Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 4052449 times)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4370 on: May 14, 2009, 01:03:27 pm »
In the beginning, Ennis hitched a ride
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4371 on: May 15, 2009, 03:09:32 am »
In the beginning, Ennis hitched a ride
It wasn't long, before Jack he eyed
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4372 on: May 15, 2009, 08:06:31 am »
In the beginning, Ennis hitched a ride
It wasn't long, before Jack he eyed.
In Aguirre's trailer,
A companion where none had been expected...

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4373 on: May 16, 2009, 08:34:18 pm »



In the beginning, Ennis hitched a ride
It wasn't long, before Jack he eyed.
In Aguirre's trailer,
They shyly checked each other.



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4374 on: May 16, 2009, 09:53:07 pm »
In the beginning, Ennis hitched a ride
It wasn't long, before Jack he eyed.
In Aguirre's trailer,
They shyly checked each other.
The attraction was too hard to hide.
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4375 on: May 16, 2009, 09:54:13 pm »
He talked more than he had in two years
Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect.

It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfection

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4376 on: May 16, 2009, 10:41:30 pm »
He talked more than he had in two years
And saw Jack despite his worst fears
"Really, it's not mine..."   --- Austin Powers

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4377 on: May 16, 2009, 10:51:51 pm »



He talked more than he had in two years
And saw Jack despite his worst fear
Was interested in discussing sinning



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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4378 on: May 17, 2009, 01:39:14 pm »
He talked more than he had in two years
And saw Jack despite his worst fears
Was interested in discussing sinning
This meter is wrong and that's why I'm grinning
"Really, it's not mine..."   --- Austin Powers

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #4379 on: May 17, 2009, 02:13:17 pm »
He talked more than he had in two years
And saw Jack despite his worst fears
Was interested in discussing sinning
This meter is wrong and that's why I'm grinning
Perhaps we should give up on limericks and go for beers?
"Laß sein. Laß sein."