Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 1145033 times)

Offline JCinNYC2006

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #10 on: May 29, 2006, 07:09:21 pm »
LOL, this limerick is a bit of a mess.  Trimming some of the lines to fit the meter could help.  But regardless, here's the last line:

His heart, he would never get back.

Juan
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #11 on: May 29, 2006, 07:15:28 pm »
Like this?:

There was a young cowboy called Jack,
Who spent summer of '63 on a mountain called Brokeback,
He fancied young Ennis,
and despite Coyotes that were a Menace,
His heart, he would never get back.


Good finish Juan!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #12 on: May 29, 2006, 07:20:27 pm »
Bravo!! *claps heartily*

One day out in Signal, Wyoming,
Will you stop playing with that radio of yours, I'm trying to get to sleep!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #13 on: May 29, 2006, 07:41:46 pm »
One day out in Signal, Wyoming,
that last ling'ring kiss was still foaming,
« Last Edit: May 29, 2006, 07:44:01 pm by Ray »
~A good general knows when to retreat~

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #14 on: May 29, 2006, 07:48:49 pm »
One day out in Signal, Wyoming,
that last ling'ring kiss was still foaming,
Ennis noticed his lost shirt,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #15 on: May 29, 2006, 07:50:28 pm »
One day out in Signal, Wyoming,
that last ling'ring kiss was still foaming,
Ennis noticed his lost shirt,
His nipples were pert,
~A good general knows when to retreat~

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #16 on: May 29, 2006, 07:53:39 pm »
One day out in Signal, Wyoming,
that last ling'ring kiss was still foaming,
Ennis noticed his lost shirt,
His nipples were pert,
which caused Jacks tent to start roaming!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #17 on: May 29, 2006, 08:05:59 pm »
Hehehehehe
~A good general knows when to retreat~

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #18 on: May 29, 2006, 08:08:26 pm »
"Your hammerin' quit and git in here",
~A good general knows when to retreat~

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #19 on: May 29, 2006, 08:08:54 pm »
we are so TWISTed!       :laugh:  


did ya fancy my first limerick Ray?