Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 1144018 times)

Offline ThePirateBride

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #720 on: June 16, 2006, 02:21:43 pm »
Jack and Ennis shared an embrace
that had them both in a complete daze
Ennis savored Jack's musky smell,
And they craved Muscatel
Now bring me that horizon.♥We have our heading.

Offline Mikaela

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #721 on: June 16, 2006, 02:22:39 pm »
Jack and Ennis shared an embrace
that had them both in a complete daze
Ennis savored Jack's musky smell,
And they craved Muscatel
since for THIS occasion, whiskey seemed out of place!
« Last Edit: June 16, 2006, 02:28:24 pm by Mikaela »

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #722 on: June 16, 2006, 02:29:50 pm »
Y'all are so very clever!  :)

The blue heelers were on the job
I just want to celebrate another day of living.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #723 on: June 16, 2006, 02:34:38 pm »
The blue heelers were on the job,
They were vigilant, tho' they weren't paid a bob.


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #724 on: June 16, 2006, 03:25:43 pm »
The blue heelers were on the job,
They were vigilant, tho' they weren't paid a bob.
But their work came with excellent perks;

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #725 on: June 16, 2006, 03:28:38 pm »
The blue heelers were on the job,
They were vigilant, tho' they weren't paid a bob.
But their work came with excellent perks;
They worked with two hunks who weren't jerks!   

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #726 on: June 16, 2006, 03:36:00 pm »
The blue heelers were on the job,
They were vigilant, tho' they weren't paid a bob.
But their work came with excellent perks;
They worked with two hunks who weren't jerks!
What those dogs got to see makes us squee, swoon and sob!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #727 on: June 16, 2006, 03:53:02 pm »
 ;D  Another ...  :P


Jack could feel Ennis' breath on his neck,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #728 on: June 16, 2006, 04:01:03 pm »
Jack could feel Ennis' breath on his neck,
His heart was beating wildly beneath his pecs,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #729 on: June 16, 2006, 04:05:34 pm »
Jack could feel Ennis' breath on his neck,
His heart was beating wildly beneath his pecs.
With his eyes open wide,