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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #1980 on: June 25, 2007, 01:07:17 pm »
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No wonder Colson and Wes are so worried about Ellery - it's hard to see him like that.  I have to keep reminding myself that it's still the same day.  But it's wonderful to see that Ellery is so loved and cherished, not only by Colson but by "daddy" Wes.

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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #1981 on: June 27, 2007, 04:52:05 pm »
believe it or not folkses....

chapter 31 of Chesterfield.

http://louisev.livejournal.com/225364.html
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #1982 on: June 27, 2007, 05:18:39 pm »
believe it or not folkses....

chapter 31 of Chesterfield.

http://louisev.livejournal.com/225364.html

Louise when are we going to find out who the other deceased is? I wonder if it is a known character. Inquiring minds are dying to know!  ;)
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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #1983 on: June 27, 2007, 08:26:34 pm »
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Holee Crap, Louise - more complications added to the mix! 

Ellery mask?  LOL!  Yep, they could use a few more ass-kickers in Greenlea County.

And yes, inquiring minds do want to know - everything.  Looking forward to more.

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The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #1984 on: June 28, 2007, 07:18:42 am »
what? you want MORE PLOT ?

The good news is, I will have internet tonight and tomorrow and tomorrow night, through the weekend, but the bad news is I am busy early this evening, so it is unlikely there will be another chapter unless I am very very fresh after driving back from London!

It is a long drive yew know. 
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #1985 on: June 30, 2007, 04:45:35 am »
having caught up on sleep (I think), I went to post the new Chesterfield chapter and lo and behold, Livejournal is down.  So without any further ado,

Chapter 32:  http://louisev.livejournal.com/225739.html

I pasted this before LJ came back up:


32.

“Okay now before you say a single word here, Mel, I want you ta know it ain’t goin out a this office ta nobody.  Isn’t that so, Counselor?”

Mel Ruskin gave Wes a blank look.  “Of course,” he said, mildly confused.  “I haven’t lost my mind, Wesley.”

“No but there are a few things that bear repeatin, especially when you got things eatin at ya that might not eat at ya any other time...” Wes said carefully.  “Mel, I have sat at this desk talkin to my fair share a instant shake an bake widows and widowers over the past twenty five years, an some a the time they have been friends a yours an friends a mine.  An I can’t say I have ever been in the shoes yer in now but I have at least learned the best thing ta say ta somebody at the darkest hour an the best thing to say to an elected official is that you have my complete confidence an that a yer trusted employees.  Ain’t that so?”

Mel gave him a weak grin.  “And you just happen to know that the thing preying on my mind right now is whether your men up at Memorial right now are gonna let anybody take a picture of me or of Bunny or of the scene of the accident and put it on the front page of the Phoenix Herald with dire predictions of a recall election only a year into my second term.”

“I only got one thing ta say about that, Mel,” Wes said, straightening in his chair and shooting a warning look at Paula, who was quietly watching both men – “thank god it ain’t three months ago.”

“I was a shoo-in three months ago.”

“So you were.  And so was I by some miracle a yer coattails.  And I think the people a this county reelected you because you did a damn good job, the mayor notwithstandin.  An don’t let whatever Mormalizin Fred tries on you, just smile an shine it on.  You probably can’t keep em from the funeral but you can keep em from tryin ta convert you to his God.  I’m speakin frankly here, Mel.”

Mel winced at the word “funeral.”  “Right now I can’t even think about that.  And I ... I haven’t even called Barry yet.”

Paula looked up.  “Barry?”

“My son.  Our – son.”

Wes held up a hand.  “You want me ta call em? I can say yer still up at the hospital.”

“No, Wes, I can do it myself.  I’m the attorney for the county, I handle murder and accidental death all the time.”

“Why don’t we give the D.A. some privacy, Sheriff?” Paula said, her voice tense and controlled.

“Okay, good idea.”  Wes stretched in his chair, picking up his cigar once more and placing it in the corner of his mouth, then he moved the phone across the messy desk in front of Mel, whose shoulders were hunched once again.  He had fallen silent once more.  “Take all the time you need, I’ll be out kickin my faithful staff’s asses about  escortin the linemen down to the substation so we can get the lights on in this benighted town.”

“Thanks Wes,” Mel replied perfunctorily, his mind now occupied with the task of telling his son that after the unsuccessful result of her latest alcohol treatment, his mother had taken the keys to their car and killed not only herself but another resident of his hometown.  It was heavy news.

Paula said nothing after the door closed, but went to the coffeepot and poured herself a fresh cup of coffee, downing it black.

“Uh, Counselor.”

“What is it, Sheriff?”

“I owe ya an apology.”

“Yes, you do.”

“I lied.”  Wes’s voice was soft and sheepish.

“Yes, you did.”

“It won’t happen again.”

“Yes, it will,” she said, her voice clipped.

“Please don’t tell Mel.”

“I don’t intend to.  He has enough on his hands right now without knowing that you browbeat me to go to the hospital tonight telling me he had no family.”

“Yeah, that is true enough, I’m glad we look at it the same way.”

“I wouldn’t say that.  Can I go home now?” she asked.

“I think it might be better if ya stayed.”

“I don’t.  He has you now.  And – Barry.”  Paula set down her cup with a loud click and buttoned her coat.  “Good night, Sheriff.  Take good care of him.”

Fifteen minutes later, Mel had not emerged from Wes’s office, the phone calls had slowed down at the switchboard, and Jeremy Dupree came through the security door, looking angry and frustrated.  “Okay I’m back.”

“How are the roads?” Wes said, flicking small bits of loose tobacco out the end of the cigar.  He still had not lighted it.

“Better, they’re sandin now so it’s safe on the main roads at least, there’s a roadblock up at the county road an the 666 has been closed from Duncan to Clifton.”

“An the electricity?”

“Don’t know anythin about that, got to talk to the emergency services.”

“Murdoch?  Public Service phone in yet with an E.T.A. on the power?”

“Nope.  I guess they’re still workin on it,” Murdoch said.  “Hey Jeremy.”

“Can I talk to you in private, Sheriff?”

“No.”

Jeremy stared at him.  “Sheriff?”

“Not unless we go in Ellery’s office.  D.A.’s usin mine, talkin to his kid on the phone.  I don’t envy em makin that call.”

Jeremy sobered.  “Oh, yeah.”

Wes put his hand on the door of Ellery’s office.  “An you ain’t gonna tell em I violated his sanctum sanctorum right?”

“Right.”

“We need Joe for this?”

“I’d rather not.”

“Just as well, he’s workin the assault right now, tryin ta get his ducks in a row since we’re on emergency service right now anyhow.”  Wes waved Jeremy into Ellery’s office and sat down gingerly at the unfamiliar desk, which he still thought of as Warren’s.  “Now what is this about, Detective?”

“It’s about this case.  And – about Esteban.”

“Oh fuck, this now.  I hope you don’t mind the smell a cigars,” he said, lighting up.


« Last Edit: June 30, 2007, 07:12:51 am by louise van hine »
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #1986 on: June 30, 2007, 11:57:53 am »
Great chapter, Louise - very intense.  I'll try to pop back later with some thoughts.

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Okay - just read the chapter again.  I think Fabienne was right when she said that perhaps Paula has some mystery in her past that may be affecting her reactions right now.  I can't get a good read on her - I understand she's uncomfortable and I also understand she's made at Wes for lying, but she seems inordinately angry. Wes had to think of Mel first and foremost.  I also noticed that she was angry when she first arrived and that was before she knew Wes had lied so it seems there's something more going on here.

And poor Sweet Thing - I'm so glad he has his Nicky waiting at home for him and not just an empty apartment.   ;)

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Marie
« Last Edit: June 30, 2007, 11:06:12 pm by mariez »
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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #1987 on: July 02, 2007, 07:03:50 pm »
more Chesterfield on the way... I haven't been spirited away by the fairies of publication... I just went to London and had to take a nap when I got home!  Now that I have a day job again and all...!

“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #1988 on: July 02, 2007, 07:35:03 pm »
and here you are!

http://louisev.livejournal.com/226142.html  "Chesterfield Fortune" Ch 33.
“Mr. Coyote always gets me good, boy,”  Ellery said, winking.  “Almost forgot what life was like before I got me my own personal coyote.”


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Re: Was: Laramie Tales: New Working Title: Tales of Greenlea County
« Reply #1989 on: July 03, 2007, 07:23:22 am »
Must have been a good nap, Louise - great chapter. 


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The blend of personalities in the sheriff's office makes for some very interesting dynamics.   I'm glad that Esteban is going to his meetings - Bunny's death must be very difficult for him on many levels.

Yay! for Jeremy's promotion.  Ellery knew right from the start that he was something special.  I hope the promotion comes with a decent raise . . . which makes me wonder if his days of being a bouncer are numbered?  Hmmmm...... And yay! for Joe who always manages to give us a smile  :)

“Sure enough, as long as there are plenty of greasy donuts I’ll find my way out from under, I always do.”

“Don’t confess to the pizza Esteban. Confess to murder before the pizza,” . . .

Hope they all get a good night's rest.

Thanks,
Marie
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain