Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3235553 times)

Offline Katie77

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2590 on: February 21, 2007, 09:16:19 am »
Another?  :)

Ennis watched as Jack's horse whinnied and bucked

Now (scratching my head) what rhymes with "bucked"
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2591 on: February 21, 2007, 09:34:08 am »
Now (scratching my head) what rhymes with "bucked"

I know, I was playing devils advocate a little here, Sue. But y'all are talented poets here - can't ya think of anything... else?  ;)
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2592 on: February 21, 2007, 12:02:31 pm »
Ennis watched as Jack's horse whinnied and bucked
Clearly amused by his new friend's conduct

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2593 on: February 21, 2007, 12:45:35 pm »
Bravo Fran!  ;D

Ennis watched as Jack's horse whinnied and bucked
Clearly amused by his new friend's conduct
That beautiful boy ain't no rodeo, he thought
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2594 on: February 21, 2007, 01:00:29 pm »
Ennis watched as Jack's horse whinnied and bucked
Clearly amused by his new friend's conduct
That beautiful boy ain't no rodeo, he thought
Jack smiled, he certainly got the attention he sought


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2595 on: February 21, 2007, 01:07:10 pm »
Ennis watched as Jack's horse whinnied and bucked
Clearly amused by his new friend's conduct
That beautiful boy ain't no rodeo, he thought
Jack smiled, he certainly got the attention he sought
And hopefully — inhibitions soon would be chucked!!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2596 on: February 21, 2007, 01:15:05 pm »
Nice one Laura!    To think no one used the "other" word that rhymes so well with bucked!   :P


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2597 on: February 21, 2007, 01:16:59 pm »
Thanks Lucise!


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And with this fine cowboy, I'd sure love to plaaaaaaaa-aay..."








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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2598 on: February 21, 2007, 02:43:04 pm »

"Water-walking Jesus!  Take me aw-aaaaaaaa-aay...
And with this fine cowboy, I'd sure love to plaaaaaaaa-aay...
Like fine whiskey, he leaves me begging for mo-ooooo-ore.."


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #2599 on: February 21, 2007, 03:51:12 pm »
"Water-walking Jesus!  Take me aw-aaaaaaaa-aay...
And with this fine cowboy, I'd sure love to plaaaaaaaa-aay...
Like fine whiskey, he leaves me begging for mo-ooooo-ore.."
And I don't give a damn even if I'll be so-oooo-ore..

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