Author Topic: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition  (Read 2158880 times)

moremojo

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Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
« Reply #1470 on: August 14, 2007, 11:29:14 am »
I'm holding out for disposable clothes .. like one-day Contact Lenses!
I know in the States, there was a brief fad for paper dresses in the 60s...I have seen one  well-preserved sample, with an Andy Warhol soupcan as the design, on television, apparently it had become a significant collector's item.

Hey, that's an idea for Toycoon's arts-and-crafts thread...BetterMost beans paper dresses!

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Re: Silk and Flesh
« Reply #1471 on: August 14, 2007, 12:23:34 pm »
Silk and Flesh by Littlewing 1957

I recreated the story to the best of my ability, but I have a feeling the original was better.  Oh well!

Whenever he was lucky enough to spend time with Jack Twist, Ennis Del Mar insisted that they sleep in the nude.  Why waste time, since whatever they wore to bed would certainly come off.  Jack was more than okay with this, as he enjoyed the feel of Ennis' skin, and the warmth it provided.

But one night Ennis climbed into bed wearing the crème colored silk PJs that Jack gave him for Christmas one year.  Jack rubbed Ennis’ chest with a questioning look.  “I’m just tired is all, Bud!”  Ennis began as he grabbed Jack’s roaming hands.  Jack nodded and moved closer.  “That’s okay, Cowboy, you don’t have to do anything.  But there is one thing you can do for me.  Lay down on your stomach.  Can you do that, Friend?”  Ennis smiled as he turned and lay down on his stomach.

Jack placed his entire weight on his lover, slid his entire body over Ennis’ still form.  Jack placed his hands over Ennis’ and squeezed.  He held his lover's hands in a tender embrace.  He kissed his husband's neck.  Ennis knew what Jack was up to, but he couldn’t fight.  He lay still as Jack placed tender, sloppy kisses alternating with tiny bites along his shoulders.  Jack blew at the line of saliva that dotted Ennis’ shoulder to dry it, and continued with the kisses and bites.  Ennis felt the swell of Jack’s manhood against his buttocks.  And when his own cock pressed up against the king sized mattress, Ennis reached around and removed his pajama bottoms in one motion…




Oh. My. God. Ennis felt the swell of Jack’s manhood against his buttocks. I can feel it, too. ;D.

No matter how good the original was, this one was gorgeous. Very erotic, Marie. Thank you for this sexy moment...

Dagi

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Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
« Reply #1472 on: August 14, 2007, 12:26:48 pm »
Wow - silk, flesh, and flames! Where is the fire extinguisher?? Good grief  - Your story should have come with a warning label!

You all amaze me with your stories and creativity - I am new to these parts of the forum though not to Bettermost. I can only read back so many pages at a time - it's like sensory overload (of the positive kind). Great job littlewing and everyone else who has taken the time to create stories that help us reconnect with Jack and Ennis.

I would like to try my hand (or keyboard rather) at posting a little story, 3 sentences of course  ;)  I certainly do not want to post right after littlewing though - let's let that one cool off a bit...

WELCOME BBM-Cat!! I´m looking forward to your story! But I warn you, these guys here have a naaaaasty influence! You might end up watching gay porn  ;D. Or do you already?

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Re: Silk and Flesh (part 2)
« Reply #1473 on: August 14, 2007, 12:32:04 pm »
Silk and Flesh (part 2) by Toycoon

"I jes' ain't got the will tonight, buddy," grumbled Ennis, "I hadda work overtime every day this week and I'm looking at a long week come Monday morn." Ennis hated to waste even a second of valuable time with his precious, Jack, but he was just worn out and it seemed nothing could restore his energy.

Jack succeeded in arousing Ennis by pressing and massaging Ennis' weary back, his shoulders and his buttocks; Jack's firm hands felt so good to a man who rarely enjoyed a fortuitous caress by anyone.

The mixture of smooth, creme colored silk on sensitive flesh proved to be too much for Ennis because he rolled over to face his long time lover, slid his silk pajamas down over this thighs and arched his back to thrust his erect cock into Jack's face.

Poor Ennis, so tired and worn out. How good that Jack knows so well what to do about it! I couldn´t resist Jack either, and sleepy sex is not the worst thing  :D. Very erotic, Toycoon dear!

Dagi

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Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
« Reply #1474 on: August 14, 2007, 12:34:37 pm »
Hi, guys! 

It's me. 

How is everyone?  - Gary, Susie, Dagi, Littlewing, Toycoon, Shasta -

Hope you're all fit and well.

I'm so happy to see this thread bustling along, as always!  Brilliant! 

Actually, this is me  -> 

I'm too shy to go up as an avatar! 

I have a week off so I'll be reading madly to catch up, but I have a quick and silly one to post now. 

And, hey!  3 sentences and no sex


Spiceylife!! How good to see you! I´ve missed you so much!! You are a beauty, dear!

Dagi

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Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
« Reply #1475 on: August 14, 2007, 12:38:05 pm »
Dead Heat by spiceylife


It was Jack’s crazy-ass idea: a foot race along the lake’s edge, loser gets the boring task of putting the tent up again at the next campsite, further along the mountain.

The boys ran swiftly across the muddy, uneven earth, barefoot, barechested and competitive, with Ennis pacing himself nicely behind Jack, trusting his endless stamina and a pair of long, lean legs to move past his friend and claim an easy victory whenever he was ready.

But Ennis stared too long at Jack’s mesmerizing backside bouncing along in front of him and forgot to watch the soft, treacherous ground under his feet, causing him to stumble awkwardly and catapult forward, flying through the air spectacularly and landing face-first in the watery mud with no finesse whatsoever;  Jack, hearing the ooofffff sound Ennis made as he went down, glanced over his shoulder, saw Ennis spread-eagled on the ground, mud dripping down his astonished face, and he laughed so hard and so suddenly that both feet slid out from under him as he lost traction and became airborne for a second, like slipping on a banana peel, and then – splat! – Jack came down on his bum in the splashy, sticky mud, an equally spectacular landing, also lacking style and grace, and with an ooofffff sound to match Ennis.


 :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: I would die for a picture of them!

But, hey, no sex? I´d say Jack´s ass is pure sex  ;D.

Good to have you back....will you stay a little?

Dagi

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Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
« Reply #1476 on: August 14, 2007, 12:54:01 pm »
Hey Spiceylife, I remember you from IMDB.  (I just read The Longest Night.   Whoa!!!!)   ;D

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Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
« Reply #1477 on: August 14, 2007, 01:00:05 pm »
WELCOME BBM-Cat!! I´m looking forward to your story! But I warn you, these guys here have a naaaaasty influence! You might end up watching gay porn  ;D. Or do you already?
Dagi

Thanks for the welcome, and the warning which is duly noted! And, wow - already getting so personal!  ;D  All I can say is this thread might drive me to do so - or to drink!! Though I speculate that drinking is probably not going to help much at this point....
Six-word Stories:  ~Jack: Lightning Flat, lightning love, flat denied   ~Ennis: Open space: flat tire, tire iron?

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Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
« Reply #1478 on: August 14, 2007, 02:21:29 pm »
Thanks for the welcome, and the warning which is duly noted! And, wow - already getting so personal!  ;D

*blush* sorry. But I told you - naaaasty influence  ;D

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Re: Introducing the "Jack with Ennis" Fan Fic Game - the BetterMost Edition
« Reply #1479 on: August 14, 2007, 04:17:35 pm »
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Hey, that's an idea for Toycoon's arts-and-crafts thread...BetterMost beans paper dresses!

Wow, moremojo, yer a marketing genius! Why didn't I think'a that?
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