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Offline Pipedream

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2170 on: November 15, 2006, 06:39:07 pm »
"I love when you tuck in your shirt", Jack said.
He smiled, "I also love it when you blush bright red!"
"Don't blame me!" said Ennis, "You're just so smokin' hot!"
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2171 on: November 15, 2006, 06:51:37 pm »
"I love when you tuck in your shirt", Jack said.
He smiled, "I also love it when you blush bright red!"
"Don't blame me!" said Ennis, "You're just so smokin' hot!
You leave me breatheless, rooted to the spot!"



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2172 on: November 15, 2006, 06:56:17 pm »
"I love when you tuck in your shirt", Jack said.
He smiled, "I also love it when you blush bright red!"
"Don't blame me!" said Ennis, "You're just so smokin' hot!
You leave me breatheless, rooted to the spot!
Dare I say it? You're a guy, not a gal, and I'm glad...!" 
 
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2173 on: November 15, 2006, 07:47:34 pm »
Another:

On the day he wed, he thought of Jack and cried,
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2174 on: November 15, 2006, 08:03:58 pm »
On the day he wed, he thought of Jack and cried,
Couldn't stop thinking about Jack, no matter how hard he tried.
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2175 on: November 15, 2006, 08:06:21 pm »
On the day he wed, he thought of Jack and cried,
Couldn't stop thinking about Jack, no matter how hard he tried.
He loved Alma, but it just wasn't the same,
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2176 on: November 15, 2006, 08:09:11 pm »
On the day he wed, he thought of Jack and cried,
Couldn't stop thinking about Jack, no matter how hard he tried.
He loved Alma, but it just wasn't the same,
What he and Jack were, he just couldn't tame.
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2177 on: November 15, 2006, 08:19:32 pm »
On the day he wed, he thought of Jack and cried,
Couldn't stop thinking about Jack, no matter how hard he tried.
He loved Alma, but it just wasn't the same,
What he and Jack were, he just couldn't tame,
so he gave his vows and knew he lied.
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2178 on: November 15, 2006, 09:13:13 pm »
Another?


Ennis walked into the shop, eyeing the postcard rack
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2179 on: November 15, 2006, 09:19:20 pm »
Ennis walked into the shop, eyeing the postcard rack
He thought of all the cards he exchanged with Jack.
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