this bit ....felt as if I was........touching your cock with my fingertips.... OMG! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_3_1v.gif) *thud* ... Susie out cold!


Susie   (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

ps. You do help me through some of my insecurities Dagi, and I love you for that.


thank you, Susie darling! I love this hilarious emoticon! And I love you!
Title: Re: Son Of A Bitch
Post by: Toycoon on July 11, 2007, 09:16:44 am
Dagi, I had to really search to find this one!  I'm not used to the new page count yet!  Anyway, this fic is so brilliant!  Very moving, tender and raw all at once.  You have woven a sort of psychological (sp?) drama here, Dagi.  You understand Ennis and Jack so well.  I can certainly imagine a parting like this!  Wonderful!  Beautiful writing!

Oh I agree! Dagi, your English is astounding. I found myself getting cold shivers as I read it. Susiebell mentioned that the line between the original story/movie and our fanfic is so blurred that I don't what is in the story or not. Of course, now I don't care any more! It's all so good.
Title: Re: Clay
Post by: Clyde-B on July 11, 2007, 09:43:16 am
I want one of both Jack and Ennis.  That way I could use them as bookends.   ;D

Now if they were made of something like silicone I could...   :-X  (Shasta is never going to let me out of detention at this rate.   :'( )

Thanks for the sexy images first thing in the morning, Dagi dear.

Gary

Sounds like a new project for Toycoon's craft thread.    ;D
Title: Re: Clay
Post by: Toycoon on July 11, 2007, 01:25:39 pm
Sounds like a new project for Toycoon's craft thread.    ;D

Say, that is a good idea, Clyde-B.
Might I add, you are a fine looking fella! Why is your photo so blurry, though? Were you drunk when it was taken?
Title: Re: Son Of A Bitch
Post by: Dagi on July 11, 2007, 01:43:08 pm
Oh I agree! Dagi, your English is astounding. I found myself getting cold shivers as I read it. Susiebell mentioned that the line between the original story/movie and our fanfic is so blurred that I don't what is in the story or not. Of course, now I don't care any more! It's all so good.

Toycoon, thank you so much for that encouraging comment. Seems you all know just how much I need it. How good to have you back! Did you already manage to read the whole tread?

Dagi
Title: Re: Clay
Post by: Dagi on July 11, 2007, 01:46:49 pm
I want one of both Jack and Ennis.  That way I could use them as bookends.   ;D

Now if they were made of something like silicone I could...   :-X  (Shasta is never going to let me out of detention at this rate.   :'( )

Thanks for the sexy images first thing in the morning, Dagi dear.

Gary

thank you Gary! Seems, though, nobody got that I tried to write a funny one, not a sexy one. ???

Dagi
Title: Re: Clay
Post by: Dagi on July 11, 2007, 03:28:41 pm
   And Bobby might pretend it's a rocket and hold it over his head and go running through the house with it.  :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: )


 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 11, 2007, 03:55:45 pm
Did you see the post about the Smarten up - chat next saturday (14/july)?  At noon N.Y. time

Damn it, looks like I can´t be there myself. Shiiiiiiiiit.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on July 11, 2007, 07:44:50 pm
Susiebell and Dagi,

Thanks for the kind comments about my pic.

It's blurry Dagi because it's a small crop from an old photo.  Film (especially color film) wasn't as fine grained then as it is today.

Or then again, maybe I was just drunk!   ;D
Title: Re: Son Of A Bitch
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 12, 2007, 12:46:24 am
Thank you so much for your kind words. As you maybe read I felt more than unsure about that story. All these lovely comments keep me writing, although I think every time "this was my last one, it kills my nerves."

Dagi

Please don't stop writing, Dagi! You're doing an amazing job!
Title: Re: Clay
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 12, 2007, 12:48:27 am
This one is for Susie!

Clay by Dagi


„What are ya giggling about?“ Ennis´ voice sleepy behind Jack.

Jack smiled. „Just thinking about.........that second night up on Brokeback. What it felt like when you................ slid into me slowly, so slowly...“

Fuck, even after some pot it was still so damn hard to actually talk about these things – but Ennis had asked.

„Felt so damn good, felt as if I was.......touching your cock with my fingertips..........could have made a model out of clay afterwards.....“

„Uh.------------and what are ya giggling about then?“

„Just figured that model standing on the mantelpiece in my livingroom.“

This took me by surprise!  Dagi, this is really good.  You have a special understanding of Ennis and Jack's relationship.  You have an insight into how they would have spoken to one another.  Extraordinary!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 12, 2007, 12:49:18 am
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Title: The Commercial
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 12, 2007, 01:03:21 am
Late one summer, Don Wroe offered Ennis the use of his cabin for a few weeks.  Don Wroe put $15,000 into renovating the place, and the work took nearly 10 weeks to complete.  He bought a rather large color TV for the living area, and equipped the family room with leather couches and a love seat.  Ennis sent Jack a postcard inviting him for a week of food, fun, and love.  Jack took less than 3 days to reply. 

Jack couldn’t believe the improvements Don made to the cabin!  The kitchen was pure luxury!  While Jack put away the supplies he brought to cook up savory meals for his lover, Ennis wanted to relax and watch a little television.  Jack almost dropped a side of beef when he heard a side-splitting guffaw spilling from the living room!  Ennis was laughing uproariously!  Jack ran into the living room, anxious to see what sort of sight would make a taciturn Ennis laugh out loud like that!  This was historic!  Ennis was watching a commercial: an ad for an absorbent paper towel that featured a very macho lumberjack.  The man obviously just returned home from work, and instead of manly sons greeting him, he was surrounded by 3 daughters dressed like ballerinas and they were dancing around him.  His dainty wife looked on in approval.  The lumberjack stood still while his daughters danced and ran between his massive legs with a look on his face that ranged from disappointment to incomprehension.  Jack, too, thought the ad was hilarious!

“Is that you and the girls?  Jack asked Ennis as he smiled at his lover.

“Yeah that’s us, Bud!”  Ennis managed between peals of laughter.  “I know what this dude is going through.  But you know what, Jack?  I want a son, but if it doesn’t happen, I’ll be okay with that.” 

“Of course you will, friend.”  Jack answered.  “Your girls are the apple of your eye, I can tell.” Jack gave Ennis an affectionate tap on the arm and returned to the kitchen.  He had T-Bone steaks to marinade.

The day was over, and the dinner dishes were cleared away.  Ennis and Jack sat next to each other in companionable silence and watched a TV cop drama.  Ennis giggled a bit and told Jack, “I haven’t seen my commercial!”  Jack smiled as he rememberd how that ad tickled his lover. Jack wished he could record the ad for him, so that Ennis could play it back whenever he needed a laugh.  He made a mental note to check out that newfangled BETA device they had out now.  He thought he read somewhere that the contraption could record TV shows as well as play movies.  Jack took Ennis' hand in his and squeezed it.  The joy of that moment would be recorded in his consciousness forever.



Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 12, 2007, 01:09:23 am
Such a nice feeling to it all, Littlewing. They are so happy---just satisfied to be together and  not worry about what who might think! Your description of the cabin makes me want to go spend a week too!!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 12, 2007, 01:27:07 am
Such a nice feeling to it all, Littlewing. They are so happy---just satisfied to be together and  not worry about what who might think! Your description of the cabin makes me want to go spend a week too!!

Thanks, Shasta!  I wouldn't mind a week at Don's cabin, either!
Title: Re: Clay
Post by: Dagi on July 12, 2007, 02:47:35 am
This took me by surprise!  Dagi, this is really good. 

Does that mean  it´s surprising if I manage to write a good one ? ??? ;D


You have a special understanding of Ennis and Jack's relationship.  You have an insight into how they would have spoken to one another.  Extraordinary!

Thank you for that kind comment! Although I really wonder now whether I should go back to writing sad stories. Nobody got the joke. That´s why I hate telling jokes in public, it´s so embarrassing if nobody laughes. Oh, stop, Gary at least smiled  :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:.

Your words mean a lot to me, honey!

Dagi
Title: Re: The Commercial
Post by: Dagi on July 12, 2007, 02:55:50 am
Late one summer, Don Wroe offered Ennis the use of his cabin for a few weeks.  Don Wroe put $15,000 into renovating the place, and the work took nearly 10 weeks to complete.  He bought a rather large color TV for the living area, and equipped the family room with leather couches and a love seat.  Ennis sent Jack a postcard inviting him for a week of food, fun, and love.  Jack took less than 3 days to reply. 

Jack couldn’t believe the improvements Don made to the cabin!  The kitchen was pure luxury!  While Jack put away the supplies he brought to cook up savory meals for his lover, Ennis wanted to relax and watch a little television.  Jack almost dropped a side of beef when he heard a side-splitting guffaw spilling from the living room!  Ennis was laughing uproariously!  Jack ran into the living room, anxious to see what sort of sight would make a taciturn Ennis laugh out loud like that!  This was historic!  Ennis was watching a commercial: an ad for an absorbent paper towel that featured a very macho lumberjack.  The man obviously just returned home from work, and instead of manly sons greeting him, he was surrounded by 3 daughters dressed like ballerinas and they were dancing around him.  His dainty wife looked on in approval.  The lumberjack stood still while his daughters danced and ran between his massive legs with a look on his face that ranged from disappointment to incomprehension.  Jack, too, thought the ad was hilarious!

“Is that you and the girls?  Jack asked Ennis as he smiled at his lover.

“Yeah that’s us, Bud!”  Ennis managed between peals of laughter.  “I know what this dude is going through.  But you know what, Jack?  I want a son, but if it doesn’t happen, I’ll be okay with that.” 

“Of course you will, friend.”  Jack answered.  “Your girls are the apple of your eye, I can tell.” Jack gave Ennis an affectionate tap on the arm and returned to the kitchen.  He had T-Bone steaks to marinade.

The day was over, and the dinner dishes were cleared away.  Ennis and Jack sat next to each other in companionable silence and watched a TV cop drama.  Ennis giggled a bit and told Jack, “I haven’t seen my commercial!”  Jack smiled as he rememberd how that ad tickled his lover. Jack wished he could record the ad for him, so that Ennis could play it back whenever he needed a laugh.  He made a mental note to check out that newfangled BETA device they had out now.  He thought he read somewhere that the contraption could record TV shows as well as play movies.  Jack took Ennis' hand in his and squeezed it.  The joy of that moment would be recorded in his consciousness forever.





What a lovely little tale, Marie! At least on of us remembers every now and then that it´s not all about sex between our boys :laugh:.
I like it especially when Ennis laughs. It makes me recall that movie scene where Jack makes this rodeoin thing and falls to the ground. Ennis´ laughter and face are priceless.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 12, 2007, 03:02:33 am
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How much longer are you going to make us wait for your next story? :D

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 12, 2007, 07:15:07 am
Hi, Dagi.  I got the joke!  It WAS funny!  It's just that we probably all got a bit distracted by what came later...  First we laughed at the boys being stoned and giggly...then we thought about Jack creating a clay model of Ennis's penis... then we just thought about Ennis's penis!!  Too hot!  (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/youhadsugar.gif)(http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/minilove.gif)(http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/meow.gif)(http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/hulagirlt.gif)(http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/HelloCartoon.gif)(http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/cheerleader3.gif)

It was very well written and so cute, Dagi, and I really love all of your stories.  'Son of a Bitch' was fantastic!  You have a special way of putting your stories together and bringing Jack and Ennis to life.  I always enjoy your work.  I'm always happy when Dagi posts another story!  Thanks, Dagi.

Oh, and please don't worry about your English!  It's fine, honestly.  Far, far better than my Year 7 German!  (Guten Morgen, Frau Molnar.  Ich bin zwolf jahre alt!)  Plus I can count from one to twenty, swear a bit and insult people.  That's it.  Believe me, you are very clever and you rarely make a mistake.  (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/heartlove.gif)


You´re a sweetheart! you all really know what I want to hear :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:.

Wow, this site is getting quite animated! I love your emoticons and all the other stuff! too funny.

What film are these pics from? I have to see it! And I´d love to read Toycoons fanfics about it ;D!

Nice to see you! Hope you are okay? We are all salivating for your next story!!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on July 12, 2007, 08:40:48 am


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Arrrrr! Yer killing me, Spiceylife! But I loved it!
Title: Re: Ennis' Masculinity
Post by: Toycoon on July 12, 2007, 08:46:59 am
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Beautiful, Toycoon!  Just perfect.  Jack is everything Ennis wants and needs.  Very well written, thought-provoking story.  Thanks!  I don't know how you pack so much emotion into three sentences...!  You're amazing.
Gee whiz, thank you, Spicey!

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Toycoon, I saw pics of you on your horse at Colorado, and with David, too.  What a handsome couple you are!  You're a hottie!!

Spiceylife, my head's gonna swell up like a balloon if you go on like that. By all means, please, go on!


Title: Jack's Masculinity
Post by: Toycoon on July 12, 2007, 09:16:03 am
Jack's emotions tended to be nearer to the surface, so his feelings for Ennis were of no surprise to him nor did they conflict with Jack's perception of masculinity.

Jack had been infatuated with several people throughout his adolescence but he had never truly connected to another like he did with his new friend;  Ennis seemed to embody everything Jack could have wanted from a companion.

Jack on his hands and knees held his breath as Ennis pressed himself to Jack's button then forced his turgid flesh into Jack's muscular behind; the initial pain gave way to deep pleasure Jack had not experienced before in his young life and he knew now, that he was hooked.
Title: The Longest Night
Post by: spiceylife on July 12, 2007, 10:21:15 am
I posted this on the 'other' board, but only posted half of it because it is AO/NC-17.  I think Toycoon read the whole thing, but I've altered some parts since then.  Man, I hope this is alright to post...(http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/expressions-181.jpg)


The Longest Night by spiceylife


Jack awoke to the sound of running water, swung long legs off a sagging mattress and padded across the floor, barefoot and naked.  Pulling a smoke from the pocket of his shirt discarded carelessly the night before, Jack lit it and drew back deeply, rubbing eyes that were still heavy from too little sleep.  His boyish face lit up as he smiled easily to himself, recalling a long night filled with laughter, friendship, sweet memories, sex of every description, and his lover, Ennis Del Mar.

Jack shook his head in delight and sighed happily, not quite believing that he was here, with Ennis again, the one who would always have Jack’s heart now, no matter what.  He flopped down on the bed, loose and relaxed, almost childlike, then slid himself up and sat with his back against the headboard, one knee casually drawn up, ashtray balanced on the other thigh, smoking his cigarette in comfort.  Jack flicked ash from his smoke, his mind still thinking on the night spent with Ennis.  He felt a sudden need to ingrain everything that had just happened into his mind, to cover that fragile seed of new memories they’d made last night, protecting them from the sad and certain knowledge that even the best of memories fade and grow dull with time.  Jack had read something once, in one of his mamma’s books.  It had said, “Memory is the scribe of the soul” and Jack had remembered that, all these years.  He wasn’t sure he knew exactly what this really meant, or even what a scribe was, but to Jack, it sounded important, and, more than anything, he knew his own soul wanted to keep Ennis close and safe, and remembered.

And Jack needed to remember this night forever; needed to remember every kiss, every thrust and push and grunt, every lick and suck, hands that felt and pulled and touched and stroked and probed everywhere, the motion of bodies moving in and out, hard, then soft, then hard again.  His mind ran an erotic slideshow of fingers inside, lips parted, tongues meeting, rubbing, gyrating, hips held bruisingly tight, and the sweet smell and feel of sweaty, urgent sex.  He heard again the delicious moaning and panting as each man gave himself over to this need, climaxes were reached and the taste of love lingered on Jack’s lips, the bloom of love in his heart; back then, long ago on the mountain, and still now, far stronger… 

Suddenly, Jack saw movement from the corner of his eye.  He turned his head slightly to look, watching through the sliver of open bathroom door, a few feet away.  He barely noticed the ancient, crooked mirror on the wall above the sink, its silver lining peeling and discolored, because he was entranced by what he could see clearly from where he lay on the bed.  Reflected in the shabby mirror was Ennis Del Mar, showering, his naked beauty a vision that chased all rational thought from Jack’s mind.  His cigarette dangled, forgotten, from his lips, gray ash growing long and threatening to fall on Jack’s chest at any second.

Jack’s eyes travelled over Ennis’s reflection, completely absorbed by the beauty of this man.  Ennis’s eyes were closed, his head back, hands running through his blond locks, turned curly and dark by the water.  Jack watched intently as Ennis turned, soaped up, and ran the soapy washcloth over his lean, muscular back.  He faced the mirror again, and Jack’s breath quickened as Ennis rubbed the cloth over his toned and tanned chest, the chest that Jack had pressed against as he lay on top of Ennis last night and kissed him deeply, putting all his heart into that kiss.  Jack had even felt Ennis’s heart beating madly beneath him, through his own chest.  He watched the soapy water run over brown nipples he had licked and sucked and played with just hours before, and felt a familiar stirring begin in his groin.  Christ, but Ennis is beautiful! 

Ennis turned again, and Jack held his breath as the other man ran the soapy cloth over his firm ass, frothy bubbles running down his crack in a most sensual way.  Jack was entranced, remembering… his tongue moving all over that ass crack the previous night as Ennis lay on his stomach, pillows stuffed under his groin and legs spread wide.  Jack had not been surprised when Ennis pulled away momentarily, gasping.  He waited, whispering soothing words to Ennis as he patiently rubbed the small of his back.  Pleasure flowed through Jack when Ennis eventually gathered himself, visibly relaxed, then asked for more.  Jack kissed Ennis’s right buttock gently and parted his cheeks with both hands, transfixed by the sight of Ennis in such a vulnerable, open position, and moved almost to tears that Ennis trusted Jack enough to allow him in.

He went at it again, lapping hungrily behind Ennis, encircling and tasting, then stiffening his tongue to push inside his lover, probing his body over and over again.  Ennis groaned and panted his desire out loud, eyes closed tight and clutching the cheap headboard so tightly that Jack heard it splinter.  Ennis pushed his ass back into Jack’s face, clearly revelling in this erotic sensation.  Ennis’s scent and taste were divine, an earthy and masculine aphrodisiac, and Jack’s orgasm was tantalizingly close, the trembling pressure building in his cock as his hot tongue entered Ennis’s hole, keeping a wild, intoxicating rhythm.
 

Jack was breathing fast now, his pulse racing as he watched Ennis bathe himself.  His lover seemed oblivious to the approving eyes on him as he washed.  The throbbing, steady heat intensified between Jack’s legs as Ennis turned once more, and Jack’s eyes moved lovingly down to one of the most exquisite parts of his man.  Jack’s mind flickered back a few hours, to when that beautiful dick had felt like a part of Jack himself… a feeling of contentment washing over Jack as he took it into his mouth, swirling his tongue over the large head and along the firm, velvety shaft, sucking hard, relaxing his throat so Ennis could fuck his mouth good and deep.  Jack loved Ennis’s strong hands in his hair, pulling a little, holding Jack’s head steady as he pushed his heavy cock past full, wet lips moist with spit and precome.

Jack felt it to the very core of his being; an unshakeable bond with this man, as if he and Ennis were one, meant to be together, just like this, always…

Then Ennis lay on top of him, his tongue licking seductively along Jack’s bottom lip, kissing him so sweetly as he pushed into Jack, a little at a time, moving slow for fear of hurting him.  Jack clenched his teeth, threw one leg over Ennis’s back, quickly forced himself to adjust and then his hips took over, as if with a mind of their own.  He moaned into Ennis’s mouth, all hot and helpless, and then couldn’t stop himself, rotating his hips in a slow, sensual circle, pushing up towards Ennis, holding on, begging Ennis to fuck him, and quickly. 

Jack remembered sweat dripping off both of them, he remembered staring into Ennis’s gentle eyes and wanting this man in his life forever, and he remembered Ennis fucking him and kissing him deeply at the same time, the most erotic and beautiful moments in Jack’s life always, always coming with Ennis.  It would never be any other way.


Jack tried to settle his breathing, glanced down at himself and grinned, noticing that he was hard.  He dropped the cigarette, burnt out now, into the ashtray, and looked back again to the bathroom mirror, back to the part of Ennis his eyes had been lingering on just seconds before.  Jack gave a start, almost dropping the ashtray to the floor.  A moment ago, Ennis had been soft and flaccid, but now his dick was as stiff as Jack’s, water and soap bubbles cascading over it, the loveliest sight Jack had ever seen.  Jack raised his deep blue eyes up to Ennis’s face, wanting Ennis so much, only to find soft brown eyes lusting, watching him right back through the mirror’s reflection.  Ennis had finally seen Jack on the bed, seen the reaction he caused between Jack’s legs, his own body responding instantly in the same heated, natural way.

Through the bathroom mirror they watched each other, chests heaving as their breathing grew heavier, their need to be together obvious, until Ennis, with a dazzling smile, held his hand out for Jack to join him in the shower.  Jack leapt off the bed, dropping the ashtray in his hurry, and was across the room in seconds, taking Ennis’s hand and slamming the door shut behind him.


Title: Re: Jack's Masculinity
Post by: Dagi on July 12, 2007, 04:22:49 pm
Jack's emotions tended to be nearer to the surface, so his feelings for Ennis were of no surprise to him nor did they conflict with Jack's perception of masculinity.

Jack had been infatuated with several people throughout his adolescence but he had never truly connected to another like he did with his new friend;  Ennis seemed to embody everything Jack could have wanted from a companion.

Jack on his hands and knees held his breath as Ennis pressed himself to Jack's button then forced his turgid flesh into Jack's muscular behind; the initial pain gave way to deep pleasure Jack had not experienced before in his young life and he knew now, that he was hooked.

Woah, Toycoon. Love it. You make us slip into Jack (sorry for that pun ;D).

dagi
Title: Re: The Longest Night
Post by: Dagi on July 12, 2007, 04:28:34 pm
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.....transfixed by the sight of Ennis in such a vulnerable, open position, and moved almost to tears that Ennis trusted Jack enough to allow him in.

Spiceylife, I knew it would be worth waiting..... I have to recover first before I can write something....

Incredible, the images you are able to evoke in my mind. The line I quoted moved me to tears.

Thank you !!!

Dagi

Title: Re: Reverb
Post by: Dagi on July 12, 2007, 04:46:32 pm
Reverb by garycottle

......Tyler gently placed his hand on Daniel’s cheek and brought his face to his.  When their lips touched the bargain was set.

Oh Gary, I´m in a loss for words. (Me.)

That was a sweet tale, so sweet. And of course it made me think of our boys and what could have been had it been so easy for them to speak about

their feelings.

And it was sexy as hell :D :D :D!

First I thought, oh no Gary that´s just not fair to post so long a story at this time, I want to go to bed! But I couldn´t refuse to start reading... and got

hooked. Now I´ve got some nice ideas to go to bed with :laugh:.

Dagi
Title: Re: The Commercial
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 12, 2007, 11:32:28 pm
I love this scene of domestic bliss ... beautiful littlewing!  I so wish it had been like this for them always!  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_2_109v.gif)

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Thanks, Susie.   AU is my salvation.  I'll have them together and happy as often as I can.
Title: Re: Lucise Fanart
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 12, 2007, 11:34:38 pm
Guys ... you have GOT to see this.  It's one of Lucise's wallpapers.  I'm sitting here crying like a baby looking at it.  This SHOULD have been the sweet life they deserved....





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Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


I especially like the one of them kissing while dressed up for a formal evening out!  You're right, Susie..these are awesome!
Title: Re: Clay
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 12, 2007, 11:37:56 pm
Does that mean  it´s surprising if I manage to write a good one ? ??? ;D


Good heavens no!  I meant (and I should have been more clear) that I didn't anticipate the direction you were going with the tale.  And it is really good!
Title: Re: The Commercial
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 12, 2007, 11:39:24 pm
What a lovely little tale, Marie! At least on of us remembers every now and then that it´s not all about sex between our boys :laugh:.
I like it especially when Ennis laughs. It makes me recall that movie scene where Jack makes this rodeoin thing and falls to the ground. Ennis´ laughter and face are priceless.

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi!
Title: Re: The Commercial
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 12, 2007, 11:41:51 pm
How sweet this is, littlewing - a real slice of life for J & E!  What a beautiful thought, Jack cooking T-bones for Ennis, Ennis laughing out loud as he watches television, then the boys snuggling up on the couch after dinner.  This would be my wish for them...  Beautiful little story!  Thanks, Marie.  (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/kiss-love-53.png) 

Why thank you, Spicey Baby!  It is so good to see you here.  Thanks for your kind words!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 12, 2007, 11:47:55 pm
Just realised, I've missed Spicey!!! 


 Spiceylife    Clyde      Littlewing     Shasta      Dagi        Gary         Merrily          Susie      Toycoon
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Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Susie, these are so cute!  Just adorable!  There I am, as I usually can be found, typing away on the computer!  :)
Title: Re: The Longest Night
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 12, 2007, 11:51:00 pm
I posted this on the 'other' board, but only posted half of it because it is AO/NC-17.  I think Toycoon read the whole thing, but I've altered some parts since then.  Man, I hope this is alright to post...(http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/expressions-181.jpg)


The Longest Night by spiceylife




Ah, yes, I remember this one very well!  I had to read it in stages as it was too hot to digest all at once!  Amazing writing, Spicey!  You have brought us into this tender, sweet, dreamlike world, and I don't want to leave!  Extraordinary!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 13, 2007, 12:00:08 am
This is completely off topic, but I was watching Driving Miss Daisy last night, and an expression that I've heard all my life came up.  When someone isn't making much sense they are said to be "talking out of their head."  I got to thinking last night when I heard this.  What else would a person talk out of?  Their behind?   :P

Gary

 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
Title: Re: Reverb
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 13, 2007, 12:02:44 am
Reverb by garycottle



Wow, Gary, this is such a charming tale!  Very well written!  Reverb reads like part of a novel.  Will we read more about Tyler and Daniel?  Lovely work, Babe!
Title: Re: The Commercial
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 13, 2007, 12:04:23 am
Beautiful, littlewing.  It is small moments like that that we remember.  They distill the essence of a person.  It's so nice that Jack was able to be there to see that side of Ennis.  And I love the way you allow Jack and Ennis ceature comforts, a nice place to stay, good food.  Sounds like a very nice vacation.  Wonder if Don would let me stay in his cabin for  while.   ;D

Gary 

Thanks, Gary!  I'm dying to be a guest at Mr. Wroe's cabin, as well. 
Title: Farewell, Jack Twist!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 13, 2007, 12:31:50 am
Aguirre sat at his desk and wondered why he still bothered.  He was well past the age of retirement, and had the good sense- or was it good fortune – to put away a nice nest egg.  He owned his house free and clear, and his children were all college grads and off about their lives.  He and his wife could be taking lazy, luxurious cruises, but he felt compelled to continue working.  He looked around his trailer at all the tasks that needed completing.  Trisha Smith quit a few months ago, but he never replaced her.  Joe Aguirre looked at his age spotted hands and managed a smile.  He was actually proud of all the things he accomplished, and found that he needed to work just a bit longer.  After all, he can rest when he is dead.

Aguirre rose from his desk to fetch himself a cup of coffee.  He noticed a stack of mail from yesterday that he hadn’t even bothered to open.  His coffee mug in hand, Joe Aguirre sat back down and scanned the dozen or so letters that he neglected earlier.  Most were bills, and a few were invitations to local town meetings.  He noticed one letter encased in a fancy red envelope.  Curious, Aguirre opened this one.  It was an obituary of sorts.  Joe’s mouth dropped as he read Jack Twist’s funeral announcement.

Aguirre sat the announcement on his desk and took a swig of the hot brew.   He couldn’t believe that the sweet, handsome, good-for-nothin’ Jack Twist was deceased.  Aguirre examined the envelope for a return address.  There was none.  He wondered who could have sent the notice, and why?  And instantly, Aguirre was transported back to that summer when he hired a one Ennis Del Mar and Jack Twist to herd sheep for him.   He remembered giving them his point of view, cringed when he recalled telling them to break the rules.  And then he saw them!  Witnessed the rough housing, knew that they stemmed the rose to pass the time up there.  Aguirre always wondered if Ennis and Jack ever kept in touch.  How was Ennis handling the news of Jack’s death?  Did he know?  Aguirre reached into his desk and pulled out the company checkbook.  He fetched his rolodex and found the address of Mr. and Mrs. John Twist. 


Title: Re: Reverb
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 13, 2007, 12:38:13 am
Thank you so much, littlewing.  I'm not sure if we'll see any more ofTyler and Daniel.  Those two characters are clearly defined in my mind, so maybe I'll write about them again.  I obviously adore them, and I can imagine writing a whole novel about how they grew up together, how they fell in love, and what happened after that.  Susie wants me to write about what happens in the tent later that night after their first kiss.  That sounds pretty hot to me.  I think I might do that in a day or two.   ;D

Gary

Thanks, Sweetheart!  I, too, adore Daniel and Tyler.  A tent scene featuring those 2 sounds pretty tempting!  I can't wait to read it.  Your tale reminds me of my daughters school and how different things are here and now.  Maria tells me that guys (and not a few of the girls) come out all the time, and there are several same sex couples at her school.  This is all completely accepted, even celebrated, and the teachers out themselves on a regular basis.  You'll see what I mean once you move here.
Title: Re: Lucise Fanart
Post by: Lumière on July 13, 2007, 12:38:32 am

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Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



Aww.. Susie... :-*

Title: Bad dream
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 13, 2007, 01:18:07 am
Ennis awoke with a start.  This time the pillow was wet!  Well, so were the sheets!  Ennis had a dream: a recurring nightmare that terrified and excited him at the same time.  This time Jack was alive and walking intently down a Mexican alley.  He stopped in front of a decent looking man, a lad who looked a lot like Ennis.  Ennis twitched and shuddered as he saw Jack and the hustler walk off into the shadows.

Wide awake now, Ennis tried to turn over.  It was no good.  The rank sheets were holding him prisoner.  He sighed audibly and pulled at the cheap, twisted bed clothes in an attempt to free himself.  “Jack, how could you do that to me?”  Ennis mumbled as he finally forced himself free.  He tried to keep his heart steady as he imagined Jack kissing, caressing, gentling another man.  It was a little more than he could bear.

“Maybe we should go to Mexico!”  Ennis remembered Jack telling him right before he put 2 and 2 together.  He wanted to punch Jack until he bled.  A part of him died that day, and Ennis found that many months later, the wound had not healed.   “Jack fuckin’ Twist, if you was alive, I would kill your ass!”  Ennis screamed as he somehow found the strength to get up and face the day.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: SFEnnisSF on July 13, 2007, 01:36:26 am
^^^ Wow.
Title: Re: Admiring the View
Post by: Dagi on July 13, 2007, 08:04:34 am
This one’s for you Dagi …



Admiring the View by Susie
 

 ......... Jack guided himself slowly down onto Ennis’ hard dick.   Ennis, breathed deeply, transfixed by the vision in front of him “Hmmmmmmmmm …. now that’s the view I’m talking about cowboy …..”



Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



Yeeehaaaw, Susie! What a view! You are a sexy woman, sexy as hell! Naaaasty story, love it!

Dagi
Title: Re: Farewell, Jack Twist!
Post by: Dagi on July 13, 2007, 08:20:35 am
Aguirre sat at his desk and wondered why he still bothered.  He was well past the age of retirement, and had the good sense- or was it good fortune – to put away a nice nest egg.  He owned his house free and clear, and his children were all college grads and off about their lives.  He and his wife could be taking lazy, luxurious cruises, but he felt compelled to continue working.  He looked around his trailer at all the tasks that needed completing.  Trisha Smith quit a few months ago, but he never replaced her.  Joe Aguirre looked at his age spotted hands and managed a smile.  He was actually proud of all the things he accomplished, and found that he needed to work just a bit longer.  After all, he can rest when he is dead.

Aguirre rose from his desk to fetch himself a cup of coffee.  He noticed a stack of mail from yesterday that he hadn’t even bothered to open.  His coffee mug in hand, Joe Aguirre sat back down and scanned the dozen or so letters that he neglected earlier.  Most were bills, and a few were invitations to local town meetings.  He noticed one letter encased in a fancy red envelope.  Curious, Aguirre opened this one.  It was an obituary of sorts.  Joe’s mouth dropped as he read Jack Twist’s funeral announcement.

Agui