Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3395577 times)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3940 on: November 11, 2008, 07:20:30 pm »
Aguirre said bring em down early.
that seemed to make Ennis get surly


Tell him when l come up to him and ask to play the record, l'm gonna say: ''Voulez-vous jouer ce disque?''
'Voulez-vous, will you kiss my dick?'
Will you play my record? One-track mind!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3941 on: November 11, 2008, 08:41:44 pm »
Aguirre said bring em down early.
that seemed to make Ennis get surly
They wrestled, and tussled, and blood flowed..



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3942 on: November 11, 2008, 08:55:47 pm »
Aguirre said bring em down early.
that seemed to make Ennis get surly
They wrestled, and tussled, and blood flowed
Soon they would be parting on that fateful road
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3943 on: November 11, 2008, 09:07:24 pm »
Aguirre said bring em down early.
that seemed to make Ennis get surly
They wrestled, and tussled, and blood flowed
Soon they would be parting on that fateful road
Away from the mountain and Aguirre.
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3944 on: November 12, 2008, 03:18:08 am »


        Great finish Lee........

        I liked that one.

           How about?                Ennis didnt stay around tying knots all day.

                     



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3945 on: November 13, 2008, 04:10:59 pm »
Ennis didnt stay around tying knots all day.
So up the mountain they did make their way


Tell him when l come up to him and ask to play the record, l'm gonna say: ''Voulez-vous jouer ce disque?''
'Voulez-vous, will you kiss my dick?'
Will you play my record? One-track mind!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3946 on: November 13, 2008, 08:25:38 pm »




Ennis didn't stay around tying knots all day.
So up the mountain they did make their way
Crossed rivers and glades, with sheep on the saddle.



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3947 on: November 13, 2008, 08:28:01 pm »
Ennis didn't stay around tying knots all day.
So up the mountain they did make their way
Crossed rivers and glades, with sheep on the saddle,
Up on a mountain where there's no one to tattle

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3948 on: November 13, 2008, 11:00:38 pm »

Ennis didn't stay around tying knots all day.
So up the mountain they did make their way
Crossed rivers and glades, with sheep on the saddle,
Up on a mountain where there's no one to tattle
first night in tent, they did start to play


Tell him when l come up to him and ask to play the record, l'm gonna say: ''Voulez-vous jouer ce disque?''
'Voulez-vous, will you kiss my dick?'
Will you play my record? One-track mind!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick!
« Reply #3949 on: November 13, 2008, 11:10:15 pm »
Ennis didn't stay around tying knots all day.
So up the mountain they did make their way
Crossed rivers and glades, with sheep on the saddle,
Up on a mountain where there's no one to tattle
first night in tent, they did start to play

Whoa, you are in a hurry!!  ;D
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