Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 1307206 times)

Offline Pipedream

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #350 on: June 03, 2006, 10:59:11 pm »
As his cheek brushed the nipple of Jack,
Ennis thought by himself, what the heck
The smell of his skin
Is a little bit thin


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #351 on: June 03, 2006, 11:05:50 pm »
As his cheek brushed the nipple of Jack,
Ennis thought by himself, what the heck
The smell of his skin
Is a little bit thin
And before he knew, he was on his back.


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #352 on: June 03, 2006, 11:06:24 pm »
There once was a lil boy named Bobby,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #353 on: June 03, 2006, 11:07:43 pm »
There once was a lil boy named Bobby,
Who wondered 'bout his Daddy's hobby
 
 


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #354 on: June 03, 2006, 11:16:29 pm »
There once was a lil boy named Bobby,
Who wondered 'bout his Daddy's hobby.
When Bobby was twenty, he fell for a lad named Hugh,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #355 on: June 04, 2006, 04:33:22 am »
By God Milli you so need some dance lessons!


There once was a lil boy named Bobby,
Who wondered 'bout his Daddy's hobby.
When Bobby was twenty, he fell for a lad named Hugh,
Whose Grandmother once lived in a small house just outside the township, but she used to come into town once a week to do her shopping, it's true,
~A good general knows when to retreat~

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #356 on: June 04, 2006, 05:52:29 am »
By God Milli you so need some dance lessons!

Yeah, she tends to redline it into dead ends, doesn't  she?

 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: 

There once was a lil boy named Bobby,
Who wondered 'bout his Daddy's hobby.
When Bobby was twenty, he fell for a lad named Hugh,
Whose Grandmother once lived in a small house just outside the township, but she used to come into town once a week to do her shopping, it's true,
And they kissed in a posh hotel lobby.

 ::)


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #357 on: June 04, 2006, 10:02:31 am »
Ennis married, getting a wife

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #358 on: June 04, 2006, 10:13:12 am »
Ennis married, getting a wife
It ended in trouble and strife....

Wow I can finally use cockney rhyming slang! ::)
"Look too often at those hills, lie too long beside those rippling rivers, and you may think you are hearing a love song, when actually it is a death song." Larry McMurtry, Brokeback Mountain: Story to Screenplay.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #359 on: June 04, 2006, 10:37:13 am »

Ennis married, getting a wife
It ended in trouble and strife....
He didn't understand