Author Topic: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)  (Read 3724657 times)

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5270 on: November 17, 2009, 02:17:50 pm »
Ennis had the patience to be a good shot,
Finger on the trigger and sight on what he sought,
A companion where none had been expected...

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5271 on: November 17, 2009, 02:42:29 pm »
Ennis had the patience to be a good shot,
Finger on the trigger and sight on what he sought,
The elk swerved and swayed,

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5272 on: November 17, 2009, 03:32:59 pm »
Ennis had the patience to be a good shot,
Finger on the trigger and sight on what he sought,
The elk swerved and swayed,
Fell to his knees and bayed
"Laß sein. Laß sein."

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5273 on: November 17, 2009, 03:49:19 pm »
Ennis had the patience to be a good shot,
Finger on the trigger and sight on what he sought,
The elk swerved and swayed,
Fell to his knees and bayed
And was soon part of a meal that was hot
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5274 on: November 17, 2009, 03:50:12 pm »
Ennis had the patience to be a good shot,
Finger on the trigger and sight on what he sought,
The elk swerved and swayed,
Fell to his knees and bayed
And they gorged on elk meat, grilled and hot

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5275 on: November 17, 2009, 03:51:16 pm »
 ;D ;D ;D

Great minds, Marie!!

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5276 on: November 17, 2009, 04:13:28 pm »
;D ;D ;D

Great minds, Marie!!

 :laugh:  I like your line much better than mine! 
The measure of a country's greatness is its ability to retain compassion in times of crisis         ~~~~~~~~~Thurgood Marshall

The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.    ~~~~~~~~~ Mark Twain

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5277 on: November 17, 2009, 04:16:49 pm »
That grilled hot elk meet tasted so damn good
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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5278 on: November 17, 2009, 05:22:32 pm »
That grilled hot elk meet tasted so damn good,
'twas better than beans, let it be understood,
A companion where none had been expected...

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Re: Let's write a Brokeback limerick! (How-to in first post)
« Reply #5279 on: November 17, 2009, 05:44:18 pm »
That grilled hot elk meet tasted so damn good,
'twas better than beans, let it be understood
When bears interfere with picking up supplies

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