Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 1522898 times)

Offline Lumière

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1290 on: July 13, 2006, 03:31:16 pm »
Silly Jimbo secretly lusted after Jack,
But he feared facing the flak
So with nose in the air,
As if he didn't care
He trotted off, dreaming of Jack on his back.


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For Jack, Ennis was willing to fight,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1291 on: July 13, 2006, 04:06:01 pm »
For Jack, Ennis was willing to fight,
In the day or even at night
Now bring me that horizon.♥We have our heading.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1292 on: July 13, 2006, 04:16:07 pm »
For Jack, Ennis was willing to fight,
In the day or even at night
He proved his devotion
I just want to celebrate another day of living.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1293 on: July 13, 2006, 04:24:35 pm »
For Jack, Ennis was willing to fight,
In the day or even at night
He proved his devotion
When Alma's words sent his fist into motion


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1294 on: July 13, 2006, 05:11:28 pm »
For Jack, Ennis was willing to fight,
In the day or even at night
He proved his devotion
When Alma's words sent his fist into motion
or did it just prove his "being outed" fright?   :-\

Offline Katie77

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1295 on: July 13, 2006, 09:30:27 pm »
Aguire lays down all the orders
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1296 on: July 14, 2006, 01:10:19 am »

Aguirre lays down all the orders,
He doesn't tolerate cavorters,

(Lame, but it's a hard word to rhyme!)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1297 on: July 14, 2006, 01:24:59 am »
Aguirre lays down all the orders,
He doesn't tolerate cavorters,
Quite the arrogant lil man


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1298 on: July 14, 2006, 10:34:56 am »
Aguirre lays down all the orders,
He doesn't tolerate cavorters,
Quite the arrogant lil man
With nary a friendly fan
Now bring me that horizon.♥We have our heading.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1299 on: July 14, 2006, 11:55:05 am »
Aguirre lays down all the orders,
He doesn't tolerate cavorters,
Quite the arrogant lil man
With nary a friendly fan
And a voyeur too, knowing no boundaries or borders.


Phew!  That was a hard one!  ;D
Another  :)


Jack&Ennis could move up to Canada,