Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3181376 times)

Offline JCinNYC2006

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #700 on: June 16, 2006, 11:53:54 am »
He woke up with a top-grade headache.
Ennis mumbled, "What've I done, for God's sake?
Have my dreams just come true?
I just did it with you
What is essential, is invisible to the eye....

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #701 on: June 16, 2006, 11:56:02 am »
He woke up with a top-grade headache.
Ennis mumbled, "What've I done, for God's sake?
Have my dreams just come true?
I just did it with you!
Hell, I still must be dreaming awake!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #702 on: June 16, 2006, 12:10:50 pm »
Applause, applause!   :)

Ennis stumbled out of the tent in a daze
Now bring me that horizon.♥We have our heading.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #703 on: June 16, 2006, 12:21:03 pm »
Ennis stumbled out of the tent in a daze,
He wouldn't even give Jack a gaze,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #704 on: June 16, 2006, 12:22:19 pm »
Ennis stumbled out of the tent in a daze,
He wouldn't even give Jack a gaze,
He'd enjoyed the night's activities
Those who are tardy do not get fruit cup.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #705 on: June 16, 2006, 12:36:36 pm »
Ennis stumbled out of the tent in a daze,
He wouldn't even give Jack a gaze,
He'd enjoyed the night's activities,
Had never experiences such festivies,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #706 on: June 16, 2006, 12:38:32 pm »
Ennis stumbled out of the tent in a daze,
He wouldn't even give Jack a gaze,
He'd enjoyed the night's activities,
Had never experienced such festivies,
He thought, "I aint no queer!  Must be a phase!"


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #707 on: June 16, 2006, 12:40:13 pm »
Continued:  ;D


Jack stood naked by the river,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #708 on: June 16, 2006, 12:42:19 pm »
Jack stood naked by the river,
The friggin cold made him shiver

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #709 on: June 16, 2006, 12:43:47 pm »
Jack stood naked by the river,
The friggin cold made him shiver.
"He'll never talk to me again!", he sighed.