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Offline mariez

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4470 on: July 27, 2009, 02:02:01 pm »
How many times did they meet back of beyond?
Two, three times a year just to maintain their bond;
Their time was never enough
As fate would have with this kind of stuff
They ached to do more than just correspond
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4471 on: July 27, 2009, 02:07:05 pm »
He couldn't wait to get the day's mail
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4472 on: July 28, 2009, 05:38:42 am »
He couldn't wait to get the day's mail
Twas a bolt through a heart that'd grown frail
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4473 on: July 28, 2009, 08:10:00 pm »
He couldn't wait to get the day's mail
Twas a bolt through a heart that'd grown frail
He read each word with care
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4474 on: July 29, 2009, 03:52:05 am »
He couldn't wait to get the day's mail
Twas a bolt through a heart that'd grown frail
He read each word with care
"Friend, I'll meet you there..."
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4475 on: July 29, 2009, 03:49:24 pm »





He couldn't wait to get the day's mail
Twas a bolt through a heart that'd grown frail
He read each word with care
"Friend, I'll meet you there..."
His final card was not the Holy Grail.
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4476 on: July 30, 2009, 01:47:00 pm »
Oh, good ending, Janice!


Time moved so slowly in the times between
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4477 on: July 30, 2009, 02:47:06 pm »






   Time moved so slowly in the times between
   It was  never, simple life, so it seemed.





                                                                                          Thanks Marie
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4478 on: July 31, 2009, 01:28:50 pm »
 Time moved so slowly in the times between
   It was  never, simple life, so it seemed.
Everyday seemed the same
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4479 on: July 31, 2009, 03:38:05 pm »


 Time moved so slowly in the times between
 It was  never, simple life, so it seemed.
 Everyday seemed the same
 Burned, with longings and pain
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