Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3182570 times)

Offline Mikaela

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1280 on: July 13, 2006, 12:41:26 pm »
Who is this bloke i see driving up in his truck
He looks like the type that would run amok
Hmmm..quite the sight for sore eyes
I'm setting my sights on this prize
He'll be mine soon, if I'm in luck!  :)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1281 on: July 13, 2006, 12:43:41 pm »
Lovely, I wasn't going to use the expletive either! 8)

Jack watches Ennis as he drives away
Those who are tardy do not get fruit cup.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1282 on: July 13, 2006, 12:59:05 pm »
Jack watches Ennis as he drives away
feeling so down, so sad he can't say

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1283 on: July 13, 2006, 01:01:57 pm »
Jack watches Ennis as he drives away
feeling so down, so sad he can't say
His heart heavy, tired and torn.


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1284 on: July 13, 2006, 01:21:50 pm »
Jack watches Ennis as he drives away
feeling so down, so sad he can't say
His heart heavy, tired and torn.
As though it's been shorn
Now bring me that horizon.♥We have our heading.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1285 on: July 13, 2006, 01:30:46 pm »
Jack watches Ennis as he drives away
feeling so down, so sad he can't say
His heart heavy, tired and torn.
As though it's been shorn
His soul crying out: "Oh Ennis, please stay!"

 :'(

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1286 on: July 13, 2006, 01:56:40 pm »
Jack watches Ennis as he drives away
feeling so down, so sad he can't say
His heart heavy, tired and torn.
As though it's been shorn
His soul crying out: "Oh Ennis, please stay!"

 :'(

Some more silly/happy limericks to lift the mood... :)


Silly Jimbo secretly lusted after Jack,


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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1287 on: July 13, 2006, 02:07:44 pm »
Silly Jimbo secretly lusted after Jack,
But he feared facing the flak
I just want to celebrate another day of living.

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1288 on: July 13, 2006, 02:46:44 pm »
Silly Jimbo secretly lusted after Jack,
But he feared facing the flak
So with nose in the air,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #1289 on: July 13, 2006, 02:53:37 pm »
Silly Jimbo secretly lusted after Jack,
But he feared facing the flak
So with nose in the air,
As if he didn't care