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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #1680 on: February 21, 2007, 04:18:28 pm »
Update!

This is the next to the last chapter in "A Small Circle of Friends"

http://louisev.livejournal.com/212578.html  "53:  Belle of the Balls"
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #1681 on: February 21, 2007, 04:42:14 pm »
In other words, Louise, this is the penultimate chapter?

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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #1682 on: February 21, 2007, 04:50:33 pm »
PEN ultimate!
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #1683 on: February 22, 2007, 10:38:51 pm »
And this is the ULtimate chapter!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/212959.html  "54.  A Small Circle of Friends"
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #1684 on: February 23, 2007, 06:56:49 am »
And this is the ULtimate chapter!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/212959.html  "54.  A Small Circle of Friends"

Is it the final chapter? You didn't write "The End" at the end. Not that you have to, it's just an observation since you did that with the rest of the books and stories.
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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #1685 on: February 23, 2007, 12:58:56 pm »
I did that... for a reason.

I had toyed with writing an epilogue.
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #1686 on: February 23, 2007, 01:11:23 pm »
I did that... for a reason.

I had toyed with writing an epilogue.

Not a bad idea. Perhaps you could write a special wedding night featuring a fierce and hot coyote! LOL
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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #1687 on: February 23, 2007, 02:14:09 pm »
what an interesting suggestion!

“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #1688 on: February 23, 2007, 04:06:46 pm »
I did that... for a reason.

I had toyed with writing an epilogue.
Yay!!!!

Not a bad idea. Perhaps you could write a special wedding night featuring a fierce and hot coyote! LOL

Yay again!!!!

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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #1689 on: February 23, 2007, 04:16:32 pm »
How can Louise write a "hot wedding night" story? On their wedding day, Ennis still had his legbone, so they couldnt do anything could they? It would have to be a belated wedding night story. Good idea though.