Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3234997 times)

Offline Pipedream

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2190 on: November 17, 2006, 07:01:01 pm »
Ennis tore off his clothes and his drawers,
And told Jack to get down on all fours,
Both were busy getting rid of Jack's pants

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2191 on: November 18, 2006, 08:38:36 am »
Ennis tore off his clothes and his drawers,
And told Jack to get down on all fours,
Both were busy getting rid of Jack's pants
As  moans and groans turned to chants,
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2192 on: November 20, 2006, 01:36:39 pm »
Ennis tore off his clothes and his drawers,
And told Jack to get down on all fours,
Both were busy getting rid of Jack's pants
As moans and groans turned to chants,
They went at it wildly, madly without pause ..


Another:  :)

In that dark alley, he fell to his knees


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2193 on: November 20, 2006, 01:50:26 pm »
In that dark alley, he fell to his knees
His Summer with Jack is gone, is all he sees.
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2194 on: November 20, 2006, 02:04:45 pm »
In that dark alley, he fell to his knees
His Summer with Jack is gone, is all he sees.
He thought of Jack's face, his beautiful eyes


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2195 on: November 20, 2006, 02:14:48 pm »
In that dark alley, he fell to his knees
His Summer with Jack is gone, is all he sees.
He thought of Jack's face, his beautiful eyes
Taste of his mouth, warmth of his skin, as he let out hiscries.
Thank you Heath and Jake for showing us Ennis and Jack,  teaching us how much they loved one another.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2196 on: November 21, 2006, 07:29:08 pm »
In that dark alley, he fell to his knees
His Summer with Jack is gone, is all he sees.
He thought of Jack's face, his beautiful eyes
Taste of his mouth, warmth of his skin, as he let out his cries.
"I love him," Ennis thought, "I shall always be his."


aww..

Another ..

To Alma, Ennis was a handsome knight ..


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2197 on: November 21, 2006, 07:32:22 pm »
To Alma, Ennis was a handsome knight ..
but when Ennis closed his eyes, he had Jack in his sight

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2198 on: November 21, 2006, 07:34:00 pm »
To Alma, Ennis was a handsome knight ..
but when Ennis closed his eyes, he had Jack in his sight.
She loved it when he caressed her hair,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2199 on: November 21, 2006, 07:41:36 pm »
To Alma, Ennis was a handsome knight ..
but when Ennis closed his eyes, he had Jack in his sight.
She loved it when he caressed her hair,
Not knowing he'd rather be elsewhere...