Author Topic: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll  (Read 3130745 times)

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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #5850 on: October 24, 2006, 06:28:44 pm »
As the French would say .. mission accomplie ..  ;D



(Until Louise lets her out again, that is ..)

Merci beaucoup madame  :-*

I hope Louise throws away the damn key  ;D

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« Reply #5851 on: October 25, 2006, 08:30:51 am »
Update to "The Red Stallion"

http://louisev.livejournal.com/139827.html  "Chapter 56:  Vandals"

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Oh dear, so who's got it in for the boys now? It might just be teenage hoodlums, or it may be something more sinister.

I really liked that Ellery, knowing Ennis, tries to look beneath the surface of his reaction, thinking that his kidnapping may have left deeper scars than it would appear. I also liked that Ennis had started dealing with the siutation before Ellery got home (even if he was potentially tampering with evidence), without disturbing him at work (like Bill would have).

And the ending was touching - that Ellery knows that he may have to stay up half the night dealing with the graffiti, but he'll do it for Ennis' peace of mind.

They'll need some cuddling and cozy chats after their toil I'm thinking  ;)

Karen

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« Reply #5852 on: October 25, 2006, 08:55:15 am »
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I liked the way Ellery handled the situation - he was having to be reassuring to Ennis and professional at the same time as this was a crime and he didnt want Ennis to make things worse, although I understood why Ennis would want those awful words scrubbed off the house.  Ellery is really perceptive about Ennis, knows that his angry exterior is hiding a lot, and knows that he will have to have a lot of reassuring words for him.   

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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #5853 on: October 25, 2006, 09:43:34 am »
Hey Christie, we've got a kind of Ennis/Jack ying/yang thing going on with our avatars.

Karen

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« Reply #5854 on: October 25, 2006, 09:49:25 am »
Hee Hee, I think you are right Karen!  I love that pic of Jack though - thats the one with the sheep isnt it?  Did you try and get the sheep on the pic as well, or did you just want Jack's face? 

I love all pics of Ennis outside Aguirre's trailer, but I do try and change my avatar now and again, but I find it so difficult to choose, there are so many I love!

I'm liking the ying/yang thing - isnt that what Jake said about Ennis and Jack finding each other on the mountain?

Its quiet around here today isnt it?  Where is everyone?  ???

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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #5855 on: October 25, 2006, 10:14:55 am »
I have been nose to the grindstone all day at my job, it is only just after 4.
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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« Reply #5856 on: October 25, 2006, 12:13:25 pm »

Its quiet around here today isnt it?  Where is everyone?  ???

It's been really quiet for the past few days now  :(

Sorry your bosses have been making you work so hard, Louise  :(  How dare they?!?  ;D  I'm dying for another chapter!  :D

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« Reply #5857 on: October 25, 2006, 02:47:28 pm »
okay so i have caught up on my sleep (I was up late last night) and now I am eating something and have a phone interview in about 15 minutes.  When that is done I will be typity type type.
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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« Reply #5858 on: October 25, 2006, 03:56:09 pm »
Hi Louise - hope the interview went well.

You've got a lot on at the moment. Much as we all love your updates we'd survive without them for a day or so so that you can catch up with yourself.

Then you'll have the energy to write one of those nice smoochy, intimate chapters, that you excel at so much  ;)

Tee hee

Karen

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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #5859 on: October 25, 2006, 04:19:41 pm »
I can't break my streak!  I have to write something before I go to bed.
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”