Author Topic: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll  (Read 3145466 times)

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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #6240 on: November 04, 2006, 03:21:09 pm »
Dont feel too badly, June - because of the similarity in the names I have reversed them too!
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #6241 on: November 04, 2006, 03:25:18 pm »
For those who are looking for the LJ version of the chapter, if you can reach it:

http://louisev.livejournal.com/144626.html  "Chapter 74:  A Hidden Cost"
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #6242 on: November 04, 2006, 03:35:11 pm »
Get yerself under control.  I’m gonna need yer help about now, Ennis.”  Ellery limped into the bedroom, unloading the pistol as he went.

Ennis turned away, eyes stinging.  “Okay.”


Powerful chapters Louise. I don't blame Ellery for reacting like this; he's hurting bad (oh man his poor back  :(), probably really disappointed in Ennis for breaking his promise, sad for his former partner, sad about Ennis totally losing it like that, even though he can understand it.

Can't wait for the next one. Thank God for Mel, coming over and taking charge like that.

Thanks Louise, as always  :)

I know, you cant really blame Ellery for reacting like that I spose, but I feel all sad now. :'( :'( :'( :'(

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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #6243 on: November 04, 2006, 03:49:36 pm »
I know, you cant really blame Ellery for reacting like that I spose, but I feel all sad now. :'( :'( :'( :'(

Me too Souxi  :(

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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #6244 on: November 04, 2006, 04:03:47 pm »
Me too Souxi  :(

I shall spend the rest of the evening worrying about them now.  :'( :'( You cant blame Ellery for reacting the way he did..you cant really blame poor Ennis for the way he reacted. He was only defending his man. How do they work this out? Oh I do feel sad :'(. I hope they dont have a big fight about it. :'( Dont see what good more yelling is going to do, and somehow a frosty silence is even worse. :'( Worry, worry worry worry. :'( :'( :'( :'(

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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #6245 on: November 04, 2006, 04:09:46 pm »
well Souxi, it is Saturday night... and I am working on the next chapter now.
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #6246 on: November 04, 2006, 04:18:44 pm »
I,m going to have  a LARGE glass of this whilst I sit here. Worrying. :'(

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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #6247 on: November 04, 2006, 04:22:21 pm »
awwwwww Souxi!
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #6248 on: November 04, 2006, 04:23:00 pm »
well Souxi, it is Saturday night... and I am working on the next chapter now.

Oh goody Louise  :)

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Re: Taking Chances, by E. L. Van Hine and L.H. Nicoll
« Reply #6249 on: November 04, 2006, 04:24:33 pm »
I,m going to have  a LARGE glass of this whilst I sit here. Worrying. :'(

Yeah awwww Souxi darlin, I'll join ya even though I hate brandy  ;D  Do you have rosé??  ;D