Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 1071751 times)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #200 on: May 31, 2006, 07:40:53 pm »
It ended with a blasted storm from the Pacific,
Said Ennis, "That's not so terrific",
Will you stop playing with that radio of yours, I'm trying to get to sleep!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #201 on: May 31, 2006, 07:41:28 pm »
It ended with a blasted storm from the Pacific,
Said Ennis, "That's not so terrific",
now I have to go marry,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #202 on: May 31, 2006, 07:43:54 pm »
It ended with a blasted storm from the Pacific,
Said Ennis, "That's not so terrific",
now I have to go marry,
and to leave Jack is Scary

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #203 on: May 31, 2006, 07:47:30 pm »
It ended with a blasted storm from the Pacific,
Said Ennis, "That's not so terrific",
now I have to go marry,
and to leave Jack is Scary.
What a misery! How horrific!



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #204 on: May 31, 2006, 07:49:17 pm »
What a misery! How horrific!

Inspired! I was struggling with that last line  :-\

Jack reached out for Ennis's hand,
Will you stop playing with that radio of yours, I'm trying to get to sleep!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #205 on: May 31, 2006, 07:52:04 pm »
Jack reached out for Ennis's hand,
and placed it apon his Gland,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #206 on: May 31, 2006, 07:54:31 pm »
Jack reached out for Ennis's hand,
and placed it apon his Gland.
"Now I've gotten him this far,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #207 on: May 31, 2006, 08:02:21 pm »
Jack reached out for Ennis's hand,
and placed it apon his Gland.
"Now I've gotten him this far,
where is that vasoline jar?

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #208 on: May 31, 2006, 08:05:40 pm »
Jack reached out for Ennis's hand,
and placed it apon his Gland.
"Now I've gotten him this far,
where is that vasoline jar?
Since I've just let him know where I stand....!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #209 on: May 31, 2006, 08:38:30 pm »
Very Good!