Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 1265065 times)

Offline Mikaela

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #880 on: June 23, 2006, 03:58:41 pm »
He fumbled with his belt buckle, breathing hard   
was bettin' everything on this one card:

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #881 on: June 23, 2006, 04:34:20 pm »
He fumbled with his belt buckle, breathing hard   
was bettin' everything on this one card:
Removing it, his bottom was bare
Now bring me that horizon.♥We have our heading.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #882 on: June 23, 2006, 04:56:54 pm »
He fumbled with his belt buckle, breathing hard   
was bettin' everything on this one card:
Removing it, his bottom was bare,
Ennis wasn't running, that means he did care!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #883 on: June 23, 2006, 05:16:12 pm »
He fumbled with his belt buckle, breathing hard   
was bettin' everything on this one card:
Removing it, his bottom was bare,
Ennis wasn't running, that means he did care!
Betwixt them no holds were barred!
Those who are tardy do not get fruit cup.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #884 on: June 23, 2006, 06:03:44 pm »
He fumbled with his belt buckle, breathing hard   
was bettin' everything on this one card:
Removing it, his bottom was bare,
Ennis wasn't running, that means he did care!
Betwixt them no holds were barred!

Sweet!  ;D

Another...Along the same racy wavelength  ;)


Ennis grabbed his shoulders, rolling in the dirt


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #885 on: June 23, 2006, 06:05:46 pm »
Ennis grabbed his shoulders, rolling in the dirt,
stop it Jack, this is no time to Flirt,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #886 on: June 23, 2006, 06:08:42 pm »
Ennis grabbed his shoulders, rolling in the dirt,
stop it Jack, this is no time to Flirt,
Let's get down to it, I'm burning


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #887 on: June 23, 2006, 06:10:55 pm »
Ennis grabbed his shoulders, rolling in the dirt,
stop it Jack, this is no time to Flirt,
Let's get down to it, I'm burning
my heart is for you is yearning,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #888 on: June 23, 2006, 06:44:52 pm »
Ennis grabbed his shoulders, rolling in the dirt,
stop it Jack, this is no time to Flirt,
Let's get down to it, I'm burning
my heart is for you is yearning,
His hands groped Jack as he tore off his shirt.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #889 on: June 23, 2006, 07:14:58 pm »
Ok..I waited for someone else to start another limerick..still nothing..so why dont I?  lol .. ;D


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