Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 1274426 times)

Offline David

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #750 on: June 16, 2006, 07:02:27 pm »
Far away from the grieving plain
A man named Ennis hid his pain.
Then along came Jack who had a plan,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #751 on: June 16, 2006, 07:10:45 pm »
Far away from the grieving plain
A man named Ennis hid his pain.
Then along came Jack who had a plan,
He knew for Ennis, he was The Man!


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #752 on: June 16, 2006, 07:14:40 pm »
Far away from the grieving plain
A man named Ennis hid his pain.
Then along came Jack who had a plan,
He knew for Ennis, he was The Man!
Their sweet mountain life felt right as rain.....

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #753 on: June 16, 2006, 10:39:30 pm »
Another ... :)


He found twin shirts hanging in the closet,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #754 on: June 16, 2006, 10:45:53 pm »
He found twin shirts hanging in the closet,
Into Mrs. Twist's bag the shirts he did deposit,
What is essential, is invisible to the eye....

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #755 on: June 16, 2006, 10:53:03 pm »
He found twin shirts hanging in the closet,
Into Mrs. Twist's bag the shirts he did deposit,
He wept for Jack, missing him so bad.


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #756 on: June 16, 2006, 11:00:21 pm »
He found twin shirts hanging in the closet,
Into Mrs. Twist's bag the shirts he did deposit,
He wept for Jack, missing him so bad.
The shirts his remembrance of what they'd had,
What is essential, is invisible to the eye....

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #757 on: June 16, 2006, 11:05:19 pm »
He found twin shirts hanging in the closet,
Into Mrs. Twist's bag the shirts he did deposit,
He wept for Jack, missing him so bad.
The shirts his remembrance of what they'd had,
His tears fell, his eyes leaking like a dripping faucet.


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #758 on: June 17, 2006, 04:10:54 pm »
Time for a new round:  ;)


Ennis was muscular, lean as a clothes-pole


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #759 on: June 17, 2006, 04:36:11 pm »
Ennis was muscular, lean as a clothes-pole,
He couldn't rock, but he sure could roll,