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Brokeback Mountain: Our Community's Common Bond => Brokeback Mountain Fan Fiction & Poetry => Topic started by: Toycoon on June 07, 2007, 11:22:02 pm

Title: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on June 07, 2007, 11:22:02 pm
Howdy Cowboys and Cowgirls! Welcome to the exciting board game, Jack With Ennis in it's new home, BetterMost, Wyoming!

The rules to play are easy: Compose a steamy fanfic about Jack with Ennis in three sentences. The sentences can be as long or as short as you like but they should be grammatically correct. Now is your chance to reveal your innermost, personal desires for our favorite cowpokes. Make it hot and sexy!

Don't be shy and please put the title of your creation in the subject line so we can find the new story among the comments and assorted postings.
Title: Dancing with Jack
Post by: Toycoon on June 07, 2007, 11:25:23 pm
He never was much for dancing, not much rhythm, but Ennis sure did like to watch Jack, shaking his butt and woopin' around while drinkin', listening to the transistor and sitting on the porch at Don Rowe's cabin under the full moon.

When Sam Cook came on over the radio, it was as though Jack had been electrocuted because he sprung up, yanked Ennis out of his chair and yelled, " This is my favorite song! "

Ennis was thankful it was a slow number because it gave him a chance to rub his smooth chest against Jack's hairy chest and find the rhythm that a full moon can coax out of a man.
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: THE WINGS on June 07, 2007, 11:32:22 pm
Toycoon:  Simply beautiful!  I can just see the both of them, under the moon, enjoying some moments of complete bliss. 

Thanks for this!

THE WINGS  (Doug)
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 08, 2007, 03:13:51 am
Toycoon, WHAT A START!

Thanks for that beautiful scene...I love Jack shaking his butt, and the image of our beloved boys embracing in a slow dance...meltingly beautiful!

Hi Gary, did you get my PM? How good to see you!

SUSIE where are you? Don´t tell me you missed the start! I´m yearning for your stories!

Dagi
Title: Re: Two Hearts
Post by: Toycoon on June 08, 2007, 09:09:14 am
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Ennis gathered him up into his arms, “Jack Fu ckin Twist! Never figured you for a romantic fool!”

It's funny that we think of Jack as the romantic in the relationship, he saved the shirts and all, but I often think it's Ennis that is the more sentimental of the two. Ennis is the one that has the breakdown when Jack declares "Brokeback Mountain" as something in the past that they once had. Ennis, can't stop thinking about it.

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Jack Twist was right, no matter where they were, in this life or the next, they would always be together.

Gorgeous writing and so original, Susiebell, you Devil Doll! Very sweet of you to dedicate your first story to our boy, Gary.


Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: loneleeb3 on June 08, 2007, 09:21:36 am
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Love you Jack. If I could hold you in my arms right now, you'd know that.”,

Oh Susie, thats a beautiful story!
Got tears of my own now.
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: mariez on June 08, 2007, 12:29:35 pm
Oh, wow - these are just great.  I can see that this thread is going to be addictive! 

Thanks for sharing - I'm looking foward to more.  :)

Marie
Title: Never Really Apart
Post by: malina on June 08, 2007, 01:52:32 pm
This is thanks to Daphne and Susie. I was nostalgically reading over old threads on IMDB following our mass exodus. And I came upon Daphne's beautiful “Private Moments” thread, and Susie's response,  the last before a string of 'deletes'. The idea of 'Private Moments' is... what do we wish they had each been able to see the other do, and what do we wish could have happened. Susie said: “I wish Ennis had swiveled around and held Jack face to face”.

And... I feel out of practice and rusty...


It always tugged at Jack's heart when Ennis left. He knew it was just for the night, and that they couldn't leave them damn sheep alone on the mountain with the coyotes, more greedy than ever now that fall was approaching. Still, every time Jack watched Ennis ride off in the dusk on Cigar Butt, that little edge of fear twisted inside him... thinkin', what if this is the night Ennis changes his mind? What if somethin' happens to him up there and he don't come back down at all? Foolish thoughts, and Jack tried to keep on top a them ... still, always hard ta see Ennis leavin', even just for the night.

This night in August was different. Tired from a full day of wrasslin' those woolies around, not to mention wrasslin' with his man, Jack felt every muscle in his body relax as he stared dreaming at the fire. He breathed in smoke an' mountain air and felt his eyes close to the sounds of Ennis gatherin' up stuff preparin' to go. This night, didn't even feel bad that Ennis was goin. He'd be on the same mountain, after all. Brokeback joined them, Jack thought, half dozing. Never really apart, both a them on Brokeback. Jack stood, sleepin' on his feet like a horse, feeling that whole mountain as part of his body and his heart. Ennis wasn't really leavin', even when he rode off.

Eyes still closed, Jack felt strong arms come around him from behind, like to confirm his thoughts. He felt Ennis's breath on his shoulder and humming his ear. He felt Ennis rock him and whisper a bit, leaned against the steady heartbeat, felt the lonely place inside him filled for good. Never really apart, he thought again, thinkin' he'd say the words out loud but next second forgetting to. Felt like Ennis heard him in any case.

Ennis mumbled 'gotta go', his hand clutching Jack's coat one final time as if not wantin' to pull away. He turned slightly, looked at  Jack's face in the dozy firelight, and all his resolve was gone. Facing Jack, seeing Jack's blue eyes open sleepily and search his face, Ennis pulled him close again, face to face this time, feeling Jack's arms close around him, too, and next second, Jack's slightly parted lips warm against his own. Never really apart, Ennis thought, feelin' like the mountain could stretch out into all of time and space an' keep on being home.
Title: Re: Two Hearts
Post by: malina on June 08, 2007, 02:00:20 pm

“Love you Jack. If I could hold you in my arms right now, you'd know that.”, he ran his thumb over the old carving, hearing Jack's voice, hardly a whisper, drifting into his mind, the words “S’alright, s’alright”, comforting him; “I Gotta go”, he said quietly, wiping away a few stray tears and climbing back into the saddle; Jack Twist was right, no matter where they were, in this life or the next, they would always be together. 


Susie... so beautiful...  :'(
Title: Re: Dancing with Jack
Post by: malina on June 08, 2007, 02:03:20 pm
He never was much for dancing, not much rhythm, but Ennis sure did like to watch Jack, shaking his butt and woopin' around while drinkin', listening to the transistor and sitting on the porch at Don Rowe's cabin under the full moon.

When Sam Cook came on over the radio, it was as though Jack had been electrocuted because he sprung up, yanked Ennis out of his chair and yelled, " This is my favorite song! "

Ennis was thankful it was a slow number because it gave him a chance to rub his smooth chest against Jack's hairy chest and find the rhythm that a full moon can coax out of a man.

Toycoon... perfect. I remember a version of this from long ago, I think.. I don't know if you've changed it or not, but the way it is right now is... perfect like a full moon is perfect!
Title: The Ad
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 08, 2007, 03:44:18 pm
I found this story on my hard drive and thought I would post it here.  It is one of my favorites!

Ennis Del Mar walked into his too hot trailer after a long day at the ranch. He was feeling a bit more human these days, especially after having completed a full day of back-breaking labor. Ennis was a man who felt pride at doing an honest day's work to feed himself and his children.

Ennis dropped his thermos and gloves onto his battered couch. He would look around his fridge for something to eat later. That is, unless Cassie came over uninvited with a tuna casserole in both hands. He wasn't that hungry, anyway. A full day of work usually took his appetite clean away.

Perhaps a bit of TV was in order. Ennis reached over to his little coffee table and turned on his black and white 19in television. The reception out there at the park was poor, and he had to adjust the rabbit ears to get the channels in clear. He turned the dial in an attempt to find something good to watch. Nothing on. Until...could it be? Ennis saw a man that looked a lot like Jack, and he was standing outside what seemed to be a car dealership. Ennis shook his head in disbelief as he realized that the man in the commercial was indeed Jack Twist! Jack stood next to a monstrous combine and gave his spiel about Newsome motors being the best in town, blah, blah, blah. Ennis watched transfixed at the sight! Jack Twist was looking mighty fine in a grey looking resistol, dark suit coat, jeans. He had on snakeskin boots and his mustache looked newly waxed. Ennis wondered how much Mr. Newsome spent to have the ad placed in so many markets. And he was amazed that Jack's father- in- law would allow him to represent the company. But those thoughts flew from Ennis' mind when his gaze moved down to Jack's tight jeans. He couldn't remember a word of what Jack said, but he would never forget the beauty of his lover, or the rise of desire he felt down below.
Title: Let's Go Away
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 08, 2007, 03:47:51 pm
This is a fragment of  tale that I posted as a continuation of one of Toycoon's fics.  I guess it makes sense on its own?


Jack felt a slight tremor wash over him as he heard Ennis' admission: "And I missed you!" Jack never thought in a million years that Ennis would say such a thing! Jack snuggled Ennis closer, careful not to irritate his already bruised lips.

"You think we can get away for a bit, friend?" Jack whispered, his eyes twinkling at the prospect of a few days alone with his lover. "Call Alma now. Make up something.. anything. Let's go away for a spell. We can hunt, fish, make love, do whatever you want! Just be with me!"

Ennis was silent as he considered Jack's proposal. He couldn't just up and leave his family on such short notice, could he? And what about work? When Jack reached down and tenderly palmed his manhood, licked the shaft with an eager tongue, he almost hated Jack for using his sex to persuade him! However, once Jack encircled him with his mouth, Ennis reached for the phone...
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: ifyoucantfixit on June 08, 2007, 03:48:05 pm


        I love this thread!!  Thanks for bringing it to us at Bettermost.  Its like a cousin to our Drabblefest.
We will all love it and try and participate when the mood strikes...Maybe another day..I will give it a whirl..
Love all the talent and enery you are all bringing here...sure enough.                      janice
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 08, 2007, 03:49:28 pm
Malina, thank you for this perfect moment.Reading it I completely forgot about everything around me. It is always worth to wait for your stories, you know?

Dagi  :-*
Title: Sweet Tooth
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 08, 2007, 03:51:33 pm
Yet another fragment that I found saved to my hard drive.  I hope this one makes sense on it's own?

Ennis released Jack and felt a stirring, a gust rising to a whirlwind of desire. He had an idea. "Hey Jack, still got that sweet tooth?" To say that Jack Twist was surprised..well..he never knew Ennis to take the initiative, be creative, or even suggest that they "do it." Jack knew what Ennis meant and croaked, "Oh hell yeah, Cowboy! What you got?"

Their bedroom was all rustic splendor with a bed sturdy enough to support the wrestling of two well built young men. Ennis spread the sheets and patted Jack's side of the bed. "Come, lie here, Bud. Trust me." Jack climbed onto his side of the bed and when prone closed his eyes in anticipation. "I trust you, Cowboy!"

Ennis gently spread Jack's thighs and very tenderly anointed his love with chocolate syrup. When the slurping and smacking began, Jack gripped and tore the sheets, barely able to preserve his sanity. "What has gotten into you, Ennis Del Mar?" Ennis didn't answer as Jack convulsed and then relaxed....
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 08, 2007, 03:53:49 pm
However, once Jack encircled him with his mouth, Ennis reached for the phone...

Poor Alma, imagine Ennis talking to her while Jack...have mercy on her!

Dagi
Title: Reflexology
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 08, 2007, 03:54:53 pm
Toycoon, sorry this one exceeds the 3 paragraph rule, but you don't mind if I repost, do you?


Gary, Clyde-B, I am dedicating this story to the 2 of you. I hope you both enjoy it!

Jack drove 14 hours to meet up with Ennis at Don Wroe's cabin. And as usual, he didn't give it a second thought. He was reminded of a poem that Lureen loved: a sweeping, epic rhyme that he believed was titled, "The Highwayman." Jack pondered his 14 hour treks whenever Lureen was in a poetic mood and read aloud:

Look for me by moonlight,
Watch for me by moonlight!
I'll come to thee by moonlight,
Though hell should bar the way!

Jack vowed that as long as he was breathing, he would find his way to Ennis, even if the gates of hell itself stood in his way. Jack felt guilty when he thought of Lureen. She had no way of knowing that a poem she loved so much held such a secret, special meaning for him. Poor Lureen!

He had a surprise for his lover: a certain something that he knew Ennis would like, but he was fearful, almost embarassed, not sure how Ennis would react to the treat that he had in store for him! Jack climbed the steps to the threshold of Don Wroe's cabin, fettered with a travel duffle, extra food (Ennis promised to bring the bulk of the vittles) and an additional bag that housed the surprise.

Jack found Ennis sprawled asleep on the overstuffed couch. His legs were spread wide, his fair hair plastered across his high forehead. Jack felt the old, familiar stirrings just gazing at his beloved, but he cast the feelings aside. After all, they had all week to be together. Jack decided to let Ennis sleep while he put his things away. Once his gear was safely in one of the bedrooms, Jack reached into his extra bag and fetched a mat: a yoga mat, to be exact, and placed it on the floor in front of the couch were Ennis was still sound asleep. He arranged his tools in a neat row in front of the mat and sat very still, closed his eyes.

Ennis woke with a start when Jack, growing impatient, rubbed the soles of his feet with a delicate hand.

"Hey Bud, Ennis began, as he wiped the sleep from his beautiful eyes. "When did you get in?" Ennis looked down at Jack's feet and noticed the mat, a small book, a bottle that contained an oily looking liquid. Jack was sitting in a strange position with one leg crossed over the other.

"Jack, what is going on?" Ennis asked, incredulous. "What's with all that stuff? How long have you been here?"

"So many questions, Cowyboy!" Jack began as he palmed Ennis' right ankle. "I just got in about 15 minutes ago. I thought I would put my stuff away and let you sleep for a few more minutes. You have a good rest?"

"Yes, thanks. But what is all this?" Ennis asked, as he pointed to Jack's gear.

"Listen, Bud, I want to do something for you. Don't be creeped out. This is very natural and healing. You'll like it, and I'm sure you'll benefit from it. Just stay where you are and be still." Jack uncrossed his legs and reached for the oil. "I wanted to have the technique memorized, but I haven't had the time. I'm going to give you a foot massage. It's called reflexology."

"Reflex what?" Ennis laughed as he shook his head. "Is that supposed to do something?"

"Yeah, it's supposed to do something, you ass!" Jack, testy now. "Look, just hold on and let me begin. You won't want me to stop when I get goin'" Ennis shrugged and let Jack begin his minsitrations. He oiled Ennis' left foot with a liberal dose of the lotion. "Now I'm going to work on your liver," Jack began as he massaged circles on Ennis' sole.

"Ahhhhhhhh Budddd...that is so good!" Ennis almost passed out from the pleasure of Jack's massage. He had never been touched on his feet by anyone, ever. Jack's gift for nuturing never ceased to amaze Ennis. he allowed himself to be pampered. Jack continued the massage on the other foot. By the time he had finished, Ennis was sound asleep. Jack chuckled and put his tools away. He would have Ennis return the favor - that was for sure! As he folded his mat and placed the gear back into his bag, Jack thought about the hippies who stopped by his office one December evening. They were a married couple who were passing through Childress, but had car trouble and were lost, cold and hungry. Jack fed them, provided a few hours of warmth and had his mechanics fix their Volkwagon Bus. And in return, the couple left him with the yoga mat, the oil and a book on how to perform reflexology. What better way to put the gear to use than to treat Ennis Del Mar? Jack changed his clothes, got cleaned up and started supper. They would eat good that night. And after the main course, the dessert...

Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 08, 2007, 03:56:02 pm
However, once Jack encircled him with his mouth, Ennis reached for the phone...

Poor Alma, imagine Ennis talking to her while Jack...have mercy on her!

Dagi

I will, Sweetie!  :)
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 08, 2007, 03:56:52 pm
Ennis gently spread Jack's thighs and very tenderly anointed his love with chocolate syrup

If I had been Ennis, I would have anointed myself with chocolate syrup  :laugh: !
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 08, 2007, 03:59:45 pm
Hey littlewing, I´m still waiting for my sequel  ;D!
Title: The Rain
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 08, 2007, 04:02:04 pm
Under willows encircled with ivy
We take cover in blustery weather
My arms are wreathed about you,
In my rain cape we huddle together

I was wrong, my love, not ivy
But hops encircle this willow.
Well then, let’s spread in its shelter
My cape for a rug and a pillow.
                        -Boris Pasternak


Ennis enjoyed the rain.  He remembers listening to the soft whisper of rain drops when he was a boy, and craving the dewy feel of rain on his forehead.  On Brokeback the rains came often -  Rain as heavy as beaded curtains, flowing, dancing in the wind.

Jack Twist hated the rain, cursed the wind, the wet!  He loathed herding sheep in the rain.  Ennis knew this and thought he should carve a little something for his friend, perhaps a small dog?  Jack Twist always loved a small dog.

The tent was warm enough, and the view out of the tent flap of all that glorious rain!  The small dog was coming along fine, but Ennis missed Jack.  When the wind calmed down a bit, he would perhaps surprise his mate with a bottle of whiskey, a small dog and a cape big enough for two.
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 08, 2007, 04:03:39 pm
Littlewing, could you please repost My hand in hisPLEASE?
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 08, 2007, 04:10:06 pm
Littlewing, could you please repost My hand in hisPLEASE?

I don't have it, Dagi!  I 'll look through some of the reposted J&E threads over at the other Board.  I'm kicking myself that I didn't save everything! :'(

By the way, Dagi - is that a pic of you?  You're very lovely!  :)
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 08, 2007, 04:22:16 pm
Littlewing, I can comfort you: I have it on paper. I can type it anew if you don´t have it! Not today, but I will post it in your name if that´s allright.

And yes, of course it´s me. Thank you! I sure would like to see a pic of yours! You have my email, if you feel like letting me know...

Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 08, 2007, 04:25:23 pm
Littlewing, I can comfort you: I have it on paper. I can type it anew if you don´t have it! Not today, but I will post it in your name if that´s allright.

And yes, of course it´s me. Thank you! I sure would like to see a pic of yours! You have my email, if you feel like letting me know...



Thanks, Dagi!  Yes, please repost whenever you get to it.  No rush!  I'm going to post my pics when I can download them to my computer.  I'll also send you some!  :)
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 08, 2007, 04:55:20 pm
Just a quickie to Dagi and Littlewing,

I have all the stories on Word, so I'll dig out "My hand in His" and pm it to you littlewing.
Looks like I have a lot of reading to do!


I'll be back later



Susie xox (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

That's right!  Susie, you're my girl!  May I send you requests for reposts?  :)
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on June 08, 2007, 05:18:33 pm
Susiebell---Looks like friends with chocolate are on the thread with ya now!! LOL.   ;)

Whooo-Wheee!!! Thanks for starting up a new thread for Jack and Ennis on Bettermost, Toycoon!!! I always read; just don't post much. I'll try to now and then when I can think of sump'n.  


The Strawberry Roan


"..............He's about the worst bucker I've seen on the range
He'll turn on a Nickel and give you some change
He hits on all fours and goes up on high
Leaves me a spinnin' up there in the sky
I turns over twice and I comes back to earth
I lights in a cussin' the day of his birth
I know there are ponies that I cannot ride
There's some of them left, they haven't all died.

I'll bet all my money, the man ain't alive
That'll stay with Old Strawberry
When he makes his high diiiiiiiiiiiiive."

Ennis sat back as he finished the song, his gravelly voice holding the last note a little longer than Marty Robbins would have.

"Ennis," drawled Jack, "that's a pretty fair rendition of that particular lyric."

Ennis, watching intently as Jack tossed another chunk of wood on the campfire,  emitted a noncommittal grunt at what he hoped was a compliment from his new buddy.
Title: Silent Confessions
Post by: Lumière on June 08, 2007, 05:47:25 pm
What a great idea for a thread.  :)



Silent Confessions...


Ennis looked lovingly at Jack’s resting form – his breathing was steady and soft, and his face was as peaceful as that of a sleeping child.

“My little darlin’,” he whispered, snuggling closer into Jack before draping a protective arm around him...how easy it was to let go of the words when he was certain that Jack was asleep.

Soon, Ennis fell into sweet slumber; Jack opened his eyes slowly and kissed his lover’s lips lightly, “I love you too,” he said softly, drawing the sleeping man into his arms.
Title: The Night After
Post by: Cameron on June 08, 2007, 06:49:22 pm
Hey there all of you!!!!  So glad you are all here!!!!   It's been a long, long time since I tried this game, mind if I join in?

Here'a a real short one to get started....

The Night After


Ennis looked up at the stars.  The night was clear, the moon were bright.  The sheep were crying and singing all around him.  The night was warm just like the last night had been.

Ennis closed his eyes.  He was back in the tent, back in Jack’s warm arms.  He could feel it all again, Jack’s warm lips on his trembling lips , Jack’s hands traveling all over him, sending sparks of fire all through him.  He had been so nervous, but it all became so sweet.

Ennis opened his eyes.  He looked back up at the stars.  He could feel their distant fire and warmth.  He looked down the mountain, he could see Jack’s campfire.  A wave of desire swept over him.
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Lumière on June 08, 2007, 06:54:09 pm

Great short story, Marl! 

Fancy seeing you here!  8)


Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Cameron on June 08, 2007, 07:01:33 pm
Thank you so much, Susie!!!  :)

Thank you M, fancy seeing you over here too. ;)

Marl
Title: My Hand in His
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 08, 2007, 08:25:24 pm
Littlewing, I can comfort you: I have it on paper. I can type it anew if you don´t have it! Not today, but I will post it in your name if that´s allright.

And yes, of course it´s me. Thank you! I sure would like to see a pic of yours! You have my email, if you feel like letting me know...



This is for you, Dagi!  Oh, and you, as well, Susie!  Susie, thanks so much for saving this and sending it on to me.  You're the best!

He held my hand. He didn’t want to let go. Did he sense that our time together on Brokeback was coming to an end? Jack Twist took my hand one day, led me over streams and through fields, my hand in his, his hand in mine. We washed our bodies and our clothes holding hands, cooked with hands intertwined, ate with our hands clasped. One time Jack Twist even brought my palm to his mouth, kissed it tenderly, but didn’t let go. There we stood, face to face, Jack kissing the front and the back of my hand. My hand in his, his hand in mine. These days I am always drawn back to that time, see the two us standing watching the sunset, standing there with clasped hands. My hand in his, his hand in mine.

Title: Re: The Old Spark
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 08, 2007, 08:29:07 pm
This is one of my favourites from Jack with Ennis, hope you like it too



The Old Spark

“Gonna snow t’night for sure” Jack was looking up at the sky, thick black clouds looming overhead, air so cold it was sending out streams of mist with every breath.  The two elderly men sat rocking on the porch swing, Jack’s hair white as snow, belly popping out over his jeans,  Ennis bald but for a few fine wisps, still lean, although a little softer round the edges.  They passed the Old Rose back and forth between them, enjoying the peace and quiet of the evening.

“Now this is what I call a sweet life, old friend” Jack commented, his voice a little deeper and huskier these days.  “Less of the ‘old’ there bud!  I may be 73 but I could still pin you down on this porch if I wanted to” Ennis chuckled, not sure his knees would survive the hard wooden boards.  “I’d like to see you try” Jack retorted, starting a mock tussle, laughing and wheezing and giving up after five minutes.

“Maybe not” admitted Ennis.  “Tell you what, Ennis Del Mar, you can pin me down any time you want!” Jack flashed him a sly grin, settling back down on the swing and taking another swig from the bottle.  “Jack, I swear…” Ennis smiled, taking Jack’s hand and weaving their fingers together, bringing it up to his lips, kissing it softly and placing it onto his lap.




Susie xox 8)


Ah, Susie, you've posted another of my favorites!  I really thank the good people here for allowing us to share our fic!  Susie, this reads even better the 2nd, 3rd time around.  Lovely, lovely, lovely, as always!  :)
Title: Re: Sweet Tooth
Post by: Toycoon on June 08, 2007, 08:33:51 pm
Yay! Littlewing1957, I love the chocolate syrup story! Hot, sweet and sticky!
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 08, 2007, 08:35:44 pm
Ennis gently spread Jack's thighs and very tenderly anointed his love with chocolate syrup

If I had been Ennis, I would have anointed myself with chocolate syrup  :laugh: !

Same here, Dagi!  :laugh:
Title: Re: Reflexology
Post by: Toycoon on June 08, 2007, 08:37:14 pm
Toycoon, sorry this one exceeds the 3 paragraph rule, but you don't mind if I repost, do you?

When Jack encircles Ennis with his mouth, you know I can get talked into just about anything!
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 08, 2007, 08:37:43 pm

Abso -flippin-lutely my dear littlewing!!


Susie xox  8)

Ah, thanks, baby!  :D
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 08, 2007, 08:40:09 pm
Susiebell---Looks like friends with chocolate are on the thread with ya now!! LOL.   ;)

Whooo-Wheee!!! Thanks for starting up a new thread for Jack and Ennis on Bettermost, Toycoon!!! I always read; just don't post much. I'll try to now and then when I can think of sump'n.  


The Strawberry Roan


"..............He's about the worst bucker I've seen on the range
He'll turn on a Nickel and give you some change
He hits on all fours and goes up on high
Leaves me a spinnin' up there in the sky
I turns over twice and I comes back to earth
I lights in a cussin' the day of his birth
I know there are ponies that I cannot ride
There's some of them left, they haven't all died.

I'll bet all my money, the man ain't alive
That'll stay with Old Strawberry
When he makes his high diiiiiiiiiiiiive."

Ennis sat back as he finished the song, his gravelly voice holding the last note a little longer than Marty Robbins would have.

"Ennis," drawled Jack, "that's a pretty fair rendition of that particular lyric."

Ennis, watching intently as Jack tossed another chunk of wood on the campfire,  emitted a noncommittal grunt at what he hoped was a compliment from his new buddy.


Superb, Shasta!  I so enjoyed reading this!  I'd almost forgotten how good you are at this!  Please do it again!   :)
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on June 08, 2007, 08:41:42 pm
Holy Crap!  This thread just got started and it's already four pages, I'm falling behind!
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 08, 2007, 08:44:17 pm
Hi there littlewing,

Thanks so much for reposting some of your stories from IMDb.  Gosh, now it's really starting to feel like home.  And your stories read just as good over here as over there.   :D  I recall all of them fondly, except one.  I don't recall ever reading the one about the chocolate syrup.  I must have missed that one.  But it's very sweet to find it here.  MMMM  I love chocolate.

I got all nervous when toycoon was stressing his three line rule.  So I reposted one of my stories, Cleanliness Is Next To Godliness, in it's own thread.  And now that I see that everyone is going ahead and posting their longer stuff here I feel all pretentious and snobbish starting my own thread.   :(

Gary


P.S.  I think I'm starting to get used to this place.

Hey, Gary, Baby!  Thanks for your kind words.  I'm kind of afraid of violating Toycoon's 3 paragraph rules, as well.  But I never thought about posting long stories as a thread.  I'm sure its alright with everyone here!  Don't feel snobbish starting your own thread.  I'm sure others are enjoying it, as well!  I'm glad you're feeling more at home.   :)
Title: The Strawberry Roan
Post by: Toycoon on June 08, 2007, 08:45:42 pm
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Whooo-Wheee!!! Thanks for starting up a new thread for Jack and Ennis on Bettermost, Toycoon!!! I always read; just don't post much. I'll try to now and then when I can think of sump'n.


Shasta254, my sugar plum! I'm delighted to start this new thread on BetterMost and I'm thrilled that you've written a brand, spanking new story. I hope the BetterMost regulars are enjoying our gift of prose as much as we like sharing it with them. C'mon, ya shy wallflowers, jump right in. We won't bite (hard)!

Title: Re: Silent Confessions
Post by: Toycoon on June 08, 2007, 08:50:41 pm
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“My little darlin’,” he whispered, snuggling closer into Jack before draping a protective arm around him...how easy it was to let go of the words when he was certain that Jack was asleep.

Splendid, and quite elegant.

Ennis, oh Ennis, if you only knew....
Title: Re: The Night After
Post by: Toycoon on June 08, 2007, 09:34:28 pm
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  He could feel it all again, Jack’s warm lips on his trembling lips , Jack’s hands traveling all over him, sending sparks of fire all through him.  He had been so nervous, but it all became so sweet.

Sexy and sweet, Cameron. It sounds like you got the hang of it to me!
Title: Re: My Hand in His
Post by: Toycoon on June 08, 2007, 09:39:42 pm
Littlewing1957, that is so wonderful! I don't remember that one the first time around. Thank goodness, Dagi saved it for us.

You are the mistress of the tough and tender. Salute!
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Cameron on June 08, 2007, 09:44:24 pm
Thank you so much, Toycoon!!!!!  :)
Title: Re: Reflexology
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 09, 2007, 12:06:58 am
When Jack encircles Ennis with his mouth, you know I can get talked into just about anything!

That's what I'm talkin' about, Toycoon!  :D
Title: Re: Silent Confessions
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 09, 2007, 12:08:22 am
What a great idea for a thread.  :)



Silent Confessions...


Ennis looked lovingly at Jack’s resting form – his breathing was steady and soft, and his face was as peaceful as that of a sleeping child.

“My little darlin’,” he whispered, snuggling closer into Jack before draping a protective arm around him...how easy it was to let go of the words when he was certain that Jack was asleep.

Soon, Ennis fell into sweet slumber; Jack opened his eyes slowly and kissed his lover’s lips lightly, “I love you too,” he said softly, drawing the sleeping man into his arms.


Gorgeous writing!  Thanks for posting!  :)
Title: Re: The Ad
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 09, 2007, 12:09:53 am
Littlewing my dear,

I want to comment on all your stories seperately, but I don't want to clag up the thread.  I love all of them you know that.

"The Ad" is so wonderfully original, I can just picture the surprise and delight at seeing Jack on TV looking mighty fine!! 

I love "Lets Go Away" with Jack using his manly wiles on Ennis (I have no problem with that ... I've done it myself in one of my stories ... don't like it when Alma does it though!!)

The "Sweet Tooth" ... OMG what I wouldn't do to swap places with Ennis .... Jack/Jake AND chocolate ... my favourite combination!

The "Reflexology" ... I'm unbearably ticklish on my feet but I'd be willing to let Jack give it a go!  Very sexy story!

"The Rain" is just so tender and romantic.


Love em all, littlewing, you have such a talent for this.


Love Susie xox (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Thanks Susie, Baby!  You are so sweet!  :D
Title: Re: My Hand in His
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 09, 2007, 12:13:06 am
Littlewing1957, that is so wonderful! I don't remember that one the first time around. Thank goodness, Dagi saved it for us.

You are the mistress of the tough and tender. Salute!

Why thanks, Sweets!  :)
Title: Last One In...
Post by: Toycoon on June 09, 2007, 01:06:27 am
The smell of sweat, whiskey, shame and cigarettes permeated the air; adultery and sound of silence in the cab of Ennis' pick up truck was nearly deafening until they pulled up to the edge of the cliff above the lake.

They threw open the doors then cowboy hats, boots, pants and inhibitions went flying in every direction; Jack jumped first and yelled, "Last one in is a rotten..." SPLASH!

Their lips and their naked bodies came together with a hard, wet slap.
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 09, 2007, 02:03:47 am
OMFG this thread is the best!!

And the fastest, I´m already falling behind!

Littlewing, you know I love all of your stories, the tough ones and the tender ones!!

Yes, Shasta, do it again!

Lucise, that was so sweet and so much JackandEnnis, just beautiful! Looking forward to reading more!

Gary, please post Turnabout here! And don´t you dare cut it into pieces to fit the rule!

Cameron, beautiful writing, go on, we want more!

Susie, The Old spark - I don´t know what to say...so beautiful, so much our "boys"  ;D even when they are 73! You are brilliant.

Toycoon, you are also the master of surprise!

Now I really have to take a Kugelschreiber and a paper and ignore my children and husband and think of something.
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on June 09, 2007, 08:30:35 am
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OMFG this thread is the best!!

And the fastest, I´m already falling behind!

Littlewing, you know I love all of your stories, the tough ones and the tender ones!!

Yes, Shasta, do it again!

Lucise, that was so sweet and so much JackandEnnis, just beautiful! Looking forward to reading more!

Gary, please post Turnabout here! And don´t you dare cut it into pieces to fit the rule!

Cameron, beautiful writing, go on, we want more!

Susie, The Old spark - I don´t know what to say...so beautiful, so much our "boys"   even when they are 73! You are brilliant.

Toycoon, you are also the master of surprise!

Now I really have to take a Kugelschreiber and a paper and ignore my children and husband and think of something.

 :) Sweet, Dagi!! I think you should be the official reviewer!! Oh, and what is a Kugelschreiber? A bubble bath?  ???
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Lumière on June 09, 2007, 10:48:24 am

This is quite the fun-filled thread!!
Thanks for the wonderful comments, everyone!   ;)
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 09, 2007, 02:55:01 pm
I thank you, Gary. I love this story. As I told you before, it strikes me as so honest. I read it twice and will add it to my little private collection, if you don´t mind, my friend.  Merr once said to me "when I read your mails, I can feel you". Gary, when I read your stories, I can feel you.
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 09, 2007, 03:10:28 pm
 :P

Title: Re: Missed You Part 2
Post by: Dagi on June 09, 2007, 03:33:54 pm
“I’m not finished with you yet, Jack Twist.... I'm just getting warmed up!”
Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Susie, I love this line. Don´t know why  :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

Sorry ´bout makin you cry, I don´t know what´s going on with me that I always write those "Ennis is sad and lonely"-Stories. In both the shortstory and the movie I relate so much more to Jack, but Ennis´ loneliness doesn´t go out of my head.
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 09, 2007, 03:38:44 pm
  :) Sweet, Dagi!! I think you should be the official reviewer!!

Shasta, that would be an honor! And reviewing is so much easier than writing.... :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: David In Indy on June 09, 2007, 03:46:09 pm
This is very good everyone! I really enjoy reading it.  :D

You all are very good writers!
Title: Re: The Sun
Post by: Toycoon on June 09, 2007, 04:23:35 pm
Dagi,
That was a beautiful story. So very sad but still beautiful all the same.
You've really got a talent for making me cry (and Ennis, too).
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on June 09, 2007, 04:28:18 pm
This is very good everyone! I really enjoy reading it.  :D

You all are very good writers!

Thanks, David-Indiana.
I gave your ABC game a shot but Ellemeno kept trumping me! She's already got more sheep than God!
Say, are you gonna write us a sexy fanfic here or what!? I know you've got something hot and steamy brewing up there! Let's have a look at it...
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 09, 2007, 04:30:16 pm
thank you, Toycoon! I finally found my courage again - it was hidin´ under the sofa  ;D ! I love this thread, it is my second home actually, so I will go on bothering you with my crap.
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 09, 2007, 04:32:26 pm
Say, are you gonna write us a sexy fanfic here or what!?

YES, David, PLEASE!! :o
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: ifyoucantfixit on June 09, 2007, 04:34:29 pm



            I agree with David.. welcome to Bettermost.  you have truly given this old forum a new spark of
energy.  We are so happy to have the IMBD groupi become part of us.........
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: David In Indy on June 09, 2007, 04:35:09 pm
Thanks, David-Indiana.
I gave your ABC game a shot but Ellemeno kept trumping me! She's already got more sheep than God!
Say, are you gonna write us a sexy fanfic here or what!? I know you've got something hot and steamy brewing up there! Let's have a look at it...

Well maybe Toycoon!

I'll try to get my creative imagination cranking, and maybe I'll come up with something!  :)

You all are doing a great job! This is a fun thread. Thanks for starting it.  :D
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: MaineWriter on June 09, 2007, 07:17:25 pm

P.S.  But I still can't eat no cheery cake. 



Maybe not cheery cake, but how about cherry cake? LOL   ;)
Title: Asking For It
Post by: Toycoon on June 09, 2007, 09:49:31 pm
The passion and animal lust was extremely intense and building by the second between the two men.

 Jack removes his jacket and Ennis felt conflicted but obviously extremely sexually aroused.

 Jack undid his jeans then Ennis exploded into action. He pushed Jack into position but if Jack had not wanted what was about to happen, he would have stopped it right then and there. He didn't.
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 10, 2007, 05:00:35 am
Good morning everybody! What a way to start the (Sun)day!

Gary, thank you for your kind words. I don´t mean to make everybody here sad, but that song posted at "BBM radio" really got to me...the next one will be fun, I promise!

Susie, just re-read missed you part 1 -  whoa, so so steamy, hot, juicy, - love it! give us your NC-17 - stories, please!

Toycoon, at least one person here follows the rule, and it is always amazing what you can express in three sentences! Jack had not wanted what was about to happen, he would have stopped it right then and there. He didn't. And I´m so grateful for that. Just because of Ennis, of course  ;D!

Ifyoucantfixit and David, how nice to see you here! Feel free to join in at any time, it´s fun! But be warned: It was not until ends of chapter eight that I posted my first one, and I´m allready addicted.

Merrily, you are a true friend, I love you. I´ll send you a PM on IMDb!
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 10, 2007, 07:38:25 am
Too Early In The Summer

< Beans.  Beans beans beans. I´m sick of ´em.>

< Hmm...>

< Taste ain´t that bad, but ...mbmummbfrt....>

< Huh? Mumbling used to be my part. What´d ya say?>

< Said ´they make me fart.´>

< Um...well...> Ennis grins.

< I´ll run them sheep off if I go on like that. Maybe that´s why I ain´t shot me no coyote yet, ´cause they don´t come close enough with all that...gas around. Expect that goddamn puptent to take off like a  balloon some night!>

Ennis laughes out loud, jerking his head back, eyes sparkling.

´This boy is f*uckin´too cute when he laughs...´

< Your guts don´t react like this, or what? >

< Hm, no, think they are used to beans. >

The cowboys go on eating in silence.

Ennis, sniffing : <Uh! What´s that? Was that you? >

< NO, MAN! Bud, I´d never fart as long as you´re around! Don´t want to run you off, friend! It wasn´t me! >

< Naw, me neither, told you I don´t fart, beans or no beans, it must´ve been you!>

Jack laughs, jumps up and over to Ennis, grabs his shirt, and tuzzling and laughing they fall on the ground -

curtains fall discretely...
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on June 10, 2007, 09:59:20 am
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Beans beans beans.

Dagi, you are too funny! I knew one of these days, someone would address the beans/flatulence issue.
It stands to reason though, that's the main reason I don't 'eat no beans'! Very cute, German girl.
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on June 10, 2007, 11:43:14 am
Dagi, this it too funny, it SHOULD be in the script! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_15_8.gif), you're just getting better and better!


I might post that NC17 rated one on it's own .... not sure, people might not like me anymore!!


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)
 


Remember the "Spoiler!" warning we used at IMDb? 

Maybe we need a "Feelthy!" warning for some stories on this thread.

 ;D
Title: Re: Asking For It
Post by: Toycoon on June 10, 2007, 01:48:59 pm
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Toycoon, I swear you're the master of three sentence juiciness!

Thank you, sugar pie. That means a lot coming from the daughter of the devil, himself!

Quote
Nice to see someone obeying the rules ... not me that's for sure!

Well, somebodies gotta stick to the rules. None'a you hellions are gonna conform, I can see that.

Quote
Susie (the master of quantity over quality)

Boy, that's for damn sure! ;D
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 10, 2007, 02:11:02 pm
Thanks, Toycoon and Susie. I know I ain´t never no good at joke-telling, but I wanted to do something different...

And Susie: To me you are the master of quantity going hand in hand with quality! And don´t be afraid, honey: did I stop loving you after reading your NC-17 Stories? NOT AT ALL  :-* :-* :-*!!!

Title: Asking For It (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 10, 2007, 06:16:37 pm
Jack wanted it.  He wanted Ennis to fill him to bursting, to love him, use him.  But he also wanted more!  Jack wanted the moment, the feeling, the closeness.  Jack wanted a kiss.

But the kiss could wait until later.  Days later, if need be.  For now Jack Twist was content to be taken.  Taken violently, if that is what Ennis wanted.  He needed to see that Ennis had it all!

One forceful push and Ennis was in.  Jack fell into an uneasy rhythm - back and forth, while Ennis pushed in an out!  What a sweet, delicious pain.....

Title: Re: Asking For It (2)
Post by: Clyde-B on June 10, 2007, 06:37:14 pm
Jack wanted it.  He wanted Ennis to fill him to bursting, to love him, use him.  But he also wanted more!  Jack wanted the moment, the feeling, the closeness.  Jack wanted a kiss.

But the kiss could wait until later.  Days later, if need be.  For now Jack Twist was content to be taken.  Taken violently, if that is what Ennis wanted.  He needed to see that Ennis had it all!

One forceful push and Ennis was in.  Jack fell into an uneasy rhythm - back and forth, while Ennis pushed in an out!  What a sweet, delicious pain.....



Pass me another one of them church fans will, ya?  The heat and humidity's just all wilted mine.
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on June 10, 2007, 09:29:15 pm
:laugh:  Maybe you're right Clyde.  Do I need to put that warning at the top of Turnabout?

Gary

You bet!

Although it was sweet and hot.  I don't know if "feelthy" is ever sweet.  (I personally prefer sweet and hot but that's another issue altogether!)

All these complicated literary distinctions!!!   ;D
Title: Re: Asking For It (2)
Post by: Toycoon on June 10, 2007, 09:38:05 pm
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One forceful push and Ennis was in.  Jack fell into an uneasy rhythm - back and forth, while Ennis pushed in and out!  What a sweet, delicious pain.....

Oh my, littlewing1957, you got me blushing! And my startle point is pretty high! You've earned the name, DirtyMama.
Title: Re: Asking For It (2)
Post by: Clyde-B on June 10, 2007, 11:05:55 pm
LOL  Clyde, I wonder how many of these young ones know what you're talking about.  I sure do.  I remember those.  All the ladies in church had them when I was a kid.  You are talking about the fans made of a piece of heavy cardboard with a picture of Jesus attached to a wooden stick used as a handle, right?  Around here they were sometimes called funeral home fans because an advert for a funeral home was often on the side opposite Jesus.

Gary


Yep!  With prayers and Bible verses on the back, and it'd be about a hundred an one and everybody sweatin like a pig and the reverend would just drone on and on and on... And everybody would be fannin and the harder you fanned, the hotter it got...
 
Thanks for remembering Gary!
Title: Re: Asking For It (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 10, 2007, 11:09:08 pm
Delicious writing littlewing! .... that was hot hot hot! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_3_1v.gif)


Susie   (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Thanks so much, Susie!  :)
Title: Re: Asking For It (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 10, 2007, 11:12:01 pm
Pass me another one of them church fans will, ya?  The heat and humidity's just all wilted mine.


 :laugh:  Thanks so much, Sweets!  I was thinking of J&E in church this morning!  I'm so ashamed of myself!  :laugh:
Title: Re: Asking For It (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 10, 2007, 11:13:04 pm
MMMM  Sexy stuff, littlewing.  And I know just how Jack feels.  Ennis is such an animal.  Who wouldn't want to give in to that kind of lust?   ;D

Gary

Ah, Gary, you are so right about Ennis!  I have an image of him as a passionate, lusty man!  No wonder our poor Jack was so smitten!
Title: Re: Asking For It (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 10, 2007, 11:14:27 pm
LOL  Clyde, I wonder how many of these young ones know what you're talking about.  I sure do.  I remember those.  All the ladies in church had them when I was a kid.  You are talking about the fans made of a piece of heavy cardboard with a picture of Jesus attached to a wooden stick used as a handle, right?  Around here they were sometimes called funeral home fans because an advert for a funeral home was often on the side opposite Jesus.

Gary

Yep, you're right, Gary!  I saw them being used just this morning!
Title: Re: Asking For It (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 10, 2007, 11:15:11 pm
Oh my, littlewing1957, you got me blushing! And my startle point is pretty high! You've earned the name, DirtyMama.

 :D  Thanks, Toycoon, baby!
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 10, 2007, 11:19:56 pm
Gary, this one is for you. The spelling and grammar correction was made by....me this time  :laugh:....

The Sun

„... a few tears now and then and just let them out
I'm not afraid to cry every once in a while
even though goin on with you gone still upsets me
There are days every now and again
I pretend I'm okay but that's not what gets me ...“

Ennis jerked up from the bed and over to the radio, and turned it off.

He leaned heavily against the closet, eyes closed,  breathing deep while he tried to hold back the tears.

<Goddamn, Ennis, after so many years...F*ck. Pull yourself together...right so. Better.>

Another deep breath.

He turned around and opened the closet door, run his fingers over the blue shirt of his one and only

love, and up welled the tears again, forcing their way out, nothing he could do against it...

Jack Twist, his love, his soul, all that had made his poor life worth living, would never come back,

would never again caress his face, never again embrace and hold him in his strong comforting arms.

He turned the radio on again.

„...what hurts the most, was being so close
And having so much to say
And watchin you walk away
Never knowing, what could have been
And not seein that lovin you
Is what I was tryin to do ....“

Ennis crawled onto the bed, wrapped himself up in the shirts and buried his wet face in the

pillow, crying hard now, sobbing and shaking  until he felt all empty .

The pain seemed to ease a little, a relief only tears could bring.

The afternoon sun came out from behind the heavy clouds and  shone golden through the dirty

window of his trailor, stroking his cheek tenderly with warm fingers.






Wow, Dagi!  Is this new?  I don't remember it!  Anyway, your writing is getting so very lovely!  And I love the song!  The Sun is so sad and sweet at the same time.  I love it!  :)
Title: Re: Asking For It (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 10, 2007, 11:23:39 pm
Why thank you Merr! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_7_104v.gif)

My daughter took about 20 of me this afternoon in an attempt to get a couple of decent ones ..... so it's about 6 hours old ... can't get much more recent than that!

I'll pm you some time about the emoticons ... a bit faffy but so cute!!


Love Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Susie, I would like to know about the emoticons, as well.  Such fun!
Title: Re: Craving
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 10, 2007, 11:28:26 pm

“Here, let me do that for you lil’ darlin’… is that sore, right there?” Jack winced, Jesus, it hurt like hell! Ennis dabbed the clean towel carefully over Jack’s lip, split open, blood everywhere. The skin around his right eye was in pretty bad shape too, turning three shades of purple, the eye itself, closing up with the swelling.

“You sure that’s how it happened, Jack?”

“Like I said, I climbed out of the truck, stumbled on the curb and smashed my face on the sidewalk.” Jack was shaken up badly, but what else could he say? That he got jumped, walking out of a grocery store? Ennis would surely turn tail and run if he found out that two fellas had taken a disliking to him, calling him "fag got" and kicking the sh it out of him just for fun.

Ennis guided him over to the bed, laying him down gently, sliding in behind him and pulling the sheet over them. He knew Jack was lying, his story would explain some of the bruises on his face, but what about the twisted arm and busted ribs? Nothing to be done about it right now though.

“Come here baby, I need you t’night”, Jack reached back and took a hold of Ennis’ hand, bringing it forward and down. Ennis laughed, “Are you kidding me? You’re in no fit state to even move, Dumbass”.

“Just tell me then, tell me what you’re doin’ to me Ennis, I need to hear you”.

“I dunno Jack, I ain’t no good with words, you know that.”

“I don’t care, only you and me here, I ain’t telling no-one.”

Ennis closed his eyes, laying his head close to Jack’s, stroking the skin on his belly, this wasn’t gonna be easy, but he would do it, do it for Jack.

His voice was soft and deep in Jack’s ear, “You’re lying under me Jack, looking up at me with those eyes, I’m fallin’ into those baby blue eyes.” Jack sighed, snuggling up against him, guiding Ennis’ hand down over his groin, wrapping it softly round him, Ennis relaxing a little, voice slowing down some.

“Sweat’s tricklin’ down your chest, I’m lickin’ it with my tongue, you taste so good Jack, never tasted anythin’ so good.” Ennis was moving his hand back and forth slowly, Jack still holding onto him.

“I’m lifting your legs up on my shoulders, I’m inside you, deep inside. I’m going crazy Jack, wanna pound you so hard, but I stay in control, moving real slow, all the way in…. and all the way out. You feel so tight and hot round me, suckin’ me in.” Jack was rocking next to him, forwards and backwards into his hand, breath coming in ragged.

“You’re nearly there, I can tell, I can see it in your face, eye’s scrunchin’ up, biting down on your tongue. I can hear it too Jack, coming from the back of your throat, like you’re cryin’ and gaspin’ for air…. Yeah, just like that” Ennis tightening his grip, moving faster, his voice barely a whisper.

“You’re so close now I can hardly stand it, I’m steadying you with my hands, slowing you down, taking my time.” Jack’s back was arching against him, holding onto Ennis’s hand, pushing hard into it, whimpering, Ennis’ voice trailing off to more of a breath than a whisper, “You’re comin’ now lil’ darlin’… comin’ for me…”




Susie   (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)





Susie, I'm going to have to order a supply of fans!  This is another favorite of mine.  So sentimental and sexy!  When Jack calls Ennis baby and wants to be close, I feel like I'm going to swoon!  Just beautiful, Susie!
Title: Re: Asking For It (2)
Post by: Clyde-B on June 10, 2007, 11:33:13 pm
:laugh:  Thanks so much, Sweets!  I was thinking of J&E in church this morning!  I'm so ashamed of myself!  :laugh:

I'll bet it made for an interesting sermon!  ;D
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 11, 2007, 12:29:12 am
Wow, Dagi!  Is this new?  I don't remember it!  Anyway, your writing is getting so very lovely!  And I love the song!  The Sun is so sad and sweet at the same time.  I love it!  :)

Aha, the second time that  someone says I´m getting better. So my first attempts were really crappy, hunh  ??? ? Understood. Anyway, to me writing is  fun.

As to your story,  littlewing, I may sit here half asleep, but I know ONE part of me that is fully awake now!

Gary, thank you for your comment, glad that you had a good laugh!

Susie,
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“You’re so close now I can hardly stand it, I’m steadying you with my hands, slowing you down, taking my time.” Jack’s back was arching against him, holding onto Ennis’s hand, pushing hard into it, whimpering, Ennis’ voice trailing off to more of a breath than a whisper, “You’re comin’ now lil’ darlin’… comin’ for me…”
, soooo sweet and hot, hot, hot!!! This was one of my favorites on IMDb, I love it.
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 11, 2007, 12:37:35 am


And Susie: To me you are the master of quantity going hand in hand with quality! And don´t be afraid, honey: did I stop loving you after reading your NC-17 Stories? NOT AT ALL  :-* :-* :-*!!!



quoting myself now to make sure you read it . With a new story from littlewing just underneath both eyes and mind are too easily distracted....
Title: Carving a Horse
Post by: Toycoon on June 11, 2007, 01:36:55 am
Ennis started whittling faster and faster with the anticipation of completing his well observed and skillfully carved horse sculpture.

"I wonder if Jack will recognize his mare without a rider or would he just think it was queer for a man to give another fella a present," thought Ennis, "and damn, is it ever gonna quit raining?"

He took out another piece of pine from his satchel, closed his eyes and began imaging the cowboy hat, the strong back, the thick arms and the tight thigh muscles of a man before putting the block of wood aside.
Title: Re: Carving a Horse
Post by: Dagi on June 11, 2007, 03:13:59 am

He took out another piece of pine from his satchel, closed his eyes and began imaging the cowboy hat, the strong back, the thick arms and the tight thigh muscles of a man before putting the block of wood aside.

So, this was part one - now I need part two, please ;D!
Title: A Surprise Gift
Post by: Toycoon on June 12, 2007, 12:14:20 am
When Jack rode up on his horse, weary from the long commute, Ennis already had supper ready to serve so he handed Jack a plate and the two men sat down to eat in relative silence until Ennis pulled something from his satchel; he had carved a wooden replica of Jack's mare as a gift for Jack.

"Wowee Ennis! You whittle that all yerself?" exclaimed Jack, turning the little horse over in his hands, inspecting the detail and craftsmanship. Jack had never been given such a thoughtful gift from anyone, let alone other man and the kind gesture rendered him speechless.

Suddenly, impulsively Jack threw his arms around Ennis and hugged him firmly, their cheeks pressing together; Jack's lips brushed against Ennis' face and he felt a strange tingle at his groin.
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 12, 2007, 03:11:32 am
Toycoon, this is lovely! I can imagine Jack´s surprise and joy, and figuring his face makes me feel all warm and dizzy...!
Title: Sleeping
Post by: Dagi on June 12, 2007, 03:13:09 am
„I´m sleepin“ murmured Jack when he felt Ennis´s hot hands on his butt and his swollen member pressed against his back.

„Ya sure?“ whispered Ennis in a husky voice, hungry with desire.

Growing hard in no time Jack gave in with a little sigh, wondering if he would ever, ever in his life learn to resist, but considering the fact that they were about to turn seventyfour he doubted that....
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: mariez on June 12, 2007, 12:16:24 pm
Wow - I can't keep up with you guys - what great short stories!  Keep 'em coming! 

Thanks,
Marie
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 12, 2007, 05:07:56 pm
Wow - I can't keep up with you guys - what great short stories!  Keep 'em coming! 

Thanks,
Marie

Thank YOU, Marie! Glad you enjoy it!
Title: Re: Marriage Vows
Post by: Dagi on June 12, 2007, 05:12:26 pm


“…. to be my husband” Ennis frowned, “Can’t I be your “Best Friend” or your “Partner” or somethin’?”

“Just say the goddamn words Ennis Del Mar!” and so they continued, with only the occasional protest from Ennis; “I’ll cherish you but I ain’t obeyin’ you, no way!”
 


I love Ennis´s not obeying!  :laugh:
Very sweet, Susie, and the image of them holding each other in a tight embrace...aaaww...lovely.
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 13, 2007, 01:04:55 am
Aha, the second time that  someone says I´m getting better. So my first attempts were really crappy, hunh  ??? ? Understood. Anyway, to me writing is  fun.

As to your story,  littlewing, I may sit here half asleep, but I know ONE part of me that is fully awake now!

Gary, thank you for your comment, glad that you had a good laugh!

Susie, , soooo sweet and hot, hot, hot!!! This was one of my favorites on IMDb, I love it.


Dagi, I didn't mean your writing was crappy!  Quite the contrary!  I just mean, the more we write, the better we become.   ;)
Title: Re: Asking For It (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 13, 2007, 01:07:16 am
I'll bet it made for an interesting sermon!  ;D

 :laugh:  You bet!
Title: Re: Marriage Vows
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 13, 2007, 01:10:11 am
I promise I'll come up with something new soon. In the meantime, this is another one of my favourites



“Come on Ennis, you know you wanna! Let’s do it now!”

“No Jack! Sounds kinda dumb to me.”

“It ain’t dumb! Just do it for me then Ennis. Please?”

“Oh alright then, as long as I don’t have to hold no posy!”

Jack sat cross legged on the picnic rug, opposite his lover, their faces bathed in the golden light of the setting sun. Taking both hands in his, he began, “Repeat after me… I Ennis Del Mar, take you Jack Twist…” Ennis muttered the words, then on seeing the disappointment in Jack’s eyes, smiled a little and said them again more clearly.

“…. to be my husband” Ennis frowned, “Can’t I be your “Best Friend” or your “Partner” or somethin’?”

“Just say the goddamn words Ennis Del Mar!” and so they continued, with only the occasional protest from Ennis; “I’ll cherish you but I ain’t obeyin’ you, no way!”

“Right... now it’s your turn”, Ennis took on the role of Minister and began reciting the wedding vows, Jack smiling and eagerly repeating every word.

Finally, Jack sprang to his feet, dragging Ennis with him, eyes fixed upon him, squeezing his hands, “Ennis Del Mar and Jack Twist…. I now pronounce you husband and husband!” Beaming and bursting with happiness, he embraced Ennis mightily, and although Ennis had been a reluctant participant in the ceremony, he too was bubbling over with joy, and returned the embrace, holding Jack tightly in his arms.

No matter what happened in the future, Jack and Ennis were now bound, before God, by the sacred vow of marriage.



Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)
 


This is one of my favorites, as well!  Thanks for reposting, Susiebell!  :)
Title: The Gift
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 13, 2007, 01:14:20 am
This is another of my favorite series.  I'll post part 2 in a bit.  I'll also have a few new stories I'm working on.


Jack walked out of Rudolph-Tracy’s jewelry store in downtown Dallas carrying a gaudy, two handled shopping bag. He always wanted to do something like this: purchase a gift for Ennis that symbolized his love for him, or perhaps mark his territory? Jack was understandably apprehensive, as he knew there was a good chance that Ennis would refuse the gift. Save for his thin wedding band, Ennis never wore jewelry!

But Jack saved for a year by putting away spare change, saving a dollar a day, that sort of thing, hiding the money in a place where Lureen would never find it. He kept a coffee can full of loose change and bills in the trunk of his Cadillac. Risky, sure, but it worked. In a year’s time Jack was able to save a sizeable sum and spent an indecent amount of money on 14K gold men’s ID bracelets. Jack had the bracelets ordered special as one spelled out Ennis’ name in pave diamonds, while the other matched perfectly, displaying Jack’s name in sparkling pave diamonds!

Jack chuckled as he climbed into his late model Cadillac. He wondered how he would ever find the courage to give Ennis a bracelet. He winced as he eyed the shopping bag on the passenger seat next to him. The bracelets couldn’t be returned as they were personalized. Ennis spelled out in diamonds? What was he thinking? Ah well, the deed was done. Now it was time to head home and get packed. He had a one Mr. Ennis Del Mar to meet and 1400 miles of road to travel....



Title: The Gift Part 2
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 13, 2007, 01:49:29 am
I'm posting the sequel to my fic, "The Gift"


Jack placed his things on the bed nearest the window (all of the bedroom’s in Don Wroe’s cabin had two full sized beds) and removed the bracelet that he saved for a year to purchase.  Jack fully planned to give Ennis his gift after dinner, but he was losing his nerve.

Jack walked into the kitchen just as Ennis finished grilling two monster sized burgers.  Jack’s mouth watered at the sight of the meaty patties, and he removed cheese, grated lettuce and tomatoes from the well stocked fridge.  The meal of burgers, fries, Caesar salad and a strawberry torte for dessert was ready to be served.  Jack helped Ennis place the feast on the dining room table.

Ennis and Jack ate in companionable silence, and with gusto.  When the meal was devoured, Jack and Ennis decided to move to the living room to smoke a few cigs, and enjoy a bottle of whiskey on shares.  Ennis sat wide-legged on the couch, and invited Jack to sit next to him.  Ennis draped an arm around Jack’s shoulders, and played with the soft curls at the nape of his neck.

 “You okay, Rodeo?”  Ennis began.  “You look like you got somethin’ on yer mind.”

Jack thought he had better make a move or he would lose his resolve forever.

“En, I had this idea, a sort of wish I’ve been having’ for a long time.  We have never shared a gift between the two of us, and I want to make up for that.”

 Ennis listened intently, but remained silent, allowed Jack to continue.  Jack removed a long, velvet box from under the couch where he had placed it earlier.

 “Ennis, I had this made up special for you….I..I hope you like it, Bud.”

Ennis accepted the box with a trembling hand, and opened the lid.  He almost dropped the box when he saw the heavy 14K cable link chain separated by a plague on which the name JACK was spelled out in diamonds.

“Look, En,” Jack said as he raised a tentative wrist.  “I had one made up for me, too.”

Ennis looked at the identical bracelet sparking on Jack’s wrist and wondered how he missed it during supper.  Jack’s bracelet spelled out ENNIS in twinkling pave diamonds.  Ennis was speechless.  He accepted the gift with a quiet grace, and fastened it on his still trembling wrist.  Ennis was excited, amazed, and grateful, in spite of himself.  He never wore jewelry; thought it was prissy and girly, but he had to appreciate the effort, the love Jack must have put into this.  The bracelet was showy, surely cost a fortune, but Ennis thought he could pull it off. 

“Look, Cowboy, you don’t have to wear it all the time, but just bring it with you when we meet up.  I would appreciate it if you could do that for me.  But if you ever find you need money, I won’t mind if you pawn it.”
Ennis chuckled and rubbed Jack’s cheek.

“I could never pawn or sell this, Jack!”  Ennis Began.  He reached into his shirt pocket and pulled out a small, bundle.  “Here, Bud, I know you had a birthday last month.  We couldn’t be together then, so I save up a bit and got you this.  I hope you like it.”

Jack ripped open the package and removed a cheap, gold plated lighter engraved with the initials, JMT. 

“Ennis, it’s beautiful!”  Jack croaked, as he tried to regain his composure.  He was so moved by the gesture that he had to turn away.  “You didn’t have to get me anything, Cowboy.  You really should have saved the money for the girls.”

“Ah, its okay, Ennis began as he ruffled Jack’s hair.  “I didn’t spend too much!  You really like it?” 

“I love it, En.  I’ll treasure it always.  Jack embraced his lover and stroked his back.

“Hey, you could have bought me a gorilla suit and not only would I have loved it, I would wear it!  I’ll be the combine saleman showing tractors to fat old farmers dressed as a gorilla!”

Ennis nearly fell off the couch laughing.  “Listen Bud, let’s go to bed.  We can show our gratitude in a lot of interestin’ ways…
 


Title: Re: The Gift Part 2
Post by: Dagi on June 13, 2007, 07:31:11 am
I'm posting the sequel to my fic, "The Gift"


Jack placed his things on the bed nearest the window (all of the bedroom’s in Don Wroe’s cabin had two full sized beds) and removed the bracelet that he saved for a year to purchase.  Jack fully planned to give Ennis his gift after dinner, but he was losing his nerve.

Jack walked into the kitchen just as Ennis finished grilling two monster sized burgers.  Jack’s mouth watered at the sight of the meaty patties, and he removed cheese, grated lettuce and tomatoes from the well stocked fridge.  The meal of burgers, fries, Caesar salad and a strawberry torte for dessert was ready to be served.  Jack helped Ennis place the feast on the dining room table.

Ennis and Jack ate in companionable silence, and with gusto.  When the meal was devoured, Jack and Ennis decided to move to the living room to smoke a few cigs, and enjoy a bottle of whiskey on shares.  Ennis sat wide-legged on the couch, and invited Jack to sit next to him.  Ennis draped an arm around Jack’s shoulders, and played with the soft curls at the nape of his neck.

 “You okay, Rodeo?”  Ennis began.  “You look like you got somethin’ on yer mind.”

Jack thought he had better make a move or he would lose his resolve forever.

“En, I had this idea, a sort of wish I’ve been having’ for a long time.  We have never shared a gift between the two of us, and I want to make up for that.”

 Ennis listened intently, but remained silent, allowed Jack to continue.  Jack removed a long, velvet box from under the couch where he had placed it earlier.

 “Ennis, I had this made up special for you….I..I hope you like it, Bud.”

Ennis accepted the box with a trembling hand, and opened the lid.  He almost dropped the box when he saw the heavy 14K cable link chain separated by a plague on which the name JACK was spelled out in diamonds.

“Look, En,” Jack said as he raised a tentative wrist.  “I had one made up for me, too.”

Ennis looked at the identical bracelet sparking on Jack’s wrist and wondered how he missed it during supper.  Jack’s bracelet spelled out ENNIS in twinkling pave diamonds.  Ennis was speechless.  He accepted the gift with a quiet grace, and fastened it on his still trembling wrist.  Ennis was excited, amazed, and grateful, in spite of himself.  He never wore jewelry; thought it was prissy and girly, but he had to appreciate the effort, the love Jack must have put into this.  The bracelet was showy, surely cost a fortune, but Ennis thought he could pull it off. 

“Look, Cowboy, you don’t have to wear it all the time, but just bring it with you when we meet up.  I would appreciate it if you could do that for me.  But if you ever find you need money, I won’t mind if you pawn it.”
Ennis chuckled and rubbed Jack’s cheek.

“I could never pawn or sell this, Jack!”  Ennis Began.  He reached into his shirt pocket and pulled out a small, bundle.  “Here, Bud, I know you had a birthday last month.  We couldn’t be together then, so I save up a bit and got you this.  I hope you like it.”

Jack ripped open the package and removed a cheap, gold plated lighter engraved with the initials, JMT. 

“Ennis, it’s beautiful!”  Jack croaked, as he tried to regain his composure.  He was so moved by the gesture that he had to turn away.  “You didn’t have to get me anything, Cowboy.  You really should have saved the money for the girls.”

“Ah, its okay, Ennis began as he ruffled Jack’s hair.  “I didn’t spend too much!  You really like it?” 

“I love it, En.  I’ll treasure it always.  Jack embraced his lover and stroked his back.

“Hey, you could have bought me a gorilla suit and not only would I have loved it, I would wear it!  I’ll be the combine saleman showing tractors to fat old farmers dressed as a gorilla!”

Ennis nearly fell off the couch laughing.  “Listen Bud, let’s go to bed.  We can show our gratitude in a lot of interestin’ ways…
 




So sweet, littlewing! Your stories are always special! And Jack wearing that gorilla suit - bwaaahaahaa, funny, but I doubt there is anything that could spoil the divine beauty of this man!!!
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 13, 2007, 07:33:28 am
No one meant that, you great banana, Dagi!  People have said that to me too, and I'm sure they didn't mean it as an insult!! 

Or maybe they did??? ... now you've got me worried too!!! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_3_6.gif)


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif) 

I had a bad day. Sometimes I´m just too vulnerable. Thank you Susie, and littlewing.
Title: Re: Breakfast in Dubois
Post by: Toycoon on June 13, 2007, 09:38:54 am
Nice and nasty breakfast, Susiebell, you vixen!

I'm sorry I missed so much here on BetterMost. I went to Disneyland for the day.
Title: Re: Breakfast in Dubois
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 13, 2007, 10:56:37 am

They stopped briefly in Dubois for a bite to eat before heading on to Signal and back to the real world.  The two men sat in a quiet corner at the back of the diner, feasting on a hearty breakfast of eggs, bacon, sausages and a side order of pancakes; a welcome change from beans and taters.

Jack’s head was still spinning after that punch, had it all figured out before, but now he didn’t know what the hell was gonna happen.  He yearned to communicate in some way with his lover, who was sitting stony faced, in silence, eyes fixed firmly on his plate.

Ennis felt a tingling pressure on his leg, a foot moving slowly up the inside towards his knee, and looking up from his breakfast, he saw a weak, hopeful smile on Jack’s face.  For a moment, he forgot where he was and returned the smile, then suddenly aware of the folks around him, jumped up in horror, shot a murderous look at Jack, muttered “Gotta pee” and marched off in the direction of the bathroom. 

Jack followed after him, looking around cautiously before closing the bathroom door behind him.  Ennis threw him against the wall, in a furious temper, one hand around his neck, “Do that again and I’ll knock yer fuckin’ head off!” 

“Fuck you, Ennis!” Jack glared at him defiantly, shocked at his violent reaction, and disappeared into one of the stalls.  Ennis shoved the door open roughly, “This ain’t over yet, Jack!”   Jack was on him in an instant, a mixture of hurt, anger, and lust burning right through him, pushing him up against the door, grinding his hips into Ennis’ and forcing his tongue into Ennis’ mouth.  “This ain’t over by a long ways, Ennis!” he breathed, tearing at Ennis’ jeans and dropping to his knees.



Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


My dear Susie, is this new?  I don't think I remember this one!  Anyway, brilliant tale, Sweets!  Superb!  You really remain true to the characters here!  The self-conscious Ennis, unwilling to accept who he is, unable to own his love for Jack.  And Jack, more accepting of his sexuality and not really afraid to show affection.  He is also unwilling to back down or be intimidated, and I love this about him!  Sublime, Susie!  Beautifully written!
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 13, 2007, 05:50:06 pm
Susie, this is brilliant, and I can´t add anything to what Gary and littlewing wrote. Sexy and sad. You are the master of the sexy and sad stories. I´ve spent some time crying about the boys again recently. I mean sex in a toilet is hot as long as you can show your affection outside the toilet, too. So, to mee it is mostly sad.
Title: Another Reunion (Part 1)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 13, 2007, 09:44:59 pm
Ennis Del Mar was never inclined to notice the body of another man, but when he saw Jack Twist walking – no –running toward him, his head turned at the sight.  “Jack, you are so beautiful!”  Ennis mouthed, under his breath, as Jack flung his arms wide, welcomed Ennis into a warm embrace. 

Jack folded Ennis close.  He touched his pave diamond bracelet to Ennis’ wrist, heard the tiny click of metal on metal, and was at once delighted that Ennis saw fit to wear his bracelet to their reunion.  “Let me look at you, Ennis Del Mar!”  Jack started as he broke the embrace and stepped just a few inches from his man.  “Just look at you, friend!  You look like a million bucks!”  Ennis was silent, but the wide flush that crept onto his full cheeks spoke volumes. 

“C'mere!”  It was Ennis.  He beckoned for Jack, pulled him close once again.   Ennis held Jack’s head as he kissed him deep.  He was held captive by Jack’s eyes - unable to look away.  If he had to do without Jack’s kiss for another day?  Well, Ennis didn’t think he could survive it.  He reached between Jack’s thighs and cupped his swelling member.  Ennis rubbed and kneaded until Jack moaned into his mouth, felt his knees begin to buckle!  “Easy, Jack!”  Ennis whispered as he pulled Jack once more to a standing position.   “C’mon, Bud, I think we're ready!  Let’s go inside…”
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 13, 2007, 10:23:11 pm
Thank you Dagi honey, for you kind words! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_7_105v.gif)  I don't quite understand how two fictional characters can have such a huge impact on us ... I find myself crying about them too!!  It makes me feel like I'm going insane!!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



Oh, I know the feeling, Susie Baby!
Title: Re: Another Reunion (Part 1)
Post by: Toycoon on June 13, 2007, 11:30:10 pm
Quote
“Jack, you are so beautiful!”  Ennis mouthed, under his breath, as Jack flung his arms wide, welcomed Ennis into a warm embrace.
 

I think you are just beautiful, littlewing1957!
Title: Re: Another Reunion (Part 1)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 13, 2007, 11:53:34 pm
Whoo Wee littlewing.  That is sweet, sexy and hot!  I like it!  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/23/23_1_10.gif)

 :D  Thanks, Merr!
Title: Re: Another Reunion (Part 1)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 13, 2007, 11:55:42 pm
 

I think you are just beautiful, littlewing1957!

Ah, You're such a sweetie.  I happen to know for a fact  that you're beautiful inside and out!
Title: Unexpected Feelings
Post by: Toycoon on June 14, 2007, 12:05:12 am
With his arms in a friendly embrace around his sheepherding partner, Jack felt an unexpected excitement deep in his loins causing his penis to stir; nothing he'd ever felt before was at once, exciting and terrifying.

Jack sunk to his knees, still clinging to the waistband of Ennis' jeans and ripping the fly open, held Ennis' manhood in his palm, quickly suckling it into his mouth.

Ennis closed his eyes tight, moaning and quivering in ecstasy; when he opened his eyes, it was dark and he was in the sheep herder's tent, alone, except for the carved wooden horse laying in the corner.
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 14, 2007, 12:17:47 am
With his arms in a friendly embrace around his sheepherding partner, Jack felt an unexpected excitement deep in his loins causing his penis to stir; nothing he'd ever felt before was at once, exciting and terrifying.

Jack sunk to his knees, still clinging to the waistband of Ennis' jeans and ripping the fly open, held Ennis' manhood in his palm, quickly suckling it into his mouth.

Ennis closed his eyes tight, moaning and quivering in ecstasy; when he opened his eyes, it was dark and he was in the sheep herder's herder's tent, alone, except for the carved wooden horse laying in the corner.

Toycoon, this is so sweet and sexy!  I love it.  And I'm gonna continue it! 
Title: Unexpected feelings (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 14, 2007, 12:28:52 am
Ennis was alone in the tent, but he was not lonely.  Reaching down to pull off his soiled jeans, Ennis allowed his mind to escape to the time when Jack Twist relieved him of his pants in one quick, skillful motion. 

After his pants were in a puddle around his boots, Jack positioned himself between Ennis’ thighs and slobbed his knob for what seemed hours.  Ennis grimaced as he remembered the times he filled Jack’s mouth with his pleasure.

But now, he had to wash out his jeans before sundown.  It wouldn’t do to have Jack lean in and pull him out, and lick him down and….Ahhh..too late!  Not again?

Title: Re: Another Reunion (Part 1)
Post by: Dagi on June 14, 2007, 12:31:53 am
Ennis Del Mar was never inclined to notice the body of another man, but when he saw Jack Twist walking – no –running toward him, his head turned at the sight.  “Jack, you are so beautiful!”  Ennis mouthed, under his breath, as Jack flung his arms wide, welcomed Ennis into a warm embrace. 

Jack folded Ennis close.  He touched his pave diamond bracelet to Ennis’ wrist, heard the tiny click of metal on metal, and was at once delighted that Ennis saw fit to wear his bracelet to their reunion.  “Let me look at you, Ennis Del Mar!”  Jack started as he broke the embrace and stepped just a few inches from his man.  “Just look at you, friend!  You look like a million bucks!”  Ennis was silent, but the wide flush that crept onto his full cheeks spoke volumes. 

“C'mere!”  It was Ennis.  He beckoned for Jack, pulled him close once again.   Ennis held Jack’s head as he kissed him deep.  He was held captive by Jack’s eyes - unable to look away.  If he had to do without Jack’s kiss for another day?  Well, Ennis didn’t think he could survive it.  He reached between Jack’s thighs and cupped his swelling member.  Ennis rubbed and kneaded until Jack moaned into his mouth, felt his knees begin to buckle!  “Easy, Jack!”  Ennis whispered as he pulled Jack once more to a standing position.   “C’mon, Bud, I think we're ready!  Let’s go inside…”


When the boys begin to moan my knees buckle, too! So sexy, littlewing! He was held captive by Jack’s eyes - unable to look away -  I know what Ennis is talking about...





Title: Re: Another Reunion (Part 1)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 14, 2007, 12:34:09 am
When the boys begin to moan my knees buckle, too! So sexy, littlewing! He was held captive by Jack’s eyes - unable to look away -  I know what Ennis is talking about...







Ah, Dagi, you're so sweet!  Thanks so much!  :)
Title: Re: Unexpected Feelings
Post by: Dagi on June 14, 2007, 12:40:43 am
With his arms in a friendly embrace around his sheepherding partner, Jack felt an unexpected excitement deep in his loins causing his penis to stir; nothing he'd ever felt before was at once, exciting and terrifying.

Jack sunk to his knees, still clinging to the waistband of Ennis' jeans and ripping the fly open, held Ennis' manhood in his palm, quickly suckling it into his mouth.

Ennis closed his eyes tight, moaning and quivering in ecstasy; when he opened his eyes, it was dark and he was in the sheep herder's herder's tent, alone, except for the carved wooden horse laying in the corner.

Aaahhh, toycoon, this is the part 2 I had hoped for...as I said before, when the boys begin to moan.... :o
Title: Re: Another Reunion (Part 1)
Post by: Dagi on June 14, 2007, 12:42:16 am
Ah, You're such a sweetie.  I happen to know for a fact  that you're beautiful inside and out!
Toycoon there must be a "so what do we all look like?"- thread...hint hint! Come on, bud!
Title: Re: Unexpected feelings (2)
Post by: Dagi on June 14, 2007, 12:45:26 am
Ennis was alone in the tent, but he was not lonely.  Reaching down to pull off his soiled jeans, Ennis allowed his mind to escape to the time when Jack Twist relieved him of his pants in one quick, skillful motion. 

After his pants were in a puddle around his boots, Jack positioned himself between Ennis’ thighs and slobbed his knob for what seemed hours.  Ennis grimaced as he remembered the times he filled Jack’s mouth with his pleasure.

But now, he had to wash out his jeans before sundown.  It wouldn’t do to have Jack lean in and pull him out, and lick him down and….Ahhh..too late!  Not again?



Yeehaawww, Ennis the animal, never satisfied, hunh? Jack Twist can call himself one lucky man  :laugh:  :o!
Title: Re: Unexpected feelings (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 14, 2007, 12:48:42 am
Yeehaawww, Ennis the animal, never satisfied, hunh? Jack Twist can call himself one lucky man  :laugh:  :o!

Yes, indeed!  ::)
Title: Re: Unexpected feelings (2)
Post by: Toycoon on June 14, 2007, 12:50:03 am
Ennis was alone in the tent, but he was not lonely.  Reaching down to pull off his soiled jeans, Ennis allowed his mind to escape to the time when Jack Twist relieved him of his pants in one quick, skillful motion. 

After his pants were in a puddle around his boots, Jack positioned himself between Ennis’ thighs and slobbed his knob for what seemed hours.  Ennis grimaced as he remembered the times he filled Jack’s mouth with his pleasure.

But now, he had to wash out his jeans before sundown.  It wouldn’t do to have Jack lean in and pull him out, and lick him down and….Ahhh..too late!  Not again?

Littlewing1957, we are having way, more fun than anyone in the world aren't we? I love how fast you match and complete my stories.
Title: Re: Another Reunion (Part 1)
Post by: Toycoon on June 14, 2007, 12:52:54 am
Toycoon there must be a "so what do we all look like?"- thread...hint hint! Come on, bud!

Dagi, there are several pictures of my boyfriend and I on the Brokeback B-B-Q thread.
LauraGigs posted a few pictures of her, our buddy, Mike and the two of us.
Title: Re: Unexpected feelings (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 14, 2007, 12:53:48 am
Littlewing1957, we are having way, more fun than anyone in the world aren't we? I love how fast you match and complete my stories.

Toycoon, ain't it the truth!  I'm having the time of my life, and I'm so grateful that I'm able to get this out!  I don't have to worry about upsetting the mods (I hope not, anyway) or being deleted!  This is wonderful!  I'm very happy!  :)
Title: Re: Another Reunion (Part 1)
Post by: Dagi on June 14, 2007, 12:57:40 am
Dagi, there are several pictures of my boyfriend and I on the Brokeback B-B-Q thread.
LauraGigs posted a few pictures of her, our buddy, Mike and the two of us.
Thank you, honey, hope I find them.
Title: Bathin' with Ennis
Post by: Toycoon on June 14, 2007, 09:57:49 pm
After setting his boots side by side at the tangled roots, his pants on a low branch and his shirt above, Ennis hung his cowboy hat on the top the bramble bush, crowning the effigy of himself then a gentle breeze gave it life; he gingerly waded into the glassy lake and upon reaching waist height, stopped, turned and motioned for Jack to join him.

Jack, already naked, scampered to the edge then dove in, emerging from the water just behind Ennis a few seconds later; Jack's eyes languished over every element of Ennis' strong back, his elegant neck, sinewy muscles, the tiny birth marks, his lean waist, finally arriving at a patch of curly hair growing at the base of Ennis' spine, between the shallow dimples and above his crack.

Strangely, a song came to front of Jack's mind. I know shall meet you on that final day, Jack reached for Ennis' slim hips, Water walking Jesus, take me away and he softly kissed the curly patch of hair on Ennis' buttocks.
Title: Re: A Surprise Gift
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 14, 2007, 10:54:50 pm
When Jack rode up on his horse, weary from the long commute, Ennis already had supper ready to serve so he handed Jack a plate and the two men sat down to eat in relative silence until Ennis pulled something from his satchel; he had carved a wooden replica of Jack's mare as a gift for Jack.

"Wowee Ennis! You whittle that all yerself?" exclaimed Jack, turning the little horse over in his hands, inspecting the detail and craftsmanship. Jack had never been given such a thoughtful gift from anyone, let alone other man and the kind gesture rendered him speechless.

Suddenly, impulsively Jack threw his arms around Ennis and hugged him firmly, their cheeks pressing together; Jack's lips brushed against Ennis' face and he felt a strange tingle at his groin.

I missed this one.  I gather I've missed a few stories.  I had better start from page 5 and read onwards from there.  Anyway, beautiful tale, Toycoon!  Very sweet and uplifting. 
Title: Re: A Surprise Gift
Post by: Toycoon on June 14, 2007, 11:32:42 pm
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I missed this one.  I gather I've missed a few stories.  Anyway, beautiful tale, Toycoon!  Very sweet and uplifting.

Thanks, littlewing1957! "A Surprise Gift" is the second part to "Carving a Horse". "Unexpected Feelings" is part three and your story is part four.

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I had better start from page 5 and read onwards from there.

Stick around, sugar bun, it gets better. Woohoo!
Title: The Sale
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 14, 2007, 11:41:27 pm
Tammy Wroe wiped her brow, unable to believe the progress she was making in getting the cabin ready for sale.  Her grandpa, Don Wroe, left the cabin to her when he died in 1994.  Tammy didn’t know what to think or what to do when she learned that the cabin was hers.  Tammy loved her grandfather, but she never spent much time with him.  Her mom worked in the movie business, and moved Tammy to California when she was only 3 years old.   

Tammy’s life in L.A. was good, but when she found herself short on cash, she decided to visit Wyoming for the second time in her life.  Selling the good sized cabin may ease the financial burden of raising 2 children all alone.  The year 2025 was proving to be very hard for Tammy, and she needed the money.  Tammy’s once lucrative fortune telling business was beginning to suffer, even though her psychic gifts were genuine, and she helped a lot of people.  But times were hard and people could no longer afford to spend good money on fortune tellers.  Yes, selling Don Wroe's cabin was the only way.  Cleaning the cabin was backbreaking work, but it had to be done.  It took her 2 days to prepare the living room and kitchen.  Nothing left to do but clean the bathroom and the 3 bedrooms.  But as Tammy stepped into the master bedroom for the first time, she felt it!

Tammy braced herself against the sensation.  As she touched the quilt on the well preserved bed, Tammy thought she would fall in a swoon.  The energy was overpowering!  A male energy: passionate, forceful, very loving.  And suddenly from the corner of her eye, she saw it.  Tammy fell to the dusty carpet as she saw 2 shadowy images – vague, flowing, and twirling together in a dance of love.  Tammy never knew the history of Don Wroe’s cabin or what went on there.  But she knew the feeling of love, and this room was thick with it.  Tammy remembered entering rooms in homes, schools, restaurants and was amazed by the level of energy trapped there.  Some of it was so vile and brutal that she became ill.  But the energy that was trapped here, in Don Wroe’s master bedroom?  Tammy couldn’t believe it.  She wanted to know the names of the men whose loving energy is trapped in her granddad’s cabin.  When she was able to compose herself, Tammy pulled herself off the floor.  In a moment she knew that she could never sell the place…


Title: Re: Sleeping
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 14, 2007, 11:45:45 pm
„I´m sleepin“ murmured Jack when he felt Ennis´s hot hands on his butt and his swollen member pressed against his back.

„Ya sure?“ whispered Ennis in a husky voice, hungry with desire.

Growing hard in no time Jack gave in with a little sigh, wondering if he would ever, ever in his life learn to resist, but considering the fact that they were about to turn seventyfour he doubted that....

Dagi, I don't know how I missed this.  Beautiful story, Sweetie!  I just love how Jack and Ennis still have the hots for each other well into their seventies.  I would like nothing more than to have our boys grow old and happy together.  And such sexy senior citizens!  Lovely work, Dagi!  Read on, Babe.  I've added a part 2.
Title: Re: The Sale
Post by: Toycoon on June 14, 2007, 11:49:20 pm
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The year 2025 was proving to be very hard for Tammy, and she needed the money.  Tammy’s once lucrative fortune telling business was beginning to suffer, even though her psychic gifts were genuine, and she helped a lot of people. 

Outrageous Sargent Littlewing1957! This tale is so "X Files" I can almost see it on the show.
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 14, 2007, 11:50:39 pm
Too Early In The Summer

< Beans.  Beans beans beans. I´m sick of ´em.>

< Hmm...>

< Taste ain´t that bad, but ...mbmummbfrt....>

< Huh? Mumbling used to be my part. What´d ya say?>

< Said ´they make me fart.´>

< Um...well...> Ennis grins.

< I´ll run them sheep off if I go on like that. Maybe that´s why I ain´t shot me no coyote yet, ´cause they don´t come close enough with all that...gas around. Expect that goddamn puptent to take off like a  balloon some night!>

Ennis laughes out loud, jerking his head back, eyes sparkling.

´This boy is f*uckin´too cute when he laughs...´

< Your guts don´t react like this, or what? >

< Hm, no, think they are used to beans. >

The cowboys go on eating in silence.

Ennis, sniffing : <Uh! What´s that? Was that you? >

< NO, MAN! Bud, I´d never fart as long as you´re around! Don´t want to run you off, friend! It wasn´t me! >

< Naw, me neither, told you I don´t fart, beans or no beans, it must´ve been you!>

Jack laughs, jumps up and over to Ennis, grabs his shirt, and tuzzling and laughing they fall on the ground -

curtains fall discretely...

Dagi, this is so fun and playful.  Thanks for showing us the level of comfort the boys had.  I can image a lot of bodily functions that the 2 observed of the other, and how natural it felt.  I really enjoyed reading this.  Beautiful!
Title: Re: The Sale
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 14, 2007, 11:54:12 pm
Outrageous Sargent Littlewing1957! This tale is so "X Files" I can almost see it on the show.

 :laugh:  Thanks Toycoon, Baby!  I may continue this, I don't know yet!
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 15, 2007, 12:33:01 am
Why thanks, Merr!  :D
Title: Re: A Surprise Gift
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 15, 2007, 01:25:24 am
Thanks, littlewing1957! "A Surprise Gift" is the second part to "Carving a Horse". "Unexpected Feelings" is part three and your story is part four.


Oh, Got ya!  Thanks, Toycoon!
Title: Sleepin (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 15, 2007, 01:38:51 am
“I hope you can finish what you’re startin!”  It was Jack, trying to turn his arthritis ridden bones toward his love.  “You still think you can satisfy me, old man?”  Jack was only teasing as he placed a tender kiss on Ennis’ still luscious mouth.

“Just turn over, Rodeo, that is… if ya can!”  Ennis laughed as he returned Jack’s kiss.  He gently moved behind Jack’s still firm buttocks, but something was wrong!  Jack pushed up against him, but Ennis couldn’t do it.  He hung his head and silently cursed his aged body.  Jack noticed his lover’s change in mood and turned to face him straight on.

“It’s alright, it’s alright!”  Jack soothed as he cradled Ennis head in his leathery, age spotted hands.  “Here, just lay on my chest, just like the old days."  Jack soothed and rocked as Ennis settled in.  "Listen, you don’t have to do anything, Cowboy.  Just be with me!”  Jack whispered.  Ennis cuddled into his lover’s arms and wiped at the tears falling in a puddle on Jack’s chest.  Jack rocked them both to a satisfied slumber.
Title: Re: Bathin' with Ennis
Post by: Dagi on June 15, 2007, 03:07:36 am
After setting his boots side by side at the tangled roots, his pants on a low branch and his shirt above, Ennis hung his cowboy hat on the top the bramble bush, crowning the effigy of himself then a gentle breeze gave it life; he gingerly waded into the glassy lake and upon reaching waist height, stopped, turned and motioned for Jack to join him.

Jack, already naked, scampered to the edge then dove in, emerging from the water just behind Ennis a few seconds later; Jack's eyes languished over every element of Ennis' strong back, his elegant neck, sinewy muscles, the tiny birth marks, his lean waist, finally arriving at a patch of curly hair growing at the base of Ennis' spine, between the shallow dimples and above his crack.

Strangely, a song came to front of Jack's mind. I know shall meet you on that final day, Jack reached for Ennis' slim hips, Water walking Jesus, take me away and he softly kissed the curly patch of hair on Ennis' buttocks.

Oh Toycoon, you write so beautifully! I can figure Jack´s eyes when he is overwhelmed by the beauty of his man.

Dagi
Title: Re: The Sale
Post by: Dagi on June 15, 2007, 03:13:44 am
Tammy Wroe wiped her brow, unable to believe the progress she was making in getting the cabin ready for sale.  Her grandpa, Don Wroe, left the cabin to her when he died in 1994.  Tammy didn’t know what to think or what to do when she learned that the cabin was hers.  Tammy loved her grandfather, but she never spent much time with him.  Her mom worked in the movie business, and moved Tammy to California when she was only 3 years old.   

Tammy’s life in L.A. was good, but when she found herself short on cash, she decided to visit Wyoming for the second time in her life.  Selling the good sized cabin may ease the financial burden of raising 2 children all alone.  The year 2025 was proving to be very hard for Tammy, and she needed the money.  Tammy’s once lucrative fortune telling business was beginning to suffer, even though her psychic gifts were genuine, and she helped a lot of people.  But times were hard and people could no longer afford to spend good money on fortune tellers.  Yes, selling Don Wroe's cabin was the only way.  Cleaning the cabin was backbreaking work, but it had to be done.  It took her 2 days to prepare the living room and kitchen.  Nothing left to do but clean the bathroom and the 3 bedrooms.  But as Tammy stepped into the master bedroom for the first time, she felt it!

Tammy braced herself against the sensation.  As she touched the quilt on the well preserved bed, Tammy thought she would fall in a swoon.  The energy was overpowering!  A male energy: passionate, forceful, very loving.  And suddenly from the corner of her eye, she saw it.  Tammy fell to the dusty carpet as she saw 2 shadowy images – vague, flowing, and twirling together in a dance of love.  Tammy never knew the history of Don Wroe’s cabin or what went on there.  But she knew the feeling of love, and this room was thick with it.  Tammy remembered entering rooms in homes, schools, restaurants and was amazed by the level of energy trapped there.  Some of it was so vile and brutal that she became ill.  But the energy that was trapped here, in Don Wroe’s master bedroom?  Tammy couldn’t believe it.  She wanted to know the names of the men whose loving energy is trapped in her granddad’s cabin.  When she was able to compose herself, Tammy pulled herself off the floor.  In a moment she knew that she could never sell the place…




Littlewing, you are brilliant. Your ideas for stories are always special, and your detailed telling brings it all to life! And I can feel the energy of those loving men wherever I go...they are always present.

Thank you for your lovely comments on my stories. I´ll send you a PM.

love, dagi
Title: Re: Sleepin (2)
Post by: Dagi on June 15, 2007, 03:17:52 am
“I hope you can finish what you’re startin!”  It was Jack, trying to turn his arthritis ridden bones toward his love.  “You still think you can satisfy me, old man?”  Jack was only teasing as he placed a tender kiss on Ennis’ still luscious mouth.

“Just turn over, Rodeo, that is… if ya can!”  Ennis laughed as he returned Jack’s kiss.  He gently moved behind Jack’s still firm buttocks, but something was wrong!  Jack pushed up against him, but Ennis couldn’t do it.  He hung his head and silently cursed his aged body.  Jack noticed his lover’s change in mood and turned to face him straight on.

“It’s alright, it’s alright!”  Jack soothed as he cradled Ennis head in his leathery, age spotted hands.  “Here, just lay on my chest, just like the old days."  Jack soothed and rocked as Ennis settled in.  "Listen, you don’t have to do anything, Cowboy.  Just be with me!”  Jack whispered.  Ennis cuddled into his lover’s arms and wiped at the tears falling in a puddle on Jack’s chest.  Jack rocked them both to a satisfied slumber.


Littlewing, I love you. You wrote the sequel just the way it was in my mind. Sweet and sad. I´m just tearing up again... thank you for that one. It is so amazing how much we all love our boys.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 15, 2007, 03:20:20 am
Will you still need me, will you still feed me when I'm sixty-four.

If only it had worked out that way, Dagi.   :)

Gary

Yes, Gary, that is what  I think all of us would have hoped for them.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: louisev on June 15, 2007, 05:50:12 am

When Ennis woke, his fingers were still buried in Jack's hair, and he leaned close,  sifting through it, holding it to his lips, and then kissing the averted neck, once and then again, a surge of pleasure welling up, and he engulfed Jack in a bear hug that caused the sleeper to stir, startle, and then moan softly as he woke, captive in Ennis's arms.

"Huh, whuh?" Jack  mumbled, still groggy, lifting his head, and Ennis put his lips to that spot once more, fragrant with the salt of his sweat.

"C'mere boy, got somethin fer you."
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 15, 2007, 07:55:03 am
When Ennis woke, his fingers were still buried in Jack's hair, and he leaned close,  sifting through it, holding it to his lips, and then kissing the averted neck, once and then again, a surge of pleasure welling up, and he engulfed Jack in a bear hug that caused the sleeper to stir, startle, and then moan softly as he woke, captive in Ennis's arms.

"Huh, whuh?" Jack  mumbled, still groggy, lifting his head, and Ennis put his lips to that spot once more, fragrant with the salt of his sweat.

"C'mere boy, got somethin fer you."

Hey Louise, what a  beautiful surprise! And you put us all to a shame (exept Toycoon, of course) sticking to the  3-sentence rule... sexy and sweet! Go on, Louise, the first thing to learn here is that we are never satisfied, we always want MOOORE!
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on June 15, 2007, 08:06:42 am
The boys got out of Toycoon's water and into Louise's bed!! MMmmmmm.....what a beautiful progression. Thanks Toycoon and Louise. <3
Title: Re: The Sale
Post by: Clyde-B on June 15, 2007, 09:32:05 am
Tammy Wroe wiped her brow, unable to believe the progress she was making in getting the cabin ready for sale.  Her grandpa, Don Wroe, left the cabin to her when he died in 1994.  Tammy didn’t know what to think or what to do when she learned that the cabin was hers.  Tammy loved her grandfather, but she never spent much time with him.  Her mom worked in the movie business, and moved Tammy to California when she was only 3 years old.   

Tammy’s life in L.A. was good, but when she found herself short on cash, she decided to visit Wyoming for the second time in her life.  Selling the good sized cabin may ease the financial burden of raising 2 children all alone.  The year 2025 was proving to be very hard for Tammy, and she needed the money.  Tammy’s once lucrative fortune telling business was beginning to suffer, even though her psychic gifts were genuine, and she helped a lot of people.  But times were hard and people could no longer afford to spend good money on fortune tellers.  Yes, selling Don Wroe's cabin was the only way.  Cleaning the cabin was backbreaking work, but it had to be done.  It took her 2 days to prepare the living room and kitchen.  Nothing left to do but clean the bathroom and the 3 bedrooms.  But as Tammy stepped into the master bedroom for the first time, she felt it!

Tammy braced herself against the sensation.  As she touched the quilt on the well preserved bed, Tammy thought she would fall in a swoon.  The energy was overpowering!  A male energy: passionate, forceful, very loving.  And suddenly from the corner of her eye, she saw it.  Tammy fell to the dusty carpet as she saw 2 shadowy images – vague, flowing, and twirling together in a dance of love.  Tammy never knew the history of Don Wroe’s cabin or what went on there.  But she knew the feeling of love, and this room was thick with it.  Tammy remembered entering rooms in homes, schools, restaurants and was amazed by the level of energy trapped there.  Some of it was so vile and brutal that she became ill.  But the energy that was trapped here, in Don Wroe’s master bedroom?  Tammy couldn’t believe it.  She wanted to know the names of the men whose loving energy is trapped in her granddad’s cabin.  When she was able to compose herself, Tammy pulled herself off the floor.  In a moment she knew that she could never sell the place…




You ought to write "Ghost Whisperer" and sell them your idea! 
Title: Something fer you
Post by: Toycoon on June 15, 2007, 09:34:06 am
When Ennis woke, his fingers were still buried in Jack's hair, and he leaned close,  sifting through it, holding it to his lips, and then kissing the averted neck, once and then again, a surge of pleasure welling up, and he engulfed Jack in a bear hug that caused the sleeper to stir, startle, and then moan softly as he woke, captive in Ennis' arms.

"Huh, whuh?" Jack mumbled, still groggy, lifting his head, and Ennis put his lips to that spot once more, fragrant with the salt of his sweat.

"C'mere boy, got somethin fer you."

Sexy and salty stuff, Louise. I love the stories where the boys wake up together. And your adherence to the 3 sentence rule... well, you're a woman after my own heart. None'a these other rebel rousers ever listen ta me!
Title: Re: The Sale
Post by: Toycoon on June 15, 2007, 09:36:17 am
Hey there Clyde-B,
Ain't ya gonna write something hot fer us? Don't be a wallflower, let's see yer stuff!
Title: Re: The Sale
Post by: Clyde-B on June 15, 2007, 01:56:06 pm
Hey there Clyde-B,
Ain't ya gonna write something hot fer us? Don't be a wallflower, let's see yer stuff!
Now you know I don't talk often, and when I do I don't usually say much (My motto: if you ain't got nothin to say - then don't say it!)

But for you and littlewing, who's been after me to do this, I'll sure make an attempt.

BannerHill's story about Ennis and Jack winding up together got me to wondering how it mght happen.  This isn't a sexy story, but it's kinda timely.


   Robert Twist hadn’t been to Childress in twenty-five years; he’d never forgotten or forgiven things said when his dad died, but he was determined to visit his father’s grave on his way to Dallas to see his mother and her third husband.  Sunday would be Father’s Day.

   He was glad the road to the cemetery was deserted, the only traffic an old blue and white pickup kicking dust in the opposite direction.
 
   The headstone was where he remembered it, toward the back, in the shade of an old oak where the hot breeze carried with it the scent of memorial wreaths and dying blossoms.  A single grave in a double plot overgrown with weeds, unkempt, untrimmed; the granite weathered but intact; graffiti on the front had been hard washed, faded, no longer legible.  Not as good as he’d hoped; not as bad as he’d feared.  He knelt wanting to speak, but the words wouldn’t come, all those questions, all those things left unsaid, how could we have just abandoned you here?  That was when he noticed... lovingly placed at its base... a small bunch of wilting mountain wildflowers.


Title: Re: The Sale
Post by: Dagi on June 15, 2007, 03:21:42 pm
Now you know I don't talk often, and when I do I don't usually say much (My motto: if you ain't got nothin to say - then don't say it!)

But for you and littlewing, who's been after me to do this, I'll sure make an attempt.

BannerHill's story about Ennis and Jack winding up together got me to wondering how it mght happen.  This isn't a sexy story, but it's kinda timely.


   Robert Twist hadn’t been to Childress in twenty-five years; he’d never forgotten or forgiven things said when his dad died, but he was determined to visit his father’s grave on his way to Dallas to see his mother and her third husband.  Sunday would be Father’s Day.

   He was glad the road to the cemetery was deserted, the only traffic an old blue and white pickup kicking dust in the opposite direction.
 
   The headstone was where he remembered it, toward the back, in the shade of an old oak where the hot breeze carried with it the scent of memorial wreaths and dying blossoms.  A single grave in a double plot overgrown with weeds, unkempt, untrimmed; the granite weathered but intact; graffiti on the front had been hard washed, faded, no longer legible.  Not as good as he’d hoped; not as bad as he’d feared.  He knelt wanting to speak, but the words wouldn’t come, all those questions, all those things left unsaid, how could we have just abandoned you here?  That was when he noticed... lovingly placed at its base... a small bunch of wilting mountain wildflowers.




Clyde-B, that was beautiful and touching! Thank you! May I ask you a favor? Write us some more stories!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 15, 2007, 03:23:15 pm
I love our boys so much...and I LOVE this thread! Thanks to all of you!

(http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb38/dagi_photos/070615_sommer3037klein.jpg)
Title: Re: The Sale
Post by: Clyde-B on June 15, 2007, 07:51:21 pm
Clyde-B, that was beautiful and touching! Thank you! May I ask you a favor? Write us some more stories!

Dagi

Thank you Dagi,

I will if you will!!!  But sometimes it takes me a while to figure out what I'm trying to say.

(I like your "tatoo!")
Title: Father's Day
Post by: Toycoon on June 15, 2007, 08:23:39 pm
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Sunday would be Father’ Day.
Timely, indeed Clyde-B!

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That was when he noticed... lovingly placed at its base... a small bunch of wilting mountain wildflowers.
Aww, that is a touching tale, Clyde-B. See now, that didn't hurt did it?

Next time you'll write a nasty one for us, huh?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on June 15, 2007, 08:28:23 pm
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I love our boys so much...and I LOVE this thread! Thanks to all of you!

Dagi, you are so cute! Are you going to get a real tattoo? I wish I'd become a tattoo artist like I wanted to be back in the 1980's.
I'd happily give you a "J w/ E" so you could declare your love publically.
Title: babyblue eyes
Post by: Dagi on June 16, 2007, 12:05:51 am
babyblue eyes


Ennis was about to ride away when Jack caught hold of the reigns and looked up to him.

Yet it was not the yearning expression in his babyblue eyes but this bewitching, seductive tip of his tongue, visible for only a moment licking those perfect lips  that made Ennis dismount in a quick, deft movement and, one hand around Jack´s neck, the other one with a firm grip on his victim´s butt pushing his groin merciless against his own, he pressed his lips hungrily on his lover´s mouth his desirous tongue entering it in un uncontrollable urge, making Jack´s knees give way under him.

Hot waves flowing through their bodies and one rough lustful groan later they both knew: sheep be damned.
Title: Re: The Sale
Post by: Dagi on June 16, 2007, 12:08:23 am
I will if you will!!!  But sometimes it takes me a while to figure out what I'm trying to say.

Ask the German girl how many "whiles" it takes her...!!!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 16, 2007, 12:13:38 am
Dagi, you are so cute! Are you going to get a real tattoo? I wish I'd become a tattoo artist like I wanted to be back in the 1980's.
I'd happily give you a "J w/ E" so you could declare your love publically.

Thank you, Toycoon, for the compliment as well as for the offer! But, tell you what, the truth is....I´m a damn coward!!! :(

Toycoon, pleeeeeaaase link me to that photo of yours, I can´t find it!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 16, 2007, 12:16:11 am
Susie, we are missing you already! Get this f*ckin computer fixed, and QUICK! No way to stand your absence!
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 16, 2007, 12:23:34 am
When Ennis woke, his fingers were still buried in Jack's hair, and he leaned close,  sifting through it, holding it to his lips, and then kissing the averted neck, once and then again, a surge of pleasure welling up, and he engulfed Jack in a bear hug that caused the sleeper to stir, startle, and then moan softly as he woke, captive in Ennis's arms.

"Huh, whuh?" Jack  mumbled, still groggy, lifting his head, and Ennis put his lips to that spot once more, fragrant with the salt of his sweat.

"C'mere boy, got somethin fer you."

This is so sweet!  I hope you'll continue it for us.  I'm dying to see what happens next!  Thanks so much for posting this charming tale!
Title: Re: The Sale
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 16, 2007, 12:25:12 am
You ought to write "Ghost Whisperer" and sell them your idea! 

Hi, Clyde-B!  Thanks for your kind words.  The Ghost Whisperer?  I really like that show.  I may consider selling them my idea!  :)
Title: Re: The Sale
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 16, 2007, 12:32:42 am
Now you know I don't talk often, and when I do I don't usually say much (My motto: if you ain't got nothin to say - then don't say it!)

But for you and littlewing, who's been after me to do this, I'll sure make an attempt.

BannerHill's story about Ennis and Jack winding up together got me to wondering how it mght happen.  This isn't a sexy story, but it's kinda timely.


   Robert Twist hadn’t been to Childress in twenty-five years; he’d never forgotten or forgiven things said when his dad died, but he was determined to visit his father’s grave on his way to Dallas to see his mother and her third husband.  Sunday would be Father’s Day.

   He was glad the road to the cemetery was deserted, the only traffic an old blue and white pickup kicking dust in the opposite direction.
 
   The headstone was where he remembered it, toward the back, in the shade of an old oak where the hot breeze carried with it the scent of memorial wreaths and dying blossoms.  A single grave in a double plot overgrown with weeds, unkempt, untrimmed; the granite weathered but intact; graffiti on the front had been hard washed, faded, no longer legible.  Not as good as he’d hoped; not as bad as he’d feared.  He knelt wanting to speak, but the words wouldn’t come, all those questions, all those things left unsaid, how could we have just abandoned you here?  That was when he noticed... lovingly placed at its base... a small bunch of wilting mountain wildflowers.




Clyde-B, you're such a natural at this!  What a beautiful story!  I am so glad you wrote this for us.  And it was well worth the wait!  I want more of your writing.  Please favoring us with another fic.  Wonderful!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 16, 2007, 12:34:12 am
I love our boys so much...and I LOVE this thread! Thanks to all of you!

(http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb38/dagi_photos/070615_sommer3037klein.jpg)

Hey there you cutie, you!  What an awesome tatoo!
Title: Re: babyblue eyes
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 16, 2007, 12:36:27 am
Ennis was about to ride away when Jack caught hold of the reigns and looked up to him.

Yet it was not the yearning expression in his babyblue eyes but this bewitching, seductive tip of his tongue, visible for only a moment licking those perfect lips  that made Ennis dismount in a quick, deft movement and, one hand around Jack´s neck, the other one with a firm grip on his victim´s butt pushing his groin merciless against his own, he pressed his lips hungrily on his lover´s mouth his desirous tongue entering it in un uncontrollable urge, making Jack´s knees give way under him.

Hot waves flowing through their bodies and one rough lustful groan later they both knew: sheep be damned.

Awesome, Dagi!  So spontaneous and passionate!  Just like our boys!  ::)
Title: Re: babyblue eyes
Post by: Dagi on June 16, 2007, 12:40:04 am
Awesome, Dagi!  So spontaneous and passionate!  Just like our boys!  ::)

thank you, littlewing!  :-*
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on June 16, 2007, 12:43:31 am
http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,5791.msg198672.html#msg198672 (http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,5791.msg198672.html#msg198672)

Dagi,
It took forever to find the picture so here's the link to our picture. That's me on the right of LauraGigs.
Title: Only One for Me
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 16, 2007, 01:21:30 am
“You’re late!”  Jack Twist yelled as Ennis climbed from his truck.  Jack arrived at camp hours before - redlined it all the way!  He  pitched the tent,  even started supper.   Jack was not necessarily the worrying type, but he couldn’t help but think that Ennis wouldn’t show; or worse, had an accident navigating the terrain.  But Ennis made it, and Jack Twist could finally relax.  Jack studied his lover as he neared.  He couldn’t hide his awe, his excitement as his lover approached.

“Look what I brought..beans!”  Ennis laughed as he shoved a can of bettermost beans into Jack’s hands.  “Very funny, Cowboy!”  Jack laughed as he put the can aside.  “C’mon – I got some steaks on for supper.  I’m also heatin’ up a few ears of corn.”  Jack’s excitement was absolutely palpable, and Ennis couldn’t help but be affected!  Ennis cleared a spot on the chilly earth and took a seat.  He watched as Jack flipped the savory looking T-Bone steaks.  He was hungry, but once he caught a look at Jack’s booty as he bent over the small grill, Ennis developed an appetite for more than just food.

Ennis liked his meat cooked medium well, a fact that Jack learned and stored away for future reference.  Jack grilled the T-Bone to perfection and gently handed Ennis a plate piled high with steak, a couple of ears of corn and asparagus.  He took a seat right alongside Ennis and placed a warm hand on his knee.  “Eat up, Cowboy!”  It was Jack, mouthing the command between bites of corn-on-the-cob.  “After supper we can take a hike, or ride the horses out across the stream.  I found a clearing flush with wildflowers just like the ones that grew up on Brokeback.”  Ennis was silent as he enjoyed his food.  Jack was a little more talkative than usual, but Ennis was fine with that.  “You’re the only one for me, Jack Twist!”  Ennis thought as he beheld his animated and jubilant lover.  When dinner was eaten and the dishes cleared away, Ennis and Jack mounted the horses and rode east…
Title: Father's Day
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 16, 2007, 01:59:13 am
Extreme AU, but I just had to do it!

Jack Twist bounced the beautiful baby girl on his knee while watching Ennis Del Mar set the dining room table.  Baby Indigo was only a year old, and she was the apple of Jack’s eye.  Ennis was rather fond of her, as well.  Indigo laughed and shrieked as Jack ticked her double chin.  “Jack, bring our child!”  Ennis called from the dining room. 

Indigo was an extreme blessing: a gift of love to such sincere lovers.  Ennis cuddled his daughter as Jack handed her over.  He thought back to the time when he handed a cup of his semen over to a nurse at the clinic in town.  The surrogate was chosen carefully, and some nine months later, Jack strapped Indigo into a car seat and brought her home.  Ennis never stopped smiling from the time he laid eyes on her!

Dinner was ready and the table was set.  Ennis kissed the top of his child’s head and handed her back to daddy Jack.  He needed to get ready to entertain his other daughters, who should be along any time now.  Jack was already looking mighty fine, and couldn’t wait to see Bobby again.   He placed his daughter in her playpen and embraced his lover.  “Happy Father’s Day, friend!” Jack whispered as he held his lover tight.”  “Same to you, Jack!”  Ennis kissed him.  “Now let me go.  I gotta get ready to greet our other babies!”
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 16, 2007, 06:17:00 am
Now that I have posted my tenth fanfic in English (imagening you guys rolling on the floor laughing) I think it is high time you let me have some fun!

I want EACH AND EVERY ONE OF YOU  to write me a fanfic in three sentences in a foreign language! (German, French, Italian or Spanish are allowed,otherwise translate it back to English, please). And I mean WRITE, not have it translated by someone else !

Try it, it is fun!

Dagi
Title: Re: babyblue eyes
Post by: Dagi on June 16, 2007, 06:36:10 am
Dagi!  That was so smoking hot, girly!  I love Jack/Jake's eyes but it's the tip of his tongue that really does it for me too!  I'd have jumped off that horse and pounced on him too!  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_207.gif)

I love love love it!


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Thank you, Susie! Finally I got the "hot"-label, yeeehaaawww!
Title: Re: For Dagi
Post by: Clyde-B on June 16, 2007, 07:50:21 am
"Ich liebe dich Jack"

"Ich liebe dich Ennis"

Sie Kuessten.

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_1_72.gif)

Pathetic!!!! But at least I didn't use that swear word!!


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Hi Susie, glad you got the best of your nasty vermin!

I like the direction you're going in here!

Und dann bumsen sie.   ;D
Title: Re: Father's Day
Post by: Clyde-B on June 16, 2007, 07:58:12 am
Extreme AU, but I just had to do it!

Jack Twist bounced the beautiful baby girl on his knee while watching Ennis Del Mar set the dining room table.  Baby Indigo was only a year old, and she was the apple of Jack’s eye.  Ennis was rather fond of her, as well.  Indigo laughed and shrieked as Jack ticked her double chin.  “Jack, bring our child!”  Ennis called from the dining room. 

Indigo was an extreme blessing: a gift of love to such sincere lovers.  Ennis cuddled his daughter as Jack handed her over.  He thought back to the time when he handed a cup of his semen over to a nurse at the clinic in town.  The surrogate was chosen carefully, and some nine months later, Jack strapped Indigo into a car seat and brought her home.  Ennis never stopped smiling from the time he laid eyes on her!

Dinner was ready and the table was set.  Ennis kissed the top of his child’s head and handed her back to daddy Jack.  He needed to get ready to entertain his other daughters, who should be along any time now.  Jack was already looking mighty fine, and couldn’t wait to see Bobby again.   He placed his daughter in her playpen and embraced his lover.  “Happy Father’s Day, friend!” Jack whispered as he held his lover tight.”  “Same to you, Jack!”  Ennis kissed him.  “Now let me go.  I gotta get ready to greet our other babies!”


This sweet story makes me a little sad.  It would have been nice if this was really available.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: MaineWriter on June 16, 2007, 08:22:33 am
My first entry in this game. I like the foreign language twist. Thanks to Natali who helped with the translation!

Jack miró a Ennis y dijo. “Te amo vaquero.”
”Yo te amo a ti,” respondió Ennis, acariciando con sus dedos la barbilla de Jack.
Jack, rió entre dientes. “Lo dije yo primero.”
“Pero yo lo digo mejor”, contestó Ennis inclinándose para besarlo.

L








Title: Re: babyblue eyes
Post by: Toycoon on June 16, 2007, 09:54:16 am
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Dagi!  That was so smoking hot, girly!  I love Jack/Jake's eyes but it's the tip of his tongue that really does it for me too!  I'd have jumped off that horse and pounced on him too!

You know it, Lady Susiebell! Dagi, you're getting quite skilled at your English writing.
Your friends will be very impressed and your husband will be floored by what you've learned!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on June 16, 2007, 10:00:47 am
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Jack miró a Ennis y dijo. “Te amo vaquero.”
”Yo te amo a ti,” respondió Ennis, acariciando con sus dedos la barbilla de Jack.
Jack, rió entre dientes. “Lo dije yo primero.”
“Pero yo lo digo mejor”, contestó Ennis inclinándose para besarlo.

That was fantastic, MaineWriter. And very funny I might add. I'll have to try one in Spanish, too. Perhaps my mother will help me with the translation...not!
Title: Re: For Dagi
Post by: Dagi on June 16, 2007, 01:00:30 pm
"Ich liebe dich Jack"

"Ich liebe dich Ennis"

Sie Kuessten.

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_1_72.gif)

Pathetic!!!! But at least I didn't use that swear word!!


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

That was lovely, Susie! If they had only been able to tell each other....!
Title: Re: For Dagi
Post by: Dagi on June 16, 2007, 01:02:31 pm
Hi Susie, glad you got the best of your nasty vermin!

I like the direction you're going in here!

Und dann bumsen sie.   ;D

Clyde!!!  :o :o :o :o That was only one sentence. I´m not satisfied yet  ;D

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 16, 2007, 01:07:45 pm
My first entry in this game. I like the foreign language twist. Thanks to Natali who helped with the translation!

Jack miró a Ennis y dijo. “Te amo vaquero.”
”Yo te amo a ti,” respondió Ennis, acariciando con sus dedos la barbilla de Jack.
Jack, rió entre dientes. “Lo dije yo primero.”
“Pero yo lo digo mejor”, contestó Ennis inclinándose para besarlo.


Muy bonita historia, Mainwriter! Sobretodo me gusta la respuesta de Ennis, y puedo imaginarme su cara... ;D

Gracias!

Dagi
Title: Re: babyblue eyes
Post by: Dagi on June 16, 2007, 01:09:16 pm
You know it, Lady Susiebell! Dagi, you're getting quite skilled at your English writing.
Your friends will be very impressed and your husband will be floored by what you've learned!

Thank you, Toycoon, you good-looking fella!! :-* And thank you for the link! :-* :-* :-*

Dagi
Title: Re: Only One for Me
Post by: Dagi on June 16, 2007, 01:17:35 pm
He was hungry, but once he caught a look at Jack’s booty as he bent over the small grill, Ennis developed an appetite for more than just food.

You should be a screenwriter, Marie. So beautiful.

Btw, are you planning a sequel... ::)? Oh, and I´m still waiting for another sequel ;D! (I can mail you the first part.)

Dagi
Title: Re: Father's Day
Post by: Dagi on June 16, 2007, 01:22:39 pm
Extreme AU, but I just had to do it!

Jack Twist bounced the beautiful baby girl on his knee while watching Ennis Del Mar set the dining room table.  Baby Indigo was only a year old, and she was the apple of Jack’s eye.  Ennis was rather fond of her, as well.  Indigo laughed and shrieked as Jack ticked her double chin.  “Jack, bring our child!”  Ennis called from the dining room. 

Indigo was an extreme blessing: a gift of love to such sincere lovers.  Ennis cuddled his daughter as Jack handed her over.  He thought back to the time when he handed a cup of his semen over to a nurse at the clinic in town.  The surrogate was chosen carefully, and some nine months later, Jack strapped Indigo into a car seat and brought her home.  Ennis never stopped smiling from the time he laid eyes on her!

Dinner was ready and the table was set.  Ennis kissed the top of his child’s head and handed her back to daddy Jack.  He needed to get ready to entertain his other daughters, who should be along any time now.  Jack was already looking mighty fine, and couldn’t wait to see Bobby again.   He placed his daughter in her playpen and embraced his lover.  “Happy Father’s Day, friend!” Jack whispered as he held his lover tight.”  “Same to you, Jack!”  Ennis kissed him.  “Now let me go.  I gotta get ready to greet our other babies!”


Lovely, Marie. I´m sure they would be the most loving dads. And what a beautiful name the baby got!

Dagi
Title: El Vaquero y el Campesino
Post by: Toycoon on June 16, 2007, 01:56:09 pm
Jamas me olvidare de su sonrisa, tan triste y humlide con tanta candela que enciendiera el bosque.

Labios como fruta madura, dulse y prohibido; me duele, como los quireo.

Que alegria me da verte, Jack-jodido-Twist!
Title: Re: The Sale
Post by: Toycoon on June 16, 2007, 02:01:04 pm
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 If you recall, I wrote a story about a boy, who may have been a ghost, coming to visit Jack at the cabin.  Lots of strange stuff happens there apparently.   :D
Gary

Yes, I do recall. Apparently, Don Wroe's cabin is haunted (by homosexuals)!
Title: Re: El Vaquero y el Campesino
Post by: Clyde-B on June 16, 2007, 02:33:24 pm
Jack-jodido-Twist!


¡Joder!  Toycoon, te juro...   ;D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on June 16, 2007, 02:44:20 pm
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Ain't you sexy, Toycoon.
Golly, thanks garycottle.
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And Damn!  Just how tall are you?
 
I'm 6', 2".
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I think I'd about come up to your belly button.   :-\
Gary
Well then, you won't have to bend over as far! Heehee!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 16, 2007, 03:06:26 pm
Phew!  It was just the mouse (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/16/16_3_105.gif)

So I ripped it out of the computer, threw it out of the window, stamped on it and backed the toyota over it!

..... I think that was fair!   (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_17_201.gif)

Anyway, I'm back up and running and I see I've got some catching up do do .... I'm so happy!



Love Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_1_12v.gif)

PS DAGI! You sexy lady!!! .... love the tattoo!! Thanks for missing me honey (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_9_2.gif)
 

Well Susie, I'm glad you're back up and running!  I've missed you!  :-*
Title: Re: Only One for Me
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 16, 2007, 03:08:43 pm
Beautiful story littlewing! .... I love it when we expand on a moment in the film .... it could have happened just like this! 

You lot are having a bad influence on me because when I read that Ennis liked his meat medium well ... my mind went to a place it shouldn't have gone!!!!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Thanks, Susie.  About the meat?  Well, it was deliberate.  I guess I'm the one with the dirty mind!  :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 16, 2007, 03:10:13 pm
Now that I have posted my tenth fanfic in English (imagening you guys rolling on the floor laughing) I think it is high time you let me have some fun!

I want EACH AND EVERY ONE OF YOU  to write me a fanfic in three sentences in a foreign language! (German, French, Italian or Spanish are allowed,otherwise translate it back to English, please). And I mean WRITE, not have it translated by someone else !

Try it, it is fun!

Dagi


Dagi, I can't do it!  Well, maybe I can get my daughter to help me write a fic in French!  Wow, Dagi, I'm having trouble writing in English!  :laugh:
Title: Re: El Vaquero y el Campesino
Post by: Dagi on June 16, 2007, 05:59:29 pm
Jamas me olvidare de su sonrisa, tan triste y humlide con tanta candela que enciendiera el bosque.

Labios como fruta madura, dulse y prohibido; me duele, como los quireo.

Que alegria me da verte, Jack-jodido-Twist!

Eres un verdadero poeta, Toy-jodiendo-coon!!! I love it, it is romantic and sad and sweet and ....poetic! Thank you so much!

Besos!

Dagi

PS, I like your Jack-jodido-Twist, it fits better. I mean, he probably got f*cked more often than... sorry ;D.
Title: Re: babyblue eyes
Post by: Dagi on June 16, 2007, 06:06:13 pm
Sheep?  There were sheep up on that mountain with them?   ;D  I think it was chowhound who once posted something over at IMDb about how those scenes of Jack and Ennis taking the sheep up demonstrated how caring they were because they were shown carrying some across a streem and holding a couple more in their laps.  My response was those are some lucky damn sheep.   :P

Sexy story, Dagi.  MMM MM  Love it when the boys get crazy.  Thanks for sharing it with us.

Gary 

Thank you, Gary! And YES, if someone asked me whether I´d play sheep in Jack´s lap, I would not object  :laugh:!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 16, 2007, 06:27:40 pm
Dagi, I can't do it!  Well, maybe I can get my daughter to help me write a fic in French!  Wow, Dagi, I'm having trouble writing in English!  :laugh:

"Don´t be shy, give it a try..." :D

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 16, 2007, 06:49:45 pm
Um, does Pig Latin count?

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_6_2v.gif)

Gary

WTF is that? somethin´dirty, huh? if it is so, the dirtier the better ;D ;D ;D!

D.
Title: Re: The Sale
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 16, 2007, 10:47:00 pm
WOW Littlewing!  What a powerful ghost story! .... the 2 shadowy images twirling together in a dance of love makes me swoon! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_3_1v.gif)

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

 :laugh:  Thanks, SusieBell!
Title: Re: Father's Day
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 16, 2007, 10:48:31 pm
This sweet story makes me a little sad.  It would have been nice if this was really available.

Thanks, Clyde-B!  Perhaps someday this sort of thing will be available to everyone who dreams of raising a child!  :)
Title: Re: Sleepin (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 16, 2007, 10:49:42 pm
Ah littlewing .. you have been busy!  This is a beautiful follow up to Dagi's 'Sleepin', which follows on so nicely from 'The Old Spark'.  And I LOVE LOVE LOVE Jack's "It's alright", mirroring the second night in the tent.  It brought a tear to my eye but I'm just so happy they've made it this far in our Alternate Universe ... I prefer this universe to the "real" one!! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/15/15_2_137.gif)


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Susie, you're so sweet!  And I know what you mean!  AU is the bomb!
Title: Re: Father's Day
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 16, 2007, 10:52:53 pm
Oh Littlewing ... I'm sat here crying like a baby ... really I am!  It must be the mother in me that thinks EVERYONE should experience the overwhelming intensity of the love you feel for a child!  I can't believe they have a child together .... I'm going to have to blow my nose ... excuse me a moment!!!


Susie   (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_9_9.gif)

Ah honey, I think together Jack and Ennis would make awsome parents!  I just had to give them a child of their own.  You know, I thought you guys would hate this story, but I'm pleasantly surprised.  I may have to revisit J and E and little Indigo!  :)
Title: Re: The Sale
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 16, 2007, 10:55:35 pm
Wow, littlewing, I loved this!  And I'd love to have that cabin myself.  If you recall, I wrote a story about a boy, who may have been a ghost, coming to visit Jack at the cabin.  Lots of strange stuff happens there apparently.   :D

Gary

Hey Gary Baby!  Where you been?  I was just about to track you down, as I've been missing you!  :)  Anyway, thanks for your kind words, and I do remember your story about the ghost visiting Don Wroe's cabin.  Do you think you can repost it here?  It is a favorite of mine!  :)
Title: Re: Sleepin (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 16, 2007, 10:56:33 pm
So tender and heartbreaking, littlewing.  It's great to think of Jack and Ennis growing old together, but sad that Ennis can no longer...  Well, you know.

Gary

P.S.  Isn't there a pill Ennis can take?   :P

 :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:
Title: Re: Only One for Me
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 16, 2007, 10:58:08 pm
You should be a screenwriter, Marie. So beautiful.

Btw, are you planning a sequel... ::)? Oh, and I´m still waiting for another sequel ;D! (I can mail you the first part.)

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi!  I don't know if I'll continue this or not, but there is a good chance that I will.  Oh , and please send me the first part of your fic and I'll be happy to write a sequel!  ;)
Title: Re: Father's Day
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 16, 2007, 11:01:19 pm
Great idea for a story, littlewing.  And any kid would be lucky to have Jack and Ennis as Daddy and Poppy.  This is the way it should have been for Jack and Ennis.  Thanks for giving us a peek at this alternative universe.

Gary

I think you're right, Gary!  I've always thought of Jack and Ennis as being good fathers.  They would be amazing parents to a little girl or boy of their own.
Title: His Touch
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 16, 2007, 11:36:20 pm
Jack Twist settled in, sat down between Ennis Del Mar’s open thighs.  He had just driven 1400 miles to be with his lover, and though Jack never complained, Ennis noticed a stiffening of Jack’s shoulders.  It worried him.

Ennis pulled Jack closer and ran his fingers through Jack’s thick, dark hair.  “Hey what you doin’ En?”  Jack laughed as he looked up at his love.  “Shhh,, just sit up still.  I know what I’m doin.”  It was Ennis, as he massaged Jack’s scalp with firm, circular motions.  Ennis kneaded and rubbed, kissed his man’s hair until Jack purred like a kitten.

Jack became almost limp as Ennis moved to the shoulders.  He used his thumbs to work out the kinks in Jack’s stiff neck.  “Oh God, Ennis, where you learn how to do that?”  Jack whispered as he laid his head sideways in Ennis' lap.  He felt Ennis’ growing manhood, but he needed more of his man's practiced touch.  Jack moved his head back and forth, guiding Ennis, leading his hands where he needed them most.  It was good.  And after a good half hour, Jack Twist felt mighty fine, completely refreshed.  He turned around suddenly and freed a tumescent Ennis from his jeans…
Title: Re: Father's Day
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 16, 2007, 11:38:18 pm
Hi Littlewing. I wrote you before but evidently you didn't see it.  What the heck does AU mean?  I am stumped.

Merrily

Oh, merr I did see your question.  Forgive me for taking so long to answer.  AU means alternate universe.  It is a departure from canon.  :)
Title: Moment
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 17, 2007, 12:18:09 am
It was well after midnight and Ennis was ready for bed.  He was ready for love.  Jack was warming himself by the fire, rubbing his hands together, blowing into his palms, trying to keep warm.  “If you’re cold, let’s go in the tent, Bud.”  Ennis said as he moved closer to Jack.  I’ll do more than keep you warm, that’s fer sure!”  Ennis winked at his lover.

“Well, I think I’ll sit up a bit longer, if it’s all the same to you.”  Jack placed his cold hands under his armpits.  “Come sit by me, friend.  Let’s just enjoy this crisp, cold night for a bit longer.”  Ennis moved close to Jack, and draped an arm around his shoulder.  He leaned in and placed a sloppy kiss on Jack’s cheek.  Jack Twist sighed with pleasure and took Ennis’ hand.  He kissed his open palm, traced Ennis’ lifeline with his tongue.  “You keep that up, Rodeo and I’m gonna have to take you right here!”  Jack chuckled and placed the back of Ennis’ hand to his mouth. 

Ennis watched, transfixed, as Jack kissed his hand.   As the fire died down, Jack was just a shadow, a ruddy image.  Ennis was fascinated by the glow of his love in the firelight.  He reached out for Jack, pulled him to his feet.  And just as the last embers of the fire sputtered and popped, Jack allowed himself to be led into the tent.


Title: Re: His Touch
Post by: Dagi on June 17, 2007, 03:00:34 am
Jack Twist settled in, sat down between Ennis Del Mar’s open thighs.  He had just driven 1400 miles to be with his lover, and though Jack never complained, Ennis noticed a stiffening of Jack’s shoulders.  It worried him.

Ennis pulled Jack closer and ran his fingers through Jack’s thick, dark hair.  “Hey what you doin’ En?”  Jack laughed as he looked up at his love.  “Shhh,, just sit up still.  I know what I’m doin.”  It was Ennis, as he massaged Jack’s scalp with firm, circular motions.  Ennis kneaded and rubbed, kissed his man’s hair until Jack purred like a kitten.

Jack became almost limp as Ennis moved to the shoulders.  He used his thumbs to work out the kinks in Jack’s stiff neck.  “Oh God, Ennis, where you learn how to do that?”  Jack whispered as he laid his head sideways in Ennis' lap.  He felt Ennis’ growing manhood, but he needed more of his man's practiced touch.  Jack moved his head back and forth, guiding Ennis, leading his hands where he needed them most.  It was good.  And after a good half hour, Jack Twist felt mighty fine, completely refreshed.  He turned around suddenly and freed a tumescent Ennis from his jeans…


Marie, thank you for so tender a moment! You describe so beautifully how they discover different ways to give to each other what they need most - caring love and tenderness.

Dagi
Title: Re: Moment
Post by: Dagi on June 17, 2007, 03:05:31 am
It was well after midnight and Ennis was ready for bed.  He was ready for love.  Jack was warming himself by the fire, rubbing his hands together, blowing into his palms, trying to keep warm.  “If you’re cold, let’s go in the tent, Bud.”  Ennis said as he moved closer to Jack.  I’ll do more than keep you warm, that’s fer sure!”  Ennis winked at his lover.

“Well, I think I’ll sit up a bit longer, if it’s all the same to you.”  Jack placed his cold hands under his armpits.  “Come sit by me, friend.  Let’s just enjoy this crisp, cold night for a bit longer.”  Ennis moved close to Jack, and draped an arm around his shoulder.  He leaned in and placed a sloppy kiss on Jack’s cheek.  Jack Twist sighed with pleasure and took Ennis’ hand.  He kissed his open palm, traced Ennis’ lifeline with his tongue.  “You keep that up, Rodeo and I’m gonna have to take you right here!”  Jack chuckled and placed the back of Ennis’ hand to his mouth. 

Ennis watched, transfixed, as Jack kissed his hand.   As the fire died down, Jack was just a shadow, a ruddy image.  Ennis was fascinated by the glow of his love in the firelight.  He reached out for Jack, pulled him to his feet.  And just as the last embers of the fire sputtered and popped, Jack allowed himself to be led into the tent.




Ohh Marie, your stories really floor me. You MUST write and publish, honey, your writing is so extraordinary, the way you capture those tender moments that reveal the strongest love that ever existed in this universe. *sigh* *tears welling up*. Thank you.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: louisev on June 17, 2007, 07:05:34 am
MMM  Louise, sexy as hell.  Is this your first fanfic?  Don't think I remember seeing a story from you before.  In any event, it's great to see you here now. 

Keep up the good work.

Gary

P.S.  Wonder what Ennis had for Jack.   ???

oh no, not my first fan fic... I've written a few things.
Title: Re: El Vaquero y el Campesino
Post by: Toycoon on June 17, 2007, 11:18:33 am

¡Joder!  Toycoon, te juro...   ;D

Gracias, Clyde-B. Lo ago todo para ustedes, mis amigos. Y tu, hablas Espanol tambien?

Dagi, que bien sabes tu lejer el Espanol? Donde lo apprendistes?
Title: Re: El Vaquero y el Campesino
Post by: opinionista on June 17, 2007, 12:14:12 pm
Gracias, Clyde-B. Lo ago todo para ustedes, mis amigos. Y tu, hablas Espanol tambien?

Dagi, que bien sabes tu lejer el Espanol? Donde lo apprendistes?

Yo hablo español  :D
Title: La carta
Post by: opinionista on June 17, 2007, 12:44:52 pm
"Ennis: Te amo y te extraño, y estoy loco por volver a sentir tus besos y tu cuerpo sobre el mío", escribió Jack sobre el papel. Antes de proseguir, volvió a leer lo que había escrito, pero el miedo a la reacción de Ennis hizo que volviera a romper la carta, como ya había hecho con otras diez. Sacó otro folio del cajón y volvió a empezar.


Title: Re: His Touch
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 17, 2007, 02:52:06 pm
MMM MM  That feels nice, littlewing.  Think if I give a neck rub to a nice guy like Jack he'll...   :P

Gary

Ah, Gary, you're such a beautiful, lusty man!  I'm sure Jack wouldn't be able to resist you.
Title: Re: Moment
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 17, 2007, 02:53:17 pm
Hi Littlewing.  Lovely story - seductive and sweet.  I like the way Jack knew just where to touch Ennis. (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_2_2v.gif)

Thanks, Merr.  It is the quiet, tender moments between J&E that I think about the most!
Title: Re: His Touch
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 17, 2007, 02:55:19 pm
Marie, thank you for so tender a moment! You describe so beautifully how they discover different ways to give to each other what they need most - caring love and tenderness.

Dagi

Yes, thanks, Dagi.  And I like to image Ennis doing the nuturing.  Jack was the minsitering(sp?) angel, but I truly feel that Ennis would do anything in his power to make Jack happy; give him what he needs!
Title: Re: Moment
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 17, 2007, 02:57:46 pm
Ohh Marie, your stories really floor me. You MUST write and publish, honey, your writing is so extraordinary, the way you capture those tender moments that reveal the strongest love that ever existed in this universe. *sigh* *tears welling up*. Thank you.

Dagi

Dagi, my love, you are just too sweet.  I don't know what came over me last night!  I was going to post another story, one almost sentimental, but I got very sleepy and decided to turn in.  If I can get to it, I'll post another sweet tale tonight.  I'm in a warm and fuzzy mood!  :laugh:
Title: Re: His Touch
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 17, 2007, 02:58:57 pm
So sweet and tender, with just a hint of nasty! .... I swear you and toycoon are moulding into one!!!

Love Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Thanks so much, Susie!  Hey, we're waiting for a steamy, sexy tale from you!  But no pressure!  I know anything you post will be worth the wait!  :)
Title: Re: Moment
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 17, 2007, 03:00:00 pm
Ooh I love that sloppy kiss!!  And the open palm kiss ..... (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_3_1v.gif) ..... Beautiful touching moment littlewing

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

I was going to post one last night but I was a bit tipsy!  I tend to get a bit rude, or very soppy ... hey Gary, didn't I tell you I loved you about 4 times last night? .... hehehe ..... I do, you know I do .... but sorry!! ... I'll go and read it now ... see if it makes any sense!! 

Why you little vixen, you!  :laugh:  :-*  ::)
Title: Re: Moment
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 17, 2007, 03:00:38 pm
Aw, littlewing.  You know I love it when Ennis takes what he wants.  Sexy!

Gary

Yes, yes, yes!
Title: Re: Cabin Fever
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 17, 2007, 03:02:10 pm
Cabin Fever

Ennis had stormed out two hours before, so now Jack was alone.  The preceding argument had left him feeling tense and bitter, and therefore he was thankful for the stillness of this place out in the wilderness.  There wasn’t a soul around, and this gave Jack an opportunity to lick his wounded pride in private.  He hadn’t meant to tick Ennis off, but sometimes it was hard not to think out loud, or dream out loud when you felt so comfortable and relaxed with someone.  Maybe asking Don Wroe if he’d be willing to sell the cabin was a dumb idea, but it wasn’t like Jack was determined to follow through.  Saying something like that was akin to trying on a new pair of boots.  You might buy them and take them home if they fit, but most likely you’d leave them in the store.  Why couldn’t Ennis see that?

Jack needed something to do just to pass the time so he got the broom from the corner and started sweeping the dust that he and Ennis had tracked in during their stay.  He looked the place over as he went, at the wide-planked floor boards, the rough barn board walls, the propane stove and refrigerator, the bed with its iron frame, the fireplace made of river rock, and the wing chair beside it.  The night before Ennis had been sitting in that chair naked, and so Jack took his own clothes off, climbed into Ennis’s lap facing him, wrapped his arms around Ennis’s neck, and his legs around the arms of the chair, and he rode Ennis’s hardness like he would ride a bull.  This was a nice place, and he really would like to call it his own.

When he opened the door to sweep out the dirt he found a young man standing on the porch getting ready to knock.  “Fuck!” Jack said with a start.  But then he apologized and asked, “Is there somethin’ I can help you with?”

The kid was about eighteen, with shaggy dark hair, short sideburns, fair skin, and bright blue eyes.  Judging from his ragged jeans, and army jacket adorned with peace signs and an upside down American flag, he was yet another war protester.  Jack looked the boy up and down and felt a stir in his groin.

“My name’s Danny, sir, and I’m looking for Aaron Wroe,” the kid said with a slow southern draw that would melt butter like warm toast.

“Don’t know an Aaron Wroe,” Jack confessed.  “Is he related to Don?”

“Don’s his daddy.”

Jack had to tell the young man that Aaron wasn’t around, but since it appeared he had hiked the seventeen miles up from the main road on foot Jack didn’t have the heart to simply turn him away on a dime.  So he invited the kid to share a beer with him.  Danny accepted and Jack got a couple of bottles from the fridge, and then they sat on the rockers on the front porch and talked.

Danny explained that his parents had moved to Riverton from Alabama when he was fourteen, and he and Aaron had become good friends.  They even planed to be roommates at the University of Wyoming in the fall.  The kid had an easy and open way about him.  Within a half hour Danny had revealed that “Five Easy Pieces” was his all time favorite film, and that his favorite book was “The Catcher in the Rye.”  He also spoke of joining the Peace Core after college.  Jack liked the boy’s company, but he was glad when he said he had to go.  Ennis turned stony cold toward these kids who gave the finger to tradition, so Jack was glad they wouldn’t cross paths.

Not more than five minutes after the kid left Ennis returned.  He walked slowly up to the cabin, stopped before coming up on the porch, and stood there with his head hanging.  “Jack, why can’t you take what I can give ya, and stop askin’ for more?”

“Sorry, Ennis.”  And he was sorry.  Right then all Jack wanted was to enjoy what little time they had together and not fight.

Suddenly Ennis bounded up the steps and charged toward him.  Jack got to his feet thinking Ennis was about to hit him, but instead Ennis grabbed him, pushed him up against the wall, and said, “You mess with my mind, Jack fuckin’ Twist.”  And then he forcefully shoved his lips against Jack’s and pushed his tongue in.

They kissed like that for a long time, and then Ennis did something he had never done before.  He picked Jack up into his arms, and carried him inside the cabin.  Then he threw him down on the iron bed and started undoing his shirt.  As they made love Jack secretly imagined that Danny was standing outside the window looking in.  He wanted the boy to see.  Wanted him to know that Ennis loved him.  And somehow he thought Danny would appreciate that.

Afterwards Ennis sat up in bed, and Jack leaned against him.  “Do you know Aaron Wroe?” Jack asked.

“That’s Don’s son.  How’d you hear about him?”

“Someone came by looking for him while you were out.”

Ennis said in a flat tone that indicated he was holding too much back, “Well, he won’t be findin’ him anytime soon.  Aaron got himself shot over there in Vietnam.  They sent him back in a body bag last week.”

Jack was overcome with a sudden wave of sadness, and not just for Aaron, but for the young man he had met earlier.  “Was he good friends with some kid named Danny?”

“Danny Phillips?  Guess so.  Don was tellin’ me when I asked him if I could borrow the place how last year around this time Aaron was supposed to come up here with Danny.  But Don wouldn’t let him.”

“Why not?” asked Jack.

“Don didn’t like him.  Not many in Riverton liked Danny after he pulled that stunt to stay out of the army.  He told the draft board that he was queer.  Wanted Aaron to do the same.”

Jack, sensing something wasn’t right, sat up and looked at Ennis.  “What happened to Danny after that?”

Ennis’s expression turned to confusion and he said, “Did that guy that came by say somethin’ about Danny?”

“Just answer me.”

“One night when he was coming out of a bar on Main the kid got jumped, pulled into an alley, and got his head kicked in.  Danny Phillips is as dead as Aaron Wroe.”

Marvelous, simply marvelous.  One of my absolute favorites!  Thanks so much for reposting Cabin Fever for us, Gary!   :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: opinionista on June 17, 2007, 03:04:41 pm
Since you are all into writing stories about Ennis and Jack you might want to check out the drabble fest if you haven't. It's fun too. Just a suggestion.

http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,7810.msg207570.html#new (http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,7810.msg207570.html#new)
Title: Re: El Vaquero y el Campesino
Post by: Dagi on June 17, 2007, 03:24:54 pm
Gracias, Clyde-B. Lo ago todo para ustedes, mis amigos. Y tu, hablas Espanol tambien?

Dagi, que bien sabes tu lejer el Espanol? Donde lo apprendistes?

Hace unos 12 anos sabía hablarlo bastante bién, pero me lo perdí casi todo. hablar todavía me cae más facil que escribir. Lo aprendí hablando con amigos latinos y viajando por latinomaerica por 5 meses. Es un idioma bonito y facil, pero ya no acostumbro escribir. Tu me ensenaste que es un idioma muy poetico! "labios como fruta madura..." mmmmm, love it!

Y TU ?
Title: Re: El Vaquero y el Campesino
Post by: opinionista on June 17, 2007, 03:29:16 pm
Hace unos 12 anos sabía hablarlo bastante bién, pero me lo perdí casi todo. hablar todavía me cae más facil que escribir. Lo aprendí hablando con amigos latinos y viajando por latinomaerica por 5 meses. Es un idioma bonito y facil, pero ya no acostumbro escribir. Tu me ensenaste que es un idioma muy poetico! "labios como fruta madura..." mmmmm, love it!

Y TU ?

I think your Spanish is perfect. Really. (I am a native speaker).
Title: Re: La carta
Post by: Dagi on June 17, 2007, 03:30:14 pm
"Ennis: Te amo y te extraño, y estoy loco por volver a sentir tus besos y tu cuerpo sobre el mío", escribió Jack sobre el papel. Antes de proseguir, volvió a leer lo que había escrito, pero el miedo a la reacción de Ennis hizo que volviera a romper la carta, como ya había hecho con otras diez. Sacó otro folio del cajón y volvió a empezar.




It would have been a secure way to write it in spanish, Alma would never have been able to read it....but Ennis neither :(!

I hope he wrote anything similarly steamy when he made the next attempt ;D!

Lovely idea, Opinionista !
Title: Re: El Vaquero y el Campesino
Post by: Dagi on June 17, 2007, 03:39:03 pm
I think your Spanish is perfect. Really. (I am a native speaker).

Oh, thank you! *blush*

Dagi
Title: Re: Cabin Fever
Post by: Dagi on June 17, 2007, 03:42:16 pm
Cabin Fever

Ennis had stormed out two hours before, so now Jack was alone....

“One night when he was coming out of a bar on Main the kid got jumped, pulled into an alley, and got his head kicked in.  Danny Phillips is as dead as Aaron Wroe.”

Gary, I already liked this when I read it on IMDb, and now I love it even more! ( and every time I see a wing chair now it makes me think of bull riding :laugh:!)

Dagi
Title: Re: El Vaquero y el Campesino
Post by: David In Indy on June 17, 2007, 03:44:06 pm
Hace unos 12 anos sabía hablarlo bastante bién, pero me lo perdí casi todo. hablar todavía me cae más facil que escribir. Lo aprendí hablando con amigos latinos y viajando por latinomaerica por 5 meses. Es un idioma bonito y facil, pero ya no acostumbro escribir. Tu me ensenaste que es un idioma muy poetico! "labios como fruta madura..." mmmmm, love it!

Y TU ?

I wish I could read this. I took Spanish in high school but I failed it. I failed French too.  :(

I'd run this through a translator, but it would only confuse me more probably!

I love that picture in your avatar Dagi! Is that a picture of you?? :)
Title: Re: Moment
Post by: Dagi on June 17, 2007, 03:44:53 pm
  I was going to post another story, one almost sentimental, but I got very sleepy and decided to turn in.  If I can get to it, I'll post another sweet tale tonight.  I'm in a warm and fuzzy mood!  :laugh:

Hey Marie, could you just pass me over that story-writing-machine of yours, and how much is the rent?
Title: Re: El Vaquero y el Campesino
Post by: Dagi on June 17, 2007, 03:52:44 pm
I wish I could read this. I took Spanish in high school but I failed it. I failed French too.  :(

I'd run this through a translator, but it would only confuse me more probably!

I love that picture in your avatar Dagi! Is that a picture of you?? :)

Hi David, nice to see you here!

I just wrote that Spanish is a lovely and easy language ;D ;D ;D (and where I learned it etc.). I failed french, too! I don´t like it that much, maybe that´s why.

Any fanfics in the jar over the fire, David?

And as for the photo: its my granny  ::), what did you think?

Dagi ;)
Title: Re: El Vaquero y el Campesino
Post by: Toycoon on June 17, 2007, 09:11:31 pm
Quote
I'd run this through a translator, but it would only confuse me more probably!

Ooowee! I'll translate it for ya, David-Indiana. I'm fluent in Spanish (my parents are Cuban). Spanish is my native tongue.
Title: You know I ain't queer
Post by: Toycoon on June 17, 2007, 09:16:05 pm
Queer

The word rattled around the four corners of Jack's mind like a rock inside an old tin can rolling downhill; a word often whispered in hushed tones by older ladies or screamed angrily by Jack's father when he was mad at the world.

Jack drifted into thoughts of Ennis' mystifying brown eyes, his curly hair and his soft pillowy lips before answering weakly, "Me neither."
Title: Re: El Vaquero y el Campesino
Post by: David In Indy on June 17, 2007, 09:20:51 pm
Ooowee! I'll translate it for ya, David-Indiana. I'm fluent in Spanish (my parents are Cuban). Spanish is my native tongue.

<David sits and waits patiently for Toycoon to give him the translation. David is in no hurry though. He lives in Indiana, and things move slower there>  ;)  ;)

I'm just joking!  :)


I didn't know you were flueint in Spanish! Several of our members speak Spanish.  :D
Title: Re: Just ask me
Post by: Toycoon on June 17, 2007, 10:08:11 pm
Quote
Here's a toned-down version of the story....

You are one, nasty lady, Susiebell (and I use the term very loosely)!

That husband of your's had better get on the ball! What did you give him for Father's Day, anyway?


Title: Re: El Vaquero y el Campesino
Post by: Toycoon on June 17, 2007, 10:23:01 pm
Jamas me olvidare de su sonrisa, tan triste y humlide con tanta candela que enciendiera el bosque.

Labios como fruta madura, dulse y prohibido; me duele, como los quireo.

Que alegria me da verte, Jack-jodido-Twist!

For David-Indiana, the English translation:

The Cowboy and the Ranch Hand

I'll never forget his smile, so sad and humble, so hot it could light the forest on fire.

Lips like ripe fruit, sweet and forbidden; I want them so much it aches.

How happy I am to see you, Jack-fucken'-Twist!

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: David In Indy on June 17, 2007, 10:38:57 pm
For David-Indiana, the English translation:

The Cowboy and the Ranch Hand

I'll never forget his smile, so sad and humble, so hot it could light the forest on fire.

Lips like ripe fruit, sweet and forbidden; I want them so much it aches.

How happy I am to see you, Jack-fucken'-Twist!



I really like that!  :D

Thanks for translating it for me! I appreciate it!  :)
Title: Dum Sheep (Part 1)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 17, 2007, 11:01:33 pm
Dumb Sheep is a charming little tale written by our lovely Dagi.  I am posting it here with her permission.  I am also posting my continuance of the tale right below.

They were sitting on the meadow in the golden afternoon sun, Ennis between his friend’s thighs, looking at the sheep they had finally untangled after a few days work. Jack loved to feel Ennis’ warm back leaning with his full weight against his breast and belly!  He loved to inhale the scent of his lover’s hair, and to hear his voice as Ennis murmured:

"Look at them dumb sheep, sometimes I wish I could live their life: not worrying about things like other people’s opinion, or how to make a living.  They just let the day pass by and enjoy whatever they find right before their mouths..."

Jack smiled, put both arms around his love, then let one hand slip into Ennis jeans and muttered:  "Bud, how about playing sheep today...? “
Title: Dumb Sheep (part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 17, 2007, 11:05:02 pm
Jack gently caressed Ennis’ manhood with a slow, steady movement.  Nothing fast or deep, just languid strokes as soft as a butterfly’s wing.  Ennis craved Jack’s tenderness, and he reached down and pulled himself free.  Ennis lifted himself slightly, and placed his swollen member in Jack’s palm.  Jack held Ennis’ cock as though it were his most treasured and valued possession.  He held him silent and still; his eyes never leaving the long shaft of love.

Ennis watched Jack as he looked down at his member.   The look on Jack’s handsome face was one of lust, wonder, unwavering love.  Ennis couldn’t take any more.  “Make me happy, Jack….please?”  Ennis asked, huskily, breathlessly.  Jack Twist chuckled and caressed him harder now.  “Like this, baby?”  He whispered, as he increased the pressure.

Afterwards, Ennis lay in Jack’s arms, the sheep be damned.  Jack held him tight for awhile, just until the last tremor subsided.  “You okay, friend?”  Jack whispered in Ennis’ ear as he cuddled him.  “Yes, thanks.”  Ennis answered as he pulled away slowly from the embrace.   Jack rose up, laid a sleeping Ennis down among the sheep and walked over to camp.  He thought twice about washing Ennis’ release from his hands.  It was a sweet, sticky reminder of their love.  But there was work to be done…
Title: Re: El Vaquero y el Campesino
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 17, 2007, 11:05:56 pm
For David-Indiana, the English translation:

The Cowboy and the Ranch Hand

I'll never forget his smile, so sad and humble, so hot it could light the forest on fire.

Lips like ripe fruit, sweet and forbidden; I want them so much it aches.

How happy I am to see you, Jack-fucken'-Twist!



So beautiful!  I wish I can read and write in another language  :'(
Title: Re: Dumb Sheep (part 2)
Post by: Toycoon on June 18, 2007, 12:31:39 am
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He held him silent and still; his eyes never leaving the long shaft of love.

Littlewing1957 and Dagi, you pair of Dirty Mamas. What is going on here? :o
Title: Queer (Part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 18, 2007, 12:36:16 am
But Jack couldn’t even convince himself.  What else was there to do but deny being queer?  All Jack knew was that he wanted his friend.  He wanted to again feel Ennis’ hardness in his most secret, tender place. 

“Have it your way, friend.” Jack thought as he looked toward Ennis: a vision standing tall against the sky.  “You’ll want me again….you’ll come to me.  Then we’ll see just who is queer.”

Ennis retreated toward his work, leaving a hurt and confused Jack Twist with his tortured thoughts…

Title: Re: Dumb Sheep (part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 18, 2007, 12:37:14 am
Littlewing1957 and Dagi, you pair of Dirty Mamas. What is going on here? :o

 :laugh:  I don't know, Baby!

 Read on!  I've posted a past 2 to "Queer."  I hope you don't mind?
Title: Perhaps in Heaven
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 18, 2007, 01:44:04 am
“Is the anything interestin’ up there in heaven?”  Jack asked, as an unusually stoic Ennis Del Mar stared up at the star bright, inky black sky.  “I’m just sendin’ up a prayer of thanks!”  Ennis answered.  “Fer what?”  Jack had to hear this one! “For you forgettin’ to bring that damn harmonica!  I’m thankful for the peace and quiet!”  Jack laughed in spite of himself.  He reached over for Ennis and rubbed his thigh.

Jack thought about Alma and the moment he first laid eyes on her.  She was certainly a gorgeous woman, but not quite as lovely as Lureen.  “I’m gonna get him!”  Jack thought as he eyed Mrs. Del Mar.  He was instantly ashamed of himself, but he couldn’t help his feelings.  Jack wanted Ennis Del Mar more than anything else in this world.

If only Ennis felt the same way.  Jack allowed his lover to stare up at the sky in peace, while his thoughts drifted to Alma and the so-called life Ennis had with her.  He cringed as he imaged Ennis making love to his sexy wife.  The mental picture of Ennis with someone else, even his legal wife, was more than Jack could stand.  “Is she better than me?”  Jack blurted out, before he could even control himself.  Ennis couldn't have heard correctly.  “What did you say, Jack fing Twist.....??”
Title: Re: El Vaquero y el Campesino
Post by: Dagi on June 18, 2007, 02:46:27 am
Your granny is one hot chick.   ;D

I will tell her, thanks! ;D
Title: Re: You know I ain't queer
Post by: Dagi on June 18, 2007, 02:50:14 am
Ennis' mystifying brown eyes, his curly hair and his soft pillowy lips before answering weakly, "Me neither."

This description really can make one´s knees weak. You are a "word-wizard". And have I mentioned before that you are the master of..well yes, I probably have :D...
Title: Re: Just ask me
Post by: Dagi on June 18, 2007, 02:56:53 am
WOW!, I'm so glad I didn't post this last night .... I get very rude when I'm drunk.... I'd have been booted off the Bettermost site for sure!!!  Here's a toned-down version of the story....

“I wanna fuck you, Jack…. ”

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

* still trying to regain composure*  I won´t have to tell you that this was more than hot, girl!
And if that was the toned-down version....then I´d love to read the original one :o!!!

Dagi
Title: Re: Dumb Sheep (part 2)
Post by: Dagi on June 18, 2007, 03:02:13 am
Jack held Ennis’ cock as though it were his most treasured and valued possession.  He held him silent and still; his eyes never leaving the long shaft of love.

Ennis watched Jack as he looked down at his member.   The look on Jack’s handsome face was one of lust, wonder, unwavering love.  Ennis couldn’t take any more.  “Make me happy, Jack….please?” 


Littlewing, I don´t know what to say, really! That was so sexy and so sweet and tender and loving - what a way to have my very first fanfic continued. I feel very honored! Thank you so much!

Dagi
Title: Re: Perhaps in Heaven
Post by: Dagi on June 18, 2007, 03:09:01 am
“Is the anything interestin’ up there in heaven?”  ..........  “Is she better than me?”


So sad that Jack is jealous, but it shows how much he wanted Ennis. I´m sure it hurt him as well when he heard him talk about Cassie.

Thank you for this touching insight, Marie!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 18, 2007, 03:14:15 am
Would anyone of you authors mind if I took all the stories and opened a Jack with Ennis READ ONLY - thread?

Think it over and let me know, please.

Dagi
Title: Re: Queer (Part 2)
Post by: Toycoon on June 18, 2007, 09:23:40 am
But Jack couldn’t even convince himself.  What else was there to do but deny being queer?  All Jack knew was that he wanted his friend.  He wanted to again feel Ennis’ hardness in his most secret, tender place. 

“Have it your way, friend.” Jack thought as he looked toward Ennis: a vision standing tall against the sky.  “You’ll want me again….you’ll come to me.  Then we’ll see just who is queer.”

Ennis retreated toward his work, leaving a hurt and confused Jack Twist with his tortured thoughts…

He wanted to again feel Ennis’ hardness in his most secret, tender place. Mmmmmm! Love them "tortured thoughts", yessir! Hot, littlewing1957.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on June 18, 2007, 09:34:29 am
Would anyone of you authors mind if I took all the stories and opened a Jack with Ennis READ ONLY - thread?

Think it over and let me know, please.

Dagi


Why? Are the pages getting difficult to load up? I almost miss the limited 'chapters' structure of Jack with Ennis on IMDb. I suppose we could start a 'read only' thread.

Ellemeno, Ineedcrayons, TrueOracle what do you mods suggest?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: MaineWriter on June 18, 2007, 10:16:20 am
Why? Are the pages getting difficult to load up? I almost miss the limited 'chapters' structure of Jack with Ennis on IMDb. I suppose we could start a 'read only' thread.

Ellemeno, Ineedcrayons, TrueOracle what do you mods suggest?

Actually, I am the mod here for Fanfiction.

Personally, I like the stories and the comments mixed in together...it keeps the thread lively, IMO. But I can also see how it might be distracting to a reader.  Two things that have been done that you might want to consider:

1) Start a thread just for the stories and start a different thread for the "critics corner." If you look over on Chez Tremblay, that is what they did with the "Performance Thread." We did a similar thing here on Fanfic with the former "Ennis and Ellery" thread and the gallery where we archived all the pictures. "E&E" is no more (it has morphed into the Taking Chances thread over on the creative writers corner) but when the thread was very lively, it was fun to have all the pictures in one place so we could look at them.

2) For the Drabblefest, one of our regular readers/authors volunteered to start a drabblefest community on LiveJournal. She has been archiving all the drabbles there (with the prompts) so people can easily search through all the stories. This undertaking is a fair amount of work ...just so you know in advance.

Or you could just leave it as it is.

Hope these suggestions help. Let me know if you need more info or ideas. Feel free to PM me at any time.

Leslie
MaineWriter
Moderator, Fanfiction and the Creative Writer's Corner


 
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on June 18, 2007, 01:40:14 pm
Hey there Mod Leslie,
Thanks for the quick response. I like the comments and the stories together, too. Like you said, it keeps the thread lively and in my opinion, gives it a 'folks-y' feel that I really enjoy. Maybe we could start new chapters to keep the threads managable. Thoughts?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: MaineWriter on June 18, 2007, 01:52:54 pm
Hey there Mod Louise,
Thanks for the quick response. I like the comments and the stories together, too. Like you said, it keeps the thread lively and in my opinion, gives it a 'folks-y' feel that I really enjoy. Maybe we could start new chapters to keep the threads managable. Thoughts?

Hey again,

I am mod Leslie. Mod Louise is en route right now to her new job in England!

I'd rather keep all the stories together in one thread, as we have done with the drabblefest. People have complained in the past about the board getting cluttered with too many little short threads. That's the reason I consolidate groups of one shots by the same author together in one thread (see Loneleebee's poetry and one shots for an example of that).

As you all have discovered, you can change the subject line within the thread, which makes it easy to point to the different stories and comments for those stories.

Does this help?

Leslie
Moderator, Fanfic

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on June 18, 2007, 03:47:17 pm
Hey again,

I am mod Leslie. Mod Louise is en route right now to her new job in England!

I'd rather keep all the stories together in one thread, as we have done with the drabblefest. People have complained in the past about the board getting cluttered with too many little short threads. That's the reason I consolidate groups of one shots by the same author together in one thread (see Loneleebee's poetry and one shots for an example of that).

As you all have discovered, you can change the subject line within the thread, which makes it easy to point to the different stories and comments for those stories.

Does this help?

Leslie
Moderator, Fanfic

Sorry Mod Leslie,
I actually had your name correct in the first place but I changed it for whatever, weird reason!
I like the thread just the way it is but someone (Dagi) suggested having a 'read only' format.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: MaineWriter on June 18, 2007, 04:02:34 pm
Sorry Mod Leslie,
I actually had your name correct in the first place but I changed it for whatever, weird reason!
I like the thread just the way it is but someone (Dagi) suggested having a 'read only' format.

There is actually not a "read only" capability here at Bettermost (as far as I know). It would be more up to individual users to post their comments somewhere else (as they do in the "critics gallery" for the Performance Thread). My inclination would be to leave this thread the way it is...I am enjoying the liveliness of it and the comments, some very funny. However, I try to moderate with a light touch and I wanted folks to feel like they had the chance to discuss the topic!

Leslie
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 18, 2007, 04:46:40 pm
There is actually not a "read only" capability here at Bettermost (as far as I know). It would be more up to individual users to post their comments somewhere else (as they do in the "critics gallery" for the Performance Thread). My inclination would be to leave this thread the way it is...I am enjoying the liveliness of it and the comments, some very funny. However, I try to moderate with a light touch and I wanted folks to feel like they had the chance to discuss the topic!

Leslie

Sorry, obviousely I didn´t explain well enough what my idea was .

TOYCOON, I love this tread exactly the way it is. I love the mixture. I would never want to change that, believe me.

What I meant to say was that we/I could open a new thread that goes parallel to the original one (which would stay just the way it is), collecting the stories every 2-3 days and posting  them with the request to not comment there but in the original thread. Maybe it is a stupid idea, but it would make reading easier for those who read only without ever commenting. Ok, I see it is a stupid idea and I will simply save a copy of each story on my computer so I can read them one after the other whenever I want. Forget it, lets pretend I never said anything :-X...

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: MaineWriter on June 18, 2007, 04:54:08 pm
Dagi,

It's not a stupid suggestion at all! Now I understand better what you are asking...

This is similar to what we did with "the Gallery" for the Ennis and Ellery thread, although in that case, we were reposting pictures, not stories. But the idea is the same. If someone wants to take on the job of creating an archive for the stories posted here, and include just the stories, it is fine with me. Call it something like "Jack with Ennis Fanfic Game Archive" so folks will know what it is about.

Alternatively, you could ask each person who posts a story to also post it in the archive.

Leslie
Moderator, Fanfic
Title: Re: His Touch
Post by: Clyde-B on June 18, 2007, 08:17:51 pm
Jack Twist settled in, sat down between Ennis Del Mar’s open thighs.  He had just driven 1400 miles to be with his lover, and though Jack never complained, Ennis noticed a stiffening of Jack’s shoulders.  It worried him.

Ennis pulled Jack closer and ran his fingers through Jack’s thick, dark hair.  “Hey what you doin’ En?”  Jack laughed as he looked up at his love.  “Shhh,, just sit up still.  I know what I’m doin.”  It was Ennis, as he massaged Jack’s scalp with firm, circular motions.  Ennis kneaded and rubbed, kissed his man’s hair until Jack purred like a kitten.

Jack became almost limp as Ennis moved to the shoulders.  He used his thumbs to work out the kinks in Jack’s stiff neck.  “Oh God, Ennis, where you learn how to do that?”  Jack whispered as he laid his head sideways in Ennis' lap.  He felt Ennis’ growing manhood, but he needed more of his man's practiced touch.  Jack moved his head back and forth, guiding Ennis, leading his hands where he needed them most.  It was good.  And after a good half hour, Jack Twist felt mighty fine, completely refreshed.  He turned around suddenly and freed a tumescent Ennis from his jeans…


Boy, you don't read this thread for a couple of days you wind up pages behind!

I liked the way this one ended.  With Jack sitting between Ennis's thighs I was beginning to wonder why the only "stiffness" was in Jack's shoulders.   ;D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: David In Indy on June 18, 2007, 08:33:32 pm
CONGRATULATIONS  SUSIE!!!


:D  :D  :D  :D  :D



We'll be welcoming you over at the 1000 Posts Club before long!!!!  :)
Title: Congratulations, Brokeback Got You Good!
Post by: Toycoon on June 18, 2007, 08:38:30 pm
Susiebell, you are a Rodeo Champion! A thoroughbred fillie, even.  ;D
Title: Re: El Vaquero y el Campesino
Post by: Clyde-B on June 18, 2007, 08:45:59 pm
Gracias, Clyde-B. Lo ago todo para ustedes, mis amigos. Y tu, hablas Espanol tambien?

Dagi, que bien sabes tu lejer el Espanol? Donde lo apprendistes?

Toycoon,

Sí, castellano, un poquito.     ¿Y tú, cantas Babaloo?   
Title: Re: Cabin Fever
Post by: Clyde-B on June 18, 2007, 08:54:09 pm
Cabin Fever

Ennis had stormed out two hours before, so now Jack was alone.  The preceding argument had left him feeling tense and bitter, and therefore he was thankful for the stillness of this place out in the wilderness.  There wasn’t a soul around, and this gave Jack an opportunity to lick his wounded pride in private.  He hadn’t meant to tick Ennis off, but sometimes it was hard not to think out loud, or dream out loud when you felt so comfortable and relaxed with someone.  Maybe asking Don Wroe if he’d be willing to sell the cabin was a dumb idea, but it wasn’t like Jack was determined to follow through.  Saying something like that was akin to trying on a new pair of boots.  You might buy them and take them home if they fit, but most likely you’d leave them in the store.  Why couldn’t Ennis see that?

Jack needed something to do just to pass the time so he got the broom from the corner and started sweeping the dust that he and Ennis had tracked in during their stay.  He looked the place over as he went, at the wide-planked floor boards, the rough barn board walls, the propane stove and refrigerator, the bed with its iron frame, the fireplace made of river rock, and the wing chair beside it.  The night before Ennis had been sitting in that chair naked, and so Jack took his own clothes off, climbed into Ennis’s lap facing him, wrapped his arms around Ennis’s neck, and his legs around the arms of the chair, and he rode Ennis’s hardness like he would ride a bull.  This was a nice place, and he really would like to call it his own.

When he opened the door to sweep out the dirt he found a young man standing on the porch getting ready to knock.  “Fuck!” Jack said with a start.  But then he apologized and asked, “Is there somethin’ I can help you with?”

The kid was about eighteen, with shaggy dark hair, short sideburns, fair skin, and bright blue eyes.  Judging from his ragged jeans, and army jacket adorned with peace signs and an upside down American flag, he was yet another war protester.  Jack looked the boy up and down and felt a stir in his groin.

“My name’s Danny, sir, and I’m looking for Aaron Wroe,” the kid said with a slow southern draw that would melt butter like warm toast.

“Don’t know an Aaron Wroe,” Jack confessed.  “Is he related to Don?”

“Don’s his daddy.”

Jack had to tell the young man that Aaron wasn’t around, but since it appeared he had hiked the seventeen miles up from the main road on foot Jack didn’t have the heart to simply turn him away on a dime.  So he invited the kid to share a beer with him.  Danny accepted and Jack got a couple of bottles from the fridge, and then they sat on the rockers on the front porch and talked.

Danny explained that his parents had moved to Riverton from Alabama when he was fourteen, and he and Aaron had become good friends.  They even planed to be roommates at the University of Wyoming in the fall.  The kid had an easy and open way about him.  Within a half hour Danny had revealed that “Five Easy Pieces” was his all time favorite film, and that his favorite book was “The Catcher in the Rye.”  He also spoke of joining the Peace Core after college.  Jack liked the boy’s company, but he was glad when he said he had to go.  Ennis turned stony cold toward these kids who gave the finger to tradition, so Jack was glad they wouldn’t cross paths.

Not more than five minutes after the kid left Ennis returned.  He walked slowly up to the cabin, stopped before coming up on the porch, and stood there with his head hanging.  “Jack, why can’t you take what I can give ya, and stop askin’ for more?”

“Sorry, Ennis.”  And he was sorry.  Right then all Jack wanted was to enjoy what little time they had together and not fight.

Suddenly Ennis bounded up the steps and charged toward him.  Jack got to his feet thinking Ennis was about to hit him, but instead Ennis grabbed him, pushed him up against the wall, and said, “You mess with my mind, Jack fuckin’ Twist.”  And then he forcefully shoved his lips against Jack’s and pushed his tongue in.

They kissed like that for a long time, and then Ennis did something he had never done before.  He picked Jack up into his arms, and carried him inside the cabin.  Then he threw him down on the iron bed and started undoing his shirt.  As they made love Jack secretly imagined that Danny was standing outside the window looking in.  He wanted the boy to see.  Wanted him to know that Ennis loved him.  And somehow he thought Danny would appreciate that.

Afterwards Ennis sat up in bed, and Jack leaned against him.  “Do you know Aaron Wroe?” Jack asked.

“That’s Don’s son.  How’d you hear about him?”

“Someone came by looking for him while you were out.”

Ennis said in a flat tone that indicated he was holding too much back, “Well, he won’t be findin’ him anytime soon.  Aaron got himself shot over there in Vietnam.  They sent him back in a body bag last week.”

Jack was overcome with a sudden wave of sadness, and not just for Aaron, but for the young man he had met earlier.  “Was he good friends with some kid named Danny?”

“Danny Phillips?  Guess so.  Don was tellin’ me when I asked him if I could borrow the place how last year around this time Aaron was supposed to come up here with Danny.  But Don wouldn’t let him.”

“Why not?” asked Jack.

“Don didn’t like him.  Not many in Riverton liked Danny after he pulled that stunt to stay out of the army.  He told the draft board that he was queer.  Wanted Aaron to do the same.”

Jack, sensing something wasn’t right, sat up and looked at Ennis.  “What happened to Danny after that?”

Ennis’s expression turned to confusion and he said, “Did that guy that came by say somethin’ about Danny?”

“Just answer me.”

“One night when he was coming out of a bar on Main the kid got jumped, pulled into an alley, and got his head kicked in.  Danny Phillips is as dead as Aaron Wroe.”

This is very sweet.  I'll  even forgive you for killing them off, it's that sweet.

Don Wroe's cabin is beginning to sound like a haunted Siesta Motel.

I wonder if anybody ever went there to hunt or fish?
Title: Re: Cabin Fever
Post by: Clyde-B on June 18, 2007, 11:04:26 pm
I'm so glad you liked it, Clyde. 

I grew up in West Virginia, so I love the woods, and I'd love to own a cabin in the woods.  And as a boy I used to experiment with a couple of buddies in the woods near my house, so the woods also have an erotic appeal for me.  That's one of the reasons BBM has such a strong hold on me.  J&E sneaking off to the wilderness to do the wild thing seems so natural.  Hunting, fishing, hiking, camping, screwing, they all seem to go together in my mind.   ;D

Gary

Gary, you won't get any argument out of me about that.  I always thought first light was kind of romantic.

I grew up warshin my clothes and rinchin em.  A couple of houses I was very fond of now reside at the bottom of reservoirs, including one old trailer on cinder block.  I moved away because I knew I'd probably wind up dead if I didn't.  I got kidded mercilessly about the way I talked so I learned how to speak with only a hint of a twang, but you get me not too far out of the city and it comes right back like it was never gone.
CB
Title: Re: El Vaquero y el Campesino
Post by: Toycoon on June 18, 2007, 11:15:12 pm
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Toycoon,  ¿Y tú, cantas Babaloo?   

Solo al punto del orgasmo, nino sucio!
Title: Re: Dumb Sheep (part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 18, 2007, 11:18:08 pm
Littlewing, I don´t know what to say, really! That was so sexy and so sweet and tender and loving - what a way to have my very first fanfic continued. I feel very honored! Thank you so much!

Dagi

You're very welcome, sweetheart.  I'm glad you like it.  I was worried there for a moment...
Title: Re: Queer (Part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 18, 2007, 11:18:54 pm
He wanted to again feel Ennis’ hardness in his most secret, tender place. Mmmmmm! Love them "tortured thoughts", yessir! Hot, littlewing1957.

 :laugh:  Thanks, Toycoon, honey!  :-*
Title: Re: Cabin Fever
Post by: Toycoon on June 18, 2007, 11:20:44 pm
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So true Gary.  I think all of my dead relatives are around me and maybe some I don't know.  I call them my guardian angels.  I believe in an afterlife and I believe in past lives as well.  I think in some way we are shaped by them.  Interesting, huh?  By the way, hope you are doing well and love to see you writing stories again.

Merrily

Merr, Garycottle, I believe in the afterlife, as well. I also tend to think of my deceased friends as my guardian angels. It makes the concept of death easier to deal with if you think there are loved ones there to guide you when it's your time to depart.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 18, 2007, 11:23:26 pm
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My 250th post!

I feel like celebrating!
Boy, DO I talk a lot!
(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_6_7.gif).... my lovely brokie friends! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_7_102.gif)


(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_7_104v.gif) Love Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif) 

Congrats, Susie, honey!  You rock!  I love you!   :-*
Title: Re: His Touch
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 18, 2007, 11:25:38 pm
Boy, you don't read this thread for a couple of days you wind up pages behind!

I liked the way this one ended.  With Jack sitting between Ennis's thighs I was beginning to wonder why the only "stiffness" was in Jack's shoulders.   ;D

Clyde, my love, you are so funny.  Thanks so much for your kind words!  :laugh:  :-*
Title: Blue Eyes
Post by: Toycoon on June 18, 2007, 11:26:02 pm
Jack spotted Ennis from across the grassy field sitting alone, with his head hung low and obviously in deep thought; "Boy, that Ennis Del Mar sure is a complicated fella, wonder what he thinkin' 'bout?"  

"Blue eyes... Momma would'a liked Jack's blue eyes, she liked purty things," Ennis thought, smiling wistfully as he recollected the way his mother would sometimes gaze into his father's steely eyes; "Daddy would'a wondered why I was hanging 'round rodeo fuck ups, " That boy looks like a queer ta me." Ennis' hands tightened into fists.

Ennis' concentration broke when he felt the rope from Jack's lasso fall down around his shoulders.


Title: Re: Perhaps in Heaven
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 18, 2007, 11:27:44 pm
Beautiful, romantic, insecure Jack .... I imagine he'd be aching with jealousy.  Lovely littlewing, just lovely!

I can't keep up with all your stories .... I remember you going through a quiet patch .... you must have been storing them all up ... keep em coming girly!!

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Thanks, Susie, honey!  I don't know where I'm getting all these stories.  They seem to be stored somewhere in my soul.  I was at a Windows Server 2003 class today, and all I could think about was J with E!  I'm hopeless!
Title: Re: Dumb Sheep (part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 18, 2007, 11:30:37 pm
Hi there littewing,

I remember Dagi's story.  It was one of her fist ones, right?  Great story, and what a great followup.  Both of them are truly sexy.

After being exposed to fanfic posted by the ladies who frequent this thread I'm starting to think women are as smutty as men.   ;)

Gary

 :laugh:  Thanks, Gary Baby!  As slutty and men? We're sluttier!  :laugh:  :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 18, 2007, 11:31:53 pm
Why thank you toycoon and David ..... now I'm making it sound like you two are a couple .... and what a cute couple you'd make .... yeehaw!

Only another 749 posts to go ... should manage that by the weekend!

Love Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

You go girl!   :o
Title: Re: Cabin Fever
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 18, 2007, 11:32:54 pm
This is very sweet.  I'll  even forgive you for killing them off, it's that sweet.

Don Wroe's cabin is beginning to sound like a haunted Siesta Motel.

I wonder if anybody ever went there to hunt or fish?

 :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:

Clyde, I'm having more fun than I ever thought possible!  :)
Title: Re: Queer (Part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 18, 2007, 11:34:04 pm
It's so sad that the boys couldn't be honest with each other, or even themselves.

Gary

So bitterly true, Gary!  :'(
Title: Re: Perhaps in Heaven
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 18, 2007, 11:38:09 pm
Is she better than me?  Wow!  That's a bitting slip of the tongue.  And what an unexpected twist for the reader.  This story starts off so soft and tender, and then bam!  We are taken right into the heart of Jack's understandable resentments.

littlewing, how do you keep churning them out so quick?

Gary

Wow, Gary, thanks for your sweet comments.  I don't where the stories are coming from.  Last night was rather special, as I caught the last hour of BBM on cable.  It started a flood of emotions in me that had to come out!
Title: Re: His Touch
Post by: Clyde-B on June 18, 2007, 11:38:44 pm
Clyde, my love, you are so funny.  Thanks so much for your kind words!  :laugh:  :-*

littlewing,
It's amazing you can write so well so fast!
Title: Re: His Touch
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 18, 2007, 11:41:34 pm
littlewing,
It's amazing you can write so well so fast!

Thanks, Sweets!  :)
Title: Re: El Vaquero y el Campesino
Post by: Clyde-B on June 18, 2007, 11:47:27 pm
Solo al punto del orgasmo, nino sucio!

¡AyAyAy!  ¿Vendes boletos?
Title: Blue Eyes (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 18, 2007, 11:56:00 pm
Toycoon, I hope I'm describing the right scene?

"For a queer, that Jack Twist is mighty good with a rope!”  Ennis thought as he continued to hang his head.  He didn’t want to look into Jack’s blue eyes.  Ennis was growing comfortable with his gloomy thoughts, and if he looked into those blue eyes? 

“Time to get goin’, Coyboy!”  Jack spoke softly as he pulled at the rope.  Ennis allowed himself to be raised to his feet.  Jack giggled as Ennis walked away from him, avoiding his eyes.  Ennis tucked his shirt into his jeans, never looking back.  Jack Twist raised his rope, and very expertly, skillfully, caught Ennis around the ankles.  He pulled his lover to him, but Ennis wasn’t having it.

“This ain’t no goddamn Rodeo!”  Ennis growled as he wrestled Jack to the ground.  It was serious now.  Jack and Ennis rolled down the hills in a tangle of flailing limbs.  After Jack accidentally kneed Ennis in the nose, Ennis sucker punched him.  “Owwww!!” Jack rolled and held his smarting head.  His blue eyes filled with salty tears.  “Why did you hit me Ennis?”  Jack thought, almost aloud.  “I only wanted to hold you in my arms one more time….”

Title: Re: Blue Eyes
Post by: Toycoon on June 19, 2007, 12:17:24 am
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Jack spotted Ennis from across the grassy field sitting alone, with his head hung low and obviously in deep thought; "Boy, that Ennis Del Mar sure is a complicated fella, wonder what he thinkin' 'bout?"  

"Blue eyes... Momma would'a liked Jack's blue eyes, she liked purty things," Ennis thought, smiling wistfully as he recollected the way his mother would sometimes gaze into his father's steely eyes; "Daddy would'a wondered why I was hanging 'round rodeo fuck ups, " That boy looks like a queer ta me." Ennis' hands tightened into fists.

Ennis' concentration broke when he felt the rope from Jack's lasso fall down around his shoulders.
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"For a queer, that Jack Twist is mighty good with a rope!”  Ennis thought as he continued to hang his head.  He didn’t want to look into Jack’s blue eyes.  Ennis was growing comfortable with his gloomy thoughts, and if he looked into those blue eyes? 

“Time to get goin’, Coyboy!”  Jack spoke softly as he pulled at the rope.  Ennis allowed himself to be raised to his feet.  Jack giggled as Ennis walked away from him, avoiding his eyes.  Ennis tucked his shirt into his jeans, never looking back.  Jack Twist raised his rope, and very expertly, skillfully, caught Ennis around the ankles.  He pulled his lover to him, but Ennis wasn’t having it.

“This ain’t no goddamn Rodeo!”  Ennis growled as he wrestled Jack to the ground.  It was serious now.  Jack and Ennis rolled down the hills in a tangle of flailing limbs.  After Jack accidentally kneed Ennis in the nose, Ennis sucker punched him.  “Owwww!!” Jack rolled and held his smarting head.  His blue eyes filled with salty tears.  “Why did you hit me Ennis?”  Jack thought, almost aloud.  “I only wanted to hold you in my arms one more time….”

I needed to put these side by side, Littlewing. This (among many others) is one of my favorite scenes. It starts off so sweet (for Jack anyway) and playful then it spins out of control. Jack looks so damn cute, too. I can see why Ennis can't look that fella in the eye; he's devastatingly handsome.
Title: Re: Cabin Fever
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 19, 2007, 12:30:56 am
Gary, so many of us post on these boards every day and I get the feeling I know you all.  You don't have your picture on liine, but I have an idea of what you look like.  Just from the way you talk, I know you are a beautiful person.  You are so gentle.  Take care of yourself, Bud.  I'm thinking of you. 

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_1_67.gif)

Merrily

He is a doll, isn't he, Merr?
Title: Re: Blue Eyes
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 19, 2007, 12:31:42 am
I needed to put these side by side, Littlewing. This (among many others) is one of my favorite scenes. It starts off so sweet (for Jack anyway) and playful then it spins out of control. Jack looks so damn cute, too. I can see why Ennis can't look that fella in the eye; he's devastatingly handsome.


He is amazingly handsome, isn't he?
Title: Re: Cabin Fever
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 19, 2007, 01:53:10 am
So true, Marie.  And he can write some good fanfic too.   (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/3/3_3_102.gif)  I loved the Cabin Fever story.

Merrily

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_210.gif)

Oh Gary is an amazing writer!  Awesome!
Title: Re: Just ask me
Post by: Dagi on June 19, 2007, 06:39:40 am
* still trying to regain composure*  I won´t have to tell you that this was more than hot, girl!
And if that was the toned-down version....then I´d love to read the original one :o!!!

Dagi

Again quoting myself to make sure you read it!

And CONGRATULATIONS, btw! I have crossed the 100posts line after all.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 19, 2007, 06:45:38 am
Dagi,

It's not a stupid suggestion at all! Now I understand better what you are asking...

This is similar to what we did with "the Gallery" for the Ennis and Ellery thread, although in that case, we were reposting pictures, not stories. But the idea is the same. If someone wants to take on the job of creating an archive for the stories posted here, and include just the stories, it is fine with me. Call it something like "Jack with Ennis Fanfic Game Archive" so folks will know what it is about.

Alternatively, you could ask each person who posts a story to also post it in the archive.

Leslie
Moderator, Fanfic

So girls and guys, please tell me what you think about it. Do I get the permission to post your stories in such an "archive thread"? I offer to do the work, of course, so the existence of this thread would not affect you in any way if you don´t want it to do.

Dagi
Title: Re: Dumb Sheep (part 2)
Post by: Dagi on June 19, 2007, 07:09:55 am
Hi there littewing,

I remember Dagi's story.  It was one of her fist ones, right?  Great story, and what a great followup.  Both of them are truly sexy.

After being exposed to fanfic posted by the ladies who frequent this thread I'm starting to think women are as smutty as men.   ;)

Gary

Thank you Gary! You really made me laugh when you wrote  After being exposed to fanfic posted by the ladies.....

but honestly (and I don´t want to be a kill-joy (?) ), what is smutty about any of those wonderful, sexy, erotic, hot, tender stories about two men who

 are in love with each other??? I don´t want to think about sex as anything dirty/smutty/nasty/what the hell else. Don´t misunderstand me, please, I

know that you (as many others) say that with a  ;), but sometimes I get the impression that using those negative words reveal how we really think

about it, even though we appreciate sex as a very precious part of our daily life. Just a thought, I hope you don´t feel offended, Gary. You know how

much I like you.

Dagi
Title: Re: Dumb Sheep (part 2)
Post by: Dagi on June 19, 2007, 07:17:54 am
You're very welcome, sweetheart.  I'm glad you like it.  I was worried there for a moment...

Why the hell were you worried? I asked you to make it sweet, and you not only made it sweet but sexy and beautiful!

You are one hell of a writer, Marie, you leave all of us here breath- and speachless.

Dagis
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 19, 2007, 07:24:20 am
Toycoon and Marie,

the rope scene is one of my favorites, too, allthough it is so heartbreaking I sometimes can hardly stand it. The thought  of Ennis avoiding to look Jack in the eye for fear of losing control is sweet and sad. Sweet and sad, OMG how many times have we all used these words speaking about Ennis and Jack?

Dagi
Title: Re: The BetterMost "Jack with Ennis" Love-In
Post by: Toycoon on June 19, 2007, 09:21:25 am
I (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_207.gif) GARY, .... and
I (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_207.gif) Susiebell, I (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_207.gif) Littlewing1957, I (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_207.gif) Dagi, I (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_207.gif)Merrily and I(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_207.gif)Clyde-B!

I'm starting to become very fond of David-Indiana, too.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: MaineWriter on June 19, 2007, 11:13:46 am
This is a drabble that I wrote...thought you all might enjoy it!



Brokeback Mountain
July, 1963

At last, it was hot.

Summer had finally come to the mountain and the heat of the day lingered into the evening. Jack pulled the blankets out of the tent and spread them by the campfire. “C’mere, cowboy,” he said, pulling Ennis by the hand. “I want ta love ya under the stars,” turning to look at the inky darkness overhead.

“Wha….?” said Ennis, his voice slurred.

Jack bit his tongue. The love word had slipped out. He hadn’t meant to say it, but he knew now that he was desperately, hopelessly in love with this man. Tall, lean, with bony wrists and long legs, he realized he adored everything about him from the way he smiled at him over a can of beans to the way he said “Huh?” when he was confused.

“C’mon,” said Jack softly, pushing Ennis back to the blanket, unbuttoning his shirt and sliding it off his shoulders. He ran his tongue down Ennis’s chest, stopping at the twirl of hair around his navel, unbuckling his belt.

“I think I’m drunk…” said Ennis, his head lolling back on the blanket.

How drunk, Ennis? thought Jack. Drunk enough that if I say ‘I love you,’ you won’t remember it in the morning? Drunk enough that if I say I want to be with you forever, you’ll say yes?

“Ennis, I…”

“Shhh, Jack, stop talkin’,” said Ennis, turning onto his side and pulling Jack in for a rough kiss. “Let’s get ta the lovin’.”

Jack froze, the word hanging in the air between them.

“Under the stars…”
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: MaineWriter on June 19, 2007, 12:01:22 pm
So romantic and tender, MaineWriter.  Also just a little sad that Jack is afraid of revealing too much.  Thanks so much for sharing it with us.

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.

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So the drabblefest thread is another place to post fanfic?

Yes. We post three prompts a day and people write drabbles (100 to 300 words) in response to the prompts. There is some really terrific writing going it...the "fest" started on January 31st and we just passed 100 pages.

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BTW, are you from Maine?  I ask because I went up there with my sister a few years ago.  We visited Freeport, Bar Harbor, and Acadia National Park.  I loved it!  If the winters weren't so harsh I'd consider moving there.

Yes, I work in Portland and live just down the road in Westbrook. We've been here since 1980. And the harsh winters...well, that's a story we've cooked up to keep people away.  ;) The weather is really not that bad. I lived in Chicago for 2 years and that was alot worse!

Leslie
Title: Re: Dumb Sheep (part 2)
Post by: Dagi on June 19, 2007, 02:13:09 pm
Hi there Dagi,

I know what you're saying, and no I wasn't offended.  I too think that sex is a beautiful expression, and we're damn lucky that we have it.  And it's true that it has often been maligned in our culture.  Also, people who do the maligning often do so by insinuating that sex is dirty, etc.

But they say it's dirty as if that's a bad thing.  I'm a country boy, and I'm an avid amateur gardener.  I've planted plants and flowers all around my house, and I put in a vegetable garden in my back yard.  Dirt is not something that's bad in my view.  I love dirt.   :D  And when I suggest that sex is dirty, I ean it in the best possible way.  There's something so basic about sex, like planting a seed in the ground.  It's very earthy, and you might have to wash your hands after--along with other things--but that doesn't make it bad, and whoever thinks it does has been cooped up in a sanitized apartment in the city way too long.

I hope that helps you understand what I mean when I say I love it when the boys do nasty shit to each other.   :P  I'm speaking as the guy from rural West Virginia who just put humus laced with dung on his tomato plants.

Gary


Now I really KNOW that I love you, Gary.

I´ve been thinking and worrying about my post all day long, and I am so relieved now.

You know, thank goddess I have not been cooped up in a sanitized apartment in the city for too long, and earth under my fingernails is something I am

really used to, thanks to my garden. I too love the earthy, natural aspect of sex. So I´m glad to hear that you don´t use the word subconsciousely in a

bad sense. Really, I should have known that before you told me, honey, I can tell by the way you write about our boys. I was in an odd mood, and I´m

a very spontaneous girl, that´s why I sometimes say/write things without thinking it over.

A big hug !

Dagi
Title: Re: Cabin Fever
Post by: Dagi on June 19, 2007, 02:14:42 pm
 
Hey .... don't leave me out .... (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_9_2.gif) ....

.... I want to be a member of the I (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_207.gif) GARY fan club too ....

you're a darling Gary .... (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_7_102.gif)


Love Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Where can I subscribe? ;D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: MaineWriter on June 19, 2007, 02:17:13 pm
P.S.  100-300 words, huh?  Seems I'm always over the limit.   :-\

A "true" drabble is 100 words exactly. We have a bit more leeway and yes, people do go over, but we try to stay to the limit, as much as possible.

L
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 19, 2007, 02:21:46 pm

How drunk, Ennis? thought Jack. Drunk enough that if I say ‘I love you,’ you won’t remember it in the morning? Drunk enough that if I say I want to be with you forever, you’ll say yes?


MaineWriter, I can´t begin to tell you.... you moved me to tears. Don´t have no words at the moment. Give us more, please!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: MaineWriter on June 19, 2007, 02:34:58 pm

MaineWriter, I can´t begin to tell you.... you moved me to tears. Don´t have no words at the moment. Give us more, please!

Dagi

I'll see what I can do.... ;)  Thanks for the kind words!

Leslie
MaineWriter

PS, Dagi, where are you located?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 19, 2007, 03:38:36 pm
I live in Bavaria, about 30 km south of Munic, next to the beautiful Alpes!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: MaineWriter on June 19, 2007, 06:55:55 pm
I live in Bavaria, about 30 km south of Munic, next to the beautiful Alpes!

Ah, I was in Germany for the first time back in March...visiting a fellow Brokie!

L
Title: Re: Cabin Fever
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 19, 2007, 10:22:28 pm
Marie, you are no "slouch" yourself.  Your stories are quite different from each other but they're all good.  I still haven't thought of anything to write.  I think I'm much better with "reality" than fiction. 

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_210.gif)

Merrily

Ah Merr, you're such a sweetie!  Thanks so much!  :)
Title: Bobby (Part 1 of 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 19, 2007, 10:45:24 pm
Another Extreme AU.  This is what happens when I try to write while listening to the jazz stylings of Jeff Kashiwa!  :laugh:

Bobby Twist was turning out to be quite a musician.  Who knew?   He started playing sax at the tender age of 6 and never looked back.  Jack and Lureen encouraged him to take lessons, and Bobby found that the once a week sax lessons really helped him.  After all, he'll be a featured performer, with a solo in the school recital Saturday night.  Bobby belonged to the Childress High School jazz band; one of only 3 sax players.

Jack and Lureen were divorced when Bobby turned 14, and even though his dad lived in Wyoming with one Ennis Del Mar, he managed to make it to Childress to attend every one of Bobby’s performances.  Bobby was certainly expecting Jack to show up Saturday.  Lureen and her new husband couldn’t make it.  They were on an Alaskan cruise, leaving Bobby in the care of his maternal grandmother.

Saturday night and the auditorium was filled to capacity.  Bobby had his place among the other saxophone players, and as he scanned the crowd, he couldn’t find his dad.  The boy didn’t panic.  Jack had more than a half hour before the performance began to show up.  Ten more minutes and still no Jack..but wait!  Jack Twist walked through the auditorium door in haste.  He had a man with him: a fair haired, well built, almost absurdly handsome fellow.  Bobby realized that this person had to be Ennis Del Mar.  What a looker!  For a Rodeo fuckup, Bobby’s dad certainly had something on the ball to score a king like that!  Bobby never laid eyes on Ennis before, only knew what his mom and dad told him about Ennis Del Mar.  But Bobby would worry about that later……
Title: Re: Bobby (Part 1 of 2)
Post by: Clyde-B on June 20, 2007, 12:06:01 am
[ Jack Twist walked through the auditorium door in haste.  He had a man with him: a fair haired, well built, almost absurdly handsome fellow.  Bobby realized that this person had to be Ennis Del Mar.  What a looker!  For a Rodeo fuckup, Bobby’s dad certainly had something on the ball to score a king like that!  Bobby never laid eyes on Ennis before, only knew what his mom and dad told him about Ennis Del Mar.  But Bobby would worry about that later……


Oh sure, littlewing, just go to bed and leave us hanging!!!!

I've heard about girls like you!    :laugh:
Title: Re: Bobby (Part 1 of 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 20, 2007, 12:12:38 am
Oh sure, littlewing, just go to bed and leave us hanging!!!!

I've heard about girls like you!    :laugh:

 :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:

Sorry, my loves!  I'll have the conclusion up tomorrow.  :laugh:
Title: Re: Dumb Sheep (part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 20, 2007, 12:13:51 am
Why the hell were you worried? I asked you to make it sweet, and you not only made it sweet but sexy and beautiful!

You are one hell of a writer, Marie, you leave all of us here breath- and speachless.

Dagis

Thanks so much, Dagi.  Perhaps we can do a tag team writing assignment.  Just name the time, the place, the fic!!  ;)
Title: Re: Dumb Sheep (part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 20, 2007, 12:15:58 am
Hi there Dagi,

I know what you're saying, and no I wasn't offended.  I too think that sex is a beautiful expression, and we're damn lucky that we have it.  And it's true that it has often been maligned in our culture.  Also, people who do the maligning often do so by insinuating that sex is dirty, etc.

But they say it's dirty as if that's a bad thing.  I'm a country boy, and I'm an avid amateur gardener.  I've planted plants and flowers all around my house, and I put in a vegetable garden in my back yard.  Dirt is not something that's bad in my view.  I love dirt.   :D  And when I suggest that sex is dirty, I mean it in the best possible way.  There's something so basic about sex, like planting a seed in the ground.  It's very earthy, and you might have to wash your hands after--along with other things--but that doesn't make it bad, and whoever thinks it does has been cooped up in a sanitized apartment in the city way too long.

I hope that helps you understand what I mean when I say I love it when the boys do nasty shit to each other.   :P  I'm speaking as the guy from rural West Virginia who just put humus laced with dung on his tomato plants.

Gary

Ah, Gary, good post!  I am just floored!  I love the planting the seed/gardening reference!  I started crying when I read this, Gary!  As I said before, you're a rare and beautiful man!
Title: Re: Blue Eyes (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 20, 2007, 12:17:46 am

..... and the perfect continuation of this wonderful scene.

“I only wanted to hold you in my arms one more time….”  This makes me cry, Jack is left feeling so hurt and confused.


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

I know, Susie!  This is one of my all-time favorite scenes.  When Jack ropes Ennis with such skillful dexterity and tried to pull him close, I lose it! :'(
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 20, 2007, 12:19:46 am
Toycoon and Marie,

the rope scene is one of my favorites, too, allthough it is so heartbreaking I sometimes can hardly stand it. The thought  of Ennis avoiding to look Jack in the eye for fear of losing control is sweet and sad. Sweet and sad, OMG how many times have we all used these words speaking about Ennis and Jack?

Dagi

 :'(  :'(  :'( It is the saddest thing I've ever seen committed to film!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 20, 2007, 12:20:52 am
So girls and guys, please tell me what you think about it. Do I get the permission to post your stories in such an "archive thread"? I offer to do the work, of course, so the existence of this thread would not affect you in any way if you don´t want it to do.

Dagi

You have my permission, certainly, Dagi!  :)
Title: Re: Blue Eyes (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 20, 2007, 12:23:36 am
Hi there Toycoon and littlewing,

Thanks for expounding on the rope scene.  I think out of the whole store it's that scene that's always troubled me the most.  That's because I think everything might have been different if the boys had it in them to say something directly to each other in those last few minutes they had up there on Brokeback.  Ennis obviously did not want to go down the mountain, but for whatever reason, Jack, who normally was the one who took the most risks, decided to play it cool.  He acted like their parting wasn't a big deal.  I think Ennis, who looked to Jack to lead them in this strange "queer" territory, felt betrayed when Jack insinuated that it wasn't sad that their time together was coming to an end.  I think maybe this is why Ennis was never able to buy into Jack's offer of a "sweet life" after that.

I can more fully appreciate why Jack decided to be playful there at the end thanks to your fanfics, but obviously throwing a rope around Ennis just then was the wrong thing to do.  Ennis wasn't in a playful mood.  He was hurting, and although he didn't know how to express his emotions in words, he gave every clue that he needed Jack to take charge just as he had done during the second tent scene.  But I guess Jack himself was too scared to reveal too much to pick up on those clues.

Jack did offer to meet Ennis at Brokeback the next summer, but Ennis didn't really hear it.  After the way Jack pretended he didn't care that they were being sent down early, and after the incident with the rope, Ennis no longer took him seriously.  He couldn't be sure that if he gave Jack his heart he would treasure it.

Gary

Gary, great post!  And you have said something here that I've never considered: Ennis didn't take Jack seriously because of his cavalier attitude when it was time to leave Brokeback!  This is very deep, Gary!  I'm forever in awe when it comes to BBM!  Thanks so much for this, Sweets!  ;)
Title: Re: Cabin Fever
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 20, 2007, 12:25:43 am
Marie, you are no "slouch" yourself.  Your stories are quite different from each other but they're all good.  I still haven't thought of anything to write.  I think I'm much better with "reality" than fiction. 

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_210.gif)

Merrily

Why thanks, Merr.  But give fanfic a try.  You may be plesantly surprised.  Just write what's in you heart.  I do!  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 20, 2007, 12:29:25 am
This is a drabble that I wrote...thought you all might enjoy it!



Brokeback Mountain
July, 1963

At last, it was hot.

Summer had finally come to the mountain and the heat of the day lingered into the evening. Jack pulled the blankets out of the tent and spread them by the campfire. “C’mere, cowboy,” he said, pulling Ennis by the hand. “I want ta love ya under the stars,” turning to look at the inky darkness overhead.

“Wha….?” said Ennis, his voice slurred.

Jack bit his tongue. The love word had slipped out. He hadn’t meant to say it, but he knew now that he was desperately, hopelessly in love with this man. Tall, lean, with bony wrists and long legs, he realized he adored everything about him from the way he smiled at him over a can of beans to the way he said “Huh?” when he was confused.

“C’mon,” said Jack softly, pushing Ennis back to the blanket, unbuttoning his shirt and sliding it off his shoulders. He ran his tongue down Ennis’s chest, stopping at the twirl of hair around his navel, unbuckling his belt.

“I think I’m drunk…” said Ennis, his head lolling back on the blanket.

How drunk, Ennis? thought Jack. Drunk enough that if I say ‘I love you,’ you won’t remember it in the morning? Drunk enough that if I say I want to be with you forever, you’ll say yes?

“Ennis, I…”

“Shhh, Jack, stop talkin’,” said Ennis, turning onto his side and pulling Jack in for a rough kiss. “Let’s get ta the lovin’.”

Jack froze, the word hanging in the air between them.

“Under the stars…”

Sublime, Mainewriter!  Thanks so much for writing this for us!  I can't even put into words how this sweet tale makes me feel.  Warm starry nights, loving under the stars?  It is just too perfect!  I'm trembling, really.  So romantic, so typical of our boys.  Gorgeous, gorgeous writing.  If you have a chance, please post something else for us.  I'm excited!  :)
Title: Under the Stars
Post by: Toycoon on June 20, 2007, 12:39:54 am

“Ennis, I…”

“Shhh, Jack, stop talkin’,” said Ennis, turning onto his side and pulling Jack in for a rough kiss. “Let’s get ta the lovin’.”

Jack froze, the word hanging in the air between them.

“Under the stars…”

Very nice, Leslie. Great story to read. Love it!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on June 20, 2007, 12:42:56 am
You have my permission, certainly, Dagi!  :)

You can post my stories, too, Dagi baby. I only ask that you post the stories in proper order, if possible. Such as "Blue Eyes", parts one and two.
Title: Re: Bobby (Part 1 of 2)
Post by: Toycoon on June 20, 2007, 12:46:18 am
:laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:

Sorry, my loves!  I'll have the conclusion up tomorrow.  :laugh:

I don't know that I can wait that long, littlewing1957. I'm an old dude, remember!
Title: Wrestlin'
Post by: Toycoon on June 20, 2007, 12:49:43 am
 There they were, shirtless, their backs smeared with dirt and sweat, muscles glistening in the warm sun, face to face, circling each other like mountain lions in a territorial stand off when Ennis barked, "C'mon rodeo, let's see what ya got! Lemme have it!"

With that, Jack rushed towards Ennis, stumbling on a gouge in the dirt and plowing straight into Ennis, who grabbed Jack in a headlock and shouting, "Say it ! Say it ! " forced him to the ground; the pressure of Ennis sprawled on top of him was at once enjoyable but excruciating to Jack, who bucked like a bull and managed to flip Ennis on his back.

Pinning down Ennis' arms above his head, Jack sitting squarely on Ennis' crotch, crawled up Ennis' body, planting sloppy, wet, 'puppy kisses' trailing up his shiny chest, neck and face finally boxing Ennis' ears with his knees; " I' ll show you what I got, cowboy! " he growled, unbuckling his trousers then Ennis hollered, " Uncle! "
Title: Exploring
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 20, 2007, 01:07:45 am
Brokeback days and nights were often slow and boring for two young men who were not yet twenty.  Herding sheep all day, bedding them down at night was not only back breaking work, but it was also repetitive, dull, only worthy of those who lack education or marketable skills.  But it was work, and the pay seemed decent.

To ease the mind numbing monotony, Jack and Ennis vowed to take a few hours off weekends to explore the enchanting Brokeback Mountain.  They discovered meadows where exotic looking flowers grew; streams and creeks that were unspoiled and undisturbed!  For almost 2 months Jack and Ennis wandered the mountain, hand-in-hand, to see what they could see.

One Saturday Jack led Ennis to a clearing that he discovered while commuting back up to the mountain.  Ennis almost lost his senses as he beheld the beauty.  He touched the fragrant flowers, inhaled the heady aromas.  The clearing looked like a fine place to set up a tent, spend the night.  Spending the night together was forbidden, certainly, but who was to know?  Ennis found that he loved this game of exploring.  And suddenly his mind was drawn to a time when he explored something very private, very tight and sweet.  As he prepared the tent, Ennis thought that if he played his cards right, he may be allowed to once again explore where no other man had gone before...
Title: Re: Wrestlin'
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 20, 2007, 01:09:13 am
There they were, shirtless, their backs smeared with dirt and sweat, muscles glistening in the warm sun, face to face, circling each other like mountain lions in a territorial stand off when Ennis barked, "C'mon rodeo, let's see what ya got! Lemme have it!"

With that, Jack rushed towards Ennis, stumbling on a gouge in the dirt and plowing straight into Ennis, who grabbed Jack in a headlock and shouting, "Say it ! Say it ! " forced him to the ground; the pressure of Ennis sprawled on top of him was at once enjoyable but excruciating to Jack, who bucked like a bull and managed to flip Ennis on his back.

Pinning down Ennis' arms above his head, Jack sitting squarely on Ennis' crotch, crawled up Ennis' body, planting sloppy, wet, 'puppy kisses' trailing up his shiny chest, neck and face finally boxing Ennis' ears with his knees; " I' ll show you what I got, cowboy! " he growled, unbuckling his trousers then Ennis hollered, " Uncle! "

Toycoon, great playful tale.  Is this new?
Title: Re: Wrestlin'
Post by: Toycoon on June 20, 2007, 01:29:25 am
Toycoon, great playful tale.  Is this new?

New to BetterMost. Actually, it's one of my earlier attempts at fanfic. It's Daphne's favorite story. She has a "wrasslin" fetish, I think!
Title: Re: Wrestlin'
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 20, 2007, 01:51:17 am
New to BetterMost. Actually, it's one of my earlier attempts at fanfic. It's Daphne's favorite story. She has a "wrasslin" fetish, I think!

Ah, yes, I thought so!  Thanks for letting me know, Sweets!  :)
Title: Re: Exploring
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 20, 2007, 01:51:52 am
Whoo Wee littlewing.  Very sweet with just that smigen of sexxxxxxyyyyy.  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/23/23_32_10.gif)

Thanks, Merr!  You're a doll!  :D
Title: Re: Bobby (Part 1 of 2)
Post by: Dagi on June 20, 2007, 05:59:13 am
Another Extreme AU.  This is what happens when I try to write while listening to the jazz stylings of Jeff Kashiwa!  :laugh:

Bobby Twist was turning out to be quite a musician.  Who knew?   He started playing sax at the tender age of 6 and never looked back.  Jack and Lureen encouraged him to take lessons, and Bobby found that the once a week sax lessons really helped him.  After all, he'll be a featured performer, with a solo in the school recital Saturday night.  Bobby belonged to the Childress High School jazz band; one of only 3 sax players.

Jack and Lureen were divorced when Bobby turned 14, and even though his dad lived in Wyoming with one Ennis Del Mar, he managed to make it to Childress to attend every one of Bobby’s performances.  Bobby was certainly expecting Jack to show up Saturday.  Lureen and her new husband couldn’t make it.  They were on an Alaskan cruise, leaving Bobby in the care of his maternal grandmother.

Saturday night and the auditorium was filled to capacity.  Bobby had his place among the other saxophone players, and as he scanned the crowd, he couldn’t find his dad.  The boy didn’t panic.  Jack had more than a half hour before the performance began to show up.  Ten more minutes and still no Jack..but wait!  Jack Twist walked through the auditorium door in haste.  He had a man with him: a fair haired, well built, almost absurdly handsome fellow.  Bobby realized that this person had to be Ennis Del Mar.  What a looker!  For a Rodeo fuckup, Bobby’s dad certainly had something on the ball to score a king like that!  Bobby never laid eyes on Ennis before, only knew what his mom and dad told him about Ennis Del Mar.  But Bobby would worry about that later……


Absurdly handsome, huh?? Well, your stories are absurdly good, then!!!!!  Can´t wait for it to be continued!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 20, 2007, 06:04:32 am
You can post my stories, too, Dagi baby. I only ask that you post the stories in proper order, if possible. Such as "Blue Eyes", parts one and two.

Sure, darlin´, that is one of the main reasons why I started all the trouble... thank you for the permission!
Title: Re: Wrestlin'
Post by: Dagi on June 20, 2007, 06:11:04 am
There they were, shirtless, their backs smeared with dirt and sweat, muscles glistening in the warm sun, face to face, circling each other like mountain lions in a territorial stand off when Ennis barked, "C'mon rodeo, let's see what ya got! Lemme have it!"

With that, Jack rushed towards Ennis, stumbling on a gouge in the dirt and plowing straight into Ennis, who grabbed Jack in a headlock and shouting, "Say it ! Say it ! " forced him to the ground; the pressure of Ennis sprawled on top of him was at once enjoyable but excruciating to Jack, who bucked like a bull and managed to flip Ennis on his back.

Pinning down Ennis' arms above his head, Jack sitting squarely on Ennis' crotch, crawled up Ennis' body, planting sloppy, wet, 'puppy kisses' trailing up his shiny chest, neck and face finally boxing Ennis' ears with his knees; " I' ll show you what I got, cowboy! " he growled, unbuckling his trousers then Ennis hollered, " Uncle! "

Aaahhh Toycoon, this is something only a man can discribe propperly, the sparkling eroticism of a fight ! And I can think of worse situations than  having the winner sitting on my chest unbuckling his belt :laugh:!!
Title: Re: Exploring
Post by: Dagi on June 20, 2007, 06:14:16 am
Brokeback days and nights were often slow and boring for two young men who were not yet twenty.  Herding sheep all day, bedding them down at night was not only back breaking work, but it was also repetitive, dull, only worthy of those who lack education or marketable skills.  But it was work, and the pay seemed decent.

To ease the mind numbing monotony, Jack and Ennis vowed to take a few hours off weekends to explore the enchanting Brokeback Mountain.  They discovered meadows where exotic looking flowers grew; streams and creeks that were unspoiled and undisturbed!  For almost 2 months Jack and Ennis wandered the mountain, hand-in-hand, to see what they could see.

One Saturday Jack led Ennis to a clearing that he discovered while commuting back up to the mountain.  Ennis almost lost his senses as he beheld the beauty.  He touched the fragrant flowers, inhaled the heady aromas.  The clearing looked like a fine place to set up a tent, spend the night.  Spending the night together was forbidden, certainly, but who was to know?  Ennis found that he loved this game of exploring.  And suddenly his mind was drawn to a time when he explored something very private, very tight and sweet.  As he prepared the tent, Ennis thought that if he played his cards right, he may be allowed to once again explore where no other man had gone before...


So sweet, I love to imagine them holding hands. And I love Ennis´ not being able to stop thinking of Jack´s body ;D!
Lovely, Marie!
Title: Re: Bobby (Part 1 of 2)
Post by: Dagi on June 20, 2007, 06:18:39 am
We're not giving up on you just yet Merr .... I have absolutely no talent with the english language ... there's nothing poetic about what I write .... I simply describe word for word what's going on in my head (there's some dirty stuff goin on in there I can tell you) (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_5_3.gif)

I'm going to keep on nagging you, you know that, you may as well just give in now!!!

Love Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Hey, Susie, I´ve been nagging on her for a while now, so thanks for your support!! I KNOW that she can do it, I mean, even I can write something down!

"can´t be worse than me, then..."... :D

Susie, btw, these Jack-pics under your posts are killing me. I can´t stop watching them, and they break my heart.

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: MaineWriter on June 20, 2007, 08:18:09 am
Morning all,

Here's a little something to start your day...



Don Wroe's Cabin
November, 1970


Ennis was shoving another log in the woodstove as Jack came into the cabin, his breath frosty. “Goddamn, Ennis, it must be 100 degrees in here! What the hell are ya doin’?” He shoved his mittens into his pocket as he took off his coat.

“That’s my plan,” said Ennis with a smile.

“What plan?”

“I got me a cabin with a bed, and a woodstove. The only thing missin’ in this picture is naked Jack. I get it hot enough in here and I’ll get that too.”

Jack laughed. “Naked Jack? What if I’m shy, don’t want ta be sittin’ here naked?”

“Ain’t gonna be sittin’, Jack,” said Ennis with a wink.

“Well, I think I know the cure for me bein’ shy.”

“What’s that?”

“Naked Ennis. C’mere, cowboy,” said Jack, with a crook of his finger.
Title: Re: Wrestlin'
Post by: Clyde-B on June 20, 2007, 08:51:23 am


  " I' ll show you what I got, cowboy! " he growled, unbuckling his trousers then Ennis hollered, " Uncle! "

Have a feelin he didn't holler it too loud.   ;D
Title: Re: Exploring
Post by: Clyde-B on June 20, 2007, 08:56:49 am
As he prepared the tent, Ennis thought that if he played his cards right, he may be allowed to once again explore where no other man had gone before...


Cue the Star Trek theme!  (I'm sorry, I just couldn't resist!)   ;D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on June 20, 2007, 09:04:55 am
Morning all,

Here's a little something to start your day...
 

A very pleasant way to start a day indeed!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on June 20, 2007, 09:11:13 am

I hope everyone's well, and enjoying the new forum.  Sorry for the worry, Susie.  I'm fine.

 

Did you see the "Spiceylife, where are you?" thread at IMDb?

I think Toycoon was ready to have your picture put on milk cartons.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on June 20, 2007, 09:19:56 am
  ... we all need a good spanking!!

 

Why do I have the feeling you'd like that?    ;D

P.S. I love your new sig with all the Jack pics!
Title: Re: Exploring
Post by: Toycoon on June 20, 2007, 09:30:46 am
Quote
Ennis thought that if he played his cards right, he may be allowed to once again explore where no other man had gone before...

That's a little nasty one, Miss Littlewing1957! What goin' on over there?
Title: Hot love
Post by: spiceylife on June 20, 2007, 09:34:20 am

Jack bent down, adjusting the blade heights on the lawn mower.  He poured in the gasoline and primed the engine twice, and then once more for good measure.  Even though the sun was still high in the sky, Jack always liked to mow his lawn in the blazing heat of the day, building up a raging thirst to quench later with that ice-cold beer, gulped down in one hit.  Working up a good sweat in the afternoon sun helped him stay in shape, kept his body toned and the dreaded paunch away.  He figured the single beer only undid a little of his hard work.

As he stood again, Jack suddenly felt eyes upon him, like he was being watched.  He glanced quickly at the sprawling log cabin, scanned the windows and saw nothing.  He waited a moment, checking the tall trees lining the driveway, and then the barn over to the far side of the house.  Nothing out of the ordinary caught his eye.  Jack shrugged slightly and tried to dismiss the feeling.

He bent again to give the starter cord a decent pull but the feeling came over him again, stronger this time.  He paused, uncertain.  Was someone watching him?  Jack felt it in his bones.  He squinted through the sun-glare reflecting sharply off the windows, but still saw no movement in the cabin.  And so Jack pulled the cord and the motor roared to life, the obtrusive sound startling a flock of disgruntled blackbirds out of the trees nearby.  He started forward, pushing the mower in front, up and down in as straight a line as Jack cared to make it.  Still he couldn’t shake off that strange feeling, but then, Jack being Jack, his mischievous, curious streak soon overcame any vague sense of uneasiness.

Well, if that’s the way they wanna play it, and they won’t show themselves, guess I’ll play right along then.  If I’m wrong and no-one’s around, no harm done.  But if I’m right… hell, I’ll give ‘em somethin’ worth lookin’ at, cos me mowing the friggin’ lawns sure ain’t very interesting to watch… and with that, Jack began to swing his hips, almost sashaying up and down his lawn, laughing at himself inside but managing to keep his game face on.  He swung his ass from side to side seductively as he followed the line, having some fun, foolin’ around, enjoying goofing off a little. 

As Jack moved to empty the overflowing catcher spilling grass out the side, he bent from his waist, legs wide apart, giving whoever might be out there a great view of his firm ass, and possibly his other wondrous assets, for the longest time.  He bent the same way to empty the grass into the compost, and then he bent the same way again, ass high and on display in the air, to replace the catcher.  And then he did it one more time, pretending to check the level of the gasoline, which he knew very well was still near full.

Jack grinned, thought he was hilarious and continued to mow up and down, refusing to look around again to catch whomever it was, wanting them to think he didn’t know they were there.  As trickles of sweat ran down his back and chest, Jack stripped off his tight black t-shirt, using it to wipe the moisture from his muscular, deeply tanned torso.  Jack did it slow and so, so sexy, for a better, hotter effect.  He soaked up the sweat from his back and neck, wanting whoever was watching to absorb some of the heat he was feeling right now, in more ways than one. 

Jack kept up with the mowing, but when the heat began to fry his head, even through a battered, black Resistol, he stopped the mower, sauntered over to the garden hose, turned it on and hosed himself down.  He flicked off his hat and tilted his head back, closing his eyes and savoring the cool water running through his hair, over his face, across his chest, down his taut stomach, soaking through tight jeans.  A trickle of water made its way down the crack of his buttocks, visible above his pants.  He shook the water out of his hair.  Jack felt sexy as hell.

He turned to face the house, licked his lips and smoothed a hand casually, deliberately over wet, dark nipples and hairy stomach, the hose hanging idly from his other hand.  Reaching down he brazenly palmed his dick through his jeans, rubbing the rapidly hardening flesh through blue denim.  Then Jack unzipped, sliding a wanton, snaking hand slowly down the front of his pants to free himself from black briefs, his dick out and hard against his flat stomach.  He looked down at it, sensually stroking its long, thick length, twisting his wrist a little over the head, moist with clear slick…the exhibitionist in him was enjoying this immensely.

damn, I’m so hot I even turn myself on

He tried not to laugh out loud at that, but a smile tugged at the corners of his mouth, working its way up to his eyes.  Jack couldn’t help himself.  For the finishing touch, he turned his back on the house and continued stroking himself in a slightly exaggerated, over-the-top fashion, legs set wide apart, making sure that his watcher knew exactly what they were missing out on, taunting them, laying down the challenge… 

Come out, come out, wherever you are...

Jack always loved a good tease.

Now this…this outta bring ‘em out of hiding…any minute n- 

Two strong arms grabbed Jack suddenly from behind, sliding their way around his waist, holding him firmly in place.  Jack was so engrossed in what he was doing he nearly jumped out of his skin.

“Shit!  You scared me…!”

A warm, naked chest pressed up against Jack’s slick back, pushing on him in all the right places.  Jack felt the hardness against his buttock, through two layers of denim.  Despite himself, he pushed back a little, grinding his ass gently into the other man’s groin.  Jack heard a soft, hot moan in his ear, so he pushed back a little more, keeping the slight, circular rhythm going.  He shifted slightly to capture the man’s hardness between his ass cheeks.

“You enjoy puttin’ on that show, Twist?”

The honeyed, sensual voice sent a shiver through Jack, goosebumps breaking out in spite of the boiling sun.

“What show?  I was just mowin’ the lawns, mister.  What’d you think I was doin’?”

A deep laugh rumbled in Jack’s ear, and he felt the vibration move through his chest and travel quickly to his dick, making it twitch in response.  A strong hand slid down Jack’s stomach, pulling Jack’s hand away from himself and taking its place.  Jack clenched his jaw, then groaned lustily under the firm stroking and the familiar heat building in his groin.  His head fell back to rest on the man’s shoulder and he dropped the garden hose, forgotten on the grass.

“I’m gonna have you, Jack.  You want me to take you here, or inside?”

Jack spun around and kissed Ennis hard and wet, their teeth colliding painfully but neither man really seeming to care.  Finally Jack pulled back, took Ennis’s face in both hands and gazed longingly into his eyes.

“Take me right here, Ennis.  Now.  I want you to…”

But even as Jack held Ennis’s face, he saw troubled brown eyes slide away from him to scan the horizon, the mountains, the road, searching for any sign of danger, real or imagined.  Jack was used to this, used to the fear after knowing Ennis for 24 years.  That low startle point was never going away for good.  He knew Ennis couldn’t help it, couldn’t control it completely, but Jack had learned ways to soothe this ancient fear, at least for a while.  He spoke gently, sincerely, to his old friend, still cradling Ennis’s face in loving hands. 

“Ennis.  Listen to me now.  The ranch hands have all gone for the weekend, right?  You sent ‘em on their way last night.  Won’t be back ‘til Monday.  We’re on our own spread here, way out in the middle a nowhere.  Anyone comes within five miles of us, we’ll hear their truck comin’, well before they see us.  And you know our dogs go crazy if anybody comes within ten miles a this place, Ennis.  And that’s plenty a time for you an’ me to finish what we’re doin’and pull our pants up, cowboy, and nobody’s none the wiser!”  He smiled big, reassuring, brushing Ennis’s hair back and hugging him close.  Ennis melted into Jack’s broad chest and they held each other tight.  Jack just whispered it’s alright, Ennis, it’s alright…we’re safe here and then Ennis must’ve remembered what Jack had started with that shameless, saucy display on the lawn, and the fire burned fierce in his eyes again.

Ennis lay down with Jack and took him right there, just like their first night up on Brokeback.  And still they held hands when they made love like this.  Jack thought they always would.  The passion was powerful and intense, the eternal love between them breathtaking…undying and strong.  And then Jack took Ennis, face to face, slow and sweet, just like the second night they had spent together in the little tent on the mountain, so long ago.  And then they lay in each other’s arms, under the oak tree, on the freshly mown grass, right by the sign on the gate…




One Shot Ranch
J. Twist and E. del Mar, proprietors


Title: Spiceylife- You returned!
Post by: Toycoon on June 20, 2007, 09:39:14 am
We were so worried, ya nut! Where ya' been huh? I left word with yer boss; left all them notes...

Well, I'm glad you're back, baby and you can post a four sentence fan-fic if you want to. You've been granted special permission!

I'll declare today as Spiceylife Freeform FanFic Day!
Title: Re: Hot love
Post by: Toycoon on June 20, 2007, 09:54:23 am
Whew! Whata was to start off the morning! Spiceylife, you are "nastiness in a bottle".
And you thought you wouldn't be able to navigate around these parts...sounds like yer doin' pretty good to me! Great to read your notoriously, IMDb banned, Christian spurned 'Spiceylife' dirty stories again. Yaahoo!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 20, 2007, 02:47:16 pm
Morning all,

Here's a little something to start your day...



"Ain’t gonna be sittin’, Jack,” said Ennis with a wink.


Leslie, you are one gorgeous writer! Stay with us, please, and write us a sequel!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 20, 2007, 03:13:09 pm
… damn, I’m so hot I even turn myself on…

He tried not to laugh out loud at that, but a smile tugged at the corners of his mouth, working its way up to his eyes.



Spiceylife, what a comeback! We always knew it would be worth waiting! I´m still breathless. This story is just PERFECT, contains everything we are craving.

OMG I´ll never again dare to post anything... :laugh:

Holy shit, what a story. Pheewww. (whiping the sweat off my forehead)

Dagi

Our life is goin´ta get waaaayyy more spicey! Our life is goin´ta get waaaayyy more spicey! Our life is goin´ta get waaaayyy more spicey! Our life is goin´ta get waaaayyy more spicey! Our life is goin´ta get waaaayyy more spicey! OurlLife is goin´ta get waaaayyy more spicey! Our life is goin´ta get waaaayyy more spicey! Our Life is goin´ta get waaaayyy more spicey! Our Life is goin´ta get waaaayyy more spicey! Our Life is goin´ta get waaaayyy more spicey!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: MaineWriter on June 20, 2007, 03:37:10 pm
Leslie, you are one gorgeous writer! Stay with us, please, and write us a sequel!

How about the very, very famous peanut butter blow job? Ha ha, does this bring back memories! From "A Love Born From Steel," chapter 2.


They ended up staying at the cabin for an extra day. The “celebratory fuck” turned into an ongoing event, and Ennis finally achieved his dream of “fuckin’ Jack’s brains out.” To be honest, at the end of it, Ennis wasn’t quite sure where his brains were either. Like a pair of horny teenagers, they lunged at each other with a ferocity born of passion, and a hunger born of years of repressed emotion. “I think we let the genie out of the bottle,” said Jack.

“I told you that lover fucks was gonna be diffr’nt,” replied Ennis. They screwed on the bed, on the floor, in the worn easy chair, and even on the porch, which happened when Ennis grabbed Jack from behind when Jack had gone out to piss. When they got hungry, Ennis made more peanut butter and jelly sandwiches. Ennis took a big bite of one and suddenly, Jack pulled him in for a kiss, and with his tongue, fished the bite of sandwich out of Ennis’s mouth. “What am I, the mama bird?” Ennis drawled.

“Yup, feedin’ her little baby chick,” said Jack, as he broke off another bite of sandwich and put it in Ennis’s mouth.

Jack found other uses for the peanut butter, too, slathering it on Ennis’s erect cock and then slowly, slowly, licking it off. Ennis groaned in pleasure, “Jack, please…”

“Hold on, cowboy, I gotta get it nice and clean,” said Jack, “I ain’t letting you shove no peanut butter up my ass.”

But even with the games, the playing, and the rough and tumble sex, they both knew that there was a difference—no longer just fucking, it was truly making love, and they felt as if they were trying to merge their bodies and souls into one as they pressed ever closer. Jack looked deep into Ennis’s eyes and saw an intensity and ardor he had never seen before. “Is that what love looks like?” he asked and Ennis pulled him close.

“I don’t know what it looks like, but I can sure as hell tell you what it feels like, and shit, it feels good. Rodeo, I love you,” he said.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 20, 2007, 03:44:25 pm
How about the very, very famous peanut butter blow job? Ha ha, does this bring back memories! From "A Love Born From Steel," chapter 2.



“I don’t know what it looks like, but I can sure as hell tell you what it feels like, and shit, it feels good. Rodeo, I love you,” he said.


Aaahhh you are killing me. And making me feel all ashamed of my miserable poor attempts to write fanfic :(

But, go on killing me please ;D

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: loneleeb3 on June 20, 2007, 06:05:39 pm
Quote
I love you,” he said.
That made my day!
I wish we could have heard that in the movie!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on June 20, 2007, 11:27:01 pm
Enough talk about dirty diapers! I can't take it anymore. I gotta change the subject quick! Uggh! :o
Title: Love or no love
Post by: Toycoon on June 20, 2007, 11:30:46 pm
Straddling Jack with his full weight, overpowering the first person he'd ever made love to only hours before, Ennis' hands tightened around Jack's throat; intensely confused aggression blinded Ennis so much, he could hardly see through his tears.

Jack struggled and kicked madly, kneeing Ennis squarely on the nose; Ennis wiped his bloodied nose with the sleeve of his shirt, stared at the smear and stood there gasping confounded.

Jack, startled by the sight of Ennis' blood, rushed over to comfort his lover; Ennis, who was taught to be nobody's fool under any circumstance, sucker punched Jack in the eye so hard, the sound echoed through the glen.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on June 21, 2007, 12:00:45 am
Dear God!  I've really opened up a can of worms.   :D

Can of worms?  No, more like a crock of shi....    :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 21, 2007, 12:27:31 am
Good Grief!  I'm so unsavvy on a proper forum, it's embarrassing!  I feel like a baby bird that's fallen out of the nest, flapping around all helpless.  This is very different to IMDb!

:D :D :D
 

Hey, this is fun!   :D  Okay, enough playing.  Hello, everyone!  I'm so happy to 'see' you all again.  I've been away too long this time. 

Toycoon, I'm so sorry if you were worried.  Hey, I always come back!  I always will.  Just real life issues come up sometimes and can't be put off any longer.  I'll explain more later in a PM, if I ever work out how to send one.  But I knew where you all were, and I'd always find you.  Man, I sound like Daniel Day Lewis/Hawkeye in The Last of the Mohicans.  "Stay alive.  I will find you!"

But if I'm ever away for so long again, I'll make sure I let you all know beforehand.  I am sorry.

Anyway, I want to post a story but I think there's a mighty big chance it's more than 3 sentences, Toycoon!  I'd say at least......4?  :D     

Spiceylife, my girl!  I am so glad to see you here, Little Darlin!  I knew you would come, and you didn't disappoint.  Welcome back, sweetie.  I hope everything is alright!  :)
Title: Re: Exploring
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 21, 2007, 12:29:41 am
Cue the Star Trek theme!  (I'm sorry, I just couldn't resist!)   ;D

I know Clyde!  I couldn't resist!  I've been a Star Trek fan since I was 10!
Title: Indigo Twist-Del Mar
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 21, 2007, 01:29:21 am
Susie, Merr, Dagi, Spiceylife, Malina, Daphne and MaineWriter, this one is for you.  I'm still working on Bobby part 2

Jack and Ennis were seated, side-by-side, on their beige leather couch.  Jack was reading a novel and Ennis watched the news on their wide screen TV.  Little Indigo was playing with a set of oversized blocks at their feet.  “Hear anything interestin’ at the new parent’s group meeting tonight?”  Ennis asked Jack as he watched Dan Rather.  “Yeah, as a matter of fact, I did!” Jack responded as he looked up from his book.  “Ms. Blankenship suggested we try a little something with Indigo.  She said it would help her immune system function properly, and would also promote bonding.”  Ennis had to smile at Jack’s terminology.  That man was a fast learner.  “Okay, what is this thing we should do?”  It was Ennis.  He turned off the TV and faced his lover.  Jack placed his book on the coffee table and reached for his daughter.  Little Indigo was dressed all in silk and bows, and she smelled like talcum powder and baby shampoo.  She looked fondly at Jack as he placed her on his knee.  “Hi there, little one!”  Jack cooed as he cuddled his child.  Indigo giggled and placed a small hand on Jack’s chin.  Ennis ticked her dimpled knee.  “Well,” Jack said, “Ms. Blankenship said to kiss Indigo on the cheek, give her a big wet one.  The enzymes in our saliva will deliver disease fighting substances to her system.  It’ll also convey affection, which is where the bonding part comes in.” 

Ennis smiled tenderly while he shook his head.  “But we already kiss her on the cheek. How is this somethin’ new?”  "Well, I was told that we should kiss her as often as we can....and don’t forget the sloppy part.”  Jack placed a wet kiss on Indigo’s cheek.  “See, like that!”  Indigo laughed and returned Jack’s kiss.  Ennis and Jack were amazed at Indigo’s rather precocious display of affection.  “Will you look at that?”  Ennis laughed as he took his child from Jack’s arms.  “Here, let me try.”  Ennis puckered and placed a tender kiss on his daughter’s cheek.  She squealed with pleasure.  “It seems Ms. Blankenship is onto somethin’ there!”  Ennis said as he rose to his feet.  He gently placed Indigo on Jack’s lap and left to start dinner.

While in the kitchen, Ennis listened to the sounds of Jack and Indigo playing on the living room floor.  Jack was making animal sounds and rolling on the carpet while Indigo laughed and whooped.  Ennis looked in on his family and felt a sudden pang.  He watched as Jack lifted a laughing Indigo into the air, only to lower her and plant another wet kiss on her cheek.  To think that he almost missed out on this!  After supper Jack and Ennis put their daughter to bed.  She was well fed, dry and content.  With his little baby taken care of, Ennis decided it was time to tend to his big baby..
Title: Re: Exploring
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 21, 2007, 01:40:37 am
I'll be thinking of this one the next time I go walking in the woods, littlewing.  And I just loved that little hint at the erotic.  So Jack is tight and sweet, huh?  I'll just bet he is.   ;)

Gary

 :laugh: :laugh:  Thanks, Gary!
Title: Re: Indigo Twist-Del Mar
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 21, 2007, 01:55:52 am
Aww  What a sweet and loving scene, littlewing.  And the sloppy, wet kisses reminded me of something my father used to do back when I was a toddler.  He'd come home for lunch, and since I hadn't started school yet, I was there, too.  And when he'd get ready to go back to work he'd put his face against mine and rub his whiskers against my cheek and then give me a raspberry.  He'd laugh at my annoyed expression as I wiped the spit off my face.

Thanks so much for the AU.  I might write my own fanfic from there one of these days.

Gary

P.S.  Is it true that sloppy, wet kisses are good for babies?

Ah, Gary!  Thanks so much for posting your sweet story.  I'm glad you have such fond memories of your dad.  I read in "First" magazine that kisses to a baby's cheek is good for them.  The sloppy part I made up!!  :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 21, 2007, 05:18:39 am
They were lying on the meadow, enjoying the warm sunset light.
Gary was stroking tenderly Dagi´s hair, her head resting in his lap. When she looked up, she could see Toycoon smiling, massaging Gary´s stiff shoulders, leaning with his back gainst Clyde´s back .
Dagi run her fingers through Susie´s wild brown hair since she was resting her head in Dagi´s lap, chatting without fullstops or commas about all the naughty things she would like to do once left alone with Jake, her words wrapping us up in a comforting sweet fog.
Marie was giving Susie a professional footrub, but every now and then she turned around to her laptop when she was overwhelmed by the inner urge to writewritewrite.
Merrily hugged us all with looong arms in a tight warm embrace.
Spiceylife kept running around us in circles, flattering like a babybird, singing <I feel like a virgin...posting for the very first time...!>

This was one odd dream, yet when I woke up, it felt  so real.

Dagi
Title: Re: Indigo Twist-Del Mar
Post by: Dagi on June 21, 2007, 05:22:21 am
Susie, Merr, Dagi, Spiceylife, Malina, Daphne and MaineWriter, this one is for you.  I'm still working on Bobby part 2

Jack and Ennis were seated, side-by-side, on their beige leather couch.  Jack was reading a novel and Ennis watched the news on their wide screen TV.  Little Indigo was playing with a set of oversized blocks at their feet.  “Hear anything interestin’ at the new parent’s group meeting tonight?”  Ennis asked Jack as he watched Dan Rather.  “Yeah, as a matter of fact, I did!” Jack responded as he looked up from his book.  “Ms. Blankenship suggested we try a little something with Indigo.  She said it would help her immune system function properly, and would also promote bonding.”  Ennis had to smile at Jack’s terminology.  That man was a fast learner.  “Okay, what is this thing we should do?”  It was Ennis.  He turned off the TV and faced his lover.  Jack placed his book on the coffee table and reached for his daughter.  Little Indigo was dressed all in silk and bows, and she smelled like talcum powder and baby shampoo.  She looked fondly at Jack as he placed her on his knee.  “Hi there, little one!”  Jack cooed as he cuddled his child.  Indigo giggled and placed a small hand on Jack’s chin.  Ennis ticked her dimpled knee.  “Well,” Jack said, “Ms. Blankenship said to kiss Indigo on the cheek, give her a big wet one.  The enzymes in our saliva will deliver disease fighting substances to her system.  It’ll also convey affection, which is where the bonding part comes in.” 

Ennis smiled tenderly while he shook his head.  “But we already kiss her on the cheek. How is this somethin’ new?”  "Well, I was told that we should kiss her as often as we can....and don’t forget the sloppy part.”  Jack placed a wet kiss on Indigo’s cheek.  “See, like that!”  Indigo laughed and returned Jack’s kiss.  Ennis and Jack were amazed at Indigo’s rather precocious display of affection.  “Will you look at that?”  Ennis laughed as he took his child from Jack’s arms.  “Here, let me try.”  Ennis puckered and placed a tender kiss on his daughter’s cheek.  She squealed with pleasure.  “It seems Ms. Blankenship is onto somethin’ there!”  Ennis said as he rose to his feet.  He gently placed Indigo on Jack’s lap and left to start dinner.

While in the kitchen, Ennis listened to the sounds of Jack and Indigo playing on the living room floor.  Jack was making animal sounds and rolling on the carpet while Indigo laughed and whooped.  Ennis looked in on his family and felt a sudden pang.  He watched as Jack lifted a laughing Indigo into the air, only to lower her and plant another wet kiss on her cheek.  To think that he almost missed out on this!  After supper Jack and Ennis put their daughter to bed.  She was well fed, dry and content.  With his little baby taken care of, Ennis decided it was time to tend to his big baby..



Oh Marie, that was sooo sweet! I can hear Indigo´s laughter! She sure has the best parents in the whole Alternate Universe! And how lovely to dedicate it to the mamies!
Title: Peeling Potatoes
Post by: Dagi on June 21, 2007, 05:27:26 am
Jack put the knife and the half peeled potatoe aside and went over to Ennis.
„Hey, cowboy, you must be tired after a whole day with the sheep, come on, let me do this for you.“
He kneeled down in front of his friend, took the soap out of his hand and let it slip through his
palms until they were covered with thick, creamy foam.
Ennis swallowed hard, stared transfixed at Jack´s hands, his half erect member speaking volumes.
Jack leaned in to plant a soft innocent kiss on those seductively parted lips, trying to distract his love for a moment.
„Jack, ohhgoodlord that feels...aaahhh..“ moaned Ennis, surprised and exited by the sensation of Jack´s hands the creamy foam making them slide softly over his shaft and the sensitive tip of his instantly hard member.
Ennis grabbed hold of Jack´s shoulder with one hand, burying his nails in the flesh, kissed him hungrily  groaning into his mouth while he stroked firmly over Jack´s manhood that filled his jeans threatening to burst the seams.
The all day pent-up lust had made him all too  ready for this.

   Up on the high pasture  the memory of Jack´s mouth sucking him hard, the
   thought of the    unmistakable moan he evoked when his  dick hit that sweet
   spot of lust inside Jack had more than once threatened to overwhelm him
   almost making him come without even touching himself; he had been
   lying there  on the meadow, eyes closed, breathing hard, biting his lips trying
   to somehow get a grip on himself for he did not want to waste his seed but
   spare it all for Jack as the most precious gift he could offer to the person
   that meant the world to him...

Now he felt a little ashamed that he was about to come after only a few determined strokes, but when he looked at Jack´s face he saw his own rapture reflected in his man´s half closed eyes filled with pure love and drunk with lust. The sight of those pink swollen lips wet with Ennis´ own saliva were more than he could stand.
„Let go, cowboy, let go, no need to hold back, ya won´t soil yer jeans this time...“ Jack whispered raucously. Once more he let his wet, slippery palm glide over Ennis´ tip, one more stroke to the base, and he felt Ennis´ cock  pumping when he came, his hips buckling, crying out loud, shooting his hot semen all over Jack´s lap.
Ennis leaned his forehead against his lover´s, both breathing fiercely, and after a glance at Jack´s jeans he mumbled shamefully: „I´ll wash them out for ya, sorry bud, couldn´t control myself...“
„Don´t worry, Ennis“, Jack answered with a broad grin, „perhaps you were too busy to notice, but I soiled them all by myself...!“
Title: Re: Introducting the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: louisev on June 21, 2007, 05:48:28 am
Hey Louise, what a  beautiful surprise! And you put us all to a shame (exept Toycoon, of course) sticking to the  3-sentence rule... sexy and sweet! Go on, Louise, the first thing to learn here is that we are never satisfied, we always want MOOORE!

it's a discipline I suppose, I have had plenty of opportunity to write in long form,and I tend to go on and on, so it is refreshing to write short things!

and if anyone wants to know what I write the rest of the time take a peek in the Creative Writing forum here on Bettermost where some of my completed (and not yet completed) books are.  I don't advert them as Brokeback fics any longer, however...!
Title: Re: peeling potatoes
Post by: Dagi on June 21, 2007, 06:32:51 am
Thank you, Susie. You are really sweet. How nice to hear that I could surprise you!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: MaineWriter on June 21, 2007, 07:20:22 am
Another one for your enjoyment...



“Well, I guess we’ll pack up in the mornin’, I’ll head ta Lightning Flat,” said Jack, poking at the embers of the campfire with a stick. “My daddy says a bunch a shingles blew off the roof in that last big storm we had. I’ll be spendin’ a few days helpin’ him fix that.”

“Wish I could go with ya,” said Ennis, softly. “We’d get the job done in no time.”

Jack looked at him, a myriad of answers running through his mind.

"Yeah, I’d love ta have ya help me…and have ya meet my folks. Mebbe then we could make this relationship real.”

“When ya say things like that, ya twist the knife, Ennis. You don’t know how much it hurts.”

“Bet yer better with a hammer n nails than I am, Ennis. You could do the whole job by yerself in half the time it’ll take me.”

“What’s stopping you? Get in the truck, let’s go.”

But all Jack said was, “Ya got yer girls, Ennis, and yer job. I know ya can’t take anymore time off.”

Ennis nodded. “Yeah. That’s it.”
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on June 21, 2007, 10:01:19 am
I'm sorry Clyde and everyone else who I have offended.  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_13_12v.gif)

Merrily


Who's offended?????

That's what babies do!

I just though it was funny that "a can of worms" was really " a crock of sh.."

Hmmmm  It's not funny if you have to explain it, is it?    :-\
Title: Re: Exploring
Post by: Clyde-B on June 21, 2007, 10:06:32 am
I know Clyde!  I couldn't resist!  I've been a Star Trek fan since I was 10!

Well, Marie, Your story had me hummin it!  Ummhmm.   ;D
Title: Re: Love or no love
Post by: Clyde-B on June 21, 2007, 11:05:52 am
Ouch!  That made my own eye hurt!  That is such a sad moment in their relationship.  Everything could have been different if they knew how to open up, and trusted one another with the truth.

Like I said yesterday, I think Ennis always held something back because of what happened in this scene.  I know that Ennis could have said something just as well as Jack, but even though Ennis didn't put his feelings into words, he did seem to make it clear that he was upset about going down the mountain early.  And I think Jack broke Ennis's heart that day when he pretended like he didn't care one way or the other.

Gary

I have always thought that when Jack saw Ennis in a funk sitting on that grassy knoll, he thought Ennis was upset about the money, after all that's what he'd said, and he'd already told Jack that this was "a one-shot thing we got goin here."  Even if it wasn't, nothin could be done about it Ennis was all set to get married. So he grabbed his rope because he knew that his lame attempts at being macho always made Ennis laugh.   And it worked for a while until their wrasslin and tumbling brought them into such intimate contact that Ennis had to push Jack away, push from his mind the loss, the hurt, the truth.

I still do the same thing.  There are times when I watch other people and it's almost like I can read their minds, tell exactly what they're thinking, but if I'm staring into the eyes of someone I love the words all disappear, the mind turns to mush, and I haven't a clue what to say.  If I say anything, it  comes out as  what seems to me this boring stream of inane drivel, so more often than not I say nothing.  I think Ennis may have had the same problem.
Title: Re: Asking For It (2)
Post by: loneleeb3 on June 21, 2007, 11:12:43 am

Yep!  With prayers and Bible verses on the back, and it'd be about a hundred an one and everybody sweatin like a pig and the reverend would just drone on and on and on... And everybody would be fannin and the harder you fanned, the hotter it got...
 
Thanks for remembering Gary!
I remeber those too!!!
Wouldn't be a tent revival or Camp Meetin without 'em! ;D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: loneleeb3 on June 21, 2007, 12:12:35 pm
Shit gary!
I don't even know who John is. I need to catch up.
But sure enough, I'm bawlin my eyes out like a girl!  ;D
Lord I can't wait to go back and read how we got to this point.

Ok, I read Susies story and know who John is.
Lord, this thread is killin me.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 21, 2007, 01:35:12 pm
What a loving scene, Dagi.  You make us sound like a family, and that gives me the warm fuzzies.   :)

To tell you the truth I've been having powerful waves of loneliness sweep over me this past month.  I'm an extremely shy person, and I've been living here in this little town in WV.  There hasn't been much opportunity for me to make friends.  I came back here to be with my parents, and now that their gone I feel like a fish out of water. 

I also feel kind of panicky sometimes, espeically at night.  I'm worried about all kinds of things.  I'm worried about finding an apartment.  I'm worried about passing the application process once I do find an apartment.  I'm worried about getting all my stuff from point A to point B.  I'm worried about running out of money.  I'm worried about making new friends once I'm resettled.  Will I find a way of doing that?  I'm worried about getting sick and having no one to call on.  I'm simply worried.

So thanks for the image of all of us together, accepting each other, supporting each other, expressing affection, and enjoying one another's company.

Gary

Gary I´d like to have your head resting  in my lap, and I would stroke your hair and whisper some comforting words into your ear and rock you softly until you are sound asleep and stop worrying for at least this night.
I wish I could do something else for you. Feel hugged, my dear.
Dagi
Title: Re: Peeling Potatoes
Post by: Dagi on June 21, 2007, 01:38:32 pm
...for he did not want to waste his seed but spare it all for Jack...

That Ennis is a conscientious fella, ain't he?  And it sure was nice of Jack to wash his buddy's sweaty privates after he'd been workin' hard all day.  Don't blame Ennis for not being able to hold back.  Good God, if Jack had done that to me I would have squirted him in the eye the first stroke.   :P

Supper sexy, Dagi.  Thanks for sharing it with us.

Gary

Thank you, Gary dearest!
Title: Re: Coming Down
Post by: Dagi on June 21, 2007, 01:45:23 pm
Coming Down

Getting back to the truck was taking less time than Ennis thought it would.....


“I’m so sorry, John.  Please don’t think that just ‘cause I remember Jack that I think any less of you.”

In a hushed tone John said with his lips close to Ennis’s ear, “You dumbass.  I love Jack, too.  I know he’s a part of you, so lovin’ you means lovin’ him.”

And loving Jack and Ennis means loving John :D!

That was very touching, Gary. No need to say that being happy with another man is what I wish for Ennis.

thank you!

Dagi
Title: Re: Love or no love
Post by: Dagi on June 21, 2007, 01:52:46 pm
  And it worked for a while until their wrasslin and tumbling brought them into such intimate contact that Ennis had to push Jack away, push from his mind the loss, the hurt, the truth.

At this moment I feel his loss, his hurt physically. It gives me gutcramps watching his helpless and violent attempt to ged rid of all this energy. And I sit there and sometimes I shout at the screen < tell him, say it that you don´t want to lose him, say it say it say it!>

 >:( >:( >:( :'( :'( :'(
Title: Re: New Friends - Part 3
Post by: Dagi on June 21, 2007, 02:07:27 pm


No more words were necessary; John held Ennis close, rocking him gently and humming a soft tune, it was time for Ennis to mourn.   




oh Susie I just read all four stories one after the other, and I loved them all! Your writing is so lovely, you capture Ennis so perfectly and moved me to tears when he was finally allowed to tell someone about his love for Jack. Imagine you have loved so much and are grieving so hard and are not allowed to tell anybody....impossible to imagine.
Thank you for reposting them!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 21, 2007, 02:09:53 pm
Another one for your enjoyment...



But all Jack said was, “Ya got yer girls, Ennis, and yer job. I know ya can’t take anymore time off.”

Ennis nodded. “Yeah. That’s it.”


So sad. And I bet Jack was biting his tongue after saying that.

Thank you, Leslie!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 21, 2007, 02:11:10 pm

Lord, this thread is killin me.


 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on June 21, 2007, 11:50:38 pm
They were lying on the meadow, enjoying the warm sunset light.
Gary was stroking tenderly Dagi´s hair, her head resting in his lap. When she looked up, she could see Toycoon smiling, massaging Gary´s stiff shoulders, leaning with his back gainst Clyde´s back .
Dagi run her fingers through Susie´s wild brown hair since she was resting her head in Dagi´s lap, chatting without fullstops or commas about all the naughty things she would like to do once left alone with Jake, her words wrapping us up in a comforting sweet fog.
Marie was giving Susie a professional footrub, but every now and then she turned around to her laptop when she was overwhelmed by the inner urge to writewritewrite.
Merrily hugged us all with looong arms in a tight warm embrace.
Spiceylife kept running around us in circles, flattering like a babybird, singing <I feel like a virgin...posting for the very first time...!>

This was one odd dream, yet when I woke up, it felt  so real.

Dagi

Crazy dream, Dagi! I love that image of all of us, so cozy and interlocked. I felt so at home here.

I read some thing on another thread that made me a little sad, though.
I don't want to get into it because I don't want to make any assumptions. But it doesn't seem right to me.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: MaineWriter on June 22, 2007, 08:06:47 am
Here's another little tidbit from the Lazy L universe...



Lazy L Farm
Quanah, TX
August 31, 1976

Ennis leaned against the wall of the bathroom, watching Jack as he rubbed shaving cream across his face, then picked up his razor. “I like watchin’ ya shave,” he commented.

“Ya do?”

Ennis nodded.

“What, ya think it’s sexy or somethin’?”

Ennis shrugged. “Mebbe sexy, I dunno, mebbe just a guy thing.”

Jack smiled at him as he continued to scrape the razor across his cheek. “A guy thing, huh?” he said, with a small wink. “Yer gay, En, y’know that.”

“Yeah, I know,” replied Ennis, looking down at his feet.

“Ever get a shave from a barber?”

Ennis shook his head no. “Ain’t got the money for that kind a stuff,” he said. “Besides, I ain’t sure I’d like some guy rubbin’ his hands all over my face.”

“Ya like me rubbin’ my hands on your face…”

“Yer diff’rent.”

“True.” Jack finished his shave, washing the remnants of cream off his face and rinsing his razor in the running water. “Who cut yer hair?”

Ennis looked puzzled. “What d’ya mean?”

“I mean, did ya go ta the barber for that?”

“Oh, no. My mama cut my hair, then my sister, then Alma.”

“But ya ain’t been with Alma for a while. Who’s been cuttin’ it now?”

“I tried ta do it myself,” said Ennis, his voice soft.

Jack stepped close to his lover and ran his fingers through his hair. “I could probably cut yer hair,” he said. “Not too hard ta learn ta do…”

Ennis didn’t say anything, just felt Jack’s touch and gentle caress at the base of his skull.

“Ain’t cuttin’ off the curls, though,” he said, leaning in for a kiss.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on June 22, 2007, 10:09:31 am
What a loving scene, Dagi.  You make us sound like a family, and that gives me the warm fuzzies.   :)

To tell you the truth I've been having powerful waves of loneliness sweep over me this past month.  I'm an extremely shy person, and I've been living here in this little town in WV.  There hasn't been much opportunity for me to make friends.  I came back here to be with my parents, and now that their gone I feel like a fish out of water. 

I also feel kind of panicky sometimes, espeically at night.  I'm worried about all kinds of things.  I'm worried about finding an apartment.  I'm worried about passing the application process once I do find an apartment.  I'm worried about getting all my stuff from point A to point B.  I'm worried about running out of money.  I'm worried about making new friends once I'm resettled.  Will I find a way of doing that?  I'm worried about getting sick and having no one to call on.  I'm simply worried.

So thanks for the image of all of us together, accepting each other, supporting each other, expressing affection, and enjoying one another's company.

Gary

Gary,

I had a rough week, myself, last Friday was the anniversary of my mom's death and Sunday was, of course, Father's day.  I'm just catching up on my reading now.

Listen bud, you may have trouble saying hi, but I think all of us here would be surprised if you had trouble making friends.  All you have to do is show them what you've showed us.  They'll be hooked.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 22, 2007, 01:55:55 pm
Crazy dream, Dagi! I love that image of all of us, so cozy and interlocked. I felt so at home here.

I read some thing on another thread that made me a little sad, though.
I don't want to get into it because I don't want to make any assumptions. But it doesn't seem right to me.

Hi Toycoon.
The dream stayed with me the whole day, and made me feel all fuzzy and warm. I do consider you part of my family.

Could you just explain to me what you meant with that last sentence?

Dagi
Title: Re: Coming Down
Post by: Dagi on June 22, 2007, 02:00:31 pm
Yeppers, that's me.   ;D  But don't ask Dagi.  She'll tell you it's her grandmother.   :P

Gary

Hey you good-looking fella, I want to see a bigger photo! Äh, please! How old did you say you are? You look like about 30. :D

So nice to see your face finally! I like it!
Title: Re: Love or no love
Post by: Dagi on June 22, 2007, 02:12:16 pm
intensely confused aggression blinded Ennis so much, he could hardly see through his tears.


oh Toycoon, you know Ennis so well. I feel this aggression, too, I want to punch Jack so hard...
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 22, 2007, 02:16:47 pm

Dagi, that was great - could visualize all of it.  I read Susie's comments too.  You had one heck of a dream there.  You got me right too - as I read everyone's stories, I just want to hug every one of you and hold you tight because you are extending my enjoyment of this wonderful movie - that the mainstream has obviously yet to honor.  6th Sense?  Lord of the Rings?  Saving Private Ryan?  None of those movies has the "content" or "relevence" that BBM has.  But since they are still honoring such movies as Gone with the Wind and Wizard of Oz, guess people would just rather live in the past or in a dream world.  Hurrumph.  I love you all though!

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/8/8_8_19.gif)

Merrily




Hi Merrily,

I didn´t have to think much about that, just wrote it down the way I could see it before my "inner eye". And I do not only see you hugging us, I can feel you hugging us.

Love, Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 22, 2007, 02:48:43 pm
Here's another little tidbit from the Lazy L universe...




“What, ya think it’s sexy or somethin’?”

Ennis shrugged. “Mebbe sexy, I dunno, mebbe just a guy thing.”

Jack smiled at him as he continued to scrape the razor across his cheek. “A guy thing, huh?” he said, with a small wink. “Yer gay, En, y’know that.”

“Yeah, I know,”  replied Ennis, looking down at his feet.



I just love it when you let the guys speak out loud all those things we never heard them say. I think I may have to write some "Love you" story by myself, just for me, ´cause I need so hard to hear it in my mind..
Title: Re: Coming Down
Post by: Dagi on June 22, 2007, 06:01:43 pm
Oh Dagi, sweetheart.  You tryin' to butter me up or somethin'?  Gosh, if I was there in Germany with ya, I'd clean your house and mow your lawn for that last statement.
(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_3_15.gif)

Gary

You are very welcome to my house at any time, sweetheart, but I´d expect you to stay a little after cleaning it and mowing the lawn (what makes me think of spiceylife´s story, btw ::) )for a chat and a beer or two. Geez, I really would LOVE to meet all of you guys in personal... And of course I was trying to butter you up ;D. It worked, huh?

Dagi
Title: Re: Indigo Twist-Del Mar
Post by: Clyde-B on June 22, 2007, 08:38:58 pm


  He watched as Jack lifted a laughing Indigo into the air, only to lower her and plant another wet kiss on her cheek.   

What a sweet idea Marie, thanks for this.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on June 22, 2007, 08:45:37 pm
They were lying on the meadow, enjoying the warm sunset light.
Gary was stroking tenderly Dagi´s hair, her head resting in his lap. When she looked up, she could see Toycoon smiling, massaging Gary´s stiff shoulders, leaning with his back gainst Clyde´s back .
Dagi run her fingers through Susie´s wild brown hair since she was resting her head in Dagi´s lap, chatting without fullstops or commas about all the naughty things she would like to do once left alone with Jake, her words wrapping us up in a comforting sweet fog.
Marie was giving Susie a professional footrub, but every now and then she turned around to her laptop when she was overwhelmed by the inner urge to writewritewrite.
Merrily hugged us all with looong arms in a tight warm embrace.
Spiceylife kept running around us in circles, flattering like a babybird, singing <I feel like a virgin...posting for the very first time...!>

This was one odd dream, yet when I woke up, it felt  so real.

Dagi

Was this meadow just outside Paris in the '20's?

Thanks for getting us all together Dagi.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 22, 2007, 10:07:27 pm
Morning all,

Here's a little something to start your day...



Don Wroe's Cabin
November, 1970


Ennis was shoving another log in the woodstove as Jack came into the cabin, his breath frosty. “Goddamn, Ennis, it must be 100 degrees in here! What the hell are ya doin’?” He shoved his mittens into his pocket as he took off his coat.

“That’s my plan,” said Ennis with a smile.

“What plan?”

“I got me a cabin with a bed, and a woodstove. The only thing missin’ in this picture is naked Jack. I get it hot enough in here and I’ll get that too.”

Jack laughed. “Naked Jack? What if I’m shy, don’t want ta be sittin’ here naked?”

“Ain’t gonna be sittin’, Jack,” said Ennis with a wink.

“Well, I think I know the cure for me bein’ shy.”

“What’s that?”

“Naked Ennis. C’mere, cowboy,” said Jack, with a crook of his finger.

Beautiful!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 22, 2007, 10:10:57 pm
They were lying on the meadow, enjoying the warm sunset light.
Gary was stroking tenderly Dagi´s hair, her head resting in his lap. When she looked up, she could see Toycoon smiling, massaging Gary´s stiff shoulders, leaning with his back gainst Clyde´s back .
Dagi run her fingers through Susie´s wild brown hair since she was resting her head in Dagi´s lap, chatting without fullstops or commas about all the naughty things she would like to do once left alone with Jake, her words wrapping us up in a comforting sweet fog.
Marie was giving Susie a professional footrub, but every now and then she turned around to her laptop when she was overwhelmed by the inner urge to writewritewrite.
Merrily hugged us all with looong arms in a tight warm embrace.
Spiceylife kept running around us in circles, flattering like a babybird, singing <I feel like a virgin...posting for the very first time...!>

This was one odd dream, yet when I woke up, it felt  so real.

Dagi

Dagi, this is so beautiful!  For once, I'm at a loss for words!  Thanks so much for this!  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 22, 2007, 10:14:09 pm

 and a soothing foot massage from littlewing .... heaven!!! 

Anytime, Susie my love!  I'm told I give the best foot massages in town!
Title: Re: New Friends - Part 2
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 22, 2007, 10:18:09 pm
They sat a while chewing the cud, enjoying the cool summers evening.  The guy’s name was John, never gotten married, worked as a ranch hand most of his life.  He was good company, laughing and chattering on, felt comfortable, somehow familiar.

 “My folks are still alive and kickin’.  ‘Course they haven’t spoke a word to me since they found out some twenty years ago”.

“What d’ya mean?  You got a disease or somethin’?”

John laughed, “Yeah that’s what my folks would call it.  No, nothin’ wrong with me friend, just queer is all, like you.”

Ennis was startled by this statement; on the one hand, how in the hell did this fella know? On the other, it was kinda nice being called “Friend” again.

John, seeing the look of shock on Ennis’ face continued quickly, “Oh, they swore I was the spawn of the devil and was goin’ straight to hell, tried to beat it out of me with prayer and a yard stick.”

Ennis looked sympathetically towards him.

“Come on bud, why d’you think I’m always smiling at ya, always sitting out here on the porch just in case ya come by? “

“I just thought that….” he cut himself short, what did it matter what he thought, he’d been wrong about everything else so far.

“Look Ennis, there’s a bar round here, a little ways out of town.  Just men like you and me, getting’ together, drinkin’ beer and shooting some pool.  We don’t get no bother; folk stay away, I don’t know… maybe they think they’ll catch it or somethin’.  Anyway, I’m drivin’ up there this weekend if you wanna go.”

“I dunno…” Ennis stood up, heading back to his trailer, wanted to turn tail and run, but something was holding him there; it was Jack, all he could think was What would Jack want me to do?.  He turned his head back and smiled, “Just getting’ us some more whiskey bud….. yeah, think I’ll come along for the ride.”




Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


This is a great AU piece, Susie!  I can certainly imagine Ennis developing a relationship with someone else - it was just a matter of time.  But I can't really imagine Ennis without Jack!  Lovely work, Sweets!  I really enjoyed reading through this!  ;)
Title: Re: Coming Down
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 22, 2007, 10:24:02 pm
Coming Down

Getting back to the truck was taking less time than Ennis thought it would.  He had deliberately slowed his pace in order to have a good look at everything.  Lord only knew when he’d get back to these parts, so he wanted to take it all in.  But that’s not the only reason he was lolling.  John was waiting down with the pickup and Ennis felt shy about meeting up with him.  But his reluctance dissolved when he got close enough to see John standing outside the cab smoking.

There was something in his stance that spoke of patience and forbearance, so Ennis quickened his step.  At a hundred feet they caught one another’s eye.  John threw his cigarette down and smiled warmly, and Ennis broke out in a trot trying to close the gap between them as fast as his bum knees would allow.  He did not stop to take one last look at the mountain behind him, but instead kept his gaze on the man he had loved for nearly 20 years now.  John’s balding head was covered by a straw Resistol, his handlebar mustache was in need of a trim, his paunch was covered by a warn, plaid shirt missing a button, and his Wranglers were getting too tight.  All of these details were familiar to Ennis, but still he never grew tired of looking at John.

The man kept his place.  He was allowing Ennis all the time he needed.  Two hours before Ennis had gotten out and said he was going the rest of the way alone, and John merely nodded his head.  Now Ennis was so anxious for their reunion that he squeezed the man into a bear hug as soon as his arms could reach.  John gently enfolded him and guided his face into the crook of his neck.

Once Ennis felt the embrace of his longtime friend and lover he began to sob.  He had made the rash decision to go on to the campsite he had shared with Jack Twist forty summers before because he was sure he would break down when he saw it.  But he had remained dry-eyed throughout, and it was only now that he could let go.

“I’m so sorry, John.  Please don’t think that just ‘cause I remember Jack that I think any less of you.”

In a hushed tone John said with his lips close to Ennis’s ear, “You dumbass.  I love Jack, too.  I know he’s a part of you, so lovin’ you means lovin’ him.”

Ennis with someone else?  Well, I guess it had to happen eventually.  And Gary, you described it beautifully!  At first I thought John would actually turn out to be Jack (some people say Jack's official name is John) but I could hope, couldn't I?  It is great to see another story by you, Gary!  This is a very well written tale, as usual. 

Oh, and Gary, you're beautiful!  ::)  You look exactly the way I pictured you.

I gotta post my pic here.  ;)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 22, 2007, 10:28:32 pm
What a loving scene, Dagi.  You make us sound like a family, and that gives me the warm fuzzies.   :)

To tell you the truth I've been having powerful waves of loneliness sweep over me this past month.  I'm an extremely shy person, and I've been living here in this little town in WV.  There hasn't been much opportunity for me to make friends.  I came back here to be with my parents, and now that their gone I feel like a fish out of water. 

I also feel kind of panicky sometimes, espeically at night.  I'm worried about all kinds of things.  I'm worried about finding an apartment.  I'm worried about passing the application process once I do find an apartment.  I'm worried about getting all my stuff from point A to point B.  I'm worried about running out of money.  I'm worried about making new friends once I'm resettled.  Will I find a way of doing that?  I'm worried about getting sick and having no one to call on.  I'm simply worried.

So thanks for the image of all of us together, accepting each other, supporting each other, expressing affection, and enjoying one another's company.

Gary

Gary, honey, don't worry.  I'm so sorry you're feeling this way!  A man like you will not have to worry about making new friends!  You'll find a lot of people who will care about you, and will take care OF you!  I'm certain of this.  If you need to talk, please send me a PM.  I'm here for you, Baby!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 22, 2007, 10:33:16 pm
Here's another little tidbit from the Lazy L universe...



Lazy L Farm
Quanah, TX
August 31, 1976

Ennis leaned against the wall of the bathroom, watching Jack as he rubbed shaving cream across his face, then picked up his razor. “I like watchin’ ya shave,” he commented.

“Ya do?”

Ennis nodded.

“What, ya think it’s sexy or somethin’?”

Ennis shrugged. “Mebbe sexy, I dunno, mebbe just a guy thing.”

Jack smiled at him as he continued to scrape the razor across his cheek. “A guy thing, huh?” he said, with a small wink. “Yer gay, En, y’know that.”

“Yeah, I know,” replied Ennis, looking down at his feet.

“Ever get a shave from a barber?”

Ennis shook his head no. “Ain’t got the money for that kind a stuff,” he said. “Besides, I ain’t sure I’d like some guy rubbin’ his hands all over my face.”

“Ya like me rubbin’ my hands on your face…”

“Yer diff’rent.”

“True.” Jack finished his shave, washing the remnants of cream off his face and rinsing his razor in the running water. “Who cut yer hair?”

Ennis looked puzzled. “What d’ya mean?”

“I mean, did ya go ta the barber for that?”

“Oh, no. My mama cut my hair, then my sister, then Alma.”

“But ya ain’t been with Alma for a while. Who’s been cuttin’ it now?”

“I tried ta do it myself,” said Ennis, his voice soft.

Jack stepped close to his lover and ran his fingers through his hair. “I could probably cut yer hair,” he said. “Not too hard ta learn ta do…”

Ennis didn’t say anything, just felt Jack’s touch and gentle caress at the base of his skull.

“Ain’t cuttin’ off the curls, though,” he said, leaning in for a kiss.


MaineWriter, this is very playful, sweet and romantic!  Just the way I like my fic, and just like Ennis and Jack!  Thanks so much for this!  :)
Title: Re: Indigo Twist-Del Mar
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 22, 2007, 10:35:13 pm
What a sweet idea Marie, thanks for this.

Thank you, Clyde!  I laughed, I cried as I wrote this!
Title: Hot and Cold
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 22, 2007, 11:03:05 pm
Ennis Del Mar carried Jack Twist in his arms all the way back to camp.  Camp was a good 2 miles from the hiking trail, but Ennis never considered dropping Jack on his feet.  Never.  Jack was just fine an hour ago, but he became lethargic and weak as he climbed the small hill that led to..well..Ennis and Jack were exploring again, just like the old days up on Brokeback.

Jack collapsed in Ennis’ arms, and Ennis cried out in terror!  He scooped Jack up, carried him like he was a child to a log by the side of the trail.  Ennis placed his cheek against Jack’s forehead.  He was burning up!  “It looks like you’ve come down with a bug, Rodeo!”  Ennis whispered against Jack’s hair.  Jack wavered and leaned up against his lover.  “I’m sorry, friend.”  Jack's breathing was labored.  “I was fine until just a few minutes ago.  Can we head back to camp?  I’m sure I’ll be back to my old self in the mornin’.”  Ennis nodded and picked Jack up as though we were light as a feather. 

“Let me down, Friend, I can walk!”  But Ennis ignored his lover’s protestations and continued walking with Jack in his arms.  Jack knew better than to continue objecting.  When Ennis had a mind to do something, he could be right stubborn!  Jack laid his head against Ennis' neck and passed out.  When they reached camp, Ennis gently lowered Jack to the ground and climbed into the tent.  He prepared the bedroll, and climbed back out to collect his lover.  When Jack was safely inside their small “bed” Ennis considered what to do.  He rubbed Jack’s forehead, played with the hair lying there.  He decided to give Jack a few aspirin, and if he wasn’t better in a few hours, he would go down to town for help.  Ennis decided to turn in for the night, without a fire, without supper.  He wanted to be near Jack, be there for him!  It was cold outside, the bedroll was hot, but Ennis cuddled Jack into his arms and held him.  He rocked him gently, placing soft kisses on top of his head.  He would stay there with Jack until the end of time, if need be…
Title: Re: Love or no love
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 22, 2007, 11:19:40 pm
Straddling Jack with his full weight, overpowering the first person he'd ever made love to only hours before, Ennis' hands tightened around Jack's throat; intensely confused aggression blinded Ennis so much, he could hardly see through his tears.

Jack struggled and kicked madly, kneeing Ennis squarely on the nose; Ennis wiped his bloodied nose with the sleeve of his shirt, stared at the smear and stood there gasping confounded.

Jack, startled by the sight of Ennis' blood, rushed over to comfort his lover; Ennis, who was taught to be nobody's fool under any circumstance, sucker punched Jack in the eye so hard, the sound echoed through the glen.

So sad, and exciting all at once.  Very nice, Toycoon!
Title: Cooking Stew
Post by: Toycoon on June 22, 2007, 11:35:36 pm
Unaccustomed to much kindness, Ennis was slightly taken aback by Jack's offer to cook them elk an' taters stew; Ennis, sitting on the ground, watched as Jack peeled potato after potato, carefully balancing the peeled spuds in a tin plate on a rock next to him, beside his feet.

"Dang, what is it 'bout that feller?" thought Ennis dreamily searching Jack's handsome profile for answers; Ennis stared at Jack's lips noting the way the corners turned up mischievously, curling around the cigarette he was smoking, next his eyes traveled over the surface of Jacks' angular jaw with the bristly hair growing on it, finally he poured over Jack's long delicate eyelashes sweeping over his ruddy cheeks.

Ennis could not restrain himself any longer and grabbed Jack by the shoulders smothering Jack's face with brutal kisses; Jack dropped the potato and it slammed on the edge of the tin plate sending the peeled potatoes flying. The knife flipped up in the air and landed on it's point, sticking straight up in the ground.
Title: Cooking Stew (part2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 23, 2007, 12:13:05 am
“What has gotten into you, Ennis Del Mar?”  Jack asked as he pulled away from Ennis’ attacks.  He wiped at his wet mouth, laughing all the while.  “You keep that up, this meal will never get finished.  The stew won’t cook itself!”  But Ennis reached for him all over again.  He pulled Jack into a strong embrace, kissed him on the mouth, his cheeks.

Jack was trying to control his breathing.  He had never seen Ennis is such a state.  It was at once exciting and frightening.  Jack allowed himself to be hugged and kissed.  After all, he loved Ennis Del Mar and always craved the feel of his lips. 

“Okay, Cowboy?”  Jack asked as Ennis came up for air.  Ennis chuckled softly as he released his lover.  “Look En, I got all the ingredients ready for a good meal.  Elk, potatoes!  And the fire is ready.  This elk stew will be real good."  Ennis winked at reached for Jack's zipper.  “You got anything else good for me to eat, Rodeo?”
Title: Re: Cooking Stew (Part 1 and Part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 23, 2007, 01:40:49 am
Toycoon and littlewing, 

What a tag team you guys are getting to be.  You are two people thinking with the same brain!

Great story, I love it.

Merrily

I love our tag team moments.  I find it so much fun to add to Toycoon's stories!  He is such a good writer!
Title: Re: Cooking Stew (Part 1 and Part 2)
Post by: Toycoon on June 23, 2007, 03:02:55 am
I love our tag team moments.  I find it so much fun to add to Toycoon's stories!  He is such a good writer!

Gosh, thanks cowgirls! You make me feel so good. You all do.
I was having a mopey spell for a while there. I don't like to feel that way, not even for a short time.
I have too much to be thankful for to be unhappy for long.

I love the tag team moments, too, littlewing1957. It really is fun!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 23, 2007, 06:52:52 am
Dagi, this is so beautiful!  For once, I'm at a loss for words!  Thanks so much for this!  :)

thanks, littlewing and Clyde, it came from my heart.
Title: Re: Peeling Potatoes
Post by: Clyde-B on June 23, 2007, 09:30:29 am
Dagi,

Usually don't feel I need a cigarette after either peeling potatoes or reading a story!   :o

(and I quit quite some time ago!)

Now where did I put that church fan?
Title: Re: New Friends - Part 4
Post by: Clyde-B on June 23, 2007, 09:53:07 am
Susie,

Thanks for giving Ennis somebody new.
I think Jack would have approved too.
Title: Re: Peeling Potatoes
Post by: Dagi on June 23, 2007, 10:09:26 am
Dagi,

Usually don't feel I need a cigarette after either peeling potatoes or reading a story!   :o

(and I quit quite some time ago!)

Now where did I put that church fan?

 :laugh: "Glad you got a kick out a it!" But don´t you dare blame me for starting to smoke again :o
Title: Re: Coming Down
Post by: Clyde-B on June 23, 2007, 10:13:51 am

In a hushed tone John said with his lips close to Ennis’s ear, “You dumbass.  I love Jack, too.  I know he’s a part of you, so lovin’ you means lovin’ him.”

Gary,

I really like tthe way you included the idea that "it was all those that came before that finally brought you to me."
Title: Re: New Friends - Part 3
Post by: Clyde-B on June 23, 2007, 12:10:41 pm
Thank you Dagi honey.  I remember reading a thread over at IMDb about life after Jack, and someone said that they would like Ennis to scatter Jack's ashes and die along side him up on Brokeback Mountain.  And I just thought "NOOOOOOOOOO", that's the worst possible way for the story to end.  Jack would have wanted Ennis to find someone who truly loves him and to be happy.

This isn't my alternate universe, this is how I think the story continues ... and I'm sticking to it!!! (and I love Gary's final chapter ... it's the perfect ending!)


Love Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif) 

I agree Susie,

The theme of the sequel could be how to carry on after your true love dies and how to face your own personal truth under extreme conditions.

Do you realize we've never had a successful mainstream story with a gay hero?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Front-Ranger on June 23, 2007, 12:25:13 pm
What about "Little Miss Sunshine?"
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on June 23, 2007, 12:27:20 pm
Thanks so much for the encouragement, Clyde.  It helps a lot, believe me.

Sorry to hear you had a rough week last week.  It must have been hard having the anniversary of your mother's death come on the heels of Father's day.  Parents can drive us crazy when they're alive, but it sure feels strange when they're no longer with us.

Gary

I'm glad to see you survived it, too.
Title: Re: Hot and Cold
Post by: Clyde-B on June 23, 2007, 12:36:33 pm
Ennis Del Mar carried Jack Twist in his arms all the way back to camp.  Camp was a good 2 miles from the hiking trail, but Ennis never considered dropping Jack on his feet.  Never.  Jack was just fine an hour ago, but he became lethargic and weak as he climbed the small hill that led to..well..Ennis and Jack were exploring again, just like the old days up on Brokeback.

Jack collapsed in Ennis’ arms, and Ennis cried out in terror!  He scooped Jack up, carried him like he was a child to a log by the side of the trail.  Ennis placed his cheek against Jack’s forehead.  He was burning up!  “It looks like you’ve come down with a bug, Rodeo!”  Ennis whispered against Jack’s hair.  Jack wavered and leaned up against his lover.  “I’m sorry, friend.”  Jack's breathing was labored.  “I was fine until just a few minutes ago.  Can we head back to camp?  I’m sure I’ll be back to my old self in the mornin’.”  Ennis nodded and picked Jack up as though we were light as a feather. 

“Let me down, Friend, I can walk!”  But Ennis ignored his lover’s protestations and continued walking with Jack in his arms.  Jack knew better than to continue objecting.  When Ennis had a mind to do something, he could be right stubborn!  Jack laid his head against Ennis' neck and passed out.  When they reached camp, Ennis gently lowered Jack to the ground and climbed into the tent.  He prepared the bedroll, and climbed back out to collect his lover.  When Jack was safely inside their small “bed” Ennis considered what to do.  He rubbed Jack’s forehead, played with the hair lying there.  He decided to give Jack a few aspirin, and if he wasn’t better in a few hours, he would go down to town for help.  Ennis decided to turn in for the night, without a fire, without supper.  He wanted to be near Jack, be there for him!  It was cold outside, the bedroll was hot, but Ennis cuddled Jack into his arms and held him.  He rocked him gently, placing soft kisses on top of his head.  He would stay there with Jack until the end of time, if need be…


Don't you dare go killing him off again!  Once was bad enough.  I couldn't take it twice.
Title: Re: Cooking Stew (part2)
Post by: Clyde-B on June 23, 2007, 12:44:20 pm
“What has gotten into you, Ennis Del Mar?”  Jack asked as he pulled away from Ennis’ attacks.  He wiped at his wet mouth, laughing all the while.  “You keep that up, this meal will never get finished.  The stew won’t cook itself!”  But Ennis reached for him all over again.  He pulled Jack into a strong embrace, kissed him on the mouth, his cheeks.

Jack was trying to control his breathing.  He had never seen Ennis is such a state.  It was at once exciting and frightening.  Jack allowed himself to be hugged and kissed.  After all, he loved Ennis Del Mar and always craved the feel of his lips. 

“Okay, Cowboy?”  Jack asked as Ennis came up for air.  Ennis chuckled softly as he released his lover.  “Look En, I got all the ingredients ready for a good meal.  Elk, potatoes!  And the fire is ready.  This elk stew will be real good."  Ennis winked at reached for Jack's zipper.  “You got anything else good for me to eat, Rodeo?”


Why, whatever could he be suggesting?   :o   *fan fan fan*  My, but it's hot in here.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on June 23, 2007, 01:17:03 pm
Hey kids-
Here's a little bit of shameless, self-promotion. I just started a new thread I hope y'all like, Brokeback Mountain Craft Corner.

Here's the link: http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,10857.0/topicseen.html (http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,10857.0/topicseen.html)

Let me know what you think, huh?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on June 23, 2007, 01:23:51 pm
Thanks so much for the encouragement, littlewing.  I appreciate it.  I vacillate between being afraid I'm about to homeless and completely alone, to anticipating the biggist adventure of my life. I'm sure I'll start to feel much better once I find a suitable place and move in. it's just going to take some time and effort is all.  

Gary

Hello Gary, boy-
You're not really on the verge of homelessness are you? What is goin' on there? You can't stay at your daddy's place?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on June 23, 2007, 01:47:49 pm
Hi there Toycoon,

This house belongs to my uncle, and he's going to sell it.  It's time for me to move on anyway.  There's nothing keeping me in WV anymore.  I want to go someplace more liberal, so I'm thinking about California.  Merced in particular because it's a small town and the rent isn't too high, and it's right beside Yosemite.  I love hiking and camping, so that's a big plus.  And Merced isn't far from San Francisco, so that's another mark in its favor.  It also has a Mediterranean climate with cool, wet winters, and hot dry summers.  Because of my head surgeries I have trouble keeping my balance on ice and snow, so escaping winters here in the mountain state would be wonderful.

Gary

California!? That's where I live. It would be great to have another quality Brokie on this side of the country. Merr lives in Southern Cali, too, ya'know. Hey, we could have our own reunion!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on June 23, 2007, 02:14:53 pm
That would be great, Toycoon.  Maybe we could all go on a picnic together in Yosemite Valley in the shade of El Capitan.

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_1_71.gif)

Gary

Take lots of pictures!!!!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 23, 2007, 03:13:09 pm
That would be great, Toycoon.  Maybe we could all go on a picnic together in Yosemite Valley in the shade of El Capitan.

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_1_71.gif)

Gary

That sounds so great, you have to move there, so that we can visit you! Hiking in Yosemite, yeehaaaw! My next holiday will bring me in the US, that´s for sure.
Title: Re: Coming Down
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 23, 2007, 03:42:03 pm
I'm so glad you liked it, littlewing.  As for John, I have to give Susie credit for creating him and his name.  I borrowed the John from her story and imagined what life must be like for him and Ennis 20 years later.

So you like my picture, huh?  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_1_12.gif)

Is this where we start talking about IMing and webcams?  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_6_213.gif)

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_11_6.gif)

Thanks so much, littlewing.

Gary

P.S.  And yes, you have to post your pic.  I'd love to see ya!

Thanks, Gary.  I hope to have my pic up by tonight, tomorrow latest!
Title: Re: Hot and Cold
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 23, 2007, 03:43:10 pm
Don't you dare go killing him off again!  Once was bad enough.  I couldn't take it twice.

Never!  Oh, I couldn't!!
Title: Re: Hot and Cold
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 23, 2007, 06:39:23 pm
OMG!  Littewing, the Ennis in your story is just the kind of guy I need to have around to make me feel safe and secure.   :)  What a loving story this is.  Thanks for sharing it!

Gary

Thank you, Gary Honey!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 23, 2007, 06:41:25 pm
Thanks so much for the encouragement, littlewing.  I appreciate it.  I vacillate between being afraid I'm about to homeless and completely alone, to anticipating the biggist adventure of my life.  I'm sure I'll start to feel much better once I find a suitable place and move in.  It's just going to take some time and effort is all.  

Gary

Oh yeah, you'll be just fine.  A man like you will find everything he wants and needs out of life.  You just wait!  :)
Title: Re: Cooking Stew (part2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 23, 2007, 06:44:33 pm
Oh, littewing, I'm with Ennis.  Forget about the stew.  There are other things cookin'.   ;)

Gary

 :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:
Title: Re: Hot and Cold
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 23, 2007, 06:46:02 pm
Oh my dear lord!  For one horrifying moment I thought you were going to kill Jack off ... again!  I just couldn't take that!
I hope he's going to be OK ... you'll have to write a follow up to comfort me!!

Lovely but sad .... and worrying.

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)   

Oh no, I would never kill Jack off.  I'll work on a second installment!  Thanks, Susie!  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 23, 2007, 06:47:59 pm
Oooooh littlewing .... nice photo .... you are one sexy lady!!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif) 


yeeehaaaww, finally! You are beautiful, littlewing! now almost everybody here on this thread has added a photo to the name. So nice.

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 23, 2007, 06:49:03 pm
That would be great, Toycoon.  Maybe we could all go on a picnic together in Yosemite Valley in the shade of El Capitan.

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_1_71.gif)

Gary

I'm in!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 23, 2007, 06:50:59 pm
Oooooh littlewing .... nice photo .... you are one sexy lady!!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif) 

Oh!  Why thank you, Susie!  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 23, 2007, 06:53:29 pm

yeeehaaaww, finally! You are beautiful, littlewing! now almost everybody here on this thread has added a photo to the name. So nice.



Thanks, Dagi.  It is so good to put a face to the name, isn't it?  Now if we can just get a pic of Clyde.  And I want to see TOoP.  We already know what that hottie Toycoon looks like.  Oh, and Malina and Daphne.  I hope they see fit to post a pic, as well.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on June 23, 2007, 07:24:13 pm
Littlewing1957, you are a sexy, dirty mama!

I forgot that you were on the West Coast, too. I smell a Brokeback West Coast picnic cookin' soon!
Well, Gary, it's all settled. You'll have to move to California now.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 24, 2007, 12:13:26 am
Wow!  Great picture, littlewing!   :D  You look like a movie star.  It's so nice to be able to put a face to the name.  Thanks for posting the pic.

Gary

Thanks, Sugar!  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 24, 2007, 12:14:59 am
Hi littlewing, nice to see that you put your picture here.  Very pretty and sexy girl.  Send me a PM and tell me what's been going on with you and your daughter. (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/173.gif)

Merrily

Thanks, Merr!  I'll try to send you a PM tomorrow.  I've been meaning to do just that.  By the way, didn't you have your lovely picture here as well?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 24, 2007, 12:16:15 am
Littlewing1957, you are a sexy, dirty mama!

I forgot that you were on the West Coast, too. I smell a Brokeback West Coast picnic cookin' soon!
Well, Gary, it's all settled. You'll have to move to California now.

Oh Toycoon, you are too sweet!  You know we should have a Cali BBQ!  I've been expecting Gary's arrival!  I can't wait to meet him in person!  He's such a Sweetie!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on June 24, 2007, 02:29:50 am
If ya'll are going--I'm going. Who's gonna put me up? I can sleep on the couch.  LOL.

Littlewing---what a beautiful picture!!!


Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on June 24, 2007, 10:40:18 am
OMG  That is a wonderful idea littlewing.  Is Gary really planning to come out here? Toycoon is kind of in between us!? 

In between us?
Sounds cozy, like a Toycoon sandwich!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on June 24, 2007, 10:57:12 am
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Since you're so tall, Toycoon, you could be like one of those extra long wieners that stick outside the bun.

Oh Gary, you say the sweetest things!

By the way, Shasta, that is a lovely picture of you. You're a fine specimen of womanhood.
Title: Fast
Post by: Toycoon on June 24, 2007, 11:01:41 am
1967. Jack's fast of one thousand, four hundred and sixty days was almost over.

17 Miles-Riverton, WY. Jack floored the gas pedal. He couldn't get there fast enough.

Jack's heart was beating so fast as he climbed out of the old pick-up truck; Jack's heart stopped when he saw Ennis Del Mar appear at the top of the staircase landing and call his name.
Title: Re: Cooking Stew (part2)
Post by: Clyde-B on June 24, 2007, 11:23:50 am
You're so funny, Clyde.   ;D 

And I'm so glad you liked Coming Down.  Thanks for commenting on it.  And I think you're right about loving, or at least accepting the people in your lover's past.  If you fall for someone who has been around a while, of course they're going to have a past, so you may as well accept it because your lover can't do away with his past, at least not without a lobotomy.   :-\  (And speaking as someone who has had head surgery, I wouldn't reccomend that.   :P  )

Gary

Just tryin to put a smile on your avatar!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on June 24, 2007, 11:29:33 am
Clyde, you can come with us!   :)  What state are you from?

Gary

Confusion mostly!!!

I'm in the northern Midwest, but my accent is from southern Indiana/Kentucky.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on June 24, 2007, 11:38:41 am
Thanks, Dagi.  It is so good to put a face to the name, isn't it?  Now if we can just get a pic of Clyde.  And I want to see TOoP.  We already know what that hottie Toycoon looks like.  Oh, and Malina and Daphne.  I hope they see fit to post a pic, as well.

You don't believe I'm in my avatar picture?  I'm the one with the blue eyes.

Title: Re: Fast
Post by: Dagi on June 24, 2007, 02:03:14 pm
1967. Jack's fast of one thousand, four hundred and sixty days was almost over.

17 Miles-Riverton, WY. Jack floored the gas pedal. He couldn't get there fast enough.

Jack's heart was beating so fast as he climbed out of the old pick-up truck; Jack's heart stopped when he saw Ennis Del Mar appear at the top of the staircase landing and call his name.

No matter how often I´m confronted with this scene, my heart always starts to race. How was he able to survive 1460 days without his love, I wonder.

And I wonder how long will we have to wait for your avatar picture? ;)

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 24, 2007, 02:05:41 pm

Ah Gary .... do you hate me now??  The problem is with my own insecurities, nothing anyone else says!  <img



Susie, you are so pretty, why the hell are you insecure??
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 24, 2007, 02:53:48 pm
The archive is up-to-date! pheeewww :P
Title: The "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Archive
Post by: Toycoon on June 24, 2007, 05:32:51 pm
The archive is up-to-date! pheeewww :P

Thank you, Dagi. The archive makes it easy for folks to read the threads without our usual banter.  ;)

Personally, I love our banter! And of course, I love you too, sweetheart.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on June 24, 2007, 06:31:34 pm
   The problem is with my own insecurities, nothing anyone else says!  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_7_104v.gif)

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)
 

Well let's see, you have two gorgeous daughters.  The older one looks like she could break hearts if she wanted to and the younger  one  grins like she may be planning on it when she gets older.  You have a son and a husband that, according to another post won't leave you alone.
You have all those curls, a beautiful sunny smile and write like an angel.

Uh... What was it you were insecure about again?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on June 24, 2007, 07:15:44 pm
Well, I think my age might eliminate me from that adventure, but very interesting idea.  Let me know when the details are set.  Unfortunately, my idea of "roughing it" is a Holiday Inn Express. (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/29/29_4_22.gif)(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/7/7_2_106.gif)  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/29/29_4_22.gif)

 :laugh: ;D :laugh: (Same here, Merr.) :P
The picnic sounds fun!!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 24, 2007, 09:14:47 pm
If ya'll are going--I'm going. Who's gonna put me up? I can sleep on the couch.  LOL.

Littlewing---what a beautiful picture!!!




Don't worry, Shasta, we'll find a place for you.  And thanks for your kind words about my pic. 
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 24, 2007, 09:19:36 pm
:laugh: ;D :laugh: (Same here, Merr.) :P
The picnic sounds fun!!

Ah, there you are, Shasta!  You look amazing, honey!  Thanks for posting! :)
Title: Riverton is Such a Lonely, Lonely Town
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 24, 2007, 10:08:29 pm
Ennis Del Mar walked home from the bus depot loaded down with his personal belongings.  He just finished 4 weeks up near the Tetons for the round-up, and caught the first bus he could catch back to Riverton.  He was walking a bit slower than usual, realizing that his small trailer would not be very welcoming.  There was no one to welcome him home.   Ennis passed by the grocers and debated whether or not he should go in and buy a few groceries.  He was out of most things before he even left for the long job, but he shrugged and decided against it.  He could always go shopping tomorrow.

Ennis flinched as he walked the last block or so to his trailer park.  The streets were dry, rather dusty, devoid of any signs of life, save a small white dog running across the road with its tail between its legs.  The loneliness was even more profound than last night at the ranch when he woke up in a sweat muttering, “I want my man!  I want my man!”  Ennis cringed at the memory.  He hoped no one heard him!

Safely inside his small home, Ennis placed his gear in the proper places and sat at his small table.  He reached for the postcard that Jack Twist sent him only last month, accepting his invitation to meet up at Don Wroe’s cabin.  The trip was only 3 weeks away, and just the thought of being with Jack seemed to chase away the lonely feelings.  He prepared himself a simple dinner of franks and beans, all the while holding the postcard like a treasure.  He ate with a light heart and began to smile as he thought of his trip and the laughter, the love, and the tenderness that awaited him.


Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 24, 2007, 10:09:08 pm
The archive is up-to-date! pheeewww :P

Wonderful, Dagi!  I gotta check it out!  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 24, 2007, 10:10:52 pm
Thanks Gary.  Wow, that hotel looks wonderful, but probably cost prohibitive, hunh.  Maybe they gave tours like the Hotel Del Coronaro in San Diego?  Just not in winter though as I have NO winter clothes anymore and don't want to buy any either. 

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_7_17.gif)

Merrily

Merr, perhaps we can go in together on a suite or something.  Although I enjoy camping, I can't do a lot of hiking, as I have deformed feet.  TMI?  :laugh:
Title: Re: Riverton is Such a Lonely, Lonely Town
Post by: Toycoon on June 24, 2007, 10:28:30 pm
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Safely inside his small home, Ennis placed his gear in the proper places and sat at his small table.  He reached for the postcard that Jack Twist sent him only last month, accepting his invitation to meet up at Don Wroe’s cabin.  The trip was only 3 weeks away, and just the thought of being with Jack seemed to chase away the lonely feelings.  He prepared himself a simple dinner of franks and beans, all the while holding the postcard like a treasure.  He ate with a light heart and began to smile as he thought of his trip and the laughter, the love, and the tenderness that awaited him.

Ya know, Littlewing1957, I haven't been teary eyed over our film in months. I especially like the detail of Ennis holding the postcard 'like a treasure' through his simple dinner. This little story is painfully lonely and rather sad. Brilliant!
Title: He Held Me!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 24, 2007, 11:07:21 pm
Ennis didn’t mind being alone when he had such fond memories of Jack Twist to sustain him.  He was awake, in bed, when he had an urge to touch himself, down there.  In his mind and his heart he remembered Jack, and how Jack liked to hold him.  Jack held him even when they didn’t necessarily feel like having sex.  Jack loved Ennis’ sacks of sugar, often palming them, gently rubbing, feeling them relax and expand in his large hands.

Ennis remembered sitting by the fire, or on the couch, side by side, as Jack held him.  He often became very forward – freeing Ennis from his jeans, palming his sacks, holding them like they were balls of gold.  Ennis didn’t mind this one bit!  Didn’t mind that the very act of holding him, caressing him, was becoming Jack’s favorite past-time. 

And suddenly Ennis saw the image of Jack bending down, taking one ball into his mouth, releasing it and gulping the other.  Ennis could see Jack gently mouthed the small treasures, tasting, licking, moaning until the vibrations almost forced Ennis to lose his senses.  Ennis couldn’t wait to be with Jack again.  Couldn’t wait to be held.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on June 25, 2007, 01:46:08 am
Q: What state are you from?  A: Confusion mostly!

Now that's funny, Clyde.   ;D

So you spent some of your formative years in Kentucky?  You do realize that West Virginia is just on the other side of Kentucky, right?  We're almost neighbors.  Sort of like the Hatfields and the McCoys.  ...oh wait, that might be a bad analogy.   :P

Gary

I hope we're not like the Hatfields and the McCoys!

Actually it was southern Indiana (Madison to be exact)  My people had already moved from Kentucky.  But it was right across the Ohio river from Louisville.  Boat races, Hanging Rock, Clifty Falls State Park, climbing the Devil's Backbone.  I still have a lot of cousins down there.
Title: Re: Riverton is Such a Lonely, Lonely Town
Post by: Clyde-B on June 25, 2007, 01:52:58 am
Ennis Del Mar walked home from the bus depot loaded down with his personal belongings.  He just finished 4 weeks up near the Tetons for the round-up, and caught the first bus he could catch back to Riverton.  He was walking a bit slower than usual, realizing that his small trailer would not be very welcoming.  There was no one to welcome him home.   Ennis passed by the grocers and debated whether or not he should go in and buy a few groceries.  He was out of most things before he even left for the long job, but he shrugged and decided against it.  He could always go shopping tomorrow.

Ennis flinched as he walked the last block or so to his trailer park.  The streets were dry, rather dusty, devoid of any signs of life, save a small white dog running across the road with its tail between its legs.  The loneliness was even more profound than last night at the ranch when he woke up in a sweat muttering, “I want my man!  I want my man!”  Ennis cringed at the memory.  He hoped no one heard him!

Safely inside his small home, Ennis placed his gear in the proper places and sat at his small table.  He reached for the postcard that Jack Twist sent him only last month, accepting his invitation to meet up at Don Wroe’s cabin.  The trip was only 3 weeks away, and just the thought of being with Jack seemed to chase away the lonely feelings.  He prepared himself a simple dinner of franks and beans, all the while holding the postcard like a treasure.  He ate with a light heart and began to smile as he thought of his trip and the laughter, the love, and the tenderness that awaited him.




Marie,

Ya got me again. I'm a sucker for sweet stories.

And look at that picture of yours!  Sexy and seductive, that deep deep red is sure your color!
Title: Re: The "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Archive
Post by: Dagi on June 25, 2007, 05:37:10 am
Thank you, Dagi. The archive makes it easy for folks to read the threads without our usual banter.  ;)

Personally, I love our banter! And of course, I love you too, sweetheart.

I love our "banter", too. And you, honey! (Could we possibly make a really big sandwich?)
Title: Re: Riverton is Such a Lonely, Lonely Town
Post by: Dagi on June 25, 2007, 05:40:52 am
Ennis Del Mar walked home from the bus depot loaded down with his personal belongings.  He just finished 4 weeks up near the Tetons for the round-up, and caught the first bus he could catch back to Riverton.  He was walking a bit slower than usual, realizing that his small trailer would not be very welcoming.  There was no one to welcome him home.   Ennis passed by the grocers and debated whether or not he should go in and buy a few groceries.  He was out of most things before he even left for the long job, but he shrugged and decided against it.  He could always go shopping tomorrow.

Ennis flinched as he walked the last block or so to his trailer park.  The streets were dry, rather dusty, devoid of any signs of life, save a small white dog running across the road with its tail between its legs.  The loneliness was even more profound than last night at the ranch when he woke up in a sweat muttering, “I want my man!  I want my man!”  Ennis cringed at the memory.  He hoped no one heard him!

Safely inside his small home, Ennis placed his gear in the proper places and sat at his small table.  He reached for the postcard that Jack Twist sent him only last month, accepting his invitation to meet up at Don Wroe’s cabin.  The trip was only 3 weeks away, and just the thought of being with Jack seemed to chase away the lonely feelings.  He prepared himself a simple dinner of franks and beans, all the while holding the postcard like a treasure.  He ate with a light heart and began to smile as he thought of his trip and the laughter, the love, and the tenderness that awaited him.





How can a story be so sad and so beautiful at the same time? “I want my man!  I want my man!”  Ennis cringed at the memory. :'( :'(

Thank you, honey.
Title: Re: He Held Me!
Post by: Dagi on June 25, 2007, 05:45:15 am
......  Jack held him even when they didn’t necessarily feel like having sex.  Jack loved Ennis’ sacks of sugar, often palming them, gently rubbing, feeling them relax and expand in his large hands.

..... Ennis couldn’t wait to be with Jack again.  Couldn’t wait to be held.


Marie, that was so sweet and tender and hot. I personally can´t imagine how he could do one day without his love.

Thank you for writing and sharing, you are nurturing our hearts.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 25, 2007, 05:51:03 am
Hey Clyde and Dagi and Gary,

I read this yesterday Clyde, but I was a bit too overwhelmed to reply, you made me cry ... honest to God!!.  You're all so sweet and supportive ... and that's why I love being here so much and why I love you guys!  Sometimes when I'm feeling a bit down, it's very comforting to get a "big hug" from  you all ....  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_2_104.gif) .... or a much needed kick up the bum! .... (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_1_102v.gif)

Love Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

ps. So I write like an angel hunh???  You'd better not read my next one then ....  or you'll see why that guy over on IMDb called me the Spawn of Satan!!!

Susie, we all need a kick up the bum every once in a while...but really, there is no reason at all to be insecure in your case. But I know that this is not a question of reasons or no reasons, it´s illogical (?), that´s what makes it so difficult.

Just say a word if you need a hug, love!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 25, 2007, 05:54:28 am
You're doing a brilliant job Dagi....  it's amazing to see just how many stories we've written!  If you need any help, just let me know ... I could do a page or two for you honey.


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

It´s okay, thanks for the offer, wasn´t that much work, I did it in two evenings, and now the up-dating is going to be easy...as littlewing and Toycoon are the only ones who are writing lately ;).
Title: Re: Fourteen Years Uncensored (NC-17)
Post by: Dagi on June 25, 2007, 06:06:50 am
NC-17

I originally posted this story on it's own thread, but it made me feel a little vulnerable as it's so personal to me .... and it's pretty graphic!  So I'm posting it here on our lovely J+E thread where I feel safe...... Please don't read on if you're easily shocked!  Sorry toycoon ... I've gone ever so slightly over the three sentence rule!


Fourteen Years Uncensored 


Just blows me away. Susie, YOU are hot. Your husband is one lucky guy ;D :o ;D :o ;D :o ;D

You can feel save here, we love it graphic   :laugh:

Thank you for being courageous!

Dagi
Title: Re: Fourteen Years Uncensored (NC-17)
Post by: Toycoon on June 25, 2007, 09:34:36 am
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He removed Ennis’s jeans slowly and deliberately, then stood up and stepped out of his own. Both men were shaking, dicks hard and throbbing, almost painful.

Susiebell, I believe this is the story that officially crowned you," The Devil's Daughter". Well done, Lucy-fur!
Title: A Letter
Post by: Dagi on June 25, 2007, 01:19:50 pm
A Letter

After coming back from Lightning Flat Ennis opened his closet and took out an envelope he had been hiding there, " To Jack Twist, Childress, Texas, in case of my death".

He took out the letter: " My dearest Jack. Maybe I´ll never say it out loud, but I want you to know that I love you. I´ve been loving you since the night you let me inside of you and I will love you till the day I die, with body and soul, with all my heart. Yours, Ennis"

He crumpled the letter and burnt it.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on June 25, 2007, 01:25:32 pm
Very nice, Dagi. So sad, too.   :'(
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 25, 2007, 01:32:40 pm
Very nice, Dagi. So sad, too.   :'(

Thank you, Shasta. Yes, it is sad, and I didn´t want to write a sad one again, but I was just lying in bed with my sick little cowboy and these three sentences popped up in my mind and wanted to be written down that same moment. Maybe I shouldn´t have watched BBM again. :'(
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on June 25, 2007, 01:36:57 pm
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Maybe I shouldn´t have watched BBM again.

Nope--you did good! You should always watch BBM again and again.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 25, 2007, 01:46:59 pm
Nope--you did good! You should always watch BBM again and again.

i know I will. Can´t do a week without it. :(
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on June 25, 2007, 03:25:59 pm
  that'll learn ya.   

Gary

Geez, I miss hearin stuff like that...
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on June 25, 2007, 03:31:05 pm
  that guy over on IMDb called me the Spawn of Satan!!!

Bring it on!!!    :laugh:
Title: Re: A Letter
Post by: Dagi on June 25, 2007, 03:45:43 pm
Oh Dagi.  That is so sad, but at least he knew he loved Jack.  I think Jack knew it too.  You don't have to always say it for it to be known, but it is nice to here.(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_9_16.gif)

Hope you had a great day.  I'll see you soon I hope.

Merrily


(You mean it is nice to hear ;)) (finally I can correct somebody :laugh:)) I´m mean, I know.

Sent you a PM, honey!
Title: Re: A Letter
Post by: Dagi on June 25, 2007, 03:50:29 pm
It is so very sad that Ennis couldn't own what he felt.  And your little story illustrates that beautifully. 

Gary

P.S.  Laying in bed with your sick little cowboy?  Whatever could you mean?

My son has fever and I put him to bed. I was lying in bed with him. He is actually a Taurus, not a cowboy. But he speaks about as much as Ennis, so he´s my little cowboy.

Thank you, Gary.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 25, 2007, 03:52:49 pm
But now I look like the bad guy.  Everybody is wondering what I could have said that brought on this bend of insecurity.    :'(

I didn't say nothin' bad, damn it!   >:(


Yeah, hell, what did you say, you meeeaaaan guy ,........HUH?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 25, 2007, 03:57:36 pm
I have only one request concerning the archive: Could you please write the title of your stories right on top of them, not only in the subject line, that would help me a lot. Oh, and if you want to help me even more, you can write "by" and your name behind the title.

Thank you!
Dagi
Title: Re: Fourteen Years Uncensored (NC-17) by Susie
Post by: Dagi on June 25, 2007, 03:59:52 pm
Wow Susie!

You allowed me to read this a while back, but it's only gotten better with age.  I think the first time I read it I was simply shocked by your awareness of what men can get up to together, but this time I picked up on the subtleties.  Jack is hopeful, as he always is, and Ennis, true to his character, is withdrawn and slightly paranoid.  And since they can't simply talk using words the other will understand, they communicate through their sex and passion.

I loved that Jack was on top this time.  And boy was that sexy and dirty when he put his tongue...   :P  Well, I won't go into it.   :-X  Let's just say the thoughts of Jack doing that to Ennis, and then climbing up and driving the point home so to speak, sends me into a tailspin.  (No pun intended.   ;D ) 

I don't think I realized the first time I read this, but I picked up clues reading it just now that this was the night before they had their big fight by the lake.  And if I'm right, that means this was the last time they made love.  That is just devastating, Susie.

This is a beautiful story of love and lust, of lost opportunities and time slipping away.

Gary

Gary, you are one amazing guy.
Title: Re: Riverton is Such a Lonely, Lonely Town
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 25, 2007, 04:03:03 pm
Ya know, Littlewing1957, I haven't been teary eyed over our film in months. I especially like the detail of Ennis holding the postcard 'like a treasure' through his simple dinner. This little story is painfully lonely and rather sad. Brilliant!

Thanks, Toycoon!
Title: Re: A Letter
Post by: Dagi on June 25, 2007, 04:31:24 pm
Awww  Hope the little guy is okay now.

Gary

P.S.  I didn't know you were a mother.

I have two sons: Moritz (4y/o) and Till (2y/o). Yeah, I´m one a the dirty mamas. He is sleeping now, with high fever.
I´ll go to bed now, too, who knows what the night may bring, not too much sleep probably.

Good night, have a nice party here, girls and guys! I envy you. Fuck that damn time differece. Fuck it. Sorry.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on June 25, 2007, 06:48:46 pm
That was delightful, Susie!!! I love a little dog, ya know.    ;D
Title: Re: Fourteen Years Uncensored (NC-17)
Post by: Clyde-B on June 25, 2007, 08:15:55 pm
 Oh Susie, I really like stories that combine sex with real emotion.  Makes it all the hotter   *fan fan fan*

I particularly like it sweet and hot.  (Just like I like my men!  ;D)

Sure glad they didn't notice that Boyscout troop in the bushes with their fieldglasses working on their Wilderness Survival merit badges.
Would a kind a spoiled it.
Title: Re: A Letter
Post by: Clyde-B on June 25, 2007, 08:20:30 pm
A Letter

After coming back from Lightning Flat Ennis opened his closet and took out an envelope he had been hiding there, " To Jack Twist, Childress, Texas, in case of my death".

He took out the letter: " My dearest Jack. Maybe I´ll never say it out loud, but I want you to know that I love you. I´ve been loving you since the night you let me inside of you and I will love you till the day I die, with body and soul, with all my heart. Yours, Ennis"

He crumpled the letter and burnt it.

Oh Dagi, So sad!
Title: Re: Let's go for a walk
Post by: Clyde-B on June 25, 2007, 08:27:00 pm

Let’s go for a walk by Susie


“Jack, come over here!”  Jack didn’t need to be told twice, bounding into the kitchen and throwing himself into Ennis’ open arms, affectionately licking a sloppy wet line from the base of his neck, all the way up the side of his cheek.

Alma walked in, stony faced, “Get out of my kitchen!” she ordered, collecting the dirty dishes and dropping them, with a clatter, into the sink.

“Come on Jack, time to go!” Jack followed Ennis into the living room and snuggled up with him on the couch.

“You make me so happy, little darlin’, d’ya know that?” Ennis smiled.  Jack responded by nuzzling his neck, breathing softly in his ear, and eagerly wagging his tail.

“Get that damn dog off my couch, Ennis Del Mar!” came an angry voice from the other room.

“Let’s go for a walk, bud” Ennis lead the way into the hall, grabbed the lead from it’s hook, and with Jack close at his heel, headed out of the apartment.





I was going to call this one “Puppy Love” but I thought that would give it away …. Hehehe!


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)   


Ya got me!  I thought our boys were being really rude there for a minute.
Title: Re: Field Trip
Post by: Clyde-B on June 25, 2007, 08:35:41 pm



 “Miss Parker, what’re they doin’?”

“Nothing Billy”, she searched frantically for some kind of explanation, “ I expect they’re just practicing bull ridin’…. now hurry along…. scoot!”

 

 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
Title: Re: A Letter
Post by: Toycoon on June 25, 2007, 08:48:07 pm
A Letter

After coming back from Lightning Flat Ennis opened his closet and took out an envelope he had been hiding there, " To Jack Twist, Childress, Texas, in case of my death".

He took out the letter: " My dearest Jack. Maybe I´ll never say it out loud, but I want you to know that I love you. I´ve been loving you since the night you let me inside of you and I will love you till the day I die, with body and soul, with all my heart. Yours, Ennis"

He crumpled the letter and burnt it.

Dearest Dagi,
I missed this story earlier. It is strikingly beautiful and very heartfelt. I don't know how we continue to pull these gut wrenching tales every day.

Yours,
Toycoon
Title: Re: Let's go for a walk
Post by: Toycoon on June 25, 2007, 11:22:30 pm
Quote
  Jack responded by nuzzling his neck, breathing softly in his ear, and eagerly wagging his tail.

You are so damn silly, Susiebell! Down girl, down!
Title: Never
Post by: Toycoon on June 25, 2007, 11:37:06 pm
There was a look in Jack's eyes that Ennis never saw a man give another man before; it made Ennis' entire body throb with lust.

Cigarettes, whiskey and desire; it was a taste in his mouth he'd never had before.

Ennis tore at Jack's clothes, felt his hairy body, held his face, stroked his firm flesh, never denying this was what he'd always wanted and secretly craved.
Title: Re: He Held Me!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 26, 2007, 12:25:44 am
Hi littlewing.  Guess Toycoon and I saw your last story from much different viewpoints.  This one is really a HOT one but also lonely too. I really identify with Ennis.

Merrily

Thanks, Merr.  I, too, identify with Ennis.  I know this man!
Title: Re: Riverton is Such a Lonely, Lonely Town
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 26, 2007, 12:27:22 am
Marie,

Ya got me again. I'm a sucker for sweet stories.

And look at that picture of yours!  Sexy and seductive, that deep deep red is sure your color!

Why thank you, Clyde.  I just love red.  And when can we see a picture of you?  I'm dying to see what you look like.  No pressure, though  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 26, 2007, 12:29:11 am
Hey Clyde and Dagi and Gary,

I read this yesterday Clyde, but I was a bit too overwhelmed to reply, you made me cry ... honest to God!!.  You're all so sweet and supportive ... and that's why I love being here so much and why I love you guys!  Sometimes when I'm feeling a bit down, it's very comforting to get a "big hug" from  you all ....  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_2_104.gif) .... or a much needed kick up the bum! .... (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_1_102v.gif)

Love Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

ps. So I write like an angel hunh???  You'd better not read my next one then ....  or you'll see why that guy over on IMDb called me the Spawn of Satan!!!

Ah my sweet SusieBell!  I don't know what I would do without you!  I love being here with you and for you!  :-*
Title: Re: Riverton is Such a Lonely, Lonely Town
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 26, 2007, 12:29:58 am
Oh littlewing ... now look what you've gone and done ..  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_9_9.gif)... so sad, with just a glimmer of hope ... lovely!

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Thanks, Susie!  :)
Title: Re: Fourteen Years Uncensored (NC-17)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 26, 2007, 12:34:51 am
NC-17

I originally posted this story on it's own thread, but it made me feel a little vulnerable as it's so personal to me .... and it's pretty graphic!  So I'm posting it here on our lovely J+E thread where I feel safe...... Please don't read on if you're easily shocked!  Sorry toycoon ... I've gone ever so slightly over the three sentence rule!



Fourteen Years Uncensored




Susie, this is just as brilliant as I remember.  I have a copy saved to my hard drive, but I'm so glad to see it here, as well.  Amazing story, my Love!  I can't even find the words to describe how I feel about "Fourteen Years!"  Sublime, Susie!  Sublime!
Title: Re: Riverton is Such a Lonely, Lonely Town
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 26, 2007, 12:36:01 am

How can a story be so sad and so beautiful at the same time? “I want my man!  I want my man!”  Ennis cringed at the memory. :'( :'(

Thank you, honey.

You're very welcome, Sweets!  This one took a lot out of me! 
Title: Re: He Held Me!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 26, 2007, 12:37:05 am
There you go about them sacks of sugar again!!!   (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_3_1v.gif).  Super sexy littlewing .... but still makes me feel a little sad.

Susie   (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

 :laugh:  :laugh:  Susie, I don't know what else to call...them!  Thanks for your kind words!
Title: Re: Riverton is Such a Lonely, Lonely Town
Post by: Clyde-B on June 26, 2007, 12:38:44 am
Why thank you, Clyde.  I just love red.  And when can we see a picture of you?  I'm dying to see what you look like.  No pressure, though  :)

I'll have to dig one up.  The only one's I have handy are driver's license and passport photos    SCARY!!! :o

When you look like your passport photo it's time to go home!
Title: Re: A Letter
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 26, 2007, 12:39:31 am
A Letter

After coming back from Lightning Flat Ennis opened his closet and took out an envelope he had been hiding there, " To Jack Twist, Childress, Texas, in case of my death".

He took out the letter: " My dearest Jack. Maybe I´ll never say it out loud, but I want you to know that I love you. I´ve been loving you since the night you let me inside of you and I will love you till the day I die, with body and soul, with all my heart. Yours, Ennis"

He crumpled the letter and burnt it.

Dagi, this is a very original story!  I love it.  I'm trying to find a way to continue it.  I just may post a part 2 if you don't mind?
Title: Re: Riverton is Such a Lonely, Lonely Town
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 26, 2007, 12:40:33 am
This is a beautifully realized scene, littlewing.  So sad, and the way Ennis calls out in his sleep and holds the postcard is so indicative of his love for Jack.  Great writing as always.

Gary

Why thank you, Gary Sweetheart!
Title: Re: He Held Me!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 26, 2007, 12:41:13 am
MMM MM  That Jack is a talented boy.   ;)  BTW, "sacks of sugar" made me blush a little for some reason.

Gary

 :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:
Title: Re: A Letter
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 26, 2007, 12:44:13 am
My son has fever and I put him to bed. I was lying in bed with him. He is actually a Taurus, not a cowboy. But he speaks about as much as Ennis, so he´s my little cowboy.

Thank you, Gary.

Dagi

I hope your son is better, Dagi!  I'm a Taurus as well!
Title: Re: A Letter
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 26, 2007, 12:45:52 am

Good night, have a nice party here, girls and guys! I envy you. Fuck that damn time differece. Fuck it. Sorry.

Dagi

Oh, Dagi!  ::)
Title: Re: Let's go for a walk
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 26, 2007, 12:48:43 am

Let’s go for a walk by Susie


“Jack, come over here!”  Jack didn’t need to be told twice, bounding into the kitchen and throwing himself into Ennis’ open arms, affectionately licking a sloppy wet line from the base of his neck, all the way up the side of his cheek.

Alma walked in, stony faced, “Get out of my kitchen!” she ordered, collecting the dirty dishes and dropping them, with a clatter, into the sink.

“Come on Jack, time to go!” Jack followed Ennis into the living room and snuggled up with him on the couch.

“You make me so happy, little darlin’, d’ya know that?” Ennis smiled.  Jack responded by nuzzling his neck, breathing softly in his ear, and eagerly wagging his tail.

“Get that damn dog off my couch, Ennis Del Mar!” came an angry voice from the other room.

“Let’s go for a walk, bud” Ennis lead the way into the hall, grabbed the lead from it’s hook, and with Jack close at his heel, headed out of the apartment.





I was going to call this one “Puppy Love” but I thought that would give it away …. Hehehe!


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)   


Wonderful, Susie!  So playful and sweet!  I always thought that Jack or Ennis (perhaps both) would have a pet.  Your stories are always so original and fresh.  Lovely work, as always!
Title: Never (part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 26, 2007, 01:10:34 am
Jack was beyond denying anything. He removed what was left of his shirt and
Stretched his arms wide, welcoming Ennis into a fevered embrace. 

Ennis kissed at the short, curly hairs on Jack’s firm chest.  Jack moaned with pleasure as he allowed his lover to lick and suck.  Ennis grabbed a few chest hairs with his teeth, pulled gently, raising Jack’s sweaty skin bit-by-bit.  The sensation was unlike anything Jack ever experienced in his lifetime!

“Take off your clothes, Cowboy!”  Jack ordered.  “I need you, now!”  Ennis was taken aback.  He was not used to Jack ordering him around, and he wasn’t sure if he liked it.  But when Jack pounced as though Ennis wasn’t moving fast enough, Ennis decided that he liked being told what to do.  He liked it very much…


Title: Never (part 3)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 26, 2007, 01:46:11 am
“I’ll do anything you say!”  Ennis grunted as he practically tore the buttons from his good shirt.  He flung his boots aside, followed by his jeans.  Jack had Ennis in his mouth before he could completely discard his briefs!

And just before he found his release, Ennis pulled himself free of Jack’s voracious mouth.  Jack didn’t like it, wanted more, but Ennis found his member lubricated just enough, courtesy of Jack’s saliva.

“Turn around, Rodeo!  I got something nice fer ya!”  It was Ennis’ turn to do the ordering!  Jack obeyed.  He pushed his backside toward his lover, braced himself…
Title: Re: Let's go for a walk
Post by: Dagi on June 26, 2007, 02:49:09 am

Hehehe .... I was hoping you wouldn't guess until the tail wagging part ... although the real Jack COULD wag his "Tail" if he wanted to!!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Hehe, Susie, thanks for that good laugh! I was really puzzled reading that they are kissing in Alma´s kitchen! I´m quite sure Jack would wag his "tail" in that case :laugh:. And Alma is stony faced because she knows, huh?

My little Till is a bit better, but the night was ....let´s not talk about it. I could have been here as well, as far as the amouint of sleep is concerned. Just gave him that kiss you sent. He liked it ;D.

Dagi
Title: Re: A Letter
Post by: Dagi on June 26, 2007, 02:53:46 am
Dearest Dagi,
I missed this story earlier. It is strikingly beautiful and very heartfelt. I don't know how we continue to pull these gut wrenching tales every day.

Yours,
Toycoon

Thank you, Toycoon. Most of my stories are sad, I´m afraid. I´ll try to do a lighter one next time, promise!
Dagi
Title: Re: Never (part 3)
Post by: Dagi on June 26, 2007, 03:13:59 am
“I’ll do anything you say!”  Ennis grunted as he practically tore the buttons from his good shirt.  He flung his boots aside, followed by his jeans.  Jack had Ennis in his mouth before he could completely discard his briefs!

And just before he found his release, Ennis pulled himself free of Jack’s voracious mouth.  Jack didn’t like it, wanted more, but Ennis found his member lubricated just enough, courtesy of Jack’s saliva.

“Turn around, Rodeo!  I got something nice fer ya!”  It was Ennis’ turn to do the ordering!  Jack obeyed.  He pushed his backside toward his lover, braced himself…


Oh Marie, that was really sexy, but where the hell is part one? I couldn´t find it! I´m losing control, this thread is about to explode! Can you tell me the page? I didn´t put it in the archive yet, either!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 26, 2007, 03:16:36 am
If anyone feels like crying, go to page 6. I posted a YT video with the song "What hurts the most" along with my story "The Sun". That song really gets me every time.
Title: Re: Never
Post by: Dagi on June 26, 2007, 05:05:37 am
There was a look in Jack's eyes that Ennis never saw a man give another man before; it made Ennis' entire body throb with lust.

Cigarettes, whiskey and desire; it was a taste in his mouth he'd never had before.

Ennis tore at Jack's clothes, felt his hairy body, held his face, stroked his firm flesh, never denying this was what he'd always wanted and secretly craved.

Ahh I found it! Toycoon, three sentences filled with love and lust. Just beautiful! Just like Jack and Ennis, few words containing a world.

Dagi

Title: Re: Field Trip
Post by: Dagi on June 26, 2007, 05:18:26 am

 “Miss Parker, what’re they doin’?”

“Nothing Billy”, she searched frantically for some kind of explanation, “ I expect they’re just practicing bull ridin’…. now hurry along…. scoot!”
 


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif) 



Susie, I just read Fourteen Years again, and was crying - until I found Field Trip, which brought back a wide smile on my face! This sexy and funny story is a good example for your exellent writing!

Dagi
Title: Re: Never (part 2)
Post by: Toycoon on June 26, 2007, 09:07:06 am
Quote
“Take off your clothes, Cowboy!”  Jack ordered.  “I need you, now!”  Ennis was taken aback.  He was not used to Jack ordering him around, and he wasn’t sure if he liked it.  But when Jack pounced as though Ennis wasn’t moving fast enough, Ennis decided that he liked being told what to do.  He liked it very much…

Ooohoowee! Littlewing1957, you're so nasty, hot and... sexy!
Title: Re: Never
Post by: Toycoon on June 26, 2007, 09:14:27 am
There was a look in Jack's eyes that Ennis never saw a man give another man before; it made Ennis' entire body throb with lust.

Cigarettes, whiskey and desire; it was a taste in his mouth he'd never had before.

Ennis tore at Jack's clothes, felt his hairy body, held his face, stroked his firm flesh, never denying this was what he'd always wanted and secretly craved.

Hola Dagi,
Here is 'Never' part 1 from page 54. Thank you so much for archiving.
Eventually, we will have to self-publish our home made folks tales.
I told Malina-5 she has a publishing deal ready to go if she wants one!
Title: Re: Let's go for a walk
Post by: Toycoon on June 26, 2007, 09:17:00 am
Yeah I know ... but did I fool you ... just for a second??

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

You did until Alma came into the picture! I figgered out it was a pooch right then. Arf! Arf!
Title: Re: A Letter
Post by: Dagi on June 26, 2007, 04:01:10 pm
Oh Dagi, talk dirty to me.  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_1_12.gif)

Gary

Just give me your number, honey ;D!
Title: Re: Field Trip
Post by: Dagi on June 26, 2007, 04:03:25 pm

Hehehe ... toycoon guessed that Miss Parker is really Susiebell!!  So that makes me a bit pervy too .... (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/8/8_4_100.gif).... yeah baby!!!!


Who wouldn´t wish to be Miss Parker.... :o??

Dagi
Title: Re: Crossing the Line (NC-17)
Post by: Clyde-B on June 26, 2007, 07:32:16 pm
This story is intended for adults only.

 

Looks like the "Nasty" clan has a new member.

Er...  uh... perhaps I should rephrase that.

Oh, what the hell!   :laugh:
Title: Re: Crossing the Line (NC-17)
Post by: Toycoon on June 26, 2007, 11:29:50 pm
"Crossing the line" ? Boy, you ain't kidding. Congratulations on your return, Gary, you nasty boy!
Title: Re: Never (part 3)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 26, 2007, 11:57:19 pm
Oh Marie, that was really sexy, but where the hell is part one? I couldn´t find it! I´m losing control, this thread is about to explode! Can you tell me the page? I didn´t put it in the archive yet, either!

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi!  I almost missed "Never" myself.  I'm glad I noticed it!
Title: Re: Never (part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 26, 2007, 11:58:12 pm
Phew! My heart's racing a bit now ...  and as for Ennis pulling Jack's chest hairs with his teeth ..  OMG! .... (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_1_131.gif)

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

 :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:
Title: Re: Never (part 3)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 26, 2007, 11:59:08 pm
(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_3_1v.gif).... Aaaaah .. you're killin' me now ....  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_3_1v.gif)

Superb Littlewing!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Thanks, Susie!  I don't know what got into me last night!  ::)
Title: Re: Never (part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 27, 2007, 12:01:10 am
Ooohoowee! Littlewing1957, you're so nasty, hot and... sexy!

You inspired me!  I love continuing your steamy tales!
Title: Re: Never (part 3)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 27, 2007, 12:01:45 am
MMM MM  I'm lovin' it, littlewing.  Hot!

Gary

Thanks so much, Sweetheart!  :-*
Title: Re: Never (part 3)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 27, 2007, 12:02:34 am
NEVER Parts 1, 2 and 3  Toycoon and littlewing

Whoa littlewing and Toycoon.  I'll tell you what.....I'm sweating after that - you and Toycoon again.  Whew.  Lusteeeeeeeeee.  Thanks, I think.....  It's only 11am and I'm really distracted.

Merrily



 :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh: I couldn't help it, Merr!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 27, 2007, 12:09:27 am
This story is intended for adults only.

Crossing the Line by garycottle


“Oh, come on, now,” Jack cajoled.

The confusion was all over Ennis’s face, but so was his desire, and Jack knew he had won when Ennis finally walked forward and took his place in front of him.  Jack smiled up at his friend as he reached for his belt.


My wings fail me and I have fallen to the ground!  So hot, Gary!  I imagine Ennis taking his pleasure with a rather stoic nature, but being in love with Jack, couldn't take him totally for granted.  Thus the riding back to give him a kiss.  That Jack is a lucky man, indeed!  Oh, and Ennis didn't have it so bad, either!   ::)  Beautiful writing, Gary!  Brilliant!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 27, 2007, 12:14:15 am
If anyone feels like crying, go to page 6. I posted a YT video with the song "What hurts the most" along with my story "The Sun". That song really gets me every time.

Wow, Dagi, that's amazing!  You posted one of my favorites!  And along with your lovely tale, well, I am crying.  I'll be okay in a minute!!  :'(
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on June 27, 2007, 12:50:17 am
You kids!!  ;D  Haven't ya'll settled down yet?!  :P

Hey--what about capitol and capital/principle and principal?? Is English the hardest language to learn?
 
Title: Alma Jr's Gifts
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 27, 2007, 01:03:37 am
Extreme AU.  I took a few liberties here with sequence of events, characters, etc.  I’m even over the 3 paragraph rule.  It won’t happen again.  Well, at least I hope it won't!

Jack studied a tiny dress that was covered with bows and ribbons.  He loved it, and wasn’t put off by the price.  $100.00 for a tiny dress was steep, but to Jack, it was a pittance.  He loved Ennis Del Mar and Ennis deserved only the best.

“What do you think about this dress, Lureen?”   Jack asked his wife as he held the dress high enough for her to see it.  Lureen was shopping in the diaper section at the other side of the floor.  She looked at the tiny garment and wrinkled her nose.  Jack looked at the dress once more, shook his head and returned it to the rack.
 
I’ll be over there in a minute honey.  I’m just getting a supply of diapers for your friends.  They’ll need a lot of those!”

Jack looked at his wife in awe.  He loved her more at that moment than he ever thought possible.  What a giving soul she turned out to be!  Just yesterday he got word from Riverton that Alma Del Mar gave birth to a baby girl.  Ennis called her Alma Jr. after her mom.  Jack also heard that the Del Mar’s were having severe financial problems.  That was all Jack needed to hear to goad him to action.  He explained the situation to Lureen: he had a friend who just had a kid and couldn't really afford to get everything he needed for the child.  Lureen didn’t even blink.  She fetched their coats and drove straight to Neiman Marcus and the children’s department.  Jack was floored.  He would never forget Lureen’s kindness.  Ennis Del Mar was a good friend, and he wanted to help his buddy.  And the child!  Jack wouldn’t bear the thought of Ennis’ daughter doing without!
 
Lureen walked over to Jack carrying a case of disposable diapers, while on top she placed packages of sleepers, receiving blankets, bibs.   Jack took the items from her and allowed her to pick out a few baby clothes.  Lureen selected 3 stylish and expensive dresses, 2 pant outfits and a tiny coat.  It was all Jack could do to keep from crying.  He hadn’t laid eyes on Ennis Del Mar in years, but he still cared about him, would do anything for him.  The presents would be sent to Riverton anonymously, and at great cost.  The shipping fees alone would be murder, but Jack had to do it.  He knew that Ennis would never accept these things if he brought them in person.  If Ennis didn’t know who sent them, he couldn’t refuse them?  Right?  After the baby things were bought, Jack arranged with the store to have them shipped to the Del Mar residence a week from Saturday.  He also found out the date of Alma’s baby shower.  Jack wanted the surprise to arrive in time for the festivities.

Ennis didn’t have anywhere to go, and decided to hang around the kitchen as the womenfolk played shower games, ate finger foods and played with his new baby.  Just as he was about to fix himself a small plate of food, there was a knock at the door.  Alma answered and was astounded to see 2 deliverymen carrying a large box up to the house.

“What is this?”  Alma asked the men as they set the box down in the living room.

“I don’t know ma’am!”   “I just do the deliveries.  I don’t know what’s in the boxes.”

The man passed Alma a receipt to sign and was on his way.  Ennis rushed into the room and studied the box.  No return address, no way to even tell what state it came from.

“I don’t know if we should open this!” Ennis said as their guests crowded around the box.

“Oh come on, honey!”  Alma, excited now!  “Maybe it’s something for the baby.  It’s not tickin!  Let’s open it!”

Ennis shrugged and fetched a box cutter to cut through the tape.  Once the box was opened, there was a hushed silence in the room!  No one moved.  At first.  Alma picked up the tiny dresses, the other finery and squealed!

“Look at all of this!  Where did this come from?”  Ennis looked through the gear and scratched his head.  The merchandise was good quality.  Someone was being very generous and Ennis couldn’t image who would send these things.  Alma’s sister admired a tiny pant outfit. 

“Hey Alma, this ain’t no junk!  Alma’s sister observed.  “Whoever bought this is rollin in dough!”

Ennis couldn’t argue with that.  As his guests admired the presents, he searched his mind for clues.  Then it hit him.  He couldn’t say why he knew, but he knew.  It was just a hunch he had.... Jack fuckin’ Twist…

Title: Re: Crossing the Line (NC-17)
Post by: Dagi on June 27, 2007, 05:45:30 am
This story is intended for adults only.

Crossing the Line by garycottle
.......

When they separated Ennis ran toward his horse, and this time he didn’t look back.  Jack watched him go.  His wet, mischievous mouth curled into a self-satisfied smile, and he reached for his own belt while the memory of the evening’s events were still fresh in his mind.

I´m still gulping hard. Had to read it twice before being able to reply. What a way to go, Gary, you HOT boy! I have to change my undies now before my siesta...or better after my siesta ;D?

Dagi
Title: Re: A Letter
Post by: Dagi on June 27, 2007, 06:24:50 am
They're called homophones.  Isn't that funny!  Sounds like some gay guy's cell phone, huh? 


 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

So next time you meet a guy you can ask him to give you his homophone number :laugh:!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 27, 2007, 06:25:50 am
You kids!!  ;D  Haven't ya'll settled down yet?!  :P

 
 

Shast, is it just me or do you look somehow different? ;D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 27, 2007, 06:32:37 am
 

Yes, English must be the hardest language to learn.  Dagi is from Germany and she is correcting me - and feeling pretty good about herself I might add.  She's gettin' sick of my dumbass typos.

Merrily

Merrily, it´s your first typo I ever found and you´ve been writing me some expanded mails! That´s why I said "finally". But homophone-errors are quite common here  ;D.

Dagi

I expect to be corrected, too. But nobody bothers. So you will have to read my dumbass errors as long as you don´t tell me!
Title: Re: Crossing the Line (NC-17)
Post by: Dagi on June 27, 2007, 06:37:06 am
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Me  too! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/28/28_4_10.gif)

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Your emoticons are killing me. I wish my computer didn´t refuse to install the program...
Title: Re: Alma Jr's Gifts
Post by: Dagi on June 27, 2007, 06:39:02 am
Extreme AU.  I took a few liberties here with sequence of events, characters, etc.  I’m even over the 3 paragraph rule.  It won’t happen again.  Well, at least I hope it won't!

 Littlewing, the image of a loving and caring Jack and a lovely, generous Lureen is wonderful! And please let it happen again...

Dagi
Title: Words unspoken
Post by: Toycoon on June 27, 2007, 09:52:42 am
Jack contemplated for a long time about how he felt then thought about what he would say to Ennis but the words never seem to come as easily as the feelings did; he found himself expressing his heart in other ways.

Jack pulled Ennis' arm around him placing Ennis' hand on his erection, guiding it up and down and gyrating in rhythm because often, words are further from the deed.

"Ennis, all of them things you never said, I believed you meant every word."
Title: Re: Words unspoken
Post by: Dagi on June 27, 2007, 01:04:10 pm

"Ennis, all of them things you never said, I believed you meant every word."

Oh yes, a great, great line, Toycoon. Love it.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 27, 2007, 01:06:22 pm
I have only one request concerning the archive: Could you please write the title of your stories right on top of them, not only in the subject line, that would help me a lot. Oh, and if you want to help me even more, you can write "by" and your name behind the title.

Thank you!
Dagi

Thank you, Susie and Gary! :-* :-*
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 27, 2007, 02:00:14 pm
Wet Skin by Dagi  - NC17 ???

The early morning sun made their wet skin glimmer after the bath in the river. They were both lying on their stomachs, eyes locked.

„You´re a witch, Ennis DelMar. You´re bewitching me. Merely looking you in the eye makes me need you so badly, makes me want my dick in that sweet hot mouth a  yours and your dick all the way up my ass at the same time, fuckin the hell out a me...“ His voice had become husky and rough, his eyes dreary.

„Ya mean ´a´ dick.  Can´t fuck and suck you at the same time, ......hunh? And not now, you have to be down at the bridge by noon, you know that, ........................but if one man is not enough for you why don´t you bring that basque guy....tie him onto one a the mules....?“

„Whoaaa, Ennis, don´t be disgusting“ Jack chuckled, but became serious again the moment he looked at this tall lean naked man standing now in front of him. Even Ennis´  talking about the basque failed to cool down the heat in his manhood.

Ennis leaned down to plant a wet, soft kiss on Jack´s lips. „Have to go up to them sheep now...“ he whispered and left his friend alone, knowing that he would take good care of himself.

tbc
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on June 27, 2007, 02:24:50 pm
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..but if one man is not enough for you why don't you bring that Basque guy....tie him onto one a the mules....?“

Whoa Dagi! I don't know about this!  I don't know about Jack but that Basque fella is definitely not my type! Is he your type?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 27, 2007, 04:51:39 pm
Oh, now Toycoon, we can't all look like movie stars, you know.  Mister 6'4" and slender.  The Basque may not look all that great, but he might have other assets.   :-X  And he could be very talented.  I mean really talented.  You'd never know unless you gave him a chance.

Gary

P.S.  I mean he could be like super duper talented.   ;)

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didn´t you notice that tbc at the end! Be a little patient, guys! I still don´t have any idea how to go on with what I begun :laugh:.

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on June 27, 2007, 06:01:05 pm
Oh, now Toycoon, we can't all look like movie stars, you know.  Mister 6'4" and slender.  The Basque may not look all that great, but he might have other assets.   :-X  And he could be very talented.  I mean really talented.  You'd never know unless you gave him a chance.

Gary

P.S.  I mean he could be like super duper talented.   ;)

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/7/7_9_7.gif) 

Sure, you can't tell.  He may have a really big... er... uh... personality.
Title: Re: Alma Jr's Gifts
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 28, 2007, 01:35:00 am
Littlewing, the image of a loving and caring Jack and a lovely, generous Lureen is wonderful! And please let it happen again...

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi!  I'll write another AU  piece again, definitely!
Title: Re: Alma Jr's Gifts
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 28, 2007, 01:36:17 am
Ah littlewing, what a charming tale ... I could imagine Jack doing that for his love ... and I love you for not painting Lureen as the villain this time.

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Thanks, Susie.   I've always thought that Lureen had a compassionate soul.  No one in BBM is all bad, or all good, for that matter.  I guess this is the reason we care so much!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 28, 2007, 01:38:31 am
Wet Skin by Dagi  - NC17 ???

The early morning sun made their wet skin glimmer after the bath in the river. They were both lying on their stomachs, eyes locked.

„You´re a witch, Ennis DelMar. You´re bewitching me. Merely looking you in the eye makes me need you so hard, makes me want my dick in that sweet hot mouth a  yours and your dick all the way up my ass at the same time, fuckin the hell out a me...“ His voice had become husky and rough, his eyes dreary.

„Ya mean ´a´ dick.  Can´t fuck and suck you at the same time, ......hunh? And not now, you have to be down at the bridge by noon, you know that, ........................but if one man is not enough for you why don´t you bring that basque guy....tie him onto one a the mules....?“

„Whoaaa, Ennis, don´t be disgusting“ Jack chuckled, but became serious again the moment he looked at this tall lean naked man standing now in front of him. Even Ennis´  talking about the basque failed to cool down the heat in his manhood.

Ennis leaned down to plant a wet, soft kiss on Jack´s lips. „Have to go up to them sheep now...“ he whispered and left his friend alone, knowing that he would take good care of himself.

tbc

Wow, Dagi!  This is a brilliant tale.  And thanks for bring the Basque into it.  I don't think anyone has mentioned him after all this time.  Very original, powerful, sexy tale!
Title: Re: Alma Jr's Gifts
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 28, 2007, 01:39:48 am
Hi littlewing,

What an endearing piece.  It would have been so nice if Jack could have done that for Ennis and his newborn.  If only...

Gary

So true, Gary!  So true.  I know in my heart of hearts that Jack would have helped Ennis with the girls, if he allowed it!
Title: Re: Words unspoken
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 28, 2007, 01:41:01 am
Jack contemplated for a long time about how he felt then thought about what he would say to Ennis but the words never seem to come as easily as the feelings did; he found himself expressing his heart in other ways.

Jack pulled Ennis' arm around him placing Ennis' hand on his erection, guiding it up and down and gyrating in rhythm because often, words are further from the deed.

"Ennis, all of them things you never said, I believed you meant every word."

Beautiful story, Toycoon!  And the last line is particularly profound!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 28, 2007, 06:42:55 am
Wow, Dagi!  This is a brilliant tale.  And thanks for bring the Basque into it.  I don't think anyone has mentioned him after all this time.  Very original, powerful, sexy tale!
Thank you, Marie! But I still don´t know if the Basque has any future. I mean, you heard Jack´s reaction, and he would be the one to bring him... :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 28, 2007, 06:44:32 am
MMM  Love that title, Dagi.  And I for one would feel lucky to Basque in the glow of Jack's and Ennis's love making.   ;D

BTW, what Jack was proposing can be done.  Ennis should have given it a go.   :P

Gary

 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: So glad you liked at least the title !

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 28, 2007, 06:47:25 am
Whoa Dagi! I don't know about this!  I don't know about Jack but that Basque fella is definitely not my type! Is he your type?

insert non-existent vomiting emoticon

Dagi ;D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on June 28, 2007, 01:10:11 pm
LOL and Ewwwww!!     :P
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 28, 2007, 02:13:18 pm
You mean something like this:

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Or this:

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Or maybe this:

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Just thought I'd help out a little.   ;D

Gary
Thank you Gary, that was exactly what I meant. Haaaahhh, you always know so well what we need ;D!

dagi

any ideas for part two of my wierd story, Gary?  :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 28, 2007, 04:05:00 pm
Hmmm  How about when Jack goes down to get that week's supplies he discovers that the Basque is feeling under the weather and so his hunky brother has come in his stead.   ;)

Hehe, you don´t like the Basque neither, do you? Sending his hunky brother instead  :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

We could start a new game: everyone writes one sentence, would be funny to see what comes out in the end ;)

Dagi (pronounced with a hard ´g´ like in gun btw, for all those who are not familiar with German)
Title: Re: Words unspoken
Post by: Toycoon on June 28, 2007, 06:25:35 pm
Thanks for the compliment, Susiebell. I don't know where that line came from but I do like it. It's perfectly ambiguous.

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I love the image of them lying naked on their stomachs, what a view!!!

I'll bet you do. Maybe we should give 'em a couple of wet T-shirts and really throw you over the edge!
Title: Re: Words unspoken
Post by: Toycoon on June 28, 2007, 07:58:34 pm
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And don't come over all innocent with me Mister ... you'd be panting at the sight of those two perfectly formed firm white bottoms too!!

You know it, sister! Those firm globes are two of my favorite parts! Yahooo!
Title: Re: Alma Jr's Gifts
Post by: Toycoon on June 28, 2007, 11:19:34 pm
Great AU story, littlewing1957. You really know how to tell those far fetched tall tales.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 29, 2007, 12:06:27 am
insert non-existent vomiting emoticon

Dagi ;D

 :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:
Title: Re: Alma Jr's Gifts
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 29, 2007, 12:10:39 am
Littlewing, how sweet.  I can just see that smile on Ennis' face when he thinks...Jack fuckin' Twist - I love it.

Merrily

Thanks so much, Merr! 
Title: Re: Alma Jr's Gifts
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 29, 2007, 12:11:44 am
Great AU story, littlewing1957. You really know how to tell those far fetched tall tales.

Toycoon, you are so funny!  Stay tuned.  I have a million of em!  ;)
Title: Sweet Talk
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 29, 2007, 12:13:21 am
Ennis was lying on his back, a tangle of soft pillows under his head and torso.  Jack Twist was talking a blue streak, but his tone was hushed and romantic.  Jack stroked Ennis’ cheek, spoke soft words to him.

Ennis listened to Jack’s words and tried to hide a blush.   He would never admit it, but Ennis always wanted to hear something sweet come out of Jack’s mouth.  It was a real comfort to hear words of love after such spirited relations.

Jack fluffed Ennis’ pillows and continued to soothe.  He placed a gentle kiss on Ennis’ cheek and laid his head on Ennis’ breast.  Jack often hurt Ennis in bed.  It was a sweet, delicious pain, but it was pain, nonetheless.  Ennis shifted his sore bum and fell asleep while Jack spoke of love in the dark.
Title: Re: Sweet Talk
Post by: Dagi on June 29, 2007, 12:28:53 am
Ennis was lying on his back, a tangle of soft pillows under his head and torso.  Jack Twist was talking a blue streak, but his tone was hushed and romantic.  Jack stroked Ennis’ cheek, spoke soft words to him.

Ennis listened to Jack’s words and tried to hide a blush.   He would never admit it, but Ennis always wanted to hear something sweet come out of Jack’s mouth.  It was a real comfort to hear words of love after such spirited relations.

Jack fluffed Ennis’ pillows and continued to soothe.  He placed a gentle kiss on Ennis’ cheek and laid his head on Ennis’ breast.  Jack often hurt Ennis in bed.  It was a sweet, delicious pain, but it was pain, nonetheless.  Ennis shifted his sore bum and fell asleep while Jack spoke of love in the dark.


what a way to start the day, littlewing. So tender and sexy, love it.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 29, 2007, 12:32:00 am
WOW Dagi!

You're just getting raunchier and raunchier girly .... my computer's going to explode in a minute!!  Very sexy story honey, and I love it when they talk dirty!  I hope Ennis was kidding Jack on about the Basque guy .... if they're going to have a three-way, let's hope Jon Bon Jovi's passing by in his tight leather pants....  whooo wheeeee! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_5_13.gif)

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

ps. I love the image of them lying naked on their stomachs, what a view!!! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_3_1v.gif)

Yes, Ennis was kidding. If I ever write a story containing a threesome, I´ll engage Arguirre, of course (he saw them first !). Now, Gary, how´s that?

Susie, thank you for your compliment!

Dagi
Title: After the Dance
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 29, 2007, 12:33:44 am
“Let me take it off!”  Ennis yelled as Jack danced.  Jack moved seductively to Ennis, placed his gyrating hips right before Ennis’ red face.  “Shake it baby!”  Ennis cried as he pulled at Jack’s briefs.

“You got it, Cowboy!”  Jack laughed as he moved in tandem to the motion of Ennis’ fingers.  “I should call you “The tentacle!”  Jack chided as he stepped away from his lover and discarded his underwear.  Jack stood naked as a jaybird, but he continued his weird mating dance!  He moved his narrow hips in and out, flung his arms, moved his head from side to side.  And all without music!  Ennis watched transfixed as Jack danced.

Ennis rose to his feet and faced a heart achingly beautiful Jack Twist.  He made no move to hide his probing eyes, as he looked his lover up and down, from head to foot.  “You’re so fuckin’ beautiful, Rodeo!  Ennis began.  “I can’t believe you’re really mine."  C’mon, Friend!”   Jack beckoned an eager Ennis Del Mar.  “Let me show you what happens after the dance…"




Title: Re: Sweet Talk
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 29, 2007, 12:35:29 am
what a way to start the day, littlewing. So tender and sexy, love it.

Dagi

Thanks for your kind words, Dagi.  Good to see you!  :)
Title: Re: After the Dance
Post by: Dagi on June 29, 2007, 12:40:20 am
“Let me take it off!”  Ennis yelled as Jack danced.  Jack moved seductively to Ennis, placed his gyrating hips right before Ennis’ red face.  “Shake it baby!”  Ennis cried as he pulled at Jack’s briefs.

“You got it, Cowboy!”  Jack laughed as he moved in tandem to the motion of Ennis’ fingers.  “I should call you “The tentacle!”  Jack chided as he stepped away from his lover and discarded his underwear.  Jack stood naked as a jaybird, but he continued his weird mating dance!  He moved his narrow hips in and out, flung his arms, moved his head from side to side.  And all without music!  Ennis watched transfixed as Jack danced.

Ennis rose to his feet and faced a heart achingly beautiful Jack Twist.  He made no move to hide his probing eyes, as he looked his lover up and down, from head to foot.  “You’re so fuckin’ beautiful, Rodeo!  Ennis began.  “I can’t believe you’re really mine.  C’mon, Friend!”   Jack beckoned an eager Ennis Del mar.  “Let me show you what happens after the dance…







Oh Marie, that´s almost too much so early in the morning...this picture of a naked, seductively dancing JakeJack and Ennis watching him with probing eyes will haunt me the whole day, I know it.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on June 29, 2007, 12:44:35 am
Wow, 15 guests are viewing this topic. Wow.
Title: Re: Sweet Talk
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 29, 2007, 12:45:41 am
littlewing, I think that's just what Ennis needed.  He needed someone to make over him as they say around here.  What I mean by that is Ennis could have benefited from some gentle and adoring attention.  Your little story here reminds me of how Jack treated Ennis in the second tent scene, and how Ennis responded to being taken care of.  I think Ennis is a scared little boy under that gloomy, and sometimes prickly facade.  We sometimes forget that he lost his parents at a very tender age, and I doubt his siblings did a very good job in stepping in.  Ennis suffered from a cuddle and comfort deficit.

Gary

Gary, I agree with everything you just said here!  I certainly think Ennis was touch deprived, but he couldn't articulate his need.  Jack gentling Ennis is a "theme" I return to time and again. 
Title: Sweet Talk (2)
Post by: Toycoon on June 29, 2007, 12:48:09 am
Jack continued to stroke Ennis' hair, smoothing it and petting him like the family cat;
a sudden, transient rise of energy gripped Ennis changing his demeanor and startling Jack.

Ennis became an insatiable sexual animal, groaning, surprising even himself demanding, "Do me, Jack fucken' Twist, do me!"

Jack shook Ennis awake and held him close, feeling his heart racing through his chest; "You were having a hellava dream, Cowboy. Shame I had to wake you up before you got done! Does that offer still stand?"
Title: Re: After the Dance
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 29, 2007, 12:50:14 am

Oh Marie, that´s almost too much so early in the morning...this picture of a naked, seductively dancing JakeJack and Ennis watching him with probing eyes will haunt me the whole day, I know it.

Dagi

I know, Dagi.  I'm just ready to turn in for the night, and I wouldn't be surprised if I see a dancing Jack Twist in my dreams.  Such a spectacle will be very welcome, indeed!
Title: Re: Sweet Talk (2)
Post by: Dagi on June 29, 2007, 12:53:01 am
Jack continued to stroke Ennis' hair, smoothing it and petting him like a family cat;
a sudden, transient rise of energy gripped Ennis changing his demeanor and startling Jack.

Ennis became an insatiable sexual animal, groaning, surprising even himself demanding, "Do me, Jack fucken' Twist, do me!"

Jack shook Ennis awake and held him close, feeling his heart racing through his chest; "You were having a hellava dream, Cowboy. Shame I had to wake you up before you got done! Does that offer still stand?"



you are too much for me *faints because of lack of sleep and blood rushing downwards*

What a surprise - Toycoon follows littlewing. Great, just great. Sequel, please, whoever writes it!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 29, 2007, 12:58:49 am
Wow, 15 guests are viewing this topic. Wow.

Yes, I saw that!   :)  I don't think I've ever seen so many guests on this thread before!  It is good to see!
Title: Re: Sweet Talk (2)
Post by: Toycoon on June 29, 2007, 01:04:26 am
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Now if this had been a really naughty story Jack would have slipped it in while the family cat was still asleep.
Are you suggesting 'date rape' Garycottle, you perv!

You can always write the final chapter, ya know or ain't ya' man enough? ;D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on June 29, 2007, 01:13:00 am
Geez---calling each other "pervs"---issuing challenges---etc. I need to stop in more often and distribute a little discipline among all you kids!!! Ya'll are out of control!  :P
Title: Sweet Talk Part 3
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 29, 2007, 01:18:38 am
This is for you, Dagi!

Ennis chuckled softly, and held Jack closer to his breast.  He kissed Jack’s hair, and didn’t mind one bit that Jack shook him out of a very pleasurable dream.

“Maybe in a little bit, Rodeo!”  Ennis whispered.  “I don’t think I’m up to it right now.  You okay with that?”  Jack hid a knowing smile from his lover.  “Listen Friend, if you’re sore back there, I brought a salve.  We can have you up and presentin' in no time!”

Ennis had to grin at Jack’s suggestion.  Where did Jack find the energy?  Ennis pushed his lover up a bit and crawled onto his stomach.  He raised his buttocks to Jack.  “Lube me up and we’ll see what happens..”
Title: Re: Sweet Talk Part 3
Post by: Toycoon on June 29, 2007, 01:25:49 am
Quote
“Listen Friend, if you’re sore back there, I brought a salve.  We can have you up and presentin' in no time!”

You absolutely slay me, littlewing1957! Thank Heaven for old fashioned salve!
Title: Re: Sweet Talk Part 3
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 29, 2007, 01:33:01 am
You absolutely slay me, littlewing1957! Thank Heaven for old fashioned salve!

Hey, Toycoon!  Somebody actually said that to me once!   :laugh:
Title: Re: Sweet Talk Part 3
Post by: SFEnnisSF on June 29, 2007, 01:46:50 am
. “Lube me up and we’ll see what happens..”


I need to visit these threads more often.  :D
Title: Re: Sweet Talk Part 3
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 29, 2007, 01:52:55 am
I need to visit these threads more often.  :D

You gotta, Eric!  We're having a lot of fun!  ;)  ;D  ::)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on June 29, 2007, 05:05:12 am

Catching up on my reading! It's getting hot in here!!

(http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x221/Shasta542/camp_fire.gif)

Good writing Brokie pals---Thanks for the high class entertainment!!

Title: Re: Sweet Talk Part 3
Post by: Dagi on June 29, 2007, 08:04:56 am
This is for you, Dagi!

 Ennis pushed his lover up a bit and crawled onto his stomach.  He raised his buttocks to Jack.  “Lube me up and we’ll see what happens..”


That was something for me, yeeehaaawww!

You nnnaaaaassssty girl ("Littlewing" really is toooo innocent a name for you!!!)!

Give us mooore! part 4 please! For Eric!



Title: Re: Sweet Talk (2)
Post by: Dagi on June 29, 2007, 08:11:40 am
Now if this had been a really naughty story Jack would have slipped it in while the family cat was still asleep.   ;)


Now you are warned, guys! Never fall asleep with Gary around. Means, if you are not up to something ;D
Title: Re: Rack em up!
Post by: Dagi on June 29, 2007, 02:27:33 pm
Rack em up! by Susie



Ennis watched admiringly as Jack leaned over the pool table to take his shot.  The white ball was near the far end and in order to pot the black into the corner pocket and claim yet another victory, Jack had to lie, stretched half way across the table. 

Ennis’ thoughts drifted as he observed Jack’s rear end…. peeling off Jack’s clothing, one item at a time, leaving his jeans until last, savoring each moment as he slowly slid them down to his ankles, revealing pale pink flesh, soft downy hair, and the perfectly toned, muscular roundness of his buttocks.

Moving in behind him, one hand caressing each cheek, massaging, circling, spreading them wide apart, ready to plunge in deep ….. “Whoo whee! That’s three games to one, bud!  You sure you wanna take me on again? Hey, you OK Ennis?”  Ennis reached for his pool cue, smiling to himself, “Rack em up!” he ordered…. Later.... he thought.



(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/7/7_8_6v.gif)

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Girl, that was HOT HOT HOT!!!

If I had been Ennis, I surely would not have been able to keep my hands off!

With all those "hot buttered b...." you had been watching lately I knew that a bum storie would come ;D

Dagi
Title: Re: Jack's Turn (NC-17)
Post by: Toycoon on June 29, 2007, 05:25:38 pm
Quote
“Just shut up and enjoy it, will you?”

Garycottle, you are a hellion!

Quote
“Jack, can’t I roll over so I can put my legs over your shoulders?”

This seems like a reasonable request...what are you gonna do with me?

Quote
“Only if you call me daddy.”

Yer too much for me, boy! You win the rauchy award for the day, I tell you! Susiebell, you gonna let Gary take yer 'Nasty' trophy away like that?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on June 29, 2007, 06:21:39 pm
You mean something like this:

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_2_10.gif)

Or this:

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_2_6.gif)

Or maybe this:

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_19_7.gif)

Just thought I'd help out a little.   ;D

Gary

LOL!!!!   :laugh:
Title: Re: Sweet Talk
Post by: Clyde-B on June 29, 2007, 06:33:01 pm
  It was a sweet, delicious pain, but it was pain, nonetheless.  Ennis shifted his sore bum and fell asleep while Jack spoke of love in the dark.


Turabout time huh, Marie!

How about giving Jack a little more experience so he can develop better technique!   ;D
Title: Re: After the Dance
Post by: Clyde-B on June 29, 2007, 06:40:10 pm
“Let me take it off!”  Ennis yelled as Jack danced.  Jack moved seductively to Ennis, placed his gyrating hips right before Ennis’ red face.  “Shake it baby!”  Ennis cried as he pulled at Jack’s briefs.

“You got it, Cowboy!”  Jack laughed as he moved in tandem to the motion of Ennis’ fingers.  “I should call you “The tentacle!”  Jack chided as he stepped away from his lover and discarded his underwear.  Jack stood naked as a jaybird, but he continued his weird mating dance!  He moved his narrow hips in and out, flung his arms, moved his head from side to side.  And all without music!  Ennis watched transfixed as Jack danced.

Ennis rose to his feet and faced a heart achingly beautiful Jack Twist.  He made no move to hide his probing eyes, as he looked his lover up and down, from head to foot.  “You’re so fuckin’ beautiful, Rodeo!  Ennis began.  “I can’t believe you’re really mine."  C’mon, Friend!”   Jack beckoned an eager Ennis Del Mar.  “Let me show you what happens after the dance…"





OOOOOO!   Could Jack make it rotate in one direction and then the other?

I really love that 'Rodeo' nickname, I'm gonna steal it.
Title: Re: Sweet Talk (2)
Post by: Clyde-B on June 29, 2007, 06:43:31 pm
Jack continued to stroke Ennis' hair, smoothing it and petting him like the family cat;
a sudden, transient rise of energy gripped Ennis changing his demeanor and startling Jack.

Ennis became an insatiable sexual animal, groaning, surprising even himself demanding, "Do me, Jack fucken' Twist, do me!"

Jack shook Ennis awake and held him close, feeling his heart racing through his chest; "You were having a hellava dream, Cowboy. Shame I had to wake you up before you got done! Does that offer still stand?"


Well?????  ;D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on June 29, 2007, 06:48:21 pm
Geez---calling each other "pervs"---issuing challenges---etc. I need to stop in more often and distribute a little discipline among all you kids!!! Ya'll are out of control!  :P

Bring your whip Mistress Shasta!   :laugh:
Title: Re: Rack em up!
Post by: Clyde-B on June 29, 2007, 06:54:28 pm
Rack em up! by Susie



Ennis watched admiringly as Jack leaned over the pool table to take his shot.  The white ball was near the far end and in order to pot the black into the corner pocket and claim yet another victory, Jack had to lie, stretched half way across the table. 

Ennis’ thoughts drifted as he observed Jack’s rear end…. peeling off Jack’s clothing, one item at a time, leaving his jeans until last, savoring each moment as he slowly slid them down to his ankles, revealing pale pink flesh, soft downy hair, and the perfectly toned, muscular roundness of his buttocks.

Moving in behind him, one hand caressing each cheek, massaging, circling, spreading them wide apart, ready to plunge in deep ….. “Whoo whee! That’s three games to one, bud!  You sure you wanna take me on again? Hey, you OK Ennis?”  Ennis reached for his pool cue, smiling to himself, “Rack em up!” he ordered…. Later.... he thought.



(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/7/7_8_6v.gif)

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



Foul!!!!  Jack's using unfair tactics!    :laugh:
Title: Re: Jack's Turn (NC-17)
Post by: Clyde-B on June 29, 2007, 07:01:53 pm


“Jack, can’t I roll over so I can put my legs over your shoulders?”

 

Whoa!  That was a surprise!   ;D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on June 29, 2007, 07:35:13 pm
Bring your whip Mistress Shasta!   :laugh:

Ok--you know who you are!! Form a line and wait your turn.   >:(
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on June 29, 2007, 07:46:14 pm
That's tellin' um....Shasta - you go girl.  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/1/1_4_126.gif)

That's cute, Merr! I looked for a whip pic and my computer started going crazy sending me "questionable" websites.  LOL. So I'm glad you found an appropriate one.
Title: Re: Jack's Turn (NC-17)
Post by: Dagi on June 30, 2007, 01:03:38 am
This story is intended for adults only.

Jack’s Turn by garycottle

.........

“What the hell you doin’, Jack?” asked Ennis, sleepy and confused.

Jack answered in a hushed tone, “I woke up and needed a fuck, so would you just lay still.”

“But...”

“Just shut up and enjoy it, will you?”

“Jack, can’t I roll over so I can put my legs over your shoulders?”

There was something in the way Ennis asked this, like a small boy pleading for a glass of water to stave off bedtime, that brought an impish smile to Jack’s face.  He put his lips up against Ennis’s ear and whispered in a wicked voice, “Only if you call me daddy.”

*shakes her head in disbelieve*

Gary, Gary, Gary, wow, I´m ........don´t know what to say (me!). That sure was hot. Wow. *Gulp*. And your descriptive writing blows me away.

And than that sweet ending, wow. Now I wrote three "wow"s in one stupid comment. You can easily see that you just blew me away. Perhaps it´s too

early in the morning for an intelligent comment....

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on June 30, 2007, 01:25:41 am
Quote
“Jack, can’t I roll over so I can put my legs over your shoulders?”

I've tried and I can't even see it in my mind's eye!! Would they "disengage" before the rollover? I could see it then. Well---I could if I uncover my eyes. LOL
Title: Re: Sweet Talk
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 30, 2007, 01:29:09 am
Ah, what a lovely tender moment littlewing.

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

ps. I thought the word "bum" was very British, don't you Americans use the word "Butt"?

We usually use the word butt, but I like bum!
Title: Re: After the Dance
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 30, 2007, 01:30:14 am
Ah littlewing, what a sexy strip tease performed especially for Ennis ... I bet you put yourself in Ennis' place didn't you? .. I know I did .... whoooo wheeeee!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

You know I did, Susie!
Title: Re: Sweet Talk Part 3
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 30, 2007, 01:31:20 am
Good heavens littlewing, you are out of control!! That last line just kills me ... you wouldn't catch me being so rude !!! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/1/1_4_103.gif)


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Opps!!  :laugh:
Title: Re: Sweet Talk Part 3
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 30, 2007, 01:32:45 am
Wow littlewing!  Ennis as a submissive bottom boy?  You know that's not how I see him, but that's damn sexy.

Gary

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/1/1_4_57.gif) (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/1/1_4_59.gif) (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/470.gif)

 :laugh: :laugh: Thanks, Gary!
Title: Re: Sweet Talk Part 3
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 30, 2007, 01:33:57 am
That was something for me, yeeehaaawww!

You nnnaaaaassssty girl ("Littlewing" really is toooo innocent a name for you!!!)!

Give us mooore! part 4 please! For Eric!





Sure!  For Eric!  Tomorrow, okay?  I planned something a little different for tonight!  :)
Title: Re: Rack em up!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 30, 2007, 01:35:31 am
Rack em up! by Susie



Ennis watched admiringly as Jack leaned over the pool table to take his shot.  The white ball was near the far end and in order to pot the black into the corner pocket and claim yet another victory, Jack had to lie, stretched half way across the table. 

Ennis’ thoughts drifted as he observed Jack’s rear end…. peeling off Jack’s clothing, one item at a time, leaving his jeans until last, savoring each moment as he slowly slid them down to his ankles, revealing pale pink flesh, soft downy hair, and the perfectly toned, muscular roundness of his buttocks.

Moving in behind him, one hand caressing each cheek, massaging, circling, spreading them wide apart, ready to plunge in deep ….. “Whoo whee! That’s three games to one, bud!  You sure you wanna take me on again? Hey, you OK Ennis?”  Ennis reached for his pool cue, smiling to himself, “Rack em up!” he ordered…. Later.... he thought.



(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/7/7_8_6v.gif)

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Susie, this is brilliant!  Very well written and original.  I can't get enough of your writing.  You truly are a master!
Title: Re: Sweet Talk
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 30, 2007, 01:36:51 am
Turabout time huh, Marie!

How about giving Jack a little more experience so he can develop better technique!   ;D

Hey, Clyde!  I've missed you here!

Thanks for your suggestion!  I'll get to work on it!  :)
Title: Re: Jack's Turn (NC-17)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 30, 2007, 01:43:27 am
This story is intended for adults only.


There was something in the way Ennis asked this, like a small boy pleading for a glass of water to stave off bedtime, that brought an impish smile to Jack’s face.  He put his lips up against Ennis’s ear and whispered in a wicked voice, “Only if you call me daddy.”

Superb, Gary!  I truly enjoyed reading every word of this.  You are fearless in describing Jack and Ennis' peivate moments, and I really appreciate that!  This fic is extremely well written, hot and sexy as hell!  Wonderful!
Title: The Secretary
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 30, 2007, 01:51:28 am
Trisha walked into Aguirre’s trailer carrying a thermos of coffee and a dozen donuts.  Joe Aguirre hired Trisha Smith as his secretary a few months after Ennis and Jack left Brokeback.  Paperwork was piling up, and he needed someone to help with the phones, typing, hiring.  Jack Twist just left, looking for work, moments before Trisha arrived.

“Who was that, Mr. Aguirre?"  Trisha asked with a twinkle in her eye as she handed Joe his coffee and donuts.

“Was he looking for work?”

 Aguirre sipped at his coffee and took a bite of a French cruller.  “Yeah, that pissant had the nerve to return here looking for a job.”  Aguirre began.  “But after the way he behaved last year, ain’t no way in hell I’m gonna rehire Jack Twist!”  Trisha took a seat behind her desk.

 “Well, he sure is a handsome man!”  Trisha began as she poured herself a cup of warm coffee from the thermos.  “I sure would like to be friends with someone like him!”

Aguirre studied Trisha and wondered if he made a mistake in hiring someone.  But there was work to be done, and he couldn’t do it all by himself.  Trisha came highly recommended, finished at the top of her class in secretarial school.  But she was young, lovely, single, and somewhat desperate.  Aguirre supposed it was natural for Trisha to be attracted to the handsome Jack Twist.

“You’re wastin’ your time there, my girl!”  Aguirre told Trisha with a smirk.  And he remembered several months back when he made a trip to camp to see his hands, Jack Twist and Ennis Del Mar.  Aguirre couldn’t recall why he went up there to see them, but he’ll never forget what he saw!

“Now enough of this idle chit chat!”  Aguirre admonished Trisha with a point of his finger.  “Back to work!”

“What a mean ole fart!”  Trisha thought as she turned to her typewriter.  But she was never one to be discouraged from pursuing something she wanted.  When Aguirre left the trailer to inspect the herd, Tricia grabbed his rolodex and looked for the name and number of one Jack Twist…
Title: Re: The Secretary
Post by: Toycoon on June 30, 2007, 02:00:53 am
Quote
When Aguirre left the trailer to inspect the herd, Tricia grabbed his rolodex and looked for the name and number of one Jack Twist…

This is great little story, littlewing1957. You really are good at this. I'm hiring you when I start my own toy company! You never run out of ideas!

Merr, IMDb sucks now! I'm sorry but I can't deal with the homophobic baloney any more.

Hey you guys, check out my latest project on the Brokeback Mountain Craft Corner. It's really fun (and easy to make)!
Title: Re: Sweet Talk
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 30, 2007, 02:03:03 am
Marie, I can't wait to read that one.  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_6_2.gif)

Did you decide to leave IMDb alone.  I went on there today for about 10 minutes and there was so much hate.

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_1_21.gif)
Merrily

No, I'm still there.  I can't stand back and see that Board slip to the darkside.  I know who you mean, though.  That guy is trolling on a lot of Boards, not just BBM!
Title: Re: The Secretary
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 30, 2007, 02:07:52 am
This is great little story, littlewing1957. You really are good at this. I'm hiring you when I start my own toy company! You never run out of ideas!

Merr, IMDb sucks now! I'm sorry but I can't deal with the homophobic baloney any more.

Hey you guys, check out my latest project on the Brokeback Mountain Craft Corner. It's really fun (and easy to make)!

Thanks for your kind words, Toycoon.  And I know how you feel about IMDB.  I gotta get over to the craft corner.  I knew there was something I've been meaning to do!   :)
Title: Re: The Secretary
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 30, 2007, 02:18:42 am
littlewing, I hope the ... means that we are going to have a Part 2?  Kind of a mystery you got going on there.  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/82.gif)

M

I don't know Merr, I'll see!
Title: Re: Sweet Talk
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 30, 2007, 02:21:16 am
There's more than one.  Every topic I look at is like that.  And, I went on another movie board yesterday and the same thing was going on.  To think I put up with that for so long.  I am so glad to be here and that our "gang" is here too.  There is such a positive atmosphere here.

I felt like you for so long - couldn't bear to leave, but going back is a real wakeup call.

M

I'm only there for one reason, and I can't leave until I'm satisfied..oh, I'll tell you later.  :)
Title: Re: The Secretary
Post by: Dagi on June 30, 2007, 08:04:18 am
Trisha walked into Aguirre’s trailer carrying a thermos of coffee and a dozen donuts.  Joe Aguirre hired Trisha Smith as his secretary a few months after Ennis and Jack left Brokeback.  Paperwork was piling up, and he needed someone to help with the phones, typing, hiring.  Jack Twist just left, looking for work, moments before Trisha arrived.

“Who was that, Mr. Aguirre?"  Trisha asked with a twinkle in her eye as she handed Joe his coffee and donuts.

“Was he looking for work?”

 Aguirre sipped at his coffee and took a bite of a French cruller.  “Yeah, that pissant had the nerve to return here looking for a job.”  Aguirre began.  “But after the way he behaved last year, ain’t no way in hell I’m gonna rehire Jack Twist!”  Trisha took a seat behind her desk.


 “Well, he sure is a handsome man!”  Trisha began as she poured herself a cup of warm coffee from the thermos.  “I sure would like to be friends with someone like him!”

Aguirre studied Trisha and wondered if he made a mistake in hiring someone.  But there was work to be done, and he couldn’t do it all by himself.  Trisha came highly recommended, finished at the top of her class in secretarial school.  But she was young, lovely, single, and somewhat desperate.  Aguirre supposed it was natural for Trisha to be attracted to the handsome Jack Twist.

“You’re wastin’ your time there, my girl!”  Aguirre told Trisha with a smirk.  And he remembered several months back when he made a trip to camp to see his hands, Jack Twist and Ennis Del Mar.  Aguirre couldn’t recall why he went up there to see them, but he’ll never forget what he saw!

“Now enough of this idle chit chat!”  Aguirre admonished Trisha with a point of his finger.  “Back to work!”

“What a mean ole fart!”  Trisha thought as she turned to her typewriter.  But she was never one to be discouraged from pursuing something she wanted.  When Aguirre left the trailer to inspect the herd, Tricia grabbed his rolodex and looked for the name and number of one Jack Twist…



Hi Littlewing, what are you up to now?

I liked that Arguirre didn´t remember why he had come up to Jack but remembered well what he had seen :laugh:. I bet our boys left some impression

here... (makes me think of Miss Parker...! )

Dagi
Title: Re: The Secretary
Post by: Clyde-B on June 30, 2007, 11:56:04 am
  Tricia grabbed his rolodex and looked for the name and number of one Jack Twist…


Marie,

When you were writing this you didn't happen to get a look at the number did you?   ;D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on June 30, 2007, 12:38:13 pm
(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_11_6.gif)

Hi Shasta darlin'.  I think maybe you're over thinking it a bit.   ;D

Gary

LOL, Gary! What can I say? I'm a "visual" learner.
Title: Re: The Secretary
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 30, 2007, 08:50:28 pm
Marie,

When you were writing this you didn't happen to get a look at the number did you?   ;D

Clyde, I love you!  :) 
Title: Re: The Secretary
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 30, 2007, 08:51:54 pm

Hi Littlewing, what are you up to now?

I liked that Arguirre didn´t remember why he had come up to Jack but remembered well what he had seen :laugh:. I bet our boys left some impression

here... (makes me think of Miss Parker...! )

Dagi

 :laugh:  :laugh:  Hi, Dagi!  This strange little tale has been at the back of my mind for awhile now.  I don't know if I'll continue it, though!  :)
Title: Re: Jack's Turn (NC-17)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 30, 2007, 08:53:13 pm
Thanks so much littlewing.  Your kind words mean a lot to me.   :)

Gary

You're more than welcome, Sweets!
Title: Re: The Secretary
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 30, 2007, 08:58:29 pm
Great story telling, littlewing.  You kept me wonding what was going to happen next.  And now I'm wondering if this will be the last we see of young Trisha.

Interesting what you did with Aguirre, too.  You kept his attitude toward Jack ambiguous.  I happen to be of the school that thinks Aguirre really didn't mind Jack and Ennis fooling around.  I think he's one of those honest day's work type people, and he was upset that some of the sheep had been lost, and some where mixed up with that other herd.  He referred to what he saw Jack and Ennis doing as stemming the rose which sounds kind of nutreal to me.  He implied they were goofing off and not doing their jobs, and he most pointed did not call them queers when obviously he could have.

I remember reading AP's comments were she said she had talked to an old guy who had been in Aguirre's position, and according to her, he told her that he sent boys up in the high meadows in pairs specifically so they could take care of each other if they got lonely.   ;)  I think Aguirre is practical in this way.  If stemming the rose had resulted in a higher survival rate for the sheep he would not have cared, would not have said anything about it, and would have hired Jack on for another summer.  That's just my take on the man, but I know the door is open for other views.

Gary

I totally agree with your views on Aguirre's attitude, Gary!  I think Aguirre was shocked, but okay with E&J's relationship.  I, too, read about livestock owners sending guys up in pairs in case they got lonely.  Aguirre probably felt the boys could take care of one another, and leave the sheep alone, if you know what I mean! ;)

Gary, I believe others expressed an interest in hearing more.  If you would like me to add to the story, I'll consider it!
Title: Close Call
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 30, 2007, 09:52:45 pm
An 80 year old Ennis Del Mar returned to his home after a 2 month stay in the County Hospital.  He suffered a moderate heart attack, and the doctors released him reluctantly, and only under the condition that he had someone home at all times to look after him.  As it turned out, Alma Jr. was available to move in with her dad, as her husband passed away several years ago, and her 2 children left home even before Kurt died.  Ennis considered himself a very lucky man to not only survive an attack that could have killed him, but to have a loving daughter – well – 2 loving daughters!  Jenny bought him the house shortly before she moved overseas to pursue a singing career. 

Alma practically carried a still weak Ennis into the living room, and lowered him to the couch.  She made him as comfortable as she could before heading to the kitchen to put away the few groceries purchased earlier.  Ennis found himself alone in his living room and allowed his thoughts to drift back to his first night in the ICU.  He was groggy from the medicines, but he was certain he heard a familiar voice.  It was muffled and vague at first, but became clearer, louder.  Ennis was sure he heard the words, “Come to me, Baby!”  The voice was sad, hesitant.  Ennis knew who called him, but he wasn’t ready to go just yet. 

The hospital sent over a social worker to check on Ennis’ progress, and to make sure that someone was at the house to care for him.  Alma offered the young man a cup of coffee and left them alone to have a talk.  The young man asked Ennis if he was experiencing any depression, loneliness, fear, regret.  Ennis shook his head no, but thought he had better tell the worker about the voice he heard.  The young man listened to Ennis recount the words, “Come to me, Baby” with particular interest. 

“And you say you know who was calling you?”  The young man asked as he took notes.  “Why don’t you tell me who that person is?”

“Was!”  Ennis began.  “Was!”  He pulled his hand-made blanket up to his chin and fought back tears.

“His name was Jack Twist and we was herding sheep almost 60 years ago up on Brokeback Mountain….”
Title: Re: Close Call
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 30, 2007, 11:45:01 pm
Oh, Marie.  I read this story 20 minutes ago and it just threw me for a loop.  It hit me really hard - 60 years and he is still loving Jack.  So, so so so sad.  Maybe they will meet again in the hereafter. I hope so.  I'm glad Ennis has Junior though.  What about Junior's mom? 

I loved it Marie.  You sure know how to get my emotions raging.  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_9_7.gif)
Love,

Merrily

Hi, Merr!  I'm so glad you liked the story.  I wasn't sure how it would be received.  I'll write a more upbeat story next time!
Title: Re: Close Call
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 30, 2007, 11:47:37 pm
Heartbreaking, littlewing.  I like the idea of Ennis living to be an old man, and it's wonderful that Jenny bought him a house, and Jr. is looking after him, but it's hard to think of Ennis falling apart.  And Alma Jr. carrying him...  Poor Ennis.

Good story!

Gary

Gary, I had a hard time imagining Ennis living to 80, with the smoking, the divorce, the heartbreak of Jack's passing, and all.  But it is possible to have someone in Ennis' condition live to be 80, I guess.  Or is this anouther AU piece?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 01, 2007, 01:13:57 am
Great to see you Spicey!! Sorry that your folks aren't well. That's very stressful. Come on the board whenever you get a chance---it's good stress relief!! Missed ya---take care mate!!
Title: Re: Close Call
Post by: Dagi on July 01, 2007, 05:42:34 am
An 80 year old Ennis Del Mar returned to his home after a 2 month stay in the County Hospital.  He suffered a moderate heart attack, and the doctors released him reluctantly, and only under the condition that he had someone home at all times to look after him.  As it turned out, Alma Jr. was available to move in with her dad, as her husband passed away several years ago, and her 2 children left home even before Kurt died.  Ennis considered himself a very lucky man to not only survive an attack that could have killed him, but to have a loving daughter – well – 2 loving daughters!  Jenny bought him the house shortly before she moved overseas to pursue a singing career. 

Alma practically carried a still weak Ennis into the living room, and lowered him to the couch.  She made him as comfortable as she could before heading to the kitchen to put away the few groceries purchased earlier.  Ennis found himself alone in his living room and allowed his thoughts to drift back to his first night in the ICU.  He was groggy from the medicines, but he was certain he heard a familiar voice.  It was muffled and vague at first, but became clearer, louder.  Ennis was sure he heard the words, “Come to me, Baby!”  The voice was sad, hesitant.  Ennis knew who called him, but he wasn’t ready to go just yet. 

The hospital sent over a social worker to check on Ennis’ progress, and to make sure that someone was at the house to care for him.  Alma offered the young man a cup of coffee and left them alone to have a talk.  The young man asked Ennis if he was experiencing any depression, loneliness, fear, regret.  Ennis shook his head no, but thought he had better tell the worker about the voice he heard.  The young man listened to Ennis recount the words, “Come to me, Baby” with particular interest. 

“And you say you know who was calling you?”  The young man asked as he took notes.  “Why don’t you tell me who that person is?”

“Was!”  Ennis began.  “Was!”  He pulled his hand-made blanket up to his chin and fought back tears.

“His name was Jack Twist and we was herding sheep almost 60 years ago up on Brokeback Mountain….”


What a touching story, Marie. And so good to know that he will have someone to lead him across the line and welcome him home when it´s time for him to go.

Thank you !

Dagi
Title: Re: Pete's Saloon
Post by: Dagi on July 01, 2007, 05:47:29 am
Gary, I love the image of ours boys dancing in a tight embrace, so tight that one of them even can fall asleep and is still held by the other one. They probably didn´t speak it out, but they sure knew how to show love. I especially loved that line:

.... but they allowed the passion to fade.  After two nights of lovemaking the old urgency was replaced by a different yearning.


Thank you for posting it again.

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 01, 2007, 06:30:51 am
Our dearest Spiceylife,

come here whenever you need some distraction, it´s okay that you "don´t leave no sign", we know that you are there and we are with you in our

thoughts. I wish you strength. And don´t worry about being a ´downer´. We all want to be there for each other. This is not a place to come only with a

smile on your face, but a family that sticks together in hard times as well. Take what you need, and give only what you can give.

Take care, honey, I´m sending you all my love.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on July 01, 2007, 12:11:53 pm
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Hi, guys.
I really want you to know that I haven’t been deliberately away from you by choice, but rather by necessity, unfortunately.  I really miss you all.

Dear Spiceylife,
I am so sorry to hear of your situation. I hope you have some loving support to take care of your feelings and at least to take of your household. There's no question, you must take care of your parents; nothing else is as important. Your parents need you, especially your daddy. We love you, too but believe me, we'll keep. You know where to find us. Come back when you can, when you need a little diversion and a pinch of 'nasty'.
Warmest regards,
Toycoon
Title: Re: Pete's Saloon
Post by: Toycoon on July 01, 2007, 12:42:07 pm
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Also, after being crowned the most nasty person here, at least for a day, I wanted to show my softer, more romantic side.

Aww gee whiz, garycottle! We would love to see your soft, romantic side. Now drop them drawers and lets have a look!
Title: Re: Pete's Saloon
Post by: Dagi on July 01, 2007, 12:46:30 pm
Thanks so much, Dagi.  This was my little homage to the dozy embrace.

And that reminds me, I have been looking at monuments because I'm going to buy one for my parent's graves soon, and an idea popped into my head.  Wouldn't it be great if someone made a life-sized bronze statue of Jack and Ennis in their classic dozy embrace so it could be placed at the head of the graves of a gay couple?   :)

Gary

This is a wunderful, lovely idea, Gary. You are a romantic person, that´s for sure.
Title: Red and Sweet
Post by: Dagi on July 01, 2007, 12:49:26 pm
Red and Sweet by Dagi

„Look what I found on the way back!“ Ennis dismounted quickly, took one of the tiny red fruits out of his Resistol and put it without asking right between Jack´s lips.

„Mmmmm, wild raspberries, love them...“ mumbled Jack, savouring the sweetness mixed with the taste of Ennis´ hands.

Ennis kept feeding Jack, smiling happily, enjoying  the sense of the warm moist soft lips when out of a sudden Jack caught hold of his hand, and started to lick the juice off his thumb, then sucked each single finger deep into his hot mouth, wrapping his tongue around it, closing his lips tightly, and unzipped Ennis´ jeans...
Title: Re: Red and Sweet
Post by: Toycoon on July 01, 2007, 12:55:40 pm
Red and Sweet by Dagi

„Look what I found on the way back!“ Ennis dismounted quickly, took one of the tiny red fruits out of his Resistol and put it without asking right between Jack´s lips.

„Mmmmm, wild raspberries, love them...“ mumbled Jack, savouring the sweetness mixed with the taste of Ennis´ hands.

Ennis kept feeding Jack, smiling happily, enjoying the sense of the warm moist soft lip's when out of a sudden Jack caught hold of his hand, and started to lick the juice off his thumb, then sucked each single finger deep into his hot mouth, wrapping his tongue around it, closing his lips tightly, and unzipped Ennis' jeans...

Very nice, Miss Dagi. Very erotic and visual. And only three sentences, I might add. See, I told you, it can be done.
Title: Re: Red and Sweet
Post by: Dagi on July 01, 2007, 01:02:08 pm
Very nice, Miss Dagi. Very erotic and visual. And only three sentences, I might add. See, I told you, it can be done.

Thank you so much, MOT3SF! I´ve done a few 3S meanwhile, I think! Have to count them...
Title: Re: Red and Sweet
Post by: Dagi on July 01, 2007, 03:01:45 pm
MMM MM  This one truly is sweet and sexy, Dagi.

Gary

thank you, my sweet and sexy boy.

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Damn seeds.

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Title: A Summer Morning 1957
Post by: Dagi on July 01, 2007, 03:09:31 pm
I dedicate this one to Merrily.

A Summer Morning 1957 by Dagi

Jack woke up in the hay with his still sound asleep cousin Eric in his arms. He didn´t remember how they had gotten into that position, spooned up closely, maybe this - despite his age - always frightful boy had been searching for comfort in the night.
Jack enjoyed the warmth of Eric´s body, felt his hard dick against the boy´s butt. Following a sudden impulse he put his palm on Eric´s otherwise tiny, but now that it was erect, rather impressive penis and, overwhelmed by what he sensed, a low moan escaped from his throat.
Much to his surprise his cousin placed his own hand upon Jack´s, pressing it even more onto his little hard cock. The sound of his own groan finally woke him up completely, and he jumped up and out and would avoid  looking Jack in the eye for the rest of the summer.


Jack pulled the blanket aside, searched for Ennis big, strong hand and pressed it onto his hot, throbbing member, moaning huskily into the bedroll....
Title: Re: A Summer Morning 1957
Post by: Dagi on July 01, 2007, 03:53:40 pm
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Wow Dagi!  A lot of pubescent boys fool around with each other.  (OMG!  The memories your story brought back.   ;D )  But Jack feeling up his own cousin...  I didn't even know the Twists were from West Virginia.   :P

Thanks so much for the deliciously naughty story.

Gary

Thank you, Gary, I´m glad you enjoyed it !!

Dagi
Title: Re: A Summer Morning 1957
Post by: Toycoon on July 01, 2007, 08:33:08 pm
I missed this story earlier. Dagi, you dirty girl! Shame on you. Keep 'em coming! :D
Title: Jack with Ennis Fan Fic on BetterMost
Post by: Toycoon on July 01, 2007, 08:37:09 pm
This next story is for my dear Susiebell and all the other lovers of men's golden globes.
Title: Come and get it!
Post by: Toycoon on July 01, 2007, 08:38:12 pm
Jack sat on an old tree stump, shirtless in the noonday sun, gazing off into the distance past the sheep, rubbing his forehead and thinking about all of the events of the night previous.

Like an Indian brave, Ennis silently snuck up behind Jack, yanked off his black cowboy hat and took off running down the hillside shouting, "Come an' get it!" with Jack, very close behind him.

Jack made a flying leap grabbing the sides of Ennis' trousers, exposing his butt and sending them both to the ground rolling and laughing hysterically then, Jack took a tender bite of Ennis' ass.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 01, 2007, 09:28:42 pm
Hi, guys.

I really want you to know that I haven’t been deliberately away from you by choice, but rather by necessity, unfortunately.  I really miss you all.

My father has Parkinson’s Disease.  He’s had it for 15 years now, but over the past few months, his daily medications have begun to lose their effectiveness.  This happens with Parkinson’s.  Over time, the tablets don’t work as well and the situation deteriorates.  That’s where we are now, and it’s a mighty struggle for him.  My mother isn’t getting any younger and she’s struggling, too.  She’s been trying to care for my father at home, which is proving more difficult with each passing week.

I’ve been trying to work, study, run back and forth between two households, visit my grandmother and care for the folks as best I can.  It ain’t easy!  And just when it looked as though things may settle down a little, and I might find the time to come back here, like last week, it somehow all goes to pieces overnight and I need to be there again.  *sigh*

So that’s why I haven’t been here recently.  Dad is going back to hospital today for reassessment, so that will give us a chance to get back on our feet again. 

Sorry to be such a ‘downer’, everyone, and sorry to anybody I haven’t replied to yet.  It’s been a difficult few months.  Anyway, this thread is giving me a great laugh & a great read.  I’ll be back for more this afternoon, after the hospital.  Thanks, lovely friends, and thank you for letting me get that off my chest.


Hi, Spiceylife!  Thanks for the post, and for telling us what's been going on with you.  I am so sorry to hear about the troubles you're having.  All my best to you and your family.  We really miss you here, and will be happy when you can return to us.  It is good to know that you've never really left.  Be well, my sweet!  I'm sending a lot of positive energy your way!  :)
Title: Re: The Secretary
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 01, 2007, 09:29:37 pm
Hi there littlewing.  I'm happy to let your heart take you where ever it wants to take you.  But with that said, I would be interesting in hearing more about the secretery, and Aguirre too for that matter.

Gary

Thanks, Gary!  I'll work on it.
Title: Re: Pete's Saloon
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 01, 2007, 09:31:50 pm
Pete’s Saloon by garycottle

Thank God it was warm this time.  It was June, the beginning of summer, and Jack and Ennis had managed to get up to the cabin.  For three days running they had hunted elk–unsuccessfully as it turns out–and they had spent the first two nights joined in easy passion with the lights out.  After dinner on the third night they sat out on the porch in their shirtsleeves, rocking in twin rockers.  They didn’t say much.  Instead they listened to the night music of the wilderness.  It was after nine, and Ennis considered going on to bed.  But Jack had another notion.  He wanted to drive down the mountain and get a drink.

“We got beer here.”

“Come on, Ennis.  There’s a place right at the turnoff.”

“It’ll take us over an hour to get down there, and that means an hour gettin’ back,” said Ennis, sounding bullheaded, but somehow communicating that he had in fact given in.

It was close to eleven by the time they got to the bar, which was a plane cinder block building that had once served as a Texaco station.  The pumps had been removed, the windows had been painted over, and a neon sign over the door read Pete’s Place.  The sign went dark just as the boys pulled up. 

On finding out they had missed last call Ennis’s first instinct was to turn around and go back.  But Jack jumped out of the truck when he saw a stooped, weathered man with grey hair in need of a cut come out and head toward the only other pickup in the lot. 

“You Pete?” Jack asked, open and friendly.

The man didn’t look up and continued toward his truck.  “We’re closed.  Slow night, so I’m going home.  Come back tomorrow.”

Ennis got out, stood there at the fender, and watched Jack put the charm to the old guy.

“Come one, man,” Jack said sounding like a kid asking for one more ice cream cone.  “My friend and I are camping up in the mountains, and we drove near two hours to get here.”

That cinched the deal.  Old Pete hesitated a moment, and then looked up at Jack.  “Tell you what, you boys go on in, drink what you want, and put the money on the counter.”  He then threw his key ring over.  Jack came close to missing it.  “Lock up when you’re finished, and put that on the ledge over the door.”

After two beers Jack got up, plugged in the jukebox, and made a selection.  The quiet, ghostlike hush of the room was suddenly replaced with Patsy Cline singing Crazy.

When Jack indicated that they should dance, Ennis looked at him like a frightened child.

“Come on, friend.  Nobody’s here.  Nobody’s goin’ a see.”

The two met on the worn linoleum and embraced.  Their dicks quickly hardened as they pressed against each other, but they allowed the passion to fade.  After two nights of lovemaking the old urgency was replaced by a different yearning.  They danced for a long time, until the gentle sways slowed and stopped altogether.  Then Ennis noticed he held a sleeping boy.

“Come on, Jack,” he whispered.  “Time to go home.”

Another one of my favorites, Gary!  Thanks for posting!
Title: Re: Pete's Saloon
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 01, 2007, 09:38:55 pm
Thanks so much, Dagi.  This was my little homage to the dozy embrace.

And that reminds me, I have been looking at monuments because I'm going to buy one for my parent's graves soon, and an idea popped into my head.  Wouldn't it be great if someone made a life-sized bronze statue of Jack and Ennis in their classic dozy embrace so it could be placed at the head of the graves of a gay couple?   :)

Gary

Beautiful sentiment, Gary!  Very lovely!
Title: Re: Close Call
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 01, 2007, 09:39:37 pm
What a touching story, Marie. And so good to know that he will have someone to lead him across the line and welcome him home when it´s time for him to go.

Thank you !

Dagi

Thanks Dagi, Honey!
Title: Re: Red and Sweet
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 01, 2007, 09:42:54 pm
Red and Sweet by Dagi

„Look what I found on the way back!“ Ennis dismounted quickly, took one of the tiny red fruits out of his Resistol and put it without asking right between Jack´s lips.

„Mmmmm, wild raspberries, love them...“ mumbled Jack, savouring the sweetness mixed with the taste of Ennis´ hands.

Ennis kept feeding Jack, smiling happily, enjoying  the sense of the warm moist soft lips when out of a sudden Jack caught hold of his hand, and started to lick the juice off his thumb, then sucked each single finger deep into his hot mouth, wrapping his tongue around it, closing his lips tightly, and unzipped Ennis´ jeans...

Dagi, this is certainly hot, but it is also romantic, as well.  I love hoe the sensuous act of eating leads to other things!  Lovely work, Sweetheart!
Title: Re: A Summer Morning 1957
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 01, 2007, 09:44:32 pm
I dedicate this one to Merrily.

A Summer Morning 1957 by Dagi

Jack woke up in the hay with his still sound asleep cousin Eric in his arms. He didn´t remember how they had gotten into that position, spooned up closely, maybe this - despite his age - always frightful boy had been searching for comfort in the night.
Jack enjoyed the warmth of Eric´s body, felt his hard dick against the boy´s butt. Following a sudden impulse he put his palm on Eric´s otherwise tiny, but now that it was erect, rather impressive penis and, overwhelmed by what he sensed, a low moan escaped from his throat.
Much to his surprise his cousin placed his own hand upon Jack´s, pressing it even more onto his little hard cock. The sound of his own groan finally woke him up completely, and he jumped up and out and would avoid  looking Jack in the eye for the rest of the summer.


Jack pulled the blanket aside, searched for Ennis big, strong hand and pressed it onto his hot, throbbing member, moaning huskily into the bedroll....

Brilliant!  I can't even find the words, Dagi! 
Title: Re: A Summer Morning 1957
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 01, 2007, 09:46:01 pm
Getting jiggy with his cousin is just so naughty, and very sexy ... not that I would do it with my one and only cousin ... eeuw!



Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Oh, Susie, I know what you mean!!!
Title: Re: Close Call
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 01, 2007, 09:46:38 pm
Marie, it wasn't just sad, but hopeful too.  Ennis knows that Jack is waiting for him.  How many of us have that luxury?  Beautiful.  I am so awed by your writing.

Merr

Thank you so much, Merr!  :D
Title: Come and Get It (part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 01, 2007, 10:09:58 pm
Susie, I want to dedicate Part 2 to you, as well!


“Owwww!”  Ennis teased, as Jack placed tiny, soft bites along his bum cheeks!  "Bite me a little more, Rodeo, I kinda like it,”  Ennis exclaimed. Jack giggled as he licked as well as bit, first along the swell of Ennis’ buttocks, and then along his deep and narrow slit.  Ennis pulled his bum away as Jack poised to place his tongue where the sun don’t shine!

Jack faced Ennis with a puzzled look.  “Let me do it, Ennis... I wanna!”  But Ennis pulled Jack’s face to his, gently forced his tongue down Jack’s throat.  "Look, I wanna taste more of you too, but how are we gonna do this?  Who does what to who first?" 

Jack had an idea.  “Look, just follow my lead, Cowboy.  This is gonna be real good.  That is, if you’re game.”  Ennis nodded vigorously, and Jack took his position, flat out on the ground.  “Now face my feet!”  Jack ordered huskily.  Ennis understood, and buried his head between Jack’s thighs.  He positioned his bum right over Jack’s eager mouth.  “Come and get it, Rodeo,”  Ennis yelled as Jack grabbed his hips and pulled him down…
Title: Re: Come and Get It (part 2)
Post by: Toycoon on July 01, 2007, 10:43:14 pm
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Ennis pulled his bum away as Jack poised to place his tongue where the sun don’t shine!

Littlewing1957, you are a wild woman! I'm certain this can be attributed to the dangerous influence of the notorious bum biter, Susiebell. She has us all under her nasty spell! Even the shy, unassuming Garycottle.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on July 02, 2007, 12:24:06 am
Hey folks,
I just wanted to wish everyone a Happy Independence Day. I'm "goin' 'round the coffee pot to find the handle" so to speak. I'm going on vacation to sunny (and hopefully, not rainy) Florida for a week. I'll miss you guys!
Title: Re: Come and get it!
Post by: Toycoon on July 02, 2007, 12:31:48 am
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Littlewing will have the boys doing some 69 rump munching.

Shaaa! Garycottle, don't pretend you don't like you dirty birdie, you!

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We went from light, romantic comedy to something you'd pick up at that shop with the booths in back that smell like Clorox.

What are you on about now?!


Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 02, 2007, 12:32:24 am
We will miss you too, friend! (http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x221/Shasta542/6_24_6Hugs-vi.gif)

Have fun in Florida!! (http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x221/Shasta542/DogwithFlagHappy4th-vi.gif)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 02, 2007, 12:51:09 am
OMG so many new sites and stories. I have to come back at midday, when my kids sleep...

23 guests are viewing this topic!!!!
Title: Re: Come and get it!
Post by: Dagi on July 02, 2007, 12:53:56 am
Toycoon, I would call you and Marie a tag team, but given the kind of stories you write I'm bowled over by the implication. 

Gary

:laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
Title: Re: Red and Sweet
Post by: Dagi on July 02, 2007, 04:19:57 am
Ooh Dagi, so delicious and juicy!  I've got some raspberries in the fridge ... now where is that hubby of mine??

Lovely story honey!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Thank you sweetheart. Hope you had some fun with your raspberries!

Dagi
Title: Re: A Summer Morning 1957
Post by: Dagi on July 02, 2007, 04:22:36 am
Dagi, you're on a roll tonight! Getting jiggy with his cousin is just so naughty, and very sexy ... not that I would do it with my one and only cousin ... eeuw!

Very sexy story honey!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Me neither. And that´s a real meneither, not a jackmeneither

Thanks for your nice words!

Dagi
Title: Re: A Summer Morning 1957
Post by: Dagi on July 02, 2007, 04:25:49 am
Thank you Dagi, you really woke me up too.  Very hot - I love the way your mind thinks.  "Guns going off"  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/403.gif)

Merr

Thank you, Merrily! My mind does all them things by itself, you know that I´m as innocent as the rest of them girls here ;D

Dagi

my grammar sure goes to hell here.
Title: Re: A Summer Morning 1957
Post by: Dagi on July 02, 2007, 04:27:42 am
I missed this story earlier. Dagi, you dirty girl! Shame on you. Keep 'em coming! :D

Thank you toycoon! I still have that Basque thing in the oven ( ;D ). I´ll write it especially for you.

Dagi
Title: Re: Red and Sweet
Post by: Dagi on July 02, 2007, 04:33:14 am
Dagi, this is certainly hot, but it is also romantic, as well.  I love how the sensuous act of eating leads to other things!  Lovely work, Sweetheart!

Me too!! Thanks, Marie, honey!
Title: Re: Come and Get It (part 2)
Post by: Dagi on July 02, 2007, 04:37:50 am
Susie, I want to dedicate Part 2 to you, as well!


“Owwww!”  Ennis teased, as Jack placed tiny, soft bites along his bum cheeks!  "Bite me a little more, Rodeo, I kinda like it,”  Ennis exclaimed. Jack giggled as he licked as well as bit, first along the swell of Ennis’ buttocks, and then along his deep and narrow slit.  Ennis pulled his bum away as Jack poised to place his tongue where the sun don’t shine!

Jack faced Ennis with a puzzled look.  “Let me do it, Ennis... I wanna!”  But Ennis pulled Jack’s face to his, gently forced his tongue down Jack’s throat.  "Look, I wanna taste more of you too, but how are we gonna do this?  Who does what to who first?" 

Jack had an idea.  “Look, just follow my lead, Cowboy.  This is gonna be real good.  That is, if you’re game.”  Ennis nodded vigorously, and Jack took his position, flat out on the ground.  “Now face my feet!”  Jack ordered huskily.  Ennis understood, and buried his head between Jack’s thighs.  He positioned his bum right over Jack’s eager mouth.  “Come and get it, Rodeo,”  Ennis yelled as Jack grabbed his hips and pulled him down…


Toycoon and Marie, you did it again! You are too much for me. So, so sexy. Love it!

Dagi
Title: Re: Come and Get It (part 2)
Post by: Dagi on July 02, 2007, 04:40:05 am
Littlewing1957, you are a wild woman! I'm certain this can be attributed to the dangerous influence of the notorious bum biter, Susiebell. She has us all under her nasty spell! Even the shy, unassuming Garycottle.

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Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 02, 2007, 05:10:01 am
I was in Main street USA, Disney, Florida on Independence Day 1989 .... I even made it on the telly in the evening news for about a 10th of a second!

We'll miss you honey!!  Have a brilliant time toycoon!! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/12/12_1_126.gif)


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

ps. I'm going away for a fortnight soon ... I don't know what I'm going to do without you all ... if I could just get my hands on £700, I could get me a real nice laptop with wireless broadband!

We will miss you Toycoon, and we expect you to come back with some hot stuff!

Oh Susie, and what are we gonna do without you? Two weeks! OMG!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 02, 2007, 05:13:38 am
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I was as pure as the driven snow before I met you lot!!

So was I! I´d say Toycoon is to be blamed (in absence, hehe). ;D I mean he started this thread.....hun?
Title: Re: Beans
Post by: Dagi on July 02, 2007, 06:46:24 am
Beans by Susie


“I’m sicka beans!” Jack moaned, pulling faces and stirring his fork idly around the can.

“They’re just fine … now quit yer hammerin’, dumbass!”

Jack smiled to himself, lifted out a fully loaded fork, pulled it back a little with his finger, took aim, and let go.  Splat! …. the beans landed on Ennis’ cheek and slowly dribbled down his neck.

Jack giggled, kneeling in front of a dumbfounded Ennis, and licked them clean off his face, “Hmmm … tastes better that way!”  He unbuttoned his lover’s shirt, smeared more beans over his chest, the tomato sauce forming a pool in his naval, and proceeded to lick and bite at them hungrily.

Ennis jumped up, laughing, wrestling Jack to the ground, pulling at his belt and emptying the entire contents of the can down the back of his jeans.

“Ah Sheeit, Ennis!”  Jack cried, unbuckling his jeans and sliding them off, his firm white bottom, coated with beans, the sauce oozing between his buttocks and down the inside of his thighs.

Ennis pulled him down onto all fours and playfully licked his cheek, “Hmmmm … you’re right, tastes much better this way!”

Jack sighed and glanced behind him, watching Ennis greedily tuck in, and with a sly smile, announced “Dinner’s served!”


   
Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Yeeehaaaw, it´s butt-time on Jack&Ennis !!!

Susie,  ;D ;D ;D ;D I love it!

Dagi

Raspberries, beans, hmmm what else could we make them lick off each other??
Title: Re: Beans
Post by: Toycoon on July 02, 2007, 09:48:29 am
Quote
Yeeehaaaw, it´s butt-time on Jack&Ennis !!!

Oh great! Butt-Time and I'm going on vacation. I gonna miss this stuff!

Hmmmm, I wonder if the have butt-time in Florida?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Penthesilea on July 02, 2007, 11:15:49 am
Hi Dagi and all contributors,

this posting is long over due  ;D.

Thank you to everyone who contributes his writings to this thread. I'm enjoying it.

And special thanks to Dagi for collecting the stories on the other thread. Makes it so much easier to keep track of 'em.  :)

 :-*
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 02, 2007, 04:55:48 pm
There are a lot of things I'd like to lick off Jack or Ennis (mostly dessert-type edibles), but it makes me a little woozy to think about eating crack beans--no matter who it's offa. I'd probably have to "just say no".

 :laugh:  :laugh:   (http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x221/Shasta542/DANCERS.gif)   :laugh:  :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 02, 2007, 06:12:13 pm
Susie said "bum note".   :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh: That's funny!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 02, 2007, 06:17:06 pm
Hi Dagi and all contributors,

this posting is long over due  ;D.

Thank you to everyone who contributes his writings to this thread. I'm enjoying it.

And special thanks to Dagi for collecting the stories on the other thread. Makes it so much easier to keep track of 'em.  :)

 :-*

You are very welcome, Penthesilea!!
Title: Re: Beans
Post by: Dagi on July 02, 2007, 06:19:59 pm
  Very funny and I can picture it! 

Merr

Well, I can even taste it  ;D

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 02, 2007, 06:20:27 pm
(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_11_6.gif)

Hi Shasta,

I can understand your reaction.  I can remember being totally shocked when I learned that people did thatBoulevard by Jim Grimsley is about a gay young man who leaves his small southern town and goes to New Orleans in the hopes of finding more guys like himself.  He gets a job in an adult book store, and he befriends an older, chatty, queeny gay man.  The older man tells him about rimming, and the boy is just amazed.  And he even accuses his older friend of lying.  "You're making that up.  Nobody would do that."  The older man is surprised that his veracity has been challenged and in a stunned and hurt tone he says, "Honey, I'm not making anything up."   ;D  That really cracked me up, if you'll pardon the pun.

Gary

LOL.  "cracked me up". You and Susie are punsters! (http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x221/Shasta542/smile008.gif)

That sounds like a good book, Gary.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 02, 2007, 06:27:00 pm
(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_11_6.gif)

Hi Shasta,

I can understand your reaction.  I can remember being totally shocked when I learned that people did thatBoulevard by Jim Grimsley is about a gay young man who leaves his small southern town and goes to New Orleans in the hopes of finding more guys like himself.  He gets a job in an adult book store, and he befriends an older, chatty, queeny gay man.  The older man tells him about rimming, and the boy is just amazed.  And he even accuses his older friend of lying.  "You're making that up.  Nobody would do that."  The older man is surprised that his veracity has been challenged and in a stunned and hurt tone he says, "Honey, I'm not making anything up."   ;D  That really cracked me up, if you'll pardon the pun.

Gary

Rimming. My vocabulary keeps expanding. I think I still lack the necessary words for talking about things like...politics or so, but I sure could talk eloquently about to boys making out. Now that´s what I call a baaaad, baaad influence.

Dagi ::)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 02, 2007, 06:29:59 pm
Rimming. My vocabulary keeps expanding. I think I still lack the necessary words for talking about things like...politics or so, but I sure could talk eloquently about to boys making out. Now that´s what I call a baaaad, baaad influence.

Dagi ::)

It's school every day here, Dagi! (http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x221/Shasta542/smileys.gif)
Title: Re: Beans
Post by: Dagi on July 02, 2007, 06:37:48 pm
Yup, now that you mention it, I can too Dagi.  Isn't it kinda late for you?

Merrily

Yup. Just came back from a party and felt like joining another party. But you are right, it´s time to refuel myself!

Good night everyone! And Shasta and Merrily: When will you write us some bum-stories? If you don´t, Ill have to repost my first bum-story that got notoriously deleted on IMDb. It would fit in here, I think.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 02, 2007, 06:40:52 pm
FUCK that damn time difference. FUCK it again. That was for you, Gary. My husband is waiting ;D.

Good night!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 02, 2007, 06:46:48 pm
Yup Shasta, I've heard of rimming but never knew exactly what it was.  Love your emoticons - very cute.  Did you finally find a program you can download?

Merr

Thanks, Merr. I didn't download a whole thing---I just put some on "Photobucket".  

LOL. It's not the butt that got me woozy---it's the beans. I think I have a vegetable aversion. Anyone ever see "A Christmas Story"? I have to look away when the little boy eats mashed potatoes like a baby piggy---that makes me woozy too. Just thinking about it---I'm light-headed.   :-X
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 02, 2007, 07:50:18 pm
Hey folks,
I just wanted to wish everyone a Happy Independence Day. I'm "goin' 'round the coffee pot to find the handle" so to speak. I'm going on vacation to sunny (and hopefully, not rainy) Florida for a week. I'll miss you guys!

Ah, Toycoon, we'll miss you!  I know I will!  Have a good time, and a happy, safe 4th of July!
Title: Re: Come and get it!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 02, 2007, 07:51:54 pm
Toycoon, this is such a playful, erotic little scene.  Wonder what happens next.  Oh wait, I think I know.  Littlewing will have the boys doing some 69 rump munching.  We went from light, romantic comedy to something you'd pick up at that shop with the booths in back that smell like Clorox.   ;D

I'm lovin' it, Toycoon and Marie.

Gary

AWWW  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 02, 2007, 09:05:41 pm
Definitely all his fault!   (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_1_124.gif)

I KNOW!! It's going to kill me!

 .... even if I am lying on Morgan Porth beach in Cornwall eating proper Cornish ice cream and reading my book...  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/28/28_1_16.gif)

 .... and running for cover as the heavens open!!! ...  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/28/28_2_4v.gif) .... Just your average British Summer Holiday!


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Enjoy your holiday, Sweets!  You know we'll be here when you get back.  Is this to be a romantic getaway with just the hubby, or will you bring the kids along?  Either way, I'm sure you'll love every moment!
Title: Re: Beans
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 02, 2007, 09:08:36 pm
Beans by Susie


“I’m sicka beans!” Jack moaned, pulling faces and stirring his fork idly around the can.

“They’re just fine … now quit yer hammerin’, dumbass!”

Jack smiled to himself, lifted out a fully loaded fork, pulled it back a little with his finger, took aim, and let go.  Splat! …. the beans landed on Ennis’ cheek and slowly dribbled down his neck.

Jack giggled, kneeling in front of a dumbfounded Ennis, and licked them clean off his face, “Hmmm … tastes better that way!”  He unbuttoned his lover’s shirt, smeared more beans over his chest, the tomato sauce forming a pool in his naval, and proceeded to lick and bite at them hungrily.

Ennis jumped up, laughing, wrestling Jack to the ground, pulling at his belt and emptying the entire contents of the can down the back of his jeans.

“Ah Sheeit, Ennis!”  Jack cried, unbuckling his jeans and sliding them off, his firm white bottom, coated with beans, the sauce oozing between his buttocks and down the inside of his thighs.

Ennis pulled him down onto all fours and playfully licked his cheek, “Hmmmm … you’re right, tastes much better this way!”

Jack sighed and glanced behind him, watching Ennis greedily tuck in, and with a sly smile, announced “Dinner’s served!”


   
Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Sweet, playful story, Susie!  I love "Dinner's Served!"  Very, very nice!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 02, 2007, 09:10:18 pm
There are a lot of things I'd like to lick off Jack or Ennis (mostly dessert-type edibles), but it makes me a little woozy to think about eating crack beans--no matter who it's offa. I'd probably have to "just say no".

 :laugh:  :laugh:   (http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x221/Shasta542/DANCERS.gif)   :laugh:  :laugh:

 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 02, 2007, 09:15:07 pm
(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/29/29_3_10.gif)

Hey, if you guys got a kick out of the word rimming it might interest you to know what feltching means.   ;D  That's when I guy goes down there after he's deposited his wad. 

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/23/23_3_6.gif)

Gary

P.S.  Susie now has an idea for her next story.

Now Gary, I didn't know about this one!  Thanks for telling us!  We really can learn something new everyday. 
Title: Re: Beans
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 02, 2007, 09:16:03 pm
Yup. Just came back from a party and felt like joining another party. But you are right, it´s time to refuel myself!

Good night everyone! And Shasta and Merrily: When will you write us some a bum-stories? If you don´t, Ill have to repost my first bum-story that got notoriously deleted on IMDb. It would fit in here, I think.

Dagi

Please post it here, Dagi!  I love that story!  So earthy and raw!!  ::)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 02, 2007, 09:55:09 pm
I'm not going until 28th July!  Everyone's coming, me, Graham, the kids, the dog and the in-laws ... it's going to be very cosy in our 8 birth caravan!! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/7/7_6_1.gif)   

Romantic getaway??  I can't remember what one of those is!  I know my kiddies aren't babies anymore but I still can't bear to go away without them ... pathetic I know!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif) 

Kids make vacations more fun!! In-laws? Meh. (Just kidding---I loved my in-laws; still do.)
Title: Pray for Him!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 02, 2007, 10:14:18 pm
Jim Bennett carried a barely conscious Jack Twist up to his front door.  “Poor soul!”  Jim thought as he propped an arm around Jack’s shoulder.  He was asked by the Pastor of Ephesians A.M.E. Church to see that Mr. Twist got home in one piece.  Jim knew Jack well, worked with him at Newsome’s for years.

Jack was pulled into Ephesians after a sister saw him on the sidewalk outside of the church, dancing and clapping, swaying in time to the music of the praise service: music so resonant that it could be heard from blocks away.  Jack was unbelievably drunk and incoherent, muttering something about Mexico and Ennis..or was it Dennis?  Rev. Macklin and the entire congregation prayed for Jack, and made him as comfortable as possible.  Jim Bennett was the only person in church who knew Jack’s identity. He also knew what haunted him, made Jack drink like a fish.  That Randall Malone couldn’t keep a secret.

Jim knocked forcefully on Jack’s front door.  Lureen came rushing out, as she hadn’t set eyes on Jack for days, and was worried.

“Where did you find him, Jim?”  Lureen asked, a note of irritation mixed with relief in her voice.  She shook her husband until he stood up straighter, but his fierce blue eyes were unfocused.

“He was in church, ma’am,”  Jim answered as he pulled Jack into the house.  Lureen didn’t seem surprised.  Nothing Jack did surprised her.

“Here, Jim, set him down on the couch over there.”  Lureen guided.  She stood away from them both.  She didn’t even want to be near her husband, as he smelled like a brewery and something else she couldn’t put her finger on.  Jim deposited Jack on the couch and pulled a throw over him.  He looked down at the sad, sad man and shook his head.

“Well, I’ll be going now, ma’am!”  Jim said as he tipped his hat.

“Thanks for bringin’ him home Jim,”  Lureen began. 

"And because you were so kind to my husband, take tomorrow off.”  Jim smiled and exited the Twist home.

“Thank you Jim..” Jack managed from the couch.  He looked up at Lureen with a fearful expression.  Lureen saw in her husband’s eyes a sadness so sublime that her heart almost broke.

“Well, at least he’s home!”  Lureen thought as she walked, alone, to her bedroom.   



Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 02, 2007, 10:15:31 pm
I'm not going until 28th July!  Everyone's coming, me, Graham, the kids, the dog and the in-laws ... it's going to be very cosy in our 8 birth caravan!! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/7/7_6_1.gif)   

Romantic getaway??  I can't remember what one of those is!  I know my kiddies aren't babies anymore but I still can't bear to go away without them ... pathetic I know!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif) 

Sounds good!  Have a good time.  The 28th will be here before you know it!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 03, 2007, 12:15:42 am
Susie, it will be all too soon when they will finally refuse to come along.  Just enjoy them while you have them. 

Merrily

I know that's right, Merr!  No truer words were ever spoken!
Title: Re: Pray for Him!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 03, 2007, 12:16:52 am
Oh littlewing, you really did it this time - that was so lovely and sad at the same time.  Poor Jack.  He's a mess.  Beautiful story and I can see it so well.

Merrily

Thanks, Merr!  I was ordered to church yesterday by my own Pastor, and this strange little tale is the result of that..I guess!!  :)
Title: Re: Pray for Him!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 03, 2007, 12:18:12 am
littlewing, this is very well written.  So vivid and detailed.  And what you're saying here is so sad.  Poor Jack.  He tried so hard but everything he wanted always seemed just beyond his grasp.

Gary

Thanks so much, Gary!  I identify much more with Ennis, but my heart breaks for Jack!  What a sweetheart!
Title: Many States Away
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 03, 2007, 12:56:40 am
August nights are hot and humid in Childress.  Jack Twist liked to sit alone in his den, his air conditioned den, drinking a bit of whiskey, thinking about nothing in particular.  His days were hard and bleak without one Ennis Del Mar to hold him.

Ennis didn’t mind Riverton’s hot August nights.  After a long day at the ranch he sat on the stoop of his trailer, shirtless, sipping a bit of whiskey from a paper cup.  His days were empty and depressing without Jack Twist’s arms around his torso.

It happened a lot!  Like a cry in the night, Jack “heard” the longing of his lover, felt his loneliness.  Like a transmittal of thought, Ennis felt Jack’s sadness and confusion.  But it was okay.  It seemed so natural to communicate this way: a cosmic relay, many states away.
Title: Re: Many States Away
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 03, 2007, 01:08:56 am
Great littlewing.  I believe in that and it has been proven in my case.  Especially with people who are very close to you in spirit.  I love this story.  Beautiful.

Merrily

Thanks, Merr!  I also believe that 2 people who love as much as J&E can communicate across space and time.  I truly believe it!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 03, 2007, 03:27:27 am
(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/29/29_3_10.gif)

Hey, if you guys got a kick out of the word rimming it might interest you to know what feltching means.   ;D  That's when I guy goes down there after he's deposited his wad. 

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/23/23_3_6.gif)

Gary

P.S.  Susie now has an idea for her next story.

Hey Gary, you could start a new thread, "the gay sex dictionary". I think we could get a few new ideas out of that! :D :D :D

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 03, 2007, 03:32:13 am
(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/29/29_3_10.gif)
.... it might interest you to know what feltching means.   ;D  That's when I guy goes down there after he's deposited his wad. 

Gary

Now that´s an interesting typo. ;D
Title: Re: Pray for Him!
Post by: Dagi on July 03, 2007, 03:41:45 am
Jim Bennett carried a barely conscious Jack Twist up to his front door.  “Poor soul!”  Jim thought as he propped an arm around Jack’s shoulder.  He was asked by the Pastor of Ephesians A.M.E. Church to see that Mr. Twist got home in one piece.  Jim knew Jack well, worked with him at Newsome’s for years.

Jack was pulled into Ephesians after a sister saw him on the sidewalk outside of the church, dancing and clapping, swaying in time to the music of the praise service: music so resonant that it could be heard from blocks away.  Jack was unbelievably drunk and incoherent, muttering something about Mexico and Ennis..or was it Dennis?  Rev. Macklin and the entire congregation prayed for Jack, and made him as comfortable as possible.  Jim Bennett was the only person in church who knew Jack’s identity. He also knew what haunted him, made Jack drink like a fish.  That Randall Malone couldn’t keep a secret.

Jim knocked forcefully on Jack’s front door.  Lureen came rushing out, as she hadn’t set eyes on Jack for days, and was worried.

“Where did you find him, Jim?”  Lureen asked, a note of irritation mixed with relief in her voice.  She shook her husband until he stood up straighter, but his fierce blue eyes were unfocused.

“He was in church, ma’am,”  Jim answered as he pulled Jack into the house.  Lureen didn’t seem surprised.  Nothing Jack did surprised her.

“Here, Jim, set him down on the couch over there.”  Lureen guided.  She stood away from them both.  She didn’t even want to be near her husband, as he smelled like a brewery and something else she couldn’t put her finger on.  Jim deposited Jack on the couch and pulled a throw over him.  He looked down at the sad, sad man and shook his head.

“Well, I’ll be going now, ma’am!”  Jim said as he tipped his hat.

“Thanks for bringin’ him home Jim,”  Lureen began. 

"And because you were so kind to my husband, take tomorrow off.”  Jim smiled and exited the Twist home.

“Thank you Jim..” Jack managed from the couch.  He looked up at Lureen with a fearful expression.  Lureen saw in her husband’s eyes a sadness so sublime that her heart almost broke.

“Well, at least he’s home!”  Lureen thought as she walked, alone, to her bedroom.   





Littlewing, that was terribly sad. To think of their loneliness always breaks my heart. You write so, so beautifully.  :'( :'( :'(

Dagi
Title: Re: Many States Away
Post by: Dagi on July 03, 2007, 03:48:57 am
August nights are hot and humid in Childress.  Jack Twist liked to sit alone in his den, his air conditioned den, drinking a bit of whiskey, thinking about nothing in particular.  His days were hard and bleak without one Ennis Del Mar to hold him.

Ennis didn’t mind Riverton’s hot August nights.  After a long day at the ranch he sat on the stoop of his trailer, shirtless, sipping a bit of whiskey from a paper cup.  His days were empty and depressing without Jack Twist’s arms around his torso.

It happened a lot!  Like a cry in the night, Jack “heard” the longing of his lover, felt his loneliness.  Like a transmittal of thought, Ennis felt Jack’s sadness and confusion.  But it was okay.  It seemed so natural to communicate this way: a cosmic relay, many states away.


Thanks for comforting me a little after that sad story. Two hearts like theirs surely are able to get together like this. There, you did it. I´m crying. Darn.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 03, 2007, 03:55:56 am
For you, Marie. All those who are already fed up with bums - skip it!

End or Beginning by Dagi

Ennis felt slightly uncomfortable in this unusual position on all four, not because of his knees on the hard soil, but due to the lack of control. But in the end Jack had always proved to be trustworthy.

The wet line his lover was licking from his neck way down his spine was getting cold in the night air, but all that Ennis could think of was the direction his newfound friend´s wet mouth was going.
When he reached the beginning of the crack Jack hesitated for a moment. He had never done that before, but having always been curious he wanted to try as many things as possible before their time up on Brokeback would come to an end.

Would it be an end, or rather the beginning of something completely different from anything he had ever been able to figure?

A deep, yearning groan from Ennis brought him back; he put both hands on those unbelievably firm white cheeks, opened them a little, his cock meanwhile hard as rock and dripping, and took a look at that beautiful rose, before he lowered his mouth to taste Ennis´ flesh, inhaled this manly scent he had come to love, and his moist soft tongue incircled the butthole in small probing movements, evoking moans Jack had never heard from Ennis  before.

No matter how long this summer would last, he was determined to enjoy every single moment to the full...
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 03, 2007, 11:27:08 am
"(Well, except for poor Shasta.  She probably has written all of us off as sickos.   ;D  )"  

Haha. Ya'll can't shock me. Actually, you've left out some really good stuff. LOL.
I lived through my ultra wild era and I'm back to boring.  :P


(http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x221/Shasta542/smile004.gif) Love ya!!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 03, 2007, 01:08:29 pm
 :-X  ::)  ;D

Listen--Someday, I'd like to meet you Brokies face to face. I'd like to be able to look you in the eyes.  :P
Title: Re: Pray for Him!
Post by: Dagi on July 03, 2007, 02:11:29 pm
Good heavens littlewing ... they didn't find you drunk in the gutter, mumbling Ennis's name too, did they? (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_7_6.gif) 

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)   

You know, as much as I´m thinking about our boys all day long I better avoid getting really drunk, for something similar definitely could happen to me!!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 03, 2007, 02:15:26 pm
PHEW! Dagi ....  I think I need to lie down for a minute!  That was   hot hot hot..... and that tight white bum    Hmmmmmmmmmmmmm! .... And you described it so beautifully ... just perfect Dagi!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)   

Thank you Susie! You are always so encouraging! I was a bit afraid that anyone would say "oh no, not another butt story, please"....

Dagi
Title: Re: Peelin Spuds
Post by: Dagi on July 03, 2007, 02:20:15 pm
This one always made me smile




Peeling Spuds by Susie



How in the hell am I s’posed to finish up here now?  Ennis was crouched less than ten feet away from him, butt naked and dripping with hot water.  Jack’s hands were unsteady, gaze fixed on the knife, catching a glimpse of Ennis through the corner of his eye. Damn he’s so fu ckin’ beautiful, never seen nothin’ like him before!.

Twenty years may have passed, but not much had changed; hair perhaps a little thinner, waistlines a little thicker.  However the fire was still ablaze and Ennis, still naked as the day he was born; the charge between them always high, but tempered with the familiarity of years living together.   

Jack chuckled to himself, tossed the potato up in the air, marched on over to Ennis and crouched down behind him.  He wrapped his arms around Ennis’s wet belly, Ennis turning his head and smiling, relaxing back into Jack’s warm chest.  Jack’s hands headed south, tickling the skin in their path, he playfully licked Ennis’s earlobe and with a voice soft as silk, whispered “Need some help there, friend?”


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



Have you posted this before?  On IMDb? Oh, I probably missed a lot of stories, so many got deleted before I had a chance to read them >:(.

the charge between them always high, but tempered with the familiarity of years living together.

Aaahhh, Susie, so sweet. If only....

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 03, 2007, 02:26:32 pm
This story is sexy has hell, Dagi.  Smokin' hot!  And that title...End or Beginning.  I'm thinking it's an end and a beginning.   :P

Gary

Thank you honey, I was really afraid you would find it rather boring after all those hot things our boys have discovered lately... ::)

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P.S.  You girls just amaze me.  You do know that even a lot of gay guys find going there too much.  But you all just embrace it without batting an eye.   

I think that is only a question of one´s relationship to one´s own body, not a question of gay or not gay.

Dagi


Title: Re: Peelin Spuds
Post by: Dagi on July 03, 2007, 02:30:19 pm
Thank you Dagi honey!  Yes it was one of my earlier ones!  I love going through them ... some of them make me cringe a little and there was this one I showed to Gary where  they did it on horseback ... it was hilarious .. and I think, physically impossible .. but it was so much fun to write!!  At the time I thought I was being so naughty ... and yet it's tame  in comparison to what we write these days!

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif) 

I´d love to read it! Please post it!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 03, 2007, 02:47:43 pm
What would you all think about a chat-date every once in a while? What would be a good time? For me 8-10 pm would be great, I´m 6 hours plus to Bettermost time, 9 hours plus to Californian time. What time is it where you live, Gary?

Dagi
Title: Re: Come Take a Ride
Post by: Dagi on July 03, 2007, 02:54:49 pm
Now this is for you Dagi ... it was only the third or fourth one I'd ever written, so be kind!  I'm giggling just reading it through now!!



Come Take a Ride by Susie



"Come take a ride with me Ennis."

"Nah, my horse ain't saddled up."

"Don't matter, plenty a room up here for two."

Ennis climbed into the saddle behind Jack, butted right up against him. Little click of the tongue, a light tap of the heels and the horse trotted off down into the valley.

Rubbing up against Jack sure felt good, the smell and taste of that soft skin right behind his ear, so inviting. Ennis could feel the aching in the pit of his stomach, the pressure building in his groin, could feel Jack stiffening at his touch.

He quickly unfastened his pants, freeing himself, reached round in front of Jack, unbuckling him and pulling his jeans down far as he could, just enough room to guide himself in a little way. Jack let out a low moan, pressing his thighs against the horse, causing it to suddenly break into a canter, pushing Ennis in all the way.

"Holy shit!" Ennis choked, kicking his heels into the side of the horse, sending it into a flat-out gallop, every stride pounding him in deeper, harder. Both men cried out, coming hot and fast, wild and euphoric, mountains and forests speeding past in a blur.





Hehehe
Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


hehehe, now I know that you have been a naughty girl before you got spoiled by Toycoon :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

Thank you for a hot ....laugh!!

Dagi

What a pitty that my hubby is afraid of horses.  ::)
Title: Re: Many States Away
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 04, 2007, 12:38:12 am
Thanks for comforting me a little after that sad story. Two hearts like theirs surely are able to get together like this. There, you did it. I´m crying. Darn.

Awww, thanks, Dagi!
Title: Re: Pray for Him!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 04, 2007, 12:39:21 am
Littlewing, that was terribly sad. To think of their loneliness always breaks my heart. You write so, so beautifully.  :'( :'( :'(

Dagi

Dagi, you're very sweet.  I'm addicted to this!  I can't get enough!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 04, 2007, 12:40:17 am
NO! .... NEVER! .... we'll be going away together forever!  And when they have their own families ... we'll be tagging along as the annoying Grandparents!


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)   

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Title: Re: Pray for Him!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 04, 2007, 12:50:35 am
You know, as much as I´m thinking about our boys all day long I better avoid getting really drunk, for something similar definitely could happen to me!!

I do know what you mean!!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 04, 2007, 12:54:11 am
Sorry Gary, I just told Dagi that you were in Central time zone.  What was I thinking?  I know the feeling of having a slow computer.  I also know the feeling of not having a computer at all.  At least you do have one. 

Happy 4th sweetie.

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Wow, Merr, this is beautiful!  Have a very happy, safe 4th!  I can't believe I have to work the days after!!!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 04, 2007, 12:55:20 am
Hi Merrily,

I don't think the slowness of my computer is the problem.  My computer isn't generally slow.  I think I need some kind of update for that particular chat program.  When I say it won't load, I mean not at all, no matter how long I wait.

But even though I run into little problems like this from time to time, I am very happy to have a computer.   :)

Gary

P.S. You have a great 4th as well. 

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I'm sure Susie is just thrilled that it's the 4th of July.   :P

I'm glad you have a computer as well, Gary!  I don't know what I would do without you...without all of you!  :-*
Title: Happy 4th of July, Jack Twist!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 04, 2007, 01:21:55 am
I hope this little tale doesn't sound cheesy, but I had to do it!  Happy 4th, everyone!

Ennis looked at his wife with an expression that said, “Don’t you dare say anything else!”  He just kicked the crap out of a slop mouthed biker, one of 2 jerks who disrespected his family, and Alma looked at him like he lost his mind?  Ennis didn't understand her attitude!

“C’mon, let’s get out of here.”  Ennis said as he moved toward his wife and babies.  “I’m not in the mood for this anymore.”  Ennis picked up his daughters and placed one in each arm.  Alma collected the girls’ handmade blankets, along with the rest of their things and followed Ennis to the truck.

The apartment over the Laundromat was quiet, but the sky was alive with rockets red glare, bombs bursting in air.  Ennis was amazed that the girls were able to sleep through the racket.  Rowdies ran through the streets setting off firecrackers.  Teenagers shouted and threw bottles.  Dogs howled and ran for cover.  Alma was straightening the apartment, the ruckus with the bikers long forgotten.  She glanced at her husband and winked.  Ennis picked up on the signals, and thought, why the hell not?  He didn’t like hurting her, but the memory of Jack Twist!  The need was just too strong.  After he did what she hated, Alma curled up into a fetal position and fell asleep.  Ennis lay on his back and mouthed the words: “Happy 4th of July, Jack Fuckin' Twist!”
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 04, 2007, 03:20:45 am
Nice one for the holiday, Littlewing!!

Sad tho. (Missin' Jack)  :'(
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 04, 2007, 06:02:38 am
Hi Dagi,

I'd love to chat, but I can't get the chat room at this site to load.  I think I must need a software update or something.  I'm in West Virginia which is in the USA's Eastern time zone.  And right now we're on daylight savings time, which means you add an hour to the standard time.  (Do people in Europe have daylight savings time?  Or is that just a strange thing we American's do?)  In a few weeks I'll be moving to California, and that's three hours earlier.

Gary

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Hi Gary,

you´ll have to go get yourself this software-update, ´cause what would a chat be like without you?

So what would be a good time for you (related to standard time)?

Dagi

 

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 04, 2007, 06:05:45 am
British Summer Time, huh?  I like that.  BTW, I used to get mixed up on the time difference, too.  I'm dyslexic and things like that give me a headache.  But then someone told me something that helps me remember.  Fall back, and Spring forward.  That says it all, doesn't it?

Gary

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Thought you might be getting sick of the 4th of July, so here's the Union Jack.   :D  (The U.K.'s flag is named after Jack?)


 Great! Now I´ll be able to remember it! Finally! Thank you Gary!
Title: Re: Happy 4th of July, Jack Twist!
Post by: Dagi on July 04, 2007, 06:10:23 am
I hope this little tale doesn't sound cheesy, but I had to do it!  Happy 4th, everyone!

Ennis looked at his wife with an expression that said, “Don’t you dare say anything else!”  He just kicked the crap out of a slop mouthed biker, one of 2 jerks who disrespected his family, and Alma looked at him like he lost his mind?  Ennis didn't understand her attitude!

“C’mon, let’s get out of here.”  Ennis said as he moved toward his wife and babies.  “I’m not in the mood for this anymore.”  Ennis picked up his daughters and placed one in each arm.  Alma collected the girls’ handmade blankets, along with the rest of their things and followed Ennis to the truck.

The apartment over the Laundromat was quiet, but the sky was alive with rockets red glare, bombs bursting in air.  Ennis was amazed that the girls were able to sleep through the racket.  Rowdies ran through the streets setting off firecrackers.  Teenagers shouted and threw bottles.  Dogs howled and ran for cover.  Alma was straightening the apartment, the ruckus with the bikers long forgotten.  She glanced at her husband and winked.  Ennis picked up on the signals, and thought, why the hell not?  He didn’t like hurting her, but the memory of Jack Twist!  The need was just too strong.  After he did what she hated, Alma curled up into a fetal position and fell asleep.  Ennis lay on his back and mouthed the words: “Happy 4th of July, Jack Fuckin' Twist!”



 :'( :'( :'(  Ennis lonely again.  :'( :'( :'( :'

I love your stories. The details always bring them to life. You should be a screen writer. I´d love to see your movies.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 04, 2007, 01:48:46 pm
Since I'd be chatting with you, Dagi dear, anytime would be a good time.  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/29/29_2_10.gif)


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Title: Re: Happy 4th of July, Ennis Del Mar!
Post by: Dagi on July 04, 2007, 01:52:05 pm
Happy 4th of July Ennis Del Mar by Susie


Jack leaned against the log, gazing sleepily up at the night sky, inky black above him, alight in the far distance, with a million sparkling colors.  Glowing embers flew up from the campfire, dancing in the breeze and gently settling near his feet, his own personal firework display.

He’d not been around these parts for a couple of years now, but today, drawn by some invisible force to this peaceful spot, he'd packed up his meagre belongings into his old pick up truck and made the fourteen hour trip, followed by a four hour hike, through the mountain to the place where they'd talked and laughed, and made love.

Wonder what he’s doin’ right now.  Wonder if he’s thinkin’ ‘bout me....  A twinge of sadness flowed through him as he raised his whiskey bottle to the sky and smiled hopefully, “Happy 4th of July, Ennis Del Mar...."



Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



Aw, Susie, why do you all have to make me so sad? I don´t want to think about their loneliness any more!! I don´t want to imagine Jack alone up on Brokeback! :'( :'( :'(

Beautiful story, nevertheless. As always!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 04, 2007, 02:16:52 pm
Why thank ya, sweet stuff Marie.  Don't know what I'd do without you, either.

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Gary


I´d read more books, do more sports, eat more, tidy up and clean my house, iron my laundry,..... :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

I´m so happy I found you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dagi
Title: Re: Happy 4th of July, Ennis Del Mar!
Post by: Shasta542 on July 04, 2007, 02:20:19 pm
Happy 4th of July Ennis Del Mar by Susie


Jack leaned against the log, gazing sleepily up at the night sky, inky black above him, alight in the far distance, with a million sparkling colors.  Glowing embers flew up from the campfire, dancing in the breeze and gently settling near his feet, his own personal firework display.

He’d not been around these parts for a couple of years now, but today, drawn by some invisible force to this peaceful spot, he'd packed up his meagre belongings into his old pick up truck and made the fourteen hour trip, followed by a four hour hike, through the mountain to the place where they'd talked and laughed, and made love.

Wonder what he’s doin’ right now.  Wonder if he’s thinkin’ ‘bout me....  A twinge of sadness flowed through him as he raised his whiskey bottle to the sky and smiled hopefully, “Happy 4th of July, Ennis Del Mar...."



Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)




Glowing embers flew up from the campfire, dancing in the breeze and gently settling near his feet, his own personal firework display.


I love that visual. Sweet, sad story, Susie.  
Title: Re: Happy 4th of July, Jack Twist!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 04, 2007, 03:23:23 pm
Very sweet, rather sad story littlewing!  Happy 4th July to you all!

Susie
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Thanks Susie!
Title: Re: Happy 4th of July, Jack Twist!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 04, 2007, 03:24:42 pm

 :'( :'( :'(  Ennis lonely again.  :'( :'( :'( :'

I love your stories. The details always bring them to life. You should be a screen writer. I´d love to see your movies.

Dagi

Thanks, Sweetheart!  You always make me feel so good about myself!
Title: Re: Happy 4th of July, Ennis Del Mar!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 04, 2007, 03:27:20 pm
Happy 4th of July Ennis Del Mar by Susie


Jack leaned against the log, gazing sleepily up at the night sky, inky black above him, alight in the far distance, with a million sparkling colors.  Glowing embers flew up from the campfire, dancing in the breeze and gently settling near his feet, his own personal firework display.

He’d not been around these parts for a couple of years now, but today, drawn by some invisible force to this peaceful spot, he'd packed up his meagre belongings into his old pick up truck and made the fourteen hour trip, followed by a four hour hike, through the mountain to the place where they'd talked and laughed, and made love.

Wonder what he’s doin’ right now.  Wonder if he’s thinkin’ ‘bout me....  A twinge of sadness flowed through him as he raised his whiskey bottle to the sky and smiled hopefully, “Happy 4th of July, Ennis Del Mar...."



Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



I love this tale, Susie.  Especially the ending when Ennis wonders if Jack is thing about him.  This is how it must have been...their thoughts were on each other during the holidays, even the quiet, special hours.  Lovely work, Susie!
Title: Re: Happy 4th of July, Jack Twist!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 04, 2007, 03:28:04 pm
Littlewing, the story was not the least bit cheesy.  I loved the way you embellished the scene in the film.  Very nice writing sweetie and how appropriate for the 4th of July.  You do have a way with words.  Poor Ennis missing Jack.  Poor Jack still getting beat up rodeoing. 

You rock honey.  Loved it.  Happy 4th of July!!!

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Merrily

Thanks so much, Merr!  Happy 4th to you!
Title: Re: Happy 4th of July, Jack Twist!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 04, 2007, 03:29:41 pm
So very sad, littlewing.  But I think it's right on the money.  Even if the boys didn't know enough to call what they felt for each other love up on Brokeback, they experienced it.  And to go those four years without it, and without knowing if they'd ever have it again, must have been awful for both of them.

Gary

Thanks, Gary.  I think it is good that we never saw the boys calling each other.  If they managed to stay in touch, we wouldn't get the sense of loneliness, longing that the movie conveyed.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 04, 2007, 03:30:37 pm
Why thank ya, sweet stuff Marie.  Don't know what I'd do without you, either.

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Gary


You're very welcome, Baby! 
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 04, 2007, 03:31:29 pm
I´d read more books, do more sports, eat more, tidy up and clean my house, iron my laundry,..... :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

I´m so happy I found you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dagi

Dagi, that is so sweet!  Same here, Baby!  Same here!
Title: Re: Happy 4th of July, Ennis Del Mar!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 05, 2007, 01:17:08 am
Hi Susie, Dagi helped me with my photo.  I tried but couldn't get it to be large enough.  So, you can tell what I look like now?  I guess that's good, huh? (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_13_12v.gif)

In response to Gary, I don't think anyone ever bemoaned the fact that they didn''t WORK enough.  Note:  WORK is a 4-letter word!  My nights and days are do confused - don't ever know what time it is.  Never enough sleep, never enough. 

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Merrily

Wow, Merr!  Thanks for posting another pic.  You look lovely!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 05, 2007, 01:18:26 am
I love all your emoticons too Merrily!  I think, between us, we're doing a fine job of animating this board!  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/13/13_1_213.gif)


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif) 



I've got to get my emoticons!  I'm feeling plain and left out!!!!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 05, 2007, 03:10:01 am
I seriously doubt any of us are going to reach the end of our life and lay there on our death bed and wish we had spend more time doing housework.   :P

Gary

Ah, Gary, that´s exactly what I´m always thinking. And I know that I won´t regret a single second that I spent here with all of you.
Title: Re: Happy 4th of July, Ennis Del Mar!
Post by: Dagi on July 05, 2007, 03:10:44 am
Great!  That Dagi is talented.  Wonder if she can make me look like Ryan Phillippe.

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Gary

If I knew what he looks like? But why? You look so lovely, honey! :-*
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 05, 2007, 03:13:05 am
I've got to get my emoticons!  I'm feeling plain and left out!!!!

Me too! I always come here thinking "this time I have to check out some webpages to get me some emoticons", and then there are always so many other things to do and time just slips away. I´ll do it today.
Title: Re: Happy 4th of July, Ennis Del Mar!
Post by: Shasta542 on July 05, 2007, 03:29:10 am
Oh it is good Merrily ... and you look just how I pictured you ... lovely!

 Now we just need toycoon's mugshot and we'll have the whole family!  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/12/12_1_129.gif)


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

There's a great picture of Toycoon on the BBQ thread. He's a tall, lean, good-lookin' son of a gun, too!!

MERR--I think you've been lying about your age, girl. You look much younger!!! Cute, cute, cute!!

PLUS---I wanna be part of the family!!!!! WAHHHHHHHHHH!!!! I feel absolutely orphaned!!!!!
Title: Re: Happy 4th of July, Ennis Del Mar!
Post by: Shasta542 on July 05, 2007, 04:13:32 am
Oh Shasta honey, of course you're part of the family, you're like our big sister keeping us all in check and geeing us along.  We're like the Waltons!!

 
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Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

ps. I found toycoon's pic a while ago ... he's got a lovely friendly smile!! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_1_107v.gif)

LOL--I think I have failed at keeping ya'll wild childs in line. I'd need the MARINES(http://www.anchoredbygrace.com/smileys/tank.gif) to help me with that job!!!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 05, 2007, 04:41:20 am
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Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 05, 2007, 05:03:33 am
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(http://www.anchoredbygrace.com/smileys/icon_grouphug.gif)   Thanks, sis!!  (http://www.anchoredbygrace.com/smileys/icon_grouphug.gif)

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Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 05, 2007, 07:26:38 am
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Spiceylife, enjoy yourself on J&E! Hope you´re okay so far!

We love you!

Dagi
Title: Re: Happy 4th of July, Ennis Del Mar!
Post by: Shasta542 on July 05, 2007, 12:44:17 pm
Marines?  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_9_16.gif)  Oh Shasta, that's just what we need, a few good men.

Gary

(http://www.anchoredbygrace.com/smileys/1034522319.gif)I love a patriot! (http://www.anchoredbygrace.com/smileys/usa.gif)



Title: Re: Happy 4th of July, Ennis Del Mar!
Post by: Dagi on July 05, 2007, 12:44:43 pm
Marines?  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_9_16.gif)  Oh Shasta, that's just what we need, a few good men.

Gary

So we nasty girls are not good enough for you any more?? But okay, I give in, there can never be too many men ;D.

Dagi
Title: Re: Happy 4th of July, Ennis Del Mar!
Post by: Shasta542 on July 05, 2007, 12:53:26 pm
So we nasty girls are not good enough for you any more?? But okay, I give in, there can never be too many men ;D.

Dagi

(http://www.anchoredbygrace.com/smileys/OLA.gif) Truer words were never spoken, Dagi!! Ya always need a different one to mow the yard, grill the steaks, move the furniture, fix the car...... (http://www.anchoredbygrace.com/smileys/biglaugha.gif)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 05, 2007, 12:56:31 pm
Absofukinlutely girl!  You are da bomb! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_5_132.gif)

Your Sis,

Merrily

Ditto, friend girl!! (http://www.anchoredbygrace.com/smileys/mgcheerful.gif)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 05, 2007, 01:07:20 pm
Hello to all the gorgeous looking people on this thread!! *wolf whistle*

Thank you so much for your loving support and kind-hearted words.  It helps a lot, and means the world to me.  And so do all of you.  You're such a wonderful bunch.  I do love you guys.

(http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/yourockmyworld.jpg)

(http://www.anchoredbygrace.com/smileys/fl02.gif) Thanks, Spicey. I hope things are looking up. When you need a smile, just come on in---these wild broncs in here are always coming up with something to make ya laugh!! And you can always get a lift out of the funny illustrations, too!! Take care and we hope to see you lots!!
 



 
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 05, 2007, 04:15:08 pm
Just came here after my Yoga lesson, with a pancake with selfmade marmalade and a delicious yogurt, sat down to chat a little....and nobody´s here (http://www.smileygarden.de/smilie/Traurig/49.gif).

Spiceylife, we can´t wait for your story! I still remember the line "I´m so hot, I even turn myself on...".

And, you belong to the family whether your avatar shows an alien, or Heath, or your lovely face.....but of course we would love to see your face!

Dagi

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 05, 2007, 06:27:09 pm
Hi there Dagi dear,

When I read your first sentence, Just came here after my yoga lesson, I thought this was going to be the story were Jack and Ennis do that...um...thing we were talking about.  I can't imagine either Jake or Ennis taking a yoga lesson, but I'm sure if one or both of them did they could pull off that little stunt.   :-X

You make your own marmalade?  Wow!  I'm impressed.  What kind?  You must be a country girl at heart.   :)

Gary

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/995v.gif)


Gary, shut the fuck up! ;D ;D ;D ;D sh! sh sh sh!

Yep, my own marmalade. Raspberries, cherries, and rhubarb mixed. I am a country girl at heart, yes. are you gonna have a garden in California?

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 05, 2007, 08:52:25 pm
Me too! I always come here thinking "this time I have to check out some webpages to get me some emoticons", and then there are always so many other things to do and time just slips away. I´ll do it today.

I know what you mean, Dagi!  Never enough time, never enough!
Title: Re: Happy 4th of July, Ennis Del Mar!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 05, 2007, 08:54:22 pm
There's a great picture of Toycoon on the BBQ thread. He's a tall, lean, good-lookin' son of a gun, too!!

MERR--I think you've been lying about your age, girl. You look much younger!!! Cute, cute, cute!!

PLUS---I wanna be part of the family!!!!! WAHHHHHHHHHH!!!! I feel absolutely orphaned!!!!!


Girl, you couldn'r be more of the family if you tried!!!  Love your new pic, by the way!  Your hair, everything about you is gorgeous!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 05, 2007, 08:57:27 pm
Hello to all the gorgeous looking people on this thread!! *wolf whistle*

Thank you so much for your loving support and kind-hearted words.  It helps a lot, and means the world to me.  And so do all of you.  You're such a wonderful bunch.  I do love you guys.

(http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/yourockmyworld.jpg)

 



 

Hi, Spicey, Baby!  Thanks for coming by to see us!  We really miss you, Love!  But just take care of you and yours.  We'll be here when you return!  :)


Title: To Remember Happier Days
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 05, 2007, 09:07:58 pm
Jack Twist watched Ennis walk away with a sadness he couldn't find the center of.  He sighed as he returned to the tent to continue packing his gear, get ready to return to the real world.  Ennis was already at camp, and must have discarded his bloody shirt to wash later, and changed into the only other shirt he owned.  Jack sat still, as every movement split his head, hurt his heart.

He had an idea: just a spur of the moment thought.  Looking both ways, Jack swiped Ennis’ bloody shirt, and stored it with his own meager belongings.  He didn’t know exactly what he would do with Ennis’ shirt, but he knew why he took it.

“I’m not mad at you, Ennis.”  Jack thought as he continued to pack his things.  He imagined himself in his bedroom up at Lightning Flats; Ennis’ shirt draped over a chair.  Jack saw himself caressing the shirt, outlining the collar soil with a finger.  He’ll drape the sleeves around his neck, imagine being held by his love – remember happier days.  But he will never wash Ennis’ shirt.  The blood is a reminder of the hurt he experienced as they parted ways that magical summer.  Jack learned a bitter lesson that summer: with every laugh, there is a tear.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 05, 2007, 10:13:52 pm
Now that wasn't so hard, was it, Merr?  This is beautiful, my dear!  I thoroughly enjoyed reading every word.  I love how you fleshed out this amazing scene.  The ending I found the most entralling:

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Meantime, OMT had been waiting to get his last jab in and said "Tell ya what, we got a family plot and he's goin in it" and all the time Mrs. Twist looking at him with a plea for Ennis not to say anything.  Ennis just said "yes sir" relieved that it was finally over as Jack's ashes no longer were a priority to him.  Ennis had something much more special of Jack's to take with him -- the memory of their first summer together when they had fallen in love.  He would always regret not being able to love Jack openly and take him up on his suggestion of a "Sweet Life," but he now realized how much Jack really loved him and he could carry that knowledge with him forever, not as a secret sorrow, but as a reminder that their love was beautiful and that he, Ennis, was loveable.  He must now have the courage to open himself up to new possibilities.

I want more of your writing!  I know the process can take a lot out of you, but if you find it within you, please continue to write.  You'll find that writing about our boys is very rewarding, and can be downright fun.  Lovely work, Merr!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: ifyoucantfixit on July 05, 2007, 10:59:45 pm



           I am so gratified, that I have the chance to see your first story.  You may
well fulfill my prediction.  You may become the best of all.  That was wonderful
                                                                                janice
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 06, 2007, 12:29:04 am
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read, laugh, smile, fan my face, tear up... I'm starting to feel like my old self again.  I must be!  I feel like posting a steamy story.

Great to hear, Spicey!!


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He would always regret not being able to love Jack openly and take him up on his suggestion of a "Sweet Life," but he now realized how much Jack really loved him and he could carry that knowledge with him forever, not as a secret sorrow, but as a reminder that their love was beautiful and that he, Ennis, was loveable.  He must now have the courage to open himself up to new possibilities.

Merr--very nice fanfic! This segment kinda sums up one of the themes of Brokeback Mountain to me. Sometimes hope springs out of regret if we let it. That's a life lesson, huh?

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with every laugh, there is a tear.

So true, Littlewing. Beautiful story.



Title: Re: Lost Boys
Post by: Shasta542 on July 06, 2007, 12:42:04 am
Lost Boys by garycottle

Ennis awoke with a start, and at first he didn’t know where he was, but when he looked up and saw the familiar pattern of the cracked plaster on the ceiling overhead he realized that he was in the apartment he shared with Alma and his daughters.  It was summer and the washing machines and dryers downstairs had been going all day, thus making the small, confined space steamy.  The nubby material of the worn couch he laid on was clammy and damp.  His hair was dripping with sweat also, and when he touched his bare chest he found that it was slick.

He thought about sitting upright, but just then he remembered that he had the strangest dream while he slept.  Jack and he had decided to go off to be together, and they ended up someplace back east where the woods were thick and green and the air was so humid that it was like walking through a wet, warm cloud.  They found a big old house just outside of a small village that rented cheap, but the only catch was the lease stipulated that only one person could live there.  So Ennis ended up sleeping in a room down in the basement, and Jack was the only one who ever went into town. 

The townsfolk must have found out that they had broken the rules, and that the two of them had been living in the old house together, because one day Jack didn’t come home, and then Ennis looked out the basement window and saw a group of unfriendly men being led by the local sheriff come up the road.

As Ennis sat up and rubbed the sleep from his eyes, Alma Jr., who was sitting in the floor in front of the TV with her baby sister, said, “Great, now he’s awake.”  The end credits of the program they had been watching were rolling.

When Ennis looked directly at his eldest he saw her annoyed expression was mixed with love and acceptance.  “Did I snore or somethin’?”

“No, but you did make it kind of hard to follow the story,” Jenny said without looking back.

For a week the girls had been talking about their plans to watch Salem’s Lot, and it saddened Ennis to know that he may have spoiled it for them.

“Well, what did I do?” he said with a note of contrition.

Alma, who was sitting in the corner chair reading one of those Harlequin romance novels, piped up and said in an edgy voice, “You kept saying, ‘No, Jack!  No!’”

“Isn’t your fishin’ buddy named Jack, Daddy?” asked Alma Jr.

“Go to bed, girls,” Alma said sharply.

Ennis buried his face in his hands and mumbled, “I’m sorry.”

Nice writing! Great sensory images, Gary. Very easily visualized/felt!! That hot sweaty feeling upon waking up on that kind of material--the steamy air  from the laundry--the cracked plaster. Ennis's dream stemming from his fear of other's finding out about him and Jack.  Masterfully written setting.  You rock!  
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 06, 2007, 12:56:37 am
Thank you so much Marie.  It took so much prodding and you're right, it does take a lot out of you when you write about our boys.  I was making myself sad during the whole birthing process. 

I really appreciate your comments sweetie. 

Love,

Merrily

You're very welcome, Merr!  Your story made me feel all warm and snuggly inside.  I'm getting a glow just thinking about it!  Your story is just that good!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 06, 2007, 02:00:36 am
Now that wasn't so hard, was it, Merr?  This is beautiful, my dear!  I thoroughly enjoyed reading every word.  I love how you fleshed out this amazing scene.  The ending I found the most entralling:

I want more of your writing!  I know the process can take a lot out of you, but if you find it within you, please continue to write.  You'll find that writing about our boys is very rewarding, and can be downright fun.  Lovely work, Merr!

So true what Marie sad! You did it! We feel very honored that you shared your first attempt with us! Lovely writing, as I already told you. One can tell that it comes from your very heart! Yes, we want more!  :-*

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 06, 2007, 02:37:13 am
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Merrily, don't worry about that.  I can't either.  I don't think I've ever written even one fanfic that adheres to Toycoon's three sentence rule.  Just keep writing

(http://www.anchoredbygrace.com/smileys/heartpump.gif) Toycoon is a sweet, sugary, mush-daddy -- he lets us (ya'll) get away with EVERYTHING!!

(http://www.anchoredbygrace.com/smileys/grinser039.gif) He's at the beach right now, so ya'll don't have to tell him I said that!! (http://www.anchoredbygrace.com/smileys/loki16.gif)

From(http://www.anchoredbygrace.com/smileys/littleangel.gif)


(http://www.anchoredbygrace.com/smileys/tongue.gif)(http://www.anchoredbygrace.com/smileys/wink.gif)(http://www.anchoredbygrace.com/smileys/crazya.gif)(http://www.anchoredbygrace.com/smileys/laugh2.gif)
Title: Re: To Remember Happier Days
Post by: Dagi on July 06, 2007, 05:55:03 am
Jack Twist watched Ennis walk away with a sadness he couldn't find the center of.  He sighed as he returned to the tent to continue packing his gear, get ready to return to the real world.  Ennis was already at camp, and must have discarded his bloody shirt to wash later, and changed into the only other shirt he owned.  Jack sat still, as every movement split his head, hurt his heart.

He had an idea: just a spur of the moment thought.  Looking both ways, Jack swiped Ennis’ bloody shirt, and stored it with his own meager belongings.  He didn’t know exactly what he would do with Ennis’ shirt, but he knew why he took it.

“I’m not mad at you, Ennis.”  Jack thought as he continued to pack his things.  He imagined himself in his bedroom up at Lightning Flats; Ennis’ shirt draped over a chair.  Jack saw himself caressing the shirt, outlining the collar soil with a finger.  He’ll drape the sleeves around his neck, imagine being held by his love – remember happier days.  But he will never wash Ennis’ shirt.  The blood is a reminder of the hurt he experienced as they parted ways that magical summer.  Jack learned a bitter lesson that summer: with every laugh, there is a tear.


Littlewing, I love the way you make me feel sad....the image of Jack embraced by the shirts instead of his lover makes me tear up. I just love Jack so much i want to hold him and comfort him  :'(. Thank you, honey!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 06, 2007, 03:29:54 pm
Ah thank you Gary honey .... perhaps I should write a part 3 to give Jack a turn!




Oh Susie, that was so funny and lovely! I love them fooling around, love to imagine Ennis smiling, even laughing, that brings a broad, foolish grin on my face!

Thank you so much for reposting this! I´m just writing a sad one again, I needed a good laugh.

Dagi
Title: Re: Happy 4th of July, Ennis Del Mar!
Post by: Dagi on July 06, 2007, 03:33:11 pm
(http://www.anchoredbygrace.com/smileys/OLA.gif) Truer words were never spoken, Dagi!! Ya always need a different one to mow the yard, grill the steaks, move the furniture, fix the car...... (http://www.anchoredbygrace.com/smileys/biglaugha.gif)

And there are some other things I can think of  :D ::)!

Dagi
Title: Re: Lost Boys
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 06, 2007, 03:56:52 pm
Lost Boys by garycottle

Ennis awoke with a start, and at first he didn’t know where he was, but when he looked up and saw the familiar pattern of the cracked plaster on the ceiling overhead he realized that he was in the apartment he shared with Alma and his daughters.  It was summer and the washing machines and dryers downstairs had been going all day, thus making the small, confined space steamy.  The nubby material of the worn couch he laid on was clammy and damp.  His hair was dripping with sweat also, and when he touched his bare chest he found that it was slick.

He thought about sitting upright, but just then he remembered that he had the strangest dream while he slept.  Jack and he had decided to go off to be together, and they ended up someplace back east where the woods were thick and green and the air was so humid that it was like walking through a wet, warm cloud.  They found a big old house just outside of a small village that rented cheap, but the only catch was the lease stipulated that only one person could live there.  So Ennis ended up sleeping in a room down in the basement, and Jack was the only one who ever went into town. 

The townsfolk must have found out that they had broken the rules, and that the two of them had been living in the old house together, because one day Jack didn’t come home, and then Ennis looked out the basement window and saw a group of unfriendly men being led by the local sheriff come up the road.

As Ennis sat up and rubbed the sleep from his eyes, Alma Jr., who was sitting in the floor in front of the TV with her baby sister, said, “Great, now he’s awake.”  The end credits of the program they had been watching were rolling.

When Ennis looked directly at his eldest he saw her annoyed expression was mixed with love and acceptance.  “Did I snore or somethin’?”

“No, but you did make it kind of hard to follow the story,” Jenny said without looking back.

For a week the girls had been talking about their plans to watch Salem’s Lot, and it saddened Ennis to know that he may have spoiled it for them.

“Well, what did I do?” he said with a note of contrition.

Alma, who was sitting in the corner chair reading one of those Harlequin romance novels, piped up and said in an edgy voice, “You kept saying, ‘No, Jack!  No!’”

“Isn’t your fishin’ buddy named Jack, Daddy?” asked Alma Jr.

“Go to bed, girls,” Alma said sharply.

Ennis buried his face in his hands and mumbled, “I’m sorry.”

Amazing story, Gary!  Awesome!  Very vivid and honest!  I was caught up in the scene, and I felt like I was there!  I'm sure Ennis had a lot of dreams about poor Jack, good and bad  So very sad it had to be like that!
Title: Re: To Remember Happier Days
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 06, 2007, 03:59:10 pm
OMG!  Marie, did you and Merrily just bookend each other, or what?  That's amazing that Merrily would write her very first fanfic about Ennis finding the shirts in Jack's room, and you would write a fanfic about Jack taking Ennis's shirt.  And both of you would post within minutes of each other. 

You're story was so very sad.  It's so sweet that Jack needed to hold onto something that belonged to Ennis, but how awful that he couldn't simply hold on to Ennis himself.  And what a shame that if they did have to part for a while after that summer, Jack couldn't come right out and ask for the shirt.  So many secrets.  So many things left unsaid.

Gary

This is so strange, Gary!  I wrote this story months ago and made a few changes to it last night.  I don't know why I waited to post it.  I had no idea Merr would write a story about the shirts.  I guess we were on the same wavelength last night!
Title: Re: To Remember Happier Days
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 06, 2007, 04:00:24 pm
Wow littlewing, our thoughts were in the same arena today.  Imagine that.  (http://emoticons4u.com/happy/1074.gif)

Merrily


I know!  I think its awesome!
Title: Re: To Remember Happier Days
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 06, 2007, 04:02:03 pm
Ah littlewing, thank you for recreating this touching moment so beautifully .. I simply love reading your stories ... your writing can be so soft and gentle, just lovely. (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_6_202.gif)

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Thanks Susie, Baby!   :)  :-*
Title: Re: To Remember Happier Days
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 06, 2007, 04:02:54 pm
Littlewing, I love the way you make me feel sad....the image of Jack embraced by the shirts instead of his lover makes me tear up. I just love Jack so much i want to hold him and comfort him  :'(. Thank you, honey!

Dagi

Thanks for your kind words, Dagi.  I've been holding this story for months now.  I almost forgot about it!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 06, 2007, 04:05:20 pm
Ah thank you Gary honey .... perhaps I should write a part 3 to give Jack a turn!


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

I would love to read a part 3, 4, 5!!!  :)  The first 2 are just perfect! 
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 06, 2007, 05:07:22 pm
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As I was driving home from my interview this afternoon, I was getting ideas for another story.  Hmmm...is that how it happens?  I never did before.  Maybe it becomes addictive.

Yeah, that is how it happens. And it definitely becomes addictive. And you´ll love it. And we too!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 06, 2007, 05:45:59 pm
Thank you Dagi Sweetheart!  The image of Ennis laughing makes me smile too.  Oh, a sad one's coming up. ... better get my hankies ready ... can't wait!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


You´ll have to wait till sunday!  :-* :-* :-*
Title: Re: Draw
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 06, 2007, 09:19:31 pm
Now are you sure you want to know this?  Once you hear this you can never claim to be innocent again.  But here it goes...

You mentioned that Jack and Ennis were in leather, and that they were all oiled up.  Well, men who are into leather often use Crisco to perform a rather delicate act on one another.  Crisco, here in the U.S., is a common brand of shortening such as butter or lard but made from vegetable oil, and it stays semi solid at room temperature.  It's primarily used for baking of course, but these leather men like to grease up their hands and arms with it and...  I hope I don't have to say any more because just thinking about it hurts.   >:(

The things people get up to, huh?

Gary

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/7/7_9_1.gif)

Gary, I knew none of this!  Well, of course I know what Crisco is.  I buy it by the tub for baking pies.  I swear I'm learnin' something new everyday!
Title: Re: Draw
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 06, 2007, 09:21:12 pm
I always thought of this as a sort of part 3 to The Intruder



Draw by Susie

“I’m not so sure ‘bout this Jack …. I look like an idiot!”  Ennis complained, applying baby oil over his muscular shoulders and naked torso.  He heard Jack calling from the living room, “Look, we played yer game last night, now it’s my turn!  So quit yer hammerin’ and get in here!”

Ennis, feeling like a fool, swung open the living room door and swaggered into the room, dressed in boots, tighter than tight leather pants, a Resistol, and nothing else.  The sight of Jack in the same attire took his breath away, turning him three shades of red.  He thought that Jack was gonna look stupid… boy was he ever wrong!  Jack looked mighty fine all oiled up, with a very impressive package clearly visible through his leather pants.   

Jack blushed too, seemingly just as taken with the sight of Ennis.  “We stand back to back, like this…. take three steps, then turn and draw!  Got that?”  “Yep!” Ennis would have agreed to anything at that moment, impatient to get into those tight pants.  They stepped away from each other, both trying not to giggle, both secretly unfastening their flys.  On the count of three, they turned, revealing two fully cocked and loaded weapons.  They laughed heartily, grabbed each other and wrestled to the ground, both slippin’ and slidin’ against the other’s skin.  The game was soon forgotten as they got down to some serious, lubricious, lovemaking. 


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Beautiful story, SusieBaby!  So very original..inspired!  I love it! 
Title: I Remember Jack
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 07, 2007, 01:59:09 am
Ennis was not an educated man, but he had a very good memory.  He remembered every word spoken to him, every good deed ever done on his behalf.  Ennis hated this, but he was also able to recall the bad things:  the cruelty he was forced to witness, the angry words, and the lives taken from his world much too soon. 

And of course Ennis remembered Jack and the brief time they shared up on Brokeback Mountain.  He liked to concentrate on the good things about that time!  He saw Jack everywhere he looked; heard Jack’s voice at all times of the day and night.  And it was fine!  Actually, it was better than fine!  Jack Twist never spoke a harsh word to him…ever!  At least, not that he could remember!

Walking home in the cool of the evening, Ennis was enveloped by a gentle wind.  The breeze caressed his body for a short time, and in that time, he almost convulsed.  The caress of the wind brought back the memory of a gentle voice, and tenderness unlike anything he’d ever experienced in his difficult life.  The words, “Its alright, it’s alright" carried with the gentle force of the wind....

Title: Re: I Remember Jack
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 07, 2007, 07:14:48 pm
Littlewing, that is such a sweet story.  Poor Ennis is haunted by Jack, isn't he.  He's always there right with Ennis.

Merrily

Thanks, Merr!  The gentle breezes that are blowing here inspired this tale!
Title: Re: I Remember Jack
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 07, 2007, 07:15:28 pm
Oh littlewing .... poor suffering Ennis, forever haunted by his love. Beautiful, beautiful, sad moment my dear. (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_9_2.gif)     

SusieBaby (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)     


Yes!  Thanks so much, Baby!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 07, 2007, 07:17:03 pm
Thanks, Dagi!  Lol.  That line cracks me up.  I can't believe I put it in a story!  I think my 'imaginary' Jack was gettin' too sexy for my own good.

You're very (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/beautiful.gif) Dagi, I hope you know!  You have such a lovely smile.  It's amazing how beautiful everybody is here.  I'm checking my computer now for a photo to put up.  Well, for a little while anyway.  Hmm.  I'm the last one to show my face! (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/characters-118.png)

Anyway, I'm very happy to be part of our little 'Jack with Ennis' family. 

I (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/jonstewartlove.gif) this little family.

Oh, and I'm very impressed that you make your own marmalade, too. Good job!   I mow lawns, grill steaks, move heavy furniture and work a power drill better than anything I can do in the kitchen! (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/cowboy.gif)



Hi, Spicey!  It is so good to see you here!  I can't wait to see a picture of you!  It will be so nice to see your face!   :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 07, 2007, 07:20:17 pm
Hello, littlewing!  I've missed you a lot.  Thank you for all your kind words, and your neverending support, my dear friend.  (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/colouredhearts.gif)  I read here that you're a Taurus.  Me, too!  Now I know why I understand you so well!  Both sole parents, our daughters are the same age, both liked 'Green Eyes' (lol) and naughty fanfics and we're both Taureans...(is that even a word?)  When is your birthday, littlewing?  If you say April 29, I'm freaking out! (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/expressions-513.jpg)(http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/faint.gif)

(http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/HeyFlashy3.gif) I always had a feeling that you would look like Halle Berry, and I was right.  You do!  You're a beautiful lady, littlewing, inside and out.

Ah, Spicey, you're so sweet.  We do understand one another, don't we?  I had no idea that you are a Taurus, though.  We have so much in common, which is one reason I miss you so much when you're not here!  By the way, my birthday is April 21st!!!  Thanks so much for your kind, sweet words.  I hope things are better?  I'm sending a lot of positive energy your way, my Sweet!
Title: Re: I Remember Jack
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 07, 2007, 07:22:21 pm
Beautiful, Marie.  I guess being haunted by Jack's memory is both comforting and sad.  Ennis still feels Jack's presence, but at the same time he is forever mindful of his regrets.

Gary

Yes, Gary, so true.  I was moving in a different direction with this tale, but I ended up going in a different direction.  I'll have something new to post by tonight, if I get home in time.  It's good to see you, Sugar!  :)  :-*
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 07, 2007, 07:24:41 pm
(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_11_6.gif)

OMG!  Spicey, I don't think I've laughed so hard in months.  Your post here gave me such a great time.  Thanks so much.

And for the record, snowballing is when one guy has a mouth full of...um...shall we say squirt? either by way of direct deposit or feltching, and he proceeds to "share" his prize with his partner (or partners) with a kiss.  Sort of like throwing a snowball back and forth, huh?

I know some might think it's gross.  But as Dagi and I were saying about a week ago, sex is dirty, and nasty, and earthy, if done right.   ;D  Wouldn't you agree?

Gary 

Oh, is that what it is called?  Snowballing?  I wrote a nasty little fic awhile back about this very thing.  I just didn't know what it is called.  Thanks, Gary!  I'm learning so much!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 07, 2007, 11:46:03 pm
Gary you are so cute.  Little boy - nooooo...I do take you seriously.  And you know what I've said before - I love your potty mouth LOL. 

My computer is overheating and could fry my Mother Board.  The manufacturer is sending packing equipment to return it to them.  They are sending 2 day Fed Ex and it will be a 2 day return as well.  Hopefully it will be an easy fix (perhaps a weak fan system) and then 2 day Fed Ex back to me.  I say maybe 10 days or so with the turn around time and counting weekends.  I'll be here off and on all weekend, but have to shut down every so often to let it cool down. 

I love you all and know I'll be "champing at the bit" to get here and catch up when I get back. 

Love,

Merrily

Aw, merrily, I hate to hear this!  Please try to check in as much as possible!  I'll miss you being here!   :'(
Title: Re: Lost Boys
Post by: Dagi on July 08, 2007, 01:11:03 pm
Lost Boys by garycottle


Gary, the way you create scenes that become as clearly visible in my mind as if I were watching a movie is fatastic. I thought I even smellt that steamy air and saw Alma´s miserable face ...So sad, that so many persons are suffering. But most of all I felt for Ennis. Hope it was a nice dream despite his words.

Awesome writing, sweetheart!

Dagi
Title: Re: Draw
Post by: Dagi on July 08, 2007, 01:13:24 pm
I always thought of this as a sort of part 3 to The Intruder



Draw by Susie


 ......The game was soon forgotten as they got down to some serious, lubricious, lovemaking. 


Love it, Susiebell! Wow, these tighttighttight pants, *gasp*. I´d love to see their weapons ;).

Dagi
Title: Re: Draw
Post by: Dagi on July 08, 2007, 01:15:26 pm
I hope I don't have to say any more because just thinking about it hurts.   >:(

The things people get up to, huh?

Gary

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/7/7_9_1.gif)

AAAUA. Please, no Crisco story ever about our boys!!
Title: Re: I Remember Jack
Post by: Dagi on July 08, 2007, 01:20:56 pm
Ennis was not an educated man, but he had a very good memory.  He remembered every word spoken to him, every good deed ever done on his behalf.  Ennis hated this, but he was also able to recall the bad things:  the cruelty he was forced to witness, the angry words, and the lives taken from his world much too soon. 

And of course Ennis remembered Jack and the brief time they shared up on Brokeback Mountain.  He liked to concentrate on the good things about that time!  He saw Jack everywhere he looked; heard Jack’s voice at all times of the day and night.  And it was fine!  Actually, it was better than fine!  Jack Twist never spoke a harsh word to him…ever!  At least, not that he could remember!

Walking home in the cool of the evening, Ennis was enveloped by a gentle wind.  The breeze caressed his body for a short time, and in that time, he almost convulsed.  The caress of the wind brought back the memory of a gentle voice, and tenderness unlike anything he’d ever experienced in his difficult life.  The words, “Its alright, it’s alright" carried with the gentle force of the wind....



Oh Marie, that was sweet and sad. But mostly sweet. You know, I too remember almost every single word of Jack´s , and the way he looked at Ennis, and even the way he says "Ennis " with that husky, soft voice....how could Ennis not remember?

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 08, 2007, 01:26:42 pm


You're very (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/beautiful.gif) Dagi, I hope you know!  You have such a lovely smile.



Spiceylife, you´re a sweetheart. If you had said  Dagi, you´re sexy as hell   I sure would have agreed, but beautiful? Never! Thank god I control which pics you get to see :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

But it´s always nice to get a compliment! Thank you!

Dagi

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 08, 2007, 01:31:44 pm
What?  No feltching?  Damn it!  I want feltching.   ;D

I'm looking forward to it, Spicey, not matter what you include.

Gary

Looks like you´ll have to provide that sort of story, Gary, Our Master Of Queer Sex  (http://www.smileygarden.de/smilie/Sonstige/Hail.sml.gif)  !
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 08, 2007, 01:41:32 pm

Ah Spicey, my new best friend!  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_6_102.gif)

And thanks for the compliment ... Of course I don't believe a word you've said but thank you anyway sweetheart!!
(just ask Gary ... he tried to pay me a compliment and got a right ear bashing!)  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_1_104v.gif)

Isn't it odd... I've always envied lovely straight MANAGEABLE hair ... mine just misbehaves all the time .. looks exactly the same when I get out of bed .... or when I've combed it ... makes no difference!!!  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/15/15_4_121v.gif)

The girls had to take about 20 photos just to get a couple of decent ones .... oh well ... in for a penny, in for a pound ... here's a full size version of some of them: 

(http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s31/Susiebell_album/Family%20Photos/Susan3.jpg)

(http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s31/Susiebell_album/Family%20Photos/Susan4.jpg)

(http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s31/Susiebell_album/Family%20Photos/Susan2.jpg)


I do miss you honey ... I so miss our Jakefests with Daphne and Shasta .... (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_15_2.gif) .... drooling .... admiring .... squabbling over who likes him the best!  I've been posting all the Jake photos from IMDb onto the "Jake Jake Jake" thread ... just in case it gets wiped out ... and I'm having loads of fun oogling over him with Dagi, but we both need you to join us over there!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)




Oh Susie, you look soooo lovely!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 08, 2007, 01:43:45 pm
 

BTW, I am going to have to send my computer in for repair in a few days so will be without it for no telling how long.  I'll have to go to the library to do my sending of resumes etc. but will try and at least check in from time to time. 

Merrily ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D

Merrily, please come here as often as possible! We would miss you!

DAgi
Title: Re: Lost Boys
Post by: Dagi on July 08, 2007, 03:04:22 pm
Thank you so much, Dagi.  I really appreciate it. 

In my story, the girls are watching Salem's Lot, which is a mini series based on the vampire story by Stephen King.  The character of Alma Jr. is about my age, and I can remember how excited all the kids were when that first came on TV back in '79.  In the mini series a stranger moves to the sleepy New England village of Salem's Lot.  He rents a spooky old house just outside of town, and opens up an antique shop on Main Street.  He has a "partner" that no one ever sees.  It's implied that the backward townsfolk think that they're a gay couple, but what's really going on is that the unseen partner is actually a vampire, and the other one is his daytime protector.

Gary

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/8/8_1_220.gif)

thanks for explaining this to me. I thought it was a strange dream about a "sweet life" dreamt by paranoid Ennis. I do wonder why Alma didn´t wake him up, seems she was somehow curious what else Ennis might probably say...??

Hey, I can´t believe it, we are on the board at the same time! Admit it, you couldn´t wait for my comment ;D!

Dagi
Title: Re: Draw
Post by: Dagi on July 08, 2007, 03:07:09 pm
(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_11_6.gif)

Guess I've pushed the envelope enough when Dagi starts to object.   :P

Gary

Please send me the address of that smiley!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 08, 2007, 03:09:36 pm
Master of Queer Sex?  Dear God!  I'd better get busy if I'm going to live up to that title.  Gee!  No pressure there.

Good thing I'm moving to California soon, huh?

Gary

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/1/1_4_85.gif)

YEEEHAAAW! Someone should warn the Californian gays, it´s goin´ta get HOT there in a few weeks!
Title: Re: Lost Boys
Post by: Dagi on July 08, 2007, 03:18:53 pm
Oh Dagi, I was just heartbroken when I didn't see a comment from you about my story.  I knew you were on the board, and I kept waiting for you to say something.  And after a while I was think, gosh, she really hates it.  I'm thrilled to know that I was wrong.   ;D

Gary

How could I ever hate one of YOUR stories ? ? ? You kept waiting for my comment....aaahhh, don´t know what to say, I´m really touched.

 :-* Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 08, 2007, 03:35:03 pm


Isn't it odd... I've always envied lovely straight MANAGEABLE hair ... mine just misbehaves all the time .. looks exactly the same when I get out of bed .... or when I've combed it ... makes no difference!!! 



Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)





Means you look lovely when you get out of bed...I envy you!  :laugh:

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 08, 2007, 11:26:58 pm

Ah Spicey, my new best friend!  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_6_102.gif)

And thanks for the compliment ... Of course I don't believe a word you've said but thank you anyway sweetheart!!
(just ask Gary ... he tried to pay me a compliment and got a right ear bashing!)  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_1_104v.gif)

Isn't it odd... I've always envied lovely straight MANAGEABLE hair ... mine just misbehaves all the time .. looks exactly the same when I get out of bed .... or when I've combed it ... makes no difference!!!  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/15/15_4_121v.gif)

The girls had to take about 20 photos just to get a couple of decent ones .... oh well ... in for a penny, in for a pound ... here's a full size version of some of them: 

(http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s31/Susiebell_album/Family%20Photos/Susan3.jpg)

(http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s31/Susiebell_album/Family%20Photos/Susan4.jpg)

(http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s31/Susiebell_album/Family%20Photos/Susan2.jpg)




I do miss you honey ... I so miss our Jakefests with Daphne and Shasta .... (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_15_2.gif) .... drooling .... admiring .... squabbling over who likes him the best!  I've been posting all the Jake photos from IMDb onto the "Jake Jake Jake" thread ... just in case it gets wiped out ... and I'm having loads of fun oogling over him with Dagi, but we both need you to join us over there!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)




Lovely pics, SusieBaby.  Just beautiful!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 08, 2007, 11:27:50 pm
Hi Marie.  I will miss you too.  You are the soft, sweet, sensitive one who writes such beautiful stories.  No Crisco!  I'll be back, don't worry. 

Merrily

Thanks, Merr!  I can't imagine this place without you!
Title: Re: I Remember Jack
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 08, 2007, 11:29:01 pm
Oh Marie, that was sweet and sad. But mostly sweet. You know, I too remember almost every single word of Jack´s , and the way he looked at Ennis, and even the way he says "Ennis " with that husky, soft voice....how could Ennis not remember?

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi, Sweets!  Thanks for your kind words.  It is so good to see you!  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 08, 2007, 11:31:35 pm
They're all just on smileycentral Merrily... you have to type in "sex" in the search box and it comes up with all sorts of rude ones .... well I imagine it does anyway!! 

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_22_25.gif)

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

My, My, My!!!!  ::)  :o
Title: Sitting Pretty
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 08, 2007, 11:42:24 pm
Merrily, Honey, this one is for you!  I hope you're around to see it.

Midnight, and Ennis and Jack were just turning in after a day of hiking, talking, playing cards and eating.  Both were very tired and very content to be together.  They laughed as the last embers of the fire crackled and performed an eerie dance among the shadows of the night.

Ennis was the first to enter the tent.  He undressed in haste as Jack poured a bucket of water on the fire.  The night promised to be cold, but the tent was warm and Ennis was suddenly on fire.  He brought a few small fold-away chairs this time to ease the burden of sitting on the stiff, unforgiving ground.  Completely undressed, Ennis sat down on a small chair, his manhood standing straight up, at attention!

Jack pushed his way into the tent, almost falling backwards as he noticed a nude Ennis sitting erect and tall in the chair.  Something else was standing straight up: ramrod hard and twitching!  Jack chucked softly as he noticed Ennis’ cock head resembled a big, savory mushroom. 

“That looks like a nice place to sit!”  Jack laughed as he pointed to Ennis’ member.

“What…the chair?”  Ennis joked as he ran his cold hand along the sides of the chair.  “You want to sit down, Rodeo?”

Jack wasted no time!  He disrobed faster than he ever had!  Ennis reached out for his lover and Jack moved closer.  He turned his back to Ennis and eased down…..




Title: Re: Meadowlark
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 09, 2007, 12:57:39 am
Meadowlark by garycottle

It was near suppertime and Ennis hadn’t returned to camp, so Jack decided to go looking for him.  He found him in the meadow just upstream.  Jack scanned the open expanse and saw Ennis’s bare feet perched on a log.  When Jack drew closer he discovered the man was prostate and his hat laid over his face.

Jack bent down and plucked a weed and then proceeded to lightly graze Ennis’s dirty soles, causing the toes to twitch a couple of times.  But then Ennis suddenly sprang to life and wrestled Jack to the ground.  He had been playing possum.

“Boy, I’ll show you who’s goin’ to get tickled around here,” Ennis said. 

He playfully bit his friend on the nose and then rolled over and laid beside him.  The unexpected rush of activity was followed by an easy lull.  They were silent a moment, and then Ennis said, “It’d be real nice if we lived out here all the time, Jack.”

“Maybe we could buy us a piece of land out this way,” Jack said.

“I don’t mean it like that.  I don’t want no deed.  I’m talkin’ about just takin’ off and leavin’ the world behind.”

Jack raised up on his elbow and looked at Ennis.  He said, “You’re talkin’ like somebody who’s been drinkin’ dandelion wine.  How would we get by?”

With a tinge of bitterness Ennis said, “We could live off the land.  That’s how they did it a hundred fuckin’ years ago.”  He then turned over onto his belly, collected his hat, looked down at the rim, and said in a defeated tone, “Never mind.  It was a dumbass thing to say.  No matter how you work it there’s no way out.”

“Ennis...”  Jack wanted to say he was sorry, but he held his tongue.  And he almost mentioned something about the two of them going to live on has daddy’s place, but he thought better of that, too.  Finally he laid his hand on the small of Ennis’s back and merely said, “Let’s go get us somethin’ to eat.”

Beautiful tale, Gary!  Very moving and a bit sad.  I'm glad to see Ennis wishing out loud that they could be together, no matter how casually!  But then real life rears it's ugly head and shatters our boys' dream of being together!  Very well written, Gary!  You're a master!
Title: Re: Sitting Pretty
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 09, 2007, 01:00:23 am
Wow!  littlewing, that's really sexy.  I can just picture Ennis sitting in that chair with his mushroom head pointing toward the tent's ceiling.  I don't blame Jack for going for it.   :D

Gary

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_13_17.gif)

Ah Gary, thanks for that.  You're such a sweet, sexy man!  ;)
Title: Re: Sitting Pretty
Post by: Dagi on July 09, 2007, 06:40:24 am
Merrily, Honey, this one is for you!  I hope you're around to see it.

Midnight, and Ennis and Jack were just turning in after a day of hiking, talking, playing cards and eating.  Both were very tired and very content to be together.  They laughed as the last embers of the fire crackled and performed an eerie dance among the shadows of the night.

Ennis was the first to enter the tent.  He undressed in haste as Jack poured a bucket of water on the fire.  The night promised to be cold, but the tent was warm and Ennis was suddenly on fire.  He brought a few small fold-away chairs this time to ease the burden of sitting on the stiff, unforgiving ground.  Completely undressed, Ennis sat down on a small chair, his manhood standing straight up, at attention!

Jack pushed his way into the tent, almost falling backwards as he noticed a nude Ennis sitting erect and tall in the chair.  Something else was standing straight up: ramrod hard and twitching!  Jack chucked softly as he noticed Ennis’ cock head resembled a big, savory mushroom. 

“That looks like a nice place to sit!”  Jack laughed as he pointed to Ennis’ member.

“What…the chair?”  Ennis joked as he ran his cold hand along the sides of the chair.  “You want to sit down, Rodeo?”

Jack wasted no time!  He disrobed faster than he ever had!  Ennis reached out for his lover and Jack moved closer.  He turned his back to Ennis and eased down…..






Love that big, savory mushroom! Sexy, sexy Littlewing!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 09, 2007, 06:45:47 am
Hi Dagi and Susie, that sentiment Dagi I can speak for first hand.  You guys have been there for me so many times when I've been feeling sorry for myself but you never judge me, just send me all kinds of love.  Spicey - you will be in good hands honey.  These people here are First Rate generous and caring people.

Merrily

I got so much support on this board and via PM, I really love each and everyone of you. You feel so real. Hm, that´s because you ARE real, I suppose :D.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 09, 2007, 06:48:43 am
Oh Merrily, don't you be fooled by Susie's angelic pose.  Who do you think told me to type in sex in the smiley search engine?

Gary

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/7/7_2_101.gif)

Did you try to type in "rimming" / "feltching" / "snowballing" ? Those are really good  ::)!

Dagi
Title: Re: Meadowlark
Post by: Dagi on July 09, 2007, 06:55:29 am
Meadowlark by garycottle

It was near suppertime and Ennis hadn’t returned to camp, so Jack decided to go looking for him.  He found him in the meadow just upstream.  Jack scanned the open expanse and saw Ennis’s bare feet perched on a log.  When Jack drew closer he discovered the man was prostrate and his hat laid over his face.

Jack bent down and plucked a weed and then proceeded to lightly graze Ennis’s dirty soles, causing the toes to twitch a couple of times.  But then Ennis suddenly sprang to life and wrestled Jack to the ground.  He had been playing possum.

“Boy, I’ll show you who’s goin’ to get tickled around here,” Ennis said. 

He playfully bit his friend on the nose and then rolled over and laid beside him.  The unexpected rush of activity was followed by an easy lull.  They were silent a moment, and then Ennis said, “It’d be real nice if we lived out here all the time, Jack.”

“Maybe we could buy us a piece of land out this way,” Jack said.

“I don’t mean it like that.  I don’t want no deed.  I’m talkin’ about just takin’ off and leavin’ the world behind.”

Jack raised up on his elbow and looked at Ennis.  He said, “You’re talkin’ like somebody who’s been drinkin’ dandelion wine.  How would we get by?”

With a tinge of bitterness Ennis said, “We could live off the land.  That’s how they did it a hundred fuckin’ years ago.”  He then turned over onto his belly, collected his hat, looked down at the rim, and said in a defeated tone, “Never mind.  It was a dumbass thing to say.  No matter how you work it there’s no way out.”

“Ennis...”  Jack wanted to say he was sorry, but he held his tongue.  And he almost mentioned something about the two of them going to live on has daddy’s place, but he thought better of that, too.  Finally he laid his hand on the small of Ennis’s back and merely said, “Let’s go get us somethin’ to eat.”

I had to wait about five minutes to calm down and stop sobbing before I can comment on it now. They both want the same thing - to be together. Ennis on a lonesome island so that he doesn´t have to deal with his fears. But the fact that Jack is already about to give up hope is what really breaks my heart. A person like Jack, giving up hope, trying to be content with what he can get, but craving a live with his love - oh no, damn it, I won´t start crying again. :'(  Darn...

Gary, I love your writing. Thank you for making me cry.

Dagi :(
Title: Re: Meadowlark
Post by: Dagi on July 09, 2007, 06:56:50 am

P.S. You see, I can be serious when I want to be.  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_12_6.gif)

Um...okay, that's enough.
(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_1_73.gif)


 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

I love you, Gary! Thank you for cheering me up!! D.
Title: Re: Meadowlark
Post by: Dagi on July 09, 2007, 12:24:06 pm
Hi there Dagi sweetheart,  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_1_202.gif)

Aw, did I make you go and cry again?  Well anyway, thanks so much for the kind words and the encouragement.  Someday soon I'll try to think of a happy one, or a sexy one.  Maybe I'll write something about Jack and Ennis meeting a boy serving hotdogs in the park on the 4th of July.   :-X
:laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

Gary

 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: As I said, I love that special sort of hotdogs.... ;)

You know how to cheer me up. But I love to cry about them every once in a while. I´ll love your stories whether they are sad or funny or happy...and of course I love the sexy ones! The hot ones! The dirty and nasty and naughty and earthy ones! I admit I´m one of the sexaholics here  ::) .

D.

Title: Re: Admiration
Post by: Dagi on July 09, 2007, 05:24:51 pm
Admiration by garycottle

Jack was all set to lunge but then he caught sight of Ennis, and suddenly he wanted to enjoy the view.  You can see something a thousand times without really looking at it, but every now and then you stop and realize just how handsome a certain tree is, or a mountain, or a person, or a specific part of a person.  Jack had been down on his knees in front of Ennis a hundred times at least.  Maybe more.  But this was one of those occasions when he wanted to pay extra close attention.

Ennis was thick and meaty down there, and he had a couple of ropy, purplish veins that ran along his shaft.  His big, spongy, slightly darker head flared out like a storm trooper’s helmet.  Ennis had a real man’s cock.  And if that wasn’t enough, his firm, pink, fuzzy balls hanging low reminded Jack of fresh, ripe peaches.  Ennis was turgid and oozing, and in this state he listed to the left a little three quarters of the way up, and then he turned in the same direction a bit more sharply.  Jack knew that the irregular shape and the girth was what made Ennis feel so good inside of him.

Jack took Ennis’s balls into his hand and smiled up at his friend.  “You’re so beautiful, Ennis.  The way you’re made...”

“Quit your yammerin’, Jack.  I can’t stand it much longer.”

Jack leaned in and tickled Ennis's piss slit with the tip of his tongue, causing the man to shutter.  He could literally see the hairs on Ennis’s arms stand up, and he took pride in knowing that he was making that happen.

What a lovely idea! Now could you please describe JakeJacks precious parts in the same detailed and admiring way?

You caused me to shutter with that last part :D :o.

Dagi
Title: Re: Admiration
Post by: Dagi on July 09, 2007, 06:26:50 pm
Hmmm  I'm thinking Jack would be more slender, but longer, and his would stick straight up when excited.  He'd have one of those that would flop back and slap his tummy if you bent it down and let go.   :P

Gary

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/18/18_3_3.gif)

P.S. I thought I saw a fanfic from you, and I was looking forward to reading it.  Where did it go?  Have I lost my mind?


Thank you, Gary. Merrily will complain again that we are going off topic....and I thought we are here to have fun ? ? ?
Title: Son Of A Bitch
Post by: Dagi on July 09, 2007, 06:54:12 pm
Here it is again, this time corrected by poor Susie. Its a long one, and not a light one, I´m sorry. Thank you Susiebell!

Son Of A Bitch by Dagi

They pressed their bodies together in a tight embrace, neither of them willing to let go, each trying to not let out a moan that would reveal how they felt every time they had to part, each trying to be strong for the other´s sake.
After what seemed an eternity, Ennis tried to pull back since he knew it was time for Jack to go, a long ride home waiting for him. But Jack didn´t let him, pulled him even closer.
„Son of a bitch, Ennis, why ya do this to me, hurts so much to have to let you go....can´t let you go...damn it...“, his words merely a choked whisper.
Ennis´ eyes filled with tears, he felt the same way but would rather bite off his tongue than admit it, for he knew it was because of him that they had to part again and again, so many times he had already lost count.
Jack didn´t dare think of that goddamn emptiness he would fall into again in Childress, an emptiness so empty he sometimes had to get drunk, not in order to not feel anything anymore, but to feel anything at all.
 „Why did ya do this to me, Jack?“ Ennis murmured hardly audible.
„Do what?“ „ Why d'ya make me love ya so much?“ he thought, looking at Jack, not bothering any more about hiding the tears in his dark eyes.
Jack ran his fingers through those beloved curls, took this beloved face in both his hands and kissed Ennis so tenderly, their lips scarcely touching, breathing and moaning into each other´s mouths, tongues meeting  sweet and wet and soft. The moans became louder, the desire stronger until Ennis whispered raucously „ Take me, Jack, please, do me once more, I want ta take ya home with me...“
Jack stared at him, surprised, but a second later he turned Ennis around, pressed him against the truck and with trembling hands he shoved down both their jeans. He hesitated a moment, almost unable to hold back once his erect member touched firm flesh, but Ennis thrusted back against him, moaning loud, his head lolling back, answer enough.
The urge overwhelmed Jack, and with an animal grunt he pushed in all the way in one, knowing he was causing pain without any lube at all, wishing it almost, anger and grief and rage running through him now in hot waves, oddly mixed up with desire, and he pushed in and pulled back and pushed in hard again, Ennis becoming silent, only breathing heavily, knowing he was getting punished in a way for doing this to Jack, for leaving him again and again, for refusing to give him what he was craving so much.
Despite the pain,  the feel of Jack inside of him, filling him up, taking him mercilessly, submitting him to his own will, excited him more that he would ever have dared to admit, and he felt that he was about to come without even touching himself, needing both hands to hold on to the truck for his legs threatened to give way under him.
Jack´s grip around Ennis´ hips became even stronger, he buried his nails in his victims flesh crying out loud when they came only seconds apart in wave after wave, Jack holding Ennis so close they became like one body.
There they stood shaking, faces wet with sweat and tears, aware that something inside of them had broken.
„Did I hurt you?“ Jack whispered when they had calmed down a little. “I´m sorry, didn´t mean to....well, maybe I did...“.
Ennis finally turned around, folded his love in his arms and stroke his face in a tender gesture.
„S´alright, Jack....s´alright“.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 09, 2007, 06:57:12 pm
This time it was me waiting for a comment from you, Gary, and I even got paranoid enough to delete it again. But now I think like it or not, what the heck.

Posting stories really kills my nerves. I go to bed right now.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on July 09, 2007, 11:11:15 pm
Yahoo!
Just came back from vacation to find you guys are up to page 150! The last time I posted was waaaaay back on page 65. I have 85 pages to read! I gotta make a new project for BetterMost Craft Corners, too. Bravo, folks!
Ahh sweet demand, the price of success. I'm so proud! Trouble is, now I'll never get caught up.
Title: Re: Meadowlark
Post by: Clyde-B on July 09, 2007, 11:24:05 pm
Meadowlark by garycottle

It was near suppertime and Ennis hadn’t returned to camp, so Jack decided to go looking for him.  He found him in the meadow just upstream.  Jack scanned the open expanse and saw Ennis’s bare feet perched on a log.  When Jack drew closer he discovered the man was prostrate and his hat laid over his face.

Jack bent down and plucked a weed and then proceeded to lightly graze Ennis’s dirty soles, causing the toes to twitch a couple of times.  But then Ennis suddenly sprang to life and wrestled Jack to the ground.  He had been playing possum.

“Boy, I’ll show you who’s goin’ to get tickled around here,” Ennis said. 

He playfully bit his friend on the nose and then rolled over and laid beside him.  The unexpected rush of activity was followed by an easy lull.  They were silent a moment, and then Ennis said, “It’d be real nice if we lived out here all the time, Jack.”

“Maybe we could buy us a piece of land out this way,” Jack said.

“I don’t mean it like that.  I don’t want no deed.  I’m talkin’ about just takin’ off and leavin’ the world behind.”

Jack raised up on his elbow and looked at Ennis.  He said, “You’re talkin’ like somebody who’s been drinkin’ dandelion wine.  How would we get by?”

With a tinge of bitterness Ennis said, “We could live off the land.  That’s how they did it a hundred fuckin’ years ago.”  He then turned over onto his belly, collected his hat, looked down at the rim, and said in a defeated tone, “Never mind.  It was a dumbass thing to say.  No matter how you work it there’s no way out.”

“Ennis...”  Jack wanted to say he was sorry, but he held his tongue.  And he almost mentioned something about the two of them going to live on has daddy’s place, but he thought better of that, too.  Finally he laid his hand on the small of Ennis’s back and merely said, “Let’s go get us somethin’ to eat.”

Sweet!

Haven't thought about dandelion wine in years.  You make it, Gary?
Title: Re: Admiration
Post by: Clyde-B on July 09, 2007, 11:33:38 pm
Admiration by garycottle

Jack was all set to lunge but then he caught sight of Ennis, and suddenly he wanted to enjoy the view.  You can see something a thousand times without really looking at it, but every now and then you stop and realize just how handsome a certain tree is, or a mountain, or a person, or a specific part of a person.  Jack had been down on his knees in front of Ennis a hundred times at least.  Maybe more.  But this was one of those occasions when he wanted to pay extra close attention.

Ennis was thick and meaty down there, and he had a couple of ropy, purplish veins that ran along his shaft.  His big, spongy, slightly darker head flared out like a storm trooper’s helmet.  Ennis had a real man’s cock.  And if that wasn’t enough, his firm, pink, fuzzy balls hanging low reminded Jack of fresh, ripe peaches.  Ennis was turgid and oozing, and in this state he listed to the left a little three quarters of the way up, and then he turned in the same direction a bit more sharply.  Jack knew that the irregular shape and the girth was what made Ennis feel so good inside of him.

Jack took Ennis’s balls into his hand and smiled up at his friend.  “You’re so beautiful, Ennis.  The way you’re made...”

“Quit your yammerin’, Jack.  I can’t stand it much longer.”

Jack leaned in and tickled Ennis's piss slit with the tip of his tongue, causing the man to shutter.  He could literally see the hairs on Ennis’s arms stand up, and he took pride in knowing that he was making that happen.

Oh my!  I think I saw Darth Vader spit.   *fan fan fan*
Title: Re: Sitting Pretty
Post by: Clyde-B on July 09, 2007, 11:47:58 pm

“That looks like a nice place to sit!”  Jack laughed as he pointed to Ennis’ member.

“What…the chair?”  Ennis joked as he ran his cold hand along the sides of the chair.  “You want to sit down, Rodeo?”

Jack wasted no time!  He disrobed faster than he ever had!  Ennis reached out for his lover and Jack moved closer.  He turned his back to Ennis and eased down…..






So, they just talk about the first thing that pops up?

Marie, you guys are like bunny rabbits.  Miss one day and you're five pages behind!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on July 09, 2007, 11:58:17 pm

There they stood shaking, faces wet with sweat and tears, aware that something inside of them had broken.
„Did I hurt you?“ Jack whispered when they had calmed down a little.“I´m sorry, didn´t mean to....well, maybe I did...“.
Ennis finally turned around, folded his love in his arms and stroke his face in a tender gesture.
„S´alright, Jack....s´alright“.

Whoa Dagi,

Raw and hot and sad.
Title: Re: Dagi's unnamed story part 2
Post by: Clyde-B on July 10, 2007, 12:03:45 am
Sorry Dagi, your story made me so sad and this just spilled out of me!



Part 2 by Susie



Jack stared into his rear view mirror, the reflection of Ennis’ truck pulling out of the parking lot and heading off down the dirt track was an all too familiar sight.  His heart sank slowly into his stomach at the prospect of yet another fourteen hour drive, each moment taking him a step further away from his love, a step closer to nothing.  How much more of this could he take?  Every departure ripped tiny pieces of his heart clean out of his chest, and now, only shattered fragments remained. 

He switched on the radio, set the truck in reverse and backed out onto the road.  Tears filled his eyes, brimming over and spilling down his cheeks, “Damn you, Ennis Del Mar!”   He replayed their final moments together over and over in his mind, he’d needed to hurt Ennis, to make Ennis feel some of his pain.  But now that his anger had subsided, it left behind a deepening sadness at so many words once again left unspoken.

The radio helped to wile away some of the hours, providing a little distraction, until the words “Crazy” began to echo around him, taking him back to Pete’s Saloon, empty but for the two of them, back to the worn lanolium dance floor and into the arms of his man, “I love you, Ennis Del Mar.”  He pulled the truck over suddenly, stumbled out and fell, wretching, to his knees.


Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Love the way you used this to connect Gary's story and Dagi's
Title: Re: Meadowlark
Post by: Clyde-B on July 10, 2007, 12:20:20 am
I never made it myself, but my father used to work with a woman who made it and gave jars of it away for Christmas.  I wasn't allowed to try any.   >:(

Gary

It's potent stuff!   :laugh:
Title: Re: Sitting Pretty
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 10, 2007, 01:49:13 am
Oh my dear Lord, Littlewing!!!  So hot and sexy!!  And what a lovely image of Ennis to start my day! Lovely littlewing!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

ps.  Oh yeah, I forgot we're supposed to be writing stories .... you see .... the boss is away, and we all come out to play!!  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/3/3_7_6.gif) 

I see the boss is back?  :o
Title: Re: Sitting Pretty
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 10, 2007, 01:49:58 am
Love that big, savory mushroom! Sexy, sexy Littlewing!

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi, honey!
Title: Re: Admiration
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 10, 2007, 01:54:42 am
Admiration by garycottle

Jack was all set to lunge but then he caught sight of Ennis, and suddenly he wanted to enjoy the view.  You can see something a thousand times without really looking at it, but every now and then you stop and realize just how handsome a certain tree is, or a mountain, or a person, or a specific part of a person.  Jack had been down on his knees in front of Ennis a hundred times at least.  Maybe more.  But this was one of those occasions when he wanted to pay extra close attention.

Ennis was thick and meaty down there, and he had a couple of ropy, purplish veins that ran along his shaft.  His big, spongy, slightly darker head flared out like a storm trooper’s helmet.  Ennis had a real man’s cock.  And if that wasn’t enough, his firm, pink, fuzzy balls hanging low reminded Jack of fresh, ripe peaches.  Ennis was turgid and oozing, and in this state he listed to the left a little three quarters of the way up, and then he turned in the same direction a bit more sharply.  Jack knew that the irregular shape and the girth was what made Ennis feel so good inside of him.

Jack took Ennis’s balls into his hand and smiled up at his friend.  “You’re so beautiful, Ennis.  The way you’re made...”

“Quit your yammerin’, Jack.  I can’t stand it much longer.”

Jack leaned in and tickled Ennis's piss slit with the tip of his tongue, causing the man to shutter.  He could literally see the hairs on Ennis’s arms stand up, and he took pride in knowing that he was making that happen.

The sound you all hear is big, dirty mama falling flat on the floor!!! ::)  Gary, this is so sexy and so descriptive!  I love the way you talk about Ennis' manhood!  I can picture it in my mind's eye.  Brilliant, Gary!  Such a sweet, sexy, moving, intimate moment!  I loved reading every word!
Title: Re: Admiration
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 10, 2007, 01:56:13 am
Hmmm  I'm thinking Jack would be more slender, but longer, and his would stick straight up when excited.  He'd have one of those that would flop back and slap his tummy if you bent it down and let go.   :P

Gary

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/18/18_3_3.gif)

P.S. I thought I saw a fanfic from you, and I was looking forward to reading it.  Where did it go?  Have I lost my mind?


Oh, my!!!  ::)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 10, 2007, 03:10:36 am
Aww Dagi, sweetheart.  Now you stop being paranoid.  I had read it, but when I was about to comment on it, it was gone again.  Leaving me with that Twilight Zone feeling.  (Gary trembles as he contemplates how he could have read a story that doesn't exist.)

Dagi, you need not worry, at all.  This is remarkable work.  So emotionally raw and true.  And it just so happens to be very close to my view of Jack's and Ennis's sex life.  Except with me it's Ennis that tends to take out his frustrations on Jack.  When you have sex you let go, and if you're feeling tender and loving that's what comes out, but if you're conflicted then that's what's going to come out.  And I think the boys are conflicted most of the time.  You did a wonderful job demonstrating that.

Beatiful, powerful, sad stuff.

Gary 

Thank you Gary, you are a sweetheart.

I know that I will never stop being paranoid. You just don´t know what it means to write a story and share it with native speakers, knowing it is clumsily written and that I should just shut up and stop doing things I am unable do the way I want to. But that story has been in my mind for a long time and wanted to be written, so I did it in order to get ridd of it. Needless to say that I spent another hour in bed wondering whether I should delete it again, before more people can read it. Okay, I know by now that I don´t have to fear the judgement of my family here, but what about everybody else who visits that site?

I tried to let the story end in a different way, but it didn´t work. It´s painful, but I can feel Jack´s frustration and anger, and I thought it was his turn to let it out, although I agree that it´s normally Ennis who does that.

Thanks for your comment, Gary!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 10, 2007, 03:16:22 am
Oh Dagi, this is such a beautiful, sad story!  Why can't they ever just talk to each other, really tell each other how they feel.  Sex seems to be their only way of communicating sometimes.  For Jack to deliberately hurt Ennis just chokes me up terribly .... I can really feel his anger and frustration.   

And for Ennis to whisper "s'alright" to Jack .... accepting the blame  .... well that just kills me!

Beautiful Dagi honey.

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

thank you Susie! And thank you again for your help. Sorry that  you even had to correct my dumbass typos. 
Title: Re: Dagi's unnamed story part 2
Post by: Dagi on July 10, 2007, 03:21:44 am
Sorry Dagi, your story made me so sad and this just spilled out of me!



Part 2 by Susie



Jack stared into his rear view mirror, the reflection of Ennis’ truck pulling out of the parking lot and heading off down the dirt track was an all too familiar sight.  His heart sank slowly into his stomach at the prospect of yet another fourteen hour drive, each moment taking him a step further away from his love, a step closer to nothing.  How much more of this could he take?  Every departure ripped tiny pieces of his heart clean out of his chest, and now, only shattered fragments remained. 

He switched on the radio, set the truck in reverse and backed out onto the road.  Tears filled his eyes, brimming over and spilling down his cheeks, “Damn you, Ennis Del Mar!”   He replayed their final moments together over and over in his mind, he’d needed to hurt Ennis, to make Ennis feel some of his pain.  But now that his anger had subsided, it left behind a deepening sadness at so many words once again left unspoken.

The radio helped to wile away some of the hours, providing a little distraction, until the words “Crazy” began to echo around him, taking him back to Pete’s Saloon, empty but for the two of them, back to the worn lanolium dance floor and into the arms of his man, “I love you, Ennis Del Mar.”  He pulled the truck over suddenly, stumbled out and fell, wretching, to his knees.


Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



Susie, don´t know what to say, I´m typing with tears in my eyes, your story really choked me up. What a beautifully written and sad sequel. So many things said in so few lines. You are a great writer. :-*

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 10, 2007, 03:27:54 am
Whoa Dagi,

Raw and hot and sad.

Thank you for your comment, I thought you have already forgotten about us. I LOVE your drabbles!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 10, 2007, 05:02:29 am
Hi Susie  ;D.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 10, 2007, 05:14:42 am
I just noticed that they changed the number of posts per page from 15 to ten. Now everything I wrote in the archive about the pages where the stories can be found in the original thread is obsolete  ???  :(    >:(.

I couldn´t believe myself that it was on page sixtysomething that Toycoon left us....that explains it.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 10, 2007, 05:18:44 am
Ah Dagi sweetheart .. you're daft as a brush!  Your story was perfect, really it was!  Your English is better than mine girl, and your writing has a wonderful sensitivity to it!  So quit yer hammerin' and write me another one!!

.... ooh that sounded mean .. me sorry! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_2_109v.gif)  I love you and I love your stories!!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

I don´t believe a word of it, but thank you anyway, Susiebell, I DO love you!

And Gary, yes girls ARE difficult, girls suck sometimes ( ;D), we know that , you had better get used to it.
Title: Re: Admiration
Post by: Dagi on July 10, 2007, 05:31:30 am
Thought this might be easier to swallow, so to speak.   ;)


The way you described it I do not really think so   :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: !

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 10, 2007, 05:42:15 am


ps .. what a shame about the messages per page ... if you want any help sorting through them, I'll be happy to help.

I won´t sort them out, I go on posting them per date, but thanks for the offer, honey!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 10, 2007, 06:13:40 am
Quick guys .... it's the boss .... back to your desks!!


   Clyde      Littlewing     Shasta      Dagi        Gary         Merrily          Susie      Toycoon
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Lovely to see you back again sweetheart! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_2_106.gif)

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

You are incredible, Susie. Incredible.

Dagi
Title: Re: Smoking Pot
Post by: Dagi on July 10, 2007, 08:02:25 am
Smoking Pot by Susie


The two middle aged men sat quietly staring out over the lake to the mountains beyond, silhouetted against the night sky. The sombre mood gradually lifted as they passed the joint back and forth between them.  Silence turned to chatter, chatter turned to raucous laughter. Jack leaned over suddenly, kissing his startled lover, deep and hard, “Sorry bud, just couldn’t resist those beautiful lips.” Ennis smiled, pulling him back, kissing him harder, seemed Ennis couldn’t resist either.

“Come on, let’s do it like we did first time!” Jack was a horny teenager, pulling at his jeans, giggling, and getting down on all fours. Ennis, thinking it was a fine idea, lowered his fly. He fumbled around in the dark, muttering to himself, and finally gave up, “Can’t find where to put it...”  Laughter erupted between them, bouncing off the peaks and echoing all around, they both collapsed on the ground.

“And you call me a Dumbass… Dumbass!” Jack, undeterred, climbed on top of Ennis, eyes hazy with a mixture of pot and lust, “You just lie there lil’ darlin’, I’ll show you where to put it!”



Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



Susie, you are soooooo great. I´m laughing so hard, you should hear me. Thank god smoking pot only affects their brains, not their......

Dagi
Title: Re: Smoking Pot
Post by: Dagi on July 10, 2007, 08:45:58 am
Ah thank you sweetie!  Are we EVER going to get our housework done??

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Hm.....I´ve been here for 3 hours now. Gotta go, Till just woke up. see you later!
Title: Re: Admiration
Post by: Toycoon on July 10, 2007, 10:20:09 am
The sound you all hear is big, dirty mama falling flat on the floor!!! ::)  Gary, this is so sexy and so descriptive!  I love the way you talk about Ennis' manhood!  I can picture it in my mind's eye.  Brilliant, Gary!  Such a sweet, sexy, moving, intimate moment!  I loved reading every word!

Garycottle, you crazy bastard! Now, you've gone and given Littlewing, the vapors!
Great writing, little bud. I can always count on you for something raunchy and depraved. Thanks!
Title: Ennis' Masculinity
Post by: Toycoon on July 10, 2007, 10:28:30 am
Where did the secrets to masculinity lay; Ennis surely did not know.

Not terribly experienced, Ennis had kissed Alma deeply, fondled her tiny body but never transcended with her to a level where he knew he had no restraint; Ennis was a man and there was supposedly, his match.

Ennis desperately clutched Jack's bristly face with his rough hands; Jack's soft lips, the stubble on his handsome jaw and Jack's musky scent was an irresistible force that Ennis could not control.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 10, 2007, 02:08:04 pm
(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_12_6.gif)

This is so funny!  And I notice I'm not just goofing off, but I'm mooning everybody.   :P

Now if I had a nice bum, I'd be mooning everybody in real life all the time.   :o

(You may worry about your picture, and Dagi may have doubts about her English skills, but I feel like a nothing because God didn't give me a better butt.   :-\  -- Girls aren't the only ones with hangups.)

Gary

Now that´s the Gary I know and love. Always there when we need someone to cheer us up. Unfortunately I never got to see your bum, but if you are as wrong about it as Susie is about her face I´d love to see it some day  ;D

Dagi
Title: Re: Ennis' Masculinity
Post by: Dagi on July 10, 2007, 02:14:03 pm
Where did the secrets to masculinity lay; Ennis surely did not know.

Not terribly experienced, Ennis had kissed Alma deeply, fondled her tiny body but never transcended with her to a level where he knew he had no restraint; Ennis was a man and there was supposedly, his match.

Ennis desperately clutched Jack's bristly face with his rough hands; Jack's soft lips, the stubble on his handsome jaw and Jack's musky scent was a irresistible force that Ennis could not control.

Here you are again, and putting us all to shame with one of your awesome 3 S Fanfics. And I´m so happy Ennis can´t control this force   :D ::).

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on July 10, 2007, 02:30:12 pm
Hi Spiceylife-
I'm lovin' your sexy Supernatural Sam and Dean gif. Where did you find that?
I could write erotic several fanfics based on that gif alone! Woohoo!



Title: Re: Ennis' Masculinity
Post by: Dagi on July 10, 2007, 02:39:40 pm

P.S.  This is a little off topic, but ......

I wonder anyway, what IS the topic of this board ?  ?  ?  :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 10, 2007, 02:43:03 pm
Oh Dagi, it's a train wreck. You're just going to have to trust me on this one.

Gary

Could you please explain to the German gal what a train wreck is? D.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 10, 2007, 06:06:42 pm
Quick guys .... it's the boss .... back to your desks!!


   Clyde      Littlewing     Shasta      Dagi        Gary         Merrily          Susie      Toycoon
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Lovely to see you back again sweetheart! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_2_106.gif)

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

How cute is this?  I LOVE it, Susie.

Toycoon---I tried, but -- OMG, they were wild as bucks while you were gone. The reason I'm alseep is because they were so ROWDY and LOUD that I never got any sleep at night. It was nonstop PARTY time!! Whew!! I am glad you are back to watch over them. They need an authority figure!!

By the way---WELCOME HOME!!!   We missed you!

P.S. Gary needs to go to detention hall. (Susie, too, but don't put them in there together!!)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on July 10, 2007, 06:46:50 pm
I bet you're not as bad as you think .. let's have a butchers!!  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_6_103.gif)   A few sessions down at the gym'll soon sort that out!

Susie   (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Yeah Gary,

If you haven't got a scanner, you could xerox it at Kinko's.

(That'd be appropriate!   ;D)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on July 11, 2007, 12:08:26 am
Clyde, I just saw your picture!  You were a total hottie!  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_1_9.gif)

Gary

Thanks Gary!

Didn't expect that!

Bet I could have shown you a good time!   ;D
Title: Re: Sitting Pretty
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 11, 2007, 12:31:21 am
So, they just talk about the first thing that pops up?

Marie, you guys are like bunny rabbits.  Miss one day and you're five pages behind!

 :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:
Title: Re: Son Of A Bitch
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 11, 2007, 12:38:11 am
Here it is again, this time corrected by poor Susie. Its a long one, and not a light one, I´m sorry. Thank you Susiebell!

Son Of A Bitch by Dagi

They pressed their bodies together in a tight embrace, neither of them willing to let go, each trying to not let out a moan that would reveal how they felt every time they had to part, each trying to be strong for the other´s sake.
After what seemed an eternity, Ennis tried to pull back since he knew it was time for Jack to go, a long ride home waiting for him. But Jack didn´t let him, pulled him even closer.
„Son of a bitch, Ennis, why ya do this to me, hurts so much to have to let you go....can´t let you go...damn it...“, his words merely a choked whisper.
Ennis´ eyes filled with tears, he felt the same way but would rather bite off his tongue than admit it, for he knew it was because of him that they had to part again and again, so many times he had already lost count.
Jack didn´t dare think of that goddamn emptiness he would fall into again in Childress, an emptiness so empty he sometimes had to get drunk, not in order to not feel anything anymore, but to feel anything at all.
 „Why did ya do this to me, Jack?“ Ennis murmured hardly audible.
„Do what?“ „ Why d'ya make me love ya so much?“ he thought, looking at Jack, not bothering any more about hiding the tears in his dark eyes.
Jack ran his fingers through those beloved curls, took this beloved face in both his hands and kissed Ennis so tenderly, their lips scarcely touching, breathing and moaning into each other´s mouths, tongues meeting  sweet and wet and soft. The moans became louder, the desire stronger until Ennis whispered raucously „ Take me, Jack, please, do me once more, I want ta take ya home with me...“
Jack stared at him, surprised, but a second later he turned Ennis around, pressed him against the truck and with trembling hands he shoved down both their jeans. He hesitated a moment, almost unable to hold back once his erect member touched firm flesh, but Ennis thrusted back against him, moaning loud, his head lolling back, answer enough.
The urge overwhelmed Jack, and with an animal grunt he pushed in all the way in one, knowing he was causing pain without any lube at all, wishing it almost, anger and grief and rage running through him now in hot waves, oddly mixed up with desire, and he pushed in and pulled back and pushed in hard again, Ennis becoming silent, only breathing heavily, knowing he was getting punished in a way for doing this to Jack, for leaving him again and again, for refusing to give him what he was craving so much.
Despite the pain,  the feel of Jack inside of him, filling him up, taking him mercilessly, submitting him to his own will, excited him more that he would ever have dared to admit, and he felt that he was about to come without even touching himself, needing both hands to hold on to the truck for his legs threatened to give way under him.
Jack´s grip around Ennis´ hips became even stronger, he buried his nails in his victims flesh crying out loud when they came only seconds apart in wave after wave, Jack holding Ennis so close they became like one body.
There they stood shaking, faces wet with sweat and tears, aware that something inside of them had broken.
„Did I hurt you?“ Jack whispered when they had calmed down a little. “I´m sorry, didn´t mean to....well, maybe I did...“.
Ennis finally turned around, folded his love in his arms and stroke his face in a tender gesture.
„S´alright, Jack....s´alright“.

Dagi, I had to really search to find this one!  I'm not used to the new page count yet!  Anyway, this fic is so brilliant!  Very moving, tender and raw all at once.  You have woven a sort of psychological (sp?) drama here, Dagi.  You understand Ennis and Jack so well.  I can certainly imagine a parting like this!  Wonderful!  Beautiful writing!
Title: Re: Dagi's unnamed story part 2
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 11, 2007, 12:40:37 am
Well I AM very clever! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_14_4.gif)   You're the clever one for picking up on most of them.  ... I was also trying to bring in a little of the final lake scene with Jack watching Ennis' truck disappear off down the road.

You're right Gary, it's so hard to write about the difficult moments .... I felt completely drained after I'd finished this one .... it's more fun to write about them with oiled up chests and tight leather pants!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

I'm trying to muster the courage to tackle this scene, myself.  Perhaps someday I'll feel confident enough to write about the final lake scene - do it justice!
Title: Re: Smoking Pot
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 11, 2007, 12:43:25 am
Smoking Pot by Susie


The two middle aged men sat quietly staring out over the lake to the mountains beyond, silhouetted against the night sky. The sombre mood gradually lifted as they passed the joint back and forth between them.  Silence turned to chatter, chatter turned to raucous laughter. Jack leaned over suddenly, kissing his startled lover, deep and hard, “Sorry bud, just couldn’t resist those beautiful lips.” Ennis smiled, pulling him back, kissing him harder, seemed Ennis couldn’t resist either.

“Come on, let’s do it like we did first time!” Jack was a horny teenager, pulling at his jeans, giggling, and getting down on all fours. Ennis, thinking it was a fine idea, lowered his fly. He fumbled around in the dark, muttering to himself, and finally gave up, “Can’t find where to put it...”  Laughter erupted between them, bouncing off the peaks and echoing all around, they both collapsed on the ground.

“And you call me a Dumbass… Dumbass!” Jack, undeterred, climbed on top of Ennis, eyes hazy with a mixture of pot and lust, “You just lie there lil’ darlin’, I’ll show you where to put it!”



Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Brilliant, Susie!  I can't even find the words!  You really captured a very difficult scene and brought it to life.  You fleshed it out to the point that I'm almost sure it happened the way you describe!  Thanks for this, Susie!  I'm speechless!  :)
Title: Re: Admiration
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 11, 2007, 12:45:48 am
What?  You'd think that no one ever described what a a willie looked like before.  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/7/7_9_7.gif)

I'd describe mine, but it'd be a short conversation.   >:(

Gary

 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: Clever man!
Title: Re: Ennis' Masculinity
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 11, 2007, 12:47:46 am
Where did the secrets to masculinity lay; Ennis surely did not know.

Not terribly experienced, Ennis had kissed Alma deeply, fondled her tiny body but never transcended with her to a level where he knew he had no restraint; Ennis was a man and there was supposedly, his match.

Ennis desperately clutched Jack's bristly face with his rough hands; Jack's soft lips, the stubble on his handsome jaw and Jack's musky scent was a irresistible force that Ennis could not control.

Lovely, Toycoon!  Truly exciting!  If I had time tonight I would add to it.  Perhaps tomorrow?  I have a date in a few hours with Harry Potter!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 11, 2007, 12:52:06 am
Yeah Gary,

If you haven't got a scanner, you could xerox it at Kinko's.

(That'd be appropriate!   ;D)

My God, Clyde is that you?  I had to take a closer look..I thought it was a picture of Jake!  My God, but you're a hottie!  Thanks for posting your pic, Clyde!  You're such a beauty!!!  vavavoommmmm!
Title: Re: Son Of A Bitch
Post by: Dagi on July 11, 2007, 05:53:26 am
Dagi, I had to really search to find this one!  I'm not used to the new page count yet!  Anyway, this fic is so brilliant!  Very moving, tender and raw all at once.  You have woven a sort of psychological (sp?) drama here, Dagi.  You understand Ennis and Jack so well.  I can certainly imagine a parting like this!  Wonderful!  Beautiful writing!

Thank you so much for your kind words. As you maybe read I felt more than unsure about that story. All these lovely comments keep me writing, although I think every time "this was my last one, it kills my nerves."

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 11, 2007, 05:57:31 am
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Train

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Wreck

When someone here in the states describes something as a train wreck -- assuming he/she isn't referring to an actual train wreck -- he/she means that the thing in question is a bloody mess.  Something you wouldn't want to see.  Someone's house can be a train wreck.  A person's check book could be a train wreck.  Even a couple's marriage could be a train wreck.  And my ass just happens to be a train wreck.   ;D

Gary

Gary honey I can´t stand to hear you dragging yourself down like this. But if you are right about your ass, then you can easily make up for it showing your lovely front side more often  :D.

Dagi
Title: Clay
Post by: Dagi on July 11, 2007, 07:11:28 am
This one is for Susie!

Clay by Dagi


„What are ya giggling about?“ Ennis´ voice sleepy behind Jack.

Jack smiled. „Just thinking about.........that second night up on Brokeback. What it felt like when you................ slid into me slowly, so slowly...“

Fuck, even after some pot it was still so damn hard to actually talk about these things – but Ennis had asked.

„Felt so damn good, felt as if I was.......touching your cock with my fingertips..........could have made a model out of clay afterwards.....“

„Uh.------------and what are ya giggling about then?“

„Just pictured that model standing on the mantelpiece in my livingroom.“
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 11, 2007, 07:48:30 am
Did you see the post about the Smarten up - chat next saturday (14/july)?  At noon N.Y. time, that is:

Apia   Samoa   Sat 5:00 AM WST
San Francisco   U.S.A. - California   Sat 9:00 AM PDT *
Calgary   Canada - Alberta   Sat 10:00 AM MDT *
Denver   U.S.A. - Colorado   Sat 10:00 AM MDT *
Dallas   U.S.A. - Texas   Sat 11:00 AM CDT *
Chicago   U.S.A. - Illinois   Sat 11:00 AM CDT *
Toronto   Canada - Ontario   Sat 12:00 Noon EDT *
Rochester   U.S.A. - New York   Sat 12:00 Noon EDT *
New York   U.S.A. - New York   Sat 12:00 Noon EDT *
St. John's   Canada - Newfoundland and Labrador   Sat 1:30 PM NDT *
Dublin   Ireland   Sat 5:00 PM IST *
Glasgow   U.K. - Scotland   Sat 5:00 PM BST *
London   U.K. - England   Sat 5:00 PM BST *
Madrid   Spain   Sat 6:00 PM CEST *
Paris   France   Sat 6:00 PM CEST *
Brussels   Belgium   Sat 6:00 PM CEST *
Amsterdam   Netherlands   Sat 6:00 PM CEST *
Oslo   Norway   Sat 6:00 PM CEST *
Copenhagen   Denmark   Sat 6:00 PM CEST *
Rome   Italy   Sat 6:00 PM CEST *
Berlin   Germany - Berlin   Sat 6:00 PM CEST *
Stockholm   Sweden   Sat 6:00 PM CEST *
Seoul   South Korea   Sun 1:00 AM KST
Melbourne   Australia - Victoria   Sun 2:00 AM EST
Auckland   New Zealand   Sun 4:00 AM NZST


Gary, get that damn set-up, and quick!

Dagi
Title: Re: Clay
Post by: Dagi on July 11, 2007, 08:17:05 am
Ah, for me?? Can I have Jack too??  Lovely steamy stuff Dagi! So Playful and sexy, just the way I like it!  And as for this bit ....felt as if I was........touching your cock with my fingertips.... OMG! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_3_1v.gif) *thud* ... Susie out cold!


Susie   (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

ps. You do help me through some of my insecurities Dagi, and I love you for that.


thank you, Susie darling! I love this hilarious emoticon! And I love you!
Title: Re: Son Of A Bitch
Post by: Toycoon on July 11, 2007, 09:16:44 am
Dagi, I had to really search to find this one!  I'm not used to the new page count yet!  Anyway, this fic is so brilliant!  Very moving, tender and raw all at once.  You have woven a sort of psychological (sp?) drama here, Dagi.  You understand Ennis and Jack so well.  I can certainly imagine a parting like this!  Wonderful!  Beautiful writing!

Oh I agree! Dagi, your English is astounding. I found myself getting cold shivers as I read it. Susiebell mentioned that the line between the original story/movie and our fanfic is so blurred that I don't what is in the story or not. Of course, now I don't care any more! It's all so good.
Title: Re: Clay
Post by: Clyde-B on July 11, 2007, 09:43:16 am
I want one of both Jack and Ennis.  That way I could use them as bookends.   ;D

Now if they were made of something like silicone I could...   :-X  (Shasta is never going to let me out of detention at this rate.   :'( )

Thanks for the sexy images first thing in the morning, Dagi dear.

Gary

Sounds like a new project for Toycoon's craft thread.    ;D
Title: Re: Clay
Post by: Toycoon on July 11, 2007, 01:25:39 pm
Sounds like a new project for Toycoon's craft thread.    ;D

Say, that is a good idea, Clyde-B.
Might I add, you are a fine looking fella! Why is your photo so blurry, though? Were you drunk when it was taken?
Title: Re: Son Of A Bitch
Post by: Dagi on July 11, 2007, 01:43:08 pm
Oh I agree! Dagi, your English is astounding. I found myself getting cold shivers as I read it. Susiebell mentioned that the line between the original story/movie and our fanfic is so blurred that I don't what is in the story or not. Of course, now I don't care any more! It's all so good.

Toycoon, thank you so much for that encouraging comment. Seems you all know just how much I need it. How good to have you back! Did you already manage to read the whole tread?

Dagi
Title: Re: Clay
Post by: Dagi on July 11, 2007, 01:46:49 pm
I want one of both Jack and Ennis.  That way I could use them as bookends.   ;D

Now if they were made of something like silicone I could...   :-X  (Shasta is never going to let me out of detention at this rate.   :'( )

Thanks for the sexy images first thing in the morning, Dagi dear.

Gary

thank you Gary! Seems, though, nobody got that I tried to write a funny one, not a sexy one. ???

Dagi
Title: Re: Clay
Post by: Dagi on July 11, 2007, 03:28:41 pm
   And Bobby might pretend it's a rocket and hold it over his head and go running through the house with it.  :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: )


 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 11, 2007, 03:55:45 pm
Did you see the post about the Smarten up - chat next saturday (14/july)?  At noon N.Y. time

Damn it, looks like I can´t be there myself. Shiiiiiiiiit.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Clyde-B on July 11, 2007, 07:44:50 pm
Susiebell and Dagi,

Thanks for the kind comments about my pic.

It's blurry Dagi because it's a small crop from an old photo.  Film (especially color film) wasn't as fine grained then as it is today.

Or then again, maybe I was just drunk!   ;D
Title: Re: Son Of A Bitch
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 12, 2007, 12:46:24 am
Thank you so much for your kind words. As you maybe read I felt more than unsure about that story. All these lovely comments keep me writing, although I think every time "this was my last one, it kills my nerves."

Dagi

Please don't stop writing, Dagi! You're doing an amazing job!
Title: Re: Clay
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 12, 2007, 12:48:27 am
This one is for Susie!

Clay by Dagi


„What are ya giggling about?“ Ennis´ voice sleepy behind Jack.

Jack smiled. „Just thinking about.........that second night up on Brokeback. What it felt like when you................ slid into me slowly, so slowly...“

Fuck, even after some pot it was still so damn hard to actually talk about these things – but Ennis had asked.

„Felt so damn good, felt as if I was.......touching your cock with my fingertips..........could have made a model out of clay afterwards.....“

„Uh.------------and what are ya giggling about then?“

„Just figured that model standing on the mantelpiece in my livingroom.“

This took me by surprise!  Dagi, this is really good.  You have a special understanding of Ennis and Jack's relationship.  You have an insight into how they would have spoken to one another.  Extraordinary!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 12, 2007, 12:49:18 am
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Title: The Commercial
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 12, 2007, 01:03:21 am
Late one summer, Don Wroe offered Ennis the use of his cabin for a few weeks.  Don Wroe put $15,000 into renovating the place, and the work took nearly 10 weeks to complete.  He bought a rather large color TV for the living area, and equipped the family room with leather couches and a love seat.  Ennis sent Jack a postcard inviting him for a week of food, fun, and love.  Jack took less than 3 days to reply. 

Jack couldn’t believe the improvements Don made to the cabin!  The kitchen was pure luxury!  While Jack put away the supplies he brought to cook up savory meals for his lover, Ennis wanted to relax and watch a little television.  Jack almost dropped a side of beef when he heard a side-splitting guffaw spilling from the living room!  Ennis was laughing uproariously!  Jack ran into the living room, anxious to see what sort of sight would make a taciturn Ennis laugh out loud like that!  This was historic!  Ennis was watching a commercial: an ad for an absorbent paper towel that featured a very macho lumberjack.  The man obviously just returned home from work, and instead of manly sons greeting him, he was surrounded by 3 daughters dressed like ballerinas and they were dancing around him.  His dainty wife looked on in approval.  The lumberjack stood still while his daughters danced and ran between his massive legs with a look on his face that ranged from disappointment to incomprehension.  Jack, too, thought the ad was hilarious!

“Is that you and the girls?  Jack asked Ennis as he smiled at his lover.

“Yeah that’s us, Bud!”  Ennis managed between peals of laughter.  “I know what this dude is going through.  But you know what, Jack?  I want a son, but if it doesn’t happen, I’ll be okay with that.” 

“Of course you will, friend.”  Jack answered.  “Your girls are the apple of your eye, I can tell.” Jack gave Ennis an affectionate tap on the arm and returned to the kitchen.  He had T-Bone steaks to marinade.

The day was over, and the dinner dishes were cleared away.  Ennis and Jack sat next to each other in companionable silence and watched a TV cop drama.  Ennis giggled a bit and told Jack, “I haven’t seen my commercial!”  Jack smiled as he rememberd how that ad tickled his lover. Jack wished he could record the ad for him, so that Ennis could play it back whenever he needed a laugh.  He made a mental note to check out that newfangled BETA device they had out now.  He thought he read somewhere that the contraption could record TV shows as well as play movies.  Jack took Ennis' hand in his and squeezed it.  The joy of that moment would be recorded in his consciousness forever.



Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 12, 2007, 01:09:23 am
Such a nice feeling to it all, Littlewing. They are so happy---just satisfied to be together and  not worry about what who might think! Your description of the cabin makes me want to go spend a week too!!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 12, 2007, 01:27:07 am
Such a nice feeling to it all, Littlewing. They are so happy---just satisfied to be together and  not worry about what who might think! Your description of the cabin makes me want to go spend a week too!!

Thanks, Shasta!  I wouldn't mind a week at Don's cabin, either!
Title: Re: Clay
Post by: Dagi on July 12, 2007, 02:47:35 am
This took me by surprise!  Dagi, this is really good. 

Does that mean  it´s surprising if I manage to write a good one ? ??? ;D


You have a special understanding of Ennis and Jack's relationship.  You have an insight into how they would have spoken to one another.  Extraordinary!

Thank you for that kind comment! Although I really wonder now whether I should go back to writing sad stories. Nobody got the joke. That´s why I hate telling jokes in public, it´s so embarrassing if nobody laughes. Oh, stop, Gary at least smiled  :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:.

Your words mean a lot to me, honey!

Dagi
Title: Re: The Commercial
Post by: Dagi on July 12, 2007, 02:55:50 am
Late one summer, Don Wroe offered Ennis the use of his cabin for a few weeks.  Don Wroe put $15,000 into renovating the place, and the work took nearly 10 weeks to complete.  He bought a rather large color TV for the living area, and equipped the family room with leather couches and a love seat.  Ennis sent Jack a postcard inviting him for a week of food, fun, and love.  Jack took less than 3 days to reply. 

Jack couldn’t believe the improvements Don made to the cabin!  The kitchen was pure luxury!  While Jack put away the supplies he brought to cook up savory meals for his lover, Ennis wanted to relax and watch a little television.  Jack almost dropped a side of beef when he heard a side-splitting guffaw spilling from the living room!  Ennis was laughing uproariously!  Jack ran into the living room, anxious to see what sort of sight would make a taciturn Ennis laugh out loud like that!  This was historic!  Ennis was watching a commercial: an ad for an absorbent paper towel that featured a very macho lumberjack.  The man obviously just returned home from work, and instead of manly sons greeting him, he was surrounded by 3 daughters dressed like ballerinas and they were dancing around him.  His dainty wife looked on in approval.  The lumberjack stood still while his daughters danced and ran between his massive legs with a look on his face that ranged from disappointment to incomprehension.  Jack, too, thought the ad was hilarious!

“Is that you and the girls?  Jack asked Ennis as he smiled at his lover.

“Yeah that’s us, Bud!”  Ennis managed between peals of laughter.  “I know what this dude is going through.  But you know what, Jack?  I want a son, but if it doesn’t happen, I’ll be okay with that.” 

“Of course you will, friend.”  Jack answered.  “Your girls are the apple of your eye, I can tell.” Jack gave Ennis an affectionate tap on the arm and returned to the kitchen.  He had T-Bone steaks to marinade.

The day was over, and the dinner dishes were cleared away.  Ennis and Jack sat next to each other in companionable silence and watched a TV cop drama.  Ennis giggled a bit and told Jack, “I haven’t seen my commercial!”  Jack smiled as he rememberd how that ad tickled his lover. Jack wished he could record the ad for him, so that Ennis could play it back whenever he needed a laugh.  He made a mental note to check out that newfangled BETA device they had out now.  He thought he read somewhere that the contraption could record TV shows as well as play movies.  Jack took Ennis' hand in his and squeezed it.  The joy of that moment would be recorded in his consciousness forever.





What a lovely little tale, Marie! At least on of us remembers every now and then that it´s not all about sex between our boys :laugh:.
I like it especially when Ennis laughs. It makes me recall that movie scene where Jack makes this rodeoin thing and falls to the ground. Ennis´ laughter and face are priceless.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 12, 2007, 03:02:33 am
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How much longer are you going to make us wait for your next story? :D

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 12, 2007, 07:15:07 am
Hi, Dagi.  I got the joke!  It WAS funny!  It's just that we probably all got a bit distracted by what came later...  First we laughed at the boys being stoned and giggly...then we thought about Jack creating a clay model of Ennis's penis... then we just thought about Ennis's penis!!  Too hot!  (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/youhadsugar.gif)(http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/minilove.gif)(http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/meow.gif)(http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/hulagirlt.gif)(http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/HelloCartoon.gif)(http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/cheerleader3.gif)

It was very well written and so cute, Dagi, and I really love all of your stories.  'Son of a Bitch' was fantastic!  You have a special way of putting your stories together and bringing Jack and Ennis to life.  I always enjoy your work.  I'm always happy when Dagi posts another story!  Thanks, Dagi.

Oh, and please don't worry about your English!  It's fine, honestly.  Far, far better than my Year 7 German!  (Guten Morgen, Frau Molnar.  Ich bin zwolf jahre alt!)  Plus I can count from one to twenty, swear a bit and insult people.  That's it.  Believe me, you are very clever and you rarely make a mistake.  (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/heartlove.gif)


You´re a sweetheart! you all really know what I want to hear :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:.

Wow, this site is getting quite animated! I love your emoticons and all the other stuff! too funny.

What film are these pics from? I have to see it! And I´d love to read Toycoons fanfics about it ;D!

Nice to see you! Hope you are okay? We are all salivating for your next story!!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on July 12, 2007, 08:40:48 am


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Arrrrr! Yer killing me, Spiceylife! But I loved it!
Title: Re: Ennis' Masculinity
Post by: Toycoon on July 12, 2007, 08:46:59 am
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Beautiful, Toycoon!  Just perfect.  Jack is everything Ennis wants and needs.  Very well written, thought-provoking story.  Thanks!  I don't know how you pack so much emotion into three sentences...!  You're amazing.
Gee whiz, thank you, Spicey!

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Toycoon, I saw pics of you on your horse at Colorado, and with David, too.  What a handsome couple you are!  You're a hottie!!

Spiceylife, my head's gonna swell up like a balloon if you go on like that. By all means, please, go on!


Title: Jack's Masculinity
Post by: Toycoon on July 12, 2007, 09:16:03 am
Jack's emotions tended to be nearer to the surface, so his feelings for Ennis were of no surprise to him nor did they conflict with Jack's perception of masculinity.

Jack had been infatuated with several people throughout his adolescence but he had never truly connected to another like he did with his new friend;  Ennis seemed to embody everything Jack could have wanted from a companion.

Jack on his hands and knees held his breath as Ennis pressed himself to Jack's button then forced his turgid flesh into Jack's muscular behind; the initial pain gave way to deep pleasure Jack had not experienced before in his young life and he knew now, that he was hooked.
Title: The Longest Night
Post by: spiceylife on July 12, 2007, 10:21:15 am
I posted this on the 'other' board, but only posted half of it because it is AO/NC-17.  I think Toycoon read the whole thing, but I've altered some parts since then.  Man, I hope this is alright to post...(http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/expressions-181.jpg)


The Longest Night by spiceylife


Jack awoke to the sound of running water, swung long legs off a sagging mattress and padded across the floor, barefoot and naked.  Pulling a smoke from the pocket of his shirt discarded carelessly the night before, Jack lit it and drew back deeply, rubbing eyes that were still heavy from too little sleep.  His boyish face lit up as he smiled easily to himself, recalling a long night filled with laughter, friendship, sweet memories, sex of every description, and his lover, Ennis Del Mar.

Jack shook his head in delight and sighed happily, not quite believing that he was here, with Ennis again, the one who would always have Jack’s heart now, no matter what.  He flopped down on the bed, loose and relaxed, almost childlike, then slid himself up and sat with his back against the headboard, one knee casually drawn up, ashtray balanced on the other thigh, smoking his cigarette in comfort.  Jack flicked ash from his smoke, his mind still thinking on the night spent with Ennis.  He felt a sudden need to ingrain everything that had just happened into his mind, to cover that fragile seed of new memories they’d made last night, protecting them from the sad and certain knowledge that even the best of memories fade and grow dull with time.  Jack had read something once, in one of his mamma’s books.  It had said, “Memory is the scribe of the soul” and Jack had remembered that, all these years.  He wasn’t sure he knew exactly what this really meant, or even what a scribe was, but to Jack, it sounded important, and, more than anything, he knew his own soul wanted to keep Ennis close and safe, and remembered.

And Jack needed to remember this night forever; needed to remember every kiss, every thrust and push and grunt, every lick and suck, hands that felt and pulled and touched and stroked and probed everywhere, the motion of bodies moving in and out, hard, then soft, then hard again.  His mind ran an erotic slideshow of fingers inside, lips parted, tongues meeting, rubbing, gyrating, hips held bruisingly tight, and the sweet smell and feel of sweaty, urgent sex.  He heard again the delicious moaning and panting as each man gave himself over to this need, climaxes were reached and the taste of love lingered on Jack’s lips, the bloom of love in his heart; back then, long ago on the mountain, and still now, far stronger… 

Suddenly, Jack saw movement from the corner of his eye.  He turned his head slightly to look, watching through the sliver of open bathroom door, a few feet away.  He barely noticed the ancient, crooked mirror on the wall above the sink, its silver lining peeling and discolored, because he was entranced by what he could see clearly from where he lay on the bed.  Reflected in the shabby mirror was Ennis Del Mar, showering, his naked beauty a vision that chased all rational thought from Jack’s mind.  His cigarette dangled, forgotten, from his lips, gray ash growing long and threatening to fall on Jack’s chest at any second.

Jack’s eyes travelled over Ennis’s reflection, completely absorbed by the beauty of this man.  Ennis’s eyes were closed, his head back, hands running through his blond locks, turned curly and dark by the water.  Jack watched intently as Ennis turned, soaped up, and ran the soapy washcloth over his lean, muscular back.  He faced the mirror again, and Jack’s breath quickened as Ennis rubbed the cloth over his toned and tanned chest, the chest that Jack had pressed against as he lay on top of Ennis last night and kissed him deeply, putting all his heart into that kiss.  Jack had even felt Ennis’s heart beating madly beneath him, through his own chest.  He watched the soapy water run over brown nipples he had licked and sucked and played with just hours before, and felt a familiar stirring begin in his groin.  Christ, but Ennis is beautiful! 

Ennis turned again, and Jack held his breath as the other man ran the soapy cloth over his firm ass, frothy bubbles running down his crack in a most sensual way.  Jack was entranced, remembering… his tongue moving all over that ass crack the previous night as Ennis lay on his stomach, pillows stuffed under his groin and legs spread wide.  Jack had not been surprised when Ennis pulled away momentarily, gasping.  He waited, whispering soothing words to Ennis as he patiently rubbed the small of his back.  Pleasure flowed through Jack when Ennis eventually gathered himself, visibly relaxed, then asked for more.  Jack kissed Ennis’s right buttock gently and parted his cheeks with both hands, transfixed by the sight of Ennis in such a vulnerable, open position, and moved almost to tears that Ennis trusted Jack enough to allow him in.

He went at it again, lapping hungrily behind Ennis, encircling and tasting, then stiffening his tongue to push inside his lover, probing his body over and over again.  Ennis groaned and panted his desire out loud, eyes closed tight and clutching the cheap headboard so tightly that Jack heard it splinter.  Ennis pushed his ass back into Jack’s face, clearly revelling in this erotic sensation.  Ennis’s scent and taste were divine, an earthy and masculine aphrodisiac, and Jack’s orgasm was tantalizingly close, the trembling pressure building in his cock as his hot tongue entered Ennis’s hole, keeping a wild, intoxicating rhythm.
 

Jack was breathing fast now, his pulse racing as he watched Ennis bathe himself.  His lover seemed oblivious to the approving eyes on him as he washed.  The throbbing, steady heat intensified between Jack’s legs as Ennis turned once more, and Jack’s eyes moved lovingly down to one of the most exquisite parts of his man.  Jack’s mind flickered back a few hours, to when that beautiful dick had felt like a part of Jack himself… a feeling of contentment washing over Jack as he took it into his mouth, swirling his tongue over the large head and along the firm, velvety shaft, sucking hard, relaxing his throat so Ennis could fuck his mouth good and deep.  Jack loved Ennis’s strong hands in his hair, pulling a little, holding Jack’s head steady as he pushed his heavy cock past full, wet lips moist with spit and precome.

Jack felt it to the very core of his being; an unshakeable bond with this man, as if he and Ennis were one, meant to be together, just like this, always…

Then Ennis lay on top of him, his tongue licking seductively along Jack’s bottom lip, kissing him so sweetly as he pushed into Jack, a little at a time, moving slow for fear of hurting him.  Jack clenched his teeth, threw one leg over Ennis’s back, quickly forced himself to adjust and then his hips took over, as if with a mind of their own.  He moaned into Ennis’s mouth, all hot and helpless, and then couldn’t stop himself, rotating his hips in a slow, sensual circle, pushing up towards Ennis, holding on, begging Ennis to fuck him, and quickly. 

Jack remembered sweat dripping off both of them, he remembered staring into Ennis’s gentle eyes and wanting this man in his life forever, and he remembered Ennis fucking him and kissing him deeply at the same time, the most erotic and beautiful moments in Jack’s life always, always coming with Ennis.  It would never be any other way.


Jack tried to settle his breathing, glanced down at himself and grinned, noticing that he was hard.  He dropped the cigarette, burnt out now, into the ashtray, and looked back again to the bathroom mirror, back to the part of Ennis his eyes had been lingering on just seconds before.  Jack gave a start, almost dropping the ashtray to the floor.  A moment ago, Ennis had been soft and flaccid, but now his dick was as stiff as Jack’s, water and soap bubbles cascading over it, the loveliest sight Jack had ever seen.  Jack raised his deep blue eyes up to Ennis’s face, wanting Ennis so much, only to find soft brown eyes lusting, watching him right back through the mirror’s reflection.  Ennis had finally seen Jack on the bed, seen the reaction he caused between Jack’s legs, his own body responding instantly in the same heated, natural way.

Through the bathroom mirror they watched each other, chests heaving as their breathing grew heavier, their need to be together obvious, until Ennis, with a dazzling smile, held his hand out for Jack to join him in the shower.  Jack leapt off the bed, dropping the ashtray in his hurry, and was across the room in seconds, taking Ennis’s hand and slamming the door shut behind him.


Title: Re: Jack's Masculinity
Post by: Dagi on July 12, 2007, 04:22:49 pm
Jack's emotions tended to be nearer to the surface, so his feelings for Ennis were of no surprise to him nor did they conflict with Jack's perception of masculinity.

Jack had been infatuated with several people throughout his adolescence but he had never truly connected to another like he did with his new friend;  Ennis seemed to embody everything Jack could have wanted from a companion.

Jack on his hands and knees held his breath as Ennis pressed himself to Jack's button then forced his turgid flesh into Jack's muscular behind; the initial pain gave way to deep pleasure Jack had not experienced before in his young life and he knew now, that he was hooked.

Woah, Toycoon. Love it. You make us slip into Jack (sorry for that pun ;D).

dagi
Title: Re: The Longest Night
Post by: Dagi on July 12, 2007, 04:28:34 pm
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.....transfixed by the sight of Ennis in such a vulnerable, open position, and moved almost to tears that Ennis trusted Jack enough to allow him in.

Spiceylife, I knew it would be worth waiting..... I have to recover first before I can write something....

Incredible, the images you are able to evoke in my mind. The line I quoted moved me to tears.

Thank you !!!

Dagi

Title: Re: Reverb
Post by: Dagi on July 12, 2007, 04:46:32 pm
Reverb by garycottle

......Tyler gently placed his hand on Daniel’s cheek and brought his face to his.  When their lips touched the bargain was set.

Oh Gary, I´m in a loss for words. (Me.)

That was a sweet tale, so sweet. And of course it made me think of our boys and what could have been had it been so easy for them to speak about

their feelings.

And it was sexy as hell :D :D :D!

First I thought, oh no Gary that´s just not fair to post so long a story at this time, I want to go to bed! But I couldn´t refuse to start reading... and got

hooked. Now I´ve got some nice ideas to go to bed with :laugh:.

Dagi
Title: Re: The Commercial
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 12, 2007, 11:32:28 pm
I love this scene of domestic bliss ... beautiful littlewing!  I so wish it had been like this for them always!  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_2_109v.gif)

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Thanks, Susie.   AU is my salvation.  I'll have them together and happy as often as I can.
Title: Re: Lucise Fanart
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 12, 2007, 11:34:38 pm
Guys ... you have GOT to see this.  It's one of Lucise's wallpapers.  I'm sitting here crying like a baby looking at it.  This SHOULD have been the sweet life they deserved....





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Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


I especially like the one of them kissing while dressed up for a formal evening out!  You're right, Susie..these are awesome!
Title: Re: Clay
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 12, 2007, 11:37:56 pm
Does that mean  it´s surprising if I manage to write a good one ? ??? ;D


Good heavens no!  I meant (and I should have been more clear) that I didn't anticipate the direction you were going with the tale.  And it is really good!
Title: Re: The Commercial
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 12, 2007, 11:39:24 pm
What a lovely little tale, Marie! At least on of us remembers every now and then that it´s not all about sex between our boys :laugh:.
I like it especially when Ennis laughs. It makes me recall that movie scene where Jack makes this rodeoin thing and falls to the ground. Ennis´ laughter and face are priceless.

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi!
Title: Re: The Commercial
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 12, 2007, 11:41:51 pm
How sweet this is, littlewing - a real slice of life for J & E!  What a beautiful thought, Jack cooking T-bones for Ennis, Ennis laughing out loud as he watches television, then the boys snuggling up on the couch after dinner.  This would be my wish for them...  Beautiful little story!  Thanks, Marie.  (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/kiss-love-53.png) 

Why thank you, Spicey Baby!  It is so good to see you here.  Thanks for your kind words!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 12, 2007, 11:47:55 pm
Just realised, I've missed Spicey!!! 


 Spiceylife    Clyde      Littlewing     Shasta      Dagi        Gary         Merrily          Susie      Toycoon
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Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Susie, these are so cute!  Just adorable!  There I am, as I usually can be found, typing away on the computer!  :)
Title: Re: The Longest Night
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 12, 2007, 11:51:00 pm
I posted this on the 'other' board, but only posted half of it because it is AO/NC-17.  I think Toycoon read the whole thing, but I've altered some parts since then.  Man, I hope this is alright to post...(http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/expressions-181.jpg)


The Longest Night by spiceylife




Ah, yes, I remember this one very well!  I had to read it in stages as it was too hot to digest all at once!  Amazing writing, Spicey!  You have brought us into this tender, sweet, dreamlike world, and I don't want to leave!  Extraordinary!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 13, 2007, 12:00:08 am
This is completely off topic, but I was watching Driving Miss Daisy last night, and an expression that I've heard all my life came up.  When someone isn't making much sense they are said to be "talking out of their head."  I got to thinking last night when I heard this.  What else would a person talk out of?  Their behind?   :P

Gary

 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
Title: Re: Reverb
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 13, 2007, 12:02:44 am
Reverb by garycottle



Wow, Gary, this is such a charming tale!  Very well written!  Reverb reads like part of a novel.  Will we read more about Tyler and Daniel?  Lovely work, Babe!
Title: Re: The Commercial
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 13, 2007, 12:04:23 am
Beautiful, littlewing.  It is small moments like that that we remember.  They distill the essence of a person.  It's so nice that Jack was able to be there to see that side of Ennis.  And I love the way you allow Jack and Ennis ceature comforts, a nice place to stay, good food.  Sounds like a very nice vacation.  Wonder if Don would let me stay in his cabin for  while.   ;D

Gary 

Thanks, Gary!  I'm dying to be a guest at Mr. Wroe's cabin, as well. 
Title: Farewell, Jack Twist!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 13, 2007, 12:31:50 am
Aguirre sat at his desk and wondered why he still bothered.  He was well past the age of retirement, and had the good sense- or was it good fortune – to put away a nice nest egg.  He owned his house free and clear, and his children were all college grads and off about their lives.  He and his wife could be taking lazy, luxurious cruises, but he felt compelled to continue working.  He looked around his trailer at all the tasks that needed completing.  Trisha Smith quit a few months ago, but he never replaced her.  Joe Aguirre looked at his age spotted hands and managed a smile.  He was actually proud of all the things he accomplished, and found that he needed to work just a bit longer.  After all, he can rest when he is dead.

Aguirre rose from his desk to fetch himself a cup of coffee.  He noticed a stack of mail from yesterday that he hadn’t even bothered to open.  His coffee mug in hand, Joe Aguirre sat back down and scanned the dozen or so letters that he neglected earlier.  Most were bills, and a few were invitations to local town meetings.  He noticed one letter encased in a fancy red envelope.  Curious, Aguirre opened this one.  It was an obituary of sorts.  Joe’s mouth dropped as he read Jack Twist’s funeral announcement.

Aguirre sat the announcement on his desk and took a swig of the hot brew.   He couldn’t believe that the sweet, handsome, good-for-nothin’ Jack Twist was deceased.  Aguirre examined the envelope for a return address.  There was none.  He wondered who could have sent the notice, and why?  And instantly, Aguirre was transported back to that summer when he hired a one Ennis Del Mar and Jack Twist to herd sheep for him.   He remembered giving them his point of view, cringed when he recalled telling them to break the rules.  And then he saw them!  Witnessed the rough housing, knew that they stemmed the rose to pass the time up there.  Aguirre always wondered if Ennis and Jack ever kept in touch.  How was Ennis handling the news of Jack’s death?  Did he know?  Aguirre reached into his desk and pulled out the company checkbook.  He fetched his rolodex and found the address of Mr. and Mrs. John Twist. 


Title: Re: Reverb
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 13, 2007, 12:38:13 am
Thank you so much, littlewing.  I'm not sure if we'll see any more ofTyler and Daniel.  Those two characters are clearly defined in my mind, so maybe I'll write about them again.  I obviously adore them, and I can imagine writing a whole novel about how they grew up together, how they fell in love, and what happened after that.  Susie wants me to write about what happens in the tent later that night after their first kiss.  That sounds pretty hot to me.  I think I might do that in a day or two.   ;D

Gary

Thanks, Sweetheart!  I, too, adore Daniel and Tyler.  A tent scene featuring those 2 sounds pretty tempting!  I can't wait to read it.  Your tale reminds me of my daughters school and how different things are here and now.  Maria tells me that guys (and not a few of the girls) come out all the time, and there are several same sex couples at her school.  This is all completely accepted, even celebrated, and the teachers out themselves on a regular basis.  You'll see what I mean once you move here.
Title: Re: Lucise Fanart
Post by: Lumière on July 13, 2007, 12:38:32 am

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_6_202.gif) Lucise! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_9_2.gif)

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



Aww.. Susie... :-*

Title: Bad dream
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 13, 2007, 01:18:07 am
Ennis awoke with a start.  This time the pillow was wet!  Well, so were the sheets!  Ennis had a dream: a recurring nightmare that terrified and excited him at the same time.  This time Jack was alive and walking intently down a Mexican alley.  He stopped in front of a decent looking man, a lad who looked a lot like Ennis.  Ennis twitched and shuddered as he saw Jack and the hustler walk off into the shadows.

Wide awake now, Ennis tried to turn over.  It was no good.  The rank sheets were holding him prisoner.  He sighed audibly and pulled at the cheap, twisted bed clothes in an attempt to free himself.  “Jack, how could you do that to me?”  Ennis mumbled as he finally forced himself free.  He tried to keep his heart steady as he imagined Jack kissing, caressing, gentling another man.  It was a little more than he could bear.

“Maybe we should go to Mexico!”  Ennis remembered Jack telling him right before he put 2 and 2 together.  He wanted to punch Jack until he bled.  A part of him died that day, and Ennis found that many months later, the wound had not healed.   “Jack fuckin’ Twist, if you was alive, I would kill your ass!”  Ennis screamed as he somehow found the strength to get up and face the day.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: SFEnnisSF on July 13, 2007, 01:36:26 am
^^^ Wow.
Title: Re: Admiring the View
Post by: Dagi on July 13, 2007, 08:04:34 am
This one’s for you Dagi …



Admiring the View by Susie
 

 ......... Jack guided himself slowly down onto Ennis’ hard dick.   Ennis, breathed deeply, transfixed by the vision in front of him “Hmmmmmmmmm …. now that’s the view I’m talking about cowboy …..”



Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



Yeeehaaaw, Susie! What a view! You are a sexy woman, sexy as hell! Naaaasty story, love it!

Dagi
Title: Re: Farewell, Jack Twist!
Post by: Dagi on July 13, 2007, 08:20:35 am
Aguirre sat at his desk and wondered why he still bothered.  He was well past the age of retirement, and had the good sense- or was it good fortune – to put away a nice nest egg.  He owned his house free and clear, and his children were all college grads and off about their lives.  He and his wife could be taking lazy, luxurious cruises, but he felt compelled to continue working.  He looked around his trailer at all the tasks that needed completing.  Trisha Smith quit a few months ago, but he never replaced her.  Joe Aguirre looked at his age spotted hands and managed a smile.  He was actually proud of all the things he accomplished, and found that he needed to work just a bit longer.  After all, he can rest when he is dead.

Aguirre rose from his desk to fetch himself a cup of coffee.  He noticed a stack of mail from yesterday that he hadn’t even bothered to open.  His coffee mug in hand, Joe Aguirre sat back down and scanned the dozen or so letters that he neglected earlier.  Most were bills, and a few were invitations to local town meetings.  He noticed one letter encased in a fancy red envelope.  Curious, Aguirre opened this one.  It was an obituary of sorts.  Joe’s mouth dropped as he read Jack Twist’s funeral announcement.

Aguirre sat the announcement on his desk and took a swig of the hot brew.   He couldn’t believe that the sweet, handsome, good-for-nothin’ Jack Twist was deceased.  Aguirre examined the envelope for a return address.  There was none.  He wondered who could have sent the notice, and why?  And instantly, Aguirre was transported back to that summer when he hired a one Ennis Del Mar and Jack Twist to herd sheep for him.   He remembered giving them his point of view, cringed when he recalled telling them to break the rules.  And then he saw them!  Witnessed the rough housing, knew that they stemmed the rose to pass the time up there.  Aguirre always wondered if Ennis and Jack ever kept in touch.  How was Ennis handling the news of Jack’s death?  Did he know?  Aguirre reached into his desk and pulled out the company checkbook.  He fetched his rolodex and found the address of Mr. and Mrs. John Twist. 




Beautiful writing, Marie dearest! I really like the Arguirre you are portraying here. And that line about the " sweet, handsome, good-for-nothin’ Jack" choked me up. I still can´t believe myself that he had to die. :( :( :(

Thank you, honey!
Title: Re: Bad dream
Post by: Dagi on July 13, 2007, 08:30:27 am
Ennis awoke with a start.  This time the pillow was wet!  Well, so were the sheets!  Ennis had a dream: a recurring nightmare that terrified and excited him at the same time.  This time Jack was alive and walking intently down a Mexican alley.  He stopped in front of a decent looking man, a lad who looked a lot like Ennis.  Ennis twitched and shuddered as he saw Jack and the hustler walk off into the shadows.

Wide awake now, Ennis tried to turn over.  It was no good.  The rank sheets were holding him prisoner.  He sighed audibly and pulled at the cheap, twisted bed clothes in an attempt to free himself.  “Jack, how could you do that to me?”  Ennis mumbled as he finally forced himself free.  He tried to keep his heart steady as he imagined Jack kissing, caressing, gentling another man.  It was a little more than he could bear.

“Maybe we should go to Mexico!”  Ennis remembered Jack telling him right before he put 2 and 2 together.  He wanted to punch Jack until he bled.  A part of him died that day, and Ennis found that many months later, the wound had not healed.   “Jack fuckin’ Twist, if you was alive, I would kill your ass!”  Ennis screamed as he somehow found the strength to get up and face the day.


Oh Marie. I understand Ennis so well. To figure Jack being with another man is more than I can bear, too. It is so painful, I can feel Ennis´ pain deep inside of me. Yet at the same time I understand Jack just as well! In the movie, Jack´s most sad, lost, hopeless face....gets me every time.

Powerful stuff. thank you!!

Dagi
Title: Re: Reverb
Post by: Toycoon on July 13, 2007, 09:35:10 am
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Pillowy white clouds drifted over a starkly blue sky drawing one’s eyes up toward the snow capped peaks that loomed overhead like benevolent gods, and even though it was June, there were still remnants of snow and ice down below the tree line clinging to the think spring grass here and there, and the wild flowers that dotted the meadows like confetti.

Oh my lil' Garycottle, you are a romantic! And to think, you have this reputation for being somewhat of a perv!
I love your story; it's great foil to the people that think "Brokeback Mountain" should have had some sort of phony Hollywood, 'happy ending' that just wouldn't fit the time period the story was set.
I can't wait to find out more about Daniel and Tyler (Tyler is such a 'twink' name). Excellent!
Title: Re: Bad dream
Post by: Toycoon on July 13, 2007, 09:37:55 am
That was a good one, Littlewing1957, very realistic, simple and authentic. Keep 'em coming, dirty mama!
Title: Re: Lucise Fanart
Post by: Toycoon on July 13, 2007, 09:42:05 am
I love that Lucise fanart! I especially like the picture of Jack and Ennis on their wedding day, too.
Title: Re: Admiring the view
Post by: Toycoon on July 13, 2007, 09:49:09 am
Yay! Susiebell the devil doll has returned. I found this little tail especially hot, my saucy imp.
We love that rear view, too. Woohoo!
Title: Re: Farewell, Jack Twist!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 13, 2007, 09:53:50 pm
Hi there littlewing,

I think that Aguirre is a very interesting character.  He was played to perfection by Mr. Quiad in the film.  You have to wonder about a man who is so dedicated to such a thankless job. 

You seem to have a very clear image of him.  And your story here leads us into a mystery.  That's always fun.  Who would have sent Aguirre that death notice?  And isn't it strange that the last time we were in Aguirre's trailer the secretary was determined to find out where Jack lived, and now some 20 years later the secretary is gone, and we have Aguirre looking for the same address.

Gary

Thanks for your kind words, Gary!  I didn't think of this story in terms of a mystery, but now that you mention it...
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 13, 2007, 09:55:24 pm
^^^ Wow.

 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: Hi, Eric!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 13, 2007, 09:56:49 pm
As our most prolific writer, it just had to be you sweetie! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/3/3_3_102.gif)

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Ahhh, Thanks, Susie!  :)
Title: Re: Farewell, Jack Twist!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 13, 2007, 09:58:01 pm
WOW! Fascinating story littlewing!  And I'm intrigued as to where it's going ... who DID send that letter? (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_214.gif) Brilliant as always honey!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Susie, you are so sweet!  I haven't worked out the details yet, but I'll probably finish this tale!  Thanks again!  :)
Title: Re: Bad dream
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 13, 2007, 09:59:16 pm
So gutwrenching littlewing, I'm gonna kick his ass too!!  I love the psychic connection they have between them ... Ennis knew everything .. even when they were apart, they were somehow together!
Just lovely littlewing!  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_207.gif)

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

It had to be like this!  I can't see how Ennis couldn't help hating Jack as well as loving him!  Or perhaps Ennis forgave him?  :'(
Title: Re: Admiring the View
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 13, 2007, 10:00:42 pm
This one’s for you Dagi …



Admiring the View by Susie

“Hmmmmmmm….”  Jack heard the sigh from the bedroom as he stood naked, brushing his teeth.

“What’s up bud?” he called through a mouthful of toothpaste.

“Oh nothin’…. just thinkin’”

“Jesus Christ, Ennis Del Mar!  You know that drives me crazy!  Now just tell me what’s on your fuckin’ mind!”

“OK OK, keep yer drawers on!  I was just thinkin' …. was watchin’ you today on the back a that horse ….. admirin’ the view ….. looked mighty fine bouncin’ up and down in the saddle ….. wouldn’t mind being that horse m’self!”

A choked giggle came from the bathroom.  Jack popped his head round the door briefly, broad smile stretched across his face, foam dripping from his mouth, “Well, why didn’t ya just say so?”

He rinsed his mouth, put the toothbrush between his lips like it was a smoke and swaggered, cowboy-style, into the room.   He grabbed his Resistol from the back of the chair, stepped into his boots, and slowly, seductively, sauntered over to the bed. 

“You just lay there and I’ll saddle up” he teased, climbing up onto the bed, facing away from his lover, straddling him and lowering himself, tantalisingly close to Ennis’ flesh. 

“Grease me up cowboy….. ” Ennis reached for the lube, massaging Jack’s firm white buttocks with slippery wet hands, fingers probing his exquisite tight button.  Jack guided himself slowly down onto Ennis’ hard dick.   Ennis, breathed deeply, transfixed by the vision in front of him “Hmmmmmmmmm …. now that’s the view I’m talking about cowboy …..”



Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Thanks for this, Susie!  Your sexy, exciting tale is just what I need to finish off my day!  Very nice, Susie!
Title: Re: Farewell, Jack Twist!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 13, 2007, 10:01:43 pm
Beautiful writing, Marie dearest! I really like the Arguirre you are portraying here. And that line about the " sweet, handsome, good-for-nothin’ Jack" choked me up. I still can´t believe myself that he had to die. :( :( :(

Thank you, honey!

Thank you, Dagi!  I really enjoyed writing this one!
Title: Re: Bad dream
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 13, 2007, 10:03:03 pm
Oh Marie. I understand Ennis so well. To figure Jack being with another man is more than I can bear, too. It is so painful, I can feel Ennis´ pain deep inside of me. Yet at the same time I understand Jack just as well! In the movie, Jack´s most sad, lost, hopeless face....gets me every time.

Powerful stuff. thank you!!

Dagi

Dagi, I think I understand Ennis as well.  I really believe I know this man, even more than Jack Twist.  I'll never tire of writing about them!
Title: Re: Bad dream
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 13, 2007, 10:03:53 pm
That was a good one, Littlewing1957, very realistic, simple and authentic. Keep 'em coming, dirty mama!

Thanks, Toycoon!  You know I got a million stories in me!
Title: Re: Bad dream
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 13, 2007, 10:05:20 pm
Very powerful stuff, littlewing.  The thoughts of Jack being with another man must have hurt like hell.  I don't think Jack ever fully realized this, because Ennis was so awful about expressing himself openly, but in Ennis's mind he had given himself to Jack, even though he wasn't prepared to live with him openly.  He may have gotten married to Alma, and he might have put the blocks to Cassie, but in Ennis's mind he belonged to Jack, and he wanted to believe that Jack belonged to him.

Beautiful, but so very sad story, littlewing.

Gary

It is sad, isn't it?  I don't know how Ennis even got out of bed in the morning.  Hey, Gary!  You've just given me an idea.  I'll post it tonight!  Thanks, Baby!
Title: When He Loved Me
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 13, 2007, 10:25:36 pm
Gary, this one is for you!

Ennis sat facing his daughter, and tried his best to digest her news.  His baby was getting married!  Ennis couldn’t wrap his mind around the fact that Alma Jr. was 19 and about to become a Mrs!  Ennis hung his head.  How did the world keep on turning without him?

“This Kurt fella..he love you?”  Ennis asked his child. 

“Yeah daddy, he loves me!”   It was Alma Jr.  She looked at the man seated before her with an expression of tenderness and great love.  Ennis looked away.  He was glad that his daughter had found happiness.  But what of Ennis Del Mar?  He looked into the past in an instant. 

In the twinkling of an eye he saw images of Jack Twist laughing, running through fields of wildflowers, playing a mouth organ.  Great vivid images of Jack cooking, kissing, loving him!  "Did he love me?"  Ennis asked himself as he fought to turn his thoughts to the present.  Ennis turned to his fridge to pour himself and Alma Jr. a drink.  And in that very instant, just as they raised their glasses in a toast, Ennis thought,

“I think the son of a bitch loved me!”
Title: Re: When He Loved Me
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 14, 2007, 12:01:50 am
Beautiful, littlewing.  As I was reading this I thought of how it's so hard for people to communicate even when they're not repressed.  It's difficult to find the words to express how you feel about someone.  In the end words fail to convey the full measure of your heart.  And because of that insecurities develop and then resentments.  After a time all those hurt feelings gets mixed up with that original blush of attraction so that to love someone, to live with someone long enough to have a history, means you must cope with that part of yourself that also hates the person you're with.  That takes work, and I think that's the reason most relationships fail.  The partners involved want it to always feel like puppy love.

Given how difficult it is to stay together even when it's okay to talk, it's simply amazing that Jack and Ennis were able to hang onto each other for 20 years.  They had great love for each other in spite of everything.

Thanks so much for helping me put that in perspective to some extent with your story.

Gary

Wow, Gary!  Thanks so much!  I agree with everything you just said here, but when you mentioned how amazing it is that Ennis and Jack were able to stay together for so long, especially while being apart, well, that is amazing.  Ah, I must say, Ennis and Jack are my "poster boys" of love.  I don't think I've ever seen a more pure, sincere love in my life.  Casey Cornelius once called them 2 of the greatest lovers in all of literature.  I agree with him!
Title: Re: When He Loved Me
Post by: Dagi on July 14, 2007, 07:02:04 am

“This Kurt fella..he love you?”  Ennis asked his child. 



Thank you, Marie, for describing this scene so beautifully. Wasn´t that one of the first times in Ennis´  life that he ever spoke about love? How difficult must it have been for him. That shows us how important it was to him to ask this question. Shows us that he did indeed make steps towards opening up. I, however, am convinced that at this time he is already fully aware of Jack´s love for him and maybe even of his love for Jack.

I admire your courage to write about an important scene like this one.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 14, 2007, 05:00:29 pm
Anybody wants some fresh raspberries?

(http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb38/dagi_photos/himb.jpg)

....or some fresh slugs...uh, salad?

(http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb38/dagi_photos/slugs.jpg)

sometimes I hate garden work... :P :P :P
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 14, 2007, 05:29:37 pm
I just re-read some of the stories in the archive...I admit I do the archive most of all for myself  :laugh:.

132 stories !!!
Title: Re: When He Loved Me
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 14, 2007, 06:40:10 pm
Thank you, Marie, for describing this scene so beautifully. Wasn´t that one of the first times in Ennis´  life that he ever spoke about love? How difficult must it have been for him. That shows us how important it was to him to ask this question. Shows us that he did indeed make steps towards opening up. I, however, am convinced that at this time he is already fully aware of Jack´s love for him and maybe even of his love for Jack.

I admire your courage to write about an important scene like this one.

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi!  You're right, it took guts to write about this scene.  But something Gary said gave me the courage to do it, which is why I dedicated the story to him.  Strange, I can't remember what he wrote that gave me the idea for this tale.  I'll have to go re-read his post.  Anyway, you're right about Ennis finally being able to talk about love by then.  And he began to understand it, which is a beautiful thing to see!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 14, 2007, 06:41:26 pm
Anybody wants some fresh raspberries?

(http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb38/dagi_photos/himb.jpg)

....or some fresh slugs...uh, salad?

(http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb38/dagi_photos/slugs.jpg)

sometimes I hate garden work... :P :P :P

Wow Dagi, these are amazing pics!  And from your own garden?  Oh, and  I love the new pic of you!  Very sexy and mysterious!  ::)
Title: Parks and Other Amusements
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 14, 2007, 07:29:11 pm
Sorry Toycoon, but this goes Way over the 3 paragraph limit.  I'll be more careful from now on!  :laugh:

The night was rather warm and the road was well lit.  Ennis and Jack were returning to camp after agreeing to dine in town.  They were too tired to cook after a day of hiking, boating, riding and loving.  The meal at “The Fat Lady” was very tasty, and very filling. 

40 feet along the well paved road Ennis saw a silent, eerie looking structure.  Jack drove along in silence, obviously full, and seemingly oblivious to the small complex that Ennis noticed from far away.

“Hey Bud, look at that over there!  What do you make of it?”  Ennis said as he pointed to the small structure that they were just about to pass.

“Oh that?”  Jack answered, never diverting his attention from the road.  “What does it look like, friend? “  Ennis looked closer and noticed an elaborate arched entryway, and in the distance, a rotting ferris wheel, a rollercoaster seemingly frozen in its tracks.

“Oh, I see it now!”  Ennis observed.  “It looks like an abandoned carnival.  I’ve never noticed it before.”

“That’s because it wasn’t there before, bonehead!”  Jack laughed as he slowed the truck. 

“How do you know how long that thing has been there?”  Ennis asked incredulous as he glanced over at Jack.

“Never mind!”  Jack answered with a wave of the hand.  He parked the truck next to the entrance and pulled at his seatbelt.

“C’mon, En, let’s go investigate!”  Jack, excited now.  “I’ve loved these things since I was a kid, but I was never able to go very often.”

Ennis said nothing, but sighed and exited the truck.  The abandoned carnival was obviously left by the owners only recently.  The smell of popcorn and cotton candy, along with the scent of burned grease, obviously used to fry the pronto puffs, still lingered in the air.  Jack moved toward the entrance, but Ennis grabbed his forearm.

“Hold on, Jack!  I don’t think we should just go in.  That would be trespassing!  And what if some people are squatting there?  I don’t want no trouble!”  Jack pulled free of Ennis’ grasp and walked through the rusty arches of the entrance.

“This is the first time I ever walked into a carnival free of charge!”  Jack enthused as he ran ahead.  Ennis shook his head and followed Jack inside.  Something about the place gave him the creeps.  It looked like one of those haunted, run-down amusement parks straight out of “Scooby Doo!”

“Hang on a minute, Bud!”  Ennis shouted as he ran to catch up.  But Jack was running around like a small child set free for the first time.  Jack slowed when he came upon a merry-go-round, a beautiful thing, in fairly good condition. He climbed aboard a fancy red horse and beckoned for Ennis to follow him.  Ennis, against his better instincts, climbed aboard the same horse, his chest facing Jack’s broad back.  Jack began to move as though he were riding a mare.  He ground his hips backward, moved against Ennis’ crotch.  Ennis couldn’t believe it!  He responded by grinding forward, and grabbed Jack’s hips to go along for the ride.  When it became too much, Ennis unzipped his fly and tugged at Jack’s belt.  He wondered what would happen when they entered the tunnel of love…
Title: Re: Parks and Other Amusements
Post by: Toycoon on July 14, 2007, 08:02:26 pm
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Sorry Toycoon, but this goes Way over the 3 paragraph limit.  I'll be more careful from now on!

I love amusement parks, too. My hubby does not! He is a tremedous chicken! Hates roller coasters, spinning rides or any heights. I don't know how I hooked up with this dude. I can't get enough of a big drop or a fast loop!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on July 14, 2007, 08:04:09 pm
Hey kids,
Check out the latest craft on Brokeback Craft Corner. I think Susiebell will especially love this project!
Title: Unfortunate Fortune
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 14, 2007, 08:21:57 pm
Oops, I did it again!  I don't know why I'm writing about carnivals and amusement parks today.   :laugh:

Jack didn’t particularly mind school carnival nights, and when Lureen asked him to escort Bobby, he didn’t hesitate.  Jack fetched his blue parka and Bobby’s purple one, and off they went to the school for a night of fun.  Or so they hoped.

About an hour in, Jack began to feel the cold.  He pulled out a flask of whiskey and downed a few nips while Bobby stood over by the cotton candy machine talking to a few friends.  Jack looked around the carnival for something interesting to do before collecting Bobby to head home.

A fortune teller’s tent stood tall and lonely among the other fancy carnival booths.  Jack decided to go in, even though the tent looked mostly abandoned.  He produced a series of tickets bought at the ticket booth and pulled off 3.  He slid into the tent and found himself seated in front of a shockingly beautiful woman.  Jack studied the woman, and wondered, "whose mom are you?"  He never noticed her at any of the parent meetings.  She was not dressed as one would expect, but wore a pair of blue jeans and a tee shirt.  Jack shrugged and handed the woman the 3 tickets.

“Thank you, sir!” The young woman began as she accepted and placed the tickets into a large empty jar.  “What would you like to know?"

“Well..”  Jack began.  “I don’t have any specific questions.  I just want to know what the near future holds for me.”  The young woman tilted her head backwards and closed her eyes.  She remained that way for awhile as she grabbed hold of Jack’s hands.

“I see a very happy future for you.  Very pleasant days ahead.  You will be reunited with someone from your past, and will enjoy a happy life with that person.  Your life will be one of great joy.”  The lady then dropped Jack’s hand and looked him straight in the eyes. 

“If you want another reading, I’ll need 3 more tickets!”  Jack thought about handing her 3 tickets, but decided he had heard enough.  He never believed in this crap anyway, just needed something to pass the time.

“No thanks, ma’am!”  Jack started as he rose from the ground.  “You told me all I need to know and I thank you.”  The young woman nodded and sat very still as she watched Jack exit the tent.  He pondered the fortune teller’s words as he searched for Bobby, even though he wasn’t a believer.  He found Bobby over with a few friends buying popcorn.  Jack thought about the postcard Ennis sent telling him about the divorce being final.  He hated to admit it, but the fortune teller’s prediction gave him the courage he needed to drive down to Riverton and claim his happiness.  Jack took Bobby’s hand and headed for the car.
Title: Re: Parks and Other Amusements
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 14, 2007, 08:27:51 pm
I love amusement parks, too. My hubby does not! He is a tremedous chicken! Hates roller coasters, spinning rides or any heights. I don't know how I hooked up with this dude. I can't get enough of a big drop or a fast loop!

Thanks, Toycoon!  I know what you mean about amusement parks.  I'm with your husband, though!  I can't stomach the roller costers, or those spinning rides.  But the spook house?  Now that is a different matter, entirely.  I just love the spooky rides at Santa Cruz Beach/Boardwalk!  At Disneyland you can find me in The Haunted Mansion!  I'm an amusement park fiend!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 14, 2007, 08:29:34 pm
Hey kids,
Check out the latest craft on Brokeback Craft Corner. I think Susiebell will especially love this project!

Thanks, Toycoon!  I'll check it out!
Title: Re: Unfortunate Fortune
Post by: Toycoon on July 14, 2007, 08:44:59 pm
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“If you want another reading, I’ll need 3 more tickets!”  Jack thought about handing her 3 tickets, but decided he had heard enough.  He never believed in this crap anyway, just needed something to pass the time.

I knew Jack hadn't thought that post divorce trip through nearly enough. Poor Jack, he's such a dreamer.

Disneyland is one of my all time favorite things in the whole world. I love the Haunted Mansion, too. I love all of the dark rides at Disneyland. Peter Pan and Mr Toad's Wild Ride are fantastic!
Title: Re: Parks and Other Amusements
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 14, 2007, 10:50:42 pm
Littlewing, this is very sexy, romantic, and just a little sad.  That's because Jack and Ennis can only go to the park as a couple when no one else is around.

This one sort of reminds me of Pete's Saloon, the story I wrote about the boys spending the evening dancing in a roadside bar when they had the place to themselves.

Ennis thought the place was a bit creepy, and I'd have to say that I'd agree.  All while I was reading this I kept thinking of a truly eerie film from the 60's by the name of Carnival of Souls.  Following an accident, a young woman moves to a new town.  She passes by a spooky old abandoned amusement park on the way, and from that point on she is haunted.  Turns out that she actually died in the accident and the carnival of souls is catching up to her.  Check it out sometime.

Gary



Thanks, Gary!  Carnival of Souls is one of my favorites!  It is beyond creepy, which is what I like in a film.  Have you seen "Torture Garden?" Pete's Saloon was also at the back of my mind when I wrote this.  I almost took a different direction with this tale, but this is where I ended up.  Gary, we seem to have the same taste in movies!
Title: Re: Unfortunate Fortune
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 14, 2007, 10:54:22 pm
I knew Jack hadn't thought that post divorce trip through nearly enough. Poor Jack, he's such a dreamer.

Disneyland is one of my all time favorite things in the whole world. I love the Haunted Mansion, too. I love all of the dark rides at Disneyland. Peter Pan and Mr Toad's Wild Ride are fantastic!

Same here, Toycoon!  Maria and I are planning a trip there..well, we try to go at least once a year.  People are always asking me why I go down there, but I can't image why anyone wouldn't want to go to Disneyland!  I wish I was there right now.  Even the most hardened Angelino gets all soft and mushy when they hear the words, "Yo ho, yo ho a pirate's life for me..."
Title: Re: Unfortunate Fortune
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 14, 2007, 10:55:37 pm
Hmmm  Littlewing, I'm thinking Jack should have given the lady another three tickets.  This reminds me of the adage a little knowledge is dangerous.  (And who was that lady, BTW?  I was thinking that it was you.   ;D )

Thanks so much for these two very entertaining tales.  I loved them both.

Gary

Yeah, she kind of led him astray, didn't she?  Thanks for your kind words, Babe!
Title: Re: Parks and Other Amusements
Post by: Dagi on July 15, 2007, 01:02:15 am
............ He climbed aboard a fancy red horse and beckoned for Ennis to follow him.  Ennis, against his better instincts, climbed aboard the same horse, his chest facing Jack’s broad back.  Jack began to move as though he were riding a mare.  He ground his hips backward, moved against Ennis’ crotch.  Ennis couldn’t believe it!  He responded by grinding forward, and grabbed Jack’s hips to go along for the ride.  When it became too much, Ennis unzipped his fly and tugged at Jack’s belt.  He wondered what would happen when they entered the tunnel of love…


Wow, Marie, this one took me by surprise! What a nice picture to start the morning ! And in even your wildest fantasies our boys are always just like our boys ;D, But I thought the same thing as Gary, they wouldn´t have entered the park as a couple if someone had been around. On the other hand that turned out to not be the badest thing.. ;)

Dagi

PS thanks for the compliment! Yes the raspberries are from my garden. The slugs are self-grown, too. Maybee not so bad with some garlic? :P

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 15, 2007, 01:05:53 am
Hi there Dagi sweetheart,

Just wanted to say that's a sexy new picture you got there.  Gosh, I'll bet the boys are just all over you.  Better keep a stick handy.

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_9_133.gif)

Gary

 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: Thank you, Gary! But I´m a married woman with two kids, no need for a stick  :(.




Title: Re: Unfortunate Fortune
Post by: Dagi on July 15, 2007, 01:14:27 am
Oops, I did it again!  I don't know why I'm writing about carnivals and amusement parks today.   :laugh:


.............“No thanks, ma’am!”  Jack started as he rose from the ground.  “You told me all I need to know and I thank you.”  The young woman nodded and sat very still as she watched Jack exit the tent.  He pondered the fortune teller’s words as he searched for Bobby, even though he wasn’t a believer.  He found Bobby over with a few friends buying popcorn.  Jack thought about the postcard Ennis sent telling him about the divorce being final.  He hated to admit it, but the fortune teller’s prediction gave him the courage he needed to drive down to Riverton and claim his happiness.  Jack took Bobby’s hand and headed for the car.


Hey Marie, nice to see you!

This story is beautiful, but so sad! It makes the post-divorce scene even sader  :'(. And you are a mysterious woman! Who was that woman?

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 15, 2007, 07:07:32 am
Hey Dagi honey,  I love the read-only thread too, helps me to check if I've missed any of them. 

Sexy new photo girly!!!!  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/1/1_4_98.gif)


I've got to get me a sexy one, (http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s31/Susiebell_album/Stars/czj6.jpg)  .... I'm fed up of looking like a "Proper English Lady". (http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s31/Susiebell_album/Stars/070102-2.jpg)

BTW Lovely picture of the raspberries...... but the lettuce .... euuuw!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Susie, we all know that you are sexy  ;) ! But thanks for the compliment! As I said to Robyn, thank God I can control which pics you all get to see  :laugh:.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 15, 2007, 01:41:09 pm
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P.S.  It's July 15, 2007, and ten years ago today they very nearly cut my head off.  And look!  I'm still here!

Oh my God, Gary, what a day! Are you having a party? What would we all do without you ? You are very special, and

we love you!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 15, 2007, 02:50:15 pm
Hey Susie dear, love your new avatar! But whom did you cut off I wonder??

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on July 15, 2007, 03:06:50 pm
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P.S.  It's July 15, 2007, and ten years ago today they very nearly cut my head off.  And look!  I'm still here!

Gary, gee, what an anniversary! What are you gonna do today to celebrate? Have a tasty meal of 'head cheese' or 'fried brains", perhaps? Maybe you should get some 'head'! I'd go for the last option, myself.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 15, 2007, 04:33:18 pm
Hello Littlewing, Gary, Susie, Spicey, Dagi, Toycoon, Clyde, and everyone!!! Hope you are having a great weekend!!!

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P.S.  It's July 15, 2007, and ten years ago today they very nearly cut my head off.  And look!  I'm still here!

Gary--I'm sure it was a rough go for awhile, but -- YAY -- you have reached a milestone!! You ARE still here---may you be here for a great long time!! We love you!

Susie--That is a wonderful roller coaster picture!! Rolller coasters are sooooo much fun. Remind me to tell you my Elvis story.

Dagi--Thank you, thank you, thank you -- for archiving these stories. Makes it much easier for us ADD types. That board looks great too.


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Gary, gee, what an anniversary! What are you gonna do today to celebrate? Have a tasty meal of 'head cheese' or 'fried brains", perhaps? Maybe you should get some 'head'! I'd go for the last option, myself.

Toycoon--Do you know how to party or what?

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Happy hugs to all ya'll!!

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Title: Re: Parks and Other Amusements
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 15, 2007, 09:00:04 pm
Wow, Marie, this one took me by surprise! What a nice picture to start the morning ! And in even your wildest fantasies our boys are always just like our boys ;D, But I thought the same thing as Gary, they wouldn´t have entered the park as a couple if someone had been around. On the other hand that turned out to not be the badest thing.. ;)

Dagi

PS thanks for the compliment! Yes the raspberries are from my garden. The slugs are self-grown, too. Maybee not so bad with some garlic? :P



 :laugh: :laugh:  Thanks, Dagi!  Your kind words mean a lot to me, as always!
Title: Re: Admiring the View
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 15, 2007, 09:00:56 pm
Why thank you sweetie!

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You're very welcome!
Title: Re: When He Loved Me
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 15, 2007, 09:02:07 pm
Beautiful, sad moment littlewing ... I imagine this is exactly what's going through Ennis' mind at this moment.  This line just chokes me up ...    How did the world keep on turning without him?

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Yeah, our poor Ennis must have felt left out of the loop.  Poor baby!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 15, 2007, 09:03:43 pm
Hello Littlewing, Gary, Susie, Spicey, Dagi, Toycoon, Clyde, and everyone!!! Hope you are having a great weekend!!!

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Gary--I'm sure it was a rough go for awhile, but -- YAY -- you have reached a milestone!! You ARE still here---may you be here for a great long time!! We love you!

Susie--That is a wonderful roller coaster picture!! Rolller coasters are sooooo much fun. Remind me to tell you my Elvis story.

Dagi--Thank you, thank you, thank you -- for archiving these stories. Makes it much easier for us ADD types. That board looks great too.


Toycoon--Do you know how to party or what?

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Happy hugs to all ya'll!!

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Thanks so much Shasta!  You're such a sweetie!  :-*
Title: Re: Parks and Other Amusements
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 15, 2007, 09:05:30 pm
ME too toycoon!  My hubby hates heights or anything that spins ... I'm pushing to get to the front of the queue!  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/7/7_2_111.gif)

Me and my nephew, on the front row of the Shockwave ... Englands first "Stand Up" rollercoaster ride:

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Susie, what a great Pic!  You look so very lovely here!  I just love to see people enjoying themselves!  :)
Title: Re: Unfortunate Fortune
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 15, 2007, 09:06:13 pm
This would be just like Jack ... going where his heart takes him.... great little tale littlewing!

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Thanks, Susie!  :-*
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 15, 2007, 09:07:32 pm
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P.S.  It's July 15, 2007, and ten years ago today they very nearly cut my head off.  And look!  I'm still here!

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God, I'm so glad you're still here!  You are dear to me!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 15, 2007, 09:09:11 pm
 
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Well that's certainly worth sending up a prayer of thanks for!  You're very special to me Gary dear, don't know what I'd do without you! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_6_102.gif)


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I know exactly what you mean, Susiebaby!  I feel the same way!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 15, 2007, 09:10:52 pm
Gary, gee, what an anniversary! What are you gonna do today to celebrate? Have a tasty meal of 'head cheese' or 'fried brains", perhaps? Maybe you should get some 'head'! I'd go for the last option, myself.

Toycoon, you are so bad!   ::)  But I'm hoping Gary gets lucky...oh let me be quiet!!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on July 15, 2007, 09:34:45 pm
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Toycoon, I like that last option, too.  Maybe you could send Jake over later.

Listen garycottle, if I had Jake over here, you can be sure I wouldn't be on the damn computer!

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But since they let me keep my head ten years ago, perhaps I should be the one giving back so to speak.  Gary

Personally, I think it's just as much fun to give as it is to receive, know what I'm sayin'? Ummm!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 15, 2007, 09:35:16 pm
Thank you Shasta dear.  I hope we're all around many decades to come.  Wouldn't it be really cool if we went on a trip to Wyoming together when we were in our 70's and 80's?

Gary

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What are those little motorized chairs called that those ladies ride up the mountain?? (Hoveround, or sumpin' like that.) I'd need that. LOL  We could make the Twist house into an "Old Brokies' Home" and retire there -- sing around the campfire and keep each other company. Be a sweet life.  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on July 15, 2007, 09:38:02 pm
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And just so you know, I like them young, well endowed, and gorgeous.

Heck, who doesn't? By the way, you forgot, rich.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 15, 2007, 09:45:12 pm
I think Toycoon is feeling his Cheerios tonite!!

   FRISKY   FRISKY   FRISKY   FRISKY   FRISKY      
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 15, 2007, 09:53:31 pm
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We miss you, CALI SIS!!! You get back ASAP. Sending love!!!    :)
Title: Sing to Him
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 15, 2007, 10:09:30 pm
“Your mom ever sing to you?”  Jack asked Ennis as he lay enclosed in his arms.  Jack couldn’t explain why, but he had been feeling very tired and rather blue.  He flung an arm around Ennis’ neck and pulled him in for a kiss.

“Well, yeah, I can remember a few songs, Jack.”  Ennis answered as he returned Jack’s kiss.  “Why do you ask, Bud?”  Ennis was becoming concerned.  He placed a hand on Jack’s forehead and rubbed.  He sensed Jack’s mood, and was determined to provide comfort. 

“Can you remember any of them, Cowboy?”  Jack asked, as he removed Ennis’ hand from his forehead and squeezed it.  “I sure can use a song right now.  I love the sound of your voice, Friend!  Sing to me.”  Ennis looked at Jack and suppressed a chuckle.  He wrapped Jack into his arms and held him like he would a small child.

“Well, if I’m gonna do this, I may as well do it right.  Any requests, Rodeo?  What do you wanna hear?”  Jack felt his mood lift as he snuggled into his lover’s arms.

“Oh, just anything.  Sing to me, Ennis... please?”  Ennis smiled down at his lover and cleared his throat.

“Okay, I’ll try.  This tune is one my mom used to sing to me when I was afraid to sleep.”  Ennis sang,

“Go ye therefore and teach all nations
Go, go, go!
Go ye therefore and teach all nations
Go, go, go!

If you love me, really love me
Feed my, my sheep!
If you love me, really love me
Feed my sheep

Lo I’ll be with you
Forever and ever
Until the end of the world!
Go, go, go!”

Ennis stopped at this point and looked down at Jack.  He was wide awake, but a lone tear was falling down his cheek.  Ennis reached down and wiped the tear with his tongue. 

“Everything will be okay, Bud!  You’ll see.  Just hold onto me… I’m here.”  Ennis pulled Jack closer and ran his long fingers through Jack’s thick hair.  Jack nodded and closed his eyes, grateful that whatever was bothering him was now just a distant memory. 
Title: Re: Sing to Him
Post by: Toycoon on July 15, 2007, 10:24:14 pm
What a great little story! Littlewing1957, you are the mistress of the Jack with Ennis fanfic!

Come back soon, Merr. We miss you, missy!
Title: Jack's Belt Buckle
Post by: Toycoon on July 15, 2007, 10:35:17 pm
Jack tipped the rodeo buckle on his belt back and forth catching the firelight then proudly flicked the shiny edge displaying it's fine merit; Ennis was charmed by the cowboy's prowess but tried not to show it.

Ennis noticed the impression of the Twist family jewels on the crotch of Jack's dungarees and turned away before Jack caught the observation.

The following night, alone in the herder's tent, Ennis recalled the exquisite vision of Jack's tight fitting denim; Ennis slowly unfastened the fly of his jeans, slipped his right hand in to free his turgid organ and though he had touched himself many times before, he had never before imagined the body of another man to bring about sexual pleasure.
Title: Re: Jack's Belt Buckle
Post by: Toycoon on July 16, 2007, 12:33:11 am
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Very erotic little tale, Toycoon.  And don't you think that Jack was trying to draw attention to his crotch when he flicked his belt buckle?
Jack is quite the prick tease, that's fer sure. At least he puts out!

I think repressed folk think about the same stuff the rest of us do; they just feel guiltier about it sooner.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 16, 2007, 02:51:35 am
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Dagi--Thank you, thank you, thank you -- for archiving these stories. Makes it much easier for us ADD types. That board looks great too.

You are very welcome, Shasta! I´m glad to know anybody apart from me reads it!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 16, 2007, 02:57:56 am

Personally, I think it's just as much fun to give as it is to receive, know what I'm sayin'? Ummm!


Come on, Toycoon, everybody here knows what you are saying  :laugh: ! But our innocent little Gary surely can´t figure...

Btw, una pregunta entre hispanohablantes: en inglés no se usa la expression  leche ? I never heard it - and I think I know quite a few expressions...

Dagi
Title: Re: Sing to Him
Post by: Dagi on July 16, 2007, 03:04:59 am


Lo I’ll be with you
Forever and ever
Until the end of the world!
Go, go, go!”

Ennis stopped at this point and looked down at Jack.  He was wide awake, but a lone tear was falling down his cheek.  Ennis reached down and wiped the tear with his tongue. 

“Everything will be okay, Bud!  You’ll see.  Just hold onto me… I’m here.”  Ennis pulled Jack closer and ran his long fingers through Jack’s thick hair.  Jack nodded and closed his eyes, grateful that whatever was bothering him was now just a distant memory. 


Marie, what a beautiful, beautiful moment! So tender, I was moved to tears.....Everything will be okay, Bud! ...oh, if only..... :'(

Thank you so much for all those wonderful stories! Could you do me the favor to write the title and your name on top of your stories? That would help me a lot when I´m archiving them. Thank you!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 16, 2007, 03:07:19 am

... I like them young, well endowed, and gorgeous.   Dagi can attest to this.  :P

Gary 

Really can´t imagine what you mean by that  ::).

Dagi

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 16, 2007, 03:08:57 am
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We miss you, CALI SIS!!! You get back ASAP. Sending love!!!    :)



ditto!
Title: Re: Jack's Belt Buckle
Post by: Dagi on July 16, 2007, 03:15:32 am
Jack tipped the rodeo buckle on his belt back and forth catching the firelight then proudly flicked the shiny edge displaying it's fine merit; Ennis was charmed by the cowboy's prowess but tried not to show it.

Ennis noticed the impression of the Twist family jewels on the crotch of Jack's dungarees and turned away before Jack caught the observation.

The following night, alone in the herder's tent, Ennis recalled the exquisite vision of Jack's tight fitting denim; Ennis slowly unfastened the fly of his jeans, slipped his right hand in to free his turgid organ and though he had touched himself many times before, he had never before imagined the body of another man to bring about sexual pleasure.

I could say again that you are the master of the 3 sentences fanfics, but since you´ve been the only one for quite some time who writes them , it wouldn´t do you justice  ;D. And anyway, this is not a contest, ....huh? Or am I wrong? Btw, great little moment you captured here.

I like the expression family jewels, we use the same term in German!

And the semi colons are very useful, aren´t they?  :laugh:

Dagi
Title: Re: Parks and Other Amusements
Post by: Toycoon on July 16, 2007, 10:15:09 am
Susiebell, that photo of you on the rollercoaster is cool! Who took that picture? Was it the automatic camera on the ride itself? Fantastic!
Title: Re: Jack's Belt Buckle
Post by: Toycoon on July 16, 2007, 10:19:18 am
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I like the expression family jewels, we use the same term in German!
And the semi colons are very useful, aren´t they?  :laugh: Dagi

Thank you, baby! I never thought it was a contest anyway. Too late for that!
How do you say "family jewels" in German, my little Alpine Miss?
Yes, semi colons are a three sentence fanfic writer's best friends. We love 'em!
Title: Re: Sing to Him
Post by: Toycoon on July 16, 2007, 10:24:33 am
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Oy Buster!  So what am I?... Chopped liver??

You are the demon's seed, of course! You'll always be my one and only devil doll.

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You better be nice to the other girls around here or we ain't playin no more!!

Sheesh! Fanfic writers can be soooo tempermental.
Title: Re: Jack's Belt Buckle
Post by: Dagi on July 16, 2007, 11:59:57 am

How do you say "family jewels" in German, my little Alpine Miss?


We say Familienjuwelen or Kronjuwelen, my big Cali Mister! Btw, I´m not little ;D, I´m  5 feet 25 - was that right? (175 cm).

And Alpine Lady sounds suspiciously similar to "Propper English Lady"  :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:.

I want my Jack with Ennis Name, too!

Dagi
Title: Re: Sing to Him
Post by: Toycoon on July 16, 2007, 01:37:08 pm
yeah, Susie, you tell him !!!....I was wrong, girl, seems this is a contest...or an eleccion? If I had known about that earlier I would never have dared to
post a single line...

What is with you, women? What did I do now?  ???
I just comment on the stories as I read them. If I missed a couple, it doesn't mean I'm ignoring you. It means I'm slow!
Quit jumping to conclusions.That only makes you feel bad and for no reason. :(
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 16, 2007, 02:16:23 pm
I'll tell ya'll what the basketball coach tells our players:

"Put on your big girl panties and get over it."
 

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(I know ya'll are just playing---but I love that saying, so  had to use it. I even have a plaque of it hanging on the wall!!  It's a handy philosophy to have sometimes, too!)

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Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 16, 2007, 03:15:12 pm
I'm really hoping you'll tell me that coach is speaking to the boys' team.

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And you're right, these are words to live by.

Yesterday I watched the film Kinky Boots about these people working in a shoe factory in North Hampton.  The business is about to go under because no one wants their old, stodgy wingtips anymore no matter how well made.  So they adapt to modern times by filling a niche market.  They start producing footwear for drag queens.  In other words they make the most outrageous women's boots and shoes you can imagine, but in men's sizes, and built to hold a man's weight.  I'd say that's putting on your big girl panties and getting over it.   ;D

Gary

Sounds like a cute movie, Gary. I see that it was inspired by actual events. Susie--have you ever seen any of their products in your part of the world?

LOL---Well, I would not put it past the boys' coach to say it to the boys, but it was actually the girls' coach that I heard.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 16, 2007, 04:36:32 pm
I'll tell ya'll what the basketball coach tells our players:

"Put on your big girl panties and get over it."
 



I love women supporting women. Thanks a lot, Shasta. Yes, I´m being a little sarcastic.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 16, 2007, 06:01:07 pm
I love women supporting women. Thanks a lot, Shasta. Yes, I´m being a little sarcastic.

Dagi

   :) Just me trying to be silly--not unsupportive. I apologize for the misunderstanding, and I will stay out of it from now on. Promise. Still Brokie Pals?

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More stories please.  ;D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 16, 2007, 07:23:46 pm
;D :laugh: Just thinking about Gary dancing to "We Are Family" in his panties and kinky boots!!

Toooo cute!! You're a wild man, Gary!!    


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Oh, Front-Ranger........ I think we have the entertainment for the next Brokeback BBQ!!!
Title: Re: Sing to Him
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 16, 2007, 10:16:23 pm
What a great little story! Littlewing1957, you are the mistress of the Jack with Ennis fanfic!

Come back soon, Merr. We miss you, missy!

Thanks, Toycoon!  I miss Merr as well!  I can't wait until she returns!  :)
Title: Re: Sing to Him
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 16, 2007, 10:17:31 pm
What a beautifully tender moment, littlewing.  So sweet and gentle.  And what a comforting song.  I don't think I've ever heard it before.

Gary

You're so sweet, Gary.  This song is very popular among the Pentecostals, but I can't remember the name of it.  It has always been one of my favorites!
Title: Re: Sing to Him
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 16, 2007, 10:18:53 pm
Marie, what a beautiful, beautiful moment! So tender, I was moved to tears.....Everything will be okay, Bud! ...oh, if only..... :'(

Thank you so much for all those wonderful stories! Could you do me the favor to write the title and your name on top of your stories? That would help me a lot when I´m archiving them. Thank you!

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi!  Yes, I can write my name on the top of my stories.  I'll remember.  :)
Title: Re: Sing to Him
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 16, 2007, 10:20:17 pm
Ah, gentle, sweet little tale littlewing... (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_205.gif)

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Thanks, SusieBaby!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 16, 2007, 10:23:29 pm
I'm really hoping you'll tell me that coach is speaking to the boys' team.

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And you're right, these are words to live by.

Yesterday I watched the film Kinky Boots about these people working in a shoe factory in North Hampton.  The business is about to go under because no one wants their old, stodgy wingtips anymore no matter how well made.  So they adapt to modern times by filling a niche market.  They start producing footwear for drag queens.  In other words they make the most outrageous women's boots and shoes you can imagine, but in men's sizes, and built to hold a man's weight.  I'd say that's putting on your big girl panties and getting over it.   ;D

Gary

 

Gary, I love "Kinky Boots!"
Title: The Heady Scent of Ennis Del Mar
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 16, 2007, 11:55:58 pm
By Littlewing1957

Dagi, SusieBaby, I'm dedicating this tale to you!

Ennis was undressing Jack.  He took his time unbuttoning Jack’s beige shirt, all the while, gazing into those blue, blue eyes of his.  When Ennis peeled away Jack’s shirt to his jeans, he noticed a most intoxicating aroma!

“Umm, Bud you smell so good!”  Ennis remarked as he sniffed at Jack’s collarbone.  “I really like that aftershave.  Did you get all scented up just for me?”  Jack laughed and pulled Ennis’ head closer to his chest.

“You like it, Cowboy?”  Jack asked.  “I’m kind of fond of it myself.  I don’t know the name of the cologne - just that Lureen bought it for me as a father’s day present.”  Ennis smiled and continued to undress his lover.  They moved to the bed and took their places.

“Your cologne is driving me nuts, Rodeo!”  Ennis spoke huskily, as he moved closer to his love.  Jack chuckled and moved away, and off the bed.

“Well, how about I put some on you, friend?  Would you like that?”  Ennis smiled shyly, but didn’t speak.  Jack laughed out loud and pulled an elaborate cologne flask out of his travel duffle.

“Hmm it says here, this scent is manufactured by Avon.  It's called “Wild Country.”  Jack remarked.

“Well, that sounds fitting!”  Ennis laughed. 

Jack joined Ennis on the bed and commenced placing gentle rubs of cologne on Ennis’ collarbone, his wrists, and his jaw line.  Jack kissed the trail of good smelling stuff all the way down to Ennis’ groin.  Jack cupped his lover’s scrotum and cock in both hands, holding them up like a talisman. 

“I would put some scent here, Friend, don’t I don’t think I will.  I don’t want to change how you smell down there.”  Jack’s heart beat much faster.  Ennis tried to control his lust.

“I love the strong, manly smell of your cock, Ennis!”  Jack breathed as he took Ennis into his mouth.

After their idyllic trip was over and Ennis was back to his routine, he visited the post office one afternoon to collect his mail.  He was puzzled to see a small package waiting for him, with the return address of Childress, Texas.  Ennis snatched the package open, and saw a perfectly new and unopened bottle of “Wild Country.”  With it was a card that read,

“Wear this and remember me.”

Ennis smiled and remembered.  He took his present and his mail and walked home.
Title: Re: The Heady Scent of Ennis Del Mar
Post by: Dagi on July 17, 2007, 01:15:44 am
By Littlewing1957

Dagi, SusieBaby, I'm dedicating this tale to you!

Ennis was undressing Jack.  He took his time unbuttoning Jack’s beige shirt, all the while, gazing into those blue, blue eyes of his.  When Ennis peeled away Jack’s shirt to his jeans, he noticed a most intoxicating aroma!

“Umm, Bud you smell so good!”  Ennis remarked as he sniffed at Jack’s collarbone.  “I really like that aftershave.  Did you get all scented up just for me?”  Jack laughed and pulled Ennis’ head closer to his chest.

“You like it, Cowboy?”  Jack asked.  “I’m kind of fond of it myself.  I don’t know the name of the cologne - just that Lureen bought it for me as a father’s day present.”  Ennis smiled and continued to undress his lover.  They moved to the bed and took their places.

“Your cologne is driving me nuts, Rodeo!”  Ennis spoke huskily, as he moved closer to his love.  Jack chuckled and moved away, and off the bed.

“Well, how about I put some on you, friend?  Would you like that?”  Ennis smiled shyly, but didn’t speak.  Jack laughed out loud and pulled an elaborate cologne flask out of his travel duffle.

“Hmm it says here, this scent is manufactured by Avon.  It's called “Wild Country.”  Jack remarked.

“Well, that sounds fitting!”  Ennis laughed. 

Jack joined Ennis on the bed and commenced placing gentle rubs of cologne on Ennis’ collarbone, his wrists, and his jaw line.  Jack kissed the trail of good smelling stuff all the way down to Ennis’ groin.  Jack cupped his lover’s scrotum and cock in both hands, holding them up like a talisman. 

“I would put some scent here, Friend, don’t I don’t think I will.  I don’t want to change how you smell down there.”  Jack’s heart beat much faster.  Ennis tried to control his lust.

“I love the strong, manly smell of your cock, Ennis!”  Jack breathed as he took Ennis into his mouth.

After their idyllic trip was over and Ennis was back to his routine, he visited the post office one afternoon to collect his mail.  He was puzzled to see a small package waiting for him, with the return address of Childress, Texas.  Ennis snatched the package open, and saw a perfectly new and unopened bottle of “Wild Country.”  With it was a card that read,

“Wear this and remember me.”

Ennis smiled and remembered.  He took his present and his mail and walked home.


Aaahhh Marie, I love it. MMMMM very erotic! I love good smelling men, sometimes it´s hard for me not to sniff at good smelling strangers in the street  :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:. And the natural scents  ;D, mmmm even better! Sweet story!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 17, 2007, 01:19:59 am
   :) Just me trying to be silly--not unsupportive. I apologize for the misunderstanding, and I will stay out of it from now on. Promise. Still Brokie Pals?


BrokiePals are always BrokiePals, of course!

{{{{{{{{{Jack with Ennis Family}}}}}}}}}
Title: Re: The Heady Scent of Ennis Del Mar
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 17, 2007, 02:23:56 am
Hi there littlewing.  This is so erotic and sensual.  It's very arousing to think of the boys putting the same sent on each other.  But I'm so very glad that they didn't put any down below.  Not only do I like the natural smell of that area, but that probably would have burned like hell.   :(

Thanks for the sexy tale. 

Gary

Gary, your sense of humor is fine tuned to razor sharpness!  Whenever I need a laugh, or am feeling low, I just have to think of something you wrote here!  Gary, you think putting cologne down there would have burned?  I used to do this and..oh never mind!  :laugh:  I think you're right - natural smells are the best!
Title: Re: The Heady Scent of Ennis Del Mar
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 17, 2007, 02:24:57 am
Aaahhh Marie, I love it. MMMMM very erotic! I love good smelling men, sometimes it´s hard for me not to sniff at good smelling strangers in the street  :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:. And the natural scents  ;D, mmmm even better! Sweet story!

Dagi


Thanks, Dagi! 
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 17, 2007, 02:25:46 am
BrokiePals are always BrokiePals, of course!

{{{{{{{{{Jack with Ennis Family}}}}}}}}}

BrokiePals forever, Dagi!  :-*
Title: Re: Sing to Him
Post by: Dagi on July 17, 2007, 03:25:27 am
Thanks, Dagi!  Yes, I can write my name on the top of my stories.  I'll remember.  :)

And the title, please! (you´ve never been on the Read Only thread?  >:( >:( >:()
thank you, honey!

DAgi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 17, 2007, 03:31:25 am
just for this occasion I've pulled on my big girl panties, and my kinky boots

Photo, please! On the Hot Buttered Buns Thread maybe? I´ll look out for it  :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

Dagi

And make sure you big girl´s panties are WET !!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 17, 2007, 02:02:59 pm
(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/1/1_4_129.gif)

Pictures of me wearing wet panties and go-go boots posted on a public website?  Hmmm  Dagi sweetheart, don't hold your breath on that one.   :P

Pictures of me with a go-go boy giving me a lap dance?  Maybe.  If you pay for the go-go boy.   ;D

Gary

Hm, we could probably make a deal. PM me if interested! ;D

Dagi
Title: Re: Sing to Him
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 17, 2007, 10:15:23 pm
And the title, please! (you´ve never been on the Read Only thread?  >:( >:( >:()
thank you, honey!

DAgi

Oops, sorry, I forgot.  It won't happen again!  :laugh:
Title: Re: The Heady Scent of Ennis Del Mar
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 17, 2007, 10:16:40 pm
Lovely sexy story littlewing!  I love a clean shaven, nicely scented man. When my hubby's wearing Farenheit..... well lets not go there!!  ;)

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:  I know what you mean.  I have a lover who wears Chanel for Men!  We won't go there, either!
Title: Re: The Heady Scent of Ennis Del Mar
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 17, 2007, 10:19:34 pm
Thank you for the complement.   ;D  As for lathering up your privates with cologne, it's just something I wouldn't try, even if I was getting pretty rank down there and I was going to meet the Queen later.   (That broad needs to know what a real man smells like anyway.   :P )  It's a very sensitive area.  There's all those extra nerve endings.  And cologne has an alcohol base.  And OMG!  What if you just shaved?   :o

Gary   

I'm sure you're right, Love!  But I had in mind a few drops here and there.  That wouldn't be so bad, right?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 17, 2007, 10:21:57 pm
Aww Now that really is sweet.  I have a friend who is past his prime just like I am, but he doesn't let that stop him for going after the most beautiful young men.  He describes himself as a cuddly koala bear.  And it works!

I'll have to try that.   :D

Gary

Past your prime?  Oh, I don't believe that.  Gary, you're still a young man.  I don't know why the guys aren't fighting over you.  Or are they?  They will be- of this I'm sure!  :)
Title: Re: Admiration
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 17, 2007, 10:23:18 pm
Don't worry about O/T.  Fun is good.  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/1/1_4_125v.gif)

Merrily

My God, Merr, what the hell is that little man doing?  Is it what I'm thinking?
Title: Re: Son Of A Bitch
Post by: Toycoon on July 17, 2007, 10:54:30 pm
Dagi,
I think your story really captures a unexplainable emotion. I'm glad Merr commented on it because I can't find the original post. I've had experiences exactly like that where I wanted to please the person as well as hurt them. It's a strange emotion. I'm sure Jack felt this often with Ennis. He can be rather frustrating as well as thrilling. Brilliant!
Title: Re: Son Of A Bitch
Post by: Toycoon on July 17, 2007, 11:14:27 pm
Toycoon, to show you how fast these pages fill up, the original story is on about page 32.  I am catching up on the week I was offline.  Some really wonderful stories too.  How was your vacation?  You went to Florida, right?  Probably hot and rainy then, hunh?

Merrily

Welcome back, Merrily. Florida was beautiful; hot and sunny, just the way I like it. I ate (my mom's) Cuban food and I went to the beach every day. It only rained a little on one or two days but, of course, it's always like that in Miami. It takes a couple of days to get used to the weather but I was definitely sad on the last day.
I'm glad to be home and back on BetterMost!
Title: The Heady Scent of Ennis Del Mar (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 17, 2007, 11:20:30 pm
The Heady Scent of Ennis Del Mar (2) By Littlewing1957

6 months later, almost to the day of their last encounter, Jack and Ennis were warm and cozy inside of a newly erected tent.  Jack was rummaging around in his travel duffle, while Ennis watched him intently.  Jack pulled out a curious looking vial from his bag and passed it to his lover.

“Hey, Friend, I see you’re wearin’ the cologne I sent you.  It works well with your natural body scent.”  Jack nodded toward the vial he handed Ennis.

“And now that I know you like smellum good, as Bobby calls it, I brought this scented oil for us to try.”  Ennis looked at the vial and read the words, “Ravenswood” that were written in fancy script right across the front of the small flask.  Ennis laughed as he threw the vial to Jack.

“Where did you get this oil, Jack?”  Ennis asked, very amused.

“At the Childress weekend flea market.  We have this flea market at the bus station on the weekends, and vendors sell all sorts of things.  I bought a few bottles of oil in a lot of different scents."  Ennis listened to all of this with great interest. 

“So what do we do?”  Ennis asked as he removed his shirt.  “I’m already wearing “Wild Country.”  Won’t I be too loud if you put the oils on me?”

“Well, the oils are very strong!”  Jack remarked as he looked at the vial.  “We could take a shower together and I’ll rub you down after we get cleaned up."

After a very slow, satisfying shower, Jack instructed Ennis to lie face down on the bedroll.  He poured a dime-sized amount of the oil in his hand and rubbed it between both palms.  The scent of Ravenswood flooded the tent.  Jack smoothed the precious oil on Ennis’ back, rubbing and kneading his firm skin. 

“Hey, Bud, why is the oils makin’ my skin hot?”  Ennis murmured as he relaxed under Jack’s ministrations.

“Because this here is special oil that heats up as it touches the skin!”  Jack remarked as he continued what turned out to be a full body massage.  Ennis was almost comatose with pleasure by the time Jack reached his feet.  The smell of the Ravenswood was very soothing.

“C’mere, sit up, Friend,” Jack began as he gently pulled Ennis into a sitting position.  “This oil is also very good for the hair."

“Ah, Jack, oil me up!”  Ennis managed as he laid the back of his head against Jack’s chest.  Jack poured a small amount of the oil into his palms and massaged it into Ennis’ scalp.

“I anoint your head with oil, Cowboy!”  Jack whispered as he continued the head massage.

“You keep that up and I’ll be sleep.  There won’t be no loving, tonight, Rodeo!”  Ennis kidded.  Jack gently pulled his hands from Ennis’ fragrant hair and finger combed his fair locks into a semblance of order.

“Let’s go to bed, Ennis!”  Jack whispered.  “Rub your body against mine and share that Ravenswood.  I have a feelin’ we’re gonna be real good tonight.”  Ennis kissed Jack’s soft mouth and fell into his arms.

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 17, 2007, 11:39:39 pm
Singing? Howling? Or maybe whistling at Gary's butt?  
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on July 17, 2007, 11:44:00 pm
Why do I look so mean in the picture? I'm not like that, am I? :(
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on July 18, 2007, 12:10:59 am
Toycoon, I don't know about mean, but for me the term tree-like comes to mind.   ;D

Gary

P.S. Sit down already.  My neck is starting to hurt.

Gary, the only part of me that's tree-like is my woody! Your jaw is gonna hurt too, if you don't settle down!
Title: Re: Admiration
Post by: Dagi on July 18, 2007, 12:27:51 am
(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/1/1_4_125v.gif)



I guess he must be meeting his boyfriend, then ...
Title: Re: Son Of A Bitch
Post by: Dagi on July 18, 2007, 12:29:50 am
Dagi Honey, was this the story you took down?  It was just terrific wonderfully - don't second guess yourself.  You are a writer my dear!  Sad, sexy and sad again. 

Merrily

thank you, Merrily! Your words mean so much to me! So good to have you back! and nice to see you here!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on July 18, 2007, 12:31:28 am
Quote
 Twinks are pretty much over the hill and done with by the age of 23.  I'm now 41, and I'm not skinny either, so I'm like ancient, and gross.

Dude, I'm way older than you are. I'm fourty-five years old. I don't have many beauty secrets except:
I take a shitload of vitamins, drink lots of water and take Chinese herbs to keep my hair on my head. I don't smoke and I drink in moderation. I exercise every day (whether I want to or not) and I don't eat dry, starchy carbs after 5 PM. I thank God (and my parents for their genes).

BTW -Gary, I don't mean to come off haughty or 'holier than thou'. I'm really very, very fond of you.
You remind me of one of my dearest friends, Mr. Dan.
Title: Re: Son Of A Bitch
Post by: Dagi on July 18, 2007, 12:35:12 am
Dagi,
I think your story is really captures a unexplainable emotion. I'm glad Merr commented on it because I can't find the original post. I've had experiences exactly like that where I wanted to please the person as well as hurt them. It's a strange emotion. I'm sure Jack felt this often with Ennis. He can be rather frustrating as well as thrilling. Brilliant!

Hi my dear,

it´s on page 149. Yes, I know what you mean. But you can surely imagine that I can more easily acquire the insight into the bottom part...

Dagi
Title: Re: Son Of A Bitch
Post by: Toycoon on July 18, 2007, 12:38:01 am
Dagi,
You're up early today!
I'm sorry I was so cross with you and Susiebell. I was having a weird spell I truly can't explain.
I'm usually pretty easy going, honestly.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 18, 2007, 12:42:06 am
Ah, littlewing.   >:(  I'm 5'4" and I have a baby face.  I was in my younger years what's now referred to as a twink.  Twinks are pretty much over the hill and done with by the age of 23.  I'm now 41, and I'm not skinny either, so I'm like ancient, and gross.

Women often complain about how they have to measure up to unrealistic ideals of beauty, and many say that men just don't understand.  Well, some of us understand.  Believe me.

Gary

Oh, Gary, it doesn't matter!  Your sweetness and inner beauty shine through.  I'm not saying that you're not beautiful on the outside, mind you.  I'm not skinny, either, not by a long shot.  I'm not doing much about that, either  :laugh:  I'm like a guppy or goldfish - put some delicious food in front of me and I'll eat until I pop.  Perhaps I should adopt Toycoon's beauty regimen.  I especially like the part about no starchy carbs after 5:00p.m.
Title: Re: Son Of A Bitch
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 18, 2007, 12:43:32 am
Dagi,
You're up early today!
I'm sorry I was so cross with you and Susiebell. I was having a weird spell I truly can't explain.
I'm usually pretty easy going, honestly.

Read on, Toycoon.  Perhaps the story I posted earlier will help cheer you up.  :)
Title: Re: The Heady Scent of Ennis Del Mar (2)
Post by: Dagi on July 18, 2007, 12:47:36 am
The Heady Scent of Ennis Del Mar (2) By Littlewing1957

6 months later, almost to the day of their last encounter, Jack and Ennis were warm and cozy inside of a newly erected tent.  Jack was rummaging around in his travel duffle, while Ennis watched him intently.  Jack pulled out a curious looking vial from his bag and passed it to his lover.

“Hey, Friend, I see you’re wearin’ the cologne I sent you.  It works well with your natural body scent.”  Jack nodded toward the vial he handed Ennis.

“And now that I know you like smellum good, as Bobby calls it, I brought this scented oil for us to try.”  Ennis looked at the vial and read the words, “Ravenswood” that were written in fancy script right across the front of the small flask.  Ennis laughed as he threw the vial to Jack.

“Where did you get this oil, Jack?”  Ennis asked, very amused.

“At the Childress weekend flea market.  We have this flea market at the bus station on the weekends, and vendors sell all sorts of things.  I bought a few bottles of oil in a lot of different scents."  Ennis listened to all of this with great interest. 

“So what do we do?”  Ennis asked as he removed his shirt.  “I’m already wearing “Wild Country.”  Won’t I be too loud if you put the oils on me?”

“Well, the oils are very strong!”  Jack remarked as he looked at the vial.  “We could take a shower together and I’ll rub you down after we get cleaned up."

After a very slow, satisfying shower, Jack instructed Ennis to lie face down on the bedroll.  He poured a dime-sized amount of the oil in his hand and rubbed it between both palms.  The scent of Ravenswood flooded the tent.  Jack smoothed the precious oil on Ennis’ back, rubbing and kneading his firm skin. 

“Hey, Bud, why is the oils makin’ my skin hot?”  Ennis murmured as he relaxed under Jack’s ministrations.

“Because this here is special oil that heats up as it touches the skin!”  Jack remarked as he continued what turned out to be a full body massage.  Ennis was almost comatose with pleasure by the time Jack reached his feet.  The smell of the Ravenswood was very soothing.

“C’mere, sit up, Friend,” Jack began as he gently pulled Ennis into a sitting position.  “This oil is also very good for the hair."

“Ah, Jack, oil me up!”  Ennis managed as he laid the back of his head against Jack’s chest.  Jack poured a small amount of the oil into his palms and massaged it into Ennis’ scalp.

“I anoint your head with oil, Cowboy!”  Jack whispered as he continued the head massage.

“You keep that up and I’ll be sleep.  There won’t be no loving, tonight, Rodeo!”  Ennis kidded.  Jack gently pulled his hands from Ennis’ fragrant hair and finger combed his fair locks into a semblance of order.

“Let’s go to bed, Ennis!”  Jack whispered.  “Rub your body against mine and share that Ravenswood.  I have a feelin’ we’re gonna be real good tonight.”  Ennis kissed Jack’s soft mouth and fell into his arms.



You make my heart melt, Marie. Ennis enjoying a full body massage....I wouldn´t mind being in his place! In Jack´s neither :D.

Beautiful, so beautiful a story!

“Rub your body against mine and share that Ravenswood.  I have a feelin’ we’re gonna be real good tonight.”  Ennis kissed Jack’s soft mouth and fell into his arms.

oh my god I´m supposed to function normally today - how can I, with you starting my day with such a line ? :laugh:

Dagi
Title: Re: Son Of A Bitch
Post by: Dagi on July 18, 2007, 12:50:04 am
Dagi,
You're up early today!
I'm sorry I was so cross with you and Susiebell. I was having a weird spell I truly can't explain.
I'm usually pretty easy going, honestly.

my son woke me up, then he got back to sleep. Me not! Always a good time to met my family here I thought!

did you get my PM?
Title: Re: The Heady Scent of Ennis Del Mar (2)
Post by: Toycoon on July 18, 2007, 12:50:55 am
Interesting, littlewing1957. I thought Jack would consider something more exotic (and stinky) like patchoulli or frankincense!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 18, 2007, 12:51:53 am
Dagi (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/23/23_29_119.gif)! OK, now that I have your attention, you write beautifully and I doubt anyone would realize that your not an American.  The story was absolutely perfect.

Merrily

 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: I love this emoticon, PLEASE give me the address! And thank you for your kind words!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 18, 2007, 12:54:09 am
Why do I look so mean in the picture? I'm not like that, am I? :(

We love you, honey. Oops, I mean BOSS!
Title: Re: The Heady Scent of Ennis Del Mar (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 18, 2007, 12:58:42 am
You make my heart melt, Marie. Ennis enjoying a full body massage....I wouldn´t mind being in his place! In Jack´s neither :D.

Beautiful, so beautiful a story!

“Rub your body against mine and share that Ravenswood.  I have a feelin’ we’re gonna be real good tonight.”  Ennis kissed Jack’s soft mouth and fell into his arms.

oh my god I´m supposed to function normally today - how can I, with you starting my day with such a line ? :laugh:

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi!  You always know what to say!  You have made my night! 
Title: Re: The Heady Scent of Ennis Del Mar (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 18, 2007, 01:00:47 am
Interesting, littlewing1957. I thought Jack would consider something more exotic (and stinky) like patchoulli or frankincense!

Toycoon, you read my mind!  I thought about patchoulli and frankincense and myhrr!  Truly I did, but ravenswood sounds more exotic.  And it smells heavenly!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 18, 2007, 01:02:06 am
Oh, Gary, it doesn't matter!  Your sweetness and inner beauty shine through.  I'm not saying that you're not beautiful on the outside, mind you.

Marie, you said exactly what I was thinking. Gary, honey, stop dragging yourself down!!!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 18, 2007, 01:11:48 am
This is not fair! All of you show up, and I have to go  >:( >:( >:( >:(
Title: Re: The Heady Scent of Ennis Del Mar (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 18, 2007, 01:51:40 am
MMM MM  Littlewing, there's nothing like a couple of oiled up bucks in a tent together.  Once again, very sexy and sensual. 

BTW, I have an aunt and uncle who live in a small WV town by the name of Ravenswood, so I kept thinking of them as I read your story, which was weird.   :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

Gary 

Thanks, Gary!  Your aunt and uncle live in Ravenswood?  That is so cool!  I think there is a Ravenswood in MO, as well.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 18, 2007, 01:53:18 am
Thanks so much, littlewing.  And yeah, Toycoon's beauty secrets do sound interesting.  I'm thinking that no starchy carbs after 5 means he has a high protean shake after dark, if you know what I mean.    :P

Gary

Gary, you are just too clever!  Why is it suddenly hot in here?  ::)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on July 18, 2007, 01:58:10 am
Thanks so much, littlewing.  And yeah, Toycoon's beauty secrets do sound interesting.  I'm thinking that no starchy carbs after 5 means he has a high protean shake after dark, if you know what I mean.    :P

Gary

People trip out when I go out to dinner with them. I'm really pretty disciplined when it comes to the 'no starchy carb' bit. You should check me out before 5, man! I just remind myself that the tasty bread, potatoes or pasta will still be there tomorrow and I can have it for lunch (or breakfast). You can eat all the vegetable carbs you want any time you want. I forgot to mention: I'm extremely allergic to lactose proteins; milk, butter, cream and cheese. That keeps me away from the pizza, ice cream, cake and cookies. :P
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 18, 2007, 04:53:57 pm
I'm thinking that no starchy carbs after 5 means he has a high protean shake after dark, if you know what I mean.    :P

Gary

So, is this another beauty tipp, then   ;D ?? Maybe these high protein shakes make smooth skin, too, by external application? ::) I´ll have to find out.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 18, 2007, 09:11:24 pm
That was a fun quiz Susie!! Some of the words I came up with to go with your words....haha. Mine didn't make too much sense, but still fun!!

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 18, 2007, 09:20:42 pm
(http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x221/Shasta542/HUGS.jpg)

Love and hugs right back at ya!! It's great to have everyone to talk to and spend time with whether I'm sad or happy!! Someone's gonna make me happier if I'm happy or make me smile if I'm sad.
Title: Re: Nobody's Business
Post by: Toycoon on July 18, 2007, 11:39:28 pm
Quote
It was a long, lingering kiss, soft and gentle.  One that was meant to persuade, sooth, sedate.  By the time Daniel was ready to come up for air he knew he would do anything for Tyler.  But when he began to pull away Tyler grabbed him by the nape of the neck and held him in place.  That's when the tender kiss of his friend became the kiss of a lover.  Tyler shoved him back onto the ground and got on top of him, and all the while their lips remained pressed together, and their tongues continued to spar.

Sexy, Garycottle! Daniel and Tyler, golly, I love those two queers. You really have some great characters goin' on here. Maybe them Florida cam boys will do a live reenactment for the Jack with Ennis readership! Yeehaw!

Title: Re: Nobody's Business
Post by: Toycoon on July 19, 2007, 01:48:16 am
Quote
It would be interesting to have Daniel meet Granddad Ennis.

Grand dad Ennis? I didn't realize that! I guess there is something to that 'gay gene' theory. Hmmmm...

In our family there are two queers (out of four boys), I'm one, the eldest son and my youngest brother is the other. Crazy, ain't it?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 19, 2007, 01:58:08 am
People trip out when I go out to dinner with them. I'm really pretty disciplined when it comes to the 'no starchy carb' bit. You should check me out before 5, man! I just remind myself that the tasty bread, potatoes or pasta will still be there tomorrow and I can have it for lunch (or breakfast). You can eat all the vegetable carbs you want any time you want. I forgot to mention: I'm extremely allergic to lactose proteins; milk, butter, cream and cheese. That keeps me away from the pizza, ice cream, cake and cookies. :P

Interesting, Toycoon!  Back in the 80s I lost 110 pounds on the Atkins diet.  I also exercised like a fiend, something I don't have time for now.  What about fruit carbs?  Do you limit, or cut out those as well?
Title: Re: The Heady Scent of Ennis Del Mar (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 19, 2007, 01:59:06 am
Marie, what a sweet, sexy and cute story.  Boy that Jack can talk Ennis into anything, can't he?

M

Thanks, Merr!  Oh yeah, Jack can get Ennis to do his bidding!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 19, 2007, 02:00:28 am
Littlewing/Marie   How are you this morning?  I guess Mr. Naaaasssttteee is back.  Gary in his oh-so-subtle way.     (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/1/1_4_103.gif)

I'm fine, Baby!  I hope you're doing well.  I can't tell you how good it is to see you here!  :)
Title: Re: The Heady Scent of Ennis Del Mar (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 19, 2007, 02:01:37 am
Ah, so deliciously warm and sensual ... like sinking into a hot bubble bath!  Gorgeous littlewing!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Thanks, Sweets!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 19, 2007, 02:07:04 am
Hehehe ... are you sure I didn't write that because it's about ME!  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/8/8_3_16.gif)

Perhaps we should all go on a toycoon diet!  We could give up chocolate (ooh that hurts just saying it), count carbs and have a weekly weigh-in ... (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/15/15_8_6.gif)

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

ps. Gary you nitwit ... you're yummy so just put a sock in it.... (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_5_2.gif)(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_4_122v.gif)

Hey Susie, I'm game!  When I look at the sleek, sexy Toycoon in those pics, I know his system works.  Who will be the first to weigh in?  By the way, when you give up carbs for awhile, you sweet tooth disappears!  Right, Toycoon?
Title: Re: Nobody's Business
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 19, 2007, 02:10:46 am
Nobody’s Business by garycottle



Gary, I know I shouldn't comment until I read all of this, but I'm absorbing it in stages.  This piece is just too sexy and full of emotion to read all at once.  I'll tell you how much I love it later, okay?  I will say this though - I'm so glad to see Daniel and Tyler again and see their love blossom.  They are giving themselves so completley and at the risk of being cliche':

"aint love grand?"
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 19, 2007, 02:29:55 am
Shasta (Cali Sis), you are so right.  It is people like you, Gary, Susie, Marie (littlewing), Dagi, Clyde, Toycoon, who am I forgetting - who make my day every day.  I feel like I know you guys and it was hard to be away for so long. 

Thank you for making me feel so good every day.  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/23/23_30_126.gif)

Merrily

I know what you mean, Merr!  This is my second home, and you guys are my extended family.  I feel so blessed!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 19, 2007, 02:33:49 am
Wow!  That's some accomplishment, littlewing.  Bravo!

Gary

Yeah, too bad I gained most of it back after I became a mother.  I once told people, "oh, this is baby weight!"  I can't do that anymore, especially since the "baby" is almost 18 years old  :laugh:  :laugh:
Title: Re: Nobody's Business
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 19, 2007, 02:35:38 am
I'm glad you're liking it so far, littlewing.  And I can understand how you'd want to read it in stages.  This one ran over the three sentence rule just a tad.   ;)  Hope it continues to hold your interest. 

And yes, love is grand.  But young love, well that's the best ever.

Gary

Oh don't worry, I won't get bored with this.  I had to tear myself away.  Like Susie said, this reads like a novel.  Exceptional, Gary!  Superb!
Title: Re: Nobody's Business
Post by: Dagi on July 19, 2007, 05:44:43 am
Nobody’s Business by garycottle

It was a long, lingering kiss, soft and gentle....

Gary dearest,
the moment my kids started yelling for me this morning I had just finished reading your story for the third time. It stayed with me the whole morning, and I know Danny and Tyler will stay with me for some more time.
You are so amazing, honey, I don´t have words to say what your writing is doing to me.
I enjoyed every single line, inhaled and savoured them. You are a writer, as I told you before you should write a book (and dedicate it to us, of course!)! 
Btw, I loved Ennis´ short but important role.
I don´t think that this comment is doing your story justice, but I tried it.

Love, Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 19, 2007, 05:48:44 am
Shasta (Cali Sis), you are so right.  It is people like you, Gary, Susie, Marie (littlewing), Dagi, Clyde, Toycoon, who am I forgetting - who make my day every day.  I feel like I know you guys and it was hard to be away for so long. 

Thank you for making me feel so good every day.  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/23/23_30_126.gif)

Merrily

I´m sending up a prayer of thanks every day since I met you guys and gals! Big Kiss! Family Hug!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 19, 2007, 05:53:13 am
(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_9_141.gif)You've got to see this guys ... I was wetting myself!

[youtube=425,350]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UrNifbuIE10[/youtube]

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


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Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on July 19, 2007, 08:06:55 am
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Hey Susie, I'm game!  When I look at the sleek, sexy Toycoon in those pics, I know his system works.  Who will be the first to weigh in?  By the way, when you give up carbs for awhile, your sweet tooth disappears!  Right, Toycoon?

*Blush* Gosh, Thanks, Littlewing1957. It's true! I eat fruit in the morning then I'll have a bowl of oatmeal with soymilk. Later on in the morning, I'll have a couple of scrambled egg whites, a handful of cashews and a cup of tea (I can't drink coffee or else I'm wired for days!). By noon, I'm starved but I'll have my starchy carbs then (pasta, rice or potatoes) with proteins (meat, fish or chicken). I don't miss not having dessert because I've had my starchies to satisfy my carb cravings. Around 3, I'll eat some more nuts, an apple and maybe some pretzels or 'Tings" (they taste like Cheet-oes). I almost always eat dinner by 6 or else I'm REALLY cranky!
A body builder friend of mine one told me, "If you can't hold your stomach in after you've eaten, you've eaten too much." Basically, what that amounts to is: One doesn't have to eat everything in sight in one sitting. There will still be food in the morning. I'll never forget that.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on July 19, 2007, 08:18:14 am
Littlewing, those are my words exactly.  Everyone is so nice - where else could you find a group of people who have something in common and who can also get along.  My first impression was that people were all writing stories and there was no rivalry or envy - people were encouraging each other.  What a concept.

I couldn't have said it better myself. We are so fortunate to have found each other. I'm delighted to be here, I can't tell you. The Colorado Brokeback BBQ was a similar phenomenon. I felt as though I known everyone forever. I wish I could have met all of you (specifically the Jack with Ennis alumni) personally.
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I know you are spending time on IMDb, but I only go over there when I get a minute.  It seems like I get the same "downer" every time though.  I love it here! - Merrily
I really can't deal with IMDb any longer. It's just not interesting to me anymore. I feel bad for the current newcomers. There's no one there to greet them and guide them over here! I don't have the patience these days.

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 19, 2007, 08:27:47 am

 I wish I could have met all of you (specifically the Jack with Ennis alumni) personally.



The day will come! I´m determined! And I´m sure it will be like meeting old friends! Hm, I hope we won´t be really old the day we meet.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on July 19, 2007, 08:30:16 am
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[youtube=425,350]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UrNifbuIE10[/youtube][/center]

Susie

Holy Hilarity, Batman! That was really funny! Is that a British show, Susiebell? I've never heard of him.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 19, 2007, 12:57:07 pm
Gosh it'll be fantastic ... I picture it just like your dream ... you've got to promise to play with my curls Dagi!!

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Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



I think of that dream every time I come here.....it felt soooo real, I could see so many details, feel the wind and the warm golden sunlight, hear your voices.... I promise to play with your curls, Susie! But, girls and guys, mind you, it will be me who rests her head in Gary´s lap! That is, if he´s coming and not too busy srewing hot latino boys  ;D.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 19, 2007, 02:04:05 pm
This idea of seeing myself as a ragged, much beloved Teddy bear is really starting to grow on me.  Seems a lot easier to think of myself as cuddly as I am, even with my soft belly, surgical scars, eyes that don't blink in sink, and lopsided smile, than to try to look like Aaron Carter by going on yet another diet.   ;D

Gary

P.S. Besides, a friend of mine told me that I'm likely to meet a cute, well endowed Latino boy out in California who just wants to lay around and screw all day.   :P  So maybe there's hope for me yet.

You know, Gary, we all happen to love lopsided smiles  ;). And you are much beloved , that´s for sure. :-*. I´ll answer your PM later, today is Yoga!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 19, 2007, 04:22:45 pm
Aww Thanks so much, Dagi.  You are so sweet.  Happy Yoga!

BTW, if you come to California, I'll be sure to take a few days rest from brown sausages to spend some time with you.  I'll likely need a break by then anyway.   :P

Gary

A break?? Aaawww, and I thought you´d show me your R. W. Collection... :(

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 19, 2007, 06:11:57 pm
ONE THOUSAND POSTS!!! .... WHOOOOOO WHEEEEEEEEE!!




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Corr blimey bless us Gov'ner!!!  I've got more Rabbit than Sainsburys!!!

Sorry, it's this Cockney Rhyming Slang quiz .... it's making me talk bollocks! .... so nothing new then!!!

Now if you'll excuse me, I'm off to find the 1,000+ club!


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Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Congratulations, Susiebell!!!

 If you are talking as fast as you are typing, then God have mercy on us if we ever meet in person  :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 19, 2007, 06:50:54 pm
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Stolen from Kerry´s Comedy Club! Hilarious thread!
This is for you, Gary, ´cause we know that you like the guys with just their boots and hats on! :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 19, 2007, 07:15:45 pm
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Congratulations on 1,000 posts, Susiebell!!! That was lightnin' flats fast!!
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Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on July 19, 2007, 08:18:14 pm
Don't put yerself out.

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Brown sausages?
Gary you are the nastiest sonafabitch! Yer killin' me!



Watch, you'll move to California then we'll never see you again!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on July 19, 2007, 08:20:11 pm
Susiebell- Congratulations! 1000+ posts? You are officially obsessed with no signs of remmission.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 19, 2007, 09:07:19 pm
*Blush* Gosh, Thanks, Littlewing1957. It's true! I eat fruit in the morning then I'll have a bowl of oatmeal with soymilk. Later on in the morning, I'll have a couple of scrambled egg whites, a handful of cashews and a cup of tea (I can't drink coffee or else I'm wired for days!). By noon, I'm starved but I'll have my starchy carbs then (pasta, rice or potatoes) with proteins (meat, fish or chicken). I don't miss not having dessert because I've had my starchies to satisfy my carb cravings. Around 3, I'll eat some more nuts, an apple and maybe some pretzels or 'Tings" (they taste like Cheet-oes). I almost always eat dinner by 6 or else I'm REALLY cranky!
A body builder friend of mine one told me, "If you can't hold your stomach in after you've eaten, you've eaten too much." Basically, what that amounts to is: One doesn't have to eat everything in sight in one sitting. There will still be food in the morning. I'll never forget that.

Wow, Toycoon, your diet sounds very varied and extremely healthy.  You're getting all of your nutrients!  Do you take a multivitamin?  How about food prep?  Boiled or steamed meats, steamed veggies or raw?  I'll be okay if I can lay off the fried chicken (dang, I was raised on it!) fried fish..oh hell, fried foods in general  :laugh:  I can give up the sweets with no problem, but I really need to add colorful fruits and veggies to my diet.  I just don't eat right.  Thanks for this, Toycoon.  It is very helpful!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 19, 2007, 09:08:59 pm
The day will come! I´m determined! And I´m sure it will be like meeting old friends! Hm, I hope we won´t be really old the day we meet.

Dagi

Well, better late than never, sweet Dagi!  When we meet it will seem like heaven!  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 19, 2007, 09:11:18 pm
Gary

P.S. Besides, a friend of mine told me that I'm likely to meet a cute, well endowed Latino boy out in California who just wants to lay around and screw all day.   :P  So maybe there's hope for me yet.

It will happen if you want it!   I can almost guarantee it.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 19, 2007, 09:13:47 pm
Aww Thanks so much, Dagi.  You are so sweet.  Happy Yoga!

BTW, if you come to California, I'll be sure to take a few days rest from brown sausages to spend some time with you.  I'll likely need a break by then anyway.   :P

Gary

A lot of lovin' will keep you young and healthy.  And when I'm there to buy you dinner, I'll make you laugh.  Laughter is the best medicine!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 19, 2007, 09:15:15 pm
ONE THOUSAND POSTS!!! .... WHOOOOOO WHEEEEEEEEE!!




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Corr blimey bless us Gov'ner!!!  I've got more Rabbit than Sainsburys!!!

Sorry, it's this Cockney Rhyming Slang quiz .... it's making me talk bollocks! .... so nothing new then!!!

Now if you'll excuse me, I'm off to find the 1,000+ club!


(http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s31/Susiebell_album/Glitter/014.gif)


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Wow, congrats, Susie!  You've been one busy little Bee!!  :)
Title: The Drive-In
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 19, 2007, 09:58:25 pm
This is just a harmless, pointless AU  :laugh: More like a slice of life piece than anything else.

The Drive-In by Littlewing1957

“Hey, let’s take the baby and go get something to eat!”  Jack suggested as he joined Ennis in the living area.  Ennis was thinking about dinner, but was feeling too tired to cook.  His business was really doing well, which meant long hours and back breaking work.  He was grateful that Jack wanted to go out to eat.

“Sounds good to me, Bud.  Where is Indigo, anyway?”  Ennis asked Jack as he rose from the couch.  He wanted to see his child and kiss her chubby cheeks.

“I’ll go get her for you!”  Jack, excited now, leaving to go fetch baby Indigo.  Jack tenderly folded their child into Ennis' arms.  Ennis almost burst into tears at the sight of her.  He kissed her tenderly, and with Indigo his arms, reached out for Jack.  Jack walked into the embrace, cuddled his man and his child. 

Ennis was in the mood for burgers and fries, which was fine with Jack.  They decided on A&W, the only authentic, 50s style drive-in left in town.   The A&W was always poppin’ on a Saturday night, and Ennis and Jack loved the energy.  They parked, opened all the windows, and were given menus by a willowy blonde teenager dressed in short shorts and a busy, belly revealing top.  The waitress was on skates.  Little Indigo was asleep in the back seat.

“I think I’ll have the double burger with cheese and a large order of fries.”  Ennis mumbled as he studied the menu.  Jack nodded and said he would have the same.  The waitress skated over, took their orders and left to wait on the other customers.  Ennis and Jack sat and watched the other patrons.  Most were large families with well-behaved, eerily beautiful children.   The food arrived only minutes later and was placed on a tray that was affixed to the drivers’ side window.

“Thanks, dear!”  Ennis told the waitress right before she seemed to float away on her skates.  He passed Jack his burger and fries.  They ate in silence, so content, and so much in love.

Title: Re: The Drive-In
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 19, 2007, 10:27:42 pm
Marie, what a sweet story.  The only problem now is that I want a burger and fries.  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/7/7_4_7.gif)

I know what you mean, Merr!  I'm supposed to be dieting, but I may darken In-N-Out Burger's door before long.  Love those burgers and fries!  :)
Title: Re: The Drive-In
Post by: Toycoon on July 19, 2007, 10:59:11 pm
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Ennis and Jack sat and watched the other patrons.  Most were large families with well-behaved, eerily beautiful children.

Littlewing, where were they, "The Village of the Damned"? Eerie story!
Title: Re: The Drive-In
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 20, 2007, 12:36:48 am
Littlewing, where were they, "The Village of the Damned"? Eerie story!

 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: Toycoon, I thought about you when I wrote that!  I thought you would pick up on it!! :laugh: :laugh:
Title: Re: The Commercial
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 20, 2007, 12:40:48 am
Marie, another beautifully written story from you girl.  It was really good to hear Ennis laugh and how sweet Jack is.  He wants Ennis to be happy so much.  Unselfish love.

Thanks, Merr!  The Commercial was really fun to write!  I'm so glad you like it!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 20, 2007, 12:42:53 am
I'm looking forward to it, littlewing.  You're so sweet to welcome me to your neck of the woods.

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/7/7_4_7.gif)

Gary

I'm counting the days!  What shall we have?  Seafood?  What do you like?
Title: Re: The Drive-In
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 20, 2007, 12:47:08 am
Very sweet and endearing family moment, littlewing.  This reminds me of the times my parents took my sister and me out to local drive-ins.  Back in the late 60's and early 70's there weren't any chain fast food restaurants around here, but there were still quite a few old-fashioned drive-ins.  We always went on warm summer nights and my parents were still young and full of life.

Gary 

Gary, this sort of thing is what inspired the story.  I was just driving around Lake Merritt and noticed that we have a few Drive-in like places still in business.  One of the most frequented is a place called "Quik Way" which has a place to drive up and park, but we no longer have waitresses come to the car to take orders.  My mom and her girfriends used to go to drive-ins all the time when we lived in Oklahoma City.  My parents and us kids at the Drive-in.  Good times!  :)
Title: Re: The Drive-In
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 20, 2007, 12:48:02 am
How true.  My daughter always makes sure she gets to stop there whenever she is here in San Diego.  I have a place in downtown San Diego that was across from the building I used to work in.  Their burgers and fries were to die for - really, and they were cooked just exactly the way I ordered them - medium rare.  Still juicy and tasty.  The fries are the best in SD for sure and such a big portion too - my weakness.

I bet you guys have In-N-Out burgers everywhere down your way?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 20, 2007, 12:53:52 am

Hello~~~~~waving~~~~~from Arkansas

Sweet story, Littlewing.  :)

We have Sonics. I go in my jammies and bring my dog. Good fun and food!! LOL   Are there Sonics in ya'll's part of the world??
Title: Re: The Drive-In
Post by: Dagi on July 20, 2007, 01:05:13 am
This is just a harmless, pointless AU  :laugh: More like a slice of life piece than anything else.

The Drive-In by Littlewing1957


Even the most harmless, most pointless AU story (your words!) contain so much beauty:

Jack walked into the embrace, cuddled his man and his child.  ........ They ate in silence, so content, and so much in love.

Every night another story. You take my breath away! Thank you so much!

Dagi
Title: Re: Son Of A Bitch
Post by: Dagi on July 20, 2007, 01:07:29 am
Do you believe me now, Dagi?  You are amazing, I think - in every way.  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/3/3_3_20.gif)

Stop making me blush. But thank you honey. Hey, you are amazing, too! you come here and flood the board with love! SOOOO good to have you back!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 20, 2007, 01:17:41 am
Shasta, sadly the closest one to me is in El Centro - about 100 miles away.  Not in my usual path for sure.  There aren't any near San Fran either.  One of the best drive-ins - Cherry Limeade, Burgers, Fries - yumm.....eeee.  I was hoping they would put one in SD because then my daughter would come back for sure!

Awwww....I wish they had one there, too. Must be your daughter's favorite! LOL. What do you like to get? Have you ever had chili cheese fries? I get those ---too often. And I like the peach tea and raspberry tea too. Hard to believe our little bitty town has one---it does good business tho. And gives the teens a place to work.  :)
Title: Mexico or Bust
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 20, 2007, 01:24:02 am
Mexico or Bust by Littlewing 1957

Jack picked up a colorful brochure from his oak desk and looked at it so sadly.  He knew the answer even before he dared to ask!  There was no way that a one Ennis Del Mar would agree to spend a few weeks with him in sunny Cabo San Lucas.  But he had to try.  Jack placed the brochure in a large envelope and dropped it in the mailbox. 

He drove away from his house so lost in thought that he almost ran over his neighbor’s cat!  “That’s it!”  Jack chided himself.  “I gotta pull myself together.  If Ennis won’t go, well, it’s not the end of the world!”  He drove to work in a record 10 minutes and sat at his station, hoping to make at least one sale that day.

12:00 noon and no customers.  Jack rubbed his stiff neck and went into the back office to prepare a cup of coffee.  He looked at his ceramic coffee pot and felt a sharp stab.  What was it Ennis said?  “Jack, the only traveling I do is going around the coffee pot looking for the handle.”  Jack shook his head and poured himself a cup.  He walked back to his desk and sipped the strong brew.  He let himself daydream about a trip to Mexico with Ennis.  He imagined them getting cozy in their richly appointed hotel room; drinking exotic mixed concoctions at the bar; walking hand-in-hand along the cape.  If only…

One week later Jack stepped on his front porch to retrieve the mail.  It was Saturday and he was grateful for the day off.  Last week was rather slow, but the slow days were as trying as busy times.  He separated the envelopes by type: the bills landed in one pile while everything else - ads and other junk mail - were dropped in the round file.  And then he saw it!  A post card from Riverton Wy.  Jack was shaking as he turned the card over to read the message.  He smiled, almost cried out with laughter as he read,

“Rodeo, tell me more!”

Jack sat down at his desk and pulled out the brochure that he kept for himself.  He placed a call to his travel agent…..
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 20, 2007, 01:24:54 am
Hello~~~~~waving~~~~~from Arkansas

Sweet story, Littlewing.  :)

We have Sonics. I go in my jammies and bring my dog. Good fun and food!! LOL   Are there Sonics in ya'll's part of the world??

Sure.  They're in the suburbs, though.  No Sonics in Oakland.
Title: Re: The Drive-In
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 20, 2007, 01:25:38 am
Even the most harmless, most pointless AU story (your words!) contain so much beauty:

Jack walked into the embrace, cuddled his man and his child.  ........ They ate in silence, so content, and so much in love.

Every night another story. You take my breath away! Thank you so much!

Dagi

Ah Dagi, you're so sweet.  Thank you so much!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 20, 2007, 01:30:07 am
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Mexico or Bust by Littlewing 1957

I love it---I hope you are going to take us along on the vacation with them!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 20, 2007, 01:42:21 am
To be truthful I'm kind of finicky, littlewing.  There are certain things I simply won't eat, and I'm very much afraid that seafood is one of them.   >:(  Hope you're not too disappointed.  

I just never acquired a taste for seafood.  It probably has something to do with the fact that West Virginia is a landlocked state.  There isn't anyplace around here to get good, fresh seafood.  So maybe as a result of that most seafood doesn't appeal to me.  I remember going up to Maine and watching people eat lobster.  To me it looked like they were eating giant grasshoppers.   :-X  How could anyone eat something that looked like that?

I have very inexpensive tastes really.  I like pizza and pasta, and burgers.  Nothing fancy.  You mentioned fried chicken.  I like chicken fingers, but there's something about eating chicken that's still on the bone that freaks me out.  

I'm a very eccentric person when you get right down to it, littlewing.   :P  But I hope you'll put up with me.

Gary

Gary, its okay!  You sound so much like my daughter it's scary!  She thinks lobsters are gross looking and refuses to eat them.  She likes chicken strips, or fingers, but thinks chicken on the bone is gross!  Well, we'll figure it out.  I have to deal with a finicky eater all the time.  I have to entertain Maria's friends and most of them are either vegetarians or vegans.  I'm used to all kinds of dietary preferences.  We'll work it out.  You're finicky?  I'm easy!  I'll ask my sister if she knows of a reasonably priced family place down there and we can each order what we like. 
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 20, 2007, 01:43:48 am
I love it---I hope you are going to take us along on the vacation with them!

Possibly, Shasta!  I have a feeling that sometime in the near future we'll take a trip to Mexico with our boys!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 20, 2007, 02:21:34 am
Hi Shasta Sistah, yes, my daughter's favorite.  I know she would come back here if we got a Sonic.  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_1_13.gif)

You oughtta start lobbying for one!!   ;D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 20, 2007, 03:22:05 pm
Hot Dog, Susiebell and Dagi!  That was one hot scene!  And I just loved the way Jack deliberately got Ennis all riled up.  MMMM  Y'all know I love it when Ennis roughly manhandles Jack.  And that cute, young bartender whistling just a few feet away...now that was really erotic.  Wow!

Great Story!  And it's really amazing that y'all were able to write it together.  The two of you make some team!

Gary

P.S. That title is so funny.  Ennis could be an animal, that's for sure.  He's a sexy beast.

Thank you Gary dearest!

You didn´t expect us to write anything profound when I told you about our little project, did ya  :laugh: ?

It was kind a predictible....but so much fun!! And I´ve got to give Susie credit for the idea of Jack making Ennis jealous in the first place! Then I remembered what you said about tricky bottom boys  ;D ;D ;D ...So we owe you, too, Gary!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 20, 2007, 03:48:45 pm
Dear Dagi and Susie - what a great collaberation.  Very graphic.  You got Ennis just perfect with his quick temper.  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_2_207.gif) And playful Jack just having fun riling Ennis.  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_11_3.gif)

Thank you, Merrily! We are going to do this more often, I think, it was fun!

Dagi
Title: Re: Mexico or Bust
Post by: Dagi on July 20, 2007, 04:20:02 pm
Mexico or Bust by Littlewing 1957

.... He smiled, almost cried out with laughter as he read,

“Rodeo, tell me more!”

Jack sat down at his desk and pulled out the brochure that he kept for himself.  He placed a call to his travel agent…..


walking hand in hand.....so romantic, Marie! And so heartwarming to read that Ennis indeed opened up to Jack´s ideas.
(Although Jack´s death would have been tragic enough without that  :'().

Thank you, honey!

Dagi
Title: Re: Ennimal
Post by: Toycoon on July 20, 2007, 08:40:30 pm
Holy sheee-it! Whatta hot story! I don't usually get too riled up about much but I tell ya, I got a nasty stirring in the loins over that one. You two dames are really getting to be quite the erotic homosex writers. Perfect title, too. Very evocative. Camile Paglia better watch out! How can I be cross with you two, you wild womanimals!  Manly face and dark hair, lanky, hmmm... that bartender sure sounds foxy, too. Maybe we can revisit him some time.
Title: Re: Ennimal
Post by: Toycoon on July 20, 2007, 09:00:26 pm
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Toycoon, in part two I think it should be revealed that, unbeknownst to Jack and Ennis, I was underneath the bar the whole time that young, willowy bartender was doing his chores, submissively waiting to attend to his needs.  Gary

I don't doubt that for a minute. Foxy bartender sounds like your type. Heck, he sounds like everybody's type!

Title: Re: Mexico or Bust
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 20, 2007, 11:53:22 pm
Loved it littlewing.  Maybe because I like to get out and see new places, and it always annoys me when others show no interest.  Gosh, if I had the money I'd be traveling all the time all over the world.  Petra.  Machu Picchu.  Angkor Wat. Very nearly every place in Europe.  Egypt.  Kenya.  China.  India.  Australia.  New Zealand.  The list goes on.  It may have been easier to just to list the places I don't want to visit.  Hmmm  South Pole maybe.   :laugh:  Too damn cold.  

It's always really got to me the way Ennis refused Jack very nearly everything.  He wouldn't even go to Mexico with him.  (But of course he may have refused to go there because he somehow knew Jack had gone there to sleep with rent boys.)  Gosh, would it have killed him to cross the state line once in a while?  That Ennis, he was so stubborn.

But I love the fact that in your story Ennis shows a willingness to consider the idea.

Gary

Thanks, Gary!  I also love to travel.  I only wish I could afford it.  I've always had a feeling that Jack could have worn Ennis down, and convinced him to at least see a neighboring State.  You're right, that Ennis was so stubborn.
Title: Re: Mexico or Bust
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 20, 2007, 11:54:32 pm
Oh, Marie - that gave me chills all over.  I could feel Jack's thrill.  Lovely story and so hopeful.  I loved it.

Thanks, Babe!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 21, 2007, 12:00:06 am
Toycoon, this one's for you honey!!
 

After the other day, we got together, kinda like a writing tag-team, and came up with a story just for you .... finishing each other's sentences, adding more, just letting it take us where it wanted to go ......."




 (http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s31/Susiebell_album/Glitter/i54195533_38596.gif)(http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s31/Susiebell_album/Glitter/cmas4.gif)



Ennimal by Dagi and Susie

They sat alone in the corner of Pete's dusty old saloon.  The place was empty but for a young bartender, whistling cheerfully and stacking beer bottles in neat rows behind the counter.  Ennis tried hard to concentrate on the bottle he was shoving from one hand to the other, avoiding looking up, the feeling of Jack´s knee pressed up against his inner thigh sending sparks though his body.

Jack peered briefly over at the bartender, "He's kinda cute, don't ya think?", a smile spread across his face.  He shifted in his chair, moving his knee closer to Ennis' groin, pressing harder against his leg.

"Uh.... don´t know." Ennis, curious against his will, couldn´t help but risk a short glance at the guy, now busy clearing the tables; tight fitting denims, muscular forearms, a manly face and dark hair.

"You like him, Jack Fuckin' Twist?  You wanna piece a that pretty ass?"  Ennis' voice was mean, guts churning up inside, suppressing a sudden urge to flatten the young man with his fist.  Jack didn´t respond, merely chuckled a little and looked at the bartender again, letting his eyes remain for a few seconds on the beautiful man.

"That's enough, Rodeo!"  Ennis stood up suddenly, knocking the table and sending his bottle crashing to the floor.  He muttered an apology to the startled young man, grabbed Jack by the arm and marched him out of the bar and into the parking lot around the back.  Jack tried to hide his smile, Ennis´ fierce grip around his arm hurt, but he didn´t mind a bit. By the time his angry friend pushed him against the truck he was already rock-hard.

A quick glance around, showed Ennis that they were alone, the bartender, humming a tune dangerously close by.  His temper had gotten the better of him again, grappling with Jack's buckle and yanking his jeans and shorts down to his ankles, before fumbling with his own zipper and freeing his angry cock.

Jack smiled triumphantly to himself, that skinny young bartender couldn't hold a candle to Ennis. But sometimes he  loved to tease him, torment him, drive him crazy.....´cause the only thing better than getting fucked by Ennis was getting fucked by "Ennimal"!  Jack braced himself,  breathing hard, bent forward, and hissed as he felt Ennis´ fingers pinching his nipples, hissed again as he  took the hot, equally stone-hard dick all the way up his ass in one single thrust.

Jack yelped, the burning pain washed over in an instant, his body convulsing with  electricity, cock slapping against his belly, at each thrust.

" You like lookin at other men?" .... another hard thrust .... Ennis' voice a choked whisper, "I´ll teach you!" .... another thrust .... " Your - ass - is - mine!" ....




Love Susie and Dagi (http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s31/Susiebell_album/Glitter/angeldevil-1.gif)

Brilliant!  Girls this is awesome!  I love the idea of Jack teasing Ennis, making him jealous, knowing that he would go beserk!  And the rough sex out in the parking lot! And Ennis making it clear that Jack's ass belongs to him.  I love it! This is a very well written fic, ladies!  I devoured every word!  Marvelous!  :)
Title: Re: Mexico or Bust
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 21, 2007, 12:01:35 am
walking hand in hand.....so romantic, Marie! And so heartwarming to read that Ennis indeed opened up to Jack´s ideas.
(Although Jack´s death would have been tragic enough without that  :'().

Thank you, honey!

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi.  I may continue this yet!
Title: Re: Ennimal
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 21, 2007, 12:02:31 am
Toycoon, in part two I think it should be revealed that, unbeknownst to Jack and Ennis, I was underneath the bar the whole time that young, willowy bartender was doing his chores, submissively waiting to attend to his needs.   ;D

Gary

Gary, you're a wild man!  ::)
Title: Re: Ennimal
Post by: Dagi on July 21, 2007, 02:33:53 am
Holy sheee-it! Whatta hot story! I don't usually get too riled up about much but I tell ya, I got a nasty stirring in the loins over that one. You two dames are really getting to be quite the erotic homosex writers. Perfect title, too. Very evocative. Camile Paglia better watch out! How can I be cross with you two, you wild womanimals!  Manly face and dark hair, lanky, hmmm... that bartender sure sounds foxy, too. Maybe we can revisit him some time.

Thank you, honey! I´m glad you liked it! I was afraid the title would be kind of a give-away, but Susie decided to let it. Or maybe she couldn´t think of anything better ;).

Dagi

PS The bartender is free to be used by anyone!  I mean, by any writer, as character in a story  ;D ;D ;D!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 21, 2007, 02:37:10 am
Brilliant!  Girls this is awesome!  I love the idea of Jack teasing Ennis, making him jealous, knowing that he would go beserk!  And the rough sex out in the parking lot! And Ennis making it clear that Jack's ass belongs to him.  I love it! This is a very well written fic, ladies!  I devoured every word!  Marvelous!  :)

Thank you, Marie! So many kind words!  :-*

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 21, 2007, 08:35:36 am
She´s listed in the member´s list as ********, and her posts are still showing, but some posts on the buns thread are deleted. What does that mean??

Merrily, honey, speak to us!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 21, 2007, 08:01:15 pm
She´s listed in the member´s list as ********, and her posts are still showing, but some posts on the buns thread are deleted. What does that mean??

Merrily, honey, speak to us!

Perhaps she's working on her Avatar?  I just saw a few of her posts yesterday over at the other Board.  I'm sure everything's okay with her.  At least I hope so!
Title: Old Man Twist
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 21, 2007, 08:08:24 pm
Old Man twist by Littlewing 1957


Old Man Twist watched his wife as she returned to the kitchen after Ennis Del Mar left with 2 shirts in a paper bag.  Mr. Twist noticed that his wife had tears in her eyes.  He wanted to comfort her, but didn’t quite know how.

Mr. Twist sat in his chair and spat into his cup.  He had to constantly remind himself that he wasn’t a bad father to Jack, or an abusive husband to his wife.  He didn’t care what anyone else thought!  He wanted to be at peace with himself.

“I provided for my family!”  Old Man Twist thought as he watched his woman prepare supper.  “I’m not required to do anything else but make sure my wife and son are fed, and that they have a roof over their heads!”  He pounded his fist on the table, causing Mrs. Twist to jump and drop a white plate.   “What kind of father were you, Jack Twist?”  He yelled to no one in particular as he rose from the table and headed outside…
Title: Re: Old Man Twist
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 22, 2007, 12:35:32 am
Hi there littlewing,

Thanks so much for this glimpse into Mr. Twists psyche.  I know he was an old coot, but I think he was messed up inside.  He was rude to Ennis when Ennis came to visit, and we know he wasn't much of a father to Jack, and he probably wasn't much of a husband, but it seemed to me that he was in a great deal of pain when we saw him there at that kitchen table.  So maybe he did have a heart.

We can always count on you to keep the thread going when the rest of us are hitting a dry spell, littlewing.  Thanks for your diligence. 

Gary 

Hi, Babe!  Thanks for your kind words.  I try to see the good and explore it in everyone.  Writing about J&E is my salvation.  I just gotta do it!
Title: Re: The Drive-In
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 22, 2007, 12:37:47 am
Ah, what a charming tale littlewing! .... a heavenly little slice of life!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif) 

Thanks, Susie!
Title: Re: Mexico or Bust
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 22, 2007, 12:38:22 am
Oh if only littlewing!  I hope there's more ... I want to hear about them walking hand in hand together!  Lovely littlewing!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Yes, I'll continue the tale very soon.  Thanks for your kind words.
Title: Re: Old Man Twist
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 22, 2007, 12:39:39 am
Thank you littlewing ... for this little glimpse at the softer side of OMT!  I want to HATE him, beat him over the head for never teaching Jack to bullride, punch him on the nose for never once going to see Jack ride, kick him in the goolies for peeing over him!!  But I guess even OMT had feelings ... just had no idea how to express them..... still HATE him though!!!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

I've wanted to delve into his psyche for a long time.  I've finally worked up the nerve to do it.  I may try again with OMT some other time.
Title: Forgive me?
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 22, 2007, 02:20:57 am
This is dedicated to my Buddies.  I love all of you so much!

Jack turned his back to the tent flap and crossed his arms over his muscled chest.  “That Ennis fuckin’ Del Mar don’t know who he’s messin’ with!”  Jack was seething as he remembered the words they had right before dinner.

Ennis stood outside, pacing nervously around camp while Jack was inside the tent, hot as a six shooter!  Ennis regretted the words that he said to his lover.  He was seriously out of line, said things to Jack that he’s sure Jack will never forget.   But will he forgive?  “How do I apologize to him?”  Ennis wondered out loud.  He was still smarting over the way Jack nudged him out of the tent.  Something had to be done.

Ennis crawled through the tent’s opening and peeked in at Jack.  Jack was sitting on the ground, legs and arms both crossed.  Ennis’ blood drained from his cheeks as he sensed Jack’s vibes. 

“Jack, please!”  Ennis began.  “I was wrong, Bud.  Please forgive me?”  No response from Jack.  Ennis moved closer and placed a tender kiss on Jack’s lower back.  Jack stiffened, and with a wave of his hand, pushed Ennis farther away.  Ennis was terrified, but he understood his husband and knew when to leave him be.  Perhaps tomorrow will be better…
Title: Re: Ennimal
Post by: Toycoon on July 22, 2007, 11:58:09 am
(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_12_9.gif)

Ah Susie, Toycoon is like a brother.  Leave it to you to turn my little fantasy into incest.

...oh well, I am from West Virginia.

Gary

Garycottle, you had Jack doing his nephew-in-law at his own wedding, ya lech!
Title: Re: Old Man Twist
Post by: Toycoon on July 22, 2007, 12:03:20 pm
I've wanted to delve into his psyche for a long time.  I've finally worked up the nerve to do it.  I may try again with OMT some other time.

It's interesting to think how each of character warrants exploration in some way. Some are totally bizarre in their action. Maybe, those are the most fascinating characters.

Really fine story, littlewing1957. Thank you for going inside OMT's head.
Title: Re: Old Man Twist
Post by: Dagi on July 22, 2007, 12:41:15 pm
Old Man twist by Littlewing 1957


Old Man Twist watched his wife as she returned to the kitchen after Ennis Del Mar left with 2 shirts in a paper bag.  Mr. Twist noticed that his wife had tears in her eyes.  He wanted to comfort her, but didn’t quite know how.

Mr. Twist sat in his chair and spat into his cup.  He had to constantly remind himself that he wasn’t a bad father to Jack, or an abusive husband to his wife.  He didn’t care what anyone else thought!  He wanted to be at peace with himself.

“I provided for my family!”  Old Man Twist thought as he watched his woman prepare supper.  “I’m not required to do anything else but make sure my wife and son are fed, and that they have a roof over their heads!”  He pounded his fist on the table, causing Mrs. Twist to jump and drop a white plate.   “What kind of father were you, Jack Twist?”  He yelled to no one in particular as he rose from the table and headed outside…


The insight you are providing here is really fascinating, Marie. The first time I saw the movie I couldn´t help  liking OMT despite of everything he had done to Jack and was doing to Ennis. I still can´t explain the feeling, but this actor was capable to convey that no person is all bad.

Thank you, Marie!

Dagi
Title: Re: Ennimal
Post by: Dagi on July 22, 2007, 12:46:01 pm
Toycoon, in part two I think it should be revealed that, unbeknownst to Jack and Ennis, I was underneath the bar the whole time that young, willowy bartender was doing his chores, submissively waiting to attend to his needs.   ;D

Gary

Oh Gary dear, if you had told me earlier, I would have made the bartender look like this: blonde hair, about 5 feet 4 ", thin, hairless body....but I know you´re not that picky anyway.

Dagi
Title: Re: Forgive me?
Post by: Dagi on July 22, 2007, 12:50:12 pm
This is dedicated to my Buddies.  I love all of you so much!

Jack turned his back to the tent flap and crossed his arms over his muscled chest.  “That Ennis fuckin’ Del Mar don’t know who he’s messin’ with!”  Jack was seething as he remembered the words they had right before dinner.

Ennis stood outside, pacing nervously around camp while Jack was inside the tent, hot as a six shooter!  Ennis regretted the words that he said to his lover.  He was seriously out of line, said things to Jack that he’s sure Jack will never forget.   But will he forgive?  “How do I apologize to him?”  Ennis wondered out loud.  He was still smarting over the way Jack nudged him out of the tent.  Something had to be done.

Ennis crawled through the tent’s opening and peeked in at Jack.  Jack was sitting on the ground, legs and arms both crossed.  Ennis’ blood drained from his cheeks as he sensed Jack’s vibes. 

“Jack, please!”  Ennis began.  “I was wrong, Bud.  Please forgive me?”  No response from Jack.  Ennis moved closer and placed a tender kiss on Jack’s lower back.  Jack stiffened, and with a wave of his hand, pushed Ennis farther away.  Ennis was terrified, but he understood his husband and knew when to leave him be.  Perhaps tomorrow will be better…


What a touching little piece, Marie! Your writing style is so natural! Keep them coming!!

We love you too, Marie!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 22, 2007, 12:51:12 pm
Has anyone heard from Merr?  ??? ??? ???  D.
Title: Re: Forgive me?
Post by: Toycoon on July 22, 2007, 01:04:59 pm
Littlewing1957, I missed this one the first time around. What a touching moment. Is there a part one? Why was Jack so angry with En? There seems to be a lot of crossed stars this week.
Sheee-it! Maybe it's the moon or somethin'?
Title: Re: Ennimal
Post by: Dagi on July 22, 2007, 02:48:33 pm
Garycottle, you had Jack doing his nephew-in-law at his own wedding, ya lech!

REPOST, please! PLEASE, you nasty boy!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 22, 2007, 02:54:41 pm
Has anyone heard from Merr?  ??? ??? ???  D.

Dagi--You (or the rest of ya'll, too) can PM her on IMDb -- she'd like to hear from you. I got a message from her yesterday and she decided to  be on IMDb only.
Title: Re: Ennimal
Post by: Shasta542 on July 22, 2007, 02:58:42 pm
I don't know what you're talkin' about.  I wouldn't write a story like that.  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/7/7_9_7.gif)

I once innocently clicked on a video that showed these twin boys doing this other guy at the same time.  Gross!  I clicked it right off after like 30 or 40 minutes.

Gary

(http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/sign/sign0004.gif) (http://www.mysmiley.net)



Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 22, 2007, 04:05:19 pm
Dagi--You (or the rest of ya'll, too) can PM her on IMDb -- she'd like to hear from you. I got a message from her yesterday and she decided to  be on IMDb only.

Thank you Shasta, I already left her a message there! D.
Title: Re: Old Man Twist
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 22, 2007, 04:39:07 pm
It's interesting to think how each of character warrants exploration in some way. Some are totally bizarre in their action. Maybe, those are the most fascinating characters.

Really fine story, littlewing1957. Thank you for going inside OMT's head.

Why thanks, Toycoon!
Title: Re: Forgive me?
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 22, 2007, 04:42:25 pm
What a touching little piece, Marie! Your writing style is so natural! Keep them coming!!

We love you too, Marie!

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi.  I'll keep them coming.  Definitely!
Title: Re: Forgive me?
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 22, 2007, 04:44:35 pm
Hi littlewing,

What a true and insightful view of domestic strife.  Given how easy it is to upset us, it's a wonder that any of us are able to maintain relationships.  But some of us somehow manage to pick up on the cues.  In general I'd say that Jack was much better at reading Ennis than the reverse.  So it's comforting to see Ennis attempting to give Jack what he needs for once here, even if in this case it's a little space.

Gary

Thanks, Gary.  I had an image of OMT as this self-righteous man who felt rather guilty about the way he raised his family. And then being unable to deal with his shortcomings,  projected them onto others.  I'll have to write more about OMT.  And Cassie, as well!
Title: Re: Before the Nuptials
Post by: Dagi on July 22, 2007, 04:47:38 pm
Before the Nuptials by garycottle


..... Jack closed his eyes.  Within seconds the image of another young man came to his mind.  In his head he saw the face of Ennis Del Mar.

Now you made Ennis turn into a twink before my inner eye  :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:. Aparently Jack is quite flexible as to his taste.....

That was hot hot hot! Thank you for reposting it!

 :-* :-* :-* Dagi
Title: Re: Forgive me?
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 22, 2007, 08:52:10 pm
Oh littlewing, you tease!  What was the argument about?  Why won't Jack forgive him? We NEEEEEED a prequel to this!!  Lovely as always honey!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

 :laugh:  :laugh: Thanks, Susie!  I'll think about adding a prequel.
Title: Re: Before the Nuptials
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 22, 2007, 11:47:24 pm

Ah, you naughty boy Gary! .... I LOVE LOVE LOVE  it .... and it was very educational too .... I learned all about Dorothy!... thanks for reposting it! 

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Thanks for reposting, Gary!  This is another favorite of mine.  Extremely orginal and very well written.  Brilliant!
Title: Cassie and Carl
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 23, 2007, 02:09:33 am
Cassie and Carl by Littlewing 1957

Cassie placed a small skillet on her tiny range and turned up the flame.  She wanted to prepare dinner for her boyfriend, but he wouldn’t return her calls.  Ennis was surely back from his fishing trip, but she hadn’t heard from him.  Even Steve at the ranch, who took messages for him, confirmed that Ennis was not only in town, but was back to work.

“Well, it’s his loss!”  Cassie thought as she double battered a few chicken wings.  Her fried chicken recipe was famous in Riverton, and was certainly one of Ennis’ favorites.  She loved to see him tear the meat from the bone – one time he even licked his plate after the meal was devoured.  Cassie had half a mind to drive over to his trailer and surprise him with a dinner of fried chicken wings, cole slaw, dinner rolls and apple pie for dessert.  But she just couldn’t.  Ennis pitched a fit the last time she showed up at his place without calling ahead.

10 minutes later Cassie sat down to a meal of chicken wings and potato salad.  She decided against the cole slaw and rolls.  The apple pie was out of the question, as she was trying to lose a few pounds.  After her meal, Cassie sprawled out on her twin sized bed and thought about Ennis.  She loved him, but his neglect was really hurting her.  She was becoming depressed, and was beginning to feel bad about herself.  But just then, a forceful knocking chased Ennis Del Mar from her mind.  Cassie looked through the peep hole of her cheap apartment door and spied Carl.  Carl was just a friend, and was good for a few laughs.  Cassie opened the door and allowed Carl to enter.

“Hey, Cassie, my sis is comin’ in at the Greyhound Station in about a half an hour.”  Carl began, in an obvious rush.  “My car is in the shop, and I’m wondering if you can take me to pick her up?”  Cassie shrugged.

“Yeah, I guess so, Carl.”  Cassie answered as she moved to her bedroom to fetch her bomber jacket.  “Have a seat while I get my jacket.  You want some chicken?”

“Don’t mind if I do!”  Carl, excited at the thought of Cassie’s fried chicken.  He grabbed a wing from the kitchen table and wolfed it down.  Cassie waited until Carl wiped his greasy fingers and they headed out the door….

Title: Re: Before the Nuptials
Post by: Dagi on July 23, 2007, 06:09:16 am
Oh no, I've corrupted you.  Those small, defenseless young men in your community had better look out now.   :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

I'm glad you liked my story.  I thought it was wonderfully subversive.  Jack feels he has no choice but to enter into a hetero marriage, and he has to do it in public, too.  But there he is behind the scenes getting his knob polished by a cute boy, who happens to be the bride's very own cousin, someone she invited.  And not only that, one of Lureen's bridesmaids appears to be a lesbian.  (She doesn't have a boyfriend, and never has had one.  Hmmm)  Wonder if Lureen ever got up to anything with her.   :P

Gary

Thank you for explaining all the details, but you won´t believe it, I got them all by myself! I may use simply constructed sentences, but that is not because I´m daft  ;).

And yes, you´ve  really corrupted me  :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:.

Love, Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: louisev on July 23, 2007, 06:18:14 am
hey there, I just can't keep up with these posts on here!

Thank you everyone for posting so frequently and with such original ideas.  Now if only I could... catch up.
Title: Re: Cassie and Carl
Post by: Dagi on July 23, 2007, 06:57:17 am
Cassie and Carl by Littlewing 1957

Cassie placed a small skillet on her tiny range and turned up the flame.  She wanted to prepare dinner for her boyfriend, but he wouldn’t return her calls.  Ennis was surely back from his fishing trip, but she hadn’t heard from him.  Even Steve at the ranch, who took messages for him, confirmed that Ennis was not only in town, but was back to work.

“Well, it’s his loss!”  Cassie thought as she double battered a few chicken wings.  Her fried chicken recipe was famous in Riverton, and was certainly one of Ennis’ favorites.  She loved to see him tear the meat from the bone – one time he even licked his plate after the meal was devoured.  Cassie had half a mind to drive over to his trailer and surprise him with a dinner of fried chicken wings, cole slaw, dinner rolls and apple pie for dessert.  But she just couldn’t.  Ennis pitched a fit the last time she showed up at his place without calling ahead.

10 minutes later Cassie sat down to a meal of chicken wings and potato salad.  She decided against the cole slaw and rolls.  The apple pie was out of the question, as she was trying to lose a few pounds.  After her meal, Cassie sprawled out on her twin sized bed and thought about Ennis.  She loved him, but his neglect was really hurting her.  She was becoming depressed, and was beginning to feel bad about herself.  But just then, a forceful knocking chased Ennis Del Mar from her mind.  Cassie looked through the peep hole of her cheap apartment door and spied Carl.  Carl was just a friend, and was good for a few laughs.  Cassie opened the door and allowed Carl to enter.

“Hey, Cassie, my sis is comin’ in at the Greyhound Station in about a half an hour.”  Carl began, in an obvious rush.  “My car is in the shop, and I’m wondering if you can take me to pick her up?”  Cassie shrugged.

“Yeah, I guess so, Carl.”  Cassie answered as she moved to her bedroom to fetch her bomber jacket.  “Have a seat while I get my jacket.  You want some chicken?”

“Don’t mind if I do!”  Carl, excited at the thought of Cassie’s fried chicken.  He grabbed a wing from the kitchen table and wolfed it down.  Cassie waited until Carl wiped his greasy fingers and they headed out the door….



Hey Marie,
you made me hungry  :laugh:!!! MMM Ennis is a fool....just kidding.

I always wondered who Carl was. Now I know, thank you!

Beautiful, as always, honey. Shows that not a single person in this movie is trivial or unimportant.

Dagi
Title: Re: Cassie and Carl
Post by: Toycoon on July 23, 2007, 09:37:09 am
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“Well, it’s his loss!”  Cassie thought as she double battered a few chicken wings.

Littlewing, I really liked the way you dovetailed this story into the movie's. It makes perfect sense that Carl is just an 'acquaintance" and a diversion from Ennis for Cassie.
Ennis is so far away as he sits there barely eating his pie. Poor Cassie, she never saw it coming.
Title: Dagi's boarder trim
Post by: Toycoon on July 23, 2007, 09:40:18 am
Dagi,
I like the boarder picture (I don't know if those have a technical term or not) you have on your posts. Did you make that yourself? How'd you get that to stick?
Title: Re: Old Man Twist
Post by: Toycoon on July 23, 2007, 09:44:58 am
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And I'm probably related to her ... about 95% of Brits are descendants of royalty!!  don't worry though, I won't put on any airs and graces ... you may address me as "Ma'am" from now on!! Susie

Maw goodness! I had no idea you was a queen. Well, that explains it then, Your Royal Majesty.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on July 23, 2007, 09:49:17 am
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“Don’t wanna go... got no life in Sage... don’t want Alma... want you.”

Princess Susiebell, this is so cute. I love the way you've captured Ennis' Western syntax.

Is this a re-post? I don't recall reading this before. I'm looking forward to the saga. Thanks!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on July 23, 2007, 09:53:39 am
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The journey back to Lightening Flat was uncomfortable.  Ennis’s mind was in a spin; staying with Jack seemed like a the most natural thing to do up on Brokeback, but down here on the plains, the reality of it was entirely different, niggling doubts were working their way into his thoughts , creeping up on him like a slow cancer.

Fantastic first paragraph!

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 Either you go back home to Sage and marry your sweetheart, or …..” he flashed Ennis a smile, unzipping the fly’s on his jeans “….. It could be like this always!” releasing Ennis’ aching flesh and ducking down under the dashboard.

Mmmmm, royally nasty!

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 23, 2007, 04:14:16 pm
Hey, Louise,

it is always nice to hear that someone is reading our stuff!

And I hope anyone feels free to post a story here. Toycoon is pretty easy-going as to the three sentences rule  :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: (was there a rule?? Hm, maybe we should rather think of it as a suggestion ;D)

Dagi
Title: Bring ´em Down
Post by: Dagi on July 23, 2007, 04:16:47 pm
Hey Susie, I can´t wait to read these, but I don´t want to do it in a hurry.  Will let you know if that I love them !

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on July 23, 2007, 11:49:33 pm
Susiebell, I remember this one now! This is the story that ended with you guys barbecuing Old Man Twist!
Yeah, he deserved it; that old shithead. Outrageous, ambitious as well as delicious !
Title: Re: Dagi's boarder trim
Post by: Dagi on July 24, 2007, 01:03:32 am
Dagi,
I like the boarder picture (I don't know if those have a technical term or not) you have on your posts. Did you make that yourself? How'd you get that to stick?

Hi toycoon dear,

It is baby-easy (as we say in Germany ;)): it´s a screen cap, and you have to put it in the space in your Forum Profile Information called "Signature" (with [center ]......[/center ] around. Don´t tell me I have to expalin that to you, Toyking!

 :-* :-* :-* Dagi

For more information don´t hesitate to PM me at any time  ;D.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: cwby30 on July 24, 2007, 02:48:56 am
Evenin', Susiebell and Gary.

Well, that was just right. Good writing, just enough to set the scene and leave the rest to the old/young imagination. First time I've read about OMT being shot by one of the guys, but think it could have happened, given the way OMT behaved. 

And, liked Gary's use of "Fried Green Tomatoes" for his alternate ending. Especially with all those good church folk enjoying the meal.  And Ennis about to gag and throw up on the spot. 

Thanks again.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 24, 2007, 07:58:44 am
Evenin', Susiebell and Gary.

Well, that was just right. Good writing, just enough to set the scene and leave the rest to the old/young imagination. First time I've read about OMT being shot by one of the guys, but think it could have happened, given the way OMT behaved. 

And, liked Gary's use of "Fried Green Tomatoes" for his alternate ending. Especially with all those good church folk enjoying the meal.  And Ennis about to gag and throw up on the spot. 

Thanks again.

Howdy cwby30! Hope to see you  here more often! Enjoy yourself!

Dagi
Title: Bring ´em down
Post by: Dagi on July 24, 2007, 08:07:25 am
Susie,

I enjoyed every single line. That was quite a journey! I can recall it from IMDb......the little boy....good Ma Twist......the cabin....the peace when OMT finally was gone....what a story! Don´t you ever doubt your writing again!!!


Gary,
you bad boy  ;D.  I loved the line "the secret´s in the sauce".... :laugh:, and the sqeaking bedsprings overhead, of course  ::)...

Thank you so much for reposting this little treasure, Susie! :-* :-* :-*

Dagi
Title: A Promise
Post by: Toycoon on July 24, 2007, 09:50:54 am
A Promise - by Toycoon

On the last day, Ennis clasped Jack's hand, slid his backpack higher on his shoulder and together they began hiking to that secluded, special spot they'd found on one of their earlier 'fishing trips'; several years had elapsed but the anticipation of being together, sharing precious time with each other made them feel like giddy teenagers.

Ennis pulled the heavy blanket from the backpack and spread it out on the ground; they began to kiss, then firmly embrace, panting, slowly taking off their clothes. Jack's heart pounded in his chest as Ennis thrust his hot flesh into Jack's willing orifice.

When they were finished, Jack cleared his throat to speak but Ennis feared what Jack would say. "Ennis," began Jack, "I know we won't never have what we want..." "Jack," interrupted Ennis. "Lemme finish, ... promise me no matter what happens, no matter who finds out ... you'll never forget about me... I mean, 'us' and what we got."
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: louisev on July 24, 2007, 02:16:07 pm
Hi there Louise,

Thanks so much for your interest in our stories.  Just wanted to point out that Dagi has a "read only" thread where she archives our stories.  You can read them there without having to sift through all the banter.

But please come back here and leave messages on this thread anytime you want.  We'd love to hear from you.  And please write us a fanfic and post it here, too.   ;D

Gary

well, ironically enough, I have had to retire from the fan fic business for the most part.  I could probably get away with a drabble or two, but I am under a legal cloud, so am focusing my attention on men not named Jack and Ennis.  But don't let that stop y'all.

I hope also you will consider posting your recommendations for stories on the General Discussion thread because a lot of folks look for personal recommendations among their friends and this is a great way to start discussions and generate ideas.
Title: Re: Bring ´em down
Post by: Dagi on July 24, 2007, 03:26:18 pm
I'm so glad you liked it, Dagi.   ;D  I had lots of fun with this one.  And you can thank Fanny Flagg for the sauce line.  She's the one that wrote Fried Green Tomatoes.  If you've not seen the film version I highly recommend it.  In many ways it parallels BBM, except that it takes place in the south, and it's about the love two women have for each other.  And yes, they do end up barbecuing someone, an abusive husband.  They feed him to the lawman who comes around to investigate his disappearance.   :-X

Gary

That sounds like the sort of movie I might like! thank you, Garyhoney! D.
Title: Re: A Promise
Post by: Dagi on July 24, 2007, 04:13:26 pm
A Promise - by Toycoon

On the last day, Ennis clasped Jack's hand, slid his backpack higher on his shoulder and together they began hiking to that secluded, special spot they'd found on one of their earlier 'fishing trips'; several years had elapsed but the anticipation of being together, sharing precious time with each other made them feel like giddy teenagers.

Ennis pulled the heavy blanket from the backpack and spread it out on the ground; they began to kiss, then firmly embrace, panting, slowly taking off their clothes. Jack's heart pounded in his chest as Ennis thrust his hot flesh into Jack's willing orifice.

When they were finished, Jack cleared his throat to speak but Ennis feared what Jack would say. "Ennis," began Jack, "I know we won't never have what we want..." "Jack," interrupted Ennis. "Lemme finish, ... promise me no matter what happens, no matter who finds out ... you'll never forget about me... I mean, 'us' and what we got."


Toycoon! You are breaking your own rules  :o!! Feels good, ...huh?  ;D

Sexy and sweet little tale, thank you for sharing it!

Dagi
Title: Meadow Beauty
Post by: Dagi on July 24, 2007, 04:30:33 pm
Meadow Beauty by Dagi


Ennis stroke softly along his lover´s back, fascinated once more by the divine and at the same time earthy beauty of this man, eyes filled with rapture, Jack´s skin warm and silky and oh so sweet smelling.

His demigod took one of the tiny yellow flowers growing in the meadow, reached back, and with a mischievous smile curling his lips he placed it between his perfect, rodeo-steeled, white cheeks.

Ennis´ gasped, his view getting dizzy, and he hardly heard Jack´s husky whisper " Come and pick it...!"
Title: Re: A Promise
Post by: Toycoon on July 24, 2007, 09:46:04 pm
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Beautiful sexy sad story toycoon.  I remember this from IMDb ... it was the one that kept getting deleted .... and yet it seems so innocent now! Susie

Ya know I love 'em sad and sexy. It's practically my signature style. Thanks, Susiebell.
Title: Re: Meadow Beauty
Post by: Toycoon on July 24, 2007, 09:52:22 pm
Dagi, I didn't see this tale before. So soft, so sweet, so powerful! Plus, you stayed to only three sentences. See, I knew you could do it. You just have to apply yourself. Sometimes, I'll write several long sentences, then I'll cut it down to just three sentences and finally, I delete some of the words until I have a nice, tight fanfic. And you know how I like it nice and tight... Rarrrr!
Title: Re: Meadow Beauty
Post by: Dagi on July 24, 2007, 11:56:00 pm
Yummy, Dagi sweetheart.  Oh so sexy.  And oh so natural.  I think Jack and Ennis are right at home in an isolated meadow in the shade of jagged moutain far away from the rest of the world.  There is no place for them in civilization, but they fit right in among the wild flowers, the woods, the mountain streams, and the bears.

This is a beautiful image you've painted for us.

Gary

Thank you so much, sweetheart! You know how much I appreciate your words.
I saw the two of them so clearly in my mind, like two demigods in a hidden paradise....

Dagi
Title: Re: Meadow Beauty
Post by: Dagi on July 25, 2007, 12:01:56 am
(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/16/16_4_16.gif) Ah Dagi honey .... so beautiful and gentle and ever so slightly naughty.  Lovely romantic moment sweetheart!!  Wish he'd ask me to pick it ... I'd do it with my teeth!!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Well, I´d do it with my lips and my teeth and ... ;D.

Thank you for your lovely words, my dear Susie! I really enjoyed writing this one!

Dagi
Title: Re: Meadow Beauty
Post by: Dagi on July 25, 2007, 12:08:31 am
Dagi, I didn't see this tale before. So soft, so sweet, so powerful! Plus, you stayed to only three sentences. See, I knew you could do it. You just have to apply yourself. Sometimes, I'll write several long sentences, then I'll cut it down to just three sentences and finally, I delete some of the words until I have a nice, tight fanfic. And you know how I like it nice and tight... Rarrrr!

Toycoon, honey, thank you so much!!

Besides, if anyone apart from you ever proved that 3 sentences fanfics are possible, then it´s me  :laugh:. I can´t remember the last 3s from Susie, or Gary, or Marie....and I must know, because I´m doing the archive  ;D.

Dagi

And thanks for the tip. Next time I´m simply going to cut off the foreplay, and the afterplay, and get right to where it´s nice and tight  :laugh:!
Title: Re: Meadow Beauty
Post by: Dagi on July 25, 2007, 12:12:36 am
Toycoon, when I let my fanfic run five to ten pages you must think of me as being loose as a goose.  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_12_6.gif) (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_12_9.gif)

Gary

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_12_6.gif)(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_12_6.gif)(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_12_6.gif)

Susie, honey, we should  definitely limit the number of sentences of our momentary project, lest Toycoons imagination runs away with him!!!
Title: Re: Meadow Beauty
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 25, 2007, 01:15:50 am
Meadow Beauty by Dagi


Ennis stroke softly along his lover´s back, fascinated once more by the divine and at the same time earthy beauty of this man, eyes filled with rapture, Jack´s skin warm and silky and oh so sweet smelling.

His demigod took one of the tiny yellow flowers growing in the meadow, reached back, and with a mischievous smile curling his lips he placed it between his perfect, rodeo-steeled, white cheeks.

Ennis´ gasped, his view getting dizzy, and he hardly heard Jack´s husky whisper " Come and pick it...!"

Dagi, this is so playful and sweet!  I love it!
Title: Jack Fing Twist! (Repost)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 25, 2007, 01:19:40 am
Jack Fing Twist by Littlewing 1957

“Jack fing Twist, got it all figured out,” Ennis mumbled absently as he chased plastic utensils downstream.  Jack Twist threw up both his hands in frustration and headed inside the tent.  Ennis watched, almost amused, as Jack trudged angrily along.  Ennis had never seen Jack quite so exasperated.  He was mildly frightened at the though of Jack being pissed off, but he was also mighty aroused!

Ennis retrieved the plates and a pitcher and continued to tidy up the campsite.  Still not a peep from Jack!  It was getting dark, cooling off considerably and Ennis built a fire.  Dinner was out of the way and it was time to check on Jack.  It was time for love.

Ennis pulled back the tent flap a ways and peeked in at Jack.  He was laying in the bedroll, his back facing the tent opening.  Ennis undressed in silence and when naked, squeezed inside, snuggled close.  Jack stiffened but did not move away.  “You still mad at me?”  Ennis whispered against the nape of Jack’s neck.  He reached over and placed a tentative hand on Jack’s behind.  Jack was still wearing his jeans!  Ennis chuckled as he caressed the denim.  “Yeah, you’re still mad at me!”  Jack didn’t move or utter a sound.  Ah, here we go!  Ennis thought as he massaged Jack’s shoulders.  If I’m gonna get my lovin tonight I gotta act all sincere.  “I’m sorry, Jack,”  Ennis began.  “C’mon Bud, get undressed.  Need ya!”  No response from Jack Twist!  “Please baby?”  Ennis pleaded. Jack trembled.  The only person who had ever called him Baby was probably cooking dinner for his pa right now up at Lightning Flat.  And hearing it from Ennis Del Mar?  It was almost too much!   Jack turned to his love and searched for his lips in the dark..
Title: The Motorcycle Part 1 (Repost)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 25, 2007, 01:21:55 am
The Motorcycle by Littlewing 1957

Ennis Del Mar didn’t know an awful lot about motorcycles, but he recognized quality, and knew that the hog that pulled up next to him cost a lot of money.  Ennis loathed bikers and wondered if he would have to punch this punk who just parked his bike next to his old truck, make the biker lose a bunch of teeth!

But something about the fella on the Harley seemed rather strange.  Most bikers Ennis noticed around town had an air of menace about them, seemed low rent.  But this man was dressed in soft nappa leather pants, a black distressed leather jacket, minus the long greasy hair, the tattoos, and the shoulder duster earrings.  This guy seemed almost refined.  Ennis didn’t want any trouble, especially as he was expecting Jack, was worried that Jack was late.  Ennis turned from the biker as he stepped from his hog and removed his helmet.  “Ennis Del Mar, aren’t you going to come here and give me a kiss?”  Ennis stiffened at the familiar voice, but ran into Jack’s leather clad arms.

“You don’t mean you drove over 1600 miles on a Harley?”  Ennis was incredulous as he inspected the bike.  It was a beauty alright, and brand new.  Jack placed his backpack on the steps of Don Wroe’s cabin.  “Sure did!  It was sort of strange at first, but I got used to it.  “Come here.”  Jack sat on the top stairs of the cabin and pulled Ennis down unto his lap. “How do you like the feel of the leather?  What else can you feel down there, cowboy?  Jack began a slow grind under Ennis’ butt and folded his lover in his arms.  Jack swelled as they kissed as did Ennis.  “Let’s go for a ride, En.  I brought a helmet for you.”  Ennis wasn’t sure.  He had never been on a bike before, and even though he realized that Jack could drive just about anything, he had his doubts.  “Uuhh, I don’t know Jack, I’ve never been on one of these things before.”  Jack straddled the Harley and threw a black helmet at his love.  “Put it on baby and climb on in back of me.  Its okay, just hold onto me.  Trust me.  We’ll ride on the wings of the wind…
Title: The Motorcycle (Part 2) Repost
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 25, 2007, 01:24:01 am
The Motorcycle (Part 2) By littlewing 1957

They were back at Don Wroe’s cabin.  Ennis was working on a glass of whiskey, his feet propped on an overstuffed ottoman.  The motorcycle ride was wonderful!  Riding against the wind, Jack navigated the terrain like a master.

“I want everything tonight!” Ennis whispered to Jack who was seated at his feet, his elbows resting on Ennis’ thighs.   Jack admired Ennis tight jeans, looked in wonder at the denim hugging what he liked to hug.  “You got it, Baby.  Whatever you want.”  As Jack moved closer to his lover’s crouch, Ennis laid a firm hand on his shoulder.

“Just a minute, Jack.  Please do something for me.  Kiss me the way you did that night…you know… the second night we made love?”  I need that right now, Jack.  Take me back to that time you welcomed me with a kiss…

Title: Beans (Repost)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 25, 2007, 01:26:39 am
Beans by Littlewing 1957

Ennis rode into camp for lunch, mumbled a barely audible, 'hey there' then sat down across the fire near Jack but not close enough to look him in the eye, afraid that the erotic dream he'd had about Jack the night before would be apparent by a simple glance at his partner.

In his nocturnal encounter, Ennis was the aggressor, exploring every part of Jack's hirsute, rugged physique with pleasured hands and eager mouth; "Give it to me, Jack ... I want more, more!" moaned Ennis.

"You want more, Cowboy! " growled Jack, holding up a spoonful of lukewarm beans. "Huh?" Ennis snapped back to the present and his face turned six shades of scarlet. "Sheee-it, ain't never heard'a nobody likin' beans that much!"

“Shut up, Twist!”  Ennis mumbled as he reached for the beans.  “What you say, Cowboy?”  Jack was amused to see the flush of scarlet on Ennis’ handsome mug.   It was a rare sight, indeed!

“Give me some o them beans, Jack.  Quick, now… I ain’t playin.”  Ennis hoped his outburst would deflect his profound embarrassment.  “Okay, cowboy, hold yer horses.  I ain’t gonna eat all the beans up from yer.”

Jack rose up and positioned himself right behind Ennis.  He wrapped his arms around his lover and very silently, languidly, fed Ennis the spoonful of beans.  “That good, cowboy?”
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 25, 2007, 01:32:45 am
I hope you guys don't mind me posting this lot.   It was my ongoing saga that turned into and episode of "Dallas" towards the end!!!  It'll be fun to see it all together in one place .... and I've got to post Gary's alternate ending ... it wouldn't be complete without it!!



Bring em Down Part 1 by Susie

Time to Go Cowboy

Jack watched Ennis up on the hillside, sitting with his hat tilted over his eyes, feet shuffling around in the dirt. The tent was dismantled, horses and mules loaded up, it was time to go. He walked on over to Ennis, the temptation to lasso him and tie him onto the end of that rope was almost irresistible, but now just seemed like the wrong time for horseplay.   

Instead, he sat next to his lover and nudged him gently with his shoulder. “What is it friend?” Ennis continued to push the dirt about with his feet, head fixed down, “C’mon Ennis, talk to me”.   Ennis muttered from under his hat, “Don’t wanna go... got no life in Sage... don’t want Alma... want you.”

Jack’s heart leapt right up into his throat, overwhelmed, overjoyed, relieved, tears spilling over, grin spreading wide across his face like he’d just won first prize at the rodeo.  “C’mere Ennis” Jack kissed him real soft, pouring all his love out into that kiss.  “Here’s what we’re gonna do! When we get back to Signal, you ride on up to Lightnin’ Flat with me, we stay a couple a’ days... and we work this thing out together”.  “You bet”. Jack smiled, that was all he needed to hear.


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)




Susie, thanks for reposting this series.  It is so good to see all of the stories again!  They are just as wonderful as I remember!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 25, 2007, 01:34:02 am
Gary my love, this story wouldn’t be complete without your alternate, juicy ending!!!  Hope you don’t mind me reposting this!




Bring em Down Part 9a by Gary


At Peace: The Alternate Ending

Jack, Ennis, and Ma Twist sat up into the small hours huddled around the kitchen table drinking black coffee. They had concluded that if they called in the sheriff one of them would likely go to the state penitentiary. When Ma Twist made her proposal the boys were more or less struck dumb. They couldn’t imagine doing such a thing, but they couldn’t think of another way around the mess either. So they sat there, and with the silent moments slipping past they entered into a pact that would bind them forever.

The next day Ma Twist started making her phone calls, and the following Sunday, immediately following Easter Services, Ma Twist’s brothers and sisters in Christ arrived at the Twist ranch for a barbecue. With a beatific smile on her face, Ma Twist went around to her guests and thanked them for joining her in a repast celebrating Jesus’s triumph over death. When someone complemented her on the delicious meat, she said with a mysterious glint in her eye, “Secret’s in the sauce.”

Elvira Freelove--one of Ma Twist's oldest friends--noticed that Ennis was sitting alone at the end of the makeshift table--three sawhorses and a long piece of plywood--that was situated in front of the barn. So she went to him with the same festive bonnet she had worn every Easter for twenty years running perched on her head, and with a huge grin that was meant to be girly and warm, she asked the young man if she could fetch him a plate.

Ennis grimaced and said flatly, “I can’t eat no barbecue right now.” When Ennis’s gaze involuntarily turned toward the pit he saw Jack shoveling out mounds of savory pig flesh with a kind of gritty determination as the churchgoers filed past.

Eventually the authorities did come sniffing around, and with a shamed and hushed tone, Ma Twist explained that her husband subscribed to a magazine for wife swappers. She then pulled out one of her kitchen drawers, reached under a stack of neatly folded grocery store bags, and produced an unlikely periodical–Rocky Top Swingers. “When he proposed to put an ad in this filthy thing I told him Jesus would not approve. I try to live by the Word, you know.” Ma Twist wiped away a lone tear and declared, “He left the next day, and me and the boys ain’t seen him since.”

The officers seemed to take Ma Twist at her word, and left after eating a piece of cherry cake. When they were gone the bedsprings started to squeak overhead, causing a warm feeling came over the woman. She began singing Water Walking Jesus as she picked up her broom and headed out the door with the intention of sweeping the porch.


THE END


Gary (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)




I think about this one often, Gary!  Thanks so much for reposting!  Brilliant!
Title: Something Special
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 25, 2007, 02:12:10 am
Something Special by Littlewing 1957 (A Slice of Life)


Jack had trouble finding the spices, but the ground lamb was available at the every butcher’s shop in Childress.  He loved preparing exotic meals for Ennis.   The first night of a “fishing trip” was always special for Jack.  He was so delighted to see his lover after all the months apart that he always prepared something special in the kitchen, as well as the bedroom.

Jack asked Ennis to relax in the living room while he cooked.  Tonight he would prepare Fried Lamb Burgers: a Middle Eastern recipe he found in one of Lureen’s cookbooks.  He copied the recipe to a notebook, which was open; face up, on the kitchen counter.  Jack placed a generous amount of ground lamb into a large, steel bowl.  He mixed in fresh chopped parsley, onion, garlic, salt, 2 eggs, black pepper, cumin, turmeric, coriander and white flour.  After the lamb was mixed with the spices and flour, Jack separated the meat into 2 gigantic patties.  He poured 2 tablespoons full of sesame oil into a large skillet and added the patties while the oil was still cool.  He didn’t want a lot of burning and splatter.

The scent from the kitchen was so heavenly that Ennis stopped putting away toiletries in the medicine cabinet to go investigate.  The meat smelled so good, so exotic that he had to see what Jack was cooking.  But once inside the well-stocked kitchen, Jack shooed him out. 

“Now, now, Cowboy!”  Jack said as he ushered Ennis back out of the kitchen.  “You’re about to ruin the surprise.  I’ll call you for supper when it’s ready!”  Jack kissed Ennis tenderly and turned to go check on the meat.  When the burgers were done, Jack placed each one on a French roll, and garnished the plates with parsley.  The baked potatoes were warming in the oven, and the wine was chilled.  Jack was so excited to serve such a meal to his lover.  Ennis had the table all set when Jack exited the kitchen holding 2 plates piled high with fried lamb burgers, and baked potatoes.  Jack kissed Ennis’ cheek as he placed his plate in front of him.  He filled the wine glasses and sat down to his burger.

Ennis, intrigued by the aroma of the burgers, and quite hungry, picked up the sandwich and took a bite.  Jack couldn’t eat until he saw Ennis’ reaction.  Jack watched as his lover chewed slowly, eyes closed.

“You..you like it, Friend?”  Jack asked tentatively, nervously.  Ennis didn’t answer at first, but continued to chew.  He took another bite as Jack watched.

“Well?”  Jack asked.

“Jack, what is this?  I haven’t tasted anything like this!”  It is sooo good!”  Jack sighed audibly and told him all about the dish.  Ennis looked at his man in awe.  He was always amazed at the things Jack did to spoil him.  They ate in silence and finished off an entire bottle of wine.  After dinner Ennis was mellow from good food, fine wine, amazing company.  He pulled Jack onto his lap and cuddled him.  He held him so tight, and Jack returned the embrace.

“Is this all, Bud?”  Ennis asked as he kissed Jack’s jaw.  “You said you had something else planned for me..for us?”  Jack smiled shyly and returned Ennis’ kiss. 

“Yeah, friend.  I have a few things for you, for us in my duffle bag.  You sit here now and I’ll be back.  Just wait and see…

Title: Re: Jack Fing Twist! (Repost)
Post by: Dagi on July 25, 2007, 05:41:35 am
Jack Fing Twist by Littlewing 1957

“Jack fing Twist, got it all figured out,” Ennis mumbled absently as he chased plastic utensils downstream.  Jack Twist threw up both his hands in frustration and headed inside the tent.  Ennis watched, almost amused, as Jack trudged angrily along.  Ennis had never seen Jack quite so exasperated.  He was mildly frightened at the though of Jack being pissed off, but he was also mighty aroused!

Ennis retrieved the plates and a pitcher and continued to tidy up the campsite.  Still not a peep from Jack!  It was getting dark, cooling off considerably and Ennis built a fire.  Dinner was out of the way and it was time to check on Jack.  It was time for love.

Ennis pulled back the tent flap a ways and peeked in at Jack.  He was laying in the bedroll, his back facing the tent opening.  Ennis undressed in silence and when naked, squeezed inside, snuggled close.  Jack stiffened but did not move away.  “You still mad at me?”  Ennis whispered against the nape of Jack’s neck.  He reached over and placed a tentative hand on Jack’s behind.  Jack was still wearing his jeans!  Ennis chuckled as he caressed the denim.  “Yeah, you’re still mad at me!”  Jack didn’t move or utter a sound.  Ah, here we go!  Ennis thought as he massaged Jack’s shoulders.  If I’m gonna get my lovin tonight I gotta act all sincere.  “I’m sorry, Jack,”  Ennis began.  “C’mon Bud, get undressed.  Need ya!”  No response from Jack Twist!  “Please baby?”  Ennis pleaded. Jack trembled.  The only person who had ever called him Baby was probably cooking dinner for his pa right now up at Lightning Flat.  And hearing it from Ennis Del Mar?  It was almost too much!   Jack turned to his love and searched for his lips in the dark..


Aaahhh, Marie,  I remember this one from IMDb, and I love it! So sweet Ennis trying to persuade Jack, and I can imagine so well that Jack can´t resist once Ennis starts with endearments  ::)... thanks for reposting!!
Title: Re: The Motorcycle Part 1 (Repost)
Post by: Dagi on July 25, 2007, 05:52:05 am
The Motorcycle by Littlewing 1957

 ... “Let’s go for a ride, En.  I brought a helmet for you.”

Now what´s the helmet for ??  ;D

Sexy, sexy, Marie, and very original, as always!

I didn´t remember this one. Jack on that bike really was a surprise! Love it!

Dagi
Title: Re: Beans (Repost)
Post by: Dagi on July 25, 2007, 05:58:35 am
Beans by Littlewing 1957


....Jack rose up and positioned himself right behind Ennis.  He wrapped his arms around his lover and very silently, languidly, fed Ennis the spoonful of beans.  “That good, cowboy?”


I just love fanfics that take place up on Brokeback....and this one is very erotic! Food and sex really belong together  ;D.

Thanks for all these wonderful stories, Littlewing!  :-* :-* :-*

Dagi

Have I ever told you that I love your username? It´s so poetic!
Title: Re: Meadow Beauty
Post by: Dagi on July 25, 2007, 05:59:18 am
Dagi, this is so playful and sweet!  I love it!

 :-* thank you, my love!

Dagi
Title: Re: Beans (Repost)
Post by: Toycoon on July 25, 2007, 09:35:43 am
I just love fanfics that take place up on Brokeback....and this one is very erotic! Food and sex really belong together  ;D.

Food and sex together? I agree! "Beans" is one of Littlewing and my tag team stories. I wrote the first three lines for "Beans" and she wrote the second half. We were on a roll for a while there.

Nearly all of my stroies occur on Brokeback the first summer. There were so many moments of Jack with Ennis to fill in that weren't seen in the film, we started making up stuff. That's how this fanfic game got started.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on July 25, 2007, 09:42:15 am
Littlewing1957 wrote a wonderful part 2 to this story. I hope she can repost it and Dagi, please archive them together, if ya can.

Blue Eyes by Toycoon

Jack spotted Ennis from across the grassy field sitting alone, with his head hung low and obviously in deep thought; "Boy, that Ennis Del Mar sure is a complicated fella, wonder what he thinkin' 'bout?" 

"Blue eyes... Momma would'a liked Jack's blue eyes, she liked purty things," Ennis thought, smiling wistfully as he recollected the way his mother would sometimes gaze into his father's steely eyes; "Daddy would'a wondered why I was hanging 'round rodeo fuck ups, " That boy looks like a queer ta me." Ennis' hands tightened into fists.

Ennis' concentration broke when he felt the rope from Jack's lasso fall down around his shoulders.



Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 25, 2007, 01:54:11 pm
(http://s119.photobucket.com/albums/o126/kez4oz/aaaKKK34.jpg)

I stole that from Kerry´s Comedy Club  ;D

Dagi
Title: Re: Beans (Repost)
Post by: Dagi on July 25, 2007, 02:08:47 pm
Food and sex together? I agree! "Beans" is one of Littlewing and my tag team stories. I wrote the first three lines for "Beans" and she wrote the second half. We were on a roll for a while there.

Nearly all of my stories occur on Brokeback the first summer. There were some many moments of Jack with Ennis to fill in that weren't seen in the film, we started making up stuff. That's how this fanfic game got started.

Well, you two are a brilliant tag team, that´s for sure  :D ! Californian Vibrations, huh?

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 25, 2007, 02:26:20 pm
Littlewing1957 wrote a wonderful part 2 to this story. I hope she can repost it and Dagi, please archive them together, if ya can.

Blue Eyes by Toycoon

Jack spotted Ennis from across the grassy field sitting alone, with his head hung low and obviously in deep thought; "Boy, that Ennis Del Mar sure is a complicated fella, wonder what he thinkin' 'bout?" 

"Blue eyes... Momma would'a liked Jack's blue eyes, she liked purty things," Ennis thought, smiling wistfully as he recollected the way his mother would sometimes gaze into his father's steely eyes; "Daddy would'a wondered why I was hanging 'round rodeo fuck ups, " That boy looks like a queer ta me." Ennis' hands tightened into fists.

Ennis' concentration broke when he felt the rope from Jack's lasso fall down around his shoulders.





You know, I really admire your courage to write about one of the key scenes of the story. You perfectly conveyed the two big influences in Ennis life - unconditional love, and homophobia. In this scene, the latter wins. In the end, love wins.

Thanks for reposting! And of course I´ll archive them together!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 25, 2007, 06:36:41 pm
http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,7424.310.html (http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,7424.310.html)

Dagi--your little cowboy is 110% adorable---the best smile on the thread--beautiful eyes too---he looks like you!

Wow!! This thread is almost up to 200 pages!!!
 
 
Title: Re: Beans (Repost)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 25, 2007, 08:12:30 pm
I just love fanfics that take place up on Brokeback....and this one is very erotic! Food and sex really belong together  ;D.

Thanks for all these wonderful stories, Littlewing!  :-* :-* :-*

Dagi

Have I ever told you that I love your username? It´s so poetic!

Thanks for your kind words, Dagi.  You like my name?  It reflects my Native American hertiage. 
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on July 25, 2007, 09:32:13 pm
http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,7424.310.html (http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,7424.310.html)

Dagi--your little cowboy is 110% adorable---the best smile on the thread--beautiful eyes too---he looks like you!

Wow!! This thread is almost up to 200 pages!!!
 
 

Dagi, your little boy is adorable! He certainly has a sweet smile, just like mama.

Hiya Shasta, I see your online right this minute. I'm at work currently but I'm leaving right this second....
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 25, 2007, 09:44:16 pm
Dagi, your little boy is adorable! He certainly has a sweet smile, just like mama.

Hiya Shasta, I see your online right this minute. I'm at work currently but I'm leaving right this second....

Hi Toycoon! Are ya'll working on H.S. Musical 2 already? Hope work was good today. Did ya roller-blade today yet? It has been uncharacteristically cool here (for July) -- from 60's at night to 80's during the daytime. I fear a heat wave is on the way!!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on July 25, 2007, 10:45:07 pm
Hi Toycoon! Are ya'll working on H.S. Musical 2 already? Hope work was good today. Did ya roller-blade today yet? It has been uncharacteristically cool here (for July) -- from 60's at night to 80's during the daytime. I fear a heat wave is on the way!!

The H.S. Musical 2 dolls are already in the can. They are about to debut on the first week of September, 2007.
I didn't rollerblade today. Too tired. I will tomorrow. It is kinda cool this week. It rained here on Monday.
Rain in California in July; can you imagine?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 26, 2007, 12:12:24 am
The H.S. Musical 2 dolls are already in the can. They are about to debut on the first week of September, 2007.
I didn't rollerblade today. Too tired. I will tomorrow. It is kinda cool this week. It rained here on Monday.
Rain in California in July; can you imagine?

I know what you mean!  It rained last week here in Nor Cal, and lately the marine layer is cooling things off considerably!  I can live with 68 degree temps.  Not a problem!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 26, 2007, 12:13:55 am
http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,7424.310.html (http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,7424.310.html)

Dagi--your little cowboy is 110% adorable---the best smile on the thread--beautiful eyes too---he looks like you!

Wow!! This thread is almost up to 200 pages!!!
 
 

Hi Shasta, thanks for the compliment! But he looks more like my hubby (a bit like me, too, yes). I love his eyes! Thank goddess he has Wolfgangs´s darker lashes, and not my invisible blonde ones...

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 26, 2007, 12:16:08 am
Hi Shasta, thanks for the compliment! But he looks more like my hubby (a bit like me, too, yes). I love his eyes! Thank goddess he has Wolfgangs´s darker lashes, and not my invisible blonde ones...

Dagi

Ah Dagi, what a cutie!  And that sweet smile!  Your son looks a lot like you - that lucky young man!  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 26, 2007, 12:19:00 am
Hi Shasta, thanks for the compliment! But he looks more like my hubby (a bit like me, too, yes). I love his eyes! Thank goddess he has Wolfgangs´s darker lashes, and not my invisible blonde ones...

Dagi

Well, then, your husband must be cute too---you and he made a gorgeous child!! I bet he's so much fun -- especially at his age -- did you say 4? I loved it when my niece was little--she's 16 now!! A good girl, but not so much fun. LOL
Title: The Reading
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 26, 2007, 12:48:37 am
The Reading by Littlewing 1957

Text of a free psychic session (word for word) for a Mr. Ennis Del Mar by Remedios Songa, Clairvoyant.

Remedios:  I’m not saying you know this person, but there is a man standing at your elbow.  I can’t see his face.  He is little more than a shadow, but seems very happy to see you.

Ennis:  Oh!  What is he doing right now?

Remedios:  He’s rubbing your hair.

Ennis:  What does he want?

Remedios:  He says he doesn't want anything.  He...he tells me..what?  Oh, he says don’t mind you, that you can be difficult.  He is now holding your elbow.

Ennis:  Does he have a message for me?

Remedios:  He says he loves that your shirt is on the outside of his.  He says you’ll know what that means.

Ennis:  Is he angry with me?

Remedios:  He is rubbing your back now.  No, he says he’s not angry with you.  He also says, don’t be afraid and don’t blame yourself.  You see, he realizes that he had to die.  His life script was finished.  Nothing could be done.

Ennis:  But if I was just there for him…

Remedios:  He says no.  Even if you had been together, if you had agreed to have a life with him,  he would have died.  His time was up.

Ennis: Is he happy?

Remedios:  He says he’s very happy.  He is with many others who have gone on before him.  He is even merging.

Ennis:  Merging?

Remedios:  Yes, it is a form of physical pleasure people enjoy over on the other side.

Ennis:  (laughter) Well, tell him not to have too much fun.  Wait till I get there.

Remedios:  He thinks that’s funny.  He’s leaving now.  He has to go back.  He says he loves you..has always loved you.  He is gone.

Ennis: (rising) I thank you for your time.
Title: Re: The Reading
Post by: Toycoon on July 26, 2007, 01:20:38 am
Littlewing, your stories are becoming outrageously abstract! Your clairvoyant's name (Remedios) is so strange, it's utterly believable. Highly unusual.
Title: Re: The Reading
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 26, 2007, 01:41:35 am
Littlewing, your stories are becoming outrageously abstract! Your clairvoyant's name (Remedios) is so strange, it's utterly believable. Highly unusual.

 :laugh:  Thanks, Toycoon!  Did you see my other tale a few pages back?  I write stories these days based on how I'm feeling at the time.  The tale I wrote last night came about because I was craving something exotic and spicy.  I didn't get anything spicy, but writing "Something Special" was the next best thing.  I wrote "The Reading" because tonight my old house was creaking and settling, and I thought of ghosts walking about!  I know, I know it sounds crazy.. 
Title: Re: Something Special
Post by: Dagi on July 26, 2007, 06:06:58 am
Littlewing, I almost missed that! It was delicious! Jack nurturing Ennis, you know I love that. You put as much love into your stories as Jack puts into his meals! Beautiful and heartwarming tale. Thank you.

Dagi
Title: Re: The Reading
Post by: Dagi on July 26, 2007, 06:20:47 am
Littlewing, that one touched my heart. You know that I´m truely believing exactly this could have happened? Jack comforting Ennis, and telling him it wasn´t his fault...so sweet. And of course Jack´s merging even  in the other world. ;D

Thank you so much for sharing, honey!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 26, 2007, 06:28:08 am
Thanks for all the lovely compliments to my son!

This is my husband with our little one, Till:

(http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb38/dagi_photos/070714_Kaltenberg016WolfgangundTill.jpg)

Now you know the whole family. I wouldn´t mind seeing some pics of you, too!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on July 26, 2007, 10:05:54 am
Dag ...., couldn't have put it better myself!  Superb story toycoon .... everything Dagi just said!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Thank you kindly, ladies.
Dagi, your family is charming! Susiebell, when we gonna get a looksee at the hubby a' yers? The lucky fella.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 26, 2007, 11:02:28 am
I don't believe it! ... I thought only the British talked about the weather ... and don't even mention the word "Rain" to me ... our soggy little island is about to sink into the sea, like the lost city of Atlantis!

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/28/28_2_4v.gif)(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/28/28_2_4v.gif)(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/28/28_2_4v.gif)(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/28/28_2_4v.gif)(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/28/28_2_4v.gif)
Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif) 

Wow, I heard about that!  How are you guys holding up?  Is the rain something you're concerned about, or is it tapering off?
Title: Re: The Reading
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 26, 2007, 11:03:09 am
WOW littlewing!  I found myself reading Remedios' part with a strange hungarian accent ... the idea that Jack is standing next to him, comforting him just chokes me up .... and the merging ...... hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!  Brilliant littlewing!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

 :laugh:  :laugh: Thanks, Susiebaby!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 26, 2007, 12:37:22 pm
Susie, you two are such a cute couple!!! BTW my hubby doesn´t know either that he´s here ;D

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 26, 2007, 06:59:51 pm
Very  nice-looking families, Dagi and Susie!! Till is so cute and sweet-looking. He and Moritz are both precious. They have the most beautiful eyes and smile!!

I have no children -- and only an ex-husband......so.....you can see members of my family on this thread:


http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,11451.0.html (http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,11451.0.html)

LOL

Susie---some of your country was shown on the news here last night. They were reporting on all the flooding!!! May you soon have dry skies!!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on July 26, 2007, 11:28:05 pm
Aww, Susiebell, your hubby is a fine lookin' man. Now all you have to do is start an anonymus My Space page for him so he can become a web star!

Dagi, your men are very attractive as well. Stunning eyes on both of them!

Shasta, your baby is a cutie, too. I love terriers.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 27, 2007, 12:30:35 am
Very  nice-looking families, Dagi and Susie!! Till is so cute and sweet-looking. He and Moritz are both precious. They have the most beautiful eyes and smile!!

I have no children -- and only an ex-husband......so.....you can see members of my family on this thread:


http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,11451.0.html (http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,11451.0.html)

LOL

Susie---some of your country was shown on the news here last night. They were reporting on all the flooding!!! May you soon have dry skies!!

Thank you Shasta dear, and your Rusti looks really cute! Such soft fur! Mmmmm...

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 27, 2007, 12:32:53 am
Aww, Susiebell, your hubby is a fine lookin' man. Now all you have to do is start an annoynus My Space page for him so he can become a web star!

Dagi, your men are very attractive as well. Stunning eyes on both of them!

Shasta, your baby is a cutie, too. I love terriers.

Thank you, Toycoon! We´d love to see your face, too, while reading your posts, you know? Did I mention that before?  ;)

 Dagi
Title: Re: The Reading
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 27, 2007, 12:37:37 am
WOW littlewing!  I found myself reading Remedios' part with a strange hungarian accent ... the idea that Jack is standing next to him, comforting him just chokes me up .... and the merging ...... hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!  Brilliant littlewing!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Thanks, Susie!
Title: Re: Something Special
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 27, 2007, 12:38:41 am
Yummmm littlewing, love it ... my tummy's rumbling now!  I love this little moment of domestic bliss ... Jack shooing Ennis out of the kitchen made me smile!... and what's in the bag??

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

What's in the bag?  Oh, I'll tell you all about it later  :)
Title: Re: The Reading
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 27, 2007, 12:39:16 am
Littlewing, that one touched my heart. You know that I´m truely believing exactly this could have happened? Jack comforting Ennis, and telling him it wasn´t his fault...so sweet. And of course Jack´s merging even  in the other world. ;D

Thank you so much for sharing, honey!

Dagi

You're very welcome, Dagi.  Thanks for your kind words!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 27, 2007, 12:41:04 am
Thanks for all the lovely compliments to my son!

This is my husband with our little one, Till:

(http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/bb38/dagi_photos/070714_Kaltenberg016WolfgangundTill.jpg)

Now you know the whole family. I wouldn´t mind seeing some pics of you, too!

Dagi

Dagi, you have a lovely family!  You're very lucky!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 27, 2007, 12:52:33 am
Dagi, you have a lovely family!  You're very lucky!

Oh yes I am, and believe me I don´t take it for granted. I´m thankful every day. Thanks for your lovely words. So, do we get to know what´s in the bag today?

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 27, 2007, 01:12:25 am
Oh yes I am, and believe me I don´t take it for granted. I´m thankful every day. Thanks for your lovely words. So, do we get to know what´s in the bag today?

Dagi

Today?  Perhaps!  We'll see how it goes  :)  I may head in a different direction, though!  Has anyone heard from Gary today?  I've missed him!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 27, 2007, 03:31:14 pm
   Like Ennis, I usually assume no one will miss me if I disappear.  ;D

Gary

You insecure thing you  ;D.

Dagi  ;)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 27, 2007, 09:27:00 pm
SUSIE !!
Have fun!!! We will miss you! Is a fortnight 2 weeks or 20 days?--either way--nice long holiday!! Send pics!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 27, 2007, 09:29:59 pm

Thanks Toycoon and Susie and Dagi and Gary -- I love my dogs. And my cat!
:)
Title: Re: Sweet Nothings
Post by: Toycoon on July 27, 2007, 10:32:50 pm
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Ennis’ mood was always sombre at moments like this, but seeing Jack dressed from head to toe in soft sumptuous leather and a fake smile damn near broke his heart, “C’mere Jack” he spoke in a quite unsteady voice and pulled Jack into a tight embrace, “Gonna miss you, Rodeo”.

Oh Susiebell, three lines... I knew you could do it. I love this line. You are so good, girl!

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 27, 2007, 11:31:49 pm
Hi there littlewing.  I've been around.  It's just that I got involved in a discussion over at IMDb the other day and that ate up my online time.  And then yesterday I was out most of the day.  So I'm afraid I'm a bit behind here.  But I mean to catch up. 

Thanks for noticing that I've not posted in a while.   Like Ennis, I usually assume no one will miss me if I disappear.  ;D

Gary

Baby, you're kidding, right?  Of course we miss you when you're not here.  In fact, I get nervous when I don't see or hear from you!  :)
Title: Re: Something Special
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 27, 2007, 11:35:33 pm
Hi there Littlewing, thanks so much for reposting these fanfics.  I do remember them well.  I love the image of an embarrassed Ennis recalling an erotic dream as Jack feeds him beans.  That's very sexy, and there's something tender and loving about it as well.  And that goes for Jack Fing Twist too.  Nothing sweeter than make up sex. 

The story about Jack showing up on a Motorcycle is hot as hell.  There is something very erotic about a motorcycle.  Personally, I'd love to see Jack and Ennis riding buck naked, except for boots and helmets.  And I'd love to read about them making love with one of them bent over the bike.   ;D

Something Special was a very enjoyable story.  It was great to see the boys together in domestic bliss.  That was something that wasn't in the film or the book.  I know AP and company did this on purpose to show that there wasn't any room in civilized life for Jack and Ennis, but it seems too bad that they were always denied creature comforts.  I know that the cabin was mentioned in the film, but I picture something much more rustic than the cabin that appears in your stories, and we never actually see them there anyway.  So it was great thinking of them living together, even for a short amount of time, in a proper dwelling with a kitchen, a bathroom, a real bed, and heat.

Gary

Thanks, Gary!  I enjoy reading your kind words as much as I like writing the stories!  I'll have to work on another motorcycle story!  You really inspire me, Gary!  And the cabin?  That's mostly AU.  I can't image the actual Don Wroe's cabin being as nice as the one I write about.  But it seems so fun to have the boys in a decent setting, for once!
Title: Re: The Reading
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 27, 2007, 11:38:07 pm
Wow, littlewing, that made the hairs on the back of my neck stand up.   :D  I love the idea of Jack coming back and letting Ennis off the hook.  But do you think he'd allow himself to be let off the hook?  That boy is so stubborn.

And what's this about merging?  It sure sounds like fun.   :P  Wonder if it's anything like a Vulcan mind meld.

Thank you so much for this very enjoyable story.  And I'm so sorry it took me a couple of days to read it and comment on it.

Gary

Ah, Gary, thanks so much.  You make a good point about Ennis letting himself off the hook.  Don't worry about taking so long to read and comment.  Not a problem, sweetheart!  I'm just so glad to see you!  :)
Title: Re: Sweet Nothings
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 27, 2007, 11:40:02 pm
Sweet Nothings by Susie

It was time to go, Ennis’ bags were loaded up on the back of the truck and Jack’s few possessions were safely secured to the Harley.

Ennis’ mood was always sombre at moments like this, but seeing Jack dressed from head to toe in soft sumptuous leather and a fake smile damn near broke his heart, “C’mere Jack” he spoke in a quite unsteady voice and pulled Jack into a tight embrace, “Gonna miss you, Rodeo”.

“Gonna miss you too, my love” Jack smiled, turning quickly before a bemused Ennis had the chance to object to his last words, mounted his bike, glanced back one last time and rode off down the dirt track.


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


(http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s31/Susiebell_album/Glitter/i128054139_62688.gif)Whoo hoooo! 3 sentences! … just for you toycoon!!
Gonna miss you guys,  see you in a fortnight! (http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s31/Susiebell_album/Glitter/th60bce1fe.gif)



Beautiful, Susie!  Thanks for writing another Chapter to the motorcycle saga.  We'll miss you, as well!  Have a good time, Babe!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on July 27, 2007, 11:40:50 pm
http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,10857.100.html (http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,10857.100.html)

Here's the magnet that Toycoon crafted for us in case ya'll wanna see it on my fridge.  ;D
Title: Comfort
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 28, 2007, 12:02:12 am
Comfort by Littlewing1957

3 months since the last fishing trip and Jack Twist is in hell.  He is all alone in his big, fancy house, but the trappings of prosperity can’t comfort him.  He misses his lover.  His bed is empty, as Lureen and Bobby are visiting her parents for the weekend.  Jack didn’t want to go.  It is just as well as he wasn’t invited.

Jack is grateful that he has an unlimited reserve of memories to sustain him in times like these.  He pictured a prone Ennis Del Mar lying on a bed - most likely the king sized number in Don Wroe’s cabin – naked, his manhood pointing toward the ceiling.  His mouth always watered at the sight of Ennis’ cock shooting straight up, waiting to be devoured.  His eyes watered now at the memory.

In his mind Jack tongued his lover, marveled at the sweet taste of him.  His body reacted rather strangely, though!  Jack noticed that he was sucking his tongue!  He was rather ashamed, as he thought he stopped sucking his tongue in the 4th grade.  He remembered using that part of his body to comfort himself whenever he wanted physical contact and there was none.  Jack made peace with it.  A tongue is no substitute for Ennis’ cock, but in a few months he would have the real thing.  Jack turned over in his bed and fell asleep.
Title: Re: Comfort
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 28, 2007, 01:41:34 am
Hi littlewing,

This is so graphic and sexual, but sad at the same time.  And that tongue sucking thing is just raw.  Very interesting mix of emotions.  (BTW, Jack's mouth isn't the only one watering.   ;) )

Gary

 :laugh:  :laugh: Thanks, Gary!
Title: Re: Jack Gets It Right
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 28, 2007, 01:43:41 am
Jack Gets It Right by garycottle

Ennis refused to help, so Jack was left to pack everything up all by himself.

While Jack disassembled their summer home, his friend sat up on the hill above camp and pouted like a small boy who had just seen his pup run over by a car.

Jack went up to Ennis when his work was done and sat beside him–close, but not too close–and there he waited patiently in somber, respectful silence until the young man put his arms around him and began to sob.

Beautifully told, Gary!  I'm so glad you showed us Jack getting it right!  It's about time we see Jack figuring it out!  :) 
Title: Re: Jack Gets It Right
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 28, 2007, 01:56:40 am
Thank you, littlewing.  Did you notice it was only three sentences?  I wanted Toycoon to know that I can be just as tight as anybody when I want to be.   ;D

Gary

Yes, I did notice, Babe!  And the 3 sentence length took me by surprise.  I had to go take a second look - I thought Toycoon wrote it!  Great story, Gary!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 28, 2007, 12:58:59 pm
I was away for 36 hours and nobody missed me. Actually this was a test  ;D, but I didn´t hold out to the end. So, here I am again.

Dagi
Title: Re: Sweet Nothings
Post by: Dagi on July 28, 2007, 01:02:28 pm
Sweet Nothings by Susie

It was time to go, Ennis’ bags were loaded up on the back of the truck and Jack’s few possessions were safely secured to the Harley.

Ennis’ mood was always sombre at moments like this, but seeing Jack dressed from head to toe in soft sumptuous leather and a fake smile damn near broke his heart, “C’mere Jack” he spoke in a quite unsteady voice and pulled Jack into a tight embrace, “Gonna miss you, Rodeo”.

“Gonna miss you too, my love” Jack smiled, turning quickly before a bemused Ennis had the chance to object to his last words, mounted his bike, glanced back one last time and rode off down the dirt track.


Susie

That was really sweet, Susie! "Gonna miss you too, my love" - why should Ennis object to such an endearment :D?

Thank you for this lovely 3s!

Dagi
Title: Re: Comfort
Post by: Dagi on July 28, 2007, 01:07:42 pm
Comfort by Littlewing1957

3 months since the last fishing trip and Jack Twist is in hell.  He is all alone in his big, fancy house, but the trappings of prosperity can’t comfort him.  He misses his lover.  His bed is empty, as Lureen and Bobby are visiting her parents for the weekend.  Jack didn’t want to go.  It is just as well as he wasn’t invited.

Jack is grateful that he has an unlimited reserve of memories to sustain him in times like these.  He pictured a prone Ennis Del Mar lying on a bed - most likely the king sized number in Don Wroe’s cabin – naked, his manhood pointing toward the ceiling.  His mouth always watered at the sight of Ennis’ cock shooting straight up, waiting to be devoured.  His eyes watered now at the memory.

In his mind Jack tongued his lover, marveled at the sweet taste of him.  His body reacted rather strangely, though!  Jack noticed that he was sucking his tongue!  He was rather ashamed, as he thought he stopped sucking his tongue in the 4th grade.  He remembered using that part of his body to comfort himself whenever he wanted physical contact and there was none.  Jack made peace with it.  A tongue is no substitute for Ennis’ cock, but in a few months he would have the real thing.  Jack turned over in his bed and fell asleep.


Marie, your writing is so fascinating. This was sweet and erotic and sad and comforting at the same time. This was so much like the Jack I figure in my mind.
Thank you!

Dagi
Title: Re: Jack Gets It Right
Post by: Dagi on July 28, 2007, 01:14:34 pm
Jack Gets It Right by garycottle

Ennis refused to help, so Jack was left to pack everything up all by himself.

While Jack disassembled their summer home, his friend sat up on the hill above camp and pouted like a small boy who had just seen his pup run over by a car.

Jack went up to Ennis when his work was done and sat beside him–close, but not too close–and there he waited patiently in somber, respectful silence until the young man put his arms around him and began to sob.


Gary,

I read your post about what Jack should have done, so sweet to read it as a story now!
I knew you can be tight  ;D! (Quote Gary: the word ´power bottom´ comes to my mind)

Dagi
Title: Re: Jack Gets It Right
Post by: Dagi on July 28, 2007, 04:34:30 pm
Three sentences, and no semicolons.  We're talkin' shoehorn kind of tight here.   ;D

Thanks so much Dagi sweetheart.  I'm really glad you liked it, and thanks for telling me you read my piece over at IMDb.  I seriously do think that Jack made a huge mistake in the way he handled their departure from Brokeback, and I get the feeling that one of the reasons Ennis was so stubborn about giving into Jack after that is because Jack let him down on that day.

Ennis had given into Jack up on Brokeback.  He swallowed all of his fear and self-loathing and he gave himself over to Jack.  In that second tent scene, Ennis went in willingly.  And he let Jack take charge. 

Ennis wanted Jack to tell him how to handle their departure, too.  He wanted Jack to fix it, because he suddenly realized that he didn't want the summer to end, ever.  He may have agreed to a "one shot thing" at the beginning, but he knew he wanted more when it was time to go down the mountain.  You could plainly see that all over his face.  But Jack didn't make the offer.  He pretended like their parting was nothing, a joke even.  And that crushed Ennis.  And I don't think that Ennis ever fully trusted Jack again.

Gary

And can you please tell me why talking about this still brings tears to my eyes and chokes me up and makes me all emotional and makes me want to yell at them and grab them by their shoulders and shake them until they wake up and tell each other what they are feeling? It´s crazy....

shoehorn? outch :o
Title: Re: Comfort
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 29, 2007, 01:32:45 am
Marie, your writing is so fascinating. This was sweet and erotic and sad and comforting at the same time. This was so much like the Jack I figure in my mind.
Thank you!

Dagi

Thank you, Dagi.  And who says we didn't miss you?  I felt your absence, make no mistake about it!  :)
Title: Re: Jack Gets It Right
Post by: Toycoon on July 29, 2007, 02:07:16 am
Thank you, littlewing.  Did you notice it was only three sentences?  I wanted Toycoon to know that I can be just as tight as anybody when I want to be.   ;D

Gary

Gary, I never doubted your tautness for a moment. I wanted to be sure you weren't leaky! :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 29, 2007, 10:39:21 am
My 600th post! And thank you, Littlewing, honey, you see I´m just as insecure as Gary  ::)!

Dagi  ;D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on July 29, 2007, 11:01:31 am
I was away for 36 hours and nobody missed me. Actually this was a test  ;D, but I didn´t hold out to the end. So, here I am again.

Dagi

Where have ya been, Dagi? You don't have to test us, we're loyal through and though!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 29, 2007, 01:13:36 pm
Where have ya been, Dagi? You don't have to test us, we're loyal through and though!

I know, Toycoon, it was a joke. My absence must have had something to do with my kids and my household and my excessive PM writing .

Dagi
Title: Clouds
Post by: Toycoon on July 30, 2007, 09:20:03 am
Clouds by Toycoon

Lying in the warm heather, face up and head to head, Jack and Ennis looked like pair of Siamese twins joined at the crown and despite the close proximity of their heads, their minds could not have been further apart.

Pointing to the sky, Ennis remarked about the clouds, "That one looks like a sheep... or a horse or a camel or... a coyote...," his voice trailing off and his mood suddenly going dark.

"Well, I see a big bottle of whiskey and a cowboy, no wait, two cowboys and shee-it, they're matin'!" giggled Jack, flipping over then propping himself up on his elbows and kissing Ennis' forehead, the bridge of his nose and concentrating on his parted lips.
Title: Re: Clouds
Post by: Dagi on July 30, 2007, 01:19:07 pm
Clouds by Toycoon

Lying in the warm heather, face up and head to head, Jack and Ennis looked like pair of Siamese twins joined at the crown and despite the close proximity of their heads, their minds could not have been further apart.

Pointing to the sky, Ennis remarked about the clouds, "That one looks like a sheep... or a horse or a camel or... a coyote...," his voice trailing off and his mood suddenly going dark.

"Well, I see a big bottle of whiskey and a cowboy, no wait, two cowboys and shee-it, they're matin'!" giggled Jack, flipping over then propping himself up on his elbows and kissing Ennis' forehead, the bridge of his nose and concentrating on his parted lips.

Hi Toycoon,

I remember this from imdb, and it has always been one of my favorite of your superb 3s pieces! Sweet and ....sweet ......and sweet! I love Jack so much, and most of all I love him for loving his man so much. Thank you, big brother!

Dagi
Title: Cooked Goose
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 30, 2007, 08:46:47 pm
Cooked Goose by Littlewing 1957

Ennis rode into camp unusually chipper, whistling a happy tune.   Jack was leaning down, tending the fire, making it ready to cook a can of beans.  Ennis dismounted and walked up behind his lover, hiding something behind his back.  Jack turned to face him, delighted to see Ennis in such a good mood.

“What’s got into you, Friend?”  Jack asked as Ennis continued to whistle.  Ennis pulled a small burlap bag from behind his back, and handed it to Jack.

“Well, you was always goin’ on about how you’re sick of beans.  I got a surprise for you, Bud!”  Jack opened the sack, and whistled himself! 

“Why, Ennis, this here is a goose!”  Where in the hell did you get a goose?"  Jack asked, amused now.

“Outta the sky, dumbass!  Where do you think I got em?”  Ennis said as he made a gesture of firing a rifle into the heavens.   Jack laughed and placed the goose next to the can of beans.  They would eat good tonight.

Jack knew how to dress a goose from watching his ma.  Mrs. Twist prepared goose only for special occasions.  Jack never told anyone, but he liked the smell of the goose’s innards as his mom squeezed the entrails from the bird.  Jack plucked, disemboweled, and seasoned the bird as best he could.  When Ennis sat down to eat, he had a feast of stone biscuits, beans, and goose.  After the meal was finished, both boys sat together, shoulder –to-shoulder in companionable silence.  Jack held Ennis’ hand and coughed a bit.

“Hey, Bud, you ain’t comin’ down with a cold, are ya?”  Ennis asked as Jack continued to cough.

“I don’t know, En, I hope not!”  Jack answered between coughs.  Ennis rose from the ground and fetched the pot that Jack used to cook the goose.  He dug his fingers into the goose fat and turned toward his lover.  Jack saw Ennis’ fingers covered with fat and backed away.

“What are you gonna do with that?”  Jack asked, hands in front of him, warding Ennis off.

“Look, Bud, just trust me!"  Ennis began as he unbuttoned Jack’s shirt.  Jack relaxed and let Ennis have his way.  He was never one to refuse his lover’s touch! 

“The goose grease is good for fightin’ off colds.  My ma used to rub us down with the stuff whenever we started coughin.”  Jack was still as Ennis rubbed the fat onto his chest.

“There!”  Ennis said once the goose grease was all absorbed.  “I guarantee you’ll feel better come tomorrow.  If not, I’ll put some more on you.”  Jack wasn’t crazy about the smell of the goose fat, and he never heard of this particular home remedy, but he was willing to give it a try.  It wouldn’t do to come down with a cold or the flu - too much work to be done.   

Evening and Ennis was preparing to leave.  Jack packed him a snack of stone biscuits, and what was left of the goose.  Watching Ennis load up the horse made Jack very horny! 

“Listen friend, can’t you stay for just an hour or so more?”  Jack whispered in his lover’s ear.  I have a bit more of that goose fat handy.  I think I know what else we can use it for!”  Jack winked at his lover, who smiled knowingly.  Ennis followed Jack into the tent.


Title: Re: Clouds
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 30, 2007, 08:47:51 pm
Clouds by Toycoon

Lying in the warm heather, face up and head to head, Jack and Ennis looked like pair of Siamese twins joined at the crown and despite the close proximity of their heads, their minds could not have been further apart.

Pointing to the sky, Ennis remarked about the clouds, "That one looks like a sheep... or a horse or a camel or... a coyote...," his voice trailing off and his mood suddenly going dark.

"Well, I see a big bottle of whiskey and a cowboy, no wait, two cowboys and shee-it, they're matin'!" giggled Jack, flipping over then propping himself up on his elbows and kissing Ennis' forehead, the bridge of his nose and concentrating on his parted lips.

Beautiful, Toycoon!  Tell me, did I write a sequel to this one?  It sounds mighty familiar!
Title: Re: Cooked Goose
Post by: Toycoon on July 30, 2007, 11:33:14 pm
Bizarre story, littlewing1957. It reminds me of the 'Little Racals' for some strange reason. The episode where Jack has to 'grease' Weezer with goose fat (!). Jack talks Mary into rubbing the goose fat on him and she ends up making Chubby do it.
Bizarre, just bizarre!
Title: Re: Clouds
Post by: Toycoon on July 30, 2007, 11:36:43 pm
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I remember this from imdb, and it has always been one of my favorite of your superb 3s pieces! Sweet and ....sweet ......and sweet! I love Jack so much, and most of all I love him for loving his man so much.


Thank you. I like this one, too. I reminds me how fun and goofy Jack can be.

Quote
Thank you, big brother!

Dagi

Big brother? That's cute. I have three little brothers already so I have lots of experience.
Title: Re: Clouds
Post by: Toycoon on July 30, 2007, 11:39:07 pm
Beautiful, Toycoon!  Tell me, did I write a sequel to this one?  It sounds mighty familiar!

Hi Littlewing,
I don't recall whether you did or not. Well, it's still light out; it's ain't too late to do so now.
Title: Re: Cooked Goose
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 31, 2007, 12:16:33 am
Bizarre story, littlewing1957. It reminds me of the 'Little Racals' for some strange reason. The episode where Jack has to 'grease' Weezer with goose fat (!). Jack talks Mary into rubbing the goose fat on him and she ends up making Chubby do it.
Bizarre, just bizarre!

Well thanks, Babe...I guess!  :laugh:  Hmmm..I missed that Little Rascal's episode!  :laugh:
Title: Re: Cooked Goose
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 31, 2007, 12:17:55 am
Outta the sky, dumbass.

I loved that, littlewing.  Did Jack think Ennis walked off the mountain and bought a goose at the supermarket?   :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

I think I've heard of the goose fat remedy, but my mother never used it on me.  She did however put Vick's salve on my chest when I had a chest cold.  Your story really brought those memories back in focus.  Just like Jack, I wasn't crazy about the smell, but going through the ritual sure made me feel loved.

And I sure appreciated what Jack was proposing there in the end.   ;D  He must not have been too sick, huh?   :P

Gary

Thanks, Gary!  My mom used to rub us down with goose grease.  I don't know what made me think of it!  I got a lot of Vick's chest rubs, also!
Title: Re: Clouds
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 31, 2007, 12:20:19 am
Hi Littlewing,
I don't recall whether you did or not. Well, it's still light out; it's ain't too late to do so now.

Cool.  I'll work on it.  Most likely tomorrow!
Title: Re: Cooked Goose
Post by: Dagi on July 31, 2007, 01:39:07 am
Cooked Goose by Littlewing 1957



“Why, Ennis, this here is a goose!”  Where in the hell did you get a goose?"  Jack asked, amused now.



 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: Typical for Jack to ask such a dumb ass question!

My mother used grease from pork, and I wasn´t "crazy about the smell" either :P. I still use it for my children, and it does help.

And that sexy twist at the end was nice  ;D ! Lovely story, Littlewing dear!!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 31, 2007, 07:35:02 am
This one is for you, sweetheart  ;D. Oh, and I want to add that typos happen to happen while chatting, so don´t blame me  ;).


Chat by Dagi


Cowboy has entered the chat room

Rodeo  : Hi love, you are late.

Cboy    : Gnight darlin. Now what am I supposed to do?

Rodeo  : chat.

Rodeo  : although I do not exactly feel like chatting tonight.

Cboy    : why´s that?

Rodeo  : I downloaded me a trojan virus and now I don´t know how to get rid of the fuckin piece a shit

Cboy    : a virus??? you okay???

Rodeo  : the computer, dumb ass

Cboy    : ? ? ?

Rodeo  : I wanted to download a video, and clicked somewhere I better had not clicked, and now I can´t get back to the original setting of my homepage                    - fuck it!

Cboy    : Video?? homepage???

Cboy    : Rodeo?

Cboy    : Jack, you gone?

Rodeo  : nope

Cboy    : what homepage are you talking about?

Rodeo  : you don´t want to know, believe me. Anyway, I had better be going now, call that friend of mine, ya know that computer freak in Atlanta, maybe he                can help me

Cboy    : hey I was asking what homepage you are talking about?

Cboy    : Rodeo?

Cboy    : you gone??

Rodeo  : ok I send you the link but don´t make the same mistake and don´t blame me if you don´t  like it

Rodeo  : and make sure you´re alone in the room when you open it

Rodeo  : bye, TTYL baby!

Cboy    : ? ? ?


Rodeo has left the chatroom
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 31, 2007, 10:44:21 am
:laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

I'm loving this, Dagi.  This is so funny.  And I can imagine Jack and Ennis "chatting" this way.  Jack would be the one to try computers first, but he'd make mistakes along the way.  And Ennis would reluctantly give it a go only after Jack cajoles him, and he'd be clueless and expect Jack to guide him.  This is exactly how they were.

Thanks for this very entertaining story.

Gary

P.S. Don't know why but this one strikes a very personal cord with me.   :-X


Don´t know why either!  ;D ;D ;D

I´m glad you found it funny, Gary! Thanks for your lovely comment. You know, I thought "it is 10:40 in VW, he must have read it now"  ;D

Love, Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Brokeback_Dev on July 31, 2007, 11:58:05 am
THis is fun.  I'm not much into writing fiction, but I do like to read it.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on July 31, 2007, 02:01:48 pm
THis is fun.  I'm not much into writing fiction, but I do like to read it.

Thanks for letting us know! It´s always nice to get some feedback.

Dagi
Title: Re: Cooked Goose
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 01, 2007, 01:18:49 am
:laugh: :laugh: :laugh: Typical for Jack to ask such a dumb ass question!

My mother used grease from pork, and I wasn´t "crazy about the smell" either :P. I still use it for my children, and it does help.

And that sexy twist at the end was nice  ;D ! Lovely story, Littlewing dear!!

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi!  You always say the nicest things!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 01, 2007, 01:21:05 am
This one is for you, sweetheart  ;D. Oh, and I want to add that typos happen to happen while chatting, so don´t blame me  ;).


Chat by Dagi


Cowboy has entered the chat room

Rodeo  : Hi love, you are late.

Cboy    : Gnight darlin. Now what am I supposed to do?

Rodeo  : chat.

Rodeo  : although I do not exactly feel like chatting tonight.

Cboy    : why´s that?

Rodeo  : I downloaded me a trojan virus and now I don´t know how to get rid of the fuckin piece a shit

Cboy    : a virus??? you okay???

Rodeo  : the computer, dumb ass

Cboy    : ? ? ?

Rodeo  : I wanted to download a video, and clicked somewhere I better had not clicked, and now I can´t get back to the original setting of my homepage                    - fuck it!

Cboy    : Video?? homepage???

Cboy    : Rodeo?

Cboy    : Jack, you gone?

Rodeo  : nope

Cboy    : what homepage are you talking about?

Rodeo  : you don´t want to know, believe me. Anyway, I had better be going now, call that friend of mine, ya know that computer freak in Atlanta, maybe he                can help me

Cboy    : hey I was asking what homepage you are talking about?

Cboy    : Rodeo?

Cboy    : you gone??

Rodeo  : ok I send you the link but don´t make the same mistake and don´t blame me if you don´t  like it

Rodeo  : and make sure you´re alone in the room when you open it

Rodeo  : bye, TTYL baby!

Cboy    : ? ? ?


Rodeo has left the chatroom

What a great story, Dagi!  Very original and fun to read.  I can just imagine our boys chatting this way!  I enjoyed reading every word!

Hey, I haven't posted a story in about 24 hours!  :laugh:  I'm falling behind!  I gotta make up for lost time!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 01, 2007, 01:22:32 am
THis is fun.  I'm not much into writing fiction, but I do like to read it.

Good to have you here, BrokebackDev!  Come see us again!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Brokeback_Dev on August 01, 2007, 01:45:03 am
LittleWing, Gary and Dagi thank you for the warm welcome.  I only wish I could have seen it earlier.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 01, 2007, 06:29:06 am
What a great story, Dagi!  Very original and fun to read.  I can just imagine our boys chatting this way!  I enjoyed reading every word!

Hey, I haven't posted a story in about 24 hours!  :laugh:  I'm falling behind!  I gotta make up for lost time!


Thank you, Marie! It was fun to write! And I was missing your story of the night, yes!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on August 01, 2007, 09:25:10 am
Howdy and welcome Brokeback Dev,
Nice to know ya! Stay a spell, pull up a log, relax and read some nasty fiction by the firelight.

Toycoon
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on August 01, 2007, 09:36:11 am
This one is for you, sweetheart  ;D. Oh, and I want to add that typos happen to happen while chatting, so don´t blame me  ;).


Chat by Dagi


Cowboy has entered the chat room

Rodeo  : Hi love, you are late.

Cboy    : Gnight darlin. Now what am I supposed to do?

Rodeo  : chat.

Rodeo  : although I do not exactly feel like chatting tonight.

Cboy    : why´s that?

Rodeo  : I downloaded me a trojan virus and now I don´t know how to get rid of the fuckin piece a shit

Cboy    : a virus??? you okay???

Rodeo  : the computer, dumb ass

Cboy    : ? ? ?

Rodeo  : I wanted to download a video, and clicked somewhere I better had not clicked, and now I can´t get back to the original setting of my homepage                    - fuck it!

Cboy    : Video?? homepage???

Cboy    : Rodeo?

Cboy    : Jack, you gone?

Rodeo  : nope

Cboy    : what homepage are you talking about?

Rodeo  : you don´t want to know, believe me. Anyway, I had better be going now, call that friend of mine, ya know that computer freak in Atlanta, maybe he                can help me

Cboy    : hey I was asking what homepage you are talking about?

Cboy    : Rodeo?

Cboy    : you gone??

Rodeo  : ok I send you the link but don´t make the same mistake and don´t blame me if you don´t  like it

Rodeo  : and make sure you´re alone in the room when you open it

Rodeo  : bye, TTYL baby!

Cboy    : ? ? ?


Rodeo has left the chatroom

Dagi, your story is hilarious! Very clever, too. I didn't 'get it' at first. I thought it was a 'real' chat session. Boy, how dense am I?
How old would those two characters be by now? (I don't do math, you know). It's about time Jack and Ennis figgered out how to use the computer; my mom is still afraid of the answering machine! I should talk; I resisted the computer for a loooong time before I succumbed to it's magical powers. Excellent, Midwife Dagi!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 01, 2007, 02:09:48 pm
Dagi, your story is hilarious! Very clever, too. I didn't 'get it' at first. I thought it was a 'real' chat session. Boy, how dense am I?
How old would those two characters be by now? (I don't do math, you know). It's about time Jack and Ennis figgered out how to use the computer; my mom is still afraid of the answering machine! I should talk; I resisted the computer for a loooong time before I succumbed to it's magical powers. Excellent, Midwife Dagi!

Thanks for your nice words, Toycoon dear!  I´m a complete idiot in computer things and up to now I have only once in my life joined a chat . I entered the chatroom and there was Louise van Hine, and I asked her what I was supposed to do, and she answered "chat". So the first lines were inspired by a real life experience. Well, not only the first lines  ;D.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on August 01, 2007, 02:15:02 pm
Very cute premise, Dagi!

If the boys were 19 in 1963, they'd be 63 years old now---is that right, Toycoon? They'd have been born in 1944.

Still young enough to learn to use the computer, Ennis!
  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 01, 2007, 03:42:12 pm
Very cute premise, Dagi!

If the boys were 19 in 1963, they'd be 63 years old now---is that right, Toycoon? They'd have been born in 1944.

Still young enough to learn to use the computer, Ennis!
  :)

Hi Shasta!  Nice to see you here! Thanks for doing the maths for us!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on August 01, 2007, 03:52:46 pm
 ;D

**Just so I don't have to do no algebra**   :P
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on August 01, 2007, 04:34:37 pm
Check out David and Melissa's discussion about "plot bunnies". It reminded me of ya'll --Dagi, Toycoon, Gary, Susie, Littlewing, and other writers on the thread. I just imagine you have plot bunnies visit quite often!  ;)

http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,4739.1850.html (http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,4739.1850.html)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 01, 2007, 04:56:32 pm
 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

My plot "bunnies" rather look like that:

(http://www.smileygarden.de/smilie/Tiere/89.gif)  (http://www.smileygarden.de/smilie/Tiere/372.gif)   (http://www.smileygarden.de/smilie/Tiere/2.gif) (http://www.smileygarden.de/smilie/Tiere/269.gif)  (http://www.smileygarden.de/smilie/Tiere/101.gif)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on August 01, 2007, 06:48:39 pm
:laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

My plot "bunnies" rather look like that:

(http://www.smileygarden.de/smilie/Tiere/89.gif)  (http://www.smileygarden.de/smilie/Tiere/372.gif)   (http://www.smileygarden.de/smilie/Tiere/2.gif) (http://www.smileygarden.de/smilie/Tiere/269.gif)  (http://www.smileygarden.de/smilie/Tiere/101.gif)

 :laugh: Those will really keep you awake!!
Title: One Night up on Brokeback
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 01, 2007, 10:32:55 pm
One Night up On Brokeback by Littlewing 1957

Late one afternoon up on Brokeback Ennis and Jack were enjoying a bottle of whiskey on shares after a dinner of beans, peaches and coffee.  Ennis shot a small rabbit up on the mountain, but it was “putrid!”  Jack skinned the poor rabbit and found its skin was coated in yellow pus!  The poor animal's hide almost fell apart in Jack’s hands.  No meat for them that night!

It was okay.  The beans were filling, and the peaches made for a nice dessert.  Jack sat beside Ennis, and neither spoke.  Nothing needed to be said as they watched the sun begin its descent.  They drank their whiskey, enjoyed the moment.   

The spiders up on Brokeback were plentiful and, to the boys' dismay, rather aggressive.  Ennis removed his shirt hours before the meal, and felt a small prick on his upper forearm.  He slapped at the spider, and felt a small amount of blood drip down to his fingers.  Jack rubbed his lover’s arm and looked down to the ground where the bug fell dead.  Jack rose from the log where he and Ennis sat and climbed into the tent for some sort of ointment to spread on Ennis’ bite.  Jack didn’t want the bite to develop a bubble, as often happened.  Ennis didn’t see, but Jack removed the good sized black bug from the ground and carried it into the tent.  He didn’t know what kind of spider he held, and he didn't care.  He also couldn't say what made him do it, but Jack held the bug’s carcass and pulled it apart, piece by piece.  He angrily stomped what was left of the spider, and left the tent with a bottle of alcohol to tend to his lover.
Title: Re: One Night up on Brokeback
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 01, 2007, 11:50:52 pm
Hmmm  Littlewing, this story is kind of disturbing.  Are you okay?  Are the darker forces of nature too much with you tonight?

It's interesting that you reminded us that death, decay and destruction were all around the boys up on Brokeback, even though they, and we, tend to think of it as a kind of Eden.

Gary

 :laugh:  :laugh: Gary, I don't know!!!  I can't say why I wrote this story.  I had a decent day at work; even got off early to spend some time with Maria.  But this tale just sort of...well, materialized!
Title: Re: One Night up on Brokeback
Post by: Dagi on August 02, 2007, 12:29:18 am
One Night up On Brokeback by Littlewing 1957

Late one afternoon up on Brokeback Ennis and Jack were enjoying a bottle of whiskey on shares after a dinner of beans, peaches and coffee.  Ennis shot a small rabbit up on the mountain, but it was “putrid!”  Jack skinned the poor rabbit and found its skin was coated in yellow pus!  The poor animal's hide almost fell apart in Jack’s hands.  No meat for them that night!

It was okay.  The beans were filling, and the peaches made for a nice dessert.  Jack sat beside Ennis, and neither spoke.  Nothing needed to be said as they watched the sun begin its descent.  They drank their whiskey, enjoyed the moment.   

The spiders up on Brokeback were plentiful and, to the boys' dismay, rather aggressive.  Ennis removed his shirt hours before the meal, and felt a small prick on his upper forearm.  He slapped at the spider, and felt a small amount of blood drip down to his fingers.  Jack rubbed his lover’s arm and looked down to the ground where the bug fell dead.  Jack rose from the log where he and Ennis sat and climbed into the tent for some sort of ointment to spread on Ennis’ bite.  Jack didn’t want the bite to develop a bubble, as often happened.  Ennis didn’t see, but Jack removed the good sized black bug from the ground and carried it into the tent.  He didn’t know what kind of spider he held, and he didn't care.  He also couldn't say what made him do it, but Jack held the bug’s carcass and pulled it apart, piece by piece.  He angrily stomped what was left of the spider, and left the tent with a bottle of alcohol to tend to his lover.


Hm, I was expecting something completely different after reading the title ::).

You found it disturbing, Gary?  :P :P :P I´ve just had enough of pus with my cat gotten bitten; he developed a big bubble full of that stuff on his poor bum. And spiders......don´t like them so much either. Although ours don´t bite.

But.........Jack mad at a spider that had bitten his lover, so mad tht he did what he did, that warms my heart  :D. This love was what made Brokeback an Eden, despite everything else.

Thanks for that heartwarming story   ;)!

Dagi

Title: Re: One Night up on Brokeback
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 02, 2007, 01:21:37 am
Hm, I was expecting something completely different after reading the title ::).

You found it disturbing, Gary?  :P :P :P I´ve just had enough of pus with my cat gotten bitten; he developed a big bubble full of that stuff on his poor bum. And spiders......don´t like them so much either. Although ours don´t bite.

But.........Jack mad at a spider that had bitten his lover, so mad tht he did what he did, that warms my heart  :D. This love was what made Brokeback an Eden, despite everything else.

Thanks for that heartwarming story   ;)!

Dagi



This is the feeling I wanted to convey, Dagi!  Jack so angry that the bug hurt his lover that he ripped it to shreads.  I can really image Jack doing something like this!  Thanks for your kind words!
Title: Re: One Night up on Brokeback
Post by: Toycoon on August 02, 2007, 01:55:00 am
Another incredibly weird story, Miss Littlewing1957. First the 'goose grease', now the bug bites! I could understand if Jack was 'goosing' Ennis and giving him 'love' bites but this is getting very strange. It reads almost like a fever dream. Are you feeling OK?   ::)

I can't wait to see what you come up with tomorrow...
Title: Re: One Night up on Brokeback
Post by: Dagi on August 02, 2007, 06:49:00 am
Another incredibly weird story, Miss Littlewing1957. First the 'goose grease', now the bug bites! I could understand if Jack was 'goosing' Ennis and giving him 'love' bites but this is getting very strange. It reads almost like a fever dream. Are you feeling OK?   ::)

I can't wait to see what you come up with tomorrow...

What a coincidence that a few days ago I came across exactly this of all expressions while standing in a bookshop leafing through a book about American Slang. Now I think I should go back and buy it, maybe it´ll help me when I´m writing my next raunchy story  ;D...

Dagi
Title: Re: One Night up on Brokeback
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 02, 2007, 04:02:49 pm
Another incredibly weird story, Miss Littlewing1957. First the 'goose grease', now the bug bites! I could understand if Jack was 'goosing' Ennis and giving him 'love' bites but this is getting very strange. It reads almost like a fever dream. Are you feeling OK?   ::)

I can't wait to see what you come up with tomorrow...

Well, thanks, Baby!  It will be interesting to see what I write down.  I don't know what I'll be feeling half the time, myself!  :laugh:
Title: A Stormy Night
Post by: moremojo on August 02, 2007, 08:30:10 pm
"Close it up!" cried Jack, shuddering to the brutal, icy force of the hail that was beginning to pelt the tent, whereupon Ennis, torn between his fear for the sheep and gratitude for the shelter that both Jack and the tent provided, complied; they drew the flap tightly, their hands brushing together.

"Whew, friend, I told you Brokeback was rough", Jack said, his exhaustion and tension receding before the warmth and desire that filled him looking into Ennis's guarded brown eyes--eyes that had seen too little of the comfort and beauty that Jack knew to be in the world.

Jack noticed Ennis slightly shivering, whether from cold or some unnamed fear he couldn't tell, whereupon Jack said, softly, "C'mere, Ennis, it'll be allright"; thus gently drawing his friend's head to his beating breast, the pounding hail a wordless litany for desires unmapped, hopes yet to be born.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on August 02, 2007, 09:12:15 pm
Scott--you painted a lovely picture with your 3 lines!!! Great story---I love the cozy feeling that it gives.  
 :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: moremojo on August 02, 2007, 09:15:13 pm
Thanks, Shasta! I realized after posting that I had essentially recreated the second tent scene, but I hope the sincerity of my intentions outweighs the lapses in my imagination.

I like this three-line formula--it has a brevity pregnant with all kind of poetic potential, just like the haiku that I love so much.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: LauraGigs on August 02, 2007, 10:39:18 pm
Yeah, I love it, MoreMojo! 

(You can give us more of that mojo any time!!)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: moremojo on August 02, 2007, 10:40:31 pm
(You can give us more of that mojo any time!!)
Sure enough! :D
Title: Re: A Stormy Night
Post by: Toycoon on August 02, 2007, 10:40:40 pm
Quote
Jack noticed Ennis slightly shivering, whether from cold or some unnamed fear he couldn't tell, whereupon Jack said, softly, "C'mere, Ennis, it'll be allright"; thus gently drawing his friend's head to his beating breast, the pounding hail a wordless litany for desires unmapped, hopes yet to be born.

Moremojo,
I'm glad you appreciate the 3 sentence format. I feel the same way about it you do: there's a elegance to the brevity that's difficult to explain. Trying to fit as much emotion and eroticism into three sentences as the author can manage is a fun challenge (to me anyway). Excellent first post!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: moremojo on August 02, 2007, 10:43:03 pm
Thank you, Toycoon, and thanks for initiating such a rewarding project.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on August 02, 2007, 11:10:35 pm
LauraGigs, ya little darlin',
Where have you been? You've never posting on 'Jack with Ennis' before; I didn't know you cared!
Have you checked out the 'Brokeback Mountain Craft Corner' thread? I think you'd enjoy the handycraft projects.
Folks can make their very own label for BetterMost Beans, a Mad magazine style fold-in and Jack & Ennis magnetic dress-up dolls to put on the fridge.
Title: Re: A Stormy Night
Post by: Dagi on August 03, 2007, 12:13:28 am
Moremojo,

what a surprise! Wow, you are a talented writer. These three lines were full of emotion and beauty. I hope to see you here more often!

Dagi
Title: Re: A Stormy Night
Post by: Dagi on August 03, 2007, 12:20:42 am
Moremojo,
I'm glad you appreciate the 3 sentence format. I feel the same way about it you do: there's a elegance to the brevity that's difficult to explain. Trying to fit as much emotion and eroticism into three sentences as the author can manage is a fun challenge (to me anyway). Excellent first post!

Now what does that mean? Haven´t we all proved that we love the challenge as well, although we do not always stick to the rules? Toycoon, forgive our trespasses.... ;).

Dagi
Title: Re: A Stormy Night
Post by: Toycoon on August 03, 2007, 12:26:25 am
Now what does that mean? Haven´t we all proved that we love the challenge as well, although we do not always stick to the rules? Toycoon, forgive our trespasses.... ;).

Dagi

Dagi, You are so cute! You know I don't mind if you kids don't stick to the rules. It's just that I fear for your mortal souls. :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on August 03, 2007, 12:38:36 am
Where is our naughty, little imp, Susiebell? It's terribly lonesome here without her nasty presence. Thank goodness, Dagi is here to hold down the fort.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 03, 2007, 12:49:52 am
Where is our naughty, little imp, Susiebell? It's terribly lonesome here without her nasty presence. Thank goodness, Dagi is here to hold down the fort.

Now that´s what I call a challenge (*Dagi rubs her hands and takes a pencil and a sheet of paper*).

And, yeah, I miss Naughty Susie, too. She wont return until ends of next week. :'(

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on August 03, 2007, 12:50:57 am
Yeah---it's not as animated without Susie, huh?

We miss you, Susiebell!!! You are probably having a ball!!

I think she'll be home around the 10th??? She left the 28th and said she'd see us in a fortnight and Gary said that's another name for 2 weeks.  I think that's what Shakespeare called it too!
  :P
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 03, 2007, 01:07:30 am
Hands by Dagi

Jack took his hands off the wall behind him against which his lover was still pressing him and placed them gently on each side of Ennis´ face, planted a soft kiss on his lips, pouring all his love into it, before they both took a breathless look down on Ennis´ hands.

Jack, still hard, in Ennis´ left hand, Ennis´own member in his right hand, both covered with their semen.

Jack dipped one finger into it and put the finger into his mouth, savoring the taste, then locked eyes with Ennis, who stared back in a mixture of disbelief and lust, and he whispered into his lover´s ear: “Think I should lick your hands clean before we can unpack your truck...”
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 03, 2007, 01:08:10 am
Naughty enough for both Susie and me? ::)
Title: Re: A Stormy Night
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 03, 2007, 01:11:01 am
"Close it up!" cried Jack, shuddering to the brutal, icy force of the hail that was beginning to pelt the tent, whereupon Ennis, torn between his fear for the sheep and gratitude for the shelter that both Jack and the tent provided, complied; they drew the flap tightly, their hands brushing together.

"Whew, friend, I told you Brokeback was rough", Jack said, his exhaustion and tension receding before the warmth and desire that filled him looking into Ennis's guarded brown eyes--eyes that had seen too little of the comfort and beauty that Jack knew to be in the world.

Jack noticed Ennis slightly shivering, whether from cold or some unnamed fear he couldn't tell, whereupon Jack said, softly, "C'mere, Ennis, it'll be allright"; thus gently drawing his friend's head to his beating breast, the pounding hail a wordless litany for desires unmapped, hopes yet to be born.

Beautiful!  Very well written, and very moving!  Wonderful!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 03, 2007, 01:14:07 am
Hands by Dagi

Jack took his hands off the wall behind him against which his lover was still pressing him and placed them gently on each side of Ennis´ face, planted a soft kiss on his lips, pouring all his love into it, before they both took a breathless look down on Ennis´ hands.

Jack, still hard, in Ennis´ left hand, Ennis´own member in his right hand, both covered with their semen.

Jack dipped one finger into it and put the finger into his mouth, savoring the taste, then locked eyes with Ennis, who stared back in a mixture of disbelief and lust, and he whispered into his lover´s ear: “Think I should lick your hands clean before we can unpack your truck...”

Wow, Dagi!  This is one sensuous tale!  Lovely writing, my dear!  Thanks for posting!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on August 03, 2007, 01:15:58 am
Quote
Jack dipped one finger into it and put the finger into his mouth, savoring the taste, then locked eyes with Ennis, who stared back in a mixture of disbelief and lust, and he whispered into his lover´s ear: “Think I should lick your hands clean before we can unpack your truck...”

Shame on you, Dagi, you dirty devil! You're going to make poor Gary faint dead away! Hot, hot, hot (and so uber nasty)!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 03, 2007, 01:18:59 am
Shame on you, Dagi, you dirty devil! You're going to make poor Gary faint dead away! Hot, hot, hot (and so uber nasty)!

 :laugh: I´m glad you liked it, big brother! And only three sentences, DID YOU NOTICE?
Title: The Tree
Post by: Toycoon on August 03, 2007, 01:19:31 am
The Tree by Toycoon

Ennis rode faster and faster, against the wind and into the sun, until he was at the very precipice of the mountain where he yanked the reins and hopped off his horse then stood looking at the plum tree he' d spotted a few days before, growing just over the edge of the steep cliff ; it was dangerous to try to pick the fruit but he knew that the taste would be so sweet after suffering with beans for all these weeks.

He slowly crept to the edge as though he were stalking prey, knelt down and set one foot, then the other to the ledge below reaching his hand over the side toward the delicate fruit on a low branch; the dirt ledge gave way and Ennis gasped as he felt himself falling deeper and deeper into the abyss.

When Ennis opened his eyes, his lashes brushed against Jack's musty hair, his nose drawing in the grassy scent and he could feel Jack's pulsing heartbeat through his arms; Ennis untangled himself from Jack and put on his plaid shirt, his coat and hat, then he stared at Jack for a bit, kissed Jack goodbye and took off for the sheep on horseback.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 03, 2007, 01:20:46 am
Wow, Dagi!  This is one sensuous tale!  Lovely writing, my dear!  Thanks for posting!

Hi Marie,

I was seriously hoping that I didn´t cross a line with this very spontaneously written piece. Thanks for your kind words!

Dagi
Title: Re: The Tree
Post by: Dagi on August 03, 2007, 01:30:08 am
The Tree by Toycoon

Ennis rode faster and faster, against the wind and into the sun, until he was at the very precipice of the mountain where he yanked the reins and hopped off his horse then stood looking at the plum tree he' d spotted a few days before, growing just over the edge of the steep cliff ; it was dangerous to try to pick the fruit but he knew that the taste would be so sweet after suffering with beans for all these weeks.

He slowly crept to the edge as though he were stalking prey, knelt down and set one foot, then the other to the ledge below reaching his hand over the side toward the delicate fruit on a low branch; the dirt ledge gave way and Ennis gasped as he felt himself falling deeper and deeper into the abyss.

When Ennis opened his eyes, his lashes brushed against Jack's musty hair, his nose drawing in the grassy scent and he could feel Jack's pulsing heartbeat through his arms; Ennis untangled himself from Jack and put on his plaid shirt, his coat and hat, then he stared at Jack for a bit, kissed Jack goodbye and took off for the sheep on horseback.


Toycoon, you left me breathless. This was one beautiful image you conjured for us. Now with my story between moremojo´s and yours I feel a bit ashamed  ::)....I blame you, you challenged me!!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 03, 2007, 01:32:30 am
MMMM  Dagi, that's just nasty.  I love it.  I'll admit it, I think eating spunk is very erotic.  This is one sexy little story.  I'm off to bed now.  I wonder what I'll dream about.   :P

Gary

Gary sweetheart, thanks for your nice words, and I hope you have some sweet, tasty dreams  ;D!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 03, 2007, 01:43:53 am
Gary, Marie, Toycoon, have a good night! My kids just woke up, I gotta go! It was worth standing up early!

Love, Dagi
Title: Re: The Tree
Post by: Toycoon on August 03, 2007, 01:44:03 am
Toycoon, you left me breathless. This was one beautiful image you conjured for us. Now with my story between moremojo´s and yours I feel a bit ashamed  ::)....I blame you, you challenged me!!
Dagi

Don't be silly, Dagi, dear, we all know why we're here: 'Cause we like it quick and dirty. Sometimes I lapse into the poetic/romantic but Susie's and your stories remind me that we're all drawn to the hot and sexy tales by far! I have a new one cooking right now. I'll post it tomorrow.
Title: Shades of Blue
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 03, 2007, 01:44:39 am
Shades of Blue by Littlewing 1957

Tending camp was boring, indelicate work, but Ennis was becoming used to it.  He was a decent cook, even managing to make tasty meals with the meager provisions given him.  Some days were better than others, but after a particularly lusty night with Jack Twist, Ennis woke restless and lonely.

It was against his better nature, his sense of duty, but Ennis needed to see his friend.  Jack was due back to camp for his supper in about 5 hours, but Ennis couldn’t wait that long.  He decided to take supper to Jack.  Ennis packed a few cans of beans, a can of Vienna sausages, some peaches and a jug of whiskey.  By the time he arrived up the mountain, Jack would already have a fire.  His tent should also be equipped with a small pot.  They should find everything they needed to cook and eat a decent meal.

Ennis found Jack after a few hours.  He was sitting on a log, patting one of the blue healers, his harmonica in his lap.  The sight of so many shades of blue gave Ennis pause.  He took in Jack’s blue shirt, Jack's dark wash blue denims and the blue/black coat of the puppy.   All of this silent, softly animated shades of blue positioned against the robin’s egg blue of the Wyoming sky wove a deep and lonely spell. The blue puppy heard Ennis' approach after a moment and ran to him, tail wagging.  Jack looked up, blue eyes dancing and hopeful.  He ran into Ennis’ arms, encircling him in a tangle of blue.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 03, 2007, 01:46:33 am
Hi Marie,

I was seriously hoping that I didn´t cross a line with this very spontaneously written piece. Thanks for your kind words!

Dagi

No, never!  The steamier the better, as far as I'm concerned!  ;)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 03, 2007, 01:46:49 am
we like it quick and dirty

maybe you should write that on page one of this thread as a motto  :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

Dagi
Title: Re: The Tree
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 03, 2007, 01:48:32 am
The Tree by Toycoon

Ennis rode faster and faster, against the wind and into the sun, until he was at the very precipice of the mountain where he yanked the reins and hopped off his horse then stood looking at the plum tree he' d spotted a few days before, growing just over the edge of the steep cliff ; it was dangerous to try to pick the fruit but he knew that the taste would be so sweet after suffering with beans for all these weeks.

He slowly crept to the edge as though he were stalking prey, knelt down and set one foot, then the other to the ledge below reaching his hand over the side toward the delicate fruit on a low branch; the dirt ledge gave way and Ennis gasped as he felt himself falling deeper and deeper into the abyss.

When Ennis opened his eyes, his lashes brushed against Jack's musty hair, his nose drawing in the grassy scent and he could feel Jack's pulsing heartbeat through his arms; Ennis untangled himself from Jack and put on his plaid shirt, his coat and hat, then he stared at Jack for a bit, kissed Jack goodbye and took off for the sheep on horseback.


Great tale, Toycoon!  I especially love the end when they boys part ways, without even one word spoken, so deep is their connection.  Gorgeous writing, babe!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 03, 2007, 01:49:28 am
:'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'(

I miss Susie!  But I hope she's having a good time.

Gary

I know what you mean, Gary!  I miss SusieBaby, too!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 03, 2007, 01:50:26 am
Gary, Marie, Toycoon, have a good night! My kids just woke up, I gotta go! It was worth standing up early!

Love, Dagi

Night, Dagi!  Sweet dreams, my love!  :)
Title: Re: The Tree
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 03, 2007, 01:51:23 am
Don't be silly, Dagi, dear, we all know why we're here: 'Cause we like it quick and dirty. Sometimes I lapse into the poetic/romantic but Susie's and your stories remind me that we're all drawn to the hot and sexy tales by far! I have a new one cooking right now. I'll post it tomorrow.

Same here, Toycoon!  I can't wait to read your hot tale.  I'll post mine tomorrow, as well!
Title: Re: Shades of Blue
Post by: Dagi on August 03, 2007, 03:26:08 am
Shades of Blue by Littlewing 1957

Tending camp was boring, indelicate work, but Ennis was becoming used to it.  He was a decent cook, even managing to make tasty meals with the meager provisions given him.  Some days were better than others, but after a particularly lusty night with Jack Twist, Ennis woke restless and lonely.

It was against his better nature, his sense of duty, but Ennis needed to see his friend.  Jack was due back to camp for his supper in about 5 hours, but Ennis couldn’t wait that long.  He decided to take supper to Jack.  Ennis packed a few cans of beans, a can of Vienna sausages, some peaches and a jug of whiskey.  By the time he arrived up the mountain, Jack would already have a fire.  His tent should also be equipped with a small pot.  They should find everything they needed to cook and eat a decent meal.

Ennis found Jack after a few hours.  He was sitting on a log, patting one of the blue healers, his harmonica in his lap.  The sight of so many shades of blue gave Ennis pause.  He took in Jack’s blue shirt, Jack's dark wash blue denims and the blue/black coat of the puppy.   All of this silent, softly animated shades of blue positioned against the robin’s egg blue of the Wyoming sky wove a deep and lonely spell. The blue puppy heard Ennis' approach after a moment and ran to him, tail wagging.  Jack looked up, blue eyes dancing and hopeful.  He ran into Ennis’ arms, encircling him in a tangle of blue.


Aaahhh, Marie, what an endearing little tale, so sweet and romantic. I can feel Ennis´ yearning for Jack. And since I´ve watched BBM the color blue has gotten a completely new importance.....lovely how you make Jack  "bathe" in blue, that´s a beautiful image.

Thanks for sharing, sweetie!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 03, 2007, 03:27:16 am
Night, Dagi!  Sweet dreams, my love!  :)

 :laugh: I´m starting the day, honey! :laugh:

Dagi
Title: Re: Shades of Blue
Post by: Toycoon on August 03, 2007, 09:35:02 am
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Jack looked up, blue eyes dancing and hopeful.  He ran into Ennis’ arms, encircling him in a tangle of blue.

What a gorgeous story, littlewing1957. Stunning imagery and so easy to read! I love the color blue, too. Me, Jack and Ennis.
Title: Re: Shades of Blue
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 03, 2007, 11:09:49 pm
Hi there littlewing.  I should be in bed by now, so forgive me if I say something here that sounds a bit off.   :laugh: 

I just love the idea of Ennis missing Jack so much that he can't wait a moment longer to see him.  There's just something deeply romantic him taking off up the mountain like that.  And what an interesting visual you gave us with all the shades of blue.  Did you mean to suggest anything in particular with all that?  I'm afraid I'm a little too sleepy right now to read between the lines.

Gary
Hey, Gary!  I was just thinking about all of the blue present in BBM and how it makes for a lovely sight.  I imagined Jack with his blue eyes and clothing, and the blue heeler set up against a blue sky.  I just thought the visual was very appealing. 
Title: Re: Shades of Blue
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 03, 2007, 11:10:56 pm
What a gorgeous story, littlewing1957. Stunning imagery and so easy to read! I love the color blue, too. Me, Jack and Ennis.

Aww, so sweet!
Title: Re: Shades of Blue
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 03, 2007, 11:11:32 pm
Aaahhh, Marie, what an endearing little tale, so sweet and romantic. I can feel Ennis´ yearning for Jack. And since I´ve watched BBM the color blue has gotten a completely new importance.....lovely how you make Jack  "bathe" in blue, that´s a beautiful image.

Thanks for sharing, sweetie!

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi!  You always say the sweetest things!
Title: Jackie
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 03, 2007, 11:46:54 pm
Jackie by Littlewing 1957

Extreme AU Slice of Life

Ennis wasn’t sure what to do next!  The tiny kitten was rubbing against his legs, purring loud enough to wake the dead.  He didn’t want this to get out, but Ennis was wild about cats.  Jack Twist would know what to do.  Ennis placed the call to Childress and Jack answered on the first ring.  Their conversation went sort of like this:

Ennis:  Hey, Bud, how you doin?  I just thought I would give you a call to see what’s up and get some advice.

Jack:  Well, well, well, Ennis Del Mar!  What’s up, Cowboy?  Everything okay?  I don’t usually hear from you?”

Ennis:  Oh, I’m okay; I just need your help, is all.  You have a cat, right?

Jack:  Well, yeah, Lureen has an orange tabby cat.  Why do you ask?

Ennis:  I found a cat, a little kitten on my stoop last night.  It was crying and wouldn’t leave.

Jack:  I see!  Where is the cat now?

Ennis:  In my kitchen.  I let it stay the night.  Jack, does your cat like to sleep with you?

Jack:  Sure.  Moppy sleeps at our feet almost every night.  I guess they like to be close to their owners.  Ennis, this call must be costing you a lot of money.  You want to get to the point?  Don’t get me wrong, friend, I love to hear your voice, but long distance ain’t cheap.

Ennis: (clearing his throat)  Yeah, well, I wanna know what sort of food to feed it.

Jack:  You mean you’re gonna keep the kitty?  Ennis, I didn’t know you like cats!

Ennis:  Yeah, well keep it under yer hat.  I don’t want this getting’ out.  What should I feed a baby cat?

Jack:  Kitten food?

Ennis:  What kind of kitten food?

Jack:  I don’t know.. kitten chow usually works.   Moppy loved kitten chow.  If you want, I can send you a few cases.

Ennis:  Oh no, no Bud, I got this.  Thanks for the tip.  I’ll go get her some kitten chow.  So how is everybody and everything?

Jack:  Oh, we’re tolerable.  Work is a bitch, but what else is new?  Kelsey just had a litter of 5 pups.  Friend, you should see em!  I’m gonna bring one of them to you next month when we meet up.

Ennis:  C’mon Jack, I just told you I’m keeping the kitten.  I can’t take care of 2 pets.

Jack:  Oh yeah, that’s right.  Well, anyways, I’m lookin’ forward to our next trip.  We still on for the 5th of next month?

Ennis:  Hell, yeah.  Wouldn’t miss it. 

Jack:  Anything else you need to know?  Make sure you get the cat her shots, and change her water bowl often.

Ennis: Yeah, I’ll remember.  Thanks again, Bud.  Keep it warm for me until we meet.

Jack:  I will.  (chuckles) Bye!

Ennis:  Bye.

Ennis picks up his little kitty and scratches behind her ears.  The tiny feline is small enough to fit in the palm of his hand.  He places her in his lap and rubs her tiny back.  He decides to name her "Jackie." 


Title: Re: Jackie
Post by: Toycoon on August 03, 2007, 11:51:21 pm
What a cute story, Littlewing1957.
I had a kitty that lived for 18 years. She was my little baby. She would always sit on my lap no matter where I was or what I was doing. If there was a lap, there was my kitty! I cried for a week when we had to put her to sleep.
Title: The Color of Brown
Post by: Toycoon on August 04, 2007, 12:22:20 am
The Color of Brown by Toycoon

The earth smelled good, so warm and comforting, hours after the light rain they'd had that summer morning. It was an indescribable scent that Jack could not explain his attraction for but it gave him a sense of solace all the same.

From across the river, Jack stared at Ennis, standing in bare feet in the thick mud; he marveled at Ennis' connection to the soil. Ennis seemed to be an extension of the sandy banks of the river: grounded, sturdy, rich and robust.

Jack drew in Ennis' masculine aroma, making him swoon unexpectedly and feel slightly intoxicated in this man's presence; the cool blue of the stream reflected delicately in the ruddy sanguine of Ennis' eyes.
Title: All for Me
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 04, 2007, 12:32:10 am
All for Me by Littlewing 1957

Ennis placed Jack’s hand in his.  He pulled him up from the couch and led him silently, intently, into the bedroom.  Jack stood by the king sized bed and fixed a piercing blue gaze at Ennis’ crotch.

Jack unbuttoned Ennis’ beige shirt slowly.  He liked this sort of lazy lead-up; thought of it as a sort of foreplay.  Ennis allowed this, even encouraged it!  Halfway down to his waist now, Jack continued to unbutton Ennis’ shirt, revealing his chiseled, tanned chest.

His shirt removed now, Jack pulled at Ennis’ leather belt.  It came away easy.  Unzipping his jeans, Jack became hungry, impatient.  He eased Ennis’ jeans down to the floor, removed his briefs.   Ennis’ manhood was hard and glistening.  When Jack saw the slick lubrication dripping down Ennis’ shaft, he cried out, screamed, dizzy with lust!  Ennis palmed his manhood and handed it to Jack…
Title: Re: All for Me
Post by: Toycoon on August 04, 2007, 01:03:36 am
Hoo-wee! That was a hot and nasty one, littlewing1957! Let's hear it for glistening shafts. Yeah baby!
Gary's gonna go in epileptic shock! It's a good thing SnickerD is not around, it would put that poor guy in a coma!
Littlewing1957, you sassy lady!
Title: Re: The Color of Brown
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 04, 2007, 02:11:07 am
The Color of Brown by Toycoon

The earth smelled good, so warm and comforting, hours after the light rain they'd that summer morning. It was an indescribable scent that Jack could not explain his attraction for but it gave him a sense of solace all the same.

From across the river, Jack stared at Ennis, standing in bare feet in the thick mud; he marveled at Ennis' connection to the soil. Ennis seemed to be an extension of the sandy banks of the river: grounded, sturdy, rich and robust.

Jack drew in Ennis' masculine aroma, making him swoon unexpectedly and feel slightly intoxicated in this man's presence; the cool blue of the stream reflected delicately in the ruddy sanguine of Ennis' eyes.


Beautiful, Toycoon!  I've always had a fascination with the earth, especially when I was young!  I used to make mud pies and try to force people to eat them.  I planted seeds and waited for watermelon to grow.  I loved to get my hands all brown-dirty from the earth.  Lovely tale, Babe!
Title: Re: All for Me
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 04, 2007, 02:14:29 am
Hoo-wee! That was a hot and nasty one, littlewing1957! Let's hear it for glistening shafts. Yeah baby!
Gary's gonna go in epileptic shock! It's a good thing SnickerD not around, it would put that poor guy in a coma!
Littlewing1957, you sassy lady!

Such kind words, Toycoon!  Anything to get our other boys all hot and bothered!  ::)  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: LauraGigs on August 04, 2007, 02:41:36 am
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His shirt removed now, Jack pulled at Ennis’ leather belt.  It came away easy. 

That's so cool, Littlewing!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: LauraGigs on August 04, 2007, 02:55:22 am
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LauraGigs, ya little darlin',
Where have you been? You've never posting on 'Jack with Ennis' before; I didn't know you cared!

I love all my brothers + sisters from IMDB!  (This is one of my favorite lurking spots...)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: LauraGigs on August 04, 2007, 02:56:29 am
The performance thread is kind of a crazy place, but I got involved recently and just wrote my very first erotica there!  Check it, it's the third tent scene (thoroughly improved upon from the film IMO!)

http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,2739.msg231266.html#msg231266 (http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,2739.msg231266.html#msg231266)
Title: Re: Jackie
Post by: Dagi on August 04, 2007, 09:12:20 am
Jackie by Littlewing 1957

 ...........He decides to name her "Jackie." 


So sweet, Littlewing! A kitten for Ennis! A belly fur to stroke  ;D! You have the most original ideas, Marie, I admire you.

Dagi

(I have a black male cat. I call him Jack when I stroke his belly  ;D)
Title: Re: The Color of Brown
Post by: Dagi on August 04, 2007, 10:49:06 am
The Color of Brown by Toycoon

The earth smelled good, so warm and comforting, hours after the light rain they'd had that summer morning. It was an indescribable scent that Jack could not explain his attraction for but it gave him a sense of solace all the same.

From across the river, Jack stared at Ennis, standing in bare feet in the thick mud; he marveled at Ennis' connection to the soil. Ennis seemed to be an extension of the sandy banks of the river: grounded, sturdy, rich and robust.

Jack drew in Ennis' masculine aroma, making him swoon unexpectedly and feel slightly intoxicated in this man's presence; the cool blue of the stream reflected delicately in the ruddy sanguine of Ennis' eyes.

I love it, Toycoon. This is very special. I ´ve always loved the earthy aspect of Ennis, marvelous the way you put it into words. And the smell of the earth after a summer rain is uncomparable, I´ve loved it since I was little! Thank you so much for sharing this.

Dagi
Title: Re: All for Me
Post by: Dagi on August 04, 2007, 10:54:46 am
All for Me by Littlewing 1957

Ennis placed Jack’s hand in his.  He pulled him up from the couch and led him silently, intently, into the bedroom.  Jack stood by the king sized bed and fixed a piercing blue gaze at Ennis’ crotch.

Jack unbuttoned Ennis’ beige shirt slowly.  He liked this sort of lazy lead-up; thought of it as a sort of foreplay.  Ennis allowed this, even encouraged it!  Halfway down to his waist now, Jack continued to unbutton Ennis’ shirt, revealing his chiseled, tanned chest.

His shirt removed now, Jack pulled at Ennis’ leather belt.  It came away easy.  Unzipping his jeans, Jack became hungry, impatient.  He eased Ennis’ jeans down to the floor, removed his briefs.   Ennis’ manhood was hard and glistening.  When Jack saw the slick lubrication dripping down Ennis’ shaft, he cried out, screamed, dizzy with lust!  Ennis palmed his manhood and handed it to Jack…


What a foreplay on a lazy saturday afternoon! Phew, I think I need a cold shower now ;D. Very erotic, Marie! Can we hope for a part two  :D ?

Dagi
Title: Re: The Color of Brown
Post by: moremojo on August 04, 2007, 12:28:56 pm
From across the river, Jack stared at Ennis, standing in bare feet in the thick mud; he marveled at Ennis' connection to the soil. Ennis seemed to be an extension of the sandy banks of the river: grounded, sturdy, rich and robust.
Ennis as an avatar of the earth...you tapped into the same archetypal power Annie did when writing the original story.
Title: Feeling Safe
Post by: moremojo on August 04, 2007, 12:42:37 pm
Even though both were approaching middle age, Ennis still thought of Jack as his beloved blue boy, and held him snugly from behind as they drifted off to sleep in the tent, relishing the warmth of that beloved cleavage, the tight but welcoming place where his manhood had always felt most comfortable.

For a moment, his peaceful descent into sleep was roused by the memory of their earlier conversation, where Jack had said he missed him so much sometimes he could hardly stand it, and of how Ennis's heart had stung to those gently recriminating words, of how his mouth clamped tighter in frustration and sadness.

Tinged with the dark night's melancholy, his member retreated from its swelling search, though Ennis could still feel the humid warmth of his beloved's body upon it, and he pulled Jack even closer, determined that if only for this one night, they would be safe and secure, and not only in their dreams.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: LauraGigs on August 04, 2007, 12:51:56 pm
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. . . he pulled Jack even closer, determined that if only for this one night, they would be safe and secure, and not only in their dreams.


Gosh.  All you folks are so good!    :o
Title: Re: Feeling Safe
Post by: Dagi on August 04, 2007, 02:44:54 pm

.....Tinged with the dark night's melancholy, his member retreated from its swelling search, though Ennis could still feel the humid warmth of his beloved's body upon it, and he pulled Jack even closer, determined that if only for this one night, they would be safe and secure, and not only in their dreams.


Moremojo, thank you for these three lines ful of sweet sadness. I really hope you´re gonna stick with us and let us read more of your beautiful writing.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 04, 2007, 02:54:32 pm
I love all my brothers + sisters from IMDB!  (This is one of my favorite lurking spots...)

 :-* :-* :-* Hi Laura! I´ll check out your story! Thanks for lurking here  ;D.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 04, 2007, 03:00:19 pm
The performance thread is kind of a crazy place, but I got involved recently and just wrote my very first erotica there!  Check it, it's the third tent scene (thoroughly improved upon from the film IMO!)

http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,2739.msg231266.html#msg231266 (http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,2739.msg231266.html#msg231266)

LAURA!!! Stop lurking, girl, write us a story! PLEASE! What your wrote on the performance thread (one of my favorite lurking threads, BTW  ;D) left me breathless! phew, I was almost crawling into the screen...

Dagi
Title: Re: Sunday Service
Post by: Dagi on August 04, 2007, 04:35:32 pm
Sunday Service by garycottle
............  Roberta had told the boy about Christ's love, even though John had told her that would only make the boy soft.  But as he neared the kitchen door he realized that it was his fault.  It was the responsibility of the father to make a man out of his boy.

Gary, I love your detailed writing, and I love to read about Jack´s earlier years and his "experimenting"  ;).

Sad, however, that John thinks of his son as less of a man because of what he observes.

Beautiful writing, sweetheart, as always!

Dagi

Title: Re: Feeling Safe
Post by: Toycoon on August 04, 2007, 09:20:09 pm
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For a moment, his peaceful descent into sleep was roused by the memory of their earlier conversation, where Jack had said he missed him so much sometimes he could hardly stand it, and of how Ennis's heart had stung to those gently recriminating words, of how his mouth clamped tighter in frustration and sadness.

Triste but beautiful at the same time. Moremojo, where have you been hiding?

Title: Re: Sunday Service
Post by: Toycoon on August 04, 2007, 09:25:05 pm
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Roberta had told the boy about Christ's love, even though John had told her that would only make the boy soft.

Sounds to me like it made this particular boy, hard !

Gary, you are such a bad boy. Mu-wha-ha-ha!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on August 04, 2007, 11:18:09 pm
Hey everybody,
Check out the latest project on Brokeback Craft Corner:
http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,10857.msg232714.html#msg232714 (http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,10857.msg232714.html#msg232714)

It's the "Old Rose" whiskey bottle label fer yer liquor cabinet.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 05, 2007, 02:25:02 am
That's so cool, Littlewing!

Thanks so much, Laura!  :)
Title: Re: Jackie by littewing
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 05, 2007, 02:26:49 am
Awww  Littewing, I love kittens and puppies.  And I think it's so apt that you gave Ennis a kitten.  You know that little boys are taught that cooing over babies isn't manly, and dolls in Ennis's time were for girls primarily.  But little boys are permitted to cuddle and care for dogs and cats without fear of being called sissy.  So that's probably one of the reasons why boys and men love their pets so much, because they're allowed.  And I also think that the popularity of Lassie, and other stories about boys and their dogs can be attributed to this.

Gary

Thanks so much, Gary!  I think of Ennis as a kind and gentle man.  I think it is only fitting that he would keep and care for a little animal.
Title: Re: Jackie
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 05, 2007, 02:27:45 am
So sweet, Littlewing! A kitten for Ennis! A belly fur to stroke  ;D! You have the most original ideas, Marie, I admire you.

Dagi

(I have a black male cat. I call him Jack when I stroke his belly  ;D)

Why thank you, Dagi Sweets!  I have 2 cats, a male tabby named Tiger and a female orange tabby called Pookie!
Title: Re: All for Me
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 05, 2007, 02:29:30 am
OMG, littlewing!  What an image.  I love the sight of Ennis's glistening, dripping, hard manhood first thing in the morning.   ;D

Now I think I'll go eat breakfast.  I'm starving.   :P

Gary

I'll say it again, Gary, you're a lusty fellow.  The lad who has the good fortune to snap you up will be in for the thrill of his life!
Title: Re: All for Me
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 05, 2007, 02:30:13 am
What a foreplay on a lazy saturday afternoon! Phew, I think I need a cold shower now ;D. Very erotic, Marie! Can we hope for a part two  :D ?

Dagi

A part 2?  You bet!  I'll work on it right away!  :)
Title: Re: Feeling Safe
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 05, 2007, 02:32:08 am
Even though both were approaching middle age, Ennis still thought of Jack as his beloved blue boy, and held him snugly from behind as they drifted off to sleep in the tent, relishing the warmth of that beloved cleavage, the tight but welcoming place where his manhood had always felt most comfortable.

For a moment, his peaceful descent into sleep was roused by the memory of their earlier conversation, where Jack had said he missed him so much sometimes he could hardly stand it, and of how Ennis's heart had stung to those gently recriminating words, of how his mouth clamped tighter in frustration and sadness.

Tinged with the dark night's melancholy, his member retreated from its swelling search, though Ennis could still feel the humid warmth of his beloved's body upon it, and he pulled Jack even closer, determined that if only for this one night, they would be safe and secure, and not only in their dreams.


Moving, lyrical, very well written!  I enjoyed reading every word of this.  Thanks so much for posting!
Title: Sinner
Post by: Toycoon on August 05, 2007, 10:05:14 pm
Sinner by Toycoon

Ennis awoke with a start from his drunken stupor, to the feel of his right hand palming another man's throbbing cock, Jack's cock, with Jack's hand firmly guiding his fingers over the length.

Groggy, confused yet dizzy from intense desire, Ennis yanked down Jack's trousers and tore at the fly of his own jeans, freeing his erection then rubbed a saliva covered hand over his shaft.

In an instant, Ennis was deep inside his partner's warm body, experiencing the most incredible sensations he had ever felt; Jack let out a loud grunt and Ennis shivered and collapsed on top of him in a heap.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: LauraGigs on August 05, 2007, 11:58:03 pm
Damn dude, whatta hot one! 

I understand about the 3-sentence structure providing a unique challenge and what-not. But if you ever wanted to give that one more length (or girth or fullness or swelling or turgidity) I'm sure there'd be no complaining!
Title: Re: Sunday Service
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 06, 2007, 12:03:37 am
Sunday Service by garycottle

The morning sun came through the window and washed the room in antiseptic white light.  The only contrast to the unremitting brightness was the shadow in the shape of a giant cross over the bed, cast there by the window’s muntins.  John could no longer sleep because not even his eyelids could block out the light.  In winter he’d simply pull the blanket over his head, but now it was too warm.  So he slowly rose and placed his feet on the floor.  Since his wife had gotten up hours earlier, and presumably had already left for church, the pain in his lower back and knees was his only hail.  He was sure that by the time he was sixty the pain would be more than he could bear.

John shielded his eyes and looked out the window, and saw two pubescent boys running behind the barn.  One was his son, Jack, and the other was Holland Perry.  Holland was the son of George and Catherine Perry who lived five miles down the road.  His wife went to church with them, and most Sundays the Perrys dropped the boy off when they stopped to pick up Roberta.  John didn’t like Holland.  He thought he was a sissy.  But he tolerated the kid because the deal was he and Jack would do the morning chores if they chose to stay home from church, and this bargain gave John an excuse to sleep in.  But seeing the boys now he noticed there was something in their cadence that suggested they weren’t interested in chores this morning.

John dressed, drank a cup of warmed-over black coffee, and headed outside to see what the boys were up to.  When he heard the giggles John’s pace slowed, and then he stopped altogether when he got to the corner of the barn.  He quietly poked his head around and saw an unexpected sight.  Jack and Holland were on their feet facing each other.  Their pants were down around their ankles, and their right arms crossed over to the other’s crotch.  Each was pulling back and forth. 

John’s vocal cords tightened in an effort to speak, but no words came out.  He wanted to stop what was happening, but he couldn’t acknowledge it.  John turned and walked away as the heat bit his cheeks like windburn.  At first he blamed his wife.  Roberta had told the boy about Christ's love, even though John had told her that would only make the boy soft.  But as he neared the kitchen door he realized that it was his fault.  It was the responsibility of the father to make a man out of his boy.

Beautiful, Gary.  Very expertly written.  I love your portrayal of Mr. Twist here!  He was not happy that Jack liked boys, but he didn't come across as a homophobe, either.  Exceptional, Gary!  :)
Title: Re: All for Me
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 06, 2007, 12:05:10 am
Thank you so much, littlewing.  That's so kind of you to say.  I can only hope that the lad will count himself lucky, but one this is for certain, he's going to be a bit sore.   :-X   :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

Gary

Awww, Gary, I'm sure your husband will feel very fortunate to have you, no pun intended!   He'll wonder where you've been all his life!  :)
Title: Sinner (part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 06, 2007, 12:17:23 am
Sinner Part 2 by Littlewing 1957

Out, down and asleep?  Oh no, not yet!  Jack fell over and appreciated the feel of Ennis’ weight on top of him.  He lay still, content to bask in the afterglow, savor the smell of Ennis’ quivering form.

Ennis reached out just in time to palm Jack’s still tumescent manhood.  He caressed him gently, instinctively aware that Jack would be extra sensitive after his orgasm.  Jack kept his groin elevated a bit, just so that Ennis could fondle him.

Never a word was spoken as the 2 lay still.  Ennis’ breath caressed Jack’s neck as his hand gently pulled and rubbed Jack’s dick.  And when both were content in spirit as well as body, time for sleep..
Title: Re: Shades of Blue
Post by: moremojo on August 06, 2007, 12:28:52 am
Ennis found Jack after a few hours.  He was sitting on a log, patting one of the blue healers, his harmonica in his lap.  The sight of so many shades of blue gave Ennis pause.  He took in Jack’s blue shirt, Jack's dark wash blue denims and the blue/black coat of the puppy.   All of this silent, softly animated shades of blue positioned against the robin’s egg blue of the Wyoming sky wove a deep and lonely spell. The blue puppy heard Ennis' approach after a moment and ran to him, tail wagging.  Jack looked up, blue eyes dancing and hopeful.  He ran into Ennis’ arms, encircling him in a tangle of blue.
Oh, I do appreciate this rich and colorful evocation of everyone's favorite blue boy!
Title: Re: Shades of Blue
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 06, 2007, 12:35:22 am
Oh, I do appreciate this rich and colorful evocation of everyone's favorite blue boy!

Thanks, Babe, for your kind words.  I really appreciate it!  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on August 06, 2007, 12:39:08 am
Damn dude, whatta hot one! 

I understand about the 3-sentence providing a unique challenge and what-not. But if you ever wanted to give that one more length (or girth or fullness or turgidity) I'm sure there'd be no complaining!

Golly LauraGigs, only two posts and you've become a nasty ol' horn-dog! Yeehaaw!

Title: Re: Sinner (part 2)
Post by: Toycoon on August 06, 2007, 12:52:15 am
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Ennis reached out just in time to palm Jack’s still tumescent manhood.  He caressed him gently, instinctively aware that Jack would be extra sensitive after his orgasm.  Jack kept his groin elevated a bit, just so that Ennis could fondle him.

There's that reach around everyone mistakes for Ennis tenderly hugging Jack. We know better Littlewing, don't we?

Say, Littlewing, how do you know so much about gay male sex? Are you one'a them liberated ladies that watches all-male porno movies? :o

Hot story, Dirty Mama. That one was tough and  tender.
Title: The Nose Leads the Heart
Post by: moremojo on August 06, 2007, 01:05:44 am
Despite having been raised on a ranch, Jack had always been sensitive to the raw smells so frequently encountered in that milieu, and was mighty relieved for Ennis (so sweet, so thoughtful) to take his place in that damn foul-smelling pup tent; and yet, since they had become lovers (mustn't use that word, shouldn't think like that) the camptender's tent had taken on its own funky, manly aroma, the kind that could only come from the repeated exertions born of animal passion.

Jack noticed now that odors once deemed offensive by him were, in these special circumstances, imbued with a strange new allure, that awoke desire and which he immediately associated with his new friend, who even now was entering the tent and pulling off his boots, filling the tight space with a day's worth of hard-earned, sweaty raunch, the discernment of which made Jack's jeans chafe at their own constriction.

"Hey bud, glad to see ya," Ennis smiled down at his cowboy, tentatively touching his hair and gingerly leaning down to kiss those soft lips, whereupon Jack hungrily reached up to drink Ennis in, the heady mixture of dried masculine sweat, feet, and Ennis's whiskey-stained, unbrushed teeth transformed, in the magic of the moment, into the unforgettable perfume of paradise.
Title: Re: Sinner
Post by: Dagi on August 06, 2007, 01:30:58 am
Sinner by Toycoon

Ennis awoke with a start from his drunken stupor, to the feel of his right hand palming another man's throbbing cock, Jack's cock, with Jack's hand firmly guiding his fingers over the length.

Groggy, confused yet dizzy from intense desire, Ennis yanked down Jack's trousers and tore at the fly of his own jeans, freeing his erection then rubbed a saliva covered hand over his shaft.

In an instant, Ennis was deep inside his partner's warm body, experiencing the most incredible sensations he had ever felt; Jack let out a loud grunt and Ennis shivered and collapsed on top of him in a heap.

(*Dagi swallows hard and shifts in her chair*) Phew, that was damn hot, Toycoon! Only three sentences, but what a power!! What a way to start the day  ;D. Thank you!!

Dagi
Title: Re: All for Me
Post by: Dagi on August 06, 2007, 01:36:22 am
Awww, Gary, I'm sure your husband will feel very fortunate to have you, no pun intended!   He'll wonder where you've been all his life!  :)

....as we wonder where you´ve been all our lives...

Dagi  (http://www.smileygarden.de/smilie/Liebe/2151.gif)
Title: Re: Sinner (part 2)
Post by: Dagi on August 06, 2007, 01:41:09 am
Sinner Part 2 by Littlewing 1957

Out, down and asleep?  Oh no, not yet!  Jack fell over and appreciated the feel of Ennis’ weight on top of him.  He lay still, content to bask in the afterglow, savor the smell of Ennis’ quivering form.

Ennis reached out just in time to palm Jack’s still tumescent manhood.  He caressed him gently, instinctively aware that Jack would be extra sensitive after his orgasm.  Jack kept his groin elevated a bit, just so that Ennis could fondle him.

Never a word was spoken as the 2 lay still.  Ennis’ breath caressed Jack’s neck as his hand gently pulled and rubbed Jack’s dick.  And when both were content in spirit as well as body, time for sleep..


OMG, Marie, what are you doing to me? I´ll have to wipe this big content grin off my face before I see my husband, or I´ll have to answer questions  :laugh:. Very erotic, very visual and sensual! MMMMMM.

DAgi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 06, 2007, 01:42:36 am
Golly LauraGigs, only two posts and you've become a nasty ol' horn-dog! Yeehaaw!



 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:   that´s exactly what I thought! Now write us a story, naughty sister!!

Dagi
Title: Re: Nobody's Business
Post by: moremojo on August 06, 2007, 07:05:23 pm
In our family there are two queers (out of four boys), I'm one, the eldest son and my youngest brother is the other. Crazy, ain't it?
There is some evidence that the more older brothers a male has, the more likely that male will be homosexual. There seems to be some kind of hormonal reaction within a woman's uterus from carrying a male child that predisposes later male children gestated in the same uterus to become homosexual. Sexual identity would certainly be more complex than just subscribing to a host of hormonal or genetic factors (for example, there is no comparable scenario observed for lesbian development), but we may be more beholden to our chemistry than we realize, or care to admit.

Toycoon, you and I would certainly fall outside this pattern; I only have one older sister.
Title: Re: Sinner (part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 06, 2007, 11:19:36 pm
There's that reach around everyone mistakes for Ennis tenderly hugging Jack. We know better Littlewing, don't we?

Say, Littlewing, how do you know so much about gay male sex? Are you one'a them liberated ladies that watches all-male porno movies? :o

Hot story, Dirty Mama. That one was tough and  tender.

 :laugh:  :laugh: Tomtrueman and BelgianBoy taught me a lot.  And believe me, I asked them a whole lot of questions!  I'm really grateful that those 2 guys took the time to "educate" me!  Besides, I'm a gay man trapped in a woman's body!  :laugh:
Title: Re: The Nose Leads the Heart
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 06, 2007, 11:22:12 pm
Despite having been raised on a ranch, Jack had always been sensitive to the raw smells so frequently encountered in that milieu, and was mighty relieved for Ennis (so sweet, so thoughtful) to take his place in that damn foul-smelling pup tent; and yet, since they had become lovers (mustn't use that word, shouldn't think like that) the camptender's tent had taken on its own funky, manly aroma, the kind that could only come from the repeated exertions born of animal passion.

Jack noticed now that odors once deemed offensive by him were, in these special circumstances, imbued with a strange new allure, that awoke desire and which he immediately associated with his new friend, who even now was entering the tent and pulling off his boots, filling the tight space with a day's worth of hard-earned, sweaty raunch, the discernment of which made Jack's jeans chafe at their own constriction.

"Hey bud, glad to see ya," Ennis smiled down at his cowboy, tentatively touching his hair and gingerly leaning down to kiss those soft lips, whereupon Jack hungrily reached up to drink Ennis in, the heady mixture of dried masculine sweat, feet, and Ennis's whiskey-stained, unbrushed teeth transformed, in the magic of the moment, into the unforgettable perfume of paradise.

Extraordinary!  Very sensory!  I can almost smell the manly scents of the tent, and the heady aroma of Ennis!  Beautiful writing, moremojo!
Title: Re: All for Me
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 06, 2007, 11:22:51 pm
....as we wonder where you´ve been all our lives...

Dagi  (http://www.smileygarden.de/smilie/Liebe/2151.gif)

Indeed!  :)
Title: Re: Sinner (part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 06, 2007, 11:23:33 pm
OMG, Marie, what are you doing to me? I´ll have to wipe this big content grin off my face before I see my husband, or I´ll have to answer questions  :laugh:. Very erotic, very visual and sensual! MMMMMM.

DAgi

Thanks, sweetie!  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:
Title: Re: The Nose Leads the Heart
Post by: Toycoon on August 06, 2007, 11:35:27 pm
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"Hey bud, glad to see ya," Ennis smiled down at his cowboy, tentatively touching his hair and gingerly leaning down to kiss those soft lips, whereupon Jack hungrily reached up to drink Ennis in, the heady mixture of dried masculine sweat, feet, and Ennis's whiskey-stained, unbrushed teeth transformed, in the magic of the moment, into the unforgettable perfume of paradise.

I loves me these boys but I draw the line at morning breath. They gotta brush them teeth!

Highly descriptive writing, Moremojo, love it!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: LauraGigs on August 06, 2007, 11:44:22 pm
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...transformed, in the magic of the moment, into the unforgettable perfume of paradise.


I think our Moremojo should go into ad copywriting!
Title: Sinner (Part 3)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 06, 2007, 11:59:40 pm
Sinner (Part 3) by Littlewing 1957

A bit AU

And the boys slept.  But along about 3:00a.m. Ennis noticed a now familiar stirring in his loins.  He was not lying very close to Jack, but was awakened by his smoldering physicality.

Ennis gently pushed against Jack’s shoulder in an effort to wake him.  Ennis was ready to play.  Jack was groggy and confused as he rubbed sleep from his blue eyes.  His eyes focused on his friend just as Ennis leaned in for a kiss.

“Pull your pants down, Rodeo!” Ennis ordered.  “I want to see you.”  Jack complied without a word.  Ennis smiled as Jack removed his jeans.

“Now pull them all the way off and bend over… all the way over.”  Jack did what he was told.  Ennis crawled down on the bedroll, directly under Jack’s rock hard behind.  He glanced up timidly and took in the sight of Jack’s tiny pucker and his pendulous scrotum. 

“Ah the view is so good from down here!”  Ennis muttered as he continued to feast his eyes.  Jack held very still, slightly amused at his friend’s antics.  Ennis reached up tentatively, and spread Jack’s butt cheeks to gain a better view of his hole.  He patted Jack’s ass, rubbed him tenderly. 

“That feels so good, Friend!”  Jack whispered as he held his position!  Ennis reached down slightly and cupped one ball, released it, and palmed the other.  Losing control, Ennis moved his mouth closer to Jack’s balls and placed one in his mouth.  When he gently gulped the other, Jack fell flat onto his chest…



Title: Re: The Nose Leads the Heart
Post by: moremojo on August 07, 2007, 12:33:42 am
I loves me these boys but I draw the line at morning breath. They gotta brush them teeth!
:laugh:

Thanks, everyone, for the appreciative comments! I figured this one story would not be to all tastes (and it probably isn't), but I thought it would give expression to an undoubted reality of that stint on the mountain. In the movie, Ennis actually seems quite fastidious in terms of his hygiene, yet also seems quite drawn to the world of smell. And I'm sure that these boys came to love no smell as much as that of each other, whether rank or clean.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: LauraGigs on August 07, 2007, 01:20:35 am
Plus, whiskey tastes good (even via mouth-to-mouth, and probably covers a multitude of sins — mouthwash is mostly alcohol, after all . . . )

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Title: Re: Sinner (Part 3)
Post by: Toycoon on August 07, 2007, 01:27:01 am
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He glanced up timidly and took in the sight of Jack’s tiny pucker and his pendulous scrotum.

Darn, I guess we ain't posting that picture on the "Hot Buttered Buns" thread!

Littlewing, you are OUT OF CONTROL! Yer gonna give LauraGigs a heart attack! Go for Part Four, Dirty Mama!
Dagi, how will you top the latest descent into Smutville? Susiebell is gonna have a lot to catch up on when she comes back. Sheee-it!
Title: Kindred Spirits
Post by: moremojo on August 07, 2007, 05:01:07 pm
"I never had a brother, you know, bein' an only child," mused Jack, while he and Ennis sat gazing into the campfire in the silent, dying light of the day; shifting slightly in the lawnchair, Jack continued, "I sometimes wondered what that mighta been like...havin' someone to play with, an' also someone to look after you, and to look after..."...Jack's voice drifted as Ennis discerned a shadow, not only from the evening's twilight, pass over his bud's aging face.

Ennis, who had had a damn handful of a brother in K.E., didn't know how to register this odd, melancholy reflection of Jack's (he and K.E. had barely tolerated one another, and were glad to get out of each other's hair when the opportunity arose), but he sensed the longing in his one and only cowboy that he never knew existed, and felt a kindred kindness rise thereby in his own breast.

"It's late in the day, friend," Ennis said, leaning expectantly to directly face Jack, "but I can be a brother to ya, if that's whatchya want"; and in saying so, he reached out to gently touch Jack's pensive cheek, in the way that Jack had taught him so long ago.
Title: Re: The Nose Leads the Heart
Post by: Dagi on August 07, 2007, 05:10:42 pm
MMMMM Moremojo, that was very special.

Dagi
Title: Re: Sinner (Part 3)
Post by: Dagi on August 07, 2007, 05:15:08 pm
Sinner (Part 3) by Littlewing 1957

A bit AU

And the boys slept.  But along about 3:00a.m. Ennis noticed a now familiar stirring in his loins.  He was not lying very close to Jack, but was awakened by his smoldering physicality.

Ennis gently pushed against Jack’s shoulder in an effort to wake him.  Ennis was ready to play.  Jack was groggy and confused as he rubbed sleep from his blue eyes.  His eyes focused on his friend just as Ennis leaned in for a kiss.

“Pull your pants down, Rodeo!” Ennis ordered.  “I want to see you.”  Jack complied without a word.  Ennis smiled as Jack removed his jeans.

“Now pull them all the way off and bend over… all the way over.”  Jack did what he was told.  Ennis crawled down on the bedroll, directly under Jack’s rock hard behind.  He glanced up timidly and took in the sight of Jack’s tiny pucker and his pendulous scrotum. 

“Ah the view is so good from down here!”  Ennis muttered as he continued to feast his eyes.  Jack held very still, slightly amused at his friend’s antics.  Ennis reached up tentatively, and spread Jack’s butt cheeks to gain a better view of his hole.  He patted Jack’s ass, rubbed him tenderly. 

“That feels so good, Friend!”  Jack whispered as he held his position!  Ennis reached down slightly and cupped one ball, released it, and palmed the other.  Losing control, Ennis moved his mouth closer to Jack’s balls and placed one in his mouth.  When he gently gulped the other, Jack fell flat onto his chest…





*Bang*  Dagi just fainted and fell off her chair. She will come back later to comment on this haaawt piece.
Title: Re: Sinner (part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 07, 2007, 08:21:33 pm
:laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

littlewing, you're going to make me pee my pants!

Hey Gary, it's true! ;)
Title: Re: Sinner (Part 3)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 07, 2007, 08:23:37 pm
Jack's tiny pucker...  Wow!  Littlewing, are you trying to drive me insane?  Too damn bad that wasn't in the movie.   ;D

Gary

Well, if this image was in the film, I would be insane!  Totally, stark raving mad!
Title: Re: Kindred Spirits
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 07, 2007, 08:25:31 pm
"I never had a brother, you know, bein' an only child," mused Jack, while he and Ennis sat gazing into the campfire in the silent, dying light of the day; shifting slightly in the lawnchair, Jack continued, "I sometimes wondered what that mighta been like...havin' someone to play with, an' also someone to look after you, and to look after..."...Jack's voice drifted as Ennis discerned a shadow, not only from the evening's twilight, pass over his bud's aging face.

Ennis, who had had a damn handful of a brother in K.E., didn't know how to register this odd, melancholy reflection of Jack's (he and K.E. had barely tolerated one another, and were glad to get out of each other's hair when the opportunity arose), but he sensed the longing in his one and only cowboy that he never knew existed, and felt a kindred kindness rise thereby in his own breast.

"It's late in the day, friend," Ennis said, leaning expectantly to directly face Jack, "but I can be a brother to ya, if that's whatchya want"; and in saying so, he reached out to gently touch Jack's pensive cheek, in the way that Jack had taught him so long ago.

I am so moved by this!  What a sweet, tender moment for our boys!  Thanks for posting this, sweets!  I loved reading every word.
Title: Re: Sinner (Part 3)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 07, 2007, 08:26:21 pm
*Bang*  Dagi just fainted and fell off her chair. She will come back later to comment on this haaawt piece.

 :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:
Title: Sinner (Part 4)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 07, 2007, 08:41:56 pm
Sinner (Part 4) by Littlewing1957

I'm dedicating this to all of you guys!  I love you!

Ennis chuckled softly as he followed Jack’s descent onto the bedroll.  He had to follow him down, as Jack’s balls were still in his mouth!  Jack was a bit mortified to lose his balance just as Ennis gobbled him, but how could he stay still after all that?  And the vibrations from Ennis’ deep, throaty chuckles caressed Jack in ways he couldn’t describe.

Ennis released his friend’s sacs and caressed them for a bit.  Jack turned over onto his back and fixed Ennis with a moist, blue stare.  Ennis was caught.  He couldn’t look away, but felt uncomfortable as he was drawn deeper into the liquid orbs of blue.

A tender sigh and Ennis was released.  Jack looked away, but reached out for his new lover - encouraged, pleaded for an embrace.  Ennis pulled Jack to his muscular chest and held him tight.  Jack instinctively wrapped his arms around his friend’s broad shoulders and pushed in close. 
Title: Re: Sinner (Part 4)
Post by: moremojo on August 07, 2007, 09:06:03 pm
I am honored to be a dedicatee of such a lusty story, Marie! You guys are inspiring all kinds of naughty thoughts in my li'l ole noggin.
A tender sigh and Ennis was released.  Jack looked away, but reached out for his new lover - encouraged, pleaded for an embrace.  Ennis pulled Jack to his muscular chest and held him tight.  Jack instinctively wrapped his arms around his friend’s broad shoulders and pushed in close.
I think your writing in this passage, Marie, is particularly fine. It's lyrical and tight at the same time.

 :)
Scott
Title: Caps and Facial Hair
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 07, 2007, 09:11:07 pm
Caps and Facial hair by Littlewing1957

Jack Twist had his “buck” teeth filed down and replaced with caps.  He was feeling fine and grew a shaggy mustache to finish the job.  Jack didn’t think his new look was anything special, but he couldn’t wait to see Ennis’ reaction to his new teeth and his bushy top lip.  Jack appraised his mustache in a small hand mirror.  “Poor Ennis!”  Jack chucked softly.  “He’ll remember being kissed, that’s for damn sure!”

At first Ennis didn’t notice, or he wanted to keep his comments to himself.  Jack ran into his lover’s arms and planted a wet, scratchy one on Ennis' full lips. 

“Whoa, Jack!”  Ennis laughed as he stepped back a bit.  “What is that growin’ on your top lip?”  Jack punched Ennis’ upper arm. “It’s a mustache, Friend.  Do you like it?”  Jack kissed Ennis again for good measure.

“I don’t know, Bud.”  Ennis began, shaking his head.  “I guess it’s okay, just don’t get too carried away with that thing.  It feels like it can hurt, you get too excited!”  Jack laughed uproariously and walked into Don Wroe’s cabin to get settled for the week.  Once all the gear, food and other provisions were put away, Ennis and Jack sat side-by-side on the massive couch to catch up.  Jack told Ennis all about his desire to do something about his buck teeth.  He saved for a long time to pay for the procedure, and was very satisfied with the results.  Jack opened up so that Ennis could see his new caps.

“Looks nice, Bud!”  Ennis said approvingly.  But how do they feel?  How do they taste?  Here, let me see!”  Ennis placed his mouth over Jack’s, and very forcefully, moved his tongue first along the top teeth, and then along the bottom.  He pulled his tongue away, bit at Jack’s mustache, sucked at the dark hairs.  “Very good… tastes good, Jack!  I like em!”  Jack almost fell off the couch, taken aback by the sheer sexiness of Ennis’ actions.

“Well, if you like the taste, you’ll love the feel…down there!”  It was Jack, pointing to Ennis’ groin,  trying his best to catch his breath.  It was Ennis’ turn to fall over!  He pulled at his belt, as Jack’s head went down….


Title: Re: Sinner (Part 4)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 07, 2007, 09:12:41 pm
I am honored to be a dedicatee of such a lusty story, Marie! You guys are inspiring all kinds of naughty thoughts in my li'l ole noggin.I think your writing in this passage, Marie, is particularly fine. It's lyrical and tight at the same time.

 :)
Scott

Thanks so much, Babe!  I really appreciate your kind words.  You're such a talented writer, that coming from you, this is high praise indeed!
Title: Re: Caps and Facial Hair
Post by: moremojo on August 07, 2007, 09:18:33 pm
Caps and Facial hair by Littlewing1957
One of my favorite expressions I encountered while doing time on IMDb, was someone referring to Jack's facial growth as a 'pornstache'! :laugh: I use that sometimes privately when thinking of or referring to mustaches (and remember, I love porn).
Title: Re: Caps and Facial Hair
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 07, 2007, 10:02:08 pm
One of my favorite expressions I encountered while doing time on IMDb, was someone referring to Jack's facial growth as a 'pornstache'! :laugh: I use that sometimes privately when thinking of or referring to mustaches (and remember, I love porn).


 :laugh:  :laugh: You love porn?  I'll admit it...so do I!  ::)  :o

Title: Recapturing Youth
Post by: moremojo on August 07, 2007, 10:41:47 pm
More and more, during their all too infrequent get-togethers in what had become the late summer of their lives, Ennis and Jack turned reflective and nostalgic towards the past, both of their times together and of their lives generally, and so it came as no surprise when Ennis at one point said, "Ya know, not having finished high school, I missed out on so much of that high school stuff, like datin' and shit...hell, I never even gave a girl a hickey, much less got one"; Jack smiled at his friend's effusiveness that even now could invest him with so much boyishness, at which he replied that, as a fellow dropout, he too had missed out on many of the teenage rites of passage...including hickeys.

"Ya know, Ennis, it's not too late", Jack said with a fresh gleam in his eye, his voice rising to the lilt that colored it when he became excited, continuing with, "Hell, we've never given each other hickeys...how about we make up for lost time?"; at that, Ennis needed no further prodding, and, grabbing his friend's head firmly in his hands, sank his face upon Jack's warm neck, sucking and slightly biting the flesh that felt, at such times as this, like his own.

Jack laughed at the ticklish deliciousness of the sensation, and immediately after returned the favor, noting a little rasp of pleasure coming out of Ennis's throat even as his mouth was upon it; the deed done, the two of them went to look at the results in the mirror of Jack's truck, whereupon they burst out laughing at the massive red marks they had carved on each other, whereupon Ennis said, "Well, we may be old-timers, but those young 'uns got nothin' on us", already contemplating how he would show off the mark to his fellow ranch hands as a trophy from Cassie, while Jack, right then touching his neck with apprehension, began to worry as to how he would explain it later to Lureen.
Title: Re: Recapturing Youth
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 07, 2007, 11:15:54 pm
More and more, during their all too infrequent get-togethers in what had become the late summer of their lives, Ennis and Jack turned reflective and nostalgic towards the past, both of their times together and of their lives generally, and so it came as no surprise when Ennis at one point said, "Ya know, not having finished high school, I missed out on so much of that high school stuff, like datin' and shit...hell, I never even gave a girl a hickey, much less got one"; Jack smiled at his friend's effusiveness that even now could invest him with so much boyishness, at which he replied that, as a fellow dropout, he too had missed out on many of the teenage rites of passage...including hickeys.

"Ya know, Ennis, it's not too late", Jack said with a fresh gleam in his eye, his voice rising to the lilt that colored it when he became excited, continuing with, "Hell, we've never given each other hickeys...how about we make up for lost time?"; at that, Ennis needed no further prodding, and, grabbing his friend's head firmly in his hands, sank his face upon Jack's warm neck, sucking and slightly biting the flesh that felt, at such times as this, like his own.

Jack laughed at the ticklish deliciousness of the sensation, and immediately after returned the favor, noting a little rasp of pleasure coming out of Ennis's throat even as his mouth was upon it; the deed done, the two of them went to look at the results in the mirror of Jack's truck, whereupon they burst out laughing at the massive red marks they had carved on each other, whereupon Ennis said, "Well, we may be old-timers, but those young 'uns got nothin' on us", already contemplating how he would show off the mark to his fellow ranch hands as a trophy from Cassie, while Jack, right then touching his neck with apprehension, began to worry as to how he would explain it later to Lureen.

Wow, moremojo!  I can imagine this happening!  This is a very original, very well written tale!  And I just love the last paragraph, especially, "while Jack, right then touching his neck with apprehension, began to worry as to how he would explain it later to Lureen."  This shows us that Jack, although unhappy in his marriage, was a typical husband! And Ennis using Cassie as a cover.  Lovely work, moremojo.  Looks like just the 2 of us here tonight...so far!  :laugh: 
Title: Re: Recapturing Youth
Post by: moremojo on August 08, 2007, 01:00:03 am
I'm glad you enjoyed my little tale, Marie. I thought about it after posting, that hickeys don't form immediately--they need a little time, like a night's worth, to coalesce into their full purplish glory. Just shows you how very long it's been since I've had one! :laugh: But with an adequate amount of suspension of belief, the story I trust can still be enjoyed.

And Gary, like I was telling Marie, I've gotta admit I'm kind of a porn-hound. I can't help it--I enjoy looking at sexy men, and if I can watch two or more of them together, it's all the more inspiring. I hope no one around here thinks any less of me for it! ;)

Bel Ami's a nice company, though sometimes the models there are a little bit green for my tastes. Beautiful, certainly, but more often than not I like a streak of silver on my foxes! 8)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 08, 2007, 01:03:10 am
Hi there littewing and moremojo,

I see you two have posed some new stories.  Great!  But I'm a bit sleepy right now, but I will read them in the morning.  Thanks so much for posting them.   :D

Gary

P.S.  Did someone mention porn?  I love those Bel Ami boys.   :P

Have a good rest, Gary, love!  We'll see you tomorrow.  :)
Title: Re: Recapturing Youth
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 08, 2007, 01:08:17 am
I'm glad you enjoyed my little tale, Marie. I thought about it after posting, that hickeys don't form immediately--they need a little time, like a night's worth, to coalesce into their full purplish glory. Just shows you how very long it's been since I've had one! :laugh: But with an adequate amount of suspension of belief, the story I trust can still be enjoyed.

And Gary, like I was telling Marie, I've gotta admit I'm kind of a porn-hound. I can't help it--I enjoy looking at sexy men, and if I can watch two or more of them together, it's all the more inspiring. I hope no one around here thinks any less of me for it! ;)

Bel Ami's a nice company, though sometimes the models there are a little bit green for my tastes. Beautiful, certainly, but more often than not I like a streak of silver on my foxes! 8)

Thanks for sharing, moremojo.  I, too, have forgotten what it is like to get a hickey.  Actually, I only ever got 1 in my entire life, some 35 years ago!  :laugh:  I certainly don't remember how long it takes for one to appear, so no suspension of belief needed on my part!

We will never think less of you, sweets!  A lot of people like porn.  I have no problem with it, myself, and wonder why people build this mystique around a simple, biological function.  But then again, treating sex so clinically takes all the wonder out of it.  I suppose a little mystery and secrecy is needed to keep sex fresh and interesting.
Title: Re: Kindred Spirits
Post by: Toycoon on August 08, 2007, 01:35:43 am
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"It's late in the day, friend," Ennis said, leaning expectantly to directly face Jack, "but I can be a brother to ya, if that's whatchya want"; and in saying so, he reached out to gently touch Jack's pensive cheek, in the way that Jack had taught him so long ago.

That was very touching, moremojo. Very nicely told with excellent details.
Title: Re: Sinner (Part 4)
Post by: Toycoon on August 08, 2007, 01:38:28 am
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He had to follow him down, as Jack’s balls were still in his mouth!  Jack was a bit mortified to lose his balance just as Ennis gobbled him, but how could he stay still after all that?  And the vibrations from Ennis’ deep, throaty chuckles caressed Jack in ways he couldn’t describe.

Littlewing, you are too much lady! Now that's what I call a hummer...
Title: Re: Caps and Facial Hair
Post by: Toycoon on August 08, 2007, 01:44:45 am
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“He’ll remember being kissed, that’s for damn sure!”

Littlewing, you are so prolific. You seem to have so many angles on these two fellas. It's astounding!

Title: Re: Recapturing Youth
Post by: Toycoon on August 08, 2007, 01:55:02 am
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Ennis said, "Well, we may be old-timers, but those young 'uns got nothin' on us", already contemplating how he would show off the mark to his fellow ranch hands as a trophy from Cassie, while Jack, right then touching his neck with apprehension, began to worry as to how he would explain it later to Lureen.

So original, moremojo. Very clever story. How will Jack explain that hickey to Lureen? Maybe you got a part two to your story...
Title: Re: Sinner (Part 4)
Post by: Dagi on August 08, 2007, 08:47:14 am

  And the vibrations from Ennis’ deep, throaty chuckles caressed Jack in ways he couldn’t describe.


Phew, I know who is mortified to loose her balance here, too! Marie, Jack´s moist, blue stare will haunt me the rest of my day  :P.

Thank you, you incredible woman! We love you, too!

Dagi
Title: Re: Caps and Facial Hair
Post by: Dagi on August 08, 2007, 08:50:58 am
Caps and Facial hair by Littlewing1957

Jack Twist had his “buck” teeth filed down and replaced with caps.  He was feeling fine and grew a shaggy mustache to finish the job.  Jack didn’t think his new look was anything special, but he couldn’t wait to see Ennis’ reaction to his new teeth and his bushy top lip.  Jack appraised his mustache in a small hand mirror.  “Poor Ennis!”  Jack chucked softly.  “He’ll remember being kissed, that’s for damn sure!”

At first Ennis didn’t notice, or he wanted to keep his comments to himself.  Jack ran into his lover’s arms and planted a wet, scratchy one on Ennis' full lips. 

“Whoa, Jack!”  Ennis laughed as he stepped back a bit.  “What is that growin’ on your top lip?”  Jack punched Ennis’ upper arm. “It’s a mustache, Friend.  Do you like it?”  Jack kissed Ennis again for good measure.

“I don’t know, Bud.”  Ennis began, shaking his head.  “I guess it’s okay, just don’t get too carried away with that thing.  It feels like it can hurt, you get too excited!”  Jack laughed uproariously and walked into Don Wroe’s cabin to get settled for the week.  Once all the gear, food and other provisions were put away, Ennis and Jack sat side-by-side on the massive couch to catch up.  Jack told Ennis all about his desire to do something about his buck teeth.  He saved for a long time to pay for the procedure, and was very satisfied with the results.  Jack opened up so that Ennis could see his new caps.

“Looks nice, Bud!”  Ennis said approvingly.  But how do they feel?  How do they taste?  Here, let me see!”  Ennis placed his mouth over Jack’s, and very forcefully, moved his tongue first along the top teeth, and then along the bottom.  He pulled his tongue away, bit at Jack’s mustache, sucked at the dark hairs.  “Very good… tastes good, Jack!  I like em!”  Jack almost fell off the couch, taken aback by the sheer sexiness of Ennis’ actions.

“Well, if you like the taste, you’ll love the feel…down there!”  It was Jack, pointing to Ennis’ groin,  trying his best to catch his breath.  It was Ennis’ turn to fall over!  He pulled at his belt, as Jack’s head went down….




I admit I ´ve never been a fan of mustaches.....but this story is freakin´ sexy nevertheless, dirty mama!! Thank you!

Dagi
Title: Re: Recapturing Youth
Post by: Dagi on August 08, 2007, 08:58:45 am
Ennis needed no further prodding, and, grabbing his friend's head firmly in his hands, sank his face upon Jack's warm neck, sucking and slightly biting the flesh that felt, at such times as this, like his own.


Aaahhh Moremojo, how original and sweet and erotic. I love getting hickeys....

Dagi
Title: Re: Recapturing Youth
Post by: moremojo on August 08, 2007, 11:41:06 am
I met a boy just a few weeks after I started college, and he began sucking on my ears, and he did it a long time.
I've never had a hickey anywhere else but my neck, but I have had my ears kissed and sucked before, and man, does that feel exquisite! Who woulda thunk that those appendages could be such a minefield of sensation?

How did you deal with the embarrassment of your discolored lobes, Gary? Did you chalk it up to some lucky, randy girl?
Title: Re: Recapturing Youth
Post by: Dagi on August 08, 2007, 01:36:16 pm
This sure brings back memories, moremojo.  I met a boy just a few weeks after I started college, and he began sucking on my ears, and he did it a long time.  It felt really good, and I didn't think anything of it.  I thought of hickeys as something you got on your neck.  And the next day I looked in the mirror, and to my horror I discovered that my earlobes were bruised.  And I was extremely shy, and living in a dorm full of boys, and I had to walk around with this very noticeable sign that I had done the wild thing recently for about a week.  I could have died.   :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

Gary


 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

You should write a novel, honey  ;).

Title: Re: Sinner (Part 3)
Post by: Dagi on August 08, 2007, 02:15:09 pm

Dagi, how will you top the latest descent into Smutville?

Toycoon, how about you try to make me blush for a change?  ::)

Dagi
Title: Re: Recapturing Youth
Post by: Dagi on August 08, 2007, 02:18:03 pm

 I can't help it--I enjoy looking at sexy men, and if I can watch two or more of them together, it's all the more inspiring. I hope no one around here thinks any less of me for it! ;)


Hi Moremojo, have you read some of our stories before you posted your first one? ;D You surely got the impression that we are a bunch of innocent angels.

Dagi
Title: Re: Recapturing Youth
Post by: moremojo on August 08, 2007, 04:27:31 pm
Hi Moremojo, have you read some of our stories before you posted your first one? ;D You surely got the impression that we are a bunch of innocent angels.

Dagi
Hi, Dagi, no, I didn't read too much before just butting in and acting on the inspiration that Toycoon's initial post provided me. I have a tendency to just dive in like that when properly motivated, which is kind of strange considering that I'm generally a rather timid person. I'm still exploring the thread and its earlier history, and you're right, there's not too much here that I would call innocent. ;) But it's all good! ;D
Title: Re: Recapturing Youth
Post by: Dagi on August 08, 2007, 05:03:28 pm
Hi, Dagi, no, I didn't read too much before just butting in and acting on the inspiration that Toycoon's initial post provided me. I have a tendency to just dive in like that when properly motivated, which is kind of strange considering that I'm generally a rather timid person. I'm still exploring the thread and its earlier history, and you're right, there's not too much here that I would call innocent. ;) But it's all good! ;D

You can read the stories on my Read Only thread, but if you want to learn more about us, you should read the comments in between on this thread  ;D.

Dagi

PS Could you please write the title and your name on top of your stories? That would help me a lot when I archive the stories. Thank you!
Title: Re: Recapturing Youth
Post by: moremojo on August 08, 2007, 05:34:30 pm
You can read the stories on my Read Only thread, but if you want to learn more about us, you should read the comments in between on this thread  ;D.
Hey, thanks for letting me know about Read Only--I didn't realize that was there until reading your post!
PS Could you please write the title and your name on top of your stories? That would help me a lot when I archive the stories. Thank you!
Sure thing!
Title: Aguirre
Post by: moremojo on August 08, 2007, 06:07:20 pm
Aguirre by moremojo

His teeth clenched so hard inside his closed mouth that they slowly began to ache, as Joe Aguirre sat on his steady horse, gazing from a distance at the naked youths before him, the ruddy Del Mar boy thrusting into that damn Twist sonafabitch, kneeling on all fours with his ass pointed skyward like a fuckin' cat in heat, both utterly oblivious to the vast landscape around them with its secret, prying eyes; Aguirre waited until the two had retreated to the tent before making his way back into town.

While riding, none too hurriedly, Joe felt the rush of his blood swelling his face, as he thought back on last summer, and the first time he met that scamp Jack, of how that Twist boy wasn't much good at any damn thing, though he obviously tried to please and wile himself into everyone's good graces; Joe remembered how the slightest hint of a smile from that fresh face softened him up inside, made him forgive the latest fuckup, and give the kid another chance, and as he approached Signal he began to think he had given the boy one chance too many.

Securing his horse and settling himself into his trailer, Joe pondered how he would handle the current situation, of how he couldn't abide the thought of letting two queers go at it on his good time, but of how little he could afford the loss of two able bodies in this crucial season; yeah, bodies were on his mind as, with a hint of hot tears welling up in his eyes and that old loathing rising up in his throat to the point he thought he would puke his very soul out, he unbuttoned his fly to reach down and stroke the stiffening flesh within.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: LauraGigs on August 08, 2007, 06:22:11 pm
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"...that old loathing rising up in his throat to the point he thought he would puke his very soul out..."

You nailed it, Mojo.
Title: Re: Sinner (Part 3)
Post by: Toycoon on August 08, 2007, 09:08:29 pm
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Toycoon, how about you try to make me blush for a change?  ::)
Dagi

Hmmmm... I know a challenge when I hear one. Dagi, this next one's for you (and all my horny devotees).
Title: Re: Sinner (Part 4)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 08, 2007, 11:22:44 pm
Littlewing, you are too much lady! Now that's what I call a hummer...

Thanks, Baby!   :laugh:  :laugh:
Title: Re: Caps and Facial Hair
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 08, 2007, 11:23:19 pm
Littlewing, you are so prolific. You seem to have so many angles on these two fellas. It's astounding!



Hey, I told you..I got a million of em!
Title: Re: Sinner (Part 4)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 08, 2007, 11:24:30 pm
Phew, I know who is mortified to loose her balance here, too! Marie, Jack´s moist, blue stare will haunt me the rest of my day  :P.

Thank you, you incredible woman! We love you, too!

Dagi

Dagi, you're always so sweet!  You guys are my refuge.  Thanks so much for being here with me!  :)
Title: Re: Sinner (Part 4)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 08, 2007, 11:25:51 pm
Very erotic and loving, littlewing.  And I'm so glad that Jack's tumble while his balls were in Ennis's mouth didn't end in disaster.   :o  Who knew sex could be so dangerous?

Gary

Yeah, I kind of struggled with that!  Another suspension of disbelief moment!  :laugh:
Title: Re: Caps and Facial Hair
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 08, 2007, 11:28:36 pm
MMM  Littlewing, I was thinking with all this attention to Jack's mouth that something was eventually going to go in there.   ;)

Gary

You're so bad, Gary!  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:
Title: Re: Recapturing Youth
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 08, 2007, 11:30:24 pm
Maybe I will, Dagi.    ;D  Thanks for the encouragement.  You're a sweetheart. 

Gary

I agree with Dagi, Gary!  You have the skill.  You should write a novel!  :)
Title: Re: Meat
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 08, 2007, 11:34:37 pm
Meat by Toycoon

Jack was on his knees, his body warm from the campfire, hot from desire, brought the meat to his face, inhaling deeply, drawing in the musky scent then, finally setting the smooth flesh on his hungry lips.

Jack drew his lips around the thick meat then sucked greedily on it so that his cheeks puffed out and the juices oozed from the sides of his mouth, dribbled down his chin and onto his pants.

Ennis wiped the grease from his mouth with his sleeve and thought, "damn, I ain't never seen nobody eat elk jerky like that before!"

Okay, Toycoon, you had me going there for awhile.  I was so hot and bothered that I almost passed out!  Charming story, Toycoon!  Very original and with a twist.  I love it!
Title: Re: Aguirre
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 08, 2007, 11:36:13 pm
Aguirre by moremojo

His teeth clenched so hard inside his closed mouth that they slowly began to ache, as Joe Aguirre sat on his steady horse, gazing from a distance at the naked youths before him, the ruddy Del Mar boy thrusting into that damn Twist sonafabitch, kneeling on all fours with his ass pointed skyward like a fuckin' cat in heat, both utterly oblivious to the vast landscape around them with its secret, prying eyes; Aguirre waited until the two had retreated to the tent before making his way back into town.

While riding, none too hurriedly, Joe felt the rush of his blood swelling his face, as he thought back on last summer, and the first time he met that scamp Jack, of how that Twist boy wasn't much good at any damn thing, though he obviously tried to please and wile himself into everyone's good graces; Joe remembered how the slightest hint of a smile from that fresh face softened him up inside, made him forgive the latest fuckup, and give the kid another chance, and as he approached Signal he began to think he had given the boy one chance too many.

Securing his horse and settling himself into his trailer, Joe pondered how he would handle the current situation, of how he couldn't abide the thought of letting two queers go at it on his good time, but of how little he could afford the loss of two able bodies in this crucial season; yeah, bodies were on his mind as, with a hint of hot tears welling up in his eyes and that old loathing rising up in his throat to the point he thought he would puke his very soul out, he unbuttoned his fly to reach down and stroke the stiffening flesh within.

Aww, moremojo, you beat me to it.  We must be on the same wavelength today.  I'm thinking about Aguirre and have a little tale in mind.  I love your fic, though.  And the part where Aguirre is mad enough to spit, but aroused at the same time?  Brilliant!  Read on..
Title: Re: Aguirre
Post by: Toycoon on August 09, 2007, 12:05:49 am
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His teeth clenched so hard inside his closed mouth that they slowly began to ache, as Joe Aguirre sat on his steady horse, gazing from a distance at the naked youths before him, the ruddy Del Mar boy thrusting into that damn Twist sonafabitch, kneeling on all fours with his ass pointed skyward like a fuckin' cat in heat, both utterly oblivious to the vast landscape around them with its secret, prying eyes; Aguirre waited until the two had retreated to the tent before making his way back into town.

It just goes to show ya: everybody likes beautiful people making love. I would say that accounts for the unbelievable interest in this film. Most straight men love to watch beautiful girls making love together and so there is finally something hot for the ladies. The gay guys were already here. Mighty fine descriptions, moremojo. Keep it up!
Title: Secret Stash
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 09, 2007, 12:07:03 am
Secret Stash by Littlewing1957

“I tell you, they was screwin’ each other!”  Aguirre was red faced as he spoke to one of the foremen.  Darryl Freeman looked at Aguirre and shook his handsome head.

“I don’t believe it, Joe!  Not those 2 good lookin’ guys.  How do you know all this?  You got proof?”  Aguirre pulled a pack of cigs from his desk drawer and offered one to Darryl.  Darryl refused.

“Because I saw ‘em with my own eyes!”  Aguirre muttered as he placed a long cig into his mouth.  "And besides, I caught them one day laughing it up, horsing around.  Listen, man, you don’t play around like that, pull on each other half naked without anything goin’ on."  Aguirre lit his cigarette.  “Those 2 boys are queer, I tell ya!”  Darryl Freeman wasn’t convinced.

“Hey, wait a minute, Joe,” Darryl began.  “We grew up together and engaged in a bit of horseplay with each other.  You mean to say we’re queer?”  Aguirre was getting angry now.  He didn’t know why he even confided in his longtime friend; other than the fact that the truth was eating away at him.   5 years have come and gone since the summer he hired Ennis and Jack, and Joe couldn’t keep the secret to himself any longer.

“Look, Darryl, I got proof, okay?”   Aguirre stood and moved toward his small safe.  “You want to see for yourself?”  Darryl was amused and quite curious now.  He nodded.  Aguirre pulled from his safe a small stack of photos.  He placed them on the desk right in front of his childhood friend.  Darryl reluctantly picked up the pics and whistled.  His mind couldn’t register what he was seeing: Jack and Ennis out in the broad daylight, engaging in anal sex!  Darryl returned the pictures to his friend.  The sight of Ennis bent over Jack was lurid enough, but Jack with Ennis’ manhood in his mouth was obscene!  Darryl wouldn’t admit it, but he was aroused by what he just saw.  He couldn’t imagine, though, why Joe would take these pictures.

“Okay, I see!”  Darryl muttered.  I thought you was bullshittin,’ man!  Well, at least they didn’t do anything to the sheep.  They had each other to poke!”  Darryl and Joe both laughed ruefully.  “Why are you saving those pictures?”  Darryl asked his friend.  Aguirre was silent.  He didn’t know why he held onto those pics for so long, and he didn’t want to know the answer.  “I don’t know, Darryl!”  Aguirre began.  “Annunition, maybe?”  Darryl didn’t know what Aguirre meant, and decided to leave it alone.

“Hey Joe!”  Darryl began.  “Why don’t you make us a pot of coffee, and we’ll forget about those queer ranch stiffs you hired.  Don’t beat yourself up about it.  You had no way of knowing that they was queer."  Darryl pointed to the pot in back of his friend.  "Make us a pot of coffee?”  Aguirre smiled and nodded.  He turned his back to Darryl and started on the coffee.  Darryl quickly and expertly grabbed a few of the pics that Aguirre left on the desk.  Joe would never miss them.  Darryl smiled softly as he placed the pics in his jeans pocket.  The erotic snapshots of Ennis and Jack would come in handy during those lonely times up on the mountain... 


Title: Re: Aguirre
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 09, 2007, 12:26:33 am
and so there is finally something hot for the ladies.

Damn straight!  We get double the dicks!  It doesn't get any better than that!  ;)  Can I say this?  I'm really asking for it, aren't I?
Title: Re: Aguirre
Post by: LauraGigs on August 09, 2007, 01:39:03 am
Men love to watch beautiful girls making love together and so there is finally something hot for the ladies.
Damn straight!  We get double the dicks!  It doesn't get any better than that!  ;)


From the long languid looks — ever slower
to the riveted jeans being lowered...
Finally screen satisfaction
for the straight female faction!
A total, erotic mind-blower!
Title: Re: Aguirre
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 09, 2007, 02:00:27 am

From the long languid looks — ever slower
to the riveted jeans being lowered...
Finally screen satisfaction
for the straight female faction!
A total, erotic mind-blower!

Wow, thanks, LauraGigs!  I love this!  :)
Title: Re: Aguirre
Post by: Toycoon on August 09, 2007, 08:58:16 am
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From the long languid looks — ever slower
to the riveted jeans being lowered...
Finally screen satisfaction
for the straight female faction!
A total, erotic mind-blower!

Bitchin! I don't believe we've ever had a limerick on Jack with Ennis before. Congratulations on being the first, Miss Lauragigs!
Title: Re: Bad dream
Post by: moremojo on August 09, 2007, 09:38:25 am
Ennis awoke with a start.  This time the pillow was wet!  Well, so were the sheets!  Ennis had a dream: a recurring nightmare that terrified and excited him at the same time.  This time Jack was alive and walking intently down a Mexican alley.  He stopped in front of a decent looking man, a lad who looked a lot like Ennis.  Ennis twitched and shuddered as he saw Jack and the hustler walk off into the shadows.

Wide awake now, Ennis tried to turn over.  It was no good.  The rank sheets were holding him prisoner.  He sighed audibly and pulled at the cheap, twisted bed clothes in an attempt to free himself.  “Jack, how could you do that to me?”  Ennis mumbled as he finally forced himself free.  He tried to keep his heart steady as he imagined Jack kissing, caressing, gentling another man.  It was a little more than he could bear.

“Maybe we should go to Mexico!”  Ennis remembered Jack telling him right before he put 2 and 2 together.  He wanted to punch Jack until he bled.  A part of him died that day, and Ennis found that many months later, the wound had not healed.   “Jack fuckin’ Twist, if you was alive, I would kill your ass!”  Ennis screamed as he somehow found the strength to get up and face the day.

Marie, I came across this story just yesterday, and found it so moving. It made me sad, hurting again for the hurt that Ennis felt, but that's a mark of good writing on your part. You captured very well how grief can encapsulate anger, even rage, as well as loss and sorrow.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on August 09, 2007, 04:25:07 pm
I think the fortnight is up tomorrow!!! Susie has a lot of catch up reading to do--and probably a pile of laundry!!

Tomorrow, unless plans change, I'll be picking up a friend after outpatient surgery--not sure when I'll be back.

SO............Let the party begin!!!!!

We missed you SUSIE!!


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Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on August 09, 2007, 05:58:49 pm
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Wow!  I can only hope my welcome back will be half so festive.

Yours, dear heart, will be 100% as festive!!  I was unaware you were going on vacation! Have fun, cowboy!!  ;D
Title: Re: Bad dream
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 09, 2007, 08:58:44 pm
Marie, I came across this story just yesterday, and found it so moving. It made me sad, hurting again for the hurt that Ennis felt, but that's a mark of good writing on your part. You captured very well how grief can encapsulate anger, even rage, as well as loss and sorrow.

Why thanks, moremojo!  I had almost forgotten about this one!  I thank you so much for your kind words!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 09, 2007, 08:59:53 pm
Hello everyone,

I just got a postcard from our friend Susie.  She's having a wonderful time, and she's been to the beach everyday.  She says that she misses all of us, and she wanted me to tell you all "HI."   ;D

Just a few more days and she'll be back.  I can hardly wait. 

Gary

Hi, Gary!  Thanks for the update re: SusieBaby!  I'm glad to hear she's having a good time on holiday, and I can't wait till she returns to us!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 09, 2007, 09:02:55 pm
Aww  Thanks Shasta, dear.  You're a sweetheart.

Gary

You leavin' us Gary, or are you coming my way?  I'm sure you know what that means!  :)
Title: Re: Secret Stash
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 09, 2007, 09:04:48 pm
OMG!  Littlewing, I don't know why Aguirre would take and keep those photos, but I have a feeling that he will miss the ones that Darryl took.   :P  That was a fun read.  I loved it.

BTW, I don't know what Aguirre means by annunition either.  Did you mean ammunition?

Gary

Well, you got me, Gary!  :laugh: :laugh:  It seems Microsoft's spell check is not very reliable!  I meant ammunition, certainly!  :)
Title: Meat
Post by: Toycoon on August 09, 2007, 09:06:40 pm
Meat by Toycoon

Jack was on his knees, his body warm from the campfire, hot from desire, when he brought the meat to his face, inhaling deeply, drawing in the musky scent then, finally setting the smooth flesh on his hungry lips.

Jack drew his lips around the thick meat then sucked greedily on it so that his cheeks puffed out and the juices oozed from the sides of his mouth, dribbled down his chin and onto his pants.

Ennis wiped the grease from his mouth with his sleeve and thought,"damn, I ain't never seen nobody eat elk jerky like that before!"
Title: It's alright, Cowboy
Post by: Toycoon on August 09, 2007, 09:43:49 pm
It's alright, Cowboy by Toycoon

Ennis was so nervous, trembling and shaking at the thought of making love to a man but he couldn't have asked for a better friend to break him in; Jack put Ennis at ease, softy rubbing Ennis' head and whispering "it's alright, it's alright... I'm right here with you, cowboy" in a voice as smooth as velvet.

Comfortable and relaxed, Jack had his way with the inexperienced ranch hand, each man deriving pleasure from places neither knew could give it.

As the cool night wore on, Ennis took Jack in every orifice and Jack, reciprocated enthusiastically with Ennis; vertiginous by how good it all felt.


Title: It's alright, Cowboy (Part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 09, 2007, 10:03:42 pm
It’s alright, Cowboy (part 2) by Littlewing1957

Ennis was no longer nervous, or even ashamed.  He was rather sore, but he wouldn’t have it any other way.  In Ennis’ eyes, the physical discomfort was a measure of passion, and of conquest!

Jack didn’t need reassurance, or to be held and gentled like some gal, but he did enjoy the sensation of being in his friend’s embrace.  He pulled Ennis’ arms around his neck, kissed his smooth forearm.

“It’s alright for us to make love, Friend!”  Jack whispered as he kissed Ennis’ hair.  “It’s nobody’s business but our own.”  Ennis nodded and snuggled closer.  “It’s also okay to whisper something sexy in my ear!”  Jack chuckled.  He patted Ennis’ firm behind.  “All that time you spend up on horseback must make this so good!”  Jack said breathlessly.  He looked at Ennis, amused.  “Your turn…”


Title: It's alright, Cowboy (Part 3)
Post by: Toycoon on August 09, 2007, 10:25:49 pm
It's alright, Cowboy (Part 3)

"Jack, you make me feel special, kinda important,'" stammered Ennis," when you look at me, I feel wanted, hmm." he smiled bashfully and looked away but then back at Jack.

Jack never wanted anything more than he needed Ennis at that moment; he rubbed his lips on the soft hair on Ennis forearm.

Although they were worn out and ached all over, they kissed, touched and felt one another's body repeatedly until they each drifted off to sleep.
Title: Re: It's alright, Cowboy (Part 3)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 09, 2007, 11:39:14 pm
It's alright, Cowboy (Part 3)

"Jack, you make me feel special, kinda important,'" stammered Ennis," when you look at me, I feel wanted, hmm." he smiled bashfully and looked away but then back at Jack.

Jack never wanted anything more than he needed Ennis at that moment; he rubbed his lips on the soft hair on Ennis forearm.

Although they were worn out and ached all over, they kissed, touched and felt one another's body repeatedly until they each drifted off to sleep.

So nice, Toycoon!  Its so good to do a tag team story with you again.  Shall I continue?  I will, just give the word.  :)
Title: Re: It's alright, Cowboy (Part 3)
Post by: Toycoon on August 09, 2007, 11:47:04 pm
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Shall I continue?  I will, just give the word. 

Well, they've passed out! I don't know where we could go from here.
I suppose we could lead into a dream sequence but of course now, I've spoiled the surprise!  :D

I say, let's start another one.
Title: Re: It's alright, Cowboy (Part 3)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 10, 2007, 12:02:58 am
Well, they've passed out! I don't know where we could go from here.
I suppose we could lead into a dream sequence but of course now, I've spoiled the surprise!  :D

I say, let's start another one.

I was thinking the same thing!  We should start another one.  Babe, I'll let you start.  If you would like to wait until tomorrow, that's cool.
Title: A Slice of Life on the Mountain
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 10, 2007, 12:20:25 am
A Slice of Life on the Mountain by Littlewing1957

Toycoon, this is just a little something that was floating around in my head.  You can add to it if you want, or you may start another tale and I'll continue it tomorrow


Ennis rode in to camp on his mare.  His dark golden hair tangled in the wind, he was a breathtaking, formidable sight.  Jack dropped the wood he was adding to the cook fire.  The sight of Ennis’ approach stopped his heart.  “Aww, a whole lotta sexiness is comin’ this way!”  Jack mused as he watched his lover’s approach.

Ennis climbed down, shook himself all over.  He was stiff from such a long ride.  He walked a few circles around the fire, dropped down suddenly and did a few push ups.  Jack watched all of this in silence.  He didn’t want Ennis to know that his very presence caused his heart to skip a beat.

Jack continued to watch as Ennis worked out the kinks.  When his exercise routine was over, Ennis, flat out on his back, looked over at his friend and smiled.  Jack returned Ennis’ smile and walked over to where he lay.  He joined Ennis on the cold ground and kissed his lips.
Title: Re: Recapturing Youth
Post by: Dagi on August 10, 2007, 07:36:06 am

Bel Ami's a nice company, though sometimes the models there are a little bit green for my tastes. Beautiful, certainly, but more often than not I like a streak of silver on my foxes! 8)

Moremojo, I share Gary´s taste here  (although we disagree a little bit in the Ralph/Pierre-question  ;)) - that means, if you ever undeliberately purchase anything that turns out not to be ape-like enough for your taste, then don´t hesitate to pass it to me.  ;D ;D ;D

Dagi
Title: Re: Aguirre
Post by: Dagi on August 10, 2007, 07:41:28 am
Aguirre by moremojo


Brilliant writing, Scott! Sexy and touching at the same time. I like the thought that Jack was able to soften the old guy up....how sad that A. resents that.

It´s so good to have you with us, buddy!

Dagi
Title: Re: Sinner (Part 4)
Post by: Dagi on August 10, 2007, 07:44:37 am
Dagi, you're always so sweet!  You guys are my refuge.  Thanks so much for being here with me!  :)

Thanks to you, Marie, for being here with us and keeping the thread alive while others are absent or busy!

Dagi
Title: Re: Secret Stash
Post by: Dagi on August 10, 2007, 07:48:57 am
Secret Stash by Littlewing1957

“I tell you, they was screwin’ each other!”  Aguirre was red faced as he spoke to one of the foremen.  Darryl Freeman looked at Aguirre and shook his handsome head.

“I don’t believe it, Joe!  Not those 2 good lookin’ guys.  How do you know all this?  You got proof?”  Aguirre pulled a pack of cigs from his desk drawer and offered one to Darryl.  Darryl refused.

“Because I saw ‘em with my own eyes!”  Aguirre muttered as he placed a long cig into his mouth.  "And besides, I caught them one day laughing it up, horsing around.  Listen, man, you don’t play around like that, pull on each other half naked without anything goin’ on."  Aguirre lit his cigarette.  “Those 2 boys are queer, I tell ya!”  Darryl Freeman wasn’t convinced.

“Hey, wait a minute, Joe,” Darryl began.  “We grew up together and engaged in a bit of horseplay with each other.  You mean to say we’re queer?”  Aguirre was getting angry now.  He didn’t know why he even confided in his longtime friend; other than the fact that the truth was eating away at him.   5 years have come and gone since the summer he hired Ennis and Jack, and Joe couldn’t keep the secret to himself any longer.

“Look, Darryl, I got proof, okay?”   Aguirre stood and moved toward his small safe.  “You want to see for yourself?”  Darryl was amused and quite curious now.  He nodded.  Aguirre pulled from his safe a small stack of photos.  He placed them on the desk right in front of his childhood friend.  Darryl reluctantly picked up the pics and whistled.  His mind couldn’t register what he was seeing: Jack and Ennis out in the broad daylight, engaging in anal sex!  Darryl returned the pictures to his friend.  The sight of Ennis bent over Jack was lurid enough, but Jack with Ennis’ manhood in his mouth was obscene!  Darryl wouldn’t admit it, but he was aroused by what he just saw.  He couldn’t imagine, though, why Joe would take these pictures.

“Okay, I see!”  Darryl muttered.  I thought you was bullshittin,’ man!  Well, at least they didn’t do anything to the sheep.  They had each other to poke!”  Darryl and Joe both laughed ruefully.  “Why are you saving those pictures?”  Darryl asked his friend.  Aguirre was silent.  He didn’t know why he held onto those pics for so long, and he didn’t want to know the answer.  “I don’t know, Darryl!”  Aguirre began.  “Annunition, maybe?”  Darryl didn’t know what Aguirre meant, and decided to leave it alone.

“Hey Joe!”  Darryl began.  “Why don’t you make us a pot of coffee, and we’ll forget about those queer ranch stiffs you hired.  Don’t beat yourself up about it.  You had no way of knowing that they was queer."  Darryl pointed to the pot in back of his friend.  "Make us a pot of coffee?”  Aguirre smiled and nodded.  He turned his back to Darryl and started on the coffee.  Darryl quickly and expertly grabbed a few of the pics that Aguirre left on the desk.  Joe would never miss them.  Darryl smiled softly as he placed the pics in his jeans pocket.  The erotic snapshots of Ennis and Jack would come in handy during those lonely times up on the mountain... 




Marie, you are awesome. Awesome! And now show us these pics, come on  ;D !

Dagi
Title: Re: Aguirre
Post by: Dagi on August 10, 2007, 07:50:58 am
Damn straight!  We get double the dicks! 

 ;D :D ;D :D ;D
Title: Re: Aguirre
Post by: Dagi on August 10, 2007, 07:52:15 am

From the long languid looks — ever slower
to the riveted jeans being lowered...
Finally screen satisfaction
for the straight female faction!
A total, erotic mind-blower!

yeeehaaaw, Laura, that was great!

Dagi
Title: Re: Meat
Post by: Dagi on August 10, 2007, 07:59:08 am
Meat by Toycoon

Jack was on his knees, his body warm from the campfire, hot from desire, when he brought the meat to his face, inhaling deeply, drawing in the musky scent then, finally setting the smooth flesh on his hungry lips.

Jack drew his lips around the thick meat then sucked greedily on it so that his cheeks puffed out and the juices oozed from the sides of his mouth, dribbled down his chin and onto his pants.

Ennis wiped the grease from his mouth with his sleeve and thought,"damn, I ain't never seen nobody eat elk jerky like that before!"

 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

That was freakin´ sexy, Toycoon. As I said, food and sex belong together. But ....was it supposed to make me blush?? Come on, I want a really dirty one. I know you can do it. (And I want you to break the rules :D.)

Dagi
Title: Re: It's alright, Cowboy (Part 3)
Post by: Dagi on August 10, 2007, 08:02:44 am
It's alright, Cowboy (Part 3)

"Jack, you make me feel special, kinda important,'" stammered Ennis," when you look at me, I feel wanted, hmm." he smiled bashfully and looked away but then back at Jack.

Jack never wanted anything more than he needed Ennis at that moment; he rubbed his lips on the soft hair on Ennis forearm.

Although they were worn out and ached all over, they kissed, touched and felt one another's body repeatedly until they each drifted off to sleep.


Toycoon and Marie, you are a great team! Thank you for this erotic threesome of stories!!

(I didn´t blush again, BTW  ;D.)

Dagi
Title: Re: A Slice of Life on the Mountain
Post by: Dagi on August 10, 2007, 08:07:29 am
A Slice of Life on the Mountain by Littlewing1957

Toycoon, this is just a little something that was floating around in my head.  You can add to it if you want, or you may start another tale and I'll continue it tomorrow


Ennis rode in to camp on his mare.  His dark golden hair tangled in the wind, he was a breathtaking, formidable sight.  Jack dropped the wood he was adding to the cook fire.  The sight of Ennis’ approach stopped his heart.  “Aww, a whole lotta sexiness is comin’ this way!”    :D Jack mused as he watched his lover’s approach.

Ennis climbed down, shook himself all over.  He was stiff from such a long ride.  He walked a few circles around the fire, dropped down suddenly and did a few push ups.  Jack watched all of this in silence.  He didn’t want Ennis to know that his very presence caused his heart to skip a beat.

Jack continued to watch as Ennis worked out the kinks.  When his exercise routine was over, Ennis, flat out on his back, looked over at his friend and smiled.  Jack returned Ennis’ smile and walked over to where he lay.  He joined Ennis on the cold ground and kissed his lips.


MMMMMMarie, so very visual and sexy. What a pitty that this was not included in the movie...

Thank you! I love these slices of their life!

Dagi
Title: Re: Sinner (Part 4)
Post by: Toycoon on August 10, 2007, 09:19:55 am
Thanks to you, Marie, for being here with us and keeping the thread alive while others are absent or busy!
Dagi

Dearest Dagi,
Thank you for keeping the campfire lit both here and on the Archive/Read Only thread. You're a loyal lady. I'll bet your family cherishes you (as we do).

P.S.- I'll make you blush yet. You'll see!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on August 10, 2007, 09:23:31 am
Yeppers, I'm hoping to be heading your way by the first of the month, if things go according to plan.   ;D

Gary

Are ya gonna live in San Francisco, Gary? How exciting! I unnnerstand they gotta lotta queers in 'Frisco. Ya better watch out wit 'em. They might turn ya nelly!
Title: Re: It's alright, Cowboy
Post by: Toycoon on August 10, 2007, 09:28:33 am
Wow!  So what you're saying, Toycoon, is Jack wasn't always the bottom?  Sexy!  And the way Jack soothed Ennis was oh so sweet.

Gary

I always got the impression that Jack banged Ennis' virgin butt big time, that second night in the tent. Kinda getting back at Ennis for calling 'im 'queer'! Hmmmm... I may have to elaborate on that tasty topic. Stay tuned!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: moremojo on August 10, 2007, 10:30:46 am
'll be moving to Merced, which isn't that far from San Francisco.
West Virginia will miss you, Gary, but Central California will soon have a new shining star in its sun-kissed firmament. Congratulations on the move, bud!
Title: More Meat (The Tension Builds) by LauraGigs
Post by: LauraGigs on August 10, 2007, 01:31:15 pm
Okay, my first one!  A sequel, Toycoon!

More Meat – the tension builds


Ennis released a reverberating MMMmmm from deep in his chest. He was secretly grateful for Jack's coaxing despite his initial resistance, reveling in the unlimited luscious meat splitting up the weeks of camp cooking. He didn't want to waste a thing – when he was done with the flesh along the length, he worked around the end of the bone, savoring the saltiness and deep flavor.

His eyes lifted over his savory prize for a second, and suddenly he was caught just like the elk:  struck wide open by his campmate's devastating gaze. Ennis froze in the double-barreled blue with a mouthful of the elk-bone hardness – watching Jack's lips slowly curl into a glistening grin that made him feel like penetrated prey. 

Swallowing hard, Ennis put dinner down and stretched his hand down past Jack's knee, but couldn't reach.
Uhhhh, hand me the whiskey there friend? he finally choked out.

Jack gave it over, and Ennis took a deep drink.


Title: Re: Recapturing Youth
Post by: Dagi on August 10, 2007, 04:49:47 pm
Hey, he'd better send some of those young, non ape-like guys my way!   >:(

Gary

We can watch it together, sweetheart!  :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

I know, you prefer to do it alone  ;).

Dagi
Title: Re: Sinner (Part 4)
Post by: Dagi on August 10, 2007, 04:51:19 pm
Dearest Dagi,
Thank you for keeping the campfire lit both here and on the Archive/Read Only thread. You're a loyal lady. I'll bet your family cherishes you (as we do).

P.S.- I'll make you blush yet. You'll see!

Ah, Toycoon, you say such kind things  :).

Can hardly wait for your attempt  ;D.

Dagi
Title: Re: Recapturing Youth
Post by: moremojo on August 10, 2007, 04:55:25 pm
Hey, he'd better send some of those young, non ape-like guys my way!   >:(
Sorry, but I think I need to hang onto any guy I can get my hands on! :laugh: ;)
Title: Re: More Meat (The Tension Builds) by LauraGigs
Post by: Dagi on August 10, 2007, 04:56:02 pm
Okay, my first one!  A sequel, Toycoon!

More Meat – the tension builds


Ennis released a reverberating MMMmmm from deep in his chest. He was secretly grateful for Jack's coaxing despite his initial resistance, reveling in the unlimited luscious meat splitting up the weeks of camp cooking. He didn't want to waste a thing – when he was done with the flesh along the length, he worked around the end of the bone, savoring the saltiness and deep flavor there.

His eyes lifting over his savory prize for a second, he suddenly felt caught just like the elk:  struck in the clean open by his campmate's devastating stare. With a mouth full of the elk-bone hardness, he was frozen in the double-barreled blue – Jack's lips curling slowly into a glistening grin that made Ennis feel like penetrated prey.

Swallowing hard, Ennis put dinner down and stretched his hand down past Jack's knee, but couldn't reach. Uhhhh, hand me the whiskey there friend? he finally choked out.

Jack gave it over, and Ennis took a deep drink.




*Dagi swallows hard*  Could somebody hand me the whiskey, please? I think I need a good drink now...

Sexy, sexy, Laura! Elk-bone hardness, *giggle*. Nice one! Thank you! More, please!

Dagi

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: moremojo on August 10, 2007, 04:58:20 pm
Welcome to our saucy world of sex-saturated Jack-and-Ennis stories, Laura! Congratulations on your first specimen.
Title: Re: More Meat (The Tension Builds) by LauraGigs
Post by: Toycoon on August 10, 2007, 08:53:05 pm
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He didn't want to waste a thing – when he was done with the flesh along the length, he worked around the end of the bone, savoring the saltiness and deep flavor there.

Lauragigs, you dirty girl! Mmmm, quite tasty!

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Ennis froze in the double-barreled blue with a mouthful of the elk-bone hardness – watching Jack's lips slowly curl into a glistening grin that made him feel like penetrated prey.

Penetrated prey. Say, I like that. I may have to change my member name. 

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Swallowing hard, Ennis put dinner down and stretched his hand down past Jack's knee, but couldn't reach. Uhhhh, hand me the whiskey there friend? he finally choked out.

You're a natural born pervert! Welcome to our world. Hee hee!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on August 10, 2007, 09:23:23 pm
Wheeeee!!!! Welcome back, Susie. We missed you!!!! Did you see the party we had for your return  (a few posts back)??

I'm sure it will continue now that you are actually here!!!

When will we see vacation pics??? Tell us all about it.

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on August 10, 2007, 09:26:36 pm
HERE---I'LL JUST BRING THE PARTY TO YOU!!!



I think the fortnight is up tomorrow!!! Susie has a lot of catch up reading to do--and probably a pile of laundry!!

Tomorrow, unless plans change, I'll be picking up a friend after outpatient surgery--not sure when I'll be back.

SO............Let the party begin!!!!!

We missed you SUSIE!!

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Title: After Hours by Toycoon
Post by: Toycoon on August 10, 2007, 09:49:54 pm
When Jenny had the measles, Alma took care of her while Ennis and Alma Jr. stayed with Alma's sister on the other side of town; Alma scrubbed the vomit from her daughter's blanket, rang out the water from the little pink fleece then took it to the Laundromat downstairs to tumble dry.
 
It was half past seven as she picked two dimes from the ashtray and hastily dashed out the back door with the damp bundle because she'd seen the cream colored pick-up belonging to the owner of the laundromat, Mr. Delgado, so she knew she could still use the dryer after hours if she hurried; the sign on the door read, "CLOSED" and she noticed that the hand-written "Help Wanted" sign that had been in the window all week, sat on the little counter. The door was ajar, so she nudged it open with her shoulder.

From across the room, Alma heard the sounds of grunting, thumping and pounding on a washing machine so she started towards the noise; she spotted the two men, Mr. Delgago and a 'colored' man hunched over, moving the appliance into position.

When she finally got close enough to see them, she discovered that the two men had their pants down around their ankles with the black man thrusting his huge member into Mr. Delgado's white ass! Mr. Delgado moaned and slapped the top of the washer with his hands and reared back to meet the bigger man's lunging.

Alma stifled her gasp with the blanket but the men didn't notice her in the least; she quickly retreated from the laundromat, caught her breath and pulled the door shut.
Title: Re: Sinner (Part 4)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 10, 2007, 09:55:04 pm
Thanks to you, Marie, for being here with us and keeping the thread alive while others are absent or busy!

Dagi

Hey, Dagi!  Where have you been girl?  I've missed you!
Title: Re: Secret Stash
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 10, 2007, 09:55:51 pm
Marie, you are awesome. Awesome! And now show us these pics, come on  ;D !

Dagi

Thanks, Baby!  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on August 10, 2007, 09:56:06 pm
OMG---the planets must be misaligned!!!  5 paragraphs from Toycoon!!!! I love it when the rule-maker skirts the rules!!!!  Yeeee-haw!  ;)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on August 10, 2007, 09:56:16 pm
Welcome back Little Susiebell!
How we've missed you! We had a few new members join our nasty, fictitious orgy of fandom and a couple of members that are missing in action.
You've got a lot of reading to do. It's all good and dirty. You'll love it! There's a few new projects to make on the Brokeback Craft Corner, too. I'll let you get settled in for now...

Toycoon, the wicked.
Title: Re: A Slice of Life on the Mountain
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 10, 2007, 09:58:53 pm
MMMMMMarie, so very visual and sexy. What a pitty that this was not included in the movie...

Thank you! I love these slices of their life!

Dagi

I love to write slice of life fics, Dagi!  They have to be AU (except stories about the mountain) and it is very rewarding to write about them like they're real people.  I may as well admit it: I think of our boys as real, breathing human beings!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on August 10, 2007, 09:59:18 pm
OMG---the planets must be misaligned!!!  5 paragraphs from Toycoon!!!! I love it when the rule-maker skirts the rules!!!!  Yeeee-haw!  ;)

Ha! I had to do something to shock Dagi. Breaking the three line rule seem to be the only way to startle our doula who has apparently seen it all!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 10, 2007, 09:59:43 pm
Yeppers, I'm hoping to be heading your way by the first of the month, if things go according to plan.   ;D

Gary

Fabulous!  You'll love it here!
Title: Re: It's alright, Cowboy (Part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 10, 2007, 10:01:18 pm
MMM  Sexy and romantic followup, littlewing.  But I personally would like Ennis to gentle me...um...I mean Jack like some gal.   ;D

Gary

I like the thought of Ennis gentling Jack.  The idea of the boys being all sweet and tender drives me out of my mind.
Title: Re: A Slice of Life on the Mountain
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 10, 2007, 10:03:01 pm
I know just how Jack feels, littewing.  I couldn't keep my eyes off the guy either.

Gary

Damn straight!  :D
Title: Re: More Meat (The Tension Builds) by LauraGigs
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 10, 2007, 10:06:24 pm
Okay, my first one!  A sequel, Toycoon!

More Meat – the tension builds


Ennis released a reverberating MMMmmm from deep in his chest. He was secretly grateful for Jack's coaxing despite his initial resistance, reveling in the unlimited luscious meat splitting up the weeks of camp cooking. He didn't want to waste a thing – when he was done with the flesh along the length, he worked around the end of the bone, savoring the saltiness and deep flavor there.

His eyes lifted over his savory prize for a second, and suddenly he was caught just like the elk:  struck wide open by his campmate's devastating gaze. Ennis froze in the double-barreled blue with a mouthful of the elk-bone hardness – watching Jack's lips slowly curl into a glistening grin that made him feel like penetrated prey. 

Swallowing hard, Ennis put dinner down and stretched his hand down past Jack's knee, but couldn't reach. Uhhhh, hand me the whiskey there friend? he finally choked out.

Jack gave it over, and Ennis took a deep drink.




Brilliant!  I can't describe how this tale makes me feel, Laura!  Gorgeous, gorgeous writing!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 10, 2007, 10:09:03 pm
Helloooooo .... I'm back ..... anybody there??


Susie, my little Belle!  You're here!  It is so good to have you back.  We have missed you, my darling! 

Hey, you got a lot of catchin' up to do.

Hope you had a good trip!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 10, 2007, 10:11:16 pm
I've been back on line for 5 minutes and you've got me in tears already!!!  I thought you'd all forget about me!!! it's so lovely to be missed!!

Love Susie (http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s31/Susiebell_album/Glitter/hellokittyglitter.gif)

Forget about you?  Susiebell, you ought to be ashamed of yourself!  We will never forget about you.  You're indespensible around here!
Title: Re: After Hours by Toycoon
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 10, 2007, 10:14:33 pm
When Jenny had the measles, Alma took care of her while Ennis and Alma Jr. stayed with Alma's sister on the other side of town; Alma scrubbed the vomit from her daughter's blanket, rang out the water from the little pink fleece then took it to the Laundromat downstairs to tumble dry.
 
It was half past seven as she picked two dimes from the ashtray and hastily dashed out the back door with the damp bundle because she'd seen the cream colored pick-up belonging to the owner of the laundromat, Mr. Delgado, so she knew she could still use the dryer after hours if she hurried; the sign on the door read, "CLOSED" and she noticed that the hand-written "Help Wanted" sign that had been in the window all week, sat on the little counter. The door was ajar, so she nudged it open with her shoulder.

From across the room, Alma heard the sounds of grunting, thumping and pounding on a washing machine so she started towards the noise; she spotted the two men, Mr. Delgago and a 'colored' man hunched over, moving the appliance into position.

When she finally got close enough to see them, she discovered that the two men had their pants down around their ankles with the black man thrusting his huge member into Mr. Delgado's white ass! Mr. Delgado moaned and slapped the top of the washer with his hands and reared back to meet the bigger man's lunging.

Alma stifled her gasp with the blanket but the men didn't notice her in the least; she quickly retreated from the laundromat, caught her breath and pulled the door shut.

Wow Toycoon, what a hot, nasty one!  I love it!  And you exceeded your own 3 paragraph rule?  I don't think you've ever gone over 3 paragraphs, right?  Anyway, I love your sexy, original story.  I hope you'll continue it.  I'm want to know more about Mr. Delgado and his lover!
Title: Re: After Hours by Toycoon
Post by: Toycoon on August 10, 2007, 10:25:14 pm
Wow Toycoon, what a hot, nasty one!  I love it!  And you exceeded your own 3 paragraph rule?  I don't think you've ever gone over 3 paragraphs, right?  Anyway, I love your sexy, original story.  I hope you'll continue it.  I'm want to know more about Mr. Delgado and his lover!

I don't know what's happened, littlewing! I've gone stark raving MAD! I attribute it to the return of Susiebell...
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 10, 2007, 10:36:50 pm
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Ah thank you littlewing honey!  This feels like I'm sinking back into my favourite old armchair, complete with comfy slippers and nice cup of Tetleys!!


Now where's my Gary ... I need to hug him NOW!!!

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

I'm so happy to hear this, Susie!  Settle in and enjoy your people!  We love you!  :-*
Title: Re: After Hours by Toycoon
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 10, 2007, 10:37:53 pm
I don't know what's happened, littlewing! I've gone stark raving MAD! I attribute it to the return of Susiebell...

Well, it is very good!  You should break the rules more often!  :-*
Title: Re: A Slice of Life on the Mountain
Post by: moremojo on August 10, 2007, 11:52:46 pm
I may as well admit it: I think of our boys as real, breathing human beings!
I understand perfectly, Marie. On February 18, 2006, I met two men ensconced in a beautiful film who feel as real to me as any flesh-and-blood human being I've encountered. I still don't fully understand how the film affected me this way, but it did...and I wouldn't have it any other way!

I'll share a little fantasy with you guys. You know how a lot of people believe that, after death, we will meet our loved ones on the other side? Well, I have a fantasy that among all our kith and kin, Jack and Ennis will be waiting there, too...waiting to say, "Friends, you had it right all the time!"
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on August 11, 2007, 12:42:24 am
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BTW Toycoon, don't think I didn't notice that you broke your own three sentence rule big time, buster.

Of course I noticed. That one was too big for such a little space! I was trying to freak Dagi out by breaking format.

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Cry havoc, and let slip the dogs of war!  ...or in this case the dogs in heat.

You need some discipline, you bad boy!.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on August 11, 2007, 01:27:37 am
To celebrate the return of Susiebell--everybody enjoy some cherry cake and coffee--there's plenty to go around!!

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Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 11, 2007, 07:59:35 am
This is so funny Dagi!  I can imagine Ennis having no idea what he's supposed to do with a computer, or understand any of the terminology .... and I can just imagine what Jack was trying to download!!


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

ps. I think I know who "Jack" is in your story!


Thank you, honey! It´s so good to have you back!!

Hey,Jack was not me, that´s for sure  ;D ;D ;D!

Dagi
Title: Re: After Hours by Toycoon
Post by: Dagi on August 11, 2007, 08:46:47 am
When Jenny had the measles, Alma took care of her while Ennis and Alma Jr. stayed with Alma's sister on the other side of town; Alma scrubbed the vomit from her daughter's blanket, rang out the water from the little pink fleece then took it to the Laundromat downstairs to tumble dry.
 
It was half past seven as she picked two dimes from the ashtray and hastily dashed out the back door with the damp bundle because she'd seen the cream colored pick-up belonging to the owner of the laundromat, Mr. Delgado, so she knew she could still use the dryer after hours if she hurried; the sign on the door read, "CLOSED" and she noticed that the hand-written "Help Wanted" sign that had been in the window all week, sat on the little counter. The door was ajar, so she nudged it open with her shoulder.

From across the room, Alma heard the sounds of grunting, thumping and pounding on a washing machine so she started towards the noise; she spotted the two men, Mr. Delgago and a 'colored' man hunched over, moving the appliance into position.

When she finally got close enough to see them, she discovered that the two men had their pants down around their ankles with the black man thrusting his huge member into Mr. Delgado's white ass! Mr. Delgado moaned and slapped the top of the washer with his hands and reared back to meet the bigger man's lunging.

Alma stifled her gasp with the blanket but the men didn't notice her in the least; she quickly retreated from the laundromat, caught her breath and pulled the door shut.

Toycoon! You did it! You broke your own rule!! Feels good, huh?  ;D ;D ;D

What a sexy story.....but poor Alma! She surely tried hard to avoid imagening what it looked like when two men are going at it, now you gave her an idea, and she probably didn´t want to know it that exactly  :(.

Should I pretend now that you made me blush with this?  ;D

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: moremojo on August 11, 2007, 12:53:10 pm
Hi Moremojo and Laura Giggs!!!
Thank you for the warm welcome, Susie! Each of your posts is a visual delight, and the high regard in which all our fellows on the thread hold you speaks for itself.

And how did you know I was a Betty Boop fan?  ;D
Title: Swallowing
Post by: moremojo on August 11, 2007, 03:18:58 pm
Swallowing by moremojo

The cancer that had seized his throat and ravaged the delicate tissues of his mouth had rendered the eating of solid food impossible for Ennis del Mar, so that, apart from occasional doles of apple sauce and quaffs of always welcome water, the aging cowboy derived most of his nutrition from a stomach tube, the purchase and maintenance of which was generously provided by Junior and Kurt, with whom he now lived; Ennis never thought that a stay of a few months would turn into two years, after his eviction from the ranch, though, along with all the other hard knocks it had been his lot to endure, he accepted this with calm, equanimity, and not a little gratitude...thus was he settled in his thoughts at home while Kurt and Junior were away at work.

Ennis had always been a man of simple tastes, had never asked for or expected much, but even with his spartan heritage he never realized how much he could miss the wholesome taste of a good can of beans or the tough texture of a good strip of jerky, and yet the sensation he missed most of all, the one he knew would be even more impossible to reclaim, was that of those soft, yielding lips that could always awaken his heart to its own inner recesses, would remind him that he was alive and to be glad of it; his thoughts of Jack, of his absence, were further inflected with the regret of all that Ennis never did for his lover, wouldn't do at the time because it seemed unmanly, such as reciprocating Jack's loving gesture of taking his manhood deep into his mouth and letting the hot jets of passion come in there, even to the point of drinking them down...how Ennis now wished that he had had the courage to taste that secret part of Jack's being, and to imbibe his manly essence.

With his mind thus engaged, his throat hurting like hell and his abdomen sore from the tube's repeated insertions, Ennis noticed a flutter in his heart that gave him pause, made him sit up to take notice that something big was happening, that maybe his time had at long last come, so much so that he imagined...or could it really be...his beautiful blue boy, no longer blue for being completely naked, approach him to take gentle hold of his head, guiding that weary mass onto his waiting manhood (longer and stiffer than Ennis could remember), sliding dream into flesh, fulfilling a once-abandoned hope as, at the very moment Ennis's heart was giving out, the now hale throat received its benediction of hot, everlasting love.
Title: Re: Swallowing
Post by: Toycoon on August 11, 2007, 03:56:41 pm
Amazing, moremojo. Sad but somehow hopeful. Sheee-it, makes me thrilled I don't smoke! And kinda glad that I do 'take my lover's manhood orally' and occasionally swallow (we've been together for twenty-one years, so it's OK). All that in only three sentences, yet. I'm so proud.

I plan to go back to my usual three line frame. I was just being crazy for Dagi's amusement.
Title: Re: Swallowing
Post by: moremojo on August 11, 2007, 04:04:28 pm
I plan to go back to my usual three line frame. I was just being crazy for Dagi's amusement.
Thank you for the appreciative comments, Toycoon. The three-line format is definitely a challenge (as is evident by the convoluted string of phrases I am sometimes compelled to fashion to make all my points), but it's a structure I definitely want to try to follow here. If I come up with anything that cannot fit with clarity or elegance into the brief format, perhaps I could share that elsewhere on our forum.

Scott
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 11, 2007, 05:28:06 pm
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Oh how much I´ve been missing that!

Dagi

PS Aren´t you supposed to read some other story? ;)
Title: Swallowing by moremojo
Post by: Dagi on August 11, 2007, 05:34:15 pm
Swallowing by moremojo

Scott, that was sad, but - what a way to go...

Beautifully written, buddy. (The semicolon is the 3s fanfic writer´s best friend, as we had already observed  ;D)

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 11, 2007, 05:38:20 pm
Ah Dagi ... so gorgeous and hot and juicy!  You certainly deserve to take over the title of "Devil Doll"!!  Superbly nasty writing sweetheart!

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)




Oh Susie, you´re a sweetheart, thank you. We could call us the Devil Doll Twins  ;D, how´d you like that?

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 11, 2007, 05:48:27 pm

ps .... I know ... but I want to savour it .... slowly ... perhaps in a nice warm bubble bath with a glass of wine!! 

OMG you will be completely dissolved once you are finished  :laugh:. It took me two entire days of reading, and I am a speed reader. But I savored every single line  :D.

Dagi

Title: Re: A Stormy Night
Post by: moremojo on August 11, 2007, 06:00:16 pm
I'm so glad you've joined in the fun!
Moi aussi! :D

Merci beaucoup, Susie!
Title: Re: A Slice of Life on the Mountain
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 12, 2007, 01:03:37 am
I understand perfectly, Marie. On February 18, 2006, I met two men ensconced in a beautiful film who feel as real to me as any flesh-and-blood human being I've encountered. I still don't fully understand how the film affected me this way, but it did...and I wouldn't have it any other way!

I'll share a little fantasy with you guys. You know how a lot of people believe that, after death, we will meet our loved ones on the other side? Well, I have a fantasy that among all our kith and kin, Jack and Ennis will be waiting there, too...waiting to say, "Friends, you had it right all the time!"

Moremojo, it is so good to find someone who shares my thoughts!  I feel the exact same way.  A lot of people I know who have seen BBM are convinced that its a true story!

I look forward to meeting our boys on the other side.
Title: Re: Comfort
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 12, 2007, 01:06:02 am
WOW littlewing!!  Well that's got me all warm and fuzzy inside ... so sexy ... and the tongue sucking ... OMG!!! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/7/7_4_10.gif)  Superb honey!!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Only 30 pages to go!!!

Thanks, Susie!
Title: Re: Swallowing
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 12, 2007, 01:13:06 am
Swallowing by moremojo

The cancer that had seized his throat and ravaged the delicate tissues of his mouth had rendered the eating of solid food impossible for Ennis del Mar, so that, apart from occasional doles of apple sauce and quaffs of always welcome water, the aging cowboy derived most of his nutrition from a stomach tube, the purchase and maintenance of which was generously provided by Junior and Kurt, with whom he now lived; Ennis never thought that a stay of a few months would turn into two years, after his eviction from the ranch, though, along with all the other hard knocks it had been his lot to endure, he accepted this with calm, equanimity, and not a little gratitude...thus was he settled in his thoughts at home while Kurt and Junior were away at work.

Ennis had always been a man of simple tastes, had never asked for or expected much, but even with his spartan heritage he never realized how much he could miss the wholesome taste of a good can of beans or the tough texture of a good strip of jerky, and yet the sensation he missed most of all, the one he knew would be even more impossible to reclaim, was that of those soft, yielding lips that could always awaken his heart to its own inner recesses, would remind him that he was alive and to be glad of it; his thoughts of Jack, of his absence, were further inflected with the regret of all that Ennis never did for his lover, wouldn't do at the time because it seemed unmanly, such as reciprocating Jack's loving gesture of taking his manhood deep into his mouth and letting the hot jets of passion come in there, even to the point of drinking them down...how Ennis now wished that he had had the courage to taste that secret part of Jack's being, and to imbibe his manly essence.

With his mind thus engaged, his throat hurting like hell and his abdomen sore from the tube's repeated insertions, Ennis noticed a flutter in his heart that gave him pause, made him sit up to take notice that something big was happening, that maybe his time had at long last come, so much so that he imagined...or could it really be...his beautiful blue boy, no longer blue for being completely naked, approach him to take gentle hold of his head, guiding that weary mass onto his waiting manhood (longer and stiffer than Ennis could remember), sliding dream into flesh, fulfilling a once-abandoned hope as, at the very moment Ennis's heart was giving out, the now hale throat received its benediction of hot, everlasting love.

Sublime!  Brilliant!  And so sad that I'm crying all over my keyboard.  Moremojo, this is so sad and hopeful at at the same time.  I just love a well told tale.  Thanks so much for writing this for us!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 12, 2007, 01:17:39 am
Oh littlewing ... you've all got me blubbering like a baby ... (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_9_9.gif)  ... thank goodness you didn't all forget about me!!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Never.  Not possible, Love!  :)

Thanks for your kind words re: my fics.  You're so very sweet!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 12, 2007, 01:21:37 am
I do apologise if I'm spoiling the flow of things here but I just have to read every story ... I can't bear to miss any of them!

Only 10 or 20 pages to go then I promise I'll shut up!!

Love Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Oh no, no!  I love reading your comments!  Keep em comin'!
Title: It really is Alright
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 12, 2007, 02:09:32 am
It Really is Alright by Littlewing 1957

Ennis made his way home from the grocer’s with his head hanging down.  He was paid, but business at the ranch was poor, and his check was short by about $200.00.  Ennis wasn’t sure if Steve could get away with stiffing him like that, but he had other urgent matters to consider.  His child support check was due to Alma in a few days, and he didn’t know how he could manage to pay her and his rent with his funds short by $200.00.  He could barley afford the few groceries that he picked up just moments ago.

And Jack wasn’t sure about the trip next month.  His postcard arrived days before, announcing a conflict with the dates; something about a conference in New York that he needed to attend.  Now this!  Ennis opened his trailer door with a heavy heart, and put away his groceries.  He heated a TV dinner and sat down to eat and read the mail.  Bills, more bills and a few pieces of junk mail.  His bad luck was holding up.  But wait - a letter from Alma - the last thing he noticed!  Ennis was nervous as he opened his ex-wife’s letter.   It read:

Ennis, I got to thinking, and never mind sending the support check this month.  I spoke to Monroe about it, and he said that you can skip this month’s payment.  Business is so good that he’s thinking about opening another store.  He told me that we can get along without the money this month.  But I expect you to send me a check next month, right on time.  Take care of yourself, Ennis, and I’ll see you next month on the 7th.

Ennis Del Mar couldn’t believe his eyes.  He tried to fight back the tears, but they somehow managed to fall.  And buried beneath one of the pieces of junk mail was hiding a plain postcard.  Ennis’ hand shook as he gently turned the card over and read:

Friend, I got good news!  The conference in New York is cancelled, and to tell you the truth, I thought about it and told Lureen that I wasn’t going anyway.  I’m sorry for the confusion Cowboy.  If you have me and are still speaking to me I want to meet up next month as planned.  Let me know.

The tears fell in earnest!  Ennis pressed the postcard against his forehead and wiped at his wet cheeks.  He couldn’t image another month without Jack!  He rose from his small table and searched around for a postcard.  As he wrote Jack a very enthusiastic reply, Ennis remembered a few words from the Good Book that his mom often quoted:

"His eye is on the sparrow, and I know he watches me."

 Ennis thought that sometimes, just once in awhile,  the world really is a decent place….
Title: Jack loves a Rainy Night
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 12, 2007, 02:49:12 am
Jack loves a Rainy Night by Littlewing 1957

The clouds overhead were billowy and blue gray, and threatened rain.  Ennis and Jack hurried to put out the fire, and moved the things they didn’t want getting wet into the tent. 

Ennis unpacked the bedroll and smoothed it out.  They would make love that night accompanied by the music of nature. The smell of rain was in the air.  It wouldn’t be long now.

Jack pulled Ennis close as drops of rain pelted the tent.  He lifted his lover’s hand to his chest and caressed the long fingers.  Jack listened to the rain drops fall outside the tent and smiled.  Just like the earth needed rain, Jack had to have his Ennis Del Mar.  He pulled Ennis down on top of him and settled in for the delights to come.
Title: Re: Jack loves a Rainy Night
Post by: Toycoon on August 12, 2007, 10:55:50 am
Jack loves a Rainy Night by Littlewing 1957

The clouds overhead were billowy and blue gray, and threatened rain.  Ennis and Jack hurried to put out the fire, and moved the things they didn’t want getting wet into the tent. 

Ennis unpacked the bedroll and smoothed it out.  They would make love that night accompanied by the music of nature. The smell of rain was in the air.  It wouldn’t be long now.

Jack pulled Ennis close as drops of rain pelted the tent.  He lifted his lover’s hand to his chest and caressed the long fingers.  Jack listened to the rain drops fall outside the tent and smiled.  Just like the earth needed rain, Jack had to have his Ennis Del Mar.  He pulled Ennis down on top of him and settled in for the delights to come.

So sublime, Littlewing. I think I may have just the right companion piece for this beauty. Let me see...
Title: The Rhythm of the Rain
Post by: Toycoon on August 12, 2007, 10:58:05 am
The Rhythm of the Rain by Toycoon

The empty beer cans collected on the window sill that he sat beside. Ennis took a long draw off the lit Viceroy cigarette then swung his hand over the ashtray and flicked the ash in it's general vicinity.

Outside the kitchen window, raindrops began to fall on the glass, one by one until the rhythm became constant then Ennis' mind began to wander to the time he and Jack were caught in the middle of an unexpected summer shower; Ennis could picture Jack's hair matted down over his forehead, the water droplets glistening on his ripe lips, his blue shirt soaked and clinging to his defined chest.

Ennis shifted his position on the kitchen chair to adjust his stirring groin. His foreskin sliding over his glands felt comfortable, familiar so his hand unconsciously moved to his crotch to alleviate the pressure.
Title: Re: It really is Alright
Post by: moremojo on August 12, 2007, 12:05:46 pm
"His eye is on the sparrow, and I know he watches me."

 Ennis thought that sometimes, just once in awhile,  the world really is a decent place….
Thank God that Ennis got a break on occasion. Thank you, Marie, for giving this gift to that beleaguered cowboy.
Title: Re: Jack in the City
Post by: moremojo on August 12, 2007, 01:36:07 pm
Interesting story, Gary! A fantasy-filled dream in the end (filled with hints of suggestive poetry), but it does reflect how well Jack really would have thrived in the city. He could have made the transition, whereas Ennis probably couldn't have. And that was part of Jack's tragedy.
Title: Re: It really is Alright
Post by: Dagi on August 12, 2007, 02:26:17 pm
It Really is Alright by Littlewing 1957

"His eye is on the sparrow, and I know he watches me."

 Ennis thought that sometimes, just once in awhile,  the world really is a decent place….


What a beautiful story, Marie. Our beloved Ennis surely deserves to be treated decently for a change. And I can imagine both Alma and Monroe doing that. And of course I´m happy about him meeting Jack  :D!

Thank you, honey.

Dagi
Title: Re: Jack loves a Rainy Night
Post by: Dagi on August 12, 2007, 02:29:20 pm
Jack loves a Rainy Night by Littlewing 1957

The clouds overhead were billowy and blue gray, and threatened rain.  Ennis and Jack hurried to put out the fire, and moved the things they didn’t want getting wet into the tent. 

Ennis unpacked the bedroll and smoothed it out.  They would make love that night accompanied by the music of nature. The smell of rain was in the air.  It wouldn’t be long now.

Jack pulled Ennis close as drops of rain pelted the tent.  He lifted his lover’s hand to his chest and caressed the long fingers.  Jack listened to the rain drops fall outside the tent and smiled.  Just like the earth needed rain, Jack had to have his Ennis Del Mar.  He pulled Ennis down on top of him and settled in for the delights to come.


Marie, you really know how to make my heart melt...Just like the earth needed rain, Jack had to have his Ennis Del Mar. Sooo beautiful. You are a poet.

Dagi
Title: Re: The Rhythm of the Rain
Post by: Dagi on August 12, 2007, 02:34:11 pm
The Rhythm of the Rain by Toycoon

The empty beer cans collected on the window sill that he sat beside. Ennis took a long draw off the lit Viceroy cigarette then swung his hand over the ashtray and flicked the ash in it's general vicinity.

Outside the kitchen window, raindrops began to fall on the glass, one by one until the rhythm became constant then Ennis' mind began to wander to the time he and Jack were caught in the middle of an unexpected summer shower; Ennis could picture Jack's hair matted down over his forehead, the water droplets glistening on his ripe lips, his blue shirt soaked and clinging to his defined chest.

Ennis shifted his position on the kitchen chair to adjust his stirring groin. His foreskin sliding over his glands felt comfortable, familiar so his hand unconsciously moved to his crotch to alleviate the pressure.

Your decription of Jack in the rain makes my pulse speed up, honey. Wasn´t there a sequel to this one?

Dagi
Title: Re: Jack in the City
Post by: Dagi on August 12, 2007, 02:42:28 pm
Jack in the City by garycottle

......  “Ennis claims he’s straight.  He only works here for the tips.”

Jack’s smile broadened and he said with confidence, “He won’t be too straight after I’m done with him.”


Sexy, erotic, gorgeous writing, sweetheart! But so sad that Jack has to imagine Ennis istead of dancing in a tight embrace with his lover  :(

Finally I got something from you to read again  :laugh:. Thank you!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on August 12, 2007, 09:52:28 pm
I enjoy all of your stories!! Ya'll are very prolific! I'm sorry that I don't tell you more often, but THANKS (http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/sign/sign0092.gif) (http://search.orange.co.uk/all?q=site%3Awww.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk+norfolk) for keeping us "reading" Brokies entertained!!

I love ya!
 
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Oh---and where do I go to get in line for those Ennis press-ups? Behind Gary?
  :P
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on August 12, 2007, 10:29:04 pm
Ah Shasta honey, you look after us all .... what would we do without you?

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Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)
 

Awwww.....thanks! (http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/love/love0072.gif) (http://search.orange.co.uk/all?q=site%3Awww.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk+norfolk) I missed you whilst you were away!! (http://www.anchoredbygrace.com/smileys/hugs.gif)

Maybe she can come up with some kind of beach adventure
(http://www.anchoredbygrace.com/smileys/grinser039.gif) for Ennis and Jack, Gary!  

**Whoa---I see she already did---hot times on the beaches of Mexico!! Yee-haw, Susiebell!!!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on August 12, 2007, 10:36:42 pm
Thanks so much Shasta, darlin'.  We love you, too.

Gary

(http://www.anchoredbygrace.com/smileys/luvlove.gif) Thank you, sweet stuff!!   (http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/love/love0038.gif) (http://search.orange.co.uk/all?q=site%3Awww.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk+norfolk)

Title: Re: Meat
Post by: Toycoon on August 13, 2007, 12:10:35 am
You had me going there for a moment toycoon ... especially the juices oozing from the sides of his mouth ... Hmmmmmmm!  Gorgeous and sexy toycoon (...story's not bad either ;))
Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Susiebell, you say the sweetest things! You really know how to turn a fella's head.
Title: Re: It's alright, Cowboy
Post by: Toycoon on August 13, 2007, 12:14:35 am
Beautiful toycoon ..


... Every orifice?? There's only 2, right? .... On second thoughts .... don't answer that!!!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Last time I checked there ways only 2! Maybe I was being too enthusiastic.
Title: Re: The Rhythm of the Rain
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 13, 2007, 12:17:07 am
The Rhythm of the Rain by Toycoon

The empty beer cans collected on the window sill that he sat beside. Ennis took a long draw off the lit Viceroy cigarette then swung his hand over the ashtray and flicked the ash in it's general vicinity.

Outside the kitchen window, raindrops began to fall on the glass, one by one until the rhythm became constant then Ennis' mind began to wander to the time he and Jack were caught in the middle of an unexpected summer shower; Ennis could picture Jack's hair matted down over his forehead, the water droplets glistening on his ripe lips, his blue shirt soaked and clinging to his defined chest.

Ennis shifted his position on the kitchen chair to adjust his stirring groin. His foreskin sliding over his glands felt comfortable, familiar so his hand unconsciously moved to his crotch to alleviate the pressure.

Beautiful, Toycoon!  This is a perfect follow-up to Jack loves a Rainy Night.  There is nothing I like better than rain drops on my window pane at night.  Except, writing about Ennis and Jack, of course!  Thanks for the sequel, Toycoon!
Title: Re: It really is Alright
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 13, 2007, 12:18:00 am
Thank God that Ennis got a break on occasion. Thank you, Marie, for giving this gift to that beleaguered cowboy.

Thank you, moremojo, for your kind words!
Title: Re: Rhythm of the Ocean
Post by: Toycoon on August 13, 2007, 12:22:12 am
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Open mouths instinctively seeking out the other, cold wet lips touching, tongues licking, probing, no rush; rough calloused hands stroking, sliding slowly over soft skin, folding around his lovers beautiful long slender cock, smoothing up and down, up and down, to the ocean's heartbeat; legs lifted over his shoulders, plunging in deep, hot muscular flesh closing in around him, sucking him in, sucking him into oblivion.

Susiebell, is this what happened on your vacation?
You been to Mexico, Susiebell? I know what they got for girls like you in Mexico. They outta print this right on the travel brochure!
Title: Re: Jack in the City
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 13, 2007, 12:22:56 am
Jack in the City by garycottle

Where ever he went he felt eyes on him.  If he was walking along the pavement people watched him.  When he was down at the paint store people watched him.  When he was shooting pool they watched.  They always watched, and always with admiration, and usually with desire, too.  This put a kind of cocky strut in his step.  He knew his momma wouldn’t approve of his conceited swagger, but he couldn’t break himself of the habit.

He loved to go dancing at the club because all eyes were really on him then.  Rather than furtive glances, people stopped what they were doing and stared.  As he climbed down the steps his anticipation began to rise, and when the doorman let him pass there was a stirring in his pants as he caught sight of a sea of men.  Many were shirtless, most of them were young, nearly all were in great shape.  They crowd moved like a single organism in syncopation with the music.  And he was a star here.  This was where he belonged.

Several greeted him with pats on the back, and couple were bold enough to kiss his cheek.  But his eyes soon fell on one old-timer sitting alone at a table by the door.  The old guy looked back at him, but he was not dazzled by what he saw.  The man’s expression spoke of a deep weariness and a longing for something other than the young, smalltime disco idol standing in front of him.

“Name’s Jack,” he said, as he brazenly turned the chair on the opposite side of the table backwards, swung his leg over, and sat down.  “You sure you’re in the right place?”

“I am very sure,” the old-timer said with self-satisfaction.  “I’ve been coming to this dump since the 20's.”

“The 20's?” Jack said, and then whistled.

The man’s old eyes took on a nostalgic glint as he said, “It was a speakeasy back then.  And the music was jazz. ...this place must have been raided a hundred times in the past fifty years.  All that’s changed now.”

Just then their conversation was interrupted by an aloof, blond waiter with an athletic lanky build.  Jack studied him as he ordered a beer and the old man gave specific instructions on how to make a dry martini.  Jack kept studying the waiter as he walked away.

“Well, I know who I’m going home with tonight,” Jack said with bravado.

“Don’t count on it, cowboy,” said the old man in a slightly mocking tone.  “Ennis claims he’s straight.  He only works here for the tips.”

Jack’s smile broadened and he said with confidence, “He won’t be too straight after I’m done with him.”

Just then Jack felt a hand on his shoulder.

“We’re home,” someone said.

He looked over and saw Lureen behind the wheel of their Caddy.  “How’d you like the movie?” she asked.

“It was okay,” he said in a sleepy, noncommittal voice.

“I’m going to get you a white suite like the guy wore during the dance competition.  Didn’t you love the way the floor lit up?  That was pretty,” she proclaimed in her Texas twang.

Gary, you really are a novelist!  What is it about BBM that brings out this kind of creativity?  This is a very well told, original tale, Gary!  I love the idea of Jack daydreaming on the way home from the movie.  Beautiful! 

Jack in a "Saturday Night Fever" white suit?  Be still my beating heart! 
Title: Re: Sinner (Part 4)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 13, 2007, 12:25:37 am
Oooooh .. from that raunchy part 3 to this sensual part 4 .. you've got my head in spin my dear littlewing! Wonderful!!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

 :laugh: Thanks, SusieBaby!
Title: Re: Jack in the City
Post by: Toycoon on August 13, 2007, 12:27:01 am
Gary, this was terrific! Very mysterious and so quintessentially period. You got the details down, just perfectly.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on August 13, 2007, 12:29:51 am
Hey there my dear Littlewing,
I'm dreaming up a sequel to the very nasty, "After Hours". It's gonna be a real doozy, too! Better watch out Dagi, dear.
Title: Re: Rhythm of the Ocean
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 13, 2007, 12:35:15 am
Rhythm of the Ocean by Susie


Ennis stirred, the sound of water lapping gently up onto the sands, disturbing his peaceful slumber; lying under a thick warm blanket on a deserted stretch of beach, arms wrapped protectively around his lover, rocking to the hypnotic rhythm of the waves moving slowly back and forth, back and forth.

Open mouths instinctively seeking out the other, cold wet lips touching, tongues licking, probing, no rush; rough calloused hands stroking, sliding slowly over soft skin, folding around his lovers beautiful long slender cock, smoothing up and down, up and down, to the ocean's heartbeat; legs lifted over his shoulders, plunging in deep, hot muscular flesh closing in around him, sucking him in, sucking him into oblivion.

Ennis woke with a start, holding his breath, disorientated, eyes dazed and unfocussed in the cool, early morning mist.  “You glad we finally came to Mexico?” A familiar face smiled up at him, stretching and yawning, grabbing handfuls of soft golden sand and sifting them lazily through his fingers.  Ennis sighed, smiling lovingly at Jack, “You bet”, kissing him gently on the cheek and burying himself back under the blanket.



Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


SusieBaby, this one was worth the wait!  So very sexy and descriptive!  And I love how you have them in Mexico!  I almost forgot about Jack and Ennis going to Mexico!  Thanks for this, Sweets!  Beautiful writing!
Title: Re: The Old Spark
Post by: moremojo on August 13, 2007, 12:42:19 am
“Jack, I swear…” Ennis smiled, taking Jack’s hand and weaving their fingers together, bringing it up to his lips, kissing it softly and placing it onto his lap.
What a sweet, tender story, Susie...I just had to share that. Friend, you just showed how old, paunchy, and bald can be beautiful too! And ain't nothing more beautiful than growing old with the love of your life.
Title: Re: Jack in the City
Post by: Toycoon on August 13, 2007, 12:56:39 am
Thank you so much, Toycoon.  I saw Saturday Night Fever when I was very young, and it made quite an impression on me.
Gary

I'll bet. I have a still from Saturday Night Fever of John Travolta standing in front of the mirror wearing only bikini briefs; that photo made quite an impression on me!
Title: Re: Aguirre
Post by: moremojo on August 13, 2007, 01:05:23 am
I wrote about this scene a long time ago and my Aguirre did something very similar!!
Ya know, I had the hunch when composing my tale that I might have read something similar, maybe on IMDb, some time back, and prayed that I wasn't unconsciously plagiarizing someone's else efforts (which I sincerely hope never to do).

Was your story on IMDb, Susie? I can't seem to find it on our thread here (perhaps I haven't looked hard enough). If you have shared it on BetterMost, could I trouble you to direct me to it, pretty please? :-*

Thanks,
Scott
Title: Re: Swallowing
Post by: moremojo on August 13, 2007, 01:08:44 am
Scott, you must be a professional writer ....
I'm very honored you would think so, but nope, I'm just a humble mail clerk in a university library. :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 13, 2007, 01:41:51 am
This is a message for anybody.  What happens when I post a story (well, I thought I posted it) and it is not shown here?  Is there a "word in progress folder" somewhere?  I posted a story about an hour ago and I don't see it here.  I worked on it for awhile, too.  And I didn't think to save it in Word.  Ah well, I'll try to recreate it.  I guess some things aren't meant to be.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: moremojo on August 13, 2007, 02:07:59 am
I hate it when stuff like that happens, Marie. It's so frustrating to put effort into something, just to see it perhaps vanish into the vast online ether--and this can happen with a mere inopportune click of the wrong button.

I can't advise on any kind of 'work in progress' folder on the site, but I would encourage you to reconstruct your story as best you can. It is meant to be, friend...and remember, nothing is ever truly lost anyway.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 13, 2007, 02:17:55 am
I hate it when stuff like that happens, Marie. It's so frustrating to put effort into something, just to see it perhaps vanish into the vast online ether--and this can happen with a mere inopportune click of the wrong button.

I can't advise on any kind of 'work in progress' folder on the site, but I would encourage you to reconstruct your story as best you can. It is meant to be, friend...and remember, nothing is ever truly lost anyway.

Thanks, moremojo!  I guess you're right!  I have a mental picture of the story and will recreate and post it tomorrow.  Who knows?  My new version may be even better!
Title: Re: Spying
Post by: moremojo on August 13, 2007, 11:18:23 am
He continued to glare through his binoculars, unzipping himself and massaging his own aching member, disgusted, but at the same time, transfixed by this vision of wild abandonment, something he had never in his miserable life experienced. He decided to give the boys ten minutes to put their clothes back on, and to relieve himself before heading on into camp.
Thanks for sharing this, Susie! There are indeed some striking parallels between our stories...even up to Joe's self-loathing at his own arousal. This element does suggest another aspect to Aguirre's contempt for the boys...because he had contempt for what they reflected about him.
Title: Re: Spying
Post by: Dagi on August 13, 2007, 01:57:05 pm
Hey, I'll be 42 next month, and I'm dying to see young Daniel Radcliff in Equus, so I'm quickly starting to resemble that remark.   :-\

Gary

Hey honey, you are dirty, but you are far away from being an old man! You resemble rather a horny teenager IMHO  ;D ;D ;D!


Dagi

Title: Re: Rhythm of the Ocean
Post by: Dagi on August 13, 2007, 02:16:06 pm
Rhythm of the Ocean by Susie

Ennis woke with a start, holding his breath, disorientated, eyes dazed and unfocussed in the cool, early morning mist.  “You glad we finally came to Mexico?” A familiar face smiled up at him, stretching and yawning, grabbing handfuls of soft golden sand and sifting them lazily through his fingers.  Ennis sighed, smiling lovingly at Jack, “You bet”, kissing him gently on the cheek and burying himself back under the blanket.


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



Susie, you make feel as if I was lying in the hot sand....what would I give for having Jack by my side  ;D.

Very sensual and erotic, dear! Thank you for thinking of us during your holiday!

Dagi
Title: Re: Spying
Post by: moremojo on August 13, 2007, 02:17:57 pm
Hey honey, you are dirty, but you are far away from being an old man! You resemble rather a horny teenager IMHO  ;D ;D ;D!
Well, I for one still feel like a horny teenager (and a vulnerable one, and a sensitive one), but my forty-year-old body doesn't seem to want to follow suit!  :P
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: moremojo on August 13, 2007, 02:51:37 pm
Oh, just wanted to add one li'l ole thing...anyone catch any dirty old men lurking in our corner of Storyville, feel free to send 'em on to me!  ;D
Title: Silk and Flesh
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 13, 2007, 09:16:50 pm
Silk and Flesh by Littlewing 1957

I recreated the story to the best of my ability, but I have a feeling the original was better.  Oh well!

Whenever he was lucky enough to spend time with Jack Twist, Ennis Del Mar insisted that they sleep in the nude.  Why waste time, since whatever they wore to bed would certainly come off.  Jack was more than okay with this, as he enjoyed the feel of Ennis' skin, and the warmth it provided.

But one night Ennis climbed into bed wearing the crème colored silk PJs that Jack gave him for Christmas one year.  Jack rubbed Ennis’ chest with a questioning look.  “I’m just tired is all, Bud!”  Ennis began as he grabbed Jack’s roaming hands.  Jack nodded and moved closer.  “That’s okay, Cowboy, you don’t have to do anything.  But there is one thing you can do for me.  Lay down on your stomach.  Can you do that, Friend?”  Ennis smiled as he turned and lay down on his stomach.

Jack placed his entire weight on his lover, slid his entire body over Ennis’ still form.  Jack placed his hands over Ennis’ and squeezed.  He held his lover's hands in a tender embrace.  He kissed his husband's neck.  Ennis knew what Jack was up to, but he couldn’t fight.  He lay still as Jack placed tender, sloppy kisses alternating with tiny bites along his shoulders.  Jack blew at the line of saliva that dotted Ennis’ shoulder to dry it, and continued with the kisses and bites.  Ennis felt the swell of Jack’s manhood against his buttocks.  And when his own cock pressed up against the king sized mattress, Ennis reached around and removed his pajama bottoms in one motion…


Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: BBM-Cat on August 13, 2007, 11:30:09 pm
Wow - silk, flesh, and flames! Where is the fire extinguisher?? Good grief  - Your story should have come with a warning label!

You all amaze me with your stories and creativity - I am new to these parts of the forum though not to Bettermost. I can only read back so many pages at a time - it's like sensory overload (of the positive kind). Great job littlewing and everyone else who has taken the time to create stories that help us reconnect with Jack and Ennis.

I would like to try my hand (or keyboard rather) at posting a little story, 3 sentences of course  ;)  I certainly do not want to post right after littlewing though - let's let that one cool off a bit...
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on August 14, 2007, 12:13:01 am
Hey there BBM-Cat,
Nothin' to be afraid of; we won't bite (hard). Everyone has to start somewhere. It's really a lot of fun once you get started. You'll see how addicted you'll become to erotic fanfic. That's why I make the stories only three lines long. They're just easier to manage that way!

Toycoon
Title: Re: Silk and Flesh
Post by: Toycoon on August 14, 2007, 12:18:59 am
I don't know how you continue to come up with so many imaginative, original tales, Littlewing.
I love the way you have Jack refer to Ennis as his 'husband'. It is so bizarre that they spent so much time togeher but never officially committed to one another.
I want to write a tender sequel to 'Silk and Flesh' but I don't know that I have enough energy tonight.  :P
Title: Re: Silk and Flesh
Post by: moremojo on August 14, 2007, 12:21:21 am
Congratulations on resubmitting your story, Marie! See...I knew you could do it.

And as sensual as always...the touch of silk is one of the most sensory experiences human beings have had access to...and one can only imagine how Ennis might have felt slipping into those silken garments for the first time. It must have felt like heaven (and Jack being there wouldn't have been bad either  ;D).

This one line really stood out:
He kissed his husband's neck.
They really were husbands, weren't they? They had the sanction of neither church nor state, but they were wedded in their hearts, and had found in each other that rarest of treasures...one's true soulmate.
Title: Silk and Flesh (part 2)
Post by: Toycoon on August 14, 2007, 12:57:47 am
Silk and Flesh (part 2) by Toycoon

"I jes' ain't got the will tonight, buddy," grumbled Ennis, "I hadda work overtime every day this week and I'm looking at a long week come Monday morn." Ennis hated to waste even a second of valuable time with his precious, Jack, but he was just worn out and it seemed nothing could restore his energy.

Jack succeeded in arousing Ennis by pressing and massaging Ennis' weary back, his shoulders and his buttocks; Jack's firm hands felt so good to a man who rarely enjoyed a fortuitous caress by anyone.

The mixture of smooth, creme colored silk on sensitive flesh proved to be too much for Ennis because he rolled over to face his long time lover, slid his silk pajamas down over his thighs and arched his back to thrust his erect cock into Jack's face.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 14, 2007, 01:18:32 am
Wow - silk, flesh, and flames! Where is the fire extinguisher?? Good grief  - Your story should have come with a warning label!

You all amaze me with your stories and creativity - I am new to these parts of the forum though not to Bettermost. I can only read back so many pages at a time - it's like sensory overload (of the positive kind). Great job littlewing and everyone else who has taken the time to create stories that help us reconnect with Jack and Ennis.

I would like to try my hand (or keyboard rather) at posting a little story, 3 sentences of course  ;)  I certainly do not want to post right after littlewing though - let's let that one cool off a bit...

BBM-Cat, you are so sweet!  Thanks so much for your kind words.  You know, I can't get enough of writing about Ennis and Jack.  I'll be forever grateful to my dear sweet Toycoon for starting this thread.  I was slow to get started, but now I can't seem to help myself.  I try to post at least 1 story a night.  I'm looking forward to reading a spicy tale from you!  I have a feeling that you're a very talented writer.  Thanks so much for joining us!  :)
Title: Re: Silk and Flesh
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 14, 2007, 01:21:49 am
Congratulations on resubmitting your story, Marie! See...I knew you could do it.

And as sensual as always...the touch of silk is one of the most sensory experiences human beings have had access to...and one can only imagine how Ennis might have felt slipping into those silken garments for the first time. It must have felt like heaven (and Jack being there wouldn't have been bad either  ;D).

This one line really stood out:They really were husbands, weren't they? They had the sanction of neither church nor state, but they were wedded in their hearts, and had found in each other that rarest of treasures...one's true soulmate.

Thanks so much for your encouragement, moremojo!  You really are a sweetie!

I've always thought of Ennis and Jack as husbands.  I use the term husband whenever I can to refer to our boys.  I also think that Ennis and Jack are 2 of the greatest lovers in all of literature. 
Title: Re: Silk and Flesh
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 14, 2007, 01:23:40 am
I don't know how you continue to come up with so many imaginative, original tales, Littlewing.
I love the way you have Jack refer to Ennis as his 'husband'. It is so bizarre that they spent so much time togeher but never officially committed to one another.
I want to write a tender sequel to 'Silk and Flesh' but I don't know that I have enough energy tonight.  :P

Thanks so much, Toycoon.  To refer to our boys as husbands seems so natural to me.  I really think of them that way!  I would love to read a sequel.  No pressure - just when you get to it!
Title: Re: Silk and Flesh (part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 14, 2007, 01:26:28 am
Silk and Flesh (part 2) by Toyccon

"I jes' ain't got the will tonight, buddy," grumbled Ennis, "I hadda work overtime every day this week and I'm looking at a long week come Monday morn." Ennis hated to waste even a second of valuable time with his precious, Jack, but he was just worn out and it seemed nothing could restore his energy.

Jack succeeded in arousing Ennis by pressing and massaging Ennis' weary back, his shoulders and his buttocks; Jack's firm hands felt so good to a man who rarely enjoyed a fortuitous caress by anyone.

The mixture of smooth, creme colored silk on sensitive flesh proved to be too much for Ennis because he rolled over to face his long time lover, slid his silk pajamas down over this thighs and arched his back to thrust his erect cock into Jack's face.

Awww Toycoon, I knew you wouldn't disappoint!  This is hot, hot, hot!  What a fitting sequel to silk and flesh.  You know what, this deserves a Part 3.  I'll post it tomorrow, latest!  That is..unless you beat me to it!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: BBM-Cat on August 14, 2007, 01:35:43 am
Littlewing, just had to additionally comment, that was so truly endearing referring to Jack and Ennis as husbands! (melt). And, I too hope you never tire of writing about Jack & Ennis!

Nice sequel Toycoon! I've also enjoyed many of your stories. I swear, someday I will go back to page 1 of this thread!

Seriously, the recent trip to Alberta helped me to put fanfic into perspective. Please don't throw tomatoes, but I was resistant to fanfic and afraid to read it - afraid to betray Jack and Ennis and the message of BBM. I have yet to delve into some of the longer, novel-type stories (not sure I'm ready for that yet). I have learned that through the community here, Jack and Ennis do truly live on in our hearts, especially through creatively filling in the 'gaps' of the movie and the short story. I guess I reached a point during the trip to Alberta where I kept thinking, 'what else is there?' In other words, what is going to help keep the story alive? I guess I then gave myself permission to read some of the fanfic and I have not been disappointed!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: spiceylife on August 14, 2007, 07:20:35 am
Hi, guys! 

It's me.  (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/thmonkey.gif)

How is everyone?  - Gary, Susie, Dagi, Littlewing, Toycoon, Shasta - (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/thsmiley_hug.gif)

Hope you're all fit and well.

I'm so happy to see this thread bustling along, as always!  Brilliant! 

Actually, this is me  ->  (http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o304/spiceylife/spicey.png)

I'm too shy to go up as an avatar!  (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/unknown.gif)

I have a week off so I'll be reading madly to catch up, but I have a quick and silly one to post now. 

And, hey!  3 sentences (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/hmmm.gif) and no sex (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/huh.gif)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: spiceylife on August 14, 2007, 07:26:19 am

Dead Heat by spiceylife


It was Jack’s crazy-ass idea: a foot race along the lake’s edge, loser gets the boring task of putting the tent up again at the next campsite, further along the mountain.

The boys ran swiftly across the muddy, uneven earth, barefoot, barechested and competitive, with Ennis pacing himself nicely behind Jack, trusting his endless stamina and a pair of long, lean legs to move past his friend and claim an easy victory whenever he was ready.

But Ennis stared too long at Jack’s mesmerizing backside bouncing along in front of him and forgot to watch the soft, treacherous ground under his feet, causing him to stumble awkwardly and catapult forward, flying through the air spectacularly and landing face-first in the watery mud with no finesse whatsoever;  Jack, hearing the ooofffff sound Ennis made as he went down, glanced over his shoulder, saw Ennis spread-eagled on the ground, mud dripping down his astonished face, and he laughed so hard and so suddenly that both feet slid out from under him as he lost traction and became airborne for a second, like slipping on a banana peel, and then – splat! – Jack came down on his bum in the splashy, sticky mud, an equally spectacular landing, also lacking style and grace, and with an ooofffff sound to match Ennis.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on August 14, 2007, 07:41:16 am
Hi, guys! 

It's me.  (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/thmonkey.gif)

How is everyone?  - Gary, Susie, Dagi, Littlewing, Toycoon, Shasta - (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/thsmiley_hug.gif)

Hope you're all fit and well.

I'm so happy to see this thread bustling along, as always!  Brilliant! 

Actually, this is me  ->  (http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o304/spiceylife/spicey.png)

I'm too shy to go up as an avatar!  (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/unknown.gif)

I have a week off so I'll be reading madly to catch up, but I have a quick and silly one to post now. 

And, hey!  3 sentences (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/hmmm.gif) and no sex (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/huh.gif)


Hi Spicey!! Good to see you! I'm good--gone back to work.  :)

You shouldn't be shy---that's a very pretty picture! I love your haircut and color, too. Who's the guy? His arm's cute!  :P

Funny story! Ennis was gonna win til--down he went!! He didn't stay focused on the finish line!  ;D
Title: Re: It really is Alright
Post by: spiceylife on August 14, 2007, 07:59:14 am
It Really is Alright by Littlewing 1957

Friend, I got good news!  The conference in New York is cancelled, and to tell you the truth, I thought about it and told Lureen that I wasn’t going anyway.  I’m sorry for the confusion Cowboy.  If you have me and are still speaking to me I want to meet up next month as planned.  Let me know.

The tears fell in earnest!  Ennis pressed the postcard against his forehead and wiped at his wet cheeks.  He couldn’t image another month without Jack!  He rose from his small table and searched around for a postcard.  As he wrote Jack a very enthusiastic reply, Ennis remembered a few words from the Good Book that his mom often quoted:

"His eye is on the sparrow, and I know he watches me."

 Ennis thought that sometimes, just once in awhile,  the world really is a decent place….


Littlewing, this is just beautiful.  Exquisite!  I love it when things go right for Ennis (I wiish Alma would let him off the hook altogether, with Monroe maybe opening a 2nd store and all :-\  No such luck!)  Thank goodness for Jack, making sure he's there for Ennis.  And this line, littlewing - "His eye is on the sparrow, and I know he watches me." - made my eyes all teary.  God watching over Ennis is a lovely thought.   
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on August 14, 2007, 09:51:35 am
Quote
And, hey!  3 sentences (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/hmmm.gif) and no sex (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/huh.gif)

Hiya Spiceylife,
What an unexpected pleasure to see you around these parts! Where ya been, huh?

Love your story; it reminds me of the IMDb olden days when we had to be PC and PG-13. Very cute and classic!

You should post yer picture in yer avatar. You are a foxy lady! Why, if I was hetero (and single), I'd be pawing at yer door right now.

I like yer  trained pet "arm" in the photo, too. He looks "fun".
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on August 14, 2007, 09:56:51 am
Susiebell and Spiceylife, what is it with you two and the ironing?! Is it an British colonial thing?
That what 'wash and wear' is all about. Good grief, girls, undo these chains that bind ye!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: moremojo on August 14, 2007, 11:29:14 am
I'm holding out for disposable clothes .. like one-day Contact Lenses!
I know in the States, there was a brief fad for paper dresses in the 60s...I have seen one  well-preserved sample, with an Andy Warhol soupcan as the design, on television, apparently it had become a significant collector's item.

Hey, that's an idea for Toycoon's arts-and-crafts thread...BetterMost beans paper dresses!
Title: Re: Silk and Flesh
Post by: Dagi on August 14, 2007, 12:23:34 pm
Silk and Flesh by Littlewing 1957

I recreated the story to the best of my ability, but I have a feeling the original was better.  Oh well!

Whenever he was lucky enough to spend time with Jack Twist, Ennis Del Mar insisted that they sleep in the nude.  Why waste time, since whatever they wore to bed would certainly come off.  Jack was more than okay with this, as he enjoyed the feel of Ennis' skin, and the warmth it provided.

But one night Ennis climbed into bed wearing the crème colored silk PJs that Jack gave him for Christmas one year.  Jack rubbed Ennis’ chest with a questioning look.  “I’m just tired is all, Bud!”  Ennis began as he grabbed Jack’s roaming hands.  Jack nodded and moved closer.  “That’s okay, Cowboy, you don’t have to do anything.  But there is one thing you can do for me.  Lay down on your stomach.  Can you do that, Friend?”  Ennis smiled as he turned and lay down on his stomach.

Jack placed his entire weight on his lover, slid his entire body over Ennis’ still form.  Jack placed his hands over Ennis’ and squeezed.  He held his lover's hands in a tender embrace.  He kissed his husband's neck.  Ennis knew what Jack was up to, but he couldn’t fight.  He lay still as Jack placed tender, sloppy kisses alternating with tiny bites along his shoulders.  Jack blew at the line of saliva that dotted Ennis’ shoulder to dry it, and continued with the kisses and bites.  Ennis felt the swell of Jack’s manhood against his buttocks.  And when his own cock pressed up against the king sized mattress, Ennis reached around and removed his pajama bottoms in one motion…




Oh. My. God. Ennis felt the swell of Jack’s manhood against his buttocks. I can feel it, too. ;D.

No matter how good the original was, this one was gorgeous. Very erotic, Marie. Thank you for this sexy moment...

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 14, 2007, 12:26:48 pm
Wow - silk, flesh, and flames! Where is the fire extinguisher?? Good grief  - Your story should have come with a warning label!

You all amaze me with your stories and creativity - I am new to these parts of the forum though not to Bettermost. I can only read back so many pages at a time - it's like sensory overload (of the positive kind). Great job littlewing and everyone else who has taken the time to create stories that help us reconnect with Jack and Ennis.

I would like to try my hand (or keyboard rather) at posting a little story, 3 sentences of course  ;)  I certainly do not want to post right after littlewing though - let's let that one cool off a bit...

WELCOME BBM-Cat!! I´m looking forward to your story! But I warn you, these guys here have a naaaaasty influence! You might end up watching gay porn  ;D. Or do you already?

Dagi
Title: Re: Silk and Flesh (part 2)
Post by: Dagi on August 14, 2007, 12:32:04 pm
Silk and Flesh (part 2) by Toycoon

"I jes' ain't got the will tonight, buddy," grumbled Ennis, "I hadda work overtime every day this week and I'm looking at a long week come Monday morn." Ennis hated to waste even a second of valuable time with his precious, Jack, but he was just worn out and it seemed nothing could restore his energy.

Jack succeeded in arousing Ennis by pressing and massaging Ennis' weary back, his shoulders and his buttocks; Jack's firm hands felt so good to a man who rarely enjoyed a fortuitous caress by anyone.

The mixture of smooth, creme colored silk on sensitive flesh proved to be too much for Ennis because he rolled over to face his long time lover, slid his silk pajamas down over this thighs and arched his back to thrust his erect cock into Jack's face.

Poor Ennis, so tired and worn out. How good that Jack knows so well what to do about it! I couldn´t resist Jack either, and sleepy sex is not the worst thing  :D. Very erotic, Toycoon dear!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 14, 2007, 12:34:37 pm
Hi, guys! 

It's me.  (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/thmonkey.gif)

How is everyone?  - Gary, Susie, Dagi, Littlewing, Toycoon, Shasta - (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/thsmiley_hug.gif)

Hope you're all fit and well.

I'm so happy to see this thread bustling along, as always!  Brilliant! 

Actually, this is me  ->  (http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o304/spiceylife/spicey.png)

I'm too shy to go up as an avatar!  (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/unknown.gif)

I have a week off so I'll be reading madly to catch up, but I have a quick and silly one to post now. 

And, hey!  3 sentences (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/hmmm.gif) and no sex (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/huh.gif)


Spiceylife!! How good to see you! I´ve missed you so much!! You are a beauty, dear!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 14, 2007, 12:38:05 pm
Dead Heat by spiceylife


It was Jack’s crazy-ass idea: a foot race along the lake’s edge, loser gets the boring task of putting the tent up again at the next campsite, further along the mountain.

The boys ran swiftly across the muddy, uneven earth, barefoot, barechested and competitive, with Ennis pacing himself nicely behind Jack, trusting his endless stamina and a pair of long, lean legs to move past his friend and claim an easy victory whenever he was ready.

But Ennis stared too long at Jack’s mesmerizing backside bouncing along in front of him and forgot to watch the soft, treacherous ground under his feet, causing him to stumble awkwardly and catapult forward, flying through the air spectacularly and landing face-first in the watery mud with no finesse whatsoever;  Jack, hearing the ooofffff sound Ennis made as he went down, glanced over his shoulder, saw Ennis spread-eagled on the ground, mud dripping down his astonished face, and he laughed so hard and so suddenly that both feet slid out from under him as he lost traction and became airborne for a second, like slipping on a banana peel, and then – splat! – Jack came down on his bum in the splashy, sticky mud, an equally spectacular landing, also lacking style and grace, and with an ooofffff sound to match Ennis.


 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: I would die for a picture of them!

But, hey, no sex? I´d say Jack´s ass is pure sex  ;D.

Good to have you back....will you stay a little?

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: LauraGigs on August 14, 2007, 12:54:01 pm
Hey Spiceylife, I remember you from IMDB.  (I just read The Longest Night.   Whoa!!!!)   ;D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: BBM-Cat on August 14, 2007, 01:00:05 pm
WELCOME BBM-Cat!! I´m looking forward to your story! But I warn you, these guys here have a naaaaasty influence! You might end up watching gay porn  ;D. Or do you already?
Dagi

Thanks for the welcome, and the warning which is duly noted! And, wow - already getting so personal!  ;D  All I can say is this thread might drive me to do so - or to drink!! Though I speculate that drinking is probably not going to help much at this point....
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 14, 2007, 02:21:29 pm
Thanks for the welcome, and the warning which is duly noted! And, wow - already getting so personal!  ;D

*blush* sorry. But I told you - naaaasty influence  ;D

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on August 14, 2007, 04:17:35 pm
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Hey, that's an idea for Toycoon's arts-and-crafts thread...BetterMost beans paper dresses!

Wow, moremojo, yer a marketing genius! Why didn't I think'a that?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: BBM-Cat on August 14, 2007, 05:10:53 pm
*blush* sorry. But I told you - naaaasty influence  ;D
Dagi

.....as in Jack Nasty?  ;D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: moremojo on August 14, 2007, 05:34:23 pm
Have any of you seen this video? ... had me in stitches:
:laugh: That was great, Susie! Often 'Brokeback' parodies make me shudder lest they mock what to me is the single most beautiful love story I know, but this was one of those that was clearly affectionate and knowing at the same time...I'll have to let some of our other Brokie friends in on this one.
Title: Re: Silk and Flesh (part 2)
Post by: Toycoon on August 14, 2007, 07:42:59 pm
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I couldn't resist Jack either, and sleepy sex is not the worst thing :D. Very erotic, Toycoon dear!

Dagi, are you speaking from experience, my little coquette tart?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on August 14, 2007, 07:46:24 pm
Thanks for the welcome, and the warning which is duly noted! And, wow - already getting so personal!  ;D  All I can say is this thread might drive me to do so - or to drink!! Though I speculate that drinking is probably not going to help much at this point....

Nonsense, drinking always helps.
In fact, I've found drunk porno viewing to be quite satisfying! *Hick* And drunk sex... exquisite!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: moremojo on August 14, 2007, 10:42:44 pm
And drunk sex... exquisite!
Ennis and Jack's love may not have been born without it!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: BBM-Cat on August 14, 2007, 11:01:25 pm
Nonsense, drinking always helps.
In fact, I've found drunk porno viewing to be quite satisfying! *Hick* And drunk sex... exquisite!

Yeah, I kind of set myself up for that one!  ;D


Ok...I'm going to post a 3-sentence story then run away from the computer.... !  :laugh: 
Title: Laundry Can Wait
Post by: BBM-Cat on August 14, 2007, 11:55:00 pm
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Laundry Can Wait    BBM-Cat

Pained, Jack stood with a heavy heart watching Ennis ride away, his thoughts awhirl with vivid scenes of last night's activities in the tent, a culmination of joy and the no-longer-suppressed passion for his friend; feelings now interspersed with confusion, and uncertainty whether he would indeed see Ennis at suppertime, that hopeful statement blurted into the awkward silence had gone unacknowledged.

Jack was not the type to become depressed, however; watching until Ennis was a barely imperceptible movement against the morning mountain, he turned and ambled back to the opening of the tent, the crumpled bedroll revealing nothing of the previous night's passion, he removed his hat, coat and boots, and reverently kneeled, easing himself down and turning on his right side into the warm, downy impression occupied by Ennis’ body only moments before; Jack closed his eyes, deeply inhaling Ennis' scent from the bedroll, further heightening his senses, soon completely and pleasurably immersed in his essence, with only a vague awareness of his left hand fumbling beneath his untucked shirt, unzipping his jeans to reveal a contrasting hardness.

The sweet name of Ennis soon escaped his lips in a whisper as the sparks from a thousand night fires erupted gently throughout his body and soul, Jack now lay completely prone, clutching his invisible Ennis with both hands, his thrusting intermittent, his breath quieting, the loneliness quelled; before the pang of the morning's confusion and uncertainty resurfaced, Jack began drifting into a peaceful, soothing slumber, his expression content, still embracing Ennis in body and soon in dream; and, with a musing and fleeting thought - that in just a little while he would tend to that laundry.


Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 15, 2007, 12:13:46 am
Hi, guys! 

It's me.  (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/thmonkey.gif)

How is everyone?  - Gary, Susie, Dagi, Littlewing, Toycoon, Shasta - (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/thsmiley_hug.gif)

Hope you're all fit and well.

I'm so happy to see this thread bustling along, as always!  Brilliant! 

Actually, this is me  ->  (http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o304/spiceylife/spicey.png)

I'm too shy to go up as an avatar!  (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/unknown.gif)

I have a week off so I'll be reading madly to catch up, but I have a quick and silly one to post now. 

And, hey!  3 sentences (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/hmmm.gif) and no sex (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/huh.gif)


Hey Spiceylife!  How good to see you!  I hope you're well.  I'm doing just fine.  Dang Spicey, that's you?  My God, you look like Jacqueline Smith!  You're beyond gorgeous.   Hey, what do you mean "no sex?"  :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 15, 2007, 12:16:06 am
Dead Heat by spiceylife


It was Jack’s crazy-ass idea: a foot race along the lake’s edge, loser gets the boring task of putting the tent up again at the next campsite, further along the mountain.

The boys ran swiftly across the muddy, uneven earth, barefoot, barechested and competitive, with Ennis pacing himself nicely behind Jack, trusting his endless stamina and a pair of long, lean legs to move past his friend and claim an easy victory whenever he was ready.

But Ennis stared too long at Jack’s mesmerizing backside bouncing along in front of him and forgot to watch the soft, treacherous ground under his feet, causing him to stumble awkwardly and catapult forward, flying through the air spectacularly and landing face-first in the watery mud with no finesse whatsoever;  Jack, hearing the ooofffff sound Ennis made as he went down, glanced over his shoulder, saw Ennis spread-eagled on the ground, mud dripping down his astonished face, and he laughed so hard and so suddenly that both feet slid out from under him as he lost traction and became airborne for a second, like slipping on a banana peel, and then – splat! – Jack came down on his bum in the splashy, sticky mud, an equally spectacular landing, also lacking style and grace, and with an ooofffff sound to match Ennis.


Beautiful and so playful, Spicey.  Even good without the sex!  It is so nice to read a fic from you - it has been so long.  I need more of your writing.  But no pressure!  Just write again when you can!
Title: Re: It really is Alright
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 15, 2007, 12:17:30 am
Littlewing, this is just beautiful.  Exquisite!  I love it when things go right for Ennis (I wiish Alma would let him off the hook altogether, with Monroe maybe opening a 2nd store and all :-\  No such luck!)  Thank goodness for Jack, making sure he's there for Ennis.  And this line, littlewing - "His eye is on the sparrow, and I know he watches me." - made my eyes all teary.  God watching over Ennis is a lovely thought.   

Thanks, Spicey!  I just wanted something to go right for Ennis.  It was about time the universe threw something his way!  :)
Title: Re: Silk and Flesh
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 15, 2007, 12:20:30 am
Oh. My. God. Ennis felt the swell of Jack’s manhood against his buttocks. I can feel it, too. ;D.

No matter how good the original was, this one was gorgeous. Very erotic, Marie. Thank you for this sexy moment...

Dagi

You're always so sweet, Dagi.  By the way, I've missed you.  You've been around, right?  I get nervous when you're not here!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 15, 2007, 12:23:08 am
I know in the States, there was a brief fad for paper dresses in the 60s...I have seen one  well-preserved sample, with an Andy Warhol soupcan as the design, on television, apparently it had become a significant collector's item.

Hey, that's an idea for Toycoon's arts-and-crafts thread...BetterMost beans paper dresses!

moremojo, what a blast from the past!  I remember paper dresses!  Haven't thought of them in years!  Thanks for bringing back a fond, although rather strange memory!

I don't iron.  If someone needs something ironed (we usually go around wrinkly  :laugh:) that person knows where the ironing board is!  :laugh:
Title: Re: Silk and Flesh
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 15, 2007, 12:24:45 am
Gorgeous sensual story littlewing!  I can picure those silky pajama bottoms sliding off in one smooth motion (we spell it "pyjama" here .. interesting)

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)





 :laugh: Thanks, Baby!
Title: Re: Laundry Can Wait
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 15, 2007, 12:29:58 am
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Laundry Can Wait    BBM-Cat

Pained, Jack stood with a heavy heart watching Ennis ride away, his thoughts awhirl with vivid scenes of last night's activities in the tent, a culmination of joy and the no-longer-suppressed passion for his friend; feelings now interspersed with confusion, and uncertainty whether he would indeed see Ennis at suppertime, that hopeful statement blurted into the awkward silence had gone unacknowledged.

Jack was not the type to become depressed, however; watching until Ennis was a barely imperceptible movement against the morning mountain, he turned and ambled back to the opening of the tent, the crumpled bedroll revealing nothing of the previous night's passion, he removed his hat, coat and boots, and reverently kneeled, easing himself down and turning on his right side into the warm, downy impression occupied by Ennis’ body only moments before; Jack closed his eyes, deeply inhaling Ennis' scent from the bedroll, further heightening his senses, soon completely and pleasurably immersed in his essence, with only a vague awareness of his left hand fumbling beneath his untucked shirt, unzipping his jeans to reveal a contrasting hardness.

The sweet name of Ennis soon escaped his lips in a whisper as the sparks from a thousand night fires erupted gently throughout his body and soul, Jack now lay completely prone, clutching his invisible Ennis with both hands, his thrusting intermittent, his breath quieting, the loneliness quelled; before the pang of the morning's confusion and uncertainty resurfaced, Jack began drifting into a peaceful, soothing slumber, his expression content, still embracing Ennis in body and soon in dream; and, with a musing and fleeting thought - that in just a little while he would tend to that laundry.




Awww, sublime!  I knew it, BBM-Cat!  You're an amazingly talented writer.  I've always wondered what happend right after Ennis rode off without a word.  You filled in the gaps nicely here, Love!  I can certainly imagine Jack returning to the tent, imaging Ennis there with him.  Lovely writing, my dear.  I want more...
Title: Re: Laundry Can Wait
Post by: Toycoon on August 15, 2007, 12:36:23 am
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The sweet name of Ennis soon escaped his lips in a whisper as the sparks from a thousand night fires erupted gently throughout his body and soul, Jack now lay completely prone, clutching his invisible Ennis with both hands, his thrusting intermittent, his breath quieting, the loneliness quelled; before the pang of the morning's confusion and uncertainty resurfaced, Jack began drifting into a peaceful, soothing slumber, his expression content, still embracing Ennis in body and soon in dream; and, with a musing and fleeting thought - that in just a little while he would tend to that laundry.

Spectacular, BBM-Cat-
And you thought you couldn't write! I rather like this sentence: The sweet name of Ennis soon escaped his lips in a whisper as the sparks from a thousand night fires erupted gently throughout his body and soul, Jack now lay completely prone, clutching his invisible Ennis with both hands, his thrusting intermittent, his breath quieting, the loneliness quelled.
Very lovingly expressed.
Title: Silk and Flesh (part 3)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 15, 2007, 12:40:30 am
Silk and Flesh (Part 3) by Littlewing1957

“That's more like it!”  Jack thought as he looked straight on at Ennis’ cock head!  He knew he could bring his lover around, and he wasn’t about to refuse the savory feast that Ennis placed before him!

Afterwards, Jack lay sprawled atop Ennis’ groin.  Ennis' still swollen member lay across Jack’ cheek, as warm and soft as a chick.  Ennis was either too satisfied, or too moved to utter a sound. 

Jack rubbed his man’s belly and looked him straight in the eyes.  “Friend, I know you don’t like a whole lot of sentimental nonsense, and I’ll say this only once!"  Ennis nodded.  His very demeanor encouraged Jack to continue.  “I just want you to know, Cowboy..the..the times I spend with you..well, they are the best times of my life.”  Jack looked away.  “Same here, Bud!”  It was Ennis.  He reached out a hand to his lover and pulled him close.  Jack fell asleep in Ennis' arms more content that he thought was humanly possible.  The feel of silk was just a fond memory.


Title: Re: Silk and Flesh (part 3)
Post by: Toycoon on August 15, 2007, 12:51:48 am
Never heard of a pecker described as being "soft as a baby chick"? Sweetheart, you are too much! I love your stories, Littlewing.

Say, Littlewing are you going to the show in the Castro this weekend? I wish I could go and be there with y'all.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: BBM-Cat on August 15, 2007, 12:55:42 am
Littlewing and Toycoon,

You all are too kind - thank you for your generous compliments of my novice story, Laundry Can Wait, especially from such veteran and accomplished writers. I'm really enjoying this thread and look forward to more of your writings.
Title: Re: Silk and Flesh (part 3)
Post by: BBM-Cat on August 15, 2007, 01:00:27 am
Silk and Flesh (Part 3) by Littlewing1957

“That's more like it!”  Jack thought as he looked straight on at Ennis’ cock head!  He knew he could bring his lover around, and he wasn’t about to refuse the savory feast that Ennis placed before him!

Afterwards, Jack lay sprawled atop Ennis’ groin.  Ennis' still swollen member lay across Jack’ cheek, as warm and soft as a chick.  Ennis was either too satisfied, or too moved to utter a sound. 

Jack rubbed his man’s belly and looked him straight in the eyes.  “Friend, I know you don’t like a whole lot of sentimental nonsense, and I’ll say this only once!"  Ennis nodded.  His very demeanor encouraged Jack to continue.  “I just want you to know, Cowboy..the..the times I spend with you..well, they are the best times of my life.”  Jack looked away.  “Same here, Bud!”  It was Ennis.  He reached out a hand to his lover and pulled him close.  Jack fell asleep in Ennis' arms more content that he thought was humanly possible.  The feel of silk was just a fond memory.


Littlewing, a lovely part 3 of Silk and Flesh! You really keep Ennis in character with his nonverbal but loving ways of communicating with Jack. You really make sure he gets his point across! I certainly hope there is a part 4.
Title: Re: Silk and Flesh (part 3)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 15, 2007, 01:22:21 am
Never heard of a pecker described as being "soft as a baby chick"? Sweetheart, you are too much! I love your stories, Littlewing.

Say, Littlewing are you going to the show in the Castro this weekend? I wish I could go and be there with y'all.

Thanks Toycoon, honey!  :laugh:  ::)

Oh yes, I'm going to the screening.  I'm so sorry to hear you can't make it!  Perhaps I'll be lucky enough to meet you some time in the near future.  I was there last year for the screening and had a blast!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 15, 2007, 01:23:33 am
Littlewing and Toycoon,

You all are too kind - thank you for your generous compliments of my novice story, Laundry Can Wait, especially from such veteran and accomplished writers. I'm really enjoying this thread and look forward to more of your writings.

I meant every word!  I'm so glad you'll be here with us.  You're sweet!
Title: Re: Silk and Flesh (part 3)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 15, 2007, 01:24:35 am
Littlewing, a lovely part 3 of Silk and Flesh! You really keep Ennis in character with his nonverbal but loving ways of communicating with Jack. You really make sure he gets his point across! I certainly hope there is a part 4.

Thanks so much, Love.  A Part 4?  Why not?  I'll work on it and have it up tomorrow.  Thanks for the suggestion!  :)
Title: Re: Silk and Flesh (part 2)
Post by: Dagi on August 15, 2007, 03:01:59 am
Dagi, are you speaking from experience, my little coquette tart?

 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

Yes, I do. I always do.  :laugh: Almost always.

Dagi
Title: Re: Silk and Flesh
Post by: Dagi on August 15, 2007, 03:14:03 am
You're always so sweet, Dagi.  By the way, I've missed you.  You've been around, right?  I get nervous when you're not here!

You are so sweet. We have a little floor project going on here ( tiles out, wood in), and I have to have breakfirst now, but I hope I can come back later to comment on the stories.

Dagi
Title: Re: Laundry Can Wait
Post by: BBM-Cat on August 15, 2007, 12:08:17 pm
Great story, BBM-Cat!  Such erotic longing.  I loved it.

Gary

Thanks Bud! And for the welcome too!   :D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: LauraGigs on August 15, 2007, 12:46:15 pm
Not to clog the thread with too many compliments, but Laundry Can Wait is a heckofa story, BBM-Cat!  Very nice stuff!

 :D
Title: Re: Laundry Can Wait
Post by: Dagi on August 15, 2007, 03:10:14 pm
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Laundry Can Wait    BBM-Cat

 .....Jack closed his eyes, deeply inhaling Ennis' scent from the bedroll, further heightening his senses, soon completely and pleasurably immersed in his essence, with only a vague awareness of his left hand fumbling beneath his untucked shirt, unzipping his jeans to reveal a contrasting hardness.


Wow! I´m impressed! Beautiful writing, BBM-Cat. This is certainly not your first attempt in writing, is it? Give us more, please!

Dagi
Title: Re: Silk and Flesh (part 3)
Post by: Dagi on August 15, 2007, 03:15:53 pm
Silk and Flesh (Part 3) by Littlewing1957

.... “I just want you to know, Cowboy..the..the times I spend with you..well, they are the best times of my life.”  Jack looked away.  “Same here, Bud!”  It was Ennis.  He reached out a hand to his lover and pulled him close.  Jack fell asleep in Ennis' arms more content that he thought was humanly possible.  The feel of silk was just a fond memory.





Marie, Marie, Marie. I don´t know what to say. So, so beautiful. So beautiful. Don´t have no words....

Dagi
Title: Re: Laundry Can Wait
Post by: BBM-Cat on August 15, 2007, 03:22:59 pm
you'll soon be as addicted to it as the rest of us!

soon? I think I already am!  ;D Can't believe some of the wonderful stories I've been reading.

Really, thank you ALL for your very kind and welcoming comments - and yes, that was my first story ever. Don't know if I could do it again though - that one has been building in my mind - thank you for the opportunity to express it here.

Title: Re: Laundry Can Wait
Post by: moremojo on August 15, 2007, 04:07:16 pm
Laundry Can Wait    BBM-Cat
A lovely, evocative story, BBM-Cat. The wonderfully descriptive details of Jack seeking remembrance of Ennis through the warmth and scent of his bedroll impression are very moving and sensual. Jack was never one to let go of a dream, that's for sure.

Congratulations on your first story (and such a wonderful one at that), and please feel free to share more.

Scott
Title: Re: Laundry Can Wait
Post by: BBM-Cat on August 15, 2007, 07:16:56 pm
A lovely, evocative story, BBM-Cat. The wonderfully descriptive details of Jack seeking remembrance of Ennis through the warmth and scent of his bedroll impression are very moving and sensual. Jack was never one to let go of a dream, that's for sure.

Congratulations on your first story (and such a wonderful one at that), and please feel free to share more.

Scott M.

Thank you Scott, that's really very kind! I'm glad the sensual aspect was conveyed through the story - it was a bit challlenging to put it into words.

BTW, I've enjoyed your posts in other threads - and I'm very glad for the virtual meeting!

Take Care,
Chris.
Title: Re: Laundry Can Wait
Post by: Dagi on August 15, 2007, 07:21:07 pm

 I'm glad the sensual aspect was conveyed through the story
 

I think it was conveyed perfectly!

Dagi
Title: Silk and Flesh (Part 4)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 15, 2007, 10:07:57 pm
Silk and Flesh (Part 4) by Littlewing1957

BBM-Cat, this one is for you!

Jack was sleeping soundly on his lover’s chest, but sleep eluded Ennis.  He held Jack very close, and remained very still.  It wouldn't do to wake him.  Ennis placed a gentle kiss on Jack’s forehead and watched him sleep.

Ennis' silk pajamas lay in a crumple by the side of the bed.  He looked at the crème colored silk and remembered the day when Jack placed an elaborately wrapped box on his lap.  “A gift for you, just because.”  Jack said when Ennis fingered the package nervously.  Ennis opened the gift slowly, and even folded the wrapping paper and the brightly colored ribbon.  When he held the PJs, the top of which was engraved with his initials, no less, Ennis was silent.  He didn’t know what to say.  But he thanked Jack – in bed!

Ennis blushed when Jack told him how sexy he looked in his PJs.  Jack thought the feel of the silk was one long caress.  He liked to trace Ennis’ initials, embroidered on the breast pocket with the finest threads, with a finger.  But Ennis preferred the feel of Jack’s smooth skin.  He looked down at his lover’s fine body, smiled, slept.
Title: Re: Silk and Flesh (Part 4)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 15, 2007, 11:30:49 pm
Hi there littlewing,

You're making me want to go out and buy myself silk pj's.  I don't think I've ever owned anything made of silk. 

You always paint such a loving image of the boys.

Gary

Thanks, Gary!  Silk does feel good against the skin!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: coffeecat33 on August 15, 2007, 11:34:50 pm
I just saw this post - you are right about silk, it does feel wonderful against the skin.  ;)

Thinking of J & E wearing silk.  :)  :D  ;D
Title: Twenty-One
Post by: coffeecat33 on August 15, 2007, 11:44:41 pm
They were twenty-one when they agreed on a sweet life together.

They were forty-two when they celebrated twenty-one years together.

They were sixty-three when they celebrated forty-two years together.
Title: Re: Silk and Flesh (Part 4)
Post by: BBM-Cat on August 16, 2007, 12:20:07 am
Silk and Flesh (Part 4) by Littlewing1957

BBM-Cat, this one is for you!
Awww, Littlewing...what an incredibly sweet dedication. I feel so honored!  :D And, what a delightful continuance of part 3 - capturing Ennis' awkward memory of something he'd never wear in a million years...yet, respectfully tolerating Jack's fantasy ! I love the line, But he thanked Jack – in bed (as if Ennis needed an excuse to 'thank' Jack!)  ;) And, can't you just visualize Jack having a field day with Ennis' silk pajamas?
Think I know what I'll get my husband for his birthday! Thanks for the idea. (oops, I hope he doesn't see this!)  ;)
Title: Simple Dreams
Post by: Toycoon on August 16, 2007, 12:45:18 am
Simple Dreams by Toycoon

"Alright now, just one ... more... , " he said swinging the hammer down on the final nail of the rustic sign, "looks purty good, huh, whatta ya think?" Ennis climbed down the wooden ladder, stepped backwards to join Jack, put his arm around him and together they inspected their hard work.

Jack pushed back the brim of his cowboy hat with his index finger, squinted as he faced the sun and read the engraving on the wide sign aloud: Brokeback Ranch, E Bar J. The archway framed the modest farm and all it's trappings perfectly: a small herd of cattle, their calves and a half acre of land. Ennis squeezed his partner's bicep and Jack, burying his head in the crook of Ennis' shoulder, began to sob softly; he had no words to describe his pride in finally achieving his lifelong dream.

"Finally," remarked John Twist sarcastically, "I thought you'd never git that damn yard cleared up. Maybe if you'd got that Ennis Del Mar ta help like ya said he would, ya could'a got it done quicker." Jack glanced around at the piles of dried brush, dirt and jagged rocks with incredulity; how could his simple dream really have been too much to ask for.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: LauraGigs on August 16, 2007, 12:55:09 am
DANGIT!  I was working on a sequel to Cat's Sheep Can Wait and it's gotten lost somewhere in the silicon ether.  Sheeeit . . .  I'm giving it a few more hours to come through my email.  Wish me luck... :-\
Title: Re: Silk and Flesh (Part 4)
Post by: BBM-Cat on August 16, 2007, 01:12:01 am
"Alright now, just one ... more... , " he said swinging the hammer down on the final nail of the rustic sign, "looks purty good, huh, whatta ya think?" Ennis climbed down the wooden ladder, stepped backwards to join Jack, put his arm him and together they inspected their hard work.

Jack pushed back the brim of his cowboy hat with his index finger, squinted as he faced the sun and read the engraving on the wide sign aloud: Brokeback Ranch, E Bar J. The archway framed the modest farm and all it's trappings perfectly: a small herd of cattle, their calves and a half acre of land. Ennis squeezed his partner's bicep and Jack, burying his head in the crook of Ennis' shoulder, began to sob softly; he had no words to describe his pride in finally achieving his lifelong dream.

"Finally," remarked John Twist sarcastically, "I thought you'd never git that damn yard cleared up. Maybe if you'd got that Ennis Del Mar ta help like ya said he would, ya could'a got it done quicker." Jack glanced around at the piles of dried brush, dirt and jagged rocks with incredulity; how could his simple dream really have been too much to ask for.

Toycoon, How extremely poignant! I was thinking, YES! Jack finally saw his dream of the sweet life with Ennis come to fruition (loved the Brokeback Ranch, E Bar J ), and the idea of them building their dream together. I was not prepared for the letdown of the ending, so abrupt and painful, leaving Jack no further than where he had dared to dream. :(
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: BBM-Cat on August 16, 2007, 01:13:34 am
DANGIT!  I was working on a sequel to Cat's Sheep Can Wait and it's gotten lost somewhere in the silicon ether.  Sheeeit . . .  I'm giving it a few more hours to come through my email.  Wish me luck... :-\

Good luck!  :) Sounds like it's going to be a good one too!
Title: Re: Twenty-One
Post by: Toycoon on August 16, 2007, 01:18:48 am
They were twenty-one when they agreed on a sweet life together.

They were forty-two when they celebrated twenty-one years together.

They were sixty-three when they celebrated forty-two years together.


Wow terrific, coffeecat! I really enjoy the stories that covey so much information with so little actual words. Very clever.
Title: Re: Twenty-One
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 16, 2007, 01:40:08 am
They were twenty-one when they agreed on a sweet life together.

They were forty-two when they celebrated twenty-one years together.

They were sixty-three when they celebrated forty-two years together.


This is amazing! Beautiful! Thanks for posting!
Title: Re: Silk and Flesh (Part 4)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 16, 2007, 01:42:41 am
Awww, Littlewing...what an incredibly sweet dedication. I feel so honored!  :D And, what a delightful continuance of part 3 - capturing Ennis' awkward memory of something he'd never wear in a million years...yet, respectfully tolerating Jack's fantasy ! I love the line, But he thanked Jack – in bed (as if Ennis needed an excuse to 'thank' Jack!)  ;) And, can't you just visualize Jack having a field day with Ennis' silk pajamas?
Think I know what I'll get my husband for his birthday! Thanks for the idea. (oops, I hope he doesn't see this!)  ;)


BBM-Cat, thanks so much for your kind words.  You're so very sweet!  Oh, let me know how your hubby likes his silk PJs.  And don't forget to have his initials sewn on!  :)
Title: Re: Simple Dreams
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 16, 2007, 01:47:08 am
Simple Dreams by Toycoon

"Alright now, just one ... more... , " he said swinging the hammer down on the final nail of the rustic sign, "looks purty good, huh, whatta ya think?" Ennis climbed down the wooden ladder, stepped backwards to join Jack, put his arm him and together they inspected their hard work.

Jack pushed back the brim of his cowboy hat with his index finger, squinted as he faced the sun and read the engraving on the wide sign aloud: Brokeback Ranch, E Bar J. The archway framed the modest farm and all it's trappings perfectly: a small herd of cattle, their calves and a half acre of land. Ennis squeezed his partner's bicep and Jack, burying his head in the crook of Ennis' shoulder, began to sob softly; he had no words to describe his pride in finally achieving his lifelong dream.

"Finally," remarked John Twist sarcastically, "I thought you'd never git that damn yard cleared up. Maybe if you'd got that Ennis Del Mar ta help like ya said he would, ya could'a got it done quicker." Jack glanced around at the piles of dried brush, dirt and jagged rocks with incredulity; how could his simple dream really have been too much to ask for.

Ah Toycoon, what a triumph for Jack, and what a let-down at the end for all of us!  Poor Jack only wanted to be with the man he loved, with a ranch of their own.  As Gary observed: not much to ask for!  Very well told tale, Toycoon!
Title: Measure Up
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 16, 2007, 02:20:26 am
Measure Up by Littlewing1957


Jack was all ready to relax after a frantic day at work.  He was able to sell a tractor, and a foreign made small car that someone traded in toward the purchase of a combine.  His commission would be sizeable, and deposited into his private savings account.

As he emptied his pockets of change on his dresser drawer, Jack noticed that his top drawer was ajar.  He didn’t think much of it; Lureen probably opened it to put away his clean socks and underwear after they were laundered.  Jack was all ready to push the drawer closed when he noticed a yellow measuring tape peeking from beneath his socks.  Jack almost fell against the chest-of-drawers when he remembered what he did with that very same tape:

It was near midnight and Ennis was mellow after a fine dinner and a few drinks.  Jack was feeling no pain, and suggested that they turn in for the night.  Don Wroe’s cabin was not available, but Jack rented a bungalow for them not too far from Don’s place.  As Jack and Ennis disrobed and climbed into the massive bed, Jack pulled a tape measure from his bag.  He was in a wicked mood, had a sexy feeling, and wanted to play.  Ennis noticed the tape, but didn’t understand at first.  As Jack eyed his lover’s manhood and strung the tape between his hands, Ennis blushed.  Ennis spread his legs, decided to play along.  Jack’s eyes twinkled, and he grinned as he realized that Ennis was game.  Jack placed the tape from the end of Ennis’ shaft up to his glistening cock head.  “Hmmm, 8 inches even!”  Jack whistled as he read the measurement.  “Is that good?”  Ennis laughed.  “It’s enough for me, Friend!”  Jack answered.  Ennis reached out for the tape, and Jack handed it over.  He measured Jack’s manhood – 7.5 inches!  “You measure up, Rodeo!”  Ennis muttered.  Jack nodded and took hold of the tape measure.  He placed his cock against that of Ennis’ and wound the two sexes together with the yellow tape.  Jack bent down to lick first his own cock, and then Ennis'!  The sensation almost drove them both over the edge!

The memory of that special time was never forgotten, just buried.  Jack pulled the measuring tape from the drawer and handled it gently.  He undressed, and was glad that he and Lureen no longer slept in the same room.  Jack climbed into bed and spread the tape measure between his thighs.




Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: LauraGigs on August 16, 2007, 02:59:40 am
Aww, sorry to hear that, Laura.  I know how frustrating things like that can be.  Makes you want to toss your computer out the window.
Gary

The fucking scary thing is, I came up with it at work today and emailed it to myself at home (then deleted the outgoing message & emptied the 'deleted' folder). Or at least thought I sent it to myself — I keyed in "La" and it filled in the rest of what should have been my address.  So hopefully there's just a server delay on that end... otherwise, God knows who I sent my sexy story to!!!   :o
Title: Re: Silk and Flesh (Part 4)
Post by: Dagi on August 16, 2007, 04:27:41 am
Silk and Flesh (Part 4) by Littlewing1957

BBM-Cat, this one is for you!

Jack was sleeping soundly on his lover’s chest, but sleep eluded Ennis.  He held Jack very close, and remained very still.  It wouldn't do to wake him.  Ennis placed a gentle kiss on Jack’s forehead and watched him sleep.

Ennis' silk pajamas lay in a crumple by the side of the bed.  He looked at the crème colored silk and remembered the day when Jack placed an elaborately wrapped box on his lap.  “A gift for you, just because.”  Jack said when Ennis fingered the package nervously.  Ennis opened the gift slowly, and even folded the wrapping paper and the brightly colored ribbon.  When he held the PJs, the top of which was engraved with his initials, no less, Ennis was silent.  He didn’t know what to say.  But he thanked Jack – in bed!

Ennis blushed when Jack told him how sexy he looked in his PJs.  Jack thought the feel of the silk was one long caress.  He liked to trace Ennis’ initials, embroidered on the breast pocket with the finest threads, with a finger.  But Ennis preferred the feel of Jack’s smooth skin.  He looked down at his lover’s fine body, smiled, slept.


What an ending for a great row of stories! So sweet the image of Ennis holding his sleeping men, kissing his forehead....the feel of silk is one long caress, yes, but I´d prefer Jack´s skin, too  :D.

Thank you, Marie, it is always so good to come here.

Dagi
Title: Re: Simple Dreams
Post by: Dagi on August 16, 2007, 04:35:11 am
Simple Dreams by Toycoon

..... how could his simple dream really have been too much to ask for.

 :'( :'( :'(  Toycoon, that was not fair, really. I´m sobbing like a baby.

Thank you anyway. Sometimes I need that, too.

Dagi
Title: Re: Twenty-One
Post by: Dagi on August 16, 2007, 04:39:27 am
They were twenty-one when they agreed on a sweet life together.

They were forty-two when they celebrated twenty-one years together.

They were sixty-three when they celebrated forty-two years together.


Hi coffeecat! So many new writers, it´s great! Toycoon will love you! And the rest of us of course, too!

Dagi
Title: Re: Measure Up
Post by: Dagi on August 16, 2007, 04:46:35 am
Measure Up by Littlewing1957

  .....He placed his cock against that of Ennis’ and wound the two sexes together with the yellow tape.  Jack bent down to lick first his own cock, and then Ennis'!  The sensation almost drove them both over the edge![/i]


Your ideas for stories are truly original! This line almost drove me over the edge! Marie, you are one sexy woman.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 16, 2007, 04:50:32 am
The fucking scary thing is, I came up with it at work today and emailed it to myself at home (then deleted the outgoing message & emptied the 'deleted' folder). Or at least thought I sent it to myself — I keyed in "La" and it filled in the rest of what should have been my address.  So hopefully there's just a server delay on that end... otherwise, God knows who I sent my sexy story to!!!   :o


 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

This person very likely feels as if it was Chrismas!

Dagi
Title: Re: Measure Up
Post by: Dagi on August 16, 2007, 04:52:45 am
Too bad, really, that I have no idea of how long that is in cm! But I can imagine it´s not too short, huh?
Title: Re: Measure Up
Post by: BBM-Cat on August 16, 2007, 08:26:14 am
Measure Up by Littlewing1957
Wow Littlewing - (gets out Lureen's addin' machine) - that's 15 1/2 inches of pure, hot, cowboy love!  ;D And, to think their love kept growing for one another...
Title: Re: Laundry Can Wait
Post by: BBM-Cat on August 16, 2007, 08:29:56 am
Hello, BBM-Cat!  I don't know why you were thinking of posting and running away.  Your story is fantastic, almost poetic.  Beautifully written.  I hope you'll think about writing some more.  You're very talented!

Hi Spiceylife, thank you for your compliments. Run away? well, you know, first-story-post jitters.  :D
BTW, I enjoyed 'Dead Heat' - it felt like a candid snapshot of one of Jack and Ennis' fun and rare moments together!
 
Title: Re: Simple Dreams
Post by: Toycoon on August 16, 2007, 09:30:39 am
Quote
:'( :'( :'(  Toycoon, that was not fair, really. I'm sobbing like a baby.
Thank you anyway. Sometimes I need that, too.
Dagi

Awww! Thank you, everyone. Sometimes we all need a sad story if only to maintain the pathos of the original story.
I read someone's essay over on IMDb and it set me thinking about how simple Jack's dream really was. Honestly, when people say, "Why didn't they just move to a bigger city where they could be gay in peace?" I have to say they missed the essence of the story. Neither Jack nor Ennis can escape their inner demons, the voices in their heads that tell them they're not good enough to achieve the American dream. To me, that is why so many people can relate to the story on different levels. On the obvious level, it's a 'love story' about lovers who can't be together but I really think it's about failure to find one's Golden path in life. None of the characters get to have what they wanted.
Title: Re: Simple Dreams
Post by: Toycoon on August 16, 2007, 09:36:20 am
Howdy little Susiebell, my little tomato! How are you this morning (afternoon, for you)?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: moremojo on August 16, 2007, 10:31:49 am
Okay, I've never seen a gay porno movie! I'm guessing they're not on the shelf of the local Video Ezy store, so where do you find them?  Are they only to be found at those 'special' stores with XXX flashing in the window?  I feel as though I've led a sheltered life here... so sad.
Certainly, adult bookstores will sell/rent gay videos (at least those found in the larger cities), as will many magazine/entertainment outlets that also sell adult materials (not adult bookstores per se, but stores with adult sections). Many gay and lesbian bookstores will sell/rent gay porn (again, these would not be adult bookstores per se, but bookstores catering to gay and lesbian interests that have adult sections on the side). And while it's true you're not going to find anything like gay porn in your neighborhood Blockbuster, really good video outlets with a broad, eclectic selection will sometimes have an adult section (which sometimes includes gay product).

In addition to all this, the Internet has loads of pornography on it, with a fair share of it being gay in nature. Exercise caution if surfing the Net for adult material--many of the prompts and pop-ups are manipulative, and it's all too easy to click on something that you might find distasteful.

But the colorful world of gay porn awaits anyone out there who really wishes to experience it.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: moremojo on August 16, 2007, 10:53:02 am
The shots of Tintagel are particularly stunning, Susie.

Isn't Newlyn in Cornwall? I believe there was an artist's colony in Newlyn at the turn of the century; I wonder if the locals remember and honor that part of their history. And sculptress Barbara Hepworth died in Saint Ives, where there is a museum dedicated to her. And anyone who's a Gilbert and Sullivan fan would want to go to Penzance, just to say they've been to the pirates' haunt (much as we Brokies make pilgrimages to Wyoming and Alberta to commune with ghosts of people who never even existed).

I actually met a man from Penzance...very nice and articulate person. He seemed slightly (but pleasantly) surprised when I said I had actually heard of the place.

At any rate, thank you, Susie, for sharing these lovely pictures. They are indeed enjoyable to peruse.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 16, 2007, 04:42:49 pm
Susie, thank you for sharing these wonderful pics with us! That must have been a lot of work!

Your children are so beautiful, no wonder, since they take so much after their parents  :D!

I do understand why you love Cornwall! I have to go there some day.

Dagi
Title: Re: Measure Up
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 16, 2007, 09:05:54 pm
Phew, littlewing!  Hot, Hot, HOT!  I had a feeling that Ennis would just win that contest.   ;D  But I am impressed by both of them, just the same!

Together in the best possible way - sexy and beautiful, littlewing.

That's sexy as hell!  I'm trying to picture it in my mind.   ;D  Can Jack do that?  I've pulled a muscle just thinking about it!

Great story, littlewing, as always.



Ah, Spiceylife, my girl!  It is always a pleasure to see you here!  Thanks for your kind words. 
Title: Re: Silk and Flesh (Part 4)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 16, 2007, 09:06:44 pm
Oh littlewing, this story is so soft and silky, I can actually feel it!  Beautiful!

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



Thanks, Susiebaby!  :)
Title: Re: Measure Up
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 16, 2007, 09:12:50 pm
Your ideas for stories are truly original! This line almost drove me over the edge! Marie, you are one sexy woman.

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi.  I was putting away one of my mom's measuring tapes, and the rest is history!  I see inspiration everywhere!
Title: Re: Measure Up
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 16, 2007, 09:14:10 pm
Too bad, really, that I have no idea of how long that is in cm! But I can imagine it´s not too short, huh?

They're a decent size, but I've known men a lot longer.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 16, 2007, 09:16:03 pm
Hi, Dagi!  Hey, I've missed you a lot!  Thanks for the kind words, about the photo and the story.

You're right, of course.  Jack's ass is pure sex, with the supernatural power to bring Ennis crashing to the ground.  But,you know, there was no thrusting, grunting or moaning...that sort of thing.  Most unusual for me, and in 3 sentences, too!  I'll be here for a while.  I have another story to post but it's the complete opposite to my last one - all sexed up but pages and pages long.   :-\  I really suck at rules.  (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/crying-out.gif) 

Uh oh, I don't know if I can stand it!  Your stories are smokin' hot..smouldering!  I can't wait, though!
Title: Re: Silk and Flesh (part 3)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 16, 2007, 09:19:28 pm
littlewing, this is divine!  Yay, Ennis, for putting out even when you're too tired!  This whole little series has been so enjoyable, littlewing and toycoon.  What a team!  You've both got their personalities down perfectly.  I love this series.  Thanks, you two!

I'm glad you like our team efforts, Spicey!  Writing with Toycoon is such fun and very rewarding.  It is also, for me, automatic.  I almost feel compelled to add to one of his sexy gems!  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 16, 2007, 09:20:47 pm
Thank you so much, littlewing!  You're a real sweetheart!  I'm glad you're doing well.  I thought I'd test myself to see if I could write one without  (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/Sex.gif) or  (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/stopthathumping.gif) in it.

I enjoyed it so much that I've immediately written a small novel length story full of (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/cowboycheeky.jpg) and (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/nakedrodeo.jpg) so I guess my 'no sex' phase lasted one whole story.  Hmmm....  (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/thsmiley.gif)

My God, look at the body on that babe!  If only I had something like that to look forward to in my younger days.  And I can't wait to read this novel length story!  :)
Title: Re: Measure Up
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 16, 2007, 09:22:20 pm
Wow Littlewing - (gets out Lureen's addin' machine) - that's 15 1/2 inches of pure, hot, cowboy love!  ;D And, to think their love kept growing for one another...

 :laugh: Yes, BBM-Cat!
Title: Re: Measure Up
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 16, 2007, 09:23:37 pm
Great story, littlewing.  And you sure have our number, us guys that is, we're all size queens, even those of us who are straight.   :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:  But those who have been on the receiving end know that girth is more important than length.   :P

I used to sometimes buy this gay men's skin rag called Inches.   ;D

Gary

Gary, my love, how are you?  Thanks for your sweet comments.  I like width over length, myself!
Title: Re: Simple Dreams
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 16, 2007, 09:25:16 pm
Awww! Thank you, everyone. Sometimes we all need a sad story if only to maintain the pathos of the original story.
I read someone's essay over on IMDb and it set me thinking about how simple Jack's dream really was. Honestly, when people say, "Why didn't they just move to a bigger city where they could be gay in peace?" I have to say they missed the essence of the story. Neither Jack nor Ennis can escape their inner demons, the voices in their heads that tell them they're not good enough to achieve the American dream. To me, that is why so many people can relate to the story on different levels. On the obvious level, it's a 'love story' about lovers who can't be together but I really think it's about failure to find one's Golden path in life. None of the characters get to have what they wanted.

Agreed!  At the risk of sounding like a broken record, Toycoon, you "get it!"  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 16, 2007, 09:27:09 pm
Hey guys,

I've had my holiday pics back and I've been busy scanning some of them into my computer ... too tight fisted to get them copied onto CD ... I was regretting that last night!

Anyway, I hope you don't mind me highjacking the thread ... again ... and posting them here ... it's you guys I want to share them with ... forgive the quality if they're a bit fuzzy... they're great in real life but our scanner's a bit dodgy!


Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Susie, you know we wouldn't let you back here without holiday pics!  Post away my love!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 16, 2007, 09:31:50 pm
Thank you Gary,

It's a pretty small caravan, with 7 or 8 of us crammed in it, but we can always find space for one more, I'd love to take you to see Padstow .. heaven!

Love ya too honey, Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



Lovely pics, Susie.  I just showed them to my daughter and she now wants to move to Cornwall!  Maria has always wanted to live in Europe (that expatriot!) but these photos just sealed the deal!  Thanks for posting, Sweets!  Your kids are beautiful!  You're so very lucky!  :)
Title: Re: Holiday Snaps
Post by: Toycoon on August 16, 2007, 09:50:11 pm

Sandy Mouth Bay


(http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s31/Susiebell_album/Cornwall/Cornwall2007SandyMouth1.jpg)
This one reminds me of the beach in the movie "Chitty Chitty Bang Bang"
I want to go on vacation with you and your family next time!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on August 16, 2007, 10:03:36 pm
Breathtaking scenery pics of Cornwall, Susie!! I bet it was a little hard to leave, huh?

As beautiful as the scenery is -- I love the pics of your 3 children and Charlie. They are all 3 absolutely gorgeous!!!

And Charlie?? He's sooooo cute. I like his hair cut too!

Thanks for sharing the pictures--please post more. Everyone enjoys seeing them.
Title: Re: Silk and Flesh (part 3)
Post by: Toycoon on August 16, 2007, 10:08:26 pm
I'm glad you like our team efforts, Spicey!  Writing with Toycoon is such fun and very rewarding.  It is also, for me, automatic.  I almost feel compelled to add to one of his sexy gems!  :)

Thanks Spiceylife and Littlewing.
I love writing with the both of you. It's been a while but I colaborated with Spiceylife on a story long ago, remember? I'm gonna post a story and I'd love for any of our little team to contribute a second (or third) part to the story. Dagi, this means you!
Title: Ticklish?
Post by: Toycoon on August 16, 2007, 10:49:08 pm
Ticklish? by Toycoon

"I was jes' kiddin' with ya, bud," chuckled Ennis, ruffling Jack's black hair and digging his fingers into Jack's fuzzy armpits; Jack flinched, grabbed Ennis' wrists and they accidentally knocked heads together.

"Owww, you son-of-a-gun. You done that on purpose!" bellowed Ennis, rubbing his forehead, cross but at the same time, aroused at the sight of Jack's squirming and wriggling; "Now quit it," begged Jack powerlessly, "you know how ticklish I am there!"

"Yeah? You ticklish here, " guffawed Ennis, squeezing Jack's sides, "... how 'bout here...  or here?" he said jabbing, tweaking and pawing him all over until Jack was reduced to a helpless ball of quivering flesh then, Ennis leaned in and a blew a loud 'raspberry' on Jack's bare ass.

 
Title: Re: Ticklish?
Post by: BBM-Cat on August 17, 2007, 06:51:45 am
Ticklish? by Toycoon

Cute, intimate story! Thank you for sharing another candid Jack and Ennis moment.
Title: Re: Ticklish?
Post by: Dagi on August 17, 2007, 02:51:30 pm
Ticklish? by Toycoon

"I was jes' kiddin' with ya, bud," chuckled Ennis, ruffling Jack's black hair and digging his fingers into Jack's fuzzy armpits; Jack flinched, grabbed Ennis' wrists and they accidentally knocked heads together.

"Owww, you son-of-a-gun. You done that on purpose!" bellowed Ennis, rubbing his forehead, cross but at the same time, aroused at the sight of Jack's squirming and wriggling; "Now quit it," begged Jack powerlessly, "you know how ticklish I am there!"

"Yeah? You ticklish here, " guffawed Ennis, squeezing Jack's sides, "... how 'bout here...  or here?" he said jabbing, tweaking and pawing him all over until Jack was reduced to a helpless ball of quivering flesh then, Ennis leaned in and a blew a loud 'raspberry' on Jack's bare ass.

 

 :laugh: Toycoon, you are great! I love it when the boys have fun together!! These scenes are much too rare still.....gorgeous story, cowboy!

Sorry that I feel absolutely too tired to think of anything.....but thanks so much for inviting me, that´s an honor. We will be finished tomorrow with our floor project, maybe next week I feel like writing something for my friends here!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 17, 2007, 02:54:29 pm
Thank you so much, littlewing!  You're a real sweetheart!  I'm glad you're doing well.  I thought I'd test myself to see if I could write one without  (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/Sex.gif) or  (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/stopthathumping.gif) in it.

I enjoyed it so much that I've immediately written a small novel length story full of (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/cowboycheeky.jpg) and (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/nakedrodeo.jpg) so I guess my 'no sex' phase lasted one whole story.  Hmmm....  (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/thsmiley.gif)


 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:  I love your animations!! And this guy´s bum is incredibly hot.

I can hardly wait for your story!!

Dagi
Title: Re: Ticklish?
Post by: spiceylife on August 17, 2007, 11:14:51 pm

Ticklish? - Part Two by spiceylife


Ennis stood up, still chuckling at the ‘raspberry’ sound echoing around the bedroom.  “Up ya get now, Jack.  Let’s go get us some breakfast.  I could eat a horse.”

Jack was miffed, though, stood up on the bed and flew off it like a wrassler, landing on Ennis’s back and crash tackling him to the floor.  As they fell Jack used his extra weight to flip Ennis onto his back and pin him down, laying heavily on top of him with an unmistakable glint of mischief in his eye.  He grabbed Ennis’s wrists again and with one strong hand, pulled them up over his head at full stretch.  He torturously walked the fingers of his free hand slowly down Ennis’s side.

“DON’T, Jack!  Cut it OUT!” Ennis yelled, flinching before Jack had even done anything, and giving Jack a serious angry look.  Jack laughed at Ennis all irritated.  He dug his fingers under Ennis’s ribs and watched as Ennis collapsed, weak with laughter.  Jack kept it up, showing no mercy, going for the collarbone, the armpits and then horsebites all down the legs, paying particular attention to knees and calves.  Then he sat there a moment, drinking in the sound of Ennis del Mar’s laughter, so uninhibited and loud.  Jack wondered if he’d ever heard such a beautiful sound before in his life.

When Ennis finally calmed down and could breathe again, Jack easily flipped him over onto his lap, naked groins pressing together.  Jack spanked that ass a dozen times, not too hard but enough to get his point across.  Ennis roared and yelled and protested, wriggling around trying to escape.  Jack stopped, aroused by all the wriggling.   He rested his palm on the slightly reddened flesh.  Ennis stopped, all the fight gone out of him.  He lay still, breathing heavily.

Jack wagged a stern finger in Ennis’s face and spoke to him in a cross voice: “Now don’t ya go makin’ me punish ya like that again, ya hear me?”  He ran his palm over Ennis’s warm bottom again, grinned cheekily, and leaned in to whisper saucily in Ennis’s ear.  “Well, ’less ya really want me to…”
Title: Re: Ticklish?
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 18, 2007, 12:17:13 am
Ticklish? - Part Two by spiceylife


Ennis stood up, still chuckling at the ‘raspberry’ sound echoing around the bedroom.  “Up ya get now, Jack.  Let’s go get us some breakfast.  I could eat a horse.”

Jack was miffed, though, stood up on the bed and flew off it like a wrassler, landing on Ennis’s back and crash tackling him to the floor.  As they fell Jack used his extra weight to flip Ennis onto his back and pin him down, laying heavily on top of him with an unmistakable glint of mischief in his eye.  He grabbed Ennis’s wrists again and with one strong hand, pulled them up over his head at full stretch.  He torturously walked the fingers of his free hand slowly down Ennis’s side.

“DON’T, Jack!  Cut it OUT!” Ennis yelled, flinching before Jack had even done anything, and giving Jack a serious angry look.  Jack laughed at Ennis all irritated.  He dug his fingers under Ennis’s ribs and watched as Ennis collapsed, weak with laughter.  Jack kept it up, showing no mercy, going for the collarbone, the armpits and then horsebites all down the legs, paying particular attention to knees and calves.  Then he sat there a moment, drinking in the sound of Ennis del Mar’s laughter, so uninhibited and loud.  Jack wondered if he’d ever heard such a beautiful sound before in his life.

When Ennis finally calmed down and could breathe again, Jack easily flipped him over onto his lap, naked groins pressing together.  Jack spanked that ass a dozen times, not too hard but enough to get his point across.  Ennis roared and yelled and protested, wriggling around trying to escape.  Jack stopped, aroused by all the wriggling.   He rested his palm on the slightly reddened flesh.  Ennis stopped, all the fight gone out of him.  He lay still, breathing heavily.

Jack wagged a stern finger in Ennis’s face and spoke to him in a cross voice: “Now don’t ya go makin’ me punish ya like that again, ya hear me?”  He ran his palm over Ennis’s warm bottom again, grinned cheekily, and leaned in to whisper saucily in Ennis’s ear.  “Well, ’less ya really want me to…”


Spicey, this is a fabulous part 2 to Toycoon's charming tale.  So sweet and playful and beautifully written.  You beat me to it, but I may add a part 3 later.
Title: Dance of the Drums
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 18, 2007, 01:06:14 am
Dance of the Drums by Littlewing1957

Jack was sure he heard it!  It was so bizarre, but Jack was certain he heard the sound of drums!  Lureen and Bobby were away for a few days at the State Fair where Lureen entered several competitions, as did Bobby.  Jack hated to miss Bobby's 4H project, but he was running a low-grade fever and decided to stay home and take care of himself.

Jack ran to the window and saw a group of 8 or so young people dressed in costume - a style he couldn't identify - the young men beating drums of every size and description.  He noticed neighbors congregating on their front porches, swaying to the cadence of the percussion.  Lovely girls dressed in brightly decorated peasant dresses shook their hips in time to the beat, all the while moving with the group down the block.  Handsome young men danced alongside the girls as they beat their drums, smiling pleasantly.  Jack’s jaw dropped as he watched several of his neighbors join the parade, shaking, dancing, and swaying.  His neighborhood had changed over the years, and was becoming quite diverse and integrated.  It was fine with Jack.  The infusion of color was exhilarating.

One of the drummers wore a pair of white cropped pants and he was shirtless.  Jack’s eyes roamed over the boy’s perfect body.  He was tanned, had blonde hair, and shook his narrow hips as he beat his tribal drum.  “What the hell!”  Jack thought as he excited his home.  “The other neighbors are joining in, why shouldn’t I?”  Jack waited until the parade reached his house, and he fell into step.  One of the young girls noticed the handsome Jack Twist and danced alongside him.  She picked up his hand and swayed back and forth.  Jack smiled as he followed her lead.  He decided to go along, at least for a few blocks.  He never allowed himself to dance in public before with such abandon, and before he knew it, his fever broke!   Jack continued to dance, and move with the throng that was growing by the minute.  And suddenly he thought of Ennis and imagined his lover dancing alongside him.  Life was good, if only imagined, and if only for a moment.


Title: Re: Ticklish?
Post by: Toycoon on August 18, 2007, 02:00:53 am
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When Ennis finally calmed down and could breathe again, Jack easily flipped him over onto his lap, naked groins pressing together.  Jack spanked that ass a dozen times, not too hard but enough to get his point across.  Ennis roared and yelled and protested, wriggling around trying to escape.  Jack stopped, aroused by all the wriggling.  He rested his palm on the slightly reddened flesh.  Ennis stopped, all the fight gone out of him.  He lay still, breathing heavily.
True confessions, I find tickling incredibly erotic! That's where the inspiration came for this one. I love tickling my prisoner into submission. Hee hee! I guess I'm just a secret sadistic, that's all. So fu ckin' sexy Spiceylife! Woo hoo! Who's next with a tasty Part Three?
C'mon Gary, don't be chicken....
Title: Re: Peeling Potatoes
Post by: rnmina on August 18, 2007, 05:49:12 am
Jack put the knife and the half peeled potatoe aside and went over to Ennis.
„Hey, cowboy, you must be tired after a whole day with the sheep, come on, let me do this for you.“
He kneeled down in front of his friend, took the soap out of his hand and let it slip through his
palms until they were covered with thick, creamy foam.
Ennis swallowed hard, stared transfixed at Jack´s hands, his half erect member speaking volumes.
Jack leaned in to plant a soft innocent kiss on those seductively parted lips, trying to distract his love for a moment.
„Jack, ohhgoodlord that feels...aaahhh..“ moaned Ennis, surprised and exited by the sensation of Jack´s hands the creamy foam making them slide softly over his shaft and the sensitive tip of his instantly hard member.
Ennis grabbed hold of Jack´s shoulder with one hand, burying his nails in the flesh, kissed him hungrily  groaning into his mouth while he stroked firmly over Jack´s manhood that filled his jeans threatening to burst the seams.
The all day pent-up lust had made him all too  ready for this.

   Up on the high pasture  the memory of Jack´s mouth sucking him hard, the
   thought of the    unmistakable moan he evoked when his  dick hit that sweet
   spot of lust inside Jack had more than once threatened to overwhelm him
   almost making him come without even touching himself; he had been
   lying there  on the meadow, eyes closed, breathing hard, biting his lips trying
   to somehow get a grip on himself for he did not want to waste his seed but
   spare it all for Jack as the most precious gift he could offer to the person
   that meant the world to him...

Now he felt a little ashamed that he was about to come after only a few determined strokes, but when he looked at Jack´s face he saw his own rapture reflected in his man´s half closed eyes filled with pure love and drunk with lust. The sight of those pink swollen lips wet with Ennis´ own saliva were more than he could stand.
„Let go, cowboy, let go, no need to hold back, ya won´t soil yer jeans this time...“ Jack whispered raucously. Once more he let his wet, slippery palm glide over Ennis´ tip, one more stroke to the base, and he felt Ennis´ cock  pumping when he came, his hips buckling, crying out loud, shooting his hot semen all over Jack´s lap.
Ennis leaned his forehead against his lover´s, both breathing fiercely, and after a glance at Jack´s jeans he mumbled shamefully: „I´ll wash them out for ya, sorry bud, couldn´t control myself...“
„Don´t worry, Ennis“, Jack answered with a broad grin, „perhaps you were too busy to notice, but I soiled them all by myself...!“
I need to tell all the authors on this thread how I've enjoyed reading your work. I am on page 50,,, i think...with many more pages to go.
 TY again,
mina
Title: Re: Ticklish?
Post by: Toycoon on August 18, 2007, 10:15:55 am
Toycoon, I laughed and laughed my way through this story!  It tickled MY funny bone, especially this :

Knocking heads together.  My specialty!  I am kinda awkward.  I always get angry and blame the other person, but it's usually my fault.  Lol.

Howdy Spiceylife- I love your silly story! I'm extremely ticklish all over so I guess that's what inspired the story. Secretly, I love being tickled to exhaustion; I enjoy laughing so, the sex after a hardy laugh is always great!

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Your writing is so good here.  This is exactly how I picture Jack and Ennis to be together.  Your Ennis is adorable.  Perfect story, Toycoon.  I really love this.  Can I try for part two?  Hope I can do it justice, and I really hope Dagi might write a part three.

Title: Re: Ticklish?
Post by: Toycoon on August 18, 2007, 10:21:43 am
Goodness, I'm stirred up into a froth here.  This is more foreplay than we've had in two years.   ;D  Very playful, Spicey.  Great part 2 
Gary

Spiceylife, now ya see what ya done? You've positively whipped our poor Garycottle into a frenzy!
You keep it up and yer the one that's gonna get the spankin', you bad girl! Yeehaww!
Title: Re: Dance of the Drums
Post by: Toycoon on August 18, 2007, 10:25:29 am
Dance of the Drums by Littlewing1957

Jack was sure he heard it!  It was so bizarre, but Jack was certain he heard the sound of drums!  Lureen and Bobby were away for a few days at the State Fair where Lureen entered several competitions, as did Bobby.  Jack hated to miss Bobby's 4H project, but he was running a low-grade fever and decided to stay home and take care of himself.

Jack ran to the window and saw a group of 8 or so young people dressed in costume - a style he couldn't identify - the young men beating drums of every size and description.  He noticed neighbors congregating on their front porches, swaying to the cadence of the percussion.  Lovely girls dressed in brightly decorated peasant dresses shook their hips in time to the beat, all the while moving with the group down the block.  Handsome young men danced alongside the girls as they beat their drums, smiling pleasantly.  Jack’s jaw dropped as he watched several of his neighbors join the parade, shaking, dancing, and swaying.  His neighborhood had changed over the years, and was becoming quite diverse and integrated.  It was fine with Jack.  The infusion of color was exhilarating.

One of the drummers wore a pair of white cropped pants and he was shirtless.  Jack’s eyes roamed over the boy’s perfect body.  He was tanned, had blonde hair, and shook his narrow hips as he beat his tribal drum.  “What the hell!”  Jack thought as he excited his home.  “The other neighbors are joining in, why shouldn’t I?”  Jack waited until the parade reached his house, and he fell into step.  One of the young girls noticed the handsome Jack Twist and danced alongside him.  She picked up his hand and swayed back and forth.  Jack smiled as he followed her lead.  He decided to go along, at least for a few blocks.  He never allowed himself to dance in public before with such abandon, and before he knew it, his fever broke!   Jack continued to dance, and move with the throng that was growing by the minute.  And suddenly he thought of Ennis and imagined his lover dancing alongside him.  Life was good, if only imagined, and if only for a moment.

Jack Twist's very first Pride Parade! Terrific Littlewing! I don't know how you do it; how do you come up with so many great tales?
Title: Something Precious
Post by: moremojo on August 18, 2007, 01:20:13 pm
Something Precious by moremojo

"Nineteen...turn twenty come September," answered Ennis to Jack's query about his exact age, a bit puzzled as to why he would even want to know, and finding himself namelessly drawn to the kind, sympathetic spirit he discerned in his new friend's eyes, whereupon Ennis cast his eyes down to the breakfast fire, stirring the embers aimlessly with a stick.

Jack sensed a discomfort in his work companion, and felt a twinge of regret to think he might have been the cause of it; Jack had seen a fair amount of life in his brief years, and had assumed that someone like Ennis, coming from such a similar background, had done the same...clearly this summer on the mountain would prove different from last year, when Jack had had no problem coaxing Dave, his assigned mate, into some on-the-side fun when Aguirre wasn't around.

"You're a bit older'n me," Jack stated, taking a healthy gulp from his coffee mug, continuing with "I turn twenty in October..the thirty-first, to be exact...Halloween!", whereupon he flashed a buck-toothed grin to Ennis to lighten the mood; there was something about Ennis, something different from all the other guys Jack had known and sometimes played with, that inspired a deep tenderness in his heart that was almost unbearable in its sweetness...this Del Mar fellow deserved something more than a rough and passing tumble, the intimation of which Jack felt all the more keenly as he gingerly patted Ennis's back, the first time he had dared to do so, as he prepared to set off for the sheep.
Title: Re: Dance of the Drums
Post by: Dagi on August 18, 2007, 01:56:25 pm
Dance of the Drums by Littlewing1957

Jack was sure he heard it!  It was so bizarre, but Jack was certain he heard the sound of drums!  Lureen and Bobby were away for a few days at the State Fair where Lureen entered several competitions, as did Bobby.  Jack hated to miss Bobby's 4H project, but he was running a low-grade fever and decided to stay home and take care of himself.

Jack ran to the window and saw a group of 8 or so young people dressed in costume - a style he couldn't identify - the young men beating drums of every size and description.  He noticed neighbors congregating on their front porches, swaying to the cadence of the percussion.  Lovely girls dressed in brightly decorated peasant dresses shook their hips in time to the beat, all the while moving with the group down the block.  Handsome young men danced alongside the girls as they beat their drums, smiling pleasantly.  Jack’s jaw dropped as he watched several of his neighbors join the parade, shaking, dancing, and swaying.  His neighborhood had changed over the years, and was becoming quite diverse and integrated.  It was fine with Jack.  The infusion of color was exhilarating.

One of the drummers wore a pair of white cropped pants and he was shirtless.  Jack’s eyes roamed over the boy’s perfect body.  He was tanned, had blonde hair, and shook his narrow hips as he beat his tribal drum.  “What the hell!”  Jack thought as he excited his home.  “The other neighbors are joining in, why shouldn’t I?”  Jack waited until the parade reached his house, and he fell into step.  One of the young girls noticed the handsome Jack Twist and danced alongside him.  She picked up his hand and swayed back and forth.  Jack smiled as he followed her lead.  He decided to go along, at least for a few blocks.  He never allowed himself to dance in public before with such abandon, and before he knew it, his fever broke!   Jack continued to dance, and move with the throng that was growing by the minute.  And suddenly he thought of Ennis and imagined his lover dancing alongside him.  Life was good, if only imagined, and if only for a moment.




Marie, I have tears in my eyes - Life was good, if only imagined, and if only for a moment. This line is so beautiful, and so sad at the same time...

Dagi
Title: Re: Ticklish?
Post by: Dagi on August 18, 2007, 01:59:56 pm
Ticklish? - Part Two by spiceylife

........................Jack spanked that ass a dozen times, not too hard but enough to get his point across.  Ennis roared and yelled and protested, wriggling around trying to escape.  Jack stopped, aroused by all the wriggling.   He rested his palm on the slightly reddened flesh.  Ennis stopped, all the fight gone out of him.  He lay still, breathing heavily.

Jack wagged a stern finger in Ennis’s face and spoke to him in a cross voice: “Now don’t ya go makin’ me punish ya like that again, ya hear me?”  He ran his palm over Ennis’s warm bottom again, grinned cheekily, and leaned in to whisper saucily in Ennis’s ear.  “Well, ’less ya really want me to…”


*thud*  Oh my good Lord.............*deep breath*.......... So, so erotic................ *swallow hard*

Dagi
Title: Re: Ticklish?
Post by: Dagi on August 18, 2007, 02:03:33 pm
  Hope I can do it justice, and I really hope Dagi might write a part three.

If nobody minds if I write Porn Without Plot  :laugh:, (because that´s all I can think of at the moment  ::)), and if you are patient enough to wait a few days then I will try to contribute...

Dagi
Title: Re: Peeling Potatoes
Post by: Dagi on August 18, 2007, 02:05:56 pm
I need to tell all the authors on this thread how I've enjoyed reading your work. I am on page 50,,, i think...with many more pages to go.
 TY again,
mina

So nice to hear that you are enjoying our stories! Thanks so much for letting us know! And feel free to write us something steamy  ;D.

Dagi
Title: Re: Dance of the Drums
Post by: Dagi on August 18, 2007, 02:11:10 pm
  And who is the tanned blond kid with the narrow hips?  MMM  Are you trying to drive me over the edge?   :laugh:

Gary

 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:   ;)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 18, 2007, 02:17:02 pm
You crack me up, Dagi!  This is hilarious.  I identify with poor Ennis here - ? ? ?  My daughter tries to teach me stuff and I always have this - ? ? ? - hanging over my head! 

Daughter  :  Remember I taught you this already, mom?  Just a few days ago...

Mother  :  ? ? ?

I just laughed my ass off the whole way through this one.  This line really sounds like Jack with his Texan accent :

I thought this was you, Dagi, what with the swearing and all... ;D  Lol.  I swear like a sailor sometimes!  Is it Gary?

 :laugh:  I wasn´t sure if this was going to be funny for others too, I actually wrote it for Gary  ;). Glad you enjoyed reading it! And I admit: I´m swearing a lot. A LOT. My four year old son already says fuck and shit... ::)

Dagi
Title: Re: Dance of the Drums
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 18, 2007, 02:22:45 pm
I'm just stunned by all your superb stories littlewing .... this one had me intrigued from the first sentence.  I'd love to read something much longer from you, a novel perhaps ... if you really had time to spread your wings, Lord knows what wonderful places you would take us ... brilliant!

 Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)
 

SusieBaby, this is the nicest thing I've ever heard.  Thank you so much!
Title: Re: Holiday Snaps
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 18, 2007, 02:24:19 pm
Susie, thank you so much for showing us your beautiful holiday photos.  Are you the photographer?  The shots are wonderful.  Of all your photos, as much as I love Cornwall, this one of your three children is my most favorite.  What a great family snap!  You should put this one on the wall.  Your children are just gorgeous!  I can see why you're such a proud mom, Susie!  Lovely.  Oh, and Graham and Charlie are very cute and handsome, too!  Your hubby does look a bit like that guy from Dallas, you know...

Your photos of Cornwall brought back so many memories!  I've been to Cornwall, Penzance, St Ives and Land's End.  It's countryside like I've never seen before.  I love it.  And the houses and villages are so picturesque - quite stunning.  Your country fascinates me, Susie.  Maybe it's my convict ancestry!  From there, we went to Stonehenge and Bath and many other stone circles and castle ruins.  You're so lucky to be steeped in that much ancient history, SusieBaby - I wish I'd been an archaeologist!

Again, thank you for sharing your terrific photos.  (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/thsmiley.gif)

Spicey, you're so lucky!  Right now I can only see these places in my dreams!
Title: Re: Dance of the Drums
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 18, 2007, 02:26:26 pm
Jack Twist's very first Pride Parade! Terrific Littlewing! I don't know how you do it; how do you come up with so many great tales?

I take them from real life.  Everything I see inspires me, it seems.
Title: Re: Dance of the Drums
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 18, 2007, 02:27:30 pm
Beautiful, littlewing.  And you're so right, Jack had such a love for life, and he wanted to celebrate it.  It's so great that he was allowed to do that for a few minutes in his fevered dream.  And who is the tanned blond kid with the narrow hips?  MMM  Are you trying to drive me over the edge?   :laugh:

Gary

 :laugh:  Thanks, Gary!  I'm not sure who the young blond guy is, but I think he might reappear..
Title: Re: Something Precious
Post by: Dagi on August 18, 2007, 03:11:03 pm
Something Precious by moremojo

............... there was something about Ennis, something different from all the other guys Jack had known and sometimes played with, that inspired a deep tenderness in his heart that was almost unbearable in its sweetness...

Scott, you write so beautifully! What you wrote was exactly what one could see in Jack´s eyes.....a deep tenderness that was almost unbearable in its sweetness... Thank you for this tender moment!

Dagi
Title: Re: Lonnie: Summer of '62
Post by: Dagi on August 18, 2007, 04:02:52 pm
Lonnie: Summer of ‘62

  He went directly to the boy, fell in front of him, and took the boy’s turgid member into his mouth.


I´m starting to think you are doing that on purpose  :laugh:.

You give us a good explanation for Jack´s acting all cool the following summer when it was time for him and Ennis to part.

Have I mentioned lately that I love your writing?  ::)

 :-* Dagi
Title: Re: Dance of the Drums
Post by: Dagi on August 18, 2007, 04:50:30 pm
... if you really had time to spread your wings, Lord knows what wonderful places you would take us ... brilliant!

 Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)
 

Susie, you are a poet!

Dagi
Title: Re: Holiday Snaps
Post by: David In Indy on August 18, 2007, 06:04:25 pm
:laugh: :laugh: :laugh: ... you crack me up Gary .. how d'you get to be so clever??

Most of the Americans they met were lovely, if a little full-on for them.  They did have another unfortunate incident.  They were standing at a bus stop in Las Vegas and someone drove by and threw an egg at the shelter.  Mum and Julia were really shocked and couldn't understand why someone would do that ... then this woman turned to them and said "Think yourselves lucky it wasn't a bullet!"

Susie    (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Hi Susie! It's just like Gary said; most Americans LOVE the British! The next time your sister and your Mom travel to the US, tell them to visit Indiana. We all love British people here!  :D

I'm so sorry they had this negative experience in our country. It makes me sad. I hope they will give us another chance.  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: MaineWriter on August 18, 2007, 06:13:08 pm
Leslie the moderator, dropping in to say hello...

I don't know if you guys realize it, but this thread has become the 10th most posted on thread here at Bettermost. You knocked off the "Let's get real here: NC17 rated fun" which has been in the number 10 place for ages...and has been dormant for ages. You came along and passed that thread in no time at all! You even passed the drabblefest!

Good work, fanfic game players!

And now, your mission, is to move up the ladder....LOL

L
Title: Re: Ticklish?
Post by: Dagi on August 18, 2007, 06:14:44 pm
Porn without Plot?  ... sounds perfect Dagi, I can't wait!

Susie    (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



Ticklish?  Part 3 by Dagi

Ennis stopped breathing and closed his eyes for a moment, then turned around, avoiding looking Jack in the eye, and swung one leg over Jack´s shoulder with his warm, red butt still on Jack´s thighs.

Jack got all serious as he saw Ennis´s face, eyes closed again, lips twitched, until they opened a little and a low moan escaped from them.....he spit in his hand and rubbed softly over Ennis´s hole, causing his lover to moan a little louder, but with still clenched teeth.

“Ennis....Ennis!...........Relax, sweetheart, relax your jaw....” He reached over and stroked softly over Ennis´s chin. “Yeah, friend, that´s better....let me hear you.......s´that good?” He stroked some more over the hole, Ennis´s gasped, then closed his mouth again, “Mmmmmm....”

“Hey, do I have to tickle you again? Ennis, I want ta hear you, open your mouth....” He stretched his legs and placed both hands under his friend's butt, lifting him up until the tip of his own hard cock  touched his friend's wet, sensitive spot, and he didn´t hesitate a second, couldn´t hold back, but entered his lover  until his whole length had vanished inside his man, both of them crying out loud.

Ennis shook a little, then began to rock in small movements, all the while whimpering like a puppy calling for its mommy. Jack looked down at his man in rapture, took in all the tiny details of this beloved face, the now wide open dark brown eyes, the blond curls, the always clenched lips, now finally parted and soft and wet.....he looked further down, the strong chest with those tiny nipples, the flat stomach... and these incredibly beautiful, rock-hard eight inches rising just in front of him, a little drop of precum dripping down the shaft.....mmmm, if he could just....he bent down a little further, lifted  Ennis up a little higher until he managed to lick over the swollen tip.

“Geez, Jack, what the fuck....ooaaaaaahhhhh!” Ennis groanedd, encouraging Jack to go on alternately lifting Ennis up sucking on the head and pushing him down shoving his own cock all the way up into his man, until Ennis´s cries became so loud Jack wasn´t sure anymore if he was crying with lust or with pain, but he couldn´t stop himself, and the moment he felt his lover's warm, delicious semen fill his mouth he himself came hard, shooting his load deep inside Ennis's guts.

Jack licked his lips, smiled mischievously and said “ I think I punished you for good, ....huh?”
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on August 18, 2007, 06:20:07 pm
Leslie the moderator, dropping in to say hello...

I don't know if you guys realize it, but this thread has become the 10th most posted on thread here at Bettermost. You knocked off the "Let's get real here: NC17 rated fun" which has been in the number 10 place for ages...and has been dormant for ages. You came along and passed that thread in no time at all! You even passed the drabblefest!

Good work, fanfic game players!

And now, your mission, is to move up the ladder....LOL

L

(http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x221/Shasta542/CBW.jpg)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 18, 2007, 06:29:33 pm
Leslie the moderator, dropping in to say hello...

I don't know if you guys realize it, but this thread has become the 10th most posted on thread here at Bettermost. You knocked off the "Let's get real here: NC17 rated fun" which has been in the number 10 place for ages...and has been dormant for ages. You came along and passed that thread in no time at all! You even passed the drabblefest!

Good work, fanfic game players!

And now, your mission, is to move up the ladder....LOL

L

Hey Leslie, thanks so much for letting us know.....that is great news!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on August 18, 2007, 07:30:51 pm
Leslie the moderator, dropping in to say hello...

I don't know if you guys realize it, but this thread has become the 10th most posted on thread here at Bettermost. You knocked off the "Let's get real here: NC17 rated fun" which has been in the number 10 place for ages...and has been dormant for ages. You came along and passed that thread in no time at all! You even passed the drabblefest!

Good work, fanfic game players!

And now, your mission, is to move up the ladder....LOL

L

Hey there Miss Leslie,
10th Most Posted Thread? Sheee-it! What an honor! Ya know we had ten chapters (twenty pages each volume) of the Jack with Ennis FanFic game goin' on at IMDb before we got shut down by the morality police. What can I say but we are an imaginative and horny, tightly knit bunch when it comes to Jack with Ennis. Thank you for hosting us and providing us with a cozy home. I'd like to salute everyone who has contributed so heartily and faithfully over the years (yes, it's been more than a year since we started the game).
Title: Re: Ticklish?
Post by: Toycoon on August 18, 2007, 07:39:26 pm
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Jack got all serious as he saw Ennis´s face, eyes closed again, lips twitched, until they opened a little and a low moan escaped from them.....he spit in his hand and rubbed softly over Ennis´s hole, causing his lover to moan a little louder, but with still clenched teeth.

Excellent Dagi! This story certainly did have a happy ending. Boy, that Jack is always full of exciting surprises. I reckon Ennis was full of Jack this time! Now I see what you meant about "all action, no plot'. Who needs a friggin' plot when yer gettin' plugged and slugged!
Title: Re: Holiday Snaps
Post by: David In Indy on August 18, 2007, 08:40:46 pm
Hey David sweetheart, (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_4_122v.gif)

So nice to see you here!  .... I'm still waiting on that steamy fanfic from you!  Well my mum and sister are already saving for their next trip to the USA!!  My friend was in Indianapolis all last summer and had a wonderful time .... you didn't happen to bump into Gary and Sandra Cook and their little girls did you??

Susie   (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



Hey Susie! Nope, I sure don't remember meeting anyone named Gary and Sandra last year. I wish I had though. I'm glad they had a good time here. Indianapolis isn't the most exciting place to visit, but most of us are very friendly and like I said, we love people from England! And Scotland.... and Wales... and Northern Ireland! We LOVE British people! Oh, and my boyfriend is from England. He likes it here too. Maybe someday you can come over and visit us Susie!  :D

I loved your pictures you posted of your recent vacation. You know your way around a camera Susie. You did a brilliant job at photographing all those places down there! I really liked the pictures of Tintangel.  I hope I spelled that correctly! :D
Title: Re: Something Precious
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 18, 2007, 09:17:18 pm
Something Precious by moremojo

"Nineteen...turn twenty come September," answered Ennis to Jack's query about his exact age, a bit puzzled as to why he would even want to know, and finding himself namelessly drawn to the kind, sympathetic spirit he discerned in his new friend's eyes, whereupon Ennis cast his eyes down to the breakfast fire, stirring the embers aimlessly with a stick.

Jack sensed a discomfort in his work companion, and felt a twinge of regret to think he might have been the cause of it; Jack had seen a fair amount of life in his brief years, and had assumed that someone like Ennis, coming from such a similar background, had done the same...clearly this summer on the mountain would prove different from last year, when Jack had had no problem coaxing Dave, his assigned mate, into some on-the-side fun when Aguirre wasn't around.

"You're a bit older'n me," Jack stated, taking a healthy gulp from his coffee mug, continuing with "I turn twenty in October..the thirty-first, to be exact...Halloween!", whereupon he flashed a buck-toothed grin to Ennis to lighten the mood; there was something about Ennis, something different from all the other guys Jack had known and sometimes played with, that inspired a deep tenderness in his heart that was almost unbearable in its sweetness...this Del Mar fellow deserved something more than a rough and passing tumble, the intimation of which Jack felt all the more keenly as he gingerly patted Ennis's back, the first time he had dared to do so, as he prepared to set off for the sheep.

Moremojo, this is very lovely!  I feel as though I'm right there with the boys..it is as though this exchange actually took place.  You have done a few things here: 1) establish that Ennis is the older 2) given us the boy's birthdates 3) told us that Jack was experienced, and had fun with a co-worker the previous summer 4) gave an explanation of why Jack fell in love with Ennis.  I love how you fill in the gaps for us, mormojo, and I especially like how you do it.  Extraordinary!
Title: Re: Lonnie: Summer of '62
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 18, 2007, 09:22:26 pm
Lonnie: Summer of ‘62

Jack caught himself watching Lonnie on the sly every chance he got.  There was something about the kid that pulled on him.  Lonnie was a tall, lanky blond who moved with a kind of grace that was uncommon for a boy his age.  When Lonnie first came to Brokeback he was sullen and withdrawn, but after a while he finally spoke haltingly of inheriting half of his granddad’s cattle ranch down in Texas, but leaving with just the clothes on his back because he couldn’t get along with his uncle.  Jack told jokes, sang songs, and played his harmonica in an attempt to lighten the boy’s disposition.  It worked, within a couple of weeks Lonnie turned coltish and started jumping him, and wrestling him to the ground at the slightest provocation.  Jack more often than not allowed himself to be pinned just so he could feel those long limbs wrapped around his body.

One afternoon toward the end of summer Jack came back to camp early, leaving the sheep to tend themselves.  He found a can of Better Most beans on the fire, but his campmate was nowhere in sight.  Jack looked around for a good half hour before he spotted the boy up in the woods leaning against a tree.  From a hundred feet Jack could tell from the movement of the kid’s arm that he was taking care of a sudden urge that required a little extra privacy.  Rather than letting Lonnie finish his business in peace, Jack followed through on a powerful impulse.  He went directly to the boy, fell in front of him, and took the boy’s turgid member into his mouth.  

When the deed was done he got to his feet and ran like the wind itself, as Lonnie called to him in a stunned voice.  “Jack?  Where you going, Jack?”  

When a storm came up a couple of hours later Jack reluctantly returned to camp.  He’d have to face Lonnie sooner or later anyway, so there was no use in staying out in the rain all night.  Jack found Lonnie had already settled into the tent.  When he pulled back the flap he saw the lanky kid laying on his bedroll wearing his hat, his boots, and not much else.  

With the squall whirling around him, and the heavens above cracking like the 4th of July, he asked, “Where’s your duds?”

“They got wet.  Now get in here, cowboy, ‘cause it’s my turn at the pump.”

Following the storm, time up on Brokeback went by pretty fast as the boys wrestled and horsed around more than they worked.  They never talked about how their season together would soon come to an end, but both knew that they could get the call to bring the sheep in any day.  Jack didn’t allow himself to think about it, so it came as a blow when he returned to camp late one afternoon for dinner to find Lonnie breaking down the tent.  He pouted, but Lonnie merely grinned like the good-natured kid that he was.  Lonnie acted like he and Jack hadn’t been doing anything unusual, and he pretended that their parting wasn’t particularly sad.  Jack tried his best to follow his friend’s lead.  He thought this must be how boys who played together were supposed to handle themselves.  

After getting chewed out by Aguirre for the sheep’s diminished numbers, they collected their pay.  The job was over.  Jack asked Lonnie what he was going to do now.  The kid said something about returning to Texas to claim his birthright as he climbed up into the back of a fellow ranch hand’s pickup.  Jack stood there and watched as the truck pulled away.

Wow Gary, this is a great read!  Very descriptive, and very well written, as always!  I wonder what happened to Lonnie?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: BBM-Cat on August 18, 2007, 10:57:19 pm
SO many great stories over the last few days - so little time! Got a lot to catch up on!
Title: Re: Ticklish?
Post by: Dagi on August 19, 2007, 12:00:43 am
OMG!  That Ennis is one lucky boy!  Getting tucked and sucked at the same time.  Wow!  Lucky, lucky boy. 

This is sure a sexy, lustful story, Dagi.  MMM  Thanks.  You do know how to kick off a Saturday night.   ;D

Gary

Gary, you are the one who is to blamed for this image running through my head since.....June?

Thank you for your nice words, I´m glad you enjoyed it!

Dagi
Title: Re: Ticklish?
Post by: Dagi on August 19, 2007, 12:06:32 am
Excellent Dagi! This story certainly did have a happy ending. Boy, that Jack is always full of exciting surprises. I reckon Ennis was full of Jack this time! Now I see what you meant about "all action, no plot'. Who needs a friggin' plot when yer gettin' plugged and slugged!


Thank you, Toycoon! I reckon Jack was quite full of Ennis, too   ;D !  Gettin´ plugged and slugged  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 19, 2007, 12:10:34 am
Leslie the moderator, dropping in to say hello...

I don't know if you guys realize it, but this thread has become the 10th most posted on thread here at Bettermost. You knocked off the "Let's get real here: NC17 rated fun" which has been in the number 10 place for ages...and has been dormant for ages. You came along and passed that thread in no time at all! You even passed the drabblefest!

Good work, fanfic game players!

And now, your mission, is to move up the ladder....LOL

L


it´s just because
 


SUSIE IS BACK!!


we love you, you posting devil!!
Title: Re: Ticklish?
Post by: Dagi on August 19, 2007, 12:14:13 am

**gasp!**  Sexy sexy story Dagi!  Just thinking about Ennis, open mouthed and moaning is enough to send me over the edge!! Now if you'll all excuse me, I need to lie down in a dark room for a moment!



Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



 :laugh:   and what the hell are you going to do there?  ;D

Thank you, Susie sweetheart!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 19, 2007, 12:17:41 am
SO many great stories over the last few days - so little time! Got a lot to catch up on!

Did you know there is an Jack with Ennis archive where you can read the stories one after the other? But this way you´ll miss such lovely things as Susie´s Vac pics...

Dagi
Title: Re: Holiday Snaps
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 19, 2007, 01:55:57 am
Yeah, we Americans are so happy that people from around the world go to Las Vegas and think that's what we're all about.   :-\  The hookers will screw you, the casinos will take all your money, and when you try to slink out of town penniless and with a social disease, the gangsters will blow your head off.  Welcome to good ol' U.S. of A.   ::)

Gary 

A fitting description, Gary.  You don't exaggerate!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 19, 2007, 01:58:24 am
Leslie the moderator, dropping in to say hello...

I don't know if you guys realize it, but this thread has become the 10th most posted on thread here at Bettermost. You knocked off the "Let's get real here: NC17 rated fun" which has been in the number 10 place for ages...and has been dormant for ages. You came along and passed that thread in no time at all! You even passed the drabblefest!

Good work, fanfic game players!

And now, your mission, is to move up the ladder....LOL

L

Wow, thanks for the info, Leslie!  I'm having a lot of fun and I plan to step things up!  We passed the drabblefest? 
Title: Re: Ticklish?
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 19, 2007, 02:03:10 am

Ticklish?  Part 3 by Dagi

Ennis stopped breathing and closed his eyes for a moment, then turned around, avoiding looking Jack in the eye, and swung one leg over Jack´s shoulder with his warm, red butt still on Jack´s thighs.

Jack got all serious as he saw Ennis´s face, eyes closed again, lips twitched, until they opened a little and a low moan escaped from them.....he spit in his hand and rubbed softly over Ennis´s hole, causing his lover to moan a little louder, but with still clenched teeth.

“Ennis....Ennis!...........Relax, sweetheart, relax your jaw....” He reached over and stroked softly over Ennis´s chin. “Yeah, friend, that´s better....let me hear you.......s´that good?” He stroked some more over the hole, Ennis´s gasped, then closed his mouth again, “Mmmmmm....”

“Hey, do I have to tickle you again? Ennis, I want ta hear you, open your mouth....” He stretched his legs and placed both hands under his friend's butt, lifting him up until the tip of his own hard cock  touched his friend's wet, sensitive spot, and he didn´t hesitate a second, couldn´t hold back, but entered his lover  until his whole length had vanished inside his man, both of them crying out loud.

Ennis shook a little, then began to rock in small movements, all the while whimpering like a puppy calling for its mommy. Jack looked down at his man in rapture, took in all the tiny details of this beloved face, the now wide open dark brown eyes, the blond curls, the always clenched lips, now finally parted and soft and wet.....he looked further down, the strong chest with those tiny nipples, the flat stomach... and these incredibly beautiful, rock-hard eight inches rising just in front of him, a little drop of precum dripping down the shaft.....mmmm, if he could just....he bent down a little further, lifted  Ennis up a little higher until he managed to lick over the swollen tip.

“Geez, Jack, what the fuck....ooaaaaaahhhhh!” Ennis groanedd, encouraging Jack to go on alternately lifting Ennis up sucking on the head and pushing him down shoving his own cock all the way up into his man, until Ennis´s cries became so loud Jack wasn´t sure anymore if he was crying with lust or with pain, but he couldn´t stop himself, and the moment he felt his lover's warm, delicious semen fill his mouth he himself came hard, shooting his load deep inside Ennis's guts.

Jack licked his lips, smiled mischievously and said “ I think I punished you for good, ....huh?”

Brilliant, Dagi, brilliant!  This very descriptive tale is hot..hotter than July!  Very moving, as well.  A very fitting Part 3, Dagi.  Please wite a Part 4 for us?  I can't wait to see what happens next!
Title: Re: Lonnie: Summer of '62
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 19, 2007, 02:07:30 am
Hi there Littlewing.  Not sure what happened to Lonnie.  I'd like to think that he went back to Texas and took over his Granddad's ranch, and maybe fell in love with a hot ranch hand.   ;D

But you can find out what happened to Lonnie before by watching HUD.  It really is an amazing film.  Check it out sometime if you haven't already.

Gary

I don't know why I haven't seen HUD yet.  I'll have to geo check it out!  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: BBM-Cat on August 19, 2007, 07:43:42 am
Did you know there is an Jack with Ennis archive where you can read the stories one after the other? But this way you´ll miss such lovely things as Susie´s Vac pics...

Dagi

Yes, thank you - I did recently find the archive. You're right, I would have missed Susie's lovely vacation pics! I enjoyed Ticklish part 3 as I did parts 1 and 2 - what a group effort!
Title: Simple Dreams: Part 2
Post by: BBM-Cat on August 19, 2007, 08:09:24 am
Simple Dreams by Toycoon  http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,10312.2520.html

Simple Dreams: Part 2  BBM-Cat

Jack shook off the sting of his father’s words, that old intrusive memory, and the despair that had owned him for so long. Ever accused by his old man of having so many dreams that never came to pass, Jack felt a sense of triumph in achieving what his father never thought he could, and he was glad that he would not be around to disparage it.

“Where’d ya go, Bud?” Ennis looked searchingly at Jack whose momentary shudder had released their embrace; and, with a pause and silent understanding, Ennis pulled his cowboy close, gently guiding Jack’s head back to the crook of his shoulder, caressing his hair, and feeling his body relax as well as his now more urgent and uncontrolled sobs. “Shhh,..…s’alright….Jack,.....'”, Ennis whispered, "....s’alright.....lil' darlin'....", his term of endearment barely audible, he swallowed hard trying to restrain his own emotions as thoughts of the silent, lifetime commitment he had made to Jack in his heart, surged. Jack all the while, cradled by Ennis, was overwhelmed with the realization that those comforting, strong arms were really real; and, that his vision for a sweet life together was really happening, right now.

They stood like that for awhile, admiring the modest farm beneath the archway, and all of their labors, before Ennis softly interjected, “ya better stop all that sobbin’, Jack – ‘nless ya wanna run the livestock off ag’in!”. Jack, red-eyed, laughed through his tears, and playfully nudged Ennis, before their mouths came together for a long, passionate kiss, the first of many at Brokeback Ranch, E Bar J. And, though his simple dream had taken years of perseverance, heartache, and sacrifice to achieve; standing beside his Ennis Del Mar, Jack now truly believed with all his heart that it had never been too much to ask for.

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on August 19, 2007, 11:53:55 am
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They stood like that for awhile, admiring the modest farm beneath the archway, and all of their labors, before Ennis softly interjected, “ya better stop all that sobbin’, Jack – ‘nless ya wanna run the livestock off ag’in!”. Jack, red-eyed, laughed through his tears, and playfully nudged Ennis, before their mouths came together for a long, passionate kiss, the first of many at Brokeback Ranch, E Bar J. And, though his simple dream had taken years of perseverance, heartache, and sacrifice to achieve; standing beside his Ennis Del Mar, Jack now truly believed with all his heart that it had never been too much to ask for.

What a wonderfully, happy ending BBM-cat! It's kinda "Gone With the Wind"-like. You've captured the details of the fellas' personalities perfectly. Your story seems so real, you can feel it. You're gonna fit in real well around here, I can tell!
Title: Re: Tickling Daniel
Post by: Toycoon on August 19, 2007, 12:07:38 pm
Cute and sweet, Garycottle. A terrific slice of Brokeback AU!

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But Daniel, yeah that was his name, was small and thin, and his body was so smooth Ennis imagined that if he took down those sissy shorts he’d find that there wasn’t any hair on his balls.  This kid was like some fragile baby bird that had fallen out of its nest, and he instantly understood why Tyler was sweet on him.

Hmmmm... sounds like Tyler and you have the same taste in boys. Tastes like chicken.

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: BBM-Cat on August 19, 2007, 01:17:04 pm
Thank you ALL for your kind comments...unlike BBM, where we had no control in giving the boys a 'sweet life' together, we sure can do it here! I've enjoyed reading about the many, many intimacies shared by Jack and Ennis - you all are wonderfully creative, and these stories really do help to fill in the gaps.

And, Toycoon, 'I figured you'd be sore 'bout that happy endin'  ;D  Just kidding. Thank you for allowing me to expand on your story, and certainly, should you feel so inspired (or anyone for that matter), I believe there is plenty of room for continuation....
Title: Re: Tickling Daniel
Post by: BBM-Cat on August 19, 2007, 01:23:57 pm
Tickling Daniel by garycottle
“That’s good enough for me,” he said.  And then he opened the door to let Tyler back inside.  “And you don’t have to call me sir, or mister.  I’m just a sixty-three-year-old ranch hand who never had nothin’ and never will.”

Beautiful, Garycottle - Ennis' self-awareness and acceptance has been building over the past 20 years when we last glimpsed him with Alma Jr. at his trailer.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: BBM-Cat on August 19, 2007, 01:28:05 pm
What a wonderfully, happy ending BBM-cat! It's kinda "Gone With the Wind"-like. You've captured the details of the fellas' personalities perfectly. Your story seems so real, you can feel it. You're gonna fit in real well around here, I can tell!

OMgosh - you're right! It does have that flavor...you're clever! Thanks again for your welcome  ;)
Title: Re: Tickling Daniel
Post by: BBM-Cat on August 19, 2007, 01:57:04 pm
Thank you so much, BBM-Cat.  You're so nice.  And it's interesting that you bring up Ennis's meeting with Alma Jr. at the end of the film because I was alluding to that in my story.  Ennis wanted to know if this guy Alma was marrying loved her.  He had finally come to realize that was important.  You need to be with the one you love.  So, twenty some years later, he wants to make sure that Daniel and Tyler love each other.  He doesn't want them to make the same mistakes he did.

Gary

You really conveyed that message so clearly and beautifully in your story! And, we also understand that Ennis has not changed his perception of himself - that he is still nothing and nowhere...sad, yet through your story, we also feel proud that he now realizes what is most important in life.

Something kind of funny, when I read this line in your story, "Daniel hurriedly sat up and made a move toward his clothes that were in a puddle there beside Ennis’s feet...", my eyes skipped the word 'clothes', ahead to 'puddle', and I thought, that tickling sure got out of hand!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: BBM-Cat on August 19, 2007, 02:00:14 pm
Oh BBM Cat ... I don't know what to say! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_9_9.gif) It's everything I crave for them and I truly wish this had happened.  Beautiful story honey ... just beautiful!
Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Thanks Susie - you're a dear! Hope it brought a little happiness to everyone today.
Title: Re: Ticklish?
Post by: Dagi on August 19, 2007, 02:43:53 pm
Brilliant, Dagi, brilliant!  This very descriptive tale is hot..hotter than July!  Very moving, as well.  A very fitting Part 3, Dagi.  Please wite a Part 4 for us?  I can't wait to see what happens next!

Thank you so much, Marie! But please, can somewone else take over from here? I´d love to read a part 4 too, but I´m just too tired still from all the work....

Dagi
Title: Re: Simple Dreams: Part 2
Post by: Dagi on August 19, 2007, 02:50:00 pm
Simple Dreams by Toycoon  http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,10312.2520.html

Simple Dreams: Part 2  BBM-Cat

Jack shook off the sting of his father’s words, that old intrusive memory, and the despair that had owned him for so long. Ever accused by his old man of having so many dreams that never came to pass, Jack felt a sense of triumph in achieving what his father never thought he could, and he was glad that he would not be around to disparage it.

“Where’d ya go, Bud?” Ennis looked searchingly at Jack whose momentary shudder had released their embrace; and, with a pause and silent understanding, Ennis pulled his cowboy close, gently guiding Jack’s head back to the crook of his shoulder, caressing his hair, and feeling his body relax as well as his now more urgent and uncontrolled sobs. “Shhh,..…s’alright….Jack,.....'”, Ennis whispered, "....s’alright.....lil' darlin'....", his term of endearment barely audible, he swallowed hard trying to restrain his own emotions as thoughts of the silent, lifetime commitment he had made to Jack in his heart, surged. Jack all the while, cradled by Ennis, was overwhelmed with the realization that those comforting, strong arms were really real; and, that his vision for a sweet life together was really happening, right now.

They stood like that for awhile, admiring the modest farm beneath the archway, and all of their labors, before Ennis softly interjected, “ya better stop all that sobbin’, Jack – ‘nless ya wanna run the livestock off ag’in!”. Jack, red-eyed, laughed through his tears, and playfully nudged Ennis, before their mouths came together for a long, passionate kiss, the first of many at Brokeback Ranch, E Bar J. And, though his simple dream had taken years of perseverance, heartache, and sacrifice to achieve; standing beside his Ennis Del Mar, Jack now truly believed with all his heart that it had never been too much to ask for.



What a heartwarming story, BBM-Cat! So good of you to give our boys what they truly deserved..... beautiful writing, I especially like the line  standing beside his Ennis Del Mar, Jack now truly believed with all his heart that it had never been too much to ask for.

Dagi
Title: Re: Tickling Daniel
Post by: Dagi on August 19, 2007, 03:06:22 pm
.......  But Daniel, yeah that was his name, was small and thin, and his body was so smooth Ennis imagined that if he took down those sissy shorts he’d find that there wasn’t any hair on his balls.  This kid was like some fragile baby bird that had fallen out of its nest, and he instantly understood why Tyler was sweet on him.

* Dagi flat out* Gary, what are you doing to me??   :laugh:  I love Daniel and Tyler......together  ;D. Beautiful story, sweetheart.

Dagi


Title: Re: Simple Dreams: Part 2
Post by: BBM-Cat on August 19, 2007, 03:16:13 pm
What a heartwarming story, BBM-Cat! So good of you to give our boys what they truly deserved..... beautiful writing, I especially like the line  standing beside his Ennis Del Mar, Jack now truly believed with all his heart that it had never been too much to ask for.
Dagi

Thank you Dagi - that's so very kind - and I hope you or someone will be up to a Ticklish Part 4! What was really amazing is that I didn't realize at first that all 3 parts were written by different authors - you all are so in tuned with each other, and with Jack & Ennis. Bravo.
Title: Re: Simple Dreams: Part 2
Post by: Dagi on August 19, 2007, 05:52:40 pm
Thank you Dagi - that's so very kind - and I hope you or someone will be up to a Ticklish Part 4! What was really amazing is that I didn't realize at first that all 3 parts were written by different authors - you all are so in tuned with each other, and with Jack & Ennis. Bravo.

Why, thank you, BBM-Cat! It was the first time that I wrote a follow-up. Normally Toycoon and Littlewing follow each other - and they are quite an awsome tag team!! It was a real honor for me to join in. I´m kind of new here myself, most of the others have known each other for more that a year. I only joined in in May or so, don´t remember when exactly. Why don´t you write us a Part 4?

It´s good to have you with us!

Dagi
Title: Re: Holiday Snaps
Post by: David In Indy on August 19, 2007, 05:57:58 pm
Hey David sweetheart, (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_4_122v.gif)

So nice to see you here!  .... I'm still waiting on that steamy fanfic from you!   Well my mum and sister are already saving for their next trip to the USA!!  My friend was in Indianapolis all last summer and had a wonderful time .... you didn't happen to bump into Gary and Sandra Cook and their little girls did you??

Susie   (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



Which fanfic is that, Susie? Are you talking about the Lakota version of Brokeback Mountain I'm trying to write? Did you read about it in my blog? I'm just about finished with chapter one!  :D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on August 19, 2007, 08:30:50 pm
We oughtta have a housewarming party when Gary moves out to CA!! We know what he'd like, huh?  ;D ;)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on August 19, 2007, 10:33:18 pm
I'd love a house warming party, Shasta.   ;D  What a nice idea.  Will there be strippers?  ...oh wait, that's a stag party.  Darn.   :laugh:

And if Susie comes I'll be sure to serve cucumber sandwiches.  Isn't that what the Brits eat at parties?

Gary

Beer and pizza, buddy--beer and pizza. (http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/party/party0012.gif) (http://www.mysmiley.net)

Hey, you want a stripper? Why not? I think Dottie or Eric could hook us up with one!
 (http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/happy/happy0005.gif) (http://www.mysmiley.net)
Title: Re: Simple Dreams: Part 2
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 19, 2007, 10:39:16 pm
Simple Dreams by Toycoon  http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,10312.2520.html

Simple Dreams: Part 2  BBM-Cat

Jack shook off the sting of his father’s words, that old intrusive memory, and the despair that had owned him for so long. Ever accused by his old man of having so many dreams that never came to pass, Jack felt a sense of triumph in achieving what his father never thought he could, and he was glad that he would not be around to disparage it.

“Where’d ya go, Bud?” Ennis looked searchingly at Jack whose momentary shudder had released their embrace; and, with a pause and silent understanding, Ennis pulled his cowboy close, gently guiding Jack’s head back to the crook of his shoulder, caressing his hair, and feeling his body relax as well as his now more urgent and uncontrolled sobs. “Shhh,..…s’alright….Jack,.....'”, Ennis whispered, "....s’alright.....lil' darlin'....", his term of endearment barely audible, he swallowed hard trying to restrain his own emotions as thoughts of the silent, lifetime commitment he had made to Jack in his heart, surged. Jack all the while, cradled by Ennis, was overwhelmed with the realization that those comforting, strong arms were really real; and, that his vision for a sweet life together was really happening, right now.

They stood like that for awhile, admiring the modest farm beneath the archway, and all of their labors, before Ennis softly interjected, “ya better stop all that sobbin’, Jack – ‘nless ya wanna run the livestock off ag’in!”. Jack, red-eyed, laughed through his tears, and playfully nudged Ennis, before their mouths came together for a long, passionate kiss, the first of many at Brokeback Ranch, E Bar J. And, though his simple dream had taken years of perseverance, heartache, and sacrifice to achieve; standing beside his Ennis Del Mar, Jack now truly believed with all his heart that it had never been too much to ask for.



So very beautiful, BBM-Cat.  Ennis and Jack finally realizing Jack's dream of the sweet life!  Home at last!
Title: Re: Tickling Daniel
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 19, 2007, 10:43:24 pm
Tickling Daniel by garycottle

Ennis Del Mar hesitated at the door to his trailer when he heard giggling inside.  The noise didn’t come as a complete shock for he had agreed to let his grandson Tyler stay for the weekend with his friend, while he went on a solitary camping trip.  But now the weekend was over, and he had just came from the new Wal-Mart Super Center out on the highway, and there was milk and ice cream back in the truck that needed to be put in his icebox, so Ennis gave a quick knock on the door and used his key to get in. 

He entered just in time to see that Tyler had the boy pinned to his bed.  He had been tickling the kid.  Tyler was dressed in jeans and a T-shirt, but the other boy wore nothing but underwear, clingy little blue shorts that looked decidedly girly to Ennis.  The smiles on both boys faces slid into surprise when they saw Ennis.

“Tyler, there’s groceries in the truck.  Go get ‘em.”

Tyler climbed off his friend, dropped his gaze to the floor, slipped past his Granddad in silence, and went out into the yard barefoot.

Ennis turned and watched the athletic young man head toward his truck.  He said, “Stay out there a minute.”  And with that he closed the door.

Daniel hurriedly sat up and made a move toward his clothes that were in a puddle there beside Ennis’s feet.  But Ennis stopped him. 

“Hold on there a minute, little darlin’.  You can put your clothes on after I ask you somethin’.  Besides, you ain’t got nothin’ I ain’t seen before.”

Ennis was surprised that he so easily used the endearment on this kid that he had almost exclusively reserved for his daughters, and on occasion Jack.  But Daniel, yeah that was his name, was small and thin, and his body was so smooth Ennis imagined that if he took down those sissy shorts he’d find that there wasn’t any hair on his balls.  This kid was like some fragile baby bird that had fallen out of its nest, and he instantly understood why Tyler was sweet on him.

“What do you want to know, Mr. Del Mar,” the boy asked in a nervous voice.

“You love my grandson?” Ennis asked, his tone more gruff than he intended.

Daniel’s eyes widened, and then he blinked several times.  He said, “Yes, sir.”

Ennis bent down, picked up the kids clothes and tossed them over to him.  “That’s good enough for me,” he said.  And then he opened the door to let Tyler back inside.  “And you don’t have to call me sir, or mister.  I’m just a sixty-three-year-old ranch hand who never had nothin’ and never will.”

Wonderful continuation of the Daniel and Tyle "saga" Gary!  Very well written, and I love that the boys get caught by a very mellow, very accepting and understanding Ennis Del Mar.  I hope we'll see more of Tyler and Daniel. 
Title: Dance of The Drums (Part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 19, 2007, 11:01:51 pm
Dance of The Drums (Part 2)


When the parade was at the end of the line, and the throng that had gathered began to disburse, the blond haired young man placed his drum alongside the road.  He sat on the curb and wiped his brow as he watched his friends prepare for a Barbeque.

The young man was delighted to see Jack Twist join the parade.  It was heartening to see him enjoying life instead of worrying himself sick over a one Mr. Ennis Del Mar.  Ennis Del Mar!  Now he was one tough nut to crack! 

The blond man was in the presence of Jack Twist just last year at a restrurant in Riverton, and was awfully surprised that Jack didn’t recognize him.  Well, he did cut off his waist length hair, and wore a pair of cropped pants instead of denims, aviator sunglasses and cowboy boots.  He also traded his violin for a drum.  The young man fortified himself mentally as he joined his friends at the park for the barbeque.  Tomorrow he had his work cut out for him!  He had to pay a visit to Jack Twist..
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: BBM-Cat on August 19, 2007, 11:12:21 pm
RE: Dance of the Drums (Part 2)

Wow, what a cliffhanger, Littlewing....I wonder what this young blond man has in store with his visit to Jack Twist! I meant to tell you I really liked Part I of Dance of the Drums - capturing Jack's impulsive spirit, joining the parade and not letting a little fever get him down. Hopefully, Lureen and Bobby are going to be out of town for awhile.... ;)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 19, 2007, 11:30:27 pm
RE: Dance of the Drums (Part 2)

Wow, what a cliffhanger, Littlewing....I wonder what this young blond man has in store with his visit to Jack Twist! I meant to tell you I really liked Part I of Dance of the Drums - capturing Jack's impulsive spirit, joining the parade and not letting a little fever get him down. Hopefully, Lureen and Bobby are going to be out of town for awhile.... ;)

Thanks, BBM-Cat.  This is sort of a continuation of a series I started on the other Board.  If I can find them, I'll post the "Pie and Visions" series, as well.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: BBM-Cat on August 19, 2007, 11:31:40 pm
PLEASE DO! anxiously awaiting.... ;)
Title: Re: Dance of The Drums (Part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 19, 2007, 11:33:06 pm
Littlewing, I'm starting to think that this blond guy that keeps popping up in your stories is Puck from Shakespeare's A Midsummer Night's Dream, the sprite who goes about making mischief by causing people to fall in love.

Gary

 :laugh: Ahhh, Gary, we'll just have to wait and see..
Title: A Brokeback Mountain Slice of Life
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 20, 2007, 01:03:46 am
A Brokeback Mountain Slice of Life by Littlewing1957

Aguirre looked past Jack Twist and eyed Ennis Del Mar riding confidently into camp, a scrawny lamb in his arms.  Jack followed Aguirre’s gaze over to Ennis, who by rights, was surely wondering why his boss and his lover were sizing him up.  But Ennis didn’t fear.  He dismounted alongside the tent, and very tenderly carried the tiny lamb to the dinner fire.  Ennis placed the ewe next to the flames to keep it warm.

Aguirre turned his mount to the east and rode out.  Ennis watched as Jack dropped his hatchet, gathered a small pile of wood, and headed his way.  The lamb was sleeping soundly, and didn’t awaken as Jack scratched its tiny head. 

Ennis didn’t ask his friend what Aguirre wanted, or why they looked at him when he rode into camp.  He didn’t want to pry, but was certain that Jack would confide in him if and when the time was right.  Ennis smiled at his friend and threw a log onto the flames.  Jack patted his lover on the arm, and turned toward the fire to prepare the evening meal.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on August 20, 2007, 04:53:47 am
Shasta, this is starting to sound like a lot of fun.  I love pizza, and boys who take off their clothes.   :laugh:  I'm not crazy about beer, but of course what party would be complete without some kind of libation?  I'll just drink Coke and let everyone else drink beer.  Oh, how I wish we could really do it.   :D

Gary

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Hey, we don't have to limit ourselves! Cokes galore---they go with pizza too. (http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/party/party0027.gif) (http://www.mysmiley.net)



(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/23/23_146_34.gif) Jolly good show chaps! .... and if you would be so kind, only if it's not too much trouble, a nice pot of tea served up in your best china! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/7/7_1_110v.gif)  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/23/23_146_17.gif)


Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



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Tea and cucumber sandwiches---no problem! With the imaginative crew of Brokies around these parts---this could be the party of the year!! What else ya want? Someone's bound to be able to provide it. What kind of music do you like, Gary?   (To dance to) We already have the stripper music down.  (http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/party/party0006.gif) (http://www.mysmiley.net)

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Title: Re: A Brokeback Mountain Slice of Life
Post by: BBM-Cat on August 20, 2007, 08:09:52 am
A Brokeback Mountain Slice of Life by Littlewing1957

Aguirre looked past Jack Twist and eyed Ennis Del Mar riding confidently into camp, a scrawny lamb in his arms.  Jack followed Aguirre’s gaze over to Ennis, who by rights, was surely wondering why his boss and his lover were sizing him up.  But Ennis didn’t fear.  He dismounted alongside the tent, and very tenderly carried the tiny lamb to the dinner fire.  Ennis placed the ewe next to the flames to keep it warm.

Aguirre turned his mount to the east and rode out.  Ennis watched as Jack dropped his hatchet, gathered a small pile of wood, and headed his way.  The lamb was sleeping soundly, and didn’t awaken as Jack scratched its tiny head. 

Ennis didn’t ask his friend what Aguirre wanted, or why they looked at him when he rode into camp.  He didn’t want to pry, but was certain that Jack would confide in him if and when the time was right.  Ennis smiled at his friend and threw a log onto the flames.  Jack patted his lover on the arm, and turned toward the fire to prepare the evening meal.


Awwww, Littlewing, how endearing...tender Ennis, there's nothing sweeter (except tender Jack).  And, I sure am glad they did not have lamb for dinner!
Title: Re: Dance of The Drums (Part 2)
Post by: Dagi on August 20, 2007, 08:32:03 am
Dance of The Drums (Part 2)


When the parade was at the end of the line, and the throng that had gathered began to disburse, the blond haired young man placed his drum alongside the road.  He sat on the curb and wiped his brow as he watched his friends prepare for a Barbeque.

The young man was delighted to see Jack Twist join the parade.  It was heartening to see him enjoying life instead of worrying himself sick over a one Mr. Ennis Del Mar.  Ennis Del Mar!  Now he was one tough nut to crack! 

The blond man was in the presence of Jack Twist just last year at a restrurant in Riverton, and was awfully surprised that Jack didn’t recognize him.  Well, he did cut off his waist length hair, and wore a pair of cropped pants instead of denims, aviator sunglasses and cowboy boots.  He also traded his violin for a drum.  The young man fortified himself mentally as he joined his friends at the park for the barbeque.  Tomorrow he had his work cut out for him!  He had to pay a visit to Jack Twist..


Can hardly wait for part 3! Marie, don´t torture us!!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 20, 2007, 08:34:11 am
Whooo Wheeee!  Count me in!

That could be the theme of the next Brokeback Barbeque .... beer, pizza and naked men ... I'll book my ticket right away!!

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Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Can I come, too?

Dagi
Title: Re: A Brokeback Mountain Slice of Life
Post by: Dagi on August 20, 2007, 08:38:18 am
A Brokeback Mountain Slice of Life by Littlewing1957

Aguirre looked past Jack Twist and eyed Ennis Del Mar riding confidently into camp, a scrawny lamb in his arms.  Jack followed Aguirre’s gaze over to Ennis, who by rights, was surely wondering why his boss and his lover were sizing him up.  But Ennis didn’t fear.  He dismounted alongside the tent, and very tenderly carried the tiny lamb to the dinner fire.  Ennis placed the ewe next to the flames to keep it warm.

Aguirre turned his mount to the east and rode out.  Ennis watched as Jack dropped his hatchet, gathered a small pile of wood, and headed his way.  The lamb was sleeping soundly, and didn’t awaken as Jack scratched its tiny head. 

Ennis didn’t ask his friend what Aguirre wanted, or why they looked at him when he rode into camp.  He didn’t want to pry, but was certain that Jack would confide in him if and when the time was right.  Ennis smiled at his friend and threw a log onto the flames.  Jack patted his lover on the arm, and turned toward the fire to prepare the evening meal.


Beautiful, Marie, you capture the atmosphere between our boys so well. Jack loving this caring man, Ennis confiding in Jack, both of them feeling so comfortable in each other´s presence....love it.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 20, 2007, 11:45:06 am
Well, of course you can come.  Let's see.  We American's eat pizza and drink beer, Susie will eat cucumber sandwiches and drink tea, and I'm thinking the German girl will go for a nice long, fat sausage.   ;D

Gary

Hell, you know me too well!  ;D ;D ;D

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 20, 2007, 05:39:56 pm
I'm hoping you'll share, because I kind of like fat sausages myself.   :P

And how shall we do that, honey, you sucking on one and I on the other end, or what?? :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 20, 2007, 07:11:01 pm
I hate cucumber sandwiches .... phoooooey! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_2_10.gif)

I´m sure there will be sausages for everyone  ;D. I´ll share mine with you, too, Susiebell!

Dagi
Title: Smokin' down by the lake
Post by: Toycoon on August 20, 2007, 11:42:26 pm
Smokin' Down by the Lake by Toycoon

Somewhat dazed by the calm serene beauty of the pale moonlight spread smoothly over the glassy lake, Ennis blindly felt around the legs of the fold-out chair searching for the bottle of Old Rose that he had planted near his feet, in the grass.

Jack took a long drag off the joint and reclined in his creaky chair, then said," Ennis you wanna see something?" the words barely wheezing through his pursed lips trying desparately to hold in the smoke; Jack sprung up, faced Ennis and planted his lips, wide open on Ennis' parted lips, exhaling the magical vapor into Ennis' mouth and causing Ennis to get very stiff.

Jack gently put his hand over Ennis' mouth to keep him from expelling the smoke proudly proclaiming, "That there's called a power hit. I seen it done in one of them old hippy movies! " Ennis laughed so hard, he went into a coughing fit.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: David In Indy on August 21, 2007, 12:48:33 am
I hate cucumber sandwiches .... phoooooey! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_2_10.gif)

SUSIE!!  >:(

You don't like cucumber sandwiches? I LOVE them! Yummy!  :D

Hey, I loved your vacation pictures Susie! Especially all those beautiful pictures of the cliffs with the waves crashing against them! We don't have anything like that where I live; just corn cows, barns and a big smelly city where I live! Those pictures were beautiful, and thanks for posting them for us! I loved the harbor scenes too with all those big boats!  :D

England sure is a beautiful country!  :)
Title: Re: Smokin' down by the lake
Post by: Dagi on August 21, 2007, 06:58:29 am
Sweet´n´sexy, Toycoon, and so romantic this view over the lake...and Jack's lips on Ennis's......mmmm.

Oscar, when are you writing a Spanish one again? Just for me? Your first one was so poetic.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 21, 2007, 06:59:42 am
 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: These photos are hilarious, Spiceylife!
Title: Re: Ticklish?
Post by: Dagi on August 21, 2007, 07:41:14 am
Dagi, what a beautifully written, hot, erotic little story you've given us!  You know what I like!  (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/thsmiley_notworthy.gif)  All hot and sexy as hell, but still with Jack caring so much for Ennis, soothing and relaxing away his clenched jaw and his tension and his tightness. (In lots of ways!)  I love this one, Dagi!  I love the vivid details and Jack admiring Ennis's gorgeous face and physique and his cheeky line at the end! (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/thsmiley_bouncetrampoline.gif)  And naturally I didn't even know this position was physically possible!(http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/th4264.png)



Thank you so much, Spiceylife!! I´m so glad you enjoyed it! And as to the position...guess whom I learned that one from  ;D .

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 21, 2007, 08:23:10 am
Spiceylife, how much longer will you make us wait for your story? That´s just not fair  :o !!

Dagi
Title: Re: Ticklish?
Post by: Dagi on August 21, 2007, 01:48:32 pm
Thank you so much, Spiceylife!! I´m so glad you enjoyed it! And as to the position...guess whom I learned that one from  ;D .

Dagi
Now you hush.   :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

(http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/thsmiley_notworthy.gif) Months ago I had already called you my guru of queer sex, remember?  ;D

Dagi
Title: Re: Dance of The Drums (Part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 21, 2007, 09:28:46 pm
OMG it's that blond guy again!!!!  You've been teasing us about him for so long now you little tinker!!  Superb story littlewing and I can't wait for the next installment!! 

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Thanks, Susie!  I'm working on the next installment now!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 21, 2007, 09:29:47 pm
Whooo Wheeee!  Count me in!

That could be the theme of the next Brokeback Barbeque .... beer, pizza and naked men ... I'll book my ticket right away!!

 (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/13/13_4_1v.gif) (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/13/13_4_2v.gif)



Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


I'm in, definitely!  ::)
Title: Re: A Brokeback Mountain Slice of Life
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 21, 2007, 09:32:10 pm
Awwww, Littlewing, how endearing...tender Ennis, there's nothing sweeter (except tender Jack).  And, I sure am glad they did not have lamb for dinner!

 :laugh:  :laugh: You know, BBM-Cat, I thinking about going into more detail about Ennis carrying the lamb over to the fire.  I didn't want anyone to get the impression that Ennis would BBQ a little lamb - a live one at that!  Thanks for your kind words, Sweets!
Title: Re: Dance of The Drums (Part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 21, 2007, 09:33:42 pm
Can hardly wait for part 3! Marie, don´t torture us!!

Dagi

It's coming, Dagi baby, it's coming!  :laugh:
Title: Re: A Brokeback Mountain Slice of Life
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 21, 2007, 09:34:47 pm
Beautiful, Marie, you capture the atmosphere between our boys so well. Jack loving this caring man, Ennis confiding in Jack, both of them feeling so comfortable in each other´s presence....love it.

Dagi

Thanks, Baby!  The boys continue to wrap themselves around my heart.  I can't write enough, say enough about them!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 21, 2007, 09:36:05 pm
I'm hoping you'll share, because I kind of like fat sausages myself.   :P

Gary, you are just sooo bad!  Don't hurt yourself, now!  ::)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 21, 2007, 09:37:13 pm
And how shall we do that, honey, you sucking on one and I on the other end, or what?? :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:



Oh my...and I thought it was hot outside.... ;D
Title: Re: Smokin' down by the lake
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 21, 2007, 09:44:36 pm
Smokin' Down by the Lake by Toycoon

Somewhat dazed by the calm serene beauty of the pale moonlight spread smoothly over the glassy lake, Ennis blindly felt around the legs of the fold-out chair searching for the bottle of Old Rose that he had planted near his feet, in the grass.

Jack took a long drag off the joint and reclined in his creaky chair, then said," Ennis you wanna see something?" the words barely wheezing through his pursed lips trying desparately to hold in the smoke; Jack sprung up, faced Ennis and planted his lips, wide open on Ennis' parted lips, exhaling the magical vapor into Ennis' mouth and causing Ennis to get very stiff.

Jack gently put his hand over Ennis' mouth to keep him from expelling the smoke proudly proclaiming, "That there's called a power hit. I seen it done in one of them old hippy movies! " Ennis laughed so hard, he went into a coughing fit.

Beautiful, Toycoon!  Very well written and descriptive.  I love it!
Title: Re: Smokin' down by the lake
Post by: Toycoon on August 21, 2007, 10:38:32 pm
Hey kids,
Thank you for the comments. The 'Power hit' is very 70's so I thought it would be fitting for Jack to teach Ennis something fun and new in the 80's. I always thought it was 'homoerotic' when guys would give one another a power hit; you're basically kissing the other person as you exchange the smoke. Pretty hot for the straight stoners I hung with!
Title: One Hot August Night
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 21, 2007, 11:23:26 pm
One Hot August Night by Littlewing1957

Another BBM Slice of Life

Lureen loved a good barbeque, but Jack hated them!  Brought back too many memories of Brokeback, and all those times he cooked over open flame for his lover, Ennis Del Mar.  Jack was, however, persuaded by his lovely wife to grill a few steaks and hot dogs for dinner one hot August night.

With his family safely indoors out of the oppressive heat, Jack sat on a wicker lawn chair and watched the meat sizzle on the grill.  Kelsey kept him company, and he closed his blue eyes as he absently patted her black head.   The fire hissed and popped as Jack’s thoughts drifted back to a time of cold weather and hot, steamy love.

Ennis Del Mar naked, warshin’ everythin' he can reach!  Ennis bending over a stream wringing his wet, threadbare socks.   So many images of Ennis riding off on a mare, carrying wood, cooking, tending the sheep.  Every image of his lover replayed like a tape that was rewound time and again by memory.   Jack felt the old stirrings, and felt very sexy - became very uncomfortable - down below.  “Watch the meat, Kelsey!”  Jack whispered huskily to his dog as he raced to his storage shed to help himself the only way he knew how.


Title: Re: One Hot August Night
Post by: Toycoon on August 21, 2007, 11:39:33 pm
Quote
 Jack felt the old stirrings, and felt very sexy - became very uncomfortable - down below.  “Watch the meat, Kelsey!”  Jack whispered huskily to his dog as he raced to his storage shed to help himself the only way he knew how.

Mmmm spicy BBQ sauce, Littlewing. I love your stories; they are so unique and tasty!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on August 21, 2007, 11:45:26 pm
Hey Gary,
That is great news! Have you been to California before? I think you're gonna love it here. I saw a documentary about a town north of San Franciso that looked like the lake in the lake scene on the last fishing trip. Even David said, "Hey, that would be a great place to have the West Coast Brokeback BBQ". I'll have to investigate where that is actually located. Meanwhile, what are ya gonna do without us? What am I saying... what will we do without you?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 21, 2007, 11:57:30 pm
I just wanted to let everyone know that I will be leaving West Virginia next week, the state in which I was born and raised.  I will be flying out to California Tuesday, Aug. 28th, and I'll sign the lease for my new place the next morning and I'll be given the keys at the same time.  

I'm moving to Merced, which is just outside of Yosemite National Park, and not far from San Francisco.   ;D

I'll be going offline later in the week, maybe Saturday, and I'm not sure when I'll be back online.  I have to ship my computer, and so I'll have to wait for it to be delievered.  And I won't have a stick of furniture, so I'll have to scramble to get a desk, a mattress, etc.  And then I'll have to order internet access from the cable company.  I'm not sure how long all this will take, but I hope to be talking to you guys again as soon as possible.


Gary, this is too eerie!  I was just listening to The Pet Shop Boys' "West End Girls!"  I swear I just turned it off when I saw your youtube link!  The second clip is from "Bay Area Backroads" right?  I love that show!  Gary, I'm so glad you're finally moving!  I swear you'll love it here!  My sister and I were just talking about your move this afternoon, and we will definitely be down there to take you out.  My sister knows the area, while I haven't been to Merced, as far as I can remember.  Don't be afraid, Baby!  Everything will be okay.  I hate the thought of you being gone from the forum for awhile, but that can't be helped.  I'll be down to see you when you feel ready to have visitors.
Title: Re: One Hot August Night
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 22, 2007, 12:01:32 am
 

And the poor dog is left to tend to the steaks.  How's she supposed to manage?  She has no hands.   :laugh:

Gary

 :laugh:  Yes!  I may have to write a Part 2 where Jack explains (to Lureen and Bobby) why the steaks and hot dogs were burned to a crisp!
Title: Re: One Hot August Night
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 22, 2007, 12:02:30 am
Mmmm spicy BBQ sauce, Littlewing. I love your stories; they are so unique and tasty!

Thanks so much, Baby!  You are so sweet!
Title: Re: Smokin' down by the lake
Post by: Dagi on August 22, 2007, 02:08:57 am
Hey kids,
Thank you for the comments. The 'Power hit' is very 70's so I thought it would be fitting for Jack to teach Ennis something fun and new in the 80's. I always thought it was 'homoerotic' when guys would give one another a power hit; you're basically kissing the other person as you exchange the smoke. Pretty hot for the straight stoners I hung with!

Kids?? Are kids around?? (http://www.smileygarden.de/smilie/Schockiert/scared.gif) Sheee-it; I didn´t put a warning above my last story....... ;D
Title: Re: One Hot August Night
Post by: Dagi on August 22, 2007, 02:15:43 am
One Hot August Night by Littlewing1957

Another BBM Slice of Life

Lureen loved a good barbeque, but Jack hated them!  Brought back too many memories of Brokeback, and all those times he cooked over open flame for his lover, Ennis Del Mar.  Jack was, however, persuaded by his lovely wife to grill a few steaks and hot dogs for dinner one hot August night.

With his family safely indoors out of the oppressive heat, Jack sat on a wicker lawn chair and watched the meat sizzle on the grill.  Kelsey kept him company, and he closed his blue eyes as he absently patted her black head.   The fire hissed and popped as Jack’s thoughts drifted back to a time of cold weather and hot, steamy love.

Ennis Del Mar naked, warshin’ everythin' he can reach!  Ennis bending over a stream wringing his wet, threadbare socks.   So many images of Ennis riding off on a mare, carrying wood, cooking, tending the sheep.  Every image of his lover replayed like a tape that was rewound time and again by memory.   Jack felt the old stirrings, and felt very sexy - became very uncomfortable - down below.  “Watch the meat, Kelsey!”  Jack whispered huskily to his dog as he raced to his storage shed to help himself the only way he knew how.

 


Ah, Marie, I can feel Jack´s loneliness in my heart! So sad, but so beautifully written.........and sexy as hell ;D

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 22, 2007, 02:21:17 am
I just wanted to let everyone know that I will be leaving West Virginia next week, the state in which I was born and raised.  I will be flying out to California Tuesday, Aug. 28th, and I'll sign the lease for my new place the next morning and I'll be given the keys at the same time. 
...........

I'll still be around for a few more days.  And I hope that I won't be offline for very long.

Love you guys,
Gary

P.S. Thanks Susie for teaching me how to properly put up a youtube link.   :D

We will miss you as hell when you´re off-line. And we will be thinking of you every second.......

Love ya,
Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: MaineWriter on August 22, 2007, 02:10:54 pm
I hope all of the regulars on this thread will join us for the open house on Friday, August 24th. We'll be serving appetizers! Details are in the first message, stickied on top of the board.

Leslie
Title: Re: One Hot August Night
Post by: BBM-Cat on August 22, 2007, 02:49:05 pm
One Hot August Night by Littlewing1957

Littlewing - beautiful and candid - and erotic! You can almost hear Jack's heart breaking with his reminiscing and longing for those long ago times with Ennis on the mountain.

The most important thing is that Jack gets some self-help!  ;D

Definitely a part 2 is in store - explaining the blackened steaks and hotdogs! I wonder how he will get out of that one.
Title: Re: Ticklish?
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 22, 2007, 11:47:34 pm
Thank you so much, littlewing!  I appreciate it.  I would love to read a part 4 from you though...  Poor littlewing, we're always pushing you for another story, and another, and another!  Lol.  But your stories are always so unique and different and interesting, and so damn good!  We can't help ourselves... (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/foryou.gif)

So sweet!  Thanks, Spicey!
Title: Re: One Hot August Night
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 22, 2007, 11:50:31 pm
Littlewing - beautiful and candid - and erotic! You can almost hear Jack's heart breaking with his reminiscing and longing for those long ago times with Ennis on the mountain.

The most important thing is that Jack gets some self-help!  ;D

Definitely a part 2 is in store - explaining the blackened steaks and hotdogs! I wonder how he will get out of that one.

 :laugh: Thanks, BBM-Cat, for your kind words.
Title: Re: Holiday Snaps
Post by: David In Indy on August 23, 2007, 05:07:43 am
Ugh.  :P

Can you imagine pulling down your bed covers and finding one of those things sitting on your pillow?

Or NOT noticing it and then climbing in bed with it??!!!

*cold chill*

 :P  :P  :P
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 23, 2007, 07:51:49 am
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I´m not arachnophobic, I even carry small spiders out the house on my hand, but that´s too much!!
Title: Re: Holiday Snaps
Post by: BBM-Cat on August 23, 2007, 06:57:45 pm
Susiebell  - yes, please, take your spider pictures away. I don't even want to click on this thread now!  :o  ;D

BTW Gary, I couldn't get to the tranquilizers fast enough myself!  :D
Title: Re: Lonnie: Summer of '62
Post by: Toycoon on August 23, 2007, 11:38:04 pm
Interesting take on Jack, Spiceylife.  I hadn't thought of Jack having a companion the year before.  I always thought he was alone.

Hello there, Alma senior,
Nice of you to stop by, hope you'll stay a spell. Will you be engaging in any fanfic writing? It's fun, cathartic, erotic and quite additive. Jack with Ennis is one of the most posted threads here on lovely BetterMost! Welcome to the fold. Please check out the Brokeback Craft Corner for fun projects to make and do including the Jack and Ennis refrigerator magnets and the Old Rose Whiskey label.
Title: The Black Truck
Post by: Toycoon on August 23, 2007, 11:40:37 pm
The Black Truck by Toycoon

The black GMC pick up spun around the corner and slid to a stop inches away from the wall; two puffs of smoke escaped from either side of the truck's hood then disappeared.

"Hmmm, that must be this Aguirre guy," wondered Ennis pulling a half smoked cigarette from his coat pocket and searching for a matchstick in his pants' pocket; Ennis flicked the match on with one hand like his brother K.E. taught him and lit the cigarette.

"Sure is a good looking fella," he thought," ... Looks like a movie star or something. Like Rory Calhoun" (Ennis had seen Rory Calhoun's  picture on the cover of a comic book at the drug store); the man hopped out of the truck then started to walk towards Ennis who was embarrassed to be staring so he averted his glance and looked at the ground.

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 23, 2007, 11:56:12 pm
Hi there Toycoon,

No, I've never set foot in California.  I'm going out there on blind faith.  So it had better be as nice as you say it is, or I'll snatch you bladheaded.   :laugh:  (That's a southern expression.  Wonder how they'll take it when I say stuff like that in California.)

Gary

Snatch you baldheaded?!!   :laugh:  Gary, this is how my mom threatened us for as long as I can remember  :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 23, 2007, 11:58:22 pm
Thank you so much, Spicey.  I'm really exciting, but I'm also scared to death.  However, I'm not going to let that stop me.  I'm taking the plunge.  And I'll soon be back, and I'll tell you all about it.   ;D

Gary

Don't be afraid.  Merced is very laid back, very mellow.  At least this is what I hear.  I've just passed through years ago.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on August 24, 2007, 12:00:54 am
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No, I've never set foot in California.  I'm going out there on blind faith.  So it had better be as nice as you say it is, or I'll snatch you bladheaded.   :laugh:  (That's a southern expression.  Wonder how they'll take it when I say stuff like that in California.)
Gary

See here, garycottle! What's all this talk about bald snatches and what not?
Title: Re: Holiday Snaps
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 24, 2007, 12:01:44 am
They are big and hairy and ugly, they can do whatever they want!


CENSORED!!
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 http://www.bugman123.com/Bugs/BirdEatingSpider.jpg (http://www.bugman123.com/Bugs/BirdEatingSpider.jpg)

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(This ones a Huntsman)

CENSORED!!
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EEEEEEEEEEK!  I am NEVER going to the toilet in Australia! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_11_2.gif)
Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Good grief!  I've never seen bigger, uglier spiders! 

SusieBaby, I got your messages and I will send a reply soon, this weekend, latest, okay?  I'm just so tardy with answering my PMs.  Forgive me, Sweets!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 24, 2007, 12:04:53 am
And thanks to you, Toycoon, for creating and keeping this lovely little thread going for so long.  It's been a wild ride!  Is the ride slowing down now?  Seems like it could be.  Anyway, thanks again, Toycoon, you sweet, sugary mush-daddy.  At least I think that's what Shasta called you once, and it seems right to me.   :)   

Please don't say that, Spicey!  The thread will pick up, if I have to carry it all  by myself.   :)  As far as I'm concerned, there ain't no reins on this one!
Title: The Black Truck (Part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 24, 2007, 12:28:45 am
The Black Truck (Part 2) by Littlewing1957

But his curiosity took hold, and Ennis cut a quick glance at the good looking guy - just a small turn of the eyes in the other fella’s direction.  Ennis didn’t anticipate having to compete for the job.  And looking at the fine build and confident manner of the dark haired fella, Ennis felt a slight twinge of anxiety.

Jack kicked his truck’s tires and cursed!  He was really tired of that rusting, unreliable heap!  He was also weary of work with livestock, and surly, unreasonable bosses.  But Jack needed the job, had no choice but to show up, try to see if Aguirre had something, anything up on Brokeback that he could do for the summer.

When Jack Twist first laid eyes on Ennis Del Mar, he wondered why he felt compelled to turn around and face the front of Aguirre’s trailer.  Was it instinct: a sense of fight or flight, or did he sense something good?  Jack’s heart stopped as he took in the fair haired teenager.  He didn’t know what it was about Ennis that got to him first.  Was it the slight fatigue, the hunched shoulders, the sense of uncertainty, the sadness?  Jack vowed right then and there, right at the very second he fell in love, that he would try to replace the sadness with joy.  He could only try…
Title: The Trip to Signal
Post by: Toycoon on August 24, 2007, 12:51:23 am
The Trip to Signal by Toycoon

Fifty cents don't buy much these days but it bought just enough ethyl gas for the trip to Signal and maybe a beer afterwards; the old pick up must have known this, too, because she just made it as far as Aguirre's trailer, fortunately walking distance to JT's bar, then conked out.

Jack was glad to get out of Lightning Flat for the summer again even though it was the same sheep herding job as last year when Aguirre got all over him about the damn sheep, the rain, the lightning and everything else it seemed that Jack had no control over; his daddy was still sore about Jack not making any money to help out around the house and his foolish plan to be a bronc rider, threatening to kick Jack out if he didn't start pulling his weight and behaving like a man.

From the corner of his eye, Jack caught sight of a man, a stranger, in a white cowboy hat and tan coat; Jack chuckled because for a moment, the stranger resembled the toy cowboy his momma gave him on Jack's ninth birthday, so tall, lean and ... serious.
Title: No Sale
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 24, 2007, 12:56:04 am
No Sale by Littlewing1957


Ennis stopped outside of the Riverton Coin Exchange and looked around.  It was Saturday morning, and the exchange, which was little more than a multi purpose pawn shop, was open for business.   The weather was bitter cold, but Ennis was sweating profusely.  He didn’t relish the task that lay before him, but in his mind, he had no other recourse.

Ennis didn’t quit his job at the ranch, but was laid off.  Steve promised him work in a few months, just as soon as business improved.  But Ennis couldn’t wait that long.  He had children to support, and he had to eat.  He stepped through the door of the Exchange and tripped a buzzer.  The clerk looked up at him and smiled.  “How are you today, sir?”  The young man asked.  “What can I do you fer?”  Ennis reached into his pocket and pulled out the gold and diamond bracelet Jack saved for a year to purchase, and handed it to the young man.  “I got this bracelet,”  Ennis began, “And it is all solid gold with real diamonds.  I..I..was thinking that I could pawn it.  How much can you give me for it?”  The clerk, whose name tag read “Theodore” held the bracelet up to the light.  He fetched a small magnifying glass and looked at the clasp for a hallmark.  “Yep, this is a beaut, alright!”  Theodore whistled.  “How much do you want for it?”  Ennis shuffled his feet nervously.  “Whatever you think is fair!”  He whispered.  Theodore placed the bracelet on a small scale and typed in a series of numbers.  “I can do anything up to $150.00.” 

  Jack laid back contentedly on the bedroll, wearing nothing but a diamond and gold bracelet that spelled out the name Ennis in diamonds.  He traced a finger over the glistening stones that spelled out his lover’s name.  Ennis stood on the side of the roll, watching his husband, drinking it all in.  His own bracelet spelled Jack and rested against his wrist.  Jack reached up toward his man and touched his wrist.  “Now remember friend, if you ever need money..”

“Sir??”  It was Theodore.  Ennis looked at him with a start.  “Sir, would you like the $150?  I can go up to $175.00!”  Ennis tried to fight back his tears.  He snatched up the bracelet and shook his head.  He ran through the doors of the Riverton Coin Exchange to face the cold of the morning.


Title: Re: The Trip to Signal
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 24, 2007, 12:59:22 am
The Trip to Signal by Toycoon

Fifty cents don't buy much these days but it bought just enough ethyl gas for the trip to Signal and maybe a beer afterwards; the old pick up must have known this, too, because she just made it as far as Aguirre's trailer, fortunately walking distance to JT's bar, then conked out.

Jack was glad to get out of Lightning Flat for the summer again even though it was the same sheep herding job as last year when Aguirre got all over him about the damn sheep, the rain, the lightning and everything else it seemed that Jack had no control over; his daddy was still sore about Jack not making any money to help out around the house and his foolish plan to be a bronc rider, threatening to kick Jack out if he didn't start pulling his weight and behaving like a man.

From the corner of his eye, Jack caught sight of a man, a stranger, in a white cowboy hat and tan coat; Jack chuckled because for a moment, the stranger resembled the toy cowboy his momma gave him on Jack's ninth birthday, so tall, lean and ... serious.

Toycoon, what a cool tale!  This is very well written, and well,  I love this, Babe!  So tall, lean and serious?  That sure sounds like our Ennis!  :)
Title: Re: No Sale
Post by: Toycoon on August 24, 2007, 01:08:18 am
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Ennis stopped outside of the Riverton Coin Exchange and looked around.  It was Saturday morning, and the exchange, which was little more than a multi purpose pawn shop, was open for business.   The weather was bitter cold, but Ennis was sweating profusely.  He didn’t relish the task that lay before him, but in his mind, he had no other recourse.

Oh no, Ennis. Don't even think of it!
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Ennis reached into his pocket and pulled out the gold and diamond bracelet Jack saved for a year to purchase, and handed it to the young man.  “I got this bracelet,”  Ennis began, “And it is all solid gold with real diamonds.  I..I..was thinking that I could pawn it.  How much can you give me for it?”  The clerk, whose name tag read “Theodore” held the bracelet up to the light.  He fetched a small magnifying glass and looked at the clasp for a hallmark.  “Yep, this is a beaut, alright!”  Theodore whistled.  “How much do you want for it?”  Ennis shuffled his feet nervously.  “Whatever you think is fair!”  He whispered.  Theodore placed the bracelet on a small scale and typed in a series of numbers.  “I can do anything up to $150.00.”

Son-of a bitch... don't do it, Ennis. You'll regret it...

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He snatched up the bracelet and shook his head.  He ran through the doors of the Riverton Coin Exchange to face the cold of the morning.
Good boy. I was worried there for a minute. It's interesting that people perceive Jack to be the sentimental one of the pair but I've always thought it is Ennis. He practically has a meltdown when Jack says, "now all we got is Brokeback Mountain." To Ennis, Brokeback Mountain isn't all they have, it is everything he has to give.



Title: Re: Lonnie: Summer of '62
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 24, 2007, 01:16:38 am
Thanks for the hospitality Toycoon.  I heard about this thread being the most popular so thought I have a look.  I'm impressed with your stories too.

Welcome, almasenior!  It is good to see you here.  I'm glad you're enjoying our stories.  Please stick around.  There will be much more to read.   :)
Title: Re: No Sale
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 24, 2007, 01:19:26 am
Oh no, Ennis. Don't even think of it!
Son-of a bitch... don't do it, Ennis. You'll regret it...
Good boy. I was worried there for a minute. It's interesting that people perceive Jack to be the sentimental one of the pair but I've always thought it is Ennis. He practically has a meltdown when Jack says, "now all we got is Brokeback Mountain." To Ennis, Brokeback Mountain isn't all they have, it is everything he has to give.





 :laugh: :laugh:  Toycoon, you're too much!  I almost fell off my chair reading this!

 And I think you're right about Ennis being the sentimental one.  The evidence is there from the moment we see him dry heaving in the alley to the final meltdown at the lake.  Poor Ennis.  So much sentiment, so much love, but no outlet for it, no real way to express it.
Title: Re: The Black Truck
Post by: Dagi on August 24, 2007, 04:00:00 pm
The Black Truck by Toycoon

The black GMC pick up spun around the corner and slid to a stop inches away from the wall; two puffs of smoke escaped from either side of the truck's hood then disappeared.

"Hmmm, that must be this Aguirre guy," wondered Ennis pulling a half smoked cigarette from his coat pocket and searching for a matchstick in his pants' pocket; Ennis flicked the match on with one hand like his brother K.E. taught him and lit the cigarette.

"Sure is a good looking fella," he thought," ... Looks like a movie star or something. Like Rory Calhoun" (Ennis had seen Rory Calhoun's  picture on the cover of a comic book at the drug store); the man hopped out of the truck then started to walk towards Ennis who was embarrassed to be staring so he averted his glance and looked at the ground.



What a nice thing to post a story from the very beginning, Toycoon. Reading Spiceylife´s words I was thinking of how thankful I am that you started this thread and that I got "sucked in". I love all of you so much! Sorry for being here so little the last time, it doesn't mean at all that this thread has become less important to me.

Dagi

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 24, 2007, 04:02:48 pm
Please don't say that, Spicey!  The thread will pick up, if I have to carry it all  by myself.   :)  As far as I'm concerned, there ain't no reins on this one!

thank you so much, Littlewing. I can´t say it too often. Thank you for giving us such a good time!

Dagi
Title: Re: The Black Truck (Part 2)
Post by: Dagi on August 24, 2007, 04:05:44 pm

.........  Jack vowed right then and there, right at the very second he fell in love, that he would try to replace the sadness with joy.  He could only try…


Beautiful, Marie, just beautiful. Jack has a heart of gold, and I love him. Thank you!

Dagi
Title: Re: No Sale
Post by: Dagi on August 24, 2007, 04:10:45 pm
No Sale by Littlewing1957


Ennis stopped outside of the Riverton Coin Exchange and looked around.  It was Saturday morning, and the exchange, which was little more than a multi purpose pawn shop, was open for business.   The weather was bitter cold, but Ennis was sweating profusely.  He didn’t relish the task that lay before him, but in his mind, he had no other recourse.

Ennis didn’t quit his job at the ranch, but was laid off.  Steve promised him work in a few months, just as soon as business improved.  But Ennis couldn’t wait that long.  He had children to support, and he had to eat.  He stepped through the door of the Exchange and tripped a buzzer.  The clerk looked up at him and smiled.  “How are you today, sir?”  The young man asked.  “What can I do you fer?”  Ennis reached into his pocket and pulled out the gold and diamond bracelet Jack saved for a year to purchase, and handed it to the young man.  “I got this bracelet,”  Ennis began, “And it is all solid gold with real diamonds.  I..I..was thinking that I could pawn it.  How much can you give me for it?”  The clerk, whose name tag read “Theodore” held the bracelet up to the light.  He fetched a small magnifying glass and looked at the clasp for a hallmark.  “Yep, this is a beaut, alright!”  Theodore whistled.  “How much do you want for it?”  Ennis shuffled his feet nervously.  “Whatever you think is fair!”  He whispered.  Theodore placed the bracelet on a small scale and typed in a series of numbers.  “I can do anything up to $150.00.” 

  Jack laid back contentedly on the bedroll, wearing nothing but a diamond and gold bracelet that spelled out the name Ennis in diamonds.  He traced a finger over the glistening stones that spelled out his lover’s name.  Ennis stood on the side of the roll, watching his husband, drinking it all in.  His own bracelet spelled Jack and rested against his wrist.  Jack reached up toward his man and touched his wrist.  “Now remember friend, if you ever need money..”

“Sir??”  It was Theodore.  Ennis looked at him with a start.  “Sir, would you like the $150?  I can go up to $175.00!”  Ennis tried to fight back his tears.  He snatched up the bracelet and shook his head.  He ran through the doors of the Riverton Coin Exchange to face the cold of the morning.




Marie, that breaks my heart. Ennis so broke that he thinks he has to sell the gift from his husband, that´s too sad.......but I couldn´t do it either!

Very touching. Your stories are truly amazing.

Dagi
Title: Re: The Trip to Signal
Post by: Dagi on August 24, 2007, 04:14:08 pm
The Trip to Signal by Toycoon

....... Jack chuckled because for a moment, the stranger resembled the toy cowboy his momma gave him on Jack's ninth birthday, so tall, lean and ... serious.

I can feel the affection Jack is looking at Ennis with from the very beginning...wonderful writing, dear!

Dagi

Title: Re: No Sale
Post by: Dagi on August 24, 2007, 04:17:18 pm
To Ennis, Brokeback Mountain isn't all they have, it is everything he has to give.

Worth to be repeated, friend.
Title: Re: Lonnie: Summer of '62
Post by: Dagi on August 24, 2007, 04:19:04 pm
Thanks for the hospitality Toycoon.  I heard about this thread being the most popular so thought I have a look.  I'm impressed with your stories too.

Hi Almasenior, so good to see you here! So many new faces, it´s amazing........wonderful!

Dagi
Title: Re: No Sale
Post by: Dagi on August 24, 2007, 04:20:33 pm
  Poor Ennis.  So much sentiment, so much love, but no outlet for it, no real way to express it.

Oh yes.  :'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'(
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 24, 2007, 05:00:32 pm
After a good, hot sauna I was just sitting on the lawn, looking at the stars above, sending up a prayer of thanks.........for having found you guys..... :D

and now I feel fit and ready for doing a little archiving work.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 24, 2007, 05:17:17 pm
Spiceylife,
could you please repost Easy for me? And for all the others of course  ;D! It´s one of my all time favorites of your stories!

Dagi
Title: Re: No Sale
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 24, 2007, 11:21:11 pm
Beautiful littlewing.

Thanks so much!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 24, 2007, 11:24:02 pm
It's alright, littlewing.  It was just an observation of mine, which doesn't make it true or correct, of course!  It's probably just the natural ebb and flow of things, which happens all the time.  I wondered whether the ride was slowing down slightly, but not stopping altogether!  Heaven forbid!  That would be an awful thing.  Anyway, maybe the ride will pick up speed again and go faster than it ever has before!

Littlewing, I bet you could carry this thread all by yourself.  I have the feeling you're a very strong person inside.   :)



Thanks, Spicey!  I don't want this thread to ever slow down!  I know what you mean about the ebb and flow of things, though.  I have a feeling that come fall and winter, this thread will really pick up.  I aim to see to it!  :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 24, 2007, 11:25:25 pm
thank you so much, Littlewing. I can´t say it too often. Thank you for giving us such a good time!

Dagi

Dagi, you're as sweet as always!  You really keep me going!  :)  :-*
Title: Re: No Sale
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 24, 2007, 11:26:44 pm
Marie, that breaks my heart. Ennis so broke that he thinks he has to sell the gift from his husband, that´s too sad.......but I couldn´t do it either!

Very touching. Your stories are truly amazing.

Dagi

So very nice of you, Dagi!  I have so many stories I'm working on.  Read on, I'm just about to post another..
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 24, 2007, 11:28:36 pm
You know what Littlewing honey, I think you could do it, single handedly ... carrying the rest of us on your shoulders!! You really are my hero!

Spicey   Littlewing   Susie
(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/18/18_1_107v.gif)

Susie   (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Thanks, Susie!  But it really is fun!  I'm having the time of my life!
Title: Re: No Sale
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 24, 2007, 11:29:15 pm
Oh dear Lord littlewing!  Thank heavens he didn't sell it in the end!  I'm sure my heart stopped there for a minute ...  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_3_1v.gif) ... superb story honey!

(Now don't EVER do that to me again y'hear?!!!)

Susie    (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



 :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:
Title: Re: The Black Truck
Post by: Toycoon on August 24, 2007, 11:29:54 pm
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What a nice thing to post a story from the very beginning, Toycoon. Reading Spiceylife´s words I was thinking of how thankful I am that you started this thread and that I got "sucked in". I love all of you so much! Sorry for being here so little the last time, it doesn't mean at all that this thread has become less important to me.

Dagi

Hiya Miss Dagi,
You are so cute. Ya know I check this thread every day. It simply has become a part of my life. Of course all of you have become an important part of my life, too. I feel as though I know you all so very well. I know everyone's sexual proclivities, at least!
Title: Re: The Black Truck
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 24, 2007, 11:31:04 pm
Hiya Miss Dagi,
You are so cute. Ya know I check this thread every day. It simply has become a part of my life. Of course all of you have become an important part of my life, too. I feel as though I know you all so very well. I know everyone's sexual proclivities, at least!

Awww, Toycoon, this is such a sweet thing to say.  I think the same about you, and all of my buddies here!  My on-line community rocks!
Title: Re: The Black Truck (Part 2)
Post by: Toycoon on August 24, 2007, 11:37:20 pm
I agree, Littlewing. Another terrific follow-up. Like I said before, I'm astounded by your prolificacy. I'm going to post another of the IMDb classics this weekend. Maybe all of us on the board can tag team again like we did with "Ticklish?" That was fun (and sexy).
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on August 24, 2007, 11:40:26 pm
After a good, hot sauna I was just sitting on the lawn, looking at the stars above, sending up a prayer of thanks.........for having found you guys..... :D

and now I feel fit and ready for doing a little archiving work.

Dagi

Aww Dagi,
You sentimental lady! I wish I had a sauna at my house...
Title: Re: The Black Truck
Post by: Dagi on August 24, 2007, 11:43:47 pm
Hiya Miss Dagi,
You are so cute. Ya know I check this thread every day. It simply has become a part of my life. Of course all of you have become an important part of my life, too. I feel as though I know you all so very well. I know everyone's sexual proclivities, at least!


 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: I better check my stories to see what impression I gave you about mine  ;D

Love, Dagi
Title: Hot August Nights 2
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 24, 2007, 11:46:50 pm
Hot August Nights 2 by Littlewing1957

Jack Twist headed to his truck to fetch the potato salad Lureen made the night before.  The Newsome Tractor and Combine Company picnic was in full swing, and every employee was present and accounted for.  Most workers brought their families, friends, significant others.  As far as Jack was concerned, attendance at the company picnic was not really so bad, but it was a duty, a concession he made to keep the peace in his home, and the good- will of his in-laws.  Jack Twist walked back to the section of the park that he reserved for the affair months ago, and placed Lureen's salad among the other vittles. 

Jack had to admit that this year’s picnic was something special.  The food was delicious, and the company was delightful.  Everyone, from toddlers to elderly retired workers, mingled and talked, laughed and ate.  Jack dodged a frisbie thrown by an enthusiastic teenager and moved to one of the tables to make a plate.  Lureen’s potato salad, corn on the cob, marinated short ribs and grilled eggplant was enough for the time being.  “Nice day for a picnic, isn’t it?”  Jack turned to find the voice and looked straight into the aviator glasses of a tall, nicely built blond haired young man who wore navy Bermuda shorts and a Beatles’s Yellow Submarine T-shirt.  There was something terribly familiar about the young man.  Jack looked at him and smiled.

“Yes, I have to agree with you, Friend.”  Was Jack’s reply as he reached beyond the young man to pick up a fork and napkin.  “I’m Jack Twist, and I work for Newsomes as a combine salesman.”  Jack placed his plate on the table and sought the blond man's hand.  The young man’s handshake was firm and a bit sweaty.  “My name is Peter.”  Jack nodded and smiled.  “You look awful familiar.  Have we met before?  Are you are friend of one of our employees?”  Peter’s eyes danced behind the aviator shades.  “No, not really to both of your questions.  But I was invited here.”  Jack wasn’t sure what Peter meant, but he didn’t want to be rude – ask too many questions of a guest, a stranger.  Jack gathered his food and just as he was about to welcome Peter to the festivities, Peter touched his forearm.  He bent down to whisper in Jack’s ear: “You’ll see him again very soon….”
Title: Re: The Black Truck (Part 2)
Post by: Toycoon on August 24, 2007, 11:48:02 pm
Littlewing, this is so good. I love the idea of Jack wanting to 'save' Ennis from sadness. It really seems to be the driving force behind Jack's attraction to Ennis. Maybe it's our reason for our unyeilding devotion to this story; we want to save both of the characters from their sadness and replace it with some joy somehow.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 24, 2007, 11:49:22 pm
You know what Littlewing honey, I think you could do it, single handedly ... carrying the rest of us on your shoulders!! You really are my hero!

Spicey   Littlewing   Susie
(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/18/18_1_107v.gif)

Susie   (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Ya know, Littlewing, yesterday I was thinking about changing the title of the archive thread into " Littlewing´s and Toycoon´s collection with a pinch of Gary, Susie, Spiceylife, Dagi, Scott and newcomers" . ;D  ;D ;D
Title: Re: The Black Truck (Part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 24, 2007, 11:54:19 pm
I love the idea of Jack wanting to 'save' Ennis from sadness. It really seems to be the driving force behind Jack's attraction to Ennis. Maybe it's our reason for our unyeilding devotion to this story; we want to save both of the characters from their sadness and replace it with some joy somehow.

I agree with you, Toycoon!
Title: Re: The Black Truck (Part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 24, 2007, 11:55:58 pm
Maybe all of us on the board can tag team again like we did with "Ticklish?" That was fun (and sexy).

I'm ready, willing, and I'm pretty sure I'm able!  :)  ;)
Title: Re: Hot August Nights 2
Post by: Dagi on August 24, 2007, 11:56:48 pm
Hot August Nights 2 by Littlewing1957

Jack Twist headed to his truck to fetch the potato salad Lureen made the night before.  The Newsome Tractor and Combine Company picnic was in full swing, and every employee was present and accounted for.  Most workers brought their families, friends, significant others.  As far as Jack was concerned, attendance at the company picnic was not really so bad, but it was a duty, a concession he made to keep the peace in his home, and the good- will of his in-laws.  Jack Twist walked back to the section of the park that he reserved for the affair months ago, and placed Lureen's salad among the other vittles. 

Jack had to admit that this year’s picnic was something special.  The food was delicious, and the company was delightful.  Everyone, from toddlers to elderly retired workers, mingled and talked, laughed and ate.  Jack dodged a frisbie thrown by an enthusiastic teenager and moved to one of the tables to make a plate.  Lureen’s potato salad, corn on the cob, marinated short ribs and grilled eggplant was enough for the time being.  “Nice day for a picnic, isn’t it?”  Jack turned to find the voice and looked straight into the aviator glasses of a tall, nicely built blond haired young man who wore navy Bermuda shorts and a Beatles’s Yellow Submarine T-shirt.  There was something terribly familiar about the young man.  Jack looked at him and smiled.

“Yes, I have to agree with you, Friend.”  Was Jack’s reply as he reached beyond the young man to pick up a fork and napkin.  “I’m Jack Twist, and I work for Newsomes as a combine salesman.”  Jack placed his plate on the table and sought the blond man's hand.  The young man’s handshake was firm and a bit sweaty.  “My name is Peter.”  Jack nodded and smiled.  “You look awful familiar.  Have we met before?  Are you are friend of one of our employees?”  Peter’s eyes danced behind the aviator shades.  “No, not really to both of your questions.  But I was invited here.”  Jack wasn’t sure what Peter meant, but he didn’t want to be rude – ask too many questions of a guest, a stranger.  Jack gathered his food and just as he was about to welcome Peter to the festivities, Peter touched his forearm.  He bent down to whisper in Jack’s ear: “You’ll see him again very soon….”


Wow, Marie, it´s getting hot in here  ;D....and I was supposed to go back to bed again.......  ::)

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 24, 2007, 11:57:10 pm
Ya know, Littlewing, yesterday I was thinking about changing the title of the archive thread into " Littlewing´s and Toycoon´s collection with a pinch of Gary, Susie, Spiceylife, Dagi, Scott and newcomers" . ;D  ;D ;D

Dagi, you're so funny!  Sweet, too!  :-*
Title: Re: Hot August Nights 2
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 24, 2007, 11:57:55 pm
Wow, Marie, it´s getting hot in here  ;D....and I was supposed to go back to bed again.......  ::)

Dagi

I'm surprised you're still up!  Isn't it passed your bedtime?
Title: Re: Hot August Nights 2
Post by: Dagi on August 25, 2007, 12:02:26 am
I'm surprised you're still up!  Isn't it passed your bedtime?

My hubby was snoring and my son was coughing........it´s 6 in the morning here.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on August 25, 2007, 12:13:07 am
Hey there Shasta,
Ain't ya gonna write no more stories for us ever? I rather enjoyed your tales of the old west.
Title: Re: The Black Truck (Part 2)
Post by: Dagi on August 25, 2007, 03:41:00 pm
I agree, Littlewing. Another terrific follow-up. Like I said before, I'm astounded by your prolificacy. I'm going to post another of the IMDb classics this weekend. Maybe all of us on the board can tag team again like we did with "Ticklish?" That was fun (and sexy).

I really feel like writing, but I think I need a push or something. Tag teaming sounds great! I´m in!

Dagi
Title: Re: Hot August Nights 2
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 25, 2007, 11:33:33 pm
Ah Littlewing... it's that beautiful mysterious blond guy again!  I'm just so intrigued as to where you're taking us with this one!   Gorgeous Littlewing!

Susie     (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

ps.  I can tell you love your food as much as I do ... your descriptions are so mouthwatering!  Have you ever read the book "Chocolat"? If you love chocolate it's worth it for the descriptions alone, never mind the excellent story .... I'm positively drooling over every page!

Thanks, Susie!  Yes, I love food!  I haven't read Chocolat, but I did see most of the movie.  I can't help but work food into a lot of my E&J stories.  Good food and good love?  I'm such a hedonist!
Title: Re: The Black Truck (Part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 25, 2007, 11:34:22 pm
I'll give it a go, just don't expect anything too profound ... I could shoot old man Twist for you again if you like!

Susie     (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


 :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:   :laugh:
Title: Supper up on Brokeback
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 25, 2007, 11:38:40 pm
Supper up on Brokeback by Littlewing1957

A BBM Slice of Life

Hey you guys, my sister says this story blows, but I kinda like it.  I'm posting it anyway!  :laugh:

Ennis rode into camp and found Jack asleep by the dinner fire.  Ennis dismounted his mare and walked soundlessly to the tent, trying his hardest not to wake Jack.  Ennis looked around camp and shook his head.  He crawled into his “home” away from home and searched for a can of beans to put on for supper.  Jack hadn’t prepared a thing!

Jack was still sleeping soundly when Ennis joined him on the ground next to the fire.  He opened a can of peaches and beans, and after placing the beans on the fire to warm them, poured himself a cup of whiskey.  Ennis smiled at Jack.  He was amused and amazed all at once.  That Jack Twist could sleep through a hurricane!

After a few minutes, Ennis removed the beans from the fire.  He fetched a few plates and loaded them with beans, peaches, and a few day old stone biscuits that were lying by the fire in aluminum foil.  Ennis sat the plates down on a log, and leaned down over Jack.  He traced Jack’s forehead with a finger, but he still slept.  Ennis thumped Jack’s lips with his forefinger.  This time, Jack’s blue eyes opened, and he jumped a bit.  “Hold on, Rodeo!”  Ennis began as he soothed his friend.  “I’m sorry if I scared ya, but I had to wake you up.  Dinner is served!”  Jack sighed and smiled at his lover.  He was grateful that Ennis wasn’t angry that he didn’t prepare supper.  Jack held Ennis’ gaze and pulled his head closer.  “Can I kiss you?”  It was Jack.  Ennis smiled and shrugged.  “Why not?  I think people should do whatever they want to do.”  Jack laughed and placed a tender, delicate kiss on Ennis lips.  Ennis deepened the kiss and moaned.  He released his lover, and handed him his supper.
Title: Emma Del Mar-Wiley
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 26, 2007, 01:02:36 am
Emma Del Mar-Wiley by Littlewing1957

Emma drove her new Chevy Sedan down the streets of Riverton searching for a particular address.  Mrs. Wiley was a Riverton native born and bred, but she only once, in her entire life, passed through the part of town that her young brother, Ennis Del Mar, called home.  Emma found Ennis' trailer only after asking a few people for directions.  The park was gloomy and eerily quiet.  Emma parked her car a few feet from Ennis’ trailer and was suddenly overcome with a sense of sadness and guilt.  Emma couldn’t help but think that things could have been very different if only she had stood up to her new husband.  She should have insisted that Ennis stay with them and finish his schooling.  But Emma was a newlywed in love, and she chose her husband over her brother.  Emma locked her car and walked up to Ennis’ small door.  She had to put a few things right.

Ennis, hair unkempt and breath reeking of whiskey, opened the door on the second knock.  He reeled back when he saw his sister, as he hadn’t laid eyes on her in many years.  “Emma!”  Ennis yelled, tears in his eyes.  Emma grabbed her younger brother, and they stood, on the threshold of his tiny trailer, embracing, rocking, and weeping.

Emma sat on Ennis’ battered sofa, a can of pop in her hands.  She took in the dreary surroundings and fought back the panic that threatened to send her running for the door, out of Ennis’ life forever.

“So, what brings you here to see me after all of these years?”  Ennis asked his sister as he sat opposite her on his only chair.  Emma studied her can of Coke and remained silent for awhile.  Ennis waited patiently for an answer.

“I just wanted to see you..see how you’re getting on.  We haven’t been in touch and I’ve missed you.  How have you been?”  Emma placed her coke on a small table and took one of her brother’s hands in hers.

“I’m okay, I guess.”  Ennis began.  “I’ve been better, but not by much."  Ennis ran his fingers through his spiky hair.  "I can’t complain, and why bother?  No one to listen, anyway!”  Ennis looked away from his sister and pulled his hand back.  Emma sighed and rose from the couch, looked around the confines of Ennis’ gloomy and depressing home. 

“I saw your girls!”  Emma offered, as she picked up a blue coffeepot and studied it.  The news startled Ennis.  He frowned and nodded, but said nothing.

“Listen, Ennis, I’m here to see you and find out how you’re doing.  I know I didn’t do right by you, and I plan to make up for that.  Ennis…”  Emma walked over to her brother and placed a hand on his shoulder.

“Listen, I know what…!  Why don’t we go get something to eat, how about the Knife and Fork?  We can catch up, you can tell me all about what’s going on with you, and I’ll fill you in on what’s happening with me.  What do you say, Ennis?  Let me buy you dinner?”  Ennis smiled sadly and rose from his chair.  He walked past his sister and looked at his reflection in his closet door mirror.  He looked decent enough to eat at The Knife and Fork.  Ennis turned to his sister, nodded and opened his closet to fetch his coat.  Emma couldn’t help but notice a picture postcard of a snow capped mountain hanging by a tack in Ennis’ closet.  She smiled knowingly as she saw 2 bloody shirts…

Title: Re: Supper up on Brokeback
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 26, 2007, 01:03:28 am
I think it's nice.  It's nice to be awakened with a kiss and dinner.

Thanks, Almasenior!  It is nice to be handed supper after a tender kiss, isn't it?
Title: Re: Supper up on Brokeback
Post by: Toycoon on August 26, 2007, 10:31:41 am
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“Can I kiss you?”  It was Jack.  Ennis smiled and shrugged.  “Why not?  I think people should do whatever they want to do.”  Jack laughed and placed a tender, delicate kiss on Ennis lips.  Ennis deepened the kiss and moaned.  He released his lover, and handed him his supper.

Hey Littlewing1957,
This is really special. Ennis waking Jack up with a canned beans supper. Awww, yer sister don't know nothin'!
Title: Re: Emma Del Mar-Wiley
Post by: Toycoon on August 26, 2007, 10:36:06 am
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Emma parked her car a few feet from Ennis’ trailer and was suddenly overcome with a sense of sadness and guilt.  Emma couldn’t help but think that things could have been very different if only she had stood up to her new husband.  She should have insisted that Ennis stay with them and finish his schooling.  But Emma was a newlywed in love, and she chose her husband over her brother.  Emma locked her car and walked up to Ennis’ small door.  She had to put a few things right.

How interesting! I've always wondered about the rest of the DelMar family. Maybe you'll let us know what her take is on the Earl and Rich incident.
Title: Jack's Hands
Post by: Toycoon on August 26, 2007, 03:34:16 pm
Jack's Hands by Toycoon

Exhausted from his four hour ride back from the sheep, Ennis climbed off his horse then hobbled to the boulder where he struggled with his cowboy boots, finally kicking them off, each landing with a thud.

Jack knelt at Ennis' feet, never taking his blue eyes off of this man who had penetrated his every waking thought for several days; Jack cupped the balls of Ennis' swollen feet in both hands, spreading his fingers over the length, squeezing and pressing his thumbs into the sore heels then gripping Ennis' tired ankles.

Electric jolts ran up and down Ennis' spine and his breath came heavy when he felt Jack's fingers creep up his pants, parting his trembling legs then Jack's hands finally resting on Ennis lap; a crumpled smile spread slowly across Ennis' face as he wondered what he could have done to deserve these incredible sensations, so hot it that made him shiver.
Title: Re: Supper up on Brokeback
Post by: Dagi on August 26, 2007, 03:48:06 pm
Supper up on Brokeback by Littlewing1957

  He fetched a few plates and loaded them with beans, peaches, and a few day old stone biscuits that were lying by the fire in aluminum foil....


Mmmm, I think Ennis could serve me stone beans and a few day old peaches, if only he let me kiss him before I have to eat it  :laugh:.

What ever you write, Marie, I always picture our boys clearly in my mind, sounds and smells included  ;D! You rock!

Dagi
Title: Re: Emma Del Mar-Wiley
Post by: Dagi on August 26, 2007, 03:56:40 pm
Emma Del Mar-Wiley by Littlewing1957

“I’m okay, I guess.”  Ennis began.  “I’ve been better, but not by much."  Ennis ran his fingers through his spiky hair.  "I can’t complain, and why bother?  No one to listen, anyway!” 


So sad. But if his sister had let him live with her and her husband he would not have met Jack....Beautiful and rich in details, as always  :D.

Dagi
Title: Re: Jack's Hands
Post by: Dagi on August 26, 2007, 04:28:53 pm
Jack's Hands by Toycoon

Exhausted from his four hour ride back from the sheep, Ennis climbed off his horse then hobbled to the boulder where he struggled with his cowboy boots, finally kicking them off, each landing with a thud.

Jack knelt at Ennis' feet, never taking his blue eyes off of this man who had penetrated his every waking thought for several days; Jack cupped the balls of Ennis' swollen feet in both hands, spreading his fingers over the length, squeezing and pressing his thumbs into the sore heels then gripping Ennis' tired ankles.

Electric jolts ran up and down Ennis' spine and his breath came heavy when he felt Jack's fingers creep up his pants, parting his trembling legs then Jack's hands finally resting on Ennis lap; a crumpled smile spread slowly across Ennis' face as he wondered what he could have done to deserve these incredible sensations, so hot it that made him shiver.

Phew, it´s getting hot  here! Sexy story, Toycoon! And I just love Ennis´s crumpled smile...

In case that´s supposed to be the tag team story, I´ll write part 3!

Dagi
Title: Jack's Hands Part 2
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 27, 2007, 12:25:28 am
Jack's Hands Part 2 by Littlewing1957

Jack smiled back at his lover as he placed his hand on Ennis’ inner thigh.  Ennis looked into Jack’s blue eyes and nodded.  He didn’t have to utter a word - all was understood.

But just as fast, Jack thought better of it.  He pulled his hand away from Ennis’ thigh and started to back away from his lover.  “Jack, what the heck?”  Ennis started, shaking his head, wanting, needing more.

“Everything will be okay, Friend!”  Jack whispered as he pulled himself to his feet.  He walked behind Ennis and placed both hands on his lover’s shoulders.  Jack bent down to kiss Ennis' cheeks.  “Let me feed you first, okay?  I have something special planned just for you.”  Ennis smiled at the words.  “And when supper is done, I’ll give you everything; do anything you ask."  Ennis reached behind and caressed the hands that he loved so much.  He could only image the delights that awaited him.

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: spiceylife on August 27, 2007, 08:47:09 am

This is part two to Dead Heat, rated NC-17 - Adults Only.  I apologize for the length. ::)  Sorry, Toycoon!  If it's just too long or doesn't fit here, please let me know and I'll take it off.  Y'all know how I write by now, I guess.  (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/wink.gif)

For Dagi, Who Will Not Let Me Chicken Out...

Wild Horses  by spiceylife

Who's gonna ride your wild horses
Who's gonna drown in your blue sea
Who's gonna taste your salt water kisses
Who's gonna tame the heart of thee


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“It was your crazy-ass idea, Jack…”

Ennis had been patiently listening to Jack bitching ever since they got back from the lake, caked in dried-up mud and both limping a little.  Jack, naturally, thought he was the worst off.

“Well, if you didn’t fall like that, Ennis, I never woulda slipped on my ass. Funniest thing I ever seen, your face.  I’m thinkin’ I woulda won that race, ya know.”

Jack paused, rubbing his backside gingerly.

“My butt aches somethin’ fierce now, though.  Don’t know if I can ride or bend down to cook or wash nothin’ today, and it’ll be worse tomorrow.  I’m hurtin’, Ennis!”

“Jesus, Jack!  Maybe… I dunno…soak it in some warm water or somethin’.  That outta ease the pain some.”

Jack raised an eyebrow, looking doubtful.

“Well, how’m I gonna do that without a bathtub?”

He walked around the campsite for a bit, wincing in pain, before his eyes landed on the largest water bucket.

“How ‘bout that then?  My ass fit in that?” he asked, pointing towards the pail.

And that’s how Jack came to be sitting in a bucket of steamy water, jeans around his ankles, ass wedged inside, trying to hot-soak away his misery.  Ennis tried not to laugh out loud at the sight.  No easy thing.  He pressed his lips together tightly and stayed well behind Jack, out of sight.  A low chuckle escaped him once or twice, an uncontrollable gut-aching laugh threatening to burst out at any second.  It was the funniest thing Ennis had ever seen, aside from Jack’s slide in the mud.  For the second time that day, Ennis wished he had a snapshot of this ‘Jack’ moment.  And I sure as hell won’t be usin’ that bucket for cartin’ up cookin water any time soon, Ennis laughed to himself

Jack glared over his shoulder at Ennis whenever he heard a laugh, but mostly he sat looking forlorn. 

Some half an hour later, the bitching started up again.

“Sheeit!  Water’s goin’ cold!  My ass is freezin’.  Goddamn it…I’m still sore as hell.”

Ennis quickly looked the other way as Jack wrapped a towel around himself.  Jack rubbed the back of his neck, thinking hard about his aching bottom.

“Ya know, I’ve got some massage oil in my bag.  Use it after rodeoin’ and stuff when I take a hard fall.  Helps to work out the pain.  Can’t reach my ass though, can I?”

Jack looked at Ennis and suddenly grinned like a Cheshire cat.

“You’re gonna have to massage my butt for me!” he announced.

Ennis’s eyes widened in disbelief and he backed up a little, staring at Jack.

“Whoa, Jack, whoa!  Massage your BUTT?  Uh…um…what-…I don’t do…that’s-…I don’t know bout that.  That’s kinda weird, ain’t it?  Ain’t there somethin’ else we can try?  Must be somethin’ else…”

“Well, what, Ennis?  If you don’t rub the knots outta my butt, I ain’t gonna be able to do nothin’ around here to help.  Sure can’t ride.  You’ll be on yer own, have to do everything yerself.  Come on, bud.  I’d do it for you.”

And that’s how Ennis came to be pacing up and down outside the tent, stopping to scuff his boot hard in the dirt occasionally while Jack prepared himself on the towel inside.

“Okay, Ennis.  I’m READY!”

Ennis stopped pacing and expertly bit his fingernail to the quick.  He tried to be practical about it.  He needed to help his friend out, but still…  the strange feelings washing over him were unfamiliar and puzzling, and too complex for Ennis to work out.  He sighed and pushed the tent flap back. 

Jack lay on his stomach, naked on top of the bedroll and a towel, his firm, round buttocks now tinged a glowing pink from the hot water, with a perfect red circle running around them and across the back of his thighs from the pressure of the bucket edge.  The sight was so comical that Ennis needed to laugh again.  Luckily Jack couldn’t see the quiet amusement in his eyes.

But the smile faded as Ennis stood there, chewing on his nail once more, uncertain what to do or where to place himself. 

“Oil’s right there, bud, if you wanna start anytime soon…”

“Jack, I ain’t never done this before.  What do you want me to do exactly, huh?”

“Just massage, Ennis!  You know how to massage, right?  Just put the oil on your hands and rub my ass hard.  It won’t bite, you know…”

Finally, Ennis knew he couldn’t stand there any longer, doing nothing.  He sat down next to Jack, picked up the greasy bottle and pretended to read the smudged label, slowly and very carefully, mouthing the words, putting off the inevitable.  Jack tilted his head to the side and looked up at him, wondering why Ennis was taking so long.

“Listen, cowboy, you can’t massage my butt from way over there.  You hafta sit on my legs to massage my butt good and proper.  From the side your arms’ll start to ache after a while.  You gotta be sittin’on my legs.”

Ennis stood again in silence, his discomfort palpable.  Jack encouraged him in his gentle way.

“Come on, Ennis.  It’s alright.  I need your help here, friend.”

Ennis scratched his head, still hesitating and unsure.  He knew he had to do this for Jack, but his mind grappled with the uneasy feeling that some part of him really wanted to touch Jack in this way.   

“Well- …well, alright then.  This feels weird, Jack.  Just this once, to get ya back in the saddle.”

Ennis stepped over Jack, legs apart, straddling either side of his hips.  Another big sigh and Ennis sat himself down on Jack’s thighs.  Jack let out a breathy groan that made Ennis blush with embarrassment and shift uncomfortably.  Grabbing the bottle, Ennis quickly poured the oil into his palm, rubbed his hands together and swallowed anxiously, eyeing Jack’s backside for the second time that day.  He gently placed one hand on each of Jack's buttocks and rubbed the firm flesh round and round.  Immediately all of Ennis’s blood seemed to rush southward, the instant hard-on straining against his jeans.  Ennis watched in fascination as Jack rotated his ass in small circles underneath his hands, giving a moan of pleasure that went straight to Ennis’s dick.  He couldn’t drag his eyes or hands away from Jack’s bottom now if he tried.

Ennis wanted to quieten his rowdy breathing down, but a rapid-fire pulse drummed loudly in his ears, drowning out sound.  Touching Jack’s taut, muscular cheeks made Ennis feel hot and sexy, and Ennis knew he should stop right now, but he couldn’t.  Wouldn’t.  The gorgeous curve of the boy’s ass was irresistible and Ennis felt himself sway and succumb to the temptation that was Jack Twist.  He palmed Jack’s butt, bringing his thumbs into play and using them to push and slide the oil over Jack’s warm flesh, ever closer to Jack’s forbidden crease and all that lay between.  His thumbs worked their way closer and closer, and Ennis felt lightheaded with lust.  He wanted to delve in, in every way possible.  He fucking wanted Jack.

Ennis stood suddenly to find the bottle of oil he’d tossed behind him, almost losing his balance in the process.  He squeezed a good amount onto his palm again, glancing down at the massive bulge in his pants but not letting himself think about what that meant.  When Ennis turned to sit back down on Jack’s thighs, he stopped dead, as though he’d been shot.  Oh, Jesus.  Jack.  Jack…  A wildfire of unfamiliar emotion and passion raced through his veins.  While Ennis’s back was turned, Jack had spread his legs wide apart, and Ennis knew why.  Ennis could see Jack’s balls, big, hairy and enticing, laying in stark contrast to the whiteness of the towel beneath them.  Jack’s crease was dark and open, luring Ennis in, and he wanted to map every inch of Jack with his mouth and lips and tongue.  The sight of Jack, so fucking beautiful, the thought of what Ennis wanted to do to him, made him almost whimper.  He fucking needed Jack.

Ennis knelt between Jack’s outstretched legs, in a position of dominance but completely in awe of Jack’s power over him. Again he touched Jack, massaging his parted cheeks and staring down at the treasure, this gift, that was being offered up to him. Then slowly, surely, Ennis’s world tilted as he held his breath and allowed his fingers to trail up and down the line between Jack’s buttocks, along that sensitive crease, fingertips brushing over Jack’s ready hole.  The game was over, and they both knew it.  Ennis’s slick fingers worked their magic on Jack and he raised his hips up off the towel and came to his knees in expectation, head still on the bedroll, panting for Ennis, giving unspoken permission for Ennis to do whatever he desired.

Ennis moved a hand under Jack, fondling his large balls one by one and then moving past to wrap firmly around Jack’s erection, caressing along the thick, heavy length and teasing the moist head with nimble fingers.  Ennis’s other hand lingered at Jack’s entrance, fingers circling, rubbing, spreading and pushing inside slightly, over and over again, before finally plunging in.  The thought washed over Ennis; nothing in his short, hardscrabble life had ever felt as good and right as being with Jack in this way.

Two oiled-up fingers glided in easily and Ennis watched, all slack-jawed and uneven breathing, as he pushed in and out of Jack, moving faster but keeping a rhythm, angling and crooking his long fingers at the same time, probing and exploring Jack’s body.  Jack was almost beside himself with want, pelvis gyrating back and forth in harmony with Ennis’s silky glide and stroke in front, his in and out fingers arousing from behind.  Ennis gently brushed his fingertips across one spot inside that left Jack writhing and moaning and pounding the bedroll with his fist.  Ennis briefly wondered, through the lusty fog clouding his brain, what he’d done to cause that.  Then the fog cleared, and all the jumbled, urgent thoughts in his head narrowed down to just one thing he needed to know, and wanted to do…

“Jack?  Jack?”  Ennis’s voice cracked on the name.  It was hard to talk.

“Ennis…”  Jack could barely form words, either, his voice husky and desperate.

“Can I, Jack?”

Christ, what if Jack says no…?  Oh, shit, don’t say no to me, boy.

“Do it.  Do it now, Ennis.  Fuck.”

Ennis leapt to his feet and quickly whipped down his old blue denims that were like a straightjacket now, too tight and restricting against the hardness of his groin.  His hands shook slightly as he applied the oil to his large cock, closing his eyes and stopping when he stroked himself too firmly and almost came.  Ennis felt like a man possessed, so unlike himself, and yet somehow a bewildering sense of freedom lingered.  He hadn’t known he was a prisoner, or what he was captive of.  At this moment, all he knew was that he had to be with Jack.

He knelt once more behind Jack, but Jack suddenly had other ideas.  He spun around and quickly stood, grabbing Ennis roughly by the shoulders, lifting him up and pushing him backwards, towards the old chair in the corner of the tent that kept their clothing off the sometimes damp ground.  Ennis almost stumbled and looked over at Jack in surprise.  The wild look in Jack’s eyes told Ennis he wasn’t the only one who needed this so desperately.  Jack’s face was a picture of bold, raw hunger.  He swept their clothing off the chair with one hand and shoved Ennis onto the seat.

“Sit down, cowboy.  Now.  And take off yer shirt,” Jack growled at Ennis. 

They locked eyes for the longest time, Jack standing in front of Ennis, hands on his hips, naked and demanding, and Ennis did as he was told.  And then Jack straddled Ennis’s lap, his ass hovering over Ennis’s well-oiled cock for a second before Jack reached down and took Ennis in hand.  Both moaned as Jack positioned Ennis at his entrance, rubbing the lubricated head over his hole before sliding and wriggling himself down, inch by inch, until Ennis was completely inside Jack.  Jack grunted, his jaw tightening as he clenched his teeth together hard.  A ragged breath escaped tense lips.  Neither man moved.  Both sucked in air, waiting, trying to steady themselves.  They stared at each other, a myriad of wild, unspoken emotions crackling through the air between them, and then Jack swept in to kiss Ennis hard and wet.  He held onto Ennis’s shoulders and began to fuck him, a slow glide and grind up and down.  Ennis was frantic.  He needed more pace, had to buck and thrust himself up into Jack, had to… but Jack put a hand on Ennis’s heaving chest, settling his urgency, pulling him back, reigning in his wild horse.

“Easy there…easy…easy… That’s it, Ennis.  Soon,” Jack whispered and his promise settled Ennis because he trusted Jack.

Jack took control, picking up the pace moments later, riding Ennis hard.  Ennis’s eyes never left Jack’s face as he reached down to touch Jack again between his legs, aroused by the hard, muscular lines of a body so similar to his own, wildly attracted to the pure maleness of Jack.  The blue of Jack’s eyes seemed to penetrate Ennis’s heart, leaving it full to overflowing.

Ennis swallowed hard and looked up at Jack, his pleading eyes asking the burning question.  Jack nodded slightly to Ennis, leaned forward and purred into his ear the words Ennis was waiting to hear...

“Yeah, cowboy.  Your turn to ride.  C’mon, Ennis.  Now, baby.  Fuck me now…”

Ennis groaned at the words, at how they were whispered so dirty-sweet in his ear.  He dug his heels firmly into the ground and held Jack’s hips tightly.  Then Ennis unleashed his desire all over Jack, thrusting into him desperately as Jack rode out the tidal wave.  Jack moved easily with Ennis, watching in wonder as the normally restrained ranch hand lost all control of himself in the most beautiful, passionate way.

“Oh, Ennis…” Jack whispered, awestruck.

The look on Ennis’s face was enough to bring Jack to orgasm, and Jack’s grunting, gasping spasms and warm come spurting on Ennis’s stomach proved too much for Ennis.  He came close behind, trembling and spent.  Jack lay himself down, in love and exhausted, on Ennis’s sweat-slicked chest.  Ennis put his arms around his friend and held him so close and tight that their breathing soon blended naturally.  Their chests rose and fell in perfect, harmonious time.

Ennis, man of few words, didn’t know what to say.  How the hell could he speak to Jack about things he didn’t understand himself?  Nothing sounded right, even in his own damn head.  It was confusing and powerful and beyond him.  Ennis couldn’t put the mixed-up pieces of their puzzle together just yet, but his tired, baffled mind remembered something he should tell his best friend …

“Jack?”

“Mmm?”  Jack’s voice, so sleepy and content.

Ennis brought a hand up to gently cup Jack’s chin, making him look at Ennis.

Ennis wanted to drown in those blue, blue eyes.

He pointed behind Jack.

“Your butt’s fixed, Rodeo.”   

(http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o304/spiceylife/guyslaughing.jpg)           

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 27, 2007, 12:54:56 pm
Gary pulled the plug of his computer only 6 hours ago and I already miss him like hell  :(.

I´ll come back after my full body massage to read all the new stories  :D.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: tiveronicax2 on August 27, 2007, 02:52:41 pm
Hi Toycoon,
                Now, I see, I didn't know how far I could go with my Ennis and Jimbo story, so I cleaned
up and elimanated the passionate prose--But I love what you wrote--thanx for showing me~
                                                                                            tiveronicax2
Title: Re: Jack's Hands Part 2
Post by: Dagi on August 27, 2007, 03:30:06 pm
Jack's Hands Part 2 by Littlewing1957

Jack smiled back at his lover as he placed his hand on Ennis’ inner thigh.  Ennis looked into Jack’s blue eyes and nodded.  He didn’t have to utter a word - all was understood.

But just as fast, Jack thought better of it.  He pulled his hand away from Ennis’ thigh and started to back away from his lover.  “Jack, what the heck?”  Ennis started, shaking his head, wanting, needing more.

“Everything will be okay, Friend!”  Jack whispered as he pulled himself to his feet.  He walked behind Ennis and placed both hands on his lover’s shoulders.  Jack bent down to kiss Ennis cheeks.  “Let me feed you first, okay?  I have something special planned just for you.”  Ennis smiled at the words.  “And when supper is done, I’ll give you everything; do anything you ask."  Ennis reached behind and caressed the hands that he loved so much.  He could only image that delights that awaited him.



Mmmm I can´t wait to hear what Jack is going to serve fo dinner  :D and for dessert  ;D...Marie, you are so good at writing about food......and about Jack and Ennis!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 27, 2007, 03:40:31 pm
This is part two to Dead Heat, rated NC-17 - Adults Only.  I apologize for the length. ::)  Sorry, Toycoon!  If it's just too long or doesn't fit here, please let me know and I'll take it off.  Y'all know how I write by now, I guess.  (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/wink.gif)

For Dagi, Who Will Not Let Me Chicken Out...

Wild Horses  by spiceylife   



Aaaahh Robyn, I knew it would be worth being unyielding  ;D. That was one of the hottest stories ever!!!
It was funny, tender and loving, and it was more than hot ( you should have seen me with my cheeks blushing and my breath going heavily  :o ;D) -  I love it! What a perfect work! Thank you so much!!
( I can´t speak for Toycoon here, but I think it is NOT too long - and it fits perfectly!!)

Dagi

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 27, 2007, 04:09:48 pm
http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,12653.0.html

Susie has begun to post old IMDb Jack with Ennis treasures! Thank you so much, Susie!!  :-* :-* :-*

Dagi
Title: Re: Supper up on Brokeback
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 27, 2007, 09:38:02 pm
Mmmm, I think Ennis could serve me stone beans and a few day old peaches, if only he let me kiss him before I have to eat it  :laugh:.

What ever you write, Marie, I always picture our boys clearly in my mind, sounds and smells included  ;D! You rock!

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi!
Title: Re: Emma Del Mar-Wiley
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 27, 2007, 09:38:54 pm
So sad. But if his sister had let him live with her and her husband he would not have met Jack....Beautiful and rich in details, as always  :D.

Dagi

This is very true, Dagi!  I hadn't even considered this!   :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 27, 2007, 09:56:43 pm
This is part two to Dead Heat, rated NC-17 - Adults Only.  I apologize for the length. ::)  Sorry, Toycoon!  If it's just too long or doesn't fit here, please let me know and I'll take it off.  Y'all know how I write by now, I guess.  (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/wink.gif)

For Dagi, Who Will Not Let Me Chicken Out...

Wild Horses  by spiceylife

Who's gonna ride your wild horses
Who's gonna drown in your blue sea
Who's gonna taste your salt water kisses
Who's gonna tame the heart of thee


(http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o304/spiceylife/EnnisandJacklean.jpg)


“It was your crazy-ass idea, Jack…”

Ennis had been patiently listening to Jack bitching ever since they got back from the lake, caked in dried-up mud and both limping a little.  Jack, naturally, thought he was the worst off.

“Well, if you didn’t fall like that, Ennis, I never woulda slipped on my ass. Funniest thing I ever seen, your face.  I’m thinkin’ I woulda won that race, ya know.”

Jack paused, rubbing his backside gingerly.


(http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o304/spiceylife/guyslaughing.jpg)           



My wings are clipped and I can't fly.  I'm lying flat out on the ground!  Spicey, this is masterful!  So hot and sexy that I had to read it in sections!  This tale moves like a freight train, and the writing is brilliant!  Spicey, don't you dare remove your story!  I knew we were in for something special, but I wasn't expecting anything like this!  Wonderful!  Amazing!  Love the images, by the way.  The pic of Ennis and Jack sitting on the log is my all-time favorite!
Title: Re: Jack's Hands Part 2
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 27, 2007, 11:12:03 pm
Gorgeous Littlewing! You write so beautifully my dear.

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



Thanks so much, SusieBaby!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 27, 2007, 11:17:02 pm
Ah thanks for mentioning that Dagi.  :-* It's going to take some time though, perhaps I'll do a few pages at a time.  I'm having so much fun reading all the old stories again ... Superb writing everyone!!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Awww, Susie, thanks so much for doing this for us!  I got misty eyed there reading over our classic stories.  I can't believe you saved them all!  :)  Thanks again, Susie!  This is a labor of love!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on August 27, 2007, 11:24:20 pm
Yabadaba, Susiebell! Who knew you'd archived all them old chapters of our favorite fanfic game from IMDb?
I'd plum forgot all about them! Remember when Malina, Adpaduch, Shasta and Daphne used to play? Some of those stories are from before you even started to entertain us with yer musings. How'd you manage to save 'em?
Title: Emma Del Mar-Wiley (Part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 27, 2007, 11:45:55 pm
Emma Del Mar-Wiley (Part 2) by Littlewing1957

Text of a dinner conversation between Ennis Del Mar and Mrs. Emma Del Mar-Wiley

Emma:  What looks good?

Ennis:  I think I’ll have the meat loaf and mashed potatoes.  You?

Emma:  Fried Chicken with a side of mustard greens.  We can have chocolate cake, or ice cream, or both for dessert?
 
Ennis:  Okay.  I’ll have the chocolate cake.

Emma:  So, little brother, how have you really been?  You’re lookin’ good.

Ennis:  *sigh* I’ve been better.  I’m okay, though.

Emma:  I was really sorry to hear about the divorce.  I saw Alma the same time I checked in on the girls.  She’s doin’ okay for herself.. a new husband, a new baby.

Ennis:  Yeah.

Emma:  Uh, Ennis, did I say something wrong?  If you don’t want to talk about Alma, I won’t mention her again.  I’m sorry, Baby.

Ennis:  No, no no, I’m just trying to get used to you being here.  I never was a big talker, you know that, Emma.

Emma:  Yeah, I know.  You know I know it!

Ennis:  Yep.

Emma:  Ennis, uh, you seeing someone special?  You’re entitled, you know?

Ennis:  No.  Ain’t got no one special.  I’m not ready for nothin’ like that right now.

Emma:  Oh?  Ennis, are you sure you’re okay? 
 
Ennis:  Yeah.  Listen, here comes the waitress.  Let’s put in our orders.

They order, waitress leaves

Ennis:  So how are you doin’, Emma?  Looks like you’ve lost weight, Sugar.

Emma:  I’m fine, thanks.  After the divorce I started working on myself.  It’s not that I’m looking for another man; I’m not ready for that, either.  I just want to make myself better for me.  Do you understand, Ennis?

Ennis:  Sure.  I understand.  You look good, Emma.  How are my niece and nephew?

Emma:  Oh, they’re fine.  Tammy is in her freshman year at Junior College, and Darren is in the Army Reserve.  He works as a mechanic at one of the shops in town.  I see your girls are doing well.

Ennis:  Yeah, Alma Jr. is getting married real soon.  Say, did she invite you to the wedding?

Emma:  Yes, she did.  I’m so excited!  We’ll all be there, Ennis.  I can’t wait to see you walk her down the aisle.  KE will be there, too.  Have you seen KE lately?

Ennis:  I saw him last about 2 years ago.  We don’t get along too good, as you know, but we’re civil.  We’ll work on it, I guess.

Emma:  That’s good.  I paid KE a visit right before I came here to see you.  We had a nice long talk.  Uh Ennis, KE told me some things that really disturbed me.  Listen, Baby, I gotta ask you if the things he said are really true.  Do you mind me asking?  Some of what he told me is not pretty, but Ennis, I gotta know…

To be Continued
Title: Re: Emma Del Mar-Wiley (Part 2)
Post by: Toycoon on August 28, 2007, 12:03:09 am
Quote
That’s good.  I paid KE a visit right before I came here to see you.  We had a nice long talk.  Uh Ennis, KE told me some things that really disturbed me.  Listen, Baby, I gotta ask you if the things he said are really true.  Do you mind me asking?  Some of what he told me is not pretty, but Ennis, I gotta know...

Ohwee Littlewing,
Is she gonna ask him about Earl and Rich or is Ennis gonna come out to his elder sister?
The mystery behind his sister's visit continues.... I can't wait to find out!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: LauraGigs on August 28, 2007, 12:25:00 am
Christ Spiceylife, I really loved the one about the butt massage!  So comical in the beginning.  And what great buildup/foreplay!  Whew!! 

 :o

(Toycoon, are there any chapters from the IMDB game that are still missing?  I have a couple.)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: malina on August 28, 2007, 03:15:07 am
Hi Everyone..

I've just dropped in to lurk and to read selections. I am absolutely in awe...the talent, the love, the friendship. My sweeties, I am deeply admiring and a bit envious... this is a beautiful, beautiful thing! But I know you don't need me to tell you that!

 :-* kisses  :-* ... keep it up!

xo m.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: malina on August 28, 2007, 05:01:53 am
I'd love to read another one of your stories.. they are all so wonderful, they always leave me breathless!  I still get choked up about that hug by the lake, where Ennis relaxes his grip, turns around in Jack's arms, and holds him face to face... see, here I go again ... (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_9_9.gif) 

Love Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Susie, I can't believe you still remember that!! After this whole wealth of stories you guys have here....
Well, I'm going to read some more, and maybe I'll get inspired! In the meantime, kisses to you... and littlewing, and spicey, a Dagi, and toycoon, and Gary... oh, has he gone away? Not for long I hope...

I miss you guys! I am here in spirit..  :)

xo m.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: LauraGigs on August 28, 2007, 10:42:52 am
Quote
“OK, keep yer shirt on!”  Jack grinned, lifting his feet back up onto Ennis’ lap and carrying on with the crossword.  Ennis smiled to himself.

I love this.  You totally nailed the characters!   8)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: LauraGigs on August 28, 2007, 10:44:32 am
Malina!!  Where you been?  You know you belong back here in the flock, you lovely lost sheep!   :)
Title: Re: Emma Del Mar-Wiley (Part 2)
Post by: Dagi on August 28, 2007, 01:58:25 pm
Emma Del Mar-Wiley (Part 2) by Littlewing1957

Text of a dinner conversation between Ennis Del Mar and Mrs. Emma Del Mar-Wiley

Emma:  That’s good.  I paid KE a visit right before I came here to see you.  We had a nice long talk.  Uh Ennis, KE told me some things that really disturbed me.  Listen, Baby, I gotta ask you if the things he said are really true.  Do you mind me asking?  Some of what he told me is not pretty, but Ennis, I gotta know…

To be Continued


I love your ideas for stories! And I´m really curious now what she´s gonna ask him....

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on August 28, 2007, 02:00:22 pm
Hi Everyone..

I've just dropped in to lurk and to read selections. I am absolutely in awe...the talent, the love, the friendship. My sweeties, I am deeply admiring and a bit envious... this is a beautiful, beautiful thing! But I know you don't need me to tell you that!

 :-* kisses  :-* ... keep it up!

xo m.

Hi Malina!! I only know you from your stories over at IMDb - and I´ve enjoyed all of them very much! Nice to see you here!

Dagi
Title: Re: Wedded Bliss
Post by: Dagi on August 28, 2007, 02:04:21 pm

“So.... you wouldn’t wanna marry someone like me then?”  Ennis’ voice sounded a little hurt.

“No …. the answer to four across, dummy!  A book by DH Lawrence, Sons and Lovers.”  Jack glanced up at Ennis and paused for a moment, “Why?  Y’a askin’ me?”

Ennis smiled, flicked the remote, and began watching the TV, “Yeah, maybe.…”

 


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



Oh Susie, this is sooooo good! I love it! Most of all the ending  :D :D :D! Love it!

Dagi
Title: Re: Wedded Bliss
Post by: BBM-Cat on August 28, 2007, 07:50:57 pm
For you Gary, and your new couch! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_4_122v.gif)

Wedded Bliss By Susie

Susiebell, what a sweet, adorable story and with some humor! I love it when Jack and Ennis are playful like that. Maybe there is a proposal in Jack's future, or Ennis'?

I've been out of town the past few days, but have logged in "here and there". I've really enjoyed the 'classics', Littlewing and Toycoon. I especially loved the sensual, two-part, Jack's Hands. There is something incredibly sensual in just thinking about Jack's hands, and where they might roam.

Love the intrique Littlewing, that you have elicited with Ennis' sister...I can't wait to see how that develops! As well as your stories that include the blond-haired young lad...

And, Spiceylife! whoa - I thought my computer monitor was going to burst into flames! Don't ever hesitate to post a story like that even if you think it's too long! There's just no such thing when it comes to Jack and Ennis. That was such a passionate, and erotically sweet story. Loved the humor in keeping with Jack's personality. I think I read your story at least 3 times over.

There has been such a wonderful, proliferation of stories lately, I hope that I did not leave anybody out. I have thoroughly enjoyed each one.


Title: Re: Wedded Bliss
Post by: BBM-Cat on August 28, 2007, 09:56:13 pm
Why thank you BBM-Cat.  Well I am sweet and adorable you know!  And if you'd like to continue to think of me as sweet and adorable you'd better not read the next one!! 

Susie   (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


BRING IT ON Miss Sweet and Adorable - I can take it!   :laugh:  I know you're just teasing us with this light-hearted story....
Title: Re: Wedded Bliss
Post by: BBM-Cat on August 28, 2007, 10:51:54 pm
Well you can't say I didn't warn you!  ;D

Susie   (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


You're right, I was warned...but not prepared!!  YEE-HAW..what a steamy, sexy story. I could barely take it, just like Ennis, and my eyes were open reading! Glad you have it in you to deliver a delicious story like that, Naughtybell!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 29, 2007, 12:03:00 am
Susie, I can't believe you still remember that!! After this whole wealth of stories you guys have here....
Well, I'm going to read some more, and maybe I'll get inspired! In the meantime, kisses to you... and littlewing, and spicey, a Dagi, and toycoon, and Gary... oh, has he gone away? Not for long I hope...

I miss you guys! I am here in spirit..  :)

xo m.

Malina!  How good to see you here!  I always feel better when you're around.  Don't be a stranger, Baby!  Oh, and, write us a naughty tale when you can!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on August 29, 2007, 12:03:56 am
Quote
Sorry, Toycoon!  If it's just too long or doesn't fit here, please let me know and I'll take it off.  Y'all know how I write by now, I guess.

Howdy Spiceylife,
You know I ain't never one to complain about anything being too long or not fitting here! I love your writing, you know that. Honestly, Spicey, it was so hot... I thought I was gonna pass out! Sheee-it! I had to read your story in parts, I didn't want to miss ANYTHING. And the pictures that illustrated it were perfect! You've inspired me to write a real nasty tale. Stand by...
Title: Re: Wedded Bliss
Post by: Toycoon on August 29, 2007, 12:07:53 am
Ha ha, Susiebell! Very cute my dear. Reminds me of my hubby and I except there's usually a lot more shoving and cursing. He's usually the tidy one, by the way!
Title: Re: Emma Del Mar-Wiley (Part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 29, 2007, 12:11:29 am
I love your ideas for stories! And I´m really curious now what she´s gonna ask him....

Dagi

Thanks so much, Dagi.  I'll get right on it!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on August 29, 2007, 12:13:52 am
Malina-5, my little lambchop-
Where ya been? We missed you. Will you be writing something sexy for us anytime soon? You know you and Daphne inspired this saucy game in the first place. Don't tell you've got something going on the side. Seesh!
Title: Re: Wedded Bliss
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 29, 2007, 12:14:11 am
For you Gary, and your new couch! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_4_122v.gif)



Wedded Bliss By Susie

“Four across, six letters, somethin’ somethin’ “V” somethin’ somethin’ somethin’. Sons and blank, a book by DH Lawrence?”  Jack lay stretched out on the sofa, brow furrowed in concentration; newspaper in one hand, idly sucking on the pen in the other.

“Y’a askin’ me?  Don’t know nothin’ ’bout stuff like that Jack!”  Ennis called from the kitchen. 

He strolled into the living room, a cold beer in each hand, frowning at the sight of Jack’s dirty boots on the floral upholstery.

“Get yer feet off the couch, you slob!” he said, shoving the offending boots onto the floor, brushing away the dry mud with his hands, and sitting in the empty space.

“OK, keep yer shirt on!”  Jack grinned, lifting his feet back up onto Ennis’ lap and carrying on with the crossword.  Ennis smiled to himself.

“What?”

“I was just thinking.  We’re like an old married couple, you and me”, Ennis looked lovingly down at Jack, removing Jack’s boots, tossing them onto the floor, and gently massaging his feet.

“Lovers!”

“So.... you wouldn’t wanna marry someone like me then?”  Ennis’ voice sounded a little hurt.

“No …. the answer to four across, dummy!  A book by DH Lawrence, Sons and Lovers.”  Jack glanced up at Ennis and paused for a moment, “Why?  Y’a askin’ me?”

Ennis smiled, flicked the remote, and began watching the TV, “Yeah, maybe.…”

 


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



Awww, Susie this is so sweet!  I love reading about E&J's domestic contentment.  This is a fun, playful story.  I'm very moved.  Thanks for posting.
Title: Re: Trust Me
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 29, 2007, 12:18:23 am
For my dear Dagi


Trust Me by Susie …. NC-17


“I’m not sure, Jack.”  Ennis frowned, shifting uncomfortably, “I might not like it.”

“Trust me, Ennis.  The book says 'It will heighten your other senses'.... see, right here.”  Jack pointed to the bottom of the page, “… and besides, if you don’t like it, we’ll just stop doin’ it.”

After a long pause, Ennis acquiesced, “Well alright then, long as I can take it off if I want to.”   

“No problem.”  Jack, grinning triumphantly, pulled the black satin scarf out of his pocket, folded it carefully into a long thin rectangle, covered Ennis’ eyes and secured it with a knot at the back of his head.

“Now what?” said Ennis, moving his head around, trying to see through the layers of satin.

Jack guided him over to the bed, placing his head on the pillow and pulling his legs up onto the mattress, “That comfortable?  You just lay there sugar, and I’ll take good care of you....  Trust me.”  Jack spoke in a soft soothing voice, gently stroking Ennis’ hand with the tips of his fingers.

“First of all, we need to get you outta these clothes.  Sit up for me.”  He eased Ennis’ shirt over his shoulders and tossed it aside.  “Now lay back down again,” he instructed, unzipping Ennis’ jeans and sliding them slowly down over his feet.  Although Ennis could only see blackness, he guessed from the shuffling sounds, that Jack was removing his own clothes too.

“Now, how does this feel?”  he uttered, picking up a soft feather (something he’d collected from the woods earlier that evening) and gently brushing the tip under Ennis’ chin, along the side of his neck and around his ear, barely touching the edge of his earlobe.

“Feels kinda ticklish.”

“How ‘bout if I do this?” Jack continued, moving the feather downwards over his chest, drawing little circles around each nipple, and guiding it, ever so slowly, down past his belly to the base of the shaft.

“Hmmmm.” Ennis sighed.

“Louder Ennis.  I wanna hear you …. want you to tell me how good it feels.”  Jack drew a line with the soft fluffy end of the feather slowly up from the base to the tip of the shaft, pausing to circle it for a moment, then down the other side and tickling his balls.

“Hmmmmmmmmmmm, feels good….”  This time, his moan was louder and deeper.

Jack moved away from the bed for a moment, “How ‘bout this?”

Ennis felt a sudden icy wetness touching the end of his nipple, hardening them both in an instant, forcing a sharp intake of breath and a helpless whimper.

Jack moved the ice cube down over his chest, following the same path as the feather.  As it touched the tip of his cock, Ennis jerked at the coldness and his whimper turned to a loud strangled moan. “So gooood…..”

Jack continued moving the ice cube down along his inner thigh, causing the downy hairs to stand on end.  Discarding the ice cube, Jack began to blow softly along the wet trail left by the ice cube, making the water feel even colder against his skin.

“Just relax your legs for me….”  he purred, gently pushing Ennis’ thighs farther apart, until Ennis’ legs became limp and fell open, fully exposing his glorious cock.

Ennis groaned in anticipation as Jack’s hot wet mouth, a sharp contrast to the icy water, enveloped him.  No other part of Jack was touching him, just his delicious mouth, floating disembodied in the darkness.  Jack sucked increasingly harder, but otherwise remained motionless, leaving Ennis to pump up and down with his hips, fucking Jack’s mouth, slowly at first, gradually moving faster…. faster…. faster …. He cried out suddenly, a loud primitive cry, shuddering uncontrollably with wave after exquisite wave coursing through his body.

He lay in the darkness, dizzy and out of breath.  Jack’s full weight, suddenly pressing down on his chest, knocked the remaining wind out of him.  He opened his mouth, reaching blindly for his lover.  Jack’s lips met his.  His mouth flooded with his own semen, Jack lapped it up hungrily with his tongue, both sharing and savoring his juices, until every last drop of the precious nectar was devoured.

“You trust me now, Ennis?”  Jack smiled down at his lover with swollen wet lips, easing the blindfold up and over his head.

Ennis smiled back, his heart rate returning to normal, eyes gradually adjusting to the light, “With my life, Jack.…”







Susie   (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Beautiful, Susie!  Hot, steamy and oh so satisfying!  That Ennis Del Mar is one lucky man!  Our jack is a tender, inventive lover, isn't he? 
Title: Untitled
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 29, 2007, 12:41:34 am
Untitled by Littlewing1957

Whenever you call or beckon to me,
I’ll come to you quite readily.
Call me!  I’ll travel on the wings of the wind
To be with you! You're my love, my friend.

Welcome me with arms flung wide,
You’re my shame, my hurt, my hope and pride!
Or follow me across time, beyond the mountain's steep
To love me here, among the sheep.






Title: Feverish Pitch
Post by: Toycoon on August 29, 2007, 01:03:13 am
Feverish Pitch by Toycoon

Ennis awoke in the middle of the night, feverish from his nocturnal sexual arousal, groping and feeling around in the dark until he found Jack's hot groin; Ennis rubbed Jack's bristly pubic patch hard, grasping his low hanging balls then sliding the bumpy skin up and down on the shaft.

Suddenly wide awake, Jack rose up and in an instant Ennis swallowed the entire length of the other man's throbbing member; Ennis held Jack's buttocks with both hands, balancing his entire weight, raising him up and down, repeatedly plunging Jack's meat into his waiting mouth.

Next, Ennis, positioning himself with Jack between his legs, took a deep breath then raised his knees so his feet were waving in the air and Jack's hot breath blew past his virgin backside; Ennis moaned deeply as he guided Jack's pulsating porker into his anus and howled like an animal when they both came simultaneously.
 
Title: Re: Feverish Pitch
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 29, 2007, 01:08:07 am
Feverish Pitch by Toycoon

Ennis awoke in the middle of the night, feverish from his nocturnal sexual arousal, groping and feeling around in the dark until he found Jack's hot groin; Ennis rubbed Jack's bristly pubic patch hard, grasping his low hanging balls then sliding the bumpy skin up and down on the shaft.

Suddenly wide awake, Jack rose up and in an instant Ennis swallowed the entire length of the other man's throbbing member; Ennis held Jack's buttocks with both hands, balancing his entire weight, raising him up and down, repeatedly plunging Jack's meat into his waiting mouth.

Next, Ennis, positioning himself with Jack between his legs, took a deep breath then raised his knees so his feet were waving in the air and Jack's hot breath blew past his virgin backside; Ennis moaned deeply as he guided Jack's pulsating porker into his anus and howled like an animal when they both came simultaneously.
 

Beautiful, Toycoon!  Very sexy and I love the pace!  May I add to it?
Title: Re: Feverish Pitch
Post by: Toycoon on August 29, 2007, 01:13:16 am
Beautiful, Toycoon!  Very sexy and I love the pace!  May I add to it?

Heck yeah, sister!
Title: Re: Feverish Pitch
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 29, 2007, 01:15:20 am
Heck yeah, sister!

 :laugh:  Thanks!  I'll post part 2 tomorrow.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: malina on August 29, 2007, 02:59:21 am
Malina-5, my little lambchop-
Where ya been? We missed you. Will you be writing something sexy for us anytime soon? You know you and Daphne inspired this saucy game in the first place. Don't tell you've got something going on the side. Seesh!

 ::) I promise I will write something for y'all soon! In the meantime, I'm just catching up on my reading. I love how this has taken off and is still going... for almost... um.... ten months now! Yes, that's right, isn't it? I think the first 'Jack with Ennis' started right at the beginning of November '06. Isn't it amazing?

xo m.
Title: Re: Trust Me
Post by: Dagi on August 29, 2007, 07:05:57 am
For my dear Dagi


Trust Me by Susie …. NC-17


.........  His mouth flooded with his own semen, Jack lapped it up hungrily with his tongue, both sharing and savoring his juices, until every last drop of the precious nectar was devoured.

“You trust me now, Ennis?”  Jack smiled down at his lover with swollen wet lips, easing the blindfold up and over his head.

Ennis smiled back, his heart rate returning to normal, eyes gradually adjusting to the light, “With my life, Jack.…”







Susie   (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


OH MY GOD Susie!!!!! What did you do to me?? I´m still swallowing..... ;D.
Gosh, I loved the many moans and whimpers, and you even made my secret dream come true in the end  ;D ;D ;D. That´s a story for Gary as well, huh  ;D? SO HOT and so loving and tender. The last line melt my heart!

Sorry for the many biggrin emoticons, but that´s just what my face looks like since I read the story the first time  ;D!

Dagi
Title: Re: Untitled
Post by: Dagi on August 29, 2007, 07:09:53 am
Untitled by Littlewing1957

Whenever you call or beckon to me,
I’ll come to you quite readily.
Call me!  I’ll travel on the wings of the wind
To be with you! You're my love, my friend.

Welcome me with arms flung wide,
You’re my shame, my hurt, my hope and pride!
Or follow me across time, beyond the mountain's steep
To love me here, among the sheep.








Marie, that left me speech- and breathless! So, so beautiful! Write more poems, please! Wonderful!!!

Dagi
Title: Re: Feverish Pitch
Post by: Dagi on August 29, 2007, 07:16:41 am
Feverish Pitch by Toycoon

Ennis awoke in the middle of the night, feverish from his nocturnal sexual arousal, groping and feeling around in the dark until he found Jack's hot groin; Ennis rubbed Jack's bristly pubic patch hard, grasping his low hanging balls then sliding the bumpy skin up and down on the shaft.

Suddenly wide awake, Jack rose up and in an instant Ennis swallowed the entire length of the other man's throbbing member; Ennis held Jack's buttocks with both hands, balancing his entire weight, raising him up and down, repeatedly plunging Jack's meat into his waiting mouth.

Next, Ennis, positioning himself with Jack between his legs, took a deep breath then raised his knees so his feet were waving in the air and Jack's hot breath blew past his virgin backside; Ennis moaned deeply as he guided Jack's pulsating porker into his anus and howled like an animal when they both came simultaneously.
 

Toycoon, what a wonderful 3s story!! So graphic and explicit, and ya know that I LOVE it graphic and explicit ( of course I love it sweet and tender as well ;D).
Dagi
Title: Re: Wedded Bliss
Post by: Dagi on August 29, 2007, 07:21:23 am
Well thank you BBM-Cat (but I am sweet and adorable really)!  Oooh NaughtyBell!  I like the sound of that!

Susie    (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


She is, really! And she´s naughty, and sexy, and caring, and amiable, and clever, and the best mother and wife in the world, and a reliable friend, and a great writer, and she was even a good housewife before she met Jack and Ennis  :laugh:.

Love ya, girl  ;D

Dagi

Title: Re: Wedded Bliss
Post by: Dagi on August 29, 2007, 07:41:10 am
Oh my dear sweet Dagi, I'm grinning like that emoticon now  ;D ;D ... with tears in my eyes!.  I could say all the same things about you too honey, you're a wonderful friend Dagi, I consider myself very lucky to have found you!

Susie   (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

So true about my housework  :laugh: ... and I used to be so tidy!  :-\



 :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-*


( I can´t blame Jack and Ennis, I have never been a good houswife  :()

Dagi
Title: Re: Trust Me
Post by: Toycoon on August 29, 2007, 09:48:01 am
Sheee-it! I totally missed this one. Susiebell, you nasty lass!
Ya come back from the beach all fresh-faced and dewy with yer family pitchers an' what not... why, it turns out, you're same ol' dirty lady ya were when ya left!
Title: Re: Untitled
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 30, 2007, 01:25:34 am
Marie, that left me speech- and breathless! So, so beautiful! Write more poems, please! Wonderful!!!

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi!  I'll have to write a special poem just for you!  :)
Title: Feverish Pitch Part 2
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 30, 2007, 01:39:09 am
Feverish Pitch Part 2 by Littlewing1957

Ennis was at once hot and cold, weary and revived.  He pulled Jack Twist down on top of him; needing his trembling form to reassure him that it was real; that Jack was done, satisfied.

Jack didn’t know how to ask Ennis if he was okay.  But he had to know.  It was not often that Ennis allowed himself to be loved in this way.

But rather than come right out and ask, Jack reached behind his lover and patted him, caressed and rubbed his tender buttocks.  Ennis was moved at the gesture.  He held Jack’s head in his hands, and seemed to read his mind.  “I’m okay, Rodeo.”  Jack smiled and settled into his lover’s arms.
Title: Re: Feverish Pitch Part 2
Post by: BBM-Cat on August 30, 2007, 01:52:40 am
Feverish Pitch Part 2 by Littlewing1957

Littlewing, beautiful resolution to Part 1! Thanks for portraying the gentle intimacy and loving reassurance between Jack and Ennis.
Title: Re: Feverish Pitch Part 2
Post by: Toycoon on August 30, 2007, 10:34:01 am
Quote
But rather than come right out and ask, Jack reached behind his lover and patted him, caressed and rubbed his tender buttocks.  Ennis was moved at the gesture.  He held Jack’s head in his hands, and seemed to read his mind.  “I’m okay, Rodeo.”  Jack smiled and settled into his lover’s arms.

Awwww, Littlewing, the sweet afterplay. I don't think Ennis minded Jack's voracity too much. Apparently, 'ol Ennis woke up in a horny frenzy!
Title: Re: Trust Me
Post by: Toycoon on August 30, 2007, 10:36:25 am
Quote
Hehehe ... Who me?  I'm a proper English Lady ... just ask Gary!  .... And less of the "OLD" there Mister!

Forgive me Susiebaby! You're younger that I am, what are you taking about?!
Title: Re: Untitled
Post by: Dagi on August 30, 2007, 04:21:21 pm
Thanks, Dagi!  I'll have to write a special poem just for you!  :)

 :D
Title: Re: Untitled
Post by: moremojo on August 30, 2007, 09:01:36 pm
Untitled by Littlewing1957

Whenever you call or beckon to me,
I’ll come to you quite readily.
Call me!  I’ll travel on the wings of the wind
To be with you! You're my love, my friend.

Welcome me with arms flung wide,
You’re my shame, my hurt, my hope and pride!
Or follow me across time, beyond the mountain's steep
To love me here, among the sheep.
Marie, this is one of the finest Brokeback-related poems I have seen. You do have a flair for poetry, and poems are the rarest genre among fanfic/slash writing, so I would strongly encourage you to create even more along these lines.

Thanks, and congratulations!
Title: Re: Untitled
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 30, 2007, 11:33:50 pm
Marie, this is one of the finest Brokeback-related poems I have seen. You do have a flair for poetry, and poems are the rarest genre among fanfic/slash writing, so I would strongly encourage you to create even more along these lines.

Thanks, and congratulations!

Thanks, Moremojo!  Hey, babe, where have you been?  I've been missing you.   :)  And I must say, your kind words are such a comfort to me!  I've had such a crappy day, and to come home and read something so sweet and encouraging?  I can't tell you what this means to me.  You have given me the courage to really reach inside of myself and write more poetry inspired by our boys.  :)  I owe Dagi a poem!

Thanks again, Moremojo!
Title: Re: Feverish Pitch Part 2
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 30, 2007, 11:39:36 pm
Ah beautiful follow up littlewing!  The first part was all raging animal lust, this part, sweet tender love ... the perfect combination.

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

 

Thanks, Susie.  I though Part 2 should be easy, lazy, loving.  I hope I achieved what I set out to do.
Title: Re: Feverish Pitch Part 2
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 30, 2007, 11:40:17 pm
Awwww, Littlewing, the sweet afterplay. I don't think Ennis minded Jack's voracity too much. Apparently, 'ol Ennis woke up in a horny frenzy!

  :laugh: :laugh: I guess you're right, Toycoon!
Title: Unspoken
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 31, 2007, 01:13:33 am
Unspoken by Littlewing1957

Dagi, Moremojo, this one is for you

From the very first moment
Of the very first touch,
To the last of his kisses
Sweet words and such!
The words of love unspoken,
The burden of a heart broken!
If only he understood!
Love? I can’t say it! 
I wish I could!
Title: Re: Unspoken
Post by: Dagi on August 31, 2007, 01:19:08 am
Unspoken by Littlewing1957

Dagi, Moremojo, this one is for you

From the very first moment
Of the very first touch,
To the last of his kisses
Sweet words and such.
The words of love unspoken,
The burden of a heart broken!
If only he understood!
Love? I can’t say it! 
I wish I could!


God, Marie, you ARE a poet! So Beautiful! This poem will stay with me all day long! thank you so much!!!  :-*

Dagi
Title: Re: Unspoken
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 31, 2007, 01:21:38 am
God, Marie, you ARE a poet! So Beautiful! This poem will stay with me all day long! thank you so much!!!  :-*

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi.  You have given me the push I needed to continue writing poetry!
Title: Re: Feverish Pitch Part 2
Post by: Dagi on August 31, 2007, 01:21:52 am
Feverish Pitch Part 2 by Littlewing1957

Ennis was at once hot and cold, weary and revived.  He pulled Jack Twist down on top of him; needing his trembling form to reassure him that it was real; that Jack was done, satisfied.

Jack didn’t know how to ask Ennis if he was okay.  But he had to know.  It was not often that Ennis allowed himself to be loved in this way.

But rather than come right out and ask, Jack reached behind his lover and patted him, caressed and rubbed his tender buttocks.  Ennis was moved at the gesture.  He held Jack’s head in his hands, and seemed to read his mind.  “I’m okay, Rodeo.”  Jack smiled and settled into his lover’s arms.


Such a sweet way to communicate.......sometimes gestures and a look in another person´s eyes say more than words! And I want to believe that they communicated perfectly this way! Thank you for this sweet ending, dear......

Dagi
Title: Re: Unspoken
Post by: Dagi on August 31, 2007, 01:22:56 am
Thanks, Dagi.  You have given me the push I needed to continue writing poetry!


Keep them coming, sugarplum!!  ;D

Dagi
Title: Re: Feverish Pitch Part 2
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 31, 2007, 01:24:57 am
Such a sweet way to communicate.......sometimes gestures and a look in another person´s eyes say more than words! And I want to believe that they communicated perfectly this way! Thank you for this sweet ending, dear......

Dagi

Thanks, Babe!  I was drawn to the tenderness..
Title: Re: Unspoken
Post by: Toycoon on August 31, 2007, 09:55:51 am
Quote
Love? I can’t say it! 
I wish I could!

Well, Ennis may not have been able to say it but I can. I love your poem, Littlewing. You truly have a gift. I'm glad we're all here to enjoy the birth of a fine poet!

Happy Labor Day, everyone! I'm going to Las Vegas for the weekend, returning on Tuesday. I won't be checking email; I'll miss you all. Will you miss me?
Title: Re: Unspoken
Post by: moremojo on August 31, 2007, 10:02:19 am
Will you miss me?
You bet! Have fun in Vegas, Toycoon, and remember, what happens there can stay there, unless you choose to share it with us. (Hint, hint).  ;D
Title: Re: Unspoken
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 31, 2007, 01:26:22 pm
Well, Ennis may not have been able to say it but I can. I love your poem, Littlewing. You truly have a gift. I'm glad we're all here to enjoy the birth of a fine poet!

Happy Labor Day, everyone! I'm going to Las Vegas for the weekend, returning on Tuesday. I won't be checking email; I'll miss you all. Will you miss me?

I'll miss you!  I had hoped to make it down your way (well, Inglewood) for the weekend, but my folks left early this morning without me.  No matter.  Maria and I will make our own fun.  Have a good weekend in Vegas, Love.  We'll be here when you get back!
Title: Re: Unspoken
Post by: Dagi on August 31, 2007, 02:40:57 pm
I'll miss you all. Will you miss me?

Of course we will! Thank God at least one of our men is left! Have a great time, my friend!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 02, 2007, 04:53:55 am
Gosh, this is the first time EVER, that I've woken up and NOT found any new stories, or any chit chat on the Jack and Ennis thread .. I miss you all!  :-\



I miss Gary  :'(   

Me too.  *sigh* How good that we have each other!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on September 02, 2007, 07:44:06 am
Hello Littlewing!(http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/happy/happy0001.gif) (http://www.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk)

Hello Susie!(http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/happy/happy0030.gif) (http://www.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk)

Hello Dagi!(http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/happy/happy0022.gif) (http://www.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk)

Have fun Toycoon!(http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/happy/happy0029.gif) (http://www.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk)

Hi Scott!(http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/happy/happy0002.gif) (http://www.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk)

Hi Spicey!(http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/happy/happy0008.gif) (http://www.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk)

Hello all fanfic writers and readers!!(http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/jumping/jumping0041.gif) (http://www.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk)

Gary--come back soon!!(http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/happy/happy0003.gif) (http://www.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk)

Work is whippin' my butt, ya'll.(http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/fighting/fighting0061.gif) (http://www.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk) Not much free time! Have a great Labor Day weekend!(http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/characters/character0180.gif) (http://www.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk)
 
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 02, 2007, 09:31:54 am
Hello Littlewing!(http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/happy/happy0001.gif) (http://www.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk)

Hello Susie!(http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/happy/happy0030.gif) (http://www.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk)

Hello Dagi!(http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/happy/happy0022.gif) (http://www.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk)

Have fun Toycoon!(http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/happy/happy0029.gif) (http://www.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk)

Hi Scott!(http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/happy/happy0002.gif) (http://www.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk)

Hi Spicey!(http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/happy/happy0008.gif) (http://www.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk)

Hello all fanfic writers and readers!!(http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/jumping/jumping0041.gif) (http://www.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk)

Gary--come back soon!!(http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/happy/happy0003.gif) (http://www.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk)

Work is whippin' my butt, ya'll.(http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/fighting/fighting0061.gif) (http://www.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk) Not much free time! Have a great Labor Day weekend!(http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/characters/character0180.gif) (http://www.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk)
 


Oh Shasta honey, you are such a sweetie! Enjoy your weekend!! Love!!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 02, 2007, 02:07:27 pm
We should get that story of ours finished Dagi honey!  I'm so glad you're here!

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Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

(http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s31/Susiebell_album/Glitter/003.gif)

A big hug back! And oh my God, our story, of course, what on earth can have distracted me?  ::)

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 02, 2007, 08:10:36 pm
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Hi, Shasta!  I can image you're busy with work.  I hope you having a good weekend, as well!  Take care and I'll talk to you in a bit!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on September 04, 2007, 07:52:25 am
I'm sure he'll be back soon with some great stories that he's written in some airport waiting area---or on the plane!
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Or from the balcony of his new apartment--while taking a break from getting set up!
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We miss you, Gary C. !! See ya soon!!(http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/love/love0066.gif) (http://www.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 04, 2007, 12:12:23 pm
Susie          Dagi

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Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: moremojo on September 04, 2007, 05:41:21 pm
Susie          Dagi

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Remember, you'll never walk alone.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 04, 2007, 07:42:58 pm
Susie          Dagi

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Cheer up, ladies.  Gary is okay, I feel it in my bones.  I'm not saying he's not concerned about us but we're probably the last thing he's worried about now.  I know it takes awhile to set up house in another State.  Be patient, loves.  I know what you all need!  A new story.  read on, I'll have it posted in a moment.

I suppose Toycoon is still in Vegas?
Title: Jack loves Ennis
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 04, 2007, 07:52:43 pm
Jack loves Ennis by Littlewing1957

Dagi, Shasta, Moremojo, SusieBell, and especially Gary, this one is for you!

“C’mere Friend, sit down by me.”  Jack beckoned to his lover and moved a few pillows around so that Ennis could join him on the couch. “I have something I want to share with you.” 

Ennis and Jack were just finishing up a nine day fishing trip, and Ennis imagined Jack was feeling rather sentimental then, feeling sort of sad that they had to part for God knows how long.  Ennis was fearful of what Jack wanted to share.  He sat next to his lover and placed a nervous hand on his knee.

“What you got, Rodeo?”  Ennis asked as he smoothed his hand along Jack’s thigh and gave him space to proceed.  Ennis wasn’t prepared for what happened next.  Jack reached under the couch and pulled out what appeared to be a coffee table book.  He placed the tome on Ennis’ lap and opened to the first page.

“Whoa, Rodeo!”  Ennis cried as he saw the photo of a beautiful young man pleasuring himself.

“Now just hear me out!”  Jack said soothingly as he noticed Ennis’ discomfort.  “Listen, Friend, this here is a fascinatin' book.  It shows you ways to make yourself feel good, and gives instruction, as well.”  Jack pointed to photos of gorgeous young men in various positions of self-pleasuring.  Ennis averted his eyes for a moment.

“Listen Jack, I’m not comfortable with this.  Yeah, sure, I told you I wrung it out a few times, thinking of you, but I don’t need no instructions on how to do it.”  Ennis sighed and turned away from his lover.  Jack placed a hand on Ennis’ back.  He rubbed him tenderly, until Ennis faced him once more.

“Look, En!”  Jack began. “I just wanted to do this one thing for you.  Listen, take the book and if you find you run out of ideas, well, give it a try.  And think of me while you’re at it!”  Ennis began to soften.  He reached out for the book and flipped through the provocative photographs.   Ennis never thought to ask where Jack found such a book.  He didn’t think it was important to know.

“Hey Rodeo!”  Ennis, amused now.  “This here looks pretty interesting!”  Ennis pointed to the picture of 2 young men making love. 

“What say we practice this move?  We have a few hours before we have to leave the cabin.  What ya say, Rodeo?”  Ennis winked at his lover, who smiled back.  Jack led the way to the master bedroom.

Two months and many hours later, Jack was preparing for bed.  He was used to sleeping in the guest room, as his marriage had deteriorated to a lonely sham.  Jack was so desperate for Ennis that he could have pulled his hair out, strand-by-strand.  Jack climbed into his king-sized bed and reached under the mattress.  He pulled out a book, an oversized tome that was identical to the one he gave Ennis months before.  The activity depicted on page 27 was particularly exciting, and was Jack’s favorite.  He thought of Ennis as he pleasured himself, and in no time, he was able to fall into a satisfied slumber.

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 04, 2007, 07:53:45 pm
I'm sure he'll be back soon with some great stories that he's written in some airport waiting area---or on the plane!
(http://www.anchoredbygrace.com/smileys/plane9.gif)

Or from the balcony of his new apartment--while taking a break from getting set up!
(http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/characters/character0111.gif) (http://www.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk)

We miss you, Gary C. !! See ya soon!!(http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/love/love0066.gif) (http://www.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk)

I'm sure you're right, Shasta.  By the way, it is good to see you here!  Greetings, my Love!
Title: Re: Jack loves Ennis
Post by: Shasta542 on September 04, 2007, 08:04:30 pm
Jack loves Ennis by Littlewing1957

Dagi, Shasta, Moremojo, SusieBell, and especially Gary, this one is for you!

“C’mere Friend, sit down by me.”  Jack beckoned to his lover and moved a few pillows around so that Ennis could join him on the couch. “I have something I want to share with you.” 

Ennis and Jack were just finishing up a nine day fishing trip, and Ennis imagined Jack was feeling rather sentimental then, feeling sort of sad that they had to part for God knows how long.  Ennis was fearful of what Jack wanted to share.  He sat next to his lover and placed a nervous hand on his knee.

“What you got, Rodeo?”  Ennis asked as he smoothed his hand along Jack’s thigh and gave him space to proceed.  Ennis wasn’t prepared for what happened next.  Jack reached under the couch and pulled out what appeared to be a coffee table book.  He placed the tome on Ennis’ lap and opened to the first page.

“Whoa, Rodeo!”  Ennis cried as he saw the photo of a beautiful young man pleasuring himself.

“Now just hear me out!”  Jack said soothingly as he noticed Ennis’ discomfort.  “Listen, Friend, this here is a fascinatin' book.  It shows you ways to make yourself feel good, and gives instruction, as well.”  Jack pointed to photos of gorgeous young men in various positions of self-pleasuring.  Ennis averted his eyes for a moment.

“Listen Jack, I’m not comfortable with this.  Yeah, sure, I told you I wrung it out a few times, thinking of you, but I don’t need no instructions on how to do it.”  Ennis sighed and turned away from his lover.  Jack placed a hand on Ennis’ back.  He rubbed him tenderly, until Ennis faced him once more.

“Look, En!”  Jack began. “I just wanted to do this one thing for you.  Listen, take the book and if you find you run out of ideas, well, give it a try.  And think of me while you’re at it!”  Ennis began to soften.  He reached out for the book and flipped through the provocative photographs.   Ennis never thought to ask where Jack found such a book.  He didn’t think it was important to know.

“Hey Rodeo!”  Ennis, amused now.  “This here looks pretty interesting!”  Ennis pointed to the picture of 2 young men making love. 

“What say we practice this move?  We have a few hours before we have to leave the cabin.  What ya say, Rodeo?”  Ennis winked at his lover, who smiled back.  Jack led the way to the master bedroom.

Two months and many hours later, Jack was preparing for bed.  He was used to sleeping in the guest room, as his marriage had deteriorated to a lonely sham.  Jack was so desperate for Ennis that he could have pulled his hair out, strand-by-strand.  Jack climbed into his king-sized bed and reached under the mattress.  He pulled out a book, an oversized tome that was identical to the one he gave Ennis months before.  The activity depicted on page 27 was particularly exciting, and was Jack’s favorite.  He thought of Ennis as he pleasured himself, and in no time, he was able to fall into a satisfied slumber.



Thanks for the great story about Jack and Ennis doing a little homework, Littlewing!!!

I enjoyed it and it brought back a wild memory. LOL

Several years ago I bought a book called  The Ultimate Kiss  (it wasn't about kissing) Anyway, anyone who was the recipient of the techniques from that book was very appreciative. A friend borrowed it -- and never returned it.

That's okay -- the lessons stay with ya.

So -- yeah -- I really loved reading your story. Thanks, Brokie Pal!!!!
Title: Re: Jack loves Ennis
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 04, 2007, 08:53:41 pm

Thanks for the great story about Jack and Ennis doing a little homework, Littlewing!!!

I enjoyed it and it brought back a wild memory. LOL

Several years ago I bought a book called  The Ultimate Kiss  (it wasn't about kissing) Anyway, anyone who was the recipient of the techniques from that book was very appreciative. A friend borrowed it -- and never returned it.

That's okay -- the lessons stay with ya.

So -- yeah -- I really loved reading your story. Thanks, Brokie Pal!!!!


Thanks for your kind words, and thanks for sharing your experiences, Shasta.  I had many such books, but as my nephews reached a certain age, they found my "stash" and cleaned it out.   :laugh:  It is always a pleasure to see you.  Thanks again for sharing, Babe!
Title: Re: Jack loves Ennis
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 04, 2007, 08:55:31 pm

Superb littlewing ... and just what I needed to soothe my nerves!!
Jack was so desperate for Ennis that he could have pulled his hair out, strand-by-strand.  Oh so beautiful and so sad ..... (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/36/36_1_44.gif)

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

So have you got a picture of page 27 for us then? (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/3/3_8_9.gif)

SusieBaby, anything to put a smile on your lovely face.  Cheer up!  Everything will be okay.  I miss him too!
Title: Re: Ennis' Fears
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 04, 2007, 09:00:12 pm
This is a little something me and Dagi have been writing together.


Ennis' Fears by Dagi and Susie


Warm and soft skin under his hands.....his lover's warm and soft skin....nothing better in the world........

Ennis refused to fall asleep, savoring the sweetest feeling imaginable after hours of lovemaking, Jack's body spooned up tightly against his own, their feet and legs intertwined, Ennis' hand lying softly on his lover's stomach.

In the twilight, his eyes drifted over the contours of Jack's body, noting the familiar moles and imperfections that had become so dear to him.  Two angry red scars across his face, one very close to his right eye, the other just above his chin, and several purple bruises over his chest and back, made Ennis' body shudder involuntarily.

His throat tightened up, but he didn't try to hold back the tears, knowing he would lose the fight in the end, as he always did in moments like this, when he held in hand what he had almost lost.

Jack's feable attempts at explaining away his injuries, the rim of a tire blasting into his face as he was trying to replace a flat, didn't fool Ennis for a moment.  His nightmares, the constant churning in the pitt of his stomach, the vision of two, three, sometimes ten men, laying into Jack with a tire iron, beating him to within an inch of his life, was going to haunt him for the rest of his days.  But he thanked God Jack was still alive, badly scarred perhaps, but here with him, lying peacefully in his arms.  The tears flowed freely, a little whimper escaping his lips.

"Shush, baby, I'm here.......it´s alright........" whispered his love, turning around and folding him closely in his strong arms.  Burying his face in the crook of Jack's neck,  Ennis finally allowed himself to sob like a baby, allowed Jack to rock him tenderly, humming the sweetest lullaby, until they both fell into a silent, peaceful slumber.........




Dagi and Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_2_109v.gif)



Dagi, Susie, this is just what the doctor ordered!  Very expertly written, extremely moving.  Poor Ennis!  Poor Jack!  Well, at least Jack survived the tire iron.  And he was the one to comfort Ennis!  Exceptional, my loves!  Brilliant.  Thanks so much for posting this for us!
Title: Re: Ennis' Fears
Post by: moremojo on September 04, 2007, 09:41:25 pm
This is a little something me and Dagi have been writing together.


Ennis' Fears by Dagi and Susie

Dagi and Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_2_109v.gif)
This story so vividly illustrates how we would never stop loving and desiring our beloveds regardless of what physical mishaps, mutilations, or infirmities might befall them. In fact, the wounds and scars could even become new contours of beauty in our eyes, on which to map our evolving desires. Ennis never stopped loving Jack when Jack's body was utterly gone, so certainly he would have loved and cherished him all the same had he lived on disfigured.

Interesting story, ladies, and I do believe this might be our first open collaboration on this thread. Congratulations!
Title: Re: Jack loves Ennis
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 04, 2007, 09:43:03 pm
Jack loves Ennis by Littlewing1957

Littlewing, so lovely and intimate..glad to see Ennis open to new experiences, and Jack to pleasurable ones while thinking of Ennis.
Title: Re: Jack loves Ennis
Post by: Shasta542 on September 04, 2007, 09:45:03 pm
Thanks for your kind words, and thanks for sharing your experiences, Shasta. I had many such books, but as my nephews reached a certain age, they found my "stash" and cleaned it out.   :laugh:  It is always a pleasure to see you.  Thanks again for sharing, Babe!

 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

You gotta get better hiding places!!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on September 04, 2007, 09:48:31 pm
Quote
Ennis' Fears by Dagi and Susie

Very emotional and beautiful, girls.   :'(
Title: Re: Ennis' Fears
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 04, 2007, 09:48:51 pm

Ennis' Fears by Dagi and Susie

You two make a great writing team! What a tender, sad, but beautiful perspective on what could have been, and a real testament to Jack's and Ennis' enduring love.
Title: Re: Jack loves Ennis
Post by: moremojo on September 04, 2007, 09:48:59 pm
Jack loves Ennis by Littlewing1957
It's interesting to speculate on Ennis's reaction to erotica/pornography, gay, straight, or otherwise. I always felt it likely he would have come across material of the Playboy variety, which probably didn't do much for him. Had he seen publications like Hustler, with their occasional spreads of couples in simulated copulation, he might well have been turned on by the guys while rationalizing in his mind that it was the women he was looking at.

Jack, on the other hand, would probably have embraced porn with considerable ease. Heck, he embraced male prostitutes, so why not a "dirty" magazine here and there? And I think it quite plausible to imagine him introducing Ennis to this kind of material, in his inimitably tender way, just as you describe, Marie. Yet another interesting story from your inspired hand.
Title: Re: Jack loves Ennis
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 05, 2007, 12:21:59 am
Littlewing, so lovely and intimate..glad to see Ennis open to new experiences, and Jack to pleasurable ones while thinking of Ennis.

BBM-Cat, it is so good to see you!  I've missed you!  Thanks for your kind words.  I really do appreciate it!
Title: Re: Jack loves Ennis
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 05, 2007, 12:25:04 am
It's interesting to speculate on Ennis's reaction to erotica/pornography, gay, straight, or otherwise. I always felt it likely he would have come across material of the Playboy variety, which probably didn't do much for him. Had he seen publications like Hustler, with their occasional spreads of couples in simulated copulation, he might well have been turned on by the guys while rationalizing in his mind that it was the women he was looking at.

Jack, on the other hand, would probably have embraced porn with considerable ease. Heck, he embraced male prostitutes, so why not a "dirty" magazine here and there? And I think it quite plausible to imagine him introducing Ennis to this kind of material, in his inimitably tender way, just as you describe, Marie. Yet another interesting story from your inspired hand.

Thanks, moremojo!  I didn't know how this little tale would be received.  I think it would be very interesting to see how Ennis reacts to porn, gay or otherwise.  I am always inspired by 2 of the greatest lovers in all of literature.  Seems I'll never get them out of my mind. 
Title: Elk Jerky
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 05, 2007, 12:35:10 am
Elk Jerky by Littlewing1957

Jack missed Ennis during the day, but he was also grateful for time alone to think, reflect, and perhaps get some work done.   Most days at camp were uneventful, and Jack was grateful for that.  He straightened the camp, set aside enough wood to start a dinner fire, and opened a few cans of soup: Cream of Chicken soup.  Not too bad!

A few minutes later and Jack had a strange feeling.  He was uneasy, thought he was being watched.  And just as he was turning to enter the tent to fetch a book of matches, someone grabbed him from behind!

“Gotcha!”  A man yelled as he pulled at Jack’s waist.

“Darryl, man, you almost made my heart jump through my chest!”  Jack yelled angrily as he pulled himself free of the ranger’s grip.  “What the hell are you doin’ around here?”  Jack observed that Darryl Brockbank was probably on vacation, or got fired or something, as he was there without his uniform.

“Oh, I’m just here on a picnic with friends."   Darryl remarked with a twinkle in his eye as he approached Jack Twist.  "I've been watchin' you, Jack!"

Jack backed away, not amused, becoming disturbed.  Jack knew Darryl from last summer, as he worked for The Department of Game and Fish, and Jack did his level best to avoid him the entire time.

“I see old man Aguirre thought to hire another man to help around here!”  Darryl mused as he stroked his chin.  Darryl looked around camp.  “Where is the other fella?”  He asked, a mischievous grin plastered on his handsome face.  Jack didn’t answer.  He walked over to the tent and climbed inside. 

“You can’t hide from me, Jack Twist!”  Darryl yelled by way of warning as he approached the tent.  But just before he could poke his head inside the tent flap, Jack emerged pointing a 30-30 right at Darryl’s chest.

“Jack Twist, what the fuck??"

To be Continued…


Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 05, 2007, 01:16:18 am
Hey Marie, meet me in the chatroom?
Title: Elk Jerky and Beans
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 05, 2007, 01:18:23 am
Elk Jerky and Beans by Littlewing1957

Okay, a few things: as you can probably tell, this poem was written for a youngster.  My daughter's friend received some elk jerky for her birthday (seriously) and promised to give me some if I either 1) write a BBM story just for her 2) write an "epic" BBM poem just for her.  I chose to write an "epic" poem.  I'm posting this here in an effort to cheer up Dagi and Susiebaby, my dear friends.  Please forgive me if this poem seems out of place.  Toycoon, if you feel that Elk jerky and Beans does not belong here, don't hesitate to tell me, and I'll remove it.  Dagi, SusieBaby, this one is for you.  Oh, it is also for Allie, Maria's friend.  I'm waiting for my elk Jerky!
  :laugh:


“No more beans!”  Yelled Jack Twist
The meaning of the statement was not missed
By his partner, a one Ennis Del Mar,
Who watched as Jack rode to the mountain far.

Ennis was assigned the task
Of collecting food from the Basque.
It was simple fare: beans, milk, perhaps some stew,
Biscuits, peaches, a few cans of brew.

Friday, and Ennis hiked to the appointed place
And waited without a smile on his face, as
The Basque would surely ask what it means
To read a list that didn’t include beans.

“I thought you don’t eat soup?”
Observed the weary Basque
It was right there on the list:
Soup was added last!

“Well, I’m tired of beans!”
But Ennis knew that wasn’t true!
He needed something special for Jack;
Beans would no longer do.

The Basque packed the food with his usual flair
And Ennis was glad to get outta there!
He had a long way to go over fields, across a brook
To make it back to camp and cook.

But on the way, crossing a stream,
He happened across a bear, whose scream
Spooked his mule, that reared up and back,
Spilling the provisions from the pack!

Meanwhile, a hungry and irritable Jack
Rode into camp and rubbed his back
His ride from brokeback was rough – he was beat!
He wanted to relax, he needed to eat.

But Ennis Del Mar was nowhere in sight!
Jack paced the camp until night
Woodland creatures began to scurry.
Where was Ennis?  Jack began to worry.

Ennis salvaged as much food as he could
But actually, it was not much good.
He had so little left in the pack.
Nothing else to do but go face Jack.

Jack rose when he saw Ennis pass by,
Without a word, not even a “Hi!”
So happy was Jack to see his friend,
All he could utter was “Where have you been?”

Ennis told Jack all about the bear
The Basque, the mule, and its awful scare,
The trail of food down by the creek
That their prospects for food seemed rather bleak.

“Why don’t we shoot one of the sheep?”
It was Jack Twist, his voice timid and deep.
Ennis said “forget it!” right then and there.
But Jack was hungry and didn’t care.

Around about noon Ennis focused the rifle straight
And aimed at an elk who didn’t realize its fate
Was to end up in pieces, meat hanging from trees
To feed the one who Ennis sought to please.

Elk Jerky and short ribs, leftover bread
Whiskey on shares!  Jack was well fed.
Ennis wasn’t satisfied, and you know what that means?
He had some elk jerky and a can of beans!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 05, 2007, 01:29:55 am
Hey Marie, meet me in the chatroom?

Dagi, I must be doing something wrong.  I can't seem to connect?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 05, 2007, 06:23:58 am
Remember, you'll never walk alone.

You are sweet, Scott. Thank you.

Dagi
Title: Re: Jack loves Ennis
Post by: Dagi on September 05, 2007, 06:30:56 am
Jack loves Ennis by Littlewing1957

Dagi, Shasta, Moremojo, SusieBell, and especially Gary, this one is for you!

......... He thought of Ennis as he pleasured himself, and in no time, he was able to fall into a satisfied slumber.



Marie, how sweet of you to try to cheer us up with a story. This is a sweet, erotic and sad little tale. And as for Gary: I especially relate to the line Jack was so desperate for Ennis that he could have pulled his hair out, strand-by-strand.

I missed your stories, thank you for keeping writing, honey.

Dagi
Title: Re: Ennis' Fears
Post by: Dagi on September 05, 2007, 06:35:59 am
Dagi, Susie, this is just what the doctor ordered!  Very expertly written, extremely moving.  Poor Ennis!  Poor Jack!  Well, at least Jack survived the tire iron.  And he was the one to comfort Ennis!  Exceptional, my loves!  Brilliant.  Thanks so much for posting this for us!

Thank you so much for your lovely comment, Marie. Ya see, we can not only write porn without plot  ;D.

Dagi
Title: Re: Ennis' Fears
Post by: Dagi on September 05, 2007, 06:39:34 am
This story so vividly illustrates how we would never stop loving and desiring our beloveds regardless of what physical mishaps, mutilations, or infirmities might befall them. In fact, the wounds and scars could even become new contours of beauty in our eyes, on which to map our evolving desires. Ennis never stopped loving Jack when Jack's body was utterly gone, so certainly he would have loved and cherished him all the same had he lived on disfigured.

Interesting story, ladies, and I do believe this might be our first open collaboration on this thread. Congratulations!

Thank you, Scott! What you wrote really touched my heart.
It is the second time that Susie and I wrote a story together, the first one was Ennimal, and we had so much fun writing it, that we decided to do that more often. I´m convinced this was not our last one!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 05, 2007, 06:41:14 am
Very emotional and beautiful, girls.   :'(

Thank you, Shasta! Good to see you here! Hope you are doing fine, despite all your work.

Dagi
Title: Re: Ennis' Fears
Post by: Dagi on September 05, 2007, 06:48:12 am
You two make a great writing team! What a tender, sad, but beautiful perspective on what could have been, and a real testament to Jack's and Ennis' enduring love.

Thank you, BBM-Cat! When are you writing something for us?  :D

Dagi
Title: Re: Elk Jerky
Post by: Dagi on September 05, 2007, 06:53:06 am
Elk Jerky by Littlewing1957

Jack missed Ennis during the day, but he was also grateful for time alone to think, reflect, and perhaps get some work done.   Most days at camp were uneventful, and Jack was grateful for that.  He straightened the camp, set aside enough wood to start a dinner fire, and opened a few cans of soup: Cream of Chicken soup.  Not too bad!

A few minutes later and Jack had a strange feeling.  He was uneasy, thought he was being watched.  And just as he was turning to enter the tent to fetch a book of matches, someone grabbed him from behind!

“Gotcha!”  A man yelled as he pulled at Jack’s waist.

“Darryl, man, you almost made my heart jump through my chest!”  Jack yelled angrily as he pulled himself free of the ranger’s grip.  “What the hell are you doin’ around here?”  Jack observed that Darryl Brockbank was probably on vacation, or got fired or something, as he was there without his uniform.

“Oh, I’m just here on a picnic with friends."   Darryl remarked with a twinkle in his eye as he approached Jack Twist.  "I've been watchin' you, Jack!"

Jack backed away, not amused, becoming disturbed.  Jack knew Darryl from last summer, as he worked for The Department of Game and Fish, and Jack did his level best to avoid him the entire time.

“I see old man Aguirre thought to hire another man to help around here!”  Darryl mused as he stroked his chin.  Darryl looked around camp.  “Where is the other fella?”  He asked, a mischievous grin plastered on his handsome face.  Jack didn’t answer.  He walked over to the tent and climbed inside. 

“You can’t hide from me, Jack Twist!”  Darryl yelled by way of warning as he approached the tent.  But just before he could poke his head inside the tent flap, Jack emerged pointing a 30-30 right at Darryl’s chest.

“Jack Twist, what the fuck??"

To be Continued…





 :o :o :o what is he going to do?? Hell, Marie, don´t let us wait too long........
Title: Re: Elk Jerky and Beans
Post by: Dagi on September 05, 2007, 07:00:05 am
Elk Jerky and Beans by Littlewing1957

Ennis wasn’t satisfied, and you know what that means?
He had some elk jerky and a can of beans!


 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: Now that one really cheered me up! You are awesome, Marie honey, you amaze me! Sad stories, sweet stories, erotic stories, hot stories, moving stories, cheerful stories, funny stories, stories that are all that at the same time, touching poems, funny poems........it there ANYTHING you can´t write?? Obviously not! I love you, girl.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on September 05, 2007, 09:54:09 pm
Holy Geez, it's a ghost town in here tonite. That's part of the western heritage too, tho, so it's okay for a minute!  (http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/sign/sign0163.gif) (http://www.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk)

Today is the first time since I've been at Bettermost that this thread was not on the "unread posts since last visit" list.  :P

Dagi and Susie---are probably out looking for our errant cowboy traveler--Gary C.(http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/sad/sad0064.gif) (http://www.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk)(http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/sign/sign0150.gif) (http://www.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk)

Toycoon--may be following some lead to the next "Tickle Me Elmo" type billion seller toy.(http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/characters/character0109.gif) (http://www.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk)

Littlewing--just hasn't made it in yet! It's still early in CA!!(http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/characters/character0163.gif) (http://www.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk)

Spicey, Scott, and all the other fan fickers are probably watching the Republican debates!!(http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/confused/confused0086.gif) (http://www.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk)(http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/sign/sign0105.gif) (http://www.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk) Do you get those in OZ, Spicey?

Me--I'm trying to keep from grading essays.(http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/party/party0004.gif) (http://www.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk) Master procrastinator!!!

Gary--You are one of the muses! Come back!!!(http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/sign/sign0009.gif) (http://www.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk) All I can hear in this room tonite -- chirping crickets!!
Title: Re: Ennis' Fears
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 05, 2007, 10:01:15 pm
Thank you, BBM-Cat! When are you writing something for us?  :D

Dagi

I haven't felt inspired lately, but I sure am enjoying all the stories here!  :D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on September 05, 2007, 11:36:46 pm
Howdy cowboys and girls,
I'm back from the Nevada desert. It was hotter'n hell (120 degrees in the day) but I had a ball! I went for a Mod 60's Music Weekender party. Three wild days of nonstop partying with hundreds of sixties' music enthusiasts. It was really a blast!
I love all the sexy and funny stories everyone wrote while I was away. Susie and Dagi, I enjoyed your collaboration. There was talk of a sequel to Brokeback Mountain. Maybe that's how that chapter could begin.
Littlewing, your imagination is boundless. I loved your poetry and I don't mind you stepping over the three line limit, you know that! Shasta, BBM cat and moremojo, you guys are shirking yer responsabilities to our humble thread. We need more stories from you three.
Title: September
Post by: Toycoon on September 05, 2007, 11:47:09 pm
September by Toycoon

The summers came and went and still the memories of that certain summer were like a wound on Ennis' heart that had scabbed over but never quite healed; when Ennis heard the name, Jack, again after all this time, the blood came rushing back.

Ennis, you know someone name'a Jack?
Ennis' heart performed a unexpected somersault landing in the middle of his throat, "Maybe... why?"

Ennis carefully read the writing on the back of the postcard and softly stroked the word, "Jack" as though somehow Jack could feel his tender caress.
Title: Re: September
Post by: Shasta542 on September 05, 2007, 11:53:44 pm
September by Toycoon

The summers came and went and still the memories of that certain summer were like a wound on Ennis' heart that had scabbed over but never quite healed; when Ennis heard the name, Jack, again after all this time, the blood came rushing back.

Ennis, you know someone name'a Jack?
Ennis' heart performed a unexpected somersault landing in the middle of his throat, "Maybe... why?"

Ennis carefully read the writing on the back of the postcard and softly stroked the word, "Jack" as though somehow Jack could feel his tender caress.


(http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x221/Shasta542/SWEET.jpg)


Welcome back from the desert,  (http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x221/Shasta542/941.jpg). Glad you had fun!!
Title: September (Cont)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 06, 2007, 12:05:15 am
September (Cont) by Littlewing1957

There was no time to waste!  Ennis couldn’t help himself.  He grabbed his threadbare jacket and headed out.  He didn’t have a postcard handy, but knew he could purchase one at the post office.

“You bet!”  The message was spare and simple, but it was enough to get his feelings across to Jack.  Ennis placed a stamp on the card and put it in the proper slot.  He walked home feeling better, more hopeful than he had in years!

Jack fuckin’ Twist!  Ennis thought he would never hear from him again; was sure Jack was sore from that dirty punch.  Ennis would never forget the look on Jack’s face that day.  But he vowed to put the dreary thoughts out of his head.  All was obviously forgiven, as Jack wanted to see him.  But what if he didn’t show?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 06, 2007, 12:18:36 am
Holy Geez, it's a ghost town in here tonite. That's part of the western heritage too, tho, so it's okay for a minute!  (http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/sign/sign0163.gif) (http://www.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk)

Today is the first time since I've been at Bettermost that this thread was not on the "unread posts since last visit" list.  :P

Dagi and Susie---are probably out looking for our errant cowboy traveler--Gary C.(http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/sad/sad0064.gif) (http://www.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk)(http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/sign/sign0150.gif) (http://www.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk)

Toycoon--may be following some lead to the next "Tickle Me Elmo" type billion seller toy.(http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/characters/character0109.gif) (http://www.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk)

Littlewing--just hasn't made it in yet! It's still early in CA!!(http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/characters/character0163.gif) (http://www.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk)

Spicey, Scott, and all the other fan fickers are probably watching the Republican debates!!(http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/confused/confused0086.gif) (http://www.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk)(http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/sign/sign0105.gif) (http://www.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk) Do you get those in OZ, Spicey?

Me--I'm trying to keep from grading essays.(http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/party/party0004.gif) (http://www.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk) Master procrastinator!!!

Gary--You are one of the muses! Come back!!!(http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/sign/sign0009.gif) (http://www.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk) All I can hear in this room tonite -- chirping crickets!!


Hey, Shasta!  I've been here on and off thoughout the day.  I usually visit at night, it's true.  Don't worry because things have slowed down a bit.  The thread will pick up once Gary returns and we settle in for the fall.  I think people are still enjoying the holiday weekend.  I know I just returned to work today!  Good to see you here, though!
Title: Elk Jerky (Part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 06, 2007, 12:45:16 am
Elk Jerky (Part2) by Littlewing1957

“I think you had better go and join your friends!”  Jack’s voice was icy, and left no room for interpretation.  Darryl’s look was one of incredulous wonder as his gaze shifted from Jack’s face to the barrel of the rifle.  Jack allowed his mind to wander to last summer when he was alone on the mountain to shepherd the sheep.  The days were long, and the loneliness was so sublime that he began to make friendly with some of his charges.  Jack held long, plaintive conversations with some of the sheep.  It was during one of his exchanges with a ewe he named Mary, that he met Darryl.  Or rather, Darryl insinuated himself into Jack’s space.

Darryl had a fondness for taking people unawares.  He was making his rounds one day and noticed the leavings of an illegal fire.  He saw a beautiful young Jack talking to a lamb, and something in Darryl’s chest shifted.  Darryl knew he liked guys from an early age, but he wouldn’t classify himself as queer.  He wanted a wife and kids, as well as a male lover.  Darryl had the lover, but was still working on the wife and kids.  He hid behind a tree and watched in awe as Jack shooed the lamb away with the other flock and climbed into his tent.  Darryl had an idea.

Jack’s thoughts returned to the present, but not before he remembered Darryl’s attempt at blackmail.  “Sleep with me or I’ll tell my bosses that you’ve violated the rules.  Aguirre will be in a lot of trouble, and you’ll be out of a job!"  But Jack was not intimidated.  He threatened to tell everyone in Signal, hell, the entire fine State of Wyoming that Darryl was a blackmailing weasel who would look the other way if Jack offered him a “bribe.”  That shut Darryl up.  Sort of.  Jack spent the rest of the summer trying his best to stay out of Darryl’s way.

“So where is that partner of yours?”  Darryl asked with a leer.  “You know, Twist, that one is kinda cute.  And from what I’ve seen, he likes a little fun with the guys.  You think he’ll come into my teepee if I asked real nice like?  Jack’s eyes narrowed into murderous slits.  His mouth was one grim line.  He cocked the rifle and aimed the barrel at Darryl’s head. 

“Mention him once more and I will shoot you!  I swear to God, I will kill you and feed your carcass to the wolves.  Darryl swallowed, but he wasn’t afraid.  He bowed to Jack and backed away from him, and out of sight.  Jack lowered the 30-30 and sat on a log…

To be Continued??

Title: Re: September
Post by: Dagi on September 06, 2007, 01:21:00 am
September by Toycoon

The summers came and went and still the memories of that certain summer were like a wound on Ennis' heart that had scabbed over but never quite healed; when Ennis heard the name, Jack, again after all this time, the blood came rushing back.

Ennis, you know someone name'a Jack?
Ennis' heart performed a unexpected somersault landing in the middle of his throat, "Maybe... why?"

Ennis carefully read the writing on the back of the postcard and softly stroked the word, "Jack" as though somehow Jack could feel his tender caress.



Toycoon is back!! Finally!! And with a beautiful, beautiful story......I can feel Ennis´ tenderness for Jack, that is one of the most tender gestures of the whole movie, IMHO. Thank you, Toycoon!!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 06, 2007, 01:23:22 am
Holy Geez, it's a ghost town in here tonite. That's part of the western heritage too, tho, so it's okay for a minute!  (http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/sign/sign0163.gif) (http://www.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk)

...........
All I can hear in this room tonite -- chirping crickets!!


Aaaaw, Shasta, life goes in cycles.......so lovely to see you, although I´m late!

Dagi
Title: September (con't, Part 3)
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 06, 2007, 03:25:27 am
September (con’t, part 3)

Doubt and anxiety permeated Ennis’ mind as the 24th of September approached. His nerves were workin’ overtime. He could hardly think. He was short with Alma and the girls. Just pins and needles. Distracted. Since mailing his reply to Jack, Ennis was plagued by a series of absent-minded mistakes. Chagrined, he thought of how he’d recently locked his keys in the truck, and another time, how he’d driven right past the familiar turn off to the farm. That Jack fuckin’ Twist sure had a powerful hold over him! Even still.

With all of his contained energy, Ennis willed his simple and spare postcard to reach its’ destination. Damn, if that postal slot had been big enough, Ennis woulda just mailed himself to Childress. He dared to imagine Jack receiving and reading his two-word reply; the force behind those words strong enough to blind its’ intended recipient.

Ennis felt like he was livin’ a double life. Alone and in secret he would allow the memories of Jack and their summer on Brokeback to readily slip into his consciousness. Daily life and survival reined those memories back in; though now, with much more difficulty. Hope and excitement reawakened the ache in his heart. The flush of desire made his hands sweat. The anticipation of Jack’s arrival was nearly unbearable…
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on September 06, 2007, 07:03:46 am
Aaaaw, Shasta, life goes in cycles.......so lovely to see you, although I´m late!

Dagi

I think I'm in the "spin" cycle!!  ;D

But......have you heard from Gary? Let us know when you do, ok?  You too Susiebell!
Title: Re: September (con't, Part 3)
Post by: Toycoon on September 06, 2007, 10:39:12 am
Quote
With all of his contained energy, Ennis willed his simple and spare postcard to reach its’ destination. Damn, if that postal slot had been big enough, Ennis woulda just mailed himself to Childress. He dared to imagine Jack receiving and reading his two-word reply; the force behind those words strong enough to blind its’ intended recipient.

Yay Littlewing and BBM-Cat,
Thanks for the sweet follow up to 'September'. What an incredibly forceful story we got here! Maybe one of the loyal regulars can muster up a part 4?
Title: Re: September (con't, Part 3)
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 06, 2007, 10:55:23 am
Yay Littlewing and BBM-Cat,
Thanks for the sweet follow up to 'September'. What an incredibly forceful story we got here! Maybe one of the loyal regulars can muster up a part 4?

Thanks Toycoon! I like what we have, and the direction its' going! I hope someone will continue the saga.. :D



Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 06, 2007, 02:08:56 pm
Gary´s alive!! Yeeehaaaw!!! Welcome back, sweetheart!!


(He expects to be back online in a week!)
Title: Re: September (con't, Part 3)
Post by: Dagi on September 06, 2007, 03:17:14 pm
September (con’t, part 3)

Doubt and anxiety permeated Ennis’ mind as the 24th of September approached. His nerves were workin’ overtime. He could hardly think. He was short with Alma and the girls. Just pins and needles. Distracted. Since mailing his reply to Jack, Ennis was plagued by a series of absent-minded mistakes. Chagrined, he thought of how he’d recently locked his keys in the truck, and another time, how he’d driven right past the familiar turn off to the farm. That Jack fuckin’ Twist sure had a powerful hold over him! Even still.

With all of his contained energy, Ennis willed his simple and spare postcard to reach its’ destination. Damn, if that postal slot had been big enough, Ennis woulda just mailed himself to Childress. He dared to imagine Jack receiving and reading his two-word reply; the force behind those words strong enough to blind its’ intended recipient.

Ennis felt like he was livin’ a double life. Alone and in secret he would allow the memories of Jack and their summer on Brokeback to readily slip into his consciousness. Daily life and survival reined those memories back in; though now, with much more difficulty. Hope and excitement reawakened the ache in his heart. The flush of desire made his hands sweat. The anticipation of Jack’s arrival was nearly unbearable…


Littlewing and BBM-Cat, thank you for so brilliantly capturing these thrilling scenes!!

Dagi
Title: Re: Elk Jerky (Part 2)
Post by: Dagi on September 06, 2007, 03:19:46 pm
Elk Jerky (Part2) by Littlewing1957



To be Continued??



Yes, please!! How good that Darryl didn´t know that Jack was never that good with the rifle  ;).....

Dagi
Title: Re: Elk Jerky (Part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 06, 2007, 08:16:53 pm
Yes, please!! How good that Darryl didn´t know that Jack was never that good with the rifle  ;).....

Dagi

 :laugh:  Okay, I'll try to work on a part 3.
Title: Re: September (con't, Part 3)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 06, 2007, 08:19:08 pm
September (con’t, part 3)

Doubt and anxiety permeated Ennis’ mind as the 24th of September approached. His nerves were workin’ overtime. He could hardly think. He was short with Alma and the girls. Just pins and needles. Distracted. Since mailing his reply to Jack, Ennis was plagued by a series of absent-minded mistakes. Chagrined, he thought of how he’d recently locked his keys in the truck, and another time, how he’d driven right past the familiar turn off to the farm. That Jack fuckin’ Twist sure had a powerful hold over him! Even still.

With all of his contained energy, Ennis willed his simple and spare postcard to reach its’ destination. Damn, if that postal slot had been big enough, Ennis woulda just mailed himself to Childress. He dared to imagine Jack receiving and reading his two-word reply; the force behind those words strong enough to blind its’ intended recipient.

Ennis felt like he was livin’ a double life. Alone and in secret he would allow the memories of Jack and their summer on Brokeback to readily slip into his consciousness. Daily life and survival reined those memories back in; though now, with much more difficulty. Hope and excitement reawakened the ache in his heart. The flush of desire made his hands sweat. The anticipation of Jack’s arrival was nearly unbearable…


Beautiful followup, BBM-Cat!  You are truly inspired, my Love.  I'll have to craft a Part 4, but if anyone wants to go for it before I have part 4 posted, feel free.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on September 06, 2007, 09:06:56 pm
Woooo-Wheeee!!! I just got home from work and from taking a friend to the airport in Memphis, TN. and got the word from Dagi that Gary is back!! (Thanks, Dagi!) Great to hear!

We'll have a party when he gets back online!


(http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/party/party0003.gif) (http://www.arlingtonhotelgroup.co.uk)
Title: Apple Strudel
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 06, 2007, 10:10:58 pm
Apple Strudel by Littlewing1957

A BBM Slice of Life

Jack Twist prepared a totally delectable supper for himself and Ennis Del Mar.  He managed to cook a 3 course meal using only a small cook stove powered by propane.  Jack tossed an endive and leek salad, and grilled thick and meaty pork shanks to perfection.  Rounding out the meal was asparagus, and baked potatoes dripping with butter, sour cream and chives. 

Ennis sat back against a log, rubbing his tummy, almost comatose with pleasure.   That Jack Twist and his luxury dinners!  While Ennis sat burping, Jack smiled at his lover.  He lived to see the look on Ennis’ face after he finished a tasty meal.  Jack wanted to go over and kiss Ennis’ half-closed eyelids, but he could wait.  He had to serve dessert.  “Got any room for something sweet?”  Jack smiled as Ennis sprawled against a tree.  Ennis blew out some air and spread his arms wide.  “Of course, Rodeo!"  Ennis wasn’t sure if he could tolerate anything else, he was so full.  But he couldn’t say no to Jack!  "Bring it on, Baby!”  Ennis beamed.

Jack turned to fetch something from his truck.  He brought back a package that held a very special pastry.  He found a bakery on his way to work one day and decided to stop and sample some of their wares.  Jack was quite taken with an apple strudel, and decided to treat his lover to a little bit of heaven.  Jack very carefully placed the pastry on the stove to warm it a bit.  After a few minutes he removed the strudel and cut Ennis a slice, right down the middle.  The first bite and Ennis knew he could gorge on the treat until he got sick.  It was sooo good!  Jack ate his piece with gusto!  When the strudel was devoured, Jack realized that he forgot the milk.  “Ah man, I forgot the milk!  This strudel would have been so good with a glass of milk, don’t you think, Cowboy?”  Ennis rubbed his temples and smiled at Jack.  “Rodeo, if you gave me a glass of milk, you would have had to carry me into the tent on a stretcher!  I wouldn’t be able to move, fer sure!”  Jack laughed uproariously and moved toward his friend.  He placed his arms under Ennis legs, in a gesture to lift him from the log.  “I guess I’ll have to be your stretcher, friend!”  Jack laughed as he hoisted Ennis up.  Ennis didn’t object.  He draped his arms around Jack’s neck and allowed himself to be carried into the tent.
Title: Re: Apple Strudel
Post by: moremojo on September 06, 2007, 10:18:35 pm
Apple Strudel by Littlewing1957
I liked this story, Marie! I confess I was particularly fond of the detail of Ennis's burping--it may sound strange and crude to some, but I love it when men let loose and let it all hang/flow out...just being the manly beasts that they are!  ;D And Jack obviously didn't mind, either (some cultures see belching as a sign of a well-enjoyed meal).

I also liked the detail of Jack carrying his cowboy into the tent, like a bride being brought over the threshold. It's striking to see the two men mingle both masculine and feminine traits in themselves at this stage of the relationship. It's a testament to how much trust and love Ennis bears for Jack by this point.
Title: Re: Apple Strudel
Post by: Dagi on September 07, 2007, 04:37:20 am
Apple Strudel by Littlewing1957

A BBM Slice of Life

.........Jack laughed as he hoisted Ennis up.  Ennis didn’t object.  He draped his arms around Jack’s neck and allowed himself to be carried into the tent.



Mmmmm, delicious!! I love Apfelstrudel, with milk or without....and the ending was so sweet! Beautiful story, Marie!

Dagi
Title: Re: September (con't, Part 3)
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 07, 2007, 08:51:36 am
Beautiful followup, BBM-Cat!  You are truly inspired, my Love.  I'll have to craft a Part 4, but if anyone wants to go for it before I have part 4 posted, feel free.

Thanks Littlewing! I sure felt inspired by Toycoons', and your 'September' pieces. And, please do! I like the collaborative effort :D We could all probably keep this series going throughout the month of September in commemoration of the upcoming anniversary of the Reunion

And, I'm loving the Elk Jerky series from you as well! Your poem was AMAZING! I hope you got to taste that elk jerky after all from all that 'hard' work!
Title: Re: Elk Jerky (Part 2)
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 07, 2007, 08:53:47 am
Yes, please!! How good that Darryl didn´t know that Jack was never that good with the rifle  ;).....

Dagi

LOL! Good one Dagi!  :laugh:  :laugh:
Title: Re: Apple Strudel
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 08, 2007, 12:16:19 am
I liked this story, Marie! I confess I was particularly fond of the detail of Ennis's burping--it may sound strange and crude to some, but I love it when men let loose and let it all hang/flow out...just being the manly beasts that they are!  ;D And Jack obviously didn't mind, either (some cultures see belching as a sign of a well-enjoyed meal).

I also liked the detail of Jack carrying his cowboy into the tent, like a bride being brought over the threshold. It's striking to see the two men mingle both masculine and feminine traits in themselves at this stage of the relationship. It's a testament to how much trust and love Ennis bears for Jack by this point.

Thanks so much moremojo!  I really enjoy reading your comments, and your kind words mean so much to me.  The part about Ennis belching just seemed so appropriate.  I've always imagined E&J being so comfortable with each other that they were not ashamed to let it all hang out.  Why, I'm sure they even farted freely, probably made a game of it.  If I'm not mistaken, I believe someone wrote a fic about Ennis and Jack farting  :laugh:
Title: Re: Apple Strudel
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 08, 2007, 12:18:51 am

Mmmmm, delicious!! I love Apfelstrudel, with milk or without....and the ending was so sweet! Beautiful story, Marie!

Dagi

Thanks, sweetheart!
Title: Re: September (con't, Part 3)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 08, 2007, 12:20:46 am
Thanks Littlewing! I sure felt inspired by Toycoons', and your 'September' pieces. And, please do! I like the collaborative effort :D We could all probably keep this series going throughout the month of September in commemoration of the upcoming anniversary of the Reunion

And, I'm loving the Elk Jerky series from you as well! Your poem was AMAZING! I hope you got to taste that elk jerky after all from all that 'hard' work!

Thanks, BBM-Cat!  You are so sweet.  I have other poems that I'm writing, and I will continue Toycon's "Septemeber."  I hoped to add to it today, but I got here a bit late.  Thanks again for your kind words.  I have yet to get the elk jerky  :laugh:  Perhaps tomorrow!  :laugh:
Title: Re: Apple Strudel
Post by: moremojo on September 08, 2007, 02:16:04 am
Why, I'm sure they even farted freely, probably made a game of it.
I would like to think so; this is certainly an appealing scenario to me. 
If I'm not mistaken, I believe someone wrote a fic about Ennis and Jack farting  :laugh:
Really? Would you or someone else be able to direct me to that? (And sorry if the story should be right under my nose ::) :laugh:).
Title: Re: Apple Strudel
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 08, 2007, 11:25:27 am
I would like to think so; this is certainly an appealing scenario to me.  Really? Would you or someone else be able to direct me to that? (And sorry if the story should be right under my nose ::) :laugh:).

It would be fun to think Jack & Ennis had farting contests. Can't you imagine them just about 'killing' each other in that small pup tent?  :laugh:
Title: September 22nd
Post by: Toycoon on September 08, 2007, 05:18:00 pm
September 22nd by Toycoon

It was straight-up noon on that hot Thursday in September and with the anticipation of seeing his old friend Jack in two days, Ennis could hardly keep his mind on his work pouring asphalt; Ennis put down his shovel, mopped his sweaty brow with his sleeve, yanked off his gloves then silently motioned to his coworker that he was headed to the toilet.

Ennis stepped into the Andy Gump and it teetered slightly when the door slammed behind him; Ennis faced the urinal, unbuckled his belt, undid his fly, fished around in his briefs for his penis then slid the back the skin and began to urinate as he dreamily gazed at the field through the tiny vents in the wooden port-a-potty.

He was suddenly reminded of the time up on Brokeback when he and Jack had a peeing 'contest' to see who could spray the farthest; Jack had always been so fascinated with Ennis' foreskin and as they stood side by side, he asked Ennis if he could touch it. Although Ennis thought Jack's preoccupation with his prepuce was a little odd, he let the other man handle it all the same.

Jack slid the skin back and forth on Ennis cock, squeezing with his fingers then rubbing his finger on the slit; Ennis instinctively reached out to masturbate his buddy's circumcised cock, his movements clumsy at first but then finding a mutual rhythm between them. Ennis began furiously stroking his erection then ejaculating at the urinal when a pounding on the outhouse door brought him back to harsh reality. "Hey, Ennis," demanded Toby, "you comin'? You been in there for ten minutes!"
Title: Re: September (Part 4)
Post by: Dagi on September 08, 2007, 05:32:49 pm
September (Part 4) by Susiebell


"CAN'T A GUY GET SOME FUCKIN' PEACE AND QUIET IN HIS OWN GODDAMN HOUSE?" Jack roared, storming out onto the porch and slamming the front door behind him.  The baby had been hollering all night and there was nothing he or Lureen could do to settle him.

Sonofabitch! Why haven't you answered?  He was about at his witts end.  If he didn't hear from Ennis by tomorrow morning he was gonna climb into his truck, drive out to Riverton and hunt him down.  Well Fuck You Ennis Del Mar!  I have a life, I don't need you!  Taking a deep breath, he returned to the house.

"I'm sorry Lureen, honey....  Here, let me try...."  Lureen, exhausted and sobbing, handed Bobby over to Jack.   "It's alright little fella, it's alright..."  He strolled back out into the cool night air, humming a lullaby, tears falling silently as the memory of Ennis humming the same tune came flooding back.  Gently rocking Bobby in his arms, he felt his child fall slowly into peaceful slumber.




Susie    (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)
   

Susiebell, you are getting quite used to swearing, I see. Oh, it was Jack, of course. ;D

What a very touching and sad follow-up. Did I ever tell you that you are a talented writer? It is an honor that you let me spoil your stories  ;).......

Love! Dagi
Title: Re: September (Part 4)
Post by: Toycoon on September 08, 2007, 07:03:25 pm
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"CAN'T A GUY GET SOME FUCKIN' PEACE AND QUIET IN HIS OWN GODDAMN HOUSE?"

Susiebell, you wild girl! Yer swearing like a sailor. Is that how it gets over at your house?
I can feel Jack's helpless desperation beneath his salty rantings. Great bit of writing, you naughty vixen.
Title: Re: September 22nd
Post by: Dagi on September 08, 2007, 07:41:37 pm
September 22nd by Toycoon

It was straight-up noon on that hot Thursday in September and with the anticipation of seeing his old friend Jack in two days, Ennis could hardly keep his mind on his work pouring asphalt; Ennis put down his shovel, mopped his sweaty brow with his sleeve, yanked off his gloves then silently motioned to his coworker that he was headed to the toilet.

Ennis stepped into the Andy Gump and it teetered slightly when the door slammed behind him; Ennis faced the urinal, unbuckled his belt, undid his fly, fished around in his briefs for his penis then slid the back the skin and began to urinate as he dreamily gazed at the field through the tiny vents in the wooden port-a-potty.

He was suddenly reminded of the time up on Brokeback when he and Jack had a peeing 'contest' to see who could spray the farthest; Jack had always been so fascinated with Ennis' foreskin and as they stood side by side, he asked Ennis if he could touch it. Although Ennis thought Jack's preoccupation with his prepuce was a little odd, he let the other man handle it all the same.

Jack slide the skin back and forth on Ennis cock, squeezing with his fingers then rubbing his finger on the slit; Ennis instinctively reached out to masturbate his buddy's circumcised cock, his movements clumsy at first but then finding a mutual rhythm between them. Ennis began furiously stroking his erection then ejaculating at the urinal when a pounding on the outhouse door brought him back to harsh reality. "Hey, Ennis," demanded Toby, "you comin'? You been in there for ten minutes!"


Toycoon, I can´t believe it, you did it again! And what an erotic story! Love it!

Dagi
Title: Re: Apple Strudel
Post by: Dagi on September 08, 2007, 07:53:08 pm
We certainly seem to be having a lack of interesting conversation on this board lately.

 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
Title: Re: September (Part 4)
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 08, 2007, 09:11:12 pm
September (Part 4) by Susiebell


"CAN'T A GUY GET SOME FUCKIN' PEACE AND QUIET IN HIS OWN GODDAMN HOUSE?" Jack roared, storming out onto the porch and slamming the front door behind him.  The baby had been hollering all night and there was nothing he or Lureen could do to settle him.

Sonofabitch! Why haven't you answered?  He was about at his witts end.  If he didn't hear from Ennis by tomorrow morning he was gonna climb into his truck, drive out to Riverton and hunt him down.  Well Fuck You Ennis Del Mar!  I have a life, I don't need you!  Taking a deep breath, he returned to the house.

"I'm sorry Lureen, honey....  Here, let me try...."  Lureen, exhausted and sobbing, handed Bobby over to Jack.   "It's alright little fella, it's alright..."  He strolled back out into the cool night air, humming a lullaby, tears falling silently as the memory of Ennis humming the same tune came flooding back.  Gently rocking Bobby in his arms, he felt his child fall slowly into peaceful slumber.

Susie    (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)
   

Awesome Susie - way to continue the September saga! You really gave us Jack's POV in your story! The 24th can't get here fast enough!
Title: Re: September 22nd
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 08, 2007, 09:15:56 pm
September 22nd by Toycoon

It was straight-up noon on that hot Thursday in September and with the anticipation of seeing his old friend Jack in two days, Ennis could hardly keep his mind on his work pouring asphalt; Ennis put down his shovel, mopped his sweaty brow with his sleeve, yanked off his gloves then silently motioned to his coworker that he was headed to the toilet.

Ennis stepped into the Andy Gump and it teetered slightly when the door slammed behind him; Ennis faced the urinal, unbuckled his belt, undid his fly, fished around in his briefs for his penis then slid the back the skin and began to urinate as he dreamily gazed at the field through the tiny vents in the wooden port-a-potty.

He was suddenly reminded of the time up on Brokeback when he and Jack had a peeing 'contest' to see who could spray the farthest; Jack had always been so fascinated with Ennis' foreskin and as they stood side by side, he asked Ennis if he could touch it. Although Ennis thought Jack's preoccupation with his prepuce was a little odd, he let the other man handle it all the same.

Jack slide the skin back and forth on Ennis cock, squeezing with his fingers then rubbing his finger on the slit; Ennis instinctively reached out to masturbate his buddy's circumcised cock, his movements clumsy at first but then finding a mutual rhythm between them. Ennis began furiously stroking his erection then ejaculating at the urinal when a pounding on the outhouse door brought him back to harsh reality. "Hey, Ennis," demanded Toby, "you comin'? You been in there for ten minutes!"


Toycoon, I'm speechless! That was WAY BEYOND HOT! I'm loving the September saga!  BTW, would that be wringin' number 101 for Ennis?  :D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on September 08, 2007, 09:29:39 pm
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The funny thing is that I can't swear in real life ... I sound like a pompous ass ... honestly, I sound ridiculous!

Haha. I don't swear much either, Susie. And I get mad at myself when I slip.

Except......I cuss like crazy when I'm driving (alone). Keeps me from exploding. ;D


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Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on September 08, 2007, 09:37:59 pm
Oh yeah .. I forgot about driving!  My language does get quite fruity when I'm behind the wheel!! (http://www.mysmiley.net/imgs/smile/characters/character0182.gif)

Susie     (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



 :laugh: ;D ;)
Title: Re: Elk Jerky and Beans
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 09, 2007, 01:01:42 am
Is there no end to your amazing talents Littlewing!  Superb poem my dear .... and yes ... it did cheer me up no end ... it just took me a while to post a reply (sorry)!

And you were right .... there was no need to panic afterall!

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Thanks, Susie!  I want you guys to be happy.  I hate to see you worried and upset.  I'm so glad everything is okay, and we can get back to normal.  I love you!  :-*
Title: Re: Elk Jerky (Part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 09, 2007, 01:04:49 am
OMG!  I feel like I'm reading a story line from Dallas .... and I LOVE Dallas!  Brilliant writing littlewing ... I can't wait to see if you've written more!

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

 :laugh: Thanks SusieBaby!  I had considered writing more, but part 3 will be awhile in coming.  Thanks for your encouragement!
Title: Re: September (Part 4)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 09, 2007, 01:09:50 am
September (Part 4) by Susiebell


"CAN'T A GUY GET SOME FUCKIN' PEACE AND QUIET IN HIS OWN GODDAMN HOUSE?" Jack roared, storming out onto the porch and slamming the front door behind him.  The baby had been hollering all night and there was nothing he or Lureen could do to settle him.

Sonofabitch! Why haven't you answered?  He was about at his witts end.  If he didn't hear from Ennis by tomorrow morning he was gonna climb into his truck, drive out to Riverton and hunt him down.  Well Fuck You Ennis Del Mar!  I have a life, I don't need you!  Taking a deep breath, he returned to the house.

"I'm sorry Lureen, honey....  Here, let me try...."  Lureen, exhausted and sobbing, handed Bobby over to Jack.   "It's alright little fella, it's alright..."  He strolled back out into the cool night air, humming a lullaby, tears falling silently as the memory of Ennis humming the same tune came flooding back.  Gently rocking Bobby in his arms, he felt his child fall slowly into peaceful slumber.




Susie    (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)
   

Gorgeous writing, SusieBaby!  I never considered taking the story to Jack's place right before he drove out to Riverton!  Brilliant.  I'm overdue for a part???..what?  Well, I'll keep reading  :laugh:
Title: Re: September 22nd
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 09, 2007, 01:11:58 am
September 22nd by Toycoon

It was straight-up noon on that hot Thursday in September and with the anticipation of seeing his old friend Jack in two days, Ennis could hardly keep his mind on his work pouring asphalt; Ennis put down his shovel, mopped his sweaty brow with his sleeve, yanked off his gloves then silently motioned to his coworker that he was headed to the toilet.

Ennis stepped into the Andy Gump and it teetered slightly when the door slammed behind him; Ennis faced the urinal, unbuckled his belt, undid his fly, fished around in his briefs for his penis then slid the back the skin and began to urinate as he dreamily gazed at the field through the tiny vents in the wooden port-a-potty.

He was suddenly reminded of the time up on Brokeback when he and Jack had a peeing 'contest' to see who could spray the farthest; Jack had always been so fascinated with Ennis' foreskin and as they stood side by side, he asked Ennis if he could touch it. Although Ennis thought Jack's preoccupation with his prepuce was a little odd, he let the other man handle it all the same.

Jack slide the skin back and forth on Ennis cock, squeezing with his fingers then rubbing his finger on the slit; Ennis instinctively reached out to masturbate his buddy's circumcised cock, his movements clumsy at first but then finding a mutual rhythm between them. Ennis began furiously stroking his erection then ejaculating at the urinal when a pounding on the outhouse door brought him back to harsh reality. "Hey, Ennis," demanded Toby, "you comin'? You been in there for ten minutes!"


Superb, Toycoon!  Very clever, very well written.  Brilliant!
Title: September 22nd (8:17 p.m.)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 09, 2007, 01:43:14 am
September 22nd (8:17 p.m.) By Littlewing2957

Alma Del Mar was clearing away the dinner dishes.  She served greasy hamburger again, but made it “interesting” by mixing in bell pepper, sweet onion and serving the patties on wheat buns.  Alma took pride in the fact that she knew 57 ways to prepare hamburger.   But Alma was sick of hamburger.  She craved a night out: a social situation, even if it meant taking Ennis’ friend to the Knife and Fork when he arrived in a few days for a visit. 

Ennis sat on the grease stained floor in the living room, a giggling Alma Jr. on his lap.  Jenny was sleeping soundly in the girl’s tiny bedroom.   He looked at the television, but didn’t really see what was on.  His thoughts were with Jack, wondering what it will mean to see him again.  Ennis hugged his small daughter closer and closed his eyes.  He prayed to God that Jack would show up. 

Bedtime came early in the Del Mar household.  Ennis had to get up the next morning for work, while Alma had to tend to the girls, as well as work the afternoon shift at the grocers.  Alma slipped into bed alongside her husband, whose back was turned to the wall.  She was in a frisky mood, but couldn’t be certain if Ennis would love her the right way, or would flip her over like a pancake, and do to what hurt, do what she hated!  Alma placed a tentative hand on her husband’s upper back.  No response.  She rolled over into a fetal position on her cold side of the bed, and drifted to a fitful sleep.
Title: Missing Family
Post by: moremojo on September 09, 2007, 01:52:51 am
Missing Family by moremojo

"Here's me and Lureen at the last state fair, and that's Bobby standing there to my right", stated Jack with a noticeable air of pride as he showed his latest family snapshots to Ennis at their secluded campground; Jack made a regular ritual of showing his family's progress to his Wyoming cowboy on the occasion of their infrequent meetings, hoping thereby to forge a closer connection to the man who mattered most to him in the whole world, and, though he regretted it, understood Ennis's inability to reciprocate in kind, and had long since ceased asking for visual evidence of the scattered Del Mar family.

Ennis usually took pleasure in examining Jack's trove of personal memorabilia, but at this instance felt an odd sadness seize his heart when gazing upon this latest portrait of Twist togetherness, noting as usual Lureen's uncommon beauty and the son's striking growth from last year's picture and his phenomenal resemblance to his handsome, gracious father; Jack discerned a shift in mood as he glanced at his best friend's weathered face and, his heart taking its cue as naturally as ice melts into water, reached up to stroke and hold the nape of his lover's neck, softly saying, "Hey bud, anything wrong?"

Ennis, usually wanting for words, sighed, "I dunno, Jack, I was jes feelin' lonesome seeing you with your family like that...I was just thinkin of what it might be like...to have kids with you, to live with you...but that jes can't be", whereupon Jack, not missing a beat, countered "No, Ennis, you're wrong...it coulda been that way...it can be that way", grabbing those big, gnarled ranch hands to emphasize the point, but Ennis, blinking away the hint of tears, gently but firmly released Jack's grip, walking silently to the creek for silent reflection, while Jack, glued to the ground, saw the old dream fly out of sight once more.
Title: Re: Elk Jerky and Beans
Post by: Dagi on September 09, 2007, 04:48:52 am
Thanks, Susie!  I want you guys to be happy.  I hate to see you worried and upset.  I'm so glad everything is okay, and we can get back to normal.  I love you!  :-*

We better stop making comments like this. Poor Gary will feel all guilty. Hey, he really didn´t mean to upset us!! This stupid boy actually thought we wouldn´t mind not knowing whether he´s doing alright.....

Dagi  ;D
Title: Re: September 22nd (8:17 p.m.)
Post by: Dagi on September 09, 2007, 04:55:23 am
September 22nd (8:17 p.m.) By Littlewing2957

Alma Del Mar was clearing away the dinner dishes.  She served greasy hamburger again, but made it “interesting” by mixing in bell pepper, sweet onion and serving the patties on wheat buns.  Alma took pride in the fact that she knew 57 ways to prepare hamburger.   But Alma was sick of hamburger.  She craved a night out: a social situation, even if it meant taking Ennis’ friend to the Knife and Fork when he arrived in a few days for a visit. 

Ennis sat on the grease stained floor in the living room, a giggling Alma Jr. on his lap.  Jenny was sleeping soundly in the girl’s tiny bedroom.   He looked at the television, but didn’t really see what was on.  His thoughts were with Jack, wondering what it will mean to see him again.  Ennis hugged his small daughter closer and closed his eyes.  He prayed to God that Jack would show up. 

Bedtime came early in the Del Mar household.  Ennis had to get up the next morning for work, while Alma had to tend to the girls, as well as work the afternoon shift at the grocers.  Alma slipped into bed alongside her husband, whose back was turned to the wall.  She was in a frisky mood, but couldn’t be certain if Ennis would love her the right way, or would flip her over like a pancake, and do to what hurt, do what she hated!  Alma placed a tentative hand on her husband’s upper back.  No response.  She rolled over into a fetal position on her cold side of the bed, and drifted to a fitful sleep.


I really feel with Alma. Poor, poor girl. So many victims of that goddamn bitch of an unsatisfactory situation......very touching story, Marie!

Dagi
Title: Re: Missing Family
Post by: Dagi on September 09, 2007, 04:58:47 am
Missing Family by moremojo

"Here's me and Lureen at the last state fair, and that's Bobby standing there to my right", stated Jack with a noticeable air of pride as he showed his latest family snapshots to Ennis at their secluded campground; Jack made a regular ritual of showing his family's progress to his Wyoming cowboy on the occasion of their infrequent meetings, hoping thereby to forge a closer connection to the man who mattered most to him in the whole world, and, though he regretted it, understood Ennis's inability to reciprocate in kind, and had long since ceased asking for visual evidence of the scattered Del Mar family.

Ennis usually took pleasure in examining Jack's trove of personal memorabilia, but at this instance felt an odd sadness seize his heart when gazing upon this latest portrait of Twist togetherness, noting as usual Lureen's uncommon beauty and the son's striking growth from last year's picture and his phenomenal resemblance to his handsome, gracious father; Jack discerned a shift in mood as he glanced at his best friend's weathered face and, his heart taking its cue as naturally as ice melts into water, reached up to stroke and hold the nape of his lover's neck, softly saying, "Hey bud, anything wrong?"

Ennis, usually wanting for words, sighed, "I dunno, Jack, I was jes feelin' lonesome seeing you with your family like that...I was just thinkin of what it might be like...to have kids with you, to live with you...but that jes can't be", whereupon Jack, not missing a beat, countered "No, Ennis, you're wrong...it coulda been that way...it can be that way", grabbing those big, gnarled ranch hands to emphasize the point, but Ennis, blinking away the hint of tears, gently but firmly released Jack's grip, walking silently to the creek for silent reflection, while Jack, glued to the ground, saw the old dream fly out of sight once more.

It´s so frustrating and sad to read that......and to know that it was certainly only one of many similar situations.....it breaks my heart.  :'(

Great writing, Scott, as always, it´s so good to have you here!

Dagi
Title: Re: September 22nd
Post by: Toycoon on September 09, 2007, 12:54:26 pm
Toycoon, I'm speechless! That was WAY BEYOND HOT! I'm loving the September saga!  BTW, would that be wringin' number 101 for Ennis?  :D

Ennis could practically teach a class in the activity: 'Wringing It Out 101!
Title: Re: September 22nd (8:17 p.m.)
Post by: Toycoon on September 09, 2007, 01:00:27 pm
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She rolled over into a fetal position on her cold side of the bed, and drifted to a fitful sleep.

I always feel so sad for Alma. I know tomtrueman doesn't like her a bit but I see her as an innocent victim of nature's cruel prank. Bravo, Littlewing, for showing us another side of 'September'.
Title: Re: Missing Family
Post by: Toycoon on September 09, 2007, 01:06:25 pm
Quote
Ennis usually took pleasure in examining Jack's trove of personal memorabilia, but at this instance felt an odd sadness seize his heart when gazing upon this latest portrait of Twist togetherness, noting as usual Lureen's uncommon beauty and the son's striking growth from last year's picture and his phenomenal resemblance to his handsome, gracious father; Jack discerned a shift in mood as he glanced at his best friend's weathered face and, his heart taking its cue as naturally as ice melts into water, reached up to stroke and hold the nape of his lover's neck, softly saying, "Hey bud, anything wrong?"

Moremojo, your prose is always so wonderful to read. Each paragraph is so rich and the words you choose are sumptuously poetic. All in only three sentences! It brings a tear to my eye...
Title: Re: Missing Family
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 09, 2007, 06:13:16 pm
Missing Family by moremojo

"Here's me and Lureen at the last state fair, and that's Bobby standing there to my right", stated Jack with a noticeable air of pride as he showed his latest family snapshots to Ennis at their secluded campground; Jack made a regular ritual of showing his family's progress to his Wyoming cowboy on the occasion of their infrequent meetings, hoping thereby to forge a closer connection to the man who mattered most to him in the whole world, and, though he regretted it, understood Ennis's inability to reciprocate in kind, and had long since ceased asking for visual evidence of the scattered Del Mar family.

Ennis usually took pleasure in examining Jack's trove of personal memorabilia, but at this instance felt an odd sadness seize his heart when gazing upon this latest portrait of Twist togetherness, noting as usual Lureen's uncommon beauty and the son's striking growth from last year's picture and his phenomenal resemblance to his handsome, gracious father; Jack discerned a shift in mood as he glanced at his best friend's weathered face and, his heart taking its cue as naturally as ice melts into water, reached up to stroke and hold the nape of his lover's neck, softly saying, "Hey bud, anything wrong?"

Ennis, usually wanting for words, sighed, "I dunno, Jack, I was jes feelin' lonesome seeing you with your family like that...I was just thinkin of what it might be like...to have kids with you, to live with you...but that jes can't be", whereupon Jack, not missing a beat, countered "No, Ennis, you're wrong...it coulda been that way...it can be that way", grabbing those big, gnarled ranch hands to emphasize the point, but Ennis, blinking away the hint of tears, gently but firmly released Jack's grip, walking silently to the creek for silent reflection, while Jack, glued to the ground, saw the old dream fly out of sight once more.

Moremojo, this is just beautiful.  So very sad, especially at the end.  Poor Jack loved Ennis so much that he would have left his family in a heartbeat.  But Ennis was too damaged to let it happen.  Beautiful writing, moremojo.
Title: Re: September 22nd (8:17 p.m.)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 09, 2007, 06:14:13 pm
I really feel with Alma. Poor, poor girl. So many victims of that goddamn bitch of an unsatisfactory situation......very touching story, Marie!

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi!
Title: Re: September 22nd (8:17 p.m.)
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 09, 2007, 06:33:46 pm
I always feel so sad for Alma. I know tomtrueman doesn't like her a bit but I see her as an innocent victim of nature's cruel prank. Bravo, Littlewing, for showing us another side of 'September'.


You're right, Toycoon - Littlewing poignantly depicts the toll of Jack & Ennis' relationship on the marriage - something we don't often think about or allow ourselves to focus upon - it's so easy to get caught up in the pleasurable aspects of their coupling.

Thank you Littlewing for depicting the realism of their situation. Susiebell also depicted this well in her recent September story.
Title: Re: Missing Family
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 09, 2007, 06:39:47 pm
Missing Family by moremojo

"Here's me and Lureen at the last state fair, and that's Bobby standing there to my right", stated Jack with a noticeable air of pride as he showed his latest family snapshots to Ennis at their secluded campground; Jack made a regular ritual of showing his family's progress to his Wyoming cowboy on the occasion of their infrequent meetings, hoping thereby to forge a closer connection to the man who mattered most to him in the whole world, and, though he regretted it, understood Ennis's inability to reciprocate in kind, and had long since ceased asking for visual evidence of the scattered Del Mar family.

Ennis usually took pleasure in examining Jack's trove of personal memorabilia, but at this instance felt an odd sadness seize his heart when gazing upon this latest portrait of Twist togetherness, noting as usual Lureen's uncommon beauty and the son's striking growth from last year's picture and his phenomenal resemblance to his handsome, gracious father; Jack discerned a shift in mood as he glanced at his best friend's weathered face and, his heart taking its cue as naturally as ice melts into water, reached up to stroke and hold the nape of his lover's neck, softly saying, "Hey bud, anything wrong?"

Ennis, usually wanting for words, sighed, "I dunno, Jack, I was jes feelin' lonesome seeing you with your family like that...I was just thinkin of what it might be like...to have kids with you, to live with you...but that jes can't be", whereupon Jack, not missing a beat, countered "No, Ennis, you're wrong...it coulda been that way...it can be that way", grabbing those big, gnarled ranch hands to emphasize the point, but Ennis, blinking away the hint of tears, gently but firmly released Jack's grip, walking silently to the creek for silent reflection, while Jack, glued to the ground, saw the old dream fly out of sight once more.

Moremojo, This is so beautiful, touching, and well written...I love the focus on the family in this episode; and especially, that bit of hope that keeps Jack invested in his dream, and which always seems to be just out of reach.
Title: Goodbye, Jack!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 09, 2007, 06:42:36 pm
Goodbye, Jack! By littlewing1957

I’ll find you, Jack!
It is in my power
Wherever you may be..
Across the years or in an hour,
Please save a place for me.


Ennis placed the card next to the stone.  He drove 1400 miles to Childress to pay his respects to his lover, Jack Twist.  Ennis really struggled with the notion of driving down; didn’t know if he could stand to see where half of his friend’s ashes were interred.

What did Lureen say?  “We put a stone up!”  Ennis didn’t want to intrude on Jack’s widow.  He did the research himself and found the memorial park where half of Jack's cremated body lay buried.

Ennis wrote the little poem himself.  He didn’t know he had it in him, but the occasion was special.  Standing there, looking down at Jack’s headstone, he felt at peace.  The stone read, “Jack Twist, faithful unto death!”  Ennis had to smile at that.  Just as he was turning to leave, a sudden gust of wind rushed around him.  And stranger yet, a drop of dew landed on his cheek.  Ennis smiled as he dabbed at his cheek, his tears mingling with the lone drop of dew.  “I love you too, Jack Twist.”  No other words, no further visits to Childress were necessary.  Ennis climbed into his truck and headed home.

Title: Re: Goodbye, Jack!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 09, 2007, 07:04:35 pm
Oh littlewing  :'( .... I'm speechless .... I really don't know what to say .... I can hardly see the keyboard with all these tears in my eyes!

Beautiful dearest Littlewing .... just beautiful.


Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Thanks, SusieBaby!  I don't even know why I wrote this!  I'm crying like a baby my own damn self! 
Title: Re: Goodbye, Jack!
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 09, 2007, 07:16:12 pm
Goodbye, Jack! By littlewing1957

I’ll find you, Jack!
It is in my power
Wherever you may be..
Across the years or in an hour,
Please save a place for me.


Ennis placed the card next to the stone.  He drove 1400 miles to Childress to pay his respects to his lover, Jack Twist.  Ennis really struggled with the notion of driving down; didn’t know if he could stand to see where half of his friend’s ashes were interred.

What did Lureen say?  “We put a stone up!”  Ennis didn’t want to intrude on Jack’s widow.  He did the research himself and found the memorial park where half of Jack's cremated body lay buried.

Ennis wrote the little poem himself.  He didn’t know he had it in him, but the occasion was special.  Standing there, looking down at Jack’s headstone, he felt at peace.  The stone read, “Jack Twist, faithful unto death!”  Ennis had to smile at that.  Just as he was turning to leave, a sudden gust of wind rushed around him.  And stranger yet, a drop of dew landed on his cheek.  Ennis smiled as he dabbed at his cheek, his tears mingling with the lone drop of dew.  “I love you too, Jack Twist.”  No other words, no further visits to Childress were necessary.  Ennis climbed into his truck and headed home.


Incredibly powerful, so beautiful - it brought tears to my eyes. Ennis' grief process is just as important as ours. Thank you, Littlewing...
Title: Re: Goodbye, Jack!
Post by: Shakesthecoffecan on September 09, 2007, 07:34:03 pm
Thanks, SusieBaby!  I don't even know why I wrote this!  I'm crying like a baby my own damn self! 

It is your heart speaking, friend.  ;D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on September 09, 2007, 11:46:20 pm
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The stone read, “Jack Twist, faithful unto death!”  Ennis had to smile at that.  Just as he was turning to leave, a sudden gust of wind rushed around him.  And stranger yet, a drop of dew landed on his cheek.  Ennis smiled as he dabbed at his cheek, his tears mingling with the lone drop of dew.  “I love you too, Jack Twist.”  No other words, no further visits to Childress were necessary.

Littlewing1957, that was really heartbreakingly sad but still beautiful just the same. Sometimes, I wish there had been a little more closure for Ennis in the movie; so many unanswered questions and missing scenes.
Title: Re: Goodbye, Jack!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 10, 2007, 12:32:05 am
Incredibly powerful, so beautiful - it brought tears to my eyes. Ennis' grief process is just as important as ours. Thank you, Littlewing...

Thank you, BBM-Cat!  I love your picture!  You're beautiful!  :)
Title: Re: Goodbye, Jack!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 10, 2007, 12:33:26 am
It is your heart speaking, friend.  ;D

Thanks, my Love!  I'm forever changed...in the best way possible!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 10, 2007, 12:34:46 am
Littlewing1957, that was really heartbreakingly sad but still beautiful just the same. Sometimes, I wish there had been a little more closure for Ennis in the movie; so many unanswered questions and missing scenes.

This is very sweet, Toycoon.  In my mind, Ennis must have visited Jack's stone in Childress.  How could he not?  The lack of closure would eat away at him like a cancer, IMHO!
Title: Re: September 22nd (8:17 p.m.)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 10, 2007, 12:37:24 am
You're right, Toycoon - Littlewing poignantly depicts the toll of Jack & Ennis' relationship on the marriage - something we don't often think about or allow ourselves to focus upon - it's so easy to get caught up in the pleasurable aspects of their coupling.

Thank you Littlewing for depicting the realism of their situation. Susiebell also depicted this well in her recent September story.

Yes, BBM-Cat!  I like to try to fill in the holes - explore what I think actually went on in both marriages.  You're right --SusieBelle has a real gift for looking inside J&E's loveless marriages.
Title: Re: September 22nd (8:17 p.m.)
Post by: moremojo on September 10, 2007, 01:41:49 am
You're right --SusieBelle has a real gift for looking inside J&E's loveless marriages.
I do think there was reciprocal love in Ennis and Alma's marriage, and possibly in Jack and Lureen's (Lureen, in the film at any rate, did love Jack in her way), but neither man was in love with their wives--they had fallen for each other.
Title: Re: Goodbye, Jack!
Post by: Dagi on September 10, 2007, 06:58:08 am
Goodbye, Jack! By littlewing1957

I’ll find you, Jack!
It is in my power
Wherever you may be..
Across the years or in an hour,
Please save a place for me.


Ennis placed the card next to the stone.  He drove 1400 miles to Childress to pay his respects to his lover, Jack Twist.  Ennis really struggled with the notion of driving down; didn’t know if he could stand to see where half of his friend’s ashes were interred.

What did Lureen say?  “We put a stone up!”  Ennis didn’t want to intrude on Jack’s widow.  He did the research himself and found the memorial park where half of Jack's cremated body lay buried.

Ennis wrote the little poem himself.  He didn’t know he had it in him, but the occasion was special.  Standing there, looking down at Jack’s headstone, he felt at peace.  The stone read, “Jack Twist, faithful unto death!”  Ennis had to smile at that.  Just as he was turning to leave, a sudden gust of wind rushed around him.  And stranger yet, a drop of dew landed on his cheek.  Ennis smiled as he dabbed at his cheek, his tears mingling with the lone drop of dew.  “I love you too, Jack Twist.”  No other words, no further visits to Childress were necessary.  Ennis climbed into his truck and headed home.



Thank you for making me cry. Sometimes I need that. What a touching and comforting story. Thank you, Marie!

Dagi
Title: Re: Goodbye, Jack!
Post by: Dagi on September 10, 2007, 07:01:07 am
Ah honey ... we can all sit and cry together then!  You wait until tomorrow ... Dagi will be sobbing her socks off too!

Susie  :-*

 :laugh: :'( :laugh: :'( :laugh:  I´m laughing through my tears! Susie, you know me so well.....the only thing that keeps us from crying all together is the time difference!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 10, 2007, 07:04:04 am
Hi BBM_Cat! So nice to see your face now! You look goood!  ;D

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 10, 2007, 07:23:41 am
I´ll miss you, too, and my whole family here....I´ll be back on Friday or Saturday!

 :-* :-* :-*
Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 11, 2007, 01:05:53 am
I´ll miss you, too, and my whole family here....I´ll be back on Friday or Saturday!

 :-* :-* :-*
Dagi

Godspeed, Dagi!  We'll be here when you return.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on September 11, 2007, 01:08:18 am
Dagi, we're gonna miss you, love bunny!
Come back soon,
Toycoon
Title: September 23rd (10:32 a.m.)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 11, 2007, 01:21:40 am
September 23rd (10:32 a.m.) by Littlewing1957

Jack took the day off, as he was too nervous to work.  His plans were finalized, his route to Riverton, Wyoming all mapped out.  Everything was in order down to the underwear that he planned to take.  But Jack was terrified.  He walked to his desk and found the reply that Ennis sent.  “You bet” was definitive and laconic, just like Ennis Del Mar.

Jack hoped that Ennis would be receptive, that it was not too late to rekindle what they had…whatever that was!  Jack remembered his mom talking about a childhood friend who lost touch with her, but reappeared after a 20 year absence.  His mom and her friend laughed and talked like they never parted.  Jack prayed that he and Ennis could pick up where they left off, just like his mom and her childhood friend.

“I wonder if he’ll let me touch him!”  Jack almost spoke out loud when he thought about the idyllic days and nights up on Brokeback.  All the hours of laughter, love, occasional tenderness.  Jack wanted Ennis.  He needed him.  He would bide his time, that is, if Ennis allowed it.  In a few days’ time, Jack Twist intended to propose to Ennis Del Mar.
Title: Re: September 22nd (8:17 p.m.)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 11, 2007, 01:22:18 am
Well thank you both for the kind words... but I think you must be talking about someone else!

(I never was very good at accepting compliments!!)

Susie  :-*

You're welcome, SusieBaby!  I mean every word!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: spiceylife on September 11, 2007, 09:05:22 am

September 24th (4.15pm) by spiceylife

“If he shows.”

He’ll show.  Sure he will.  Jack Twist’s a man of his word, I know that much.  He’ll come.  Won’t he?

His nerves were almost shot.  The waiting was so hard.

Feel like a kid at Christmas waitin’ ta open the presents.  Jesus, hurry Jack…

He lit up another smoke, his twentieth for the day, and flicked the cheap, plastic lighter - on, off, on, off – his leg bouncing up and down with nervous tension…fiery anticipation at seeing that handsome face again, that ready smile….

What’ll I do?  Will I kiss him?  Like I used ta?  Sweetest lips I ever seen, ever tasted.  Or felt.  Ah, fuck, Del Mar!  You ain’t gonna kiss him!  Whatcha thinkin, ya damn fool?  Christ!  Kiss another man out in public?  Christ, anyone could see us, and no tellin what they’d fuckin do!  Ain’t gonna risk Alma seein’ us, no way.  No, ya ain’t kissin Jack here.  That ain’t gonna happen.  Save it for later, Del Mar. 

He grabbed another icy beer from the fridge, his eighth for the day, and gulped down most of it in one hit, trying to ease his frayed emotions.

When he gets here, I’ll jes’ walk down those stairs and slap him on the back a few times, just like I do with the other ranch hands when I ain’t seen ‘em in a while.  That’s it.  That’s what I’m gonna do.  Slap his back and say ‘How ya doin’, bud?  How ya been?’   Jes like that.  Like normal.  Two guys smoochin each other?  No way.  I can stand it ‘til later.  I ain’t kissin’ Jack out in the street.

He drained the rest of the amber fluid from the bottle as his mind drifted away, slowly filling with precious, secret, tightly-held memories of big teeth and full, curved lips, of dark hair and broad shoulders, of large, rough hands and tight denim and eyes that knew him so well…

The wind swirled and twisted, blowing fiercely in the street below as the sound of a pickup drew closer.

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 11, 2007, 10:34:24 pm
September 24th (4.15pm) by spiceylife

“If he shows.”

He’ll show.  Sure he will.  Jack Twist’s a man of his word, I know that much.  He’ll come.  Won’t he?

His nerves were almost shot.  The waiting was so hard.

Feel like a kid at Christmas waitin’ ta open the presents.  Jesus, hurry Jack…

He lit up another smoke, his twentieth for the day, and flicked the cheap, plastic lighter - on, off, on, off – his leg bouncing up and down with nervous tension…fiery anticipation at seeing that handsome face again, that ready smile….

What’ll I do?  Will I kiss him?  Like I used ta?  Sweetest lips I ever seen, ever tasted.  Or felt.  Ah, fuck, Del Mar!  You ain’t gonna kiss him!  Whatcha thinkin, ya damn fool?  Christ!  Kiss another man out in public?  Christ, anyone could see us, and no tellin what they’d fuckin do!  Ain’t gonna risk Alma seein’ us, no way.  No, ya ain’t kissin Jack here.  That ain’t gonna happen.  Save it for later, Del Mar. 

He grabbed another icy beer from the fridge, his eighth for the day, and gulped down most of it in one hit, trying to ease his frayed emotions.

When he gets here, I’ll jes’ walk down those stairs and slap him on the back a few times, just like I do with the other ranch hands when I ain’t seen ‘em in a while.  That’s it.  That’s what I’m gonna do.  Slap his back and say ‘How ya doin’, bud?  How ya been?’   Jes like that.  Like normal.  Two guys smoochin each other?  No way.  I can stand it ‘til later.  I ain’t kissin’ Jack out in the street.

He drained the rest of the amber fluid from the bottle as his mind drifted away, slowly filling with precious, secret, tightly-held memories of big teeth and full, curved lips, of dark hair and broad shoulders, of large, rough hands and tight denim and eyes that knew him so well…

The wind swirled and twisted, blowing fiercely in the street below as the sound of a pickup drew closer.



Wow, Spicey, what an addition to our September series!  Beautiful, just beautiful.  It is so good to see you, Spicey.  I really miss your gorgeous writing.  Thanks so much for posting this for us!  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 11, 2007, 10:40:04 pm


BRAVO to both Littlewing and Spicey - the tension sure is mounting!! We got a glimpse of the surmounting anticipation from both perspectives! The 24th can't get here fast enough!  :D



Title: Re: September 23rd (10:32 a.m.)
Post by: Toycoon on September 11, 2007, 11:43:34 pm
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“I wonder if he’ll let me touch him!”  Jack almost spoke out loud when he thought about the idyllic days and nights up on Brokeback.  All the hours of laughter, love, occasional tenderness.  Jack wanted Ennis.  He needed him.  He would bide his time, that is, if Ennis allowed it.  In a few days’ time, Jack Twist intended to propose to Ennis Del Mar.

Love this, Littlewing! I always laugh because for a second before Ennis gives Jack the greatest screen kiss of all time, Jack has the most startled look on his face. It's as though he's thinking, 'Sheee-it, is DelMar gonna punch me agin'? How do I get myself into these messes?!"
I think I'm gonna write a second part to your "September 23rd (10:32 a.m.). That OK with you, honey pie?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on September 11, 2007, 11:46:58 pm
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What’ll I do?  Will I kiss him?  Like I used ta?  Sweetest lips I ever seen, ever tasted.  Or felt.  Ah, fuck, Del Mar!  You ain’t gonna kiss him!  Whatcha thinkin, ya damn fool?  Christ!  Kiss another man out in public?  Christ, anyone could see us, and no tellin what they’d fuckin do!  Ain’t gonna risk Alma seein’ us, no way.  No, ya ain’t kissin Jack here.  That ain’t gonna happen.  Save it for later, Del Mar.

Great tale, Spiceylife! You can't make Jack arrive too soon now, we still got thirteen days 'till September 24th.
Title: Re: September 23rd (10:32 a.m.)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 12, 2007, 10:57:46 pm
Love this, Littlewing! I always laugh because for a second before Ennis gives Jack the greatest screen kiss of all time, Jack has the most startled look on his face. It's as though he's thinking, 'Sheee-it, is DelMar gonna punch me agin'? How do I get myself into these messes?!"
I think I'm gonna write a second part to your "September 23rd (10:32 a.m.). That OK with you, honey pie?

Sure, please do write a second part!
Title: September 24th (2:47a.m.)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 12, 2007, 11:48:50 pm
September 24th (2:47a.m.) by Littlewing1957

Jack Twist lay in his bed, sandwiched between his wife and son.  Little Bobby was asleep, his chest heaving against Jack’s side.  He patted his son’s tiny head as he looked upon his wife.  She was snuggled up against him, breathing calmly; not a care in the world.  Jack ran a finger through her silky auburn hair.  “It’s not you..”  He whispered to his sleeping spouse as he thought of Ennis Del Mar: the true love of his life.  If everything was to go as planned, he could leave Lureen, someone he can live with, for Ennis, the one person he can’t live without.  If Ennis said the word, Jack wouldn’t be back.  The prospect of living the sweet life with Ennis both terrified and excited him.  But what of Lureen and Bobby?  Jack had it all figured out.  Just a few hours more, and the second half of his life could begin…
Title: September 24th (2:49 a.m.)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 13, 2007, 12:04:39 am
September 24th (2:49 a.m.) by Littlewing1957

Ennis sat up on his lumpy mattress and looked at the battery powered clock on his bureau.  2:49 a.m.!  He was bone weary, but was too hyper to sleep.  The thought of Jack’s visit had him climbing the walls.  Alma didn’t stir, couldn’t image his torment.  She slept soundly, curled up on her side of the warm bed.  He thought about getting a beer to calm his nerves, but thought better of it.  He wouldn’t show up for work tomorrow; he couldn’t.  It was all arranged.  No way could Ennis do an honest day’s work agonizing about Jack driving all the way from Texas to see him.  Ennis had to will himself to sleep, nerves be damned!  It wouldn’t do to be too dang tired to welcome his friend.  When Alma stirred a bit, Ennis pulled her close in an effort to calm himself.  The feel of her supple body somehow mellowed him and he was able to sleep…
Title: September 23rd (8:45 p.m.)
Post by: Toycoon on September 13, 2007, 02:27:00 am
September 23rd (8:45 p.m.) by Toycoon

Jack had portrayed the devoted husband and the doting father for so long that he'd started to believe his dutiful performance but the truth was, Jack had never stopped thinking about the one person he'd really fallen deeply in love with, yes love, so long ago on Brokeback Mountain.

Love, is that what it was? Jack felt a hot tingling in his chest and his crotch then his hand moved to the growing bulge in his pants; his face went flush at the very thought of that incredible summer, four years ago when the only thing that mattered was the closeness he and Ennis shared night after night.

The shrill ringing of the telephone caused the blood to return to Jack's brain and leaping to his feet, he answered it on the third ring. It was Lureen calling to say that she and the baby would be staying at her folks' home for the night so she wouldn't be seeing Jack before he left on his hunting trip the next day.
Title: Re: September 23rd (8.50pm)
Post by: Toycoon on September 13, 2007, 10:12:36 am
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I might not be coming back .... "Everythin's fine, 'course it is."   Jack sounded a little too casual, "It' just a long trip is all  .... and anythin' could happen .... I could hook a big one and get dragged under ....  hell, I could get killed changing a flat .... just come home Lureen."

Boy, I'd say he "hooked a big one"! Great forshadowing, little Susiebell.

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Lureen laughed out loud, Jack was always so melodramatic, "I'll be there in an hour .... love you honey".  That would give her just enough time to fix her makeup and comb her silky locks.  She smiled to herself, Lureen Newsome Twist was getting some sweet Jack lovin' tonight.

Could this be the begining of "husbands no longer dancing with their wives"? We'll see!
Title: Re: September 23rd (8:45 p.m.)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 13, 2007, 11:03:15 pm


I can't tell you how excited I'm getting at the prospect of their reunion ... but who's going to dare to write it??  Perhaps we should all do it together ... a sentence at a time ... on the 24th!!

Susie   (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


This sounds good to me, SusieBaby!  A sentence at a time?  Sounds like fun!
Title: Re: September 23rd (8.50pm)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 13, 2007, 11:05:49 pm
Although I'm not sure I can write about straight sex ... it's just too weird  :laugh: :laugh:

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


I thought I was the only one who felt this way!!!  I can't even begin to write about straight sex!  I don't think I ever could!  :-\
Title: Re: Look at what the cat dragged in
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 13, 2007, 11:14:10 pm


Coming back to Merced was sort of a letdown after spending some time in the park, but I knew that the cable guy was on the way, so I had that to look forward to.  Just a couple of hours ago the cuttist bear cub of a young man showed up at my door to hook me up.  He was a little chubby, and a little short, and he needed a shave, so it's unlikely that you'll see him in a porno soon, but he was very cuddly and shy, and when he smiled dimples appeared on his round face.  I could have kissed him, especially since he got me back online and I can finally reconnect with you guys.  I promise to answer my PM’s, and read the pages I missed on the board in the next few days.  I’ve got a lot to keep me busy.  I really, really missed you guys, and it’s so great to be back!

Wow, Gary!  I really enjoyed reading through this!  I'm go glad you're back, and I'm glad you were able to take time out to tour Yosemite.  I haven't been there since I was about 13 or so.  Well, I'll let you get caught up, and will talk to you a bit later.  Welcome back, Sugarboo!
Title: September 23rd (10:47 p.m.)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 13, 2007, 11:33:05 pm
September 23rd (10:47 p.m.) By Littlewing1957

When Lureen arrived home with young Bobby in her arms, Jack was asleep on the living room couch.  He was fully dressed, though, and looked very appealing with his head nestled on crossed arms.  Lureen tiptoed past him, even though she wanted so much to wake him and kiss his full, sensuous lips. 

After placing the baby in his crib, Lureen looked in on a still sleeping Jack and shrugged.  She wondered if she should disturb his rest; after all, he had a long 14 hour drive ahead of him.  Lureen walked into the bedroom and donned her sexiest nightgown.  She dabbed a few drops of Youth Dew behind each ear, and decided to go fetch her husband and bring him to bed.

He looks so peaceful!  Lureen observed as she brushed the hair on his crown.  She increased the rubbing motion until Jack began to stir!  “Ennis?”  He mumbled fitfully, huskily!  Lureen jumped back, hid her hands that suddenly balled into fists!  She turned and stormed into the bedroom, just as Jack’s vision sharpened.  “Lureen, honey, wait!”  He shouted after her and ran to the bedroom door.  The door was locked….
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on September 14, 2007, 02:29:10 am
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Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on September 14, 2007, 04:27:45 am
You're so nice, Shasta.  Thanks so much.  Gosh, this makes me want to go away again just so I can get more welcome backs like this one.   ;D

Gary

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Title: Re: The Black Truck
Post by: Toycoon on September 14, 2007, 07:30:58 pm
Hi there Toycoon.  I had to look up Rory Calhoun at IMDb.  Considering the number of movies and TV shows he was on I'm sure I must have seen him, but I just don't remember him.

It's interesting that you have Ennis rationalize his attraction to Jack by having him explain his interest to himself by comparing Jack to a movie star.  I do that, too.  I'm always walking around and saying, "Gosh, that boy looks like Daniel Radcliff."   :-X

Gary

Welcome back, Mr. Garycottle. You had the 'Jack with Ennis' girls in a terrible tailspin! They were so worried about you. Apparently, they've never moved across country or they don't remember what an ordeal it can be. It takes time to settle in and whatnot. I wasn't worried about for a minute. You're a big boy... you can handle yourself (and I don't mean JO, neither, you nasty guy!). Now that you've reappeared, we West-Coasters should make a plan to meet some place on our side of the world. Perhaps around the first of the year?
Title: Re: The Trip to Signal
Post by: Toycoon on September 14, 2007, 07:34:18 pm
Oh, this explains a lot, Toycoon.  Jack had been rubbing his fingers over something that looked like Ennis since the age of 9.  No wonder he couldn't keep his mitts off the boy.   ;)
Gary

You're in fine form, boy! Haven't missed a beat. :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on September 14, 2007, 11:32:30 pm
Vegas was fun! I went for a Weekender 60's party.Three days of drunken, debauched decadence. Hotter n' hell though. I did a lot of sleeping in the  air conditioned room during the day and wild partying at night. I didn't do any gambling, sorry to say but it is funny to see slot machines at the airport and the corner pharmacy selling cigarettes and booze.
Title: Re: September 23rd (8.50pm)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 15, 2007, 01:29:33 am
:laugh: Oh littlewing honey ... what has Brokeback Mountain done to us??   :-\

I don't know, SusieBaby!  It totally changed me!    ???   But I'm okay with that!   :)
Title: Re: The Black Truck (Part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 15, 2007, 01:33:14 am
Hi there littlewing.  Yeah, I think Jack fell for Ennis right there when he first laid eyes on him.  I don't know if it was love, but he sure gave Ennis a lusty look, didn't he?  Wow!  Sure wish more hot guys looked at me like that.  At best I get an appreciative or tolerant smile when I'm the one doing the leering.   :laugh:  (BTW, I've noticed that guys out here are far more likely to notice that you are watching them.   :P  It's like they're attuned to it.  Back in WV, most of the guys are oblivious.  They don't seem to be aware that another guy could look at them that way.)

Gary

Gary, thanks for the kind words.  Seems like you're picking up on the nuances already!  Yeah, Cali is a bit different!  ;)  It is only a matter of time before those young hunks start leering at you!  ;)
Title: Re: The Black Truck (Part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 15, 2007, 01:38:50 am
Yeah, tag teaming sounds great to me, too.   ;D  (Who'll be the it boy?)

Gary

P.S.  You guys say you missed me.  But I'm wondering how much you missed my impertinent comments.   :P

We missed your comments a great deal!  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 15, 2007, 06:35:22 am
Dagi, we're gonna miss you, love bunny!
Come back soon,
Toycoon

Hey girls and guy, I´m back!! Sorry, I didn´t write a single story, my friend and I spent some really lazy days together, but I missed all of you so much!
Title: Re: September 23rd (10:32 a.m.)
Post by: Dagi on September 15, 2007, 06:38:37 am
September 23rd (10:32 a.m.) by Littlewing1957

..........Jack wanted Ennis.  He needed him.  He would bide his time, that is, if Ennis allowed it.  In a few days’ time, Jack Twist intended to propose to Ennis Del Mar.


I love the September-Saga! I´m so looking forward to reading more of it!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 15, 2007, 06:43:33 am
September 24th (4.15pm) by spiceylife


God, Spiceylife, so good to see you again! And I love your story!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 15, 2007, 06:50:03 am
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September 24th (2:47a.m.) by Littlewing1957

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September 24th (2:49 a.m.) by Littlewing1957

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September 23rd (8:45 p.m.) by Toycoon


Love it, love it, love it, Marie and Toycoon!! Can´t get enough of it! Gorgeous writing, you two!!

Dagi
Title: Re: September 23rd (8.50pm)
Post by: Dagi on September 15, 2007, 06:54:24 am
September 23rd (8.50pm) by Susiebell

Jack picked up the phone almost immediately and called her back, "Hey honey .... me again .... look, I want you to come home, I need you both here with me tonight."

"Well sure honey, if it's that important to you." there was a hint of a smile in her voice, it wasn't very often Jack needed  her, felt kinda nice. "Everythin' alright Jack?"

I might not be coming back .... "Everythin's fine, 'course it is."   Jack sounded a little too casual, "It' just a long trip is all  .... and anythin' could happen .... I could hook a big one and get dragged under ....  hell, I could get killed changing a flat .... just come home Lureen."

Lureen laughed out loud, Jack was always so melodramatic, "I'll be there in an hour .... love you honey".  That would give her just enough time to fix her makeup and comb her silky locks.  She smiled to herself, Lureen Newsome Twist was getting some sweet Jack lovin' tonight.




Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)
 

If Lureen knew that Jack was calling here only in order to make Marie´s scene come true  ;D......but maybe she´s lucky and does get some sweet Jack lovin´ that night!

Dagi
Title: Re: September 23rd (8.50pm)
Post by: Dagi on September 15, 2007, 06:55:48 am
I thought I was the only one who felt this way!!!  I can't even begin to write about straight sex!  I don't think I ever could!  :-\

Me neither. Not even in German!  :laugh:
Title: Re: September 23rd (10:47 p.m.)
Post by: Dagi on September 15, 2007, 07:00:04 am
September 23rd (10:47 p.m.) By Littlewing1957

When Lureen arrived home with young Bobby in her arms, Jack was asleep on the living room couch.  He was fully dressed, though, and looked very appealing with his head nestled on crossed arms.  Lureen tiptoed past him, even though she wanted so much to wake him and kiss his full, sensuous lips. 

After placing the baby in his crib, Lureen looked in on a still sleeping Jack and shrugged.  She wondered if she should disturb his rest; after all, he had a long 14 hour drive ahead of him.  Lureen walked into the bedroom and donned her sexiest nightgown.  She dabbed a few drops of Youth Dew behind each ear, and decided to go fetch her husband and bring him to bed.

He looks so peaceful!  Lureen observed as she brushed the hair on his crown.  She increased the rubbing motion until Jack began to stir!  “Ennis?”  He mumbled fitfully, huskily!  Lureen jumped back, hid her hands that suddenly balled into fists!  She turned and stormed into the bedroom, just as Jack’s vision sharpened.  “Lureen, honey, wait!”  He shouted after her and ran to the bedroom door.  The door was locked….


Aaah, fuck, that was really a faux-pas, and probably not the last one........poor, poor Lureen.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 15, 2007, 07:02:02 am

Dagi's coming home today, she should be back with us today or tomorrow.....

(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/5/5_1_115.gif)  YAHOOOOOOOO(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/5/5_1_124.gif)OOOOOOOO(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/5/5_1_122.gif)OOOOOOO(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/5/5_1_125.gif)OOOO (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/5/5_1_120.gif)OOOOOOOO!!!!(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_6_7.gif)



I've missed you Dagi!

Susie   (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



Thanks so much for missing me  ;D   ;D   ;D  feels good to be missed!

Kisses, my dear Susiebell!
Dagi
Title: Re: The Black Truck
Post by: Dagi on September 15, 2007, 07:09:05 am
Welcome back, Mr. Garycottle. You had the 'Jack with Ennis' girls in a terrible tailspin! They were so worried about you. Apparently, they've never moved across country or they don't remember what an ordeal it can be. It takes time to settle in and whatnot. I wasn't worried about for a minute. You're a big boy... you can handle yourself (and I don't mean JO, neither, you nasty guy!). Now that you've reappeared, we West-Coasters should make a plan to meet some place on our side of the world. Perhaps around the first of the year?

Yeah, a girl that had been living in the US some years ago told me I shouldn´t worry, because AMERICANS always need much time when they move.... :P

Dagi
Title: Re: Wedded Bliss
Post by: Dagi on September 15, 2007, 07:12:32 am
There might be a ring around the bathtub, dust on the coffee table, and gunk in the oven, but I suspect that there are other things in that house of yours that remain forever polished.  So I'm sure you don't get many complaints.   :-X

Gary 

 Maybe you know tooooo much about my private life, Mr. Cottle  :P

Dagi
Title: Re: Ennis' Fears
Post by: Dagi on September 15, 2007, 07:14:26 am
What a surprise!  When I saw that you two had written this I half expected more alfresco sex in a parking lot.  But this was so beautiful and sad.  It's awful to think of Jack taking a beating just for being himself.  But at least in your story he survived the tire iron.

Gary

Thank you, Gary.

Dagi
Title: Re: The Black Truck
Post by: Toycoon on September 15, 2007, 10:03:27 am
Welcome back Dagi! We missed you, Bavarian babe. Tell us about your vacation. What did you bring us? O0
Title: Re: The Black Truck
Post by: Dagi on September 15, 2007, 10:46:30 am
Welcome back Dagi! We missed you, Bavarian babe. Tell us about your vacation. What did you bring us? O0

Aaaah, Toycoon, it feels good to be welcomed back! :-* :-* :-*

But, as I said, I didn´t write a story, nor are there many interesting things I could tell about my vacation......I just spent some lazy days with a friend at a beautiful lake near the Alps. We had planned to go to the mountains, but my friend was recovering from a virus and didn´t feel so well, so we changed plans and spent some lazy Indian Summer days....it was great! I had much time to read and can at least recommend you a book, in case you all haven´t read it yet: Michael Tolliver lives from Amistead Maupin. It´s as wonderful as all his other books!

Kisses to all my Jack with Ennis friends!!  :-* :-* :-*

Dagi
Title: Re: The Black Truck
Post by: Toycoon on September 15, 2007, 02:03:20 pm
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I've just watched High School Musical with Claire so I'm feelin' the love at the moment.  Such a sweet sugary film, I could feel it rotting my teeth!! ... Loved it ... and I love you both ... in fact I love all of you!!

Yay! Disney is conquering the world! The HSM dolls is the product I work on.
Buy more dolls! Vivia High School Musical!
Title: Re: September 23rd (10:47 p.m.)
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 15, 2007, 02:14:00 pm
Brilliant littlewing!  And I'm sure that's why Lureen knew about him ... he must have given himself away like this eventually!

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Yes, absolutely brilliant Littlewing - I wondered that too Susie, especially during Jack's drunken episodes - uninhibited, he must have let Ennis' name escape his lips...
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 15, 2007, 05:28:36 pm
Well, I missed you, too, Dagi dear.  But I don't have all those smilies at hand anymore.  And you got back so fast I didn't have a chance to say anything.  And I had 40 pages to catch up on.  ...and it seems I'm a thoughtless, no-account bastard who goes about taking my friends for granted.   :'( :'( :'(

I'm a real schmuck!   >:( >:( >:(

Love ya (for what it's worth),
Gary


Oh yes, you are.

Still loving you , though......

Dagi



 
Title: broken shards
Post by: Dagi on September 15, 2007, 05:33:12 pm
Oh, this was a dig.  This was definitely a dig. 

If I go into the kitchen and break one of my new glasses, and grind the broken shards into my skin will I have suffered enough?

Gary

Hmmm, depends on where exactly you are going to grind them into your skin...... ;D

Dagi  :-*
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 15, 2007, 05:34:53 pm
Hi SusieBelle,

how´s our story doing?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 15, 2007, 05:51:49 pm
Hey Dagimaus,

I've been distracted today with decorating, a whingy daughter and a tummy ache ... I'll have a think about it this evening ... promise :-*

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


I want to see pics of that kitchen, you hear? Hope your tummy's doing better....

Sending love!
Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 15, 2007, 08:57:37 pm
Hey girls and guy, I´m back!! Sorry, I didn´t write a single story, my friend and I spent some really lazy days together, but I missed all of you so much!


Welcome back, Sweets!  With you and Gary back, I feel complete!  The gang is all here!  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 15, 2007, 08:58:48 pm

Love it, love it, love it, Marie and Toycoon!! Can´t get enough of it! Gorgeous writing, you two!!

Dagi

Thanks so much, Babe!
Title: Re: The Black Truck
Post by: Toycoon on September 16, 2007, 12:28:26 am
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So cool!  Can you send me over a Troy Doll please?

Coming at ya!
Title: Re: September
Post by: Toycoon on September 16, 2007, 02:02:54 am
Toycoon, I loved that moment in the film.  It did seem like Ennis's prayers had been answered with Jack's postcard.  But that scene is one that leaves you wondering.  Why did Ennis lie about how he knew Jack?  How did he come up with that cover story, that fishing buddies crap, so fast?  It was like he was expecting that postcard.
Gary 

I love that scene, too. I think Ennis lies about how he knows Jack mainly because Ennis is so embarrassed about what he and Jack had together that he thinks Alma could know about it just by the way he answers. You know Ennis totally thinks of Jack when he's pleasuring himself alone or when he's having sex with Alma.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on September 16, 2007, 03:09:31 am
Gary,
Doncha love being on the West Coast? You're finally in our time zone!  :D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 16, 2007, 05:04:09 am
Welcome back, Sweets!  With you and Gary back, I feel complete!  The gang is all here!  :)

Being back here, I feel complete, too! Good to see you, Marie honey!  :-*
Title: Re: Apple Strudel
Post by: moremojo on September 16, 2007, 05:59:01 am
Burping?  Farting?  Oh Scott, forget the manly beasts, what you need is a frat boy.   :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

Gary
Well, I'd prefer a little sensitivity and tenderness between the burping and farting sessions, and I'm not sure how many frat boys could oblige in those categories!  ;D :laugh:

Scott Nasty
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on September 16, 2007, 12:29:28 pm
Hiya folks,
Check out the latest project on BetterMost Craft Corner:

http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,10857.msg252450.html#msg252450

It's the Jack and Ennis Reunion Postcards!
Title: Re: Elk Jerky and Beans
Post by: Dagi on September 17, 2007, 01:03:56 am
This is so true.  I did miss you guys.  But I never for a minute thought that anyone would be seriously worried about me.  I truely didn't.  Why would anyone give me a second thought?

Hey, did I mention that I strongly identify with Ennis?  Now do you believe me?

Gary

Because we love you.  :-*

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 17, 2007, 01:08:28 am
Wow!  Could it be that I'm really all caught up now?  I'm sure I missed something.  If so, someone please clue me in.

I've been reading story after story and comment after comment, and then about 15 pages back I realized from there on in 90% of the posts were from me.  Gee, I've been dominating the board for the last three days.  Sorry about that guys.  I'm sure you're sick of hearing from me already.  You probably wish I'd up and move somewhere else now just so I'd disappear again.   :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

Gary

But this time I´d make you buy a cell phone  ;D. Don´t be sorry for talking to us, you goof. We love your comments. Sometimes they are better than Kerry´s Komedy Klub! :laugh:

Dagi
Title: Re: The Black Truck
Post by: Dagi on September 17, 2007, 01:12:07 am
The first of the year sounds fine by me, Toycoon.  But this may be a little soon for Dagi and Susie.  Of course there's no reason we can't have another reunion when they can make the flight over.   ;D 

Gary

You guys just go ahead.( Susie and I will envy you all as hell, but we will meet some other day, that´s for sure!! ) And we want to hear details then, so make sure you only do things you want to tell us afterwards ;D.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: underdown on September 17, 2007, 02:23:55 am
But this time I´d make you buy a cell phone  ;D. Don´t be sorry for talking to us, you goof. We love your comments. Sometimes they are better than Kerry´s Komedy Klub! :laugh:

Dagi

Huh? :o :o :o

What?  :o :o :o

Nothing is better ...

Grrrrrrrr.
 >:(

 ;D
Title: Re: Rise and Shine
Post by: Dagi on September 17, 2007, 04:57:37 am
Rise and Shine by Susie


Ennis woke early, narrow beams of light shining through the seams of the tent. He quietly rose, headed out into the crisp morning, relieved himself, and leaned up against a rock. It was going to be a perfect day for sure, cold as ice, the sky crystal clear, the air silent and still.

He could hear Jack yawning and slowly emerging, sleepy eyed, from the tent. Damn, he's so fuckin' beautiful. The effects were immediate, the swelling in his shorts instantanious, he couldn't help but smile. "Hey there little darlin'" He watched Jack rubbing his eyes and stretching his arms above his head. Ennis pulled him up against the rock and kissed him, breathing in his sweet musky scent.

Jack, still sleep clogged, felt his jeans dropping to the ground, same direction Ennis was heading. The intense pleasure of Ennis's warm mouth around him, sliding smoothly back and forth, the low moan at the back of his throat, was enough to send Jack over the edge, coming in hot, delicious waves. He knelt down to meet Ennis face to face, "Mornin' to you too, bud" and with a sleepy grin whispered "Stand up, it's your turn now".



Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



Too bad that my love always gets up at 5:30. That´s way too early for my libido. But thank God there are weekends as well  ;D.....hot little Good-Morning-tale, Susiebell, you sexy girl!!

Dagi
Title: Re: Rise and Shine
Post by: Dagi on September 17, 2007, 05:39:46 am
Why thank you Dagi honey   :-*  ... I came across it in the archives and couldn't resist posting it again! ... It seems so innocent now!

Susie   (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Time to post our latest one, then! ;D
Title: Re: Rise and Shine
Post by: Toycoon on September 17, 2007, 10:05:53 am
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Jack, still sleep clogged, felt his jeans dropping to the ground, same direction Ennis was heading. The intense pleasure of Ennis's warm mouth around him, sliding smoothly back and forth, the low moan at the back of his throat, was enough to send Jack over the edge, coming in hot, delicious waves. He knelt down to meet Ennis face to face, "Mornin' to you too, bud" and with a sleepy grin whispered "Stand up, it's your turn now".

Aww little Susiebell, you haven't lost yer touch. You're just as nasty as you ever was!
Title: Five Minutes by Susie and Dagi
Post by: Dagi on September 17, 2007, 01:40:13 pm
Five Minutes by Susiebell and Dagi

" Where the hell did I put them??" Jack, naked as the day he was born was crawling on the cold floor in front of Ennis, searching for his socks under the bed, providing a stunning view of his bare ass with those three little moles that formed a perfect triangle on the left cheek, and his low hanging velvet balls, making Ennis's mouth get all dry and his eyes dark with.......that couldn't be, not so soon after they had just .....Ennis shook his head and tried to get his focus back on the buttons of his shirt.

"Hmmmm.... seems I'm losing my touch, cowboy." Jack sighed, glancing back at Ennis, "... was a time when you couldn't keep yer hands off me...." he continued, playfully wiggling his backside.

"Listen here Rodeo" Ennis said, slapping his behind firmly, "Your momma's serving supper up at the house right now.  What do you suppose she's gonna say when she comes lookin' for us and finds me fuckin' your pretty little ass?"

Jack stood up with a sigh and turned around, smiling his most tempting smile while running his knowing fingers along Ennis's back and around his waist.  He brushed his lover's neck with his lips and whispered in a seductive undertone "She'd never dare come down to the cabin...... even my mom has some imagination, she was the one who ordered the kingsize bed for us in the first place!"

Ennis felt himself giving in, the smell of sex still in the air, Jack's naked flesh pressed up along the full length of his body, firm cock swollen and pulsating against his backside.  Trying to regain his composure, he laughed nervously and wrestled himself out of Jack's grip, "Jack, supper'll be on the table in five minutes!  Your momma's probably worked real hard on it.  You wanna eat cold food?"

"Five minutes?...."  Jack smiled mischievously, "....could do a lot in five minutes!"   

Ennis laughed out loud. "Five minutes? Last time you needed a little more time to get off..............seems I'm losing my touch, too, huh?" he added with a grin.

"That a challenge?" Jack looked Ennis in the eye, serious now, and began to stroke his own member in slow,  determined movements, but shook his head "no" when his lover wanted to come nearer. "Don't you touch me........just look at me.........I'll show you how much you turn me on just looking at me......"

"You know what Jack...."  Ennis slumped back down on the corner of the bed, tears suddenly pricking his eyes, "I can't believe I nearly gave this all up .... nearly gave you up". 

Jack stopped what he was doing and knelt in front of his lover, caressing his face and wiping away a stray tear with his thumb, "But I never gave up on us Ennis ... and look at us now .... we got it all ... a home of our own, little cow and calf operation ...."  Jack smiled lovingly, ".... and a momma who's gonna be after our butts if we don't get over there in..." glancing at his watch, " .... 3 minutes!"

"I love you Ennis Del Mar, don't ever forget that..."  Jack whispered, gathering Ennis up into his arms and kissing him softly.   

Ennis took Jack's hand, put it back on his member and said, grinning through tears: " Love you too, Jack fuckin´ Twist - and now you better get started, before your time's up!"
Title: Re: Five Minutes by Susie and Dagi
Post by: Dagi on September 17, 2007, 04:45:32 pm
What thoughtless boys, screwin' while momma is waiting for them to come to supper.  Well, momma may know better than to come down to the cabin looking for them, but I'd be standing outside looking in the window.   ;D

MMM  Hot, sexy stuff, Dagi and Susie.  And that's a breathy hot.  Hhhoott.  :P

Love you two,
Gary

 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: Thank you, Gary dear! Susie, next time you catch Gary on the phone, ask him to say hhhooot for you. But don´t imitate it, he´s kind of allergic to that  :P.

Dagi


 


Title: Re: Five Minutes by Susie and Dagi
Post by: Dagi on September 17, 2007, 04:47:51 pm
Five Minutes by Susiebell and Dagi


Susie dear, did I tell you that I loved your part of the writing? And it´s so much fun doing that with you! Thank you!

Dagi
Title: Re: Five Minutes by Susie and Dagi
Post by: Toycoon on September 17, 2007, 10:32:17 pm
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"Listen here Rodeo" Ennis said, slapping his behind firmly, "Your momma's serving supper up at the house right now.  What do you suppose she's gonna say when she comes lookin' for us and finds me fuckin' your pretty little ass?"

Holy sheee-it, ladies! You girls are out of control! The two of you together are positively lethal; we're gonna have to separate you two!
Title: Re: Elk Jerky and Beans
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 17, 2007, 11:01:44 pm
Loved it, Littlewing.  And all while I read it, I kept thinking that this could be a children's book if you included some watercolors or drawings for each stanza.  I think kids would enjoy it.  And they would get that Jack and Ennis were special friends.  Your poem makes that very clear.

Gary

Thanks, Gary.  My daughter told me that the friend who received the poem passed it around school.  Elk Jerky and Beans was read aloud to the 5th period Art Class!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 17, 2007, 11:07:31 pm
I just knew this was turning into a horror story.   ::)

I love you, too, bibber boo.

Gary

Bibber boo?   I love it!
Title: Re: The Black Truck
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 17, 2007, 11:11:54 pm
Hey, hands off, dude!! I saw him first!!  Tell you what .... I'll let you have whatever's left when I've finished with him!!  ;D

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


He is a doll!  My Maria is crazy about him!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 17, 2007, 11:16:47 pm
Wow!  Could it be that I'm really all caught up now?  I'm sure I missed something.  If so, someone please clue me in.

I've been reading story after story and comment after comment, and then about 15 pages back I realized from there on in 90% of the posts were from me.  Gee, I've been dominating the board for the last three days.  Sorry about that guys.  I'm sure you're sick of hearing from me already.  You probably wish I'd up and move somewhere else now just so I'd disappear again.   :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

Gary

Oh, no, Gary!  Keep the comments comin!  I never tire of reading what you have to say!
Title: Re: Rise and Shine
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 17, 2007, 11:20:12 pm
Rise and Shine by Susie


Ennis woke early, narrow beams of light shining through the seams of the tent. He quietly rose, headed out into the crisp morning, relieved himself, and leaned up against a rock. It was going to be a perfect day for sure, cold as ice, the sky crystal clear, the air silent and still.

He could hear Jack yawning and slowly emerging, sleepy eyed, from the tent. Damn, he's so fuckin' beautiful. The effects were immediate, the swelling in his shorts instantanious, he couldn't help but smile. "Hey there little darlin'" He watched Jack rubbing his eyes and stretching his arms above his head. Ennis pulled him up against the rock and kissed him, breathing in his sweet musky scent.

Jack, still sleep clogged, felt his jeans dropping to the ground, same direction Ennis was heading. The intense pleasure of Ennis's warm mouth around him, sliding smoothly back and forth, the low moan at the back of his throat, was enough to send Jack over the edge, coming in hot, delicious waves. He knelt down to meet Ennis face to face, "Mornin' to you too, bud" and with a sleepy grin whispered "Stand up, it's your turn now".



Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



Wow, SusieBaby!  This is so beautiful, so very moving!  That Ennis and Jack are 2 lucky young men!
Title: Re: The Black Truck
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 17, 2007, 11:21:01 pm
The first of the year sounds fine by me, Toycoon.  But this may be a little soon for Dagi and Susie.  Of course there's no reason we can't have another reunion when they can make the flight over.   ;D 

Gary

We'll get something together.  I'm game!  :)
Title: Re: Five Minutes by Susie and Dagi
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 17, 2007, 11:24:48 pm
Five Minutes by Susiebell and Dagi

" Where the hell did I put them??" Jack, naked as the day he was born was crawling on the cold floor in front of Ennis, searching for his socks under the bed, providing a stunning view of his bare ass with those three little moles that formed a perfect triangle on the left cheek, and his low hanging velvet balls, making Ennis's mouth get all dry and his eyes dark with.......that couldn't be, not so soon after they had just .....Ennis shook his head and tried to get his focus back on the buttons of his shirt.

"Hmmmm.... seems I'm losing my touch, cowboy." Jack sighed, glancing back at Ennis, "... was a time when you couldn't keep yer hands off me...." he continued, playfully wiggling his backside.

"Listen here Rodeo" Ennis said, slapping his behind firmly, "Your momma's serving supper up at the house right now.  What do you suppose she's gonna say when she comes lookin' for us and finds me fuckin' your pretty little ass?"

Jack stood up with a sigh and turned around, smiling his most tempting smile while running his knowing fingers along Ennis's back and around his waist.  He brushed his lover's neck with his lips and whispered in a seductive undertone "She'd never dare come down to the cabin...... even my mom has some imagination, she was the one who ordered the kingsize bed for us in the first place!"

Ennis felt himself giving in, the smell of sex still in the air, Jack's naked flesh pressed up along the full length of his body, firm cock swollen and pulsating against his backside.  Trying to regain his composure, he laughed nervously and wrestled himself out of Jack's grip, "Jack, supper'll be on the table in five minutes!  Your momma's probably worked real hard on it.  You wanna eat cold food?"

"Five minutes?...."  Jack smiled mischievously, "....could do a lot in five minutes!"   

Ennis laughed out loud. "Five minutes? Last time you needed a little more time to get off..............seems I'm losing my touch, too, huh?" he added with a grin.

"That a challenge?" Jack looked Ennis in the eye, serious now, and began to stroke his own member in slow,  determined movements, but shook his head "no" when his lover wanted to come nearer. "Don't you touch me........just look at me.........I'll show you how much you turn me on just looking at me......"

"You know what Jack...."  Ennis slumped back down on the corner of the bed, tears suddenly pricking his eyes, "I can't believe I nearly gave this all up .... nearly gave you up". 

Jack stopped what he was doing and knelt in front of his lover, caressing his face and wiping away a stray tear with his thumb, "But I never gave up on us Ennis ... and look at us now .... we got it all ... a home of our own, little cow and calf operation ...."  Jack smiled lovingly, ".... and a momma who's gonna be after our butts if we don't get over there in..." glancing at his watch, " .... 3 minutes!"

"I love you Ennis Del Mar, don't ever forget that..."  Jack whispered, gathering Ennis up into his arms and kissing him softly.   

Ennis took Jack's hand, put it back on his member and said, grinning through tears: " Love you too, Jack fuckin´ Twist - and now you better get started, before your time's up!"

Beautiful, you guys!  I just love AU pieces!  And this one is particularly tasty!  Lovely work, ladies!  I feel all warm inside now!
Title: September 23rd 11:00p.m.
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 17, 2007, 11:42:48 pm
September 23rd 11:00p.m. by Littlewing1957

“Lureen honey, I was having a dream!”  Jack knocked rhythmically on his bedroom door.  “I don’t even know what I said!"  He yelled frantically. "Why are you so mad, Baby?”  Jack listened for some movement behind the closed doors, but there was no sound.  Nothing.  The bedroom seemed quiet as death.  Jack slumped against the locked door and lowered himself to the carpet.

Lureen didn’t know what to think.  Who is this Ennis, and why was Jack calling out for this person?  “Lureen honey, I was having a dream!”  Lureen mocked Jack in her thoughts.  She sat down on her pricey chaise lounge and stared at the locked door. 

Jack pulled himself up from the floor and knocked softly.  “Lureen, if you don’t open this door, I’m going to go stay at a motel downtown!"  Jack warned.  “I refuse to be locked out of my bedroom like this…I won’t stand for it.”  No answer!  Jack Twist shot one more plaintive glance at his bedroom door and decided to make good on his threat.  He was all set to leave when he heard the lock turning….
Title: September 24th (6:49 a.m.) by Toycoon
Post by: Toycoon on September 18, 2007, 12:41:45 am
September 24th (6:49 a.m.) by Toycoon

The hot steam wafting off of the asphalt blurred the horizon line where the gray of the road met the azure of the Texas sky; Jack kept his eyes on the highway but his mind was on the postcard laying on the front seat beside him and it's remittor.

"What's Ennis gonna look like? It's been four years since we seen each other, he was gettin' married last time I seen 'im, wonder if he's changed?" pondered Jack, his mind going in several directions.

The lack of sleep began to catch up to Jack so he switched on the radio and turned the sound up. "I'm goin' up on Heartbreak Mountain, 'cause I've lost my will to live...." warbled Buck Owens over the airwaves; Jack turned the radio off then rolled down the window for some fresh air.







Title: Re: Five Minutes by Susie and Dagi
Post by: Dagi on September 18, 2007, 04:41:07 am
Holy sheee-it, ladies! You girls are out of control! The two of you together are positively lethal; we're gonna have to separate you two!

 :laugh: thank you, Toycoon!

Dagi
Title: Re: Five Minutes by Susie and Dagi
Post by: Dagi on September 18, 2007, 04:43:59 am
Beautiful, you guys!  I just love AU pieces!  And this one is particularly tasty!  Lovely work, ladies!  I feel all warm inside now!

Thank you so much, Marie! Have you been away?

Dagi
Title: Re: September 23rd 11:00p.m.
Post by: Dagi on September 18, 2007, 04:49:45 am
September 23rd 11:00p.m. by Littlewing1957

“Lureen honey, I was having a dream!”  Jack knocked rhythmically on his bedroom door.  “I don’t even know what I said!"  He yelled frantically. "Why are you so mad, Baby?”  Jack listened for some movement behind the closed doors, but there was no sound.  Nothing.  The bedroom seemed quiet as death.  Jack slumped against the locked door and lowered himself to the carpet.

Lureen didn’t know what to think.  Who is this Ennis, and why was Jack calling out for this person?  “Lureen honey, I was having a dream!”  Lureen mocked Jack in her thoughts.  She sat down on her pricey chaise lounge and stared at the locked door. 

Jack pulled himself up from the floor and knocked softly.  “Lureen, if you don’t open this door, I’m going to go stay at a motel downtown!"  Jack warned.  “I refuse to be locked out of my bedroom like this…I won’t stand for it.”  No answer!  Jack Twist shot one more plaintive glance at his bedroom door and decided to make good on his threat.  He was all set to leave when he heard the lock turning….


Poor confused Lureen.

Today is Sept. 18, so there are 6 more days to be filled with September stories  :D. Great!! Lovely writing, Marie, I was right there with Jack (should I have been with Lureen ? ???

Dagi
Title: Re: September 24th (6:49 a.m.) by Toycoon
Post by: Dagi on September 18, 2007, 04:53:10 am
September 24th (6:49 a.m.) by Toycoon

The hot steam wafting off of the asphalt blurred the horizon line where the gray of the road met the azure of the Texas sky..........


You are a painter, Toycoon! I love your descriptions of the surrounding at least as much as I love your steamy stuff!

Dagi
Title: Re: September 23rd 11:00p.m.
Post by: Dagi on September 18, 2007, 08:11:47 am
Brilliant littlewing!  So does that mean that one of us is going to have to write about straight sex?  OK I'll give it a go.....

"He caressed her heaving bossom, his pulsating manhood throbbing against her ......." ... nooooooooooo , make it go away!!

Susie  :-*


 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: the beginning wasn´t bad, but I´m glad that you didn´t go there in the end...... ;D

Dagi
Title: Re: September 23rd 11.10pm
Post by: Dagi on September 18, 2007, 08:18:11 am
September 23rd 11.10pm by Susie


"Jesus I'm sorry honey, didn't mean nothin' by it."  Jack pleaded, his sad blue eyes piercing right though her.  Lureen was a stubborn woman, and she was no dummy either, something wasn't right, but a single glance from Jack was enough to melt her icy mood, she never could resist those baby blues.

"How sorry?" she teased in her soft girlish voice, flashing her pearly white teeth and stroking her thighs seductively through her lacy negligee, she was a beautiful woman, there was no denying it.

Jack stepped forward and wrapped his arms around her neat little waist, kissing her full red lips, his throbbing member pressed up against her stomach. His fingers gently tickled the small of her back and made their way down over her soft round buttocks, squeezing them playfully.

"Oh, Jack... you have perfect hands..." she uttered, removing one of them from her bottom and placing it over her heaving bosom ... a tiny whimper escaped her lips.

Bobby suddenly let out a wail of protest.  At eight months old, he was still not much of a sleeper.  "Oh Lord"  Lureen grumbled, the familiar, almost painful, tingling in her breasts letting her know that it was time for more milk.  Gathering her baby into her arms and unlacing the top of her night gown, she lay down on the bed and gently put his mouth to her breast.  Jack lay next to them, stroking his beautiful child, who was now suckling contentedly.  " I love you" he whispered, bending down to kiss is son.  "I love you too Jack" his wife replied softly.


Susie  :-*

Phew .... notice how I side stepped there ... thank goodness Bobby woke up just in time!! I had to have the throbbing member and heaving bosoms though  :laugh: :laugh:


Oh Susie, you are truely amazing......you had me going there for a moment, I thought "Oh God, she´s doing it!!!" Thank God for Bobby  ;D. And reading about the throbbing member I´d really like to know what he had been dreaming about  ::).

Dagi
Title: Re: September 23rd 11.10pm
Post by: Toycoon on September 18, 2007, 09:33:57 am
Quote
"Jesus I'm sorry honey, didn't mean nothin' by it."  Jack pleaded, his sad blue eyes piercing right though her.  Lureen was a stubborn woman, and she was no dummy either, something wasn't right, but a single glance from Jack was enough to melt her icy mood, she never could resist those baby blues.

We're back to the night before, eh Susiebell? This is great! There's so much to tell. Oh, to go behind those 'baby blues'.
And Lureen is correct, something's not right. I wonder what it is...
Title: Re: September 24th (6:49 a.m.) by Toycoon
Post by: Toycoon on September 18, 2007, 09:39:32 am
You are a painter, Toycoon! I love your descriptions of the surrounding at least as much as I love your steamy stuff!

Dagi

Thank you! That's quite a compliment. Annie's prose is so visual to me that I can't resist emulating it as much as I can muster.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 18, 2007, 11:30:59 am
What a wonderful series of anticipation! Littlewing, I love the suspense of Jack trying to gracefully get out of his mumbled 'Ennis' faux paus with Lureen. Great continuation Susiebell - straight sex saved by the baby! LOL

Toycoon, I love the perspective of Jack's 14-hour trip to Wyoming, how he must be fraught with anxiety and excitement.

Less than a week until the 24th gang! Keep 'em comin'!  :D
Title: Re: September 23rd 11.10pm
Post by: Dagi on September 18, 2007, 01:51:06 pm
Jack and Lureen doing the nasty?!   :-X  Thank God Bobby spoke up and said, "That boob belongs to me, thank you very much."

Seriously, very well written, Susie dear.  I think you could write about straight sex very convincingly.  Nothing wrong with straight sex.  It is how we all got here.  (Well, most of us anyway.  I know there are a few turkey baster kids out there.)

Gary

What the hell is a turkey baster?? I know very well that sex is not necessary to create a child, but what can a turkey possibly have to do with it?

Dagi
Title: Re: Tickling Daniel Again
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 18, 2007, 02:54:35 pm
Tickling Daniel Again by garycottle

Incredibly HOT, brilliant, and sensitive, Gary! BTW, I was waiting for some of the commotion to die down so that I could give you a proper WELCOME BACK! I haven't been here long, but I missed your posts, and it was kind of 'quiet' around here without you! I really love this side story - really has the makings of a short story and I hope you will write more about Danny and Tyler, and peripherally, the discovery of Ennis' life story. I really like Daniel's perceptiveness, maybe he will help Tyler get closer with Ennis. Maybe Daniel will be the 'can opener' that Jack was, metaphorically speaking, of course.
;)
Title: Re: September 23rd 11.10pm
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 18, 2007, 03:22:53 pm
Hehehe ... don't you have turkey basters in Germany Dagi?  It's like a big plastic syringe with a rubber ball at one end ... you suck up the juices from around the turkey by squashing then releasing the ball then you dribble it all over the turkey by squeezing the ball again!! 

Susie  :-*

And so Susie, who is the turkey in your neat little description?!  :laugh:
Title: Re: September 23rd 11.10pm
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 18, 2007, 03:43:42 pm
Ahhhhhhhhhhh!  :o :o  I wrote that so innocently ... and now reading it back ....  :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: ..... it's so rude!!!!

Susie  8)

Couldn't resist! Hey, and you inspired a follow-up to your September 11:10 which I am working on now!
Title: Re: Tickling Daniel Again
Post by: Dagi on September 18, 2007, 04:03:39 pm
Tickling Daniel Again by garycottle


I love Tyler and Danny  :D. And I love you for sharing them with us. This is a sweet, hhhoot little tale, my friend.....and I'd give a slice of my own flesh for a pic of the guys together in their little pants  :P. Hope you're going to write about Tyler asking Ennis about his past!

Thank you for posting this, Gary dear.

Dagi
Title: Re: September 23rd 11.10pm
Post by: Dagi on September 18, 2007, 04:05:41 pm
And so Susie, who is the turkey in your neat little description?!  :laugh:


 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
Title: Re: September 23rd 11.31pm
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 18, 2007, 04:13:16 pm
September 23rd 11.31pm by BBM-Cat

Once Bobby was contently asleep and placed back in his crib, Lureen tried to resume where she and Jack had left off. “Now”, smiled Lureen seductively, alone with her man again, “you were ‘bout to show me how sorry you really are….remember?”

“Oooh yeahhh”, Jack feigning amnesia, reached over and tenderly started kissing Lureen all over, starting with her neck, making a litany of mock transgressions.  “Let’s see now, I’m sorry for not helpin’ you make the bed this mornin’”, his lips finding a tender spot on her neck, “uh, for leavin’ my boots out in the middle of the floor”, his lips making their way over to her throat. Lureen giggled with delight. She knew she couldn’t stay mad at Jack for long.

“Yeah, well how ‘bout bein’ sorry for eatin’ the rest of the cereal this mornin’?”, Lureen added playfully. “Oh yeah, I’m real, real darn sorry for that”, Jack tried to sound regretful, taking his hands to open the lacy night gown, revealing the beautiful, womanly curves beneath. “And, I’m espec’lly...”, Jack kissed one breast, “sorry for…..”, then kissed the other, “uh, for, uh,…….uh, gee, I forget…”   “Why, Jack Twist, you cheater!” Lureen uttered teasingly, enjoying his attentions immensely. That word 'cheater' resonated in the back of Jack's mind.

Jack stood up from their playful foray, to face Lureen, all serious now. Tenderly cupping her cheek with his left hand, he looked directly into her eyes, “One thing in all this world that I’m not sorry for is marryin’ you”. Jack almost nearly convinced himself of that. Lureen’s heart leapt as it had done when she first laid eyes on Jack Twist. A passionate sigh escaped her lips and her eyes misted from his sincerity. “And, I know, that you’re the best thing that ever happen’d ta me”. Jack held Lureen close, the twinge of guilt strong in his heart for what he was about to go do.
Title: Re: September 23rd 11.31pm
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 18, 2007, 04:27:23 pm
Just beautiful BBM cat!  And I'm starting to like the sound of all this straight sex!!  This chokes me up though .... Jack held Lureen close, the twinge of guilt strong in his heart for what he was about to go do..  Very powerful stuff sweetie!!

Susie  :-*

Thanks Susie! I let my husband read it before I posted it. I love all the pre-Sept 24th stories - just think, we get to drag this out another 5.5 days!  :D
Title: Re: September 23rd 11.31pm
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 18, 2007, 05:18:17 pm
Gosh 5 1/2 days more of straight sex before we get to the good stuff!!  I think we should get really explicit girls ... completely freak out the guys .... it'll be fun!!

Susie  :-*

You go first!  :laugh: Seriously, do you think Jack can think "straight" knowing he's about to be reunited with his one true love!  ;) Or, perhaps, that is how he gets thru the straight sex...!
Title: Re: September 23rd 11.31pm
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 18, 2007, 05:20:48 pm
BBM-Cat, this is heartbreaking stuff.  Even though Jack wants to mean it, we know he doesn't.  The whole situation is so unfair to both of them. 

Thanks for the beautiful story.

Gary

Thanks Gary! You sure got that sentiment correct about the unfairness to all involved parties!
Might you be so inspired to chime-in on this series of pre-Sept 24th stories? I almost hate to see 9/24 get here so quickly. LOL
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 18, 2007, 08:14:25 pm
Yeah! GO GARY...!  ;)

              GO GARY...!  :D

                    GO GARY...!  ;D             
Title: Re: Tickling Daniel Again
Post by: Toycoon on September 18, 2007, 10:06:26 pm
Thank you so much, Susie dear.  You're very kind.  I'm looking forward to putting Tyler and Ennis together for a little bonding.  Who knows what will be said.
Gary

You know we love Tyler and Daniel! Garycottle, you dirty boy. Are you gonna make us beg for it?
Title: Re: Tickling Daniel Again
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 18, 2007, 10:07:19 pm
You know we love Tyler and Daniel! Garycottle, you dirty boy. Are you gonna make us beg for it?

Yes, I think he is!  ;)
Title: Re: September 23rd 11.31pm
Post by: Toycoon on September 18, 2007, 10:14:13 pm
Great take on this story, BBM-Cat. I always feel terrible for the wives here. In truth, none of them ever gets what they want out of their lives.
You know Jack really wants to conform to the status quo but he doesn't feel it. It's hard to fake it for long really. Lureen has not a clue until much later in their marriage. It's sad.
Title: Re: September 23rd 11.31pm
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 18, 2007, 10:28:44 pm
Great take on this story, BBM-Cat. I always feel terrible for the wives here. In truth, none of them ever gets what they want out of their lives.
You know Jack really wants to conform to the status quo but he doesn't feel it. It's hard to fake it for long really. Lureen has not a clue until much later in their marriage. It's sad.

Thank you Toycoon, and very well described! You're right, all three relationships suffered - Jack & Ennis', and in particular, each of their marital relationships (not to mention their children). I agree, it is sad that no one really got what they wanted or envisioned in a partner/relationship.
Title: Re: Five Minutes by Susie and Dagi
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 18, 2007, 11:21:50 pm
Thank you so much, Marie! Have you been away?

Dagi

I've been around, Dagi.  Thanks for asking!  :-*  I've been so busy with work and family, but things have settled down a bit, and I'm back to my old tricks!  :laugh:
Title: Re: September 23rd 11:00p.m.
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 18, 2007, 11:23:09 pm
Poor confused Lureen.

Today is Sept. 18, so there are 6 more days to be filled with September stories  :D. Great!! Lovely writing, Marie, I was right there with Jack (should I have been with Lureen ? ???

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi.  We can go back and forth, play with the timing.  I think I was with Jack.  :laugh:
Title: Re: Rise and Shine
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 18, 2007, 11:23:55 pm
Why thank you littlewing honey!  Our Jack and Ennis really are very lucky ... and they must be permanently exhausted with all that sex!!

Susie  :-*

Yes, indeed!
Title: Re: September 23rd 11:00p.m.
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 18, 2007, 11:25:06 pm
Brilliant littlewing!  So does that mean that one of us is going to have to write about straight sex?  OK I'll give it a go.....

"He caressed her heaving bossom, his pulsating manhood throbbing against her ......." ... nooooooooooo , make it go away!!

Susie  :-*

Oh, heck no!  Never in a million years.  I'll have Jack in that motel room first!  :laugh:
Title: Re: September 23rd 11.10pm
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 18, 2007, 11:27:14 pm
September 23rd 11.10pm by Susie


"Jesus I'm sorry honey, didn't mean nothin' by it."  Jack pleaded, his sad blue eyes piercing right though her.  Lureen was a stubborn woman, and she was no dummy either, something wasn't right, but a single glance from Jack was enough to melt her icy mood, she never could resist those baby blues.

"How sorry?" she teased in her soft girlish voice, flashing her pearly white teeth and stroking her thighs seductively through her lacy negligee, she was a beautiful woman, there was no denying it.

Jack stepped forward and wrapped his arms around her neat little waist, kissing her full red lips, his throbbing member pressed up against her stomach. His fingers gently tickled the small of her back and made their way down over her soft round buttocks, squeezing them playfully.

"Oh, Jack... you have perfect hands..." she uttered, removing one of them from her bottom and placing it over her heaving bosom ... a tiny whimper escaped her lips.

Bobby suddenly let out a wail of protest.  At eight months old, he was still not much of a sleeper.  "Oh Lord"  Lureen grumbled, the familiar, almost painful, tingling in her breasts letting her know that it was time for more milk.  Gathering her baby into her arms and unlacing the top of her night gown, she lay down on the bed and gently put his mouth to her breast.  Jack lay next to them, stroking his beautiful child, who was now suckling contentedly.  " I love you" he whispered, bending down to kiss is son.  "I love you too Jack" his wife replied softly.


Susie  :-*

Phew .... notice how I side stepped there ... thank goodness Bobby woke up just in time!! I had to have the throbbing member and heaving bosoms though  :laugh: :laugh:


Thanks for the quick save, SusieBaby!  I was becoming worried there for a moment!  :laugh:  Brilliant addition, Babe!
Title: Re: September 23rd 11:00p.m.
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 18, 2007, 11:28:00 pm

 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: the beginning wasn´t bad, but I´m glad that you didn´t go there in the end...... ;D

Dagi

I'm glad, too!  That was a close one!  :laugh:
Title: Re: Tickling Daniel Again
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 18, 2007, 11:34:04 pm
Tickling Daniel Again by garycottle

Daniel and Tyler were sitting in the back of Ennis’s pickup, which was parked in a wooded area by a stream just outside of Riverton.  Their backs were against the cab, and their behinds rested on Ennis’s bedroll.  They had been laying down and kissing in the bed of the truck a few moments earlier, but during an easy lull they sat up to catch their breath.  They held hands as they gazed straigt ahead at the sylvan setting.

“What did Granddad want?” Tyler asked.

Awww Gary, it is so nice to see a story from you!  And what a hot, steamy, moving tale.  And about 2 of my favorite lovers!  I'm glad you decided to continue the saga of Ennis' grandson and his lover.  Keep em coming!  :)
Title: Re: September 23rd 11.10pm
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 18, 2007, 11:35:41 pm
Ahhhhhhhhhhh!  :o :o  I wrote that so innocently ... and now reading it back ....  :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: ..... it's so rude!!!!

Susie  8)

 :laugh:
 :laugh:
 :laugh:
Title: Re: September 23rd 11.31pm
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 18, 2007, 11:40:00 pm
September 23rd 11.31pm by BBM-Cat

Once Bobby was contently asleep and placed back in his crib, Lureen tried to resume where she and Jack had left off. “Now”, smiled Lureen seductively, alone with her man again, “you were ‘bout to show me how sorry you really are….remember?”

“Oooh yeahhh”, Jack feigning amnesia, reached over and tenderly started kissing Lureen all over, starting with her neck, making a litany of mock transgressions.  “Let’s see now, I’m sorry for not helpin’ you make the bed this mornin’”, his lips finding a tender spot on her neck, “uh, for leavin’ my boots out in the middle of the floor”, his lips making their way over to her throat. Lureen giggled with delight. She knew she couldn’t stay mad at Jack for long.

“Yeah, well how ‘bout bein’ sorry for eatin’ the rest of the cereal this mornin’?”, Lureen added playfully. “Oh yeah, I’m real, real darn sorry for that”, Jack tried to sound regretful, taking his hands to open the lacy night gown, revealing the beautiful, womanly curves beneath. “And, I’m espec’lly...”, Jack kissed one breast, “sorry for…..”, then kissed the other, “uh, for, uh,…….uh, gee, I forget…”   “Why, Jack Twist, you cheater!” Lureen uttered teasingly, enjoying his attentions immensely. That word 'cheater' resonated in the back of Jack's mind.

Jack stood up from their playful foray, to face Lureen, all serious now. Tenderly cupping her cheek with his left hand, he looked directly into her eyes, “One thing in all this world that I’m not sorry for is marryin’ you”. Jack almost nearly convinced himself of that. Lureen’s heart leapt as it had done when she first laid eyes on Jack Twist. A passionate sigh escaped her lips and her eyes misted from his sincerity. “And, I know, that you’re the best thing that ever happen’d ta me”. Jack held Lureen close, the twinge of guilt strong in his heart for what he was about to go do.


Perfect, BBM-Cat!  Exceptional addition to our saga!  This is exactly how I imagine things were between Jack and Lureen:  Jack faking it, but Lureen sincere!  I love it, BBM-Cat!
Title: Re: September 23rd 11.31pm
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 18, 2007, 11:42:05 pm
Gosh 5 1/2 days more of straight sex before we get to the good stuff!!  I think we should get really explicit girls ... completely freak out the guys .... it'll be fun!!

Susie  :-*

Oh no, not me!  I'm steering clear of the straight stuff!  :laugh:
Title: September 23rd 6:00 a.m.
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 19, 2007, 12:05:58 am
September 23rd 6:00a.m. by Littlewing1957

Ennis sat at his small kitchen table and watched Alma as she prepared breakfast for the family.  He refused the sausage and eggs that his wife offered, couldn't touch a bite, but liked to watch his girls eat.  Ennis reached over and pulled Alma Jr. from her chair and sat her upon his lap.  He rubbed her rosy cheek, placed the small of his thumb into her tiny mouth.  Alma Jr. giggled and spat Ennis’ thumb out.  Alma watched this exchange between father and daughter with a sort of detachment.  Something was terribly wrong, she just knew it!

Alma placed a small saucer of scrambled eggs and sausage in front of Ennis.  He looked up at his wife, smiled, and raised a fork to feed his daughter her breakfast.  It was a fine feeling: feeding his child like a good daddy, but Ennis’ thoughts were elsewhere!  He allowed his mind to drift to nights up on Brokeback when he fed Jack Twist beans with a spoon.  Jack was a sight as he opened his bow mouth, accepted a spoonful of beans!  Ennis smiled as he remembered Jack’s eyes rolling, becoming wide and deep blue as he "savored" the beans.  Jack Fuckin’ Twist was just playing with him.  Jack didn’t even like beans!

Ennis wondered if Jack still disliked beans.  When Alma Jr. was finished with her eggs and sausage, Ennis picked her up and carried her into the living room where Alma was nursing Francine.  He watched his wife caring for his second born and tried to enjoy it – willed himself to be happy.  But Jack Twist was coming to town.  Ennis tried to convince himself that Jack’s visit was just a friendly call, that it didn’t mean anything.  But somewhere in his psyche, Ennis knew that Jack’s visit would change everything…

 




Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 19, 2007, 12:19:49 am
September 23rd 1:30 a.m.

Jack couldn’t stop shaking.  It was not the sadness of his life, but the thought of meeting Ennis Del Mar that made him tremble.  Jack was a mess!  He found himself out on his back porch, but didn’t know how he got there!  He looked at the window of his bedroom and wondered how he got up without waking Lureen and the baby.  The cool of the evening reminded him of the calm before dawn up on brokeback.  The thought of his favorite place on earth steeled him.  He found his courage once more and entered his home.  Almost time to go!
Title: September 23rd (9:00 a.m.) by Toycoon
Post by: Toycoon on September 19, 2007, 12:49:59 am
September 23rd (9:00 a.m.) by Toycoon

Attempts at marital bliss only made Ennis more withdrawn and nervous: he thought about having a beer but it seemed too early in the day to have a drink.

Ennis decided instead to have a cigarette and that helped to calm his nerves somewhat. Alma asked Ennis to smoke outside while she nursed little Jenny and he obliged willingly.

The Delmar's tiny apartment seemed especially confining the more Ennis thought about the liberty of Brokeback Mountain; Ennis shuddered and flicking his cigarette across the parking lot, he worried that the secrets he and his first lover, Jack,  shared long ago could possibly show on his face.
Title: Re: September 23rd 11.31pm
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 19, 2007, 01:21:24 am
Perfect, BBM-Cat!  Exceptional addition to our saga!  This is exactly how I imagine things were between Jack and Lureen:  Jack faking it, but Lureen sincere!  I love it, BBM-Cat!

Thank you Littlewing, I'm quite honored!
Title: Re: September 23rd 6:00 a.m.
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 19, 2007, 01:48:20 am
September 23rd 6:00a.m. by Littlewing1957

Ennis sat at his small kitchen table and watched Alma as she prepared breakfast for the family.  He refused the sausage and eggs that his wife offered, couldn't touch a bite, but liked to watch his girls eat.  Ennis reached over and pulled Alma Jr. from her chair and sat her upon his lap.  He rubbed her rosy cheek, placed the small of his thumb into her tiny mouth.  Alma Jr. giggled and spat Ennis’ thumb out.  Alma watched this exchange between father and daughter with a sort of detachment.  Something was terribly wrong, she just knew it!

Alma placed a small saucer of scrambled eggs and sausage in front of Ennis.  He looked up at his wife, smiled, and raised a fork to feed his daughter her breakfast.  It was a fine feeling: feeding his child like a good daddy, but Ennis’ thoughts were elsewhere!  He allowed his mind to drift to nights up on Brokeback when he fed Jack Twist beans with a spoon.  Jack was a sight as he opened his bow mouth, accepted a spoonful of beans!  Ennis smiled as he remembered Jack’s eyes rolling, becoming wide and deep blue as he "savored" the beans.  Jack Fuckin’ Twist was just playing with him.  Jack didn’t even like beans!

Ennis wondered if Jack still disliked beans.  When Alma Jr. was finished with her eggs and sausage, Ennis picked her up and carried her into the living room where Alma was nursing Francine.  He watched his wife caring for his second born and tried to enjoy it – willed himself to be happy.  But Jack Twist was coming to town.  Ennis tried to convince himself that Jack’s visit was just a friendly call, that it didn’t mean anything.  But somewhere in his psyche, Ennis knew that Jack’s visit would change everything…
 

I love this - your writing is so exquisite and emotional. Feeding is such a nurturing theme. This shows that Ennis does indeed have that need (and that he himself needs nurturing more than he cares to admit). Interesting, one possible interpretation of your story is that Ennis will not accept 'food' or nurturing from Alma...though Ennis can 'feed', nurture, or take care of whom he chooses; in this instance he 'feeds' or nurtures Alma Jr., all the while thinking of Jack. Jack in Ennis' flashback is also quite accepting of whatever Ennis gives/feeds him, just like in the story - even though Jack says he won't 'settle for 'beans', he does indeed settle for things on Ennis' terms right up to the final lake scene.
Title: Re: September 23rd (9:00 a.m.) by Toycoon
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 19, 2007, 01:57:29 am
September 23rd (9:00 a.m.) by Toycoon

Attempts at marital bliss only made Ennis more withdrawn and nervous: he thought about having a beer but it seemed too early in the day to have a drink.

Ennis decided instead to have a cigarette and that helped to calm his nerves somewhat. Alma asked Ennis to smoke outside while she nursed little Jenny and he obliged willingly.

The Delmar's tiny apartment seemed especially confining the more Ennis thought about the liberty of Brokeback Mountain; Ennis shuddered and flicking his cigarette across the parking lot, he worried that the secrets he and his first lover, Jack,  shared long ago could possibly show on his face.

Wonderful contrast Toycoon, as Gary alludes to as well - so many contrasting themes - much more is going on than just suppressed passion! You helped us to refocus on the natural elements that are often overlooked, but so very important, i.e., Brokeback=expansive, freedom, expression of true self; Riverton=small town; "tiny apartment"; living a false life.

Interesting as you posted once before that Ennis' anxiety about Jack creates so many false beliefs, such as others being able to see into his mind and know what he is thinking about! LOL I sure wish we could've "seen" into his mind just prior to the reunion! 
;)
Title: Re: September 23rd 11.31pm
Post by: Dagi on September 19, 2007, 06:40:15 am
September 23rd 11.31pm by BBM-Cat

Once Bobby was contently asleep and placed back in his crib, Lureen tried to resume where she and Jack had left off. “Now”, smiled Lureen seductively, alone with her man again, “you were ‘bout to show me how sorry you really are….remember?”

“Oooh yeahhh”, Jack feigning amnesia, reached over and tenderly started kissing Lureen all over, starting with her neck, making a litany of mock transgressions.  “Let’s see now, I’m sorry for not helpin’ you make the bed this mornin’”, his lips finding a tender spot on her neck, “uh, for leavin’ my boots out in the middle of the floor”, his lips making their way over to her throat. Lureen giggled with delight. She knew she couldn’t stay mad at Jack for long.

“Yeah, well how ‘bout bein’ sorry for eatin’ the rest of the cereal this mornin’?”, Lureen added playfully. “Oh yeah, I’m real, real darn sorry for that”, Jack tried to sound regretful, taking his hands to open the lacy night gown, revealing the beautiful, womanly curves beneath. “And, I’m espec’lly...”, Jack kissed one breast, “sorry for…..”, then kissed the other, “uh, for, uh,…….uh, gee, I forget…”   “Why, Jack Twist, you cheater!” Lureen uttered teasingly, enjoying his attentions immensely. That word 'cheater' resonated in the back of Jack's mind.

Jack stood up from their playful foray, to face Lureen, all serious now. Tenderly cupping her cheek with his left hand, he looked directly into her eyes, “One thing in all this world that I’m not sorry for is marryin’ you”. Jack almost nearly convinced himself of that. Lureen’s heart leapt as it had done when she first laid eyes on Jack Twist. A passionate sigh escaped her lips and her eyes misted from his sincerity. “And, I know, that you’re the best thing that ever happen’d ta me”. Jack held Lureen close, the twinge of guilt strong in his heart for what he was about to go do.


You are a great writer, BBM-Cat, I´ve missed you! This story is heartbreaking and beautiful at the same time....

Dagi
Title: Re: September 23rd 11.31pm
Post by: Dagi on September 19, 2007, 06:45:19 am
Gosh 5 1/2 days more of straight sex before we get to the good stuff!!  I think we should get really explicit girls ... completely freak out the guys .... it'll be fun!!

Susie  :-*

 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: I don´t have the vocabulary to do that, I´m afraid.....you could teach me some words, though, or we could do it together, Susie!
Title: Re: September 23rd 6:00 a.m.
Post by: Dagi on September 19, 2007, 07:04:44 am
September 23rd 6:00a.m. by Littlewing1957

Ennis sat at his small kitchen table and watched Alma as she prepared breakfast for the family.  He refused the sausage and eggs that his wife offered, couldn't touch a bite, but liked to watch his girls eat.  Ennis reached over and pulled Alma Jr. from her chair and sat her upon his lap.  He rubbed her rosy cheek, placed the small of his thumb into her tiny mouth.  Alma Jr. giggled and spat Ennis’ thumb out.  Alma watched this exchange between father and daughter with a sort of detachment.  Something was terribly wrong, she just knew it!

Alma placed a small saucer of scrambled eggs and sausage in front of Ennis.  He looked up at his wife, smiled, and raised a fork to feed his daughter her breakfast.  It was a fine feeling: feeding his child like a good daddy, but Ennis’ thoughts were elsewhere!  He allowed his mind to drift to nights up on Brokeback when he fed Jack Twist beans with a spoon.  Jack was a sight as he opened his bow mouth, accepted a spoonful of beans!  Ennis smiled as he remembered Jack’s eyes rolling, becoming wide and deep blue as he "savored" the beans.  Jack Fuckin’ Twist was just playing with him.  Jack didn’t even like beans!

Ennis wondered if Jack still disliked beans.  When Alma Jr. was finished with her eggs and sausage, Ennis picked her up and carried her into the living room where Alma was nursing Francine.  He watched his wife caring for his second born and tried to enjoy it – willed himself to be happy.  But Jack Twist was coming to town.  Ennis tried to convince himself that Jack’s visit was just a friendly call, that it didn’t mean anything.  But somewhere in his psyche, Ennis knew that Jack’s visit would change everything…

 






Why is it always about food in your stories, Marie?  ;D  Once I come to California I'll beg you to cook one of your delicious BBM-fanfic-recipes for me!

Dagi

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 19, 2007, 07:08:40 am
September 23rd 1:30 a.m.

Jack couldn’t stop shaking.  It was not the sadness of his life, but the thought of meeting Ennis Del Mar that made him tremble.  Jack was a mess!  He found himself out on his back porch, but didn’t know how he got there!  He looked at the window of his bedroom and wondered how he got up without waking Lureen and the baby.  The cool of the evening reminded him of the calm before dawn up on brokeback.  The thought of his favorite place on earth steeled him.  He found his courage once more and entered his home.  Almost time to go!

I´m trembling, too  ;D. Thank God I got my DVD back in time to watch the reunion on 9/24!

Dagi
Title: Re: September 23rd (9:00 a.m.) by Toycoon
Post by: Dagi on September 19, 2007, 07:11:45 am
September 23rd (9:00 a.m.) by Toycoon

Attempts at marital bliss only made Ennis more withdrawn and nervous: he thought about having a beer but it seemed too early in the day to have a drink.

Ennis decided instead to have a cigarette and that helped to calm his nerves somewhat. Alma asked Ennis to smoke outside while she nursed little Jenny and he obliged willingly.

The Delmar's tiny apartment seemed especially confining the more Ennis thought about the liberty of Brokeback Mountain; Ennis shuddered and flicking his cigarette across the parking lot, he worried that the secrets he and his first lover, Jack,  shared long ago could possibly show on his face.

Ennis always seemed like a tiger in a cage to me in that apartment. I´m almost getting nervous picturing him there, with his cigarette to calm his nerves....

Dagi
Title: Re: September 23rd 11.10pm
Post by: Dagi on September 19, 2007, 07:17:47 am
Hehehe! Thanks Littlewing honey ... I knew it would freak you out!  :laugh: I was going to take it further but I just couldn't face all those lady-bits!!

Susie  :-*

Maybe that´s the chance to get Graham to write his first BBM-fanfic......he would not even have to watch the movie! ;D
Title: Re: September 23rd (9:00 a.m.) by Toycoon
Post by: Dagi on September 19, 2007, 07:20:36 am
I'm just loving all these September stories, and this one's another gem toycoon!  I wonder if Dagi's managing to keep them all in the right order!! 

Susie  :-*

Tell you what, I decided to wait for 9/24 to come, and then I´ll make one big September-story post. I don´t have so much time at the moment, the archive will have to wait for the weekend.

Dagi
Title: September 24rd, 8:13 am
Post by: Dagi on September 19, 2007, 07:54:21 am
September 24rd, 8:13 am by Dagi

Ennis knew he had been in the shower too long, his skin wrinkly, the room filled with hot steam, the water about to get lukewarm, but he didn't want to get out into the cold reality of the apartment.

The memory of Jack's hands, lathering him after a long day with the sheep, until he came all over Jack's lap, this memory had been enough to bring him over the edge, tilting his head back and moaning out loud – he was sure Alma had heard it, and the thought of what she might think of him jerking off in the shower made his cheeks get even redder.

He still tried to calm his breath and  rubbed his right eye with the ball of his hand. “Jack.” he whispered, savoring the name like a ripe, sweet fruit, running his tongue over his wet lips. “Jack..........Jack...........Jack."
Title: Re: September 24rd, 8:13 am
Post by: Dagi on September 19, 2007, 11:39:54 am
Beautiful hot and steamy installment Dagi dear ..... with just a hint of sadness to break my heart!  “Jack.” he whispered, savoring the name like a ripe, sweet friut, running his tongue over his wet lips ....  Gorgeous!

Susie  :-* 

Thank you, my dear Susiebell, I almost forgot that I had posted a story today  :laugh:!

Dagi
Title: Re: September 24rd, 8:13 am
Post by: Dagi on September 19, 2007, 11:43:16 am
Hi there Dagi.  What a surprise to find a story from you first thing in the morning.   :D  And what a sexy story, too.  Just the thought of Ennis touching himself in the shower turns me on.   ;D  If I had been Alma and heard him in there I would have shed my dress and hopped in with him.   :P  Silly girl!

But it's so sad that Ennis is so filled with longing for Jack.  Well, at least he'll get to be with Jack later, if only for a short while.

Gary



Hi Gary dear, you are up early, and already so talkative  ;D. Hope you had a sweet dream. And thank you so much for your kind words, I´m glad you liked my wake-up call!

Dagi

Did I write anything about Ennis touching himself?
Title: Re: September 24rd, 8:13 am
Post by: Dagi on September 19, 2007, 03:27:48 pm
Hmm  You said something about Ennis wondering what Alma thinks of him jerking off in the shower.  Last time I checked, you had to touch yourself in order to jerk off.   :P  Maybe you know a better way.  Or maybe you're saying that just thinking about Jack brought Ennis off, and he didn't have to touch himself.  Wow!  That Jack must have been good.

Gary 

I´m convinced Jack was good  ;D ;D ;D

Dagi
Title: Re: September 24rd, 8:13 am
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 19, 2007, 03:44:04 pm
September 24rd, 8:13 am by Dagi

Ennis knew he had been in the shower too long, his skin wrinkly, the room filled with hot steam, the water about to get lukewarm, but he didn't want to get out into the cold reality of the apartment.

The memory of Jack's hands, lathering him after a long day with the sheep, until he came all over Jack's lap, this memory had been enough to bring him over the edge, tilting his head back and moaning out loud – he was sure Alma had heard it, and the thought of what she might think of him jerking off in the shower made his cheeks get even redder.

He still tried to calm his breath and  rubbed his right eye with the ball of his hand. “Jack.” he whispered, savoring the name like a ripe, sweet fruit, running his tongue over his wet lips. “Jack..........Jack...........Jack."

WHOO that is HOT Dagi, and so sensual! I can barely type after reading that! I hope Ennis has enough energy and juices left for the actual reunion with Jack. GREAT hand job!  ;D
Title: Re: September 24rd, 8:13 am
Post by: Dagi on September 19, 2007, 04:19:24 pm
WHOO that is HOT Dagi, and so sensual! I can barely type after reading that! I hope Ennis has enough energy and juices left for the actual reunion with Jack. GREAT hand job!  ;D

Thank you so much, BBM-Cat! You say the nicest things! And as to the juices: the more fanfic I read here, the more I get the impression that both our boys are little spunk buckets, to speak with Michael Tolliver   ;D.

Dagi
Title: Re: September 23rd 11.31pm
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 19, 2007, 10:24:01 pm
Thank you Littlewing, I'm quite honored!

You're very welcome!
Title: Re: September 23rd 6:00 a.m.
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 19, 2007, 10:25:53 pm
I wonder what exactly Alma thought of Ennis and their marriage before Jack showed up.

Gary

This is an interesting, thought provoking question, Gary.  I'll have to tackle this very soon.  Thanks for this!
Title: Re: September 23rd 6:00 a.m.
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 19, 2007, 10:29:31 pm
I love this - your writing is so exquisite and emotional. Feeding is such a nurturing theme. This shows that Ennis does indeed have that need (and that he himself needs nurturing more than he cares to admit). Interesting, one possible interpretation of your story is that Ennis will not accept 'food' or nurturing from Alma...though Ennis can 'feed', nurture, or take care of whom he chooses; in this instance he 'feeds' or nurtures Alma Jr., all the while thinking of Jack. Jack in Ennis' flashback is also quite accepting of whatever Ennis gives/feeds him, just like in the story - even though Jack says he won't 'settle for 'beans', he does indeed settle for things on Ennis' terms right up to the final lake scene.

Wow, thanks so much, Sweets!  You know, I don't know why I write this way, and after I've posted something, I often go back and read what I've written only to find all kinds of hidden meanings, slips, buried thoughts!  BBM-Cat, your kind comments have made my day!
Title: Re: September 23rd 6:00 a.m.
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 19, 2007, 10:30:55 pm
Why is it always about food in your stories, Marie?  ;D  Once I come to California I'll beg you to cook one of your delicious BBM-fanfic-recipes for me!

Dagi



I don't know Dagi.  Somehow, I think food and BBM just fit together!  :)
Title: Re: September 24rd, 8:13 am
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 19, 2007, 10:44:18 pm
September 24rd, 8:13 am by Dagi

Ennis knew he had been in the shower too long, his skin wrinkly, the room filled with hot steam, the water about to get lukewarm, but he didn't want to get out into the cold reality of the apartment.

The memory of Jack's hands, lathering him after a long day with the sheep, until he came all over Jack's lap, this memory had been enough to bring him over the edge, tilting his head back and moaning out loud – he was sure Alma had heard it, and the thought of what she might think of him jerking off in the shower made his cheeks get even redder.

He still tried to calm his breath and  rubbed his right eye with the ball of his hand. “Jack.” he whispered, savoring the name like a ripe, sweet fruit, running his tongue over his wet lips. “Jack..........Jack...........Jack."

Beautiful, Dagi! The tension is mounting all the time.  Keep it up, Babe!  We have awhile before the 24th comes!
Title: September 24th 11:30 a.m.
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 19, 2007, 11:16:11 pm
September 24th 11:30 a.m. by Littlewing1957

Alma sat by herself at the kitchen table, nursing a lukewarm mug of coffee.  She just a moment ago cleared the breakfast dishes, washed them, put them back in the cupboard.  The girls were down for a nap, but where was Ennis?  Alma didn’t have the energy to go look for him.  He was probably downstairs, sitting on a wobbly chair in the Laundromat.  Alma noticed her husband sitting downstairs in the Laundromat on several occasions, staring at the dryer and it's revolving motion, watching as it tousled clothes round and round.  Alma’s heart sank when she saw her husband sitting there, all alone, invariably holding a cold bottle of beer.  If only he could talk to her, tell her all about it. 

Ennis sat and watched a dryer turn.  He was not alone, but was in the company of a stout, older woman sporting a burgundy beehive, and wearing a green shirtwaist dress.  Ennis noticed earlier the woman reduced to washing clothes with face soap.  "That poor lady," Ennis thought as he watched the woman break off pieces of Ivory soap and throw them in the washer.  “Someone poorer than me!"

Jack should be along at any time!  The very thought of seeing Jack again both excited and terrified Ennis.  He would go back up to the apartment in a bit, but for the time being, he was content to sit on the white plastic chair in the Laundromat, savor the peace of noisy machinery.  When he was ready for another beer, he would return home.  He would go home and wait.  Wait for Jack Twist.
Title: Re: September 24rd, 8:13 am
Post by: Toycoon on September 19, 2007, 11:23:24 pm
Quote
“Jack.” he whispered, savoring the name like a ripe, sweet fruit, running his tongue over his wet lips. “Jack..........Jack...........Jack."

I love it, Dagi dearest! Just reading that one felt good in my mouth. Delicious!
Title: Re: September 24th 11:30 a.m.
Post by: Toycoon on September 19, 2007, 11:41:39 pm
Quote
Jack should be along at any time!  The very thought of seeing Jack again both excited and terrified Ennis.  He would go back up to the apartment in a bit, but for the time being, he was content to sit on the white plastic chair in the Laundromat, savor the peace of noisy machinery.  When he was ready for another beer, he would return home.  He would go home and wait.  Wait for Jack Twist.

Poor Ennis. The wait must be excruciating for the man. It's gonna be a loooong five days until the twenty-fourth!
Make it worth our while, Miss Littlewing. You know we love it!
Title: Re: September 24th 11:30 a.m.
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 20, 2007, 12:07:35 am
Poor Ennis. The wait must be excruciating for the man. It's gonna be a loooong five days until the twenty-fourth!
Make it worth our while, Miss Littlewing. You know we love it!

I'll try, Baby!  I have a few tales in the works that I'll post starting tomorrow.  I hope you like them.  :)
Title: Re: September 24th 11:30 a.m.
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 20, 2007, 12:15:50 am
September 24th 11:30 a.m. by Littlewing1957

Alma sat by herself at the kitchen table, nursing a lukewarm mug of coffee.  She just a moment ago cleared the breakfast dishes, washed them, put them back in the cupboard.  The girls were down for a nap, but where was Ennis?  Alma didn’t have the energy to go look for him.  He was probably downstairs, sitting on a wobbly chair in the Laundromat.  Alma noticed her husband sitting downstairs in the Laundromat on several occasions, staring at the dryer and it's revolving motion, watching as it tousled clothes round and round.  Alma’s heart sank when she saw her husband sitting there, all alone, invariably holding a cold bottle of beer.  If only he could talk to her, tell her all about it. 

Ennis sat and watched a dryer turn.  He was not alone, but was in the company of a stout, older woman sporting a burgundy beehive, and wearing a green shirtwaist dress.  Ennis noticed earlier the woman reduced to washing clothes with face soap.  "That poor lady," Ennis thought as he watched the woman break off pieces of Ivory soap and throw them in the washer.  “Someone poorer than me!"

Jack should be along at any time!  The very thought of seeing Jack again both excited and terrified Ennis.  He would go back up to the apartment in a bit, but for the time being, he was content to sit on the white plastic chair in the Laundromat, savor the peace of noisy machinery.  When he was ready for another beer, he would return home.  He would go home and wait.  Wait for Jack Twist.


How Ennis' waiting for Jack is so beautifully portrayed - what could be more boring than watching a dryer dry clothes? Interesting he prefers this activity to being around Alma. Maybe Ennis felt just like those clothes all jumbled up in the dryer, and going nowhere but in circles...
Title: Re: September 24rd, 8:13 am
Post by: Dagi on September 20, 2007, 12:40:37 am
Beautiful, Dagi! The tension is mounting all the time.  Keep it up, Babe!  We have awhile before the 24th comes!

Thanks, babe!  :-*

Dagi
Title: Re: September 24rd, 8:13 am
Post by: Dagi on September 20, 2007, 12:42:16 am
I love it, Dagi dearest! Just reading that one felt good in my mouth. Delicious!

Thank you, my dear! It was my favorite line, too!

Dagi
Title: Re: September 24th 11:30 a.m.
Post by: Dagi on September 20, 2007, 12:47:02 am
September 24th 11:30 a.m. by Littlewing1957

Alma sat by herself at the kitchen table, nursing a lukewarm mug of coffee.  She just a moment ago cleared the breakfast dishes, washed them, put them back in the cupboard.  The girls were down for a nap, but where was Ennis?  Alma didn’t have the energy to go look for him.  He was probably downstairs, sitting on a wobbly chair in the Laundromat.  Alma noticed her husband sitting downstairs in the Laundromat on several occasions, staring at the dryer and it's revolving motion, watching as it tousled clothes round and round.  Alma’s heart sank when she saw her husband sitting there, all alone, invariably holding a cold bottle of beer.  If only he could talk to her, tell her all about it. 

Ennis sat and watched a dryer turn.  He was not alone, but was in the company of a stout, older woman sporting a burgundy beehive, and wearing a green shirtwaist dress.  Ennis noticed earlier the woman reduced to washing clothes with face soap.  "That poor lady," Ennis thought as he watched the woman break off pieces of Ivory soap and throw them in the washer.  “Someone poorer than me!"

Jack should be along at any time!  The very thought of seeing Jack again both excited and terrified Ennis.  He would go back up to the apartment in a bit, but for the time being, he was content to sit on the white plastic chair in the Laundromat, savor the peace of noisy machinery.  When he was ready for another beer, he would return home.  He would go home and wait.  Wait for Jack Twist.


I can hear the boring, calming sounds of washing machines......why was this scene not in the movie?

The tension is mounting - keep them coming, babe  ;) !

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 20, 2007, 12:49:10 am
Good evening and good night to my Cali boys, Toycoon and Gary!

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 20, 2007, 04:22:25 am
I just made one big September-post in the archive, with all the stories about Sept 23rd and 24th. It's fun reading them there, that creates a movie on it's own.....enjoy it!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 20, 2007, 06:56:50 am
September 23rd, 11:55 pm  by Dagi

Alma was sound asleep, so were the kids, although little Jenny had been coughing heavily until an hour prior.

Ennis sighed, sat down on the sofa with his fourth bottle of beer, and put his feet up onto the old, worn armchair; the relaxed image though was deceiving, he knew he would not be able to fall asleep, so why even try.

The TV provided stunning pictures of a waterfall in Brazil, but they could not compete with the pictures of this beautiful, sexy man that had been haunting him every wake second for weeks now, getting more vivid and seductive by the hour....
Title: Re: September 24th 11:30 a.m.
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 20, 2007, 11:46:34 am
You're right, BBM-Cat, watching clothes dry is boring.  But watching clothes dry in one of those commercial dryers with the window in the door can be oddly hypnotizing.

Gary 

Good point Gary, maybe it had a calming effect...he could really be alone with his thoughts (of Jack).
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 20, 2007, 01:07:56 pm
Such sad longing, Dagi.  But I agree with Ennis.  Waterfalls, no matter how grand, can't compete with Jack.  But does it have to be an either/or type situation?  How about we put a naked Jack in the spray of said waterfall?  His smooth, youthful skin glistening with water pellets.  MMM  And the flowing stream washing over him, and some of it being funnled outward by his member so that it looks like he's pissing like a race horse.   :P

Gary

 :laugh: seems you had sweet dreams, Gary dearest. That´s quite a beautiful picture you are creating in my mind, especially the last part  ;D. Oh, and the youthful skin glistening with water pellets, aaahh, I want to stand there with him. Would be kind of interesting how much of his 7.5 inches is left when he´s been in the ice cold water for a while  ;).

Dagi

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 20, 2007, 09:06:29 pm
September 23rd, 11:55 pm  by Dagi

Alma was sound asleep, so were the kids, although little Jenny had been coughing heavily until an hour prior.

Ennis sighed, sat down on the sofa with his fourth bottle of beer, and put his feet up onto the old, worn armchair; the relaxed image though was deceiving, he knew he would not be able to fall asleep, so why even try.

The TV provided stunning pictures of a waterfall in Brazil, but they could not compete with the pictures of this beautiful, sexy man that had been haunting him every wake second for weeks now, getting more vivid and seductive by the hour....

Perfect, Dagi.  I am so glad to see your story here.  I must add something of my own in a little bit!
Title: Re: September 24th 11:30 a.m.
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 20, 2007, 09:08:22 pm


What's this about breaking off bits from a bar of Ivory soap?  Will that work?  Will the soap actually liquefy?

Gary

I don't remember, Gay.  I just know my mom used to tell me stories of really poor people in Oklahoma using soap to clean clothes because they couldn't afford laundry detergent.
Title: September 1st, 9:00 a.m.
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 20, 2007, 09:40:44 pm
September 1st, 9:01a.m. by Littlewing1957

I’m going a bit back in time with this one.  You guys don’t mind, do you?

Mr. Newsome usually left the running of the business to his staff, but this morning he wanted to attend to a very special customer: a wealthy rancher and merchant who used Newsome’s exclusively for his tractor and combine needs.  Mr. Newsome walked through the door of his business and noticed Jack Twist, his only combine salesman, alone at his desk.  Jack looked up from a few papers he was sorting to offer his father-in-law a half smile.

“Morning, Pops Newsome!  Didn’t expect you to be in today.” Jack remarked absently.
 
Jack became accustomed to Old Man Newsome’s tendency to show up at any time, and was always on his toes in case he needed to “pass inspection.”  Mr. Newsome threw a glance at his son-in-law, but didn’t return the greeting.

“Is Mr. Blair here yet?”  Mr. Newsome blurted out as he moved past Jack and swaggered down the hallway.  Jack didn’t even have a chance to answer, as his father-in-law was already inside his office, the door closed behind him. 

“I’m really sick of that old blowhard!”  Jack thought bitterly as he took a seat behind his desk.  And just as he was about to file away a few invoices, Mr. Blair walked into Newsome’s and offered Jack a warm smile. 

“He in?”  Mr. Blair asked Jack, pointing his finger down the hall toward Mr. Newsome’s office.

“Sure is!”  Jack answered.  “Go right on down.  He’s expecting you.” 

Jack watched as Mr. Blair walked down the hall to meet with Old Man Newsome.  He observed Mr. Blair walking with a slight limp.  Jack remembered that Old Man Blair used to ride the bulls in his younger days.  Jack liked Mr. Blair, and often traded rodeo riding lies with him. 

“Jack, bring me a bill of sale, pronto!”  It was Mr. Newsome, as abrasive and condescending as ever.   “I’ve run out.  And Jack, get a move on.  Mr. Blair ain’t got all day.”

Jack snatched up a stack of papers and moved toward his father-in-law’s office.  He could hear the 2 men laughing and when he heard his name mentioned, he stopped.  Jack tiptoed to Mr. Newsome’s office and put an ear to the door.

“That son-in-law of yours seems like a good old boy,” Mr. Blair remarked.  Jack smiled and continued listening.

“Naw, he’s a bit of a pansy and I think he’s ruining my little girl’s life.  You know Paul, just between the 2 of us, I would give that man a sizeable sum just to go somewhere, anywhere!”

Jack almost dropped the papers he was holding.  He was not hurt, as he knew his father-in-law loathed him.  Jack knocked on the door and entered.  Mr. Blair averted his eyes, while Mr. Newsome held out a hand to accept the bills of sale that Jack handed him.  No, Jack wasn’t hurt, but felt hopeful.  He walked to his desk and looked for a postcard…

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 21, 2007, 12:35:46 am
I'll enjoy reading them all once they're all pieced together ... thanks for doing this for us Dagi ... you're a treasure!  :-*

Susie  :) 

You are very welcome, Susie  :-*. As I told you, I do it for my own benefit :D.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 21, 2007, 12:39:02 am
Beautiful Dagi!  Ennis is in agony now ... you're building up the tension so perfectly, I can hardly stand it!

I know I won't be able to sleep on 23rd either... and not just because it's my little girls 10th birthday!!!

Susie  :-*



Thank you, Susie. When I did the archive I noticed that there was a whole movie plot about Jack's evening, but nobody had written about poor Ennis, so I had mercy on him ;).

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 21, 2007, 12:40:29 am
Perfect, Dagi.  I am so glad to see your story here.  I must add something of my own in a little bit!

Thanks, Marie honey!

Dagi
Title: Re: September 1st, 9:00 a.m.
Post by: Dagi on September 21, 2007, 12:49:26 am
September 1st, 9:01 a.m. by Littlewing1957

.......... No, Jack wasn’t hurt, but felt hopeful.  He walked to his desk and looked for a postcard…




Awesome, Marie! As I´ve said many times before, you should be a screen writer........This L.D. is a sonofawhoresonbitch!! Take the money and run, Jack!!!!  :D :) :( >:( :'(
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 21, 2007, 12:50:54 am
Good evening, Marie!  :-*
Title: Re: September 1st, 9:00 a.m.
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 21, 2007, 04:57:35 am
September 1st, 9:01a.m. by Littlewing1957

How wonderful Littlewing, giving us the impetus behind the postcard! How clever! I always wondered what exactly was the final straw for Jack to decide to pursue contacting Ennis.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 21, 2007, 05:01:11 am
September 23rd, 11:55 pm  by Dagi

Alma was sound asleep, so were the kids, although little Jenny had been coughing heavily until an hour prior.

Ennis sighed, sat down on the sofa with his fourth bottle of beer, and put his feet up onto the old, worn armchair; the relaxed image though was deceiving, he knew he would not be able to fall asleep, so why even try.

The TV provided stunning pictures of a waterfall in Brazil, but they could not compete with the pictures of this beautiful, sexy man that had been haunting him every wake second for weeks now, getting more vivid and seductive by the hour....

Wonderful Dagi! Ennis' waiting and longing is so apparent! Was the waterfall a symbol of Ennis' powerful desire for Jack? LOL. Great job!
Title: Re: September 1st, 9:00 a.m.
Post by: Toycoon on September 21, 2007, 10:18:58 am
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“Naw, he’s a bit of a pansy and I think he’s ruining my little girl’s life.  You know Paul, just between the 2 of us, I would give that man a sizeable sum just to go somewhere, anywhere!”

No, Jack wan’t hurt, but felt hopeful.  He walked to his desk and looked for a postcard…

Great details, Littlewing! Motivation for dropping Ennis a line. You should be a screenwriter. you could write the prequel: "Brokeback Mountain, Before There Was Jack and Ennis".
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 21, 2007, 12:26:50 pm
Wonderful Dagi! Ennis' waiting and longing is so apparent! Was the waterfall a symbol of Ennis' powerful desire for Jack? LOL. Great job!

Thank you, BBM-Cat! The waterfall a symbol of Ennis´ desire? How about the river being a symbol of the amount of whiskey they had shared up on Brokeback, or of the time that has passed since then and can´t be turned back, or the feeling of pure life they had enjoyed when they were together, or the juices they have let flow thinking of each other  ;D.....there could be all sorts of interpretation! But none of that compares to his love for Jack (although he´s still not aware of it).

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 21, 2007, 09:14:04 pm
Thank you, BBM-Cat! The waterfall a symbol of Ennis´ desire? How about the river being a symbol of the amount of whiskey they had shared up on Brokeback, or of the time that has passed since then and can´t be turned back, or the feeling of pure life they had enjoyed when they were together, or the juices they have let flow thinking of each other  ;D.....there could be all sorts of interpretation! But none of that compares to his love for Jack (although he´s still not aware of it).

Dagi

I LOVE IT! Yes, so many interpretations! That's what I love about this group!
Title: Re: September 1st, 9:00 a.m.
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 22, 2007, 12:14:57 am

Awesome, Marie! As I´ve said many times before, you should be a screen writer........This L.D. is a sonofawhoresonbitch!! Take the money and run, Jack!!!!  :D :) :( >:( :'(

 :laugh: Thanks, Dagi!  You're very sweet!  :-*
Title: Re: September 1st, 9:00 a.m.
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 22, 2007, 12:16:23 am
Very interesting turn of events, Littlewing.  I can imagine something just like this happening.  You know some have suggested that Bobby wasn't really Jack's son, and that Lureen was pregnant before she got into the back seat with Jack.  If that's true perhaps the only reason Mr. Newsom allowed Jack to marry his daughter is so his grandchild wouldn't be born illegitimate.  But after the kid was born, and Jack's name was on the birth certificate, Jack wasn't really needed anymore.

Gary

I agree with this, Gary!
Title: Re: September 1st, 9:00 a.m.
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 22, 2007, 12:16:59 am
Ah love it Marie!  There's so many gaps to be filled in this story ... just when I think we've covered everything possible, you come up with another belter!!

Susie  :D

I had to do it, SusieBaby!
Title: Re: September 1st, 9:00 a.m.
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 22, 2007, 12:18:18 am
Great details, Littlewing! Motivation for dropping Ennis a line. You should be a screenwriter. you could write the prequel: "Brokeback Mountain, Before There Was Jack and Ennis".

Why thanks Toycoon!
Title: September 23rd, Late Afternoon
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 22, 2007, 01:14:42 am
September 23rd, Late Afternoon by Littlewing1957

Jack was on the road, driving much faster than he should.  He couldn’t help it though; just 12 more hours and he would come face -to -face with Ennis Del Mar.  Just the thought of greeting his old friend was enough motivation for Jack to redline it all the way...that is, if he could get away with it!

Just outside the Texas state border Jack found himself in the middle of a cloud burst.  He adjusted his speed to navigate the slick roads, and glancing up at the heavens, he couldn’t help but think back to one special afternoon up on brokeback,

Jack and Ennis were just finishing a supper of beans and Vienna sausages when they felt the raindrops.  Just a slight drizzle at first, but then the rains came in earnest.  Jack didn’t bother to put out the fire; it would be extinguished in due course.  But he grabbed Ennis by the hand and pulled him into the tent.  Ennis could wait out the rain and then return to the sheep.  Jack sat cross legged on the ground and enjoyed the soft whisper of the raindrops against the shelter.  Ennis chose to stand and peek out at the rain through the tent flap.  After awhile Ennis sat next to Jack, content to be in his presence, grateful to be warm and dry.

Jack beamed at the memory.  He drove in silence, trying to think of a pithy greeting for Ennis.  What to say, what to do?  It was of no consequence.  Jack still had hours to go before reaching Riverton.

Title: Re: September 23rd, Late Afternoon
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 22, 2007, 02:14:20 am
September 23rd, Late Afternoon by Littlewing1957

Jack was on the road, driving much faster than he should.  He couldn’t help it though; just 12 more hours and he would come face -to -face with Ennis Del Mar.  Just the thought of greeting his old friend was enough motivation for Jack to redline it all the way...that is, if he could get away with it!

Just outside the Texas state border Jack found himself in the middle of a cloud burst.  He adjusted his speed to navigate the slick roads, and glancing up at the heavens, he couldn’t help but think back to one special afternoon up on brokeback,

Jack and Ennis were just finishing a supper of beans and Vienna sausages when they felt the raindrops.  Just a slight drizzle at first, but then the rains came in earnest.  Jack didn’t bother to put out the fire; it would be extinguished in due course.  But he grabbed Ennis by the hand and pulled him into the tent.  Ennis could wait out the rain and then return to the sheep.  Jack sat cross legged on the ground and enjoyed the soft whisper of the raindrops against the shelter.  Ennis chose to stand and peek out at the rain through the tent flap.  After awhile Ennis sat next to Jack, content to be in his presence, grateful to be warm and dry.

Jack beamed at the memory.  He drove in silence, trying to think of a pithy greeting for Ennis.  What to say, what to do?  It was of no consequence.  Jack still had hours to go before reaching Riverton.



Beautiful Littlewing, just knowing Jack and Ennis were content to be in each other's presence; that there were intimate moments like these. And, you portrayed Jack's anxiety wonderfully - I feel nervous for him! LOL
Title: Re: September 23rd, Late Afternoon
Post by: Dagi on September 22, 2007, 02:47:58 am
September 23rd, Late Afternoon by Littlewing1957

Jack was on the road, driving much faster than he should.  He couldn't help it though; just 12 more hours and he would come face -to -face with Ennis Del Mar.  Just the thought of greeting his old friend was enough motivation for Jack to redline it all the way...that is, if he could get away with it!

Just outside the Texas state border Jack found himself in the middle of a cloud burst.  He adjusted his speed to navigate the slick roads, and glancing up at the heavens, he couldn't help but think back to one special afternoon up on brokeback,

Jack and Ennis were just finishing a supper of beans and Vienna sausages when they felt the raindrops.  Just a slight drizzle at first, but then the rains came in earnest.  Jack didn't bother to put out the fire; it would be extinguished in due course.  But he grabbed Ennis by the hand and pulled him into the tent.  Ennis could wait out the rain and then return to the sheep.  Jack sat cross legged on the ground and enjoyed the soft whisper of the raindrops against the shelter.  Ennis chose to stand and peek out at the rain through the tent flap.  After awhile Ennis sat next to Jack, content to be in his presence, grateful to be warm and dry.

Jack beamed at the memory.  He drove in silence, trying to think of a pithy greeting for Ennis.  What to say, what to do?  It was of no consequence.  Jack still had hours to go before reaching Riverton.



That was a beautiful, peaceful flashback. I loved the line  Ennis sat next to Jack, content to be in his presence, grateful to be warm and dry. I'm sure he felt as warm inside as outside.....

And it's a real wonder that Jack reached Riverton, since driving absentmindedly is quite dangerous!

Dagi
Title: Re: September 23rd, Late Afternoon
Post by: Toycoon on September 22, 2007, 08:05:54 am
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Jack and Ennis were just finishing a supper of beans and Vienna sausages when they felt the raindrops.  Just a slight drizzle at first, but then the rains came in earnest.  Jack didn't bother to put out the fire; it would be extinguished in due course.  But he grabbed Ennis by the hand and pulled him into the tent.  Ennis could wait out the rain and then return to the sheep.  Jack sat cross legged on the ground and enjoyed the soft whisper of the raindrops against the shelter.  Ennis chose to stand and peek out at the rain through the tent flap.  After awhile Ennis sat next to Jack, content to be in his presence, grateful to be warm and dry.

This reminds me a little of the 'dozy embrace' memory we are all so familiar with. Great effect, Littlewing.
Title: September 23rd, A Little Bit Later in the Afternoon
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 22, 2007, 10:21:52 am
September 23rd, A Little Bit Later in the Afternoon by BBM-Cat

With the idle miles of driving, the thoughts in his head swirled and intensified with each passing hour. What was he doing driving all the way to Riverton, Wyoming? What was he goin’ to say to Ennis? Jack did not have a plan. All he knew was that he needed to reconnect with Ennis. Jack felt oddly detached recently, like an observer in his own life. He was not sure what was real anymore. He just needed to see Ennis. Just needed to hear his voice. To look into his friend’s eyes. ‘That’s all’, he told himself, believing that just seeing his old friend would be his rescue. 

While driving in the rain, Jack fantasized that Ennis would be equally glad and excited to see him. It was hard deciphering Ennis’ two-word reply from his postcard. He was supposedly married now. What if over the past four years he had forgotten or dismissed the special time they had shared together on the mountain? Jack recalled returning to Brokeback that following summer, only to discover that Ennis had not. Maybe it was a sign. Maybe Jack was the only one keeping the memory alive. His heart ached to think it could be true. The only person he had ever truly, felt connected with, and the feelings might not even still be there! He had no idea how Ennis would receive him, though he hoped against hope, it was with an embrace.

Jack needed something real right now, he needed something to hold onto. Even if it was just hope. He glanced over at Ennis’ postcard on the passenger seat of the truck, touching it for reassurance. That little bit of hope in the river of despair, was exactly the lifeline propelling Jack Twist along his 14-hour journey north.
Title: Re: September 23rd, A Little Bit Later in the Afternoon
Post by: Dagi on September 22, 2007, 02:33:43 pm
September 23rd, A Little Bit Later in the Afternoon by BBM-Cat

With the idle miles of driving, the thoughts in his head swirled and intensified with each passing hour. What was he doing driving all the way to Riverton, Wyoming? What was he goin’ to say to Ennis? Jack did not have a plan. All he knew was that he needed to reconnect with Ennis. Jack felt oddly detached recently, like an observer in his own life. He was not sure what was real anymore. He just needed to see Ennis. Just needed to hear his voice. To look into his friend’s eyes. ‘That’s all’, he told himself, believing that just seeing his old friend would be his rescue. 

While driving in the rain, Jack fantasized that Ennis would be equally glad and excited to see him. It was hard deciphering Ennis’ two-word reply from his postcard. He was supposedly married now. What if over the past four years he had forgotten or dismissed the special time they had shared together on the mountain? Jack recalled returning to Brokeback that following summer, only to discover that Ennis had not. Maybe it was a sign. Maybe Jack was the only one keeping the memory alive. His heart ached to think it could be true. The only person he had ever truly, felt connected with, and the feelings might not even still be there! He had no idea how Ennis would receive him, though he hoped against hope, it was with an embrace.

Jack needed something real right now, he needed something to hold onto. Even if it was just hope. He glanced over at Ennis’ postcard on the passenger seat of the truck, touching it for reassurance. That little bit of hope in the river of despair, was exactly the lifeline propelling Jack Twist along his 14-hour journey north.


You are an amazing writer, a true enrichment of this thread. I enjoyed reading every single line. It´s just how it must have been - Jack going back and forth between hope and doubt.......you perfectly captured Jack´s inner dialogue. And I do wonder what would have become of both of them, had Jack not decided to write that card.....Thank you for posting this!

Dagi
Title: Re: September 23rd, A Little Bit Later in the Afternoon
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 22, 2007, 02:53:06 pm
You are an amazing writer, a true enrichment of this thread. I enjoyed reading every single line. It´s just how it must have been - Jack going back and forth between hope and doubt.......you perfectly captured Jack´s inner dialogue. And I do wonder what would have become of both of them, had Jack not decided to write that card.....Thank you for posting this!

Dagi

Thank you sincerely, Dagi - this is truly a collaborative effort, and I feel inspired by others' stories & perspectives. It's wonderful how our stories mesh and how we can all keep this series going.
Title: Re: September 23rd, A Little Bit Later in the Afternoon
Post by: Toycoon on September 22, 2007, 03:00:30 pm
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He had no idea how Ennis would receive him, though he hoped against hope, it was with an embrace.

Boy, does he ever get more than an embrace! C'mon Ennis, give 'em something we can cling to...

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Jack needed something real right now, he needed something to hold onto. Even if it was just hope. He glanced over at Ennis’ postcard on the passenger seat of the truck, touching it for reassurance. That little bit of hope in the river of despair, was exactly the lifeline propelling Jack Twist along his 14-hour journey north.

Honestly, we could make another complete film with all of the information we got going on here!
Let's have a fundraiser for "Brokeback Mountain, Jack with Ennis". Daphne can call Jake to see if he's available. Heath would be up for it!
Title: Re: September 23rd, A Little Bit Later in the Afternoon
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 22, 2007, 10:03:50 pm
Boy, does he ever get more than an embrace! C'mon Ennis, give 'em something we can cling to...   

Honestly, we could make another complete film with all of the information we got going on here!
Let's have a fundraiser for "Brokeback Mountain, Jack with Ennis". Daphne can call Jake to see if he's available. Heath would be up for it!

LOL..Hey, I'm all for it Toycoon! Maybe we need to start with a bake sale, or a car wash?!
Title: Re: September 23rd, A Little Bit Later in the Afternoon
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 22, 2007, 10:05:32 pm
BBM-Cat, this really speaks to Jack's longing and hope, and his nagging fears.  I imagine it was just like this for Jack on the drive up.  But we know that Jack need not have worried about what he'd say to Ennis.  Ennis took care of that problem for both of them by sticking his tongue down Jack's throat.    :P  Maybe that's what we should all do when we get tongue-tied.   :laugh:

Gary

Your right Gary, no words needed! EVER! It would solve a lot of problems, huh?! LOL
Title: Re: September 23rd, Late Afternoon
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 23, 2007, 01:01:39 am
Hi there Littlewing,

I loved your description of Jack and Ennis taking shelter in the tent during a rain storm.  It's no fun when it rains while you're at camp.  But if you can manage to chill rather than becoming restless in your tent it can be relaxing.  And the sound of rain beating on a canvas tent is strangely comforting, sort of like rain hitting a tin roof.  And the smell of the woods after a rain is wonderful.

Gary

Thanks, Gary.
Title: Re: September 23rd, Late Afternoon
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 23, 2007, 01:02:39 am
Beautiful Littlewing, just knowing Jack and Ennis were content to be in each other's presence; that there were intimate moments like these. And, you portrayed Jack's anxiety wonderfully - I feel nervous for him! LOL

 :)  Thanks for your kind words, BBM-Cat!  You always know the right thing to say!  :-*
Title: Re: September 23rd, Late Afternoon
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 23, 2007, 01:04:43 am
That was a beautiful, peaceful flashback. I loved the line  Ennis sat next to Jack, content to be in his presence, grateful to be warm and dry. I'm sure he felt as warm inside as outside.....

And it's a real wonder that Jack reached Riverton, since driving absentmindedly is quite dangerous!

Dagi


You're right, Dagi!  I image Jack must have been terrified, conflicted, and had feeling of guilt about driving all that way to see Ennis.  But he was able to handle the jitters and make it to Riverton in one piece!  :)
Title: Re: September 23rd, Late Afternoon
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 23, 2007, 01:05:17 am
This reminds me a little of the 'dozy embrace' memory we are all so familiar with. Great effect, Littlewing.

Thanks, Sweetie! :-*
Title: Re: September 23rd, A Little Bit Later in the Afternoon
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 23, 2007, 01:07:25 am
September 23rd, A Little Bit Later in the Afternoon by BBM-Cat

With the idle miles of driving, the thoughts in his head swirled and intensified with each passing hour. What was he doing driving all the way to Riverton, Wyoming? What was he goin’ to say to Ennis? Jack did not have a plan. All he knew was that he needed to reconnect with Ennis. Jack felt oddly detached recently, like an observer in his own life. He was not sure what was real anymore. He just needed to see Ennis. Just needed to hear his voice. To look into his friend’s eyes. ‘That’s all’, he told himself, believing that just seeing his old friend would be his rescue. 

While driving in the rain, Jack fantasized that Ennis would be equally glad and excited to see him. It was hard deciphering Ennis’ two-word reply from his postcard. He was supposedly married now. What if over the past four years he had forgotten or dismissed the special time they had shared together on the mountain? Jack recalled returning to Brokeback that following summer, only to discover that Ennis had not. Maybe it was a sign. Maybe Jack was the only one keeping the memory alive. His heart ached to think it could be true. The only person he had ever truly, felt connected with, and the feelings might not even still be there! He had no idea how Ennis would receive him, though he hoped against hope, it was with an embrace.

Jack needed something real right now, he needed something to hold onto. Even if it was just hope. He glanced over at Ennis’ postcard on the passenger seat of the truck, touching it for reassurance. That little bit of hope in the river of despair, was exactly the lifeline propelling Jack Twist along his 14-hour journey north.


BBM-Cat, this is beautifully written, authentic and exciting.  I especially like the idea of Jack keeping Ennis' postcard beside him on the seat and touching it for reassurance.  brilliant.  Thanks so much for this amazing addition to our series.  :)
Title: September 23rd, Early Evening
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 23, 2007, 01:32:57 am
September 23rd, Early Evening by Littlewing1957

Along about 4:00p.m., Jack was hungry and exhausted.  He packed a few sandwiches and had a cooler of drinks, but ate all the food miles ago in a fit of nerves.  He still had quite a few hours to go before reaching Riverton, but in addition to being hungry, Jack needed to stretch his legs a bit.  And to top things off, his eyes were blurry from all that squinting through the rain.  Time to stop.

A rest stop was just 2 miles away, according to a billboard Jack passed about 15 minutes ago.  He hated to stop, wanted to make good time to see his friend, but Jack also needed to take care of himself.  Just one more mile and he could take a breather, order a burger, and walk around a bit. 

The rain feel in sheets as Jack approached the rest stop.  So much for walking around!  He parked his truck among several other big rigs, campers, pickup trucks, and ran for the tiny diner that was situated right next to an old fashioned filling station.  The diner was practically empty, which suited Jack.  He seated himself and was given a menu by a handsome woman who wore jeans and a t-shirt.  Jack ordered a burger, fries and a coke and looked out the window; took in the scene.  There was not much to see – truckers entering and exiting the area – all trying hard to avoid getting drenched. 

The waitress brought Jack’s order and decided to engage him in a little small talk.  He didn’t mind, as it took his thoughts in another direction, comforting him.  He invited the woman to sit with him awhile and shoot the breeze.  It was so good to enjoy a truly decent burger while having pleasant conversation.  Jack felt refreshed as he paid his bill, left a large tip and ran back to his truck. 




Title: Re: September 23rd, Early Evening
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 23, 2007, 01:58:29 am
September 23rd, Early Evening by Littlewing1957

Along about 4:00p.m., Jack was hungry and exhausted.  He packed a few sandwiches and had a cooler of drinks, but ate all the food miles ago in a fit of nerves.  He still had quite a few hours to go before reaching Riverton, but in addition to being hungry, Jack needed to stretch his legs a bit.  And on top things off, his eyes were blurry from all that squinting through the rain.  Time to stop.

A rest stop was just 2 miles away, according to a billboard Jack passed about 15 minutes ago.  He hated to stop, wanted to make good time to see his friend, but Jack also needed to take care of himself.  Just one more mile and he could take a breather, order a burger, and walk around a bit. 

The rain feel in sheets as Jack approached the rest stop.  So much for walking around!  He parked his truck among several other big rigs, campers, pickup trucks, and ran for the tiny diner that was situated right next to an old fashioned filling station.  The diner was practically empty, which suited Jack.  He seated himself and was given a menu by a handsome woman who wore jeans and a t-shirt.  Jack ordered a burger, fries and a coke and looked out the window; took in the scene.  There was not much to see – truckers entering and exiting the area – all trying hard to avoid getting drenched. 

The waitress brought Jack’s order and decided to engage him in a little small talk.  He didn’t mind, as it took his thoughts in another direction, comforting him.  He invited the woman to sit with him awhile and shoot the breeze.  It was so good to enjoy a truly decent burger while having pleasant conversation.  Jack felt refreshed as he paid his bill, left a large tip and ran back to his truck. 


Thank you Littlewing for your very kind comments on my continuation of your story, 'Late Afternoon'. This is such a wonderful continuation, depicting part of Jack's 14 hour journey on the road - I really wish that had been incorporated into the movie just a little bit, though you have had no difficulties helping fill in the 'missing scenes'. I'm glad that you gave poor Jack a rest break in your story! I thought he might wreck the truck 'redlining it', then driving thru the rainstorm, all the while contending with his thoughts/anxieties! LOL  How great the 24th is going to be!
Title: Re: September 23rd, A Little Bit Later in the Afternoon
Post by: Dagi on September 23, 2007, 08:06:23 am
BBM-Cat, this really speaks to Jack's longing and hope, and his nagging fears.  I imagine it was just like this for Jack on the drive up.  But we know that Jack need not have worried about what he'd say to Ennis.  Ennis took care of that problem for both of them by sticking his tongue down Jack's throat.    :P  Maybe that's what we should all do when we get tongue-tied.   :laugh:

Gary

 :laugh: You have an incomparably romantic way of describing things, Gary dear.

Dagi
Title: Re: September 23rd, Early Evening
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 23, 2007, 04:49:35 pm
Thank you Littlewing for your very kind comments on my continuation of your story, 'Late Afternoon'. This is such a wonderful continuation, depicting part of Jack's 14 hour journey on the road - I really wish that had been incorporated into the movie just a little bit, though you have had no difficulties helping fill in the 'missing scenes'. I'm glad that you gave poor Jack a rest break in your story! I thought he might wreck the truck 'redlining it', then driving thru the rainstorm, all the while contending with his thoughts/anxieties! LOL  How great the 24th is going to be!

Thanks for your comments, BBM-Cat.  In my mind, I can't imagine Jack driving 14 hours without some sort of break.  It would be foolish to drive straight through without at least stopping to use the bathroom.  But I suppose it could be done?
Title: September 23rd, Evening
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 23, 2007, 05:06:01 pm
September 23rd, Evening by Littlewing1957

9 hours down, just 5 more to go before reaching Riverton and Ennis Del Mar.  Jack left the rain behind a half hour ago, and the sunshine that was now beating down on his windshield did much to lighten his mood.  He was no longer terrified of seeing Ennis again, but was becoming rather aroused.

With each passing mile, Jack imagined Ennis Del Mar in various stages of undress.  It was very strange, and so distracting that Jack had to concentrate fully just to keep from wrecking his truck and killing himself in the process.

Another mile and Jack could see Ennis Del Mar, all sprawled out in the nude, beckoning to him, his manhood shooting straight up and quivering.  Jack was having trouble staying on the road.  He reached down and adjusted his own throbbing penis, and shook the image of a naked Ennis out of his mind.  He had to.  But the idea of being in his friend’s arms once again was the impetus he needed to keep on going.  Redline it the rest of the way?  5 more hours and he should reach the Wyoming State line.

Title: September 23rd, Entering Wyoming
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 23, 2007, 11:58:25 pm
September 23rd, Entering Wyoming by BBM-Cat

Closer to Ennis. Jack was feeling better already. Especially after that last rest stop. Everything was coming into sharper focus. The memories of he and Ennis up on Brokeback came flooding back into his mind. Some things he had not thought about since that summer. Nervousness was beginning to be replaced by sheer excitement and sheer arousal. He could see his friend so clearly now. Jack imagined that he could just about smell Ennis too, experience the warmth of his laughter, and those strong arms wrapped around him. The thoughts of being in his friends’ arms again just about sent Jack over the edge, as well as other more intimate thoughts that made him drive faster. But, somehow, Jack had to stay focused for the remainder of the trip.

Jack merged onto I-25, taking him across the Wyoming state line. 'Much too late to turn back now', he chuckled to himself. He had no idea what would transpire in just a few short hours. However, he was feeling much more hopeful than when he'd first started his journey. He could not begin to wrap his mind around the reality of seeing Ennis after all this time. And still, he wondered, how would they behave seeing each other after four, long years?

When he got to Ennis’ place, would they shake hands? Would they even hug? Rip each others' clothes off? Jack couldn't let himself think too long on that last possibility, he just barely had enough blood in his brain to operate the damn truck. He figured he’d just play it safe, taking his cue from Ennis when he saw him. It put Jack in a quandary though to think he might actually have to hold back and restrain himself from touching or hugging his old friend; such a contrast to the deep intimacy they had once shared. Jack was afraid that if he touched Ennis he might not be able to stop himself. ‘Yeah’, Jack entertained, ‘I’ll just plant one on him right in front of the wife!’

The thought of actually meeting Ennis’ wife also kinda terrified him. What was her name again? It was something with an A…like Alice or Annie. What would she be like? Would she be able to see right through him? To read his mind? Jack continued to juggle these thoughts back and forth in his head as he drove; most thoughts were welcome and pleasant, outnumbering a few that were most definitely, unwanted.
Title: Re: September 23rd, Early Evening
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 24, 2007, 12:02:32 am
Very vivid and convincing episode, Littlewing.  Well written as usual.  But why do I always want to eat after reading one of your stories?   ;D

Gary

 :laugh:  :laugh: :laugh: Thanks, Gary!  I don't know why, but I always think of food whenever I write about our boys. 
Title: Re: September 23rd, Early Evening
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 24, 2007, 12:04:27 am
Another great instalment of the September saga littlewing!  And there you go talking about food again ... you're clearly a woman after my own heart!
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Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

C'mon now, SusieBaby!  Jack had to get hungry in the process of driving 1400 miles!  :laugh:

Food is always a favorite subject of mine.  Clancy and I would PM each other about food almost on a daily basis.  I miss trading recipies with that cowboy!
Title: Re: September 23rd, A Little Bit Later in the Afternoon
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 24, 2007, 12:05:12 am
Why thank you, Dagi.   :P  Hey, in my stories Ennis does tend to be a bit rough with Jack, and in my latest Daniel and Tyler story, Tyler, Ennis's grandson, was a bit rough on Daniel-- Tyler stuck something other than his tongue down Daniel's thraot and nearly killed the boy --but they always do these things with love.   ;D

Gary

Awwww, I like it rough  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh: ;)
Title: Re: September 23rd, Evening
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 24, 2007, 12:12:30 am
Oh, I so love it when Ennis's manhood quivers.   ;D  Very hot, Littlewing.  And you just know that Jack had thoughts like these by the way he reluctantly admits that he redlined it all the way.  The way he admitted that was so sexy.

BTW, this is totally off topic, but I was wondering if you've ever been to the Winchester House?  You know the one built by the Winchester widow back in the late 19th century, and continuously worked on for nearly 40 years, night and day, in an attempt to appease the ghosts of those killed by Winchester rifles?  Don't you live close to it?

Gary 

Gary, yes I have been to the Winchester Mystery House,  but only once when I was a teen.  My dad took me on a tour.  Quite a fascinating, spooky place.  I wanted to take Maria on a tour over the Labor Day holiday, we had it all planned, but she backed out at the last minute.  Too creepy, she'd said.  The Mystery House is a great place to go during Halloween, as they host flashlight tours at night.  One of my niece's friends swears that he saw a shadowy, ghostly Sarah Winchester sitting and in one of her rocking chairs, sneering at him!  Gary, are you interested in visiting?  If so, perhaps we can work something out.  I would love to tour the place with you.  The Mystery House is halfway between my place and Merced. 
Title: Re: September 23rd, Entering Wyoming
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 24, 2007, 12:17:00 am
September 23rd, Entering Wyoming by BBM-Cat

Closer to Ennis. Jack was feeling better already. Especially after that last rest stop. Everything was coming into sharper focus. The memories of he and Ennis up on Brokeback came flooding back into his mind. Some things he had not thought about since that summer. Nervousness was beginning to be replaced by sheer excitement and sheer arousal. He could see his friend so clearly now. Jack imagined that he could just about smell Ennis too, experience the warmth of his laughter, and those strong arms wrapped around him. The thoughts of being in his friends’ arms again just about sent Jack over the edge, as well as other more intimate thoughts that made him drive faster. But, somehow, Jack had to stay focused for the remainder of the trip.

Jack merged onto I-25, taking him across the Wyoming state line. 'Much too late to turn back now', he chuckled to himself. He had no idea what would transpire in just a few short hours. However, he was feeling much more hopeful than when he'd first started his journey. He could not begin to wrap his mind around the reality of seeing Ennis after all this time. And still, he wondered, how would they behave seeing each other after four, long years?

When he got to Ennis’ place, would they shake hands? Would they even hug? Rip each others' clothes off? Jack couldn't let himself think too long on that last possibility, he just barely had enough blood in his brain to operate the damn truck. He figured he’d just play it safe, taking his cue from Ennis when he saw him. It put Jack in a quandary though to think he might actually have to hold back and restrain himself from touching or hugging his old friend; such a contrast to the deep intimacy they had once shared. Jack was afraid that if he touched Ennis he might not be able to stop himself. ‘Yeah’, Jack entertained, ‘I’ll just plant one on him right in front of the wife!’

The thought of actually meeting Ennis’ wife also kinda terrified him. What was her name again? It was something with an A…like Alice or Annie. What would she be like? Would she be able to see right through him? To read his mind? Jack continued to juggle these thoughts back and forth in his head as he drove; most thoughts were welcome and pleasant, outnumbering a few that were most definitely, unwanted.


Awww, BBM-Cat, we're getting so close.  And what a wonderful addition.  So very well written and descriptive.  I love how you capture Jack's thoughts here.  I can image how nervous he must feel, especially about meeting Alma.  I never thought about how Jack must have been terrified of meeting Ennis' wife, especially since he really wanted to take him away from her...
Title: Re: September 23rd, Evening
Post by: Dagi on September 24, 2007, 12:57:39 am
September 23rd, Evening by Littlewing1957

9 hours down, just 5 more to go before reaching Riverton and Ennis Del Mar.  Jack left the rain behind a half hour ago, and the sunshine that was now beating down on his windshield did much to lighten his mood.  He was no longer terrified of seeing Ennis again, but was becoming rather aroused.

With each passing mile, Jack imagined Ennis Del Mar in various stages of undress.  It was very strange, and so distracting that Jack had to concentrate fully just to keep from wrecking his truck and killing himself in the process.

Another mile and Jack could see Ennis Del Mar, all sprawled out in the nude, beckoning to him, his manhood shooting straight up and quivering.  Jack was having trouble staying on the road.  He reached down and adjusted his own throbbing penis, and shook the image of a naked Ennis out of his mind.  He had to.  But the idea of being in his friend’s arms once again was the impetus he needed to keep on going.  Redline it the rest of the way?  5 more hours and he should reach the Wyoming State line.




God, what a way to start the day, with one quivering and one throbbing penis  ;D. Like never before it strikes me as a real wonder now, that he did not wreck the truck! You rock, Baby!!!

Dagi
Title: Re: September 23rd, A Little Bit Later in the Afternoon
Post by: Dagi on September 24, 2007, 01:01:18 am
Why thank you, Dagi.   :P  Hey, in my stories Ennis does tend to be a bit rough with Jack, and in my latest Daniel and Tyler story, Tyler, Ennis's grandson, was a bit rough on Daniel-- Tyler stuck something other than his tongue down Daniel's thraot and nearly killed the boy -- but they always do these things with love.   ;D

Gary

I know, sweetheart. And love hurts sometimes... ;D

Dagi

Title: Re: September 23rd, Entering Wyoming
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 24, 2007, 01:25:04 am
Awww, BBM-Cat, we're getting so close.  And what a wonderful addition.  So very well written and descriptive.  I love how you capture Jack's thoughts here.  I can image how nervous he must feel, especially about meeting Alma.  I never thought about how Jack must have been terrified of meeting Ennis' wife, especially since he really wanted to take him away from her...

Thank you Littlewing, and you reminded me that I didn't even THANK you for giving me the impetus to continue your September 23, Evening story! I felt the excitement of your story, and also laughed thinking that Jack has so much to contend with - the driving, the thoughts in his head, and his physical arousal as well! I AM glad that he is going to 'wait' until he sees Ennis though!  ;) Phew. It might take him even longer to get to Riverton. It's been such a long trip for Jack, hasn't it? LOL. I look forward to a September 24th installment from you!
Title: Re: September 23rd, Entering Wyoming
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 24, 2007, 01:28:27 am
Great continuation of Jack's inner turmoil, BBM-Cat.  These things must have been going through his mind.  And it's a good thing that Jack stopped thinking of Ennis tearing his clothes off.  If only a little blood was going to his head he wouldn't want some of it being diverted someplace else.   :-X 

Jack was probably also thinking, I sure hope Annie doesn't get her gun!   :laugh:

Gary 

Thanks Gary! LOL ..At least I hope Jack pulls over to the side of the road if he has anymore thoughts like that! For sure, that gun would be goin' off!  :-X
Title: Re: September 23rd, Entering Wyoming
Post by: Dagi on September 24, 2007, 02:59:33 am
September 23rd, Entering Wyoming by BBM-Cat

Closer to Ennis. Jack was feeling better already. Especially after that last rest stop. Everything was coming into sharper focus. The memories of he and Ennis up on Brokeback came flooding back into his mind. Some things he had not thought about since that summer. Nervousness was beginning to be replaced by sheer excitement and sheer arousal. He could see his friend so clearly now. Jack imagined that he could just about smell Ennis too, experience the warmth of his laughter, and those strong arms wrapped around him. The thoughts of being in his friends’ arms again just about sent Jack over the edge, as well as other more intimate thoughts that made him drive faster. But, somehow, Jack had to stay focused for the remainder of the trip.

Jack merged onto I-25, taking him across the Wyoming state line. 'Much too late to turn back now', he chuckled to himself. He had no idea what would transpire in just a few short hours. However, he was feeling much more hopeful than when he'd first started his journey. He could not begin to wrap his mind around the reality of seeing Ennis after all this time. And still, he wondered, how would they behave seeing each other after four, long years?

When he got to Ennis’ place, would they shake hands? Would they even hug? Rip each others' clothes off? Jack couldn't let himself think too long on that last possibility, he just barely had enough blood in his brain to operate the damn truck. He figured he’d just play it safe, taking his cue from Ennis when he saw him. It put Jack in a quandary though to think he might actually have to hold back and restrain himself from touching or hugging his old friend; such a contrast to the deep intimacy they had once shared. Jack was afraid that if he touched Ennis he might not be able to stop himself. ‘Yeah’, Jack entertained, ‘I’ll just plant one on him right in front of the wife!’

The thought of actually meeting Ennis’ wife also kinda terrified him. What was her name again? It was something with an A…like Alice or Annie. What would she be like? Would she be able to see right through him? To read his mind? Jack continued to juggle these thoughts back and forth in his head as he drove; most thoughts were welcome and pleasant, outnumbering a few that were most definitely, unwanted.


We are entering Riverton! It´s September 24th!!!

Great continuation, BBM-Cat. The tension is mounting!

Dagi
Title: Re: September 23rd, Welcome to Wyoming
Post by: Dagi on September 24, 2007, 03:15:08 am
September 23rd, Welcome to Wyoming – by garycottle


“Thank you, Jesus.”

Jack leaned over the seat and stuck his bum way into the air so he could get one of the wipes in real deep.  I want to be fresh as a daisy back there for my friend, he thought to himself.  He was beginning to enjoy the simulation, and he allowed his mind to drift back to a time when Ennis had free rein over this part of his body.  But it was right at this moment that the deserted country road wasn’t so deserted anymore.  A car came around the bend, and it’s high beams struck the boy right on his upturned, lily-white tail.



 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: one should always have baby wipes at hand, that´s for sure!

God, Gary that was so funny, I´m still laughing. How good that Jack finally found out what he wants to do with Ennis.  ;D And I love the picture of a

lily-white tail struck by high beams! Great continuation, my friend!

Dagi
Title: Re: September 23rd, Welcome to Wyoming
Post by: Dagi on September 24, 2007, 06:06:54 am

Brilliant continuation Gary ... and so funny I was laughing out loud (made the dog jump!)  I was thinking "Don't worry Jack, just brush your teeth and you'll be good to go!" ... but then I realised that it didn't come out of that end ...  eeeuw!

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

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 :laugh:  I love that smiley !!
Title: Re: September 23rd, Welcome to Wyoming
Post by: Toycoon on September 24, 2007, 09:57:15 am
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“Probably one of those crazy hippies we been hearin’ about on the TV doin’ somethin’ perverted.”

Mrs. Reynolds said, “Should we stop somewhere and call the law.”  Her voice quivered with uncertainty.

“I should stop and kick that boy’s behind is what I should do,” replied Mr. Reynolds.

Same ol Gary, full'a laughs! :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

Hey, it's finally arrived! September 24th! Hoohaw!
Title: Re: September 23rd, Welcome to Wyoming
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 24, 2007, 08:31:18 pm
September 23rd, Welcome to Wyoming – by garycottle

Way to go Gary! It was funny and gross all at the same time!  ;D But you did a great job of getting Jack all cleaned up again, ready to go! I'm hoping a shower is in store at the Siesta Motel....anyway, great to read something FUN!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on September 24, 2007, 08:43:23 pm
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HI---I'm working too much. I miss ya'll. I love ya!!!! Have a super week!!! Maybe I'll see you at chat!
Title: Re: September 23rd, Welcome to Wyoming
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 24, 2007, 09:37:37 pm
:laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

So glad you liked it, BBM-Cat.

Hey, it's the 24th, and we've been building up to this day for a couple of weeks now.  So who is going to write about the boys getting it on in the motel? 

BTW, a shower would be a nice way to get things going.

"Ennis, I need to wash up.  I've got the stink of the road all over me, man."   ;)

Five minutes later Jack is naked, and wet.   :P

Gary

YEE-HAW! And, what's better than that? Well, ok, both Jack & Ennis naked and wet! You're right about the build-up, I thought there would be a ton of stories in tribute to the reunion today. Maybe Littlewing is working on one for us. Or Dagi, or Susiebell, or Toycoon, or even YOU!
Title: Re: September 23rd, Evening
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 24, 2007, 11:31:31 pm

God, what a way to start the day, with one quivering and one throbbing penis  ;D. Like never before it strikes me as a real wonder now, that he did not wreck the truck! You rock, Baby!!!

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi!  Today is the day, huhn?
Title: Re: September 23rd, Evening
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 24, 2007, 11:33:21 pm
Ah Littlewing, I'd love, love, love to go to the Winchester Mystery House with you!  I've always been a huge fan of ghost stories and horror films, and I remember hearing about that house when I was a boy.  I've been wanting to see it forever.

Gary  

Okay.  We'll work something out.  I'd love to see the place with you, as well!  :)
Title: Re: September 23rd, Entering Wyoming
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 24, 2007, 11:34:20 pm
Thank you Littlewing, and you reminded me that I didn't even THANK you for giving me the impetus to continue your September 23, Evening story! I felt the excitement of your story, and also laughed thinking that Jack has so much to contend with - the driving, the thoughts in his head, and his physical arousal as well! I AM glad that he is going to 'wait' until he sees Ennis though!  ;) Phew. It might take him even longer to get to Riverton. It's been such a long trip for Jack, hasn't it? LOL. I look forward to a September 24th installment from you!

No, BBM-Cat, thank YOU[/i] for continuing the story.  And what an addition!  Gorgeous writing, my love!
Title: Re: September 23rd, Welcome to Wyoming
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 24, 2007, 11:40:00 pm
September 23rd, Welcome to Wyoming – by garycottle

Ever since he crossed the border Jack had a huge self-satisfied smile all over his face.  In a few short hours he’d finally see Ennis Del Mar.  He’d actually look right at him with his own eyes, rather than merely picture him in his head.  He had built this thing up so much it was hard to believe that his wish was about to come true. 

But then he felt a pang and his smile slide into uncertainty.  Jack tried to ignore the feeling, but then a more fierce pang hit him from deep in his gut.  Then he began to feel a churning, agonizing hurt. 

“Oh shit, I knew that burger was too greasy!” the young man said out loud.

Jack hurriedly pulled the pickup over to the side of the road, jumped out, and ran toward an Aspin tree.  He had just enough time to be thankful that it was now dark, and that the country road was all but deserted.

When he finished his business he plucked leaves from the tree to clean himself.  All the while he pleaded to the Almighty that a rattler wasn’t about to strike him where the sun don’t shine.  But then he remembered that he hoped that Ennis would want to fool around.  That’s what he was really after.  Yeah, that’s what he wanted.  No sense in lying to himself now.  So the leaves just weren't going to cut it.  He had to find a better way. 

He thought he recalled seeing something in the truck that might help, so he stumbled back to his vehicle, not bothering to pull up his pants.  When he got there he rummaged through his duffle until he found his flashlight, and then he started looking around.  He rifled through the glove box, and then he reached his hand way under the passenger side of the seat.  Jack was about to give up, but when he slide his hand over toward the driver’s side his knuckles grazed the item he was looking for.  When he pulled out a box of Bobby’s baby wipes he grinned like a kid in a candy store.

“Thank you, Jesus.”

Jack leaned over the seat and stuck his bum way into the air so he could get one of the wipes in real deep.  I want to be fresh as a daisy back there for my friend, he thought to himself.  He was beginning to enjoy the simulation, and he allowed his mind to drift back to a time when Ennis had free rein over this part of his body.  But it was right at this moment that the deserted country road wasn’t so deserted anymore.  A car came around the bend, and it’s high beams struck the boy right on his upturned, lily-white tail.  It happened so fast that Jack didn’t have time to react.  He just stared into the light like an animal caught in a trap.

The car contained the Reynolds family, and they were on their way back home to Riverton after spending some time at Grandma’s house. 

The little boy in the backseat sat bolt upright and asked with great eagerness, “What’s that man doin’, Mama?”

“Never you mind, son.  Just look away.  That’s what the Lord would want,” she said as confidently as she could.  Then the woman said a little silent prayer.

Mr. Reynolds’ mouth tightened until his lips all but disappeared.  “Probably one of those crazy hippies we been hearin’ about on the TV doin’ somethin’ perverted.”

Mrs. Reynolds said, “Should we stop somewhere and call the law.”  Her voice quivered with uncertainty.

“I should stop and kick that boy’s behind is what I should do,” replied Mr. Reynolds.

 :laugh:  :laugh: Gary, what gives? Seriously, though, I laughed all the way through this.  What an ackward situation Jack found himself in.  And cleaning his rear (inside) with the clean baby wipes.  And the reaction of the family as they caught him red handed!  I almost lost it!  What a playful addition, Gary!  I love it!
Title: Re: September 23rd, Evening
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 24, 2007, 11:41:57 pm
Ah, I wanna come too!  >:( ... might take me a few hours to get there though  :-\

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Come on, SusieBaby!  We'll wait for you!  It is always good to tour a creepy old house with a group!  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 24, 2007, 11:54:39 pm
OT: Does most of this group live in CA ? I live in TX but was born in San Jose
Title: September 24th, Late Afternoon
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 24, 2007, 11:57:53 pm
September 24th, Late Afternoon by Littlewing1957

“He won’t show!”  Ennis moaned as he sat on the window seat, just in front of the massive living room window.  He was downing beer after beer in an effort to control his nerves.  It didn’t work.  Time for another beer just to ease the hysteria that Jack changed his mind.  Ennis walked past Alma into the kitchen for another brew.  Whiskey would have worked wonders, but he made a point to keep the hard stuff out of the apartment.

Alma made some remark about taking Jack to the Knife and Fork, which Ennis promptly vetoed.  There was no way he would share Jack Twist with his wife – no fuckin’ way!  Ennis lit another cig and sat down on his couch.  He tried to keep from shaking, and soon his nervousness gave way to despair.  When did Jack say he would arrive?  Jack didn’t say, really.  He laid his head back up against the couch and half heard Alma coaxing their daughter to finish her supper.  One last bite and Alma Jr. ran past him into her room.  And just then, Ennis heard it!  He heard the sound of a truck approaching the parking lot.

Ennis was up almost before he realized it.  He didn’t even see his wife as he dashed past her and pulled the apartment doors open!  Ennis felt a mixture of relief, arousal, and deep affection as he stood on the landing and beheld his friend.  “He looks like a million bucks!”  Ennis thought as he shouted,

“Jack Fuckin’ Twist…..”
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 24, 2007, 11:59:44 pm
OT: Does most of this group live in CA ? I live in TX but was born in San Jose


BBM-Cat, I live in Oakland (originally from Oklahoma City) while Toycoon is in L.A.  Gary just moved to Merced last month.  You were born in San Jose?  Well then, you know about the Winchester Mystery House, right?
Title: Re: September 23rd, Welcome to Wyoming
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 25, 2007, 12:01:25 am
;D  I'm so glad you liked it, Littlewing.  Hey, you're the one that keeps putting food in his mouth, so I thought something had to come out the other end sometime.   :P

 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

I was just having fun.   :D  Hope nobody minds me injecting a bit of humor.

Gary

Hey, you know me and food.  I'll always keep the boys well fed....nurturing, and all that!  :)  Gary, I absolutely loved that you wrote a humorous piece.  Very entertaining!
Title: September 24th, A Few Minutes Later
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 25, 2007, 12:14:40 am
September 24th, A Few Minutes Later by Littlewing1957

Jack looked up toward the landing and felt his face break into a grin.  Ennis Del Mar!  Just look at the man!  As sexy and tasty as ever!  Jack noticed how Ennis dressed up to greet him.  A nice white shirt, newly pressed, and hair neatly trimmed.  Yes, that Ennis Del Mar looks like a million bucks. 

“Son of a bitch!”  Jack murmured as he took the steps 2 and 3 at a time.  Just a few seconds and the lovers crashed into each other chests first, warmly embracing.  Ennis looked around to see if they had some measure of privacy, and inched Jack under the stairs.  Jack was rather shocked at Ennis’ spontaneous motion, but he allowed himself to be led.  And they kissed.  They kissed and tongued wildly at first, then gentled and rubbed.  Ennis looked upon his man and nuzzled him, whispered “later,” as he walked up the steps to his apartment.  Jack followed warily, aware that it was time to meet the wife.

After the introductions, and after the small talk about the kids, Ennis and Jack took their leave of a dazed and conflicted Alma to find a motel…
Title: Re: September 24th, A Few Minutes Later
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 25, 2007, 12:38:56 am
September 24th, A Few Minutes Later by Littlewing1957

Jack looked up toward the landing and felt his face break into a grin.  Ennis Del Mar!  Just look at the man!  As sexy and tasty as ever!  Jack noticed how Ennis dressed up to greet him.  A nice white shirt, newly pressed, and hair neatly trimmed.  Yes, that Ennis Del Mar looks like a million bucks. 

“Son of a bitch!”  Jack murmured as he took the steps 2 and 3 at a time.  Just a few seconds and the lovers crashed into each other chests first, warmly embracing.  Ennis looked around to see if they had some measure of privacy, and inched Jack under the stairs.  Jack was rather shocked at Ennis’ spontaneous motion, but he allowed himself to be led.  And they kissed.  They kissed and tongued wildly at first, then gentled and rubbed.  Ennis looked upon his man and nuzzled him, whispered “later,” as he walked up the steps to his apartment.  Jack followed warily, aware that it was time to meet the wife.

After the introductions, and after the small talk about the kids, Ennis and Jack took their leave of a dazed and conflicted Alma to find a motel…


WOO-WEE
Littlewing! The build-up has definitely been worth it! Thank you, thank you for this and your previous episode! You finally got them together! Hot, exciting, and lusty! I love your use of the word 'tasty' ! Beautiful and arousing my dear!   :-*

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 25, 2007, 12:41:32 am
Sorry, I feel compelled to root for the underdog a bit, before we launch into the many missing motel scenes....
Title: September 24: Third Party
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 25, 2007, 12:52:59 am
September 24th: Third Party by BBM-Cat

She fixed her hair, put on a dab of lip color, and one of her better dresses to meet Ennis’ friend from Texas; a reddish-orange, one-piece knit, matching the reddish highlights in her hair. It was also a bit clingy, showcasing her feminine breasts. Alma was very excited to think they were going on a social outing, and with a Texas gentleman. She couldn’t remember the last time she and Ennis had gone out together, much less taken a guest out to eat. She planned to suggest the Knife and Fork to Ennis.

Alma thought Ennis was behaving particularly nervous. She’d never seen him down so many beers and chain-smoke in such a short period of time. He sat staring out the window as if compelling his friend to materialize. Alma realized she didn’t know much about Ennis’ friend. She wanted to ask Ennis, but he didn’t look like he wanted to be bothered with a bunch of questions or with small-talk. He was also getting rather drunk. The afternoon dragged on. Jenny was getting hungry. It didn’t look like Ennis’ friend Jack was going to show after all. By late afternoon, her suggestion of going to the Knife and Fork was rejected.

Alma felt rejected too. She finished feeding the last bites of Jenny’s dinner at the table. She was silently brooding about not getting to go out. It seemed things always had to be Ennis’ way. Just in case, Alma decided not to change out of her dress so that she could still look her best if Ennis’ friend arrived. And maybe Ennis would change his mind. Alma got up to clear the dishes from the table. She heard Ennis jump up and bolt out of the apartment door. Alma thought that maybe she too should go outside to greet Ennis’ friend, though it was certainly more proper to bring a guest to the door.

Alma put the last of the dishes in the sink and dried her hands on a kitchen towel. Making her way over to the apartment door, she wondered why Ennis had not yet brought his friend up to meet her. She opened the inner door of the apartment, expecting to see Ennis barging up the steps with his friend, or to hear their boisterous greetings. Instead, it was strangely quiet. She put her hand on the screen door. She stopped suddenly, after pushing it open with a slight creak.

Completely stunned, Alma could see Ennis in the far stairwell with a man in a red shirt. A cowboy hat lay on the ground. They were pressed up tightly against each other, Ennis' shirt untucked, hands touching each other's faces, kissing passionately. She didn’t want to look, but at the same time, she couldn’t tear her eyes away. She wasn’t exactly sure what she saw. She knew she didn't want them to see her. Alma thought that maybe if she crept back quietly into the apartment, the images would go away, though the sudden sickening feeling in the pit of her stomach did not.
Title: Re: September 24th, A Few Minutes Later
Post by: Dagi on September 25, 2007, 01:11:31 am
September 24th, A Few Minutes Later by Littlewing1957

Jack looked up toward the landing and felt his face break into a grin.  Ennis Del Mar!  Just look at the man!  As sexy and tasty as ever!  Jack noticed how Ennis dressed up to greet him.  A nice white shirt, newly pressed, and hair neatly trimmed.  Yes, that Ennis Del Mar looks like a million bucks. 

“Son of a bitch!”  Jack murmured as he took the steps 2 and 3 at a time.  Just a few seconds and the lovers crashed into each other chests first, warmly embracing.  Ennis looked around to see if they had some measure of privacy, and inched Jack under the stairs.  Jack was rather shocked at Ennis’ spontaneous motion, but he allowed himself to be led.  And they kissed.  They kissed and tongued wildly at first, then gentled and rubbed.  Ennis looked upon his man and nuzzled him, whispered “later,” as he walked up the steps to his apartment.  Jack followed warily, aware that it was time to meet the wife.

After the introductions, and after the small talk about the kids, Ennis and Jack took their leave of a dazed and conflicted Alma to find a motel…


Marie, I love the details in this one - that either thought the other looked like a million bucks, that you call them lovers before they even kissed, the nuzzling.... love it!

Dagi
Title: Re: September 24: Third Party
Post by: Dagi on September 25, 2007, 03:09:19 am
September 24th: Third Party by BBM-Cat

Completely stunned, Alma could see Ennis in the far stairwell with a man in a red shirt. A cowboy hat lay on the ground. They were pressed up tightly against each other, Ennis' shirt untucked, hands touching each other's faces, kissing passionately. She didn’t want to look, but at the same time, she couldn’t tear her eyes away. She wasn’t exactly sure what she saw. She knew she didn't want them to see her. Alma thought that maybe if she crept back quietly into the apartment, the images would go away, though the sudden sickening feeling in the pit of her stomach did not.


Great idea to insert Alma´s point of few. I´ve watched the movie so many times, and still I never tried to see things with her eyes (except for the last part, where Ang Lee more or less forces the watcher to do so). Great writing, BBM-Cat!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 25, 2007, 04:39:32 pm
Aaaahh, Susie, I hoped you would make the dream come true and post this here....I loved it over on IMDb, and I enjoyed every single line reading it here!! I especially love the line He brought Ennis’ lips close, kissed them softly and murmured, “I missed you....”   So much sweetness after so much hotness, just gorgeous! And “I’m not finished with you yet, Jack Twist.... I'm just getting warmed up!”   makes me hungry for more!  ;D

Thanks for reposting this!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 25, 2007, 05:48:32 pm
Thank you sweetie!  It just seemed like the right place to slot them in .. I'm never very confident about anything I write, but these two have always been my favourites .. I just love the idea that they were so hungry for each other that they barely managed to get through the door!

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


I picture it just like that!
Title: Re: September 24th, A Few Minutes Later
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 25, 2007, 06:58:50 pm

WOO-WEE
Littlewing! The build-up has definitely been worth it! Thank you, thank you for this and your previous episode! You finally got them together! Hot, exciting, and lusty! I love your use of the word 'tasty' ! Beautiful and arousing my dear!   :-*



Thanks, Babe!
Title: Re: September 24th ... The Siesta Motel
Post by: Toycoon on September 26, 2007, 12:28:16 am
Quote
Jack, catching his breath, turned to face his lover, cradling Ennis’ face in his hands, the first chance he’d had to look at him properly, drinking in the fair weatherworn skin, beautiful sad brown eyes, swollen pink mouth.  He brought Ennis’ lips close, kissed them softly and murmured, “I missed you....”

I remember this saucy story, Susiebell! Excellent and even tastier the second time around. Love, Toycoon
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 26, 2007, 03:04:37 am
Hey Susie dear!


CONGRATS ON YOUR 2000th POST!!!CONGRATS ON YOUR 2000th POST!!!CONGRATS ON YOUR 2000th POST!!!


We loved every single word, just go on chattering!


The Jake slideshow is awesome! Great, great idea!

Kisses from Dagi


Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Sharon on September 26, 2007, 04:07:14 am
Hey Susie,

CONGRATULATIONS

to your 2000 posts!

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Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 26, 2007, 06:38:16 am
Just wanted to let everyone know that I'll be going camping tomorrow, Sept. 26, and I'll be back on Saturday, Sept. 29.  I'm going to Yosemite of course, and I'll be staying at Curry Village.

I'll be thinking of y'all.  And I'll tell you all about my adventure when I get back.

Love,
Gary

P.S.  I hope to find some really hot reunion stories when I get back, filled with very specific details.  I want to read about grunts and moans and body fluids.   ;D  This is their reunion, folks, and they've not done it in years.  So make it nasty.   :laugh:


How good that you go there by bus! ;D


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Hope you are lucky and see a bear!
Love ya,
Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on September 26, 2007, 09:45:32 am
Congratulations, Susiebell, on your two thousandth post. You wild woman!

Love the slide show of Jake. Sheee-it, that feller sure is foxy! How's about giving Heath a little equal time?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 26, 2007, 01:53:50 pm
CONGRATULATIONS ON 2000 POSTS SUSIE!!

Glad we could all celebrate your milestone with you - particularly Jake!   ;D


And, thank you for your recent Siesta Motel installments! HOT HOT HOT! That's exactly how I imagined it too - an initial, lusty session followed by more at a slower and more intimate pace. I agree with Gary, let's continue to fill in the gaps!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 26, 2007, 02:53:27 pm
You guys don´t mind me going a step back again, do you?

On the Way by Dagi

Jack steered and shifted with his left hand, not willing to let go of Ennis's hand, now that he finally got hold of him.

They didn't utter a word, what just had happened was beyond talking, they merely shot quick glances at each other, moaning low each time they locked eyes, impossible to ignore the hot jolts running through their bodies, their rock hard cocks speaking volumes.

Ennis shivered, squeezed Jack's fingers hard, then brought them to his lips and kissed them tenderly.


Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 26, 2007, 06:58:46 pm
You guys don´t mind me going a step back again, do you?

On the Way by Dagi

Jack steered and shifted with his left hand, not willing to let go of Ennis's hand, now that he finally got hold of him.

They didn't utter a word, what just had happened was beyond talking, they merely shot quick glances at each other, moaning low each time they locked eyes, impossible to ignore the hot jolts running through their bodies, their rock hard cocks speaking volumes.

Ennis shivered, squeezed Jack's fingers hard, then brought them to his lips and kissed them tenderly.


No, we don't mind at ALL Dagi! You captured what I wondered about - what transpired in the truck when they were finally alone, before they got to the motel? They were so both overwhelmed, their loving, nonverbal gestures said it all. Beautiful, just beautiful! Thank you.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 26, 2007, 07:27:13 pm
Just wanted to let everyone know that I'll be going camping tomorrow, Sept. 26, and I'll be back on Saturday, Sept. 29.  I'm going to Yosemite of course, and I'll be staying at Curry Village.

I'll be thinking of y'all.  And I'll tell you all about my adventure when I get back.

Love,
Gary

P.S.  I hope to find some really hot reunion stories when I get back, filled with very specific details.  I want to read about grunts and moans and body fluids.   ;D  This is their reunion, folks, and they've not done it in years.  So make it nasty.   :laugh:

Gary, are you going to offer the sweet life to someone on your camping trip!?  :D Anyway, sounds like fun! And, how come you didn't tell us you have a BIRTHDAY coming up?! We will all have to get in line to spank you for that one! 
Title: Re: September 24: Third Party
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 26, 2007, 11:35:47 pm
September 24th: Third Party by BBM-Cat

She fixed her hair, put on a dab of lip color, and one of her better dresses to meet Ennis’ friend from Texas; a reddish-orange, one-piece knit, matching the reddish highlights in her hair. It was also a bit clingy, showcasing her feminine breasts. Alma was very excited to think they were going on a social outing, and with a Texas gentleman. She couldn’t remember the last time she and Ennis had gone out together, much less taken a guest out to eat. She planned to suggest the Knife and Fork to Ennis.

Alma thought Ennis was behaving particularly nervous. She’d never seen him down so many beers and chain-smoke in such a short period of time. He sat staring out the window as if compelling his friend to materialize. Alma realized she didn’t know much about Ennis’ friend. She wanted to ask Ennis, but he didn’t look like he wanted to be bothered with a bunch of questions or with small-talk. He was also getting rather drunk. The afternoon dragged on. Jenny was getting hungry. It didn’t look like Ennis’ friend Jack was going to show after all. By late afternoon, her suggestion of going to the Knife and Fork was rejected.

Alma felt rejected too. She finished feeding the last bites of Jenny’s dinner at the table. She was silently brooding about not getting to go out. It seemed things always had to be Ennis’ way. Just in case, Alma decided not to change out of her dress so that she could still look her best if Ennis’ friend arrived. And maybe Ennis would change his mind. Alma got up to clear the dishes from the table. She heard Ennis jump up and bolt out of the apartment door. Alma thought that maybe she too should go outside to greet Ennis’ friend, though it was certainly more proper to bring a guest to the door.

Alma put the last of the dishes in the sink and dried her hands on a kitchen towel. Making her way over to the apartment door, she wondered why Ennis had not yet brought his friend up to meet her. She opened the inner door of the apartment, expecting to see Ennis barging up the steps with his friend, or to hear their boisterous greetings. Instead, it was strangely quiet. She put her hand on the screen door. She stopped suddenly, after pushing it open with a slight creak.

Completely stunned, Alma could see Ennis in the far stairwell with a man in a red shirt. A cowboy hat lay on the ground. They were pressed up tightly against each other, Ennis' shirt untucked, hands touching each other's faces, kissing passionately. She didn’t want to look, but at the same time, she couldn’t tear her eyes away. She wasn’t exactly sure what she saw. She knew she didn't want them to see her. Alma thought that maybe if she crept back quietly into the apartment, the images would go away, though the sudden sickening feeling in the pit of her stomach did not.


BBM-Cat, I'm delighted you gave us a tale from Alma's POV!  It is only fitting.  And so descriptive and well written!  Sad, too.  Poor Alma.  In one second her world was turned upside down!  Lovely work, BBM-Cat!
Title: Re: September 24th, A Few Minutes Later
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 26, 2007, 11:36:26 pm
Marie, I love the details in this one - that either thought the other looked like a million bucks, that you call them lovers before they even kissed, the nuzzling.... love it!

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi, sweets!
Title: Re: September 24th, Late Afternoon
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 26, 2007, 11:38:08 pm
What a buildup, Littlewing!  And isn't it telling the way Ennis rushes past his wife without seeing her.  When he grabs Jack he looks around to make sure no one can see.  But he really doesn't look behind him.  He knows, or should know that Alma might be watching.  Could he subconsciously want Alma to see?

Gary

Thsnks for your kind words, Gary.  I think Ennis did want Alma to see them.  Or he was just too excited to care!  :-\
Title: Re: September 23rd, Evening
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 26, 2007, 11:39:50 pm
You're very sweet littlewing!   :-* But I think you'd better go without me honey ... I could be a while!

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Okay, we'll go ahead, but you're welcome to join us anytime.  I never tire of the Mystery House!  :o
Title: Re: September 24th, A Few Minutes Later
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 26, 2007, 11:41:47 pm
Ah so beautiful littlewing ... and I can finally breathe again!  I think I've been tensing up so much since the first September story, now it's time to get down and dirty!!  If you don't mind, Ill repost that one I did of the Motel scene ... it seems to fit in nicely here.

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)
 

Thanks for thinking of the Fiesta Motel Series, Susiebaby!  I can't thnk of a more perfect place to post them again!  Brilliant!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 26, 2007, 11:44:27 pm
(http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s31/Susiebell_album/Glitter/hellokitty111.gif)  2,000 POSTS!!!  (http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s31/Susiebell_album/Glitter/th60bce1fe.gif)



Congrats, Susie!  I have a way to go before I'm at the 1,000 posts mark!  Girl, what have you been talking about all this time?   :)  ;)  :-*
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 26, 2007, 11:45:25 pm
(http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s31/Susiebell_album/Glitter/hellokitty111.gif)  2,000 POSTS!!!  (http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s31/Susiebell_album/Glitter/th60bce1fe.gif)



My mum was right, I can talk for England!!

Well I'd better make it a good one then!



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Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Wow, thanks for the sweet pics of Jake, Susie!  Just beautiful!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 26, 2007, 11:46:50 pm
Just wanted to let everyone know that I'll be going camping tomorrow, Sept. 26, and I'll be back on Saturday, Sept. 29.  I'm going to Yosemite of course, and I'll be staying at Curry Village.

I'll be thinking of y'all.  And I'll tell you all about my adventure when I get back.

Love,
Gary

P.S.  I hope to find some really hot reunion stories when I get back, filled with very specific details.  I want to read about grunts and moans and body fluids.   ;D  This is their reunion, folks, and they've not done it in years.  So make it nasty.   :laugh:

Have fun Gary Baby, and we'll see you when you get back!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 26, 2007, 11:49:14 pm
You guys don´t mind me going a step back again, do you?

On the Way by Dagi

Jack steered and shifted with his left hand, not willing to let go of Ennis's hand, now that he finally got hold of him.

They didn't utter a word, what just had happened was beyond talking, they merely shot quick glances at each other, moaning low each time they locked eyes, impossible to ignore the hot jolts running through their bodies, their rock hard cocks speaking volumes.

Ennis shivered, squeezed Jack's fingers hard, then brought them to his lips and kissed them tenderly.




Awww, Dagi, this is hot and sweet at the same time.  I love it!  I especially like,

They didn't utter a word, what just had happened was beyond talking, they merely shot quick glances at each other, moaning low each time they locked eyes, impossible to ignore the hot jolts running through their bodies, their rock hard cocks speaking volumes

Beautiful writing, Love!  So tender and moving!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 26, 2007, 11:50:40 pm
(http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s31/Susiebell_album/Glitter/thHelloKitty2.gif)  ... and here's our lovely Heath!!   (http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s31/Susiebell_album/Glitter/1.gif)


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Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



Wow, thanks for this, Susie!  That Heath is one classically handsome man.  I tell you --- I don't know which one I want! 
Title: September 24th Night
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 27, 2007, 12:11:33 am
September 24th Night by Littlewing1957

Jack held Ennis tightly, possessively, and kissed his hair.  He couldn’t believe that the two of them would get into the act of making love again, but hell, why not?  Jack felt mighty guilty about cheating on Lureen, and knew that Ennis certainly felt the same toward Alma, but what was so wrong about seeking out the one person he loved above all others?  If anything, they were cheating on each other with the wives.  Jack pulled Ennis closer, no longer conflicted that he was finally where he belonged.

Ennis caressed the tan arm that held him.  He brought Jack’s fingers to his mouth, and kissed them one by one.  He tried to make peace with what they just did, but Ennis was having trouble.  He realized for the first time in four years that he shouldn’t have let Jack Twist out of his sight for one minute.  Why shouldn’t he agree to be with the one he loved more than life itself?  If only for a moment?  Ennis was glad that Jack was there, he actually made it, but he couldn’t stay.

“Let’s get out of here and go up to the mountains!”  Jack suggested as he kissed Ennis’ cheek.  He thought back to 15 minutes ago when Ennis felt doubtful about his plans.  Jack was deflated to learn that it wouldn't be easy to pry his lover away from Alma.  But Jack had a plan.

“Call your wife and tell her we’re going up to the wilderness for awhile.” Ennis blew out a cloud of air and shook his head.

“I just can’t leave them on such short notice!”  Ennis objected as he squeezed Jack’s clammy hand.  Jack rubbed against his lover and pulled his head close.  He inched his tongue into Ennis’ mouth, French kissing him until Ennis moaned and thrashed.  Ennis tried to catch his breath as picked up the motel room phone and dialed the number to his apartment.  Jack struggled to contain his excitement as he heard Ennis tell Alma that he would be home directly, and that he planned to go away with his friend for a few days….




Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on September 27, 2007, 12:58:46 am
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They didn't utter a word, what just had happened was beyond talking, they merely shot quick glances at each other, moaning low each time they locked eyes, impossible to ignore the hot jolts running through their bodies, their rock hard cocks speaking volumes.

Hot damn, Dagi! That was so f**ken' sexy and only three sentences, take note!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 27, 2007, 02:39:26 am
How on earth he didn't crash the truck either on his way to Riverton or the Motel, is beyond me!! Gorgeous lusty instalment Dagi, this is just how I imagined their trip to be like.

Jack steered and shifted with his left hand, not willing to let go of Ennis's hand, now that he finally got hold of him ... I just love this ... they can barely contain themselves!   I'm surprised Jack made it all the way to the motel without pulling over and dragging Ennis into the back seat there and then!


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Thank you so much Susie dear, you know how much your words mean to me!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 27, 2007, 02:41:27 am
No, we don't mind at ALL Dagi! You captured what I wondered about - what transpired in the truck when they were finally alone, before they got to the motel? They were so both overwhelmed, their loving, nonverbal gestures said it all. Beautiful, just beautiful! Thank you.

Thank you, BBM-Cat! I would have loved to see anything about their way to the motel in the movie!

DAgi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 27, 2007, 02:46:53 am
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He´s to fuckin die for!!! Thank you so much, Susiebell!!!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 27, 2007, 02:51:05 am
Awww, Dagi, this is hot and sweet at the same time.  I love it!  I especially like,

They didn't utter a word, what just had happened was beyond talking, they merely shot quick glances at each other, moaning low each time they locked eyes, impossible to ignore the hot jolts running through their bodies, their rock hard cocks speaking volumes

Beautiful writing, Love!  So tender and moving!

Thank you, sweetie, you say the nicest things!

Dagi
Title: Re: September 24th Night
Post by: Dagi on September 27, 2007, 03:00:28 am
September 24th Night by Littlewing1957

Jack held Ennis tightly, possessively, and kissed his hair.  He couldn’t believe that the two of them would get into the act of making love again, but hell, why not?  Jack felt mighty guilty about cheating on Lureen, and knew that Ennis certainly felt the same toward Alma, but what was so wrong about seeking out the one person he loved above all others?  If anything, they were cheating on each other with the wives.  Jack pulled Ennis closer, no longer conflicted that he was finally where he belonged.

Ennis caressed the tan arm that held him.  He brought Jack’s fingers to his mouth, and kissed them one by one.  He tried to make peace with what they just did, but Ennis was having trouble.  He realized for the first time in four years that he shouldn’t have let Jack Twist out of his sight for one minute.  Why shouldn’t he agree to be with the one he loved more than life itself?  If only for a moment?  Ennis was glad that Jack was there, he actually made it, but he couldn’t stay.

“Let’s get out of here and go up to the mountains!”  Jack suggested as he kissed Ennis’ cheek.  He thought back to 15 minutes ago when Ennis felt doubtful about his plans.  Jack was deflated to learn that it wouldn't be easy to pry his lover away from Alma.  But Jack had a plan.

“Call your wife and tell her we’re going up to the wilderness for awhile.” Ennis blew out a cloud of air and shook his head.

“I just can’t leave them on such short notice!”  Ennis objected as he squeezed Jack’s clammy hand.  Jack rubbed against his lover and pulled his head close.  He inched his tongue into Ennis’ mouth, French kissing him until Ennis moaned and thrashed.  Ennis tried to catch his breath as picked up the motel room phone and dialed the number to his apartment.  Jack struggled to contain his excitement as he heard Ennis tell Alma that he would be home directly, and that he planned to go away with his friend for a few days….







So beautifully written, Littlewing, I love the details: Jack holding Ennis possessively, Ennis kissing Jack´s fingers one by one, Jack rubbing against his lover...so many sweet and tender moments that show what we all know: it was not about sex, it was love! How could anyone not get that?
Thanky ou for this moving scene!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 27, 2007, 03:02:15 am
Hot damn, Dagi! That was so f**ken' sexy and only three sentences, take note!

Thank you, Toycoon!  ;D I´ve always been a fan of the three sentences rule, you know that! Makes it so tight.... ;)

Dagi
Title: Re: September 24th Night
Post by: Toycoon on September 27, 2007, 09:35:22 am
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Jack rubbed against his lover and pulled his head close.  He inched his tongue into Ennis’ mouth, French kissing him until Ennis moaned and thrashed.

Love this, Littlewing1957. You make Ennis sound like a fish on the end of a line! Maybe that's what they meant when they said, "they was goin' fishin'. "
Title: Re: September 24th Night
Post by: Dagi on September 27, 2007, 12:12:21 pm
Love this, Littlewing1957. You make Ennis sound like a fish on the end of a line! Maybe that's what they meant when they said, "they was goin' fishin'. "

 :laugh:
Title: Re: September 24th Night
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 27, 2007, 11:21:42 pm

So beautifully written, Littlewing, I love the details: Jack holding Ennis possessively, Ennis kissing Jack´s fingers one by one, Jack rubbing against his lover...so many sweet and tender moments that show what we all know: it was not about sex, it was love! How could anyone not get that?
Thanky ou for this moving scene!

Dagi

Thanks for your sweet words, Dagi!  I see nothing but love, and can't image why others can't see the love, the deep affection between these 2!
Title: Re: September 24th Night
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 27, 2007, 11:22:29 pm
Love this, Littlewing1957. You make Ennis sound like a fish on the end of a line! Maybe that's what they meant when they said, "they was goin' fishin'. "

 :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  Thanks, Babe!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 27, 2007, 11:23:59 pm
.... I have NO Idea!! ... just rubbish mostly!  :laugh:  Someone really ought to tell me to "SHUT UP"  :-X

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


ps ... I just checked my stats and I've made over a thousand entries on this thread alone!! :o

Quit talking?  Noooooo don't ever shut up!  I don't think I can live without your "chatter!"
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 27, 2007, 11:25:40 pm
Can I have one of each pleasssssse?

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Can you image the poor boys in between Marie and Susie, being pulled back and forth?  This is just what will happen! [laugh]
Title: Re: September 24th Night
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 27, 2007, 11:26:27 pm
Gorgeous and sexy and a little heartwrenching littlewing .... with just a few elements of the original "Missed You" story thrown in for good measure!  And Jack using his manly wiles on Ennis to get his own way is just so darned sexy!!

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Thanks, Sweets.  I plan to continue the story.
Title: September 24th, Later that Night
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 27, 2007, 11:54:40 pm
September 24th, Later than Night by Littlewing1957


Alma looked crestfallen as Ennis led Jack out of the apartment.  Ennis couldn’t allow himself to hear her misery voice, or look into those big brown eyes.  Too much pain and confusion there.  Ennis hated to hurt his wife, but Jack Twist was in town, and he was waiting.

“You want to get something to eat?”  It was Jack, assuming Ennis was hungry after the episode of loving.  Even their conversation was trying, exhausting!  Ennis deserved a good meal – they both did. 

“Yep!”  Ennis answered as he placed his gear into the bed of Jack’s truck. 

Black Angus was one of Jack’s favorite middle-of-the-road eateries.  Ennis never set foot in the place, and all because of the price.  He couldn’t afford to treat his family to a steak dinner at a nice restaurant.  Jack recommended Black Angus not only because of the food, but the booths were cleverly constructed to ensure privacy.  Each booth was secluded from the others.  It was just what Jack wanted.

Jack ordered the baby back ribs, while Ennis selected prime rib of beef.  Ennis’ meal was the pricier of the two, but Jack instructed his lover to order whatever he wanted.  Ennis smiled at his friend’s generosity and waited eagerly for his prime rib.  When the meals were delivered, Jack rolled up his red sleeves and popped a crisp French fry into his mouth.  Ennis cut a piece of steak and fat and moved it toward Jack’s mouth.  Jack ate the steak with gusto; as it was marvelous.  He was instantly sorry that he didn’t order prime rib for himself.  Ennis watched as Jack cut a rib from the slab, and in one motion, slid the rib into this mouth.  He slowly pulled the rib down through his lips, smacking on the bone and licking at the sauce.  Ennis looked around to see who else was observing this show, but the booths were quite secluded.  Jack’s actions with the rib reminded Ennis of his expert motions between his legs just hours ago.  Ennis wondered if his flesh was as savory as the meaty rib?  If his juices were as sweet?  Ennis was having trouble eating.  He couldn’t concentrate with a sexy Jack Twist sitting beside him, doing naughty things with his food.  Jack must have felt the same way.

“Let’s have the waitress wrap this up for us, friend,”  Jack muttered.  “We can eat it later.  I need you.  Jack didn’t have to ask twice.  Ennis jumped from his seat and went in search of the waitress..

To be continued
Title: Re: September 24th, Later that Night
Post by: Dagi on September 28, 2007, 02:52:45 am
September 24th, Later than Night by Littlewing1957


Alma looked crestfallen as Ennis led Jack out of the apartment.  Ennis couldn’t allow himself to hear her misery voice, or look into those big brown eyes.  Too much pain and confusion there.  Ennis hated to hurt his wife, but Jack Twist was in town, and he was waiting.

“You want to get something to eat?”  It was Jack, assuming Ennis was hungry after the episode of loving.  Even their conversation was trying, exhausting!  Ennis deserved a good meal – they both did. 

“Yep!”  Ennis answered as he placed his gear into the bed of Jack’s truck. 

Black Angus was one of Jack’s favorite middle-of-the-road eateries.  Ennis never set foot in the place, and all because of the price.  He couldn’t afford to treat his family to a steak dinner at a nice restaurant.  Jack recommended Black Angus not only because of the food, but the booths were cleverly constructed to ensure privacy.  Each booth was secluded from the others.  It was just what Jack wanted.

Jack ordered the baby back ribs, while Ennis selected prime rib of beef.  Ennis’ meal was the pricier of the two, but Jack instructed his lover to order whatever he wanted.  Ennis smiled at his friend’s generosity and waited eagerly for his prime rib.  When the meals were delivered, Jack rolled up his red sleeves and popped a crisp French fry into his mouth.  Ennis cut a piece of steak and fat and moved it toward Jack’s mouth.  Jack ate the steak with gusto; as it was marvelous.  He was instantly sorry that he didn’t order prime rib for himself.  Ennis watched as Jack cut a rib from the slab, and in one motion, slid the rib into this mouth.  He slowly pulled the rib down through his lips, smacking on the bone and licking at the sauce.  Ennis looked around to see who else was observing this show, but the booths were quite secluded.  Jack’s actions with the rib reminded Ennis of his expert motions between his legs just hours ago.  Ennis wondered if his flesh was as savory as the meaty rib?  If his juices were as sweet?  Ennis was having trouble eating.  He couldn’t concentrate with a sexy Jack Twist sitting beside him, doing naughty things with his food.  Jack must have felt the same way.

“Let’s have the waitress wrap this up for us, friend,”  Jack muttered.  “We can eat it later.  I need you.  Jack didn’t have to ask twice.  Ennis jumped from his seat and went in search of the waitress..

To be continued


DAMN, Marie, that was so hot, I had trouble reading... ;D   Ennis wondered if his flesh was as savory as the meaty rib?  If his juices were as sweet?  Why´s that I feel like eating...... prime ribs at 8:50 in the morning?  :laugh:

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 28, 2007, 06:24:34 am
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Happy Birthday, babycakes!

Love ya!(http://www.smileygarden.de/smilie/Liebe/2151.gif)


 Dagi (http://www.smileygarden.de/smilie/Liebe/herz1.gif)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 28, 2007, 07:14:07 am
Oh Susie, what a God! This Ryan Phillippes sure is one hot fella!  ;D  And the last pic was worth waiting for it!!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on September 28, 2007, 09:52:24 am
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.... now we know who you want coming down your chimney this Christmas!!!!!

Susiebell, you are a wacky critter!

Happy Birthday, Libra Gary! Everywhere I turn, I'm surrounded by Libras. David is a Libra, too.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Sharon on September 28, 2007, 02:10:39 pm
Hey Gary, I have a little gift for you, because I know it`s your Birthday today!

H a p p y  B i r t h d a y
G a r y !

enjoy

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Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 29, 2007, 04:26:31 am
Yummie!



My birthday is on Dec. 16th, Sharon, just so you know... ;D
Title: Re: September 24th, Later that Night
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 29, 2007, 07:42:58 pm
DAMN, Marie, that was so hot, I had trouble reading... ;D   Ennis wondered if his flesh was as savory as the meaty rib?  If his juices were as sweet?  Why´s that I feel like eating...... prime ribs at 8:50 in the morning?  :laugh:

Dagi

 :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 29, 2007, 07:44:29 pm
... or we could take it in turns!!!  :o Bags I get this one first ......

(http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s31/Susiebell_album/Jake/jake-1.jpg) hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Wow, SuieBaby, what a yummy pic of Jake.  I could just eat him alive.

Yeah, we can take turns.  We must not be too hard on our boys!
Title: Re: September 24th, Later that Night
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 29, 2007, 07:46:44 pm
Aaaaarh there you go with the food again!  Jack slurping on his juicy meat is just so darn sexy, I can hardly stand it!!

Gorgeous as always littlewing ... can't wait for the "to be continued"!


Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Well..I had to do it!  You know I had to include food somewhere.  If you notice right before J & E drove off, Jack asked Ennis if he wanted something to eat.  I wanted to explored what happened when they stopped somewhere for a bite!  ::)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 29, 2007, 07:48:21 pm
Hey, have you guys seen these pics of Jake, Mel posted them on the Jake Jake Jake thread ....

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Holy moly !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ... What a gorgeous hunk of a man !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_3_1v.gif)

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Forgive my language, but as they say in this part of the hood, Jake is fine as a mutherfucker!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 29, 2007, 07:50:00 pm
Hey Gary, I have a little gift for you, because I know it`s your Birthday today!

H a p p y  B i r t h d a y


Wow SharonAmber, you have just given the gift that keeps on giving: to all of us.  I'm thanking you for this!  ;)
Title: September 24th Later Still
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 29, 2007, 08:25:08 pm
September 24th Later Still by Littlewing1957

Jack led Ennis to a site that was not only secluded, but so beautiful as to stop the heart.  He placed his brand new tent down on the ground to be assembled later.  Ennis found a place to sit on a fallen branch right at the bank of a raging stream.  Looking straight up into the heavens, with his hat on the ground by his side, Ennis felt strangely at peace.  Jack preferred to look at Ennis. 

Jack took Ennis’ hand in his and squeezed tightly.  He needed something strong to anchor himself as he asked the million dollar question.

“We can make the cow and calf operation work, Friend,” Jack began.  “Look, I’ve worked at my father-in-law's dealership for years, learned a little bit about how to run a business.  I can take classes at night at the community college to learn what I don’t know.”  Jack squeezed Ennis’ hand tighter when he noticed a slight tremble. 

“What do you say, Cowboy?  Come away with me.  I’ll leave them, Friend.  I’ll leave everything for you.”  Jack’s eyes were downcast and watery.  He was not used to baring his soul in this way, and terrified at being rejected again.  But he had to try.  The sweet life was worth fighting for.

“And what will we do for money?”  It was Ennis, fully concentrating now. 

“My father-in-law will give me a good amount of money to leave town - he as much as said it.  Friend, we can use that money as a down payment on a ranch.  With the cattle we can buy, we can build up a pretty nice business.”  Jack was excited now.

“And the best part is, we can be comfortable.  Being our own boss means we’ll have time to go camping, fishing, practically whenever we want.  It can be just like this!”  Jack pointed to the unspoiled surroundings. 

“We can build a cabin, right here,”  Jack blurted.  Ennis smiled at his lover and placed his hat on his head. 

“Well, I see you have a plan, Rodeo,” Ennis teased.

 He had no real intention of going along with Jack’s scheme, but he was not ready to hurt him, either.  Ennis hated himself for allowing Jack to continue, felt it might be cruel to lead him on, but Ennis was curious to see how far Jack would go.  He would end the foolishness in due time – the right time.

“Let me think on it, Jack.”  Ennis whispered.

" Now, before we put up that tent, show me again how you were eating those ribs."  Jack laughed and rose to fetch the food from Black Angus, but Ennis stopped him.

“No, I mean, show me down here.”  Ennis pointed to his crotch, and winked at his lover.  Jack smiled knowingly and shook his head.  He lowered himself between Ennis’ legs and reached for his zipper…

To be continued… 


 
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 29, 2007, 08:27:55 pm


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Happy Birthday Garybaby!!! 

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Here's a little birthday treat for you with love from all of us  ....

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Love Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

HAPPY BIRTHDAY GARY, MY LOVE! MAY GOD BLESS AND KEEP YOU 
Title: Re: September 24th, Later that Night
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 29, 2007, 09:43:21 pm
September 24th, Later than Night by Littlewing1957


Hot and savory, Littlewing! Makes us all wish we coulda been either Ennis' prime rib or one a Jack's baby back ribs. I like how you remind us of the difference in Jack & Ennis' economic status. That was never an issue or deterrant for our generous Jack. I was glad to see Ennis treated to a rare and nice meal. And of course, to dessert aka, the 'to be continued' festivities...
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on September 30, 2007, 12:28:38 am
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What a great present, Sharon Amber! I'm sure Gary will appreciate it tremendously, I know we did!
Title: Re: September 24th Later Still
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 30, 2007, 01:15:00 am
September 24th Later Still by Littlewing1957

YOWZA! This story was sweet, sentimental and sexy enough to stop MY heart! I like how you filled in some of the missing dialogue - what Jack meant by "it could be like this always" - very clever. And again, the economic differences emphasized - Jack all dreamy, going a mile-a-minute on their future together, and practical Ennis thinking of survival. Excellent and well-done. Can't wait for the 'to be continued' part, to find out if Jack & Ennis made it to dessert...
Title: Re: September 24th Later Still
Post by: Toycoon on September 30, 2007, 01:52:51 am
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“We can make the cow and calf operation work, Friend,” Jack began.  “Look, I’ve worked at my father-in-law's dealership for years, learned a little bit about how to run a business.  I can take classes at night at the community college to learn what I don’t know.”  Jack squeezed Ennis’ hand tighter when he noticed a slight tremble.

Hey Littlewing, you are so good. I love the filled in dialogue. I haven't had a chance to add anything new lately. I'm crazy busy at work and I'm getting ready to go on vacation but I still manage to check out BetterMost every day. Why can't we stop thinking about this movie?
Title: Proof
Post by: Toycoon on September 30, 2007, 01:56:52 am
Proof by Toycoon

Old Rose Whiskey 40% Proof Jack was pretty sure of that; he'd drank half of the bottle on the night stand.

This was like so many daydreams he'd had since that summer on Brokeback Mountain; he was drunk, excited and searching for release from the spell he was under.

Jack propped himself on one elbow and examined the sleeping man lying next to him; he slowly peeled back the dingy bed sheet past the man's heaving chest, his belly, then his groin. Ennis, beautiful Ennis!
Title: Re: Daddy
Post by: Toycoon on September 30, 2007, 11:42:51 am
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"What's a 'Hummersexyal' Daddy?"  She noticed his fists clenching slightly, the dreamy smile suddenly leaving his face.

'Hummersexyal' Daddy ? Susiebell, you are just wacky! Ya know, even as a kid, I always thought there was something strange about the the father on The Brady Bunch. I didn't know what it was but he never seemed to be all there, connecting with the kids and rest of the family. Head off in the clouds, I guess....
Title: Re: Proof
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 30, 2007, 01:15:24 pm
Proof by Toycoon

Old Rose Whiskey 40% Proof Jack was pretty sure of that; he'd drank half of the bottle on the night stand.

This was like so many daydreams he'd had since that summer on Brokeback Mountain; he was drunk, excited and searching for release from the spell he was under.

Jack propped himself on one elbow and examined the sleeping man lying next to him; he slowly peeled back the dingy bed sheet past the man's heaving chest, his belly, then his groin. Ennis, beautiful Ennis!

Love the double entendre of the title Toycoon! Sorrowful and poignant all at the same time.  And, only 3 sentences! OMgosh, it CAN be done!  ;D  Well-done.
Title: Re: Daddy
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 30, 2007, 01:18:06 pm
'Hummersexyal' Daddy ? Susiebell, you are just wacky! Ya know, even as a kid, I always thought there was something strange about the the father on The Brady Bunch. I didn't know what it was but he never seemed to be all there, connecting with the kids and rest of the family. Head off in the clouds, I guess....

Susiebell that was great - such tension! I didn't know what Ennis was going to say or do. It made me wonder if the comment Alma Jr heard was indeed directed at Ennis as the men walked by. You're right Tycoon about Robert Reed's character - also notice they had no further children together after marrying!
Title: Re: September 24th Later Still
Post by: Dagi on September 30, 2007, 01:40:07 pm
September 24th Later Still by Littlewing1957

Jack led Ennis to a site that was not only secluded, but so beautiful as to stop the heart.  He placed his brand new tent down on the ground to be assembled later.  Ennis found a place to sit on a fallen branch right at the bank of a raging stream.  Looking straight up into the heavens, with his hat on the ground by his side, Ennis felt strangely at peace.  Jack preferred to look at Ennis. 

Jack took Ennis’ hand in his and squeezed tightly.  He needed something strong to anchor himself as he asked the million dollar question.

“We can make the cow and calf operation work, Friend,” Jack began.  “Look, I’ve worked at my father-in-law's dealership for years, learned a little bit about how to run a business.  I can take classes at night at the community college to learn what I don’t know.”  Jack squeezed Ennis’ hand tighter when he noticed a slight tremble. 

“What do you say, Cowboy?  Come away with me.  I’ll leave them, Friend.  I’ll leave everything for you.”  Jack’s eyes were downcast and watery.  He was not used to baring his soul in this way, and terrified at being rejected again.  But he had to try.  The sweet life was worth fighting for.

“And what will we do for money?”  It was Ennis, fully concentrating now. 

“My father-in-law will give me a good amount of money to leave town - he as much as said it.  Friend, we can use that money as a down payment on a ranch.  With the cattle we can buy, we can build up a pretty nice business.”  Jack was excited now.

“And the best part is, we can be comfortable.  Being our own boss means we’ll have time to go camping, fishing, practically whenever we want.  It can be just like this!”  Jack pointed to the unspoiled surroundings. 

“We can build a cabin, right here,”  Jack blurted.  Ennis smiled at his lover and placed his hat on his head. 

“Well, I see you have a plan, Rodeo,” Ennis teased.

 He had no real intention of going along with Jack’s scheme, but he was not ready to hurt him, either.  Ennis hated himself for allowing Jack to continue, felt it might be cruel to lead him on, but Ennis was curious to see how far Jack would go.  He would end the foolishness in due time – the right time.

“Let me think on it, Jack.”  Ennis whispered.

" Now, before we put up that tent, show me again how you were eating those ribs."  Jack laughed and rose to fetch the food from Black Angus, but Ennis stopped him.

“No, I mean, show me down here.”  Ennis pointed to his crotch, and winked at his lover.  Jack smiled knowingly and shook his head.  He lowered himself between Ennis’ legs and reached for his zipper…

To be continued… 


 


I so hope that the conituation is going to be a AU story...because if not... :'(

You write beautifully, even the sad scenes are still full of beauty when you write them. I loved Jack baring his sould, saying he´d leave everything for

Ennis...God, how you turture us, Marie!

Dagi
Title: Re: September 24th, Later that Night
Post by: Dagi on September 30, 2007, 01:43:19 pm
Hot and savory, Littlewing! Makes us all wish we coulda been either Ennis' prime rib or one a Jack's baby back ribs. I like how you remind us of the difference in Jack & Ennis' economic status. That was never an issue or deterrant for our generous Jack. I was glad to see Ennis treated to a rare and nice meal. And of course, to dessert aka, the 'to be continued' festivities...


Difficult choice....but I think I´d prefer to be a baby back rib.  ;D
Title: Re: Proof
Post by: Dagi on September 30, 2007, 01:46:26 pm

 Ennis, beautiful Ennis!

Beautiful, Toycoon, beautiful!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 30, 2007, 06:47:24 pm
LITTLEWING!!.....  I'M SHOCKED .... SHOCKED!!  I NEVER thought I'd hear you using such bad language!!  Can't say as I blame you though, he is fucking gorgeous!!!  ;D

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

ps.  Please don't tell my mum I just used the "F" word!!  :-X

 :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh: He is indeed gorgeous!  We all have to use the "F" word from time to time!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 30, 2007, 06:47:57 pm
Speak for yourself!!  ;) ;D :laugh:

Uh ohhh..... ::)
Title: Re: September 24th Later Still
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 30, 2007, 06:49:29 pm

Oh Littlewing, after all that silliness, you've gone and made me cry again!  Why couldn't Ennis just throw caution to the wind and go for it! ... it breaks my heart!  Beautiful story honey  :'(

Susie   (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



I know what you mean, SusieBaby!  If only Ennis realized what a truly rare gift that Jack offered.  I could only be so lucky!
Title: Re: September 24th, Later that Night
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 30, 2007, 06:52:37 pm
Hot and savory, Littlewing! Makes us all wish we coulda been either Ennis' prime rib or one a Jack's baby back ribs. I like how you remind us of the difference in Jack & Ennis' economic status. That was never an issue or deterrant for our generous Jack. I was glad to see Ennis treated to a rare and nice meal. And of course, to dessert aka, the 'to be continued' festivities...

BBM-Cat, your kind words have made my day!  You know, I love writing about Jack (Most of it AU, of course) being generous toa  fault with Ennis.  I truly believe that Jack would have taken care of Ennis, would have showered him with gifts.  But Jack knew better to even offer financial assistance to the ever proud Ennis Del Mar.  Ah, so sad and so very complicated!
Title: Re: September 24th Later Still
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 30, 2007, 06:54:41 pm
YOWZA! This story was sweet, sentimental and sexy enough to stop MY heart! I like how you filled in some of the missing dialogue - what Jack meant by "it could be like this always" - very clever. And again, the economic differences emphasized - Jack all dreamy, going a mile-a-minute on their future together, and practical Ennis thinking of survival. Excellent and well-done. Can't wait for the 'to be continued' part, to find out if Jack & Ennis made it to dessert...

Wow, BBM-Cat!  You are just a darling!  I'll start to work on the next installment right away.  I have a feeling it'll be NC-17!  :o
Title: Re: Daddy
Post by: Dagi on September 30, 2007, 06:55:31 pm
Daddy by Susiebell

"Daddy ..... listen!"  it was hard for little Alma Junior to get her daddy's attention, his head always seemed to be up in the clouds somewhere, dreaming of somethin'; must've been somethin' nice, 'cause it always made him smile.

"Daddy ..... DADDY!"  This time her words were loud enough to bring him out of his trance.

"Hunh?  What is it lil' Darlin'?"

"What's a 'Hummersexyal' Daddy?"  She noticed his fists clenching slightly, the dreamy smile suddenly leaving his face.

"Where'd ya hear that word Junior?"

"Just out in front Daddy, I was sittin' on the swing, two fellas walked by and said it, what does it mean daddy?"

"Nothin' ta worry yer pretty lil' head about."

Alma frowned, now where'd his smile go to?  Alma hated it when daddy looked sad.




Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Susie, I almost overlooked this little gem! Poor Ennis, as if he didn´t feel haunted enough by his inner voices...and poor Alma Jr., too...

Dagi
Title: Re: September 24th Later Still
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 30, 2007, 06:57:38 pm
Hey Littlewing, you are so good. I love the filled in dialogue. I haven't had a chance to add anything new lately. I'm crazy busy at work and I'm getting ready to go on vacation but I still manage to check out BetterMost every day. Why can't we stop thinking about this movie?

Thanks, Babe!  You're going on vacation?  Awww, it is so good to live vicariously through you.  If you don't mind, where are you going? 

I know how busy you must be at work.  Same here.  I'm just glad you're still around, and that you're still thinking about our boys.  I can't seem to get them out of my mind, and writing about them is very soothing for me.  Uh oh, I see you've posted a story...
Title: Re: September 24th Later Still
Post by: Dagi on September 30, 2007, 06:58:37 pm
Wow, BBM-Cat!  You are just a darling!  I'll start to work on the next installment right away.  I have a feeling it'll be NC-17!  :o


Oh my poor heart....but maybe Gary might dare post then also this little birthday present he got... ;D


Dagi
Title: Re: Proof
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 30, 2007, 06:58:59 pm
Proof by Toycoon

Old Rose Whiskey 40% Proof Jack was pretty sure of that; he'd drank half of the bottle on the night stand.

This was like so many daydreams he'd had since that summer on Brokeback Mountain; he was drunk, excited and searching for release from the spell he was under.

Jack propped himself on one elbow and examined the sleeping man lying next to him; he slowly peeled back the dingy bed sheet past the man's heaving chest, his belly, then his groin. Ennis, beautiful Ennis!

Beautiful, Toycoon, honey!  Deceptively simple, but to the point!
Title: Re: Daddy
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 30, 2007, 07:02:07 pm
Daddy by Susiebell

"Daddy ..... listen!"  it was hard for little Alma Junior to get her daddy's attention, his head always seemed to be up in the clouds somewhere, dreaming of somethin'; must've been somethin' nice, 'cause it always made him smile.

"Daddy ..... DADDY!"  This time her words were loud enough to bring him out of his trance.

"Hunh?  What is it lil' Darlin'?"

"What's a 'Hummersexyal' Daddy?"  She noticed his fists clenching slightly, the dreamy smile suddenly leaving his face.

"Where'd ya hear that word Junior?"

"Just out in front Daddy, I was sittin' on the swing, two fellas walked by and said it, what does it mean daddy?"

"Nothin' ta worry yer pretty lil' head about."

Alma frowned, now where'd his smile go to?  Alma hated it when daddy looked sad.




Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

SusieBabe, this is a very powerful story!  I love the thought of Alma Jr. asking her dad questions about love and life.  Well, about words she doesn't know the meanings of, anyway  :laugh:  And hummersexyal?  Very clever, my love!
Title: Re: September 24th Later Still
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 30, 2007, 07:05:04 pm
I so hope that the conituation is going to be a AU story...because if not... :'(

You write beautifully, even the sad scenes are still full of beauty when you write them. I loved Jack baring his sould, saying he´d leave everything for

Ennis...God, how you turture us, Marie!

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi.  I'm really getting into the September thing, even though October is just a day away.  I don't know what direction to take with the next installment.  I may even post an unrelated story while I figure things out.  Thanks for your kind words!
Title: Re: September 24th, Later that Night
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 30, 2007, 07:05:35 pm

Difficult choice....but I think I´d prefer to be a baby back rib.  ;D

Same here, Dagi!  :-*
Title: Re: Birthday in Yosemite
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 30, 2007, 07:16:31 pm
Hi everybody!  I got back yesterday afternoon, and the first thing I did was march off to Wal-Mart to get my pictures developed.  (I’m still using my grandfather’s old Olympus 35mm auto focus and flash.   :laugh:  Maybe somebody will one day take pity on me and give me a digital camera, and show me how to use it.)  But when I got back I came straight to the site and read my PM’s and scrolled through the pages that I’ve missed.  Thank you guys so much for the well wishes and the Happy Birthdays.  You’re so sweet.  I’ll respond to the messages individually, and I’ll be reading the new stories and commenting on them starting later today.


Gary, welcome back, my friend!  :-*  I am so glad to hear you had a nice trip, and I enjoyed reading all about your adventures.  Yes, Yosemite is amazing, and I've got to make plans to go.  As I said before, I've only visited once when I was a teen.  When I do come up, we can go tegether.  I would like that very much.  I've missed you here, Love.  I'm so glad you're back!
Title: Re: September 24th Later Still
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 30, 2007, 07:17:22 pm
Oh my poor heart....but maybe Gary might dare post then also this little birthday present he got... ;D


Dagi

 :laugh: Yep!
Title: Re: Daddy
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 30, 2007, 07:28:49 pm
Thank you littlewing sweetheart!  :-*

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

You're very welcome, my love!  :-*
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 30, 2007, 07:31:24 pm
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Put a Smoky The Bear hat on me and call me Ranger Gary.  I’m always ready to help confused gay boys who dare to wander into the wilderness.


 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

I enjoyed reading every line....made my mouth water!  ;D


Dagi
Title: Re: September 24th, Later that Night
Post by: Dagi on September 30, 2007, 07:33:17 pm
Same here!!  :-*

We'd better form an orderly queue (we Brits are queueing experts!)

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Means, you girls form an orderly queue behind me!  :D
Title: Re: Supper Time
Post by: Dagi on September 30, 2007, 07:45:10 pm
Supper time -- by Susie and Dagi



*blush*  ;D

Maybe you should put a little warning on top of it!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 30, 2007, 07:49:21 pm
Thanks so much for the birthday story!  I loved, loved, loved it.  So hot, sexy and nasty.  MMM  I can just picture Ennis taking Jack there on the table like some kind of rutting animal.  But what's with the flip flops?   :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

Gary

You are very welcome, Gary dear! We had so much fun writing it! And the flipflops? Don´t know where we got that from.... ;D What we found extremely sexy was the fact that Jack needed so bad to get stuffed....oops, sorry, to be taken, that he didn´t have time to take them off!   :laugh:

Kisses,
Dagi
Title: September 24th Evening at the Del Mar Residence
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 30, 2007, 07:56:48 pm
September 24th Evening at the Del Mar Residence by Littlewing1957

Alma watched her husband and that man drive off as if she didn’t exist!  Alma sat her purse down on the table and took off her sweater.  So much for a nice and relaxing social evening out with Ennis and his friend.  It just wasn’t fair!  But Alma had children to care for and a home to run.  Or did she?

The tears started to fall along about 11:00p.m. when Alma realized that Ennis wouldn’t come home after all.  She had hoped against hope that he would feel funny about leaving his family to go up into the hills with his buddy, doing God only knows what.  Alma looked down at her cotton nightdress and pondered her life – such as it was.  She was content, for the most part, but always felt that something was missing.  She was aware of the faraway look in her husband’s eyes, and learned to cope with his aloof nature.   His refusal to open up to her was often very disconcerting.  But Alma had to accept those things.  She knew what kind of man Ennis was before she married him.  And so what if her marriage wasn’t perfect?  Precious few were.  In fact, she could have done much worse.  Her friend Tammy was beaten by her low-life husband for breakfast, lunch and dinner.  Twyla rarely ever saw her cheatin’ man, and Debbie’s deadbeat spouse couldn’t keep a job and was a poor excuse for a husband and father.  Yes, Alma knew her marriage wasn’t the greatest, but it could be far worse.  She could overlook Ennis’ quirks to keep her family together.

At least she hoped she could.  The tears fell in earnest as Alma thought back to the complete tenderness and raw, animal passion she witnessed under the landing just that very afternoon.  She saw a thing that she couldn’t define, and it terrified her.  Alma looked in on her girls one last time before turning in.  She climbed into the marital bed, chilled by the soft roar of the wind right outside her bedroom window.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 30, 2007, 08:00:43 pm
I was a good girl before I met you lot!!  ;D You are so welcome sweetie!  We had so much fun writing it ..... maybe we should write a really nasty one next time!!!  :o

Love Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Nonono, I won't do no fisting, Susie, I told you, no matter how long you beg, you'll have to write that story on your own!   ;D

Dagi


Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 30, 2007, 08:05:03 pm
You are very welcome, Gary dear! We had so much fun writing it! And the flipflops? Don´t know where we got that from.... ;D What we found extremely sexy was the fact that Jack needed so bad to get stuffed....oops, sorry, to be taken, that he didn´t have time to take them off!   :laugh:

Kisses,
Dagi

Awesome story, you guys!  Extremely well written!  I'm sooo impressed, and so aroused that I may have to take a little walk to cool down.  That is, when I get up off the floor.  Lovely, lovely work.  Brilliant!

And what a great birthday present for our dear Gary.  You're a lucky man, Gary!  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 30, 2007, 08:05:45 pm
(http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s31/Susiebell_album/Animated/funny_2.gif)  UH UH ... NO WAY!  :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_3_1v.gif)




 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 30, 2007, 08:06:16 pm
(http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s31/Susiebell_album/Animated/funny_2.gif)  UH UH ... NO WAY!  :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_3_1v.gif)



Dang, Susie, that clip scared the "You know What!" out of me.  I was literally backing away from the monitor!  :laugh:
Title: Re: September 24th, Later that Night
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 30, 2007, 08:06:49 pm
We can take her littlewing!!   ;D

Absolutely right!  :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 30, 2007, 08:09:01 pm
Awesome story, you guys!  Extremely well written!  I'm sooo impressed, and so aroused that I may have to take a little walk to cool down.  That is, when I get up off the floor.  Lovely, lovely work.  Brilliant!

And what a great birthday present for our dear Gary.  You're a lucky man, Gary!  :)

Thanks, Marie honey.....we knew it was quite over the top, but we had to compete with all those hot porn-stories nasty Gary tells us all the time... :laugh:

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 30, 2007, 08:09:13 pm

Nonono, I won't do no fisting, Susie, I told you, no matter how long you beg, you'll have to write that story on your one!   ;D

Dagi




 :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:
Title: Re: September 24th Evening at the Del Mar Residence
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 30, 2007, 08:10:07 pm
Oh littlewing, thank you for that ... for showing a warm tender caring vulnerable side to Alma.  I get very defensive of poor Alma, she was as much a victim in this as anyone else.  Beautiful story!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Thanks, Susie.  I'll have to examine Lureen's side of things before I'm through.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 30, 2007, 08:11:30 pm
Thanks, Marie honey.....we knew it was quite over the top, but we had to compete with all those hot porn-stories nasty Gary tells us all the time... :laugh:

Dagi

Well, you guys went all out on this one!  Exceptional!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 30, 2007, 08:12:34 pm
Gosh, thank you littlewing ... I had to pick myself up off the floor a few times there too ....Dagi is SO bad!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Dagi?  Oh come on, SusieBaby!  You've got quite a bit of fire raging inside you!  :laugh:  :laugh:  ::)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 30, 2007, 08:12:57 pm
Marie, I´ll read your story tomorrow when I´m less tired. It´s 2 in the morning here and I HAVE to get some sleep now.

Kisses to you all!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 30, 2007, 08:13:48 pm
:laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

So you can say "MutherF****" but not "CRAP"??  ::)

 :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  Actually, I was thinking of a little word that rhymed with HIT!  :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 30, 2007, 08:15:40 pm
Marie, I´ll read your story tomorrow when I´m less tired. It´s 2 in the morning here and I HAVE to get some sleep now.

Kisses to you all!

Dagi

Okay, Dagi, Sweets.  No rush.  I'm out of here myself for a bit.  I'll be back in a few hours, depending on what Maria is up to.  I've been nursing her through a cold all day now, and had a chance to come on-line now that she's taking a nap. 

Have a good rest, and I'll see you tomorrow!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 30, 2007, 08:16:13 pm
Dagi?  Oh come on, SusieBaby!  You've got quite a bit of fire raging inside you!  :laugh:  :laugh:  ::)

She does! I always had to say nono Susie dear, that's tooo much, we can't abuse them as porn stars! I had to keep her on a f*ckin short leash!

 ;D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 30, 2007, 08:16:35 pm
:-* Sleep tight honey xxx

I'll see you later, SusieBaby.  I gotta go now but may be back in a few hours. 
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 30, 2007, 08:17:40 pm
night night, girls!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on September 30, 2007, 08:21:14 pm
okay! here it is!  ;D

But now: good night!  :-*

D.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: BBM-Cat on September 30, 2007, 08:42:54 pm
WAY TO GO DAGI!
                   (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb147/BBM-Cat/congratulations_pink_rainbow_glitte.gif)
1000 POSTS!     HOORAY!


                             
Title: Re: Daddy
Post by: Toycoon on September 30, 2007, 08:45:26 pm
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I never really watched the Brady Bunch, I was more of a Partridge Family girl ... David Cassidy was so pretty!!

 :laugh: I liked the Patridge Family, too. David Cassidy was super cute and he had that awesome '70 hair!
The irony of the Brady Bunch was that the actor that played the father of six kids, Mike Brady was actually a closet homosexual. He was bisexual to some extent; he fathered a child as well.
Title: Re: Supper Time
Post by: Toycoon on September 30, 2007, 09:02:06 pm
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Jack prised himself away momentarily, gasping for air and choking out the words "... steaks gonna burn .... " before slamming his lips back into Ennis'.

OMG! I'm gonna pass out! Gary will be so delighted.

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"I wanna see your face...." he uttered, turning Jack around and shoving him roughly back down onto the table.  Jack could feel the juices and pulp of the tomatoes squelching under his flesh, the cold of the kitchen table felt good against his skin, soothing the hot handprint on his backside.

You dames are out of control! Wasting all that perfectly, good food!

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The exquisite pleasure was too much for Jack, his mind was spinning, a low moan came from somewhere deep in his chest as he sucked hard on Ennis' thumb.

Hey, how come I never got anything as wild as that story for my birthday? I've been good!
Title: Re: September 24th Evening at the Del Mar Residence
Post by: Toycoon on September 30, 2007, 09:09:26 pm
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 She climbed into the marital bed, chilled by the soft roar of the wind right outside her bedroom window.

Poor Alma, she really is a tragic figure in all of this. I don't understand how Tomtrueman (IMDb) was always hating on Alma so much; I don't think it was her fault, at all. Ennis promised to love, cherish and be faithful to her. He should have left her alone before marrying her in the first place.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on September 30, 2007, 09:10:52 pm
Fisting! Ewwwww!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on October 01, 2007, 01:38:33 am
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1,000 POSTS!!!!

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I didn´t notice!!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on October 01, 2007, 03:23:44 am
WAY TO GO DAGI!
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1000 POSTS!     HOORAY!


                             

Thank you very much, BBM-Cat! I blame Susie: she didn´t stop talking to me yesterday, and just before I went to bed, after having said good night twice, I undeliberatly made my thousandth post.... :laugh:

Dagi
Title: Re: Supper Time
Post by: Dagi on October 01, 2007, 03:28:34 am
OMG! I'm gonna pass out! Gary will be so delighted.

You dames are out of control! Wasting all that perfectly, good food!

Hey, how come I never got anything as wild as that story for my birthday? I've been good!


Thank you, Toycoon, I´m glad you liked it.  ;D But the naughty one is Susie, and the only reason why she loves writing with me is because she can blame me then for things like the feltching part....but honestly I didn´t write that! Something like that would never come to my mind, nu-uh!

Dagi  ;D

When is your birthday? Why didn´t you tell us?
Title: Re: September 24th Evening at the Del Mar Residence
Post by: Dagi on October 01, 2007, 03:38:52 am
September 24th Evening at the Del Mar Residence by Littlewing1957

  Yes, Alma knew her marriage wasn’t the greatest, but it could be far worse.  She could overlook Ennis’ quirks to keep her family together.




What an utterly believable insight into Alma´s thoughts. Awesome, Marie, you keep amazing me with your writing!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on October 01, 2007, 06:01:49 am
I have to go now - my eyes start hurting with this red/orange/peach/hummer/whatever color. I want the blue color back!!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on October 01, 2007, 07:56:38 am
:P  It's yukky .....  8) .... ah... that's better!


 8)  aaahhh, good idea.  But I think you´d more likely look like this:  O0, huh?  :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on October 01, 2007, 11:26:12 am
Hehehe!  Didn't you wonder why I was pestering you to make one more post?  ;D  Next stop .. 2,000!!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

No! I thought you were joking about me saying good night twice and still not leaving! I turned the computer off right after my 1000th post! :laugh:

This starts being our private chat room here, Susiebell!  ;D

Dagi 8)
Title: Re: Supper Time
Post by: Toycoon on October 01, 2007, 07:11:04 pm
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When is your birthday? Why didn't you tell us?

My birthday was in way back on May 26th. Memorial Day weekend.

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 02, 2007, 12:22:40 am
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Wow, Congrats, Dagi!  Just a few more posts and I'm there, myself!
Title: Re: September 24th Evening at the Del Mar Residence
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 02, 2007, 12:24:25 am
Poor Alma, she really is a tragic figure in all of this. I don't understand how Tomtrueman (IMDb) was always hating on Alma so much; I don't think it was her fault, at all. Ennis promised to love, cherish and be faithful to her. He should have left her alone before marrying her in the first place.

I agree with you about Alma, Toycoon!  None of it was her fault!
Title: Re: September 24th Evening at the Del Mar Residence
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 02, 2007, 12:25:38 am
What an utterly believable insight into Alma´s thoughts. Awesome, Marie, you keep amazing me with your writing!

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi! 
Title: Re: Supper Time
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 02, 2007, 12:28:04 am
My birthday was in way back on May 26th. Memorial Day weekend.



You never told anyone!  I didn't even see it on the first page...you know..the section where they mention upcoming birthdays.
Title: Re: Supper Time
Post by: Dagi on October 02, 2007, 07:36:23 am
Well that should give us plenty of time to cook up a really nasty one just for you toycoon!

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Yeah, let´s get started, Susiebell!

 8)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on October 02, 2007, 07:38:01 am
Wow, Congrats, Dagi!  Just a few more posts and I'm there, myself!


Make it a good one, Marie! And thanks for your congrats!

 8) (I´m still not used to that color)
Title: Re: Supper Time
Post by: Dagi on October 02, 2007, 07:40:12 am
Most of us didn't move over to Bettermost until June littlewing .. so we wouldn't have seen it anyway!  Gosh is that all?  Seems like we've been here forever! 

I like it here   :)

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


June, yeah, can´t believe it! I love it here, too!

 8)  (except for the color  ;D)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on October 02, 2007, 07:48:25 am
;D ;D ;D ;D ;D CONGRATULATIONS, DAGI!!!!   1,000 POSTS!! ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D  



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(My eyes are hurting again this morning, Dagi, but last night they were okay. Odd.)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on October 02, 2007, 02:00:30 pm
;D ;D ;D ;D ;D CONGRATULATIONS, DAGI!!!!   1,000 POSTS!! ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D  



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(My eyes are hurting again this morning, Dagi, but last night they were okay. Odd.)


Thank you, Shasta!

Dagi 8)
Title: Re: Supper Time
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 02, 2007, 11:16:19 pm
Most of us didn't move over to Bettermost until June littlewing .. so we wouldn't have seen it anyway!  Gosh is that all?  Seems like we've been here forever! 

I like it here   :)

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

We've been here just since June?  I can't believe it!  :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 02, 2007, 11:17:41 pm

Make it a good one, Marie! And thanks for your congrats!

 8) (I´m still not used to that color)


Dagi, looks like I'm there.  And my 1000th post is a reply to you!  I can't think of a better way to achieve my 1000+ club status!  :-*
Title: September 27th Early Morning
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 02, 2007, 11:28:35 pm
September 27th Early Morning by Littlewing1957

The drive back to Childress was a long one, of course.  Jack wasn’t looking forward to it, and hoped that he could return to Texas just one last time to settle things with Lureen, say goodbye (for now) to his son, and when things were settled down there, return to Ennis in about a week or two to begin that sweet life.  But as Ennis said, “Things ain’t gonna be that way.” 

But Jack wasn’t discouraged.  He had time to work on Ennis.  One way or another he was certain that he could turn him.  The process may take years, but Jack was feeling the change, was committed to making Ennis his own.

Jack packed his gear evenly, swiftly.  He left Ennis in the tent to work things out on his own, get his stuff together.  His things packed into neat parcels in the seat of his shiny new truck, Ennis sat on the welcoming Earth and took a breather.  He wanted to climb into that tent to fetch his lover, beg him, plead with him to leave his life behind, but Jack couldn’t do it.  All in good time.  All in good time….
Title: September 27th Later that Morning
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 02, 2007, 11:58:40 pm
September 27th Later that Morning by Littlewing1957

He couldn’t help but look!  The blond haired young man took his place several yards away from Ennis and Jack’s camp; sitting quietly and watching.  The two men had no idea that they were being watched, observed ever so closely.  Every word they spoke was being processed and stored away for future reference by the young man.

The handsome fellow sat very still on a large boulder, his violin case at his side.  He watched with a smile as Ennis finally excited the tent and walked over to his man.  The sight of Ennis and Jack embracing caused his heart to race and his chest to tighten.

But when he heard Ennis’ voice raised just short of a shout, the blond haired man began to fret.  It must have been Ennis telling Jack what he could do with his idea of starting a cow and calf operation.  “That Ennis is such a fool!”  The young man thought with a shake of his blond mane.  “I sure have my work cut out for me…”
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on October 03, 2007, 12:10:54 am
Hey there, Littlewing1957-
How's it going? :)
Title: Re: September 27th Later that Morning
Post by: Dagi on October 03, 2007, 01:29:50 pm
September 27th Later that Morning by Littlewing1957

He couldn’t help but look!  The blond haired young man took his place several yards away from Ennis and Jack’s camp; sitting quietly and watching.  The two men had no idea that they were being watched, observed ever so closely.  Every word they spoke was being processed and stored away for future reference by the young man.

The handsome fellow sat very still on a large boulder, his violin case at his side.  He watched with a smile as Ennis finally excited the tent and walked over to his man.  The sight of Ennis and Jack embracing caused his heart to race and his chest to tighten.

But when he heard Ennis’ voice raised just short of a shout, the blond haired man began to fret.  It must have been Ennis telling Jack what he could do with his idea of starting a cow and calf operation.  “That Ennis is such a fool!”  The young man thought with a shake of his blond mane.  “I sure have my work cut out for me…”


The mystery man again....where are you going this time, Marie? Can´t wait for the continuation...

Dagi
Title: Re: Proof
Post by: Toycoon on October 03, 2007, 04:25:33 pm
MMM  Toycoon, it's like Christmas.  If Ennis was sleeping beside me he'd end up freezing to death, cause I'd always be pulling those covers off to have a look.   :laugh:

Gary

Thanks, Gary baby. You so nasty.

Yeehaw! The countdown 'til I go on vacation is only two days now. I'm gonna miss you guys! What will I do without you guys for three weeks?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on October 03, 2007, 04:48:46 pm
:laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

This is so crazy.  Nothing like a hairy, strange, male belly dancer/stripper wishing you a happy birthday!

Gary

P.S.  So where's my half off coupon?   :laugh:

Glad you liked it, baby. ;D  I´ll bring the other half personally!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on October 03, 2007, 04:55:05 pm

 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

Wonder where you got that idea.   :-X

Hey, when I was taking that tour of the giant sequoia grove, I thought maybe it should be renamed The Ralph Woods.    ;D

Gary

Ah, I see, those trees obviously not only provide length, but also girth .  ;D
Title: Re: Proof
Post by: Dagi on October 03, 2007, 04:57:30 pm
Thanks, Gary baby. You so nasty.

Yeehaw! The countdown 'til I go on vacation is only two days now. I'm gonna miss you guys! What will I do without you guys for three weeks?

What we will do? Miss our Stud of the Board, of course!

Dagi 8)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on October 03, 2007, 04:59:34 pm
Hey, if you wrote it, I'd read it.   :D

Gary, you dirty boy.  ;D

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on October 03, 2007, 05:01:03 pm
I'll never catch up to Dagi and Susie.  >:(  They have mighty quick fingers.

Gary

Yours should have more training.  ;D :-X
Title: One Hand In
Post by: moremojo on October 03, 2007, 05:03:06 pm
One Hand In by moremojo

Jack clenched his eyes shut and held his breath as one greasy cowboy finger slid gently but firmly up his rear passage, his sphincter squeezing against the rare but always welcome pressure; Ennis was a pro, Jack thought to himself, as a second finger, and then a third, joined in the tight digital bouquet forming in his insides.

Jack eased out breath slowly as he felt the knotted fist, the instrument that had given him so much love and pain together, press against his dripping portal, easing its way up, up into his system--Easy, buddy, Jack flashed in his mind as he felt the warm, pulsing entity come to rest deep inside his fraught, quivering intestines.

Unwilling but hotly sincere tears welled up in Jack's eyes as he softly affirmed, "Ennis...Ennis, I love you", feeling so vulnerable yet strangely at peace with his lover so intimately connected to him; only when he blinked away the tears did he recognize Pedro's face, slightly puzzled but determined to please his paying customer, only barely hearing, "Señor, you okay?", whereupon Jack, still slightly dazed, began to relax in preparation for the now unwelcome hand to make its exit.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Sharon on October 03, 2007, 05:05:17 pm
Hey Dagi,

Congatulations to your 1000  Posts - I reached them too!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on October 03, 2007, 05:05:59 pm
Dagi, looks like I'm there.  And my 1000th post is a reply to you!  I can't think of a better way to achieve my 1000+ club status!  :-*


Congratulations, Marie!! And what a lovely thing to say, you're so sweet. :D

Dagi  :-* :-* :-*
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on October 03, 2007, 05:09:21 pm
Everybody is going up into the 1000's except me.  You people are so windy!   :P

Gary

You keep that up you´ll be there in a half hour!  ;D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on October 03, 2007, 05:10:46 pm
Hey Dagi,

Congatulations to your 1000  Posts - I reached them too!

Now I have one more than you! :P Congratulations to your 1037th post, sweetie!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Sharon on October 03, 2007, 05:18:26 pm
No, the same, Dagi!
Title: Re: One Hand In
Post by: Dagi on October 03, 2007, 05:19:07 pm
One Hand In by moremojo

Jack clenched his eyes shut and held his breath as one greasy cowboy finger slid gently but firmly up his rear passage, his sphincter squeezing against the rare but always welcome pressure; Ennis was a pro, Jack thought to himself, as a second finger, and then a third, joined in the tight digital bouquet forming in his insides.

Jack eased out breath slowly as he felt the knotted fist, the instrument that had given him so much love and pain together, press against his dripping portal, easing its way up, up into his system--Easy, buddy, Jack flashed in his mind as he felt the warm, pulsing entity come to rest deep inside his fraught, quivering intestines.

Unwilling but hotly sincere tears welled up in Jack's eyes as he softly affirmed, "Ennis...Ennis, I love you", feeling so vulnerable yet strangely at peace with his lover so intimately connected to him; only when he blinked away the tears did he recognize Pedro's face, slightly puzzled but determined to please his paying customer, only barely hearing, "Señor, you okay?", whereupon Jack, still slightly dazed, began to relax in preparation for the now unwelcome hand to make its exit.

Wow, I would never have thought that one could write about it so beautifully. I'm impressed, Scott, and touched. And I even wished it had been Ennis's hand....

Where have you been, buddy? We've  missed you!

Dagi
Title: Re: One Hand In
Post by: moremojo on October 03, 2007, 05:20:04 pm
You are one brave little soldier to go there, Scott!  But this was utterly convincing and believable.  And so sad at the end, too.

Gary
Thank you for the appreciative comments, Gary. I wanted to rise to the challenge of writing a 'fisting' story, but just couldn't imagine Ennis ever engaging in such an activity. So you see my solution.

I'm pretty sure I could never be as brave as Jack here!
Title: Re: One Hand In
Post by: moremojo on October 03, 2007, 05:22:51 pm
Where have you been, buddy? We've  missed you!
Thank you for your kind words, Dagi. Been having some challenges I'm facing one day at a time. I really need to feel inspired to write new stories; who'd a thunk that the theme of 'fisting' would do it for me?  :P
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Sharon on October 03, 2007, 05:24:06 pm
It`s to fast here for me! Jump out here!
Bye and night!
 
Title: Re: September 27th Early Morning
Post by: Dagi on October 03, 2007, 05:28:31 pm
Beautiful and sad, Littlewing.  But you know what, maybe Jack had turned Ennis in the end.  You know after the boys had their big fight toward the end of the story, Ennis quit Cassie.  Of course it wasn't right of him to simply dump her without a word, but he did stop seeing her.  And Ennis is the one that sent the last postcard.  It had always been Jack before.  So maybe Ennis was ready to make that step.  Or maybe he was getting closer.  But of course it was too late for Jack by then.  Too late for both of them.

Gary

Isn´t that one of the most tragic things of this story, that Ennis did make steps toward the sweet life, but too late, or too slowly... :(
Title: Re: September 27th Later that Morning
Post by: Dagi on October 03, 2007, 05:32:18 pm
It's so nice that the boys have a guardian angel.  Or is the blond guy Puck?  Hey, come to think of it, doesn't the devil play the violin?  No, he can't be the devil.

Gary

It could be Pan's gay cousin.  ;D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on October 03, 2007, 05:54:09 pm
Hi Susie,

how´s our story doing? Don´t tell me you can´t think of anything romantic to write... ;D

Dagi
Title: Re: One Hand In
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 03, 2007, 09:46:27 pm
One Hand In by moremojo

Jack clenched his eyes shut and held his breath as one greasy cowboy finger slid gently but firmly up his rear passage, his sphincter squeezing against the rare but always welcome pressure; Ennis was a pro, Jack thought to himself, as a second finger, and then a third, joined in the tight digital bouquet forming in his insides.

Jack eased out breath slowly as he felt the knotted fist, the instrument that had given him so much love and pain together, press against his dripping portal, easing its way up, up into his system--Easy, buddy, Jack flashed in his mind as he felt the warm, pulsing entity come to rest deep inside his fraught, quivering intestines.

Unwilling but hotly sincere tears welled up in Jack's eyes as he softly affirmed, "Ennis...Ennis, I love you", feeling so vulnerable yet strangely at peace with his lover so intimately connected to him; only when he blinked away the tears did he recognize Pedro's face, slightly puzzled but determined to please his paying customer, only barely hearing, "Señor, you okay?", whereupon Jack, still slightly dazed, began to relax in preparation for the now unwelcome hand to make its exit.

So beautifully written, and so sad, moremojo!  Thanks for a look into Jack's experience with the Mexican rent boy.  I can imagine that it happened that way: no other one but Ennis would do.  Beautiful work, moremojo.  I'm so glad to see you here.  I've missed you!
Title: Re: September 27th Early Morning
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 03, 2007, 09:49:36 pm
Isn´t that one of the most tragic things of this story, that Ennis did make steps toward the sweet life, but too late, or too slowly... :(

Yes Dagi, agreed!
Title: Re: September 27th Later that Morning
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 03, 2007, 09:51:26 pm
It's so nice that the boys have a guardian angel.  Or is the blond guy Puck?  Hey, come to think of it, doesn't the devil play the violin?  No, he can't be the devil.

Gary

 :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh: The blond man?  No, he's not the devil....
Title: Re: September 27th Later that Morning
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 03, 2007, 09:52:14 pm
It could be Pan's gay cousin.  ;D

 :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh: Too cool, Dagi!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 03, 2007, 09:54:15 pm
Hey there, Littlewing1957-
How's it going? :)

I'm doing okay.  How are you, Love?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 03, 2007, 09:56:38 pm
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Thanks so much Susie!  You guys really are so sweet!    :-*  I can't wait to reach my next 1000 post mark!  :)
Title: Re: September 27th Later that Morning
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 03, 2007, 09:57:49 pm
.... and there's that mysterious blond fella again!  I'm intrigued ... and he certaintly does have his work cut out for him ... Ennis is as stubborn as a mule!!   You're so brilliant at this littlewing!  :-*

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Thanks for your kind words, SusieDear!  You thought I was gonna say SusieBaby, didn't ya?  ;)
Title: Re: September 24th, Later that Night
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 03, 2007, 10:02:36 pm
Alma's "misery voice" is so descriptive, Littlewing.  I've never heard of the Black Angus restaurant.  Is that a chain?  Sounds like just the place for Jack and Ennis, but I noticed they couldn't stay there long.   :laugh:  I don't blame them for leaving early.

Gary

Black Angus?  Yes, it's a chain.  They have decent ribs, steaks and seafood there.  And the booths are very secluded!  Perhaps one day I can take you there.
Title: Re: Proof
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 03, 2007, 10:05:44 pm
Thanks, Gary baby. You so nasty.

Yeehaw! The countdown 'til I go on vacation is only two days now. I'm gonna miss you guys! What will I do without you guys for three weeks?

What will we do without you?  Just come back to us safe and sound. 
Title: Re: September 24th Evening at the Del Mar Residence
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 03, 2007, 10:08:55 pm
Thanks for going inside of Alma's head, Littlewing.  Her story would make an interesting read in and of itself.  What did she think when she saw Ennis kissing Jack?  How much did she know about gay men?  And when was it that she finally realized that Ennis had never really loved her?  A lot of people don't like Alma.  But she had the good sense to move on to greener pastures in the end.  None of the rest of them seemed to be able to do that.

Gary

Thanks, Gary.  I gotta get Lureen's side of things before I'm through with September.
Title: Re: Proof
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 03, 2007, 10:10:18 pm
What we will do? Miss our Stud of the Board, of course!

Dagi 8)

You got that right!
Title: Re: One Hand In
Post by: Toycoon on October 04, 2007, 12:44:32 am
Thank you for the appreciative comments, Gary. I wanted to rise to the challenge of writing a 'fisting' story, but just couldn't imagine Ennis ever engaging in such an activity. So you see my solution.

I'm pretty sure I could never be as brave as Jack here!

Fascinating story, moremojo; nasty (and painful) as hell but well written all the same!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on October 04, 2007, 12:48:24 am
Susiebell, are you a Bettermost moderator now? Gee, they'll let anybody moderate a board these days! :laugh: ;)
Title: September 27th Morning
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 04, 2007, 01:11:29 am
September 27th Morning by Littlewing1957

Mrs. Newsome passed her daughter a cup of lemon tea.  Lureen took the china cup gratefully and sipped at the sweet liquid.

“So where is Jack?”  Mrs. Newsome asked her daughter as she patted her perfect Texas hair.  Lureen looked at her mom ruefully.  She was not in the mood to defend her husband once again.  It was becoming tiresome.

“He went to Wyoming to attend a convention, and to see a friend on the way back,” Lureen stated evenly.  “You should know this, mom.  You suggested he attend the convention, remember?”

Mrs. Twist shrugged and sipped her tea.  She was a handsome woman who was certainly a great beauty in her day.  Lureen studied her mother and wondered if she would become a clone of her when she reached her age. 

“When will he be back?”  Mrs. Newsome asked as she sat her cup down on her pricey coffee table.  “Do you miss him?”  She asked her daughter.

Lureen didn’t answer at first.  She rose from the love seat and walked into the dining room of her parent’s home where Bobby was playing with a snow white long-haired cat.

“Yeah, I miss him!”  It was Lureen, almost shouting now.  Bobby and his grandmother jumped in unison and looked at her.  She shrunk inside herself a bit, and apologized to Bobby by running her fingers through his thick black hair.  She rose to walk back to the love seat and sat down beside her mom.

“I’m sorry, mama, I really am.  But things are kind of strange between Jack and me.”  Lureen laid her head down on her mom’s ample lap. 

“I just thought that if we spend a few days away from each other, things may get better.”  Lureen sighed when she felt her mother’s fingers caressing her hair.

“But a few days turned into almost a week, and I still haven’t heard from him.  The convention was over days ago.  How long does he plan to spend with this friend?”

Mrs. Newsome frowned as she thought about her son-in-law and his near neglect of her daughter.  She felt bad, helpless, even.  Mrs. Newsome was in a difficult position as the mother of a young wife.  She wanted the best for her daughter, but at the same time, she didn’t want to interfere.

“Don’t you worry none, Baby!”  Mrs. Newsome soothed.  “Everything will be alright, just you wait and see.” 

Lureen sighed and snuggled into her mom’s lap.  Bobby left the cat, stood next to his mom and rubbed her back.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on October 04, 2007, 04:50:39 am
Susiebell, are you a Bettermost moderator now? Gee, they'll let anybody moderate a board these days! :laugh: ;)

 :laugh:
Title: Re: September 27th Morning
Post by: Dagi on October 04, 2007, 09:14:28 am
September 27th Morning by Littlewing1957


“I’m sorry, mama, I really am.  But things are kind of strange between Jack and me.”  Lureen laid her head down on her mom’s ample lap. 



Another beautifully written scene, like pearls of a precious necklace... what a touching moment. Lovely work, Marie, thank you for this image.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on October 04, 2007, 09:35:35 am
Thank you ma'am, may I have another, Mistress Susie the Wicked!
Title: Re: One Hand In
Post by: moremojo on October 04, 2007, 11:59:07 am
How about a story involving water sports?   ;D  And no, I'm not talking about Jack and Ennis doing it in a boat.

Gary
I think I might be able to oblige here, Gary! Give me a little time to work on that. Part of my problem with employing some of these scenarios is that Ennis is so damn repressed--Jack would have been game for all sorts of things, but Ennis couldn't even admit it was a man that he loved, much less what all he could do with that man.

But I have my ways...let me see if I can get Ennis to open up and unburden himself ( ;)) a bit!
Title: Re: One Hand In
Post by: Dagi on October 04, 2007, 01:24:41 pm
How about a story involving water sports?   ;D  And no, I'm not talking about Jack and Ennis doing it in a boat.

Gary

 :laugh: Gary, you dirty boy.  ;D
Title: Re: One Hand In
Post by: Dagi on October 04, 2007, 01:26:31 pm
I think I might be able to oblige here, Gary! Give me a little time to work on that. Part of my problem with employing some of these scenarios is that Ennis is so damn repressed--Jack would have been game for all sorts of things, but Ennis couldn't even admit it was a man that he loved, much less what all he could do with that man.

But I have my ways...let me see if I can get Ennis to open up and unburden himself ( ;)) a bit!

Coming from you, it can only be good.

Dagi  8)
Title: Re: One Hand In
Post by: moremojo on October 04, 2007, 03:30:22 pm
I'm almost dreading asking, but Hunh??  Having a nice bubble bath together would be lovely, but if you're talking about what I think you're talking about then .... eeeeeeuw!

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Yes, Susie, that's exactly what Gary and I are talking about! Not for all tastes, to be sure (and almost certainly not to Ennis's!), but I could imagine Jack experimenting along these lines. And remember Annie's lines about the boys letting loose in the night fire's glow....just takes a little leap of imagination to steer that arc into warmer (if possibly darker) waters!  ;D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 04, 2007, 05:18:03 pm
:-* .... only 986 to go!! ;)

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Yep!
Title: Re: September 27th Morning
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 04, 2007, 05:19:15 pm
Well done, Littlewing.  I was right there with you the whole way through.  You really brought this scene to life.  I especially liked Mrs. Newsome in your story.  No one has written much about her, and she is an interesting woman.  She's got that Texas hair, as you pointed out, and she's married to a blow hard.  And now she's finding out that her daughter is married to a man that doesn't love her.

Gary 

Thanks, Gary!  I may have to write more about Mrs. Newsome!
Title: Re: September 27th Later that Morning
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 04, 2007, 05:20:02 pm
SusieDear, SusieBaby .. they're all lovely ...as are you LittlewingDear   :-* :-* :-*

Thanks, Babe!
Title: Re: September 27th Morning
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 04, 2007, 05:20:51 pm
So beautiful littlewing .... and we've never mentioned Mrs Newsome before ....  brilliantly done sweetie!!

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Why thanks, SusieBaby!  We need to hear more from Lureen's mom!
Title: Re: September 27th Morning
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 04, 2007, 05:21:54 pm
Another beautifully written scene, like pearls of a precious necklace... what a touching moment. Lovely work, Marie, thank you for this image.

Dagi

Aw, Dagi, you're so sweet to me.  ..like pearls of a precious necklace!!  So lovely, Dagi!
Title: He Loves Me
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 05, 2007, 12:12:07 am
He Loves Me by Littlewing1957

“Do you think your wife loves you?”  It was Ennis.  He didn’t know what came over him, asking Jack a question like that.  But he was lying in bed with him, crazy in love with the man, and somehow needed to know if what Jack had at home was real.  Ennis thought he knew the answer to his question, but he wanted to hear it from Jack.  Jack looked thoughtful for a moment.

“Yeah, friend,” Jack began, “I think she loves me in her own way.”  “What about you and Alma?  She loves you?”  Jack looked sidelong at Ennis, not really wanting to hear the answer.  But asking him a similar question somehow seemed polite.  Ennis lowered his handsome head for a moment, and then looked his lover straight in his blue eyes.

“I think she did once.”  Was Ennis’ reply.  The sentence hung in the air like a thick, ominous cloud.  Ennis became reflective and rather sad then.  The silence between the 2 lovers was awkward, uncomfortable.  "If you would only come away with me, you could feel loved 365 days of the year!” Jack thought.  He would never come right out and say this to Ennis.  Not now.  No need to ruin things.  Jack tried to lighten Ennis’ mood.

“Can I hold you?”  Jack whispered as he flung his arms wide, invited his lover in.  Ennis raised his head high and fell into Jack’s embrace.  He touched Jack’s mouth gently with his own, and Jack deepened the kiss.  They fell to the pillows in a silent and sweet embrace.
Title: Re: He Loves Me
Post by: Dagi on October 05, 2007, 12:41:39 am
He Loves Me by Littlewing1957

“Do you think your wife loves you?”  It was Ennis.  He didn’t know what came over him, asking Jack a question like that.  But he was lying in bed with him, crazy in love with the man, and somehow needed to know if what Jack had at home was real.  Ennis thought he knew the answer to his question, but he wanted to hear it from Jack.  Jack looked thoughtful for a moment.

“Yeah, friend,” Jack began, “I think she loves me in her own way.”  “What about you and Alma?  She loves you?”  Jack looked sidelong at Ennis, not really wanting to hear the answer.  But asking him a similar question somehow seemed polite.  Ennis lowered his handsome head for a moment, and then looked his lover straight in his blue eyes.

“I think she did once.”  Was Ennis’ reply.  The sentence hung in the air like a thick, ominous cloud.  Ennis became reflective and rather sad then.  The silence between the 2 lovers was awkward, uncomfortable.  "If you would only come away with me, you could feel loved 365 days of the year!” Jack thought.  He would never come right out and say this to Ennis.  Not now.  No need to ruin things.  Jack tried to lighten Ennis’ mood.

“Can I hold you?”  Jack whispered as he flung his arms wide, invited his lover in.  Ennis raised his head high and fell into Jack’s embrace.  He touched Jack’s mouth gently with his own, and Jack deepened the kiss.  They fell to the pillows in a silent and sweet embrace.


What a sweet, but at the same time sad moment. I´m convinced both women loved their men. Alma didn´t stop loving Ennis, that´s why she stayed, that´s why she was so upset on Thanksgiving although she was pregnant from and living with a new man. I think she kept loving him.

Beautifully written, Marie dear!  "If you would only come away with me, you could feel loved 365 days of the year!” aaah I clenched my teeth so hard it hurt when I read that...

Dagi
Title: Re: He Loves Me
Post by: Toycoon on October 05, 2007, 12:43:08 am
Wow, Littlewing-
I don't know what to say; that is surely one of the most touching stories I've read in a long time. Positively heartbreaking and I loved every word of it.

I'm gonna miss you guys. Three weeks is a long time without BetterMost's "Jack with Ennis", good grief!
Title: Re: He Loves Me
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 05, 2007, 11:23:38 pm
I think you're right, Littlewing.  I think Lureen did love Jack, at least as a friend.  I don't understand these people who suggest that Lureen was somehow involved in Jack's death.  Where do they get that?  And I think Alma did love Ennis in the beginning, and I think she would have went on loving him if he had returned her love.

Gary

I know what you mean, Gary, and I agree with everything you've just said here.  I'm not sure where people get the notion that Lureen had a hand in Jack's death.  And I have no doubt that Alma loved Ennis.  But Lureen?  Well, I suppose she did love him more like a friend.  She loved him, but was not in love with him, I think.
Title: Re: He Loves Me
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 05, 2007, 11:24:42 pm
What a sweet, but at the same time sad moment. I´m convinced both women loved their men. Alma didn´t stop loving Ennis, that´s why she stayed, that´s why she was so upset on Thanksgiving although she was pregnant from and living with a new man. I think she kept loving him.

Beautifully written, Marie dear!  "If you would only come away with me, you could feel loved 365 days of the year!” aaah I clenched my teeth so hard it hurt when I read that...

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi.  So many feelings, such a variety of emotion and thought to explore here.  I've just scratched the surface!
Title: Re: He Loves Me
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 05, 2007, 11:26:09 pm
Wow, Littlewing-
I don't know what to say; that is surely one of the most touching stories I've read in a long time. Positively heartbreaking and I loved every word of it.

I'm gonna miss you guys. Three weeks is a long time without BetterMost's "Jack with Ennis", good grief!

Thanks, Toycoon!

We're going to miss you, as well.  I guess right now you're on a plane to your destination.  Think about us here, as we wait for you to return.  We'll be here when you get back!  :)
Title: Ennis and Emma
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 06, 2007, 12:03:59 am
Ennis and Emma by Littlewing1957

Ennis couldn’t believe his ears.  He had heard of déjà vu, even experienced it himself from time to time, but this situation was just unreal.  Sitting right in front of him was Alma and Monroe’s daughter, little Emma, inviting him to her wedding.  Ennis stared at the young woman – a pretty little thing not yet 20.  Just that afternoon Emma called and asked if she could come over to see him.  How could he say no?  Ennis was smitten by little Emma the first time he laid eyes on her.  Whenever he visited Alma’s place to see his girls, Ennis always looked in on little Emma.  Alma and Monroe even encouraged him to pick up the infant.  There they stood, arm –in-arm, watching approvingly as Ennis patted the little girl’s tiny body and whispered, awwwww…

Over the years Emma and Ennis developed a special friendship.  He brought her little presents whenever he dropped by to see Jenny and Alma Jr.  Ennis was finally doing okay for himself, as he found a steady gig working at a meat packing plant.  The work was hard for a man his age, but the pay more than made up for it.  Ennis was able to move into a small Craftsman style house and furnish it with quality pieces the girls helped him pick out.  Ennis brought over sweets for Emma and often treated her to a new dress and an ice cream in town.  Ennis made it a point to attend Emma’s recitals and other school programs, always with a bouquet of flowers in his hand.  He was so fond of little Emma that he treated her just like his own.  Alma Jr. and Jenny were delighted that their father was so taken with their half-sister.

And now little Emma was getting married.  Ennis thought better of opening a bottle of cheap champagne, and instead walked over to his special girl and gave her a big hug and a kiss.  Ennis listened as Emma talked a blue streak about her intended.   Emma's fiance's name was Sanders, Sanders Winslow, and he worked as a paralegal in a law firm up in Cody.  Ennis listened to all of this with great interest.  He felt a rush of happiness not experienced in many years.  No need to ask if her fiancé loved her.  How could he not?  Mrs. Sanders Winslow.  No, Mrs. Emma Ann Winslow.  Ennis liked the name; thought it has a regal sound to it.

Emma gave her "paw paw" all the details about the wedding.  And after he promised faithfully to attend, and even contribute money toward the ceremony, Ennis walked a very happy Emma to the door, and watched as she drove away.  Fully energized now, Ennis walked over to his bedroom closet and opened the door.  The shirts hung, as usual, under a postcard of Brokeback Mountain.  No tears this time, no sad feelings as he straightened the shirts.  Ennis almost beamed as he said:

“Jack, what do you make of this, Buddy?  Here we go again….”
Title: Re: Ennis and Emma
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 07, 2007, 12:57:47 am
Hi there Littlewing,

Looks like we're having a slow weekend here on the board.  But what a pleasure it is to find one of your new stories.  And what a hopeful story it is.  It would be nice if Ennis got his act together and found some way of providing himself with more creature comforts.  That little trailer we see him living in at the end of the film is so depressing.  And it's great that he has Emma in his life.  I'm sure it doesn't make up for the lose of Jack, but in a basic sense, love is love, and I'm sure that Ennis's relationship with Emma and his daughers would give meaning to his life.

You've worked him through his depression, moved him into a nice house, and given him Emma, so how about getting him a new boyfriend now?   :D

Gary

Thanks, Gary.  It is a bit slow around here, isn't it?  Where is everyone?  Anyway, I thought it was high time that the universe threw Ennis a little something.  This is a hopeful story, isn't it?  A new boyfriend?  Well, I don't know if I can go there, but I'll try!  :laugh:
Title: Re: Ennis and Emma
Post by: Dagi on October 07, 2007, 08:19:43 am
Ennis and Emma by Littlewing1957

Ennis couldn’t believe his ears.  He had heard of déjà vu, even experienced it himself from time to time, but this situation was just unreal.  Sitting right in front of him was Alma and Monroe’s daughter, little Emma, inviting him to her wedding.  Ennis stared at the young woman – a pretty little thing not yet 20.  Just that afternoon Emma called and asked if she could come over to see him.  How could he say no?  Ennis was smitten by little Emma the first time he laid eyes on her.  Whenever he visited Alma’s place to see his girls, Ennis always looked in on little Emma.  Alma and Monroe even encouraged him to pick up the infant.  There they stood, arm –in-arm, watching approvingly as Ennis patted the little girl’s tiny body and whispered, awwwww…

Over the years Emma and Ennis developed a special friendship.  He brought her little presents whenever he dropped by to see Jenny and Alma Jr.  Ennis was finally doing okay for himself, as he found a steady gig working at a meat packing plant.  The work was hard for a man his age, but the pay more than made up for it.  Ennis was able to move into a small Craftsman style house and furnish it with quality pieces the girls helped him pick out.  Ennis brought over sweets for Emma and often treated her to a new dress and an ice cream in town.  Ennis made it a point to attend Emma’s recitals and other school programs, always with a bouquet of flowers in his hand.  He was so fond of little Emma that he treated her just like his own.  Alma Jr. and Jenny were delighted that their father was so taken with their half-sister.

And now little Emma was getting married.  Ennis thought better of opening a bottle of cheap champagne, and instead walked over to his special girl and gave her a big hug and a kiss.  Ennis listened as Emma talked a blue streak about her intended.   Emma's fiance's name was Sanders, Sanders Winslow, and he worked as a paralegal in a law firm up in Cody.  Ennis listened to all of this with great interest.  He felt a rush of happiness not experienced in many years.  No need to ask if her fiancé loved her.  How could he not?  Mrs. Sanders Winslow.  No, Mrs. Emma Ann Winslow.  Ennis liked the name; thought it has a regal sound to it.

Emma gave her "paw paw" all the details about the wedding.  And after he promised faithfully to attend, and even contribute money toward the ceremony, Ennis walked a very happy Emma to the door, and watched as she drove away.  Fully energized now, Ennis walked over to his bedroom closet and opened the door.  The shirts hung, as usual, under a postcard of Brokeback Mountain.  No tears this time, no sad feelings as he straightened the shirts.  Ennis almost beamed as he said:

“Jack, what do you make of this, Buddy?  Here we go again….”


Hi Marie,

what a lovely little story! It fills me with joy to read about happy Ennis, loving with all his heart. What other characters will you come up with? And so good that he can think of Jack without being sad now. And still Jack is an important part of his life, and will always be.

Where is Susie?? And where are BBM-Cat, and Scott?

Dagi

Title: Re: Ennis and Emma
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 07, 2007, 05:42:51 pm
Hi Marie,

what a lovely little story! It fills me with joy to read about happy Ennis, loving with all his heart. What other characters will you come up with? And so good that he can think of Jack without being sad now. And still Jack is an important part of his life, and will always be.

Where is Susie?? And where are BBM-Cat, and Scott?

Dagi



Thanks for your sweet comments, Dagi.  I needed to write something happy where Ennis is concerned.  I'll go back to angst in a bit. 

I don't know where BBM-Cat and Scott are.  Susie was here a bit ago, yes?  I miss those cowboys and cowgirls!
Title: aphrodisiac
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 08, 2007, 12:42:08 am
aphrodisiac by Littlewing1957

“C’mon Ennis open up!”  It was Jack yelling at the top of his lungs at the front door of Don Wroe’s cabin.

“Listen, Friend, open the door! I got about 20 pounds of oysters to put in the fridge!”  Ennis heard his husband, but was slow getting to the door as he was tidying the kitchen.  When Ennis opened the massive wooden door a few seconds later, Jack almost dropped his burden.  The sight of his sexy lover, standing there in jeans, sans shirt and barefoot almost drove Jack over the edge.  Ennis was looking mighty fine!

Ennis stepped aside and allowed Jack to enter.  He was carrying a broom and dustpan, but dropped them both to embrace his lover.  Jack placed his gear carefully on the floor and faced Ennis full-on.

“Six long months!”  Ennis whispered as he prepared for a long, hot, steamy kiss.

“Too long, Friend!”  Jack mumbled as he snuggled closer, gestured for a smooch.  Ennis kissed him gently at first, then harder, desperately.  After he felt his lips beginning to swell, Jack stepped away and picked up his cooler.  He knew the way to the kitchen, and once there, placed the oysters in the oversized fridge.

It didn’t take long for Jack to get settled.  He put his things away, took an indulgent shower, changed into jeans and a T-shirt.  Jack found Ennis in the living area reading the paper.  He joined him on the couch, took his hand and held it.

“So what is this about oysters?”  Ennis asked as he put the paper down on the coffee table.

“Well, I though I would cook us up some for supper.”  Jack answered excitedly.  He had never fixed seafood for Ennis, and decided to go for a change.

“How do you like your oysters, Friend?”  Jack asked evenly.  I can serve them on the half-shell, raw with hot sauce, or I can deep fat fry them.  Sorry, Friend, but I don’t know any other fancy ways to fix oysters.”  Jack laughed.  “So how do you like yours?”  Ennis squirmed and cleared his throat.

“Well, I don’t rightly know, Rodeo,” Ennis admitted nervously. “You see, I’ve never eaten oysters!”  Ennis waited for Jack’s reaction.  Jack thought nothing of it, really.  He knew a lot of people who never had the inclination nor the opportunity to enjoy oysters.  Jack squeezed Ennis’ hand.

“Well, since you’re a beginner, I had better deep fry ‘em!”  Jack stated in a matter of fact way. “Raw on the half-shell is a real acquired taste.  But I almost guarantee you’ll like my fried oysters!”  With that said Jack rose from the couch and headed toward the kitchen.  He looked back at his lover, who was watching his ass as he walked away. 

“You want to come in and watch me cook the oysters?”  Jack asked.  "Cooking oysters is a very precise process; one I learned all about from Lureen,”  Jack stated excitedly.  Ennis smiled and joined his lover.  Ennis watched as Jack shelled the fresh oysters and washed them off.  He then seasoned them with a bit of salt and pepper, light on the salt.  Next Ennis handed Jack a bowl to prepare an egg wash.  Once the oysters were dredged in a mixture of flour, cornstarch and white cornmeal, Jack placed just a few at a time in hot oil to cook.  Ennis was growing mighty hungry at the heavenly smell of the frying oysters.  He made a salad and opened a tub of potato salad while Jack continued to cook.

Once the oysters were done, Jack and Ennis set the table and dug in.  Ennis closed his eyes at the first bite of a crunchy, crispy oyster.  He was unprepared for the soft center, and gasped at the flavor.

“These are really good, Rodeo!”  Ennis muttered between bites.  “These taste just like the sea; just like seafood should taste, if that makes any sense.”  Jack nodded fondly.

“One thing I heard about oysters, Friend,” Jack began.  “People say they’re good for the sex life.”  Jack’s blue eyes began to twinkle as he noticed Ennis paused, an oyster suspended in his fingers.

“So eat up, En!”  Jack enthused. I’m going to eat as many as I can to get my strength up for later!”  Jack chuckled and winked at his lover.  Ennis didn’t know what to say.  But he had to admit to feeling a bit warm.  He felt a stirring in his loins, and didn’t know whether to attribute the sensation to eating the oysters, or sitting right beside a sexy Jack Twist.

Ennis couldn’t believe he packed away 10 oysters!  Jack ate quite a few as well, and was feeling quite randy.  He hoped that Ennis wouldn’t need dessert….

To be continued




Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on October 08, 2007, 03:51:30 am
MMMM Littlewing, your stories are always so sexy, especially when they contain food (and Jack and Ennis  ;D). This was a real aphrodisiac, I shouldn´t read stories like this at 9:45 in the morning ... :laugh:

I love Jack nurturing Ennis, that´s so sweet. But I think they both do not really need an extra aphrodisiac when they are together, huh? I wouldn´t need one if I was with Jack. ;D

Dagi

thanks so much for keeping the fire burning, sweetie!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 08, 2007, 05:21:48 pm
MMMM Littlewing, your stories are always so sexy, especially when they contain food (and Jack and Ennis  ;D). This was a real aphrodisiac, I shouldn´t read stories like this at 9:45 in the morning ... :laugh:

I love Jack nurturing Ennis, that´s so sweet. But I think they both do not really need an extra aphrodisiac when they are together, huh? I wouldn´t need one if I was with Jack. ;D

Dagi

thanks so much for keeping the fire burning, sweetie!

Thanks Dagi.  And you make some valid points!  No help needed in the love department with men this hot!  ::)
Title: Re: Ennis and Emma
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 08, 2007, 05:23:10 pm
Beautiful glimpse into the future Littlewing.  And this doesn't have to be an alternate reality, it could be the real future for him.  I love to think of a happy Ennis, content with his lot in life, and making positive changes .... giving Emma a great big hug instead of walking away to get the champagne is a wonderful touch (I wish I'd seen him do that to Alma Junior).

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Thanks SusieBaby!  Have you been away?  I've missed you.  I get nervous when I don't see you!  :-*
Title: Re: aphrodisiac
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 08, 2007, 05:26:11 pm
YUMMY! Littlewing!  I'll admit, I've only ever tried one raw oyster and I nearly threw up blaaaaaaah!  .... it was like eating  raw egg white, once it started going down, the rest followed!!

I'd try deep fried ones though, you made them sound so delicious my mouth is watering.  Gorgeous as always honey.  I think you should write a sexy cook book ... I'll be first in line for my signed copy!!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

SusieBaby, you are just the sweetest.  I think food really brings people together, and preparing it for others is the height of nurturing.  And it is an absolute joy to eat tasty food!  Perhaps I'll fix you up a batch of my fried oysters one day.  I would be so happy to do that.  I don't like raw oysters, either.  The hot sauce doesn't even save them, IMHO!
Title: Re: aphrodisiac
Post by: moremojo on October 08, 2007, 06:32:01 pm
I don't like raw oysters, either.  The hot sauce doesn't even save them, IMHO!
Casanova was reputedly a connoisseur of raw oysters...I believe he too thought they had an aphrodisiac effect. So from the Great Latin Lover to our two favorite Wyoming cowboys...plus ça change...
Title: Re: Ennis and Emma
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 08, 2007, 08:48:57 pm
Awww thanks for missing me honey  :-* ..... still here, just had a quiet few days that's all!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Well, we all need our quiet time.  I hope you enjoyed it!  By the way, congrats for your new status as moderator.  I just noticed!  :)
Title: Re: aphrodisiac
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 08, 2007, 08:49:59 pm
Casanova was reputedly a connoisseur of raw oysters...I believe he too thought they had an aphrodisiac effect. So from the Great Latin Lover to our two favorite Wyoming cowboys...plus ça change...

Yes, moremojo, and I believe there is some truth to the aphrodisiac powers of oysters.  I always feel a bit warm after eating them!  ::)
Title: Down
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 08, 2007, 09:12:40 pm
Down by Littlewing1957

A Brokeback Mountain Slice of Life (angst)


Ennis sat by Jack in an effort to coax him out a bit.  He noticed Jack’s solemn countenance the moment he exited his truck.  Ennis had a knack for discerning his lover’s moods.  

“What is it, Jack?”  Ennis asked as he slid his fingers up and down Jack’s forearm.  “You seem a bit down.  Wanna talk about it?”  Jack was dead silent for a moment, and Ennis became really concerned when he noticed his lover’s eyes began to water a tiny bit.

“Jack, what is it?”  Ennis, scared now.  This was serious, and Ennis vowed to discover what was hurting his man.  It was unusual for Jack to go all misty eyed on him.  Jack leaned into his lover, allowed himself to be held, rocked.

“Aww, it’s just Bobby!”  Jack began miserably.  “He told me the day I was to leave to meet you that I am a horrible father, and that I haven’t done anything for him his whole life.  And you know, Cowboy, Bobby said this right in front of his mom, and Lureen didn’t do anything.  She didn’t say a word to defend me, didn’t even send him to his room.”  Ennis listened to this, his feelings hitting every range between rage and empathy.  He rocked Jack ever so gently and when he spoke, his voice was a sweet whisper.

“Did he say anything else, Rodeo?  I mean, what brought that on?  Why would he say such things to you?”  Jack shrugged and cuddled closer to his man.

“Well, it gets worse, Cowboy!”  Jack exclaimed.  “He told me that if I didn’t want any kids, if I knew I would turn out to be such a bad father, that I shouldn’t have slept with Lureen.”  Ennis found the bile rising in his throat.

“What did Lureen say then?”  Ennis spoke somewhere out of the depths of his heart.  Jack looked Ennis straight in his hazel eyes.

“Well, then she yelled at him and made him go to his room.  We couldn’t even look at one another after that.  En, what am I gonna do with him?  I love my boy, and it hurts to hear him talk to me that way.”  Ennis nodded.

“I know, Rodeo.  But he’ll think about what he said, and I’m sure he’ll apologize.  Chalk it up to teenaged hormones.  My girls were never like that with me, but I haven’t been around them as much.  Trust me, Babe, everything will be okay, you’ll see.  Besides, I’m here to make it all better.  Let me take your mind off it!”

Ennis kissed Jack on his sculpted jaw and pulled at his zipper.  When his manhood was free, Ennis played with his lover’s member until it was nice and solid.  Jack let the tears fall as he lay back and let Ennis work his magic.  He felt his cares flowing away with the setting sun as Ennis' warm mouth moved back and forth…
Title: Re: Ennis and Emma
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 08, 2007, 09:19:01 pm
Why thank you honey!  :-*

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



You're welcome!  They chose the right person!  :)  :-*
Title: Re: aphrodisiac
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 08, 2007, 11:58:40 pm
MMM  Imagining Ennis in nothing but a pair of jeans is as hot as an Abercrombie & Fitch ad, Littlewing.   I had a hard time going on after reading about that.   ;D 

My grandfather loved oysters, and so my mother would always cook some for him during the holidays.  She fried them in much the same way you describe in your story.  So I guess I've had many opportunities to eat oysters, but I've never had the inclination.  But I have heard that they're supposed to make you randy.   :P  So I think I know where this story is going.   :laugh:

Gary 

Oh Gary, you gotta try them!  Nothing in the world like fried oysters!  I've got to continue the story.  Tomorrow, perhaps.
Title: Re: Down
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 09, 2007, 12:01:06 am
I can imagine Bobby saying something like that.  Don't all teenagers say hurtful things to their parents?  But we know that Jack was interested in Bobby's welfare.  Jack may have been ready to leave Lureen and Bobby just a few months after Bobby was born.  (It's been suggested that Bobby didn't really belong to Jack, so perhaps he wasn't really committed to fatherhood so soon after his birth.  Maybe Jack did the math and figured it out.)  But we know Jack's interest in Bobby grew over the years because he told Ennis he was worried about the kid's learning disability in the story, and we know from the film that Bobby's teacher doesn't like Jack because he questions her methodes.

The way you led the boys into intimacy in this scene was so warm, comforting, and sexy.

Gary

Thanks for your kind words, Gary.  I must admit --- the inspiration for this story came from an episode with my own child.  You're right, they can be downright cruel sometimes!
Title: Re: Down
Post by: Dagi on October 09, 2007, 03:22:00 am
Down by Littlewing1957

A Brokeback Mountain Slice of Life (angst)



Poor Jack, I really feel with him. It hurts so much being called a bad father or mother, but kids don´t realize what we do for them. They take it for granted, and they are right! And I bet almost every father or mother has heard things like that in their lives...but with his second remark Bobby hit a hot spot. Jack deserved to be comforted in such a sweet way!

Beautiful writing, Marie, you are one amazing woman.

Dagi
Title: Re: Down
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 09, 2007, 09:55:08 pm
Poor Jack, I really feel with him. It hurts so much being called a bad father or mother, but kids don´t realize what we do for them. They take it for granted, and they are right! And I bet almost every father or mother has heard things like that in their lives...but with his second remark Bobby hit a hot spot. Jack deserved to be comforted in such a sweet way!

Beautiful writing, Marie, you are one amazing woman.

Dagi

Thanks for your kind words, Dagi.  You're a sweetie!  :-*
Title: Ennis' Lament
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 10, 2007, 12:31:27 am
Ennis' Lament by Littlewing1957

I’m lonely.  I’m alone.  My trailer is closing in on me day-by-day, threatening to crush the life out of me.  To think I had love.  Yes, he loved me—Jack Twist loved me!  I see that now, only it is too late.  And I loved him, but was too messed up to show it.  I couldn’t even own my love, wouldn’t even tell my sweet Jack just how much I cared for him. And now I’m suffering.  The wind, the snow and the rain are my only friends.  I feel so alone I’m wondering if I exist at all.  Jack Twist, please forgive me.  Forgive me, Jack.  Maybe in some distant reality I can call you husband.  In time when I have left this Earth, and if I am lucky to receive my reward, we can be together.
Title: Re: Ennis' Lament
Post by: Dagi on October 10, 2007, 12:57:34 am
Ennis' Lament by Littlewing1957

I’m lonely.  I’m alone.  My trailer is closing in on me day-by-day, threatening to crush the life out of me.  To think I had love.  Yes, he loved me—Jack twist loved me!  I see that now, only it is too late.  And I loved him, but was too messed up to show it.  I couldn’t even own my love, wouldn’t even tell my sweet Jack just how much I cared for him. And now I’m suffering.  The wind, the snow and the rain are my only friends.  I feel so alone I’m wondering if I exist at all.  Jack Twist, please forgive me.  Forgive me, Jack.  Maybe in some distant reality I can call you husband.  In time when I have left this Earth, and if I am lucky to receive my reward, we can be together.

Oh Marie, it hurts reading this. I so hope Emma is about to knock on the door...
Dagi
Title: Re: Ennis' Lament
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 10, 2007, 11:17:22 pm
Hi there Littlewing,

I read Soren Kierkegaard back in college, and I learned that in his early days he was in love with a young woman.  But he felt compelled to let this young woman go because he thought he was meant to live a life of solitary reflection and contemplation.  But he never stopped pining for this young woman.  And I remember reading somewhere in his journals a very sad but loving passage where he speaks of living in quiet longing, and how the only thing that makes the pain bearable is faith that eternity will fulfill his hearts desire.  If I had my books with me I would look up the quote for you.

Anyway, that's what I thought of when I read your heartfelt, but very painful glimps into Ennis's mind.

Gary

I haven't read Kierkegaard since college.  Thanks for bringing him to my attention again, Gary. 
Title: Horror Month
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 10, 2007, 11:19:37 pm
Hey you guys, if you don't mind, I'll be including Jack and Ennis "horror" stories along with the love stories.  It is only fitting since this is horror month.  If you want to play along, by all means, feel free!

Read on for the first supernatural story!
Title: Boogie
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 11, 2007, 12:13:36 am
Boogie by Littlewing1957

Jack looked at the golden skinned man with more than just a passing curiosity.  It never ceased to amaze him the diversity of rodeo jocks these days.  Jack met Asians, Africans, Native Americans, along with white guys who came from both old and new money.  But the golden skinned man was so exotic with his Slavic features and strong, muscular build.  He wore colorful head scarves and white shirts. Jack was naturally intrigued.  The golden skinned man's name was Jonathan, and his home was The Dominican Republic.

Jonathan was not a very strong bull rider, but he did manage to take home his fair share of winnings.  And whenever Jonathan took the top prize, he treated Jack to a drink at a dive bar called “Basket of Guts.”  Jack never refused an offer of free whiskey, and when The Dominican asked him out, Jack agreed.  They sat at the bar and got to know one another.  Jack heard all about Jonathan’s early life in The Dominican Republic, but Jack was less than forthcoming.  He told Jonathan about his childhood in lightning Flat, but left out the story of how he met the love of his life, Ennis Del Mar.  Jack found it too painful to talk about Ennis, even as a friend.  It was no one else’s business. 

Along about midnight, Jack and Jonathan were getting pretty plastered.  Jack bought a round of drinks, spending money he didn’t have.  But he was warming to the young Dominican and wanted to keep the conversation going.

“Did you ever have a dog?”  It was Jonathan, his words slurred almost beyond comprehension.  Jack placed his shot glass to his mouth, pausing for a moment.

“Yeah, I did,” Jack began.  “His name was Boogie.  I named him that because his tail would wag whenever I put on some peppy music.”  Jonathan laughed at this.

“You said was?”  Jonathan asked.  “I guess Boogie died some time ago?”  Jack though he was over Boogie’s death.  It may have been the liquor, but Jack was feeling quite sad thinking about his pet.  Boogie was a sweet, black Lab that he loved to death.  He never wanted a dog of his own after Boogie expired.  Too painful when they died.

“Would you like to see Boogie again?”  It was Jonathan; his voice heavily accented and thick from drink.

“What do you mean see him again?”  Jack asked slowly, beginning to worry now.  “I told you Boogie is dead.  Been dead for years now!”  Jonathan smiled thoughtfully and placed his drink on the bar.

“C’mon, let’s get out of here!”  Jonathan grabbed Jack by the sleeve of his denim jacket.  Jack was only too happy to follow, wondering if he would get lucky.  Jonathan took Jack to his room, which was little more than a shabby motel room on the outskirts of Childress.  Jonathan cleared off his bed and motioned for Jack to have a seat.  Jack smiled at the offer and sat on the lumpy mattress.  Jonathan walked around him to the cheap bureau and pulled out what looked like a small bag.  Jack couldn’t help but notice an evil smell coming from the bag.  He looked at Jonathan who was now smiling widely.  Jack was becoming frightened and immediately questioned his decision to follow this man, someone he barely knew, to his room.  Jonathan must have noticed Jack’s sudden discomfort.

“It’s okay Jack,” he soothed.  “You know I won’t hurt you.  I only want to make it possible for you to see Boogie again.”  Jack looked at the Dominican as though he had lost his mind.

“It ain’t possible!”  Jack cried, almost hysterical now.  Jonathan laughed and placed a hot hand on Jack’s forehead.  He gently pushed Jack’s head onto his pillow.

“Trust me, Jack.  I promise no harm will come to you.  You see, my family.. we are part of the chosen.  We can communicate with the dead, and can make it possible for others to communicate with those who have passed on.  Human, animal, it makes no difference."  Jonathan noticed that Jack was calmer now, for reasons he couldn't fathom. 

“Look, I’m going to place this bag on your head.  You try to sleep and see what happens.  If it is too much for you, raise your hand.”

Jack closed his eyes and allowed his crazy friend to continue.  Once the bag was placed on his forehead, Jack felt an urge to sleep that he couldn't fight.  His eyes closed as if by magic and he found himself somewhere he couldn’t place.  It was a land that he didn’t recognize - a pastoral scene - all hills and streams with outrageous blue skies, fluffy clouds.  Jack looked around and found himself alone.  That is, until he felt a nipping at his ankles.  He looked down and saw..no it couldn’t be?  Boogie?  Jack was so excited to see his old pet that he didn’t question how Boogie came to be there.  He reached down to scratch behind Boogie’s ears, but drew back when Boogie looked up at him.  Jack almost screamed when he saw Boogie’s eyes and teeth were flame!  He backed away from his pet, but instead of running toward him, Boogie was running backward!  Jack almost swooned at the sight.  So dogs in the afterlife have fire for eyes and teeth and run backward?  It was too much for Jack.  He raised his hand and Jonathan removed the bag from his head.  Jonathan pulled Jack to his feet and looked him straight in the eyes.  Jack was so angry he dared not speak.  Without saying a word, Jack grabbed his hat, left the room never to speak to Jonathan again.






Title: Re: Boogie
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 11, 2007, 10:18:06 am
Ah, Littlewing, you know I love a good spooky story.  Thanks so much for moving things in this unexpected direction.  It was a lot of fun reading your story.  And what a great way to celebrate the season.  I think you've inspired me.  Maybe I'll write my own spooky story tomorrow.

Gary

Thanks, Gary!  I thought you might like it!  Please write as many scary stories as you can!  You're good at it, and I can't wait to read your spooky tale(s)!
Title: Re: Boogie
Post by: Dagi on October 11, 2007, 01:10:29 pm
Boogie by Littlewing1957


Yeah, the wall between here and there is thin at this time of the year.....what an original little tale, Littlewing! Keep them coming!

Dagi
Title: Re: Boogie
Post by: moremojo on October 11, 2007, 04:50:17 pm
Boogie by Littlewing1957
Interesting story, Marie. Some earlier stories have been tinged with a hint of the supernatural or the transcendent, but eeriness or supernatural horror are new inflections, I think, for our thread. Quite appropriate, as you say, for the season.

It seems that Jack saw his vision of Boogie as an evil thing, though Jonathan wasn't necessarily doing anything sinister, and may have actually thought he was being helpful to Jack. As someone who ruefully admits to having retreated from those claiming to have powers or experiences with the paranormal, I find it rather sad that Jack too gave in to his fear here.
Title: Re: Boogie
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 11, 2007, 07:07:33 pm
Yeah, the wall between here and there is thin at this time of the year.....what an original little tale, Littlewing! Keep them coming!

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi!  I'll keep them coming!  :)
Title: Re: Ennis' Lament
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 11, 2007, 11:09:29 pm
Oh Marie, it hurts reading this. I so hope Emma is about to knock on the door...
Dagi

Hi Dagi!  Yes, Emma would certainly cheer him up.  I suppose poor Ennis shouldn't feel so alone.  Even without Jack he has affection.
Title: Re: Ennis' Lament
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 11, 2007, 11:10:08 pm
Ah littlewing, that read like a beautiful, heartwrenching poem.  Gorgeous honey!

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Why thanks SusieBaby!
Title: Re: Boogie
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 11, 2007, 11:12:52 pm
Interesting story, Marie. Some earlier stories have been tinged with a hint of the supernatural or the transcendent, but eeriness or supernatural horror are new inflections, I think, for our thread. Quite appropriate, as you say, for the season.

It seems that Jack saw his vision of Boogie as an evil thing, though Jonathan wasn't necessarily doing anything sinister, and may have actually thought he was being helpful to Jack. As someone who ruefully admits to having retreated from those claiming to have powers or experiences with the paranormal, I find it rather sad that Jack too gave in to his fear here.

Thanks, moremojo.  By the way, it is so good to see you here.  I've missed you.  Supernatural stories about Jack and Ennis are difficult to pull off, as the story is already so tragic.  The tragic elements offer up a lot of possibilities, but what I'm inspired to write is just so depressing.  I'll try to keep the supernatural stories on the lighter side.  I'll try!  :)
Title: Re: A Blast from the Past
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 11, 2007, 11:17:42 pm
A Blast from the Past by Susiebell



Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

hahahaha .. that was rubbish!!  See I told you I couldn't do spooky!!  :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

SusieBaby, this is brilliant.  Rubbish my ass!  Girl, what an inventive story!  I never would have thought of it.  What a great addition to our supernatural "series."  You're good at this my dear.  keep 'em coming!
Title: Re: A Blast from the Past
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 11, 2007, 11:19:31 pm
Hi Susie dear,

In some sense, if not a literal sense, I think Ennis was haunted by many of the mistakes he had made.  And I think when Cassie told him that "girls don't fall in love with fun," he realized how wrong he was in treating her the way he did.  Of course he didn't love her.  And of course he should not have been with her.  But the way he left her was awful.  And I'm sure he felt pangs of guilt about that for the rest of his life.  So I don't think your story is rubbish.  I think it sheds light an important aspect of Ennis's inner life.

Gary

The way he left was was indeed awful, and I can imagine how poor Cassie felt.  I've been dumped this way (and worse) more times than I care to admit.
Title: Stay Tuned
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 12, 2007, 01:02:24 am
Can any of you image a scarier feeling than being alone in your home, or any familiar surrounding where you feel safe and secure, only to have that security threatened, especially by an intruder?  Now image Ennis, alone in his trailer in the dead of night.  His place is small and there is no other exit save his front door.  No one is around, and the trailer park is dead quiet, except for the hissing of the wind…

Stay tuned.  The story tomorrow...
Title: Re: A Blast from the Past
Post by: Dagi on October 12, 2007, 08:58:32 am
A Blast from the Past by Susiebell



That was spooky! So Cassie couldn´t life without him....gues I know another person who could hardly have survived another rejection...if Ennis only had understood that he was loved! Susie, do it again, please! (And I feel only a little cheated.  ;D)

Dagi
Title: Re: Stay Tuned
Post by: Dagi on October 12, 2007, 09:00:35 am
Can any of you image a scarier feeling than being alone in your home, or any familiar surrounding where you feel safe and secure, only to have that security threatened, especially by an intruder?  Now image Ennis, alone in his trailer in the dead of night.  His place is small and there is no other exit save his front door.  No one is around, and the trailer park is dead quiet, except for the hissing of the wind…

Stay tuned.  The story tomorrow...

I´m biting my nails with anticipation.  ;D

Dagi
Title: Re: A Blast from the Past
Post by: Dagi on October 12, 2007, 09:18:47 am
Well if you're referring to me honey .... I didn't get the job  :-\ .... not even an interview  :( .... I guess they'll never know what a treasure they've missed out on!!  :D  I think someone up there's trying to see how far he can push me!!  :'(

I don't know if I can write another scary one, this little one just popped into my head after I'd read littlewing's ghostly tale! I'll try though.

Love Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


If you can´t think of a scary one, how about you write the next line of our story, Susiebaby?  ::)  Only one line, is that really asked to much?

Dagi  :-*
Title: Re: A Blast from the Past
Post by: Dagi on October 12, 2007, 02:00:29 pm
Well if you're referring to me honey .... I didn't get the job  :-\ .... not even an interview  :( .... I guess they'll never know what a treasure they've missed out on!!  :D  I think someone up there's trying to see how far he can push me!!  :'(

I don't know if I can write another scary one, this little one just popped into my head after I'd read littlewing's ghostly tale! I'll try though.

Love Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Oh Susiebell, I didn´t read that properly, where did I have my eyes...you´ll get a better job, I´m sure, it all happens for a reason, sweetheart.  :)

 :-* Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on October 12, 2007, 05:43:47 pm
I can hardly keep my eyes open, Susie, I´ll read your story tomorrow!

Dagi  :-*
Title: Re: The Fortune Teller
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 12, 2007, 11:14:06 pm
The Fortune Teller by Susie


Mr and Mrs Del Mar were enjoying a rare day off.  A trip to the state fair was in order, but with their youngest son running a temperature, it looked like the day out was about to be cancelled. 

Their daughter stepped in at the last minute, "You go Momma and Daddy, I'll watch over the boys for you.  Ennis will be just fine, you'll see!  We can all go together next year."

"Well if you're sure honey"  Mrs Del Mar answered reluctantly.

The sun was shining, the smell of fresh donuts, hotdogs and cotton candy wafted through the air.  As they strolled arm in arm past Madame Mystique's tent, draped with oriental scarves, the heady scent of incense filling their nostrils, Mrs Del Mar made a sudden detour through the tent opening. 

"Come on Willard, let's see what the future has in store for us". 

"Load of balony Minnie, but if it makes you happy...and it keeps you quiet".  Mr Del Mar looked doubtful as he followed her into the tent.

"Madame, Monsiour, pleez take a seet", a wild haired, kind faced old woman gestured from across the table, her gaze fixed firmly on the crystal ball in front of her.

"You cross my palm weeth seelver pleez" she held out her hand and waited for the sound of clinking coins.

"Aarr, I zee cheeldren .... your leetle boy, ee is afraid, you must care for 'im, zer weell be much sadness in 'is life..."

"What a crock!" blurted out Mr Del Mar.

"Ee 'as suffered much terror already, somezing you 'ave shown to 'im, yes?"

"That little sissy!  Needs to learn to be a man .... I'll beat it out of him if I have to!"

"'You are a bad man ... I curse you!" she let out a squeal, and pushed away from the table,  "Enough, I cannot 'elp you anymore, you must go!"

Mr and Mrs Del Mar stood up, a little startled by her reaction.  "Gimme that..."  Willard grumbled, picking up his two quarters and turning to leave.

The old woman grabbed his hand, moved her face in close, and whispered menacingly in his ear "........ beware ze bend in ze road" and ushered them out of the tent.

"Damn crazy lady" he muttered, marching towards the exit, "Come on Minnie, we're leaving!".  Mrs Del Mar reluctantly followed her husband.  She wasn't ready to go yet, but she could tell by the tone of his voice that his mind was made up.

The journey home wasn't pleasant, the weather had taken a sudden turn for the worse and rain was lashing down onto the truck.  The wiper blades were at full speed but it was still almost impossible to see in front of them.  Mr Del Mar remained haunted by the old woman's voice, her threatening words. 

Suddenly, through the mist and rain, her face came into focus, drifting towards the windshield, disembodied, eyes wild, teeth bared, her voice echoing around them  ".... beware ze bend in ze road .... beware ze bend in ze road".

Blood curdling screams filled the air.  Mr Del Mar threw one arm protectively around his wife, the other, shielding his face ..... the tires skidded, sending the truck spinning over the embankment, and disappearing into the darkness......  All was silent ....




Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



Exceptional tale, Susie.  You have a real knack for writing about the supernatural.  As I posted yestrday, writing horror tales about Jack and Ennis is not easy.  But you really scared me and helped explain what happened the night Ennis' parents had the accident.  If I was alone, I would have to tuen on every light in the house.  Read on for the tale I promised you...
Title: From Beyond
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 12, 2007, 11:39:22 pm
From Beyond by Littlewing1957

Ennis sat at his small table and poured over the bills.  He made a pile of bills to get in the mail right away, and a pile for those that could be paid later.  His heat was turned off for lack of payment, and Ennis sat huddled in blankets to keep warm.  Late October, and while not exactly freezing, it was cold outside.  It was cold inside, as well.  The bills all sorted, Ennis pulled the blankets tightly across his shoulders.  He was almost accustomed to the loneliness, but this night he experienced an almost unknown feeling: one of fear.

Ennis didn’t know why he was so afraid.  He listened to the night.  All quiet; too quiet.  Except for the wind.  To Ennis the wind didn’t count – it was always raging, rattling his trailer.  The wind was so familiar that he often ignored it, took the hissing for granted.  But not this night.  KNOCK!  There, he heard it!  Ennis jumped at the sound of a knock at his door.  He wasn’t expecting anyone.  Ennis moved to his front door on wary feet.  KNOCK KNOCK!  Again, Ennis heard it. 

“Who is it?”  Ennis bellowed against the sound of the wind, hoping that whomever, whatever was outside could hear him.  No answer.  No knocking sound, either.  He shrugged and turned away from his door.  KNOCK!  Again, a rap at his door - disembodied -chilling!  Ennis couldn’t hear the footsteps of a visitor for the volume of the wind.  He rushed to the door and flung it open.  No one there.  Nothing but the dust, the inky dark, the wind.  The road was a vacant strip.  Ennis closed the door.  Turning to prepare for bed, he felt it.  A gossamer breath on his neck, a tiny tap on his shoulder.  He turned on a dime, terrified now.  No one in back of him.  His door was shut tight and locked.  No one could have come in; no one walked past him.  Ennis stood very still, hoped he wouldn’t be sick.  He knew he wasn’t alone, sensed an entity standing right in front of him.  The “thing” stood between Ennis and his front door.  No other way out of the trailer.  A familiar smell, that of sweat and aftershave, a manly scent that Ennis recognized.  He knew who had come to call.

“I don’t want you here, Jack fucking Twist!”  Ennis shouted at the empty space right in front of him.  In his heart he knew that Jack had come to him, but his mind couldn’t fully grasp what he felt in his heart.  Ennis was not prepared to see Jack.  Hell, he couldn’t see him.  But Jack could be felt: a coldness that chilled him to the bone. 

“Please Jack!”  Ennis, almost hysterical now.  “Not now!  Not like this!”  Ennis fell to his knees.  And what happened next Ennis preferred to classify as a dream.  He thought he heard a gasp, a heartbroken sigh.  Just as quickly, the entity was gone.  Ennis eased his way toward his window and glanced outside.  He thought he saw a vague, shadowy hearse floating down the narrow strip of road….

 




Title: Re: The Fortune Teller
Post by: Dagi on October 13, 2007, 03:14:40 am
The Fortune Teller by Susie

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Susie, what a brilliant idea to make the accident be a consequence of a curse...! And you said you aren´t good at writing spooky stories...rubbish! I can´t wait for the next one, honey, keep them coming!

Dagi :-*
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on October 13, 2007, 03:16:43 am
Yes ... I often have that affect on people!!   :P

Sleep tight Dagi dear! :-*

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)




Now you talk rubbish again....I had been out with a friend, and I wanted to do your story justice! Stop dragging yourself down, sweetie.

Dagi
Title: Re: The Fortune Teller
Post by: Dagi on October 13, 2007, 03:29:55 am
Hi there Susie sweetheart,

I read your story earlier this afternoon and I was all set to comment on it when Pokey IMed me.  He was in yet another chatty mood, and we were at it for over an hour.  Don't know what's gotten into him lately.  He usually will only talk to me five minutes at a time.

Anyway... I so wanted to say something about your spooky story before you went off to bed.   :(  I know how everyone is anxious to get some feedback when they post a new story, and I really wanted to give you some, but by the time I was finished with Pokey I needed to do some errands before it got too late.

I loved your story.  It's so delightfully creepy.  Ennis's no account father sure got his just desserts.  Feel a bit sorry for Mrs. Del Mar.  Seems she got whacked just for being in the car with her husband at the wrong time.  But of course some would say that it was her job to protect young Ennis from his father.  We don't know much about her, but it seems she didn't do much to persuade Ennis that he was loved and that he should be himself.

Thanks for the great read, and thanks so much for getting into the holiday spirit.  I love Halloween!   ;D

Gary


Hey Susie,

I start getting the impression we´ll have to write a story about our boys travelling to Thailand if we want to ever be able to compete with Pokey. ;D

Dagi

Title: Re: From Beyond
Post by: Dagi on October 13, 2007, 03:35:45 am
From Beyond by Littlewing1957

Ennis sat at his small table and poured over the bills.  He made a pile of bills to get in the mail right away, and a pile for those that could be paid later.  His heat was turned off for lack of payment, and Ennis sat huddled in blankets to keep warm.  Late October, and while not exactly freezing, it was cold outside.  It was cold inside, as well.  The bills all sorted, Ennis pulled the blankets tightly across his shoulders.  He was almost accustomed to the loneliness, but this night he experienced an almost unknown feeling: one of fear.

Ennis didn’t know why he was so afraid.  He listened to the night.  All quiet; too quiet.  Except for the wind.  To Ennis the wind didn’t count – it was always raging, rattling his trailer.  The wind was so familiar that he often ignored it, took the hissing for granted.  But not this night.  KNOCK!  There, he heard it!  Ennis jumped at the sound of a knock at his door.  He wasn’t expecting anyone.  Ennis moved to his front door on wary feet.  KNOCK KNOCK!  Again, Ennis heard it. 

“Who is it?”  Ennis bellowed against the sound of the wind, hoping that whomever, whatever was outside could hear him.  No answer.  No knocking sound, either.  He shrugged and turned away from his door.  KNOCK!  Again, a rap at his door - disembodied -chilling!  Ennis couldn’t hear the footsteps of a visitor for the volume of the wind.  He rushed to the door and flung it open.  No one there.  Nothing but the dust, the inky dark, the wind.  The road was a vacant strip.  Ennis closed the door.  Turning to prepare for bed, he felt it.  A gossamer breath on his neck, a tiny tap on his shoulder.  He turned on a dime, terrified now.  No one in back of him.  His door was shut tight and locked.  No one could have come in; no one walked past him.  Ennis stood very still, hoped he wouldn’t be sick.  He knew he wasn’t alone, sensed an entity standing right in front of him.  The “thing” stood between Ennis and his front door.  No other way out of the trailer.  A familiar smell, that of sweat and aftershave, a manly scent that Ennis recognized.  He knew who had come to call.

“I don’t want you here, Jack fucking Twist!”  Ennis shouted at the empty space right in front of him.  In his heart he knew that Jack had come to him, but his mind couldn’t fully grasp what he felt in his heart.  Ennis was not prepared to see Jack.  Hell, he couldn’t see him.  But Jack could be felt: a coldness that chilled him to the bone. 

“Please Jack!”  Ennis, almost hysterical now.  “Not now!  Not like this!”  Ennis fell to his knees.  And what happened next Ennis preferred to classify as a dream.  He thought he heard a gasp, a heartbroken sigh.  Just as quickly, the entity was gone.  Ennis eased his way toward his window and glanced outside.  He thought he saw a vague, shadowy hearse floating down the narrow strip of road….

 






I never fully understood Gary´s love for scary things...but I start loving it, too! Wow, that was creepy... :o I think I might have to put on a jacket, it has gotten cold in here!

Dagi
Title: E&J&J
Post by: Dagi on October 13, 2007, 07:40:37 am
Here we go......Dagi's contribution to the new series. Since I know that I'm not good at scary stuff I didn't even try to make it scary....hope it fits in nevertheless.


E&J&J by Dagi


The cheap, old bed was creaking rhythmically, but neither this noise nor the sound of the wind howling around the trailer could drown out the grunts and moans coming from the two men jouncing the mattress. Ennis tilted his head back, about to come, when he suddenly more sensed then saw a movement at the head of the bed. He opened his eyes – and froze. Jim looked up, a puzzled look on his face.
” Ennis, come on....don't stop now...I'm almost there....” He waited for Ennis to go on pumping his ass, but the man kept staring at a point somewhere behind him, an odd expression on his face, something between disbelieve and utter horror, mixed with......amusement?

An hour later, when Jim had gone home – the creepy moment somehow made him prefer to sleep in his own trailer that night – Ennis looked around, partly hoping, partly fearing Jack might show up again, but there was nothing and nobody, he was as alone as he had always been since Jack's death.
What had amused him when he saw Jack sitting there at the head of his bed when he was about to shoot his load into his friend's body was the aroused, yes aroused expression of Jack's face: blushed cheeks, lips parted, eyes dizzy, and he could swear he had heard a low moan coming from this ghost's throat, although that was not really possible, was it?
“Jack fuckin Twist....never figured you for a voyeur...” he chuckled, threw his head back and laughed.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on October 13, 2007, 07:56:49 am


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 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: I think that could be helpful sometimes.....

Dagi :-*
Title: Re: The Fortune Teller
Post by: Dagi on October 13, 2007, 08:00:17 am
Why thank you Dagi dear  :-*.  I can't take full credit for it though.  I remember my best friend writing something spooky about a curse when we were about 13.  I changed and adapted it for Mr and Mrs Del Mar.  Shows I've got a good memory though!!  ;D

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)




Girls and guys, it's time to mark this day in the calendar! Susie's publicly made a positive remark about herself.  ;D

Dagi

Title: Re: E&J&J
Post by: Dagi on October 13, 2007, 08:39:33 am
Absolutely brilliant Dagi!!  Juicy, sexy and funny, and just a little bit creepy too!! And great minds think alike ... I was cooking up something similar (I'll have to head in another direction).

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Thank you, my friend! And the great minds comment was already the second positive remark today! Ta-daaa!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on October 13, 2007, 08:42:10 am
Right you are .... that's going to be my official Dagi smiley from now on .....  :-*

Now I come across as the completely humorless and stupid person that never gets it... :-\


Dagi :(

just teasing...
Title: Re: E&J&J
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 13, 2007, 12:20:59 pm
Here we go......Dagi's contribution to the new series. Since I know that I'm not good at scary stuff I didn't even try to make it scary....hope it fits in nevertheless.


E&J&J by Dagi


The cheap, old bed was creaking rhythmically, but neither this noise nor the sound of the wind howling around the trailer could drown out the grunts and moans coming from the two men jouncing the mattress. Ennis tilted his head back, about to come, when he suddenly more sensed then saw a movement at the head of the bed. He opened his eyes – and froze. Jim looked up, a puzzled look on his face.
” Ennis, come on....don't stop now...I'm almost there....” He waited for Ennis to go on pumping his ass, but the man kept staring at a point somewhere behind him, an odd expression on his face, something between disbelieve and utter horror, mixed with......amusement?

An hour later, when Jim had gone home – the creepy moment somehow made him prefer to sleep in his own trailer that night – Ennis looked around, partly hoping, partly fearing Jack might show up again, but there was nothing and nobody, he was as alone as he had always been since Jack's death.
What had amused him when he saw Jack sitting there at the head of his bed when he was about to shoot his load into his friend's body was the aroused, yes aroused expression of Jack's face: blushed cheeks, lips parted, eyes dizzy, and he could swear he had heard a low moan coming from this ghost's throat, although that was not really possible, was it?
“Jack fuckin Twist....never figured you for a voyeur...” he chuckled, threw his head back and laughed.

Dagi, this is brilliant!  What a powerful mix of scary and sexy!  I love the idea of Jack looking in on Ennis while he s making love.  And the very thought of Ennis having a friend with benefits is really cool!  I really loved reading through this Dagi!  Wonderful!
Title: Re: E&J&J
Post by: Dagi on October 13, 2007, 12:28:14 pm
So Jack and Ennis finally have their threeway.   ;D  Too bad Jack's only there in spirit.  Jack would have talked Jim into staying for round two.   :P

The idea of Jack showing up when Ennis is about to release is very unsettling.  But somehow I kind of like the fact that in your story ol' Ennis is up for a casual romp with a neighbor.  It indicates he's made lots of progress.  (Well, some might say he's become a slut, but that's preferable to being a lonely sad sack.)

Gary

Morning sweetheart. Yes, Ennis made a lot of progress...and didn´t I indicate that there are nights when Jim stays with Ennis?

Dagi
Title: Re: E&J&J
Post by: Dagi on October 13, 2007, 12:30:27 pm
Dagi, this is brilliant!  What a powerful mix of scary and sexy!  I love the idea of Jack looking in on Ennis while he s making love.  And the very thought of Ennis having a friend with benefits is really cool!  I really loved reading through this Dagi!  Wonderful!

Thank you, Marie! I wanted to contribute, but I´m not so good at no-sex stories, so I decided to let Jack have some fun.  ;D

Dagi
Title: Re: The Ledend of Georgina Bolton
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 13, 2007, 05:14:16 pm
The Legend of Georgina Bolton by garycottle


Gary, I can't tell you how much I enjoyed reading this!  Expertly written, and as sexy as it is scary!  This is one I will read over and over.  I love the interaction between J&E, and the story behind the house?  Perfect!  Do it again, Gary!  You're a master!  :)
Title: Re: The Ledend of Georgina Bolton
Post by: Dagi on October 13, 2007, 09:39:11 pm
The Legend of Georgina Bolton by garycottle


After having a nightmare I thought I needed a little distraction, have a look whether someone has posted a story, read a little and settle down enough to be able to sleep again. Maybe that was the wrong sort of story....
One can tell you´ve watched quite a few horror movies, my dear. I admit it was scary, and although I don´t like horror movies, I´m not easily scared by something written. But after dreaming that my little one fell down the stairs and died in my arms, it was the part about Ennis being aware of the time passing that really gripped my heart.

Dagi
Title: Re: The Ledend of Georgina Bolton
Post by: Dagi on October 13, 2007, 10:20:34 pm
Thanks for taking the time to read my efforts, Dagi.  Sorry if it wasn't comforting to you after your nightmare.  But of course I did give fair warning.   ;D  And what's this stuff about you can tell I've watched a lot of horror movies?  Are you saying my story is derivative?   :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

Gary

 :laugh: Isn't everything we write kind of derivative from what we've seen, read, watched, experienced, dreamed, thought...?
Title: Re: E&J&J
Post by: Dagi on October 13, 2007, 10:31:15 pm
Hi Dagi,

I've already commented on this story, but after reading over my post I see that I failed to actually say that I really liked your story.  If Jack was going to haunt Ennis I suspect he'd come around when Ennis was with another man.  But what really got to me was that Ennis was doing the big nasty with this Jim guy, and it seems like he does it fairly regularly, and that neither one of them seem to think that it's a big deal.  I love that!  It shows that Ennis has opened up, accepted who he is, and is enjoying his life.   Go Ennis!  :D

Gary

 :) Thank you, sweetie. I couldn't bring myself to write about tenderness between them, but at least they do the wild thing, huh?

Dagi
Title: Re: The Ledend of Georgina Bolton
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 14, 2007, 12:50:44 am


Hey, maybe it would be interesting if Daniel and Tyler discovered the Bolton place?   :laugh:

Gary

I would most certainly be interested!  Sounds good to me!
Title: Re: The Ledend of Georgina Bolton
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 14, 2007, 12:51:39 am
After having a nightmare I thought I needed a little distraction, have a look whether someone has posted a story, read a little and settle down enough to be able to sleep again. Maybe that was the wrong sort of story....
One can tell you´ve watched quite a few horror movies, my dear. I admit it was scary, and although I don´t like horror movies, I´m not easily scared by something written. But after dreaming that my little one fell down the stairs and died in my arms, it was the part about Ennis being ware of the time passing that really gipped my heart.

Dagi

Awwwww Dagi????
Title: Foretold?
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 14, 2007, 02:20:23 am
Foretold? by Littlewing1957

A young Jack Twist walked past the grieving plain every day on his way to school.  The things he often saw there would have leveled a lesser sort, but Jack remembered his mom telling him that he will be able to “see” things.  Jack’s mom said he was born with a veil over his face, a thin membrane that the doctors had to remove.  Mrs. Twist said that Jack was special, had the ability to see into the next world.  Jack believed her the first time he passed by the grieving plain.

Jack generally hurried past the cemetery and tried to keep his eyes straight on the road ahead.  But being young, his curiosity always got the better of him.  Jack looked over at the headstones and saw, as clear as day, Lester Wolfe standing near a gravestone.  Poor Lester died when he was only 29 years old in a car accident.  Jack watched as Lester, all decked out in his Sunday best, including a top hat and gloves, gestured to him.  Lester waved and wagged a finger at Jack, smiling all the while.  Lester’s scrawny face was chalk white, his smile toothless.  Jack stopped walking and looked at the specter.  He shook his head no and kept walking.  Nothing to do but accept his “gift.”  Jack was accustomed to seeing spirits walking around the grieving plain.  Most of them were folks he knew, but some were strangers to him.  Jack always saw Grace Bailey, a 5 year old killed by a hit-and-run driver.  Grace lived 3 farms away, but his family was friendly with the Bailey clan.  Jack attended Gracie’s funeral, and seeing at her all laid out, he thought she looked just like a doll on Sears’ shelf.  The funeral gave Jack nightmares for some time, and seeing Grace now, sitting atop her headstone, hands in her lap, her pretty dress dirt stained, well, it disturbed Jack.  He had to look away when Grace stared at him, began to cry and ask for her mommy.  Jack ran all the way to school whenever he saw Grace’s spirit.

The sightings were getting too much for 10 year old Jack, but he had to get to school.  His folks couldn’t drive him there, and to walk past the grieving plain was the fastest way to the schoolhouse.  One fine day Jack passed by the plain and noticed a service in progress.  Young children strayed from the gathering and were jumping and playing among some of the graves.  A lively young boy jumped from one space to another, and with every leap Jack felt a definite chill.  He stopped in his tracks and watched the child jump from place to place.  And Jack felt chilled to the bone whenever the kid landed.  He remembered his mother saying that she got a chill whenever someone walked on her grave!  Jack didn’t know what was happening, but somehow he had to see the part of the grieving plain where the child was playing.  He made his way over, and when the children saw Jack’s approach, they backed away and joined the others.  Jack noticed how the chills stopped when the children moved away.  He looked at the spot where the lad was jumping and leaping.  The land was untouched, but he watched in amazement as a small cross materialized in the dirt on the plot.  It was shadowy, almost transparent, but as Jack approached, he was able to make out the wording.  The cross read:

John M. Twist
November 3, 1943 – June 4, 1982

Jack looked up from the cross and felt Lester standing beside him.  Lester pointed to Jack’s grave: his modest cross for a headstone with his gloved hand.  Jack nodded sadly and watched as Lester slowly disappeared.  Jack turned and resumed the walk to school.  He always felt that he wasn’t long for this Earth, and if he was to die so young, he vowed to live life on his terms – give himself every moment!
Title: Re: The Ledend of Georgina Bolton
Post by: Dagi on October 14, 2007, 07:45:16 am
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Hey, maybe it would be interesting if Daniel and Tyler discovered the Bolton place?   :laugh:

I would most certainly be interested!  Sounds good to me!


Oh please, Gary, write about them again!

Dagi
Title: Re: Foretold?
Post by: Dagi on October 14, 2007, 07:54:13 am
Foretold? by Littlewing1957

A young Jack Twist walked past the grieving plain every day on his way to school.  The things he often saw there would have leveled a lesser sort, but Jack remembered his mom telling him that he will be able to “see” things.  Jack’s mom said he was born with a veil over his face, a thin membrane that the doctors had to remove.  Mrs. Twist said that Jack was special, had the ability to see into the next world.  Jack believed her the first time he passed by the grieving plain.

Jack generally hurried past the cemetery and tried to keep his eyes straight on the road ahead.  But being young, his curiosity always got the better of him.  Jack looked over at the headstones and saw, as clear as day, Lester Wolfe standing near a gravestone.  Poor Lester died when he was only 29 years old in a car accident.  Jack watched as Lester, all decked out in his Sunday best, including a top hat and gloves, gestured to him.  Lester waved and wagged a finger at Jack, smiling all the while.  Lester’s scrawny face was chalk white, his smile toothless.  Jack stopped walking and looked at the specter.  He shook his head no and kept walking.  Nothing to do but accept his “gift.”  Jack was accustomed to seeing spirits walking around the grieving plain.  Most of them were folks he knew, but some were strangers to him.  Jack always saw Grace Bailey, a 5 year old killed by a hit-and-run driver.  Grace lived 3 farms away, but his family was friendly with the Bailey clan.  Jack attended Gracie’s funeral, and seeing at her all laid out, he thought she looked just like a doll on Sears’ shelf.  The funeral gave Jack nightmares for some time, and seeing Grace now, sitting atop her headstone, hands in her lap, her pretty dress dirt stained, well, it disturbed Jack.  He had to look away when Grace stared at him, began to cry and ask for her mommy.  Jack ran all the way to school whenever he saw Grace’s spirit.

The sightings were getting too much for 10 year old Jack, but he had to get to school.  His folks couldn’t drive him there, and to walk past the grieving plain was the fastest way to the schoolhouse.  One fine day Jack passed by the plain and noticed a service in progress.  Young children strayed from the gathering and were jumping and playing among some of the graves.  A lively young boy jumped from one space to another, and with every leap Jack felt a definite chill.  He stopped in his tracks and watched the child jump from place to place.  And Jack felt chilled to the bone whenever the kid landed.  He remembered his mother saying that she got a chill whenever someone walked on her grave!  Jack didn’t know what was happening, but somehow he had to see the part of the grieving plain where the child was playing.  He made his way over, and when the children saw Jack’s approach, they backed away and joined the others.  Jack noticed how the chills stopped when the children moved away.  He looked at the spot where the lad was jumping and leaping.  The land was untouched, but he watched in amazement as a small cross materialized in the dirt on the plot.  It was shadowy, almost transparent, but as Jack approached, he was able to make out the wording.  The cross read:

John M. Twist
November 3, 1943 – June 4, 1982

Jack looked up from the cross and felt Lester standing beside him.  Lester pointed to Jack’s grave: his modest cross for a headstone with his gloved hand.  Jack nodded sadly and watched as Lester slowly disappeared.  Jack turned and resumed the walk to school.  He always felt that he wasn’t long for this Earth, and if he was to die so young, he vowed to live life on his terms – give himself every moment!


Brilliant, Littlewing, you sure have a talent for creepy stories, my dear! I saw everything as if I were right there. Even the dirt stains on Gracie´s dress...

Dagi
Title: Re: Foretold?
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 14, 2007, 05:22:28 pm
Hi there Littlewing,

Well, it's a good thing that I don't live in West Virginia anymore.  When I was back there I often walked in the cemetery not far from my house.  I went there several times a week.  And usually I was completely alone.  Or was I?   :laugh:  If I went there now I'd be thinking of your story, and I'd constantly be looking over my shoulder.

This had a very creepy feel, and most esepcially the last part that was reminiscent of Dickens.

Gary

Thanks, Gary.  Speaking of Dickens, I just love A Christmas Carol, and own just about every production ever made on DVD and VHS.  I think A Christmas carol is the scariest thing I've ever seen.  I'm frightened all during the holidays, as I watch a different version of the story practically every day.  Even the Muppets Christmas Carol has me turning on every light in the house!
Title: Re: Foretold?
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 14, 2007, 05:23:45 pm
Brilliant, Littlewing, you sure have a talent for creepy stories, my dear! I saw everything as if I were right there. Even the dirt stains on Gracie´s dress...

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi.  I'm working on another scary tale that I hope to post tomorrow.
Title: Re: Foretold?
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 15, 2007, 12:23:05 am
Very creepy littlewing ... you're brilliant and scaring the begeebers out of me!  (http://content.sweetim.com/sim/cpie/emoticons/00020120.gif)

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

SusieBaby, I sacred myself!  I was writing this all the while waiting for my daughter to call for a ride.  I had my cell phone next to the keyboard, and my haunted, 100+ year old house was unusually quiet.  All of the sudden, while I was typing away about Jack in the grieving plain, the cell phone rang and I almost jumped out of my skin!  :laugh:
Title: Re: Sweet Dreams
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 15, 2007, 12:24:52 am
Sweet Dreams by Susie


Jack wrapped his arms around his lover, stroking his chest, his stomach, his groin, his thighs, Ennis' flesh tingling under his touch.

"Hmmmmm...."  the soft sound came from deep within Ennis' throat, turning sleepily into his lovers embrace, seeking out warm moist lips, kissing, licking, searching.  Ennis' eyes filled with tears, tears of love. 

"S'alright.... s'alright...."  Jack breathed, those precious words echoing in Ennis' ears.   

"Ah, what you do to me Jack...."

"G'night Ennis.... sweet dreams."  and with those gentle words, Ennis felt Jack's warm breath fade into the night, as he drifted into peaceful slumber.



Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

So beautiful, Susie.  And a great departure from our scary stories.  I think I'll write a sexy, hot tale before I post a scary one.  Beautiful writing, Sweets!  Read on..
Title: Kisses
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 15, 2007, 12:45:30 am
Kisses by Littlewing1957

Jack was about to curl up on the bear skin rug when Ennis walked over and lowered himself to the floor.  He spread Jack’s limber body to the full length of the rug and gently placed his head on the stuffed head of the bear.  Jack smiled as Ennis climbed atop him and slowly ran his fingers through Jack’s thinning hair.  Ennis lifted Jack’s chin just a tilt and lowered his mouth in an expansive kiss.

Ennis was silent as he gazed on his lover’s serene countenance.  Jack spread his arms wide, encouraged Ennis to lace his fingers with his own. 

“Am I too heavy?”  Ennis asked as he kissed Jack’s chin.  Jack was too moved to answer right away.  He wanted to feel Ennis’ mouth. 

“No, Cowboy,” Jack stammered softly.  “You’re okay.  Just stay here with me.”  Ennis smiled timidly and kissed Jack on the side of his full mouth.  Jack lay still as Ennis started the kisses up high on his forehead, trailed his cheeks, his sharp jaw – kissing! Kissing. 

“That Ennis is sure a sexy senior citizen!”  Jack thought as he marveled at Ennis' prowess at 65 years old.  Jack was the same age, of course, and was aware of health problems and challenges of seniors. He liked to keep abreast of newfangled terms for illnesses and treatments.  As Ennis continued his smooches, Jack thought the following:

“Blood pressure lowering, serotonin levels rising!  At this rate, we’ll live forever.”  Jack began to kiss back, pulling Ennis closer!

“Never stop kissing me!”  Jack breathed into Ennis’ warm mouth.  It was a request that Ennis though he could honor.
Title: Re: Sweet Dreams
Post by: Dagi on October 15, 2007, 02:53:01 am
Sweet Dreams by Susie


Jack wrapped his arms around his lover, stroking his chest, his stomach, his groin, his thighs, Ennis' flesh tingling under his touch.

"Hmmmmm...."  the soft sound came from deep within Ennis' throat, turning sleepily into his lovers embrace, seeking out warm moist lips, kissing, licking, searching.  Ennis' eyes filled with tears, tears of love. 

"S'alright.... s'alright...."  Jack breathed, those precious words echoing in Ennis' ears.   

"Ah, what you do to me Jack...."

"G'night Ennis.... sweet dreams."  and with those gentle words, Ennis felt Jack's warm breath fade into the night, as he drifted into peaceful slumber.



Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Yummie, that was a sweet and sexy moment, Susie dear.....""Ah, what you do to me Jack...."

Dagi
Title: Re: Kisses
Post by: Dagi on October 15, 2007, 02:58:42 am
Kisses by Littlewing1957

Jack was about to curl up on the bear skin rug when Ennis walked over and lowered himself to the floor.  He spread Jack’s limber body to the full length of the rug and gently placed his head on the stuffed head of the bear.  Jack smiled as Ennis climbed atop him and slowly ran his fingers through Jack’s thinning hair.  Ennis lifted Jack’s chin just a tilt and lowered his mouth in an expansive kiss.

Ennis was silent as he gazed on his lover’s serene countenance.  Jack spread his arms wide, encouraged Ennis to lace his fingers with his own. 

“Am I too heavy?”  Ennis asked as he kissed Jack’s chin.  Jack was too moved to answer right away.  He wanted to feel Ennis’ mouth. 

“No, Cowboy,” Jack stammered softly.  “You’re okay.  Just stay here with me.”  Ennis smiled timidly and kissed Jack on the side of his full mouth.  Jack lay still as Ennis started the kisses up high on his forehead, trailed his cheeks, his sharp jaw – kissing! Kissing. 

“That Ennis is sure a sexy senior citizen!”  Jack thought as he marveled at Ennis' prowess at 65 years old.  Jack was the same age, of course, and was aware of health problems and challenges of seniors. He liked to keep abreast of newfangled terms for illnesses and treatments.  As Ennis continued his smooches, Jack thought the following:

“Blood pressure lowering, serotonin levels rising!  At this rate, we’ll live forever.”  Jack began to kiss back, pulling Ennis closer!

“Never stop kissing me!”  Jack breathed into Ennis’ warm mouth.  It was a request that Ennis though he could honor.


Kissing is about the hottest thing on earth in my humble opinion......I´m licking my lips just thinking of Ennis kissing Jack on a bear skin rug...very sensual, Littlewing!

Dagi
Title: Re: Foretold?
Post by: Dagi on October 15, 2007, 06:22:38 am
SusieBaby, I sacred myself!  I was writing this all the while waiting for my daughter to call for a ride.  I had my cell phone next to the keyboard, and my haunted, 100+ year old house was unusually quiet.  All of the sudden, while I was typing away about Jack in the grieving plain, the cell phone rang and I almost jumped out of my skin!  :laugh:


You see, Gary, you are not the only native speaker who makes really funny misspellings.  ;D :laugh: Sorry, Marie.  ;D
Title: Re: Kisses
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 15, 2007, 09:46:41 pm
Kissing is about the hottest thing on earth in my humble opinion......I´m licking my lips just thinking of Ennis kissing Jack on a bear skin rug...very sensual, Littlewing!

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi!  I agree about kissing!  I also think a person really has to be into you if he/she wants to kiss.  Kissing is very intimate, affectionate!  :-*
Title: Re: Foretold?
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 15, 2007, 09:47:43 pm
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BOOOOOOOOOO!
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Susie, you're funny!  I love the spiders!
Title: Re: Foretold?
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 15, 2007, 09:49:18 pm

You see, Gary, you are not the only native speaker who makes really funny misspellings.  ;D :laugh: Sorry, Marie.  ;D


Oops!  And I didn't even catch it!  :laugh:  I try to be so careful!  ;D
Title: Re: Kisses
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 15, 2007, 09:53:52 pm
  I think that if Jack had lived ol' Ennis would have pulled his head out of his ass sometime in the '80's and made the plunge, don't you?

Gary

I think so, Gary!  I think Ennis was trying to do better by Jack after the final lake scene - the final fight.  I think Ennis was beginning to realize that he could lose Jack, and not in the way that it actually happened.  Yes, if Jack had lived, I think the story would have a different ending.
Title: Re: The Visitor
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 15, 2007, 09:57:20 pm
The Visitor by Susiebell


He woke with a start.  It was a warm Summer's night and yet there was an icy chill in the air, a strange vibration that tingled against his clammy flesh.  Glancing down at his wife sleeping peacefully, then towards the window, lace curtains billowing in the moonlight, a figure suddenly appeared from out of the shadows.  Just the outline was visible at first, then as the curtains moved and swayed, his features became clearer; desperate sad eyes, grey chipped teeth, lips mouthing the word "....why?" over and over.

His eyes were drawn down over the man's torso to a stain, the deepest red, spreading from his groin, over the front of his jeans, and dripping down his leg onto the floor.

The figure moved towards him in a single smooth motion, hovering for a moment, his voice getting louder and louder, the pitch higher and higher, "... why? .... WHY? ........WHY?"

He felt a sudden searing pain in his own groin, and looking down, saw to his horror that where his dick should be, was a gaping hole slowly oozing blood.  The thick hot fluid spread over the surface of his pajama and onto the bed sheets.  Screaming, he grabbed the nearest object, a glass vase, and hurled it towards the floating figure, crashing it into the wall.

"Willard Del Mar!!  What on earth is going on?"  Mrs Del Mar, hands shaking violently, pulled the lamp switch, flooding the room with light.

"You can't keep on like this every night."  she cried, her voice trembling with fear, "Please tell me what's goin' on.  What's happened to make you like this?"

Mr Del Mar, rolled over, pulling the blanket high over his shivering sweaty body and screwed his eyes shut tight.  "Go back to sleep Minnie..... " he muttered, tears rolling down his cheeks, his hand clasped protectively around his sticky erect member.




Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Brilliant, Susiebaby!  If OMT committed poor Earl's murder, it serves him right.  And you beat me to it!  ;)  I had a story about Earl brewing in my tiny brain, but I couldn't find an angle.  I like your tale, though.  Lovely writing, my dear, and scary as hell.  You are good at this!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 15, 2007, 09:59:24 pm
(http://content.sweetim.com/sim/cpie/emoticons/0002014B.gif) 4,000 Posts on Jack with Ennis! (http://content.sweetim.com/sim/cpie/emoticons/00020059.gif)

(http://content.sweetim.com/sim/cpie/emoticons/0002014D.gif) Congratulations Guys!!! (http://content.sweetim.com/sim/cpie/emoticons/0002005C.gif)

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Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



Alright!  So are we still one of the most active threads on the site?  Happy 4,000 posts, everyone!  And I'm not tired yet!  No, not by a long shot!
Title: Re: The Visitor
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 15, 2007, 10:00:20 pm
Hahaha!  Thanks honey! (http://content.sweetim.com/sim/cpie/emoticons/00020154.gif) Did I go a tad too far with this one?  Littlewing said "Make it Scary", so you can blame it on her!! (http://content.sweetim.com/sim/cpie/emoticons/0002005A.gif)

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



You didn't go too far!  It was just right!
Title: One Night on the Trail
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 15, 2007, 10:31:31 pm
One Night on the Trail by Littlewing1957

One chilly day up in the mountains, Jack and Ennis were hiking after a particularly heavy and satisfying lunch.  They left the horses right at the beginning of the trail, fully expecting to make it back to them well before nightfall.  But once Jack began a slow climb up a small hill, his well formed butt straining his jeans, Ennis couldn’t help himself.  He took Jack right there on the spot!  After they were cleaned up a bit, the grinning pair found that night had fallen.  They made their way down, walking slowly, trying hard to retrace their steps.  The mountain was as dark as the grave, but Ennis and Jack were experienced campers, and knew the area like the back of their hands.  But navigating the terrain in the dark was a challenge.

Jack whistled a happy tune as he walked hand-in-hand with his lover down the hiking trail.  Ennis thought back to the time up on Brokeback when Jack held his hand whenever he could.  The memory made Ennis glow.  He squeezed Jack’s hand and they continued on.

It was getting cold – colder even than Ennis and Jack anticipated.  They could have kicked themselves for leaving the heavy coats back at camp, but they planned to be back before nightfall.  Jack walked a few paces ahead of Ennis, but slowed his steps when he felt a blast of ice cold air!  And in a split second, 3 eerie figures rose from the earth with a piercing cry, and just as fast as they materialized, they descended back into the ground.  Ennis screamed as Jack fell back into his arms.  They both saw the entities!  The apparitions appeared to be men who were dressed in period clothes: late 1800s it seemed, and they seemed to glow red and yellow.

“Rodeo, did you see that?”  Ennis asked Jack as he held him up.  Jack found his footing and took a few steps back.

“You saw it too?”  Jack spoke softly.  “I thought I was losing my mind!  What the hell was that?”  Ennis didn’t want to admit that he was afraid, but he pulled Jack close.

“I don’t know, Jack, but I’ve heard some strange stories about this place,” Ennis began.  “I heard tell of travelers being killed for their belongings, and my dad used to talk about 3 guys being beaten to death in these parts.”  Jack was a believer in ghosts, and Ennis’ story did little to calm his now fragile nerves.

“Well, I wish you had told me, Cowboy!”  Jack said evenly.  “We could a found another spot to hike.  I don’t like being surprised like this.  C’mon, En, let’s get back to the horses before the spirits decide they like us and want to come back for a little visit!” 

Ennis agreed with Jack.  They quickened the pace, but were still careful as they traveled in the dark.  Once they reached the horses, Jack mounted his mare and watched as Ennis did the same.

“You know, Cowboy,” Jack serious now.  “My ma says that when a body experiences a bad trauma, especially one that results in death, the spirit may get trapped on Earth, sometimes in the form of an inanimate object.”  Ennis looked at his lover.

“Why are you telling me this, Jack?”  Ennis asked, a bit irritated now.

“No reason,” Jack stated.  “Just seemed appropriate under the circumstances.  C’mon, I’ll race you back to camp!”
Title: Re: The Visitor
Post by: Dagi on October 16, 2007, 03:01:05 am
The Visitor by Susiebell


He woke with a start.  It was a warm Summer's night and yet there was an icy chill in the air, a strange vibration that tingled against his clammy flesh.  Glancing down at his wife sleeping peacefully, then towards the window, lace curtains billowing in the moonlight, a figure suddenly appeared from out of the shadows.  Just the outline was visible at first, then as the curtains moved and swayed, his features became clearer; desperate sad eyes, grey chipped teeth, lips mouthing the word "....why?" over and over.

His eyes were drawn down over the man's torso to a stain, the deepest red, spreading from his groin, over the front of his jeans, and dripping down his leg onto the floor.

The figure moved towards him in a single smooth motion, hovering for a moment, his voice getting louder and louder, the pitch higher and higher, "... why? .... WHY? ........WHY?"

He felt a sudden searing pain in his own groin, and looking down, saw to his horror that where his dick should be, was a gaping hole slowly oozing blood.  The thick hot fluid spread over the surface of his pajama and onto the bed sheets.  Screaming, he grabbed the nearest object, a glass vase, and hurled it towards the floating figure, crashing it into the wall.

"Willard Del Mar!!  What on earth is going on?"  Mrs Del Mar, hands shaking violently, pulled the lamp switch, flooding the room with light.

"You can't keep on like this every night."  she cried, her voice trembling with fear, "Please tell me what's goin' on.  What's happened to make you like this?"

Mr Del Mar, rolled over, pulling the blanket high over his shivering sweaty body and screwed his eyes shut tight.  "Go back to sleep Minnie..... " he muttered, tears rolling down his cheeks, his hand clasped protectively around his sticky erect member.




Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Why on earth did you think you aren´t good at writing scary stories? Give us more! Yeeehaaaw, Bastard DelMar getting his punishment! Well done, honey bun. ;D

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on October 16, 2007, 03:03:05 am
I just checked my stats Gary .. nearly  1,000 of those posts are MINE!!  :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:  I have got to learn to keep my big gob shut!!   (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/10/10_5_2.gif)

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Why´s that I´m not surprised?  :laugh:

Just found this on a thread (Funny expressions): She could talk underwater, with a mouth full of marbles!

 ;) Dagi

Title: Re: One Night on the Trail
Post by: Dagi on October 16, 2007, 03:18:41 am
One Night on the Trail by Littlewing1957

....... the spirit may get trapped on Earth, sometimes in the form of an inanimate object.”  Ennis looked at his lover.

“Why are you telling me this, Jack?”  Ennis asked, a bit irritated now.

“No reason,” Jack stated.  “Just seemed appropriate under the circumstances.  C’mon, I’ll race you back to camp!”


Good one, Littlewing! And Jack and Ennis forgetting about time because of their passion -  ;D...

Dagi
Title: Re: One Night on the Trail
Post by: Dagi on October 16, 2007, 03:21:34 am
Hi Littlewing.  Another great spooky story.  Thanks so much for keeping the series going.  You know I'm loving it. 

You also know that I love to camp.  But after having read your story, I have to admit something.  Being out in the woods at night can be creepy.  Some might be afarid of bears, or afraid of getting lost, etc.  But being out in nature, and seeing how large it is, and how small I am, I'm always reminded of how much I don't see or understand.  So when I'm out in a tent late at night it's not the obvious dangers of the wilderness that gets to me, it's the unknown and the unknowable.

Gary

Reading this, I almost hope we come across a bear, rather than something unknown or unknowable!  :o

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on October 16, 2007, 07:20:18 am
Hey! (http://content.sweetim.com/sim/cpie/emoticons/0002007E.gif)... yeah you're right, who am I kidding!!  (http://content.sweetim.com/sim/cpie/emoticons/00020146.gif) ... but you wouldn't want me any other way!!   (http://content.sweetim.com/sim/cpie/emoticons/00020153.gif)

Love Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

No we wouldn´t.  ;D Love you, and your smilies!

Title: Re: One Night on the Trail
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 16, 2007, 09:53:16 am
Hi Littlewing.  Another great spooky story.  Thanks so much for keeping the series going.  You know I'm loving it. 

You also know that I love to camp.  But after having read your story, I have to admit something.  Being out in the woods at night can be creepy.  Some might be afarid of bears, or afraid of getting lost, etc.  But being out in nature, and seeing how large it is, and how small I am, I'm always reminded of how much I don't see or understand.  So when I'm out in a tent late at night it's not the obvious dangers of the wilderness that gets to me, it's the unknown and the unknowable.

Gary

I know what you mean, Gary.  I'm sure that Ennis and Jack saw a lot of creepy things up on Brokeback at night.  I think they had to?  Anyway, I love camping as well, even though I've only camped at public sites where one does not have to be an expert camper.  Now places like Yosemite..well..that is a place for experienced campers, IMHO.  The closest I've come to being afraid at night in camp?  Well, we were camping at a lake where racoons ran wild at night, rummaging through trash, even climbing into trucks and cars, stealing food.  It was kind of creepy seeing all those racoon shadows outside the tent, running around, making all that noise in the dead of night.  And think how mad we were the next morning to find that the little buggers took half of our eggs and sausages!
Title: Re: One Night on the Trail
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 16, 2007, 09:54:26 am
Good one, Littlewing! And Jack and Ennis forgetting about time because of their passion -  ;D...

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi!  Good lovin' takes awhile, I guess!  ::)
Title: Re: One Night on the Trail
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 16, 2007, 09:55:31 am
Reading this, I almost hope we come across a bear, rather than something unknown or unknowable!  :o

Dagi

I just hope you guys don't come upon a bear!  Be careful!  :)
Title: Re: The Visitor
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 16, 2007, 09:57:20 am
(I presume you mean OMDM ;D )  Thanks for the compliment Littlewing honey!  :-* Who knew that I could write gay porn AND horror ... now if I could just incorporate the two into one story, I could write myself a novel!!  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_211.gif)

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Sorry, Susie.  I'm so used to writing about OMT.  I'll edit it when I get a chance.  :)  Yes, you're good at gay porn and horror!  Always good to discover a new talent, eh?
Title: Re: One Night on the Trail
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 16, 2007, 09:58:46 am
Ooooh littlewing, superb story in so many ways  :-*

...... First you got me all hot and bothered with Jack's yummy bum straining in his jeans and their sexy romp up on the trail

.... then you reminded me of "His Hand in Mine" and made me feel all soppy and romantic

.... then you scared the whatsits out of me with those eerie ghosts

.... then you've intriged me with that reference to the inanimate object.  Hmmmmmmm  maybe there's more to come .......

Brilliant littlewing!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Thanks, SusieBaby!  There is definitely more to come.  I'm working on a scary tale as we speak!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 16, 2007, 10:21:58 pm
Hey Guys! (http://content.sweetim.com/sim/cpie/emoticons/0002011D.gif)

I've finally finished posting our stories from the Jack with Ennis chapters on IMDB! .... phew!! (http://content.sweetim.com/sim/cpie/emoticons/00020074.gif)

Here's the thread:  http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,12653.0.html


Please take a look and admire our handy work.  It's not a Read-only thread so feel free to add to it.  And let me know if I've made any mistakes ... or if you'd rather I deleted your story!

Right!  I'm off to bed!! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/7/7_11_4.gif)

Love Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)
 

Thanks, Susiebaby!  You're amazing!  :-*
Title: Room 4
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 16, 2007, 10:45:18 pm
Room 4 by Littlewing1957

This tale is running a lot longer than I expected.  I should have it posted complete in 2 or 3 installments.


Jack arrived at Don Wroe’s cabin to see Ennis standing outside.  Ennis didn’t look happy, which meant Jack wasn’t happy.  He prayed that the trip was still on; that he didn’t drive over 1400 miles for nothing.  As he parked, Ennis walked over to Jack’s truck and opened the door for him.  He took Jack’s hand and helped him out.

“I messed up, Rodeo!”  Ennis said in a low, self accusatory voice.  Jack nodded and let him continue.

“I asked Don if we could use the place this week, and he said okay.  But just yesterday he changed his mind.  Somethin’ about relatives coming to visit, and they need a place to stay.”  Ennis wiped his brow.

“We gotta find somewhere else to spend the week, Jack.  Wroe’s folks should be here any time.”
 
“Not your fault, Friend!”  Jack soothed.  He was disappointed, but glad that the trip was still on.

“There must be a reasonably placed hotel or motel here somewhere?”  Jack asked his lover.
 
“Yeah, I know a place,” Ennis began.  “You can follow me over there in the truck.  We had better get a move on, Rodeo,”  Ennis said as he looked around the terrain.

“It’ll be dark soon, and I want to get settled, if you know what I mean!”  Ennis winked at his lover, who blushed in spite of himself.

“Well, lead on, boy!”  Jack, excited now.  “I sure could use a warm bath or shower.  I’m getting kind of hungry too.”  Jack rubbed his ample belly.  “Good thing I didn’t bring any food.  We would have had a hard time putting it up!”  Ennis nodded and climbed into his truck.

The motel was located not 3 miles away from Don Wroe’s cabin.  It was just a stone’s throw from the lake and mountain area where Ennis and Jack planned to hike and hunt.  Jack asked Ennis to park his car around back and he would join him directly.  Jack rented 2 rooms, as he couldn’t be too careful, even out in the middle of nowhere!  The bored clerk handed him keys to the rooms, but Jack noticed that they were quite a few doors apart.  Jack wanted adjacent suites, and when he told the clerk as much, the young man sized him up.

“Mister, all I got is room 2 and room 5 available.” The young man began.“I’ll have to admit that 4 is empty, but I don’t feel right about giving you that room.”  The young man spoke slowly, nervous now.  Jack stared at the young man.

“Why won’t you let us have room 4?”  Jack asked.  “I mean it’s no big deal,” Jack hastened to add, “ I’m just askin.”

“You don’t want to know, mister!” Was the clerk’s reply.  Jack shrugged and pocketed the keys.  He found Ennis around back, and parked his truck next to Ennis’ tiny van.

“Got the keys, Cowboy,” Jack whispered as he threw Ennis keys to room 2.  "I’m in room 5.”  Ennis caught the keys like a champ and walked over to his lover.  He stopped short of kissing Jack, just in case someone was watching.  Wouldn’t do to rile up the locals! 

“Listen cowboy,” Jack whispered as they walked side-by-side to their rooms.  “Let me put my shit away and I’ll come to you.  We can do a little somethin’ and then get a bite to eat.  Or would you rather eat first?”  Ennis thought it over.  He looked at the beautiful Jack Twist, standing there in all his sexiness and his mind was made up.

“We’ll eat later.”  Ennis stated.  Jack stood at room 5 and winked at his lover.  Ennis opened his door and stepped inside.

To be continued…
Title: Re: The Visitor
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 16, 2007, 10:55:40 pm
Oh, how I wish my own talent, such as it is, for gay porn was practical.   >:(  But then again, I'd never get the chance to write anything down.  I'd be too busy acting out the scenes.   :o   :laugh:

Gary

I hear ya, Gary!  :laugh:
Title: Re: The Visitor
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 16, 2007, 11:00:46 pm
It would be better if it was a more practical talent though!  ;D

Well...I guess!  ;)
Title: Re: The Visitor
Post by: Dagi on October 17, 2007, 02:45:42 am
Oh, how I wish my own talent, such as it is, for gay porn was practical.   >:(  But then again, I'd never get the chance to write anything down.  I'd be too busy acting out the scenes.   :o   :laugh:

Gary

According to my experience you men always need a little rest every once in a while....enough time to write anythng down, I guess.  ;D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on October 17, 2007, 02:49:45 am
Hey Guys! (http://content.sweetim.com/sim/cpie/emoticons/0002011D.gif)

I've finally finished posting our stories from the Jack with Ennis chapters on IMDB! .... phew!! (http://content.sweetim.com/sim/cpie/emoticons/00020074.gif)

Here's the thread:  http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,12653.0.html


Please take a look and admire our handy work.  It's not a Read-only thread so feel free to add to it.  And let me know if I've made any mistakes ... or if you'd rather I deleted your story!

Right!  I'm off to bed!! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/7/7_11_4.gif)

Love Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)
 

I guess you deserve a good sleep now! Thanks so much for doing this work. Now if anyone gave me a kick in the ass, I´d be able to update the archive...I´ve been so lazy....
Title: Re: Room 4
Post by: Dagi on October 17, 2007, 06:34:07 am
Room 4 by Littlewing1957

 ........He looked at the beautiful Jack Twist, standing there in all his sexiness and his mind was made up.

“We’ll eat later.”  Ennis stated.  Jack stood at room 5 and winked at his lover.  Ennis opened his door and stepped inside.

To be continued…



MMM sexy, Littelwing, although nothing has happened yet, but just picturing Jack is doing it for me.  ;D   Susie wants to know what happened in room 4? Well first I want to know what happened in room 5!  :P

Dagi
Title: Re: Rude Awakening
Post by: Dagi on October 17, 2007, 01:44:28 pm


....... “I’m gonna eat you alive Ennis Del Mar…. ” he growled hungrily, “ … I’m gonna suck the life outta you.”



I don´t know what the begeebers are, but you sure as hell scared them out of me!  :laugh: This is getting better and better, I would never have thought that it can be so much fun reading creepy stories! What a brilliant idea turning Jack into a vampire. Tell you what, I would let him suck my neck any time!  ;D I´ve always thought that vampire kisses are so erotic. A person that is sucking my neck can get anything from me... :P

Dagi

Don´t you ever apologize for your stories again, Susiebell, in the contrary: give us more!  :D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on October 17, 2007, 02:09:29 pm
Hi Gary and Susie, nice to see you two!  :D
Title: Re: The Visitor
Post by: Dagi on October 17, 2007, 02:22:23 pm
:laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

You're right, Dagi.  I think that's how the Marquis de Sade managed it.   :P

Gary

How good he wasn´t a she.  ;D
Title: Re: Rude Awakening
Post by: Dagi on October 17, 2007, 02:25:15 pm
Hehehe ... thank you Dagi honey!  I'm with you ... I find vampire kisses very erotic and as for Jack, well he could suck on my neck all night long!!

You know what ... I don't know what begeebers are ... it's probably a polite British way of saying "Scare the crap out of you".

I'm sorry .. I won't apologise again ... whoopsy daisies sorry for saying "sorry" .... Whoopsy daisies, did it again ... Sorry, I'm British, we can't help ourselves!

Susie    (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


You guys are really to be pittied!  :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
Title: Re: Rude Awakening
Post by: Dagi on October 17, 2007, 02:29:21 pm
Very creepy, Susie dear.  I love vampire stories.  And the idea of Jack waking up to find that he's being violated is very scary.  And now we can only wonder what will happen next.  Will Jack turn Ennis into a vampire now?  Will they spend eternity together going about sucking off twink boys?  Um...sucking their necks I mean.

Gary

I wonder whether you spend a moment or two of your day without thinking of sex.  ::)

And to Susie: a sequel would be great!  :D
Title: Re: Rude Awakening
Post by: Dagi on October 17, 2007, 02:30:13 pm
:laugh: :laugh: :laugh: sorry!


 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
Title: Re: Rude Awakening
Post by: Dagi on October 17, 2007, 02:36:19 pm
Ooh I think Gary should take up that challenge Dagi ... especially if he's going to send them on the prowl for pretty little twink boys!

Susie   (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Oh yeah, do it, Gary!! Thinking of your describtion of E. it would definitely be a pleasure to read.... ;)
Title: Re: The Visitor
Post by: Dagi on October 17, 2007, 02:39:28 pm
Well that's a flippin' understatement Gary!  It's gross and disgusting and foul and weird and evil and nasty .. I had to watch it from behind a cushion!

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Guess then it´s exactly the right movie for Gary!  :laugh:
Title: Re: Rude Awakening
Post by: Dagi on October 17, 2007, 02:40:31 pm
Oooh yeah ... (http://content.sweetim.com/sim/cpie/emoticons/0002006C.gif)


 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: I have to copy that smilie, it´s incredibe!!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on October 17, 2007, 02:43:04 pm
If you excuse me now, my husband is not at home and I´m expecting a friend.  ;D I have to light a fire and open a bottle of wine! Have fun, you two, and I´m looking forward to the vampire sequel !

Dagi
Title: Re: Rude Awakening
Post by: Dagi on October 18, 2007, 03:37:02 am
Yeh yeh yeh!!

I would NEVER want them to be enticed into a threeway or something equally depraved ... but they are vampires .. so that changes ALL the rules!  Well Jack's a vampire ... Ennis isn't .... yet!! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/8/8_1_208.gif)


You've got me foaming at the mouth now!!  (http://content.sweetim.com/sim/cpie/emoticons/00020118.gif)

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)
 

What´s depraved about a threeway?? Don´t fool us playing the proper English Lady here.  ::) I´ll have to scan a few pages of Michael Tolliver Lives and send them to you .... ;D

Dagi
Title: Re: Room 4
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 18, 2007, 12:44:09 pm

MMM sexy, Littelwing, although nothing has happened yet, but just picturing Jack is doing it for me.  ;D   Susie wants to know what happened in room 4? Well first I want to know what happened in room 5!  :P

Dagi

All in good time, you guys!
Title: Re: Rude Awakening
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 18, 2007, 12:47:28 pm
Can I just apologise in advance here?!  This story is completely silly and outrageous ... I just wanted to see if I could scare the begeebers out of you!  Please don't be offended! (http://content.sweetim.com/sim/cpie/emoticons/00020079.gif)





Rude Awakening by Susiebell

Jack was sleeping soundly, his head filled with comforting images of soft brown eyes, delicate pink lips, slim long legs, thick pulsating cock.  A cool breeze drifted gently over him, the white cotton sheet slowly slipping downwards, smooth as liquid silver over the contours of his body.  He sighed.  Hot breath with lips almost but not quite touching, glided over his naked form, warming his chest, his stomach, his groin.  A silky wetness enveloped him, sucking slowly, gently, seductively.

“Hmmmmm ….”

His hips rocked involuntarily up and down, up and down. 

“Yes.… yes….”

The warm mouth was moving back up his body, planting tiny kisses over his belly, his nipples, his neck.

He looked up dreamily ..… In an instant, his blood turned to ice!  He was peering into the eyes of a stranger, evil eyes piercing his very soul.  He struggled to move, but his body was paralysed with fear, beads of sweat forming on his brow, trickling onto the bed sheets.  The stranger smiled, exposing gleaming white teeth, the canines disproportionately large, the tips glistening red.

Long knarled fingers caressed his chin.  He opened his mouth to scream, emitting only a pitiful whimper as the thumb stroked his parted lips.  His head was being moved slowly to one side, revealing the creamy plump flesh of his neck.  Jack was powerless, his body numb.

He felt two sharp stabs of pain and the sucking began again, this time excitedly, greedily.  His hips rocked once more, his mind a whirling mass of unbelievable pain and pleasure, his blood and spunk simultaneously and rhythmically pumping out of his body, his world slowly fading into darkness.



“What’s that on your neck?”  Ennis smirked, letting go of the steering wheel with one hand and reaching over to touch the two small scabs behind Jack’s ear.

“Nothin bud, just a bite or somethin’” he smiled back, “Lets get a move on, it’s already midnight, we wanna get to the cabin before dawn.”

“Patience, lil darlin’” Ennis glanced over at Jack.  Six months was a long time, and he could barely wait the rest of the journey.  He ran his fingers through Jack’s chocolate brown hair.

Jack smiled, taking Ennis’ hand in his, turning it over and kissing his open palm “I’m gonna eat you alive Ennis Del Mar…. ” he growled hungrily, “ … I’m gonna suck the life outta you.”




Susie (http://content.sweetim.com/sim/cpie/emoticons/00020127.gif)

Hahaha!  Outrageous!

Wonderful, SusieBaby!  Brilliant.  I've always though vampire as sexy and even romantic, and your tale is both!  Lovely, inventive tale!
Title: Re: Room 4
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 18, 2007, 12:48:46 pm
I'm dying to know what's up with room 4, Littlewing.   :D  Don't hold out on us too long.

Gary

It's coming!  Patience, my sweet!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on October 18, 2007, 01:59:08 pm
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All in good time, you guys!



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It's coming!  Patience, my sweet!


 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: But doesn´t it feel good, honey? Nobody ever asked me to write a story... :-\ :( ;) ;D :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on October 18, 2007, 04:40:13 pm
Phew, Gary sweetheart, you gave me something to digest here....was it really Susie and me who talked you into this?  ;D Hey everybody, we are two innocent girls!

I'm still trying to regain composure.  ;D  Brilliantly done. *deep breath*
F*ck Dostoevsky, he sure as hell would be green with envy reading this, Gary!  :laugh: 

You start almost romantically, cooing about leaves changing their colors and Indian summers. I loved how you portrayed Ennis as the reluctant one, who has to be talked into murdering by the argument that only this way he could stay with Jack.

Then the reference to the Mexican rent boy....that comes back again later turning Ennis into an animal raging with jealousy....it's so good.

And then your description of the boy, well, what can I say, I knew that would just blow me away.  ;D

When they were raping the kid in order to "save" it - *swallows hard* that was almost unbearable.  *Dagi shakes her head in disbelief, muttering Novelists do have one incredible imagination. *

All in all: One of the best pieces I've ever read, my friend. And I've tried to lay it on as thin as possible...you know why.  ;)

Love ya,
Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on October 18, 2007, 05:16:39 pm
Wow Dagi, such praise.  And for a story that I'm sure would land me in jail in half the world.   :laugh:  I really am glad you liked it.  I was afraid that it was way too dark, but once I got going I just had to finish it.  Thank you so much for the positive feedback.  I can now breath a sigh of relief.

Gary

Well, yeah, I thought something similar.  ;D  I sure now why you didn´t post it before going to bed, and why you wanted to post it before we would go to bed!  :laugh:

Much love,
Dagi

Title: Re: The Visitor
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 18, 2007, 09:43:09 pm
I did see Quills.  Very interesting film.

Gary

I sort of liked it.  Quills was kind of disgusting, though!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 18, 2007, 09:44:56 pm



 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: But doesn´t it feel good, honey? Nobody ever asked me to write a story... :-\ :( ;) ;D :laugh:

Oh good grief, Dagi.  You artistic types are so sensitive!  :-\  :-*
Title: Re: Sustenance
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 18, 2007, 09:56:58 pm
This story is rated NC17
Sustenance by garycottle



Exceptional, Gary!  As I've said before, you're a novelist!  I'm ashamed to post part 2 of my story after reading this.  Brilliant, Babe!  It is sort of like Interview with the Vampire, only with...well, I was going to say gay men, but I'm certain lestat was at least bi-sexual if not fully gay.  Gorgeous writing, Gary!  I'm reading this one over and over...
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 18, 2007, 09:59:45 pm
Wow Dagi, such praise.  And for a story that I'm sure would land me in jail in half the world.   :laugh:  I really am glad you liked it.  I was afraid that it was way too dark, but once I got going I just had to finish it.  Thank you so much for the possitive feedback.  I can now breath a sigh of relief.

Gary

You shouldn't have worried, Gary!  This piece is too brilliant to keep to yourself.  No one is angry or appalled.  We're just blown away!
Title: Room 4 (Part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 18, 2007, 10:05:18 pm
Room 4 (Part 2) by Littlewing1957

Ennis walked over and sat down on the full-sized bed.  He looked around at the spare furnishings and was strangely satisfied.  The place reminded him of The Siesta Motel, where he and Jack were reunited some 5 years ago.  Ennis considered walking out to his van to fetch his belongings, but thought better of it.  He wanted to shower and wait for Jack’s visit.

Jack gathered his things from his truck in a hurry.  He brought only the bare essentials: parka, boots, shaving kit, lots of clean underwear and several changes of clothes.  With his gear on the motel room bed, Jack disrobed and stepped into the shower for a much deserved wash.  He thought of Ennis as he lathered his private parts!  Jack loved to pleasure himself, indulged often, but as far as he was concerned, nothing could compare with Ennis Del Mar’s touch!  Once he was changed, Jack locked his room and made his way to Ennis.  Ennis opened the door on the first knock, and in a matter of seconds, the two men were rolling on the bed – kissing, rubbing, pulling, and grunting!  Jack was all ready to disrobe when he noticed several shadows at the window!  The paper thin drapes were drawn tight, and several human shaped figures stood there, at the window!  The shadows were eerily still, and they seemed to be looking in at Ennis and Jack!

“Do you see that, Cowboy?” Jack pointing to the window and cowering.

“What the..” Ennis gaped, frightened now.  He was frantic that they had been caught, and some angry redneck mob was watching, waiting.. tire irons in hand.. or hammers.. or whatever they used in those parts!

“I gotta go see who it is!” Jack stammered as he leaped from the bed.  Ennis was behind him in a flash, trying to wrestle him back.

“Jack, don’t do it!”  Ennis whispered.  “Maybe they didn’t see anything, and are at the wrong room.  If we’re real quiet, they might go away!”  But Jack was having none of it!  He pulled himself free of Ennis’ arms and flung the door wide open!

No one there!

“God, what is goin’ on?”  Jack whispered.  Ennis walked up behind his lover and looked out.

Nothing there!

The two men glanced at each other, surely wondering how they both could have imagined the same thing!  Jack whistled and led Ennis back into the room.  They were both too spooked to make love and decided to drive into town for something to eat.

The drive into town was uneventful.  Jack noticed a small café and suggested they have supper there.  Ennis parked his van in the tiny parking lot, which was practically empty.

“What can I get for you gentlemen?”  The waitress stood poised with her pad.  Jack and Ennis placed their orders and sat quietly for awhile.  As their meals arrived, Jack broke the silence.

“What do you make of that spectacle at the window?”  Jack asked his lover.  Ennis was silent as he doused his fries with a healthy dose of ketchup.

“I don’t know, Jack!”  Ennis exclaimed as he munched on a crispy French fry.  “But I’ll tell you this... I think we should leave that motel.  I’m getting a bad feeling about that place!”  Ennis sat still and placed his hands in his lap.  “What we saw may mean nothing, but I don’t think we should take any chances!”  Jack thought it over.

“Whatever you say, Friend!”  Jack nodded.  “We should be able to find another place nearby, shouldn’t we?”  Ennis shook his head in the affirmative, and the pair finished their meals.

Ennis drove them back to the motel in silence.  Once there, they each headed for their rooms to make ready to leave…

To be continued..
Title: Re: Room 4 (Part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 18, 2007, 11:47:04 pm
This is really creepy, Littlewing.  Those shadows at the window would have me running for the hills. 

Before they open the door and realize that no one is outside looking in, they consider staying quiet and pretending they weren't there.  I should have thought of that one yesterday.  I heard a knock at my door, and I opened it without thinking.  I was expecting the UPS man.  But that's not who it was.  Instead it was a couple of Jehovah's Witnesses.   :-\  Two old men wanting me to read The Watchtower.  Golly, if I had to hear a sales pitch for someone's faith yesterday, why couldn't it have been delivered by a couple of Mormon boys?   :P

Thank you so much for another great scary story.  I'm so into this.   ;D

Gary

I'm into it as well, Gary!  I've never read a scary story I didn't like.  I'll tell you something..my grandmother would tell ghost stories until I was afraid to go to sleep at night!  I even compiled grandma's stories and used them for my folklore class at Berkeley.  Several of my family's ghost stories, legends, counting out rhymes, myths are on archive at US Berkeley's folklore dept.

The Jehovah witnesses are almost fixtures in my neighborhood.  There is a large Kingdom Hall right around the corner.  The Mormons are not quite such a presence in the neighborhood, but they come around from time to time.  When you get down here I'll have to show you Oakland's Mormon Temple.  It sits high up in the hills and you can see it from just about every point in the City.  It is rumored that the impressive steeples{sp?} are pure gold.  Here is a link with a picture,


http://www.ldschurchtemples.com/oakland (http://www.ldschurchtemples.com/oakland)
Title: Re: Sustenance
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 18, 2007, 11:52:04 pm
Thank you so much, Littlewing.  And you're right, I was inspired to a large degree by Anne Rice.  Of course I played with the mythology a little.  Rather than having homosexuality as a subtext, I decided to put it right out there.  (We know that if a man puts his sperm inside of a woman a baby might be the result, but what if leaving his deposit inside another man brought about another kind of transformative miracle?  And isn't such a deposit in reality transformative?  Espeically if the one on the receiving end is a virgin?)  I did fear the result might have been too dark, but I trusted every one here not to cast aspersions, so I went ahead and posted it.

Of course I don't think under normal circumstances Jack and Ennis would ever do such a thing to a little hispanic boy, even if the boy did ask for it.  But I wanted to write a vampire story, and I decided not to hold back.  (And I'll point out that both Susie and Dagi asked me to do it.   ;D )

Gary   

Gary, I didn't make the association between the semen as a transformative "power"  from one male to another.  Takes some of us longer!  :laugh:  You're very clever, you know that?  We all know that Ennis and Jack wouldn't hurt a fly, unless in self-defense.  Horror stories are supposed to be dark, and well, horrible.  I'm glad you didn't hold back.  I loved reading every word!
Title: The White Dog
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 19, 2007, 12:39:38 am
The White Dog by Littlewing1957

Ennis was on his way home from the grocers with a bag of food balanced on one hip.  The summer evening was dry and warm, just the way Ennis liked it.  He decided to walk to and from the store in order to enjoy the weather and get in some exercise.  His burden was rather light, as Ennis didn’t need much in the way of food.  He purchased a few cans of tuna, a box of crackers, milk, coffee, sugar and a flat of chicken hind quarters.  The meager provisions would last two weeks.

It was dark, and Ennis had to be careful not to trip over his own two feet.  He walked at a steady pace, passing nothing and no one.  Not even a car passed down the dimly lit road.  Ennis was alone both on the street and in his life.  Jack Twist was gone, his daughters both married and living in Cody.  Alma had her own family now, and his siblings never came around.  It was enough to make any person depressed, but Ennis vowed to keep his courage up.  He held his head high and continued the short trek home.

Along about halfway to his trailer, Ennis noticed a large white dog standing at the corner of the thrift store.  Ennis had never seen such a beautiful animal.  No collar, which means the animal was most likely a stray.  But what a well kept stray!  The dog looked well nourished and its coat was shiny and neat.  Ennis whistled at the pooch and it walked over.  He rubbed its head with his free hand, and smiled as the animal responded by jumping on his thigh.  Ennis would have liked to spend some time playing with the dog, but he needed to get home.  He would have liked to claim the pooch as a pet, but he couldn’t afford to feed him.  Ennis sighed and turned from the dog to continue the walk home.

A few blocks down Ennis almost forgot about the white dog until he noticed a wet sensation on his free hand.  He looked down and saw the dog looking up at him with such affection in its eyes that Ennis didn’t have the heart to shoo it away.

“Okay, boy!”  Ennis began.  “You can come with me a far as the trailer park, but after that you have to scram!  I don’t have the money to feed no dogs!”  Ennis couldn’t be sure, but he thought he saw the pooch shake its head! 

The trailer park was only a half block away, and the white dog was still at Ennis’ side.  He walked up to his door and the dog sat and watched as Ennis fished his key out of a pocket.

“Well, good to know you, Friend!”  Ennis stammered as he looked at the animal.  “Thanks for walking me home, but this is where we part company!”  Again, for just a brief second, Ennis could have sworn that the dog shook its head.  He unlocked his door and stepped in.  After his groceries were put away, Ennis grabbed a beer and sat in front of the TV.  He thought about the dog that walked him home, and hoped it would be alright.  Ennis was partial to dogs and almost thought that if he looked out the window and the dog was still around, he might invite it in, just for the night.  But when Ennis looked out his window there was no white dog in sight.

Ennis turned in early that night, as sleep was not only recuperative, but it was an escape.  He was not sad or lonely when he slept, and just maybe, if he was lucky, he would see Jack Twist in a dream.  That night, Ennis was lucky.  Ennis knew he was dreaming, but Jack’s presence was so real!  Jack entered his trailer as though he had a key and moved to sit on the edge of Ennis’ bed.  Jack never spoke a word through his mouth, but seemed to communicate with Ennis with his thoughts.  Ennis saw Jack in the form of a white dog, walking with him, in order to protect him from a man who Jack thought suspicious.  Ennis could have sworn he was alone on the walk home, but Jack was able to see things that Ennis was unaware of.  When the man saw the white dog walking alongside Ennis, he turned and headed in the opposite direction.

“Don’t be afraid, Ennis!”  Jack mouthed.  “I’ll always watch over you.”  And with that, Jack was gone.  Ennis wasn’t afraid.  He let the tears fall and thanked God for his guardian angel. 

“Thank you, Jack!  I love you.”

 And with that said, Ennis was able to fall into a satisfied slumber.

Dedicated to my grandma, Mary Dumas (1912-1984)

Title: Re: Sustenance
Post by: Dagi on October 19, 2007, 01:11:49 am
Thank you so much, Littlewing.  And you're right, I was inspired to a large degree by Anne Rice.  Of course I played with the mythology a little.  Rather than having homosexuality as a subtext, I decided to put it right out there.  (We know that if a man puts his sperm inside of a woman a baby might be the result, but what if leaving his deposit inside another man brought about another kind of transformative miracle?  And isn't such a deposit in reality transformative?  Espeically if the one on the receiving end is a virgin?)  I did fear the result might have been too dark, but I trusted every one here not to cast aspersions, so I went ahead and posted it.

Of course I don't think under normal circumstances Jack and Ennis would ever do such a thing to a little hispanic boy, even if the boy did ask for it.  But I wanted to write a vampire story, and I decided not to hold back.  (And I'll point out that both Susie and Dagi asked me to do it.   ;D )

Gary   

Maybe you didn´t intend that, but to me it it also a story about growing up, and how on the way we lose our virginity and innocence in different ways, often by acts performed by adults who themselves have been made what they are by others. And sure as hell the expression in our eyes does change too...

Ennis was not consoled, and he began to rock the boy gently in his arms.  And then he licked and kissed the neck that he had not long ago readily bitten into.  He cried for having taken the purity of this boy’s youth away from him, and he cried for that winsome outlook that he himself had once.  So much was gone now.

“He wanted to be one of us, Ennis,” Jack said soothingly. 


Dagi
Title: Re: Sustenance
Post by: Dagi on October 19, 2007, 04:43:19 am
I'm so glad you picked up on that, Dagi.  Yes, I was playing with the idea of growing up.  Jack says that Pedro wanted them to make him into a vampire.  And when I spoke of how Pedro had longing in his eyes for something that he couldn't define, I was thinking of that need young people have to come into their own, be their own person.  They want to establish their own independence, but they don't know how to go about it, and they don't know exactly who they will be after that transformation takes place.

Teenagers are restless, and because of that they're often annoying to the rest of us.  We don't understand why they're in such a hurry to grow up.  We know that being an adult isn't always so wonderful, but they won't take us at our word.  They have to see for themselves.  But of course when they do they can never go back.  And there's a tragedy in that, I think. 

Whenever I see the smiling face of a kid who has lived in relative safety and comfort I can't help but think of what will happen when they find out that the world can be a cruel place.  People can be mean, petty, hateful, and self-serving, and these innocent kids can become victims.  And Mom and Dad won't always be able to protect them.  On top of that diseases and accidents can take them from this world at any time.  What will happen to their bright shinning faces when they realize this?  It breaks my heart.

I know that my story is brutal, but I think there is something brutal about the process of growing up and finally, at the end of that process, seeing the world with the eyes of an adult.  Yes, your passion has been awakened, but so has your awareness that you're living on the edge of an abyss.

Gary

Yes, there's a tragedy about that, but it's also a chance. It's what a life as a human being is about. Isn't it about growth, about development, about going through a crisis becoming a new person like a butterfly that could never grow beautiful wings without undergoing a profound change? Maybe that's a too romantic comparison, but for example, a friend of mine went through quite some shit as a child, and she was a real bitch as an adult, but now, after so many years, she's been able to grow beautiful wings, she gives so much love, she enriches the life of so many people, I hardly know any comparable person. So the changes that take place when we go through life are not always negative.

Dagi

Title: Re: Room 4 (Part 2)
Post by: Dagi on October 19, 2007, 04:48:05 am
Room 4 (Part 2) by Littlewing1957



To be continued..


This is getting really creepy! I would never have returned to that place either!! Can´t wait to read the continuation!

Dagi
Title: Re: Sustenance
Post by: Dagi on October 19, 2007, 04:49:52 am
Thank you so much, Littlewing.  And you're right, I was inspired to a large degree by Anne Rice.  Of course I played with the mythology a little.  Rather than having homosexuality as a subtext, I decided to put it right out there.  (We know that if a man puts his sperm inside of a woman a baby might be the result, but what if leaving his deposit inside another man brought about another kind of transformative miracle?  And isn't such a deposit in reality transformative?  Espeically if the one on the receiving end is a virgin?)  I did fear the result might have been too dark, but I trusted every one here not to cast aspersions, so I went ahead and posted it.

Of course I don't think under normal circumstances Jack and Ennis would ever do such a thing to a little hispanic boy, even if the boy did ask for it.  But I wanted to write a vampire story, and I decided not to hold back.  (And I'll point out that both Susie and Dagi asked me to do it.   ;D )

Gary   

I´m so glad we did!
Title: Re: The White Dog
Post by: Dagi on October 19, 2007, 05:00:47 am
The White Dog by Littlewing1957


“Don’t be afraid, Ennis!”  Jack mouthed.  “I’ll always watch over you.”  And with that, Jack was gone.  Ennis wasn’t afraid.  He let the tears fall and thanked God for his guardian angel. 

“Thank you, Jack!  I love you.”

 And with that said, Ennis was able to fall into a satisfied slumber.

Dedicated to my grandma, Mary Dumas (1912-1984)



Marie, what a beautiful, beautiful little tale. You do so good by Ennis giving him a guardian angel. I felt really comforted when I had finished reading, and I needed that, because lines like Ennis turned in early that night, as sleep was not only recuperative, but it was an escape.  He was not sad or lonely when he slept, and just maybe, if he was lucky, he would see Jack Twist in a dream. still break my heart.

Thank you!

Dagi
Title: Re: Sustenance
Post by: Dagi on October 19, 2007, 09:04:19 am
You're an evil genius Gary!  I'm not going to pretend that I found this easy to read, but then as you pointed out in your pm, it's a horror story, it's meant to be disturbing.  And you certainly succeeded in unsettling me .... and scaring the begeebers out of me with that hiss at the end ... hardly slept a wink last night!!!!

Underneath the provado, I guess I really am a Proper English Lady.

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Hey Susie, you don't have to be a Proper English Lady to find a story about two men violating a boy disturbing. I would find it rather disturbing if you didn't find that disturbing...That means merely you are a sensitive person (and I mean that in a positive way.)

Dagi
Title: Re: Room 4 (Part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 20, 2007, 12:13:39 am
Thanks for the link.  The temple is beautiful.  And yeah, those spires do look like they're made of gold.  I'd love for you to show me around your home town, and I'd love to hear more about your college days.  What did you major in?  (Hey, I hear that some students walk around naked at Berkeley these days.  Is that true?   :laugh:  I don't think I could thing about the Peloponnesian War if there was a cute naked boy sitting beside me.  Very distracting.   :P )

Gary

Gary, I gotta give you a call.  We can get to know each other, which is something I'm really looking forward to.  :-*  I know you're shy, as am I, but I'll bring you out.  I'm a very warm person.  If you like me here, I guarantee you'll love me in person.  I guarantee it!
Title: Re: The White Dog
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 20, 2007, 12:15:00 am
Marie, what a beautiful, beautiful little tale. You do so good by Ennis giving him a guardian angel. I felt really comforted when I had finished reading, and I needed that, because lines like Ennis turned in early that night, as sleep was not only recuperative, but it was an escape.  He was not sad or lonely when he slept, and just maybe, if he was lucky, he would see Jack Twist in a dream. still break my heart.

Thank you!

Dagi

Thank you for your kind words, Baby!
Title: Re: The White Dog
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 20, 2007, 12:20:03 am
Littlewing, this may be something of a ghost story, but it's about the sweetest one I've ever read.  It's so nice to think of Jack taking the form of a white stray dog in order to watch over Ennis.

I noticed that you dedicated it to your grandmother.  She died the same year I graduated form high school and started college.  That seems like many a moon ago, but I'm sure you still miss her.

Gary 

Thanks, Gary.  Some of my grandmother's stories are inspiration for the fic I'm writing here.  Not all of them, but a few.  I just need to tweak the tales a bit to include J&E.  I'm having such fun!
Title: Re: Room 4 (Part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 20, 2007, 12:22:43 am
WOW!  This is getting so creepy littlewing.  They should leave right now!!  Can't wait for the next installment!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Thanks, SusieBaby.  The next chapter may have to wait for the weekend.  I had a hard day at work today!  I may post an unrelated story, though.
Title: Give us some of that candy!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 20, 2007, 01:10:18 am
Give us some of that Candy! by Littlewing1957

(AU, A BBM slice of Life)

I’ll get it this time!”  Jack yelled to the den as he headed toward the door.  He reached for the bowl of candy and held it ready for the children.  Jack opened the door and was greeted with,

“Tricks or Treat?!!!”

Jack smiled when he saw a tiny ghost, a pirate and a witch holding out Halloween bags, eager for candy. 

“You guys look pretty scary!”  Jack laughed as he gave each costumed child several pieces of candy.  He had miniature Snickers bars, Butterfingers, Hershey Bars with and without almonds.  The children said their “thank yous” and headed off to the neighbor’s house.  Ennis walked into the living room with Baby Indigo just as Jack was closing the door.

“How you doin’ with candy, darlin’?”  Ennis asked his husband.  “I can go out to the kitchen for more, if you’re running out.”  Jack peeked in the bowl.

“Naw, I should have enough for now.”  Jack said as he kissed Ennis’ jaw and patted Indigo’s cheek.  Ennis dressed Indigo in her first Halloween costume, a colorful bumble bee.  Baby Indigo squealed as Jack fetched a tiny Hershey bar from the bowl and held it up to her beautiful face.  She laughed with delight and reached for the candy.

“She can’t eat that!”  Ennis laughed.  Jack smiled and tore the wrapping from the bar.

“Maybe just a little bite?”  Jack pleaded.  He broke off a tiny piece no bigger than a quarter of an inch and showed it to Ennis.  Ennis nodded and moved Indigo closer to Daddy Jack.  Jack placed the candy in her tiny mouth and both men watched as their daughter savored the smooth chocolate.

“Is that good, sugar?”  Jack cooed as he kissed his child on her little cheek.  Ennis laughed with joy to watch his husband nurture their child.   Another knock on the door and Ennis answered.  He held Indigo as he passed out candy to several scary characters, while their parents looked on from the porch.  One of their neighbors asked to hold Indigo and Ennis obliged.

“She sure is getting big, isn’t she?”  Lynn observed as she bounced Indigo up and down. 

“Yeah, she’s growin up right before our very eyes!”  Ennis spoke proudly to his next door neighbor and good friend.  Lynn smiled and kissed Indigo before passing her back to her daddy.

“Now remember, Ennis,” Lynn began,  “party at my place 7:00 sharp.  I see Indigo is already dressed, but what about you and Jack?  Aren’t you guys going to dress up?”  Ennis smiled at his friend.

“Naw, Lynn, we decided to pass on the costumes this year.  We hate to be party poopers, but I think we’ll just come as ourselves.  We’ll be there by 7:00.  See you then.”

“Okay, Ennis, no problem about the costumes.  I don’t think I’m going to dress up, either.  Just don’t be late!”  Lynn said as she wagged a manicured finger at Ennis.  He watched his friend walk down his front steps, and then turned to join Jack in the living room.

Jack was seated on the leather couch flipping channels.

“I think I want to see something scary, En!”  Jack remarked as Ennis sat down beside him.  Ennis chuckled softly as he cuddled Indigo on his lap.

“Rodeo, you sure can be lame sometimes!”  Ennis joked as he ruffled Jack’s hair.  Jack giggled and continued his search of the cable movie channels.

“Listen Jack, we gotta get to Lynn’s party.”  Ennis stated matter-of-factly.  "Are you gonna change, or go as you are?”  Baby Indigo looked at Daddy Jack.  He took her from Ennis’ lap and placed her on his own.

“Do we have to go, En?”  Jack asked, innocently.  “I would be happy just staying here, watchin’ scary movies and giving out candy.  I think some more kids should be by tonight."  Ennis though about what Jack said and grinned.

“Well, I think Lynn will understand if we don’t show.”  Ennis said diplomatically.  His voice took on a low, husky quality.  “I would rather be here alone with you, just sittin’ on my butt.”  Jack moved closer to his husband and placed Indigo on the floor.

“Oh?”  Jack whispered as he took Ennis into his arms.

“Yeah!” Ennis said in his sexy voice.  “Hey Rodeo,” Ennis began.  “You gave Indigo something sweet a minute ago, but what about me?”  Ennis ran a few fingers across Jack’s sensuous mouth. 

“Where is my sugar?”  Ennis asked demurely.  Jack blushed and pulled him close.  He held his lover’s head and kissed him like there was no tomorrow. 




Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on October 20, 2007, 01:41:36 pm
Give us some of that Candy! by Littlewing1957


I love the Ennis/Indigo/Jack stories! Love them! They are extremely comforting.....and you always manage to add something sexy - but how could you not, telling about those men. ;D

Thanks so much, Marie. As Gary said, you are so generous, I can´t begin to tell you how much I´m looking forward to seeing you in May!!!!!!!

Dagi :-*
Title: Re: Sustenance
Post by: Dagi on October 20, 2007, 01:44:51 pm
You will let me write one or two more scary stories, won't you?  I don't think they'll be as intense as the last one.  But if you don't want to read them I'll understand. 

I try to convey something of myself in all the stories I post, but some are more revealing than others.  And the last one was special.  It came from deep in my soul.  I trusted you and everyone here with my darkest fears and fantasies.  Thanks so much for not giving me the boot.

Gary   

How could we ever give you the boot, Gary dear? The more we get to know you the more we love you. Thanks for trusting us and sharing your darkest fears and fantasies.

Dagi :)
Title: Re: Sustenance
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 20, 2007, 10:12:00 pm
You will let me write one or two more scary stories, won't you?  I don't think they'll be as intense as the last one.  But if you don't want to read them I'll understand. 

I try to convey something of myself in all the stories I post, but some are more revealing than others.  And the last one was special.  It came from deep in my soul.  I trusted you and everyone here with my darkest fears and fantasies.  Thanks so much for not giving me the boot.

Gary   

Please continue, Gary!  I love reading scary stories!
Title: Re: Give us some of that candy!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 20, 2007, 10:12:29 pm
Aww littlewing .. I do love this little heartwarming slice of life series with Indigo.  And I remember giving my children their first lick of chocolate ... their little eyes glazed over as though they'd just discovered heaven!!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Thanks, Susiebaby! 
Title: Re: Room 4 (Part 2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 20, 2007, 10:13:05 pm
Littlewing, I'm very much looking forward to hearing your voice, and seeing you in person.  And I'm sure I'll love you.  How could I not.  You're always so sweet and kind, and the way you share so many stories with us is very generous.  You give of yourself so freely here.

Gary   

I love you Gary!  You're so sweet!  :-*
Title: Re: Give us some of that candy!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 20, 2007, 10:15:08 pm
This is very sweet and endearing, Littlewing.  We used to get up to 200 trick-or-treaters back in Fayetteville.  I'd decorate with Indian corn, corn stalks, and gourds, and carve several jack-o-lanterns, and I'd make a point of being very gernous with the treats.  I'd give up can's of coke and full-sized candy bars.  I loved it.

Gary

You gave cans of coke?  Hmmmm that's different.  The most unusual things I've seen handed out are small stuffed teddy bears, hot buttered popcorn.  I can't wait to stock up on my Halloween candy.  I love everything about the "holiday!"
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 20, 2007, 10:16:15 pm
Give us some of that Candy! by Littlewing1957


I love the Ennis/Indigo/Jack stories! Love them! They are extremely comforting.....and you always manage to add something sexy - but how could you not, telling about those men. ;D

Thanks so much, Marie. As Gary said, you are so generous, I can´t begin to tell you how much I´m looking forward to seeing you in May!!!!!!!

Dagi :-*

Thanks, Dagi!  I got your PM and will answer soon.  I can't wait for your visit.  My sister, my daughter and I are very excited!  :)
Title: Room 4 (part 3)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 21, 2007, 12:25:05 am
Room 4 (Part 3) by Littlewing1957

Ennis didn’t have much to pack.  Most of his belongings remained in the van, as he never had a chance to retrieve them and bring them to his room.  He fetched his lighter and a few coins he placed on the bureau and looked out the window.  Ennis was a brave man, but something about the motel chilled the marrow of his bones.  He ventured a glance out the window, hoping to see Jack walking toward his room.  But Jack was not in the general vicinity.  Nothing left to do but track him down so the two of them could get the hell out of there!

Jack placed his gear in his truck bed and headed to Ennis’ room.  He would make sure Ennis was ready to leave, and have him wait in his van until Jack checked them out.  Jack was uneasy walking the few feet to Ennis’ room, and he hated himself for it.  Ennis opened the door on the 2nd knock, allowing Jack to enter.

“You about ready, Cowboy?”  Jack whispered to his lover.  Ennis placed a firm hand on Jack’s shoulder and nodded in the affirmative.

“Okay, well, just wait in your van and I’ll check us out.”  Jack said as he took Ennis’ hand.

“Look, Rodeo,” Ennis began.  “I sure hope we’re settled soon.”  Ennis kissed the tips of Jack’s fingers.  “I can’t wait to be with you, lil darling!  All this time and I haven’t had a chance to touch you!”

Jack nodded knowingly.

“I know, Friend!”  Jack whispered as he rubbed his lover’s back.  “I can’t wait to be between your thighs.  But the sooner we get out of here, the sooner I’ll have you inside me.  C’mon now,” Jack said as he ushered Ennis to the door.  “Let’s get the hell up out of here!”

Ennis and Jack closed the door behind them and walked past room 3.  But when they reached room 4, they were in for a surprise.  The light was on and there was a definite racket drifting out of the room.  Jack stopped and looked at room 4.  He was puzzled to see it occupied, but didn’t think too much of it.  Perhaps the motel was filling up and the clerk had no other choice but to rent room 4.

“What are you doin, Jack?”  Ennis exclaimed, nervous now.  “Why are we stopping?"  Jack pulled Ennis back so he stood right in front of room 4.

“Well, I was just looking.  The front desk clerk said he wouldn’t rent out room 4, and now I see someone is in there.  Jack and Ennis listened to the sounds of a man’s angry voice and a woman complaining.  They saw shadows of two people, one short and definitely feminine – the other very tall and undeniably male.

“Who cares, Jack!”  It was Ennis, angry now.  “Let’s get up out of here.”  But no sooner than Ennis uttered those words, the shouting form within room 4 ceased and the lights went out.  Jack and Ennis watched, transfixed as the door to room 4 opened very slowly.

“Oh, what the fuck now?”  Ennis asked, incredulous.  Jack whistled and grabbed hold of Ennis hand.  He backed away from room 4 pulling Ennis with him.  That is, until the door stood wide open.  Jack’s curiosity got the better of him, as it usually did. 

“I’m going in!”  Jack announced as he released Ennis’ hand and moved toward the open door.

“Jack, are you out of your fuckin’ mind?”  Ennis almost screamed as he jumped at his lover.  But Jack was too fast for him and was already inside room 4 before Ennis could pull him back.  And what happened next, Ennis never told a soul.  He heard a smacking sound, and a wail. 

“Jack!!!”  Ennis was almost hysterical as he shot into room 4 in a flash.  He turned on the lights and almost tripped over a prone Jack Twist.  Jack didn’t look hurt, even though he was laid flat on room 4’s dusty carpet.  Ennis squatted and shook his lover.  Jack was breathing so hard that Ennis almost cried out again.  He sat Jack straight up and hugged him tight.

“I’m okay, Friend.”  Jack muttered as he rubbed his cheek.  Ennis looked Jack square in the face and noticed, to his horror, an angry red hand print on Jack’s cheek.

“Jack..”  Ennis began slowly.  “Uh lil darlin.... looks like someone slapped you hard!”  Ennis placed a few fingers on the hand print.  It was warm to the touch!  Jack moved Ennis' fingers and rubbed his jaw.

“Yeah, Friend, I felt it!”  Jack exclaimed.  Ennis looked around the room hoping the person who assaulted his lover was still there so he could beat the hell out of him...or her!

“Come on out you mutherfucker!”  Ennis shouted as he stalked angrily around the room, looking in the bathroom, under the bed.  Jack smiled and wondered why Ennis felt so brave and protective all of a sudden.  But when he realized that the two of them were alone in the room, the hairs on his neck stood on end.

“Let’s head for the hills, Ennis!”  Jack exclaimed in a shaky voice.  “Something definitely ain’t right here, and I’m not ashamed to say I’m scared!"  Ennis cringed and Jack noticed the slow creep of fear moisten his lover’s eyes.  They headed for the door in a flash..

To be continued…






Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on October 21, 2007, 06:01:52 am
Thanks, Dagi!  I got your PM and will answer soon.  I can't wait for your visit.  My sister, my daughter and I are very excited!  :)

 :D You´re so sweet! I can´t wait for it myself! Only seven moths and a week to wait.  :-\

Dagi :-*

Title: Re: Room 4 (part 3)
Post by: Dagi on October 21, 2007, 06:08:28 am
Room 4 (Part 3) by Littlewing1957

Ennis didn’t have much to pack.  Most of his belongings remained in the van, as he never had a chance to retrieve them and bring them to his room.  He fetched his lighter and a few coins he placed on the bureau and looked out the window.  Ennis was a brave man, but something about the motel chilled the marrow of his bones.  He ventured a glance out the window, hoping to see Jack walking toward his room.  But Jack was not in the general vicinity.  Nothing left to do but track him down so the two of them could get the hell out of there!

Jack placed his gear in his truck bed and headed to Ennis’ room.  He would make sure Ennis was ready to leave, and have him wait in his van until Jack checked them out.  Jack was uneasy walking the few feet to Ennis’ room, and he hated himself for it.  Ennis opened the door on the 2nd knock, allowing Jack to enter.

“You about ready, Cowboy?”  Jack whispered to his lover.  Ennis placed a firm hand on Jack’s shoulder and nodded in the affirmative.

“Okay, well, just wait in your van and I’ll check us out.”  Jack said as he took Ennis’ hand.

“Look, Rodeo,” Ennis began.  “I sure hope we’re settled soon.”  Ennis kissed the tips of Jack’s fingers.  “I can’t wait to be with you, lil darling!  All this time and I haven’t had a chance to touch you!”

Jack nodded knowingly.

“I know, Friend!”  Jack whispered as he rubbed his lover’s back.  “I can’t wait to be between your thighs.  But the sooner we get out of here, the sooner I’ll have you inside me.  C’mon now,” Jack said as he ushered Ennis to the door.  “Let’s get the hell up out of here!”

Ennis and Jack closed the door behind them and walked past room 3.  But when they reached room 4, they were in for a surprise.  The light was on and there was a definite racket drifting out of the room.  Jack stopped and looked at room 4.  He was puzzled to see it occupied, but didn’t think too much of it.  Perhaps the motel was filling up and the clerk had no other choice but to rent room 4.

“What are you doin, Jack?”  Ennis exclaimed, nervous now.  “Why are we stopping?"  Jack pulled Ennis back so he stood right in front of room 4.

“Well, I was just looking.  The front desk clerk said he wouldn’t rent out room 4, and now I see someone is in there.  Jack and Ennis listened to the sounds of a man’s angry voice and a woman complaining.  They saw shadows of two people, one short and definitely feminine – the other very tall and undeniably male.

“Who cares, Jack!”  It was Ennis, angry now.  “Let’s get up out of here.”  But no sooner than Ennis uttered those words, the shouting form within room 4 ceased and the lights went out.  Jack and Ennis watched, transfixed as the door to room 4 opened very slowly.

“Oh, what the fuck now?”  Ennis asked, incredulous.  Jack whistled and grabbed hold of Ennis hand.  He backed away from room 4 pulling Ennis with him.  That is, until the door stood wide open.  Jack’s curiosity got the better of him, as it usually did. 

“I’m going in!”  Jack announced as he released Ennis’ hand and moved toward the open door.

“Jack, are you out of your fuckin’ mind?”  Ennis almost screamed as he jumped at his lover.  But Jack was too fast for him and was already inside room 4 before Ennis could pull him back.  And what happened next, Ennis never told a soul.  He heard a smacking sound, and a wail. 

“Jack!!!”  Ennis was almost hysterical as he shot into room 4 in a flash.  He turned on the lights and almost tripped over a prone Jack Twist.  Jack didn’t look hurt, even though he was laid flat on room 4’s dusty carpet.  Ennis squatted and shook his lover.  Jack was breathing so hard that Ennis almost cried out again.  He sat Jack straight up and hugged him tight.

“I’m okay, Friend.”  Jack muttered as he rubbed his cheek.  Ennis looked Jack square in the face and noticed, to his horror, an angry red hand print on Jack’s cheek.

“Jack..”  Ennis began slowly.  “Uh lil darlin.... looks like someone slapped you hard!”  Ennis placed a few fingers on the hand print.  It was warm to the touch!  Jack moved Ennis' fingers and rubbed his jaw.

“Yeah, Friend, I felt it!”  Jack exclaimed.  Ennis looked around the room hoping the person who assaulted his lover was still there so he could beat the hell out of him...or her!

“Come on out you mutherfucker!”  Ennis shouted as he stalked angrily around the room, looking in the bathroom, under the bed.  Jack smiled and wondered why Ennis felt so brave and protective all of a sudden.  But when he realized that the two of them were alone in the room, the hairs on his neck stood on end.

“Let’s head for the hills, Ennis!”  Jack exclaimed in a shaky voice.  “Something definitely ain’t right here, and I’m not ashamed to say I’m scared!"  Ennis cringed and Jack noticed the slow creep of fear moisten his lover’s eyes.  They headed for the door in a flash..

To be continued…








God, I almost crawled into the screen!! That was really creepy, and I loved it !! (If you had told me two weeks ago that I would start loving creepy stories, I would have laughed out loud!)

Littlewing, you are so good to us.  :)

Dagi
Title: Re: Give us some of that candy!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 21, 2007, 02:28:47 pm
It's something we don't really celebrate in this country, or if we do, we keep it very low-key.  Me and the kids normally make a Jackel Lantern, but just because it's such  gooey and messy fun!!

We did go Trick or Treating one year, me my best friend and a whole bunch of kids.  But we did it with a twist .... we were handing out treats to the neighbours rather than collecting them.  It was fun, and most of the neighbours gave the kiddies some treats in return.  Then we went back to my friends for tea. ...... fifteen kids running around the house with a sugar high was a bit mental but lots of fun!!

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)





SusieBaby, I was wondering if Halloween is a big deal in the UK, or if it is celebrated there at all.  Over here Halloween is a big deal, and has become a lot more popular the last decade or so.  Very soon I'll send a link to some of SF's celebrations.  I've never been, but I'm planning to go someday.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 21, 2007, 02:31:22 pm
:D You´re so sweet! I can´t wait for it myself! Only seven moths and a week to wait.  :-\

Dagi :-*



Yes!  We don't get very many visitors, and now that we've remodeled the place, we have room.  I hope you'll be comfortable, and I'm sure you will.  We'll be glad to have you.  It is not often we have such a pleasure.   :)
Title: Re: Room 4 (part 3)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 21, 2007, 02:38:49 pm
God, I almost crawled into the screen!! That was really creepy, and I loved it !! (If you had told me two weeks ago that I would start loving creepy stories, I would have laughed out loud!)

Littlewing, you are so good to us.  :)

Dagi

Dagi, thanks for your kind words.  I find it interesting that you say you never knew you would like creepy stories.  They can really be addicting, and some are very interesting.  I hate the slasher stuff, although some of them can be fun.  But the tales that deal with ghosts, vampires, aliens (yeah, some Sci Fi can be classified as horror) that sort of thing, is what I love.  My mom says she can't stand horror, but when I put on "Psycho" last night, she sat and watched the entire thing, and was quite into it.  But then Hitchcock is a special case.   When a horror movie is well done, it can be irresistible!  It's fun to be scared!
Title: Re: Room 4 (part 3)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 21, 2007, 02:41:43 pm

OMG this is getting really creepy!!  :o Superb littlewing ....  thanks for scaring the whatsits out of me!

Susie  :)

Thanks, SusieBaby!  It's just as fun for me to write.  I hope to wrap the story up soon, and start to work on the next creepy tale.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on October 21, 2007, 02:46:55 pm
Yes!  We don't get very many visitors, and now that we've remodeled the place, we have room.  I hope you'll be comfortable, and I'm sure you will.  We'll be glad to have you.  It is not often we have such a pleasure.   :)


I´m sure we´ll have a great time togehter, and thanks again for offering me your hospitality!

 :-* :-* :-*

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on October 22, 2007, 03:19:53 am
Seven moths?  Was this a reference to Silence of the Lambs?  Is this how you measure time?  By the number of moths you'll be using between now and then?   :o 

Well, that's about the scariest thing that's been written so far.   :laugh:


 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
Title: Re: Give us some of that candy!
Post by: Dagi on October 22, 2007, 03:23:10 am
Well, if the other people don't have blindfolds on, then I'm certainly not going naked.  I hope you keep yours on, too.  And no, not because I think seeing you naked would scare the whatsits out of me.  But I would die of embarrassment if either one of us was naked.   :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: 

Gee, all I did was suggest a little Hollween outing, and suddenly I'm being stripped naked, sent out into the chilly England night, and told to dance in front of a group of strangers and one dear friend.  Talk about an experience I'd never forget.   :o

(But then again, I might do it, just so you could see my little vampire and know that there's not much to be afraid of.   :'(  Like a toy poodle, he's all bark and no bite.)

 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

I´m laughing tears.

Yesterday the little vampire was still a monster that you needed to hold with both hands while peeing.  :laugh: :-X :-X :-X
Title: Re: Sustenance
Post by: moremojo on October 22, 2007, 07:15:24 pm
This story is rated NC17
Sustenance by garycottle
This is a remarkable story, Gary, subversive but brilliant. Thematically, apart from the Anne Rice novels, it made me think back to William Blake's Songs of Innocence and Experience, of how experience is the inevitable and perennial side of the same coin inhabited by innocence. Your depiction of the transition from youth to maturity as a literal dark night of the soul is masterful and memorable--in fact, this is one of the strongest treatments of this theme I have encountered anywhere. Congratulations on some great writing.
Title: Re: Sustenance
Post by: moremojo on October 22, 2007, 07:28:42 pm
P.S.  Will you be writing us a Halloween tale?
I have the germ of one in mind, but need to finesse the details before sharing it. Plus, I'm still trying to grapple with getting Jack and Ennis involved in some water sports that don't involve skis!  :laugh:
Title: Re: Afterlife
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 23, 2007, 12:09:12 am
Afterlife by Susiebell

The idea seemed ludicrous to Ennis, but Doug was determined to make him do it.

“Ennis, you need help…...  Somethin’s been eating away at you for the last two years … You should see her, she’s the best” he said, pushing Ennis firmly through the door.

If only to satisfy his friend, Ennis stepped reluctantly over the threshold and was greeted with a warm smile and a handshake.  Jane Wiseman was a quiet, unassuming, middle aged woman, not at all what he’d expected; no scarves or bangles, no crystal balls, no incense burners.  She was simply dressed with her hair tied back neatly, there was something very comforting and motherly about her.   She asked him to take a seat, gesturing to the space next to her on the sofa.

“You have suffered a great loss, I see the sadness in your eyes” her voice, soft and soothing, “… but then he was never really yours was he?”

“No ….” Ennis mumbled.

“You never allowed it, never allowed him to be yours …. though he was always yours for the taking.”  She lifted his chin gently so that their eyes met, “But do not fear, he loves you, he has always loved you…..  and he forgives you.”

Ennis looked down, fingers twiddling with a crease in his jeans, eyes brimming over with tears.

“It’s time for you to forgive yourself…. time for you to let go of your sadness” she uttered, folding her hands over his.  He hunched over and curled into a ball on the sofa.  Tears poured down his face and he sobbed, sobbed like an innocent child mourning the loss of a most beloved teddy bear.

He didn’t know how long he’d been crying, Mrs Wiseman had stayed quietly next to him, gently stroking his hair.  Wiping his tears on the back of his hand, he felt his spirits soar, the heavy burden of guilt, finally lifting from his shoulders.  When it was time for him to leave, he thanked her, taking her into his arms and squeezing her tight.  As he opened the door, she smiled one last time, “You haven’t lost him Mr Del Mar … he’s here with you, he’ll always be with you ….. your lil’ darlin’”




Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Susiebaby, this is just beautiful.  I love the idea of Ennis' friend encouraging him to see someone who can channel Jack's spirit.  And Jack was forgiving, and set him free.  Lovely writing, Babe!  Very comforting.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 23, 2007, 12:09:43 am

I´m sure we´ll have a great time togehter, and thanks again for offering me your hospitality!

 :-* :-* :-*

Dagi

You bet!
Title: Re: Give us some of that candy!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 23, 2007, 12:10:25 am
Hi Littlewing.  Maybe we can go together next year.   ;D  I'd love that!

We'll work on it.  I look forward to it!  :)
Title: The Doll
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 23, 2007, 12:21:56 am
The Doll by Littlewing1957

When the physical body experiences a horrible trauma that results in death, the soul may become trapped on Earth, often taking up residence in an inanimate object.

Rich was lucky to be alive.  He was home when the rednecks stormed their little house, dragging poor Earl out, kicking and screaming, and then torturing him to death.  Earl fought his attackers like a madman, but he insisted that Rich hide in the little alcove under the stairs.  Rich would be safe there.  Earl loved Rich more than life itself, and refused to allow any harm to come to him.  Besides, it was not Rich that they wanted.  Earl was the tough old bird who talked back to those uneducated, inbred idiots.  He didn’t back down when he heard the taunts, “queer, queen, sissy boy!”  He even bloodied a few noses.  But Rich was more mild mannered, shy and unassuming.  The mob didn’t want him.

After Earl’s death, Rich couldn’t stand, nor could he afford to be in the house they shared.  He put it on the market and rented a little place in Cody just by the railroad tracks.  He took a job in the post office sorting mail.  His life was normal, by all accounts, but he would forever be haunted by the love of his life’s cruel fate.

Rich was paid every two weeks.  He earned a modest salary, but made more than enough to get by.  He had a little nephew that he was fond of, saw often, and liked to spoil.  One Friday after he got his check, Rich decided to buy his 3 year old nephew a toy.  He walked to Sears and took the elevator to the toy department.  He inspected toy trucks, baseball bats, stuffed animals.  Nothing struck his fancy until he noticed a doll: a cowboy doll all appointed with chaps, spurs, gun, and hat.  Rich picked up the doll, which was larger than any doll he had ever seen and gave it the once over.  There was something very familiar about the face.  He was drawn to the brown eyes, the heavy, busy eyebrows, and the perpetual grin.  The doll reminded him of someone.  He had to have it.  No, it was for his nephew!!??  Rich wasn’t sure anymore, but he paid for the doll and took it home.

When he reached his place, Rich fetched the doll from the shopping bag and sat it on the sofa in his tiny living room.  He studied it a bit more, and satisfied that he picked the right gift for little Clark, walked into the kitchen to fix something for supper.  Rich’s appetite had diminished considerably since the death of his lover, and most nights all he really wanted was soup, crackers and a drink.  This night was no different.  Rich placed his soup and cola on a tray and carried it into the living room to eat and watch a little TV.  But when he reached the sofa, the doll was gone.  Rich almost dropped his tray, but collected himself enough to put his food down and go look for the toy.  He searched under the couch, his table and chair, looked in the bathroom, no doll.  Rich was trying hard to retain his composure, but he was coming unglued.  Nowhere else left to look but the bedroom.  Rich’s bedroom was furnished with a full sized bed and not much else.  The bedroom was pitch dark, and when he turned on the light, he almost fell in a swoon.  For on the bed was the doll, naked, laying provocatively on Rich’s pillow.  Rich looked on in wonder at the doll’s rubber manhood – outsized and perfectly lifelike!  One look into the doll’s eyes, now moist, and Rich was no longer afraid. 

“Earl!”  Rich croaked, as he took a tentative step toward the bed.  Silent tears streamed down his craggy face as he thought he heard the doll say,

“It’s okay, Rich!”  It’s okay.  I’m here with you now, and I’ll never leave you.  Come to me, baby.  Come to me now!”  Rich turned off the light and approached his bed.

Rich’s nephew never got the doll, but was presented with a shiny red fire truck instead.  Rich’s neighbors didn’t know what to make of a grown man who carried around a cowboy doll with him wherever he went.  One day Mrs. Miller, Rich’s next door neighbor, passed him sitting out on his stoop with his doll on his lap.  Mrs. Miller was used to the sight of Rich with his doll, but his time, there was something different.  She could have sworn the doll was sitting on Rich’s lap with a wicked grin on its face, a slight bulge protruding from its pants…

Title: Re: Afterlife
Post by: Dagi on October 23, 2007, 04:25:11 am
Afterlife by Susiebell



Thank you for this comforting little tale, Susie! So Ennis has done another step, and allows himself to cry in the presence of stranger....he must have felt strongly Jack's presence, too. Beautiful, Susie dear!

Dagi
Title: Re: The Doll
Post by: Dagi on October 23, 2007, 07:32:03 am
The Doll by Littlewing1957


Rich’s nephew never got the doll, but was presented with a shiny red fire truck instead.  Rich’s neighbors didn’t know what to make of a grown man who carried around a cowboy doll with him wherever he went.  One day Mrs. Miller, Rich’s next door neighbor, passed him sitting out on his stoop with his doll on his lap.  Mrs. Miller was used to the sight of Rich with his doll, but his time, there was something different.  She could have sworn the doll was sitting on Rich’s lap with a wicked grin on its face, a slight bulge protruding from its pants…



What an extraordinary tale, Littlewing! And it makes me think of how we often watch someone and think their behavior is somehow insane, like Rich sitting on the stoop with a doll on his lap, but we never know in wich way this behavior does make perfect sense to this person.....

Dagi
Title: Re: The Doll
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 23, 2007, 08:15:04 pm
What an extraordinary tale, Littlewing! And it makes me think of how we often watch someone and think their behavior is somehow insane, like Rich sitting on the stoop with a doll on his lap, but we never know in wich way this behavior does make perfect sense to this person.....

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi!
Title: Room 4 (Conclusion)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 23, 2007, 08:55:52 pm
Room 4 (Conclusion) by Littlewing1957

Jack was shaken, but able to run.  He and Ennis ran as fast as they could to the motel parking lot.  But just as both men were about to make for their rides, cooler heads prevailed.  Jack caught up to Ennis and grabbed him by the hand, held him fast and still.

“Look, Friend,” Jack began.  “We can’t just leave without checking out.  That ain’t right!  Let’s both go up to the front office and take care of business.  What ya say?”  Ennis was always an honest man, and couldn’t argue with Jack.  He felt silly for being so chicken awhile ago.
 
“Okay, Rodeo, let’s do this!”  Ennis said, shaking his head.  “The sooner we’re out of here, the better for both of us!”  Jack led the way.
 
The front desk was quiet, and the attendant happened to be the same young person who checked Jack in just hours ago.

“What can I do for you?” Asked the young man, who seemed no more than 20 years old.  He studied Jack and Ennis with a skeptical eye.

“Is everything okay?  Do you need anything?”  Jack rubbed at the hand mark on his cheek, and the young desk clerk’s eyes were drawn to the mark.  The blood seemed to drain from his ruddy face as he noticed the evil looking hand print on Jack’s handsome mug.

“What happened, sir?”  The young man stammered.  “Looks like you got into a fight!”

“Well, I’m not sure what happened to me!”  Jack stated in an uncertain tone.

“But don’t you worry about that.  I just need to check out of here.  You can handle that for me, right?”
 
The clerk nodded and turned to find the papers he prepared for Jack’s stay.  While he prepared the forms for check-out, Ennis and Jack talked among themselves, replayed what happened just a few minutes ago.  The clerk couldn’t help but overhear.  He handed over a few papers for Jack to sign.  And without provocation, the desk clerk, who said his name was David, told Jack and Ennis the story of Room 4.  He began:

Something terrible happened in room 4 about 3 years ago. I was still in school, but worked here most nights, just as I do now. One winter evening a man and his wife checked in for the weekend. I remember giving them room 4, which is our best suite. It seemed to me that the couple was on their honeymoon, and I wanted them to have the best we had to offer. Well, later that night the mister decided to step out on the town without his missus. The little lady was furious with her husband for leaving her alone like that, and decided to come down to the desk and pay me a visit. We spoke of this and that, and just sort of kept one another company until the husband returned. He was drunk as a skunk, and when he saw the two of us laughing and talking, I guess he thought something funny was going on between us. Without a word to me, the husband grabbed hold of his wife by the arm and practically dragged her out of the office. I didn't know what to do. I was just a kid, but I knew that something awful would happen in that room and it would happen soon. I wasn't wrong. I could hear the screams clear down to this desk, just where we are now. I didn't want to, but I called the police. They arrived about 15 minutes later!   I heard from the people who occupied the rooms next to suite 4 that the cops ordered the man to stop hitting his wife. When he refused, they shot him dead. I still feel guilty to this day for not going down there and try to help the lady. Who knows, maybe the man would be alive today if I had done something."

Ennis and Jack listened to this story with great interest.  It explained much.  It didn't explain the human shadows outside the room, but Jack decided he had heard enough.  He didn't need to know any more.

"You were right not to get involved, son," Ennis told the clerk, who began shaking at the memory of the incident. "That man could have killed you and his wife. I guess that poor man's spirit is still trapped in the room. It seems he'll be hitting and slapping for a long time to come!"

The clerk didn't disagree with Ennis. How could he?  He took the papers from Jack, collected room keys from both men, and gave Jack a few coupons for a free dinner at the diner in town, and a certificate for a free night's stay at the motel.  Jack thanked the young man and left the office.

“This meal voucher will come in mighty handy!”  Ennis exclaimed, as he climbed in his van.
 
“Yeah, I suppose so!”  Jack answered as he walked to his truck.  "But I don't want this certificate.  It's all yours if you want to stay here again, Cowboy!"  Ennis shook his head no, and Jack tore the certificate in two.

“Where to now, Cowboy?”

“Follow me, Jack!”  Ennis yelled out of his window.

“This time, nobody will slap you, that is..unless you want them to!”  Ennis gave Jack a little wink and pulled out onto the road.



Title: Re: Room 4 (Conclusion)
Post by: Dagi on October 24, 2007, 07:20:42 am
Room 4 (Conclusion) by Littlewing1957

Jack was shaken, but able to run.  He and Ennis ran as fast as they could to the motel parking lot.  But just as both men were about to make for their rides, cooler heads prevailed.  Jack caught up to Ennis and grabbed him by the hand, held him fast and still.

“Look, Friend,” Jack began.  “We can’t just leave without checking out.  That ain’t right!  Let’s both go up to the front office and take care of business.  What ya say?”  Ennis was always an honest man, and couldn’t argue with Jack.  He felt silly for being so chicken awhile ago.
 
“Okay, Rodeo, let’s do this!”  Ennis said, shaking his head.  “The sooner we’re out of here, the better for both of us!”  Jack led the way.
 
The front desk was quiet, and the attendant happened to be the same young person who checked Jack in just hours ago.

“What can I do for you?” Asked the young man, who seemed no more than 20 years old.  He studied Jack and Ennis with a skeptical eye.

“Is everything okay?  Do you need anything?”  Jack rubbed at the hand mark on his cheek, and the young desk clerk’s eyes were drawn to the mark.  The blood seemed to drain from his ruddy face as he noticed the evil looking hand print on Jack’s handsome mug.

“What happened, sir?”  The young man stammered.  “Looks like you got into a fight!”

“Well, I’m not sure what happened to me!”  Jack stated in an uncertain tone.

“But don’t you worry about that.  I just need to check out of here.  You can handle that for me, right?”
 
The clerk nodded and turned to find the papers he prepared for Jack’s stay.  While he prepared the forms for check-out, Ennis and Jack talked among themselves, replayed what happened just a few minutes ago.  The clerk couldn’t help but overhear.  He handed over a few papers for Jack to sign.  And without provocation, the desk clerk, who said his name was David, told Jack and Ennis the story of Room 4.  He began:

Something terrible happened in room 4 about 3 years ago. I was still in school, but worked here most nights, just as I do now. One winter evening a man and his wife checked in for the weekend. I remember giving them room 4, which is our best suite. It seemed to me that the couple was on their honeymoon, and I wanted them to have the best we had to offer. Well, later that night the mister decided to step out on the town without his missus. The little lady was furious with her husband for leaving her alone like that, and decided to come down to the desk and pay me a visit. We spoke of this and that, and just sort of kept one another company until the husband returned. He was drunk as a skunk, and when he saw the two of us laughing and talking, I guess he thought something funny was going on between us. Without a word to me, the husband grabbed hold of his wife by the arm and practically dragged her out of the office. I didn't know what to do. I was just a kid, but I knew that something awful would happen in that room and it would happen soon. I wasn't wrong. I could hear the screams clear down to this desk, just where we are now. I didn't want to, but I called the police. They arrived about 15 minutes later!   I heard from the people who occupied the rooms next to suite 4 that the cops ordered the man to stop hitting his wife. When he refused, they shot him dead. I still feel guilty to this day for not going down there and try to help the lady. Who knows, maybe the man would be alive today if I had done something."

Ennis and Jack listened to this story with great interest.  It explained much.  It didn't explain the human shadows outside the room, but Jack decided he had heard enough.  He didn't need to know any more.

"You were right not to get involved, son," Ennis told the clerk, who began shaking at the memory of the incident. "That man could have killed you and his wife. I guess that poor man's spirit is still trapped in the room. It seems he'll be hitting and slapping for a long time to come!"

The clerk didn't disagree with Ennis. How could he?  He took the papers from Jack, collected room keys from both men, and gave Jack a few coupons for a free dinner at the diner in town, and a certificate for a free night's stay at the motel.  Jack thanked the young man and left the office.

“This meal voucher will come in mighty handy!”  Ennis exclaimed, as he climbed in his van.
 
“Yeah, I suppose so!”  Jack answered as he walked to his truck.  "But I don't want this certificate.  It's all yours if you want to stay here again, Cowboy!"  Ennis shook his head no, and Jack tore the certificate in two.

“Where to now, Cowboy?”

“Follow me, Jack!”  Ennis yelled out of his window.

“This time, nobody will slap you, that is..unless you want them to!”  Ennis gave Jack a little wink and pulled out onto the road.





Well I´m realy glad they got the hell out of there!! Thank you for this entertaining series, Marie!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on October 24, 2007, 08:38:08 pm
Hello fanfic writers!! Hi Dagi, Susie, Littlewing, and Gary. When is Toycoon going to be back -- anybody know? It seems like he has been gone 3 weeks already. I miss him -- even tho I'm not around much.

Gary and Littlewing -- are your areas affected by the fires? I think there are a few in Toycoon's area. It has rained for the past 5 days here -- it would be great if the rain would go west and help douse those fires. Hopefully the firefighters will get them under control soon. I'm sure they are getting discouraged.
 
Title: Re: The Doll
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 24, 2007, 09:53:45 pm
Hi there Littlewing.  You know, this is so strange that it's freaky.  I'm almost tempted to ask you if you were smoking something while writing it.   :laugh:  Boy, was that different.  What an imagination you have.  And I'm so glad that the nephew did not get that doll.   :o

Gary

Thanks, Gary Baby...I think!  :laugh:  It is funny you mentioned smoking!  I've never smoked, I don't drink, I don't do drugs of any kind.   I don't know what any of that is like.  I even have problems taking aspirin.  My sister once told me she that I'm so strange as my normal self that she wonders what I would be like, what I would come up with if I was under the influence of something.  The world may never know!  :laugh:
Title: Re: Room 4 (Conclusion)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 24, 2007, 09:55:48 pm
Very creepy, Littlewing.  And it reminded me of something that happened in West Virginia a few years ago.  A minister and his wife rented a cabin, cabin number 13, in Babcock state park.  And in the night the woman was bludgeoned to death, and the minister escaped with minor injuries.  He claimed someone broke into the cabin and attacked them both.  But the authorities convicted him of murder.  Now cabin 13 is often rented by people wanting to see a ghost.

http://www.babcocksp.com/accommodations.html (http://www.babcocksp.com/accommodations.html)

Cabin 13 is over a steep hill, and it has steps leading down to it, like the last cabin pictured on this page.  In fact that may be cabin 13.  I'm not sure.  But I've been to Babcock many, many times.  It's beautiful.  And images of the mill can be found everywhere.  It's surprising how many people recognize that mill.  They've seen pictures, but they never knew exactly where it was.

Gary

Babcock is indeed beautiful!  The cabins are charming.  And the lore of is very chilling!  I love this sort of thing!  I am so enjoying this!
Title: Re: Room 4 (Conclusion)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 24, 2007, 09:56:36 pm
Very creepy end to the story littlewing .... a brilliant bit of storytelling  :-*

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Thanks, Susiebaby!  This series was very fun to write!
Title: Re: Room 4 (Conclusion)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 24, 2007, 10:00:24 pm
Well I´m realy glad they got the hell out of there!! Thank you for this entertaining series, Marie!

Dagi

Thanks Dagi, sweetheart.  I'm glad you liked it!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 24, 2007, 10:04:00 pm
Hello fanfic writers!! Hi Dagi, Susie, Littlewing, and Gary. When is Toycoon going to be back -- anybody know? It seems like he has been gone 3 weeks already. I miss him -- even tho I'm not around much.

Gary and Littlewing -- are your areas affected by the fires? I think there are a few in Toycoon's area. It has rained for the past 5 days here -- it would be great if the rain would go west and help douse those fires. Hopefully the firefighters will get them under control soon. I'm sure they are getting discouraged.
 

Hey there, Shasta!  I was thinking about you today.  I was wondering about Toycoon, myself.  He's probably back, but may be resting up.  I can't wait until he returns.  The fires?  No, they're nowhere near where I am.  The fire storms are in So. Cal, almost 500 miles away.  Gary is a bit closer, but I'm sure he's safe.  Now that you mention it, Toycoon lives in LA!!!!  I hope he's okay.  It is possible that his property was affected.... let's hope not!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 24, 2007, 10:05:20 pm
Hi Shasta dear.  Great to see you here.  I'm not sure when exactly Toycoon is coming back, but you're right, it does seem like ages since he was here. 

The fires have been really scary.  As I understand it that area gets hit with fires regularly, but this was far worse than most years.  But I hear that a lot of people are returning home today, so maybe the worst is behind us.  I was not personally effected by them here in Merced, and I doubt that Littlewing was.  The wind was blowing everything west and out into the ocean, so I didn't even see any smoke. 

It was a sunny, clear day here, with highs in the mid 80's.  I'm pining for autumn back east.  October was my favorite month in West Virginia.  It was cool without being cold, which was nice after the heat and humidity of summer, and the color of the leaves are wonderful.

Gary

I wish I knew how to reach Toycoon.  I'm worried now!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on October 24, 2007, 11:08:27 pm
Hi Shasta dear.  Great to see you here.  I'm not sure when exactly Toycoon is coming back, but you're right, it does seem like ages since he was here. 

The fires have been really scary.  As I understand it that area gets hit with fires regularly, but this was far worse than most years.  But I hear that a lot of people are returning home today, so maybe the worst is behind us.  I was not personally effected by them here in Merced, and I doubt that Littlewing was.  The wind was blowing everything west and out into the ocean, so I didn't even see any smoke. 

It was a sunny, clear day here, with highs in the mid 80's.  I'm pining for autumn back east.  October was my favorite month in West Virginia.  It was cool without being cold, which was nice after the heat and humidity of summer, and the color of the leaves are wonderful.

Gary

Hey! Hi Gary! I'm glad to hear that the smoke and fire has stayed away from you and that some of the evacuees are getting to return home.

I know -- I'm sure fall is so much different in Merced than in West VA!! I, too, love fall and October!  :)

Everyone got their Halloween candy ready??!!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on October 24, 2007, 11:11:52 pm
Hey there, Shasta!  I was thinking about you today.  I was wondering about Toycoon, myself.  He's probably back, but may be resting up.  I can't wait until he returns.  The fires?  No, they're nowhere near where I am.  The fire storms are in So. Cal, almost 500 miles away.  Gary is a bit closer, but I'm sure he's safe.  Now that you mention it, Toycoon lives in LA!!!!  I hope he's okay.  It is possible that his property was affected.... let's hope not!

Hi Littlewing -- You are far away from the fires. Good. Some of the people (Adiabatic for one) on the board are close enough to be coughing and feeling ill from the smoke. I'm hoping the fires will be put out soon, and glad to hear that you and Gary are fine. Let us know if you hear from Toycoon.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 25, 2007, 12:44:54 am
Wasn't Murr from San Diego?  That would be ground zero, would it not?  Anybody hear from her?  She left Bettermost a while back, but continued to post at IMDb, but it seems she's not active there anymore either.

Gary

I almost forgot Merr is down in San Diego.  I sent her a long PM a few days ago, but I haven't heard back.  I hope they're both okay. 
Title: Re: The Doll
Post by: Dagi on October 25, 2007, 12:59:20 am
Thanks, Gary Baby...I think!  :laugh:  It is funny you mentioned smoking!  I've never smoked, I don't drink, I don't do drugs of any kind.   I don't know what any of that is like.  I even have problems taking aspirin.  My sister once told me she that I'm so strange as my normal self that she wonders what I would be like, what I would come up with if I was under the influence of something.  The world may never know!  :laugh:

 :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on October 25, 2007, 01:01:04 am
Hello fanfic writers!! Hi Dagi, Susie, Littlewing, and Gary. When is Toycoon going to be back -- anybody know? It seems like he has been gone 3 weeks already. I miss him -- even tho I'm not around much.

Gary and Littlewing -- are your areas affected by the fires? I think there are a few in Toycoon's area. It has rained for the past 5 days here -- it would be great if the rain would go west and help douse those fires. Hopefully the firefighters will get them under control soon. I'm sure they are getting discouraged.
 

I Shasta, nicce to see you here! I miss Toycoon too. Hope everything is alright when he comes back...
Title: Re: Earthbound
Post by: Dagi on October 25, 2007, 01:11:33 am
EarthBound by Littlewing1957

Earth-bound spirits often wander to and fro through the land, observing worldly pleasures that they are no longer able to enjoy.  Most spirits accept the fact that they have lost the ability to feel pleasure in any of its forms.  But a few brazen entities find ways to experience the delights they miss.

The camp fire was glowing red and golden against the inky blackness of the night.  Ennis and Jack were full clothed, and spooned together on the floor of the tent.  They were silent and sort of introspective after a fine supper.  Ennis and Jack snuggled as they savored the peace of nature.

Jesse Combes died March 2, 1898 not far from Ennis and Jack’s campsite.  He was shot in the back of the head by his brother-in-law during a hunting excursion.  Jesse’s death was ruled an accident, but his wife wasn’t convinced.  Mrs. Combes loved her husband even though she often caught him in the act of congress with men.  She made a horrible mistake when she mentioned her husband’s fondness for men to her older brother.  Sheila Combes never confronted her brother about the “accident.”  She was sick about the loss of her man, but she loved her big brother, and didn't want to lose him, as well.   Sheila accepted Jesse's untimely death as God’s plan. 

Jesse, on the other hand, knew that he was murdered - perhaps the reason why he finds no rest, but wanders the earth -  trying to find a way to his reward.  Jason, his brother in law, died in 1900 in a similar fashion.  His spirit was also earth-bound.  Jesse found it quite strange to pass his brother-in-law’s ghost in the woods.  They see each other as pale orbs, wavering and blurry.  Jesse nods to his brother-in-law’s spirit and keeps on going.  No hard feelings.

Jesse’s accident occurred almost on the spot where Ennis and Jack made camp.  Jesse’s restless spirit made a pass by his death place at least twice a day, and when he saw Jack and Ennis, he knew right away that they were lovers.  Jesse watched, undetected, as Ennis ran his fingers through Jack’s thick hair; Jack kissed Ennis’ lips over and over; Ennis chased Jack around the fire.  Jesse closed his eyes and remembered when he made sweet love to his friend: a hayseed named Lowell.  Jesse missed the feel of a man’s strong embrace, and as he watched Jack and Ennis’ horseplay, Jesse formulated a plan.

Ennis looked longingly into Jack’s blue eyes and started to disrobe.  Jack was already undressed, and he slowly unbuttoned Ennis’ stripped shirt.  He lay down on the bedroll and invited Ennis on top.  Ennis kissed his lover’s lips, bit and licked them unti he heard Jack moan into his mouth.

“I have made you ready?” he asked a panting Jack Twist.  Jack didn’t answer, but raised his muscular legs, poised, expectant.  Ennis gathered all the spit he could in his sensuous mouth, and with his saliva laden tongue, lubed Jack’s tiny pucker.

Jesse watched.  He trembled at the sight, but he waited.  The timing must be perfect!

With one firm push, Ennis was in.  Jack braced for the pain - pleasure, and when Ennis rubbed against that sweet spot, Jack gasped. 

“Yeah, Cowboy!”  It was Jack, his thighs over Ennis’ broad shoulders!

“Yeah, there!  That’s it, right there!”

 Ennis smiled, as he enjoyed Jack’s pleasure, took great pride in making him feel good!  Jesse was enjoying it, too. 

“Work me, Cowboy, work me!”

Jack thrust his pelvis up, met Ennis stroke for stroke.  Jesse saw an opening.  The spirit sprang into Jack’s body just at the moment he reached heaven.  Ennis was almost there, but when he looked into Jack’s eyes, he didn’t recognize them.  For Jack’s blue eyes were now brown, his eyebrows white, his lips thin as a reed, his hair streaked grey.  Jack was looking into the face of another man – a man whose face was contorted with pleasure.  Ennis pulled out of Jack in a panic, certain that he was hallucinating. 

“Ennis, what the hell!”  Jack screamed.  But just as he uttered those words, Jack’s features returned to normal.

“What is it, Friend?”  Jack, worried now.  “What’s the matter, Ennis?”  Jack wiped the sweat from Ennis brow.  Ennis couldn’t bring himself to tell Jack what he thought he just saw.  Jack would never believe him anyway. 

“Nothing, Jack.  Nothing.  You okay?”  Jack nodded and pulled Ennis close.  He lowered Ennis down onto his chest, cuddling him, comforting him. 

Jesse exited Jack’s beautiful body just as he climaxed.  It was good – it was very good.  He had not felt so good in almost 100 years.  Jesse felt he deserved it.  He had done no real harm.




Oh Marie, I loved it. Thank you so much for this very special story. I´m very, very tired at that moment and therefor I can´t think of anything intelligent to say, sorry, but I so enjoyed this one.

Dagi
Title: Re: Earthbound
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 25, 2007, 09:56:19 pm
Oh Marie, I loved it. Thank you so much for this very special story. I´m very, very tired at that moment and therefor I can´t think of anything intelligent to say, sorry, but I so enjoyed this one.

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi!  This story was fun to write!  I'm working on another scary story to post tomorrow!
Title: Re: Earthbound
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 25, 2007, 09:56:47 pm
Ah littlewing .... I can't even begin to tell you how much I loved this story.  :-*  It's so beautiful and sensual .... I'm at a loss for words...

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Thanks, SusieBaby!
Title: Re: Earthbound
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 25, 2007, 09:58:40 pm
Ah, poor Jesse.  The idea that his spirit would still want the touch of a man after he died is so sadly erotic, Littlewing.  Let's hope that Jesse will soon find his peace and will be sent to heaven.  And let's hope that heaven for Jesse will be like a Bel Ami video with lots of beautiful boys dropping by in order to have happy sex.   :D

Gary

Thanks, Gary!  I think we all move on after awhile, that is, if our spirit is trapped sown here.  I hear that an earthbound spirit usually has some unfinished business to attend to, or a wrong to make right.
Title: Re: Earthbound
Post by: Dagi on October 26, 2007, 04:37:39 pm
Ah, poor Jesse.  The idea that his spirit would still want the touch of a man after he died is so sadly erotic, Littlewing.  Let's hope that Jesse will soon find his peace and will be sent to heaven.  And let's hope that heaven for Jesse will be like a Bel Ami video with lots of beautiful boys dropping by in order to have happy sex.   :D

Gary

Have you ever read Terry Pratchett? Because in his novels it is said that heaven looks different for everybody - everybody gets what he wished most for on earth.  ;D

Dagi
Title: Re: Earthbound
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 26, 2007, 09:49:16 pm
Have you ever read Terry Pratchett? Because in his novels it is said that heaven looks different for everybody - everybody gets what he wished most for on earth.  ;D

Dagi

Everybody gets what he wished for most on earth?  Sounds good to me!
Title: Re: Earthbound
Post by: Dagi on October 27, 2007, 06:10:53 pm
.... yeah but we can't ALL have Jake Gyllenhaal ... we'd wear him out!!  :P

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


I think everyone would get his or her own Jake...mine for example would definitely have no beard, and he would look like 17 or so... :D!

Dagi
Title: Re: Earthbound
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 27, 2007, 11:31:19 pm
.... yeah but we can't ALL have Jake Gyllenhaal ... we'd wear him out!!  :P

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Very true!
Title: Re: Earthbound
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 27, 2007, 11:31:57 pm
I'm not familiar with Terry Pratchett.  But if he's right someday I'll be 20 years old forever, my name will be Johan, I'll live in a celestial rendition of the Czech Republic, I'll always have a big, goofy smile on my face, and I won't own many clothes.   :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

Gary

P.S.  Did I mention that I'll have lots and lots of really hot buddies?   :D

Sounds good to me, Gary!
Title: The Spirit is Weak
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 28, 2007, 12:01:43 am
The Spirit is Weak by Littlewing1957

Some say that spirits remain on Earth because they died so quickly that they don’t know they’re dead.  Some earthbound spirits continue on, visiting the places they frequented while alive, wondering why strangers, or even loved ones no longer interact with them.

Jack entered the bar in a snit!  He had been driving all night, but he didn’t seem to get anywhere.  He thought it strange that he seemed to pass the same street signs, billboards, landmarks.  It seemed to Jack that he traveled many miles in what seemed like minutes.  But he wasn’t any closer to his destination.  Funny, but Jack couldn’t remember where he was headed!

The bar was crowded, smoky, and thick with the scent of unwashed bodies.  Jack made his way to the bar and sat on one of the high stools.  He looked around him at the patrons who were smoking, drinking, and shooting the breeze.  Most of them were quite ugly, Jack observed.  The guy sitting next to him was perhaps the most presentable person in the bar, but he stared straight ahead, a glass of beer right in front of him.  Jack tried to strike up a conversation with the stranger, but the man looked straight ahead, like he never heard.

“Oh, so that’s how it is!”  Jack said to the stranger.  He didn’t know exactly where he was, but when he found out..well, Jack vowed never to return to such a seemingly backward, strange place.

The bartender placed a round napkin in front of Jack and asked him what he wanted.

“Whiskey!”  Jack stated emphatically.  The bartender, a pretty young thing in jeans and a T-shirt, nodded politely and fetched Jack’s drink.  She placed a shot glass of whiskey in front of Jack and he chugged it in one gulp.

“Another one!”  Jack barked.  When he saw the look on the girl’s face, Jack was shamed.  He realized that he was acting like an ass and had no reason to take his anger out on the bartender.  “I’m a gentleman!”  Jack thought as he called the young woman over.  She approached him with his second shot of whiskey and leaned in to hear what he had to say.

“I’m sorry, miss!” Jack began, as he placed a $5.00 bill in her hand.  The young lady smiled when she saw the $5.00 and placed it in her bosom. 

“You’re not from around here, are you?”  The bartender asked.

“No, I’m from Texas.”  Jack stated matter-of-factly. 

“I’m on my way to…”  Jack couldn’t finish the sentence, even as the young bartender looked on expectantly. 

“Where you headed?”  She encouraged.  But Jack just stared at her.  He turned up his glass, finishing his whiskey in one gulp.  He was starting to get the old familiar buzz, and was beginning to feel more like himself.  Perhaps it was time to get back on the road.  Jack told himself that he could drive with the windows down, and the cool breeze would keep him awake, make him keen and sharp.  Jack paid for his drinks and got up to leave.

On his way out he noticed that no one even looked at him.  It was odd, because Jack Twist was a head-turner and he knew it.  He was used to women, and even men looking at him.  But this time it was different, and it spooked him.  Almost at the door, and a surly looking man in a ten gallon hat almost stepped on his foot.  Jack looked at the man and said,

“Excuse me, mister.”  But the man kept on walking without even looking in Jack’s direction. 

“Okay, that’s it!”  Jack thought.  “These people need some manners!”  Jack couldn’t explain why he went after the big stranger; it was not at all like him.  Perhaps it was the drink.  But Jack followed the man who was walking to the bar.  When the big guy stopped in front of the pretty young thing of a bartender, Jack tapped him on the shoulder.

“Hey mister, I’m talking to you!”  Jack exclaimed.  No reaction of any kind from the man.  The bartender handed the surly yokel a glass of beer, and when he turned to leave the bar, he walked right through Jack’s body!  Jack shivered as the man passed through him.  He looked at the bartender, who shrugged and whispered,

“Go to the light.  Go to God.” 

Jack looked down and inspected his body.  He seemed quite whole, but what just happened, the "accident" with the surly man, explained a lot. 

“I’m dead?”  He whispered.  The young lady nodded sadly. 

Jack gave the bartender a solemn but warm smile.  He looked up at the ceiling and noticed a bright light descending toward him.

“Thank you, miss!”  Jack whispered almost as an afterthought before he disappeared.


Title: Re: The Spirit is Weak
Post by: Dagi on October 28, 2007, 03:59:49 pm
The Spirit is Weak by Littlewing1957


“Thank you, miss!”  Jack whispered almost as an afterthought before he disappeared.




What an extraordinary person the bartender must be, that she can see Jack, although she doesn´t know him. You write stories that are creepy, and utterly believable at the same time.

Dagi
Title: Re: The Spirit is Weak
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 28, 2007, 04:04:07 pm
Aww, poor Jack.  How confusing and scary that must have been for him.  But at least he had the bartender.  This reminded me a little of Carnival of Souls, which is very creepy.  But your story was uplifting in the end.

Gary

I saw Carnival of Souls the other night for the first time in many years.  It is one of the creepiest movies out there, and certainly imspired this story.
Title: Re: The Spirit is Weak
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 28, 2007, 04:05:02 pm
Brilliant story littlewing .... what a wonderful imagination you have!

“Go to the light.  Go to God.”  I'm not a religious woman, but this brought tears to my eyes.  Thank goodness Jack had the bartender to guide him.

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Thanks, Susiebaby!  You always say the sweetest things!
Title: Re: The Spirit is Weak
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 28, 2007, 04:06:40 pm
What an extraordinary person the bartender must be, that she can see Jack, although she doesn´t know him. You write stories that are creepy, and utterly believable at the same time.

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi.  You alway know what to say.  You guys make me feel so good!  It is one of the reasons I keep on writing.

How about it, you guys?  Should I keep on with the scary stories?  Halloween is not here yet, and I think I can squeeze out a few more horror tales.
Title: Re: The Spirit is Weak
Post by: Dagi on October 28, 2007, 04:52:35 pm
Thanks, Dagi.  You alway know what to say.  You guys make me feel so good!  It is one of the reasons I keep on writing.

How about it, you guys?  Should I keep on with the scary stories?  Halloween is not here yet, and I think I can squeeze out a few more horror tales.

Keep them coming, Babe! I love them!!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on October 28, 2007, 04:55:21 pm
Has anybody heard from Toycoon? Shouldn´t he be back by now?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on October 29, 2007, 07:43:40 am
Dagi, I loved your ghostly (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/3-1.gif) story of Ennis and Jack and Jim so much. (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/veryhappy.gif)  Hope you don't mind me trying to write a second instalment...   


E+J+J Part Two - Jack's Back... by spiceylife(http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/black_cat.gif)


........But Jack’s luscious mouth seemed to be everywhere at once – caressing behind him, between his parted cheeks, warm and wet between his legs, licking at his balls, kissing all over his body, sucking at his nipples but most of all, Jack’s mouth was on Ennis’s, his lips as sweet as ever, his kiss tasting of love..........




Hi Spiceylife, how good to see you again! Are you staying a while? Please do!

Of course I didn´t mind you continuing my little story - in fact it´s an honor!! Your story is heartwarming, touching, sad and comforting at the same time, and of course - spicey as hell!!
HOT HOT HOT!!! My heart has still not gone back to its normal pace... ;D

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 29, 2007, 08:27:35 pm
Has anybody heard from Toycoon? Shouldn´t he be back by now?

I looked at his profile and it says he was on-line today!  Perhaps he was just looking around before he starts posting.  I'll be glad when he makes an official appearance.  I sure do miss him!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 29, 2007, 08:35:41 pm
Dagi, I loved your ghostly (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/3-1.gif) story of Ennis and Jack and Jim so much. (http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/veryhappy.gif)  Hope you don't mind me trying to write a second instalment...   


E+J+J Part Two - Jack's Back... by spiceylife(http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb29/spiceygirls/black_cat.gif)


Ennis cooked Jim his favorite meal – chops, peas and potato mash – to make up for the last time they’d been together.  He knew Jim had been spooked by his strange behavior in bed then, and a hearty, home-cooked meal seemed a good way to fix things between them.  They ate in silence, used to each other’s quiet company, guzzling thirstily on ice-cold beers between mouthfuls. 

The meal over, Ennis cleared the dishes and they chatted a little, nothing too heavy.  Small talk, mostly - local folk, new businesses in town, stock, horses, their kids - and then Jim took Ennis’s hand, giving him that long, meaningful look.  Ennis knew the signal and moved to switch off the light.  He preferred total darkness.  That way his mind could drift off to a gentler place where he might soften the constant sharp edges of his difficult life and ease the gnawing pain a little, if only for a short while, in the black comfort of night.  With the lights off, Ennis could imagine another dark-haired cowboy moving beneath him, calling his name.  And that was what it took to get him through.

He heard the rustle of Jim’s clothing as the other man undressed next to Ennis’s bed, and then the faint creak of bedsprings as he laid down.  Ennis stayed by the door, quickly discarding his own jeans and shirt, comfortable in his nakedness.  He stood a moment, alone, and a quiet, wrenching sigh escaped him.  Slowly he made his way over to Jim, his good friend, companion, sometimes lover, but not the one Ennis pined for when sleep evaded him on those endless, tortured nights spent by himself…

As he stopped by the tiny, cramped bed where Jim now lay, thoughts of Jack washed over him.  Ghostly Jack at the head of the bed, lusty and as beautiful as ever.  Ennis was still bewildered by what he’d seen then, but smiled to himself in the dark as he remembered Jack’s face watching intently, his eyes locked on Ennis but now and then dropping to look at the place where Ennis was sliding into Jim.  Ennis knew that look on Jack’s flushed face from long ago; so aroused, so turned on by the show.  His smile froze, though, when he felt a strange, vague, fuzzy warmth slowly spreading up his naked thighs to hover over his crotch.  He glanced down at himself, confused, but saw nothing in the inky blackness of a moonless night.

Suddenly the tingling, mystical heat enveloped him entirely, from head to toe, and Ennis’s body stiffened as he drew in a startled breath of surprise.  Even as goosebumps broke out all over his skin, somehow a sense of soothing, calming peace overcame Ennis, an unfamiliar feeling he almost didn’t recognize or remember.  And then Ennis gasped in shock as the hot focus shifted back to between his trembling legs.  His hard, muscular body felt pleasured all over but his eyes widened in disbelief as invisible, warm, supernatural fingers roamed sensually all over his balls and dick with a weird, unadulterated sexiness that had Ennis fully erect in seconds.

What the hell’s goin’ on here?  This can’t be happening…

And then he gasped as his cock was engulfed, swallowed and sucked in by the sultry warmth like a vacuum, and he knew immediately, without another thought… 

Jack!

Mingled with the sensation of massaging warmth, Ennis felt Jack’s wet tongue, his full, soft lips upon him again.  How could he ever forget what Jack used to do to him with that sweet, bold mouth of his?  Ennis closed his eyes and gave himself over to Jack’s ministrations once more, just one more time in the dark.  He grasped the chair next to the bed as he felt his legs being spread apart and silky fingers probing him erotically from behind.  He moaned softly as he lost himself to Jack again. His Jack. His one love.

“Ennis?  You okay?”

In his euphoria, Ennis had forgotten where he was, and that Jim was even in the trailer.  He cleared his throat and tried to talk sense, even as Jack’s warm mouth sucking him so perfectly made the task impossible.

“Uh.  Yeah - mmmmhhh - Jim.  Just……aaaahh, gettinmyselfready… For. You.  Mmmmm… Over…Here.  Fuckohfuck!

“Mmm, I wish I could see you, Ennis.  I’m doin’ the same, you know.  Almost there myself.  Don’t be too long now.”

“Yep,” Ennis replied quickly, wanting to cut Jim off, stop him talking, desperate to be with Jack again.

Jack was everywhere, all over Ennis, hands ghosting over every part of his firm and willing body.  A light sheen of sweat covered Ennis as he surrendered to the supernatural assault, thrusting gently as Jack sucked his dick expertly, as only Jack knew how.  But Jack’s luscious mouth seemed to be everywhere at once – caressing behind him, between his parted cheeks, warm and wet between his legs, licking at his balls, kissing all over his body, sucking at his nipples but most of all, Jack’s mouth was on Ennis’s, his lips as sweet as ever, his kiss tasting of love.  A tear ran down Ennis’s cheek as the memories came flooding out.  He clutched at them all, not willing to let them escape out into the dark night.

“Oh, Jack.  Jack.  Yes… little darlin’,” he moaned softly into the blackness.

And Ennis came, a mind-blowing release so strong that his knees gave way and he slumped to the floor, stunned and ecstatic at the otherworldly power of Jack.  He sat in a heap and reached out a lonely hand in the darkness, his chest heaving, not wanting to lose this moment, not ready to lose Jack again.

A voice floated over to him from the vicinity of his bed.

“Er.  The name’s Jim, actually.  And I’m guessin’ you just went without me, Ennis.”


Ah, Spiceylife, you never disappoint!  You're a master, you know that, don't you?  I sure miss you and your brilliant, erotic fic.  That Jack fuckin' Twist!  He's even there for Ennis after death.  That Ennis Del Mar is a lucky man to have someone love and care for him so much that death itself couldn't keep him away.  And I am fortunate enough to be able to read this without interruption.  It is as though my family sensed that I needed this time alone.  Lovely, lovely writing, my dear!
Title: Re: The Spirit is Weak
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 29, 2007, 08:36:23 pm
Yes please!  ;D

Sure.  I'll try!
Title: Re: The Spirit is Weak
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 29, 2007, 08:37:37 pm
Littlewing, please give us some more spooky stories, please.  You know I'm loving them.  And I'm going to get to work on that Tyler and Daniel story.  You know the one where they visit that same haunted house Jack and Ennis visited back in the 70's.   :D

Gary

Okay.  And I can't wait to read more about Tyler and Daniel!
Title: Trick or Treat
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 29, 2007, 09:33:45 pm
Trick or Treat by Littlewing1957

Ennis headed over to Alma’s place just as soon as he clocked out at the ranch.  He looked forward to having his girls over for an entire weekend of Halloween fun.   Alma was kind enough to purchase Jenny and Alma Jr. costumes, which was a time saver. All  Ennis had to do was get them dressed and take them around the neighborhood for some tricks-or-treat fun.  Ennis loved Halloween, but he kept that fact to himself.  He loved buying candy for the few children who happened by his trailer every year; he loved the truly frightening store bought and homemade costumes; he loved the chill in the air which was a forecast of colder weather to come.  Ennis loved it all!

Jenny was dressed as a witch and Alma Jr. was all decked out as a cute fairy.  Not very imaginative costumes, but the girls looked beautiful and were very happy to be with their daddy.  Ennis left a tray of goodies on the stoop of his trailer, just in case a few kids wandered by, and ushered his girls into the truck to take to town.  Ennis read in a magazine that it was no fair taking children out of the neighborhood in search of wealthier blocks with better treats, but to his credit, Ennis did take his kids around the trailer park first.  His neighbors were very nice to Jenny and Alma Jr., practically filling their plastic pumpkins with candy.

Ennis drove the girls to a neighborhood just on the outskirts of town.  It was a working class neighborhood, and Ennis knew the people to be very friendly.  He grew up with a few of the residents, and worked at the ranch with one guy who lived near the end of the block.  As they made their way through the neighborhood, Ennis noticed a house that looked rather out of place.  He didn’t remember such a residence on the block, but then again, he hadn’t been to that part of town in awhile.  Alma Jr. and Jenny were having the time of their lives walking through the neighborhood, smiling at other kids, getting compliments on their costumes from the adults.  When they reached the house that Ennis thought looked rather strange, he told the girls to go up and ask for candy.  The porch light was on, which signaled that the residents were participating.  Alma Jr. and Jenny ran to the front door and rang the bell.  When a man answered in a death’s mask and black cape, the girls shrieked and ran toward their daddy for protection.  Ennis even drew back when he saw the imposing figure.

“It’s okay, ladies!”  The man in the skeletal mask laughed.

 “Come on back.  I’m sorry if I scared you, but I must admit, I love the fact that this costume is so effective.”

Ennis was rubbing Jenny’s back as she caught her breath.  Alma Jr., being the oldest, recovered quickly and was headed to the front door before the man could finish his sentence.  Jenny followed behind her.  The man held out a brightly decorated bowl filled with treats for the girls.  Each selected a piece of candy, and the kind man handed them a few more.

“Thanks, mister!” The girls sang in unison.

“You’re welcome, ladies!”  The cloaked man answered.  He looked over the girl’s shoulders at a smiling Ennis Del Mar.

“What about you, dad?  The man yelled.  “You want a treat?  I have something special for you.”

Ennis shrugged and approached the man’s door warily.  The man turned and walked a few paces into his house and returned with the largest fortune cookie that Ennis had ever seen.  He handed it to Ennis, who needed to open both palms to receive it.

“Now you wait till you get home to open it, ya hear?”  The man whispered.  Ennis turned the fortune cookie from side to side, wondering what to make of it.

“Well, thank you kindly, sir!”  Ennis stated.  His girls looked at the cookie with puzzled expressions on their lovely faces. 

“You’re welcome.  Now remember, eat the cookie and read the fortune when you get home.  Preferably when you’re alone.”  The man nodded his head and closed the door.

“Are you goona keep it, daddy?”  It was Jenny looking at the cookie as though it had sprouted wings.

“Yeah, that is one funny treat!”  Alma Jr. chimed in.  “I didn’t know people gave fortune cookies for Halloween!”  Ennis shrugged.
 
“And look at the size of this thing!”  Ennis stated as he turned the cookie from side to side.  The cookie gave him the creeps, and he couldn’t explain why.  Ennis remembered hearing about voodoo people gaining control of others by having them eat something.   Ennis and the girls continued on, and when they reached a dumpster, he threw the cookie in.  The girls seemed to exhale a sigh of relief when Ennis threw the thing away. 

The man in the grim reaper costume removed his mask and sat down on his leather couch.  His long blonde hair was tied back in a ponytail that filled the hood of his cloak.  He smiled as he thought about Ennis and his daughters.  But he was bummed, as he had a feeling that Ennis would never read the message he stuffed inside the fortune cookie. 

“Ah that Ennis Del Mar!” The blond haired man sighed.  “He is a much harder nut to crack than I thought!  But I’ll try harder.  Looks like I have my work cut out for me.” 

And with that, the blonde haired man retired to his den to practice his violin.


Title: Re: Sins Of The Father
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 30, 2007, 12:08:36 am
Sins Of The Father by garycottle



Gary, this story has everything!  A spooky old house, nightmares, love, sex, secrets, discovery!  It couldn't have been a more satisfying read.  You really went all out on this one, and I have a feeling you'll continue this story.  I can't wait to see what happens when Ennis is taken aside and asked a series of questions.  Thanks so much for writing this for us.  It is so nice to read about Daniel and Tyler again!
Title: Re: Trick or Treat
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 30, 2007, 12:10:21 am
You're a sneaky one, Littlewing.  I should have known that the blond-haired guy was going to pop up soon.  I had to smile when he told Ennis he had a special treat for him.  I was thinking, I'll just bet you do.  :laugh:  Thanks for the story.  I enjoyed it, but I have no idea what it's about.   :P

Gary

This is a strange little tale, isn't it?  I may continue this one.  It seems I have some explaining to do?
Title: Re: Trick or Treat
Post by: Dagi on October 30, 2007, 08:37:44 am
Trick or Treat by Littlewing1957

 

And with that, the blonde haired man retired to his den to practice his violin.




Where are you going with this one, Littlewing?  :laugh: One thing is for sure: Ennis DelMar is a hard nut, and the blonde not the first one to find out!

I can´t wait to read more!

Dagi
Title: Re: Sins Of The Father
Post by: Dagi on October 30, 2007, 08:46:35 am
Sins Of The Father by garycottle



I loved it, Gary, and it was well worth consuming your whole day, if I may say that. I especially loved when Tyler admitted he can´t and doesn´t want to be the man all the time, and the way Daniel dealt with that, making "sweet love" to him. And of course you got me hooked, I can´t wait to read about Tyler and Ennis now.

Dagi
Title: Re: Sins Of The Father
Post by: Dagi on October 30, 2007, 03:10:43 pm
Hi Dagi,

Thanks so much, Dagi.  Yes, I think that spending the day writing this was worth it.  It was work, but I enjoyed it.  And I got to celebrate Halloween in a haunted house with two cute teenage boys.  That was more wicked fun than poppin' a nun's cherry.   :laugh:   :-X

I, too, liked how Tyler explained that he didn't want to be "the man" all the time.  And I loved that he felt safe enough to expose himself to Daniel, even though the chilly house made sex awkward.  Maybe I should have put a wool cap on his head to make him look even more funny.   :laugh:  How could Daniel resist?

Gary

Since Tyler exposed what he exposed he could probably have had a red clown´s nose on, and Dan would still not have been able to resist!  ;D
Title: Re: Sins Of The Father
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 30, 2007, 11:40:32 pm
Thank you so much, Littlewing.  It was certainly long enough to have everything.   :laugh:  When I sat down to write it this morning I had no idea that it would be so long, or that it would take me most of the day to write it.  But I'm very glad to hear that you enjoyed it.

Gary

I enjoyed it very much!  You're very talented, Gary!
Title: Re: Trick or Treat
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 30, 2007, 11:42:10 pm
You've got me completely hooked on this blond guy littlewing!  I can't wait to find out more about him and just where this story is heading!

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Thanks, Susie!  I may have to continue it after Halloween, though.  Is that okay?  I'll be so busy with the kids tomorrow night, and I'm spending this night getting ready for parties at work, my daughter's school, that sort of thing.
Title: Re: A Father's Warning
Post by: Dagi on October 31, 2007, 03:38:13 pm
Happy Halloween everybody.   :)

A Father’s Warning by garycottle

At first he thought he was nine years old again and that he was late getting up for his morning chores.  Why else would his father be telling him to get up in that voice that meant he’d soon get the strap if he didn’t do as he was told?  But then he realized that he was nineteen now, and he was up on Brokeback far away from home, and his father was long in his grave.  So Ennis sat up with a start and bolted out of the tent to find his father had been resurrected from the dead.

“I told you, Ennis!  I told you what happens to queers.  Why didn’t you listen to me?”

Ennis pathetically declared, “I ain’t queer, Daddy.”  He hoped his father didn’t know what he had done with Jack hours earlier.

His father didn’t answer his lie.  Instead, with a tire iron in his hand,  he simply pointed toward the dying campfire.  Ennis turned his gaze and saw that Jack was now out of the tent and by the fire.  The boy was naked and down on all fours.  But what truly stunned Ennis was that an old man with a familiar face was taking Jack from behind.  Ennis couldn’t help but stare in disgust.

A moment later the old man pulled back from Jack, and to Ennis’s horror, he saw that the man had a bloody hole where his dick should have been.  And when he squinted he saw that the old man’s severed member was lodged in Jack’s gapping and bleeding orifice.

Ennis gasped and turned his eyes up toward the old man’s face, but rather than seeing the old man, Ennis was now looking at himself.

“I ain’t queer!” he shouted.  And suddenly he awoke and found that he was still inside the tent, and Jack was sleeping soundly beside him.

 :P :o :P :o :P Thank you so much for this sweet, heartwarming little piece, Gary Lee! It was exactly what I needed right now...and what a comfort that Ennis gets to see his lovely father again!   :D :P Beautifully written!

Happy scary Halloween to you all!  ;D

Dagi
Title: Re: Trick or Treat
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 31, 2007, 04:02:13 pm
Where are you going with this one, Littlewing?  :laugh: One thing is for sure: Ennis DelMar is a hard nut, and the blonde not the first one to find out!

I can´t wait to read more!

Dagi

Hi, Dagi.  I'll add a chapter at a later time.  I'm still working on it!  ;)
Title: Re: A Father's Warning
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 31, 2007, 04:05:02 pm
Happy Halloween everybody.   :)

A Father’s Warning by garycottle

At first he thought he was nine years old again and that he was late getting up for his morning chores.  Why else would his father be telling him to get up in that voice that meant he’d soon get the strap if he didn’t do as he was told?  But then he realized that he was nineteen now, and he was up on Brokeback far away from home, and his father was long in his grave.  So Ennis sat up with a start and bolted out of the tent to find his father had been resurrected from the dead.

“I told you, Ennis!  I told you what happens to queers.  Why didn’t you listen to me?”

Ennis pathetically declared, “I ain’t queer, Daddy.”  He hoped his father didn’t know what he had done with Jack hours earlier.

His father didn’t answer his lie.  Instead, with a tire iron in his hand,  he simply pointed toward the dying campfire.  Ennis turned his gaze and saw that Jack was now out of the tent and by the fire.  The boy was naked and down on all fours.  But what truly stunned Ennis was that an old man with a familiar face was taking Jack from behind.  Ennis couldn’t help but stare in disgust.

A moment later the old man pulled back from Jack, and to Ennis’s horror, he saw that the man had a bloody hole where his dick should have been.  And when he squinted he saw that the old man’s severed member was lodged in Jack’s gapping and bleeding orifice.

Ennis gasped and turned his eyes up toward the old man’s face, but rather than seeing the old man, Ennis was now looking at himself.

“I ain’t queer!” he shouted.  And suddenly he awoke and found that he was still inside the tent, and Jack was sleeping soundly beside him.

Gary, brilliant.  Very creepy, scary as hell!  I loved reading every word. 
Title: Homeward Bound
Post by: moremojo on October 31, 2007, 07:12:33 pm
Homeward Bound by moremojo

Jack didn't know why he was so keen on going to the armpit-edge of the state to cop a glance at Ennis's hometown, specially when Ennis had never shown interest in visiting Lightning Flat, barely seemed to give a damn about the Twist family or history; yet Jack was in love, though he could barely admit it to himself and certainly couldn't say so to Ennis, and Jack knew in his heart of hearts that this undying curiosity to know more about Ennis's past was just the natural result of loving that Del Mar cowboy with every fibre of his soul...on this he mused as he noticed a sign stating SAGE whiz past his lonely barreling truck.

The sun was lowing on the horizon as Jack drove into town, though 'town' was a mite generous in describing the forlorn, ramshackle clutch of buildings that constituted what was left of Sage, imbued with a certain air of nobility by the day's fading light; at least Jack thought things weren't as bad as they could be as he parked his truck and stepped out for a closer look at things, feeling the nip of a cool Wyoming night close in on him as he stepped gingerly down the dusty unpaved streets, searching for any sign of life...he was thus both surprised and comforted to see one weatherworn woman step out a door, give him a wizened hint of a smile, and startle him further by speaking "Evenin' to ya, Jack."

"Evenin', ma'am", Jack responded with his unyielding politeness, "but how do you know me, if you don't mind my askin'?"--Jack felt a twinge of fear mixed with a strange sense of comfort in the moment, and shuddered as the woman went on with "You don't know me, Jack Twist, but I know you. I've loved you for years for sake of lovin' my sweet boy, my Ennis...I seen you both on the mountain, knew that you were meant for each other, and blessed you from above. I come to welcome you home, Jack", whereupon Jack, looking at once deeply into the old woman's eyes, saw himself reflected as the bloody corpse beside the Childress County road, face smashed in with iron and hate, and immediately remembered his recent fate, and what had truly brought him to this lonely time-forgotten spot, hoping for love and comfort from the icy hand that now embraced his, and the thin voice, like the rustling of fall leaves, continuing "We just have to wait for him, Jack...you'll see, the years are just the blinkin' of God's eyes...we'll wait for him together."
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 31, 2007, 08:52:48 pm

SusieBaby, those kids are just too cute!  Beautiful! Thanks for posting the pic.  Maria is on her way to trick or treating with a friend in another city.  Maria's almost grown, and she's still going around from house to house, asking for candy!  :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on October 31, 2007, 09:01:33 pm

Love the picture, Susie!! The kids are beautiful -- great smiles. Good boy, Charlie!! He doesn't look too sure about this holiday. My neighbor's poodle came over with a costume on -- I think he was a cat.  :P  I gave him a Meaty Bone and he was happy!

Have fun with the wine and the man and the movie!!  ;D
Title: Fetch
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 31, 2007, 09:09:21 pm
Fetch by Littlewing1957

A Fetch is the ghostly double of a living person.  In some traditions, a fetch seen by a person’s friends or relatives portends evil or danger.  Seeing one’s own Fetch is an omen of death.

Lureen was excited about her day off.  Jack was nice enough to cover for her at the dealership, and she looked forward to a day of rest, food and television.  After taking Bobby to school, Lureen returned home and sat in front of the TV.  She had most of the day to relax and catch up on her stories.  But just as she was about to settle in, there was a knock at the door.  “I’m not expecting anyone!”  Lureen mused as she moved toward her front door.  She peeped through the drapes to get a look at her visitor.  Lureen rarely opened her door without checking to see who might be standing there.  A woman home alone couldn’t be too careful.   Lureen moved the heavy drapes a piece and saw Jack Twist standing there, looking at her looking at him!  “What is he doing home?”  Lureen was agitated and worried all at the same time.  “And why didn’t he use his key?”  She thought as she turned the lock and opened the door.  But when the front door opened, Jack had disappeared.  There was no one there.  Lureen rubbed her eyes and looked worriedly around the neighborhood.  No sign of Jack, or any one else, for that matter.  Lureen shook her head and decided to go inside and lie down.  She was working hard of late.  The life of a busy working mom and wife was very tiring.

Randall and LaShawn were packing the last of their things to take to Bermuda.  They both saved for about a year to afford the trip, and just as LaShawn put a few things in her Vuitton makeup case, she heard the ringing of her front door bell.  “I’ll get it honey!”  She yelled to Randall’s room as she headed toward the door.  LaShawn was quite excited, as she was expecting delivery of their plane tickets.  But when she answered the door, LaShawn saw a gaunt looking Jack Twist standing there.  LaShawn smiled at Jack, turned her back to him and yelled, “Honey, Jack’s here!”  LaShawn was used to Jack dropping by, so his appearance there was no shock.  But when she turned back to face him and invite him in, Jack was no where in sight.  “Now where did he go?”  The chatty Mrs. Malone whispered.  LaShawn shrugged and stepped back inside her home.  She had some more packing to do.  She would worry about Jack later.

1400 or so miles away in Riverton, Ennis Del Mar was preparing to leave the ranch.  He asked Steve for the rest of the day off, as he was feeling rather under the weather.  Steve told him to go home and take care of himself.  Ennis collected his coat, thermos and lunch box and walked to his truck.  He got halfway to his vehicle when he noticed movement out of the corner of his eye.  When he turned full around, Ennis saw what he thought looked like Jack Twist standing some 30 feet away.  “Jack??”  “What is he doing here?”  Ennis thought with a mixture of curiosity, concern, and agitation.  “Jack!”  Ennis almost frantic now.  He walked slowly toward “Jack” and sped up when he noticed the man was backing away from him.  “Jack” turned and ran, and Ennis couldn’t keep up.  He lost him.  Ennis sat down on the ground right where he was and held his head in his hands.  “I gotta go home and get some rest!”  Ennis groaned. “I must be sicker than I thought!”

Jack sat at his desk doing his best impression of a high pressure salesman.  His heart was not in it.  Actually, he really resented Old man Newsome’s instructions to make the sale no matter what.  Jack was trying to sell an expensive tractor to a wealthy, well dressed rancher.  Jack pleaded, made promises, but the rancher was a tough customer.  15 minutes of bargaining, and still no sale!  Jack was just beginning to give up and send the man on his merry way when he noticed a figure standing at the door of his office.  Jack stood up before he could catch himself, as he saw his twin standing at the door, staring at him.  The rancher noticed Jack’s staring and followed his eyes to the doorway.  He didn’t see anyone.  Jack looked back to the rancher who was now eyeing him skeptically, but when Jack glanced toward his office door, no one was there!

“You okay, son?  It was the wealthy rancher.  Jack nodded.

“Yeah, I’m okay, Mr. Henry.”  He grabbed the old man’s hand and lifted him to his feet. 

“I’m just a bit tired, is all,” Jack stated.  “Maybe we can talk about the tractor some other time,” Jack said as he ushered Mr. Henry to the door.  Once he was alone, Jack lowered his weary body to his plush office sofa.  He was overworked – so much so that he was seeing things!  The phone rang and Jack jumped.  He answered on the second ring to Lureen asking why he came home only to leave so abruptly.  Jack assured her that he did no such thing, and hung up.  A half four later and LaShawn phoned.  “No, I was not at your doorstep earlier today!”  Jack told her.  “What is going on?”  He spoke aloud. 

Another ring.  Jack was scared to answer, but he was at his place of business, and the call may be from a client.  Jack answered on the 3rd ring.

“Bud?”  When Jack heard the voice of his beloved, his heart jumped in his chest.

“Ennis?”  Jack asked tentatively.

“Yeah, Bud.  You okay?”  Jack felt giddy.  It was unusual for Ennis to call.  Very unusual, indeed.

“I’m fine…why do you ask?”  Jack, hopeful now.

“Well, I was just thinking of you…”  Ennis felt very foolish.  How could he ask Jack if he had been outside the ranch when he was talking to him, 1400 miles away?  Ennis had to think of something fast.

“We still on for next month?”  He stammered.  Jack looked at the phone.

“Yeah, you know that!  Wouldn’t miss it, Cowboy!”  Now is that all you wanted to ask me?” 

“Yeah, Bud.  That’s all.”  There was a silence.  “Well, you take care of yourself and I’ll see you at the cabin next month.”

The line went dead.  Jack placed the phone down on the cradle.  He couldn’t explain it, but something strange was going on.  His mom had her pulse on the supernatural, and she liked to tell ghost stories until he was afraid to go to sleep at night.  Jack remembered a particularly frightening tale his mother told him about a woman who saw her double walking down the street.  A few days later, the woman was dead.  Jack felt a chill.  He knew the woman, and remembered her untimely death.

 Jack shrugged and pulled his parka on over his suit.  He didn’t know what to believe, but thought he had better put his affairs in order just in case.
 

Title: Re: Homeward Bound
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 31, 2007, 11:25:47 pm
Homeward Bound by moremojo

Jack didn't know why he was so keen on going to the armpit-edge of the state to cop a glance at Ennis's hometown, specially when Ennis had never shown interest in visiting Lightning Flat, barely seemed to give a damn about the Twist family or history; yet Jack was in love, though he could barely admit it to himself and certainly couldn't say so to Ennis, and Jack knew in his heart of hearts that this undying curiosity to know more about Ennis's past was just the natural result of loving that Del Mar cowboy with every fibre of his soul...on this he mused as he noticed a sign stating SAGE whiz past his lonely barreling truck.

The sun was lowing on the horizon as Jack drove into town, though 'town' was a mite generous in describing the forlorn, ramshackle clutch of buildings that constituted what was left of Sage, imbued with a certain air of nobility by the day's fading light; at least Jack thought things weren't as bad as they could be as he parked his truck and stepped out for a closer look at things, feeling the nip of a cool Wyoming night close in on him as he stepped gingerly down the dusty unpaved streets, searching for any sign of life...he was thus both surprised and comforted to see one weatherworn woman step out a door, give him a wizened hint of a smile, and startle him further by speaking "Evenin' to ya, Jack."

"Evenin', ma'am", Jack responded with his unyielding politeness, "but how do you know me, if you don't mind my askin'?"--Jack felt a twinge of fear mixed with a strange sense of comfort in the moment, and shuddered as the woman went on with "You don't know me, Jack Twist, but I know you. I've loved you for years for sake of lovin' my sweet boy, my Ennis...I seen you both on the mountain, knew that you were meant for each other, and blessed you from above. I come to welcome you home, Jack", whereupon Jack, looking at once deeply into the old woman's eyes, saw himself reflected as the bloody corpse beside the Childress County road, face smashed in with iron and hate, and immediately remembered his recent fate, and what had truly brought him to this lonely time-forgotten spot, hoping for love and comfort from the icy hand that now embraced his, and the thin voice, like the rustling of fall leaves, continuing "We just have to wait for him, Jack...you'll see, the years are just the blinkin' of God's eyes...we'll wait for him together."

Moremojo, this tale gave me chills!  Very well done.  The end really took me by surprise.  What a twist!  I actually like the idea of Mrs. Del Mar sanctioning Jack and Ennis's love.  And to think that she wanted to keep Jack company until Ennis joined them.  Wonderful.  I loved reading through this, Moremojo.  Thanks so much for the story!
Title: Re: Homeward Bound
Post by: moremojo on November 01, 2007, 10:06:58 am
Moremojo, this tale gave me chills!  Very well done.  The end really took me by surprise.  What a twist!  I actually like the idea of Mrs. Del Mar sanctioning Jack and Ennis's love.  And to think that she wanted to keep Jack company until Ennis joined them.  Wonderful.  I loved reading through this, Moremojo.  Thanks so much for the story!
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Very sad but beautiful, Scott.  And just spooky enough to make this a great Halloween tale.  Very descriptive writing, too.  Thanks Scott.

Gary
Thank you for your kind words, Marie and Gary. I'm just happy I was able to get a Halloween story in just in the nick of time!

I hope everyone had a safe and special Halloween!  :)
Title: Re: Homeward Bound
Post by: moremojo on November 01, 2007, 04:50:34 pm
Ah Scott, that was beautiful!  Jack being welcomed by Mrs Del Mar just brought tears to my eyes ... I wonder where his dad is?
I didn't want to contemplate that...too scary!  :o

Thank you for your gratifying feedback, Susie!  :)
Title: Re: Fetch
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 01, 2007, 05:29:20 pm
Hi Littlewing.  I've never heard of a fetch, but the idea is very creepy.  I've heard of people who have just recently died visiting friends and relatives just before they got word of the death, but this fetch thing is new to me.  Thanks for telling us about it, and for writing a story about it.  Very spooky Halloween tale. 

Gary

Thanks, Gary.  A fetch is another name for doppelganger.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 01, 2007, 05:30:36 pm
Aww thank you littlewing, they are cute aren't they  :-* I hope Maria had a great time ... you're never too old for sweets!!

Susie   (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)
 

She had a great time, thanks, Susie.  I'm really proud that I'm avoiding the sweets at all costs!
Title: Re: Fetch
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 01, 2007, 07:28:58 pm
I remember watching a TV drama about doppelgangers ... scared the whatsits out of me!!  The doppelganger was exactly the same as it's counterpart but it's teeth were all yellow and nasty and pointy and disgusting.  So the victim thought he/she was perfectly safe until the doppelganger opened it's mouth  :o :o ........**shudder**

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Do you remember the name of the TV show?  Sounds like something I would like to see!
Title: Re: Fetch
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 01, 2007, 07:30:00 pm
Very spooky and unsettling story littlewing, you had me gripped from the very first line ... you're so good at this!   :-*

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



Thanks, Susiebaby.  It was difficult to write, but I had a good time writing it. 
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 01, 2007, 07:33:31 pm
Hey everybody, now that another Halloween has come and gone, do you think we should return to sexy, romantic tales, or do you think we can continue with the scary stuff? 

What do you guys think? 
 
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 01, 2007, 11:16:07 pm

Ooooh definitely a sexy romp or two to warm us up for Christmas!  I've suddenly got this lovely picture in my head of Jack in a Santa hat .... Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!  :P



Sounds good to me, SusieBaby!  I'll work on a sexy tale for tomorrow!  Thanks for the link to the Santa Dance.  I haven't seen that in awhile!

WHERE IS TOYCOON?
Title: Re: Fetch
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 01, 2007, 11:16:59 pm
I don't I'm afraid!  I think it was one of those one-off dramas made for TV .... we have some really good ones in the UK!  But it was horrible honey ... You'll have nightmares about those teeth .... trust me!!

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Hmmmm sounds scary.  If you ever think of the name, let me know.  I love British horror!
Title: Re: Homeward Bound
Post by: Dagi on November 02, 2007, 05:37:56 am
Homeward Bound by moremojo

Jack didn't know why he was so keen on going to the armpit-edge of the state to cop a glance at Ennis's hometown, specially when Ennis had never shown interest in visiting Lightning Flat, barely seemed to give a damn about the Twist family or history; yet Jack was in love, though he could barely admit it to himself and certainly couldn't say so to Ennis, and Jack knew in his heart of hearts that this undying curiosity to know more about Ennis's past was just the natural result of loving that Del Mar cowboy with every fibre of his soul...on this he mused as he noticed a sign stating SAGE whiz past his lonely barreling truck.

The sun was lowing on the horizon as Jack drove into town, though 'town' was a mite generous in describing the forlorn, ramshackle clutch of buildings that constituted what was left of Sage, imbued with a certain air of nobility by the day's fading light; at least Jack thought things weren't as bad as they could be as he parked his truck and stepped out for a closer look at things, feeling the nip of a cool Wyoming night close in on him as he stepped gingerly down the dusty unpaved streets, searching for any sign of life...he was thus both surprised and comforted to see one weatherworn woman step out a door, give him a wizened hint of a smile, and startle him further by speaking "Evenin' to ya, Jack."

"Evenin', ma'am", Jack responded with his unyielding politeness, "but how do you know me, if you don't mind my askin'?"--Jack felt a twinge of fear mixed with a strange sense of comfort in the moment, and shuddered as the woman went on with "You don't know me, Jack Twist, but I know you. I've loved you for years for sake of lovin' my sweet boy, my Ennis...I seen you both on the mountain, knew that you were meant for each other, and blessed you from above. I come to welcome you home, Jack", whereupon Jack, looking at once deeply into the old woman's eyes, saw himself reflected as the bloody corpse beside the Childress County road, face smashed in with iron and hate, and immediately remembered his recent fate, and what had truly brought him to this lonely time-forgotten spot, hoping for love and comfort from the icy hand that now embraced his, and the thin voice, like the rustling of fall leaves, continuing "We just have to wait for him, Jack...you'll see, the years are just the blinkin' of God's eyes...we'll wait for him together."

You touched my heart.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on November 02, 2007, 05:41:29 am
Susie Baby, your kids are just stunningly beautiful. Their smiles are heartwarming, and Thomas is certainly the most handsome vampire I´ve ever seen....let some years go by and the girls and boys will be all after him - or maybe they are already? ;)

Dagi
Title: Re: Fetch
Post by: Dagi on November 02, 2007, 05:48:44 am
Fetch by Littlewing1957



 Jack shrugged and pulled his parka on over his suit.  He didn’t know what to believe, but thought he had better put his affairs in order just in case.
 



Thank you for this gripping story...actually I felt too tired to read, but once I began I couldn´t stop reading!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on November 02, 2007, 06:14:10 am
Thank you Dagi honey  :-* ... I can never hear too many of those compliments!!  And as for Thomas ... it's quite surreal for me .. he already has lots of girls giggling around him at school and waving to him on the street ... his friend says he's  a "God"!! ... no he's not ... he's my baby!!

He's known Laura forever ... they used to go to toddlers together and I'm very close friends with her mum.  Even she's gone all giggly, and she shows off to her friends that she's known him the longest!!   ...... but  he's my baby  :'(

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



Ahh, it's so hard to let them go, isn't it? Time brings changes. But he will always be your baby, even if he's another girl's baby too!  ;)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on November 02, 2007, 12:44:38 pm
So true!  :'(  :) Graham's mum still refers to him as "My little baby" even though he's 6ft tall and towers over her!  :D

And you will do the same thing with Thomas. And he will tower you too in no time! :laugh:(I too have two sons. :-\)

Dagi
Title: Re: Fetch
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 02, 2007, 09:54:43 pm
Thank you for this gripping story...actually I felt too tired to read, but once I began I couldn´t stop reading!

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi.  Have you been away?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 02, 2007, 09:56:09 pm
Hey Guys!

I've heard from Merrily ... she's fine!  :D

Here's what she said .... I had no problem with the fires.  It was all around me and there was a lot of smoke, but not that close.  The winds were 50-80 mph and it was a scary situation.  Everything is pretty much back to normal now though.

PHEW!  We can all rest easy!

Now if we could just find toycoon .....  ???


I heard from Merr also over at IMDB.  And Toycoon posted over at IMDB today, as well.  They're both okay, thank God!
Title: Re: Fetch
Post by: Dagi on November 03, 2007, 04:34:08 am
Thanks, Dagi.  Have you been away?

I´ve only had a little cold, and guests. I´m back again.  :D
Title: Later by Toycoon
Post by: Toycoon on November 03, 2007, 10:18:11 am
Later by Toycoon

Although it had been many painful years since he'd last seen him, those mysterious feelings came flooding back the moment Ennis laid eyes on Jack; at first there was an awkward handshake, followed by a warm, fraternal embrace, spiraling uncontrollably into deep, soul kissing with the two men clutching at each other.

Their crotches pressed together and their erections throbbed simultaneously in their jeans; on Brokeback Mountain, Jack would have torn open his fly, sunk to his knees and loved Ennis right there but he remembered where he was so, he held back.

Ennis felt the moistness on the inside of his underwear and becoming painfully aware of his circumstance, softly whispered, "Later" to Jack.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on November 03, 2007, 10:33:43 am

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Title: Re: Later by Toycoon
Post by: Shasta542 on November 03, 2007, 10:38:22 am
Later by Toycoon

Although it had been many painful years since he'd last seen him, those mysterious feelings came flooding back the moment Ennis laid eyes on Jack; at first there was an awkward handshake, followed by a warm, fraternal embrace, spiraling uncontrollably into deep, soul kissing with the two men clutching at each other.

Their crotches pressed together and their erections throbbed simultaneously in their jeans; on Brokeback Mountain, Jack would have torn open his fly, sunk to his knees and loved Ennis right there but he remembered where he was so, he held back.

Ennis felt the moistness on the inside of his underwear and becoming painfully aware of his circumstance, softly whispered, "Later" to Jack.


Although it had been many painful  weeks  since  we'd  last seen him........


We missed you too, cowboy!! (http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x221/Shasta542/HUGS5-1.gif)

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on November 03, 2007, 12:47:41 pm
Hey there cowboys and girls! I've missed everyone terribly; I'm so happy to be back. Y'all have been so busy writin' up a storm.
I love Moremojo's ghost story (that's the only story I've a chance to read so far!), it is perfectly spooky.

I had an incredible time on vacation. It was sensational to be away for such a long time, I was starting to feel like a native European. I was missing the diversity in food choices. Spain's cuisine is not my favorite (although I did eat a few great meals in Barcelona).
Title: Re: Admiring the View
Post by: Dagi on November 03, 2007, 03:21:02 pm
This story is in quiet celebration of my 3,000th post ... I have got to stop babbling on so much!! :-X



Admiring The View by Susiebell

Jack sauntered past Ennis on the sofa, singing to himself and fiddling with the dial on the radio.  Ennis was in the perfect position to admire his lover, naked but for a small towel wrapped around his hips, body glistening with droplets of water slowly dribbling down towards his pubic hair, just visible over the top of his towel.

Ennis smirked to himself, willing the towel to slip down just a little bit more.  Jack, seemingly unaware of his own beauty, of the hypnotic power he had over Ennis, glanced up for a moment, shot him a sexy smile and continued searching through the stations.

Ennis was in two minds, should he get up, yank off the towel and fuck him right there over the coffee table, or should he simply lay on the sofa and enjoy the view?  His cock twitched in anticipation and he soothed away the dull ache with his hand.

Jack smiled at him, one eyebrow raised, his gaze moving down towards Ennis’ groin, to Ennis’ hand, sliding over the bulge in his jeans.  Having decided on gentle ballad, he put the radio down on the table, and with one last glance over his shoulder, waltzed into the bedroom.  Ennis stood up and followed …..




Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif) 


 

Congrats to your 3,000th post! And did you say you have writers block?? This is one terrific and sexy story, my dear, so visual and erotic! Mmmm, I'm licking my lips!

Dagi
Title: Re: Later by Toycoon
Post by: Dagi on November 03, 2007, 03:23:32 pm
Later by Toycoon

Although it had been many painful years since he'd last seen him, those mysterious feelings came flooding back the moment Ennis laid eyes on Jack; at first there was an awkward handshake, followed by a warm, fraternal embrace, spiraling uncontrollably into deep, soul kissing with the two men clutching at each other.

Their crotches pressed together and their erections throbbed simultaneously in their jeans; on Brokeback Mountain, Jack would have torn open his fly, sunk to his knees and loved Ennis right there but he remembered where he was so, he held back.

Ennis felt the moistness on the inside of his underwear and becoming painfully aware of his circumstance, softly whispered, "Later" to Jack.

Hey Toycoon, what a joy to have you back!! Hope you had a wonderful time in Europe! You have to tell us in details about your trip....

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on November 03, 2007, 03:26:55 pm
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Look at this little treat Laura posted over on Jake Jake Jake....





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Title: Re: Fetch
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 03, 2007, 03:38:51 pm
I´ve only had a little cold, and guests. I´m back again.  :D

I'm glad to see you!  Welcome back!
Title: Re: Admiring the View
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 03, 2007, 03:42:11 pm
This story is in quiet celebration of my 3,000th post ... I have got to stop babbling on so much!! :-X



Admiring The View by Susiebell

Jack sauntered past Ennis on the sofa, singing to himself and fiddling with the dial on the radio.  Ennis was in the perfect position to admire his lover, naked but for a small towel wrapped around his hips, body glistening with droplets of water slowly dribbling down towards his pubic hair, just visible over the top of his towel.

Ennis smirked to himself, willing the towel to slip down just a little bit more.  Jack, seemingly unaware of his own beauty, of the hypnotic power he had over Ennis, glanced up for a moment, shot him a sexy smile and continued searching through the stations.

Ennis was in two minds, should he get up, yank off the towel and fuck him right there over the coffee table, or should he simply lay on the sofa and enjoy the view?  His cock twitched in anticipation and he soothed away the dull ache with his hand.

Jack smiled at him, one eyebrow raised, his gaze moving down towards Ennis’ groin, to Ennis’ hand, sliding over the bulge in his jeans.  Having decided on gentle ballad, he put the radio down on the table, and with one last glance over his shoulder, waltzed into the bedroom.  Ennis stood up and followed …..




Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif) 


 

Beautiful, Susiebaby!  So sexy and tender.  This is just want I need to get help me through the day.  Thanks so much for this!   Oh, and 3,000 posts?  Girl, what are you talking about?  I think it's great, though.  Rock on, Susiebaby!
Title: Re: Fetch
Post by: Dagi on November 03, 2007, 03:44:59 pm
I'm glad to see you!  Welcome back!

Hi Littlewing, thanks, you´re so sweet. BTW, I wanted to tell you (since you had asked the other day) that I´m thankful for anything you write, be it scary or sexy, or scary and sexy. ;D I don´t have any ideas what to write at the moment, but as soon as my muse returns (where ever she´s gone) I´ll be back with a story, promise!

Thank you so much for keeping the campfire burning here, it feels so cosy!

Dagi :-*
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 03, 2007, 03:46:08 pm
Hey there cowboys and girls! I've missed everyone terribly; I'm so happy to be back. Y'all have been so busy writin' up a storm.
I love Moremojo's ghost story (that's the only story I've a chance to read so far!), it is perfectly spooky.

I had an incredible time on vacation. It was sensational to be away for such a long time, I was starting to feel like a native European. I was missing the diversity in food choices. Spain's cuisine is not my favorite (although I did eat a few great meals in Barcelona).

Welcome, back, Baby!  We've missed you soooo much.  It is good to hear you thought about us, and that you had a great vacation.  Katherine told me that you two were in the same city at the same time!  Anyway, I'm so glad to see you back here safe and sound.  And with a new tale, no less. 
Title: Re: Admiring the View
Post by: Toycoon on November 03, 2007, 04:10:33 pm
What a hot little story, Susiebell! After three thousand posts, you still haven't lost your touch. I'm very happy to see everyone is as randy as ever!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 03, 2007, 04:12:51 pm
Look at this little treat Laura posted over on Jake Jake Jake....





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Susie (http://content.sweetim.com/sim/cpie/emoticons/0002012D.gif)

He is one sexy beast! 
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on November 03, 2007, 04:13:49 pm
Ah, and Susie, I wanted to add, in case you want to make us wait for the sequel until your 4,000th post, then you better get started! ;D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on November 03, 2007, 04:15:14 pm
Look at this little treat Laura posted over on Jake Jake Jake....





(http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s31/Susiebell_album/Jake/jake_lookinatit.jpg)

(http://content.sweetim.com/sim/cpie/emoticons/00020118.gif)   Holy Moly!!!   (http://content.sweetim.com/sim/cpie/emoticons/00020118.gif)

Susie (http://content.sweetim.com/sim/cpie/emoticons/0002012D.gif)

Just because he´s sooo sexy. ;D

Title: Re: Fetch
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 03, 2007, 04:16:00 pm
Hi Littlewing, thanks, you´re so sweet. BTW, I wanted to tell you (since you had asked the other day) that I´m thankful for anything you write, be it scary or sexy, or scary and sexy. ;D I don´t have any ideas what to write at the moment, but as soon as my muse returns (where ever she´s gone) I´ll be back with a story, promise!

Thank you so much for keeping the campfire burning here, it feels so cosy!

Dagi :-*

Dagi, what a sweet thing to say!  I'm so glad to be here with you all.  And I consider it a privilege to write.  As I've said before, I have a million stories in me that must come out.  You'll feel inspiried very soon, I trust.  if not, no problem.  Just enjoy reading for now.  Thanks again for your kind words!
Title: Re: Admiring the View
Post by: Dagi on November 03, 2007, 04:16:39 pm
Wow!  Susie I can remember when you would not have written this story in such an up front way.  It would have all been hints and innuendo.  You've come a long way baby.   ;D  Very sexy stuff.  And I suspect I know where the towel idea came from.   :P  I'm suprised Jack wasn't holding a golf club instead of a radio.   :laugh:

Gary

 :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 03, 2007, 04:17:02 pm
Jake: It's big enough, isn't it?

 :laugh:  I'm dying to know!  
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on November 03, 2007, 04:19:02 pm
:laugh:  I'm dying to know! 

Wasn´t it you who said 7 and a half inches?  ;D
Title: You gotta teach me that one!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 03, 2007, 04:20:25 pm
You Gotta Teach me That One by Littlewing1957

“You gotta teach me that one!”  Jack shouted over the rain as he moved in time to his own rhythm.  Jack watched Ennis shake his hips suggestively.  “Okay, just follow me, Jack!”  Ennis yelled to his lover as he continued the dance.  Jack moved his hips in time to Ennis’ sexy gyrations!  He didn’t know what had gotten into Ennis Del Mar!  A half bottle of whiskey, an indigestible meal and a sudden downpour caused Ennis’ nature to rise? “Try this one!”  Jack began as he hopped back and forth in front of the tent.  Both men were smelly, soggy messes, but they didn’t care!  Ennis followed Jack’s hops and in no time they were prancing in synch around the entrance to the tent, whopping and hollering.  “What do you call this?”  Ennis yelled as he followed Jack’s moves, hopping first on one foot, then the other.  “I don’t know!”  Jack stated shyly.  “Just something I made up.”  “Oh, whatever comes to mind eh?”  Ennis laughed.

Ennis rode into camp just as soon as the rains came.  He hurried into the tent, worried that there would be no supper.  Jack didn’t disappoint, though.  He had the forethought to put aside a few pieces of elk jerky, several tasty hard biscuits, and he opened a can of beans and peaches.  Not exactly gourmet fare, but it hit the spot.  A few shots of whiskey and Ennis felt rather frisky!  The rain was dropping in sheets and Ennis ran outside on a whim.  He started to dance in the rain, and Jack followed, not really believing his eyes.  Jack taught Ennis every move he knew, and Ennis turned out to be an apt student.  But soon Ennis began to sniffle and Jack reasoned that they had better go inside the tent and dry off.

Ennis allowed Jack to mop his hair with a threadbare towel.  Jack stripped his lover bare and worked the towel all over Ennis’ damp body.  Ennis smiled at his friend as he undressed and dried himself.  Jack didn’t have anything else to wear, but that was okay with the both of them.  Ennis knelt before his lover and looked up at his cock with a hunger that he couldn’t define.  Jack sighed as Ennis sucked him.  He taught Ennis to dance, but Jack was also very good at teaching Ennis to love.  One sudden, violent shudder and Jack was done.  He fell over Ennis’ lap, hoping for a moment to rest.  But Ennis, fast learner that he was, had other ideas…
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 03, 2007, 04:21:20 pm
Wasn´t it you who said 7 and a half inches?  ;D

Dagi, you have such a good memory!   :laugh:
Title: Re: You gotta teach me that one!
Post by: Dagi on November 03, 2007, 04:24:41 pm
You Gotta Teach me That One by Littlewing1957

“You gotta teach me that one!”  Jack shouted over the rain as he moved in time to his own rhythm.  Jack watched Ennis shake his hips suggestively.  “Okay, just follow me, Jack!”  Ennis yelled to his lover as he continued the dance.  Jack moved his hips in time to Ennis’ sexy gyrations!  He didn’t know what had gotten into Ennis Del Mar!  A half bottle of whiskey, an indigestible meal and a sudden downpour caused Ennis’ nature to rise? “Try this one!”  Jack began as he hopped back and forth in front of the tent.  Both men were smelly, soggy messes, but they didn’t care!  Ennis followed Jack’s hops and in no time they were prancing in synch around the entrance to the tent, whopping and hollering.  “What do you call this?”  Ennis yelled as he followed Jack’s moves, hopping first on one foot, then the other.  “I don’t know!”  Jack stated shyly.  “Just something I made up.”  “Oh, whatever comes to mind eh?”  Ennis laughed.

Ennis rode into camp just as soon as the rains came.  He hurried into the tent, worried that there would be no supper.  Jack didn’t disappoint, though.  He had the forethought to put aside a few pieces of elk jerky, several tasty hard biscuits, and he opened a can of beans and peaches.  Not exactly gourmet fare, but it hit the spot.  A few shots of whiskey and Ennis felt rather frisky!  The rain was dropping in sheets and Ennis ran outside on a whim.  He started to dance in the rain, and Jack followed, not really believing his eyes.  Jack taught Ennis every move he knew, and Ennis turned out to be an apt student.  But soon Ennis began to sniffle and Jack reasoned that they had better go inside the tent and dry off.

Ennis allowed Jack to dry his hair with a threadbare towel.  Jack stripped his lover bare and worked the towel all over Ennis’ damp body.  Ennis smiled at his friend as he undressed and dried himself.  Jack didn’t have anything else to wear, but that was okay with the both of them.  Ennis knelt before his lover and looked up at his cock with a hunger that he couldn’t define.  Jack sighed as Ennis sucked him.  He taught Ennis to dance, but Jack was also very good at teaching Ennis to love.  One sudden, violent shudder and Jack was done.  He fell over Ennis’ lap, hoping for a moment to rest.  But Ennis, fast learner that he was, had other ideas…


What a cute good-night-tale, Marie! Thank you so much for this beautiful image of Ennis and Jack, dancing and smiling happily in the rain....that warms my heart!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on November 03, 2007, 04:26:22 pm
Dagi, you have such a good memory!   :laugh:

For certain things, yes!  ;D And since Gary sent me a ruler I even know what 7 and a half inches looks like!  :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 03, 2007, 04:50:51 pm
For certain things, yes!  ;D And since Gary sent me a ruler I even know what 7 and a half inches looks like!  :laugh:

 :laugh:  :laugh:
Title: Re: You gotta teach me that one!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 03, 2007, 04:51:36 pm
What a cute good-night-tale, Marie! Thank you so much for this beautiful image of Ennis and Jack, dancing and smiling happily in the rain....that warms my heart!

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi!
Title: Re: You gotta teach me that one!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 03, 2007, 04:52:19 pm
Very sexy and beautiful, Littlewing.  One sentence stood out for me.  He taught Ennis to dance, but Jack was also very good at teaching Ennis to love.  That's very true.  I don't think Ennis would have ever known what love is had it not been for Jack Twist.

Gary

Thanks so much, Gary!
Title: Re: You gotta teach me that one!
Post by: Toycoon on November 03, 2007, 09:22:51 pm
Quote
He taught Ennis to dance, but Jack was also very good at teaching Ennis to love.  One sudden, violent shudder and Jack was done.  He fell over Ennis’ lap, hoping for a moment to rest.  But Ennis, fast learner that he was, had other ideas…

Marie, you never cease to amaze! i don't where you derive so many imaginative tales. This is such beautiful imagery. Maybe you outta ditch that nine to five and become a writer. There's gotta be money in saucy fanfiction, right?
Title: Re: You gotta teach me that one!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 04, 2007, 09:40:25 pm
Marie, you never cease to amaze! i don't where you derive so many imaginative tales. This is such beautiful imagery. Maybe you outta ditch that nine to five and become a writer. There's gotta be money in saucy fanfiction, right?


Thanks, Toycoon!  I'm just glad you had the vision to encourage our creative sides.  Who knows?  One day I may write something for profit.  And if I do, I'll have you and the others here to thank!  You guys are the greatest!  :-*
Title: Re: Admiring the View
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 04, 2007, 09:41:34 pm
Thanks LittleBaby!  :-* I have NO idea what I've been yakking on about!  I have GOT to learn to shut up!!   :-X ;D

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif) 

 

Don't ever shut up, SusieBaby!  Please don't!  :-*  :)
Title: Re: You gotta teach me that one!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 04, 2007, 09:43:17 pm
Ah, wonderful sexy romp littlewing!!  I just love the thought of them dancing about in the rain and then drying each other off!  Hmmm Hmmmm Hmmmmmmmm !

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif) 


Thanks, SusieHoney!  It's good to write sexy, romantic fic.  I like the scary stuff, too, but I missed writing the warm and fuzzy tales.
Title: Re: The Hunter
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 05, 2007, 11:13:24 pm
Hey Dagi dear, How about a porn-with-no-plot story just for you?  I miss them  ;D  and I miss you  :-*

 


The Hunter by Susiebell

Ennis searched through the forest for Jack, visions of the previous night racing across his mind; kneeling over Jack’s sweaty naked body, grasping his slim firm hips, spreading his smooth white buttocks wide apart.  Jack was around here somewhere, he’d seen him head off in this direction, and he needed him now.   He spotted him just a short distance ahead, collecting firewood, whistling absentmindedly to himself.

Ennis was on him like a wolf attacking its prey.  Jack didn’t know what had hit him, flung against the trunk of a tree, lips pressed hard on him, tongue prising his mouth open.  Ennis’ hips ground painfully against his, fumbling fingers soon had his jeans open and pulled down to his ankles, Ennis falling to his knees, mouth enveloping his cock, sucking hard, devouring him hungrily.

Strong arms twisted him around and rammed him up against the tree, legs spread apart, Ennis’ angry cock throbbing against his backside.  A sharp pain as Ennis forced his way in, gave way to waves of pleasure, matching the rhythmic pumping from behind.  Jack was so close, moaning loudly, Ennis’ teeth sinking into his neck, fucking him hard.  Grunting and groaning, breath coming in heavy and ragged, two loud cries echoed through the trees and both men collapsed to the ground.





 ;D




Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)   


Beautiful, just beautiful!  So very sexy and hot!  This is the sort of passion that is typical of our boys.  Lovely writing, my dear!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 05, 2007, 11:15:12 pm
I just got a PM from Dagi.  She's feeling under the weather to put it mildly.  Tummy problems and a couple of other things.  She's staying in bed mostly, and doesn't feel up to visiting our thread here right now.  But she wanted me to send you all her love.

Gary

Oh, I'm sorry to hear this.  Dagi, please feel better soon.  We won't feel right without you here! 

Get well soon, our dear sweet Dagi!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 05, 2007, 11:16:30 pm
(http://content.sweetim.com/sim/cpie/emoticons/00020154.gif)Hurry up and get better Dagi baby!(http://content.sweetim.com/sim/cpie/emoticons/00020154.gif)

Here's a little something to cheer you up .....



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Love Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)   



Wow!  I don't know about Dagi, but this series of pics sure do help lift my spirits!  Thanks so much for the pics, SusieBaby!
Title: Alone at Last
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 05, 2007, 11:26:04 pm
Alone at Last by Littlewing1957

Dagi, this one is for you.  Hope you feel better soon. 

Extreme AU, a BBM slice of Life


Ennis walked around his clean kitchen floor putting the finishing touches to the evening meal.  Jack was due back from the ranch at any time, and Ennis had a small surprise for him.  Jenny and Emma were by earlier that afternoon to collect Baby Indigo and keep her for the weekend.  Ennis was quite excited when Jenny offered to watch Indigo and give her 2 guys a weekend to reconnect.  Since little Indigo’s birth some 6 months ago, Ennis and Jack rarely had a few minutes alone together.  Ennis was looking forward to a few days of rest, relaxation, conversation and love.

When Ennis heard Jack’s keys turning in the lock, he walked to the living area to greet him.  Jack walked into their home, hands in pockets, whistling a happy tune.  And when he saw his husband, his handsome features broke into a smile.  Ennis couldn’t help but marvel at Jack’s smile!  His entire face was transformed; seemed to glow when he flashed those pearly whites.  Ennis spread his arms in anticipation of a bear hug, and Jack walked right into his embrace.  Ennis kissed his lover, gentled him.  Jack returned the kiss, blue eyes boring into Ennis’ hazel ones.

“Where is the baby?”  Jack asked, as he looked around the spacious living area.  “She down for a nap?”  Ennis smiled and favored Jack with a quick peck on the cheek.

“She’s not here!”  Ennis stated matter-of-factly.  When he saw a trace of fear begin to materialize in Jack’s eyes, Ennis didn’t want to prolong the matter. 

“I got a surprise for you, Bud!”  Ennis started as he helped Jack peel away his gloves, and shrug out of his parka.

“Yeah, but where is our girl?”  Jack persisted as he placed his things on the couch.

“Oh alright!”  Ennis laughed.  “Jenny and Emma picked her up a little while ago.  My girls are keeping our girl for the entire weekend.  We got the entire weekend to ourselves, Rodeo!”  Ennis exclaimed.  But when Jack failed to share his enthusiasm,  Ennis frowned.

“What’s the matter, Bud?”  Ennis asked, a bit crestfallen, as he ran his fingers through Jack’s thick hair.  “I thought you would be happy to spend a few days alone with me!”  Ennis stated in mock disappointment.  Jack faced his husband.

“That all sounds good, Cowboy!”   Jack said.  “But I don’t ever remember a time when Indigo didn’t greet me when I got home.  I’m so used to her being here, is all.  She’s never been away from us, En.  I don’t know how to act!”  Jack exclaimed, rubbing his cold hands.  Ennis didn’t anticipate this.

“Don’t worry, Baby!”  Ennis soothed.  Jenny and Emma will take real good care of our daughter!”  Ennis felt a bit better as he noticed Jack’s countenance was starting to brighten.

“Just go get cleaned up for supper.  I’m going to take real good care of you.”  Jack’s blue eyes twinkled as he turned on a dime and shot into the bathroom to prepare for supper.  After he had showered, Jack wandered into the dining room and was greeted with a table filled with all his favorite foods.  Ennis had prepared meat loaf, mashed potatoes, summer squash, collard greens and biscuits.   He ordered a cheesecake from the bakery in town, and a red wine was chilled and poured.  Jack was almost dizzy with it all.  Ennis motioned for him to sit down.  Ennis served the meal as Jack watched, rather amused.  It was rare that Ennis prepared such an elaborate feast.

“So what do you want to do now that we’re alone?"  Ennis asked his husband as he ate his meat loaf.  “I’m content just to sit here on my butt and do nothing!”

“I got a lot of things I can do to your butt!”  Jack whispered huskily.  “You know I want to fuck, don’t you?”  Jack exclaimed, feeling his penis already straining his jeans.  Ennis nodded.

“We haven’t had near enough of that!”  Ennis stated as he watched Jack’s sensuous mouth working on his food.  They tried to finish and save some room for dessert, but they couldn’t wait to get to the real sweets.  The cheesecake could wait for another day.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on November 06, 2007, 07:31:35 am
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Title: Re: Admiring the View
Post by: Dagi on November 06, 2007, 09:31:12 am
I have GOT to learn to shut up!!   :-X ;D

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif) 

 

Aaah, Susie, come on, admit it: You couldn´t even if you tried! ;D And please don´t try, you hear me?

Dagi :-*
Title: Re: You gotta teach me that one!
Post by: Dagi on November 06, 2007, 09:33:26 am
Thanks, Toycoon!  I'm just glad you had the vision to encourage our creative sides.  Who knows?  One day I may write something for profit.  And if I do, I'll have you and the others here to thank!  You guys are the greatest!  :-*

Marie, please do it! It can only be good! And I´d be so proud, I´d tell everyone I know you! ;D

Dagi
Title: Re: The Hunter
Post by: Dagi on November 06, 2007, 09:41:04 am
Hey Dagi dear, How about a porn-with-no-plot story just for you?  I miss them  ;D  and I miss you  :-*

 


The Hunter by Susiebell

Ennis searched through the forest for Jack, visions of the previous night racing across his mind; kneeling over Jack’s sweaty naked body, grasping his slim firm hips, spreading his smooth white buttocks wide apart.  Jack was around here somewhere, he’d seen him head off in this direction, and he needed him now.   He spotted him just a short distance ahead, collecting firewood, whistling absentmindedly to himself.

Ennis was on him like a wolf attacking its prey.  Jack didn’t know what had hit him, flung against the trunk of a tree, lips pressed hard on him, tongue prising his mouth open.  Ennis’ hips ground painfully against his, fumbling fingers soon had his jeans open and pulled down to his ankles, Ennis falling to his knees, mouth enveloping his cock, sucking hard, devouring him hungrily.

Strong arms twisted him around and rammed him up against the tree, legs spread apart, Ennis’ angry cock throbbing against his backside.  A sharp pain as Ennis forced his way in, gave way to waves of pleasure, matching the rhythmic pumping from behind.  Jack was so close, moaning loudly, Ennis’ teeth sinking into his neck, fucking him hard.  Grunting and groaning, breath coming in heavy and ragged, two loud cries echoed through the trees and both men collapsed to the ground.





 ;D




Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)   


 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: Wow, I´m still alive! Seems my libido hasn´t suffered from gastroenteritis! Thanks so much for this erotic piece, Susiebell, you sure know how to get my blood circulation going! ;D

(And what´s that about a wolf attacking its prey?? Has the Halloween series left some traces in your mind??)

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on November 06, 2007, 09:44:41 am
(http://content.sweetim.com/sim/cpie/emoticons/00020154.gif)Hurry up and get better Dagi baby!(http://content.sweetim.com/sim/cpie/emoticons/00020154.gif)

Here's a little something to cheer you up .....



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Love Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)   



Aaaw, Susie, you are so incredibly sweet, thank you so much for your wishes and for cheering me up. What would I do without you guys? Jake is a God, isn´t he?

Dagi :-* :-* :-* :-* :-*

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on November 06, 2007, 09:47:51 am
Oh, I'm sorry to hear this.  Dagi, please feel better soon.  We won't feel right without you here! 

Get well soon, our dear sweet Dagi!

Thank you so much, Littlewing, you´re sweet. Truth is I don´t feel right without you guys either, I just had to come here today. I´m doing better, still feeling a little weak and don´t have any appetite, but I´m over the hill I think.

Dagi
Title: Re: Alone at Last
Post by: Dagi on November 06, 2007, 09:56:54 am
Alone at Last by Littlewing1957

Dagi, this one is for you.  Hope you feel better soon. 

Extreme AU, a BBM slice of Life



I´ve already spent quite some time apart from my kids, and I´ve always enjoyed it ( ;D ;D ;D), but in the beginning it does feel weird! I´m glad they found a way to make the time pass though!

I love the Indigo-series, keep it up, Littlewing, please!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on November 06, 2007, 09:59:03 am
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Thanks so much, Shasta! And nice to know that you show up here every once in a while!

Dagi :-*
Title: Re: The Hunter
Post by: Dagi on November 06, 2007, 10:05:03 am
Thanks Dagi dear .... as Gary suggested, I'm trying to embrace my inner vampire!!  :P

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)   


If stories like that are the result of embracing your inner vampire, then go hug him a little more! :D
Title: Re: You gotta teach me that one!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 06, 2007, 10:53:07 pm
Marie, please do it! It can only be good! And I´d be so proud, I´d tell everyone I know you! ;D

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi, sweets!  I'll try!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 06, 2007, 10:54:33 pm
Thank you so much, Littlewing, you´re sweet. Truth is I don´t feel right without you guys either, I just had to come here today. I´m doing better, still feeling a little weak and don´t have any appetite, but I´m over the hill I think.

Dagi

Dagi, I'm glad to hear the worst is over.  And thanks for coming back to us.  I wish you a full recovery!
Title: Re: Alone at Last
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 06, 2007, 10:55:30 pm
I´ve already spent quite some time apart from my kids, and I´ve always enjoyed it ( ;D ;D ;D), but in the beginning it does feel weird! I´m glad they found a way to make the time pass though!

I love the Indigo-series, keep it up, Littlewing, please!

Dagi

I'll write some more J&E/Indigo stories.  They're my favorites!
Title: Re: Admiring the View
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 06, 2007, 10:56:13 pm
So true ... so true!  :laugh:  My mum's tried shutting me up ... Graham's tried shutting me up ... my kids have tried shutting me up ... all my friends have tried shutting me up ......

... but alas they have all failed miserably!!!  ;D

Now, if I ever bump into JakeG in the street I wouldn't be able to utter a word .. at least not a comprehensible one!!  :P

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)   


 :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:
Title: Alone at Last 2
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 06, 2007, 11:26:16 pm
Alone at Last 2 by Littlewing1957

Extreme AU

The Cow and Calf operation, that sweet life that had been Jack’s dream for so long was realized with a vengeance!  Ennis and Jack were successful beyond their wildest dreams!  Both men spent an ungodly amount of time pinching themselves to make sure they weren’t dreaming.  And the birth of Baby Indigo only managed to make Ennis and Jack’s happiness complete.

Once in the luxurious surroundings of their bedroom, Ennis allowed Jack to undress him slowly and completely.  Ennis stood before his lover naked - his manhood winking up at Jack – twitching and spilling.  Jack looked down at Ennis’ erection and felt his saliva form and thicken.  He undressed quickly, never taking his eyes away from Ennis’ growing manhood.  Jack couldn’t wait to partake of the feast pointing straight up, saluting him!  He lowered himself to his knees and swallowed Ennis whole.  So very salty and savory sweet!  Jack thought how new it all felt: sucking his man without any thought of interruption.  Ennis’ head fell back with the rapture; he didn’t know that level of pleasure was possible!  He gently guided Jack’s head in the pleasuring.  Jack grunted as he tasted the pre-cum, felt the sensation of hard and smooth!  All over in one violent shudder.  But Jack wanted more.  He continued to lick and suck until Ennis was forced to his knees.  Jack released him, and he held him!  Jack gently placed Ennis’ head on his chest and kissed his forehead.  He thought he would burst from the feeling.  Ennis refused to hide the tears forming in his hazel eyes.  After all they had been through, it was okay to be tender.  Finally!

“Is it too late to talk of love?”  Jack ventured shyly.  He held Ennis’ head, pressed his lips to Ennis’ forehead.   Ennis wrapped his arms around Jack’s shoulders.

“After all this time, you don’t have to say it, Cowboy.”  Ennis whispered slowly, softly.  “But if you want to tell me.....”  Ennis kissed Jack with a tenderness he didn’t know he possessed.

“I love you!”  Jack croaked.  “I’ve always loved you, Ennis.  From the first time I saw you standing there at that trailer, I loved you.  I’ll always love you!”  Ennis let his tears fall onto Jack's heaving chest.

“I love you too!”  Was Ennis’ answer.  He pressed his forehead against Jack's.  Jack offered a smile.  He pulled himself up from the plush carpet and walked over to the bed, pulling Ennis by the hand.  They made love that night as though it were the first time.  They fell asleep thanking the universe for each and every blessing.  Special thanks for Baby Indigo!


Title: Re: Alone at Last
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 06, 2007, 11:28:13 pm
MMM  I love meatloaf, littlewing.  (And I can make meatloaf that's very good I think.)  And I love Ennis's butt, too.   :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:  Very gentle and endearing story.  It would have been great if it could have been like this.

Gary 

Gary, when you come over for dinner, I'll have my mom fix meat loaf.  She made one for us tonight.  So very comforting, and just perfect when the temps fall.  Perhaps I'll bring the meat loaf to you!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 06, 2007, 11:32:00 pm
Did Toycoon go on another vacation?   :-\

I don't know!  We never found out if he was affected by the fire?  I hope he didn't leave again.  I can't image this place without him.  Come back, Toycoon.  Your people miss you!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on November 07, 2007, 01:00:45 am
Hello my beautiful friends,
No, I did not go on another vacation but I was gone for so long that now, I have a workload, an arm long!
One of my coworkers is going on vacation on Thursday and because she watched over my projects while I was gone, I have to reciprocate for her. I've been taking five minute, mini-vacations at lunchtime and reading some of your stories throughout the past few days but I don't even have enough time to comment. Keep up the great work and I will rejoin you when I catch up (hopefully by next week!). Dagi, I hope you are feeling better. Gary, I hope you're settling in to life on the West Coast. Susiebell, I hope you are enjoying your duties as a BetterMost moderator. Littlewing, hold down the fort for me while I'm away. And Shasta, keep away from that evil IMDb. The trolls there seem worse than ever before!

Love and best wishes,
Toycoon
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 07, 2007, 02:05:14 am
Hello my beautiful friends,
No, I did not go on another vacation but I was gone for so long that now, I have a workload, an arm long!
One of my coworkers is going on vacation on Thursday and because she watched over my projects while I was gone, I have to reciprocate for her. I've been taking five minute, mini-vacations at lunchtime and reading some of your stories throughout the past few days but I don't even have enough time to comment. Keep up the great work and I will rejoin you when I catch up (hopefully by next week!). Dagi, I hope you are feeling better. Gary, I hope you're settling in to life on the West Coast. Susiebell, I hope you are enjoying your duties as a BetterMost moderator. Littlewing, hold down the fort for me while I'm away. And Shasta, keep away from that evil IMDb. The trolls there seem worse than ever before!

Love and best wishes,
Toycoon

Toycoon, thanks for your post.  I never even considered your workload!  I'll hold down the fort, and will have a ball doing it.  We'll see you when you get back.  Take care, Love!
Title: Re: Alone at Last 2
Post by: Dagi on November 07, 2007, 03:36:19 am
Alone at Last 2 by Littlewing1957

Extreme AU

The Cow and Calf operation, that sweet life that had been Jack’s dream for so long was realized with a vengeance!  Ennis and Jack were successful beyond their wildest dreams!  Both men spent an ungodly amount of time pinching themselves to make sure they weren’t dreaming.  And the birth of Baby Indigo only managed to make Ennis and Jack’s happiness complete.

Once in the luxurious surroundings of their bedroom, Ennis allowed Jack to undress him slowly and completely.  Ennis stood before his lover naked - his manhood winking up at Jack – twitching and spilling.  Jack looked down at Ennis’ erection and felt his saliva form and thicken.  He undressed quickly, never taking his eyes away from Ennis’ growing manhood.  Jack couldn’t wait to partake of the feast pointing straight up, saluting him!  He lowered himself to his knees and swallowed Ennis whole.  So very salty and savory sweet!  Jack thought how new it all felt: sucking his man without any thought of interruption.  Ennis’ head fell back with the rapture; he didn’t know that level of pleasure was possible!  He gently guided Jack’s head in the pleasuring.  Jack grunted as he tasted the pre-cum, felt the sensation of hard and smooth!  All over in one violent shudder.  But Jack wanted more.  He continued to lick and suck until Ennis was forced to his knees.  Jack released him, and he held him!  Jack gently placed Ennis’ head on his chest and kissed his forehead.  He thought he would burst from the feeling.  Ennis refused to hide the tears forming in his hazel eyes.  After all they had been through, it was okay to be tender.  Finally!

“Is it too late to talk of love?”  Jack ventured shyly.  He held Ennis’ head, pressed his lips to Ennis’ forehead.   Ennis wrapped his arms around Jack’s shoulders.

“After all this time, you don’t have to say it, Cowboy.”  Ennis whispered slowly, softly.  “But if you want to tell me.....”  Ennis kissed Jack with a tenderness he didn’t know he possessed.

“I love you!”  Jack croaked.  “I’ve always loved you, Ennis.  From the first time I saw you standing there at that trailer, I loved you.  I’ll always love you!”  Ennis let his tears fall onto Jack's heaving chest.

“I love you too!”  Was Ennis’ answer.  He pressed his forehead against Jack's.  Jack offered a smile.  He pulled himself up from the plush carpet and walked over to the bed, pulling Ennis by the hand.  They made love that night as though it were the first time.  They fell asleep thanking the universe for each and every blessing.  Special thanks for Baby Indigo!




Littlewing, what do you do to me? I read BBM again yesterday, and it was harder than ever before to read about Jack´s death, knowing that they never had all these sweet things that we make up for them.

Thank you so much for going on dreaming about what could have been...what a beautiful scene, just beautiful.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on November 07, 2007, 03:38:04 am
Hello my beautiful friends,
No, I did not go on another vacation but I was gone for so long that now, I have a workload, an arm long!
One of my coworkers is going on vacation on Thursday and because she watched over my projects while I was gone, I have to reciprocate for her. I've been taking five minute, mini-vacations at lunchtime and reading some of your stories throughout the past few days but I don't even have enough time to comment. Keep up the great work and I will rejoin you when I catch up (hopefully by next week!). Dagi, I hope you are feeling better. Gary, I hope you're settling in to life on the West Coast. Susiebell, I hope you are enjoying your duties as a BetterMost moderator. Littlewing, hold down the fort for me while I'm away. And Shasta, keep away from that evil IMDb. The trolls there seem worse than ever before!

Love and best wishes,
Toycoon

Take your time, honey, we´re going nowhere... :) We miss you is all!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on November 07, 2007, 01:08:43 pm
Aww Dagi, there's not many things in this world sweeter than morning wood.   ;D  What a way to start the day, right?  And there are fewer things more erotic than someone feeling so comfortable and accepted by another that he's able to play with himself while that other person watches.  And you know that I loved that kiss at the end.  MMMM

Gary

Hi sweetie, glad you enjoyed the good morning kiss.  ;D Thanks for your comment. Have a beautiful day!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on November 08, 2007, 05:41:38 am
Delicious sexy moment Dagi dear!  And how lovely that Ennis feels so comfortable with Jack that he wants him to watch ....  he's come a long way since TS2 where he couldn't even bear to open his eyes and watch him and Jack together.

Lovely Dagi!

Susie    (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)   


Thanks so much, Susie dear! And yeah, it´s almost a AU story, isn´t it?

Dagi
Title: Re: Alone at Last
Post by: Dagi on November 08, 2007, 05:44:35 am

MMMM  That sounds great, Littlewing.  I can hardly wait. 

I have a funny story about meat loaf.  I was driving through New Jersey with my sister a few years ago, and we stopped at this little restaurant, and I saw that they offered meat loaf sandwiches.  I love meat loaf sandwiches.  One of the great things about meat loaf is that they're usually leftovers that can be used to make sandwiches.  So that's what I ordered in this New Jersey restaurant.  And I asked them to fix it just like I fixed it at home, with a little mayo.  The waitress gave me the strangest look.  I knew something was up, but I couldn't figure out what it was.  And a few minutes later she came back and asked me, "Did you say you want mayo on your meat loaf sandwich?"  I said yeah, and I wondered what the problem was.  Hadn't these people ever heard of mayonnaise?  Well, not long after that the freaking cook came out of the kitchen to ask me if I really wanted mayo on my sandwich.  And I was beginning to wonder if these people were brain damaged.   :P  But finally the cook understood what I was asking for, and she explained that their meat loaf sandwich was an "open faced" sandwich with gravy poured over top.   :laugh:  But she agreed to make me an actual sandwich with mayo, and without the gravy.  My sister and I still laugh about that.

Gary   

I skipped that yesterday, made me feel sick just reading about meat...but today it makes my mouth water! I´m looking forward to eating lots of meat loaf in CA!  ;D

Dagi
Title: Re: Alone at Last 2
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 08, 2007, 03:47:01 pm
Littlewing, I just love it when Ennis's manhood twiches and spills.   ;D  Very sexy story, and so full of tenderness and love.  And they actually used the "L" word.  Wow!  Keep it up, and you're going to turn me into a romantic.   :laugh:

Gary

Thanks, Gary!  I'll keep up the romance.  It makes me feel good!
Title: Re: Alone at Last 2
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 08, 2007, 03:47:28 pm
Littlewing, what do you do to me? I read BBM again yesterday, and it was harder than ever before to read about Jack´s death, knowing that they never had all these sweet things that we make up for them.

Thank you so much for going on dreaming about what could have been...what a beautiful scene, just beautiful.

Dagi

Thanks, Sweetie!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 08, 2007, 03:49:46 pm
I dedicate this story to each and every one of you. I just love my Jack with Ennis family!  :-*

Intimacy by Dagi


The old mattress made a low squeaking sound when Jack turned around and pulled the sheet up to his chin. He opened his eyes just a little, but could hardly see anything.

His sleepy gaze fell upon his lover's face, who was obviously sound asleep, eyes closed, lips parted,  breath going steadily. It was not until a low moan gave Ennis away that Jack realized the movements down there, and he was fully awake the same second.

Partly surprised, partly angry for Ennis hadn't woken him up, but was actually jerking off without his “help”, he couldn't help staring at his friend's strong, manly hands stroking his fully erect manhood, rubbing his thumb over the swollen head glistening with precum, a sight that made him lick his lips and hold his breath as if it was the first time he was seeing this, and by God it was not.

Another moan, slightly louder this time, brought his attention back to Ennis's face, and only then his friend himself opened his eyes and realized that he was observed.

Guilt washed over his face, and his hand stopped for a moment, until he saw his own arousal mirrored in his friend's face. "Didn't want to wake you up just because....sorry.....” , and then “No, no, don't do anything, just watch.....” , as he saw Jack reach down in order to take over.

And Jack watched, he watched in amazement, having difficulty holding back. With every stroke Ennis got closer, apparently mighty turned on by the fact that Jack was watching him!

When Ennis tilted his head back and his stomach cramped Jack couldn't stop himself any longer: with a mischievous grin he slid down, and the moment Ennis came he wrapped his warm tender lips around the head and sucked and sucked and swallowed greedily, until after a little while the loud groans became low moans, and eventually deep sighs, and he felt his lover's hand on his neck gently pulling him back up and into his arms.

They kissed, sharing the taste as they had done so many times before, but soon tiredness overwhelmed them, and snuggled up close to one another they drifted away, satisfied beyond words.


Dagi, forgive me for taking so long to comment, but after reading this, I needed time to recover!  :laugh:  You have woven a deliciously sexy and tender tale!  So very moving!  Write another, Dagi, please!  You're so good at this!
Title: Re: Alone at Last 2
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 08, 2007, 03:50:53 pm
What a beautiful, tender and erotic moment.  I just love this whole Indigo alternate reality, it warms my heart ... thank you so much littlewing  :-*

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)   


Thanks, SusieBaby!
Title: Re: Alone at Last
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 08, 2007, 03:51:45 pm
Why not gravy AND mayo?   :D  We don't really do meatloaf in this country although I'm sure I'd love it ... I like a nice piece of meat!  ;)  Littlewing, if you get a chance, I'd love it if you'd send me the recipe ... pretty pleeeeease  ;D

Susie   (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)   


Okay, I'll try and pry the recipe out of her!
Title: Re: Alone at Last
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 08, 2007, 03:52:47 pm
I skipped that yesterday, made me feel sick just reading about meat...but today it makes my mouth water! I´m looking forward to eating lots of meat loaf in CA!  ;D

Dagi

I can't wait to see you!  :)
Title: Acceptance?
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 08, 2007, 04:09:18 pm
Acceptance?  by Littlewing1957

A friend of Maria's asked me to fashion her BBM dream into a story and post it here.  I hope it makes sense!

"Why can't you just accept us?" Jack shouted with conviction as he placed his arms around Ennis' shoulders.

"This is not some low-budget movie, but we are flesh and blood men!"  Ennis exclaimed as he patted Jack's forearm.  He extracated himself from Jack's embrace and took a bold step forward.

"You're not even real!"  The well dressed woman laughed as she pointed her camera at a livid Ennis Del Mar.

"There is no such thing as a gay cowboy, or ranch hand, or whatever else you want to call yourselves!"  The woman laughed as she wagged a long painted nail in Ennis' face.

"Look at the 2 of you,"  She continued.  "You're much too macho looking, too normal to be gay.  Why, you're nothing more than an image caught on film.  No, not real at all!"

Ennis was done!  He drew back his powerful fist, but Jack caught him just in the nick of time.  Ennis would have shown the woman just how real he was, but Jack put a stop to it.  The woman jumped back and retreated from the scene with remarkable agility.  Jack held Ennis back by pinning his arms, while the lady ran away to safety.

Alma Jr. woke with a start!  She couldn't believe what she just dreamed.  What did it all mean?  Why did the lady think that Ennis and Jack, her 2 dads, were nothing more than characters in a movie?  Alma Jr. decided to overlook it.  She willed herself back to sleep, and with any luck, she would dream an answer to her questions.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on November 08, 2007, 04:55:01 pm
Dagi, forgive me for taking so long to comment, but after reading this, I needed time to recover!  :laugh:  You have woven a deliciously sexy and tender tale!  So very moving!  Write another, Dagi, please!  You're so good at this!

Wow, Marie, you really know what to say to make me feel good! :D Thanks so much, sweetie!

Dagi
Title: Re: Acceptance?
Post by: Toycoon on November 08, 2007, 08:54:42 pm
Quote
Alma Jr. woke with a start!  She couldn't believe what she just dreamed.  What did it all mean?  Why did the lady think that Ennis and Jack, her 2 dads, were nothing more than characters in a movie?  Alma Jr. decided to overlook it.  She willed herself back to sleep, and with any luck, she would dream an answer to her questions.

What a cool story, Littlewing. You know I love the tales that turn out to be dreams. --Toycoon
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 08, 2007, 09:08:13 pm
Wow, Marie, you really know what to say to make me feel good! :D Thanks so much, sweetie!

Dagi

You're very welcome!
Title: Re: Acceptance?
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 08, 2007, 09:12:00 pm
Very interesting, ambiguous, and surreal, Littlewing.  I myself know that Jack and Ennis are only characters in a story, but to me they're real.   ;D  So did your daughter's friend dream that she was Alma Jr. having this dream?  The woman in the dream is pointing out that Jack and Ennis are fictional characters, but she also seems to be trying to deny the existence of any gay men who are more masculine than the stereotype.  So on the one hand she's right, but on the other hand she's wrong.

Gary   

Maria's friend dreamed that Ennis and Jack were real people trying to convince her (Maria's friend) that they are real, even in spite of a film crew standing there!  The dream was very strange as told to me, and I tried my best to turn it into story form.  Gary, I'm not sure I understand it.  I threw in the part about Alma Jr.  I debated about posting it at all, but Allie (Maria's friend) was very persuasive!  :laugh:
Title: The Offer
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 08, 2007, 10:18:35 pm
The Offer by Littlewing1957

Jack sat at the bar and waited anxiously for Ennis.  Ennis was late; very late, as a matter of fact!  Jack drank more beers than he should have in an effort to drown out that distressing voice in the back of his head.  The voice that tortured him with, “Ennis ain’t gonna show!  He fell off a cliff and you’ll never see him again!  Ennis went back to Alma and she put a stop to the fishing trips!”  A litany of depressing scenarios ran through his mind like a freight train!  Jack was about to order another beer when he heard a voice,

“Hello!”

Jack looked around the bar until his eyes rested on a woman seated alone in a booth.  Jack smiled at the middle aged lady.  She was average looking, very large and extremely well dressed.  Jack wondered how such a large lady managed to wedge herself into that booth!

“Won’t you join me?”  The lady beckoned to Jack.  Jack looked back to his watch and his drink.  He didn’t mind company while waiting for Ennis.  Perhaps pleasant conversation would take his mind off his worries.  Jack clutched what was left of his drink and climbed off the bar stool.

“Jack Twist!”  He said as he took a seat opposite the large woman.  Jack looked her over.  She was wearing a black sheath dress that she covered with a red paisley pashmina – all very elegant.  Jack noticed the large diamond rings gracing every other chubby finger.  Her wrists were encircled with several diamond line bracelets.  This chick has big bucks!  Jack thought as he took a sip of his beer.

“Dale Swenson.”  The lady said as she offered Jack a bejeweled hand.  Jack shook her fragrant hand and smiled at her.

“Nice to meet you, Jack Twist!”  The lady said as she took a gulp of her own drink.

“You live around here?”  She asked as she looked into Jack’s baby blues.

“No, I’m from Texas!”  Jack exclaimed.  Dale nodded knowingly.

“I’m just here to meet my buddy.  We’re headed up to the mountains for a fishing trip,”  Jack explained.  Upon hearing this, Dale smiled and took another swig of her drink.

“I used to fish a long time ago.”  She began.  “My husband and I own a lot of the cabins in these parts.  My Sam passed away a decade ago, but he left me the business and the money.  I’m doin’ okay!”

“I can see that!”  Jack exclaimed as he once again took in Dale’s finery.  “Looks like business is very good.”  Dale laughed at this.

“Jack, I’m going to tell you this, and I hope you’re not offended,” she spoke plainly.  “But I’m a very lonely woman now that I’m widowed.  I saw you there by yourself and I must say, I can’t remember when I’ve seen such a handsome man.”  Jack blushed.  He knew where this was headed, but he was flattered, and he had time.  Why not listen to this woman’s rap?

“You know Jack,” the matron continued, “I’m in a sort of group of older ladies.  Most of us are rich, the majority of us are single and childless.  And none of us knows what to do with all our money.”  Jack listened intently and allowed Dale to continue.

“We have decided to help young men in a monetary sense.  You see, quite a few of my friends have young guys who they are taking care of.  Now take yourself, for instance!”  Jack brightened but said nothing.

“You’re very handsome and even though you’re well dressed and your hands are manicured, I’ll wager you can benefit from my money!  I can provide you with a new pair of alligator boots, a leather jacket, a diamond ring, if you’re so inclined!”  Jack couldn’t believe what he was hearing, but he was fascinated and allowed Dale to go on.

“And this largess comes with only a modest price.”  Dale stated matter-of-factly.

“And what would that be?”  Jack inquired.  Dale smiled rather sweetly.

“All I ask is that you keep me company, escort me to dinner every once in awhile.  Just because I’m showering you with gifts don’t mean you have to go to bed with me!”  Dale stated innocently and tapped Jack on the forearm for emphasis.

“But we’ll talk about that later!”

What is there to talk about?  Jack thought, incredulous.  He  was about to explain to Dale why her proposal was out of the question when he saw Ennis Del Mar entering the bar.  Dale followed Jack’s stare. 

“Is that your buddy?”  Dale asked as she cast an interested look in Ennis’ direction.

“Yeah, that’s him!”  Jack said, his voice a mixture of relief and enthusiasm. 

“Well, think about what I said, Jack,” Dale continued.  “And I think I can find someone for your friend.  As good as he looks, my girlfriends will be fighting over him!”  It was not an agreeable idea!  Jack didn’t take kindly to the thought of Ennis having a sugar mama.

“I don’t think so, Dale.”  Jack stated.  “You see, we’re both married,” Jack lied.  “But I thank you for your offer.”  Dale seemed crushed, but she recovered quickly.

“Well, you can’t blame an old lady for trying!”  She laughed.  “Now go on and enjoy your trip.  And if you’re ever in these parts again, and you want someone to talk to, ask for Dale.  Everyone here knows me.  The same goes for your friend.”

Jack grinned and kissed Dale’s hand.  He moved out of the booth and walked toward Ennis, who greeted him with a warm embrace.





 





Title: Re: Acceptance?
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 08, 2007, 10:19:23 pm
What a cool story, Littlewing. You know I love the tales that turn out to be dreams. --Toycoon

Thanks, Toycoon.  I thought you might like the end!
Title: Right by Toycoon
Post by: Toycoon on November 08, 2007, 11:32:16 pm
Right by Toycoon

The warmth of the crackling fire was no match for the heat generated from the men wrapped beneath the tattered blanket, kneeling, facing one another, passionately grinding their bodies together attempting to merge into one being.

"What in the hell do you two queers think yer doing! " The shock jolted Jack and Ennis to their feet, the blanket falling away leaving them standing there completely naked, shivering and exposed for all the world; from the darkness appeared the looming figure of Joe Aguirre, his eyes bulging, menacingly shaking his binoculars at the men and stomping the ground like an animal.

"You ain't got no right to tell us what to do! " shouted Jack defiantly, "up on Brokeback we make the rules!" With that, Aguirre lunged at them, wildly swinging the binoculars, knocking Jack to the ground  and striking Ennis across the side of his face.

Ennis felt his face, gingerly touching the swollen bump growing on the side of his head and stared at the metal frame of the steel Greyhound bus shelter; he felt around for the paper sack beside him, reached inside, pulled out the bus ticket and read the information again: Riverton, Wyoming - Departing 2:17 PM.
Title: Re: The Offer
Post by: Toycoon on November 08, 2007, 11:41:01 pm
Shee-it! Littlewing, you ROCK!!! What a fantastic, original story. I wish I'd thought of it. So f--king excellent!
Title: Re: The Offer
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 09, 2007, 12:08:09 am
Shee-it! Littlewing, you ROCK!!! What a fantastic, original story. I wish I'd thought of it. So f--king excellent!

Why thanks, Toycoon!  I don't even know why I wrote it!  But I had the time of my life writing it!
Title: Right (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 09, 2007, 12:27:42 am
Right (2) by Littlewing1957

Ennis didn’t like to think of what happened right after Aguirre struck him.  But he couldn’t forget the image of his dear sweet Jack being knocked to the ground like that!  Without a thought for his own safety, Ennis lunged at Aguirre and struck him soundly across the jaw, but only after taking a hit from Aguirre across the side of his handsome face!

Ennis really saw red when he noticed that Jack was laid out cold.  “We ought to sue you, you old bastard!”  Ennis spit out at Aguirre as he rushed over to Jack.  Aguirre watched and fought to hide his own terror.  He didn’t mean to hurt either one of them, but he couldn’t stand being ripped off.  His flock, his very livelihood was at stake.  How dare those two stem the rose when they should be vigilant and watch over his sheep?  Aguirre felt almost vindicated in his brutality.

Ennis watched Aguirre walk off without even bothering to see if Jack was okay.  Ennis stroked Jack’s forehead and stayed with him until a medic arrived to take him to the clinic in town.  He heard a few days later that Jack was just fine and left the clinic for Lightning Flat.  Ennis had no choice but to return to Riverton.  Aguirre didn’t get the satisfaction of firing them – they both quit.  Ennis bought a ticket to Riverton confident that one day soon he would see Jack again.
Title: Right (3) by Toycoon
Post by: Toycoon on November 09, 2007, 01:22:55 am
Right (3) by Toycoon

Ennis, dirty thumbnail in his mouth, gazed out the greasy window of the Greyhound bus watching the endless Wyoming fields fly by; "I cain't believe I left it like that" he wondered, "Jack was obviously trying to tell me something and I let 'im outta my sights."

Ennis turned the erotic scenario ever and over in his mind: he and Jack, naked, kissing, sucking and feeling every part of one another; Ennis rubbed his stiffening penis through his ragged jeans and embarrassed, looked around to see if any one was watching him.

That night when bus slowed down and came to a stop in Riverton, Ennis grabbed his paper sack and popped up out of his seat; " I don't know what this thing between me an' him is but shee-it, I gotta see Jack agin, I gotta know what he wanted to say ta me".
Title: Right (4)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 09, 2007, 02:09:51 am
Right (4) By Littlewing1957

His first night back in Riverton and Ennis didn't know what to do.  Other than missing Jack, he had very little to think about.  Oh yeah…he was an engaged man, engaged to Alma Beers.  Ennis walked out of the bus station and pulled his jacket close against the bitter cold.  He could go over to Alma’s house and surprise her, but Ennis thought better of it.  He wasn't ready to face his future wife.

He had a few dollars saved up and decided to treat himself to a motel room for the night.  Ennis found a cheap place out by the bus station and checked in.  He would get a good night’s sleep and decide what to do about Alma and Jack in the morning.

Ennis stripped bare and climbed into the double bed.  He was accustomed to sleeping alone, but the tranquil nights of love on the mountain almost spoiled him.  Ennis felt his dick stiffen as he summoned up images of Jack nibbling between his thighs.  He fell asleep wondering what Jack wanted, and how he could ever go back to living without him.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on November 09, 2007, 07:53:15 am
Aaah, so many new stories. My mother is visiting, so I don´t have much time for my computer, but I´ll be back tomorrow latest!

Dagi :-*
Title: Re: Acceptance?
Post by: Toycoon on November 09, 2007, 10:29:49 am
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I've never had any dreams about Jack and Ennis ... quite a few about Jake, but let's not talk about them!!

Why not talk about your special Jake dreams, then you can help all of us...
Title: Re: Right (2)
Post by: Toycoon on November 09, 2007, 10:34:57 am
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Ah now that's interesting... When I first read toycoon's story I thought it was all a dream and Ennis had simply bumped his head on the metal pole and woken up.  Now I see it completely differently, that the events really did take place!  You're messing with my head you guys ... please do it again!!!

Originally, it was intended to be one of Ennis' daydreams but Littlewing gave me a new persective on the same story. I realized it could have happened (at least the way Littlewing tells it).
Title: Re: Acceptance?
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 09, 2007, 12:50:50 pm
WOW!  That was so bizarre and surreal!  I LOVE dream stories!  I couldn't work out who your daughter's friend was in the dream, was she Alma JR? or the woman?  or was she simply an onlooker?

I've never had any dreams about Jack and Ennis ... quite a few about Jake, but let's not talk about them!!  ;D ;D ;D

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)   



Thansk, SusieBaby!  Maria's friend was just an on-looker.
Title: Re: The Offer
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 09, 2007, 12:51:34 pm

Fascinating story littlewing!  I wonder how that one popped into your head!  I'd like to climb in there myself and look around for a bit .. you have an amazing imagination!!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)   


 :laugh: :laugh:  I've heard this since I was a child!
Title: Re: Right (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 09, 2007, 12:56:03 pm
Originally, it was intended to be one of Ennis' daydreams but Littlewing gave me a new persective on the same story. I realized it could have happened (at least the way Littlewing tells it).

Strange, but I don't remember the story.  I had a different take on it, I suppose.  Toycoon, let's keep adding to it and see where we can go with it.  What do you say? I'll add as any chapters as come to mind.
Title: Re: Right
Post by: cwby30 on November 09, 2007, 01:10:33 pm
Mornin'.

Well, I don't remember reading this before, but I really like it.  A completely different take on the "what if" game.  Interesting POV for Aguirre; I have thought that, too, that Aguirre was mad about them not watching the sheep which cost Aguirre money, more so than they're spending time "stemming the rose".  He was paying them to be shepherds, not to be ignoring the sheep and having sex.  Having done this for years, Aguirre had to know that this kinda thing happened up on the Mountain; maybe should have broached the subject before they left with the sheep.    But then we wouldn't have that great OS!

Anyway, sure enjoy this team effort, and look forward to reading all of it. 

Thanks again. 
Title: Re: Acceptance?
Post by: Dagi on November 09, 2007, 02:41:06 pm
Acceptance?  by Littlewing1957

A friend of Maria's asked me to fashion her BBM dream into a story and post it here.  I hope it makes sense!

"Why can't you just accept us?" Jack shouted with conviction as he placed his arms around Ennis' shoulders.

"This is not some low-budget movie, but we are flesh and blood men!"  Ennis exclaimed as he patted Jack's forearm.  He extracated himself from Jack's embrace and took a bold step forward.

"You're not even real!"  The well dressed woman laughed as she pointed her camera at a livid Ennis Del Mar.

"There is no such thing as a gay cowboy, or ranch hand, or whatever else you want to call yourselves!"  The woman laughed as she wagged a long painted nail in Ennis' face.

"Look at the 2 of you,"  She continued.  "You're much too macho looking, too normal to be gay.  Why, you're nothing more than an image caught on film.  No, not real at all!"

Ennis was done!  He drew back his powerful fist, but Jack caught him just in the nick of time.  Ennis would have shown the woman just how real he was, but Jack put a stop to it.  The woman jumped back and retreated from the scene with remarkable agility.  Jack held Ennis back by pinning his arms, while the lady ran away to safety.

Alma Jr. woke with a start!  She couldn't believe what she just dreamed.  What did it all mean?  Why did the lady think that Ennis and Jack, her 2 dads, were nothing more than characters in a movie?  Alma Jr. decided to overlook it.  She willed herself back to sleep, and with any luck, she would dream an answer to her questions.

I love that Alma Jr. calls Jack and Ennis her two dads!  :D And the rest....Jack and Ennis are real for me, and they are fake at the same time, but surely not because they are "too normal" or "too macho looking". Very strange, Marie. But we are used to strange stories coming from you. ;D

Dagi
Title: Re: The Offer
Post by: Dagi on November 09, 2007, 02:48:51 pm
The Offer by Littlewing1957



Jack grinned and kissed Dale’s hand.  He moved out of the booth and walked toward Ennis, who greeted him with a warm embrace.







I can´t blame this woman.  ;D If I was her, I´d try it too! But the part I liked most was the enthusiasm in Jack´s voice, and the warm embrace Ennis greeted him with. Littlewing, your ideas for stories are amazing. :D

Dagi
Title: Re: Right (4)
Post by: Dagi on November 09, 2007, 02:56:30 pm
Right (4) By Littlewing1957

His first night back in Riverton and Ennis didn't know what to do.  Other than missing Jack, he had very little to think about.  Oh yeah…he was an engaged man, engaged to Alma Beers.  Ennis walked out of the bus station and pulled his jacket close against the bitter cold.  He could go over to Alma’s house and surprise her, but Ennis thought better of it.  He wasn't ready to face his future wife.

He had a few dollars saved up and decided to treat himself to a motel room for the night.  Ennis found a cheap place out by the bus station and checked in.  He would get a good night’s sleep and decide what to do about Alma and Jack in the morning.

Ennis stripped bare and climbed into the double bed.  He was accustomed to sleeping alone, but the tranquil nights of love on the mountain almost spoiled him.  Ennis felt his dick stiffen as he summoned up images of Jack nibbling between his thighs.  He fell asleep wondering what Jack wanted, and how he could ever go back to living without him.


Toycoon and Littlewing, you are one great team! What a treat!

Dagi
Title: Re: The Offer
Post by: Dagi on November 09, 2007, 05:16:05 pm
Wow!  What an unexpected story, Littlewing.  The idea of Jack and Ennis as gigolos makes me squirm, but this was a very ineresting story.  I'm glad that Jack was able to resist.  But if Dale promised not to make me hide the salami I might be able to go along.   :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:  Although I'm hardly a prize compared to Jack.   :(

Gary

You are priceless, Gary. :-*
Title: Re: Acceptance?
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 09, 2007, 09:20:40 pm
I love that Alma Jr. calls Jack and Ennis her two dads!  :D And the rest....Jack and Ennis are real for me, and they are fake at the same time, but surely not because they are "too normal" or "too macho looking". Very strange, Marie. But we are used to strange stories coming from you. ;D

Dagi

Thnaks, Dagi.  I think?  :laugh:
Title: Re: The Offer
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 09, 2007, 09:21:39 pm
I can´t blame this woman.  ;D If I was her, I´d try it too! But the part I liked most was the enthusiasm in Jack´s voice, and the warm embrace Ennis greeted him with. Littlewing, your ideas for stories are amazing. :D

Dagi

Ah, Dagi, such sweet encouraging words.  Thanks so much!
Title: Re: The Offer
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 09, 2007, 09:23:08 pm
Wow!  What an unexpected story, Littlewing.  The idea of Jack and Ennis as gigolos makes me squirm, but this was a very ineresting story.  I'm glad that Jack was able to resist.  But if Dale promised not to make me hide the salami I might be able to go along.   :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:  Although I'm hardly a prize compared to Jack.   :(

Gary

Thanks, Gary!  I'm sure any self-respecting rich woman would love to have you as her boy-toy.   :)
Title: Re: Right (4)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 09, 2007, 09:24:42 pm
Great series, Toycoon and Littlewing.  You have me wondering what will happen next.  Thanks for the joint effort. 

Gary

P.S.  Do we know that Joe owned the sheep?  I got the sense that he was a manager and not the owner.  But maybe I overlooked something.

I'm not sure if Joe was the owner, but you know how managers tend to claim the inventory as their own.  I've heard managers in Dept. stores refer to the place as "my store!"
Title: Re: Right
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 09, 2007, 09:26:47 pm
Mornin'.

Well, I don't remember reading this before, but I really like it.  A completely different take on the "what if" game.  Interesting POV for Aguirre; I have thought that, too, that Aguirre was mad about them not watching the sheep which cost Aguirre money, more so than they're spending time "stemming the rose".  He was paying them to be shepherds, not to be ignoring the sheep and having sex.  Having done this for years, Aguirre had to know that this kinda thing happened up on the Mountain; maybe should have broached the subject before they left with the sheep.    But then we wouldn't have that great OS!

Anyway, sure enjoy this team effort, and look forward to reading all of it. 

Thanks again. 

Thanks for your kind words.  We'll carry the story as far as we can ride it.  Everyone, feel free to join in!
Title: Right (5)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 09, 2007, 09:46:35 pm
Right (5) By Littlewing1957

Ennis woke at exactly 5:13a.m. to the smell of camp fires, sheep and the heady, masculine smell of Jack Twist.  Perhaps it was all a dream, but how to explain the sensation of the scents?  Ennis didn’t make a big deal about it, but decided to enjoy.  He remembered Jack’s smell, and thought back to days when Jack surprised him with an impromptu visit, climbed into bed with him.  Ennis was grateful for the olfactory memory. 

It was early, but Ennis knew he had to get up and plan the rest of his life.  It was cold in the motel room; it was cold outside.  Ennis checked out of the room and made his way up the main street.  Ennis loved the feel of the cold on his cheeks; the whistle of the wind; the sight of little children all dressed up in puff coats and mittens.  Ennis loved all of it.  Alma lived not ten minutes away by foot, and Ennis found himself pulled in her direction.

Alma still lived with her folks in a small one story shotgun.  The place could use a coat of paint, Ennis observed as he made his way up the steps.  He was just about to knock on the heavy door when he realized that he arrived empty handed.  Ennis was a country boy, but his mother taught him manners.  It would look bad if he visited his fiancé without even a few roses or some other delicate bloom to give her.  Ennis made a calculation of the money he had in his pocket and made his way back to the main street.


Title: Re: Right (5)
Post by: Dagi on November 10, 2007, 07:42:14 am
Right (5) By Littlewing1957

Ennis woke at exactly 5:13a.m. to the smell of camp fires, sheep and the heady, masculine smell of Jack Twist.  Perhaps it was all a dream, but how to explain the sensation of the scents?  Ennis didn’t make a big deal about it, but decided to enjoy.  He remembered Jack’s smell, and thought back to days when Jack surprised him with an impromptu visit, climbed into bed with him.  Ennis was grateful for the olfactory memory. 

It was early, but Ennis knew he had to get up and plan the rest of his life.  It was cold in the motel room; it was cold outside.  Ennis checked out of the room and made his way up the main street.  Ennis loved the feel of the cold on his cheeks; the whistle of the wind; the sight of little children all dressed up in puff coats and mittens.  Ennis loved all of it.  Alma lived not ten minutes away by foot, and Ennis found himself pulled in her direction.

Alma still lived with her folks in a small one story shotgun.  The place could use a coat of paint, Ennis observed as he made his way up the steps.  He was just about to knock on the heavy door when he realized that he arrived empty handed.  Ennis was a country boy, but his mother taught him manners.  It would look bad if he visited his fiancé without even a few roses or some other delicate bloom to give her.  Ennis made a calculation of the money he had in his pocket and made his way back to the main street.




Please make the right plans for the rest of your life, Ennis!! The tension is building up, Littlewing, can´t wait to read more!

Dagi
Title: Right (6) bt Toycoon
Post by: Toycoon on November 10, 2007, 02:24:17 pm
Right (6) by Toycoon

Shuffling down the dusty road with a modest bunch of pink carnations in one hand and the scent of Jack Twist still fresh in his nostrils, Ennis felt almost "queer", more so than he had after spending the entire summer making love to another man.

Now he was standing at the front door of the Beer's home; Ennis swallowed hard and rapped on the heavy door. The door slowly creaked open then Alma's older sister, Christine stood in the doorway. She was a pleasant looking woman, not as pretty or petite as Alma but attractive nonetheless.

Christine smiled and said warmly, "Howdy, Ennis. What a surprise, don't think Alma was expecting you back 'til later on this month. " Her expression changed suddenly to concern.
Title: Right (7)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 10, 2007, 04:44:58 pm
Right (7) By Littlewing1957

Ennis looked at Christine and wondered if she would allow him in.  Christine must have read Ennis’ mind, as she exhaled audibly. “Oh, where are my manners, Ennis!”  Christine said as she moved aside.  “Come on in!”  Ennis smiled and entered the tiny living room.  He handed Christine the carnations, and she sauntered into the kitchen to put them in some water.

“Alma’s not here, but I expect her back any minute!”  Christine yelled from the kitchen.  “Our folks drove into town to pick up a few things at the market.  Looks like it’ll be you and me for a little while.”  “That’ll be fine.”  Ennis yelled toward the kitchen in response.  Christine exited the kitchen a moment later with the carnations in a tall glass vase.  She sat them on the dining room table as a centerpiece.  Christine sat down on the overstuffed, floral couch beside Ennis.

“So can I get you anything?”  Christine asked.  “No, I’m okay.” Ennis stated in a small, tired voice.  Christine nodded, and they sat motionless and silent.  Ennis took a minute to observe his future sister-in-law.  She was a pretty woman with long fingers and short, cropped brown hair.  Ennis always liked Christine, but now sensed that something was bothering her.  “So how you been?”  Ennis asked in an effort to make conversation.  “Fine.”  Christine answered absently.  Ennis suddenly felt like an intruder and questioned his decision to pay Alma a call.  He was just about to get up, make his apologies to Christine when he heard the key turn in the lock.  Alma rushed into the house in a good mood.  She was giggling shyly, and she wasn’t alone!
Title: Re: Right
Post by: cwby30 on November 10, 2007, 05:51:08 pm
Afternoon.

Well, right it is!  Alma is not alone, and is "giggling shyly"... I hope it's a guy, Monroe?, which would give Ennis the perfect 'out' [so to speak!] to break off the engagement and leave... or maybe Alma intends to do that anyway.  Unexpected, which I should be expecting from you.  Again, liking the tag-team writing.  It all goes together so well. 

Thanks again.
Title: Re: Right (7)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 10, 2007, 10:26:40 pm
And the plot thickens...   ;D  Littlewing and Toycoon, you two are on a roll.  I'm loving it.  I loved how Toycoon had Christine seem reluctant to let Ennis in, and I loved how Littlewing picked that up.  Now I'm left wondering who was with Alma.  Could it be that she found a new boyfriend?  For both her sake and Ennis's it would be great if she did.

Gary

Thanks, Gary!  I'll wait a bit and see if Toycoon adds part 8.  If he hasn't, I'll work something out and post it tomorrow.  Thanks for your kind words.
Title: Re: Right
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 10, 2007, 10:27:43 pm
Afternoon.

Well, right it is!  Alma is not alone, and is "giggling shyly"... I hope it's a guy, Monroe?, which would give Ennis the perfect 'out' [so to speak!] to break off the engagement and leave... or maybe Alma intends to do that anyway.  Unexpected, which I should be expecting from you.  Again, liking the tag-team writing.  It all goes together so well. 

Thanks again.

Thanks, Babe!  I'm having a good time writing the series and am just as curious as to where it will lead. 
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on November 11, 2007, 04:49:26 am
Toycoon and Littlewing, you rock!! Please go on! :D

And Susie, come back ASAP! Kick that bug out the door! We don´t feel complete here without you!

Dagi

Title: Right (8) by Toycoon and Littlewing
Post by: Toycoon on November 11, 2007, 12:35:23 pm
Right [8] by Toycoon and Littlewing

Alma sailed into the Beer's living room, giggling and laughing, more animated than Ennis had ever seen her and flanked by a young man that he recognized as one of reverend's sons; Alma froze like a deer in the headlights when she spotted Ennis sitting in her father's old armchair.

"Ennis! What are you doing here? We...I mean, I wasn't expectin' you back 'til September. You should have called." She turned to the young man and said nervously, "This is Ennis. Me an' him..." Her voice trailed off and the boy held out his hand to Ennis. "Peter Matthew, nice to know ya."

Ennis looked the other man over, feeling a twinge of jealousy followed a pang of guilt. Ennis shook Peter's hand then Alma spoke up, "Ennis, could we talk?"

Christine piped in and offered, "Peter, come on in the kitchen an' I'll fix up some lemonade!"
Title: Re: Right (8) by Toycoon and Littlewing
Post by: Dagi on November 11, 2007, 02:21:15 pm
Right [8] by Toycoon and Littlewing

Alma sailed into the Beer's living room, giggling and laughing, more animated than Ennis had ever seen her and flanked by a young man that he recognized as one of reverend's sons; Alma froze like a deer in the headlights when she spotted Ennis sitting in her father's old armchair.

"Ennis! What are you doing here? We...I mean, I wasn't expectin' you back 'til September. You should have called." She turned to the young man and said nervously, "This is Ennis. Me an' him..." Her voice trailed off and the boy held out his hand to Ennis. "Peter Matthew, nice to know ya."

Ennis looked the other man over, feeling a twinge of jealousy followed a pang of guilt. Ennis shook Peter's hand then Alma spoke up, "Ennis, could we talk?"

Christine piped in and offered, "Peter, come on in the kitchen an' I'll fix up some lemonade!"

Fast or slow, I like the direccion you are going... ;D

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on November 11, 2007, 02:25:39 pm
Hi everybody,

I just got a PM from our dear Susie.  Seems she's been hit pretty hard by some kind of stomach bug.  So she probably won't be around for a little while.  And she wanted me to let you know so that you wouldn't think she was simply ignoring anyone.  And she wanted me to send you all her love.

Gary

Seems you are the loudspeaker of the girls of this thread, Gary. :laugh: Susie, what you need is a laptop so that you could be with us while lying in bed! ;D Hope you get better soon, my dear!! LOVE!!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on November 11, 2007, 03:11:56 pm
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Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 11, 2007, 03:19:41 pm
Hi everybody,

I just got a PM from our dear Susie.  Seems she's been hit pretty hard by some kind of stomach bug.  So she probably won't be around for a little while.  And she wanted me to let you know so that you wouldn't think she was simply ignoring anyone.  And she wanted me to send you all her love.

Gary

I'm so sorry to hear this!  Get better soon, SusieBaby!  This place just ain't the same without you!
Title: Re: Right (8) by Toycoon and Littlewing
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 11, 2007, 03:21:35 pm
So Alma has been going out with the preacher's son?  Wow!  Back in WV preacher's sons were always wild.  All that repression you know.  So no wonder Alma was so happy when she came in.   :laugh: 

Thanks Toycoon.  Great to see you here.

Gary

Same with preacher's kids everywhere, Gary!  Half of the adults in my family are PKs (Preachers kids) and they are a wild bunch!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on November 11, 2007, 05:12:17 pm
Get well, little Susiebell. We miss your presence, darlin'.
Title: Right (9)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 11, 2007, 08:44:59 pm
Right (9) By Toycoon and Littlewing1957

With Peter and Christine out of ear-shot, Alma motioned for Ennis to have a seat.  She sat right next to him and took his hand in hers.  Ennis held Alma’s hand tight, as he noticed she was trembling.  “So how you been, Ennis?”  Alma asked.  Ennis didn’t know Alma as well as he should, never made much effort to get to know her, but he recognized fear.  “I’m okay, Alma.” Ennis answered.  “Why are you so nervous?  There something you need to tell me?”

Alma pulled her hand away and moved over to the window.  She stood by the brocade drapes and peeked out.  “Ennis, why are you here?  What happened with your job?”  Ennis told her all about the row with Aguirre and how he quit and came home early.  He left out the part about Jack Twist, though.  “This is no way to start a marriage, Ennis.”   Alma stated rather nervously.  “I think you should have stuck it out!”  Ennis fought hard to contain the rage that threatened to bubble forth from his chest.  “I’m not gonna work for no man who abuses me!”  Was Ennis’ retort.  Alma nodded as though she understood.

“Well, I wanted to wait until the job was done before I told you this.”  Alma whispered.  “Told me what?”  Ennis asked, his eyes narrowing to slits.  “Peter and me!” Alma began.  “Go on..”  Ennis stammered.  “Well, I think Peter and me are gonna git married!”  Ennis was silent.  Alma interpreted his silence for anger, and she was afraid to continue.  “You’re promised to me?”  Ennis ventured.  Alma wiped the tiny beads of sweat that dotted her delicate forehead.  “Ennis, I don’t know how you're going to react to this, but I’m pregnant!”
Title: Right (10)
Post by: Toycoon on November 11, 2007, 09:58:10 pm
Right (10) by Toycoon and Littlewing1957

"Yer what?" Ennis' mind spun in a million different directions finally landing on anger. He grabbed Alma by her tiny shoulders and got right in her face, pleading, "How could do this ta me? We was gonna be married in November! Now I come ta find out you was foolin' round with another fella!"

Startled at first by Ennis' fury, Alma was emboldened by the fact that her lover was nearby in the other room and she challenged Ennis' accusations. "We only talked about gettin' married, Ennis and I was doin' most a the talkin'. We been goin' together for a whole year and I still don't know nothin' about you. You don't know nothin' about me!"

Peter walked out of the kitchen at that moment to see Alma in Ennis' grip. He ran over to them, pulled Ennis by the arm and swung him around. Alma bumped into the end table, knocking over the vase with the carnations and the flowers spilled onto the floor. Christine screamed and Peter took a swing at Ennis, hitting him square in the eye. Ennis sucker punched Peter in the stomach and the boy went down.

Alma shrieked, "Get out, get outta here, Ennis! Leave us alone! " Ennis grabbed his cowboy hat and flew out of the Beer's home, slamming the door behind him.
Title: Re: Right (10)
Post by: cwby30 on November 11, 2007, 11:42:25 pm
Evenin'.

Well, caught up with the action just now, and it's just that... moving apace! Interesting that Alma broke up with Ennis, maybe this time around she realized she needed more in her life, or maybe she wanted the preacher's son all the time and used Ennis to get Peter sympathetic and then...

Anyway, Ennis you're free of Alma.  Now, if Jack is still free... and you can get up to LF quickly or call right away... right!  Get things right this time!

Great story, youse twose. 

Thanks again.
Title: Re: Right (10)
Post by: Toycoon on November 12, 2007, 12:10:30 am
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Great story, youse twose.

Hey there, Cowboy30. I'm delighted that you're enjoying this new series that Littlewing and I are spinning!
I'm having a ball collaborating with Littlewing and I've got all kinds of ideas brewing upstairs. Stay tuned to the second half.
Title: Right (11)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 12, 2007, 01:18:40 am
Right (11) By Toycoon and Littlewing1957

Ennis walked out into the cold.  He wasn’t exactly smarting over the pain in his eye, but over the fact that he was punched by two men in less than a weeks time!  And now, Alma!  Ennis’ pride was hurting more than anything else.  He felt pity for poor Alma, as well as concern.   He hoped for her sake that Peter agreed to marry her before she started showing!

Ennis couldn’t blame Alma for her affair with Peter – no, not really.  He would be a total hypocrite if he did blame her.  How could he fault Alma when he had a physical relationship with Jack Twist?  Ennis liked to think that he was a fair man, and in this case, there was more than enough blame to go around.  Ennis decided right then and there to release Alma and go on with his life.

He never really had to see Alma again, but what to do?  He had nowhere to go.  His folks were dead; his siblings were raising their own families.  For the first time in his life, Ennis felt real fear.  He headed down Alma’s street and considered hitching a ride to the bus station.  Perhaps he could find some kind of inspiration from reading the bus schedules and watching travelers come and go.  Ennis wondered what Jack Twist would do in this situation.  He pulled his jacket closer against the cold and decided to walk to the bus station.
Title: Re: Right (10)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 12, 2007, 02:11:07 am
Evenin'.

Well, caught up with the action just now, and it's just that... moving apace! Interesting that Alma broke up with Ennis, maybe this time around she realized she needed more in her life, or maybe she wanted the preacher's son all the time and used Ennis to get Peter sympathetic and then...

Anyway, Ennis you're free of Alma.  Now, if Jack is still free... and you can get up to LF quickly or call right away... right!  Get things right this time!

Great story, youse twose. 

Thanks again.

Thanks!  Stay tuned!  We've only just begun!
Title: Right (12) by Toycoon and Littlewing1957
Post by: Toycoon on November 12, 2007, 02:40:06 am
Right (12) by Toycoon and Littlewing1957

Eleanor Twist's buttermilk pancakes filled the old farm house with the aroma of a mother's devotion to her family; John Twist's cigarette smoke provided sharp contrast to the appetizing breakfast set before them and lingered in the air.

"It's nearly half past six an' that boy still ain't up," grumbled John, blowing out a mouthful of smoke. "When's he gonna start doin' a man's share of work 'round here? Didn't hardly make no money on that damn Brokeback Mountain. Hell, didn't even work through the summer."

"John, please don't swear in our house," she said setting the syrup pitcher on the table and glancing up at the crucifix on the wall . "Jack is a good boy and he's gonna be a bronc rider some day. Give 'em a chance." Just then, Jack appeared in the doorway of the kitchen.

Title: Right (13)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 12, 2007, 01:54:49 pm
Right (13) By Toycoon and Littlewing1957

“I smell pancakes!”  Jack muttered groggily.  Mrs. Twist smiled at her son.  She knew the smell of her good cooking would wake her son and coax him downstairs, all ready to eat and start the day.  “Just you sit yourself down, Jack.”  Mrs. Twist said warmly.  “I got a stack here all ready for you.  You want bacon with your pancakes?”  Jack nodded in the affirmative and took a seat beside his pa.

Jack’s pa didn’t even look at him, just poured syrup on his own stack.  Jack decided to play along.  If Old Man twist wanted to ignore him, Jack didn’t have a problem with that.  “Jack, darling, drive me to the store later?”  Mrs. Twist asked as she sat down to eat her breakfast.  “Sure mom,” Jack began.  “What time do you want to go?”  Mrs. Twist smiled at her son and ate a slice of bacon.  “Oh along, 10:00 will be good.”  She answered.  “Okay, I’ll be ready.”  Jack finished his breakfast without a word to his pa.  Mr. Twist ate in silence and was the last to finish his meal.  He watched his son climb the stairs to his room and shook his bald head.  “That boy is headed for a fall!”  Mr. Twist muttered under his breath.

Once in his room, Jack rummaged in his bureau for a warm sweatshirt.  His thoughts were with Ennis Del Mar.  Jack couldn't stop thinking about his friend, and he often dreamed about the idyllic days and nights they spent together up on Brokeback Mountian.  Jack hated that their time together was cut short, and he wondered what happened to his friend.  Actually, he was going crazy with worry!  But he was also reassured!  Jack knew he would see Ennis again; he would make it happen!  It was just a matter of time.
Title: Re: Right
Post by: cwby30 on November 12, 2007, 03:07:02 pm
Mornin'.

Well, Ennis has dodged the Alma bullet, and now is 'free' to do what he wants with whom he wants.  But, can he bring himself to act on that, with whom he wants? Hope he finds the bus to Lightning Flats is the first one leaving Riverton. 

Nice to read about Jack's POV.  And, his Dad grousing because Jack doesn't do a full day's work, and then his Mom asks Jack to drive her into town.  LOL, family dynamics.  But, Jack has Ennis on his mind, only a matter of time!

Noticed that you have combined efforts these past few installments, not letting us know which one authored which one.  A new pattern? Doesn't matter, it all flows together so well regardless. 

Thanks again. 
Title: Re: Right (13)
Post by: Dagi on November 12, 2007, 04:11:22 pm
Right (13) By Toycoon and Littlewing1957

“I smell pancakes!”  Jack muttered groggily.  Mrs. Twist smiled at her son.  She knew the smell of her good cooking would wake her son and coax him downstairs, all ready to eat and start the day.  “Just you sit yourself down, Jack.”  Mrs. Twist said warmly.  “I got a stack here all ready for you.  You want bacon with your pancakes?”  Jack nodded in the affirmative and took a seat beside his pa.

Jack’s pa didn’t even look at him, just poured syrup on his own stack.  Jack decided to play along.  If Old Man twist wanted to ignore him, Jack didn’t have a problem with that.  “Jack, darling, drive me to the store later?”  Mrs. Twist asked as she sat down to eat her breakfast.  “Sure mom,” Jack began.  “What time do you want to go?”  Mrs. Twist smiled at her son and ate a slice of bacon.  “Oh along, 10:00 will be good.”  She answered.  “Okay, I’ll be ready.”  Jack finished his breakfast without a word to his pa.  Mr. Twist ate in silence and was the last to finish his meal.  He watched his son climb the stairs to his room and shook his bald head.  “That boy is headed for a fall!”  Mr. Twist muttered under his breath.

Once in his room, Jack rummaged in his bureau for a warm sweatshirt.  His thoughts were with Ennis Del Mar.  Jack couldn't stop thinking about his friend, and he often dreamed about the idyllic days and nights they spent together up on Brokeback Mountian.  Jack hated that their time together was cut short, and he wondered what happened to his friend.  Actually, he was going crazy with worry!  But he was also reassured!  Jack knew he would see Ennis again; he would make it happen!  It was just a matter of time.


Wow, I can hardly catch up with you two! What a gripping story! And I want to sit there at the table, despite OMT, just for the joy to have breakfast and be with Jack and his lovely mother! Thanks so much for this series!

Dagi
Title: Re: Right
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 12, 2007, 05:55:00 pm
Mornin'.

Well, Ennis has dodged the Alma bullet, and now is 'free' to do what he wants with whom he wants.  But, can he bring himself to act on that, with whom he wants? Hope he finds the bus to Lightning Flats is the first one leaving Riverton. 

Nice to read about Jack's POV.  And, his Dad grousing because Jack doesn't do a full day's work, and then his Mom asks Jack to drive her into town.  LOL, family dynamics.  But, Jack has Ennis on his mind, only a matter of time!

Noticed that you have combined efforts these past few installments, not letting us know which one authored which one.  A new pattern? Doesn't matter, it all flows together so well regardless. 

Thanks again. 

Thanks, for your kind words.  You can't tell which of us authored the story?  We are posting our own individual stories.  When you see an installment posted by me, I am the author.  Same applies to Toycoon.  Hope this makes sense.  :)
Title: Re: Right (13)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 12, 2007, 05:56:16 pm
Hi Littlewing and Toycoon,

You two make a great team.  You seem to really get one another going.  Every time I turn around there's new installments, which is great.  I'm really enjoying your series.  It was a bit of a sting to watch Ennis get rejected by Alma, but of course it was the best thing for both of them.  And when you switched over to Jack I was pleased when you brought in Mrs. Twist.  I love her.

Gary

Thanks so much, Gary.  I, too, am pleased to write about Mrs. Twist, and am happy that Toycoon switched over to Lightning Flat.   
Title: Re: Right (13)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 12, 2007, 05:57:04 pm
Wow, I can hardly catch up with you two! What a gripping story! And I want to sit there at the table, despite OMT, just for the joy to have breakfast and be with Jack and his lovely mother! Thanks so much for this series!

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi.  You can't image how much I'm enjoying this!
Title: Re: Right
Post by: Toycoon on November 12, 2007, 06:09:31 pm
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Thanks, for your kind words.  You can't tell which of us authored the story?  We are posting our own individual stories.  When you see an installment posted by me, I am the author.  Same applies to Toycoon.  Hope this makes sense.

Thanks for the sweet words everybody! I'm having so much fun collaborating with Littlewing. I just signed both of our names to each chapter, either way. Littlewing inspired a whole new take on one of my earlier stories so she is my muse and co-conspirator.

I'm glad we are focusing on Jack in Lightning Flat for a few installments, too. There's a whole mess o' surprises coming up, just you wait!
Title: Re: Right
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 12, 2007, 08:00:25 pm
Thanks for the sweet words everybody! I'm having so much fun collaborating with Littlewing. I just signed both of our names to each chapter, either way. Littlewing inspired a whole new take on one of my earlier stories so she is my muse and co-conspirator.

I'm glad we are focusing on Jack in Lightning Flat for a few installments, too. There's a whole mess o' surprises coming up, just you wait!

Your turn, Toycoon!   ;)
Title: Right (14) by Toycoon and Littlewing1957
Post by: Toycoon on November 13, 2007, 02:28:25 am
Right (14) by Toycoon and Littlewing1957

Beads of sweat on Ennis' square shoulders glistened like quartz in the hazy autumn sun as he drew back the heavy ax then took another swing. Jack dug the shovel in the ground, mopped his brow with the back of his hand, flicked off the sweat from the ends of his fingers and squinted to take in the silhouette of his friend.

There was noble satisfaction in the toil of maintaining the run down farm that somehow, Jack found gratifying; Ennis, working alongside him, sharing in Jack's tedious chores made all the difference. Jack closed his eyes and smiled to himself.

Strong arms wrapped around his shoulders from behind and rough fingers rubbed the hair on his chest. A warm, bristly cheek pressed against his face and the words, "Jack ... Jack," echoed softly in his ear.

"Jack!", hollered Old Man Twist from the back porch, "Yer ma's ready to go to the market now, and hurry up getting back. Ya gotta lot more work ta do!"
Title: Re: Right (14) by Toycoon and Littlewing1957
Post by: Dagi on November 13, 2007, 05:36:35 am
Right (14) by Toycoon and Littlewing1957

Beads of sweat on Ennis' square shoulders glistened like quartz in the hazy autumn sun as he drew back the heavy ax then took another swing. Jack dug the shovel in the ground, mopped his brow with the back of his hand, flicked off the sweat from the ends of his fingers and squinted to take in the silhouette of his friend.

There was noble satisfaction in the toil of maintaining the run down farm that somehow, Jack found gratifying; Ennis, working alongside him, sharing in Jack's tedious chores made all the difference. Jack closed his eyes and smiled to himself.

Strong arms wrapped around his shoulders from behind and rough fingers rubbed the hair on his chest. A warm, bristly cheek pressed against his face and the words, "Jack ... Jack," echoed softly in his ear.

"Jack!", hollered Old Man Twist from the back porch, "Yer ma's ready to go to the market now, and hurry up getting back. Ya gotta lot more work ta do!"

Aaahh, Jack daydreaming again....never lose your hope, Jack! Never, ya hear me?
Title: Right (15)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 13, 2007, 12:53:37 pm
Jack opened the door of the truck for his mom and helped her in.  He climbed into the driver's seat and headed out for town.  Mrs. Twist fiddled with the handles of her pocketbook as she observed her son.  Jack was the same easygoing, respectful boy that she raised, but something was different.  Mrs. Twist knew her son, and noticed that the light that always shown so brightly behind those blue eyes had dimmed.  Jack wasn't the same since he came down from that mountain.

Mr. Twist made mention of Jack's melancholy, as well.  Mrs. Twist was quite surprised when her husband asked her what could be the matter with their son.  She never considered that her man would notice something was out of place with Jack.  Neither one asked Jack why he was home so early; they decided to let him tell them in his own time.

Jack drove to town in silence, which worried Mrs. Twist no end.  He was usually very upbeat and talkative.  Not this time!  "Stop the truck, Jack."  Mrs. Twist ordered.  "What is it, ma?"  Jack answered, concerned.  "Just pull over there for a minute!"  Jack did as he was told.  He pulled over to the curb and parked; looked at his mom expectantly.  Mrs. Twist looked her son straight in his blue eyes.  "Now what happened on that mountain?"

Title: Re: Right 15
Post by: cwby30 on November 13, 2007, 01:04:19 pm
Mornin'.

Well, leave it to the parents to notice the difference, especially Mom.  Interesting that OMT would notice it too; almost like he is concerned about Jack.  Different view of him, which I kinda like in a way. Hard to tell from OS whether he beat Jack physically as a child, or just mentally. Maybe a combination.  Anyway, just interesting. Will you be fleshing out his relationship with Mom and Jack?

Now, is the bus station close to the grocery store? In smaller towns it used to be that there was no dedicated bus station, the bus just stopped at the gas station or post office or somewhere like that.  Maybe in Lightning Flat it stops at the combined grocery store/dry goods store, where the clerk also sells bus tickets.  Maybe.

And, "duh" to me about your posting!!

Thanks again. 
Title: Re: Right 15
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 13, 2007, 09:18:03 pm
Mornin'.

Well, leave it to the parents to notice the difference, especially Mom.  Interesting that OMT would notice it too; almost like he is concerned about Jack.  Different view of him, which I kinda like in a way. Hard to tell from OS whether he beat Jack physically as a child, or just mentally. Maybe a combination.  Anyway, just interesting. Will you be fleshing out his relationship with Mom and Jack?

Now, is the bus station close to the grocery store? In smaller towns it used to be that there was no dedicated bus station, the bus just stopped at the gas station or post office or somewhere like that.  Maybe in Lightning Flat it stops at the combined grocery store/dry goods store, where the clerk also sells bus tickets.  Maybe.

And, "duh" to me about your posting!!

Thanks again. 

Cwby30, thanks so much for your input/comments.  I enjoy reading what you have to say, I really do.  And I'm glad you're staying with us.  It means an awful lot to me.  you wrote,

Now, is the bus station close to the grocery store? In smaller towns it used to be that there was no dedicated bus station, the bus just stopped at the gas station or post office or somewhere like that.  Maybe in Lightning Flat it stops at the combined grocery store/dry goods store, where the clerk also sells bus tickets.  Maybe.

I'll consider this and keep it in mind!  :)  I would love to flesh out the relationship between Jack and his parents.  cwby30, thanks again for your comments.  You're very kind.  Please stay with us.  I can go on indefinitely!  Ain't no reins on this one!  :laugh:
Title: Right (16) by Toycoon
Post by: Toycoon on November 13, 2007, 11:46:13 pm
"Nothin' happened on Brokeback Mountain, momma," Jack sighed. He looked directly at her then glanced out to the road, "Nothin." He rapped his fingers on the steering wheel.

Mrs. Twist knew her son better than he could have imagined. She reached out and caressed Jack's face with the palm of her hand. "Jack, your face is swollen. Does that have anything to do with your coming home early? Are you alright, honey?" she said with concern.

"A big storm was comin' in from the north.  Aguirre told us to bring the sheep down." Jack hated to lie to his mother but he really couldn't tell her what had actually happened when Aguirre caught Ennis and him making love.

"Us? You didn't tell us you had a companion up there."
Title: Right (17)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 14, 2007, 12:06:26 am
Right (17) by Littlewing1957

Jack could have kicked himself!  Why did he have to go and say “us?”  Jack lowered his head a bit, trying to think of a clever way to tell his ma about Ennis.  “Jack, honey, what is it?”  Mrs. Twist asked with such tenderness that Jack was tempted to tell all.  But he didn’t think the time was right.  Hell, there may never be a right time!

“Aguirre hired an extra hand this time around to tend camp.”  Jack began.  “His name is Ennis and he’s from Riverton.”  Mrs. Twist listened with interest.  “Go on,” she encouraged.  “Well, not much else to tell, ma.”  Jack stated evenly.  “Like I said, Aguirre told us to bring the sheep in because he didn’t want us to get caught in the storm.  That’s all there is to it.”  Mrs. Twist instinctively knew that her son was hiding something from her.  She had a feeling that the Ennis fella he mentioned was somehow special to him.  Mrs. Twist noticed the light burned a bit brighter in his eyes when he mentioned Ennis’ name.  But she didn’t want to press him.  All in good time!

“Is that all, ma?”  Jack asked rather sheepishly.  “If you don’t mind, I would like to get to the store and get back as soon as possible.”  “Oh?”  It was Mrs. Twist.  “You have something to do later on this afternoon?" Jack turned the key in the ignition. “Yeah ma,” Jack answered as he drove off from the curb.  “There is somethin’ I just gotta do.”

Title: Re: Right 17
Post by: cwby30 on November 14, 2007, 12:56:05 am
Evenin'.

Well, I hope that "something" he has to do, is to find Ennis.  But how?  And, if he does, he's admitting in a way to things that he doesn't want to admit to...to his parents...yet...if ever...

Now, where in h*** is Ennis?!

Thanks again.
Title: Re: Right 17
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 14, 2007, 01:57:42 am


Thanks again.

Thank you, cwby30!
Title: Right (18) by Toycoon
Post by: Toycoon on November 14, 2007, 02:00:12 am
Jack and his mother pulled up in front of the 'Sav-Rite' Grocers. Jack said he wasn't feeling well and that he'd rather wait in the car for his mother. She patted his leg and told him she'd be back in a few minutes then climbed out of the truck. He watched her disappear into the market and his mind began to wander as he read the specials posted on the window.

"Frozen Peas, fifty-nine cents; Donuts, ninety-seven cents a dozen; BetterMost beans, three cans for ninety nine cents..." he whispered. Before last summer, BetterMost beans wouldn't have had the least bit of significance to Jack. Now, they brought back so many memories, he began to weep at the thought of it.

"I gotta find Ennis. I gotta know what happened to him." Jack quickly wiped his face with his sleeve and decided to run across the street to the post office before his mother came back. He could buy a postcard there then send it to Riverton, general delivery. He was determined to reach Ennis Del Mar or he would know the reason why.
Title: Re: Right
Post by: Dagi on November 14, 2007, 04:43:44 am
Toycoon and Littlewing, I can´t beginn to tell you how much fun it is reading this!

I just love Ma Twist. I so love her. And I always knew OMT is a good soul inside (although I´d prefer to have breakfast with only Jack and Roberta  ;)).

And please, Jack, do it. Go and find Ennis.

Thanks, you two!

Dagi
Title: Re: Right
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 14, 2007, 12:37:21 pm
Toycoon and Littlewing, I can´t beginn to tell you how much fun it is reading this!

I just love Ma Twist. I so love her. And I always knew OMT is a good soul inside (although I´d prefer to have breakfast with only Jack and Roberta  ;)).

And please, Jack, do it. Go and find Ennis.

Thanks, you two!

Dagi

I'm glad you're enjoying this as much as I am, Dagi.  Thanks for your kind words!
Title: Right (19)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 14, 2007, 12:58:16 pm
Right (19) By Littlewing1957

The post office was all but deserted when Jack entered.  He didn't know how long his ma would be in the store, but he knew he had to act fast.  Jack walked over to a display of Postcards.  He saw a card that featured a mountain that reminded him a lot of Brokeback.  "This can't be more perfect!" Jack spoke aloud as he snatched up the card and paid for it.  But just as he was about to print an address on the back, Jack noticed his mother exiting the store, overstuffed bags of groceries in both arms.  Jack cursed silently and placed the card in his sweatshirt pocket.

Mrs. Twist smiled as Jack moved toward her, arms outstretched to receive the grocery bags.  "Ma, I wish you had come to get me before carrying these bags out!" Jack complained as he took the bags from his ma.  "These are too heavy for you to carry!"  Mrs. Twist grinned at her son.  He was always so protective of her.  She patted his forearm and fell in step beside him.  "I didn't think, honey."  Mrs. Twist answered.  "Besides, I looked out and I didn't see you in the truck."  Jack stiffened a bit.  "Yeah..I had to go over to the post office for a minute."  Jack stated.  "Does this have something to do with the business you have to take care of when we get back home?"  Jack was silent for a moment.  "Yeah ma, going to the post office was just part of it".  Jack loaded the bags of groceries into the back of the truck, strapped his mother in, and headed for the house.

Mrs. Twist and Jack entered the house just as Mr. Twist was heading out.  He nodded to them both, but didn't say a word.  "Where is he off to?" Jack asked his ma.  "Oh, I don't know."  She answered flatly.  "Probably out to check on the barn."  Jack nodded and considered giving his pa a hand.  But first he helped his mother put away the groceries.  After that chore was completed, Jack climbed the steps to his room.  he removed his sweatshirt and slid the postcard out of the pocket.  Jack sat down on his twin-sized bed and stared at the card. 

Title: Re: Right (19)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 15, 2007, 01:21:43 am
Hi Littlewing and Toycoon,

You know what this is starting to remind me of?  Old-fashioned serials.  I'm not old enough to remember when they were shown in movie houses before the main feature, but I've seen a few on TV over the years.  They're short features that always end in a cliffhangers so that the viewer would come back next week to find out what happened.  As I understand it, many people did come back, even if they weren't interested in the main feature that week.  They just couldn't miss an episode of the favorite serial.

Thanks for creating this serial for us, and for keeping us coming back for more. 

Gary

I'm too young to remember serials, but my parents told me all about them!  I can see what you mean, Gary.  This series is like one of those old-fashioned serials!  Writing this series along with Toycoon is giving me a lot of pleasure.  Stay tuned, my loves!  :)
Title: Right (20) by Toycoon
Post by: Toycoon on November 15, 2007, 03:08:27 am
Jack could hear the creaking of the floor boards outside his bedroom as the footsteps got closer and closer, followed by the rattling of the doorknob turning and the squeak of the door opening. The sounds brought a shiver to Jack's spine and he held his breath to be as quiet as he could.

Pale moonlight streaming through the window barely illuminated the imposing figure crossing the room. The shadows cast by the little toy horse and rider made it appear to be galloping along the wall.

Jack clenched his fists tightly and buried his head in the pillow, screaming silently.

When Jack awoke before sunrise, he was still dressed in his old sweatshirt, blue jeans and cowboy boots from earlier in the day. He noticed the postcard addressed to Ennis laying on the desk, picked it up and read it. Jack knew he had to get out to mail the card before his folks got up.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on November 15, 2007, 09:05:39 am
Awwww thanks for being my messenger boy!  :-*  And thanks Dagi, Shasta (cute doggy!), littlewing and toycoon for your good wishes and positive vibes... I'm all better now thank goodness, and so happy to be back here where I belong!  :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-*

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Hi Susie,

it´s good to have you back here!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on November 15, 2007, 10:11:07 am
Awwww thanks for being my messenger boy!  :-*  And thanks Dagi, Shasta (cute doggy!), littlewing and toycoon for your good wishes and positive vibes... I'm all better now thank goodness, and so happy to be back here where I belong! 
Love Susie

Awww, Miss Susie, you're back! Littlewing, Shasta, Gary, Dagi and I, we missed you and your sparklin' wit.
Did you have exciting fever dreams? Boy, me an' Littlewing sure did! Now, there's only twenty chapters to catch up to (and tag on to, if you dare!) to our newest saga, 'Right'.
Title: Re: Right (8) by Toycoon and Littlewing
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 15, 2007, 12:32:17 pm
Sounds like a fun family!  Can I come over the next time you're throwing a party??  ;D ;D ;D

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



You bet!
Title: Right (21)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 15, 2007, 12:51:36 pm
Right (21) By Littlewing1957

Ennis made it to the bus station before twilight.  He wanted nothing more than to sit down on one of the benches and rub his throbbing feet.  The station was not very busy, never really was, as far as Ennis knew.  He ambled into the station and sat down on the bench near the service window.  Ennis lowered his head as he tried to make a mental effort to sort out his life.  He allowed his mind to drift back to Alma and Peter.  Ennis was almost proud that he couldn't muster enough jealousy to blow both Alma and Peter's brains out! 

But what to do?  Ennis didn't want to admit it, but at the present time he was homeless.  He was also jobless and felt utterly alone.  He reached into his pockets and counted out his cash.  Only $50.00.  Down to his last $50.00!  Ennis wanted to cry, but he was far too strong a man for that.  Ennis resolved right then and there to not only survive, but thrive.  He knew he had a long road ahead of him, and didn't quite know where to start.  But Ennis was diligent and resourceful.  He would figure something out!

After a few minutes of sitting and catching his breath, Ennis walked over to the service window and picked up a bunch of brochures and bus schedules.  He looked at the bulletin board in hopes that job announcements would be posted.  Ennis would take anything, even menial work.  He saw listings for janitors, ranch hands, even a librarian.  Ennis jotted down the number of the establishment that needed a ranch hand.  He then read the bus schedules in hopes that a bus stopped somewhere, anywhere near Lightning Flat.
Title: Re: Right (21)
Post by: Dagi on November 15, 2007, 05:52:47 pm
Right (21) By Littlewing1957

Ennis made it to the bus station before twilight.  He wanted nothing more than to sit down at one of the benches and rub his throbbing feet.  The station was not very busy, never really was, as far as Ennis knew.  He ambled into the station and sat down on the bench near the service window.  Ennis lowered his head as he tried to make a mental effort to sort out his life.  He allowed his mind to drift back to Alma and Peter.  Ennis was almost proud that he couldn't muster enough jealousy to blow both Alma and Peter's brains out! 

But what to do?  Ennis didn't want to admit it, but at the present time he was homeless.  He was also jobless and felt utterly alone.  He reached into his pockets and counted out his cash.  Only $50.00.  Down to his last $50.00!  Ennis wanted to cry, but he was far too strong a man for that.  Ennis resolved right then and there to not only survive, but thrive.  He knew he had a long road ahead of him, and didn't quite know where to start.  But Ennis was diligent and resourceful.  He would figure something out!

After a few minutes of sitting and catching his breath, Ennis walked over to the service window and picked up a bunch of brochures and bus schedules.  He looked at the bulletin board in hopes that job announcements would be posted.  Ennis would take anything, even menial work.  He saw listings for janitors, ranch hands, even a librarian.  Ennis jotted down the number of the establishment that needed a ranch hand.  He then read the bus schedules in hopes that a bus stopped somewhere, anywhere near Lightning Flat.

It feels good to come here and read the newest story after all that nasty trouble. Jack with Ennis is my home. Thank you, Littlewing and Toycoon for keeping the campfire burning. I love this story. And I have the feeling you all head in the right direction. :)

Dagi
Title: Re: Right (21)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 15, 2007, 10:12:43 pm
It feels good to come here and read the newest story after all that nasty trouble. Jack with Ennis is my home. Thank you, Littlewing and Toycoon for keeping the campfire burning. I love this story. And I have the feeling you all head in the right direction. :)

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi!  This is my home and my refuge!  I'm glad you find it comfortable around the campfire.  I know I do!  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 15, 2007, 10:14:44 pm
(http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/18/18_1_103v.gif)  1,000 POSTS!! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/18/18_1_103v.gif)

 (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/18/18_1_107v.gif) Congratulations Gary Baby!! (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/18/18_1_107v.gif)  


Love Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif) 

No kiddin?  How did I miss that?  Happy 1000 posts, Gary Sweetheart! Where is Gary, anyway?  I haven't seen him around in about a day or so!  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: TOoP/Bruce on November 15, 2007, 10:29:10 pm
No kiddin?  How did I miss that?  Happy 1000 posts, Gary Sweetheart! Where is Gary, anyway?  I haven't seen him around in about a day or so!  :)

Who knew when it all started on TOB a little over a year ago that it would still be rolling strong?
Congratulations everybody!

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 15, 2007, 10:34:33 pm
Who knew when it all started on TOB a little over a year ago that it would still be rolling strong?
Congratulations everybody!



Bruce, Bruce, you're so sweet!  It is so very nice of you to post this here for us!  I can't believe we've been at this for a year!  I can't believe it!  Well, I'm not tired yet, not by a long shot.  Thanks again for posting.  You're the best!  :-*
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on November 16, 2007, 12:27:45 am
Who knew when it all started on TOB a little over a year ago that it would still be rolling strong?
Congratulations everybody!

True Oracle,
You remembered our anniversary! I still remember when you graced our humble thread with a little something-something about facial hair. Care to run that one again for us? We sure would be obliged. You super stud, you!
Title: Re: Right 21
Post by: cwby30 on November 16, 2007, 12:29:01 am
Evenin'.

Well, little bit of OS there, with Jack sending a card to General Delivery in Riverton.  And, glad to read that Ennis made himself a promise, to not only survive but to thrive.  OS Ennis should have done that, too.  Not just take it for granted that "if you don't have nothin' ya don't need nothin'."  He has set a goal, and now has something to work for.  And yet, down to his last $50.00, he's still looking for a bus ticket to find Jack. 

And, once again I missed "all that nasty trouble" you're talking about.  Should I be looking somewhere? Or just stay here, sitting down near the campfire in my Cathartt jacket, hat pushed back a bit, leaning against the old tree log, legs stretched out, bottle of Old Grandad in hand, enjoying the evening chill, the firelight, good friends, and the stories told round the campfire?

Thanks again.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: TOoP/Bruce on November 16, 2007, 12:38:22 am
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Re: The Tree   
  by True_Oracle_of_Phoenix      (Mon Dec 11 2006 13:42:23 )   
      
UPDATED Mon Dec 11 2006 13:43:11
Jack stayed in the bedroll for a while after Ennis left, dozing and dreaming, but also half-awake.

The morning sunlight filtered through the trees and shadows of leaves danced on the canvas above him.

Jack pushed the bedding aside, thrust his legs into his jeans, and stepped out from the tent into the morning bright, face still stinging, chafed sore on Ennis's night stubble - Jack chuckled to himself - no doubt about it, Ennis's face had to be smarting too!

This was my sole little contribution to that thread.  After a thousand some posts in this forum alone, I am surprised you remembered it, Toy!   :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on November 16, 2007, 12:54:10 am
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Congrats, Mr. C.!!!!

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Title: Right (22)
Post by: Toycoon on November 16, 2007, 02:13:26 am
Ennis made up his mind; Mount Rushmore, South Dakota. He didn't know a soul there but it sounded as good a place as any. Besides, he'd heard the hunting and the fishing was good there. The travel brochure stated that hunters came from all over the country in search of the ring-necked pheasants. Ennis had never seen a pheasant and he was ready for a new experience.

The Greyhound pulled up at precisely 5:05 and Ennis stepped aboard. He stood in the aisle for a few minutes, then spotted an empty seat next to a window and sat down across from a young woman. The bus driver closed the doors and sped off.

It wasn't more than a few minutes when the woman said, "Hey there, cowboy. You headed to Rushmore, too?" Ennis looked over at her and nodded 'yes'. "I'm Millie, my grandma and grandpa live in Rapid City.' The woman, who appeared to be of American Indian descent, paused, waiting for Ennis to introduce himself and when he didn't, she asked, "What's your name?"


Title: Re: Right 22
Post by: cwby30 on November 16, 2007, 12:43:33 pm
Mornin'.

Well, South Dakota??!! Guess Ennis still doesn't have it in him to go looking for Jack... and the postcard won't be delivered... yet... and Ennis won't be stepping off the bus in Lightning Flat any time soon.  Four years? Hope not. 

Interesting twist. Let's see how they work this out, and get it right for a change.

Thanks again. 
Title: Right (23)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 16, 2007, 01:09:13 pm
Right (23) By Littlewing1957

Ennis didn't answer at first.  He stared straight ahead and was silent.  Millie studied the handsome, fair haired man.  "I'm sorry, mister,"  She offered.  "I didn't mean to intrude.  I'm just trying to be friendly."  Ennis sighed and took another look at the woman.  He pursed his lips self-consciously.  "Forgive me miss,"  Ennis stated sincerely. "But I've got a lot on my mind, and I don't mean to be rude.  My name is Ennis.  Ennis Del Mar."  Millie smiled sweetly.  "It's okay, Ennis," She began.  "Nice to meet you!"  Ennis nodded and was silent again.

The bus ride to South Dakota would prove to be long and tedious.  Ennis looked out the window and wondered what he would do when he arrived in Mount Rushmore.  He couldn't stand the thought of being without food or a place to sleep.  He heard once from a friend that he could bed down at the YMCA for a short time.  Ennis hoped he could at least find a cheap motel to spend the night.  After a good nights sleep he can look for work.

Millie pulled out a bologna sandwich and ate hungrily.  She looked over at Ennis and something about him triggered her maternal instincts.  Perhaps it was his sadness that got to her.  Millie wanted to protect him.  "Would you like a sandwich, Ennis?"  Millie asked as she pulled another sandwich from her bag.  "I got bologna, ham and cheese and good ol peanut butter and jelly.  Take your pick!" she smiled as she held out all 3 wrapped sandwiches in her ample palms.  "No..no.."  Ennis began, but Millie refused to take no for an answer.   "C,mon, Ennis!  You haven't eaten a bite since we left.  I know you must be starved, now what'll it be?  The ham and cheese is really good!  Made it myself!"  Ennis grinned and gave in.  "Thanks, Millie.  I'll take the ham and cheese."  Millie handed over the wrapped sandwich and watched as Ennis devoured it in 3 bites.  "See, you were hungry!" she laughed.  Ennis smiled.  He was warming up to the young woman, and was certainly touched by her kindness.  "Ennis,"  Millie began thoughtfully.  "When we arrive in Mount Rushmore, my grandpa will meet me at the station.  Do you need a ride?  Can we drop you off somewhere?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on November 16, 2007, 01:43:43 pm
Thanks Susie, and everybody.  The 1000 mark sort of crept up on me.  I didn't see it coming.   :D

Sorry that I've not been here on our thread much the last couple of days.  After such a bruising experience in my travels to other threads, I think I'll start sticking closer to home.

Gary

Congratulations, sweetheart. :) Although I guess you would have preferred not to be forced to post so much the last days, I reckon. :-\

I too will stick closer to home again. And I'm thankful I do have a home here.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on November 16, 2007, 03:29:39 pm
Dagi and Gary,
I saw your posts on "Dear BetterMost" and I must say I was saddened to hear about what happened. My thought is as long as the pictures are not pornographic and the people in the photos are over the legal age, I don't see that there should be a problem.

I found the entire issue ironic considering the content of the film that brought us together in the first place. I still know people that will not see that "gay cowboy movie" because they "don't believe in the message" or whatever. My brother is one of those people despite the fact that he has two gay brothers!
Title: Re: Right 23
Post by: cwby30 on November 16, 2007, 04:04:34 pm
Afternoon.

Well, watch out Ennis! Here comes another woman.  Out of the frying pan....

What about Jack? Why aren't you looking for him? Still in denial?

You're killing me here! But, still...

Thanks again. 
Title: Right
Post by: Dagi on November 16, 2007, 06:48:04 pm
Mount Rushmore? Does not really sound like a shortcut on the way to Jack. But that might be because he doesn't know yet that he's on the way to Jack.

I like Millie. And with her caring and food providing nature I guess Littlewing finally managed to smuggle herself into the story! ;D

Thanks, you two, for that series! I love it!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on November 16, 2007, 07:02:27 pm
In my 1,000th post, I congratulated myself on my 1,000th post!  Hmmmmm maybe I'm a little too self absorbed!  :-\ Oh well, if you don't blow your own trumpet, who will?  ;D

Susie  :)

 :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: moremojo on November 16, 2007, 07:21:06 pm
Not only are we here together to celebrate a film that is dismissed by some who have wrong-headed ideas about sex, but Jack and Ennis were only 19 when they first met up on Brokeback.  Now it just so happens that Jack and Ennis were masculine looking guys in the traditional sense of that term -- and of course Jake and Heath weren't really 19, but only playing 19 -- but a huge percentage of 19 year old men are very boyish looking.
Very true. I work as a mail clerk at a major American university, and each year I'm astonished sometimes by the youthful appearances of many of the incoming freshmen (who are normally entering the university at eighteen). When I myself was eighteen, I wasn't struck by the youth of my peers, but as I grow into middle age, that gap is becoming much more visible to me.

Ennis and Jack in the original story are described as being significantly different physically than how Heath and Jake portray them in the film. They are far less glamorous, and I for one do picture them, in the beginning, as being fairly boyish in appearance (especially Jack). One of the filmmakers' challenges was in finding actors who could convincingly portray characters who, at different times in the story, would be both younger and older (by a significant degree) than they themselves were. Actors in their mid-twenties could probably have pulled this off more effectively than actors who were, say, nineteen (it should be noted, however, that in the published screenplay, Ennis is explicitly described, in an authorial aside, as being twenty when we first meet him).
Title: Right (24) by Toycoon
Post by: Toycoon on November 16, 2007, 09:02:12 pm
Ellie was a pleasant distraction from Ennis' immediate concerns of housing and employment. He was grateful to have someone nice to talk to on the long journey but he couldn't really admit to Millie that he actually had no place to go in South Dakota. No prospects or plans in place at all. He started to feel terribly alone, vulnerable and began to worry again about his future. Ellie sensed Ennis' discomfort and pretended to doze off to give him some space."Maybe he'll open up later," she thought.

As the bus finally neared the Wyoming border, Ennis noticed a large road sign that read "Welcome to Crook County, Wyoming- Including the towns of Moorcraft, Sundance, Hulett and Lightning Flat. Ennis' heart leaped in his chest. "Lightning Flat? That's where Jack's folks live,"  he remembered fondly. Moorcraft was the next scheduled rest stop on the trip.

When the Greyhound bus pulled into the Circle K parking lot, several of the passengers got off and went inside to buy food and use the rest room. Millie told Ennis she was going in to use the ladies' room. He smiled and nodded.

Fifteen minutes passed and the passengers began to file into the bus: the elderly couple, the lady and her little boy, the colored man, Millie and finally, the driver. The driver waited a few more minutes then shut the doors and drove away, without Ennis.
Title: Re: Right (22)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 16, 2007, 09:19:36 pm
Susie said that you could have me BBQ OMT again if you'd like.  After reading that story about the dream I was firing up the coals.  

Gary

 :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:

Title: Re: Right 22
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 16, 2007, 09:20:12 pm
Mornin'.

Well, South Dakota??!! Guess Ennis still doesn't have it in him to go looking for Jack... and the postcard won't be delivered... yet... and Ennis won't be stepping off the bus in Lightning Flat any time soon.  Four years? Hope not. 

Interesting twist. Let's see how they work this out, and get it right for a change.

Thanks again. 

Thanks, cwby30!  Stay with us!  :)
Title: Re: Right (23)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 16, 2007, 09:21:31 pm
Hmmm  What to do in Mount Rushmore?  ....oh, I know!  How about...going to see the monument?    Well, that's what I'd do anyway.  :laugh:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mount_Rushmore (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mount_Rushmore)  Just thought I'd add this just in case Susie and Dagi aren't familiar with Mount Rushmore.


Millie sounds like a nice girl, and she seems helpful.  Ennis obviously needs help, and he needs a friend, but I'm hoping he doesn't get involved with Millie.   :(  And how's Jack supposed to find him in Mount Rushmore?

Gary

P.S.  Thank you Littlewing and Toycoon for keeping things going here.  It's aways nice to have a home to come back to.

Ahhh such sweet words of encouragement, Gary.  This is your home and we plan to make it comfortable for you!  :-*
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 16, 2007, 09:22:24 pm


 And I'm thankful I do have a home here.

Dagi

So am I, Dagi.
Title: Re: Right
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 16, 2007, 09:24:12 pm
Mount Rushmore? Does not really sound like a shortcut on the way to Jack. But that might be because he doesn't know yet that he's on the way to Jack.

I like Millie. And with her caring and food providing nature I guess Littlewing finally managed to smuggle herself into the story! ;D

Thanks, you two, for that series! I love it!

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi!  :laugh:
Title: Right (25)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 16, 2007, 10:27:22 pm
Right (25) By Littlewing1957

Jack woke at 5:00a.m. Sunday morning with an almost painful hard-on.  He had been dreaming about Ennis holding him inside the tent up on Brokeback.  Jack grimaced as he replayed the dream.  They were cooing and cuddling after a night of close and steamy sex!  Jack held Ennis tight for a few hours, and after that, Ennis took his turn and cuddled Jack like a babe in arms.  Jack rubbed his swollen penis, slid his fingers up and down the shaft until he released.  He rose immediately after his orgasm and hid his soiled and sticky sheets under his bed.  Jack was sure his mom washed a few of his semen stained sheets when he was a teen, but he was a man now – he should be able to control himself.  He would wash the sheets in secret later.

After he showered and dressed, Jack headed downstairs to an empty kitchen.  His mom was surely up in her room getting ready for church, Jack thought.  His dad was probably walking somewhere on the property, keeping an eye on things.  Mr. Twist never went to church, which saddened his mom, but suited him just fine. Jack walked over to the cupboard and removed a box of corn flakes.  He had to prepare his own breakfast on Sunday morning, as his mom was too busy to cook before service.  After he ate his morning meal, Jack climbed the stairs and knocked on his mom’s bedroom door.  “I’ll be out in a minute, Jack.”  Mrs. Twist yelled.  Jack promised her that he would drive her to the Missionary Pentecostal Church.   She even talked him into staying for service.  Jack couldn’t believe that he agreed to go, but he couldn’t say no to his ma.  Mrs. Twist assured Jack that he didn’t have to dress up, as their congregation believed: “come as you are.”  Jack  thought he looked mighty fine in a starched white shirt, a pair of khaki pants and black shoes.  When his mom exited her room, however, Jack wished he had a suit!  Mrs. Twist looked very pretty in her white Sunday-go-to-meeting hat, a floral shirtwaist dress, white shoes and a gold and white pocketbook.  “You look very nice, ma!”  Jack whispered as he took his mother’s hand.  “I’m ashamed to be seen with you like this,” Jack announced as he swept a hand across his body.  “You look fine, Jack.”  Mrs. Twist countered evenly.  “Now let’s get going or we’ll miss testimony service.”  Jack nodded and escorted his ma to the truck.

Jack drove in silence, as his thoughts were with Ennis.  He mailed the postcard 3 days ago, and even though he didn’t expect a response after only 3 days, he began to wonder if the card would even reach his friend.  Jack remembered Ennis’ remarks about marrying Alma, and he couldn’t help but wonder if the marriage actually took place, and if Ennis and Alma were setting up house.  “Jack, you passed the church!”  Mrs. Twist shouted and snapped Jack out of his thoughts.  “Sorry ma!” Jack mumbled as he turned the truck around and found a spot in the church’s tiny parking lot.

Mrs. Twist led Jack into church where they were greeted with several pews of people waving hands and white handkerchiefs.  Jack was not a frequent visitor to the church, but he never forgot the peculiar manner of worship.  They took a seat near the front, and sat directly behind a lovely young woman with waist length red hair.  She was swaying and chanting - waving her white handkerchief.  And in what seemed like a split second, the young lady rose to her feet and began to tremble and convulse.  Jack didn’t blink an eye, as being touched by the holy spirit was a common occurrence at Missionary Pentecostal church.  The young woman, who Jack knew only as Katie, looked as though she would fall backwards in a swoon.  “You know what to do, Jack!”  Mrs. Twist whispered in Jack’s ear.  Jack knew very well that he was expected to break Katie’s fall.  He rose quickly from his seat as Katie fell backwards in his arms, a look of sweet rapture on her lovely face.  But just as soon as he tried to return Katie to her seat, he noticed that she was staring straight into his eyes.  Jack blinked nervously as a seductive smile spread slowly over Katie's beautiful face.  Jack knew the woman was flirting and he chuckled silently.  Flirting in church when she should be serious about praising the Lord?  Jack couldn't believe it!  He gently lowered her to her seat and sat back down himself.  Mrs. Twist saw the entire exchange and smiled knowingly at Katie. 
Title: Right (26) by Toycoon and Littlewing
Post by: Toycoon on November 17, 2007, 12:31:12 am
" Let us praise the Lord and raise our voices unto Him that He may bring joy to our hearts and our spirits, now and forever, go in peace!"

"Hallelujah! " shouted Jack. Jack was happy the Sunday service was finally over. He'd forgotten just how lengthy the Missionary Pentecostal services tended to be. With what seemed like endless readings, joyful singing and testimonials, sometimes the service could span ninety minutes or more.

After the services, the entire congregation merged to the parish hall to enjoy a Sunday potluck brunch. Mrs. Twist took Jack by the arm, up the steps and into the Word of Jeremiah Parish Hall.

Jack was practically salivating as he perused the lavish spread of home made dishes. He sauntered over to the corner of the table, took a paper plate off the top of the stack and started down the line of tasty goodies. Jack flipped a spoonful of ham hocks with collared greens on his plate, a helping of sweet potatoes, barbecued chicken wings and something that looked like creamy, baked macaroni with black eyed peas.

"You'll like that macaroni and cheese. I made it myself." It was the girl from church, Katie and she was staring straight at him again. This time Jack noticed she had the most striking green eyes, like those of a cat. "You'll like my pie, too."

"Yer what?" asked Jack, not certain he'd heard her properly. "My punkin pie," she said pointing to the desserts at the end of the table. "It's my mamma's recipe" Then, taking Jack by the elbow, she lead him over to the pastry tray.








Title: Re: Right (25)
Post by: Dagi on November 17, 2007, 01:54:15 pm
Right (25) By Littlewing1957

Jack woke at 5:00a.m. Sunday morning with an almost painful hard-on.  He had been dreaming about Ennis holding him inside the tent up on Brokeback.  Jack grimaced as he replayed the dream.  They were cooing and cuddling after a night of close and steamy sex!  Jack held Ennis tight for a few hours, and after that, Ennis took his turn and cuddled Jack like a babe in arms.  Jack rubbed his swollen penis, slid his fingers up and down the shaft until he released.  He rose immediately after his orgasm and hid his soiled and sticky sheets under his bed.  Jack was sure his mom washed a few of his semen stained sheets when he was a teen, but he was a man now – he should be able to control himself.  He would wash the sheets in secret later.

After he showered and dressed, Jack headed downstairs to an empty kitchen.  His mom was surely up in her room getting ready for church, Jack thought.  His dad was probably walking somewhere on the property, keeping an eye on things.  Mr. Twist never went to church, which saddened his mom, but suited him just fine. Jack walked over to the cupboard and removed a box of corn flakes.  He had to prepare his own breakfast on Sunday morning, as his mom was too busy to cook before service.  After he ate his morning meal, Jack climbed the stairs and knocked on his mom’s bedroom door.  “I’ll be out in a minute, Jack.”  Mrs. Twist yelled.  Jack promised her that he would drive her to the Missionary Pentecostal Church.   She even talked him into staying for service.  Jack couldn’t believe that he agreed to go, but he couldn’t say no to his ma.  Mrs. Twist assured Jack that he didn’t have to dress up, as their congregation believed: “come as you are.”  Jack  thought he looked mighty fine in a starched white shirt, a pair of khaki pants and black shoes.  When his mom exited her room, however, Jack wished he had a suit!  Mrs. Twist looked very pretty in her white Sunday-go-to-meeting hat, a floral shirtwaist dress, white shoes and a gold and white pocketbook.  “You look very nice, ma!”  Jack whispered as he took his mother’s hand.  “I’m ashamed to be seen with you like this,” Jack announced as he swept a hand across his body.  “You look fine, Jack.”  Mrs. Twist countered evenly.  “Now let’s get going or we’ll miss testimony service.”  Jack nodded and escorted his ma to the truck.

Jack drove in silence as his thoughts were with Ennis.  He mailed the postcard 3 days ago, and even though he didn’t expect a response after only 3 days, he began to wonder if the card would even reach his friend.  Jack remembered Ennis’ remarks about marrying Alma, and he couldn’t help but wonder if the marriage actually took place, and if Ennis and Alma were setting up house.  “Jack, you passed the church!”  Mrs. Twist shouted and snapped Jack out of his thoughts.  “Sorry ma!” Jack mumbled as he turned the truck around and found a spot in the church’s tiny parking lot.

Mrs. Twist led Jack into church where they were greeted with several pews of people waving hands and white handkerchiefs.  Jack was not a frequent visitor to the church, but he never forgot the peculiar manner of worship.  They took a seat near the front, and sat directly behind a lovely young woman with waist length red hair.  She was swaying and chanting - waving her white handkerchief.  And in a what seemed like a split second, the young lady rose to her feet and began to tremble and convulse.  Jack didn’t blink an eye, as being touched by the holy spirit was a common occurrence at Missionary Pentecostal church.  The young woman, who Jack knew only as Katie, looked as though she would fall backwards in a swoon.  “You know what to do, Jack!”  Mrs. Twist whispered in Jack’s ear.  Jack knew very well that he was expected to break Katie’s fall.  He rose quickly from his seat as Katie fell backwards in his arms, a look of sweet rapture on her lovely face.  But just as soon as he tried to return Katie to her seat, he noticed that she was staring straight into his eyes.  Jack blinked nervously as a seductive smile spread slowly over Katie's beautiful face.  Jack knew the woman was flirting and he chuckled silently.  Flirting in church when she should be serious about praising the Lord?  Jack couldn't believe it!  He gently lowered her to her seat and sat back down himself.  Mrs. Twist saw the entire exchange and smiled knowingly at Katie. 


Wonderfully detailed story, Littlewing! I can see Jack, he sure looks mighty fine, he would even look mighty fine with nothing but a potato sack on! :P And I so understand Katie! One just can´t let slip such an opportunity to fall into the arms of a beautiful man!

Dagi
Title: Right (27)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 17, 2007, 02:19:22 pm
Right (27) By Littlewing1957

Ennis couldn’t believe he was so rash as to get off the bus, park his butt on a bench behind the store and allow the bus to leave without him.  Now what?  He didn’t even know exactly where he was; just knew he was somewhere near the Wyoming border.  Ennis looked around him.  Perhaps he was somewhere near Moorcraft.  He walked into the Circle K in hopes of finding directions to Lightening Flat.  Ennis had $20.00 left after buying the bus ticket.  He was famished and knew he had to get something in him.  He found a cooler filled with pre-made sandwiches and picked up a ham and cheese priced at $1.00 even.  Ennis smiled as he thought about Millie and her generosity.  He wished her well.

“You gonna pay for that, or just look at it?” Ennis swung around and found himself staring at the chest of the tallest man he’d ever encountered.  Ennis looked up and saw the face of the man who spoke to him.  He was middle aged, average looking, with salt-and-pepper hair and brown eyes.  The man wore an apron, and a name tag with Aaron printed on it, was pinned to his massive chest.  “I’m gonna pay for it, mister.”  Ennis stated, grudgingly.  He left the big man where he was and walked briskly to the cashier.  The pretty cashier took Ennis’ sandwich and placed it in a paper bag.  “Where you headed, stranger?”  She asked.  “Well, I’m trying to get to Lightning Flat,” Ennis answered.  “I’m hoping someone can tell me how to get there.”  “Oh, it’s just down the road apiece,” the cashier began.  “Just head north, a straight shot, and you’ll see the signs for Lightning Flat.  You have business in such a sleepy town?”  Ennis smiled at her as he paid for his food.  “Yeah, I plan to look up an old friend.”  “Well, good luck!” The cashier offered as she handed him his purchase.

Ennis walked out of the Circle K and headed for the bench to eat his sandwich.  After he finished his lunch, Ennis hitched a ride from a family of 4 into Lightening Flat.  He never sat foot there before, and judging from what he observed as he walked along a country road, he understood why Jack was so keen to be anywhere else!  Ennis walked along the road for about a mile until he noticed a small church.  He remembered someone telling him that church houses are a sort of refuge for weary travelers, or for anyone who needs protection and shelter.  Ennis read the sign, Missionary Pentecostal Church.  He reasoned that he could go in, take a breather for awhile, and be on his way.  He would not intrude or wear out his welcome.

The inside of Missionary Pentecostal Church was modest and it was empty.  This shocked Ennis a bit, as it was Sunday, and he was sure someone would be around, even if service was over.  He shrugged and took a seat near the back.  Ennis lowered his head and wondered how he would ever find the nerve to confront Jack.  He wasn’t even sure if Jack would want to see him.  But Ennis had to find out.  Besides, what harm is there in looking up an old friend?  Ennis sat for about 10 minutes when he jumped at the sensation of a hand on his shoulder.  He followed the hand up to the face of an elderly gentleman.  “Howdy, young man,” the elderly gentleman began. “Service is over but we’re having a brunch in the hall upstairs.  You’re welcome to join us, if you want.”  Ennis smiled softly at the old man.  He was touched by the offer, but was much too shy to break bread with a bunch of strangers.  Besides, he needed to be on his way.  “No thanks, sir,” Ennis replied politely.  “But I need to get going.  I thank you for your offer..you’re very kind.”  Ennis rose from the pew and the elderly gentleman walked him to the door.  “Well, you remember – you’re welcome here any time.  You come back and see us, okay?”  Ennis waved at the man and walked down the road.
Title: Re: Right (26) by Toycoon and Littlewing
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 17, 2007, 02:29:16 pm
You'll like my pie, too.   :o  I'm hoping you didn't mean that!   :-X  :laugh:

I feel like we're getting to a really dramatic moment.  Ennis get's off the bus, Jack is in town.  Hmmm  Wonder what is going to happen next. 

I especially enjoyed reading about Jack in church.  That was so vivid I felt like I was right there with him.  Maybe because it reminded me of going to church when I was a boy.  We went to a Baptist church, so there was no shaking with any spirits, no matter how holy. But I can relate to most of the rest of it.

When I was a very small boy, five or younger even, I got away from Mother while at church and ran up the aisle.  And I bent down and ran right into one of the pews.  The edge of the pew was fairly sharp, and it cut my forehead open.  I can remember vividly being taken to the vestibule by Mother and several other church ladies where they used paper towels to mop up the blood.  Finally Mother and Dad took me to the ER where I got stiches.  I still have the scar.

Thanks for continuing the story, guys.

Gary

Hey, Gary!  I had to smile when you related your experiences about church.  No, not the part about running into the pew, but the part about no shaking in the spirit.  :laugh:  I'm a Pentecostal, and the things that go on in my church can seem very strange!  People fall out, dance, speak in tongues.  It is very lively, and the music is amazing.  In fact, the church is where most black singers practiced their craft.  I've been dying to write about Jack and the Pentecostal church for some time now.  It is always good to write about what you've experienced!

I'm glad you're enjoying the series.  Stay tuned!
Title: Re: Right (25)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 17, 2007, 02:30:17 pm
Wonderfully detailed story, Littlewing! I can see Jack, he sure looks mighty fine, he would even look mighty fine with nothing but a potato sack on! :P And I so understand Katie! One just can´t let slip such an opportunity to fall into the arms of a beautiful man!

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi.  I tried to keep to the 3 paragraph rule, but I got carried away!  :laugh:  Thanks for your kind words.  I'm glad you're enjoying the series.
Title: Re: Right (26) by Toycoon and Littlewing
Post by: Toycoon on November 17, 2007, 04:30:48 pm
Hey there kids,
I'm glad you are enjoying our saga. I know I am! I had no idea when I reposted "Right" that I would be on my way to my first short story. Littlewing is so imaginative and clever and y'all are such an appreciative audience. I can't wait to find out what happens to Jack and Ennis, I mean, wait 'til ya find out what happens next!
Title: Right (28) by Toycoon and Littlewing
Post by: Toycoon on November 17, 2007, 06:42:51 pm
Mrs. Twist found Jack to inform him that she was going with Katie's mother to the cemetary to pay a visit to Katie's father who had died the year before and would he mind giving Katie a ride home. Jack smelled a set-up but he didn't mind too much. Katie was a spirited girl and she seemed like fun, so he obliged his mother.

They walked out to the truck then Jack held the door open for Katie and helped her up. He hopped into the driver seat, put the truck in gear and off they went. The truck bounced down the road with the wind whipping Katie's auburn hair about the cab. "Aww, I'm sorry. Yer hair's gettin' messed up. Here, lemme close them windows."

"Oh, I don't care. It feels good," Katie shouted."Don't tell nobody but ever since my daddy died," she continued, "I feel free! My daddy didn't let me date. He said it wasn't proper for a good Christian girl to be seen out with different fellas all the time." "So Jack, how come I never seen you out with any of the girls around here? Not good enough for ya, huh?" she teased, winking and twirling a lock of hair between her fingers.

"Naw, it ain't that," Jack stammered," I been busy riding broncs and rodeoing and stuff..." They pulled up to the modest farm house on the edge of town, stopped in front and Jack cut the engine. Dust swirled all around the truck and the sounds of the engine cooling cut the awkward silence. Jack waited a few minutes then said, "Well.. we're here." "Yeah." said Katie looking at Jack then back out at the farm house. She started to fiddle with the door handle as though she was trying to open it then turned and impulsively planted a moist kiss on Jack's lips. Katie hopped out of the truck and slammed the door with both hands. "See ya next Sunday?" she cried out as she dashed up the steps.

"Yeah, maybe..." he mumbled, throwing the truck in gear and turning on the ignition. Jack barreled down the road to his house. When he got to the house, he drove up onto the grass, grabbed his hat and cigarettes then jumped out of the truck.

John Twist was in his usual Sunday afternoon spot: seated in the kitchen with a cigarette burning in the ashtray, a cup of stale coffee at his side and the Sunday paper spread out all over the kitchen table. "Hey, Dad," Jack said, flatly. "Hey boy," the old man said, barely acknowledging him," Yer Ma with you?"

"She's with one of the ladies from church. They went to the cemetary or somethin'." he said exiting the kitchen and starting up the stairs to his bedroom.

"Hey Jack," Mr. Twist called out, "you know someone name'a Ennis Del Mar?"
Title: Re: Right (27) by Toycoon and Littlewing
Post by: Dagi on November 17, 2007, 07:01:25 pm

"Hey Jack," Mr. Twist called out, "you know someone name'a Ennis Del Mar?"

We are getting closer!  :D The tension is building up! And Jack, yeah, you've been busy riding broncs, huh?  ;D

Keep them coming, girls! ;D

Dagi
Title: Right (29)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 17, 2007, 11:04:10 pm
Right (29) By Littlewing1957

“Did you say Ennis Del Mar?”  Jack asked his pa breathlessly.  “Yeah, Ennis Del Mar.” It was Mr. Twist, as impatient and taciturn as ever.  “Yeah I know him.”  Jack answered cautiously.  Jack could feel the fire rising in his loins and tried to control the red hot flush that warmed his cheeks.  Jack was thankful for his dad’s lack of interest.  If the old man actually took the trouble to look at his son while talking to him, he would have noticed the change.  But Jack was grateful what his dad didn’t see how the very mention of Ennis Del Mar’s name almost brought him to his knees.

Jack walked over and sat down opposite his dad.  I gotta play it cool, Jack thought as he stared at his pa.  Mr. Twist, instantly aware that he was being watched, looked up from his paper.  “What is it?”  He asked his son impatiently.  “Why are you looking at me like that?”  Jack studied his father, trying to figure out a way to ask what he needed to ask without sounding too eager or too desperate.

“Uh, Ennis Del Mar, dad?”  Jack began, his hands clasped in front of him on the table.  “Yeah, what about him?  Mr. Twist asked absently as he turned to the sports page.  “Well,” Jack spoke slowly. “Did he come by here while I was out, or something?”  Jack was struggling to keep his cool.  Mr. Twist reached under the Sunday paper and pulled out a postcard, the very same card that Jack "mailed" to Ennis general delivery just 3 days ago. "I should have given this to you yesterday, but it slipped my mind.  I read the back of the card before I noticed you must have sent it,” Mr. Twist spoke as he turned the card forward and backward.  “I thought it was for me or your ma until I noticed the return address, and Ennis Del Mar’s name on it.  Son, I didn’t read your message, just the name of the person you tried to mail it to.”  Jack tried hard to swallow the bile rising in his throat.  Mr. Twist passed him the postcard.  “Seems like you forgot to put postage on it and it was returned.”  Jack took the postcard and stared at it.  His mind was in a fog as he ascended the stairs to his room, clutching the postcard against his chest.
Title: Re: Right (27) by Toycoon and Littlewing
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 17, 2007, 11:05:19 pm
Mrs. Twist found Jack to inform him that she was going with Katie's mother to the cemetary to pay a visit to Katie's father who had died the year before and would he mind giving Katie a ride home. Jack smelled a set-up but he didn't mind too much. Katie was a spirited girl and she seemed like fun, so he obliged his mother.

They walked out to the truck then Jack held the door open for Katie and helped her up. He hopped into the driver seat, put the truck in gear and off they went. The truck bounced down the road with the wind whipping Katie's auburn hair about the cab. "Aww, I'm sorry. Yer hair's gettin' messed up. Here, lemme close them windows."

"Oh, I don't care. It feels good," Katie shouted."Don't tell nobody but ever since my daddy died," she continued, "I feel free! My daddy didn't let me date. He said it wasn't proper for a good Christian girl to be seen out with different fellas all the time." "So Jack, how come I never seen you out with any of the girls around here? Not good enough for ya, huh?" she teased, winking and twirling a lock of hair between her fingers.

"Naw, it ain't that," Jack stammered," I been busy riding broncs and rodeoing and stuff..." They pulled up to the modest farm house on the edge of town, stopped in front and Jack cut the engine. Dust swirled all around the truck and the sounds of the engine cooling cut the awkward silence. Jack waited a few minutes then said, "Well.. we're here." "Yeah." said Katie looking at Jack then back out at the farm house. She started to fiddle with the door handle as though she was trying to open it then turned and impulsively planted a moist kiss on Jack's lips. Katie hopped out of the truck and slammed the door with both hands. "See ya next Sunday?" she cried out as she dashed up the steps.

"Yeah, maybe..." he mumbled, throwing the truck in gear and turning on the ignition. Jack barreled down the road to his house. When he got to the house, he drove up onto the grass, grabbed his hat and cigarettes then jumped out of the truck.

John Twist was in his usual Sunday afternoon spot: seated in the kitchen with a cigarette burning in the ashtray, a cup of stale coffee at his side and the Sunday paper spread out all over the kitchen table. "Hey, Dad," Jack said, flatly. "Hey boy," the old man said, barely acknowledging him," Yer Ma with you?"

"She's with one of the ladies from church. They went to the cemetary or somethin'." he said exiting the kitchen and starting up the stairs to his bedroom.

"Hey Jack," Mr. Twist called out, "you know someone name'a Ennis Del Mar?"

Toycoon, I think this should be Right (28).
Title: Re: Right (29)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 18, 2007, 02:02:33 am
Poor Jack, but little does he know that Ennis wouldn't have been in Riverton to receive his postcard anyway.  And surely Jack didn't write anything telling on a postcard.

So when are Jack and Ennis going to get together?  You know what could really mess things up for them?  Another guy.    ;) 

I'm still with you, Littlewing and Toycoon.  Keep them coming.   :D

Gary

Thanks, Gary.  We'll keep the saga going!
Title: Re: Right 29
Post by: cwby30 on November 18, 2007, 02:28:41 am
Evenin'.

Well, watch out for Katie... she's "free" and that can mean trouble if Ennis sees her trying to be "free" with Jack. Or maybe she takes a shine to walking!Ennis who stops to ask directions, and then who knows.

OMT?  Don't believe for a second that he didn't read the card.  His radar is up, and when Ennis arrives at the Ranch, hmmmm...

Too bad Ennis didn't take up the Reverend and have a bite to eat at the social after the service. Though not sure how Katie would have taken it. 

Keep it coming, I'm hooked as you can tell.

Thanks again. 
Title: Right (30) by Toycoon
Post by: Toycoon on November 18, 2007, 03:51:17 pm
Right (30) by Toycoon

"Dammit!" yelled Jack, slamming the postcard down on the desk. "Of all the stupid things!" He picked up the card again, examined it and sure enough, he'd forgot the postage stamp. Jack took off his Sunday shirt and draped it on the back of the desk chair. He fell back on the bed and started pulling off his boots, struggling with one then the other. "That fuckin' postcard ain't never gonna get to Ennis!" He reclined on the bed and tucking his hands behind his head, gazed up at the pictures nailed to the soffit above his bed. There was a picture of a bay Quarter horse stallion in full gallop, a picture of Tom Mix torn from a movie magazine, an old flyer for last year's rodeo and a picture of a bronc rider wearing several blue ribbons, flanked by two pretty girls. Jack focused on that picture for a moment.

Jack didn't think about God much but he started to wonder why God had made things were the way He did. Why couldn't things go the way Jack wanted? Jack had big plans for his life but they always seem to fall through. His father said it was because Jack thought he was better than his rearing.

Why wasn't he attracted to girls the way other boys were? Jack was no 'queer'. He certainly liked girls, kissed a few, but never felt excited about any girl the way he felt about Ennis. Jack always wanted a friend like Ennis. Ennis was a true cowboy, a skilled outdoor's man, an expert shot. He was ruggedly handsome and resourceful. He made Jack feel like a real man. Complete. When Jack was with Ennis, he felt as though some of his prayers had been answered. Jack slid his hand in the waistband of his khakis to gently rub the growing erection in his pants. He squeezed his furry nipples with his fingers and lingered on the sensation. Funny thing was, Ennis said liked women in that 'way' but he also liked Jack. Why?

Suddenly, Jack started to feel ashamed of his unexplainable longing for the other man. He rolled over and reached under the bed to pull out the half pint of whiskey he'd stashed under there. He unscrewed the cap and took a big shot. Jack slipped off his propped up elbow and the whiskey spilled out of the sides of his mouth and onto the pillow. "Real funny there, God, really funny," he said swallowing.
Title: Re: Right (29)
Post by: Dagi on November 18, 2007, 04:58:36 pm
Right (29) By Littlewing1957

“Did you say Ennis Del Mar?”  Jack asked his pa breathlessly.  “Yeah, Ennis Del Mar.” It was Mr. Twist, as impatient and taciturn as ever.  “Yeah I know him.”  Jack answered cautiously.  Jack could feel the fire rising in his loins and tried to control the red hot flush that warmed his cheeks.  Jack was thankful for his dad’s lack of interest.  If the old man actually took the trouble to look at his son while talking to him, he would have noticed the change.  But Jack was grateful what his dad didn’t see how the very mention of Ennis Del Mar’s name almost brought him to his knees.

Jack walked over and sat down opposite his dad.  I gotta play it cool, Jack thought as he stared at his pa.  Mr. Twist, instantly aware that he was being watched, looked up from his paper.  “What is it?”  He asked his son impatiently.  “Why are you looking at me like that?”  Jack studied his father, trying to figure out a way to ask what he needed to ask without sounding too eager or too desperate.

“Uh, Ennis Del Mar, dad?”  Jack began, his hands clasped in front of him on the table.  “Yeah, what about him?  Mr. Twist asked absently as he turned to the sports page.  “Well,” Jack spoke slowly. “Did he come by here while I was out, or something?”  Jack was struggling to keep his cool.  Mr. Twist reached under the Sunday paper and pulled out a postcard, the very same card that Jack "mailed" to Ennis general delivery just 3 days ago. "I should have given this to you yesterday, but it slipped my mind.  I read the back of the card before I noticed you must have sent it,” Mr. Twist spoke as he turned the card forward and backward.  “I thought it was for me or your ma until I noticed the return address, and Ennis Del Mar’s name on it.  Son, I didn’t read your message, just the name of the person you tried to mail it to.”  Jack tried hard to swallow the bile rising in his throat.  Mr. Twist passed him the postcard.  “Seems like you forgot to put postage on it and it was returned.”  Jack took the postcard and stared at it.  His mind was in a fog as he ascended the stairs to his room, clutching the postcard against his chest.


Oh God I know what you meant there. Littlewing you left me breathless with this chapter. Now if you excuse me, I´m desperate to read on.. :P
Title: Re: Right (30) by Toycoon
Post by: Dagi on November 18, 2007, 05:05:12 pm
Right (30) by Toycoon

 "Real funny there, God, really funny," he said swallowing.

Aaw, poor Jack. Poor confused Jack. Awesome writing, Toycoon dear, I love this story! It´s always good to come here. Thanks so much!

Dagi
Title: Right (31)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 18, 2007, 08:01:37 pm
Right (31) By Littlewing1957

Ennis walked down the road with his head held high.  He was still alone, homeless and jobless, but his quick detour at the church and his pleasant conversation with the elderly man gave him a vestige of hope.  Ennis couldn’t explain it, but he felt that everything would work out in his favor.  He was almost certain that he would find Jack, and that Jack would be delighted to see him.  And after that?  Well, Ennis hadn't thought that far ahead.  The first step would be to find Jack.  Perhaps Jack would have the answer.  After all, he was always so eager with his vast assortment of hopes and dreams.  Yes, Jack would know what to do.

Ennis continued his journey where he passed ranches: some old and neglected, others well kept and sprawling.  Ennis couldn’t help but wonder if one of those places belonged to the Twists.  But some inner voice kept him moving on.  He didn’t feel Jack at any of the ranches he passed.  Ennis couldn’t explain it, but somehow he knew that his instinct, his feelings for his friend would guide him to the right place.  At least he hoped so!

It was funny, but Ennis couldn’t remember seeing a soul along the road he traveled, either on foot or by car.  And just as he started thinking how lonely and deserted that stretch of road was, Ennis spotted a truck in the distance, growing bigger, coming toward him.  He planned to lower his head, avoid eye contact with the driver, and keep on walking.  The truck slowed on the opposite side of the road and stopped abruptly right alongside him.  The driver shut off the engine and got out of the vehicle.  Ennis never stopped walking, and although he considered himself a brave man, Ennis Del Mar thought about breaking into a run when he realized that the driver was following him! 
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on November 18, 2007, 08:04:41 pm
You are not going to stop here, are you? Marie, you are killing me!! (okay, I wanted to go to bed anyway...)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 18, 2007, 08:07:32 pm
You are not going to stop here, are you? Marie, you are killing me!! (okay, I wanted to go to bed anyway...)

 :laugh: You read it that fast?  Dang, girl, I just posted it!  :laugh: 

Have a good rest.  I trust we'll have a few more chapters up for you by tomorrow when you wake.
Title: Re: Right 29
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 18, 2007, 08:09:28 pm
Evenin'.

Well, watch out for Katie... she's "free" and that can mean trouble if Ennis sees her trying to be "free" with Jack. Or maybe she takes a shine to walking!Ennis who stops to ask directions, and then who knows.

OMT?  Don't believe for a second that he didn't read the card.  His radar is up, and when Ennis arrives at the Ranch, hmmmm...

Too bad Ennis didn't take up the Reverend and have a bite to eat at the social after the service. Though not sure how Katie would have taken it. 

Keep it coming, I'm hooked as you can tell.

Thanks again. 

Thanks you, cwby30!  I'm so glad you're enjoying our "serial."  Thanks for hanging in here with us.  It means a lot to me!
Title: Right (32) by Toycoon
Post by: Toycoon on November 18, 2007, 11:11:08 pm
Right (32) by Toycoon

"Hello there, young fella. Need a lift somewhere?" Nervously, Ennis turned toward the voice coming from the truck. It was the elderly gentleman from the Pentecostal church. Relieved, Ennis nodded, 'yes' from beneath his cowboy hat, opened the truck door and climbed in. "I sure do thank you for stopping, sir."

"Reverend Trumbull ... you may call me Cyrus. Where are you headed, son?" The truth was, Ennis had no idea where he was headed. He hadn't felt so adrift since his parents died years ago. He never really had the opportunity to properly mourn their passing; there had been so many things to attend to after the accident. Ennis' brother and his older sister were just teenagers themselves and not equipped to raise their young brother. They did the best they could.

Ennis looked around the cab of the truck. There was a tiny plastic Jesus figure affixed to the dashboard and a Saint Christopher medal attached to the glove box. Ennis became hypnotized by the rosary hanging from the rear view mirror, swinging back and forth rhythmically. Staring straight ahead at the road, Ennis asked, "Do you know a fella, name' a Jack, huh? Jack Twist?"

"Why, certainly I do. Eleanor's son, Jack. He's a fine boy. They were in church this morning, just before I saw you, as a matter of fact." Ennis perked up and sat up straight. Reverend Trumbull continued, "They have a little farm over in Lightning Flat. It's not far from here, 'less of course, you're walkin," he chuckled. "You a friend'a Jack's?" he said, looking directly at Ennis. "Yes sir, I am." "Well then, that's where we're going!" The Reverend revved the gas pedal and they pressed on to Lightning Flat.
Title: Right (33)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 19, 2007, 01:27:50 am
Right (33) By Littlewing1957

Mrs. Twist arrived home from church a bit later than she expected.  Her sojourn to the grieving plain was very spiritual, very uplifting, and she lost track of time.  Her husband was waiting for her in the living room; not particularly out of concern, but because he wanted his dinner.  The Sisters at Missionary Pentecostal Church were very fond of Mrs. Twist, and they made sure she had enough food to carry home to her husband.  That way, Mrs. Twist wouldn’t have to cook Sunday dinner.  She entered her house carrying a plastic bag filled to the brim with leftovers from the brunch.  Mr. Twist grunted, and without a word to his wife, moved to the kitchen table.

“Where is that boy?”  Mrs. Twist asked her husband as she placed the food on the table.  “I reckon he’s up in his room.”  Mr. Twist answered.  “I haven’t seen him in a few hours.  I think he’s upset about having a postcard returned.”  Mrs. Twist digested this information.  She was becoming accustomed to Jack’s melancholy moods, but that didn’t mean she liked the change in her son.  “Who was the postcard addressed to?”  Mrs. Twist asked as she made a plate and passed it to her man.  “Well, I didn’t mean to pry,” The old man began as he tasted a bit of macaroni and cheese.  “But the card was addressed to a one Ennis Del Mar.”  Mrs. Twist smiled at the mention of Ennis' name.

“Jack!”  Mrs. Twist yelled up toward her son’s room.  “Yeah, ma?”  Came a muffled answer from Jack.  “Come down here and get some of this food if you’re hungry!”  No answer.  Jack remained in his room.  Mr. Twist ate in silence as his wife read what was left of the Sunday paper. 

Along about 8:00p.m. Jack was showering, getting ready for bed and his parents were in the living room watching t.v.  The Ed Sullivan Show was on and Mr. Twist laughed at the comic genius of a one Rodney Dangerfield.  Ed was just about to introduce Jerry Stiller when they heard a knock on the front door.  Mrs. Twist looked at her husband.  “You expecting someone?”  He shook his head in the negative, but walked over and flung the door open.  Mr. Twist greeted Rev. Trumbull with a warm hello and a hearty handshake.  Jack's father was not a churchgoer, but he had the utmost respect for Rev. Trumbull.  Mrs. Twist rose and turned the television set off when she heard her pastor’s name.  “Come on in Reverend,” Mrs. Twist offered sweetly.  And I see you’ve brought a friend.  Mrs. Twist looked at the young man and smiled.  “Come on in, young man.  Our home is your home!”
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on November 19, 2007, 03:47:48 am
Toycoon and Littlewing. I can´t tell you how much I enjoy this story. Boah, such lame words. I love love love it! And I so enjoy the tension!! I love the details, and I can see both Jack and Ennis so vividly before my mind´s eye as if I was watching a movie. You are two great writers and an even greater team!

 :-* Kiss for Toycoon          :-* Kiss for Marie


Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 19, 2007, 12:29:11 pm
Toycoon and Littlewing. I can´t tell you how much I enjoy this story. Boah, such lame words. I love love love it! And I so enjoy the tension!! I love the details, and I can see both Jack and Ennis so vividly before my mind´s eye as if I was watching a movie. You are two great writers and an even greater team!

 :-* Kiss for Toycoon          :-* Kiss for Marie


Dagi

Thanks, Dagi.  I really appreciate your kind words and encouragement!  :-*
Title: Re: Right 34
Post by: cwby30 on November 19, 2007, 10:44:32 pm
Evenin'.

Well, they're under the same roof, and wonder whether it will still be on when Jack comes downstairs to meet the Reverend and his friend!  Looking forward to reading about that. 

Youse twose! Great story line, you work off each other so well, and there's a lot that can be written still even with the Reunion. 

Thanks again. 
Title: Right (34) by Toycoon
Post by: Toycoon on November 20, 2007, 01:49:06 am
Right (34) by Toycoon

"Come in, come in," she beckoned with the warmest sincerity to the stranger who accompanied the Reverend. "What is your name, young man?" "Ennis... Del Mar, ma'am." he said removing his cowboy hat, "Pleased to meet you."

Taking Ennis by the arm, Mrs. Twist said, "Please come in and sit down, dear. You must be hungry. Could I fix you something to eat? A cup of warm milk?" Without waiting for an answer, she turned and headed towards the kitchen to fix Ennis a plate and a warm drink. Ennis flopped down onto the sofa, holding his hat by the brim.

Mr. Twist was more reserved regarding the stranger. He looked Ennis up and down, studying his disheveled appearance. He evaluated Ennis' shaggy hair, his faded plaid jacket, his worn blue jeans and the cowboy boots with the holes in the toe. He finally deduced that Ennis must be acceptable because he was a friend of the Reverend, so he held out his hand. "Hello there, Ennis Del Mar. What brings you to these parts?" " I was on my way to South Dakota for a job when I passed Lightning Flat. I thought I'd pay a visit to my friend, Jack."
"So, yer a friend a' Jack's, huh?" Now, John Twist recognized where he'd heard that name before: 'Ennis Del Mar' was the name on the postcard.

"Yes sir. Is he home?" asked Ennis cautiously. "He is... but he went to bed early. Weren't feeling well," answered John. The Reverend spoke up then, "Speaking of going to bed early, I best be going. Matilda will be worried sick about me, been gone most the day. It's been a pleasure, folks." He patted Ennis' shoulder then turned and walked towards the front door with Mr. Twist following behind him. The two men stepped outside onto the porch and John pulled the door behind him. Moths buzzed about, hitting the porch lamp  when the Reverend turned to him to say, "John, be kind to that young man. He's had a tough life and he's just a boy."

Eleanor Twist came out of the kitchen holding a steaming plate of macaroni, collar greens, drop biscuits and ham hocks in one hand and a mug of warm milk in the other. She met John in the hall on his way back from seeing the Reverend to the door. Together, they stepped into the living room to find Ennis slumped over, asleep on the couch. His hat had fallen to the floor.
Title: Re: Right (34) by Toycoon
Post by: Dagi on November 20, 2007, 05:00:48 am
You sure know how to build up the tension, Toycoon! If Jack knew....

Again thanks for this treat!

Dagi
Title: Re: Right (34) by Toycoon
Post by: Toycoon on November 20, 2007, 10:26:14 am
You sure know how to build up the tension, Toycoon! If Jack knew....

Again thanks for this treat!

Dagi

Dagi dear, he may be on the verge of finding out!
Title: Right (35)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 20, 2007, 02:51:39 pm
Right (35) By Littlewing1957

"Should we wake him?"  Mrs. Twist asked her husband as they both stood, side-by-side, in front of the couch, looking down at a sleeping Ennis Del Mar.  Mrs. Twist studied Ennis as he slept.   Something about him touched her very soul.  Perhaps it was her son's obvious fondness for him, or maybe it was his shy, unassuming, and trusting nature.  Mrs. Twist wasn't sure why she was instantly taken with Ennis.  "No, let him sleep!"  It was Mr. Twist.  He walked over to his chair and plopped down.  "But you should go up and tell Jack that he's here."  Mrs. Twist nodded and headed up the stairs.

Jack lay awake in bed. He heard the knock at the door, knew that someone came to visit, but he had no way of knowing who, nor did he care.   All he could think about was Ennis and their idyllic time together up on the mountain.  Jack's ma knocked on his bedroom door.  "Jack!" she yelled.  "You awake?"  Jack was silent a for a few seconds before he answered her.  "Yeah, ma, I'm awake."  "Well come on down, you have a visitor; someone I'm sure you'll want to see!"  Jack rolled his blue eyes.  He couldn't image who would come to call.  He was friendly enough with the young people in town, but he was not what one would call popular.  "Ma," Jack began, "If Katie is here, tell her I'm not up to company.  I'll call on her tomorrow."  Mrs. Twist smiled.  "Jack, its not Katie."  She stated excitedly.  "Ennis Del Mar is here to see you!"  Jack jumped at the mention of Ennis' name.  "Ennis Del Mar?" Jack shouted.  "Ennis?"  Jack sprung out of bed.

"Tell him I'll be down in a minute."  Jack shouted through the door, but his mother had already started down the stairs.  Jack smoothed his pajamas, ran a few fingers through his hair.  But then he stopped fussing.  Jack knew he had nothing to worry about!  Ennis saw him at his worst: hair dirty and spiky, breath foul, clothes filthy and musty smelling.  Jack didn't even care how the house looked, and was sure Ennis wouldn't care, either.  He looked in the mirror one last time and decided he looked decent.  Jack took the stairs 2 at a time, and when he reached the couch where Ennis slept, he noticed that his parents had left the room.  He was all alone with a sleeping Ennis Del Mar!  Jack stood there and feasted his eyes on his friend.  He couldn't believe that Ennis was lying there; that he actually tracked him down.  Jack couldn't stand it anymore and shook Ennis' right shoulder.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on November 20, 2007, 02:56:25 pm
PLEASE GO ON!!!  :D ;D :D ;D :D ;D :D ;D :D
Title: Re: Right 35
Post by: cwby30 on November 20, 2007, 04:27:05 pm
Afternoon.

Well, two already today, and they're in the same room at the same time without parents around.  Bet Mrs. T insisted that they give them some time alone.  Jack in his pjs?!  Ennis will surely think it's a dream... come true.  So, when's the kiss?!

Like the Reverend. He knows OMT, and tells him to go lightly on Ennis.  Hope he does, and continues to do so when he finds out the depth of the friendship between Ennis and Jack. 

Agree with Gary and Dagi: you've got the tension down great, carry on!!

Thanks again. 
Title: Re: Five Things About Those Lips And Eyes
Post by: cwby30 on November 20, 2007, 04:34:49 pm
Afternoon.

Posted this yesterday at Brokeback Slash, in response to the "5 things" challenge.  Not sure where this fits in really in the threads over here, but since it's definitely not a 'drabble', and even though not really part of the 'game' rules you set up originally, figured you wouldn't mind my posting it here.  Hope you like it.

Thanks again.

*********************************


Ennis sat on the steps, occasionally taking a pull from the bottle of whiskey held in his right hand.  The afternoon sun slipped down to kiss the tops of the far mountains before sliding behind them, releasing their shadows to spread slowly across the plain below and swallow all before them into their darkness.

Jack’s gone, he thought, God how I miss him, miss those lips and eyes that told me so much.

Miss them thin in a straight line, as Jack stood there, hands on hips, telling him to make up his mind, fire in those blue eyes of his.

Miss them half full, as Jack pushed out his lower lip to pout, with the start of a smile touching the edges, telling him it wasn't that serious after all, a sparkle in those blue eyes of his.

Miss them moist, as Jack licked them in anticipated of what was to come, telling him to hurry up already, desire in those blue eyes of his.

Miss them full, as Jack pressed them hard against his, opening to allow him access, giving and taking in return, telling him it was time for action, lust in those blue eyes of his.

Miss them puffy and blotched, as Jack lay there in his arms after a heaving bout of kissing, sex or no sex, sated and hurting, telling him silently he wanted even more, love in those blue eyes of his.

As Ennis remembered, the shadows continued their inexorable daily path towards him.  They struck the trees to the West, which added their own shadows, with the combined spread now looking like fingers grasping at all in their path.  Part of Ennis watched in fascination as the shadows crossed the dusty drive and reached the bottom step below him, then started their upward climb towards him.

Before the shadows could envelop his boots, Ennis realized that the ringing in his ears came from the telephone inside, not from concentrating so hard to hold onto each memory of Jack.  He willed the memories to slide back into that special place where he honored them, as he slipped from the shadows’ touch and headed inside.  The screen door banged into place behind him, blocking temporarily the forward progress of those outside shadows.  But even wood and screening could not keep out the encroaching darkness.  It slipped inside and oozed across the faded carpet towards the figure now sitting back in the recliner, one weary hand holding the bottle, the other reaching for the telephone.

“Hello?”

“Hey.”

Relief flooded through him.  “Hey, yourself. You made it. You okay? Folks okay?”

“Yeah, safe and sound, tired, but okay. So are they, as best as can be under the circumstances, considering they’re in this board and care place. …” The voice shifted, low. “Miss you, miss you a lot.”

The last words caressed Ennis’ ear like puffs of a warm summer breeze.

“Miss you too.”  Ennis couldn’t help but smile as he spoke those three little words, and thought about those lips doing the same, a sparkle of love in those blue eyes.  As they talked, filling each other in on the past five hours of their lives, he reveled in the sound of the voice coming from those lips, and saw those blue eyes and all they told him.

Ennis put the bottle down on the end table, and leaned over and switched on the lamp beside the recliner.  The shadows retreated quickly and disappeared, banished from inside the room by the light of a lamp and banished from inside Ennis by the light of his life. 
Title: Re: Five Things About Those Lips And Eyes
Post by: Dagi on November 20, 2007, 05:41:18 pm
Hi cwby30! Thanks so much for sharing this beautiful story with us. You did a wonderful job there, I so enjoyed reading this. Stay with us, please!

Dagi
Title: Re: Five Things About Those Lips And Eyes
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 20, 2007, 10:01:00 pm
Afternoon.

Posted this yesterday at Brokeback Slash, in response to the "5 things" challenge.  Not sure where this fits in really in the threads over here, but since it's definitely not a 'drabble', and even though not really part of the 'game' rules you set up originally, figured you wouldn't mind my posting it here.  Hope you like it.

Thanks again.

*********************************


Ennis sat on the steps, occasionally taking a pull from the bottle of whiskey held in his right hand.  The afternoon sun slipped down to kiss the tops of the far mountains before sliding behind them, releasing their shadows to spread slowly across the plain below and swallow all before them into their darkness.

Jack’s gone, he thought, God how I miss him, miss those lips and eyes that told me so much.

Miss them thin in a straight line, as Jack stood there, hands on hips, telling him to make up his mind, fire in those blue eyes of his.

Miss them half full, as Jack pushed out his lower lip to pout, with the start of a smile touching the edges, telling him it wasn't that serious after all, a sparkle in those blue eyes of his.

Miss them moist, as Jack licked them in anticipated of what was to come, telling him to hurry up already, desire in those blue eyes of his.

Miss them full, as Jack pressed them hard against his, opening to allow him access, giving and taking in return, telling him it was time for action, lust in those blue eyes of his.

Miss them puffy and blotched, as Jack lay there in his arms after a heaving bout of kissing, sex or no sex, sated and hurting, telling him silently he wanted even more, love in those blue eyes of his.

As Ennis remembered, the shadows continued their inexorable daily path towards him.  They struck the trees to the West, which added their own shadows, with the combined spread now looking like fingers grasping at all in their path.  Part of Ennis watched in fascination as the shadows crossed the dusty drive and reached the bottom step below him, then started their upward climb towards him.

Before the shadows could envelop his boots, Ennis realized that the ringing in his ears came from the telephone inside, not from concentrating so hard to hold onto each memory of Jack.  He willed the memories to slide back into that special place where he honored them, as he slipped from the shadows’ touch and headed inside.  The screen door banged into place behind him, blocking temporarily the forward progress of those outside shadows.  But even wood and screening could not keep out the encroaching darkness.  It slipped inside and oozed across the faded carpet towards the figure now sitting back in the recliner, one weary hand holding the bottle, the other reaching for the telephone.

“Hello?”

“Hey.”

Relief flooded through him.  “Hey, yourself. You made it. You okay? Folks okay?”

“Yeah, safe and sound, tired, but okay. So are they, as best as can be under the circumstances, considering they’re in this board and care place. …” The voice shifted, low. “Miss you, miss you a lot.”

The last words caressed Ennis’ ear like puffs of a warm summer breeze.

“Miss you too.”  Ennis couldn’t help but smile as he spoke those three little words, and thought about those lips doing the same, a sparkle of love in those blue eyes.  As they talked, filling each other in on the past five hours of their lives, he reveled in the sound of the voice coming from those lips, and saw those blue eyes and all they told him.

Ennis put the bottle down on the end table, and leaned over and switched on the lamp beside the recliner.  The shadows retreated quickly and disappeared, banished from inside the room by the light of a lamp and banished from inside Ennis by the light of his life. 

cwby30, this is just beautiful!  I want to thank you for posting this here for us.  You're a poet and you're very talented.  You have done so many things here, in this piece, but I especially love the way you show us how deeply Ennis and Jack are connected.  Gone just 5 hours and they missed each other to the point of real longing and flashbacks and..well, poetry?  Exceptional!  And AU!  I love AU pieces! Very well written and extremely moving.
Title: Re: Five Things
Post by: cwby30 on November 21, 2007, 12:08:48 am
Evenin' to all of you.

Well, I appreciate the kind words about my story and my writing.  Sometimes it hits just right, and this was one of them.  I do like AU, and happy endings, so write that all the time.  What's the point of AU, if you don't give the guys a chance at happiness?  They had enough hurt in OS and the movie.  And don't worry, I do plan to stick around here for a while, and contribute when I can.  Big footsteps to follow, though. 

Thanks again.    :)
Title: Re: Five things about those lips and eyes
Post by: Toycoon on November 21, 2007, 01:42:27 am
Howdy cwby30!
Nice to have you join in the fun around these parts. I don't mind bending the rules here. The three sentence rule is just a guideline. You're among deviants anyway! We welcome all comers. Feel free to contribute in any way you like.
Hmmm, some day I'll try writing a drabble. Yours is wonderful and very lovingly written. I don't know the rules of writing a drabble but of course, I don't follow the rules anyway.
Isn't it interesting how Brokeback Mountain has brought out the poet in all of us?

I love Jack's lips, too. We all do: right, Susiebell?
Title: Right (36) by Toycoon
Post by: Toycoon on November 21, 2007, 01:49:15 am
Right (36) by Toycoon

The passion and animal lust was extremely intense and building between the two men as they stood only inches apart. Ennis could feel Jack's hot breath on his face. Ennis closed his eyes, intoxicated by an incredible surge of deep desire; he'd never felt, tasted or touched so much he was previously afraid to imagine.

He loosened the belt and tore open his shirt, then, Jack exploded into action. "Guns goin' off!" Jack growled, squeezing and shaking Ennis violently by the shoulders, "Ennis aww, Ennis... Ennis!"

Stunned, Ennis opened his eyes, blinking until the Twist living room slowly came into focus. He looked up to see Jack's familiar, smiling face. His blue eyes glowed in the golden light from the table lamp. "Sonofabitch, Jack. Is that really you?" he whispered slowly, "Sonofabitch."
Title: Re: Right 36
Post by: cwby30 on November 21, 2007, 12:37:20 pm
Mornin'.

Well, "sonofabitch" is right!  Like how you reversed OS with Ennis' dream, and had it mixed into reality, and then when Ennis woke up used the words from OS when he saw Jack after 4 years.  Hope they both 'wake up' and don't let each other go this time.

Great round.

Thanks again. 
Title: Re: Right 36
Post by: Toycoon on November 21, 2007, 01:47:39 pm
Mornin'.

Well, "sonofabitch" is right!  Like how you reversed OS with Ennis' dream, and had it mixed into reality, and then when Ennis woke up used the words from OS when he saw Jack after 4 years.  Hope they both 'wake up' and don't let each other go this time.

Great round.

Thanks again. 

Well thank you, cwby30-
I'm glad you enjoyed that round. Trust me, I'm having more fun than anyone! I can't wait to find out what happens next...
Title: Right 37
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 21, 2007, 02:19:48 pm
Right (37) By Littlewing1957

Jack fought hard to contain his excitement, but found he couldn't control his physical reaction when he looked into the eyes of the man he truly loved.  Jack felt an almost otherworldly euphoria when he heard Ennis' voice.  "Yeah, it's me, friend!" Jack answered.  "I'm glad you're here, Ennis." Jack sat down beside his friend, and resisted the urge to jump all over him.  "How did you find me?"

Ennis was still groggy with sleep, and was struggling to come to terms with being in Jack's presence once more.  He shifted self-consciously, stole glances at his bud.  Jack was patient, and sat very still, although he was trembling.  He allowed Ennis to come together, and tried his level best to compose himself.  When he felt a bit more lucid, Ennis told Jack all about his ordeal after leaving the mountain.  He explained how he came to be on a bus to Mount Rushmore, only to get off when the bus reached the Wyoming border.  Jack smiled when he heard how Rev. Trumbull saw him walking down the side of the road and gave him a ride over.  Ennis hung his head after telling Jack all about his adventure.  Jack instinctively noticed that Ennis seemed more defeated than usual, and he decided to do something about it.  Jack took Ennis' hand and squeezed it.  "Stay here a minute." He whispered as he rose from the couch.  "I'll be right back."  Ennis watched Jack climb the stairs without a word.  Ennis looked around the living room and wondered what became of Jack's parents.  Ennis theorized that they wre probably in the kitchen, or somewhere else on the property.  He was glad that they were kind enough to give them some privacy.

After about 10 minutes Jack ran into the living room fully dressed.  He wore dark wash jeans, his worn boots and a grey sweatshirt.  Ennis looked at him, confused.  "Jack, are you going out?"  Ennis asked.  Jack approached him and pulled him to his feet.  "We're going out!"  He announced with conviction.  "I don't know where my parents are at the moment, but I'm sure they won't mind if we leave for awhile."  Jack pulled Ennis toward the door, and Ennis allowed himself to be led.  "I know a place where we can go."  Jack whispered.  "We need to talk!"

Title: Thanksgiving
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 21, 2007, 03:06:10 pm
Thanksgiving By Littlewing1957

Old Man Newsome sat his fat, ignorant ass down right next to his wife.  He had to admit it: his son-in-law was growing a backbone!  He wasn't sure if he liked it, but at least Jack was beginning to set a decent example for his grandson.  A boy should see his father take charge!

Jack carved the turkey in silence.  He couldn't believe that he just put the "stud duck" in his place.  But Jack couldn't take the tyranny any longer, and made an effort to stand up for himself in his own house.

Mrs. Newsome handed her plate to her husband, who passed it to her son-in-law.  Mrs. Newsome flashed Jack a timid smile, and was secretly delighted that he stood up to her husband.  Mrs. Newsome always liked Jack, but was now gaining respect for him.

Lureen passed Bobby's plate to her husband.  She made sure he noticed her grateful smile.  She would tell him later how much she loved him for standing up to her daddy.

Little Bobby took his plate and ate his turkey in silence.  He knew that things were tense, and decided to be obedient and eat his supper.  Bobby didn't miss the football game.  He only watched because it was on, and didn't understand why his grandpa was mad when his dad turned it off.  Bobby didn't blink an eye when his dad turned on his grandpa.  Bobby already knew Jack as an authority figure - fair but strict.

Jack sat down at the head of the table when every plate was loaded with turkey and all the trimmings.  He reserved a drumstick for himself, and attacked it - tearing the tender meat from the bone.  Jack looked over at his family but really didn't see them.  He saw in his mind's eye Ennis Del Mar.  He wondered what his friend was doing on this family holiday.  He hoped Ennis was alright, and that he had a place to go eat Thanksgiving dinner. Jack couldn't bear to think of Ennis alone and lonely, especially today!  He wanted his lover to at least be aound those who loved him.   But more than anything else, Jack hoped that Ennis was behaving himself!
Title: Re: Right (36) by Toycoon
Post by: Dagi on November 21, 2007, 04:05:15 pm
Right (36) by Toycoon

The passion and animal lust was extremely intense and building between the two men as they stood only inches apart. Ennis could feel Jack's hot breath on his face. Jack reached out and put his hand firmly on Ennis' crotch, rubbing the throbbing erection through the worn denim. Ennis closed his eyes, intoxicated by an incredible surge of deep desire; he'd never felt, tasted or touched so much he was previously afraid to imagine.

Ennis undid his jeans. He loosened the belt and tore open his shirt, then, Jack exploded into action. Jack hiked down Ennis' pants, flipped him over and pushed him into position on his hands and knees. Jack spread Ennis' legs apart, spit into his hand and rubbed it on himself then began thrusting into Ennis from behind, slapping his ass with a loud whack. Ennis rocked back and forth to meet the other man's thrusts and howled like a wolf in heat. Ennis brought his hand to his sweaty penis, cranking it and sliding the foreskin quickly over the purple gland. "Guns goin' off!" Jack growled, squeezing and shaking Ennis violently by the shoulders, "Ennis aww, Ennis... Ennis!"

Stunned, Ennis opened his eyes, blinking until the Twist living room slowly came into focus. He looked up to see Jack's familiar, smiling face. His blue eyes glowed in the golden light from the table lamp. "Sonofabitch, Jack. Is that really you?" he whispered slowly, "Sonofabitch."

Huh!  :o First thing I did after reading the first lines was go back and look whether I had missed out on a chapter! :laugh: Great chapter, Toycoon! And friggin´ hot!

Dagi
Title: Re: Thanksgiving
Post by: Dagi on November 21, 2007, 04:19:13 pm
Thanksgiving By Littlewing1957

Old Man Newsome sat his fat, ignorant ass down right next to his wife.  He had to admit it: his son-in-law was growing a backbone!  He wasn't sure if he liked it, but at least Jack was beginning to set a decent example for his grandson.  A boy should see his father take charge!

Jack carved the turkey in silence.  He couldn't believe that he just put the "stud duck" in his place.  But Jack couldn't take the tyranny any longer, and made an effort to stand up for himself in his own house.

Mrs. Newsome handed her plate to her husband, who passed it to her son-in-law.  Mrs. Newsome flashed Jack a timid smile, and was secretly delighted that he stood up to her husband.  Mrs. Newsome always liked Jack, but was now gaining respect for him.

Lureen passed Bobby's plate to her husband.  She made sure he noticed her grateful smile.  She would tell him later how much she loved him for standing up to her daddy.

Little Bobby took his plate and ate his turkey in silence.  He knew that things were tense, and decided to be obedient and eat his supper.  Bobby didn't miss the football game.  He only watched because it was on, and didn't understand why his grandpa was mad when his dad turned it off.  Bobby didn't blink an eye when his dad turned on his grandpa.  Bobby already knew Jack as an authority figure - fair but strict.

Jack sat down at the head of the table when every plate was loaded with turkey and all the trimmings.  He reserved a drumstick for himself, and attacked it - tearing the tender meat from the bone.  Jack looked over at his family but really didn't see them.  He saw in his mind's eye Ennis Del Mar.  He wondered what his friend was doing on this family holiday.  He hoped Ennis was alright, and that he had a place to go eat Thanksgiving dinner. Jack couldn't bear to think of Ennis alone and lonely, especially today!  He wanted his lover to at least be aound those who loved him.   But more than anything else, Jack hoped that Ennis was behaving himself!

Thanks for this one, Littlewing. I always felt with Jack in this scene. Of course I´m proud of him, but what got to me most was the look in his eyes after putting OMN in his place. He looks just so sick of this whole scenery that is his life...
Title: Re: Thanksgiving
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 21, 2007, 09:16:37 pm
Thanks for this one, Littlewing. I always felt with Jack in this scene. Of course I´m proud of him, but what got to me most was the look in his eyes after putting OMN in his place. He looks just so sick of this whole scenery that is his life...


Thanks so much Dagi.  Hey, where is SusieBaby?  She given up on us or something?  I really miss that girl!
Title: Happy Thanksgiving, folks!
Post by: Toycoon on November 21, 2007, 10:29:43 pm
Wishing everyone a happy holiday (even those in other lands that don't actually celebrate Thanksgiving). I love my Brokeback family!
Title: Re: Thanksgiving
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 22, 2007, 01:41:27 am
Hi Littlewing,

No Suise hasn't given up on our thread.  She's been having lots of problems with her stomach.  One day she feels fine, and the next she's in agony.  After several days of this yo-yo effect she's way behind on keeping up with her PM's and the other threads she's invovled with here at Bettermost.  (And I expect behind on other things not related to this site, too.)  But she'll get back to this thread.  I'm sure of it.   ;D

Gary

I'm sorry to hear this!  I didn't know.  Well, I already sent her a PM, and I expect to hear from her soon.  I hope she feels better.  Thanks for the info, Gary, my Love!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on November 22, 2007, 06:21:37 am


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Title: Right (38) by Toycoon
Post by: Toycoon on November 22, 2007, 12:30:07 pm
Ennis and Jack excitedly ran out onto the porch pulling the door behind them, closing it slowly as to not make a sound. The floorboards creaked beneath their combined weight and the cool evening wind whipped between them. Ennis pulled his cowboy hat down further on his head and put his hands in his coat pockets. He looked to Jack to determine their next move. Then Jack announced, "Ennis, I'm gonna take you where I used to go when I was a kid to get away from the folks. I used to walk there when I was little but we better take the truck." They gazed at the crescent moon for several minutes and took in the splendor of the Wyoming autumn night. Jack reached in his back pocket, pulled out the half pint of whiskey, unscrewed the cap and took a gulp. He offered the bottle to Ennis who took a swallow then handed it back. Jack's gaze lingered on the face of his friend. "Ya know something, Ennis, I cain't believe yer really here. I never thought I'd see ya again after all that shit with Aguirre on Brokeback and all. Ya know, I ain't stopped thinking about you since that day," he added sheepishly, "Truth is, I ain't never felt this way about nobody before. You?"

"No, me neither," whispered Ennis, his heart beating faster than he wanted. "I got all the way ta Alma's house an' I couldn't go through with it. The wedding, I mean." The faint sound of crickets chirping filled the awkward silence created by their confessions.

The light in the window of Jack's parents' bedroom turned off. "Guess my folks went to bed. Awright, let's go, Ennis."

"Jack, one more thing..." He turned, and grabbing Jack by the shoulders, leaned in to steal a kiss from Jack's parted lips.

Old Man Twist gasped as he watched in horror from the window in the living room. He had come downstairs to see if Ennis was alright or needed anything else when he heard the voices outside. Did his son, Jack and his friend, Ennis really just kiss?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on November 22, 2007, 06:06:45 pm
Aah, you make my heart melt! I especially loved it when they admitted that they hadn´t stopped thinking of each other !

I´m looking forward to reading MORE... ;D

Dagi
Title: Right (39)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 22, 2007, 09:17:30 pm
Right (39) By Littlewing1957

Mr. Twist couldn’t believe his eyes.  Oh, he suspected all along that Jack was a bit soft, but he hoped that his son was just going through a phase, and would grow out of it.  He sat down on his bed and remembered a time when Jack was 7 and invited a friend over to play.  Jack’s friend’s name was Alan Sims, and was a friend of Jack’s since they learned to walk.  Mr. Twist happened to walk in on them in Jack’s room.  He was more chagrined than angry to see Jack lying prone over Alan, looking dreamily into his eyes.  Mr. Twist pulled Jack off of Alan and sent the young man home.  He wouldn’t allow Jack to have anything to do with the young man after that - as though the fault was entirely with Alan.  Mr. Twist thought he was being rather harsh then, but in light of what he just witnessed, he wished he had taken a greater interest in his son, and had been a better parent.

“What is it, pa?”  It was Mrs. Twist, noticing her husband’s discomfort.  He sat down on the bed beside her and placed his head in his hands.  Mrs. Twist sat up and stared at her husband.  Mr. Twist was not what she would call the love of her life, but she did care about him.  After all, he was the father of her child and her provider.  “I just saw something that made me a bit sick!”  Mr. Twist answered.  “What did you see?”  His wife asked, concerned.  Jack’s father sighed, and was not at all sure if he should tell his wife about Ennis and Jack.  He looked at her, and after about a second, decided that she should know.  “I saw Ennis give our son a kiss on the mouth.”

“Mrs. Twist took the announcement with remarkable grace.  She always suspected that Jack liked boys, and that he may grow up to like men.  It was of no consequence to her.  She vowed to love her son no matter what.  But Mrs. Twist knew her husband would be disappointed if Jack turned out to be homosexual.  She had to choose her words carefully, knew she needed to be supportive of them both.  “Is that all?”  Mrs. Twist said as she took her husband’s hand.  “Look, pa,” She began, “You’ve had a hard week, and maybe you just saw Ennis lean in to whisper something in Jack's ear?”  Mr. Twist looked at his wife as though she just grew horns.  “Woman, I know what I saw!”  He was furious now.  Mrs. Twist dropped her husband’s hand and turned away from him.  “But it’s too late for me to do anything about Jack now!”  Mr. Twist reasoned.  “I just hope that Ennis Del Mar is a good ranch hand.  I can certainly use the help around here!”
Title: Re: Rught 38 & 39
Post by: cwby30 on November 23, 2007, 12:48:31 am
Evenin'.

Well, just like OMT to be upset about Jack, and then dismiss him like yesterday's newspaper and be more concerned whether Ennis could help around the ranch.  So, does that mean Ennis and Jack are staying? Interesting also about Mrs. T, more concerned that Jack will be happy and determined to love him no matter what.

Thanks again. 
Title: Re: Right (39)
Post by: Dagi on November 23, 2007, 04:36:37 pm
Right (39) By Littlewing1957

Oh I love Mother Twist! She´s not only lovely, she´s got brains, too. "Is that all?" So good.

Thank you two for writing this!

Dagi
Title: Right (40) by Toycoon
Post by: Toycoon on November 23, 2007, 04:59:13 pm
Right (40) by Toycoon

Jack stood there on the porch, staring at Ennis for a few minutes, overcome by Ennis' boldness.  He couldn't believe Ennis' impulsiveness, kissing him like that. Yes, it was dark and late at night with no one around but still, someone could have seen them. A small, spotted cat strolled onto the porch, walking in between Jack's legs and rubbed up against Ennis' legs. Ennis squatted down to stroke the cat's back. "Well, who have got here?" he said, scratching the cat between the ears. "Oh, that's 'Pepper', she's our kitty cat. Ya wanna take 'er with us?" Ennis scooped up the cat, stood up and they went down the steps toward the truck.

Jack grabbed the wool blanket off the porch swing, threw it in the bed of the truck, hopped into the cab then slammed the door. "Now Ennis," Jack whispered in a serious voice, "I'm about ta take you to my secret hideout, I'd tell ya where it is but I'd have ta kill ya!" Jack held up his right hand with three fingers folded and the forefinger and thumb extended and held it against Ennis' temple. Just then, the cat let out a loud, 'mew' and they both burst into laughter.

They drove for a short distance until they reached the silhouette of large maple tree. Jack drove right up to the trunk of the tree and cut the engine. "Well, there it it!  'Fort Twist '. Ain't it somethin' ? Ennis looked up into the tree and saw the ramshackle structure nestled in it's crook. "Sure is somethin'. How do we get up there, huh?" smiled Ennis, cradling the cat and rubbing her neck."Show em Pepper," said Jack, taking the cat from Ennis' arms and placing her on the tree's trunk. The cat expertly scurried up the tree, reappearing on the balcony of the tree-house, a few seconds later. "Come on, there's a ladder nailed on the back we can use." Jack took the blanket, draped it around his shoulders and started to ascend the ladder with Ennis, following close behind.
Title: Right (41)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 24, 2007, 01:10:03 am
Right (41) By Littlewing1957

Ennis followed close behind Jack on the climb to “Fort Twist.” The very sight of Jack’s firm behind was enough to cause Ennis’ penis to swell and jerk in his tight jeans.  He couldn’t wait till they were inside the tiny tree house!  Jack and Pepper were the first to climb into the small but sturdy space.  Ennis looked around the silent retreat.  Nothing much there but a pallet made of worn blankets, and he noticed a thermos and a flashlight.  Jack invited Ennis to have a seat on the pallet.  He turned on the flashlight and sat it upright so that they could see what needed to be seen.  Pepper was dividing her time between the two of them: rubbing first against Ennis’ thigh, and then against Jack’s outstretched leg.  Ennis scratched behind the animal's ear as he looked out at the vista beyond the trees.  It was a magnificent, lonesome, sobering sight!

Jack beckoned for Ennis and drew him close.  He pulled Ennis against his chest, and placed whisper soft, gossamer pecks on his forehead.  Ennis floated on a tide of kisses!  He rested againt Jack's chest, and realized just how much he missed the steady rhythm of Jack’s heartbeat.  He moved his fingers beneath Jack’s sweatshirt and stroked his chest, reconnected with the heart he had won.  Their coupling was every bit as scalding and passionate as they remembered!  How discreet of Pepper to lie quietly in the corner of the tree house - her head lowered and resting on her paws - her slanted eyes closed in trust.

And so it went that night: several charged hours thick with sighs, grunts, laughter, and even a few tears.  Ennis couldn't believe he had any fluids left until Jack attacked him again, and he came for a third and final time.  Jack held Ennis in his arms – his parents far from his mind.  He refused to move; wouldn’t dare release Ennis from his embrace; couldn’t allow Ennis Del Mar out of his sight.  Ennis pulled Jack down for a tender kiss, and watched their shadows move across the back wall of the tree house.  Pepper lifted her head from her paw as she heard Jack ask, “What are we gonna do now?”




Title: Re: Right (41)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 24, 2007, 02:13:25 am
OMG!  They did it in a treehouse!  I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE that!   ;D  That's much better than some ol' hayloft.  And it certainly beats the crap out of a motel.  There is something that's just crazy erotic about young people doing the wild thing in places that are somehow connected to their childhoods.

Gary   

I know, Gary!  I can't think of anything more romantic than making love in a tree house!  Toycoon is a genius!
Title: Re: Right (40) by Toycoon
Post by: Dagi on November 24, 2007, 03:39:45 am
Right (40) by Toycoon

"I'm about ta take you to my secret hideout, I'd tell ya where it is but I'd have ta kill ya!" Jack held up his right hand with three fingers folded and the forefinger and thumb extended and held it against Ennis' temple. Just then, the cat let out a loud, 'mew' and they both burst into laughter.
 


Toycoon, I loved this one. Loved it! You two are just incredible!

Dagi
Title: Re: Right (41)
Post by: Dagi on November 24, 2007, 03:41:49 am
Right (41) By Littlewing1957

 “What are we gonna do now?”


Oh Littlewing, this was so sweet, and so erotic!! Just perfect.

Dagi
Title: Right (42) By Toycoon
Post by: Toycoon on November 24, 2007, 03:06:57 pm
Right (42) By Toycoon

The first rays of dawn came peeking through the darkness in the spotty canopy of the enormous maple tree. Ennis turned from the crook of Jack's neck to face the beginning of the day, his eyes blinking awake. Pepper had nuzzled up to both of their heads and she let out an annoyed squeak when Ennis disturbed her. Where was he? Was this real or another dream? Had Ennis somehow managed to find Jack again after losing him so abruptly? Ennis sat up now.

"Jack, Jack," Ennis whispered, leaning in to kiss the face of his lover, "Wake up. It's almost light." Jack stirred then settled back into slumber, his head joined to the purring cat. "Yer folk's  gonna wonder where we gone. We gotta get back." Jack jerked up and flung back the blanket. "Holy sheee-it! Yer right!" They scrambled around the tree house gathering up their clothes and boots, dressing as fast as they could with Pepper staring at the men in disbelief. Jack grabbed the wool blanket and threw it over the balcony into the bed of the truck below. He scooped up the cat and did the same with her. Pepper landed on all fours on the blanket in the truck and dug her claws in it's nap. The boys scurried down the ladder, dashed to the truck and hopped in. Jack pumped the gas pedal, pulled the choke then cranked the ignition. Thankfully, the truck turned over so Jack threw it into gear then went barreling off in a cloud of dust.

In the emerging daylight, Ennis could see how close they actually were to the Twist ranch and it wasn't far. Jack drove up on the grassy mound beside the house, parked, jumped out of the truck and raced up the steps to the front door. Jack turned the door knob slowly, peered into the dark house, then motioned for Ennis to follow him. Jack and Ennis stood in the Twist living room, smiling at one another and catching their breath when they were startled by an unexpected voice.

"Mornin' fellas. Up kinda early today, ain't ya... You two goin' some place?
Title: Re: Right (41)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 24, 2007, 06:33:14 pm
Oh Littlewing, this was so sweet, and so erotic!! Just perfect.

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi!
Title: Right (43)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 24, 2007, 07:12:54 pm
Right (43) By Littlewing1957

Mr. Twist knew full well that the boys were just returning, but refused to make an issue of it.  He couldn’t image them going off somewhere to get physical – no, Old Man Twist’s mind wouldn’t picture it.  He liked to think that Ennis and Jack drove into town to catch up and talk about their summer on the mountain; even their lives after the job ended.   Mr. Twist had to believe that they got caught up in talk and lost track of time.  “Uh no, pa,” Jack began, looking to Ennis for confirmation.  “No, sir,” Ennis stammered, looking at Jack.  “We just came down to see if you needed any help around the ranch.”  A likely story!  Mr. Twist thought as he studied the young men standing before him.  He didn’t know Ennis from Adam, but he could tell when someone was lying to him.  “Well, just sit tight and your ma will be down to get your breakfast. Then we’ll talk about you two helping out around here.” 

Ennis watched Mr. Twist leave through the front door, and turned to Jack.  Ennis noticed that Jack was trembling, and placed a calming hand on his shoulder.  “I’m sorry, Jack!”  Ennis began.  “Bud, I’m not doin’ anything but causing trouble for you.  Maybe I shouldn’t have come!”  Jack shook his head and rubbed Ennis’ cheek.  “Don’t talk like that Friend!”  He whispered.  “You know I’m glad you’re here.  My pa wasn’t angry, and in his own way, invited you to stay with us a bit.  C’mon, let’s go get cleaned up and my ma will fix us a bite to eat.  What ya say?”  Ennis smiled at his friend and nodded.  “I guess so!  But I want to make breakfast for you and your parents.  Will you let me do that?”  Jack chuckled softly.  “Ennis Del Mar wants to stand in my ma’s kitchen and fix breakfast?”  Ennis grinned self consciously.  “Well, we’d be delighted, sir!”  Jack smiled as he bowed low before his friend.  They ran upstairs to Jack’s room to get cleaned up.

Mrs. Twist watched, fascinated, as Ennis moved around her kitchen like a pro.  He donned one of her best aprons and poured her a cup of coffee.  He made a morning meal of pancakes, scrambled eggs, freshly squeezed orange juice and bacon.  Mrs. Twist sighed with pleasure as she tasted Ennis' perfectly brewed java.  Jack attacked his breakfast with gusto, while his ma sat beside him and ate the expertly prepared meal.  Jack made a mental note to ask Ennis where he learned to cook like that!  When Old Man Twist entered the kitchen, he observed the spread and sat down at the table.  “Ma, you outdid yourself this morning,” Mr. Twist stated as he placed a few pancakes on his plate.  “Uh, pa,” Jack mumbled, his mouth full of eggs, “Ennis cooked this morning.”  Mr. Twist grimaced as he helped himself to a few slices of bacon.  Ennis watched in silence as Jack’s pa tasted his food.  “Well, I’ve tasted better, and by my own hand!”  The old man exclaimed.  “But this is good, young man!”  Ennis and Jack exhaled almost in unison.  “Sit yourself down and eat, Ennis.”  Mrs. Twist offered as she continued to devour her breakfast.  “And thanks so much for cooking for us.  A woman sure can get used to this.”  Jack smiled at his mother and stole a glance at his friend.  He noticed that Ennis was absolutely beaming with pride, and something that looked like relief.  Ennis' growing comfort was a beautiful thing to see, Jack thought.  Mr. Twist finished his meal in silence, and after everyone was full, he sat very still and watched as Ennis and Jack cleared away the dishes.  “Young fella,”  Mr. Twist addressed Ennis.  “You’re pretty handy with a spatula.  How are you at handling a hammer?  I need help with the barn.” 


Title: Re: Right (43)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 25, 2007, 02:58:42 am
MMM  I love breakfast food.  It's great to see that OMT isn't going to make things too difficult for Jack and Ennis.  He's being ornery, but not too ornery. 

Gary

Thanks, Gary.  I like to write Mr. Twist as a grumpy old man, but at the same time, explore his more mellow side.  I hope I'm suceeding!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on November 25, 2007, 04:33:00 pm
Gosh ... a million stories to catch up on!!! ... or should I say, one gigantic story to catch up on!!!

I'll hopefully get some time to sit and enjoy them tonight.  Keep up the good work guys!!

Susie

Well, Miss Susiebell, ya better hurry. I just received a notice from the admins that I have to delete the following chapters of our torrid tale: Chapters 20 and 36. So all I can say is hurry up. True Oracle, would you mind archiving this stuff for us (and future generations)?
Title: Right (44) by Toycoon
Post by: Toycoon on November 25, 2007, 06:41:33 pm
Right (44) by Toycoon

Jack was proud of his friend, Ennis. He'd never seen his parents so taken with any of his friends before today; it was truly an astonishing sight to behold. Even his father, John Twist, became tolerable in Ennis' presence. Still, one nagging thought lingered at back of Jack's mind: would his parents like Ennis as much if they knew he and Ennis were lovers. Jack poked at the pancakes with his fork while he mulled this point over. The word 'lovers' echoed loudly in his mind.

Jack looked at his parents and tried to imagine them together; young and in love with no cares or obligations. Love was such a strange idea in Jack's world; in the town of Lightning Flat, in the state of Wyoming. It wasn't the type of thing that happened to cowboys or specifically, between cowboys. How did he fall in love with a man? Though Jack had never uttered that word to Ennis, it was clear that love was exactly what they were experiencing.

"Oh my, Ennis, I love this meal! You can cook breakfast for me anytime." exclaimed Mrs. Twist. Jack's mother was so unaccustomed to such gallantry that she was positively giddy from the attention. "Mr. Twist was just sayin' he needed another hand to help with the farm and I can certainly use the help around here. Won't you stay a spell? I'm sure Jack would be happy to share his room with you."
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: louisev on November 25, 2007, 06:52:32 pm
No one is being asked to delete their stories.  Please see your private messages if you have received them, and the notice by Phillip about our advertiser guidelines:

http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,15157.msg292364.html#msg292364

If you have questions about our advertiser guidelines they can be addressed in the Town Hall.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 25, 2007, 09:59:36 pm
I thought this was supposed to be a safe place where we could express ourselves freely without having to worry about what the homophobes and trolls think.  

BBM is a story about two men who found themselves at odds with the mores and customs of the culture in which they lived.  I thought that those of us who are devoted fans of this film universally acknowledge that social standards are not always right, and that those standards should always be closely examined, and sometimes directly challenged.  But it seems some people would rather accept the standards and censor their fellows than stand up for what is right.

How ironic that BBM itself would be censored here at a site dedicated to its message.

Gary    

I think they just want us to clean them up, or move them somewhere else.  I have deleted 2 of my offending stories and will modify the other.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 25, 2007, 10:00:14 pm
No one is being asked to delete their stories.  Please see your private messages if you have received them, and the notice by Phillip about our advertiser guidelines:

http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,15157.msg292364.html#msg292364

If you have questions about our advertiser guidelines they can be addressed in the Town Hall.

Louise, do you think there will be others?  I mean, is the "audit" complete?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: louisev on November 25, 2007, 10:33:39 pm
The only items that need to be addressed are the ones users have received private messages about.  We are not planning a comprehensive review of the entire history of the thread.  So yes, the 'audit' is complete.

We are asking all authors to please in the future post any explicit stories on an external site and link them here so that we don't have any controversies arise with our advertisers.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on November 25, 2007, 10:45:57 pm
Our dearest BetterMost Moderators,
I would have to be incredibly ungrateful not to comply with your simple and reasonable request. I will modify the content of those two stories right away. Thank you so much for letting us know how to link to our more explict stories for the readers that would like to access that material.
Very best regards,
Toycoon
Title: Right (45)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 25, 2007, 10:54:05 pm
Right (45) By Littlewing1957

Mr. Twist listened to his wife invite Ennis to stay.  He was fine with it, but had to object to him sharing a room with Jack.  He wasn’t a Christian man in the strict sense, but he couldn’t allow Ennis and Jack to room up together.  He would object to Jack sharing a room with anyone – male or female.  Mr. Twist hated to seem selfish, but he would offer Ennis the basement for the duration of his stay.  Ennis wouldn’t get any rest if he were to share Jack’s room.  What good would he be around the place if he wasn’t well rested?

“Uh, Jack, your room is too small.  Why don’t you show Ennis the basement?  It’s warm and dry, and there is a small bed down there for him to sleep on.  I just re-did the basement a few months ago, and I’m sure Ennis will be comfortable there.”  Jack looked at his friend and shrugged.  He knew his father suspected something, and wanted to keep them apart, especially at night.  Mrs. Twist said nothing, as she thought Ennis might be better off in the basement.  Ennis couldn’t say anything.  He was grateful for the offer, and knew that he and Jack always had the tree house for trysts.  “Jack, go show Ennis the basement."  Mr. Twist ordered as he left the room. “Make him comfortable!” 

“C’mon Ennis,” Jack began as he moved toward the back of the tiny house.  “We’ll get you set up down there in no time.”  Ennis followed Ennis out back and they climbed down the few steps to the basement.  Mr. Twist was right – it looked newly painted, and was very clean and dry.  The tiny bed was against the far wall, and Ennis was delighted to see a hutch with a mirror and a chest of drawers.  Mr. Twist even added a small toilet, hidden behind a heavy curtain.  Ennis thought that for now, the digs were more than adequate.  He looked at jack and smiled.  “This will do just fine, Jack!  I think I’ll be very comfortable here.”  Jack nodded and sat down on the twin sized bed.  “Well, I’m glad you like it, but I was hoping we could share a room.”  Ennis walked over to his friend and took his hand.  “Don’t sweat it, Bud,” He whispered.  “We can find ways to be together in between all the work.  We’ll find time, believe me.”  Jack smiled and offered Ennis a tender kiss before he led him back into the house.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 25, 2007, 11:02:08 pm
Our dearest BetterMost Moderators,
I would have to be incredibly ungrateful not to comply with your simple and reasonable request. I will modify the content of those two stories right away. Thank you so much for letting us know how to link to our more explict stories for the readers that would like to access that material.
Very best regards,
Toycoon

I second this!  I have deleted the explicit stories and am happy to find that the 3rd is okay. 
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: louisev on November 25, 2007, 11:11:17 pm
We are doing our best to make sure there is as little impact as possible to your creative efforts.  If anyone would like to be helped through the process of externally hosting your content we would be glad to 'rescue' any threads you like and get them over to Livejournal or Divshare for you.  The goal is not to get people to stop posting or to delete their work, but to make sure we comply with our advertising obligations.  Thank you for your understanding.
Title: Re: Right (45)
Post by: Toycoon on November 25, 2007, 11:13:22 pm
Quote
Ennis walked over to his friend and took his hand.  “Don’t sweat it, Bud,” He whispered.  “We can find ways to be together in between all the work.  We’ll find time, believe me.”  Jack smiled and offered Ennis a tender kiss before he led him back into the house.

Littlewing,
So beautiful! This is the first time I've shed a tear over this saga in a while. Thank you.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on November 26, 2007, 12:40:12 am
We are doing our best to make sure there is as little impact as possible to your creative efforts.  If anyone would like to be helped through the process of externally hosting your content we would be glad to 'rescue' any threads you like and get them over to Livejournal or Divshare for you.  The goal is not to get people to stop posting or to delete their work, but to make sure we comply with our advertising obligations.  Thank you for your understanding.

Thank you for sayin' so, Louise.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on November 26, 2007, 05:10:00 am
I have deleted those of my stories that contain mature content which could be in violation of our contract with Google.

I have been asked to delete (or remove) a story that is in my opinion a tender piece about two men who are deeply in love with each other and have come to a point in their relationship where they fully trust each other. This is something I would have wished for Jack and Ennis. I'm not allowed to write about it? Okay then. This place is not different to all the other places obviously.

I'll go on reading, and commenting, Littlewing, Toycoon, Susie, or whoever wants to write a story here, but I don't feel like writing anymore. I would leave Bettermost if I hadn't made friends here. It's because of you guys that I stay.

I will miss your stories, Gary, but I understand.

Dagi
Title: Re: Right (43)
Post by: Dagi on November 26, 2007, 06:26:48 am
Right (43) By Littlewing1957

Mr. Twist knew full well that the boys were just returning, but refused to make an issue of it.  He couldn’t image them going off somewhere to get physical – no, Old Man Twist’s mind wouldn’t picture it.  He liked to think that Ennis and Jack drove into town to catch up and talk about their summer on the mountain; even their lives after the job ended.   Mr. Twist had to believe that they got caught up in talk and lost track of time.  “Uh no, pa,” Jack began, looking to Ennis for confirmation.  “No, sir,” Ennis stammered, looking at Jack.  “We just came down to see if you needed any help around the ranch.”  A likely story!  Mr. Twist thought as he studied the young men standing before him.  He didn’t know Ennis from Adam, but he could tell when someone was lying to him.  “Well, just sit tight and your ma will be down to get your breakfast. Then we’ll talk about you two helping out around here.” 

Ennis watched Mr. Twist leave through the front door, and turned to Jack.  Ennis noticed that Jack was trembling, and placed a calming hand on his shoulder.  “I’m sorry, Jack!”  Ennis began.  “Bud, I’m not doin’ anything but causing trouble for you.  Maybe I shouldn’t have come!”  Jack shook his head and rubbed Ennis’ cheek.  “Don’t talk like that Friend!”  He whispered.  “You know I’m glad you’re here.  My pa wasn’t angry, and in his own way, invited you to stay with us a bit.  C’mon, let’s go get cleaned up and my ma will fix us a bite to eat.  What ya say?”  Ennis smiled at his friend and nodded.  “I guess so!  But I want to make breakfast for you and your parents.  Will you let me do that?”  Jack chuckled softly.  “Ennis Del Mar wants to stand in my ma’s kitchen and fix breakfast?”  Ennis grinned self consciously.  “Well, we’d be delighted, sir!”  Jack smiled as he bowed low before his friend.  They ran upstairs to Jack’s room to get cleaned up.

Mrs. Twist watched, fascinated, as Ennis moved around her kitchen like a pro.  He donned one of her best aprons and poured her a cup of coffee.  He made a morning meal of pancakes, scrambled eggs, freshly squeezed orange juice and bacon.  Mrs. Twist sighed with pleasure as she tasted Ennis' perfectly brewed java.  Jack attacked his breakfast with gusto, while his ma sat beside him and ate the expertly prepared meal.  Jack made a mental note to ask Ennis where he learned to cook like that!  When Old Man Twist entered the kitchen, he observed the spread and sat down at the table.  “Ma, you outdid yourself this morning,” Mr. Twist stated as he placed a few pancakes on his plate.  “Uh, pa,” Jack mumbled, his mouth full of eggs, “Ennis cooked this morning.”  Mr. Twist grimaced as he helped himself to a few slices of bacon.  Ennis watched in silence as Jack’s pa tasted his food.  “Well, I’ve tasted better, and by my own hand!”  The old man exclaimed.  “But this is good, young man!”  Ennis and Jack exhaled almost in unison.  “Sit yourself down and eat, Ennis.”  Mrs. Twist offered as she continued to devour her breakfast.  “And thanks so much for cooking for us.  A woman sure can get used to this.”  Jack smiled at his mother and stole a glance at his friend.  He noticed that Ennis was absolutely beaming with pride, and something that looked like relief.  Ennis' growing comfort was a beautiful thing to see, Jack thought.  Mr. Twist finished his meal in silence, and after everyone was full, he sat very still and watched as Ennis and Jack cleared away the dishes.  “Young fella,”  Mr. Twist addressed Ennis.  “You’re pretty handy with a spatula.  How are you at handling a hammer?  I need help with the barn.” 




this reminds me that I hadn´t had breakfast today! :laugh: What would I give for a breakfast made by Ennis...you and food, Littlewing! Delicious! And I start liking this grumpy OMT!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: louisev on November 26, 2007, 12:04:35 pm
If you take a short tour of the Fan Fiction forum here, you will see that the vast majority of writing that is posted is hosted by Livejournal or fanfiction.net.  This is the norm for all fan fiction that is posted for BBM, because a good deal of it is explicit, and has been assumed that on a public board made available to children (this forum is not restricted to adults) it is considered both polite and cautious to do so.  We have never felt the need to impose any restrictions in this way, nor do we object to the posting of whole short stories on the Fan Fiction forum, however.

Our concern is strictly limited to the advertising restrictions outlined by GoogleAds.  Without advertising, Bettermost would not be here, because donations given by members are not adequate to sustain the cost of running the site.  While it would be wonderful to envision a future without the restrictions of advertising, that is not possible at present.  No one has been criticized for their stories - but we have politely (and privately) asked for some recent stories that are particularly graphic, to be externally hosted so as not to run into difficulties.

It is unfortunate that most of the authors have decided instead to delete their work instead of providing links.  We have offered repeatedly to help with the technicalities.  It is not difficult to do.  We are asking authors to recognize the contractual limitation we are under, rather than to characterize this as some sort of censorship attempt.  It is not.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 26, 2007, 02:36:18 pm
I think it's going to be down to littlewing and toycoon to keep this thread alive then ... can't say that I feel like writing much at the moment either.   :'(

I'm glad you guys are here :-*

{{{{{Dagi}}}}}
{{{{{Gary}}}}}
{{{{{Littlewing}}}}}
{{{{{Toycoon}}}}}

(http://bestsmileys.com/hugging/6.gif)



Love Susie  :)

Oh come on, SusieBaby!  In time you'll feel differently, I'm sure.  Please don't give up on writing.  I enjoy reading your stories!
Title: Re: Right (45)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 26, 2007, 02:37:15 pm
Littlewing,
So beautiful! This is the first time I've shed a tear over this saga in a while. Thank you.

Thanks, Toycoon!  I can't wait to read your next offering!  We gotta keep this thread alive!  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 26, 2007, 02:39:08 pm
Dear fellow fanfic writers,

I have decided that I will no longer write fanfiction.  If you care to know why you can read my explanation in my new blog in the "Our Daily Thoughts" section.  It's titled "Becoming Myself, Finally."  (Feel free to comment there if you wish.)

I want to thank you for being so receptive and supportive of my efforts here.  And I promise I am not leaving you behind.  I will continue to follow your stories and post comments.

I have come to think of you as part of my family, and I hope to keep you close.

Love,
Gary

Please reconsider, Gary.  You're too fine a fanfic writer to give it up completely.  I enjoy reading your stories too much to be without them.  Oh well, just as long as you're here with us, reading and commenting, I guess I'll be satisfied. 
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 26, 2007, 02:42:08 pm
I have deleted those of my stories that contain mature content which could be in violation of our contract with Google.

I have been asked to delete (or remove) a story that is in my opinion a tender piece about two men who are deeply in love with each other and have come to a point in their relationship where they fully trust each other. This is something I would have wished for Jack and Ennis. I'm not allowed to write about it? Okay then. This place is not different to all the other places obviously.

I'll go on reading, and commenting, Littlewing, Toycoon, Susie, or whoever wants to write a story here, but I don't feel like writing anymore. I would leave Bettermost if I hadn't made friends here. It's because of you guys that I stay.

I will miss your stories, Gary, but I understand.

Dagi

Dagi, please!  I hope you'll change your mind about writing.  And please, no more talk about leaving.  Hey, I'm a bit gun shy about writing, as well, but I enjoy it too much to give up.  I understand your decision, but I'm hoping with time you'll change your mind.  At least you'll be here reading and commenting, which means a lot to me!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: moremojo on November 26, 2007, 03:05:50 pm
Sorry to hear about all the recent troubles, friends. I too now feel wary about contributing new stories to this thread, because I will always be questioning "how far is too far". This thread's raison d'etre is to write stories involving Ennis and Jack in some kind of romantic and/or erotic scenario. How are we to judge when something becomes too "erotic" for the public standards of the site? In essence, we are being asked to employ self-censorship in our writing, and that definitely feels like a burden to me. I'm not sure I will be participating anymore other than as a reader and commentator.

Peace to all (and I hope everyone had a pleasant and safe holiday [grazie, Marie!]--I for one did),

Scott
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 26, 2007, 03:09:03 pm
Sorry to hear about all the recent troubles, friends. I too now feel wary about contributing new stories to this thread, because I will always be questioning "how far is too far". This thread's raison d'etre is to write stories involving Ennis and Jack in some kind of romantic and/or erotic scenario. How are we to judge when something becomes too "erotic" for the public standards of the site? In essence, we are being asked to employ self-censorship in our writing, and that definitely feels like a burden to me. I'm not sure I will be participating anymore other than as a reader and commentator.

Peace to all (and I hope everyone had a pleasant and safe holiday [grazie, Marie!]--I for one did),

Scott

I know how you feel, Moremojo.  How romantic is too romantic?  I suppose I'll firgure it out. Moremojo, please continue to write for us.  I'll really miss your stories.  But if you can't find your way to contribute, I'm relieved to read that you'll at least read and continue to comment. 
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: louisev on November 26, 2007, 03:40:17 pm
I am posting my reply to Scott"s message on the Daily Thoughts forum to here for clarification.

see revised guidelines on the Fan Fiction forum:

http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,3427.msg62465.html#msg62465

The short answer, Scott, is use your best judgement going forward, and if there is something that has lengthy sex described in the story, or if the story itself is just about the sex scene, then we are asking you to help us meet our advertiser's standards by hosting it and linking it.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on November 26, 2007, 04:25:31 pm
Dagi, please!  I hope you'll change your mind about writing.  And please, no more talk about leaving.  Hey, I'm a bit gun shy about writing, as well, but I enjoy it too much to give up.  I understand your decision, but I'm hoping with time you'll change your mind.  At least you'll be here reading and commenting, which means a lot to me!

I've not yet made up my mind. I think I'll stay to read and comment, and I thank you for writing, Marie.  :)

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: moremojo on November 26, 2007, 07:12:36 pm
After  having read the revised 'Welcome from the New FanFiction Moderators'...:

http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,3427.0.html (http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,3427.0.html)

...there seems to be no point in continuing on with this thread, at least as it was originally envisioned, as the thread's very nature (each story, theoretically, involving Jack and Ennis together in a sexual and/or romantic scenario) seems to be in opposition to the currently stated rules. One could still submit stories elsewhere in cyberspace, and provide the links in this thread, but that somehow seems redundant and even downright silly to me personally (don't mean to discourage anyone else from doing so).

How can we even discuss the graphic incidents in the original story and film, let alone let our imaginations wander anew onto unmapped and idiosyncratic sensual paths? I suppose the thread can remain as it is (along with the archived version), but I for one see no other option but to bow out, as gracefully as possible, as a continuing and active contributor of new stories.

It was fun while it lasted...and I hope no friendship has been ruptured over the heat and hurt of recent events.

Peace to everyone,
Erstwhile author Scott
Title: Re: Right (23)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 27, 2007, 12:19:27 am
I think Ennis would bring out the mother in all of us.  Lovely honey!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Thanks for your comments, Susiebaby.  You have quite a few chapters to go, honey!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 27, 2007, 12:27:33 am
After  having read the revised 'Welcome from the New FanFiction Moderators'...:

http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,3427.0.html (http://bettermost.net/forum/index.php/topic,3427.0.html)

...there seems to be no point in continuing on with this thread, at least as it was originally envisioned, as the thread's very nature (each story, theoretically, involving Jack and Ennis together in a sexual and/or romantic scenario) seems to be in opposition to the currently stated rules. One could still submit stories elsewhere in cyberspace, and provide the links in this thread, but that somehow seems redundant and even downright silly to me personally (don't mean to discourage anyone else from doing so).

How can we even discuss the graphic incidents in the original story and film, let alone let our imaginations wander anew onto unmapped and idiosyncratic sensual paths? I suppose the thread can remain as it is (along with the archived version), but I for one see no other option but to bow out, as gracefully as possible, as a continuing and active contributor of new stories.

It was fun while it lasted...and I hope no friendship has been ruptured over the heat and hurt of recent events.

Peace to everyone,
Erstwhile author Scott

Scott, I read the guidelines and the way I see it, we're not to post stories that are ponographic in nature PWP.  I believe we can write stories of a romantic nature.  Am I right? If so, won't you reconsider and write something for us?  :)
Title: I'm Losing Him?
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 27, 2007, 01:00:58 am
I'm Losing Him? By Littlewing1957

Jack watched Ennis drive away.  He looked at his bare hands and wondered how much longer he could continue on with the relationship.  He was not an old man, but 16 years of meeting secretly without hope of anything tangible, solid, was dissolving him from the inside out.  Jack thought he was looking older than his years, and for the first time in many years thought he deserved better.

Ennis drove away from Jack Twist and didn't look back.  Ennis prided himself on knowing his friend, and something about the way Jack behaved disturbed him.  They fought many times over the years, but this time Ennis felt a falling away: a distance, a gulf widening between them.  It frightened him.  “I can’t be losing him!”  Ennis thought as he looked in the rear view mirror.  He wanted to catch one last glimpse of his bud, but Jack was nowhere in sight.  “If I had any courage I would turn right back around and make things right.”  But Ennis knew he would never turn his truck around and intercept Jack.  What will be will be.

Jack drove back to Texas in turmoil.  What to do?  He could always meet Ennis again in November---November—not August, and carry on as though everything was just fine.  Or he could reach out to someone else; someone he didn’t love, but who was willing and accessible.  Jack listened to his favorite Willie Nelson tape to ease his journey home.  He vowed right then and there that if he survived, he would make a change.
Title: Re: I'm Losing Him?
Post by: Toycoon on November 27, 2007, 01:58:55 am
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Jack watched Ennis drive away.  He looked at his bare hands and wondered how much longer he could continue on with the relationship.  He was not an old man, but 16 years of meeting secretly without hope of anything tangible, solid, was dissolving him from the inside out.  Jack thought he was looking older than his years, and for the first time in many years thought he deserved better.

Really strong, powerful words, Littlewing. For the first time in a long while, I'm a little scared.
Title: Re: I'm Losing Him?
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 27, 2007, 02:03:15 am
Really strong, powerful words, Littlewing. For the first time in a long while, I'm a little scared.

Thanks, Toycoon.  It is a bit scary, isn't it?
Title: Re: I'm Losing Him?
Post by: Dagi on November 27, 2007, 04:16:02 am
I'm Losing Him? By Littlewing1957

 Jack listened to his favorite Willie Nelson tape to ease his journey home.  He vowed right then and there that if he survived, he would make a change.


 :( Heartbreaking. There's no way out, huh? I can't blame neither of them. Ennis for not being more courageous, Jack for wanting more... You perfectly captured both sides of the medal. Great writing, Marie, as always.

Dagi
Title: Re: I'm Losing Him?
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 27, 2007, 09:13:00 pm
Oh so beautiful and so sad ... you've captured that moment by the lake perfectly  :'( :'(

(http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s31/Susiebell_album/BBM/brokebackmtn_3419.jpg)(http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s31/Susiebell_album/BBM/brokebackmtn_3473.jpg)(http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s31/Susiebell_album/BBM/brokebackmtn_3475.jpg)



Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Awww thanks for the beautiful pics, Susiebaby!  :-*
Title: Re: Right (45)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 27, 2007, 09:33:04 pm
Hello Littlewing and Toycoon,

Wow!  I am really struck by the fact that Ennis is being put down in the basement.  That's kind of the way I've been feeling lately.  It's like I've been told that I can stay, but I have to sleep down in the basement because I'm not really good enough to be around decent folk.  I wonder when Ennis, and the rest of us, will be allowed upstairs.

Gary

Awww, sugarboo, don't mind it!  We're all feeling a bit down, but everything will be okay.  If we didn't have hard times, we couldn't appreciate the good times.  Just you wait: we'll be back to normal, and will be happy again.  Until that happens, I'll post as many heartwarming, uplifting, AU stories as I can.  As Maria says, "Cheer up, chippermonkey!"  We'll get through this.
Title: Re: I'm Losing Him?
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 27, 2007, 09:34:59 pm
Very heart-rending stuff, Littlewing.  I'm wondering if your anguish over recent events is showing up in your writing.  The sadness and sense of loss in your story is something I've been feeling a lot lately.

Gary

Yeah, I'm feeling a bit blue, but I'm coming out of it. 
Title: Re: I'm Losing Him?
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 27, 2007, 09:43:53 pm
Me too honey ... but that's why I'm so happy to have you guys here with me!! We'll get through this together  :-*

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


Thanks, Susie.  You're so very sweet!  You're my girl!  :-*
Title: Baby Steps
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 27, 2007, 10:21:13 pm
Baby Steps by Littlewing1957

Extreme AU, a BBM Slice of Life

Ennis and Jack were both kneeling on their rose colored carpet, beckoning Baby Indigo to amble over to them. 

“Nine months already!” Jack mused as he watched his daughter move with her baby walker.

“I know!”  Ennis enthused as he held a steady hand out to the baby.  “Where did the time go?”  Jack smiled and shook his head.

“We both have older kids,” Ennis began, "But I can’t get used to how fast they grow up!” 

Jack felt his eyes stinging at the mention of the older kids.  He saw Bobby quite often, and had a good relationship with him, but Bobby lived many miles away in Texas, and only visited Wyoming once or twice a year.  Ennis was a bit more fortunate.  His girls lived nearby and were always over for a visit.  Jack shook away the gloomy thoughts.  He couldn’t be happier with his life, and cherished his new family.  Besides, Bobby was just a phone call away.

“C’mon, baby,” Ennis coaxed his child as she moved toward him.  He was so glad Alma Jr. recommended the baby walker.  Jack went right out and bought the little plastic walker when his step daughter assured him that Baby Indigo would be walking in no time if she had help.  When Ennis first placed his child behind the brightly colored plastic device, she wasted no time in pulling herself up, and Ennis helped her fix her tiny hands on either side of the handles.  She pushed the walker tentatively, and allowed her small feet to move; first one, and then the other.  Jack and Ennis didn’t push her, but wanted her to use the walker on her own terms, at her own pace.  Weeks passed, and she started to use the baby walker like a little pro. 

Baby Indigo was moving closer, and just when she was about a foot away from her daddies, Indigo pushed the walker away and ran the remaining few steps to Jack.

“C’mon Indigo!”  Jack laughed as he caught his daughter in his arms.  She giggled and wrapped her chubby arms around daddy Jack's shoulders and kissed his cheek.  Baby Indigo was beaming: obviously proud of her accomplishment!  Ennis laughed with delight, and refused to hide his tears as he rubbed his child's thick brown hair. 

“Her first steps!”  Jack whispered as he placed a tender kiss on his daughter’s cheek.  “Aww Ennis, I’m so glad you were here to see it!”  Jack looked into his husband's eyes, and noticed the tears forming there, threatening to fall.

“Yes!”  Ennis whispered, too moved to say anything else.  He pulled his family close and held them both. 

“Baby steps!”  Jack stated as he snuggled with those he loved.  “Just you wait, En!” Jack began.  “Soon she’ll be running around here destroying everything in her path.”  Ennis laughed and kissed his daughter on her rosy cheek. 

"You may be right Jack.  I think you're right."

 
Title: Re: I'm Losing Him?
Post by: Toycoon on November 28, 2007, 02:16:56 am
Yeah, I'm feeling a bit blue, but I'm coming out of it. 

Hey there gang,
I'm feeling a little sad as of late, too. Maybe it's the approaching holidays. Perhaps, it's just the weather. Oh well...

I have more up my sleeve, you'll see. Gary, please don't feel bad or singled out. We had a crazy run both here and on IMDb, remember. Somehow, everything will work out, it always does. Life is funny that way. Trust me, it could be far worse.

Dagi, Susiebell, don't you dare go anywhere.
Littlewing1957, I have more to add to our saga, "Right" but I'm too tired to write tonight.
Title: Re: Right (45)
Post by: Dagi on November 28, 2007, 05:55:30 am
Hello Littlewing and Toycoon,

Wow!  I am really struck by the fact that Ennis is being put down in the basement.  That's kind of the way I've been feeling lately.  It's like I've been told that I can stay, but I have to sleep down in the basement because I'm not really good enough to be around decent folk.  I wonder when Ennis, and the rest of us, will be allowed upstairs.

Gary

 :-\ I can relate. It's the second time we are involved when it's about something inappropriate...

Dagi
Title: Re: Right (45)
Post by: Dagi on November 28, 2007, 05:58:19 am
Awww, sugarboo, don't mind it!  We're all feeling a bit down, but everything will be okay.  If we didn't have hard times, we couldn't appreciate the good times.  Just you wait: we'll be back to normal, and will be happy again.  Until that happens, I'll post as many heartwarming, uplifting, AU stories as I can.  As Maria says, "Cheer up, chippermonkey!"  We'll get through this.

Have I told you that I love you, Marie? Well, I do! Love you!

Dagi
Title: Re: Baby Steps
Post by: Dagi on November 28, 2007, 06:03:00 am
Baby Steps by Littlewing1957



 :D Thanks for this heartwarming little piece, Marie! That was exactly what I needed right now!

Dagi
Title: Re: I'm Losing Him?
Post by: Dagi on November 28, 2007, 06:06:22 am
Hey there gang,
I'm feeling a little sad as of late, too. Maybe it's the approaching holidays. Perhaps, it's just the weather. Oh well...

I have more up my sleeve, you'll see. Gary, please don't feel bad or singled out. We had a crazy run both here and on IMDb, remember. Somehow, everything will work out, it always does. Life is funny that way. Trust me, it could be far worse.

Dagi, Susiebell, don't you dare go anywhere.
Littlewing1957, I have more to add to our saga, "Right" but I'm too tired to write tonight.

Don't worry, I ain't going nowhere. I could never leave you guys. It's because of you that I started writing, it's because of you that I came here, it's because of you that I stay. I'm not a quitter.  :)

Dagi
Title: Re: I'm Losing Him?
Post by: Dagi on November 28, 2007, 06:08:33 am
REPORTING FOR DUTY ... SIR!!   (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/14/14_2_104.gif)    (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/14/14_4_103.gif)   (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/1026.gif)   (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/14/14_6_18.gif)

 ;D

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

Title: Re: Right (45)
Post by: Toycoon on November 28, 2007, 02:44:41 pm
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I can relate. It's the second time we are involved when it's about something inappropriate...
Dagi

Ha ha! :laugh: You guys got in trouble, again!
Title: Re: I'm Losing Him?
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 29, 2007, 12:33:03 am
Hi Toycoon,

Thanks so much for your supportive statements here and on my blog.  I'm sure I'll get over my hurt feelings soon enough.  I have gotten over far worse.  Sorry if I've been a bother.   :)  It's good to know that we're all still together in spire of everything at least.

Gary

You're never a bother.  Just remember, we'll be here for you!  :-*
Title: Re: Baby Steps
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 29, 2007, 12:34:09 am
Awwwww sweetie... what a lovely heartwarming story ... I remember all my kiddies first steps, brought tears of joy to my eyes too.  And now look, my daughter's oogling over Daniel Radcliffe and Zak Efron ( My little girl still thinks all boys are stupid!!) and  my son's giggling over semi naked women on the telly!!!

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)


I know what you're saying, SusieBaby!  My Maria will be leaving home in a year's time.  It seems as though it was just yesterday that she was a babe in my arms!
Title: Re: Right (45)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 29, 2007, 12:34:40 am
Have I told you that I love you, Marie? Well, I do! Love you!

Dagi

I love you, too!  :-*
Title: Re: I'm Losing Him?
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 29, 2007, 12:35:37 am
Don't worry, I ain't going nowhere. I could never leave you guys. It's because of you that I started writing, it's because of you that I came here, it's because of you that I stay. I'm not a quitter.  :)

Dagi

That's the spirit, Dagi.  I'm not leaving here, no way.  I could never leave my family!
Title: Re: Inappropriate
Post by: cwby30 on November 29, 2007, 12:57:40 am
Evenin'.

Well, I don't drop by for a few days and miss all the fun.  Read through the postings... Guess sanitizing is the name of the game. Instead of the actual scene, do we have to just have the waves crash over the lovers kissing on the sand at the beach, and fade to black, and fade in to them lying in each other's arms saying how great it was?!

Wonder if I could post passages from Lady Chatterley's Lover, or Catcher in the Rye, and not get bounced?!  Or maybe Catcher in the Rye with Jack and Ennis catching each other in the rye, and the barley, and the corn, and the wheat, and the ... 

Anyone have a connection with the Bill Gates Foundation, to apply for a grant to fund the forum for a year? No advertisers, no worrying about offending them. 

No time to leave, only time to keep on posting and see what the real limits are.  And to enjoy each other's writings and company.

Illegitimi non carborundum. 

Thanks again. 
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: louisev on November 29, 2007, 01:01:23 am
Hi cwby30, I hope that with the understanding of our contractual relationship with our advertisers you will review the revised guidelines of the forum and host any mature content on Livejournal or Divshare - all stories of all levels of maturity are welcome, but the more mature material please link from an external site.  Thank you for your understanding.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on November 29, 2007, 01:08:55 am
Hey there Miss LauraGigs! Ain't seen you around these parts in a long time. How ya been?
Title: Re: Inappropriate, redux
Post by: cwby30 on November 29, 2007, 02:06:16 am
Evenin', Gary.

Well, guess I can do that, like they do in threads devoted to a particular story or author's stories.  Still, it takes away from this thread, to a degree.  And one person's graphic is another person's NC-17. 

Maybe I'll write something about beaches, like Marl did with The Journey, but more along the lines of From Here to Eternity ["From Jack to Eternity"].  Now that would be a challenge.  Hmmm.  Hawaii, a deserted beach, two soldiers on leave, one on the Air Station staff the other an airplane mechanic, finding a friend where none expected, a tent on the beach, campfire in the sand, whiskey, moonlight, crashing waves of passion, heat from more than the topical weather, awakened by the attack, war, forced apart to fight the war, meeting again on that same beach four years later, love rekindled, staying in Hawaii, starting an inter-island air charter service... Hmmm...

Thanks again.
Title: Re: Inappropriate, redux
Post by: Toycoon on November 29, 2007, 02:11:04 am
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From Here to Eternity ["From Jack to Eternity"].  Now that would be a challenge.  Hmmm.  Hawaii, a deserted beach, two soldiers on leave, one on the Air Station staff the other an airplane mechanic, finding a friend where none expected, a tent on the beach, campfire in the sand, whiskey, moonlight, crashing waves of passion, heat from more than the topical weather, awakened by the attack, war, forced apart to fight the war, meeting again on that same beach four years later, love rekindled, staying in Hawaii, starting an inter-island air charter service... Hmmm...

Sounds great! Post it, we'll read it...
Title: Re: Inappropriate
Post by: cwby30 on November 29, 2007, 03:19:33 am
Evenin', ya'll.

Well, now, "if you post it they will read."  Guess I've gone and done it again.  Can't promise anything soon; have to post in Circle JE Ranch first, but after that... Hmmmm.  This idea's got me good.

Thanks again... I think.
Title: Re: Right
Post by: cwby30 on November 29, 2007, 08:49:54 pm
Afternoon, folks.

Well, not to be pushy, but now that we've had time to take a breath [and I did read the revised Rules and know the score now, and will abide by them], I hope our indomitable authors toycoon and littlewing1957 will be able to pick up their great story and continue on.  Would be a shame not to.  Besides, I like it.  According to my notes, it's toycoon's turn to let us know what happened when Jack led Ennis back into the house from the basement. 

Pushy, pushy, I know.  If it would help, I can offer a personal recipe for a great cocktail variation on a Cosmopolitan. 

Thanks again. 
Title: Re: I'm Losing Him?
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 29, 2007, 10:58:48 pm
Thank you, Littlewing.  I know I can always count on you.

Hey, I've not been paying much attention to IMDb, but I was told today that you've not been posting over there very much because that troll has latched onto you and attacks everything you say.  I'm sorry you're having so much trouble with that guy.  I wish I knew of a way to get him off your back.

Don't take what he says to heart.  There really is something wrong with him.

Gary

Thanks, Gary.  I've noticed that the particular troll is sort of behaving himself (sort of) and I feel led to start posting again.  I've posted a few things these past few days.  I really appreciate your encouragement.  Gary I must tell you: I just got home from a very exhausting day at work only to have a sick child to take care of.  And ss soon as I hit the door my mom tells me a childhood friend who lives around the corner just found her mom dead.  I can't deal with much more.  But then I read your sweet message and I'm lifted.  You have made by night!  I love you Gary.  You're good for me and I'll always cherish the day you came into my life!
Title: Re: Right (45)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 29, 2007, 10:59:42 pm
You're so sweet, Littlewing.  You know, I've never been called a sugarboo or a chippermonkey before.   ;D

Gary

 :laugh:  :laugh: Believe me, they're affectionate terms!  :laugh:
Title: Re: Inappropriate, redux
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 29, 2007, 11:02:00 pm
Evenin', Gary.


Maybe I'll write something about beaches, like Marl did with The Journey, but more along the lines of From Here to Eternity ["From Jack to Eternity"].  Now that would be a challenge.  Hmmm.  Hawaii, a deserted beach, two soldiers on leave, one on the Air Station staff the other an airplane mechanic, finding a friend where none expected, a tent on the beach, campfire in the sand, whiskey, moonlight, crashing waves of passion, heat from more than the topical weather, awakened by the attack, war, forced apart to fight the war, meeting again on that same beach four years later, love rekindled, staying in Hawaii, starting an inter-island air charter service... Hmmm...

Thanks again.

Well, I, for one, would love to read something like this!  :)
Title: Re: Right
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 29, 2007, 11:05:07 pm
Afternoon, folks.

Well, not to be pushy, but now that we've had time to take a breath [and I did read the revised Rules and know the score now, and will abide by them], I hope our indomitable authors toycoon and littlewing1957 will be able to pick up their great story and continue on.  Would be a shame not to.  Besides, I like it.  According to my notes, it's toycoon's turn to let us know what happened when Jack led Ennis back into the house from the basement. 

Pushy, pushy, I know.  If it would help, I can offer a personal recipe for a great cocktail variation on a Cosmopolitan. 

Thanks again. 

We're not done.  I'm so glad you like the series.  I'm sure Toycoon will post an installment very soon.  I really appreciate your encouragement and your support.
Title: I'm in Love
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 29, 2007, 11:28:55 pm
I'm in Love By Littlewing1957

“Are you in love?”

Ennis looked around for the soft, sweet, feminine voice but he didn’t see anyone.

“I’m over here, silly!”

The voice was closer now!  Ennis swung around toward the condiment aisle, and he saw her.  She was little more than a child, perhaps all of 16, and she was very petite and very beautiful.

“Are you talking to me?”  Ennis spoke to her with his head cocked to the side, not sure if he heard correctly.

“Yes, I mean you!”  The young lady laughed as she pointed a finger at Ennis Del Mar.  Ennis studied the child and wondered why young people these days were so forward.  Imagine approaching a man and asking him a question like that!

“I know that look!”  The young waif spoke as she studied Ennis right back.

“Oh and what do you know about it?”  Ennis asked her, his hands on his hips.

“I see the happiness on that handsome face of yours!”  The young lady spoke forcefully.  “He must be very good to you!”

 Ennis blushed.  He wasn’t angry, just taken completely by surprise.

“None of your business!”  Ennis laughed, and licked his tongue out at the girl in an exaggerated motion.  He beckoned the youngster to him and folded her in his arms.  It had been awhile since he laid eyes on Alma and Monroe’s daughter.

“Good to see you, Emma!”  Ennis whispered as he kissed her cheek.  "C’mon, let’s get out of here and I’ll buy you an ice cream!”  Emma beamed with pleasure and followed Ennis out of the market.
Title: Re: Right
Post by: Toycoon on November 29, 2007, 11:37:40 pm
We're not done.  I'm so glad you like the series.  I'm sure Toycoon will post an installment very soon.  I really appreciate your encouragement and your support.

Hey there cwby30,
I'm just about to post one now. Hope I don't mortify the readers too much with the new installment. It's kinda rough!
Title: Re: I'm in Love
Post by: Toycoon on November 29, 2007, 11:39:09 pm
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“I see the happiness on that handsome face of yours!”  The young lady spoke forcefully.  “He must be very good to you!”

So cute! Littlewing, you are really something.

Title: Right (46) by Toycoon
Post by: Toycoon on November 29, 2007, 11:40:02 pm
Right (46) by Toycoon

Ennis started up the basement steps with Jack a few steps behind him. He suddenly stopped at the top of the stairs and turned to Jack. A huge smile spread across his face. "Wha?" questioned Jack, grinning. "Well, I ain't never had a place of ma' own, never had a purmanet job. Now, I got both," he said sincerely. "I sure am glad I met you, Jack Twist." Jack looked down at the steps then back at Ennis' face. "C'mon buddy, we got a lotta work to do. You seen that yard? It's a mess!" Jack flipped off the basement light and closed the door.

The men walked back into the kitchen and Mrs. Twist informed them that Jack's father had gone out to the barn to gather up the tools. He wanted them to get started on rebuilding the barn. The barn had been in disrepair since Jack was a boy; becoming more and more dilapidated each year. In fact, Jack couldn't remember a time when it was in good condition.

Mr. Twist dragged out the sawhorses, the hand saw and two hammers then laid them on the ground next to the pile of lumber. He stood back with his hands on his hips and surveyed the work ahead. He recalled when the barn originally was built.

In the spring of 1933, John was ten years old. His mother had died of tuberculosis the winter before, so John's uncle and aunt moved in with them to help on the ranch. John was in awe of his uncle. Uncle Ted was a rodeo cowboy; charming and ruggedly handsome. Together with John's father, the two men built the barn in one month. When it came time to paint the barn, John was delighted that Uncle John sought his help.

John labored earnestly, painting most of the outside of the barn and getting himself covered with white paint in the process. He turned to his father and uncle for approval. "Ya done a good job. There's almost as much paint on you as there is on that barn." John's father and Uncle Ted laughed and dismissed John to take a bath. "And don't come back 'til yer good and clean, boy!"

John ran into the house, upstairs to the bathroom, got undressed, ran the warm water then stepped into the tub. A few minutes later, the bathroom door opened. It was Uncle Ted. He stepped in and walked towards John. "How's about Uncle Ted scrubbing ya up, nice and clean, huh?" Too startled to say anything, John stared straight ahead. Uncle Ted began to soap up John's back then started to fondle the boy. After that, Ted's secret visits to John in his bedroom became more frequent and more abusive. The pristine white barn that he was so proud of and helped his uncle build became a symbol of something John detested and could not bear to look at.



Title: Re: I'm in Love
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 30, 2007, 12:51:39 am
So cute! Littlewing, you are really something.



 :laugh:  :laugh: Thanks, Babe!
Title: Re: I'm Losing Him?
Post by: Dagi on November 30, 2007, 06:05:44 am
Thanks, Gary.  I've noticed that the particular troll is sort of behaving himself (sort of) and I feel led to start posting again.  I've posted a few things these past few days.  I really appreciate your encouragement.  Gary I must tell you: I just got home from a very exhausting day at work only to have a sick child to take care of.  And ss soon as I hit the door my mom tells me a childhood friend who lives around the corner just found her mom dead.  I can't deal with much more.  But then I read your sweet message and I'm lifted.  You have made by night!  I love you Gary.  You're good for me and I'll always cherish the day you came into my life!

Marie honey I´m so sorry to hear that you have to cope with so much. I´m thinking of you, sweetie, and although it might not help so much I send you lots and lots of positive energies and love!  :-* :-* :-*

Dagi
Title: Re: I'm in Love
Post by: Dagi on November 30, 2007, 02:45:41 pm
I'm in Love By Littlewing1957

“Are you in love?”

Ennis looked around for the soft, sweet, feminine voice but he didn’t see anyone.

“I’m over here, silly!”

The voice was closer now!  Ennis swung around toward the condiment aisle, and he saw her.  She was little more than a child, perhaps all of 16, and she was very petite and very beautiful.

“Are you talking to me?”  Ennis spoke to her with his head cocked to the side, not sure if he heard correctly.

“Yes, I mean you!”  The young lady laughed as she pointed a finger at Ennis Del Mar.  Ennis studied the child and wondered why young people these days were so forward.  Imagine approaching a man and asking him a question like that!

“I know that look!”  The young waif spoke as she studied Ennis right back.

“Oh and what do you know about it?”  Ennis asked her, his hands on his hips.

“I see the happiness on that handsome face of yours!”  The young lady spoke forcefully.  “He must be very good to you!”

 Ennis blushed.  He wasn’t angry, just taken completely by surprise.

“None of your business!”  Ennis laughed, and licked his tongue out at the girl in an exaggerated motion.  He beckoned the youngster to him and folded her in his arms.  It had been awhile since he laid eyes on Alma and Monroe’s daughter.

“Good to see you, Emma!”  Ennis whispered as he kissed her cheek.  "C’mon, let’s get out of here and I’ll buy you an ice cream!”  Emma beamed with pleasure and followed Ennis out of the market.


 ;D that´s what my face looks like after reading this story. Emma is what Ennis needs, what Ennis deserves. You have a big heart, Littlewing, and it´s shining bright right out of every story of yours!

Dagi
Title: Re: Right (46) by Toycoon
Post by: Dagi on November 30, 2007, 02:50:57 pm
Right (46) by Toycoon

Ennis started up the basement steps with Jack a few steps behind him. He suddenly stopped at the top of the stairs and turned to Jack. A huge smile spread across his face. "Wha?" questioned Jack, grinning. "Well, I ain't never had a place of ma' own, never had a purmanet job. Now, I got both," he said sincerely. "I sure am glad I met you, Jack Twist." Jack looked down at the steps then back at Ennis' face. "C'mon buddy, we got a lotta work to do. You seen that yard? It's a mess!" Jack flipped off the basement light and closed the door.

The men walked back into the kitchen and Mrs. Twist informed them that Jack's father had gone out to the barn to gather up the tools. He wanted them to get started on rebuilding the barn. The barn had been in disrepair since Jack was a boy; becoming more and more dilapidated each year. In fact, Jack couldn't remember a time when it was in good condition.

Mr. Twist dragged out the sawhorses, the hand saw and two hammers then laid them on the ground next to the pile of lumber. He stood back with his hands on his hips and surveyed the work ahead. He recalled when the barn originally was built.

In the spring of 1933, John was ten years old. His mother had died of tuberculosis the winter before, so John's uncle and aunt moved in with them to help on the ranch. John was in awe of his uncle. Uncle Ted was a rodeo cowboy; charming and ruggedly handsome. Together with John's father, the two men built the barn in one month. When it came time to paint the barn, John was delighted that Uncle John sought his help.

John labored earnestly, painting most of the outside of the barn and getting himself covered with white paint in the process. He turned to his father and uncle for approval. "Ya done a good job. There's almost as much paint on you as there is on that barn." John's father and Uncle Ted laughed and dismissed John to take a bath. "And don't come back 'til yer good and clean, boy!"

John ran into the house, upstairs to the bathroom, got undressed, ran the warm water then stepped into the tub. A few minutes later, the bathroom door opened. It was Uncle Ted. He stepped in and walked towards John. "How's about Uncle Ted scrubbing ya up, nice and clean, huh?" Too startled to say anything, John stared straight ahead. Uncle Ted began to soap up John's back then started to fondle the boy. After that, Ted's secret visits to John in his bedroom became more frequent and more abusive. The pristine white barn that he was so proud of and helped his uncle build became a symbol of something John detested and could not bear to look at.





Oh God this is awful. Just awful.  :(

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on November 30, 2007, 03:59:01 pm
Our dear Susie has computer problems at the moment, she has not given up on the thread! She might possibly stay off line over the weekend until the computer is fixed.  :'( I miss you Susie Baby!

Dagi  :-*
Title: Re: Right 46
Post by: cwby30 on November 30, 2007, 04:19:19 pm
Afternoon.

Well, glad to see another installment, but it was emotionally rough.  So young to be betrayed by a relative, but that's how it happens more often than not.  And recalling Jack's terror from when he was younger, it sounds like the abused became an abuser himself, also unfortunately what happens.  That explains some of OMT's reaction when he saw Jack and Ennis kissing on the porch.  Is he afraid that what he did turned Jack gay? Did he have an experience with another man and gave him up to do the right thing? Tough life for OMT, but that doesn't excuse him for what he did and is doing to his own son.

Keep it coming, have to read how this plays out. 

Thanks again. 
Title: Re: I'm Losing Him?
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 30, 2007, 07:08:19 pm
Aww Littlewing, I'm sorry to hear that you had such a bad day.  Those can be rough.  And it seems once the ball starts rolling you get hit with one thing right after another.  I'm glad I was able to help with a few words of encouragement.  That's all it takes most of the time.  Hope your daughter is feeling better, and I'm glad that troll is letting you post over at IMDb in peace.  You know that he only latched onto you because Clancy is no longer around.  The guy has serious problems.  Imagine the mentality of someone who does nothing but follow someone around the internet in order to say mean things.  The way this person is able to continue to pester people shows just how flawed the system is over at IMDb.

Hugs,
Gary

P.S.  I'm thankful that you're in my life, too, Littlewing.  I draw strength from your kindness and generosity.

Thanks, Gary, for your kind words.  Again, you have made my day!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 30, 2007, 07:08:46 pm
Hi guys.  I'll catch up on the board tomorrow.  I just wanted to tell Littlewing that I found and posted a video of "I Wonder as I Wander" for her in my Christmas songs thread at the polling place.   :D

Gary

Thanks, Gary!
Title: Re: I'm Losing Him?
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 30, 2007, 07:09:49 pm
Marie honey I´m so sorry to hear that you have to cope with so much. I´m thinking of you, sweetie, and although it might not help so much I send you lots and lots of positive energies and love!  :-* :-* :-*

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi!  Its been rough, but I'm getting through it!
Title: Re: I'm in Love
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 30, 2007, 07:11:37 pm
Very intriguing story, Littlewing.  The ending caught me by surprise.  So does Emma's statement meant that everything about Ennis is out in the open now?  And who is Ennis in love with?  If Jack is gone in your story, could he be in love with someone else?

Gary

This is sort of aan AU piece where Ennis and Jack are living openly as a couple.
Title: Re: I'm in Love
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 30, 2007, 07:12:36 pm
;D that´s what my face looks like after reading this story. Emma is what Ennis needs, what Ennis deserves. You have a big heart, Littlewing, and it´s shining bright right out of every story of yours!

Dagi

Dagi, you're so sweet to me.  Thanks so much!
Title: Right (47)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 30, 2007, 07:50:58 pm
Right (47) By Littlewing1957

John Twist wanted to spare his son from the hell he endured at his own uncle’s hand.  But John found his demons were in control, had the upper hand. 

John remembered fondly the first time he laid eyes on Roberta Townsend.  He was an usher at the Pentecostal Church where his family were founding members.  Mr. Townsend was a deacon at the church, and he made sure that his wife and 2 daughters attended service every Sunday.  John was just a boy when he first escorted Roberta to her seat.  He remembered her shy glances at his white gloved hand as he led her to her pew.  John thought Roberta was the prettiest thing he ever saw, with her long brown hair, expressive eyes, and thin, neat figure.  Just one glance and John knew he had found a wife, a companion for life!  He had a feeling that Roberta was fond of him, and that he could convince Mr. Townsend to let him spend a bit of time with her.  John graduated high school 3 years before Roberta did, and neither had plans to further their education.  Once Roberta earned her high school diploma, John asked her pa for her hand in marriage.  John and Roberta were married in the Pentecostal Church, and Jack came along some 2 years later.

John cringed when he remembered the first night he snuck up to Jack’s bed and violated him.  He reasoned that it was just a one shot thing – that he wouldn’t do it again – would not continue to hurt his son.  And he did hurt him!  Little Jack was very brave to endure what he was forced to endure, especially as the abuse continued. Jack never told his ma, nor anyone else about the abuse, as far as John knew.  John wondered why the guilt didn’t kill him.  He couldn’t control himself; didn’t have anyone to help him understand his actions, much less control them.  John was relieved when Jack became a teen and wouldn’t tolerate his visits anymore.  John knew that once Jack physically became a man the abuse had to stop.  Jack would fight back, as any man would.  There was also a chance that he would be queer.  But John Twist refused to believe that he was responsible for Jack being soft.  “Hell, I’m not queer!”  Mr. Twist reasoned.  He didn’t understand why he molested his own son, but knew it had something to do with repressed anger, and helplessness.  It was almost a given that John would molest someone else the way he was molested.  Abuse was what he knew!

“Pa, where do you want us to start?”  It was Jack, standing right behind him.  Jack’s question shook Mr. Twist right back to the present.  Ennis stood behind Jack with a questioning look on his face.  “Pa, what’s wrong?”  Jack asked.  “You okay?”  Mr. Twist looked first to Jack, and then to Ennis.  He looked up at the barn and was again assaulted by painful memories.  “Look, we’ll start on the barn tomorrow,” Mr. Twist began.  “I think we should tear the whole thing down and build it back up from the ground.”  John Twist spat in the direction of the barn.  “I’m tired of looking at it!”
Title: Re: Right 47
Post by: cwby30 on November 30, 2007, 08:17:39 pm
Afternoon.

Well, glad to see that OMT at least feels guilty about what he did to Jack.  And, think it's the right thing to tear down the barn and build a new one, tear down and destroy the memories of abuse and then build new memories of hard work and quiet joy and, hopefully, love. 

Thanks again. 
Title: Re: Right 47
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 30, 2007, 11:09:27 pm
Afternoon.

Well, glad to see that OMT at least feels guilty about what he did to Jack.  And, think it's the right thing to tear down the barn and build a new one, tear down and destroy the memories of abuse and then build new memories of hard work and quiet joy and, hopefully, love. 

Thanks again. 

Thank you cwby30!
Title: Re: Right 47
Post by: Toycoon on December 01, 2007, 12:09:01 am
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Well, glad to see that OMT at least feels guilty about what he did to Jack.  And, think it's the right thing to tear down the barn and build a new one, tear down and destroy the memories of abuse and then build new memories of hard work and quiet joy and, hopefully, love. 

Thanks again. 

Brother, I'm with you! Thanks, cwby30 for the kind words of encouragement.
Title: Right (48) by Toycoon
Post by: Toycoon on December 01, 2007, 05:39:45 am
Right (48) by Toycoon

"Tear it down?" asked Jack, confounded by his father's sudden change in attitude. Jack looked at Ennis, then back at his father. "Well Daddy, I guess we're gonna need some more wood then!" The men volunteered to go into town to the lumber mill and buy more wood. Ennis tossed a length of rope and their gloves in the back then hopped into Jack's truck. Mr. Twist slammed the door on Jack's side. "Make sure ya go ta Hulett Post and Pole. Jackson'll give ya a good deal on that wood, ya hear?" he said squeezing and releasing Jack's shoulder through the window.

"Yeah, awright pa." Jack started up the truck, turned it around, then they drove off. Mr. Twist walked back to the barn and picking up a hammer, pounded a hole in the side of the wall. Chunks of rotted wood fell and sprinkled down like snowflakes. "Bastard!" he muttered under his breath.

The truck bounced along the road, with Roger Miller playing on the radio. "Hey Ennis, you heard this?" Jack reached over to turn up the volume. "I'm a man a' means by no means, King a' the road!!" he warbled at the top of his lungs. Ennis shook his head 'no' but tapped his finger on the dashboard to the beat of the music anyway. They both howled and Ennis turned down the radio. "Hey, Jack. You think yer daddy knows? About me an' you, I mean?" Jack felt around on the seat for his cigarettes, slid one out then popped it in his mouth. He pushed in the cigarette lighter on the dash with one hand and rolled up the window with the other. "Hmm... I ain't never thought about it much,"  he lied. The truth was, he thought about it often. Long before he ever tended sheep on Brokeback Mountain; long before he ever met Ennis, Jack wondered if he was a 'queer'. Jack looked like the other guys he knew on the outside but inside, something was different; something no one could see from the outside.

Just like Ennis. Ennis was all man, yet he was attracted to Jack. The lighter popped out indicating it was hot. Jack pulled it out to light his cigarette and Ennis' cigarette, too. Taking a long drag off the cigarette, he looked Ennis over then exhaled the smoke from the corner of his mouth. "Me an' you, huh?" he said with a sly smile.
Title: Re: I'm in Love
Post by: Dagi on December 01, 2007, 01:01:52 pm
Dagi, you're so sweet to me.  Thanks so much!

Marie, you are welcome. You are more than sweet to us.
Title: Re: Right (47)
Post by: Dagi on December 01, 2007, 01:09:48 pm
Right (47) By Littlewing1957



Hard to bear. But sadly that´s the way it often goes, isn´t it? I can only hope OMT trries to make up for it by letting Jack and Ennis lieve their life their own way.

Dagi
Title: Right 48
Post by: Dagi on December 01, 2007, 01:11:25 pm
Chapter 48! Wow, you two are great. Who would have thought where you are going to with this. Thanks so much for writing and continuing the story!

Dagi
Title: Right (49)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 01, 2007, 10:33:12 pm
Right (49) By Littlewing1957

Roberta Twist moved around her spare but clean kitchen, wondering where she put the rosemary.  She planned to bake a capon for dinner that night, and knew just how much Jack liked rosemary on his bird.  Mrs. Twist had to take a seat when she thought about her son.  She was delighted to see the change in him: no more gloomy moods, few silences.  And she had to attribute his happiness to Ennis Del Mar.  There was no other explanation.  She hoped that Ennis would see fit to stay for a long while.  Not just for Jack’s sake, or for her sake, and certainly not to whip the ranch into shape.  Mrs. Twist wanted to help the young man she was beginning to love like her own son.

Roberta remembered the first day she held her newborn son in her arms.  She was weak and sore from childbirth, but couldn’t wait to cuddle her baby.  John was holding him, and studied his face intently.  If Roberta didn’t know better, she would have thought that John wanted to make sure that Jack was really his.  “A pretty boy, ain’t he?”  Roberta asked her husband, but was instantly sorry she used the word “pretty.”  John Twist didn’t react, but simply nodded his head and handed the baby to his wife.  “I think he’ll make something of himself, John!”  Roberta cooed as she kissed Jack’s tiny cheek.  “Just you wait—I think we got ourselves a doctor or a lawyer on our hands!”  John was silent.  He walked over to the window of the ward and looked out the window.

Roberta hadn’t abandoned her hopes for Jack.  In her way of thinking, he still had time to continue his education and become that doctor or lawyer or engineer.  And just as she imagined a more mature Jack sitting behind an expensive, outsized desk, reading over a patient's chart, Mrs. Twist heard a pounding, a breaking of what sounded like dry rotted wood.  She rushed over to the kitchen window and saw her husband taking a hammer to the barn.  Mrs. Twist watched, fascinated, as John battered the barn with a sort of anger she didn't know he possessed.  She couldn’t remember the last time she saw her husband so passionate.  His almost violent resolve frightened her a bit.  Roberta wasn’t sorry that that old barn was coming down.  To her it signaled a new beginning!


Title: Re: Right 48
Post by: Toycoon on December 02, 2007, 12:06:50 am
Chapter 48! Wow, you two are great. Who would have thought where you are going to with this. Thanks so much for writing and continuing the story!

Dagi

Thank you so much, Miss Dagi. I'm having a great time exploring their world. It's very exciting!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 02, 2007, 01:58:31 pm
Hi there Toycoon and Littlewing,

I love the new barn idea.  I think it suggests new hope, and a new beginning for the whole family.  Let's hope it works out that way.  I also liked the image of Jack lighting both of their cigarettes while driving along in the truck.  I know cigarettes are really bad for you.  (One of the reasons my mother was unable to get over her pneumonia while undergoing treatment for breast cancer was because she had been a heavy smoker for years.  And my father's heart condition may have been brought on in part by smoking.)  But I watched a lot of old movies from the 40's on TV, and since they weren't allowed to show anything, lighting someone else's cigarette indicated intimacy.  And so that's what it will always mean to me.

Can't wait to find out what happens next.

Gary

Stay tuned, Gary!  I have a few surprises, and a bit of intrigue in store!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on December 02, 2007, 02:46:38 pm
I can't wait! You are so good to us! What would we do without you two?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 02, 2007, 11:06:28 pm
I can't wait! You are so good to us! What would we do without you two?

Dagi, you're so very sweet!  :-*
Title: Re: I'm in Love
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 02, 2007, 11:07:14 pm
Very touching story  littlewing ... I wonder who Ennis is in love with ... or perhaps this is one of our alternate universes where Jack is still alive, and the blue birds sing and there's a whiskey spring....

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Thanks, Susie.  It is definitely an AU piece.  Jack is alive and well and being very good to Ennis!
Title: Re: I'm Losing Him?
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 02, 2007, 11:09:17 pm
Hey sweetie, :-*

Gosh you've been through a lot .... and I'm so sorry to hear about your friend's mum.

I hope you're feeling better now, and I hope mini-littlewing is well on the road to recovery.  Here's a nice hot cuppa from across the pond ... it'll work wonders!! ;D


(http://elt.britcoun.org.pl/elt/ffoto/cuppa.jpg)

Love Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



Awww, Susie, you don't know how much this means to me.  Maria loves tea.  And I love you.  Thanks so much, sweetie!

Things are looking up...a bit!
Title: Re: I'm Losing Him?
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 02, 2007, 11:09:51 pm
:laugh:

Don't knock it Gary ..... a nice hot cuppa tea cures EVERYTHING!!  ;D

I agree, SusieBaby!
Title: 18 Degrees
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 02, 2007, 11:48:46 pm
18 Degrees by Littlewing1957

It had to be 18 degrees and Jack was huddled all alone in his tent.  He decided to establish camp and wait for Ennis to show.  Jack didn’t even mind being in the freezing cold, just as long as Ennis arrived, eventually, to warm his body and his heart.  The tent was rather warm with the heat from his body trapped within.  He even peeled off a layer of clothing and placed it aside.

Jack drove up to the site about noon, astonished that he had arrived so early.  Everything went according to plan: he left work early the day before, packed his gear, and after kissing his wife and son goodbye, took to the road.  Jack expected a lot of ice and snow, but there was none, at least for the first 500 miles.  His snow chains didn’t go to waste though; he had to use them once he neared Wyoming.

The place Ennis designated for the meet was already freezing as Jack broke out the propane stove, the bedroll, the tent.  He had the tent erected in no time, and a fire blazing right outside their “home.”  Jack felt good that he took charge and hoped Ennis would appreciate his hard work.  “Hey, you waitin’ for me?”  Jack must have dozed off, but when he heard Ennis’ voice and felt his hand shaking him awake, Jack sat up, groggy, and wiped sleep from his eyes.  Jack extended a hand to his lover and pulled him close.  Ennis enveloped Jack in a protective embrace and kissed his cheek.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: LauraGigs on December 03, 2007, 12:31:41 am
Hey there Miss LauraGigs! Ain't seen you around these parts in a long time. How ya been?

Hey sweetie!!  Great to hear from you!  I'm lurking here whenever I get a chance to lay my greedy little eyes on yall's fanfics.  Speaking of which:

Quote
Jack reached over to turn up the volume. "I'm a man a' means by no means, King a' the road!!" he warbled at the top of his lungs. Ennis shook his head 'no' but tapped his finger on the dashboard to the beat of the music anyway.

Just like Ennis. Ennis was all man, yet he was attracted to Jack. The lighter popped out indicating it was hot.

I'm loving this great series you and Sister-Wing have going! 

(And I'm looking forward to clicking over to the hot stuff anyone posts on livejournal or wherever. It'll be all good — and worth it!)   O0
Title: Re: 18 Degrees
Post by: Dagi on December 03, 2007, 05:59:32 am
18 Degrees by Littlewing1957

It had to be 18 degrees and Jack was huddled all alone in his tent.  He decided to establish camp and wait for Ennis to show.  Jack didn’t even mind being in the freezing cold, just as long as Ennis arrived, eventually, to warm his body and his heart.  The tent was rather warm with the heat from his body trapped within.  He even peeled off a layer of clothing and placed it aside.

Jack drove up to the site about noon, astonished that he had arrived so early.  Everything went according to plan: he left work early the day before, packed his gear, and after kissing his wife and son goodbye, took to the road.  Jack expected a lot of ice and snow, but there was none, at least for the first 500 miles.  His snow chains didn’t go to waste though; he had to use them once he neared Wyoming.

The place Ennis designated for the meet was already freezing as Jack broke out the propane stove, the bedroll, the tent.  He had the tent erected in no time, and a fire blazing right outside their “home.”  Jack felt good that he took charge and hoped Ennis would appreciate his hard work.  “Hey, you waitin’ for me?”  Jack must have dozed off, but when he heard Ennis’ voice and felt his hand shaking him awake, Jack sat up, groggy, and wiped sleep from his eyes.  Jack extended a hand to his lover and pulled him close.  Ennis enveloped Jack in a protective embrace and kissed his cheek.


What a warm and tender piece, Marie. You make me feel the warmth of their embrace.

Dagi
Title: Right (50) by Toycoon
Post by: Toycoon on December 04, 2007, 01:22:14 am
Right (50) by Toycoon

Jack and Ennis drove over the bridge next to Meyer's Creek then took the left fork down a short distance until they reached the end of the road. They pulled up to Hulett Pole & Post, where the sign read, "Hulett, the oldest, standing lumber mill in all of Wyoming" and drove around to the back.

There, they found Jackson, a fellow dressed in overalls and covered in sawdust, who appeared to be as old as the mill itself. He was operating an enormous band saw with easy precision. He was stout man with a warm smile, skin like tree bark and a big white handlebar mustache. He slid his goggles up onto his forehead, shut off the saw and waved Jack and Ennis over.

"Hey there, Jack! Ain't seen you around here in a dog's age. What brings you ta these parts?" he asked jovially, clapping his hands together and raising a cloud of sawdust. "My daddy wants ta rebuild our barn! We got us a new hired hand here, Ennis. Gonna try 'im out. See what he kin do!" chuckled Jack, patting Ennis on the back. Ennis nodded toward Jackson's direction. Jackson grinned. "Well, alright now," he said, pulling Jack aside and putting his hand on the back of Jack's neck, "Yer gonna need a mess o' wood for that barn. What ya wanna build, a twenty footer...?" Jackson led Jack off to the yard where huge piles lumber were stacked. Ennis wandered away to watch the logs float downstream into the pond, ride up the conveyor belt and collect in the barker.

It took several men, Jack and Ennis, over an hour to load the wood into the back of Jack's truck. Ennis secured the load with the rope. Jackson informed them that rest of the wood would be delivered the following day along with the bill. "Don't forget to say, 'hey' to yer maw and pa, Jack," and turning to Ennis said,"Nice meeting ya, young fella. I'm sure I'll see ya around!" Jack started up the truck, waved then they drove off.

The bridge creaked loudly as they drove the packed truck over it. Jack got a funny look on his face. When they got to the end, Jack slowed the truck down then stopped. "Ennis..." he said very seriously, opening the door and stepping out onto the marshy grass at the creek's edge. "What? What's the matter?!" asked Ennis perplexed.

"Ennis!" Jack quickly began to unbutton his shirt and removed it. He undid his belt, yanked it out of the loops and pulling off his cowboy boots yelled, "Last one in... is a rotten egg!" Jack ran to the edge of the bridge and dove straight into the dark water below. Tearing off his shirt, pants and boots, Ennis ran over to edge shouting, "Yer fuckin' crazy, Rodeo! Here I come!" and he jumped in, too.

They played like little boys in the creek; laughing, climbing on each another shoulders and diving into the cool water. So comfortable in the other's company, they never imagined they were being watched from a distance.




Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on December 04, 2007, 05:22:46 am
 :D >:(  Who is watching them? hopefully someone who´s only getting a kick out of it, and isn´t up to something bad.  :(  Can´t wait for the next one.

{{{{{{{Marie}}}}}}}
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on December 04, 2007, 10:31:50 am
Sending Littlewing positive thoughts for a quick recovery. We love you!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 04, 2007, 01:43:23 pm
Thanks to all of you for your kind words and your support.  I'm feeling a bit better and hope to rejoin you soon.  Toycoon, I may have installment 50 up before the end of the week.  I think you'll like it.

Thanks again, everyone, for your PMs and your messages here.  You make me feel special, and I'll always love you.  You have made a very comfortable home for me here, one that I will never leave.  I thank God for all of you!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on December 04, 2007, 02:05:28 pm
We love you too, Littlewing, and we miss you! Get better soon!

Love,
Dagi
Title: Re: Right 50
Post by: cwby30 on December 04, 2007, 09:18:46 pm
Afternoon.

Well, Ennis is being introduced around town, and the scenario is set so others won't be asking too many questions.  Except the person watching them... Reminds me of OS, with Aguirre watching through the field glasses. 

Great update, new fun, new worries. 

Thanks again. 
Title: Right (51)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 04, 2007, 10:49:49 pm
Right (51) By Littlewing1957

Ennis would have loved to continue the horseplay, but he was beginning to feel the chill of the creek’s icy waters, and decided that they should get out and continue on to the ranch.  “C’mon Jack,” Ennis began as he headed toward the Creek’s edge.  “We better get out of this freezing water before we come down with pneumonia!”  Jack’s expression was one of exaggerated disappointment.  “But I wanna play a bit more!” Jack pouted as he followed Ennis out.  “Listen bud,” Ennis began, “We need to get this wood back to the ranch and get a lot of rest for the big job tomorrow.”  Ennis climbed out of the frigid waters and reached for his clothes.  Jack was already half dressed as Ennis continued, “I want to do a good job for your pa.  Who knows? He just may keep me on for awhile with pay.”  Jack chuckled.  “Oh don’t worry about the pay, Friend!” He whispered.  “You’ll be paid in money, as well as other ways!”  Jack gave Ennis a naughty wink, and his meaning wasn’t lost on Ennis.  Ennis became silent.  He longed for Jack’s touch, but couldn’t think of a way for them to be together.  Jack must have read his mind.  “If you want me, just send me a signal, Friend.”  Jack stated gently.  “I know where you are.  All I have to do is wait till my parents are asleep, and I’ll sneak down to you!”  Ennis, fully dressed now, looked around, and satisfied that they were alone, favored Jack with a tiny kiss on the cheek.  Jack smiled and followed Ennis back up to the truck.

But they weren’t alone!  Alan Sims, Jack’s childhood friend, was hiding some 30 feet away from the creek, crouched behind a tree trunk.  And Alan saw everything! Alan remembered being in Jack’s room that fateful day when Jack climbed up and lay right on top of him.  It was not the first time that they were intimate.  Oh, they never had sex – they were much too young for that.  Neither knew the first thing about making love, but when Jack suggested that they lay together, that they experiment, Alan was more than ready.  He was taken with Jack the first moment he saw him on the playground during recess.  Alan couldn’t understand what he was feeling when he watched Jack play ball with the other kids.  And when Jack happened to look up one day and held him in his blue eyed stare, Alan began to feel stirrings that he couldn’t control, nor understand.  He noticed a flush creeping on Jack’s cheek as they locked eyes.    One day during lunch Alan was seated, finishing his peanut butter and jelly sandwich, when he noticed a figure standing right next to him.  It was Jack.  Jack was so cute and shy as he invited Alan to play ball.  After Alan accepted, the two were inseparable.  That is, until Old Man Twist saw the two of them lying together that afternoon.  Alan would never forget his humiliation at seeing Jack pulled off of him as though he had the plague.  And being sent home with orders to stay away from Jack?  Alan never got over it.  He and Jack managed to see each other at recess and lunch, but they never found a way to be together after school.  Time passed and Alan left Lightning Flat to go to Junior College up in Cody.  He studied accounting, and landed a good job with an accounting firm in the City.   He made it a point to visit his parents from time-to-time, but other than visits to see family, Alan couldn’t find a reason to visit Lightning Flat.  That is, until now!

Alan thought about the time, about a week ago, when he was leaving his mom's house and drove down the main road.  He saw Jack Twist in his truck with a young man he didn’t recognize.  He followed them to Jack’s tree house at a safe distance.  Alan parked, undetected, and watched as Jack led the attractive young man up to the fort.  Alan remembered spending time with Jack at the retreat, and while nothing physical happened, he instantly knew that Jack and his friend were not up there playing chess.  Alan couldn’t believe that after all those years he still wanted Jack.  He was also sure that if given the chance, Jack would want him, as well.  Alan knew he had to bide his time, watch and be wary.  It was painful for him to see Jack and that other fella together, but in time, he would be able to make his move.  Jack would be his!

 
Title: Re: Right 51
Post by: cwby30 on December 05, 2007, 01:44:26 am
Evenin'.

Well, day-um, wouldn't you know, Alan's back in town.  Don't like his infatuation with Jack; he never got a life. Here comes trouble, with a capital T, that rhymes with C, and that stands for Can't hardly stand it!!

Thanks again.
Title: Re: Right (51)
Post by: Toycoon on December 05, 2007, 02:05:19 am
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It was painful for him to see Jack and that other fella together, but in time, he would be able to make his move.  Jack would be his!

Uh oh, the plot thickens! Nice to have you back, Littlewing.
I hope you're feeling better (or at least comfortably numb on medication!).
Title: Re: Right (51)
Post by: Dagi on December 05, 2007, 05:53:16 am
Right (51) By Littlewing1957

Ennis would have loved to continue the horseplay, but he was beginning to feel the chill of the creek’s icy waters, and decided that they should get out and continue on to the ranch.  “C’mon Jack,” Ennis began as he headed toward the Creek’s edge.  “We better get out of this freezing water before we come down with pneumonia!”  Jack’s expression was one of exaggerated disappointment.  “But I wanna play a bit more!” Jack pouted as he followed Ennis out.  “Listen bud,” Ennis began, “We need to get this wood back to the ranch and get a lot of rest for the big job tomorrow.”  Ennis climbed out of the frigid waters and reached for his clothes.  Jack was already half dressed as Ennis continued, “I want to do a good job for your pa.  Who knows? He just may keep me on for awhile with pay.”  Jack chuckled.  “Oh don’t worry about the pay, Friend!” He whispered.  “You’ll be paid in money, as well as other ways!”  Jack gave Ennis a naughty wink, and his meaning wasn’t lost on Ennis.  Ennis became silent.  He longed for Jack’s touch, but couldn’t think of a way for them to be together.  Jack must have read his mind.  “If you want me, just send me a signal, Friend.”  Jack stated gently.  “I know where you are.  All I have to do is wait till my parents are asleep, and I’ll sneak down to you!”  Ennis, fully dressed now, looked around, and satisfied that they were alone, favored Jack with a tiny kiss on the cheek.  Jack smiled and followed Ennis back up to the truck.

But they weren’t alone!  Alan Sims, Jack’s childhood friend, was hiding some 30 feet away from the creek, crouched behind a tree trunk.  And Alan saw everything! Alan remembered being in Jack’s room that fateful day when Jack climbed up and lay right on top of him.  It was not the first time they were intimate.  Oh, they never had sex – they were much too young for that.  Neither knew the first thing about making love, but when Jack suggested they lay together, that they experiment, Alan was more than ready.  He was taken with Jack the first moment he saw him on the playground during recess.  Alan couldn’t understand what he was feeling when he watched Jack play ball with the other kids.  And when Jack happened to look up one day and held him in his blue eyed stare, Alan began to feel stirrings that he couldn’t control, nor understand.  He noticed a flush creeping on Jack’s cheek as they locked eyes.    One day during lunch Alan was seated, finishing his peanut butter and jelly sandwich, when he noticed a figure standing right next to him.  It was Jack.  Jack was so cute and shy as he invited Alan to play ball.  After Alan accepted, the two were inseparable.  That is, until Old Man Twist saw the two of them lying together that afternoon.  Alan would never forget his humiliation at seeing Jack pulled off of him as though he had the plague.  And being sent home with orders to stay away from Jack?  Alan never got over it.  He and Jack managed to see each other at recess and lunch, but they never found a way to be together after school.  Time passed and Alan left Lightning Flat to go to Junior College up in Cody.  He studied accounting, and landed a good job with an accounting firm in the City.   He made it a point to visit his parents from time-to-time, but other than visits to see family, Alan couldn’t find a reason to visit Lightning Flat.  That is, until now!

Alan thought about the time, about a week ago, when he was leaving his mom's house and drove down the main road.  He saw Jack Twist in his truck with a young man he didn’t recognize.  He followed them to Jack’s tree house at a safe distance.  Alan parked, undetected, and watched as Jack led the attractive young man up to the fort.  Alan remembered spending time with Jack at the retreat, and while nothing physical happened, he instantly knew that Jack and his friend were not up there playing chess.  Alan couldn’t believe that after all those years he still wanted Jack.  He was also sure that if given the chance, Jack would want him, as well.  Alan knew he had to bide his time, watch and be wary.  It was painful for him to see Jack and that other fella together, but in time, he would be able to make his move.  Jack would be his!

 


Littlewing, are you feeling better? What a sensual continuation. I understand Alan so well. When you have fallen in love with Jack, how could that ever wear off? As Toycoon says, the plot thickens! Can´t wait for more!
Dagi :-*
Title: Re: Right 51
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 05, 2007, 07:45:37 pm
Evenin'.

Well, day-um, wouldn't you know, Alan's back in town.  Don't like his infatuation with Jack; he never got a life. Here comes trouble, with a capital T, that rhymes with C, and that stands for Can't hardly stand it!!

Thanks again.

Thanks for your kind words, Babe!  Stay with us!  :)
Title: Re: Right (51)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 05, 2007, 07:48:35 pm
Uh oh, the plot thickens! Nice to have you back, Littlewing.
I hope you're feeling better (or at least comfortably numb on medication!).

I'm feeling a bit better.  Thanks, Babe.  It seems nothing can keep me away from my friends, and I can't be stopped when it comes to Ennis and Jack.  I swear--I can be in a coma but I'll have my laptop in intensive care with me, with this page, this site up.
Title: Re: Right (51)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 05, 2007, 10:31:34 pm
Beautiful addition to the story littlewing.  But alas ... poor Alan, I can see yet another BBM broken heart!

Susie  :)

ps.  glad to hear you're a little better ... :-* :-*

Thanks, Susie!  :)
Title: Out of the Mouth of Old people
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 07, 2007, 12:13:29 am
Out of the Mouth of Old People by Littlewing1957

A Lightning Flat Christmas Slice of Life


Ennis walked over to the side of an elderly man.  Ennis noticed his rheumy eyes following him, and he decided to say hello.  Ennis never visited a rest home before he decided to join Jack in Lightening Flat, and what he saw unsettled him.  The home was well run, moderately clean, and best of all, it was not overcrowded.  Still, Ennis was unprepared for the stale scent of old people, vegetative young people, antiseptic, and the stifling air of loneliness. Jack’s mother, Roberta Twist, was a special Christian lady who volunteered at the Silver View Rest home at least twice a month.  Jack insisted on accompanying his mother on her visits to the home, and this time, he asked Ennis to go along.  Ennis agreed.

It was December 12, and Roberta had Jack stop the truck at the Woolworth’s thrift store in town.  Ennis waited in the truck as Mrs. Twist and Jack ran into Woolworth’s and purchased streamers, Xmas tree decorations, poinsettia plants and wreaths to decorate the home.  Ennis helped the pair place the goods in the back of the truck for the trip to the Silver View Rest Home.  Mrs. Twist walked into the home and had Jack and Ennis arrange the Xmas fixings on the table in the rec room.  There was already a good sized Douglas fir in the corner of the room.  It was partially furnished, and already looked very festive.  Ennis helped Jack remove the colorful bulbs, tiny Santas and garland that Mrs. Twist bought to finish off the tree.  Once Ennis and Jack got to work on the 9’ tall Douglas fir, they were joined by a few of Silver View’s residents.  Ennis and Jack handed decorations to an elderly man and a younger woman, both wearing bathrobes, and both very eager to help the attractive young men decorate the tree.  Roberta was having fun hanging wreaths on the doors of the recreation room.  She, too, had help from a few of the residents.  Ennis stood back and admired his handiwork, and placed a hand on Jack’s shoulder.  “I’m glad I came, Bud!”  Ennis began.  “This is very rewarding.  Thanks for inviting me.”  Jack smiled and patted his friend’s hand.  Just then, Ennis noticed an elderly gentleman in a wheelchair at the door of the rec room.  He was smiling at Ennis and Jack, his eyes twinkling.  Ennis nodded at the old man and smiled back.  He was about to go over and wheel him in when the director of the Silver View Rest Home entered from the side door and made an announcement.

“We are very fortunate this evening to be entertained by Lightning Flat High School’s choir.  Please join us in 15 minutes in the Chapel, where we’ll be treated to Xmas carols.  Afterwards, we’ll come back here for refreshments.”

Mrs. Twist asked Ennis and Jack to help the less mobile residents to the chapel.  When everyone was seated, Lightning Flat High School’s Music Director took the pulpit.

“Ladies and Gentleman,” she began, “It is my pleasure to introduce to you Lightning Flat High School choir.  I think you’ll like our medley of holiday standards.”

 Ennis and Jack, Roberta Twist and the Home’s attendants were offered the front pews.  The applause was thunderous as the youngsters took the choir stand, resplendent in gold choir robes. 

And the choir sang.  Jack and Ennis hummed along to “God Rest Ye Merry Gentleman,” while Mrs. Twist couldn’t contain her excitement when she heard “Jesus, Jesus, O What a Wonderful Child!”   But there was not a dry eye in the house when the teenagers ended with a moving rendition of “Silent Night.”  Ennis looked at the Home’s staff and saw most of the women were crying silently.  He knew that even if he lived to be 100 he would never forget those tear streaked faces.

Refreshments in the rec room consisted of chocolate cake, cookies, finger sandwiches and fruit punch.  Ennis looked on, approvingly, as the members of Lightning Flat’s choir mingled with, and entertained the residents of Silver View Rest Home.  Jack was laughing and talking with a few elderly women, when he noticed the same old man who eyed him earlier.  He was sitting all alone in his wheelchair with a plate of cookies on his withered, blanket covered knee.  Ennis placed his Styrofoam cup of punch down on a table and walked over to the old man.  Ennis squatted down to eye level and smiled at the elderly gentleman.  He reached a hand out to the man, who grasped it in a firm handshake.

“Ennis, Ennis Del Mar!”

“Jasper Mims!” The old man offered politely. “You’re new here?” Jasper asked Ennis.  “I know Roberta and Jack, but I’ve never seen you before.”  Ennis smiled.

“I just got in last week.  I’m here to visit Jack and help his family around the ranch.”  Jasper smiled and coughed a bit.  Ennis steadied the plate of cookies on the old man's knee until the fit subsided.

“Look, Ennis,” Jasper began as he wiped the back of his liver spotted hand across his mouth.  “I hope you don’t take this the wrong way, but this is important.”

“What is it, Mr. Mims?”  Ennis asked, puzzled that the old man would give him advice.  Jasper coughed once again before continuing.

“I know all about Jack,” Jasper wheezed.  “Oh, nothing I’m absolutely sure about, but this is a small town and word gets around.”  Ennis wasn’t sure he liked what he was hearing, but he was silent and allowed the old man to continue.

“I see how Jack looks at you, and I saw how you looked at him!”  Another cough.

“Look, perhaps the two of you can’t be happy here.  But I’m tellin’ you to go somewhere you can be happy.  You see, I’m like you, and there was someone special in my life.  But I let my fear get the better of me, and I lost him."  Jasper looked Ennis straight in his hazel eyes.

"I don’t want to see that happen to you, or Jack.”

Ennis couldn’t help but feel embarrassed, but he knew that it was pointless to tell Jasper that he was mistaken about him and Jack.

“Wherever you find love, take it!”  Jasper continued.  “It is worth the risk.  And even if you end up old, alone and in a rest home like me, at least you can say you claimed love.  There is nothing more important, young man!”  Ennis was about to answer when an attendant walked over to Mr. Mims and placed both hands on the handles of his wheelchair.

“There you are, Mr. Mims!” The young woman said.  “C’mon, let me take you in and give you your medication.  Say goodbye to the young man.”  Jasper Mims shook Ennis’ hand and winked at him. 

“Come back and see me sometimes, Ennis!” Jasper smiled before he was spirited away.  Ennis nodded and allowed Jasper to be wheeled out of the room.

Ennis sighed and looked over the crowd for Jack and Mrs. Twist.  He found them over by the tree talking to what looked like an orderly.  Ennis joined them and placed a friendly arm over Jack’s shoulder.  He looked into his lover’s eyes and smiled when he noticed a mixture of shock and delight in the pools of blue.  He made a decision to visit Mr. Mims.  He would come before Christmas Eve, bearing gifts.

Ennis and Jack Ennis and Jack Ennis and Jack Ennis and Jack Ennis and Jack Ennis and Jack Ennis and Jack Ennis and Jack Ennis and Jack Ennis and Jack
Title: Re: Out of the Mouth of Old people
Post by: Toycoon on December 07, 2007, 10:51:08 am
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Ennis couldn't’t help but feel embarrassed, but he knew that it was pointless to tell Jasper that he was mistaken about him and Jack.

Stellar story, Lilttlewing! I'm glad to see you're feeling better. Take of yourself and don't overexert.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on December 07, 2007, 10:59:25 am
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“Wherever you find love, take it!”  Jasper continued.  “It is worth the risk.  And even if you end up old, alone and in a rest home like me, at least you can say you claimed love.  There is nothing more important, young man!”


Thanks for this touching story, Marie. How good to see that you are doing better!  :D I often thought of you. I'll send you a PM tonight, maybe we can talk a little about our Christmas plans. ;D

Dagi  :-*
Title: Re: 18 Degrees
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 07, 2007, 11:52:54 am
Hi Littlewing,

Despite the temperature, this story is so warm and cozy.  I love the fact that Jack and Ennis were always so close to nature.  And I understood why AP always put them out in the wilderness.  What they had together didn't fit into the cultural milieu of 1960's and 70's rural Wyoming.  But I always hated to think of them outside in the winter.  But your story makes it sound so appealing.

Gary 

Hey, Gary!  Thanks for your kind words.  I'm not even sure why I wrote this story, other than the fact that I like the idea of E&J out in the wilderness, doing their thing, being themselves.  And out of the watchful eye of an unsympathetic society!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 07, 2007, 11:53:31 am
It's great to see you posting, Littlewing.  I'm so glad to hear that you're feeling a bit better.  Hope you make a complete recovery very soon.   :)

Love,
Gary

Thanks, Love!  I'm feeling much better!
Title: Re: Out of the Mouth of Old people
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 07, 2007, 11:54:13 am
Stellar story, Lilttlewing! I'm glad to see you're feeling better. Take of yourself and don't overexert.

Thanks, Toycoon!  I'll remember to take it easy.  :-*
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 07, 2007, 11:54:44 am


Thanks for this touching story, Marie. How good to see that you are doing better!  :D I often thought of you. I'll send you a PM tonight, maybe we can talk a little about our Christmas plans. ;D

Dagi  :-*

Thanks, Dagi!
Title: Re: The Christmas Present
Post by: cwby30 on December 07, 2007, 05:08:16 pm
December 1963

Holding a steaming cup of coffee, Jack looked out the kitchen window at the fresh blanket of snow covering the ranch in the early morning light, blotting out the rough edges of the land and buildings, but not blotting out the rough edges of his heart and life.  Four months without Ennis, four months without any contact, four months of enduring the stares and questions and foul mouth of his father.  Ennis would be married by now, settling into a life with Alma, while he shivered at the feeling of arctic cold running through his body despite the warmth cast by the radiators. 

Christmas Eve, and he knew he'd never get the present he wanted under the Christmas tree.  Nothing new, though, he'd hardly ever gotten what he wanted for Christmas. 

He turned away and smiled wanly at his mother, in response to her calling him to the table for breakfast.  Setting his cup and himself down, he lifted his fork and stabbed at the eggs and bacon, not really hungry but knowing he needed sustenance to carry him through another day with John Twist.  The man himself walked into the room, sat down at the table, and started eating without as much as a hello for either of them. 

As Jack finished, he heard a vehicle pull up outside.  "Must be the truck from Murchison's with the wire, best get out and see to it, if ya got the time," said his dad abruptly.  Jack acknowledged the command, got up. put on his hat, coat and gloves, and headed out into the cold past the calendar showing palm trees at some beach in Mexico.  No sense arguing, he'd lose anyway. 

The sign on the truck did indeed say Murchison's, and the wire was in the back of the truck, but the driver was nowhere in sight. "Must be in the barn putting the first away," thought Jack.  So he hoisted a roll onto his shoulder and headed into the barn. 

Entering the dimly lit barn from outside through the open barn door, it took a few moments for his eyes to adjust to the darkness of the barn.  When he did, he saw the driver walking towards him.  Jack began, "Here's the next roll of..."  He never finished the sentence, 'cause the driver knocked the wire off Jack's shoulder, pushed him up against the inside of the barn, and proceeded to kiss him as hard as he could.  Startled, Jack at first did nothing, then started to kiss back thinking of Ennis, and then realized what he was doing and began to fight back against this unexpected assault. But, then his brain kicked into gear. What??  "I know those lips!", he thought.

Pushing away the intruder, he gasped.  "Ennis?! What the fuck...?!"

"Good morning to you too, cowboy.  You always greet the hired help from Murchison's with a kiss?"

"What are you doing here?"

"Delivering the wire your daddy ordered."

"I can see that, but what are you doing here, in Lightning Flat?"

"Got me a job with Murchison's during the week, but could use some extra money, so if ya know a rancher that needs some help, I'm available."

"What does Alma think of all this, living so far away from her family?"

"Dunno, never asked her.  Jack, I didn't marry Alma, couldn't.  Standing in front of the preacher, when he asked me if I promised to love and honor her, all I could think of was you, and I just couldn't say 'I do' to Alma when I already felt that for someone else.  So, left her standing at the altar, and had to leave town, too."

All Jack could do, was gape. "Did Ennis just say what I think he did?" he thought.

"Well, judging by the weather and the look on your face, I guess Hell froze over 'cause Jack Twist has nothing to say."

"The Hell I don't!" responded Jack, and he grabbed Ennis into a full embrace and planted his lips on Ennis' with all the love in his hear. Pulling away to catch his breath, Jack murmured into Ennis' ear, "I love you too, Ennis del Mar."

Ennis hugged him harder, if that were possible, and asked quietly, "Think ya have a need for someone full time around here?"

Jack could hardly speak, and definitely couldn't see through the tears. "Ya, I need ya full time, Ennis, wherever we are."

Outside the barn the snow began falling, like powdered sugar from a sifter.  Inside the barn, Jack and Ennis fell into each other's hearts, smoothing over the rough edges of each other's life.  For the very first time that Christmas and for every Christmas after that, Jack received the present he cherished most. 
Title: Re: Out of the Mouth of Old people
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 07, 2007, 10:09:15 pm
That was beautiful, Littewing.  I was very moved by that.  What an uplifting story.  And what great advice from the old guy -- wherever you find love, take it!  Great Chrismas tale.

Gary 

Thanks, Sweetheart!
Title: Re: The Christmas Present
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 07, 2007, 10:16:57 pm
December 1963

Holding a steaming cup of coffee, Jack looked out the kitchen window at the fresh blanket of snow covering the ranch in the early morning light, blotting out the rough edges of the land and buildings, but not blotting out the rough edges of his heart and life.  Four months without Ennis, four months without any contact, four months of enduring the stares and questions and foul mouth of his father.  Ennis would be married by now, settling into a life with Alma, while he shivered at the feeling of arctic cold running through his body despite the warmth cast by the radiators. 

Christmas Eve, and he knew he'd never get the present he wanted under the Christmas tree.  Nothing new, though, he'd hardly ever gotten what he wanted for Christmas. 

He turned away and smiled wanly at his mother, in response to her calling him to the table for breakfast.  Setting his cup and himself down, he lifted his fork and stabbed at the eggs and bacon, not really hungry but knowing he needed sustenance to carry him through another day with John Twist.  The man himself walked into the room, sat down at the table, and started eating without as much as a hello for either of them. 

As Jack finished, he heard a vehicle pull up outside.  "Must be the truck from Murchison's with the wire, best get out and see to it, if ya got the time," said his dad abruptly.  Jack acknowledged the command, got up. put on his hat, coat and gloves, and headed out into the cold past the calendar showing palm trees at some beach in Mexico.  No sense arguing, he'd lose anyway. 

The sign on the truck did indeed say Murchison's, and the wire was in the back of the truck, but the driver was nowhere in sight. "Must be in the barn putting the first away," thought Jack.  So he hoisted a roll onto his shoulder and headed into the barn. 

Entering the dimly lit barn from outside through the open barn door, it took a few moments for his eyes to adjust to the darkness of the barn.  When he did, he saw the driver walking towards him.  Jack began, "Here's the next roll of..."  He never finished the sentence, 'cause the driver knocked the wire off Jack's shoulder, pushed him up against the inside of the barn, and proceeded to kiss him as hard as he could.  Startled, Jack at first did nothing, then started to kiss back thinking of Ennis, and then realized what he was doing and began to fight back against this unexpected assault. But, then his brain kicked into gear. What??  "I know those lips!", he thought.

Pushing away the intruder, he gasped.  "Ennis?! What the fuck...?!"

"Good morning to you too, cowboy.  You always greet the hired help from Murchison's with a kiss?"

"What are you doing here?"

"Delivering the wire your daddy ordered."

"I can see that, but what are you doing here, in Lightning Flat?"

"Got me a job with Murchison's during the week, but could use some extra money, so if ya know a rancher that needs some help, I'm available."

"What does Alma think of all this, living so far away from her family?"

"Dunno, never asked her.  Jack, I didn't marry Alma, couldn't.  Standing in front of the preacher, when he asked me if I promised to love and honor her, all I could think of was you, and I just couldn't say 'I do' to Alma when I already felt that for someone else.  So, left her standing at the altar, and had to leave town, too."

All Jack could do, was gape. "Did Ennis just say what I think he did?" he thought.

"Well, judging by the weather and the look on your face, I guess Hell froze over 'cause Jack Twist has nothing to say."

"The Hell I don't!" responded Jack, and he grabbed Ennis into a full embrace and planted his lips on Ennis' with all the love in his hear. Pulling away to catch his breath, Jack murmured into Ennis' ear, "I love you too, Ennis del Mar."

Ennis hugged him harder, if that were possible, and asked quietly, "Think ya have a need for someone full time around here?"

Jack could hardly speak, and definitely couldn't see through the tears. "Ya, I need ya full time, Ennis, wherever we are."

Outside the barn the snow began falling, like powdered sugar from a sifter.  Inside the barn, Jack and Ennis fell into each other's hearts, smoothing over the rough edges of each other's life.  For the very first time that Christmas and for every Christmas after that, Jack received the present he cherished most. 

Cwby30, thanks so much for this charming tale.  I just logged on and was unprepared for this treat.  What a great christmas present to be reunited with the one you love.  This tale is very well written, and very welcome! 

Outside the barn the snow began falling, like powdered sugar from a sifter.

What a wonderful image.  This is so descriptive that I can image myself standing right in the middle of all that snow.  Thanks again, cwby30! 
Title: Re: The Christmas Present
Post by: Toycoon on December 08, 2007, 01:50:07 am
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Holding a steaming cup of coffee, Jack looked out the kitchen window at the fresh blanket of snow covering the ranch in the early morning light, blotting out the rough edges of the land and buildings, but not blotting out the rough edges of his heart and life.

Yahooo cwby30! What did we do to deserve such a swell gift. You really must write more often.
Title: Re: The Christmas Present
Post by: Dagi on December 08, 2007, 10:36:43 am

Outside the barn the snow began falling, like powdered sugar from a sifter.  Inside the barn, Jack and Ennis fell into each other's hearts, smoothing over the rough edges of each other's life.  For the very first time that Christmas and for every Christmas after that, Jack received the present he cherished most. 

Thanks for this little AU tale, cwby30! And write more often !

Dagi
Title: Right (52) by Toycoon
Post by: Toycoon on December 08, 2007, 01:42:26 pm
Right (52) by Toycoon

Jack started up the truck and put it into gear. "Boy, am I starved! I could eat me a camel. I hope Ma's got supper ready when we get back." Jack glanced at Ennis. "Hey, you hungry, cowboy?" Ennis nodded, 'yes'. Ennis was hungry but he was too polite to make a fuss about it. The idea of joining Jack's family as a hired hand was still new to Ennis as well as the thought of enjoying steady meals. He had become accustomed to going without. Ennis pulled a half smoked cigarette from his coat, put it in his mouth and lit it.

It was nearly dusk when they pulled up to the Twist ranch. Pink and orange clouds streaked across the autumn sky. The tattered frame and a pile of rubble was all that remained in the place where the old barn once stood. John Twist had demolished most of the barn himself, fueled by the sheer determination to extinguish the demons that plagued his childhood.

Jack and Ennis walked in the house then into the kitchen, where they were greeted by Jack's mother, wiping her hands with a towel. She leaned in to kiss Jack on the cheek and wrinkled her nose when she caught a whiff of the creek water on the two of them. "Jack, Ennis, you boys go upstairs an' wash up. Supper'll be ready soon," she said scooting them out of the kitchen. "Jack, I made your favorite, rosemary chicken." They passed Jack's father in the living room, who was dozing in his chair with his feet up on the ottoman and took the stairs, two by two.

Ennis waited in Jack's room while Jack took a bath. He walked around the room admiring Jack's various possessions: the little rifle on the wooden rack, the rope lasso hanging on the nail, the toy cowboy on the horse. Ennis picked up the little wooden sculpture and remembered the horse he'd carved as a gift for Jack on Brokeback Mountain. He left it behind when Aguirre ran them off.

Jack came back into the room wearing only a bath towel. His hair was wet and neatly combed down on his head. Jack looked so fresh scrubbed and beautiful that Ennis resisted the urge to take him then and there on the bed but settled for a moist kiss instead. "You better take a bath before my momma tans yer hide," whispered Jack, pushing Ennis back, "there's a clean towel fer ya on the rack in there." Ennis disappeared into the bathroom and Jack started to get dressed. He pulled out a pair of clean Levis and a rumpled T-shirt from the dresser. He dried his toes with the towel then pulled on his cowboy boots. Jack caught a glimpse of himself in the mirror; he jutted his chin out and rubbed the stubble growing on it. Just then, Ennis stepped back in to bedroom, his clothes in his arms and joined Jack's reflection in the mirror. Jack swung around to embrace his friend. Ennis dropped his clothes and his towel fell away then Jack sunk to his knees for a taste of his lover.

"Jack... Ennis, come on boys!" Mrs. Twisted called out from downstairs. "Supper's ready!"



Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on December 08, 2007, 04:23:54 pm
It's always a joy to come here and find a continuation of the story. Thanks for this vivid scene, I so enjoyed reading it!

Dagi
Title: Right (53)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 08, 2007, 08:54:39 pm
Right (53) By Littlewing1957

Ennis pulled back a bit and admired Jack.  He knew that we would never tire of feasting his eyes on every single inch of his lover.  “Maybe we better do this some other time, Ennis.” Jack muttered as he lifted Ennis’ face upwards with a steady finger.  “Dinner is ready,” He stammered.  Jack didn’t want to move; was craving the wet touch, wanted the pleasure, the release.  Ennis, instead, pulled Jack closer and gazed at his manhood.  “I can have dinner here!” Ennis sighed and pointed at Jack’s swollen member.  He always knew what to say, but it was a bad time.  “Okay, Rodeo!” Ennis stated as he pulled himself up.  “I’ll take my shower and meet you downstairs.”

The Twist clan was already seated at the kitchen table when Ennis bounded down the stairs.  He took a moment to look over the surroundings before he entered the kitchen to join his newfound family.  Ennis took in the stark white walls, devoid of family photos or artwork.  He noticed the wooden cross hanging on the far wall of the living area.  All very modest and humble, but it was a real home.  Ennis felt very fortunate to be there.  Most of his young life he prayed for a real home and a family.  Any real chance at a happy childhood was cut short much too soon when his parents died.  Perhaps now he could release his painful past and work on making a home.  Home at last?  Ennis certainly hoped so.  He entered the kitchen and was warmed by the smiles that greeted him.  Even Old Man Twist’s mouth was upturned in a half smile when Ennis entered the room.  “Sit down, Ennis.”  It was Mrs. Twist.  “I made Jack’s favorite, and hope you like it.”  Ennis took the seat nearest Jack and placed a napkin in his lap.  “Anything you make is fine with me,” Ennis stated as he smiled at his hostess, and looked to Jack.  Jack patted Ennis’ hand under the table, and passed him a bowl of peas.

Mrs. Twist entertained her family with tales of her childhood, and how she was the oldest of 3 girls born to a strict, Pentecostal Deacon.  Jack and his Pa heard the stories a thousand times, but they hung on every word.  Ennis listened with great interest as Mrs. Twist told him all about how she met John, and what Jack was like as a youngster.  Mr. Twist was quiet throughout most of the meal, which was in character.  But when he noticed a lull in the conversation, John Twist addressed Ennis, “Well, Ennis, I see you and Jack got enough wood to build the barn.”  Ennis and Jack both nodded.  “Well, I expect the two of you will be up tomorrow mornin’ early so we can get started?”  “Yes, sir!” Both young men said in unison.  Mr. Twist nodded and smiled a bit.  He even complimented his wife on the rosemary chicken and the fixins.  His wife blushed as she absorbed his compliments. “Can I help you clear the table, mother?”  It was Mr. Twist turning toward his wife.  “No, don’t bother sir,” Ennis started as he rose from his chair.  “I’ll clear the table and do the dishes.”  Mr. Twist grunted his assent and walked into the living area.  Jack and Ennis cleared the table as Mrs. Twist put away the leftovers.

“Hey, Jack,” Roberta turned to her son as she covered what was left of the chicken with foil.  “Yeah ma?” Jack said absently as he placed the unfinished peas in the fridge.  “I can’t be sure, but I think I saw an old friend of yours yesterday driving down in front of the ranch.”  Jack faced his mother and smiled at her.  “Well, who do you think it was?” Jack asked.  “Alan Sims.” Mrs. Twist answered. Jack’s smile faded a bit.  Ennis noticed a definite tension at the mention of Alan’s name.  He made a mental note to ask about this Alan Sims person when he and Jack were alone.  “Alan Sims?” Jack repeated.  “I haven’t seen or heard from him in years.”  “Well, you know he works for a big accounting firm up in Cody now,” Mrs. Twist offered.  “He only comes back every now and then to see his folks.”  Jack wasn’t sure how he felt about Alan.  They didn’t part on bad terms, but so much time had passed, and in Jack’s mind, each had moved on.  “If I see his ma, I’ll tell her to have him come by and pay us a visit.” Mrs. Twist mentioned absently.  Jack cringed but was silent.  No need to worry about Alan now. He let the matter drop and led Ennis out of the kitchen.  Ennis followed Jack into the living room where they found themselves alone.  Mr. Twist was probably up in his bedroom, or walking around the grounds.  Jack offered Ennis a seat in front of the TV, and they watched the news and a crime drama or two before Jack felt sleep calling him.  “I think I’ll call it a night, Cowboy!” Jack whispered as he yawned audibly.  “We got a big day ahead of us.”  Ennis nodded and rose to his feet.  He walked Jack to the staircase and watched as he climbed up.  When Jack reached the top he instinctively turned around and looked at his lover.  Ennis mouthed, “Come to me?”  Jack nodded, turned and headed to his room.  Ennis found Mrs. Twist and wished her a good night.  He walked down to his basement room, convinced that he would likely have a good night - a very good night, indeed!
Title: Re: The Christmas Present
Post by: cwby30 on December 09, 2007, 02:16:30 pm
Mornin', Gary.

Well, I started writing it as a drabble on the other thread, using "arctic cold", "palm tree" and "fresh blanket of snow." It just grew from there.  Glad you liked it.  Have an idea for some more to add to it, using other drabble prompts.

Thanks again.
Title: Re: The Christmas Present
Post by: cwby30 on December 10, 2007, 12:20:29 am
Evenin', Susie.

Well, glad you liked the story, and glad the *BAM* factor worked!! Yes, they do live together, happily most of the time, but every relationship has its ups and downs, and their downs are minimized because they have made a commitment to each other and not just promises.  One part of the commitment was not to go to bed at night angry at each other, to talk things over; hard to keep, and may lead to some sleepless nights full of talking, but one of the best. 

Thanks again. 
Title: Re: The christmas Present (2)
Post by: cwby30 on December 10, 2007, 12:53:02 am

“Hey, cowboy?”

“Mmmf?”

“As much as I love you and love holding you and love kissing you, my hands are going numb and my lips are getting chapped.  We need to shake a leg and get the rest of the wire unloaded, so’s I can introduce ya to my folks.”

“If’n yer hands need warmin’ up, I can oblige ya that,” responded Ennis, opening his coat and pulling up his shirt.  Placing Jack’s hand under his shirt and on his chest, he murmured, “That help?”

“Oh ya, Ennis, oh ya. Been wantin’ ta do that for months now,” responded Jack while roaming over the hard muscles on Ennis’ chest and feeling his heartbeat.  With a sigh, though, he withdrew his hands.  “But, ya best be keepin’ yer shirt on, and mine, my daddy may come out here if we don’t finish the job quick. Come on.”

Reluctantly, Ennis tucked in his shirt, buttoned up his Carhartt, and, after a quick kiss behind the barn door, followed Jack out into the fresh snow to complete the job of unloading the truck.  By the time the finished the falling snow had obscured the well-worn track from house to highway, and the wind had picked up.  They headed into the house, but not before trading a few well-placed snowballs and headlong shoves into the snow.  Jack’s mom saw them through the kitchen window, and with a smile started warming milk on the stove. 

Entering the kitchen laughing and stamping their feet, Jack’s mom greeted them with a, “Keep those wet boots outta my dry kitchen, you two, and hang up yer jackets on the porch.  Got some hot cocoa for ya after ya do.” 

Properly chastised, the two boys did as told, and upon re-entering the kitchen Jack introduced Ennis to his mom.  “Mom, this is my best friend, Ennis del Mar, the fella I told ya about, spent the summer with him on the Mountain.”

“Pleased ta meetcha, Ma’am, and Merry Christmas,” said Ennis with a smile. 

“Mighty glad to meet ya, too, Ennis del Mar, and Merry Christmas to ya.  Jack’s told me a lot about ya, and I’m glad his friend has come calling at Christmas.”

Ennis frowned just a bit, and looked quizzically at Jack, who shrugged his shoulders with an ‘I’ll tell ya later’ look.  Ennis nodded, and then jumped a bit when he heard another voice from behind him, this one not so welcoming sounding.

“Well, if it isn’t the famous Ennis del Mar.”
Title: Re: The christmas Present (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 10, 2007, 01:07:55 am
“Hey, cowboy?”

“Mmmf?”

“As much as I love you and love holding you and love kissing you, my hands are going numb and my lips are getting chapped.  We need to shake a leg and get the rest of the wire unloaded, so’s I can introduce ya to my folks.”

“If’n yer hands need warmin’ up, I can oblige ya that,” responded Ennis, opening his coat and pulling up his shirt.  Placing Jack’s hand under his shirt and on his chest, he murmured, “That help?”

“Oh ya, Ennis, oh ya. Been wantin’ ta do that for months now,” responded Jack while roaming over the hard muscles on Ennis’ chest and feeling his heartbeat.  With a sigh, though, he withdrew his hands.  “But, ya best be keepin’ yer shirt on, and mine, my daddy may come out here if we don’t finish the job quick. Come on.”

Reluctantly, Ennis tucked in his shirt, buttoned up his Carhartt, and, after a quick kiss behind the barn door, followed Jack out into the fresh snow to complete the job of unloading the truck.  By the time the finished the falling snow had obscured the well-worn track from house to highway, and the wind had picked up.  They headed into the house, but not before trading a few well-placed snowballs and headlong shoves into the snow.  Jack’s mom saw them through the kitchen window, and with a smile started warming milk on the stove. 

Entering the kitchen laughing and stamping their feet, Jack’s mom greeted them with a, “Keep those wet boots outta my dry kitchen, you two, and hang up yer jackets on the porch.  Got some hot cocoa for ya after ya do.” 

Properly chastised, the two boys did as told, and upon re-entering the kitchen Jack introduced Ennis to his mom.  “Mom, this is my best friend, Ennis del Mar, the fella I told ya about, spent the summer with him on the Mountain.”

“Pleased ta meetcha, Ma’am, and Merry Christmas,” said Ennis with a smile. 

“Mighty glad to meet ya, too, Ennis del Mar, and Merry Christmas to ya.  Jack’s told me a lot about ya, and I’m glad his friend has come calling at Christmas.”

Ennis frowned just a bit, and looked quizzically at Jack, who shrugged his shoulders with an ‘I’ll tell ya later’ look.  Ennis nodded, and then jumped a bit when he heard another voice from behind him, this one not so welcoming sounding.

“Well, if it isn’t the famous Ennis del Mar.”


Beautiful addition to part 1, cwby30.  Very sexy and sweet all at the same time.  Thanks so much for posting.  I was feeling rather depressed until I came in and found your charming tale.  :)
Title: Re: The Christmas Present (2)
Post by: Toycoon on December 10, 2007, 02:05:16 am
Good evening to ya, cwby30-
Nice to read your merry tale of Christmas in Lightning Flat. I'm thrilled to see that folks are still taking the time to write and contribute to our little thread after the challenges we faced a few weeks ago. Looking forward to chapter 3 of 'The Christmas Present'. It's a terrific gift for the fans!
Title: Re: The Christmas Present
Post by: moremojo on December 10, 2007, 03:15:35 pm
Outside the barn the snow began falling, like powdered sugar from a sifter.  Inside the barn, Jack and Ennis fell into each other's hearts, smoothing over the rough edges of each other's life.  For the very first time that Christmas and for every Christmas after that, Jack received the present he cherished most.
Heartwarming story, beautifully told. I especially like the line here that I highlighted. Jack and Ennis became the gift that kept on giving.

Thanks for your contributions to the thread. Seeing these recent responses makes me want to try my hand at a few more myself.
Title: Re: Right (53)
Post by: Dagi on December 10, 2007, 05:45:33 pm
Right (53) By Littlewing1957

Ennis mouthed, “Come to me?”  Jack nodded, turned and headed to his room.  Ennis found Mrs. Twist and wished her a good night.  He walked down to his basement room, convinced that he would likely have a good night - a very good night, indeed!


Loved the sexy start!  ;D  The tension is building up. Thanks for writing, Marie! You are so good to us.

Dagi
Title: Re: The Christmas Present
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 10, 2007, 10:56:47 pm

 Seeing these recent responses makes me want to try my hand at a few more myself.

Please, moremojo?
Title: Re: Right (53)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 10, 2007, 10:57:33 pm
Loved the sexy start!  ;D  The tension is building up. Thanks for writing, Marie! You are so good to us.

Dagi

Dagi, thanks so much!
Title: Re: Right (53)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 10, 2007, 11:01:32 pm
Gorgeous sexy chapter littlewing!  And I'm intrigued to see where your taking us with this Alan Sims fella .... although I'm more interested in finding out what happens next in the basement  ;)

Susie  :)



Thanks, SusieBaby.  I can't wait to write what happens next, but given our restrictions, it'll have to be PG-13, I suppose.
Title: Re: The christmas Present (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 10, 2007, 11:02:54 pm

Awww sweetie!  :-*  I'm sorry to hear that you've been a little down in the dumps ... not surprising though, it seems like you've had one thing after another to contend with.  I hope you're recovering from your accident honey.... sending you lots of love and cuddles!!

{{{{{littlewing}}}}}

Susie  :-* :-*

Awww Susiebaby, you are so sweet!  I don't know what I would do without you.  I'm much better, Love.  I'm getting better everyday!  :-*
Title: Right (54) by Toycoon
Post by: Toycoon on December 11, 2007, 04:04:34 am
Right (54) by Toycoon

Ennis opened the door to his basement room and pulled the chain for the light. He stood in the doorway for a few moments looking around the room while the chain swung back and forth. His room. He almost could not believe it; for the first time in his life, he had his own room. There was a twin bed with a quilt, a dresser, an old rocking chair and a night stand with a lamp. The hot water heater, a utility sink and the furnace rounded out the atmosphere of the room.  In truth, the accommodations weren't much but at least he didn't have to share it with anyone, lest of all, his brother, K.E. Ennis and his brother were constantly at odds with one another, fighting and arguing about everything from soup to nuts.

Ennis walked over to the bed, sat and took off his boots then set them side by side on the floor. He unbuttoned his flannel shirt and carefully hung it on the back of the rocker. Ennis pulled off the trousers Jack lent him, folded and draped them on the arm of the chair then shuffled back to the bed. He reached over to turn on the lamp on the night stand and got under the covers; the furnace kept it toasty in the room.

He closed his eyes and began to think about God, something he'd never done in the past. Ennis pictured the crucifix hanging on the wall of Mrs. Twist's kitchen and wondered if God ever thought about him.  About him and Jack. He couldn't be sure but things did seem to be changing since he'd met Jack. Ennis sent up a silent prayer for his good fortune just the same. Suddenly, there was a light rapping at the door. Ennis smiled and said, "Come in." The door swung open and Jack stood in the doorway wearing baggy, striped pajamas, grinning sheepishly, with a twinkle in his eye. "Hey," he said softly. "Hey," said Ennis, lifting the quilt and motioning him to his side. Jack stepped in, closed the door behind him and yanked the chain that turned off the light. He crawled in to the tiny bed with Ennis and into his welcoming arms. Ennis switched off the lamp beside the bed. They found each other's lips in the dark and held one another as though there was no tomorrow then slipped into a contented sleep.

Title: Re: Right (54) by Toycoon
Post by: Dagi on December 11, 2007, 08:41:57 am
Right (54) by Toycoon

Ennis opened the door to his basement room and pulled the chain for the light. He stood in the doorway for a few moments looking around the room while the chain swung back and forth. His room. He almost could not believe it; for the first time in his life, he had his own room. There was a twin bed with a quilt, a dresser, an old rocking chair and a night stand with a lamp. The hot water heater, a utility sink and the furnace rounded out the atmosphere of the room.  In truth, the accommodations weren't much but at least he didn't have to share it with anyone, lest of all, his brother, K.E. Ennis and his brother were constantly at odds with one another, fighting and arguing about everything from soup to nuts.

Ennis walked over to the bed, sat and took off his boots then set them side by side on the floor. He unbuttoned his flannel shirt and carefully hung it on the back of the rocker. Ennis pulled off the trousers Jack lent him, folded and draped them on the arm of the chair then shuffled back to the bed. He reached over to turn on the lamp on the night stand and got under the covers; the furnace kept it toasty in the room.

He closed his eyes and began to think about God, something he'd never done in the past. Ennis pictured the crucifix hanging on the wall of Mrs. Twist's kitchen and wondered if God ever thought about him.  About him and Jack. He couldn't be sure but things did seem to be changing since he'd met Jack. Ennis sent up a silent prayer for his good fortune just the same. Suddenly, there was a light rapping at the door. Ennis smiled and said, "Come in." The door swung open and Jack stood in the doorway wearing baggy, striped pajamas, grinning sheepishly, with a twinkle in his eye. "Hey," he said softly. "Hey," said Ennis, lifting the quilt and motioning him to his side. Jack stepped in, closed the door behind him and yanked the chain that turned off the light. He crawled in to the tiny bed with Ennis and into his welcoming arms. Ennis switched off the lamp beside the bed. They found each other's lips in the dark and held one another as though there was no tomorrow then slipped into a contented sleep.



What a sweet continuation....so consoling that Ennis seems to feel at home in the Twist house. Thanks for writing this heartwarming tale, Toycoon and Littlewing!

DAgi
Title: Re: The Christmas Present (3)
Post by: cwby30 on December 11, 2007, 06:59:03 pm
Ennis del Mar had spent most of his life and almost all of his young adult life living in fear of John Twist, or at least men like him, those that would hate him for what he was, a queer.  He knew deep down he was queer, even though he had told Jack different back on the Mountain, ‘cause he couldn’t even admit it to himself, was ashamed of it, thought it made him less of a man, and thought it would drive Jack away.  So he talked to men like that only when he had to, and when he passed them on the street, or rode by them on a ranch, he could feel their accusing eyes boring into him, and he kept his eyes cast firmly on the ground, so he could see where he was going all the time and avoid letting anyone inside him. 

But the past summer changed him, brought him life and love in the form of Jack Twist, a person, a man, who loved him for who and what he was.  That love wormed its way deep into his heart before he could do anything about it, and made him look up for the first time, look up into deep blue eyes, look up to see where he could go and not just down to see where he was going.   They had never said the words until today, Christmas Eve, but he had known it for months.  He realized that Jack’s love was a gift given to him freely, he had accepted that gift and he would not turn away or dishonor that gift, ever. 

When Mr. Twist spoke, Ennis saw the look in Jack’s eyes, fear and love mixed, as his eyes moved from his man in front of him to the man behind.  No sir, no time to back down, not now. They’d both come too far. 

Slowly Ennis turned around, aware of the three pairs of eyes fixed on him, and looked at Jack’s father.  That’s when Jack gave him another gift.

“Dad, this here’s Ennis del Mar, my best friend and my…partner,” Jack told his father without flinching. 

Ennis stuck out his hand in greeting,  “Nice to meetcha, sir,” he said to Mr. Twist, looking at him. 

“Partner, huh? Since when do ya have a best friend and partner?” responded his father while ignoring Ennis’ hand.  Ennis let it hang there a few seconds, and then withdrew it, and looked down at his boots out of habit. 

“That’s right, Dad, best friend and partner,”  and lover, and the one I’m spending the rest of my life with,  "since last summer on the Mountain."

Partner.

“Thought you were gettin married this month, del Mar,” said Mr. Twist, finally acknowledging Ennis’ presence before him.  “Where’s your wife?”

“Don’t have one, sir,” responded Ennis.  He looked up again right at Mr. Twist.  “Couldn’t promise Alma I’d love her for the rest of my days, and thought it best not to make a promise I couldn’t keep, so I didn’t marry her.  Guess I’m not the marryin kind, sir, at least not with Alma.  After that, decided to come up here and see Jack.” And hope he would remember me and still care for me like we did on the Mountain.

Mr. Twist looked hard at Ennis, and then at Jack, and then back at Ennis.  “Well, good thing to do, del Mar, a man don’t make promises he can’t keep, like stayin around when ya got no real plans ta do it,”  Mr. Twist said to the both of them.  Jack blushed a little bit, and his mouth hardened that same little bit.  But he still looked at his father. 

Mr. Twist held out his hand slowly.  “If Andy Murchison likes ya enough to hire ya and trust ya with his truck, you’re ok with me.” 

Ennis took his hand and gripped it, giving back as good as he got.  Mr. Twist looked again at Ennis, and then at Jack, and then at Mrs. Twist.  Something passed between husband and wife; Jack missed it, ‘cause he’d never seen it before and didn’t know what to look for.  Ennis had only known them for five minutes, and had no clue. 

That’s when Mr. Twist gave Jack the first real Christmas present of his short life.  As he dropped Ennis’ hand, Mr. Twist continued, “And, any friend and partner of Jack’s is welcome in our home.”
Title: Re: The christmas Present (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 11, 2007, 11:10:22 pm
Phew! ..... so happy to hear you're feeling a little better!!  {{{{{littlewing}}}}}

Yes!  Thanks, SusieBaby!
Title: Re: The Christmas Present (3)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 11, 2007, 11:21:16 pm
Ennis del Mar had spent most of his life and almost all of his young adult life living in fear of John Twist, or at least men like him, those that would hate him for what he was, a queer.  He knew deep down he was queer, even though he had told Jack different back on the Mountain, ‘cause he couldn’t even admit it to himself, was ashamed of it, thought it made him less of a man, and thought it would drive Jack away.  So he talked to men like that only when he had to, and when he passed them on the street, or rode by them on a ranch, he could feel their accusing eyes boring into him, and he kept his eyes cast firmly on the ground, so he could see where he was going all the time and avoid letting anyone inside him. 

But the past summer changed him, brought him life and love in the form of Jack Twist, a person, a man, who loved him for who and what he was.  That love wormed its way deep into his heart before he could do anything about it, and made him look up for the first time, look up into deep blue eyes, look up to see where he could go and not just down to see where he was going.   They had never said the words until today, Christmas Eve, but he had known it for months.  He realized that Jack’s love was a gift given to him freely, he had accepted that gift and he would not turn away or dishonor that gift, ever. 

When Mr. Twist spoke, Ennis saw the look in Jack’s eyes, fear and love mixed, as his eyes moved from his man in front of him to the man behind.  No sir, no time to back down, not now. They’d both come too far. 

Slowly Ennis turned around, aware of the three pairs of eyes fixed on him, and looked at Jack’s father.  That’s when Jack gave him another gift.

“Dad, this here’s Ennis del Mar, my best friend and my…partner,” Jack told his father without flinching. 

Ennis stuck out his hand in greeting,  “Nice to meetcha, sir,” he said to Mr. Twist, looking at him. 

“Partner, huh? Since when do ya have a best friend and partner?” responded his father while ignoring Ennis’ hand.  Ennis let it hang there a few seconds, and then withdrew it, and looked down at his boots out of habit. 

“That’s right, Dad, best friend and partner,”  and lover, and the one I’m spending the rest of my life with,  "since last summer on the Mountain."

Partner.

“Thought you were gettin married this month, del Mar,” said Mr. Twist, finally acknowledging Ennis’ presence before him.  “Where’s your wife?”

“Don’t have one, sir,” responded Ennis.  He looked up again right at Mr. Twist.  “Couldn’t promise Alma I’d love her for the rest of my days, and thought it best not to make a promise I couldn’t keep, so I didn’t marry her.  Guess I’m not the marryin kind, sir, at least not with Alma.  After that, decided to come up here and see Jack.” And hope he would remember me and still care for me like we did on the Mountain.

Mr. Twist looked hard at Ennis, and then at Jack, and then back at Ennis.  “Well, good thing to do, del Mar, a man don’t make promises he can’t keep, like stayin around when ya got no real plans ta do it,”  Mr. Twist said to the both of them.  Jack blushed a little bit, and his mouth hardened that same little bit.  But he still looked at his father. 

Mr. Twist held out his hand slowly.  “If Andy Murchison likes ya enough to hire ya and trust ya with his truck, you’re ok with me.” 

Ennis took his hand and gripped it, giving back as good as he got.  Mr. Twist looked again at Ennis, and then at Jack, and then at Mrs. Twist.  Something passed between husband and wife; Jack missed it, ‘cause he’d never seen it before and didn’t know what to look for.  Ennis had only known them for five minutes, and had no clue. 

That’s when Mr. Twist gave Jack the first real Christmas present of his short life.  As he dropped Ennis’ hand, Mr. Twist continued, “And, any friend and partner of Jack’s is welcome in our home.”


cwby30, the 3rd installment of The Christmas present is a gift to all of us!  Exceptional, cwby30!  I even like Mr. Twist in your charming tale.  And Ennis finally accepting himself for who he truly is!  We can't ask for any better than that!  I hope you continue on with The Christmas Present, cwby30.  I'm enjoying it no end!
Title: Right (55) By Littlewing1957
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 12, 2007, 12:10:02 am
Right (55) By Littlewing1957

“No, stay with me, please!” Ennis whispered to his lover as he sensed him pulling away.  “We don’t have to do anything, just hold onto me, Jack.  I’m cold and I’m feelin' lonely.”  Ennis’ voice broke as he pleaded with Jack to stay with him.  Jack moved closer to his man and slipped a firm arm around his neck.  With his other hand Jack traced Ennis’ jaw line in the dark.  “I won’t leave,” Jack whispered.  “I was just turning over to give you more room.”  “I don’t need any more room,” Ennis stated as he pulled Jack even closer.  It was along about 3:00a.m., and Jack was so close to Ennis that he threatened to bore right into him. Ennis wouldn’t have it any other way. Warm and secure, Ennis and Jack once again fell into a deep sleep. 

Mr. Twist sat on the edge of his bed and watched his wife sleep.  He was not of a particularly amorous nature, but some nights he felt the old stirrings.  His wife just had an operation to remove her private parts, and could not accommodate him.  John Twist knew it was wrong, but he wondered if Jack would tolerate him one last time.  He knew he was taking an enormous chance; there was every danger that Jack would beat the tar out of him.  But the urge was just too strong!  Mr. Twist rose from his bed and walked down the hall to Jack’s room.  He didn’t knock, but opened the door and walked right in.  He found Jack’s bed in the dark and placed a tentative hand on the quilt to locate his son’s warm body.  Hmmm, the bed seemed cold.  Mr. Twist allowed his eyes to adjust to the gloom and saw that Jack was not in his bed.  He stomped his foot on the cold floor in a near rage and returned to his own room.

Ennis and Jack slept peacefully in Ennis’ small bed, but they weren’t really alone.  Alan Sims was driving by the ranch on the way to his mother’s place when he saw Ennis walking down to the Twist's basement.  Alan pulled over to the side of the ranch and killed his engine.  He couldn’t believe that the holy rolling Twists would allow Jack to keep his lover under their roof.  The thought of Jack and his partner breaking bread with Jack’s parents fascinated Alan no end.  He remembered happier days when Jack was still his friend, and they would play down in that very same basement.  Alan parked and watched Ennis.  He could certainly see what Jack saw in him.  Yes, that young fella was a looker, no doubt.  It was late, it was cold, but Alan couldn’t leave.  He had a feeling that something was about to happen.  And sure enough, after about 15 minutes, Alan spied Jack as he left the house and headed down to the basement.  Alan waited until Jack was safely inside the basement room and left his car.  He moved like a thief in the night as he approached the basement, and peered inside the tiny window.  Alan fought to contain his jealously as he saw Ennis and Jack pressed together.  Nothing much he could do about it right then, though.  He was just about to turn and leave when he heard an angry voice behind him, “What are you doing here?” 


Title: Re: The Christmas Present (3)
Post by: Toycoon on December 12, 2007, 12:59:00 am
Well howdy cwby30. Lovin' your third chapter of the Christmas Present.
It's true, you've even managed to make Old Man Twist reasonable and decent. Bravo!
Title: Re: The Christmas Present (3)
Post by: Dagi on December 12, 2007, 04:51:06 am


I feel all christmassy after reading this little tale! Thanks so much for writing and posting, cwby30!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on December 12, 2007, 04:56:05 am
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Right (55) By Littlewing1957

Uh-oh, the tension is building up enormously...the image of Jack and Ennis snuggled up close to one another is so sweet, I will carry it around with me the whole day!

Dagi
Title: Re: Right (55)
Post by: cwby30 on December 12, 2007, 02:21:27 pm
Mornin'.

Well, OMT is still sick in the head, but believable since once they get started pedophiles can't and don't stop.  Maybe he should proposition Alan; since they both can't have Jack, maybe they should have 'the next best thing' together. *Yuck!*

Looking forward to finding out who else was walking around to look in the basement window, and how that goes down.  If the guys hear what's going on, that would add to the problems.

Great story!! Just in case I hadn't said it before. 

And, to veer from that into my own offering, I appreciate all of your kind comments on my little story.  Will be adding to it, after all it's only Christmas Eve and there still is Christmas and the day after and .... 

Thanks again.
Title: Re: The Christmas Present (4)
Post by: cwby30 on December 13, 2007, 01:42:38 am
Evenin'.

Well, even being new to posting here, I know that this is way over at 1.330 or so words!! Hope ya don't mind.  Tried to figure a logical place to cut it into two pieces, but it just didn't flow that way.  Will try to do better next time, drag it out over a couple of days.  ;)  So, here it is. 

Thanks again. 

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“Yes sir, it’s snowin’ mighty hard over here, don’t think I can make it to the road.”

“Yes sir.”

“I don’t mean to be puttin’ ya out like that.”

“Yes sir, thank ya, sir, I’ll tell ‘em for ya.  And Merry Christmas to ya, too, sir.”

Ennis hung up the phone and looked over at Jack and his parents.  “Mr. Murchison says ta just stay ‘n bring the truck back after Christmas.  They’re closin’ early t’day anyway, ‘n won’t be open t’morrow, ‘course.  And he said ta wish ya a Merry Christmas.”

“Well, now that that’s settled, why don’t you two go upstairs and figure out where Ennis’ll be stayin’?  Plenty of rooms up there, no one but Jack sleepin’ up there these days, take yer pick.  Will be nice havin' a guest for Christmas, Ennis,” said Mrs. Twist. 

After the boys had thanked her for the cocoa and bounded up the stairs to explore bedrooms, Mrs. Twist turned to her husband, still sitting in his chair at the end of the kitchen table.

“Don’t be givin’ me that look, Elaine Twist, ain’t seen it in fifteen years, don’t cotton to be seein’ it again so soon.”

“Sixteen years, five months ‘n three days to be exact. The day ya did that horrible thing ta our son when he couldn’t reach the toilet.”

“Told ya I was sorry, was drunk.”

“Never said it to yer son. And never told ‘im he was doin' a real good job even though he breaks his back tryin’ to get ya to notice him, thinks he can never please ya. Ya tell me about ‘im all the time, why don’t ya tell ‘im, too? You’re a hard man, John.”

“Couldn’t tell ‘im, I’m his father, fathers don’t say things like that.”

“Where’d ya ever learn that? Ya can tell ‘im if ya wanta, he’s not a child any more, he’s a grown man, ‘n still wants his father’s love.”

“Man? Ya call him a man, knowin’ what kind he is and what his kind does with other men, and now bringin' his ‘partner’ inta our house?  Not sure we’re doin’ the right thing, havin’ the two of them under this roof and upstairs alone ta boot. ‘Not the marryin’ kind’ is he? Hmmf. Know what that means, and know our son is the same, and the Bible says…”

“Know all about what the Bible says, and it also says ta love yer neighbor like ya love God and yerself, and ta keep holy the Sabbath, and not ta kill, and not ta covet.  Says a lot a things, John, and ya best be thinkin’ about all a them things, and not just the little bits ya wanta hear and repeat. Don’t like it much myself, but God made our son so He must love ‘im, know I do, and know you do too even if ya don’t say so.” 

“No tellin’ what them two are doin’ upstairs, too quiet if ya ask me.  Tell ya, it ain’t right, and if I find out, I’ll…”

“You’ll do nothin’, John, and ya’ll never go upstairs unless they ask ya, it’s their place now, mebbe the only place they can be together safe fer now. It’s our son you’re talkin’ about, and the young man that’s his partner.  Don’t ya see?”

“See what?”

“The gift that’s been given to us.  Ya want yer son to stay, help out, learn ta ranch properly, take over fer ya when the time comes.  Mebbe that’ll never happen, he’s got that itch ta see the world, our son does, like your brother had.  Ennis, he’s our gift, too, and he's givin' us Jack, he’ll keep Jack here for a while, and they’ll work the place and learn ranchin' real good from ya.  And then they’ll go ‘n see the world together, I just know it, and mebbe they’ll come back after a spell ‘n settle with us, mebbe not.  But Ennis’ll keep our son safe ‘n teach ‘im ta be careful wherever they go. And fer that gift I thank the Lord and so should you.  And another thing, I’ll do nothin' to make our son wanta leave ‘n stay away, ‘n ya won’t do nothin’ neither, John Twist, or so help me Hannah I’ll….”

“You’ll what?”

Mrs. Twist settled into her chair at the table, suddenly aware of how she had spoken to her husband, hardly the dutiful wife.  She looked at her hands in her lap, until she heard a soft chuckle coming from her husband of thirty years. 

“Woman, that’s the most ya’ve said ta me in months.”

She chuckled back and looked up. “Husband, think that’s the most I’ve said ta ya all year.”

John sat quietly for a few minutes, turning his empty coffee cup in his hands on the red and green  Christmas tablecloth.  He took a deep breath and looked at his wife of thirty years. 

“S’pose I should be sayin' a few things ta my son, things I shoulda said b’fore, overdue things.  Won't be runnin' ‘em off, if yer worried about that.  It’s just… just… I want so much for him, mebbe he gets his dreamin' from me and Phil. Known fer some time about his choice, and tried to teach ‘im to be hard, ‘cause that’s the way a the world.  Mebbe I been too hard, shoulda said more, but I just cain’t do it, don’t have the words ta say what I feel when it comes ta him, ta tell ‘im, never had...  And the Bible, hard ta put that aside even fer yer own kin.”  John brushed his fingers across his forehead, shaking his head slowly.  Made up his mind, put his hand back on his coffee cup. 

Speaking softly he said, “Did ya hear ‘im, Elaine? He called me ‘dad,’ not ‘daddy.’ Yer right, he’s a grown man, time ta let ‘im find his own way, he’s chosen a hard one, hope he learned enough ta be safe with his par… with Ennis. And I’ll think on that love business in the Bible, never did care much for the hellfire and brimstone crowd, mebbe why I ain’t set foot in a church since Jack was a little one.”  He thought some more, and continued. 

“Think I’ll go up… I mean call upstairs, and see if mebbe Ennis would like the room with the big bed in it, the one next to Jack’s. Be more comfortable fer him, bein’ tall ‘n all… and it’s at other end of the house from our room downstairs, so they won’t be botherin’ us with all their yackin’ all night. Need my sleep if I’m gonna still run this place proper like. So will they. Better remind ‘em of that too. Got chores need doin’, even on Christmas Eve.”

He moved to get up, but Mrs. Twist covered his right hand with hers, effectively keeping him in his chair, and told him quietly, “Thank you, John.”

“Not sure for what, still not sure it’s the right thing we’re doin’,” he replied shaking his head.

“Fer givin’ me an early Christmas present.”

“What?” he replied with a slightly furrowed brow.

“Fer givin’ me back the John Twist that I married.” 

John covered her hand with his other one, rubbing his thumb over hers, and his blue eyes smiled into her hazel eyes. 

John and Elaine didn’t realize that their son and Ennis already knew about the present from his father.  They didn’t see two men barely twenty years old, sitting on the top step with an arm around each other’s shoulder, listening to the end of the conversation downstairs like a couple of kids half their age. Jack smiled through his tears, and put his head in the crook of Ennis’ neck.  Ennis just held him close and whispered, “Merry Christmas, l’il darlin’,” and kissed his hair.  Jack held on tighter, now with both arms. 

Outside, the storm began to ease up, and the sun peeked through the clouds, sending tentative streaks of warm gold across the cold white. 

Title: Re: The Christmas Present (4)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 14, 2007, 01:01:12 am
Evenin'.

Well, even being new to posting here, I know that this is way over at 1.330 or so words!! Hope ya don't mind.  Tried to figure a logical place to cut it into two pieces, but it just didn't flow that way.  Will try to do better next time, drag it out over a couple of days.  ;)  So, here it is. 

Thanks again. 

***************************************

“Yes sir, it’s snowin’ mighty hard over here, don’t think I can make it to the road.”

“Yes sir.”

“I don’t mean to be puttin’ ya out like that.”

“Yes sir, thank ya, sir, I’ll tell ‘em for ya.  And Merry Christmas to ya, too, sir.”

Ennis hung up the phone and looked over at Jack and his parents.  “Mr. Murchison says ta just stay ‘n bring the truck back after Christmas.  They’re closin’ early t’day anyway, ‘n won’t be open t’morrow, ‘course.  And he said ta wish ya a Merry Christmas.”

“Well, now that that’s settled, why don’t you two go upstairs and figure out where Ennis’ll be stayin’?  Plenty of rooms up there, no one but Jack sleepin’ up there these days, take yer pick.  Will be nice havin' a guest for Christmas, Ennis,” said Mrs. Twist. 

After the boys had thanked her for the cocoa and bounded up the stairs to explore bedrooms, Mrs. Twist turned to her husband, still sitting in his chair at the end of the kitchen table.

“Don’t be givin’ me that look, Elaine Twist, ain’t seen it in fifteen years, don’t cotton to be seein’ it again so soon.”

“Sixteen years, five months ‘n three days to be exact. The day ya did that horrible thing ta our son when he couldn’t reach the toilet.”

“Told ya I was sorry, was drunk.”

“Never said it to yer son. And never told ‘im he was doin' a real good job even though he breaks his back tryin’ to get ya to notice him, thinks he can never please ya. Ya tell me about ‘im all the time, why don’t ya tell ‘im, too? You’re a hard man, John.”

“Couldn’t tell ‘im, I’m his father, fathers don’t say things like that.”

“Where’d ya ever learn that? Ya can tell ‘im if ya wanta, he’s not a child any more, he’s a grown man, ‘n still wants his father’s love.”

“Man? Ya call him a man, knowin’ what kind he is and what his kind does with other men, and now bringin' his ‘partner’ inta our house?  Not sure we’re doin’ the right thing, havin’ the two of them under this roof and upstairs alone ta boot. ‘Not the marryin’ kind’ is he? Hmmf. Know what that means, and know our son is the same, and the Bible says…”

“Know all about what the Bible says, and it also says ta love yer neighbor like ya love God and yerself, and ta keep holy the Sabbath, and not ta kill, and not ta covet.  Says a lot a things, John, and ya best be thinkin’ about all a them things, and not just the little bits ya wanta hear and repeat. Don’t like it much myself, but God made our son so He must love ‘im, know I do, and know you do too even if ya don’t say so.” 

“No tellin’ what them two are doin’ upstairs, too quiet if ya ask me.  Tell ya, it ain’t right, and if I find out, I’ll…”

“You’ll do nothin’, John, and ya’ll never go upstairs unless they ask ya, it’s their place now, mebbe the only place they can be together safe fer now. It’s our son you’re talkin’ about, and the young man that’s his partner.  Don’t ya see?”

“See what?”

“The gift that’s been given to us.  Ya want yer son to stay, help out, learn ta ranch properly, take over fer ya when the time comes.  Mebbe that’ll never happen, he’s got that itch ta see the world, our son does, like your brother had.  Ennis, he’s our gift, too, and he's givin' us Jack, he’ll keep Jack here for a while, and they’ll work the place and learn ranchin' real good from ya.  And then they’ll go ‘n see the world together, I just know it, and mebbe they’ll come back after a spell ‘n settle with us, mebbe not.  But Ennis’ll keep our son safe ‘n teach ‘im ta be careful wherever they go. And fer that gift I thank the Lord and so should you.  And another thing, I’ll do nothin' to make our son wanta leave ‘n stay away, ‘n ya won’t do nothin’ neither, John Twist, or so help me Hannah I’ll….”

“You’ll what?”

Mrs. Twist settled into her chair at the table, suddenly aware of how she had spoken to her husband, hardly the dutiful wife.  She looked at her hands in her lap, until she heard a soft chuckle coming from her husband of thirty years. 

“Woman, that’s the most ya’ve said ta me in months.”

She chuckled back and looked up. “Husband, think that’s the most I’ve said ta ya all year.”

John sat quietly for a few minutes, turning his empty coffee cup in his hands on the red and green  Christmas tablecloth.  He took a deep breath and looked at his wife of thirty years. 

“S’pose I should be sayin' a few things ta my son, things I shoulda said b’fore, overdue things.  Won't be runnin' ‘em off, if yer worried about that.  It’s just… just… I want so much for him, mebbe he gets his dreamin' from me and Phil. Known fer some time about his choice, and tried to teach ‘im to be hard, ‘cause that’s the way a the world.  Mebbe I been too hard, shoulda said more, but I just cain’t do it, don’t have the words ta say what I feel when it comes ta him, ta tell ‘im, never had...  And the Bible, hard ta put that aside even fer yer own kin.”  John brushed his fingers across his forehead, shaking his head slowly.  Made up his mind, put his hand back on his coffee cup. 

Speaking softly he said, “Did ya hear ‘im, Elaine? He called me ‘dad,’ not ‘daddy.’ Yer right, he’s a grown man, time ta let ‘im find his own way, he’s chosen a hard one, hope he learned enough ta be safe with his par… with Ennis. And I’ll think on that love business in the Bible, never did care much for the hellfire and brimstone crowd, mebbe why I ain’t set foot in a church since Jack was a little one.”  He thought some more, and continued. 

“Think I’ll go up… I mean call upstairs, and see if mebbe Ennis would like the room with the big bed in it, the one next to Jack’s. Be more comfortable fer him, bein’ tall ‘n all… and it’s at other end of the house from our room downstairs, so they won’t be botherin’ us with all their yackin’ all night. Need my sleep if I’m gonna still run this place proper like. So will they. Better remind ‘em of that too. Got chores need doin’, even on Christmas Eve.”

He moved to get up, but Mrs. Twist covered his right hand with hers, effectively keeping him in his chair, and told him quietly, “Thank you, John.”

“Not sure for what, still not sure it’s the right thing we’re doin’,” he replied shaking his head.

“Fer givin’ me an early Christmas present.”

“What?” he replied with a slightly furrowed brow.

“Fer givin’ me back the John Twist that I married.” 

John covered her hand with his other one, rubbing his thumb over hers, and his blue eyes smiled into her hazel eyes. 

John and Elaine didn’t realize that their son and Ennis already knew about the present from his father.  They didn’t see two men barely twenty years old, sitting on the top step with an arm around each other’s shoulder, listening to the end of the conversation downstairs like a couple of kids half their age. Jack smiled through his tears, and put his head in the crook of Ennis’ neck.  Ennis just held him close and whispered, “Merry Christmas, l’il darlin’,” and kissed his hair.  Jack held on tighter, now with both arms. 

Outside, the storm began to ease up, and the sun peeked through the clouds, sending tentative streaks of warm gold across the cold white. 



Another amazing addition to your charming tale, cwby30!  I really enjoyed reading through this, especially the exchange between Mr. Twist and his wife.  I love to read about the 2 of them, and you really got into their heads.  Thanks for this!
Title: December the 21st
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 14, 2007, 01:31:48 am
December the 21st by Littlewing1957

Ennis sat on his small bed and read over the postcard once more.  He didn’t expect to hear from Jack so soon; they just met up for a hunting trip a few months ago.  Ennis was always glad to hear from his lover, anticipated hearing from him, as their infrequent visits were a ray of light that sustained and warmed him every day of his difficult life.

Christmas alone with Jack up in the mountains?  Just the two of them?  Ennis couldn’t believe it.  He never once spent a holiday with Jack.  He poured over the card again.  There was a sadness, a disconnect that Ennis detected in Jack’s words.  The card read,

Friend how about December 21 all the way to December 29th for a meet?  I can make it, and would love to spend the holiday with you.  Let me know.

Ennis could read between the lines.  All was not well in the Twist household.  Hell, as far as Ennis knew, things were never good in Jack's piece of Texas.  But this sounded serious!  Jack didn’t plan on spending Christmas at home with his family?  Ennis had a feeling that Jack would confide in him once they were together - tell him all about it.  And they would be together!  After the stunt he pulled Thanksgiving, Ennis knew he would not be invited to Alma and Monroe’s place for Christmas dinner.  He planned to see his girls briefly before he headed to the mountains to be with Jack. 

Ennis rose from his bed and reached for his coat.  First, a trip to the post office to mail a reply to Jack.  Ennis would be careful in his reply to his lover, so there would be no mistake,

You bet bud.  I look forward to spending Christmas with you.  Just let me know where.

Next, off to Sears to select a gift for his friend.  Ennis reached for his wallet and counted his money.  Not much, but he could afford to buy Jack something decent.
Title: Re: The Christmas Present (4)
Post by: Dagi on December 14, 2007, 04:26:44 am

 Jack held on tighter, now with both arms. 

Outside, the storm began to ease up, and the sun peeked through the clouds, sending tentative streaks of warm gold across the cold white. 



Thanks for writing and posting cwby30! Ma Twist, you tell him!

Dagi
Title: Re: December the 21st
Post by: Dagi on December 14, 2007, 04:32:09 am
December the 21st by Littlewing1957

Ennis sat on his small bed and read over the postcard once more.  He didn’t expect to hear from Jack so soon; they just met up for a hunting trip a few months ago.  Ennis was always glad to hear from his lover, anticipated hearing from him, as their infrequent visits were a ray of light that sustained and warmed him every day of his difficult life.

Christmas alone with Jack up in the mountains?  Just the two of them?  Ennis couldn’t believe it.  He never once spent a holiday with Jack.  He poured over the card again.  There was a sadness, a disconnect that Ennis detected in Jack’s words.  The card read,

Friend how about December 21 all the way to December 29th for a meet?  I can make it, and would love to spend the holiday with you.  Let me know.

Ennis could read between the lines.  All was not well in the Twist household.  Hell, as far as Ennis knew, things were never good in Jack's piece of Texas.  But this sounded serious!  Jack didn’t plan on spending Christmas at home with his family?  Ennis had a feeling that Jack would confide in him once they were together - tell him all about it.  And they would be together!  After the stunt he pulled Thanksgiving, Ennis knew he would not be invited to Alma and Monroe’s place for Christmas dinner.  He planned to see his girls briefly before he headed to the mountains to be with Jack. 

Ennis rose from his bed and reached for his coat.  First, a trip to the post office to mail a reply to Jack.  Ennis would be careful in his reply to his lover, so there would be no mistake,

You bet bud.  I look forward to spending Christmas with you.  Just let me know where.

Next, off to Sears to select a gift for his friend.  Ennis reached for his wallet and counted his money.  Not much, but he could afford to buy Jack something decent.


Jack and Ennis are going to spend Christmas together!  :D Yay, I'm looking forward to it!

Dagi
Title: Re: December the 21st
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 15, 2007, 02:49:37 am
Jack and Ennis are going to spend Christmas together!  :D Yay, I'm looking forward to it!

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi!
Title: Re: December the 21st
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 15, 2007, 02:50:59 am
Awww, Jack seems so sad  :'( but both of them spending Christmas alone together sounds wonderful littlewing.

Susie  :)

The 2 of them together during the holidays seems almost too good to be true!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on December 15, 2007, 02:48:17 pm
I was a long time coming but here, finally is Chapter 56 of "Right", the continuing saga of Jack with Ennis.
Thank you everyone for your continued support. You know I love you guys and I wish the very best for you at this holiday season!
Title: Right 56 by Toycoon
Post by: Toycoon on December 15, 2007, 02:51:29 pm
"I said, what the hell are you doing here?!" shouted John Twist at the frail young man. Alan wheeled around to face John Twist, aiming a loaded rifle straight at him. "Please, Mr. Twist! Don't shoot!" pleaded Alan, holding his hands in the air," It's me... Alan Sims, Jack's friend, remember?"

"I said, what are you doing here!" said John, not lowering the rifle. "I came looking for Jack."
"Well Jack ain't here! And you're on my property. I told you to stay away from here, now get going!" Alan slowly backed up off the porch, away from Mr. Twist, turned then started to run to his car. Mr. Twist watched him as he jumped in to his car and sped away.

"What in the hell is going on around here?" he muttered to himself. John walked over to the basement door. He stood at the door for a few moments before knocking. "No, he couldn't be..." John rapped on the door, then turned the knob and walked in. He pulled the chain for the light and let his eyes focus on the two figures in the twin bed. Startled, Ennis and Jack sat up in the bed, too surprised to speak or say anything. John spoke first, "Jack, I want  you to get out of that bed and go up to your room and Ennis, I want to get your stuff and get the hell outta here! I knew there was something bad about you! You Goddamn queers ain't never no good! Jack, yer mamma's gonna hear about this. It's gonna kill her!" John had the rifle aimed at Ennis and his son.

Enraged, Jack threw back the covers and stood up. He was completely naked but still commanded authority despite his being exposed. He walked straight up to his father and got right in his face. "You ain't telling momma, nothin', ya hear that, old man! Unless you want me to tell her about that time when I was five and ya beat me and pissed all over me! Or about all them secret visits to my room late at night. Ya want me to tell her about that you old sonofabitch!" John stood there, stunned by his son's boldness. He knew Jack was right. He lowered the rifle then silently turned and started up the steps to the door. "We'll start on the barn in the morning," he muttered, almost inaudibly and slammed the door behind him. Jack and Ennis stared at each other in complete disbelief.

Title: Re: The Christmas Present (5)
Post by: cwby30 on December 15, 2007, 08:26:03 pm
Before he could rouse himself enough to let go of his wife’s hands after their talk, Mr. Twist heard Jack calling from upstairs, informing them that Ennis had chosen the room across the hall from Jack’s.  Ennis protested, but Jack’s parents insisted, and the boys instead made up the room next to Jack’s, the one with the larger bed. 

Clambering down the stairs to announce their impending presence, Jack and Ennis entered the kitchen somewhat more subdued than when they went up, but not disheveled.  Puzzled somewhat at their quiet demeanor, John just shrugged and moved onto the next task at hand.  Standing up, he ran a hand through his hard and faced the two new arrivals. 

“Well, hung around the house long enough, snow’s let up, hafta check the stock, see how they weathered the storm, make sure they’ve ‘nough feed. Jack and me’ll take care a that, Ennis, yer a visitor, ya can stay inside, mebbe call yer family and let ‘em know yer okay, say Merry Christmas and all that.  And don’t worry about the phone bill, guess it’ll be our present to ya.”

“Thank ya anyway, sir, but I don’t got any family to call.” Jack’s all the family I got or need.

“What about yer pa and yer ma?” Mr. Twist asked impatiently. 

Ennis replied quietly, looking down. “They died in a accident when I was 14, ran off the road on the way to our ranch.  Lost the ranch, been workin’ ever since.  M’ brother kicked me out this Spring when he got married. M’ sister’s married, lives somewhere in Laramie, ain’t heard from her in coupla years.”

“Shit, that’s hard, boy.”

“John, not in the house,” said Mrs. Twist firmly, and then continued,  “I’m very sorry ta hear about yer folks, Ennis.”

“’s alright, ma’am. Been a long time now, over six years.”  Raising his head to look at Mr. Twist, Ennis continued.  “Sir, me ‘n Jack’ll take care of the chores fer ya, only way I can think a thankin’ ya ‘n Mrs. Twist fer lettin’ me stay over Christmas.  Don’t have a right present fer ya, but I got two hands that know how ta work hard, so hope ya’ll let me do this fer ya instead.” 

Jack held his breath, secretly admiring Ennis.  No one but John Twist knew anything about how to run the Twist spread, no one, not Jack, not his wife, not his older brother no longer there, no one, just ask him, he’d told that in no uncertain terms to anyone who ever dared suggest otherwise for the past thirty years.  Run through enough hired hands to confirm that throughout the entire county. 

John looked sharply at Ennis, and then at his son.  He frowned, and started forming words of protest, something about Ennis’ bein’ an upstart and new to these parts, when Jack surprised all three of them by jumping in and insisting that the two of them could do it alone and for once he should let Jack handle it, after all they took care of more than a thousand sheep all summer together by themselves.  His talking drifted to a stop when he got a good look at his father’s face, the little veins on his forehead starting to bulge.   

Still frowning, but remembering, Mr. Twist surprised himself by accepting Ennis’ present.  “Well, if ya feel that way about it, think I’ll take ya up on that, Ennis.  But mind ya, ya’ll hafta run herd on this one over here that calls ya his ‘partner’, don’t know much about runnin’ this place yet no matter how much I’ve tried to show ‘im, and tends to daydream and let things slide.  So keep an eye on ‘em. And I’ll be watchin’ ya and checkin’ yer work, be sure of that, so best do it right and no lollygaggin’, ya hear.”

Jack eyed his father suspiciously, wondering what his old man was up to.  With a "yessir" Ennis just turned and walked towards the door, wanting to get away, all the talking exhausting him, calling over his shoulder as he went. “Ya comin’, Jack? Ain’t got time ta waste, them clouds outside look like they might have some more snow in ‘em, ‘n I fer one don’t wanta get caught in no blizzard. Done that already once this year, back on the Mountain.” 

With a last puzzled look at his dad, Jack turned and hurried after Ennis.  The last Mr. and Mrs. Twist heard was the banging of the closing outside door, and the muffled sound of boots crunching snow on the outside stairs. 
Title: Right (57)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 16, 2007, 02:18:16 am
Right (57) By Littlewing1957

Jack sat on Ennis’ small bed and covered himself with the blankets.  Mr. Twist left in a huff, leaving behind an impression in the basement as bitter cold as the air outside.  Ennis moved to join Jack on the bed.  He reached out for his friend, and placed a tender hand on Jack’s shoulder.  Jack was trembling.  Ennis pulled him close and held him tight.  “Easy, Rodeo,” Ennis whispered as he cuddled Jack.  “Its okay, he’s gone now!”  Jack melted into his lover’s embrace and found his resolve returning with each gentle caress.  “Maybe we better go up to the house and get ready to get to work, Friend,” Jack offered.  “It must be along on 4:00 in the morning, and the earlier we get started, the better for all of us.”  Ennis looked Jack straight in his blue eyes.  How could he talk about going up to the house, and preparing to work like nothing happened?  Ennis didn’t know about Jack, but he would have a hard time facing Old Man Twist after what just happened there tonight.  “Maybe your dad is right,” Ennis ventured.  “I’ve caused you nothin’ but trouble, Jack.”  He released his lover and turned his back to him.  “Maybe I should clear out.  That’ll be best for everyone!”  Jack sighed.  “Look friend,” he began, “If you leave, I’m goin’ with you.”  Jack began to rub Ennis’ back with a smooth, circular motion.

Mr. Twist found climbing the stairs to his room as much an ordeal as finding Jack in bed with his lover.  He felt every year of his age as he managed the last few steps to the second story of his tiny house.  His home was cold - colder than it had ever been before.  John Twist passed his son’s empty room and stiffened.  He replayed Jack’s words in his head and wondered what would happen next.  He didn’t really want Ennis to leave, but how could he ever sanction the kind of behavior he just witnessed?  And what if someone from town…?  Alan Sims!  John forgot about Alan, and how he almost shot him dead out there in the dark! His presence certainly complicated things!  What did he see?  How much did he know?  John approached his bed and climbed in next to his wife.  He would find a way to deal with Alan.  “John, I heard voices... is everything okay?” It was Mrs. Twist, her small voice heavy with sleep.  “Go back to sleep, mother,” Mr. Twist soothed.  “I thought I heard voices too, and went out to investigate.”  John Twist patted his wife’s hand. “I didn’t find anything.  Everything is fine.”  Roberta Twist smiled in the dark and moved closer to her husband.

Ennis watched as Jack finished dressing.  Ennis was already fully dressed, but he had no idea what to do next.  He was adamant about leaving, and if Jack wanted to go along, well, he had no problem with that.  Jack agreed that they should get lost, at least until cooler heads prevailed.  He didn’t have a plan, didn’t think anything through.  Jack just knew that he never wanted to be separated from Ennis again.  He looked at Ennis and thought his nerves would shatter.  “You sure you wanna go, friend?” Jack asked, gently. Ennis nodded and moved closer to his lover.  “Are you sure you want to come with me?  What about your ma?  She’ll be worried sick!”  Jack pulled Ennis into a gentle embrace.  “I’ll get word to her somehow.  And besides, we’ll be back, right?”  Ennis kissed Jack on the lips.  “Yeah, we’ll be back.”  They shared another tender kiss, and It was settled.  Ennis turned off the light, and the two men climbed the steps up from the basement.  They moved silently and very swiftly to the main road and headed out in the cold.
Title: Re: The Christmas Present (5)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 16, 2007, 02:24:28 am
Before he could rouse himself enough to let go of his wife’s hands after their talk, Mr. Twist heard Jack calling from upstairs, informing them that Ennis had chosen the room across the hall from Jack’s.  Ennis protested, but Jack’s parents insisted, and the boys instead made up the room next to Jack’s, the one with the larger bed. 

Clambering down the stairs to announce their impending presence, Jack and Ennis entered the kitchen somewhat more subdued than when they went up, but not disheveled.  Puzzled somewhat at their quiet demeanor, John just shrugged and moved onto the next task at hand.  Standing up, he ran a hand through his hard and faced the two new arrivals. 

“Well, hung around the house long enough, snow’s let up, hafta check the stock, see how they weathered the storm, make sure they’ve ‘nough feed. Jack and me’ll take care a that, Ennis, yer a visitor, ya can stay inside, mebbe call yer family and let ‘em know yer okay, say Merry Christmas and all that.  And don’t worry about the phone bill, guess it’ll be our present to ya.”

“Thank ya anyway, sir, but I don’t got any family to call.” Jack’s all the family I got or need.

“What about yer pa and yer ma?” Mr. Twist asked impatiently. 

Ennis replied quietly, looking down. “They died in a accident when I was 14, ran off the road on the way to our ranch.  Lost the ranch, been workin’ ever since.  M’ brother kicked me out this Spring when he got married. M’ sister’s married, lives somewhere in Laramie, ain’t heard from her in coupla years.”

“Shit, that’s hard, boy.”

“John, not in the house,” said Mrs. Twist firmly, and then continued,  “I’m very sorry ta hear about yer folks, Ennis.”

“’s alright, ma’am. Been a long time now, over six years.”  Raising his head to look at Mr. Twist, Ennis continued.  “Sir, me ‘n Jack’ll take care of the chores fer ya, only way I can think a thankin’ ya ‘n Mrs. Twist fer lettin’ me stay over Christmas.  Don’t have a right present fer ya, but I got two hands that know how ta work hard, so hope ya’ll let me do this fer ya instead.” 

Jack held his breath, secretly admiring Ennis.  No one but John Twist knew anything about how to run the Twist spread, no one, not Jack, not his wife, not his older brother no longer there, no one, just ask him, he’d told that in no uncertain terms to anyone who ever dared suggest otherwise for the past thirty years.  Run through enough hired hands to confirm that throughout the entire county. 

John looked sharply at Ennis, and then at his son.  He frowned, and started forming words of protest, something about Ennis’ bein’ an upstart and new to these parts, when Jack surprised all three of them by jumping in and insisting that the two of them could do it alone and for once he should let Jack handle it, after all they took care of more than a thousand sheep all summer together by themselves.  His talking drifted to a stop when he got a good look at his father’s face, the little veins on his forehead starting to bulge.   

Still frowning, but remembering, Mr. Twist surprised himself by accepting Ennis’ present.  “Well, if ya feel that way about it, think I’ll take ya up on that, Ennis.  But mind ya, ya’ll hafta run herd on this one over here that calls ya his ‘partner’, don’t know much about runnin’ this place yet no matter how much I’ve tried to show ‘im, and tends to daydream and let things slide.  So keep an eye on ‘em. And I’ll be watchin’ ya and checkin’ yer work, be sure of that, so best do it right and no lollygaggin’, ya hear.”

Jack eyed his father suspiciously, wondering what his old man was up to.  With a "yessir" Ennis just turned and walked towards the door, wanting to get away, all the talking exhausting him, calling over his shoulder as he went. “Ya comin’, Jack? Ain’t got time ta waste, them clouds outside look like they might have some more snow in ‘em, ‘n I fer one don’t wanta get caught in no blizzard. Done that already once this year, back on the Mountain.” 

With a last puzzled look at his dad, Jack turned and hurried after Ennis.  The last Mr. and Mrs. Twist heard was the banging of the closing outside door, and the muffled sound of boots crunching snow on the outside stairs. 


Beautiful addition, cwby30!  Ennis staying through Christmas and convincing OMT to let him help on the ranch.  Very descriptive language.  Lovely, lovely writing.  I'm really looking forward to reading the next installment.  What a wonderful Xmas present to all of us!
Title: Re: The christmas Present (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 16, 2007, 06:12:27 pm
Hi there cwby30.  Another great story.  I love the way we all want to rewrite this story so that the boys can be together.  Of course as the story was originally written and filmed is very powerful, and true statement, but it would not be half so powerful if we did not want it to work out differently.Gary


Gary, this is very true!
Title: Re: Right (57)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 16, 2007, 06:14:15 pm
Hi there Toycoon and Littlewing.  Sorry I've not posted any comments in a few days.  Just so you know, I'm still here and I'm following your story.  I was on the edge of my seat when both this Sims character and Mr. Twist went looking for Jack when he was down in the basement in Ennis's arms.  Wow!  What an explosive situation. 

Gary

Thanks for your kind words, Babe!  I almost thought you had give up on us, but I know you wouldn't do that.  Stay with us, as there are more surprises to come!  :)
Title: Re: December the 21st
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 16, 2007, 06:17:05 pm
Hi Littlewing.  I love the idea of Jack and Ennis spending Christmas together.  But I'm wondering what's going on with Jack. 

How are you doint, Littlewing?  Have you recovered from your injuries?  I still wince with pain every time I even think about your fall. 

Gary

Hi, Gary.  Sorry I haven't been in touch in awhile.  I'm much better - almost back to normal.  I'm trying to deal with work, but it's hard since I have to see the place where I fell and hurt myself on a daily basis.  But I'm getting over it.  Thanks for asking!  As long as I have you in my life I know I can make it.  I love you!
Title: December 21st (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 16, 2007, 06:53:59 pm
December 21st (2) By Littlewing1957

December the 18th and Jack was all alone in his home.  He sat on his red sofa with TV guide in hand, and leafed through the network listings.  He wanted to find some lighthearted Xmas fare to cheer him up, especially after the dreary day he endured at work.  Good thing he closed the dealership for the season, that today was his last day at work for awhile.  Jack was done with fat ranchers and their rude, dismissive attutudes.  Business was slow, anyway, and he couldn't wait to get home and relax.  Nothing on but A Christmas Carol, and Jack didn’t particularly want to deal with Scrooge.  In Jack's mind, Mr. Newsome was Childress' resident Scrooge.  He needed something light and airy and sentimental.  It was no use. He threw the guide down on the couch and decided to fix something to eat.  Perhaps later he would watch Frosty the Snowman, or A Charlie Brown Christmas.  Jack always liked the Peanuts Gang.

Jack grilled himself a T-bone steak as he wondered how his family was enjoying Hawaii.  He remembered the look on Lureen’s face when she barged into his office with first class tickets to the Big Island.  The problem was, she only had 2 tickets - one for her and one for Bobby.  To her credit, she looked rather crestfallen when she explained that her parents could only afford 2 additional tickets, and that someone had to remain behind to mind the business.  But they would make it up to him later.  When the fiscal year was over and if the business turned a large enough profit, Daddy Newsome would make sure Jack received a nice bonus and tickets to wherever he wanted to go.  Lureen delivered this news and looked at her husband, hopeful that he understood.  “You okay with this, honey?” Lureen whispered.  “Can we go?”  Jack shrugged and managed a smile.  “Yeah, why not?” He stammered.  “It’s not everyday you get a chance to get away, and to Hawaii, no less!  I guess Hawaii is real pretty this time of year.  You and Bobby and your folks go and have a nice time.”  Lureen brightened and threw her arms around her husband.  She delivered a sloppy pink kiss on his forehead and promised to make everything up to him.  Jack waited until Lureen left his office to wipe her kiss from his brow.

Jack carried his steak and baked potato to the couch and placed it on one of the TV tables.  He ate with gusto, and wished that Ennis Del Mar was sitting beside him, sharing his savory steak.  Just a few days more and he would be in Ennis’ arms.  Jack smiled and marveled that things seemed to work out for the good.  He was certain that his father-in-law could very well afford to include him in the trip to Hawaii, and probably felt self-satisfied that Jack would remain behind.  The old fart probably thought he was causing Jack grief, but he couldn’t be more wrong.  In a way, Mr. Newsome gave Jack a needed gift: a holiday alone with Ennis Del Mar.  Jack couldn’t ask for more than that.  The dealership was officially closed for the holiday, to reopen the day after New Year’s.  He would drive down to be with Ennis, and return before New Year's day.  No one would be the wiser.  Jack finished his meal and headed for his bedroom to pack.  He placed Ennis’ present among his other belongings and zipped the duffle closed.  Just one more sleep until he hit the road to Riverton.

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 16, 2007, 10:54:01 pm
I'm so thankful that we have you three to keep the fires burning Toycoon, Littlewing and Cwby  :-* :-* :-* ... I love reading all your stories  :D ... I just wish I could feel inspired to join in once again .... I feel like I've had the stuffing knocked out of me a bit!!  :-\

Susie  :)

SusieBaby, in due time you'll feel inspired to write again.  Until then, just enjoy our stories.  I vow to keep them coming!  :)
Title: Re: December 21st (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 16, 2007, 10:55:49 pm
That scrooge LD could have bought Jack a ticket ... the miserable old git!!  And Lureen ... how could she swan off to Hawaii leaving Jack alone over Christmas? ... the heartless bag!

But little do they know, they've given him the best possible Christmas present ... Ennis!!

Brilliant story as always Littlewing!

Susie  :)

SusieBaby, thanks for your kind words.  I thought about stopping at 2 installments, but I believe you've inspired me to continue with the story, at least for another chapter.
Title: Re: The Christmas Present (6)
Post by: cwby30 on December 17, 2007, 10:24:14 pm
Evenin'.

Just can't seem to get the hang of just three sentences/three paragraphs.  Know I promised before, and plan to keep my promise, but just couldn't this time.  No. 7 looks promising for keeping my promise.  As does No. 8. I sure appreciate your letting me join in here, and sure enjoy your stories and camaraderie. 

Thanks again.

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John Twist sat in his recliner, looking out of the parlor window onto the ranch landscape covered in white.  He had argued within himself all afternoon, since the ‘partners’ had headed out to check the stock.  He thought about what had happened that day to turn his well-regulated life upside down.  Ennis del Mar had happened, a pure and simple fact, though not a pure and simple man to John Twist. 

He had read the Bible, all the passages of hellfire and damnation, and then passages of love and forgiveness, ending with Luke’s telling of the Christmas story. Abomination, hellfire, damnation, love, forgiveness, Thou Shalt Not Kill, the greatest of these is love, love thy neighbor, wedding garments, judge not lest ye be judged, Ennis is a present given to us, and more swirled around in his brain until he though it would explode. 

He had listened to his father’s voice berating him for being weak, not doing as the Bible said, not dispatching those evildoers immediately to the fires of Hell.  That reminded him of a story in all the papers about ten years before, about some rancher that was killed, beat to death because he was different, a rancher near Sage if he remembered right. Wonder if Ennis knew about that? Wonder if his father had anything to do with that? Wonder if my own father would have done something like that? He shuddered at the prospect, both for Ennis and for his own son.  And himself. 

Then he remembered his mother’s expression when reminding him ‘not to forget the love’ on the day he married Elaine, and how sad he felt when he realized what his father had forgotten for so many years, and how he promised his mother that he never would be like his father. 

But he had broken that promise.  For good reasons or not, he had become his father in so many ways. 

Until today. Until Ennis. 

His mind registered the music coming from the old record player, the Walter Schumann Christmas album Elaine had bought 7 or 8 years ago.  She’d played it so many times over the years it was a wonder that the needle hadn’t worn the grooves all the way through to the other side.  The orchestra music swelled and the singers sang, and Elaine hummed along in the kitchen. 
The First Noel, the Angels did say
Was to certain poor shepherds in fields as they lay
In fields where they lay keeping their sheep
On a cold winter's night that was so deep.
Noel, Noel, Noel, Noel
Born is the King of Israel!

While listening, his eyes involuntarily drifted over to the Manger scene on a shelf in the bookcase.  The family, three wise men, shepherds, an angel, a star. Could use the help of a wise man, three of them better yet, right about now, he thought. 

Some movement outside caught pulled his eyes back to the window.  He saw the tractor towing a now-empty hay trailer through the snow back towards the barn.  Jack drove, and Ennis stood behind him, both hands on Jack’s shoulders for balance.  Once in a while Jack would gesture towards something, and Ennis would look, and then bend down to say something in Jack’s ear.  Could have sworn Ennis kissed Jack’s ear and neck once, Jack scrunching up his shoulders a bit at the contact.  Friends, partners, lovers…

Then it hit, it all came together.  Elaine was right, in more ways than she realized.  Ennis had given him a present that he never realized he’d almost lost, his own self. 

They love each other. All they want is each other, to be left alone to live a sweet life together, nobody else’s business.  It’s up to God to judge them on the Last Day, not me or anyone else in this world.  Maybe it is an abomination, maybe they are headed for damnation, maybe not, but anyone who takes their lives in the name of God certainly will be damned for breaking the Fifth Commandment. I won’t be my father any more. I won't!

He wouldn’t let up on them, had to be sure they understand the challenges and dangers, knew how to be careful and safe in this world.  He wouldn’t let up, but he would allow them the chance to have a safe place to learn.  And if anyone dares to do anything to my son or Ennis, well as God is my witness …

“Honey, supper’s near ready, best be calling the boys in ta wash up. Could use some help settin the table, too, if ya don’t mind,” Elaine tentatively requested

Don’t forget the love.  “Comin, dearie, right on it, don’t mind atall.”
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 18, 2007, 10:54:37 pm
Dagi's poorly again.. this time with tonsilitis and a fever!

Poor dear!!


Get Well Soon honey!  I'll be thinking of you!

(http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s31/Susiebell_album/006.gif)

Lots of love,
Susie  :-* :-* :-*   

Get better soon, Dagi!  This place just ain't the same without you!  :-*
Title: Re: The Christmas Present (6)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 18, 2007, 11:02:03 pm
Evenin'.

Just can't seem to get the hang of just three sentences/three paragraphs.  Know I promised before, and plan to keep my promise, but just couldn't this time.  No. 7 looks promising for keeping my promise.  As does No. 8. I sure appreciate your letting me join in here, and sure enjoy your stories and camaraderie. 

Thanks again.

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John Twist sat in his recliner, looking out of the parlor window onto the ranch landscape covered in white.  He had argued within himself all afternoon, since the ‘partners’ had headed out to check the stock.  He thought about what had happened that day to turn his well-regulated life upside down.  Ennis del Mar had happened, a pure and simple fact, though not a pure and simple man to John Twist. 

He had read the Bible, all the passages of hellfire and damnation, and then passages of love and forgiveness, ending with Luke’s telling of the Christmas story. Abomination, hellfire, damnation, love, forgiveness, Thou Shalt Not Kill, the greatest of these is love, love thy neighbor, wedding garments, judge not lest ye be judged, Ennis is a present given to us, and more swirled around in his brain until he though it would explode. 

He had listened to his father’s voice berating him for being weak, not doing as the Bible said, not dispatching those evildoers immediately to the fires of Hell.  That reminded him of a story in all the papers about ten years before, about some rancher that was killed, beat to death because he was different, a rancher near Sage if he remembered right. Wonder if Ennis knew about that? Wonder if his father had anything to do with that? Wonder if my own father would have done something like that? He shuddered at the prospect, both for Ennis and for his own son.  And himself. 

Then he remembered his mother’s expression when reminding him ‘not to forget the love’ on the day he married Elaine, and how sad he felt when he realized what his father had forgotten for so many years, and how he promised his mother that he never would be like his father. 

But he had broken that promise.  For good reasons or not, he had become his father in so many ways. 

Until today. Until Ennis. 

His mind registered the music coming from the old record player, the Walter Schumann Christmas album Elaine had bought 7 or 8 years ago.  She’d played it so many times over the years it was a wonder that the needle hadn’t worn the grooves all the way through to the other side.  The orchestra music swelled and the singers sang, and Elaine hummed along in the kitchen. 
The First Noel, the Angels did say
Was to certain poor shepherds in fields as they lay
In fields where they lay keeping their sheep
On a cold winter's night that was so deep.
Noel, Noel, Noel, Noel
Born is the King of Israel!

While listening, his eyes involuntarily drifted over to the Manger scene on a shelf in the bookcase.  The family, three wise men, shepherds, an angel, a star. Could use the help of a wise man, three of them better yet, right about now, he thought. 

Some movement outside caught pulled his eyes back to the window.  He saw the tractor towing a now-empty hay trailer through the snow back towards the barn.  Jack drove, and Ennis stood behind him, both hands on Jack’s shoulders for balance.  Once in a while Jack would gesture towards something, and Ennis would look, and then bend down to say something in Jack’s ear.  Could have sworn Ennis kissed Jack’s ear and neck once, Jack scrunching up his shoulders a bit at the contact.  Friends, partners, lovers…

Then it hit, it all came together.  Elaine was right, in more ways than she realized.  Ennis had given him a present that he never realized he’d almost lost, his own self. 

They love each other. All they want is each other, to be left alone to live a sweet life together, nobody else’s business.  It’s up to God to judge them on the Last Day, not me or anyone else in this world.  Maybe it is an abomination, maybe they are headed for damnation, maybe not, but anyone who takes their lives in the name of God certainly will be damned for breaking the Fifth Commandment. I won’t be my father any more. I won't!

He wouldn’t let up on them, had to be sure they understand the challenges and dangers, knew how to be careful and safe in this world.  He wouldn’t let up, but he would allow them the chance to have a safe place to learn.  And if anyone dares to do anything to my son or Ennis, well as God is my witness …

“Honey, supper’s near ready, best be calling the boys in ta wash up. Could use some help settin the table, too, if ya don’t mind,” Elaine tentatively requested

Don’t forget the love.  “Comin, dearie, right on it, don’t mind atall.”


cwby30, don't worry about going over the 3 paragraph rule.  Your 6th installment is magical.  I really don't know what to say.  I'm so moved by your brilliant tale that I'm practically speechless.  I just spent a less than satifying day at work, and you can't image what it means to come home and read one of your charming tales.  Brilliant!  I especially love the description of Ennis kissing Jack as they worked.  Such a satisfying glimpse into the workings of that sweet life.  I'm hooked, cwby30.  Keep em' coming!  :)
Title: Re: The Christmas Present (6)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 18, 2007, 11:03:16 pm
Thank you Cwby, for delving into the inner world of John Twist .... something I don't think we've ever done before.  You've given him a heart, and hope for the future ... wonderful!

Susie  :) 

Hey, Susiebaby, has Toycoon been around?  I'm missing him!
Title: The Ultimate Gift
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 18, 2007, 11:30:33 pm
The Ultimate Gift by Littlewing1957

Ennis walked past the window of the Sears and Roebuck Department store and stopped abruptly.  It was December 16th and Ennis watched as several store employees were busily decorating the store windows, transforming them into Santa’s toy shop and a winter wonderland.  Ennis looked at the beautiful dolls, toy fire trucks, powdery snow, sleds, and other finery.  Such an elaborate display! 

He walked into the store and headed straight for the 2nd floor toy department.  Jenny asked for a Monopoly game and Alma Jr. had her heart set on a new Barbie, complete with Skipper and a new outfit or two.  Ennis easily found the game, and was about to search for the doll when he saw a little boy of about 6 staring up at him.  The child had blue eyes and dark hair, and he was leaning against a display of baby dolls.  Ennis smiled at the child, as he reminded him of someone very special.  Ennis imagined that Jack looked like the small boy when he was that age.  The child smiled back and said, “Merry Christmas, mister,” and with that, was on his way.  Ennis yelled to the child’s retreating back, “Merry Christmas to you too, son!”  Barbie was all wrapped up and smiling when Ennis placed her in his small basket.  He was certain Alma Jr. would like her.  Ennis paid for his purchases and left for home.

His small house was modest but comfortable.  He kept the thermostat down low, as it cost too much to heat his pile of sticks, especially during the December months and on into the winter.  Ennis reached into the back of his closet to retrieve the wrapping paper he salvaged from gifts given him Christmases past.  He found paper, ribbons, and decided he could get away without bows this year.  After a meal of franks and beans, Ennis sat his purchases out on a small table and began to wrap them.  He would finish his shopping tomorrow, as he didn’t get anything for Alma or Monroe.  He couldn’t forget them.  And as usual, Jack Twist was on his mind.  Ennis wondered what Jack was doing at that very moment.  He was probably out shopping – buying expensive gifts for his wife and child.  Ennis sighed as he realized that having Jack there with him would be the best present he could image.  Someday he would treat himself.  He would give himself the gift of Jack: the gift of a sweet life.
Title: Re: The Christmas Present (6)
Post by: Toycoon on December 19, 2007, 01:04:16 am
cwby30, don't worry about going over the 3 paragraph rule.  Your 6th installment is magical.  I really don't know what to say.  I'm so moved by your brilliant tale that I'm practically speechless.  I just spent a less than satisfying day at work, and you can't image what it means to come home and read one of your charming tales.  Brilliant!  I especially love the description of Ennis kissing Jack as they worked.  Such a satisfying glimpse into the workings of that sweet life.  I'm hooked, cwby30.  Keep em' coming!  :)

Hey folks, cwby30 and all,
I break the 3 line rule all the time. I love your Christmas series, too. Feel free to indulge.
I know everyone else is enjoying your wonderful stories. You're a great author. Brilliant descriptions.

Littlewing,
I check all the time; it's just that I've just been crazy busy!
I have about 50% of the latest installment of our series and I promise to post it soon.

Title: Re: The Christmas Present (6)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 19, 2007, 01:08:53 am
Hey folks, cwby30 and all,
I break the 3 line rule all the time. I love your Christmas series, too. Feel free to indulge.
I know everyone else is enjoying your wonderful stories. You're a great author. Brilliant descriptions.

Littlewing,
I check all the time; it's just that I've just been crazy busy!
I have about 50% of the latest installment of our series and I promise to post it soon.



Hey, sugar!  :-*  Good to see you!  I'm waiting on pins and needles for the next installment!
Title: Re: The Christmas Present (7)
Post by: cwby30 on December 19, 2007, 01:07:51 pm
Mornin'.  Well, only one over this time, getting better.

Thanks again. 

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Mr. Twist set the dining room table for dinner, which surprised Jack on two accounts, that they hadn’t eaten in there for years, and that his father had set the table.  They ate with companionable talk, Ennis saying very little except for the occasional “thank you again” and “this here’s a very good meal, ma’am,” and Jack saying enough for both of them.  Mr. Twist allowed as how he could light the house for the winter if he could figure out how to harness the smiles on the other three, which made Ennis blush and withdraw a bit, Jack chuckle, and Mrs. Twist smile even brighter.  After dinner, Mr. and Mrs. Twist sat in the parlor having a second cup of coffee, a rare circumstance these past fifteen years all things considered, listening to the rattling of dishes and cupboard doors and the good-natured laughing coming from the other rooms, while at their own insistence Jack and Ennis cleared the table and cleaned up the kitchen. 

Finished, the partners joined Jack’s parents in the parlor for a while, and watched “It’s A Wonderful Life” on the TV.  By 9:30 Mr. Twist announced it was time to turn in, since Christmas or no Christmas tomorrow was another day on the ranch and stock needed tending and chores doing before church services, and he would yell up at them if they weren’t up and at ‘em on time.  Jack kissed his momma good night, shook hands with his dad, wished them both a Merry Christmas, and headed upstairs.  Ennis lingered, said he would be up in a minute.

After Jack had climbed the stairs, Ennis looked over at the Twists, his mouth dry and his heart beating so hard he thought it could be heard by the herd in the South 40.  Stumbling over his words, he finally pushed out his thanks again, and how we didn’t deserve their kindness but would always be grateful and wouldn’t impose much more and would be leavin’ as soon as the road was clear.  Mr. Twist cleared his throat and to Ennis’ surprise and embarrassment thanked Ennis for coming into their home, for making them realize what was important in their lives, and told Ennis he was welcome to stay as long as he and Jack wanted, that the upstairs was theirs now, never went up their anyway, his arthritis and all, a small lie that he know his Elaine would call him on later and forgive him for.  Ennis stood up, kissed Mrs. Twist on the cheek, shook hands with Mr. Twist sealing the deal, wished them a Merry Christmas, and went upstairs to open his present from Jack and to give Jack his. 

Lying in bed in the darkened house, Mr. Twist couldn’t help but mull over the events of the day, and remember the many presents they all had given and received.  The words of “The Night Before Christmas” ran through Mrs. Twist’s head, and a small tear leaked out of her eye and onto her pillow at, “…the children were nestled all snug in their beds.” And the children were, only they nestled together in each other's arms, all snug in Ennis’ big bed, while visions of a sweet life danced through their heads. 

tbc
Title: Re: The Christmas Present (7)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 19, 2007, 10:45:33 pm
Mornin'.  Well, only one over this time, getting better.

Thanks again. 

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Mr. Twist set the dining room table for dinner, which surprised Jack on two accounts, that they hadn’t eaten in there for years, and that his father had set the table.  They ate with companionable talk, Ennis saying very little except for the occasional “thank you again” and “this here’s a very good meal, ma’am,” and Jack saying enough for both of them.  Mr. Twist allowed as how he could light the house for the winter if he could figure out how to harness the smiles on the other three, which made Ennis blush and withdraw a bit, Jack chuckle, and Mrs. Twist smile even brighter.  After dinner, Mr. and Mrs. Twist sat in the parlor having a second cup of coffee, a rare circumstance these past fifteen years all things considered, listening to the rattling of dishes and cupboard doors and the good-natured laughing coming from the other rooms, while at their own insistence Jack and Ennis cleared the table and cleaned up the kitchen. 

Finished, the partners joined Jack’s parents in the parlor for a while, and watched “It’s A Wonderful Life” on the TV.  By 9:30 Mr. Twist announced it was time to turn in, since Christmas or no Christmas tomorrow was another day on the ranch and stock needed tending and chores doing before church services, and he would yell up at them if they weren’t up and at ‘em on time.  Jack kissed his momma good night, shook hands with his dad, wished them both a Merry Christmas, and headed upstairs.  Ennis lingered, said he would be up in a minute.

After Jack had climbed the stairs, Ennis looked over at the Twists, his mouth dry and his heart beating so hard he thought it could be heard by the herd in the South 40.  Stumbling over his words, he finally pushed out his thanks again, and how we didn’t deserve their kindness but would always be grateful and wouldn’t impose much more and would be leavin’ as soon as the road was clear.  Mr. Twist cleared his throat and to Ennis’ surprise and embarrassment thanked Ennis for coming into their home, for making them realize what was important in their lives, and told Ennis he was welcome to stay as long as he and Jack wanted, that the upstairs was theirs now, never went up their anyway, his arthritis and all, a small lie that he know his Elaine would call him on later and forgive him for.  Ennis stood up, kissed Mrs. Twist on the cheek, shook hands with Mr. Twist sealing the deal, wished them a Merry Christmas, and went upstairs to open his present from Jack and to give Jack his. 

Lying in bed in the darkened house, Mr. Twist couldn’t help but mull over the events of the day, and remember the many presents they all had given and received.  The words of “The Night Before Christmas” ran through Mrs. Twist’s head, and a small tear leaked out of her eye and onto her pillow at, “…the children were nestled all snug in their beds.” And the children were, only they nestled together in each other's arms, all snug in Ennis’ big bed, while visions of a sweet life danced through their heads. 

tbc


You've done it again, cwby30!  Your tale is just what I need to end my day.  I know you're probably tired of hearing this, but this series is exceptional.  Very moving, descriptive, and I melt at the thought of Ennis and Jack exchanging presents and spending time in each other's arms.  And I'm really loving the accepting and very human Mr. Twist.  I hate to see this series end, I'm loving it so.  Well done, Babe!
Title: Re: the Christmas Present
Post by: cwby30 on December 19, 2007, 11:58:09 pm
Evenin', Susie.

Well, it ain't over 'til it's over... and it ain't over yet... it's "tbc", and I have a few more to share.  Appreciate all your kind words about my writing, it really is as if one of them...or both of them!...are talking to me, and I write it down for others to enjoy, too. 

Have thought that Mr. Twist was upset at Jack being "queer", but more upset that he didn't take a real interest in the Ranch.  Hard to extrapolate a lot from OS, other than Jack hated his Dad.  At the end, Mr. Twist seemed more bitter that Jack had got himself killed before keeping his promise, to come back with Ennis and fix up the place. 

Which is the subject of several Dead!Jack AUs, Ennis going up to the Ranch and staying there to help out, to keep the promise that Jack made, and to make up for not wanting the sweet life with Jack enough to overcome his own fears and shame. 

Fears but not as much shame here, Ennis took a chance right away. 

Thanks again.
Title: Right (58) by Toycoon
Post by: Toycoon on December 20, 2007, 01:21:06 am
Right (58) by Toycoon

There they stood by the road side, in the cold, vast darkness of that autumn night, shivering, trying to brace themselves against the wind with no idea what their next move might be. They had walked from the Twist ranch to the main highway through Lightning Flat. Ennis held a large paper sack containing his few belongings and Jack carried the same leather satchel he'd brought to Brokeback Mountain that summer packed with cans of food, some clothes plus a few personal items. Jack hiked the strap up higher on his shoulder and glanced at his lover, wondered how Ennis was faring out here in the cold.

Ennis returned Jack's glimpse. "Ain't so bad, Rodeo, ah'm used ta it."

Jack pulled his hat further down on his head and dug his hands deeper into his pockets. He felt his wallet in the jeans and remembering how little money he had in there, wondered how they would travel.  He thought, we can't take the pickup truck; what if something were to happen to ma? Pa might have to run her to the doctor. We ain't got much money between the two of us. We could hardly afford to buy a pair of bus tickets anywhere. And where would we go, any way? Some place warmer... like Texas? Maybe, but it is still a long ways from Lightning Flat. The night suddenly became a little colder and lot lonelier.

Ennis had more experience being on his own than Jack, so he immediately began formulating a plan for them. "Now listen up, Jack, we could go ta South Dakota," declared Ennis in a very serious voice. He pulled a travel brochure from his pants pocket. Jack shot Ennis a look of disbelief. "Are you fucken' nuts, Ennis? We can't go to South Dakota." said Jack incredulously. "How the hell, we gonna get ta South Dakota, huh?" The shock of having been caught naked in bed with Ennis by his father, loosing his family and his warm home then running away all in one night was wearing thin on Jack. Just then, a pair of headlights appeared on the horizon. The dark silhouette of a truck came into focus then slowed down as it approached the two men standing by the roadside.
Title: Re: Right (58)
Post by: cwby30 on December 20, 2007, 01:55:15 am
Evenin', toycoon.

Well, good installment, Jack having to rely on Ennis now, and South Dakota! It would be a clean break, and a chance to be away from everyone who knows them.  And there is that lovely woman who was on the bus with Ennis... Wonder who's driving the truck?  Alan?

Looking forward to the next installment!

Thanks again.
Title: Re: Right (58)
Post by: Toycoon on December 20, 2007, 09:56:05 am
Evenin', toycoon.

Well, good installment, Jack having to rely on Ennis now, and South Dakota! It would be a clean break, and a chance to be away from everyone who knows them.  And there is that lovely woman who was on the bus with Ennis... Wonder who's driving the truck?  Alan?

Looking forward to the next installment!

Thanks again.

Thank you kindly, cwby30. At this rate, who the heck knows where those two will end up!
Title: Re: Right (58)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 20, 2007, 09:43:38 pm
Thank you kindly, cwby30. At this rate, who the heck knows where those two will end up!

 :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 20, 2007, 10:43:26 pm
Hey Susie, is Dagi still sick?  I see Gary is here, but he hasn't been to the thread in awhile?  I miss the both of them so much I can hardly stand it, and that's the truth!
Title: Right (59)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 21, 2007, 01:24:18 am
Right (59) By Littlewing1957

The driver rolled down the right side window of the truck and called out in the early morning chill, “Hey Jack Twist, is that you?”  The voice was feminine, playful.  Jack approached the truck, all the while waving Ennis back.  He thought he recognized the voice, but he was cautious all the same.  Ennis obeyed Jack’s signal and stayed where he was.  “Jack, it’s me, Katie!”  Jack lowered his head and peered into the truck window.  It was Katie, alright, looking very lovely.  She was also looking very prosperous and sophisticated.  Her truck was brand new, and her clothes were stylish and expensive looking.  Jack noticed a designer looking handbag displayed prominently on the passenger seat.  He had no idea that Katie was doing so well.  “Where you headed, Jack?” She asked innocently.  Jack didn’t answer right away, but looked to Ennis before he turned around.  Ennis was silent as he walked over to join his lover.  “Well, we were just headed into town,” Jack faltered.  Katie looked over at Ennis as he approached the truck.  Her emerald green eyes took in Ennis’ straw colored hair, strong build, and fine aristocratic features.  “I don’t think I know you," Katie addressed Ennis seductively.  “My name is Katie Tryon.  What’s your name?”  Ennis smiled and reached his hand in the truck window.  Katie took Ennis’ hand and shook it.  “I’m Ennis, Ennis Del Mar.”  Katie held Ennis’ hand a little longer than necessary. Jack noticed.  He didn’t like it. 

“Well, I can take you into town,” Katie stated evenly as she moved her bag from the passenger seat.  “And I have enough room for the both of you.”  “I know that’s right,” Jack exclaimed as he took in the expansive passenger area of Katie’s truck.  “Okay, we would love a ride into town.”  He announced as he looked toward Ennis.  Ennis nodded briskly, certainly thankful for an opportunity to get Jack out of the bitter cold. “Well, climb on in and let’s get going,” Katie chirped sweetly.  “I need to get a move on if I want to open the shop on time."  Ennis and Jack climbed into the truck and settled in for the ride.  Katie told them all about her new fashion shop downtown, established with money she inherited from her grandfather.  Her store was only about a year old, but was an instant hit.  Jack and Ennis hung on Katie’s every word as she described the retail fashion business, and how she may open another store if business continued to do well.  “I’ve always wanted to be a chain,” Katie announced proudly.  Ennis and Jack were impressed by Katie’s success.  She was so young to have accomplished so much.  Jack was happy for her, but he couldn’t help but feel a bit like a failure, a slacker when Katie pulled up to her shop and parked her expensive truck in her own parking space.  She climbed out of the truck and walked over to the front door of her shop.  Fiddling with keys, Katie found the right one and opened the door.  Jack and Ennis stepped out of the truck and onto the sidewalk.  Katie looked back at them and waved them over.  “Come on in, guys,” She offered.  “I’ll make you some coffee and we can talk.”  Katie looked at Jack and smirked a bit.  “I really want to know what you guys are up to.”

Ennis and Jack followed Katie to the back of her charming establishment.  Jack noticed the décor and was astounded by the feminine excess.  The shop was a frilly dream filled with frothy lace dresses, lingerie, old style perfume bottles, lace stockings, feather boas.  Ennis noticed when they were outside a sign that announced the store's name,  “Preen.”  He didn’t quite understand what preen meant, but somehow knew the name was apt.  Katie led them to her office in the back of the store.  It was decorated in much the same way as her showroom, tasteful excess.  Katie waved the guys to a seat and put on a pot of coffee.  Jack sat opposite his childhood friend and studied her.  She was wearing a red silk blouse tucked into a black wool skirt.  Her auburn hair was pulled back into a low ponytail, and her makeup was flawless.  Jack’s eyes moved to the manicured hands that flashed two diamond boulders.  He looked up at her face and saw, to his dismay, that she was looking intently at Ennis.  “Now,” Katie began, “Why were you guys walking down that road this time of morning?"  Jack shrugged but said nothing.  “Oh come on, Jack, you can trust me,” Katie said as she spread her elegant hands wide.  “Now, what’s going on?”  Jack glanced at Ennis.  “No big deal,” he began.  “My dad and I got into a bit of a disagreement, and I thought it would be best if we spent some time apart, you know, to let us cool down."  “I had somethin’ to do with it, Katie,” Ennis interjected.  “I’m a hired hand, but I’m also Jack’s friend.”  Jack looked at Ennis, wondering just how much he planned to volunteer.  But Ennis said nothing else.  Katie looked at Ennis and smiled shyly.  She looked at Jack, and became very serious.  “Listen Jack, I think I can help.  If you guys need a place to cool out, I think I can arrange something.  Or you can stay with me?”
Title: Re: Right (60)
Post by: cwby30 on December 21, 2007, 02:16:55 am
Evenin, toy.

Well, not sure I like Katie all that much, too nosy and too interested in Ennis.  Still, she is a friend and hopefully can help them as she says.  Think it better that they leave town, with Alan also sniffing around, but they need money for that. 

Nice turn of events.  Can't wait to see how your partner in writing takes it forward.

Thanks again.
Title: Re: Right (60)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 21, 2007, 02:22:14 am
Evenin, toy.

Well, not sure I like Katie all that much, too nosy and too interested in Ennis.  Still, she is a friend and hopefully can help them as she says.  Think it better that they leave town, with Alan also sniffing around, but they need money for that. 

Nice turn of events.  Can't wait to see how your partner in writing takes it forward.

Thanks again.

Thanks, cwby30.  I, too, am anxious to see what direction Toycoon will take.  I'm really enjoying this!
Title: Re: The Christmas Present (8)
Post by: cwby30 on December 21, 2007, 02:24:08 am
Evenin'.

Well, before I head home [long day at work], decided to polish this a bit and post it.  Getting close to three paragraphs.

Thanks again. 

+++++++++++++++++++++++++++


They celebrated the next two Christmases together at the ranch, each better than the previous, more smiles, more presents, bigger tree with lots of lights and ornaments.  They made their upstairs domain more comfortable, adding a couple of chairs and a table, but always ate downstairs with Jack’s parents, and always spent time downstairs with them after dinner.  They fought, as all couples do, but never went to bed angry with each other. 

Ennis kept his part-time job at Murchison’s, and spent the rest of his time working at the ranch.  After a lot of arguing, and some stomping up and down the stairs, bouts of make-up sex, and weekends of Mrs. Twist’s home cooking and cherry cake, a reluctant Ennis moved to the ranch full-time on Valentine’s Day.  The clincher for Ennis came when Andy Murchison allowed as how it was “right nice and unexpected” of John Twist to ask his son’s best friend to move in, and Ennis shouldn’t look that gift horse in the mouth, and besides it would save him rent money.  Mrs. Callahan’s loss over at the boarding house was Mrs. Twist’s gain in her own house.   She hadn't smiled so much in years. 

Gradually the ranch took on a shine it hadn’t seen in decades, the result of hard work, common sense, and not a little arguing.  Crop yields were up, and the cattle had never looked better, looked like they would garner much more at auction in the Fall than before.  Mr. Twist pushed both partners to the limit, sometimes resulting in one of the three of them, or the two partners together, taking off on a long horseback ride to mull things over.  “That’s the way I’ve done it since before ya were born, and yer grandaddy before me,”  “Yeah, well if it’s that old, then it’s past the time to change it, would improve the yield and fatten up the stock.”  “Yield is just fine.” “For what? We can git more, and do more with what we git than what we got now.” “Yer makin’ no sense, boy.”  “I ain’t a boy no more, Dad.”  “Uh, he’s right, sir, that new seed would really help, the guys at Murchison’s talked about it when it came in, others’re using it and swear by it already.” “Well, if ya think so, then mebbe we should at least try it on one of the pastures.”  “Dammit, Dad, why didn’t ya agree when I told ya?”  “”Cause he’s got a lot more sense than you, and if Andy Murchison…” “Shit, can't never do anything right fer ya. Where’s my horse?”

Folks in town gradually got used to seeing the two of them around, Ennis working at Murchison’s and Jack coming into town for supplies.  The ladies at Mrs. Twist’s church tried to set them up with some eligible daughters, but they both declined, stating they were too young to think about settling down.  Best to be safe.  Once in a while they headed to the Stumble Inn on First Street on Saturday night, laying back a few beers and playing pool with the guys.  After a couple of months, Larry Atkins called out as they walked in, “Well if it ain’t the partners.”  The room seemed a bit stifling all of a sudden, and Ennis looked like he was about to either bolt or put his fist down Larry's throat, when Jack laughed and said, “Yeah, it’s Butch and Sundance, here ta rob ya of yer hard-earned money at pool.”  Everyone guffawed at the joke, and for a while the barflies called them Butch-and-Sundance, though the guys refused to say which was which, and soon they went back to being good old Jack and Ennis from the Twist Ranch. 

Jack was learning. 
Title: Delight
Post by: Dagi on December 21, 2007, 05:12:02 pm
They bathed in the warmth of the late afternoon sun, bathed in the warmth of each other's presence, pure and deep happiness enveloping them like the golden light each time they locked eyes.  Their naked bodies lay stretched out, sleepy from an afternoon of swimming and making love, the lake before them, a thousand diamonds glistening in the sunlight.

Leaning on one elbow, Jack gazed down at his lover, tracing a line with his finger along the droplets of water that were trickling down Ennis' chest and forming a pool in his belly button, the most beautiful belly button in the world.

Oh my, how much he wanted this man, wanted to grab him and hold him tight and then start taking little bites and eat him alive until nothing was left. He bent down and drank the water out of the belly button, then started licking it softly. When Ennis began to moan he stopped for a moment and looked up. Ennis's eyes were closed, his wet lips parted, and his arms and hands were lying limp in the grass, an image of joy and surrender.


"You're all mine Ennis Del Mar...." he couldn't resist stroking those luscious lips with the tip of his thumb, "...  and I wanna taste every inch of you."  Jack playfully lapped up the drops of cool water running down Ennis' stomach, licking around his waist, hitting a ticklish spot just under the side of his ribs, sending Ennis into fits of giggles.  Ennis' happy face was a rare and wonderful sight to behold, eyes crinkling at the corners, mouth open wide, his troubles dissolving into delightful high pitched laughter.


This is Susie's and Dag's Christmas gift to all our Jack with Ennis pals. We wrote it back in October, and it would have been my turn to continue, but I thought you all have the imagination to continue the story in your minds.

Dagi and Susie


Title: Re: Right (59)
Post by: cwby30 on December 21, 2007, 05:50:19 pm
Afternoon.

Well, sorry for attributing your installment to toycoon. **slaps forehead** Shoulda had a V-8, woulda helped me keep track of things. Then again, maybe nothing would at this point! Only 4 days to Christmas, and I have a lot to do!

Thanks again. 
Title: Re: The Christmas Present (8)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 21, 2007, 09:46:03 pm
Evenin'.

Well, before I head home [long day at work], decided to polish this a bit and post it.  Getting close to three paragraphs.

Thanks again. 

+++++++++++++++++++++++++++


They celebrated the next two Christmases together at the ranch, each better than the previous, more smiles, more presents, bigger tree with lots of lights and ornaments.  They made their upstairs domain more comfortable, adding a couple of chairs and a table, but always ate downstairs with Jack’s parents, and always spent time downstairs with them after dinner.  They fought, as all couples do, but never went to bed angry with each other. 

Ennis kept his part-time job at Murchison’s, and spent the rest of his time working at the ranch.  After a lot of arguing, and some stomping up and down the stairs, bouts of make-up sex, and weekends of Mrs. Twist’s home cooking and cherry cake, a reluctant Ennis moved to the ranch full-time on Valentine’s Day.  The clincher for Ennis came when Andy Murchison allowed as how it was “right nice and unexpected” of John Twist to ask his son’s best friend to move in, and Ennis shouldn’t look that gift horse in the mouth, and besides it would save him rent money.  Mrs. Callahan’s loss over at the boarding house was Mrs. Twist’s gain in her own house.   She hadn't smiled so much in years. 

Gradually the ranch took on a shine it hadn’t seen in decades, the result of hard work, common sense, and not a little arguing.  Crop yields were up, and the cattle had never looked better, looked like they would garner much more at auction in the Fall than before.  Mr. Twist pushed both partners to the limit, sometimes resulting in one of the three of them, or the two partners together, taking off on a long horseback ride to mull things over.  “That’s the way I’ve done it since before ya were born, and yer grandaddy before me,”  “Yeah, well if it’s that old, then it’s past the time to change it, would improve the yield and fatten up the stock.”  “Yield is just fine.” “For what? We can git more, and do more with what we git than what we got now.” “Yer makin’ no sense, boy.”  “I ain’t a boy no more, Dad.”  “Uh, he’s right, sir, that new seed would really help, the guys at Murchison’s talked about it when it came in, others’re using it and swear by it already.” “Well, if ya think so, then mebbe we should at least try it on one of the pastures.”  “Dammit, Dad, why didn’t ya agree when I told ya?”  “”Cause he’s got a lot more sense than you, and if Andy Murchison…” “Shit, can't never do anything right fer ya. Where’s my horse?”

Folks in town gradually got used to seeing the two of them around, Ennis working at Murchison’s and Jack coming into town for supplies.  The ladies at Mrs. Twist’s church tried to set them up with some eligible daughters, but they both declined, stating they were too young to think about settling down.  Best to be safe.  Once in a while they headed to the Stumble Inn on First Street on Saturday night, laying back a few beers and playing pool with the guys.  After a couple of months, Larry Atkins called out as they walked in, “Well if it ain’t the partners.”  The room seemed a bit stifling all of a sudden, and Ennis looked like he was about to either bolt or put his fist down Larry's throat, when Jack laughed and said, “Yeah, it’s Butch and Sundance, here ta rob ya of yer hard-earned money at pool.”  Everyone guffawed at the joke, and for a while the barflies called them Butch-and-Sundance, though the guys refused to say which was which, and soon they went back to being good old Jack and Ennis from the Twist Ranch. 

Jack was learning. 

Reading this really made my day.  I found myself melting into the story.  I really enjoyed reading about Ennis and Jack's domestic situation, and how they fought, made up, made love.  So very moving!  Very well written.  I hope you're continuing the story?  I didn't see a tbc?
Title: Re: Delight
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 21, 2007, 09:50:43 pm
They bathed in the warmth of the late afternoon sun, bathed in the warmth of each other's presence, pure and deep happiness enveloping them like the golden light each time they locked eyes.  Their naked bodies lay stretched out, sleepy from an afternoon of swimming and making love, the lake before them, a thousand diamonds glistening in the sunlight.

Leaning on one elbow, Jack gazed down at his lover, tracing a line with his finger along the droplets of water that were trickling down Ennis' chest and forming a pool in his belly button, the most beautiful belly button in the world.

Oh my, how much he wanted this man, wanted to grab him and hold him tight and then start taking little bites and eat him alive until nothing was left. He bent down and drank the water out of the belly button, then started licking it softly. When Ennis began to moan he stopped for a moment and looked up. Ennis's eyes were closed, his wet lips parted, and his arms and hands were lying limp in the grass, an image of joy and surrender.


"You're all mine Ennis Del Mar...." he couldn't resist stroking those luscious lips with the tip of his thumb, "...  and I wanna taste every inch of you."  Jack playfully lapped up the drops of cool water running down Ennis' stomach, licking around his waist, hitting a ticklish spot just under the side of his ribs, sending Ennis into fits of giggles.  Ennis' happy face was a rare and wonderful sight to behold, eyes crinkling at the corners, mouth open wide, his troubles dissolving into delightful high pitched laughter.


This is Susie's and Dag's Christmas gift to all our Jack with Ennis pals. We wrote it back in October, and it would have been my turn to continue, but I thought you all have the imagination to continue the story in your minds.

Dagi and Susie




OMG!  This is indeed a treat!  A saucy, sexy tale from Dagi and Susie!  I must be living right!  :laugh:  I can't tell you guys how much I enjoyed reading this.  And Jack drinking the water that pooled in Ennis' belly button is just raw and too sexy for words.  You guys can't image how this story makes me feel.  Wonderful, outstanding.  This may be too much to ask, ladies, but, DO IT AGAIN!  :)
Title: Re: Right (59)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 21, 2007, 09:54:26 pm
Afternoon.

Well, sorry for attributing your installment to toycoon. **slaps forehead** Shoulda had a V-8, woulda helped me keep track of things. Then again, maybe nothing would at this point! Only 4 days to Christmas, and I have a lot to do!

Thanks again. 

Oh, no problem, Love.   :)  I can certainly relate.  I'm at the point where I don't even remember my own name.   :laugh: A few more days of shopping and I should be set.  Hope things settle down, and that you enjoy preparing for the season.  I hope we can "hang out" a bit here during the next few days.  I would like that very much.
Title: Re: December 21st (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 21, 2007, 09:56:57 pm
Poor Jack, he sounds so sad and lonely.  And how rude for the Newsomes to go to Hawaii and not invite Jack along.  But at least Jack is going to see Ennis.

Great story, Littlewing.

Gary

Thanks, Sweetie.  Man, is it good to see you here.  I've really missed your encouragement and support, but I know you're here for me.  Thanks, again!
Title: Re: The Ultimate Gift
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 21, 2007, 09:58:21 pm
Sweet tender story, Littlewing.  And it would be nice if Ennis treated himself and Jack by accepting Jack's offer of a sweet life.

Gary

Wow, thanks Gary.  I think you're the only one who noticed this tale.  I had a good time writing it.
Title: Re: Right (59)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 21, 2007, 10:06:03 pm
Hi Toycoon and Littlewing,

Very interesting turn of events.  I was really worried about Jack and Ennis being outside in the cold without any place to go.  Good thing Katie came along when she did.  I love the name Preen for a store that sells frilly girly clothes.  That is so spot on.  And I'll bet if Katie opened up a shop in a metro area it would be a big hit with the drag queens.   :laugh:

Gary 

Gary, there is a store here in Oakland (several, actually) that I used as a model for Katie's store.  My daughter absolutely loves them, and I rather like looking through the girly offerings, myself.  One such store here is a chain, the other a mom and pop sort of place.  I rather like the name Preen as well.  I agree - it fits.  It never occurred to me that a store like this would attract drag queens.  Interesting.   I love watching drag queens trying on clothes and shoes and jewelry.  I get a lot of good advice from them on what sort of makeup I should wear, and one nice man even gave me instructions on applying false eyelashes.  Thanks for your kind words.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 21, 2007, 10:08:51 pm
Awww honey!  :-*  I think we've all taken a bit of a beating recently, what with our J+E thread coming under close scrutiny,  the hoohar over on Gary's thread, and on Dagi's thread!  Who knew that we'd all turn out to be such trouble makers??

They'll be back, I guess we all just need a little time.

Love Susie  :-*

I have got a story brewing ... just a little one ... I'll post it later on

Thanks, Susie.  I've missed you, as well.  I'm feeling better now that I've heard from all of you.  And to see your story here--well--it means a lot to me.  Thimgs will settle down.  I'm just glad this strange year is coming to an end.
Title: Re: Right (59)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 21, 2007, 10:10:25 pm
Oh littlewing, thank heavens it was Katie and not some awful low lifes looking for trouble! ...phew!!  Wonderful instalment, so rich with detail .. I can picture Katie and her fluffy store so clearly!

Susie  :)

Thanks, Susiebaby!  As I was telling Gary, those "frilly" stores are so much fun.  We find a lot of one-of-a-kind items, reasonably priced.  I love them!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 21, 2007, 10:16:10 pm
Hi Marie dear,

Sorry I've not been posting replies here daily.  I promise I've not forgotten about this thread.  And I've certainly not forgotten about you, or the rest of our writing group.  And I've not forgotten about your desire to share a piece of yourself nearly every day with your stories.

But Susie is right.  I've felt a bit under the gun here lately.  We were told when we came here that this site had a very friendly and open environment, and that it was one of the least homophobic places on the net.  And it's true that we were left alone here for the first few months, but then for reasons that still baffle me we became targets. So far I've been called a pornographer, a child molester, and most recently an agitator.  But of course all of these things are thrown out with politically correct veneers, and when I say something about it I'm told that I'm being too sensitive and that my attempts to defend myself break the "no personal attack" rule.

When you get a large group of people together there are obviously going to be disagreements, and there are always going to be people who are not so nice, and many of these will use the rules to their advantage.  Like one of my religious studies profs in college used to say to me all the time, you can be very lawful without being at all loving.  How true.

I was sad to learn that this group was just as ambiguous as any other.  I now know that there is good and bad here, just like everywhere else.  But I am sticking around, and I'm going to focus on the good as much as I can. 

I'm still here.  And I don't plan on going anywhere.  And I've not forgotten you.

Love,
Gary     

Gary, thank you so much, sweetie.  I know you haven't forgotten me - I was just missing you, is all.  I was so lonely for you that I just had to say something.  I'm glad you're here and that you don't have plans to go anywhere.  I plan on being here for the duration, myself.  I, too, plan to concentrate on the good things about this site.  Well, you're here, our group is here, we're together, and that is good enough for me.  Thanks again for your kind words and encouragement.
Title: Re: Merry Christmas Jack
Post by: Toycoon on December 22, 2007, 02:19:06 pm
"Merry Christmas Jack" by Susiebell


Ten years had passed since Jack's death, and every year Ennis found himself drawn to this same spot.  The campfire was ablaze, the warmth enveloping him like a big old blanket against the bitter cold.  He sat for several hours, a piece of wood in one hand, a whittling knife in the other.  He focused his attention on the small carving, smiling at the sound of Jack's tuneless warbling which seemed to reverberate through the forest with the howling winds.

His task completed, he headed on into the woods, in search of their tree.  The two hearts were still clearly visible, lovingly engraved, side by side, into the trunk.   He traced his finger over the initials etched into the bark, smiling fondly.  Kneeling down, he cleared the snow and debris from the base of the tree, revealing the nine little figures.  The three wise men had toppled over like skittles, and Joseph was leaning precariously against one of the roots.   He rearranged the figures, Mary beside Joseph, the three kings on one side, the shepherds on the other tending to their lone sheep, must make some more of them next year he thought to himself. 

He reached inside his pocket, carefully removing the newly carved baby Jesus, and placing him in his mother's arms.  Satisfied with his work, he closed his eyes and uttered a small prayer.  Then looking up at the two hearts, he smiled and whispered "Merry Christmas Jack".



Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)
 
What a beautiful, innocuous story, Susiebell. So simple and eloquent. Very heartwarming!
Title: Re: Delight
Post by: Dagi on December 22, 2007, 03:47:17 pm
OMG!  This is indeed a treat!  A saucy, sexy tale from Dagi and Susie!  I must be living right!  :laugh:  I can't tell you guys how much I enjoyed reading this.  And Jack drinking the water that pooled in Ennis' belly button is just raw and too sexy for words.  You guys can't image how this story makes me feel.  Wonderful, outstanding.  This may be too much to ask, ladies, but, DO IT AGAIN!  :)
Thank you for your nice words, Littlewing, although I have to leave all the credits to Susie, I can't remember having written anything of this at all.

Sorry I wasn't much of a support here lately. There is a right time for everything, and I just couldn't concentrate on the stories, so instead of reading and commenting halfheartedly, I let it. But I'll be back!

Love and kisses to my Jack with Ennis Pals!

Dagi
Title: Re: The Ultimate Gift
Post by: Dagi on December 22, 2007, 03:52:53 pm
The Ultimate Gift by Littlewing1957

Ennis sighed as he realized that having Jack there with him would be the best present he could image.  Someday he would treat himself.  He would give himself the gift of Jack: the gift of a sweet life.


Oh if only he would have done it, if only.  :(

Dagi
Title: Re: The Christmas Present (7)
Post by: Dagi on December 22, 2007, 03:57:11 pm
Mornin'.  Well, only one over this time, getting better.

Thanks again. 

***************************


Mr. Twist set the dining room table for dinner, which surprised Jack on two accounts, that they hadn’t eaten in there for years, and that his father had set the table.  They ate with companionable talk, Ennis saying very little except for the occasional “thank you again” and “this here’s a very good meal, ma’am,” and Jack saying enough for both of them.  Mr. Twist allowed as how he could light the house for the winter if he could figure out how to harness the smiles on the other three, which made Ennis blush and withdraw a bit, Jack chuckle, and Mrs. Twist smile even brighter.  After dinner, Mr. and Mrs. Twist sat in the parlor having a second cup of coffee, a rare circumstance these past fifteen years all things considered, listening to the rattling of dishes and cupboard doors and the good-natured laughing coming from the other rooms, while at their own insistence Jack and Ennis cleared the table and cleaned up the kitchen. 

Finished, the partners joined Jack’s parents in the parlor for a while, and watched “It’s A Wonderful Life” on the TV.  By 9:30 Mr. Twist announced it was time to turn in, since Christmas or no Christmas tomorrow was another day on the ranch and stock needed tending and chores doing before church services, and he would yell up at them if they weren’t up and at ‘em on time.  Jack kissed his momma good night, shook hands with his dad, wished them both a Merry Christmas, and headed upstairs.  Ennis lingered, said he would be up in a minute.

After Jack had climbed the stairs, Ennis looked over at the Twists, his mouth dry and his heart beating so hard he thought it could be heard by the herd in the South 40.  Stumbling over his words, he finally pushed out his thanks again, and how we didn’t deserve their kindness but would always be grateful and wouldn’t impose much more and would be leavin’ as soon as the road was clear.  Mr. Twist cleared his throat and to Ennis’ surprise and embarrassment thanked Ennis for coming into their home, for making them realize what was important in their lives, and told Ennis he was welcome to stay as long as he and Jack wanted, that the upstairs was theirs now, never went up their anyway, his arthritis and all, a small lie that he know his Elaine would call him on later and forgive him for.  Ennis stood up, kissed Mrs. Twist on the cheek, shook hands with Mr. Twist sealing the deal, wished them a Merry Christmas, and went upstairs to open his present from Jack and to give Jack his. 

Lying in bed in the darkened house, Mr. Twist couldn’t help but mull over the events of the day, and remember the many presents they all had given and received.  The words of “The Night Before Christmas” ran through Mrs. Twist’s head, and a small tear leaked out of her eye and onto her pillow at, “…the children were nestled all snug in their beds.” And the children were, only they nestled together in each other's arms, all snug in Ennis’ big bed, while visions of a sweet life danced through their heads. 

tbc


That's a real Christams treat, cwby30, thanks so much. It's almost too sweet to be true.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on December 22, 2007, 04:03:59 pm
Hi Marie dear,

Sorry I've not been posting replies here daily.  I promise I've not forgotten about this thread.  And I've certainly not forgotten about you, or the rest of our writing group.  And I've not forgotten about your desire to share a piece of yourself nearly every day with your stories.

But Susie is right.  I've felt a bit under the gun here lately.  We were told when we came here that this site had a very friendly and open environment, and that it was one of the least homophobic places on the net.  And it's true that we were left alone here for the first few months, but then for reasons that still baffle me we became targets. So far I've been called a pornographer, a child molester, and most recently an agitator.  But of course all of these things are thrown out with politically correct veneers, and when I say something about it I'm told that I'm being too sensitive and that my attempts to defend myself break the "no personal attack" rule.

When you get a large group of people together there are obviously going to be disagreements, and there are always going to be people who are not so nice, and many of these will use the rules to their advantage.  Like one of my religious studies profs in college used to say to me all the time, you can be very lawful without being at all loving.  How true.

I was sad to learn that this group was just as ambiguous as any other.  I now know that there is good and bad here, just like everywhere else.  But I am sticking around, and I'm going to focus on the good as much as I can. 

I'm still here.  And I don't plan on going anywhere.  And I've not forgotten you.

Love,
Gary     

I'm so glad we all have each other, and love each other, and stand up for each other. And I haven't forgotten you either!

Dagi  :-*
Title: Re: Merry Christmas Jack
Post by: Dagi on December 22, 2007, 04:07:54 pm
"Merry Christmas Jack" by Susiebell


Ten years had passed since Jack's death, and every year Ennis found himself drawn to this same spot.  The campfire was ablaze, the warmth enveloping him like a big old blanket against the bitter cold.  He sat for several hours, a piece of wood in one hand, a whittling knife in the other.  He focused his attention on the small carving, smiling at the sound of Jack's tuneless warbling which seemed to reverberate through the forest with the howling winds.

His task completed, he headed on into the woods, in search of their tree.  The two hearts were still clearly visible, lovingly engraved, side by side, into the trunk.   He traced his finger over the initials etched into the bark, smiling fondly.  Kneeling down, he cleared the snow and debris from the base of the tree, revealing the nine little figures.  The three wise men had toppled over like skittles, and Joseph was leaning precariously against one of the roots.   He rearranged the figures, Mary beside Joseph, the three kings on one side, the shepherds on the other tending to their lone sheep, must make some more of them next year he thought to himself. 

He reached inside his pocket, carefully removing the newly carved baby Jesus, and placing him in his mother's arms.  Satisfied with his work, he closed his eyes and uttered a small prayer.  Then looking up at the two hearts, he smiled and whispered "Merry Christmas Jack".



Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)
 

I can see the little smile on his face when he's carving more sheep! You are making me feel all christmassy, and I already thought I was immune to that.  ;D

Dagi
Title: Re: The Christmas Present (8)
Post by: Toycoon on December 22, 2007, 06:52:18 pm
Dear cwby30,
Thank you so much for contributing to our humble thread. Your stories are warm, charming and heartfelt. All of us appreciate the time and the energy you spend writing, much more than is commented here. I'm sure that several more members read and enjoy your efforts but aren't as inclined to comment as the rest of us are. To those folks I'd say, if we've learned anything from Brokeback Mountain it would be to appreciate what you have freely and openly because nothing lasts forever and once it's gone, oh well...

Best wishes to all of our Jack with Ennis family for a beautiful holiday and prosperous new year!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on December 22, 2007, 08:56:30 pm
Quote
ps.  If my hubby ever cheated on me he'd be booted out on his backside ... end of!!! 

Poor Graham!! Not even one forgiveness??  :P You are just like my cousin -- she says that because she knows her husband would never do it!  ;)

All you kids writing Christmas stories -- good job!  :)
Title: Re: Merry Christmas Jack
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 22, 2007, 09:40:52 pm
"Merry Christmas Jack" by Susiebell


Ten years had passed since Jack's death, and every year Ennis found himself drawn to this same spot.  The campfire was ablaze, the warmth enveloping him like a big old blanket against the bitter cold.  He sat for several hours, a piece of wood in one hand, a whittling knife in the other.  He focused his attention on the small carving, smiling at the sound of Jack's tuneless warbling which seemed to reverberate through the forest with the howling winds.

His task completed, he headed on into the woods, in search of their tree.  The two hearts were still clearly visible, lovingly engraved, side by side, into the trunk.   He traced his finger over the initials etched into the bark, smiling fondly.  Kneeling down, he cleared the snow and debris from the base of the tree, revealing the nine little figures.  The three wise men had toppled over like skittles, and Joseph was leaning precariously against one of the roots.   He rearranged the figures, Mary beside Joseph, the three kings on one side, the shepherds on the other tending to their lone sheep, must make some more of them next year he thought to himself. 

He reached inside his pocket, carefully removing the newly carved baby Jesus, and placing him in his mother's arms.  Satisfied with his work, he closed his eyes and uttered a small prayer.  Then looking up at the two hearts, he smiled and whispered "Merry Christmas Jack".



Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)
 

Aw, Susie, this is moving beyond words.  I'm trying to type through my tears.  I am right there with Ennis, ten years after Jack's tragic demise, tending to that spot that was so special to the 2 of them.  Lovely writing, my dear.  This is a gift, indeed.  Thanks so much for sharing this with us!
Title: Re: The Ultimate Gift
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 22, 2007, 09:41:52 pm

Awwwww littlewing, I can't believe I missed this one ... what a charming little tale ... just beautiful.  :-*

Susie  :)

Thanks, Susiebaby!
Title: Re: The Ultimate Gift
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 22, 2007, 09:43:00 pm
Oh if only he would have done it, if only.  :(

Dagi

I know, Dagi...I know!
Title: Re: A Christmas Reunion
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 22, 2007, 09:55:22 pm
Merry Christmas to my fellow fanfic writers.

A Christmas Reunion – by garycottle


Gary, this is deep!  And the middle and ending is so masterfully written that I found it difficult to read.  The "surrender" of Daniel was so tender that I felt like an intruder.  And when he forgave Tyler, but admitted that some things had changed and would never be the same--well--that was so believable, so spot on.  The decisions we make in this life have consquences, and even though we forgive (our love is no greater than our forgiveness) there are some things that we can't forget.  Exceptional, Gary.  Thanks so much for this!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 22, 2007, 09:56:55 pm
Poor Graham!! Not even one forgiveness??  :P You are just like my cousin -- she says that because she knows her husband would never do it!  ;)

All you kids writing Christmas stories -- good job!  :)


Hey, Shasta!  I'm glad you're enjoying our Xmas stories.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 22, 2007, 09:59:04 pm


 :laugh: Hark at me talking about them as though they're real people .... but they do feel so real to me!! :)

They seem real to me, too!
Title: Re: Merry Christmas Jack
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 22, 2007, 09:59:55 pm
Aww littlewing ... you always say the nicest things!!  :-* :-* :-*

Susie   :D

 :-*  :-*  :-*  :-*
Title: Baby's First Christmas
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 22, 2007, 10:29:40 pm
Baby's First Christmas By Littlewing1957

Extreme AU, A Brokeback Mountain Slice of Life

“Oh let her be, Jack,” Ennis laughed as Jack ran after Indigo.  Jack lit out after her when she scooped up a handful of glass ornaments that were left under the tree.

“But she may cut herself,” Jack exclaimed as he caught his daughter and hoisted her up.
 
He gently reached for the colorful Christmas balls, but Indigo pulled back in mock defiance.  Jack laughed and kissed her red cheek.  He placed her on the shag carpeted floor and led her by her plump hand to the tree.

“That’s right,” Ennis began. “Let the baby help decorate the tree.”  Jack smiled at Indigo as he helped her place the ornaments on a low hung branch.  He produced a special ornament and beamed as Indigo hung it in a place of honor on their 9 foot tree.  Ennis looked on, so happy he thought he would burst.  If the sweet life were any sweeter, he would die from sugar shock!

Yesterday Ennis and Jack drove Indigo over to Alma Jr’s so they could shop for her presents.  Indigo wanted to go along, and even cried out when Jack and Ennis closed Alma Jr.’s door behind them.  But Daddy Jack and Daddy Ennis needed some time alone to pick out toys, clothes, and even have a leisurely lunch.  Alma Jr. told them to take all the time they needed.  She was prepared to watch her baby sister all day, if need be.  The first stop was Toys-R-Us.  It was a newfangled store carrying nothing but toys.  Ennis and Jack entered the toy wonderland and were sort of overwhelmed.  Where to begin?  Jack suggested they pick up a few baby dolls, then go on and purchase several stuffed animals.  Ennis selected a brunette doll that came equipped with blankets, toy bottle, even a comb and brush.

“She should like this,” Jack offered as he admired his husband’s choice.  Jack picked out a fashion doll, but Ennis asked him to put it back on the shelf.

“Too old for her,” he’d said.  Jack shrugged and replaced the doll.

“Whatever you say, En.”

The stuffed animals were located next to the dolls.  Ennis picked out a plush, brown and crème stripped toy horse.  It was Jack’s time to object.

“Not that one, although I’m not surprised you want Indigo to have a horse,” he began.

 Ennis chuckled softly and placed the horse back on the shelf.

“What, darlin’, you don’t like horses?” Ennis laughed as he looked Jack straight in his laughing blue eyes.

“I like ‘em fine, but here, why don’t we get her a few teddy bears and a panda bear? I think that’s all she needs.”

Ennis nodded and helped Jack find teddy bears: 2 medium sized and one so big they wondered how they would ever get it in the truck.  The salesgirl eyed Ennis and Jack as they paid for the toys.

“Toys for your kids?” She asked excitedly. “You got some good stuff here.  Some child is going to be very happy this Christmas.”

“Yeah, we’re buying for our daughter,” Jack announced proudly.  Ennis flinched a bit, but relaxed as the salesgirl’s face broke into a wide smile.

“Well, your daughter is one lucky girl to have 2 such good daddies,” She commented. The purchases all rung up, paid for and packaged, Jack and Ennis thanked the salesgirl and moved toward the door.

“Merry Christmas!” It was the salesgirl, and she waved excitedly.

“Merry Christmas to you too!"  Jack and Ennis sang in unison.

They left the store and headed to the The Rustler for lunch.  Jack ordered a cobb salad with dressing on the side.  Ennis heard him order the salad and shook his head.  He hated to sit right in front of Jack and munch on a thick, juicy cheeseburger, but hell, it was Christmas.  They could always join a gym after New Years.  Jack must have discerned Ennis’ plight.

“Go on, Baby, order the cheeseburger.  You know you want to.  I would have it too, but I’m not too hungry right now.”  Ennis peeked over the menu and looked up at the waiter. 

“I’ll have the double cheeseburger with a side of fries and a diet coke.”  The waiter nodded and walked off.  Jack smiled at his husband and reached for his hand under the table.

The ride to Alma Jr’s place was uneventful.  The snow had started to melt by midday, but it posed no real problem on the roads.  Alma Jr. answered her door with a sleepy Indigo draped around her shoulder like a scarf.  Indigo shook herself awake when she saw her daddies.  Alma Jr. couldn’t hand her over to Jack fast enough.  Jack folded his child in his arms and kissed Alma Jr. on the cheek.

“Now don’t forget Christmas dinner,” Jack reminded her.  Ennis stood by Jack’s side and winked at his oldest.

“3:00 sharp, Alma,” Ennis interjected.

“I’ll be there!” Alma Jr. sang, and with that, she kissed her two dads and shut the door behind her.

Jack strapped Indigo in her safety seat for the ride home.  She fell asleep halfway to the house, and Ennis carried her in.  Jack hoisted their purchases up the steps to the house as Ennis put Indigo to bed.

Jack made a fire and beckoned for Ennis to join him.  They kneeled in front of the fireplace and Ennis pulled Jack close.  Jack placed gossamer kisses on Ennis’ chin, while Ennis ran his fingers through Jack’s thick hair.

“Merry Christmas, Baby, I love you!”  It was Jack.  His voice cracked as he looked into his husband’s moist eyes.

“I love you too,” Ennis whispered as he kissed Jack once more.

“Look, I bought something while you were paying for the stuffed animals,” Jack announced as he pulled an outsized, globe shaped Xmas ornament from a box he placed near the fireplace. 

“What’s that?” Ennis asked as Jack held the sphere up to the light.

“It’s an ornament I noticed on a display.  It says, Baby’s first Christmas.  I thought we would let Indigo do the honors when she wakes up.  You like it?”

“I love it,” Ennis whispered, tenderly. 

“And I love you too.  Come on, if we hurry, I’ll show you just how much I love you.”

Jack smiled shyly and allowed Ennis to lead him to their room, eager to receive one of his Christmas presents.

Merry Christmas everyone Merry Christmas everyone Merry Christmas everyone Merry Christmas everyone Merry Christmas everyone Merry Christmas everyone
Title: Re: A Christmas Reunion
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 22, 2007, 10:36:34 pm
Thank you so much, Littlewing.  I'm glad that you liked it.  Even though it was a painful story, it felt really good being with Tyler and Daniel again.  And even though it's not all roses and sunshine at the end, they are clinging to their love for one another, and that's a good thing.

Gary

I absolutely love it, Gary.  I know Daniel and Tyler will be okay.  It seems they have something very unique.  They have a love that will never die.
Title: Re: A Christmas Reunion
Post by: Dagi on December 23, 2007, 09:41:10 am
Merry Christmas to my fellow fanfic writers.

A Christmas Reunion – by garycottle

 That's when Daniel began to sob.  Daniel let go of his anger, and he let the pain out, just at that moment.  He could not relax enough to let Tyler in without forgiving him first, so Daniel forgave, and he cried and whimpered as he did it.


I've missed Danny and Tyler, and I've missed your writing, and reading this I know why. What a heartbreaking story. And the way you let the two of them deal with what had happened is so genuine. Great writing, my dear.

Dagi
Title: Re: Baby's First Christmas
Post by: Dagi on December 23, 2007, 09:45:00 am
Baby's First Christmas By Littlewing1957



Aah, another Christmas treat, you are too good to us, Littlewing. I love how Jack says proudly that they are buying a present for their daughter.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on December 23, 2007, 09:48:42 am
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I wish you all a Merry Christmas! I love my Jack with Ennis Family!
Title: Re: A Christmas Reunion
Post by: Toycoon on December 23, 2007, 12:18:32 pm
Quote
A Christmas Reunion – by garycottle

“That’s all I need, Danny.  Thank you for your love.”

Oh Gary,
I'm glad you decided to send us a Christmas story. You know how much we missed your yarns, especially the Tyler and Daniel stories. Poor Daniel, he's so sincere and sensitive. I love that kid!
Title: Re: Baby's First Christmas
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 23, 2007, 04:27:07 pm
Aah, another Christmas treat, you are too good to us, Littlewing. I love how Jack says proudly that they are buying a present for their daughter.

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi.  I just had to include an Xmas story with the Twist-DelMar clan. 
Title: Re: Baby's First Christmas
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 23, 2007, 07:13:04 pm
Awww thank you for that wonderful Christmas treat Littlewing! :-*

Susie  :D

Thanks, SusieBaby.  Happy holidays to you!  :)  :-*
Title: Re: Baby's First Christmas
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 23, 2007, 07:14:49 pm
What a sweet and loving story, Littlewing.  And so full of Holiday cheer.  Thanks so much for the Christmas gift.  You're a sweetheart.

MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!

Hugs,
Gary

Glad you liked the story.

Merry Christmas to you, as well!
Title: Re: Merry Christmas
Post by: cwby30 on December 24, 2007, 01:47:20 pm
Mornin' to all of you!

Well, just wanted to stop by and wish you all a Merry Christmas, and to thank you again for letting me join in occasionally. You've created a nice place to sit down and visit for a while, friendly and caring, with just that right touch of naughtiness to spice up the nice.   After all, as they say, all things in moderation... including moderation!

I enjoy reading and writing here, and your support, and look forward to another good year of all the different stories and talk. 

Thanks again. 
Title: Re: Merry Christmas
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 24, 2007, 02:32:07 pm
Mornin' to all of you!

Well, just wanted to stop by and wish you all a Merry Christmas, and to thank you again for letting me join in occasionally. You've created a nice place to sit down and visit for a while, friendly and caring, with just that right touch of naughtiness to spice up the nice.   After all, as they say, all things in moderation... including moderation!

I enjoy reading and writing here, and your support, and look forward to another good year of all the different stories and talk. 

Thanks again. 

Cwby30, Happy holidays to you.  I want to thank you for being here with us.  I think you are a very talented writer and I enjoy your work immensely.  I look forward to many years here with you.  Have a happy and safe Christmas!  :)

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on December 25, 2007, 12:08:38 pm
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Lovin' them graphics, Miss Bell. You're a Christmas miracle!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 25, 2007, 03:55:38 pm
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Beautiful, SusieBaby!  Merry Christmas!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 25, 2007, 03:56:24 pm
Lovin' them graphics, Miss Bell. You're a Christmas miracle!

Merry Christmas, Toycoon!  Happy holidays to you!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 25, 2007, 04:12:21 pm
;D ;D ;D  Huggies to everybody on Christmas day.   ;D ;D ;D

Same to you, Baby!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on December 26, 2007, 11:16:36 pm
Merry Christmas, Toycoon!  Happy holidays to you!

Littlewing1957, my delightful muse! Happy Holidays, little darlin'. Peace, love and joy to your world!
Title: I Dream of a Happy New year
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 27, 2007, 12:25:09 am
I Dream of a Happy New Year By Littlewing 1957

Toycoon, this one is for you!

Ennis held Jack in a loose embrace.  His arms encircled his lover’s broad shoulders, and he inhaled the faint scent of soap, sweat and men's cologne.  Jack draped his solid arms around Ennis’ neck, and they swayed, in time, to the track on Ennis’ small radio.  Ennis tuned to the smooth jazz station – the only one in Wyoming.  It was New Year’s Eve and the tune was a cover of “What Are You Doing New Year’s Eve?"  Ennis placed a tender smooch on Jack’s cheek, and Jack sighed with pleasure.  Jack did a slow grind against Ennis’ stiffening groin.  He didn’t care that they weren’t really dancing.  It was okay to rock back-and-forth in Ennis’ arms.

Two solid weeks together at holiday time!  Jack couldn’t believe his good fortune.  He was divorced from Lureen, and Ennis was free as a bird.  Jack drove down to Riverton to be with Ennis, and felt as at home in his small house.  Jack was content and comfortable in Ennis' modest dwelling and he settled in for the two weeks together.  Ennis cleared away a place for Jack’s belongings, and changed the sheets on his twin bed.  He stocked the fridge with meat, lined the kitchen shelves with beans and peaches.  The days were spent eating and talking, while nights were reserved for fevered, desperate lovemaking.

Christmas Eve was a giddy joy!  Jack delivered several packages for Ennis to open.  Ennis couldn’t believe it!  Where did Jack hide them?  Ennis remembered Jack arriving with only one duffle, and that filled with clothes and a shaving kit.  Perhaps Jack left the gifts in his truck, only to haul them out on Christmas Eve.  Ennis presented only one gift.  It was all he could afford.  Jack didn’t care!  He opened the carefully wrapped present and made a big deal over an engraved silver lighter.  Ennis couldn’t get over Jack’s generosity!  He received shirts of every color, a bolo tie, socks, and expensive cologne.  And now as they danced, as they swayed back- and- forth, Jack smiled and contemplated his happiness.  He pulled back a bit as he noticed the time.  It was 10:00p.m., time to get ready for the party.

Jack watched as Ennis prepared for a night out.  He donned a starched white shirt, a black sports coat and black slacks.  Jack almost swooned at the sight of his handsome lover.  Jack dressed in dark blue slacks, a maroon shirt and a navy sport coat.  He looked rather dashing, and Ennis told him as much.  “We better get goin, Cowboy,” Jack mumbled. 

“Jack, what are you doin?” It was Lureen, pulling her arm away from Jack’s grip.  She was shocked awake by Jack muttering in his sleep.  He was going on and on about a cowboy and being late.  “Wake up, Jack!” Lureen shouted as she shook her husband out of his slumber.  Jack blinked awake and looked at Lureen.  He released his hold on her dainty, silk clad arm and apologized.  “I’m sorry, Lureen,” he began.  “I was just dreaming, is all!”  Lureen shrugged, rolled over and fell back asleep in no time.  Jack lay awake, fighting back the stinging, regretful, lonesome tears.  He thought that if he could just fall asleep fast enough, he could step right back into the dream.  He could pick up where Ennis grabbed his arm and escorted him out to his car.  But sleep wouldn’t come and Jack pulled the covers close.  He imaged being in Ennis’ warm embrace.  “Happy New Year, Friend.” Jack whispered.  “I love you, I really do.  Mebbe someday we’ll be together.” 

Ennis and Jack forever Ennis and Jack forever Ennis and Jack forever Ennis and Jack forever Ennis and Jack forever Ennis and Jack forever
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 27, 2007, 12:26:37 am
Littlewing1957, my delightful muse! Happy Holidays, little darlin'. Peace, love and joy to your world!

Thanks, Toycoon.  I wish you love and peace and everything you could ever want.  I love you!  :-*
Title: Re: I Dream of a Happy New year
Post by: Dagi on December 27, 2007, 04:05:28 pm
I Dream of a Happy New Year By Littlewing 1957

Toycoon, this one is for you!

Ennis held Jack in a loose embrace.  His arms encircled his lover’s broad shoulders, and he inhaled the faint scent of soap, sweat and men's cologne.  Jack draped his solid arms around Ennis’ neck, and they swayed, in time, to the track on Ennis’ small radio.  Ennis tuned to the smooth jazz station – the only one in Wyoming.  It was New Year’s Eve and the tune was a cover of “What Are You Doing New Year’s Eve?"  Ennis placed a tender smooch on Jack’s cheek, and Jack sighed with pleasure.  Jack did a slow grind against Ennis’ stiffening groin.  He didn’t care that they weren’t really dancing.  It was okay to rock back-and-forth in Ennis’ arms.

Two solid weeks together at holiday time!  Jack couldn’t believe his good fortune.  He was divorced from Lureen, and Ennis was free as a bird.  Jack drove down to Riverton to be with Ennis, and felt as at home in his small house.  Jack was content and comfortable in Ennis' modest dwelling and he settled in for the two weeks together.  Ennis cleared away a place for Jack’s belongings, and changed the sheets on his twin bed.  He stocked the fridge with meat, lined the kitchen shelves with beans and peaches.  The days were spent eating and talking, while nights were reserved for fevered, desperate lovemaking.

Christmas Eve was a giddy joy!  Jack delivered several packages for Ennis to open.  Ennis couldn’t believe it!  Where did Jack hide them?  Ennis remembered Jack arriving with only one duffle, and that filled with clothes and a shaving kit.  Perhaps Jack left the gifts in his truck, only to haul them out on Christmas Eve.  Ennis presented only one gift.  It was all he could afford.  Jack didn’t care!  He opened the carefully wrapped present and made a big deal over an engraved silver lighter.  Ennis couldn’t get over Jack’s generosity!  He received shirts of every color, a bolo tie, socks, and expensive cologne.  And now as they danced, as they swayed back- and- forth, Jack smiled and contemplated his happiness.  He pulled back a bit as he noticed the time.  It was 10:00p.m., time to get ready for the party.

Jack watched as Ennis prepared for a night out.  He donned a starched white shirt, a black sports coat and black slacks.  Jack almost swooned at the sight of his handsome lover.  Jack dressed in dark blue slacks, a maroon shirt and a navy sport coat.  He looked rather dashing, and Ennis told him as much.  “We better get goin, Cowboy,” Jack mumbled. 

“Jack, what are you doin?” It was Lureen, pulling her arm away from Jack’s grip.  She was shocked awake by Jack muttering in his sleep.  He was going on and on about a cowboy and being late.  “Wake up, Jack!” Lureen shouted as she shook her husband out of his slumber.  Jack blinked awake and looked at Lureen.  He released his hold on her dainty, silk clad arm and apologized.  “I’m sorry, Lureen,” he began.  “I was just dreaming, is all!”  Lureen shrugged, rolled over and fell back asleep in no time.  Jack lay awake, fighting back the stinging, regretful, lonesome tears.  He thought that if he could just fall asleep fast enough, he could step right back into the dream.  He could pick up where Ennis grabbed his arm and escorted him out to his car.  But sleep wouldn’t come and Jack pulled the covers close.  He imaged being in Ennis’ warm embrace.  “Happy New Year, Friend.” Jack whispered.  “I love you, I really do.  Mebbe someday we’ll be together.” 

Ennis and Jack forever Ennis and Jack forever Ennis and Jack forever Ennis and Jack forever Ennis and Jack forever Ennis and Jack forever


This is heartbreaking, Littlewing dear. Nevertheless thanks for writing and sharing, sweetie! At least they can be toghether in their dreams.  :'(

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 27, 2007, 09:21:26 pm
Yes, they can always be together in their dreams.  Thanks for your kind words, Love!  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on December 28, 2007, 03:15:45 am
Hello folks,
The latest installment of our story, 'Right' is coming up next!
Meanwhile, Happy Kwanzaa! I hope everyone had a Merry Christmas, enjoying the Happy Holidays and is looking forward to a spectacular New Year.
Title: Right 60 by Toycoon
Post by: Toycoon on December 28, 2007, 03:33:26 am
Right (60) by Toycoon

"Listen, you two, I got a little apartment behind the shop. It's not much but you're welcome to stay there as long as you like." Jack's eyes followed Katie as she went around the shop, straightening up the displays, unlocking the front door and flipping the sign on it around to read, 'open'. She stopped near the counter with the small cash register on it. "Come on boys, I'll show you." Katie turned and crooking her finger, she beckoned Jack and Ennis to follow. Jack smiled and obeyed. Ennis grabbed his hat and his cup of coffee and caught up to them. Katie disappeared behind the beaded curtains at the back of the store.

On the other side of the doorway, they were standing in the fanciest, single apartment either of the two men had ever seen.  The walls were painted various shades of mauve and purple, with ivory lace curtains hanging in the small window facing the alley. The floor was polished, blond wood with a small oriental rug laying in the center. In the opposite corner of the room was a large brass bed flanked by dark wood end tables, one with a large tiffany lamp on it. Ennis and Jack looked around the room then back at each other. How could they refuse Katie's generous offer to stay in such a nice place?

Katie picked up a pink dish towel, dabbed her mouth then wiped her hands. She took another sip of her coffee. 'Well, what do you think, guys? I did up myself," she said proudly flailing her arms, "It's cute, huh?" "Sheee-it, it sure is!" blurted out, Jack grinning from ear to ear. "Well, you think about it," said Katie, looking somewhat strangely at Jack. "I'm gonna pick up sweet rolls over at the bakery. Jack, would you be a doll and keep an eye out on the shop?" She kissed her finger then stretched out her hand and placed her finger on Jack's lower lip. She flung her sweater onto her shoulders and buttoned the top button, framing her impressive cleavage perfectly. "When I come back, I wanna hear everything. I wanna know what you boys were doing out there so dang early in the morning, you hear." With that she bumped open the back door with her hip, flipped her auburn mane and strolled out. The screen door slammed three times before finally stopping.

"Jack, we cain't stay here. Yer daddy's gonna find us if we stay in town. Everybody's gonna find out about us!" said Ennis very concerned, taking Jack by the shoulders and shaking him a little. "Don't ya see? Ennis, it's perfect! My daddy won't never thinka looking fer us here! Guys like us... in a place this this? Besides, he don't hardly ever come into town anyway. He ain't been here in months." Jack hung his hands on Ennis' arms, closed his eyes and leaned in for a quick kiss. They were startled by the sound of loud chimes at the front door and the creak of the door opening. Jack and Ennis walked slowly towards the doorway and together, they peered in. A pretty blond woman wearing a turquoise skirt and sweater set stood near the front door. She ran her hand daintily over a silk scarf and glanced around the store. Jack spoke up. "Hello there, ma'am. Katie went out fer a coupl'a minutes. She'll be right back." The young woman was at first flustered to hear a man's deep voice in the quaint shop but was instantly taken with Jack's handsome looks. Jack was mesmerized by the attractive young woman as well. "I'm Jack. I'm a friend' a Katie's. This here is my buddy, Ennis. We was ... uh, just passing through." Ennis nodded his head and touched the brim of his hat. Amused by the dichotomy of such rugged men in the very feminine boutique, she twittered and held out her graceful hand. " I'm Raquel. Pleased to meet you. Katie didn't tell me she'd hired any help, especially cowboy help." Raquel looked both of the men over thoroughly and concentrating on Ennis, smoothed back her bobbed hair. " Hmm, I'm here to pick up the silk peignoir I bought last week." She unsnapped her bag, pulled out the pink sales receipt and handed it to Jack. "Here you are, darlin'." She smiled then turned back to look at Ennis across the room, standing next to a mannequin form draped with a lavender lace robe embellished in long purple feathers. Jack stepped into the back room to look for her parcel on the layaway shelf.

Just then Katie burst in the door, sounding the chimes and causing the scarves on display to wave in the breeze. She was carrying a small bakery box with a string tied around it in one hand and a pale blue sheet of paper in the other. "Rocky, honey, how are you?!" She kissed Raquel on the cheek, breezed past her to the counter, laid the flyer down then plopped the bakery box on top of it. She turned back towards Raquel and squeezed her hand. "I see you met my hired hands, Jack and Ennis. Aren't they something?!"

"They sure are," Raquel agreed. "Where on Earth did you find them?" "My 'cowboys'...?" Katie confided, "I picked them up by the side of the road. Can you believe it?!" They giggled for several minutes then Katie pulled open the drawer. She took out a silver pair of scissors and snipped the string on the bakery box. She pulled the flyer from under the box and read it silently. "Raquel, were you planning on going to the Winter Dance this Saturday?" 'No, I couldn't get a date," she replied mournfully. "Yeah, neither could I." A few moments went by then Katie's eyes twinkled like amber. "Girl, I just got an idea..."

Jack came back in to the room carrying a rectangular box with a red bow. "Here you are, Raquel. Here's yer box," he said, setting the package on the counter. "Oh hey there, Katie." "Hi there, Jack. Here's the sweet rolls I promised you boys." She flipped open the box and waved her hands over the contents. "Say Jack, we were wondering what you two handsome cowboys were doing next Saturday." "Umm, nothing, I reckon," said Jack, taking a cinnamon roll dripping with icing from the box. "Great! Then you and Ennis can take me and Raquel to the Winter Dance on Saturday." She held up the pale blue flyer and put it in front of Jack's face. Jack grinned sheepishly as he read it's contents and then turned to Ennis. "Well, buddy, ah guess we're going to the Winter Dance with these lovely ladies."





Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on December 28, 2007, 08:31:42 am
Hello folks,
The latest installment of our story, 'Right' is coming up next!
Meanwhile, Happy Kwanzaa! I hope everyone had a Merry Christmas, enjoying the Happy Holidays and is looking forward to a spectacular New Year.

Thank you, Toycoon. I hope you and yours are having fun celebrations too!!  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on December 28, 2007, 08:45:33 am
Thanks for going on writing, Toycoon! I´m wondering where this is going to, but maybe you are as well.  :laugh:

Hope you all had a wonderful Christmas time...

Dagi
Title: Re: I Dream of a Happy New year
Post by: Toycoon on December 28, 2007, 12:16:17 pm
Thank you for thinking of me, Littlewing!
Title: Re: Right (60)
Post by: cwby30 on December 28, 2007, 02:03:00 pm
Mornin'.

Well, this is turning into a bitch of an unsatisfactory situation for Ennis.  Jack doesn't seem to see or heed the warning signs, just plowing ahead and taking life as it comes.  Hope he doesn't plow so far ahead that he misses seeing Ennis turning off the road in another direction.  South Dakota is looking even better now.

Lookiing forward to seeing where the next installment leads the guys, and wouldn't it be something if Alan Sims also shows up at the dance! 

Thanks again.

PS: how do I stick in one of those fancy 'smilies'? Can't figure it out!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on December 28, 2007, 02:23:09 pm
Hi Cwby30,

if you mean the simple smilies like  :D ;D :P you just click on them. For more special ones there are mustiple sites in the internet that provide the addresses, which you just copy and paste into your message, and then you mark it and click the button right on top of the  ;D smilie, which shows a little image, can you see it? That´s it.  8)
Title: Re: I Dream of a Happy New year
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 28, 2007, 09:32:50 pm
Thank you for thinking of me, Littlewing!

You bet!
Title: Right (61)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 28, 2007, 10:33:15 pm
Right (61) By Littlewing1957

Mrs. Twist walked down the steps to her kitchen, all ready to prepare the morning meal.  She was feeling a bit stiff, but knew she would feel better after being treated to one of Jack’s mega watt smiles.  And that Ennis Del Mar!  What a charming young man!  Roberta Twist realized that those two handsome faces kept her going.  She loved her husband in her own way, but he could be a trial.  Ennis and Jack made her feel young and vital.  Mrs. Twist looked around her living room.  It was 9:00 in the morning, and she expected to see three men milling about, waiting for breakfast.  But the house was as quiet as the grave.  Roberta Twist shrugged and walked into the kitchen.  Perhaps her three guys were out inspecting the wood Ennis and Jack brought back to build the barn.  Of course, that was it!  They were out on the grounds getting ready to erect a new barn.

Mr. Twist walked into the kitchen just as his wife was mixing the pancake batter.  He had just come from the basement looking for Ennis and Jack.  He knocked on the basement door first before using his key to gain entry.  Mr. Twist became concerned when he didn’t get an answer from Ennis when he called him, or when he knocked on the door.  Old Man Twist was not one to jump to conclusions, but all sorts of dire thoughts ran through his mind when Ennis failed to answer.  What if Jack and Ennis were holed up in there, doing God knows what? Alan Sims may have returned and there was a fight.  “Naw,” thought Mr. Twist.  He would have certainly heard a fight ruckus.  But why didn’t Ennis answer when he was called?  Mr. Twist used his key to open the basement door.  He felt no guilt – he owned the property.  The basement was empty.  No Ennis, no Jack!  John Twist took a cursory look around the basement apartment.  Ennis didn’t arrive with much, but what he did have was gone.  John Twist ran back into the house and took the stairs two at a time.  Jack’s door was closed, but he didn’t hesitate to barge right in.  No Jack.  John looked through his son’s meager belongings.  Most of Jack’s stuff was there, but some of it was missing.  Mr. Twist felt ill.  Jack and Ennis ran off together?  He sat down on his son’s bed and placed his head between his knees.  He wondered what he would tell his wife!

“Mornin', John!” Mrs. Twist sang as her husband took a seat at the kitchen table.  Mr. Twist was pale as a ghost and said nothing.  Roberta Twist didn’t notice her husband’s chalky pallor at first.  “I said good morning, John,” she persisted.  Still no answer from her husband!  Roberta placed the bowl of batter on the drain board and walked over to her kitchen table.  She sat opposite her husband and took a good look at him.  Her man was as pale as a sheet.  “What is it, John?” She asked.  “You look like you just had a fright.  What’s goin’ on?  Where are the boys?”  John Twist flinched visibly when Roberta mentioned the boys.  “I asked you a question,” Mrs. Twist said softly as she held her husband’s hand.  Mr. Twist sighed and pulled his hand away.  He reached for a napkin from the holder and wiped his damp brow.  “I don’t know where they are, ma!” He croaked.  “I went down to the basement and I didn’t see Ennis.” Mr. Twist blew air out of his lungs.  “Jack is not in his room.”  Mrs. Twist was silent as she digested her husband’s words.  “Now, let’s not get excited, pa,” She began.  “For all we know they went into town for something.  Did you check the grounds?  Maybe they’re over looking at the wood for the barn.”  “No,” John stated emphatically. “I was just over there, and I checked the entire property.  The boys are just not here, Roberta.”  He refused to tell her about Alan Sims, or that Ennis' things were missing.  Mrs. Twist refused to worry.  “Look, Pa, the boys are grown men, and can take care of themselves.”  She rose from her seat and picked up the pancake batter.  “I’m sure they just went out into town, or they may be visiting a friend.  No need to get all riled up.  They’ll be back directly.”  Roberta Twist stirred the batter.  “I hope you’re right, ma,” Mr. Twist remarked, obviously reassured.  “Of course I’m right," Roberta stated.  Now, go get washed up for breakfast.”  John Twist nodded and headed for the bathroom.

Mrs. Twist poured a puddle of batter into a cast iron skillet.  She kept moving to run away from her own terror.  She tried to convince her husband that the boys were okay, but she didn’t really believe it herself.  Mrs. Twist had a bad feeling.  Worrying was silly, but Roberta couldn't help it.  She didn’t for once believe that Ennis and Jack went into town for something or other.  She didn’t want to think that her son would leave without telling her.  What if something happened to the both of them?  Roberta Twist almost burned pancakes for the first time in her life.  “Ennis and Jack, where are you?  How could you leave without telling me?”
Title: Once Bitten
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 29, 2007, 03:31:08 am
Once Bitten by Littlewing1957

Jack moved the quilt aside, just enough for Ennis to crawl in beside him.  Outside the wind whipped the rain against the trees, the cabin, and the Earth.   Jack treasured the violence of the rain and wind.  He enjoyed making love in a rain storm, and especially in a blizzard.  It reminded him of a certain time: an idyllic adventure up on a beautiful, snow capped mountain.

“I can eat him alive!” Jack thought as Ennis offered him a toned arm.  Jack lifted Ennis' forearm, and without even thinking, dusted his lips over the tan flesh.  Ennis sighed audibly, and fell limp!  Jack held Ennis’ arm in a steady grip, and began placing tiny bites all along the wrist up to the shoulder.  Ennis liked the sensation.  He liked it a lot.

“Bite me again, just a bit!” Ennis pleaded.  Jack grinned slyly and held Ennis’ arm up once more.  He bit his lover, oh so gently.  Ennis moaned, and in an instant, returned the favor.  Jack couldn’t believe it!  He wondered if there was such a thing as an arm biting 69?  Whatever it was called, the act lent an unexpected spice to their lovemaking. 

And from that moment on
When the time was right
Two lovers crossed arms
To kiss and to bite
Amid the whisper of the rain
And the dark of the night
Title: Re: Right (61)
Post by: Dagi on December 30, 2007, 05:07:59 pm
Right (61) By Littlewing1957

 ........but knew she would feel better after being treated to one of Jack’s mega watt smiles.


 ;D loved that...love the story! The tension is building up! Thanks for continuing!

Dagi
Title: Re: Once Bitten
Post by: Dagi on December 30, 2007, 05:10:31 pm
Once Bitten by Littlewing1957

Jack moved the quilt aside, just enough for Ennis to crawl in beside him.  Outside the wind whipped the rain against the trees, the cabin, and the Earth.   Jack treasured the violence of the rain and wind.  He enjoyed making love in a rain storm, and especially in a blizzard.  It reminded him of a certain time: an idyllic adventure up on a beautiful, snow capped mountain.

“I can eat him alive!” Jack thought as Ennis offered him a toned arm.  Jack lifted Ennis' forearm, and without even thinking, dusted his lips over the tan flesh.  Ennis sighed audibly, and fell limp!  Jack held Ennis’ arm in a steady grip, and began placing tiny bites all along the wrist up to the shoulder.  Ennis liked the sensation.  He liked it a lot.

“Bite me again, just a bit!” Ennis pleaded.  Jack grinned slyly and held Ennis’ arm up once more.  He bit his lover, oh so gently.  Ennis moaned, and in an instant, returned the favor.  Jack couldn’t believe it!  He wondered if there was such a thing as an arm biting 69?  Whatever it was called, the act lent an unexpected spice to their lovemaking.

And from that moment on
When the time was right
Two lovers crossed arms
To kiss and to bite
Amid the whisper of the rain
And the dark of the night


Oh my God, this is going to be one of my all time favorites! What a sensual image...feeling.......sending goosebumps all over my body!  :D You are amazing, sweetie!

Dagi
Title: Re: Right (61)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 30, 2007, 09:13:55 pm
;D loved that...love the story! The tension is building up! Thanks for continuing!

Dagi

My pleasure!  It is a great comfort to write about our boys!
Title: Re: Once Bitten
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 30, 2007, 09:14:47 pm
Oh my God, this is going to be one of my all time favorites! What a sensual image...feeling.......sending goosebumps all over my body!  :D You are amazing, sweetie!

Dagi

Dagi, thanks for reading and commenting.  Thanks so much for your kind words.  I'll post something else very soon!  :-*
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on December 31, 2007, 04:50:36 am
Happy New Year Littlewing and Toycoon and all fanfic readers and writers!!!  


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Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on December 31, 2007, 07:26:30 am
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to my Jack with Ennis family! I love you guys!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on December 31, 2007, 12:12:31 pm

Happy New Year to all of our Brokeback brethern!
Best wishes and great fortune to everyone!
 
Title: Re: CHEERS!
Post by: cwby30 on December 31, 2007, 02:41:11 pm
Mornin', everyone.

Well, just had to wish you all a Happy New Year, and tell you I'm looking forward to spending time and to sharing more stories and thoughts with you in 2008.  Can't be fancy with the logos and pictures and all that [not yet at least], just words which are heartfelt.   :D

Thanks again. 

[PS, Dagi... it worked!]
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on December 31, 2007, 04:08:08 pm
I´m glad it worked, cwby30!  ;D I had Susie to help me find my way here... Happy New Year to you, friend!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 31, 2007, 05:33:28 pm
Happy New Year Littlewing and Toycoon and all fanfic readers and writers!!!  


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Happy New Year to you, as well!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 31, 2007, 05:34:28 pm
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to my Jack with Ennis family! I love you guys!

Happy New Year, Dagi!  We love you, too!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 31, 2007, 05:35:44 pm
Happy New Year to all of our Brokeback brethern!
Best wishes and great fortune to everyone!
 

Happy New Year, Toycoon!  I wish all of us a happy, prosperous, and safe New Year!
Title: Re: CHEERS!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 31, 2007, 05:37:19 pm
Mornin', everyone.

Well, just had to wish you all a Happy New Year, and tell you I'm looking forward to spending time and to sharing more stories and thoughts with you in 2008.  Can't be fancy with the logos and pictures and all that [not yet at least], just words which are heartfelt.   :D

Thanks again. 

[PS, Dagi... it worked!]

Cwby30, Happy New Year to you!  I'm looking forward to our time together in the months to come.  Thanks for being here with us!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: louisev on December 31, 2007, 05:52:56 pm
Thanks everyone for participating in the Fan Fic forum.  I just wanted to add that while I know it was an uncomfortable adjustment for some, all of us at Bettermost appreciate the fanfic authors adhering to our new content rules; we know that it was something of a surprise - to all of us - to find out that the text content of our forums was also subject to our advertiser's restrictions, but we are very grateful to all of you for graciously making the adjustment!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on December 31, 2007, 06:06:04 pm
Yee-Haw!!! 500 pages of Jack with Ennis Fan Fic!! Congrats!!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 31, 2007, 11:35:36 pm
Thanks everyone for participating in the Fan Fic forum.  I just wanted to add that while I know it was an uncomfortable adjustment for some, all of us at Bettermost appreciate the fanfic authors adhering to our new content rules; we know that it was something of a surprise - to all of us - to find out that the text content of our forums was also subject to our advertiser's restrictions, but we are very grateful to all of you for graciously making the adjustment!

Thanks, Louise!  I'm really grateful for this opportunity!  I wish you a happy and healthy New Year.  I look forward to many years here with you.  Actually, I don't plan on leaving.  Happiness, always!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 31, 2007, 11:36:08 pm
Yee-Haw!!! 500 pages of Jack with Ennis Fan Fic!! Congrats!!

Thanks, Shasta!  Happy New Year, my Love!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on January 01, 2008, 01:19:51 am
Thanks everyone for participating in the Fan Fic forum.  I just wanted to add that while I know it was an uncomfortable adjustment for some, all of us at Bettermost appreciate the fanfic authors adhering to our new content rules; we know that it was something of a surprise - to all of us - to find out that the text content of our forums was also subject to our advertiser's restrictions, but we are very grateful to all of you for graciously making the adjustment!

Thanks Louise,
I hope everyone is adjusting to the changes as well as we at team Jack with Ennis, The Fanfic Game seem to be.
I'm just happy we didn't get unplugged completely (such as the case with IMDb)! Hallelujah and Happy New Year!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on January 01, 2008, 01:21:24 am
Yee-Haw!!! 500 pages of Jack with Ennis Fan Fic!! Congrats!!

Damn! I never thought we'd make it to 500 but here we are... Yeeehaw!

P.S.- Shasta, my precious. How's about a little something-something for the faithful.
They won't miss you too much at your pajama party while you sneak away for a minute to write three lines of saucy fanfic, will they?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: spiceylife on January 01, 2008, 07:40:55 am
Stand By Me by spiceylife

I won't be afraid
just as long as you stand by me



Ennis slid off Cigar Butt in that time-honored cowboy way, tossing his reins loosely over the closest sturdy tree branch.  He ambled the rest of the way down to the river, hands deep in his pockets, thinking about Jack.  Jack Twist always seemed to be on his mind these days.  Ennis couldn’t remember what life was like before his handsome rodeo cowboy came along.  He smiled to himself as he walked, thinking of blue eyes, sweet kisses, golden skin and the way Jack loved. 

They had made a date the night before…  Meet you at the river at 1pm, Ennis.  An’ don’t be late, okay?  Check that damn watch Aguirre gave you, the one you keep in your  pocket, bud.  That’s what it’s for, ya know.  I’ll bring somethin’ special up to you for lunch.  Besides myself…

Ennis liked seein’ Jack’s cheeky smile, the way it made his eyes light up with warmth and kindness.  Hell, Jack was ‘bout the only person he’d ever met who could get an easy smile out of Ennis himself.  He understood Jack, accepted him readily, and Jack seemed to feel the same about him.  Life was good with Jack around.

Ennis knelt down by the riverbank, trying to wash some of the day’s blackened grime from his hard-working hands.  He scooped up cool handfuls of water and splashed his hot, sweaty face.  Dirty water dripped off his chin as he scrubbed, wanting to clean himself up before Jack arrived.   

The bear took Ennis by surprise.  A slight movement to his right and Ennis saw him, not sixty feet away.  Dense shrubs along the riverbank had hidden the animal at first but the bear was clearly visible now as it crashed loudly out of the bushes and rose up instantly on powerful hind legs.  It looked like a youngish male, Ennis thought, very territorial, angry at being disturbed.  The bear stared at him and roared so loudly that Ennis felt the frightening vibration rumble through his chest.  He froze in fear and cursed his stupidity.

Damn fool, thinkin’ on Jack and forgettin’ to bring the 30-30.  Horse’s too far away to reach the gun now.  Can’t outrun this cranky sonofabitch.  Number one rule, Ennis.  Keep the gun with ya at all times.  Ya know it, ya didn’t do it, and now you’re gonna pay for it. 

Still crouching, hardly daring to move, Ennis slowly reached for his hunting knife when the crunch of gravel close behind him stopped his hand. He sighed and closed his eyes for a moment, his head dropping in defeat, sickened by the thought of another bear coming up on his back.  He felt sorry, but not because he was about to die.  He had little fear of death, although he sure as hell didn’t want to go out like this.  No, he was sorry because he knew it would be Jack who found him, or what was left of him, anyway.  He didn’t want Jack to find his remains, but there was no way out now for Ennis.  He prayed it would be over quickly, and steeled himself for what he knew was coming.  It was out of his hands.

And then Jack stepped up from behind him, moving past Ennis and placing himself directly between his friend and the bear, not saying a word.  He had the 30-30 up to his right shoulder, cocked and ready to fire.  Oh, Jesus!   Sweet relief washed over Ennis but he knew the danger wasn’t over yet.  Jack couldn’t hit the side of a barn at sixty feet, much less a bear.  Both boys knew it.  Ennis had been trying to teach Jack to steady his aim, take his time with the shot, but it had been hard going, trying even Ennis’s unfaltering, endless patience.  He wondered for a second whether he might be able to stand up and take the gun from Jack to get the shot off himself.  Too risky, though.  If he moved suddenly and startled the bear, it could easily be on him, or worse, Jack, before Ennis got the gun up and in position to fire.  No, he had to leave it to Jack now and trust in his friend to get them out of this.

And then the bear charged.

Ennis watched the scene unfold like some surreal nightmare in heart-stopping slow motion.  The enraged bear dropped to all fours and rushed at them, snarling mouth open and frothing at the corners as it ran.  It roared again, lower this time, and shining white fangs caught the sunlight and glinted terrifyingly at the boys.  It was a horrible sight.  Jack breathed in, shifted his legs apart, squared his shoulders slightly and fired.  Ennis stood up quickly behind Jack.  If his friend couldn’t bring the massive creature down in time, Ennis would step in front of Jack and take the full force of the animal’s fury when it reached them.

“STAY BACK, Ennis!” Jack shouted, seeming to sense what Ennis was about to do.

Jack stood his ground, not flinching, no backward step, steadfast and courageous as always.  He took a rapid-fire second and third shot at the rampaging bear.  And still it came at them.  Ennis instinctively moved to Jack’s side.  He knew Jack would die trying to save him, but Ennis couldn’t live with that.  He’d take it himself rather than see that happen.  Ennis slid his sturdy hunting knife from its sheath and gripped it tight, knowing in his sinking heart how useless it was against such a beast unless he got one perfect strike in straight up.

The bear was almost on them.

“Steady, Jack!  Between his eyes!  Line him up, follow his movement an’ squeeze gently…remember?” Ennis instructed, his low, calm voice masking the urgent terror gripping his guts.

Jack remembered, and did everything Ennis said.  His steady and accurate fourth shot brought the bear down.  It fell heavily at their feet, its brutal, deadly claws just reaching the hole in the front of Jack’s worn-out old boot.  It took a last shuddering breath and then was still.

The boys stared down at the dead bear and finally remembered to breathe again as the adrenaline coursing through their bodies slowly dissipated.  Ennis’s shaky hand felt for Jack’s trembling one.  They stayed a moment like that, knowing they’d just cheated an awful death, amazed to still be alive.  Then Ennis pulled Jack close, hugged him and they closed their eyes, the thought of almost losing each other too much to take.  Ennis sent up a silent prayer of thanks for having Jack Twist in his life.  His big hands cradled Jack’s face and he rested his forehead on Jack’s, smiling at his friend and nuzzling him, unable to contain himself.  Finally he took a deep breath and found his voice.

“Nice shootin’ there, Tex,” Ennis told him.  “You did real good, Jack.  Real good.”

Jack’s face was white with shock, but his eyes were pained.  “I thought he’d make a meal a you by the time I got down here, Ennis.  Spotted him from the ridge up there and took off like lightnin’, hopin’ you wasn’t here already.”  He shook his head slowly, recalling the jolting fear, reliving it once more.  “Ain’t never felt so worried sick in my whole life,” Jack said, his voice still strained and anxious.  “You in danger like that, Ennis… well, I never wanna see that again.  Jesus!  My heart won’t take it!” he exclaimed, clutching at his chest, having a mock heart attack and collapsing to the ground.

“S’alright now, Jack.  You did it, Rodeo.  I’m fine ‘cos a you, ya big ol’ sharpshootin’ hunter!”  Laughing, Ennis sat down next to Jack and ruffled his dark hair, so much love in such a small gesture.  They sat side by side for a few moments, looking out over the water, not speaking, just thinking… worrying.  A million ‘what-ifs’ ran through their minds.  It was Jack who broke the silence, still gazing out across the rushing waters, not daring to look at his friend as he spoke the words.

“Couldn’t stand to lose you, Ennis…”

“I know, Jack.  Feel the same about you.”  Ennis draped an arm across Jack’s shoulder and hugged him.  “That was mighty brave, what you did for me just now.”  He poked at the bear’s paw with his boot a few times, making sure it wasn’t gonna stage a comeback any time soon.  He turned his head sideways and looked his friend right in the eye as he spoke.

“Thank you, Jack.  I’m sure glad ta have you around.”  He brushed a strand of hair from Jack’s eyes and spoke sincerely, from the heart.  “You’re a good friend and a good man, Jack Twist.”

Jack’s eyes filled with tears.  Nobody ever said kind words like that to him, only his momma, and that didn’t count so much.  Ma had to say those things to him, to make up for all the rotten shit the old man gave him.  Jack’s heart melted for his brown-eyed cowboy.  He swiped at the tears as they trickled down his flushed cheeks, embarrassed to cry in front of Ennis.  He smiled back at Ennis through blurry eyes, glad to still have him around, too, and in one piece.  Ennis leaned over and kissed Jack, a sweet kiss to let him know how much he mattered, then pulled back and raised an enquiring eyebrow.

“How ‘bout that lunch now, Rodeo, huh?  Don’t know ‘bout you but almost dyin’ gives me a fuckin’ appetite!  And food’s one a two things I’m hungry for right now, Jack…” 

   

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on January 01, 2008, 05:51:00 pm
Stand By Me by spiceylife

“How ‘bout that lunch now, Rodeo, huh?  Don’t know ‘bout you but almost dyin’ gives me a fuckin’ appetite!  And food’s one a two things I’m hungry for right now, Jack…” 

   



I could have guessed that you are a marvellous writer, Spicey, sex- or no-sex-stories.  ;D You had me sitting at the edge of my seat there! Great come-back, sweetie, do it more often!

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on January 01, 2008, 07:27:43 pm
HappyNewYear,
to my old pals - Oscar, Marie, Dagi, Susie, Gary and new pal, Cwby30, too!   :D 
May 2008 find all of you happy, healthy and very, very content.

Love always,

Robyn  xxoo

Yahooo! Spiceylife, how the heck are you?
It sure is sweet to hear from you. I hope you can come around more often an' visit this year. I missed you something awful!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on January 01, 2008, 07:30:39 pm
Quote
Stand By Me by spiceylife

I won't be afraid
just as long as you stand by me


Sheee-it Spicey! Whatta comeback. Awesome writin' there, kid. You had me sweatin' bullets! Beautiful finish at the end.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 01, 2008, 09:29:55 pm
Stand By Me by spiceylife

I won't be afraid
just as long as you stand by me



Ennis slid off Cigar Butt in that time-honored cowboy way, tossing his reins loosely over the closest sturdy tree branch.  He ambled the rest of the way down to the river, hands deep in his pockets, thinking about Jack.  Jack Twist always seemed to be on his mind these days.  Ennis couldn’t remember what life was like before his handsome rodeo cowboy came along.  He smiled to himself as he walked, thinking of blue eyes, sweet kisses, golden skin and the way Jack loved. 

They had made a date the night before…  Meet you at the river at 1pm, Ennis.  An’ don’t be late, okay?  Check that damn watch Aguirre gave you, the one you keep in your  pocket, bud.  That’s what it’s for, ya know.  I’ll bring somethin’ special up to you for lunch.  Besides myself…

Ennis liked seein’ Jack’s cheeky smile, the way it made his eyes light up with warmth and kindness.  Hell, Jack was ‘bout the only person he’d ever met who could get an easy smile out of Ennis himself.  He understood Jack, accepted him readily, and Jack seemed to feel the same about him.  Life was good with Jack around.

Ennis knelt down by the riverbank, trying to wash some of the day’s blackened grime from his hard-working hands.  He scooped up cool handfuls of water and splashed his hot, sweaty face.  Dirty water dripped off his chin as he scrubbed, wanting to clean himself up before Jack arrived.   

The bear took Ennis by surprise.  A slight movement to his right and Ennis saw him, not sixty feet away.  Dense shrubs along the riverbank had hidden the animal at first but the bear was clearly visible now as it crashed loudly out of the bushes and rose up instantly on powerful hind legs.  It looked like a youngish male, Ennis thought, very territorial, angry at being disturbed.  The bear stared at him and roared so loudly that Ennis felt the frightening vibration rumble through his chest.  He froze in fear and cursed his stupidity.

Damn fool, thinkin’ on Jack and forgettin’ to bring the 30-30.  Horse’s too far away to reach the gun now.  Can’t outrun this cranky sonofabitch.  Number one rule, Ennis.  Keep the gun with ya at all times.  Ya know it, ya didn’t do it, and now you’re gonna pay for it. 

Still crouching, hardly daring to move, Ennis slowly reached for his hunting knife when the crunch of gravel close behind him stopped his hand. He sighed and closed his eyes for a moment, his head dropping in defeat, sickened by the thought of another bear coming up on his back.  He felt sorry, but not because he was about to die.  He had little fear of death, although he sure as hell didn’t want to go out like this.  No, he was sorry because he knew it would be Jack who found him, or what was left of him, anyway.  He didn’t want Jack to find his remains, but there was no way out now for Ennis.  He prayed it would be over quickly, and steeled himself for what he knew was coming.  It was out of his hands.

And then Jack stepped up from behind him, moving past Ennis and placing himself directly between his friend and the bear, not saying a word.  He had the 30-30 up to his right shoulder, cocked and ready to fire.  Oh, Jesus!   Sweet relief washed over Ennis but he knew the danger wasn’t over yet.  Jack couldn’t hit the side of a barn at sixty feet, much less a bear.  Both boys knew it.  Ennis had been trying to teach Jack to steady his aim, take his time with the shot, but it had been hard going, trying even Ennis’s unfaltering, endless patience.  He wondered for a second whether he might be able to stand up and take the gun from Jack to get the shot off himself.  Too risky, though.  If he moved suddenly and startled the bear, it could easily be on him, or worse, Jack, before Ennis got the gun up and in position to fire.  No, he had to leave it to Jack now and trust in his friend to get them out of this.

And then the bear charged.

Ennis watched the scene unfold like some surreal nightmare in heart-stopping slow motion.  The enraged bear dropped to all fours and rushed at them, snarling mouth open and frothing at the corners as it ran.  It roared again, lower this time, and shining white fangs caught the sunlight and glinted terrifyingly at the boys.  It was a horrible sight.  Jack breathed in, shifted his legs apart, squared his shoulders slightly and fired.  Ennis stood up quickly behind Jack.  If his friend couldn’t bring the massive creature down in time, Ennis would step in front of Jack and take the full force of the animal’s fury when it reached them.

“STAY BACK, Ennis!” Jack shouted, seeming to sense what Ennis was about to do.

Jack stood his ground, not flinching, no backward step, steadfast and courageous as always.  He took a rapid-fire second and third shot at the rampaging bear.  And still it came at them.  Ennis instinctively moved to Jack’s side.  He knew Jack would die trying to save him, but Ennis couldn’t live with that.  He’d take it himself rather than see that happen.  Ennis slid his sturdy hunting knife from its sheath and gripped it tight, knowing in his sinking heart how useless it was against such a beast unless he got one perfect strike in straight up.

The bear was almost on them.

“Steady, Jack!  Between his eyes!  Line him up, follow his movement an’ squeeze gently…remember?” Ennis instructed, his low, calm voice masking the urgent terror gripping his guts.

Jack remembered, and did everything Ennis said.  His steady and accurate fourth shot brought the bear down.  It fell heavily at their feet, its brutal, deadly claws just reaching the hole in the front of Jack’s worn-out old boot.  It took a last shuddering breath and then was still.

The boys stared down at the dead bear and finally remembered to breathe again as the adrenaline coursing through their bodies slowly dissipated.  Ennis’s shaky hand felt for Jack’s trembling one.  They stayed a moment like that, knowing they’d just cheated an awful death, amazed to still be alive.  Then Ennis pulled Jack close, hugged him and they closed their eyes, the thought of almost losing each other too much to take.  Ennis sent up a silent prayer of thanks for having Jack Twist in his life.  His big hands cradled Jack’s face and he rested his forehead on Jack’s, smiling at his friend and nuzzling him, unable to contain himself.  Finally he took a deep breath and found his voice.

“Nice shootin’ there, Tex,” Ennis told him.  “You did real good, Jack.  Real good.”

Jack’s face was white with shock, but his eyes were pained.  “I thought he’d make a meal a you by the time I got down here, Ennis.  Spotted him from the ridge up there and took off like lightnin’, hopin’ you wasn’t here already.”  He shook his head slowly, recalling the jolting fear, reliving it once more.  “Ain’t never felt so worried sick in my whole life,” Jack said, his voice still strained and anxious.  “You in danger like that, Ennis… well, I never wanna see that again.  Jesus!  My heart won’t take it!” he exclaimed, clutching at his chest, having a mock heart attack and collapsing to the ground.

“S’alright now, Jack.  You did it, Rodeo.  I’m fine ‘cos a you, ya big ol’ sharpshootin’ hunter!”  Laughing, Ennis sat down next to Jack and ruffled his dark hair, so much love in such a small gesture.  They sat side by side for a few moments, looking out over the water, not speaking, just thinking… worrying.  A million ‘what-ifs’ ran through their minds.  It was Jack who broke the silence, still gazing out across the rushing waters, not daring to look at his friend as he spoke the words.

“Couldn’t stand to lose you, Ennis…”

“I know, Jack.  Feel the same about you.”  Ennis draped an arm across Jack’s shoulder and hugged him.  “That was mighty brave, what you did for me just now.”  He poked at the bear’s paw with his boot a few times, making sure it wasn’t gonna stage a comeback any time soon.  He turned his head sideways and looked his friend right in the eye as he spoke.

“Thank you, Jack.  I’m sure glad ta have you around.”  He brushed a strand of hair from Jack’s eyes and spoke sincerely, from the heart.  “You’re a good friend and a good man, Jack Twist.”

Jack’s eyes filled with tears.  Nobody ever said kind words like that to him, only his momma, and that didn’t count so much.  Ma had to say those things to him, to make up for all the rotten shit the old man gave him.  Jack’s heart melted for his brown-eyed cowboy.  He swiped at the tears as they trickled down his flushed cheeks, embarrassed to cry in front of Ennis.  He smiled back at Ennis through blurry eyes, glad to still have him around, too, and in one piece.  Ennis leaned over and kissed Jack, a sweet kiss to let him know how much he mattered, then pulled back and raised an enquiring eyebrow.

“How ‘bout that lunch now, Rodeo, huh?  Don’t know ‘bout you but almost dyin’ gives me a fuckin’ appetite!  And food’s one a two things I’m hungry for right now, Jack…” 

   



This is what I'm talking about!  What a lovely New Year's present, Spicey!  Reading this made my day!  Stand By Me is so moving, and exciting as hell.  I don't even know what to say, Spicey!  I hung on every word, amazed at your talent.  Try to come by more often, Love!  I never get enough of your work!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 01, 2008, 09:31:18 pm
HappyNewYear,
to my old pals - Oscar, Marie, Dagi, Susie, Gary and new pal, Cwby30, too!   :D 
May 2008 find all of you happy, healthy and very, very content.

Love always,

Robyn  xxoo






Thanks, Robyn!  Happy New Year to you!  I hope you can spend more time with us here in 2008!  I've missed you!  :)
Title: Re: I Dream of a Happy New year
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 01, 2008, 09:32:05 pm
Ah Littlewing, so sweet, but so sad.  Reminds me of the song I'll be home for Christmas, but only in my dreams.

Gary

Thanks Gary!  Its good to see you here!
Title: Re: Right (61)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 01, 2008, 09:35:57 pm
Hi Toycoon and Littlewing.  I'm wondering where you two are going with this.  Imagining Jack and Ennis moving into that girly apartment in town made me smile.  That's so incongrouous with the rugged cowboy image that Jack and Ennis embraced.  But maybe if they had been freer they would have sometimes been softer and gentler. 

I'm glad the boys are okay, and that they have a place to stay, but poor Mrs. Twist.   :'(

Gary

Thanks for commenting, Gary.  We'll just have to see where the boys end up for the time being.  I can't wait to post chapter 62.
Title: Re: Once Bitten
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 01, 2008, 09:37:16 pm
Beautiful and very sexy story, Littlewing.  And I loved that poem there at the end.  There is something very erotic about a love bite.  MMMM

Gary

Thanks, Gary.  I'm fond of love bites, as well!  ::)
Title: Right (62) by Toycoon
Post by: Toycoon on January 01, 2008, 11:41:21 pm
Right (62) by Toycoon

By the time supper time came around, Roberta Twist was very worried about her Ennis and her son. It was completely out of character for Jack to miss one of his mother's home cooked meals without good reason and Ennis didn't appear to be the type of person that would take off without explaining himself. No, something was clearly wrong. She stirred the large pot containing her 'cowboy' beef stew and absently watched the vegetables spin until they came to a stop.

John Twist walked into the kitchen and sat down at the table without saying a word. The only sound was the creaking of his knees as he bent down to sit at the kitchen table. John had spent the entire day building the framework for the new barn and he was feeling the loss of the two strong, able bodies that were to assist him with this monumental task. He put both elbows on the table between the fork and spoon, let out a heavy sigh and stared straight ahead. Mrs. Twist placed a basket of warm biscuits in the middle of the table in front of him. Next, she took two deep bowls from the cupboard then set them on the table. Finally, she wrapped a towel around the stew pot, lifted it by the handles and slowly carried it to the table where she laid it to rest on a pot metal trivet.

"Smells good," muttered John, under his breath. Roberta silently dunked the ladle in the hearty stew, poured it into John's bowl then repeated the action for herself. A few sanguine drops spattered on the worn linen tablecloth. Roberta put her hands together and bowed her head. She shot John a stern look that commanded he do the same. "Heavenly Father," she began, "bless our meal and our home. Protect our boys where ever they may be and guide them back safely to us, Amen." Her voice cracked at the word "safely" and she kissed her clasped hands.

John took a big mouthful of soup and savored his wife's fine cooking. Roberta swirled the spoon around in her bowl and concentrated on a potato chunk. How could that man possibly enjoy his meal without knowing where his son was? She finally spoke up. "John, what happened last night when you got up and went downstairs?" John looked at her nervously. "Nothin' happened," he lied. He took a biscuit from the basket and inspected it. "Did you say something to Jack or Ennis to make them upset?"
"Me? I didn't say nothin." John tore the biscuit in two and dropped a half in his bowl.
"I seen that Alan Sims feller hangin' around here late last night. He an' Jack was talkin'. Maybe, they went to into the city with him."
"What!?" Mrs. Twist was irritated with her husband now. "John, why didn't you tell me before?" she said, obviously upset. "Didn't remember 'til now. Mother, I'll go into the city tomorrow an' fetch them. Bring 'em back." John Twist really had no idea where Jack and Ennis were or how he was going to find them but he had to tell Roberta something to placate her. Mrs. Twist wasn't sure that she believed John's story but it assuaged her worries for the time being.

Title: Right (63)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 03, 2008, 01:22:00 am
Right (63) By Littlewing1957

Raquel grinned mightily at Ennis.  “What do you say, Cowboy?  You feel like escorting me to the dance?”  Ennis twirled the brim of his hat nervously between his long fingers.  Before he could answer, Katie pulled Raquel’s sleeve and led her over to the rack of scarves, well out of earshot of Ennis and Jack.  Katie whispered something in Raquel’s ear, and Ennis watched as Raquel wrinkled her powdered nose.  They rejoined them after a second, but Raquel didn’t look too happy.  “I think I’ll go with Jack,” Raquel stated unenthusiastically.  Jack lowered his eyes to the ground.  He wasn’t stupid – he knew both women wanted to go to the winter dance with Ennis.  Raquel noticed Jack’s disappointment and didn’t hesitate to offer solace.  “Jack, you aren’t second best,” she began.  “I just thought Katie was going with you, since you guys are old friends, is all.  I would love to have you escort me.”  Jack looked up at Raquel and smiled a bit.  “I understand,” he began.  “I would love to take you to the dance.”  Katie patted Jack on his broad shoulder.  “Well, we got that settled!” she sighed.  Now all we need to do is get you guys outfitted for the festivities.”  Katie winked at Ennis as she saw Raquel to the door.  “I’ll see you later, Rockie,” Katie yelled at her friend as she moved to her car.  “Call me and we’ll go over the plans for the dance.”  Raquel waved to Katie and drove off.

While Katie busied herself with customers, Ennis pulled Jack to the back of the shop so they could finish the sweet rolls in peace.  He also needed to have a few words with his lover about the dance.  Ennis sat down on an overstuffed chair and crossed his legs.  Jack decided to stand, and ate his sweet roll while looking down at Ennis.  “I’m not staying here, Jack,” Ennis stated emphatically.  “I just can’t do it.  And what is this about some dance?”  Jack worked on his roll, and when he had devoured it, sat down on the floor next to Ennis.  He knew he was taking a chance - Katie could walk in at any moment- but he placed his elbows on Ennis knees, and looked into his hazel eyes.  “We only need be here for a little while,” Jack pleaded.  “And the dance?  Well, where’s the harm?  Is it too much to ask us to escort two nice young ladies to a dance?"  Ennis took Jack’s hands and rubbed them.  “But if we go to the dance, people are bound to see us.  Lightning Flat is a small place, Jack.  We show up there and word will get back to your pa.”  Jack turned his head away.  He hadn’t considered this.  “You’re right, Cowboy!” Jack whispered.

Raquel drove down the main road and tapped her fingers on her leather covered steering wheel.  She couldn’t stop thinking about Ennis.  Jack was a looker, no doubt, but Ennis was much more her type.  She always did go for the supremely rugged, fair haired sort.  And Ennis had sort of an aristocratic air about him.  He should look quite fetching in a tuxedo.  Raquel saw the two of them in her minds eye: she in a little black Gucci dress, and Ennis in a black tuxedo with a white scarf.  She would pay for the tuxedo rental.  She already owned the black Gucci dress.  Raquel imagined that Katie and Jack would make a very handsome couple.  Katie would probably wear her lavender Valentino, while Jack would sport a white tux.  What an entrance the four of them would make!  There was only one problem!  Ennis was Katie's date.  But Raquel had a plan. 

Katie wiped her brow and fanned her breast.  She was having a good day, and had already moved a lot of merchandise.  If business continued this way, Katie knew she would have to hire help on a full-time basis.  Right now she employed a high school kid on the weekends, but during the week she was on her own.  Katie moved to close the shop for an hour to prepare Ennis and Jack lunch.  But before she could reach the door, a customer walked in.  Katie blinked when she saw who it was.  “Hello, Mrs. Twist,” Katie sang sweetly.  “What can I do for you?”

Title: Re: Right (62) & (63)
Post by: cwby30 on January 03, 2008, 12:49:28 pm
Mornin'.

Well, out of one frying pan and into another, with Raquel and Katie.  Ennis is right, they can't stay there, they've already spent too much time in town and need to move on away from Jack's dad's radar and old-boy network.  They need to get out on the road, find work doing what they know, and get away from the past for a time while learning to live with each other full time again in the 'real' world down from the Mountain. 

Neat turn of events, with Mrs. Twist showing up at the shop.  Didn't expect that, but then again Katie and Jack knew each other so she may be one of those logical persons for Mrs. Twist to ask about Jack.  And, Mrs. Twist just may like going into that store, seeing things that were not part of her every day life at the Ranch! [Or are they secretly?!  ;) ] Hope she'll find them there and provide some financial backing for the guys to get away. 

You two are a challenge for each other, as well as for us! No telling where this road leads, but I'm along for the journey which is way more than half the fun. 

Thanks again. 
Title: Re: Right (62) & (63)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 04, 2008, 12:20:14 am
Mornin'.

Well, out of one frying pan and into another, with Raquel and Katie.  Ennis is right, they can't stay there, they've already spent too much time in town and need to move on away from Jack's dad's radar and old-boy network.  They need to get out on the road, find work doing what they know, and get away from the past for a time while learning to live with each other full time again in the 'real' world down from the Mountain. 

Neat turn of events, with Mrs. Twist showing up at the shop.  Didn't expect that, but then again Katie and Jack knew each other so she may be one of those logical persons for Mrs. Twist to ask about Jack.  And, Mrs. Twist just may like going into that store, seeing things that were not part of her every day life at the Ranch! [Or are they secretly?!  ;) ] Hope she'll find them there and provide some financial backing for the guys to get away. 

You two are a challenge for each other, as well as for us! No telling where this road leads, but I'm along for the journey which is way more than half the fun. 

Thanks again. 

wby30, thanks for your encouragement, and your great ideas.  Thanks for hanging in here with us!  :)
Title: Ennis and Jack Forever
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 04, 2008, 12:28:31 am
Ennis and Jack Forever By Littlewing1957

When my days are long
And my nights are still,
When I'm frozen by sadness
And the winter's chill,
When my tears are so heavy
That I cannot see,
When my mind is numb
From the monotomy -
This is when you come to me!

You take my hand,
You caress my cheek!
You make me strong,
You leave me weak!
You hold me captive
In your sight,
You make love to me
In a tent at night.

Jack, there is no
such thing as death!
You may be gone,
But you never left!

Ennis and Jack Ennis and Jack Ennis and Jack Ennis and Jack Ennis and Jack Ennis and Jack Ennis and Jack Ennis and Jack Ennis and Jack
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on January 04, 2008, 03:55:52 am
I hope I get some time tonight to read all the new installments. Thanks so much for writing! I´ll be back to reading soon!

Love,
Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 04, 2008, 12:49:34 pm
I hope I get some time tonight to read all the new installments. Thanks so much for writing! I´ll be back to reading soon!

Love,
Dagi

Good to see you, Dagi!  I've missed you!  :-*
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on January 05, 2008, 04:18:27 pm
Where's this going, Toycoon and Littlewing? Hope the girls don't end up hurt, and of course I hope our boys don't either. Toycoon, I loved how you made Roberta call Ennis "her Ennis". That's so much like Roberta.

Marie, I love this poem. I love all of your poems. Thanks so much for being so good to us. And I hope you soon recover fully from your accident.

Love,
Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 05, 2008, 08:39:31 pm
Where's this going, Toycoon and Littlewing? Hope the girls don't end up hurt, and of course I hope our boys don't either. Toycoon, I loved how you made Roberta call Ennis "her Ennis". That's so much like Roberta.

Marie, I love this poem. I love all of your poems. Thanks so much for being so good to us. And I hope you soon recover fully from your accident.

Love,
Dagi

Thanks, Dagi.  We'll just have to see where the story leads.  I don't know at this point, but most of the fun is in the journey.  I should be writing more poems and stories.  Stay tuned!  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on January 06, 2008, 01:40:41 pm
Oh, yes please, more poems! I love them!
Title: Re: I Dream of a Happy New year
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 06, 2008, 08:25:47 pm
:'( :'( :'(  Ah this is so sad littlewing ... still, they'll always be together in their dreams.

Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif) 

Well, howdy stranger!  :)  SusieBaby, it's so good to see you here!  I've missed you so much!  :-*
Title: Re: Once Bitten
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 06, 2008, 08:26:48 pm
Very sensual littlewing, and such a beautiful poem ... thank you  :-*

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif) 


Thank you Susiebaby!
Title: Not so New Year
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 06, 2008, 08:54:44 pm
Not so New Year By Littlewing1957

“A new year and I'm no closer to you!”  Jack spoke out loud as he sat at his desk.  He hadn’t completed a sale in over 2 weeks, but he could deal with the slow business period: the slump in sales.  Being separated from Ennis Del Mar is what ate at him. 

The last time Jack saw Ennis was in October, not so long ago.  They spent 10 glorious days up at Don Wroe’s cabin doing nothing but sleeping, hunting, loving.  They spoke of their separate and uneasy lives; talked about children and their lovely wives.  It was a sweet time, but much too short.

“You really need to do better, Jack!” It was Lureen.  She wasn’t angry, or accusatory, but Jack resented being told to work harder.  He was doing his best!  It was not his fault that business was slow.  “Don’t worry, dear,” Jack began. “Business will pick up.  We’ll be okay.”  Lureen nodded and walked out of his office.  “If only I could say those words to Ennis!” Jack thought as he prepared to leave for the day.  He was depressed.  He really wanted to talk to someone, but there was no one to confide in.  A bottle of whiskey was waiting for him under his side of the bed at home.  Jack Daniels was a good listener.
Title: Re: I Dream of a Happy New year
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 06, 2008, 08:57:30 pm
Thank you for missing me littlewing honey!  :-*

I've got so much catching up to do, it's all a little overwhelming  :-\  and I'm feeling a little down now because Christmas is over and pretty soon everyone will be back at school/work.  (my lounge lookes so bare without the tree twinkling away in the corner   :'()

I'll try and get caught up over the next few days ... although I realise now that I was getting too addicted to the site, signing on several times a day, spending hours here at night, so I've got to take a little step back ... for the sake of my sanity!!

Lovely to see you again littlewing  :-*  I've missed you guys too.

Love Susie  :)

Thanks, Susie!  I know what you mean about missing Christmas.  I always feel so depressed at the end of the holidays!  I hate when things return to normal, when it is business as usual.

I guess it's good to scale back a bit.  I'm not here as much as I once was, but I can't stay away for very long.  I miss you guys too much!   :)
Title: Re: I Dream of a Happy New year
Post by: Toycoon on January 07, 2008, 12:16:12 am
Quote
I'm feeling a little down now because Christmas is over and pretty soon everyone will be back at school/work.  (my lounge looks so bare without the tree twinkling away in the corner

I'm having the same trouble, Post Holiday Christmas Tree Separation Anxiety! I'm so sad.  :'(
Title: Re: I Dream of a Happy New year
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 07, 2008, 01:20:49 am
I'm having the same trouble, Post Holiday Christmas Tree Separation Anxiety! I'm so sad.  :'(

It's hard isn't it, Babe?  I wish I could rewind the entire last 2 months!
Title: Right (64) by Toycoon
Post by: Toycoon on January 07, 2008, 10:48:55 am
Right (64) by Toycoon

Raquel hailed from the tiny neighboring town of Casper, Wyoming. She grew up in a modest three room, shotgun house with a small farm attached. Her daddy was killed in a tractor accident when Raquel was only twelve years old leaving her mother alone to raise Raquel and her five younger siblings. The death of her father threatened the likelihood of Raquel completing her education so at the age of thirteen, Raquel got a job at Hanson's dry cleaners, working every day after school in order to help ends meet at home. Despite it's shortcomings, the Baxter home was a comfortable one although somewhat crowded; Raquel's mother always made certain that the children had everything they needed but with that many kids, there never seemed to be enough to go around. Raquel continued to attend high school and graduated with an 'B' average then went to junior college for two years, finally landing a job as a secretary for Cook County's local real estate attorneys. She'd worked her way up through the ranks to become head secretary, saving her money, determined to make something of herself and get the hell out of Lightning Flat.

When she wanted a brand new '63 Buick, she set her goal then went full throttle after it and never stopped until she earned enough money for the car of her dreams. It felt good to drive her beautiful blue Buick down that dusty road in the middle of nowhere. Now, Raquel wanted the handsome, mysterious cowboy, Ennis and would not settle for anything less. Yes, she was a woman with a plan.

"Mrs. Twist, what a lovely surprise, I wasn't expecting you until next week," declared Katie, taking Mrs. Twist by the arm and leading her over to the lingerie counter. "I'll fetch the panty girdle you ordered last week right away." Roberta took her pocketbook off her shoulder and dug her hand under the flap.  "Mr. Twist was going into the city for a bit and he dropped me off out front. I thought I'd go visit with your mama after I was done here then get a ride home later on, if she didn't mind."
"Oh, she won't mind a bit." Katie looked directly into Mrs. Twist's eyes, remembering that her son and his friend were in the back apartment, suddenly declared, "Listen, I can give you a ride home after the shop closes. Just come back around six-thirty and I'll take you back to the ranch."

Ennis walked out of the apartment and down the back steps. He pulled a cigarette from his coat pocket, put in his mouth and struck the match on the wall.  He took a long drag off the cigarette and squinted to look at Jack, who was slightly obscured by the smoke. Ennis studied Jack's face for several moments before speaking. Just one look into those baby blues could make Ennis melt. "I got a bad feeling 'bout this, Jack, you unnerstand, huh?"

"Yeah, I do." Sadly, Jack turned around and started up the steps. He knew he had to tell Katie that he and Ennis couldn't stay.
Jack shuffled into the front of the shop. He stopped short when he came face to face with his mother. "Ma!? What are you doin' here?" He flew to her and embraced her mightily. "Jack!" Mrs. Twist began to weep, "I thought you went into the city. Your father said..." Jack looked confused. "Momma, me an' Ennis just went into town to visit... Katie." He glanced over to Katie who was beaming with a big smile on her face. "Honey, where is Ennis?"
"He's out back, I'll go get him. He'll be happy to see ya." Jack squeezed her shoulders then kissed her face. He ran into the rear of the shop, through the apartment, out the back door and down the steps. He looked around and called out for Ennis. "Ennis, where you at!?" Jack ran back into the apartment. He noticed the brown paper sack with all of Ennis' few belongings was not on the dresser where it had been just a few minutes before. Jack dashed back into Katie's shop, panting and gasped, "Ennis is gone! Ennis is gone!"
Title: Re: Not so New Year
Post by: Dagi on January 07, 2008, 03:36:10 pm
Not so New Year By Littlewing1957

“A new year and I'm no closer to you!”  Jack spoke out loud as he sat at his desk.  He hadn’t completed a sale in over 2 weeks, but he could deal with the slow business period: the slump in sales.  Being separated from Ennis Del Mar is what ate at him. 

The last time Jack saw Ennis was in October, not so long ago.  They spent 10 glorious days up at Don Wroe’s cabin doing nothing but sleeping, hunting, loving.  They spoke of their separate and uneasy lives; talked about children and their lovely wives.  It was a sweet time, but much too short.

“You really need to do better, Jack!” It was Lureen.  She wasn’t angry, or accusatory, but Jack resented being told to work harder.  He was doing his best!  It was not his fault that business was slow.  “Don’t worry, dear,” Jack began. “Business will pick up.  We’ll be okay.”  Lureen nodded and walked out of his office.  “If only I could say those words to Ennis!” Jack thought as he prepared to leave for the day.  He was depressed.  He really wanted to talk to someone, but there was no one to confide in.  A bottle of whiskey was waiting for him under his side of the bed at home.  Jack Daniels was a good listener.


It´s heartbreaking how you always convey so honestly what life for both of them consisted of most of the time: being separated.  :'(
Title: Re: Not so New Year
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 08, 2008, 01:22:19 am
It´s heartbreaking how you always convey so honestly what life for both of them consisted of most of the time: being separated.  :'(

Thanks, Dagi.  With every smile there must be a tear.  Especially so with Ennis and Jack!  :'(
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 09, 2008, 02:31:30 am
Hello, everyone!  I'll post the next installment of Right, probably tomorrow.  I'll also try to post other stories.  Bear with me.  I have post-holiday blues and back-to-school issues to deal with.

I want to thank you all for your encouragement and support.  I love each and every one of you!  :)
Title: Re: Right (64) by Toycoon
Post by: Dagi on January 09, 2008, 06:16:42 am
Right (64) by Toycoon

Raquel hailed from the tiny neighboring town of Casper, Wyoming. She grew up in a modest three room, shotgun house with a small farm attached. Her daddy was killed in a tractor accident when Raquel was only twelve years old leaving her mother alone to raise Raquel and her five younger siblings. The death of her father threatened the likelihood of Raquel completing her education so at the age of thirteen, Raquel got a job at Hanson's dry cleaners, working every day after school in order to help ends meet at home. Despite it's shortcomings, the Baxter home was a comfortable one although somewhat crowded; Raquel's mother always made certain that the children had everything they needed but with that many kids, there never seemed to be enough to go around. Raquel continued to attend high school and graduated with an 'B' average then went to junior college for two years, finally landing a job as a secretary for Cook County's local real estate attorneys. She'd worked her way up through the ranks to become head secretary, saving her money, determined to make something of herself and get the hell out of Lightning Flat.

When she wanted a brand new '63 Buick, she set her goal then went full throttle after it and never stopped until she earned enough money for the car of her dreams. It felt good to drive her beautiful blue Buick down that dusty road in the middle of nowhere. Now, Raquel wanted the handsome, mysterious cowboy, Ennis and would not settle for anything less. Yes, she was a woman with a plan.

"Mrs. Twist, what a lovely surprise, I wasn't expecting you until next week," declared Katie, taking Mrs. Twist by the arm and leading her over to the lingerie counter. "I'll fetch the panty girdle you ordered last week right away." Roberta took her pocketbook off her shoulder and dug her hand under the flap.  "Mr. Twist was going into the city for a bit and he dropped me off out front. I thought I'd go visit with your mama after I was done here then get a ride home later on, if she didn't mind."
"Oh, she won't mind a bit." Katie looked directly into Mrs. Twist's eyes, remembering that her son and his friend were in the back apartment, suddenly declared, "Listen, I can give you a ride home after the shop closes. Just come back around six-thirty and I'll take you back to the ranch."

Ennis walked out of the apartment and down the back steps. He pulled a cigarette from his coat pocket, put in his mouth and struck the match on the wall.  He took a long drag off the cigarette and squinted to look at Jack, who was slightly obscured by the smoke. Ennis studied Jack's face for several moments before speaking. Just one look into those baby blues could make Ennis melt. "I got a bad feeling 'bout this, Jack, you unnerstand, huh?"

"Yeah, I do." Sadly, Jack turned around and started up the steps. He knew he had to tell Katie that he and Ennis couldn't stay.
Jack shuffled into the front of the shop. He stopped short when he came face to face with his mother. "Ma!? What are you doin' here?" He flew to her and embraced her mightily. "Jack!" Mrs. Twist began to weep, "I thought you went into the city. Your father said..." Jack looked confused. "Momma, me an' Ennis just went into town to visit... Katie." He glanced over to Katie who was beaming with a big smile on her face. "Honey, where is Ennis?"
"He's out back, I'll go get him. He'll be happy to see ya." Jack squeezed her shoulders then kissed her face. He ran into the rear of the shop, through the apartment, out the back door and down the steps. He looked around and called out for Ennis. "Ennis, where you at!?" Jack ran back into the apartment. He noticed the brown paper sack with all of Ennis' few belongings was not on the dresser where it had been just a few minutes before. Jack dashed back into Katie's shop, panting and gasped, "Ennis is gone! Ennis is gone!"



Hi Toycoon,

sorry for not commenting earlier, I've been sick again and just didn't have the brains to read your last installment all the way through. Hey, I must really say I'm marvelled by your writing. I love the way you tow develop this story together. And just thinking of Jack's baby blues makes me melt...thank you, honey!  :-*

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on January 09, 2008, 06:20:14 am
Hello, everyone!  I'll post the next installment of Right, probably tomorrow.  I'll also try to post other stories.  Bear with me.  I have post-holiday blues and back-to-school issues to deal with.

I want to thank you all for your encouragement and support.  I love each and every one of you!  :)

Hey sweetie, take your time. I don't have post-holiday blues, but post-holiday tonsillitis (after having had ante-holiday tonsillitis  :laugh:), so we can be miserable together. I'm thinking of you and send you lots of love!  :-*

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on January 09, 2008, 11:31:06 am
Hey kids,
I'm sorry to hear that everyone has various illnesses including Post-Holiday Depression, Tonsillitis, The Flu or Good Old Fashioned General Stress. I hope everyone recuperates soon enough.
Love,
Toycoon

One of these days, I'm gonna create another BetterMost Craft project for y'all. I've been crazy busy lately and I can't seem to bring myself to do work more after working all day!

P.S. I'm digging the maleimagegallery. Thanks girls, for bringing it to my attention!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on January 09, 2008, 01:32:58 pm
Hey kids,
I'm sorry to hear that everyone has various illnesses including Post-Holiday Depression, Tonsillitis, The Flu or Good Old Fashioned General Stress. I hope everyone recuperates soon enough.
Love,
Toycoon

One of these days, I'm gonna create another BetterMost Craft project for y'all. I've been crazy busy lately and I can't seem to bring myself to do work more after working all day!

P.S. I'm digging the maleimagegallery. Thanks girls, for bringing it to my attention!

You are very welcome.  ;D
Title: Right 65 by Littlewing1957
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 10, 2008, 01:02:08 am
Right 65 By Littlewing1957

“Relax, sweetie,” Mrs. Twist soothed as she grabbed hold of Jack’s forearm.  She learned from her earlier worrying spell when she thought Jack and Ennis has disappeared.  There was just no need to get all worked up, especially when things always worked out.  “You say you guys were out in the back just awhile ago?”  Jack nodded.  Mrs. Twist tightened her grip on Jack’s forearm, as he was shaking.  “Easy, son,” She began.  “Why don’t you go on out back and look for your friend. I’m sure he just stepped away for a bit…probably looking around..real curious like!”  Yeah, stepped away, carrying all his stuff with him! Jack thought, ruefully.  But in order to satisfy his mother and himself, Jack agreed to look around out back for Ennis.  “I’ll be back in a bit,” Jack whispered to his mom.  He nodded politely to Katie and headed to the back of the shop.  “I should go with him?” Katie asked Mrs. Twist.  “No, please,” Mrs. Twist answered.  She took Katie’s hand and held it tight. “Let him go on.  He can handle this!”

Jack moved quickly through Katie’s apartment.  He averted his eyes.  He didn’t want to see the place that he almost shared with his good friend.  When Jack reached the back door he flung it open and moved outside.  The only sign that Ennis had been there at all was the burned out match that he lit earlier.  It was still on the ground and looked insignificant and lonesome among the yellow leaves, small rocks.  Jack knelt down and picked up the used match from the near frozen earth.  He turned it over in nervous fingers and examined the burned out tip.  “Ennis, how could you leave without me?”  Jack rose to a standing position and felt weak as he experienced every emotion starting with anger and progressing to shock, ending with loneliness.  He placed the used match carefully in his jacket pocket and took a cursory glance around the grounds.  “If this is the way you want it, cowboy..” Jack mumbled.  He shook his head and walked back into the shop.

Mrs. Twist and Katie were talking, were very deep in conversation when Jack walked into the store.  The two women stopped abruptly and faced Jack with expectant looks on their faces.   “Well?”  It was Mrs. Twist.  “I didn’t find him.  He’s gone.”  Jack stated without emotion.  Mrs. Twist held her breath.  Katie sucked her teeth.  “Well,” Mrs. Twist began, “It looks like Ennis has some things to work out on his own.  I’m sure he’ll return.”  Jack nodded, but he wasn’t so sure.  “I had plans for the rest of the afternoon, but in light of what has just happened, I think we better go home.” Mrs. Twist moved closer to her son. “I’ll serve you some of that pot roast I cooked earlier.  What you say, son?”  Jack didn’t want to go back to the ranch.  He didn’t know what he wanted at that point.  But he didn’t have a lot of options.  “Okay mom, I’ll go home with you.  Just let me have a few minutes with Katie in private, and then we’ll catch a cab home.”  Mrs. Twist nodded and headed for the door.  “There is a cab always parked over by the donut shop, ma.  Go have one wait for us.”  Mrs. Twist smiled and walked out.  Katie moved to her desk at the back of the store and pretended to read over a few receipts.  She was devastated that Ennis had run off without a word to anyone.  And now Jack was about to take his leave!  Katie was warming up to the idea of having two gorgeous men around.  And what would she tell Raquel?  Jack approached Katie’s desk and glared down at her with an expression that was impossible to read.  “Katie, I..” Jack began, but she cut him off.  "Its okay, Jack,” she spoke sincerely. “I understand.”  Jack hung his head and was silent. “Look, if you ever need to use my little apartment, don’t hesitate to ask.  And if Ennis comes back here, I’ll get word to you.” “Thank you kindly,” was all that Jack could manage.  Katie looked up into Jack’s baby blues. “You’ll let me know when and if he comes back?” Jack nodded mournfully and headed for the door. “Will do, Katie!  Thanks for everything!” “No problemo!” She offered. “See you in church.”  Jack tried on a smile for her sake and left the shop.

He found his mom seated in a cab right in front of the shop.  Jack climbed in beside her and the cabbie drove off.  Jack looked at his mom as she sat stiff, looking suddenly older than her years.  Jack felt a tug of tenderness when he observed his mother.  He hated to see his mom with a worried face and a rigid demeanor.  Jack reached over and took his mother’s hand and they rode in silence for the most part.  Jack couldn’t wrap his mind around what just happened.  He shook his head to keep out the thoughts and images that threatened to intrude: sweet mental pictures of Ennis walking across a stream; Ennis laughing at one of his bad jokes; Ennis pulling him close.  Jack couldn’t avoid the image of Ennis asleep on his living room couch, just a few days ago.  He remembered romance, passion, even love.  Jack knew he had to pull himself together, but he feared he was coming apart.  When the cabbie pulled up to the house, Jack paid him and helped his mother onto the property.  Jack allowed her to take his arm, but when they were in view of the basement steps, Jack felt like his knees would buckle.  Mrs. Twist looked at her son and saw the tears in his eyes.  She spread her arms wide and folded her son in.  They must have looked a sight: the two of them there, swaying; Mrs. Twist patting, cooing, as silent tears ran down Jack’s miserable face.  As Mrs. Twist held her son, and as the tears continued to fall, she decided to do what she always did in situations like these – Mrs. Twist began to pray.  She rocked Jack back and forth, all the while asking God to strengthen them both.  She prayed silently, as her entreaties couldn’t be uttered.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 10, 2008, 01:25:00 am
Hey sweetie, take your time. I don't have post-holiday blues, but post-holiday tonsillitis (after having had ante-holiday tonsillitis  :laugh:), so we can be miserable together. I'm thinking of you and send you lots of love!  :-*

Dagi

Aw Dagi, Im sorry to hear you've been ill.  Tonsilitis is no fun.  Feel better, my love!  I hope we all feel better very soon!  :-*
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 10, 2008, 01:25:39 am
Hey kids,
I'm sorry to hear that everyone has various illnesses including Post-Holiday Depression, Tonsillitis, The Flu or Good Old Fashioned General Stress. I hope everyone recuperates soon enough.
Love,
Toycoon

One of these days, I'm gonna create another BetterMost Craft project for y'all. I've been crazy busy lately and I can't seem to bring myself to do work more after working all day!

P.S. I'm digging the maleimagegallery. Thanks girls, for bringing it to my attention!

Thanks, Toycoon!  A new craft project sounds heavenly!
Title: Re: Right (65)
Post by: cwby30 on January 10, 2008, 03:11:22 am
Evenin', littlewing.

Well, damn sad for Jack, Ennis taking off without saying a word.   :'(  Not like him, not after he's come so far to find Jack.  Think something happened, like Raquel, who won't take no for an answer.  Liked how Jack picked up the match that Ennis had used, and saved it.  Hope his Mom's prayers are answered, they need each other. 

But, now what??!!

Thanks again.
Title: Re: Right 65 by Littlewing1957
Post by: Dagi on January 10, 2008, 05:05:50 am
Right 65 By Littlewing1957

“Relax, sweetie,” Mrs. Twist soothed as she grabbed hold of Jack’s forearm.  She learned from her earlier worrying spell when she thought Jack and Ennis has disappeared.  There was just no need to get all worked up, especially when things always worked out.  “You say you guys were out in the back just awhile ago?”  Jack nodded.  Mrs. Twist tightened her grip on Jack’s forearm, as he was shaking.  “Easy, son,” She began.  “Why don’t you go on out back and look for your friend. I’m sure he just stepped away for a bit…probably looking around..real curious like!”  Yeah, stepped away, carrying all his stuff with him! Jack thought, ruefully.  But in order to satisfy his mother and himself, Jack agreed to look around out back for Ennis.  “I’ll be back in a bit,” Jack whispered to his mom.  He nodded politely to Katie and headed to the back of the shop.  “I should go with him?” Katie asked Mrs. Twist.  “No, please,” Mrs. Twist answered.  She took Katie’s hand and held it tight. “Let him go on.  He can handle this!”

Jack moved quickly through Katie’s apartment.  He averted his eyes.  He didn’t want to see the place that he almost shared with his good friend.  When Jack reached the back door he flung it open and moved outside.  The only sign that Ennis had been there at all was the burned out match that he lit earlier.  It was still on the ground and looked insignificant and lonesome among the yellow leaves, small rocks.  Jack knelt down and picked up the used match from the near frozen earth.  He turned it over in nervous fingers and examined the burned out tip.  “Ennis, how could you leave without me?”  Jack rose to a standing position and felt weak as he experienced every emotion starting with anger and progressing to shock, ending with loneliness.  He placed the used match carefully in his jacket pocket and took a cursory glance around the grounds.  “If this is the way you want it, cowboy..” Jack mumbled.  He shook his head and walked back into the shop.

Mrs. Twist and Katie were talking, were very deep in conversation when Jack walked into the store.  The two women stopped abruptly and faced Jack with expectant looks on their faces.   “Well?”  It was Mrs. Twist.  “I didn’t find him.  He’s gone.”  Jack stated without emotion.  Mrs. Twist held her breath.  Katie sucked her teeth.  “Well,” Mrs. Twist began, “It looks like Ennis has some things to work out on his own.  I’m sure he’ll return.”  Jack nodded, but he wasn’t so sure.  “I had plans for the rest of the afternoon, but in light of what has just happened, I think we better go home.” Mrs. Twist moved closer to her son. “I’ll serve you some of that pot roast I cooked earlier.  What you say, son?”  Jack didn’t want to go back to the ranch.  He didn’t know what he wanted at that point.  But he didn’t have a lot of options.  “Okay mom, I’ll go home with you.  Just let me have a few minutes with Katie in private, and then we’ll catch a cab home.”  Mrs. Twist nodded and headed for the door.  “There is a cab always parked over by the donut shop, ma.  Go have one wait for us.”  Mrs. Twist smiled and walked out.  Katie moved to her desk at the back of the store and pretended to read over a few receipts.  She was devastated that Ennis had run off without a word to anyone.  And now Jack was about to take his leave!  Katie was warming up to the idea of having two gorgeous men around.  And what would she tell Raquel?  Jack approached Katie’s desk and glared down at her with an expression that was impossible to read.  “Katie, I..” Jack began, but she cut him off.  "Its okay, Jack,” she spoke sincerely. “I understand.”  Jack hung his head and was silent. “Look, if you ever need to use my little apartment, don’t hesitate to ask.  And if Ennis comes back here, I’ll get word to you.” “Thank you kindly,” was all that Jack could manage.  Katie looked up into Jack’s baby blues. “You’ll let me know when and if he comes back?” Jack nodded mournfully and headed for the door. “Will do, Katie!  Thanks for everything!” “No problemo!” She offered. “See you in church.”  Jack tried on a smile for her sake and left the shop.

He found his mom seated in a cab right in front of the shop.  Jack climbed in beside her and the cabbie drove off.  Jack looked at his mom as she sat stiff, looking suddenly older than her years.  Jack felt a tug of tenderness when he observed his mother.  He hated to see his mom with a worried face and a rigid demeanor.  Jack reached over and took his mother’s hand and they rode in silence for the most part.  Jack couldn’t wrap his mind around what just happened.  He shook his head to keep out the thoughts and images that threatened to intrude: sweet mental pictures of Ennis walking across a stream; Ennis laughing at one of his bad jokes; Ennis pulling him close.  Jack couldn’t avoid the image of Ennis asleep on his living room couch, just a few days ago.  He remembered romance, passion, even love.  Jack knew he had to pull himself together, but he feared he was coming apart.  When the cabbie pulled up to the house, Jack paid him and helped his mother onto the property.  Jack allowed her to take his arm, but when they were in view of the basement steps, Jack felt like his knees would buckle.  Mrs. Twist looked at her son and saw the tears in his eyes.  She spread her arms wide and folded her son in.  They must have looked a sight: the two of them there, swaying; Mrs. Twist patting, cooing, as silent tears ran down Jack’s miserable face.  As Mrs. Twist held her son, and as the tears continued to fall, she decided to do what she always did in situations like these – Mrs. Twist began to pray.  She rocked Jack back and forth, all the while asking God to strengthen them both.  She prayed silently, as her entreaties couldn’t be uttered.


You have a talent for making me sad, Marie.  :'(  You write so beautifully, thank goodness Jack has his mother, and Roberta has her son, so they can hold each other.

I hope you are feeling better, baby. I think of you. Thanks so much for writing!

Love,
Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on January 10, 2008, 05:06:50 am
Thanks, Toycoon!  A new craft project sounds heavenly!

 :D :D :D
Title: Re: Right 65 by Littlewing1957
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 11, 2008, 12:04:49 am
You have a talent for making me sad, Marie.  :'(  You write so beautifully, thank goodness Jack has his mother, and Roberta has her son, so they can hold each other.

I hope you are feeling better, baby. I think of you. Thanks so much for writing!

Love,
Dagi

Thanks, Dagi!  :)
Title: Re: Right (65)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 11, 2008, 12:06:40 am
Evenin', littlewing.

Well, damn sad for Jack, Ennis taking off without saying a word.   :'(  Not like him, not after he's come so far to find Jack.  Think something happened, like Raquel, who won't take no for an answer.  Liked how Jack picked up the match that Ennis had used, and saved it.  Hope his Mom's prayers are answered, they need each other. 

But, now what??!!

Thanks again.

Hey, there!  Thanks for your kind words.  I'm so glad to see you here!  Stay tuned for the next installment.  I have a feeling we're in store for a few surprises!
Title: Closure?
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 11, 2008, 12:31:56 am
Closure? By Littlewing1957

Lureen hung up the phone and sat down on her expensive couch.  She just told Ennis Del Mar about the “accident,” and was exhausted from the effort.  Lureen held a newly manicured finger up to her painted eyes, looking for imperfections.  She loved her red nails.  Examining them was a way to calm herself.

Ennis said they was good friends, and that they was herding sheep up on Brokeback in ’63.  Lureen rubbed a well tended cuticle.  Jack never mentioned a job up on Brokeback Mountain, wherever the hell that may be.  And he certainly never talked about Ennis being such an old friend.  She refused to allow her mind to entertain such rude thoughts.  Jack was gone now.  Best to let him rest in peace.

Lureen looked at the phone as though it was radiating heat.  She needed desperately to talk to someone, but couldn’t think of any one who would understand.  She didn’t quite understand what had happened to her life.  The task of boxing up Jack’s things still loomed.  She couldn’t bring herself to begin the job, and wouldn’t let anyone else near his stuff.  But Ennis’ call jarred something within her.  Tomorrow she would remove all trace of Jack Twist from her life.  She hoped Ennis could give her husband the peace he deserved.  She hoped he could rest for eternity, up on Brokeback Mountain.
Title: Re: Right 65 by Littlewing1957
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 12, 2008, 02:48:15 am
Hi there Littlewing and Toycoon.  I just finished reading your last four chapters.  You two are really building the suspense.  Where is Ennis?  Why would he leave without Jack?  I can't wait to find out.  And I sure hope they get back together in the end.

Gary

Hey, Gary!  I, too, can't wait to see what happens next!  :)
Title: Re: Ennis and Jack Forever
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 12, 2008, 02:49:12 am
Beautiful poem, Littlewing.  And such a lovely thought, Jack and Ennis together forever.

Gary

Thanks, Gary.  I'm felling rather inspired to write "verse."  I promised Dagi poetry, and I plan to deliver. 
Title: Re: Closure?
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 12, 2008, 02:52:25 am
Hi Littlewing.  I've been following the topic of the week thread, which asks people to give their opinions about Jack's death.  I've always been surprised when people say they think Lureen wasn't being honest on the phone with Ennis, or that she had something to do with his death.  I always got the impression that she was passing on a story that she assumed was true.  (Whether it is true or not is another matter.)  And it seemed to me that during the conversation she realizes certain things.  I think that something Ennis said helped her to figure out that Jack and Ennis were lovers.  Her demeanor certainly did change over the course of that phone conversation.  Something was going on inside her head.

Gary

I agree with everything you just said about Lureen.  To her credit, she was rather nice to Ennis, even after she began to realize that he and Jack were lovers.  I didn't expect that!
Title: Right 66 by Toycoon
Post by: Toycoon on January 12, 2008, 05:35:18 am
Right 66 by Toycoon

As difficult as it was for Ennis to believe, he was back where he had been only a few weeks ago: aimless, alone and adrift. He was carrying the same paper sack with both of his shirts, his trousers and his toothbrush. Ennis really thought things were changing for the better. It seemed as though for the first time Ennis had found happiness and now it was gone as mysteriously as it had appeared. The walk back to the main road out of Lightning Flat was a long one but at least it provided Ennis with plenty of time to think about what he might do next.

Ennis stood by the road with his thumb stretched out in hopes that someone would come along and offer him a ride some where, anywhere. A few cars past him but none stopped. Ennis squinted to watch at the setting sun on the horizon, then began to walk in that direction. Maybe he could reach the next town by dusk. The cool winter wind kicked up suddenly and Ennis crossed his arms around his jacket. The feel of the wool on the sleeves was unfamiliar and Ennis remembered he was wearing the coat Jack had lent him the night before. Jack. How could Ennis have run out on Jack. He never wanted to hurt Jack but it seemed that all Ennis had done since he came to town, was to make Jack's life more complicated. He'd angered Jack's father and disrupted the entire Twist household in matter of a few days. "No wonder my sister an' brother didn't want me livin' with them," he thought sadly. He blinked back tears and wiped his eyes with the sleeve of his coat.

A light blue newer model car passed Ennis, slowed down then stopped a few yards up the road. The driver gestured to him and called out. Ennis cautiously approached the vehicle. "Ennis? Is that you?" It was Raquel, Katie's girlfriend from the shop. "I thought that was you!" she twittered. "What are you doing out here all by yourself? I was on my way home from work, you need a lift some where?" Ennis didn't know what to say. "Me? Uh, I was.. umm.."
Raquel eyed Ennis up and down. "Hop in, cowboy, I'll take you anywhere you wanna go."
Title: Re: Right 66
Post by: cwby30 on January 12, 2008, 02:28:41 pm
Mornin'.

Well, dammit, Ennis is being himself, never talking to Jack about how he really feels, and then taking off without saying anything feeling lost and alone.  Dummy!!  Jack willingly gave up his so-called life on the Ranch to be with Ennis, and now Ennis leaves him adrift.  So frustrating!

Raquel, thought she'd turn up.  Hope Ennis figures her out quick, and gets back on track.  The guys should be on the road together, heading out together, trying to make a go of it together, not like this.  "Get thee hither," Ennis!

Thanks again.
Title: Re: Right 66 by Toycoon
Post by: Toycoon on January 12, 2008, 03:06:03 pm
Hi Toycoon.  That Ennis, what a big dummy.  He had better let Raquel take him back to Jack or I'll jerk a knot in his tail.


Hee hee! You're funny, Gary!
Title: Re: Right 66 by Toycoon
Post by: Dagi on January 12, 2008, 03:10:54 pm
Right 66 by Toycoon

As difficult as it was for Ennis to believe, he was back where he had been only a few weeks ago: aimless, alone and adrift. He was carrying the same paper sack with both of his shirts, his trousers and his toothbrush. Ennis really thought things were changing for the better. It seemed as though for the first time Ennis had found happiness and now it was gone as mysteriously as it had appeared. The walk back to the main road out of Lightning Flat was a long one but at least it provided Ennis with plenty of time to think about what he might do next.

Ennis stood by the road with his thumb stretched out in hopes that someone would come along and offer him a ride some where, anywhere. A few cars past him but none stopped. Ennis squinted to watch at the setting sun on the horizon, then began to walk in that direction. Maybe he could reach the next town by dusk. The cool winter wind kicked up suddenly and Ennis crossed his arms around his jacket. The feel of the wool on the sleeves was unfamiliar and Ennis remembered he was wearing the coat Jack had lent him the night before. Jack. How could Ennis have run out on Jack. He never wanted to hurt Jack but it seemed that all Ennis had done since he came to town, was to make Jack's life more complicated. He'd angered Jack's father and disrupted the entire Twist household in matter of a few days. "No wonder my sister an' brother didn't want me livin' with them," he thought sadly. He blinked back tears and wiped his eyes with the sleeve of his coat.

A light blue newer model car passed Ennis, slowed down then stopped a few yards up the road. The driver gestured to him and called out. Ennis cautiously approached the vehicle. "Ennis? Is that you?" It was Raquel, Katie's girlfriend from the shop. "I thought that was you!" she twittered. "What are you doing out here all by yourself? I was on my way home from work, you need a lift some where?" Ennis didn't know what to say. "Me? Uh, I was.. umm.."
Raquel eyed Ennis up and down. "Hop in, cowboy, I'll take you anywhere you wanna go."

Oh Raquel, God bless you for showing up at the right time at the right place! What were you thinking Ennis, that running away would make Jack's life any better? Thanks for continuing, guys and girls!

Dagi
Title: Re: Right 66
Post by: Toycoon on January 12, 2008, 03:11:43 pm
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Hope Ennis figures her out quick, and gets back on track.

Well, cwby30, you know how Ennis can be. Sometimes, he's not the brightest bulb on the string!
Title: Right 67 By Littlewing1957
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 12, 2008, 09:38:32 pm
Right 67 By Littlewing1957

“What do you say, Ennis?  Let me get you out of this weather, or come nightfall, you’ll freeze to death!” Raquel squeezed her wool coat tighter around her chest to emphasize her point.  “I don’t want to see you catch your death!”  Ennis looked at the pretty young woman.  Every instinct told him not to trust her, but what else to do?  He was alone, broke, hungry, and he certainly was cold.  Raquel waited patiently in her car, a smile fixed upon her lovely face.  Ennis observed her, and wondered how long she would wear that grin.  Raquel’s smile looked genuine, but his internal warning signals were going off like a fire alarm.  “Ennis, you coming?”  He hesitated.  Ennis knew he was being rude, but he was too confused and conflicted to answer right then.  After another moment, Raquel’s patience was beginning to wear thin.  “If you don’t want a ride, just say so and I’ll be on my way!”  Ennis looked straight into Raquel’s eyes.  Her smile was gone.  So was his steely resolve.  The cold was getting to him.  Ennis was only human.  “I’ll take a ride,” he muttered.  Raquel’s smile returned and she unlocked the doors and allowed Ennis to enter.

“You want to go get something to eat?” Raquel asked as she drove along the main road.  Ennis studied her for a split second.  She was definitely a lovely woman.  He wondered why she wasn’t married.  “Yep.” Ennis answered.  “Cool!” Raquel enthused.  I know a nice place just on the outskirts of town.  Dinner will be my treat.  You okay with that?”  Ennis hated the idea of having his meal paid for, but he was too dang hungry to argue.  He would find a way to make it up to her later.  “That sounds real good, ma’am!” Ennis added, politely.  “Call me Rocky,” Raquel stated.  “Okay…Rocky,”  He whispered.  It was settled.  Ennis sat still and enjoyed the ride to the restaurant in silence.

Greg’s place was a middle-of-the-road eatery on the outskirts of Lightning Flat.  Raquel pulled into the parking lot and fetched her purse.  The doors were unlocked, and Ennis walked over to the driver’s side and helped Rocky out.  “So gentlemanly!” She exclaimed as Ennis took her hand and pulled her from the vehicle.  Ennis blushed slightly and followed her into the restaurant.  “Ah, Raquel, how nice to see you again!”  Raquel smiled sweetly at a middle aged woman who wore a white silk shirt and black skinny pants.  A name tag that spelled out “Valerie,” was pinned to her ample chest.  “Good to see you, Val,” Raquel answered.  “Table for two?” Valerie asked, as she looked first to Rocky, then to Ennis.  Valerie’s expression was neutral.  She was accustomed to Raquel frequenting the place, and she was rarely alone.  “Yes, table for two, please.”  Valerie gathered a series of menus and led Raquel and Ennis to a table by a large picture window.  There was not much of a view – just the silent Wyoming plains barely dusted with snow.  Raquel studied the offerings, and made several suggestions of what Ennis might like.  “The veal is very good here, and I’m sure you’ll like the baked chicken breasts.”  Ennis studied the menu.  He was so hungry that the menu itself was beginning to look appetizing.  “I think I’ll start off with a Caesar salad, and I'll have the baked halibut for a main course,” Raquel spoke sweetly.  She looked expectantly at Ennis.  “What looks good, Cowboy?”  “I’ll have one of those house salads,” Ennis spoke softly.  “And then I guess I’ll have the burger and a side of fries.”  Raquel wrinkled her pretty nose.  “Oh come on, Ennis, live a little!” She laughed.  “This ain’t one of those drive-in places! You can have whatever you want!  I’m paying.”  Ennis wanted to run away.  “Okay,” He whispered.  “I’ll have the halibut.”  Raquel nodded and signaled for the waiter.  They gave their orders and watched the waiter walk away.

After the meal Ennis and Raquel walked back out to her car.  It was almost 8:00p.m. and the weather had turned very cold.  “Do you have a place to stay for the night?”  Raquel asked, almost as an afterthought.  She stopped and placed her hand on the driver’s side door and waited.  Ennis weighed his answer very carefully.  He had absolutely nowhere to lay his head.  He had no money left for a motel room, and he couldn’t very well ask Rocky to take him back to the Twist Ranch.  Ennis felt more miserable at that moment than he ever had in his short life.  How did things get so bad?  His life should be improving, not getting worse.  He felt like he was going backward, and he wasn’t really up for the trip.  Raquel waited patiently.  She somehow knew he didn’t have a place to stay, and was certain he would accompany her home.  Ennis shrugged and began to look rather old and deflated.  “Why don’t you camp out at my place tonight?  I have a sofa bed, and it’s yours if you want it.” Raquel tilted her head to the side and continued, “I promise not to take advantage of you!”  Unless you want me to!  She thought.  Ennis didn't like the sound of that, but there was really nothing else to do.  “Okay, I’ll take you up on your offer,” he said.  Ennis didn't want to accept.  He wondered what Jack would think about him spending the night at Raquel's place.  Ennis' spirit was actually with Jack at the ranch, and he tried desperately to pull his thoughts back, to put Jack and his parents out of his mind.  He was feeling enormous guilt about running out the way he did.  They must be sick with worry by now!  “Great!" Raquel exclaimed, bringing Ennis back.  C’mon, then! My little house is not far from here." Raquel's eyes twinkled.  Ennis looked away.  I’ll put on a pot of coffee, and we can get to know one another!” 
Title: Re: Right (67)
Post by: cwby30 on January 14, 2008, 08:01:31 pm

Afternoon, Littlewing.

Well, just knew it, "Rocky" has her eyes on Ennis, and fancies herself getting fancy with him.  Hope he doesn't fall for that, and substitute Rocky for Alma with the same potentially disastrous results.  Yes, Jack and his mother are going out of their minds with worry, so he better get up enough gumption to call them.  He does have a place to lay his head, on Jack's shoulder anywhere but at Rocky's, he just has to realize that that's what he can have any time, all the time.  Like toycoon said before, Ennis is sometimes [?!] a bit thick about things at first, and needs to think his way through them.  Well, he better think faster than normal this time! 

Thanks again. 
Title: Re: Right (67)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 15, 2008, 12:13:34 am
Afternoon, Littlewing.

Well, just knew it, "Rocky" has her eyes on Ennis, and fancies herself getting fancy with him.  Hope he doesn't fall for that, and substitute Rocky for Alma with the same potentially disastrous results.  Yes, Jack and his mother are going out of their minds with worry, so he better get up enough gumption to call them.  He does have a place to lay his head, on Jack's shoulder anywhere but at Rocky's, he just has to realize that that's what he can have any time, all the time.  Like toycoon said before, Ennis is sometimes [?!] a bit thick about things at first, and needs to think his way through them.  Well, he better think faster than normal this time! 

Thanks again. 

Thanks for your very thoughtful comments, cwby30!  I especially like this:

He does have a place to lay his head, on Jack's shoulder anywhere but at Rocky's, he just has to realize that that's what he can have any time, all the time.  

This is so true!  We all hope that Ennis will make the "Right" choices this time!
Title: Right 68 by Toycoon
Post by: Toycoon on January 15, 2008, 01:19:02 am
Right 68 by Toycoon

Indeed Raquel's home wasn't far from the restaurant at all. It was down at the end of the block and around the corner from the hardware store. They pulled up into the driveway at Raquel's house and parked. Raquel turned to Ennis and smiled, "We're here." Her voice was warm but Ennis felt a cold shiver up his spine.

They walked around to the front of the little beige house; the gate slammed shut behind them. Raquel opened the door and reached inside to switch on the lights. She stepped in and Ennis followed. The living room was nicely decorated, with gold shag carpeting and the walls painted light aqua. There was a pink, printed vinyl couch in the middle of room and several, framed pictures hanging on the wall.

Raquel instructed Ennis to make himself at home as she took off her coat, hung it in the closet and went into the kitchen to make a pot of coffee. Ennis began to look around the room at her furnishings. Everywhere he looked, there was an unusual object of art. He became fascinated by a cluster of resin grapes spilling from a gold bowl on the dining room table. His face was reflected in the globes. From the kitchen, Raquel called out, "Hey, Ennis, you wanna a drink? There's a bottle of Old Rose in the cabinet." Ennis mumbled, "OK" and went back to inspecting the centerpiece.

Raquel came out of the kitchen with a pair of lowball glasses full of ice and she set them on the bar. She took the whiskey bottle, unscrewed the cap and poured Ennis and herself, a drink. Raquel lifted her glass and said, "Let's drink a toast." Ennis raised his glass and touched it's edge to hers. "To friendship," she continued, taking a sip. Ennis took a big gulp and wiped his mouth with the back of his hand.

"Well. what do you think of my place, cowboy?" she asked proudly. "It's purty. You live here long, huh?" Ennis was not terribly good at small talk." Yeah, I've been here a few years," she said glancing around the room. Ennis shuffled over to a photograph of a shirtless, tanned Rock Hudson hanging behind the sofa. "This fella yer boyfriend?" Raquel chuckled loudly, "Oh my, no! Don't I wish!" Ennis pointed to another photo. "How 'bout this guy?" Raquel giggled. "Honey, that's Tab Hunter. He's a million miles from Wyoming! I haven't got a chance with him. What a hunk a stuff, though!" Ennis looked at Raquel puzzled. "Why do got their pitchers on yer wall?"

Raquel grabbed the bottle and her glass, moved to the couch then sat down. "A girl can dream can't she?" she sighed. Raquel patted the spot next to her on the sofa and beckoned Ennis to join her. "So tell me a little about yourself." Ennis took the seat next to her and swallowed the last of his drink. "There ain't much to tell. I was just passing through when I thought I'd visit my buddy, Jack." Raquel filled Ennis' glass then poured a dash of whiskey over the melted ice in hers. She crossed her legs at the knees and reclined against the backrest. "How do you know Jack anyway?" Ennis thought about his answer for a minute before responding. "We is fishin' buddies." She sat up now, interested in Ennis' story. "Is that right? What ya got in the sack, a fishing pole?" she teased, reaching for Ennis' paper bag, behind him on the end table. Ennis intercepted her reach and the whiskey from his glass splashed over them both. They popped up, each awkwardly trying to wipe the spilled drink off one another when their eyes meet. Raquel was an irresistibly, sexy woman and the cocktails lowered Ennis' inhibitions considerably. They began to kiss passionately as Raquel clutched Ennis' forearms and he gyrated against her. In minutes, they were naked on the pink sofa, moving together; their clothes lay in a heap on the shag carpet. Raquel closed her eyes and threw her head back, recalling the way she'd imagined this moment since the first time she'd laid eyes on the handsome stranger. All Ennis could think of was Jack.
Title: His Hair
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 15, 2008, 01:25:28 am
His Hair by Littlewing1957

“Can I play with your hair?” At first Ennis was certain he hadn’t heard correctly.  Jack was sitting on the rug, his knees pressed against his chest.  Ennis sat in a straight-backed chair, staring down at his lover.  “What's it you want?”  Ennis asked, rather amused.  Jack smiled when he heard the mirth in Ennis’ voice. “I want to run my fingers through your hair!”

Ennis moved near Jack and sat down next to him.  “I think I’ll get up in the chair, and you can squeeze backwards between my legs," Jack whispered.  “He's  going to make a big production out of this,” Ennis mused as he followed Jack’s instructions.  Jack opened his thighs and allowed Ennis to back in.  Ennis draped both arms over Jack’s shoulders and lowered his head just a bit.  Jack very gently picked up a strand of Ennis’ hair.  He stroked his lover’s flaxen locks with a finger.  Ennis was amused, but he was also becoming aroused.  He couldn’t imagine that a simple ministration like stroking his hair could make him want to take Jack down at that very moment.  Ennis sighed and sat very still.  Jack began to massage his scalp.  Ennis thought he would cry out from the pleasure.

Jack stopped suddenly.  It was nothing major; not like making love and then pulling away.  Ennis could handle it.  But he was instantly missing Jack’s touch on his head.  He couldn’t know how much he would like a scalp massage.  Jack stood and pulled Ennis up and over his lap.  He liked the feel of his man.  He avoided Ennis’ eyes.  “I..I just like your color scheme, Cowboy,” Jack sputtered.  “I can’t keep my hands or my eyes off of you, and I’m not ashamed to admit it."  Ennis didn’t know what to say to that.  He reached for Jack’s head and placed it on his chest.  It was his turn.  Ennis stroked Jack’s dark hair and hummed.  It was only good to return the favor.
Title: Re: His Hair
Post by: Toycoon on January 15, 2008, 01:29:31 am
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Ennis was amused, but he was also becoming aroused.  He couldn’t imagine that a simple ministration like stroking his hair could make him want to take Jack down at that very moment.

You are so good, Miss Littlewing!
Title: Re: His Hair
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 15, 2008, 01:52:07 am
You are so good, Miss Littlewing!

Why thanks, sugarboo!  Your installment #68 is unreal! Outrageous!  I love it.  I'll have volume 69 up very soon!  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 16, 2008, 05:05:38 pm
Thanks for your kind words, and for aksing about me, Love.  I haven't been in touch very much, and I apologize.  I'm doing much better, thanks!  It is so good to see you, though.  I got your PM and will answer very soon.

Stay with us!  Our saga continues!
Title: Right 69 By Littlewing1957
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 16, 2008, 05:13:56 pm
Right 69 By Littlewing1957

"Jack, come down here!" Mrs. Twist yelled up the stairs from the living room.  "Katie is here to see you!"  Jack heard his mom and sat up on his twin bed.  He was taking a short nap after having laid the foundation for the barn with his dad earlier that morning.   He was bone weary and just wanted to sleep.  But after an entire morning of enduring his dad's cold indifference, Jack began to warm up to the idea of a visitor.  "I'll be right down, Ma," Jack yelled from his room.  He pulled off denim overalls and a smelly blue shirt and climbed into a pair of stiff jeans and a creme colored sweater.  Satisfied that he looked presentable, Jack left his room and headed for the stairs.  He found Katie and his mom in the kitchen, seated at the table, sipping at cups of coffee.

Wow, what a fox! Katie thought as she caught sight of Jack in the kitchen doorway.  She was quick to avert her eyes when Jack entered.  No need to act too eager.  "Come on in and have a cup of coffee," Mrs. Twist offered when she noticed her son.  "Thanks, Ma." Jack answered as he reached for the pot.  He poured himself a cup of strong java and sat down next to Katie.  "How you doin, Katie?" Jack asked politely.  Katie took a sip of her coffee.  "I'm okay.  Just wanted to see how you're feeling.  You okay?  Heard from Ennis yet?"  Jack flinched when he heard Ennis' name.  Mrs. Twist noticed and changed the subject.  "Ahh...Katie," Mrs. Twist began, "How is business?  I hear you're thinking about opening another shop."  Katie smiled sweetly at her hostess.  Jack was silent.  "Business is good, thanks for asking.  I have plans to open another place, but only if things go well this fiscal year."  Mrs. Twist nodded. "We'll just have to see what happens,"  Katie added.  Roberta Twist looked sidelong at her son.  He was being too quiet, was being rude.  She kicked him slightly on the ankle under the table.  Jack perked up.  "Katie, I'm glad to hear everything is going so well.  I didn't even know you had your own business until you drove us there a few days ago." Jack was being sincere.  "I'm very proud of you."  Katie and Mrs. Twist locked eyes and beamed.  "Well, I gotta go do the wash," Mrs. Twist stated as she rose from the table.  She placed her cup in the sink and headed quickly for the kitchen door. "You kids stay here as long as you want.  I'll be out back."

Jack rose from his seat and placed his mug in the sink.  Katie was still seated, still working on her cup of coffee.   She had doubts about mentioning Ennis, but she was just too curious.  "Jack," Katie began, "What is the story with Ennis?  You can tell me, we're friends."  Jack turned and faced her.  He sat back down beside her, but didn't look at her.  "There's not much to tell, Katie," Jack whispered.  "I don't know why Ennis ran off like that, and I haven't heard from him."  Jack looked very troubled.  "Do you want to hear from him?"  Katie asked gently.  "Yes," Jack answered soflty.  "Then we should go look for him," Katie offered.  "Why don't we scour the town.  I hate to alarm you, but what if something happened to him?"  Jack almost laughed out loud.  "Katie, Ennis is a big boy and can take care of himself.  We don't have to go looking for him." Jack glanced at her.  "If he disappeared, it's because he wanted to.  I'm sure there is no foul play involved."  Katie shrugged.  "Just a suggestion."  Jack nodded and fell silent.  "Well look, I still need a date for the dance.  You still want to go with me?  It'll be a good time...take your mind off things."  Jack doubted that.  Going to the dance would only remind him that Ennis would also be there, if things worked out.  But what the heck?  Life had to go on, and going to the dance sounded like fun.  "Okay, I'll go to the dance with you," Jack said.  "But I don't have anything to wear."  "Don't worry about a thing," Katie enthused.  "Look, we can go to a store in town that has kick ass men's formal wear.  I'll rent you a tux for the night.  What do you say?"  Jack grunted.  "I can rent my own tux," He stated matter-of-factly.  "Of course," Katie muttered.  "Look, why don't we go now.  I can drive us over to the store and we can look at what they have to offer.  You can try on a few suits, we can put down a deposit and pick it up before the dance.  What do you say, Jack?  "Well, I promised my ma I would help with dinner."  "Don't worry.  I already spoke with her, and she said she can manage."  Katie looked hopeful.  Jack couldn't think of any reason not to go.  "Okay.  Let me get my coat."  Jack left the kitchen and headed up the stairs to fetch his parka.

Alan Sims should have been back to his job, but he asked for, and was granted, an additional week of vacation.  He noticed that Jack and his dad were building something out back on the ranch.  He didn't consider himself a stalker, just a man on a mission.  Alan was parked on the opposite side of the Twist spread, in view of Jack's front door.  He was parked there when Katie arrived, but he didn't think anything of it.  Lightning Flat was a small town, and he knew that Katie and Mrs. Twist were friendly.  Alan knew Katie as well, and was fond of her.  But when he saw Jack exit the Twist home with Katie on his arm, Alan began to see red.  He waited until Jack was inside Katie's car and started his engine.  Katie pulled off onto the main road and Alan pulled out and followed.  He knew to stay well behind them.


 
Title: Re: His Hair
Post by: Dagi on January 18, 2008, 06:46:17 am
His Hair by Littlewing1957

“Can I play with your hair?” At first Ennis was certain he hadn’t heard correctly.  Jack was sitting on the rug, his knees pressed against his chest.  Ennis sat in a straight-backed chair, staring down at his lover.  “What's it you want?”  Ennis asked, rather amused.  Jack smiled when he heard the mirth in Ennis’ voice. “I want to run my fingers through your hair!”

Ennis moved near Jack and sat down next to him.  “I think I’ll get up in the chair, and you can squeeze backwards between my legs," Jack whispered.  “He's  going to make a big production out of this,” Ennis mused as he followed Jack’s instructions.  Jack opened his thighs and allowed Ennis to back in.  Ennis draped both arms over Jack’s shoulders and lowered his head just a bit.  Jack very gently picked up a strand of Ennis’ hair.  He stroked his lover’s flaxen locks with a finger.  Ennis was amused, but he was also becoming aroused.  He couldn’t imagine that a simple ministration like stroking his hair could make him want to take Jack down at that very moment.  Ennis sighed and sat very still.  Jack began to massage his scalp.  Ennis thought he would cry out from the pleasure.

Jack stopped suddenly.  It was nothing major; not like making love and then pulling away.  Ennis could handle it.  But he was instantly missing Jack’s touch on his head.  He couldn’t know how much he would like a scalp massage.  Jack stood and pulled Ennis up and over his lap.  He liked the feel of his man.  He avoided Ennis’ eyes.  “I..I just like your color scheme, Cowboy,” Jack sputtered.  “I can’t keep my hands or my eyes off of you, and I’m not ashamed to admit it."  Ennis didn’t know what to say to that.  He reached for Jack’s head and placed it on his chest.  It was his turn.  Ennis stroked Jack’s dark hair and hummed.  It was only good to return the favor.


Aaww, I love this. What a sweet moment you captured here, Marie.

Dagi
Title: Right by Toycoon and Littlewing
Post by: Dagi on January 18, 2008, 06:51:17 am
Hey Toycoon and Littlewing, I'm really curious as for where your story is heading to. Ennis seems to have stumbled into a trap, I only hope Jack isn't going to make the same mistake. Keep them coming! It´s starting to read like a novel!

Dagi
Title: Re: His Hair
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 18, 2008, 11:01:36 pm
Aaww, I love this. What a sweet moment you captured here, Marie.

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi.  It is the intimate moments between our boys that I love reading and writing about.
Title: Re: Right by Toycoon and Littlewing
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 18, 2008, 11:02:10 pm
Hey Toycoon and Littlewing, I'm really curious as for where your story is heading to. Ennis seems to have stumbled into a trap, I only hope Jack isn't going to make the same mistake. Keep them coming! It´s starting to read like a novel!

Dagi

We have a few surprises up our sleeves!  Stay tuned!
Title: Hopes and Dreams
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 20, 2008, 01:34:42 am
Hopes and Dreams by Littlewing1957

“If you never met Alma, what do you think you would do after the mountain?” Jack asked, with great interest.  Ennis stopped in his tracks and deposited a bundle of wood on the frigid earth.  “I never gave it much thought, Jack,” Ennis answered.  “After all, I’m only 19.  I haven’t had a chance to map out my future yet.”  Jack took it in.  “What about a ranch?  You think you would put some money on a small ranch somewhere?”  “Mebbe!” Ennis spoke, rubbing his chin.  “Having a small place all to myself with my horses and a few cattle sounds nice.”  Jack smiled and helped him build a fire.

“I have dreams,” Jack spoke as he took a swig of whiskey.  He passed the bottle to Ennis. “I’m sure you do,” Ennis answered, absently.  “Go ahead, Jack, tell me!” Ennis looked expectantly at his friend after he took a sip from the bottle.   “I’m listening.”  That Ennis was up to hearing about his plans gave Jack pause.  No one ever gave a rat’s ass about his dreams before.  His dad never sat still enough for him to consult, or even talk to.  His mom was too busy keeping the family afloat.  No one in his life had the time, or inclination to listen to him, ask him what he wanted to do with his life.  But Ennis Del Mar wanted to hear all about it.  Jack felt his heart swell when he realized that someone seemed to care about him.

Jack spoke freely about his dream of first becoming a rodeo rider, and being good enough at it to put money aside for a cow and calf operation of his own.  Ennis heard it all, nodded at times, and made interested noises.  Jack was mellow from drink and the good company.  The fire was dying down, and Ennis was feeling quite tipsy.  He had sheep to watch; he should have been up there with them at that very moment.  Ennis looked over at Jack, who was lying prone.  He seemed very happy – not a care in the world.  Ennis knew he would never make it back up to the sheep.  He asked Jack for a blanket.  Jack complied; knowing full well that once the fire died down, Ennis would join him in the tent.
Title: Special Order
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 20, 2008, 02:18:43 am
Special Order By Littlewing1957

“We got a special order in this week,” The Basque announced as he read over Ennis’ list.  Ennis tried not to look excited, but any change, any addition to the bland fare they had been forced to endure was most welcome.  Ennis and Jack prepared a “wish” list every Friday, and tried to be reasonable and fair.  After all, they weren’t accustomed to fancy vittles, and didn’t know much about cooking.  But Ennis was getting tired of beans, and Jack was down right sick of them.  “What you got, sir?”  Ennis asked, trying to sound uninterested.  “How would you like some sausages?” The Basque asked.  “They would go good with your beans.”

Ennis accepted the offer of two dozen pork sausages.  He shook the Basque’s hand and packed the supplies just like the Basque instructed.  He headed off to camp, making very good time.  He couldn’t wait to surprise Jack with franks and beans for supper.  Ennis built a dinner fire and fetched two chairs from the tent.  He waited until Jack was due in and put supper on to boil.  It didn't take long to prepare beans and franks.

Jack rode into camp and started bitchin’ as soon as he climbed down from his horse.  Ennis loved to hear Jack moan and fuss.  It made him feel alive – part of something.  “Sit on down, Jack! I got dinner all fixed!”  Jack shut up and pulled a folding chair up to the fire.  He smelled the beans, but thought he just imagined the scent of meat.  “I smell something different, Friend!” Jack announced as he looked into the pot on the fire.  “What you got fer me?”  Ennis chuckled and handed Jack a bowl of franks with two full sausages on top.  “Uh, Ennis,” Jack laughed, “I think you’re supposed to cut up the meat and mix it with the beans.”  Ennis stared at his friend.  “What difference does it make?  Just eat up, Twist.”  Jack shrugged and picked up a knife and fork.  “I don’t remember putting sausages on the list,” Jack said as he prepared to cut his meat into pieces.  “Special order came in this week, and Aguirre was nice enough to send some up for us.” “Oh, that was nice of him!” It was Jack.  He poked a plump sausage with his fork and held it aloft.  He studied it and smiled when he imagined it just might resemble someone very close.  He had no real way of knowing, of course, but his imagination was on overdrive! Jack placed the sausage back on the beans.  “What’s wrong, Jack?” Ennis asked as he noticed Jack wasn’t eating.  “You don’t like sausages?”  Jack stifled a laugh.  “Well, I like this one very much,” He mumbled, barely able to contain himself.  “What do you mean?”  Ennis asked, incredulous.  He couldn't image why Jack was so tickled all of a sudden. “Never mind, Friend!” Jack smiled.  “Let’s eat!”
Title: Re: Hopes and Dreams
Post by: Toycoon on January 20, 2008, 12:40:16 pm
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Jack complied; knowing full well that once the fire died down, Ennis would join him in the tent.

I'm crazy about your stories, Littlewing1957. Keep 'em coming!
Title: Re: Hopes and Dreams
Post by: Dagi on January 20, 2008, 05:08:12 pm
Hopes and Dreams by Littlewing1957

  But Ennis Del Mar wanted to hear all about it.  Jack felt his heart swell when he realized that someone seemed to care about him.


Oh, they were meant for each other. And you tell us so beautifully what it was that they gave it other. Thanks for this, Marie.  :-*

Dagi
Title: Re: Special Order
Post by: Dagi on January 20, 2008, 05:11:57 pm
Special Order By Littlewing1957

......... his imagination was on overdrive! Jack placed the sausage back on the beans.  “What’s wrong, Jack?” Ennis asked as he noticed Jack wasn’t eating.  “You don’t like sausages?”  Jack stifled a laugh.  “Well, I like this one very much,” He mumbled, barely able to contain himself.  “What do you mean?”  Ennis asked, incredulous.  He couldn't image why Jack was so ticked all of a sudden. “Never mind, Friend!” Jack smiled.  “Let’s eat!”


 :laugh: Love this, Marie.

Dagi
Title: Re: Hopes and Dreams
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 20, 2008, 05:17:22 pm
I'm crazy about your stories, Littlewing1957. Keep 'em coming!

Why thanks, Babe!  I'll certainly keep them coming.  My pleasure!  Can't wait to read your next installment of "Right!"
Title: Re: Hopes and Dreams
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 20, 2008, 05:18:18 pm
Oh, they were meant for each other. And you tell us so beautifully what it was that they gave it other. Thanks for this, Marie.  :-*

Dagi

I think they were definitely made for each other.  No doubt in my mind!  Thanks for your kind words!
Title: Re: Special Order
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 20, 2008, 05:21:31 pm
:laugh: Love this, Marie.

Dagi

Thanks, Sweetie!
Title: The Rain is Coming
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 20, 2008, 05:44:43 pm
The Rain is Coming By Littlewing1957

The rain clouds were moving in.  Jack stopped at the foot of the river and looked toward the heavens.  He remembered sitting on the back steps of his little house with his mother right beside him.  They loved to watch the rain clouds move in from the distant horizon.  His mom would hold his hand as the clouds approached, their arrival as dramatic as a stranger in a black cape.  And when the rain began to fall, and the wind whipped with a delicate violence, Jack’s mom looked to the sky and uttered, “How great thou art!”

“It'll rain today fer sure,” Jack spoke aloud.  He was alone, but being by himself so much, he liked to speak out loud.  It seemed as though his own voice kept him company.  Jack moved back to the tent.  He was expecting Ennis any time now.  He didn’t feel up to cooking anything for supper, and was sure Ennis wouldn’t mind eating beans and peaches from a can.  They would eat in the tent.  Jack felt a few drops falling.

When Ennis arrived in camp, he headed straight for the tent, as the rain was coming down in sheets.  Jack heard his approach and pulled back the flap so he could enter.  “It’s getting bad out there, Jack!” Ennis was breathless after his ride in.  He was also soaking wet.  Jack handed Ennis a blanket as he shed his wet clothes.  “I know,” Jack answered.  “We’ll have to just wait it out, I guess.”  “Yep!  Warm enough, though.  Let’s watch the rain through the flap.”  Jack propped the tent flap open with a spare bedroll.  They sat side-by-side, eating from a can of beans.  Ennis loved to watch the rains fall.  He finished his meal and pulled Jack closer.  Jack sighed at the beauty of it all, and placed his head on Ennis’ shoulder.  “How great thou art!”  Ennis spoke as he looked toward the heavens.  Jack couldn’t believe what he just heard.  But he was silent as he settled in, one arm around his lover’s shoulder.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on January 20, 2008, 05:49:26 pm
Marie, you are amazing. I so love your stories. This one was very, very special. All of your stories are very special, but this one was very, very special to me.

Are you feeling better, honey?

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 20, 2008, 06:03:25 pm
Marie, you are amazing. I so love your stories. This one was very, very special. All of your stories are very special, but this one was very, very special to me.

Are you feeling better, honey?

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi.  Yes, I'm better.  Thanks for asking!
Title: Right (70) by Toycoon
Post by: Toycoon on January 21, 2008, 08:25:19 pm
Right (70) by Toycoon

Saturday, December 29th 1963. Despite the fact that Jack hadn't been too keen on the Winter dance to begin with, now that the day was finally here, he was actually excited about the event. At Katie's suggestion, Jack had rented a black, polyester tux with satin lapels and a light blue shirt to wear under it. The tux's slacks had a satin strip that ran down the side to give the pants some sheen and Jack borrowed a pair of shiny black cowboy boots to complete the formal outfit.

The day before, Mrs. Twist trimmed Jack's shaggy hair for the party and now Jack was grooming the sideburns he grew just for the occasion. Just out of the bathtub, Jack filled the sink and dunked the straight razor in the warm, soapy water. He looked into the mirror, turned his face side to side to inspect the condition of this facial hair. "Hmmm, not bad," he thought. "One side seems longer that the other." Jack jutted his chin out and brushed the bristly hairs with the back of his hand. He dragged the hot razor across his neck, shaving the stubble then he carefully evened up the sideburns. Globs of shaving scum peppered with tiny hair dripped off the razor and onto the basin. Jack pulled the drain plug and the dirty water gurgled down.

The picture of Ennis naked, washing himself and shaving by the campfire came vividly into focus in Jack's mind's eye. Although he had certainly imagined a few in the past, Ennis was the first man Jack had ever seen fully naked. For those few, glorious weeks on the mountain, Ennis was very much at ease in front of Jack, frequently walking around with no clothing, enjoying warm days in the sun together. Jack's hand slid under his bath towel and found his growing erection. Jack let his towel fall away and he stared at his reflection in the mirror. He ran his fingers over his hairy chest and the fur on his belly then began to stroke his penis, slowly at first then faster until he reached orgasm. Jack panted as he ejaculated into the basin. He turned the faucet back on, ran the hot water over the semen and watched it spin down the drain.

Now, it was time to get dressed. Jack pulled on a pair of 'Fruit of the Looms' and adjusted his 'boys' in the cotton crotch. He swaggered over to the closet containing the rented tuxedo, took it out then hung it the nail on the closet door. He hiked up the cellophane protecting the ensemble and put on the light blue shirt first, buttoned it up then pulled on the slacks. Next he donned the jacket and fished around inside the pocket for the bow tie. Jack inspected the tie trying to figure out how it was supposed to go around his neck. He finally managed to attach the tie and pulled on the new boots.

Jack dashed down the steps from his room and found the keys to his truck in an empty Grower's Peanuts can on the buffet next to the front door. Just then, Mrs. Twist came out of the kitchen and fawned over her handsome son. "John, doesn't Jack look nice?" she asked kissing Jack's cheek. "Yeah, what time ya be back, boy?" Jack thought about it for a moment. "Oh I don't know, maybe 'round midnight. Don't wait up fer me." he said, waving goodbye and closing the door behind him.

It was a short trip to Katie's house as she lived just down the road from the Twist ranch and near the church hall where the dance was being held. Jack pulled up in the drive way, grabbed the plastic box that held the corsage for Katie and jumped out of the truck. Katie's mother greeted Jack at the door and lead him in. "Oh my, don't you look elegant, Jack? Katie will be right down in a jiffy." Katie's younger sister stood behind her mother peering out to shyly glance at her sister's suitor. Jack bent down to her level, smiled and said 'hey there' to the little girl. Katie appeared at the top of the stairs. She looked resplendent in a sparkly, lavender chiffon gown with a sweetheart neckline. Her hair was tied up in a ponytail with a purple ribbon and on her feet she wore purple stiletto pumps. " Howdy Jack!" she sang as she tiptoed down the steps. "Hope ya didn't hafta wait too long." Jack was temporarily stunned by her appearance and regaining his composure, handed her the box with the corsage. " Here, t-this is fer you, " he stammered. "Aren't ya gonna pin it on me me, silly?" She jutted out her chest and pulled up the hem on the bodice of her dress where she thought the violet orchid should go. "Oh... yeah. Hold still. There." Katie watched Jack's movements intently. She smiled, admiring Jack's and her reflection together in foyer mirror. "Well. we should get goin', huh?"

Title: Re: Right 69 By Littlewing1957
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 21, 2008, 11:00:24 pm
The ball is in Toycoon's court now, huh?  So what happens when Katie and Jack go to town?  And what is Alan Sims up to?  What is his "mission"?

Great installment, Littlewing.

Gary 

Thanks, Gary!
Title: Re: The Rain is Coming
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 21, 2008, 11:05:36 pm
Beautiful moment, Littlewing.  It was wonderful the way Ennis echoed Jack's earlier statement, showing that they're on the same wave link.  And with the rain comes the expectancy of an outpouring of emotion and passion.  And since I've been camping a number of times in my life, I can just imagine what it would be like to be in that tent with the rain coming down.

Gary

I was inspired to write this story when it started raining here and the wind started to blow!  I love it, Gary!  I couldn't have been more inspired to have the boys in the tent, watching the rain, being close.
Title: Re: Special Order
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 21, 2008, 11:06:10 pm
;D ;D ;D

Now what do you suppose Jack was thinking about?   :laugh: 

Thanks for the story, Littlewing.

Gary

 :laugh:  :laugh: Thanks, Babe!
Title: Re: Riught (71)
Post by: cwby30 on January 22, 2008, 02:21:40 pm
Mornin', youse twos.

Well, think the Winter Dance will be hot, and I'm not talking about just the dancing.  What has Ennis been doing for the past few days? If the two of them meet up at the dance, girls in tow, could be some interesting chatter going on, especially if Alan Sims decides to show up, too.  Wouldn't put it past him to try something at the Dance, speak out of turn in an effort to break things up and have Jack for himself. 

Guess I'll just have to fasten my seatbelt, 'cause I can tell it's going to be a bumpy night!

Good turn of events, though I miss the connection between Jack and Ennis.  They need to work things out, even if it requires a knock-down by one or both of them, knock some sense into Ennis.  He was so gung-ho to find Jack, and then after he did he ran as soon as trouble came knocking at the door.  Very OS!Ennis, but I thought he had learned something this time around... maybe he's still learning, and there's always hope he'll change when writing AU. 

Thanks again. 
Title: Re: Riught (71)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 22, 2008, 03:59:17 pm
Mornin', youse twos.

Well, think the Winter Dance will be hot, and I'm not talking about just the dancing.  What has Ennis been doing for the past few days? If the two of them meet up at the dance, girls in tow, could be some interesting chatter going on, especially if Alan Sims decides to show up, too.  Wouldn't put it past him to try something at the Dance, speak out of turn in an effort to break things up and have Jack for himself. 

Guess I'll just have to fasten my seatbelt, 'cause I can tell it's going to be a bumpy night!

Good turn of events, though I miss the connection between Jack and Ennis.  They need to work things out, even if it requires a knock-down by one or both of them, knock some sense into Ennis.  He was so gung-ho to find Jack, and then after he did he ran as soon as trouble came knocking at the door.  Very OS!Ennis, but I thought he had learned something this time around... maybe he's still learning, and there's always hope he'll change when writing AU. 

Thanks again. 

Thanks for your comments, cwby30! 
Title: Re: Riught (71)
Post by: Toycoon on January 22, 2008, 06:14:35 pm
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Guess I'll just have to fasten my seatbelt, 'cause I can tell it's going to be a bumpy night!

Don't you know it, cwby30! BTW- Thanks for hanging in there with us on this journey. I truly appreciate your dedication to our humble thread. Tell yer friends how fun (and easy) it is to write fanfic; we could use a little new blood around here.

Toycoon
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on January 23, 2008, 10:48:01 am
Shattered.  I'm just shattered.  The tears flow, my heart hurts and I miss him.

Dear Spiceylife,
I'm afraid that I can never watch Brokeback Mountain again. I think it would be too painful. I'm afraid I would have a nervous breakdown by the end of the movie. Before, there seemed to be some hope (to me ayway) at the end of the sadness but now...

I miss you hearing from you every day, Spicey. I wish things could be different. I miss all of our friends here. Please stop by to say 'hey' if you get the chance.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: moremojo on January 23, 2008, 12:28:30 pm
I'm afraid I would have a nervous breakdown by the end of the movie. Before, there seemed to be some hope (to me ayway) at the end of the sadness but now...
Hey, to all my fanfic friends. I share the grief and loss I know we are all experiencing.

Toycoon, I understand where you're coming from...Brokeback Mountain was painful enough as it was, but with recent events, it would be very difficult to watch it and be able to extricate our loss of Heath from the pain and loss of Ennis and Jack. I won't be ready to watch it again for at least a while.

But I do think that hope for Ennis can remain...and hope for Heath as well. We can hope that Heath is now in a better, more peaceful place, and that he will live on in our hearts and minds. This little miracle that fellow started with that great performance...well, that ain't no little thing!

Peace,
Scott
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on January 23, 2008, 01:09:30 pm
Thanks for visiting, Scott. I wish we could return to Monday, Jan.21st. I had such a nice day off. Now I'm back at work and trying to care about what I'm doing here. I know that toys are very important to children everywhere but it just seems so frivous and I'm really not in the mood to play today.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on January 23, 2008, 01:29:25 pm
Hugs to you, Toycoon, old buddy.  It'll get better.  I promise.

Your Brokie Pal,
Gary

Hi Gary,
Thanks for the kind words of encouragement. How are you doing?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 23, 2008, 03:59:26 pm
Thanks for visiting, Scott. I wish we could return to Monday, Jan.21st. I had such a nice day off. Now I'm back at work and trying to care about what I'm doing here. I know that toys are very importmant to children everywhere but it just seems so frivous and I'm really not in the mood to play today.

I took the day off.  Too much going on.  And now Heath?  I need some time to myself.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 23, 2008, 04:00:35 pm
Shattered.  I'm just shattered.  The tears flow, my heart hurts and I miss him.

I know what you mean, Spicey!  I'm numb.  Thanks for dropping by!  It is always good to see you here.  Don't be a stranger, Love!  We miss you!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 23, 2008, 04:04:26 pm
Dear Spiceylife,
I'm afraid that I can never watch Brokeback Mountain again. I think it would be too painful. I'm afraid I would have a nervous breakdown by the end of the movie. Before, there seemed to be some hope (to me ayway) at the end of the sadness but now...

I miss you hearing from you every day, Spicey. I wish things could be different. I miss all of our friends here. Please stop by to say 'hey' if you get the chance.

I feel the same way, Toy!  I'm having a hard time watching the clips of Heath being shown on the news.  In time you'll be able to watch the film again.  Actually, I'm not so sure about that!  I couldn't stand to watch it very often when Heath was alive.  The pain is too fresh to touch right now.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 23, 2008, 04:06:13 pm
Thanks for visiting, Scott. I wish we could return to Monday, Jan.21st. I had such a nice day off. Now I'm back at work and trying to care about what I'm doing here. I know that toys are very importmant to children everywhere but it just seems so frivous and I'm really not in the mood to play today.

Maybe writing will help, but I can't do it right now.  I'll try to pick up where we left off, but today I ain't able!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 23, 2008, 07:21:27 pm
Hey guys,

I don't even know what to say, I just feel so sad.

Thank goodness you are all here, my Brokie family.

Love Susie xxx

We'll always be here for you, SusieBaby!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on January 23, 2008, 08:02:13 pm
Hey guys,

I don't even know what to say, I just feel so sad.

Thank goodness you are all here, my Brokie family.

Love Susie xxx

Ain't much we can do about it down here. Susiebell, I'm glad you're here, too. I missed your presence for the past few weeks.

I don't know that I can really write too much fanfic any longer. I'm sort of mortified at the way I feel but I can't help myself. I'm very heartbroken.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 23, 2008, 09:55:10 pm
Ain't much we can do about it down here. Susiebell, I'm glad you're here, too. I missed your presence for the past few weeks.

I don't know that I can really write too much fanfic any longer. I'm sort of mortified at the way I feel but I can't help myself. I'm very heartbroken.

Please don't give up on the fanfic, Toycoon!  Promise me you won't.   :'(
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on January 23, 2008, 10:00:51 pm
Someone else said this on another thread: "The world was a better place with Heath Ledger in it."

{{{{{Brokie Pals}}}}}
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 23, 2008, 10:05:03 pm
Someone else said this on another thread: "The world was a better place with Heath Ledger in it."

{{{{{Brokie Pals}}}}}

So true, Shasta!  So true!  He was a genius!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on January 24, 2008, 01:20:34 am
Please don't give up on the fanfic, Toycoon!  Promise me you won't.   :'(

I haven't cried over this story for a really long time. Tonight I couldn't even read the posts without tearing up, page after page. What's gonna happen now?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 24, 2008, 01:31:45 am
I haven't cried over this story for a really long time. Tonight I couldn't even read the posts without tearing up, page after page. What's gonna happen now?

Nothing really has to happen.  The "Game" is still here.  The players haven't changed!  Man, I hope I'm making sense!  Maybe I should go to bed?  Nawww..
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on January 24, 2008, 04:22:43 pm
A big , big hug for my Jack with Ennis Family. I still feel numb, have only just begun to post some in the grieving thread, tried to push it all away. But today I could hardly think of anything else, saw the pictures of him and of his family before my inner eye all day long, even heard his voice.

The day will come when I can watch Brokeback Mountain again and be thankful for what Heath gave us with Ennis. Right now it's too painful to even think about it.

Together we will get through this! It's not the end. It's not. Heath wouldn't have wanted it either. Death doesn't make everything worthless.

{{{{Toycoon}}}}  {{{{Susie}}}}   {{{{Marie}}}}   {{{{Gary}}}}   {{{{Scott}}}}   {{{{cwby30}}}}   {{{{Spiceylife}}}}   {{{{Shasta}}}}


Dagi
Title: Journey's End
Post by: moremojo on January 24, 2008, 06:34:46 pm
Journey's End by moremojo

Strange how such grand stillness could contain this wonderful velocity, and how such velvety darkness could open up to reveal that golden, effulgent Light, which even now, as he somehow knew, was welcoming him Home...

A rush of cosmic wind swept him ever so gently towards the warmth and the lightness of a Love that he knew, in the deepest part of his heart, to be his due for simply having been true; names and obligations fell away as he drew closer to the waiting one, whose memory of blue eyes met the memory of his brown ones, and whose hands clasped his own in the bond of recognition...

Embrace...fulfillment...peace...they were no longer on the mountain, nor even on the earth, but they had found that open space to be themselves, and to know the Truth of what they had always been, forever brothers, lovers, and friends.



Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on January 24, 2008, 06:43:01 pm
Beautiful, Scott. Thank you. In times like these I do believe we are going somewhere when we die. After all we all are part of the One, call it what ever you want.

Big hug, my friend.
Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: moremojo on January 24, 2008, 06:44:07 pm
(((((((Dagi)))))))
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: moremojo on January 24, 2008, 07:05:59 pm
Bless you, bud.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on January 24, 2008, 07:14:19 pm
So true, Gary.

I'm sure that Heath faced many heartachs in his life, and the pain may have crippled him, but he rose up and he touched us through his art in spite of whatever personal difficulties he faced.

 {{{{{{{{Heath}}}}}}}
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on January 24, 2008, 11:05:02 pm
A big , big hug for my Jack with Ennis Family. I still feel numb, have only just begun to post some in the grieving thread, tried to push it all away. But today I could hardly think of anything else, saw the pictures of him and of his family before my inner eye all day long, even heard his voice.

The day will come when I can watch Brokeback Mountain again and be thankful for what Heath gave us with Ennis. Right now it's too painful to even think about it.

Together we will get through this! It's not the end. It's not. Heath wouldn't have wanted it either. Death doesn't make everything worthless.

{{{{Toycoon}}}}  {{{{Susie}}}}   {{{{Marie}}}}   {{{{Gary}}}}   {{{{Scott}}}}   {{{{cwby30}}}}   {{{{Spiceylife}}}}   {{{{Shasta}}}}


Dagi

Thank you Dagi. So sweet.   {{{{{{{DAGI}}}}}}}

It's weird how we all grieve differently. I DO want to see Brokeback Mountain again. I want to have all Heath's movies and keep them close and watch them and remember him as the living vibrant force that he was. I want to see Matilda as she grows up and see how much she resembles him. It's heartbreaking -- oh what could have been! But Heath was among us in the world. I am so thankful for that.

Yet -- I understand the way Toycoon and Spicey feel too. I just know that the grief process is never the same. And for some it is maybe not even a process -- it may be perpetual.

{{{{{{{{{{I love you Brokie pals}}}}}}}}}}
Title: Re: Journey's End
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 24, 2008, 11:19:08 pm
Journey's End by moremojo

Strange how such grand stillness could contain this wonderful velocity, and how such velvety darkness could open up to reveal that golden, effulgent Light, which even now, as he somehow knew, was welcoming him Home...

A rush of cosmic wind swept him ever so gently towards the warmth and the lightness of a Love that he knew, in the deepest part of his heart, to be his due for simply having been true; names and obligations fell away as he drew closer to the waiting one, whose memory of blue eyes met the memory of his brown ones, and whose hands clasped his own in the bond of recognition...

Embrace...fulfillment...peace...they were no longer on the mountain, nor even on the earth, but they had found that open space to be themselves, and to know the Truth of what they had always been, forever brothers, lovers, and friends.





Brilliant, moremojo!  This is perhaps the most moving thing I've ever read, and I thank you for writing and posting it.  I'm going to continue to write.  I think I owe it to Heath and to all of us to keep on.  I need to continue to celebrate the incredible love that I witnessed.  If even one of my stories can help a young (of even an older) gay man see that the way he loves is indeed beautiful, natural, and certainly nothing to be ashamed of, well, it is all worthwhile. 

I'll try to post a story tomorrow.  I must!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 24, 2008, 11:23:27 pm
So true, Dagi.  This is not the end.  Death changes things, but life still goes on.  In fact death makes way for new life and new growth.  The best way to honor Heath's life would be to let his contributions inspire us to create and try to make the world a better place.  I'm sure that Heath faced many heartachs in his life, and the pain may have crippled him, but he rose up and he touched us through his art in spite of whatever personal difficulties he faced.  Now it's our turn to make a contribution.  

Gary

Exactly, Gary!  I like to think of Heath being in a better place, watching over those he loves.  He is still with me!  How can someone like Heath ever really die?  He is alive just as long as he is remembered. 

My mom always said, "I wish poeple could will their talent to others after they die."  Heath is one of those rare individuals who was blessed with enormous gifts.  He will never die!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 24, 2008, 11:24:57 pm
To my dear friend Oscar,

I'm with you.  I won't watch the movie again.  I'm just distraught, and my grief is almost too much to bear right now.  I'm stunned at the depth of my feelings and I just don't know how to fix myself.  I have to work tomorrow and smile and put on a happy face for the clients.  If I can pull it off, it will take some brilliant acting on my part.  And I know what you mean, Oscar, about hope.  I'm in despair.

If only we could rewrite this terrible, tragic story, give it the happy ending we always try so hard to give Jack and Ennis here on your thread...

I really wish I was there with you now, Toycoon, to throw my arms around you and hold on for dear life.  I'm shaken to the core by this.  I wish I was not so far away and feeling so alone in my misery.  And I miss you, too, Oscar.



Spicey, thanks for sharing with us.  If you need help coping with Heath's death, we're here for you.  This is  very difficult time, but as Dagi said, we'll get through this!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 24, 2008, 11:26:17 pm
Beautiful, Scott. Thank you. In times like these I do believe we are going somewhere when we die. After all we all are part of the One, call it what ever you want.

Big hug, my friend.
Dagi

No, this is not the end.  Perhaps in some other lifetime we'll see Heath in the flesh. 
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 24, 2008, 11:27:38 pm
A big , big hug for my Jack with Ennis Family. I still feel numb, have only just begun to post some in the grieving thread, tried to push it all away. But today I could hardly think of anything else, saw the pictures of him and of his family before my inner eye all day long, even heard his voice.

The day will come when I can watch Brokeback Mountain again and be thankful for what Heath gave us with Ennis. Right now it's too painful to even think about it.

Together we will get through this! It's not the end. It's not. Heath wouldn't have wanted it either. Death doesn't make everything worthless.

{{{{Toycoon}}}}  {{{{Susie}}}}   {{{{Marie}}}}   {{{{Gary}}}}   {{{{Scott}}}}   {{{{cwby30}}}}   {{{{Spiceylife}}}}   {{{{Shasta}}}}


Dagi

Thanks for posting, Dagi!  It is so good to see us altogether here!  Thanks for the hugs!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 24, 2008, 11:29:01 pm
Thank you Dagi. So sweet.   {{{{{{{DAGI}}}}}}}

It's weird how we all grieve differently. I DO want to see Brokeback Mountain again. I want to have all Heath's movies and keep them close and watch them and remember him as the living vibrant force that he was. I want to see Matilda as she grows up and see how much she resembles him. It's heartbreaking -- oh what could have been! But Heath was among us in the world. I am so thankful for that.

Yet -- I understand the way Toycoon and Spicey feel too. I just know that the grief process is never the same. And for some it is maybe not even a process -- it may be perpetual.

{{{{{{{{{{I love you Brokie pals}}}}}}}}}}


My daughter and I are planning a Heath film festival soon.  It will keep him alive.  Besides, I never tire of looking at him!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 24, 2008, 11:29:45 pm
So true, Gary.

I'm sure that Heath faced many heartachs in his life, and the pain may have crippled him, but he rose up and he touched us through his art in spite of whatever personal difficulties he faced.

 {{{{{{{{Heath}}}}}}}

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on January 25, 2008, 04:59:05 am
{{{{{{{{{Jack with Ennis Family}}}}}}}}}}

I think of you guys.

Dagi  :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-* :-*
Title: Re: Journey's End
Post by: moremojo on January 25, 2008, 11:17:46 am
This is perhaps the most moving thing I've ever read, and I thank you for writing and posting it.  I'm going to continue to write.  I think I owe it to Heath and to all of us to keep on.  I need to continue to celebrate the incredible love that I witnessed.  If even one of my stories can help a young (of even an older) gay man see that the way he loves is indeed beautiful, natural, and certainly nothing to be ashamed of, well, it is all worthwhile.
I am honored to be in your presence, Marie.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: moremojo on January 25, 2008, 12:33:55 pm
Hugs to our sweetest Susie!  :-*
Title: Re: Journey's End
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 25, 2008, 06:45:56 pm
I am honored to be in your presence, Marie.

Same here, Babe!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 25, 2008, 06:47:01 pm
Hey Cherrub,  I hope you'll be able to continue to write, it would break all our hearts if you stopped.  :'(

I'm going to try ... perhaps it will help soothe my own aching heart.

Love Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif) 
 

I'm going to try, as well.  I think it'll be good for me!
Title: Re: Journey's End
Post by: Toycoon on January 25, 2008, 08:05:04 pm
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Strange how such grand stillness could contain this wonderful velocity, and how such velvety darkness could open up to reveal that golden, effulgent Light, which even now, as he somehow knew, was welcoming him Home...

Very lovely, Scott, and so soothing to read. I suppose all of our writings will take a more somber tone as a result of recent events. Maybe I should welcome the change in mood. Thank you for contributing so kindly. I know we all could use something to help ease us back to the world of the living but I'm not certain I'm ready yet...
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on January 25, 2008, 08:11:26 pm
I just picked up the latest issue of People magazine. It has a great picture of heath Ledger on the front. The part that breaks my heart is seeing the dates; 1979-2008 beside his name. It's absolutely terrible to see.
Title: Let's Take a Walk
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 26, 2008, 09:34:40 pm
Let's Take a Walk By Littlewing1957

“Been a long time, dad!”  It was Jenny Del-Mar Mills, sitting right next to her father on his over-stuffed sofa.  “Too long, baby,” Ennis answered as he took his youngest child’s hand in his.  Ennis studied his daughter.  The years had been kind to her.  She was very well dressed, and looked well fed.  She was also about 6 months along.  Ennis glanced at his child’s belly.  He couldn’t believe that he would soon have 4 grandchildren!  “How you feelin?”  Ennis asked her with great concern.  This child was not Jenny’s first, and her previous pregnancy had not been an easy one.  Ennis remembered being in the waiting room when Jenny delivered little Sanders.  His grandson barely made it into the world.  “I’m doing okay.” Jenny’s voice was mild.  “Doctor says I should have it easy this time around.”  Ennis smiled and nodded.  He was feeling better about everything.

Jenny looked around her father’s living room.  It was modest, but certainly a big step up from his trailer.  Jenny folded her hands over her belly and clasped them together.  She was as shy as her dad: never one to carry on a chatty conversation.  But there was really no need.  The silence between them was anything but awkward.  Where Ennis and Alma Jr. had a more vocal relationship, his dealings with Jenny were more cerebral, almost psychic.  It was not always so.  Jenny was a wanderer.  But when she met and married Graydon Mills, everything seemed to fall into place.  Ennis found himself walking his baby daughter down the aisle, and since then, he couldn’t get rid of her.  Ennis didn’t mind – he loved having her around.  But just last year Graydon’s job transferred him to Colorado, thus Jenny’s visits were less frequent.  Six months was longer than Jenny could take being away from her dad.  She had to see him, and brought her family along.  Graydon and little Sanders were visiting with Alma and Monroe. 

Ennis looked out the window at his neighborhood.  It was a beautiful spring afternoon.  The wind was high, but carried on it the scent of pine and flowers in bloom.  “Let’s take a walk, dad!” Jenny blurted, as though she had read his mind. “It is so nice outside!  Let’s go walk in the park and watch the children play.”  Ennis chuckled and rose from the couch.  “Let me buy you an ice cream?” He asked, as he pulled on his jacket.  “I would like that very much!” Jenny answered as she donned her sweater.  Ennis grabbed his keys from his small desk and gestured for his child.  He offered his arm, and they walked down to the park, not a word spoken.  No words needed.


Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on January 27, 2008, 12:56:42 pm
I just picked up the latest issue of People magazine. It has a great picture of heath Ledger on the front. The part that breaks my heart is seeing the dates; 1979-2008 beside his name. It's absolutely terrible to see.

 :( :( :(

{{{{{{toycoon}}}}}} Feeling any better today, sweetie?

I´ll read your last installment later, Marie,, right now I have a painting kid on my lap. :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on January 27, 2008, 01:24:04 pm
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{{{{{{toycoon}}}}}} Feeling any better today, sweetie?

Hello Dagi,
Actually, I am feeling a bit better today. I spoke to, of all people, BannerHill (from IMDb) last night. We had a nice, three hour chat. It's always wonderful to talk to another of the Broken. It made all the difference in the world. He reminded me that no matter what happens, we always have Brokeback Mountain. The mysteries and questions about the story are eternal and the sentiments will forever be etched into our psyches. We'll always have Brokeback Mountain, and we can thank Heath for that. Thank God for giving us Heath, even for just a little while.

Love and hope for everyone,
Toycoon
Title: Re: Let's Take a Walk
Post by: Toycoon on January 27, 2008, 01:28:05 pm
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“Let me buy you an ice cream?” He asked, as he pulled on his jacket.

You are so cute, Littlewing. The kids in your stories always seem to get ice cream. Too bad I'm lactose intollerant or I'd let you buy me an ice cream cone. Maybe, they have a 'frozen soy milk' parlor some place around there?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on January 27, 2008, 01:50:31 pm
Hello Dagi,
Actually, I am feeling a bit better today. I spoke to, of all people, BannerHill (from IMDb) last night. We had a nice, three hour chat. It's always wonderful to talk to another of the Broken. It made all the difference in the world. He reminded me that no matter what happens, we always have Brokeback Mountain. The mysteries and questions about the story are eternal and the sentiments will forever be etched into our psyches. We'll always have Brokeback Mountain, and we can thank Heath for that. Thank God for giving us Heath, even for just a little while.

Love and hope for everyone,
Toycoon

He's so right. But one has to be open for this truth, and as long as the pain is too fresh one isn't. Glad to hear you are doing a little better, my friend.  :)

Dagi
Title: Re: Let's Take a Walk
Post by: malina on January 27, 2008, 04:22:57 pm
Let's Take a Walk By Littlewing1957

“Been a long time, dad!”  It was Jenny Del-Mar Mills, sitting right next to her father on his over-stuffed sofa.  “Too long, baby,” Ennis answered as he took his youngest child’s hand in his.  Ennis studied his daughter.  The years had been kind to her.  She was very well dressed, and looked well fed.  She was also about 6 months along.  Ennis glanced at his child’s belly.  He couldn’t believe that he would soon have 4 grandchildren!  “How you feelin?”  Ennis asked her with great concern.  This child was not Jenny’s first, and her previous pregnancy had not been an easy one.  Ennis remembered being in the waiting room when Jenny delivered little Sanders.  His grandson barely made it into the world.  “I’m doing okay.” Jenny’s voice was mild.  “Doctor says I should have it easy this time around.”  Ennis smiled and nodded.  He was feeling better about everything.

Jenny looked around her father’s living room.  It was modest, but certainly a big step up from his trailer.  Jenny folded her hands over her belly and clasped them together.  She was as shy as her dad: never one to carry on a chatty conversation.  But there was really no need.  The silence between them was anything but awkward.  Where Ennis and Alma Jr. had a more vocal relationship, his dealings with Jenny were more cerebral, almost psychic.  It was not always so.  Jenny was a wanderer.  But when she met and married Graydon Mills, everything seemed to fall into place.  Ennis found himself walking his baby daughter down the aisle, and since then, he couldn’t get rid of her.  Ennis didn’t mind – he loved having her around.  But just last year Graydon’s job transferred him to Colorado, thus Jenny’s visits were less frequent.  Six months was longer than Jenny could take being away from her dad.  She had to see him, and brought her family along.  Graydon and little Sanders were visiting with Alma and Monroe. 

Ennis looked out the window at his neighborhood.  It was a beautiful spring afternoon.  The wind was high, but carried on it the scent of pine and flowers in bloom.  “Let’s take a walk, dad!” Jenny blurted, as though she had read his mind. “It is so nice outside!  Let’s go walk in the park and watch the children play.”  Ennis chuckled and rose from the couch.  “Let me buy you an ice cream?” He asked, as he pulled on his jacket.  “I would like that very much!” Jenny answered as she donned her sweater.  Ennis grabbed his keys from his small desk and gestured for his child.  He offered his arm, and they walked down to the park, not a word spoken.  No words needed.




So beautiful, littlewing. Somewhere, quietly, the life of these people just goes on.. just keeps progressing, as life does and must. Thank you for this beautiful reminder of that.
Title: Re: Let's Take a Walk
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 27, 2008, 06:58:35 pm
So beautiful, littlewing. Somewhere, quietly, the life of these people just goes on.. just keeps progressing, as life does and must. Thank you for this beautiful reminder of that.

Thanks, Malina!  It's so good to see you here.  I hope you'll stay awhile.  Stay forever!  I miss you!  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 27, 2008, 07:01:09 pm
Hello Dagi,
Actually, I am feeling a bit better today. I spoke to, of all people, BannerHill (from IMDb) last night. We had a nice, three hour chat. It's always wonderful to talk to another of the Broken. It made all the difference in the world. He reminded me that no matter what happens, we always have Brokeback Mountain. The mysteries and questions about the story are eternal and the sentiments will forever be etched into our psyches. We'll always have Brokeback Mountain, and we can thank Heath for that. Thank God for giving us Heath, even for just a little while.

Love and hope for everyone,
Toycoon

I'm glad you're feeling better, Honey!  BannerHill sent me a PM with his number.  I haven't had a chance to call, but may get to him tomorrow.  It is good to talk to people we know will understand. 
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 27, 2008, 07:01:56 pm
:( :( :(

{{{{{{toycoon}}}}}} Feeling any better today, sweetie?

I´ll read your last installment later, Marie,, right now I have a painting kid on my lap. :)

Thanks, Dagi!  How did the painting go?  :)
Title: Re: Let's Take a Walk
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 27, 2008, 07:03:36 pm
You are so cute, Littlewing. The kids in your stories always seem to get ice cream. Too bad I'm lactose intollerant or I'd let you buy me an ice cream cone. Maybe, they have a 'frozen soy milk' parlor some place around there?

I would love to buy you an ice cream.  It seems I've developed a lactose intolerance in my old age.  Dairy gives my poor old stomach a fit!  How are you with frozen yogurt?  :)
Title: Re: Let's Take a Walk
Post by: Toycoon on January 27, 2008, 07:46:32 pm
I would love to buy you an ice cream.  It seems I've developed a lactose intolerance in my old age.  Dairy gives my poor old stomach a fit!  How are you with frozen yogurt?  :)

Sorry Miss Littlewing, can't have no frozen yogurt neither.  :( Oh well, it keeps me slim!
Title: Re: Let's Take a Walk
Post by: Dagi on January 28, 2008, 04:51:43 am
Let's Take a Walk By Littlewing1957

“Been a long time, dad!”  It was Jenny Del-Mar Mills, sitting right next to her father on his over-stuffed sofa.  “Too long, baby,” Ennis answered as he took his youngest child’s hand in his.  Ennis studied his daughter.  The years had been kind to her.  She was very well dressed, and looked well fed.  She was also about 6 months along.  Ennis glanced at his child’s belly.  He couldn’t believe that he would soon have 4 grandchildren!  “How you feelin?”  Ennis asked her with great concern.  This child was not Jenny’s first, and her previous pregnancy had not been an easy one.  Ennis remembered being in the waiting room when Jenny delivered little Sanders.  His grandson barely made it into the world.  “I’m doing okay.” Jenny’s voice was mild.  “Doctor says I should have it easy this time around.”  Ennis smiled and nodded.  He was feeling better about everything.

Jenny looked around her father’s living room.  It was modest, but certainly a big step up from his trailer.  Jenny folded her hands over her belly and clasped them together.  She was as shy as her dad: never one to carry on a chatty conversation.  But there was really no need.  The silence between them was anything but awkward.  Where Ennis and Alma Jr. had a more vocal relationship, his dealings with Jenny were more cerebral, almost psychic.  It was not always so.  Jenny was a wanderer.  But when she met and married Graydon Mills, everything seemed to fall into place.  Ennis found himself walking his baby daughter down the aisle, and since then, he couldn’t get rid of her.  Ennis didn’t mind – he loved having her around.  But just last year Graydon’s job transferred him to Colorado, thus Jenny’s visits were less frequent.  Six months was longer than Jenny could take being away from her dad.  She had to see him, and brought her family along.  Graydon and little Sanders were visiting with Alma and Monroe. 

Ennis looked out the window at his neighborhood.  It was a beautiful spring afternoon.  The wind was high, but carried on it the scent of pine and flowers in bloom.  “Let’s take a walk, dad!” Jenny blurted, as though she had read his mind. “It is so nice outside!  Let’s go walk in the park and watch the children play.”  Ennis chuckled and rose from the couch.  “Let me buy you an ice cream?” He asked, as he pulled on his jacket.  “I would like that very much!” Jenny answered as she donned her sweater.  Ennis grabbed his keys from his small desk and gestured for his child.  He offered his arm, and they walked down to the park, not a word spoken.  No words needed.




What a beautiful scene, Marie. Although it hurts imagening Ennis growing old knowing that Heath never will.

The painting? There was more colour on the table than on the paper, but who cares... :)

Dagi
Title: Re: Let's Take a Walk
Post by: malina on January 28, 2008, 05:35:30 am
Thanks, Malina!  It's so good to see you here.  I hope you'll stay awhile.  Stay forever!  I miss you!  :)

I would love to stay forever! I miss all of you.  :(
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on January 28, 2008, 08:19:23 am
Hi Malina,

you don't know me, but I've read some of your stories (and other posts), and loved them, and it would be very nice to see you here sometimes!

Dagi
Title: Re: Let's Take a Walk
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 28, 2008, 11:12:06 pm
Sorry Miss Littlewing, can't have no frozen yogurt neither.  :( Oh well, it keeps me slim!

I wish I had your resolve!  I try to stay away from dairy, but I'm not having much luck!  I'll buy you a diet coke instead!  :)
Title: Re: Let's Take a Walk
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 28, 2008, 11:13:14 pm
I would love to stay forever! I miss all of you.  :(

Stay! Please stay!  We love you!  :-*
Title: Re: Let's Take a Walk
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 28, 2008, 11:14:07 pm
What a beautiful scene, Marie. Although it hurts imagening Ennis growing old knowing that Heath never will.

The painting? There was more colour on the table than on the paper, but who cares... :)

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi!

It sounds like you have a budding artist on your hands!  :)
Title: Right 71
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 28, 2008, 11:28:35 pm
Right 71 By Littlewing1957

Rocky sidled over to Ennis, certain that the sheer beauty of her appearance would entice him, and prepare him for things to come.  Ennis watched as Rocky approached, and felt a pang of guilt.  He thought back to that night when he and Rocky were naked and writhing and ready.  But after a few ardent kisses and caresses, Ennis found himself pulling back. “I just can’t do it!  Ennis exclaimed as he released her.  “I have to get to know a lady before I make love to her.”  Rocky was silent.  Ennis watched as what looked like shame and humiliation colored Rocky’s pretty face when he rose and began to dress himself.  He had to avert his eyes, couldn’t bear to watch as Rocky lay there, naked, panting, and refused! “Suit yourself!” Rocky whispered, after a moment.  She eased her nude body from the floor and dressed.  Ennis watched her as she prepared a drink for him, almost as if to say there were no hard feelings.  Ennis placed a hand on Rocky’s shoulder as she drew near.   He was not particularly attracted to her.  He couldn’t force the image of Jack from his mind.  Every step of the way, Rocky was nothing more than a female body bearing Jack’s face.  Ennis couldn’t stand it!  But Rocky was confident that in time she would have Ennis.  She always got the guy!

“Stay with me until you get work,” Rocky offered as she sipped her drink.  “It’ll be easy for you this way.  I can ask around town, if you just tell me what sort of work you’re interested in.”  Ennis didn’t want to stay with Rocky.  He wanted to be with Jack, and couldn’t image why he took off without him.  Ennis was mentally kicking himself in the rear for pulling such a stupid stunt.  He couldn’t think of a way back to the Twist ranch, because of the way he left things.  He had no other recourse but to stay with Rocky until he figured a way out of the mess he created.  “I’ll stay awhile, Rocky,” Ennis whispered so softly that Rocky barely heard.  “Okay, then,” she whispered back.  “We’ll worry about work tomorrow.  But for now, how about escorting me to the dance?”  Ennis forgot about the dance.  He couldn’t think of a way out of taking her, so he agreed to go.

Rocky drove Ennis to a tailor’s shop downtown.  She wanted the distinction of being the only woman at the dance whose date sported a custom made tux.  Not that any one would know that Ennis’ suit was made special, but she would know!  Rocky introduced Ennis to Bela, the German tailor who owned the shop.  Ennis felt weird when he was measured for the suit.  He never had anything custom made for him before.  Hell, Ennis never even owned a suit bought off the rack.  It was all so new to him, and he wasn’t sure if he liked it!  Rocky paid extra to have the tux finished in a few days, and they were out and on to the florist for a lapel bloom for Ennis and a wrist corsage for Rocky.  Ennis didn’t know how much Rocky was shelling out, and he hoped she didn’t feel entitled, that she was buying him.  Ennis placed the gloomy thoughts from his mind.  He reasoned that Rocky was doing what she wanted.  A modern woman had every right to pay up front, especially since she is the one who wants a date for the dance.  Ennis vowed to pay his share when he was able.  He couldn’t allow Rocky to shoulder the burden of the entire expense.

The night of the dance Ennis dressed in Rocky’s spare bedroom.  He was so nervous that he had to drink a few shots of whiskey to calm his nerves.  As he put on a gold-plated cuff link, Ennis wondered who would be at the dance, and what they would think when he arrived with Rocky on his arm.  He worried about his manners, or lack of.  Ennis’ stomach hurt.  His hands shook as he slipped on his black loafers.  “Ready, En?” It was Rocky.  She stood in the doorway and almost doubled over when Ennis rose from the bed.  He was a dreamboat in a black tux, black shiny loafers, a white scarf draped over his breast.  His hair was slicked back and glistening.  Ennis faced Rocky and was unprepared for the beauty.  Rocky was a knockout in a lavender Valentino gown; a white wrap draped around her bare shoulders.  She handed Ennis her wrist corsage and smiled as he placed it on her right wrist.  Her left wrist was ablaze with a diamond bracelet.  “Uhh, yeah I’m ready,” Ennis mumbled as he offered Rocky a trembling arm.  Rocky noticed that Ennis seemed nervous.  “Look, Ennis,” she soothed.  “Everything is going to be just fine.”  She rubbed his forearm tenderly.  “Let’s just go, have a good time.  You look fierce!  Any woman would be proud to be seen with you.”  Ennis' crimsom blush was very becoming.  He walked Rocky out to her car and they began the drive to the dance.


Title: Re: Right (71)
Post by: cwby30 on January 29, 2008, 12:30:01 pm

Mornin'.

Well, I am so looking forward to this dance!!  The tension will be immense, and can hardly wait to see what Jack and Ennis do to each other, after they argue, outside, in the moonlight, crisp air, breath showing as they face each other, and then ....

This time, Rocky better not get what she wants!  At least Ennis knows what he wants, too, and just needs the right way to get it.  Same for Jack. 

Thanks again. 
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on January 29, 2008, 02:35:21 pm
Marie, make her go away, please! I don´t like picturing Ennis with a woman... :(
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 29, 2008, 07:36:56 pm
Marie, make her go away, please! I don´t like picturing Ennis with a woman... :(

You got it, Baby!  I can't stand either one of them with women!
Title: Re: Let's Take a Walk
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 29, 2008, 07:38:21 pm
I love Diet Coke.  I buy 16 oz bottles and put them in the freezer just long enough for them to get a little icy.   :D

Aww, Gary, we'll get along just fine!!!!  :-*
Title: Re: Right 71
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 29, 2008, 07:39:20 pm
What an awkward situation Ennis is in with Rocky.  I felt for both of them when Ennis found he couldn't make love to her.  But now we have both Ennis and Jack going to the same dance.

Great installment, Littlewing.  I'm looking forward to the next one.

Gary

Thanks, Gary!  Chapter 72 is forthcoming, and I can't wait to write chapter 73!
Title: Re: Let's Take a Walk
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 29, 2008, 07:40:25 pm
Very tender and loving scene between father and daughter, Littlewing.  Thanks for writing about Jenny.  We don't hear from her much.  I love the idea of Ennis enjoying the comforts of his family.

Gary

I had to do it!  I'll be writing more about Ennis and his kids.  Not to mention Ennis with Jack!  ;)
Title: Nap Time
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 29, 2008, 11:03:21 pm
During these uncertain times, my thoughts turn to dads and moms and daughters.  This is dedicated to Heath, Mathilda and Michelle.

Nap Time By Littlewing1957 


Ennis was watching his girls while Alma pulled an extra shift at the grocers.  Jenny was asleep on his lap while Alma Jr. Played quietly with a doll at his feet.  Alma left a dinner of mac and cheese and hamburger in the oven, while a fresh baked apple pie cooled on the windowsill.  Ennis kissed Jenny’s tiny forehead and sighed. He was very content.  Ennis hugged his youngest closer and planted another kiss on her tiny cheek.

Alma Jr. watched her father cuddle her baby sister and decided she wanted a little of that.  She flung her doll down and pulled at her father’s pant leg.  Ennis looked down at his oldest and grinned.  “But I only have room for one of you!” Ennis laughed.  Alma Jr’s face darkened.  “But daddy, I wanna sit on your lap!”  Ennis winked at her.  He couldn’t bear to tease her.  Both knew that his lap was large enough to hold two small girls at once.

Pulling Alma Jr. from the floor was not a problem.  She seemed as weighless as one of her dolls.  Ennis sat his eldest next to her sleeping sister and kissed her hand.  Alma Jr. kissed her father’s cheek in return, and settled in.  Soon, all three were asleep.  When Alma returned from her shift at the store, she was bone weary and on edge.  But when she saw her husband asleep with their daughters on his lap, her shoulders relaxed.  She tiptoed over to her family and quietly kissed all three.  She decided to let them sleep.  Dinner would keep.
Title: Re: Nap Time
Post by: Toycoon on January 30, 2008, 10:51:49 am
I don't where you manage to pull all of these lovely stories out of, Littlewing. It must be your beautiful mind!
Thanks for that wonderfully, serene portrait of a loving father and his daughters.
Title: Re: Nap Time
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 30, 2008, 01:57:55 pm
Very beautiful and loving scene, Littlewing.  Thanks.

Gary

Thanks, Gary! 
Title: Re: Nap Time
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 30, 2008, 01:58:54 pm
I don't where you manage to pull all of these lovely stories out of, Littlewing. It must be your beautiful mind!
Thanks for that wonderfully, serene portrait of a loving father and his daughters.

Your kind words are so appreciated!  I really needed to see this, Toycoon!  You have made my day!
Title: Re: Nap Time
Post by: Dagi on January 30, 2008, 06:50:30 pm
During these uncertain times, my thoughts turn to dads and moms and daughters.  This is dedicated to Heath, Mathilda and Michelle.

Nap Time By Littlewing1957 


Ennis was watching his girls while Alma pulled an extra shift at the grocers.  Jenny was asleep on his lap while Alma Jr. Played quietly with a doll at his feet.  Alma left a dinner of mac and cheese and hamburger in the oven, while a fresh baked apple pie cooled on the windowsill.  Ennis kissed Jenny’s tiny forehead and sighed. He was very content.  Ennis hugged his youngest closer and planted another kiss on her tiny cheek.

Alma Jr. watched her father cuddle her baby sister and decided she wanted a little of that.  She flung her doll down and pulled at her father’s pant leg.  Ennis looked down at his oldest and grinned.  “But I only have room for one of you!” Ennis laughed.  Alma Jr’s face darkened.  “But daddy, I wanna sit on your lap!”  Ennis winked at her.  He couldn’t bear to tease her.  Both knew that his lap was large enough to hold two small girls at once.

Pulling Alma Jr. from the floor was not a problem.  She seemed as weighless as one of her dolls.  Ennis sat his eldest next to her sleeping sister and kissed her hand.  Alma Jr. kissed her father’s cheek in return, and settled in.  Soon, all three were asleep.  When Alma returned from her shift at the store, she was bone weary and on edge.  But when she saw her husband asleep with their daughters on his lap, her shoulders relaxed.  She tiptoed over to her family and quietly kissed all three.  She decided to let them sleep.  Dinner would keep.


what a heartwarming and peaceful scene, Littlewing. You have a very giving heart. Thank you for this little piece!

Dagi
Title: Re: Nap Time
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 30, 2008, 07:46:14 pm
what a heartwarming and peaceful scene, Littlewing. You have a very giving heart. Thank you for this little piece!

Dagi

Thanks for your kind word, Babe!
Title: Re: Nap Time
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 30, 2008, 07:46:45 pm
Ah, what a lovely tender moment littlewing  :-*

Susie  :D

Thanks, SusieBaby!
Title: Re: My Angel
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 30, 2008, 07:48:57 pm
My Angel by Susiebell


Jack flopped back onto the grass shielding his face from the blistering heat of the sun, his head tilted to the side, squinting through one eye, observing his lover emerging from the lake; lean muscular torso glistening with droplets of water, hypnotic smile forming a row of sexy dimples across his cheeks.

As Ennis dropped to his knees and leaned over to plant a soft kiss on Jack’s lips, the rays of sunlight shone like a golden halo through his blond curls.

“My angel" Jack uttered, gathering Ennis up into his arms, laughing, making love, and dozing off to sleep in the glorious warmth of the afternoon sun.




Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

ps.... there you go toycoon ... 3 sentences!  ;D


SusieBaby, this is a rare treat!  So very beautiful, very moving.  It doesn't get any better than this for our boys!  Thanks so much for sharing this lovely moment with us!
Title: Right (72) by Toycoon
Post by: Toycoon on January 31, 2008, 12:22:08 am
Right (72) by Toycoon

When they got to the dance, Jack parked the old GMC in the dirt lot across the road from the hall. Jack jumped out, opened the door for Katie and helped her down out of the truck. Jack offered her his arm and Katie happily obliged. They strolled over to the hall and as they approached, Jack could hear the familiar strains of the local cowboy band, setting the atmosphere for the winter celebration.

The inside of the hall was decorated with silver tinsel garlands, enormous red bows and green paper streamers. Strands of tiny, multicolored lights hung just above the makeshift bar in the corner of the room, next to the upright piano. Jack and Katie stood in the doorway taking in the holiday decorations before going all the way inside. It was early so there were not many people at the dance yet. They walked over to a small group of young women that Katie spotted by the punch bowl, joined them then stood watching the elegant guests arrving.

"Katie! You look so adorable!" squawked one perky brunette dressed in a sparkly rose satin dress. She dipped the plastic ladle in the bowl and handed Katie a cup of the fruit punch. Turning to Jack, she smiled and bobbed her pretty head from side to side, "And who do we have here?" Jack grinned and tipped his hat. "Uh, the name's Jack Twist, ma'am," stated Jack. "Well, hello there Jack Twist. I'm Peggy Ann. I went to high school with Katie, handsome. You from around here?" Before he could answer, she turned her attention to the couple walking in the door. Her eyes darted back and forth as she studied the couple posed in the doorway of the hall. She motioned to another girl, Marjorie, standing by her side and whispered, "There's that girl I was telling you about, she's a weirdo. Do you know what I'm talkin' about? And who on earth is that she's with? Is that Alan Sims? He's another story. I heard he's a queer now. Bet she's a queer now, too." Jack turned towards the doorway to catch sight of a plain looking brunette girl in thick glasses wearing a modest, peach colored dress, arm and arm with, of all people, his childhood friend, Alan. He was dressed in a white tuxedo with a yellow rose in the lapel. Jack really did not want to talk to Alan tonight, so he lit up a cigarette and tried to blend into the background as much as he could manage. Peggy Ann continued her running social commentary, "Look, there's that colored boy, lives on the outside a' town. I hear his family moved here from Milwaukee 'cause someone was after him, ya know, wantin' ta kill 'im, for dating their white daughter. Can you imagine? All I know is that feller better not try nothin' like that around here." She whispered the next part. "You know what would happen."

"I'd go out with him in a minute, he's a doll!" Katie snickered tossing her auburn ponytail. All of the other girls did a double take, hardly believing what they were hearing. Peggy Ann looked straight at Katie. "Katie Mae! It's a good thing yer daddy ain't around to hear you say that! Heaven's sake! Bet he's turning over in his grave right now!" Peggy Ann craned her neck to see the next couple in the door. "Look Katie, there's your girlfriend, Raquel. She is so pretty, she looks like Marilyn Monroe. What an adorable dress! Ooh, I wonder who's that tall, handsome cowboy she with? Never seen him around these parts before."
Title: Re: My Angel
Post by: Toycoon on January 31, 2008, 12:26:13 am
My Angel by Susiebell


Jack flopped back onto the grass shielding his face from the blistering heat of the sun, his head tilted to the side, squinting through one eye, observing his lover emerging from the lake; lean muscular torso glistening with droplets of water, hypnotic smile forming a row of sexy dimples across his cheeks.

As Ennis dropped to his knees and leaned over to plant a soft kiss on Jack’s lips, the rays of sunlight shone like a golden halo through his blond curls.

“My angel" Jack uttered, gathering Ennis up into his arms, laughing, making love, and dozing off to sleep in the glorious warmth of the afternoon sun.




Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

ps.... there you go toycoon ... 3 sentences!  ;D


SusieBell! I can't believe how wonderful this is! It's like candy. So beautiful to read. And three sentences yet. I'm so glad you're back!
Title: Re: Right (72)
Post by: cwby30 on January 31, 2008, 02:31:53 am
Evenin', Toy. 

Well, think it's #72 on the hit parade, but haven't gone back to review my numbering. 

Anyway, can just see the Winter Dance, something out of 'Footloose'.  The stage is set, Jack, Ennis, Alan and the girls, ripe for a showdown.  Just hope Ennis can get past his inner self-consciousness and lack of self worth.  He's a great person, just didn't have the support needed as a youngster to mature into the great man his can be, and needs someone to help him mature do that - one Jack Twist.

Peggy is interesting, always someone like her in town, every generation.  She'll grow up to marry the man who becomes the mayor, and become the doyenne, the keeper of all things right and wrong, just ask her and even if you don't she'll tell you, until she comes up against a grown-up Raquel or Rachael. 

Like where this is going now, having the two of them meeting up and having the chance to clear the air between them... unless... Hmmm.... Damn... It's time they got back together and stayed there, even if it means heading out on their own for good.  Still like the idea of the Dakotas. 

Thanks again.
Title: Re: My Angel
Post by: malina on January 31, 2008, 01:14:40 pm
My Angel by Susiebell


Jack flopped back onto the grass shielding his face from the blistering heat of the sun, his head tilted to the side, squinting through one eye, observing his lover emerging from the lake; lean muscular torso glistening with droplets of water, hypnotic smile forming a row of sexy dimples across his cheeks.

As Ennis dropped to his knees and leaned over to plant a soft kiss on Jack’s lips, the rays of sunlight shone like a golden halo through his blond curls.

“My angel" Jack uttered, gathering Ennis up into his arms, laughing, making love, and dozing off to sleep in the glorious warmth of the afternoon sun.




Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

ps.... there you go toycoon ... 3 sentences!  ;D


Susie... this is so beautiful. It's so surreal, and yet in a really strange way almost more real.. reading these stories after Heath's death. It's like they really are continuing their lives, somewhere. It's very soothing. I love the image of Ennis as an angel, because .. he is.
Title: Re: Afterglow
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 01, 2008, 12:04:46 am
Afterglow by Susiebell



The cool night air breathed gently through the tent flap onto two hot sweaty bodies, naked and exhausted.

With his heartbeat slowly returning to normal, Ennis gazed over at Jack, who was now lying on his back, heat visibly rising from his heaving chest, cheeks flushed red, lips pink and swollen.

He closed his eyes, skin still tingling with Jack’s touch, mouth still awash with Jack’s taste, nostrils still filled with Jack’s smell, body still aching for more; he reached in the dark for his lover….   





Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



This is what I'm talkin' about!  What a hot, steamy, sensuous moment, SusieBaby!  I'm caught up in the heat of it all.  This takes my breath away!  Thanks so much!  :)
Title: Re: Afterglow
Post by: Toycoon on February 01, 2008, 12:35:30 am
Quote
The cool night air breathed gently through the tent flap onto two hot sweaty bodies, naked and exhausted.

With his heartbeat slowly returning to normal, Ennis gazed over at Jack, who was now lying on his back, heat visibly rising from his heaving chest, cheeks flushed red, lips pink and swollen.

He closed his eyes, skin still tingling with Jack’s touch, mouth still awash with Jack’s taste, nostrils still filled with Jack’s smell, body still aching for more; he reached in the dark for his lover…. 

Susiebell, my little vixen. This is achingly sexy! Chests, cheeks flushed and swollen... Hotter'n heck!

P. S. I am so glad you're over your slump.
Title: Right 73
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 01, 2008, 02:03:29 am
Right 73 By Littlewing1957

When Raquel entered the hall on the arm of Ennis Del Mar, all talk stopped.  The pair looked just like a couple headed down the red carpet to a movie opening.  Ennis and Raquel were all Hollywood!  Jack saw Ennis, and almost as a reflex, his hands covered his chest.  Ennis was so heart-achingly handsome that Jack was certain his ticker would cease to beat at the sight of him.  Not only that, Ennis’ appearance was so unexpected.  And he was with that bitch Rocky, no less!  Jack looked Rocky over for good measure.  She could put Jane Fonda to shame that night!  Ennis seemed oblivious to the commotion he caused.  He simply walked in with Rocky on his arm, a shy smile on his handsome face.

Jack didn’t know what to do.  He didn’t want to confront Ennis.  He didn’t want to make a scene.  Jack moved swiftly to the other side of the hall and turned his back to the door.  “Hey, Jack, how’s tricks?”  Jack jumped at the sound of his name and turned in the direction of the person doing the calling.  It was Alan Sims.  He was standing by the banquet table, a tall drink in his hand.  Beside him was a plain Jane in a rosy pink colored dress.

Raquel pulled Ennis over to the table where Katie was sipping at a glass of punch while mingling with a few of her girlfriends.  “Rocky, dawhhhling,” Katie drawled.  She air kissed her friend on both cheeks and turned to Ennis.  “Well, who have we here?” Katie asked as she looked Ennis up and down.  “What are you talking about, girl,” Rocky laughed as she took Ennis’ hand.  “You remember Ennis Del Mar, Jack’s friend?”  “Wha..?” Katie was barely able to speak.  “I swear I didn’t recognize you, Ennis!” She began, incredulous.  “Why, you look like a celebrity.  You clean up real nice and shiny, you know that?”  Ennis lowered his head.  The crimson flush returned.  “Thank you kindly, Katie,” was all that Ennis could manage.  “Ahem!” It was Peggy Ann.  Katie jumped to attention. “Oh where are my manners?  Ennis, this is Peggy Ann and Marjorie!”  Ennis and Katie’s friends exchanged pleasantries.  Peggy Ann studied Ennis as she handed him a glass of punch.  “Well, what do you do, Mr. Ennis Del Mar?”  But before Ennis could answer, the band struck up a funky, country version of Aretha Franklin’s Respect.  Katie, Rocky and the other two women looked at each other and in unison shouted, “heeeyyyy!” "That’s my song, Ennis!” Rocky shouted above the din.  She gyrated suggestively to the music and pulled at Ennis’ arm.  “C’mon let’s dance,” Rocky coaxed.  Ennis reluctantly led her to the dance floor and moved with the crowd to the lively tune. 

Jack watched as Ennis did his best to lead with Rocky on the dance floor.  He looked to Alan and his date, suddenly wishing that he was somewhere, anywhere else.  He had no desire to talk to Alan, but his date might come in handy.  “You wanna dance?” Jack asked Alan’s date.  Her name was Comfort, and she reached a delicate arm out to Jack.  Alan dismissed the pair and turned to the banquet table.  He would deal with Jack later.  Jack needed to get closer to Ennis.  He couldn’t image why, but he just needed to get a good look at him.  Comfort would help him do it.  Jack and Comfort moved over to the dance floor and fell in with the crowd.  Comfort proved to be a decent dancer.  Jack made an effort to keep up with her.  Ennis was on the far side of the floor doing his best to make Rocky proud.  But he was very awkward.  No one seemed to notice.  When Ennis looked over Rocky’s shoulder for a second, he spotted Jack dancing with a young lady, and he had to admit, Jack was looking mighty fine!  His features softened when he saw his friend.  Ennis wasn’t at all surprised to see Jack.  He had every hope that Jack would be at the dance.  He pulled Rocky close to him and moved her around the dance floor, closer and closer to Comfort and Jack.


Title: Re: My Angel
Post by: Dagi on February 02, 2008, 11:21:04 am
My Angel by Susiebell


Jack flopped back onto the grass shielding his face from the blistering heat of the sun, his head tilted to the side, squinting through one eye, observing his lover emerging from the lake; lean muscular torso glistening with droplets of water, hypnotic smile forming a row of sexy dimples across his cheeks.

As Ennis dropped to his knees and leaned over to plant a soft kiss on Jack’s lips, the rays of sunlight shone like a golden halo through his blond curls.

“My angel" Jack uttered, gathering Ennis up into his arms, laughing, making love, and dozing off to sleep in the glorious warmth of the afternoon sun.




Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

ps.... there you go toycoon ... 3 sentences!  ;D


Mmm Susie, that's what it's all about, hm? Our boys being happy together...what a beautiful picture you are painting here! Thanks so much!

Dagi
Title: Re: Right (72) by Toycoon
Post by: Dagi on February 02, 2008, 06:43:08 pm
Right (72) by Toycoon

 Ooh, I wonder who's that tall, handsome cowboy she with? Never seen him around these parts before."

Wonder who that might be.... ;D I guess I had better read on!
Title: Re: Afterglow
Post by: Dagi on February 02, 2008, 06:47:33 pm
Afterglow by Susiebell



The cool night air breathed gently through the tent flap onto two hot sweaty bodies, naked and exhausted.

With his heartbeat slowly returning to normal, Ennis gazed over at Jack, who was now lying on his back, heat visibly rising from his heaving chest, cheeks flushed red, lips pink and swollen.

He closed his eyes, skin still tingling with Jack's touch, mouth still awash with Jack's taste, nostrils still filled with Jack's smell, body still aching for more; he reached in the dark for his lover….   





Susie (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)



Meant to quote my favorite line....but all of them are my favorite lines!  :laugh:  Nice hot little scene, Susiebell, it's great that you got back into the swing of things...now all we are waiting for is a Tyler and Danny story, huh guys?  ;D

Dagi
Title: Re: Right 73
Post by: Dagi on February 02, 2008, 06:55:51 pm
Right 73 By Littlewing1957

When Raquel entered the hall on the arm of Ennis Del Mar, all talk stopped.  The pair looked just like a couple headed down the red carpet to a movie opening.  Ennis and Raquel were all Hollywood!  Jack saw Ennis, and almost as a reflex, his hands covered his chest.  Ennis was so heart-achingly handsome that Jack was certain his ticker would cease to beat at the sight of him.  Not only that, Ennis’ appearance was so unexpected.  And he was with that bitch Rocky, no less!  Jack looked Rocky over for good measure.  She could put Jane Fonda to shame that night!  Ennis seemed oblivious to the commotion he caused.  He simply walked in with Rocky on his arm, a shy smile on his handsome face.

Jack didn’t know what to do.  He didn’t want to confront Ennis.  He didn’t want to make a scene.  Jack moved swiftly to the other side of the hall and turned his back to the door.  “Hey, Jack, how’s tricks?”  Jack jumped at the sound of his name and turned in the direction of the person doing the calling.  It was Alan Sims.  He was standing by the banquet table, a tall drink in his hand.  Beside him was a plain Jane in a rosy pink colored dress.

Raquel pulled Ennis over to the table where Katie was sipping at a glass of punch while mingling with a few of her girlfriends.  “Rocky, dawhhhling,” Katie drawled.  She air kissed her friend on both cheeks and turned to Ennis.  “Well, who have we here?” Katie asked as she looked Ennis up and down.  “What are you talking about, girl,” Rocky laughed as she took Ennis’ hand.  “You remember Ennis Del Mar, Jack’s friend?”  “Wha..?” Katie was barely able to speak.  “I swear I didn’t recognize you, Ennis!” She began, incredulous.  “Why, you look like a celebrity.  You clean up real nice and shiny, you know that?”  Ennis lowered his head.  The crimson flush returned.  “Thank you kindly, Katie,” was all that Ennis could manage.  “Ahem!” It was Peggy Ann.  Katie jumped to attention. “Oh where are my manners?  Ennis, this is Peggy Ann and Marjorie!”  Ennis and Katie’s friends exchanged pleasantries.  Peggy Ann studied Ennis as she handed him a glass of punch.  “Well, what do you do, Mr. Ennis Del Mar?”  But before Ennis could answer, the band struck up a funky, country version of Aretha Franklin’s Respect.  Katie, Rocky and the other two women looked at each other and in unison shouted, “heeeyyyy!” "That’s my song, Ennis!” Rocky shouted above the din.  She gyrated suggestively to the music and pulled at Ennis’ arm.  “C’mon let’s dance,” Rocky coaxed.  Ennis reluctantly led her to the dance floor and moved with the crowd to the lively tune. 

Jack watched as Ennis did his best to lead with Rocky on the dance floor.  He looked to Alan and his date, suddenly wishing that he was somewhere, anywhere else.  He had no desire to talk to Alan, but his date might come in handy.  “You wanna dance?” Jack asked Alan’s date.  Her name was Comfort, and she reached a delicate arm out to Jack.  Alan dismissed the pair and turned to the banquet table.  He would deal with Jack later.  Jack needed to get closer to Ennis.  He couldn’t image why, but he just needed to get a good look at him.  Comfort would help him do it.  Jack and Comfort moved over to the dance floor and fell in with the crowd.  Comfort proved to be a decent dancer.  Jack made an effort to keep up with her.  Ennis was on the far side of the floor doing his best to make Rocky proud.  But he was very awkward.  No one seemed to notice.  When Ennis looked over Rocky’s shoulder for a second, he spotted Jack dancing with a young lady, and he had to admit, Jack was looking mighty fine!  His features softened when he saw his friend.  Ennis wasn’t at all surprised to see Jack.  He had every hope that Jack would be at the dance.  He pulled Rocky close to him and moved her around the dance floor, closer and closer to Comfort and Jack.




So Ennis and Jack are moving towards each other. Phew, it was about time.  ;D

I knew a girl in Bolivia whose name was Consuelo, which means comfort. The girl's mother had died during the delivery, and she surely was a comfort to her daddy.

Thanks Marie and Toycoon, the tension is building up!  :D

Dagi
Title: Re: Right 73
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 03, 2008, 01:18:56 am
So Ennis and Jack are moving towards each other. Phew, it was about time.  ;D

I knew a girl in Bolivia whose name was Consuelo, which means comfort. The girl's mother had died during the delivery, and she surely was a comfort to her daddy.

Thanks Marie and Toycoon, the tension is building up!  :D

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi!  The tension is building.  You won't be disappointed!
Title: Re: My Angel
Post by: malina on February 03, 2008, 06:26:04 am
Ah thank you so much Malina ... you're so lovely!  :-*  I have missed you you know... and your delicious stories (oooh they were like sinking into a pool of melted chocolate!)

So nice to see you here sweetie!

Love Susie  :D

I've missed you too!  :-*
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: malina on February 03, 2008, 07:01:59 am
Hi Malina,

you don't know me, but I've read some of your stories (and other posts), and loved them, and it would be very nice to see you here sometimes!

Dagi

Hi Dagi! I do remember you, from way back when on IMDB, and I've seen you here, too, the little that I've been here. I've had such a long break from writing stories that I don't know if I can anymore, but I will come and hang out. Thank you for the welcome.

xo m.
Title: Trust
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 03, 2008, 09:05:20 pm
Trust By Littlewing1957

Ennis trusted Jack.  More than anyone else, Ennis trusted Jack with his very life.  From the first time they made wicked, steamy love in a tent up on Brokeback, to the time almost 20 years later when they still made love, Ennis knew he could trust Jack.

It was not a one way street.  Ennis couldn’t articulate it, but he knew that he loved Jack and that he would kill for him.  He would die for him.  Jack knew it, as well.  The knowledge kept them whole.  It bonded them for life.

One Saturday afternoon up in Don Wroe’s cabin, Ennis and Jack were snowed in.  There was not much else to do but eat, play cards and watch the granules of snow blanket the earth.  After a hearty lunch of fried bologna sandwiches and mushroom soup, Jack was feeling randy.  He wanted so much to try something different, but wasn’t sure if Ennis would be receptive.  “I want to try something new, Cowboy, something that may be a bit painful at first.  Will you let me try?”  Ennis smiled, as he was not the least bit put off or frightened.  “Whatever you want, Jack,” Ennis whispered.  “I trust you.”  Jack sighed happily and smiled warmly.  He offered his hand to his lover and led him into the master bedroom.




Title: Re: Trust
Post by: Toycoon on February 03, 2008, 10:59:02 pm
Quote
“I want to try something new, Cowboy, something that may be a bit painful at first.

Just what are you suggesting here, Littlewing, you nasty thing!
Title: Right 74 by Toycoon
Post by: Toycoon on February 04, 2008, 01:53:27 am
Right 74 by Toycoon

Jack and his partner, Comfort, spun around the dance floor to the strains of the country band's tribute to self esteem, "Respect" as Ennis watched the pair intently over Raquel's left shoulder. He didn't realize it at first but Ennis had nearly come to a complete stop, he was so captivated watching his handsome friend dancing with another woman. Ennis felt a firm tap on his arm and turned to see who it was. A brawny fellow with a boyish face and closely cropped, blond hair motioned that he wanted to cut in on their dance. Ennis was surprised at first, even slightly annoyed but quietly relinquished his date to the stranger. Raquel seemed to recognize the young man, Leroy, so she smiled at Ennis, shrugged her shoulders and laid her dainty hand on the boy's shoulder. Ennis decided this was a good time to take a break so he made his way through the lively crowd, toward the rear exit and stood next to the open door, just outside the hall.

It was a cold, still night in Wyoming and it contrasted heavily with the revelry going on inside. The winter moon was glorious and full against the velvety, black sky. Ennis reached into the pocket inside his tuxedo jacket and pulled out a fresh pack of smokes. He yanked the tab on the cellophane wrapper, tore off the corner, smacked the pack on his palm and pulled a cigarette with his mouth. Ennis lit the cigarette and took a long draw. It felt good to be alone, away from the crowd for a few minutes. "You got another one a' them fer me, cowboy?" Ennis wheeled around. It was Jack. His smile lit up the night and shards of moonlight danced in his blue eyes. Ennis' heart pounded in his chest like the rhythm of a train.

"S-sure," he stammered. Jack took a cigarette from the pack and Ennis quickly struck another match to light it. "Thanks," he nodded. Ennis stared at Jack as though he were an apparition. "Um, you sure look good," he barely managed, then looked down at the ground. "Thanks, Ennis. You look real good, too." he said, blowing out a mouthful of smoke. Jack tried desperately to remain cool despite the urge to ravish Ennis right then and there. "So, where ya been fer the last few days?" The band began to play the Buck Owens song, "Guess Things Happen This Way" and the sound of crickets chirping synchronized to the beat.
"Uh, I was stayin' with Raquel at her place." Jack was silent. He stared into the inky sky and thought carefully before forming this next question. "Ennis, how come ya run off that day at Katie's shop?"  Ennis exhaled and watched the smoke slowly dissipate into the night sky. He wasn't really prepared for Jack's question. "I didn't think it would matter if ah left," he whispered sincerely," Better off gone. I was causin' you and yer folks, nothin' but trouble, anyways."
Jack's heart melted as he looked into Ennis' dark eyes. He leaned in and could almost feel Ennis' warm breath on his face. Suddenly, the music stopped and there was a loud commotion coming from the inside the party, angry shouting, then what sounded like a table, crashing to the ground. They heard a woman's scream and they both dashed back inside.

Title: Re: Trust
Post by: Dagi on February 04, 2008, 10:14:32 am
Trust By Littlewing1957

Ennis trusted Jack.  More than anyone else, Ennis trusted Jack with his very life.  From the first time they made wicked, steamy love in a tent up on Brokeback, to the time almost 20 years later when they still made love, Ennis knew he could trust Jack.

It was not a one way street.  Ennis couldn’t articulate it, but he knew that he loved Jack and that he would kill for him.  He would die for him.  Jack knew it, as well.  The knowledge kept them whole.  It bonded them for life.

One Saturday afternoon up in Don Wroe’s cabin, Ennis and Jack were snowed in.  There was not much else to do but eat, play cards and watch the granules of snow blanket the earth.  After a hearty lunch of fried bologna sandwiches and mushroom soup, Jack was feeling randy.  He wanted so much to try something different, but wasn’t sure if Ennis would be receptive.  “I want to try something new, Cowboy, something that may be a bit painful at first.  Will you let me try?”  Ennis smiled, as he was not the least bit put off or frightened.  “Whatever you want, Jack,” Ennis whispered.  “I trust you.”  Jack sighed happily and smiled warmly.  He offered his hand to his lover and led him into the master bedroom.






And now we leave them to themselves and use our imagination.  ;D Can´t blame Jack for feeling randy. Beautiful look into their life, Marie, thank you.

Dagi
Title: Re: Trust
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 04, 2008, 11:32:48 am
Just what are you suggesting here, Littlewing, you nasty thing!

Ah, if only I can say...
Title: Re: Right 74 by Toycoon
Post by: Dagi on February 04, 2008, 03:22:47 pm
Right 74 by Toycoon

Jack and his partner, Comfort, spun around the dance floor to the strains of the country band's tribute to self esteem, "Respect" as Ennis watched the pair intently over Raquel's left shoulder. He didn't realize it at first but Ennis had nearly come to a complete stop, he was so captivated watching his handsome friend dancing with another woman. Ennis felt a firm tap on his arm and turned to see who it was. A brawny fellow with a boyish face and closely cropped, blond hair motioned that he wanted to cut in on their dance. Ennis was surprised at first, even slightly annoyed but quietly relinquished his date to the stranger. Raquel seemed to recognize the young man, Leroy, so she smiled at Ennis, shrugged her shoulders and laid her dainty hand on the boy's shoulder. Ennis decided this was a good time to take a break so he made his way through the lively crowd, toward the rear exit and stood next to the open door, just outside the hall.

It was a cold, still night in Wyoming and it contrasted heavily with the revelry going on inside. The winter moon was glorious and full against the velvety, black sky. Ennis reached into the pocket inside his tuxedo jacket and pulled out a fresh pack of smokes. He yanked the tab on the cellophane wrapper, tore off the corner, smacked the pack on his palm and pulled a cigarette with his mouth. Ennis lit the cigarette and took a long draw. It felt good to be alone, away from the crowd for a few minutes. "You got another one a' them fer me, cowboy?" Ennis wheeled around. It was Jack. His smile lit up the night and shards of moonlight danced in his blue eyes. Ennis' heart pounded in his chest like the rhythm of a train.

"S-sure," he stammered. Jack took a cigarette from the pack and Ennis quickly struck another match to light it. "Thanks," he nodded. Ennis stared at Jack as though he were an apparition. "Um, you sure look good," he barely managed, then looked down at the ground. "Thanks, Ennis. You look real good, too." he said, blowing out a mouthful of smoke. Jack tried desperately to remain cool despite the urge to ravish Ennis right then and there. "So, where ya been fer the last few days?" The band began to play the Buck Owens song, "Guess Things Happen This Way" and the sound of crickets chirping synchronized to the beat.
"Uh, I was stayin' with Raquel at her place." Jack was silent. He stared into the inky sky and thought carefully before forming this next question. "Ennis, how come ya run off that day at Katie shop?"  Ennis exhaled and watched the smoke slowly dissipate into the night sky. He wasn't really prepared for Jack's question. "I didn't think it would matter if ah left," he whispered sincerely," Better off gone. I was causin' you and yer folks, nothin' but trouble, anyways."
Jack's heart melted as he looked into Ennis' dark eyes. He leaned in and could almost feel Ennis' warm breath on his face. Suddenly, the music stopped and there was a loud commotion coming from the inside the party, angry shouting, then what sounded like a table, crashing to the ground. They heard a woman's scream and they both dashed back inside.



Toycoon, I just love your descriptive style. I can see them stand there smoking as if I was watching a movie, I feel the fresh air and the tension between them. And Ennis again thinking he is causing nothing but trouble breaks my heart...

Thanks so much for writing this, you two make a wonderful couple!  ;D

Dagi
Title: Re: Right 74 by Toycoon
Post by: Toycoon on February 05, 2008, 12:12:02 am
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Toycoon, I just love your descriptive style. I can see them stand there smoking as if I was watching a movie, I feel the fresh air and the tension between them. And Ennis again thinking he is causing nothing but trouble breaks my heart...
Thanks so much for writing this, you two make a wonderful couple!  ;D
Dagi

Why thank you, Dagi my dear. I am truly enjoying this experience writing with a partner. I think by the time we're done, Littlewing shall be my wife and I will be her gay husband. Everyone needs a gay husband don't you think?  ::)
Title: Re: Right 74 by Toycoon
Post by: Dagi on February 05, 2008, 09:30:58 am
Why thank you, Dagi my dear. I am truly enjoying this experience writing with a partner. I think by the time we're done, Littlewing shall be my wife and I will be her gay husband. Everyone needs a gay husband don't you think?  ::)

 :laugh: I think so, yes.
Title: Re: Right 74 by Toycoon
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 05, 2008, 06:25:18 pm
Why thank you, Dagi my dear. I am truly enjoying this experience writing with a partner. I think by the time we're done, Littlewing shall be my wife and I will be her gay husband. Everyone needs a gay husband don't you think?  ::)

Hey, Toycoon, sounds good to me!  You're the only husband I would want!  :-*
Title: Re: Trust
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 05, 2008, 06:25:41 pm
And now we leave them to themselves and use our imagination.  ;D Can´t blame Jack for feeling randy. Beautiful look into their life, Marie, thank you.

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 05, 2008, 06:27:15 pm
Hugs to everyone.  Just wanted to let ya'll know that I'm here and that I've not forgotten about you.  I'll get caught up on the new stories very soon.  I'm looking forward to that.   :D

Gary

Hey, Gary!  :-*  Its good to hear that you're around for us (even though I've never doubted it for a moment) and I look forward to your comments.
Title: Re: Right (74)
Post by: cwby30 on February 05, 2008, 06:44:01 pm

Afternoon.

Well, nice update, the only thing missing was "suddenly, a shot rang out"!!!  And I wouldn't put it past Alan to have a pistol on him.  Things are tensing up, and looking forward to finding out what happened inside.  Even if it did mess up the 'moment' the guys were having. You've left things wide open for your partner in writing, so onward into the fray.

Ennis still hasn't figured out his own worth, to himself and to Jack; he still feels like he's in the way, like he was with his father, and with KE, and with Alma.  He needs Jack around to find out that with Jack he's never in the way, he's Jack's one and only, and he need to work through that with Jack's help.  Hard to get him to do that, but necessary.  Again, the Dakotas are looking much better, away from Jack's parents and past and away from Ennis' siblings and past. 

Thanks again. 
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on February 05, 2008, 09:05:29 pm
Gee whiz, cwby30, you're our best-est critic! I'm so glad you're still with us. It's been a helluva year so far, huh?


This story has taken on a life of its own. Every time I come back there's a new twist!  Even I don't know what happened inside.  ???
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on February 05, 2008, 10:59:29 pm
Hey GC-
Did you rememebr to vote? In California, if you voted democratic, I hope you remembered to mark, "democratic' at the top of the ballot or else your vote will not count! I got f-ckked because the assh-le at my polling place didn't tell me that. I am so pissed off, I could scream!
Title: Re: Right (74)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 05, 2008, 11:21:24 pm
Afternoon.

Well, nice update, the only thing missing was "suddenly, a shot rang out"!!!  And I wouldn't put it past Alan to have a pistol on him.  Things are tensing up, and looking forward to finding out what happened inside.  Even if it did mess up the 'moment' the guys were having. You've left things wide open for your partner in writing, so onward into the fray.

Ennis still hasn't figured out his own worth, to himself and to Jack; he still feels like he's in the way, like he was with his father, and with KE, and with Alma.  He needs Jack around to find out that with Jack he's never in the way, he's Jack's one and only, and he need to work through that with Jack's help.  Hard to get him to do that, but necessary.  Again, the Dakotas are looking much better, away from Jack's parents and past and away from Ennis' siblings and past. 

Thanks again. 

I love to read your comments, Babe!  You're one of the reasons I keep writing! 
Title: Re: Trust
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 05, 2008, 11:23:58 pm
Littlewing, this is sexy as hell.  What a great story.  You have the trust between the boys, and this allows Ennis to submit to Jack.  And there simply isn't anything more sexy than one person telling another "do what you want to me."  MMM  *evil grin*  And the way you left it up to the reader to decide exactly what was on Jack's mind is genius.

Gary

Wow, Gary, you have made my night.  I was just checking my e-mail from work after taking a day off to care for an ailing Maria.  I expected to find some things from my bosses that would upset me.  Sad to say, I wasn't "disappointed."  But when I read your sweet comments, I perked right up.  Thanks so much, Sweetheart!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 05, 2008, 11:25:19 pm

This story has taken on a life of its own. Every time I come back there's a new twist!  Even I don't know what happened inside.  ???

I don't know what's gonna happen either, but I'm working on it!  :)
Title: Right 75
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 08, 2008, 10:16:08 pm
Right 75 By Littlewing1957

Jack and Ennis ran back into the hall in a flash, and were greeted with an unexpected silence.  Jack bolted to a halt, and pulled Ennis alongside him, as he was the first to notice the elegantly dressed party goers crowded around someone or some thing.  Jack was hesitant to check out the scene, but his curiosity got the better of him.  He released Ennis and they both crept toward the crowd.  Jack saw Katie and he advanced toward her.  She was standing alongside Raquel with her arms around Rocky’s tiny waist.  They were both looking down on the floor where Leroy lay unconscious atop a wooden table broken to kindling!  Everyone looked down at the still form of an obviously drunk Leroy Tippins.  His nose was shattered and oozing blood.  His breathing was labored and rather shallow.  "Someone call a doctor!” A comely lady cried.  “I’m a doctor,” an older man in a white tux shouted as he ran in from the back.  Dr. Miller pushed his way through the crowd and crouched at Leroy’s side.  Jack took Katie’s hand and led her to the banquet table.  Ennis tended to Rocky.  “What happened, Katie?” Jack asked.  Katie was shaking and was as white as Wyoming clouds on a summer morning.  “Well, Jack, all I heard was a scream, and when I looked over to where Rocky was dancing with Leroy, I saw Rocky clobber him something terrible.”  Katie ran a sweat soaked hand over her forehead.  “Then he went down on the table and was knocked out cold.”  Jack listened to this and shook his head.  He knew Leroy Tippins as a woman hating jerk.  Leroy was not the most popular guy in town, and Jack disliked him intently.  He was not sorry to see a woman take him down.

Ennis sat Rocky down at one of the decorated tables and heard her side of the story.  It seemed that Leroy always had a "crush" on Rocky, and this night he was stinking drunk when he cut in on Rocky and Ennis.  “He asked me to go home and smoke a joint with him, Ennis!” Rocky sobbed as she wiped her eyes with a napkin. “He made other suggestions, and was groping me!  He even tried to touch my breasts!”  Ennis handed Rocky a drink of water and continued listening.  “When I refused him and told him to take his grubby hands off of me, he started cursing me and even insulted you!”  Ennis flinched when he heard this.  “What did he say, Rocky?”  Ennis whispered.  “Never mind, Ennis,” Rocky soothed.  It don’t make no difference.  Leroy don’t even know you—don’t worry about him.  Anyway, he refused to leave me alone, and after I tried to get away from him and go look for you, he grabbed my arm and I screamed in pain as he tried to pull me back!”  Rocky rubbed at the nasty bruise on her upper arm. “He hurt you!”  It was Ennis, furious.  “Where were you when I was being manhandled?” Rocky wailed.  Ennis was silent.  He was sorry that Rocky was attacked, but he wasn’t about to tell her that he was out back with Jack.  “I was in the men’s room,” Ennis lied.  Rocky seemed to accept his answer and continued, “Well, my daddy taught me to throw a mean left hook, and tonight I would have made him proud!”  Ennis smiled when Rocky flexed her black-and-blue knuckles.  “I hit him so hard he was knocked back a few feet and landed on an empty table!”  Ennis gently rubbed Rocky’s arm.  “Good for you," he exclaimed.  "That jerk deserved it!”

Alan Sims looked down on his friend Leroy and shook his head.  That man would learn yet, Alan theorized as he watched the doctor examine him.  Alan walked away from the crowd and felt almost guilty about discussing Ennis and Jack with Leroy.  Alan walked out the front door of the hall and sat down on the steps.  The night was silent and cold, but Alan heard the distant, faint sounds of an ambulance approaching.  Alan thought back to the night when he invited Leroy out for a drink.  Alan’s family used to live right next door to Leroy’s grandparents.  Leroy was raised by his maternal grandparents when his own mom and dad abandoned him at 4 years old.  His folks just up and disappeared one day without a word, never to be heard from again.  Leroy’s grandma and grandpa raised him as best they could, but the boy was trouble from day one.  Alan knew what haunted Leroy.  Besides the fact that he was abandoned by his folks at an early age, he was queer, but couldn’t accept it.  He tried everything in his power to disavow his homosexuality.  He spoke homophobic nonsense, acted macho, pursued and mistreated women.  Alan liked Leroy; grew up with him; even made love with him a few times.  But he knew that Leroy was trouble.  Even so, Alan invited him out for drinks the night after Jack’s father threw him off the Twist ranch.  Alan got drunk and said things that should have remained private.  Leroy was just the type to use the information about Jack.  Alan cringed when he thought back to that night, and Leroy smirking when he heard about Ennis and Jack.  Alan headed back inside when the ambulance parked right out in front of the hall.  He needed a drink!
Title: Re: Right 75
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 09, 2008, 02:06:47 pm
Very juicy chapter, Littlewing.  It's so cool that Rocky knocked this Leroy guy out cold.  And how interesting to find out that like Alan, he's a closet case with issues.  And it's interesting to know that Alan and Leroy are connected, and that through Alan, Leroy knows things about Jack and Ennis.  I wonder where all this will go.

Thanks for the installment, Littlewing.  I'm looking forward to the next one, Toycoon.

Have a great day.   :D

Gary

Thanks, Babe!  I hope I didn't go overboard with all of this.  The installment seemed to write itself, so to speak.  But what fun!  :laugh:
Title: Re: Right (75)
Post by: cwby30 on February 09, 2008, 05:22:27 pm

Mornin'.

Well, just knew that Alan would be a problem, didn't realize just how big a one.  Leroy isn't going to let things lie [even if he himself is lying to himself].  Interesting that Alan wants Jack, but has settled for several flings with Leroy, and Leroy does it with Alan while at the same time hating himself [and Alan I bet] for doing it with Alan and being the way he is.  Sounds like a psychiatrist or psychologist would be fully employed in Lightning Flat!

Wonder how Ennis will react when Rocky finally tells him what Leroy said.  If he bolts, he better not be going alone! That would keep them apart, but more importantly leave Jack to fend for himself against Leroy and Alan, and Ennis would never forgive himself if anything happened to Jack because of him [like in OS, realizing too late that keeping Jack away eventually led to his death]. 

The Dakotas are looking better and better, though Millie might prove a problem in the short run.

Thanks again. 
Title: Re: Right (75)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 09, 2008, 08:54:52 pm
Mornin'.

Well, just knew that Alan would be a problem, didn't realize just how big a one.  Leroy isn't going to let things lie [even if he himself is lying to himself].  Interesting that Alan wants Jack, but has settled for several flings with Leroy, and Leroy does it with Alan while at the same time hating himself [and Alan I bet] for doing it with Alan and being the way he is.  Sounds like a psychiatrist or psychologist would be fully employed in Lightning Flat!

Wonder how Ennis will react when Rocky finally tells him what Leroy said.  If he bolts, he better not be going alone! That would keep them apart, but more importantly leave Jack to fend for himself against Leroy and Alan, and Ennis would never forgive himself if anything happened to Jack because of him [like in OS, realizing too late that keeping Jack away eventually led to his death]. 

The Dakotas are looking better and better, though Millie might prove a problem in the short run.

Thanks again. 

Thanks for the comments, cwby30!  I'm really anxious to read your thoughts after we post an chapter.  Thank you so much for your kind feedback and your encouragement/suggestions.  Your presence here means a lot to me.  You're a sweetie!  :-*
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on February 09, 2008, 09:31:27 pm
Oh cwby30,
You were right. That damn dance was gonna be nothin' but trouble for the boys. How did you know?

I'm just about to post "Right 76", I'm that inspired tonight. Thanks for staying with us.
We don't where this wild tale is going. As they say, There ain't no reins on this one!
Title: Right (76) by Toycoon
Post by: Toycoon on February 09, 2008, 09:32:22 pm
Right 76 by Toycoon

What started out as an elegant evening out in the tiny town of Lightning Flat, Wyoming became something of a surreal nightmare as the paramedics carried a bloody LeRoy Tippens away on a stretcher through the crowd. All of the party guest stood there completely aghast, beside the broken folding table with all of the snacks scattered on the floor among the confetti and smeared blood. No one could believe what what had just happened. There was a low buzz in the group as the party guests speculated and compared notes on what they had witnessed.

Jack, Katie, Ennis gathered around Raquel, seated at a small, round table. Peggy Ann appeared, uninvited and joined them. "Boy, you sure creamed that Leroy Tippens! He had it comin', I tell you. He was gettin' fresh with me, too, Rocky. He's lucky my Charlie weren't around when that happened. He would'a socked 'im good!"

A petite brunette girl, no more that eighteen years old, dressed in a cream colored, empire waisted dress came forward, out of the crowd. She was obviously pregnant and looked disheveled in her appearance. Her mousy hair was swept up in a hasty bun and she wore a stringy, crocheted shawl around her shoulders. "He's a good man," she shrieked, placing her hands on her belly. "Leroy's my baby's daddy and you ain't got no right, punchin' him like that!"

"No right?! No right?! That sonafobitch grabbed me." Raquel was fuming now. She got right in the slight woman's face, "He was sayin' nasty things to me! Awful things... 'bout me and my friends! You don't know!" With that, the distraught woman rushed up to Raquel and drew back her hand to slap her. Jack jumped up and grabbed her from behind, holding her wrist and wrestling her into a chair. For such a delicate girl, she was remarkably strong and put up quite a fight. She sobbed uncontrollably and waved away anyone that came near her to try and console her. Finally, Katie offered, "Come on y'all. Let's get the hell outta here! Listen, I gotta a big bottle of whiskey back at the shop that needs drinkin'! This place is too much! I can't take too much more'a this!"

The four of them gathered up their belongings and started for the exit. Ennis and Raquel had taken her new Buick to the dance; Jack and Katie drove together so they made a plan to meet at Katie's shop in fifteen minutes. Before they left, the girls decided to make a stop at the ladies' room to freshen up. Raquel opened her clutch and took out a pancake compact. She flipped it open, took out the puff and smoothed it over the makeup then applied some to her face. She noticed the bruising on her wrist where Leroy grabbed her earlier. Katie stared at her reflection in the mirror. "What a night, huh? Who knew there was so much goin' on in Lightning Flat. Boy, I sure didn't. How 'bout you, Rocky?"
Raquel observed Katie's reflection in the mirror. "How did you say you knew Jack and Ennis, agin? Leroy said a few things to me 'bout them, don't know if it's true or not, that I think maybe you should know."
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on February 09, 2008, 09:48:09 pm
Susiebell, you skinny thing, you!

I'm thrilled that you are doing your Jack with Ennis homework tonight. This is a very special evening.
It's the True Oracle of Phoenix's Birthday today.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 10, 2008, 05:51:16 pm
Susiebell, you skinny thing, you!

I'm thrilled that you are doing your Jack with Ennis homework tonight. This is a very special evening.
It's the True Oracle of Phoenix's Birthday today.


Happy Birthday TOoP!
Title: Re: Right (76)
Post by: cwby30 on February 10, 2008, 07:35:36 pm
Afternoon, Ty.

Well, that Leroy is sure something else.  Gay, had an on-off affair with Alan, wants to get it on with Rocky, spouts anti-women junk, gets a girl pregnant... and the list goes on.  Some point in time he's going to snap big-time, and I don't want Jack and/or Ennis anywhere near him when he does.  Hope he doesn't say something where OMT can hear, 'cause OMT may not like it that Jack's gay and Ennis is his boyfriend, but he'll defend the family's honor and that would lead to tragic consequences all around. 

Hmmm.  The things that go on in the bathrooms!!! Rocky is going to spill the beans to Katie.  Wonder if Jack and Ennis will run into a drunk Alan, and he'll spill the beans to them, too.  The proposed drink-a-thon at Katie's store should be very interesting! Maybe even with uninvited guests. 

The Dakotas are sounding even better.  So is Montana, or Colorado. 

But need to talk with Ma first. 

Thanks again. 
Title: Re: Not so New Year
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 10, 2008, 10:38:38 pm

Beautiful heartwrenching moment Littlewing  :'(

Gosh, I can't believe I've got so far behind (I've had to go back to page 504!!  :o)  It's going to take me a while to catch up ... best get on with it!

Susie  (http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/11/11_1_201.gif)

Thanks, SusieBaby!  Now I'll have to post a few Valentine's Day stories!  :)
Title: Right 77
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 12, 2008, 09:56:55 pm
Right 77 By Littlewing1957

Katie looked at Raquel and shrugged.  “I don’t know what you mean, honey,” she demurred as she watched Rocky powder her nose.  “I know Jack from way back.  We didn’t grow up together, but we always attended the same church.”  Raquel continued to apply powder as she listened.  “I know next to nothing about Ennis.  I met him when I saw Jack walking with him down the road one morning, and offered them both a ride into town.  Why do you ask?”  Katie examined her pale pink fingernails, and tried to act cool.  “Well, Leroy said some pretty awful things about Ennis and Jack,” Rocky volunteered.  “What sort of things?” Katie asked, more than a little concerned.  Rocky studied her friend’s face in the mirror.  She noticed how stressed Katie looked, and decided that they both endured enough trauma for one night.  “Listen, how about we forget this awful night and head over to drink that good whiskey you told us about?” Rocky’s voice was very soothing.  “Leroy was drunk, and I don’t put too much stock in what a drunkard says!  I’m done,” Rocky said as she placed her compact back into her bag.  "Let’s get the hell out of here!”  Katie smiled uneasily and followed Rocky out of the ladies room.

Ennis and Jack were out in front of the hall and watched as the ambulance pulled away.  It looked like the dance was all but over, as people were leaving for their cars in droves.  Jack sat down on the steps and Ennis sat down beside him.  The cold was bearable, but Jack wished he could snuggle up to his friend, if not for warmth, for reassurance.  He wrestled an impulse to take Ennis’ hand and hold on tight.  The anger and resentment he felt when Ennis left was all but forgotten.  Jack was prepared to mend fences and go on.  Ennis no longer felt awkward around Jack.  He sensed that Jack had forgiven him, and was prepared to forgive himself.  Ennis knew that he was a work in progress, and that there was no need to chastise himself for the mistakes he made.  He was committed to going forward with whatever Jack wanted.  He knew he could make amends, and perhaps even find his way back to the Twist Ranch.  The two men sat in comfortable silence, each lost in thought.

Just as the last couple left the hall, Rocky and Katie exited the front door and found Ennis and Jack relaxing on the steps.  “You ready to go, Jack?” It was Katie, and she placed a soft hand on Jack’s shoulder.  Ennis pulled himself up and moved toward Rocky.  “C’mon, Ennis, let’s head over to Preen,” Rocky stated, breathlessly.  “I can really use that whiskey right about now!”  Ennis nodded and offered his arm.  Jack stood up and watched as Rocky and Ennis moved to the parking lot.  Ennis looked back and blushed as he saw Jack wink sexily at him.  Jack thought he was being discreet, but Katie noticed the wink and her mouth flew open.  She said nothing.

Rocky and Ennis waited in Rocky’s car, and when Rocky heard Katie honk, she pulled off onto the road with Katie following close behind.  Ennis stared straight ahead, his heart full from spending a few moments with Jack, his mind in turmoil, wondering what Leroy could have said about him and Jack.  Rocky drove in silence.  She rubbed her wrist and arm a few times, as they were bruised almost black.  Ennis watched Rocky grimace as she moved her arm to maneuver the car.  “Maybe you should go to the hospital, Raquel,” Ennis uttered with great concern.  “I think those bruises will really smart in the morning.  Maybe the doctors can give you something for the pain!”  “I don’t do drugs!” Rocky snapped.  Ennis was taken aback.  What did he say?  “I’m sorry…I didn’t mean nothin’ by it,” Ennis stammered.  “I’m just thinking about you!”  Rocky sighed and stole a glance at Ennis.  “I’m sorry, Ennis, I guess I’m just on edge.  I spent so much money on our outfits for the dance, and planned my schedule around this evening for months.  And look at how it turned out!  This is the last time I attend a party in this hick town!”  Ennis smiled slightly but didn’t say a word.  He knew exactly where Rocky was coming from.  Ennis never expected so much dysfunction in Lightning Flat.  Another reason Jack was so anxious to get away!  “But no matter,” Rocky continued, “Once we get to Katie’s shop we can put on some music, get drunk, and see what else happens.  We can have our own party!”  It was not an agreeable idea.  Ennis didn’t like the sound of it one bit.  But he was not one to argue.  He would think of a way out for him and for Jack!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 14, 2008, 02:47:13 pm
Happy Valentine's Day to you, Gary, and to everyone!


Gary, I saw your Daniel and Tyler story and will read it when I get home from work.  I'm so excited to see another Tyler and Daniel story, and especially on Valentine's Day!  :-*

I have yet to post my own Valentine's Day Ennis and Jack stories, but I should have them up shortly.  Thanks for the story, Gary!  I can't wait to read it.   :)

Where is Dagi?  I haven't seen her around in awhile. 
Title: Re: Right 77
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 14, 2008, 02:49:02 pm
Great chapter, Littlewing.  The suspense is once more on the rise.  How long will Rocky hold out before she admits she knows about Jack and Ennis?  Will Katie figure it out on her own?  Will Jack and Ennis come clean before anyone pressures them to be honest?  Will Jack and Ennis leave Lightening Flat?  So many questions to keep us tuned in.

Gary

Thanks for your sweet comments, Gary!  I'm glad you're staying with us.  Stay tuned!  We have some surprises planned!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 14, 2008, 06:44:42 pm
Dagi has been busy, but she wanted me to wish you and all of her fanfic friends a...

HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY!!!

Love and hugs to everybody.

Thanks for the info, Gary!  I miss that cowgirl!
Title: Be Mine
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 14, 2008, 10:01:42 pm
Be Mine By Littlewing1957

It was February 13, and Jack hurried to downtown Childress, hoping to make it to Montgomery Ward before the store closed.  He was of a romantic nature, but the love of his life lived some 1400 miles away.  His wife, the old ball and chain, was safely at home, looking after their young son.  Lureen was more of a friend than a lover, but he knew better than to go into February 14th without a sentimental gift for her.

Jack sighed with relief when he saw that Monkey Ward would stay open until 9:00p.m.  He parked his truck in the lot and walked into the store.  But what to get?  Wards had a small florist kiosk, and a sweets shop.  Perhaps both flowers and candy?  A pretty new blouse?  Some fancy perfume?  Jack couldn’t decide.

He knew for sure that Lureen was expecting a card.  He found cards on the 2nd floor and rushed to the stand that featured Valentine’s Day cards.  Jack had to push through several shoppers to get near the darn things.  He selected a mushy, outsized card for his wife, and a smaller heart shaped card for Bobby.  Jack was about to leave and pay for his purchases when he noticed a card with a caricature of a cowboy riding a bull and brandishing a silly lasso in the air.  The card featured an even sillier caption.  Jack tried to force himself to move on, but the impulse to inspect the card was just too strong.  He picked it up, felt his heart tug and placed it with the others.  After purchasing a bouquet of red roses for Lureen and a box of chocolates for Bobby, Jack walked to the post office.  He knew he took an awful chance sending the card, wasn’t at all sure how it would be received.  But Jack couldn’t stop himself.  He addressed the envelope to Ennis, and on the inside, which was blank, wrote the words: BE MINE.  Jack smiled sadly and tried to pull himself together.  He placed the envelope in the outgoing slot and drove home.


Ennis and Jack forever Ennis and Jack Forever Ennis and Jack forever Ennis and Jack forever Ennis and Jack forever Ennis and Jack forever Ennis and Jack forever
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 14, 2008, 10:10:42 pm
You’re My Valentine by garycottle


Gorgeous story, Gary, my love.  It is just what I needed to read today.  I want to thank you so much for writing it for us.  I can't even find the words to tell you how much I loved reading through this.  I'm so glad Daniel and Ty are working things out.  I just knew they would!  And to bring out the truth about Grandpa and Jack? Wondeful!  You have written a very sweet, sexy piece here.  I am moved to tears!  I want to read more about Daniel and Ty.  I demand more!  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on February 14, 2008, 10:30:14 pm
(http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x221/Shasta542/chocolate.gif) Happy Valentine's Day, Fanfic Folks!!! I <3 U!!  ;D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 14, 2008, 10:54:11 pm
(http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x221/Shasta542/chocolate.gif) Happy Valentine's Day, Fanfic Folks!!! I <3 U!!  ;D

Happy Valentine's Day, Shasta, my dear friend!  I love you!
Title: Re: Be Mine
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 14, 2008, 11:03:22 pm
Aww  What a bittersweet Valentine's Day for Jack.  But how nice that he was able to find the courage to let Ennis know who his real Valentine was.  I hope that Ennis got to the mailbox before Alma when Jack's card arrived.

We used to go to Ward's all the time when I was a kid.  That's where I got nearly all of my school clothes until I got to high school and decided I simply had to be more fashionable.   :laugh:

Thanks so much for the Valentine's Day story, Littlewing.  A bit sad, but also very nice.

Gary

Hey, Gary!  I know what you mean about Wards.  I used to get a fair chuck of my school clothes there, as well.  The Wards in East Oakland had a long and violent past before it closed forever over a decade ago.  I know several people who used to work there, and they told me stories about employees stealing the company blind.  A cousin of mine used to work out on the loading dock, and he said that one manager was so corrupt that whenever a customer ordered an item, and they sent it down the chute to delievery/pickup, the manager would make sure 2 items were sent down.  He would keep one of the items for himself.  This manager stole so much stuff from Wards that he opened a "store" of his own in an apartment complex in downtown Oakland.  It was rumored that the inside theft was so bad that Wards had to close for that reason alone.  It seems management was so hard nosed with the employees that the workers stole out of spite.  The manager I mentioned was caught, and when he learned he was about to go to jail for a long time, he committed suicide.  I don't know why I'm telling you all this!  :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 14, 2008, 11:12:40 pm
Thanks so much for the kind remarks, Littlewing.   :D  I'm so glad you liked it.  It's Valentine's Day so Daniel and Tyler just had to make up, didn't they?  Poor ol' Ty has been in the dog house for two months now, so it was time he got some lovin' from his Danny boy.  All while I wrote the scene I was thinking of how Ennis and Jack had made love in that very cabin over twenty years before, so I thought it was time that the boys became a bit more aware of the past.

Gary

Yes, it is time for them to make up.  The two of them are just too close, too bonded to be apart in spirit for long.  The merging of the bodies together means nothing if the heart isn't in it.  God, I hope I'm making sense.  Anyway, thanks again for this incredible tale.  A very satisfying read!
Title: Re: Be Mine
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 14, 2008, 11:20:23 pm
Ah, nothing like a story about theft, corruption, cruelty and suicide on Valentine's Day to make you feel all warm and fuzzy.  You know if you thew in an orphan boy it would be down right Dickensian.   :laugh:  :-X

 :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:

Gary, you're too much!  I can't help but love you so!
Title: Re: Dickensian
Post by: cwby30 on February 15, 2008, 03:06:36 pm
Mornin', Gary and Littlewing.

Well, if you also started out with: "It was a dark and stormy night.  Suddenly a shot rang out, and a woman screamed.  And somewhere in Kansas a boy was growing up on a farm." then it really would be.... Peanutsian.

Happy Presidents Day Weekend, and

Thanks again. 

PS.  What's with Rocky and Katie? They're dancing around an issue they both know is out there, but are unwilling to admit.  Glad Ennis is thinking on how he's going to extricate Jack and himself from this mess with the girls, and get moving on their own life together.  But, there's still Alan and Leroy to contend with, let alone OMT.  Dang! Can't something go "right" for them for a change?!
Title: Re: Dickensian
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 16, 2008, 03:09:23 pm
Mornin', Gary and Littlewing.

Well, if you also started out with: "It was a dark and stormy night.  Suddenly a shot rang out, and a woman screamed.  And somewhere in Kansas a boy was growing up on a farm." then it really would be.... Peanutsian.

Happy Presidents Day Weekend, and

Thanks again. 

PS.  What's with Rocky and Katie? They're dancing around an issue they both know is out there, but are unwilling to admit.  Glad Ennis is thinking on how he's going to extricate Jack and himself from this mess with the girls, and get moving on their own life together.  But, there's still Alan and Leroy to contend with, let alone OMT.  Dang! Can't something go "right" for them for a change?!

Hey, cwby30!  Thanks for posting.  Happy President's Day weekend to you, and to all!

I can't wait for things to get better for the boys.  But they'll have to be patient!  The road to true happiness can be long and tedious.  They'll get there--eventually  :laugh:
Title: I'm Yours
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 17, 2008, 02:48:29 am
I'm Yours by Littlewing1957

It was February 16, and Ennis was rifling through his mail.  He stopped in the post office on the way home from work, just as always.  Ennis didn’t mind waking to the post office to fetch his mail, but thought about arranging for his mail to come to his trailer.  He would have his own mailbox, and everything.  But for now, he needed to make the daily trips to get his mail.  It was just a chore of life.

Ennis didn’t feel up to opening the bills, and stiffened when he saw a letter from a collection agency.  Among the small pile were several adverts from stores in town, and even a letter from Alma thanking him for keeping the girls while she and Monroe went away for a romantic Valentine’s Day celebration.  The last piece of mail looked curious.  There was no return address, and looked like a store bought card of some kind.  Ennis opened it and glared at a cowboy on a bull, waving a lasso.  It was a funny little thing, very strange and silly looking.  Ennis opened the card and read, “BE MINE.”  Ennis chuckled.  The card was unsigned, but he knew who had sent it.

Ennis had to sit down.  The rest of his mail, and everything else, for that matter, would have to wait.  He lay down on his ratty couch and opened the card.  He placed it over his face.  At that very moment Ennis realized that he never before received a Valentine’s Day card. Never got a card from some pretty girl at school who had a crush on him, never received a Valentine's Day card from his girls, or from Alma.  The card was late, of course, but it was of no consequence.  Ennis read the words again, “BE MINE.”  “I’M YOURS” Ennis whispered into the card.  He closed his eyes and wished he could tell Jack that he belonged only to him – would never belong to anyone else.  Ennis fell asleep, a silly card over his face, a smile on his lips.
Title: Re: I'm Yours
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 17, 2008, 03:03:17 am
What a beautiful and precious moment, Littlewing.  It's great that Jack's card made Ennis feel loved.  Thanks so much for the sweet story.

Gary

Thanks, Gary! 
Title: Re: I'm Yours
Post by: Toycoon on February 17, 2008, 03:54:38 am
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Ennis read the words again, “BE MINE.”  “I’M YOURS” Ennis whispered into the card.  He closed his eyes and wished he could tell Jack that he belonged only to him – would never belong to anyone else.  Ennis fell asleep, a silly card over his face, a smile on his lips.

You are so good, Littlewing. Love your valentine.

oooxxx, Toycoon
Title: Re: I'm Yours
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 17, 2008, 08:48:40 pm
You are so good, Littlewing. Love your valentine.

oooxxx, Toycoon

Thanks, Babe!
Title: No Better than He
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 17, 2008, 09:42:15 pm
No Better than He by Littlewing1957

Jack was never once invited to Ennis’ trailer, but he could image the place.  Knowing Ennis, it was bare and bleak.  Jack never knew Ennis to concern himself with decorations or creature comforts.  Jack could see, in his mind’s eyes, a dwelling sparsely furnished with cheap but clean furniture, a calendar on the wall, and perhaps a battery powered clock.  He would be surprised to see throw rugs or an afghan.  Yes, Jack could picture Ennis’ place.  His home, by contrast, was decorated by a high maintenance girly girl.  It was luxurious by Ennis and Jack’s standards.  But with all of the comfort and beauty, Jack’s home lacked warmth.  Jack looked at Ennis as he slept and knew that he would trade everything he owned in Childress for the warmth of a cold trailer in Riverton.

Jack raised Ennis’ calloused right hand and rubbed it gently.  Ennis' hands were often cracked from being out in the cold, tending to livestock.  He had a man’s hands!  They were responsible, no nonsense, unapologetically rough and scraggly.  Jack remembered Ennis complaining that his hands got so dry in the cold that they often bled.  Jack contrasted his hands with his lover’s.  There was really no comparison.  Lureen insisted that Jack get regular manicures, as he represented Newsome Motors.  His hands needed to look good handing contracts to customers.  And his hands didn’t do much more than point to the fine print on a contract, or type in numbers on an adding machine.  Jack held his smooth, shiny hand next to Ennis’ weather-worn one.  He smiled as he imaged his hand caressing, soothing, and healing the other.

Jack pulled Ennis closer.  Ennis didn’t stir.  Jack looked at his lovers features, almost serene in sleep.  Jack thought about Ennis returning in a few days to a job that paid little, but gave him a measure of pride and accomplishment.  Ennis was doing what he liked to do.  Jack didn’t want to, but he thought ahead to the next few days when the Newsome’s would replenish their stock of tractors.  He would be required to work hard in the next few weeks.  It was boring, unsatisfactory work.  Jack hated what he did, but he was paid very well to sell tractors to rude, uncouth ranchers.  “I’m making a lot of money, but I’m no better than you, Ennis!” Jack whispered in his lover’s ear.  Ennis didn’t hear.  “Let me come with you, Cowboy - let me stay!”  Jack was fighting back tears.  Ennis slept on.  Jack pulled Ennis a bit closer and tried to sleep.

Title: Re: No Better than He
Post by: Toycoon on February 17, 2008, 10:31:19 pm
Everyone should be working on an afghan, Littlewing!  ::)
Title: Re: No Better than He
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 18, 2008, 01:29:02 am
Everyone should be working on an afghan, Littlewing!  ::)

 :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:  :laugh:
Title: Right 78 by Toycoon
Post by: Toycoon on February 18, 2008, 02:23:57 am
Right 78 by Toycoon

There was no doubt, Leroy Tippens was in a lot of pain. It was a toxic combination of alcohol, shame, frustration, humiliation and rejection and it hurt like a bastard. All he could think of is how stupid he felt, laying on the ground in that way among the pieces of the wooden table, the spilled punch and the party snacks. Even the effects of mash whiskey had worn off by now. Leroy's nose was broken by a left hook in front of all the guests at the dance and by a woman, no less. Leroy sat on the hospital bed in his damp, filthy, rented tuxedo and wondered how he came to be in this predicament. His grandpa and grandma would be angry that he was in trouble again. An older, matronly woman with graying hair, the nurse on duty was tending to Leroy's broken nose but there was little she could do for the boy's internal wounds. The nurse gently patted the edge of the gauze bandage, cocked her head, then stood back to admire her work. Leroy was quite a sight with all the bandages on his face and the frosting smeared on his coat. She steadied Leroy's face with her hands and declared, "Well young man, that oughta stay put for the night. The doctor wants to see ya back on Tuesday. No more drinkin' for tonight, ya hear me now." Leroy just nodded his head. The nurse put her hand on his broad shoulder and rubbed it softly, then gathered up her supplies and walked away.

"Nobody gets away with that shit', thought Leroy, rubbing his throbbing head and still thinking of the humiliation he suffered at the party. "Nobody." The pain of the swollen nose was starting to set in. "Especially, a little nobody like Raquel' She ain't got no right ta' slug me like that. Alan! Gimme a sip uh that whiskey!" He glanced over to Alan who had come to offer Leroy, a ride home. Alan had just dropped off his 'date' from the dance and noticed that the light was on at Katie's shop. He told Leroy that he'd overheard Raquel mention that she, Ennis, Jack and Katie were all going to Katie's shop, 'Preen'  to continue the party. Leroy took a big gulp of the whiskey and wiped his mouth. He handed the bottle back to Alan, who took a smaller swig then put it back in his tuxedo pocket. "Ya know what?" blurted out Leroy. "We're gonna go over there ta Katie's shop and continue the party, too! I gotta little unfinished business wit' them!" Alan looked worried. Leroy had a raging temper. Leroy had seen it many times and it scared him. Alan had already said too many personal things that he should have never said about Jack, Ennis and about himself. He was in deep now. "Leroy, the doctor said you shouldn't drink no more, c'mon lemme take you home. I promise to make you feel good, OK?" Alan mopped the beads of sweat forming on his forehead with the sleeve of his jacket.

Leroy lunged at Alan, grabbing him by his shirt collar, yanking him up then shook him violently. "Listen to me you little queer, I'm gonna get that goddamn bitch, Rockie, she'll be sorry! " he hissed. "First, yer gonna drive me by my house to get my gun, then we gonna take a ride over ta that shop." Leroy's eyes glowed with venomous fury. "She's gonna pay for what she done alright!"
Title: Re: No Better than He
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 18, 2008, 11:50:07 pm
Poor Jack.  What a bittersweet moment.  Jack is so open to his love for Ennis, but at the same time he feels rejected.  I really liked the part about Ennis's sexy hands.

Gary

Why thanks, Gary!  I'm always drawn to the boys' hands.  I'm not sure why!
Title: Re: Right 78 by Toycoon
Post by: Toycoon on February 19, 2008, 11:08:50 am
Dramatic stuff, Toycoon.  You have me on the edge of mey seat.  What's going to happen now?

Gary

Thanks for reading, Gary. All I know is, there should be a pretty thrilling conclusion coming soon in the fucked-up, sleepy town of Lightning Flat!
Title: Right 79
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 20, 2008, 05:15:10 pm
Right 79 By Littlewing1957

Mrs. Twist stood outside her front door in the cold.  She looked at her Timex watch, a gift from Jack, and saw that it was well past 2:00a.m.  Jack wasn't home from the dance.  That boy promised that he would be home before too long.  Mrs. Twist conceded that she couldn't specify what "too long" meant.  But she reasoned that Jack would be home well before the first light of morning.  Mrs. Twist glanced at her watch again and sighed.  Jack was a grown man, and he could do whatever he wanted - to an extent.  She just thought it was right that her son be considerate of her feelings!  Even if Jack were 45, she would worry if he didn't turn up at a reasonable hour.  Too add to her distress, Mr. Twist was out with friends.  It was not like him to go out and leave her at the ranch alone, but she said nothing when a few of his buddies came by and practically dragged him off the property.  "Goin' drinkin," was all her husband said to her as he was led away by his pals.  Mrs. Twist shook off a feeling of dread for both of her men and walked back into her home.

Mr. Twist was seated atop a barstool at Riley's, and finished off his 3rd beer.  His buddy, Hobart Feger, sat right beside him.  His other pal, Kevin Ferguson, left about an hour ago; said he had to go home and make sure the missus was okay.  John and Hobart chuckled silently to themselves when they heard that.  Both knew that Kevin's wife was sorta loose, and Kevin only wanted out to go check up on her.  They let him go without comment.  John Twist looked around the smoky bar.  He and Hobart were two of only 6 patrons in the entire place.  Hobart was just about to order them another round when a pair of young people staggered into the bar, very drunk and very well-dressed.  John and Hobart watched as the two young men took a table and began laughing hysterically.  John knew the young men, as he did business with them on a regular basis.  They were salesmen at one of the lumber depots in town.  Roger, the more sober of the pair, noticed Mr. Twist and walked over to greet him.  Roger slapped John on the shoulder.  "How ya doin', Mr. Twist," Roger slurred.  "I saw ya son at the dance awhile ago!"  John Twist turned toward the young man and smiled at him.  "That's nice," he began.  "You guys have a good time at the dance?"  Roger told him all about the festivities, and was quite animated as he described what happend with Rocky and Leroy.  John Twist listened to the young man with great interest.  He didn't like what he was hearing. 

Mrs. Twist was very tired, but she couldn't bring herself to go to bed.  She couldn't explain why, but she had a bad feeling about the dance.  Jack should be home by now.  Roberta Twist was sorry for the first time in her life that she couldn't drive.  She was also very angry at her husband for staying out so long.  Mr. Twist should be home.  He should be right beside her, worrying about their son.  Or out looking for him!   She would really chew him out when he got home.  Mrs. Twist sat on her couch and tried to calm her nerves by working on the sweater she was knitting for Jack.  She knew she was being silly, but couldn't shake the feeling that something was terribly wrong.

Along about 3:00a.m. Mr. Twist entered his home.  His wife had fallen asleep on the couch, her knitting fanned out across her chest.  John shook her gently, and was patient as her eyes focused on him.  "Why you up, mother?" he asked as he sat down beside her.  "I'm waiting up for Jack,"  Mrs. Twist answered.  "He should be home by now, don't you think?"  Mr. Twist told her about meeting with Roger at the bar, and how Roger saw Jack and Katie following behind Rocky and a handsome man he didn't know.  "Roger said that Jack left the party hours ago," Mr. Twist mentioned, absently.  "I'm sure the young folks just went to have an after party drink somewhere.  I wouldn't worry.  Why don't we go up to bed?"  Mrs. Twist smelled the liquor on her husband's breath.  It was not an everyday occurrance, and her husband held his liquor well.  She was not angry that he was just a bit tipsy, but that he was so late in getting home.  She would scream at him later.  "Look, Pa," she began, "I have a bad feeling about Jack.  I think something's wrong, and I would feel better if you go look for him."  Mr. Twist said nothing.  "Please Pa, go look for Jack.  Why don't you check first over at Katie's shop?  If they aren't there, drive around to the bars.  Please, John!"  Mr. Twist sighed and stood up.  "Okay, mother, I'll do what you ask, but I think this is silly.  How is Jack gonna feel when if I find him and try to bring him home?"  "You don't really have to bring him home," Roberta said.  "I just want to know that he's okay."  John Twist shrugged and headed for the door.  "One more thing, John," Mrs. Twist shouted, "Take your gun with you!"

Title: Re: Right (79)
Post by: cwby30 on February 21, 2008, 09:17:07 pm
Afternoon, Little.

Well, the plot thickens.  Looks like all roads lead to Preen, and all of the protagonists and antagonists are on those roads.  Can almost see the black-and-white montage, with OMT getting down his gun and checking it, and Leroy doing the same, and Alan sweating bullets [so to speak] watching Leroy, and two cars with two couples in formal wear headed to Preen for a drink with the ladies and the gents having different expectations, and a pick-up truck heading out into the night away from a dark ranch house with the drive illuminated by the light from a downstairs window, and the moon racing along behind ever-thickening clouds precurser to a storm blowing in from the West... Gives me shivers. [Suddenly in the darkness a shot rang out! Following immediately by another from the opposite side of the room! The flash of gunpowder from the barrels of the two pistols grotesquely lighted for an instant the frozen shapes and figures in the room. Then something hit the floor with a sharp 'thud', and a woman screamed.]

So... Toy... So... Ahem... Next... ...

Thanks again. 
Title: Re: Right (79)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 22, 2008, 01:14:17 am
Afternoon, Little.

Well, the plot thickens.  Looks like all roads lead to Preen, and all of the protagonists and antagonists are on those roads.  Can almost see the black-and-white montage, with OMT getting down his gun and checking it, and Leroy doing the same, and Alan sweating bullets [so to speak] watching Leroy, and two cars with two couples in formal wear headed to Preen for a drink with the ladies and the gents having different expectations, and a pick-up truck heading out into the night away from a dark ranch house with the drive illuminated by the light from a downstairs window, and the moon racing along behind ever-thickening clouds precurser to a storm blowing in from the West... Gives me shivers. [Suddenly in the darkness a shot rang out! Following immediately by another from the opposite side of the room! The flash of gunpowder from the barrels of the two pistols grotesquely lighted for an instant the frozen shapes and figures in the room. Then something hit the floor with a sharp 'thud', and a woman screamed.]

So... Toy... So... Ahem... Next... ...

Thanks again. 

Cwby30, brilliant comments, as always.  I wish I had your writing skill, but I'm trying.  I'll get there!  Thanks for your kind words.  I can't wait to read the next installment!  :)
Title: Re: Right (79)
Post by: cwby30 on February 22, 2008, 11:18:20 am
Mornin', Littlewing.

Well, appreciate the compliment, but right back at ya! You and Toy have created an AU with a different premise and lots of angst and lovin' and interesting OCs and action, a good look into the lives of two now 20-year-olds in a small town feeling their way through 'this thing' in the midst of friends and family.  I too look forward to 'the rest of the story', as I have since the beginning.

Thanks again. 
Title: Re: Right (79)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 22, 2008, 12:50:52 pm
Mornin', Littlewing.

Well, appreciate the compliment, but right back at ya! You and Toy have created an AU with a different premise and lots of angst and lovin' and interesting OCs and action, a good look into the lives of two now 20-year-olds in a small town feeling their way through 'this thing' in the midst of friends and family.  I too look forward to 'the rest of the story', as I have since the beginning.

Thanks again. 

Why, thank you so much!  I'll tell you -- I could go on with this forever, but I think Toycoon is about ready to wrap things up.  If Toy is ready to end the tale, perhaps he'll be willing to start a Part 2, the time when Ennis and Jack work on having that sweet life.  How about it, Toy?
Title: Re: Right (79)
Post by: Toycoon on February 22, 2008, 01:51:03 pm
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Why, thank you so much!  I'll tell you -- I could go on with this forever, but I think Toycoon is about ready to wrap things up.  If Toy is ready to end the tale, perhaps he'll be willing to start a Part 2, the time when Ennis and Jack work on having that sweet life.  How about it, Toy?

Hello cwby30,
Between your inspirational comments and Littlewing's devotion, you both keep me riveted at the keyboard!
I wasn't sure what was gonnna happen next but last night, I had some wild ideas about where this 'thing' was goin'. I think everyone will be surprised!
I'm going to a wedding this afternoon so I can't continue 'til tomorrow. Stay tuned...
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: cwby30 on February 22, 2008, 03:20:00 pm
Mornin', everyone.

Well, not sure this is the proper place, but a friend sent me this and I just had to share it with you.

Thanks again.


                      I THOUGHT I WAS A COWBOY


An old cowboy sat down at the Starbucks and ordered a cup of coffee.
As he sat sipping his coffee, a young woman sat down next to him.

She turned to the cowboy and asked, 'Are you a real cowboy?'

He replied, 'Well, I've spent my whole life breaking colts, working cows,
going to rodeos, fixing fences, pulling calves,bailing hay, doctoring calves,
cleaning my barn, fixing flats, working on tractors, and feeding my dogs,
so I guess I am a cowboy.'

She said, 'I'm a lesbian. I spend my whole day thinking about women.
As soon as I get up in the morning, I think about women.
When I shower, I think about women.
When I watch TV, I think about women.
I even think about women when I eat.
It seems that everything makes me think of women.'

The two sat sipping in silence.

A little while later, a man sat down on the other side
of the old cowboy and asked, 'Are you a real cowboy?'

He replied, 'I always thought I was,
but I just found out that I'm a lesbian.'



PSSSS.

Somehow it made me think of Ennis with a dry sense of humor and the right 'other man' [Jack] sitting down with him only to cough up his coffee.  The logic is impeccable, and could even be worked into a scene in a fanfic someday... maybe... then again maybe not... Hmmm...
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 22, 2008, 06:22:38 pm
Mornin', everyone.

Well, not sure this is the proper place, but a friend sent me this and I just had to share it with you.

Thanks again.


                      I THOUGHT I WAS A COWBOY


An old cowboy sat down at the Starbucks and ordered a cup of coffee.
As he sat sipping his coffee, a young woman sat down next to him.

She turned to the cowboy and asked, 'Are you a real cowboy?'

He replied, 'Well, I've spent my whole life breaking colts, working cows,
going to rodeos, fixing fences, pulling calves,bailing hay, doctoring calves,
cleaning my barn, fixing flats, working on tractors, and feeding my dogs,
so I guess I am a cowboy.'

She said, 'I'm a lesbian. I spend my whole day thinking about women.
As soon as I get up in the morning, I think about women.
When I shower, I think about women.
When I watch TV, I think about women.
I even think about women when I eat.
It seems that everything makes me think of women.'

The two sat sipping in silence.

A little while later, a man sat down on the other side
of the old cowboy and asked, 'Are you a real cowboy?'

He replied, 'I always thought I was,
but I just found out that I'm a lesbian.'



PSSSS.

Somehow it made me think of Ennis with a dry sense of humor and the right 'other man' [Jack] sitting down with him only to cough up his coffee.  The logic is impeccable, and could even be worked into a scene in a fanfic someday... maybe... then again maybe not... Hmmm...

I like this, cwby30!  I really enjoyed reading it, and agree that it would make a nice intro to a fanfic.  Perhaps I'll try to fashion a story based on the piece.
Title: Re: Right (79)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 22, 2008, 06:24:23 pm
Hello cwby30,
Between your inspirational comments and Littlewing's devotion, you both keep me at the riveted keyboard!
I wasn't sure what was gonnna happen next but last night, I had some wild ideas about where this 'thing' was goin'. I think everyone will be surprised!
I'm going to a wedding this afternoon so I can't continue 'til tomorrow. Stay tuned...

Toycoon, I'm so glad to read that you want to continue the story.  I am so very happy!  :)

I can't wait to see what you have in store for us!  :-*
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on February 23, 2008, 06:13:24 pm
Hi there all you great writers,

please don't give up on me. I haven't forgotten about you all, I'll try to come back soon and catch up with you guys! Love you all!  :-*

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 24, 2008, 12:13:29 am
Hi there all you great writers,

please don't give up on me. I haven't forgotten about you all, I'll try to come back soon and catch up with you guys! Love you all!  :-*

Dagi


We can never forget about you, beloved!  We all wait for the day when you can rejoin us.  We love you, Dagi!
Title: Right (80) by Toycoon
Post by: Toycoon on February 24, 2008, 03:48:59 pm
Right (80) by Toycoon

Thin clouds obscured the pale winter moon glowing in the black sky. Raquel and Ennis drove along the dark road in relative silence when, she suddenly slowed the car and pulled over to the side of the road under a street lamp. Ennis looked all around then turned to her. "What's the matter? Somethin' wrong with yer car?" he said, concerned.

Raquel put the Buick in park and switched off the lights. She hesitated for a few minutes then reached for her purse. She produced a pack of cigarettes, then put one in her mouth and flicked her Ronson lighter. Her fingers trembled as she tried to light the end. Ennis took her hand and steadied her arm to light the cigarette. Raquel rolled down the car window half way and exhaled the smoke. Ennis was confused by Raquel's actions. "Raquel, shouldn't we be gettin' to Katie's shop? They'll be waitin' for us. Um, you want me t' drive?" Raquel looked lost.  "Ennis, can I ask you something?" She sighed and wrapped her tiny hands around the steering wheel. "Do you like me?" she asked, staring straight ahead. "S-sure... I like you," he whispered, unsure. Ennis fumbled around in his tuxedo pocket for a half smoked cigarette from earlier in the evening. He found it and popped into his mouth then used the car's lighter to light it.  He paused before continuing. "I guess I'm just stuck on someone else. We was engaged to be married but she broke it off."

"She?" Raquel was at once, forlorn and hopeful. She gazed at the handsome cowboy beside her in the front seat. A white Ford truck sped past them at that moment.  They both watched the truck disappear down the road in a cloud of dust. "Wonder where they goin' in such a hurry?" She flicked her cigarette out the window and rolled it back up before turning the key in the ignition. "She's a little fool to lose you." Raquel smiled, stroked Ennis' hand and kissed him on the cheek. "You're right, Ennis, we should get going." With that, they pulled away from the curb and headed towards Katie's shop.

"This has been one, hell of a night, huh?" exclaimed Jack, taking off his tuxedo jacket. He draped it carefully over the back of a little pink velvet chair in a lingerie display then popped his cowboy hat on the shoulder. "Man, I ain't never seen such a mess in all my days! Didya see the look on Leroy's face when Rockie clobbered him? Too much, I tell you!" Katie walked around her shop turning on a few of the lamps for mood lighting. "That sonofabitch had it coming. Did you hear some of the stuff he was sayin' ta' us?" Katie stopped in front of a porcelain lamp with a beige, fabric shade. She twirled the little chain between her fingers before pulling it. "Hey Jack, where were you when Leroy was buggin' me and Rockie? I thought you was my date," she teased. Jack hesitated for a moment before he began to answer. "I was out havin' a smoke when we... I, heard a crash..." There was a rap at the front door and they both turned to see Peggy Ann and  her boyfriend, Charlie, standing outside, shivering in the cold.
Title: Re: I'm Yours
Post by: Dagi on February 24, 2008, 05:39:50 pm
I'm Yours by Littlewing1957

It was February 16, and Ennis was rifling through his mail.  He stopped in the post office on the way home from work, just as always.  Ennis didn’t mind waking to the post office to fetch his mail, but thought about arranging for his mail to come to his trailer.  He would have his own mailbox, and everything.  But for now, he needed to make the daily trips to get his mail.  It was just a chore of life.

Ennis didn’t feel up to opening the bills, and stiffened when he saw a letter from a collection agency.  Among the small pile were several adverts from stores in town, and even a letter from Alma thanking him for keeping the girls while she and Monroe went away for a romantic Valentine’s Day celebration.  The last piece of mail looked curious.  There was no return address, and looked like a store bought card of some kind.  Ennis opened it and glared at a cowboy on a bull, waving a lasso.  It was a funny little thing, very strange and silly looking.  Ennis opened the card and read, “BE MINE.”  Ennis chuckled.  The card was unsigned, but he knew who had sent it.

Ennis had to sit down.  The rest of his mail, and everything else, for that matter, would have to wait.  He lay down on his ratty couch and opened the card.  He placed it over his face.  At that very moment Ennis realized that he never before received a Valentine’s Day card. Never got a card from some pretty girl at school who had a crush on him, never received a Valentine's Day card from his girls, or from Alma.  The card was late, of course, but it was of no consequence.  Ennis read the words again, “BE MINE.”  “I’M YOURS” Ennis whispered into the card.  He closed his eyes and wished he could tell Jack that he belonged only to him – would never belong to anyone else.  Ennis fell asleep, a silly card over his face, a smile on his lips.


I love this, Marie. Your heart is so full of love, and so is your writing. All these beautiful moments that you give our boys...mmm I can see Ennis smile.
Title: Re: I'm Yours
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 25, 2008, 01:41:42 pm
I love this, Marie. Your heart is so full of love, and so is your writing. All these beautiful moments that you give our boys...mmm I can see Ennis smile.

Thanks, Babe!
Title: Re: No Better than He
Post by: Dagi on February 25, 2008, 05:07:20 pm
No Better than He by Littlewing1957

Jack was never once invited to Ennis’ trailer, but he could image the place.  Knowing Ennis, it was bare and bleak.  Jack never knew Ennis to concern himself with decorations or creature comforts.  Jack could see, in his mind’s eyes, a dwelling sparsely furnished with cheap but clean furniture, a calendar on the wall, and perhaps a battery powered clock.  He would be surprised to see throw rugs or an afghan.  Yes, Jack could picture Ennis’ place.  His home, by contrast, was decorated by a high maintenance girly girl.  It was luxurious by Ennis and Jack’s standards.  But with all of the comfort and beauty, Jack’s home lacked warmth.  Jack looked at Ennis as he slept and knew that he would trade everything he owned in Childress for the warmth of a cold trailer in Riverton.

Jack raised Ennis’ calloused right hand and rubbed it gently.  Ennis' hands were often cracked from being out in the cold, tending to livestock.  He had a man’s hands!  They were responsible, no nonsense, unapologetically rough and scraggly.  Jack remembered Ennis complaining that his hands got so dry in the cold that they often bled.  Jack contrasted his hands with his lover’s.  There was really no comparison.  Lureen insisted that Jack get regular manicures, as he represented Newsome Motors.  His hands needed to look good handing contracts to customers.  And his hands didn’t do much more than point to the fine print on a contract, or type in numbers on an adding machine.  Jack held his smooth, shiny hand next to Ennis’ weather-worn one.  He smiled as he imaged his hand caressing, soothing, and healing the other.

Jack pulled Ennis closer.  Ennis didn’t stir.  Jack looked at his lovers features, almost serene in sleep.  Jack thought about Ennis returning in a few days to a job that paid little, but gave him a measure of pride and accomplishment.  Ennis was doing what he liked to do.  Jack didn’t want to, but he thought ahead to the next few days when the Newsome’s would replenish their stock of tractors.  He would be required to work hard in the next few weeks.  It was boring, unsatisfactory work.  Jack hated what he did, but he was paid very well to sell tractors to rude, uncouth ranchers.  “I’m making a lot of money, but I’m no better than you, Ennis!” Jack whispered in his lover’s ear.  Ennis didn’t hear.  “Let me come with you, Cowboy - let me stay!”  Jack was fighting back tears.  Ennis slept on.  Jack pulled Ennis a bit closer and tried to sleep.



This makes my heart ache. What a sad, but precious moment. I love your writing, Marie, have I said that yet?

Jack looked at Ennis as he slept and knew that he would trade everything he owned in Childress for the warmth of a cold trailer in Riverton.
  :(
Title: Re: Right 78 by Toycoon
Post by: Dagi on February 25, 2008, 05:12:53 pm
Right 78 by Toycoon

There was no doubt, Leroy Tippens was in a lot of pain. It was a toxic combination of alcohol, shame, frustration, humiliation and rejection and it hurt like a bastard. All he could think of is how stupid he felt, laying on the ground in that way among the pieces of the wooden table, the spilled punch and the party snacks. Even the effects of mash whiskey had worn off by now. Leroy's nose was broken by a left hook in front of all the guests at the dance and by a woman, no less. Leroy sat on the hospital bed in his damp, filthy, rented tuxedo and wondered how he came to be in this predicament. His grandpa and grandma would be angry that he was in trouble again. An older, matronly woman with graying hair, the nurse on duty was tending to Leroy's broken nose but there was little she could do for the boy's internal wounds. The nurse gently patted the edge of the gauze bandage, cocked her head, then stood back to admire her work. Leroy was quite a sight with all the bandages on his face and the frosting smeared on his coat. She steadied Leroy's face with her hands and declared, "Well young man, that oughta stay put for the night. The doctor wants to see ya back on Tuesday. No more drinkin' for tonight, ya hear me now." Leroy just nodded his head. The nurse put her hand on his broad shoulder and rubbed it softly, then gathered up her supplies and walked away.

"Nobody gets away with that shit', thought Leroy, rubbing his throbbing head and still thinking of the humiliation he suffered at the party. "Nobody." The pain of the swollen nose was starting to set in. "Especially, a little nobody like Raquel' She ain't got no right ta' slug me like that. Alan! Gimme a sip uh that whiskey!" He glanced over to Alan who had come to offer Leroy, a ride home. Alan had just dropped off his 'date' from the dance and noticed that the light was on at Katie's shop. He told Leroy that he'd overheard Raquel mention that she, Ennis, Jack and Katie were all going to Katie's shop, 'Preen'  to continue the party. Leroy took a big gulp of the whiskey and wiped his mouth. He handed the bottle back to Alan, who took a smaller swig then put it back in his tuxedo pocket. "Ya know what?" blurted out Leroy. "We're gonna go over there ta Katie's shop and continue the party, too! I gotta little unfinished business wit' them!" Alan looked worried. Leroy had a raging temper. Leroy had seen it many times and it scared him. Alan had already said too many personal things that he should have never said about Jack, Ennis and about himself. He was in deep now. "Leroy, the doctor said you shouldn't drink no more, c'mon lemme take you home. I promise to make you feel good, OK?" Alan mopped the beads of sweat forming on his forehead with the sleeve of his jacket.

Leroy lunged at Alan, grabbing him by his shirt collar, yanking him up then shook him violently. "Listen to me you little queer, I'm gonna get that goddamn bitch, Rockie, she'll be sorry! " he hissed. "First, yer gonna drive me by my house to get my gun, then we gonna take a ride over ta that shop." Leroy's eyes glowed with venomous fury. "She's gonna pay for what she done alright!"

Uh-oh, I don´t like this guy. The good thing about being so far behind with reading is that I don´t have to wait for the next one now... ;D Oscar, you are one of my heroes. Marie is the other.
Title: Re: Right 79
Post by: Dagi on February 25, 2008, 05:15:55 pm
Right 79 By Littlewing1957

 "One more thing, John," Mrs. Twist shouted, "Take your gun with you!"



 :o right to the next one, tension is building up here...
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on February 25, 2008, 05:18:43 pm
Mornin', everyone.

Well, not sure this is the proper place, but a friend sent me this and I just had to share it with you.

Thanks again.


                      I THOUGHT I WAS A COWBOY


An old cowboy sat down at the Starbucks and ordered a cup of coffee.
As he sat sipping his coffee, a young woman sat down next to him.

She turned to the cowboy and asked, 'Are you a real cowboy?'

He replied, 'Well, I've spent my whole life breaking colts, working cows,
going to rodeos, fixing fences, pulling calves,bailing hay, doctoring calves,
cleaning my barn, fixing flats, working on tractors, and feeding my dogs,
so I guess I am a cowboy.'

She said, 'I'm a lesbian. I spend my whole day thinking about women.
As soon as I get up in the morning, I think about women.
When I shower, I think about women.
When I watch TV, I think about women.
I even think about women when I eat.
It seems that everything makes me think of women.'

The two sat sipping in silence.

A little while later, a man sat down on the other side
of the old cowboy and asked, 'Are you a real cowboy?'

He replied, 'I always thought I was,
but I just found out that I'm a lesbian.'



PSSSS.

Somehow it made me think of Ennis with a dry sense of humor and the right 'other man' [Jack] sitting down with him only to cough up his coffee.  The logic is impeccable, and could even be worked into a scene in a fanfic someday... maybe... then again maybe not... Hmmm...

 :laugh: Did I get that wrong or does he think he is a lesbian because he too is thinking about women all day long?
Title: Re: Right (80) by Toycoon
Post by: Dagi on February 25, 2008, 05:24:05 pm
Right (80) by Toycoon

  "Ennis, can I ask you something?" She sighed and wrapped her tiny hands around the steering wheel. "Do you like me?" she asked, staring straight ahead. "S-sure... I like you," he whispered, unsure. Ennis fumbled around in his tuxedo pocket for a half smoked cigarette from earlier in the evening. He found it and popped into his mouth then used the car's lighter to light it.  He paused before continuing. "I guess I'm just stuck on someone else. We was engaged to be married but she broke it off."


Phew, I thought this is it, now it's out there...but no, Ennis found a way out...and she wants to believe him. Can't wait for the next one!  :D
Title: Re: Right (80) by Toycoon
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 25, 2008, 05:45:52 pm
Phew, I thought this is it, now it's out there...but no, Ennis found a way out...and she wants to believe him. Can't wait for the next one!  :D

Stay tuned!  I should have the next chapter up in a few days, latest!  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on February 25, 2008, 05:59:26 pm
Hey Marie!  :D How nice to see you online! Tomorrow I´ll be over at your place!  ;D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 25, 2008, 07:06:37 pm
Hey Marie!  :D How nice to see you online! Tomorrow I´ll be over at your place!  ;D

Come on over, sweets!  We'll be waitin' for you!
Title: Re: I Thought I Was A Cowboy
Post by: cwby30 on February 25, 2008, 10:44:36 pm

Evenin', Dagi.

Well, yes you got it right! He thought he was a cowboy, but because he thinks about women all day long...

Have some others I'll try one of these days.

Thanks again. 
Title: Gotcha!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 27, 2008, 02:39:34 am
Gotcha by Littlewing1957

Ennis was in a playful mood!  Jack was washing something in the creek, and Ennis tiptoed up behind him, as silent as a mouse.  Jack was quite aware that Ennis was behind him, but didn’t want to spoil the fun.  He knew what was coming, and he was eager!  Jack scooped up a pot full of water and had it ready.  Ennis crept behind him and tapped him gently on the shoulder!

“Ahhhaaaa..” Jack shouted and threw the pot of water right over Ennis’ head!  Ennis whooped in shock and delight, and chased Jack along the side of the creek!  “C’mere, Darlin,” Ennis screamed as Jack out paced him, laughing all the way. “You can’t keep that jog up forever!”  Ennis screamed.  He was right!  Jack began to slow, but only because he wanted to be caught at this point.

Ennis approached his lover from behind and grabbed him up into his arms.  Ennis didn’t even know his own strength!  Jack held on, not quite sure that Ennis could support his weight.”  “Well, what now, Cowboy?”  Jack whispered as he wrapped his arms around Ennis’ neck.  “You just gonna hold me like this?”  Ennis began to walk with Jack in his arms.  Jack was becoming uneasy, not because he didn’t trust Ennis, but because he didn’t want to strain his lover's back.  Ennis patted Jack on the arm.  “Don’t worry Rodeo; we’ll be at the tent soon.”  “The tent, eh?”  Jack smiled.  “I shoulda known.”  “Well, if you don’t wanna, I’ll drop you right now!” Ennis laughed.  Jack shook his head fiercely and held on for the ride.  Once they made it to the tent, Ennis placed Jack on the cold ground very gently.  He pulled the flap back to the tent and reached for a towel to dry himself off.  “I’m going to make you pay for getting me all wet, Twist!” Ennis teased.  Jack took the towel from Ennis and patted it across his hair and shoulders.  Jack pulled the tent flap closed and climbed atop the bedroll.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on February 27, 2008, 05:16:58 am
I guess I'm repeating myself, honey, but I simply love your stories. Such a playfull and cheerful scene, it's brightening my day! I can feel the sun on my skin and the coolness of the water, and their love for each other warms like a second sun. Thanks so much for sharing your stories, you are so good to us, Marie.

Dagi  :-*
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 27, 2008, 01:36:05 pm
I guess I'm repeating myself, honey, but I simply love your stories. Such a playfull and cheerful scene, it's brightening my day! I can feel the sun on my skin and the coolness of the water, and their love for each other warms like a second sun. Thanks so much for sharing your stories, you are so good to us, Marie.

Dagi  :-*

Actually, Dagi, you have made my day.  Thanks for your sweet comments!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on February 27, 2008, 06:25:02 pm
You are more than welcome, sweetie.  :)
Title: Right 81
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 27, 2008, 09:51:29 pm
Right 81 By Littlewing1957

Katie hurried over to the door of the shop where her friends were waiting to gain entry.  “C’mon in Peggy, Charlie!” Katie chirped as she practically pulled the couple inside.  Peggy and Charlie hurried in and stomped their frozen feet against the shop’s floorboards.  They were both glad to be out of the cold.  Katie took Peggy’s cape and turned to collect Charlie’s coat, but he preferred to keep it on.  Katie offered her friends a shot of whiskey to take the chill off.  Jack handed pretty glasses all around, and poured Katie’s guests a shot.  He felt like drinking his whiskey right from the bottle, but Mrs. Twist taught him right.  Jack picked up a dainty glass, squinted at it, shrugged and poured himself a drink.  “Yeah, this is the stuff!” Charlie mumbled with pleasure.  “It sure helps to warm a fella up!”  Peggy sat on Charlie’s lap with her drink still untouched.  “What’s wrong, sweetheart?” Charlie began when he saw Peggy wasn’t drinking.  “You okay?”  “Yeah, I’m fine!” Peggy spoke as she caressed Charlie’s cheek.  “I’m just thinking about tonight and what happened, is all.”  Peggy’s remark sparked an animated discussion about the dance and what had happened there.  Jack was beginning to loosen up and enjoy himself.  He was just about to pour himself another shot of whiskey, when he heard a knock at the door of the shop.

“I’ll get it Jack, just have yourself another drinkie,” Katie sang as she headed for the door.  It was Ennis and Rocky.  “C’mon in you guys before you catch your deaths!” Katie ushered Ennis and Rocky into the shop.  They were shivering and declined Katie’s offer to take their coats.  Jack brightened when he saw Ennis.  He raised his glass to him and pointed to it.  Ennis nodded, and Jack placed a glass of whiskey into his hands.  “Thanks, Jack!”  It was Ennis.  “How about one for Rocky, here?”  “Oh, of course, I was getting to her, “Jack exclaimed as he headed for the bar.  “Be right back with your drink, Rocky,” Jack spoke over his shoulder.  Rocky nodded and took a seat beside Peggy.  “We were just talking about all the excitement at the party,” Peggy said to Rocky, rather as an aside.  Rocky sighed.  She was tired, cold and was in no mood to talk about the shenanigans that jumped off earlier.  “Can we talk about something else?” Rocky mumbled.  “I would like to forget tonight ever happened.”  Katie and her company shrugged and were silent.  Rocky was okay for the most part, but she could be a downer.  Ennis patted her shoulder and offered up a different, though related subject.  “Anybody hear about Leroy?” Ennis asked the group.  “Is he out of the hospital yet?”  No one had heard. 

The whiskey was all gone.  Katie and her friends were feeling no pain.  “Hey you guys!” Katie clapped her hands to get attention. “I got another bottle tucked away.  You want I should open it?”  Jack and Ennis looked to their dates while Charlie did the same.  Heads nodded in the affirmative, and Katie moved to the bar, laughing all the while.  You guys are gonna be ruined in the morning!” Katie exclaimed as she fetched the bottle.  "But who cares?  We can all stay home from church and nurse our hangovers.  Not very Christian, but a party like this happens only once in a blue moon!"  “I’ll drink to that!” Jack laughed as he poured shots all around.  Ennis gazed at his friend.  He wanted to be alone with him something fierce, but he wasn’t at all sure what Jack wanted.  Ennis lowered his gaze when Jack looked at him.  He didn’t want to appear too eager, especially with a shop full of people sitting around.  Ennis prided himself on being a patient man.  He had every confidence that Jack would take him back. 

Along about 5:00a.m., Jack looked at his watch and almost freaked!  “Man, look at the time!  I promised my ma that I would be home at a decent hour.  She must be going crazy about now!”  Ennis perked up when he heard Jack mention his ma.  He missed Mrs. Twist and was looking forward to spending time with her.  That is, if he could convince Jack to let him return to the ranch.  “Ah, your ma is okay,” Katie slurred.  “You’re a big boy and shouldn’t have to report to her, don’t you think?”  Jack was getting irritated, but he remained civil.  “Yeah, but I promised her I would drive her to church this morning,” Jack retorted.  “Look, I hate to be a spoil sport, but I gotta get going.”  “None of you guys are going anywhere!”  The voice boomed from the back of Katie's shop like an explosion, and was cold as steel.  Katie and company turned their heads in unison and saw Leroy, with Alan Sims in tow, moving slowly into the shop.  Leroy grimaced as he leveled an evil looking gun at Raquel’s pretty head.

Title: Easter Suits and Cowboy Hats
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 28, 2008, 08:57:53 pm
Easter Suits and Cowboy Hats by Littlewing1957

Jack and Bobby were walking down the aisle of Sears' boys' Department.  Easter was just a few weeks away, and Lureen asked Jack to take Bobby shopping for his Easter outfit.  Jack rarely attended church on Easter, or any other Sunday, for that matter, but decided to attend service Easter morning.  His camping trip with Ennis didn't go well and he needed to be spiritual for the first time in a long while; at least he thought as much.  Perhaps the pastor of Lureen's church would say something to comfort him.  It was worth a shot.

Jack's navy suit was already purchased and was draped, in plastic, over his arm.  Bobby ran to the rack of boys' suits and pulled at the sleeve of a small, taupe colored blazer.  "You like that one, Bud?"  Jack asked as he watched his son.  "I think that would look nice on you.  You see your size?"  Bobby dropped the sleeve of the blazer and wrinkled his nose.  "Dad, I don't want a suit this year!"  Jack raised an eyebrow.  "What do you mean, son?  We get you an Easter suit every year!"  Bobby frowned.  "I know, and I want something different this time.  I want a cowboy hat!"  Jack tried hard to hide his mirth. Bobby never ceased to amaze him!  "Well, I don't know about a cowboy hat, Bud.  Your ma sent me to buy you a suit, and she'll have my hide if we come home without one!" Jack pulled the taupe suit from the rack and held it up to his son.  "Now go try this on!"  "Yes sir!" Bobby whispered, a dour look on his face.  He took the suit from his father and headed toward the fitting room.

On the way home from Sears, Jack took Bobby to a drive-in for hamburgers and milkshakes.  Bobby was excited about the rare treat, as his mother insisted he eat her cooking, and little else.  Jack figured Bobby needed a treat since he was quite cooperative in trying on the taupe suit and didn't protest when Jack bought it for him.  When they arrive home, Bobby marched straight to his room and hung the suit in his tiny closet.  He sat on his bed, disappointed that he wouldn't be getting a cowboy hat for Easter.  The next day Bobby came home from school and ran straight for his room.  The first thing he saw was a box sitting atop his bed.  There was nothing written on the box, but he instantly knew what it was based on its the size and shape.  Bobby ran to the bed and almost ripped open the hat box.  Inside was a perfect, creme colored cowboy hat.  "Dad!" Bobby shouted as he placed the hat on his head.  Jack walked into his son's room.  "You got it for me!" Bobby squealed and grabbed his father around the waist.  Jack patted his son's dark hair and thanked the Lord for the things that he did have.  His son was a blessing from the Lord.  He couldn't be with Ennis, but he could be with and enjoy his own creature.  Nothing more spiritual than that!

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on February 28, 2008, 09:39:15 pm
I love your slice of life stories, Littlewing. You never cease to amaze me with your prolificness.
I promise to post my chapter of "Right" by this weekend. It's gonna be outrageous!

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 29, 2008, 09:36:53 pm
I love your slice of life stories, Littlewing. You never cease to amaze me with your prolificness.
I promise to post my chapter of "Right" by this weekend. It's gonna be outrageous!



Thanks, Toy!  I look forward to your installment.
Title: Pink Dresses and Chocolate Bunnies
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 29, 2008, 10:14:15 pm
Pink Dresses and Chocolate Bunnies by Littlewing1957

Steve was feeling a bit generous this Easter season.  Business was much better than usual, and he was good enough to spread the wealth around a bit.  It was Friday afternoon and Shirley was passing out pay envelopes.  Steve added an extra $30.00 for everyone.  It was not exactly a fortune, but Ennis felt like dancing a jig when he saw the extra cash.  Easter was just around the corner and he wanted to do something special for the girls.

Alma agreed to let him take the girls into town for Easter baskets.  Alma jr. and Jenny were let down last year.  Ennis was laid off from the ranch for awhile, and Alma had to take care of the family until Ennis went back to work.  There was no money for Easter baskets.  Alma had to make the girl’s dresses from a bolt of yellow fabric her sister bought over.  But this year was different.  Ennis was making decent money, Alma was working extra hours, and with the bonus, Alma was able to get store bought dresses.  The Easter baskets would be store bought, as well!  Ennis led Alma Jr. and Jenny into Woolworth’s and they inspected the brightly colored baskets.  Alma Jr. picked out a basket with a chocolate bunny as a centerpiece.  Jenny wanted the one with the yellow chick surrounded by vividly colored chocolate eggs.  Ennis picked up his girls’ selections and paid for them.  He also surprised them with an egg dying kit.  They would dye eggs that night.

Easter Sunday morning and Ennis cooked breakfast while Alma dressed the girls.  He fixed blueberry pancakes, bacon and served it with coffee for the adults and milk for the girls.  When Alma Jr. and Jenny ran into the kitchen, they almost knocked their daddy over.  They were just that excited!  Ennis admired his beautiful girls in their frilly pink frocks.  Alma was looking might fine in a white shirt-waist dress.  Breakfast was served and Ennis stayed behind to tidy the apartment.  He also had a surprise in store for his family: he would them out to dinner at The Knife and Fork!  Alma would protest, but he had an extra $30.00 to work with.  It was found money.  They may as well celebrate!  Ennis walked his family out to the landing.  Alma descended the stairs and asked Ennis to hold the girls, one in each arm, as she took a picture while she stood in front of the Laundromat.  Ennis hoisted his children up in one swoop and they smiled for the camera.  Alma collected the girls and the walked to the Methodist church.

 
Title: Pink Dresses and Chocolate Bunnies (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 29, 2008, 10:26:01 pm
Pink Dresses and Chocolate Bunnies (2) by Littlewing1957

Ennis was walking to Woolworths to collect the roll of film Alma sent to be developed.  It was an expense that Ennis didn’t really approve, but he wanted to see his girls in their Easter finery again.  Ennis handed the claim check to the bored teenager and after the envelope was produced, he inspected the pictures.  They were great!  All of them came out!  Ennis paid for the pics and walked toward home.

He smiled when he thought about the picture of Alma Jr. and Jenny in his arms up on the landing.  He passed the post office and felt compelled to go in.  He placed the packet of photos on a counter and pulled out the picture of himself on the landing with the girls.  He was sure Alma wouldn’t miss it.  If she did, he could always say it didn’t come out.  Ennis purchased a mailer and placed the photo inside.  He addressed it, placed enough postage on the mailer and left for home.

Jack was in his bedroom when Lureen brought in his mail.  She didn’t say a word as she placed a cardboard mailer on the bed.  Jack picked up the stiff envelope and turned it over.  No return address.  He shrugged and opened the envelope.  Inside was a picture: a charming photo of Ennis Del Mar and two little girls in pink dresses.  Jack lowered the photo to his thigh and fought back a tear.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on March 01, 2008, 02:02:12 am
Warning! The following chapter of the ongoing Jack with Ennis saga, "Right" may be considered too intense for some readers.
Title: Right (82) by Toycoon
Post by: Toycoon on March 01, 2008, 02:03:31 am
Right (82)

Everyone in the shop was absolutely aghast to see the menacing figure of Leroy, still dressed in his dirty tuxedo, bloody bandage taped across his face, weilding a revolver and standing in the doorway with Alan, reluctantly by his side; it was all too unreal to believe. Katie, Ennis, Raquel and Jack were frozen completely motionless. Peggy Ann was still sitting on Charlie's lap, afraid to breath or move. "Leroy, w-what are you doing here!?" cried Katie, quickly sobering up. "Please, honey, stop aiming that gun at her! You don't wanna to do that!" she pleaded.

"Shut the hell up!" he shouted. "You don't know nothin' bout me?! You think yer better then me 'cause you got pretty clothes and a fancy shop! You ain't shit! None a you are!" Raquel trembled as Leroy wildly gestured with the 45 in his hand then aimed it back at her. "Raquel, you think yer something special! You wouldn't even let me kiss you! Well, whattaya see in that guy!?" he bellowed, looking straight at Ennis and cocking back the trigger. "He's a queer! He cain't love you like I can!" Katie begged, "Leroy, please, t-think of your wife and your lil baby!"

"She ain't my wife!" he screamed. Peggy Ann hiccuped and slipped off her boyfriend's lap. She let out a yelp when she hit the floor. Leroy turned and fired the gun in her direction, missing her and hitting the shop's front window. The window shattered into a million pieces, raining down all over the sidewalk and the inside of the store.

The girls shrieked then Alan lunged at Leroy, grabbing the revolver with both hands and trying desperately to wrestle it away from him. The two men struggled for several seconds when the gun suddenly went off. Alan gripped his chest and sank to the floor face down. The blood pooled around him in a small circle, slowly soaking into his white dinner jacket; the gun lay by his lifeless hand. Leroy stood over him, incredulous to his actions. He began to weep like a frightened child, covering his mouth with his bloody hand. "I'm sorry, I'm sorry, Alan ... Alan," he whimpered, hopelessly. Leroy dropped to his knees and picking up the bloody gun, raised it in front of his face. A loud shotgun blast rang out and Leroy fell backward against a small table. The gold vase on the table toppled over, smashing on Leroy's head and spilling pink plastic roses all over Alan and him. Mr. Twist appeared at the rear of the shop, holding a smoking .30-30 rifle. "You folks alright?! That sonofabitch hurt any a' you?! Shee-it! What in the hell happened here?!"
Title: Re: Right (81) & (82)
Post by: cwby30 on March 01, 2008, 03:19:38 am
Evenin', Little, Toy.

Well, Shi-i-it is right! They were all having a right fine time, when Leroy and Alan entered from stage right. Leroy spilled the beans right away. Peggy Ann fell right off Charlie's lap.  Alan finally did the right thing, and got it right in the chest.  Leroy picked up the pistol and held it right in front of his face and got a shotgun blast right to his right side and he fell causing the vase to fall right on him.  And then OMT walked right in. 

Now, when the smoke and confusion clears, nothing else needs to be taken care of, right? Not so fast... there's still what Leroy said and the rest of them heard, and OMT, and the police, and Mrs. T pacing the floor at home, and Ennis and Jack having to talk things through, and ... my head's swimming, things just got more complicated, think I need a pull from the bottle of Old Rose lying on its side right in front of me. 

The Dakotas are looking better and better. Right?

Thanks again. 
Title: Re: Right (82) by Toycoon
Post by: Dagi on March 01, 2008, 04:11:11 pm
Right (82)

Everyone in the shop was absolutely aghast to see the menacing figure of Leroy, still dressed in his dirty tuxedo, bloody bandage taped across his face, wielding a revolver and standing in the doorway with Alan, reluctantly by his side; it was all too unreal to believe. Katie, Ennis, Raquel and Jack were frozen completely motionless. Peggy Ann was still sitting on Charlie's lap, afraid to breath or move. "Leroy, w-what are you doing here!?" cried Katie, quickly sobering up. "Please, honey, stop aiming that gun at her! You don't wanna to do that!" she pleaded.

"Shut the hell up!" he shouted. "You don't know nothin' bout me?! You think yer better then me 'cause you got pretty clothes and a fancy shop! You ain't shit! None a you are!" Raquel trembled as Leroy wildly gestured with the 45 in his hand then aimed it back at her. "Raquel, you think yer something special! You wouldn't even let me kiss you! Well, whattaya see in that guy!?" he bellowed, looking straight at Ennis and cocking back the trigger. "He's a queer! He cain't love you like I can!" Katie begged, "Leroy, please, t-think of your wife and your lil baby!"

"She ain't my wife!" he screamed. Peggy Ann hiccuped and slipped off her boyfriend's lap. She let out a yelp when she hit the floor. Leroy turned and fired the gun in her direction, missing her and hitting the shop's front window. The window shattered into a million pieces, raining down all over the sidewalk and the inside of the store.

The girls shrieked then Alan lunged at Leroy, grabbing the revolver with both hands and trying desperately to wrestle it away from him. The two men struggled for several seconds when the gun suddenly went off. Alan gripped his chest and sank to the floor face down. The blood pooled around him in a small circle, slowly soaking into his white dinner jacket; the gun lay by his lifeless hand. Leroy stood over him, incredulous to his actions. He began to weep like a frightened child, covering his mouth with his bloody hand. "I'm sorry, I'm sorry, Alan ... Alan," he whimpered, hopelessly. Leroy dropped to his knees and picking up the bloody gun, raised it in front of his face. A loud shotgun blast rang out and Leroy fell backward against a small table. The gold vase on the table toppled over, smashing on Leroy's head and spilling pink plastic roses all over Alan and him. Mr. Twist appeared at the rear of the shop, holding a smoking .30-30 rifle. "You folks alright?! That sonofabitch hurt any a' you?! Shee-it! What in the hell happened here?!"

 :P :P :P So much blood. Wasn't this supposed to be a love story?  :o ;D Hope things are turning in a positive direction for our boys now. Golly Toycoon, you sure know how to build up the tension. Littlewing, hurry up!  :D

Dagi
Title: Re: Easter Suits and Cowboy Hats
Post by: Dagi on March 01, 2008, 04:14:46 pm
Easter Suits and Cowboy Hats by Littlewing1957

 His son was a blessing from the Lord.  He couldn't be with Ennis, but he could be with and enjoy his own creature.  Nothing more spiritual than that!



What a wonderful way to convey Jack's caring and loving nature. Sweet little piece, thank you Marie.  :)

Dagi
Title: Re: Pink Dresses and Chocolate Bunnies
Post by: Dagi on March 01, 2008, 04:21:50 pm
Pink Dresses and Chocolate Bunnies by Littlewing1957

 Easter was just around the corner and he wanted to do something special for the girls.
 


And Ennis, what shall I say, he's one of the best fathers in the world. Another heartwarming  scene.

Dagi
Title: Right 82
Post by: Toycoon on March 01, 2008, 06:38:12 pm
Hi Dagi,
I'm sorry that this chapter was so gory but it was bound to happen at some point or another. Truth is nothing really changes unless a little blood is shed. I think you'll see a turn in the storyline now. Things can only get better from here on out. You'll see! We hope to return to romantic drama soon.

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on March 01, 2008, 07:54:13 pm
Romantic drama. Sounds great!!  :D :D :D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 01, 2008, 09:30:32 pm
Warning! The following chapter of the ongoing Jack with Ennis saga, "Right" may be considered too intense for some readers.

Uh oh, I can't wait!
Title: Re: Right 82
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 01, 2008, 09:34:36 pm
Hi Dagi,
I'm sorry that this chapter was so gory but it was bound to happen at some point or another. Truth is nothing really changes unless a little blood is shed. I think you'll see a turn in the storyline now. Things can only get better from here on out. You'll see! We hope to return to romantic drama soon.



Yep, Toy, there has to be drama, conflict, or a saga can get boring!  It'll be good to get back to the romance, though!  :)
Title: Re: Right (81) & (82)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 03, 2008, 12:53:42 am
Evenin', Little, Toy.

Well, Shi-i-it is right! They were all having a right fine time, when Leroy and Alan entered from stage right. Leroy spilled the beans right away. Peggy Ann fell right off Charlie's lap.  Alan finally did the right thing, and got it right in the chest.  Leroy picked up the pistol and held it right in front of his face and got a shotgun blast right to his right side and he fell causing the vase to fall right on him.  And then OMT walked right in. 

Now, when the smoke and confusion clears, nothing else needs to be taken care of, right? Not so fast... there's still what Leroy said and the rest of them heard, and OMT, and the police, and Mrs. T pacing the floor at home, and Ennis and Jack having to talk things through, and ... my head's swimming, things just got more complicated, think I need a pull from the bottle of Old Rose lying on its side right in front of me. 

The Dakotas are looking better and better. Right?

Thanks again. 

Thanks for your comments, cwby30.  I so enjoy reading what you have to say!  :)
Title: Re: Easter Suits and Cowboy Hats
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 03, 2008, 12:54:17 am
What a wonderful way to convey Jack's caring and loving nature. Sweet little piece, thank you Marie.  :)

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi!  :-*
Title: Re: Right (82) by Toycoon
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 03, 2008, 12:55:08 am
:P :P :P So much blood. Wasn't this supposed to be a love story?  :o ;D Hope things are turning in a positive direction for our boys now. Golly Toycoon, you sure know how to build up the tension. Littlewing, hurry up!  :D

Dagi

Hang in there with us, Babe!  There will be plenty of time for romance!  :)
Title: Everything's Fine
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 03, 2008, 01:17:56 am
Everything's Fine by Littlewing1957

Ennis washed a plate and a plastic glass or two in the stream.  Jack was busy yapping away, talking about Lureen typing numbers on an adding machine.  He said something about his wife’s eyes getting smaller and smaller as she punched the numbers in the machine.  He also made some hilarious remark about Lureen looking like she was being chased into a rabbit hole by a predator.  Ennis continued to wash dishes.  He normally hung on Jack’s every word, but he was thinking about a conversation he overheard at the ranch just last week.

Ennis was eating a sandwich at the ranch’s makeshift outdoor “cafeteria” when he heard Jeff and Art talking about a guy they knew who was going through some troubling times.  It seems this guy liked to dress up in women’s dresses and wanted to turn into a woman.  He was arrested for stealing copper wire because he couldn’t find work in Wyoming.  Jeff was almost sympathetic when he told Art how the entire state of Wyoming knew about the unfortunate guy and no one would hire him.  It seems the poor man stole to get himself locked up just so he could get 3 hots and a cot.  Ennis listened to this exchange in horror.  He didn’t cross dress, but what if he was mistaken for being queer?  What if everyone knew?

Ennis looked at Jack.  He wanted to ask his lover if the folks in his town ever suspected.  He was dying to tell Jack that he was afraid that people in Riverton just might think he was queer.  But one look at Jack’s laughing eyes, his sexy stomach paunch and his animated mouth—well, Ennis couldn’t bear to spoil the moment.  “That sounds like high class entertainment, if you ask me!” It was Ennis.  He smiled at Jack when he threw a small pebble into the stream.  “Yeah, for what its worth!” Jack answered.  Ennis finished washing and invited Jack for a walk.  Everything seemed fine. 
Title: Right 83
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 04, 2008, 01:46:17 am
Right 83 by Littlewing1957

Jack was lying, fully clothed, on his small bed.  He just said goodnight to Ennis, who returned to his rightful place: the Twist’s basement “apartment.”  Jack folded his arms over his head and thought back to the events of the past few days.  He couldn’t believe that Leroy and Alan were dead!  The series of events moved through his mind like a blurry slide show.  The first slide featured the small get-together at Katie’s shop in Sepia tones.  Next, Leroy and Alan slithered in and threatened them all with a gun.  And the last slide - Alan actually becoming a hero of sorts – throwing himself in front of Leroy and saving the lives of everyone present.  Jack didn’t want to dwell on Alan’s fate.  It was entirely too painful to think of his ex-friend dying so young, and so tragically.  He had no sympathy at all for Leroy.  He shuddered to think what would have happened if Alan failed to halt that sociopath!  Lightning Flat’s only undertaker would have made a “killing,” preparing so many bodies for burial if Leroy was left to his own devices.  As it happened, only two funerals were planned in town.  Alan will be buried on Friday, and those who loved him will say respects to Leroy the following Monday.  No one was responsible for Leroy's suicide but Leroy.  Jack didn’t think he could attend any of the funerals.

The girls were in a bad state.  Peggy Ann fainted dead away when she saw what happened to Leroy and Alan.  Katie, God bless her, was more concerned about the state of her shop than the deaths of the two troublemakers.  She ran around Preen, inspecting her inventory, while Leroy and Alan breathed their last!  Rocky was in shock and sat silent and motionless until Ennis took her home.  The last Jack heard, Katie was preparing to contact her insurance company about the damages to her shop, and Rocky was on her way to New York City to spend some time with an Aunt.  Jack shivered when he thought of Katie.  He liked her as a friend, but he saw a side of her that made his blood run cold.  He didn’t understand how she could think about material gain, about business, when two men lay dead, almost right in front of her!  Jack hated to admit it, but he wouldn’t care if he never again laid eyes on Katie.  Leroy's baby's mother went into premature labor when she heard about the accident.  As it turned out, both mother and daughter were doing well.  Jack smiled when he thought about his pa.  He was quite attentive to every one present.  Mr. Twist helped comfort the women, called the authorities to come collect the bodies, and just took charge while everyone else seemed comatose!  He was the first person the sheriff spoke to when they all had to give an accounting of the events.  Mr. Twist didn’t know all the facts, but he related what he did see to Sheriff Graham.  Mr. Twist was awesome that night!  Jack couldn’t believe it, but he was actually proud of his old man!  He was also grateful to his dad for agreeing to allow Ennis to return to the ranch.  “Well, we got us a barn to build,” Mr. Twist replied when Jack thanked him profusely.

Jack allowed the “slide show” to end just when he heard a tapping at his door.  “Son, you asleep?” It was Mrs. Twist.  “No, ma, come on in.”  Mrs. Twist entered her son’s room with a tray.  She fixed him some hot milk and included a few peanut butter cookies.  Jack sat upright on his bed and reached for the glass of milk.  “Ma, you didn’t have to go to the trouble,” Jack began, as he took a sip of the warm milk.  “I wanted to do it, Baby!” Mrs. Twist spoke softly as she placed the tray down on Jack’s desk.  “You lived through an awful ordeal, and I would be a bad mother if I didn’t do everything I could to make you comfortable.”  Jack’s mom caressed his hair.  “How you holdin’ up?”  Jack was silent as he thought about Leroy’s last words.  He was grateful that in the confusion no one even thought to mention Leroy’s remark about him being queer.  He hoped no one would remember.  “I’m okay, ma!” Jack lied.  He was quite flustered, terrified, even, but would never admit it to his mother.  He refused to say anything to worry her.  Mrs. Twist nodded and sat down on the bed beside her son.  “I’m sure you’re glad Ennis is back with us,” Mrs. Twist exclaimed with obvious pleasure.  Jack brightened at the mention of his friend’s name.  “Yeah, I sure am glad, ma!”  “Well, so am I, son.  I was getting quite attached to Ennis.  He seems like part of the family now."  Mrs. Twist made a face and turned her head to Jack’s door.  “Your father told me last week that he wouldn’t allow Ennis back.  I’m shocked that he changed his mind.”  Mrs. Twist looked her son dead in the eyes.  “Jack, do you have any idea why your father would let Ennis back here?”  Jack thought for a moment.  “We need help around here, ma.  Pa may be stubborn and can be down right mean, but he’s also practical.  He knows that Ennis will do the work of seven men, and won’t expect to be paid for it.”  Mrs. Twist seemed to accept Jack’s explanation.  She rose from the bed and moved for the door.  “You try and get some sleep, now.  You may have a busy day ahead of you.” 

Jack waited until he heard his mom close the door to her bedroom.  He took the tray from his desk and headed downstairs to the kitchen.  Once there, Jack found a clean glass, removed a few cookies from the jar, and placed them on the tray.  He headed out into the cold and moved silently toward the basement.  Ennis deserved some warm milk and cookies.  Jack only hoped his mom didn’t beat him to it.  He also hoped to get lucky that night.  He was in the mood for a certain kind of sweets: something only Ennis could give him to take the edge off.
Title: Re: Right (83)
Post by: cwby30 on March 04, 2008, 03:02:55 am
Evenin, Little.

Well, things happened at a pace.  Interesting how Jack saw a whole new side to Katie, and didn't like it.  "Course, he only really likes Ennis. 

Do have a question/thought.  In (82) Leroy picked up the revolver and held it in front of his face, but then a shotgun blast rang out, Leroy fell backwards into the table, and Mr. Twist entered with a smoking 30-30.  In (83) Jack decides that 'No one was responsible for Leroy's suicide but Leroy."  Hmmm.  Did Leroy pull the trigger on the revolver just as Mr. Twist pulled the trigger on the 30-30?

Hope Jack gets some of the right kind of 'sweets' from Ennis, and Mr. Twist doesn't interfere.  Just don't trust him, and wonder why he's being so nice to the guys.  Leave it to Mom to bring up warm mild and cookies!

Really enjoying this story.

Thanks again. 
Title: Re: Right (83)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 04, 2008, 07:32:03 pm
Evenin, Little.

Well, things happened at a pace.  Interesting how Jack saw a whole new side to Katie, and didn't like it.  "Course, he only really likes Ennis. 

Do have a question/thought.  In (82) Leroy picked up the revolver and held it in front of his face, but then a shotgun blast rang out, Leroy fell backwards into the table, and Mr. Twist entered with a smoking 30-30.  In (83) Jack decides that 'No one was responsible for Leroy's suicide but Leroy."  Hmmm.  Did Leroy pull the trigger on the revolver just as Mr. Twist pulled the trigger on the 30-30?

Hope Jack gets some of the right kind of 'sweets' from Ennis, and Mr. Twist doesn't interfere.  Just don't trust him, and wonder why he's being so nice to the guys.  Leave it to Mom to bring up warm mild and cookies!

Really enjoying this story.

Thanks again. 

Thanks for your comments, Babe!  We have a few twists and turns planned, as well as a lot of romance.  Stay tuned!  Thanks for your kind words!  :)
Title: Right (84) by Toycoon
Post by: Toycoon on March 05, 2008, 10:41:49 pm
Right (84) by Toycoon

Jack carried the tray of peanut butter cookies around to the basement apartment where Ennis was. He wrapped on the door with his knuckles and called out, "Ennis!" "Come on in, Jack," said the voice from the other side of the door.

When Jack walked in, he saw that Ennis was sitting on the bed with some of his clothes scattered about the small room. The radio was on with the sound turned down very low and barely audible. It was playing a Glen Miller song, "Chattanooga Choo Choo" or something like that but Jack didn't recognize it either way. There was a cigarette burning in the ashtray on the end table. Ennis was methodically folding his clothes and stacking them on seat of the rocking chair. "Um, momma made us some peanut butter cookies. You want some?" offered Jack, setting the tray on the highboy dresser. He motioned to Ennis to try one of his mother's cookies. "I can't eat no cookies just now, Jack." said Ennis as he continued to collate his clothing, never turning around. Jack tried to make eye contact with his friend by following him around the room but Ennis kept right on folding. Finally Jack asked, "W-what are ya doin', buddy?"

"Jack, I... I gotta get outta here. I cain't stay in Lightning Flat no more. It ain't no good. I  jus' cain't live here with you, yer momma an' yer daddy." Ennis paused to take a long draw off the cigarette then set it back in the ashtray. Jack was confounded by Ennis' obvious anxiety. Jack was understandably distressed by the events of the past few days, too but he had no idea how much Ennis had been affected. "But why, Ennis, how come you cain't live here no more? Leroy's dead, he cain't hurt us no more. Katie's OK an' Rockie's gone to New York. My daddy said you can stay wit' us as long as ya like. He said it was OK, Ennis." Jack was pleading with Ennis now. Ennis swung around and looked Jack right in the eyes. "Jack, that's just it. Yer daddy shot Leroy dead! Remember when your daddy caught us in the bed together? Ah bet, he woulda shot us, too!" Jack's mind began spinning. Could Ennis be correct? Everything had happened so fast on that fateful evening that he didn't realize that Leroy hadn't actually shot himself; it had been his father that shot Leroy.

"Ennis, it's alright. It's alright," he whispered, softly stroking Ennis' back, attempting to sooth Ennis' turmoil and assuage his own. Ennis turned toward Jack, nestling his face in the crook of Jack's neck. "What are we gonna do now, Jack? What are we gonna do?" Ennis' salty tears dotted Jack's sweatshirt as they stood clutching each other late into night.
Title: Peace
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 06, 2008, 12:58:30 am
Peace By Littlewing1957

Alma promised herself that she would never visit Ennis Del Mar.  After his outburst that Thanksgiving so many years ago, the only thing Alma ever said to Ennis was hi and bye.  She never set foot in his trailer.  But this time was different.  Alma Jr. told her last week that Jack Twist had died.  Alma looked ahead down the roads that lead to Ennis’ trailer.  She was not surprised that he lived so simply – without frills or a lot of creature comforts.  Alma knew more than anyone else that Ennis Del Mar cared little for material things.  She frowned when she thought of Ennis as a “That’ll do” type of man.  She always hoped that her ex-husband would set the bar higher.  He never did.

Alma Jr. told her how to find Ennis.  She didn’t even know where he lived.  Alma Jr. was not a frequent visitor to her dad’s lonely little trailer, but she did stop in to see him from time to time.  Jenny visited him even less.  Alma was dubious when she learned about Jack Twist’s death.  She was also furious that the girls happened to meet him one day during a visitation.  Jenny was the one to tell Alma that Jack dropped by just when Ennis got them settled in the car to go get something to eat.  It was okay, though.  Ennis sent Jack away after a few minutes.  Alma shuddered when she thought of Jack meeting her daughters.  She fought every urge to make it difficult for Ennis to see his girls.  But she found she couldn’t deprive Ennis of his children.  She trusted him.  She knew he would never expose the girls to anything untoward.  Alma drove up alongside the trailer and parked her Ford Mustang.  She had to keep her courage up.  She had to do this.

Alma walked across the gravel to Ennis’ front door.  She didn’t even have to knock, as Ennis flung the door open upon her approach.  He must have seen her drive up somehow.  “Why don’t you come on in,” Ennis said as he gestured to his ex-wife with a small smile on his still handsome face.  Alma nodded and entered the trailer.  Alma made herself as comfortable as she could on Ennis’ small “loveseat.”  “To what do I owe the pleasure?” Ennis asked Alma as he passed her a glass of pop.  Alma took a swig of the beverage and placed it down on her thigh. “Is what I’m hearing true?” She asked, almost tenderly.  Ennis cocked his head to the side.  “I don’t know.  What did you hear?”  Alma recounted the story Alma Jr. told her about Jack’s demise and how she came to know about it.  “It’s true!” Ennis said so softly that Alma barely heard.  She blew air out of her tiny mouth and looked down into her glass.  Jack Twist was not Alma’s favorite person by a long shot, but she didn’t hate him.  In fact, after having seen him only once, she found herself almost captivated by his sweet looks and his charming demeanor.  She didn’t want to believe that he had died.  “I won’t ask about the specifics, Ennis.” Alma spoke softly.  “But I just wanted to say that I know how much you loved him.” Ennis was gearing up to object, but Alma stopped him with a raised hand.  “Please let me finish.  I just want to say this and I’m out of here.  Don’t interrupt.”  Ennis backed down and listened.  “Listen, Ennis.  The kind of love you had for Jack won’t die.  You’ll never lose him.  Wherever he is, he still loves you.  You must believe this.”  Alma watched as silent tears fell down Ennis’ cheeks.  “I don’t know what lead me here to tell you this, but I just got a compelling to come here, is all.  I feel better about everything, Ennis.  I’m at peace and I want you to be at peace, too.”  Ennis leaned over and kissed Alma’s hand.  “Now I gotta go.  You remember what I said, here?”  Ennis couldn’t speak, but followed Alma to the door of his trailer.  He embraced her and watched as she drove away into the night.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on March 06, 2008, 01:17:24 am
Peace by Littlewing1957

That was simply beautiful, Littlewing.
You never cease to amaze me with your unending source of imaginative stories to tell. Amazing.

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 06, 2008, 03:10:22 am
Peace by Littlewing1957

That was simply beautiful, Littlewing.
You never cease to amaze me with your unending source of imaginative stories to tell. Amazing.



Thanks, Love!  You're always so kind to me  :-*  I really appreciate it!  :)
Title: Re: Peace
Post by: Dagi on March 06, 2008, 05:44:58 am
Peace By Littlewing1957

Alma promised herself that she would never visit Ennis Del Mar.  After his outburst that Thanksgiving so many years ago, the only thing Alma ever said to Ennis was hi and bye.  She never set foot in his trailer.  But this time was different.  Alma Jr. told her last week that Jack Twist had died.  Alma looked ahead down the roads that lead to Ennis’ trailer.  She was not surprised that he lived so simply – without frills or a lot of creature comforts.  Alma knew more than anyone else that Ennis Del Mar cared little for material things.  She frowned when she thought of Ennis as a “That’ll do” type of man.  She always hoped that her ex-husband would set the bar higher.  He never did.

Alma Jr. told her how to find Ennis.  She didn’t even know where he lived.  Alma Jr. was not a frequent visitor to her dad’s lonely little trailer, but she did stop in to see him from time to time.  Jenny visited him even less.  Alma was dubious when she learned about Jack Twist’s death.  She was also furious that the girls happened to meet him one day during a visitation.  Jenny was the one to tell Alma that Jack dropped by just when Ennis got them settled in the car to go get something to eat.  It was okay, though.  Ennis sent Jack away after a few minutes.  Alma shuddered when she thought of Jack meeting her daughters.  She fought every urge to make it difficult for Ennis to see his girls.  But she found she couldn’t deprive Ennis of his children.  She trusted him.  She knew he would never expose the girls to anything untoward.  Alma drove up alongside the trailer and parked her Ford Mustang.  She had to keep her courage up.  She had to do this.

Alma walked across the gravel to Ennis’ front door.  She didn’t even have to knock, as Ennis flung the door open upon her approach.  He must have seen her drive up somehow.  “Why don’t you come on in,” Ennis said as he gestured to his ex-wife with a small smile on his still handsome face.  Alma nodded and entered the trailer.  Alma made herself as comfortable as she could on Ennis’ small “loveseat.”  “To what do I owe the pleasure?” Ennis asked Alma as he passed her a glass of pop.  Alma took a swig of the beverage and placed it down on her thigh. “Is what I’m hearing true?” She asked, almost tenderly.  Ennis cocked his head to the side.  “I don’t know.  What did you hear?”  Alma recounted the story Alma Jr. told her about Jack’s demise and how she came to know about it.  “It’s true!” Ennis said so softly that Alma barely heard.  She blew air out of her tiny mouth and looked down into her glass.  Jack Twist was not Alma’s favorite person by a long shot, but she didn’t hate him.  In fact, after having seen him only once, she found herself almost captivated by his sweet looks and his charming demeanor.  She didn’t want to believe that he had died.  “I won’t ask about the specifics, Ennis.” Alma spoke softly.  “But I just wanted to say that I know how much you loved him.” Ennis was gearing up to object, but Alma stopped him with a raised hand.  “Please let me finish.  I just want to say this and I’m out of here.  Don’t interrupt.”  Ennis backed down and listened.  “Listen, Ennis.  The kind of love you had for Jack won’t die.  You’ll never lose him.  Wherever he is, he still loves you.  You must believe this.”  Alma watched as silent tears fell down Ennis’ cheeks.  “I don’t know what lead me here to tell you this, but I just got a compelling to come here, is all.  I feel better about everything, Ennis.  I’m at peace and I want you to be at peace, too.”  Ennis leaned over and kissed Alma’s hand.  “Now I gotta go.  You remember what I said, here?”  Ennis couldn’t speak, but followed Alma to the door of his trailer.  He embraced her and watched as she drove away into the night.


So beautiful and so touching, sweetie. Alma made quite a step, too. Thanks for this lovely little scene, Marie

I´m a little behind with reading "Right", and I´m quite busy with work and my little son who is sick again, but I´lll catch up with you as soon as possible...

Love,
Dagi
Title: Re: Peace
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 06, 2008, 12:43:17 pm
So beautiful and so touching, sweetie. Alma made quite a step, too. Thanks for this lovely little scene, Marie

I´m a little behind with reading "Right", and I´m quite busy with work and my little son who is sick again, but I´lll catch up with you as soon as possible...

Love,
Dagi

Thanks, Dagi!  You're very sweet as always.  I'm sorry to hear your son is sick again.  I wish him a speedy recovery.  Dont work too hard!  :laugh:
Title: Re: Right (84)
Post by: cwby30 on March 06, 2008, 01:00:26 pm
Mornin', Toy.

Well, the $64,000 Question: "What are we gonna do now, Jack? What are we gonna do?" Looking forward to finding out what you have in store for them in answer to that question. 

Liked how you solved the mystery [to me anyway] of the revolver/30-30 blast with Leroy.  Either way, he died.  And either way, the sight of OMT with a smoking 30-30 in his hands must have scared the Bejesus out of Ennis, to make him decide he has to leave.  Wonder why Jack didn't think of that too? Maybe because it's his house and his town and his parents, but still...  Considering all that has happened to them there, it may be best for them to strike out on their own somewhere else for a while, some place where they won't have those memories thrown in their faces every day. 

[No, I won't say it!]

Thanks again. 
Title: Re: Right
Post by: cwby30 on March 06, 2008, 01:35:04 pm
Mornin', again, to both of you.

Well, another question:  Is it "Rockie" or "Rocky"?  You've used both spellings.  Was reading through the whole thing again just now, and it hit me. [Yeah, I should be working, and I am, but still...]

Thanks again. 
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on March 06, 2008, 01:47:29 pm
Howdy cwby30,
Rockie or Rocky? I usually spell her nickname "Rocky" while Littlewing spells it, "Rockie". I suppose either way is acceptable.

I reasoned Ennis would be shocked by the shooting more than Jack based on what he saw as a young boy.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 06, 2008, 08:12:59 pm
Howdy cwby30,
Rockie or Rocky? I ususally spell her nickname "Rocky" while Littlewing spells it, "Rockie". I suppose either way is acceptable.

I reasoned Ennis would be shocked by the shooting more than Jack based on what he saw as a young boy.

I think I've even spelled her name "Rocky" a few times, even though I usually spell it "Rockie," as Toy observed.  Well, we won't have to worry about that.  I believe we've seen the last of Raquel  ;)  That is, unless Toy finds she has more to say, more to do...

I should be working, as well.  :laugh:
Title: Right 85
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 08, 2008, 04:37:03 pm
Right 85 By Littlewing1957

Jack was the first to hear it!  “Ennis, wake up!” He whispered as he tried to shake his friend awake. “I think I hear someone outside the door!”  “Wha..?” Ennis mumbled groggily as he opened his sleep encrusted eyes.  Ennis pulled himself up from his pillow and faced Jack.  “Shhh..listen!” Jack spoke softly.  “I’m sure I heard someone or some thing out there!”  Ennis was fully awake now.  He had to take a moment to get his bearings, remember where he was and what was going on.  He thought back to last night when they made love so passionately and urgently.  Ennis had to smile when he remembered Jack, in the heat of passion, whispering, “Say my name, Ennis, what’s my name?”  Jack brought him back to the moment. “What's the matter with you, friend?” Jack stammered as he noticed the dreamy look on Ennis’ face.  “Don’t you think we should go investigate?”  Ennis looked at Jack and shook his head.  “I don’t hear anything, Jack!  Look, if it will make you feel better, I’ll put on a pair of jeans and go take a look.”  Jack didn’t like it.  “Wait! We can both go out there.  I won’t tell you to do something that I’m not willing to do myself.”  Ennis thought Jack was babbling, but he didn’t argue.  “Suit yourself.  C’mon then, let’s go see what’s up.”  Jack climbed out of Ennis’ twin bed first.  He looked back as Ennis pulled himself out, and, like Ennis, couldn’t help but recall last night’s deliciously satisfying love fest. 

Ennis, fully dressed in dark wash jeans and a sweatshirt, led Jack out of the basement apartment.  The early morning air was brisk to say the least.  Frothy white clouds moved across a robin’s egg blue sky on the wings of a lazy wind.  Jack followed Ennis onto his property and had a look around.  “Maybe we should have a weapon?” Jack asked. Ennis considered it.  “Well what do you suggest?  I don’t have a gun, or even a knife.”  Jack shrugged as Ennis took it all in.  There was nothing to be afraid of, or at least it seemed that way.  No one in sight.  Jack walked a bit ahead of his friend.  “Yeah, you’re right, Ennis,” Jack conceded.  “Don’t look like anything is wrong.  But I swear I heard someone out here.”  Ennis caught up to him and placed an arm around Jack’s shoulder.  “Its okay, Jack.  Nothing wrong with being cautious.  You have every right.”  Jack fought an urge to lay his head against Ennis’ shoulder.  You never know who may be watching.  “Ahhh, ain’t that sweet!”  Ennis jumped as though someone branded him with a hot poker.  Jack flung around and followed the voice, but there was no one in sight.  “Don’t let me stop your tender moment, fellas!”  Ennis and Jack both turned from side-to-side, scared out of their minds, but needing to find the danger.  “Who are you?”  Jack shouted into the air.  But before anyone could answer, Leroy Tippens and Alan Sims seemed to materialize right in front of Ennis.  Jack didn’t see anyone.  Ennis watched a bruised and bloodied Leroy slide closer toward him.  Alan was standing just behind Leroy, equally bloody, as real and as grim as death, and holding a tire iron!

It was too much for Ennis.  He woke with a start and looked around.  Sweat that was beaded on his forehead now trickled down his cheeks.  Ennis looked over at Jack who was sleeping peacefully.  It was all a cruel dream!  Ennis looked at the tray with the now cold milk and what was left of the cookies Mrs. Twist made for them.  It was all coming back.  What a relief!  But what if the dream was a warning of sorts?  Ennis thought back to the time when he was nine years old.  His dad told him he wanted to show him something very important, and took him by the hand and led him to a drainage ditch.  His brother went along, as well.  Ennis would learn of people who block bad memories from their consciousness forever, and he sincerely hoped that he could have been one of those people.  But the image of poor Earl lying in that drainage ditch with an angry red gash where his private parts were supposed to be was an image that Ennis would never forget as long as he lived.  He didn’t want to think of anything happening to Jack.  Ennis looked at his lover and patted his shoulder ever so gently.  The tender motion woke Jack.  He turned a groggy head toward Ennis and smiled.  “Hey, good morning, friend!” Jack whispered and placed his fingers between Ennis’ thighs.  Ennis warmed and smiled at his lover.  “Didn’t mean to wake you, Jack.  How you feeling?  You okay?”  Jack had a bemused look on his gorgeous face.  “Well, sure!  Why not?  You okay?”  Ennis moaned.  Jack noticed and sat upright in the tiny bed.  “Friend, what is it?” Jack was concerned now.  Ennis avoided Jack’s gaze.  He couldn’t tell him about the dream.  He never even had the opportunity to mention Earl to Jack.  It just never came up in conversation.  Now was not the time.  But he knew what needed to happen.

Ennis climbed out of bed and looked out of the window.  “Beautiful morning, Jack!” Ennis stated.  “Seems that way!” Jack answered, warily.  “Ennis, what is it?” Jack asked, incredulous.  He knew how quickly Ennis could move from one mood to the next, and he wanted to know just what he was up against.  Ennis turned to face Jack.  He was naked, and Jack appreciated the view.  “Look Jack,” Ennis began, “I gotta leave here.  I can’t stay.”  Jack heard it all before.  “What brought this on?  I thought you wanted to come back to the ranch?”  Ennis lowered his eyes to the floor.  “I have my reasons, and if you come with me, in time I’ll make them clear to you.”  Jack considered Ennis’ words.  He knew, instantly, that he never wanted to be separated from Ennis again.  He would follow him to hell, if need be.  “Okay, En,” Jack whispered.  “Sometimes we just gotta move on, make our own way in this life.  My folks will be very disappointed, but they must have known that this day would come.”  Jack climbed out of bed and embraced his lover.  “Just let me break it to my ma.  My pa will be trouble, too, but he’ll get over it.”  Ennis’ eyes danced.  He kissed Jack tenderly on his full lips.   "Where will we go?”
Title: Re: Right (85)
Post by: cwby30 on March 08, 2008, 05:08:39 pm

Mornin', Little.

Well, had me going there, as you planned!  Glad that Ennis told Jack that he would tell Jack everything in time, but not just then.  It's for the best that they leave, even if there will be weeping and wailing and gnashing of teeth and rending of garments at their leaving, too many bad memories there.  Maybe they can return someday.  But, for now their further adventures will begin.  Looking forward to that.

Thanks again. 
Title: Re: Right (85)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 08, 2008, 11:14:05 pm
Mornin', Little.

Well, had me going there, as you planned!  Glad that Ennis told Jack that he would tell Jack everything in time, but not just then.  It's for the best that they leave, even if there will be weeping and wailing and gnashing of teeth and rending of garments at their leaving, too many bad memories there.  Maybe they can return someday.  But, for now their further adventures will begin.  Looking forward to that.

Thanks again. 

Cwby30, you're very kind, as always.  I'm looking forward to the bittersweet times ahead, as well.  Can anyone say "ROAD TRIP!!!??"  Stay tuned, everyone!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on March 09, 2008, 09:56:21 pm
I thought it would be a good time for a little poem I found in a book called, "Leaves of Gold" from 1948.
The name of the poem is, ironically, "Right" and it feels like something Jack's mother may have read to him when he was a boy. I'm crazy about it; I hope everyone that reads it enjoys it, too.

Right

The world is a difficult world indeed,
And the people are hard to suit,
And the man who plays the violin
Is a bore to the man with a flute.
And I myself have often thought,
How very much better 'twould be
If every one of the folks I know
Would only agree with me.
But since they will not, the very best way
To make the world look bright,
Is to never mind what others say,
But do what you think is right.
                       --Light and Life Evangel
Title: Re: Right
Post by: cwby30 on March 10, 2008, 11:39:46 am
Mornin', Toy.

Well, great poem, fits the story really well.  I copied it and put it at the beginning of the story [yes, I have copied and saved all of the entries!], and it sets the tone just right.

Looking forward to their "road trip" and further adventures.  ;)
 
Thanks again. 
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 10, 2008, 02:05:45 pm
I thought it would be a good time for a little poem I found in a book called, "Leaves of Gold" from 1948.
The name of the poem is, ironically, "Right" and it feels like something Jack's mother may have read to him when he was a boy. I'm crazy about it; I hope everyone that reads it enjoys it, too.

Right

The world is a difficult world indeed,
And the people are hard to suit,
And the man who plays the violin
Is a bore to the man with a flute.
And I myself have often thought,
How very much better 'twould be
If every one of the folks I know
Would only agree with me.
But since they will not, the very best way
To make the world look bright,
Is to never mind what others say,
But do what you think is right.
                       --Light and Life Evangel

This is just beautiful, Toy!  I love the message!  Thanks so much for sharing it!  :-*
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on March 12, 2008, 05:15:14 am
I thought it would be a good time for a little poem I found in a book called, "Leaves of Gold" from 1948.
The name of the poem is, ironically, "Right" and it feels like something Jack's mother may have read to him when he was a boy. I'm crazy about it; I hope everyone that reads it enjoys it, too.

Right

The world is a difficult world indeed,
And the people are hard to suit,
And the man who plays the violin
Is a bore to the man with a flute.
And I myself have often thought,
How very much better 'twould be
If every one of the folks I know
Would only agree with me.
But since they will not, the very best way
To make the world look bright,
Is to never mind what others say,
But do what you think is right.
                       --Light and Life Evangel

I like it, too, Toycoon. And it fits perfectly. Thanks so much for sharing this poem, sweetie!
Title: Re: Right 85
Post by: Dagi on March 12, 2008, 05:18:03 am
Right 85 By Littlewing1957

Jack was the first to hear it!  “Ennis, wake up!” He whispered as he tried to shake his friend awake. “I think I hear someone outside the door!”  “Wha..?” Ennis mumbled groggily as he opened his sleep encrusted eyes.  Ennis pulled himself up from his pillow and faced Jack.  “Shhh..listen!” Jack spoke softly.  “I’m sure I heard someone or some thing out there!”  Ennis was fully awake now.  He had to take a moment to get his bearings, remember where he was and what was going on.  He thought back to last night when they made love so passionately and urgently.  Ennis had to smile when he remembered Jack, in the heat of passion, whispering, “Say my name, Ennis, what’s my name?”  Jack brought him back to the moment. “What's the matter with you, friend?” Jack stammered as he noticed the dreamy look on Ennis’ face.  “Don’t you think we should go investigate?”  Ennis looked at Jack and shook his head.  “I don’t hear anything, Jack!  Look, if it will make you feel better, I’ll put on a pair of jeans and go take a look.”  Jack didn’t like it.  “Wait! We can both go out there.  I won’t tell you to do something that I’m not willing to do myself.”  Ennis thought Jack was babbling, but he didn’t argue.  “Suit yourself.  C’mon then, let’s go see what’s up.”  Jack climbed out of Ennis’ twin bed first.  He looked back as Ennis pulled himself out, and, like Ennis, couldn’t help but recall last night’s deliciously satisfying love fest. 

Ennis, fully dressed in dark wash jeans and a sweatshirt, led Jack out of the basement apartment.  The early morning air was brisk to say the least.  Frothy white clouds moved across a robin’s egg blue sky on the wings of a lazy wind.  Jack followed Ennis onto his property and had a look around.  “Maybe we should have a weapon?” Jack asked. Ennis considered it.  “Well what do you suggest?  I don’t have a gun, or even a knife.”  Jack shrugged as Ennis took it all in.  There was nothing to be afraid of, or at least it seemed that way.  No one in sight.  Jack walked a bit ahead of his friend.  “Yeah, you’re right, Ennis,” Jack conceded.  “Don’t look like anything is wrong.  But I swear I heard someone out here.”  Ennis caught up to him and placed an arm around Jack’s shoulder.  “Its okay, Jack.  Nothing wrong with being cautious.  You have every right.”  Jack fought an urge to lay his head against Ennis’ shoulder.  You never know who may be watching.  “Ahhh, ain’t that sweet!”  Ennis jumped as though someone branded him with a hot poker.  Jack flung around and followed the voice, but there was no one in sight.  “Don’t let me stop your tender moment, fellas!”  Ennis and Jack both turned from side-to-side, scared out of their minds, but needing to find the danger.  “Who are you?”  Jack shouted into the air.  But before anyone could answer, Leroy Tippens and Alan Sims seemed to materialize right in front of Ennis.  Jack didn’t see anyone.  Ennis watched a bruised and bloodied Leroy slide closer toward him.  Alan was standing just behind Leroy, equally bloody, as real and as grim as death, and holding a tire iron!

It was too much for Ennis.  He woke with a start and looked around.  Sweat that was beaded on his forehead now trickled down his cheeks.  Ennis looked over at Jack who was sleeping peacefully.  It was all a cruel dream!  Ennis looked at the tray with the now cold milk and what was left of the cookies Mrs. Twist made for them.  It was all coming back.  What a relief!  But what if the dream was a warning of sorts?  Ennis thought back to the time when he was nine years old.  His dad told him he wanted to show him something very important, and took him by the hand and led him to a drainage ditch.  His brother went along, as well.  Ennis would learn of people who block bad memories from their consciousness forever, and he sincerely hoped that he could have been one of those people.  But the image of poor Earl lying in that drainage ditch with an angry red gash where his private parts were supposed to be was an image that Ennis would never forget as long as he lived.  He didn’t want to think of anything happening to Jack.  Ennis looked at his lover and patted his shoulder ever so gently.  The tender motion woke Jack.  He turned a groggy head toward Ennis and smiled.  “Hey, good morning, friend!” Jack whispered and placed his fingers between Ennis’ thighs.  Ennis warmed and smiled at his lover.  “Didn’t mean to wake you, Jack.  How you feeling?  You okay?”  Jack had a bemused look on his gorgeous face.  “Well, sure!  Why not?  You okay?”  Ennis moaned.  Jack noticed and sat upright in the tiny bed.  “Friend, what is it?” Jack was concerned now.  Ennis avoided Jack’s gaze.  He couldn’t tell him about the dream.  He never even had the opportunity to mention Earl to Jack.  It just never came up in conversation.  Now was not the time.  But he knew what needed to happen.

Ennis climbed out of bed and looked out of the window.  “Beautiful morning, Jack!” Ennis stated.  “Seems that way!” Jack answered, warily.  “Ennis, what is it?” Jack asked, incredulous.  He knew how quickly Ennis could move from one mood to the next, and he wanted to know just what he was up against.  Ennis turned to face Jack.  He was naked, and Jack appreciated the view.  “Look Jack,” Ennis began, “I gotta leave here.  I can’t stay.”  Jack heard it all before.  “What brought this on?  I thought you wanted to come back to the ranch?”  Ennis lowered his eyes to the floor.  “I have my reasons, and if you come with me, in time I’ll make them clear to you.”  Jack considered Ennis’ words.  He knew, instantly, that he never wanted to be separated from Ennis again.  He would follow him to hell, if need be.  “Okay, En,” Jack whispered.  “Sometimes we just gotta move on, make our own way in this life.  My folks will be very disappointed, but they must have known that this day would come.”  Jack climbed out of bed and embraced his lover.  “Just let me break it to my ma.  My pa will be trouble, too, but he’ll get over it.”  Ennis’ eyes danced.  He kissed Jack tenderly on his full lips.   "Where will we go?”


For a moment I thought you were making a ghost story out of it now!  :'( When will the ghosts ever leave Ennis? Can´t wait for the sequel, Maire and Oscar. Thanks for writing this story!
Title: Warm Weather and Happiness
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 15, 2008, 04:36:46 pm
Warm Weather and Happiness by Littlewing1957

The view from where he sat was spectacular!  Oh, it was not just the trees, all lush and thick with fragrant foliage, or the never ending sky with clouds sailing across on a lazy breeze.  Jack looked admiringly at his lover, Ennis Del Mar, as he moved, crouched across the warm earth, searching for a missing tent rod. 

Ennis’ back looked particularly fetching.  Jack admired the gentle curve at the base of it.  Ennis looked so strong, so damn sexy.  Jack looked around the campsite.  The weather was as spectacular as his love.  He couldn’t believe that they were finally able to enjoy a trip where they didn't have to endure the friggin' cold. 

Ennis continued to search for the rod.  Jack continued to enjoy the view, that is, until Ennis began to look so inviting!  Jack didn’t want to hurt him, but he couldn’t resist positioning himself onto Ennis’ sturdy back.  Jack’s weight didn’t even flatten Ennis to the ground.  He remained in a semi-crouching position, and didn’t utter a word, even as Jack mounted him.  Ennis had to smile.  Jack was marveling at the strength of his man when Ennis began to move back and forth in a sort of slow dance.  Jack held on for the ride as Ennis gently moved him.  Ennis grinned as Jack caressed his hair, and then his cheeks.  Happy time!  It was good to be warm.  It was so good to be alive.
Title: Warm Weather and Happiness (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 15, 2008, 04:56:11 pm
Warm Weather and Happiness (2) By Littlewing1957

“You gotta be getting tired, friend.  I know I must be heavy!”  Jack whispered into Ennis’ ear as he moved them both from east to west.  “No!” It was Ennis’ only answer.  Ennis continued the ride, but Jack began to climb off.  He didn’t want his friend to develop back problems.  “Now, you must be tired,” Ennis laughed as Jack landed, right on his bottom, onto the warm earth.

Ennis heard Jack’s landing and became concerned.  But Jack wasn’t hurt.  He lay still on the ground and smiled as Ennis moved over him.  Ennis looked down into Jack’s blue eyes and stared.  Neither man said a word as they locked eyes. 

Jack pulled Ennis’ head down for a kiss.  His full mouth touched Jack’s softly, lightly.  But Jack wanted more.  He moved in for a deeper smooch, but he was patient.  Jack knew when to let the passion build, and Ennis knew how to build it.  He deepened the kiss, devoured Jack’s warm lips.  And when mouths were red and swollen, both knew that it was time.  The tent was not pitched, but oddly enough, a dinner fire was built.  Too warm for anything but food, love would have to wait until the first chill of the night.

Fin

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on March 15, 2008, 05:34:41 pm
Mmmm, Marie, your words are pure magic. Thanks for sharing this wonderully tender and passionate scene. Thanks for writing. Thanks for writing. Thanks for writing....

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 15, 2008, 05:41:43 pm
Mmmm, Marie, your words are pure magic. Thanks for sharing this wonderully tender and passionate scene. Thanks for writing. Thanks for writing. Thanks for writing....

Dagi

Dagi, my Love, thanks for the kind words.  And thank you so much for reading!  I really appreciate it!
Title: Re: Warm Weather and Happiness
Post by: Toycoon on March 15, 2008, 08:17:36 pm
Quote
Ennis grinned as Jack caressed his hair, and then his cheeks.  Happy time!  It was good to be warm.  It was so good to be alive.


Truer words were never spoken. Littlewing1957.

Hey, I'm enjoying "My Post Was Deleted..." on IMDb by GeorgeOXStrokes. Bruce is so clever. I'm going to ask him to come over and start the game here. Wouldn't that be fun?



Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on March 15, 2008, 08:25:05 pm
Hello Toycoon and Littlewing!! How are you two?

Hey, Toycoon. I have my craft project run off. I gotta find some glue now.  :P I forgot about having to clue it to lightweight board.

I'll take a picture if it turns out.  ;D

Now--I'm going over to check out Bruce's thread!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on March 15, 2008, 08:53:38 pm
Hey there, NastyShasta,
Yer makin' your craft project; I'm so excited! I can't wait to see the picture of your Brokeback Stand-it's.

Title: Re: Warm Weather and Happiness
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 15, 2008, 10:47:18 pm

Truer words were never spoken. Littlewing1957.

Hey, I'm enjoying "My Post Was Deleted..." on IMDb by GeorgeOXStrokes. Bruce is so clever. I'm going to ask him to come over and start the game here. Wouldn't that be fun?





It is a fun thread!  I think it would be awesome to include it here!
Title: Anticipation
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 15, 2008, 10:59:09 pm
Anticipation By Littlewing1957

Jack climbed behind the driver’s seat of his new truck and prepared himself mentally for the 1400 mile drive to Wyoming.  He didn’t mind the journey, but he made a point to psyche himself up emotionally.  Greeting Ennis Del Mar after several months apart was no small thing! 

Jack gripped the steering wheel and clenched his eyes shut.  He was nervous.  He wasn’t even on the road yet, just kissed his family goodbye a few minutes ago, but already he wondered how it would go.  Jack thought about the sequence of events.  He was getting more excited than nervous.  What usually happens from the start?  Well, that depended on who arrived first at the designated spot.  Jack generally arrived early, and when Ennis did show up, he felt himself almost weak from joy.  After that, they just played it by ear.

Jack started the truck.  He had to get a move on.  He didn’t need an impetus, other than the thought of Ennis appearing before him.  Perhaps Ennis would make it to the site first.  Jack saw, in his mind’s eye, Ennis preparing the campsite, unaware that he was being watched.  And when he noticed Jack’s approach, Ennis would stop himself from jumping up and down like a lovesick puppy.  It was an agreeable thought.  Jack drove faster than the speed limit.  He had to get to his lover.  He would risk a traffic ticket to see Ennis running toward him.


Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 15, 2008, 11:03:13 pm
Hello Toycoon and Littlewing!! How are you two?

Hey, Toycoon. I have my craft project run off. I gotta find some glue now.  :P I forgot about having to clue it to lightweight board.

I'll take a picture if it turns out.  ;D

Now--I'm going over to check out Bruce's thread!


Hey, Shasta!  I'm doing okay.  I trust you're well?  I have to go over and start on Toy's craft.  It sounds like a lot of fun!  I have just the spot for them!
Title: Anticipation (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 15, 2008, 11:20:36 pm
Anticipation (2) By Littlewing1957

Ennis sat very still on his small bed.  He would normally pace around his trailer like a nervous cat while he anticipated his rendezvous with Jack Twist.  This time was different, though.  He was fighting back a bad feeling, a sense of foreboding.  Ennis was not a superstitious man, but he wondered if this trip should take place.  There was nothing specific about his fears.  Ennis didn’t know why he was bothered.  The bad feelings were there, and he didn’t like it one bit.

Ennis was a man of his word, and he had every intention of meeting Jack up at Don Wroe’s cabin.  He placed his warm coat and a couple shirts in his drawstring knapsack.  He packed his toothbrush and a pair of sneakers.  He didn’t have to worry about food.  Jack promised to cart up a truckload of vittles to the cabin.  Everything was packed, and Ennis locked his trailer door behind him.  He was all ready for 10 days at Don Wroe’s cabin.

Jack was there first.  Ennis still couldn’t fight his feelings of dread, even after kissing Jack on the mouth.  He made a valiant effort of hiding his feelings, and was successful.  Jack never knew.  Ennis was uneasy right through dinner.  But when the first stars peeked out from grey clouds, and Jack pulled Ennis down on the living room sofa, Ennis began to soften.  Jack began to groom him.  He combed his sandy hair with his fingers and inspected his day-old stubble.  Jack’s ministrations had Ennis purring like a well-fed cat in no time.  He leaned back and let Jack do his thing.  An hour later when Jack was silent in his arms, Ennis couldn’t even remember what he was so scared about.  That Jack Twist!  There was no one else for him.  He could give eyesight to the blind!

Fin




Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: elomelo on March 15, 2008, 11:34:32 pm
Blue Smoke by elomelo

Smoke curled in haphazard wisps, grey-blue in the pink light spilling across the stretch of sky before dissappearing into nothingness. Like the moments between them.

Ennis took one last drag of the cigaratte, the very same Jack had thrown at him in the morning before retreating into the tent. They bickered, yes, Jack accounting for more than a healthy amount of the complaining but it usually didn't go past a certain point. They would fight, glare, launch at each other and roll around, and then proceed to kiss the living daylights out of each other. But today was different; there was only a tired sigh of resignation, on Jack's part, after the fight and the glare.

It was a stupid, stupid argument. Over those damn beans, again. Well, it had started off as that. Somehow the heated conversation had taken a turn towards Jack's inability to cook anything worth a damn and then Ennis's utter failure at putting up a decent tent. They were both shouting. Ennis ended it with a growl - "Jack fuckin' Twist, a cigarette would be better than being here talkin to you anyday." As soon as Ennis had said those words, he wished he could take back. It was almost comical how far Jack could drop that stubbled jaw of his or how wide those blue eyes could get.

He dropped the cancer stick to the ground, grinding his heel a bit harder than necessary to put it out. He hated when they fought like this, their pride getting the better of them. Jack had an ego, a considerably large one if Ennis had any say in it, but that wasn't to say it was something the blonde haired cowboy lacked. When they kissed, it was a battle for dominance, tongues claiming, teeth gnashing. But it was Jack who, whilst smashing his lips against Ennis's and drawing blood for all he knew, stroked his jaw so gently, it was ironic.

Sometimes just looking at the man drove Ennis crazy. How could someone be that beautiful and completely unaware of it? He wouldn't say it to Jack, not to his face, but he hated it when Jack hurt himself, even if it were a small cut or scratch. It was unacceptable in his eyes. Only him, only Ennis could leave any marks on that taut skin. Which he did with vigour, branding Jack, leaving the marks like the loveletters he could never bring himself to write. These were unsaid agreements between them, silent whispers between gasps and moans and smiles and glares and huffs and chuckles.

The sun was melting into the sky, its yellow light bleeding into the pink and purple hues of the skies. Stars glimmered high above. Jack loved stars, saw shapes between the bright dots; cowboys and clouds and jars and things Ennis didn't. But he nodded all the same, smiling and holding him tighter.

"It's gettin colder, cowboy," a soft voice broke through his reverie, "so git in here before this fuckup has to haul your ass in."

Apparently all was forgiven.

-------

There might be a sequel of sorts, if I muster the energy. Must. Drink. Caffeine.

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 16, 2008, 12:52:54 am
Blue Smoke by elomelo

Smoke curled in haphazard wisps, grey-blue in the pink light spilling across the stretch of sky before dissappearing into nothingness. Like the moments between them.

Ennis took one last drag of the cigaratte, the very same Jack had thrown at him in the morning before retreating into the tent. They bickered, yes, Jack accounting for more than a healthy amount of the complaining but it usually didn't go past a certain point. They would fight, glare, launch at each other and roll around, and then proceed to kiss the living daylights out of each other. But today was different; there was only a tired sigh of resignation, on Jack's part, after the fight and the glare.

It was a stupid, stupid argument. Over those damn beans, again. Well, it had started off as that. Somehow the heated conversation had taken a turn towards Jack's inability to cook anything worth a damn and then Ennis's utter failure at putting up a decent tent. They were both shouting. Ennis ended it with a growl - "Jack fuckin' Twist, a cigarette would be better than being here talkin to you anyday." As soon as Ennis had said those words, he wished he could take back. It was almost comical how far Jack could drop that stubbled jaw of his or how wide those blue eyes could get.

He dropped the cancer stick to the ground, grinding his heel a bit harder than necessary to put it out. He hated when they fought like this, their pride getting the better of them. Jack had an ego, a considerably large one if Ennis had any say in it, but that wasn't to say it was something the blonde haired cowboy lacked. When they kissed, it was a battle for dominance, tongues claiming, teeth gnashing. But it was Jack who, whilst smashing his lips against Ennis's and drawing blood for all he knew, stroked his jaw so gently, it was ironic.

Sometimes just looking at the man drove Ennis crazy. How could someone be that beautiful and completely unaware of it? He wouldn't say it to Jack, not to his face, but he hated it when Jack hurt himself, even if it were a small cut or scratch. It was unacceptable in his eyes. Only him, only Ennis could leave any marks on that taut skin. Which he did with vigour, branding Jack, leaving the marks like the loveletters he could never bring himself to write. These were unsaid agreements between them, silent whispers between gasps and moans and smiles and glares and huffs and chuckles.

The sun was melting into the sky, its yellow light bleeding into the pink and purple hues of the skies. Stars glimmered high above. Jack loved stars, saw shapes between the bright dots; cowboys and clouds and jars and things Ennis didn't. But he nodded all the same, smiling and holding him tighter.

"It's gettin colder, cowboy," a soft voice broke through his reverie, "so git in here before this fuckup has to haul your ass in."

Apparently all was forgiven.

-------

There might be a sequel of sorts, if I muster the energy. Must. Drink. Caffeine.



Elomelo, welcome in.  Thanks so much for sharing this exceptional story with us.  I really hung on every word, and I truly hope you favor us with a sequel.  I just love reading about a young Ennis and Jack, getting to know one another up there on Brokeback.  You have given us a very intimate look at their dealings up on the mountian.  "Blue Smoke" is very sexy and moving at the same time.  You are a gifted writer, and you have such an insight into Ennis and Jack's relationship.  I just love how you describe their interaction.

Again, thanks so much for sharing.  I really treasure this tale.  Please do it again!  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: BBM-Cat on March 16, 2008, 01:46:21 am
Blue Smoke by elomelo

Wow, I'm in awe - great job Elomelo, such beautiful detailing of Ennis & Jack's intimacy and humanness. I second Littlewing in hoping that you will please write some more!! 
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: elomelo on March 16, 2008, 03:29:12 pm
Elomelo, welcome in.  Thanks so much for sharing this exceptional story with us.  I really hung on every word, and I truly hope you favor us with a sequel.  I just love reading about a young Ennis and Jack, getting to know one another up there on Brokeback.  You have given us a very intimate look at their dealings up on the mountian.  "Blue Smoke" is very sexy and moving at the same time.  You are a gifted writer, and you have such an insight into Ennis and Jack's relationship.  I just love how you describe their interaction.

Again, thanks so much for sharing.  I really treasure this tale.  Please do it again!  :)

Thank you littlewing1957 :) :) I really appreciate your comments and do intend to continue writing here. Your story was wonderful too!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 16, 2008, 05:55:04 pm
Thank you littlewing1957 :) :) I really appreciate your comments and do intend to continue writing here. Your story was wonderful too!

Fabulous!  I really want more of your writing.   :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on March 16, 2008, 09:36:16 pm
Spectacular Elomelo!
I'm so glad you choose the Jack with Ennis Fanfic Game as your forum for your writing debut. Your writing is quite wonderful! Very visual and descriptive. Truly enjoyable. I hope you continue to contribute to our thread. It's exciting to see fresh talent around these parts.
Title: Happiness is Just Around the bend?
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 18, 2008, 10:05:04 pm
Happiness is Just Around the Bend? By Littlewing1957

Jack felt things were looking up!  He was just paid a hefty commission for selling an expensive combine.  He drove down the streets of Childress and looked for the signs that would lead him to Dallas.  It was a long drive, perhaps totally unnecessary, but Jack liked to keep his financial matters secret and separate.  He thought maintaining a bank account at an obscure financial institution in Dallas was a good idea.

Jack parked his new truck in the lot of the Fidelity Savings and Loan.  He had an account at this particular branch for going on 10 years.  His passbook never left his person.  Lureen didn’t know about it.  No one did.  “Hello, Mr. Twist!”  It was Vera, one of the tellers who found Jack particularly attractive.  She was sitting on a bench outside the small building, obviously taking a break.  Jack nodded Vera’s way without stopping.  He had to make a deposit and head on home.  The Savings and Loan was not crowded by any means, but the dozen or so folks in line all turned to watch as Jack entered.  He seemed oblivious to the reaction of the other customers.  Jack was there for one thing and one thing only.  He was building a nest egg of sorts.

“Another deposit, Mr. Twist?” A lovely young lady asked as Jack approached her window.  “Yeah, I’m afraid so, Pam.” Jack answered matter-of-factly.  Pam smiled at her customer and accepted the cash.  She entered the amount in Jack’s passbook and stamped it.  “Anything else I can do for you, Mr. Twist?” Pam’s eyes twinkled.  Jack noticed and smiled.  These women are so silly!  Jack thought as he placed his passbook inside his jacket’s inner pocket.  If only they knew!  Jack considered the staggering sum of money he was able to squirrel away over the years.  It was an almost unbelievable amount and would make a nice down payment on a spread.  Jack stood still a moment and patted the passbook.  In his mind’s eye he saw Ennis running around the expanse with one of his horses.  It was a sweet vision.  If only he could convince Ennis to make his dream of that sweet life a reality.  Jack was a determined man.  He was a man in love.  He thought about a song he heard on the radio: “Happiness is just around the bend.”  Jack considered the lyrics to the song:  “Happiness is just around the bend.”  He hoped so.  He hoped so with all of his being.  Jack exited the Savings and Loan and headed out for Childress.


Title: Re: Anticipation (2)
Post by: Dagi on March 19, 2008, 06:29:10 am
Anticipation (2) By Littlewing1957

Ennis sat very still on his small bed.  He would normally pace around his trailer like a nervous cat while he anticipated his rendezvous with Jack Twist.  This time was different, though.  He was fighting back a bad feeling, a sense of foreboding.  Ennis was not a superstitious man, but he wondered if this trip should take place.  There was nothing specific about his fears.  Ennis didn’t know why he was bothered.  The bad feelings were there, and he didn’t like it one bit.

Ennis was a man of his word, and he had every intention of meeting Jack up at Don Wroe’s cabin.  He placed his warm coat and a couple shirts in his drawstring knapsack.  He packed his toothbrush and a pair of sneakers.  He didn’t have to worry about food.  Jack promised to cart up a truckload of vittles to the cabin.  Everything was packed, and Ennis locked his trailer door behind him.  He was all ready for 10 days at Don Wroe’s cabin.

Jack was there first.  Ennis still couldn’t fight his feelings of dread, even after kissing Jack on the mouth.  He made a valiant effort of hiding his feelings, and was successful.  Jack never knew.  Ennis was uneasy right through dinner.  But when the first stars peeked out from grey clouds, and Jack pulled Ennis down on the living room sofa, Ennis began to soften.  Jack began to groom him.  He combed his sandy hair with his fingers and inspected his day-old stubble.  Jack’s ministrations had Ennis purring like a well-fed cat in no time.  He leaned back and let Jack do his thing.  An hour later when Jack was silent in his arms, Ennis couldn’t even remember what he was so scared about.  That Jack Twist!  There was no one else for him.  He could give eyesight to the blind!

Fin






Love your stories, Marie! Your little episodes that let us look into our boy´s hearts are so precious.

Dagi :-*
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on March 19, 2008, 06:36:02 am
Blue Smoke by elomelo




 :D That was a wonderful story, Elomelo! I´m glad you are joining in. I´d love to read more.

Dagi
Title: Re: Anticipation (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 19, 2008, 02:58:01 pm
Love your stories, Marie! Your little episodes that let us look into our boy´s hearts are so precious.

Dagi :-*

Thanks, Dagi!  I love writing them.
Title: Re: Homecoming
Post by: cwby30 on March 20, 2008, 12:25:39 pm
Mornin'.

Well, have sure enjoyed reading all the stories posted recently, and apologize for not taking the time to say hello and tell you that.  So, I am!

I posted a one-shot on my LJ a little while ago, and thought I'd contribute it here.  It's more than three paragraphs [by a long shot!], so have included the link.  Not sure how to make this link work with a "click" of the mouse, you'll have to cut-and-paste.  I tried it and it works that way.  Hope you like it. 

http://cwby30.livejournal.com/10147.html#cutid1

Always appreciate being included in the Fan Fic Game... great thread here. 

Thanks again.
Title: Re: Homecoming
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 20, 2008, 10:10:13 pm
Mornin'.

Well, have sure enjoyed reading all the stories posted recently, and apologize for not taking the time to say hello and tell you that.  So, I am!

I posted a one-shot on my LJ a little while ago, and thought I'd contribute it here.  It's more than three paragraphs [by a long shot!], so have included the link.  Not sure how to make this link work with a "click" of the mouse, you'll have to cut-and-paste.  I tried it and it works that way.  Hope you like it. 

http://cwby30.livejournal.com/10147.html#cutid1

Always appreciate being included in the Fan Fic Game... great thread here. 

Thanks again.

I'm just making it clickable, cwby30!

http://cwby30.livejournal.com/10147.html#cutid1 (http://cwby30.livejournal.com/10147.html#cutid1)

I haven't had a chance to read all of it, but I'm really enjoying the tale.  I won't spoil it for the others.  I do recommend Homecoming, you guys.  Cwby30's fic is a real sweet read.  And there are other tales on the site that I'm sure are just as entertaining.  Thanks for the link, Babe!  I'll finish the story and post a reply.  I'll also read your other work.  You're a very sensitive soul, cwby30, and a very talented writer.  I'm so glad you've joined us.



Title: Re: Homecoming
Post by: cwby30 on March 21, 2008, 12:07:51 am

Evenin', Littlewing.

Well, can't hardly write, I'm blushing so hard.  Appreciate greatly the compliment.  Again, it's great to be included in this thread.   :D

Thanks again.
Title: Re: Homecoming
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 21, 2008, 09:32:11 pm
Evenin', Littlewing.

Well, can't hardly write, I'm blushing so hard.  Appreciate greatly the compliment.  Again, it's great to be included in this thread.   :D

Thanks again.

Thank you, cwby30!    :) I should have something nice and juicy posted soon.  Please hang in here with us!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 22, 2008, 09:09:30 pm
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Happy Easter!

Happy Easter to you, My Love!
Title: Straight from the Can
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 25, 2008, 01:18:50 am
My mom always said, “Food brings people together.”  I never gave it much thought, but once I shared a can of beans with Ennis Del Mar, I realized that my ma was right.  We bonded over beans, and over stringy dried elk and canned fruit.  I remember watching a wavering, shadowy outline of Ennis Del Mar scooping beans out of a can, his manly shape gloomy in the night.  Ennis never took the first bite.  He always feed me first from the spoon, then ate heartily himself.  Ennis liked beans.  I liked to watch him eat.  These days I’m used to more fancy vittles: steak, shrimp, grilled wild salmon, and asparagus.  But for me the true feast is being fed beans straight from a can, lovingly by my man.
Title: Re: Time
Post by: cwby30 on March 25, 2008, 11:58:58 am
For a long time, he'd invite me to stay, to share the sweet life with him.  I'd always decline, told him two guys just didn't do that, too afraid of tire irons.  That wasn't the half of it.  I was too afraid of myself, letting go, letting him in all the way, all the time.   Done him wrong, all these years, last trip made that clear.  It's time now.  He hasn't asked for some time, don't think he will again after what I said last time. So I'm gonna invite him next time, come November. Hope he'll accept this time. 


[100 words, Drabblefest prompts: invite accept decline]
Title: Re: Time
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 25, 2008, 04:16:39 pm
For a long time, he'd invite me to stay, to share the sweet life with him.  I'd always decline, told him two guys just didn't do that, too afraid of tire irons.  That wasn't the half of it.  I was too afraid of myself, letting go, letting him in all the way, all the time.   Done him wrong, all these years, last trip made that clear.  It's time now.  He hasn't asked for some time, don't think he will again after what I said last time. So I'm gonna invite him next time, come November. Hope he'll accept this time. 


[100 words, Drabblefest prompts: invite accept decline]


Beautiful, cwby30!  This reads like a poem or a song.  I haven't been to the drabblefest in awhile.  I'll consider using some of the prompts to write fic for this thread. 

Thanks for sharing!
Title: Re: Straight from the Can
Post by: Toycoon on March 26, 2008, 10:26:30 am
Very cool, Littlewing. I like the new format, too. I'll have to give it a go.  :-*
Title: Re: Time
Post by: Toycoon on March 26, 2008, 10:29:29 am
For a long time, he'd invite me to stay, to share the sweet life with him.  I'd always decline, told him two guys just didn't do that, too afraid of tire irons.  That wasn't the half of it.  I was too afraid of myself, letting go, letting him in all the way, all the time.   Done him wrong, all these years, last trip made that clear.  It's time now.  He hasn't asked for some time, don't think he will again after what I said last time. So I'm gonna invite him next time, come November. Hope he'll accept this time. 


[100 words, Drabblefest prompts: invite accept decline]


Excellent, cwby30,
I'm really enjoying this new style. It has a very special, personal feel. As I said. I'm going to have to give this a go, myself.  :)
Title: Re: Time & Style
Post by: cwby30 on March 26, 2008, 11:33:37 am
Mornin', Marie and Toy.

Well, appreciate your kind words about the 'drabble'.  It's fun and hard to keep it to 100 words or less, and often I end up going over the 100.  Most of the time, it's little vignettes of life and feelings, but sometimes they take on a life of their own, as did my series about "The Wedding Reception."  Last year over on that thread, two authors used the prompts to write almost stories, making entries almost daily, one short and the other longer.  Unfortunately, both stopped writing before resolving their stories. 

And, speaking of which, any progress on J&E's progress at deciding what they're gonna do now, to get things right? Inquiring minds want to know. 

Thanks again. 
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Artiste on March 26, 2008, 07:15:40 pm
Happiness is around the bend?

Where is that bend??

I want to be there!!

Au revoir,
hugs! I'll give a dozen roses to the one who finds me that hapinnes bend!!
Title: Re: Conversation
Post by: cwby30 on March 26, 2008, 08:05:52 pm
After what they'd just gone through, Jack couldn't carry on a coherent conversation, didn't have the strength to attach one word to another.  But mustering his all, he looked into Ennis' eyes, and croaked out, "Damn, Ennis, you've gone and nearly done me in this time! I'm exhausted. After 25 years, how can every time we do this still be like the first time? Not that I'm complaining."  He wrapped his left arm tighter around a panting naked Ennis who was snuggling against him in their bed, and who responded in a hoarse whisper, "Shut up and kiss me, Twist."

[word count: 100,  Drabblefest prompts:  Conversation    strength    attach]
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 27, 2008, 08:45:52 pm
Happiness is around the bend?

Where is that bend??

I want to be there!!

Au revoir,
hugs! I'll give a dozen roses to the one who finds me that hapinnes bend!!

Ah, Artiste, what a pleasant surprise.  Happiness is wherever you find it, my sweet!  It is always a pleasure to hear from you.  Please visit us more often.  Oh, and if you can, please try your hand at writing a story and posting it here.  I think you'll be a great addition to the gang!  :)
Title: Re: Conversation
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 27, 2008, 08:48:30 pm
After what they'd just gone through, Jack couldn't carry on a coherent conversation, didn't have the strength to attach one word to another.  But mustering his all, he looked into Ennis' eyes, and croaked out, "Damn, Ennis, you've gone and nearly done me in this time! I'm exhausted. After 25 years, how can every time we do this still be like the first time? Not that I'm complaining."  He wrapped his left arm tighter around a panting naked Ennis who was snuggling against him in their bed, and who responded in a hoarse whisper, "Shut up and kiss me, Twist."

[word count: 100,  Drabblefest prompts:  Conversation    strength    attach]

Wow, you said a mouthful in 100 words!  Brilliant slice of life, Cwby30!  Very sweet and sexy all at once.  I can imagine Ennis and Jack making serious love well into old age.  I want to give them that chance with my writing.  Those two deserve it.  Thanks for sharing.  Beautiful!
Title: Re: Time
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 27, 2008, 08:51:03 pm
Such a bittersweet little tale, cwby30.  Thanks for sharing your drabble with us.

Gary, Gary, Gary!  It is always good to see you here!  Thanks for your comments.  I really enjoyed reading them.  It looks like you're pretty much caught up, but stay tuned.  Toycoon says he's working on the next installment of "Right."  I'll take it from there, and everything will be everything!  :)

You must visit us more often.  I really miss you here.  I'm craving another Daniel and Tyler story!  ;)
Title: An Honorable Man
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 27, 2008, 10:45:57 pm
An Honorable Man by Littlewing1957

Jack watched as Ennis rode his mare.  He held, draped across his lap, a smallish lamb.  Ennis rode his mare back and forth among the sheep, protecting the tiny lamb with his own body.  Jack always considered himself the nurturing type, and it amused him and delighted him to see that Ennis was every bit as caring.

Ennis took his job seriously.  He wanted and needed to do right by Aguirre.  Jack wondered, as he watched Ennis climb down from the mare and tend to the lamb, if Ennis endeavored to do a good job for the sake of it, or was there some selfish reason?

Ennis was an honorable man.  He would get the job done.  He aimed to get it right.  Ennis would never admit it, but he also needed to be rubbed and stroked.  He would do the honorable thing.  He would try to get the count right for Aguirre.  But Jack knew that whatever happened, Ennis would lay beside him in the tent that night.   
Title: Re: Kudos
Post by: cwby30 on March 27, 2008, 11:22:58 pm
Evenin', everyone.

Well, thanks Gary, Marie for your kind words, as always.  I enjoy the "drabble" format, and having to think about how the prompts will fit in.  Don't have to use all three, but try to do it each time. 

And, Marie, your last few stories are great.  You capture their need and love for each other, balancing Ennis' fears and doubts with Jack's determination. 

Also, glad to hear about Right (86), really looking forward to your picking up the story. 

Thanks again. 
Title: Re: Honorable
Post by: cwby30 on March 27, 2008, 11:40:27 pm
Sitting in the ballroom at a table set with fine china, sterling silver and crystal, dining by candlelight on tender roast beef and roasted red potatoes, washed down with some red wine from Napa Valley, wherever that was, served by a waiter in a crisp white jacket, he listened to LD loudly praise the merits of the Honorable Anthony Sterling, your local representative to the State Legislature.  He preferred the luxury of eating steaks cooked over an open fire under the light of Wyoming stars, washed down with whiskey from a bottle passed to him by a man with dark brown eyes, a quiet laugh and a smile tugging at the corners of his mouth.

[115 words.  Drabblefest prompts:  honorable   roast beef   luxury]
Title: Re: Kudos
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 28, 2008, 12:57:45 am
Evenin', everyone.

Well, thanks Gary, Marie for your kind words, as always.  I enjoy the "drabble" format, and having to think about how the prompts will fit in.  Don't have to use all three, but try to do it each time. 

And, Marie, your last few stories are great.  You capture their need and love for each other, balancing Ennis' fears and doubts with Jack's determination. 

Also, glad to hear about Right (86), really looking forward to your picking up the story. 

Thanks again. 

Thanks, cwby30!  You're sweet!  :-*
Title: Re: Honorable
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 28, 2008, 12:59:40 am
Sitting in the ballroom at a table set with fine china, sterling silver and crystal, dining by candlelight on tender roast beef and roasted red potatoes, washed down with some red wine from Napa Valley, wherever that was, served by a waiter in a crisp white jacket, he listened to LD loudly praise the merits of the Honorable Anthony Sterling, your local representative to the State Legislature.  He preferred the luxury of eating steaks cooked over an open fire under the light of Wyoming stars, washed down with whiskey from a bottle passed to him by a man with dark brown eyes, a quiet laugh and a smile tugging at the corners of his mouth.

[115 words.  Drabblefest prompts:  honorable   roast beef   luxury]

Sublime!  I was transported with this one.  I can just image L.D. sticking his chest out, talking politics!  Genius, cwby30!  Thanks so much for posting!
Title: Camping
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 30, 2008, 01:18:35 am
Camping by Littlewing1957

Ennis considered himself officially retired, and moved in with Alma Jr. to spend the rest of his days in relative comfort.  Alma Jr. was recently divorced and was raising her young daughter and almost grown son by herself.  Alma invited Ennis to stay with her after her husband left the marriage.  She needed his help and wanted his companionship.  Ennis’ grand kids loved him and were delighted when they found out he had come to stay.

Alma Jr. bought Ennis one of those tiny black-and-white television sets as a welcome home present.  Ennis pulled the cute little t.v. from the box and inspected it.  He shook his head in wonder as he turned the television on.  The screen was small but he didn’t have a problem.  He saw very clearly a woman practically drooling over a bottle of “Mr. Clean.”  Ennis couldn’t believe it.  “The future is today!” Ennis muttered as he kissed Alma Jr. on her ruddy cheek and thanked her for the gift.

Alma Jr. lived not too far from Buffalo Bill State Park.  Ennis never lost his love of camping; not even after his fishing buddy passed away.  His eyes twinkled as he watched his grandson place a call to the park’s office to make a reservation.  James wanted to go along, but Ennis turned him down as gently as he could.  He would take the boy camping some other time.  Ennis needed to be alone his first time out.  Alma Jr. packed her father a thermos full of orange juice, and prepared him a meal of grilled pork chops, potato salad, and bread.  Ennis didn’t need much, as he would only be camping out for one night.  His gear was old but still functional.  James helped grandpa Ennis load his gear onto his truck.  Ennis headed out to the park while his family stood on the front steps of their home, waving goodbye.

Ennis was too tired to erect his tent.  The drive to the park took much longer than he expected, and by the time he found his place, he was dead tired.  The truck bed was big enough for him to use as a place to sleep.  Ennis looked around him as he lit a fire to heat up his dinner.  The site was noisy and animated with families playing ball, cooking, and a few teenagers were listening to pop music and dancing.  While he ate his meal, a few of the women noticed him and walked by his truck several times, smiling at him and nodding.  Mr. Del Mar smiled and nodded back.  One brazen chick even deliberately dropped a piece of wood she was carrying and bent down provocatively to pick it up.  She made sure Ennis had a nice view of her daisy duke clad rear end.  Ennis chuckled to himself.  He almost felt sorry for her when she realized that he wasn’t the least bit interested.  The pretty lady uttered a miffed “humph!” and went on about her business.  When the sun began to set, Ennis fetched the pile of blankets Jamed packed for him and climbed onto the truck bed.  He placed beside him the small t.v. that Alma Jr. bought him and turned it on.  It worked!  He actually got reception out there!  Ennis covered himself with the blankets and watched an episode of Saturday Night Live.  Even at that late hour the campsite was alive with people who couldn’t or wouldn’t sleep.  Ennis watched the shadows of folks dancing, running, jumping.  He pulled the covers over his head and remembered when he and Jack Twist were running in the woods at the base of Brokeback Mountain.  Memories of his deceased lover once haunted him, but as the days wore on and he felt old, thoughts of Jack served to comfort him.  Ennis liked it better that way.  He huddled into the blankets and imaged his long lost lover’s arms around him.  He fell asleep and called for Jack Twist to join him in a dream.
Title: Re: Trust
Post by: cwby30 on April 01, 2008, 02:12:52 pm
They lay naked and spread-eagled in the afternoon sunshine on the wide bank of their river, their panting caused by much more than the high altitude.  Trust Ennis to find another way to leave me a puddle of mush, thought Jack.  Ennis just purred beside him, eyes closed, the makings of a smile spreading across his face. 

[57 words; Drabblefest prompts:  bank   trust   spread]
Title: Re: Trust
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 01, 2008, 02:22:24 pm
They lay naked and spread-eagled in the afternoon sunshine on the wide bank of their river, their panting caused by much more than the high altitude.  Trust Ennis to find another way to leave me a puddle of mush, thought Jack.  Ennis just purred beside him, eyes closed, the makings of a smile spreading across his face. 

[57 words; Drabblefest prompts:  bank   trust   spread]

Beautiful, just beautiful!  I'm just amazed at how much you can say with so few words.  Very sexy, very descriptive cwby30!  Thanks so much for sharing.
Title: Right
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 01, 2008, 02:25:52 pm
I just want to let everyone know that an installment of "Right" will be posted in a few days.  I'm working on it now.  I plan to post a longer chapter than usual, as there is a lot of ground to cover.  I trust Toycoon won't mind if I tell you he'll be away from the Board for a few weeks, and I'll carry on with "Right" until he returns.  Stay tuned, and thanks for your patience.  :)
Title: Re: Bank
Post by: cwby30 on April 01, 2008, 06:03:57 pm
Another one, just couldn't resist:

Coming from the darkness of the building he squinted in the bright afternoon sunshine, holding a piece of paper in his right hand with a death grip.  He couldn't believe it, but it was right there before his eyes, a single word stamped across it in red capital letters big enough to read even without fumbling for his glasses: PAID. As of 1:32 PM that day they owned their spread free and clear of the First Bank & Trust of Wyoming.  He grinned at the figure sitting in the truck parked at the curb, waved the paper and yelled, "Yee-haw!"


[100 words.  Drabblefest prompts: bank   trust   spread]
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on April 01, 2008, 06:53:09 pm
Hello Kids!

Just checking in! I'm so out of it. School is gonna wind down here in about 7 weeks and maybe I can relax a little.

Toycoon -- are you here, or have you left for China? I think you said it would be next week maybe??

Littlewing will be having company before too long -- Dagi!! That will be exciting to meet another Brokie, huh?

Littlewing -- are you busier and busier getting your sweet girl ready for graduation? What's going on there?

Talk to ya'll later. Take care! Love and Hugs!
Title: Re: Trust
Post by: Toycoon on April 01, 2008, 10:12:39 pm
Wow! Hot and sexy cwby30!
You're a nasty natural!
Title: Re: Bank
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 01, 2008, 11:16:10 pm
Another one, just couldn't resist:

Coming from the darkness of the building he squinted in the bright afternoon sunshine, holding a piece of paper in his right hand with a death grip.  He couldn't believe it, but it was right there before his eyes, a single word stamped across it in red capital letters big enough to read even without fumbling for his glasses: PAID. As of 1:32 PM that day they owned their spread free and clear of the First Bank & Trust of Wyoming.  He grinned at the figure sitting in the truck parked at the curb, waved the paper and yelled, "Yee-haw!"


[100 words.  Drabblefest prompts: bank   trust   spread]


Awwww, I just love it!  This is such a heartfelt telling of Jack and Ennis' sweet life coming to pass.  And in 100 words!  Beautiful!
Title: Re: Trust
Post by: cwby30 on April 01, 2008, 11:20:16 pm
Evenin', Toy.

Well, I'll take that compliment! Especially coming from the writer Mr. 'Right'.  8)

Thanks again. 
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 01, 2008, 11:24:38 pm
Hello Kids!

Just checking in! I'm so out of it. School is gonna wind down here in about 7 weeks and maybe I can relax a little.

Toycoon -- are you here, or have you left for China? I think you said it would be next week maybe??

Littlewing will be having company before too long -- Dagi!! That will be exciting to meet another Brokie, huh?

Littlewing -- are you busier and busier getting your sweet girl ready for graduation? What's going on there?

Talk to ya'll later. Take care! Love and Hugs!


Hey, Shasta!  It's so nice to see you here!  I know you'll be glad when school is out.  I will be, as well.  Maria and I are getting her forms ready for FIDM.  Have you ever watched the MTV reality series, "The Hills?"  Well, Maria is applying to the same school that the girls are attending on the show: FIDM, Fashion Institute of Design and Merchandising.  The only thing is, if Maria is accepted, she'll enroll at the San Francisco campus.  She may transfer to the L.A. campus at a later date.  I believe Maria has a good shot of getting in.  The admissions people are impressed with her designs.  We have a meeting with the directors next week.  I'll keep you posted.  Thanks for asking!  :)

Dagi and I are excited about meeting face-to-face.  We still have about 2 months to iron out the details, but we're working that out.  I can't wait to see her.  And I'm dying to meet Gary in the flesh.  Meeting the 2 of them will do me a world of good!
Title: Luxury
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 01, 2008, 11:35:04 pm
Luxury by Littlewing1957

Jack insisted they stop for the night.  Ennis couldn’t conscious the expense, but Jack insisted on paying.  They were up half the night driving back to the point where they met up for the trip, and at that moment, neither was in any shape to drive another mile.  The place was as swanky a hotel as Ennis could imagine.  He didn’t even know the great state of Wyoming built such places.

Ennis didn’t notice the name of the hotel as Jack checked them in.  All he saw was sumptuous appointments.  Everywhere Ennis turned he was surrounded by beauty.  How could Jack afford to put them up here, even for the night?  But Jack didn’t even blink when the clerk handed him a receipt to sign.  The room rented for $120.00 a night.

And what a room!  Ennis entered into luxury he never imagined.  Jack whooped when he saw the king sized bed, wardrobe, desk, and a bathroom much grander than any he had ever seen.  Jack plopped down on the bed and rolled from side to side.  Ennis stood there and looked at Jack, not sure what to do.  But when Jack eased him down right on top of him, Ennis realized that luxury was not just brocade wall hangings and white shag carpeting.  The true measure of luxury was the feel of a loving, accepting embrace.  Ennis settled into the precious warmth of Jack’s arms.
Title: On My Mind
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 01, 2008, 11:38:45 pm
On My Mind by Littlewing1957

Jack was drunk!  He just won his third straight rodeo competition and decided to celebrate, alone, at the nearest bar: the one located just a stone’s throw from the fleabag hotel where he rented a room by the night.  Jack Twist never felt so alone.  He was on a winning streak, but no one approached him to ask him out for a drink, or to even congratulate him on a job well done.  Jack took a seat at the bar and ordered a whiskey neat from the greasy bartender.  He knocked it back in an instant, and ordered another.  Jack chuckled silently as he remembered falling all over himself after clowning around for Ennis Del Mar.  Ennis told him that his dad called Rodeo riders “F ups!”  Jack chugged his whiskey and wiped his mouth with the back of a hand.  He was alone.  Jack thought perhaps he was a f up after all.  There was perhaps nothing more pathetic than a young man, a Rodeo champion, alone and lonely on a Saturday night.

The juke box had been silent when Jack entered the bar, but someone placed a coin in it and now it blared a sad tune.  Jack recognized the song as Glen Campbell’s “Gentle on my Mind.”  He wondered what the person who requested that song was trying to do to him.  Jack ordered another drink and he got it.  Jack was so wasted that he saw an image right in front of him – the image of a sandy haired cowboy.  Ennis Del Mar was standing right in front of him, occupying the space where the bartender once stood.  “Here’s to you, Friend!” Jack stammered as he lifted his glass to an Ennis who was as real as his misery.

The song still played.  Jack moved to the dance floor alone.  He swayed, in time, to the music.  He was oblivious to the other couples dancing silently on the floor.  Jack grimaced as he sang the lyrics, held himself, thought of Ennis.  He bumped into a pretty lady, and almost set her boyfriend off.  But the lady pulled her man back.  She saw that Jack was drunk and that he was hurting.  But when Jack’s “dancing” began to get out of hand, the bouncer came over and led him off the floor.  “Go home and sleep it off, bud!” The guard spoke to Jack as he pulled him outside the bar.  Jack wrestled his arm from the bouncer’s grip and set off toward his room.  “Who is she?” The bouncer yelled after Jack.  “No one!” Jack answered as he walked away into the night.
 
Title: Re: Luxury
Post by: Toycoon on April 02, 2008, 12:37:22 am
Quote
The true measure of luxury was the feel of a loving, accepting embrace.  Ennis settled into the precious warmth of Jack’s arms.

So pure and sexy, Littlewing1957. I just love it!
Title: Re: Luxury
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 02, 2008, 11:37:12 am
So pure and sexy, Littlewing1957. I just love it!

Thanks, Toy!
Title: Right 86
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 02, 2008, 11:44:57 pm
Right 86 by Littlewing1957

“What do you mean you’re leaving?”  It was Mrs. Twist.  She was seated at her clean kitchen table shelling peas as Ennis and Jack stood over her.  Jack watched his mom as she held a handful of peas in her small palm.  She seemed frozen in time, her tiny mouth forming a perfect O.  Jack looked to Ennis for support and reassurance, and Ennis nodded at his friend.  Jack nodded back, and decided to get it over with.  If he hesitated one more second his resolve would be lost forever.  “We need to make a fresh start, Ma,” Jack blurted.  “This is just not the place for us.”  Mrs. Twist closed her mouth and placed the peas in a large aluminum bowl.  Jack promised himself that he would be firm, but he felt he would crumble if his mom couldn’t handle the news.  Ennis and Jack watched Mrs. Twist closely as she digested Jack’s words.  Jack was beginning to think his mother was accepting of his decision, but when she began to tremble, the boys pulled up chairs and quickly sat down beside her.  Jack folded his mother’s small hand in his while Ennis placed a comforting hand on her bony shoulder.  Jack cooed and spoke soft words to her.  “Listen ma,” Jack whispered, “You won’t lose me—us!  We’ll be back once we find a place to stay and get work.  We’ll let you know how to get in touch with us.  You can bet we’ll visit all the time, and you and pa can come see us!”  Ennis patted Mrs. Twist’s shoulder.  “Ennis and I discussed this, and we would like to try and get a small ranch of our own.”  Mrs. Twist was silent.  She tried to understand what her son was telling her, but she just couldn’t wrap her mind around the words.  “You want to get a place of your own,”  she sputtered. Jack smiled.  Perhaps if she could just repeat what he said, she would begin to understand and accept his decision to leave.  “But what about your pa? What about the ranch and the barn?”  Ennis looked at Jack and spoke up.  “No need to worry about that, Ma Twist,” Ennis whispered as he squeezed her shoulder.  “Jack contacted Uncle Harold.  He said he’ll round up a few of his friends and they can have the barn up in little more than a week.”  “Sure did,” Jack added.  “And we don’t have to worry none about Harold’s health.  The doc examined him last week and he’s as fit as a mule!”  Mrs. Twist smiled at that.  She always loved her brother Harold.  It would be nice to have him around the place.  “But what will your father say?”  Jack looked down at his mother’s squeaky clean kitchen floor.  “We already spoke to pa.” Jack spoke so softly his ma barely heard.  “What did he say?”  Mrs. Twist braced herself for the answer.  Jack looked positively miserable.  Ennis sighed.  He had better take this one.  “He told us to leave straight for hell.”

Jack looked around his bedroom.  He left Ennis downstairs in the basement to pack his things while he placed a few of his own belongings in a duffle bag.  Jack planned to travel light.  He knew there would be no need to take everything he owned.  With any luck, he and Ennis would find work, a play to stay, and make enough money to buy new clothes and put something away for a down payment on a spread.  Jack was getting excited as he packed his shirts.  He refused to let his dad’s attitude bring him down.  Old Man Twist just needed a little time.  After all, absence makes the heart grow fonder.  Jack was convinced that his pa would come around.  He had to!  His things all packed, Jack sat down on his bed and ran a hand over the homemade quilt.  His grandma made it for him.  He would leave it behind.  As he scanned the tiny room, a million images of his childhood danced before his mind’s eye.  He didn’t want to relive everything that happened in his room, but his psyche seemed to have other ideas.  Jack saw shadows of himself and Alan Sims, laughing and passing a ball back-and-forth across the cold wood floor.  The images were plentiful.  His mother appeared before him as a young woman, moving toward him with a tray of milk and cookies.  And later, he saw her a bit older, looking down on him with great concern, her hand on his hot forehead when he was sick in bed.  Jack saw all of this!  It was just something he had to do.  And, yes, he saw the black nights when his pa climbed into bed with him.  But even the painful memories of abuse couldn’t break his spirit.  Jack shook the images from his mind.  It was time!  He rose from the bed and grabbed his duffle.  He was ready to start a new life.  Jack shouldered his duffle bag and headed down the stairs.  The idea of heading out on his own terrified him, but he was prepared to see it through.  Ennis asked him to wait in the living room for him.  Jack lowered himself onto the sofa and placed his duffle on the floor beside him.

Ennis was happier than any man had a right to be.  He couldn't believe that he was about to start down the road on an incredible journey.  He had everything all packed, and was just about to pack the last of his things: a blue shirt, but decided against it.  Ennis placed the garment down on the twin bed and spread it out nice and neat.  He found a piece of note paper and a pen in the small bureau and scribbled out a note as best he could and placed it square on the breast pocket of the shirt.  Satisfied that everything was in order, Ennis took once last look around.  He had tears in his eyes as he hoisted his bag onto his shoulder and headed for the house.

Mrs. Twist wanted to stand, but her legs couldn’t support her weight.  She blew air out of her mouth when she thought about kissing her son goodbye.  She knew the day would come, but knowing that Jack would leave someday didn’t make it any easier.  In fact, saying goodbye to Jack and Ennis was the hardest thing she had ever done.  Ma Twist sat down on her favorite chair and watched from the window as Jack and his best friend walked off down the main road.  Her heart fluttered a tiny bit whenever Ennis or Jack looked back toward the ranch.  She smiled as she watched them walking side by side.  Soon they would disappear out of sight.  Mr. Twist walked into his living room and noticed his wife looking out the window as tears streamed down her face.  Old Man Twist knew all about his rep as a hard man and knew that some considered him a bastard.  He just couldn’t bring himself to care what people thought of him.  Until now.  He wasn’t exactly sorry that he refused to say goodbye to his only child as he left to start his life.  He was more than a bit angry that Jack chose to leave at a moment’s notice, especially when there was so much work to be done. Mr. Twist cursed his son under his breath, and called him a selfish bugger.  But one look at his wife and John Twist began to soften.  He found himself fighting back tears.  It was an odd, foreign sensation for him.  It troubled him.  “I must be human, after all!” He spoke aloud.  His wife heard him and reached a trembling hand out to him.  Mr. Twist sat down beside his mate and placed her head on his shoulder.  He cooed and stroked her thinning hair.  He looked outside the window and watched as Ennis and Jack walked away down the road.  “There, there, mother,” he soothed, as he rocked his wife back and forth.  Mrs. Twist wept softly, not only out of a sense of loss, but because she never experienced a more tender moment between them.  As Ennis and Jack seemed to disappear from the landscape, something inside of John Twist shifted.  He gently pulled himself away from his wife and stood.  “What is it, John?”  Mrs. Twist asked, worried now.  Her husband looked down at her and patted her shoulder.  “They couldn’t have gotten far, mother,” he announced as he moved toward the coat rack.  Mrs. Twist was either too stunned or too scared to say a word.  John Twist pulled on his wool jacket and opened the door.  “I won’t be long, ma.  I gotta go after ‘em!”
Title: Santana
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 03, 2008, 11:42:15 pm
The passage below is part of a poem titled Santana by Julie Smith.  I'm reminded of Ennis and Jack whenever I read it, and thought I would post it here for your enjoyment.

I walk into the mountains
And I see the stones
The wild cascades have missed,
Outcroppings of a thousand ranges
That cannot be blown away
Or burned
Or worn down smooth-
A plain of desolation that
Might hold my weight.
Title: Ennis and Twist
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 05, 2008, 01:01:13 am
Ennis and Twist by Littlewing1957

Mr. Twist didn’t want to appear rude, but he couldn’t help but study the young man who sat opposite him at his kitchen table.  His wife answered the door, and he was a bit alarmed when she led a sandy-haired stranger into his home.  So this is Ennis Del Mar!  Mr. Twist thought as the young man introduced himself.  For some reason, he never imagined that Ennis would be so damned handsome.  Jack never described his friend, and John Twist never knew what to expect.  He hated to think that his son was queer, but he had to admit that if he himself were queer, he wouldn’t chase Ennis Del Mar out of his bed.

John Twist watched as his wife offered Ennis a cup of coffee and a piece of cherry cake.  His stomach churned as he noticed Ennis’ reaction.  He was sincerely saddened; practically numb with grief.  John didn’t think he could ever be jealous of his son, but in this one instance he realized that Jack had something he may never achieve: the unflinching love of another.  Surely Ennis loved Jack beyond all measure, beyond all control.  John Twist hated him for it.

Old Man Twist couldn’t resist the chance to hurt Ennis.  He knew he shouldn’t have told him about the “other fella” that Jack mentioned to him only in passing, but it served Ennis right.  “You have a nerve coming here thinking I would give you my son’s ashes,” John Twist muttered under his breath as Ennis gripped the bag that contained two bloody shirts.  He spat into his metal cup once more and watched as Ennis, tears welling up in his expressive eyes, said his goodbyes and left the house.  Mr. Twist rose from his kitchen table and turned his back on his wife.  His eyes had filled with tears, and he didn’t want his wife to see him weak.  He walked out of his house toward the grieving plain.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on April 07, 2008, 09:52:48 pm
Hello!!

Just checkin' in while T. is in Hong Kong!

Hope all is well.
    :-*  :-*  :-*
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 07, 2008, 11:21:56 pm
Hello!!

Just checkin' in while T. is in Hong Kong!

Hope all is well.
    :-*  :-*  :-*

Hey, Shasta!  I'm glad you dropped by.  I would love to hear what you think about our new stories.  I think everyone else has abandoned us!
Title: Blood
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 07, 2008, 11:44:17 pm
Blood

Jack didn’t like the sight of blood, but that never stopped him from tending to Ennis' scrapes.  Whenever Ennis Del Mar slipped and skinned his elbow, naked from being exposed from a rolled up sleeve, Jack stopped on a dime and found some water to wipe the blood stain away.  When no water was handy, he held up a not-so-clean handkerchief and had Ennis spit on it.  It is always better to use your own spit to wipe your own blood.

Ennis was amused by Jack’s ministrations, but most of the time he felt like an infant as Jack hurried to make him whole.  Ennis was not an accident prone man, never really hurt himself, but when that bear scared his mule, he banged his head up a bit.  Little did Ennis know that if Jack didn’t have his bandana handy, he would have used his mouth to lick away the trickle of blood.  He would have done that in a heartbeat!

One afternoon when Jack rode in from his commute, Ennis was holding up his right hand by the elbow.  He was opening a can of beans when his fingers slipped on the jazzed edges of the lid.  It was a Jack Twist move, and Ennis was instantly ashamed that he was so careless.  The wound was nowhere near being serious: just a few cut fingers.  He had stopped the blood for the most part, but his fingers were smarting.  Jack looked at the raised hand and instantly knew what had happened.  He walked over to his mate and reached out for the injured fingers.  Ennis pulled away.  But Ennis knew better than that!  Jack wouldn’t give him a moment’s peace until he found some way to baby him, make him feel better.  Jack sat in front of Ennis and pouted until he reluctantly lowered his hurt hand into Jack’s lap.  Jack picked up the hand gingerly and inspected the fingers.  There was only a lone tickle of blood.  Jack didn’t have a handkerchief or neckerchief handy.  Nothing left to do but use his full mouth.  Ennis didn’t say a word as Jack licked his blood and began to suck on the cut fingers.  That stung a bit, but after awhile, Ennis became quite aroused.  Jack couldn’t believe how sweet Ennis’ life fluid tasted.  Neither said a word as Jack fetched the first aid kit from the tent.  He placed a small bandage on each cut and turned away to eat his dinner.  Ennis smiled at his lover and took a place beside him.  He raised his injured hand and swung his arm around Jack’s shoulder.  They ate in a comfortable silence, anxious for the coming of night.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on April 08, 2008, 03:38:20 pm
I love your stories, Marie. Hey, I see you changed your username. Why's that? I changed mine, too.  ;D

I was about 15 when a boy did exactly what Jack does with Ennis's cut fingers. Oh how I understand Ennis's reaction.  :laugh:

Thanks for being so generous, Marie.

When is Oscar supposed to be back? I'll be gone on April 17.

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 08, 2008, 09:03:28 pm
I love your stories, Marie. Hey, I see you changed your username. Why's that? I changed mine, too.  ;D

I was about 15 when a boy did exactly what Jack does with Ennis's cut fingers. Oh how I understand Ennis's reaction.  :laugh:

Thanks for being so generous, Marie.

When is Oscar supposed to be back? I'll be gone on April 17.

Dagi

Hey, Dagi!  What's happening?  You're going where?  Will you be gone long?  Thanks for reading the stories.  I'll have a few others and Right 87 posted soon.  I changed my username when I saw so many people doing the same thing.  I'm not one to jump on the bandwagon, but I've never changed my username, and thought I would give it a try.

Oscar should be back by the end of the month.  I sure miss that cowboy!  I'll miss you, as well.  I hope you won't be away for long?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on April 10, 2008, 02:33:50 am
I love your stories, Marie. Hey, I see you changed your username. Why's that? I changed mine, too.  ;D

I was about 15 when a boy did exactly what Jack does with Ennis's cut fingers. Oh how I understand Ennis's reaction.  :laugh:

Thanks for being so generous, Marie.

When is Oscar supposed to be back? I'll be gone on April 17.

Dagi

Hey there, kids.
I go away for a week and everyone's changed their user ID. I feel so old fashionsed!
Dagi, I'll be in HK until April 19th. Are you in California now?
I cain't believe I'll miss your grand debut in the US!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on April 10, 2008, 06:24:11 am
Hey guys. I'm not in the US, Toycoon, I'm still sitting here on my ass in Germany. My trip is going to be from 5/29 to 6/8. But I'm about to have my Bettermost account deleted, that's why I've changed my username into soon gone.

I love you all, and we will keep in touch.  ;D (I'd never abandon my family.)

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 10, 2008, 03:45:07 pm
Hey there, kids.
I go away for a week and everyone's changed their user ID. I feel so old fashionsed!
Dagi, I'll be in HK until April 19th. Are you in California now?
I cain't believe I'll miss your grand debut in the US!

Hey, Toy, Baby!  I'm glad you were able to check in.  I miss you soo much.  Seeing you here has made my day!  :-*  Take care of yourself!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 10, 2008, 03:46:32 pm
Hey guys. I'm not in the US, Toycoon, I'm still sitting here on my ass in Germany. My trip is going to be from 5/29 to 6/8. But I'm about to have my Bettermost account deleted, that's why I've changed my username into soon gone.

I love you all, and we will keep in touch.  ;D (I'd never abandon my family.)

Dagi

Well, Dagi, we do love you.  Come in as a guest every once in awhile.  We're family and will never lose touch!  :-*
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 10, 2008, 03:47:20 pm
.... love you too Dagi dear!  :-* :-* :-*

Hey SusieBaby!  Good to see you.  How is Gary doing?  I haven't seen him in awhile!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on April 11, 2008, 03:52:45 am
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But I'm about to have my Bettermost account deleted, that's why I've changed my username into soon gone.

Are you insane!? What do you mean your account is going to be deleted soon!? WTF is goin' on around here anyway!?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: David In Indy on April 11, 2008, 04:21:33 am
Hey guys. I'm not in the US, Toycoon, I'm still sitting here on my ass in Germany. My trip is going to be from 5/29 to 6/8. But I'm about to have my Bettermost account deleted, that's why I've changed my username into soon gone.

I love you all, and we will keep in touch.  ;D (I'd never abandon my family.)

Dagi

Dagi -

I'm so sorry it has to be like this! I really am!

I love you sweetie!! :-*

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on April 11, 2008, 04:23:32 am
Hey Toycoon!

How is the Hong Kong experience? Is this your first time there? What's the big thing there?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on April 11, 2008, 05:00:52 am
Hey Toycoon!

How is the Hong Kong experience? Is this your first time there? What's the big thing there?


Hello Shasta,
It's coming along very well. HK is a blast! Yes, it's my first time here. What's the big thing? I dunno... Chinese food maybe?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on April 11, 2008, 06:13:30 am
... it was at Dagi's request toycoon, no ones kicking her out ... I guess she's just had enough  :-\ ... but not to worry, we'll all keep in touch  ;)

Susie  :D

Hi Toy. Thanks for calling me insane.  ;D Bastard.  :P :-* I don´t like the way this site is run is all. Something is going very, very wrong. I want to hang out and have a good time, and Bettermost has mostly been a battlefield for a long time now.

I love you all so much, guys.

Dagi
Title: Re: Battlefields
Post by: cwby30 on April 11, 2008, 05:34:48 pm
Afternoon, Dagi and everyone.

Well, call me an ostrich [though they really dont' put their heads in the sand like that], but I've missed all the battles.  Maybe because I don't have a paid account, just me buttin' in from time to time.  Sorry if things have been that way for you.  Hope you continue to write here and on LJ, like your work. 

So, if I put on my helmet and flak jacket, where would I go to observe the battlefields? Curious... though I don't want to end up like any damn cat! 

Thanks again  [... and I mean that just like it reads.] 
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 11, 2008, 10:18:08 pm
Hello Shasta,
It's coming along very well. HK is a blast! Yes, it's my first time here. What's the big thing? I dunno... Chinese food maybe?

Glad you're having a blast, Toy!  I can't wait to hear all about it!  :)
Title: Re: Battlefields
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 11, 2008, 10:19:24 pm
Afternoon, Dagi and everyone.

Well, call me an ostrich [though they really dont' put their heads in the sand like that], but I've missed all the battles.  Maybe because I don't have a paid account, just me buttin' in from time to time.  Sorry if things have been that way for you.  Hope you continue to write here and on LJ, like your work. 

So, if I put on my helmet and flak jacket, where would I go to observe the battlefields? Curious... though I don't want to end up like any damn cat! 

Thanks again  [... and I mean that just like it reads.] 

Hey, cwby30, did you read the latest chapter in the continuing saga of "Right?"  I'll try to post another installment either this weekend or early next week.  :)
Title: Replacement
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 11, 2008, 10:37:05 pm
Replacement by Sputnik

Jack was shopping in the men’s department for warm clothing.  He was getting ready for a much anticipated “fishing trip” with Ennis Del Mar, and he couldn’t find his heavy coat.  Jack picked out a blue parka much like the one he lost, and as he walked to the register to pay for the garment,  Jack spied a rack bulging with white and blue patterned shirts.

Jack placed the parka down on a stand and wandered over to the shirts.  He fingered a shirt that was very well made, and reasonably priced.  His mind drifted to the shirt in his bedroom at home in lightning Flat: a shirt he “found” while up on Brokeback Mountain.  Jack removed the shirt from the rack and turned it side-to-side.  It was just Ennis’ style, and he could see him wearing it now.  He also saw himself unbuttoning the shirt to reveal Ennis’ chiseled chest.  Jack was getting warm at the thought of it.  He knew he had to buy the shirt.  Ennis was out of a shirt.  Jack owed him one.

As Jack paid for the shirt and parka, he had his doubts that Ennis would accept it.  He would love to shower his lover with gifts, but Ennis Del Mar was far too proud to take what he would see as chartiy.  He didn’t have to worry about Alma finding something expensive looking and grilling him about it, as they divorced years ago.  And Jack didn’t want to show off.  He was sort of queasy about throwing his good fortune in Ennis’ face.  Jack walked out of the department store wondering how Ennis would react to the gift.  It is true that he accepted the bracelet with Jack’s name spelled out in glistening diamonds.  But sometimes a small gift can rankle.  As Jack placed his bags in the truck, he knew it was settled.  Ennis would get the shirt.  He owed him one.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on April 12, 2008, 06:48:16 am
I so love Jack, Sputnik, and that is a very loving gesture. Your writing is a very loving gesture, too. And more than that...

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 12, 2008, 03:42:16 pm
I so love Jack, Sputnik, and that is a very loving gesture. Your writing is a very loving gesture, too. And more than that...

Dagi

Thanks, Dagi, my love!
Title: Hugs
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 13, 2008, 02:45:56 pm
“There are some things that you may never know, Jack!”  Ennis spoke aloud as he sat on his small couch.  He was remembering the last time they were together, and the fine rustic adventure they enjoyed.  It was like something out of time; a throwback to the lazy afternoons they spent in company up on Brokeback.

Ennis hoped he could tell him someday.  Tell Jack how much he craved the constant hugs.  Tell him that he didn’t mind being tackled from behind, only to be folded into a tender embrace.  Like the time when Jack was inspecting the fire and had fallen on his backside.  Ennis chuckled a bit, and poor Jack’s face was beet red, but when Ennis offered him a hand to pull him up, Jack took Ennis’ hand and once upright, hugged him tight.  Ennis returned the embrace.

It was time for bed.  Ennis had a big day ahead of him, as the girls were coming over to stay for a few days.  It would be a happy time, but the thing that would make his happiness complete?  Ennis climbed into bed and conjured up the sensation of resting in the arms of Jack Twist: of tender hugs and soothing embraces. 
Title: Kisses
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 14, 2008, 08:01:45 pm
He assaulted me with a kiss!  It was a big, opened mouthed smooch that pulled my lips inside of his mouth and sucked my breath away.  The first thing I thought, after I found my footing, was "Where did you learn that, Jack Twist?  Where have you been?"  But I never got the chance to ask, as he kissed me again, his mouth closed this time!  He gave a kiss so honeyed and so full and good that I melted into his mouth and savored the sweet!  I couldn't breathe and pulled away.  I tried to walk away, but he gripped my arm and pulled me back to him.  "Jack please!!???"  I begged!  "Maybe tonight?"  But he wanted more.  And how could I refuse?  He is part of me now, like my flesh and bones.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dagi on April 15, 2008, 02:42:35 am
mmm very sensual, Marie. I can feel the kiss, too...love your writing.  ;D

Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 15, 2008, 11:10:41 pm
mmm very sensual, Marie. I can feel the kiss, too...love your writing.  ;D

Dagi

Thanks for your kind words, Dagi!  :-*
Title: Re: Kisses
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 15, 2008, 11:11:09 pm
Phew!!!! ..... I held my breath through the whole thing ... very sensual Sputnik dear!

Susie  :D

Thanks so much, SusieBaby!  :-*
Title: Campfires and Happiness
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 15, 2008, 11:50:16 pm
Jack was returning to the campsite with an arm load of wood for the fire.  He was humming a happy tune and had a huge grin on his handsome face.  Ennis watched Jack’s approach and smiled.  Ennis noticed a light heartedness about Jack this time.  Oh, he was generally upbeat whenever they met, but this time Jack was in an extremely good mood.  Ennis decided not to ask about it.  He chose to enjoy the trip and play it by ear.  If Jack had news, he could wait until he was ready to talk about it.

“I just saw a medium sized dog nosing around, Friend,” Jack announced as he placed more wood on the fire.  “That so,” Ennis stated, interested.  “He kind of reminded me of Bluebell, the dog we had up on Brokeback.”  Ennis grinned slightly when he thought of Bluebell.  She was a sweet, obedient, competent animal: always a joy to have around.  “Where is the dog now?”  Ennis asked as he warmed his hands against the flames.  “Oh, I don’t know,” Jack answered as he looked around.  “Probably ran off to get something to eat, or to find its owner.”  Ennis nodded and waved his hands near the fire in an attempt to get warm.

“This is how a dog eats,” Jack said as he gnashed his mouth in a munching grimace.  Jack growled and Ennis had to stifle a laugh.  “You’re silly, Rodeo,” Ennis managed to say.  “What has gotten into you?”  Jack was silent a moment and his eyes flashed.  Ennis saw the lust creeping onto Jack’s countenance and was sorry he asked.  He could almost hear Jack’s answer.  But Jack said nothing.   He smiled and winked.
Title: Re: Kisses
Post by: Toycoon on April 16, 2008, 03:53:27 am
Hot, Spud! Where do you come up with these gems !?

I'll be home soon. On Sunday, most likely...
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on April 16, 2008, 07:54:07 am
How long will it take you to get readjusted to "California time"?  Is Hong Kong ahead or behind? How many hours?

Are you bringing any pictures to show us? I hope so! 

Have fun.  ;D  See ya later.
Title: Re: Right and others
Post by: cwby30 on April 16, 2008, 03:40:58 pm

Afternoon, Marie.

Well, yes i'm still around, and enjoying your 'one-shots', lots to think about and fun to read.  Also enjoyed the last installment of "Right", with OMT finally coming to his senses and running after the departing guys.  However, I hope they turn him down [if he does catch up with them], and continue on to find their own way together away from Lightning Flat.  Think they need some 'alone time', even if it results in some problems for them, so they can build a stronger bond.  The Dakotas are looking better.  ;) 

Thanks again. 
Title: Re: Kisses
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 16, 2008, 09:50:06 pm
Hot, Spud! Where do you come up with these gems !?

I'll be home soon. On Sunday, most likely...

Hey, Babe!  I had hoped we would hear from you!  I can't wait until you return!  Thanks for your kind words!  :-*
Title: Re: Right and others
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 16, 2008, 09:52:26 pm
Afternoon, Marie.

Well, yes i'm still around, and enjoying your 'one-shots', lots to think about and fun to read.  Also enjoyed the last installment of "Right", with OMT finally coming to his senses and running after the departing guys.  However, I hope they turn him down [if he does catch up with them], and continue on to find their own way together away from Lightning Flat.  Think they need some 'alone time', even if it results in some problems for them, so they can build a stronger bond.  The Dakotas are looking better.  ;) 

Thanks again. 

Cwby30, its so good to see you!  Thanks for your sweet comments.  I'll try to have the latest installment of Right up by the end of the week, and I hope Toy will add a chapter soon after that.  The boys have a lot of life ahead...
Title: Weight
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 16, 2008, 10:29:21 pm
Jack was reaching for another piece of rocky mountain smoked fried chicken when Lureen placed a restraining hand on his forearm.  “Jack that will be your 4th piece of chicken!  What are you tryin’ to do honey?”  Jack pulled his arm from under Lureen’s grasp and placed the chicken thigh on his plate.  He noticed the way Lureen looked at his paunch when he undressed at night.  She never turned up her nose, or smirked or anything like that, but her gaze was certainly not approving.  “Well honey, you shouldn’t be such a good cook,” Jack mumbled in between bites of mashed potatoes and gravy.  Don’t deny me this food! Jack thought ruefully as he lowered his eyes to his plate.  At least I’m not drinking like a school of fish now that Ennis cancelled on me again.  I miss him so much! Jack fought back tears as he wondered how he could manage another 6 months apart from Ennis Del Mar.  He bit into a tasty chicken thigh.  He was food medicating! 

Jack was glad when Mrs. Newsome picked up Bobby for the night.  He didn’t want his son to see him overeating.  Not that Bobby noticed.  Jack had been piling on the pounds for weeks now, and Bobby never mentioned a word about it.  The child was perhaps too young to notice.  Jack knew he needed to make a few changes.   He needed to set an example for his son.  He also wanted to look good for Ennis.  Jack vowed to cut his portion sizes and get more exercise.  His health and his ego depended on it!

The meal was eaten and the dishes cleared away.  Jack retired to his bedroom and pulled off his work clothes.  He stood, reluctantly, in front of Lureen’s full-length mirror and sized himself up.  Once upon a time he could take looking at himself in a full length mirror.  Jack smoothed his hands over his expanding middle.  Even with his pot belly, He still looked good naked.  Sure, he had a bit of a tummy, but that's normal?  Lureen turned out to be an excellent cook, even better than his own mother.  A lonely man his age couldn't help but put on weight!  Lureen walked into the bedroom just then and seemed taken aback by the sight of Jack checking himself out.  Her face softened as she walked up beside him and looked at his form in the mirror.  “You like what you see?” Lureen asked with a smile.  “Because I do!”  Jack had to grin at that.  He kissed Lureen on the cheek and watched as she left the room.  He was glad that Lureen still found him attractive, but what of Ennis Del Mar?


Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on April 17, 2008, 06:19:39 am
How long will it take you to get readjusted to "California time"?  Is Hong Kong ahead or behind? How many hours?

Are you bringing any pictures to show us? I hope so! 

Have fun.  ;D  See ya later.


Howdy Miss Shasta,
HK is about 15 hours ahead of the USA. 8:00 AM Monday HK time is 5 PM Sunday, California time.
I have tons of pictures to share. Of course I didn't actually get to see any of those HK landmarks. My boyfriend got to visit those places while I had to work.  :-\

 
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Shasta542 on April 17, 2008, 06:38:02 am
Howdy Miss Shasta,
HK is about 15 hours ahead of the USA. 8:00 AM Monday HK time is 5 PM Sunday, California time.
I have tons of pictures to share. Of course I didn't actually get to see any of those HK landmarks. My boyfriend got to visit those places while I had to work.  :-\

 

Bummer!!! You're so good -- you didn't sneak out!  8)  ::)

YAY!! I want to see the pictures!

Yep -- it'll probably take you awhile to get back on CA time -- do you get a vacation day or two when you get home?  ;D
Title: Re: Aware
Post by: cwby30 on April 17, 2008, 02:44:47 pm

Ennis could tell when Jack was preoccupied with his own thoughts, after twenty-some years he could read his man's body language from across a corral full of horses under a midnight moon. On impulse, he walked up behind Jack and put his arms around Jack’s waist, catching Jack unawares.  Jack leaned back into Ennis with a sigh, knowing he'd have to face things soon but knowing it would be easier with Ennis' strong arms backing him up.  Turning in those arms, he put his own around Ennis.  They stood there, each holding onto the best thing in his life.

[100 words;  Drabblefest prompts: aware, preoccupied, impulse] 
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 18, 2008, 12:19:31 am
Howdy Miss Shasta,
HK is about 15 hours ahead of the USA. 8:00 AM Monday HK time is 5 PM Sunday, California time.
I have tons of pictures to share. Of course I didn't actually get to see any of those HK landmarks. My boyfriend got to visit those places while I had to work.  :-\

 

I wish I was there right now!  :)
Title: Re: Aware
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 18, 2008, 12:21:37 am
Ennis could tell when Jack was preoccupied with his own thoughts, after twenty-some years he could read his man's body language from across a corral full of horses under a midnight moon. On impulse, he walked up behind Jack and put his arms around Jack’s waist, catching Jack unawares.  Jack leaned back into Ennis with a sigh, knowing he'd have to face things soon but knowing it would be easier with Ennis' strong arms backing him up.  Turning in those arms, he put his own around Ennis.  They stood there, each holding onto the best thing in his life.

[100 words;  Drabblefest prompts: aware, preoccupied, impulse] 

Beautiful, cwby30!  I just love the 100 word format and have to try it sometimes.  This is very lyrical, very graceful.  I love it, and I want more!  :)
Title: Re: Aware
Post by: Toycoon on April 18, 2008, 02:53:33 am
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Ennis could tell when Jack was preoccupied with his own thoughts, after twenty-some years he could read his man's body language from across a corral full of horses under a midnight moon.

Gee whiz, cwby30, you are so good at this drabblefest stuff. I don't what I'm gonna do when I come back; I am so out of practice with my writin'. Good grief!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on April 18, 2008, 02:55:08 am
Littlewing1957, yer back! Thank goodness, I never did think the name, "Spudnick" suited you much.  ;)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 18, 2008, 08:21:47 pm
Littlewing1957, yer back! Thank goodness, I never did think the name, "Spudnick" suited you much.  ;)

Yeah, I got bored with it.  Sputnik didn't stick when my grandma gave me the nickname when I was a baby.  Sorry grandma!
Title: Right 87
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 18, 2008, 09:34:07 pm
Right 87 by Littlewing

Ennis looked at Jack as he walked alongside him, all excited and animated.  He was talking a blue streak about where they could go and what would happen when they got there.  Ennis shook his head as he listened to his friend go on and on about jobs and ranches and the good life.  Ennis was less optimistic.  As far as he was concerned, they were headed toward the unknown.  He was a bit frightened and, yes, worried.  As Jack babbled on about the livestock they would eventually raise and sell, Ennis looked at Jack’s head and wondered if he did the right thing.  They were both so young and inexperienced.  Ennis wondered if either one of them had the courage and fortitude to make the dream come true.  He shrugged and chased the negative thoughts from his mind.  He, too, wanted that good life – the sweet life – and realized that it would happen if he made it happen.  He would pursue the dream for his lover and himself.  They both deserved nothing less! 

The day was young and the weather was still frigid.  Ennis hoisted his duffle higher on his shoulder and prayed that the weather would stay cold, as they had a long way to go, and it would prove easier to walk in cool weather.  Jack stopped talking long enough to readjust his bag and look back over his shoulder.  “You okay, there?” Ennis stopped and asked as he noticed Jack’s silence.  Jack was looking at the road they just traversed.  Ennis followed his gaze and saw a truck closing in on them.  Jack placed his duffle on the dusty road and turned north.  “I think I see my dad’s truck, Ennis,” Jack whispered as he took a few steps back down the road.  Ennis saw the truck and recognized it instantly.  “Yeah, and he’s coming this way, Jack.  Wonder what he wants?”

Mr. Twist was happy to see his son and Ennis Del Mar stopped alongside the road.  He knew he could catch up to them.  He only hoped that they would be glad to see him, and would hear him out.  Mr. Twist pulled up alongside the pair and killed the engine.  He blew out a steadying gust of air from his lungs and tried to fortify himself for the task at hand.  By the time he felt together, Jack and Ennis were looking in at him from the driver’s side window.  John Twist gestured at them to step aside while he alighted from the vehicle.  Ennis and Jack stepped away and were silent as Mr. Twist pulled his coat tight against the cold.  “How you boys doin’, he asked, softly.  Jack looked at Ennis, wondering what was going on.  He had no idea what his father wanted with them.  “We’re fine,” they chimed in unison.  “Good, good,” Mr. Twist offered.   There was an awkward silence as Jack’s father tried to gather his thoughts.  Ennis and Jack waited patiently for him to continue.  “Where ya headed,” he asked, tentatively.  This time Ennis looked to Jack.  Neither spoke right away.  “Well, pa,” Jack began, “we don’t rightly know.  Wherever we end up, I guess.”  Ennis’ head shook his assent.  “Well, how ya gonna get there?”  It was Mr. Twist, of course, his eyes fixed on the cold ground.  “We don’t know that neither,” Ennis ventured.  Mr. Twist nodded and was silent for a bit.  “If you don’t know where you goin’ nor how you gonna git there, why don’t you hang around the ranch a spell until you have it all worked out?”  Jack sucked his teeth and looked his father square in the eyes.  “You don’t understand, dad,” Jack said, very softly.  “But Ennis and me—we gotta do this on our own, in our own time, and in our own way—right, Cowboy?”  Ennis nodded.  Mr. Twist looked from Ennis and then to Jack.  “I thought you would say that, son,” he stated, matter-of-factly.  Your ma is certain that you won’t be back for awhile.  She thinks you have your mind made up, and nothing we can say will stop you.”  Ennis and Jack were silent.  “Well, I understand what it means to have a dream, son,” John Twist said, almost tenderly.  He reached into his pocket and extracted the keys to his truck.  He placed the keys in Jack’s hand.  Jack accepted the keys and looked at his father, bewildered.  “Take the truck.”  Before Jack could object, Mr. Twist continued, “Listen, son, I don’t think I ever did right by you your whole life!  The least I can do is help provide the means for you to go find your place in this world.”  No one said a word.  “We have another truck,”  Mr. Twist announced, breaking the silence, and some of the tension.  It was true.  There was a second truck on the property: a disused vehicle, but every bit as functional as the truck Mr. Twist offered.  “All I ask is you drop me back at the ranch, and you can go on your way.  No need to even get out.  Don’t make this harder on ya ma; just let me out and keep on goin!”  Jack fought back tears.  He never imaged anything like this!  Ennis’ face registered relief and joy.  He couldn’t speak, just nodded his head when Jack looked to him.  “Okay, dad,” Jack whispered.  “We both thank you from the bottom of our hearts. We’ll be glad to drop you back at the ranch.”  Nothing else was said, or needed to be said.  If things had been different, if he had been raised in some other reality, Jack would have embraced his father.  It was the first time he ever felt affection for his dad, and he felt regret at not being able to show that affection.  Jack opened the driver’s side door and popped the passenger side lock so that Ennis and his dad could climb into the cab.  He turned the engine over and drove back toward the Twist spread.

Mrs. Twist never left the window.  She didn’t know where her husband went, and she was worried.  She hoped he didn’t try to drive down the boys and convince them to stay.  She didn’t want them to leave, but she knew that every mother had to say goodbye, and face an empty nest.  Roberta Twist glanced down the road even though Ennis and Jack disappeared long ago.  She seemed riveted to the spot, helpless and afraid.  She wanted her man home, if for no other reason than to help her away from the window.  Mrs. Twist blinked a few times when she saw a truck, small in the distance.  It was getting larger all the time, the closer it came to the ranch.  She could make out her husband’s very own truck; the cab full with 1 driver and 2 passengers.  Mrs. Twist stood when the truck stopped right in front of the house and John climbed out.  He turned toward the house and looked back, just once, to wave goodbye to Ennis and Jack.  Mrs. Twist couldn’t find the power to move from the window, or even sit back down in her chair.  She watched, her mouth open, her eyes moist, as Ennis and Jack drove off down the road.
Title: Re:Right (87)
Post by: cwby30 on April 19, 2008, 12:07:35 am
Evenin', Marie.

Well, mighty fine chapter.  The guys holding firm, Mr. Twist bending, Jack wanting to show affection but not knowing how, and Mrs. Twist just watching her two sons drive away.  Well done.  they're on their way.

Thanks again. 
Title: Re:Right (87)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 19, 2008, 01:09:03 am
Evenin', Marie.

Well, mighty fine chapter.  The guys holding firm, Mr. Twist bending, Jack wanting to show affection but not knowing how, and Mrs. Twist just watching her two sons drive away.  Well done.  they're on their way.

Thanks again. 

Thanks for reading and commenting, cwby30!  I'm always pleased to see your comments and I thank you for your encouragement.  I can't wait for the next chapter.  Thanks for hanging in here with us.  :)
Title: No Fire, No Sign
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 19, 2008, 01:31:07 am
Aguirre had his rules, and Ennis tried his best to abide by them.  Before he bedded down for the night, he let the fire die down, or poured water over it to extinguish the heat and leave no sign.  When the fire went out he was left cold.  He was often lonely.  Some nights he was scared witless, up there all by himself!

Ennis loved to steal a night or two in camp with Jack Twist.  Being with him at night was against the rules, but there were times when Ennis couldn’t stand to be huddled by himself with only a blue dog for warmth and companionship. 

One night, on past midnight, Ennis watched and shivered as the flames shrank from the wood and quickly died as the embers popped.  He rose from the ground as the heat evaporated into mist.  There was no moon that night; Ennis couldn’t see his hand in front of his face.  But he could feel, he could sense.  Ennis wasn’t frightened as he heard a rustling, and the sound of twigs snapping under feet that moved steadily toward him.  He knew his lover’s smell, could feel his heat.  Instinctively, Ennis was drawn toward his lover’s lips.  Jack’s heat was pulling him, guiding him in the dark.  No fire, no sign.  Aguirre, have it your way.  It was okay with Ennis.  He pulled Jack close and led him into the tent.
Title: 13 Weeks
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 22, 2008, 12:46:25 am
Ennis once heard somewhere that loneliness and depression can hurt like hell.  He believed it as he sat down beside a small calf at the ranch.  He must endure 13 more weeks before he can be in Jack Twist’s arms, and Ennis was hurtin’ something fierce.  The sadness began to swell on down from his neck to his shoulders.  He tried to work the tightness out with a practiced hand – the same hand he used to massage his horse’s sore shanks - but his touch could never do him any good.  He needed, and wanted Jack Twist.

Ennis did his work on auto pilot.  He liked ranch work, but lately he resented the almost mind numbing repetition of feeding livestock and otherwise tending to them.  He needed care.  He needed Jack’s shoulder to lay his head upon at the end of the day.  Ennis was smarting.  He hurt so bad that he didn’t even try to stop the tears as they fell.  He didn't know how he could face another day of responsibilities, of being alone.

What would Jack do?  Would Jack shake him out of his depression?  Remind him that he had 2 little girls depending on him?  Or would Jack commiserate, know that he was the only medicine that Ennis could ever need or want?  13 weeks was not such a long time, Ennis thought as Billy, his co-worker and friend, walked in, leading a small calf by a rope.  “Why don’t you have a look at this one,” Billy smiled at Ennis as he handed him the rope.  Ennis accepted the calf with a forced grin.  “She sick,” Ennis asked Billy without looking at him.  “I reckon so, Friend,” Billy responded.  Both men were silent as Ennis tended to the calf.  He was not a vet, certainly, but he had a knack for diagnosing calves that were feeling poorly.  “She just needs to be walked around more—you know—get some exercise.”  “I’ll see to it,” Bill exclaimed, as he took the rope from Ennis and turned to lead her out with the rest of the stock.  Billy turned back like he just remembered something.  “I hear you have vacation coming to you in a couple of months!”  The mention of his holiday caused Ennis’ shoulders to slacken.  “Yeah, and I can’t wait,” Ennis spoke resolutely.  Billy led the calf out and returned to his pal.  “Tell me all about it, Ennis,” he said excitedly.  “I don’t get to go nowhere.  You’re lucky.  Maybe I can live through you.”  Ennis didn’t know what to say.  Here he was all this time feeling sorry for himself when he knew others who would certainly trade places with him.  “Maybe over lunch I’ll tell you all about it.”  Billy smiled and walked out.  Ennis would take lunch in an hour.  He looked forward to discussing some of his plans with Billy.  He may end up feeling like a new man.


Title: Questions
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 24, 2008, 12:37:20 am
Jack was placing the last of his things into his duffle bag when Lureen started in with the questions.  Jack looked at his wife and tried to figure out what was behind the 3rd degree.  It was not like her to ask about his all too infrequent fishing trips with Ennis Del Mar.  Jack answered as best he could without giving too much away.  Did she suspect?  What did she know?

“When will you be back?” Lureen asked as she examined her freshly painted Chinese red nails.  Jack placed the last of his shirts in his bag and closed it up tight.  “I should be here by next Friday, you know that!”  Lureen closed her eyes and blew on the wet polish.  “Where you guys going this time?”  Jack was becoming annoyed by all the questions.  Lureen once told him she didn’t care what he did with his free time, and didn’t mind him spending a few weeks out of the year with Ennis.  She never even asked when he would be home—until now.  “Somewhere up by Yellowstone,”  was Jack's answer.  Lureen nodded absently.  “What you guys gonna do when you get there?”  Jack was frightened now.  He moved his duffle to the floor and walked the few feet to the bathroom to take a last leak before driving off.  Lureen wasn’t used to Jack brushing her off like that.  She followed him to the door of the bathroom and waited until he finished.

Jack shivered as he washed his hands.  He had better get out of town while he still had his wits about him.  After drying his hands on a red towel, Jack opened the bathroom door to a scowling Lureen.  “Wha…,” Jack began as he was stopped in his tracks.  Lureen had her hands on her slim hips and the motor was running!  Her foot was tapping the carpet, and a frown darkened her pretty face.  “Let me past, Lureen!” Jack’s voice was low and furious.  Lureen recoiled at the acid tone of her husband’s voice.  “I asked you a question, Jack!  What are you guys going to do when you get to where you’re going?”  Jack stopped in his tracks and calmed himself.  Lureen is his spouse and had a right to know.  Jack turned toward her and looked her straight in the eye.  “We’re gonna hunt and fish and eat, Lureen---same as we always do.  Okay?”  And we’re going to make wild man-love! Jack smiled at the thought of it.  He would never say this out loud, of course.  Lureen seemed to accept it, or she just didn’t care anymore.  She never uttered a word as Jack hoisted his duffle and headed for the door.  “Well, have a good time,” Lureen spoke, not at all sincere.  “I’ll be back soon, Lureen,” Jack whispered.  He left his home, not at all sure if he would return.
Title: Re: An Honorable Man
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 24, 2008, 11:20:32 pm
I love the image of Ennis being tender and caring with one of the lambs.  Damn, what a lucky lamb. 

Gary, its a real treat to see you here!  I am so happy!  :-*  You have made my night.  Thanks for the sweet comments!
Title: Re: Camping
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 24, 2008, 11:22:10 pm
Ah, Littlewing, this little story really makes me want to go camping. 

It's touching that Ennis still has a taste for camping after all that's happened.

Thanks, Gary!  I suppose we never get camping out of our systems!  I know I never will!
Title: Re: Luxury
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 24, 2008, 11:23:25 pm
Beautiful little tale, Littlewing.  It's great that the boys got to make love to each other in such a beautiful setting.  It was almost as if they were on their honeymoon.

I can just image the boys on their honeymoon!  Gary, you're a genius!  You've given me an idea...stay with me!
Title: Re: On My Mind
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 24, 2008, 11:24:09 pm
This one broke my heart, Littlewing.  Poor Jack.  He shouldn't have been alone.

Yes! Thanks, Gary!
Title: Re: Right 86
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 24, 2008, 11:24:45 pm
That sure was a surprise ending, Littlewing.  I didn't see that coming.  I wonder what will happen now.  I was prepared to tell you that I thought it was for the best that Jack and Ennis left the Twist farm, but that I was very sorry for Mrs. Twist.  But now I wonder if the boys will actually leave.

 ;)
Title: Re: Ennis and Twist
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 24, 2008, 11:26:04 pm
Wow!  The idea that OMT was motivated by jealousy is very interesting, Littlewing.  I don't think I've ever heard anyone else suggest that before.

There is so many ways to interpret this scene.  We've just begun.  I think I'll explore Mr. Twist's feelings here at a later time.
Title: Re: Hugs
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 24, 2008, 11:28:45 pm
I could sure use a hug from Jack Twist myself.   :)  Thanks for the story, Littlewing.

Thanks for commenting on the stories!  It means so much to me!  :-*
Title: Re: Weight
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 24, 2008, 11:31:24 pm
Very insightful slice of life, Littlewing.  It's not surprising that Jack, like many of us, would turn to food out of loneliness.  But at the same time, he would want to set a good example for Bobby, and he'd worry about his looks.  I would love to see him standing in front of that mirror checking himself out.

I know what you mean, Gary!  If you see me now, you'll know what food medicating looks like.  I need to work off some of this good living!
Title: Re: 13 Weeks
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 24, 2008, 11:32:20 pm
Nice that Billy helped put things into perspective for Ennis.  He sounds like a nice guy.  Maybe he has more in common with Ennis than Ennis realizes.   ;)  Maybe he doesn't just want to hear Ennis's general plans, but the juicy bits as well.

 :)
Title: Re: Right 87
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 24, 2008, 11:34:03 pm
Wow!  What a beautiful chapter, Littlewing.  What an ending.  Very gratifying.  Who would have suspected OMT coming through in the end.  Finally, for once in his life, he didn't hold his son back, but actually helped him on his journey.

Will you continue with the story.  Do we get to find out what happens to Jack and Ennis after this?

Thanks, Gary!  Of course we'll continue.  Toycoon will write the next chapter, I suppose.  If he can't, then I'll take over for awhile.  Right is nowhere near finished!
Title: Re: Questions
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 24, 2008, 11:35:15 pm
You do have to wonder if Lureen suspected anything.  She was a smart girl, and she seemed to know a thing or two about the ways of the world.  Great story, Littlewing.  I kept wanting Jack to just say it.  Lureen, we hunt, fish, eat, and we have sex.

Can you imagine Jack "treating" Lureen to all the details of their mind-blowing sex?  To be a fly on the wall!
Title: LaShawn
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 27, 2008, 01:30:17 am
LaShawn wondered if her husband was aware that she knew.  LaShawn learned almost immediately after marrying him that her husband liked men.  She wanted to scream from the time Jack and Lureen picked them up, until they left the charity dance.  LaShawn couldn’t help but notice Jack’s beauty and was certain that Randall would notice, as well. 

LaShawn was a very unhappy woman.  She was wound tight, always, a frightened woman married to a man who rarely touched or talked to her.  LaShawn learned to talk for the both of them.  She never shut up at the charity dinner.  She never shut up anywhere!  LaShawn noticed her husband trying to be so damned discreet as he checked Jack out.  If he had paid the same attention to Lureen, she could have handled it; she may have been able to compete.  But it didn't happen that way.  She saw Randall practically throw a kiss in Jack's direction.  It was almost unbearable.  LaShawn did what she usually did when she was miserable and nervous: talk!

LaShawn reasoned that talking a mile a minute would prevent her from thinking about how sad her life had become.  If she talked a blue streak she didn’t have to face all the times when Randall left her alone for days at a time, only to return home smelling of male bodily fluids.  When Jack asked her to dance it was a great relief.  At least now someone would actually pay some attention to her, no matter how basic and innocent.  And she would talk non stop in an effort to chase away the loneliness and to forget.
Title: Re: LaShawn
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 27, 2008, 06:24:57 pm
Very insightful, Littlewing.  I have often gotten the impression that people who can't seem to stop talking are trying to avoid something.  Either they're trying to run away from thoughts inside their own heads, or they're trying to keep the conversation from going in a direction that would make them uncomfortable.  It's rather heartbreaking when you see someone who is so nervous they can't shut up.

Gary, this is a treat!  I'm so glad to see you here.  Hey, babe, how about another Daniel and Tyler story?  I sure miss those 2. 
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on April 28, 2008, 10:13:54 am
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Hey there Gary,
Thanks for the info! I rarely check the front page of BetterMost for news; I would have never known about the new site.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 28, 2008, 09:59:59 pm
Hi everybody,

You may have heard that Phillip is thinking about expanding Bettermost’s spinoff site, MIG.  If you’ve not, check out his posted comments in the Town Hall.  Even though MIG is more “adult” oriented than Bettermost, there are currently no pornographic images there.  Restrictions do not allow pictures that show sexual activity, genitalia from any angle, or anuses.  In my opinion most parents wouldn’t mind their teenagers seeing these images.  So I don’t think there’s anything there that would shock the average person.  However, I know that people have different comfort levels in these matters, so I’ve suggested that we have a section for more tame images. 

Phillip has proposed that MIG might be a good place to post fiction and fanfiction that deals more frankly with sexuality.  I’ve suggested that writers self-rate their stories and list some of the details that might shock some of our members at the top of their posts.  I think this will help create a space where writers can post what they want, and where readers can pick and choose among the selections according to their own tastes.

I’ve also suggested that MIG might be a good place to share a wide variety of images, pictures of nature, art, architecture, personal photos...  I’m hoping that MIG can be a welcoming and safe place for all Bettermost members.

Phillip has asked for our input, so come on over to MIG, click on the Male Image Gallery Info Forum, and look for the MIG New Directions thread.  You can post your comments and suggestions there.  I’ll bet many of you have some really great ideas, so please come on over and share them.  And while you’re there, take a gander at the galleries.  There are some nice lookin’ guys for you to admire just a few clicks away.

Gary

www.maleimagegallery.com

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Wow, I didn't know any of this!  Thanks for the info, Gary!  I'll go over and add my 2 cents!  :)
Title: Care Package
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 29, 2008, 12:35:51 am
Aguirre rode in on his mare, holding a rather large package.  Jack was bent over a small lamb, massaging its delicate shank.  Ennis was positioned by the stream, washing the tin dinnerware.  “Twist,” Aguirre shouted, “Ya ma sent you this and asked me to bring it up to ya.”  Aguirre never climbed down from his horse, but threw the package at Jack.  Jack caught it but was furious that his boss could be so rude.  What if he missed the parcel and it fell to the ground?  What if there was something fragile inside?  It would be just like Jack to drop, or miss the package outright if it was thrown at him.  Oh well, Aguirre was nice enough to ride out there and deliver it personally.  He didn’t have to take the trouble.  “Thanks, Mr. Aguirre,” Jack mused as he inspected the package.  It was heavy and bore his name and not much else.  Aguirre barely nodded as he turned his horse north and rode away.

“Hey look, friend, a care package,” Jack shouted to Ennis as he walked to the tent to fetch a knife to open it up.  Ennis was silent.  As he walked to the tent, Jack noticed a slight tensing of his friend’s shoulders when he mentioned the package, and felt like a fool for acting all excited about it.  Poor Ennis - up on Brokeback an entire month and nothing - not even a letter.  It saddened Jack, even though this parcel was the first and destined to be the only thing he received up on the mountain.  Jack noticed that Ennis never even turned toward him.  He felt for his friend, practically all alone in the world.  Jack would try to make it bearable, though.

Jack found a small knife, perfect for breaking the seal on the package.  While Ennis continued to wash the tin ware, Jack had an idea.  He quickly ran to the tent and found a pen.  He wrote Ennis’ name right next to his on the parcel.  “Hey Ennis, Jack shouted, very excited now.  “Don’t you want to come see what we got?”  Ennis turned toward Jack at the mention of we.  “What do you mean, we?” Ennis asked, incredulous.  “I mean my ma sent this stuff for the both of us.  Come on and get yer chocolate chip cookies before I’m tempted to eat them all.”  Ennis’ heart melted.  He knew Jack was telling a tale.  He smiled as he walked to join his friend, amazed at his loving gestures.  Jack took care of him practically from the time they met.  Ennis felt unconditionally loved for the first time in his life, and in his own way, he loved Jack.  Ennis crouched next to his pal and watched as he pulled out cookies, a canned ham, a couple loaves of bread, mustard, a jar of cherries and a large can of cranberry juice.  Toward the bottom of the parcel lay several bars of soap.  Ennis laughed as Jack inspected the soap.  “How did your ma even know that I’m here,” Ennis asked, playfully.  “Well…Jack stammered..I got word to her through Aguirre.”  Jack lowered his eyes, but Ennis wasn’t through.  He was having fun.  “And when was this, Rodeo?”  “Listen, Friend, Jack mumbled, “do you want to eat or not?  How about I make us a couple of sandwiches out of this ham?”  Ennis’ eyes watered a bit.  “Okay,” he managed.  The sandwiches were eaten and the boys lay out in the shade, satisfied.  Ennis had a bar of soap in his hand and looked at Jack.  “What do ya say we take a bath in the stream?”  Jack relished the thought of soaping Ennis’ beautiful body.  He rose and headed toward the stream, peeling off his clothes.  “First one in…!!”

Title: Re: LaShawn
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 29, 2008, 12:45:49 am
Hi Littlewing.   :)  I'm starting to miss Daniel and Tyler, too.  I'll have to write more about them soon.

I can't wait!  :)  :-*
Title: Re: Rules
Post by: cwby30 on April 30, 2008, 09:41:52 pm
Riding through the notch in the forested hills, they gazed at the ranch spread across the green valley floor before them.  As a rule, he kept his emotions in check, but not now, not riding up here alone with his one and only. Ours, he thought, with his heart swelling, not bad for a rodeo fuckup and a dirt-poor orphan. Sure am glad I said 'yes, sir' and not 'no way in hell' last time he asked about that sweet life.  Laughing he spurred Cigar Butt and yelled, "Beat ya home!" "Not a chance," Jack yelled back, spurring Twister forward. 

[100 words; Drabblefest prompts: yes, sir   notch   rule]
Title: Re: Rules
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on May 01, 2008, 12:23:21 am
Riding through the notch in the forested hills, they gazed at the ranch spread across the green valley floor before them.  As a rule, he kept his emotions in check, but not now, not riding up here alone with his one and only. Ours, he thought, with his heart swelling, not bad for a rodeo fuckup and a dirt-poor orphan. Sure am glad I said 'yes, sir' and not 'no way in hell' last time he asked about that sweet life.  Laughing he spurred Cigar Butt and yelled, "Beat ya home!" "Not a chance," Jack yelled back, spurring Twister forward. 

[100 words; Drabblefest prompts: yes, sir   notch   rule]

This is a beautiful image, cwby30!  You never cease amaze me - you can paint an entire canvas with just 100 words.  I feel like I'm there with them!  Gorgeous, gorgeous writing!  Thanks so much for posting this here for us!
Title: Re: Rules
Post by: Toycoon on May 02, 2008, 03:26:13 pm
Riding through the notch in the forested hills, they gazed at the ranch spread across the green valley floor before them.  As a rule, he kept his emotions in check, but not now, not riding up here alone with his one and only. Ours, he thought, with his heart swelling, not bad for a rodeo fuckup and a dirt-poor orphan. Sure am glad I said 'yes, sir' and not 'no way in hell' last time he asked about that sweet life.  Laughing he spurred Cigar Butt and yelled, "Beat ya home!" "Not a chance," Jack yelled back, spurring Twister forward. 

[100 words; Drabblefest prompts: yes, sir   notch   rule]

I love the name of Jack's hourse, "Twister". So clever, cwby30! Where do the Drabblefest word prompts come from. Do you make them up?
Title: Re: Twister
Post by: cwby30 on May 02, 2008, 03:45:42 pm
Afternoon, Toy.

Well, wish I could take credit for the name, but it's been used by others before, particularly in "A Love Born From Steel", one of my favorites and an early fanfic. 

The prompts come from the Drabblefest thread on this website.  Mariez posts them almost every day, and I've posted some once in a while.  There are three at a time, and you can use all or one or two, whatever fits.  The idea is to do it in 100 words or less, which is a real challenge, but you won't get thrown out if it goes over!  Take a look, there are a lot of good writings over there. 

As there are here!  Can't hardly stand it waiting for your next installment of "Right". 

Thanks again. 
Title: Re: Twister
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on May 03, 2008, 06:38:50 pm
Can't hardly stand it waiting for your next installment of "Right". 

Thanks again. 

Its coming!  :)
Title: Dreams and Ranches
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on May 04, 2008, 05:36:25 pm
Jack once told him, “It can be a real sweet life!”  Ennis picked up his bologna sandwich and took a bite.  He didn’t have any mustard or mayo, but fried the mystery meat to make it juicy.  “The sweet life, huhn?” Ennis mumbled as he looked around him.  He shrugged.  Anything outside of his hot, close trailer and bad food would be sweet.  Ennis finished his sandwich and plopped down on his couch.  That Jack Twist was a dreamer of the first order.

Ennis folded his hands on his lap.  He was bored.  Steve at the ranch told him that the place may fold in the next few months, and until then, his hours would be cut.  He was only allowed to work 4 days a week.  Alma understood when she heard that the child support may be late, and the amount may be short by a few bucks.  Ennis thought back to Jack and his proposal.  “Can you make it right, Jack?  Can you really make life sweet?”  Ennis spoke the words out loud and hesitated, almost as though he expected an answer.

The next day Ennis reported to work early.  He had more than 8 hours of sleep and a real treat: Jack appeared to him in a dream.  He dreamed of Jack often, but this time was different.  This time Jack took him on a tour of a dazzling ranch.  Ennis would never describe a ranch as dazzling, but here the word fit.  The place was positively glowing! And Jack was beaming with pride as he led Ennis around by the hand.  Ennis smiled at the very though of it!  After the tour, Jack handed him a deed to the place.  If owning a spread like that wasn’t the pathway to heaven, Ennis couldn’t image what was.  He walked over to Steve to check in and get started with the day’s tasks.  Ennis looked around the ranch and grinned.  It wasn’t the gleaming paradise that Jack showed him in his dream, but it was where he made his living.  For now.


Title: I Know How to Quit YOU!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on May 07, 2008, 12:34:31 am
“So you’re actually going to drive all the way down to Riverton to see him, huhn?”  It was Randall.  Jack and Randall were having lunch at a roadside diner just outside Childress.  Jack placed a soiled napkin in his lap and took a swig of his coke.  “Of course I’m going to go meet him!”  Jack exclaimed.  Why shouldn’t I, you jerk?  Jack thought as he looked at Randall.  Randall Malone was certainly a handsome man and he enjoyed his company.  But he could be a royal pain when it came time to go visit his real significant other.

“I just thought we could go up to the cabin this weekend, is all!”  Randall looked mighty cute when he was jealous.  Jack almost enjoyed watching him pout.  But he had to learn!  Ennis was his number one; always had been and always will be.  Jack watched Randall devour his double cheeseburger.  He was a decent time filler - he actually liked him a lot - but he knew very well how to quit him.  Hell, there was really nothing much to quit.  Randall did all the work.  When they met, which was very infrequently, Randall took the initiative while Jack lay there daydreaming of another man with sandy colored hair and hazel eyes…

Jack was finishing up his burger when Randall began talking about all the fine things he could do for him.  “I would leave her for you!” Randall almost shouted, desperate.  Jack chuckled under his breath.  He was getting bored and Randall was beginning to irritate him.  Jack rose from the table and placed his napkin down.  Randall watched, silent, as Jack opened his wallet and pulled out a $20.00 bill.  “Here," Jack said as he placed the money on the table.  “This should cover the bill and the tip.  The rest you can use to buy yourself something nice.”  Jack walked away from Randall just in time.  If he had lingered a second more, Randall would have decked him, and Jack knew it.  Jack walked to his car and headed for home.  He had 1400 miles to cover starting tomorrow morning.


Title: Right 88
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on May 07, 2008, 10:20:50 pm
Jack waved goodbye to his dad and pulled off down the road.  “Where we headed?” Jack asked, his eyes fixed on the dusty road ahead.  Jack cut his eyes toward Ennis for a brief second.  “Got any place in mind?”  Ennis mulled it over.  “No,” he whispered.  “I have no idea.”  Jack gripped the steering wheel.  The day was clear and cold, just the way he liked it.  Ennis looked at his lover.  “You have a place you want to visit, Jack?  There must be some place close that you’ve always wanted to see but didn’t get the chance?"  Jack said nothing.  He did have a destination in mind: a place he needed to visit one last time before they headed out of town.  Jack turned the truck toward his tree house.

Ennis was silent as the tree house came into view.  Jack looked dead serious, somehow ready for business, and Ennis knew better than to question him.  To Ennis the tree house meant only one thing.  Did it have a deeper meaning for Jack?  Jack pulled up at the base of the tree and killed the engine.  He didn’t wait for Ennis to join him, but was scaling the ladder to the tiny house atop the tree while Ennis, almost at his heels, was breathless, trying to catch up.  Neither man spoke as they climbed the rope ladder to the small house that was nestled safely in the arms of a tree.  Jack was inside first, of course, and he turned around and gently pulled Ennis in.  Ennis sat still for awhile and caught his breath.  “Why we need to stop here, Jack?”  Ennis asked, once he composed himself a bit.  Jack didn’t answer but rummaged around under his old sleeping bag.  He pulled out a small bag shaped like a man’s shaving kit.  “What’s that?” Ennis asked.  “I thought you packed everything you need for our trip back at the house?”  “Not everything!” Jack answered as he pulled the bag’s zipper open.  Ennis leaned forward and looked inside the shaving kit.  It was full of coins and wadded up paper money.  “Jack, what is this?” Ennis asked, wide eyed now.  “Where did you get all that money?”  Jack shrugged and turned the bag upside down, spilling his treasure onto the sleeping bag.  Ennis and Jack were both silent as they stared at the cash and coins.  “I’ve been saving this for as long as I can remember,” Jack stated.  “Whenever ma gave me an allowance or I took an odd job at one of the other ranches, I put the money aside here.  Guess I could have put the money in the bank, but I don’t rightly trust banks.”  Ennis laughed at that.  “I even have all the money Aguirre paid me last year, right here,” Jack exclaimed as he pointed to the cash.  “How much is there?”  It was Ennis, as he picked up a coin and examined it.  “I don’t know.  C’mon, help me count it.”  Ennis and Jack counted Jack’s stash and were delighted when the paper money totaled $710.00.  They didn’t even bother with the coins.  “Quite a nice sum, Jack!”  Ennis whistled as Jack replaced the money into the bag.  “Not bad,” Jack agreed.  “It will keep us in food and a place to stay for awhile until we find work.  “We..Us!”  Ennis liked the sound of that.  He looked down at the sleeping bag.  “You’re going to share with me, Jack?"  Jack chuckled and lifted Ennis’ chin with a finger.  “You know I will, Friend.  Why do you even ask?”  Ennis shrugged, but still couldn’t look Jack in the eye.  Jack smiled at his lover.  “You would do the same for me, I’m sure.”  Ennis was able to meet Jack’s baby blues when he heard that.  He nodded, and it was settled.  When Jack had the paper money and coins safely back in his shaving kit, he rose a bit and moved for the door of the tree house.  But Ennis had other ideas.  He grabbed Jack by the wrist and pulled him close.  Their mouths were drawn together in a kiss both desperate and urgent.  It had been too long!  Ennis and Jack made love that afternoon to the music of the birds singing in the tree right outside Jack’s tiny retreat. 

When they were ready to go, the day was almost done.  Jack started the truck and waited while Ennis took a leak behind the tree.  When Ennis was aboard, Jack took one last look at the tree house and stifled a sigh.  He would return here before too long.  But for now, he had a life to build.  “You ready, Cowboy?” Jack asked as he smiled at his lover.  “Let’s ride,” was Ennis’ answer.  They drove in companionable silence right to the edge of the tiny hamlet of Lightning Flat.  Jack stopped at a light and glanced over at Ennis.  He wondered how he could ever keep his mind on the road with such a hunk seated beside him.  “Watch what you’re doing, Jack!” Ennis spoke as he noticed Jack’s eyes on him.”  “The light is green.”  Jack turned his sights back on the road and gave the truck some gas.  But just as he was about to pull out into the intersection, a teenaged boy ran right out in front of them.  “Damn!”  Jack screamed as he stepped on the brakes.  Ennis almost hit the windshield as Jack’s truck stopped on a dime.  “Hey, Cowboy, you alright?”  Jack was frantic as he saw Ennis seated there, holding his head.  “Yeah, I’m fine,” he managed.  “You?”  “ I’m okay,” Jack muttered as he attempted to steady himself.  He looked out the window and was panic stricken when he didn’t see the boy.  He hoped to hell that the child wasn’t under his front wheels.  “Did you see that boy?” Jack screamed.  “Where the hell did he go?”  But Ennis was already out of the car, looking for the young man.   


Title: Re: Right 88
Post by: cwby30 on May 07, 2008, 11:54:07 pm

Evenin', Little.

Well, that was all and more than expected.  Was pleasantly surprised that Jack had been saving as much as he could for years, so he would have the means to get away when he had to.  And, already they are "we", sharing everything, including a wonderful last afternoon in the treehouse. 

then, again, WHAM! another adventure gets in the way [so to speak] just as they reached the outskirts of town.  Hope this doesn't derail their get-away.  Would like to see them on their own and away from that town; it's been almost nothing but trouble from day one.

Great chapter, glad to see it.  Toy's turn now?!

Thanks again. 
Title: Re: Right 88
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on May 08, 2008, 12:38:34 am
Evenin', Little.

Well, that was all and more than expected.  Was pleasantly surprised that Jack had been saving as much as he could for years, so he would have the means to get away when he had to.  And, already they are "we", sharing everything, including a wonderful last afternoon in the treehouse. 

then, again, WHAM! another adventure gets in the way [so to speak] just as they reached the outskirts of town.  Hope this doesn't derail their get-away.  Would like to see them on their own and away from that town; it's been almost nothing but trouble from day one.

Great chapter, glad to see it.  Toy's turn now?!

Thanks again. 

Thanks, cwby30!  I'm really anxious to see where Toy takes this.  If he can't contribute right now, I'll be happy to continue the story until Toy can join in.  Thanks for your kind words.  It means a lot to me!
Title: Re: Scared
Post by: cwby30 on May 09, 2008, 06:21:03 pm

Before he met Jack Twist, he'd always trod the straight and narrow, eyes down, doing his job, no questions, knowing his lot in life, not a rabble rouser unless someone started in on him.  When he met Jack Twist, he'd looked up into deep blue eyes, and saw another life before him, one that scared him. But the thought of life without Jack scared him more.  Their argument last month cut him to the core.   So, it was time to say and do some things that needed saying and doing before one of them kicked the bucket and it would be too late.  He picked up the phone and dialed Childress for the second time in his life. 

[118 Words; Drabblefest prompts: straight and narrow, rabble rouser, kick the bucket]
Title: Re: Scared
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on May 10, 2008, 12:39:26 am
Before he met Jack Twist, he'd always trod the straight and narrow, eyes down, doing his job, no questions, knowing his lot in life, not a rabble rouser unless someone started in on him.  When he met Jack Twist, he'd looked up into deep blue eyes, and saw another life before him, one that scared him. But the thought of life without Jack scared him more.  Their argument last month cut him to the core.   So, it was time to say and do some things that needed saying and doing before one of them kicked the bucket and it would be too late.  He picked up the phone and dialed Childress for the second time in his life. 

[118 Words; Drabblefest prompts: straight and narrow, rabble rouser, kick the bucket]

Brilliant!  I hope you continue this, cwby30, as I'm dying to know what Ennis said to make things right!  Thanks for posting this here for us!
Title: One More Day
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on May 12, 2008, 09:30:44 pm
“Won’t you stay with me a bit longer, just one more day?”  Jack pleaded with Ennis.  He was not satisfied with 8 days of non-stop fun and serious loving.  Don Wroe’s cabin was not available for the stay, but that didn’t stop Jack.  He wanted to be able to sleep in a nice warm bed with his lover and pamper him.  Jack wasn’t in the mood to rough it, and he called ahead and rented a cabin for the 2 of them.  It was all good, but Ennis couldn’t stay the full 10 days!  Steve needed him back at the ranch, no questions asked.  “You know I can’t!”  It was Ennis.  He caressed Jack’s smooth jaw and nuzzled close.

Jack was silent as Ennis rubbed his chest.  Ennis knew when his lover was irritated, but there was not much to be done.  He had to make a living, and Jack was aware of that.  “Jack, I gotta work,”  Ennis whispered and placed a tender kiss on Jack's right jaw.  Jack nodded, grudgingly, but was silent.  Ennis ticked Jack’s chin, but still nothing.  “Oh God, this man can be so damned difficult!” Ennis thought.  “Why can’t he just understand?”  Ennis pulled Jack closer and was alarmed as his once responsive body went limp.  Jack was cool and distant.  “Jack, please!  I told you I could only be here for 9 days.  I gotta leave to go back to Riverton tomorrow!”  Jack nodded and almost smiled.  Hey, it wasn’t much, but it was something!

Ennis was never the jealous type, but he didn’t think about Jack being in the cabin alone, and perhaps lonely for another day.   Certainly Jack could stand being in the cabin alone for another 24 hours?  Ennis placed a hand on Jack’s firm thigh and squeezed.  He didn’t know what was happening, and why he should feel that Jack would do something unseemly like invite someone else up to stay with him.  It was unlike Ennis to risk his job, but he couldn’t halt the thoughts of Jack being with another man.  “I suppose I could get word to Steve..tell him I’m sick or something!”  Ennis said it.  He couldn’t stop the words from spilling forth.  Jack shot him a look.  “Really?”  His eyes danced.  “Really,” was Ennis’ answer.  “Now let’s get some sleep.  We can decide what to do tomorrow after we’ve rested.  Jack nodded, a happy man.  He pulled Ennis close and fell into a satisfied slumber.


Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on May 12, 2008, 11:15:20 pm
Great little story, Littlewing. You are indeed the mistress of the fanfic!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on May 13, 2008, 11:26:30 am
Great little story, Littlewing. You are indeed the mistress of the fanfic!

Awww, thanks, Babe!  :-*  Hey, I'm dying to read a little tale from you!  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on May 13, 2008, 02:43:10 pm
I'm trying to get the next chapter of "Right" posted but my significant other is hogging up all my computer time with his dang eBay sellin'!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on May 13, 2008, 10:06:59 pm
I'm trying to get the next chapter of "Right" posted but my significant other is hogging up all my computer time with his dang eBay sellin'!

I know the feeling!  I have to share my computer, as well!  E-Bay selling?  Is he good at it?
Title: The Other Ministering Angel
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on May 13, 2008, 10:44:52 pm
Ennis was worried about Jack.  He was pale and sort of withdrawn.  Oh, Jack seemed more than glad to be with him, but there was definitely something wrong.  Ennis watched as Jack walked around the tent, inspecting it.  Just six months ago Jack’s stomach was almost spilling over his jeans.  But now he had lost so much weight that his clothes seemed to swallow him whole.  And that was another thing - Jack generally took a lot of pride in his appearance.  He liked his fancy hats and fine parkas.  But this time he wasn’t even trying.  His jeans looked more worn that the pair he wore up on Brokeback, and Ennis was certain he spied a hole in Jack’s blue shirt.  Yes, something was up.  Ennis knew he had to find out what haunted his friend.  He could at least let him talk about it.  He owed him that much, at least.

“C’mon over here by me, Rodeo!” Ennis reached out both arms to Jack.  Jack looked at his lover, head cocked, a bemused smile on his handsome face.  He walked into Ennis’ arms without comment.  Ennis sat down on a rugged log and spread Jack across his lap like a child.  It felt good to hold him, have a tender moment with him.  The trip was young, and there would be time for romance, but Ennis had some digging to do.  He needed to find a way to discover what was troubling his lover.  Ennis hugged Jack tight.  “Whoa, Cowboy, what is this,” Jack chuckled as he struggled to twist free from Ennis’ embrace.  Ennis smiled and gave him some wiggle room.  “Sorry, Bud, but I got carried away.”  Jack ginned mightily at this.  He pointed to the newly erected tent.  “Ya wanna?”  Ennis ran a finger across Jack’s solid chin.  “Later.”  Jack frowned slightly, but was silent.  He relaxed in Ennis’ arms, and allowed himself to be held.  “Jack,” Ennis began, “How are things at work?”  Jack shrugged.  “Okay, I guess.”  Ennis flinched.  He was accustomed to Jack running off at the mouth about his job.  But this time Jack was eerily quiet on the subject.  So that was it?  Perhaps!  Ennis had a few more questions to ask.  “And Lureen?  Is she okay?”  Jack tensed at the mention of his wife’s name.  “Why are you always asking about her?”  Jack's tone disturbed Ennis.  He wasn’t prepared for such a reaction.  So, Lureen is the problem.  “I just wanted to be polite, ask about the family, is all,” Ennis offered.  If you want to talk about it, I’ll be happy to listen!"  Jack softened.  “I’m sorry, Friend,” Jack whispered and kissed Ennis full on the mouth.  “I’m just not up to talking about her.  Bobby neither.  Now can we go to bed?” 

After they made love, Ennis decided to let Jack rest.  The questions could wait for later.  At least Jack knew that Ennis was available if he needed to vent.  It was the case, always.  Ennis didn’t say much, but he was a good listener.  And Jack took every opportunity to unload whenever he was afraid or sad and needed a shoulder to cry on.  Ennis hummed Jack a lullaby, the very same one he used to sing to him up on Brokeback.  Jack was asleep in no time.  Ennis kissed Jack’s brow and rose to go make dinner.  He would pamper him tonight.  Ennis liked the role of ministering angel.
Title: Reunion
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on May 16, 2008, 09:31:25 pm
They made love with anger, with violence.  Neither one knew why lovemaking had to be such a war.  Perhaps it was all the time apart: a combustion of the passion and lust that festered over the months, and released in a display of lunging, pushing, pulling, sometimes even punching.  But, invariably, the fire cooled and tenderness unfolded that threatened to consume as completely as the urgency of the hurt, the longing and the bitter loneliness.
Title: Someday, Perhaps
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on May 19, 2008, 11:45:35 pm
“We have one more raffle ticket to pull!”  Ennis and Jack sat side by side on the tour bus, playfully checking the number on the blue ticket that was handed to them when they boarded the bus.  Jack smiled as he memorized the 3 digit number on his ticket and had a look around.  He was tired of always meeting in the cold with Ennis and shelled out big bucks for a 10 day trip to Mexico City.  Ennis had to be persuaded, but he eventually warmed to the idea, and within a few days they were sitting on a bus, finishing up a 2 hour tour of Mexico City.  Ennis never took his hazel eyes off of his raffle ticket stub.  He was practically grinning as he waited for the winning number to be announced. 

The gorgeous Mexican girls were barely out of their teens, but they turned out to be excellent tour guides.  Jack couldn’t miss they way they checked Ennis out, and he couldn’t very well blame them!  Ennis looked mighty fine bare headed, his sandy hair agitated by the tour bus’ fan.   And he sported Bermuda shorts and a flowered shirt!  Jack couldn’t keep his eyes off him.  He was proud to be seen with such a fine looking man.  Jack watched as one of the tour guides looked Ennis’ way and whispered to her friend who was holding the hat containing the ticket stubs.  Jack chuckled as the young lady searched around in the hat and found the stub she wanted.  It was so blatant that Jack wondered why the other 15 or so passengers didn’t notice.  “137!” The young lady announced, excitedly.  Ennis looked down at his ticket stub and yelped in spite of himself.  Jack punched him on the shoulder as Ennis held the ticket proudly in the air.  “And the winner is the fair haired gentleman seated in the back,” the young guide’s accomplice spoke as she walked toward Ennis and Jack with a wrapped gift in her hand.  Jack smiled as Ennis rose to receive his prize.  “You know they fixed it so you would win, Cowboy,” Jack whispered as Ennis took his seat.  “What do you mean,”  Ennis asked, sincere, as he settled in next to Jack and began to open the well wrapped package.

“Jack, Jack, wake up!”  Lureen shook Jack out of his dream just as Ennis was about to rip the ribbon from his prize.  It took him more than a moment to focus and realize that he was dreaming.  “Wake up and go back to sleep, Jack,” Lureen mumbled as she turned over, taking most of the covers with her.  Jack was livid, but what could he do?  He was too upset to fall back asleep, but he was also curious to know what Ennis had won.  “Well, he already won me, even if he won’t have me,” Jack lamented as he lay his head down.  Mexico?  Someday, perhaps!
Title: Stay!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on May 21, 2008, 01:47:27 am
Jack left Ennis to walk toward the stream and wash the supper dishes.  He was glad for the few moments to himself, as dinner with Ennis proved to be very draining. Ennis Del Mar was, by nature, a quiet, retiring sort, but this evening he was unusually chatty and not in a good way.  In fact, Ennis was positively obnoxious.  He was unhappy with the job and made sure Jack knew about it.

Jack knew very well that herding sheep up on Brokeback was hard work, but if someone like Ennis couldn’t cut it, well, who could?  Jack listened, quietly, as Ennis spewed forth one complaint after the other about Aguirre, the bad food, the dumb sheep, the cold, the overall discomfort of sleeping on a threadbare bedroll.  Jack was saddened that Ennis was so unhappy.  He was also afraid.

The last of the dishes rinsed in the frigid waters of the stream, Jack headed back to a brooding Ennis Del Mar.  Ennis was sitting on a log, very still, staring into space.  Jack walked over to his lover and snaked a hand over his shoulder.  “Someone is unhappy, I know, Cowboy.  But why don’t you give it a chance,” Jack said, pleading now.  He didn’t mind trying to reason with his friend.  He was terrified that Ennis would leave.  He didn’t want to lose his companion, his love.  “I can make it bearable,” Jack continued.  “Don’t worry about Aguirre.  I know this is your first real job, and take it from me—you’ll come across a lot of miserable bosses.”  Jack looked at Ennis for a reaction.  He was smiling and nodding a bit.  Jack was very happy.  Perhaps Ennis would stay after all.  There was more love than money to be made.
Title: Re: Scared
Post by: Dagi on May 22, 2008, 05:06:18 pm
Before he met Jack Twist, he'd always trod the straight and narrow, eyes down, doing his job, no questions, knowing his lot in life, not a rabble rouser unless someone started in on him.  When he met Jack Twist, he'd looked up into deep blue eyes, and saw another life before him, one that scared him. But the thought of life without Jack scared him more.  Their argument last month cut him to the core.   So, it was time to say and do some things that needed saying and doing before one of them kicked the bucket and it would be too late.  He picked up the phone and dialed Childress for the second time in his life. 

[118 Words; Drabblefest prompts: straight and narrow, rabble rouser, kick the bucket]

I love that one, cwby30!  :D
Title: Re: The Other Ministering Angel
Post by: Dagi on May 22, 2008, 05:12:35 pm
Ennis was worried about Jack.  He was pale and sort of withdrawn.  Oh, Jack seemed more than glad to be with him, but there was definitely something wrong.  Ennis watched as Jack walked around the tent, inspecting it.  Just six months ago Jack’s stomach was almost spilling over his jeans.  But now he had lost so much weight that his clothes seemed to swallow him whole.  And that was another thing - Jack generally took a lot of pride in his appearance.  He liked his fancy hats and fine parkas.  But this time he wasn’t even trying.  His jeans looked more worn that the pair he wore up on Brokeback, and Ennis was certain he spied a hole in Jack’s blue shirt.  Yes, something was up.  Ennis knew he had to find out what haunted his friend.  He could at least let him talk about it.  He owed him that much, at least.

“C’mon over here by me, Rodeo!” Ennis reached out both arms to Jack.  Jack looked at his lover, head cocked, a bemused smile on his handsome face.  He walked into Ennis’ arms without comment.  Ennis sat down on a rugged log and spread Jack across his lap like a child.  It felt good to hold him, have a tender moment with him.  The trip was young, and there would be time for romance, but Ennis had some digging to do.  He needed to find a way to discover what was troubling his lover.  Ennis hugged Jack tight.  “Whoa, Cowboy, what is this,” Jack chuckled as he struggled to twist free from Ennis’ embrace.  Ennis smiled and gave him some wiggle room.  “Sorry, Bud, but I got carried away.”  Jack ginned mightily at this.  He pointed to the newly erected tent.  “Ya wanna?”  Ennis ran a finger across Jack’s solid chin.  “Later.”  Jack frowned slightly, but was silent.  He relaxed in Ennis’ arms, and allowed himself to be held.  “Jack,” Ennis began, “How are things at work?”  Jack shrugged.  “Okay, I guess.”  Ennis flinched.  He was accustomed to Jack running off at the mouth about his job.  But this time Jack was eerily quiet on the subject.  So that was it?  Perhaps!  Ennis had a few more questions to ask.  “And Lureen?  Is she okay?”  Jack tensed at the mention of his wife’s name.  “Why are you always asking about her?”  Jack's tone disturbed Ennis.  He wasn’t prepared for such a reaction.  So, Lureen is the problem.  “I just wanted to be polite, ask about the family, is all,” Ennis offered.  If you want to talk about it, I’ll be happy to listen!"  Jack softened.  “I’m sorry, Friend,” Jack whispered and kissed Ennis full on the mouth.  “I’m just not up to talking about her.  Bobby neither.  Now can we go to bed?” 

After they made love, Ennis decided to let Jack rest.  The questions could wait for later.  At least Jack knew that Ennis was available if he needed to vent.  It was the case, always.  Ennis didn’t say much, but he was a good listener.  And Jack took every opportunity to unload whenever he was afraid or sad and needed a shoulder to cry on.  Ennis hummed Jack a lullaby, the very same one he used to sing to him up on Brokeback.  Jack was asleep in no time.  Ennis kissed Jack’s brow and rose to go make dinner.  He would pamper him tonight.  Ennis liked the role of ministering angel.


That is so sweet, Marie. I love it when you write about them being tender with each other. Our big, rough wanna-be-cowboys, one spreading the other on his lap like a baby. You touch my heart, sweetie.
Title: Re: Reunion
Post by: Dagi on May 22, 2008, 05:13:38 pm
They made love with anger, with violence.  Neither one knew why lovemaking had to be such a war.  Perhaps it was all the time apart: a combustion of the passion and lust that festered over the months, and released in a display of lunging, pushing, pulling, sometimes even punching.  But, invariably, the fire cooled and tenderness unfolded that threatened to consume as completely as the urgency of the hurt, the longing and the bitter loneliness.

That´s how it must have been. Thanks for writing, Marie.
Title: Re: The Other Ministering Angel
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on May 22, 2008, 11:36:29 pm
That is so sweet, Marie. I love it when you write about them being tender with each other. Our big, rough wanna-be-cowboys, one spreading the other on his lap like a baby. You touch my heart, sweetie.

Thanks, Baby!  I see you changed your name!  I love it!  :-*
Title: Re: Reunion
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on May 22, 2008, 11:37:02 pm
That´s how it must have been. Thanks for writing, Marie.

Thanks for reading and commenting, Love!  It means a lot to me!
Title: Re: The Other Ministering Angel
Post by: Dagi on May 25, 2008, 01:25:47 pm
Thanks, Baby!  I see you changed your name!  I love it!  :-*

And you even knew who I am.  ;D Sorry I didn´t write my name underneath, didn´t think about that. I`m not leaving, but this is the only place I´m going to go from now on.

Hugs,
Dagi
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on May 27, 2008, 12:00:30 am
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Happy Memorial Day!
Happy Belated Memorial Day, Love!  Hope you all had a wonderful holiday!

Great pic, by the way!!  ::)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on May 27, 2008, 11:51:45 pm
Thanks for the birthday well wishes, my man Gary! I hope all is well with you and the rest of the 'J with E' gang.
Did I tell you I met our beloved Littlewing 1957 on my birthday? She is the best!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on May 28, 2008, 01:09:36 am
Thanks for the birthday well wishes, my man Gary! I hope all is well with you and the rest of the 'J with E' gang.
Did I tell you I met our beloved Littlewing 1957 on my birthday? She is the best!

Ah, Toy, I feel the same way about you.  Oh, and for those of you who don't know--Toycoon is one super fine, super foxy guy who at 46 looks 20!
Title: Re: The Other Ministering Angel
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on May 28, 2008, 01:29:31 am
And you even knew who I am.  ;D Sorry I didn´t write my name underneath, didn´t think about that. I`m not leaving, but this is the only place I´m going to go from now on.

Hugs,
Dagi

Please, Dagi--uh-mariposa!  I would know you anywhere!  :)
Title: Re: Natural
Post by: cwby30 on May 31, 2008, 01:09:14 pm


His actions seemed natural to those who thought they knew him.  Walking along quickly, hardly meeting anyone's eyes, barely smiling when he did, getting his job done efficiently and almost wordlessly.  To the only one who really knew him, his actions were natural.  A splash of Old Spice to cover the scent of the man who had made love to him passionately only last night, his collar pulled up close to cover the mark on his shoulder the shape and color of a raspberry made by that same man, the hard shell which their love strained to break into and out of. 

[102 words]
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on May 31, 2008, 08:30:23 pm
Awesome, cwby30! I love the smell of "Old Spice" cologne. It reminds me of my dad. It is the uber-heterosexual scent!

I wish I could get back into writing sexy fanfic. I can't seem to get inspired these days; I don't know what is the problem. I think I'll have to watch Brokeback Mountain again. I haven't watched it before Heath pased away earlier this year. Shee-it! Thinking about that makes me sad all over again. I think I'm a bit afraid to see the film now; how will it feel to me with all that's happened.

On a brighter note, I got to meet my dear Littlewing1957 in the flesh. Can you imagine? She is so sweet and very pretty. It was wonderful.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on May 31, 2008, 08:40:38 pm
Awesome, cwby30! I love the smell of "Old Spice" cologne. It reminds me of my dad. It is the uber-heterosexual scent!

I wish I could get back into writing sexy fanfic. I can't seem to get inspired these days; I don't what is the problem. I think I'll have to watch Brokeback Mountain again. I haven't watched it before Heath pased away earlier this year. Shee-it! Thinking about that makes me sad all over again. I think I'm a bit afraid to see the film now; how will it feel to me with all that's happened.

On a brighter note, I got to meet my dear Littlewing1957 in the flesh. Can you imagine? She is so sweet and very pretty. I was wonderful.

I wish I could get back into writing sexy fanfic. I can't seem to get inspired these days; I don't what is the problem.

awww baby!!!  I'm sure you'll get back into the groove again.  You're probably too busy at the moment to think about writing steamy love stories.

On a brighter note, I got to meet my dear Littlewing1957 in the flesh. Can you imagine? She is so sweet and very pretty. I was wonderful.

You are so very sweet, my love!  Meeting you was a dream come true for me!  :-*  I'm going to post a saucy fic just for you, Toy.  I should have it up very soon.
Title: Re: Natural
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on May 31, 2008, 08:42:55 pm

His actions seemed natural to those who thought they knew him.  Walking along quickly, hardly meeting anyone's eyes, barely smiling when he did, getting his job done efficiently and almost wordlessly.  To the only one who really knew him, his actions were natural.  A splash of Old Spice to cover the scent of the man who had made love to him passionately only last night, his collar pulled up close to cover the mark on his shoulder the shape and color of a raspberry made by that same man, the hard shell which their love strained to break into and out of. 

[102 words]

Cwby30! I really like this:  the hard shell which their love strained to break into and out of. Thanks so much for posting this for us!  Brilliant! 

Title: If Only..
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on May 31, 2008, 09:46:48 pm
Toycoon, my Sweet, this one is for you!

Jack always felt hungry after a few hours of love with Ennis Del Mar.  He was 35 years old, and while not over the hill by any means, he often wondered how he found the stamina to wrestle with Ennis; especially since he was all busted up from years of being thrown from an angry bucking bull.  But Ennis always told him that he seemed very whole—very whole and virile, to boot!

Jack met Ennis this time at the Wimberley Arms Hotel on the outskirts of Cody.  Ennis arrived first, and Jack thought he would faint dead away when after the first knock, Ennis answered the door clutching a bottle of whiskey and wearing nothing more than a smile.  Ennis pulled Jack into the room so fast that Jack landed on the plush carpeting, the wind knocked out of him.

Jack didn’t even remember disrobing!  He did, however, recall the fevered pitch of Ennis’ moans, and his own in response.  It was maddening how Ennis could pull so much out of him.  Just when Jack felt he had nothing left to give, Ennis Del Mar found his reserves and brought them forth.  Jack was frightened by his love and his need for his Ennis.  After they showered and had room service bring up a savory dinner, Jack looked at Ennis as he slept and wondered what would happen next.  Would there be another round of lovemaking, or more food, or would he beg Ennis for the thousandth time to come away with him?  Jack covered Ennis with a comforter and watched him sleep.  The answer to all of his questions would be forthcoming.  He only hoped Ennis would say what he wanted -- what he needed to hear.
Title: Re: Scared 2
Post by: cwby30 on May 31, 2008, 10:56:09 pm
One ring.  Two rings.  Three rings. Come on, Jack, pick up. Four rings. “Hello.” “Um…” “Ennis?” “Yeah.” “You okay?” “Umm… No, not really.” “What’s wrong? What happened? You hurt? “Tell me!” Jack’s worry went straight to his soul, finding the one crack in the hard shell, and splitting it wide open.  All the shouldas wouldas couldas, all the fears shames excuses, all the won’ts don’ts can’ts, all Earls Richs daddys, rushing out to confront him, only to evaporate into thin air when they hit the warmth of Jack’s caring.  It left him breathless.

He opened his mouth only to have his through close up with emotion.  His jaw creaked like a rusty hinge on a wayward gate swinging open and closed and open again in the winds of change.  He felt those winds buffeting his heart, felt the change over come him, knew he could never go back to the way they were before. “Jack, I… darlin’… we…” From 937 miles away he felt the emotion coursing through the telephone line, and prayed to the God he had feared for so long that Jack felt the same emotion coursing back. Now or never.

“I wanta be with ya… I want ya with me…  I want what ya want … wherever ya want it…  what I mean is… cowboy, I…” deep breath, del Mar “… luv you.” He knew Jack had a penchant for quick responses, so the silence on the line spoke volumes, told him the meaning of his words had permeated Jack’s normal self.  Jack’s next words confirmed that, pensive, meaningful.  “Had given up hope of ever hearing that from you, ‘specially after…” NO!  His turn to jump in.  “Saw that in yer eyes, felt that in yer hug. Couldn’t stand it, want to fix it, can we?”


[For you, Littlewing1957.  And, three Drabbles in one! 299 words overall, Prompts: (1) should, could, would, (2) open, close, creak, (3) pensive, penchant, permeate]
Title: Re: Scared 2
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 01, 2008, 01:21:12 am
One ring.  Two rings.  Three rings. Come on, Jack, pick up. Four rings. “Hello.” “Um…” “Ennis?” “Yeah.” “You okay?” “Umm… No, not really.” “What’s wrong? What happened? You hurt? “Tell me!” Jack’s worry went straight to his soul, finding the one crack in the hard shell, and splitting it wide open.  All the shouldas wouldas couldas, all the fears shames excuses, all the won’ts don’ts can’ts, all Earls Richs daddys, rushing out to confront him, only to evaporate into thin air when they hit the warmth of Jack’s caring.  It left him breathless.

He opened his mouth only to have his through close up with emotion.  His jaw creaked like a rusty hinge on a wayward gate swinging open and closed and open again in the winds of change.  He felt those winds buffeting his heart, felt the change over come him, knew he could never go back to the way they were before. “Jack, I… darlin’… we…” From 937 miles away he felt the emotion coursing through the telephone line, and prayed to the God he had feared for so long that Jack felt the same emotion coursing back. Now or never.

“I wanta be with ya… I want ya with me…  I want what ya want … wherever ya want it…  what I mean is… cowboy, I…” deep breath, del Mar “… luv you.” He knew Jack had a penchant for quick responses, so the silence on the line spoke volumes, told him the meaning of his words had permeated Jack’s normal self.  Jack’s next words confirmed that, pensive, meaningful.  “Had given up hope of ever hearing that from you, ‘specially after…” NO!  His turn to jump in.  “Saw that in yer eyes, felt that in yer hug. Couldn’t stand it, want to fix it, can we?”


[For you, Littlewign1957.  And, three Drabbles in one! 299 words overall, Prompts: (1) should, could, would, (2) open, close, creak, (3) pensive, penchant, permeate]

Cwby30, I just love your writing!  And this one, 3 drabbles together, is very descriptive.  You have made my night.  That Ennis Del Mar finally had the sense to at least try and realize that sweet life.  He actually found the nerve to say it!!  The words, what I mean is… cowboy, I…” deep breath, del Mar “… luv you.”  took my breath away.  Thanks so much for posting this for me, Babe!
Title: Re: Scared 2
Post by: cwby30 on June 01, 2008, 01:43:07 am
Cwby30, I just love your writing!  And this one, 3 drabbles together, is very descriptive.  You have made my night.  That Ennis Del Mar finally had the sense to at least try and realize that sweet life.  He actually found the nerve to say it!!  The words, what I mean is… cowboy, I…” deep breath, del Mar “… luv you.”  took my breath away.  Thanks so much for posting this for me, Babe!

Any time!  Well, almost. Already thinking of Scared 3 and will post it using prompts later. 

cwby30
Title: Re: Scared 2
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 01, 2008, 01:53:11 am
Any time!  Well, almost. Already thinking of Scared 3 and will post it using prompts later. 

cwby30

Fabulous!  I can't wait to read it!
Title: Safe and Sound
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 02, 2008, 07:59:29 pm
Come inside! The clouds are black and
look ready to burst!
Prepare for drizzle, hail, snow
or worse!
Do not be afraid of the rain, thunder
wind and mist,
...or of my love!
I’ll protect you through more
than this.

Jack wasn’t prepared for the cloudburst, neither was Ennis.  They were just finishing up chopping wood for a supper fire when the once white, frothy, billowy clouds were blown off and replaced by evil looking grey - black monsters.  It happened so fast!  But it was really nothing new.  Jack clasped Ennis’ hand in his and led him to the tent.

They left the wood out in the rain, and were resigned to a cold supper that night.  The rain cascaded, built up, and showed no signs of dissipating anytime soon.  Jack squatted on the bedroll and searched a burlap sack for cans of beans and peaches.  Ennis located a towel and commenced to drying hair that was plastered to his skull.  No need in catching his death.  Jack didn’t look very wet, but Ennis threw him the towel and watched as Jack dabbed at his hair.  Neither spoke a word.

Two hours since the first drops fell, and still no break in the clouds.  Ennis wondered out loud how long the rains would fall.  Jack looked at him and shrugged.  He opened a can of beans and threw it to Ennis.  He handed him a spoon.  Once Ennis ate his fill, Jack took the can and ate what was left.  It was not a fancy or tasty supper, but it was rather filling.  Jack finished his meal and threw the can outside the tent flap.  He smiled at his lover and reached out an arm for him.  Ennis smiled back and squeezed the base of Jack's elbow.  There would be no going back up to the sheep that night.
Title: Mrs. Sweeney's Boarding House
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 05, 2008, 01:13:43 am
Jack walked to his room and placed his gloves on the bed.  He was renting a room in Mrs. Sweeney’s rooming house.  His room rented for $10.00 a week, and with his meager winnings from rodeo competitions, and pay from odd jobs, Jack was just able to afford his room and the meals that Mrs. Sweeney provided for $3.00 more a week.  He was about ready to move on.  It was no reflection on Billie Sweeney and her modest house, but Jack was itching to participate in every rodeo riding competition in the fine State of Texas.  He sat on the bed and rubbed his elbow.  He was hungry, he was tired, and, yes, he missed Ennis Del Mar.

Jack couldn’t chase the memory of Ennis walking down the road behind him as they left Brokeback Mountain after the job was cut short.  Jack will never forget the look on Ennis’ face – was certain that his handsome mug looked a little sick, a bit green.  He fought every urge to turn his truck around and go back for his friend, but he wasn’t at all sure that Ennis would welcome him.  They did not leave on the best of terms.  Oh, they weren’t angry, but their parting was awkward to say the last.  Jack put the sad image of Ennis disappearing out of his life to rest as pulled off his dirty jeans and put on his only other pair of clean stiff wash jeans.  Mrs. Sweeney served dinner at 7:00p.m. sharp, and she didn’t abide people sitting at her table wearing dirty clothes.  Billie Sweeney was a simple woman, but she was well bred.  When she was a girl her father insisted that the family dressed for dinner.  She couldn’t require her boarders, who were, for the most part, simple working people to wear fancy suits and dresses to her dinner table.  But the people she served could at least be neat and clean.  Jack smoothed his hair and headed downstairs to the dining room for supper.  He fought back tears as he wondered where Ennis would eat supper that night.  Jack saw visions of Alma serving Ennis his supper.  He shook the pictures out of his mind.  The thought of Ennis with a wife was more than he could bear.

Mrs. Sweeney was just placing the last of the platters on the table when Jack sat down.  He was the 3rd and last boarder to arrive.  To his right sat Mr. Charles Simmons, a roughneck, and seated next to Mr. Simmons was Pearl Whittle, a librarian.  Simon McBride sat on the right of Billie Sweeney.  No one spoke as Mrs. Sweeney said grace.  Jack looked at his hostess and waited for her nod.  He reached for the mashed potatoes and loaded his plate.  Mrs. Sweeney encouraged her guests to eat their fill, and smiled as Jack, Charles and Simon enjoyed fried pork chops, apple sauce, mashed potatoes and green beans and bread.  Pearl ate only green beans and a bit of the mashed potatoes.  The conversation at the table was light.  The boarders took turns talking about their adventures at work and elsewhere.  Jack spoke about the odd jobs he did around the ranches in the area, and Pearl went on about a new assistant librarian that was hired just that morning.  Charles was silent.  Jack never looked his way, but Charlie stole glances at Jack.  Charlie Simmons was a big, silent, affable man who had hazel eyes and dirty blond hair.  He was very buff and very handsome.  Jack couldn’t look at him.  He didn't have to just then.  Charlie would visit him later that night when the house grew dark and silent.  Their "affair" was going on for weeks now.  Charlie would knock, and Jack would open the door and allow him to enter.  Charlie would disrobe in silence while Jack placed lube on the bed.  The coupling was mechanical.  Both knew that there would be no strings attached, no feelings to get in the way.  Recreation, it was.  Jack felt free to call Ennis’ name when his release was near.  Charlie didn’t care.  He was happy to be Ennis. As long as his needs were met, he could be anyone Jack wanted him to be.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on June 05, 2008, 10:00:01 am
Hmmmm, Littlewing. Very provocative story. I'm more than just curious to see where this leads...
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 05, 2008, 05:01:12 pm
Hmmmm, Littlewing. Very provocative story. I'm more than just curious to see where this leads...

Thanks, Toy!  You think I should continue?  Okay, but I think I'll post another chapter of Right first.  I suppose we can have more than 1 saga going at a time!  :)
Title: Harmonica
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 08, 2008, 05:10:17 pm
Jack got the call at the office right before he was packing up to leave for the day.  It was Lureen reminding him to pick up reeds for Bobby at the music store.  Jack remembered.  Bobby took up the clarinet months ago, and since then, Jack found himself heading for The Best Music Store every few weeks to buy replacement reeds for Bobby’s instrument.  It was a task he didn’t mind.  In fact, Jack rather enjoyed visiting the store, and browsing through the various instruments and sheet music while he waited his turn.  Few people knew this, but Jack always wanted to play an instrument.  At first he fancied the drums, but later on he had dreams of plucking away at the piano.  But there was always the matter of money: never enough of it.  No means to pay for music lessons!  Story of Jack’s life!

The Best Music Store was not a large place, but the owner managed to offer just about every instrument a person could want.  Jack walked into the store and was delighted to see that it was practically empty.  He eyed a set of bongos and resisted an urge to beat out a tune on the larger of the drums.  He was welcome to test out the instruments; the owner, Sal Rosen, always made that clear to him.  But Jack didn’t have time to kid around.  He needed to purchase the reeds and get them home to Bobby.  His son had to practice for a school performance the following night. 

Mr. Rosen waited on Jack.  He knew that Bobby used cane reeds and had them ready for him before he reached the counter.  Jack handed Sal payment and waited for his change.  He was browsing around the counter when he saw a harmonica among the rare items that Sal kept in the glass case right under the cash register.  Jack felt his heart skip a few beats.  He saw several mouth organs in the shop over the months, but this one he never noticed before.  There was something strangely familiar about this one.  Sal was back with Jack’s change, and noticed him eyeing the harmonica.  “Wanna see it, Mr. Twist?” Sal asked as he reached for the keys to the case.  “I just got this one in.  I bought it off the manager of a local blues man in town who just died a few weeks ago.  This harmonica is very special!  Here, let me get it for you.”  Jack didn’t object as Sal placed the instrument in his hand.  He felt the weight of the harmonica and turned it from side to side to get a good look at it.  It was obviously used, but in good condition.  “That harmonica don’t sound right, neither!”  Jack could hear Ennis’ voice as he held the harmonica in his hands.  He smiled at the memory.  “I’ll take it!” Jack blurted as he handed the instrument back to Sal.  “But this costs..” Sal began as he looked at the price tag.  “I don’t care what it costs,” Jack stated as he reached for his wallet.  Sal shrugged and smiled.  “Yes, sir, I’ll wrap it up for you.”  Jack already has a special place in mind for the harmonica.  It would be for his eyes only.  He blushed a bit as he thought about Ennis and his reactions to his harmonica "playing" up on Brokeback.  Jack already owned a mouth organ, one that would be perfect for practice and performing.   And He knew a guy at work, a black man, who played harmonica after hours at one of the blues clubs in town.  He wondered if Cleophus would like to make some extra money giving harmonica lessons. 


Title: Re: The Other Ministering Angel
Post by: Dagi on June 11, 2008, 04:17:02 pm
Please, Dagi--uh-mariposa!  I would know you anywhere!  :)

I guess the bad English is very telling, huh?  :laugh: I´d recognize you anywhere, too, Marie dear. Now more than ever.

Love,
Dagi

PS Every once in a while I peak in here and have a read, sorry for not  commenting much. I simply enjoy reading, Marie, Toycoon, cwby30. Thanks for writing!
Title: Re: The Other Ministering Angel
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 11, 2008, 05:34:25 pm
I guess the bad English is very telling, huh?  :laugh: I´d recognize you anywhere, too, Marie dear. Now more than ever.

Love,
Dagi

PS Every once in a while I peak in here and have a read, sorry for not  commenting much. I simply enjoy reading, Marie, Toycoon, cwby30. Thanks for writing!

Dagi, how nice it is to see you here!  I'm glad you stop in from time to time to read our stories.  I would really like to read a sweet tale from you!  Asking too much?  Not feeling it?  I understand.  I'll keep posting em if you'll keep reading em, and commenting, of course!  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: cwby30 on June 11, 2008, 11:20:38 pm

Evenin', Dagi.

Well, appreciate the kind words, and will keep on writing.  Have some in the works, nothing ready to post, but getting there. 

Did you write 'Lost Memories' and 'Losing Time'?  Someone with the same name but different handle posted those on LJ a few months ago.  Good stories.

Thanks again. 
Title: What about Texas?
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 12, 2008, 01:12:43 am
Jack drove Ennis back to the rest stop on the outskirts of Riverton to pick up his truck.  Jack arrived at Don Wroe’s cabin more than a week ago in a brand new Chevy truck, red and gleaming.  Ennis walked around Jack’s new vehicle and whistled.  “This is a mighty fine truck, Jack,” Ennis exclaimed.  “It must have set you back a pretty penny.” “Remember, I work for a car dealership,” Jack stated, absently.  “I get cars for cost, or less.”  Ennis nodded and smiled.  He was happy to see his lover doing well.  Jack thought about the week long trip as he drove back to the rest stop.  He had such fond memories of being with his lover once more.  But the sight of Riverton with its wide open spaces and dreary, dusty roads depressed Jack.  He was a native of Wyoming, but living in Texas broadened his horizons.  Some things never changed.  Riverton was as boring as ever, and Lightning Flat was even worse.  It was no wonder that Jack was itching to be anywhere else but Lightning Flat for as long as he could remember.

As they neared the rest stop, Jack couldn’t keep his peace.  He shot a look at Ennis and turned his attention back to the black strip of road.  “Why are you still living here, Friend?”  There, he said it. Ennis didn’t understand right away.  He was looking at the road, looking ahead to the stop where he parked his old truck for the week.  “You hear me, Cowboy,” Jack whispered.  Ennis sucked his teeth and continued to look straight ahead. “Yeah, I heard you, Bud.”  Ennis loved Jack, but he hated his constant entreaties: his hints that they should pack up and move away to start a life together.  Both were quiet for a moment as Jack continued driving.  When he made it to the rest stop, Jack turned off the engine and restrained Ennis with a shaky hand.  “Just a minute, Cowboy,” Jack spoke, forcefully.  Ennis knew to stay where he was.  Jack had something to say.

“Again, I ask you – why are you still living here?  Look at this place!  It’s all cold in the winters and horrible in the summer.”  Ennis listened.  “You can do better than this, Friend.  Give me 3 months and I can have you a place to live, a decent job and I can introduce you to a lot of good people.  You should come and live in Texas.”  Ennis stifled a laugh.  “But what about the girls?”  Jack smiled when Ennis mentioned his daughters.  “Those angels?  Bring them with you, or we can make it so they visit often.  You can get them for the summer and holidays, just like you do now.”  Ennis was interested now.  “We?”  Jack smiled. “Yes, we.”  Jack spoke so softly and tenderly that Ennis felt a fire lighting in his belly, and just above.  “Let me think on it,” Ennis stated, coyly.  And with that, Ennis climbed out of the cab of Jack’s new vehicle.  Jack watched as Ennis cranked up his old truck, waved and drove away. 
Title: Father's Day
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 13, 2008, 12:12:02 am
The three of them were occupying the 3rd row of The Taylor Memorial Methodist Church.  Jack was wearing a black pinstriped Brook Brothers suit and a white shirt.  On his lapel was pinned a tiny red carnation.  Ennis wore a creamy white suit, white and blue stripped shirt and on his lapel he sported a white carnation.  Baby Indigo was giggling on Jack’s lap, her sandy hair in ringlets and her dress an explosion of pink lace and ruffles.  It was Father’s Day.

When Jack and Ennis entered the church, they were greeted by a deacon standing before a table on which lay a tray containing red and white carnations.  Deacon King looked first to Ennis.  “Mornin, brother! How are you and your family this fine morning?”  Ennis nodded and spoke a greeting.  “Father dead or alive?”  The question didn't surprise Ennis nor Jack.  “Dead,” was Ennis’ answer.  He was not put off by the question, nor did he feel any real pain when he delivered the answer.  Deacon King nodded and pinned a white carnation on Ennis’ lapel.  When Jack answered, “alive,” the Deacon supplied him with a red bloom.  Deacon King tickled Indigo’s chubby cheek and called for an usher to show them to their seats.

The service was rather lengthy that morning, as Pastor Rutledge made time for members who wanted to take the pulpit and deliver a tribute to their fathers.  Jack and Ennis took turns holding their daughter.  They were happier than they thought they had a right to be, but when Jenny took the pulpit with Alma Jr. close behind her, Ennis almost fell over.  He had no idea his older girls would be at service, and he never in a million years imaged that his daughters would pay tribute to him in a public forum.  Jenny seemed to fight back tears when she spoke about her dad.  Ennis let his tears fall.  Jack placed an arm around his husband and patted his shoulder as Alma Jr. took the microphone from her sister and praised her dad.  Ennis felt a sting of embarrassment as several parishioners turned around and smiled at him.  He gave Jack a sympathetic glance.  But Jack was very happy that his husband was lucky enough to have two beautiful, accepting, caring daughters.  Jack considered Jenny and Alma Jr. to be his children, as well.  His birth son, Bobby, never came around.  Jack grew to accept his only son’s indifference. 

“Hey, Cowboy, happy Father’s Day!”  Jack was shaking Ennis awake.  Baby Indigo was crying in her crib.  Ennis had to focus his eyes as he fought off sleep.  He been dreaming about being in church, but his sweet life was real.  “Happy Father’s Day, Lil Darlin!” Ennis whispered to his love as he kissed him full on the mouth.  “I’ll go get the baby," Jack said as he leapt out of bed and donned his robe. He headed for the door, and turned to Ennis as though he forgot something.  “And you had better get up, Cowboy,” Jack spoke, excited.  “We only have an hour to get ourselves and our baby fed and clothed.  We have to be in church by 10:00.”  Ennis nodded knowingly and smiled at his husband. 
Title: Right 89
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 17, 2008, 12:58:34 am
Right 89

Mrs. Twist was lying warm in her bed, but a storm was raging in her heart.   She didn't feel like doing much of anything since Jack and Ennis hit the road a week ago without a word.  Mr. Twist resolved to give his woman her space, but if she didn’t snap out of her funk in a few days, he would summon the doctor.  Mr. Twist gritted his teeth as he made supper while his wife rested.  These days he found himself doing all the cooking, the cleaning and the laundry.  And he supervised Harold and his friends in the rebuilding of the barn.  John Twist was never so bone weary in his life, but he knew he had to keep going.  He married for better or for worse, and had every intention of honoring his vows.  Few people knew that John Twist was a pretty decent cook.  Jack never really learned that fact, as his mom always prepared meals for the family, and she was rarely so ill that she couldn’t cook.  Mrs. Twist always carried Jack with her when she visited her people, so there was no reason for John to cook for his son.  When John thought of Jack and Ennis, his blood began to boil hotter than the stew he just prepared.  He tried not to be resentful, tried not to blame his son for taking off practically out of the blue.  The bitterness was something he had to work on.  No need in staying all hot and bothered about circumstances he couldn't change.

John placed a bit of the lamb stew in a bowl and placed it on a tray with a few slices of bread and a glass of milk.  He hoisted the tray and headed for the stairs and his bedroom.  He felt his age as he lifted first one foot, and then the other to climb the stairs.  When he made the landing, John tread slowly as he passed first the tiny bathroom, and then Jack’s bedroom.  He flinched when he noticed Jack’s bedroom door was open.  He stopped and glanced in at the twin bed that somehow looked as though Jack never slept there.  The room was as barren and as cheerful as the grave.  John fought to cancel out the images of him lying there with his terrified son as he wronged him again and again.  He knew he had a lot to pay for.  He only hoped the sweet Lord would give him a chance to repent, to right the wrongs he committed in this life before he closed his eyes in death.  Mr. Twist reasoned that caring for his wife was a step in righting the wrongs.  He neared his bedroom and stopped right outside the closed door.  He listened for any sounds, any sign that his wife was awake.  He heard nothing.

John nudged the door open with an elbow and inched his way in.  His wife was lying in bed, the family Bible spread out on the quilt in front of her.  She had weak eyes, and must have been crying again.  John couldn’t fathom it.  He missed his son, but he also knew he had an advantage.  His longing for Jack was tempered with resentment.  John smiled at his wife and she smiled in return.  “You cooked dinner, pa,” she whispered.  Mr. Twist nodded slightly and sat the tray down on their bureau.  “Yeah, I cooked a bit of lamb stew, yer favorite.”  He reached down and removed the bible.  “Why don’t you sit up and try to eat a bite.  You need to keep your strength up.”  Mrs. Twist nodded, and even smiled a bit.  “That smells awful good, John.  Thanks for cooking it up for me.”  John’s heart leapt when he heard that.  “You welcome, mother,” he stated as he placed the tray down on the quilt.  He pulled up a chair and sat down beside his woman.  Mrs. Twist ladled a spoonful of the stew and blew on it to cool.  She gobbled the entire spoonful and groaned with pleasure.  “My Lord, John, but you’re an even better cook than I am,”  John Twist blushed with pleasure and watched his wife eat.  It was the most she was able to tolerate in days.  When she had finished every bit of the stew, he removed the tray and asked her if she wanted more.  “Oh, no, pa, I’m full.  Thanks for the meal.”  John placed the tray on the bureau and took his wife’s hand in his.  He kissed her palm and looked deep into her red eyes.  “You don’t have to thank me, ma.  You’re my wife and I’ll always take care of you.”  Mrs. Twist felt her eyes tearing up, and this time Jack was the furthest thing from her mind.  She pulled the quilt aside and motioned for her husband to climb in bed beside her.  JohnTwist removed his shoes and climbed in bed to hold his wife in his arms.  As she responded to his touch, John was certain that he wouldn't need to bother the doctor.
Title: Cheek-to-Cheek
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 23, 2008, 11:20:36 pm
Ennis was more than aware that Jack craved the feel of his cheek.  He couldn’t figure out why, though.  Jack found ways to snatch a feel, to caress Ennis’ jaw.   It happened while they bathed together in a frigid stream; while they prepared and ate supper; while Ennis slept, and when they made love.  Jack pressed his cheek to Ennis’ and rubbed softly, up and down.  Ennis chuckled to himself when he thought about his stubble rubbing against Jack’s smooth jaw.  But Jack couldn’t seem to help himself.  Ennis allowed his lover to run a palm against his jaw, and follow it up with a cheek-to-cheek caress.
Title: Cowboy Romance
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 24, 2008, 12:01:13 am
Jack was late to the office by about 15 minutes, but he didn’t fear a chewing out by the boss.  The fact that Jack was the boss’ son in law didn’t mean a thing; he was subject to the same rules and regulations as any other employee.  L.D. was out of town visiting relatives, and when the cats away…

“Hello, Mr. Twist!”  Gina Christmas sat behind her desk and smiled at Jack as he passed.  “Nice day, isn’t it?”  Jack smiled at the young woman and stopped to return her greeting.  “Very nice day, Gina.  How you doin?”  Jack noticed Gina’s plump cheeks turning red at the sound of his voice.  He knew Gina harbored a crush, and everyone else at the dealership knew, even Lureen.  But no one thought to do anything about it.  Jack was a man who could have any woman he wanted.  Gina being smitten with him was only normal.  “I’m fine,” Gina chirped as she placed her half-read novel down on her desk.  “Good,” Jack mumbled politely, and walked away to his office.

Newsome Motors employees took lunch at noon, and usually congregated at the back of the dealership where L.D. had picnic tables and benches placed in a row.  Jack dropped his lunch box on the table and slid onto the bench.  A dozen or so employees were already eating, including Gina.  She sat at Jack’s left, and read from her book as she nibbled on a chicken sandwich.  Jack produced a turkey club sandwich from his box and took a big bite.  He felt like talking and took notice of Gina’s novel.  “What ya reading,” Jack asked, absently.  “Gina turned the cover over so that Jack could read the title.  “Dare to Kiss a Cowboy,” Jack whispered.  “You like reading about cowboys?”  Gina smiled a bit.  “Yeah, especially cowboy romances.  Those cowboys are sure passionate!”  Gina squirmed a bit on the bench, and Jack stifled a chuckle.  “Cowboys are passionate, huhn,” Jack stammered, amused.  “Yes, sir,” Gina croaked.  Jack looked at the cover with its stylized picture of an impossibly handsome, shirtless cowboy with sandy hair carrying a beautiful woman in his toned arms.  The man on the cover reminded him of someone.  Jack was not about to argue with Gina when it came to cowboys and passion.  He stared at the picture on the cover a bit longer than necessary, and in a blink, he saw himself materializing on the cover, taking the woman’s place in the muscular arms of the sexy cowboy.  “Mr. Twist, you okay?”  Gina’s voice interrupted Jack’s daydream and brought him back to earth.  “I’m okay, Gina,” Jack whispered.  He ate the rest of his lunch in silence. 



Title: Right 90
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 25, 2008, 09:21:04 pm
“Do you want fried chicken, or baked chicken?” Lessie Boykin stood before Ennis and Jack and pointed to a freshly thawed bird.  Ennis looked over at Jack and both said in unison: “fried!”  Lessie laughed heartily and reached for the unusually plumb chicken.  “Well, it looks like I got me some men here who know exactly what they want!”  Ennis and Jack beamed.  They were extremely fond of Lessie and appreciated her hospitality more than they could say.

Lessie Boykin was a heavy set black woman in her late 40s.  She owned a small shotgun house in Morgan, Utah, and was the only black woman in the entire city.  Lessie was rather pretty with her shoulder length hair and expressive brown eyes.  She was fond of shift dresses, as they hid a multitude of sins.  Ennis and Jack, and especially little Stanley, swore she was one of the most beautiful women they ever laid eyes on.  Stanley Boykin heard the word chicken and ran into the small kitchen.  He jumped up and down on short but powerful legs as he watched his mother dress the bird.  “We havin’ chicken for dinner, ma,”  Stanley asked, excitedly.  Lessie didn’t answer, but continued the chore of cutting the large bird into pieces.  Jack was seated at the kitchen table and waved Stanley over.  Stanley grinned at Jack and jumped onto his lap.  Ennis nodded to Jack as he sat there holding the Negro boy.  One thing Ennis noticed about Jack: he was magic with all sorts of people.  Where Jack Twist was concerned, race, gender, nationality didn’t matter, as he looked at the inner person.  Ennis was not so tolerant, but being around Jack softened him up considerably.  He didn’t care that Lessie and her boy were Negro.  Lessie’s money was green, and she paid well for the odd jobs that Ennis and Jack did for her around her modest spread.  She even put them up in a small bungalow that her deceased husband, a white minister, built out back of the house on their land.  Lessie hired Ennis and Jack to put a new roof on the bungalow, paint her bedrooms, and do a bit of light landscaping.  Ennis and Jack were thankful for the work and managed to save a small sum in the several weeks that they lived out back on the Boykin spread.  And that Lessie was indeed a saint.  She was full of Christian kindness, being the widow of a minister, and all.  Lessie took great pains to make Ennis and Jack feel like part of the family.  Ennis looked at Stanley and was transported back to the afternoon when Jack almost ran him over:

Ennis was out of the car first and looked around for the boy he was certain ran out in front of the truck.  Jack was frantic, convinced that he had killed someone.  But when they heard a child’s voice shout, “don’t worry mister, I’m over here,” Ennis and Jack turned toward the sweet voice and spied a chestnut skinned child sitting on the curb, out of harms way.  He was smiling and waved Ennis over.  “Are you okay, son,” Ennis stammered as he placed a hand on the boy’s small head.  “Yeah, I’m okay.  I’m quick, huhn?”  Jack walked over and observed the child.  He was certainly a good looking kid.  “I don’t know how you moved so fast out of the way, kid, but I’m glad you did.  What’s your name?”  The child’s face closed a bit just then.  Ennis understood and remembered how his ma always told him to be wary of strangers.  “You can tell us your name, son.  We won’t hurt you!”  It was Jack.  He sat down on the curb next to the child and looked him in the eyes.  The boy must have fallen victim to Jack’s startling baby blues, as he began to talk.  “My name is Stanley and I’m here visiting my grandma and grandpa.  I was just going to the store when I thought I could beat the light across.  I’m sorry if I scared you.  You didn’t hurt me.”  Jack placed a soothing hand on Stanley’s shoulder.  “I’m glad we didn’t hurt you, too.  Now do you want me to take you home?”  “No, I still need to get to the store fast or my grandma will yell at me.”  Jack glanced at Ennis with a puzzled expression.  “We can take you to the store.  Why would your grandma yell at you if you're a bit late?”  Stanley lowered his head almost to his breastbone.  “Because she always yells at me and makes me go outside when company comes.  She tells my cousins to hide the colored boy out back.”  Jack flinched.  He was outraged.  Ennis remained silent.  “Well, look, let’s go to the store and get what you need, and I’ll take you home.”  Stanley hesitated a bit.  “Look, Jack whispered, “It will save you some time if I take you.  Maybe your grandma won’t yell at you if you make good time!”  Stanley was quiet as he considered Jack’s words.  He nodded and rose from the curb.  Jack helped him into the cab of the truck and Ennis climbed in.  The trip to the store was uneventful.  There was a curious lack of interest as Ennis and Jack shopped around with a Negro boy in tow.  They bought a few staples and were on their way to Stanley’s grandparent’s home.  Stanley’s grandmother was standing on the porch when Jack pulled up to the house.  She was an elderly woman of about 80 with silver white hair in a bun, and she was rail thin.  Mrs. Boykin practically scowled as Jack climbed out of the truck carrying a paper sack.  She smirked a bit when Stanley followed, and Ennis brought up the rear.  “About time you got back here, boy,” Mrs. Boykin spat.  “What took you so damn long, and who are these men?”  Stanley was too scared to speak.  Ennis spoke up, “Ennis Del Mar and Jack Twist, ma’am.”  Mrs. Boykin looked first to Ennis, then to Jack and said nothing.  She grabbed Stanley by the hand and pulled him into the house.  “Wait ma’am,” Jack yelled after her. “You forgot your groceries!”  The old woman’s shoulders tensed, but she turned and accepted the bag from Jack.  She then entered her house and slammed the door behind her.




Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on June 29, 2008, 11:50:40 am
Yay Littlewing!
Great start of a new chapter to "Right". I just love to read your writing; it's so descriptive, warm and visual. Bravo!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 29, 2008, 07:41:38 pm
Yay Littlewing!
Great start of a new chapter to "Right". I just love to read your writing; it's so descriptive, warm and visual. Bravo!

Well, hello!  Welcome back, pumpkin!  I've missed you so much!  :-*  I'll send you a PM in a bit so we can catch up.  Glad you like the newest chapter of Right.  I'll have the followup posted soon.  :)
Title: Re: Right 89 & 90
Post by: cwby30 on July 01, 2008, 06:23:54 pm

Afternoon, Littlewing.

Well, like the two latest installments.  OMT berating himself, as well he should, even if he is a bit "poor me" about it.  And Jack and Ennis have landed on their feet it seems in the new place, at least for awhile.  Interesting point, how J&E show tolerance for little Stanley despite being mixed-race, while they fear intolerance from others because they are gay.  Good storyline.  Looking forward to more.

Thanks again. 
Title: Re: Boxed In
Post by: cwby30 on July 01, 2008, 06:28:41 pm

After nursing a single beer for three hours, Jack left the bar, drove to the nearest motel, and got a room for the night.  He threw his bag on the floor and flopped into the almost comfortable chair next to the floor lamp.  His thoughts crashed around his brain like waves hitting rocks when the tide came in. 

Finally, he walked over and sat at the desk.  Pulling out a piece of motel stationary and an envelope, he started to write, hoping his frustration, anger, sorrow and determination could be read in the words he wrote.

4/6/74
Ennis –
Finally figured it out today.  You’ve got no time left for me, never had, never will.  No time for yer ‘summer friend’, no time for the love I’ve sent you all these years, just no time.  The seasons change, people change, but you don’t, can’t, won’t.  Still locked up in the past. 
Well, friend, I’ve got no more time left for this revolving door you got me spinning in. I can’t stand it, so I’m gonna fix it.  Gonna find better things, gonna spread my wings, travel some other roads, find out what else is out there in the distance, better things, away from you. Don’t spend time wondering why, just look in the mirror. 
Forget Brokeback, forget postcards, forget May, forget me, just forget everything.  I quit. 
Jack Twist


*******

April 24, 1967

“Yeah, Maryanne, what is it?” he growled into the receiver. 

“Got a delivery for you out here, Mr. Twist.”

“I’ll get it later, too busy right now.”

“Fella that brought it says he has to give it to you personally.”

Fuckin’ process servers. “Okay, send him in.”

He didn’t look up as the door opened and closed, didn’t register it when the lock clicked, had to finish organizing these client files before he left today.  “Just leave it on the desk.”

A hand set down a well-worn rectangular white gift box with the name ‘Dayton’s’ on the cover, and pushed it across the papers towards him.  He froze.  He knew that hand as well as his own, knew each callous and scar, knew the opposite hand, knew the body they were attached to.  He had kissed every square inch of that hand, had felt it run through his hair, caress his back, his chest, his… He swallowed hard, still not looking up.

Knew that kind of box, too, from his childhood, hadn’t seen one in over ten years.  His trembling hands reached for the box, pulled it over close, one hand held it secure on the desk, the other lifted up the lid.  He sucked in his breath, and stared through blurry eyes at the contents. 

Inside lay a shiny rectangular object, slightly dented, the raised letters of the maker hardly legible, worn down nearly even with the surface.  He ran his fingers across the surface, caressing it, swore he could feel it hum, could hear the music, could see the fire, could smell the smoke and the pines and laying shoulder to shoulder next to him their backs against the big log. 

“Took it from your pack that last day, after we tussled.  Had to have somethin’ to remind me that you were real, that those days were real, that the thing we’d had was real, even if you weren’t there.  Those years between, when I couldn’t stand it, I’d get it down from its hiding place, run my fingers across it, close my eyes, find you there. After you found me, still did it, more often than before.”

A drop of wet marred the month-end sales report.

“Didn’t treat you like I should’ve all these years, never meant to make you feel second best, ‘cause you’re not.  You’re always on my mind, Jack. 

“Never took the time to say things I should’ve, like how happy I am when I ‘m with you, that you and me... that I got…  Never been much for words, don’t know where all this is comin’ from…”  The tone of voice changed. “Yes, I do.”

Jack lifted the shiny object from its home, and held it gently in his hands, afraid it would break if he grasped it too hard.  Two drops of wet landed on the slick surface, trickled down onto the palm of his left hand.   

“You were right what you said in that letter, been locked up tight by the past, lettin’ it tell me what to do.  Sometimes easier that way, not havin’ to think, but know now I was wrong.  Didn’t hold onta you when I should’ve back then, ain’t gonna make the same mistake now.  Hope your love hasn’t died, mine hasn’t.  Give me another chance. Please.  Know I don’t deserve it, but if you would, if you do, I won’t let you go again, Jack, I swear.”  Even though he was not the swearing kind, and Jack had never asked him to swear to anything.

The hand put down a wrinkled rectangular piece of paper on top of the other papers on the desk, and pushed it towards him.  Trailways Bus Line.  Riverton to Childress via Denver.  $84.26.  One way.  No return. 

Jack’s heart pounded so hard he thought it could be heard down the hall, in fact he hoped it would be, ‘specially in the office of a certain someone.  Pounded from hearing him say the words he’d wanted to say himself for so many years, but never had the courage.

He finally looked up into care-worn loving dark brown eyes, hardly noticing the hat held by the brim in the fingers of both hands, or the body nervously shuffling from one leg to the other. 

“That’s the most you’ve said to me in ages.”

“That’s more’n I’ve said to you ever.”  Ennis looked down at his hat.  “Should’ve said it before, and then some.”

“Time wasn’t right, ‘til now.”  Jack paused and smiled.  “Looks like you’ll need a lift wherever you’re goin’.” He looked Ennis in the eyes.  “Where are you going?”

Ennis looked right back into Jack’s. “With you. Where’re you going?”

“Home, my former home that is, to finish packing.  Wasn’t sure after that, just away from here. Tonight.”

“Mind if I hitch a ride?”

“No, don’t mind, want that, and want you, always have, but I can’t do all the driving any more, you gotta do your share.”

“Can do that, gonna need some help, though, ain't had much experience drivin' long distances.”

Jack wiped his face with both sleeves of his shirt, stood up, took a last look at the papers on this desk, shrugged his shoulders, and walked over to get his hat from the horseshoe hook on the wall.  On his way back towards the door, he picked up the ‘Dayton’s’ box, replaced his harmonica in it along with Ennis’ one-way ticket. Closing the lid, he offered the box to Ennis.  “Here, keep these safe for us.”  A statement, a question, both. 

Ennis took the offering, letting his fingers linger around Jack’s as he did.  Holding on tight to their box, he reached his free hand around Jack’s neck and pulled him close for a kiss. 

“You bet.”

*******************

No Time, The Guess Who

You Were Always on my Mind, Willie Nelson
Title: Re: Right 89 & 90
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 02, 2008, 01:41:20 am
Afternoon, Littlewing.

Well, like the two latest installments.  OMT berating himself, as well he should, even if he is a bit "poor me" about it.  And Jack and Ennis have landed on their feet it seems in the new place, at least for awhile.  Interesting point, how J&E show tolerance for little Stanley despite being mixed-race, while they fear intolerance from others because they are gay.  Good storyline.  Looking forward to more.

Thanks again. 

Thank you, Cwby30!  It is comments like this that keep me writing.  I'm glad you enjoyed the last 2 entries and I'm working on an installment.  Toy will join me when he's ready.  I'm sure he'll surprise everyone and post a chapter very soon!
Title: Re: Boxed In
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 02, 2008, 01:52:33 am
After nursing a single beer for three hours, Jack left the bar, drove to the nearest motel, and got a room for the night.  He threw his bag on the floor and flopped into the almost comfortable chair next to the floor lamp.  His thoughts crashed around his brain like waves hitting rocks when the tide came in. 

Finally, he walked over and sat at the desk.  Pulling out a piece of motel stationary and an envelope, he started to write, hoping his frustration, anger, sorrow and determination could be read in the words he wrote.

4/6/74
Ennis –
Finally figured it out today.  You’ve got no time left for me, never had, never will.  No time for yer ‘summer friend’, no time for the love I’ve sent you all these years, just no time.  The seasons change, people change, but you don’t, can’t, won’t.  Still locked up in the past. 
Well, friend, I’ve got no more time left for this revolving door you got me spinning in. I can’t stand it, so I’m gonna fix it.  Gonna find better things, gonna spread my wings, travel some other roads, find out what else is out there in the distance, better things, away from you. Don’t spend time wondering why, just look in the mirror. 
Forget Brokeback, forget postcards, forget May, forget me, just forget everything.  I quit. 
Jack Twist


*******

April 24, 1967

“Yeah, Maryanne, what is it?” he growled into the receiver. 

“Got a delivery for you out here, Mr. Twist.”

“I’ll get it later, too busy right now.”

“Fella that brought it says he has to give it to you personally.”

Fuckin’ process servers. “Okay, send him in.”

He didn’t look up as the door opened and closed, didn’t register it when the lock clicked, had to finish organizing these client files before he left today.  “Just leave it on the desk.”

A hand set down a well-worn rectangular white gift box with the name ‘Dayton’s’ on the cover, and pushed it across the papers towards him.  He froze.  He knew that hand as well as his own, knew each callous and scar, knew the opposite hand, knew the body they were attached to.  He had kissed every square inch of that hand, had felt it run through his hair, caress his back, his chest, his… He swallowed hard, still not looking up.

Knew that kind of box, too, from his childhood, hadn’t seen one in over ten years.  His trembling hands reached for the box, pulled it over close, one hand held it secure on the desk, the other lifted up the lid.  He sucked in his breath, and stared through blurry eyes at the contents. 

Inside lay a shiny rectangular object, slightly dented, the raised letters of the maker hardly legible, worn down nearly even with the surface.  He ran his fingers across the surface, caressing it, swore he could feel it hum, could hear the music, could see the fire, could smell the smoke and the pines and laying shoulder to shoulder next to him their backs against the big log. 

“Took it from your pack that last day, after we tussled.  Had to have somethin’ to remind me that you were real, that those days were real, that the thing we’d had was real, even if you weren’t there.  Those years between, when I couldn’t stand it, I’d get it down from its hiding place, run my fingers across it, close my eyes, find you there. After you found me, still did it, more often than before.”

A drop of wet marred the month-end sales report.

“Didn’t treat you like I should’ve all these years, never meant to make you feel second best, ‘cause you’re not.  You’re always on my mind, Jack. 

“Never took the time to say things I should’ve, like how happy I am when I ‘m with you, that you and me... that I got…  Never been much for words, don’t know where all this is comin’ from…”  The tone of voice changed. “Yes, I do.”

Jack lifted the shiny object from its home, and held it gently in his hands, afraid it would break if he grasped it too hard.  Two drops of wet landed on the slick surface, trickled down onto the palm of his left hand.   

“You were right what you said in that letter, been locked up tight by the past, lettin’ it tell me what to do.  Sometimes easier that way, not havin’ to think, but know now I was wrong.  Didn’t hold onta you when I should’ve back then, ain’t gonna make the same mistake now.  Hope your love hasn’t died, mine hasn’t.  Give me another chance. Please.  Know I don’t deserve it, but if you would, if you do, I won’t let you go again, Jack, I swear.”  Even though he was not the swearing kind, and Jack had never asked him to swear to anything.

The hand put down a wrinkled rectangular piece of paper on top of the other papers on the desk, and pushed it towards him.  Trailways Bus Line.  Riverton to Childress via Denver.  $84.26.  One way.  No return. 

Jack’s heart pounded so hard he thought it could be heard down the hall, in fact he hoped it would be, ‘specially in the office of a certain someone.  Pounded from hearing him say the words he’d wanted to say himself for so many years, but never had the courage.

He finally looked up into care-worn loving dark brown eyes, hardly noticing the hat held by the brim in the fingers of both hands, or the body nervously shuffling from one leg to the other. 

“That’s the most you’ve said to me in ages.”

“That’s more’n I’ve said to you ever.”  Ennis looked down at his hat.  “Should’ve said it before, and then some.”

“Time wasn’t right, ‘til now.”  Jack paused and smiled.  “Looks like you’ll need a lift wherever you’re goin’.” He looked Ennis in the eyes.  “Where are you going?”

Ennis looked right back into Jack’s. “With you. Where’re you going?”

“Home, my former home that is, to finish packing.  Wasn’t sure after that, just away from here. Tonight.”

“Mind if I hitch a ride?”

“No, don’t mind, want that, and want you, always have, but I can’t do all the driving any more, you gotta do your share.”

“Can do that, gonna need some help, though, ain't had much experience drivin' long distances.”

Jack wiped his face with both sleeves of his shirt, stood up, took a last look at the papers on this desk, shrugged his shoulders, and walked over to get his hat from the horseshoe hook on the wall.  On his way back towards the door, he picked up the ‘Dayton’s’ box, replaced his harmonica in it along with Ennis’ one-way ticket. Closing the lid, he offered the box to Ennis.  “Here, keep these safe for us.”  A statement, a question, both. 

Ennis took the offering, letting his fingers linger around Jack’s as he did.  Holding on tight to their box, he reached his free hand around Jack’s neck and pulled him close for a kiss. 

“You bet.”

*******************

No Time, The Guess Who

You Were Always on my Mind, Willie Nelson


Cwby30, I was going to take the text out of the quotes, but I wanted to see the words again.  Brilliant one-shot, Babe, or is it?  I would love to read more.  I was captivated, hung on every word.  I can just imagine Ennis doing the right thing after reading that Jack was finished with him, the relationship, everything.  Poor Ennis more than likely had to fight to keep his sanity, and keep his lunch when he read that Jack was quitting him.  I hope I'm making sense, cwby30.  What I really want to say is that you have posted a very thoughtful, moving, elegantly written piece, and I enjoyed reading every word.  You have made my night!  :)
Title: Re: Boxed In
Post by: cwby30 on July 02, 2008, 06:51:05 pm
Cwby30, I was going to take the text out of the quotes, but I wanted to see the words again.  Brilliant one-shot, Babe, or is it?  I would love to read more.  I was captivated, hung on every word.  I can just imagine Ennis doing the right thing after reading that Jack was finished with him, the relationship, everything.  Poor Ennis more than likely had to fight to keep his sanity, and keep his lunch when he read that Jack was quitting him.  I hope I'm making sense, cwby30.  What I really want to say is that you have posted a very thoughtful, moving, elegantly written piece, and I enjoyed reading every word.  You have made my night!  :)

Afternoon.

Well, for now it'll stay a 'one-shot'.  Still have to finish "Circle JE Ranch" and "The Christmas Present", and have sketched out two more homecoming installments [in different places] of "Homecoming", and have to write "Scared 3".  Phew!! 

Appreciate all the kind words about the story; glad you didn't mind that I broke the 'three paragraph' rule yet again.  I appreciate having this place to post these stories, too.  This one just came to me as I was driving into the office listening to the radio, and had to put it down immediately!  Also posted on my LJ for 'friends', but not to the 'public' in general on LJ.

Thanks again. 
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on July 03, 2008, 06:39:02 pm
Boy howdy, I love me some cwby30! Yer 'one shots' are pure heaven, I tell you.
Cwby30, tell a little something about you. When did you get into "Brokeback Mountain"? I really admire your burning passion for the fellas, three years later.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 05, 2008, 04:02:54 pm
Boy howdy, I love me some cwby30! Yer 'one shots' are pure heaven, I tell you.
Cwby30, tell a little something about you. When did you get into "Brokeback Mountain"? I really admire your burning passion for the fellas, three years later.

I admire his passion, which I share.  I'll have the latest installment of Right posted in a few days. 
Title: The 4th
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 05, 2008, 08:36:10 pm
Ennis sat down to a dinner of baked beans, barbequed chicken and potato salad.  His neighbor, Franklyn Keyes, brought the “care package” over to him a few hours ago.  Ennis accepted the platter of food with a quiet smile and a grateful heart.  It was his first 4th of July alone since he divorced, and Ennis couldn’t keep ahead of the loneliness.  Franklyn invited him to drive into town with his family to see a fireworks show, but Ennis politely turned him down.  He didn’t feel up to it.

Ennis’ mind drifted back to that 4th of July when the girl’s were mere babies.  He twitched a bit as he remembered the bewilderment in Alma’s eyes after he kicked in the face of that slop mouthed biker.  Alma couldn’t begin to understand his motivation, but there was no need to dwell on it.  Ennis bit into a savory chicken leg and resigned himself to an evening alone. 

Along about 9:00pm there was a knock at the trailer door.  Ennis had fallen asleep after his meal and checked his battery powered clock for the time.  He certainly wasn’t expecting anyone, and couldn’t image who would come calling.  His girls were certainly at some park holding a barbeque with Alma and Monroe.  After all, he was invited to the park but didn’t want to go and be a sad daddy for his girls.  And what about Jack?  Ennis couldn’t bear to think about Jack.   He walked the few feet to his door and hesitated.  He couldn’t image a process server working on Independence Day, so he opened the door.  “Hey, Cowboy, ya hungry?”  Jack stood on the stoop of Ennis’ trailer wearing a smile and carrying an enormous picnic basket.  Ennis couldn’t say a word.  The shock and the dizzying joy rendered him speechless.  He couldn’t do anything but move aside and let Jack enter, no questions asked.  The hugs would come later.
Title: Wrong!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 08, 2008, 09:17:15 pm
“Okay, now, rub his back!”  Ennis did what he was told and smoothed a steady hand up and down Jack’s rigid spine.  Jack was trembling and his breath was labored.  Ennis clenched his teeth, noticed the veins throbbing along his friend's temple.  Ennis was afraid for Jack, and ashamed for the both of them.   “Now, Del Mar, kiss him on the mouth!”  Ennis tensed, but he did what he was told.  Jack accepted the kiss with closed eyes.  He whimpered as he tasted Ennis’ cold mouth.  Ennis didn’t feel good.  How could he?  A proud man like Ennis Del Mar would whither up and die under such humiliation, or he would blow his stack. 

Aguirre smirked down at the two young men, a 30-30 pointed right at them.  He arrived in camp just as Ennis and Jack were cooking supper and sharing a kiss.  Aguirre walked right up to them and told them what was on his mind.  He talked about watching them make love for days, and how he wanted a private performance.  Jack told Aguirre to go to hell, but Ennis calmed him with a hand to his shoulder, especially when the 30-30 came into view.  Aguirre knew just how he wanted it, and Ennis and Jack felt they had no choice but to oblige.  Jack thought about a sweet revenge against his employer as he returned Ennis’ kiss.  Ennis buried a murderous rage against his lover’s mouth.  There would be time for dealing with Aguirre later.

“Now move on down, between his legs,” Aguirre barked.  Ennis didn’t know how he would endure it!  How could he behave like a queer in front of his boss?  Ennis looked up into the barrel of Aguirre’s shotgun, now aimed at Jack’s sweaty forehead and moved down between his thighs.  “Now unzip him, and make it good!  Do it like you mean it!”  Aguirre licked his chops in a lewd gesture that made Ennis want to vomit.  But in the next moment, Ennis woke as he fell from his small bed.  He trembled as he found himself twisted in his wet sheets.  He sighed audibly as he realized that it was all a terrible nightmare.  But something was wrong.   Ennis was sporting a case of morning wood stronger than anything he experienced when he dreamed about being alone with Jack.  But Ennis decided to let it go.  After all, it was only a dream.
Title: Unwelcome
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 11, 2008, 01:09:17 am
Ennis rode his mare into camp, and expected to see Jack sitting on a log, asking about his supper.  But that Friday evening Jack was nowhere to be found.  It was just as well.  Ennis was late getting back to camp after collecting the week’s supplies from the Basque.  He figured he had a few minutes to put something on for Jack before he rode into camp, hungry as hell. 

Ennis unpacked cans of Bettermost beans, a foot long salami, cans of pears, a bag of flour and a few cans of tuna.  It was a strange mix of vittles, but Ennis thought he could use some of it to make a decent supper.  He had a few strings of dried elk in a pan, and reasoned that a can of beans and a few pears would make a hearty dinner.  Ennis placed the supplies on the ground, but first he noticed a small package at the bottom of the burlap sack.  He pulled it out, and read Jack’s name on the front.  Ennis shook his head.  Another care package from Mrs. Twist?  He remembered the last time Jack’s ma sent them something special.  He hoped it was a batch of chocolate chip cookies or a few steaks.  Ennis didn’t have long to find out, as Jack rode up just as Ennis was inspecting the package.

“What ya got there, friend?” Jack asked as he dismounted, tied up his horse, and joined Ennis at the fire.  Ennis handed Jack the package and watched as he ripped it open.  “Looks like it came from my ma,” Jack stated, excitedly.  He opened a cardboard box and frowned at the contents.  Ennis was almost frightened as he saw Jack’s countenance darken.  He walked over as Jack turned the box over and allowed the contents to fall to the cold ground.  Ennis looked down and saw a dozen or so girly magazines littering the camp.  Both men were speechless.  Ennis picked up one of the skin rags, opened it and jumped.  Ennis had never before seen such raunchy, hard core smut.  Jack stood, motionless, as he considered his father, and how he always outdid himself in the sleaze department.  “My dad sent me these,” Jack whispered through clenched teeth.  “Now you know just what kind of bastard raised me.”  Ennis shrugged and collected the skin rags from the ground.  Jack watched in silence as his lover gathered them into a stack and placed a large boulder over them to keep them from blowing away in the wind.  “Yeah, maybe he wants to make you a real man,” Ennis offered as he joined Jack by the fire.  Jack’s mouth disappeared into a cruel slit.  He looked at the smut and had an idea.  “Listen, let’s eat supper and then we can see how high the fire will go.” Jack grabbed one of the magazines and threw it into the flames.  “Or do you want to use them for something else tonight?”  “We don’t need them,” was Ennis’ answer.  Jack smiled at that. 
Title: Room for One more
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 13, 2008, 12:46:21 am
Jack lay on a hammock in his backyard and nursed a can of Miller Beer.  He wasn’t at all happy with his life in Childress, but he had to admit to a fondness for the great expanse of a Texas night dotted with twinkling stars.

“Can I climb in with you dad?”  Little Bobby stood beside the hammock and almost scared Jack out of his wits.  He jumped a bit at the sound of his child’s voice, and quickly dropped the beer can to the ground, out of sight.  “C’mon in son,” Jack whispered as he made a bit of room for the small boy.  Bobby snuggled in close to his pa and looked up at the night sky.

The July night was muggy, but Jack didn’t mind the heat of the Texas atmosphere or of his son’s small body.  He attempted to move the hammock back and forth, in hopes of rocking his son to sleep.  Jack was ashamed of himself, but he instantly wondered what it would feel like to hold Ennis close in a hammock.  The thought was shameful, and he hated himself.  God help him, but Ennis was never far from his mind.  Jack made every effort to erase Ennis Del Mar’s face from his thoughts but it was futile.   In his mind’s eye he made room for the 3 of them on the hammock.  “Welcome in, Friend,” Jack whispered when he saw that Bobby was asleep.  “There is always room for one more.”
Title: The Embrace
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 16, 2008, 02:14:04 am
Jack never considered himself a worldly, sophisticated man, but since his move to Childress, he did endeavor to keep abreast of current events and broaden his horizons.  Jack couldn’t think of a better way to stay on top of the news and trends than to read.   He had Lureen subscribe to Reader’s Digest, National Geographic, Time, Newsweek and Look Magazines.  Jack really liked the Readers Digest and read it every month from cover to cover.

The July issue of Reader’s Digest featured an article about the healing powers of touch.  The author suggested that hugging a loved one, cuddling up and even kissing can lower a person’s stress levels, blood pressure, and help ward off maladies like heart disease, ulcers, diabetes.  Jack knew that he wasn’t getting enough bodily contact from his family.  Bobby didn’t like to be cuddled, and Lureen never came near him.  Jack sighed and thought a month ahead to his meeting out by the Tetons with Ennis Del Mar.  He knew he would get what he needed very soon.

August, and the weather up by the big mountain range was unseasonably chilly.  Jack knew to bring warm blankets, and he even brought a few packets of instant hot cocoa mix to drink with his love in front of a roaring fire.  And seated before the fire one cool evening, Jack sipped at his hot chocolate and looked over at his lover.  He melted when he beheld the sharp, patrician profile that lifted Ennis higher in his sights than any other person on the planet.  Ahhh but he was a beautiful man!  Jack needed to be close.  He wanted to cuddle with his lover.  Ennis, sensing the need in Jack, placed his cup on the ground and reached for him.  Jack entered his arms without a word, but a sigh did escape his lips when Ennis held him gently, lovingly.  “I can do this all night, Friend,” Jack whispered as he swayed, back and forth in Ennis’ strong arms.  “I think that would be fine,” Ennis whispered in Jack ear.  "That would be fine."
Title: Right 91
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 22, 2008, 12:19:19 am
Jack and Ennis pushed back from the table after wolfing down 3 pieces of fried chicken each.  Little Stanley was still working on his second chicken leg.  Lessie practically glowed when she saw her guys devouring her fried bird, collard greens, hot water corn bread and raspberry iced tea.  Few things in life gave her as much pleasure as being complimented on her cooking.  “This is real good, ma,” Stanley mumbled between bites.  “Sure is, Les,” Ennis stated as a tiny burp escaped his lips.  “Best fried chicken I ever ate,” Jack announced, and he meant every word.  Lessie smiled all around and reached for another chicken wing.  She was well aware that she didn’t need another piece of chicken, but a widow woman had to have some kind of pleasure in life.  “Help yourselves, gentlemen,” Lessie enthused.  “There is plenty of food on the stove if you need 3rds!”  Jack nodded, rubbed his swollen belly and politely declined.  “We better go check the shed out back,” Jack said, rubbing his eyes.  “Yeah, Ennis began, “We can get a head start on tomorrow, and work off dinner, to boot!”  Ennis rose from the kitchen table and motioned for Jack to follow him out back.  Lessie and Stanley were silent as they watched Ennis and Jack head for the kitchen door, and move out to the back of the property.  Lessie grinned at her son and turned back to her chicken wing.  She thanked the Lord for sending Jack and Ennis to her.  They turned out to be hard working, personable, loyal, and not that it mattered in the least, but they were very easy on the eyes.

Jack swept up around the shed while Ennis pulled weeds in Lessie’s garden.  “Looks like we can plant the tomatoes tomorrow,” Ennis yelled over at Jack.  Jack continued his sweeping, but found it difficult to concentrate on the task at hand.  He looked over to where Ennis was bent over the earth – his firm buttocks straining the fabric of his jeans.  Jack wiped the sweat from his brow.  He didn’t want to become aroused until much later that night, but the sight of Ennis’ sweet butt was just too much.  Jack dropped his broom and walked over to where his lover was busy pulling weeds.  Jack lowered himself to the ground and molded his strong body over Ennis’.  Ennis didn’t know what to say or do.  He didn’t expect the “attack,” and was nervous that they would be discovered in such a way.  “Jack, what you doin?  Are ya crazy?”  Ennis turned his head and beheld Jack’s face: a face heavy with lust.  “I’m crazy about you!” Jack mouthed, huskily.  “Get up off me, Jack!” Ennis almost shouted, nervous now.

“Ahem!!!???”

Ennis and Jack froze as they heard the sound.  They were still crouched, spooned on the ground as Lessie walked up behind them.  She was standing tall over them, both hands on her ample hips.  No one spoke.  Jack looked up at his kind employer and was more forlorn than embarrassed.  He was certain that their time with Mrs. Boykin and little Stanley had come to an end.  Ennis was thinking the same thing.  Looking at Lessie standing there, it was near impossible to discern her thoughts, but a good Christian woman would never approve.  Ennis wondered how long she would stand there, and mentally calculated the money they were able to save in the few weeks they worked for Lessie.  It was a tidy sum, they enjoyed every moment earning it, and now they would be forced to move on.  Ennis looked around at the kitchen door and imagined little Stanley sitting at the table, chewing on his chicken leg.  He thought back to the time when he met Stanley’s grandfather:

“Wait a minute, young man!”  Ennis reached the truck first and had his hand on the door, poised to open it up.  Jack looked back at the Boykin house where an elderly gentleman stood at the door.  He had to be Stanley’s grandfather, as Stanley looked a lot like him.  Jack glanced at Ennis and they both walked over to the elderly gentleman.  He was perhaps the handsomest old coot in 3 states, with his black hair slicked back, a fashionable white streak standing out against the silken black.  His face was lined, but full of compassion.  He wore overalls and was wiping his hands on a towel.  “Yes, sir?” Jack offered, shyly.  “What can we do for you?”  “Where you headed?” Was the old man’s reply.  Ennis walked up the steps to the house and faced the kindly old gentleman.  “We thought we would head out of State, up along the Utah border for awhile, see if we can find work.”  The old man nodded.  “Well, good for you.  But if you want to hang around for the night, I have a few chores that I sure could use help with.  I’m getting too old to take care of the place by myself.  And with the children visiting, my wife is all tied up."  “Yeah, she needs to be tied up,” Ennis thought, bitterly.  “Talk it over with your friend.  You guys can make a few dollars, and in the morning, you can be on your way.”  Ennis nodded, turned and walked down the few steps to face Jack.  He told his lover about Old Man Boykins' offer.  Jack told him that they shouldn’t turn down work.  And besides, he was anxious to see about little Stanley.  It was settled.  They walked up to Mr. Boykin, shook his hand and followed him into the house.
Title: Glow
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 22, 2008, 12:50:45 am
“Wow, Jack, you look great!  You really benefited from a week off.  I don’t think I’ve ever seen you looking so…well!”  Jack walked over to the coffee machine near the reception desk at Newsome Motors.  Robert Keyes was sipping at a steaming mug of java while Jack poured himself a cup.  He was smiling at Jack and nodding.  “You always look good, mind you, but something is definitely different.  Jack listened patiently to Robert but said nothing.  Robert Keyes was on the same level as himself, perhaps a rung or 2 higher at the dealership, so he knew that the young man was not sucking up.  “You have so much going for you, Jack,” Robert announced between sips.  “You’re very lucky.”

Jack nodded in Robert’s direction, and left for his office without saying a word to the young man.  He hated to be rude, but if he didn’t leave, he would be forced to shout his happiness from the rooftop.  The week he spent with Ennis Del Mar was the best in 10 years, and the afterglow from the euphoric week couldn’t help but radiate from his every pore. 

Jack closed his office door and opened his desk.  He reached for a mirror and noticed that he was absolutely glowing from within.  And he deserved it.  The months leading up to his trip with Ennis had been hell on Earth.  He missed Ennis so much and was so lonely for him that he was making other people suffer.  He was almost impossible to live with.  Lureen threatened to drive him to Wyoming herself if he didn’t straighten up.  And straighten up, he did.  As the weeks turned into days before the trip, Jack’s attitude thawed.  He was actually happy!  Jack glanced in the mirror and smoothed his hair just as Ennis had done a few days ago.  He puckered his lips and imagined the endless kisses, and the nights when Ennis rocked him to sleep.  “Jack!”  The voice belonged to his father-in-law, and he didn’t sound happy.  Jack sighed and shrugged.  Back to the real world.  He wondered just how long before his newfound inner light was extinguished by his real life.  As Jack headed out to greet Mr. Newsome, he couldn’t help but think ahead to August.
Title: An Evening Alone (A BBM Slice of Life)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 24, 2008, 12:25:07 am
Ennis sat on a caramel colored leather couch and watched as Jack placed silverware on the dining room table.  "Why so formal?" Ennis asked, a smile in his voice.  "Just the two of us for dinner tonight."  Jack shook his head and didn't answer.  He walked over to the china cabinet and removed a set of long stemmed wine glasses.  "And we're having wine for dinner?  I can do good with iced tea."  Ennis was laughing now.  Jack offered a half smile, but he didn't utter a word.  Ennis didn't know why his husband was being so coy.  What did Jack Twist-Del Mar have planned?

Baby Indigo was spending the weekend with Emma and Jenny.  Jenny came by to collect her late last night, and while Ennis and Jack missed their daughter no end, it was certainly good to spend some time alone together.  Ennis rose from the couch and joined Jack in the dining room.  He embraced him from behind in a move that always caused Jack's heart to leap, stop, shake!  Jack loved the way Ennis folded him in tender hug.  He stopped what he was doing and ran a finger along Ennis' bare forearms.  "Nothing is too good for you -- for us!"  Jack whispered the words to his love as he cuddled into his strong arms.  For Jack it didn't get any better - it couldn't.  Ennis was in a heaven all Jack's making.  He kissed the back of his husband's neck.  "What's for dinner?"

But dinner had to wait.  The fine china and silverwave, and the long stemmed glasses sat on the dining room table for hours on end.  The steaks were probably shoe leather tough and the baked potatoes were certainly soft and doughy.  The salad had to be wet and wilted.  But neither man cared.  The bed was soft and warm.  The love was freely given and greedily accepted.  It was a rare treat to have an evening alone.  "So what do you want to do tonight?"  Jack whispered, as he tenderly kissed his husband on the mouth.  "I just want to be here with you.  Just be with me, Jack."  "Forever and always," Jack spoke into Ennis' hair.  He snuggled against his lover, and dinner the farthest thing from his mind.
Title: Watched
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 24, 2008, 09:20:00 pm
Aguirre was watching his camp tender and herder from the cover of trees.  He had his binoculars strung on a thick cord around his fat neck, and he just lowered them to suck his teeth and blow air from his lungs.  Aguirre whistled at what he just saw.  Ennis and Jack carried on.  They had no idea they were being observed.

Joe Aguirre was a man who felt he had a right to check up on the hired help.  He liked to think that he watched Twist and Del Mar in their “activity” because he had a right to know what was going on.  But three days a week, Aguirre rode over to camp, hid out and watched as Ennis and Jack worked, ate, and eventually loved.  Joe wouldn’t dwell on the fact that he knew when to ride up: he learned from experience that Ennis and Jack felt a bit randy come twilight.  Aguirre watched their shadows against the approaching darkness, as they did an alluring dance among the dying embers of the supper fire.

Aguirre whistled again when he saw Jack break a giant cookie in half and place it in Del Mar’s open mouth.  “Where did those boys get cookies from,” Aguirre thought, more amused than angry.  He made a mental note to have a conversation about provisions with The Basque.  Cookies, especially what looked like giant chocolate chip cookies, were not standard company issue.  Could be, Aguirre conceded, that Jack’s Ma sent them up.  But luxuries such as sweets can make a worker lazy.  “Just look at em,” Aguirre spoke under his breath!  But when Jack pulled Ennis close and looked into his eyes with what only could be described as love, Aguirre began to panic.  He had second thoughts about watching.  He had no right to observe such an authentic, tender moment between lovers.  Joe Aguirre lowered his head and fought to keep down the lump that was forming in his throat.  He removed his binoculars and turned to ride back to his trailer.  He would never intrude on them again.
Title: Pain
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 31, 2008, 12:11:06 am
Ennis was sick to his stomach.  He must have eaten something that disagreed with him – must have.  Last night, on the way home from work, Ennis wanted to treat himself to a dinner out for a change.  He walked along Riverton’s streets, all hazy with the August sun hanging low over the horizon.  The streets were all but deserted, which was normal for that time of the afternoon.  “The Wrangler Steakhouse" was just up ahead.  Ennis fancied a thick, juicy steak.

Ennis ordered the T-bone special with a side of fries and a salad.  The food was good, and he didn’t even feel bad about the expense.  Steve was generous with the hands that week, and gave each of them a well deserved bonus.  $4.95 for a steak dinner.  Not bad.  Ennis left a 50 cent tip and was on his way.

Along about 10p.m. his stomach began to rumble.  He couldn’t remember feeling that bad since the time he ate some elk jerky up on Brokeback that had gone putrid.  Jack tried to pry the rancid meat from his grasp, but Ennis had to be a show-off.  He wanted Jack to see that he could eat spoiled meat and still come out on top.  Truth was, Jack had to rub his stomach and his back for hours once the intestinal gas threatened to blow him to the next County.  He felt that way now.  Only, Jack wasn’t around to rub his belly or his back.  That Jack Twist!  Ennis had to smile when he thought about Jack's sweet, gentle ways.  He always had a knack for making Ennis feel better.  “I need ya, Rodeo!” Ennis seethed as the gas expelled.  “Better yet, you don’t need to smell this!”  Ennis laughed in spite of the pain, and reached for the Pepto Bismol.


Title: Re: Pain
Post by: Toycoon on August 02, 2008, 09:22:20 pm
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“I need ya, Rodeo!” Ennis seethed as the gas expelled.  “Better yet, you don’t need to smell this!” 

You are too funny, Miss Littlewing!
Title: Re: Pain
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 03, 2008, 12:46:49 am
You are too funny, Miss Littlewing!

Toy, if this put a smile on your face, I am more than satisfied.  Good to  see you, Love!  :)
Title: The Gazebo
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 06, 2008, 11:57:12 pm
Jack was driving home from work and decided to change his route.  He read an article in the Reader’s Digest that suggested driving a different course every day to arrive at the same destination.  According to the article, mixing it up, finding different ways to go home, keeps the mind sharp.  Jack drove toward Martin Lyons Park, even though it was out of the way.  But the route was far more scenic, and he was in no rush to get home.  Jack pulled up along the south side of the park and decided to stop awhile.

It was an astonishingly beautiful evening.  May flowers were blooming, and a gentle breeze was blowing, floating scents of grass, rose, even lavender all around Jack as he walked toward the gazebo smack dab in the center of the park.  The gazebo was in ill repair, but Jack had a fondness for it.  He liked to walk there on a Sunday afternoon, alone, and wander around the old structure.  He never had the pleasure of attending any of the concerts that were once held there; he was just a child living on a decrepit ranch in Lightning Flat when bands played sets at Martin Lyons Park’s gazebo.

Jack stood along the north side of the structure and ran his hand along a Doric column.  Lureen told him that the gazebo was more than 100 years old, and was once a favorite spot for families to have Sunday picnics.  Jack didn’t exactly know what men wore at the beginning of the 20th century, but he had a feeling that on Sundays they donned straw hats, white linen suits, and in this part of the country, black bow ties.  Jack closed his eyes and imaged a sandy haired male of about 25, wearing a red and white striped straw hat with a picnic basket in one hand and a black cane in the other.  He was wearing a beige suit and walked beside a man who sported a white suit, a black bow tie and was hatless.  Jack kept his eyes closed as the image became shockingly real.  He found himself falling to the ground as he “saw” the 2 young men claim a spot for their picnic.  “It was not a time for us,” Jack whispered, out loud.  He opened his eyes, and just like that, the 2 men were gone.  “There may never be a time or place for us, Ennis,” Jack grumbled, miserable.  But he had the gazebo, and more than anyone else in the world, Jack could dream.
Title: Gross!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 08, 2008, 01:51:40 am
Ennis patted Jack’s hand as he drove the 3 of them to the Dairy Queen for an after dinner treat.  Jack was content to sit next to his handsome husband with a hand perched on his knee.  Baby Indigo, now almost 3 years old, sat in her car seat in the back of the Dodge. 

Jack looked back at his daughter and shot her a wink.  “What do you want to eat at the Dairy Queen, baby,” Jack asked as Indigo hummed a happy tune.  Indigo tried to hide a mischievous gleam in her eyes, but Jack knew when his daughter was up to no good. 

“I want some pee pee,” Indigo announced, her arms flung wide.  Ennis flinched, and Jack stifled a snicker.  “I want some pee pee and some buggers!”  “You want some warm pee or some cold pee,” Jack asked her, laughing now.  “Jack, don’t encourage her like that,” the ever serious Ennis scolded.  But Ennis had to admit, Indigo’s request was pretty funny.  “Jack, I’m trying to raise her to be a lady.  Help me out here!”  Jack placed his hand over his mouth to contain the giggles.  He looked back at his daughter one more time and whispered, “We’ll talk later!”
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on August 10, 2008, 11:46:56 pm
Littlewing1957, you are so silly. Pee pee and boogers! Gross :laugh:
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 11, 2008, 12:16:16 am
Littlewing1957, you are so silly. Pee pee and boogers! Gross :laugh:

Hey, Babe!  Made you smile?  I hope so!  :)
Title: Sexy
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 11, 2008, 01:11:52 am
Jack entered the tent in a royal snit.  How dare Ennis make fun of him like that?  All he did was suggest that he find himself somewhere else to live, since the yokels in his town were speaking behind his back.  Ennis was often just too much for Jack.  He never knew what to expect from his lover.  Jack was getting tired of walking on eggshells around Ennis.  He loved him!  God, how he loved him, but Ennis’ insecurities and explosive temper were wearing him out!

Jack was lying still wearing only his underwear and socks.  His mind wandered back to the night before when the supper fire was extinguished and Ennis was feeling mellow from the barbequed steaks and whiskey.  Jack squirmed with desire as he remembered Ennis’ hands trailing circles on his swollen belly.  Jack was almost ashamed to meet Ennis the way he looked.  He tried to hide his pot belly, but there was no hiding it.  But when Ennis planted tender smooches all over his middle, and whispered, “I like it, Jack…very sexy,” Jack thought he would climax just from Ennis’ throaty words.  Every syllable was like one long caress - felt like love.  “I was afraid you would laugh at me, all fat like this, friend,” Jack lamented as Ennis feasted his eyes.  “Laugh at you, Rodeo,” Ennis asked, incredulous.  “You should know that I’ll like you no matter what.  You’re the same man to me.”  Jack smiled at the reassurance, and removed his shorts as Ennis moved south.

They didn’t seem very happy now.  Jack turned onto to his side and flinched a little when Ennis moved the tent flap open.  Ennis moved silently toward his lover, spooned him and blew on the back of Jack’s neck.  Jack was still angry, but was powerless to stop him.  Truth be told, Jack didn’t want to be angry with Ennis, but he didn’t want to be a pushover, either.  Let Ennis work for his forgiveness.  Jack was rigid as Ennis played with his backside.  He was weakening all along, and when Ennis squeezed his belly, all was forgiven.  “Still sexy there, Bud!” Ennis whispered against Jack’s shoulder.  “Let me kiss your belly.  I love it!”  Jack was a goner.  He turned toward his lover and pulled him into a steamy kiss.
Title: Time to Go?
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 12, 2008, 01:39:54 am
“Jack -- my God, Rodeo--are you crying?” Jack was standing with his back to Ennis and his shoulders were heaving.  He began to wipe the tears from his eyes and cheeks before turning to face his lover.  Ennis almost recoiled in terror when he saw Jack’s weak, red and swollen eyes.  In 17 years Ennis couldn’t remember seeing Jack with weak eyes.

“Pardon me, friend, but you caught me.  I wanted to have a few minutes to myself before we parted ways, and…well…I couldn’t help myself.  I never wanted you to see me cry, Cowboy.”  Jack’s shoulders looked heavy, and he  appeared to be a defeated man.  Ennis was afraid.  He couldn’t help but wonder why Jack was so shaken up about going their separate ways.  Granted, he always seemed very sad when the time came to part, but he never actually shed tears.  Something was terribly wrong, and Ennis wanted to know about it.  He wanted to fix things, if he could.  Ennis walked over to Jack and embraced him.  Jack returned the embrace and allowed his lover to pull him onto the bed.  He knew that this time there would be no fooling around on Don Wroe’s king sized bed.  It was time to talk. 

Ennis place a protective arm over Jack's shoulder.  “You don’t want to go back, do you?” Ennis asked his lover with such tenderness and sincerity that Jack almost started bawling anew.  “What’s going on, Jack?  What is so unbearable?  You have a beautiful wife, a cute little son, a good job and a nice house.  What more could you want?”  Jack fought to keep the tears at bay.  He looked straight into Ennis’ eyes.  He told him all about his sham of a marriage and how his father in law treated him like dirt.  He was lonely as hell in Childress, and didn’t think he could stand another moment.  Ennis listened to Jack’s complaints in silence.  His heart almost broke in two.  He couldn’t bear the thought of his man being so unhappy.  “Let me help, Jack,” Ennis offered.  “Let me see what I can do.”  Jack smiled and reached out for his lover.  They decided to call it a night, and in the morning, if they so desired, they might hit the road for points unknown.
Title: After the Fight
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 14, 2008, 11:30:51 pm
Ennis drove off, but stopped the truck once he lost sight of Jack in his rear view mirror.  He climbed out of the vehicle and hobbled over and collapsed, again, against a massive tree.  The tears started just minutes ago once Jack exclaimed, “I wish I knew how to quit you,” but were quenched once Jack forced himself on him: embracing, cooing, comforting, reassuring.  But right now as he held his belly to prevent the dry heaves, the tears started anew; the release of tension proving a huge relief.

Ennis knew for sure that he couldn’t drive while the tears fell, and by the time they subsided, he was exhausted!  Ennis Del Mar wept tears of remorse, but he also tasted salty, bitter tears of anger and fear.  Once he felt a bit more like himself, Ennis shook the moisture from his eyes and face, returned to his truck and slid behind the driver’s seat and cradled his head in his arms on the steering wheel. The horses were as silent and as somber as he.  Ennis felt awful!  His eyes were puffy, red and itchy.  His heart felt like it had ceased to beat.  If only he could stay quiet and rest a bit longer…

Ennis considered himself a fool.  What was he thinking when he told Jack that he was screwing Cassie?  He should have known that the idea of him being with someone else – even a woman – would not sit well with Jack.  “She’s history, Bud,” Ennis slurred out loud.  And he meant it!  He tried hard not to relive the fight he had just such a short time ago, but the thought of Jack’s face, so plaintiff and thoughtful as he drove away, made his blood boil and run cold at the same time.  “You won’t leave me, Jack,” Ennis seethed as he started the truck.  “I’ll be damned if you do!”
Title: Sweets for the Sweet
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 15, 2008, 12:20:44 am
Hiking up the mountain was a sexy adventure!  Swimming in a frigid stream turned them on.  The very act of chopping wood for the supper fire made them hot, and preparing dinner made their natures rise.  The first day of the ‘fishing trip” was a carnal blast!

After supper Jack walked into the tent and fetched what looked like a baker’s box.  Ennis watched with anticipation as Jack removed what was certainly a crème pie.  Ennis’ mouth began to water, as he always had a sweet tooth.  “What ya got there, Bud,” Ennis asked, his eyes boring into the dessert.  “Just a banana crème pie,” Jack stated, as he dipped his finger into the frothy topping.  Ennis’ breath caught as Jack licked the bubbly meringue from his fingers.  “Give me some, please, Rodeo,” Ennis pleaded.

Jack chuckled and removed some of the topping with a trembling hand.  He inched the meringue into Ennis mouth and blinked as Del Mar greedily sucked the sweet from his fingers, one-by-one.  After Ennis' tantalizing display, both men were squirming and couldn’t wait to taste some more.  They rose from the ground, ran into the tent, but Jack forgot something.  “Go get the pie, Rodeo,” Ennis whispered as he undressed.  Jack snapped his fingers and ran outside to fetch the dessert.  Sweets on top of sweets that night!


Title: Keeping up Appearances?
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 16, 2008, 12:50:28 am
Ennis placed his creel case on the kitchen table and his duffle bag on the floor.  His girls were asleep in their little beds, but Alma was seated at the kitchen table smoking a sig.  Her head was hanging down a bit and Ennis, after kissing her absently, tried to avoid eye contact.

“So what did he look like this time,” Alma asked, a bit caustically.  Ennis was not certain he heard correctly.  “What did who look like,” he countered.  “Oh come on, Ennis,” Alma shot back, “You know who I mean.  What did Jack Twist look like?”  Ennis couldn’t answer.  He was alarmed that Alma wanted to know anything at all about Jack.  She avoided speaking about Jack at all times, now she wanted to know what he was wearing?  “He still a fancy man?  He still dresses up in nice hats and boots?”  Alma’s question was laced with venom and what seemed like a tiny dose of pain.  Ennis sat down beside her and took out a smoke from his shirt pocket.  Alma pulled her lighter from the pocket of her house dress and lit the cig for her husband.  Ennis took a quick, calming drag.  He was a bundle of nerves.

“Well, he looked okay, I guess,” Ennis ventured.  “I mean, I don’t rightly notice those things, Alma!”  Alma took a drag of her own cig and nodded.  “Look, Alma,” Ennis continued,” Jack has a good job working with customers and he needs to keep his looks up.  He always seemed to care about his appearance, at least all the time that I've known him.  And his wife has cash money.  I’m sure she buys Jack a lot of fine clothes for the office.”  Alma nodded again but said nothing.  “Did he look too good to do some serious fishing,” Alma whispered as she shot a glance at Ennis’ creel case.  “I would love to put on some browns for dinner.” “Uh, Alma, I did catch some browns, but Jack and I ate them up.”  “Oh,” was her response.  “But I can go down to Monroe’s and get us a batch,” Ennis exclaimed as he rose from the table.  Alma didn’t have a chance to answer, as Ennis was out of the apartment door in a flash.  Alma waited to hear his footsteps hit the last stair before she reached for the creel case…
Title: Interest
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 19, 2008, 12:54:35 am
Ennis was seated on Don Wroe’s comfy reclining chair, and watched as Jack poked the fire.  Jack was talking about Bobby, and how he was doing better in school, and how most of the kids liked him, even though he wasn’t that good at reading and writing.  Ennis grunted in agreement whenever Jack seemed to take a breath. 

Ennis remembered Jack’s smile up on Brokeback when he told him all about his year of high school, and how he came to be up on the mountain.  “Friend, that’s more words than you spoke all week,” Jack said with a gleam in his eye.  “Hell, that’s more words than I said in a year,” Ennis answered, and it wasn’t very far from the truth.

When Jack was finished by the fireplace he walked over to his lover and sat down on the armrest of the comfy chair.  He looked down at Ennis and smiled.  Ennis rubbed Jack’s forearm and his throat tightened as he remembered the reason why we was able to open up in the first place.  How could he remain quiet and withdrawn when someone finally took an interest?  Jack was the first person to try to get to know him – to want to know him.  Neither his parents nor his siblings ever took a genuine interest in him.  Alma didn't seem to care about his hopes and dreams; she never asked.  But Jack was able to go inside him and bring his true self forth.  Ennis pulled Jack down onto his lap and cuddled him.  Jack nuzzled Ennis' neck, and for once, was silent.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on August 20, 2008, 12:35:55 am
Littlewing1957, you are so awesome!! :-* :-* :-*
Title: Bug
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 20, 2008, 01:00:11 am
When Jack finally joined Ennis at the campsite, he found his lover huddling before the fire, covered in a thick blanket.  Ennis looked up at Jack and managed a wan smile.  “What is this, Friend,” Jack spoke, concerned, as he took in Ennis’ white pallor and his red eyes.  “I’m contagious, Jack,” Ennis croaked as Jack drew close.  “Don’t get near me or you’ll catch this bug.” “Don’t get near me or you’ll catch this bug,” Jack mocked.  He sat alongside his lover and cuddled next to him.  “Listen, Ennis, I didn’t drive 14 hours to stay away from you.  Come over here and gimme those lips!  I don’t care if I catch your bug!”  Ennis shrugged and kissed his lover, but he kept his tongue to himself.

Jack led Ennis into the tent to put him to bed.  He was becoming concerned when Del Mar’s temperature started to rise, and he began to slow down.  “Look, Cowboy, you rest awhile and I’ll get dinner,” Jack told his lover as he exited the tent.  Jack raided his truck for supplies and found a bottle of Bobby’s allergy medicine.  He placed the medicine in his pocket, determined to make Ennis take a few tablespoons full.  He certainly caught a bad cold, but the allergy medicine may do him a bit of good.  Once dinner was prepared, Jack made Ennis as comfortable as he could.  He brought in a bowl of chicken soup and tried to feed his friend a spoonful.  Ennis grimaced and pushed Jack’s hand with the spoon away.  “I can feed myself,” Ennis spoke harshly.  He noticed the hurt in Jack’s eyes and was instantly ashamed of himself.  He softened.  “Why did you bring chicken soup, Jack?” Ennis asked, gently.  “You had a feeling I was gonna need some?”  Jack looked thoughtful.  He fed Ennis a spoonful of the weak liquid.  “I don’t know why I brought the soup, Friend,” Jack remarked.  “I just don’t know.”  Ennis knew.  He ate all of the soup for Jack’s sake, and allowed him to cut his meat for him.  He even took a few swigs of the allergy medicine.

When it was time for bed Jack undressed quietly.  He looked over at his friend and noticed that he was quite naked, and looked expectant.  Ennis gestured for Jack, and Jack moved close.  He noticed that Ennis’ skin no longer felt hot and clammy, and his eyes were almost back to normal.  But Ennis was still weak.  His touch felt tentative, hesitant.  “We don’t have to do anything, Cowboy.  I was just kidding earlier.”  Jack kissed Ennis tenderly on the mouth.  “You know I want your sex, but I love being with you in other ways.”  Ennis’ shoulders softened.  He smiled at his lover and gestured for him to lay beside him in the bedroll.  The rest of the night was spent cuddling, laughing and talking.  Tomorrow would be another day spent together.  Ennis just hoped Jack didn’t catch his bug.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 20, 2008, 01:01:11 am
Littlewing1957, you are so awesome!! :-* :-* :-*

Thanks, Sugar!  I feel the same about you.  I posted the story above just for you!
Title: Fit and Trim
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 21, 2008, 12:19:54 am
Ennis took Jack’s hands and twirled him around.  He wanted a good look.  Jack Twist was thin and fit!  Ennis whistled when his lover walked into Don Wroe’s cabin!  They were apart for 4 months, and in that time Jack had become buffed and coiffed!  Gone was the pot belly!  But that blasted mustache remained!

“You like?”  It was Jack.  He flexed his arm muscles and gestured toward his firm abs.  Ennis nodded his approval.  “Yeah, you look real good, bud,” Ennis commented as he looked at Jack’s mid-section.  “I like what I saw before, but this is nice, too.  What happened?”  “Oh, I just wanted to work off some of this good livin’,” Jack exclaimed as he took Ennis in his arms.  “I want to be around a long time so that I can look at your ugly mug!”  Ennis laughed at that and punched Jack lightly on the shoulder.   

While Ennis was helping Jack unload his truck, he couldn’t help but gawk at Jack’s new and improved body.  Jack was always a sweet looking man, but he was in better shape now than at any time – even up on Brokeback.  “I swear, Jack, you look 10 years younger.  I’m ashamed to be seen with you.”  Jack shook his head.  “I don’t see why, friend,” he said as he removed a bag of charcoal from the truck.  “You look mighty fine yourself—always did—always will to me.”  Ennis didn’t answer as he continued to unload the truck.  Jack Twist would always attract him like a magnet, but this was just too much.  Ennis sighed.  He couldn’t tear his eyes away from his friend.  “You’re going to be in trouble tonight, Rodeo,” Ennis spoke, huskily.  Jack nodded and smiled.  “No, you’re going to be in trouble.  Just you wait!” 


Title: Re: Scared 3
Post by: cwby30 on August 21, 2008, 01:26:07 am
Evenin'.

Well, sorry I've been away so long, have checked in occasionally and have enjoyed reading all the stories.  Without further ado, and as requested by Littlewing so long ago, here's a continuation of my drabble-story.

Thanks again.

****

The silence deafened him.  His eyes darted from the phone, to the Coca Cola bottle on the kitchen table, to the travel mug on the counter by the back door, to the calculator next to the pile of bills. Say something, anything.  He finally broke the silence.  “Get my paycheck Friday afternoon, same’s every week, can be there Saturday morning, if ya still want me.”  Exhausted by the effort, he lapsed into silence, waiting for Jack to fill the void within him. 

The silence deafened him.  He swallowed hard, his mouth dry.  His eyes darted from the scratches on the top of his desk, to the bulletin board with its memos on the latest sales figures and goals, to the Normal Rockwell calendar with its picture of a small boy snuggled under a comforter.  Ennis’s voice jarred him back to the here and now, and his offer to travel further than around the coffeepot looking for the handle jarred him into action. 

“Enn,” he spoke quietly, “every night for the past month I’ve gotten drunk as a skunk, then each morning I’ve had to smile and prop up the illusion that I had a wonderful life here in Childress with my unloving wife and distant child. Kept telling myself that everything was peachy-keen, didn’t need Ennis f***g del Mar in my life, could find someone new.” He stopped when he heard a sob come across the line, then continued on.  “It’s no use kidding myself, I’ve know it all along, you’re in my soul, my heart, my every breath.”  “Oh darlin’.”

[Three Drabbles in one, 261 words overall, Prompts: (1) Coca Cola, travel mug, calculator,  (2) bulletin board, Norman Rockwell, comforter, (3) drunk as a skunk, illusion, peachy]
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 22, 2008, 11:06:55 pm
Cwby30, it is so good to see you here!  Welcome back, I've really missed you.  Thanks so much for posting the latest chapter in your drabble.  An as always, you didn't disappoint.  Will you continue the story?  I hope so, as I'm really enjoying this, and I can't wait to see what happens next.  Thanks so much for sharing this with us!  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: cwby30 on August 23, 2008, 12:08:45 am
Will you continue the story? 

Evenin'.

Well, Yes, I plan on doing that.  I've saved several sets of prompts from the Drabblefest, and am working them in to the next 3-paragraph "game" entry.  Nice to be back, and glad you like it.

Have been reading your stories these past several weeks, and enjoying them.  You pick such perfect points in their lives, and develop the ideas so well. 

Thanks again. 
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on August 23, 2008, 08:26:28 pm
Hello Mr. cwby30 and Miss Littlewing1957. How are you guys doin'? I haven't been writing much except for bizarre interpretations of our beloved story on IMDb. You're free to join in on the inanity I've created on that message board.
Title: The Lesson
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 23, 2008, 08:53:02 pm
Ennis breezed into Bobby’s elaborately decorated nursery and walked over to his crib.  “You sure got a fine looking son here, Bud,” he whispered to Jack, the proud papa, standing on the other side of Bobby’s crib.  “Thank you kindly, friend,” Jack whispered back.  He was only too happy to show off his only child to his only true love.

Jack was alone with Bobby for the weekend while Lureen was away in Dallas on a short holiday.  She met with her sorority sisters once a year for a few days of whatever sorority sisters do when they meet up.  It was his first time alone with Bobby, and he was a bit nervous.  Ennis happened to be in town and stopped by.  Jack couldn’t believe his luck!  Ennis never seemed to travel anywhere, and how fortuitous that he should visit when Jack felt most vulnerable.  Ennis couldn’t seem to take his eyes off of little Bobby.  Jack feasted his eyes on his best friend.  He was insanely happy.

Little Bobby began to stir and Jack was nervous.  He didn’t know what to do.  But Ennis, already the father of 2 fine little girls, took over.  He gently removed the tiny child from his crib and placed him over his broad shoulders.  He tenderly patted the baby's back as Jack looked on, fascinated.  "What a strong young man you are," Ennis whispered in Bobby's ear. "I can feel your strength!"  Jack beamed with pride.  “It's kinda cool in here, Bud, Ennis exclaimed.  Get me a blanket.”  Jack did what he was told.  Ennis placed Bobby on the changing table and began to teach Jack how to properly wrap the babe in the blanket.  “You got it, now, Rodeo?’ Ennis asked Jack as he handed him his son, all toasty warm and content in a snuggly wrapped blankie.  “I think so,” Jack answered.

“You think so what?”  Lureen asked, incredulous, as she shook Jack's shoulders.  “Jack, the baby is crying and you’re asleep!”  Jack shook himself awake and cringed as Lureen walked over to the crib and tended to Bobby.  “What am I gonna do with you?” Lureen whispered, absently, as she changed Bobby’s diaper.  “How could you sleep through the racket that Bobby was making?”  Jack didn’t answer.  He had fallen asleep on a chaise next to Bobby’s crib, but didn’t hear his son crying.  It seems he was too busy learning how to tend to his son: a lesson learned only in his dreams.
 
 
 
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 23, 2008, 08:54:24 pm
Hello Mr. cwby30 and Miss Littlewing1957. How are you guys doin'? I haven't been writing much except for bizarre interpretations of our beloved story on IMDb. You're free to join in on the inanity I've created on that message board.


I've followed your comedy thread, Love, but I'm not clever enough to join in.  If I think of something silly, I'll post it there!  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 23, 2008, 09:29:46 pm
Evenin'.

Well, Yes, I plan on doing that.  I've saved several sets of prompts from the Drabblefest, and am working them in to the next 3-paragraph "game" entry.  Nice to be back, and glad you like it.

Have been reading your stories these past several weeks, and enjoying them.  You pick such perfect points in their lives, and develop the ideas so well. 

Thanks again. 

Thanks for your kind words, my friend.  Stay with us.  I look forward to reading more of your amazing tale, and I'm working on other stories, including the latest installment of Right.
Title: Sweet Dream
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 24, 2008, 09:24:48 pm
Jack was not the only dreamer.  Ennis remembered his fair share of dreams involving Jack in ways that not only drove him crazy, but provided simple pleasures.  One such dream involved Jack, himself and little Alma Jr.

The dream was vague, hazy, and Ennis was an observer in his own “play.”  He saw himself seated on the couch in his Riverton apartment over the laundromat, baby Alma Jr. resting comfortably on his lap.  Jack was standing over by the door, looking around as though he couldn’t figure out where in the hell he was.  Ennis whistled and Jack fixed his stare at his lover and his lover’s child.  Ennis held out an arm for Jack, beckoning him over.

Jack smiled warmly and made his way over to the couch.  Ennis pulled him down and placed his arm around his shoulder.  He fixed his gaze down where Alma Jr. was lying on his lap, falling asleep.  Jack reached for Ennis’ child, looked into his eyes and picked her up once Ennis nodded his encouragement.  Jack cuddled the baby girl, and smiled as she cooed and huddled in his arms.  The dream always ended at this point, and Ennis woke, much more happy than sad.
 
 
Title: Offer Withdrawn
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 25, 2008, 01:49:21 am
Ennis and Jack were spread out on a bed of grass, watching the stars wink out from under cloud cover.  They held hands and felt mighty good; there was still almost a week of “fishing” out in the wilderness, just the two of them.

Jack felt dreamy and hazarded a question. “If we had our own place, friend,” he began, “What should we do first?”  Ennis looked at Jack, thoughtful.  “Strange question, Rodeo,” Ennis answered.  “I don’t know.  I don’t rightly have a head for business, but I’m curious.”  Ennis squeezed Jack’s hand in his.  “What should we do first?”  “I guess we should build up stock after getting all of the licensing and insurance matters out of the way," Jack offered.  “Sounds good and reasonable to me,” Ennis laughed.  “But where would we get the money to build up stock?”  Jack shifted on the grass and Ennis knew that he had made a mistake.  The question just slipped out.

“Remember I once told you that my father-in-law would give me a certain amount of money to leave town,” Jack ventured.  “I remember,” Ennis whispered.  “Well, he made the offer official, and told me he had $20,000 and would wire it into my account once I set up shop somewhere, anywhere outside the state of Texas.”  Jack’s voice was uncertain, cautious.  Ennis sat up suddenly and looked down into his lover’s eyes.  “Did you just say $20,000, Rodeo?” Ennis asked, flabbergasted.  “20,000,” Jack answered, his excitement growing.  “Well, that is a lot of money, and I know you’re tempted to take it.  Are you going to set up shop somewhere, Jack?” Ennis asked.  “Only if you come with me,” was Jack’s reply.  “I told you,” Ennis began, “It can’t be that way, and you know my reasons.”  Jack held his peace.  He nodded.  “Okay, Cowboy, just trying to make conversation.  We can talk about something else, or we can go for a short walk before turning in.  You decide.”  Ennis didn’t know what to say.  He hated to keep refusing Jack’s offer of the sweet life, but he just couldn’t make that kind of a commitment.  “Let’s go for a walk, friend,” Jack suggested as he rose from the ground.  Ennis followed Jack to a hiking trail and fell in step beside him.  From that moment on, Jack made a vow.  He would never mention the cow and calf operation again.  Ennis shot his plane down out of the sky one time too many.  The offer was withdrawn forever.
 
Title: Ennis and Jack
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 25, 2008, 11:24:41 pm
Jack wanted to surprise his ma.  He didn't really care about his dad, especially since he had come alone.  No Ennis Del Mar accompanied him to stay awhile and help whip the ranch into shape.  His pa would be disappointed that Jack again failed to bring help, but Jack would deal with that.  His ma would be happy to see him no matter the circumstances.

Jack used his key to enter the back door to the kitchen.  His ma didn’t hear, and Jack was glad that his pa was either out on the town, upstairs sleeping off dinner, or out inspecting the spread.  He wasn’t up to dealing with his old man just then.  Jack tiptoed soundlessly behind his ma who was washing dishes at the sink.  He placed both hands over her eyes and smiled when he smelled her hair pomade.  Some things never changed!  “Jack!” Mrs. Twist screamed, as she twirled around, and instantly removed her son’s hands from her eyes.  “Ma, how did you know it was me,” Jack asked, laughing. “You weren’t expecting me, were you?”  Mrs. Twist placed a sloppy kiss on her son’s cheek.  “Well who else would it be,” she asked.  “And don’t think you can take me by surprise, young man,” Roberta Twist scolded, wagging a finger in Jack’s face.  “I heard your old truck pull up.  I know the sound of your engine!”  Jack smiled and pulled his mother in for a hug.  He loved that woman more than anyone else in the world…except..

Mrs. Twist removed what was left of the pot roast from the refrigerator and made Jack a sandwich.  She sat opposite her son at the kitchen table and watched as he ate.  She always loved to see her son eat.  “How long ya staying, son,” Mrs. Twist asked, excited.  “Only for about a week, then I got to get back to the dealership,” Jack mumbled between bites.  He couldn’t very well tell her that he was actually planning to meet Ennis Del Mar in about a week, up by the Tetons.  “Well, you dad will be glad to see you,” she exclaimed.  “You think he’ll mind that I came alone,”  Jack asked, obviously concerned.  Mrs. Twist seemed to consider the question.  “Maybe, son, maybe,” she spoke after awhile.  "But I’m curious.  What is Ennis Del Mar like?”  Jack couldn’t help himself, and he spilled every detail that he could about his friend, Ennis.  Mrs. Twist listened to her son and noticed how animated, how happy he seemed when he spoke about Ennis’ shy nature, his work ethic, and his looks.  “Ennis and Jack,” Mrs. Twist allowed the thought to enter her mind.  Ennis with Jack. She considered it.  There was no doubt what Jack’s enthusiasm meant, and she could live with it.
Title: Getting to Know You
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 28, 2008, 09:35:49 pm
Jack twirled a grimy stick in the supper fire while he watched Ennis eat from a can of beans.  He was certain they would end up together that night, but something was bothering him.  He knew Ennis very well in a physical sense, but he knew next to nothing about his private life, other than he was an orphan, was engaged, and was good lookin’ as all get out!  Jack had a plan to learn more about his friend.  He liked him a lot, and felt he almost had a right to know more about Mr. Ennis Del Mar.  Jack looked down at the fire as he spoke:

“Hey Ennis!"

Ennis looked up from his can of beans.  “Wha?” He answered.  Jack threw the stick into the fire, and as it sputtered and burned, he walked over to Ennis and sat down beside him.

"I was just thinking, friend, that I don’t know much about you!”

“Not much to tell,” Ennis spoke between bites.  “But if there is somethin’ you wanna know about me, I’ll be glad to answer.  Jack shook his head yes, and asked:

Jack:  “What is your favorite flavor of ice cream?”

Ennis: “Chocolate”

Jack:    “Your favorite color?”

Ennis: (shrugs) “Uh, I dunno..maybe blue?”  Jack smiles at this.

Jack:   “You want kids?”

Ennis:  “Yep!”

Jack:    “You have a big family: cousins, aunts, uncles?”

Ennis:  “Some, not too many.  Most of them are passed on.”  Jack lowers his head.

Jack:    “What is your favorite meal?”

Ennis:   “Jack, you sure ask a lot of questions!”  Jack laughs.  “Pork chops and mashed potatoes.”

Jack:    “Did you have any pets?”

Ennis    “We had a few dogs.”

Jack:     “Any girlfriends before Alma?”

Ennis:   “Nope!”  Jack doesn’t look convinced, but Ennis doesn’t notice.

Jack:     “You have a favorite snack or junk food?”

Ennis:   “Sure.  I like potato chips and ice cream sandwiches.”

Jack:     “Did you ever have a babysitter when you were little?”

Ennis:   “Naw, we couldn’t afford it.  My parents stayed home or took me with them until my sis was old enough to watch me.”

Jack:     “Did you get along with your neighbors when you were small?”

Ennis:   (Thoughtful) “Yeah, I guess.  The Drummonds were good people.”

Jack was silent for a moment as he took it all in.  Ennis was sort of amused and even flattered by Jack’s questioning.  No one else ever took the time to ask him about his life.  He faced Jack and grinned.

“That was kinda fun, Rodeo.”  Jack grinned back.

“Anything else you wanna know?”  Ennis asked as he opened a can of pears.

 “No, not right now, but I may have some questions later.”

 Ennis accepted this.  Jack moved toward Ennis and accepted a slice of pear.

“Anything you want to know about me, Cowboy?” Jack asked as he slurped down the tasty slice of pear.  Ennis nodded to the tent.

"I hope to find out much more about you tonight!”

 Jack liked the sound of that!
 
 
 
Title: Getting to Know You (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 30, 2008, 12:02:17 am
Jack was shaking like a leaf in a bitter wind after his sweet release.  Ennis held him close and provided security and comfort.  “You okay, Jack?”  Ennis asked as he kissed Jack’s damp forehead.  “Yeah, I’m okay, buddy,” Jack whispered as he tried to compose himself.  A silence followed that was neither awkward nor unexpected.  Jack snuggled into Ennis' warm chest and ran a hand along his lover’s firm forearm.  Ennis looked down at his friend’s dark hair and remembered the question and answer session that occurred just a few hours ago.  Ennis decided that he wanted to play. 

“Jack, you said that if I wanted to know anything about you that I could just ask?”  Jack looked up into Ennis’ smiling eyes.

“Well, of course, friend,” Jack exclaimed.  “What do you want to know?  You can ask me anything.”  Ennis nodded and pulled Jack closer.  He placed his chin on Jack’s head and began:

Ennis:  “Do you wish you had any bothers or sisters?”

Jack:     “I can’t say for sure.  I guess it would have been nice to have a big brother, but I guess I can’t miss what I never had.”  Ennis nodded.

Ennis:   “Did you ever have any girlfriends?

Jack:     “One.  Her name is Sonia.”

Ennis:   “What did you do to her?”  He asked this question flashing a devilish grin.

Jack:     “What?  Friend, we was only kids,"  Jack explained.  “We didn’t do nothin’ but watch TV, do homework, sometimes held hands.”  Jack punched Ennis where he caressed him only minutes before.

Ennis:   “Relax, Rodeo,” Del Mar laughed as he rubbed the arm where Jack punched him. “I was just askin!”  Jack smiled and snuggled closer.

Ennis:   “If your ma died would you cry?”

Jack:    (incredulous) “What kind of question is that?  Of course I would cry.”  Ennis nodded gravely.

Ennis:  “What about your pa?  If he died would you cry?”

Jack:     “Yeah, I suppose I would.”

Ennis didn’t mean to spoil the mood by asking a bunch of morbid questions, and he noticed a tightening in Jack’s person.  He thought he had better lighten the mood, and quick.

Ennis:   “And what would you do if I said I wanted to play some more?”  Ennis was delighted when Jack seemed to come alive all at once.

Jack:   (laughing) “Well, why don’t you show me what you have in mind and we’ll see!”

 
Title: Labor Day
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 31, 2008, 04:09:06 pm
Jack spent hours shopping for a family picnic in the park on Labor Day.  Lureen presented him with a shopping list that included items such as baked beans, butter, chicken hind quarters, hot links, buns, ground round, mustard, baby back ribs.  The food alone was costing a fortune; Jack thanked God that the Newsomes were paying.  The Newsomes were also in charge of the gathering: picking the location for the party and inviting the guests.  Jack placed the items from the list on the counter of the market and waited in line.  He looked around, absently, and wondered what he had gotten himself into.

He got his dates mixed up, and sent a postcard to Ennis, asking if he wanted to meet up at the cabin on the last day of the month.  Ennis wrote back, refusing him and telling him that he should probably spend the holiday with his family.  Jack was chagrined!  He forgot all about Labor Day.  Actually, truth be told, Jack couldn’t care less.  He would have met up with Ennis in any case.  But his friend had already made plans of his own.  He was taking Alma and the girls to his sister-in-law’s place for a cookout.

“Hey, Jack!”  Jack spun around at the sound of his name.  He saw Randall Malone standing off by the canned goods, waving at him.  “Aw hell,” Jack thought as he nodded to his “friend.”  Randall pushed his way through the people standing behind Jack in line, until they stood face-to-face.  “Randall,” Jack said as he shook Mr. Malone’s hand,  “how ya been?”  “Fine, fine,” Randall exclaimed, excited.  “Been too long.  You look good.”  Jack thought back to the time when he spent a weekend with Randall, alone, at Mr. Taylor’s small lakeside house.  Jack winced at the memory.  He had never before experienced anything so empty. “I’m lookin forward to the barbeque in the park,” Randall enthused.  When Jack gave him a puzzled look, Randall continued: “Lureen invited LaSahwn and I.  We said we would go; wouldn’t miss it.”  Jack felt his heart sink into his gut.   Randall gestured to his shopping basket.  “I’m bringing the booze.”  “Perfect,” Jack thought, gloomily.  He turned away from Randall and didn’t care if he was being rude.  He vowed to have a talk with his wife at his first opportunity.
Title: Manicure
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 03, 2008, 09:55:27 pm
Ennis was seated with two other husbands alongside the far wall of Josie’s Beauty Bar, reading a terribly out of date issue of “National Geographic” magazine.  Alma was seated under an enormous dryer, reading “Life” magazine.  The idea of striking up a conversation with one of the other bored husbands never occurred to Ennis.  He would rather keep to himself - his head lowered in a book.  Ennis Del Mar was never one to initiate small talk with anyone.  He noticed Alma’s excitement about being treated to a full salon package: hair cut, color and style, manicure, pedicure, eyebrow wax.  Ennis surprised Alma with the gift, as it was the second anniversary of their marriage, and he thought she deserved the pampering.  Alma balked at first, and was justifiably concerned with the cost, but Ennis wouldn’t take no for an answer.  His sister suggested the gift, and although the salon treatments consumed almost two weeks of his wages, he couldn’t resist surprising his woman.  After all, Alma had been a very good wife to him.  She was sort of manipulative, Ennis mused as he glanced at her, but she was a good woman, regardless.

Ennis finished National Geographic as Alma’s hair was styled and she was ready for her mani, pedi.  He had to admit that Alma was a good looking woman.  He suppressed a laugh as he remembered a colored guy at work describing his own wife’s salon treatment:

“Mr. Del Mar, my missus just got her hair all fried, dyed and laid to the side--and she looks mighty fine.”

Ennis snickered aloud!  Alma looks real good with her hair all fried, dyed and laid to the side!  He watched as an attendant led Alma over to a chair and placed her feet in a tray filled to the brim with water and a soapy liquid.  While her feet soaked, the manicurist placed a table between Alma and herself.  She began to file Alma’s nails, and as Ennis watched, he gulped, and he remembered: 

Just last month Ennis watched as Jack walked toward him.  He looked marvelous, and Ennis did what he always did when Jack approached, start his gaze at Jack’s expensive boots and move upward to his crotch (oh, God) and his gaze invariably rested on Jack’s hands.  Ennis ran toward Jack and pulled his arms around his waist.  He took Jack’s hands and noticed that his nails were freshly, expertly manicured.  “Jack,” Ennis began as he inspected his man’s caressingly soft hands.  “I know, friend,” Jack sighed, chagrined.  “You know this is not me,” he continued, “But Lureen forced me to do this thing.  We had an employee contest, and I was chosen to present the winners with prizes at a special banquet.  Lureen thought my nails should look nice if I was going to hand out prizes in front of everyone…so I had my nails manicured.”  Ennis nodded and withheld comment.  But he was quick to respond, to speak out when Jack’s hands worked him over that night.  Ennis had to compose himself at the thought of Jack’s shiny nails caressing his body.  He picked up another National Geographic, a more recent one this time, and pretended to read.  No use in getting all excited in a public place.
Title: I Miss You!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 07, 2008, 04:42:00 pm
Jack knew he was being foolish, but he couldn’t help himself.  Was it the drink or the maudlin love song that he played over and over?  It was not like him – or was it?  Jack was sprawled on Lureen’s expensive new rug, stinking drunk; a married man pining after his married lover. 

Jack had to fight to keep from spilling his whiskey all over the rug.  He didn’t care about the rug; he didn’t want to waste the booze.  It was helping him forget, helping him control the agonizing loneliness.  “Is this love,” Jack slurred aloud.  “Can I admit it?”

He was a mess, and Jack knew he had to pull himself together for his family’s sake, if not for his own.  His wife and son would return from the fair in a few hours, and Jack was at a loss.  He couldn’t sober up, or tidy up in time.  Whiskey bottles littered the living room floor.  A half eaten sandwich lay on his expensive couch covered by greasy potato chips.  It was all he could do to keep from calling Ennis in an effort to ease his lonely soul.  Jack pulled himself to his feet and made an attempt to clean up.  After all, he could look forward to fishing in a few weeks.




Title: Just the Two of Us
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 11, 2008, 12:40:45 am
“Well, if he looks good and you really feel attracted to him, what can I say?”  Jack was doing a poor job of controlling the quiver in his voice as he spoke.  “And if you can get him in bed, just be sure to bring him along on one of our trips, and we can do this!”  Jack ran his fingers nervously through his thick, dark hair.  Ennis was becoming amused.  “Just don’t leave me out,” Jack whispered.

Ennis met Jack at the campsite right on time.  He was feeling very playful, and couldn’t suppress an urge to mess with his friend.  He realized that the question he posed could produce any kind of reaction in Jack, but Ennis decided to go ahead.  As Jack placed his things inside the tent, Ennis asked, “Jack, what would you say if I met a young man that asked me to come into his teepee with him?”  Jack dropped his clothes on the cold ground and turned to face his lover.  His eyes flashed hurt, anger, and Ennis was certain that he saw a trace of lust pass across Jack’s features.  It was then that he went into his little speech.

“Hey, Buddy, that’ll be 7 dollars and 52 cents!”  Ennis, startled, looked up into the face of the bored, middle aged clerk as he tried to hide the dirty magazine he was looking through at the counter of the liquor store.  He had never before seen a skin rag that featured 3 men getting it on.  Ennis shook himself from his daydream and hastily stuffed the mag back onto the rack and reached into his tattered wallet to fetch money to pay for his bottles of whiskey.  The picture of three men in bed together had him wondering what Jack would say about such an arrangement.  He shook his head as he walked out of the store to his truck.  Would Jack go wild if he asked to bring another man into the tent?  Ennis imagined posing the question to Jack and –well – why would Jack sanction such a thing?  He could never ask such a thing of his lover.  Jack was all he could ever need or want.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on September 11, 2008, 12:57:54 am
That was a wild one Littlewing1957. I wonder where this story is headed; straight to smutville, I hope!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 12, 2008, 12:44:36 am
That was a wild one Littlewing1957. I wonder where this story is headed; straight to smutville, I hope!

Oh, I don't know, sweetie.  I may finish the story at a later date.  But now, I have another story for you!
Title: First One In..
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 12, 2008, 12:49:34 am
Jack was sitting on the floor, his slim body sandwiched between Ennis’ strong thighs.  Jack held a bottle of Old Rose with one hand, and with the other he rubbed a trail along his lover’s right leg.  Ennis couldn’t resist pulling his thighs together and giving Jack’s torso a little squeeze.  Jack didn’t seem to notice.  He settled back, his head resting on Ennis’ crotch.  It was all Ennis could do to keep from taking him right then and there.

Jack passed the whiskey up to his friend without even turning around.  Ennis accepted the bottle and chugged.  He gasped as the liquid snaked a hot trail down his throat and into his gut.  Ennis looked down at Jack’s tangle of dark hair.  He picked up a lock and twisted it around a finger.  Jack didn’t move or make a sound.  It was unlike him. 

Ennis placed the bottle in front of Jack’s face as held it there for a few beats.  Jack made no move to take it.  Now Ennis was intrigued.  He placed the booze on the floor beside them and gently pulled Jack’s head back, against his lap until he could see his eyes.  Jack's mug looked mighty strange upside down.  He looked like a rather large bug or a rat.  Ennis chuckled when he noticed Jack’s eyes where his mouth should have been.  “What ya up to, friend,” Jack asked, sheepishly.  Ennis smiled down at him.  “I was just about to ask you the same thing, Rodeo,” Ennis stammered.  “Nothin much, just enjoying the atmosphere,” Jack offered.  Ennis pushed Jack’s head back up.  He didn’t want him to get a stiff neck. “Well, I hear the water is pretty warm this time of day,” Ennis said, smoothly.  “Why don’t we go on over to the river and take a dip?”  Jack didn’t have to speak, nor did Ennis have to ask twice.  He darted from between Ennis’ thighs and ran into the master bedroom for his swim trunks.  “Last one in,” Jack laughed as he ran past Ennis and out of the door.  Ennis ran behind, soon to catch up.  He wouldn’t need his swim trunks; no, not this time!
Title: Re: Two Hearts
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 14, 2008, 06:53:11 pm
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Hi, Susie!  Good to see you!  :-*
Title: Breath of Fresh Air
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 19, 2008, 12:41:22 am
Ennis was standing outside of his trailer in the cool of twilight.  He loved the feel of a rush of wind on his face, and he lived to see the colors of the sky as the sun made its departure.  No one around for miles, it seemed.  But Ennis Del Mar didn’t feel lonely.  He had taken a nap a few minutes ago and Jack Twist appeared, briefly, in his dream.

The dream was starkly vivid, much clearer and pronounced than any dream that Ennis could remember.  He was lying atop Jack in the tent up on Brokeback: limbs sweaty and tangled.  How bizarre when his legs seemed to fall away from Jack’s, and his arms disentangled themselves from Jack’s embrace.  Ennis had the feeling that he was somewhere along the back of the tent, watching himself unfold from Jack in slow motion.  It was almost scary!  But frightening or not, Ennis was disappointed when he was awaken by a truck driving past his trailer.

When he pulled himself together enough to go outside for a breath of air, he was surprised at how cold it had become.  Ennis walked back in and fetched his blanket.  He also grabbed a bottle of whiskey and a glass.  The evening was fine for sitting out on his stoop for awhile and watching the sun set.  He poured himself a drink and held his glass up to the sky.  “Here’s to you, beautiful sunset, and to you, Jack Twist!”  Ennis took a little sip.  “Jack, I'll see you next month, or maybe even tonight, if I have anything to say about it!”
 
 
 
Title: Getting to Know You (3)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 20, 2008, 12:51:51 am
Ennis was hugging Jack close, as always, and he decided he wanted to ask him a few more questions.  “Hey, Bud,” Ennis began, after favoring Jack with a tender kiss to the cheek.  “You remember that game we played just yesterday?”  “Yep,” Jack answered, after recovering from Ennis’ sweet kiss.  “You wanna play?  Can I ask you some more things about yourself?”  Jack adjusted himself in Ennis’ arms.  He thought as long as he was going to answer questions, he may as well be comfortable.  “Shoot,” Jack said.

Ennis:  “Do you love your wife?”

Jack:    “I guess so, in my own way.  But we’re more friends than anything else.”

Ennis:   “What did you feel when you saw Bobby for the first time?”

Jack:     “Fear!”

Ennis:   (Moving Jack around to face him) “Fear?”

Jack:     “Yeah.  It sounds strange, I know, but here was this tiny baby in Lureen’s arms and I was scared to even hold him.  I thought I would hurt him or something.  Besides, I didn’t know anything about taking care of a small kid.

Ennis:   “Well, that makes sense to me.  You didn’t see him being born, did you?  I mean, were you there in the room with Lureen when she gave birth?”

Jack:   (Looking at Ennis as though seeing him for the first time) “Are you nuts?  I would never be in the room when Lureen gave birth to that boy.  Tell ya what..I asked the doctor when she was due and I made sure I was out of town on business.”

Ennis:  (Incredulous) “What? How did you manage that?"

Jack:   (Laughing) “I know I sound like a heel, but I can’t stand being anywhere near a woman when she is about to give birth.  It bothers me.  I can't stand to see anyone in that kind of pain."  Jack flinched.  "You have to understand Lureen!  That woman is always on time, and I hear her water broke on the very day that the doctor said it would.  Can you imagine that?  I got my father-in-law to send me to Dallas to look at a stock of combines a few days before the doctor said Lureen would deliver.  I swear ole man Newsome was happy that I left town.  He and his wife took Lureen to the hospital and stayed with her all during the delivery.  I got word the day after Bobby was born and I drove back to be with my family.”

Ennis:  (laughing and shaking his head) “Jack, you’re too much.  You feel more confident around Bobby now?”

Jack:    (Thoughtful) “Yeah, now that he is older and I can handle him better, I feel okay with him.  I can even change his diapers and heat up his bottle.  I’m a decent papa.”

Ennis was enjoying the question and answer session, but holding Jack so close was causing the heat to rise.  He caressed his lover, and in a few seconds, Jack seemed ready. “C’mon Bud,” Ennis whispered, tenderly, “Roll over and move with me.  Show me how you made that boy!”

Title: Presents
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 24, 2008, 08:34:25 pm
Day 5 of an absolutely idyllic fishing trip and Ennis didn’t want to leave.  He told Jack over a light supper that the two of them deserved a longer vacation than 10 days.  Better make it 12.  Jack couldn’t believe his ears.  He wanted to suggest the same thing, himself, but was afraid that Ennis would say no.  Jack gazed longingly at his lover over the dying embers of the supper fire.  “Do we have enough supplies for 2 more days?”

The answer was no, and that very next morning Ennis and Jack headed down from the mountain into town.  They would buy a few things that would hold them over for an extra 2 days.  Ennis drove the both of them to a shopping area that was anything but bustling.  Ennis pulled into the parking lot of a small market and killed the engine.  “I’ll go get us a few steaks and a whole chicken,” Jack announced, absently, as he climbed out of the truck.  “Okay, bud,” Ennis answered as he looked around.  “I think I’ll go take a walk down the block and see what there is to see.”  Jack smiled at that and entered “Richard’s Grocery Nook.”

Jack was in and out of the grocery in no time, carrying a large paper sack of vittles.  He was relieved when he saw that Ennis thought to leave the truck open, just in case he was out before Ennis made it back.  Jack placed the supplies in the truck bed and climbed in on the passenger side.  He pulled out a cig, lit it up and waited for his lover.  15 minutes and no sign of Ennis!  Jack was more put out than worried.  It was time to head back up to camp and start the mid-day meal.  He decided to give him 5 more minutes, and then he would go out and track him down.  5 minutes passed and no Ennis Del Mar.  Jack climbed out of the truck and headed down the block where he saw Ennis walking.  Ennis wasn’t hard to find, and Jack didn’t have to walk far.  He saw his lover looking rather fondly, almost dreamily in the window of a woman’s fashion store.  Jack sidled up to Ennis and followed his gaze to a woman’s leather handbag.  “Nice purse, Friend,” Jack giggled.  “It’ll go good with your blue jeans.”  Ennis cracked a tiny smile.  “I just thought Alma would like something like this, is all,” Ennis explained.  “She doesn’t get nice things very often and I just thought..”  Jack turned serious at the thought of Ennis wanting to do something nice for his spouse, and rarely getting the opportunity.  “C’mon, friend, let’s go take a look at the purse.”  “No, no, Jack, I can’t afford nothin’ like that..” “We just lookin,” Jack soothed.  “Nothin’ wrong with taking a look.”  Ennis shrugged and followed Jack into the store.  Mary’s Boutique was filled with girly wonders.  The accessories section was stocked with luxury handbags that carried steep price tags.  Jack picked up the bag that Ennis eyed in the window.  “You think she’ll like this?” Jack asked as he turned the handbag so Ennis could see it from all angles.  “Yeah, what woman wouldn’t?” Ennis answered.  “Okay, well, I see one that Lureen would like.  Why don’t I pick them up for the girls?”  Ennis was all poised to object, but Jack was already on his way to the register.  “Jack..I..,” Ennis objected, but Jack acted like he didn’t hear.  He paid for the bags with a credit card and had the cashier wrap them up.  Next he pulled Ennis out of the shop and led him to the truck.  Ennis opened the passenger side door of the vehicle and waited while Jack placed the packages alongside the bag from the market.  “Bud, you shouldn't a done that,” Ennis whispered as he placed the key in the ignition.  “I’ll never be able to pay you back!"  Jack shook his head.  “You don’t need to pay me back, Friend,” Jack began.  “Listen, I’m keeping Alma’s husband away from her for a few more days.  Consider this a thank you for her understanding.”  Ennis couldn’t argue with that.  And he planned to thank Jack himself when the sky turned red and the sun beat a hasty retreat.
Title: Miracle of nature
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 25, 2008, 10:15:07 pm
“Life can be hard, very hard, friend,’ Jack spoke silently as he picked at his lunch.  “Sometimes I feel the world is a dark, sad and evil place.”  Ennis nodded at Jack’s admission while Jack’s mind raced back to the week before the fishing trip.  Lureen was hostile toward him, old man Newsome was impossible to please at work, and little Bobby was spending too much time with friends.  Jack rarely got to see his only son.  Ennis watched his lover and was appalled to see that Jack was sitting at the table with his head hanging down.  He placed what was left of his chicken sandwich on the plate.  “C’mere, Bud, forget about lunch.”  Jack was puzzled, but did as he was told.  He placed his own sandwich on his plate and rose when Ennis came toward him.  “Let’s go for a walk,” Ennis said as he grabbed Jack’s hand.  “I have something I want to show you.” 

It was summer and very comfortable on the mountain.  Ennis held Jack’s hand and led him beside a raging mountain stream that was lined with fragrant blooms.  Ennis moved his hand in a motion that caused Jack to take in the scene.  “See the stream here, Bud,” Ennis began, “Do you like the sound of the waters moving, the sight of the current, the force of it all?”  Jack managed a smile so small that Ennis thought he imagined it.  “Sure, Friend, I like it fine.”  Ennis didn’t like the sound of Jack's response.  It troubled him.  He would have to try harder.  “What about the flowers?  Aren’t they beautiful?  You like flowers, don’t you?”  “I like the flowers,” Jack whispered, defeated.  “And look at the squirrel over there.  Ain’t he cute?  Look at how nature sends us little creatures to make us happy.”  Jack had to crack a wide grin at that one.  Why, Ennis was becoming a nature man!  “Yes, it is all very nice.  Is there a point to this, Friend?”

Ennis pulled Jack close and held him tight.  “I only wanted you to see that there is so much in life to feel good about, to make us happy.  And the things that are the best in this world don’t cost us a thing.”  Ennis looked into Jack’s baby blue eyes and thought he detected moistness.  “When you are feeling down, the Earth has a way of making it all better.  It’s why we’re here, Jack.  You have the entire wonder of nature to cheer you up.  And remember, you got me!”  Jack had to smile at that.  “Oh yeah,” he whispered, and allowed himself to be kissed.
Title: Bicycles for Two
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 27, 2008, 05:04:56 pm
Ennis arrived at camp first.  He erected the tent in no time and had a fire going and a couple of hot dogs roasting for lunch by the time Jack drove up.  Jack jumped out of his truck and was in Ennis’ arms in a flash.  After the hugs and kisses, the uttering of “son of a bitch,” and the slaps on the shoulders, Jack unpacked his supplies and joined Ennis by the fire.  Ennis handed him a hot dog and some crisps, and settled down on a log to eat lunch and catch up. 

It was a trying half year for both of them.  Ennis was working hard to support his daughters, and Jack was a regimented husband and father.  But being together in the beauty of nature, both men felt their troubles wash away with the rivers current.  Jack was the first to finish his hot dog.  He watched Ennis as he ate.  “What is it, Bud,” Ennis asked as he noticed Jack’s stare.  “Oh, nothing, Friend.  I never get tired of looking at you, and I’m not ashamed to admit it.  You look good enough to eat.”  Ennis felt the flush rising from his neck, moving to his cheeks.  His hot dog was all poised to eat, but Jack’s words caused Ennis to stop – his hot dog inches from his open mouth.  Jack squirmed.  He wasn’t in a hurry to make love, though.  He had other plans.  Ennis recovered enough to finish his lunch and lay back, content, against a tree.  “Hey Ennis,” Jack began, “You want to try something new?”  Ennis looked at his friend.  “Well that depends, Rodeo.  What you got in mind?”  Jack was off to his vehicle in a flash, and before Ennis could join him, Jack had removed 2 expensive looking bikes from his truck bed.  “What do ya think, Cowboy?  Ya wanna go for a bike ride?”

Ennis squinted in the sun at the bikes.  “Jack, I don’t mean to be difficult, but riding a bike ain’t exactly new.”  Jack laughed.  “I know, but we’ve never rode a bike together.  When was the last time you rode on a bicycle, Friend?”  Ennis had to think about that one.  “Well, I can’t rightly remember.  I never owned one, we was too poor.  But I did borrow my friend Scott’s bike from time to time.”  Jack grew thoughtful when he heard this.  “Yeah, I never had a bike growing up, either.  Like you, I had to use a friend’s bike when I was little.  What ya say?  Ya wanna ride out to the river?  Maybe take a little dip when we get there?”  Ennis shook his head in the affirmative and climbed onto the bike that Jack held out for him.  Jack was the better rider, of course.  He owned the red bike and rode it often on the weekends at home.  He bought the blue bike especially for Ennis and the occasion.  Ennis hadn’t been on a bike in years, and it showed.  But by the time they neared the river, Ennis was riding along like a pro.  It was a great time for the both of them.  Jack neared the river bed first, and wasted no time in disrobing.  Ennis caught up in an instant and practically pulled off his clothes.  The water was fine.  Jack swam and splashed while Ennis floated and let the waves carry him along.  He made a point to keep in sight of the bicycles Jack brought.  That Jack Twist!  Never a dull moment.  Never dull!
Title: I Remember Ennis
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 30, 2008, 01:26:15 am
Jack was visiting his home in Lightning Flat after his summer gig on Brokeback was cut short.  He sat at his mother’s kitchen table with a mug of steaming coffee and a glazed donut in front of him.  Jack took a sip of his brew after nibbling at his sweet.  “Good to have you home, son,” Mrs. Twist practically sang.  “You’re a sight for sore eyes, but you look rather thin, sugar.  You get enough to eat up there on that mountain?”  Jack didn’t even have to think about that one.  “The food was pretty bad,” Jack related as he took a gulp of his coffee.  “But there was enough to eat, for the most part.  Remember there was another guy up there with me this time, and he was in charge of bringing up food and supplies every week."  Mama Twist nodded, thoughfully.  “This other guy, was he fair when it came time to share with you?”  The question took Jack by surprise.  He was instantly transported back to last month, and in his mind’s eye, Ennis was crouched with him between two massive trees, the 30-30 in his hands and trained on an elk.  Ennis shot an elk for him to eat after the week’s supplies were all but lost when the mule Ennis was leading back to camp got spooked by a bear and ran off, spilling supplies all over the Earth’s floor.  And he did recall that time when Ennis heated up a box of soup for dinner.  “When did you start liking soup,” Jack asked as Ennis poured him a bowl of Chicken Noodle.  Ennis only shrugged.  It was then that Jack knew the truth!  He told him, “No more beans,” and Ennis ordered soup from the Basque to please him. “He was more than fair with the food, ma,”  Jack said as he drank his coffee.  It was an understatement.  Jack never met anyone as selfless as Ennis Del Mar.  To illustrate, Jack told his ma a little story:

“I remember one week about a month in, and our food was growing scarce.  We had a few days before Ennis left to go meet the Basque, and I didn’t know how we would make the food stretch until then.  Ennis was the camp tender at that time and whenever I rode into camp, he had supper ready for me.  That Wednesday Ennis prepared what was left of the canned meat.  He spooned a bit of the nasty mess on his plate, and he hesitated before loading my tin plate with the meat.  “Here, Rodeo, I’m not that hungry tonight, and you need your strength.  Take an extra helping."  Ma, he was willing to give me the bigger share of the meat, and even after that, he was piling food onto my plate!”

Mrs. Twist was so moved by Jack’s accounts of Ennis’ generosity that she couldn’t speak.  Jack’s ma knew what it was like to go hungry, and to her, sharing food was the exact same as sharing love and affection.  “He sounds like a fine man, that Ennis Del Mar,” Mrs. Twist finally managed.  “I would love to meet him someday.”  Jack nodded, sadly.  He didn’t hold out much hope for ever meeting Ennis again.  “Perhaps we’ll see him sometime, ma… I would like that very much.”
Title: Love/ Music
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 03, 2008, 10:24:01 pm
Jack needed some music.  He walked over to Don Wroe’s entertainment cabinet and ran his fingers along the LPs stacked up along Wroe's state-of-the-art record player.  Jack was rather amazed at the range of music that Mr. Wroe collected.  He had everything there from Abba to Z.Z. Hill.  Jack felt in the mood for the soulful styling of Marvin Gaye.  He removed the LP, "I Want You," From the jacket and placed it on the turntable.  Marvin’s smoky voice filled the space instantly, and Jack curled up on the couch and grabbed for his glass of whiskey.  Marvin Gaye, Del Mar and whiskey!  What could be better?

Ennis was in the shower, washing off a day’s worth of grime.  He and Jack hiked and ran, swam, hunted and ate.  They did everything but love.  Love could wait until the dark of night after the last meal of the day was eaten, and the sky was black.  Ennis soaped his firm body, and when he heard the music, he instinctively moved in time with the beat.  Ennis felt caught up, led along by a melody, a music that he had never before experienced.  It was mesmerizing, irresistible.  Ennis stepped out of the shower and pulled a towel around him.  Soaking wet, Ennis walked into the living room while Jack hummed along with Marvin, and sipped his whiskey.

Jack didn’t notice his lover at first.  Marvin sang, “ohh aww aww baby, you sure love to ball..”  Ennis couldn’t believe the provocative lyrics, and was more than a little surprised that Jack seemed to know the words.  Ennis stepped in front of Jack and dropped his towel.  Jack looked up at his nude lover, soaking wet, lust pulsing from every pore.  Jack dropped his glass, but neither man noticed.  They were running for the bedroom before the last shard touched the floor.
Title: Confession
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 05, 2008, 01:38:04 am
“Jack, what’s the matter?  You haven’t even touched your crumb cake!”  Ennis looked at Jack, concerned.  The crumb cake was one of his favorites, and a fitting end to the magnificent meal they just enjoyed.  Jack didn’t answer at first.  His head hung down just a particle, and he was unusually reserved.  The entire fishing trip had been a wash, actually.  Ennis looked forward to the time together, and Jack did the same.  But this time there was a distance, a holding back on Jack’s part.  Ennis didn’t make a big deal of it for the first few days.  But Jack being nonchalant about crumb cake?  Something was wrong.  Ennis eyed his lover as he pushed back from the table and stood.  Jack faced Ennis and his eyes held something dark.  Ennis felt his blood began to cool.  Whatever Jack was about to say, Ennis didn’t think he was ready to hear it.

“I got something to tell you, Friend,” Jack spoke, wringing his hands.  “I got to get this off my chest.”  Ennis was not the worrying kind, but the near hysterical tone of Jack’s voice gave him pause. 

“Look, Jack, we’re here to have some fun.  Why you wanna go spoil it by telling me bad news?”  Jack shook his head.

“I know, and I’m sorry, Friend, but I gotta get this out.”  Jack voice began to quiver, but now Ennis was the one who felt fear.

“Please, Jack?  Can’t we just forget whatever it is you need to tell me?  I don’t think I’m up to it.”  Jack walked over to his lover and sat right down beside him.

“I’m sorry.  You deserve to know.”  Now Ennis was terrified.  Not only that, he had an idea of what was to come.

“Go ahead!”  Ennis whispered, his voice trembling.  “Tell me.”  Jack placed a steady hand on Ennis’ thigh, as though the very touch fortified him.

“I was with someone else, Ennis.  I’m sorry.”  Ennis felt his throat constrict as Jack’s words hit home.  He wasn’t even aware when he fell to the cold Earth, his hands rubbing his temple as though to massage away Jack’s vile admission.

“He didn’t mean anything to me, Friend, and I swear it was just that one time.  It will never happen again.”  Jack climbed down next to Ennis and placed his head on his lap.  Ennis allowed him to rub his cheek.  "I..I just had to tell you or else I would be eaten alive with the guilt.  Can you ever forgive me?”

“Why?” Ennis croaked.  “What made you do it, Jack?  Who is this man?”  Jack opened his mouth to speak, but Ennis thought better of it.  He didn’t want to know the identity of his “rival,” nor could he bear to hear about Jack’s reasons for being with someone else.

“Never mind, Jack,” Ennis whispered.  “I don’t want to know his name.  I don’t want to ever hear mention of him again.  Are we clear on that?”  Jack nodded, but didn’t speak.

“Look,” Ennis began, tenderly.  “I know what I told you before about acting queer, but I also know you, Jack.  You can’t be happy with our arrangement; I know you want and need more from me.  You deserve more, Rodeo."  Ennis sighed, heavily.  "I want to believe that I’m your only one, Jack, but under the circumstances, I gotta know better.  I also have to make allowances.”  Ennis fought to release the words.  He couldn’t believe his own calm.  Jack couldn’t believe what he was hearing.

“If you have to have him, don’t tell me about it.  I can’t stand it, Jack.”  Ennis was folding, shutting down.  Jack noticed and pulled him close.  He rocked him, kissed him, cooed.

“I told you,” Jack began, “There won’t be a next time.  I was weak, Cowboy.  I was hurting, and when I came to my senses, I was terrified of you finding out.  But I had to come clean, Friend.”  Jack continued to rock his baby.  “I hope we can save what’s left of the trip.  I’m so sorry for spoiling everything, but I had to confess.”  Ennis shook his head and snuggled in closer to Jack.

“I think we’ll be okay.” Ennis whispered.  He was devastated, but resolved then and there to do better by Jack.  It was the only way to keep his man.

“C’mon, Rodeo,” Ennis said, recovered.  “I hope that guy taught you something new!”  Jack shook his head and laughed.

“Ennis Del Mar, just when I think I have you figured out, you say something that throws me completely off.”  Ennis smiled and reached out to Jack. 
Title: Getting to Know You (4)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 06, 2008, 12:04:52 am
Ennis was standing so close behind Jack that he practically melted into his flesh.  Both men were naked as the day they were born, and Ennis held Jack and moved him back and forth, swayed with him to a tune only he could hear.  Jack let Ennis lead.  He surrendered.  It was a tender moment for both men, but Ennis felt like talking.  He licked Jack’s ear, filling it entirely with his tongue.  Before Jack lost his mind, Ennis had moved away from him and onto the leather couch.  He motioned for Jack to join him.

Ennis: (Grabbing Jack’s hand)  “Can we play that game again?  You know the one where we ask the questions?”

Jack:  (laughing) “Again?  Don’t you know everything there is to know about me, Cowboy?”

Ennis:  “Well, I want to do this a different way.  Why don’t I ask you questions about myself and see if you can answer them?”

Jack:  (intrigued) “Sounds interesting.  Let’s do it.”

Ennis:  “Okay, then.  Where did I work before I joined you on Brokeback?”

Jack: (Instantly)  “The AAA Ranch.  You and your brother worked there for a few months before the owner went bankrupt.”

Ennis:  “Very good.  What is my brother’s name?”

Jack:  (smiling) “Easy one.  K.E. Del Mar.”

Ennis:  “Right.  What is the name of my youngest child?”

Jack:  (sighing) “Friend, you ain’t even making this a challenge.  Her name is Jennifer, but you all call her Jenny.”

Ennis:  “Okay, smart man.  What is Alma’s sister’s name?”

Jack:  (Thoughtful) “Uhh..I don’t know.  You got me there.”  Jack punched Ennis on the shoulder.  “No fair, Ennis.  You never even mentioned Alma’s sister.

Ennis:  “Okay, you’re right.  Her name is Hattie.  Now, where did me and Alma meet?”

Jack:  “At church.”

Ennis: “Right again.”  Jack smiled, triumphant.

Ennis: “What am I thinking right now?”

Jack:  (shrugging) “How in the hell would I know that?”  Ennis pointed a hand toward Wroe’s master bedroom.

Ennis:  “You take the hint?”

Jack:  “You jerk!  Don’t you ever get enough?”

Ennis:  (eyes twinkling) “I’m asking the questions, Rodeo.  Now how about it?  Ya wanna?”

Jack shook his head and smiled.  “Yeah, I wanna.”



 
Title: 2 rings
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 08, 2008, 11:18:52 pm
Jack was standing outside of his father’s shed, inspecting the building with a critical eye.  “We can rebuild ‘er, pop,” Jack offered.  I can come down next month for my vacation, and we can tear her down and build ‘er back up from the ground.”  Jack looked at his father, expecting a response.  Mr. Twist stood, silent, next to his son as he eyed the shed.  ‘I don’t think this is a job for two men, Jack,” he barked.  “What happened to that Ennis Del Mar?  I thought he was supposed to come down here with you and whip this place into shape?”

Jack winced at the dig.  He felt like a fool having even volunteered to rebuild the shed.  He should have known that his father, the wretched old jerk, would mention Ennis.  Never mind that it was the truth.  The truth hurt like a bitch!  Jack hung his handsome head a bit, but he didn’t answer.  “What you thinking, boy,” Mr. Twist challenged.  “Don’t tell me you can actually deliver some help around here?”

Jack dug his heel into the Earth.  “I can ask, Pa.  He got two little girls now and he has to work.  We don’t see each other as much as we did.”  Mr. Twist looked at his son’s wedding band.  “That looks different, Jack.  Is that the ring Lureen bought you?”  Jack’s right hand moved instinctively to his left.  He couldn’t believe that he actually had two rings: the one Lureen bought him, he wore while in Childress.  The other, the ring glistening on his wedding finger, he bought for Ennis in the hopes that someday…!!  John Twist didn’t get a reply.  He knew that his son had changed rings; he was very observant.  He was also very intuitive.  “Get the thought outta your head, boy.  That Ennis Del Mar don’t love you.  He’ll never be with you.”  The words cut.  Jack breezed past his father – practically knocking him over in the process.  John Twist rubbed his day old stubble and laughed out loud.  He didn’t know why he was so cruel to his only son, but then, misery loves company! 
Title: Vanilla
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 10, 2008, 01:46:36 am
When Jack walked up to Ennis, he was leaning on his truck holding a triple scoop vanilla ice cream cone.  Jack blew his lover a tender kiss but didn’t move to embrace him...yet.  “Vanilla, one of my favorites,” Jack said as he eyed the cone.  “I know,” Ennis answered, suddenly snaking his tongue around the base of the ice cream.  Ennis licked a circle around all three scoops and passed the cone to Jack.

Jack wasted no time in licking the thick layer of ice cream that melted onto the sugar cone.  The morning sun bore down relentlessly and the ice cream wasn’t long for the world.  Jack passed the cone back to his lover.  Ennis lapped the top scoop, and allowed his hands to become sticky with the melted sweetness.  Jack watched, enthralled as Ennis licked the ice cream from his fingers.

Jack grabbed Ennis’ sticky hand and sucked what was left of the ice cream from his fingers.  He reached for the cone and Ennis passed it over to him in a shot.  “Finish it off for me, Rodeo,” Ennis pleaded in that husky voice of his.  Jack was only happy to comply.  He devoured what was left of the vanilla ice cream in an instant.  The only thing left was the tall, sugar cone.  “You want the cone,” Jack asked, panting, as he passed it to his lover.  Ennis accepted the cone and nibbled at the base of it, sucking out the ice cream that clung to the bottom.  Jack thought he would pass out.  Ennis threw the rest of the cone to the Earth and pulled his Rodeo into his arms.
Title: Smokin'
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 15, 2008, 08:42:27 pm
Ennis finished a few seconds before Jack, but both were trembling like leaves in a chilly wind.  Ennis gave Jack a few seconds to recover before reaching for his pants pocket to fetch a cig.  “You want a smoke, Jack?”  Ennis whispered as he held out the pack so Jack could see it.  “I know it ain’t your brand, but I didn’t think to pick up any Marlboro’s for you.  How about a smoke?”  Jack pulled himself up on both elbows and smiled at his lover.  “You know I want a smoke, Friend,” Jack said.  “I don’t care what brand you go there!” 

Ennis lit his cig and put it in his mouth.  He pulled another smoke from the pack and placed it between Jack’s lips.  He bent down and placed the smoldering flame against the tip of Jack’s cig.  It was a sensuous act – almost like foreplay.  Jack inhaled deeply and blew out the smoke.  Ennis took a deep drag and observed his husband.  Jack made the very act of smoking a cig sexy.  Ennis watched as Jack placed the cigarette between his lips.  He was getting hot and bothered all over again.

“Put the smoke down, Jack,” Ennis commanded.  Jack looked up at him.  “Why?  I just picked it up,” Jack spoke, puzzled.  Ennis didn’t answer at first.  He put his cigarette out and reached for his man.  Jack pulled back a bit, but he was amused.  “I don’t think I can, Friend,” Jack whispered.  “You don’t have to do anything, Rodeo,” Ennis reassured.  He moved downward and Jack had no choice but to surrender.  He ground the tip of his smoke into the ashtray and in an instant he was on fire.
Title: Dirty Dancer
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 17, 2008, 09:41:36 pm
Ennis strained to see the half naked dancer through the fog of cigarette smoke.  Jack sat at Ennis’ side, patting his thigh in time to the raunchy, suggestive music.  Jack nursed a shot glass of whiskey, but Ennis chose to forego drink.  He wanted to be fully aware of everything.  Other men were sitting around in a circle, staring up at a young man of perhaps 25, dressed as Aladdin, and performing a sort of slow, grinding dance to a smouldering jazz trac.

Ennis couldn’t fathom what he was seeing, couldn’t even remember walking into the “club.”  But Jack felt right at home and watched the young beauty with great interest as he danced.  The stripper had a full view of his audience, and when his eyes met Ennis’ he seemed to pause a bit.  Jack noticed the attraction at once, and looked over at Ennis and grinned.  His smile broadened as the young man walked, cat-like, from the stage and stood right in front of Ennis Del Mar.  The stripper held out a hand for Ennis, but Ennis didn’t understand.  “Dance with me,” the young man whispered.  The other men looked at Ennis, fascinated.  They were all a bit jealous, but were interested to see what the fair haired cowboy would do.  Ennis looked at Jack, who smiled and nodded.  He pushed Ennis up, and Ennis took the dancer’s hand.  The beautiful dancer pulled Ennis to the edge of the stage, and pushed his buttocks into Ennis’ groin.  Shouts of, “whoop! Hey hey, go on, go on,” filled the smoky club.  Ennis placed a tentative hand on the dancer’s buttocks.  The crowd was in an uproar!  “He likes that,” Jack laughed, a bit uneasy.  Ennis was patting the young man’s bum when he turned abruptly and planted a sloppy kiss on Ennis’ open mouth.

“What the hell....??” Ennis stammered as he shot upright on his little bed.  He looked at the clock on his table and saw that it was only 2a.m.  The dream was unsettling to say the least.  He couldn’t imagine where it came from.  He wasn’t queer!  “I have to stop eating sardine sandwiches so late at night,” Ennis muttered.  He mopped at the sweat that had accumulated on his brow.  He tried to ignore his early morning wood, but knew he would never get back to sleep if he didn’t take care of it, and soon. 
Title: For the Boys
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 20, 2008, 10:26:21 pm
Jack was putting away the contents of his shaving kit in the medicine cabinet of Don Wroe’s bathroom when an odd memory presented itself.  He remembered when he was a new husband and he mingled his toilet items with Lureen's for the first time.  He was shocked into another world.

“Hey Ennis, get in here!” Jack yelled as he held the mirrored door of the cabinet open.  Ennis was in the spacious kitchen putting away the food when he heard Jack’s cry.  He placed a few cans on the kitchen table and walked into the bathroom to see what Jack wanted.  “What is it, Jack?”  Ennis asked as he looked first at Jack and then to the medicine cabinet.  “You remember when you and Alma were first married and you had to put your shit in there with hers?”  Ennis nodded in the affirmative, wondering where Jack was heading.  “Well, what did you think of all the girly things?  Did you feel all weird?”

Ennis thought back to his days as a newlywed.  He did remember seeing things in the bathroom that puzzled him.  He didn’t know anything about feminine hygiene products, and was always mistaking Alma’s razors for his own.   “Yeah, it was all a bit strange, Rodeo, but I got used to it soon enough.  What about you?”  Jack laughed.  “To tell you the truth, Friend, I’m still not used to all the gross things that Lureen buys.  Aren’t you glad to be with a guy and be around guy things?”  Ennis had to smile at that.  He glanced in the cabinet and noticed the lube.  “Well, I certainly am glad to see this,” Ennis grunted as he fetched the lube from one of the trays.  “I have a feeling this will come in handy real soon!”
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 24, 2008, 12:05:43 am
Getting to Know You (5) Halloween Edition

Jack was lying still in Ennis’ arms, and enjoying the October chill.  It was, in fact, very cold out in the wilderness, but the tent was warm, and Ennis’ embrace was even warmer.  Jack always loved Halloween, and wanted to know more about how Ennis felt about the “holiday.”  He remained still, satisfied, but spoke:

“Hey, Ennis, you know what next Friday is?”

Ennis: (Kissing Jack’s hair) “Friday?  Just a normal day, right?

Jack:  “Well, I guess, but next Friday is Halloween.  How about I ask you some more questions, you know, like we do from time to time.  You feel up to it?”

Ennis: (Rubbing Jack’s cheek) “Sure, why not?  We don’t got nothing else to do at the moment…well, not right now, anyway!” (Ennis winks at Jack)  “What do you wanna know?”

Jack: “Did you and your brother and sister dress up for Halloween?”

Ennis: (Thoughtful) “If you can call it that.  We couldn’t afford store bought costumes, so my ma had to make them for us.  She couldn’t sew very well, Rodeo.  It was embarrassing!”

Jack: (Nodding) “Well, what costume did you like the best?”

Ennis:  “I have to say the mummy costume my ma made me when I was about 7.”

Jack: (Fascinated) “Mummy costume?  That sounds interesting.  How did she make it?”

Ennis: (Warming) “Well, I’ll tell ya..ma could be very clever when she wanted to be.  We had some gauze that was left over from when my pa cut his hand.  Ma soaked the gauze in water and added a few tea bags.  The tea made the gauze look old and stained.  Ma wrapped the gauze on me, but we only had enough to go around my top.  I was the only half covered mummy out trick or treating wearing stained jeans!”

Jack: (Laughing) “That is quite a story!  What did K.E. and your sister go as that year?”

Ennis: (Thoughtful) “I believe K.E. went as a ghost.  Ma put a white sheet over him and cut out a few holes for his eyes.  I can’t remember what my sister went as.”

Jack: “Well, you must remember at least one costume of your sister’s?  Something had to stand out?”

Ennis:  “Oh yeah, one year she went as a grown woman.  Ma dressed her in one of her own Sunday dresses, and added gloves, a hat and make-up.  Sis was only 10 but she looked like a grown-up lady.”

Jack:  “That’s funny!  Did you guys go out trick or treating every year?”

Ennis:  “I think its called tricks or treats!”

Jack: (Looking Ennis in the eyes) “Whatever!  Just answer the question!”

Ennis: “Yeah, we went most years.  Pa took us around to the other ranches and we got a lot of candy.”

To be continued….
Title: Getting to Know you (6) Halloween Edition (cont)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 30, 2008, 12:09:30 am
Jack:  “Did your ma and pa let you eat as much candy as you wanted?”

Ennis:  “Well, yeah, for the most part.  We got to eat as much as we wanted until the candy was all gone, but we couldn’t eat any before meals.”

Jack:  “Tell me about Halloween with the girls.”

Ennis: (Eyes gleaming) “I remember one year, not too long ago, Steve had a real good profit for the ranch.  He gave us a little extra in our pay at the end of the month as a way to say thanks.  I went right out after work and grabbed the girls to take them to town to get store bought Halloween costumes.”

Jack: “That sounds good.  Was that the first time the girls had store bought costumes?”

Ennis: “Yeah.  Alma is good at sewing, and she made the girls look just as good as the kids that had costumes from Sears.  I’ll tell you, Bud – Alma started up making the girl’s costumes in August!”

Jack: “You ever throw the girls a Halloween party?”

Ennis:  “Only once.  We had a couple of the kids from the neighborhood over and I put out a barrel in front of the Laundromat, and had the kids bob for apples.  Nothing special.”

Jack: “That sounds like a real good time.  Do you remember anything unusual happening on Halloween?”

Ennis: (Intrigued) “Like what?”

Jack:  “Oh, I don’t know.  Anything scary?”

Ennis:  “Ain’t that the point of Halloween?  I mean, everything is supposed to be scary on that night, ain’t it?”

Jack:  “I suppose you’re right.  So I take it nothing happened out of the ordinary on Halloween that you can remember?”

Ennis:  “No, nothing that I can remember, Bud.”

Jack:  (yawning) “Let’s get some sleep.  Tomorrow, if you’re in the mood, I’ll tell you the story of a Halloween that was really out of the ordinary—really scary.”

Ennis: (Pulling Jack close) “You’re on!”

To be Continued..


Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dobie1018 on October 31, 2008, 03:05:40 pm
You are so talented Littlewing.  I could read your stories all day!  Keep it up!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 31, 2008, 09:52:28 pm
You are so talented Littlewing.  I could read your stories all day!  Keep it up!

Thanks so much, Dobie!  You're very kind!  I didn't think anyone was reading, but I'm having fun posting the stories, and I'll continue.  Thanks again!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dobie1018 on November 01, 2008, 08:50:41 pm
I just recently came upon this thread and I love to read stories like this about Ennis & Jack.  If a movie could be made out of your stories - what a movie it would be!!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 01, 2008, 09:53:37 pm
I just recently came upon this thread and I love to read stories like this about Ennis & Jack.  If a movie could be made out of your stories - what a movie it would be!!

Thanks, sweetheart, you are so sweet!  Thanks for your kind words!  :-*
Title: Home Alone
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 06, 2008, 01:02:08 am
Jack was home alone.  Lureen was out with her girlfriends, and Bobby was at school.  He took a personal day from work to stay at home and cool out.  Jack needed some alone time.  November, and the weather was turning chilly.  In a very short while the temps would dip down below the 30s.  Jack was ready for it.  He enjoyed the cold. 

Jack sat, cross-legged, on his red sofa; a cup of steaming coffee in one hand and the morning paper in the other.  He spread his favorite blanket across his lap and started to settle in and get rested before Bobby came clamoring in from school.  Jack was content in the moment, but something was missing.  Actually, something, someone was always missing.  Jack placed his brew on the coffee table and pulled the drapes open a bit.  He watched the gentle winds blow through trees already turning bright gold, brown green and copper.  The sight was bewitching, transformative.  It reminded him of the last time he saw Ennis Del Mar.

The last time he was with Ennis was April in the mountains, and the thaw had just begun.  Jack considered asking Ennis why they were always in the friggin cold, but he just couldn’t do it.  Back in the present Jack was glad he had the forethought to refrain from suggesting they vacation in a warm clime.  As Jack pulled his favorite blanket closer, he was reminded of how fond he is of the mountains in winter and early spring.  Is there anything finer than a blizzard, a warm tent and Ennis Del Mar’s smile?  Jack was grateful for the time alone with his coffee, a snuggly blanket and thoughts of Ennis to keep him warm and content. 
Title: Wish you Were Here!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 09, 2008, 06:10:38 pm
“Good work, baby girl!”  Did Jack hear that right?  He looked at his father-in-law as he adored his new grandson.  He couldn’t begrudge a father’s pride in his daughter’s handiwork.  After all, giving birth is hard work, and could have maimed his child for life, or even killed her.  “But I’m the father!” Jack thought as he watched Mr. Newsome practically drool over Lureen and Little Bobby.  “Didn’t I have something to do with it?”

Jack stood still and tried to put on a happy face.  His thought turned to Ennis, and even though he wasn’t there, Jack could see him.  Ennis sat right beside Lureen, his eyes moist with pride at the arrival at Jack’s new son.  “Why aren’t you here with me, Ennis?” Jack thought.  “I want you to hold my child in your arms and share this with me.  I know you would tell me that I did something right – that I did good.  Ennis, why aren't you here?”

“Rodeo will go get em!”  It was Mr. Newsome, and he threw a set of keys at Jack.  Jack missed them, of course.  He reached down to retrieve the keys and head off to his father-in-law’s car to bring in a case of formula.  And after that?  He needed to get ahold of Ennis.  His life wasn’t working out anymore.
Title: Affection
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 11, 2008, 01:04:48 am
Jack was driving.  He rolled the driver's side window down on Ennis’ truck and placed his arm outside.  Ennis looked at Jack.  He couldn’t believe that it had been seven months since they were last together.  The time actually flew, but Ennis missed his lover terribly.  He looked on him in awe.  Could it be that Jack only got better looking?  Or was it all the months apart that caused him to seem so sexy, so beautiful?

Jack looked straight ahead.  Ennis studied his profile.  He noticed a sweet smile widening Jack’s features.  Jack’s eyes never left the road, but he was smiling broadly, sweetly now.  “What are you smiling at, Bud?” Ennis whispered.  “I felt you eyes on me,” Jack answered, tenderly.  Jack pulled Ennis’ hand inside of his and held on tight.  “You’re looking at me.  Do you think I’m handsome?”

Ennis felt himself blush.  He thought Jack was the handsomest man he ever laid eyes on, but he couldn’t admit it, now could he?  “Naw, Rodeo,” Ennis whispered.  His voice was dripping with honey.  “You’re ugly, you hear me, ugly!!!”  Jack chuckled and squeezed his lover’s hand even tighter.  He didn’t answer, but pulled Ennis’ hand to his lips and placed a gentle kiss on his palm.  It was Ennis’ turn to chuckle.  He rubbed Jack’s cheek and returned the kiss.  The fishing trip was off to a good start.
Title: Brokeback Revisited
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 12, 2008, 11:19:07 pm
Jack walked out of Aguirre’s trailer feeling sort of relieved.  He didn’t know if he could face another summer up on Brokeback without Ennis Del Mar.  Sure, things were tough, and he could use the money, but the mountain held too many memories.  How could he possibly work up there alone, without Ennis?

Aguirre’s words stung!  “Now get the hell outta my trailer,” he said!  Jack was too polite a gentleman to answer back.  He walked out, was headed to his truck, but something stopped him.  The Basque was approaching Mr. Aguirre’s trailer.  Jack waited until the old man was upon him.  The Basque (his name was Emile) smiled when he saw Jack standing there.  He knew that Jack had fallen out of favor with the boss, but he was a polite man, and saw no harm in being nice to Jack.  Jack and the Basque exchanged pleasantries.  Their interaction was awkward at best.  “Well, I gotta go see the boss,” Emile said, finally, almost as an excuse to avoid an unpleasant encounter.  “See you around.”  Jack nodded and walked to his truck.

Jack didn’t know where he was headed.  He could always go and see his folks – hang around the ranch for a few weeks.  And there was that rodeo competition coming up in about a week over in Cody.  Jack would figure things out.  But for now he felt kind of lost.  He found himself driving over by the jump-off.  He didn’t even know why he felt led to the foothills of Brokeback – but there he was – Signal, Wyoming, and all was silent.  The mountain was as majestic as ever.  He felt a tug as he remembered Ennis’ words: “Better watch it there!  That horse has a low startle point!”  Jack sat back and looked out at the mountain.  He was unwilling, but couldn’t help reliving everything he and Ennis experienced just that past summer.  The memory comforted him.  In about a month another pair of deuces would go up there and herd sheep.  Jack was almost glad that he would not be one of them.  It wouldn’t be worthwhile without Ennis Del Mar.  Jack cheered slightly when he thought of Ennis.  He knew that they would meet.  Not just yet, but he was certain that he would see Ennis again.  Jack saluted the mountain and started up his engine.  It turned over.  “Here’s to you, Brokeback,” Jack whispered as he drove away.
Title: To Alma's House I Go..
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 14, 2008, 01:36:10 am
Ennis squeezed a bit of pomade on his comb and pulled it through his clean hair.  Satisfied that he looked good, at least from the neck up, Ennis turned to his closet and selected his only dress shirt.  He donned it in an instant, careful not to get any of his hair treatment on the fabric.  There, done!  Ennis looked at his image in his mirror.  He didn’t think he was anything special, but he looked presentable.  His girls would be proud.

Ennis couldn’t refuse Alma Jr. when she invited him over for Thanksgiving dinner.  He teased her by acting aloof, but in the end, he’d accepted.  Ennis was nervous about being in a strange house with his ex-wife and her new husband, but he wanted to be with his girls.  Besides, being invited out for a home cooked turkey meal certainly beat heating up a frozen dinner and eating it all alone.

Ennis didn’t have to be alone, of course.  Steve, his boss, invited him to his home for the holiday, as did a few of his co-workers.  But Ennis refused them all.  He had a feeling that the invite to his ex-wife’s place would come.  One last look in the mirror and Ennis was satisfied.  He pulled out a bottle of cheap wine from his little fridge and placed a make-shift bow around it.  It wouldn’t do to arrive at Alma’s place empty handed.  Ennis climbed into his truck and headed out.  He was looking forward to a pleasant evening.
Title: A Jack Daniels Thanksgiving
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 19, 2008, 11:19:01 pm
Jack was in his bedroom dressing when Bobby knocked on the door.  “Dad, ma wants you to chop up the celery for the stuffing.”  Jack grimaced.  He pulled on his shirt and opened his bedroom door. Bobby was still standing there, his little fist poised to knock again.  “Tell your ma I’ll be there in a minute,” Jack exclaimed as he ruffled his son’s dark hair.  “I need to do something first.”  Bobby nodded and retreated toward the kitchen where Lureen was whipping up a Thanksgiving feast.  Jack sat down on his bed.  He didn’t have anything to do, really, but he wasn’t psyched enough to face his family.  Jack wasn’t pleased when Lureen announced that her folks would join them for dinner.  Last year was a lot less stressful, as the family joined Lureen’s parents for the holiday over at their spread, and all Jack had to do was sit at the table and eat.  But this year, he would have to play host, and try to be the man of the house.  Jack wasn’t ready for that.  He needed help from Jack Daniels to get through it, but he couldn’t start drinking so early in the day.  It just wasn’t right to start the holiday with a buzz.  Jack stood up from the bed and steeled himself.  He would just have to suck it up and make the best of things.

Lureen looked perfect even as she toiled in a hot kitchen.  Her hair was not even made limp by the heat, her mascara didn’t run and her nails looked pretty.  Jack wondered how his wife always managed to look so put-together.  He shrugged at the thought.  Some women were just natural coquettes.  Lureen ignored her husband for a second as she fetched the celery and placed it on a cutting board.  “Listen honey, I want you to be my sous chef,” Lureen chirped.  “You think you can handle that?”  Jack didn’t answer.   He had no idea what a sous chef was, but taken in context, he figured it to be a person who was told what to do while the main chef did something else.  “Yeah, I can do that for you, hon,” Jack exclaimed, his heart not in it.”  “Well, don’t sound so cheerful,” Lureen mocked.  “Just chop up this celery and you can go on about your business.  I don’t need another person in here anyway.”  Lureen wiped a small bead of perspiration from her forehead.  Jack was silent as he chopped the celery the best way he knew how.  When he was done, he left the pieces on the chopping board and walked past his wife out of the kitchen.  “Thanks, Jack,” Lureen called after him.  Jack spoke not a word as he went in search of Bobby.

Bobby was in his bedroom watching the Macy’s Thanksgiving parade on his small television.  Jack sat down next to him and pulled him into his arms.  Bobby protested.  “Dad, what’s the matter?” Little Bobby asked as he tried to pull away.  But Jack held him tight, heartened already by Bobby’s calming presence.  “I just need a hug, son,” Jack whispered as he rocked his boy.  Bobby relaxed a bit and allowed his father to hold him.  He sensed his dad’s distress, but being so young, he didn’t know what to do or say to make things better.   “Watch the parade with me,” Bobby whispered. “After that we can watch the game, K?”  Jack looked into his son’s eyes and he began to melt.  But just as he was feeling a sense of peace, Lureen interrupted Jack’s growing calm with a proclamation that her parents would be over in about an hour.  That did it.  “Listen Bobby,” Jack began. “I need to go do something in my room before I watch the parade with you, okay?”  Bobby only half heard.  He nodded in the affirmative, but his attention was on a float in the image of Charlie Brown.  Jack almost ran to his bedroom and retrieved the bottle of Jack Daniels he kept under his bed in a foot locker.  He looked at his watch, but didn’t care that it wasn’t even noon.  He removed a picture of Ennis that he snapped on their last trip from the same footlocker.  A picture of Ennis and a few shots of hard liquor.  Jack was ashamed that he couldn’t be stronger, but he needed help if he was to get through dinner with his in-laws.  Jack looked at the photo of Ennis lifting a tiny hatchet in his strong hands.  “Ennis, I hope you’re happy,” Is all that Jack could manage.
Title: Christmas Musings
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 02, 2008, 10:46:53 pm
Jack looked at his desk calendar and shook his head.  Already December!  He could have sworn that just yesterday he was presiding over the most dismal Thanksgiving of his life.  But Thanksgiving had come and gone.  Jack was no happier that Christmas was approaching.

Jack’s office door was half closed, but he still had a view of employees milling about, or loitering around, talking.  There was a certain lightening of the mood around the place.  Christmas always seemed to bring out the best in people.  Jack watched as Sally Mintoy carried a miniature Christmas tree down the hall.  He smiled as he thought of how charming the tree would look on Sally’s desk.  Jack pondered buying a small tree, or some other sort of ornament for his desk to celebrate the season.  “Naw,” Jack exclaimed out loud.  “What good would it do?”

Jack watched the clock and stood up when he saw the hour.  5:00 and he was free to go home.  But not home to a tall, tan, sexy, strapping cowboy.  Jack cursed himself.  He had no right to be so ungrateful.  Sure, he couldn’t be with Ennis, but he did have a son that he loved who was desperate to be with him.  His wife was little more than a friend, but what is life without friends?  Jack gathered his things and prepared for the trek home.  His life wasn’t perfect – wasn’t anywhere near what he wanted, but things could be far worse.

 
Title: Some other Time
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 11, 2008, 12:46:30 am
“You mean you would leave Lureen and the baby all alone?”  Ennis craned his neck to look Jack straight in the eyes.  He wanted an honest answer to his question.  Jack sought to avoid his lover’s penetrating, almost accusatory gaze, but he couldn’t look away.  “Yes, I would leave them for you,” Jack stated, almost without reservation.

Jack wondered how often he would have to propose before Ennis accepted and ran away with him in the night.  He couldn’t help but broach the subject of “the sweet life” whenever he got near Ennis Del Mar.   After all, living with the person he loved above all others was Jack’s dream.  He had to fight for what he wanted.

“You got her pregnant, Jack.  She's yer wife.  You’re responsible for her and for that boy.”   Jack struggled to hide his irritation at Ennis’ words.  He had every intention of providing for his wife and child.  Jack would make arrangements to see them both from time-to-time.  He didn’t need Ennis to remind him of his responsibilities.  “And it is Christmastime,” Ennis exclaimed, grabbing Jack’s hand to soften the blow.  “Christmas is a time for family!”  Jack flinched.  Ennis was all the family he really needed, but the stubborn flake didn’t see it that way.  Jack signed and turned away.  “Whatever,” he seethed as he made his way to the creek. 
Title: Getting to Know You, Christmas Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 21, 2008, 02:59:57 pm
And Jack was nestled snugly in Ennis’ arms.  It was just a few weeks before Christmas, and the boys were just happy to arrange a rendezvous so close to the holiday.  It was cozy and warm in Don Wroe’s king sized bed!  Ennis pulled Jack closer and realized that he knew very little about Jack’s Christmases, past and present.  He decided another “getting to know you” game was in order. 

Ennis:  “Hey bud, you feel like answering a few questions for me?”

Jack:  “Well, sure.  What about?”

Ennis:  “Now that Christmas is just a few weeks away, I realize that I don’t know much about your experiences with the holiday.  I just want to know what Christmas has been like for you over the years.”

Jack: “Fair enough.  But I get to ask questions of you, right?”

Ennis: (Kissing Jack’s forehead) “Of course.  You can ask me anything.  Now, what was an average Christmas like at the Twist Ranch?”

Jack: (Thoughtful) “Pretty nice, I guess.  We didn’t have a lot of money, but Ma tried to make Christmas special for me…for us.  Pa wasn’t the celebrating kind, but he let ma do what she wanted for the holiday.  The first year I remember was when I was about 5.  Ma decorated the house real nice with a tree, and wreaths, and I got a toy truck as a present that year.”

Ennis:  “Hmmm.  A toy truck, eh?”

Jack:  “Yeah!  Believe it or not, I still have it!”

Ennis: (Laughing) “No way?  You still have a truck you got at 5 years old?  Where is it?”

Jack:  (Caressing Ennis’ forearm) “Still at the ranch.  Ma seems to have kept all my old junk!”

Ennis:  “You’re lucky to have a mother like her, Jack.  I hope you realize it.”

Jack: (Sober) “I know, Cowboy, I know.  I thank my lucky stars every day that I have my ma in my corner.  You know, one year she took me to see Santa at the Sears in town.  I wouldn’t sit on his lap for anything, even after she drove us for miles to get to the store.  The other kids that wouldn’t cooperate were hit upside the head until they sat on that fat man’s lap. But ma wouldn’t force me.  She just said, “Okay Jack, you don’t have to see Santa if you don’t want to.  We’ll get some lunch and go back home.”

Ennis: “That’s a great story, Jack!"

Jack:  “You should have seen me at the Christmas Pageant at church.  I was about..oh, 10 and it only happened once.”

Ennis (Warming) “What happened?

Jack: “I was chosen to play Joseph.  Sarah Tolen was Mary and we had a doll as the baby Jesus.  I couldn’t remember my lines for nothing.  Ma just smiled at me the entire time as I made a fool of myself.  Pa didn’t even care enough to come to church to see his only child perform, if you can call it that!”

Ennis:  “Somehow I can see you playing Joseph.  I can even see you messing up your lines!”

Jack: (Rising) “Yeah, well, all this talk has made me hungry.  How about a little lunch?”

To be continued
Title: Getting to Know You, Christmas Edition (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 22, 2008, 01:01:44 am
Lunch consisted of fried bologna sandwiches with mayo, potato chips and Christmas cookies that Alma baked and sent along.  A glass apiece of sparkling cider enhanced the simple meal.  Jack vowed to grill a few steaks for supper.  Ennis sat down on Don’s leather sofa and beckoned Jack to sit beside him.  He held Jack's hand and continued the “game.”

Ennis:  “So, Bud, any other Christmases you want to tell me about?”

Jack: (Smiling) “Only the time when I thought we would lose Ma.”

Ennis: (Serious) “Jack, darling, you never mentioned this.  Do you feel like talking about it?”

Jack: (Reassuring) “Yeah, I can talk about it.  Don’t worry, Friend, it happened awhile ago when I was about 14.  Ma was fine, but it got thin there for a time.”

Ennis: (Whispering) “You wanna tell me what happened?”

Jack: “Well, Ma and I were trimming the tree on Christmas Eve when she started turning blue.  She was having trouble breathing and was clutching her chest.  Pa walked by at that very moment and in a split second had the phone in his hand to call emergency.”

Ennis: “Was it a heart attack?”

Jack: “Yeah, I’m afraid so.  The ambulance got there really fast, and the emergency person told Pa what to do until they got there.  Ma was in the hospital for a week, and it took her months to recover.  I spent that Christmas day at the hospital, but I must say: the hospital put on a nice party for the patients and their families.   Pa and I got to get to know a lot of new people, and we had dinner and even got a few gifts to boot!”

Ennis: “Interesting!  I’m glad your ma made it through.  I’m sorry you had to have had such stress during the holidays, Rodeo.  That must have been really hard.”

Jack: (Introspective) “Well, life is hard.  We got through it, though.  And I must say, Pa started treating Ma much better after that..at least for awhile.”

Ennis: “Does Lureen like Christmas?”

Jack: “Aw yeah!  That woman lives for the holiday: that social climber.  She uses every Christmas to put on a party and invite our customers and their families.  Well, she only invites those people who spend the most money at the dealership.”

Ennis: (Amused) “You never said a word about hosting big Christmas parties, Jack!”

Jack: (Scowling) “I try to forget about things like that, friend.  Every year I have to play host to people who seem to look down on me.  My role is to walk around, mingle and sometimes I have to help pass out appetizers!  No fun at all.”

Ennis: (Thoughtful) “I’m trying to image you, all dressed up, walking and talking to Lureen’s snobby friends.”

Jack: “Well it ain’t no fun, believe me.”

Ennis:  (Playful) “You know what?  All this talk has me feeling a bit frisky!  You want a drink..and then we can, well, play?”

Jack: (Incredulous) “Man, what is it with you?  We’ll never get to the lake, will we?”

Ennis: (Laughing) “What lake?  Listen, let me get you a drink and I’ll meet you in the bedroom.”

To be Continued…
Title: Getting to Know You, Christmas Edition (3)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 23, 2008, 11:18:23 pm
The lovemaking was more warm and generous than urgent and frenetic.  Jack and Ennis were once again snuggled in each other’s arms.  This time, Jack asked the questions:

Jack:  “Now, Friend, what was a typical DelMar Christmas like?”

Ennis:  (Kissing Jack’s hair) “Well, pretty darn simple.  Like your family, we didn’t have a lot of money.  Hell, with 3 kids, you guys were probably a lot better off than we were.”

Jack: “I don’t know about that, Cowboy!”

Ennis: (Smiling) “Believe it, Rodeo.”  Anyway, most Christmases my dad took me and K.E. into the woods with him to chop down a tree for the house.  The three of us would haul it back to the ranch and ma and my sister would decorate.  I don’t remember many presents.  Most of our gifts were hand made and ma did the making.”

Jack: (Solemn) “No toy trucks?”

Ennis: (Whispering) “No, not that I remember.  But one year pa bought me a toy horse, and K.E. got a toy cow.  We had to share a model sized ranch.  I think my sis got a big, beautiful doll that year.”

Jack:  “What happened that year?  Where did your pa get the money?”

Ennis: “I don’t know.  I was just about 10 and didn’t know anything about how Pa got his money.  I just remember that year as one of the best we ever had.”

Jack:  “What did your ma get?”

Ennis: “If I remember correctly, she got a box of handkerchiefs with her initials embroidered on them.”

Jack:  “That sounds mighty pretty.”

Ennis: “Pretty things for a pretty lady.”

Jack: “Your ma was pretty?”

Ennis: (Proudly) “Beautiful!”

Jack: (Huskily) “I don’t doubt that for a moment.  I bet you even look like her.”

Ennis: “So I’ve been told.”

Jack moved closer and placed his hand further down Ennis’ anatomy.

Ennis: (Laughing) “What..you don’t want to get dressed and head for the lake?”

Jack: (Shaking his head) “Hell no.  Now come here…”

To be Continued
Title: Getting to Know You, Christmas Edition (Conclusion)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 25, 2008, 12:25:19 am
Ennis pulled a small package from under Don Wroe’s massive couch.  He tapped Jack on the shoulder and placed it in front of him.  “Wait Cowboy,” Jack protested.  “We said we wouldn’t do this.”  “Shut up Jack and open the damn package!”  Jack didn’t hesitate.  He ripped the wrapping off the small box and was delighted to see a brand new set of gold plated cuff links.  Jack was smiling from ear to ear as he inspected his gift.  “These are just beautiful, Ennis,” Jack beamed as he placed them before the light.  “But you shouldn’t have.  You got 2 daughters to buy presents for!"  Ennis waved the objection away.  “Don’t worry about that, Darlin.  I’ve been doing real good for myself at work, and besides, I saved for your gift for almost a year.”  Jack turned away from his lover to hide the moisture pooling in his blue eyes.  He walked into the bedroom and returned with a large box, elaborately gift wrapped.  Ennis brightened as Jack handed him his gift.  “Now look at you,” Ennis enthused as he shook the box.  “Good thing I did bring you something!”  “Just open it, Cowboy!” Jack whispered.  Ennis did as he was told.  He gasped as he saw several dressed shirts, each a different shade and design, peeking from the box.  His initials were embroidered on every sleeve.

Jack watched as Ennis’ eyes bulged.  “Jack, I don’t know what to say!”  Jack was silent.  There was a rhyme and reason behind the gift, but he would keep that to himself.  “I’m glad you like them, Friend.  Wear one of them to take your girls out to a nice dinner.”  “And you wear those cuff links to one of Lureen’s fancy shindigs!”  Jack nodded.  The game continued:

Jack: “What did you get the girls for Christmas?”

Ennis:  “I haven’t done that yet.  I think I’ll get Alma Jr. a blouse and Jenny a small purse.”

Jack: “They like clothes?  They like to dress up?”

Ennis:  “Sure.  Especially Alma Jr.  That girl would live in a department store if she could."

Jack: “What about Alma.  You getting something for her?”

Ennis (Squirming) “Yeah, but I don’t know what just yet.”

Jack thought ahead to Christmas without Ennis.  He allowed the tears to well, and didn’t bother to hide them.  Ennis noticed and pulled him close.  “None of that, Rodeo,” Ennis soothed.  “It will be okay.  Just go home to your family and hold your head up high.  I’m having a hard time facing the holiday, but we gotta make the best of it.”  Jack held on tight and nodded.  “Besides, we’ll be together in another 3 months time.  Hold on to that!”  Jack reached up and searched for Ennis’ lips.  Ennis pressed his mouth down on Jack’s kisser.  The moment was bittersweet.

Fin
Title: One Good Deed
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 02, 2009, 01:16:36 am
“Sirs, can you help?”  The young man was about 20, very trim, and his full, sensuous mouth looked ashen either from lack of food or water, or both!  Jack and Ennis were facing the tent, looking at their handiwork when the voice almost made them jump out of their skins.  Jack was the first to turn around and behold the young man.  Ennis saw him a mere second later, and was struck by how much the man resembled him when he was that age.

Jack wondered where the man came from, and how much he had witnessed.  Both Ennis and Jack chose the site in the highest regions of the Tetons for their rendezvous thinking that most people would be at home during the first few days of the New Year, and not out camping high in the frigid mountains.  But they were wrong!  Jack walked closer to the young man, and noticed instantly how much he looked like his friend standing right behind him.  “You scared us, Friend,” Jack spoke, gently.  Ennis walked over and stood beside Jack.  He placed a hand on his lover’s shoulder.  “You said you need help?” Ennis asked.  “What can we do for you?”

The young man told Ennis and Jack all about his layoff from his job months ago and how he had to support a wife and 2 children on unemployment.  The unemployment check was barely enough to keep his family fed, which meant that the house he and his wife saved for years to buy was lost.  Ennis and Jack listened intently while the young man pointed to a distance along the clearing.  He said that his wife and 2 children were waiting for him.  They were living in their car!  Jack was moved by the young man’s plight.  “Take us to your family and we’ll see what we can do!”  It was Jack.  The young man, whose name was Van, smiled weakly and turned to walk down the clearing.  Ennis looked back at the tent, and satisfied that everything was secure, set off with Jack.

To be Continued...
Title: SNIT
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 04, 2009, 04:37:21 pm
Ennis was instantly reassured when Jack whispered, “its okay, its okay!”  The tenderness of Jack’s words melted any resolve and hesitation that Ennis felt just moments ago.  Some moments ago, Ennis was apprehensive about climbing inside the tent to "see" his friend.  But how could he resist?  Just one glance at the sexy Jack Twist lying there shirtless and calm and Ennis was a goner.

Ennis never felt so free in his entire life.  He realized that he really needed, craved what Jack offered.  The sex the night before was liberating, if not a bit frightening, thus the torment!  How could he not be queer if he actually made love to a man and enjoyed it?  Ennis chased the thought from his mind.  There was nothing wrong with cuddling with a pal, was there? 

Jack’s kisses soothed him.  So very tender!  Ennis felt himself massaging Jack’s chest; holding on for dear life!  And he didn’t object when Jack moved over him, kissed him so long and sweet.  What happened next, Ennis chose to leave somewhere in the folds of his imagination.  The memory was filed away, safe, ready and waiting to be retrieved when he felt lonely and afraid.
Title: Stay with Me!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 05, 2009, 09:55:37 pm
Jack was always a romantic at heart.  He was also a very considerate, generous, tender lover.  Ennis learned this shortly after Jack cuddled him for the first time, and then loved him practically non-stop for the rest of the night.  The poor sheep: once again they had only a blue dog to watch over them.

“Stay with me awhile longer?” Jack whispered into Ennis’ hair.  “I promise you won’t be sorry!”  Ennis considered Jack’s proposal.  He would have loved to stay with his friend and surrender to his sweet lovemaking.  But he was being paid to do a job, and Jack was actually keeping him from doing it.

“I gotta go, Jack!” Ennis stated, emphatically as he pulled on his shirt.  Jack pouted a bit, but he remained silent.  Ennis noticed the tension, but Jack would have to suck it up.  “Look Jack, we need to do right by Aguirre.  I have a feeling we may need to work for him again!”  Jack couldn’t think that far ahead when in his sights was an impossibly handsome, well built man pulling on his jeans.  “Maybe tonight…?”  Jack shouted after his lover.  But Ennis had already mounted his mare and was headed toward the mountain. 



Title: I Gotta Sing?
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 05, 2009, 10:28:39 pm
Ennis had a love/hate relationship with the Methodist Church.  It was a decent enough place with a fine preacher and a large congregation, but Ennis often felt that some of the members knew about him and Jack.  He often attended Sunday Service and winced when Pastor Martin told the flock how homosexuals would burn in hell if they failed to repent and leave their wicked ways behind!  That sort of message was preached way too often for Ennis’ tastes.  That fire and brimstone crowd was often too much for him.

A few weeks after returning from a trip with Jack, Alma announced a special father/daughter day at the Methodist Church.  Ennis pulled the Sunday paper over his face in an attempt to ignore his wife’s news.  Daddy,” Alma Jr. exclaimed after her mother had finished.  “Why don’t we all go together to the service?”  “I won’t be going, dear!”  It was Alma.  “This particular service is only for daddies and daughters and is scheduled for next Thursday night.  I won’t be going.”  “All the better,” Alma Jr. thought, ruefully.  Alma Jr. was at the age when daughters often perceived their mothers as rivals.  “Honey,” Alma began, focusing her attention on her husband.   “I told them you would sing!”  Ennis made a face like he had gas or something.  His girls cheered while Alma stared at him, smugly.  “I gotta sing?”  Ennis was beginning to panic.  He sang solo in church before and everyone really enjoyed it.  But Ennis realized that he was hardly in the mood to deliver a solo, and only a few nights away.  “Daddy, c’mon, you’ll do just fine!”  Jenny spoke up for the first time.  “I want to hear you sing “Saved by the Blood of The Lamb. Will you do that for me?” Ennis looked at his youngest and had to smile.  If only she knew what memories that hymn title conjured up.  But how could he disappoint her?

Ennis and his children were escorted to their seats by Mrs. Wolfe, a plumb middle aged woman who wore a starched white usher’s uniform.   He was rather nervous as he eyed the program, and found that he would be called on to sing after Mr. McLean recited a religious poem.  Ennis steeled himself.  He sat right in the middle of his girls and held hands with the both of them.  “And now Brother Del Mar will favor us with a solo!”  Brother Ashford was the Master of Ceremony and handed Ennis the mike.  Ennis nodded to the pianist and belted out Jenny’s favorite hymn in his scratchy, raspy voice.  He was terrified, but did well at hiding it.  When he was finished, the entire congregation stood and applauded.  Ennis returned to his seat avoiding the eyes of the parishioners as they applauded him.  “I was that good?” Ennis thought, his face red.  He took his seat and blushed again as Jenny tenderly kissed one cheek and Alma Jr. kissed the other.  What a feeling! Ennis placed his arms around his girl’s shoulders and pulled them close.  He had a feeling that his singing days were not over; not by a long shot.  And somehow, Ennis was okay with that.


Title: Cut Short
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 12, 2009, 11:23:10 pm
“Uh oh, I sense trouble,” Ennis observed as he studied Jack’s face.  He had yet to see his lover so stricken.  Jack’s eyes were darting, washed-out blue slits, and his mouth was drawn up in a crease lined pout.  Jack averted his eyes from his man.  He was ashamed at himself for allowing his stress to show.  He wanted his time away with Ennis to be worry free: a love fest.  But Jack was fretting about a few things back home, and he couldn’t hide it.

“What is it, Darlin?” Ennis asked, concerned.  “Ah it’s just Bobby, Friend,” Jack lamented.  “Bobby?” Ennis repeated, disbelieving.  “What about Bobby?”  Jack told Ennis the whole story about Bobby being a bit slow in school and how Lureen didn’t seem to care that much.  He also went into detail about his meeting with Bobby’s teacher and her dislike for him, since he complained so much.  “You have every right to complain, Rodeo,” Ennis spoke, reassuringly.  “I would do the same if it was one of my girls.”

“What are you gonna do, Jack?”  Ennis looked at his friend, serious.  “What do you think about going home and talking to Bobby’s teacher about getting a tutor?”  Jack looked at the cold, hard ground.  He didn’t trust Lureen to speak to the teacher, but he didn’t want to cut his time short with Ennis.  “Why don’t we do this,” Jack began.  “We can eat, sleep, screw and hunt like the world is coming to an end, but I leave in a few days to see about my son.”  Jack couldn’t look Ennis in the eyes, but somehow he knew that his lover would understand.  “I’m okay with that,” Ennis stated matter-of-factly.  Ennis pulled Jack into his arms and favored him with a slow, steady kiss.  Well, if we’re going to cut this party short, we better get on with it!”  Jack shook his head in the affirmative and followed Ennis into the cabin.
Title: Oil Change
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 15, 2009, 10:45:56 pm
Ennis walked up to where Jack was sitting on a folding chair, whittling some sort of figure from a log he found around camp.  Ennis sat down beside him and squeezed his right knee.  “Before we leave, Rodeo, I’m going to need my oil changed.”  Jack glanced up from his carving and smiled demurely at his lover.  “Well, that’s a racy way of putting it, Friend, but I suppose we can go into the tent once more before we head on out.”  Ennis had to laugh!  “Get your mind out of the gutter, fool,” he countered.  “I really need my oil changed on the truck.”

It was Jack’s turn to laugh.  “Oh, I thought you meant something else,” Jack exclaimed, amused.  Ennis pulled himself up and reached a hand out to Jack.  “C’mon, get up.  I really need to have this done before I drive off.”  Jack grabbed Ennis’ hand and allowed himself to be pulled up to a standing position.  He tossed the figure he was carving and gave Ennis his undivided attention.  “You know how to change the oil, don’t you,” Ennis inquired.  “Yeah, of course,” Jack spoke.  “I can do it in my sleep, you know that!”  “Good,” Ennis said, as he walked toward his vehicle.  “Follow me.”

Ennis handed Jack a can of oil and left to pack up the rest of his things.  He watched as Jack bent over, his toned and firm buttocks high up in the air before his entire form disappeared beneath the truck.  The sight of Jack’s buns left Ennis breathless.  He tried to busy himself to divert his mind from sex, but it was no good.  When Jack emerged from under the truck, the job all done, Ennis walked over and helped him up.  “The oil changer is finished, sir,” Jack said, saluting.  “Is there anything else I can do for you?”  Ennis couldn’t resist.  He grabbed his lover and gently lowered him to the cold ground. 
Title: Love Bites
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 19, 2009, 07:18:52 pm
Jack really craved the silent, cozy times.  He loved the easy way that Ennis rested underneath him, never moving a muscle, tolerating the weight of a tall man atop him.  Jack rested his head in the crook of Ennis’ strong neck, and nuzzled gently.  Ennis purred, sighed, and traced a finger along Jack’s spine.

Jack placed tiny bites along Ennis neck bone but was careful to avoid giving his lover a hickey. Ennis was no longer a married man, but there was another: Cassie might see a raised love bite on Ennis’ neck and ask questions.  Jack wasn’t happy about Cassie, but he didn’t want to cause problems for his man.  Thus the tiny bites!  Ennis sure tasted good!

Ennis tightened his hold on Jack, which suited him just fine.  Jack moved his mouth from Ennis’ throat and searched out his lips.  Ennis raised his head a bit and pouted in preparation for Jack.  The kiss was sweet and a bit wet, just like the kisses to Ennis’ neck just moments ago.  Content now, Jack decided it was time for a rest before the next round.  He placed his head gently on Ennis’ chest and smiled as his lover kissed his hair. 



 
Title: The Program
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 19, 2009, 07:46:14 pm
Ennis opened his closet door and glanced over Jack’s "shrine" to the bottom of the space where he kept his work boots.  Ennis selected his best pair and closed the door.  He did good this time: no tears or straightening the postcard that always seemed to hang askew when the closet door opened.  Ennis sat down on his small bed and donned his boots.  He would head out for the ranch after a bit of breakfast and a cup of stale coffee.  Yes, Ennis was proud of himself!  He managed to get into his closet without losing his composure.  He wondered how long his resolve would last.  He allowed his mind to wander to a small “document” placed at the back of the shrine: Jack’s funeral program.  Ennis stayed seated as he thought of the bizarre visit he received just last month:

He didn’t know how she knew where to find him, or even why she would visit.  But there she was – the prettiest woman in Texas, or so Jack called her – and Ennis had to agree with Jack's assessment.  She never said a word when he opened the door to the trailer, but none were needed.  Ennis somehow knew that Jack's widow stood before him.  He stood there at the stoop and observed the woman.  She was dressed simply in a beige coat and wore a black fedora on her blond locks.  She carried a large chocolate brown duffle bag that had the initials LV placed all over it.  The woman looked well kept.  She smiled at him, reached in her pocketbook and held up a folded sheet of paper.  She placed it in Ennis’ hand, and without a word, walked away to a car that was parked at the end of the road.  He let her go.

Ennis couldn’t look at the program.  He didn’t even know for sure what he was holding until he glanced at it briefly and saw Jack’s picture there.  What else could it be?  After he was sure Lureen was long gone, Ennis placed Jack's funeral program on a shelf behind the shirts.  It was still there; had been hidden for over a month, but Ennis never looked at it.  He fetched himself a cup of coffee and decided to skip breakfast.  As he left the trailer, he took one last look at the closet and allowed the thought of the program to enter his head.  Perhaps he could muster the strength to look at it one day, but for now, he didn’t have the power.

Title: Bad News by TOYcoon
Post by: Toycoon on January 22, 2009, 01:33:28 am
Aguirre appeared again on horseback like an unwelcome encore with news that there was some big storm approaching; Jack and Ennis had to bring the sheep down right now and that Jack's uncle Harold hadn't died after all but everything in Jack's world just had the wind knocked out of it. 

"This jus' don't seem fair! How I am gonna explain to Ennis, we gotta go... we gotta quit this thing? The money? Shee-it," thought Jack knowing full well that their 'thing', their beautiful thing, had no name? None that either man could ever find the right words for.

Jack wept as he took the last post off of the tent and rolled it up with the other posts; he wiped his eyes and face with his sleeve and only smiled when Ennis rode up on his horse.
Title: Re: Bad News by TOYcoon
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 22, 2009, 04:50:24 pm
Aguirre appeared again on horseback like an unwelcome encore with news that there was some big storm approaching; Jack and Ennis had to bring the sheep down right now and that Jack's uncle Harold hadn't died after all but everything in Jack's world just had the wind knocked out of it. 

"This jus' don't seem fair! How I am gonna explain to Ennis, we gotta go... we gotta quit this thing? The money? Shee-it," thought Jack knowing full well that their 'thing', their beautiful thing, had no name? None that either man could ever find the right words for.

Jack wept as he took the last post off of the tent and rolled it up with the other posts; he wiped his eyes and face with his sleeve and only smiled when Ennis rode up on his horse.


Gorgeous writng, Love!  Thanks for posting this; I really enjoyed reading through it. 
Title: The Meal
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 25, 2009, 10:30:50 pm
Ennis took the first bite of cheese, and reached back while Jack took a tiny slice.  And so it went: Ennis nibbled a little bit and jack followed.  Ennis enjoyed these sensuous meals!  Dining from the same plate seemed beyond sexy.  Ennis thought back to that time up on the mountain when the “tradition” began:

Jack prepared supper as usual that night, but he couldn’t locate the extra plate.  He saw no other solution but to share the one plate that he could find with his friend.  Oh, he could have eaten his fill before Ennis rode into camp, but Jack wasn’t hungry, and besides, he had to wonder what it would be like to share a plate with Ennis.  When Del Mar sat down on a log and waited to be fed, he looked up at Jack, dumbfounded when he was made to understand the situation.  How like Ennis to go with the flow.  He learned to bide his time while Jack took his turn at the meal.  Ennis found that he rather enjoyed it; he even fed Jack a few fingers full of beans.

Ennis smiled and stuffed a piece of bread into Jack’s mouth.  He watched, a sexy twinkle in his eye, as Jack chewed, his eyes closed.  Jack cut the T-bone into manageable chunks.  Ennis laughed as they both grabbed for the same piece of meat.  “Hold on, baby,” Jack laughed, as he picked up a juicy cut of meat.  “There is plenty more where this came from! Here, let me give you some!”  Ennis opened his mouth wide to receive the chuck of steak.  He savored the treat and asked for a bit more.  Jack was only happy to oblige.
Title: Shampoo
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 31, 2009, 12:05:49 am
Jack was leaning back on the edge of the couch, watching as Ennis peeled a batch of potatoes.  He was amused at the look of determination on his lover’s face as he placed the knife just so against the skin of the spud.  Jack brightened as Ennis looked up from his chore and treated him to a lazy wink.  Jack lived for these tender moments.

Once the potatoes were peeled and sliced into steak fries, Jack stood and pulled Ennis to his feet.  “Just watching you work there really made me hot, Friend,” Jack muttered, smoothly.  “Why don’t we forget about dinner for awhile and retire to the bathroom.”  “The bathroom?” Ennis exclaimed, not sure he had heard.   Jack smiled that smile of his.  “Yeah.  I want to wash your hair!”  Ennis knew it was futile to second guess his lover, or even examine his motives.  He knew one thing though: if Jack thought washing his hair was worthwhile, he couldn’t argue.  Knowing Jack, he was in for a good time.

Jack removed Ennis’ clothes, slowly, languidly.  He reached into the medicine cabinet and removed a high-end sounding shampoo from the shelf and motioned Ennis to follow him into the shower.  Ennis was puzzled.  He figured that Jack would seat him on one of the chairs, or lower his head into the sink, but the shower?  Ennis shrugged and followed Jack in.  Jack poured a dime’s size of shampoo on Ennis’ head and pushed him gently under the stream of hot water.  He lathered the liquid into froth and massaged it into Ennis’ hair.  Jack had a very strong hand, and he was very thorough in cleaning Ennis’ hair.  But Ennis expected more, much more.  When Jack alighted from the shower and fetched a towel, Ennis remained there and looked at Jack, his head cocked to the side.  When Jack noticed that Ennis didn’t follow him out, he peeped in through the steam.  “What are you waiting for, Friend?” Jack asked, perplexed.  “Your hair is nice and clean now.”  Ennis rubbed at the fogged up glass and stared at his man.  “That’s it?  I expected a bit more from you, Rodeo!”  Jack didn’t miss a beat.  “Why?  Your hair smelled mighty rank there, Ennis.  You needed help my friend,” Jack exclaimed, innocently.  He had a second to react, as Ennis was out of the shower in a shot and chased him out of the bathroom into the master bedroom.  “I needed help, eh?” Ennis screamed as he tacked Jack and knocked him down onto Don Wroe’s king sized bed.  “You’re gonna need help after I’m through with you!”  Jack had no choice but to surrender.  He laughed and spread his arms wide enough to enfold his lover in a tender embrace.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dobie1018 on January 31, 2009, 08:50:15 pm
Ahhhhhh. . . . wonderful Littlewing!  I am really enjoying reading your stories!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 31, 2009, 09:18:37 pm
Ahhhhhh. . . . wonderful Littlewing!  I am really enjoying reading your stories!

Thanks so much, Dobie.  How kind of you to read and comment.  I didn't think anyone read my stories anymore.  It is good to know that someone is enjoying them.  Thanks, again!  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dobie1018 on January 31, 2009, 09:23:14 pm
Oh you're welcome Littlewing.  I love fan fiction, especially when it's written about the boys and their romantic encounters!  Keep it up - you are really talented!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 31, 2009, 09:40:35 pm
Oh you're welcome Littlewing.  I love fan fiction, especially when it's written about the boys and their romantic encounters!  Keep it up - you are really talented!

Thanks  Love!  :)  It seems like I can't stop.  I have a million romantic stories to tell about our beloved boys.  I'm just getting started!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on February 01, 2009, 01:05:30 pm
Thanks  Love!  :)  It seems like I can't stop.  I have a million romantic stories to tell about our beloved boys.  I'm just getting started!

It's true, Littlewing. You are queen of romantic, sexy Brokeback fanfic. Viva Littlewing!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 01, 2009, 08:12:50 pm
It's true, Littlewing. You are queen of romantic, sexy Brokeback fanfic. Viva Littlewing!

Why, thanks, Baby!  :-*
Title: What's New? (1)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 09, 2009, 11:28:49 pm
“So what’s new, Friend?” Jack asked, truly interested.  He and Ennis were on horseback, and Jack had to shout over the gentle roar of the stream as the horses trudged along, unafraid of the rushing water.  Ennis was silent, thoughtful.  He was able to hear Jack just fine, but he didn’t have much news to report.  “Oh not much, Rodeo,” Ennis spoke, finally.  I’m just working hard to provide for the family.  What’s new with you?”  Jack didn’t answer, but shook his head in the negative.  Ennis knew what Jack meant.  No news, good, bad or otherwise.

When the horses carried the men to the other side of the stream, Ennis was the first to dismount, and he helped Jack’s mare get her footing onto the bank.  Ennis held a hand out for Jack, and he dismounted, easy as pie.  “You’re getting real good at riding, Jack,” Ennis observed.  Jack beamed, but he reserved comment.  He didn’t dare tell his lover about the weekend’s horseback riding and camping out in the woods with a Mr. Randall Malone.  Jack valued his life.

Lunch was a few salami sandwiches and chips eaten on a disused picnic table at an abandoned campsite.  Jack swiped at the flies and ants that were attracted to their food.  Ennis didn’t notice the tiny vermin and ate heartily.  He thought back to the father/daughter service at church just a few weeks ago and realized that he did have news.

Title: What's New? (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 09, 2009, 11:32:56 pm
“Jack, I do have something new to tell you about, but I don’t know how interested you’ll be.”  Jack took a bite of his sandwich and nodded.  “Well, why don’t you tell me your news and we’ll see.  If something out of the ordinary happened, I want to know about it.”  “Okay, Darlin,” Ennis began. 

“I was eating dinner one night when there came a knock at the door,” Ennis spoke, between bites.  “Alma opened up and in walked 3 men that walked right past my wife and kids and approached me at my table.”  Jack was intrigued.  “Well go on, Friend,” Jack coaxed, his sandwich all but forgotten.  “What happened after that?”  “The tall man, a man I recognized, asked me to come outside with them so we could talk.”  Jack didn’t say a word, but was transfixed.  “They asked me to join them,” Ennis blurted out, his mouth full.”  “What did you say?” Jack whispered.  “Talk to me when you’ve chewed your food.  I can’t understand what you.”  But Jack had heard every word, and wanted, need clarification.  Three men asked him to join them?  Join them for what?

Ennis swallowed his mouthful and continued: “Jack, they were men from the church.  They heard me singing and wanted to get together a men’s group to sing every Sunday, and perhaps travel to other churches to sing.”  Jack let out an audible sigh.  Nothing wrong with what Ennis said, but he had to admit that if Ennis was asked to participate in a little something something with other men, well, it would absolve Jack of a boat load of guilt.  But Jack should have known better.  There was no other man but him for Ennis.  Jack knew it, and Ennis knew it.  Jack was glad of it.  “You must have been really good, Friend,” Jack remarked, a lilt in his voice.  What did you say to them?”  “I told them I would think about it,” Ennis answered.  Jack nodded and smiled at his friend.  “Maybe you can sing for me when we get back to camp?”  “Mebbe,” Ennis said.  “C’mon, let’s get back to camp, and perhaps later on tonight I’ll sing you a song.”
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dobie1018 on February 10, 2009, 10:00:41 am
Sweet!  And an interesting direction you're going in here!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 11, 2009, 10:40:42 pm
Sweet!  And an interesting direction you're going in here!

Thanks, Babe!  Thanks so much for reading and commenting.  :)
Title: What's New? (3)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 11, 2009, 11:26:32 pm
Once back in camp, Ennis built a fire to keep warm, keep the predators at bay, and to heat dinner.  This trip was rather rushed, with very little planning involved.  Jack sent Ennis a postcard on the off chance that he might be free for a weekend of fishing in the next few days.  Ennis figured he didn’t have much else to do since he was laid off from the ranch.  His search for another gig was turning up nothing, and he figured he could use the break.  When he returned Jack’s note, he told Alma about the trip.  She didn’t mind, as she was tired of Ennis underfoot all day and night.  There was not much time to plan, and Ennis kept the supply list simple.  He brought cold cuts, a pre-cooked meat loaf that Alma made just for the occasion, and a variety of chips and sodas and other snacks.  Jack brought vegetables, condiments, cutlery and the tent.  Ennis found the meat loaf and placed it on a pan to heat.  Jack peeled a few potatoes and onions and piled the mixture in a greased pan next to the meat loaf.  A simple dinner, but yummy just the same.

When the meal was consumed, Ennis couldn’t believe he had eaten so much.  He almost cursed himself for his gluttony.  Jack was only happy to see his friend with an appetite, and he caused quite a bit of damage himself.  Ennis lumbered off the log from where he sat and fell softly to the cold earth.  He loosened his belt and let out a loud belch.  “What did you say, friend?”  Jack was laughing, his eyes gleaming.  Ennis smiled.  “I know I shouldn’t have eaten that meat loaf, Jack,” he began.  “But meat loaf is one of my favorites and Alma sure can fix it.  You liked it?”  Jack rubbed his swollen belly.  “Sure did, boy,” he managed.  “But now I want to go to sleep.”  Ennis nodded his agreement.  “It’s too heavy.  We’ll both be asleep in a few minutes.”  Jack moved over and sat next to his lover.  “Not before you tell me about church and your singing.”

Ennis placed an arm around Jack’s shoulder and pulled him close.  “Well, I guess I can tell you what happened.  Where do you want me to start?”  Jack settled his head on Ennis’ shoulder.  “Start wherever you want, but I want to hear what happened from the beginning.”  Ennis told Jack all about Alma and how she volunteered him to sing at the father/daughter service in church.  He related how nervous he was and how he didn’t need to be, since the entire congregation cheered him when he finished his song.  Jack nodded on Ennis’ every word.  “Will you sing for me?” Ennis pulled Jack even closer.  “Not right now, Darlin,” he whispered.  “I know you.  If I sing to you and start rocking you, you’ll fall asleep.”  Jack had to laugh at that, as he knew Ennis spoke the truth.  “You don’t want me to go to sleep?” Jack asked, huskily.  “What did you have in mind?”  Ennis pulled Jack into a full-on sweet kiss.  “Let me have my way with you, right there in that tent, right now, and we’ll see about that song.”  Jack was excited.  “Okay, Friend, you’re on!  Last one in has to do the dishes!”
Title: Blue Eyes by TOYcoon
Post by: Toycoon on February 12, 2009, 01:35:50 am
Jack spotted Ennis from across the grassy field sitting alone, with his head hung low and obviously in deep thought; "Boy, that Ennis Del Mar sure is a complicated fella, wonder what he thinkin' 'bout?" 

"Blue eyes... Momma would'a liked Jack's blue eyes, she liked purty things," Ennis thought, smiling wistfully as he recollected the way his mother would sometimes gaze into his father's steely eyes; "Daddy would'a wondered why I was hanging 'round rodeo fuck ups, " That boy looks like a queer ta me." Ennis' hands tightened into fists.

Ennis' concentration broke when he felt the rope from Jack's lasso fall down around his shoulders.



Title: Re: Blue Eyes by TOYcoon
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 12, 2009, 03:33:49 pm
Jack spotted Ennis from across the grassy field sitting alone, with his head hung low and obviously in deep thought; "Boy, that Ennis Del Mar sure is a complicated fella, wonder what he thinkin' 'bout?" 

"Blue eyes... Momma would'a liked Jack's blue eyes, she liked purty things," Ennis thought, smiling wistfully as he recollected the way his mother would sometimes gaze into his father's steely eyes; "Daddy would'a wondered why I was hanging 'round rodeo fuck ups, " That boy looks like a queer ta me." Ennis' hands tightened into fists.

Ennis' concentration broke when he felt the rope from Jack's lasso fall down around his shoulders.





Wow, honey, but this is a sweet little tale.  I'm really impressed!  You really conveyed a lot of emotion and detail with so few words.  Will you continue this?  I'm dying to know what happens next!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on February 12, 2009, 11:09:32 pm
Ennis is kinda pissed off; you know it ain't gonna end well!

You could always take the story in another direction, Miss Littlewing. You know I like it when you put your special spin on things!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 12, 2009, 11:59:53 pm
Ennis is kinda pissed off; you know it ain't gonna end well!

You could always take the story in another direction, Miss Littlewing. You know I like it when you put your special spin on things!

Funny you should say this, Love!  I was just thinking about your fic and was wondering if I should add my own touch to it.  You've given me permission, and I'll try to have the continuation up tomorrow!
Title: Blue Eyes (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 17, 2009, 11:30:17 pm
Ennis glanced down to the rope tightening around his broad shoulders, and then across to those laughing blue eyes.  Jack’s azure orbs darkened a bit and danced as he tugged tight at the rope.  Ennis stood very still as Jack pulled. 

But Jack’s grip faltered when Ennis began to pull back.  Ennis’ hazel eyes never left Jack’s blue ones as he grappled the rope from around his shoulders.  Ennis’ mouth widened into a sly smile when he noticed how tightly Jack grasped his end of the rope.  And with a mighty pull, Ennis fell to the ground, Jack falling right on top of him.

The wind was blown right from Ennis’ lungs as Jack’s full weight crushed him.  But Ennis didn’t care.  He looked into the face of his lover: a face twisted from shock, physical force, and yes, lust.  Ennis pulled Jack closer atop him and cradled his head.  “You okay, Rodeo?” He asked his lover in a voice both tender and playful.  Jack nodded in the affirmative.  “You surprised me, Friend,” Jack sputtered as Ennis cupped his face in his rough hewn hands.  “I did, huhn?”  Ennis laughed.  Jack didn’t need to answer.  One look at Ennis’ ripe, sensuous mouth and he was a goner.  Jack opened his mouth wide and drew Ennis’ lips in.  The kiss was so sweet that Ennis felt more winded than when Jack fell on top of him.  The prospect of the job ending was forgotten. 


Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Dobie1018 on February 18, 2009, 12:42:14 pm
Very nice Littlewing.  I love reading about how in love the boys are with each other!   Keep it up!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 20, 2009, 08:25:39 pm
Very nice Littlewing.  I love reading about how in love the boys are with each other!   Keep it up!


Thanks, Dobie!  Thanks so much for reading and commenting. I'll certainly keep the stories coming, as time permits!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: LauraGigs on February 21, 2009, 12:08:44 am
Yes this is great!  Almost 450 pages of sweet-hot stories!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 21, 2009, 07:10:09 pm
Yes this is great!  Almost 450 pages of sweet-hot stories!

Thanks, Laura!  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on February 22, 2009, 04:23:03 pm
Yes this is great!  Almost 450 pages of sweet-hot stories!

Hello there Miss Laura!
Long time no see. I'm delighted to find that you're still keeping up with the folks here at the "Jack with Ennis Fanfic Game". We miss ya something awful!

Do ya think Heath will win the Academy Award tonight? I certainly hope so (but I ain't holding my breath!).
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 23, 2009, 01:15:24 am
Hello there Miss Laura!
Long time no see. I'm delighted to find that you're still keeping up with the folks here at the "Jack with Ennis Fanfic Game". We miss ya something awful!

Do ya think Heath will win the Academy Award tonight? I certainly hope so (but I ain't holding my breath!).

Hey, Toy, Heath won!  He won!
Title: In Synch
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 25, 2009, 12:07:01 am
Right from the start, Ennis and Jack moved in synch.  Ennis watched as Jack started toward him, his stride purposeful, and his eyes on the plates that were just washed in the stream.  Just as fast as Ennis washed the dinnerware, Jack was right behind: taking the plates from Ennis’ hands, drying them with a towel, and after that, putting them away.  Ennis observed how Jack complimented him…not with words, per se, but with deeds.  They moved together like a well oiled machine.

And the nights were the same!  When the urge hit and the sheep were in danger of watching over themselves, Jack started a dinner fire and Ennis prepared vittles for cooking.  Jack roasted the beans and, if they were so fortunate, grilled a piece of steak or a filet of fish.  The meal was eaten, usually in silence.  But after the dinner dishes were left at the bank of the stream for the waves to wash clean, the fire was left to die and the lads sought warmth in the tent.

The lovemaking was ordered.  Ennis loved for Jack to be the aggressor.  He let Jack make the first move and usually allowed him to have his way.  It was easier when Jack did all the work; he didn’t really need to move a muscle.   But after Jack started it all off, a carefully choreographed dance ensued and progressed until the last shudder melted them down, and the last sigh escaped through the flap of the tent.


Title: Damn you, Jack!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 25, 2009, 11:07:37 pm
Ennis opened his 7th beer and fell onto his rickety couch.  He took a long swig of the brew and hated himself for drinking so much.  But indulging in drink was the only way he knew to dull the pain.  Ennis was never one to take pills or illicit drugs, but he had to do something to quell the torment.

So Jack had someone else, eh?  The thought was a bitter sensation that traveled from his brain and settled, swished around with the beer in his mouth.  The thought of Jack with another man was unbearable.  But was there really someone else, and if so, why make an issue of it now that Jack has passed on?  Ennis fought hard not to think on Jack’s infidelity, but when he was feeling low and when he missed Jack so bad that he felt like writhing on his marginally clean floor, Ennis had to imagine Jack’s arms around someone else to balance the pain of loss.

Ennis fought with a mental image of Jack lowering those astonishing blue eyes between some handsome man’s thighs.  That image was the worst!  It brought a level of pain that Ennis didn’t think possible.  Worse yet, it may have happened!  It was all so much that Ennis shot up with a speed and a force that knocked his coffee table on its side.  He flung his closet doors opened and grabbed at the shirts hanging there.  Ennis pulled Jack’s shirt from within his own bloody one and grabbed his switchblade from his pocket.  “I’ll do it, Jack,” he shouted as he placed the knife against the fabric of Jack’s shirt.  Just then a gust of wind assailed his trailer bringing with it a plaintiff cry.  Ennis shivered with fear and remorse and dropped the knife.  He gently folded Jack’s shirt inside of his own bloody garment.  He walked to the sink and poured what was left of his beer down the drain.  “I’m sorry Jack, I don’t know what got into me,” Ennis whispered, the tears staining his red cheeks.  “I almost hurt the best thing I ever had.”  And with that, Ennis Del Mar allowed the tears to fall.  He would be better tomorrow.




Title: Re: In Synch
Post by: Toycoon on February 25, 2009, 11:39:24 pm
Right from the start, Ennis and Jack moved in synch.  Ennis watched as Jack started toward him, his stride purposeful, and his eyes on the plates that were just washed in the stream.  Just as fast as Ennis washed the dinnerware, Jack was right behind: taking the plates from Ennis’ hands, drying them with a towel, and after that, putting them away.  Ennis observed how Jack complimented him…not with words, per se, but with deeds.  They moved together like a well oiled machine.

And the nights were the same!  When the urge hit and the sheep were in danger of watching over themselves, Jack started a dinner fire and Ennis prepared vittles for cooking.  Jack roasted the beans and, if they were so fortunate, grilled a piece of steak or a filet of fish.  The meal was eaten, usually in silence.  But after the dinner dishes were left at the bank of the stream for the waves to wash clean, the fire was left to die and the lads sought warmth in the tent.

The lovemaking was ordered.  Ennis loved for Jack to be the aggressor.  He let Jack make the first move and usually allowed him to have his way.  It was easier when Jack did all the work; he didn’t really need to move a muscle.   But after Jack started it all off, a carefully choreographed dance ensued and progressed until the last shudder melted them down, and the last sigh escaped through the flap of the tent.




I love this story, Littlewing.
You are the best writer! I just adore reading your stories about the teenage Jack and Ennis.
Keep on keeping on.

Love,
Toy
Title: Re: In Synch
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 26, 2009, 12:28:16 am
I love this story, Littlewing.
You are the best writer! I just adore reading your stories about the teenage Jack and Ennis.
Keep on keeping on.

Love,
Toy


Thanks, Babe!  :-*
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Mikaela on February 26, 2009, 12:19:48 pm
Wow, Littlewing, I've been reading backwards through the pages and your little vignettes / stories are lovely and so full of emotion... so full of love for Jack and Ennis, and so well written! Thank you!  :)

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 26, 2009, 12:52:25 pm
Wow, Littlewing, I've been reading backwards through the pages and your little vignettes / stories are lovely and so full of emotion... so full of love for Jack and Ennis, and so well written! Thank you!  :)



Mikaela, thanks so much!  I'm so glad to see that someone is actually reading my stories and enjoying them.  Writing is sort of like therapy for me: it helps me work through the sadness I witnessed in the movie.  Plus, I love to celebrate the love between the 2 boys.  Thanks for your kind words, and I'll keep the stories coming.  :)
Title: Found
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 27, 2009, 09:31:06 pm
I have found my mate!  I knew it from the very first time my eyes met his.  Oh no..before then!  How can I describe what I felt when I turned from my truck and laid eyes on the handsomest creature I ever saw? He was like a lost puppy: all desperate and defeated like he would never find home.  My heart almost shattered my chest, but I had to keep my cool.  I had to keep it all together because…well...because…he wouldn’t feel the same way, now would he? Still, in my mind, I have found my mate! I found my king.
Title: Found(2) SNIT
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 27, 2009, 10:05:40 pm
Lay your body down next to me
Forget your worries, can’t you see
Love is waiting by my side,
Your cares will flow away with the tide.

Ennis! Lay down your fears
My chest and arms are free
Let me hold you!
Come down next to me.

Don’t be afraid,
You know I’m near.
I’ll make it all better
That’s why I’m here.

That’s good - snuggle warm
Come in deep, far from harm.
No need to worry about any little thing,
You’re my mate!  You’re my king!







Title: Nurture
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 08, 2009, 12:02:43 am
Jack lowered the little lamb onto the cold earth and released it from the make-shift splint that supported it while on horseback. The tiny creature trembled a bit when it reached the ground, but Jack grabbed it almost immediately and tenderly held it in his strong arms until the shivering subsided.  Ennis watched as Jack inspected the animal for scrapes and other signs of trauma.  "What's wrong with the lamb," Ennis asked his friend as he drew closer.  "She seems a bit sluggish and wouldn't even feed.  I'm afraid she either has something irritating her, or maybe she's sick," Jack announced without even looking up. Ennis smiled as Jack continued his inspection. He was impressed!  If things had been different, that Jack Twist would have done well as a vet. 

Ennis watched over the rest of the herd as Jack pulled a good sized thorn from the lamb's left shank.  He rubbed the back of the animal's neck and carried her over to where her mother was grazing with the others.  Ennis and Jack watched as the lamb nuzzled close to her mother and began to nurse.  Ennis placed a hand on Jack's shoulder.  "Good work, Jack," Ennis exclaimed. I hope Aguirre appreciates how good you are with the sheep!"  Jack had to grin at that, and he patted the hand on his shoulder.

"I had better head back to camp and put on supper," Jack announced as he gathered his gear to load onto his mare.  "Nothing but beans and some bacon to add for seasoning.  I think I may have a few biscuits left over from last night that I can heat up."  Ennis nodded and continued to watch over the herd.  He watched in silence as Jack rode off.  Jack was quite a sexy, tantilizing sight with his rear end bouncing on the saddle.  Ennis fought the urge to put his hand into his tight jeans.  He could wait.  That Jack Twist was good with the sheep, but with Ennis, he was even better.  More better....




 

Title: Mystery Meat and Beans
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 12, 2009, 11:27:40 pm
Jack opened the can of dog food, and for the first time, took a serious look at it.  He saw that the wet Alpo had a meaty quality, even though it had a distinctive, disgusting smell.  He whistled for Bluebell and filled a small bowl full of the food for her.  Bluebell ate heartily as Jack watched.  Jack couldn't explain his mischevious streak, but knew that one day his love of practical jokes would be his undoing.  Watching Bluebell enjoy her food gave him an idea.

He left about an inch of Alpo in the can and opened a couple cans of BetterMost beans.  Jack averted his nose as he poured the remainer of the Alpo into a frying pan and separated it with a fork as it hardened and lumped into a consistency like taco meat.  Right before the dog food charred, Jack added the beans to the Alpo.  He dropped in a stick of butter and moved the mixture from the heat.  "That Ennis is in for a unique dining experience tonight," Jack chuckled.

Ennis rode in, and after securing his mare and washing up as thoroughly as was possible, sat right beside Jack on a log by the dinner fire.  He watched as Jack heaped mounds of beans and another substance he didn't recognize onto tin plates.  "What is this, Jack," Ennis asked as he was handed a plate of beans and Alpo.  "Smells well...strange."  "Don't worry about that, friend," Jack enthused.  "Eat up!"  Ennis shrugged and grabbed a fork from his friend.  He gathered a large chunk of Jack's concoction onto his fork and moved it to his mouth.  "Wait.....!!!!,"  Jack yelled with a start.  He shot straight up from his nap and realized with relief that he had been dreaming and that Ennis was nowhere to be found.  Jack rubbed his eyes and tried not to think of what would have happened if he actually fed dog food to Ennis and Ennis found out about it.  "Jack Twist, you're a crazy fool," he spoke out loud.  Jack pulled himself up and whistled for Bluebell.  Time for her lunch!
Title: On the Road
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 14, 2009, 03:14:17 pm
Jack always dreaded saying goodbye after a satisfying "fishing" expidition, but all good things had to come to an end.  Ennis and Jack were on the road back to the truck stop where Ennis left his vehicle for the week, and Jack was trying to get comfortable behind the wheel.  Jack's favorite position was feet flat on the floor of his late model red truck, his arm out the driver's side window, his right hand resting between Ennis' thighs.  Ennis liked the feel of Jack's hand moving up and down his manhood, but he had to put a stop to it.  What if he became so aroused that he needed Jack to stop?  And what would happen if some trucker in a tall cab happened along and witnessed Jack feeling him up? 

Jack respected Ennis' wishes; he even had to agree with him.  But it was so hard to sit so close to his lover and refrain from touching him.  Jack kept his eye on the road but couldn't help glancing at his husband.  The tension was so thick that neither could think of any sort of small talk to fill the hours until the truck stop came into view.  Ennis sat still and wished he could cross his legs.  He was aroused and wanted ro hide it.

But Jack noticed and felt his heart race.  He saw the bulge between Ennis' thighs and his eyes grew narrow and then bulged at the tantalizing sight.  Jack moved his hand closer to his lover, convinced that just one feel wouldn't hurt.  Ennis didn't pull away as Jack placed his hand on his manhood.  Just then, both men heard a piercing honk, looked up and saw the handsome features of a trucker looking down at them.  The man had a curious smirk on his sensuous mouth, and he pointed to the next turnoff.  Ennis sat, terrified, but Jack was the cool one.  He shrugged innocently at the trucker and shook his head.  The man saw, pouted his disappointment and turned his head toward the road.  He exited the highway and Ennis was able to breathe again.  "That was a close one, Friend," Jack whispered.  "Yeah," Ennis began, "I told you about that before, Rodeo.  One day we was bound to be caught.  You gotta control yourself in the future."  Jack nodded his agreement, but he was silent.  He couldn't help wondering what the trucker had in mind.
Title: Signal, Wyoming
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 18, 2009, 11:57:01 pm
The soreness was practically forgotten, but a dull ache seized Jack's heart.  He never even gave the bruise on his chin a thought, but his chest hurt like a bitch.  Jack couldn't keep his eyes on the road, even as he drove at a steady speed.  He couldn't resist watching Ennis clomp along, even though losing sight of his lover brought him great pain.  When Ennis dropped out of sight, Jack couldn't bear it.  He stopped abruptly, glad that no one was behind him on the road.  The truck almost turned over on its side as Jack swerved around quicker that James Bond in his Vanquish.

Jack drove back the way he had come, but where was Ennis?  He couldn't have hitched a ride that quickly?  Jack rubbed his bruised chin as he drove down the road in seacrh of his love.  He didn't get it!  Where was Ennis?  Panic set in as Jack headed back toward the jump off where he and Ennis parted ways.  Surely he didn't back-track, but Jack had to know for sure.  The foothills of Brokeback Mountain were deserted; not even a lamb or an employee in sight.  Jack sighed mightily and hung his shoulders in defeat.  He turned the truck back around, resigned to heading out to Lightning Flat and visiting his folks before heading off to the rodeo circuit.

Jack was halfway down the block when he noticed a form emerging from an alleyway.  It appeared to be a young man stooped over and holding his stomach.  The poor wretch was gripping a napsack to his stomach and wobbling.  Jack slowed and looked closer.  Ennis?  Yeah, it was Ennis del Mar, alright!  Jack came to a complete stop and hopped out of the truck.  He ran over to his friend and encircled him in his arms.  Ennis managed a wan smile as he recognized Jack.  Jack held on tight and allowed Ennis to place a heavy head on his shoulder.  It was a tender moment, and neither man cared if they were being watched.  After a moment Jack grabbed Ennis by the shoulder and held him aloft.  "Everything is gonna be fine now, Friend," Jack whispered.  "Hey, I was just going to head home for a few days and then off to Cody for rodeoing.  You want to tag along?"  Ennis couldn't talk but he could could nod: yes!  Jack tried his damnest to hide his excitement, but he couldn't help but jump up and down for joy.  "C'mon over to the truck and climb on in, Ennis," Jack said as he led his lover by the arm.  "If we leave now, we can be at my family's ranch before dinner."  "That will be fine, Rodeo," Ennis gurgled.  "That will be fine."  Jack patted Ennis gently on the shoulder.  He smiled, put the truck in gear and headed east.
Title: The Gift
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 25, 2009, 11:32:28 pm
Ennis walked up the stairs to his apartment, and paused a bit when he reached the front door.  He had a small bouquet of flowers for his wife, but he didn't know how the blooms would be received.  Once he felt strong enough emotionally to deal with Alma, Ennis turned his key in the lock and stepped inside.  Alma was sitting with Jenny, and both of his girls looked up at him as he crossed the threshold. "Flowers!" Jenny squealed, and she jumped up and down on her tiny legs, clapping at the sight of the carnations, baby's breath and roses in her father's grasp.  Alma frowned in spite of herself.  She wondered about the occassion, as Ennis rarely brought presents.  And at once it hit her: Jack Twist!  Another "fishing trip?"  Alma crossed her arms across her chest.   Eyes narrowed into slits followed her husband as he walked into the kitchen.

Alma Jr. ran into the kitchen just as Ennis found a small vase to hold the flowers.  Jenny offered to pour water into the vase, but Ennis beat her to it.  He kissed her creamy smooth brow and said, "next time, Jen.  You can water the flowers next time."  Alma laughted bitterly under her breath.  She wondered when the next time would be that her husband would bring her flowers.  Or the next time a trip with Jack Twist was imminent, Ennis might bring her chocolates.  Alma watched her family as they almost hyperventilated over the blooms.  Alma almost felt guilty about her lack of excitement.  After all, the flowers were beautiful, but were they sincerely given?

Ennis carried the flowers over to Alma and bowed low, presenting them to her.  Alma forced as smile as she reluctantly accepted the vase.  "Thanks," Alma deadpanned as she sat the vase down on the coffee table.  Ennis' face dropped almost immediately.  Alma noticed, and the guilty feelings returned.  She realized that no matter what was going down with her husband and Jack, she still loved her man.  He was the father of her girls, for heavens sake.  It was up to her to make amends.  "The flowers are beautiful, Ennis, but you shouldn't have spent the money.  What's the occassion?"  Ennis perked up a bit after hearing this, but not much.  "Oh, no reason," he whispered.  "Do I have to have a reason to bring my wife flowers?"  Alma didn't answer but wondered if Jack Twist received presents.  But there was no need to think about that.  Life was painful enough.
Title: At Last!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 31, 2009, 06:03:15 pm
Ennis glanced around in utter confusion.  His eyes were not hurting, but the light was so bright that he was having trouble getting his bearings.  He rubbed his hazel eyes and looked up again.  The light was suddenly not as bright, or perhaps he was getting used to it?  Ennis couldn't fight the confusion.  Where was he?  The last thing he remembered was lying in bed and trying to catch his breath.  He was in some sort of clinic or hospital, or something like that, and Jenny and Alma Jr. were standing by his bed, weeping bitterly.  Ennis looked down at his hands, and the mental fog began to lift.  He was lying in bed with his children standing by crying?  Ennis sighed heavily.  It can only mean one thing.

In less than a moment, Ennis could see very clearly.  And what he saw filled him with great joy.  He seemed to be alone, but he was not afraid.  How could he be afraid when all around him was light, nature unlike anything he was used to, even up on brokeback, and a curious sense of love?  Ennis accepted the fact that he was late, and he sat down on the perfect grass, patiently waiting for some sign, some direction, some person to tell him what would happen next.

He didn't have long to wait.  Ennis squinted as he glanced off into the distance.  He saw a great number coming toward him.  Ennis stood as the people gathered closer.  He felt like jumping for joy as he spied his parents nearing.  With them was a host of friends and relatives, most of them he recognized, a few he did not.  All were passed for some time.  Ennis cried as his family gathered around and enveloped him in a group hug.  It was just too much!  But when he caught a flash of blue eyes, Ennis almost dropped to his knees.  His family parted and made room for the newcomer.  Ennis couldn't see the great love of his life for the tears in his eyes.  Jack moved closer to his husband and took his hand.  "What is it, Friend?  Aren't you glad to see me?"  Ennis was so full of emotion that he couldn't speak.  He nodded and folded Jack in a gentle hug.  Jack broke away after a moment and pulled him on.  "C'mon, let me show you around.  You'll love it here, Ennis....we'll never be parted again."  Ennis squeezed Jack's hand and allowed him to lead.  He looked around at the splendor that was surrounding him, and thanked a merciful God.  He knew all of his life that there was a divine plan, and he was grateful.
Title: Think about it!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 03, 2009, 11:54:23 pm
"Hey, friend, why so glum?" Jack asked Ennis as he touched his arm, lightly.  Ennis dropped the stick he used to poke the embers of the campfire.  "Ah, Jack, I gotta move in with my brother for awhile.  It looks like the owner of my house is selling, and I have a few weeks to get my things together and find somewhere else to go."  Jack considered what Ennis just said, and he saw another opportunity to pitch his case for a sweet life together.  "Well, living with K.E. won't be so bad, would it?" Jack inquired.  Ennis shook his head.  "Jack, the last time I had to move in with my big brother was one of the worst times of my life.  One night at dinner I asked for seconds of pot roast and he flipped his lid!"  Ennis shook visibly as he related the story, and ran his fingers through his sandy colored hair.  Jack was silent, but he didn't like what he was hearing.  "K.E. embarassed me in front of his whole family," Ennis continued, his voice quivering.  "He told me that if I want some more food I had better contribute to the grocery bill, or I would be out on the street looking for somewhere else to live."  Ennis covered his eyes with a shaky hand at the memory.  Jack was appalled and hung his head low.  He always wanted a male sibling, but after hearing about Ennis' treatment at the hand of his own brother, Jack was happy to be an only child.

"You should have told me you were on the verge of being homeless, Friend," Jack whispered.  "Look, I don't have to stay married to Lureen, you know that." Ennis looked up at Jack, nervous now, but he allowed him to continue. "If you say the word, I can have us a place together in a few days," Jack exclaimed.  Ennis stared at his lover.  "Thanks for the offer, Jack, but I can't ask you to do that.  You have your family that needs you.  Don't worry about me, I'll be okay."  Ennis lifted Jack's fallen chin with a gentle finger.  Jack nodded and leaned in for a kiss.  "You should let me take care of this," Jack spoke into Ennis' ear.  "Its all I've ever wanted."  "I'll be okay," is all that Ennis could manage.

Ennis cooked a decent supper of pork chops with apple sauce, new potatoes and collard greens.  Jack ate his fill and sat down on the ground right beside his lover.  "Fine dinner, friend," Jack exclaimed as he rubbed his bloated belly.  "Thanks so much..I really enjoyed it,"  Ennis nodded and smiled.  Jack took the smile as further encouragement.  "I...I would sure like to be fed like that every night, Ennis," Jack ventured.  "Lureen is a decent cook, but she can't hold a candle to you.  Who would have thought that my boyfriend is a better cook than my wife?"  Ennis flinched a bit at the mention of "boyfriend," but Jack didn't seem to notice.  "You like it, then?" Ennis rubbed Jack's ample stomach.  "I wouldn't mind cooking for you, Rodeo.  You always seem so grateful after you eat my cooking.  I can get used to the compliments."  Jack straightened up and looked Ennis straight in the eyes.  "Think about it, Ennis," Jack said, serious.  "It can be like this for the rest of our lives.  Just thing about it."  Ennis found himself weakening a bit.  "I'll think about it, Rodeo, Ennis said, quietly.  I'll think about it.

Title: Sleepless in Childress
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 13, 2009, 10:14:51 pm
Jack couldn’t sleep!  He tossed and turned so violently that Lureen almost pushed him out of bed.  “What is wrong with you, hon,” she asked, groggily.  Jack patted his wife on her shoulder.  “I don’t know, Lureen,” he faltered.  “I’m just not sleepy, I guess.”  Lureen turned from her husband and pulled the covers.  “Well if you can’t sleep, get up and watch TV or something.  I gotta get up early in the morning!”  Jack looked at his wife’s back and shook his head.  Never mind that he also had to wake up early to get read for work.  That Lureen was always so thoughtful!

Jack sat up and slid into his house slippers.  He walked, silently, out into the hall of his home.  The TV in the living room was too close to little Bobby’s bedroom, and Jack was afraid that the noise might wake him.  Jack didn’t want to wake his son – little Bobby needed his sleep.  Jack headed for the add-on he had built just a year ago.  It was a dinky little room he built for times when he wanted to get away from the family to drink, smoke and think about Ennis Del Mar.  Jack opened the door to the tiny room and found the remote to the medium sized TV.  He snuggled into his new rocking chair and flipped channels.

There was nothing much on.  The few channels he could get were showing sales commercials and re-runs of classic TV programs.  Jack settled on a show that sold life affirming tapes.  He didn’t really care about the product, but the salesman, who was a life coach and motivational speaker, looked an awful lot like his distant lover.  Jack watched and listened as the man hawked his product.  There was something about the sandy hair, the hazel eyes, and the hypnotic cadence of his speech that soothed Jack.  In no time, Jack had fallen asleep on his rocker.  Lureen felt bad.  She didn’t really mean for Jack to leave the bed, and she went looking for him.  She found him in his “study” fast asleep, a handsome man talking non-stop on the TV.  Lureen fetched a hand-made blanket from the couch and covered her husband.  She shrugged and left the TV on, returning to the comfort of her bed.

Title: Shower
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 13, 2009, 11:24:41 pm
Jack watched Ennis soaping himself.  Ennis was aware that Jack’s eyes were on him, and he had to be aware of his husband’s growing lust.  Jack brought along a portable “shower” to hang from a tree branch or any place high, and he was glad he did.  Ennis didn’t hesitate to use the shower after Jack strung it up.  He stripped, gathered his soap and a loofah sponge and stood perfectly still as Jack turned the spigot.  Ennis looked up as the spray coated and slicked his hair.  Jack backed up in an effort to take in the tantalizing view.

Jack noticed that Ennis’ glorious body had not changed much over the years.  If anything, Ennis’ bod was even better – sexier.  Jack’s eyes grew wild as he took in Ennis’ firm, high buttocks.  His butt cheeks were granite hard and smooth.  Jack didn’t know how Ennis maintained his killer physique.  Jack placed a hand on his own wide paunch, but he wasn’t ashamed that he was letting himself go.  Ennis liked his spreading middle; he even remarked that Jack was giving him more to love.

Jack watched as Ennis turned his body under the spray.  He was transported back to Brokeback when Ennis asked for a bit of hot water and washed everything he could reach.  Jack had the self-control to avert his gaze then, but to look away was impossible now.  Jack wondered how long he could stand it.  Ennis noticed his lover’s torment and stepped from the steady stream of water.  He moved closer to Jack and threw the soap and sponge aside.  Jack ran into his arms, not caring a wit that he was getting very wet and very soapy.


Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: gwyllion on April 14, 2009, 02:07:03 pm
Yay!  You're back!  Just wonderful as always! :D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Monika on April 14, 2009, 02:23:33 pm
woho! Please, don´t stop there :o
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 14, 2009, 11:56:03 pm
Yay!  You're back!  Just wonderful as always! :D

Thanks, Babe!  I've been a bit occupied lately, but I can't stay away long!  Thanks so much for your kind words!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 14, 2009, 11:57:19 pm
woho! Please, don´t stop there :o

I won't, love!  I'll try to continue later on this week.  Thanks so much for reading and commenting!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Mikaela on April 19, 2009, 07:39:30 pm
Well, I'm sure that both Jack and Ennis will want to take some time out from their otherwise very riveting activities to join me in saying:

Happy birthday Littlewing!

 
:)  :) :) :) :)  ;)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 19, 2009, 08:15:03 pm
Well, I'm sure that both Jack and Ennis will want to take some time out from their otherwise very riveting activities to join me in saying:

Happy birthday Littlewing!

 
:)  :) :) :) :)  ;)

Thanks, Sweetie!  I sure appreciate it!  :-*  :-*  :-*
Title: Shower (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 19, 2009, 09:14:14 pm
Ennis held Jack fiercely, oblivious to the fact that Jack’s finery was getting wet and slick with soap.  Ennis rubbed his nose against Jack’s, and silently rubbed Jack’s cheek with the side of his slick palm.  How he loved the scent of his husband!  Ennis moved his head down to Jack’s neck and placed gentle pecks along his collarbone.  Jack trembled and his breath almost caught.  “I want you, Jack,” Ennis growled.  “I want you, now!”

Jack tried his best to answer, but the words were slow to come.  “But I haven’t washed..” was all that he could manage.  Ennis almost chuckled at Jack’s protest.  Surely he knew by now that Ennis didn’t care if he didn’t wash the dust of driving 1400 miles from his sexy body.  Surely Jack knew how Ennis loved his sweaty, sexy, masculine scent.  He had to know how his smell drove him out of his mind.

“I don’t care, Darlin,” Ennis croaked.  “You can soap up later.  Now let’s go into the tent..c’mon!”  Jack stepped back and looked down at his finery.  He had to admit that he hated to ruin his cool threads; they were practically brand new.  But he didn’t really care much about that.  He just wanted to be squeaky clean for his lover.  Jack shrugged, looking forward to the aftermath: the shower after the loving.  He pulled a wet and slouching Ennis into the tent, and closed the flap against the world.
Title: Silent Caress
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 22, 2009, 09:23:59 pm
Ennis’ eyes opened slowly, and he was groggy and disoriented.  He was snuggled next to Jack, and for just an instant, could have sworn that he was a teenager again - having his hand pulled and placed squarely on Jack’s sex.  This time Ennis was lulled from sleep by a curious sensation.  Jack was rubbing his chin!

The strange thing: Jack was still asleep!  His hand wandered over Ennis’ strong jaw while his eyes were closed.  He even snored!  Ennis chuckled silently as he took in the situation.  He couldn’t believe that Jack was feeling up his jaw as he slept! 

Ennis remembered waking up to Jack’s hand caressing him down below.  But those times Jack wanted him and wouldn’t wait.  Ennis had to admit to holding Jack down there while he slept.  It was the greatest thing in the world.  Ennis lay perfectly still as a sleeping Jack Twist caressed his scraggy jaw.  “Better be careful there, Rodeo,” Ennis thought.  “My whiskers will cut yer finger, they’re so sharp!”  The feel of Jack’s hand on his face was calming.  Ennis sighed and pulled his husband closer.  Sleep was not far away. 
Title: Confession
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 22, 2009, 09:43:33 pm
LaShawn Malone looked up from her menu as her husband approached the table.  LaShawn offered to buy him lunch if he would just meet with her and confirm the rumors she was hearing all over town.  Randall stood and looked down at his wife.  LaShawn felt the old familiar stirrings, but she had to calm herself.  She was almost a free woman, but she was only human. 

“Sit down, honey," LaShawn said as she dropped the menu.  “I ordered the seafood special for us both.  I hope you don’t mind?”  Randall shook his head and reached for the glass of water that the waitress sat down before him.  He had not seen his wife in 2 weeks, and the sight of her did not cheer him.  He couldn’t wait until the divorce was final.  “What do you want to see me about, Shawn?” Randall asked, in an emotionless, though no nonsense tone of voice.  Whatever it was, Randall wanted to be done with it, eat his lunch and get the hell out of there.  When LaShawn didn’t answer, Randall looked at her, astonished.  It was the first time since he had any dealings with her that she seemed lost for words.

“Are you seeing Lureen?” LaShawn asked her estranged husband.  Randall blew air out of his lungs and sucked his teeth.  “Yes,” he whispered.  LaShawn closed her eyes tight.  She felt like pouring her whiskey sour over her head.  She couldn’t believe this.  First Jack, and then Lureen?  How could Randall do this to her?  LaShawn didn’t mention Randall’s dalliance with Jack.  Randall wasn’t aware that she knew about it.  But now Randall is seeing Lureen?  There must be some mistake.  “So it’s true, then?”  “Yes,” Randall repeated, louder now.  LaShawn hung her head.  “Okay, I just needed to hear it from you.”  Randall was silent.  Not a word was said when the waitress brought the seafood to the table.  But Randall grabbed the server’s arm just as she was about to retreat.  “I’ll have mine to go,” Randall told her.  LaShawn’s eyes were wet with hurt, and Randall couldn’t take it.  The waitress nodded and left to fetch a to-go container.  When his order was wrapped up tight, Randall kissed his wife on her forehead.  She watched, silently, as he walked out of her life for good.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: gwyllion on April 25, 2009, 10:24:50 pm
Nice job little wing!  And happy birthday!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 25, 2009, 10:45:19 pm
Nice job little wing!  And happy birthday!

Thanks, Babe!  Good to see you here!  :-*
Title: Jack's Lair
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on May 02, 2009, 12:41:19 am
Jack put his key into the lock and opened the door of the one room “apartment.”  He beckoned Ennis inside and turned on a lamp.  Ennis’ mouth flew open when he took a look around.  The room was furnished simply with an end table, a small love seat, a truly charming wardrobe and a queen sized bed.  Ennis admired Jack’s taste in furnishings, but what gave him pause was what Jack hung on the walls.  The tiny room was plastered with pictures of naked men.

Most of them were body builder types with sculpted abs, impossibly firm, high butts and faces so handsome that they seemed otherworldly.  Ennis couldn’t image where Jack found the provocative pics – he didn’t really want to know.  He also realized that the little voice warning him about this special arrangement: meeting up and driving to Jack’s special hideaway had been spot on.  Jack sat on the bed and reached a hand out to his lover.  “Come sit with me, Friend, Jack whispered.  He swept a hand around the room.  “I know this is not really your cup of tea, but I promise, you’ll get used to it.”

Ennis allowed Jack to pull him down onto the bed.  Ennis buried his hands between his own thighs; he was unsure how to proceed.  An uncomfortable silence ensued.  Jack decided to endure Ennis’ aloof manner if he needed a moment to adjust.  “What do you think?” Jack finally ventured.  “I thought I would rent this place out here in the middle of nowhere to have some place to go—you know—to get away.  I’ve had this little room for my own about a year now.  I just thought I would share it with you.”  Jack waited a bit as Ennis stole a look or two at some of the pictures.  He had to admit that those guys looked might good – mighty sexy.  But the whole thing was so queer!  “I..I guess its okay, Jack,” Ennis spoke, tentative.  He looked away from his friend.  Ennis was distant once again, but Jack wasn’t worried.  He knew that Ennis would come around.  Jack rose from the bed, gave Ennis’ shoulder a firm squeeze and moved over to the wardrobe.  He reached for the knob and looked back at his lover, who was still seated.  “Wait till you see what I have in here…”
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: gwyllion on May 02, 2009, 09:46:07 am
ROFL!!!!!!!!!!!  Do continue!  I can't imagine what is in the closet, and I'm sure Ennis can't either!  Don Wroe, perhaps?!!!!  LOL!!!  You are great!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on May 02, 2009, 07:38:13 pm
ROFL!!!!!!!!!!!  Do continue!  I can't imagine what is in the closet, and I'm sure Ennis can't either!  Don Wroe, perhaps?!!!!  LOL!!!  You are great!

I'll continue this for sure.  Thanks for reading and commenting, Gwyllion!  :-*
Title: Jack's Lair (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on May 05, 2009, 11:49:12 pm
Ennis wasn’t very successful at hiding his discomfort when Jack threatened to open the wardrobe door.  Jack noticed as his lover's shoulders stiffened.  “I don’t have anything in here that will hurt you, Friend,” Jack began, “unless you want it to!” Jack laughed mirthlessly, lustily.  Ennis didn’t say anything, but his eyes widened as Jack pulled the door open.

Ennis whistled as he saw truly pornographic pics of men contorted in every position imaginable.  Jack stepped aside as Ennis neared the wardrobe to get a better look.  He was becoming aroused in spite of himself.  Jack smiled as Ennis placed a finger on a picture of 2 men lying on a bed engaged in what can only be described as an impossibly lewd sex act.  “How can you have these-- where did you get these pictures, Rodeo?” Ennis asked as he studied all of them, one-by-one.  “Some of the things these guys are doing can’t be real.  Is this for real, Jack?”  Jack chuckled and shook his head in the affirmative.  “Look here!” Jack pointed to the bottom of the wardrobe where dozens of sex toys were piled.  “And what are these things?” Ennis asked, breathlessly.  “Oh, just a few things to make our loving a little more….pleasurable!” Jack answered.

Ennis picked up a feather.  “How can this help?”  Jack took the feather from Ennis’ trembling hand.  “I can show you,” Jack began.  “Look, I’ll answer all of your questions, but can we go to bed?  Can we do that now?  Listen, Friend, when I saw you for the first time a few hours ago my head started spinning.  I need you so bad!”  Ennis knew the feeling.  He was trembling from need and want, himself; had been for months.  But now Jack had to go get all kinky on him!  No matter, Ennis conceded.  If this – this thing was important to Jack, the least he could do was try and go along.  He might even get something out of it.  Ennis pointed at a picture of 2 men coupling on a rug in front of a roaring fire.  “Do you think we can try this here?” Ennis whispered.  Jack’s face softened.  “C’mon, Friend,” Jack spoke as he pulled Ennis to the floor.  “I’ll make it real good for you.  Trust me!”

Title: Re: The Great Chocolate Fanfic Challenge
Post by: cwby30 on May 07, 2009, 12:32:23 pm
Mornin', Everyone.

Well, yes, I am alive and well and busy as all get out!  Have continued to read [lurk!] but not post, for several months now.  Way to keep things going; I enjoy the stories.

Thought you might like to read the fanfic posted in Live Journal, using the theme "chocolate".  Submittals are all in, and now it's voting time until Sunday night.  You have to be a member of LJ to vote, but anyone can read the stories submitted.  the link to the Brokeback Drabble website with all the stories and the poll is here:
 
http://community.livejournal.com/bmm_drabbles/

There are 36 great stories divided by drabbles, short fiction [less than 1000 words], and long fiction [1000 words or more].  Hope you take the time to read, and to vote if you're an LJ member like me.  And, if you like it, pass the word around.

I hope to start posting again in June, "hope" being the operative word, since it springs eternal... which is what kept Jack coming back all those years... that and love, the unspoken "thing" between them...

Thanks again. 
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on May 09, 2009, 10:37:32 pm
Cwby30, I'm glad to see you're still with us.  I hope everything is okay with you!  :)  I look forward to reading your posts again in June. Thanks for the information about the voting going on over at LJ.  I'm a member and I'll take a look and cast a vote.

Again, good to see you here, Love!
Title: Jack's Lair (3)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on May 13, 2009, 01:40:48 am
Ennis was ashamed of himself.  He was trembling like a leaf in a frigid wind, as Jack just spirited him away on ride of lust and love that he couldn’t reconcile with anything in his world.  The lovemaking was so good that he didn’t feel worthy.  Ennis held on to his lover for warmth and comfort.  Jack rocked him and rubbed and cooed…

“Was good, wasn’t it?” Jack asked as he kissed Ennis’ hair.  Ennis wasn’t able to answer.  How could he describe an experience so delicious, so sweet?  Jack chuckled and pulled his husband closer.  “You rest, and we’ll see about trying another one of these positions—that is, if you feel up to it.”  Ennis couldn’t catch his breath.  He nodded and snuggled in closer.

Ennis felt like he was finally coming down.  He looked up a Jack and smiled.  “What is it, En?” Jack whispered.  “What do you need?  I know this place is just a one room apartment, but there is a bathroom beyond that door there, and if you’re hungry, we can go out for a bite to eat.”  Ennis pulled himself away from Jack’s embrace and headed for the bathroom.  Jack watched his lover as he entered the tiny john.  He smiled as he imagined the adventures to come…
Title: Jack's Lair (4)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on May 18, 2009, 10:03:02 pm
Ennis walked out of the tiny washroom wringing his wet hands and smoothing them down along his torso.  Jack watched this, amused.  “No towels?” Jack asked as he threw the covers aside and climbed out of the bed.  “I knew there was something I forgot!” Jack walked over to the wardrobe and pulled out an outsized handkerchief and passed it over to his lover.  “Don’t worry about it,” Ennis spoke absently as he accepted the handkerchief and dried his damp hands.  “You know I ain’t the picky type.”  Jack nodded and moved to close the wardrobe door. 

Ennis sat down on the rumpled comforter and relived the lovemaking of just minutes ago.  His breath caught as he called forth Jack’s big sucking sounds, his barely audible whimpers as his moment of release drew near.  Jack must have read his lover’s thoughts, as he sat down beside him and held his hand.  “You want to talk about it, Friend,” Jack asked as he kissed Ennis’ palm.  “You may not think so, but I got this place together for you – for just the two of us.”  Jack looked Ennis straight in the eyes.  When Jack noticed the shadow of a flush move across Ennis’ cheeks, he knew to back off.  “Are you hurt?” Jack changed the subject.  “If you want, we can rest up a bit.  We can get cleaned up as best we can without towels, and head out to town for something to eat.  We can even go up to the campsite if you want.”  Ennis sighed and placed a hand on Jack’s shoulder.  “We can go get something to eat, but I want to come right back here.”  Jack smiled at that.

Ennis noticed the change in his friend all through dinner.  Jack led him to an all-night diner that served middle of the road American fare.  Jack ordered for the both of them: 2 “Sea and Land” dinners.  Ennis smiled as Jack told the waitress that they both wanted the works on the baked potatoes, and the steaks were to be cooked medium well.  Ennis didn’t have to open his mouth, as Jack knew exactly what he wanted to drink.  Dinner was eaten mostly in silence, but Ennis studied his husband, and he was fascinated.  His dear, sweet Jack was pretty much calling the shots.  Ennis didn't know if he liked Jack's newfound confidence, but he was intrigued, and was anxious to see what else Jack had in mind for them.


Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: gwyllion on May 19, 2009, 07:51:12 am
"Husband?"  Squeee!  That was a surprise!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on May 19, 2009, 11:23:51 pm
"Husband?"  Squeee!  That was a surprise!

Oh, yes!  I've always thought of Ennis and Jack as a married couple.  :)
Title: Jack's Lair(5)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on May 23, 2009, 12:17:20 am
Jack was well fed and very satisfied with himself as he walked out into the cold November air.  The restaurant was average, but managed to serve up a decent steak and lobster combination plate.  Jack smiled as he pulled his collar up as an ineffectual buffer to the biting cold.  He was very proud of himself, having treated Ennis to a good meal.  He looked back at the door and noticed that Ennis didn’t follow him out.  Jack headed back into the restaurant and looked around the dining room, but there was no Ennis.

Jack walked into the bar and had a look.  Ennis wasn’t there, either, but when he turned to exit the bar, Jack almost ran headlong into Ennis Del Mar.  “Whoa, there, Cowboy,” Ennis stated mildly, “where you been?  I went outside to look for you but you were nowhere to be found."  “I was out there for a minute, Friend, Jack answered, simply, “and I thought you were right in back of me, but it seems you never came out.  “I had to go to the men’s room,” Ennis announced. “No big deal.  Let’s go!”  Jack nodded and followed Ennis to the door.  “You better brace yourself for the cold, Friend,” Jack stated as they were making ready to go out.  “It got real frigid all of a sudden.” 

Ennis made a run for the truck.  He was not unaccustomed to the cold, but the snap was sudden and it was unrelenting.  Jack wasn’t far behind.  He opened the passenger’s door for Ennis and ran around to the driver’s side.  Once behind the wheel, Jack turned on the heater and shot Ennis a warm smile.  “I know the cold is rough, Friend, but I have an idea how to keep you warm.”  Ennis returned the smile.  “I know you do, Rodeo, but before we get into something, you gotta tell me how you came to get this place of yours.  How did you ever put something like this together?”  Jack looked out ahead.  “When we get back, I’ll tell you,” Jack finally spoke.  “I’m good at secrets; I’ve even kept a few from you.” When Jack noticed the hurt and confusion in Ennis’ eyes, he was quick to respond.  “No, no, nothing bad, Baby, but there are some things that I couldn’t tell you.  There is a lot to fess up to…a lot to explain…”
Title: Jack's Lair(6)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 09, 2009, 11:11:27 pm
“I’m a bit afraid to hear you talk like this, Rodeo, and I’m not ashamed to admit it!”  Ennis spoke softly and ran his fingers nervously through his sandy colored hair.  Jack drove on in silence, but his blue eyes darted from the road to his lover.  Ennis blew the air out of his lungs when he realized that Jack was at a loss for words.  That Jack would be so quiet was very uncharacteristic and Ennis didn’t like it one bit.  “I told you there is nothing bad, Friend,” Jack offered, humbly.  “Just wait until we get back to the room and when you’re in my arms I’ll tell you.”  “Sure enough,” was all that Ennis could think to answer.  Jack directed his full attention back to the barren road.

Night had fallen, of course, and the sky was a dazzling canopy of stars.  The air was crisp and frigid.  Jack fished the keys to his lair out of his jacket pocket and poised it at the lock.  He turned to Ennis with an imploring look.  “You’re sure you want to come back here tonight?  We could head up to the campsite and put up the tent.” Jack was speaking so softly and gently that Ennis almost couldn’t hear.  “I can build a small fire and we can heat up some coffee and I have some good whiskey with me.  What d’ya think?”  Ennis managed a tiny smile.  The thought of camping out was attractive, even in the bitter cold.  But Ennis was anxious to hear one of Jack’s “secrets.”  He knew he would have to put out to hear it, but making love to his man was not a hardship.  “I would rather stay here for the night,” Ennis said, matter-of-factly.  “I’m a bit too tired to set-up camp right now.  I would rather lie out on those nice sheets you got in there.”  Jack nodded without another word and opened the door.

The lovemaking was languid, slow and so tender that Ennis thought he would weep.  He wondered if what Jack had been hiding was far more serious than he let on.  Jack was being attentive and selfless, even more than usual, and that was saying a lot.  Ennis wondered if the extra attention was borne of some sort of guilt, or perhaps Jack was simply more comfortable in his love “shack.”  Jack pulled Ennis close and kissed his hair again.  He traced tiny kisses along Ennis’ jaw line and sweetly kissed each of Ennis’ eyes.  Ennis Del Mar was overcome.  He sighed and wanted to hear what Jack promised to tell him.  “You owe me a confession, Rodeo,” Ennis said, nervously.  He steeled himself for what was to come.  Jack pulled his lover even closer and spoke into his cheek: “His name is Cleet McBryde……"


Title: Re: Jack's Lair(6)
Post by: Toycoon on June 16, 2009, 09:24:41 pm
  Jack pulled his lover even closer and spoke into his cheek: “His name is Cleet McBryde……"

Uh-oh...

Hey there, Littlewing! It's been a long time. How is everything, baby?
Title: Re: Jack's Lair(6)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 16, 2009, 10:08:43 pm
Uh-oh...

Hey there, Littlewing! It's been a long time. How is everything, baby?

Well, hello, my love!  I'm doing well.  And you?  What do you think of my little "series?"  I hope you like it.  I'll have the next installment up soon. 

I would love to read one of your steamy tales.  One can only hope!   :)
Title: Re: Jack's Lair(6)
Post by: Toycoon on June 17, 2009, 12:25:26 am
Well, hello, my love!  I'm doing well.  And you?  What do you think of my little "series?"  I hope you like it.  I'll have the next installment up soon. 

I would love to read one of your steamy tales.  One can only hope!   :)

Well, I may repost one of my oldies (but goodies) just for you!
Title: Jack's Lair(7)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 17, 2009, 11:48:01 pm
Thanks, Sugaboo!  I would love to read one of your golden oldies.  But for now, I've posted chapter 7.  Read on:

“Look, it happened that year before when I was up on Brokeback..a year before I even met you,” Jack said quickly, urgently, when he felt Ennis’ body tense at the mention of another man’s name.  Jack patted Ennis’ firm buttocks.  Ennis relaxed a bit, even though he knew when he was being placated.  Jack kissed Ennis quickly; it was an unexpected move.  Ennis was reminded of those days on the mountain when Jack was so ready and happy to offer a sweet kiss.  He only had to pass Jack to go take a leak and find that a good-bye kiss was forthcoming.  When he returned from taking a pee, Jack was there with a welcome smooch.  Ennis never objected then, and he craved the attention now.  Ennis puckered up and Jack delivered a tiny smack.  “Now let me continue,’ Jack whispered.  “We can kiss all you want later.”  Ennis settled next to Jack and pulled up on an elbow.  He motioned for Jack to go on.

“You wasn’t the first,” Jack said, thoughtfully.  “You remember when I told you about the year before we was up on Brokeback togehter?  Well, I never did tell you that I wasn't alone that summer."  Ennis nodded for Jack to continue.  "Cleet arrived on the mountain first and already had everything ready by the time I got there.”  Ennis was all ears.  “I was aware that Aguirre hired a herder, and I didn’t know what to expect, nor did I care.”  Jack placed a hand on Ennis’ shoulder and rubbed.  “Here it comes,” Ennis thought.  He knew it shouldn’t matter, but the thought of Jack with someone else stung.  “We hit it off from the beginning, and started working like a team.”  “Sounds familiar,” Ennis spat, bitterly.  Jack withdrew his hand.  He couldn’t understand Ennis’ sudden hostility.  When Ennis noticed his lover's hurt, he softened.  Jack didn’t deserve his attitude!  He only wanted to come clean, and Ennis knew he should feel grateful that Jack wanted to level with him.  “I’m sorry, Jack,” Ennis soothed.  “Is there more?”  Ennis began to fidget, and when Jack noticed his discomfort, he began to doubt his decision to tell all.  “There is more,” Jack stated after a few moments of silence.  “We made love.  We did, but it was nothing like I had with you..still have!”  Ennis accepted Jack’s confession - he had to!  Jack spoke as though the affair was in the past, and what is done is done.  “What happened to good ole Cleet?” Ennis asked.  “I don’t know, Friend,” Jack stated.  “He had family problems and decided not to return for a second year on the mountain, which is why Aguiree hired you, I’m sure.”  Jack’s hand returned to Ennis’ shoulder.  “To tell you the truth, I’m glad Cleet didn’t return.  I would never have met you,” Jack admitted, shyly.  He knew that he may have spilled too much to his lover, and he refused to meet Ennis’ eyes.  If he had, he would have noticed the moisture there.  Ennis was only a second from bawling like a baby.  He wanted to be close, and felt possesive, territorial.  Ennis pulled Jack close and held on.

After the moaning had died down and both men were spent and sore, Jack walked to the bathroom and Ennis took a moment to digest what Jack had confessed.  “So I wasn’t the first,” Ennis spoke out loud, softly.  “I should have known.  He was too sure of what he was doing…too skilled.”  Ennis turned over onto his back and buried his head in the down filled pillow.  He couldn’t help but wonder if Cleet was a thing of the past, or if Jack lied about that.  What if Cleet McBride was living down in Texas and the 2 of them met up on a regular basis?  If so, Ennis knew he would take a trip down to Childress and blow both their brains out!  “I’m such a knucklehead,” Ennis thought as he forced the silly thoughts away.  He had to trust Jack.  Why would Jack tell him about Cleet if he was still involved with him?  Jack didn’t have a death wish, did he?  Jack burst from the bathroom in a cloud of steam.  “You can take a shower if you want, Cowboy, and after that we can get some shut eye.  We can go up to camp tomorrow, right?”  Ennis nodded and walked toward the small bathroom.  “But before we go, I have something else to tell you…that is, if you want to hear…?
Title: Jack's Bath
Post by: Toycoon on June 20, 2009, 12:52:05 am
The blue eyed fellow in the bathroom medicine cabinet mirror wanted to know how Jack got that shiner and who gave it to him; Jack shook his head and whispered, "Ennis ...Del Mar, " pulled off his T-shirt and stepped into the warm bath.

He rubbed the bar of Ivory soap between his hands and then rubbed the lather on his face and hair, down his neck and across his shoulders; Jack's tent pole poked through the top surface of the bath water as he envisioned Ennis' manly hands, his lips and hot mouth everywhere on his body.

Jack pulled the chain on the stopper with his toes and sat in the bathtub with his arms crossed until all of the water drained out.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 21, 2009, 12:42:31 am
Wow, Toy, is this new?  In any case, I'm loving it!  This tale is awesome!  Poor Jack, he couldn't get enough of Ennis, could he?
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Toycoon on June 21, 2009, 05:28:32 am
It's an oldie and one of my favorites from the IMDb years.

Remember how much nasty little stuff we used to get away with on IMDb? It was really wild when you think about it. I would start the thread in the mornings and it would jump to about five pages long in less than two hours! We managed to post ten steamy volumes of Jack with Ennis, the FanFic Game before the IMDb modesty police shut us down!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 21, 2009, 08:20:24 pm
It's an oldie and one of my favorites from the IMDb years.

Remember how much nasty little stuff we used to get away with on IMDb? It was really wild when you think about it. I would start the thread in the mornings and it would jump to about five pages long in less than two hours! We managed to post ten steamy volumes of Jack with Ennis, the FanFic Game before the IMDb modesty police shut us down!

Yes, I remember it well!  We were really on a roll then - good times.  The trolls were the ones who had the thread deleted, and I'll never forget that.  I'm just glad we had the forethought to make copies!  I'm glad J&E lives on - I'll make sure that it does!
Title: Jack's Lair(8)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 22, 2009, 08:56:01 pm
The ride up to the campsite was uneventful, and Ennis and Jack shared few words.  Jack was grateful to be in the great outdoors, even if it did mean forfeiting the privacy that he and Ennis enjoyed the past few days in his love lair.  Ennis was less enthusiastic, having adjusted to the tiny apartment and its assortment of queer porn plastered across almost every inch of wall.  Ennis sighed as Jack parked alongside the lake that ran perpendicular to the site he scouted out earlier in the year.  Ennis was uncomfortable, and he couldn’t exactly say why.  Perhaps his discomfort had something to do with whatever Jack meant to confess.  Jack thought to get his "secret" out in the open before riding up to the campsite, but for some reason, he changed his mind.



Camp was erected in less than an hour.  Jack was marinating a few steaks for supper while Ennis placed some of his gear in the tent.  Midday was upon them: lunch time.  Jack grabbed a Tupperware type dish out of a cooler and opened it to reveal a mess of tuna salad.  Ennis produced a loaf of bread and proceeded to spread the tuna salad on slices of bread while Jack opened up a few beers.  Jack took a swig of the brew and handed the bottle to Ennis.  Ennis Del Mar turned the bottle up and squinted with pleasure.  That Jack sure knew how to pick the booze!  Lunch was devoured in silence, and after the meal was consumed, Jack motioned for Ennis to follow him down to the lake.  “Leave the cleanup for later, Friend,” Jack uttered as he headed for the lake.  " I want to get comfortable by that little stream while I tell you what I want you to know.”  Ennis didn’t like the sound of it, but he followed his lover down to the stream.

Jack sat his behind down against a tall tree and motioned for Ennis to sit down between his legs.  Ennis obeyed, and slid his body down between Jack’s slim thighs.  He placed his arms nervously on Jack’s knees.  Jack laid his chin on Ennis’ sandy hair and rubbed a hand along his firm arms.  “Just let me tell this, and I promise, no more confessions,” Jack spoke into Ennis’ hair.  “Actually, there is nothing more to confess after I tell you this.”  Ennis nodded with relief.  He was grateful to know that after this, Jack harbored no more secrets.  “Tell me,” Ennis almost demanded.  Jack blew air out of his lungs so forcefully that some of Ennis’ hair parted with the force.  “You know all those pictures that I hung up back at the apartment?” Jack asked.  Ennis nodded.  “Well, I didn’t get those on my own.  I had help…”


Title: Jack's Lair(9)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 02, 2009, 12:31:29 am
“You had help?”  It was Ennis.  He looked up at his lover, a series of emotions flashing across his handsome face.  “Yes, I had a bit of help getting the pictures, but it’s not what you think.”  Ennis had to turn around and face Jack at that one. “How do you know what I think,” Ennis asked, ruefully.  “I don’t really know what to think.  Why don’t you just tell me all about it?”  Jack shrugged.  “I will, but I think it should wait until we go back down to the apartment.  I’ll have to show you while I explain.”  “Sure enough,” Ennis sighed.

The next few days were spent laughing, loving and hiking.  Ennis put the matter of Jack’s having “help” securing all that porn out of his mind.  Jack didn’t mention the racy photos at all until it was time to tear down camp.  "We'll be back at the apartment in no time, Friend," Jack began.  "The faster we pack up, the sooner we can drive down."  Ennis didn't answer and the two of them worked swiftly as they made sure to leave camp as they found it.  They packed gear into Ennis’ truck in companionable silence. 

Ennis drove them down to Jack’s secret lair in anticipation.  He hated to admit it, but he was looking forward to being in Jack’s bed.  The place was small but it was extremely cozy and ultra comfortable.  And the fact that Jack was willing to do anything to see to his needs only served to sweeten it for Ennis.  Jack opened the door to his lair and motioned Ennis inside.  He pulled a bottle of whiskey from under the bed and fetched a few shot glasses from the wardrobe.  Ennis accepted a glass of whiskey with gratitude.  He sat very still while Jack wandered over to a wall plastered with photos of a man whose private parts were displayed in various stages of arousal.  The man’s body was photographed from the waist down.  “You don’t recognize the man in these pictures?” Jack whispered as he took a drink of his whiskey.  “No,” Ennis faltered.  “How could I? I’ve never seen another man like that except for you.”  Ennis took a long gulp of the booze and motioned for Jack to pour him another shot.  “Who is he?” Ennis asked between gulps of his whiskey.  “It’s you, Friend!” Jack announced, proudly.  “I pulled a fast one last year and took these pictures of your dick when you were asleep.”  Ennis was incredulous.  He was speechless.  Jack took Ennis’ silence as permission to continue.  “I brought a little camera with me that time, and I had a devil of a time snapping you as you slept.” Jack traced a finger over a snapshot of Ennis’ fully erect member.  “You’re so fuckin’ beautiful, you know that?”  Ennis sat very still, unable to speak.  “But wait, Friend," Jack spoke.  "There's a bit more…
Title: Warm
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 09, 2009, 12:07:13 am
I'll post Jack's Lair 10 later.   

Jack couldn’t believe that he and Ennis weren’t camping out in the frickin’ cold!  He arrived first in camp and the first thing he noticed was how bone dry everything seemed.  The sticks he collected to build a dinner fire were so brittle that they almost snapped apart in his hands.  Jack wouldn’t even have to build a fire if not for a need to grill the chicken parts he brought along.  When Ennis arrived he whistled when he felt the warm sun on his hat.  “But this is only May, Rodeo,” Ennis remarked as he peeled off his beige cotton jacket and removed his felt cowboy hat.  “What in the hell is going on?”  “I don’t know friend,” Jack grunted as he stacked wood for the fire.  “But make yourself to home.  I’m just going to start a fire to cook up these chicken quarters.”  Ennis smiled and placed his gear in the tent.

The heat rose until it seemed to peak at 4:00p.m.  Ennis reckoned that it was on the high side of 90 degrees.  He sat down on the edge of a log and watched as Jack went about grilling the chicken.  Ennis had to admit: standing over that fire and tending to the bird was a labor of love.  He noticed that Jack’s sweat dripped onto the flames and sputtered.  Ennis didn’t mind.  He loved the taste of his husband’s salty sweat. 

The evening meal was eaten and Jack asked Ennis to extinguish the fire.  Ennis made sure that the flames were completely out.  It wouldn’t do to start a forest fire.  “Let’s take a little hike up that hill,” Jack suggested.  Ennis disappeared into the tent and came out with a couple of canteens.  The pair walked along a hot and dusty trail and when they reached the top of the tiny hill, turned toward the distance.  Ennis felt his breath catch at the beauty of the sun in its descent.  Jack’s knees almost buckled at the sight of a sunset that only nature could paint.  “It was worth it to risk being fired by Old Nan Newsome," Jack grunted as he admired the scene.  Ennis knew what he meant.  Steve at the ranch almost handed him a pink slip when asked - no - told his boss that he would be taking a week off in May.  Late spring was a busy time at the Ranch, and Ennis would come to realize that Jack’s job was hoppin' at that time, as well.  But both men had the idea of meeting up late May to camp.  It was a spur of the moment thing, and neither could be dissuaded.  There was some sort of psychic force that pulled them there together.  Perhaps it was the heat, the warmth that was destined to grace their time together...finally!  Ennis pulled his gaze away from the sunset and pulled Jack close.  He pressed his mouth down on his lover's, and the kiss was sweet and moist and warm.
Title: My Man
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 29, 2009, 01:45:33 am
“Me and Alma is supposed to get married once I come down offa this mountain,” Ennis boasted with his chest stuck out.  He looked puffed up like a young rooster struttin’ around, trying to impress the hens.  Jack ignored Ennis’ pronouncement this time as he did whenever Ennis mentioned his imminent nuptials to the lovely Ms. Alma Beers. 

Ennis continued his work while Jack stole a few moments to check him out.  Jack took in the firm buttocks, the hazel eyes and sandy colored hair.  Ennis’ body was well nourished, but he seemed thinner; probably dropping the pounds on account of a diet of milk, beans and stone biscuits.  Jack had to admit that Ennis was magnificent – a fine catch for any woman.  But Jack had fallen for him, and fallen hard.  He hated to hear about Alma and felt his stomach tighten and twist when Ennis mentioned his wedding.  “It makes you feel like a man, marrying Alma?” Jack asked, ruefully, but only in the safety of his own thoughts.

The time to part came too quickly for Jack’s taste, but Ennis had to return to the sheep.  Jack watched as Ennis reached for his jeans.  He usually washed after their coupling, but there was no time.  Jack thought on what it would be like to have a man like Ennis at his beck and call - would be nice!  Ennis spoke not a word as he stepped into his jeans and pulled on his shirt.  How like Ennis to be so distant after what they just shared.  Is this how a real man should behave: all contained and settled and centered even after love?  Jack didn’t know.  Jack didn’t even care.  He just knew that Ennis was all he wanted.  Jack considered Ennis his man.  He smiled as Ennis turned his back without a word and exited the tent.  “I’m going to steal him away, Alma,” Jack whispered. 



 
Title: Daydreamin'
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 03, 2009, 09:59:11 pm
“I wonder why Del Mar is acting so funny!” Jack thought as he caught sight of Ennis sitting off by himself along a grassy hillside.  Jack gulped with dread when he noticed the stern set of Ennis’ jaw.  So they were given strict orders to bring ‘em down!  Jack shook his head when he repeated Ennis’ bitter words in his mind: “That Aguirre is cheatin’ us out of a whole month’s pay!”  And Ennis blew up when Jack offered him a loan!  Jack didn’t get it!

Jack Twist couldn’t care less that the summer on Brokeback was coming to a rapid close.  He didn’t think of the end of the job as the end of his “relationship” with Ennis.  Jack pulled on a rope and wound it around his arm.  He looked Ennis’ way and right away thought better of going after him.  Let him sulk for awhile; it might do him good.

“The first thing we’ll do is head into Signal and have a beer, maybe even a steak dinner on me,” Jack thought as he packed up one of the horses.  “Maybe Ennis will take me up on that offer of a loan.  The both of us can open a bank account!” Jack sported a toothy grin at the thought of walking into a Savings and Loan with Ennis on business.  The bank manager would wait on them and open up accounts in each of their names.  Jack felt important just thinking about it.  He never once had a bank account of his own.  And after the accounts were open, Jack would make certain that a cold beer and a warm steak would get inside their bellies.  And after that.... love?  At the thought of being intimate with Ennis one more time, Jack couldn’t contain himself.  He grabbed the rope and bounded up the hill toward his friend.
Title: Lovers' Leap
Post by: cwby30 on August 07, 2009, 01:43:59 am
Evenin', Everyone. 

Well, I've been quiet, but reading here regularly and enjoying it, and writing.  Here's a double drabble [100 words each paragraph] that came to me a couple of days ago.  Canon, with a touch of potential AU, could have been a lead-in to other things for them.  Hope you like it, and don't mind the lack of a third paragraph in the 'game'.

Thanks again. 

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He had always remained grounded, his feet firmly planted in the brown tones of the earth reflected in his eyes, moving surely from one day to the next.  Now he stood naked at the precipice, looking down into blue the color of an evening sky in late summer, with only air between.  Heart pounding, his toes curled over the edge, sending stray pebbles into the blue below, making ripples that criss-crossed through the blue and shimmered with reflected sunlight.  He hesitated, unsure whether to jump, to leave the safety of the known ground for a flight with an uncertain landing.

Then he felt a hand reach up and caress his cheek, and another hand brush against the back of his neck, fingers roaming through strands of sandy blonde hair, together assuring him softly and silently that everything would be alright.  He opened his eyes and saw the man whose arms held him.  He opened his heart to the emotions criss-crossing through eyes of blue, and found courage enough for both of them.  Leaning down, he felt their lips meet in their first tentative kiss. Casting aside all doubts, he leapt willingly off the cliff and into a lifetime of love. 

Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: LauraGigs on August 07, 2009, 03:01:01 am
[taps coffee pot]

Ver' good!!   :)
Title: Re: Lovers' Leap
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 07, 2009, 10:30:55 pm
Evenin', Everyone. 

Well, I've been quiet, but reading here regularly and enjoying it, and writing.  Here's a double drabble [100 words each paragraph] that came to me a couple of days ago.  Canon, with a touch of potential AU, could have been a lead-in to other things for them.  Hope you like it, and don't mind the lack of a third paragraph in the 'game'.

Thanks again. 

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He had always remained grounded, his feet firmly planted in the brown tones of the earth reflected in his eyes, moving surely from one day to the next.  Now he stood naked at the precipice, looking down into blue the color of an evening sky in late summer, with only air between.  Heart pounding, his toes curled over the edge, sending stray pebbles into the blue below, making ripples that criss-crossed through the blue and shimmered with reflected sunlight.  He hesitated, unsure whether to jump, to leave the safety of the known ground for a flight with an uncertain landing.

Then he felt a hand reach up and caress his cheek, and another hand brush against the back of his neck, fingers roaming through strands of sandy blonde hair, together assuring him softly and silently that everything would be alright.  He opened his eyes and saw the man whose arms held him.  He opened his heart to the emotions criss-crossing through eyes of blue, and found courage enough for both of them.  Leaning down, he felt their lips meet in their first tentative kiss. Casting aside all doubts, he leapt willingly off the cliff and into a lifetime of love. 



Cwby30, I'm so glad to see you here!  Thanks so much for reading and posting this charming drabble.  I especiall like this: Leaning down, he felt their lips meet in their first tentative kiss. Casting aside all doubts, he leapt willingly off the cliff and into a lifetime of love.  Lovely, my dear.  Lovely, lovely writing!  Thanks again, and don't be a stranger!  :)
Title: Drunk, Love!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 14, 2009, 01:15:17 am
Jack was never falling down, sloppy drunk up on the Mountain, but he could put away the whiskey with the best of them.  Ennis spent many a night passing the bottle with his friend, and Jack always managed to drink him under the table.  That Jack Twist knew how to hold his liquor even when he tossed back an entire bottle.  Ennis was glad that Jack wasn’t a mean drunk.  As it happened, Jack Twist was a giddy, affectionate drunk.

Ennis loved it when Jack had a few in him.  He loved the sound of Jack’s shenanigans when he put back one too many.  It was a delight to see Jack dancing around the fire singing and shaking his rear.  Ennis couldn’t believe that Aguirre actually allowed the Basque to bring them whiskey all the way up there.  Weren’t they too young to drink?  Well, Aguirre was never the one to follow the rules; he was famous for picking the rules he wanted to obey.  It seems Aguirre understood the need for a lot of whiskey up there on the mountain.

Jack was still dancing!  Ennis couldn’t fathom a happy drunk!  His father had been a mean drunk, and his entire clan knew when to beat it when his dad had been drinking.  But Jack was just the opposite.  And when the sun had set and Ennis needed to go back up to the sheep, Jack’s goodbye kisses were heavy and fragrant with drink.  He gently wrestled Ennis to the ground, lay prone across him and kissed every inch of Ennis that wasn’t clothed.  Why, Ennis thought Jack might lick the wax out of his ears!  “You’re too good to me, Rodeo,” Ennis whispered, huskily as he pushed a drunken Jack Twist up off of him.  Jack was silent as he enveloped Ennis’ lips once more and exhaled a whiskey fog before he let him go.


Title: Bluebelle
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 22, 2009, 12:09:39 am
Bluebelle made such a racket at the entrance to the tent that Jack had to stifle a chuckle.  He laughed out loud when the little dog howled and bayed like a wolf.  “Let her in, Jack,” Ennis said as he pulled his mouth away from Jack’s kisser.  “I came up here to see you, but Bluebelle is welcome in here anytime, as far as I’m concerned.”  Jack didn’t like the idea of Bluebelle lying around the tent.  She was much more useful out by the sheep, keeping a watch out for predators.  Besides, she had fleas, and already infested the tent with the tiny buggers.  Jack looked at his friend.  “You really want her in here, Ennis?” Ennis smiled and nodded.  “Yeah, let her in fer just a minute."

Bluebelle scampered into the close space of the tent the moment Jack moved the flap aside.  She headed straight for Ennis and jumped right onto his lap.  Ennis cooed and spoke soft words to the dog as he petted and rubbed her spotted coat.  Jack glared at the fleas that formed a tiny cluster on his ankle.  “I don’t know how much longer I can deal with these pests,” Jack muttered as he slapped at the tiny insects.  “I’m being eaten alive here!" Ennis was sympathetic to Jack's plight, of course.  He didn't know why he was never bothered with the fleas.  Jack was right: he was always tormented by the small, small vermin.  Mebbe his blood is sweeter than mine, Del Mar reasoned.  Ennis parted the hair on Bluebelle’s back and flinched when he saw the fleas there.  “I know you’re both miserable, Rodeo,” Ennis remarked.  “I’ll have Emile bring up some flea powder when I go down to the bridge in a few days."  “Thanks, friend,” Jack whispered.  “I have this flea bath that was left over from last year, but not enough here to do much good."  Ennis considered what his friend just said.  “Why don’t you put a bit on her anyway, Jack,” Ennis began.  “It can’t hurt and just might help.”

Ennis watched as Jack poured the contents of the bottle onto Bluebelle’s back.  The dog didn’t protest; she sat very still, as Ennis was scratching her behind the ears.  Jack massaged the liquid into her coat and smiled when he noticed Bluebelle’s closed eyes.  She seemed to be enjoying the attention.  Ennis watched as Jack rubbed Bluebelle’s coat.  When he was all done, Jack opened the tent flap and shooed her outside.  Bluebelle exited the tent without a fuss.  “Looks like I had better get back down to camp,” Ennis said as he reached for his beige coat.  “I’m fixing beans again tonight.”  Jack nodded and reached for his friend’s belt.  “You want me to love you a bit before you leave?” he asked, huskily.  Ennis couldn’t hide his lust, but he had a job to do.  “When you ride down for supper maybe I’ll take you up on it.  But for now, I gotta go.”  Jack nodded and followed Ennis out of the tent.  Bluebelle was waiting there, her tail wagging.
Title: Poor Uncle Harold, Poor Jack!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 27, 2009, 12:42:35 am
Ennis rode up just after Aguirre bounded off and dismounted, pulling a wounded lamb with him.  Ennis glanced at Aguirre's back, and watched his departure.  Jack walked up to his friend and helped him place the lamb onto the cold ground.  "What did the boss want?" Ennis asked, in passing.  Jack was seated on the ground next to the lamb.  He ministered to the gentle creature as Ennis stood before him.  "He had bad news for me," Jack explained, gently.  "He says that my uncle Harold is in the hospital and he might not make it."  Ennis moved closer to his lover and ran a cold hand along his shoulder.  "I'm sorry about that Rodeo," Ennis whispered.  "But your uncle just might pull through.  You gotta have faith."  Jack felt heartened at Ennis' words.  He rubbed the tender hand on his shoulder.

That night after supper Jack was quiet, reserved, and his aloofness worried Ennis.  Ennis, never a talker, tried his best to bring Jack out of his gloomy mood.  He told a few jokes, wove a few tall tales about deer he shot while on a hunting trip with his father, even made up several lies about riding a bronc.  Jack listened, but he didn't really seem to hear.  Ennis was doubly spooked when he saw a single tear stream down Jack's handsome face.  Ennis moved to where Jack was sitting in a flash.  He folded Jack in his arms and held him, gentled him.  Jack snuggled back, held on.  Ennis knew he was doing the right thing.

Later still, Jack prepared the camp for the night's sleep.  He moved in the light of the fire: he was a slim, beautiful vision in a cowboy hat.  He was also moving slower than usual.  Ennis gathered his things and made ready to return to the sheep, but he hesitated as he was concerned about his friend.  "You gonna be okay, Jack?" Ennis whispered as he pulled Jack close.  "You want me to stay?"  Jack kissed Ennis' neck and left a wet spot on his collar.  "No, you go on ahead.  I'll be okay."  Ennis nodded and released his lover.  "Ennis?"  It was Jack, coy, tentative. "Look, friend, I'm sorry for how I behaved tonight." Jack pulled a hand across his wet eyes.  "I guess the news about Uncle Harold hit me harder than I thought it would.  He was my favorite, Ennis.  That man helped raise me, and never said a harsh word to me."  Ennis had Jack back in his arms by then.  "I don't know what I'm gonna do if he dies."  Ennis didn't have to say anything.  He released Jack only to replace his gear and remove his jacket.  He pulled Jack toward the tent.  Jack didn't protest, but followed Ennis in and closed the both of them off from the world.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: gwyllion on August 27, 2009, 08:15:24 am
Awww!  That was so sweet  :'(

 ;)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on August 27, 2009, 11:47:20 am
Awww!  That was so sweet  :'(

 ;)

Thanks, Love!  :)
Title: Poor Uncle Harold, Poor Jack! (2)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 16, 2009, 11:52:55 pm
Jack was unable to sleep that night.  Aguirre's news about Uncle Harold's imminent demise really spooked him.  Jack was grateful for a friend like Ennis.  Del Mar sat with him and listened patiently and attentively to all of his fond stories about Harold.  Just last night Jack found himself cuddled safely in Ennis' arms as he told the story of Uncle Harold and his truck:

"He loved that truck, Friend," Jack spoke, enthusiasm animating his voice.  "My ma used to drive me over to Harold's spread when she and pa needed some alone time."  Jack and Ennis both chuckled at that.  "Ma and Pa thought I didn't know what was going on when they wanted to get rid of me for the weekend, but I was a smart boy!"  Ennis pulled Jack closer and nuzzled his cheek. "I knew they needed some together time, and I think ma knew that I knew!" Ennis smiled and was silent. "But I'm gettin' kinda off track here."  Ennis nodded and Jack continued,"  Uncle Harold was a bachelor then and he welcomed my company cause he was all alone on his ranch.  The first thing we did when I reached his place?  We watched a bit of TV and then we walked out back to take a look at his truck."  "What did you guys do to the truck?" Ennis asked, interested.  "Well," Jack began, but before he could continue, one of the horses kicked up a ruckus.

Ennis returned to the tent after chasing away a small deer.  He had to soothe the mare by rubbing her flanks - the poor filly was trembling.  "Just a deer that startled her, was all," Ennis announced.  Jack didn't care about that; he knew Ennis had everything under control.  Ennis resumed his position and Jack settled back to continued his story: "we was gonna rebuild her," Jack commenced, "Fix 'er up from top to bottom.  I loved it, Friend.  I spent all my summer weekends for 2 years fixing up that truck with Uncle Harold."  "And you guys got it to working!" Ennis stated.  "Sure did!"  Jack answered, proudly. "What happened to the truck, Jack?  Uncle Harold still driving it?"  Jack's eyes misted over then.  "What I didn't know was that the truck was for me.  You saw me drive up to Aguirre's trailer in it!" 

TDC
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: LauraGigs on September 17, 2009, 12:48:55 am
^ Hmm.  That kinda clashes with Annie Proulx's description of the "cunt truck" (as I'm sure Jack wouldn't have referred to it that way if it were Harold's).  But I like your version of the story better!!
 :D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 17, 2009, 12:56:33 am
^ Hmm.  That kinda clashes with Annie Proulx's description of the "cunt truck" (as I'm sure Jack wouldn't have referred to it that way if it were Harold's).  But I like your version of the story better!!
 :D

 :laugh:  Thanks, Laura! 
Title: Poor Uncle Harold, Poor Jack! (3)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 20, 2009, 12:25:52 am
"When did you learn to drive?" Ennis asked Jack after learning that he received a gift of a truck for his 16th birthday.  Jack shrugged.  "Uncle Harold used to take me out driving while he made the rounds of his spread.  When I was real little he used to drive me around while I sat on his lap.  I would grab onto the steering wheel and pretended to steer."  Ennis smiled at the image of a baby Jack Twist sitting on his uncle's lap, grinning, twisting the wheel back and forth.  The very thought of Jack being nurtured and indulged brought into sharp relief the near neglect he endured during his own difficult early childhood.  But Ennis was genuinely happy that at least Jack experienced a bit of joy when he was very young.  And Uncle Harold played a major role in raising Jack Twist: an exceptional young man.  Ennis understood why Jack was so upset that his beloved Uncle Harold was sick unto death.

"I got my license after I turned 17," Jack continued. "My pa took me out driving our truck for real when I was about 14.  Ma didn't want me to drive...thought I would end up somewhere dead on the side of the road, I'm so clumsy!"  Ennis laughed at that.  "But she realized it was important that I learn to drive, cause I could go into town to the store when she needed something." "Sure enough," Ennis interjected.  Jack looked at his friend.  That Ennis was such a good listener that Jack was feeling a bit guilty about going on and on about himself.  "What about you, Ennis," Jack asked as he grabbed Ennis' hand in his.  "When did you learn to drive?"

"Well, I don't have a formal license, but I plan to get one before Alma and me get married."  Jack had a habit of shrinking whenever he heard Alma's name, but he learned to hide it.  He wanted Ennis to keep talking.  "But you can drive, right?  How did you learn?"  Ennis was warming to the subject.  "Oh, I just sorta picked it up," Ennis explained.  My brother taught me most of what I know, and I learned a bit from my old boss up at the ranch I worked at.  My sis never learned how to drive, but KE was always a good driver.  My dad was never very good at driving, and one day...."  Jack knew what made his friend pause and he wanted to change the subject...fast.  No need in resurrecting painful memories.  Jack squeezed his lover's hand.  "Do you want to know when I first got that old truck?"  Ennis brightened all at once.  "Yeah, Rodeo.  Tell me!"

TBC
Title: Re: Sleepy Time
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 24, 2009, 10:12:48 pm
Jack was certain that he would get some sleep if he turned in early, but falling into bed alone at 9p.m. didn't help matters.  By midnight poor Jack was wide awake and suffering!  He hadn't slept more than a few hours since he came back from the last trip to the mountains with Ennis.  That fool Ennis found out that he had been to Mexico and all hell broke loose.  Ennis even threatened to kill Jack, and even after they sort of reconciled, Jack wasn't sure if he would ever see Ennis again.  The thought of being without his lover was unbearable!  The longing for his friend, the loneliness and the uncertainly!  Jack would go mad if he couldn't rest, if he couldn't find some measure of peace.

Lureen barely noticed her husband's torment, but little Bobby learned of his father's misery.  One sleepless night Jack became aware of the rattling of pots and pans from the kitchen.  Lureen was snoring beside him, so what the heck?  Bobby was up and making ready to cook?  Jack had to check it out before the boy turned on the stove and burned the house down.  Jack found Bobby looking through the drawer where Lureen kept the small saucepans.  "Bobby, its late," Jack said.  Bobby looked up at his dad, a sheepish expression on his fresh face. "What are you doing out here in the kitchen at this hour," Jack asked his son.  "Dad, I couldn't sleep," Bobby whispered.  "Ma makes me a nice cup of tea whenever I can't sleep and it helps."  Jack waited and allowed the boy to continue. "Can I make myself a cup of sleep tea, dad?"

Jack smiled at his boy.  Sleep tea, eh?  Jack gently pulled a small saucepan from Bobby's hand and placed it back in the cabinet.  "If we're going to have a cup of tea, we should do it right," Jack explained as he fetched the tea kettle.  Bobby reached down into a cupboard and pulled out the tea.  Jack took the package and read, "Sleepytime herbal tea!"  Well, we'll see if this stuff works, Jack exclaimed.  Bobby nodded and fetched 2 tea cups.  Jack snatched the kettle from the burner right before it whistled.  It wouldn't do to wake Lureen.  Jack poured the scalding water into the cups and added a packet of sugar to each.  He and Bobby carried their cups to the kitchen table and sat.  They drank and caught up.  When Jack felt his eyelids grow heavy, he thanked God for his son.  Bobby was showing signs of sleepiness, as well.  Jack took his boy by the hand and led him to his bedroom.  Little Bobby was asleep almost before his head hit the pillow.  Snuggled inside his own bed, Jack was delighted that he would finally be able to sleep, and if he was lucky, encounter Ennis Del Mar in his dreams.
Title: Poor Uncle Harold, Poor Jack! (4)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on September 28, 2009, 10:55:59 pm
"It was just last year," Jack began, smiling, "and I was helping pa pull the weeds around the barn.  We were working in the hot sun when we saw a black truck heading toward us from the road.  Following the truck was a small light brown Ford."  Jack's voice practically vibrated with excitement.  "Pa and I dropped what we were doing and walked over to the fence that faced the road.  I didn't recognize the truck at first, but when Uncle Harold parked it out by the house, Pa and I looked at each other and raced over to where Harold was climbing out of the passenger side."  Ennis rubbed Jack's arm, encouraging him to continue.  "What happened then," Ennis asked, excited.  "Well, ma was coming out of the house and I saw Uncle Harold having a word with her.  When pa and I approached the truck, Harold turned to me and handed me the keys!"  Jack beamed and Ennis had to smile.  Ennis wanted to hear the whole story.  "So what happened after that, Rodeo?" Ennis asked.

"Ma was smiling from ear to ear," Jack resumed.  "She seemed to be in on the surprise, but Pa was quiet; I don't think he knew about the truck nor was he pleased that Uncle Harold was giving me a gift."  But why wouldn't be be pleased?"   Ennis was genuinely appalled that Jack's father would begrudge his own son such an important gift.  "Don't worry about that, Friend," Jack said, exasperated.  "I'll never understand my old man, but let me get back to the story."  Ennis nodded and allowed Jack to continue:

"Uncle Harold made a small speech about how I'm his favorite nephew, and that he was only glad to give me his truck - a truck that I spent 2 years helping restore." Jack glowed.  "I almost fainted, Ennis," Jack said.  Ennis smiled.  "What did you do, Jack?"  "I couldn't do anything but stare at the car keys in my hands," Jack laughed.  "I stood there, speechless until the adults left to go inside the house for a drink."  "And what about the Ford?" Ennis asked.  Jack looked at his lover as though seeing him for the first time.  "The Ford?  Oh, that was something!"  Ennis raised an eyebrow and urged Jack to continue.  "When my folks entered the house, I noticed the prettiest lady I ever did see sitting behind the wheel.  She was sitting looking at me and smiling.  I walked toward the car to introduce myself."

TBC
Title: Letter to Jack
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 02, 2009, 01:20:46 am
Ennis wanted to write a letter to his beloved.  It was too late to tell him in person how he felt; Jack was dead and buried, but he spoke to Jack aloud all the time, and he was certain that Jack heard him, wherever he was.  Ennis was suffering.  He heard somewhere that the best way to get rid of demons is to write about them.  Ennis sat down on his threadbare couch and placed a piece of paper on this thigh.  He grabbed a pen and the following is the text of Ennis' letter to Jack Twist:

"Please forgive me, my friend.  I never realized just how much you meant to me until it was too late.  But try to understand me, Jack.  I couldn't even let myself think about having a sweet life with you.  And any life with you at all would have been sweet.  I know you would have taken care of me.  You would have cheered me up when I was sad, nursed me when I got sick.  Jack, you would have loved me every night and sometimes through the day.  Listen..I don't deserve such happiness, Jack.  I didn't deserve you then and I don't deserve you now.  And you did make me happy.  I'm so sorry and ashamed that I couldn't tell you just how happy you made me!   I was told I couldn't be anything, Jack.  I never had anyone to believe in me, really...but you.  How can I even think about having a successful business, a good home with a sweet man like you?  I didn't believe in myself.  What did I have to give you?  Forgive me, Jack.  And when the time comes, please be here by my side to take me over.  I know you'll prepare a place for me.  We'll be together my friend.  We'll be together soon.  I love you."

Ennis wiped the tears from the paper and folded it.  He walked over to his wardrobe and opened the door.  He reached inside his own bloody shirt and found Jack's shirt pocket.  He placed the letter in Jack's shirt pocket and closed the door.
Title: Poor Uncle Harold, Poor Jack! (5)
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 09, 2009, 03:46:38 pm
Jack’s cautious approach to the Ford seemed to amuse the pretty lady sitting inside.  Jack moved closer to the car and when he was a few feet away, the woman rolled down the window and stuck her head outside.  “Come on over, young fella, I won’t bite!”  Jack blushed when he heard what the lady had to say, but he did as he was told.

Jack took the proffered hand and studied the woman’s face.  She was 40 if she was a day, and had full lips painted a bright pink.  Her eyes were cat like: green in color and lined in black.  Jack’s eyes moved from the woman’s face to her yellow hair.  He admired the elegant French twist and pearl stud earrings.  “Jack Twist,” Jack muttered, shaking the elegant hand.  He noticed the short red nails and the small diamond sparkler on her left ring finger.  “Mary Francis Hawthorne,” the lady answered, “Pleased to meet, you, Jack Twist.”

Jack didn’t know what else to say to Mary, and he stood there awkwardly, holding her hand.  “I’ll take my hand back now,” Mary laughed.  Jack giggled and released the hand, chagrined.  He thought then that he was forgetting his manners just like every one else.  He couldn’t understand why Uncle Harold was so rude as to leave Mary in the car without so much as an introduction to the family.  Jack pulled on her car door and invited her into the house for a cold drink.  “Why thank you, young man,” Mary replied, gratefully.  “That Uncle of yours can be rather forgetful, but we were only supposed to be here for a short while..drop off your truck and then we were headed out to dinner.”  Jack shook his head, not knowing what to say. 

TBC


Title: No More Room for Me?
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 14, 2009, 11:57:38 pm
K.E. sat Ennis down and told him the story.  He seemed more alive than Ennis ever remembered when he spoke about Tammy: Tammy Blair, soon to be Tammy Del Mar.  Ennis did his best to keep his cool, but he didn’t know what would become of him once K.E. took a wife.  The fact that they were both employed at the same ranch wouldn’t make much difference.  K. E. rented the small place they shared, and once Tammy became his wife and moved in, there would be no more room for him.

Ennis knew Tammy.  She worked as a clerk at the small store in town.  Ennis didn’t think much about K.E’s flirtation with the girl; his older brother was sort of a ladies man, or tried to be.  When K.E. asked Tammy out to eat right in front of him, Ennis wasn’t worried.  Why, just last week K.E. took a pretty little thing named Wilma out to the drive-in movie.  What could be so special about Tammy?

K.E. was quite animated as he went on and on about Tammy and her potential to become manager at the store.  She was such a beautiful woman, K.E. gushed, and she can cook and she is very nice and even tempered.  At every word, Ennis became more and more frightened.  It didn’t look good for him.  K.E. got down to the heart of the matter when he told Ennis that the wedding would take place in a few months and Tammy would move in right away, of course.  Ennis didn’t know what to say.  He knew what needed to be done, however.  The last time he was in the store with K.E., Ennis read the bulletin board that advertised everything from jobs wanted and jobs needed to sales of toasters.  A man named Aguirre was looking for men to herd sheep up on a big mountain during the summer.  Ennis jotted down the number and looked to the future.
Title: Good Times
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 16, 2009, 04:22:51 pm
Ennis sat on a small hill and looked out among the legions of sheep that were under his care.  Bluebelle was at his side and he scratched absently behind the dog’s right ear.  Ennis made the long ride up after enjoying a hearty supper prepared by Jack.  It was Friday and Jack somehow negotiated with The Basque for extra beans, a slab of bacon and a bottle of whiskey.  Ennis never thought that a supper of beans with bacon bits mixed in would seem like a luxury meal from the finest restaurant.  But Jack had a knack of making even the most meager supper seem special.

Ennis never imagined that life could be so good.  The sun was nearing its decent and the sight was beyond belief.  Life was good! He was making a decent salary guarding a flock of dumb animals; a physical job for sure, but he didn’t mind that.  The solitude was a plus, and he never imagined finding someone who would make his work not only bearable, but very pleasurable, indeed.

Nightfall was only a few hours away and Ennis made ready to get the sheep settled down for the night.  He whistled for Bluebelle and pointed her to the herd.  She would have them rounded up in no time, and once the herd was settled and quiet, he could relax a bit.  He would keep his 30-30 handy, keep an eye out for predators and calm his soul with memories of his time with Jack. 
Title: November, December
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 24, 2009, 12:10:40 am
Jack hated November.  He couldn’t care less about the bitter cold; he had grown used to the frigid weather.  But the older he got, the more he noticed that bad things seemed to happen in his life during the month of November. 

Poor Uncle Harold took ill in November, but he recovered in no time.  Still, Harold’s illness stressed Jack no end, as he loved his uncle very much.  And up on Brokeback, Ennis mentioned, almost in passing, that he and Alma would be getting married in November.  Yeah, November was shaping up to be a bad luck month.

Jack couldn’t foresee the November several years down the road: Uncle Harold would die of lung cancer, Ennis would be married to Alma, and his own life would be one of loneliness and near despair.  He would be forced to endure a stupid battle of wills with his father-in-law on Thanksgiving.  Yes, Jack hated November, but December was just as bad.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: gwyllion on November 24, 2009, 10:28:44 pm
Awww...   :'(

November is a bad month for us Brokies. :'(

I hope you have a wonderful Thanksgiving.   :D
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 26, 2009, 01:02:13 am
Awww...   :'(

November is a bad month for us Brokies. :'(

I hope you have a wonderful Thanksgiving.   :D

Hello, Sweetness, thanks for stopping by.  It is always good to see you here.  November is almost over, but I have to admit I do love Thanksgiving.  Have a fabulous Thanksgiving, Love and don't be a stranger!  :-*
Title: Dream Fulfilled
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 06, 2009, 12:21:10 am
Jack watched as Lureen lowered a basket of freshly battered shrimp into the deep-fat fryer.  The gadget was a gift from his mother-in-law who mentioned how the Newsome’s loved fried foods.  Christmas Eve and Lureen was preparing a late supper of jumbo fried prawns, French fries, garlic bread and tossed salad.  The simple meal had become one of Jack’s favorites.  He was almost instantly transported to a mountain where out in the cold, Ennis Del Mar told him all about his favorite food:

Ennis was chomping down on an elk’s rib when Jack felt talkative.  “I know you don’t care much about elk meat, friend, but what kind of food do you really like?  What is your favorite?”  Ennis thought it over.  “Well Rodeo,” he began, “I have to admit to a taste for fried shrimp.  I remember one time my grandparents took us all out to dinner at a place in town.  I didn’t even know what shrimp was at the time, but my ma pointed it out to me on the menu.  She thought I would like it, since I like fish.  My pa thought the price was too much to pay for a young boy’s dinner, but my grandpa told me to order the fried shrimp.”  Ennis’ voice trailed off and Jack noticed a faraway look in his eyes.  “I loved the shrimp,” Ennis mentioned.  “But I’ve never had my fill of them..too expensive.”  Jack lowered his head, a bit sad, then.  “You never got enough of them?” Jack asked, softly.  “No, I never did, Rodeo.”

When Lureen spread the meal out on the dining room table, Jack watched as little Bobby speared a giant prawn with his fork.  When Bobby munched on the fried prawn with gusto, he was again transported, but this time to a cabin upon another cold mountain.  Jack was building a fire out back and preparing to add lard to a large pot he brought up for the occasion.  Ennis was sleeping off their sweet lovemaking, when Jack thought he would prepare the surprise.  He managed to stock several pounds of jumbo prawns up to the cabin in a cooler of dry ice.  The prawns held up well.  Jack watched Lureen prepare the batter many times, and he mixed it before he drove up, placing it in the cooler with the prawns and the dry ice.  Jack was determined that Ennis would eat his fill of fried prawns.  It would be a dream fulfilled: a dream as sweet as Christmas.
Title: The Dishes Can Wait
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 17, 2009, 10:34:31 pm
Jack was tired, but he was also in the mood for some good conversation and a romp around the old cat -piss- smelling tent.  He wasn’t sure if Ennis was up for anything but sleeping and eating, though.  After all, Ennis worked as hard, if not harder than he did.  The fire was ready for a caldron filled to the brim with beans.  Beans seasoned with a bit of salt pork was all Jack could manage.  He hoped Ennis wouldn’t mind another meatless meal.

Jack didn’t have to worry.  Ennis entered camp in a whirl and descended upon the tall pot of beans without a word.  Jack sat on the hard ground and watched as Ennis ate heartily, noisily.  Jack never knew anyone who liked beans as much as Ennis Del Mar.  But did he really like beans so much, or did he pretend to enjoy them just to satisfy his lover?  Jack could take the beans or leave them.  Still, they were filling and good nourishment.  Jack finished off a bowl before Ennis rode up.  He was full and he was ready for love.

Ennis dropped his bowl down to the ground and smiled up at Jack.  “Thank you, Rodeo.”  It was the first words Ennis uttered since he bounded into camp.  “Don’t mention it,” Jack said as he moved closer.  Jack felt a sense of entitlement.  He was full but unsatisfied.  Ennis watched, amused, as Jack lifted his stripped shirt a bit and stuck his head under.  Ennis heaved a hearty sigh as he felt the tip of Jack’s warm tongue caressing his left nipple.  Ennis should be headed for the stream to wash the supper dishes, but that Jack Twist made love, and Ennis couldn’t resist.  Jack withdrew his head from Ennis’ chest and rubbed the back of his neck.  Ennis allowed himself to be led into the tent.  The dishes could wait until later…much later.
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: gwyllion on December 18, 2009, 01:16:51 pm
Yeah! *pumps fist*

That was awesome!

Thank you so much for these beautiful treasures you leave here for us!

Wishing you and yours a wonderful holiday season  :-*
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 18, 2009, 02:29:51 pm
Yeah! *pumps fist*

That was awesome!

Thank you so much for these beautiful treasures you leave here for us!

Wishing you and yours a wonderful holiday season  :-*

You are so very sweet!  :-*  I haven't been feeling well, and that is the only reason I haven't written as many stories lately.  But I'm getting back into the groove.  Gwyllion, you're very kind.  :)  Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

Hope you're having a very nice holiday season.  I wish you all the best during this joyous time of year and all year!
Title: Christmas in July
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 21, 2009, 11:29:35 pm
Jack realized that it was summertime and that Christmas was months away, but he enjoyed his talks with Ennis Del Mar and wanted to know more about him.  Jack placed a hand on Ennis’ thigh and asked, “What kind of Christmas did you guys have at your house?”  Ennis didn’t really like the question, and wondered why Jack would ask something so insensitive.  And why would he think about Christmas when it was summer?  Ennis glanced over at his friend, looking so sincere and expectant that he decided to answer him.  

“You know we didn’t have a lot of money, Rodeo,” Ennis began.  Jack nodded.  “I understand,” Jack whispered, “But we don’t really need a lot of money to enjoy the holiday, do we?”  Ennis thought that over.  He had to smile at Jack’s honest innocence.  He pulled his lover close.  “No, I suppose we don’t need a lot of cash to have a good time at Christmas,” Ennis observed.  He rubbed a few fingers across Jack’s jaw line.  “As long as we’re with good company, as long as we can be with those we love, then that is all that matters.”  Jack snuggled close.  “That is all I mean,” Jack purred.

“So many good things to eat, a lot of presents, visits from relatives, drives around the neighborhood to look at all the lights.  That sound good?”  It was Jack.  He was very animated when he asked the question.  Ennis liked the sound of it, but couldn’t relate.  He never had any Christmas like the one Jack described.  “All that sounds good to me, Rodeo, but we didn’t have Christmases like you did.  Couldn’t afford it!”  Jack looked at Ennis.  “Who had a Christmas like that,” He asked, incredulous.  Ennis was puzzled.  “But I just thought….”  “Friend, Jack began, “I’m describing the kind of Christmas that I would like..you know..some time in the future.  We couldn’t afford the perfect Christmas when I was coming up.  But someday…”  Ennis silenced his friend with a kiss on the lips.  He didn’t know about someday, but for now, Ennis was more than content with Christmas talk: a sort of Christmas in July.


Title: To Ennis Del Mar and Family
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 28, 2009, 09:41:30 pm
Alma Del Mar saw the envelope that was wedged between the phone bill and a notice from the landlord.  Alma’s heart began to beat much faster as she separated what looked like a Christmas card from the rest of the mail.  She turned the envelope over in her fingers and recognized the handwriting almost immediately!  The card was addressed to Ennis Del Mar and family.   It was most certainly written by Jack Twist.

Alma walked over to the kitchen table with the card and sat herself down.  She poured herself another cup of weak coffee and pulled a smoke from her bra.  Alma looked around at her tiny apartment and smiled.  She and Ennis tried their best to decorate the place for the girls, and the family was getting on well.  Alma placed the card down on the table and grimaced when she saw Jack’s chicken scratch.  Life was good, the Holidays were very pleasant, and now Jack had to go and insinuate himself into their lives once again.  Alma blew out a puff of smoke and felt guilty.  Jack had every right to wish his friend a happy holiday season, right?  Alma glanced at the envelope again.  It did say, “To Ennis Del Mar and Family.”

Alma decided to open the card.  After all, she’s family, and as such, free to open a letter addressed to Ennis and family.  Sure, her husband would throw a fit when he saw that the envelope was opened, but Alma didn’t care.  She used a fingernail to ease the back flap of the envelope open.  The card was a festive affair with a lovely scene of a church house out in the forest somewhere, and the entire edifice was covered with snow.  A giant Douglas Fir was rooted next to the church and was elaborately decorated.  Alma had to admit that the card was very fancy.  She opened it and read past the generic greeting.  That Jack Twist added a message of his own, and it was at least a paragraph long.  Alma couldn’t bring herself to read Jack’s message to her husband…she just couldn’t.  Once the card was back in the envelope, Alma placed it on top of the other mail for Ennis to look over when he returned home from work.  
Title: Mrs. Sweeney's Boarding House
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 31, 2009, 01:18:30 am
Jack walked to his room and placed his gloves on the bed.  He was renting a room in Mrs. Sweeney’s rooming house.  His room rented for $10.00 a week, and with his meager winnings from rodeo competitions, and pay from odd jobs, Jack was just able to afford his room and the meals that Mrs. Sweeney provided for $3.00 more a week.  He was about ready to move on.  It was no reflection on Billie Sweeney and her modest house, but Jack was itching to participate in every rodeo riding competition in the fine State of Texas.  He sat on the bed and rubbed his elbow.  He was hungry, he was tired, and, yes, he missed Ennis Del Mar.

Jack couldn’t chase the memory of Ennis walking down the road behind him as they left Brokeback Mountain after the job was cut short.  Jack will never forget the look on Ennis’ face; was certain that his handsome mug looked a little sick, a bit green.  He fought every urge to turn his truck around and go back for his friend, but he wasn’t at all sure that Ennis would welcome him.  They did not leave on the best of terms.  Oh, they weren’t angry, but their parting was awkward to say the last.  Jack put the sad image of Ennis disappearing out of his life to rest as pulled off his dirty jeans and put on his only other pair of clean stiff wash jeans.  Mrs. Sweeney served dinner at 7:00p.m. sharp, and she didn’t abide people sitting at her table wearing dirty clothes.  Billie Sweeney was a simple woman, but she was well bred.  When she was a girl her father insisted that the family dressed for dinner.  She couldn’t require her boarders, who were, for the most part, simple working people to wear fancy suits and dresses to her dinner table.  But the people she served could at least be neat and clean.  Jack smoothed his hair and headed downstairs to the dining room for supper.  He fought back tears as he wondered where Ennis would eat supper that night.  Jack saw visions of Alma serving Ennis his supper.  He shook the pictures out of his mind.  The thought of Ennis with a wife was more than he could bear.

Mrs. Sweeney was just placing the last of the platters on the table when Jack sat down.  He was the 3rd and last boarder to arrive.  To his right sat Mr. Charles Simmons, a roughneck, and seated next to Mr. Simmons was Pearl Whittle, a librarian.  Simon McBride sat on the right of Billie Sweeney.  No one spoke as Mrs. Sweeney said grace.  Jack looked at his hostess and waited for her nod.  He reached for the mashed potatoes and loaded his plate.  Mrs. Sweeney encouraged her guests to eat their fill, and smiled as Jack, Charles and Simon enjoyed fried pork chops, apple sauce, mashed potatoes and green beans and bread.  Pearl ate only green beans and a bit of the mashed potatoes.  The conversation at the table was light.  The boarders took turns talking about their adventures at work and elsewhere.  Jack spoke about the odd jobs he did around the ranches in the area, and Pearl went on about a new assistant librarian that was hired just that morning.  Charles was silent.  Jack never looked his way, but Charlie stole glances at Jack.  Charlie Simmons was a big, silent, affable man who had hazel eyes and dirty blond hair.  He was very buff and very handsome.  Jack couldn’t look at him.  He didn't have to just then.  Charlie would visit him later that night when the house grew dark and silent.  Their "affair" was going on for weeks now.  Charlie would knock, and Jack would open the door and allow him to enter.  Charlie would disrobe in silence while Jack placed lube on the bed.  The coupling was mechanical.  Both knew that there would be no strings attached, no feelings to get in the way.  Recreation, it was.  Jack felt free to call Ennis’ name when his release was near.  Charlie didn’t care.  He was happy to be Ennis. As long as his needs were met, he could be anyone Jack wanted him to be.
 
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: gwyllion on December 31, 2009, 11:08:36 am
 :'( :'( :'(

 :P

Happy New Year!
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 31, 2009, 09:43:19 pm
Happy New Year, Sweets!  :-*
Title: Winner?
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 10, 2010, 04:46:11 pm
Jack walked onto the raised platform with a coy smile on his handsome face.  A lovely young woman in a cheap evening gown approached him carrying a small loving cup and a large check.  Jack won the Texas State Rodeo championship and he couldn't be happier or more pleased with himself.  He accepted the check and the trophy from the beautiful lady, and allowed her to kiss his ruddy cheek. 

Jack stepped up to the microphone to make his victory speech to spectators, judges and fellow contestants.  He was terrified of public speaking, but managed to thank his parents, his wife and son and all of his "fans" who stood by him and cheered him on.  After his brief talk, Jack was led off the stage by the pretty woman who handed him the trophy and the check for $5.000.

Lureen met Jack at the bar after the ceremony and she kissed him full on the mouth.  Jack woke up just then and realized that his wife was actually kissing him.  He shrugged her off and when he got his bearings, was annoyed that Lureen woke him from a dream; the only time he would ever win a State Rodeo tournament.  Jack looked at Lureen lying there, stricken.  It was obvious that she wanted a bit of loving, but Jack wouldn't oblige her.  He turned away and tried to head back to sleep.  Perhaps he could actually pick up the dream where it left off.  He would re-enter a fantasy where he was $5.000 richer.  He could put that money away for a time when Ennis agreed to that sweet life: a life that might only be realized in his dreams.
Title: Along for the Ride
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 13, 2010, 02:55:48 am
It started calm and smooth, almost mindlessly, instinctively.  Jack raised his hands high over his head, Ennis did the same.  Ennis touched Jack's slightly damp fingertips, rubbed ever so lightly.  Jack held his lover's gaze; Ennis couldn't look away from those blue eyes, his heart began to race!

Jack's fingers moved slowly downward until he reached his lover's firm and toned arms.  Ennis, his arms still raised, shivered as Jack caressed.  Ennis lowered his arms to respond better to Jack's fevered touch.  It was Ennis' turn to touch, to love.

It was a slow, sweet dance.  Jack pulled Ennis close and held on tight as he rocked back and forth.  Ennis was happy to go along for the ride.  It was a welcome pleasure, especially after a day filled with the monotomy of tending sheep.  Jack could have held his lover for hours, but Ennis had other ideas.
Title: After the Rain
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on January 30, 2010, 06:33:57 pm
It was a rainy Friday and Ennis had taken care of the supplies issue.  The Basque was particularly generous and slipped a large salami in with the beans, biscuits and powdered milk.  Ennis smiled as he saw the black spotted, maroon colored salami.  The Basque saw the smile and wondered what it was all about.  He shook his head as he watched Ennis walk off up toward the mountain.  Who could figure out young people these days?

Ennis slipped as he scaled the mountain path in the aftermath of the cloudburst.  He almost fell flat on his face, and winced as the mare momentarily lost her footing and threatened to spill the contents of the pack onto the mud covered earth.  It wouldn’t do to have a repeat of the debacle with the bear.  Jack wouldn’t tolerate beans for another week or so, and Ennis didn’t think he could kill another elk.   But the mare was a soldier.  She carried the supplies up without incident.

Ennis was back in camp and had plenty of time to get everything ready for Jack’s return.  He scampered around, avoiding puddles and mud soaked Earth.  When the salami was cut and the beans were simmering, Jack rode up and leapt off of his horse.  He saw Ennis standing by the fire and without thinking ran over to him and tackled him to the ground.  Ennis was thrown into a puddle and found himself wresting with a laughing Jack Twist.  Ennis avoided muddy messes all day, but once Jack appeared on the scene, he was soaking and filthy.  Best to go with it, Ennis thought.  He would get his revenge later on – later that night!
Title: Gotta Get Away
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 05, 2010, 11:49:19 pm
Jack was bone weary but he was not too tired to throw a few things into his travel duffel and pack several edible items in a cooler.  He endured a hard week at the dealership, as Mr. Newsome was seriously ill and Lureen was distraught.  The old man was cetain that he was not long for the world, and Lureen spent most of her time at her father’s side.  Her absence was a hardship, Jack realized.  The running of the business fell to him, and he did his level best to keep the dealership afloat.  His hard work did not go unnoticed.  Lureen gave him the week of the 5th off, and he planned to spend it with Ennis Del Mar.

Lureen was at her parent’s place with little Bobby when Jack made ready to take the long journey to the Teton Range.  He didn’t feel a smidgen of remorse or guilt, as little Booby would be fine with his womenfolk.  And Mr. Newsome?  Jack didn’t feel bad about leaving while the old man was so sick.  Actually, Jack never believed that the old boy was on his death bed.  He had been ill many, many times and each time he managed to pull through.  "The old man is too evil to die," Jack reasoned.

Jack paid a visit to the Newsome’s spread just a few days ago to visit his father-in-law.  Jack was seated in a chair right beside L.D.s bed when Lureen patted his shoulder and took leave.  It seemed that Mr. Newsome wanted to speak to his son-in-law in private.  Jack cringed when he remembered how the old man seemed to force the words out.  He once again offered Jack a sizeable sum to leave his little girl for good and never look back.  The old bastard said something about going to meet his maker and that he wanted his little girl free to marry a man who was right for her.  He wanted to die with the knowledge that his Lureen could finally be happy.  Jack wondered how the old faker would react if he accepted the offer.  He was tempted to take the bribe, of course, even when he couldn’t convince Ennis to move away with him.  Jack forced his thoughts to the present and to Ennis.  He hefted his gear onto the back of his truck and slid behind the driver’s seat.  He didn’t know what circumstances would transpire while he was living it up with the love of his life, but truth be told, he couldn’t care less.  Jack sped out of his driveway and turned onto the highway.  Ennis was waiting!

Title: Birthday Boy
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on February 19, 2010, 06:31:05 pm
“Hey, don’t forget the whiskey,” an already tipsy Jack Twist yelled playfully over his shoulder to Ennis.  Ennis smiled back and donned his coat and hat.  He was only happy to go out for more ice, and per Jack’s request, another bottle or 2 of whiskey.  And why not?  Jack was celebrating his 30th birthday and both men were feeling fine and mellow.  All of their mutual friends were gathered at the party Ennis planned for almost a year.  Bobby and Ennis’ girls were in charge of the food and the wives (the ex-wives, actually) kept the guest’s glasses full.  Lureen was the first to notice how the whiskey and ice was in short supply.  She told Jack who sent Ennis out to purchase supplies.

Ennis was back from the liquor store in a flash.  He entered the hall he rented and stood by the door to take it all in.  He watched his daughters and Bobby waiting on the guests.  They handed over a plate of food with a smile.  Lureen and Alma tended bar like a couple of pros.  And Jack?  He was in his element as he worked the crowd.  Jack slapped a back here and there, planted a kiss on a cheek, laughed his handsome head off.  Ennis couldn’t move as he watched his lover.  Jack was so damned happy.  It warmed his heart, and it made him as horny as hell.  Ennis rushed over to the bar and handed the ice and booze to Lureen.  He was off in Jack’s direction even before Lureen could thank him.

Jack’s blue eyes twinkled when he noticed Ennis moving toward him.  Jack stood still and waited until his lover was standing right before him.  Ennis smiled and whispered in the birthday boy’s ear.  Jack’s face registered mock surprise and shock.  “But cowboy, we have the hall until 11:00, and the party just started.”  Ennis looked around, and pulled Jack off into a deserted corner.  “I need you now, Jack.  We can pretend that it is 11:00.”  Jack couldn’t believe it, but he wouldn’t argue.  Besides, he wanted Ennis, as well.  “They’ll understand, Jack,” Ennis muttered.  Jack nodded and walked back to the center of the hall.  Ennis watched, flustered as Jack excused his guests.  But in that very moment, a truck rumbled past outside Ennis’ trailer.  He was so rudely awakened that he cursed.  Ennis pulled himself up from his tiny bed and reached for the clock he kept close by.  9:13a.m. and he was late for work!  It was not like Ennis to oversleep, and what could he tell his boss?  He was late because he was dreaming about Jack Twist?  Ennis leapt up and made ready for work.  He would focus on the dream and let it get him through the day.
Title: A Bit of Comfort
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 06, 2010, 12:03:16 am
Ennis was anxious as he led his mule down the side of the mountain to the meeting place to order supplies.  Jack rode into camp the night before in the middle of a cloud burst and caught cold.  He was a shivering, coughing, sneezing mess when Ennis left him huddled in the tent.  The first aide kit contained a lot of aspirin, some bandages and a whole lot of ointments.  Ennis thought back a few hours when he took Jack into his arms and hand fed him a few Bayer aspirin.  Jack smiled up at him with watery eyes.  Ennis knew then and there that Jack deserved a treat.

The Basque was waiting at the appointed place, and he smiled sheepishly as he watched Ennis’ approach.  Ennis handed over the list and waited expectantly as The Basque read it over:  “Beans, jerky, powdered milk, bacon, ham, biscuits, and orange juice???”  Ennis lowered his head when he heard the Basque’s voice question the addition of the juice.  Ennis already knew that orange juice was a luxury, but Jack deserved it.  Ennis was certain that a large glass of juice would lift Jack’s spirits and speed his recovery.

“Jack is sick,” Ennis explained.  “I just thought a bottle of orange juice would help him get better.  “I’m sorry to hear it,” whispered The Basque.  “But if he is ill, shouldn’t he come down and go home?”  The Basque looked into Ennis’ eyes and smirked.  He worked for Joe Aguirre for almost 20 years and had heard it all from the young hired bucks.  Ennis couldn’t fathom Jack leaving him up on the mountain all by himself.  “No, he ain’t that bad,” Ennis responded, hastily.  “I just thought together with the aspirin, the juice would do Jack good.”  The Basque smiled and walked away, leaving Ennis there for a few moments.  He returned with what looked like a bottle thrown carelessly into a brown paper bag.  The Basque handed the bag to Ennis and motioned for him to look inside.  Ennis pulled the full bottle of OJ from the bag and he looked up at The Basque and smiled.  “We all need a bit of comfort sometime,” said The Basque as he filled the rest of Ennis’ order.
Title: On Your Feet, Cowboy
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 20, 2010, 11:15:21 pm
The pretty man wearing a blue shirt and distressed jeans walked over to the juke box and had a look.  Ennis was seated all by himself, nursing his 3rd beer and smoking his 2nd cig of the evening.  The man’s startling blue eyes stole glances at Ennis as he stuck a quarter in the box and waited as his favorite song boomed loud.  Ennis didn’t look up as the gorgeous young man stood before him.  “May I sit?” the young man asked, almost shyly.  Ennis was ready to give a curt reply until his eyes met those of the young man.  He couldn’t speak, but instead motioned to the empty chair beside him.  The young man flashed a dazzling smile and took a seat.

He called himself Jack Twist and Ennis learned that Jack was just barely making a living by riding broncs.  He was a married man living in Texas, and he had a beautiful wife and a sweet little son.  Jack was in town to ride in a competition that Sunday night in Cody, and he was alone.  Ennis told him all about his life: he was the father of 2 pretty little girls and he was divorced.  He told the young man that he did mostly seasonal work at local ranches to take care of himself and his kids.  Jack listened with great interest.  His smile was warm and he seemed enthralled.  Ennis was intrigued, as well.  He was so lonely that he could barely stand it, and when Jack placed a tender hand over his own, he made no attempt to move away.  Jack rose quickly from the table and made for the door.  Ennis settled the bill and followed him out.

It was not a dream, but one of many waking fantasies Ennis conjured when he missed Jack so much that the pain was palpable.  Just a few more shots of whiskey and Ennis could take to his bed to live out the rest of the fantasy.  He wasn’t sure how he would end it this time.  Last week Jack took him to the hotel he rented while in town for the rodeo.  A few days ago Ennis ended the story by bringing Jack to the trailer for a few fun and games.  The possibilities were practically endless and would be helped along by the whiskey and the comfort of a warm bed.
Title: His Own Terms
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on March 26, 2010, 08:43:34 pm
“Let me help you with that,” Jack offered as he watched Ennis’ attempt to light a supper fire.  “No, I got this,” Ennis answered softly over his shoulder.  “You just take a load off after that long journey of yours, and I’ll take care of camp tonight.  I know how tired you must be.”  Jack flashed that mega watt smile of his and winked so seductively that Ennis almost burned himself.  That man would be in serious trouble come lights out.

Jack was settled in no time.  Ennis found him standing out back of the cabin, a cig dangling from his full lips.  Ennis stood behind and watched him for awhile.  Jack was very still as he took in the view.  He moved only to flick the ash from his cig, and as he did so, Ennis caught sight of one of Jack’s baby blues.  Ennis saw tears, he was certain of it, and his heart didn’t know whether to break or rejoice.  Tears of joy?  Had to be!  Ennis decided right then and there to provide comfort and reassurance.  He sidled up behind his lover and grabbed him tenderly in a bear hug.  Jack didn’t even flinch, but pulled his friend even closer.

It was one of Ennis’ favorite day dreams.  The fishing trips were a thing of the past, but not in privacy of Ennis’ imagination.  He could hang out with Jack whenever he wanted to, really.  And in the years since Jack’s passing, he and Jack were “together” at least once a day.  Ennis was retired after many years as a ranch hand and he vowed to spend the reminder of his days on his own terms. 
Title: Forgiven?
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 09, 2010, 01:01:34 am
“You have some beautiful girls, Cowboy!”  It was Jack, barely forcing out the words as he gobbled down a large fork full of apple pie.  Ennis watched, concerned, terrified that Jack would choke on the pie.  They were finishing up a tasty meal Ennis prepared for them in his little house.  Jack drove up on an impulse after receiving Ennis’ phone call about the divorce.  Ennis felt guilty about allowing Alma to collect the girls early, but her calling was fortuitous: Ennis didn’t want to send Jack away.  They hadn’t seen each other in months and Jack driving up like that was a pleasant surprise.

“You think they’re cute?” Ennis whispered.  Jack shook his head in the affirmative as he washed down the apple pie with a swig of black coffee.  “Well, I happen to agree with you, Rodeo,” Ennis beamed.  “I’m right proud of those gals of mine.  They’re pretty, sweet and smart as whips!”  “Like their pa,” Jack mumbled after downing another slice of pie.  Ennis smiled and rose from his tiny “dining” table.  He moved around in his tiny kitchen, biding his time, trying to look busy as he thought of a way to keep Jack under wraps, while at the same time showing him a good time.  It would be hard, but he had to have a story ready in case one of the neighbors saw them out and started being nosy, asking questions.  But then, what was the problem?  Ennis shook his head and forced himself to be positive.  There was no law that he knew of that forbade him a visit from a friend.  Hey, to hell with the neighbors.  Jack finished his dessert and brought the plate and cracked coffee mug into the kitchen.  He stacked the plate and mug into the sink among the other dirty dishes.  Ennis walked over to his friend and rubbed his shoulder.  Jack would be with him for about a week and…let the games begin!

Ennis sighed.  This waking dream was not his favorite, but he conjured it up quite often.  He felt a pang of remorse when he remembered turning Jack away that time, and the reverie was a way to make up for it.  Ennis was good at imagining the mischief he would have led Jack into if he didn’t have the girls that week, and if Jack was allowed to stay with him.  “You understand don’t you, Jack?” Ennis shouted out loud.  He didn’t expect an answer, naturally, but he was sure Jack heard him and he was forgiven.
Title: If Only...
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on April 27, 2010, 10:27:52 pm
“So what did ya think of the McCormick spread,” Ennis asked Jack as they walked to their truck.  Ennis stopped and slapped Jack’s shoulder affectionately.  “Do ya reckon the place will be a good match for Baby and Hilda?"  Jack pictured Baby and Hilda, the newest calves that came out of Beth and Gilda.  He smiled as he imaged the calves roaming around the fabulous McCormick spread when they were old enough to leave their mothers.  “I think Baby and Hilda will be right happy here, En,” Jack answered with a bit of enthusiasm.  “Maybe we should give Mr. McCormick little Jesse as a goodwill gesture.  After all, Mr. McCormick is taking a chance on us.  We have to be neighborly if we’re gonna build up the operation!"  “Sure enough,” Ennis agreed.  He opened the driver’s side door and waited for Jack to climb in. 

It was almost midnight before Jack made it back to the ranch house.  He was riding around the property, making sure that the cows and calves were safe and happy, and that the ranch was secure.  He was also counting his blessings that Ennis came to his senses and agreed to start the cow and calf business.  Jack was enormously happy and whistled as he entered the ranch house from the back.  He found Ennis in the living room, fast asleep on the recliner with the paper folded out on his lap.  Jack stared at his lover and felt his heart skip a beat.  He bent down and placed a silent, gossamer peck on Ennis’ brow.  Ennis didn’t even stir.  Jack chuckled silently and headed for the bedroom.  He would wait for Ennis to finish his nap and then…

It was too much for him!  Ennis woke in a sweat, or was it tears that moistened his face and the bed clothes?  The dream was one that was hardest to bear, and, sadly, it was the most frequent.  Ennis sighed and threw the covers off.  He saw that the sun was just about to rise and he had a job at a real ranch to keep him busy...and paid.  But what if life had been different and he somehow found the strength to take Jack up on his offer of the sweet life?  If only….
Title: Happy Mother's Day, Alma Del Mar
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on May 08, 2010, 08:40:18 pm
Ennis was feeling low, and for once, his pain had nothing to do with Jack Twist.  Only a week before Mother’s day and Ennis had nothing to give Alma, the mother of his beautiful girls!  Ennis watched his wife as she played with their daughters.  That Alma was a good mom and she was certainly deserving of something nice for Mother’s Day.  Ennis shifted uncomfortably on the living room couch as he racked his brain.   He had to come up with a way to surprise his wife, and he had a week in which to do it.

Alma was on Jack Twist’s mind, as well.  He remembered the look on her face as she practically squeaked “hello” the one and only time he visited that little apartment over the Laundromat.  Jack couldn’t explain it, but his heart ached for the sweet faced Alma Del Mar.  She married a good man, but Ennis’ little family had so little.  Jack wanted to do something special for her, out of what…concern? Or could it be guilt?  After all, Jack was determined to win Ennis back, no matter what. Jack was seated outside in his spacious back yard watching Lureen as she put a few steaks on the grill for supper.  He felt very fortunate as he took in the scene.  One week until Mother’s Day, and he had everything under control, and Lureen was none the wiser.  Reservations were already made for 3 at “The Elegant Farmer” and a tasteful, thin gold bracelet was well hidden.  Even little Bobby had a bottle of Chanel No. 5 ready for his mom, after saving his allowance for over a year to purchase the gift. Jack contemplated his life as he watched his family get ready for a luxury dinner.  He was not happy by any means, but he was certainly comfortable.  He had to find a way to do something for his friend’s wife.  She deserved it!

Ennis sat alone during lunch as he had little to say to his boss or his co-workers.  He wasn’t afraid of alienating anyone; Ennis had no use for friends at that stage in his life.  He was right about to bite into his second PB&J sandwich when Jerry approached with message: Steve, the Foreman, wanted to see him right away.  Ennis felt his throat constrict and it wasn’t because of the peanut butter.  “Do you know what he wants?” Ennis asked Jerry as he took a swig of milk to wash down the bite of sandwich.  “No, he didn’t tell me,” was all Jerry said as he retreated to a bench to finish his own lunch.  Ennis rose from his seat and left his wrappers and empty milk carton for later.  Thoughts of layoffs and pay cuts invaded his mind as he knocked on Steve’s door, and his knees felt weak.  What would he do if he lost some of his pay or was laid off altogether?  Life was hard enough on what he was bring in.  He couldn't stand the gloomy thoughts and resolved right then and there to stay positive.  “Come in,” Steve yelled in answer to Ennis’ knock.  Steve got right to the point: “I have to admit that you’re one of the best workers I have, Del Mar,” He began.  “I would appreciate it if you kept this under wraps, but I’m giving you a bonus for a job well done.” Ennis couldn’t be certain that he’d heard right, and he was silent.  Steve smiled at him and continued: “I have here in this envelope a gift certificate for 4 to the Knife and Fork for whenever you want to use it.  This includes dinner, drinks, dessert and can be used starting this Sunday.  I also have cash here for you in the amount of $50.00.”  Ennis could feel tears threatening to fall. “Well, come get your bonus, man,” Steve laughed.  “Enjoy, and remember, not a word of this to anyone.  I don’t want to make this a regular thing, especially since I can’t say how much I’ll have from day to day.”  “Yessir,” Ennis managed.  He gingerly removed the envelope from Steve’s fingers and walked out of his office.  Once outside, Ennis almost danced a jig!  He smiled as he thought about the nice purse and blouse that he would purchase for his wife with the bonus money.  And how about dinner on Mother’s Day at the Knife and Fork?  Ennis couldn’t believe his good fortune.  He had doubts about the veracity of Steve’s generosity, but refused to question it.  After all, God moved in mysterious ways.  Meanwhile, Steve reflected back on the conversation he'd had with a man living in Texas, and his own instructions to keep the entire arrangement top secret.  That Ennis Del Mar was a lucky man to have such a good friend.
Title: Never Look Back
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on May 15, 2010, 11:40:17 pm
Lureen held little Bobby’s hands in her own and counted his tiny fingers.  Jack observed his family with pride.  His newborn son was certainly handsome and healthy, and he seemed to be a live one.  And Lureen?  Jack couldn’t believe how beautiful she looked after a difficult 12 hour labor.  He moved closer to his family and placed a gentle hand on his son’s small head.

Lureen’s parents were due for a visit at any moment and Jack wasn’t looking forward to having his in-laws around.  He anxiously glanced at the vacant chair by the door.  He thought he saw a man sitting there, a man that looked a lot like Ennis Del Mar.  Jack was instantly ashamed of himself.  He just became the father of a fine son and his family should be his main focus.  But he couldn’t help himself.  Ennis couldn’t be with him but Jack could see him, feel him, imagine him close by.  Jack allowed his mind to wander, just for a second, and after that he vowed to focus his full attention on his wife and tiny son.  Jack imagined that Ennis was sitting in the chair watching, grinning from ear to ear.  Jack reached a hand toward his friend and beckoned him over. “Come Ennis,” Jack whispered, “Come over and see my son.”  In his mind’s eye Jack lifted his boy from Lureen’s breast and folded him into Ennis’ arms.  He smiled at his friend as Ennis kissed Bobby’s brow.  Jack snuggled close to the both of them and held on for dear life.  “What ya thinking about, honey?” Lureen asked, amused.  She pulled her husband back to reality just as Mr. and Mrs. Twist entered the room.

Jack's heart was heavy as the reality of the situation hit home: Ennis was unaware that Jack just had a son.  Jack was also ashamed that from the day he met him, Ennis was never from his thoughts.  “Oh, En,” Jack lamented deep in his heart, “Even at a time like this, it’s all about you.”  “He looks just like his grandpa! Don’t you think he looks like his grandpa, Rodeo?” Mr. Twist instigated and almost smirked.  Jack nodded, agreeably, but he was a bit hurt.  He felt like nothing more than a sire.  He caught the keys that his father-in-law tossed to him and headed outside to fetch the box of formula for his son.  If he had his way he would get behind the wheel of his father-in-law’s Lincoln and drive off to Wyoming and never look back.
Title: The 4th
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on June 30, 2010, 10:36:26 pm
“Jack, bring over the chicken,” Ennis shouted from his place at the little portable grill.  Jack was fiddling around in the meat cooler when he heard Ennis’ order.  Jack reached down past the burger patties and the ribs to pull up a cooler containing chicken swimming in his special marinade.  Jack’s marinated chicken was Ennis’ favorite.  Ennis had to have it whenever they met up for a fishing trip, but this time was different.  Jack brought along a variety of vittles: chicken marinated to the bone, hamburgers already molded into patties, hot dogs, potato salad, rolls, ice cream.  After all, it was the 4th of July weekend.

Ennis placed a few chicken hind quarters on the grill and luxuriated in the smell of exotic spices.  He knew Jack perfected the balance of spices for the marinade over many years.  His acquired prowess in the kitchen surprised and delighted Ennis.  Jack never displayed the sort of genius for cooking up on Brokeback; it seemed married life had its advantages.  Jack retreated to the cooler and began seasoning the hamburgers.  The tender, oversized burgers would hit the grill next.  Ennis looked over to the cooler and smiled at his lover.  He couldn’t believe that either of them managed to make it up there, especially on a holiday weekend.  But Lureen and her parents, along with little Bobby, were flying to Hawaii for 2 weeks, and Jack didn’t seem offended when he was not invited to go along.  He recognized the perfect opportunity to be with his man, and he called Ennis up as soon as Lureen and Bobby left the house.  Ennis just happened to be free – Alma had the girls that week, and they were sending the holiday with Alma’s sister.  Ennis didn’t mind.  As it was, he and Jack never had enough time to be together.  The 4th of July weekend together was just what the doctor ordered!  Ennis prepared the picnic feast and thought ahead to that night: after the fireworks display, he planned to surprise Jack with some toys he brought along.  Ennis blushed when he thought of the provocative objects stashed away in his duffle.  He brought along…..

The alarm clock blared loud and shrill.  Ennis almost cried out, he was so angry.  He couldn’t recall the last time he and Jack were together, and his dream of spending a special holiday with his lover was the next best thing.  But he had work to do, and children to support, so he forced himself to leave his warm bed.  Ennis headed for his sink to take a leak, but his erection delayed that for awhile.  He sat down on his tiny couch and helped relieve himself to further thoughts of Jack, marinated chicken and sex toys on the 4th…
Title: Love Song
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on July 15, 2010, 09:05:23 pm
Ennis had a scratchy, fine voice, but he didn’t want to start belting out a tune and make poor Jack self-conscious.  He endured while Jack sat down on a couple of logs and “serenaded” him with every kind of song from top 40 hits to church hymns, even a Negro spiritual or two.  

After Jack finished murdering “His Eye is on The Sparrow,” Ennis clapped and uttered with all sincerity, “Very good, Rodeo!”  Jack bent over in an exaggerated bow and smiled coyly.  “Why don’t you give us a song, Ennis?” Jack asked, playfully.  “You in good voice?”  Ennis lowered his head and tried to hide a grin.  “I don’t know about all that, bud,” Ennis muttered.  “I think we had just about all the music we need for one afternoon, don’t ya think?”  Jack tried his best to hide his disappointment, but Ennis knew in an instant that Jack was sorta hurt.  He didn’t say another word, but had something up his sleeve.

It was getting late and almost time to bed down for the night.  Jack took one final walk around the perimeter of camp to make sure that the fire was fixing to die out, but would smolder long enough to keep the wildlife away, at least for awhile.  Ennis was inside the tent, preparing for bed.  Satisfied that all was well, Jack climbed inside his brand new tent, and after undressing, joined Ennis in the sleeping bag.  Ennis pulled his man close and kissed him tenderly on his forehead.  Jack snuggled into his lover’s arms and very gently, very sweetly, Ennis started to hum into Jack’s hair.  He sang so quietly a tender love song.  After all, Ennis did feel he owed Jack a song.  Jack was so moved he couldn’t speak.  No other sound in the tent except the whisper of two lovers snuggling, rocking - one crooning a song of love.
Title: Jack and Jimbo
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 05, 2010, 09:15:33 pm
Jack never expected to see Jimbo the Clown waiting for him in the parking lot of the bar.  Jimbo was leaning up against the driver’s side door of his truck, his arms folded in front of him.  Jack was astonished!  How did Jimbo leave the bar so soon, and how did he manage to slip by him?  Jack looked at Jimbo and away to the entrance of the bar.  Jimbo’s handsome mouth turned up in a grin as he noticed Jack’s confusion. “Ya ever hear of a back door?”

The dewy fine hair on the back of his neck stood straight up, and Jack wanted to heed his instincts, but Jimbo was very sexy standing there all smiles.  Jimbo crocked a little finger Jack’s way.  C’mere this way, cowboy," Jimbo whispered so softly that Jack wasn’t certain he heard.  “My name is James, but you probably already knew that.”  Jack was silent.  He was wary.  Why would the best rodeo clown he ever worked with –and he was the best – be interested now after turning him down, after humiliating him just moments ago?  Jimbo noticed Jack’s hesitation and it seemed to amuse him.  “What’s the matter, Cowboy, cat got your tongue?”  Jack flinched.  He stepped back, but Jimbo wouldn’t give up.  He cocked his head toward the bar.  “I’m sorry about how I treated you back there, and I apologize for high tailin’ it to those clowns over playin’ pool.  But Jack, I didn’t say anything about you, I promise.” Jimbo examine his nails. "I just wanted to throw them off our trail, make up a few white lies to keep them off the scent, if you know what I mean."    Jack knew what he meant, wasn’t sure that Jimbo spoke the truth, but he wanted to hear him out.  “Look,” Jimbo said, “I got me a nice little place I’m renting over by the fairgrounds.  We can have the place all to ourselves for the rest of the night.  The landlady lives upstairs but she’s visiting her sister for the weekend.”  Jimbo took a step toward Jack.  He wondered if Jack would pull back if he took his hand.  Jimbo gently lifted Jack’s hand in his.  Jack didn’t pull back.

Jimbo’s room was unremarkable, but the sheer size of it gave Jack pause.  Jimbo had a suite, actually.  The full sized bed was neatly made and covered with a horse blanket.  An overstuffed chair and ottoman and a heavy oak wood table on which rested a small TV were the only furnishings.  Jimbo motioned for Jack to sit down on the bed.  “Make yourself to home,” he told Jack as he flopped down on the chair.  Jack sat down on the bed and watched as Jimbo hoisted his feet onto the ottoman.  “I’m tired!” Jimbo stated emphatically as he practically peeled his hat from his damp hair.  Jack said nothing as he admired the man.   His stomach began to drop when he considered just how much James reminded him of Ennis.  He  fought to chase the memory of Ennis out of his consciousness.  If he played his cards right, he just might get lucky.
Title: Jack and Jimbo Part 2
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on October 11, 2010, 11:08:58 pm
Jack watched as James rose from the overstuffed chair and sat down next to him.  He gently rubbed Jack’s hand and looked him square in the eyes.  “I don’t know much about you cowboy,” James began, tenderly, “but I sure noticed you out there.”  Jack blushed and thought back to that very afternoon when Jimbo saw he was in trouble and rushed in to lure the angry steer away from him.  He also seemed to keep an extra eye out: watching after him when he limped away in pain.  Jack could feel Jimbo’s eyes boring into his back as he headed over to the medics tent.  He was sure glad he didn't imagine Jimbo's interest; didn’t misread the signals.  “Tell me a little bit about yourself, Jack.” Jimbo was rubbing Jack’s shoulders.  “I like to know a little something about the guy I’m about to make love to.”  Jimbo didn’t imagine the twinkle in Jack’s blue eyes.  Jimbo listened intently as Jack told his life story.

“We have sort of a like history, Jack,” Jimbo stated as a matter of fact.  “I’m from a small town up by Honeygrove Texas, and my ma and pa never had much to do with me, either.”  James spoke while he unbuttoned his shirt.  He motioned for Jack to stand, and he approached him, a wicked smile on his handsome face.  Jimbo’s eyes held Jack’s as he removed his own shirt.  Not a word was spoken as Jimbo reached over and began to unbutton Jack’s blue shirt.  Jimbo broke the spell: “I think my pa suspected that I liked boys, but he never said outright.”  Jack thought his heart would explode in his chest.  Jimbo pulled Jack’s shirt off and laid it on the bed, never taking his eyes away from Jack’s.  “My ma?  Well, she left all the dealings with my pa.  She only had time for my little sis.”  Jimbo was unfastening his belt, all the while searching, holding Jack’s baby blues with his own.  Jack didn’t know how it was possible, but Jimbo didn’t even look away, didn’t break the stare as he stepped out of his pants.  Jack thought he would lose his mind when Jimbo stood there naked as the day he was born.  No underwear!  Jack’s manhood strained painfully against his jeans and his heart threatened to escape his chest cavity as he moved closer to Jimbo.  Jack’s eyes began to water and Jimbo took that as a sign: a very good sign.  “Take off your pants, Jack, Jimbo whispered.  “Let’s get this on.”

They never even made it to the bed.  Jimbo lowered Jack to the floor and very slowly explored Jack’s hard body with his hands, with his eyes.  “You’re beautiful,” Jimbo whispered.  “I knew you would be so damned beautiful." Jack couldn't speak, but no words were necessary.  "Let’s see what you got, cowboy...no going back, are you ready? Are you okay?"  Jimbo's tenderness surprised Jack.  He nodded his head slowly and positioned himself.  Jimbo took him slowly, almost reverently, gently!  The sex was warm and wet and sweet!  Jack and Jimbo  seemed to breathe in tandem as they reached that magic moment.  










Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: gwyllion on November 11, 2010, 03:37:57 pm
Oh BWT!  I never thought of Jimbo as hot before!   :P
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on November 11, 2010, 05:28:45 pm
Oh BWT!  I never thought of Jimbo as hot before!   :P

Me, either!   But I think he bears a certain resemblance to Ennis.  Stay tuned, as I'm working on a part 3 to this story.  :)
Title: Merry Christmas, Ennis Del Mar!
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 12, 2012, 01:04:34 am
Christmas Eve 1989 and Ennis Del Mar stood in front of his apartment door, his new keys in hand.  He smiled for the first time in years as he thought of his two beautiful daughters and their Christmas gift to him: a fancy new place to live.  Just last week Jr. walked into his trailer just as confident and cheerful as all get out, smiling from ear-to-ear.  He didn’t interrupt her once as she told him how it was going to be from now on: he was to leave his dingy, depressing trailer and live in a newly built apartment complex not far from Jrs’ place. 

Ennis didn’t say a word as his child described all that the new place had to offer: dazzling appointments such as hard wood floors, marble countertops in the kitchen, two bedrooms, walk-in closets.  He didn’t believe a word of it – found it too good to be true.  But when Alma Jr. and her sis practically kidnapped him and drove him to his new place, he felt he had no choice but to believe and accept.  The girls got him out of his lease, and his son-in-law, who worked as a foreman on the construction crew, helped Jr. and Jenny buy the apartment for far below the market price.  All Ennis had to do was pay his kids whatever he could afford per month.

Ennis entered his new digs and turned on the light.  He scanned the living room and couldn’t believe his good fortune.  He didn’t believe he deserved such luxury even though his life was a misery from the day he learned of Jack’s demise.  Right now he walked over to his 4 foot Christmas tree, a gift from Alma Jr. and her husband.  He fingered the truly flashy ornaments and saw nestled among the tinsel and lights a flashy ornament he’d not noticed before.  Near the topper, the Christmas star, hung a sled drawn by a rodeo horse.  Inside the sled was seated a tiny cowboy.  Ennis very gently pulled the ornament from the branch where it hung.  He fingered the tiny cowboy very gently, tenderly and smiled. 
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: gwyllion on December 12, 2012, 10:44:56 am
Oh, that was so sweet!

I look forward to your next entry... maybe in 2014!  LOL!

(((Luvlylittlewing)))

I hope you are having a wonderful holiday season  :)
Title: Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
Post by: Luvlylittlewing on December 12, 2012, 12:48:14 pm
Oh, that was so sweet!

I look forward to your next entry... maybe in 2014!  LOL!

(((Luvlylittlewing)))

I hope you are having a wonderful holiday season  :)

I know!  I know!  I was bored watching the ending of "The Voice" last night and decided to write a few paragraphs.  I'll have another entry up soon.  Thanks for reading and commenting, Donna.  I really appreciate it!

Happy Holidays to you!
Title: Re: Shower
Post by: dagi on March 31, 2015, 03:21:41 pm
Jack watched Ennis soaping himself.  Ennis was aware that Jack’s eyes were on him, and he had to be aware of his husband’s growing lust.  Jack brought along a portable “shower” to hang from a tree branch or any place high, and he was glad he did.  Ennis didn’t hesitate to use the shower after Jack strung it up.  He stripped, gathered his soap and a loofah sponge and stood perfectly still as Jack turned the spigot.  Ennis looked up as the spray coated and slicked his hair.  Jack backed up in an effort to take in the tantalizing view.

Jack noticed that Ennis’ glorious body had not changed much over the years.  If anything, Ennis’ bod was even better – sexier.  Jack’s eyes grew wild as he took in Ennis’ firm, high buttocks.  His butt cheeks were granite hard and smooth.  Jack didn’t know how Ennis maintained his killer physique.  Jack placed a hand on his own wide paunch, but he wasn’t ashamed that he was letting himself go.  Ennis liked his spreading middle; he even remarked that Jack was giving him more to love.

Jack watched as Ennis turned his body under the spray.  He was transported back to Brokeback when Ennis asked for a bit of hot water and washed everything he could reach.  Jack had the self-control to avert his gaze then, but to look away was impossible now.  Jack wondered how long he could stand it.  Ennis noticed his lover’s torment and stepped from the steady stream of water.  He moved closer to Jack and threw the soap and sponge aside.  Jack ran into his arms, not caring a wit that he was getting very wet and very soapy.




mmm Marie, I miss the good old times. I see you have been busy and your writing is delightful to read. Keep going!