Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3134516 times)

Offline memento

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1410 on: July 22, 2006, 09:35:05 am »
Do you ever hear from Jack Nasty she said,
He seized her wrist and she became filled with dread,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1411 on: July 23, 2006, 07:14:55 pm »
Do you ever hear from Jack Nasty she said,
He seized her wrist and she became filled with dread,
Ennis fumed, his tone rough, his anger rising


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1412 on: July 23, 2006, 07:28:35 pm »
Do you ever hear from Jack Nasty she said,
He seized her wrist and she became filled with dread,
Ennis fumed, his tone rough, his anger rising
Her wrist from his clenched fist she tried prising
Will you stop playing with that radio of yours, I'm trying to get to sleep!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1413 on: July 23, 2006, 08:56:13 pm »
Do you ever hear from Jack Nasty she said,
He seized her wrist and she became filled with dread,
Ennis fumed, his tone rough, his anger rising
Her wrist from his clenched fist she tried prising
He stormed off, wishing to punch someone in the head.


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1414 on: July 23, 2006, 09:38:21 pm »
(By the way, that last one turned out great)....all of you poets that dont know et......



See you next Sunday, he said to his girl,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1415 on: July 23, 2006, 10:03:52 pm »
See you next Sunday, he said to his girl,
As he patted her head, playing with a curl.


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1416 on: July 24, 2006, 09:39:45 am »
See you next Sunday, he said to his girl,
As he patted her head, playing with a curl.
Jack and me, going fishin', he lied

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1417 on: July 24, 2006, 11:37:35 am »
See you next Sunday, he said to his girl,
As he patted her head, playing with a curl.
Jack and me, going fishin', he lied
And a part of his soul thereby died
Now bring me that horizon.♥We have our heading.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1418 on: July 24, 2006, 11:55:39 am »
See you next Sunday, he said to his girl,
As he patted her head, playing with a curl.
Jack and me, going fishin', he lied
And a part of his soul thereby died
But he still felt the need to give Jack a whirl.
Those who are tardy do not get fruit cup.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1419 on: July 24, 2006, 12:42:56 pm »
ANother:  :)

Ennis woke up sweating from his nightmare,